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These days there are many creative artists in different areas such literature , painting and drawing , music and cinema . They have a lot of interesting ideas to make true in life and some people consider that there should be no limits by government on what they create . I can not completely agree with this statement ....
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The given graph presents the percentage of group of people aged 65 and over from 1940 and 2040 in three countries . Overall , the trend of this age group of population in each country upwords . The most outstanding feature of this graph that the percentage of older people in Japan constitute the lower proportion for a ...
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The table provide the information about the underground railway system in six big cities such as : London , Paris , Tokyo , Washington DC , Koyoto , Los Angeles . Firstly , there are four coloms in the table including the name of city . Second gives information about the date , when the underground was opened . Next co...
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Nowadays there are a lot of researches books and opinions about development of our behaviour and personality . Some people thing that the characteristics we are born with have the greatest influence . Other people thing that experiences we may have in our live have much more influence on us . I think the major influenc...
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The table illustrates information about the metro in several cities : London , Paris , Tokyo , Washington DC , Koyoto , Los Angeles . Firstly , it 's clear that London metropolitan was opened much earlier than other , and nowadays it 's the biggest one ( 304 km of route ) . Secondly the table shows that Tokyo metro is ...
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The statistic shows that characteristics we are born with are much more impact than any experiences we may have during our life . From the first day of our life we already have special characteristics , as what nationality is you , are you boy or girl , what colors is your hair and what colors is your eyes and etc . Al...
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There is information about the underground railway systems in six cities in the table below . We can see that the London Underground was opened in 1863 and the system is the oldest one . By the way , it also has the longest route , which is 394 million kilometres . Talking about the amount of passengers per year I can ...
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The qualities of character which we have from the beginning of our life are sometimes considered to be the most important ones . However , some people think that skills that we get through our existence have a stronger influence on our behaviour . Personally , I believe that out life is changing day by day under the in...
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Some people think that number of students of different sexes in universities should be equal in every subject . Other finds this idea stupid . I do not agree with the first one but looked for something interesting in their opinion . To begin with , I would like to provide the arguments in benefit of the first point of ...
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Some people say that much more influence on our personality have the characteristics we are born with . Ather people think that your life experiences and opportunity for learning every day somethink new is more important think in our life . Both of this thinks or opinions have pluses and minuses . On the other hand , i...
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The charts illustrate the changes between the ages of the population in two countries : Italy and Yemen , in two period of time : 2000 and 2050 . We can see that children and teenagers ( people from 0 to 14 ) in both country lose their position in proportion of population . And elderly people have a bigger proportion i...
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It is always said that increasing the number of sport facilities will have a good impact on public health . There are a lot of points of view on that problem . Some people claim that it is a good idea otherwise there are people who disagree with that statement . On the one hand , the idea of increasing the number of sp...
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The charts below represent the data about the ages of population of Italy and Yemen at the beginning of the 21st century in 2000 and in the middle of the same century in 2050 . As for Yemen we can see the growth of number of people of 15 - 59 years old from 46,3 % to 57,3 % , when in Italy , on the contrary this part o...
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Public health is a burning problem nowadays : government makes different policies but the level of public health is still low . There are different opinions and all of them should be take into account . The most common opinion is that the best way to improve public health is by increasing of sports facilities . It is o...
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The following diagrams show data on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy with following forecasts . It is clearly seen that proportions have changed in the comparison . As we can see the number of people 0 - 14 years old will decrease in two countries in approximately fifty years . There is an increase in num...
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Nowadays people more and more focused on their health . The young and the older try to care about themselves . Actually some people are sure that if the government increases the quantity of places for doing sport , the aim stated will be reached , other think there are lots of other ways in deciding this problem . To b...
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Nowadays public health is a very important issue for most countries . The question is how to provide it and many people suppose the increasing the number of sport facilities to be the best solution . On the one hand , sport facilities will be helpful for people of all generations . It is possible to find special type o...
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Scientists all over the world argue on this issue - what influences on us more : born characteristics or our developing life experience ? Let us find out , who is right . Firstly , I would like to talk about my own experience . Both of my parents are working in a university , they are professors , so it is obvious , th...
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That table bellow illustrates the information about underground railway systems in six different cities . First of all , the main thing which can be seen easily is that 4 from 6 undergrounds were built in 20 century : The London underground is the oldest one ( 1863 ) and Los Angeles underground system is the newest ( 2...
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The table shows us the information about six different underground systems in different continents . Firstly , I want to introduce London 's railway system , because it is the oldest one and the only opened in nineteenth century but still the longest comparing to five others . But speaking about passengers it is in the...
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Studies about people 's characteristics made a statement that ones we are borned with make great influence on our behavior and personality , and others do n't . I can not agree with this statement . Because everywhere I see examples of destroying this theory . For sure , noone have ever born with skill of speaking or r...
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Nowadays the problem of live experiences is one of the most controversial . What experience influence more on our person : with we are born or that we get during of all our life ? First of all , it should be mentioned that characteristics that we have from our born are researched not in all . But a lot of scientist say...
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In the table we can see information about the underground railway systems in six cities . The longest underground is in London . It is 394 kilometres of route . Then goes Paris and Tokyo with 199 and 155 kilometres . The least underground is in Kyoto . It is only 11 kilometres . The London underground is early - opened...
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According to the research the features we have since our birth are more significant for our current condition and for our future being than features we can get from our life experience . To my mind , both characteristics are important for our existence for the different reasons . To begin with , the number of character...
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Our life is full of filosophy , so there are two points of wiev : firs is that on our personality is influence more from our genetic characteristics who are with us from our born , And the second is the experiences during all life creat our individuality . Firsly , our mind life begin from chilhood , so as say psicholo...
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The question of male and female studing is very interesting now . On the one hand , all people can get the high education , on the other hand , there are a lot of men on the phisical disciplines and a lot of women on the humanitarium disciplins . Is it a reason to make the same nomber of men and women on the faculties ...
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This graph provides us the information about the proportion of people who are over 65 in USA , Sweden and Japan . The information is given in percents . Let 's have a look on the situation in Sweden . In 1940 it was only approximately 7,5 % . However , in next years it becomes to raise and it is predictable that in 204...
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The line graph demonstrates how the population of 65 - year people changed over one century in Japan , Sweden and USA . While the proportions of elderly people from USA and Sweden was almost always increasing , the one of Japan had a long periods of a gentle fall from 1940 up to 4 percent and of stagnation from 1960 to...
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There is an opinion , that every subject in the university should be studied by an equal amount of males and females . However , I ca n't fully agree with this suggestion . Originating from feminist studies and the equality of human rights , the idea of splitting university courses in equal male and female parts seems ...
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In a modern fast - moving world in most of developing countries there is no any gender discrimination , therefore men and women have equal rights . Connecting to this some people have strong belief that while entering a university girls and boys must be provided by equal numbers of places in every subject . Others defe...
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There are different views whether it should be a balance of male and female students in every subject or not . I completely disagree with the idea that universities should accept equal numbers of men and women . The main argument of opponents would be that balanced proportion of males and females in subject lets create...
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The graph below illustrates different percentage of people , that were 65 years old and older , in 3 countries - Japan , Sweden and USA . The results are provided in a proportion , that has been analysed since 1940 . Two curves of Sweden and USA figures look similar to each other . There are 7 % of elderly people in Sw...
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This graph illustrates the number of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in Japan , Sweden and USA . First of all , there are three main trends and figures connecting with all three countries changed . In 1940 , the percent of older population was nearly 10 % , in contrast in Japan it was only 5 % . N...
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Some people are insured that both genders should equally get higher education . So they consider that it should be illustrated by the same number of men and women in every subject in universities . But as for me I can not be totally agree with this statement . On the one hand , in modern world there is not an argument ...
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Today there is a widespread opinion that the number of male and female students on an each faculty should be equal . However there are some argues about this fact . Personaly I can not agree with the statement . Firstly , I believe that the choise of the field of the study is closely connected with nature of the person...
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This graph descibes the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in Japan , Sweden and the USA in the time period from 1940 to 2040 . The main tendency in all three countries is the increase of the percentage of old people in the end of time period being considered . Japan has the highest percentage of long - livi...
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The question of gender uneqality is widely discussed in modern society and fairly attracts a lot of attention . Obviously in the field of tolerance to gender differences are still an enourmous amount of things to do . Women in the whole world are still struggling with gender discriminance . They are paid less than male...
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The graph below illustrates how many people 's procent of age 65 and over live and will be live between 1940 and 2040 in Japan , Sweden and USA . As we can say , in all countries the proportion of aged 65 and over will be on the high level by 2040 . In detail look , we can see , that in Japan between 1940 and 1960 the ...
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Nowdays the university gives opportunity to study everyone , if you have money or you pass an exams on a high mark . As for me , I think that there is no need to accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject . Nowdays , I suppose , that in every university we have normal numbers of girls and boys . ...
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In our modern world everyone should find their own profecional way . We should also realize that this way is started when we chose our educational program . In universities few kinds of programs can be more popular among the male group and other kinds among the female group . That is normal situation , but newertheless...
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Nowadays the nesessary part of our life is our health . All people want to be healthy , because without health people become unhappy . Health always should important role in our life . In order to be health people do many things , some people take drugs for health , some people go in different place which usefull for h...
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Nowadays many people think about their health . There are a lot of ways to prove it . Some people hope the best way to do this is to rise the quantity of sports facilities . But other think that this way is not effective and there are some measures that can help more quickly and effectively . Those people , who conside...
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In the recent century people became more lazy and couch - potato because of industrialisation of world economy . The consequence of these behavior is unhealthy body . How individuals try to solve this type of problem . Some people offer to provide individuals with new sport facilities and raise its quantity . Opposite ...
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This pie charts give us information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy . Firstly , lets selecting information about ages of the populations of Yemen in 2000 and 2050 . The first chart shows that in 2000 the most part of population was from 0 to 14 years old peoples and there was a small amount of humant who ...
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This charts show the information about Italy 's and Yemen 's ages of the populations . Data is collected in 2000 . Also this illustrate a projections for 2050 . In Yemen the percent of adults and children is very huge , and it have only around five percent people sixty and over years old . In Italy we can see other sit...
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The level of polutionand style of lifein the modern world make our health worse and worse . Thus we should find a ways to improve it . Some people believe , that increasing the number of sports faculties can solve this problem . In contrast , other say that it is not enough and we need other measures . At first , many ...
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities . On the other words , by improving the health of society . Others , however , say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required . I think that increasing the number of ...
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People have different views about health and whether if we recovery the number of sport schools , gums , fitness clubs and other sports organization , would help in our heath ? In my opinion that there are many organizations in the country , but public health have not peak level and its increasing not improve . There a...
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Nowadays question of public health has it is own high place in the world . Modern world suffers from air , water , earth pollutions and others . It brings damage for people 's health . Ways of improving people 's health is actual question for the government now . Some people think , that it would be better to people 's...
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Nowadays public health has become worse than whatever before . Governments of many countries look for ways for improving it . Some people assume that it can be done by increasing the quantity of sports buildings , but other people are sure that it is not enough and we need to try finding other ways for becoming healthi...
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Nowadays , many people consider that sport makes us healthy and that by developing sports conditions we can build a helthy and strong nation . However , others are sure that the strategy of developing sport is not so effiecently as we imagine . It is generally accepted that if you go in for sport then you are going to ...
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Many people believe that increasing of the number of sports facilities improve public health . However , there are many other people who say that it can not help to improve public health . Who is right ? Let 's consider this question for all sides . Suppose that the number of sports facilities was increased . But how w...
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Two of four diagrams show humanity percentages of different ages in Yemen and Italy in 2000 . Another two charts illustrate some forecasts for 2050 . We can see that population if these two countries is divided into three groups . I will call people who are 0 - 14 years - young people , who are 15 - 59 years - middle -...
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In society there are many different points of view about how improve people 's health . Some individuals believe that the most effective way is to develop sport facilities in the country , but others think that it would have no effect and government should find another ways . Let 's consider these two opinions . Firstl...
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Through the last 50 years humanity grow up to 7 billion people . To continue this process people should keep their self in fit . That means that topic about public health is quite common . Some people thing that sport infrastructure can improve people 's health . Other told about other measures and think that sport hav...
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In modern world new technological developments and the science progress can lead to environmental problems , because people should care about their health . I believe that many measures can improve public health . Some people consider that only the growth of number of sports facilities can give a positive effect in the...
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It is certainly true , that growth of quantity of sports facilities can improve public heath , but it is not the best way to do it . Sport centers and sport shops can reduce prices for sport equipment or for club cards to do different sports . There is no evidence that someone is not interested in some sports , but it ...
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Sport has always been an essential part of our lives throughout the history . It is not surprising that , many and many people have started to go to different sport clubs in order to keep fit . In view of this , there are many disputes concerning the improving of public health . Many people claim that it is nessecary t...
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Nowadays the Olimpic games stay very popular . And other sports events became more and more interesting for people . In that way , the problem of sports and health population stays one of the contral for evry develop country . There are two main point of view to diside this case . Some people think that if goverment in...
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Publis health is very important acpect of life of country . There are very much disscus of its topic . An the on hand , government can to increase the number of sports facilities . People will have more possibilites to sports . It is impotante , if man can to choose sports , which he wish . An the other hand , sport cu...
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It is argued that sport is a major way to improve social health . To my mind , even if sport actually makes us healthier we can not leave population with that single measure . To support the idea of wider range of improvements , we need to take into account the general socio - economic situation in the world . Firstly ...
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Nowadays , modern conditions of working , studying male people have not active way of life . In addition cities are totally poluted by transportation emission , lack of nature objects etc . besides we have unhealthy food , lack of sleep and so on . It 's possible to say that public health is suffering . Some people say...
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No doubt , with development science and technology our word have fast rhythm of life . So people forget about care about their health . They go to the work and do n't eat in right way , as a consequences they have some problems with health . Some people believe that if we increase the number of sport facilities , we wi...
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Nowadays , when we live in the modern world , when people have a quick temp of life , they work for major part of their life and man and woman do not have enough time for rest and also for eating healthy home foods . As a result , we have problems with our healthy . Some people think that the best way for improving hea...
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This diagramms illustrate the information about population of Yemen compering with Italy in 2000 . The population is derided in three age groups and there are some predictions for 2050 . As for Yemen , more than a half ( 50,1 % ) of its population are children and in Italy this age group is about 14,3 % . Another massi...
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Nowadays , public health is very important problem . Government should do enough to improve it . Some people consider that the best way to improve public health is increasing the number of sport facilities . Other people think that this is not effective and other measures are required . Sport facilities is good way to ...
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The pie charts illustrates the percentages of population ' ages of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050 . There is an interesting situation on pie chart in Yemen in 2000 . As we can see the marketable trend that all population of Yemen consists in the whole of such groups of population as children to 14 yea...
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This four pie charts show different ages in Yemen and Italy in different years in 2000 and the futures ( 2050 ) . The first groups illustrated how much people different ages lives in Yemen in 2000 . A half people are is children of the aget between 0 - 14 . That consist 50,1 % from all people who live in this country ....
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Nowadays , more and more people unhealthy and who have different problem with health . I agree with this statement . I think that created new the number of sports facilities . Is good idea . But also I agree with people who say that it is little effect to do people health . In modern life people do n't can without diff...
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In charts we can see the populations ' ages of two countries Italy and Yemen in year of 2000 and 2050 . The charts of 2000 show that Yemen has over 50 % of young people under 14 years old and over 46 % of people beetween 15 and 59 years . There is opposit sutuation in Italy , where percentage of people at age 15 - 59 m...
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Public health is integral social issue , which relates to each of us . Personal helth is the most important thing that human has in modern society , because there are a lot of factors which influence on this ( polution , enviromental problems ) . According to the main idea , people argue that the best way to improve pu...
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Nowadays the art is very popular . Many young and old persons create beutiful things every day . And it is remarkable . But sometimes those people forget about the rules . Creative artists make new ideas and they want to have the freedom . They want to go where they want . They have the law to think in own way . Of cou...
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Traditionally , artists and other professions that are related to the arts often connected with freedom of the words , thoughts and , of cause , withe the independance from politicians . However , it is usually clear from the history that many bounders were built by the governments ot the church for them , because ther...
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The chart below shows the difference between levels of post - school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who was them in 1999 . In the graph of school qualifications in Australia accorded to gender are five points of qualifications . It is two types of gender . Skilled vocational diploma had...
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The bar chart below illustrates five levels of post - school qualifications and percentage of men and women who had them in 1999 in Australia . The biggest differense of percantage is skilled vocational diploma . 90 % of men held it , whether only 10 % of women had it . Amount of men with postgraduate diploma and Maste...
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One of the most important question for creative artists of present and past was question about freedom of expressing their own ideas and possibility of restrictions on them . Art is the way people can express themself . It is way to present their ideas to people . But at the same time government must protect people . A...
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These diagrams shows us the situation about the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the prediction for these countries in 2050 . There are some simmilar trends and some differences . Let us observe it more carefully and make some conclusions . The main differences in developing of these two countries . Italy is a...
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The pie charts illustrate the population in different ages in Yemen and Italy , in 2000 and its projections for 2050 . The main trend in that there was a significant difference in the proportion of it in 2000 and , according to the forecast , it will also be in 2050 . However , the percentage of people in different age...
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The bar chart provides information about the different levels of qualifications in Australia after school and the males and females proportion who passed them in 1999 . It is clear that the per cent of females outweighted than males in undergraduate diploma and Bachelor 's degree . It was 70 % and approximately 55 % at...
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Nowadays in the world appears more and more people who think creative and express their ideas in different spheres . But the goverment restricts they activity . I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages in my essay . This opinion have several benefit . Firstly , creative artists do this world more colourful and o...
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These two diagram show the use of electricity in United Kingdom : the graph reflects a typical daily demand for electricity and the pie chart contains the information about what exactly the electricity is used for . By sumarising the information two main factors can be selected and reported : that winter demand for ele...
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There are two graphs show how people use electricity during the whole day in summer and winter and for what they usually use it . It 's very easy to understand why people use so much electricity in winter compare to summer if we look down to the pie chart . More than fifty percent of the electricity is used for heating...
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Everyone is searching for happiness . Being happy is a life goal . People are searching for a good job , nice and tidy appartment and love of their life to be happy . Because if you do n't like your surrounding , you 're not going to be happy . As we know , everyone describes happiness in different ways . For some peop...
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The above chart features the percentage of men and women holding various levels of qualifications in Australia in 1999 . It is clear that from the graph that skilled vocational diploma is very popular among makes as opposed to women who constitute only 10 % of the total number of such diploma holders . According to the...
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The bar chart illustrates post - school qualifications according to gender , measuring in per cents in Australia in 1999 . It is obvious that a skilled vocational diploma was held in higher level by males than females . Percentage of men who held it was 9 times more than percentage of women . In addition , it was the h...
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There are two stated opinions about ways to improve people 's health . The one part of people is about to think that the best measure will be increasing number of sports facilities while the others think that it will not be very effective and other ways of solving this problem should be found . In my opinion , increasi...
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This bar chart shows us amount of minutes of telephone calls in UK between 1995 and 2002 in three types of call : local , national and international and mobile . Firstly , we can see that number of calls of local type is the biggest for whole time . But from 1999 it started slightly decreasing . Secondly , the chart sh...
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As it is shown on a chart , number of calls by local fixed line has increased during the period from 1995 to 1999 , and then it decreased from 2000 to 2002 to the level of 1995 , less more than a 70 billions . But till 2002 this type was the main . The international calls have only increased during all the period of th...
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Some people believe that there should be equal numbers of male and female abiturients at educational institutions ( for the highes education ) in each subject . As for me , I can not totally agree with them , because the interests of both genders are really different . First of all , it is well - known fact that there ...
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Nowadaz , we live in a world of fair competition . A great number of people from all over the world dream of having a good , high education in order to get a well paid job . In this case , many people claim that there should be an equal number of students of each sex , both male and female , in Universities in every su...
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In this diogram we can see the per sent of people which are older than 65 from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries , which are Japan , USA and Sweden . Firstly , it is easy to manage the drammaticly rising of per cent of old people from 5 - 10 % in the 1940 and 23 - 27 % in 2040 yaar . And the most significant gr...
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Where is the graph consist of information about the percentage of population in the period from 1940 to 2040 in three differen countries : Japan ( thin line ) , Sweden ( broken line ) , and the USA . All that countries have a tendency to a grouth . The USA and Sweden have the same way to development in the whole period...
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Nowadays , the hide education become more and more popular among youth people of bouth sex . Some people think that universites should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject . But other think that making equality of boys and girls an faculty is wrong . In my opinion , all students should take ...
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Nowadays the problem of equality between men and women is quite important . Some people suggest that even in the universities the equality of male and female students does not exist and that the number of boy - students and girl - students should be equal in every subject . I am partly agree with this statement . Durin...
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The information given illustrates the percentage of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan , Sweden and USA . It can be deduced from the graph that the number of people aged 65 and over increases gradually from about 7 % in 1940 to 25 % in 2040 in Sweden . Similarly , the number of 65 - year - old a...
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A lot of people think that amount of male and female students in universities should be equal in all subjects . On the one hand , an equal number of male and female students can help teacher . There is a method which often practices in schools : boy seat with girls . This helps to lead pupils ' attention on studying an...
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject . Nowadays the situation in the universities shows that not every speciality can accept equal parts of male and female students . This topic is worth to discussion . On the hand , I partly agree with that because of its ambiguity . Te...
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At this diagramm we can see the proportion of the population aged 65 in the different countries ( namely in Japan , Sweden , USA ) from 1940 to 2040 . Speaking about Japan , we can notice that the quantity of people aged 65 has completely encreased ( from 5 % to 27 % respectfully ) , but in the period between the 1940 ...
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Nowadays it is often believed that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students for each subject . In my opinion , there are special subjects for men and women , so I am disagree with the statement . First of all , there are special universities based on country 's army , so there will be more m...
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These two graphs below indicate the demand for electricity of English society and show hoe they consume it . The line graph shows that during winter days the consumption of electricity double one in summer . However , for both seasons , the peak of electricity use is a period of time from 21 to 22 hours ( 47,000 and 19...
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