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These days there are many creative artists in different areas such literature , painting and drawing , music and cinema . They have a lot of interesting ideas to make true in life and some people consider that there should be no limits by government on what they create . I can not completely agree with this statement . On the one hand , if artists do new projects , we can get wonderfull pieces of art which will value around the world . For example , like it was in the past , many well - known artists such Leonardo Da Vinci has painted a lot of beautiful canvases and now we are very proud of him and his paintings . On the other hand , there are some artists which do not know any limits in their creativity . Every crazy idea in their head become popular among people and affect them a lot . For example , one conteporary artist made an exhibition starring a homeless dog , which he leaves to die there . So this kind of projects should be restricted by government or other specific organisations . To conclude , I must say that everything that artist do should have a measure and be controlled , because otherwise humanity will be influensed by crazy people and will not progress .
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The given graph presents the percentage of group of people aged 65 and over from 1940 and 2040 in three countries . Overall , the trend of this age group of population in each country upwords . The most outstanding feature of this graph that the percentage of older people in Japan constitute the lower proportion for a long period than in other two countries . As it can be seen from the graph from 1940 to the begining of 2000 the proportion of population aged 66 and over in Japan was about 3 - 5 % . Consequently the trend becomes upword and between 2030 and 2040 there is a sharp increase of this group of population in Japan by nearly 17 % . Regarding USA and Sweden trends in proportion of older people , it is seen that during the whole period they were nearly the same . In particular , the difference between they made up 2 - 3 % in 1940 and 2040 . Thus in 2040 Japan I 'd expected to have the highest proportion of their population ( about 27 % ) , the second position has Sweden ( 25 % ) and the last one in USA with nearly 23 % . To sum up , in all countries the percentage of older people is expected to rise . The most outstanding growth in presented by figures plated to Japan .
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The table provide the information about the underground railway system in six big cities such as : London , Paris , Tokyo , Washington DC , Koyoto , Los Angeles . Firstly , there are four coloms in the table including the name of city . Second gives information about the date , when the underground was opened . Next column shows the amount of kilometres of rate . And the last , but not the least colomn provides information about how many passengers use the railway station per year ( information gives in millions ) . It should be noticed that the most oldest underground is situated in London , it was opened in 1863 while underground in Los Angeles opened only in 2001 . For instance , underground in London also is longest than other in table . But unfortunately underground of London is not the most popular because the biggest amount of visitors ( 1927 ) has underground of Tokyo . Underground of Paris also has great number of visitors , but it is not had such long kilometres of route ( 199 ) . Overall , the dates in table show that it earlier opened an underground that more visitor it will have in future . Because it would be popular and interesting to visit such old and beautifull stations which were built in the past .
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Nowadays there are a lot of researches books and opinions about development of our behaviour and personality . Some people thing that the characteristics we are born with have the greatest influence . Other people thing that experiences we may have in our live have much more influence on us . I think the major influence on our personality is given us by characteristics we are born . To begin with , the little children , who was born one week ago or one month ago have different behaviours , they do n't have any experiences in this periods of their lifes . The second reason is characteristic we are born with we ca n't change and they stay with us during all our life due to experiences . On the other hand such aspect as experience ca n't be not important in our life . First of all , the people have the tand to copy the behaviour of other proportion and it form their character . Moreover , without experiences the person do the same mistakes in his life , that is very important in our lifes . Finally , I want to say that both of thes aspects : the characteristics we are born with and experiences we may have in our life have the important influence on our personality and form different parts of our behaviour .
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The table illustrates information about the metro in several cities : London , Paris , Tokyo , Washington DC , Koyoto , Los Angeles . Firstly , it 's clear that London metropolitan was opened much earlier than other , and nowadays it 's the biggest one ( 304 km of route ) . Secondly the table shows that Tokyo metro is much smaller and lower development than metro in London , but it takes 1927 millions passenger per year and this is because of in Tokyo population is much higher than in London . However in the same time Washington DC metro has particularly the same size with Tokyo metro , but there are not so much passengers , Tokyo metro is really over crowded . Koyoto metropolitan and Los Angeles do n't have a lot of passengers per year , and it depends on not so very high population too . There is nor main trend - then more " ancient " underground railway system - then more are delopted it is , and has a lot of kilometres of route , and amount of passenger actually depend on citie 's population .
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The statistic shows that characteristics we are born with are much more impact than any experiences we may have during our life . From the first day of our life we already have special characteristics , as what nationality is you , are you boy or girl , what colors is your hair and what colors is your eyes and etc . All of them you could n't change , maybe particularly but not at all . It 's pufy , but your future actually depends on it . For example , we have the period of history of USA and other European 's countries , when if you were born Afro - American nationality , you wo n't have future as whithe people . However , I have another example , it consider with disabeled people , when they are already born with it , and sometimes they are even ca n't walk , or they are blind , but other we can see them at paradim pic games and understand that there is nothing impossible . We can not at all say that characteristic we are born with have much more influence on your personality and development , but actually it 's really very important . Nowadays we can do every thing , and it does n't depends on your nationality , sex and even for disabled people there is no limits . To conclusion , I want to say that for are all characteristics is important for our development , but the main idea is development - you should to become as better as you want , and you have everything what you want .
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There is information about the underground railway systems in six cities in the table below . We can see that the London Underground was opened in 1863 and the system is the oldest one . By the way , it also has the longest route , which is 394 million kilometres . Talking about the amount of passengers per year I can say that it is not too big , in comparison with the amount in Tokyo . Talking about railway systems which were built in 1900 in Paris , I can say that the route length is a half from London 's metro . It is important to mention that underground in Tokyo has the biggest amount passengers per year , though it was built 64 years after the first underground given in the table . We can see that the shorted route is in Koyoto , the length is just 11 kilometres and the amount of passengers is also the smallest there - just 45 millions per year . I can also mention , that the underground system of Los Angeles , which is the youngest ( it was opened just in 2002 ) is quite longer than Koyoto 's system and has 28 kilometres of route , and the amount of passengers per year is 5 millions bigger .
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The qualities of character which we have from the beginning of our life are sometimes considered to be the most important ones . However , some people think that skills that we get through our existence have a stronger influence on our behaviour . Personally , I believe that out life is changing day by day under the influence of new experiences . For instance , we can not only learn something unknown but also understand what mistakes we made in our past life . Moreover , some special features of our character appear exactly when we gain new knowledge and have completely different experience . These characteristics can be connected to the previous ones which we show in the first years of life after our birth but their whole inner content will be another . On the other hand , some researchers provides us information that the personality of each man depends on those qualities of the character we are born with . Firstly , they are sure that process of personal development is controlled by those characteristics and they give us our special way of behaviour . As a consecuence , all of our new experiences are influenced by those striking features from the very beginning . Secondly , these people believe that fact that our mind consists not only from the physiology things from the moment of out birth but also some mental and cognitive activity . All things considered , we can deny that our personality depends on all types of characteristics : both we are born with and we get through having the new experience and gaining knowledge . In my opinion , there is no doubt that the second ones have a stronger influence on out daily life and self - development because every person is changeable and has a tendency to improve himself .
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Some people think that number of students of different sexes in universities should be equal in every subject . Other finds this idea stupid . I do not agree with the first one but looked for something interesting in their opinion . To begin with , I would like to provide the arguments in benefit of the first point of view . Firstly , if there is different numbers of male and female students then some of them , for example , those who are less in number , may feel uncomfortable . Secondly , girls which have not many friends - girs may feel shy and conversate and interact with the boys and controversary . And thirdly , I have a friend who has no girls in his university group . I really can not imagine how hard is it to study without the beautiful sex . Now , I would like to stay on the second point oh view . Firstly , consider , for example , following abstract situation . There are 100 boys and only 1 girl which want to enter some university on definite speciallity . What should the university do ? Accept only 1 girl and 1 boy ? That is silly . That means that in some cases there would be no demand from only girls or only boys on some subject . That is normal because naturally we are different . That is the second argument . And the third is that in some cases girls may affect on boys ' successes in study or again controversary . To sum up , I would like to underline that the education system should not differ boys and girls , so why should it keep their number equal ?
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Some people say that much more influence on our personality have the characteristics we are born with . Ather people think that your life experiences and opportunity for learning every day somethink new is more important think in our life . Both of this thinks or opinions have pluses and minuses . On the other hand , it 's really cool if you was borned with much good characteristics . For example , if you can say somethink and other people will hear you , help you and do what you say there . But you can stay lazy man . You will think so in the future , like " ... all will be in my hands ... " . Also the life is difficult think and you need to be ready for everythink . On the other hand , a person , who do n't has any significant characteristics , but every day he want to improve himselfes was a good future . In comparison of thirst opinion , the second was more power , because a person , who wo nt work with brains , who will have reasons for improving the life . In conclusion , I wud like to say that both thinks are important in our life . Every day you must learn and be better , than yesterday . Make yourselve every day .
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The charts illustrate the changes between the ages of the population in two countries : Italy and Yemen , in two period of time : 2000 and 2050 . We can see that children and teenagers ( people from 0 to 14 ) in both country lose their position in proportion of population . And elderly people have a bigger proportion in 2050 than in 2000 in Italy and Yemen . The differences between the Italy and Yemen is that in Yemen the number of people from 15 to 59 years old is rised and in Italy is declined . Also , the biggest percentages of population in 2050 in Yemen will be 15 - 59 years old people . In fact , in Italy we can see the similar situation in the future , but the proportion will be different . To sum up , the charts show that the ages of the populations can be different in past , present and future time . In both country we can see the changes between 2000 and 2050 in the number of the populations ( depends on ages ) .
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It is always said that increasing the number of sport facilities will have a good impact on public health . There are a lot of points of view on that problem . Some people claim that it is a good idea otherwise there are people who disagree with that statement . On the one hand , the idea of increasing the number of sports facilities requires big financial support from government . Also , there is little probability that citizens will strive to improve their health . It can be because of the lack of the free time , enough money to pay for fitness clubs or gyms , or , perhaps , because of lazyness . Consequently , it is not the best way to influence on public health in a good way . On the other hand , the care of humans ' health depends on humans themselves . If person wants stay healthy and be in a good shape , he should do his best to achieve great results . Another way to improve public health is inspire citizens to do sports . It can be inspiration by celebrities , famous politicians , economists and other different persons . Also good way for advertising sport is mass media . A lot of people watch TV , surf the Internet , listen to the radio and read magazines and newspapers , so it will be the best way to make them do sports . In conclusion I would like to say , that both methods to improve public health is effective . It is equally depends on government and person . Only by mixing there two methods people will improve public health and will be happier .
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The charts below represent the data about the ages of population of Italy and Yemen at the beginning of the 21st century in 2000 and in the middle of the same century in 2050 . As for Yemen we can see the growth of number of people of 15 - 59 years old from 46,3 % to 57,3 % , when in Italy , on the contrary this part of population is predicted to decrease from 61,6 % to 46,2 % . Apart from that , Yemen 's children from 0 to 15 years old are expected to increase in number on 2 % , though its part will remain very little , just 5,7 % . But kids of the same age in Italy are going to drop in number till 11 % and will take the smallest share among all the other age groups . The only part of all the people that will raise in number in Italy and go down in Yemen is share of people after 60 years old . In Yemen It will decrease till 37 % , in Italy it will reach practically half of population , over 42 % .
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Public health is a burning problem nowadays : government makes different policies but the level of public health is still low . There are different opinions and all of them should be take into account . The most common opinion is that the best way to improve public health is by increasing of sports facilities . It is obvious that sport helps us to become healthier . We have a lot of opportunities in our everyday life . The sphere of fitness is very popular nowadays but it is very expensive . Not all people can efford it . If government provides more cheap facilities , more people will use it and it will lead to improve in public health . I agree with this opinion , I tend to believe that it is the best way to solve this problem . Another people argue that this would have little effect on public health . They choose other ways to improve of them . One of these ways is reduce prodaction of unhealthy or junk food . All of us know this food influence on our health and destroy it . If people avoid to it unhealthy food and eat more fruits and vegetables , it will increase the level of public health . Another way to improve public health is to make some informative advertisements , useful films and books . Some people have no idea how to improve their health and these resources can help them to do it . In conclusion I should say that it is very difficult to choose the best way to improve public health . All these ways should be used together . The government should controll the level of public health and provide people more opportunities and facilities .
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The following diagrams show data on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy with following forecasts . It is clearly seen that proportions have changed in the comparison . As we can see the number of people 0 - 14 years old will decrease in two countries in approximately fifty years . There is an increase in number of elder people in Yemen which is insignificant while an Italian elder people have double increase . The main feature of the report is in change of proportion of middle - aged people in two countries . The proportion of people in Yemen in 2000 is similar with Italian population in 2050 and , on the contrary , proportion of Italians in the age of 14 - 59 in 2000 is similar with Yemen 's population in 2050 . The charts given shows the comparison of the populations of different ages in Italy and Yemen . Thus , we can see some main features and comparisons of the populations .
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Nowadays public health is a very important issue for most countries . The question is how to provide it and many people suppose the increasing the number of sport facilities to be the best solution . On the one hand , sport facilities will be helpful for people of all generations . It is possible to find special type of sport for every age and health group . It can be extra classes in schools or universities , free sport centres or special equipment in parks : sport facilities can be provided by many ways and for everybody . Moreover , sport is not only the way to protect the health but also the type of communication . Providing more places for sport facilities government finds not only the solution for improving public health , but also create new options for spending spare time . For example , there is such practice in China where old people communicate with each other doing sport exercises in parks . On the other hand , it is impossible to make everyone doing sport . Of course , increasing the number of sports facilities will provide more interest to sport among people , but this process can not be controlled . Other measures , such as free vactination can be more efficient , but require more government spendings . Moreover , sport exercises can be harmful for people , who do not know the techniques and his or her own restrictions . In this situation sport gives negative effect . To sum up , I hold the view that increasing the number of sport facilities can give lots of benefits to society and increase the level of health in the country . There are cheap ways of providing it that can make the whole humanity healthier .
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Scientists all over the world argue on this issue - what influences on us more : born characteristics or our developing life experience ? Let us find out , who is right . Firstly , I would like to talk about my own experience . Both of my parents are working in a university , they are professors , so it is obvious , that I should have good abilities in science , but at the same time , my friends and people around influence on me too . Does not matter is it advantage or disadvantage , but my classmates , my best friend and teachers make my character , even , when I am already an adult . Secondly , if research is true , should we isolate children of assasins or theaves , even because their parents were criminals ? Every person has chance to make choice , so for much children it is follow their parent 's example or not . Another point of view is that , our life achievements do not depend on our born characteristics to do , what he wants in this life . But on the other hand , people are born in different families , by different parents , which are weak and with bad prospects of future child 's life , but I am concerned , that such destiny when man should always fight for his happiness , can make outstanding persons , history knows many such cases . To sum up my essay , it should be sad , that without any doubt , people 's born characteristics influences on their future life , but experience in life makes our personality .
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That table bellow illustrates the information about underground railway systems in six different cities . First of all , the main thing which can be seen easily is that 4 from 6 undergrounds were built in 20 century : The London underground is the oldest one ( 1863 ) and Los Angeles underground system is the newest ( 2001 ) . Next criteria is kilometers of route . The biggest underground route is the oldest . It is about 394 km , in Kyoto the length of the route is nearly 11 km that is smaller than London 's more than in 33 . The greatest number of passangers per year belong to Tokyo ( 1927 millions ) . An the second place takes Paris with 1191 million pasangers per year . In contrast Kyoto and Los Angeles have at least 45/50 millions of people accordingly .
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The table shows us the information about six different underground systems in different continents . Firstly , I want to introduce London 's railway system , because it is the oldest one and the only opened in nineteenth century but still the longest comparing to five others . But speaking about passengers it is in the middle of the list . Secondly , it could be made a group from Paris , Tokyo 's and Washington 's D.C. undergrounds which all was opened in twentieth century and have length of railways more then 100 kilometers . But the last one is totally different comparing by amounts of passengers . Paris and Tokyo together take 3 billion in a year while Washington takes only 144 million . Thirdly , there is another group of Kyoto and Los Angeles , which underground railway systems are very young and which are quite small and not popular . To sum up , I can say that all around the world are still a lot of underground railway systems which can be different in purpose of the place where they are .
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Studies about people 's characteristics made a statement that ones we are borned with make great influence on our behavior and personality , and others do n't . I can not agree with this statement . Because everywhere I see examples of destroying this theory . For sure , noone have ever born with skill of speaking or reading , but it is obvious that people are not the same at this and it is only because they get different education in their family before they go to school . And , as for me , the most essential role in getting children education have parents who become ideals for their sons and daughters . And from how they would teach their children will depend their characteristics during the whole life , because it is the most crutial part of educational process . Moreover , people 's characteristics and skills are developed through the habit and personal surrondings which also take a part in making a person from a human . Infortunately , I can not deny a theory the main point of which is connected with persons DNA . It is clear that many great people have not less great children but it also not just because they are their children but because their parents and teachers always educate them in such a way . And there are a lot of examples when such children become not so smart and talanted as their parents , only in case of bad education and absence of needed experience . In conclusion , I could only add that everyone in the world has its own chance to get all of characteristics that he want and the age for this does n't matter anything . It is all only about personal mind , if you want , you can .
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Nowadays the problem of live experiences is one of the most controversial . What experience influence more on our person : with we are born or that we get during of all our life ? First of all , it should be mentioned that characteristics that we have from our born are researched not in all . But a lot of scientist say that we all born with a different abilities , that 's why we have n't equal opportunity to develop . For example there are a lot of researches indicate that people who was born in Asia or in Europe have more abilities than those , who was born in Africa ( it 's not some racist argument ) . Also , our " natural " experience such as DNA for example is an important part of our development . It 's a DNA , that influence on our body , our communicative skills , potential of development , and certain other skills . That 's why it can be sayed that DNA form our personality . But there is another point of view that also can exist , because life experience it 's an important part of our personality . Our society create us , and it 's true . Because our behavior depend of people , that cover us . To sum up , I can mention that both this points of way can exist and it 's very hard to find same diferent between " natural " ex perience and live experience . But , it 's obviously that characteristics we are born with influence more on our persone because they create the base of our personality and development .
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In the table we can see information about the underground railway systems in six cities . The longest underground is in London . It is 394 kilometres of route . Then goes Paris and Tokyo with 199 and 155 kilometres . The least underground is in Kyoto . It is only 11 kilometres . The London underground is early - opened . It opened in 1863 . Then opened Paris underground in 1900 , Tokyo in 1927 , Washington DC in 1976 , Kyoto in 1981 and Los Angeles in 2001 . As ve can see , Los Angeles underground is late - opened . The underground , which have the most number of passengers per year is in Tokyo with 1927 millions per year . Then goes Paris with 1191 passengers , London with 775 , Washington DC with 144 . The underground , which have the least number of passengers per year is in Kyoto and Los Angeles , with 45 and 50 millions per year . As we can see the underground the underground with the heaviest traffic is in Paris and Tokyo , because in this country 's underground is the most number of passengers per year .
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Our life is full of filosophy , so there are two points of wiev : firs is that on our personality is influence more from our genetic characteristics who are with us from our born , And the second is the experiences during all life creat our individuality . Firsly , our mind life begin from chilhood , so as say psichologists it is ve important period in our life where is created our personality and are formed our individual characteristics . It is mean , how we became in the age from 1 to 6 and how our parents educated us , so the same we would be thought all our life . If it is that in our genetic and in your childhood you was active , you will be active . Secondly , our personality is created from the different moments of our life . We become older and more wise , we teach on our faults and equire knowledge of something new . Our mind is change and our characteristics are not exept . We open new apportunities and change our bihaviour . And I am agree that our experiences influens of our life . Overall , I mean it is the important factor , which makes us more humanity and understandable . So in conclusion , I want to add , that all our experiences and all our characteristics we are born with or no creat our personality and indiduality .
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The question of male and female studing is very interesting now . On the one hand , all people can get the high education , on the other hand , there are a lot of men on the phisical disciplines and a lot of women on the humanitarium disciplins . Is it a reason to make the same nomber of men and women on the faculties in the universities ? If we look on the one side of this problem , we will say actually " Yes ! " . All people must have the same rules . But other 's belief is that not all girls can studie economic disciplins , math or phisics . One the one hand this is a problem , but is it really ? So , let 's have a look . For example , in the end of June in owe country all youngh people , who finised education at school , give there documents to the universities . Almost girls choose literature , social sciences and so on and boys choose phisical faculties . Is it a problem of the university , that there a lot of male students in this subject and a lot of female student in the another . I am not sure that this is a problem of the university . On my faculty on cultural studies in the Higher School of economics there are a very little number of male students . But if the facultie take the same number of students both genders there would be only 6 men on the first course last year . But if we believe scientists , all people are the same , and there are no problem of gender in our life , but in real life we see the other picture . As for me there are no problem that there are less boys on my facultie . If I want to communicate with men , I must do it after my studie and the gender problem must'n be interesting to me when I learn new words or read a text about philosophy of Kant . When you are in the university all students both genders must have the same gender . And it is n't a question of libertie of female rates , this is a problem of level of education .
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This graph provides us the information about the proportion of people who are over 65 in USA , Sweden and Japan . The information is given in percents . Let 's have a look on the situation in Sweden . In 1940 it was only approximately 7,5 % . However , in next years it becomes to raise and it is predictable that in 2040 their population will be 25 % . In USA situation is quite the same . In 1940 the amount of people older than 65 was about 8 - 8 % , but then it begins to increase and in 1980 it gets the 15 % and in 2040 it may be approximately 24 % . The situation with Japan is different . From 5 % in 1940 the percentage of serious began to fall and only in the period between 2000 and 2020 it has returned to this previous point . Moreover we can see that in period between 2020 and 2040 their number may rise drammatically . To sum it up , it is necessary to say that the percentage of people who aged 65 and over is growing from year to year . It may be caused by ecological factor and social politics .
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The line graph demonstrates how the population of 65 - year people changed over one century in Japan , Sweden and USA . While the proportions of elderly people from USA and Sweden was almost always increasing , the one of Japan had a long periods of a gentle fall from 1940 up to 4 percent and of stagnation from 1960 to nearly 1990 . During this time ( 1940 - 1990 ) USA and Sweden had similar changes in elderly population that means a gradual rise up to the point 15 percent . Beginning from 2000 the situation changes dramatically and while Sweden 's population aged 65 grew rapidly till 2010 , USA 's one remained stable . It is important to mention that in 2030 there is a significant surge of the proportion in Japan . It suddenly reaches the peak of 25 percent and continues to rise futher . To sum up , althoug the proportion of the population aged 65 stayed the lowest one , compared to other countries , in Japan for a long time , after 2030 it started to rise and finally became a leader with its percentage number of nearly 28 .
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There is an opinion , that every subject in the university should be studied by an equal amount of males and females . However , I ca n't fully agree with this suggestion . Originating from feminist studies and the equality of human rights , the idea of splitting university courses in equal male and female parts seems absurd to me . The same rules and demands , imposed on university applications , regardless of the candidate gender , already become a garantee towards fair university choices . More than that , any university is highly interested in the most talented students , despite the student 's gender . In case university admits the " half and half " proportion for the subjects , it may restrict some gifted applicants from either side . Next , there are subjects that considered to be traditionally feminine or masculine . For example , there is a clear feminine dominance in the sphere of children 's education : kindergardens and schools , whereas in the labour domains where physical force is required , the preference is given to men . Males and females are different physically and phycologically , thus they suit better for different occupations . Needless to say that males and females have different social roles as well . The university subjects requires corresponding climate and artificial division in halves wo n't serve to the best of the atmosphere . It 's much more interesting to study with people who are encouraged and curious about the subject than with ones that were taken the form the equal proportion . To sum up , I would like to say that history knows many examples of outstanding scientists of both genders . For the university , the prime concern should be on student 's motivation and eagerness to develop , the gender does n't matter . However , the equal conditions of entry and fair competition of candidates is of high importance . The university courses should form naturally , not artificially in order to provide best productivity .
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In a modern fast - moving world in most of developing countries there is no any gender discrimination , therefore men and women have equal rights . Connecting to this some people have strong belief that while entering a university girls and boys must be provided by equal numbers of places in every subject . Others defend the different point of view . In this essay both supporting and attacking points will be considered . Speaking about reasons why the number of places in university should be equal for each gender , I would like to mention that the balance of males and females in any working groups is significant . It has an impact on healthy attitude , good mood and pleasent relationships between the members of a group . There are some schools only for girls and only for boys now . Usually when pupils of such schools grow up they find hard to communicate with another gender because the have not got enough social skills in their past . Nevertheless , universities should not establish the similar education system . On the other hand , there are argument , supporting the opposal view . Some professions require more physical pressure than other . That is why sometimes natural abilities may dictate our choice in some cases . For example , men are more likely to be an astronaut than women . The same in many other specialities , where the great stamina and strenth are demanded and absolutely obligatory . It is not enough to learn some skills you should have them naturally . Therefore , women are more seldom phenomena in such professions . It is not rational to give them as many places in university as men have when it is spoken about physically difficult professions . To sum up , both views have rights to be discussed . Both of them can be logicaly argumented and supported . In my opinion , though , it is important to orient on speciality , which is chosen by student because question depends mostly on it .
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There are different views whether it should be a balance of male and female students in every subject or not . I completely disagree with the idea that universities should accept equal numbers of men and women . The main argument of opponents would be that balanced proportion of males and females in subject lets create balanced society with differentiation of labour . However , I believe that natural proportions could help to see tends in students ' choices . Moreover , they would be able to realize in a sphere they want . So students can spend their time doing things they are good at . Thus , we will get escelent specialists at different sites of our life .
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The graph below illustrates different percentage of people , that were 65 years old and older , in 3 countries - Japan , Sweden and USA . The results are provided in a proportion , that has been analysed since 1940 . Two curves of Sweden and USA figures look similar to each other . There are 7 % of elderly people in Sweden and 9 % in USA in 1940 . Both of these curves rise slowly until 1980 . Then there is a kind of plateau in USA , but the figure plummets in Sweden . There is another situation with Japan . The percentage of people aged 65 and older is just a bit lower at the beginning : it is 5 % of them in the country . And then the figure lows down until the end of 1980 - s , meanwhile it stays smaller , than in other countries . The graph tries to predict , what would be in the next future . It prognoses , that from these days to 2040 all figures dramatically rise , and Japan would have the biggest figure among these three countries .
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This graph illustrates the number of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in Japan , Sweden and USA . First of all , there are three main trends and figures connecting with all three countries changed . In 1940 , the percent of older population was nearly 10 % , in contrast in Japan it was only 5 % . Next , in 2000 , there was nearly 15 % of the population aged 65 and over in USA , while in Japan it was only nearly 5 % , but after this the graph rise dramatily , and experts say that in 2040 the population of older people in Japan would be nearly 27 % . On the other hand , experts predicted that in 2040 in USA would be only 22 % population aged 65 and over . Next , in Sweden in 1940 there are only 7 % of older people , but when the line rise and expert say that in 2040 there will be the 26 % of the population aged 65 and over . Talking at all , from 1940 to 2040 Japan and USA changed the positions . Clearly , that persentage of the population aged 65 and over rise in all of three countries .
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Some people are insured that both genders should equally get higher education . So they consider that it should be illustrated by the same number of men and women in every subject in universities . But as for me I can not be totally agree with this statement . On the one hand , in modern world there is not an argument that both male and female are equal in their rights and they have the same right on good education . So they should have equal chance to enter universities . And there should be no limitation for none of them in their choise of subject . I realise that all of what I have written higher is absolute true , at least for the modern European countries . But there is a simple and well - known fact that different genders have different minds , I mean ways of thinking . So it can not help to provide the equal numbers of male and female students in every subject . And there is another consequence that is strongly connected with the previous one , though it does not involve genders or include them as a particular case . Each person has its own taste and skills which have a great influence on his choice of future profession . And it would be at least awkward if most of people chose the same subject to learn , espessially if they were different gender . J would like to add that men and women have different social role in community , that has an impact on the subject they prefer to study . Of course , there is a process nowadays that changes these roles , but it is still going on and right now the situation when universities accept equal numbers of male and female in every subject is impossible . All in all , J disagree with the statement but think that this situation can become true in several years .
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Today there is a widespread opinion that the number of male and female students on an each faculty should be equal . However there are some argues about this fact . Personaly I can not agree with the statement . Firstly , I believe that the choise of the field of the study is closely connected with nature of the person , his habits , family and other factors which makes us take disissions , it is not only our sex . Secondly , it is known that girls and boys thinks different . So why should their choises be the same ? Of boys are interested in mathematics , they will choose it in their unithersities . The situation is the same with girls and humanitarian studies . In my view , universities really have a situation when more males than females want to learn some subjects . This is the reason why some faculties has not equal number of men and women . I think the try have equal - numbered maled and femaled courses is crashing down , because of this fact . Universities just can not provide this idea among students , where everybody wants to learn something interesting , not equal - numbered . Overwise there are some factors make people think that equal number of males and females is important . The key point is that in faculty , there are , for example , 10 girls and 10 boys , educational process goes better as a result of comparison of views . Scientists also think that this way of studying is good for student 's future , because they became more tolerant and peaceful to the other sex compared with social groups where are same sex people , which are more likely to be sexists . To sum up , I can say that having both the equal and non - equal number of males and females could bring some advantages and drawbags for communication . Although I bekieve universities should gain an interest to a subject as a key point of studying .
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This graph descibes the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in Japan , Sweden and the USA in the time period from 1940 to 2040 . The main tendency in all three countries is the increase of the percentage of old people in the end of time period being considered . Japan has the highest percentage of long - living people , the second place has Sweeden , and percentage in the USA in 2040 is a little bit lower , but still remains rather high - about 24 percents . This increase is not sustainable . In Sweeden there are three waves of rising the percentage of old people . The first one takes place from the 1960s to the 1980s , second growth is in the time period between the 1990s and the 2010s , then ten years until 2030 there is a slight decrease and finaly the percentage rocketing up to 25 . The growth in the USA Is ultimately milder : significant increase is between the 1960s and the 1980s and from the 1980s until the 2010s the percentage is unconsiderably fluctuating without any remarkable changes . Than it hits the highest point in 2040 . In Japan the situation is different . From the start the percentage of long living people is the lowest and even decreases in the 1940s until the 1960s . Until the 1980s it remains stable than until the 2030s there is a mild increase , after that the number rapidly grows and hits the highest point in 2040 - 27 percents . To sum up the main trend is the growth of number of old people in these three countries . Japan has more people over 65 in 2040 than others have , Sweeden has three waves of increase and the USA has the lowest percentage .
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The question of gender uneqality is widely discussed in modern society and fairly attracts a lot of attention . Obviously in the field of tolerance to gender differences are still an enourmous amount of things to do . Women in the whole world are still struggling with gender discriminance . They are paid less than males , they often can not get a good job according to their gender and these are only a small list of difficulties , that every single woman has to face with in the modern world . Of course this unequality leads to different proportion between males and females in the universities . So there is an opinion that the cure from this problem is to forbid acception of different number males and females . Still it may not be the best solution . Different faculties attracts males and females , for example men tend to choose some technical disciplines to study and women are more likely to choose something connected with cultural , society or humanity studies . But this tendency is not a rule . Sometimes people make another decissions but it is undoubtful that percentage of males and females in different faculties varies and the main cause is the will of students , not the stereotypes . The second reason for different number of females and males is the physiological conditions . Males are bigger and stronger than females and it is ridiculous to deny it . So some proffessions connected with rising big weights are unappropriate for women so that it is understandable that some practical faculties are refusing to teach women . But in any theoretic discipline such situation would be discriminative . According to all these aspects it should be noticed that despite the uneasy conditions , in which women are living today , sometimes the refuse to allow to work and study some activities for women is reasonable . It avoids unwanted harm for health and injuries . And still women and men tends to choose different fields of studies , so accepting the equal number of men and women in the universities is unnessecary .
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The graph below illustrates how many people 's procent of age 65 and over live and will be live between 1940 and 2040 in Japan , Sweden and USA . As we can say , in all countries the proportion of aged 65 and over will be on the high level by 2040 . In detail look , we can see , that in Japan between 1940 and 1960 the proportion of old people was decreased from 5 procent to 3 procent . However , in Sweden it rose to 8 procent from 4 procent . Meanwhile , in USA there was 9 procent of people aged 65 and over in 1940 , then in 1960 it increased by 10 procent . In Japan between 1960 and 1980 the proportion was at the same level . Unless , in Sweden and USA it rose to 14 and 15 percent . The graph below presents to us , that between 1983 and 2030 in Japan it rise from 3 procent to 10 procent , but in Sweden it is a little fall to 13 13 procent , but there was a high growth to 20 procent in 2010 . By 2020 it will drop down to 18 . In the USA , in 2020 the proportion will be steady . In 2040 the procent of old people will be on the high level : in Japan - 26 procent , in USA - 23 , in Sweden 25 . In conclusion , we can see that the old population is rise up nowdays .
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In our modern world everyone should find their own profecional way . We should also realize that this way is started when we chose our educational program . In universities few kinds of programs can be more popular among the male group and other kinds among the female group . That is normal situation , but newertheless we can find other points of view , for example , a lot of people can say that universities should accept similar numbers of boys and girls for every faculty , and this opinion also very important . What should do universities in this situation ? Is it really important for our education sistem to accept equal munders of male and femal students ? I think it is really nesessury to discuss about it . On the one hand , it is good idea because in this ay we will have a lot of specialists in every sphere of scince among the man and among the wemin , and it can be good balance between them . But on the other hand , everyone should have their own decidion , and , of course a lot of sudjects can be more interesting and useful for mail group , and in the same time it can be very hard for femail groupto chose it for future careir . Natures of man and women have a lot of perconal features which have big influence on their life . I agree with this opinion , because , I think that this situation can create gender differences and it will have bad results in general social situation . Some sudjects will be very popular among the female group , but number of educational places will be less , because other part of places can be saved for male group . Generally , I think this is bad way , which ca n't solve educational problem , and which ca n't change situation in better place .
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Nowadays the nesessary part of our life is our health . All people want to be healthy , because without health people become unhappy . Health always should important role in our life . In order to be health people do many things , some people take drugs for health , some people go in different place which usefull for health and some regularly doing sports . There are point of vies that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities . Every people who doing sports have a strong character , he is healthier and have respect from other people . Also , I want to say that in our days doing sports is fashionable . There are statistics which shows that more and more people become visit sport clubs and different events which associated with sport . And the best way would be to expand the number of sports facilities . Other people think and say that this would have little effect on public health because among all population there are many old people , which do n't do sports because their health do n't ready to it . By the way old people take place big share of population and their health independ on sports . Also there are ilness , which impossible to avoid by increasing the number of sports facilities . To sum up , I want to say that health of every people depend on yourself . I think that the best way to improve people 's health is a constant sport training and desire to live . Every decide what , how and why he should do it . The great words : " Life is movement " .
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Nowadays many people think about their health . There are a lot of ways to prove it . Some people hope the best way to do this is to rise the quantity of sports facilities . But other think that this way is not effective and there are some measures that can help more quickly and effectively . Those people , who consider that we can improve our health to increase the number of such facilities , as gums , stadions , swimming pools and so on , say that if there were right amount of such facilities , people would go to them more frequent than now . Moreover , large quantity of gyms and pools will be cause of price decreasing and people also will go to them , because it will be cheap for them . Furthemore , it becomes the mainstream in society and all members of such society will have desire to achieve some results that are took by their friends or someone else . Nevertheless , there is point of view that against increasing of sports facilities , because they think it is spending of money and time in vain . What is more , such people consider the main problem of public health is bad food , that are the main cause of all illnesses . Other measures are to increase the number of good food adds that will provide all vitamins and minerals to each person , because 80 % of illnesses from the deticit of such ingridients and from bad nutrition . To my mind , there is both pros and corns in this issue , but I think it is better to improve our food preferences by increasing the number of shops with healthy food or provide some TV - programmes that explain how to choose good food for your health or how to keep the right plan of a day to improve your health .
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The level of polutionand style of lifein the modern world make our health worse and worse . Thus we should find a ways to improve it . Some people believe , that increasing the number of sports faculties can solve this problem . In contrast , other say that it is not enough and we need other measures . At first , many sports facilities may rise the people interest in sport , and so , many people became sportsmens and begin eat a health food , change style of life on more healthy . May be , this people will attract their friends . Besides , if people will be only moving more , it bring a good effect on their body and health . In contrast , many people say , that increasing the number of sports facilities does not bring the big effect . To be healthy , you need not only go to gum , you should change your mind , because if after the gum you will eat a fustfood , the effect will be very little . Also , you should make a plan of your day . It mean , that you should arise and to go to the bed in the similar time every day . And there is many other things , that help you to be healthier . All in all , the increasing numbr of sports facilities does not solve the problem of public health low level , because the increasing number of hours , when you do sport is not only required to be healthier . You should change your mind and style of life , you should make a plan of the day , to eat a healthy food and many other . So the increasing number of sports facilities is only a piece of solwing a problem of improving public health .
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities . On the other words , by improving the health of society . Others , however , say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required . I think that increasing the number of sports facilities would have really little effect because person should want to go to sport . On the other words , he should have needs at sports , for example , to improve own health , to improve body , to take part in sports activities to win . Nobody ca n't make people to take part in sports activities . Of course , other measures are required . It can be control for children , who adults can give examples of wrong behaviour to . Also we can ban advertising alchohol products and tobacco , and advertise sports games , sports healthy life . In my opinion , increasing the number of sports facilities for that children and teenagers have all opportunities for healthy life . Generally speaking , the best way to improve public health is n't only by increasing the number of sports facilities . Society should provide many facilities for itself , for other people , for children . For this reason , a lot different measures are required .
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People have different views about health and whether if we recovery the number of sport schools , gums , fitness clubs and other sports organization , would help in our heath ? In my opinion that there are many organizations in the country , but public health have not peak level and its increasing not improve . There are two main reasons why it could be argued that public health can not improve by rising the number of sports facilities . Firstly , person should understaend problems of itself health . But if he or she is health , increasing the number facilities can not help . Second , many schools and university rising the number lesson of phisics education for children . But it was not effectly . However , Russian in 2014 organisating winter Olimpic and Para Olimpic Games and as statistic datas shows , quantaty people , who want be health increase . And Russian Federation solve building sport objects in the others cities of country . In conclusion , while there are some reasons to believe that increasing the number sports complecs and other facilities help people make health best , but my own view is that it nit help more quantati people .
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Nowadays public health has become worse than whatever before . Governments of many countries look for ways for improving it . Some people assume that it can be done by increasing the quantity of sports buildings , but other people are sure that it is not enough and we need to try finding other ways for becoming healthier . The main argument in favour is that if we will increase the number of sport buildings we will be able to provide our children with more opportunities to do sport . Sport always does children healthier than their classmates and friends who do not take sport . Moreover , people in ages of 25 - 60 years also can take part , not in professional , but in sport , which brings healthy state of a body . Apart from that , professional sport can bring injuries to those who train a lot at the same time with becoming healthier . For this reason we should understand which kind of sport and which quantity of sport makes people healthier . Moreover , people who never do sport in their lives will not become much healthier than before if they start in age of 40 - 50 . Instead of health improving governments will get becoming it more worse . I believe that it is impossible to improve public health only by increasing sport facilities , because there are a lot of things , which people health depends on : environmental conditions , the weather and so on . In this case governments should , for example , improve air atmosphere for achieving the aim . In conclusion , I would like to stress that people health needs improving nowadays , but to develop only one side is not enough . We should consider all aspects , which can be useful , to succeed in achieving the population health becomes better .
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Nowadays , many people consider that sport makes us healthy and that by developing sports conditions we can build a helthy and strong nation . However , others are sure that the strategy of developing sport is not so effiecently as we imagine . It is generally accepted that if you go in for sport then you are going to be healthy . There are a lot of stereotypes of sports people . Some find it good at carier . Man who goes in for some activity means succesful man . But it is individually , not for ever gone . If the goverment decided to increase the number of sports facilities it does not mean that all people decided to go in for sport : some of them , moreover , are not able to do it . For instance , it does n't have effects on desabled people . New sports facilities and opportunities bring nothing for them . At the opposite side , people think the goverment should improve public health in another way . If the goverment would decide to increase sports facilities the encouraging in sport may not t work . Some people are lazy , others have no time for exesizes . All in all , I would like to share my point of view . I suggest it needs to create some motivating projects and programms . In this case , we should explain people why it is important to do sports . We should give many reasons so people would like to do it . Also it needs to develop some goverments ' programms for disabled people . We have to give charees for all . By the way , we may achieve public health in alternative ways . It is like ban fast food .
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Many people believe that increasing of the number of sports facilities improve public health . However , there are many other people who say that it can not help to improve public health . Who is right ? Let 's consider this question for all sides . Suppose that the number of sports facilities was increased . But how will we know that people are interesting it ? It is can do if make survey people and know thir interests . Example : ask children that is their like sport play . And after analysis answers will build sport area for this play . also we can ask other people and increase quantity of sport areas . I think tat it should improve public health . On other hand many people do not want to engage sport , and like just sit at home . To solve this problem we should make motivation for those people . We should advate sport and sport activity or equpment . Example : boots and clothes for morning running . If people will see on display their TV such , ads they will think that healthy life and engage sports is better than sit at home . In conclusion I want t say that men self create own life and if he want to be health , will engage sport .
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Two of four diagrams show humanity percentages of different ages in Yemen and Italy in 2000 . Another two charts illustrate some forecasts for 2050 . We can see that population if these two countries is divided into three groups . I will call people who are 0 - 14 years - young people , who are 15 - 59 years - middle - aged people and who are 60 + years - retired people . Firstly , we can see than in Yemen the number of middle - aged people will rise on 11 % in 2050 , while in Italy number of middle - aged people will drop from 61,6 % to 46,2 % . Number of young people in Yemen is larger than in Italy on about 35,8 % , but number of retired people in Yemen is little , only 3,6 % , while in Italy is 14,3 % in 2000 . In both countries number of young people will go down by 2050 , but in Yemen decreas in young population is bigger than in Italy . Also we can notice that in both countries there is tendency of increasing retired people , but in Italy it will increase more than in Yemen in 2050 .
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In society there are many different points of view about how improve people 's health . Some individuals believe that the most effective way is to develop sport facilities in the country , but others think that it would have no effect and government should find another ways . Let 's consider these two opinions . Firstly , everyone should do sports in order to support his health . So in the country should be huge variaty of sports that people can do . Of course all kinds of sports should have availiable price for people with different incoms . Because if a person can not afford to do sport he will not take a loan only for it . It would be too expensive . Moreover government should help people in this way . It should organize different social payments for people who want to become a professional sportsman or simple do sports , because it is necessary for his health . Most people have health problems because they spend little time for doing sport or not do it at all , therefore some heart and legs deseases appear . But from the other hand if we do sport it does not mean that we will never have any illneses . Sport only helps to keep our body fit , but it will not help us if we smoke , drink alchohol and have another harmful habits . If we desire to be healthy we should do all for it and one of the main factors is our way of life . We should not have harmful habits firstly . We should eat healthy food , be in a good mood and so on . Despite the fact that sport has good influense on our health and helps us to avoid obesity , for instance , it will not treat stomach - ache , head - ache and we have to drink some medical drugs . Medicine also helps to improve our health , because there are a lot of vitamins which we may accept in order not to ill . To my mind , exepting air , food and cloths , humanity can not live without sport and medicine . Because nowadays there is a tendency to be healthy and fit . So everyone try to follow diets and do sports . Our health will be improved only by combining sport with medicine and with healthy way of life . I believe that in order to be healthy we should take care about ourselves , take into account our thoughts and behavior , do sports , drink vitamins . If a person do all these , he will be healthy .
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Through the last 50 years humanity grow up to 7 billion people . To continue this process people should keep their self in fit . That means that topic about public health is quite common . Some people thing that sport infrastructure can improve people 's health . Other told about other measures and think that sport have little effect on public healt . Sport is the most common way to keep fit and stay healthy but sport is not so efficient as pharmacy , for instance . Hospitals and qualified doctors improve public healt much more that sport . Inventing peniciline and chemistry reseach gain more results than sport . To my mind , Pharmacy and free medicine can improve public health in better way than sports . On the other hand , sport have come advantage . For example , sport look more natural than pharmacy . It also cheaper for nation and government than free medicine . And the most significand advantage of doing sport is that you prevent yourself from different illneses . At the same time , the main drowback of using pharmacy to improve your health is that you may damage one part of your common health when you heal anether part . In conclusion I want say that if people want to gain maximum level of public health they ca n't choose only sport on only medicine . The best way for humanity is to use theese things one with another . I mean that you should do some sport and time to time visit hospital on your own doctor if you want to become really healthy person .
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In modern world new technological developments and the science progress can lead to environmental problems , because people should care about their health . I believe that many measures can improve public health . Some people consider that only the growth of number of sports facilities can give a positive effect in the problem of health . Human beings . Should go to various sport clubs and fitness gyms , because it does n't afford them to suffer from the obesity and other diseases . Also the body will be fit and strong , therefore the population will feel itself better . In Germany , for example , people say the mention ' sport treiben - Gesund bleiben ' . It means that a man , who does the sport , will always have a excellent health . Moreover , other part of people think that only sport but also the food , thoughts of people and their job can influence the health . The fast - moving world pressure on people , therefore they have no time to eat healthy food , vegetables and fruit . So they start to eat fast food , junk food , ( for instance , french fries , coca - cola and other soft drinks , burgers etc . ) . It leads to different diseases and damages the health . Moreover , people can not relax , because their jobs bring them nervous things . And human beings are too busy to spent time even with their family . And , of course , they can not spent time to go to the gym . Furthermore , negative thoughts and emotions give the worst results . If people think in a positive way , they will have a good health . And scientists argue that it is right . I consider that all facts can influence a public health , therefore people should care about all aspects of their life . In conclusion , each person should take into account the fact that his life depends on his health . Consequently , in my opinion , many measures can help to live without diseases and problems with health .
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It is certainly true , that growth of quantity of sports facilities can improve public heath , but it is not the best way to do it . Sport centers and sport shops can reduce prices for sport equipment or for club cards to do different sports . There is no evidence that someone is not interested in some sports , but it can be difficult to buy equipment . For instance , hockey defence for goalkeeper has the enourmous price . Secondly , government can provide different policies which will make investors more interested in building sport areas or sport center for everyone . Also government can make it free or with some preveuligues for special groups of people . On the other hand , increasing the number of sport facilities will not help to improve people 's health in significant way . Also it depends on people . People who interested in sports but do not want to do it will not feel the increasing number of sport facilities . There are other better ways to improve public health . For instance , governments can also provide policies which will have different restrictions for alcohol or smoking . As we know , modern world has such examples and you can find it in history . Public health depends on mentality and worldsight of people . Also sport fashion has the influense . For example , during the Olympic games , young people become more interested in hockey and they wanted to play . In conclusion , i want to say that health improvement depends on differents things and everybody and every country should choose the right and optimal way to do it with help of facilities or something else .
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Sport has always been an essential part of our lives throughout the history . It is not surprising that , many and many people have started to go to different sport clubs in order to keep fit . In view of this , there are many disputes concerning the improving of public health . Many people claim that it is nessecary to increase the number of sports facilities and different sport clubs . However , their opponents believe that it would not have big effect on public health . What is more , they support the idea that other measures are need . Who is right ? The way I see it , I do not agree with opponents ' point of view . To begin with , nowadays , it is not a secret that there are lots of sports facilities and variety of gyms . Every one who want to keep fit can choose any varient of sport clubs and go to there . However , a large amount of sports facilities does not matter that it would influance largely on public health . For instance , if people want to look well and keep fit , they should not limit themselves by only going for the gym . Moreover , you can go to there every day , but it would not lead to satisfies results , whereas people who mix the sport and resort may have the best ones . On the other hand , sport is a way to express your feels and look very well . Firstly , sport is indeed popular in many countries , especially in USA , consequently , there is a demand on it . Thus , the increasing of number of sports facilities will improve public health . Secondly , every one wants go to the gym , which is near by his house ; so , increasing the number of sport clubs would be a good way . Thirdly , people want to corect not only their stomack , but also lags , hands , etc ; thus , it would be great to have a big number of sports facilies , too . To sum up , there are different opinions about improving public health . The way I see it , we can do it if we will have a large .
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Nowadays the Olimpic games stay very popular . And other sports events became more and more interesting for people . In that way , the problem of sports and health population stays one of the contral for evry develop country . There are two main point of view to diside this case . Some people think that if goverment increase the nomber of sport facilities the shere of sports an health people will be increase . Because if there is no oportynety to do sport , people would n't be do it . It connect with other problem of people today . They allways should think about many other problem : how to earn money , where the education is better , and other . If they do not see how often people thaining , now it is interesting and exiting , they will imideatly stop to think that the sports training importan for them . Onother exampel is expensive training . Nowdays the are many lucshury fitness centers , but it is very expensive to trainning in it , and people do not have enought oportunity to visit them . However there is anothe point of veiw on this problem . Other people belive that it is not depent how manysports oportunetly they have , if people do not want to make some excercise , they would not do it even training will be free and avalible . To be a sportmen or not complenty depend on mind of people . And first of all we should try to change mind . That people want to be a sportmen , after this they find oportunity by their self . And we should think obaut anothe oportunity to increse health of population ; for exampel increse the nomber of hospital in the towns . But I think it is important to keep balance between this to side . Becouse one side can not to be with another . If people do not want to do sport , they would n't , if people do not have oportunity to dy sport , they would n't . Ofcours sports one of the best way to improve health of population , and it people will have enought oportunity and want to do sport , the health of population will dromatically increase .
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Publis health is very important acpect of life of country . There are very much disscus of its topic . An the on hand , government can to increase the number of sports facilities . People will have more possibilites to sports . It is impotante , if man can to choose sports , which he wish . An the other hand , sport culture needed to promotion . A level of sport culture is an indicate of level of public health . The ad of sport may included in cinema , books or even music . Parents is happy , if their kids are sportife , and children are good health . Children should to listen that sport is very good . Social ad is effective way to rise the level of public health . Ads of cooking is dangerous for children , because they will more internet if it . Alcogol and drogs often used by geroes of films , and children or even man wish to buy them , becouse they say so : " I am cool " . It is very dangerous . But nowaday this ploblem is n't . People know , that it can mort them . So there are many ways to increasing the number of sports facilities , government should use them . But people should to know , that their health is their probleme , their life depended , what they use their time .
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It is argued that sport is a major way to improve social health . To my mind , even if sport actually makes us healthier we can not leave population with that single measure . To support the idea of wider range of improvements , we need to take into account the general socio - economic situation in the world . Firstly , we can not but agree that relevant environmental situation influences us a lot leaving less air to breathe and dirtier water to drink . To this extent not only people but also governments need to manage the situation and put industries under a strict control . Moreover , we can not skip the fact that smoking became a number - one problem for citizens . The issue is that more people take up smoking while few people cope with giving it up . That is why those who are not addicted to cigarettes are endangered to get harm from second - hand smoking . So , my opinion is that governments also need to do everything to reduce smoking population to increase health . The third argument can be supported by an example . It is noticeable that those countries which have the least medical equipment have a tendency to raise a healthier and long - living population . And this can be the next option on the way to healthier lives . On the other hand , it is undeniable that sport covers a lot of issues of healthier and happier lives . A big range of sporting facilities gives society an opportunity to adjust different live . It s also scientifically supported that any kind of activities make a person more patient and organised as he mixes brain and physical work . All in all , it is not the only way to improve health by raising the quantity of sports facilities . The best way to achieve this goal is to combine this way with other aspects of governmental and individual care .
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Nowadays , modern conditions of working , studying male people have not active way of life . In addition cities are totally poluted by transportation emission , lack of nature objects etc . besides we have unhealthy food , lack of sleep and so on . It 's possible to say that public health is suffering . Some people say , that solution to the problem is increasing the number of sport facilities . However , others suppose it has little effect , and other measures are required . On the one hand , sport facilities really provide health improving of people . Setting a football stadium , as an example , likely attracts children to play football . And it is the same for any sport game . People think that provididing such facilities attract people into sport . Moreover free gyms have the same effect . It 's possible to establish then in schools , universities , companies , he case most people do n't want spend money for professional jyms and other sport clubs , but this way let them do it easily wife friens . On the other hand , their opponents suppote , that such measures increase only physical activity , but not health in the whole , they believe that there are great amount of other reasons , with which we should do something , lack of fresh air in cities , clean water , lack of healthy sleep , harmful food , stress coused by job of trafic jams and other , all these factors influence people 's health . Moreover opponents say , that sport facilities as just objects can not help people , because they do n't know rules of game , special skills etc . Setting facilities requires appointing special people , who can explain and train people , but due to free feature . Such people have to be paid by government , that will be too expensive . As for me , I agree that facilities for sport games are necessary . I play football , voleyball well due to the fact that not far from my home there are such facilities . I have been playing these since my childhood . So , I can guarantee the effectiveness of this way . Nevertheless , I understand that our health suffers from more than 10 factors , and only one of them is low activity . To sum up , it 's possible to say , that increasing the number of sport facilities really can improve people 's health , however this measure is not enough . If we want improving , we should solve all problems as a system .
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No doubt , with development science and technology our word have fast rhythm of life . So people forget about care about their health . They go to the work and do n't eat in right way , as a consequences they have some problems with health . Some people believe that if we increase the number of sport facilities , we will improve public health . I rather agree than disagree with this point of view . Because , sport helps to keep fit and also develop fusical abilities . For example , while you running we breath oxigen that helps your body do n't have serious problem with heart . Besides , nowadays it is common to use bycicles . It is a kind of sport , which helps your feet . It is also traffic solution . Because people use car less and we breath a fresh air . Furthermore , almost in every hostel there is sport club , where you can meet with new people . As a result you will have a good mood and do not have serious problems with your mind . As I concerned , sport improve our health , however , we do n't have to remember about some negative effects . Firstly there are people who nave serious problem with health , e.g. vision lossing or breaking feet . These people can not doing some kind of sports . So , they have to eat some fruits and some medicaments to improve their health , I suppose that fresh food is also an exellent method to get a good health . Secondly , some people work too hard in sport clubs . As a result they can have a serious problems with body . So , I think I prove that sport have not little effect on public health , there are negative or only positive effect . In conclussion I 'd like to say that , sure sport is important part in our life , but it is decide to everyone use or not sport in real life . But we should not forget about other method , which can care about our health .
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Nowadays , when we live in the modern world , when people have a quick temp of life , they work for major part of their life and man and woman do not have enough time for rest and also for eating healthy home foods . As a result , we have problems with our healthy . Some people think that the best way for improving health of society is by increasing the number of sport facilities that will give opportunities to us to improve health . But another part of the society say that it is an idea will not effectively and that there are other measure that required . As for me , I think that increasing sport facilities is not a good idea because if people do not have enough time for it he will not do sport and when government will build more gyms . What is more , some part of population do not do sport for their condion of health . Moreover , it is not enough effective for society since people are not motivate in improving their health . What is more , if people do not understand that if need for their health , that it is usefull and it helps to live for long time they do not want to do sports . But other people believe that it 's way of improving health effective for society for people can do sport if they have more sport facilities . Besides , when people see that someone start to do sport , they become to repeate and get incentives for this . In conclusion , I should say , that if people do not want to do something in our case , do sport , different facilities do not help to improve public health . Moreover should create some programme that will motivate society .
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Nowadays , public health is very important problem . Government should do enough to improve it . Some people consider that the best way to improve public health is increasing the number of sport facilities . Other people think that this is not effective and other measures are required . Sport facilities is good way to solve a problem . Many people ca n't afford go to gyms and free sport facilities will be appropriate . In our town , there are free sport facilities on streets and yards . Everyone can go and use it . Every person knows that sport is a life . And increase sport facilities right . Gyms can make a special offers in order to attract new clients . Other point of view is other measures are required . Government should prohibit unhealthy activities in public places . It should take a law , which banned to smoke and drink alcohol on streets , in parks , in stadiums . Government should provide social programs which can support public health . For example , give free medicine or doctors at work places and schools . Doctor can give public lectures about health . To my mind , government should take other measures to improve public health , because sport facilities not always effective . People can have lack of time to do sports . And public health will be improved when people give up bad habits .
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Nowadays , more and more people unhealthy and who have different problem with health . I agree with this statement . I think that created new the number of sports facilities . Is good idea . But also I agree with people who say that it is little effect to do people health . In modern life people do n't can without different technology such as computer , mobile phone , car and other . People very busy in 21 centery and do n't have a time on sports exercises . Instead they begining smoke , drink alchohol . Modern population needed in advertising good health . People have to understand that thae needed in sports . Public health very important for society . Different competitions helps people to achieve success in different sphere . Also people can communicated with other people and knows new information . Increase the number of sports facilities . On my opinion have to help people think that they improve public health . Also in modern society have people who cared about health . They visited fitness clubs to do different sports exersice . Also they eat good and healthy product such as vegetables , meat which cooked on water , ( hot air ) and drink juice , also they drink different vitamins . In conclusion I want to say that public health is very important for people . Because it is very , very important for two next population , how much people live in world in the features and how they will develop in the features . Created new sports facilities is good idea because people look that they can visited different sports and to go in sports .
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In charts we can see the populations ' ages of two countries Italy and Yemen in year of 2000 and 2050 . The charts of 2000 show that Yemen has over 50 % of young people under 14 years old and over 46 % of people beetween 15 and 59 years . There is opposit sutuation in Italy , where percentage of people at age 15 - 59 more than 60 % . Number of old men is a quoter of all populations in Italy . The projections for 2050 illustrate a huge differents from 2000 year . Amount of young people in Yemen fall to 37 % , but amount of working and old men will be increase to 57 % and 6 % . In Italy number of children has n't a big different from 2000 , because it decrease only for 3 % . However quantity of old and working groups become equal ( 42 % and 46 % ) . To compare these two countries , we can find that population in Yemen is yonger than in Italy . Yemen have over 5 % of old people , the opposide Italy have 42 per cents . In differ way , percentage of children in Yemen is 37 , and in Italy only 11,5 .
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Public health is integral social issue , which relates to each of us . Personal helth is the most important thing that human has in modern society , because there are a lot of factors which influence on this ( polution , enviromental problems ) . According to the main idea , people argue that the best way to improve public health is increasing the number of sports facilities , but on the other side there are a lot of different measures are required . In my opinion , sport is life and we should relate to this more attentively then now . Our society needs to growth the amount of sports opportunities and each of us has to be interested in it . First of all , we should increase time for sport at schools to improve children 's health . Children 's phisically preparation is important because muscular system formes in childhood . Secondly , sports help us to be more strong in our everyday life . It means that every person can go to aditional phisical classes after work or learning in order to help his immunite . Last but not least , phisical culture is a sience about your body . Some kinds of sports help to your heath , when you get enjoiment from your activity . You can be in fit and avoid problem with heart ills or obesety ills . To sum it up , I belive that every person should spent time for doing sports , and on his body and increase his personal range of sports facilities . If each of us will do it than it will be the best way to improve public health .
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Nowadays the art is very popular . Many young and old persons create beutiful things every day . And it is remarkable . But sometimes those people forget about the rules . Creative artists make new ideas and they want to have the freedom . They want to go where they want . They have the law to think in own way . Of course they could draw what they want and create the music . However , sometimes they forget about people around them and about moral principals . Creative people should not evade responsibility . Laws has to extend on all people . I disagree , that if the creative person commits a crime , he can avoid punishment . In my opinion artists are ordinary people , like all women and men around us . In conclusion , I think that creative artists should do everything if they do not break the government 's restrictions and laws . They must create our life and make better . Their creativity has to bear mood and emotions . They are often strange people , but they have to be able to control their actions when they live in society .
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Traditionally , artists and other professions that are related to the arts often connected with freedom of the words , thoughts and , of cause , withe the independance from politicians . However , it is usually clear from the history that many bounders were built by the governments ot the church for them , because there always was an important questiont : Might the artist be or act as a precursor for the differend problems in countries , such us crimes or violence ? Modern artists are usually very agressive with their perfomances or works . For example , the can hurt themselves in front of group of people , just like it was in Moskow on the Red Square , when the famoust artist rounded himself with a sharp metal needles . In that case , the performance was awfull and disgusting especially when the children could see it . I suppose that the government should accept some lows that can put the frames for this tipes of expressing artist 's thoughts , becouse it is can lead to unexpected surprises in childrens behaviour . By contrast , sometimes the writers and designers could create amazing and wonderful projects if they were not be restricted by politicians . For instance , in my home town , some unknowns artists painted walls of the nursury with some bright colors and different animals . When children , who went to this building , were really happy an it was like a some kind of dream for them . Thus , the volunteer work of artists created the good thing for others , althoug the head of the town did not want to spend money on this and even said that is not necessary . In this way , analising both prons and cons . I should say that sometimes contemporary art is not understanded and it undergoes some wrong treatments , but it could bring more benefit and advantages to the world than drawbacks . Thus , I believe that governments do not need to watch for every move of artists , but should prepare some relevant and appropriate rules and lows that just could help to not create some crayy and violent performances . And I am sure that in years this problem with balance between total control of arts and complete artist 's independance will be solved .
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The chart below shows the difference between levels of post - school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who was them in 1999 . In the graph of school qualifications in Australia accorded to gender are five points of qualifications . It is two types of gender . Skilled vocational diploma had 10 % of Australian females . But more 90 % of all Males . 40 % of womens had Undergraduate diploma , that is the compare piece of Undergraduate diploma in mens range . The Bacelor 's degree had more than 45 % of man and more than 53 % of women . The other point - postgraduate diploma is 70 % for males , but only 30 % of Australian women have PD . A final point of graph is Master 's degree . 60 % of Australian males in 1999 year had MD , also only 40 % females had MD .
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The bar chart below illustrates five levels of post - school qualifications and percentage of men and women who had them in 1999 in Australia . The biggest differense of percantage is skilled vocational diploma . 90 % of men held it , whether only 10 % of women had it . Amount of men with postgraduate diploma and Master 's degree were more , than amount of women ( 70 and 60 percent of men and 30 and 40 percent of women ) . And only for two qualifications percentage of women were more than of men . 55 percent of women had Bachelor 's degree , when only 45 percent of men held it . Another qualification is undergraduate diploma . Actually , only 35 percent of men had it , whether percentage of women with it were twice more . In general , men were more educated , than women in Australia in 1999 . The most drammatic differences were with skilled vocational diploma . Exception for this rule were Undergraduated diploma and Bachelor 's degree .
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One of the most important question for creative artists of present and past was question about freedom of expressing their own ideas and possibility of restrictions on them . Art is the way people can express themself . It is way to present their ideas to people . But at the same time government must protect people . Any danger . The main question become : Can information , that creative artists give to people , dangerous ? On one hand everyone have to have freedom of their own thoughts . It does not metter , what people think about , noone can control it . Only way , that people react , is important . We are all free thinking and expressing our own thoughts , because it is only way people can live and communicate . On another hand is government policity and there fears about changing of people 's politition thoughts . There are lots of examples in history about controlling people medium ( what people can watch , listen or read ) . Usually it was unreal to controll all content , that people was taking and artists were always versus it . In generall , I think , that people should be free in expressing their own thoughts . I think so , because of people 's nature . We must be free in our own thoughts and artists should not be controlled by government . It is our right for freedom . Goverment should only controll our activities ( resault of our thinging ) . Everyone can desagree , with artists ' ideas . And it can not affect people thoughts generally , without people ' agreament .
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These diagrams shows us the situation about the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the prediction for these countries in 2050 . There are some simmilar trends and some differences . Let us observe it more carefully and make some conclusions . The main differences in developing of these two countries . Italy is a developed country and there are more noticable process of eldering population ( from 24 per cent to 42 ) then in the third world country which is called Yemen . There is a a small shift in 2,1 per cent . But due to the process of globalisation there are the simmilar trends of tho groups : decreasing of 0 - 14 years ' group and increasing group 60 + . What about group 15 - 50 years , there are controversal trends in these two countries . Prediction talk about increasing in 11 per cent for Yemen and slighting blown in 18 per cent for Italy . In addiction I should say that the situation can be more noticable if we would be able to compare number of this groups in both countries .
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The pie charts illustrate the population in different ages in Yemen and Italy , in 2000 and its projections for 2050 . The main trend in that there was a significant difference in the proportion of it in 2000 and , according to the forecast , it will also be in 2050 . However , the percentage of people in different ages inside the countries will totally change . For instance , a half of Yemen 's population in 2000 was at the age between 0 and 14 years , but by 2050 this number will decrease rapidly and will be only 37 % . At the same time part of population in Yemen ( 15 - 59 years old ) will increase from 46,3 % to 57,3 % . The percentage of elderly people will remain aproximately constant in both periods . The changes in Italian demographic situation will be as vibal as Yemen 's ones : the majority of its population was about 15 - 59 years old in 2000 , but , according to the forecast , the decline of it will be significant it will be less than a half of all population by 2050 . However , the percentage of elderly people will increase twofold In 50 years . Children on both pie charts are not more than 15 % of all Italian people . To sum up , demographic situation in both developed Italy and developing Yemen will greatly change in 50 years between 2000 and 2050 . However , these changes are not the some , according to scientific projections .
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The bar chart provides information about the different levels of qualifications in Australia after school and the males and females proportion who passed them in 1999 . It is clear that the per cent of females outweighted than males in undergraduate diploma and Bachelor 's degree . It was 70 % and approximately 55 % at women against nearly 36 % and just above 46 % at men respectively . However , in the last calling of post - school qualifications in Australia the men outweighted than female figure . The dramatic difference was in skilled vocational diploma . And women date counted 90 % and it was a biggest result for 1999 year . The picture of postgraduate diploma and Masters degree was approximately same in 1999 . The dates of postgraduate were 70 % at males against 30 % at females . And figures of Masters degree were 40 % and 60 % at woman and men respectively in 1999 . In conclude , more men than women held post - school qualifications in Australia in 1999 .
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Nowadays in the world appears more and more people who think creative and express their ideas in different spheres . But the goverment restricts they activity . I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages in my essay . This opinion have several benefit . Firstly , creative artists do this world more colourful and others nice to see their creative products . For instance , the OBEY companies speciality on the street - art and we can see their picture in London and other city . Secondly , this people think new way in the art . And in each country have different artists who do new things which develop imagination of public . For example , in Norway live one man who did unusually animals from plastic . Furthermore this animals can walk on the beach thanks for windy . However this opinion have a drawbacks . And one of this disadvantages is wrong places which artists choose for their pictures . Some artists do their work on the wall of block of flats . A case of point is graffity . This art the goverment restricts . And next drawbacks is bad works of artists . Some creative people are mad and things which they do do n't like the public because it may very crazy . For instance , the architector do his portret with his blood . It will not like othes . To conclude , the advantages outweight the disadvantages . Our world need in New art and people want see something new to do their life more different and leas boring .
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These two diagram show the use of electricity in United Kingdom : the graph reflects a typical daily demand for electricity and the pie chart contains the information about what exactly the electricity is used for . By sumarising the information two main factors can be selected and reported : that winter demand for electricity is higher the more than a half of the whole amount of electricity is used fodr heating . The first feature can be clearly identified on the graph : it shows the winter demand as averagely on 20000 points higher than the summer one . Nevertheless , patterns stay quite similar : their peaks are at 21:30 and their falls are between 6 and 9 o'clock in the morning . Another feature is neglected by the pie chart : more than a 50 % of electricity is used for heating in any season . Ovens , lightning and electric tools take averagely 1\6 of the whole amount each one . To sum up , it may be concluded that the highest pount in the demand for electricity are winter evenings , when heating rooms is crucial . Otherwise , the lowest point in the demand are summer mornings when no heating is needed .
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There are two graphs show how people use electricity during the whole day in summer and winter and for what they usually use it . It 's very easy to understand why people use so much electricity in winter compare to summer if we look down to the pie chart . More than fifty percent of the electricity is used for heating rooms and heating water , that 's more useful in a cold season . Other things such as ovens , kettles , TV and food mixers are used during the whole year . By the way , we should n't concentrate just on the season differences . It 's also very important to say about using electricity during the whole day . This graph shows us the fall at 7 a.m. and the rise from 1 p.m. to 9 p.m. in winter and from 4 p.m. to 10 p.m. in summer . It can be explained by our daily timeplan . In conclusion I want to say that it 's really easy to explain how people use electricity and we ca n't live without it at all
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Everyone is searching for happiness . Being happy is a life goal . People are searching for a good job , nice and tidy appartment and love of their life to be happy . Because if you do n't like your surrounding , you 're not going to be happy . As we know , everyone describes happiness in different ways . For some people having a dicent job and lots of money on their bank account is a way to be happy . From the other hand , lots of people do not pay attention to material things and find their happiness in love . That 's why every person has his own priorities and search for happiness following them . This is the reason why it 's hard to describe happiness - almost everyone will have his own answer . But it does n't mean that some of them will be wrong or right it means that , for example , my definition of happiness might not suit to my friend because he can probably be wishing for a lot of friends for being happy , while I think that good health is most important in our life . In my opinion , the most important factor in achieving happiness is being sure that you do n't harm anyone around you . I think unexeptable to follow your dreams walking by other people 's heads . Someone 's unhappiness ca n't make you happy and your life complete . It should n't has bad consequences for people around you . To sum up , even if it 's hard to define what happiness is , people have to think before doing anything to reach their dream . Because we ca n't be happy by making someone unhappy . Think about people around you is a first step on your way to be happy .
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The above chart features the percentage of men and women holding various levels of qualifications in Australia in 1999 . It is clear that from the graph that skilled vocational diploma is very popular among makes as opposed to women who constitute only 10 % of the total number of such diploma holders . According to the graph , women prefer undergraduate education and focuse on taking undergraduate diploma . The percentage of females is about 70 % . A similar participant presents in obstaining a bachelor 's degree . Males consist of 53 % of it . Futher analysing the graph it can be seen that men have an upper hand in the postgraduation division comprising 70 % and 60 % of the total people having a postgraduate diploma and a master 's degree against women who consist of 30 % and 40 % respectively . To sum up , while women are more interested in undergraduate study in the meantime completely dominanting women in skilled vocational qualifications .
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The bar chart illustrates post - school qualifications according to gender , measuring in per cents in Australia in 1999 . It is obvious that a skilled vocational diploma was held in higher level by males than females . Percentage of men who held it was 9 times more than percentage of women . In addition , it was the highest percentage among 4 other qualifications . The proportion of women who held an undergraduate diploma and a bachelor 's degree outnumbered the proportion of men who held the same level of post - school qualifications . By the way , 70 % of women had the undergraduate diploma ; it means twice more than men 's percentage . By contrast , the percentage of a men 's postgraduate diploma dominated the percentage of women ( 70 % vs 30 % ) . Furthermore , a master 's degree received 60 % of males and 40 % of females . In conclusion , the first level of post - school qualifications preferred the significant number of men , whereas they achieved the highest levels of qualifications more times than women , while the majority of women received only the undergraduate diploma and the bachelor 's degree .
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There are two stated opinions about ways to improve people 's health . The one part of people is about to think that the best measure will be increasing number of sports facilities while the others think that it will not be very effective and other ways of solving this problem should be found . In my opinion , increasing the number of sports facilities and making them free can be the best opportunity to increase the health level of people . It is not a secret that each kind of sport or even gym is really expensive now . Not every family can afford to pay for their sport activities or their childrens ones . Moreover , I have an argument for my point of view . In the Soviet Union there were a lot of entertainment and sports activities and they were free and there were more people desiring to do sports . Furthermore , there is well known statistics that shows us that our grandparents and parents who lived in USSR were much stronger and healthier . But on the other hand , other measures can be suitable too . For example , obligatory physical education classes should take place at universities and colleges as it is now at schools . And for sure , the level of medical care must be increased by the government 's policy . To sum up , the option of increasing the number of sports facilities seems to me more efficient , but the other variants can have an effect too . To my mind , everything depends on ourselves and our desire , if we have an aim to rise our level of health and become stronger , we will definetely cope with it .
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This bar chart shows us amount of minutes of telephone calls in UK between 1995 and 2002 in three types of call : local , national and international and mobile . Firstly , we can see that number of calls of local type is the biggest for whole time . But from 1999 it started slightly decreasing . Secondly , the chart shows that amount of minutes on mobile type of calls was increasing from 1995 to the end of the chart 's timeline . Also , there is a moment when it 's amount rocket from 25 to 42 billion minute . In 1995 varies of minutes in local type was twice bigger than national and international type of calls . As for mobile type it took only 14th part of minutes of local type . But in 2002 it jumped more than a half of amount of minutes . We can see that for the whole time the number of minutes of mobile phone was increasing , heigher than local . And as for national type is was slightly decreasing from 1995 to 2002 .
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As it is shown on a chart , number of calls by local fixed line has increased during the period from 1995 to 1999 , and then it decreased from 2000 to 2002 to the level of 1995 , less more than a 70 billions . But till 2002 this type was the main . The international calls have only increased during all the period of the chart . At 2002 number of this calls rised less than twice . In the chart this type always has a second place in numbers of calls . The number of mobile calls has increased about 10 times during the period of chart . In 2002 this type of calls reached the level of international calls in 1996 , 40 billions . But in the end of period of chart it is still lower than other types of calls .
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Some people believe that there should be equal numbers of male and female abiturients at educational institutions ( for the highes education ) in each subject . As for me , I can not totally agree with them , because the interests of both genders are really different . First of all , it is well - known fact that there are two groups of specialization : human studies and technics . Men are more tend to the second , such as physics , geometry , enjyneering , while women prefer the first one , for instance , literature , art or music , economics . Scientists explain that people have more success in exactly these subjects due to the specific male and female mind . Moreover , because of this first fact , in my view , it will be impossible to teach equally groups of two genders . There will not be enough stidents in one specialization and even lot in another one . According to statistics there are more women than men in the world , so the equal number of them at universities is an unbelievable dream . Finally , the government should not accept such system in educational sphere , because , in this case , the youth in country will not be happy and pleased with its freedom for choice . From my point of view , it will lead to dissatisfied population and serious political troubles . However , I understand that the government is able to make an attempt . It means that some prestigious universities , for example , the main state town 's university , can provide equal places in popular studies for young abiturients . It is possible that this decision will be a good step for improvement of status of a certain subject . To conclude , I do not believe that equal numbers of both sexes at universities is right for them . They even do not have such opportunity due to modern statistics of world population . On the other hand , of course , some of them can try to accept this law in their educational politics and increase their popularity among young people .
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Nowadaz , we live in a world of fair competition . A great number of people from all over the world dream of having a good , high education in order to get a well paid job . In this case , many people claim that there should be an equal number of students of each sex , both male and female , in Universities in every subject . Personally , I am in two minds about this issue . On the one hand , without any doubt , it is a good idea for a plenty of reasons . First of all , it will be a perfect boost for developing tolerance in our society . Because , there would n't be jobs only for women and for men . And , so , it will destroy conflicts based on gender . Moreover , it will help our society to develop a lot of male areas , were women can be really usefull . In addition , such a measure can become a great socialisation tool . I firmly believe , that , for instance , on technical faculties , where the majority of students are men , equal number of female can make the study more interesting and productive . On the other hand , I am totally concerned , that such a situation is impossible . To begin with , I 'd like to tell , that male and female has different type of mind . Maybe , that 's why many boys tend to prefer technical subjects and science , while girls preder working with peopleand some not scientific subjests , such as history or sociology . Also , it is not fair at all . Why should we deny some boys or girls in order to make the situation in the university genderly equal ? The competition should , and only strongest ones should be able to study in the university , and it is n't metter is it a man or woman . All in all , I must confess , that it is a quite complicated topic . But , I also think , that this idea is really unfair . In the tryings to destroy the gender boards , to make everybody equal , to make our society absolutely tolerant , people no longer fallow the human sence . In my firm belief , we must stop it before it is too late .
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In this diogram we can see the per sent of people which are older than 65 from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries , which are Japan , USA and Sweden . Firstly , it is easy to manage the drammaticly rising of per cent of old people from 5 - 10 % in the 1940 and 23 - 27 % in 2040 yaar . And the most significant growing up we can manage at Japan which starts from 5 percend and finish with near 27 persent . In Japan , firstly , line goes down from 1940 to 1960 where it stay at this level till 1987 , where it goes up . The most drammaticaly rising we can see in 2030 where the line significantly goes up to 25 per cent from 10 where it was . Also we can not see strong rising of lines of other two countries which are Sweden and USA . We can see that number of people after 65 and over years old is bigger than in Japan in 1940 . Nevertheless after 100 years , in the end of the graph amount of old people in this two countries is lower than in third one . Lines here does n't have any strong or significant rises as it was in Japan .
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Nowadays , the hide education become more and more popular among youth people of bouth sex . Some people think that universites should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject . But other think that making equality of boys and girls an faculty is wrong . In my opinion , all students should take part in entring competition , despite of sex . All people should understand , that there are only male and only female professions . And that the main goal of university is preparing a good specialists . The society will have a very big problem if we will have equal number of male and female specialists in every professions . For example , if university will prepare equal numbers of profesions . For example , if university will prepare equal numbers of male and female builders , many women will have not a goad job , insted of men , whitch numbers will no enought for good work in this professions . Else , equal numbers of boys and girls on a faculty will no right for some people , which will not enter on some subject because of sex . For example , the university accept 30 boys and 30 girls on some subject . And that 31 boys and 30 girls wants to enter on this subject . The ending 31st boy will not enter on subject , because of his sex , just if he will have better exmam 's results that 1st girl , whitch will study in the university . In conclusion I want to say that there ar some advantages and disadvantages in bouth sistem of entring in the university . But I 'm sure , that male and female should have equal chance for entring .
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Nowadays the problem of equality between men and women is quite important . Some people suggest that even in the universities the equality of male and female students does not exist and that the number of boy - students and girl - students should be equal in every subject . I am partly agree with this statement . During the long period of time girls could not learn at schools or enter in the university , only boys could do that almost until the XIX century . In the modern world the situation was changed and both girls and boys study at school and in the university , but the number of female and male students is often unequal : for example , in the Philology department there are significantly more girls , but , in contrast , in the department of Economics the number of male students is higher . Psychologically speaking , the equal number of both types of students influences the atmosphere in a group and the relationship between students . It is known that in female collectives there are a huge number of conflicts and intrigues . If the groups was quite equal , would the students be more friendly to each other . On the other hand , as it was be said , the number of students in each group depends on the subject and on the interests of it . Male students prefer often learn economics or mathematics and rarely choose philology as profession . In contrast , numerous girls learns foreign languages and avoid working with statistics etc . Thus universities not always can accept the equal number of make and female students , because they are not entering each faculty equally . Moreover , some people argue that the universities should accept students for their knowledges and not for the gender reasons . To conclude , it can be seen that the question of equality between male and female students is complicated and can be discussed during the long time . Personally , I am partly agree with the statement given , but not fully . Nowadays , every university has its own rules and laws , that control the process of accepting students , somewhere according to the topic of equality between male and women .
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The information given illustrates the percentage of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan , Sweden and USA . It can be deduced from the graph that the number of people aged 65 and over increases gradually from about 7 % in 1940 to 25 % in 2040 in Sweden . Similarly , the number of 65 - year - old and over people living in USA rises constantly from 9 % to approximately 23 % during the period of the discussion . In contrast , the percentage of people of the same age from Japan demonstrates a twofold decline and then reaches a peal at about 27 % in 2040 . Overall , after analyzing the info provided it can be said that the number of aged people living has a gradual increase in Sweden during the observed period . The percentage of people aged 65 and over raises from about 9 % to 23 % in USA . While the number of people from Japan shows a steep increase from 2030 until 2040 .
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A lot of people think that amount of male and female students in universities should be equal in all subjects . On the one hand , an equal number of male and female students can help teacher . There is a method which often practices in schools : boy seat with girls . This helps to lead pupils ' attention on studying and not to playing and talking with each other . Moreover an equal numbers of male and female students can help with a later work in companies where will not be too many male and female employers . Furthermore the number of male and female students influences on a problem of future generation : if there are an equal numbers of students they have more chances to find their couple and maybe create a family . On the other hand it sounds impossible to accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject . For example , math and literature are too different subjects which choose usualy the majority of male ( in case of math ) and female ( in case of literature ) students . Furthermore from the world statistics we can know that there are more women than men in the world . In addition there are unpredictable situations like army for male students and decrets for female . It means that universities can accept equal numbers of male and female students but the number of them will change during the study and it will be impossible to save an equal numbers of students . In conclusion an equal numbers of male and female students in every subject hase advantages and disadvantages . However it anyway sounds impossible to universities to accept students this way . It depends on differenr unpredictable situations , students preferences and on an amount of women and men in the world .
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject . Nowadays the situation in the universities shows that not every speciality can accept equal parts of male and female students . This topic is worth to discussion . On the hand , I partly agree with that because of its ambiguity . Technical universities attract mostly male applicants and than students . The humanity specialities have mostly female one . It is obvious that such a situation should be because male students are interested in practical education and female students in female practical skills , for example , literary , painting , history , languages . On the other hand , I can hardly agree with such a position . Most of teachers , for instance , who teach literary studies are male ones . Moreover , there are a lot of female researchers in physics , maths and other " male " specialities . For this reason the universities can accept numbers of different students , who want to be taught by these skills . In conclusion I would like to notice that it is not important , which population is leading on which speciality . I think if student has a great interest in different studies , the universities should explain them that and give this opportunity . Another reason is that the government wants thaeir stidents to part in equal proportion in every subject necause of wish to have equal numbers of specialists in every subject . This reason can be but I prefer another one which is to do what students want . In another words such a theme is very popular and actual in recent years .
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At this diagramm we can see the proportion of the population aged 65 in the different countries ( namely in Japan , Sweden , USA ) from 1940 to 2040 . Speaking about Japan , we can notice that the quantity of people aged 65 has completely encreased ( from 5 % to 27 % respectfully ) , but in the period between the 1940 and 2000 this number despeased . In others countyis the population aged 65 has never decreased . In Sweden the quantity of people in age 65 has encreased from 7 % to 25 % , in the USA from 8 to 23 % ( from 1940 to 2040 respectfully ) . Another interesting fact is that at the begining the population aged 65 was less in China and the most in USA , but in 2040 the situation changed completely and the population aged 65 was the biggest in Japan , Sweden has always stayed in the middle . Overall , the sutiation in all three counties has changed ( the population aged 65 has encreased ) , the biggest chanching were happend with Japan .
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Nowadays it is often believed that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students for each subject . In my opinion , there are special subjects for men and women , so I am disagree with the statement . First of all , there are special universities based on country 's army , so there will be more male students than female , that is why universities can not accept equal numbers of them on all subjects , even if in such girls study chorgover , there are different are different physical subjects and trainings which are too difficult for women 's health and physical abilities . Overall , there is no need to organise the same numbers of male and female students for universities . In addition , there are special male professions , for example , pilots , builders , capitans , which are extremely difficult and nervious , and which are impossible to do for women . Furthermore , there are also special female work , which men are not able to do , as nurses or teachers in kindergarten and so on , that is why in this case there is no need for men to listen courses about children phsycology , and for universities - to accept equal numbers of male and female students . Consequently , I see no efficient opportunities after organising such studying proccess , and I am disagree with the statement given . Students should have their own choice which subjects to learn , as universities should decide themselves how to organise subjects and number of people on them . Nowadays everyone is free to choose and achieve what he wants and needs .
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These two graphs below indicate the demand for electricity of English society and show hoe they consume it . The line graph shows that during winter days the consumption of electricity double one in summer . However , for both seasons , the peak of electricity use is a period of time from 21 to 22 hours ( 47,000 and 19,000 Units of electricity accordingly ) . Electricity is used rarely in the morning , in both cases there are massive drops in winter the demand decreases to 30,000 Units and during summer it falls till 12,00 Units . The pie chart indicates that the main reason of electricity use is heating rooms ( 52,5 % ) . The same percents of electricity units are used for lighting , TV , radio and vacuum cleaners . Overall , the common demand for electricity grows with coming of winter .
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