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These reasons why seeking multiple opinions are helpful are seen everywhere and have a major impact on the world. It has been seen when Europe found how to fight a disease, when one man switched the opinion of a jury, and how a democracy functions.
Evidence
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This is highly beneficial as one could hear advice that they would not have even thought of. Different answers derive from one's cultural background. One example would be medicine itself. In the 17th century, diseases ran rampant, especially smallpox, as there was no method of combating the virus. Europe had no cure fo...
Evidence
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The idea of asking multiple people for advice is prevalent today, and can decide the fate of others. An example would be a jury. A jury listens to a court case and then decides whether one is guilty, or not guilty.
Evidence
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Many countries around the world, such as the US, are a democracy. This means that the government is fueled by the opinions of the people, and value those thoughts. This version of government is functional as those countries are standing today.
Evidence
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When faced with a choice, it is better to listen to the opinions of others on the matter. This is as one can absorb knowledge from different viewpoints, one person could completely change the others' thoughts, and a majority vote could provide the decision that one needed. Past events that impact the whole world occur ...
Concluding Statement
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Think back to the last time you attended school and how tedious it was progressing through each day. Chances are you quickly grew tired of the monotonous cycle every week, and would prefer to have an easier and more efficient way to learn. Luckily, students have no need to worry over this with the recent introduction o...
Lead
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students do indeed benefit from attending classes at home, since it allows for an efficient and easy method of learning the courses one would normally obtain all the while being in the comfort of a distant area such as their own home.
Position
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School is indeed an essential part in the development of one's mind and future. However, it's not the perfect solution for everybody, as some people produce a higher performance rate when it comes to learning at home through digital methods. A common reason would be the people who aren't as socially adept in comparison...
Evidence
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Having the ability to partake in classes and obtaining the same knowledge as your peers while being in a different area as them, makes you feel like the illness never was there in the first place at all. This allows the users to learn at the same, or sometimes even faster pace than regular students in schools.
Claim
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Online learning can also help people who just need to complete work that they would've have missed due to personal reasons, such as a family trip to another state
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Effective
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Normally, when they return back to school, the students would encounter a myriad of incomplete work that had accumulated over their course of inactivity. The pile of work would be required to be completed if they wanted to maintain their grades all the while having to simultaneously obtain the current information and t...
Evidence
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Although there are numerous benefits to learning digitally, some people are still doubting online education, One prominent reason why some people would still have some doubts, would be that not learning in a regular school environment isn't quite as beneficial or effective in contrast to the average student learning in...
Counterclaim
Adequate
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However, this is quite the opposite, as virtual education provides many benefits that even normal schools would most likely be not able to help.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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For starters, online courses allow for better understanding between one another, as methods such as video conferencing eliminates the background noises that makes it difficult to for the student to converse with the teacher and vice versa. If video conferencing isn't a preferred method of interaction, one can simply ju...
Evidence
Effective
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Furthering explaining on why the concept of online learning is actually beneficial and effective on the student, understanding something in school varies and depends on what kind of teacher they have, and their method of instructing
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Adequate
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On the other hand however, online courses are usually uniform with how they teach people, as they have clear and typed wording while also providing the users other forms of information sources to further develop their knowledge of the subject. This makes it easier for the viewers to follow and have a deeper understandi...
Evidence
Effective
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Online education, although fairly recent, will bring forth a new wave of educational tactics and support for the students that will surely provide an immense amount of education support to multiple generations. Even through a myriad of obstacles, like their health or simply just finishing missed work, virtual courses w...
Concluding Statement
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Students may view school as an obligation, wishing that they could just stay home all day and relax. At first, the introduction of allowing students to learn through a computer screen in the comfort of their own home may seem like an excellent idea, however, after a while students may begin to feel lonely and as if the...
Lead
Adequate
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I think that students would not benefit from an at home learning system due to the fact that a face to face learning experience is much more efficient than one behind a screen.
Position
Effective
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There are lots of students that are home schooled, which does not allow them to have a real school like experience. For most of society, having the school experience taught them things, such as work ethic, time management, how to deal with people, and much more. If a student does online schooling through video calls an...
Evidence
Effective
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If a student goes to school through an online program, they will have not gotten to learn from the experience of being in a physical school, which could cause them incredible difficulties later on, such as the social aspect of life.
Claim
Effective
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A big part of society is social interaction. It has been proved that humans need social interaction to live happily, and if they don't get that, it can have some very bad consequences. For some criminals, the government will put them into isolation as a form of punishment, meaning no interaction with other humans for a...
Evidence
Effective
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Those who are able to form close social bonds with people through school is a reason why students benefit much more by physically going to school rather than an online video call or conference.
Claim
Effective
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Another reason as to why physically attending school is significantly more beneficial than doing classes online is because of the interactive and hands on experience students receive
Claim
Effective
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In classrooms, students get the chance to learn through interaction by participating in labs, presentations, class discussions, and many other interactive experiences. Students can use presentations and class discussions to bounce ideas off of each other, and if a student has a question after a lesson, they do not have...
Evidence
Effective
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Having a physical in class learning experience is much more beneficial than one over the internet due to the school experience students receive, the social interaction, and the hands on learning they get to experience.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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However, even though there is much evidence to backup why going to a classroom to learn is better, it can be stated that learning online through video calls is the way to go. If students have anxiety or are constantly stressed out, learning online may be a much more relaxing way to gain material.
Counterclaim
Effective
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Since there is so much more reasoning as to why a physical learning system is so much better than an online one, all evidence gathered to support this overpowers any evidence to support doing classes online
Evidence
Adequate
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Because of the evidence and reasoning presented, having a physical learning experience is incredibly more beneficial having a learning system online. 
Rebuttal
Adequate
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I personally think that when you need advice you should ask more than two of your close friends,
Position
Adequate
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i say this because not all friends give good advice and by asking a friend that doesnt give good advice you put yourself at risk of them giving you bad advice and it steers you into the wrong direction.
Claim
Effective
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This happened to me and it put me into a situation i didn't want to be in. It all started when i asked one of my closest friends to help me out with a situation i was in with my best friend at the time, my best friend was mad at me for some unknown reason and i had no clue what to do she never responded to my texts and...
Evidence
Effective
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not all of your so called "friends" wants whats best for you.
Claim
Adequate
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I learned that when my close friend gave me the awful advice of ignoring a problem with my best friend until it "went" away, i later learned she told me to do that because she was jealous of the relationship i had with my best friend at the time. so she purposely gave me bad advice so she could have me all to herself, ...
Evidence
Adequate
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you should make sure your asking true friend that you know you can count on when you want advice.
Claim
Ineffective
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This has to be someone that you trust and you know only wants the best for you, because if you dont take a step back and dont see those qualities in your "friend" you shouldnt be going to that person for advice, and if you dont't realize at the time that that person dosn't want the best for you, you have your other peo...
Evidence
Adequate
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This brings be back to the prompt on my you should seek multiple opinions when needing advice. In my i said why youshould seek/ask multiple people for advice when needed.
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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In the world of education, there have been many arguments about which way of learning could benefit the most people. Some agree that the system we have now is the pinnacle of what we can do to help younger generations learn. However, there is definitely more we could do so the next firemen or police officers in line do...
Lead
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What is distance learning? It is when a child decides to take school from home, online, or have video courses with a teacher. It isn't exactly homeschooling or tutoring, in the sense that instead of having a family member, or specialized teacher come to enlighten; rather, it is when a teacher from the school that the s...
Evidence
Ineffective
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As of now, only a percentage of schools allow this, but if this opportunity were introduced to more schools, the whole county would have a higher success overall
Position
Adequate
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it helps those who learn better in a small environment,
Claim
Adequate
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there isn't the stress of actually going to school.
Claim
Adequate
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There are many children all over the world with social anxiety, learning disabilities, or who are just very introverted.
Claim
Adequate
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When compared to the much more prominent demographic, they are often looked over and left out. If, however, we put them in a more solitary environment, they most likely would excel in academic studies, due to it being less stressful for them. Just imagine people running all about, bumping into and pushing others, when ...
Evidence
Effective
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There are others that, unlike the people in the last paragraph, love socializing. They go out a lot, talk with their friends every day, and just love being around people, but there is just one problem; they absolutely loathe the school system and the way it sucks the life out of them.
Claim
Adequate
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Well, if they tried distance learning, those students wouldn't have the troubles of the system lingering over them, and they could just get the work done. Sure, one would say that it takes away valuable social time, but if one thinks about it, it could also leave some free time to hang out with friends. Having that opt...
Evidence
Adequate
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Autonomy is a wonderful thing. It's nice to just relax and not feel like you have to go down a certain path. I do agree, though, that there needs to be some rules so people won't take advantage of everything. Distance learning is the very middle of those two extremes, understanding that one has the power to be anything...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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i agree with this prompt because some school should have the ability for all student to take online classes ,
Position
Adequate
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if they dont want to go to school or if they have a problem with someone and if they are scared of what people are saying to them. But i think it is the best opportunit to have because a lot of people dont like going to school and online classes would be the best idea for the people.
Evidence
Adequate
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Doing online classes would be better for the teachers and administration because they wont be dealing with a lot of students and they wont be having to repeat their selfs for those who don't listen and the school would have less cost if there wasnt a lot of students going to school
Claim
Ineffective
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They wouldn't have to pay a lot of bills or pay a lot for school food or books , laptops, pencils. notebooks that is a lot of money for the school to buy for the students. Some students dont even bother buying school stuff and the teachers are the ones that have to buy the meterals for the students. They should at leas...
Evidence
Ineffective
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If you attend any online classes at home it would be the best benefit for the student to work on there own paces.
Claim
Adequate
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It would help a lot of students that are slow chasing up with the teachers telling them to write things down or to do work in class for some kids it's hard because some student dont progress things that fast and other progress the work faster then the other students. For example if u do your work at home it would be mu...
Evidence
Adequate
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There is a higher ability that students would get more sleep if they do online classes
Claim
Adequate
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because when u wake up later your body is not gonna be tired or stressed that you gonna misses the bus or that you not gonna have a good breakfast because there is gonna be a long line or you just dont wanna be late to class. For example i would love to do online classes at home because it would be way better for me be...
Evidence
Adequate
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in clounsion ,this is the best choose for students because they would get more time to sleep and get more time to eat a healthly breakfast. At the same time it is gonna be better for kids to work in there own paces and to finish doing work late when yoy have all the time you can at home. Its gonna be better for school ...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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When making an important choice, do people ever wonder if they should have asked more than that one person? Do they ever wonder if that one kid they asked had a biased opinion or if people in general have different opinions?
Lead
Effective
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When making a big, important choice, people, especially young adults and teens, should seek more than one person's opinion. People could have different past experience with lots of things and might help people decide when making an important choice. People should seek more than one opinion when making an important choi...
Position
Effective
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people can have different past experience,
Claim
Adequate
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people can be biased
Claim
Adequate
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people can have different opinions about the subject matter.
Claim
Adequate
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When making an important decision, lets say adopting a dog. People would want to ask multiple people if this would be a good idea or not. Adopting a dog is a big choice in someone's life and the person should seriously think this through. For example, lets say the person asks somebody who, in the past, had a dog who wo...
Evidence
Effective
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This is another example of why getting multiple opinions before doing something because they could have different past experience. People with different past experience will have different opinions on certain matters.
Claim
Effective
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People have biased opinions about certain matters
Claim
Adequate
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Imagine if a person is trying to open a farm, but the person's best friend hates all farmers. The best friend has a biased opinion towards farmers and hates all of them. When the person asks the best friend if they should start a farm, naturally the best friend will say no. But if the person asks someone who loves anim...
Evidence
Effective
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People feel differently about lots of different things, whether they are small issues like shoes being ugly, or big issues like political opinions and whether schools should have dress code. What if someone wants to buy a Cadillac. Obviously, Cadillacs are expensive and the person would ask somebody before spending the...
Evidence
Effective
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This is why people should get multiple opinions before they do something because people have different opinions about things.
Claim
Effective
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When people ask for advice, they should always seek more than one opinion because the people they ask could have different past experience, be biased, or have different opinions about the matter. When asking for an opinion in something, always ask different people and different kinds of people. People can have differe...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Well the best option for my is what you attend the classes from home by way of online .
Position
Adequate
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My reason or my thought is, what you cant learn, in online classes, and thought what you can do it , doing others wor,k in you free time, and the school has good ideas for student what take, classes like after school just in home
Claim
Ineffective
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So in my position is that because if you work so is you cant take the class for one hours, and you work ,and is more benefit for myself but ,each person has diferent ideas . Examples: If you not have work is more time for you ,for what you keep doing you class online. If you wnat the class . you has more time for to...
Evidence
Ineffective
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Others examples is whent you have 18 year old has to much resposabilities and others case it 's not easy .
Claim
Adequate
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I think whent a teacher said you need that class is for one reason, and you nedd take that class but you cant took with you teacher what, is most better for you. So and my opinion or my position is take class from home in online, and to much better what ,take video coferencing
Evidence
Ineffective
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One reason because im take that option is because in my home is relax, and with food and alone and not voices and nothing, and in my home take my time for think most better
Claim
Adequate
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i think is the most important for my work in home and i think what the work in online is not easy so need my time for to think, and good ideas and good answer, and the idea is what you learn with any option you take for this case . The student in this time has more option for any problem .
Evidence
Ineffective
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One reason for what i take this option is for the time ya what much student are major or not have much time for coming a school because the work or others case.
Claim
Adequate
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Other reasons what the student take this option is beacuse is home not in other pleace ya what not has ride or cars for take that class or classes en other pleace .
Claim
Adequate
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My intentions is what others student take this option what is classes from HOME because is the best ,option for any case too if you want free time is more easy for you take this class or classes home by way of online, and is more choice that idea and minus dificult just what in home or online you not have teacher for e...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Asking for opinions and advice from multiple people, helps one gain perspective.
Position
Adequate
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By asking of another's opinion, one can base their opinion off what they have heard, or know.
Claim
Effective
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one can determine the best method for them self, or to check if something is valid.
Claim
Effective
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if a student were to talk to a math teacher versus an civics teacher about which subject is most important for middle school, the math teacher would likely say math is the most important subject, while the civics teacher would say civics is most useful subject. If we looked from either one of the teachers perspective, ...
Evidence
Effective
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if a patient is unsure if they need braces, and as a result they talk to multiple dentists. The patient can use all the information to determine which dentist is best for them by putting what all the dentists said together. If Dr. One, says the patient needs braces for 6 months, but Dr. Two says the patient needs brac...
Evidence
Effective
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The method of asking many people for their advice helps people look at perspective and detect biased. By doing this, one can find the most helpful, accurate advice or answer possible. This helps one gain their own perspective and opinions based on what they have learned from others.
Concluding Statement
Effective
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I think that the schools have good idea for the students for them is better because study more in at home, and also is interesting that each student have time for study in home the reasons is because this can to be benefit for the student. I think for some student is more easy take the class for online, but also if the...
Lead
Adequate
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But there are many student that need study more in the school or home because the study for them is most important in the life
Position
Ineffective
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The student need more study
Claim
Adequate
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they have more time
Claim
Adequate
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and also is important for the future.
Claim
Adequate
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When the students have more time for study is more easy for they each day . for example I'm study in my home I take one class for online and this is more easy study in my home because I have my time,but always and focus in the class is important that the student take class in our home for the future this we help enoug...
Evidence
Adequate
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The first reason is about how the student need more study. The student can study in home because the school have many benefit for them. However we need study more in home or school. the reason is because when study more the homework or test is more easy for us
Claim
Adequate
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for this is important study, and never we can study for the others if not for our self many time some student they don't want study for they self, but in the life only there one thing is study hard we can stop. and many times be a student is not easy is very hard, this dependent from us which is the most important in t...
Evidence
Adequate
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The second reason is about they have more time. when the some student study in home have more time because they take time for make another thing, some time when we study in home we find a place alone for study with more concentration,
Claim
Adequate
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because the school we need have student with more good ideas y for this reason the student need take the attend classes in home because the school offer one option for each student. and the student need take more time for the study because is interesting take class in our home,many times the student have more time for ...
Evidence
Adequate
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Is important for the future when we studying our home or school is more easy each day. The third reason is about is important in the future. When we the students we have more benefit in the school is very interesting because this help our self because the school have the opportunity, how the students need have a good ...
Claim
Adequate
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I think that is very interesting for the students because this is for that we have a good future in the life is important when we find a reason for our future but we can be good students when we study more, also because the schools need more students with interest in the school for make a good future because the school...
Evidence
Adequate
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Inconclusion when the students have more time is more easy for they each day, and also they have time and their home, this is important for the future. However we need to study more in home or school, because this is important for us and many time we think that study in our home is hard but is interesting study more no...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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A village have a school and they are diside learning the people, they offer for distance learning. They do meeting for that and everybody agree for that. After few week start the class. Some students visit every where and they try to teach to viliage peoples and attend to them. They think village peoples learning every...
Lead
Adequate
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I think"yes" students would benefit from being able to atted classes from home.
Position
Adequate
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My first reason is some village have or had no one go to school.
Claim
Adequate