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061ea7fe5510 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Joining sports/ physical clubs can help you stay in shape and stay healthy | Claim | Effective |
e55088ca7f5b | 9EABE5CEBE94 | most sports will most likely have you break a sweat, and a lot of sports include running and jumping, and require some strength. Volleyball, wrestling, football, basketball, hockey, soccer, etc, keep you active and healthy because your exercising by doing sports which is good for your body, but you have to keep in mind... | Evidence | Effective |
22d800b555f7 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Being in most clubs can help to improve skills on different things such as art, cooking or baking, acting, writing, sewing, and things like that | Claim | Effective |
7b88fc40b5a1 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Some things that are provided in different clubs can really come in handy at some point in your future. | Claim | Effective |
9bcbcc230f81 | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Learning new things or improving your skills can impress your friends and family, and can sometimes earn you money. For example, if you improve in art or sewing, you would be able to sell it for a bit of money depending on how skilled you are, maybe $20-$30, or if you're good at cooking/ baking, you could sell it at a ... | Evidence | Effective |
cdc2d9dc59ab | 9EABE5CEBE94 | Generic_Name smiled as he got on his bus on the last day of middle school, as he sat down in his seat with the friends he made during the year through after school activities, they remembered and talked about all the cool sports and clubs they did during their time throughout middle school. They remembered the clubs th... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
cefe1025476e | 9EAD1B4831C7 | Mona Lisa face expressions are different than others face's, depending on how the person look with no smile, no anger, and no saddness. The emotional communication is nonverbal, showing the more emotion there is though our face's. Smile' are all differnet depending if it's a real one or a forced one. Faces don't lie, S... | Lead | Ineffective |
ff1ff89a0fa0 | 9EAD1B4831C7 | When actors fake a smile or a frown they don't feel it really, they just make the face to prove or hide what they are feeling or showing. They act the show and give what's on the paper and have the same movement that we humans have to use when we express how we feel.
We have six basic emotions. Happiness, surprise, an... | Evidence | Adequate |
71c38c022f69 | 9EAD1B4831C7 | We have some software tracks on these facial movement that our brain follows, it can find out you're mix emotion and expression by you're neutral face | Claim | Adequate |
7d141477de3d | 9EAD1B4831C7 | This not means what you can really see without the tech and just see the real feeling and the real smile or their sadness | Evidence | Ineffective |
f9ca7393f06d | 9EAD1B4831C7 | This Facial Action Coding System is identifing the moment of the face right that minute, but not what they are feeling right after or before. | Position | Ineffective |
024fd45ecbbe | 9EAD1B4831C7 | What I'm tryig to say is that our computers are blind and won't see what's really happening, our faces can lie to computers but not to people who know's what they been though and can see in other human their self. You got to see it deep into their eyes and smile if they are really happy or just really sad within their ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
d2313195778f | 9F0C2B822B76 | On the day of March 2, 2006 a NASA worker Sally Herring was called to be on the news show " All about that news", she was asked to speak with news worker Ted Cruze about the sightings/picutres from Mars of the misterious "face".
As Sally was aproaching the stage of the news studio there was bunches of people in the au... | Lead | Ineffective |
a0b2bbe27685 | 9F0C2B822B76 | that is just what people believe, they think aliens were the reason for those faces but from what NASA has to say about it, all these people are wrong. | Position | Adequate |
ade8113dabc9 | 9F0C2B822B76 | Most people don't even believe in aliens but if half of their state or city is saying that of course those people will go with the flow. But with the scientific reaserch NASA has done majority of these people are wrong! | Evidence | Adequate |
da01ab07cb38 | 9F0C2B822B76 | Sally's response was that everything she knows has been discovered by her and the other workers at NASA, they have all been very curious of what is going on as well as everyone else and so they have been trying their best to do their job and get the truth! Sally finished the news show making sure everyone knew the trut... | Evidence | Adequate |
7a0336f92222 | 9F0C2B822B76 | She also made sure that eveyone new that this misterious face was not left from aliens that it was infact just a natural landform we have captured on camera and that her information was very well certified because of course she works with NASA and they all know what their doing! | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
150c65faaf56 | 9F5DFC4C8BAE | studying venus is something that you would have to do | Position | Ineffective |
afebb7a2ca87 | 9F5DFC4C8BAE | because you would take a sample of the planet and test it and you would have to see if theres oxygen on the planet and how many years the planet has lived and the arthor has made a story on how they would examine the planet like the NASA would have a little space craft thing that would hover over the planet so they cou... | Evidence | Ineffective |
b4b93c7070b2 | 9F73A77C612F | In this article it talked a lot about how maybe schools could use computers to sensor a student's emotion of either getting bored or losing interest and to be able for the computer to change the lesson slightly to get the students attention, But do you think this would really work? | Lead | Adequate |
381b73d7c5ef | 9F73A77C612F | In some cases yes it might work for some people, but definetly not everyone. | Position | Adequate |
057d5cada5a7 | 9F73A77C612F | Because some students may have diformaties in their muscles in their face, facial piercings that could afftect they way the computer reads your emotion | Claim | Adequate |
c1b6de5bfbea | 9F73A77C612F | or even just simply you face might be showing one expression but you may feel another way. | Claim | Adequate |
963f558a8316 | 9F73A77C612F | Not everyone in the world is same so it's really hard to make something like this that would benefit everyone | Claim | Adequate |
1826165a165d | 9F73A77C612F | You also have to think about the cost of these computers, | Claim | Adequate |
234982d9dcd3 | 9F73A77C612F | just think normal computers are already expensive, but ones that can read your emotion you can imagaine that those prices would be unbelievable. | Evidence | Adequate |
b16c8a327062 | 9F73A77C612F | every student learns differently, so if the computer changes the way the lesson is being taught based off of your emotion when maybe the lesson is already clear to you, could make it harder on some students. | Evidence | Ineffective |
9b2e7640c97b | 9F73A77C612F | So overall I believe that this product wouldn't be very successful due to a lot of the roadblocks in the way, especially with money involvment. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
7c2248a623c6 | 9F7BAFDB7636 | Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size. Venus is a planet in the solar system, it is the second planet from the sun. It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is often referred to as Earth's twin, Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetory neighbor, orbit the sun ... | Evidence | Ineffective |
a68adc24f50a | 9F7BBA5FC646 | Teacher designed projects and student designed projects differ in many ways. This is mainly because students prefer to create projects based solely upon something they already enjoy and know. Teacher based projects prove to be superior by being both more efficient and a better learning tool than their counterpart and i... | Lead | Adequate |
d58ad4f5a367 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | Teacher based projects can be proved more superior by using current event, historical, and personal examples. | Position | Adequate |
e93907f36220 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | In today's world students are proving to be more disobedient and disrespectful. | Claim | Effective |
ca0bc0c6834d | 9F7BBA5FC646 | This is mainly related to teachers trying to make students more independent and self relying, which is important, but can also be a challenge in the workplace and towards authoritative figures. Teachers are placing more student designed projects in their curriculum and in turn is showing students that everything in lif... | Evidence | Adequate |
a5f67e4db6e5 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | Teacher designed projects teach students to be independent and self relying, but they also teach them to research and learn and that some things aren't always specifically based on their preferences. | Claim | Effective |
7d2d90be824e | 9F7BBA5FC646 | A current event example that directly correlates to this problem is the phrase "boomer." This word is directed towards the Baby Boomer Generation and is used to describe the independent and self relying seniors who dont agree with the way the schooling system is operated. This generation lived in a time where authority... | Evidence | Effective |
029763933e19 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | the years, decades, and centuries, times change and society grows either for the better or worse. | Evidence | Adequate |
e51c57d5acec | 9F7BBA5FC646 | A major system that has changed along the years is the schooling system and a major factor in this change is teachers allowing more student based projects, instead of teacher based projects. | Claim | Effective |
6ba9c20ff05c | 9F7BBA5FC646 | This is a major turn for the worse because students are taking advantage of this and aren't learning anything new for themselves, which is creating more volatile and unintelligent individuals. A historical example that relates more to the way the schooling was before this was the Brown v. Board of Education case. Altho... | Evidence | Effective |
4e12e03796a2 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | In my personal experience I have yearned for the chance to create a student based project. | Evidence | Adequate |
c0d036947004 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | teacher based projects are more informational and they give students the chance to learn something new. | Claim | Effective |
dbdfe6571419 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | A direct example of this would be when I was issued a student designed project my tenth grade summer and at first I found it interesting until I received a hundred percent on it. This made me realize that I wasn't learning anything by doing this student based project and that it was more important to create something m... | Evidence | Effective |
72059e437108 | 9F7BBA5FC646 | Teacher based projects prove to be superior according to many people. They are also a better learning tool and they create a more efficient learning environment for students. Without these projects students would be less obedient and wouldn't show as much respect to their authoritative figures. These projects are able ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
6793e7e0295a | 9F83C5864EB0 | Here's why the author thinks Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus could of once been a Earth like planet | Claim | Ineffective |
d52da42def81 | 9F83C5864EB0 | Venus is same size in density, and size as Earth. The planet had rocky sediments, craters, valleys, and mountains. But nobody can visit or get a up close look to venus because it has a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide, highly corrosive clouds of sulfuric acid in its atmosphere. The weather is extremely hot... | Evidence | Ineffective |
797061fe148f | 9F83C5864EB0 | No, the author did not evaluate his idea good enough there wasn't enough supporting details to support his claim "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents". | Position | Adequate |
0863cc57c20b | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | A student presents their self-designed science project: it is a box of dry ice and a research paper on the properties of the peculiar substance. The project has a valid topic, but it is almost irrelevant to the curriculum of the class. A month later, the student realizes that the summer project should have been some so... | Lead | Effective |
8f9e302703c9 | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | In order to avoid this, a summer project should be designed by teachers instead of students | Position | Effective |
63afb1370361 | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | they know the curriculum well, | Claim | Effective |
290b8de8e9cd | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | will take it seriously, | Claim | Effective |
5daab7d71d68 | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | can use it as an opportunity to set the expectations for the upcoming school year. | Claim | Effective |
4a671dd02d03 | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | It is most logical and effective for a teacher to design summer projects. As the people who teach the class, teachers are the ones who will know what skills the students must practice in order to succeed in the class.
Therefore, there is no one better fit to prepare the students than the teacher. | Evidence | Effective |
fc842970b8ad | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | Through observation, it can be seen that the majority of the teen population does not stay ambitious or dedicated to school during the summer time. Due to this, it makes no sense why teachers would trust students to dedicate their time and effort into designing a well-thought out project instead of dismissing it so tha... | Evidence | Effective |
bd0e3e44543a | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | For example, a highly detailed and extensive project would indicate a rigorous class. The projects are an opportunity for teachers to introduce and exemplify the expectations of the students---in this case, high expectations. This sneak peek into class life would hopefully prevent unpreparedness from students and help ... | Evidence | Effective |
be1671565fd7 | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | Teachers are the best fit to design summer assignments for students because, unlike teens with only fun and relaxation on their minds who would not take the project seriously, teachers can create an assignment that will prepare the student for the specified curriculum and demonstrate what they expect from them. This sh... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
30e56fc524d3 | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | A student-designed project may sound like a good idea because it opens up the opportunity for students to be creative and show what they know, | Counterclaim | Effective |
e3568d0b0f0b | 9F9FBC5BF6B3 | however, in reality, most students simply will not put enough effort into it. Perhaps if teenagers were more passionate about school during the summer it would work, but until then, teachers remain the best candidate for designing summer assignments. | Rebuttal | Effective |
3e01fea0fb85 | 9FAA72C47BB0 | Mona Lisa, when you hear her name you think of a women that doesnt look fazed at all, she looks like she has no emotion. Mona Lisa does, thanks to studies Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute foe Advanced Science found a way to tell emotion. | Lead | Adequate |
97f2f76f94a3 | 9FAA72C47BB0 | In Paragraph 3 the text states that process begins with 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human. | Evidence | Adequate |
5a58f9992f29 | 9FAA72C47BB0 | In Paragraph 4 the text states the use of Video Imagery is what helps find the emotion new emotion-recognition software tracks thses facial movements. When a friend is feeling down you can tell in there face and how they act around you. when they stops talking your friend might be sad they want to cry or irratated some... | Evidence | Adequate |
77f04ca14b3c | 9FAA72C47BB0 | Science can unlock and find a lot of new things and emotion is one | Position | Ineffective |
74e6b14a9c59 | 9FAA72C47BB0 | be happy and never hide you real emotion cause science will get you. | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
4d09e6e53933 | 9FBD2D259388 | Being able to detect how other people are feeling can be a satisfiying and critical thing to use or to know | Position | Adequate |
11d8af24f4fd | 9FBD2D259388 | When the historical and famous picture that was taken of Mona Lisa famouse painting with her smiling can be a miss lead consuption or an unexpected photo at the time. With the FACS it was able to detect Mona Lisa's expression through the photo. She was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. | Evidence | Ineffective |
4f1905feb223 | 9FBD2D259388 | The FACS isnt able to detect what Mona Lisa was happy, upset, angry, disgusted or fearful at the time. The only thing it was able to capture are her feelings but not towards what she was feeling for. | Claim | Adequate |
78e6562cc40b | 9FBD2D259388 | Being able to know that the person that you are analizing can have certain emotion's towards you or towards others is a good thing | Claim | Adequate |
661ea33797cb | 9FBD2D259388 | If you were to have a significant other or some one that you are intrested in is sending mix signal can be complicated and people wouldn't be able to tell, | Evidence | Adequate |
31b9e97cbd61 | 9FBD2D259388 | it can be usefull but, can also be a disadvatage | Counterclaim | Adequate |
0a1b6f4faa80 | 9FBD2D259388 | There are people who tend to be complicated when they aren't wanting to. It would be easy tp know if there were to be a detected FACS. But how would it be for sure that it was towards that one specific person. For instance in the Mona Lisa picture/painting. | Evidence | Adequate |
23823735ad8c | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | After reading the passage I came to the conclusion that some ways I think it's not valueble | Position | Adequate |
a0462b393e68 | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | FACS would be a smart tool for case workers or counslers | Claim | Adequate |
d5bb50e845ea | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | Some case workers deal with people who have emotion diseases such as post dramaic stress diseases in that nature . I feel like the creator could've made the tool for more serious reason, not that the emotion FACS was pointless but who would want to just find out their emotion and they can already feel it or going throu... | Evidence | Adequate |
36b6a1c7c689 | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | I feel like people would want to find out things more important like , whats going with that person , is the person feeling sick , is the person healthy . FACS could been about how's the day going to go , whats the weather going to be like | Evidence | Ineffective |
c10bb7c23d63 | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | I feel like FACS is all hype in some way because it's basic | Claim | Adequate |
9943a7114332 | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | They took all this time and objects figure how someones doing or feelings , instead of how we're living . Anyone can figure out someone's emotion expresses by their body language , their tone , how their speaking , when their speaking and etc. Often people may not want to speak on how they feel , alot of times teens wa... | Evidence | Adequate |
ebba12c34ba1 | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | Students are diffrent from adults, and also handle emotions diffrently. | Claim | Adequate |
ec5dd131b50c | 9FCF0C8C83C3 | FACS would be valueble if they come with conclusions to that person emotion at the time , plenty of ways technology can do things. If the FACS were a solution to a person with a bad day it would be valueble. Due to the fact their making this like it's a cool invention when FACS is exposing peoples feelings and then wat... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
5d8b4cda5222 | 9FE9D9EB5111 | As the times have progressed, cell phones have become extremely prevalent in the daily lives of many. To add on, cell phone usage has also increased substantially. From playing music in the shower to using phones to keeping daily tasks organized, cell phones have grown to become an essential part of human life. It is h... | Lead | Effective |
1a470ac29959 | 9FE9D9EB5111 | Due to the risks posed by using a cell phone when driving, cell phones use should be banned when operating a vehicle. | Position | Adequate |
2f2ebb2a947b | 9FE9D9EB5111 | To begin, cell phone usage when driving can cause a major distraction to the driver who is operating the vehicle. | Claim | Effective |
4d31e4e666a1 | 9FE9D9EB5111 | All cell phone users can vouch that having a cell phone comes with understanding that there are a plethora of different applications going on within that minuscule device. Loud notifications from social media sites and vibrating text messages from friends and family, even though they may seem important, are all distrac... | Evidence | Effective |
e10c726d87c4 | 9FE9D9EB5111 | Some may argue that cell phone usage should be allowed by drivers when operating a vehicle with certain restrictions. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
fb3cd8abd245 | 9FE9D9EB5111 | However, once drivers feel like they have the go ahead to use their cellphone in any capacity, some may still try to go above and beyond to break the rules. Using a phone at any capacity poses a huge risk for all people on the road. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
057486d9fe48 | 9FE9D9EB5111 | Moreover,using a cellular device in a car is not necessary. | Claim | Adequate |
bc186035344d | 9FE9D9EB5111 | According to a study conducted in 1995, only 13 percent of the United States population owned cell phones. This statistic goes to prove that before cell phones became widely popular; people were able to operate vehicles without it. Some may argue that phones provide GPS services that assist in getting drivers to their ... | Evidence | Effective |
dc6109c7751f | 9FE9D9EB5111 | Lastly, when operating a vehicle in general you have the ability to kill someone due to your attention being impaired. | Claim | Effective |
ff072c53e09a | 9FE9D9EB5111 | When adding a person using a phone while operating a vehicle, the risk of killing someone increases. When operating a cellphone while driving, the drivers eyes can be taken off the road from anywhere to a few seconds to a few minutes. Driving is not a perfect situation. People constantly break,stop, speed up, and slow ... | Evidence | Effective |
3476b414264e | 9FE9D9EB5111 | Cell phone usage when operating a vehicle at any capacity is extremely dangerous. This kind of activity poses a threat to not only drivers themselves but passengers and also other users of the road. Cell phone usage when driving can cause drivers to be distracted which in turn if not careful can cause a car crash that ... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
8267e8b955da | 9FECD0D50903 | i think its dumb and i do not agree because its dumb no one likes extra stuff in school because its boring | Position | Ineffective |
0916810f09d4 | 9FECD0D50903 | extra activities are boring because its to extra because its extra and boring. | Claim | Ineffective |
ec7b4dcb0fdb | 9FECD0D50903 | its boring just because its boring and no one likes it. just because noone likes it . extra activities are boring because its to extra because its extra and boring. its boring just because its boring and no one likes it. just because no one likes it . extra activities are boring because its to extra because its extra a... | Evidence | Ineffective |
49de3432619a | 9FECD0D50903 | there should be less activites and more time for home | Claim | Adequate |
c8c1b7034ed2 | 9FECD0D50903 | because its better for u then school . | Evidence | Ineffective |
584e128c3db1 | 9FECD0D50903 | . if there gonna add a activity it should be for teachers to learn how to teach students | Claim | Ineffective |
d9db7128f5a0 | 9FECD0D50903 | because no teachers accually teach all they do is èoh write this oh write that and ill grade it è they clearly dont know how to teach so they should learn in my opinion like go back to teaching school and thats facts. only teachers ive seen that know how to teach are civics/ history teachers everyone else dosent ... | Evidence | Adequate |
c39958653d31 | 9FECD0D50903 | with a extra activity it makes no sense for that to happen. the principal would just be wasting his time because it would be nothing anyone likes because noone likes school so why have 1 extra thing that just makes no sense . | Concluding Statement | Ineffective |
07b97868e9d7 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | Although summer is considered as a break from school, it is a rather perfect opportunity for students to continue working on assignments in order to keep the ideas they learned over the course of the year fresh in their minds before they head back. To do this, many schools are adopting mandatory summer projects for stu... | Lead | Effective |
113b15e682d5 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | it should be student designed | Position | Effective |
b38171437f35 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | students are more likely to understand their peers' schedule and difficulties in the content; | Claim | Adequate |
ce4b60c61760 | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | Even though many teachers claim that they are very close with their students, in truth, they do not know much about what their students do. During the summer, aside from going on family vacations and other recreational activities, many students have responsibilities like volunteer work, internships, jobs, taking care o... | Evidence | Effective |
cc408395f7bc | 9FFC1CFE7CD9 | With the schedule of a student in mind, the project will be designed in a way that will be evenly spread out content wise, with enough time to complete each assignment. | Claim | Effective |
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