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5a6d541ce830 | 9D7DC07877A6 | Students could have more crativity | Claim | Adequate |
b3d7b17d3a15 | 9D7DC07877A6 | expressing emotions through their projects | Claim | Adequate |
cdb105699ece | 9D7DC07877A6 | higher grades | Claim | Adequate |
a3bf3243b77f | 9D7DC07877A6 | expanding their crative mind. | Claim | Adequate |
966b931cabc6 | 9D7DC07877A6 | By students getting the chance to designe their own projects they can expand their creative minds. | Claim | Adequate |
c068d863f249 | 9D7DC07877A6 | Students can get creative with their art and that could inspire others no matter how hard it might get. They could push themsleves to get out of their comfort zone and this could lead them to have bigger oppoutunties. Students getting the chance to do their own project could make them follow through with it. | Evidence | Adequate |
3b1c3c121198 | 9D7DC07877A6 | By students designing their own projects they could express emotion through art and color. | Claim | Adequate |
b1fd6cca5ffc | 9D7DC07877A6 | A project could have a deeper meaning such as: religon, expreience, or something they believe in and this could keep a student by following with the project and actually finishing it. Students getting the chance to designe their own projects could be benifical to those who suffer with depprestion. They could use art as... | Evidence | Adequate |
7c4323bf0793 | 9D7DC07877A6 | Benifits could come by students designing their own projects such as getting better grades. | Claim | Adequate |
69195d9c717b | 9D7DC07877A6 | Students who don't do their work and get a faling grade could benifit from this. They could think that the way of the teacher doing the project is boring and with this they can have more freedom and show off their creativity. This could inspire studnents to do their work. Students could follow through with their projec... | Evidence | Adequate |
ad3e400674ca | 9D7DC07877A6 | Students get the chance to explore new things and they can use that expreince to their benfit. | Claim | Adequate |
dd18f1326bd8 | 9D7DC07877A6 | By students getting the chance to try new things they could step out of their comfort zone and get the chance to explore new talents. Within students exploring new things they gain knowlege and gain more expreince on ther project. | Evidence | Ineffective |
8cf948230369 | 9D7DC07877A6 | Students should get the chance to disigne their own projects. By doing so they could gain more knowlege on the subject the project is on. This could come to their benfit by them getting oppourtunties and better grades. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
137a4b2b4d21 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | Have you heard of "The Face On Mars"? If not then listen closely, the face is'nt real. It's just a Mesa that looked like a face back in 1976 cause of the technology back then. | Lead | Adequate |
bb96459671b6 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | With today's technology we are able to see that it's just another landform on Mars. | Position | Adequate |
21d15b99eafa | 9DADB9F1BFFB | The Face on Mars was a great mystery and a degree of surprise back in 1976 since they were just exploring mars at the time and didn't really know what to expect from it when they found that landform. Since then the Face became a pop icon and stared in multiple Hollywood films, magazines, and books. | Evidence | Ineffective |
1715078c4631 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | Because of the landform on Mars people thought that is was solide evience that life was on mars or that there was life on Mars. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d574bcd28380 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | Thus aftward scienctists tried to take another picture of Cydonia (The Face) with the improved technology and show that there is no life on Mars and that the face is just a landform on Mars.
In the image it did look more like a landform | Rebuttal | Adequate |
eb0aea676821 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | yet it still resembled a face so conspiarators still beleived that there was still life on mars or that there was life on Mars. The people that weren't saticfied said that The Face on Mars is located 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April of 1998 which is a cloudy time on Mars | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0d90bbb7ca68 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | Thus the people also beleived that there could be alien markings but were hidden by the wispy clouds that the MGS couldn't see through.
Life on Mars is possible and the Face could be real and could have markings on it but because of the cloudy day the MGS couldn't see the Face clearly. | Evidence | Adequate |
958d356993f1 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | On April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day had come and it was time to take a picture of the Face. The photo was taken with maximum resolution, and when people saw the picture there was no mistaking it for a landform on Mars. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
146908605dbd | 9DADB9F1BFFB | Garvin also added "It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho," said Gravin. | Evidence | Adequate |
1607dfa44a43 | 9DADB9F1BFFB | So the Mar's Face was just a landform on Mars that looked like a face because of the technology back in 1976 and because of the cloudy day when NASA took the second picture of The Face. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
0a8514007c52 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Now in the 21st century, the major of humans own and use cell phones daily. The number of teens who are dying or being injured as a result of texting while driving has skyrocketed as mobile device technology has advanced | Lead | Adequate |
d6861e6b6fa2 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Texting while driving is a big problem though out the world with the death rate going up every year. | Position | Adequate |
c77a89e40e53 | 9DBB8B0C3367 |
Teens and young adults ages though 18-24 are texting and driving more than any other age group. | Evidence | Ineffective |
79a136deb03d | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Texting while driving increases the chances of a person having an accident greatly for being distracted.
| Claim | Adequate |
d43ae4ac23f0 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Driving while texting is as dangerous as driving drunk. | Claim | Adequate |
6b5e46fd4e73 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Driving while texting, as with drunk drivers, are less likely for a person that's texting to notice any signs, people walking in the middle of the road, and the signals coming from other vehicles. The larger phone manufacturers, such as Apple and Samsung, could help put something in their phones like an app, or app blo... | Evidence | Adequate |
aa6affcf2e10 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | About over 300,000 injuries have occurred every year by accidents caused by texting while driving in 25% of all car accidents resulting in almost 400,000 physical injuries.
550 pedestrians and bicyclists are killed each year in distracted driving accidents.
The poor habits of texting while driving would keep on going... | Evidence | Adequate |
73c423d85f16 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Texting while driving does not encourage a person to care about their surroundings and fosters a sense of detachment from the world at large.
| Claim | Adequate |
5028c2ff30d9 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Constantly texting, along with nonstop waiting for that next text to come popping up on your phone screen, looking like a robot is no way to live. | Claim | Adequate |
21468a91563d | 9DBB8B0C3367 | The ability to enjoy life and carry on a conversation in person is completely and diminished. Putting down the phone for a few minutes each day could help with your communication skills, and your phone would be put down for once for some rest.
| Evidence | Adequate |
386f7c09ce55 | 9DBB8B0C3367 | Texting while driving is in the 21st century has changed the way of driving nowadays while technology keeps on advancing the problems gets bigger and bigger and while the death rate would keep on increasing as time goes until everyone fix the texting while driving problems continues. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
08dc821462a9 | 9DC1EE4E5674 | The use of this technology to read the emotionl expressions of students in a classroom is valuable | Position | Adequate |
e84e6416d90d | 9DC1EE4E5674 | because it helps the teachers know the students feeling. | Claim | Adequate |
3150714ec824 | 9DC1EE4E5674 | When a student is confuse in a class, the technology can make it easier for that student. The computer knows when you're happy or sad. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. The same technology can make comp... | Evidence | Adequate |
12e7ddc8aa51 | 9DC1EE4E5674 | The technology is intended to bring smile to your face. If you smile on a Web ad appears on your screen. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one. The instruction are very simple, all you do is lift corner of your mouth and the computer knows the results. Moving your facial muscles not o... | Evidence | Ineffective |
50de17774389 | 9DC1EE4E5674 | Facial Action Coding System has classified six basic emotion- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associates each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. | Evidence | Adequate |
05f5d0791645 | 9DC1EE4E5674 | The coding system could tell if the student is telling the truth or lying. | Claim | Adequate |
40831e946b7b | 9DC1EE4E5674 | To an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isnt being truthful. By weighting the diffrient units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. | Evidence | Adequate |
8e9128304abe | 9DC1EE4E5674 | The technology can help the students get beter grades. | Claim | Adequate |
2fcbda2a12c6 | 9DC1EE4E5674 | The technology could make understand the lesson. This technology is very valuable in a classroom. It can read students feeling and make it understand for them. The technology can bring happiness to the students. This technology helps students develop more. | Evidence | Adequate |
6a84f17da1fb | 9DC1EE4E5674 | The computer knows when you're happy or sad. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. By weighting the diffrient units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one. This technology is very useful. This ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
28e80c6e1164 | 9DC3CADE8953 | Some schools require students to complete summer projects to assure they continue learning during their break. Should these summer projects be teacher-designed or student-designed? Take a positive on this question. Support your response with reasons and specific examples. | Lead | Ineffective |
38f3b801fcac | 9DC3CADE8953 | Students should have the projects be teacher-designed because if students designed the projects they would be easier than if the teachers designed them. | Position | Effective |
e729a426f9eb | 9DC3CADE8953 | the teachers would have to make the project a big part of their grade because there would be a lot of students who wouldnt do the project. | Claim | Effective |
f2598afa4f65 | 9DC3CADE8953 | The students who didnt do the project should have consequences like in school detention, and calls home. Teachers should design the project because the students should know how it feels to be a teacher. Teachers all ways design projects for the students so the students should design the project but their are some ups a... | Evidence | Adequate |
0c65c2d88837 | 9DC3CADE8953 | their are some bad things about doing projects | Counterclaim | Adequate |
29cc2cbb9e2b | 9DC3CADE8953 | students have a hard time in school and summer is the only time they get time to relax and not do anything. Their need to be time for students to relax and have fun with friend and family. Their are also a lot of bad things about having summer projects. During the summer your family plans trips and if your doing projec... | Evidence | Adequate |
f7211c5f630f | 9DC3CADE8953 | their are some bad things about having projects during the summer but mainly bad things. Their are a lot of good things about having no projects in the summer. During the summer it should be for the students to have fun and not worry about school. The summer is a time when students should have to worry about school or ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
88f21a578ec0 | 9DE0959F746D | The author supports this idea by giving information how its different from today then on the 1940s. | Position | Ineffective |
1cebf1301ff7 | 9DE0959F746D | The author is telling the reader on "paragrahp 7" to imagine a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.
Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size with the the author wants to say every planet has is own neighbor but they got thier sapce. The author wants to inform the planet... | Evidence | Ineffective |
68b71ba19d1a | 9DE0959F746D | The author is saying on paragraph 8; 'Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also only because of the human curiosity'. The travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
4fca53829d33 | 9E1B8D4EA6B0 | Out of all the plants in the universe, I didn't think that there was going to be another "Earth." Many perople are scraed to travel out side of earth. I would also be scared. There is one " Earth-like " planet. Venus has very dangerous charateristics. | Position | Ineffective |
fb311ca3324c | 9E1B8D4EA6B0 | Venus is the closest plant to earth in terms of density, size, and in distance. Earth, Mars, and Venus all are planetary neighbors. Something Earth is closter to Mars or we are closer to Venus, it just depends on the different speed. Venus is sometimes around the corner, in space terms. We, humans, have sent plenty of ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
9396c2bb49ad | 9E1B8D4EA6B0 | Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon diocide covers it. The clouds are th echallenging part because of te sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The temperature is an average of about over 800 dergrees in Fahrenheit. The atmospheric presurre is 90 times greater that what we experince here on Earth. Th... | Evidence | Ineffective |
6ed974324f0c | 9E1B8D4EA6B0 | Venus has a lot of value. We should go out into the solar system and not be scare dof their dangers. I am sure that if Earth was empty and there were other things on Venus they would've been scared and would not want to come to Earth and do the things we are doing to Venus. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
52d6d455beaa | 9E329AE0D772 | I believe that using this in a classroom will be valuable. | Position | Adequate |
c159d9eef5ab | 9E329AE0D772 | However, this could also be a bad idea. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
5e3a63c958a5 | 9E329AE0D772 | It states in the text that your freontailis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised | Evidence | Ineffective |
84aaca4a3c15 | 9E329AE0D772 | First of all, It is good to know that, because looking at old photographs taken you can see if the person is happy or not. | Claim | Ineffective |
5648bf41fe8a | 9E329AE0D772 | Second of all, the computer can tell if a student is bored, confused, sad, and happy. Which is very good for the teacher. | Claim | Adequate |
d53d7897f73d | 9E329AE0D772 | If a student were to be confused on something that they were learning, and did not want to ask in front of the class, it would show the teacher that they need to know more about the subject that they are struggling with. | Evidence | Adequate |
599b10a57c48 | 9E329AE0D772 | Finally, It is very inspiring how the computer can tell when your actually being serious with your facial expressions, and when you are not | Claim | Ineffective |
e34caa38ebdb | 9E329AE0D772 | I believe that all schools should try these. This will be the future, and will be good when used in classrooms. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
b5f279f06cc2 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | For the past few years, teachers have been implementing a new way for students to be still continuing to learn even over the summer break, summer assignments. | Lead | Adequate |
ef9e6a59bf9d | 9E3A10CC0A72 | Summer assignments are, rightfully so, teacher created assignments | Position | Adequate |
c3a86ce8d8c3 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | are put in play for higher level classes for the purpose to prepare students for what is to come in the following year, | Claim | Effective |
0ea6448c5ca9 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | to help them get a good start in grades and knowledge.
| Claim | Effective |
b5aa484a574a | 9E3A10CC0A72 | Teachers in these higher level classes spend a lot of time teaching material to students and never have enough days in the year to teach it all without cramming it down the throats of their pupils, thus creating the need for the summer assignment | Claim | Effective |
d1cb0c4eabd9 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | In Advanced Placement classes, teachers want to make sure that students are learning the right material and the right amount of it too, which is why it is much more teacher created and designed then student. In Advanced Placement Language and Composition, the summer assignment consisted of specific instructions to find... | Evidence | Effective |
fce066e64015 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | When teachers let students create their own work, it can become more of a hurting situation rather than a helping situation. | Claim | Effective |
be08f072a0ad | 9E3A10CC0A72 | There are many different types of students in classroom settings, but a trait most have in common is the apathy to do homework, projects, or class work. Asking a student to complete an assignment over their three month break over the summer is difficult enough; therefore, asking them to design the project themselves an... | Evidence | Effective |
42f12c452690 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | In some respects, student designed projects can be beneficial. | Counterclaim | Effective |
bfb8a6b6a403 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | Most students possess the resentment of work in general assigned by a teacher; however, maybe if the students were to create the summer assignments themselves, put their own spin on it and make it their own to help them learn the lesson better, it could be beneficial to the teachers having that load off of them for the... | Evidence | Effective |
41042ac8475f | 9E3A10CC0A72 | Yes this could work, giving the students freedom, but it also has been done before and the effect has been, contrary to popular belief, less then stellar. | Rebuttal | Effective |
3e290ab29535 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | In Pre-Advanced Placement World History, students were required to plan, create, and execute an entire project based off of a topic of their choice relating to world history and present it to the class. It was expected that students would create said project at an Advanced Placement level skill set, that did not go as ... | Evidence | Effective |
e53829945478 | 9E3A10CC0A72 | Ever since school has been in session it has been the same way, the teachers create the work and teach, and the students work and learn. Why would we change that now? Students have proven to be untrustworthy in creating their own work on numerous occasions and should not be designing work for subjects they haven't even... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
acbba6d64ad9 | 9E4F43374DD5 | I think that students should participate in one or more school extracurricular activity. | Position | Adequate |
df65f0f7611e | 9E4F43374DD5 | if you normally have noting do after school but just setting around waiting for something to happen | Claim | Adequate |
5e803b81a5f2 | 9E4F43374DD5 | but if you were in any of the school sports you be wont be bored all the time anymore. school can make you meet new friends or get even better at the sport than you are now. sport can make you keep in good shape and good health.
| Evidence | Adequate |
bf6f6742a411 | 9E4F43374DD5 | school clubs are really fun to do because you get to some really big project and activity | Claim | Adequate |
ab130772ac03 | 9E4F43374DD5 | like for example theres the FFA club , the FCCLA , the confetti club those club are really fun to do. you get to make new friends too if you waned to and when your in high school if you wanted to, you could run for school present for your school and make some changes to your school. | Evidence | Adequate |
c2e38c9e99c8 | 9E4F43374DD5 | after school activity like sport can school clubs can also be on your patent reared all out throw out high school and on to college and thats why i think that student should participate in one or more extracurricular activity. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
11d07bd9fd53 | 9E61674DE1D4 | Although some may people think teacher designed is better nevertheless, student designed is better | Position | Adequate |
89d4838e4432 | 9E61674DE1D4 | they should work all the assignments and students should work together. | Claim | Adequate |
e541faf4ab49 | 9E61674DE1D4 | student designed is better because they should complete assignments.
For example, students assigns to work sience projects to help with environment.
This shows that students in science class should work together with a group members to complete projects to earn better grades. Clearly, working a group should student d... | Evidence | Ineffective |
34ca61bf3b8f | 9E61674DE1D4 | student designed is better because they should complete a assignments. In conclusion, students should be best teamates to work together. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
21caf665b5d1 | 9E93D3D95C5F | The passage "In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars" is a really intresting passage. In the text states, that "VAUBAN, Germany-Residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneers, going where few soccer moms or commuting executives have ever gone before: they have given up their cars". This shows, that if th... | Evidence | Ineffective |
9d6d3fa05b59 | 9E93D3D95C5F | This means that having a car is a really waste of money | Claim | Adequate |
0f7aa840ab09 | 9E93D3D95C5F | but its also important to have a car. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
df977877c620 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Generic_Name sighed while he got on his bus on the last day of middle school, and was pretty bummed that he realized he didn't join any clubs or sports during his time at school. Even though his friends recommended that he should, he didn't really want to do it. All of his friends that joined activities made cool, new ... | Lead | Effective |
b3c0aedbadd6 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activity during school | Position | Effective |
f35512c44067 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | it can help you make new friends | Claim | Effective |
3c7749dfd0c9 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | help you become more fit/ stay active depending on the activity | Claim | Effective |
0e89ac716932 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | can improve your skills on specific things | Claim | Adequate |
5a1a072992b0 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | If you join any sports or clubs, you are definitely going to meet new people to make your friends, which is a great thing because it gives you people to talk to and get along with so you won't be by yourself in any activities you would do after school. | Evidence | Effective |
f4e1bd79ea35 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | However, some people don't like joining clubs because they could be antisocial or can be nervous and have trouble meeting new people | Counterclaim | Effective |
a736a599851a | 9EABE5CEBE94 | but it's okay, it takes time to get used to people you dont know, so joining clubs and making new friends can help you be more social and find it easier to get along with others. | Rebuttal | Effective |
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