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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think the technology to detect facial expression is essential or important. I feel like it's irrelevant and pointless. The science and technology behind detecting Mona Lisa's true facial expression on the other hand is fascinating. Though technology is never perfect so it's truly unknown that Mona Lisa feels some type of way in the painting. So to conclude my introduction, I think that software that detect emotion is non-valuable.\n\nSo like I said before, I think software that can detect your emotions is pointless. Well, not that anything is wrong with it, it's just not important. The technology behind detecting facial expressions is never perfectly accurate either, and that's a fact. A computer may actually malfunction saying you're 76 percent angry and 24 percent confused you are really putting on a straight face. When the article stated that \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent\n\ndisgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angery\", The statistics are most likely wrong.\n\nSeriously, I'm pretty sure hundreds of years ago when this portrait was created, She was probably 50% happy, 30% bored, 20% awkward. And I say awkward because she probably sat on a chair quietly for hours until the painting was complete. Anyway, I think the technology that spotted all those emotions on Mona Lisa's face is inaccurate. Does it really matter that a computer can spot your emotional expressions anyway? Maybe for educational purposes it matters, But I still think it's pointless.\n\nI don't see how I can fit in any more facts and information to support my side of the argument. Now that's how I feel about facial expression technology. I would be fascinated with emotional detection on mobile devices or cell phones however. Perhaps something like that is bound to come out soon in electronics stores.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you belive in aliens?\n\nThe first reason why i say that the face was just natural landforms is because,there is no such things as aliens! For example the text says\" a shadowy likeness of a human face.\" This example show that likeness isn't always certain you have to be absolutley sure before you start making claims about what the picture is showing. Did you see it for yourself? Did you do any research about it?\n\nAnother reason why the alien story is real is because ,no one officially approved it. They only took pictures of the face.\n\nNo one went down on mars to examine or observe the face. An example for this would be that the passage says\" only this one had unusual shadws that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh\". This example shows that if it looks like a Egyptian Pharaoh how would the aliens know about it?\n\nThe next reason why the alien myth isnt true is because in the passage it says the word\"illusion\" the word illusion means something that you can see but is not there. For example in the tex it states that \" formed shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth\". This example shows that an illusion may seem real but it is not real. You have to make sure that your facts are reliable and your resources are reliable.\n\nFinally, why people say that the landfrom was formed by aliens is because it\n\n\" appered in books, magazines and radio talk shows--- even haunted grocery store for 25 years\". They don't know just because this thing goes publice dosen't mean it is true. For example\" Some people thimk that it is bona fide evidence\". The people that think taht it is bona fide evidence did they do any research or did they just rely on what the social media says. In conclusion you should believe that the face is a natural landform is because aliens isn't real.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting greatly affected cyclist story First got road sign said Rough Road Ahead already low water made things much worse The rough road made harder pedal therefore working harder getting thirsty Also stopped old Welchs Grape Juice Factory noticed pebbles ground shoved mouth Id read sucking stones helps take mind thirst allowing spit left circulate Lastly GARY AND WILBERS FISH CAMP could possibly saved cyclists life He stopped finally got well deserved drink water settle dehydration fear The setting features severly affected cyclist throughout journey", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that a growing number of people are giving a lot of attention to what happened in the past to the accommodation they live in. There are some factors which help to account for this trend and people today have a number of options when researching facts about their buildings' past.\r\n\r\nIn some countries, people are becoming more curious about the history of their houses and even other accommodations. I have several theories as to why this is happening. Firstly, if people work out the real value that their properties hold, they can become more pleasant to live in. To clarify, some houses have had a variety of records and recollections for a long time, which possibly could enhance the value of the building. For instance, one of these fairly old houses in the US was revealed to be the one Stevie Wonder used to live in when he was young and it was sold for triple the price that the owner paid for it before he knew the fact. Secondly, it is crucial to detect whether the condo has the history of a shack. If it was built a long time ago with inappropriate materials used in those days, renovation and maintenance would be essential. For example, it is said that the usable time of a house or building could be less than 50 years and after that it must be restored or demolished.\r\n\r\nIn terms of ways to find out the history, the most useful way is by using the Internet. Thanks to the advancements in technology, people can have access to a large volume of information. In fact, searching for incidents that happened around where a building stands is very straightforward. If, however, the private flat is located in a local community then asking around local residents would be an efficient way to disseminate lots of information about the land. Having lived there for a long time, they often have substantial knowledge about the history of the house. It is even possible that rumours exist about such properties which can be confirmed or denied by those residents. This kind of information can help people decide whether to take the house or not.\r\n\r\nIn summary conducting due diligence on the history of a property has many effects on where people decide to live. In some special cases, research such as this can lead to financial gain as well as avoiding any possible complications related to its history. Furthermore, using effective measurements to look it up is also important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i dont believe that driverless cars would be a good influence on our population. I say that because i dont think people would use these cars as good use. People wouldnt use these cars for good reason because they would take advantage of it because it can drive on its own, I know it would have a built in camera for our eyes on the road but lets just be real here noone will even take a glance at the road. These cars are really smart cars and all but what does this car do for us? I really think these cars wouldnt do us any good because none of us wouldnt want to drive anymore because it drives on its own therefore that would make us all lazy drivers. im sure these cars know alot but they probably dont know the importance of driving under roads that are under construction, or bad weather, slick roads. Which concerns me of all of our safety, and all our lives at risk. What if the roads are very slick and its foggy outside? i dont think the car can drive through that type of weather because at times it is very hard for us humans to drive under that condition.\n\nMost of us have children and passengers while driving with us all the time i am very concerned of their safety too, what if they are not comfortable with these cars, they want you to take control of the wheel. We all have our opinions on things but these cars i really dont like the idea of it. Like money wise the cars would cost us millions probably for it and there are more important things in the world to buy, we really dont need to spend all our money on these cars. Gas money for these cars what if these cars use a lot of gas?\n\nWe would have to spend like another 80 to 90$ on gas too. The car what if the car alert system or camera stops working?\n\nWe have no other choice but to take the wheel, it shouldnt take all that money for a car and for something to happen to it and we have to end up driving it anyways, so we shouldnt even have this idea of these cars in my opinion its a waste of money. In conclusion i dont think it would be a good idea for us to have this new source of techinology because most of us wont even use it right and it could cause all kinds of problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, state senator\n\nThe Electoral Collage was established by the very people who rote the Declaration Of Independince, some of our gratest invintors, and presidents the founding fathers. The Elcectoral Collage consits of 538 electors and only about 270 electoral votes are required to elect a president. I am in favor of keeping the Elcetoral Collage because the population is biased,and the population isnt always as smart as the people of the Electoral Collage and might not look at their criteria and stats and what quality's they have that make them a good presedent.\n\nThe Elcectoral Collage is made up of 538 elecrtorsthat are suposed to be non biased unlike the public who are very biased in ways that come down to voting for a president because of his skin color. If all of our presedints were voted in because of the race or religion we would wouldknow longer have a country, we would live in segrigation and poverty and would hve 99 cent stores.\n\nMaking a desion is some times very easie and some times very hard and most dissions are thought hard. While making a dessision on who to vote for afuture predident should take time but thats not always what happens. The public might not always take their time and look ovwr the facts and statistics on the future president and if we dint have the electoral collage we would have terrible presidents most of the time.\n\nInconclusion the Elcetoral collage is verry important, and we need it because the public isnt always wright even they think they are and it could have possibly saved our countries if the non elected runners for presedint would have bean president and it it possibly could have enden sufering and bad thing in out county but the Electoral Collage isnt always a good thing but its deeply needed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Beep.. Beep.. Beep... That is the sound of someone's heart monitor at a hospital. can you imagine waking up in the hospital after a car wreck. Well it's happened plenty of times, but the accident was never caused by a driverless car. What about the new laws they will have to make for these new cars? These cars will never happen, and if they do they will cause many accidents in the future.\n\nIn the article I had just read it says \"Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" Say you were to get in a wreck while driving a driverless car, and the car wouldn't use its break so you went through a stop sign and hit another car and someone was killed in the accident. Who's fault is it? Is it your fault for hitting the other car, or is it the manufactures fault for not safely making your vehicle?\n\nDriverless cars are not safe and never will be. Technology always has a glitch somewhere. In the article Driverless Cars are Coming, the talk about sensors in paragraphs four to seven. \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This was said in paragraph seven of the article. But why would they make these driverless cars if they can only reach 25 mph.? Most people would want a driverless car for interstates and highways, because those are the most boring roads in history.\n\nDriverless cars are not safe, they can cause many accidents and who's at fault, you or the manufacturer? Companies just need to stop trying to make driverless cars because they aren't going to be sucessful for society today. Cars need to be human driven and that's all. No driverless cars are coming, not now not ever!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undoubtedly that traffic congestion is a contentious issue in urban areas. In this essay, I will list the reasons for this tendency and suggest some solutions that could that may encourage the government to solve this problem. \r\nThe first cause of traffic jams is that cars have become more affordable for the average consumers and they are no longer a luxury item. The more transport in the roads the more probability of traffic congestion.\r\nA second reason is that road categories do not match their traffic intensity. Broadly speaking, the road may be damaged by an underestimated amount of transportation.\r\nIt may seem that there is no more solution to reduce the disaster rate of the issue. However, one option has to be to improve the reliability of public transport to encourage folk to take the bus or the train rather than get in the car. It would also be possible to discourage people from driving to work by introducing special taxes for using the roads, especially during rush periods. These decisions assist to boost the usage of non-fuel transport such as bicycles, etc.\r\nIn conclusion, there are varieties of different factors that have led to increasing levels of gridlock in metropolitan areas. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution, but actions should probably involve encouraging more use of public transports. Furthermore, taxes on private cars should be increased and eco-friendly transportation like bicycles should be promoted.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author said never seen real grandfather allowed leav cuba whole family new jersey wanted live", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many books library nt From books racism violence pornagraphy I would nt want young children able take type books library A library school great way help sudents projects essays read If child elementry even middle school I would nt want able check book things nt even know yet If teenager high school though I would nt mind old enough realize things actually go world They also could project wrongs pornagraphy library better place find book interent could take many bad websites Since I go local high school I think nice able find anything I need library school It makes easier work projects Also libraries ton music movies magazines If library educational music keep If music rap pop country could get instead library providing Magazines also educational If project fashion would excellent help find tips Magazines also inaproprate things Since talk media sex sex articles would probably magazines Whenever I look magazines I skip nonsense talk read articles clothes food people Exposing young children would nt best teenagers understand Movies nt library unless educational There ton around scary movies nt need library In conclusion I think depends kinds kids going library For young children stay cartoon educational type things For teenagers keep educational relaxed If something offends go talk libraian woukd probably happy take shelf", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours , Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus’s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere. On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. also it can be very dangerous to explore planets without the proper tools . A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus . These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patience good thing rough time life Patience people bringing something They could three hours herd There people cant three hours There people cant ten minets These people get made give But people cant people cant quit People one hour blow And people cant So find anything cant", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear As I fine I writing letter explain believe computers positive effect people The reasons I writing letter people could contack friends families faraway places computers helps leran different parts world also computers helps people understand learn life That s I believe believe computers positive effect people First I believe computers positive effect people people could contack friends families faraway places An example support reason people parts world families different places And good contack But go internet could friends families chat This shows live friends live could I families lives hard But I computer I chat fun time This shows need computer catch friends family That s I believe computers positive effect people Second believe computers positive effect people computers helps learn different parts world An example nt know anything country place could go internet research learn place This shows computers important Another example I project essay I nt know I could go computer look And help project essay That s I believe computers positive effect people Finally I believe computers helps understand learn life An example nt know something right wrong could look help This shows computers give advices Another example computers could give idea If trying new resipie sure make And give inderigant direction make food snack want That s I believe others believe computers positive effects In conclusion believe computers positive effect people could contack friends families computers helps learn different parts world also computers helps learn understand life I would hope read reread letter consider believing computers positive effect people That s believe computers positive effect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health. On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system. In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our world today many people use motor vehicles to get to their destionation. We dont walk anymore we just get in our cars and go. What most people dont see is how it can cause damage to the people and the environment. Cars can be used for good and bad situations in our economy. Their are many advantages and disadvanteges to limiting vehicle usage.\n\nLimiting car usage could benefit people in many ways. The Vauban suburban community lives without therir cars and only use them when nessesary or if they have the permit to use them. A mother, Heidrun Walter says, \"When i had a car i was allways tense. I'm muchhappier this way.\" she was happy with the way her life was going without a vehicle it wasnt as stressful to her. In \"German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\", it says \"Having less vehicles made the suburbs more accessible to public transportation\" this makes everything they build walking distance and everything is closer together, they dont have to use major highways so they can get to a store. It also says, \"many suburbs are starting to resemble Vauban, closer together and have less car owners in the developing world\" this kind of example is leading the world to use less vehicles which would mean less pollutions. Another advantage of limiting car usage would be more people are getiing together and having more social ineractions. In the exerpt from \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" it says, \"The congestion was down 60 percent in the capitol of France.\" this means the roads weren't as backed up and busy. Their is beginning to be a change in the world as less people use their automotives. When Bogota, Columbia did the Day Without Cars the people would walk where they need to get or rode their bicycle. Carlos Arturo Plaza rode his bicycle and said \"Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" people like being able to help their economy. In \"The End of Car Culture\" it says, \"it will have beneficial implications for carbon emmisions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions\" which means the economy will be in a better place.\n\nTheir is also disadvatages of why limiting car usage could be bad for the world. If they're not able to use their car to get to their job or get grocerys how can people be okay? They are getting fined to do what is need for them to survive. \"Delivery companies complained of lost revenue\" it says in \"Paris bans driving in the smog\". Delivery trucks cant do their job if they know they will be fined for being out on the roads without it being their designated day. \"American's are buying less cars and young adults arent getting their liscense as quick\" says, \"the End of Car Culture\". Which means more vehicle industrys are getting less buyers and are having to come up with a \"broader product\".\n\nClearly the world is better off with limited car uasge. It's better for the economy, better for the people, and the environment. They're are more resources for agood reason to cut down on our worlds car usage but their is also the few disadvantages as to why it could be bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Could the Face on Mars be made by aliens? Sorry to say but no the Face on Mars wasn't made by aliens. Back when it first was foundby NASA's Viking, in 1976, I bet a lot of people thought that it could be made be aliens. Since then, NASA has confurmed it as a natural landform.\n\nThe picture from the Viking in 1976 was not clear and had 43 meters per pixal. Now in 2016 43 meters per pixal is like anchent to us. In 1998, NASA's Mars Global surveyor (MGS)\n\ntook another photogragh of the Face. The picture was a little more clear but NASA still couldn't tell forsure that the Face was a natural landform. In 2001, NASA's MGS took another photogragh of the Face on Mars. The picture from 2001 as the most clear picture of the Face and the latest image of the Face. Each pixel in the 2001 photogragh spans 1.56 meters. That is much better quality then in 1976 with 43 meters per pixal.\n\nSince 1976 NASA has had two other oportunities to get a picture of the Face. NASA confurmed that the Face is a natural landform on the planet of Mars. The picture really shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are common around the American West.\n\nThe Face reminds Garvin of the \" Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" The Face on Mars is not made by aliens. NASA has confurmed that the Face on Mars is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author thinks that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. He states that our travels on Earth and other planets, etc. should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nThe author states multiple ways to study Venus despite all of the dangers. For instance he states that a possible solution to the hostile conditions is to hover in a vehicle, about 30 or more miles above the planet. The temperature would still be pretty hot at about 170 degrees, but the air pressure would still be close to our sea level on Earth. They would'nt be easy living conditions; however, they would be survivable for humans.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system and was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported different forms of life, just like Earth. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in size and in distance too; therefore, it can be our nearest option for a planetary visit. I think it would be a very neat experience to study Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Venus, something called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the most brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\"\n\nIn the story, \"The challenging of Explopring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying venus is indeed a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author uses many reasons and example to support this idea. At the beginning of the story, the author states, \"While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\"\n\nIn paragraph 2, it talks about how Venus is one of the closest planets to earth by size and density. Earth, Venus and mars are the three planets that are the closest to the sun and orbit around the sun at different speeds. Since we have differences in speed, it sometimes causes us, Earth, to be closer to Mars and other times Closer to Venus.\n\nBecause of this closesness, humans have sent spacecrafts out to land on this planet, but no one has succeeded in three decades, according to paragraph 2 of the article. They believe this is because of the speed it moves at different points. Venus also has some very dangerous features that makes it even more harder for this planet to be explored.\n\nIn the third paragraph of the article is where the features of venus comes in. This planet is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. which is not very good for humans to be around. Also, the clouds of Venus are highly consisted of sulfuric acid. The average temperature on venus is over 800 degrees Farenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times gretaer then what we exoerience on Earth. A human would have a hard time survivng in this type of temperature. For example, in paragraph 2 it states, \" Such an environment would crush even a submarine customed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\"\n\nIt takes a lot of heat to liquefy a metal on Earth, so the fact that Venus can do this with no problem, shows that a human would not survive the heat on Venus. Not even for a day. It is said that Venus does indeed have the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\n\nIt is said that, even though Venus has these dangerous features, there are reasons why scientist still believe in studying this planet.\n\nIn paragraph 4 it says theat the reason Astronomers are fascianted by Venus is because once upon a time, it was the most Earth like planet in our solar system. A while back, it was said to be covered with oceans and could of have forms of life living on it, just like Earth. \"Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth,\" according to paragraph 4. It has a surface of rocky sediment and familiar features such as valleys, moutains and craters. These are reason why an astronomer would still want to study Venus.\n\nAlso, despite the dangers, the NASA believes there is one way to send humans to study Venus. That is for the scientist to float over the fray of venus, to avoid a good amount of heat from Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many reasons why we shouldn't study venus and why it is a bad idea to send people to Venus, but there are features on Venus that make astronomers and scientist want to explore. Such as the features it has similar to Earth. In spite of this, Scientient are working on new ways that will help them get closer to Venus. For example, \"Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbon dioxide have been tested in a chamber stimulating the chaos od Venus's surafec and have lasted for three weeks.\" Which is actually good considering all the carbon dioxide on Venus. They have also been developing new forms of mechanical computers.\n\nThese are thing scientist and astronomers are doing just to be able to study Venus because this is what they value. In my opinion, they see this as a challenge and they are working and coming up with ways to accomplish this challenge. In paragraph 8, it states, \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This is basically saying that they don't want to just explore it because of the sights. the dangers and doubts are what push them to explore it more because they believe something like this shouldn't stop them from their travels beyond Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humanity believes this land structure is a face left by aliens, we will never know.\n\nWe have to find out and learn.\n\nPeople have questions about this \"face\" on the moon, what does this mean, what next, how did this happen.\n\nThat will remain a mystery.\n\nWe have seen strange objects in the sky, strange \"ships\" and UFO's and what not.\n\nBut we have never had any proof that aliens exist.\n\nwe have never seen one, captured one or anything.\n\nBut we also have never seen them in space.\n\nThese mysterious objects on the moon are just a coincedince.\n\nUntil we have proof that we have captured, seen, or caught on camera a extraterestrial thing we cannot say this object was made by aliens.\n\nThis land structure could be a manmade structure and we would never know it.\n\nWe would never know if othe people made a trip to the moon.\n\nTill we have proof this was not a human manmade structure, it will be a mystery till it is prooved.\n\nThere ar thousands of craters, dents and all kinds of odd looking things on the moon, what makes you think this could be made by someone or something.\n\nIt will remain a mystery till we know who or what did it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that driverless cars would be a good idea but what if the car has complications and problems. What would you do if the cars had technical issues and caused more car crashes and deaths. Also i feel like people would have better luck being safe and not being in car crashes. Plus the driverless cars could also make people not feel like they have any responsabilities in their life like driving and it would just cause people to be lazy and more than likely eat more fast food and drink more soda because of not having to drive and also woud be on their phones to much and pretty much turn everyone into a robot they would have no sense of reality and we would all be pretty much controlled by the car industry. Also i feel like everyone dosen't want a car controlling their safety and life i would rather that be in my own hads and not an electronic car they could have all kinds of complications. Also i have never been a huge technology person i feel like everyone on this earth should control their own life and not have a robot be in control of their safety and well being. And i just want to say that driverless cars is a horrible idea for anything car related that is the most obsciene idea ever in the history of man kind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay describe opinion certain materials offensive removed shelves libraries I think overall anything taken offensive anybody taken libraries I think offensive taken mildly offensive think stay Because library welcomes people ages materials taken offensive children time taken offensive adults But since children go access anything end finding something offensive If child finds something parents taken offensive library could possibly get sued would good So take books music magazines movies suitable people ages cut risk sued Libraries meant provide information anyways They need things offensive rarely something offensive provides information Libraries contain made encyclopedias dictionaries books books provide useful information people In conclusion I would say materials offensive anyone age taken libraries Libraries meant provide information people I think thats", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many technological improvements in the field of education are being made every day. There are constantly new and exciting ways to educate and teach students each and every year. However, behind all of that technology there must still be a competent teacher/instructor there in order to fully teach the material. The use of the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms is not valuable because it lets teachers not engage as much with students, is not necessary for a successful learning environment, and would be too complicated and powerful for most computers to be realistically implemented throughout the country.\n\nWhile technology can definitely assist in giving students a worthwhile academic experience, there still must be a competent and engaged teacher past it in order for students to truly learn. With more and more advancements being made, it gives teachers and instructors less and less responsibility and obligation to teach properly and effectively. While some may argue that a human instructor is not necessary for students to learn, it is still more beneficial for a fellow human being to convey the lessons being taught alongside the technology than just the technology teaching. In the article, the doctor who helped develop the technology states \"''...it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" This quote shows that this technology could essentially take over a lot of aspects of a teacher's job, giving the teacher less of an obligation to teach their students. Human instructors are important for people to learn material effectively, so they must be given a certain amount of responsibility in order for there to be a good learning environment.\n\nWhile this technology could theoretically be beneficial for students, it is not an essential aspect needed for a successful learning environment. The article talks about how this technology can assess people's emotions similarly to how people do in person everyday. In the article, the doctor who helped develop the software says \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.'\" This could be a helpful tool in certain scenarios, but as the article mentions, humans do this process naturally throughout the day and while we cannot assess as accurately as a computer could, we can still sense the general emotion of someone. This makes the face analyzing technology a possibly beneficial tool, but an unnecessary and unrealistic tool as well.\n\nEven if this technology were an absolutely essential part of every classroom, at this point in time it is not realistic to expect it to be implemented effectively. This software is relatively new and is powerful, so an expensive and powerful computer must be used in order to utilize it well. In the article, the author states that \"Your home PC cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisas smile.\" This quote implies that most PC's currently available to people would not be capable of using the software. Even if most schools could acquire the powerful computers needed to run this software, it would take a serious and detrimental chunk of funding away from other more important school aspects such as lunches or libraries. Even though the techonology can be helpful in certain instances, it is not realistic to expect schools to be able to implement it anytime soon.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a promising new technology, and as such has it's fair share of issues. While seemingly impressive and futuristic at first glace, once one begins to take into account other factors the system starts to become more of an interesting novelty than a breaking new education tool to be used in classrooms across the globe. New developments often bring improvement with them, but before being implemented must be tweaked and carefully considered in order to be successful. In around a decade, this facial reading software could be a typical sight in many classrooms. But as it stands now, it has too many flaws and issues in order to be taken seriously.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To have success in our career path opinions have the sight that the most useful way is an academic one and other opinions this direction that getting into a job immediately after school is the better solution.I partially agree with the second opinion, the experience base sight due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.\n\nTo explain the not educational side and in defence of that it is good to maintain that you never ever will be able to learn in university or school about a title as much as you can determine from a real sense in life. Actual cases and problems are the best teachers especially, for a junior person who wants to enrol. To make it clear let me continue with an example. Imagine a situation where you face a communication problem with a business team and your issue is how to get answers to your requests. You can back to your books and search for various methods to communicate with humans and then try each of them to get the result. But what is the best solution in that place? It is better if you have several experiences about this issue at work and as a result of that, you know how to have particular behaviours with diverse communities. According to that example, I believe that having Empirical knowledge is key in the business world. In addition to that, there are a lot of benefits in meet different experts in your field. You can learn a lot from them.\n\nSo moving on and talking about the other side, undoubtedly, there is a huge sea of differences between educated people and not educated ones. A lot of changes will happen to a man or woman in the education process about both his or her sides. They have changes in their characters and their behaviour besides becoming a knowledgeable human. To clarify and as evidence, you can compare two people around you that have or do not have an educational background and think about their treatment with other people. Besides, these certainly, you can not ignore the impacts and needs of a base of academic and well-researched theories and facts to make you able to start a job as an expert. You need a starting point and education gives you the best one.\n\nIn conclusion, probably the best approach is to care about both sides and reinforce each of them at their time to use their pros for any situation. Choosing an academic way or raising your occupation background by getting into a job to progress your career path are both useful but you should make them balance and have all of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates suggested impovements planned for the ground floor of a building\nThe hall in the middle of the floor will be removed and the respective space will be added to the living room. Therefore, there will be no more wall between the living room and that area that is occupied by the hall at the moment. At the same time the wall between the living room and the kitchen as well as stairs will be moved towards the windowless wall and stairs will be reformatted in a spiral shape.\nSome other less important changes will include installation of kitchen furniture in the kitchen, deployment of 2-pieces door between the living room and the kitchen and removal of the storage space under stairs.\nIn conclusion, it can be stated that the most important change to the ground floor will be it reformatting into 2 rooms. Some other changes will be also implemented with regards to the walls, doors and other items.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is the twenty-first century and driverless cars are finally becoming a reality. They are constantly gaining more media coverage by the day. However, do we really require the development of these driverless cars? The answer is quite simple and rather obvious. No, we do not need driverless cars for a numerous amount of reasons.\n\nDespite all the positive aspects being publicized of these driverless cars, there are plethora of overshadowed negative aspects that go with it. Besides, humanity is very much capable of driving their own cars. Google cofounder Sergey Brin firmly believes that the world will thrive under the introduction of these driverless cars. What about the costs? Surely it will cost millions to produce the technology required to operate these cars. Also, the consumers will have to pay more money to purchase them from the companies. If cost was not a major issue alone, safety most defintitely is.\n\nCars are constantly being regulated and tested for safety. Are these driverless cars really safe though? The goal of the production of these cars is to allow the driver more freedom. However, a driver is still required to be behind the wheel and take over in certain instances. If the driver is preoccupied because they are under the assumption that the car will be doing all the driving for them, it could lead to an accident under the circumstances in which the driver actually does need to assume control over their automobile. That is not the end of it's safety problems though. Google has stated that \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\". They fail to mention whether or not it was a closed course in which the car was driven. If they are using these statistics that have only been collected since 2009, it is hard to rely soley on that data considering driver operated cars have been used for a much longer time period, and have been driven numerous distances farther than half a million miles.\n\nLet it not be forgotten that these are \"driverless cars\". Their name implies that no driver is required, when in fact a driver must still be present behind the wheel at all times. The name itself contradicts the point it is trying to make. Now when driving, distractions are certainly a problem for all drivers. Some may argue that by not having to drive they will not have to worry about being distracted. If the drivers become so accustomed to being able to forward their attention towards their \"distractions\" instead of driving, it is likely they could miss a notification or alert sent by the car that requires their control because they are simply too accustomed to not having to drive.\n\nThe technology created for these driverless cars is almost certainly likely to malfunction at one point or another. When it does, accidents can and will occur. Now, not only is there the dilemna of an accident that has to be dealt with, there is also the question of whether the driver is liable or the manufacter of the driverless cars. With the introduction of these driverless cars and the risks that come with their potentially faulty technology, lawsuits are sure to trail. Since the driverless cars still in their early stages of development, many car manufacturers may be wary to start production.\n\nThe negative aspects of the production of driverless cars are infinite. For the greater good, it is wisest to not waste the time, effort, and resources that would be needed to create these cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "American citizens know that the cars driven throughout America is polluting the air. Not just the cars in U.S but cars all around the world. Residents on Vauban in Germany, Paris, Bogota and even the USA cars are reduced from bieng driven or they had been banned to reduce the pollution from the air. They dont want to turn out like China, which is know as one of the most polluted cities in the word. Cars been a very help, but it looks like the end of car culture beacuse less cars that are bieng used less pollution we are causing to the Earth, which mean its better of with out them.\n\nVauban, a women named Heidrun Walter said, \"when i had a car I was always tense. Im much happier this way\". There for one of the advantages of limiting car usage is that losing tense about a car. Also in Vauban,street parking, driveways and home garages generally are forbidden. That mean it take less space for parking, past two decades there was an effort in making cities denser, and better for walking now they can if they limite the usage of cars. It lower emissions and improves saftey, These are some advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nAlmost 4,000 drivers were fine, according to Reuters in Paris. They been fine beacuse Paris had banned driving due to smog. Trying to fix the problem to clear the air of the global city they ordered to leave thier cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). Less cars mean less warmer climants beacuse cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Benfits would come from less car usage. Now in Bogota there is a car-free day, when u leave cars at home and you cant use them for a whole day. For that day there isn't any traffic because all of the residents are hiking, biking, skating or taking the bus to work. This car-free day reduce smog and if any person violats that day they are going to be fine $25. They said its a good way to take away stress and lower pollution. Municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event and were enthusiastic.\n\nPresident Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United states' greenhouse gas emission, unveild last week. Recent studies suggest that the Americans are buying fewer cars. They are driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The love of vehicles seems to be cooling. Population growth,the number of miles driven in the Untied States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter. Car ownership per household and per person started to come down.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I normally always patient time I patient I baby sat I babysitting older cousin We babysitting twin fourmonths old baby girls eight hours Let tell babies lot work need lot patience One time day needed patient cried These babies cries lot long time took calm Like I sat one twin fell asleep would start screaming I used patience take time calm Another event day I used patient fell asleep The baby I mainly took care took fall asleep So I patient walking around house bouncing arms Of course eventually fell asleep A third time I used patience feeding See small twins took long time eat Also I fed baby I took care natalic I use patience freak spit shirt cousin also used patience her baby spit That day took lot patience still fun see lots work patience definitely got", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nWhat are the chances in favor of keeping the electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states? Does the Electoral College work?\n\nFirst of all, What is the electoral college? The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\n\nThe Electoral College process consists of the selection of the selectors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president,and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.\n\nWhat's wrong with the electoral college? Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn the president. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all systemin each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing on the tight races in the \"swing\"states. It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elactions are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Face on Mars\"\n\nOn May 24 2001, a NASA spacecraft discovered a shadow in the shape of a human face. Some scientist believed that the face was caused by aliens, but many others believed that it was just a natural landform. Mesa's and butte's are two types of natural landforms. They are very common around Cydonia.\n\nAround May, NASA put the image on the interenet for everyone to view. The caption of the picture said it was a huge rock with the ILLUSION of a face. An illusion is a when someone plays a trick on your eyes,this means it could look like a face but be an mesa. The way a person sees something is based on their own perspective. If one scientist sees a alien shape,another person sees a human face,and the other see a rock it is based on their point of view.\n\nThe picture caught alot of attention even by the chief scientist of NASA\"s Mars Exploration Program,Jim Gavin. Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team came to take pictures of Mars. The used a camera that had better quality than the Viking spacecraft. MOC's picture proved that the Face was only a natural landform. There were people who still thought it was analien so they took another picture. They used a camera that would make the image 3 times its pixel size, this means that if their was anything or size you would see is.\n\nIn the end,pictures proved that the Face shaped like a human's turned out to be just a butte or a mesa which was common. Many people are disappointed, but scientist have proven thier theory of ancient civilization on the Red Planet is incorrect. The Face still remains on the planet Mars. There are still many parts of the world that are yet to be discovered. Who knows what is out there?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock actual design mooring modifications would made building Due stress wind pressure load dirigible structure building made stronger The mast would also withstand holding dirigible one cable tether would put lot stress mast building Another issue faced builders fact dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen helium balloon made flammable dangerous If one ever caught fire New York City would disastrous Finally already law place airships could fly low urban areas This law made illegal ship ever tie even approach Empire State Building In conclusion obstacles faced builders Empire State Building faced many challenges great overcome When came trying allow dirigibles dock spire building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face of Mars\" isn't really a face. It only looks like one. It's because of the land and the shadows it gets, from different angles. It may look more like a face at other angles, and it also maybe just looks like a big blob of land. So it's not a face. Also if anyone was able to create that it'd be impossible because no human being could live there. There's no oxygen there. So it'd be impossible if someone created that, there on the planet Mars.\n\nYes, when they did first discover the \"Face on Mars\" everyone thought it was a face on Mars, but over the years it became a whole lot easier to see. At first the photo taken in 1976, was a very blurry picture, not high quality on that first one. Then the second one, taken in 1998, it sort of still looked like a face, but not as much as the first photo. Then the last one taken in 2001, you could see and tell that it wasn't a face. It was just the way you would look at it. At different angles. So it is really all your say, not mine.\n\nIt only looks like a face because of the shadows and the landform. The huge rock formation has given everyone the illusion of it having eyes, nose and a mouth. When none of that stuff is really there, in the first place It just looks like it's there, but in reality it's not. Nothing is there except for rock formations and a whole bunch of different landforms. There's also one weird and unusual shadow that made the rock formation look something like an Egyptain Pharaoh.\n\nIt just all depends on if you still think it looks like a face. It's all your opinion, not mine. Ihave no say in what you think it looks like. We don't see everything in the same way, no one does. So if you think it looks a face still then to you it's a face. But to me it's just some landform that looked a lot like a face when the first photo that was taken in 1976, it looked a lot like a face. But then over the years we took more pictures an dit turns out just to be some landforms and shadows.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued whether or not governments should help senior citizens. Although I acknowledge that we all have the responsibility to save money for retirement, I also have a firm belief that elderly people should receive support from the state. \n\nThere are several reasons behind the situation about old-age individuals should get government support. One is the job market is increasingly becoming competitive. For example, there are hundreds of applications for one position in a company; whereby results in competition between elders and youth. In many cases, these young adults are usually well-prepared for the post with relevant academic qualifications that provide fewer job opportunities for the older generation making it difficult to pay for housing and food. In the end, the elderly people are fragile and they lack the physical capabilities to work; thereby it could be dangerous for their health, especially in some labour works, like in restaurants. \n\nMoreover, some aged citizens may need extra assistance regarding basic living like cooking, cleaning and shopping, but many elders are left out of care by their offspring. This is because of the modern social system where many workers are often pushed to be committed only to their careers. Thus, it is one of the roles of the government to take into consideration of old and physically vulnerable members of society because when they were young and healthy, they engaged themselves in the development of society and paid a lot of tax. As a result, elderly patients need special care from the nation.\n\n To summarize, I believe that the authorities should favour their society, especially the old group of people because of their physical inability to work and lack of job opportunities according to their strength and capabilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the use of Facial Action Coding Systems should be used in classrooms. The Facial Action Coding System could determine if students are happy about the topic they are learning in class. This could help teachers see the pros and cons of their teaching style. The new use of this technology could give teachers a better understanding of their students if proven 100% accurate.\n\nIf this new technology is inputed into classrooms, it could increase grades. The Facial Acting Coding System could lead to better opportunitites for students because the technology could let the teacher know about how they are feeling on something that is being done in class. Also, if a student is being dishonest with the teacher on a situation it could help lead to a solution. The new technology could bring great joy but, it can also be inaccurate and hurt students grades. For example, a student could be very confused on a topic and may not want to ask questions so they will not sound unintelligent on the topic or feel embarressed because they do not understand. The technology could show that person as being focused and eager to learn the topic. This problem could occur and lead to some bad interpretations.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding system can be a great addition to classrooms. It can benefit students and teachers. Students will not have to ask that many questions anymore and it can lead to better opportunities for students. Teachers could also benefit from the new technology and recieve feedback to make them a better teacher. The Facial Action Coding System could be a valuable asset to classrooms all around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the way by making a happy face is a expermiment in also make me fell slighty happy, emotion or moving i s when your facial muscles ans not only experiment also make me, or you slighty and happy in also by theory of emotion, and moving not only expresses emotions, but also may even help prouce people.\n\nintroduction.\n\nI think the expresion in one of the mirror it sugest an emotion we can lab our parther to reconize whick one is a introduction of a face that looks happy, and it also about the body, and kind of like actions units these even indicate the different between a genuies smile and a forced one. body paragraph, bu I think in a false smile, maybe the mouth is stretched in another way or to a sideway like using zygomatic major and a different muscle, to an expert face dosn't lie.\n\ni think mona lisa demostration is really intented to bring a smile to another person is smile, while it shows just much a computer can do imagine a computer that knows when you are sad, for example if you smile when a web ad appers on your screen, a similar and might follow,\n\nI think the same technology can make computer animated facer or more expressive for example like video games or video surgery, and most human communication is nonvebal, includind like emotional communication.\n\nMaybe the phone can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode mona lsa's smile.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay using the technology system \"Facial action coding system\" the emotional expression of students in a classroom can be valuable.\n\nThe new technology system could help For example like not smiling broadly using video imagery In paragraph 5 technology you can see if your friend are pretendind to be emotional of course most, of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. It's saying in the quote that humans are not good at describing facial action \"coding system\" can see and know what really are people's feelings.\n\nBy using the new the new \"Facial Action Coding System\" in a school system can be valuable to the school system because computers can recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored the coding system can make computer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.\n\nConclusion i think that the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is not a bad idea it can detect when you're happy or sad is a good idea for the students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While a group of people claim that the time spent watching television is detrimental for youngsters, others argue that this trend is advantageous for them. Both approaches have their own shortcomings and merits in association with children and it is my firm belief that streaming TV is not doing any good to the juveniles.\r\n\r\nTo start with, the TV has long been a reign of traditional information radiators in the world, a source of reliable data to many. Likewise, TV streaming services are considered one of the most effective methods to raise kids at home regardless of the difficulties. For instance, they can learn the fundamentals of the world by closely engaging with captivating documentaries and series. On top of that it is an additional booster to the youth to hone their social and learning skills just through sitting in front of television programs. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some people who oppose the idea of watching television and its negative impact on children. The first reason why some people evaluate streaming television as a waste of time for younger generations. Furthermore, after watching television for a certain amount of time, children become addicted to streaming these shows perpetually. In addition to ,that they also get exposed to censored views without even a restriction which poses a direct threat to their healthy development to become a successful individual in today's society. \r\n\r\nFrom my perspective, I strongly believe that the members of the younger generation can agree with me in this matter in which young people who are more vulnerable to the changes that are occurring in the surrounding echo system, should stay away from streaming excessive Television though some kids can benefit greatly.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although some side effects in either realm, psychological or physical aspects, can be experienced by the young, they would be eradicated if supervising control can be considered by seniors, prohibiting them from violence for example. Thereby, through watching fruitful programmes children can broaden their horizons about the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The natural face\n\nI think the face is a natural landform. The article states that Scientsists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, but only this one had an unusual shadow that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh. The scientsts flew to Cydonia for the first to take pictures of the original Viking photos. Thousands were waiting for the image first appeared on a JPL web site. The web site had revealed that the face was not an alien, but it was an natural landform.\n\nMichael Malin and his Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times haper than the original photo. Face was located at 41 degree north matian latitude where it was winter in april, 1998. The camera showed the image and there was no alien monument after all. The picture actually shows the Marian equivalent of a butte landform common around the American West. The scientists tried it again and they just don't pass over the Face very often.\n\nThe face is an natural landform like the article said", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays automobile congestions on the road have become a common problem in the urban areas all across the globe. Moreover, this issue is somewhat affecting the quality of living of the working individuals. This essay will discuss a few main reasons responsible for this issue and suggest some solutions to it, followed by a conclusion.\r\n\r\nOne of the root cause of soaring road-movement congestions can be that more than 80% of the companies are based in towns and thus attracting job seekers from various rural areas to shift to these cities. Which as a result is overcrowding the urban population and leading to other related issues such as automobile-congestion. To exemplify, since Mumbai is the business capital of the nation and it has a large number of organizations placed here, more than 70% of the individuals living in the city are migrants from various underdeveloped places. Every day, these humans spend not less than 2 hours to commute to their office. In solution to these issues, it has been suggested by many working-class that the work opportunities should be distributed among the rural and urban areas. This will lead to less bottle-neck in the cities. Hence, eliminating related issues such as high transportation volumes. At the same time, it will also promote the job market in developing towns. \r\n\r\nAnother reason could be the similarity in the office timing of the majority of firms. Consequently, the standard job hours of all the corporates are the same. To illustrate, more than 90% of the companies have office hours as 9am to 5pm. Therefore, mostly everyone starts their travel to reach the job or to their home at the same time and end up spending hours in traffic.To negate this everyday stress, the government bodies can suggest the corporates to re-built the working hours industry-wise. For instance, maybe the Telecome industry can be guided to amend their work timing as 8:00 am to 4:00pm and automobile industry can keep 11:00 am to 6:00 pm as their job schedule. Subsequently, bifurcating the traffic load from the roads.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the everyday stress of heavy road traffic can be eliminated by distributing the work opportunity among the rural and urban cities as well as by industry-wise bifurcating the office-timings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Google cofounder Sergey Brin has the idea of driverless cars being a perminate substitue to what we have today. These come a lot of negative sides to that; which include any malfunction the driverless car might have, and the amount of money this car would cost to manufacture. Also if there happened to be an accident the constant fued between the owner of the car and the company as to whoes fault it would be. This essay is to provide you with information as to why driverless cars would not be a good idea.\n\nDriverless cars. Are they actually safe? Driverless cars are not safe. The way a car dives is all in the manner of sensors. In paragraph five the article states \"sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" Meaning sensors are the only thing protecting the person or people in this driverless car. If there was an incident where the sensor did not pick up heavy traffic or road work like they are supposed to (stated in paragraph 7) and there was damage done to the sensors. This oh so great driverless car would not be as great as the manufactures claim it is. This car could spin out of control and damage any amount of sensors needed to alert the liscensed adult in the car if there is something wrong. If the driver is not alerted then whoes fault would it be if there was an accident.?\n\nCar accidents happen everyday. There is always a person who caused this accident to occur. With a driverless car if an accident happened there is always the question of whoes fault it would be. Would if be the owner of the car for not being aware or would it be the car manufactures fault, for having a faulty car. The car manufactures could have broken a sensor whle assembling the car and not have realized it, then selling it to an innocent by-stander. The new owner takes the driverless car out of a ride later that night and the car does not give signal to the owner that there is road work ahead and the owner gets into an accident. Would this be the new owners fault for not paying attention to the road or the car manufactures fault for selling a damaged car, that does not have all the advancements the manufactures claimed it had? If there was an injury who would have to pay for it? The car manufactures or the owner? It is already expensive enough to construct the car, imagine the car manufactures having to pay a hospital bill as well.\n\nPrice. The price of assembling a driverless car is outrageous. The manufacturer would have to buy the sensors needed for the car. Which requires many (stated in paragraph 4). Sensors for items as big as cars are very expensive. The manufacturer then has to buy the type of material they want the car to be made out of. Pay for a lab to do a test drive with and then go back and fix any mistakes they made the first time, but with a brand new car. Repedeately having to buy sensor and the right materials for the car, until the car is how they want it to be. Car dealerships then buy the driverless car; spending a lot more money than it was worth and then sell it to consumers for two timesmore than what they had originally bought it for. If anything happened to the driverless car while you were not paying attention how much would it cost to replace and fix what was damaged?\n\nDriverless cars are dangerous, expensive and pointless. Would you want driverless cars on the same streets as your child? Cars that are only controlled by a computure. Driverless cars are as dangerous as letting a dog drive a taxi. Keeping drivers behind the wheel at all times is an incredbile idea. Driverless cars are a waste of time, money and effort from all of the cosumers involved in buying and manufacturing it. Save your money, and save your life and continue to drive your own car. Do not let a computure take over what was made for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story paragraph show Saeng follow nature try fit new land Saeng failed drivers test feels place new home The text states As Saebba nedae tall lush And surrounded garden No When sees reminds old home fit inNow wants wait see flower grown takes drivers test againAlso sees geese fly head plants r flower The author writes She realized many things thought strange become almost familiar how No geese coming back spring also remind new name must try live happily In last paragraph author writes I take test again No gives feeling Saeng trying start new beginning new home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The following diagram elaborates the steps of coffee processing and production. The diagram contains different graphs that each gives an idea of each step in order.\nOverall, coffee processing takes eleven steps until it is readily available for us to consume.\nFirst of all, farmers pick the beans off the trees as they ripen and then expose them to the sun in the open air to dry. Afterwards, the dried beans are put in a big closed pot in which the beans are roasted by heat.\nThen, and rapidly, the heated beans are cooled off. In the fifth step, the beans are put in a grinder where they are crushed into tiny pieces. The crushed beans then are mixed with hot water and the mixture is strained.\nAdditionally, the mixture is then cooled till they are frozen. In this step the product is just a frozen liquid that is grinded again.\nMoreover, the mixture is then put in a vacuumed pot in which it is heated to evaporate the water rendering the product completely dry and ready to be packed.\nLastly, the mixture is packed into jars that we know of ready to be used and consumed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor I hear looking citizens opinion computers bad good opinion computers bad I think computers bad three ways I want express hopefully persuade going towards side Smell nice day I smell flowers grass many first reason computers bad use computer much nt see enough enjoying nature Nature beautiful green grass rainbows sometimes You make walk moons In words nature nice set enjoy If nt enjoy nature might late soon become rainy yes fem flabberlasting colors comes fall winter Winter nice cold You work need shovel drive way car get tire The goof get chorse Oh make next reason computers bad When good smile run next reason I think computers bad spend working time exersing Excersing fun thing fel go outside Hang friends many shore Exercise main way staying healthy nt really get unhealthy sick dies die friend nothing use The computer body rest weaker weaker exercise ias main piece staing healthy many ways health bike run walk rog canate climb mountain etc The posibilitys endless exercesing park never knew meet car s fast say friend yo sup man much fiding around exercise see never know meet park friend alwasys think yep park I would nt met insine computer Like said friend But since I come every day meet new friend every day maybe So last reason I think computer bad nt get enough interacting time friends family I love family I interact If exercising computer one In conclusion I think computer bad get enought time exercising enjoying nature spending time family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting story affected cyclist made journey Yosemite even harder In story says hot could drop dead heatstroke Also lack water made extreamly tired petaled Next sun beating tired due lack water also hot loosing water energy sweat Thats features setting made journey YoSemite difficult", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author believes that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents to us humans. Venus moves at a slower pace then earth but not as fast as mars. Its one of our closes planets next to mars. Venus has a atomsphere of 800 degrees Fahrenheit and its pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on planest earth.\n\nThe author states that venus could have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. Venus long ago was most likely covered largely with oceans. The planet could have supported many means of life form on it just like earth. Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration has a idea on sending humans to try and live on venus. The way it would be done is using a blimp like hovering vehicle floating 30 miles or so off venus landscape. This would let the people onboard to never have to step foot on the harsh landscape of venus.\n\nNASA is working on other ways to study venus. Some electronics with silcon carbide could lead to the answer to NASAs problems. Looking back at a old technology call mechanical computers. These devices were used during the second world war and could lead to the way scientist explore and survey venus in the future.\n\nThe way the author uses the evdience given is able to support his idea. Venus may be dangerous to normal humans to step foot on. Venus may be way to hot and have a very thick atomsphere. Venus maybe able to support life once again and to start a new there. Venus IS a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Comeing\" it was alot of both positive and negativ aspects of driverless cars. what is the point of driverless cars? there isn't a point.\n\nDriverless cars should not be allower thay are vrey unsafe and lazy.\n\nIf a person want a car that can dirver by it self the they are very lazy. If u don't want to drvier your car then thats way they have buses for that way they have trines. It's many way to get aroun then useing a drierless car. driverless car are not a good idea at all. Some of the ideas they have for a driverless car are vary good like in the article when the siad\n\n\" they need a whole lot of sensors\". That a grate idea for a car. The smart-road systems was a good idea to. There is no poins in driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are very unsafe too. like the article siad \"some cars are designed tio notfy the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around \". If you still have to do all of that then what poin of having a driverles car then. Think about it what if the driver fall a sleep and there is a work zone ahead and the car can't drive around it then ther a big thing. driverless car are should not be allowd There is some good idea that driverless cars have but most of them are unsafey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The presented bar graphs illustrate the number of people who had access to water and its purity in Australia and SouthEast Asia in 1990 and 2010.\nOverall, what stands out is that in Australia both the quantity of people supplied with water and its cleanliness were higher over the given period in Australia than in South East Asia.\nIf we examine the diagrams in more detail, it can be clearly seen that in 1990 the number of people who had access to clean water in Australia was twice as many as the figures for South East Asia: 80% vs just under 40%. The same could be said about its purity - almost 70% in Australia and just 40% in Asian region.\nTurning to 2010, it is worth mentioning that in Australia we can see a positive growth in both, access to water and its quality. In South East Asia, despite a significant increase in the number of people who got access to water, we can see that there was a slight decline in its cleanliness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want to keep the Electoral College or change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States? I would want to keep the Electoral College. I would want to keep the Electoral College because it keeps its process organized, it helps people vote, and it helps people out. If i were you id pick to keep the Electoral College. So let me tell you why you should pick to keep the Electoral College.\n\nFirst of all, you should pick the Electoral College because it keeps the process organized. If you didnt have the Electoral College than you'd probably be confused about a lot of things. You wouldnt know where to go to vote. Also you probably wouldnt know where the section of the electors is. \"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. If you didnt have the Electoral College you wouldnt know anything of that, so pick to keep the Electoral College.\n\nSecond of all, you should pick to keep the Electoral College because it helps people vote. If it wasnt for electors you probably wouldnt be picking a President or none of that because the electors set it all up. The Electoral College tells you where the meeting is to vote. The Electoral College has 538 electors and there has to be a majority of 270 electoral votes to elect a president. So there is no reason not to pick to keep the Electoral College.\n\nThird of all, it helps people out. It helps people out by telling them what to do, where to go, and who to vote for. If there wasnt an Electoral College it would be harder to vote. If its in the Constitution that means it will help you. The Founding Fathers put it there for a reason. So if i were you id pick the Electoral Collge i wouldnt pick to change the election by popular votes for the president of the United States.\n\nLast but not least, I think you should pick to keep the Electoral College because it keeps its process organized, it helps people vote, and it helps people out. Why would you pick to change the election by popular votes? What good is gonna happen? Nothing. It would be better to pick to keep the Electoral College. So you should without a doubt pick the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unreal Theories & Magazine Believings\n\nI believe the face on mars is a natural landform. I believe this because, in a few paragraphs, they say that it can't be possible and that they took a picture and that wasn't the case. My three examples from the text are in paragraph 11, paragraph 7, and paragraph 9. The face on mars is a landform, and i could prove it to you.\n\nIn paragraph 11 it shows that this so called \"face\" is actually not a real face. It says in paragraph 11, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see wat they were\". I think that this \"fact\" is actually kind of unreal. For example, if you take a picture of the sun, and you make the picture 3 times bigger than that size, you wont see how the real sun looks because the picture doesnt have all the good pixels you need to get a perfect picture. Its almost to never when someone has a perfect picture and you can see every detail of the picture.\n\nIn paragraph 7 it states \"Thousands of web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared in a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all\". Thats one of the best examples i have so far because, if they went up to mars to check out if this face was real or fake and it ended up to be fake, AND they have proof, of course its not going to be real. some people still believe that the face is still real as it says in paragraph 8. Some people were so anxious to have the answer, that they started to have theories about the planet. as it says in paragraph 8,\"The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze\". If anyone has heard me, i have said SKEPTICS. They said that for a reason to let people know that answers is better than a hypoothesis.\n\nMy last example is from paragraph 9. In paragraph 9, it says that \" Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. \"We just don't pass over the Face very often,\" he noted\".\n\nThey dont pass over the face very often because if you think about it, they just look straight down and scan the planet. The planet doesn't swirl on different sides. it stays in something that is called orbit. Orbit is something used for the plant to go in circles. it doesn't go everywhere like a regular sphere on earth, it has to stay in one place.\n\nI believe that the Face isnt a real face, but actually a landform. I have chosen Those few examples to change your mind about how you feel about the Face, when, in all reality, its a landform. I believe I can change your mind about the feeling of knowing that this Face is a natural landform, most likely made by a meteor hitting the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System could be the latest and greatest new advancement in schools all over the country. Although there are some downsides and possible \"invasion of privacy\" claims against using it at schools or on children, I believe that the benefits outweigh the cons.\n\nThe article quotes a scientist, Dr. Huang, who is studying this technology, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored... Then could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This quote leads me to my first point: The Facial Action Coding System would help children learn and stay focused in class. All students, including me, have all had times that they've had to sit through very boring classes or lessons, possibly even causing them to fall asleep at some point. This technology would alert the teacher when students become so bored that they are literally falling asleep, and possibly allow the teacher to change course of the lesson. Otherwise, students aren't learning what they need to be learning and teachers don't know what their students think about their style of teaching.\n\nMy second reason for preaching this code is that it may be able to help depressed kids, or kids that are thinking about doing something terrible (i.e. killing themselves or others). The number one reason for suicide is depression, but nobody can treat depression unless they know when someone has it. Most depressed kids will not tell anyone how they are feeling or will only tell their closest friends. This is the main reason nobody can help them. With this technology, parents, teachers, and doctors could all look at the students emotions at different times of the day, and possibly determine whether or not their kid is truly happy, or is only acting happy. The same goes for kids who may have some sort of anger issue. If someone is looking at this software and notices that one kid is angery every time he looks at a certain classmate, the person using the software might be able to talk to the kid, or at least keep a closer eye on him/her.\n\nSome opposers of the FACS software may say, \"this is an invasion of privacy,\" or \"Sometimes its best for people not to know how someone else is feeling about them.\" Although, yes, in certain scenarios it is best not to know how people feel about you, for teachers I believe it would be very valuble to the education of youth by being able to shape a lesson around what the kids actually enjoy learning, or at least keep them interested. Also, is it really an invasion of privacy? I don't think so. Facial expressions are shown to everybody already, just by looking at them, so even without this technology someone with the right skills and education could read their face just the same.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would improve schools across the world by making lessons better for children. Children would stay more focused in school, whether because they are actually interested or whether they just don't want the teacher to see they are bored, it still has the same effect. The software also has the ability to save lives by diagnosing or at least finding leads on depression, and also by spotting a bad kid before he can do anything terrible. The FACS is a valuble asset to schools all over the world, and once made available and cheap, should be everywhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is for helping people who need food after World War one. The program sends people who sign up to go on boats and take care of animals until they get to the spot where they are supposed to get off.\n\nLuke had been working two part time jobs and his friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He didn't say no because it was an opportunity of his lifetime. The program was to give countries supplies to recover food. The UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration)employed seagoing cowboys totake careof horses, young cows,and mules.\n\nLuke and Don(his friend) had went to New Orleans to get their seaman's papers then went to Greecewith a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. luke turned 18 before he got to Greece and was able to be drafted for the millitary. When he got drafted an dfound out what he was doing they told to keep doing that for his service.\n\nSome reasons you should join this program is for one you get to travle. Another reason why is you can help poeple when they need it most. Luke claims it is a once and a lifetime thing that you don't get a chance to do a lot. Lastly it taeches you to take care of animals properly.\n\nIn conclusion you should join this group because you get to go around the world. Have great big adventures, and just have fun while taking care of things. If you are thinking about joining this program tell your friends to join it with you. When you are thinking about joining this program just think of all the places you'll go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cares are coming. It's true, though it almost seems something out of science fiction. Today, we have cars that can drive themselves with the aid of humans. This means that there is still a driver, though they won't be doing much except sitting and watching the road. They must watch the road as they may need to take control of the car if there is an accident, construction, or if a road is closed off for another reason. This is a far cry from what we think driverless cars to be. Of course, the technology is there, it's just a very basic state of it. Most of what is there, the basics, is still very complex.\n\nIn my own opinion, yes, driverless cars are the way of the future. However, there is still use of a driver within the driverless car. So maybe not calling them driverless cars as a start, perhaps independent cars or auto cars. Having a driver still within the car can help, it may be that some places aren't mapped on the maps within the car. This may mean that the driver will have to take over, placing the safety of others into the hands of the driver. The thing with the driverless cars is that if there is an accident, whether it be man-made or machine error, whose fault is it? This is a big question, with many different answers. The truth is, there isn't laws in place for this, as there are no true driverless cars on the roads. We could pin the blame on the driver, for not taking control at the right moment to prevent a disaster. The same could be said for the manufacturer, for creating a faulty program within the car.\n\nToday, the problem with cars is simple. They are dangerous. There isn't a bigger risk today than getting in a car and driving. Hundreds of people die or are injured in a car accident today and most of them are due to humans. A driverless car could reduce the amount of accidents and deaths on the roads. There still is need of people being at the wheel of the vehicle, but with less human interaction of the vehicles operation, the less likely it is to result in failure on the drivers part. There is also a possibility of it helping drunk drivers. If someone gets into the vehicle, they could tell the car their destination, and be on their way. This could result in less accidents and less deaths with vehicles involved. However, on the flip side of things, this may not help. If a third party company creates a faulty program for the vehicles for a big company, the blame will be pinned on the big company for outsourcing. This results in more strict laws on driverless cars and could result in there being less appeal to the idea of a driverless, or semi-driverless, car. We're still a few years from having driverless cars, and even more from having completely driverless cars.\n\nMy opinion is that self driving cars could help our society. We could gain so much from this, most of it being less accidents and deaths from something that is so important to many of our lives today. Taking the risk of getting in a car with someone who is new, elderly, or drunk is huge. Today, that risk is garunteed with consequences. Most of them are bad, with either injuries or death some big ones. Tomorrow, that risk could decrease with semi-driverless cars or completely driverless cars. The possibilities are endless with a car that rarely, if ever, requires human interaction on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ART CONSIDER A FRAMEWORK OF SOCIETY .REFLECT PEOPLE TRADITIONAL AND NORM,ARTIST REQUIRE FINANCIAL SUPPORT ,BESIDE MEMORIAL AND EMOTIONAL SUPPORT TO BECOME CREATIVE AND MOTIVATED,ASSISTANCE ALLMOST COME FROM PUBLIC BODIES ,LIKE GOVERNMENT AND OTHER PUBLIC ORGANIZATIONS.\r\n\r\nMY OPINION IS THAT,MORE ASSISTANT TO ART ,WILL DEVELOP ART AND IMPROVE IT,BUILD A NEW GENERATION OF ARTISTS.NEGATIVE THINKING LIKE WASTE OF MONEY MAKE A GAP BETWEEN ARTISTS AND POPULATION ,ALL THE MONEY GIVEN FOR THEM WILL DIRECTED TO G ART SERVICE .\r\n\r\nSOME PEOPLE DO NOT UNDERSTAND MEAN OF ART THINK IT IS WASTE OF MONEY.I DISAGREE WITH THEM .I BELIEVE ART IS FACE OF ANY COUNTRY OR SOIETY,SONG,DRAMA OR FILM OR WHAT EVER APPEAR THE HUMAN ART,NATIONAL INTERST AND GEAOGRAFIC NATURE EVEN.\r\n\r\nALOT OF COUNTRIES GOVERNMENT NOWADAYS SUPPORT ART BECUASE THEY KNOW IT IS ONE OF FORCE OF POWER,THEY HELP MEDIA LIKE TV , RADIO AND NEWSPAPER TO FOCUSE ON IT.ALSO THEY BUILD ALOT OF ACADEMIC COLLEGES AND UNIVERSITY FACULTIES FOR ART EDUCATION ,EITHER UNDERGRADUATE OR POST GRADUATE STUDIES TO INCOURGE STUDENT AND NEW APPLICANT FOR THIS TYPE OF EDUCATION,\r\n\r\nTHERE IS ALOT OF ARTIST NOW ADAYS BECOME POPULAR ,AND THEY PROVIDE MANY SOCIAL ACTIVITIES AND ASSIST PEOPLE,MOST OF THEM COMMON AND KNOWN,SPECIALLY IN SOCIAL MEDIA,FOR EXAMPLE IN CINEMA ,SINGER OR ACTORS.THEY CONSIDER AMMBASADOR OF THEIR COUNTRIES,LIKE MICHEL JAKSON OR BOB MARLEY.\r\n\r\nIN CONCLUTION I BELIEVE GOVERNMENT SUPPORT TO ART MUST BE,AND I REFUSE REGARDING THINKING IT IS ONLY MONEY WASTE.I HOPE ALL GOVERNMENT IN ALL COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD THINK POSITIVELY TO THE DIFFERENT SORT OF ART.AND IMPOWER IT.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, that is not a face in the picture from the Viking 1 from 1976,rather, like the scientists at NASA say, it is a natural landform.Yes, I know it looks like a face but in reality,\n\nit's not.Technically, you really can't say it is from an alien life form because scientists and astronauts haven't found evidence of life on Mars yet.Conspiracy theorists say NASA is trying to hide the truth from us when actually they want you to know the truth.Otherwise, if they didn't want you to know the truth they wouldn't have put the picture out in the first place.There are a lot of statistics and facts that obviously point to the truth and I'm going to explain all of them to you.First,the other and newer pictures, the obvius comparison to landforms on Earth, and why your brain thinks it sees a face.\n\nFirst of all, it's obvoiusly not a face because the newer pictures ,that were taken of the same thing show a different thing.You might wonder, how can it show a different thing but still be the same thing?Well, the newest picture,from 2001, was taken with a much better camera.So, the picture is clearer and so is the fact that this is a natural landform.Finally, the pictures are the most important clue that the face is a natural landform.That is how the pictures tell that the face is a landform.\n\nSecondly, if you compare landforms on Earth to the face pictures you'll get similar pictures.For example, if you take a picture of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho from above and compare it to the 2001 picture they'll look identical.That is according to cheif scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program.He stated that, the face reminds him the most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.Finally, when and if you get the chance you should compare the face to other landforms on Earth.That is how comparing landforms on Earth,to the face can provide evidence to you that the face is a natural landform.\n\nLastly, your brain somewhat tricks you into seeing a face,but don't worry because it's natural.When you look at the first picture, you're most likely going to see a face, even I see a face.So, we kind of get excited about discovering another life form, and we start to jump to conclusions.Don't think there is something wrong with that because there is not, as long as you have evidence to support it,but in this case,you don't.Furthermore, the reason are brain 'tricks' us into seeing a face is in our DNA.For example,from when you were born everytime you looked in the mirror or looked at somebody else, you saw a face.The reason why you always see a face is because our brain has been ''hard-wired'' to recognize a face.That is how our brains trick us into seeing a face.\n\nTo conclude, those are all the clues/reasons why your brain sees and thinks the first picture is a face when it's actually a natural landform called a mesa.To recap, the comparison of the first picture to the 2001 picture can show that it's a mesa. Next, the comparison of landforms on Earth to the face can show you it's a mesa.Those are clues that can prove to you that the face is a mesa. So basically, all you have to do is compare different things to the face.Finally, the reason why your brain tricks you into seeing a face instead of a mesa is because everybody's brain has been 'hard-wired' to recognize a face.So that is why when you look at the first picture you see a face instead of what it really is, a mesa.Finally, sometimes all you have to do to find the truth is dig and look deeper and you'll discover the truth.That is why I say the face in the first picture is actually, indeed a mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because, our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Venus had once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, this keeps astronomers fascinated. People are intrested in the topic that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nThe author states in paragraph 2 \"Often reffered to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally closest in distance too.\" Despite the dangers Venus has, It is 'Earth's Twin' we could learn a lot about Venus and Earth if we decide to study the planet more. Scientists believe we say that Venus is Earth's twin because it once was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth does today.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is in the midst of finding other ways to get nearer and study Venus. These Astronomers are aware of all the dangers of getting to close to this planet and all the affects that come with studying up close. But for them to truly understand what comes with Venus, they will take the risk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram depicts how to make a dough for a standard Italian pizza, by using just a few ingredients as wel as some utensils. The whole process takes a few minutes of active time to produce and some passive time to let the dough rest.\nThe ingredients required are as follows: four cups of 2000 grams of type '00' flour, one and a half cups or 325 grams of water, 2 teaspoons of salt and half a teaspoon of dry active yeast. They are first put into a stand mixer, mixed on slow speed for two minutes, then again on moderate speed for five minutes. For the last two minutes, the dough is mixed on slow speed.\nAfter the mixing procedure, the dough is left to rise for at least two hours, until it is doubled in size. This is occurring as the yeast in it absorbs all the sugar and converts into carbon dioxide, which is a gas trapped in the dough. Afterwards, we deflate it in order to get rid of all the air inside. Finally, the dough is cut into three equal pieces and they are ready to be made into delicious pizza.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you interested about space? Did you know that venus often referred to Earth's twin. It is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. It is proven that it is a very challengening place to examine more closely. Venus and Mars are two planets that orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus is the hottest planet with in terms of surface temperature in our solar system.\n\nScientists are even discussing further visits to its surface of Venus. They believe Venus may well once have been the most Earth-like planet to our solar system. The author states in Paragraph 4 \"The planet has a surface of rockey sediment and include familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" These are familiar things that Venus has. The teaming sending human to Venus is NASA. Researchers cannot take any samples from the distance. The are going to use old technoloy from the 1800-1950s because these are more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nIn conclusion do you think that maybe in the future we will live in Venus? We should expand our research and and try to discover more planet in our atomsphere that may be like Earth. Danger should not limit our chance to discover and to meet new places.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagen no longer having to sit though a boring online lecture, being able to find the lecture helpful and not a drag or a bother. Well with technologies like Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman's FACS or Facial Action Coding System, that is quite possible. With a technology that is able to read and recognise facial expressions, it can help improve students online lectures and help them pay attention and focus. A technoloy like FACS that can read emotions through facial msucle movment would provide the education system with a better way to connect to the students and aid in their emotional focus to the lectures and assignments providing a valuable aid to student education.\n\nEven though humans can already perform similar actions, being able to tell what those around you are feeling by looking at their face. Humans can only \"calculate\" how such individuals are feeling and many fail to get a appropriate calculation. As Dr. Huang notes, \" most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" so for a computer to be able to read nonverbal expressions is very helpful as most students are kept to themselves. A computer with the FACS tecnonly would be able to recongize a studetns needs when learning on line. As Dr. Huang states, \" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored [allowing the computer] to modity the lesson.\" This ability to recognize emotions through facial movment can help improve the students performance by modifying lessosn to meet their educational needs. As some students already have trouble focusing in class and loose attetnion when lessons are boring or they just simply don't understand. Technologies like FACS provide the students with an adaptive and responsive system that will help them improve their focus and learn more affectively.\n\nOn the other hand some people may argue that technologies like FACS are an invasion of privacy. Or that these technologies can not really tell your emotions. These technologie dont do anything millions and millions of people do not already do everyday, read facial expression. The is what tecnologies like FACS do they read and recognize facial movments to determine emotion. Just like all of us do when trying to figure out the feelings of those around us. These techonlogies use a complex level of facial recognition invented and tested by proffesionals like Dr. Huang. As well as Dr. Paul Eckman who studies anatomatical movments and sturcutres. Being able to classify six basic emotions those being, \" happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\". Even though these six can not analyzse every single emotion it will analyzse the one expressed the most.\n\nAllowing those around, like teachers and instructures to aid in figuring out what is wrong with an individual and how to help them perform better.\n\nSo overall technologies like FACS which are able to read facial muslce movments are benefitail to student learing. A technoloy capable of adapting to analysed human emotion will help studnets learn , focus and feel more attented to in their learning. By identifying the emotion these technologies can also help teachers and guidecne counselors work towards aiding those students which are emotinally depressed and need help but wont verbally say it. Such technologies not only offer a way to aid and improve student attention in learning but also help those students who hide their emotional prolems, which affect their learning by having teacehrs and counselors provide that help thanks to technologies that can read emotional expressiosn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke is trying to convince other people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program . He wanted other people to join him in the Seagoing Cowboys program because their was many fun activitys to do . The cowboys were playing baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. More fun games their were table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. Luke thinks more people should join these fun activitys because they help kill time, fun to play,and is something you can do with more then one person. LUke thought being a Seagoing Cowboy was alot better then going on the adventures he went on and saving animails. He wants more people to injoy the experince of being a Seagoing Cowboy just like he did . Luke thinks it opened a new world for him,it made him more aware of other peoples needs in other contries,and the awaredness stayed with him,leading his family to host a number of international students and extange visitors for many years. So Lukes main porpose of trying to get other people to try the\n\nSeagoing Cowboy is so they can experince it like him like he had a fun time playing their games and it changed his piont of view towerds people in other contries and their needs .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay iwill show you or convince you to join the Seagoing Cowboys. I will tell you about experinces and diffrent thing you will see or visit during the Seagoing Cowboys trip. Also I will tell you dirrent things you will learn.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing cowboys because you can have a great experinces! The experinces you will have is going to places you have never or got in to see before. You also can met other people from diffrent places around the world and see thier culture. Also you can look at diffrent animals that you never thought was real or you never seen! But the most best part about it is being on a boat looking at the ocean it a new way for some people to travel!\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys are a way to learn things. You can learn how to run a boat or work sales or even drive the ship. Also you can get out of your house and do something instead of working or laying on a sofa. You can learn how to transport cattle andlearn how to work cattle because you dont have cattle or live in the city. The Seagoing Cowboys is a great oppertounity to go somewere new.\n\nIn this essay I have shown and telled you about the experices,things you will see,places you will visit,and thing you will learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard about big faces on Mars, NASA has gone on many space trips but this time they found sothing creepy. They had found big faces made in the dust, NASA said they have never heard about anything like this before So that makes me a little scared on how they got there.\n\nI think that it is scary having planets have faces on them. these Faces were found in 1976 and it was hard to see and in 1998 and in 2001 the face got covered by sand and dust and you couldnt see it anymore. in 1976 there was a group called the Viking 1 sent by NASA. They had found a 2nd face made and it had shadows in its eyes, and mouth.\n\nThere was a big time when everyone kept talking about these faces in magazines, in social media, and in abandoned stores. \"The Face on Mars has since become a pop icon. It has starred in holltwood films, appered in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery stores.\"(5)\n\nSome people say that these faces are awesome and that NASA should go on the planet Mars and explore the faces on Mars. This finding was very important to tax payers. NASA had taken many pictures of these faces they even sent another space ship to go with a better camera to take better pictures.\" we felt this was important to taxpayers\", explained Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NAS's Mars exploration program.\" we photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" (6)\n\nNASA had sent a 3rd space mission in April 5, 1998 when the space ship had passed over Cydonia the took a picture of the face. It is very hard to find this face because it was under a cloud on Mars. When the space ship took a picture there wasnt anything at all because they were in the wrong are of the planet. When the space ship got to the right place it was hidden but it was in the same place. People think that aliens had put a Haze over the face so the peoploe couldnt see it anymore. \"The camera on board MGs had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. perhaps, said skeptics, Alien markings were hidden by haze.(8)\n\nNo one has ever seen these Faces again so maybe they were hidden by some or somthing. Hopefully soon NASA will send another space trip to try to find these Faces again. It proves that a lot of people were scared at first but then they werent because the space mission couldnt find them then they did and everyone was excited. Personally i would be scared knowing that somthing had made those then hid them with Haze and clouds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How computer effect people way s computer s really bad really good re good Because people dont like writing usually computer type But people rarely parent s kid s stay computer caring nothing else screen kid s stay night knowing school dont even homework I proof freind s research show s mother also agree s I suggest agree opinion freind s agree wouldnt wake go school Dr researched parent s hardly spend time family For example father s basically always computer either working looking stuff My mom say s younger loved internent She never wanted get hope youv enjoyed opinion thank s even taking time read Thank s", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although alot of people and states think that driveless cars are a bad idea. I think that they could be a great addition to our lives. Driveless cars can help when you are busy with your children, they are handly when you have to much to handle/do, and can assist you on long trips.\n\nDriveless cars can come in handy when you have children. Driving while you have children can sometimes be hasel. When you have a baby things get harder. Babies need to be changed, fead, and or need some attention. With the drivless car you can fead, change, and give your new one some attention. Little ones are not the only ones that you have to worry about. Sometimes the older ones can be a big handfull. Kids can get upset or angry at one another and do things that might not be acceptable. With the driveless care you can talk and help your kids get along.\n\nCars that drive themselves can be a great thing when you have a busy life. We all have those days where you have to go from one place to the next, pick up coffee for the people at work, drive the kids to soccer pratice, band rehersal, pick up groceries, finish your work that you brought home from work, help make copies for the kids school play/fundraiser or just have to much on your plate for that day. Think of all the things you can do while your car is driving itself. You can finsh the work you brought home while on the way to the kids soccer practice. Your kids will not be upset with you because you dont have the time to take them to their after school activites because your getting your stuff done at the same time that you are on the road. You know that you hate to disapoint your kids and with a driveless car you wont have to.\n\nLastly but not certainly not the least. The driveless car can assisnt you on those long trips that we take in the car becasue we cant or do not want to spend money on plane tickets. Those vacations that we take in the car can be so much easier. This car drives its self so you dont have to worry about you falling asleep on the road and having something horriable happen to you or and your family. Drivers do get tired after a few hours of non-stop driving. Think of all the famliy bonding moments you and your family can have when you have one less thing to worry about. Think of the safty because you arent going to fall asleep on the road.\n\nA car that drives its self could be a great addition to our lifes. It can help when you have a new born or just have kids that are starting to learn from right and wrong., It can be a great stress reliever when you have to much to jugle for the day, and it can make long family trips so much easier and fun. However for know we have to drive ourself to the destination that we desire but hopefully technology will catch up and allow us to acess these wonderfull automobiles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that the Face on Mars is a natural landform, or do you think that it was created by aliens? The picture of the Face on Mars was captured on May 21, 2001, and a few days later it was shown to the public which got this whole thing started. Most of the people from NASA believed that it was just a natural landform, but conspiracy theorists believed the it was created by aliens on Mars. The MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper to reveal a natural landform. It was just a huge rock formation which resembled a human face, and the defenders of the NASA budget wished there was an ancient civilization on Mars because they would benefit off of it.\n\nA few days after the photo of the Face was snapped, they showed it to the public for everbody to see. The NASA team caption the photo with \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" Some people believe that the Face was created by aliens on Mars. NASA and many scientists believed that it was just another Martian Messa. Martian Messas were common enough around Cydonia.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, The MOC team snapped a picture that was ten times sharper than the original Viking Photos. The photo first appeared on the JPL web site, and it revealed a natural land form. Since the Face was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude, it was winter at the time they snapped the picture which was in April of 1998. At this time, it was cloudy on the planet Mars, so the camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Conspiracy theorists said that maybe the alien markings were hidden behind the haze.\n\nLastly, the defenders of the NASA budget wished there was ancient civilization on Mars. If aliens did exist and NASA did discover them or signs of them, then NASA would benefit off of it. NASA would most likely send people or some kind of camera to take better pictures and videos of Mars. NASA would not keep it to themselves, they would share it with the public. After all this time survaying and taking pictures of Mars, they have not found alien life form on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face is just a natural landform like many others. The Face just happens to be unique because of it's many shadows that make the Face resemble an actual face. Many rock formations happen on the planet of Mars. The Face is no different then the many thers of it's kind. The Face is the most unique and interesting landform found on Mars the is one of the many natural landforms presents on the planet Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are an innovation to the 21st century that have been dreamed of and worked on for many decades.\n\nMany people have dreamed of driverless cars but couldn't share their dreams in a tangable form because the technolgy to make these futuristic automobiles did not exist at the time, but just recently this has changed.\n\nThere has been much debate on driverless cars with many skeptics.\n\nMy positon on driverless cars are that the automotive and technology industries should merge together and share their ideas to embrace this new form of transportation many people have been dreaming for.\n\nNot only would driverless cars be more convenient but would aslo be much safer.\n\nAll drivers have human error but if there was to be and an intelligent, automonous computer driveing there would be little to no crashes.\n\nFully automonous vechicles are still many years away, but laws of many states prohibit testing of driverless vechiles.\n\nThese laws are causing the consumer to wait longer because companies need important development testing to be conducted in order to improve and devlop these cars.\n\nDriverless Cars have many imortant and reliable senors have been put strategically on the cars to maximize efficency.\n\nFor example Google's modified Toyota Prius has position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel and a rotating sensor on the roof with many other senosors.\n\nThe sensor on the roof is the Dubbed LIDAR and is one of the most important one.\n\nThe LIDAR makes a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. This allows the car to see all of its surrondings unlike the human eye which can on see one direction.\n\nDriverless cars are coming to the marketplace and the consumer needs a relible and well tested car but with laws in place companies will not be able to devlop and test their cars to the best of their ablities.\n\nI am completely for driverless cars for a more convenient and safer future and driverless cars are a step to that dream.\n\nThousands of people die in horrific crashes each year and to limit progress of trying to make the roads safer is just wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In certain countries, a plethora of people are preferred to gather information tremendously about the history of the houses which they are living in. Because they want to protect their family culture and valuables when they are living in their ancestral homes. And also, they want to get proper details about their living area because it may help to solve some legal problems. Therefore, individuals can find these details from their ancestors, some media coverage and following some legal documents . Therefore, I strongly agree with the above statement. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, humans really want to update their knowledge about their origin. If someone lives in an ancestral house when they want to protect their family culture and get a sufficient idea about their assets. And also, people are spending their own house or building, they want to find details about the land size, value and ownership chain which they are helping to solve some legal barriers. To illustrate that, according to the survey conducted by Harvard University , it has been found that 70% of people tend to explore their properties details and after ,that they can protect their inheritance.\r\n\r\nMoreover, individuals have collected these facts from their ancestors and through legal documents. Specifically, elderly people always explain their belongings. They clearly mentioned the history of their old houses. On the other hand, a variety of legal documents such as deeds, agreements and extracts may be supported to create a clearance image about the house. For example, some people try to search the history of the houses before they buying them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, numerous countries population pay their full attention to collect enough information about the houses and buildings where they live in. Because they want to keep their property safely and they often try to maintain their family heirs for their future generation. Therefore, some people's experiences and legal documentary papers support give brief understanding about their ownership.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverless cars I think could be a very good thing to this world. There are some down falls to them but if we put in the right time, i bielieve that we could make it a very useful tool in our enviroment. In this passage i am going to tell you why i bielieve that we should go to computer cars, or at least computer cars that give the human the right to driver, rather than only human conroled cars.\n\nMy first argue is that it could help us with drunk or tired drivers. For example if someone was out late drinking, or was intoxicated. They could easily get home with out anyone being worried about there safety or safety of others because the computer is taking care of all of that. There would be no more drunk driving and i think everyone agrees that would be a great thing to happen in this world.it would save many lives every year. Also with tired drivers, say that your on vacationand have a gery long drive ahead of you. or coming home from a very long day of work. and keep nodding off while driving. You could just flip the car into computer mode and have the car drive without having to worry about falling asleep behind the wheel. Also the driver wont have to worry about being distrcted by screaming kids, loud noises, your text messages popping up while driving etc.All those distracts gone. This is a computer is does not reconize any of those actions. It will only know its job, and that job is to drive the car safely\n\nMy second reason is i think it would be much safer in genral. imaired drivers or perfectly fine drivers.it doesnt matter who you take. Computers are smarter then humans they will not make the same dumb mistakes humans make like running a red light, or going above the speed limit, or driveing reckless in snowy icy conditions.The car will do everything it has to do to keep you and your\n\nfamily safe. Also if everyone on the road has computer driven cars. no body will have to worry about crazy drivers everyone will be calm and okay. Because a safe device is in control of your.\n\nMy last reason is the police. I bielieve\n\nthat if these cars become a thing the enviroment will become a better place. Also there will be less police chases. And im not saying the police will be off the road completely but if they dont have to worry about reckless drivers as much, they will be able to go out and deal with much more serious crime, because they know that these computers will follow the rules of the road. Say one day there was a police chase though. These are computers here. the police should be able to hack into the car and shut it down completly before any harm is done to any one.\n\nThose are my 3 reasons that i bielieve that computer driven cars would be a great resource to our community the police services, drunk or impaired drivers, and just safer driving in general. If you dont think that these cars are safe, i think you should change your opinion before they would be relased they would under go numerous ammonunts of testing to make sure that, they okay to be driven on the open roads. once again those are my 3 reasons. thankyou for reading.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Drverless Cars Are Coming\", it is about the future with cars. Engineers are working\n\nhard to make cars operated by itself rather than a human being operating it. Having a car operated with sensors, is not the best thing to do. Having a car that is operated by itself can cause many accidents, and can cause harm to other people on the road.\n\nCars that are operated by themselves, can be very dangerous. Instead of having your life in your on hands, your life is being put in the hands of a machine. Anything can happen, in the midst of a normal day of driving the car can simply go out of control and an unfortunate accident can happen. Driving on the road should not be sensored operated, it should be human operated. It takes human skills to drive a car safely. In paragraph 7 it states\n\n\" but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means humans must remain alert.\" Although the cars can notify the driver about roads and different turns, in order to be safe the driver still has to remain alert, at all times. The car is suppose to provide relief, and a break for a driver, but the driver still has to be alert, and make sure that the car is operating efficiently. The car can easily have a malfunture, and it can cause a life to be lost. In paragraph 9 of the article it states \"New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" Cars that are self driven would require safety laws, and liability laws to ensure the safety of the public. Driving on the road without a human's hands on the wheel can cause alot of worry, questioning the safety of their own life. By having driveless cars it is giving the driver's life into the hands of a man made machine.\n\nDriveless cars should not be invented. Driveless cars are operated by sensors.\n\nBy having driveless cars, it is jeoperdizing more, people's lives. malfuntures can happen with the car, and accidents can happen. having these driveless cars on the road can cause worry, and fear amongst other drivers, and pedestrians, on the road. It is safer to have humans behind the wheel. The cars would be out of control, and unpredictable, when on the road. Driveless cars are dangerous, and are one hundred times worse than the regular car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college is not a place, but a process. A process that seems meaningless, a process that is uncalled for. It doesn't make any sense to me because i thought when someone votes, their vote goes straight to the person running. to learn that, that is not the case at all is really an eye-opener about how much politics confuse me.\n\nYou help choose your state's electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candiddate's electors.\n\nRichard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on Abolishing the electoral college! They are not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency.\n\nOver 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century, the system allows for much worse.\n\nBack in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.(So that a popular vote for kennedy.) In the same vein, \"faithless\" electors ocasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.\n\nAt the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have nochance of winning. If anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters Ohio, they have yet to make it.\n\nPretty much anywhere you go whether it's school or work, you will hear that as an American Citizen, you have the right to vote. If you don't vote for the president of your choice, you can't complain when things go wrong. Yet your vote really doesn't count unless the electors you voted for win .\n\nHow can they say our vote counts when it really doesn't, all i'm saying is that they need to start saying what they mean and stop directing people towards lies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are a great idea. Aren't we already trusting our lifes with technology? Cars are already basically self drove, all we do is start the car and hope nothing breaks. Driveless cars will be easier transportation, less harsh on the environment, and be safer.\n\nDriveless cars would make it easier to get from place-to-place. It would be easier because if everyone had a self drove car then there wouldn't be people breaking the laws and not knowing how to drive correctly. The traffic system would be a lot more organized.\n\nDriveless cars would be less harmful to the environment. In paragraph 1, in the article, it says the self drove car would use half the fuel of today's taxis. If the self drove car would use half the fuel, then this would mean the car would be less harmful on the environment. This would also be saving a lot more of the Earth's fossil fuels, which would also be better for the environment.\n\nDriveless cars would also be a lot safer than today's cars. In paragraph 2, of the article, it says Google's cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. There are thousands of crashes a day from drivers making careless mistakes like, texting and driving, not paying attention to the road, or even falling asleep after a long work shift. With the self drove car, it has driven over half a million miles and has failed to crash yet, that is incredible because the self drove car isn't even at it's full potential.\n\nIn conclusion, the driveless car is a great idea. The driveless car makes transportation easier, does less harm to the environment than today's cars, and it would make traveling safer for everyone that has a self drove car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet Venus has many dangers but that doesn`t mean that it is impossible to explore. There hasn`t been a single spaceship, in more than three decades, that has touched down on Venus. Many different factors contribute to the reasons why there hasn`t been one. One factor is that the atmosphere is thick and contains almost 97 percent cabon dioxide. Another factor is that there are many, erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes.\n\nDespite the dangers of studying Venus I agree with the author that it is a worthy pursuit. In paragraph four it states that \"Venus may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". It might be important to explore Venus to collect data to predict the future of the Earth.\n\nIn paragraph five it provides a possible solution to explore the planet Venus. The possible solution is to create a blimp-like vehicle that would hover over the planets surface at about 30 or so miles. The blimp-like vehicle \"would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\". The only limitation is that \"hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on the ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective\". Despite this it would still be good to be able to explore what we are able to and collect all of the data possible for further explorations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To start with, the challenge of exploring Venus is that it's more then just one challenge it's several. There are terrible weather conditions, ninty times the pressure we have on our planets, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, and a ton of other challenges.\n\nFrist of all, the heat conditions on the planet Venus are close to eight times the heat that we've ever felt on our planet. The average tempeture on Venus is around eight hundred degrees Farenheit every day. This heat could melt some of the metals that we have on our planet, Earth. On days that are around ninty degrees on our planet it is very hot imagine being in that heat but times eight. People would die from the heat of that planet and this is one reason why it makes it such a great challenge to explore Venus.\n\nSecond, according to paragraph 3 of the article it states \"the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Living on this planet seems to be complety insane! The pressure on this planet could liquefy many of our metals.\n\nIf a submarine made to dive to the deepest depths in our ocean went there the water would crush and liquify almost the entire thing. Swiming to low in our planet can pop your ears and possibly even burst your ear drum imagine what swimming on that planet would be like; considering if you could even swim due to the weather.\n\nlastly, the heat, and the pressure are not the only things you need to worry about. Venus's geology and weather has additional problems like powerful earthquakes, erupting valcanoes, and lightning strikes that destroy probes. It wouldn't be possible to get a submerine to the water on Venus without it getting struck by lightning first. These weather conditions are terrible and impossible to work with.\n\nThe article states \"at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth.\" These conditions are horrible and the people wouldn't even be on the planet. This is by far one planet that would be very challenging to abserve and even be around.\n\nTo conclude, everything about exploring Venus is challenging! The heat is far hotter than anything that humans have ever delt with. The pressure could crush submarines meant for going to the depest depths in our world. Imiagine what it could do to humans.\n\nThese aren't even the only problems, clouds cover Venus and these clouds are no regular clouds; they're clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid.\n\nNot only this but Venus has the hottest surface tempetures and it's not even the planet closes to the sun. These are some of the greatest challenges of exploring Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The last paragraph story displays theme determination The Hibiscus reminded home old life misses new life She gains determination reminder She soon realizes home things come familiar V formation geese She loved old home realized time move The last paragraph mean retaking driving test symbolizes determination embrace new home life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting dock dirigibles building foreign dirigibles used highly flammable hydrogen helium winds top building violently changed illegal fly low urban areasFirst foreign blimps using hydrogen dangerous due high risk burst flames This occurred builders German blimp Hindenburg caught fire May After tragedy realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York If incident happened New York City many lives would lost More people would die would cause bigger fiascoAlso winds building change constantly would make blimp unstable The article explains effect stating Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast The changing winds would torture back ship The front would secured due tethering back would left free sway swing wind Pedestrians would high risk danger making idea impracticalFinally law made illegal even approach building nevermind dock The article tells saying existing law airships flying low urban areas Would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area The builders simply could use dock unless law changed The law made protect pedestrians innocent bystanders flying craft Empire State Building would violate said lawIn conclusion three obstacles stopping use Empire State Building hydrogen gas used foreign blimps unpredictable winds making craft swivel law prohibiting aircrafts flying low urban areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy mood It happy mood Narciso finally knew family actually meantFor example Narciso says It simple house parents welcomed refugees celebrate arrival country I celebrated first birthdays It warmth kitchen humble house Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love This quote shows mood Narciso wich happyIn conclusion Narciso happy mood finally knew real definition family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author is suggesting that, despite its dangers, the planet Venus is worth putting time and resources towards learning more about the planet itself.\n\nThe auothor brings up many points on why it is so difficult to explore the planet. As the author stated in paragraph two, \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". This can already be discouraging to some people, but others might think something is wrong with the technology we put there. In paragraph three we really start to see why the planet is so dangerous, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we eperience on our own planet. [...] Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\". At this point it sounds impossible to even be able to study Venus. Really, why would we want to study Venus? In paragraph four the author explains this, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. [...] The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\".\n\nSo we know that the surface of the planet has some of the harshest conditions and that the atmosphere is filled with acid, but the planet is similar to earth in structure. How would we be able to get to it and study it? In paragraph five the author begins to explain some ideas NASA has for being able to study Venus, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. [...] At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\". The important thing about this quote is that humans could survive in this blimp-like vehicle. However, if this were to happen scientists still would not be able to collect samples from Venus, they would just be able to observe it. The author also explains some electronics and machines NASA is looking into in paragraph seven, \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. [...] mechanical computers [...] these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" These two ideas could be very useful for learning about Venus. The first one made of silicon carbide has already been able to survive for three weeks in similar conditions to Venus, and could be very important for landing on Venus. The author also brought up mechanical computers. The computers don't require electronics, as they said, and can much less fragile than modern computers. These could allow for some intersting ways to learn about Venus.\n\nThe author explained the dangers of Venus and why no mission has been very succesful. They also explained ideas for future missions that could possibly involves sending humans. I like the ideas they have, but I do not think the solutions are quite ready for humans to go to Venus. I am very excited to see where this goes and what new ideas scientists come up with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nFirst studying Venus is very challenging because of the temperatures and the atmosphere. In paragraph 3 the author says \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxided blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Veus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything hmans encounter on Earth;..\" (Paragraph 3). This is important because is telling us how Venus conditions are far more extreme than anything humans can encounter.\n\nAnother important point that makes Venus hard to study is the weather. In paragraph 3 the author says \"Beyong hig pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequesnt lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\" (Paragraph 3). This is important because Venus having earthquakes, volcanoes and frequent lightning strikes makes it very hard for someone to go there to study it.\n\nLastly studying Venus is challenging because researchers can't take any samples of Venus from a distance. In paragraph 6 the author says \" Rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges.\" (Paragraph 6). This is important because not being able to take samples of rocks, gas or anything from Venus makes it very hard on scientists to find out forms of getting to Venus without having anyone in danger.\n\nFinally, exploring Venus is challenging and dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary era, women are aspiring to fulfill all their dreams and proving mettle in all working areas. In my opinion, the rise in the demand of male-dominated job positions by females are blessing for the society. I am going to discuss the essay in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe first and foremost reason, women are career oriented because of the education opportunity they are getting today. In past, females were not aware about the profession in which they were perfect, females were considered to remain inside the four walls. However, at present education is giving chance to explore different working field. They were surrounded by male chauvinism which never let them to rise and work equally with men. However, these days ladies are now getting permission from their families to go out to proceed the work and supporting the family finances. To prove this fact, females are growing in various fields of jobs such as bus driver, carpentry, bakery , painting and many more that were mainly ruled by men.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the rise in the women empowerment is because of the egalitarian society. Different social campaign done by government authorities or public to raise the awareness among the people to equalize each sex and demolish the gender inequality. Additionally, government policies promoting gender equality and welcoming the females in different workplaces without any discrimination. To illustrate this, now in armed work forces, females are participated in the armed forces to serve the country.\r\n\r\nTo conclude this, these changes are incredibly positive, and, in my perspective, this has happened because society is now blooming with gender equality, whether it is in the field of education or work opportunities given to each individuals without any differentiation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally think that it is a big step forward towards a better future, if used properly. I agree that many politicains lie these days, but with technology like this can make a better nation out of us. This example is, i feel the best example of the story. Using this technology properly is the safest way to do it, but. I believe that using in a classroom full of students can be a disaster, i am a student myself. It's why i perfer not to be emotionally monitered throught these computer, most likley because alot of things happen putside of school that teachers arn't aware of. So using that type of technology on students, the'yre emothion would constanly be changing due to being around drama in and out of school. Another reason this would not help the students is because they need to learn how dectect these emotions themselves, and so do the teachers. Using this type of technology can help our courts determine wether a criminal is guilty or innocent. We could use this in way to get people out of danger, such Zologist. they feed and tame animal to be less aggressive, if this computer can detect emotion, then it can help avoid attacks from wild animals. This technology is impressive and can be used in different forms to make things better around us, they can make life easier and get us farther in future. being able to make computers that can detect emotion, can make a robot detect when its being theatened, can see when criminals are up to somthing. technology like this can help us get farther then the planets we know now. I my opinion on this is, i can agree it is an amazing invetion, and can be used an a lot of good, and bad ways its just the way people see on using it. we can both beleive that it should be used to get are nation farther then it already is, but lets not let are own technology controls us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays when we turn on the TV, we can easily see piles of eye-catching advertisements about different services and products. Many companies invited celebrities to be their products representatives. purchasers opt for those products owing to the idols they love but not the necessity of those goods. Nevertheless, measures such as a fair rating mechanism can be introduced to solve the problem. In my opinion, I think people are influenced heavily by advertisements.\n\nFirstly, it is understandable that companies adopt some promotion tactics so as to gain market shares. Some marketing strategies, for example, sending invitations to famous stars to help them to sell the items that will enter the market. Obviously, because of the positive image of celebrities, purchasers are easily attracted by the appearance of stars instead of the nature of the items. Worse still, they obviously neglected the urgency and necessity of those items. Consequently, they will buy lots of useless things in the long team.\n\nDespite the adverse effect that the advertisement brings along to us, a fair rating mechanism can be an effective way to tackle the bad situation. Companies can put their products, no matter services or items, into the rating system. The system will automatically rate those products in various categories such as price, durability and warranty among the database. Thus, consumers can compare the quality of tones of items before they make any decision.\n\nIn conclusion, purchasers usually decide to buy something because of the idolatry of famous celebrities. They forget the importance of purchasing goods. In order to change the bad habits, people can use a fair rating system to have a better selection experience. In my opinion, although buyers are affected seriously by advertisements, they will be protected by the rating system in shopping.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his or her idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents by explaining why Venus should be studied ,the reasons why studying Venus is difficult, and the solutions to the problems caused by the climate of Venus.\n\nThe author supports his or her idea by stating the reasons why Venus should be explored. The author states in paragraph 4, \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" The reason stated supports the authors idea because without a reason to study Venus there would likely be very little reason to justify studing Venus without a proper incentive.\n\nThe author further supports his or her idea by explaining why studying Venus would be so difficult. The author explains in paragraph 3, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" If there were no explanation on why it would be diffucult to study Venus there would be no way for scientists to figure out solutions to the various problems of studying Venus.\n\nThe author then goes on to explain possible solutions for the obstacles of studing Venus. The author states in paragraph 7, \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\" The author also states in paragraph 7, \"...some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" By explaining possible solutions the author proves that there is hope in studying and that attempting to study Venus isn't a futile effort.\n\nThe author supports his or her idea to study Venus by explaining why Venus should be studied, why it is so difficult to study Venus, and by explaining possible solutions to studing Venus. if there were no reason to study Venus then Venus wouldn't even be attempted study. Without an explanation of the problems of studying Venus there would be no form of figuring out a solution. With the help of possible solutions, more effective solutions can be found in the future.\n\n3. explaining the resons wy its hard to explore", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "would you have a drigerless care ? what if its not safe or something mouthfunctions on the car. google and a whole lot of car companys are thinking to make these driverless cars. But they really should not make these cars because in the generation we live in these cars are either going to cause many deaths due to the people that dont care about life. what if the car gets in the wrong hands that can mean multiple deaths. On top of the deaths these cars are going to be very expensive.\n\nthe county is already going through money problems as we speak so think if they bring these cars out. were going to go into a drought as a country people will want the cars so now there doing anything legal or illegal to get them. the cars also are not safe in paragraph 9 its telling me that if i buy one of these cars i could crash or anything can happen. Because google hasnt even put everything in place for safety of the car or driver. The state doesnt have laws for the car or cant even tell if we are at fault for crashing the car thats also in paragraph 9.\n\nthere are pluses\n\nto this car though dont get me wrong. it may not be safe or proven to even drive by itself completly yet but the work that they are doing on it to upgrade it sounds nice. if we can have these cars up and running fully without any problems i might just look into it. for now i think they should work on getting more sensors in and on the car so it can be proven to drive with no driver helping park or go through busy streets.\n\nmy complete thoughts on this car is it looks and sounds nice. i would have one in 2020 if i get the chance to eperince it. but they have to fix how safe the car is because it sounds cool it can watch you to always make sure your not a careless driver and you can be in the car with your friends without having to drive or get tired.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to see unqie places, you get help feed the animals, and help out people that have no food.\n\nYou should join use because youget to see unqie places. Like the Acropolis in Greece, you get to see places that you never saw befor, and you get go to places that you never heard of.\n\nCome on and join use because you get to feed the animals. Like you can give any animal food and water, and you help to keep the animals alive on the boat also you get to pet the animals if you get the chance.\n\nJust join use you get to help out people that have no food. You could save somepeoples lives, and you can stop\n\nworld hunger also you will be a hero.\n\nSo come and join use to see unqie places, feed animals, and give food to people with no food. so in conclusion you should come and join use The Seagoing Cowboys to see amazing places, feed animals, and give food to hungry people withe no food at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story in spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test show Saeng growing As another year passes Saeng comfortable circumstances ready start fresh like plants blooming budding Failing drivers test really upset Saeng waiting another year able practice become better goes back retests even better driver time practice start Its almost like new beginning Saeng another year past new familiar plant budds begins start Since hibiscus plant familiar Saeng better able relate buds start fresh Saeng In conclusion author concluded story phrase", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story No Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie I believe setting greatly affect cyclist I believe its long downhill cool roads fine straight uphill roads extremely hot feels like cant keep pedaling The cyclist gets weary setting hot desert one around setting huge affect mood story Another example", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When meet new people like alright cause everyone needs friends like people say friends come go true friends wouldnt go I remember met beautiful girl name friend knew wanted life people say love cant come true turn upside cause way around love doesnt go love comes I remember first talk like god telling one knew save getting hurt love first looked eyes like felt way heart feeling falling apart told heart wouldnt broken half cause ill replace mine told one want one need one got ta succed wan na know like one else know name forever like tattoo heart apple tree never cut wan na stand mountain show im different guys im faithfull like one else Your amazing way woundnt change nothing cause love everything love eyes love smile love personality told take chance know threw much dont let come said yes happy like dream came true guy show like others guy thats always faithfull honest truly never lie cheat So told shes superhuman happy came life said changed whole life changed mine heart belongs one else cause one heart heart toy brake told never cold always warm day night arms body temperture told wishes came true one im finally lonely got told like shes finally wifey I told every girl dated played heart true living life way wanted one day told girl even planet one thats always honest faithfull truly trust never lie cheat told ill keep looking special girl say found cause girl name told never sad million tears running precious little face told always one phone call away two one happy said paradise whole wide world finally made dreams come true want one else trust ill trust love never die never fall love always alive love stand high tell hits sky high tell sun doesnt shine anymore I m crazy shes crazy key heart open finally know love feels like made bad days good days never brake heart wouldnt brake mine either told sun doesnt shine forever doesnt shine look stars cus still shining star biggfest one sky To never gone always heart love strong sitting phone waiting call always To friend friend angel girl shawty wifey everything till world ends realize love strong ment You re friend need im glad found true story ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a public debate on whether middle schools should have a subject about global news, while some people argue about it. Recently, many big issues have happened all around the world. Especially, the ongoing war between Ukraine and Russia is very sad news for everyone. I personally believe that students need to learn about what is going on outside of their countries during school time. This essay discusses the advantages and disadvantages of creating such a subject at secondary schools and my opinion will be provided. \r\n\r\n I opine that international news classes are essential for the following reason. Learning about the topic associated with other countries leads students to expanding their perspectives. To illustrate, an international school in Tokyo where students come from various countries originally have a unique class in which kids take one topic and discuss it from a a cultural and regional point of view. As a result, students can get different ways of thinking and one of the graduates becomes the CEO of the biggest IT company. Exposure to contemporary affairs from a young age makes them become global citizens who are needed to think of things from a variety of perspectives.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it has a negative aspect as well. A potential disadvantage of this subject is that overseas affairs sometimes contain strong political and religious aspects. Education for kids is supposed to be away from politics and religion because they might affect who they are. For example, children in Iran, where they are taught to be soldiers at school, believe what is taught, therefore they are fighting as a soldier without any doubt. Hence, global news including such things might affect who they are.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of learning about international news as one of the subjects outweigh the drawbacks that it might bring. I suggest that secondary schools should set such a subject in a curriculum in order to make students exposed to various issues in the world, however, educators need to be careful about the negative aspect.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, there is a growing trend among people towards looking for the history of their own place in different countries. I believe this could be attributed to improving professional and general information and the willingness to experience new creative things. Moreover, examinations can be done by searching for old photos or asking elderly people in the neighbourhood.\r\n\r\nI am of the opinion that several people from various professional backgrounds may find learning about the history of their own place appealing as they tend to think differently and start personal and creative projects in the future. For instance, an architect may become curious about their own house, as they opt to gain information about the way former owners were living in the past, or even the renovations that the house underwent to become what it is now. Another case in point can be the writers who want to boost their imagination. Some writers may want to use the history of their flat so as to think about a story about a place and its residents in a more creative and remarkable way.\r\n\r\nOne way of determining the history of a house for people can be by exploring the old photos of their neighbourhood on the Internet. Nowadays, as a result of technological advancements, everything can be found in visual form or written for about every topic. For example, Google Earth services provide numerous maps of a particular district during different periods in the past. Hence, people are able to find out about the changes their house went through, over time. Furthermore, asking elderly people who have been living in the same neighbourhood for a long time can be beneficial. They may even know about the former owners of the house or even a phenomenon that happened to the house.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, some individuals may think about the creative projects that can be carried out associated with the history of the place they live in currently. Numerous ways are available for such research, and across all of them is looking for the old plans and photos of the entire district or former owners as well as talking to seniors who have lived in the area for a long time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I Believe That the popular vote for the president of the united states is the best way to go by for voting. I read from the Story that The Electoral College system votes for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee,and the trust is rarely betrayed. Being that the electoral college group has the most The most best-laid defense it can also be wrong.\n\nI Honestly think that you should conisder changing it to popular vote,i would consider what i read from the passage,That this year voter can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could agian lose the presidency. what i am trying to proove is that popular vote is the best choice for the presdiednt's votes.\n\nMost worrying in the prospect pf a tie im the elcetoral vote,due to the election would be thrown to the house representives,where state delegations vote on the president. As also read in the story given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress,The house election can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. popular vote dosent has as much as problems or shall i say minor set backs as Electtoral College has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Coding System should be used in classrooms to read the emotions of students becasue it'll make the teachers help understand what their emotions are during class. Students developing facial expressions to others may help people communicate with other and understand their facial meaning.\n\nThe emotions include happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Showing these facial expressions can help someone determine if they're happy, or not in the mood. So instead of asking if they're okay, just look at their facial expression. A computer will construct a 3-D computer modle of the face, especially all 44 major muscles in the model.\n\nThe computer can do lots, a computer can detect either you being happy or sad. For example, if you smile, a Web appears on your screen, and if you're frowning, the next as will be different. A classroom computer will also recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Most of human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. Therfore, I say we should use technology to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring The V!\n\nHave you wondered what it would be like to land on a planet that is very dangerous to the human life?\n\nTheres a Planet called venus and its very dangous to explore because of all the diffrent planet fetures that planet earth doesn't have. Venus is very dangerous to human life because of its tempatures, It's amospheres, and the surface of the planet.\n\nVenus is a planet that human life can never set foot on because if its tempatures. In Paragraph 3 Line #3 the author says \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\". The human life form couldn't handle that much heat. In Paragraph 3 Line #7 the author states \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth\". None of are planets in are solar system have the kinda heat as venus does.\n\nVenuses atmostphere is really dangerous to humans. In Paragraph 3 Line #4 the sentence contiuses and says \"And the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". The atmoshereic presure is really strong on venus as well. In Paragraph 3 Line #8 the author says Such an evironment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals\". This planet is pernounsed as the hardest planet to study.\n\nThe surface of venus is rough. In Paragraph 3 Line #11 the author says \"Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\". Venus is really like earth, but has alot of diffrences as well. In paragraph 4 Line #4 the author says \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and coad have suppoted various forms of life, just like earth\". Venus could have had other forms of life in are solar system, But we will never know.\n\nVenus is a hard planet to study and exam. (NASA) is trying to find new ways so we can get astronots on the none life planet. They have tried to land on venus with some rowbots but the tempature is to high and melted the metal of all of the robots. One day we will be able to land on venus and posable live on that planet that evryone thought no one would ever be able to step foot on. Venus will be a liveable planet one day. We all are going to keep working on was to live on it. One day we will find out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My friend received random phone call It friends high school three The weird thing nt talked much since high school Surprised asked going assuming jail something matter Instead friends replied told told wanted go road trip thought heck telling said cool need The friend replied saying needed plan trip computers could nt read maps end phone call finally said would help plan trip Then asked friend would want go trip The friend replied I nt know wan na see professional baseball game ever land would love go A week half went later called friends back tell plans Proudly said hard work planning ten day trip guys starting driving way back hit watch game five professional baseball teams go six flags another amusement park like The friends replied mean guys You coming us super surprised told guys nt talked five years randomly want go road trip said sounding kind confused The friends replied well need car nt know drive nt know read maps Thinking hard situation finally caved told yes gave conditions He split tasks friends would nt stuck workFor example gave one guys task finding hotels places stay another finding gas stations friend find restaurants going eat The trip started vacation much needed unexpectedly fun relaxing At lest Everything going working according plan hit joyfully watched four five baseball games great time land went beyond expectation even six flags exiting brought friends back feeling like good old high school daysThe slight bit worry trouble one friends became behind task finding hotels places stay everyone friend nights stayed relatives friends lived mostly setup hotels kind last minuet Last days heading back plans still going accordinglyThey one event giants baseball game stay old high school buddy moved making sure would place stay sure asked friend charge finding places stay The friend replayed nt talked yet call later made little uneasy told friend call nowthe friend didThere friend picked bring bad news back thought self I knew trip good true On baseball game things felt rushed friends leave really early traffic random bad Mean got use restroom two hours trip giants game things started take bad turn go bad But friends kept going saying traffic good need keep going listened kept going Then traffic came stand still going go pants pulled drove side high way surprised nt get pulled miraculously ended giants stadium saw portable potty pulled raced locked looked around saw another one takes fast could And yes open finally thought self ecstatically stepped inside looking urinal realizes nt get fast enough embarrassingly went pants", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern My name I written response letter sent topic electronics Computers percise To computers helpful yet extremely vile These chunks metal expensive unhealthy degrading human learning capabilities Computers many negaive features cope Dell many computer companies sell computers ridiculously expensive prices You buy one sale need computer malfunctions problems assalt Now call repair man charge even money Did really spend hard earned cash faulty hunk trash This ridiculous I went onto computer yesterday think happened It crashed My six hundred dollar computer crashed Computers expensive keep When I get rid mine I m getting another Have ever sat computer long eyes watered Horrible endure s problem computer cause Your health stake When sit computer working playing instead going jog exercise health degrades Gaining weight pink eye staring screen I go The computer love harm I say get rid computer Visit friends family aquaintances Be active stay healthy Not The next point I say shock surprise scare Your computer making stupid I ca nt say nicely Do nt call rude s true I ll give example A student receives classic home work assignment Define three four words Easy right Wrong I m afraid kids surveyed go home use computers retrieve answers homework What child cheating What happen They could drop school early live lives people ca nt learn Is world want kids No We destroy computers Thank reading paper It pleasure always write Have nice day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From knowledge I gained reading excerpt The Mooring Mast I lerned many obstacles making place dirigibles dock The important reason safety Since dirigibles used hydrogen instead helium dirigibles highly flammable If dirigibles ever catch fire New York many lives could danger Another obstacle climate The empire State buildings top going build Mooring Mast bad climate nerly impossible dock dirigible These many obstacles architects face designing mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir many moods created author One major mood memoir love loving In paragraph many things I learned love also scent music life love A second major mood memoir warth In paragraph warmth kitchen And third major mood memoir gratefullness grateful In paragraph I externally grateful paragraph I always grateful parents love sacrifice These examples moods created author memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affets cyclist afew ways For example features Rough Road didnt allow arive fast drive speed limit Second fact drivuing desert large snake made way Road causing man ease past trying keep balance dehidrated state driving desert hegot hot started get dehydrated lack water Lastly features werent buildings far miles left lost didnt anywhere stop ask directions These features defenitly affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In author s recollection long tiresome bike ride talked struggles face set morning asked old guys porch directions They told knew way knew shortcut He choose take advice later regreted found towns spoke found ghost towns Never accept travel advice collection oldtimers nt left confines porches since carter office He dose eventually reach town finds signs life There asks another old guy knows way Yosemite guy says good map All along ride pleged sun lack watrer The sun made hot thirsty forced drink lot water rached last sips resisted drinking began loosing consciesness I could drop heatstroke gorgeous day June", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke thinks that others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because the cattle-boat trips are an unbelieveable opportunity for small-town boy. He said it opened up the world to him. It may just open up the world for you too.\n\nYou might also get to see some exotic places. For exampleyou might get to see Europe, China, and the Acropolis in Greece, like Luke did. You may also get to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water, like him. You would also get some time to have fun on board too,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. You would get to play games such as baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Some things like table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games would help pass the time.\n\nIt made Luke Bomberger more aware of people and of other countries in need. It might make you too. You might have to do a lot of work like, check on all of the animals every hour to make sure they are ok. Luke couldn't say no because he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. He hopes you do too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" by Nick D'Alto, describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. There is a paragraph where it can detect students facial action, and the value of using this technology to read students' emotional experessions is something I can agree with.\n\nIn the passage, the article states that a classroom computer could recognize a stuudent becoming confused or bored (Dr. Huang). After that, it could modify the lesson similar to what an effective human instructor could do. My response is that a classroom computer that has FACS(Facial Action Coding System) can help the students lessons and making them understand easier. For example, if the FACS detects the student being confused while doing work on his laptop, the laptop can try to make the lesson more understanding in a level the student is in.\n\nAdvertisments can help students feel interested on what's on the ad. I'm a student and ads appear in my laptop. Most ads I'm not interested in and I intend to skip the ad. There are new ads appearing everyday on a students phone or on their laptop. The passage states that if you smile when a web ad appears, a similar ad might follow. If you frown, the next ad will be different. If a student is depressed and is watching a video, the FACS will detect his emotions. The FACS will insert an ad on his or her screen that can have a chance to make the students' depression lower down or be forgotten about it depending on the ad. If an ad pops up and the student is interested in it, he could focus on the ad and won't focus to much on depression.\n\nThere is an amount of students who play video games at home afterschool. Most are on their laptops or PC's instead of console. I believe that games can cause violence. Students can have fun with a game on their pc, but later on that emotion can change into something else. It could change into anger. The FACS can help that. If they read a student having a different attitude that's unecessary, it could make the laptop shutdown for the student to take time calming down. In the passage, the FACS could work for video games or video surgery. Another thing, the FACS can remind the student to do their work first before playing on their laptop, just like what the mother would to their child.\n\nFinally, I believe the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions can help help them be more educated by helping on their lessons, emotions, and control. Computers need to understand that, too (Dr. Huang).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would you do if you got written a ticket by a police officer for just driving your car? It could happen if we had a day that driving was banned to help the enviroment. I think this is great idea and we shold all get involved with trying to make it work. Other countries have done it and it doesn't seem to effect anybody negativly. The only thing this would do is limit the pollution put off in America and all over.\n\nCars are probably the biggest source of pollution in our world today. We use cars for eveerything now and it is very convenient but have you ever really thought of what they are doing to our atmoshpere and ozone. Smog is one of the biggest efects from driving and its not a pretty one. I wouldn't want my city to be covered in a thick layer of foggy gas fuems. In paris the smog was so thick they had to make driving outlawed for a few days just to keep it under control. If we did it even just a couple times a year nation wide it could really help.\n\nIn columbia they tried this to help with car emisions and everybody enjoyed it. They even said other countrioes joined in so I think its our turn to give it a try.\n\nThe people of Vauban, Germany have a pretty much car free town. If towns started going car free like this in America the emmisions would drop greatly. In Vauban evrybody really likes not needing cars and say it is much less stressful than driving everyday. If just one in every 20 cities of the United States went car free we would notice how much cleaner the air is and the greenhouse effect or global warming would be almost nonexistent.\n\nAnother thing the articles mentioned is hybrid cars. I think hybrid cars are great, I personally have one, but some people don't really understand or like them. These cars could really help save the enviroment in just a few years if people were to start only using them. Which I doubt will happen but they still are driven by many people and its much better then everyone driving a diesel truck around all the time.\n\nIn all honesty I don't think any of this will happen here anytime soon but it sure would be nice. The greenhouse effect is very real no matter how many people argue about it and there is thigs that can be done to help prevent it. We just have to be willing to make some sacrafices to save our planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A fair amount of folks believe that the authorities should concentrate on lowering environmental pollution and residential troubles to aid people to avert sickness and flu. In my opinion, the authorities of the nation should support in order to help the society from danger.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, pollution is the common term that our ears are attuned to it. Pollution is the prominent reason behind people's sickness. In other words, in the modern era, the mankind is enjoying the luxurious comfortable life due to the technological developments which is triggering the pollution levels to its peak. For example, the carbon monoxide gas emitted from the cars is the highest pollution ratio across the world. Due to this harmful gas, the entire community is affected with health issues. Thus, the authorities should strictly impose a rule to ban the luxurious cars which is rising the pollution levels in the world.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, there are certain people in the world who are suffering from diseases due to poverty. There is no sophisticated hospitals and emergency wards in rural areas. To illustrate this, an article in Hindu magazine published that 40 per cent of the people are dying due to lack of treatment in the countryside. Therefore, the government should increase the facilities such as equipments, machines and more beds to accommodate the patients suffering from health problems.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the government should imply pollution-free laws and obligations in order to alleviate the environmental problems and expand the facilities provided in the countryside to help the people facing difficulties in health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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