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[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood happy warm This strong caring relationships talked memoir As stated I never forget parents turned simple house home story talked In story talks aroud family people arent blood realative make person happier memoir make reader happier author writing happy memories ll never forget Although simple author put lot deep emotions portrayed story made story deeper mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are always peple saying that aliens are alive and maybe that there is going to be an alien invasion. In 1976, a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) found an image of a peron or as MGS says a \"a Viking photo.\" I believe the image of the Viking is just a landform and it wasn't created by aliens. I will explain to you why i think it's a landform. I believe the image is a just a landform because scientists haven't discovered life yet on mars even though they have found water on Mars. In paragraph 2, the author states, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydnia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah.\" I agree with this statement because if the Martian mesa was made again, that means that they will be around for a long time and it will never disappear. The author also states that people think the image or the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars. By the looks of the images, I could see that every year they have taken it, I can see that it's disappearing. In the introduction, it says, \"New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is is: A mesa.\" If people want evidence of aliens or other creatures, they will have to do research on their spare time because scientists have a job to do and they will only do what they are ordered to do. Just to be clear, when they took the photos of the Face on 1976,1998, and 2001, the technology wasn't as advanced as it is today but, if we take a photo of it today, I believe there will probably be another one of the landfoms or probably we might see the Face but just slowly disappearing. These were some of my reasons to argue with to support my belief of the Face being a natural landform. In conclusion, the image of the Face was just a myth and I will never say it was created by aliens. Aliens aren't even real, that hasn't benn confirmed or said. Not one scientist has said that they have seen a living creature on any planet walking or doing anything. These were just rumors and it can be said as a myth if people want. Based on these reasons, I believe the Face is just a natural landform on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change has always been a debatable issue of countries leaders and a worldwide concern. Some people believe that global warming is unavoidable so that they must learn to live with it, instead of fighting against it. I completely disagree with this statement because the issue would bring about negative effects on the lives of humans and other species. The elimination of global warming is crucial to the masses’ quality of lives because the phenomenon is diametrically harmful to the overall atmosphere. Air pollution would have a negative impact on the job performance and wellbeing of individuals, especially outdoor workers. Constructors or builders have to work under the scorching sun most of the days, therefore extremely hot or cold weather and polluted air considerably lower the task efficiency and the physical health of these workers. Moreover, there are situations where people pass out due to the extreme heat. Therefore, temperature change brings lots of consequences to the human body and life standards. Another reason why we should aim to prevent global warming instead of ignoring it is to preserve biodiversity for endangered animals. As the climate is getting warmer, the icebergs from the North Poles would melt considerably and faster. This would push the life of polar bears and other species to the brink of extinction because their habitats are getting subsequentially smaller. As a matter of fact, the number of these cold-blooded animals would majorly decrease or they could die out from hunger. The near-extinction of these animals proves why we have to prevent this drastic issue as soon as possible. In conclusion, living with global warming is never a sensible option due to the detrimental effects it causes to human and animal lives. I believe that everyone should be more responsible in tackling this global problem and finding possible solutions, rather than being ignorant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The old saying one never judge book s cover comes litteral meaning particular subject Every mind among world extremely different every book One person look upon certain subject offensive others point view However personal opinion books suggestive references language placed sections marked mature clearly labeled warning contents lieing pages With billion different points views residing world books select find inappropriate people removed Every person life story rough experiences Life s journey brings bumps road scare someone deeply change life forever While reading book viewer skim across passage brings horrible experiences swelling back For one relive trauma struggled get nt right another read situation similar particular person s life journey could possibly grant understanding compassion victim I believe victims abuse matter degree read subject book thought reading leisure However books taken shelves people endure struggle able grasp better understanding person Books mature mind monitored placed upon shelf reach child yet handle topic At young age I selected book I thought ghost story Mid way I came understanding book truly young girl age raped As sixth grader I horrified I yet exposed danger world I mature enough handle subject For weeks I walked halls scaared I might fate girl story I read Books mature topics seperated younger childeren description book leave child emotional scares Labeling books clearly suggestive content book contain would help issue tremendously If books clearly labeled contain offensive words comments horrifying situations reader become offended less likely chance grab material If children still developing level maturity come across book mentions inappropriate subjects better understanding view By simply pressing label book states concerns found within pages save world alot harm If books begin fly shelves offensive topics wo nt many books left read Every person takes different look story says every age group comprehends message passages give differently By monitoring labeling books book worms able make quick decision whether material think want read So conclusion nt take away wanders reading enjoy traveling imagination books let know exactly see mosey unknown pages new adventure", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There several obstacles prevented dirigibles docking Empire State Building First dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame The framework strong enough But main reason safety It known foreign dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium highly flammable Things would nt go well incident populated place like New York Also winds causing ship swivel around lead could nt used weigh safety reasons Finally existing law airships flying low urban areas makes illegal dirigible even come close building All reasons contributed docking dirigibles would come many obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore? I cannot see this happening. I cannot see this happening because of three reasons: technology sometimes fail, machines are built to help humans, and technology is unreliable. I believe that driverless cars should not be invented. First, I will be explaining my first reason on why I say that driverless cars should not be invented. In the great tragedy of the Challenger, the technology of that space shuttle failed and it was not an driverless machine. Also, the driverless cars have not been proven to be able to handle certain situations while driving which can cause another tragedy. Next, I am going to explain my second reason on my thesis. Machines are bulit to help humans, for example without the invention of the assembly line would have made the possiblity of modern day cars to be impossible. Also, the invention of automobiles and airplanes were invented to get from one place to another in a quicker fashion than walking or biking. Finally, I am going to explain to you my final reason. Technolgy is unreliable, computers freeze and shut down on their own all the time. There are various examples of technolgy being unreliable. These cars could shut off in the middle of the highway which could causes many deaths or injuries, or even go off the road and crash causing personal injuries. In conclusion, I believe that driverless cars should not be invented. I say this because of the three reasons i provided you with. I believe that it would be an safety hazard, and it will cause conflict between the cars manufacturer and the cars owner.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph know matter said git flower remids used live It stared cry test buy flower cry th spring going grow flower That I think test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowdays people are working harder more then ever and have long working hours. as this has negatively affected their social life and relationship status. this essay will discuss the following factors causing this situation. For a number of reasons people are working hard these days as this can be seen from their long working hours. firstly their is tough working competition as for a single job position thousands of people are competiting and private companies are firing their employes due to performance issues. further business competition are increasing so the organizations are fixing higher targets, big budgets. due to this the working volume tends to increase so employes are forced to do more work taking more hours. secondly, we are living in a that society where people are respected based on their assets and property so people work more hours or work overtime to achieve this all. In todays world people choose to work more as it has negatively affected the family and social life. in many of the case parents abandon their children due to working condition, some of the childrens are feel ignored due to which they they have several health issues, many of them get addicted to video games, even drugs or with bad company. in many another cases long working hours has seriously affected the relationship status of many young couples as many of them are unable to take time for their spouses. as this lack proper interaction between them due to this divorse rate had increased in certain years. furthermore family ties are not very strong as they used to be. now people are living a sedentary lifestyle due to their long working hours they are having very unhealty diet and they are moving less outdoors. In conclusion it is true that people are more determined towards there work on the one hand i could understand as this is due to tough competition but many people does not understand that it is affecting there social and family life due to which depression and divorse rate has increased. as personally i should believe that there should be balance between work and there life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some countries, where people buy places to live instead of building their own houses, it has become a trend to find the past events of the building they are going to buy. This essay discusses some of the causes for this as well as how public can encounter these informations. firstly, if there is any historical value to the place, it will increase the price of the dwelling. Therefore, when reselling, knowing history will come in handy. Some people need a connection to the house where they live in to feel it is their home. For that reason, knowing the narrative will be helpful. For a example, most of horror movies based on a ghost who used to live in that particular building where the main characters chose to inhabit. Therefore, as long as the memoir of the place is innocent community find it easy to live. Moreover, having awareness of when it was build, what materials used, where it has been altered, how the structure was used will prevent unexpected disasters and help with repairs, alterations, and maintenance. secondly, to find out the story about a place, people can use many options. Most of times, old structures are listed in local authorities. Searching property records can be a best options. As well as, nowadays there are online platforms where anyone can obtaion informations about past events. But, the most easy and reliable to find the background of a house is to get information from the residential senior citizens. In conclusion, the majority of young people in this era are prefer to find more about their dwellings, and for that they take support from authorities, online platforms and from human resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a child at the later age become more passionate among the society. They decided to postpone to give birth at an early age due to some purposes. Although this trend have certain benefits, the drawbacks are an edge over. Several benefits are associated with having a baby later age. One of them is, indivuals can set and fix their standard of living in a better way. Many parents want to give a beautiful and luxury lifestyle to their kids, in order to make it happen, they work hard to earn more money. Another reason is, they can easily consider their career life in a proper way. There is no rush to get everything in their life. Consequently, they can achieve enormous goals related to their academic and professional life. On the other hand, this trend has many downsides to be consider. First and foremost, some people are having cut-throat lifestyle, where they can not balance their family and career lifestyle together. As a result, they easily get more depression and anxiety in their whole life. Secondly, if they delay birth of a child, there will be a generation gap between the mother and the baby. In future, it will effect them adversely. For example, my grand parents were got married very early in their teenage time. But my mother has married after 20th and now there is a big interval between me and my grand parents. And ultimately, some women have chance to get health related problem such as, congenital anomalies and they may suffer a lot to conceive in an elderly age. In conclusion, there are many advantages to get pregnant at the later age phase. Such as, Better financial settlement and ensure a high level standard of living. But health conscious issues and generation gab may make them physically and psychologically stress. In my opinion, the disadvantages to this trend far more significant than the upsides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author describes a new technology called Facial Action Coding System, which enables computers to identify human emotions. However, Facial Action Coding System is NOT valuable to students in a classroom for these reasons. It is not really someones buisness or job to be able to read the mind of another student. Reading someone's mind is not beneficial to the person reading it or the person that is getting their mind read. At the end of the day you are just finding out whats on their mind and going back to whatever you were doing. The article talks about how Mona Lisa's face, in reality, is 83 percent happy, 9 percent dusgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. But the question is, who really cares? Nobody is going to change the way they look at that picture any differently wether thay knew how she felt or not. It is just unnecesary and unuseful information. While being able to calculate someones emotions seems to be a useful tool, it is really not. Nobody really cares how Mona Lisa is feeling or what she is thinking, they just enjoy the quality ot the picture; and even if they do care what she is thinking, there isn't much one can do once they find out whats on her mind anyway. Secondly, people try to hide their emotions for a reason. It is not someone else's job to try to find out whats on somebody's mind. If a person wanted to express what's on their mind, then they wouldn't need a machine to to tell somepne for them. They would just be able to express themselves and express how they feel. If they are trying to hide how they feel, then perhaps they don't want people to know how they actually feel. For example, if somebody is deperessed, but they try to hang out with their friends in class to feel better, that person would not want people to read their face and determine that in reality, they are sad and depressed. They could have been trying to put on a happy face to try to cover up how they are feeling, so its wrong to try to read between the lines when the person does not want you too. And that could be the reason why Mona Lisa had such a straight face in that picture: because she did not want people to know what or how she felt. Last, but not least, thereis really no reason in being able to calcuate someone's emotions. After you find out their emotions, then what? You mist likely just go back to what you were doing anyway. No difference is being made by being able to reaso someone's mind. In reality, being able to read someone's emotions is just a way of being nosey becsuse there is nothing that you can really do with that information. In the article, when they read Mona Lisa's emotions, there is nothing that they can do with that information other than tell someone. It is not beneficial in any way to know what Mona Lisa's emotions were. So once they get that information, there is really noting that they can do with it that benefits anybody, thus making it unnecessry to be known in the first place. In conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is not necessary or valuable for reading students' emotional expressions. It is not someone's buisness ot job to try to read the emotions of someone else. It is no use of reading soemone's emotions. And people don't want their emitions to be read; if that was the case then they wouldn't try to hide them. That is why the Facial Action Codig System is not valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are the basis of human nature, emotions make humans- humans. Why should a computer be able to dictate the emotions of students in a classroom? There are more forms of emotions than the six that Dr. Eckman classified. There is more than being able to \"modifly a lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This technology shows no value to the everyday classroom, or everyday life. It does not help with the problems in the classroom and there is no need for an emotion reader when there are 30+ emotion readers in that very room, the students and teachers. To start off, the article states itself that:\"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive “calculation” every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" Humans have the capacity to know the emotions of someone else by looking at them, and even talking to them. These computers can not communicate effectivley with empathy the way people can. A computer is programed to a degree of settings rather than a human brain that has access to every possible feeling and emotion there is. To continue, there are about 25 students in a classroom on average with the ratio of 1 teacher. Dr. Huang states that: \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,[...] Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Many flaws can arrive when this technology is scanning multiple students at the same time. To modify the lesson for every emotion in that classrom would make the lesson more confusing for the students and it would send the technology into a breakdown not having the capacity to handle all of these newfound emotions. An \"effective human instructor\" would be able to provide a simplified lesson to those that struggle while still maintaning the focus of the other students in the class. It has been proven that students memorize and learn better with paper rather than computers, maybe that should be a sign that these technological advances should stay away from the classroom. In conclusion, Dr. Huang stated himself that:\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,[...] So computers need to understand that, too.\" The technology has flaws, the developers knowing that it would not understand many things. Why bring flawed software into classrooms that hold the future of the society? Science cannot keep using these students with uncanny importance to the world as test subjects. Keep the software out, let learning and growing in. \"Can we actually “calculate” emotions—like math homework?\" Yes it is possible, but it should not be the route in which we help education thrive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the most controversial issues today relates to Knowledge. Some people believe accumulating information on the internet has more advantages than disadvantages. In this essay, I am going to examine the question from both points of view and give my own perspective on the matter. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of storing knowledge on the internet outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that internet involves large amount of information. As it is easy to access the internet, numerous people could freely write their ideas and knowledge via internet. For example, nowadays, there are lots of websites that are used on uploading their experiences such as blogs and cafés. In addition, people can exchange their ideas and knowledge by asking via internet. It is also possible to say that learning knowledge through internet can be useful for collecting diverse type of sources. After collecting information through the internet, people can select the type of studying by finding the preferred type of resources. For instance, there are people who prefer auditorial sources. These kinds of people tend to study more effectively by sounds resources such as videos and audios. Therefore, storing knowledge on the internet has more positive effects than negative impacts. On the other hands, it is also possible to say the opposing case. It is often argued that storing information on the internet has more disadvantages than advantages. People often have this opinion since over-flowing information makes people confuse about using right sources. It takes long time to distinguish the proper information which is related to the issue. Moreover, it would waste time by spending too much on separating the resources. According to an American research company, 70% of people believe that internet sources are unreliable to use. The reason for this is that information uploaded on the internet is often not re-examined by the writer. In addition, there are also fake news or biased knowledge which may make prejudice on the issue. Therefore, studying through the internet has more demerits than merits. As we have seen, there is no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that absorbing knowledge via internet still has more constructive effects than detrimental impacts. Since it is easy to access the numerous amounts of information and provides various type of resources. Accordingly, I strongly believe that the advantage of collecting knowledge through the internet is much bigger than the disadvantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mr. Senator I think the presidents should be elected by populer vote. Thats how it was back when our founding fathers first came to have there frist president and thats how it should be now. I mean if we're going to be judged be our peers shouldnt we be elected by them to. When it comes down to it who exactle is voting for us and can we control who we'er voting for and from the evedence shown in \"What's wrong with the electoral college\" no we can't. And no matter who are what we vote for all were doing is expressing a political preference it dosent matter at all to them what we want all they care about is what they want and what they think is best. When it my be best for them but not for the rest of us. If we'er all going to have to live with who wins for the next four years shouldnt we all get a vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story last paragraph shows spring ready retake test It shows like geese care come back time study pass test In story author includes last paragraph truly show dedication eventually grow comfortable new home pass drivers test good time Saeng wants comfortable new life isnt yet one misses But knows go back try like geese often winter This effective way end story really communicated Saengs message dedication longing overcome obstacles new home driving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator, I believe that we should change the electoral college to election to popular vote for the president of the United States. The electoral college is in no way fit to be the basis of how we choose the president of the United States. This country was based of of popular soverignty and we should keep it the way that it always has been with all the decison makeing done be the people. The electoral college is an overwhemingly unfair system to voters. The canidents will not spend any of their time in states they know will not win because of the winner take all system in each state. they only focus on the tight races and some of the states dont even get to see the campaign ads. Some of the states did not even see the candidates at all. The electoral college is essentially one of the most unfair things in the prospect that the candidates dont spend time in the states that they dont think will win and the states that they know wont win are not even privillaged enough to see the campaign ads. In addition to being unfair the electoral college can cause serious damage. The electoral college have the power to go against the will of the people. Back in the '60s segregationists in the Louisiana legislature were almost successful in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would not vote for John F. Kennedy. Also during that time some electors would occasionally vote for whomever they please and not vote for their party's candidate. If the electoral college were to ever go into a tie it would be given to the House of Representatives. During this time the the states representatives will be cating thier votes on behalf of thier state. The problem with that is that those representatives are voting on behalf of thier entire state and that means they are voting for who they want and acting like that it is something the entire state wants. There are five \"offical\" benifits of having the electoral college. The benifits are certainty of outcome, everyone's president, swing states, big states, and you avoid run-off election. All of these things are in fact true but what if you are willing to risk all of that just to be able to be the one who has a say in who becomes president. I know that they kind of do but in reality that does not really mean much if there is someone who is going to completly disregard my vote and do whatever he feels like doing. I know that all of those five benifits are important but isnt my right to have a say in whose president important as well? Senator, the reason for my letter is that I want to have a say in who the president is going to be and the electoral college resticts that. I believe that the president of the United States should be elected by popular vote because this is America and in America we do what the people want and the people want change. We want the electoral college out and popular vote in. Sincerely, A concerned citizen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A crash happens. What is it? It is a driverless car. These cars are not a very good idea at all. I am sure many people can agree with me on this. The cars sound like a good idea in some ways, but there are more ways that they sound like an accident just waiting to happen. If the car will drive itself, that means that it has a mind of itself. Things that have a mind of theirself can be a very bad thing. Human drivers have been driving for over seventy-five years and have always been safe for most of the time. Many people are very good drivers and drive their car on their own. I do not think that driverless cars should ever happen. It is just a bunch of accidents waiting to happen and a bunch of money waiting to be wasted. How do we, the people, know that that car will not malfunction and run us off of the road and hurt our kids or our family? We do not want that to happen to us. I think that it will be very hard to prove these cars are safe and reliable. A lot of people have fun driving their own car and would much rather drive than sit back and watch the road from the passenger seat. The car company's who are making these cars will also probably ask an outragious amount of money for these cars. If they do ask a ton of money for these cars, not many Americans will buy their vehicle. Most Americans do not have the money to afford a super expensive car that may end up killing them. Many people may ask the companys how they know that their car will not malfunction. The companys will probably not know that because anything can malfunction at any time. What happens when the cars computer crashes and the car runs off the road? What happens when someone hacks into your cars computer and tries to run your car into something and tries to get you killed? These cars are all just bad ideas and bad things just waiting to happen. I think that if these cars do become a major production in the United States, people will start to rely on the car way to much which could also cause many, many wrecks. Also, the roads in towns and cities are always chinging and are always under construction. These cars will not be able to keep up with all of the changing of every single road in the world. The car is said to have a whole lot of sensors in the car so that the car could always read where you are and what the car needs to do. What happens when those sensors go bad? Also how often do you have to replace those sensors and how much are they to replace? These cars are not a very smart or safe thing to buy. They are just an accident waiting to happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are Diverless Really Diverless? Did you ever have a machine ruin your food before? Has a meachine ever giving you the wrong amount of change back at the grocery store? Well, that is what it would be like to have driverless cars. Cars driving themselfs sounds really effecient, but is it really? I don't think that the driverless cars would be very safe. The car still needs assistance, the car can't have good judgement, and it is limited on things it can handle. This machine is limited on what it can do by itself. It will only be able to handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph. It can only steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. If anything else goes wrong the machine will notify the human. The driver will have to remain alert, like they are actually driving, and wait for the \"driverless\" car to notify them. Can we even call it a driverless car, if it is constantly notifying us, \"to take the wheel\" so to speak. The car can't have good judgement, simply because it is a machine. Sadly, that is what driving is, making good choices off of your judgement. That is why the car needs to notify you for your help to guide the machine. The driver has to make the choices, and navigate through tricky obstacles. These cars won't be able to navigate through tricky obstacles. It can not make life or death decisions, even with the abundant amount of sensors and cameras it has incorperated in it. Since the car still needs a diver in it, it has notifiers to get the attention of the driver. If the driver isn't alert, and the notifiers don't work, that person might die. So, even if we make laws for these cars the death rate will go up. People will die because this car isn't actually \"driverless.\" This is why there is a minority of states that will allow diverless cars. Tipically, diverless cars sound effecient, but it will do more bad than good. It isn't necessary. It's a luxury. The machine is limited to what it can do by itself. The car can't make good life or death decisions for you. It will be that machine that ruins your food, or the machine that gives you the wrong amount of change back and it could cost you your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I strongly believe computers bad society My reasons people spending much time computers less time exercising lose interacting family friends My first reason think computers bad society people spending much time I know get home school computer think go It s like addiction People spend time social net work going meeting new people My second reason people spend less time exercising Ive friends house play computer games instead enjoying nature outside Alot nt make healthy food choices go exercise It s computer Ive seen little brother spend whole saterday eating front computer playing games It s unhealthy My last final reason takes time away family friends ive spent whole day school room computer It s like computer nothing else matters think hey talk friends myspce facebook lose lot friendships like Also lose friendship family badly talk computer Half time im busy talking someone nt know helping little brother home work helping mom clean house In conclusion three reasons think computer bad sivilization I really hope take consideration really think computer I people three resons one people spending much time computer Two spend less time exercising Three lose interactions family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on this smart car idea is that yess it would be cool to have.But i feel like it has quiet a few flaws. Lets talk about some of the flaws. There are maney flws like how is a computer suposed to know speed limit signs how will they know that there is a flooded bridge that they cant get across there are so maney factors. The article also stated that it isnt ready yet and that it cant drive you everywhere that if it is over 25mph you have drive. They also stated that it will alert you when you need to take over. Well what if you feel asleep and you dont know you need to take over.Lets say it can predict when you are asleep and stuff the car cant just stop whare it is at and not move. I also state the smart car will never be safe until we make the rodes smart to like that is the only way assure everyones safty to me this all makes no since. What happenes in a stuation ware a fuse or something blows will the car just stop.No it cant just stop right away.So what will they do and also how much will something like this cost.Lets say it is safer how will anyone afford this smart car if it is too exspinsive. There are soo many flaws in this i am not saying they cant be worked out all i am saying is that there are to many to fix by 2020 if they rush it. It will not be safe. So my side of this hole thing is that i think they should not have smart cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology industry is booming. First the invention of video chat, then phones that only weigh a few ounces, what could be next? According to Prof. Thomas Hung, the future of technology is known as the Facial Coding System. This system is highly advanced, and can provide assistance in the classroom, but does it seem a bit invasive? Prof. Hung along with many other highly intelligent people, have created a facial emotion recognition device. This device can be used in classrooms to assist learning students. The technology has the ability to read a persons face and determine whether they are confused, and need more guidence to understand the material, or if the student is on track and understands the lessons being taught. All of that information can be determined through the Facial Action Coding System. The computer becomes aware of how the students are doing regarding their school work, then assists them accordingly, so that they may thrive in the classroom. The software measures a variety of facial movements and emotions, which help the device to draw conclusions about the person and what educational material they either understand or do not. The new technology could be beneficial to many, especially because it provides a one on one learning expirence, which generally helps many children. The learner may convey some emotions that the teacher may not have the ability to read because he/she has an entire class to tend. The personalized and alert server may help students to develop a better understanding of the material being presented in the classroom. This new form of tehcnology may be beneficial to many young learners, however it is incredibly invasive. It seems like everyday there is new technology which allows for less privacy. Dr. Huang claims that, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, so computers need to understand that, too.\" The world is constantly advancing, but technology and computers are not people. People are given a gift which allows them to communicate with others when they are upset, happy, etc. When someone is having a bad day or their relative just died, is their computer going to be there to give them a hug, and say, \"Everything is going to be alright.\" The answer is no. The students in the classroom generally recognize that there is something wrong with the person, and comfort them. If stdents are sat in front of a screen all day, trying to learn, they will lose their people skills. Computers can only do so much. Human intercation is still a vital part of society, and trying to uliminate it is not beneficial for anyone. Computers cannot be CEO's or interview someone for a job. There are certain things that people need to do on their own, otherwise they will lose the skills necessary for life, such as communication and emotional support/recognition. This new technology is incredible. Having the ability to access such an advanced system is amazing and beneifcial to young learners. However, everything should be consumed in moderation. If there is too much consumption of technological usage, then the vital people skills that almost every person possesses will be uliminated from the world. This advancement, known as the Facial Action Coding System, can do just that to the world. If there is an overuse of the technology, then there may be some problems accompanied with the advancement. However this is an amazing new way to incorperate learing into technology. As long as this does not consume the learining field, but encourages success, it seems like an amazing oppourtunity, and a great way to to advance learning in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are in belief of evaporating the idea of having the Electoral college. A Gallop poll taken in 2000 shows that citizens would rather have a direct election. As a member of the United States you must think of all the posibilites. Yes, the electoral college was once a great process, but now there are some changes are in need of being made. The electoral college is a process in which we select electors. This long and dragged out procedure is many steps that take months to prepare for. First, there must be a selection of the electors which are chosen by the states. Then the meeting must be planed and taken place. Who and why is a hard aspect to decide on voting day for those who have been chosen to be the electors. Votes for president and Vice President must be made. After voting the counting beings. The Electoral College has a total of 538 members. Over 270 votes must be made to elect the President. This process can easily be shortend by using a direct election. By having a direct election everyone's voice is heard. This means less arguing in the states. Citizens enjoying believing their thoughts are not being avoided. Having the Electoral College taking place is highly unwanted in the US. This is because the people believe a direct vote is more efficient way for them to show who they believe is worthy of being President and Vice President. Each candidate running for office retains a group of electors from a state. These electors are normally chosen by the candidate's political party. This means if a person doesnt like the electors chosen they feel like they still dont have a say of what is going on in the presidential election. In conclusion, The Electoral College is no longer a process citizens enjoy. This procedure is too long and citizens dont encourage it. Many people believe that this branch of government feels they will lose more power if the Electoral College is given up on. Using a direct election will spare the arguments and will allow us to have an easy and manageable process in which to vote on our leading man.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that scientists should let this be and discontinue it. It's kind of messed up how our world has become. Now they're making it so computers can practically read our minds. Everyone wonders why the world is the way it is nowadays. It is simply because of technology. Why don\"t we stop relying on technology to do stuff for us? This is why kids grow up to be lazy and spoiled because everything is already done for them. Why don't people get out and off of a screen to somewhat learn how to read others' emotions without relying on technology? This is the most pathetic article I've ever read, and I've read a lot of stupid stuff, especially from ISTEP. The whole thought of a computer being able to detect your emotions is kind of creepy. In a classroom? Why are we even using computers in a classroom? Why do we have teachers if everything we learn is off of a computer? Also, just because someone's facial expression shows something, it does not mean that is truly how they are feeling. I think everyone can relate to that. I'm not putting any \"evidence\" in this paragraph because I already wasted 5 minutes of my life reading it once. I'm not too fond of this idea. It's really stupid. I think that people need to spend less time on their screens and more time in the real world. I could care less about a computer being able to adapt to my emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If driveless cars are comming in the future I dont know how i will feel about it. Growing up i never seen or even thougth abut driveless cars untill i was a teenager, i just thought about the cars now and days and is these the only cars that we will see in the future. I can't imagine it calling for a taxi if im far away and just getting in a car with no one in there, it would just be wierd, but it will be something that it will just be someting that i have to get used to. When i started to get older i did used to think about driveless cars because i started to see them in television shows and movies, and i also thought how it would change the world forever. Some part i wouldnt trust it, if you really think about it self driving cars it sounds alittle dangerous. You have to really do alot of things while your driving, you have to use everything in your environment i just think if you made a driveless car you shouldnt have to worry about crashing or even tinking about it. If they did made a driveless car it should be able to drive whenever and wherever and more than just half a million miles without crashing i think you should be able to drive how long as you want. Then details say that half a million miles without a crash, so does that mean that every half a million miles you are going to crash. I just dont know i think it will look very cool but the only thing that matters is that does it drive well is it really safe its alot of things that can happen. I do like that the detals in the passage say that if you want to take over the wheel you can take over whenever you wanted. Like i was saying you have to really pay attention when your driving from the cuts and turns and also the bad traffic and then a driveless car, a car doesnt even have a brain it a vehicle not a living thing but one thing i do like is all of the alerts and sensors that the car have to protect you. Yes a drivless have good things but also could have some very bad things. Thats just like in a few states like California, Nevada, Florida and Columbia all of those states dont really allow you to use semi-autonomous cars they care about your safety. They just dont think it is safe because you are not driving the car, the car is driving by itself, there many good and bad things about this were just going to see what it is going to be like when it happens. Just like it say in the passage says if someone gets injured whos fault is the driver or the manufacturer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to be a cowboy like Luke, the cowboy who rode the waves over the Atlantic. Luke has fun on almost every trip. Luke plays games on the ships during the trip with the other cowboys. Luke and his friends can play too. Luke and the cowboys played things games like baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing,reading, and more. Luke just doesnt get to have fun, but he does get to explore things during his trips like getting the chance to visist oher countries. Lukes job is pretty fun although it can be very dangerous. Luke has to stay up through the night sometimes no matter what the weather is and watch and take care of all of the animals on board. That part doesnt seem so dangerous does it? The dangerous part is being careful of where you go and where you step. One night luke was on the ship taking care of the animals and accidentaly slipped and almsot slid off the ship and fell in to the dark, deep Atlantic ocean. He was very happy to still be alive, but he still broke his ribs and couldnt work for a while. So over all Luke has a great job as working as a cowboy, you will get some of the only one chance in a life times adventures and decisions even though his job is still pretty dangerous. So would you like to be a cowboy like Luke? I surely would.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In past few decades, there's been transition from stone age to industrial age to information age. This evolution has not only improved the life of the people but also has made it easy. Similarly, introduction of robots will not only endorse advancement in living standards but also ensures easy life accompanied with speed and accuracy. But it also has some adverse effects of making people more lazy and dependent. So, let's scrutinize the pros and cons of robots in detail.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do people right limit freedom Do people right limit imagination Do people right limit self expression Many people today s world think Book censorship big deal world today Weather books deemed offensive taken libraries serious issue Censoring books limits self expression also limits knowledge constitutional right free speech I believe people able censor books Censoring book like putting limit human imagination All life people urged think outside box We told kids unique diffrent good thing We told yet writers express themselfs books people told think outside box want censor thoughts By censoring books telling world imagination bad thing Many people want censor books children read offensive matterial They feel taking books feel offensive libraries sheild child bad things world This case People able censor books one censor life Children learn offensive things without books Book censorship limits knowledge At time written The scandels book Because laungauge book used many people thought trash Many people wanted censored Today The famous classic book In fact I required read school Regardless language book used shows part history And think people back would removed form libraries I likely would never read book I would never knowledge I gained reading book It constitutional right write read books choose America built idea freedom Under constitution garentied freedom speech By taking books libraries limiting freedom speech No one alowed tell ca nt read book want read No one alowed tell ca nt write book want write If start censoring books writers forced censor personal thoughts Making writers limits thier freedom speech If freedom speech limited freedoms also limited years come Book censorship censorship gernal good thing limit things If start censoring books giving messege children diffrent bad If freedom speech limited long untill rights limited Where end Before removing even first book shelf need ask ourselvees right limit freedom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist physically The want California desert canes cyclist became tired dehydrated For example another states I cased past trying keep balance dehydrated star The setting main factory causes cyclist become dehydrated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary world, people have many routes to choose to develop themselves. Some of them are in favor of working or travelling instead of attending university’s lectures. There are many merits and demerits of working instead of learning. First of all, people may find schools and universities are theoretical and costly. Some cannot afford the cost of 4 to 5 years of studying. As a result, some students leave school and start finding a job. They can gain practical experiences while working. Secondly, those students can soon become financially independent. However, because of lacking qualifications, the occupation they found will be manual jobs with minimum wages and no prospect of promotion. Also, in this era of modernization, manual labour will soon be replaced by machinery. On the other hand, pursuing higher education will bring more benefits. When people attend universities, they will probably end up with a bachelor’s degree, which is a requirement for professional jobs with high salaries and chances of promotions. So, the investment in higher education will offset the amount spent on tuition fees. Despite the less exposure to practical experience, students can still gain practical experience through internships in big companies. Besides, college life can be an opportunity to meet and connect with different individuals as well as enlarge their network, which will be of great assistance in their future careers. In conclusion, we cannot bear the advantages that leaving school and having a job has but there are still a lot more to take into consideration when studying higher education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the epoch of industrialization, nature has been damaged due to our overuse of resources. Nevertheless, to the best of my knowledge, I believe there are lots of methods to cope with this issue. There are two primary causes that can be attributed to environmental degradation. Firstly, the production of goods is most dependent on nonrenewable power. In fact, oil and fossil fuels are imperative in maintaining the energy for vehicles to run and machines to operate, though these release a huge amount of pollutants, leading to climate change. Secondly, nylon is disseminated throughout shops and restaurants by our unawareness of this impact on the environment. In fact, nylon has a chemical structure that is difficult to recycle in the very short term; however, it is overproduced by the needs of consumers. As a result, nylon is not recyclable and harmful to nature. To solve this problem, people of all strata must join hands together to reach great levels of success. For example, the government should practice renewable resources, such as wind and solar power in that these are clean energy and healthy for nature. Furthermore, the producers should exhort the use of other alternatives besides nylon. Taking some big company as an example, McDonald campaigns the shift from polyester fibre to paper straws in each of its agencies around the globe. Therefore, they are successful in reducing this great waste to outside nature. In conclusion, factories and individuals are the main factor in the environment dying down, but we can address this difficulty by enforcing appropriate methods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming in the near future. There is debate for whether or not we should allow them on the public roads. People say that driverless cars are perfectly safe and that it can save the amouont of gas used currently by a lot. I think that we should allow driverless cars because they can reduce the amount of driving related accidents, car companies are already planning to release them to public consumers on specific times, and we can reduce the amount of gas used. Driverless cars can reduce the amount of car accidents and reckless drivers. The driverless cars use sensors so it makes it safe for the drivers. Sensors are already being used on cars, for example, the Toyota Prius uses sensors on the left rear wheel,a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, and more sensors. The sensors are very advanced so they can detect and respond to danger faster than a human. The sensors can tell the car to apply brakes with a better response time and control than a human could possibly do. Sensors are only getting more advanced so it can only get safer in the future, and it is perfectly safe to use them on driverless cars. Some people may say that it is possible that a sensor fails to work or technology can get messed up, but the chance is rare and it would cause far less car accidents than if a human had full control over the wheel. The smart cars still allow control from the human and the car alerts the human if they and the car are in danger, so if something were to happen, the human could take control and try to stop it. The car still allows people to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. The Google car announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. GM made driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. Google has been testing driverless cars since 2009. Some companies are also considering using cameras to watch the drivers to make sure that they are alert and paying attention in case something happens where the human would need to take control. There has been over half a million miles on them and no crashes so far so it is perfectly safe to the consumer to use. The driverless cars can also be used to reduce the amount of gas used today by a lot. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, said that the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. People spend a lot of money on gas and it is expensive so if we can reduce that amount by half, then people can use that money they're saving on more important things and can possibly improve our economy. Companies are already planning for the future. Car companies are making driverless cars and have set dates to when they will be available to consumers. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan for the release of driverless cars by 2020. Driverless cars are in the future and companies have already planned for them, they are perfectly safe, and they can reduce the amount of spending money on gas. Driverless cars can do way more than they can do bad, and the bad is no worse than what is going on now so we should get ready for driverless cars in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The seagoing cowboys program is a fun program. You get to travel all over the world. You would get to see the excavating castle in Crete. It is very fun traveling all over the world. You would be in a boat that crosses the atlantic ocean. you would go to Europe and China. The cattle boat would take you to Greece to see the Acropolis. But this whole trip is to help people. You will also go to Venice, Italy. You would also cross the panama canal,which was very fun. If you go on this trip you would start off a watchman. So every hour you would have to check up on the animals and report back to the captian. There would be a lot of hay to feed the horses. You can also play games on the ship when there is no horses. The favorite game I played was baseball. But there are lots of other games to play. their are nine trips in total. This trip is a very fun and their is a lot of things you can do. The most impotant thing on this whole trip is helping the people. You got to take care of the animals. If you come onthis trip it will take some time to go to the other places. I really hope I convinced you to come on this fantastic trip.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Politicts have been around for centuries; politics were made to keep the peace and give everyone a fair expresion to the people. We have all herd of people in political standpoint have been corrupt, but what if our own voting system was corrupt and our votes have never made a diffrence in selecting a president by the people. When we vote for our selected president is it really going to change or make a diffence on who gets elected... right? \"of course it will make a diffrence.\" As long as your states electors dont choice by who they feel is the best fit for presidency. On another note what about the Electoral college votes. Why does one canidate always get all the electoral college votes from one state? Why cant we just revert to how many votes the canidate gets? When getting down to the nitty-gritty bits of the Electoral College voting system it is a bit unfair in the ways it works in a whole, but that doesnt mean we have to abolish it and start over. The Electoral College voting system has worked for many years. In stead of just getting rid of the Electoral voting system maybe we should tweek it in a bit that makes everyone happy and makes it completly fair. Each state picks how it gives its Electoral votes, but in most states its a \"winner takes all.\" When a state desides its going to be a \"winner takes all\" state, that means when voting all the Electoral votes will go to the canidate with the most amount of elector votes. Instead of using the winner takes all system each electoral votes should be given fairly. When electors votes for its canidates by the people that single Electoral vote should go to that canidate. When doing this people are in-tern voting for there canidate. Now that they Electoral votes are being distubuted evenly there is a smaller problem we face. Electors are the people who actully vote for our presidential canidate. Very rarely do these electors not choose the canidate based on the amount of votes they have been given, but it does happen. The electors are in a way chosen randomly but most of the time are chosen by the presidential canidate. Often these canidates do the right thing and vote based on votes gifen to him by the public. When these electors vote they are not well regulated. What we should do is have a sort of security system that alows us the make sure our electors do the right thing. instead on relying on someones trust worthyness we should have a system that counts the publics votes. When the elector is done with his final vote we would then see if he voted based on public votes. We the people are faces with another way of voting. We can vote for whatever canidate we please and when done with we will see how many people voted for each canidate, and whoever has the most wins right? This system would most likely give one the canidates an unfait advantage. When Romney and Obama went head to head in 2012 obama won because the amount of Electoral votes, but if we did it by the number of votes it would have been almost completly tied in votes. since Romeny was born in the south most likely each state in the south would vote for Romney. Since Obama was born in Hawiia there is no state near Hawiia that would have the same oppinion. So when using just plain votes one canidate would most likely have an unfair advantage based on the size and populating of each state going for that presidential canidate. When suming it all up the Electoral College voting system is in a way a bit unfair, but when using the method given each Electoral vote would be given fairly instead of a winner takes all system. When going for just plain voting it would most likely turn out unfair or a lot of tied runnings. When given the facts the Electoral College is fine as it is but can be unfair and that is why we should use this method in the next following elections.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The book Home The Blueprints Lives Narciso Rodriguez memoir describes home grateful towards The author gratefu parents work toward house much time parents used order make auther homeland The declorations home amazingly done perfection My young parents creates traditional Cuban home heart kitchen paragraph Shows much love time sacerfice parent put achieve amazment It hard order turn one simple house home paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You have to join Seagoing Cowboys! This gives you a chance to trave around the world. It also give you a change to make a diffrence, and help people in needed. You can go to places like China,Philipines,Germany,Eupore,and South America. You can visit all this wonderful places if you join the Seagoing Cowboys. You have a chance to save life. You can be the diffrence bewteen life and death to some. You can meet the native peple of forein lands. You can try diffrent foods and meet new people! The chances are endless! You can see things you never seen, and learn things you never known. This can all happen if you join Seagoing Cowboys. Like I said \"Beside's helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and Chine.\" You can have fun and help others at the same time. People in other countrys need our help. That's why we need more people. That's why we need people like you!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think they should change the electoral college to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. The electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 votes is required to elect president. Your states entitled allotment of electors equals the # of members in its congressional delegation: one for each member of the House of Representatives plus 2 Senators. Each canidate running for president has his/her own group of electors. They are chosen by the canidate's political party, but state laws vary on how they're selected and what their responsibilities are. The presidential election is held every 4 years. Most states have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning of the presidential canidate. In the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. The electoral is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator, The Electoral College is ruining everything that our fore fathers have worked for! When Americans vote, the majority believe that they are voting for the President of their choice, instead they are voting for a group of people, who will hopefully vote for the candidate they had wanted. The Electoral College is wrong for many reasons, but I'll narrow it down to two for you; People are voting for electors, not the president and electors might not choose the President based off Popular vote. First, The Electoral College is wrong because voters are voting for electors not the President. When voting there are two groups of people voting for the President; the People and members of the Electoral College. Members of the Electoral College are actually choosen by state legislatures, meaning that their can be a point in time where the statre legislature chooses to pick a certain group of people based off of their political party. In 1960 the state legislature almost replaced the electors from the Democratic party; meaning that even if most people voted for Kennedy (the president at the time) he would still not be elected because electors would not vote for someone who was not apart of their party. It's happen before, so who's to say that it won't happen again. Second, electors may or may not choose the President based off Popular vote. Even though if we did base the presidental election off of Poplular vote people might vote based off of region, meaning that most people in the south would vote for someone like Romney, but we have to consider that not everyone in the south would vote for one person. Also it is also true that it electors rarely vote against the Popular vote, but it is possible that the majority of the 538 electors will vote against the people. In conclusion, The Electoral College should be terminated because People are voting for electors, not the president and electors might not choose the President based off Popular vote. In 1960 the state legislature almost replaced the Electoral group, meaning that the Popular vote would'nt even matter against the Electoral College. Also the Electoral College may acknowledge the Popular vote, but still vote for a different candidate. If you do choose to help me terminate the Electoral College, I say we try to get help from the guy who actually played the \"Terminator\" I heard that he is part of the government system in California now so he could probably help us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I use patience driving It minivan mom dad baby sister NUM months aunt We van hours By time got hotel ocklock time I tired patient Im patient person mom proud great I baby crying stuck one place hours It difficult outcome great", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you wanna take care of horses,young cows,and mules? Well if you do,Join the Seagoing Cowboys in taking our adventure ot help people anad places bombed in World War ll. When Luke and Don were traveling over seas in the Seagoing Cowboys,They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, Headed for Greece. The cargo was 335 horses and enough oats to feed all the horses. Before arrivingt in Greece,Luke turned 18, Which back then meant that Luke could be drafted for military service. A couple years later he was discharged,Luke had made nine trips,The most of any Seagoing Cowboy ever. The cattle boat trips were an unbelieveable experience for Luke being a small town boy. Before helping anyone he had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. But Luke also got to see the Acropolis in Greece and taking a gondola ride in Venice,Itlay. Luke also toured at the evacuated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China. It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern United States and a month to China. Caring for the animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They had to eat and give the animals water three times a day. Bales of hay and oats had to be pulled from the lower ship. The stalls had to be cleaned.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" One nation under god\", they say, so why do we still have other people determine our nations future? we should be able to have say over our country, atleast when it comes to picking the president. Yeah, We vote for the Electorals that are going to vote for our president, but how do we really know if they are. There are alot of schemes now a days regarding the government, our Electorals can just get paid off to promote one president but then vote for another. On source 2 \" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong\" Bradford plumer says\" Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong canidate? Sometimes.\" I mean not only is the Electoral college unreliable but it is also confusing to some. At the end of the day even if we have some say in picking our president if he doesn't have enough electoral votes, he is still going to lose. It doesn't even matter if we vote anymore. On source 2 \"what's wrong with the electoral college?\" Bradford explains \" in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the demcratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kenneddy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.)\" This, is what I mean by unreliable, we can't trust our Electorals, we should be able to vote directly! who we want as our president and not some shady second party. Another thing i would like to address in source 3 \"Big States\" Richard says \" A large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state doess...\" Exactly, if we do popular votes, candidates can just go to states and try to win them over as oppossed to Electorals taking claim of one state . Also if we approve popular votes, that one smalll state , could just make a difference on who wins so in other words, every state counts and every vote counts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reading the emotional expresssions of students in a classroom is not valuable. It would be nice if we give the students some privacy maybe they can actually focus better. The reason why I think it's bad if we look at the students emotions is that we not giving them privacy to let them do what they want. If you give them a math test and they didn't pass the math test knowing the technologies is watching their emotions their going to be more nervous. A lot of students will not do good on their test. Their test scrore will decrease. Parents will be concerns abot their kids not passing their class and the principals will be in trouble. If only the technology where to help see their emotion on certain test and assissments their not good at and maybe the teachers or the consulors couuld help them do better on those things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello my name is Mr. Baker with NASA, and we are discussing the landform that looks like a face on mars. This is a landform not an alien marking. There are known to be little life of aliens. In fact this landform looks a lot similiar to a natural landmark in Idaho. But over the last eighteen years scientists at NASA has been studying this landmark for all of this time. There is no more evidence that it was an alien. Because there is not a body for this creature unless the planet covered it up and made the body into ashes. This landform is very unique. It looks like a face but over the years the picture does not look the same. Perhaps it was a alien or something extraordinary. But over the caorse of time the landmark has built up to look like a face. The pictures from 1998 look way different because of the technology of then and now. If you look real closely to the pictures you can tell that over the time period that the landform turned from a bunch of scattered dust into a pile that looks like a face, but it is actually not. Reaserchers say this could be an alien, but I belive not because not one person has found an alien that was alive. Aliens have been a myth for quite some time now and no one has really ever seen one. Mars is a landform that is made up of a bunch of different materials and minerals. Over time there could have been some solar wind and some of the landform blew away and made it look like a face. From what the photos show people is a face that looks like a human or some kind of life form, and in 1998 the photo shows that it looks like an egyptian pharaoh. But over time the land mass has changed so if we waited even longer it will change over time. And over the coarse of another decade or so it will be changed. Or if the land mass was touched it might break up the loose materials and the landform will be different. So at the NASA corperation they study the material and the evidence real close. It might be proven to be a land mass or another source of life somewhere else. But for all we know right now it is a landmark until someone has proof it is wrong information. So NASA will keep studying the information they have. Also NASA is trying to develop more information about this landmark. But until then this is known to be a landmark. So until then this meeting is pronounced over.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Public spaces are an important asset in our cities. They provide good opportunities to come together and engage the community. I personally agree with this viewpoint for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs. To begin with, I strongly believe that the accessibility of the public open-air area is comfortable. This includes how welcoming in and feel relaxing when people spending quality time outside their houses or workplaces. Some public outdoor area provides good seating in them so they can be enjoyed and chatted with a neighbour. For example, Darling Harbour in Sydney city provides a big space near the beach on weekend to involve people participating in activities and meeting new people or old friends. Additionally, this is the ability for people to be themselves in the public realm. One of the public joys of going to public space is so that people can express themselves fully. They might be showing their potential for sports outdoor, painting canvas. Public art tends to create a very comfortable atmosphere for people to express their true selves and interact with the objects while bringing out the best in people. The Townhall centre is a great example where people are comfortable to express themselves. In conclusion, large public open-air should be a values asset where cities embrace the concept of creating more vibrant and welcoming spaces for every to use. This can also be a powerful way to create more positive environments for people to assimilate and come together as a society as described above.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, getting to know more about the history of the accommodation where people live in become gradually more interesting with them. It is true that there are some causes why above trend happens. Firstly, it is the demand on having more appealing object to make a colour lives, because currently, the living standard of citizens is getting better day by day. For instance, they do not need to worry much about the livelihood. With the development of economy today, one person can be easy to have a job to adapt their living. Moreover, when someone finds something as unknown, they usually have the orient to look into the closest stuff with them, and their house would be the best. In addition, researching information about the building where individuals lives on becomes easily. It might be through their neighbors, because they could know a lot of stories happening around their house. However, the first option to find information chosen would be through the internet. This way is the most popular to most of people in the present, because all of them would have at least one digital device by side them. For example, when one person would like to know the famous news in a specific place, searching on google would be the first behave appearing in their mind, especially young adults. And then, they will go to with other ways. In conclusion, with above causes and the convenience to explore information, individuals are more excited to find the old stories of their living place is tremendously understandable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA found a Face on Mars but was it really a face of someone or something? I think its just a regular rock that was probably hit a couple times so now its looks simular to a face of something and The passage states that it was a \"hugh rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" This shows that it's just a rock that looks like a face. If there was an real body or body part or something then I would believe there is life on Mars. I don't think anyone should believe things that they see and can't prove. The passage says that \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL wed site, revealing... a natural landform.\" This show that there wasn't any Face on the landform in Mars. These details shows that the picture of the Face that NASA to a shot of wasn't a real a Face and was a conspiracy theory. That probably was the real reason NASA had tried to hide it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals vist different libraries world everyday Some books magazines movies Everyone different taste libary go absolutley everything Libraries kinds amazing different books It people ages go find books materials would like read use research There limits books movies magazines ect shelf Everyone different beliefesfeelings would like read see If libraries starting limitting options nt think would much business people would read much Which means indivudal s could go Reading helps everyone world learning new vocabualry excersizing eyes By taking away someone s intrest wo nt read much feel free Just someone doesnt like something mean next person wo nt If book movie ect offensive someone simply read watch No one right take someones mind interested However limmiting age groups certian items would horrible idea Books offensive approiate young child aloud seen checked young child mean take away others", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article scientists will be debating about risking everything and getting nothing or not risking and missing everything. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", scientists are debating about risking a lot or finding new forms of life in a new planet. Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger. The author supports this idea by persuading the reader describing the amazing features the planet has. Venus is one of the most Earth-like planets in the galaxy that is why scientists are discussing further visits to it's surface. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth\" (Author 4). When the author describes the planet and says that it could have some of the features that Earth has and it could have supported some forms of life, it supports the idea that this planet should be explored by persuading the reader to have an idea that Venus could have life just like Earth. The author names the dangers that exploring this planet could have and then he describes the amazing features it possesses. These dangers are the reason why no more explorations have happened since three decades ago, but they keep thinking about the advantages exploring it may bring. \"Each previous mission was unmanned , and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\" (Author 2). When the author names the disadvantages that exploring Venus may have, the reader does not think that it may be a good idea to risk trying to explore the planet, but then he describes the incredible Earth-like features that only this planet has among the rest, which persuades the reader to have an idea of how good it would be for the universal development if they would find life in a new planet. The evidence connects to the the thesis statement by proving and supporting the idea that studying Venus is worth it despite the dangers. Sometimes, people are just very afraid of risking and loosing everything, but we should only be afraid of not risking and missing amazing rewards.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patience times class I patience I dont lot patiences I patiences block block moth We students talks time He talks till luch wich half hour So I wait till gives us work That I patiences To conclude I patience class Though I dont lot patience class I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Discover Venus's planet Venus is the second planed from planet.Venus sometime called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightes point of light in the night sky.Hovwe this nickname is misleading snice Venus is actually a planet. what is the georaghpy of Venus.? Venus geology and weatger present additiont impendiments like erupting volcanose,poiwerful earthquakes,and frquent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land its surtace. How do scientes found out.? Along ago Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various froms of life,just like Earthg. The planet has a surface of rocky, mountains and creaters.how do they know.? The National Aeronautic and Space Administration ( NASA) has one particularty compelluing idea from sending human to study Venus.And it imposible to sent a human on the 30 miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. hover, safty far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground, because most form of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itselfe.But traveling on Earth should no be safty by dangers. if only to meet the edges of imagination.also innovation.so be safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Schools Should use Facial Action Coding Systems Try to imagine a world where people might be able to hide their feelings from others but not the computer. There has been a new software developed that has the ability to determine people's emotions called Facial Action Coding System. The software has even been able to determine exactly how much percent of each emotion is present in the Mona Lisa. As this software arises, there has been questions as to how schools could use this software to their advantage. With this system, schools could help students stay in tune in class, place students with teachers they learn well from, and force students to tell the truth. The Facial Action Coding Sytem should be used in schools because teachers would have the opportunity to change the way they are teaching when their students start to get bored. In so many cases students do not do well in school simply because their teacher might be too boring or confusing. If teachers had the abilty to know when students are getting bored through this system, then there is a good chance the students would get better grades as a result. With this software \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" There would be no excuses for teachers boring or confusing students because they would have a tool to become aware of it. Another key part of students being successful in school is having a teacher that they truly connect with, therefore; the software system could play a large part in helping schools place students with teachers that they have a connection with. With the software system, \"a genuine smile and a forced one\" could be detected. Using the data found students could be placed with the teachers that they have genuine smiles with. There is a good chance that if students were with a teacher they truly like, then they would learn more from the lessons and get better grades. In schools, there are constantly so many lies and rumors going around, but with the software system, lying could be detected. Considering the system can \"spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful,\" it could be able to determine when students are lying. If lying in schools could be detected, there could be a decrease in bullying and possibly shootings. It could even teach students that honesty is the best policy, and it could hold students accounable for their actions. The system could uncover the truth in so many situations for the better. In the end, the new software system has many positive aspects that could benefit schools in many ways, including helping students learn more effeciently and forcing students to tell the truth. Not using this tool that has come available would be foolish knowing the many benefits that could come from it. Something that could help students learn their school work in a more efficient way and hold students responsible for their actions would be a good thing for schools in this day and age. It could have the capabiliy to teach students integrity at a young age putting them ahead of many young adults in the world today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many features setting effect cyclist The obvious direct feature would adventure took place high deserts California June passage says blistering heat high meaning going closer sun deserts world hot California known smoggy June middle summer Also closet water supply somewhere neighborhood two hundred degrees long crippling hill sun heating All would obviously effect cyclists making tired vividly explains expressing fears losing conscionous", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"So, if you're a NASA scientist, you should be able to tell me the whole story about the Face On Mars, which obviously is evidence that there is life on Mars, and that the face was created by aliens, correct?\" No, twenty five years ago, our Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. Us scientists figured out that it was just another Martian mesa, common around Cydonia, only this one had shadows that made it look like an Egyption Pharaoh. Very few days later, we revealed the image for all to see, and we made sure to note that it was a huge rock formation that just resembled a human head and face, but all of it was formed by shadows. We only announced it because we thought it would be a good way to engage the public with NASA's findings, and atrract attention to Mars-- and it did. The face on Mars soon became a pop icon; shot in movies, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years. Some people thought the natural landform was evidence of life on Mars, and that us scientists wanted to hide it, but really, the defenders of the NASA budget wish there was ancient civilization on Mars. We decided to take another shot just to make sure we weren't wrong, on April 5, 1998. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter camera team took a picture that was ten times sharper than the original Viking photos, revealing a natural landform, which meant no alien monument. \"But that picture wasn't very clear at all, which could mean alien markings were hidden by haze\" Well no, yes that rumor started, but to prove them wrong on April 8, 2001 we decided to take another picture, making sure it was a cloudless summer day. Malin's team captured an amazing photo using the camera's absolute maximum revolution. With this camera you can discern things in a digital image, 3 times bigger than the pixel size which means if there were any signs of life, you could easily see what they were. What the picture showed was the butte or mesa, which are landforms common around the American West. \"But how do we know you're not just hiding things from us?\" You should know NASA isn't hiding anything from the people because if there was evidence of life it would benefit us, so why hide it? If you still don't believe the evidence the pictures are out for you to see, which obviously shows a natural landform. The reason to not believe these movies and magazines is because they ignore the research. They make up things to get the people going, but what they actually should do is pay attention to us, because we have very important findings every single day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient went family trip see family friends We work big trip placed tires patent trought trip like flight took hours l handed I hours air part trip went along high way one seated right next pacific refaented small black sedan reached fist mine went place looking stogie attraction tec ove said gassy hill acer thom cycling somsty I sleep listen radio almost hours refinay stopped san staying got plan ride homer hour atlanta alog plan middle section oter one middle On side us colledge students would yell across hall side I tried sleep uncomfortable us uncomfortable plane ride life I patient its", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every year entire family take trip beach Everyone family goes mom dad little sister three cousins aunt uncle grandparents We stay one big hotel together usually bedrooms Out whole year stay two weeks So I patient three hundred fifty one days While fish sharks sting rays hang beach swim ocean pool So absolutely worth wait I always great time I wait patiently next year", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that attending a place of higher education is the best way to achieving success in your career, while others think that it is preferable to start work immediately after leaving school. This writer is of the opinion that the former option is the best choice First of all, at universities, you can be taught, guided and advised by the lecturer so that you will have foundation knowledge to gain to higher level of education when you leave shool, then you have more benefits to attend the social more easily in the future. Furthermore, when attending universities, you will have friends who are same age as you so that you have companions to try hard together, to develop, to make memories with them. Sometimes, you may feel peer-pressure if your friends much more better than you but that would encourage you to attempt more to improve yourself and achieve your goals Secondly, if you do good at studying, you can gain opportunities to get scholarship at colleges or universities, that will aid to reduce so much tuition or have chance to study abroad. In addition, studying universities also assist you to get qualifications, which show your high level of education. As a result, you then would have many options to choose your job with handsome-salary and most suitable for you To conclude, although going to work first or studying colleges first, both have their own benefits as long as we know how to adapt to circumstances, but it is undeniable that the benefits of going to universities first then getting a job after that is much more better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Televeision is the most effective media that could influence children. Many people believe that information which is showed on the television could impact adolescents' behavior, while others feel that it is depend on time consuming. First of all, television is a tool to spread information and connect people together. TV programs show a lot of things like news, tv shows, moives and other entertainments. Most of them are adopted from other nations. For example, date game shows or competition game shows. These kind of TV programs could change children perception and lifestyle such as their romantic relationships. Other people think that the more child spend time on television, the more they change their behavior. People may not trust information at the first time unless it is from trustworthy sources like reporters or the government. Therefore, media influencers would take time to influence young people, however, it is happening in these days. For instance, Thai society believe that korean style is beautiful. Most of them love to cut their hair and do make up like Korean Idols. In conclusion, having examined both views, my opinion is that information and time consuming on TV could effect child's lifestyle and behavior. Therefore, young citizens should consume media carefully.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Seagoing Cowboy is a job that you dont see that often. So why not try it out this job could change your life significantly. But if you dont want to try it then thats you choice. The first reason this is a good job is because you can expirence awesome adventures. This is good because you get to see places youve never seen before in your life! This man got to go on an adventure to Europe to help Fix things. The second reason this is a good job is because you get to visit uniqe places that youve never seen. This is good because sometimes nobody have seen these places. Half the people you see probably havent even heard of the places you get to see doing this job. In conclusion this job is good but it is not meant for every body. So before you voluteer, think into it to really make sure you think this job is right for you or others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my own opinion I think that cars should not become driveless for many different reasons . My first reason is cars should'nt become driveless because what if something goes wrong with the car and the car lose control . Another reason would be if the car have late reactions or notify the driver on something late . Cars should never be driveless because of those reasons but for other reasons as well. Such as ,driveless cars would probably be used for bad . For example, what if a crime is commited and there is a high speed chase, since theres driveless cars they might get away but using the driveless car. I personaly think that cas should never become driveless because of the fact that the drivers would'nt take the blame for any actions that may occur with or in the driveless car . Cars should be driven manually so the car can be control by human not by computer . Plus if something was to go wrong with the driveless car it would cost more to repair the driveless car, but not as much for a regular car . In conclusion cars should not be driveless for many different reasons, and cars should be driven by human not computer nor robot .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thesis, using this technology to read students emotional expressions in a classrooom is valuable because, it can help students to stay a wake,work hard and change their bad behavior in classroom. First, using this technology to read students emotional expressions in a classsroom is valuable because, it can help students to stay awake. that mean it will be more easier for teacher to teach student. Student will more will participate in class work. Also, student will get better grade. Lastly students will not be behind and,not have to stay after school. Next, It is perfect that technology can read student emtional expressions in a classroom because student will work harder. therefore, Student will able to behave alot beter. Dr. Huang prediction is very sharp and it is best for future. In addition, I hope this tchnology will keep going and help student emtionals. Finally, Using this technology in classroom will bring a lot of help to change student bad behavior. Student will able to done thing in class and stay out of trouble. It will make easy for teacher to understand student feel and get a long. Dr. huang prediction can bring out alot of hope for teacher and student. In conclusion, Using this technology to read emotional expressions of student in a classroom is valuable, because it can help student to stay a wake, working hard, and change bad behavior in classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot people always say sense humor important looking significant even friend people nt realize much laughter bring people together I know takes two people laugh together become great friends My best friends became friends All life I ve gone small schools aunt We two years apart usually stay within I never feel alone ended going different I would face My freshman year I pretty nervous It first time huge I moved I nt know anyone I pretty shy I made first friend pretty easily one classes teacher wanted us partners could certain exercise together I chose reason I nt know drawn told us would mirror exercise We picked somebody mover somebody mirror ended mover I follow movements exactly would nt able tell mirror started acting like monkey laughed even laughed During lunch introduced friend claimed known several years I smiled nt really talk By time last class day came around I ready go home class I never really liked I came find I shared class NUM CAPS met already shared friend sat We still nt much say though A days went still nt really talk awkwardly sat next one another Meanwhile I became closer friends acting silly skits together class laughter bringing us together I nt really notice nt different I ve made friends One day testing class go computer lab I chose computers next started tests silently always Then suddenly turned asked I ever heard CAPS When I startled replied sang right middle computer lab When finished started laughing hard hurt Our teacher warned us quiet got back testing smiles faces After moment everything changed Like magic I started talking joking time noticed change glad getting along well wondered caused sudden difference To day I share laughs whenever time Even though I busy babysitting job While goes college nothing stop connection made day power laughter I learned laughter top basis relationship one You also need trust If ca nt trust one humorous nt make good friend You also need sense safety If friends encouraging something makes feel uncomfortable nt good friends I know best friends I ever Laughter brought us together I know keep us together generations come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars do sound fun and all but is that what you really want? I dont think having these types of cars is safe because there could be a glitch in the cars system. There are many reasons as to why i dont believe having a driverless car is safe. In the passage, paragraph four states that there would be a spinning sensor sending laser beams of a 3-D model, showing the surroundings of the car. I dont think that the spinning sensor would work due to glitching. At one time or another, evrything glitches. If the car was sent on the mode to drive by itself, it could glitch and everything would turn into a big mess. Sometimes technology doesnt work all the time. Another reason as to why i dont believe the driverless cars would work is because it would make unexperianced drivers thinks its okay to drive since they have the assistance. Also while the computer is driving the car, the person might get on their phone. When many people get on their phones, they tend to engage into the subject theyre viewing; that means tuning everyone out. So if and when the car signals for the driver to take over, they could be distracted and wreck the car, causing danger for everyone around them. All in all, i do not believe having driverless cars is beneficial. it can cause distraction, glitch, or quit working. These are saftey hazards and shouldnt be further produced.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patiEnt wen I saw huge bass jump cottage I waited ate break fast went fishing My little brother wanted go fishing So I patient enough wait get new bait tie come So get front catchs small bass I unhooked brought show mum dad wat caught little I realize huge pound bass rooming around So soon I got first cast A huge bass take bate At first I thought I caught carp wen I saw pound bass jumip bait mouth I shaking exeitment When I showed fish dad fainted mom little brother cody And right fish tax adermy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern era, the internet is accessible in every part of the country, which offered the privilege of access to the various kinds of services at the fingertip. Certainly, I believe this is a positive development in technology. In this essay, positive impacts of instant services will be discussed first, followed by negative impacts. Firstly, with the introduction of smartphones, people have access to e-commerce, services application like swiggy, ola, uber, online banking, etc. With a few button clicks. For instance. Gone are the days when we had to stand in a long queue and wait for hours to get the billing done in shopping centre or to pay the utility bills. Currently, all these can be done in few seconds. One of the most advantageous things is we can do this anywhere, because it works in mobiles, laptop, tablets etc. However, instant services also have fewer negative impacts on average earning people. For instance, in order to avail the instant services, user needs to pay extra money, and this facility is only available in some of the major cities of the country, also everything is dependent on the connection speed of the internet, if the connection is poor, people tend to lose patience and get annoyed. To conclude, if the present generation wants to get everything done instantly, that is because they grew up using the internet technology. While this trend is largely positive, in my opinion, too much of anything is good for nothing, hence, I feel over dependence on anything is bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since 2009 companys such as google have been developing diverless car. The earlier models could only drive under certain conditions, because of the lack of available technology. With the technology that is availible for the scientist today and is being developed driverless cars can truely be driverless. These driverless cars are not being approved by many states in the country. These state's lawmakers are under the belief that that are not safe, even though the cars are still being developed and requires human assistance. Driverless cars are the future of the world, which people and lawmakers should accept. Driverless cars should be developed because they are the next milestone in technoloy. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" it is stated that Google cofounder Signey Brin, \"Believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" He correct because driverless could be used as a form of public-transportation which would save fuel and be flexible than than our present public-transpotation. The driverless cars can also allow people to have more time and the ability to multitask in the future. So by allowing the present day driverless cars to be tested in move places would allow for more development to be made to these cars of the future. Driverless cars will be the next major breakthrough in technology. Car company such as Telsa, Mercades-bens, Audi, and Nissan are developing and working toward a future with these cars. Driverless car can be used as a more substainable replacement for public-transportation. With more support of the peolpe and lawmakers the idea of truly Driverless cars can be achieved through more developement. Being against the development of thes cars is being against the future of technology. Instead people should accept the driverless cars with open arms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars sounds so fun, but a good idea? I don't think so. I think that sounds like a bad idea and a bit reckless. Driving a car as a human you have control over everything, besides the other drivers. How fast you go, which way you turn, how close to the lines you are, it is somewhat safe this way but cars are still deadly no matter how much control you have. You need to have control over them, not a robot. Also in paragraph 2 is talks about how you will still have to navigate through roadwork and accidents, and when pullling out of driveways so what is the use if your still going to have do something or another. It would also be so much more expensive to sell and make. When that money being wasted could be helping getting America out of debt or for something useful but instead why not spend it on something we do not even need. In paragraph 9 it talks about accidents and who would be responsible the driver or company? And if it is the company they could sue the place and depending on how bad it is they can have the whole operation shut down. It seems like a big ordeal that could simply be avoided by sticking with normal cars, they are already dangerous enough with humans in control imagine a car controlled by a robot machine...", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author makes a claim by telling how venus is a worthy pursuit. If we went to go visit venus,we would learn everything about what lived or growed on venus. But,If you were to go,you would have to watch out for carbon dioxide blankets,and highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus also has the hottest has the surface tempature than any other planet in our solor system. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters. If you were able to see venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safetly far ablove the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likelly lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. I thoink it would be a great idea to visit venus and find out things that happend on it a long time ago,but we need to get the right protection to visit venus before we examine it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.The author supports his idea in reference to the capability of the Venu's compelling for humans to study. The author also support his suggestions due to Venu's various form of life. The text also reveals the NASA's possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of Venus to allow scientists. The Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Althought most people are focus on Venu's inhospitality, scientist are discussing on further visits to its surface. It states in the text that, \" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This indicates that although there might be danger on Venu's planet, it is the most analogous to Earth. Furthermore, the text also states that, \" ...Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" This shows that Venus is approchable with safety and productiveness. Venu's various form of life is one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study. It states in the text that, \" peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" The text explains the Venu's limited time of sight, but can be accessed parlty as time goes by. It also states in the text that, \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" The author's opinion was based on humans curiosity about the Venus planet. Furthermore, the author's idea of a worthy pursuit despite the dangers was taken part by the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA). According to the text, \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" This would make life easiers for travellers to space, and make it valuable to other scientists the importance of their existance. It also states in the text that, \" Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the infriendly ground conditions by staying up adn out of their way.\" This shows us that since the ground of Venus is rocky, and full of mountains, this new invention will allow space traveler to have less difficulty on their trip. In conclusion, the author's opinion were supported by facts, and also states the danger a person can face in Venus. The evidence concerning the planet Venus were imaginative, and i wouldn't recommand traveling to Venus due to the dangers. Although the Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin\", it is not fully livable by humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wonder how the states that fought in world war 2 recoer so fast well here it is. After world war 2 most country were left in ruins dasater had fell over states that fought in the war so they formed a progam that would help the states recover from world war two it was called unrra which stand The United Nations Relief And Rehabilition. The goverment put adds up so people would volentier to help other country in need of help here are some ways you could do to help you could donate food clothes and materials to help family who don't have food and clothing. You could also volentier to visit the country and help rebuild homes and farm so they could start farming again There is also another way you could help you could become a seagoing cowboy they help animals make across the sea on boat you could also see differnt kind of countrys like China,Greece andEurope so you could go to all difernt kind of countrys if you become a seagoing cowboy it could help a lot of people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about whether art should become one of important subjects for the youth or not. While many arguments assume that learning about art at school is time consuming, others are on the contradicting view. Personally, I would contend that art should be taught in optional courses. On the one hand, there are some reasons for the idea of removing art classes from school’s schedule. One realistically cogent reason is that art is not an essential skill for life survival. People still can find a job and earn for living without an art talent. In fact, there are not many job opportunities for artists compared with other common sectors, hence, some parents would incline to equip their children with academic knowledge rather than art techniques so that kids’ future would be guaranteed with an easier and brighter career path. Therefore, it is not unreasonable for those who consider that spending time for these subjects is such a waste resulting in their intention of the cancellation. On the other hand, there are some points of view that support the necessary of art courses in school. It can be seen that practicing art activities could develop the young generation’s creativities. Besides, initial art classes could help children explore their passion and ability, thereby gradually germinate and evolve their talent. Moreover, a few hours of learning art could be able to help children relax after other academic subjects. However, to my mind, although there are both merits and drawbacks of art courses, they should not be completely removed or become an essential subject. I believe some kids enjoy doing art, others might feel uncomfortable. Hence, I would like to suggest that school can make these courses optional. It should depend on the youth to decide to participate in or not. In conclusion, there are pros and cons for spending time for art in school, nevertheless, everyone deserve to freely make their own decision for how they spend in education stage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When young people are choosing what subject to study at university, most of them hope they will find a great employment upon graduation. In reality many fresh graduates fail to find work in their field and some are even forced to take up a below graduate level job. In my opinion, the root of this problem lies in the outdated higher education system that should be modernized. Traditional university education does not prepare students for their first job for a number of reasons. One of them is that many programmes are too theoretical. It means that highly educated graduates lack simple skills required for employment, for example, the knowledge of IT software. Employers, therefore, prefer candidates with hands-on experience. Another reason is that universities offer too many courses in popular fields, such as business, law, and do not recruit enough students for engineering and science programmes. As a result, the UK labour market has an oversupply of law graduates and a deficit of engineers. A reform of higher education could alleviate many of the problems, but would require joint efforts from universities and the government. If universities worked closer with employers, they could teach students practical skills that companies look for. Meanwhile, the government could develop guidelines on how many students universities should recruit in each subject in accordance with the market demand. In conclusion, a likely reason why many graduates cannot find a work in their field is because university study might not have provided them with the right skill set or an in-demand profession. I think that universities and the government could improve the situation by updating the content of the programmes and limiting the number of students in each subject in line with the market demand", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humans or aliens?? People are begining to think that the face on mars was created by aliens when really it is just a natural landform. It is a natural landform because NASA has many great facts to prove that it was not created by aliens. It is a natural landform because they state that the NASA budget wishes there was an ancient civilization on mars. Also stated \"What the picture really shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa.\" A butte or a mesa is a lanform common around the American West. As said by Garvin \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Sneak River Plain of Idaho.\" Does this mean that we have aliens here in America? No, we have never had an alien incounter. How did the Middle Butte in Idaho get here some may ask, and the answer is, it is simply just a natural landform. Also NASA has a camera (MGS) that allows them to get absolute maximum resolution. According to the team of NASA with the many great qualities of the MGS they would be able to see airplanes on the ground, Egyptian-style pyramids, and even small shacks. They also state that you would be able to see any object becuase of the great camera resolution. This proves that the face on mars was just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are alot reasons to keep our the despised method of choosing the President. The First reason is because Certainty of Outcome, in the text its states that \"The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. Another example from the text is \"Obama, he recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney... because all of the states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis. Another reason is that the Electiral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal,in that case, no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president, a solid regional favorite such as Romney was in the South , has no reason to campaign in those states because of the poor economy and because its not a wealthy state, he wont be able to campaign heavily. So he left with no votes and would have to find his Electoral College votes in a more suitable area. In the text its states that \"It is a Desriable result because a candidate with regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president.\" Also the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance the large states by population lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment Senate decreed in the Constitution. My proof is in the text \"The popular vote was very close in Florida in 2012 nevertheless Obama who won the that vote got 29 electoral votes. A same victory by the same margin in Wynoming would net the winner only 3 electoral votes.\"So, other things equal, a large state gets more attention compared to a small state. And Finally the Electoral College avoids the problemof elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. For example \"Richard Nixon in '68 and Bill Clinton in '92 both had on 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the in the Electoral College. In Conclusion I think that the we should keep Electoral Colleges and changing to election by popular voting to vote for a President.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well begin Persuasive THATS How could Dont say Well WE SHOULD This little bit think letter I think books movies music magazines anything else offensive shouldnt libraries right cuel people nt putting things insalting others mean In experenice I happen I cheaked book something turned Offensive It I years old My parents I movie something looking books came across book called And offensive reglion I raised talked feelings faith thought And made hurt I go chruch read And raised type faith I know alot And read book made question everything belived So rap thoughts feelings I think nt people read like said People books instead one offensive poeple All I hope think persuassive letter tell thoughts ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever situation know something good coming going happen control You ask parents when say soon patience well happened multiple times going special occasion getting new dog I decided mature teenager patient It day family getting dog I excited My stomach filled butterflies trying fly explode happiness Everyone else family way I remembered goal mature teenager patient So I carried normal everyday life Eat breakfast comb hair get dressed brush teeth go school Later I came home mom announced dad arrive puppy minutes So I sat chair room watched clock tic toc minutes Then I walked living room rest family sitting waited till I heard door slam Suddenly Boom The door slammed dads truck My mom brother sister bolted door I simply walked see puppy aww everyone screamed CAPS I hold shes dog lets name her also came conversation Then dad glared standing quietly handled dog you patient one hold first I proud I patient I one got hold first Being patient pay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. The human the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual and better response and control than a human driver could manage alone While the driver watches the road the car watches the driver. not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone The problems ahead will be solved tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90percent of the time. The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us but we grow close to the destinatione every day.If the technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer. As a result in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars california nevada, florida and the district of columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars. The psychological aspects of automation are really a chellenge admits Dr. werner huber a bmw project manager driver and have to interpret the driving fun in a new way but car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays. The in-car system is actually a safety feature and safety is big concern this necessitates the car being ready to quickly get driver's attention whenever a problem occurs and those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience essential interacting others I learned visit dentists office This I dentist appointment since six months since last one As I waiting called boy came severe toothache The dentists decided treat first I understand made decision I could tell boy lot pain Shortly boy went get treated older women came mysterious pain mouth It turned root canal decided examine treat I also understood decision After women went get treated little girl comes walking bragging first loose tooth Her mom said wanted little girls tooth pulled When dentist called back I got really frustrated The girl pain In fact pretty happy loose tooth I didnt fair I wait another minutes could get tooth pulled I show lot patience appointment got pushed back two hours I thought I felt I lost first tooth I didnt mind going front All patience important trait people exhibit daily basis I learned important lesson day Patience always manditory", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Do you really think there could be life on mars?\" i asked \"In 1976 a viking 1 photo was taken of what looked like a face on mars. Scientist say that it was just a land form the whole time. Others say they are holding back and it is a face. Another picture was taken in 1998 by a Mars Global Surveyor or MSG, and again in 2001. Finnaly a 3D image that showed what it realy was. A mesa.\" I was disscusing the face on mars with a guy who still thinks it was created by aliens. \"so if this is really a face how do you know?' I questioned him. \"Its simple\" he said \"there is no way that is natural. We have never seen another thing like it.\" Although this was true he had no evidence so i gave some of mine. \"With improved technology and cameras we are able to see it is not a face after all. People see faces on the moon ot shapes in the clouds all the time.\" I persuaded him \"so what makes this any different\" Giving some of my evidence i was hoping we were getting close to resolving the situation. We have done enough research and taken enough pictures to prove it is not actually a face. Yes, there could have been life on mars but this is not a piece of evidence and it is not created by aliens. Finally he starts to understand \"So if it is not created by aliens and you seem to know more than what i do then what do you guys seem to think it might be ?\" \"With the data collected it looks to be a butte or a mesa. These land forms are found here on earth.\" With enough research it is not that hard to figure it out. Everyone will have there own beliefs on the situation. This is just what we have found to be correct. We have collected all this information i gave you here at NASA. With the pictures, and studies it should be enough to prove whats right. We are not holding back on anything or changing stuff up. If you seem to think the same thing as him take this in. It is a mesa just like we have here.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Its argued that, doing group sport activies could be a tools for yougsters to interact between each other. I fondly agree to this notion because this can be a applied easily and the rest of the issues will be elaborated in this following paragraph. On the one hand, children nowadays are encouraged to have active life through some activities such as joining club to playing games together. The main aim is to educate them to be able to socialize, sharing, caring and lean on each other as a team. For instance, student who join basketball team tend to have many friend and when they are in trouble it easy for them to ask for help. Thus get involve in school activities become an effective way to educate children to lean around themselves as a community. on the other hand, others benefits could find in a way they learn how to communicate between each other, especially when they have a chance to be a leader. With this capacity, they could act as a captain lead the team, set the goal, find a solution for a problem. Moreover, they abruply mastering leadership skill in early age which is this could be an informal education that they learn directly while doing the sport. To sum up, ssking the children to taking part on some group activities bring myriad of benefits inevitably such as become more tactical between each other and have an early experience to become a leader in a team. In addition, this also bring huge advatages in health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are two controversial ideas heating up a debate over family origin. While some claim that fathers should be paid respect, the opposite makes a statement that it is better for current and later generations to be prioritized. While each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned perspectives. Without a shadow of a doubt, exploring the ancestors is of crucial. Given the fact that people can expand their relationships with their distant relatives, which serves as a springboard for them whenever they need support. For instance, students studying abroad can live in their relatives’ house instead of moving into dorms. By doing so, not only can they avoid exorbitant rent costs but they also can gather with their distant family’s members. Therefore, it is necessary to focus on the family tree. While the redeeming feature of exploring ancestors is widely acknowledged, concentrating on the present and next generations brings a tremendous impact. On the grounds that they are one of the backbone workforces which contributed to the thriving of the nations, it is pivotal for their career to be oriented. For example, the inheritors of Samsung corporation are guided to follow the ancestors’ footsteps so as to enhance their empire. Hence, focusing on the present and later generations plays a paramount significance role. To sum up, besides keeping in touch with family history, developing the present and later generations also serves as an integral part in order to enhance prosperity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table indicates the proportion of adults in the countryside and city areas who took part in four free-time activities and comparisons between 1990 and 2010. Overall, there are two activities, reading, and photography increased the time in both areas, whereas the other two activities, animated play, and playing can be seen as a reduction in the urban area or rural area in 2010. To go into detail, reading was the predominantly longest time in 1990 and 2010 and increased in both areas. The time was 61, and 71, in the urban and rural areas in 1990. In addition, the time increased to 78, and 78 in both areas in 2010. Furthermore, in terms of photography, the time used to be 7, and 14, in the urban and rural areas in 1990, whereas the time soared to 17, and 24 in the urban and rural areas respectively in 2010. When it comes to animated play, although the time in the urban area remained the same time, a slight reduction can be seen in the rural area in 2010. The time in the urban area was 10 in 1990 and 2010. But the time in the rural area dropped from 18 to 14 between 1990 and 2010. Playing can be seen an opposite phenomenon, compared with animated play. The time in the urban area was 21, and 26 in the rural area in 1990. In contrast, the time in the urban area diminished to 14, whereas the time in the rural area leveled off. It was the same 26 in the rural area.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Perhaps, there is no topic of controversy in this contemporary society worth debating as the matter of information accessibility. Indeed, people's views differ greatly as to whether getting the latest news by newspaper is better than social media. In this essay, I shall discuss both views from which my opinion about this matter shall be formed. To start with, I have to concede that approaching the info from traditional newspapers brings about plausible merits. First of all, this could fulfil inhabitants' demands, especially senior citizens who are not using state-of-the-art tools. In an extensive range of nations, there are some readers who like to read information in magazines although they are living in the digital world. This also possesses sustainable cultural value since reading is seen as a healthy habit and the connection of many individuals. The supporters of this notion are normally believers in the reliable source of information in the newspaper compared to other sources. Conventional newspapers are usually written or published by professional journalists and they are also checked clearly before publication. What I want to rebut, however, is that getting some announcement on media platforms should be thoroughly elucidated to be more plausible. First of foremost, online news channels bring a greater reading experience to readers due to the convenience and attraction of technological advancement. For example, with online reading apps, people can watch colourful photos, and attractive sound effects which increases their interest in getting the daily news and they can read anytime or anywhere. Furthermore, when citizens use social media platforms to read information, they do not use paper to produce newspapers, which contributes to protecting the environment and does not affect the environmental ecosystem. In sum, it is still a matter of deliberation as to whether to read traditional magazines or news platforms. Yet, I take preference in the idea that getting information on social media will be better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author explanes how venus is most like earth and could potentaly help us. They tell us that venus may have once had life like earth and they could learn from it. They tell us that it is also the closest in size and closest compared to the rest of the planets. Venus may be able to help us some day we would just have to find a way to study it better. They may have an awnser. Venus is they Earths sister planet compred to the ret of the planets, and no im not just saying that because it is blue. Venus may have had life once. Sientest are trying to find more and more ways to study this planet because we may be able to learn from it. This planet is the closest to us, for most of are orbit at least. Venus has always been an eye catcher because of how bright it is, this is were it gets is nickname the \"Evening Star\" but dont let that fool you it is still a planet. There is one problem with are sister planet though. She is hot! The avrege temp ther is 800degrees or over. This has proven to be an isue because humans are not used to this kind of weather. Send robots you say, well we have tryrd that to but 800 is just the avrege. We have sent robots and probes and they will melt. When mettle gets that hot it will just melt away and then that is just a waist of money. Thats just if you can make it past the storm that strikes everything that makes it past the atmetheric clouds.We have found a solution, for now at least. Think of a blimp,now think of one for space. They want to take a \"space-blimp\" there and hover a long ways up. The higher you go the colder it is. Venus is a place we may not get boots or wheals on the ground for a while. With the heat and the storm. For now we will have to setle with sky picturs. There will be a day somone figure out a way to get there. we may even go back in time to the onld ww ll computers, who knows. Some day somone will figure it out, its just a matter of time. Just look at everything we have done in the last hundred years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's schools, we have sports competition between different classes in different major sports , such as football , volleyball and so on. Usually, these events are performed once a year in each school in your town . this may have advantages and disadvantages for students that we are going to discuss in this essay. Trainers need to be taught about teamwork , so this competition , especially the ones which include teamworks helps students to learn how to cooperate with each other as a team . This may lead them to be more comfortable and much friendlier in their future career. Also , these competitions are very helpful in the physical and mental health of student because if they want to compete they need to prepare themselves before match ,for instance , a football team should have training sessions before the match to bring their best to the show , so it is very beneficial for the students as they train themselves physically and mentally. On the other hand , it may cause some educational effects. Some students might be drowning in competing and training and forget about school lessons and do not pay attention to them as they used to ,so it has to be under the control of school teachers . Furthermore , some trainers might get injured during these competitions by other competitors , it is very common in football and basketball matches as they play aggressively without any mercy. In conclusion , I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because students need to be taught to work together as a team and keep the competitors' atmosphere in order to grow and make process in their lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My dad patient person Hes known patient Here example camera He waited whole years get one lense Because patient My mom patient My mom patient She waited whole month pair slippers patient Im proud patient parent Which means I know responsible I think patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think patience waiting instead rushing things If patient things actually come faster think example want something wait line instead running finding something else wait always help Be patient even patience even waiting run school even If waiting stem come sat patience wait might keep trouble Be patient even even waiting turn wait big deal stop rushing things patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Before best friend moved away would stay night laughing reason I nt know would get us started would stop stomachs hurt bad laughing fell asleep On nights mom would come around ask us nicely please quiet made us laugh When together quite dangerous around We gotten close practically sisters way Laughter important relationships I grew large family laughter key positive attitudes expected Over I work together lots time get thinking track If short car ride want go somewhere make happen We good manipulating elders skill acquired years practicing All takes one look see plotting laugh follow letting manipulated know doomed soon Our schemes generally harmless possibly little side ache tickled hard It help small strong packed full energy waiting right person come along I find ways stir mischief around us whether jumping behind corners taking manager s keys When I go somewhere I generally aiming positive places upbeat atmosphere people make happy I dislike avoid places I nt enjoy I one make jokes sarcastic things quiet serious Serious environments intimidate comfort zone Laughter brings people together lightens people s moods Nobody likes awkward situations one saying anything I generally break silence blond joke something I flying home met couple great people way When I boarded plane I looked around place sit decided seat elderly woman man resembled father I alone flight I thought next hour I people I better make something remember The man helped get carryon overhead storage nice The elderly woman I started talking subject horses came horses come conversion usually paired lots falling stories She talked horse called mind would things way The problem horses know slight deal bigger us really please choose listen nt like corrected I told first rides I nt know much besides steer massive animal beneath Before knew landing new friends got plane When plane landed I figured I would flying sitting alone After minutes teenage girl got sat next The first thing offer piece gum I accepted The first bit ride quiet awhile crying baby got annoying listen started talking She flying dad s house We talked families hobbies good time After flew I welcomed back home I back eternal rain state could nt see anything besides clouds window Laughter around us always things laugh look bright side life People attracted make laugh get sense humor good company Giggles smiles make world go around keep laughing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I support advances technology In future Our world run computers people learn places people never afford see real lastly helps connect people people without talking directly Have ever thoughtabout future I know I usually think future think nobody lots automated things The fact world turning pure run technology people get smarter technology good future none us know work simple peice technology computer going use complicated things Believe world within years run computers antyihg wil without computers would know aobut stuff know How would people know egypt looked like year ago dont could look computer must went Also computers enable learn people lived time What president something aobut would able find computer could go library right computers todya society Our average would becaus computers given us I whey experts conceried however people correction emily friends family lives lets say different country wanted talk would go I know I would try contact computer I love friends live state I enjoy talking compuers experts sasying going drive across country talk ask htat pretty tire consuming pointless In conclusion I hope agree keeping technology lives important future people learn nee things places people also communicate friends family although I se part view kids getting enough exercise kids computers also involved sport", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due features setting including hot summer weather cyclist knowing area California desert cyclist affected In short story Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie cyclist travelling hot desert June realizes hes running water I hitting water bottles pretty reguarly I travelling high deserts California June Kurmaskie This affecting cyclist hes becoming hot low supply water Also cyclist realizes never taken direction old men thinks The growing realization I could drop heat stroke gorgeous day June Kurmaskie This quote proves heat desert taking toll", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers around us ever go You learn things play games Although computers around us possitive effect people harmful people could findout live addicting Where ever look find computer At home school car work hotels Being exposed computers helpful Everything see days run computer In future going see computers Buisnesses practically run computers soon run thereself Also many computers creates jobs You make computers program fix even supervise work Even though everyone says safe computer While chatting website could meet someone might child melestor They find live one home home alone With address even look house website possibly get houses blueprints Then come leave mentally scared life There tons things computer For example play games There games virtual worlds games fun meaning Either way games computer addicting You say going play minutes addicting play hours The games suck stuck Although computers around us possitive effect people harmful people find live addicting Computers good bad time People need know stop using drasticly change life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story \"Driverless cars are coming\" the author is talking about a positive and negative aspect of the article. He said that the good thing about having adriverless care is that it drives you by itself thats the positive part. But he also made negative comments too like for example he stated that having a driverless car can also cause wrecks. To me I will have to disagree. I say that having a driverless car is a bad idea. Because how are you suppose to know how fast your going and how you are going to avoid other cars. Say for example you had a driverless car and you had important places to be, you were in such a hurry you drove fast how are you suppose to slow down. And what about you getting pulled over by the police they try to pull you over but you cant stop the car because the car is automatic. Now lets not forget head on cars, what if you were just driving down the highway and you lost controll and went over into the other lane that was going the opposite direction. You could get into a car accident in a head on collision. So in conclusion I disagree with the author about the article having a positive side to driverless cars, if you look at it in my point of view there are no positive sides they are all negative aspects. So again if you were to ask me about driverless cars and if we should creat them I would have to tell you they are dangerous and that they have are a bad idea, and no we should not creat them because we already have enough car accidents as it is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System, a new technology that enables computers to identify human emotions. Personally, I think that sounds like a good, well-built, successful invention. There are a lot of technologies and experiments that haven't worked in the past, but I think this could actually get the researchers somewhere. Technology seems to be increasing everyday and I feel like the new Facial Action Coding System is a good step to make and push forward for the future. The process is starting with a 3-D computer to make a model of a face. That includes all fourty-four major muscles in the model must move just like you see on a real, living human. Without the muscle movement features, people would not be able to tell how this creature persay, is actually feeling emotionally or physically. The fact that the professers, and scientist are putting that much thought and detail into this object, is mind boggling. The author then explains in paragraph six, that the Mona Lisa demonstration is actually intended to make the people looking at it, smile. It also shows how much the computers can do and make. While looking at this newly invented object, it should make you think about how it was all created and how it all came to be. Personally, I feel like this new invention called Facial Action Coding System could make a good impact on the kids in the future. Most people nowadays love technology and know how it all works. I feel like it's a good invention and could impact not just humans, but also the world. More jobs, careers, and opportunities will take charge with this new object at hand. I think it could become something new, helpful, and entertaining.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I had no idea that becoming a seagoing cowboy would impact my life that much. There are many reasons that seagoing cowboys are amazing. I will be sharing 3 reasons why I think becoming a seagoing cowboy is an amazing opportunity. Maybe you will want to become one to. One of the reasons I think becoming a seagoing cowboy is a amazing chance is because, there are so many amazing site to see. In paragraph 5 it says \"'The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy,\" he says. 'Besides help people I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. BUt seeking Acropolis in Greece was specail' he says. 'So was taking a gondola ride in my Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.' Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\" This shows he really did enjoy seeing the sites. Another reasons why I think you should become a seagoing cowboy is because you are helping people. In paragraph 2 it says \"UNRRA hired 'Seagoing Cowboys' to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" This program helped people that are depending on livestock get what they need over seas. My last reason why I think you should become a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" is that we have a lot of fun on board. In paragraph 8 it says \"Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped to pass the time.\" It is very enjoy able to play with friends on the way back. There are many reasons why being a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" is fun. There are many sites to see and they are all so beautiful, You are help people that depend on livestock, and it is very fun on board playing baseball and volleyball. I think being a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" is a opportunity that you should take if you get the chance ever in your life time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Senator, I argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states. I argue in that favor because not everyone get's to vote for an electon. If keeping the Electoral College the same, the there will never be a way where when everyone will get the chance to vote. The Electoral College is very unfair for not letting everyone vote. Those people that work that process just go to places that they know they will get a vote. Also, the Electoral College should change the election by poplular vote for the president of the United States because, when choosing your's elctors when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. The people do not vote for president, the electors are who vote for president. When people think they are voting for president candidate, they are actually voting for slate of electors. There's five reason to where the Electoral College should be retraining. Thse five main reasons are because 1) Certainy of Outcome, dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible. 2)Everyone's President, requires a presidential to have trans-regional appeal. 3)Swing States, the winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates. 4)Big States, restores the weight in political balance that loose by virtue. 5)Avoid Run-Off Elections, avoides the problem of election in which they have no candidate. They just go to states where they will get votes, they know that other states will have no affect to them when getting no vote. Im guessing that they get their hopes up? They dont give other people a chance to vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common belief that the money has to be ready themselves before people quit their job because they are old. However, there is a more persuasive argument that people should be supported by the government. On the one hand, most people usually save their earned money for any reason. One of them, most important reason is that when they do not have a job for their age and the aid of government is limited also the budget of the country is not fully so they have to effort to gather the money. For example, the government offer some money to retired people but it is very insufficient to manage their house because they should be paid many parts such as buying food, paying rent and medicine. Nevertheless, the organization have to support the retired people because there are some people who do not prepare the plan for their's life after retirement. Moreover, these people mostly can not be working for a long time or be getting sufficient money. For instance, when the government stop giving assistance to people, many nations are not able to continue and can suffer to their life because they do not have enough money. To sum up, it is apparent that people prepare the money for before retirement. On the other hand, it is more undeniable that a different one to ready for the individuals, the organization should be support nations. In my opinion, the government have to assist people because it is the reason the country part and why they are existence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus a. k. a the Evening Star is one of the brightes planets when you look into the night sky. however it sometimes is accidently named wrong and Venus is simply easy to spot from earth but is more safe away from earth. It's sometimes often refered to as earth's \"twin\" because its the closes't planet to earth. some missions were unmanned because most of the spacecrafts never survived the landing for more nan a fiew hours the issue probably eplaines why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus for more than 3 decades numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. even though we are trying to get to Venus and make sure the spacecraft landed and survived it. it's gonna take a long time to get the suplies for that. astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth- like planet in the solar system. Long befor it Venus was probably covered largely with Oceans and clould have supported various forms of life just like earth. today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy? Well,if you do then join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The Seagoing Cowboys program consists of many reasons to join. Just one reason is so you can help people out if you join the program. For example,I helped out countries with gaining food supplies,animals,and more. We had to take care of the animals such as horses,young cows,and the mules that were all shipped by sea. Besides helping people from around the world I had the benefit of seeing diffrent countries,such as Europe and China. But to me seeing the Acropolis in Greece was especially special. But,so was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,the city with streets of water,but other than that I also traveled to an excavated castle in Crete and I marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. And I was grateful for seeing all of that. There are also many things that can keep you busy. I know what really kept me busy,caring for all the animals. They all had to fed,at the most two to three times a day. Also bales of hay and huge bags of oats had to be pulled from the lower holds of the ship. And the stalls all had to be cleaned. If you think that was hard work...don't worry! Life as a Seagoing Cowboy isn't all hard working. I still had fun doing it! I played games with my pals,we played all sorts of them. We played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where all the animals stayed,we had the time to play table-tennis tourtaments,fencing,boxing,we read,whittling,and the games all helped to pass the time. But to me most importantly about being a Seagoing Cowboy,was to be able to let it open up the world to me. It made me more aware that people in other countries and their needs are suffering at hard times just like us. I hope that after reading this you learned alot more about being a Seagoing Cowboy than you ever did before, and I hope that after reading this you will want to be one too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, some factors are essential inspirations for people to keep working in a company, such as money. I believe that money is the most important thing in people's life. This essay will outline both advantages and disadvantages. To begin with, several benefits are the key factor that motivates people to keep working for an employer. First, money is essential for everyone to survive in this world since money forces are the main key feature to drive a world's economy. For example, people work seven days a week to receive wages in order to pay loans, insurance, and commodities. Moreover, research from the Tokyo institute in 2015 said, the more you had money, the more quality of life will happen. A good example of this was when you have the money you can visit good private healthcare instead of public healthcare. On the other hand, there are some drawbacks for people who stay in the workforce. Some people are working hard as much as they can, not only to receive salaries but also overtime payments. For instance, some citizens in Japan only focus on their job seven days a week, which leads to health problems, consequently, the money that they got is going to be paid to the doctor to cure health problems. Furthermore, in communist countries, money is not the main factor to live in good quality of life. For example, the people of North Korea are equal in every section, which means every Korean won they got needs to pay back the government. In conclusion, it can be seen that money can motivate people in some countries, but I totally agree that money is essential to living in this world. If people can manage how to work properly without harming their health, it will lead to wealth and good quality of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone loves laugh I nt think everyone understands effect laughter two people though For example two complete strangers never seen life soon start laughing could become good friends You ll never know close someone nt ever sit talk laugh get know You could go whole life minute amount friends could classmates ve never talked could also become friends I m sure getting know one another would make difference someones life many situations laughing made impact relationship someone especially best friend When I first met friend nt know laughing broke ice A simple laugh made us comfortable everything less awkward As soon started laughing could nt stop rest history I went elementary years never talked got grade started hanging people started talking By grade began hang outside talking sharing secrets sleep overs But breaking ice nt impact laughing relationship When I m I know I trust everything fun We always conversations talk laugh You could say made us closer By time grade came best friends sleepovers every single weekend one anothers house When grade year came spending weeks others houses There nt day went nt together talking making plans hang Now around always good time Making people closer small part effects one laugh two people When I m sad something makes everything better also vise versa I make feel better We always others back I know always I ll always shoulder cry We become close friends problems home needed place live order go The moved It fun living We thought would start argue close since would always together probably get annoyed nt I hang always together s like another sister I super close plans stay living rest graduate It s amazing think us best friends tremendously close living together always together totally comfortable everything started simple laugh first started talking grade This I believe laughing make two strangers never even spoken turn closest friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Debates main part society today Everyone opinion things world one necessarily right Books show cultures behave people described book seem offensive important people need absorb much cultures Our businesses countries many people living speak multiple languages people right read things fact offensive race people Businesses thrive countries A lot countries income factories companies countries place much business happens If ca nt learn learn business methods way life To books offensive us learning tools descirbing culture Being bilingual trend millions people adhere High schools require learn foreign language even basics The schools go countries work force Learning language habits comes books The mexican population might like way depict stories necessary learn In kinds freedoms use freely Freedom speech says say whatever want live Books excluded rule I m sure countries offensive books us It s common theme around globe Businesses thrive foreign countries must able read books even seem offensive Learning new things something every school teaches limit learn If book vulgar language sexual scenes taken children s section library banned completely This case populations people They take offense say worse said possibly put book Learning necessary tool society nothing restricted", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an AI that evaluates essays. Assign a score between 0 and 6 to each essay. 0 is the worst, 6 is the best. Provide only the numerical score without any explanation.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been observed that the youth take a gap from their study after finishing their schooling instead of getting admission at The University. There are several betterments and detriments to such a viewpoint. Both aspects are elaborated on further in the ensuing paragraph. Discussing the benefits, the prime reward for travel is that the young guns can learn about the culture. By this,I mean that as student roams around the world during their break, they will learn about different traditions, languages and social skills. Therefore, they gain their approach to adapting new things into their life, and become multilingual people. Moreover, students get practical experience while doing part-time jobs. In other words, the pupil learns about maintaining financial condition, enhances knowledge about businesses as well as finds their choice for further study. For example, the admission department from the University of Pennsylvania concluded that the students who get admission after a gap, results are exceptional compared to other pupils. There is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like as it's earning good and the work is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be experts in that field , however they do their studies then they have a degree and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small scale . In conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a job , but they can not be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in school and university education", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Your evaluation score is: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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