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The graph shows how electricity is used typically in winter and summer seasons in England . The pie chart shows so what the electricity is used in average English home . Firstly , the indicators demonstrate a high demand for electricity in winter . A fluctuates between 30000 and 40000 units of electricity during the day . The lowest figures are in the morning - it stays at 30000 units and , then it starts to increase and reaches a peak at 21 o'clock . In contrast , in summer the electricity is not used a lot in morning . However , the figures start to rise rapidly in the same period - between 9 o'clock and 13 o'clock . Compared with winter , in summer the demand for electricity reaches a peak at 13 o'clock and then stays at above 17,000 units . In average English home the highest percentage of the electricity is used for heating rooms and heating water ( 52,5 % ) . The 15 % of the electricity are for lighting , TV and radio and , alse , 15 % are used for some electric tools like vacuum cleaners , food mixers and etc . For ovens , kettles and washing machines the 17,5 % of electricity is used . Overall , we can see that typical daily demand for electricity is bigger in winter than summer . Also , the electricity is distributed for heating rooms and water in higer persentage than for different electric tools .
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Everybody know that happiness is considered very important in life . In my opinion it is true . There are many reseacrch about linking happiness and effectiveness . And It is not surprise that happy emploee works better tan sad . It is easy to understand that happy person wo n't have some physical or psychic problems . Happiness is people 's panaicea . Happy person will not think about problems he will be reaching his aim without doubts . On the other hand we may say that people all over the world pursuit happiness and it is their aim already . Just imagine if person already reached happiness how manny near things he will try to achieve . It is hard to give clear deffinition to the word " happiness " . You can say that happiness is combination of factors that work together to make you happy or it is things that make your life perfect . In my opinion , these defenition make scence , but they are to abstract . The explonation of it is understandable and very humanity . All defenitions before were universal and it is the problem of them . Universality of them is killing most important human 's thought : I 'm unique . Now we can say that defenition of happiness is unique and personalized . As I already said happiness is personalized for every human and it is difficult to say what factors are important in achieving happiness . Moreover I want to say that I will not give you some universal factors . I 'll be talking only about my own experience . For me first factor that will help me to achieve happiness is combination of understanding my aims and hard working . Second is good education , it 'll help me to find interesting job that suits me . The third factor is love and family . I can not see them without combination . Love is giving aims and power to people . In conclusion , I want to say that happiness will be interesting theme forever .
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It is generaly agreed today that happiness is vey important part of our life . In some situations you can succed only being happy . I agree with this statement . I can confirm my opinion with following arguments . To begin with , happiness influence to our succes in a work sphere . You can be a good worker only if you like what you are doing . Because , the majority part of our lifes we are working . Morover , our happines depends on some factors such as famaly and love . All people need it . With out it they ca n't be happy . Love makes our lifes . In addition , other component of our happiness is to communicate with other people and have friends . Because communication takes the secon place in spending our time . Every day we need to talk with each other . Most of all to be happy we need to be reach . If we have some money we have more apportunities and possibilities . Such as spending time like we want . In conclusion , I want to say that every one need to be happy . Happinies has some components , but we need to realize all of them . Happiness is our succes .
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It is often alleged that happiness is something that is desired by everyone , however , not everyone achieves the feeling of happiness . It is hard to say what the word " happiness " exactly means in general because every person has his own circumstances and factors that make him to feel happiness . I am a passionable believer into the fact that every person is a " unique hero " in the world and , consequently , it is absolutely normal that everyone has his own aspirations and beliefs . It means that a thing that makes one happy will not be suitable for another one . Therefore , it is difficult to define happiness . Conversely , some people will disagree with my point of view . They will claim that there are some common factors that will help people to achieve happiness . For instance , love , money , successful career , family and strong health . Moreover , these factors can be disposed gradually into a human 's value system . By way of illustration , some people believe that " Love is the best thing we do " and having a loving person nearby can make millions of people to feel endless happiness . Regardless of the previously mentioned fact , a lot of people put money and career foreground . On the contrary , there is a point of view that happiness is not something we practice : but something that comes to us when we allow it . Taking for instance , there are some people who have everything family , love , money , but they feel nervous and anxious about all those and try not to lose these qualities . To crown it all , I suppose that the best thing to achieve happiness is to find the most important factors for yourself . For me they are love , health and friendship . So , we should try to become succesful in that way , having a positive attitude towards life .
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Our world how is developing very fast . Our life in the cities is going faster and faster from year to year because of that people nowdays suffer from stresses and pressure . So , happines is very important for us , people because we ca n't live in this complicated world without it . However , all people are different from each other and what makes one person happy does n't matter for another . Moreover , it is very difficult to the person to define what really makes himself or herself happy . Such things like happen because , it is a lot things in our world , it is very difficult to try all of them and undeastand what is really yours . Or , for example , people are always adicted from consicvencieses and some time you just do n't have time to do things which make you happy . Some times people just did n't understand that they are happy . Of course it exists some rules , advices how become happy . One of them which is very important and popular - just be optimistic . If you are looking at everything with a smile you 'll feel yourself better and so people around you . It is a golden rule of happiness . The second one is tag as much things as you can , take everything from the life , travel , listen music , read book , communicate with people . To sum up , I want to say , remember only open person can be really happy . Only person who have some goals in his life can be happy , laying at the sofa and reading the internet wo n't make you happy .
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The graph and the pie chart give some information about using electricity in summer in comparision to in winter , as well as for what reasons . To begin with , it is notisible that the typical daily demand for electricity doubles in winter , especially , the consumption is very high at 9 p.m. It is obvious , that in cold days people tend to heating rooms and water and it needs more electricity than usually . Also we can see that the lowest demand for electrisity is 7 a.m. On average in summer people 's usage of electrisity reaches a pick at 3 p.m. It is interesting that more than half demand for electricity because of heating . Other needs occupy approximately the same persentage of usage ( about 15 % ) . All in all , on the graph and on the pie chart we can notice that in winter the quantity of units of electrisity using rises . It might happens because of the increasing need of heating so it is the biggest part of that for what people use electrisity .
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There is no doubt that almost all people living on the Earth are aim to be happy . But who can give the right definition to the word " happiness " ? In my point of view , nobody can suggest it for some reasons . To beging with , this term " happiness " is difficult to define because people have different opinion about how to become happy . For example , some of us want to have a lot of money and power . However , others prefer think more about health of their relatives and friend . Thus , we all have differents priorities in our live , to my mind , it forms our percieve about happiness . What about factors , which is important in becoming happy . As far as I am concerned , that people should follow the phrase : " Do what you like . Like what you do . " It means that we ought to chose our way in life taking into account our interestst because you can not be happy if you do not like your job . Secondly , if you want achieve something you should do the best for it . To my mind , laziness kills happiness . Another factor is the support because people who have close friends with whom they can talk about problems , they are able to do everything . Friends give some advice and help when you need it . In my point of view , if a person have friends , he or she is lucky and happy . To sum up , I strongly believe that people define the word " happiness " different , however , all of us should to feel support to achieve what we want in life and to become happy .
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The question of human 's personality is the keystone in the psychology science . Some people believe , that our inborn characteristics play a viral role in our future life , while others think that the opposite is true . They suppose , that upbringing and experiences are much more important . Let 's outline the weakest and the strongest points of each point of view . First of all , we all depend on our genetic heritage . It influences not only our health and body pecularities , but our mental characteristics too . That is why children are sometimes behaviour like their parents or grandparents . Our genes contain special information , that can determine our character , our type of personality . Special abilities is also what we get from our ancestors . Some people are good at sport activities , others prefer math , another are remarkable for their prodigious memory . On the other hand , inborn characteristics can be encouraged or repressed by the upbringing . Children 's personality is formed at the age of 3 - 8 . And parent 's influence has the crucial role . Moreover , even if you do n't have an ability to learn math , with patience and determination you can reach all your aims . There are plenty of examples when children from unhappy families , which parents have problems with alcohol addiction or something like that , become a successful people with a bright career and a happy family . To sum up , I would like to represent my personal opinion . I prefer the second point of view . To my mind not everything is depending on our genes . People build their life and their personality by their own , and it is very important to understand it .
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There are a lot of discussions about improving society 's health . In this case , some people means that increasing the number of sport facilities will make people to do sports more frequent , and will make public health better . The opposite point of view says , that such decition is uneffective , and there are a lot of much more productive measures are required nowadays . Both of this sides has pluses and minuses to discuss . First of all , it is important for people to take care about themselves . Our body is our guarantee of healthy life , so sport is the best decition in this case . And if number of sport facilities jumps , and people start to earn much more opportunities to to sports , than now and take care about themselves , it logically will make their life better . On the other hand , there are a lot of different groups of people living on the Earth . Some of them , for example , are not interested in sport , and they would not change their mind in any case . People , who prefer healthy lifestyle and regular trainings will find an opportunity to do sports in any case . So , such measure is uneffective because it do not have an influence on some target groups of people . To my mind , both points of view are right . But the best decition in this case is a complex method , which will sum both of this . It is important to increase the number of sports facilities ; but we must not forget about the other things , which influence our health - ecological environment , economic situation , e.t.c . To sum up , there are a lot of different projects about making our health better . And there are a lot of discussion around it . Finding the best way to take care of our body and mind is the most important goal for the society nowadays .
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In todays world an opinion that sports facilities should be deviced for public health improvement exist . In spite of this , other people suggest that there is no point for developing this side of issue . It is obvious that sport plays significant role in health of people . Average person should does some sports regularly , if he / she want to stay fit and healthy . Some people are not able to do some sports because there are just a few sport centres in the area , where they live , moreover , this gyms can be very expensive . If government provide a big number of sport facilities , people will have more opportunities to improve their health by doing some sports . As we know , sport can normilise blood pressure ; help your heart work and prevent the development of obesity . Despite these facts , some people think that creating more sports centres will not be enough for health improvement of huge numbers of people . Other ways of solving the problem should be invented or devised . Creation of sport facilities does not automatically foster the people to do sports . in modern reality people sometimes do not have time to attend gym or swimming pool Moreover , people can bring harm to their health by eating unhealthy food , drinkink alcohol and spending long hours behind the computer screens . That means that some measures should be implemented in that direction . And some kind of healthy way of life propaganda should be done . In conclusion , I want to say that increasing the number of sport facilities has positive impact on peoples health only in case of co - working with other measures , which should be brought . Overall , some steps should be done towards the awarness of people about their health and way of life .
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Our centery is known not only as the time of innovation progress and comfortable life but as the time of unclear environment and unhealthy population . The problem is that more and more people suffer from a lot of deseases and everybody wants to know how to improve this situation . In my opinion , sport is a good method to improve our health , so the increase in number of sports facilities will give our population a strong health . The most important advantage of rising a sport activity among people is that it helps to keep fit and make better a your muscles . All sportsmen look great and feel themselves more pleasant . Secondly , sport can be a popular activity for a group of people . They will have an opportunity to meet their friends and spend time more useful . In addition to this , sport is a very god habit and even more a future career for people , who began to go in for sport since childhood . On the other hand , sport can be very expensive activity for some people , they will not have enough money to do it if sport becomes a popular trend in the world . Moreover , doing only sport does not give people a full protection from our air and water polution . Besides , they should eat a healthy food and spend a big amount of their time for sport , it could be bad for their job . In conclusion , I should say that increasing the number of sports opportunities has more advantages . This tendency will have a good effect on public health if people really understand the pluses of having a sport activity .
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Nowadays a huge number of people work more than 8 hours a day and they do not have enough time to do sport . Also people can not choose their own kind of sport is due to they want to do something special and interesting . On the one hand , the increase of the amount of sports facilities can bring some improvement to people 's health . Firstly , people will become more motivated if they have an opportunity to do an interesting and funny kind of sport for example , grass hockey or golf . People will spend more time with their friends and relatives doing sport activities and their health will improve . Secondly , the big number of sports facilities needs more sports centres to be opened . So that people will visit them more often . On the other hand , a lot of people do not believe that such a measure can help to improve public health . A lot of people have a possibility to buy a membership card in fitness centres but they do not do it because they are lazy and prefer to watch TV or play computer games in the evening . In this case , the change in the number of sports facilities will not increase the level of people 's health . More than that , new sports options can be rather expensive and people will not be able to pay for it . To sum up , I think that the rising number of sports facilities can really improve the health only if they will be interesting and convinient for people . However , new opportunities should be adopted for all people and should be situated in suitable parts of cities .
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The charts below show the amount of population at different ages in per cent in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and forecast for 2050 . Population of both countries is divided into three groups : from birth till fourteen , from fifteen till fifty nine years old and more than 60 years old . In 2000 there was almost equal amount of the youngest and middle - aged group in Yemen , and only 3.6 per cent were people at age more than 60 . However , the situation in Italy was quite different . There can be seen a marked prevalence of population at age between 15 and 59 years old , it is a little more than sixty per cent . Meanwhile , the oldest population was approximately one - fifth of the whole percentage and the youngest one consisted of nearly fourteen per cent . The situation forecasted for 2050 in these countries differentiates from 2000 . In Yemen it is supposed to be a growth of the population from 15 to 59 years old for a bit more than 10 % while the youngest group is considered to decrease to 37 % . Interestingly , the percentage of the oldest group has a slight growth for 2 per cent . On the other hand , in Italy this group is prognosed to rise until 42.3 % while middle - aged population is supposed to fall down to 46.2 % and the youngest group will remain almost constant . Overall , the situation in 2000 and situation forecasted in both cities is rather different in contrast and it shows us what changes can happen with the population in future .
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The graph illustrates the percentage of the population aged 65 and over in the period from 1940 and 2040 in three different counties . The research is made in Japan , Sweden and the USA . We can see that in 1940 in all these countries there were not many pensioners , but the USA had almost 10 % of elder people and it was the 1st place . Japan , in turn , had only 5 % of them . Analysing Japan 's curve we can see that the situation did n't change significantly until 2000 , when the percentage began to rise . So , there is a prediction than in 2030 There will be a sharp increase . Talking about twoo other countries , the graph shows us that the amount of population aged 65 and over fluctuated a lot but increased gradually during this period . To sum up , we can see that the graph illustrates a prediction by 2040 . So , in 2025 the population of 65 year and more old people will rise to about 25 percents . Japan will be the 1st country with abaut 27 % , then comes Sweden , while the USA takes the last place from these ones .
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Nowadays there are a lot of subjects in universities , about which people say that they are only for men or only for women . For example , engineering us a " male " subject . Some people think universities should make all subjects equal by studying equal numbers of male and female students . In my opinion , this is not effective way to teach students . Firstly , there are always professions , which are " male " and " female " . If universities teach only equal numbers of male and female students , these people will get the job in equal quantity : there will be men , who work in library , in kindergardens and women , who work in sports centre , in car production . In my opinion , it will be a mess . Men and women should work on suitable jobs . Furthermore , people have a habitat that often in one group there is different quantity of men and women . It is good from psyhological point of view : when the quantity of men is higher than the quantity of women , there is a kind of war beetween women for men : every wants to be paid all attention on her . The nature made these interesting threat of character in us . Also , when woman wants to study something " male " , it will be difficult to do by herself . That is why men of her university 's group will help her . It makes friendship stronger . It is not a secret that male group is more pleasant than group of women because of women 's treats of character . All in all , in my opinion , it is important to save unequal numbers of men and women in university . As we can see , it is neccesary not only because of studying process , and also for living experience of every student .
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Studying process at universities has many problems , nowadays . The problem of unequality between male and female students appears to be a burning question . Some people think that some subjects should be mostly for men , others for women . I personally believe that all students should be equal to choose what subject to study . To begin with , I am inclined to state that the most persuasive argument in favour of equal studying is that male and female students have different kinds of thinking . Men are to think more logically , while women have more extra ordinary thinking . It makes the process of studying more varied and effective . Moreover , equal communication between genders is always an advantage . When male and female students know each other better , all studying projects are worth doing and results are achievable . One more reason for equal numbers of male and female students in every subject is that while they are working and studying together they become more socially polite and friendly . What is more , the majority of married people get engaged on those who were studying with at the university . Furthermore , for some people it is hard to adopt to unequal circumstances . For example , few boys feel uncomfortable among many girls . However , to solve this problem is not as easy as it is believed . Nowadays , many univercities have their own rules which do not allow to attend some subjects for boys or girls . Or some subjects are not attractive to girls but boys . Taking everything into account , the problem of unequality between male and female students is far from solving yet : I agree with the statement that attendance to the every subject should be equal among boys and girls , but it should be left to every person to choose whether to attend the subject or not .
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Nowadays there are a lot of colleges and universities which include only female or only male students . Usually they are close and elitary places and in other universities the numbler of girls and boys is fluctuated . As a result , some people believe that universities should create equal places for males and females . But , to my mind , it is impossible . First of all , there are some jobs , which requare good physical conditions and specific sides of character like politely or keeping calm constantly . It is hard to imagine that a lot of boys pass exams in the medical university and then become nurses or medsisters . Also we have a few policewoman and woman , who work in the millitary sphere . Secondly , the visiting of subjects is a choice of every student . If universities create the qwote of number of male and female students , some girls and boys will lose opportunities to visit theese lectures becouse free places may be ended . In developed countries with the highest level of education and with large opportunities of studying , it is impossible . In my opinion , universities should get a chance to choose subjects by both male and female students . In connclusion , I would like to say that the getting education is the choice of every studend . Universities and goverment should not prevent it , accepting equal numbers of lecture visitors . There are a lot of special universities and schools , there is opportunity to study for only girls and only boys . So , I think that this dividing will have not benefits in the future .
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Nowadays there are lots of argues on whether the number of men and women in universities should be equal . So can universities accept equal proportion of people of both genders in every subject ? I believe it ca n't and there are several reasons for such opinion . First of all , all people can not have the same skills . It is widely known that the majority of boys has better and dipper skills in Mathematics than girls . So , it is obvious that universities can not accept the equal number of boys and girls in some technical subjects . Also , not many boys are interested in Arts , Literature or Design , that is why it is impossible to have equal proportion of people of both genders in these subjects . Secondly , women are not able to study some subjects as it is dangerous or too difficult for them . For example , universities can not accept girls to study some specific kinds of surgery as very hard equipment is used there . What is more , some military universities do not accept women because men and women have different mental and psychological skills . It can be really hard or even impossible for young women to fight against other people with weapons . On the other hand , it could be said that in the 21st century there should not be differentiation between genders and universities should accept equal proportion of boys and girls for each subject . Modern young women are strong and smart enough to enter a military or technical university . All in all , I strongly believe that it is not possible to have 50:50 proportion of men and women in all kinds of universities . The most important thing for universities to have students that have appropriate skills in a subject and are interested in it whichever gender these students are .
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The graph illustrates the percentage of people aged 65 and over in the period from 1940 to 2040 in Japan , Sweden and the USA . Overall , it is clear that all three lines fluctuate during the period . However , there is a tenancy to the number of adult population increasing . Proportion of population aged 65 and over was almost equal - in Sweden and the USA from 1940 to 1990 , however , while the USA line remained steady untill 2015 and then started to grow rapidly , the Sweden line was fluctuating . In contrast , the amount of adult population in Japan started to increase after a small decline from 1940 to 1960 and then rocketed in 2025 - 2035 , crossing both Sweden and the USA lines . Finally , it grew to about 28 % , what is almost 6 times more than at the beginning of the period . In conclusion , the graph shows that the amount of people aged 65 and over will grow by 2040 . Moreover , Japan will have the most significant difference between proportions of 1940 and 2040 .
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Nowadays in a lot of universities there is a wish to enter the new rule , which includes that the amounts of girls and boys must be equaled . I will consider this statement from 3 points of view : hystorical , biologyeconomical and own . According to the hystorical viewpoint let 's remember the past . In many countries a lot of people tried to equal the rights of each gender , individ . Many heroes died to remain this principle . Comparing with this fact the government of universities wants to destroy it . It can affect on the students , society in general . It is the example of the discrimination . The main feature of this consists of the negative results to everyone . If we want to conduct a comparison between the previous point of view and biologyeconomical , conclusion will be remained . The costs on the female students are more than on the male . This fact establishes with the anatomical characteristics of the female organysm . It accords to the situation in which number of male students will more than female . From my point of view universities , if they have n't got the popularity , ca n't accept equal numbers in every subject , because in maths and physics the appropriate student is the male and in humanitary sciences the girl is more suitable than boy . To conclude my essay I 'd like to say that I disagree with the universities and I hope that they understand that is the mistake for them .
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This chart gives us the information about the different levels of post - school qualifications in Australia according to gender in year 1999 . There are 5 levels : skilled vocational diploma , undergraduate diploma , Bachelor 's degree , postgraduate diploma and master 's degree . This chart shows us that the persentage of male who choose skilled vocational diploma is very high ( 90 % ) . In undergraduate diploma we can see the other situation . 70 % females and only 30 % studied on this level . Therefore we can make conclusion that only undergraduate diploma and Bachelor 's degree had more females , than males . The other levels get more males than females . For example : 70 % males and only 30 % females got postgraduate diploma . The third situation we can see on Bachelor 's degree , because the quantity of males and females was the same ( 55 and 45 percent ) . So , it was summarise of the situation in education - field in 1999 ( Australia ) .
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On the bar chart we can see the different stages of post - school qualification in Australia and the proportion of both sex who held them in 1999 . We can see a rise trend of male qualification in position of skilled vocational diplome , to pay attention , it was almost 90 % and high amount of postgraduate diploma men - the percentage was 70 . The highest female data is over 70 % persent in level of undergraduate diploma . The general trend was that men were more succesful in three stages and female qualification was higher only in two stage , for example , in bachelor 's degree . To sum up , the post - school qualification of men are not much , but higher than women 's .
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The chart illustrates a variety levels of post - school in Australia and shows the ammount of men and women who held them in 1999 . On the chart one can see that more males than femals held skilled vocational diploma . Only about 10 % females had it while about 90 % of males prefered to held it in 1999 . By compromising , the undergraduate diploma had about 70 % of females and only 35 % of males kept it . Accordingly , the same situation as in the proportion of skilled vocational diploma is in postgraduate diploma . About 70 % of males kept it . What about women it was about 30 % . Similarly situation is in the proportion of master 's degree , where about 60 % keepers of this diploma are males . The chart shows that keepers of skilled vocational diploma , postgraduate diploma and master 's degree are men and in other spheres the keepers are women .
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Nowadays , there are many heated debates about whether government restrictions should exist and control what creative artists are allowed to do or whether we should give freedom to those artists to express in a way they want . Personally , I absolutely agree with the first point of view due to some reasons . First of all , to my mind , it is absolutely important to control every sphere of our life , if it is not under a certain amount of control , there would be a disaster . Consequently , by giving the freedom to creative artists to express themselves as they want will definitely lead to certain problems . For instance , it would be almost impossible to keep an eye on a censure , because some artists have got an extraordinary views on art . Secondly , many unofficial films , pictures etc . will appear . Hence , it would be veryhard to control this big flow of pirate movies , not officially recorded songs . Therefore , it will lead to more people who break the rules and the rate of crime will grow . On the other hand , many people may say that we have to think about the freedom of expression . While speaking about this theme . Although this opinion makes sense , little to these people realize how many disadvantages will appear when government restrictions are off . To reteirate my point of view , I do believe that everything in this world should be under the control of something whether it is government or parents , because without restrictions we will not be able to live a sedate life .
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Each of us sometimes ask a question by yourself : is there limit in my freedom to express my personal beliefs and ideas ? I strongly believe that define limits should exist , because we all live in the same world and should respect beliefs and ideas of different groups of people . I understand that this is a very contradictionary question , however I have my stable personal opinion on this issue and I want to illustare it by few examples . First of all , we should understand , that the way , how we express our opinion should n't hert anybody . Government should define the limits of our freedom to expression , and I think , that this is the main goal of government . Of course our government should represent all points of view on all problems , which exist in our society , and for this reason government can define the limits of our expression . On the other hand , huge amount of people believe , that creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own opinion , because it is art , and art have no limits , I can understand this people .
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The statement about whether or not artists should have a right to express their own ideas in any way they want to is quite debatable . There are people who hold very contradictory arguements on this issue that I am going to discuss below in order to reach and express my own opinion , Up to my opinion , modern artists , of course , should have the freedom to create beautiful works in any way they want to . First of all , it is a one of the basic rights of human to express their thoughts and beliefs in any way , and government should be the sentinel of this right , not the enemy . As we live in liberal world , full of rights , that helps induviduals live freedom and happy , a chance to the artists to create anything in anyway should be protected . Secondly , this right gives the opportunity to the mankind as to create such beautiful , outstanding work , performances , music that become a cultural , worldwide treasure . For example , the art of Salvador Dali was extraordinary , odd , most of people does not understand it even today , but a right to express his thoughts this way gived us such tromendous works , that everyone accepted . To the end , I should admit the importance of freedom to express the ideas , althought , government should protect it , and give it an opportunity for develop .
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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish . There should be no government restrictions of what they do . I absolutely agree with this opinion . It is obvious for me , that creative artist needs the freedom to express his ideas without a pressure from the government or social opinion . An artist , who is able to creative freedomly can make a chedevre , because he or she doesn not have biases and can express him or herself . Thoughtout the history there were many examples of governmental pressure , which influence art in a bad way . For instance , in the Soviet Union there were not private orders , only the government had enough money to pay for the architectural services . The government could control the process of building from the very start ; drawing a plan of the building , to the end , than it was built . That affected the Moscow architecture and all the plans and buildings became alike , so that the government prefer . That is the reason , why we do n't have buildings in art - noureaw or art - deco in Moscow , but a great amount of buildings in one architecture still of Stalin 's ampire and after that in constructivism . Moreover , in modern world we still have such examples of government restrictions . In Russia we almost have a censor in a mass media . This year many independent channels and journals were restructered that way government could control them . The government trys to take away a freedom of words and ideas , represented in a mass media . It seems wrong to me , as I think , that we must have a possibility to read a different positions , including an independent positions to make a full understanding of the events . In addition , the journalist should have an opportunity to express their opinion without government restrictions on what they do . To sum up , I suppose that there should be the freedom to express your own ideas , no matter who you are a creative artist on an average person , there should be no governmental pressure .
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Nowadays the question of self - expression is being widely discussed , because of spreading the government restrictions on it in Russia . To my mind , there should not be official restrictions from our government , but there should be inner moral rules about what somebody can or can not do . Firstly , I have to say that nobody can stop our imagination creating different ideas , and government restrictions will not make us do it . They can only make some types of arts illegal , but it does not mean that these types of arts will die out . If government gives us freedom to express our ideas , there will be more orginized events and festivals . In this way government will show that it trusts it 's nation . But I should notice that some types of arts can not be shown to the children , because it may hurt their feelings or minds or be really unacceptable for this little age . I want to say that we should protect young consiousness from harmfull effect . Besides , I believe that expressing and watching are different things , that we can not combine in our discussion . I guess that everybody has a right to express what he thinks or feels , but everytime a person should remember that he can upset his relatives or friends . Everybody has different views on music , politics , art . We should be tollerant and respect an opposite point of view . To sum it all up I want to say that everybody has to dicide for himself if he can express something , which is inside of him , or can not . For me , it is more important to have inner restrictions than have useless government rules which try to control our modern art .
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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers . The first chart depicts a percentage number of people who study for career or for interest . The total number of people of the age under 26 ( 80 % ) study for career . The number of people at the same age , who prefer study for interest is the lowest one , only 10 % . But the number of people who study for career has decreased after some years . Only near 20 % of people who are over 49 years study for career , but in the contrast , 70 % of people at the same age group study for interest . The second charts illustrates the percentage number of people different ages , who employers support . The total number is near 70 % . This amount shows the number of people who are under 26 years . The smallest quantity which employers support is the age 30 - 39 and it is only 35 % . To sum up , the reasons why people want to study have changes during their lives . And actually , the support of employers depends on the age of people .
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Many people in foreign countries prefer to have a gap year before entering university , which has its benefits and drawbacks . Obviously , studying process is very hard and very long , so as people might well tire of learning something every day . However , it is considered by some people that having a gap year is a waste of time . Firstly , waiting a year before entering university ma give you so much new emotions , as you are able to visit foreign countries , experise new activities , meat interesting people and make friends with them . Moreover , while this free year somebody can settle down : marry , have children . What is more , the gap year provide people with time , which could be spent on gaining knowledge , skills they will need in the university . For example , when a person whant to be a programmer , he should be developed in terms of Maths , Phisics , should know at least one of the languages . Unfortunately , school does not give opportunities for gaining these skills . Therefore , a person needs time to improve his level . However , there could be some problems with a gap year . For instance , a financial problem , which might well prevent a person from spending a gap year beneficially , as special courses and travelling , cost a lot of money . Also , there might well be a problem with changing interests and requests during the year without studying , For example , being upset with his faults , when a subject is too difficult , a person can change his mind about becoming a programmer . Summing up , a gap year is worth trying , although there are some drawbacks . However , I consider them to be not so important , as if you want to benefit from a gap year , you will do it without any money and you will cope with other problems .
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Sometimes it is difficult for young people to decide what to do after graduating from the high school . When someone in their adolescence , every step and choice seems to be the most important , and every mistake seems to be a disaster . So should young people not to hurry with their decisions or it would be just a waste of their priceless time ? On the one hand , it is believed that the young people are not mature enough just after finishing the high school . If after that they , for example , went travelling or started working , they would earn much experience form that . And , with such an experience , they definitely would find the job of their interest , something that they would love to do for their entire life . Moreover , they could find that they actually do not need further education and start , for example , their own business immediately , instead of wasting years for boring and useless univercity studying . On another hand , sometimes student just can not afford that . In some countries it is almost impossible to find a job for the person with no higher education . And it is very rare that a young man or woman can afford travelling for a while year or even month , even with their family help . Furthermore , even if it is seemed that the university , in which you have possesses to apply , provides cources that will be absolutely useless in the future , it does not mean that it really does . Sometimes you get from the university something more than education . Coming to the conclusion , I would like to say that both points of view makes sense . The pause between graduation from the high school and going to the university has its advantages and disadvantages , so it is only the question of decision which every young man or woman should make on their own .
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Nowadays there is a problem of young people who decide to work or travel for a year between they high school have finished and are going to entire at university . Of course , there are some advantages and disadvantages for this action . Of course , it is a very good time for travelling , because at this age from 17 to 29 years old , young people at this age have no problem with free time , they do not think about it . They have no children , who need a lot of attention and much of time . This year could be exelent , because they can meet a lot of new interesting and nice people . They can visit a lot of countries and may be fall in love with somebody from another place . Unfortunately , despite that there some consequances . It could be just wasting of time . This year can be essential because if young people after finishing high school want to be encouraged to work or travel for a year befor university studies , it could be complicated to enteir at the university later . That can happen because they can forget some featurs that can be useful and important at the university and it could be hard to get it again . In conclusion , I would like to say that everyone has freedom of choice . Of course , it is really difficult to come back for studing , but this time of travelling must be like a miracle if you will not spend it with no aim . But , of course , there is another university studies , and it allows not to lose some knowladge or skills that you got in high school .
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The graphs show the reasons for studying and the amount of support received by students of different age from employers . It is clear that studying for different career purposes is more popular among young people , whereas talking about more mature persons studying for some personal interests is of a great interest . For example : judjing by the last two charts of the first graph , it is obvious that the amount of students over 49 years old who are chosen some course to be successful in their career is approximately 4 times less than the number of those who decided to study for their own interest . The next interesting point is , however mainly the amount of students in the first graph differ quite a lot , the last but one two bars are absolutely equal , so among people between 40 and 49 years old it seems to be the same way , in which they prefer to study . The second graph illustrates the percentage of employer support given to employees divided into different age groups from slightly under 26 to over than 49 years old . The level of support declines gradually starting from over 60 percent of support at the age of under 26 and reaching its minimum at the level of approximately 30 percent at the age of 30 - 39 . But starting from 40 to 39 years it begins to climb , then it reaches the level of 40 percent at the level of slightly over than 49 years . To conclude , the preferences of students differ very much in terms of what kind of education ( for career or for interest ) choose and it depends on the age of a student . What is more , employers support is depend on the age of an employee too .
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The bar charts Illustrate the number of students from under 26 to over 49 years old in connection with their motives for entering universities and also the amount of maintenance they are given at work from their chefs . As for the first diagram , it is clear that the quantity of people under 26 studying for the sake of career is 80 % , which prevails that if those who study out of interest , which is only 40 % . In the meantime , the result for students over 49 years old is quite opposite : 70 % go to universities because they are interested , and only 20 % are inspired to do so to built a career . As soon as other generational groups are concerned , the percentage of people studying for career purposes is higher in all cases , except for students bet went 40 and 50 years old , for which the percentage is divided equally . The second bar chart , showing support the students are supplies with by their employers , demonstrates a fluctuation starting at approximately 60 % for people under 26 , it reaches its lowest of 30 % for students at the age of 30 - 39 and then increases steadily to upward 40 % for the oldest group . To sum up , there is a tendency that , getting older , people go into higher education more frequently out of interest rather than for career and get less support from the chef at work , as compared to the youngest group .
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In modern world gender equality became an important feature to discuss . Some people think that the amount of male and female should be equally proportional in every educational system like school and universities . However , there are several opinions that accepting the similar number of men and women in universities will lead to unification of all genders and problems in typically female or male professions . I 'm completely agree with the second one and think that not all woman can be perfectly studied as engeneers ; constructors and other professins requiring physical and technical knowledges . First of all ; God make us as different as he might do . Males are naturally more talented in Physics , Math and physically well done . Females have a stronger logics than men and perform perfect results in Arts . If we erase the edges of gender and will have to complete the university groups in equal way we will never achieve the highest output from each of typically gender jobs . Secondly , it is impossible to evaluate each number of places in universities according to fact that nathionwide the amount of femenes exceed the number of males . We will never achieve equality according to the not clear number of students . Additionally , the equal number of students includes violence because of the possibility that man or woman would not want to complete the subject but have to according to proportional rules . In conclusion , specific view of proportion in university group can lead to catastrophe in human labour basics . Achievent the highest resultats are complicated process and equlity can ruin the process . If we accept the similar proportion we also agree to forget the desire students . Also woman had been nationally preserved from dangerous and physically complicated jobs . It 's urgent to not envolve the gender war in professional education unless we should n't have became an without - gender creature .
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Nowadays universities play a huge role in the human society . Some people think that the number of male and female taking one course should be the same , others think otherwise in my opinion , there is no place for universities to accept the equal numbers of male and female because it is not reasonable then every people hase his own preferences and it is hard to change the stable situation in universities . First of all , we should not forget that every human being has his own dreams of who he is going to become . It is clear that males and females sometimes have a different preferences- males are good at engeneering , physics and subjects like this and females do well in philology , teaching and so on . Secondly , in the university there is a stable system of education . The change can be a reason of situation then there is no competition in getting into the subject , if universities will accept the predicted proportion of the male and female students , some of them can take the course just because there was an vacant place and he has got a needed sex . To sum up , from my point of view , it is not possible to universities to accept the same numbers of men and women in each course because of the humans preferences and because male and female are good at difference spots . And we should not forget about the accepting system because it is stable and has a good portion of competeting . After all it is not about who you want to be and your ability to take wanted subject .
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In many countries , the student have different moral characteristic . There are a lot of kind teaching for students . For example , in arabic counties existe traditionall " teaching " when student must appreciate and respect of tradition , family , and according then in this countries good behaviour . The anothers countiest , for example - USA , terrible behaviour . Cause this country is free and democraty for tradition . For my opinion first cause is family . It plays very important role in life everyone . Second cause is cociality . Saying tell me who are your friend so I tell you who you are . The truth ! Cociality influance to person . So I think , the parents must paying for attention to children . Very important give them right knowledghes for themself future life ( in school , for example ) . Also the goverment must to help to spesial programmes . In conclusion , student behaviour is modern problem . Nowadays student do n't want studying . He prefer spend to time with computer , iphone . After that he is begginning too lazy . So student behaviour hard to control .
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These days a lot of the countries have the same problem of worsening of students behaviour . Many people are triing to solve that , and to make proper decisions there is a need to work out the key factors causing the behaviour change . As far as I 'm concerned , one of the main reasons of bad behaviour is a nurture . Everyone faces different problems and meets different people while getting older . These difficult situations and acquaintances influence a person greatly both in positive and negative ways depending on the situation . One of the important causes is also the character of a person . During the process of growing everyone tries to attract attention and become respected somehow . That is why some people behave badly thinking such a way will help him to look older or cleverer even though this is not always work . Personally , I also believe that some teachers might be the cause of the bad behaviour of students . Those teachers who have strong character , who are strict and loyal at the same time will never face negative attitude from their students . What can be done to solve the problem of worsening behaviour among students ? First of all , I believe it is important to talk with students who behave in a bad way . Dialogue has always been among the best means of solving problems . More than that , while talking people will know each other better and more likely to understand each other . Ultimately , I suppose that bad behaviour will also survive in the society . As the school is very important stage of getting future experience it will always face such a problem . I believe that it have to be solved with every student privately , and primarily in a form of the dialogue .
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There is a widespread issue in many countries about students behaviour . Every school in every country has its own ways to solve this problem . I 'd like to state my point of view and suggest a probable solution . To speak about causes , I think there are a lot . For instanse , even if only one student behaves himself in a wrong way , it may lead to many student who will act the same . It explains collective behaviour , where the easiest way to stand out oneself is to break rules . What is more , unproprate actions may interrupt to the subject which means lack of understanding and then knowledge . In my opinion , it 's very important to maintain the silence and focus during the class . As a solution , I 'd make lessons less strict , because sometimes when you 're told to do what you do n't want to , you 're likely to do right the opposite . The same is in class . Moreover , I 'd give students more free time between lessons or have some more time to spend with each other to understand them and let them get to know each other more . As a teacher , I 'd show them the opportunities of good behaviour , would make some grants for ones who presented themselves a good way . In conclusion I 'd like to strike out that even if the problem of behaviour in schools is common to every country , students themselves are not . In my opinion , for changing somebody 's behaviour you have to know a student well , so it appears to be a personal approach , because you can not change everybody using the same method . If you know the person , you know the way .
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In the last two decades an awful tendency occurred : the number of crimes carried out by students have increased dramatically . Overall , in many countries we can see severe problems with teenagers ' behaviour . What are the causes of this and what measures are to be taken ? In this essay I will try to answer this question . In my opinion the main reason for such a drastic change is that students seem not to be interested in their studies anymore . They are likely to spend more time hanging out outside than preparing for the assignment the teacher asked them to do . This results in the creation of street gangs that " shake the lives of local residents " . The solution for this issue is quite simple : to make the them show their own individuality through their school work . Moreover , the hectic life of today may also be another cause of students ' bad behaviour . We are being faced with stresses every day , trying to come up the career ladder and sometimes meet with other peoples ' expectations . Bad behavior of some students might come from their unability to deal with the tension . And here is the school again that might be able to solve this issue . The school authorities might bring in additional classes with psychologists , that will look after the mental health of teenagers . In conclusion , I would like to underline that in spite of the factors that force schoolars to behave unreasonably , if the suggested measures have been taken , the problem with the students ' violance will be triggered .
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Nowadays behaviour of students is becoming a burning issue in several schools all over the world . School children neglect many school rules as well as miss a lot of classes . That is a tricky question why it happens and what can be done to improve this situation . There are several possible reasons for that problem . First of all , the main cause of bad behaviour is teenagers ' nature . Children in difficult age are always supposed to protest against rules they do not conform to . There is nothing to do in order to improve that type of nature , but some changes can be done . As far as I am concerned , the most important thing is to give teenage students to develop culturally by giving them more lessons on arts , culture and so on . At the same time , teachers should understand what is needed for young people and respect their wish to show individuality , to set up their own rules and so on . That type of teachers ' behaviour can lead to mutual understanding and improving situation . Secondly , one another reason for the problem of bad behaviour us that students are not involved in the process of education and not interested in getting new knowledge . That is a result of boring classes and the fact that children are not informed how they can use that knowledge . That is why students miss classes being sure they are unresourceful . The possible solution for it is to explain them why every course is important and what is the main purpose of it . For instance , as children understand the importance of knowing biology for future doctors , those who want to become a doctor learn it rarely . Moreover , teachers should make their lessons more interactive and capturing . These actions are to assure children not to miss classes and to encourage them to learn , which is likely to result in their behaviour . To sum up , I would like to add that some actions are able to be done to improve the situation of bad students ' behaviour even if causes are difficult and lie in the very nature of young people .
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These days , in our gast - moving world there is a great tendency among the majority of children to sit at home and do not think about the woderful sites of our nature . Modern children just do not want to appreciate and save nature because their knowledge of it is too small . First of all , evereone should estimate the significance of nature and mostly children , because just they will deal with the natural world in future . Moreover , only the right knowledges and understanding of the importance of this theme enables the young generation to save the majority of fossil fuels , the great amount of water , forests and clean atmosphere on the Earth . Much depends on ourselves and the opportunity of using these important things by future population alsi depends on it . As a result , if children will know it , they will estimate the great importance of these theme and realise that they are the part of natural world too . On the other hand , just children themselves can not know about everything concerning with nature . Their parents should teach them correctly how to relate to the natural world . Only this case , most children will understand that they actually are the real part of nature and the should preserve it . In conclusion , it should be stated that nowadays modern children ought to appreciate our nature and try to sit not only at homes but outdoors , too . The significance of nature should be estimated by them .
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Nowadays , the most part of people , including young people , spend their free time indoors , it is a big problem they forget how they can spend their time in outdoors with other people . this life dtyle has had influence on children . When the Internet and many gadgets appear , the life of children was change . They prefere spent their free time at home , surfing the Internet , plaing computers game or watching TV . But they do n't understand that natural word is so bright and interesting . There are many different interesting things . Moreover , in the natural world children can find friends , who gives dome expirience and knowelage in life . Also , this modern life style can be unhealthy for children , because they do n't get many important components^ sunshine bright , fresh air and many other things . it could be illustrated by my life experiense . My little brother as other young people was prefer spend time indoors earlyer . In the most part of time he was sad and he was often ill . But my mother could understend him thet nature is one of the most part in our life . After that brother began spend his time outdoors , and it was wonderfu , when he stopped to be angry , and he was changes . Taking everything into account , every young people need to understand that nature is one of the most important part of people 's life . And they must appreciate it . It is responsibility of they parents .
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Genes codes which we recieve from our parents make every person uniq and have a great impact on out personality . However , does it has the greatest influence on us or there are some other sources which make ourselfs who we are ? That goes follow , I am going to write about what is more important in my opinon in human 's selfestablishing . To begin with , I would say that the main characteristics that we have since we were born such as gender , race or nationality without doubt have a great influence on our lifes . But at the same time , I suppose that sociolization is much more important cosider to people 's personality and the way they would behaive in future such institution at sociolization as family or school impact on many aspects of our lifes . In addition to this , in society there are rules and norms people have to led to so natural characteristics are framed . We could not do something that is out of laws just because we want it . To sum up with . I would like to say that despite the fact characteristics we were born with in some cases influence on our future decisions I find sociolization as the key thing in people 's personality building .
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The picture demonstrates an information about the underground railway system in six different cities . The great number of passengers use the underground in Tokyo and Paris . Their railway system was opened in the same century . While London has the oldest the underground railway system , it serves less people than Tokyo or Parsi . The newest underground railway system is in Los Angeles and serves just 50 million passengers per year . Few number of people use Kyoto 's underground , it got just 45 million passengers . Washington DC has a higher number of people rather than Kyoto or Los Angeles , it is 144 million passengers . Talking about the length of route , should notice that the longest is London railway system with 394 kilometres . While the most little is Kyoto 's underground system , it got only 11 kilometres . However , the most active city with great number of people using the subway is Tokyo .
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It has become apparent in recent years that because of the appearance of harder systems of education and some other reasons the life of modern pupils turns in to eternal sitting at school and at home . Some people are convinced that children should always stay keeping in touch with nature . This essay reviews in details this issue and gives some reasons about why it is crutial for children to contact with natural world . Firstly , there is a school of thought that knowledge in the sphere of nature can help pupils to achieve some success in school subjects such as Biology , Geography and Chemistry . Studying life cycle of plants or symbiosis of mushrooms and trees improves childr 's level of education and erudition . Furthermore , my personal exprerience proved that knowing some facts about natural processes gives a good change to show someone 's skills at towns and regional olympaids . Secondly , not all of what we learn at school benefits after the graduation , but practice skills and knack of living in forests , for example , will do good job when it is required . The general idea is that schools and government should reverse some subjects from education programme in order to let children develop themselves and stay close to natural environment . My conclusion is therefor that staying indoors for a long time deprives children an essential part of self - development and mental peace of mind at the same time .
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The given graph shows the information about agricultural and urban household which could use the Internet from 1999 year to 2004 year . It is clearly seen , that the percentage of both groups increase throw the whole period . The highest level of using was in 2004 year by urban household , about 55 % , while the level of rural using only 35 % at this time . In contrast to the highest point , the least number of households which used the Internten was just 2 % at the beginning of the period of rural household . At this tome urban had 15 % level . It had a great raise in 2000 year , to 30 % , which can not be said about the other group . The urban household had a number bigger that rural , but agricultural household developed more repotly .
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Nowadays children lead sedentary style of life , they study at school , do their homework and play computer games , all this actions have no common with nature . In this essay reasons why children should know more about our nature will be done . Our food our clothes and humans themselves exist because of natural world . If children have no experience with nature ( for example , how grew plants , what mushrooms are poisoned and so on ) , they may have problems in future life . So children should learn to understand nature to survive , but also nature is very beautiful . It inspires people to create something new life novels , poems , picture . Children should spend more time outdoors , to go camping , for example , if children understand and know better our nature , they will love it . In recent years , people have done a lot of damage , polluted air and water , created a lot of garbage . So if next generation follow us , continue to spoil nature and to forget about what role nature has in our lifes , maybe people will not exist in next century . I suppose government should change education system , invest more money in such educational programme which will help children to understand consequences of their ordinary actions do and which will encourage people to change their habitats . Also social advertising is very powerful , encourage children to appreciate nature is better than encourage them to buy another chikenburger . Such measures will help to tackle with global problem . To sum it up , children is next generation and they have responsibility to save nature , to prevent it from pollution and others negative effects that create human - being , because of that children should learn to understand and appreciate nature .
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Nowadays it is believed that children can not spend a lot of time outdoors and explore the nature and the world around them because our life pace is too fast and changing . This problem has been a controversial issue for the last fen years . However , it should not be forgotten that it is vital for children to understand the nature . To begin with , it does not seen unreasonable that without appreciating the nature children can not also understand and study the things that are made by human beings . It is just impossible to explain to the child something about technology is he ( or she ) does not know simple facts about the world and nature respectively . Furthermore , there can not be a shadow of doubt that spending time outdoors makes everyone more healthy and optimistic . Especially , if your house is located in the rural area near forests and rivers , it is a gold opportunity for your child to walk here and study the nature and animals . It goes without saying that parents can explain some natural facts to their children during the walk . Moreover , parents need to buy books about nature and geographical explorations and read them with their children as that is also key factor of a child educational problem . Having evaluated every thing mentioned above , it can be confirmed that it is essential for children to go outdoors and explore the nature because sitting at home do not give them an opportunity to live long , healthy and wonderful life .
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The issue of how to develope your bussines such as international organisation , has always been quite important to its owners . Many people think that it is necessary to move from developed , reach countries to developing ones while others suggest that this kind of decision will brings no advantages . First of all , developing countries gives you an opportunity to save internationalle buiseness from being quite expensive because of its non - installed economic system . Besides , local workers want to have some income which their own country can not offer to them . Moreover , if the new country where your business will be situated , is just developing , then it is more easily to make it more successfull in a more easy way . However , there are people who have the opposite point of view . They think that moving from developed countries will be the worst decision for international company 's owner . At first , they ask themselves if there are , indeed , strong reasons for such a changing ? The answer is no because the buiseness was developed in its ' native ' country , the company has all the stuff which is need for the good work . To conclude , it seems to be evident that it would be more advantages if the owner of company stays in developed country in whis international buissenes was developed successfully .
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Nowadays there is an opinion that the most efficient way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences . Anyway there is an argue on this topic , so there are people who believe in other alternative ways of reducing crime which are better in their opinion . The first group of people arguing on this topic , think that all those who commit crimes should get their corresponding prison sentence . If the crime is hard , the person must get the longest prison sentence , otherwise after leaving the prison this person will be able to make the crime once again . So the prison sentence should be as long as the crime maker deserves or he will not understand the extent in which he was wrong . Increasing the prison sentence will reduce the number of people who are able to make some kind of crime , because they would not like to be given such a long prison sentence . So people who know what is expected to them will think before committing crime . Nevertheless there are people who believe in existence of other ways of reducing crime that can be more liberal for person that have committed a crime . For example one of these ways can be a work of a psycologist with a person who was wrong in his actions . So if person do not understand that his action is bad and wrongit , the psycologist will explain it . In my opinion the first group of people is right , so I think the longer prison sentence will reduce crime , but not any alternative and liberal ways . People who commit crimes are abnormal , their psychics is not the same as normal people 's . So any alternative way of reducing crime will not be as efficient , as heavy one for the person which is able to commit a crime .
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In modern world a lot of international companies give preferences to poorer , developing countries while deciding where to locate their businesses . They prefer to employ locals rather than take workers from their own country . To my mind , this strategy has a variety of advantages . First of all , companies offer jobs to millions of workers helping them to avoid poverty caused by unemployment . People who get their job can then help their families and spend money on food and leisure facilities . Secondly , this principle allows the economical situation in developing countries to get better and grow even faster . On the other hand , moving businesses to developing countries is good for consumers of the goods the companies produce . It is so because the products which were produced in poorer countries cost less as the workers there are paid less salary . What is more , modern technologies allow reduce transportation cost to minimum so that it becomes not important where exactly to produce goods . However , some people claim that locating plants and factories in poorer countries can leed to many problems and is not as good as it may seem . The main reason for this claim is that businessmen ofthen use extremely cheap workforce which makes people feel like slaves . Moreover , a lot of factories can seriously damage local ecology because of lower ecological standarts in these countries and a high density of plants on the territory . From the point of consumer , it also has a certain disadvantage . Electronic devices and clothes produced in such countries are often of bad quality because workers are not responsible enough and the companies do not pay much attention to the quality of goods they produce and sell . All in all , I still feel that the advantages of moving businesses to developing countries outweigh the disadvantages . However , I strongly believe that companies should do their best to look after the quality of what they produce and be more responsible for the people who work on their factories .
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It is easy to agree with the first opinion . It would be better to check the relevant statistics but it seems reasonable that a lot of crimes are made by recidivist , people who have already broken the law then spend time in a prison and restarted do crimes after deliberation . And if they stayed more time in prison they maybe would have less time to break the law going out . The second point for changing the sentence policy is that then people will be more afraid of the law , not wanting to spend a big part of their life for the prison . However , it has an opposite side of the coin : the death penalty is supposed to do the same thing , but it sometimes makes a killer to kill more and more because he has nothing to lose .
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On the graphs we can see changes of using Facebook from March 2012 to March 2013 and the main reasons for using it among men and women . The first diagram shows us that in March 2012 much more people used desktops to see their social pages - more than 140 million users and nearly 130 million people used phones . We can see that in March 2013 people did not like Facebook like before . Per cent of users was fall down . In March 2013 there are less than 60 million people used desktops and less than 100 users used mobiles . On the second diagram we see the main reasons for using Facebook . Women were more active users of Facebook , than men . Women like sharing photos or videos , seeing funny posts and learning ways to help others , men see that too , but much less . Only receiving updates men and women like both . In the end we can say , that users of Facebook are less with years and women are activity users than men in social nets .
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Nowadays there is a big problem with crime and the question of reducing crime is in the top . Some people believe that longer prison sentences can reduse crime , but others consider that there are more alternative ways of reducing crime . To my mind , the best way to reducing crime is phsycology work with criminals . First of all , when a person is in prison for a long time , he gets used for this place . All his frends are there and the in life prison becoms his life . So , if we give him longer rpison sentences , he will be happy . Moreover , the prison inhibits human and it becomes asocial . And if we want give crimes longer prison sentences , we could understand that it can give us irreversible consequences . On the other hand , if we do not want see crimes near us , we must n't give them another chance , they need to have longer prison sentences . So , we are not animals , we are all people and we need to give chances to crimes . There are people - psycologists , who can help crimes become a normal people . I consider , that a normal people can not kill a person or do other people hurt . All in all , so many people so many minds . I believe , that we must give people with mistakes a chance to correct their mistakes and start a new life .
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The diagram illustrates the changes in the investment of renewable energy over an eight year period . It is a combination of a line graph , which demonstrates worlwide spendings , and a bar chart , which stands for developed and developing countries . In 2006 the worldwide investment accounted for 100 billion dollars , then it statred to raise ; however , from 2008 to 2009 it slightly decreased from 171 to 168 . The funding started to increase quite rapigly in 2009 and reached an all time high in 2011 . Then there was a sharp decrease so by 2013 the worldwide outlay accounted for 214 billions . The developed countries invested approximately 70 billion dollars in 2007 , te funding remained fairly high over four years , in 2009 it atarted to grow and peaked in 2011 accounting for nearly 170 billions . The investment started to diminish in 2011 and by 2013 it accounted for approximately 120 billions . The volume of investnent in developing countries was around 25 billions in 2006 , then there was a steady growth in the outlay over a period of six years so by 2012 the amount of money was more than a hundred billions . After a slight decrease in 2013 the investment accounted for nearlly 90 billion dollars . Overall , the dynamics in world total investment and the changes of funding in developed and developing countries were quite similar , for all of them peaked at almost the same year and then slightly fell down , generally , the investment in 2006 was lower than in 2013 .
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One of the highly argued topics today is whether poorer countries are better for the international companies to locate there their business there or not . This essay is going to cover some advantages and disadvantages of this idea . One of the greatest advantages is the cost of labor in poor and developing countries . It is rather difficult to find proper job in such countries and people there are usually not as highly educated as people in developed ones . Also the standards and prices of living in poorer countries are lower . So , having all this concerned international companies do not have to pay too much for the work done by these people . This strategy can also broaden the market of this company as people living in the county where the product is being produced would likely buy it . As for disadvantages , lower level of education means lower quality of the work done . If people have no knowledge of how to do some kind of work , they need quite a lot of time to learn how to do it and still it does not prove that they would learn how to do it properly . And as lower quality of the product means losses in sales it can be dramatic for the company to locate their business in a developing country . Also , locating their production in another country international companies risk the secrets of their product to be mastered or sold out by a factory in that developing country . So , trying to benefit from such strategy company may ruin completely . All in all , general statistics show that many greatest figures on an international market have not yet suffered from locating their producing factories in developing but not the poorest countries with great amount of population .
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There are ongoing debates about whether it is more successful to set up business in the countries with developed level of developing one . In recent times there is a tendency between overseas corporations to dislocate their companies to poorer countries . This essay will determine pros and cons of this phenomenon . What about advantages , developing countries can afford companies plenty of employees . The workforce is an imperative resource for businessmen nowadays . Secondly , poor countries apply a large amount of opportunities for opening business because they do not have so much fertility of goods and services of developed countries do . Furthermore , in return international companies may act as catalyst for development for these countries . Also new working opportunities will finish unemployment and eliminate poverty in these regions . This can be proved by saying that the more places to work the less people 's need in money . As for disadvantages are concerned , international corporations moving to poor countries will lead to the process of urbanization and , thus , will cause environmental pollution . What is more , overseas companies may lose their high - qualified and skilled workers due to the fact that moving to a worse country is not desirable for them . To conclude , I would like to argue that it is generally accepted that modern society needs to make steps for improving living conditions in developing countries . It seems to me that international business 's dislocation to these areas in there regions .
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The graph demonstrates us a dynamic of changes in investment in renewable energy in period from 2006 to 2013years in developed , developing countries and a world tendency . From the first view of the picture we can see that all the countries and world total have the same trend : from 2006 to 2008 was a growth of investment , that was a little decreasing , after the time was essential increasing and getting a peak , which consist 279 billion dollars , and after the highest point amount of investment became lower . The second evident fact is that developed countries spent more money for renewable energy in corporation with developing countries . All the period reflects the tendency . Then , we can see two types of countries have different dynamic in investment : developing countries represents stable growth while the dimension of developed countries fluctuates . So , we can see that the countries and world total have the same trend but there are some distinction between developed and developing countries .
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In our modern society it is getting more and more common to have efficient policy , supporting poorer and developing countries , among international organizations . Analyzing current situation , there are not only the pros but the cons in employment native people . First of all , leading this businesses is the one of the essential ways to provide people with jobs . If the companies tend to give some working places in poorer and developing countries it will help to avoid the poverty . It is believed people gain an opportunity to apply and cope with problems , trying to save their position . Moreover , these measures from international organizations is likely to pretend the economic and social crises . As a result , the government may have not so many functions to employ local workers while the exact companies are taking some measures , solving unemployment problem . On the other hand , the influence from the other organization may cause negative effects to countries ' position in a world total . The impact is supposed to lead to serious conflict between companies and state . Besides , immigration is the most significant reason to argue since people tend to come where the international company originally based . In result , the population is noticeably decreasing . Taking everything into consideration , there are some advantages and disadvantages in this development . However , if the international companies interact with country government , it will be the most efficient way to overcome all problems . Overall , pros outweigh the cons in employing local workers among forein organizations .
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In the risent years global companies open thei fililas on countries facing poverty , and unemployment . Let 's discuss positive nod negative effects of this process . Firstly , international companies can help to solve the problem of unemployment giving work places to local workers . Furthermore global companies have huge variety of charity programs and volunteering . Students from local schools and university can help in developing their country by themselves with the help of this facilities . On the other hand , there are still some drowbacks . International companies can make a negative effects on the economy of developing countries . Global companies may not have a chance to local business development . Nevertheless , such big companies are stable and popular , so it can destroy small businesses . To sum up , this development has a lot of advantages , therefore there are still some disadvantages
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The graph illustrates the information about changes in investment in renewable energy between 2006 and 2013 in developed , developing countries and as a world total . The minimum of the investment was in 2006 when developed countries spent 75 $ bn compared with the developing countries which spent 25 $ bn . Between 2006 and 2008 investment in both countries slightly increased by 35 $ bn in developed countries and 35 $ bn in developing countries respectively . Between 2008 and 2009 there was a slightly decrease by 8 $ bn in developed countries and increased by 5 $ bn in developing countries . Following it , there was a sighnificant increased by 80 $ bn in developing countries , while the investment in developing countries had just increased investment in developed countries in 2007 . In 2011 was a significant boom of investment in developed countries , while the maximum of investment in developing countries was in 2012 . Between 2011 and 2013 was a world total decrease of investment . Overall , the graph shows the information about changes in investment between 2006 and 2013 .
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Is it possible to reduce crime by giving longer prison sentences of is it alternative ways ? There is no simple answer on such difficult question . As it widely known the most of the crimes are made by those who already made them . Potentially people who are already in prison have more chances to make a crime so it could be a good idea to take them longer in prison but after all they still should be exit . The longer sentences can made prisoner more angry . What is the difference in prison between 10 years and 15 years ? The world around us changes and the longer prison sentences means the harder returning to a normal life in society it creates big risks for those who only exit the prison after a long times . The main aim of the prison is to punish and improve the people , but does it actually improve people ? For example in some Scandinavian countries prisoners have ability to reduse their time in prison by reading some books and then passing a tests about knowledge of this books . I think such things can help more than longer prison sentences . The longer prisoners are in prison the more it costs for the government . In fact those who does not make any crime should pay taxes for prisoners time in prison . It is possible to give them some work or social work at which they will earn money to reduce costs for the government . Overall , I think there a lot of better ways to improve people and help them to return to a normal life than give the , longer prison sentences .
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Air travels become the very important thing for modern people . Business trips travels to other countries to rest , international conferences , travels to meet your friends and families need fast transports as airplane . But some people says that airplane contribute to air pollution and can be a reason at global warming . The most important argument of the group that positively relation to airplanes is that airplanes does not have substituts by speed . A man can be delivered in everywhere for 24 hours when other transport . Can require more . And it the government will introduce the law to reduce the amount of air travel , the price of air tickets will increase ad it increases cost for business it will effect to business climate in the country that is country will become more isolated . And it will negatively effect to education , culture , science etc . In the other hand , air travel contributes to air pollution , and this is a reason of global warming . This group says that clear air and good climate are more important than effect said other group . They say that business important too , but great business are unimportant without good ecology . In the end , I think that thr government should give subsidies to development technology to decrease airplanes air pollution . And this is the most right decision .
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It is a fact , that are pollution has risen with the start of air travel centure . So this essay will discuss the necessity of decreasing the number of air flights . It is agreed with the author 's opinion . That people should reduce the amount of air travel that we can save the environment . First of all , frequent flights influent on are pollution and result to global warming . So the number of air travels should decrease . First opportunity to reduce the next generation , which can transport an enormous amount of people and use new type on soil for there engine . This investment of these types of plane will be very expensive but will help to reduce amount of flights and will be more safety for environment , because they will be able to do one flight indeed five of sive flights by old planes . The second way to decrease a number of unnecessary air travels is to ban small private airlines and private planes , if only the last are not governmental planes for important international visits . If there are fewer amount of private airlines , that government will be able to develop common air travels companies , to watch for the technical condition of the plane and the convenience of the passengers . So this decision will help not only to reduce the amount of flights of private planes but to increase the quality of air travel for passengers and for the technical condition of planes , which belong to government airline and have all necessary technical checking results . In conclusion , I completely agree with the author 's opinion that decrease the amount of flights will help to save our environment from great air pollution because of planes .
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This time many companies prefer organizing a new manufacture in developing country to doing the same locally . There are some advantages of this idea and because of them many people support it . In my opinion , the y do not outweigh disadvantages of this organizational principles . To begin with , replacing manufactures to poorer countries seems to be a good idea to companies and consumers . Firstly , labour in that countries is cheaper than in developed ones , therefore products made there is cheaper too . Lower costs attract people strongly and they buy products from Asia and Africa realized under the famous European or American brands . Moreover , building factories in developing countries gives them a chance to develop faster . For example , Bangladesh or Vietnam have increased their GDPs rapidly after the opening of some factories by European companies there finally , any new manufactures placed in a foreign country makes these countries closer , economic cooperation supports the idea of world united by all types of communication which brings all countries new opportunities to develop . On the other hand , I am sure that all mentioned advantages have got the opposite side . First of all , replacement of manufacturing into a country with cheaper labour kills local markets in developed areas and causes unemployment . Companies do not want to pay more to qualified European or American specialists and prefer cheaper substitutes in other countries . By those decisions , many people have to change their specialisations . What is more important , this system makes poorer countries dependent on the richer ones , because of economical internetion made by their companies . After that a developing country might develop only a certain way suggested by factories ' owner . Finally , the replacement actually does not make the world community closer but divides all countries into two big groups - producing and selling . It is clear that this situation might lead to a number of problems . To sum up , there are some advantages of many companies ' decision to replace their factories in developing countries but I think that it 's disadvantages are equal . World business community has to find the balance solving this problem and it will give an opportunity to develop economies of all countries .
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Currently lots of international companies are moving their businesses to poorer developing countries and employing local workers . And there are some advantages and disadvantages of this process . Firstly , in developing countries the wages are usually lower than in developed countries that means that international companies can save a lot of money they employ local workers from that countries . Secondly , it is always cheaper to rent the land of building for your business needs in the developing countries . The prices there are not as high as in developed countries . And finally this is a very good and kind thing to help citizens of developing country to find a job . In that countries it is a very difficult , because it 's population is usually high and its production is in a very bad conditions to give that people so many work places . There also some disadvantages of moving bussiness to poorer countries . Firstly , even if you move your business in the developing county , you definitely left the head office in your country . So it could provide some problems with involved in your bussiness may not agree to move in the developing country . In that case you will have several problems with the manager force . Having a conclusion , I would like to say that inspite of moving businesses to poorer , developing countries and employ local workers has several disadvantages they are not so important and can be easily solved . So , I think that the advantages of this development definitely outweigh the disadvantages .
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The given graph presents the information about investments of developed and developing countries in the sphere of renewable energy during the period from 2006 to 2013 . Firstly , it is noticeable that world total investments had an upward trend by 2011 and then began to decrease countries invested more money then developing ones and it is true for every year . As it was said , the total investments had been slightly rising up during the period from 2006 to 2011 with an exception being the year 2009 when they decreased from 17 $ bn to 168 $ bn . On the one hand the investments of developed countries had the same trend but on the other hand the investments of developing countries slowly went up by 2012 without any decreasing . In the other hand , total investments and ones of developed countries reached peak in 2011 and investments of developing countries do this in 2012 . In spite of investments of countries differed , the investments of developed countries dominated . These countries invested more during the whole period . As a result , the world total trends is the same as the trend of investments of developed countries .
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In our modern world a lot of international companies have tendency of setting businesses up in the countries , which are less developed , and of hiring local habitats . In my essay I 'm going to cover a number of advantages and disadvantages and decide whether the pros and overwhelmingly more significant than the cons . To begin with , one of the most important reasons of employing local people in developing countries , is that this kind of workforce is much more cheaper for the companies , since in most cases there are not a lot of appropriate jobs available in the country or all the common ones are already engaged . Thenceforth , people are in constant look for a job and when an international company arranges a new facility in an undeveloped country , a lot of workers are needed , so this is a whole new opportunity for the locals . For instance , nowadays the majority of manufactures are dislocated in China , due to jobs for the people . Although , the workers ' salaries are pretty low , but they do n't have any options left . On the other hand , creating a business in a developing country might be full of problems . The main issue is the difficulty of transferring goods to the markets of other countries , which is pretty expensive , since the companies ought to pay not only for the foreign production of their products , but also they have to plan their " spreading " strategy and invest lots of money in it . For example , a famous guitar manufacture " Fender " established a facility in China in the 3rd quarter of the 20th century , but the fees were excessive , that they decided to cancel the transfers of the musical instruments produced their to other countries and to make the Chinese department of " Fender " manufacture the guitars and amplifiers only for the Chinese market . To sum everything above mentioned up , from my point of view , moving companies ' businesses to developing countries can be benefitful only if the company is prosperous . Otherwise , if a company is in its initial stages this might be not good idea due to the amount of money , which are ought to be invested .
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There is a common trend in international companies to remove their businesses from developed countries to poor developing countries , as it is a good source of workers . I personally incline more to the opinion that there is more advantages than disadvantages . There are several reasons for that . First of all , developing countries have a big amount of people , who are ready to work for a very small sallery . There is a lot of reasons why . Obviously , local workers really often have got big families , which are suffering from the lack of the meal , medicine , money . At this point , local workers ready to spend all day long doing the job that international companies will offer . Secondly , people who were born in developed countries since their childhood were trained to do hard work , so they do n't have to rest often . They wo n't regret that they entered this job . According to the reserch from the University of Manchester , in India every second man is ready to work on international companies . However , there is also disadvantages such as the qualification of workers . Very often they do n't have every school education . So it is rather strange to ask them to do the work they wo n't complete . But it is all nothing , because the work force is really enormous . To sum up , advantages of this development , obviously , outweight the disadvantages . It is easier for international companies to find workers in developing countries , because they need money to help their families . Secondly , they are very strong and ready yo work on the companies terms .
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Some people think that social media in the Internet following purpose like give some information to people , but other people think that Facebook , Vkontakte and other media in the Internet just help people entertain . People with the first idea may be true because Facebook and Vkontakte have many groups which showing differents news and have many comments about it . They presenting much advertising about new - opens cafe and lectures which soon are going happening in ypur city . Also , we can get known about lastly new booksor films , sometimes we can research texts of some objects and read it ourselves . On these sites we can see all information about people whose we know or just famous people . Many funats use these resurse that know what like and what doing their lovely stars in simple life . They can chatting with people who is unvalable but wo nt that other people get known what they feel or think about something . However , many people do n't use social media for take or get some information . They use Vkontakte that share their photos with other people , or use Facebook that look for their classmates or other friend who on the present days live other countries , because nowadays when is time of globalisation many people travell or work in other country . In my opinion I agree with first and second ideas . Because we can use posibilities which we have . In the worls everytime somethings happend and modern men must know about all things . It 's good idea share advertising on these sites that a lot of people get know what you want .
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Nowadays travelling became the most popular way of time - speaking because of a lot of opportunities but at the same time it is a big issue for people to level off the air pollution . Inspite of the fact that plans damage the atmosphere this type of transport has many benefits . First of all , plans are the fastest transport in the world . It helps businessmen to communicate with partners around the world and to visit different countries in the limited time . Secondly , air transport is very safety . That is why people prefer plans to cars , because it can avoid traffic and accidents . It allows people to make business in different parts of country or even of a world . Thirdly , many people prefer countries to travel which are far from home and it is difficult to visit it by train . Another question is that plans may be cause of global warming and air pollution . The main reason is that plans are made of alluminium which can destroy the atmosphere . Moreover , the materials which use during the building of the plane are also very dangerous for Earth . Futhermore , in recent years the number of terrosism in air is extremely growing and many airports were ocupating by extremists . Taking all the resons mentioned above into consideration , I would like to say that plans are the most convinient and the most popular means of transport and it should defenetly continue to work , but government should discuss the measures to reduce the pollution . May be they should add and discover the other variants of transportation or , for example , develop the land and water transport system to make them more comfortable and accessable for people all over the world .
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Now there are a lot of new tecnologis that can prove to contribute greatly to air pollution and global warming and air travel is one of them . But Now travelling by plain is one of litle cost and if our goverment introduce lows about air travel many people ca n't travel . Some people belive that it is necessary to introduce laws to reduce the amount of air travel for business and leisure . But in my opinion travel by plain is the most convenient way becouse firstly , people can go to place they need by less time than by train . Secondly , statistics say that travelling by plane is one of the savest way for travell and firdly , in Russia it is the chipest way for travel becouse Russia is biggest country and travel in long way by train is very expensive . But on the other hand of course air travel has been proven to contribute greatly to air pollution become critical our goverment must to do some things . For example they should introduce laws to reduce the amount of air travel for business and leisure or they should do the price for train less . To sum up I should say that air travel is one of the convenient and comfortable way for travel and people ca n't easy efuse of them . But if there is not another way to save our planet people can efuse of their air travel .
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Nowaday , the problem of finding of apropriate solytions to reduce air pollution and to solve the problem of global wrming is so actual . The goverment suggests to reduce the amount of air travel . Does it worth it ? Lets us think both sides of this question . On the one hand , the air transport is the fastest type of transportation . It takes a few hours or even minutes to come places of destination , which are a far miles away . Moreover , it is the safetiest transport . Another kind of transport , for example cars , are much more dangerous than airplanes . According to statistics everyday in the world happen more than 100 car acsidents , which lead to an increase of air pollution . To follow this theme , other type of transportation produce pollution too . Possible , in the complex this kind much more dangerous for the inveroments , than airplane . these are worth attention of the government . On the other hand , air transport is the most expensive of all . It is built of the alluminius , which is a waste . In addition if consume a lot of fossil fuils and money for repairing and constraction . , This costs can be use in more useful areas , such as education . To sum it up , government should provide a complex of programmes for reducing an air pollution and to begin with the lond type of transportation . They should invest in science , especially , in project for replaces the traditional veichecles by eco transport , and to encourage people to use bicycle .
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The graph gives an information about the number of children whithout access to primary school education from 2000 to 2012 by gender and region . The graph shows in 2000 the Africa had the highest number of children not accessed to primary school and it was even more than the number of the Rest of the World . In 2012 it was decreased to the number of South Asia 's children without access to promary education that used to be in 2000 . Fortunately , in 2012 South Asia 's numbers became even less than only the number of boys in 2000 . The rest of the World has also decreased their numbers t 2012 as the others regions . To sum up , all regions have changed their numbers of children whithout primary school to the better level . The smallest number has the South Asia in 2012 and the biggest has the Africa in 2000 . In both situations ( 2000 and 2012 ) boys were oftenly without access to primary school than girls .
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The following chart illustrates how the number of children without access to primary education was changed by region and gender between 2000 and 2012 . First of all , it can be observed , that at the beginning of the period the number of girls in Africa was slightly more than boys and it consist of 23,7 million , while boys was only 20 millions . At the end of the period , it can be seen that the number both boys and girls was decrease and it was 14,5 and 18,2 millions respectively . Furthermore , the number of boys and girls in South Asia was also strongly decline from 11,2 to 5,1 million of boys and from 21,6 to 4,8 millions of girls over the period . As for rest of World , it can be observed that in 2000 the number of children was not so large comparing to the Africa and South Asia and this number was also decrease to about 7,7 million among both sex by 2012 . Overall , the positive trend of decreasing the number of children whithout accass to primary education can be observed at this chart . It can say us about a good work of a governments and their right measures .
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Nowadays more and more people travel in the world . And the main way of transport which they choose is flight . Some people believe that such a way we polute our planet . Let us discuss some of negative and positive aspects of this view . As for me , on the one hands I particular agree with the statement that air travel has some diadvantages . For example , firstly , plains pollute air by gases and a waste when they fly . It leads to difficult consequances with our health . We breath such air and get some illnesses such a way . Moreover , air pollution leads to that plants die and if the economy related to the sale of agriculture it may be effect on this country : it would become poor . However , on the other hand , we can not do without flights by plains because , for instance , some people have some family members in other countries whom they want to see and visit each other . Besides , some people fly by plain to work in other countries . Some of them have their business throughout . Such a way , they can not find other ways to go to these places . In conclusion , it should say that the amount of air travel for business and leisure should reduce . However , it is impossible to realise because we can not limit people in their desire . Moreover , we should have connection with other countries because of getting knowledge of cultures , for example .
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Nowadays travelling by plane becomes more and more popular among people from different corners of the world . It may be a business trip or a journey to have a rest and relax from the daily routine . On the other hand , there are many people who are agree that this kind of transport is very convenient . A lot of factors may prove it . First of all , travelling by plane let people minimize time spending on the road , because plane is the fastest variant among all transport . Especially it is appropriate for people who has a limit in time because their work . Secondly , businessmans can not imagine their life without air transport , because in this case time is equal to their money . Travelling be plane gives such persons an opportunity to do business on the international level ( to deal with parthners from different countries personally ) . At last air travelling is accepted to be the safest type of transport and that is why the majority of people choose it if they can afford . On the other hand , there are people who really afford governments ' point of view and want to reduce the number of flights for work and leisure . Inspite of all advantages of this kind of transport , they are sure that it badly influences the environment by polluting air that can lead to the global warming . To some extant these people are right . Becides polluting air the plane is made of alluminium , that is not ecological metal . So , this kind of transport not only pollutes the enivironment but it is made of unusegul material . If all people imagine , what will be with our Earth , may be some persons will change their opinion and start using land transport such as trains . Or , for example , sea transport . To sum up , there are two points of view concerning air travel . To take in attention everything mentiones above , we can notice that pluses of this type of transport are outweight minuses . Of course , everybody shoud decide what will be better for himself . Personally , I , am sure that governments should not take laws with aim to reduce the number of air flights , because it is a normal natural development , that people try to make their life better .
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Nowadays people 's life is quite complicated that is why there are many questions on which they can not reach an agreement . Some people believe that a big use of airplanes lead to a great air pollution that is why flights should be limited by government while there are whose who are against it . In my opinion , it is good idea to find a balance that suits the most . On the one hand , travelling by air is the most convenient , fact and comfortable way to reach destination you want . It prevents you from traffic jams , long waitings and negative emotions . Moreover , some part of our world can be reached fastly only by plane . I mean that a travel to South America or Australia takes ages if we decided to go to it by ship . Also ot should be said that people in modern world are so busy and always in a hurry , that is why reduce the amount of air travel significantly can cause different problems . But , on the other hand , we must care about our planet and thinl about future on human beings so some rules , to my mind , should be introduced . For example , it can be useful to shorten the number of flights on a territory of one country . ( the destination between Moscow and Saint Petersburg , for instance , can be easily overcame by " Lastochka " train for 5 hours ) . One more way , in my opinion , is to limit the amount of flights in a particular company according to its size . To sum up , to care about our planet or not is a personal choice of every person but I think that the amount of air travel can not be reduce significantly but it is worth doing it on some way if we want to live on our planet for a long time and give a bright future to further generation .
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In today 's world of great opportunities , the majority of people used to travel by air . There are a great number of debates wheather air travels pollute nature and contribute global warming or not . Of course , it reduce time for travel but , may be , planes are cause of much consequanses for environment . I somewat agree with the statement , that government must commite different limits on air travel in order to prevent global warming . First of all , there are many things to be said in favour of introducing laws to reduce the amount of air travels . It can not be denied that planes like cars pollute flora by burning fossil fuels and motor oil which consist of chemical dangerous elements . It leads to increase of temperatures , to say nothing of global warming . Secondly , for this reason , reducing of deathes would be a positive step in saving nature . in recent years there are a wide range of crashes of planes . It becomes a cause of people 's deathes . If government introduced laws of reducing the number of air travel for business and leisure we would not be so worried about the international statistics of crashes of planes . On the other hand , it goes without saying that air travel is recognised to be the fastest way of journey . It is inevitably that people will always be enthusiastic about air travel . It has a lot of benefits : fast , convenient , comfortable and with frequent service transport . Having analyiesed these reasons , it worth concluding that it would be simplistic to state categorically that air travel has good or bad impact on the nature . It depends on how you use it and clearly , it is better in moderation then in excess . I would like to say that government must become more centered on this issue . Because true measures need to be taken .
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There is an opinion that government should to restrict air travelling to protect the environment from air pollution and global warning , because it is a well known fact that the airplanes have negative influence on these factors . If you want my opinion - I totally disagree with such point of view . Firstly , the reducing of number of flights will make life of people more difficult and inconvenient . People travel by plane everyday and their aims to do it quite various : It is clear that there are a lot of travels just to get rest or just for fun , however there can be very significant and important events , which men should n't miss . For example , it can be connected with family , health or work . In any way , the decision to reduce airflights will distinct the personal life of humans . Secondly , travelling by plane are often used by businessmen , who need to solve their problems rapidly . If government restrict the amount of air travelling , businessmen will lose a lot of money , because of the unability to meet with their partners and other important people . In this way , such decision of governments will badly effect on the business life . Finally , I think that the negative influence of airplanes on the environment is not the problem of people , who use this way of traveling . To my mind it is the problem of inventors and constructors of these planes , because they should pay more attention to the systems , which should totally decrease the bad influense of this kind of transport . So , government need to ask them to improve the planes in order to not to restrict the number of flights . To sum up , I do n't agree with the reducing of number of air travels , because the main reason of pollution is not the amount of travelling , but the construction of the air transport . In addition , the life of people will become more uncomfortable and difficult if the government takes this decision .
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Many people considered that air travelling causes a great air pollution and a global warming . There is an opinion that a lot of travels are unnecessary and it should be reduced by law . there are two sides of this question . On the one hand , air pollution is a big problem of modern people life , and the damage to the environment caused by this is really big . One of the disasters it can lead to is Global warming . Even today for example in Alaska there are rapidly rising water levels and ice erosion . Many towns and settelments in Alaska are affected by it and are in danger . But on the other hand , air travelling is a little part of the problem . Air pollution is caused not only by flights but by such things as factories , big amount of cars in cities , and many others . The main problem is in the whole technical progress , not only air travelling . To sum it up , it 's important to say that definetely , air travelling causes a damage to environment , such as air pollution , but people should look wider at this problem . There are many ways to change the environment situation , and reducing the amount of air travel is not the best solving for this question . People can build less factories , buy less cars and some other things . So , government should n't reduce air travelling .
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To begin with , the bar chart illustrates the amount of boys and girls of three different regions : Africa , South Asia and Rest of World , which were not allowed to attend a primary school between 2000 and 2012 . Firstly , it can be seen from the graph that children which had not access to primary education in all three regions became lower in 2012 . As for Africa , approximately 5 millions of boys and 5 millions of girls had opportunity to attend primary schools . In contrast , in South Asia the proportion of girls decreased at 16,8 millions and standed at the rate of 4,8 millions in 2012 , but the number of girls in the Rest of World become lower ( 7,6 millions ) than in 2000 ( 12,8 millions ) . The number of boys in the this region levelled off too and was equal 7,7 millions . The amount of children who did not have access to primary education and South Asia 2000 is equal .
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The graph provides the information about the amount of children without opportunity to get a primary school education , depending on sex and region over the period 2000 to 2012 . The highest number of boys and girls who did n't get a primary education was in 2000 in Africa . It was 20 million boys and just under 45 million girls . For the both genders , it was the peak , if we see over the global period . But by 2012 , the number of boys without primary education in that region decreased for more than 25 % . And the amount of girls at the same time fall for the more than 5 millions in Africa . The number of girls who did n't can get a primary education in South Asia was more than 20 millions in 2000 , but during the next twelve years it declined to the number of 4,8 millions . There was a bit more than 11 million of boys without primary education in that region in 2000 , but by 2012 it lost around 50 % of the initial level . The amount of boys without primary education in te Rest of World was 10,5 millions in 2000 , but over the period 2000 - 2012 it declined to the number of 7,7 millions . At the same time , there was a drop of the number of girls without primary education . It started with the number of 12,8 millions in 2000 , but by 2012 the amount of girls reduced for the more than 5 millions . Overall , we can see that in 2000 the number of children who did n't can get a primary school education was significantly higher than in 2012 . And the percantage of girls was more than the percentage of boys during the global period , excepting the 2012 year in South Asia , when the amount of boys without primary education was higher .
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Some people believe that nowadays airplanes exremly infuence the air pollution and that global warming depends on the number of airplanes , while other people think that air travel for business and leisure can not influence the results of global world changes . First of all , I also believe that air travel play a role in the world pollution , because it is like a car or a bus has some influence on the air . Moreover , in our modern society the majority of famous people have their own airplane and they do a lot of unnecessary air trips . And , of course , government have to control the number of air travel per day to save our planet and air pollution . What is more government can introduce some laws to control air travel for leisure . But on the other hand , I think that it is impossible , as to calculate the data about all airplanes and air travel . What is more the majority believe that the number of air travel don not influence global warming . However , government have to control more important areas in our country . Take for example , medicine , education , pollution as a result of factories . Nevertheless , it is the fact that water pollution play the most important role in global warming . As a result , government should control not only air pollution , but it has the most important problems in our modern life . As a result , nowadays global warming is a very important theme for some debates , but government does n't have to forget about other problems in our countries . In conclusion , inspite of other problems , I believe that our future time it will be some laws which will reduce the number of air travel and that it will influence the global warming on the positive sights .
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The bar charts provide information about differences between number of children without access to primary education in different regions and gender . Summary , the greatest number of girls and boys without access to primary education in Africa in 2000 year . Alternatively , the number of boys and girls in South Asia in 2012 year is smallest among other variant . On the first bar we can see that the number of boys in Africa in 2000 , who withous primary education slightly less , than number of girls , but more than boys in Africa in 2012 . So there is we see decrease from 20 per cent to 14,5 per cent among boys and decline from 23,7 per cent to almost 20 per cent among girls . In the period of 12 years in South Asia there is the greatest falling the number of girls wiithout access to school . It drops from slightly more than one fifth to less than 5 per cent . Last bars show little changes among boys and girls , without access to primary school in Rest of World for a 12 years .
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Environment protection is a conversational issue , which generates a great deal of heated debates with supporters , who claim , that it is very necessary to abond different useless flights , while opponents suppose , that it is n't a great problem , which is provided by laws of governmnet . I somewhat agree with statement , that it is vital problem in order to solve . I suggest , that every person wants to live in the safety environment , takes a deep breath with clear air and other , that 's why we should to do possible accomodations for its deal . Firstly , people live in a high - technical world , where we connect with different parts of the countries or continend , that 's why it is n't very vital to fly by plane for conferences . For example , businessmen can discuss their problems with help of Skype . Moreover , this programme allows not only to speak with partner on the other side of screen , but also and see the person . I think it is very great and convient . Secondly , nowadays political position is dangerous and a lot of type of air travelling are damaged . Besides , these unrecognizable sutuations kill huge amount of human lifes . Although , I thinks this problem is solved by protection of local measures . For example , people , who have own deal or business , should to introduce or share with companies in this country , where live . This way allows to protect air atmosphere and own production , companies , fabricks . Thirdly , also we have other facilities to go to the university , between different towns , to spend leisure activities such as by train , by bus or by car . All of these are more safe than planes , and a lot of people are frightened by a huge amount of kilometres from the ground . On the other hand , there are some disadvantages . Firstly , people choose , as a way of transportation , air travelling , because it is more faster . Secondly , sometimes accidents are happined by independent conditions of you , that 's why you have a little time to prevent catastrous ... In conclusion , I 'd like to say , that everybody wishes to take a clear oxygen without harmful pollutions , that 's why all requirenments are needed to put in our attention , if it will br not so comfortable to us .
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Nowadays there are a lot of air travels . People use planes to traves for business trips , holidays trips and leisure activity . But sometimes air travel is unnecessary because people have no need to go somewhere by plane so there is a point of view , that the governments of different countries should decline the number of air travel by laws , because air transport causes air pollution and it is also a reason of global warming . But is the decrease of air transport a good idea or not ? Let 's consider . Let 's start with the point of view , that the governments should ignore this situation and the amount of flights remains steady . There are a lot of advantages . Firstly , people can travel by plane as often as they want . Secondly , the price for tickets stays the same . As for disadvantages , the global warming and air pollution because of the air transport hurmes our planet . Now let 's consider the opinion , that the governments should reduce the amount of flights . This situation has its advantages : air transport will pollute the atmosphere less , and there will be less air accidents . But this situation has a lot of disadvantages . Firstly , the price for tickets to planes will rise quickly . Only rich people will fly . Secondly , the majority of population will use other kinds of pub transport , for example , trains , cars , ships . So , we ca n't say , that these types of transport hurms our environment less , than planes . Thirdly , the tourism will stop to develop , because of lack of planes . Te fact , that the majority of people prefer to travel abroad for many thousands km . In addition si the same problems will take place in business . To sum it up , it is no need for governments to decline the amount of air travel , because firstly , air transport is the safest transport ; secondly , without air transport our world stops develop .
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It is believed that planes produce harmful gases and in this case terribly pollute our environment . For that reason , authorities want to make laws to harden air travelling for business or entertainment uses . On the other hand , fuels that planes produce can damage our planet , react badly on population 's health . Moreover , nowadays millioners or politicians are used to use air traveling not in important activities . For them , plane or helicopter is an usual sort of transport that can be expluatated to go to the luxury doubled harmful impact of airplanes to our environment . In these reasons , of course , air travel should be reduced or forbidden . But on the other hand , it is known that plane s the safetiest type of transport . There is lower level of accidents involving this type of travelling compared with cars or ships . Furthermore , going by plane is the fastest way to achieve every corner of the world . However , it is not so cheap like train , it provides comfortable facilities and confidence that you will not be late . So , the fact of reduction the amount of air travel will definitely go to transport collaps . It leads to people 's disappointment and unsatisfied reaction to government decision . All things considered , I find that law unaproppriated and without any chance to exist . Modern society depends on daily migration , travellings and so on , so it is hard to imagine that this huge number of flights ill be delighted or cancelled . May be , the possible sollution is in scientists ' hands , because they can invent new energy for planes that could be not as harmful as it is now .
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Nowadays due to the development of oliverse types of transportation , the modern society faces a significant provlem of air pollution . The ehaeest emissions from air kinds of transport undoubtedly would lead to the rise of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere and different elements of pollution . Therefore , some people hold the opinion that the government is able to ban some kinds of air transportation in order to reduce the amount of waste . One of the most striking features of this problem is that air transportation is preferable among the residents . Althought , this kind of travelling is a great deal more convinient , the decline in it 's popularity would cause some benefits for the envitonment . For instance , one could assume , that the atmosphere would contain less harmful emissions . Moreover , if the government intriduces a special law , the other types of transport should be also developed . In other words , people should get a good alternative to air transport , such as trains . As a result , people would be encouraged to use these ones . One should nevertheless , consider the problem from another side . Despite the fact that the law might reduce the number of business and leisure air travellings , there are the other types of air transport usage . As a result , a chellenge of environmental polluting would not be completely solved . Furthermore , other kinds of activities such as automobiles or working of factories also influence the growth of harmful elements in the atmosphere , so , the law of the government would not change the situation completely . To sum up , all things considered , there are a lot of air travells that are not needed . However , the reduction of them is not a solution to a pronlem . It is more essential to develop environmently friendly air types of transportation .
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Nowadays , there are many different plans , which can be used for visiting other countries , for business or travelling . But same people people say that Air travel has a mall influence on air pollution and global warming and goverments should forbite such many flying and input the law , which will do it . As been clearly understand that the big amount of planes makes noise and exhaust , but it very comfortable type of transport . Also it is very fast . If you want to go abroad , you will fly by the plane , because you will spend 5 - 8 hours . If you choose the car , you will spend about a week . Moreover , according to statistics , cars make more noise and gamage of nature . Of course , if goverments think that alot of air travel is unnecessary , can introduce laws to reduce the number of air travel for business and leisure . While many people think that It is necessary . With development plants are changed and now It is more safety then It was 10 years ago and also It burn less fuil now . We should about future and now scientists work an the new disel oil , which will safety for air pollusion and global warming In conclusion , I would say that air travel is necessary for people , because anyone want to wach other countries , their culture , to solve this business problems . In my opinion the govement shoul find sollusion in other areas .
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The bar chart provides information about the number of children without any access to primary education for twelve - years period by region and gender . As we can see , the x - axis illustrates regions , when y - axis shows number of children . The highest number of children ( more than 43 millions ) , without any access to primary education was in Africa in 2000 . Also there is the smalles bar with the total number of such children about 10 millions , but in South Asia and only twelve years later . By all statistic which we can see , the number of children without access to primary education is different , and it changed in every country also in different way . In Africa for twelve - years period this number stay smaller only from 43 millions to 32 . When in South Asia we can see a large contract between such numbers in 2000 and 2000 , from 32 millions to 10 ! Talking about the Rest of World , here the number has always been larger than in other regions .
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