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222bb9239610 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | Although teachers argue that they have taught for many years and they know the weak points students have for certain topics, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d1f8e89536ac | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | they are all basing it off of statistics | Rebuttal | Adequate |
c22959dd9330 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | Just because students on average found a certain topic difficult does not mean that all will; and some will find a different one difficult. By gathering a group students, the students will be able to pin point which topics are easy and which will require more explaining. Additionally even if teachers were able to succe... | Evidence | Effective |
55e03b37f293 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | With these summer projects, students will successfully master their acquired skills from the previous year and get a head start in their studies for their year to come. Due to this, students will face a smooth transition from their prior grade to their next. Additionally, by making these projects student designed, the ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
050887b85715 | A02D5B12D66D | Well, I suppose it coud have been made by aliens | Counterclaim | Adequate |
6e7f8936ec57 | A02D5B12D66D | but as we continued to research it. It became known to us that something was casting a shadow as we said in our article about the "Unmasking the Face on Mars" | Evidence | Adequate |
a80ea24798ed | A02D5B12D66D | NASA
releasing it in the hopes while it was coming to public. To sale in stores and area in business ,and it did. Hoping it to be real so we can lead people into the existence of it being real. | Evidence | Ineffective |
0ffe14eda971 | A02D5B12D66D | But noticing ourself that it wasn't true that it wasn't real.
| Position | Adequate |
2ad8be9e0792 | A02D5B12D66D | Sadly for us as believers of life on other planets and creation of art from other living things. | Evidence | Ineffective |
ec60b963c5c2 | A02D5B12D66D | In April 5, 1998 when we snapped some pictures ten times as better than the Viking did we notice that it was just a landform a big rock formation. | Claim | Adequate |
5041b651ec83 | A02D5B12D66D | The location of the Face of Mars is 41 degrees north martian latitude where it is winter in April on Mars very cloudy during this time so lots of winds,and dust blow past and covers the rock formation. The picture actually just shows us that is just like a regular formation on Earth as said in paragraph 12 ,and also lo... | Evidence | Adequate |
593e87baebeb | A053080C69A4 | Our nation could use Facial Action Coding system, It could better our nation a a whole, that we can dectect when a person is scared and angery, and upster. it could help, us at boarders, and when we let rugees come to our country, to see if they are actually here to be saved or here to hurt us, that way we can better a... | Lead | Ineffective |
bb89b7f8e00f | A053080C69A4 | i dont think its need in our schopols | Position | Adequate |
d6727c99d1e7 | A053080C69A4 | what can school childern do, we would all be constantly, have the disgusted, or have a sadness look on our faces | Claim | Ineffective |
4d1679854d93 | A053080C69A4 | the school wouldnt be happy, but its our emotion, it shouldnt matter what our emotions are, the schools dont control us, we are humans, we are the next generation | Evidence | Adequate |
754bdcd6091e | A053080C69A4 | we should be able to pick and choose what's in our schools | Claim | Ineffective |
dd9c1133aae4 | A053080C69A4 | we have to deal with whats goes on inside our schools, weather we aren't smart or not, we deserve that right, our parents, the law makers, dont know what we goes on in our schools, or how we feel about, the standard testing, why should be garde on stuff, our parents dont know, we shouldnt be forced on tests, that decid... | Evidence | Ineffective |
4729c3a8dc63 | A0D96DEF2ADA | So you want to do a extracurricular activity? If you want to do an activity, There are many different thing to do like Sports,Yearbooks work,or serve on the student council. | Lead | Adequate |
5bb418a64d52 | A0D96DEF2ADA | So i say you should go and get a extracurricular activity it would be fun!
| Position | Ineffective |
ed45234473f2 | A0D96DEF2ADA | There are plenty of sports like Basketball, Track, Soccer, Baseball, Football its endless. | Evidence | Adequate |
4dc81a0ed2e7 | A0D96DEF2ADA | as you play sports it would be enjoyable | Claim | Adequate |
24c7a82d2a04 | A0D96DEF2ADA | I went to play basketball and i had a blast it was fun to play with my friends and me However, let's say you don't like basketball and you would rather prefer Track You can do that! track can help you in different ways like your running. Track is also entertaining as well There is also football who does not enjoy footb... | Evidence | Adequate |
6741fdcc7ebe | A0D96DEF2ADA | What if you want to do yearbook, the yearbook could be a excellent idea | Claim | Adequate |
66033aa2e389 | A0D96DEF2ADA | you can take pictures also have all your friends in the yearbook and take pictures of them with you making memories with them. | Evidence | Adequate |
3c859a8156d3 | A0D96DEF2ADA | Also there are reading clubs i you love reading this is the right club for you | Claim | Adequate |
1478f51d9ebd | A0D96DEF2ADA | reading you can explore different books and the adventure could be exciting for you and others with this club to the libraries that can show new books could make your jaw drop because they know you would love the reading club it will be awesome. | Evidence | Adequate |
b4df8d82541a | A0D96DEF2ADA | If you don't want to do any of those you can serve as the student council, as a result you will have to council others. | Claim | Adequate |
c0e8e3333387 | A0D96DEF2ADA | And you can try to help anyone that needs help you can understand students better when someone has a problem you can try to help them fix it, make things easier with them to support them with thing that can make them happier. Also it can make you just as happy as them because you the one who is helping them to just be ... | Evidence | Adequate |
289dc3a8726f | A0D96DEF2ADA | So if your ever trying to decide what extracurricular you want to do these are some that can get you into the activity you would want to do. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
1e7124ba1148 | A0DEA37279E9 | I think we should use this technology | Position | Adequate |
391f12158c8f | A0DEA37279E9 | it say in the article that "a classroom computer cand recognize when a student when a student is becoming confused or bored | Claim | Adequate |
011b6471bb5a | A0DEA37279E9 | This technology could make the lesson easier, some people don't like to ask for help from teachers for certain reasons, with this new technology you won't have to and it will make life so much easier. | Evidence | Adequate |
7d5dcb8187f1 | A0DEA37279E9 | They use video imagery the software tracks the facial movements. The painted face of mona lisa by tweaking diffrent units the computer can identify mixed emotions. every expression is compared against a face, The demonstration could bring a smile to your face, for example. If you smile when a AD appears on your screen ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
0c842b7c66d1 | A143BE759AD2 | After reading this article, I have grown a nutreal side of this topic. The reason why is becuase I found a liking for the discovery, but there is also some things that I dislike as well | Lead | Ineffective |
de95498b3de6 | A143BE759AD2 | This tech can become useless and useful in many situations.
| Position | Ineffective |
a6dbc85ee655 | A143BE759AD2 | One reason why this is a good piece of technology is for court cases or things such as that | Claim | Adequate |
2448f25b52e4 | A143BE759AD2 | People could check if a persons emotions are set of fear, anger, sadness, and other emotions as well. If this technology becomes advaced we could see if a person is lieing just by their facial actions. This could help court cases become justified and more crimes solved. | Evidence | Adequate |
04c903da6776 | A143BE759AD2 | A reason why this is bad is due to people and their privacy. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
7c9bd1c65151 | A143BE759AD2 | I would like it to be scanned just to see my emotions, many people would agree with me on this as well. People who could get their hands on this could use it too much or go over the top with this tech. Also, since there is people who probobly don't like this type of technology, they would throw a fit it they would have... | Evidence | Adequate |
cf153317eb5e | A143BE759AD2 | Also another reason why this is bad is the portablity of this technology | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0ac6f541dc45 | A143BE759AD2 | For this to work they would need a high end computer to check someone, and not everyone can just wheel in a computer like that and check someones emotions out of the labatory. This technology is usless without a lab becuase you need a lot of tech to do this expierment on someone. | Evidence | Adequate |
edcd19232cd0 | A143BE759AD2 |
Another reason why I partly side with this technology is for old painting, such as this article explains. | Claim | Adequate |
9a508da3de39 | A143BE759AD2 | The artcile talks about finding the emotions of one of the most world wide known paintings in the world, the Mona Lisa. We could find out people emotions from years ago, dating back from the first detailed paintings. This could also work on not just paintings, but old photos. Imagine seeing what emotions people had in ... | Evidence | Adequate |
34a4db137455 | A143BE759AD2 |
One of my most favorite reasons why we need this is for classrooms. Many people get bored in school, so this computing could help out. | Claim | Adequate |
641793424902 | A143BE759AD2 | The article claims that it could tell if a student is bored or confused, and could change the way the lesson is in seconds. This could help kids out with learing and could future their education. But with that computers would have to understand if a student is making a face to confuse the computer into thinking the kid... | Evidence | Adequate |
d467c0050e24 | A143BE759AD2 | Another bad reason for this is becuase people could fake their emotions | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0baae909fa23 | A143BE759AD2 | Many people know how to act on stage, so they could easily do that to a computer to fake their emotions. This could trick computers to doing things that it really shouldn't. This means that this technology could become tricked, making it usless in many situations | Evidence | Adequate |
f62e1dbf07f6 | A143BE759AD2 | A good reason for this is for advertising. | Claim | Adequate |
70ef13ab82ab | A143BE759AD2 | The article states that ads can be modifyed to show things that make you happy and could make you purchase it. If you see a ad you don't like you won't get ads like those anymore, insted it will supply ones that will possibly make you happy, if you still don't like those ads, the process will repeat will you do find a ... | Evidence | Adequate |
abd3401e573d | A143BE759AD2 | Lastly, my final reason is how hard it will be to access this tech. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
b4b31f0d0aa8 | A143BE759AD2 | It states in the article that a home PC will not be able to handle to algorithims to understand facial emotions. Many people will not be able to expirement with this nor use it at all. So this technology will not be know to the public unlike other technology. | Evidence | Adequate |
02a7a3acecf3 | A143BE759AD2 | All in all, this technology will recive mixed opinions, manly due to the fact that people will not be able to get their hands on it unlike phones, laptops, PC's, and consoles. This item can be very useful, but needs to be polished to be absolutely useful in every situation. This technology will grow as long as they wor... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
4e70c2091203 | A156FB0E388E | The author suggest the reader to study Venus isnt directly in the text but he/she gives you the idea that you should look into it. | Position | Ineffective |
38689bd54c2d | A156FB0E388E | Throughout the article the author talks about Venus and others planets in out solar system. but he mainly talks about Venus and Mars. | Claim | Ineffective |
adeb14789b20 | A156FB0E388E | The author tells us that Venus isn't actaully a Evening star, it just has that name because it is closer to the sun. Venus is also referred to as Earth's "twin" because it is the closest planet to us in density and size and sometimes distance. In the text it says "Venus can be right around the corner in space'. Even th... | Evidence | Ineffective |
49908905a95c | A156FB0E388E | This is tell us that there is still stuff to learn about mars and this story isnt complete. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
073222e12335 | A157CD4FC4C8 | the reason why their is the techonoly of people to know how to understand on how the reason the potrites are in this world today. By showing on how the way the pictures in the text is showing how she is smileing. | Lead | Ineffective |
4ace0f3303da | A157CD4FC4C8 | I think we should leave her face the way is orginally on the way it is from the way the arginol person painted it. It is being very respectful on how the painting is being displaied in different musemes here around the world. | Position | Ineffective |
2bab0c916fdd | A157CD4FC4C8 | the reason why I think this is because lets say that we painted something and someone goes in and paint it completely different. Than what you made it to be in the first place. So I feel like we all should leave things they were when they were created. The respect we give we get in return from the same reson y we gave ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
0e5e4c1236d7 | A165EEC2E930 | Teachers should be the ones to design our summer projects for many different reasons. | Position | Adequate |
6ffdfb00e9cf | A165EEC2E930 | They know what is needed for us to know by the time the next school year comes around, | Claim | Effective |
f1e03527ff4f | A165EEC2E930 | most of the time they have a better understanding of what we need to learn | Claim | Effective |
2b9c5b2e2a96 | A165EEC2E930 | if kids were to design the summer projects they will most likely forget many factors or make it too easy and not put as much effort into it. | Claim | Effective |
81a236e9ecbe | A165EEC2E930 | Teachers should gather together and create the summer projects based off what they know that we will need to know for the upcoming years. | Claim | Effective |
ff9b8b0bffc2 | A165EEC2E930 | This can be really helpful because most kids think that some things we learn will not be useful or won't do us any good but the only ones who really know what will be needed for the years to come, are the teachers. This can be such an advantage for the students and teachers. Instead of the teachers spending so much tim... | Evidence | Effective |
5220eeae6953 | A165EEC2E930 | If the students were to design the summer project way more things would come into effect, like how the project will be graded, what is on there vs. what should've been on there, and everything important we left off. As students we dont know what we need to learn that is clearly why we are being taught. | Evidence | Adequate |
32f8ff89db02 | A165EEC2E930 | Teachers have the best way of helping us understand what we need to learn and most of the time they know what is best for our learning. That is why we have teachers, so we can be taught what we need to know. | Claim | Effective |
4914a3ae9fd3 | A165EEC2E930 | Students all have different ways of learning, and yes not every teacher is can cater to every student and teach them the way they needed to be taught but at the end of the day the teachers are the ones who help us the most with our education and teach us the important things we need to know. Not every student can just ... | Evidence | Adequate |
ce07977539de | A165EEC2E930 | A big part in learning for many students is being challenged. | Claim | Effective |
74ae34862a46 | A165EEC2E930 | Do you really think if a student designed the summer project that it will be challenging ? or will it be so easy that it doesn't really help the student grasp the concept of the material ? Many students find ways to do just the bare minimum to get them by, or they find ways to get the project done without really knowin... | Evidence | Effective |
c5e9fa4e3827 | A165EEC2E930 | In conclusion it is in the best interests of most students if the teachers make the summer projects because they have a much better understanding of what can help us and what we need to know for the upcoming school year. In most classes the teachers spend the beginning of the school year going over material from the pr... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
efcec58d4fa5 | A187E6D70752 | Extracurricular activities are extremely fun. For example, in my opinion I love being in a extracurricular activity. After a while of being in a extracurricular activity you get very stressed. Extracurricular activities are sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council. The principal at Generic_Sch... | Lead | Adequate |
7b1bf7bde1a0 | A187E6D70752 | I disagree that all students must participate in a extracurricular activity | Position | Effective |
3bd8189c79aa | A187E6D70752 | not all students have the time to be in a extracurricular activity | Claim | Effective |
ef22d1483541 | A187E6D70752 | and students have less time in their regular classes. | Claim | Ineffective |
5a651e49e759 | A187E6D70752 | A extracurricular activity is useless for some of the students. | Claim | Adequate |
8097610258d3 | A187E6D70752 | According to teachers students get stress having to deal with an activity at school. Students worry about the activities and could get distracted. More projects or work having to deal with. | Evidence | Adequate |
41a357cdf046 | A187E6D70752 | Also most students are not very interested in sports, working on the yearbook, or serving on the student council. | Evidence | Adequate |
84c782e675f9 | A187E6D70752 | Students could also stress parents with projects and more work from the activities that they have to deal with. | Claim | Adequate |
4e44c8affadf | A187E6D70752 | For example, my friend Generic_Name gets stressed with the work he already has in class and a extracurricular activity would not be very helpful for him. | Evidence | Adequate |
4148e6341786 | A187E6D70752 | Having less time in their regular classes makes teachers also stress. Teachers have less time in class to teach students what they need to learn. Students learn less and goof more around in the activities. The grades of students could decrease badly because they are not learning enough. Also not all students are caught... | Evidence | Ineffective |
7fafe4f4ba15 | A187E6D70752 | Once my friend Generic_Name was in two extracurricular actives he was very stressed after only two weeks. He had so much work he owed and did not have enough time in class to catch up. So my friend Generic_Name decided to convince his principle to take the extracurricular activities away. The reason was because the act... | Evidence | Adequate |
5eb507b06c04 | A187E6D70752 | I do not agree that all students must participate in a extracurricular activity because not all students have the time to deal with a extracurricular activity, and students have less time in their regular classes. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d22d9099559f | A1F48D16C67B | Using technology to read student,s emotional expressions some student's are bored some sleeping and some stressing doing the test but the others are happy and working in the test averyone has the percent of the emotional.
taking about Eckman i classified some basic emotions too people now are bored, sleeping, stress, ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
83aac3d3adc1 | A1F48D16C67B | I like how the techonology work but we need to do the staff for us. | Position | Ineffective |
f73805636171 | A24EFA2DE8DC | I believe it would be a smart idea because then you can tell how they're emotionally feeling | Position | Adequate |
f2cedd133e37 | A24EFA2DE8DC | It could make people happier. | Claim | Ineffective |
0f6be3bba3bf | A24EFA2DE8DC | And you can tell if it's a real smile by there muscular actions the cheek bones lift the corner of your mouth. But if you got a fake smile, the mouth is stretched sideways faces don't lie professors say.
| Evidence | Ineffective |
79d0d2df1074 | A24EFA2DE8DC | The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. "Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression" (like not smiling as broadly) Using video imagery. The new emotion-recognition software. They track these special movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the diff... | Evidence | Adequate |
ab832f67d97a | A24EFA2DE8DC | Imagine a computer thuat shows when you're happy or sad. If you smile when a web ab appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown , the next ad will be different. It could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. "The same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive- ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
95cb08abc2be | A24EFA2DE8DC | Hold on we can actually "calculate" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel? The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face ; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movements... | Evidence | Ineffective |
4b0f0a3e9b6d | A25EE918057D | Venus exploration I can tell the author cares about venus by putting down many ways humans can exploer it | Position | Ineffective |
b7ef7574bca5 | A25EE918057D | from going there he says it was very worthy of going we would just need a blimp like vehicle too hover over 30 miles above the land becuse the surface of venuse is very hot just in the blimp hovering over 30 miles would be 170 dagrees but where the blimp is sitting its at sae levels on earth. They are finding out ways ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
9b9ee5080eec | A29CD7941E1D | If i did sothing affer school i would be more in to school. Would you want to do sothing affer school. Like sports, Work on the yearbook,Or serve the student council,Or help clean up the school. If we did more thing's for the school and less about your self. You would be a better person. Be for i did affer school actir... | Lead | Adequate |
9b2a9aab497f | A29CD7941E1D | I think that we all should have affer school actiry | Position | Adequate |
1e0dfe3385d6 | A29CD7941E1D | so we can all have more frinds and so we can tust be a better person | Claim | Adequate |
35fce0231750 | A29CD7941E1D | Some days i think we all need to sothing besides going home and doing noting. | Claim | Adequate |
873fe31fc036 | A29CD7941E1D | If we did affer school actiry. We would have more time out side or inside work. That or we could all so have a day that we thust sleep then we go out side and play. one day i was so crazy because i did noting that whole day and i need some thing to do affer school. Like if i had sothing to do affer scchool a would a lo... | Evidence | Adequate |
6047e824ade4 | A29CD7941E1D | And if we all did a sport we would all would be storger and more fit. | Claim | Adequate |
1d1a3cf1bc18 | A29CD7941E1D | If we did football,soccer. bassball,bastkball, or sothing like that you wold be fine. Be for i did a affer school actiry i was a big boy. But then i did the affer school actirty then i was not so big iney more. i would be done with shool and i would go srate to the actirty. | Evidence | Adequate |
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