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"content": "25 years ago NASA revealed a face on Mars. They said it was a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" What they dont realize is, even they said so themselves, this so called \"face\" is just shadows giving the illusion of a human face. The photos and evidence from the from this conspiracy are inaccurate because\n\nNASA just wishes there was an ancient civilization of Mars, the outdated equipent used cause it to look like a face, and it is confirmed to be a butte or a mesa.\n\nTo begin, NASA wants there to be an ancient cilvilization on Mars for all the reasons that will benefit them. If there were to be an ancient civilization on Mars, NASA would not hide that from the public. If beeing so, NASA would recieve so much money for research. The author states that \"Defenders of the NASA budget wish there wasan ancient civilization on Mars.\" The face also \"haunted grocery store checkout line for 25 years meaning that the topic was so debatable and no one ever knew.\n\nIn comparison, the equipment used to photograph this face, is outdated and old. For example, the author states that 'The cameraa on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\" This implies that the \"Face\"was very haard to see and was viewed very poorly. Chief scientist Garvin also stated that they had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in field view. This could've cause many unreliable observations because it could've gotten blurry. The author also states \"Each pixel in the 2001imagespans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" This statement causess the readers to infer that they havent gotten a good picture of this face since 1976, which is very unreliable mnay years later.\n\nLastly, it is confirmed that the Face is a butte or a mesa. A nutte or a mesa is a common landform around the American West. The author states that with new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa.\n\nThe author also supports this claim when he/she states that \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa.\" Chief scientist Garvin also states that it reminds him of the most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nTherefore, the Face on Mars is not actually a face, it is a natural landform. There are many reliable sources to prove that it is a butte or a mesa. With the outdated equipent that was used, it makes it hard to believe that is was actually a face because of the quality of the pictures. NASA would have revealed a face if it were a face and not give a skeptical theory out to the public. The Face is actually just a shadow that gives an illusion of a face.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars was not created by aliens. It was just the planet changing as the years go by. Its's called erosion. Aliens do not exist. Mars is just going through a phase that all planets go through. It happens all the time.\n\nIf aliens did do this, do you think that the aliens would be found. How would aliens even have the sence to make the Face on Mars. To say that aliens did this does not make sence. In my opinion this whole \"Face of Mars\" is just a planet that had a change on it's own. NASA researchers has been trying to find aliens or life on Mars and hasn't found almost anything that would give you the mind to believe in aliens.\n\nAlso, NASA let the images of the Face of Mars to the entire world to see. The caption noted \"huge rock formation\". So no this Face was not made by aliens in my belief. There is no life on Mars. The only planet that has life on it is Earth. In my opinion this shouldn't be an argument. just look at the research that NASA is doing and you will believe yourself that aliens did not do or attempt to do this.",
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"content": "Why others should become a Seagoing Cowboy. If you become a Seagoing Cowboy you would have a lot of fun exploring and touring places.\n\nothers should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys because you could go to many unique places. They could go on adventures and explore them if they participated in the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke also toured an excavated castle crete and marveled. If you go to the Seagoing cowboy program you would have a lot of fun being there, because you can tour places go places you never been and do interesting things there. Going on adventures would be the best thing for some people in history that haven't ever went on a trip before.\n\nHere are some reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Having fun and touring places would be the best thing ever. Joining the Seagoing Cowboys program would be a good thing to do.",
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"content": "Have you ever thought you seen something and you look really close and it's something else? Or have you thought something was one thing but it was different? That's what they think happend with Mars. They think there is aliens and that aliens are making faces.\n\nI think people are going crazy. People are watching to many cartoons and they are starting to think that aliens are real. People on talk shows, books, and magazines are talking about it. There is a face on mars and they think it's aliens creating them. I think they it just happend from natural landform. To me it looks like an Egyptian-style pyramid. I didn't see any aliens in the photograph. There aren't homes where they could live. At first scientists thought that it was a Martian mesa, because that is common around that area.\n\nWhat do you think about the whole thing? I think that people need to go up to mars and really see what is going on. So, we can go and show everyone this there aren't any aliens, and they are just a myth.",
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"content": "CAPS kids Today going look microscopes I pick partners picked partner I think really smart assigned microscope The teacher told us draw everything see notebooks looked microscope saw blue lines scattered everywhere CAPS I see I asked CAPS I draw notebook CAPS hurry up I noticing I impatient CAPS accept group He needs partner looked microscope raised hand CAPS CAPS Really I complained PERSON dont rude You know new walked got chair sat right front He patiently waiting draw saw notebook CAPS go slower I shouted CAPS yell louder shouted back Finally turn He looked microscope started drawing I tried peek paper She noticed I quickly glanced back PERSON really need turn patient get chance look it Youre right Thanks Im sorry I acting like that I its alright I act like maybe sit together lunch That would cool",
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"content": "Dear The effects computers people bad getting addicted computers dangerous site go brain smarter getting addicting computers benefit able serf internet ll get hooked much For example youtube internet siting people go barely get The people nt turn computers go get exercise sit staring messing eyesite These people need learn power get Second dangerous site go people give somebody somebody nt know Almost teens get kidnapped od giving way stranger teens nt get found The also place child teen get cyber bullied Cyberbullying harrassing children teens internet children get cyberbullied sometimes suffer deppression nt tell parents Six months ago old volunteer talking cyberbullying got depressed harrassment commited suicide The always safe place Finally brain smarter ability depend brains computers brains like computers About people use brain often computers successful life The brain like store information nobody hack So therefore computers bad effects people getting addicting dangerous site go brain smarter tha",
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"content": "i think technology that reads facial expressions of emotions of students in the classroom is not valuble. if a student is happy, sad, angry, etc they know what to do to make it change.\n\ntechnology isnt always right anyways so if the computer reads that someone is happy and they are actually sad then nobody could help that student out. also if a student is confused they have to figure it out on there own or ask someone for help they know how to do that on there own and if there board then they can figure out what to do to get movin and to be happy instead of being board the hole time.\n\nlets say we want to have computers to show the emotions that might be a bad thing like if your opening a present you got and you dont like it that could hurt that persons feeligs and make them sad. so no i do not think its a good thing to have computers tell our emotions.",
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"content": "The Electoral College was originally established as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Presidential candidate Al Gore actually won the popular vote done by citizens, but ended up losing the Electoral College voting which caused him to lose his campaign for presidency. To prevent further occurances such as the fiasco involving Al Gore, the Electoral College must go. Former Presidents Richard Nixon and Jimmy Carter both happened to agree on the abolishment of the Electoral College! According to a Gallup poll taken in the year 2000, over 60%\n\nof voters would prefer a more direct election process. In other words, they want the Electoral College system abolished.\n\nVoters actually don't vote for President; they vote for a slate of electors who end up voting for the president. I feel that this system isn't cohesive enough; it's easy for people to think that a majority vote for a candidate means an automatic victory when actually the Electoral College votes are what truly matter. What would be the reaction if a certain member of the College decided to vote against his party's candidate? With a system filled to the brim with flaws, it's easy for many upsetting instances to occur in the future. In fact, the state of Louisiana almost succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose\n\nJohn F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.)\n\nDuring the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. The Electoral College method is outdated, at best. If seventeen states didn't even get to see the candidates, then something is obviously wrong. Had 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii voted the other way, a tie would've occured in the 1976 presidential election.\n\nThere is one, gaping flaw in the Electoral College voting system; the winner-take-all basis. A very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory! Another unfair aspect about the Electoral College is the fact that larger states garner more attention (and votes!) than do smaller ones. Florida netted candidate Obama 29 electoral votes whereas Wyoming snagged him 3 electoral votes. Such a discrepency can turn off potential voters such as Democrats in Texas or Republicans in California. Overall, the Electoral College is an outdated practice which must be invalidated soon enough.",
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"content": "In dad business trip dinsney land We got park rode rides My dad leave meeting After I saw something cool space I got line I saw sign hours lift My mom shocked left I disapointed We came back next day wait hours We got line waited waited waited After minutes I bored I asked mom could leave line big get After hours seemed like years got front sister wanted leave My mom got line sister I stay I waited minutes I got coaster It fun I got fastoas rides In end patience paid",
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"content": "The development of businesses has given rise to the growing tendency of commercial advertising. From my point of view, this trend could have both positive or negative influences.\r\n\r\n It is undoubted that the acceleration of advertising can bring numerous benefits.From the economic perspective thanks to the large scale expansion of advertisements, more products are sold, leading to an increase in the profit figures of businesses. In order to meet the increasing demand of products of consumers, the manufacturer would expand production hire more employees and contribute to the decline in the unemployment rate. In addition, advertising has positive effects on people's feelings. Some advertisements contain funny images and content is a huge source of entertainment for children. It is advertising that keeps people posted on information about products and services. These customers have more choice to decide which one is suitable for them feeling satisfied when buying desired products. \r\n\r\n Despite the great advantages of advertising developments, I insist that it also exerts several undesirable impacts. First, advertising about soft drinks, fast food , canned food prompts unhealthy eating, especially when the target customers are children. In reality, the young generation is heading toward some life-threatening diseases namely fatigue cardiovascular cancer which is caused by the habit of overeating such junk foods. Secondly, advertising encourages people to purchase what they do not really need. The information about product on the internet is not censored , thus it is unreliable and can mislead the customers to buy the products which are of little use to them.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, according to all the above explanations . I claim that the increase of advertisement in modern society has a positive impact as well as detrimental influences on our life",
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"content": "Dear Senator PROPER_NAME,\n\nWhen did voting not become about the people? An electoral college is only reassuring that your vote is the only vote that counts, but why mislead the people? Changing the voting system to popular vote will give all of us that reassurance we need, such as knowing our voices are being heard.\n\nThere are 538 electors deciding our country's fate compared to 5 million citizens who have a fair understandment of the presidency. Even though keeping the electoral college may prevent some citizens voting for the wrong person, we still have some smart people who can vote for themselves.\n\nIn the 2000 U.S. pressidential race, Al Gore recieved more individual votes than George W. Bush from the popular vote but Bush won the electoral votes, recieveing 271 votes and Gore got 266. This was the only presidential election where the popular vote was not counted.\n\nWhat about the states who only have 1 or 2 representatives?\n\nWyoming only has 1 representative who represents 500,000 voters compared to California's whopping 35 million voters and 55 representatives.\n\nSome of these smaller states are not getting their fair vote because their states population. Florida, New York, Texas and California have over 20 representatives to represent each state; how is that fair to the neighbor states with 2-3 representatives?\n\n\"\n\nThe electoral college is unfair, outdated and irrational.\n\n\" - Paragraph 14 from\n\nSource 2:\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong.\n\nIf you want the peoples voices to be heard, get rid of your voting backup .\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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"content": "Should we keep the Electoral college, or take it away for popularity vote? Well, the Electoral College is a process which they cannot hold office, but can help the presidents votes. A popularity vote is which we the citizens of the United States vote on who we would like the president to be. The Electoral Collge helps vote for the president of the United States because there is a certainty of the outcome, and the Electoral College are like presidents too. I support the idea of which keeping the Electoral College for the help in the presidential run.\n\nKeeping the Electoral College is vital to the presidents because there is a certainty of the outcome. Richard A. Posner states: \"The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote.\" This means that the Electoral College votes count more than the popularity votes for the upcoming president. For example, Richard A. Posner states that \"Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney...\" This means that the Electoral College votes are way more acounted for then the popular votes.\n\nAren't Electoral Colleges like presidents too? They help the presidents votes and help them make decisions also. Doesn't that sound like a president to you? The article states \"The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal.\" says Richard A. Posner. This means that Electoral Colleges no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The president electes Electoral Colleges to be in there favor.\n\nThere is a high chance that Electoral College's help presidents in many ways. Such as, the Electoral Colleges are like presidents too, and there is a certainty of the outcome. Lets face it the soon to be presidents need the Electoral Colleges.",
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"content": "On this planet as a society we become more technologically advanced day by day. Yes it's great that we are becoming more advanced each day, but I think we should ask ourselves if this is neccsary. Personally I do not believe that all of the new technology coming out is esstential. Along with me thinking this I do not believe the Facial Action Coding System is needed in a classroom.\n\nI do not believe the FACS is valuable enoughfor schools to take on the burden of spending the money needed to buy the system. I think there are more beneficial things for a school to spend money on than for students to be able to know the emotions of a face on a painting. Some schools are cutting away extra-curricular activities, while some are debating on buying a system to read emotions. This to me sounds utterly ridiculous.\n\nAs stated before technology is becoming more advanced day by day but we must ask ourselves do we truly need it. Kids go to school to learn information and skills needed to be successful in today's world. Reading emotions from a person's face is not a valuable skills that one needs in their life. Yes it could be helpful to students that want to be artist one day, but reading emotions is not going to help most people in the world get a job.\n\nTechnology is a great thing but most of it truly is uneeded in life. Very few people in the world need to know how to interpret facial emotions in order to succeed in life. There is no point to spend money on something that probably is quite expensive that will effect so little people. There are multiple other ways a school can wisely spend their money on that the FACS. If there are only a few amount of people that will benefit from this and their are better things to spend money one. I would go with something that will actually be valuable and more beneficial to the majority of students than the FACS.",
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"content": "I do believe that the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because then it would be so much easier for the teachers to tell if that student is stuggling, needs help, or is upset with somthing.\n\nAccording to the article, most human communication is nonverbal, uncluding emotional communtications. That there goes right along with what I said before. So that teachers can tell when a student needs help. These days, when students need help in class, the teacher has a hard time reading their facial expressions because it seems like they have the same one on all the time. Then the teacher can't help, the student gets bad grades, and it all goes down hill from there. But, if computers could help teachers read the facial expressions of students, then the teachers could help the students, the students could understand the work, turn in their work, get good grades, and everything stays going up hill and everyone is happy.\n\nNot only would this help teachers, it would help other adults as well. Such as parents, the guidence counsler, or maybe just another friend. According to the article, it states that most people would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried ect. That means that some people have a hard time reading other people's facial expressions. But with this new technology, people could help other people in need when that person is hurt, sad, angry, lonely, or scared.\n\nIf everyone had this kind of technology, the world would be able to understand each other more better. There would be no more people saying that their fine when their really not and keeping it bottled up inside and be upset for the rest of\n\ntheir life.",
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"content": "One day cool new game came It kid volume said hot volume The kid asked mom said what said so I buy cool new game said CAPS father I pay bills buy food said CAPS I understand dissaponting voice boys hard working father walked door The boy said CAPS could I please get I buy game The father said CAPS I know much want game Im sorry I need help mother pay bills The said CAPS I understand boys grandmother called said I need someone cut law The boy grinned said Ill right there mowed lawn excitement When got went right game store arrived line blocks long His grandmother said well gatto patience CAPS boy next line To continued",
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"content": "The author set mood different ways Such describing lived moved told culture inheriting moved He set mood talks parents selfish The biggest part mood talking lived first He might good start mood told kind education got whether Cuba The mood overall ok life memoir complete success But long satisfied happy organized life good tone mood",
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"content": "After reading this article I feel both supportive and non-supportive of these driverless cars. When reading I noticeed both postive and negative things regarding these new cars. I think that they will be a convinence, but at the same time a safety issue. The other thing that would make me think twice is who would be responsible if anything were to happen?\n\nThere are a few ways I think these cars have positive aspects on them. They can be convinient in many ways. If you need to help out a child, but cant because you are driving, that could be a big help. The new designs of the car also make it sound like the car is safe. It would need more than enough senors, so the car would alert you at all times when something is approching. It can tell you when there is an accident or traffic, and even road construction.\n\nWith that being said, that could also be a saftey issue. Yes, the car notifies you when there could be a possiple threat, but what if that person wasnt paying attention? It says that the manufacturers would put entertainment in the car so the driver could have something to do, but that can be very distracting. Even if the heads-up display works the driver could be totally focussed on something else. It could cause an accident or if bad enough it could cause lives to be taken.\n\nMy other concern is if you were to get into an accident who would be at fault. Would it be you because you werent paying attention or would it be the manufacturers fault? If someone were to get injured in a car that was supposed to be a driverless car, id imagine they would be mad. They may even blame the company who made the cars. If the injury or accident was bad enough there might even be lawsuits held from the people to the company. As of right now we wouldnt know who would be fully responsilbe if anything like that were to happen.\n\nAfter reading the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" article it made me think of lots of positive and negative outlooks. There is really no telling at this point how well exactly this whole idea could go.",
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"content": "Making cars that are driverless will not be a good idea because there are many troubles that comes with it. Many people think that by making driverless cars they are becoming safer. People does not need driverless cars to become safer. They just have to obey the law and do what's right. They should obey speed limit signs. Just because there are driverless cars does not mean that everyone is safe.\n\nThere are a majority of people around the world who uses cars that needs a driver. If we change that then we will have to change the whole world. Just because someone bought a driverless car does not mean that everyone is going to buy it so that still puts people in danger. Humans will also get bored when they don't get to drive anymore because they are so use to driving. The article stated,\" Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" This is telling us that \"if\" driverless cars are invented then drivers would eventually get \"bored\".\n\nOne of the things that teens looks forward to in life is geting their learner's permit. It gives them a sense of freedom. If driverless cars were introduced, would we still need to take our driver's test? Driverless cars would crush the dreams of many teens because now they will not have the option of driving themselves. The reason that a teen looks forward to driving is because it's fun and they have a sense of freedom on the places that they want to go.\n\nWe should not develop any more driverless cars because it would take away our freedom. The car could also become disfunctional in the middle of a highway and that would be a huge problem if no drivers are there to take over. We would also have to replace the world with driverless cars if we are going to keep on developing it because just a few cars will not make a big difference. We also have to realize that we are taking away the happiness of many teens because they will not have the option to drive. Many drivers will also become bored when they have nothing to do. We should stop the development of driverless cars.",
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"content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College has served us for more than a century in determining our nation's new president. \"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress,\" states the article \"What Is the Electoral College?\" written by the Office of the Federal Register. This means that we do not vote directly vote for our new president, but instead vote for electors that vote for a candidate running for office. Though many individuals are in favor of keeping the Electoral College, if kept, it will continue to cause problems in our nation. Our presidential campaign will be much better if we change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.\n\nTo begin with, the Electoral College is the cause for many issues in our nation's presidential campaign. First of all, voters sometimes cannot even control whom their electors vote for. Ergo, one may vote for an elector of our favorite candidate's party, however, we don't know if that elector will go back on his word and vote for another cadidate. The article \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" written by Bradford Plumer states, \"The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the sytem allows for much worse. Consider that state legislators are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people\". This means that the people never know if their electors are going to go back on their word and vote for another candidate. Aside from that, their is the worrying aspect of a tie occurring. If that were to happen, then the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives. The article The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" written by Bradford Plumer states, \"In 1968, a shift of just 41, 971 votes would have deadlocked the election; In 1976, a tie would have occurred if a mere 5,559 votes in Ohio and 3,687 votes in Hawaii had voted the other way\". This says that if those people had just voted for the opposite person, then there would have been a tie between the two candidates. Yes, those numbers seem large, but in comparison to the number of voters that there were in those years, they're a small fraction of them. This shows how close elections are with the Electoral College.\n\nAside from causing issues in the United States, the Electoral College is extremely unfair to voters. The article, \"What Is the Electoral College?\" written by the Office of the Federal Register states, \"Most states have a 'winner-take-all' system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate\". That is not fair to other voters who don't vote for the popular candidate in their state; they don't receive any electors. Additionally, most candidates only advertise and visit \"swing\" states. \"Swing\" states are the states that usually determine the outcome of the election. \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" written by Bradford Plumer says, \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad\". It's unjustifiable that simply because you have fewer electors in your state, you don't get to watch your candidates campaign. As previously mentioned, each state has a different number of electoral votes. It all depends on the population. For example, Texas, with a huge population has 38 electors, while Maine only has 4. The article, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid out defenses of the system are wrong\" states, \"Beacuse each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters\". Why do some states have more representatives than others just because of their population? It's not fair to the smaller states. It is true that the bigger states have more people in them, needing more representation, however, the smaller states have as much to say as the big ones. '\n\nTo conclude, the Electoral College has caused many disastorous factors in our presidential campaigns. It has caused the wrong president to be elected, and it doesn't give our citizens much of a voice in the election. However, changing the system to popular vote for the president will give people a louder voice in this nation and it will show them that the government cares about their opinion. As the article, \"The Indefesible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid out defenses are wrong\" written by Bradford Plumer states, \"It's officual: The Electoral College is unfaor, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguents against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college!\"",
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"content": "So see nice old lady looking one many books throught library chucks You look looks walks away You go pick book medical marijuana She took offense I nt really care people got ta say shelf stays shelf I m convincing librarians readers everyone else offense book magazine movie anything find library shut fat mouths A library serves many purposes one itt s open anyone everyone Two library card check books movies music etc Three walking road got ta go stop right leave What I m trying say nothing removed shelf library Yeah I mean s certain point got take charge even adolescent room I think take something shelf library taking away part heart Let s say libraries town one library one thing nt Someone riots get take shelf Your never going find anywhere else unless buy line And sometimes get little pricey especially since get free library But I see people coming take certain materials shelfs Say got ta old kid walks carrying sex love book What say I mean sounds corny happen Most parents want keep kids safe harmless enviroment That s come say I thought library Then s goes bad After happens people accuse librarians got books movies music s bad young kid But librarians fault different people like different books s library many many choices comes books That s question comes CAPS nt seperate rooms seperate books sounds good s gon na pay Libraries get donated alot stuff profitable nonprofitable resource Libraries around ages started small big That s library gets donations looks sells books nt want need They make money s start making seperate rooms sounds crazy would nt cause riot go people Therefore people happy librarians happy happy You find book want need easy one two three All got ta go certain room look check got nice book reading anytime sounds easier looking get dewy decimal number find number All nt remove anything library shelf bevause one town maybe one state maybe whole country You never know All I got ta say CAPS s better keep book forget book",
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"content": "The author of this article main idea was to show people that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. Following along with his information Venus is a very hot place with valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and lighting strikes. Why would this planet be worth studying despite the dangers? Inforamtion found by research shows that Venus was much like Earth at some point covered by mostly water and land forms. Why would this be important to us now though? Although the condtion of Venus may be awful ,but if we study this planet it could help us with more questions than you think. Studying this planet could tell us how Vensu turned into such a dangerous plant, if it could happen to Earth, can it be fixed, and was there life on Venus at one point? Answering htese questions wouldbe good useful information.\n\nMoving back to the article in paragraph three Venus has a thick atmosphere about 97% carbon dioxide covers Venus. Well this could already help us out with two of our questions can Venus be fixed and be able to hold life again and was there life on Venus at some point. Thinking about this little information we have as humans we breath out carbon dioxide maybe that was the cause of carbon dioxide build up and would also explain why they're no longer plants on this plant. As for the question is this fixable; can we reverse this process Venus is going through right now. We have tons of scientist in this world that could conduct carbon dioxide experiments. Taking our time to study this planet could be very benifial to us. They're still many things we don't know about space so the stars are the limit to possiblites. Most people in this situation would be concered about saftey up to this point right? Well we already have one solution from the article. Using a possible blimp like ship hovering over venus would limit us on information ,but could also bring us to new discoveries. There was also information about tech from the 1940s that could possibly be used and maybe imrpoved and be flown to Venus. There is more than two solutions out there, more ideas and more scientist.\n\nThe study of Venus could give us opprotunites that we would't get with other plants. Venus is one of the closest plants that's like Earth , there's not many other planets we could do this kinda research with. Who knows maybe even one day we will be able to cure Venus and make is another home like Earth a place where we could get a new start and not make the same mistakes we ahve with Earth. No more polloution, no wars, and nearly extinct animals having a better home. We can make the study of Venus safe and benifical to man kind.",
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"content": "I say reason author included last paragraph show going give easy She still going take might get good luck hibiscus Saeng walking home one day failing drivers test realizes recognizes flower went florist see buy When purchase goes home gives mom plant So maybe bring back good memories home town good luck I think",
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"content": "I vote yes that we should keep the electoral college in. Its easy to do because you don't have to count them up yourself. I facts that these four guys even like it (Richard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,and Bob Dole).\n\nDo you know over 60% of voters would prefer voteing direct election? We need more people to vote the more voters the better it will look,we don't need to beat aound the tree. This make people feel better to vote then doing it another way. So want u like you vote to go right in so you know your vote count?\n\nThe only con of doing this is we don't know who did it. You want think that really matter but it does because some can cheat for somebody. The state legislatures been picking electors since 1960. In Kennedy days when he was running he got cheated out his vote,so he lost but they done fixed all that things going well.\n\nThis is five reasons the keep the method of voting like that.#1 fact there is a certainty of outcome by that i mean it show the popular votes. In 2012 Obama received 61.7% vote and Romney popualr vote was 51.3%.#2 is he/she have to be everybody president. He/she can't play sides like her cant just do the most for the south havt to be fair fot all of them.#3 swing states by sayig that the winner-take-all. So whoever win they take it all the awarding and everything else.#4 big states with big states the elsctoral collegethe balance all it out by the popualr votes. So it compare as a small states so u bout say its even. Last #5 it can stop and avoid run-offs when Nixon and Clinton was running it was a tied at 43%.\n\nSo do you understand where i'm coming from with this. So keep it easy just let the electoral college stay around. If it was left up to you will you keep it around because i know i will. Thats how i feel bout it even know it want never mean nothing.",
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"content": "The setting short story cause cyclist doubt survival The main problem water lack The cyclist water thinks its matter time dies Another big problem rough terrain The rough terrain hard cyclist overcome Also buildings people cars sight save Until finds bait shop anything would happened wouldve one help",
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"content": "Should these Driverless car's be on the road ? I have a hard way of picking if they should be or not. because what if everything their saying about this car is right? What if the car does warn you like they say in the story. But then gain what if doesn't theres a lot of things that cold happen so. I would say yes and I would say no.\n\nI don't think these cars should be able to be on the road. why? I just feel like these cars are not safe. In should not be fully trusted with our lifes. What if something mess's up in the car. And it doesn't warn you that something is ahead of you and that you need to take over?\n\nIn the story is say's \" GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" Okay now let's say the car is driver in is need to take control of the wheel. But the seat does not vibrate? what if something goes wrong with the car. Because every smart thing doesn't always work correctly! so i have to say that would be one of my reason this car does not be long on the roads yet.\n\nI would say most people will buy this car because \" The cars foresees would use half of the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more than flexibility than a bus.\"\n\nIt says that they can drive for a long time in still have a lot of gas in it. you know buses and taxis drive a long time in need a lot of gas. But to be driving a car that makes you save more money not having to spend all your money on gas. Is great everyone would love that cause what oerson doesn't love to save money? That's\n\nleaving you with more money in your pockets. In I know everyone will love that. So yes that is a reason I would let this car on the roads.",
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"content": "Uneversity is the last basic degree of the students studying stages. As a public and general university, the diagram describing the steps of unversity entery and submission. After obtained and receiving the graduation certification you have to submit it along with the other requirements that mentioned in the university website.\nThen compile all the documentation together to send them to the admin of the university and to be informed this process will take about two weeks for each applicant. After the submission by email or by a phone call you will receive either that you are accepted or rejected depend on their specific entery criteria. If you are accepted you have to submmit more requirements in details and send them again to the admin to revise and confirm you registration then compete enrolment to select subjects, register with the college dean ends up with entery of the university, but if you rejected the application will be canceled and you have to look for other colleges with suitable criterias to yours.",
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"content": "I am against driverless cars , because they are not completely drive less. What the point of buying a driveless car when you still have to control the car in times. I am against them because when i hear these cars are driveless im thinking i could be texting or doing homework on the way to school. Then they say these cars dont exactly drive by them selfs so what the point of having a smart car?\n\nImagine all the new laws we would have to make. If these cars drive by themselfs and they crash whos fault is it? Whos really to blame for the car crashing the owner? Or the company? This would cause a big argument and take a lot of time to make new rules and laws. For example would we need a driver license, or whats the age limit to be in a smart car?\n\nAnother thing is this would probably cost a lot of money. How are the cars suppose to stop at the stop light ? Im thinking they would change all the stop lights to put a type of computer or sensor that the car can connect to. Just by doing that saying the car wouldnt have any more things we would have to upgarde it would cost a lot of money. Who will pay for these upgrades ? The car company or are they going to take it out of our taxes and make us pay? If that was the thing its just another reason why i dont agree with smart cars what if i dont have one and they are making me pay for all these things.\n\nI pesonally dont think that smart cars are a good idea. For some of the reasons i stated and for many more.",
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"content": "Some individuals assert that it is the Administration responsibility to look after the senior citizens and provide them AID in monetary terms.While others believe that old people should protect their money during the days when they are working and that money they can utilize when they get retired.I personally believe that it should be the responsibility of the authority to take care of the old citizens,as they have spent a hefty amount of taxes in their life, as well as their children, may live far from them.I would like to explicate my views in the upcoming paragraphs.\n\nTo commence with,there are many factors influencing my point of view.The first and foremost is since the old people cannot work after a certain age,also their medicines and daily check-up routines seem to be very expensive which they use to bear when they were earning.For instance, a survey conducted by Health media depicts that 80% of the citizens above 60 years of age has some type of health problem.Thus,if they are not financially secure they may lead to several serious issues like stress,depression.In addition to it,the old people have given tons of money to the state in the form of taxes,which they could have saved and they can utilize that money to tackle future uncertainties.Thus,it is the responsibility of the high officials to provide safety to their citizens in the form of a regular pension and other financial AIDS.\n\nFurthermore,In most of the developed nations,the ministry is providing monetary help to their citizens,which leads to an increase in the happiness index of that countries.For example, working professionals usually spend their money on leisure activities instead of saving their income.Thus,there are low chances that they can adopt serious health-related problems like depression.In the end,it is the financial help provided by the union for its citizens which has led to the creation of a happy environment which would reduce health-related issues.\n\nIn conclusion,the administration must provide financial support to their citizens in the form of pensions.These citizens have contributed a huge amount of money in the form of taxes for the development of the country.It will handle serious health-related issues,also it will also provide a healthy environment for the individuals to live freely without depending on others.",
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"content": "An array of people believe that retired people shall be supported by government and not left to their own meager resources. While other think that they should take care of themselves. Meanwhile, in forthcoming paragraph both view and opinion will be ellaborated. \n\nThe foremost reason many support government backed retirement plan is the dire condition of senior citizen. There are numerous reason deserving the attention. Some elder people are without shelter and staying on foothpath, some may be war veterants and having trouble in finding jobs due to their physical and psychological inpairments,other still may be victims of economic downturns. Without support they must get mercy of socities and wind up in soup kitchens and seeking for chronic charity or even begging. Simply put, authority is their last refuge and favorable position to lend a helping hand. \n\nDespite the rare instances mentioned above, nationis ought to encourage ownership of one's future. If all citizen knew that administration would provide them better superannuation fund for them , they would have little incentive to work hard, save money, and put wise investments. Regulation compact with gigantic sample size and, granted this would not happen with responsible adults, but still it posses a sizeable national risk. An analouges example , how parents raise their kid , and provide them early on, much like authority offers free schooling , but then children are expected to take responsibilty on their own. Parents who coddle their babies too much end up spoiling them like that only national retirement plan would deprive individual of the opportunity to become self reliant. \n\nRegarding opinion, advantage of self assured , mature citizenry outweigh the odd unavoidable case of desperation. There should be a degree of balance to allow for these exceptions while still nurturing more life affirming.",
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"content": "The \"face\" you see here was not created by aliens. It is certainly just a natural landform. If this was a monument created by aliens, we would want to share it, this would make NASA so much money if they discovered this. So why would we want to keep this from the public. Also the Cameras in 1976 were not very good. This means the quality could have effected what the picture looked like.\n\nThe article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" states that \" Evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This proves my point in why we would want the \"face\" to actually be an alien monument because it would make us a lot of money. I would also like to state that the cameras that we took the first picture with wasn't a very good camera. So where you think you see eyes are probably just shadows; or dark spots where the camera could not focus. The author of \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" also adresses that \" And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbitor Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revvealing... a natual landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This shows how the \"face\" was never a monument.\n\nMany people believe that the \"face\" on Mars was created by aliens, but it is just a nautual landform. Another reason for this is if you look at the photos, from when they were first taken in 1976; and you compare them to now in 2001. They look like totatlly different things. What it really looks like is that the landform has erroded away. It erroded just like a landform does on Earth. All of these reasons suggest why the \"face\" on Mars is just a natural landform.",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper In libraries I feel neccasry take stuff away poeple could find offensive honestly offends nt look You person make decisions called offensive material veiwed offensive someone Then person punished someone make big deal something Just nt like nt mean I nt like If someone finds book offensive nt read magazine find offensive nt read It simple people wise enough know good bad There reason someone ca nt choose want get want From observations I seen numerous times someone found someones music offensive nt say anything They ignore world needs people like More people stand believe wo nt judge others belief It seems world becoming filled bunch people care way much people That bad thing nessaccarily everyone offended something choice whether let bug rest life Listen ever music read ever books magazines want If someone finds offensive You person wo nt ever change Do makes happy nothing else",
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"content": "Making Mona LIsa Smile\n\nEverybody wakes up with different emotions everyday , those emotions that we have gives us an idea on what type of day were going to have , so we give off a look that tells somebody if were happy , sad , or angry . Face expressions tells another perosn how you are feeling today , so they know how to come to us to have decent conversation . In this essay i am going to explain how face expresion is important and talk about how computers can read students emotional expressions .\n\nImagine being in the computer lab when all of sudden you log on to do your research in the computer can recoqnize your emotions by using the camera to look at yor face . And by scaning your face the computer can tell that your not having a good day or , having a bad , or just maybe can be sad . Will that make you feel awkward ? , Do you want your compurter knowing how you feel everyday you log on ? , well i am going to tell you my opinion , in the artical \" making moan lisa smile \" they specififcally talk about how computers can read your emeotions , by scaning your face expressions I ceratinly feel like that is its great idea because , it would make me feel better if im havinga bad day , that the computer can read my expressions. I mean would if a fellow student doesnt have any friends to talk to if there havin a bad day , well the computer can identify there emotions and give off and alert to the teacher who can talk to that student , that will help alot in school .\n\nIn the artical \" Making Mona Lisa Smile \" is stated that , the facial expressions for each emotion are universal , so that gives us an idea on that the problem is universal . It also stated that \" We human perform this same impressive calculations everyday , you can probably tell how a friend is feeling \" . That tells us that if we humans have the same expressions everyday it would be easy if a computer can do the same ,because were feeling the same as yesterday and we can easily recoqnize how a friend is feeling . Tecnology can be easily read how a students emotions are . it also stated that \" The mona lisa demostraion is really intended to bring a smile to your face , while its shows just how much a computer can do .\n\nI know reading all this makes you feel a little awkward because who would come up with an idea if computers can read students emotions , I mean should a computer really care ? , to answer yes because just as a teacher they should care how your feeling because they can make you feel better , give you a little talk for the day . If your feeling sad , or if your just to happy for the day , they can calm you down . But if a teacher doesnt know then to help that a computer can give off an alert to the teacher to tell how your feeling , your emotions .",
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"content": "Would you ever want to live on an planet that only stays hot every day. That is the second planet that lives closer to the sun. Sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then this story should grabe your intrest. Studying Venus is an worthy pursit despite the dangers.\n\nThe heat at Venus is a real life problem. \"On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet(3).\" For example, this can cause masive heat strokes if a human arives at Venus because our bodys would not be able to handeal it. \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun(3).\" For example, you would not know how to suvive if you would to go here.\n\nWhy are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system(4).\" For example, how would they know that its the most Earths like planet with out giving an interview with other people.\"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel(4).\" If scientists would of made space travel then more people would come back to earth sick and hungry because of the heat temperature.\n\nHow is NASA going to be an impact in this study of Venuse. \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus(7).\" For example, this can be a huge impact over a lot of people lives because what if this can be a dangers planet and some of the scientists had messed up on their research then whats going to happen next. \"NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray(5).\" For example, this would be back because if you are floating above Venus you would not feel the heat.\n\nStudying Venus is an worthy pursit despite the dangers.\"On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet(3).\" \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun(3).\" \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus(7).\"",
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"content": "The story ands paragraph Saeng believes next spring new hibiscus born good luck pass driving test It good way end story hibiscus involved life took drivers test Now beleives next driving test connection past experiences ability overcome obstacles comfort time disappointment Which Saeng thinks help pass test",
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"content": "Its start new life She new new school new plant Its like connection plant grow grows stronger confident Thats said come back hibiscus budding ready test",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir happy It happy said growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative This saying happy life She saying nice family friends good home",
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"content": "My personal opinion on the intrude of our space and personal lives is that I think it would be fine aslong as they don't abuse it.\n\nMy view on the computers reading our emotions is that sometimes people fake alot of emotions, so if the computer could get around that I think it would be great aslong as its only in schools. Alot of people struggle day by day on difficult lessons and they don't seek help for the lesson. But with the program it could change that problem, it would let the teacher know what their studens are actually struggling on or let them know that they get the hang of the lesson so they could move on. Another way it can help is with depression. Alot of teens are depressed. When you're depressed there is a chance you dont seek for help because you rely on signs that you put out. For example in paragraph 5 it says \"You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face.\" but sometimes thats not the case, sometimes they hide it well and they keep hiding and letting the problems build up until they break, but the program can let people know they are depressed and they can get help.\n\nI personally say the intrusion into our privacy would be fine aslong as the program is used to help people who are struggling in a lesson or that has depression and needs help.",
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"content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is a very fun program that helps the people of Europe. It is an nice adventure.\n\nThis is about helping the people who were affected by World War ll and having an adventure. It is sponsered by the UNRRA ( the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Admistration). Luke's experience was the best one.\n\nI feel that Luke did get the point of this program, because he talked a lot about traveling and helping. Of course it's alot of work, but it is also fun and you can see new places. Here is one statement that luke stated, \"\n\nI had the side benifit of seeing China. Luke was the one Seagoing Cowboy that had made nine trips. That was because he had such a great experience, and you would too if you join this program.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboy program you won't regret it.\n\nHere are some of the benifits that you get, if you are an animal lover you get to work with animals like horses and cows. If you like adventures you can go to places you've never been before. There is a lot of work, but that's not all afterwards the Seagoing Cowboys get together and do fun activites like table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. They also play baseball and vollyball. Come and join the Seagoing Cowbays you would love it there!",
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"content": "It is widely believed that one solution to environmental problems would be for governments to raise the price of petrol. While I consider that this might be an effective measure, I would argue that other measures might have an even greater impact. If national authorities raised taxes on petrol, this would address two environmental issues. Firstly, in terms of private cars, motorists would limit the number and length of their journeys to compensate for the extra expense. Governments would then be forced to upgrade and expand public transport provision, as people would still need to travel to work, to school or to travel to shops and hospitals, for example. Secondly, from the perspective of freight services, more goods would have to be transported by rail rather than by truck. Both these measures would cut down on emissions from vehicles and help to reduce the greenhouse effect. On the other hand, while this rise in fuel prices might be a useful stopgap measure, governments could adopt transport policies which would be more effective in the long term. The local authorities in London, for instance, introduced a congestion charge on all vehicles visiting the city centre. They use the money raised to subsidize the cost of fares and to invest in transport infrastructure. In turn, this has improved the air quality in the city, as a result of the reduction in exhaust fumes. Another policy would be to introduce free bus and train passes, as the increased use of public transport would reduce pollution from private cars and help in the effort to combat global warming. In conclusion, a sharp rise in petrol prices would be a useful environmentally-friendly transport measure, although in the longer term other steps would be more effective.",
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"content": "People say that the face figure on mars is made by aliens. That hypothosis is not true because aliens do not excist. This figure on mars can be made by a human or it can be made by natural causes on the planet. as you can see in the pictures the face in 1976 it is full and the one in the second picture is half way gone the third picture it is almost completetly gone. if this figure is made by humans it did not last very long. If this figure is mad eby natural causes on the planet it has faded away over the years. Most people around the world think this figure is made by aliens, This figure could have been made by the astronauts on the ships and they just made a figure and took a picture of it and made people think that it was made by aliens. This figure could have been made not even on the planet they could have took some clay or some other material and made a rock like face and said that they found it on the planet. This figure is probably a fake because how often do you go to a planet and just find a random rock that looks like a face. If this figure is real then they need to take another picture and put it up. If they do take another picture it has to have the shuttle to where you can see it so the people around the world can say it is in space. If there really is a face figure on that planet that might be a sign of life on the planet. Maybe the astronauts have found another planet with life it may not be human it may be im not saying that aliens are real but if there is life on that planet this whole world will be wanting to go up there and see for themselves. If there is life on that planet then people will pay big money to go up,also if theres life maybe we will go back up there and their might be another face figure. If you look at the first picturre and the second picture you can see that the eyes are in differnet spots so thses pictures might actually be fake.",
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"content": "Well to start with ,they need to keep the most popular one by elections because it would be fair to people to have the electoral votes. its absoutly a great idea in my presice ! i think that people should vote on what they want to do not the senate or house of the united states . Also , it seems to me that the votes keep going down because people dont like the way they have to vote its going astronomical they need to take control NOW ! Even though candidates might now want to spend time going through the head ache of focusing on because to me its the most baic level and it UNFAIR to all voters all around the globe . Allthough my opinion is people need to realize to some of the overruled voters are all not electoral college dont mean you cannot vote for regular its entirely inpossible for the \"new president\" not to win and thats one reason why people pick that source because they know for a fact that they wll win their president they voted for this on coming \"election\" . ALL votes go to the house / state senate and it goes uphill from there so according to the passage all the electroal college requires a presidental candidate to have a regional appeal . But in 2012 President Barak Obama almost didnt make president until they put the electroal votes all together and we won PRESIDENT !! But of course knowing your vote you need to have to pay attition to the camapaign that the presidentcy were picked by a popular more VOTE . Even though votes swing on a national election one and a half americans express a petherance than a acual single vote which is probalbly much faster and easier on us and the senate. Knowing that people want to make sure our country stays in place they vote the correct presdient for the next four years so make the correct descision.",
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"content": "The Author states that although the current conditions on venus are inhospitable and it is very difficult to land any kind of craft manned or unmanned, we should continue to try and land. Venus is an extremely hot planet. also it has a very high air pressure. this means that most metals will melt appon entry and if not the air pressure is so high that anything even submarines meant to go to the bottom of earths oceans would be crushed. Other obstacles include that due to the atmosphere most technology would not work. making it impossipble to take photos.\n\nThe solution NASA has came up with is to have an aircraft floating above the surface 30 miles or so. It would still be extremely hot around 170 degrees but the air pressure would be similar to earth at sea level. It would be low enough that we would be able to observe the surface but still be at a safe distanse so the craft isnt crushed along with anyone in it. also they plan on using silicon. it has been tested and seems to be able to handle it.\n\nIn conclusion even though there are challenges it is still important to study this planet and visit it to have a better understanding. Also we would be able to know if any life is or has survived on it. scientists do beleive that once a long time ago the planet was covered in water and could have held life. possibly life could still be there but due to the conditions we dont know and we wont know until we are able to more explore and examine this sister planet of earth.",
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"content": "In this article the author presents both poisitive and negative aspects of driverless car, i am against the develpoment of these cars because if these cars get legalized the driver will feel free to keep there eyes off the road, they will not take as much responsibily, drivers could fall asleep and cause an accident, it is a very expensive project that could benefit the world in much better ways, there will no be no personal place while being in side of those cars, and because teenagers will want to be the first ons who wold like to use them without even having experiences in normal cars which could cause many accidents since teenagers arent responsible enough to be driving one of those cars.\n\nMany car accidents are already happining in this world because of texting while driving, alcohol, and unresposible people driving . If these cars get legalized not only will they make a driver think they are free to get there eyes off the road but they will make them believe no accidents could happen since the cars should of been tested and passed before coming out. In any time when the drivers gets a call or message and is driving on a driverless car they will think its not a big deal if they get there eyes off the road and text. Leaving all the reponisibilty to the car by its own. Many things could happen in a second. another car could come and crash, but since the driver trusts too much on their car they wont even notice there is something dangerous just infront of their eyes.\n\nComing up with these cars is a lot of money,On paragraph three the author stated, \" These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to exsisting roads, somthing that was simply too expensive to be practical. \" The author must of added this to make the reader realize that coming up with these cars requires a lot of money. So if cars are already an invention and many people use them without being driverless why doesnt the government spend the money in something more useful such as kids in Africa, or adding school to countries that cant afford building an education center. On paragraph fourthe\n\nauthor also stated, \" Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror , four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver , and an inertial motion sensor. \" Those are many things that those cars would use ! more money that could be used in more benefital ways.\n\nAnother reason of why i am against the development of these cars is because once you step inside those cars you will no longer have personal space, everything you do or say will now be not only heared or seen by whoever is in the car with you but also by whoever is the one in charge of looking at you through the camera. On paragraph 7 the author stated, \" Manufacturers are also considering using camera to watch that reminders are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" That is letting the reader know that it is a possibilty that cameras will be located in these cars.\n\nEven the people who are developing these cars know that drivers have to be watched over , so why are they putting peoples life in risk?\n\nThe fact that more accidents could happen because of these cars, the lack of resposiblty these cars will cause, money waisted on other things instead of things that could benefit this world, and no longer having personal space on our own cars are some of my reasons of why i am againt the development of these cars.",
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"content": "These days, due to a highly competitive commercial market, people are bombarded with an array of advertisements in various types of media. Numerous adverse impacts of this trend have arisen on buyers, and governments can take steps to mitigate these problems.\n\n there are several reasons why the ubiquity of advertisements can leave several repercussions for customers. To begin with, individuals' choice of products might be manipulated if they heavily rely on commercials. Marketers tend to employ tricks and gimmicks or exaggerate the quality of their products to lure people to purchase products that they have no real need for or can be of poor quality and different from what the advertisement had shown before, leading to great dissatisfaction among buyers.Additionally, due to the high cost, advertisements increase the price of products. For example, it is costly to have a commercial broadcast on television. Therefore, consumers would have to pay more money for the same items\n\nIn order to tackle these issues, a number of viable solutions could be implemented by authorities. Firstly, they should impose strict regulations on the advertising industry, like exercising censorship on all advertisements. A rigorous content check must be carried out prior to publishing a commercial to ensure the description of a product accurately reflects its actual quality. Furthermore, there should be a limit on the number of platforms on which advertisements are permitted to occur, such as billboards, posters, televisions, or social media. This would effectively safeguard consumers against information overload and help them avoid making wasteful purchases. Finally, several consumer awareness projects can be made to ensure the buyers are informed of the goods, services, and consumer rights. As a result, they can make the right choices when buying something.\n\nIn conclusion, it is undoubtedly clear that citizens are easily lured into purchasing unnecessary products if they watch too many advertisements; this issue can still be addressed by appropriate measures from the administrations.",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is valuable for showing emotional facial expressions of students when they are working on a computer and we will be able to see if they're emotionally okay or not. Also we will be able to see if they are interested in what they are learning in school.\n\nIt can detect your facial expression by seeing if you smile or frown and the shape that your 44 major muscles make in your face during your lesson in school, for example, Happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Also when your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows, that means that you're surprised, and if your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips, that means that you show anger.\n\nAccording to the article, \"if you smile when an ad appears on your computer screen or phone screen, a similar add might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr. Huang predicts.\"\n\nSo yea, the Facial Action Coding System can help out in the classroom with many different students. It can help find out what students are actually interested in by their emotional face expressions. This can also help students find out what they would like to be and what career they would like to pursue in their future. And thats my argument on why I say that The Facial Action Coding System is valuable.",
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"content": "Nowadays, In the modern ,era some nations opine that art plays important role in their pupils and is an essential subject to teach the scion and to gain knowledge at the same time they know the history and culture of the country. Some populations are not interested in know about the arts their scion because they think it is a waste of time to learn and there are no career opportunities. In my opinion, I will support the first one and I will explain both views in this essay.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, Some communities are very much interested to join arts.they support their kids with their talents.for example, one of my friends is very much interested in dancing and acting he used some technology to popular. Firstly people discouraged and insulted his talented skills but he never stopped it doing ,later he got so many viewers and subscribers on his social media channel he got many awards also he is performing one of the biggest television shows.his parents always encouraged him to do their art skills.\r\n\r\non another hand, Most population opinion is to study maths, science and technology streams they got easier and they can settle their life but I did not support this most the art students also getting better income compared to science students.in social media, another website most of the young talents are coming to show their skills like music competitions and in movies also they are showing their talent.arts is very useful to learn because it gives more information than talks.\r\n\r\nto conclude,most of the community not to encourage their offspring to learn arts compare to other streams.some of them are very interest to join their pupils in arts.in my opinion to learn arts gives equal knowledge to other streams.",
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"content": "The clock ticking waiting ready ready burst A never planted white patience key anybody attempts defuse except form last minute count certain destruction detonate explosive The alpha say waiting waiting right time minutes left minutes left minutes left minute CAPS yelled leader saved This chance save white Time running seconds pole preggrare riding shoulders fate white hards The enemgs calling fantry hone lost I got I exclaimed All left let army work We rushed van shields pummled defenses Suddenly heard strong noise noticed charge bottom van ran life white night eaupped van exploded pieces right behind us We lives patiently waiting patrol walk We need cross field army hetiepter home free We sprint across field victory A sense accomplishment greatness rushes",
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"content": "We should have Driverless Cars. Drvierless cars have been thought of since we've had cars. We should have driverless cars because they are safe, they have alerts if/when drivers need to take over, and they'd work even better if we invested in smart roads/sensors. Driverless cars are the future so why not hop on the Driverless Car train right now?\n\nDriverless cars are safe. The Google car made in 2009 has never crashed. The car has driven over a half million miles without a single crash. The Google car isn't all the way driverless, but they only alert a driver when, pulling in/out of a driveway or dealing with complicated traffic issues. Other than those three things the Google car drives, brakes, accelerates, and deaccerates on its own.\n\nDriverless cars now are not all the way driverless.They still alert the driver when he/she needs to takeover. The driver taking over is probably for the best at this time, but when technology becomes more advanced the car will be able to park itself and manuver through constuction zones and more. Also if America invests money in smart roads. Smart roads are magnets with alternating polarity. The car reads the positive and negative polarity and drives itself.\n\nIf the option for smart roads is out of the question because of how expensive they are, we could always use sensors. Sensor are nothing new to the car world though, they have been used since the 1980s. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes, reduse power, and allow better response and control that a human driver could manage.\n\nIn conclusion, drivers should be able to use driverless car technology. In 2016 Tesla anonuced a projected of a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. The technology is safe, relieable and driverless cars are the cars of the future. We grow closer to reaching that goal everyday.",
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"content": "There many different obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock For example existing law made airships could fly low urban areas meant dirigible could tie building approach area Another problem making mast strong enough support dirigible For example paragraph A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame This shows improvements made mast One biggest problems building mast issue dirigibles filled hydrogen highly flammable gas The owners building remembered German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire much worse accident would taken place densely populated area",
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"content": "To Local Newspaper Computers heavy impact todays society People depend lot people disagree I think computers positive affect people Computers entertaining They help find long lost friend keep contact Plus helpful homework Please proceed reading see I chose resons Firstly computers entertain The thousands games chose Dress educational Which good young children age five six As states writing prompt teaches handeye coordination In addition first reason computers help long lost friends There websites help find people For example yahoo These websites help keep touch family If theres phone theres always computer Lastly computers helpful homework Sometimes nt even need internet theres calculator built right But nationwide website thats used children improve edhelpercom This website work sheets helps level child In conclusion I think computers good impact people They entertaining keeps contact helpful homework Please take reasons consideration",
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"content": "In the modern world, many people have increasingly paid attention about their house or building, and they also make an effort to find a large amount of information about the house and building. In this essay, I discuss about the reasons why people are eager to find out about the history of their building or house, and suggest the way to reach materials about them. \r\n\r\nI believe that there are two remarkable reasons why people want to research about the house or building. The most important one is that theses days, a number of people consider their own houses or buildings as real estate property. To be specific, they transact their apartments and mansiosn by making a sale or purchase them, which means that they believe that their houses could be effective means of investment, and they also have to know a huge deal of information about their products. Meanwhile, other people are likely to realize historical value of their buildings where they have constantly lived in. For example, if their buildings or houses are quite old, they would get intersted in gaining plenty of stories which the buildings or houses contain, which means that they would be keen to find structures and materials of the building, and a design paradigm related to the historical possessions. \r\n\r\nPeople who want to know about their own house could utilize many ways to get useful information. The most simple strategy is that just questioning to elder family members, and the neighborhood living nearby for a long time could play a critical role in providing conclusive information. In addition, it is also pretty efficient way for the people to search copy of a house deed, which is a document specifies the detail of a certain house. If people could prove that they have ownership of thier house or building, they would get the material in public offical or on the Internet. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, when people start to be interested in their house or building for any reasons, they can take various steps to understand and appreiciate about their valuable and precious house or building.",
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"content": "In this day and age, in a wide number of nations, more and more people are revealing the desire to trace the origin of their current house or building. There are numerous motives for their action and several ways to achieve this, which will be illustrated in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, it is true that there are a plethora of rational reasons for this trend. The primary reason is that the house owner might come across a detail of the house that is bizarre or something they have never encountered before, which makes them curious. As a result, they start to do research about that detail and eventually find the information about their living space. Another reason is that historical documentaries and films influenced people to be immersed in finding the history of their home and their surroundings. For example, after watching a show about discovering ancient buildings, you might recognize that there is a chance that your house could have mystery and interesting stories while it was being constructed, which encourages you to start your journey exploring your house. \r\n\r\nAs for the means of doing this, there are various measures for people to sacrifice their desire. The most effortless way is to ask the previous owner, the senior residences or your parents about what you are wondering. As they have been taking up residence in that place for a long period of time, they can provide you with useful insights and answer your questions. Additionally, you can do the research on your own since there is a wide range of reliable sources that you can consult, such as the local library or the internet. By doing this, not only can you discover the history of your home, but you can also acquire knowledge about the whole area and maybe the city where you are staying in. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people can pick up seeking historical details about their living space for a variety of motives, namely curiosity and being influenced by documentation. And some solutions to accomplish this goal is to ask the seniors or to find references on your own.",
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"content": "Driveless Cars Coming Closer\n\nDriveless cars are a very touched topic. Not only because we see these type of cars in movies ot Tv shows, but because we are in the future now. Even though these cars are able to steer, accelerate, and brake they are not all the way driveless. Driveless cars don't have common sense. Driveless cars should not be a part of the future we've been waiting for.\n\nFirst of all, we see the future in movies and Tv shows, and we see things we like. For example; driveless cars, yeah, they are something humans have been talking for a long long time ago and we have been waiting for them since we first saw the on the big screen. but do we really want them to be a part of our future? We are in the future 2016 is now, good technology, smart people, and determination. We have those things to make the driveless cars but lets think about things that can happen because of these cars.\n\nThese cars can steer, accelerate, and brake, but they are made to tell the driver when to take over. Some have vibrating seats, others flashing lights. Would this be something someone would buy? If someone was in a car at night and they are trying to rest, they can easily press the, \"self navigation\" button and take a nap without wasting time. What we know is that these cars are not driveless completly and still need the driver to be alert.\n\nFinally, driveless cars don't think like us. They are robots not humans. In the text it says, \"most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers knows that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" Drivers that can think, not robots that will mostlikely have a problem within and could cause an accident.\n\nIn conclusion, driveless cars are being talked about a lot lately. We see these cars in movies, Tv shows, etc. These cars can accelerate, steer and brake by themselvesd but are not driveless completly, they still need a human driver to be alert. Driveless cars don't think, don't feel, the don't have the need to be driving around not knowing how to think. We need human drivers not robot drivers. Driveless cars should not be a part of our tomorrow. Would anyone want this in our childrens future?",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast written Marcia Amidon lsted explained challenges dirigibles faced trying dock Empire state building The take account obstacles make dirigibles building structure weather conditions attempting create landing area dirigibles A mooring mast top Empire State Building could never functional Dirigibles must lighter air fly Gases helium hydrogen used make blimps less dense Being highly flamable hydrogen could easily create massive fire The owners Empire State Building decided blimp ever caught fire would much larger disaster area large population Another factor halted docking dirigibles building structure The docking dirigible adds extra stress Empire State Building The forced design framework building strong enough collapse extra pressure This took time sixty thousand dollars worth modifications hat made buildings frame work Lastly weather conditions tested top Empire State Buildings winds quite unpredictabled They often shift violent air current No matter builder tie dirigible mast blimp unsafe Due winds structure building well blimp could nt create docking area dirigibles Empire State Building",
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"content": "The percentage of people who are interested in getting information about the history of their house or place that they live in is increasing. Each of them may have their own reason for this and find different ways for doing it.\r\n\r\n Firstly, there are a lot of people who are curious about the different experiences which had happened in their place. They want to know If something interesting had happened there such as a war that might happen around there and the impact on that house or those people who lived there,Secondly people would rather find out about the qualification if the qualification of different materials which the landlords had used in the building. They tend to know all the details about there to use it as well as possible or if there is something wrong from the owner's point of view, they could fix it.\r\n\r\n There are several ways for doing this. I can ask the local people in that neighbourhood who live for a long time there. For instance, 10 years ago when my family and I just moved into our building, we searched for a Baker who was working there for more than 30 years. Another way is to ask the last owner of there. People can request them to explain whatever they know about that building.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, people like to know about the history of their place because of their personal reasons such as being curious. There are some recommended ways for doing this in this essay which can be useful",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" I am against the new technology called Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions. I am against it because it could potentionally take away the ability for people to learn to read people themselves, or even the ability of people to identify how they are feeling. I think it is important to know how to communicate and address other people and their feelings. I also believe that feelings should be able to be kept to ourselves. If we want others to know how we are feeling they can ask, or we can tell them.\n\nFirst, I do think it is cool that this thing could have the ability to help students in the classroom, but I also think it is vital that teachers should be aware of their students and how they feel. In the article it states \"It could modify the lesson, like an effective human insructor.\" Having a computer do it for them takes away from the teacher interacting with his/her students. This could lead to the loss of a relationship betweeen students and teachers, and possibly the ability for them to identify how themselves, or eachother feel.\n\nNext, I do think it is important for people to practice empathy and self awareness and I believe this new technology could take away from that. People wil never have to interact with eachother to know how the other feels.\n\nIt makes me think that If no one talks to the other about how they feel then how does that help anyone? If something knows how I feel then is that how I actually feel? People to me should not feel like their emotions are not unique to them.\n\nLastly, I think peoples emotions are personal and unique and not everyone should know how you feel. They are something you should be able to keep to yourself if you want. In an excerpt from the article it states \"The facial expressions for each emotion are univeral,\" and \"Individuals show varying degrees of expression.\" Different things make different people happy, suprised, mad, disgusted, fearful, and sad. Everyone has a different way of showing them too.\n\nIn conclusion, this new technology to me has the potential of taking away some of the vital communciation skills we need today and something that is personal and unique to us, our emotions. Sure It would be nice to have something to do this for us, but wouldn't it be even cooler if humans could have the ability to do it all on their own? I think this supports why I am against the new Facial Action Coding System.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI, STUDENT_NAME, am in favor of changing our democacy to popular vote. Electoral college does no good to our society. It's out of date, it's irrational, everybody in this case has a great chance of becoming president. That is no good, we do not need idiots running our country. Election by popular vote is the best way to go. You will have a certain outcome and votes will be fairly made. It benefits everybody. More than half of our population wants you guys to make the switch.\n\nThe electoral college is not an up to date voting method. Our founduing fathers made it many years ago while writing the constitution. It is a long process of nonsense that has no advantages to us, the people. By popular vote, it's faster, simpler, and better. Popular vote is basically a group of qualified citizens voting for the president. Popular vote is the best way for people to directly voice their opinions by picking the president of their choice. If we use the Electoral college, the electors of our state may not deliever it properly.\n\nOver 60 percent of voters prefer direct elections. Government officials such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and others all thought we should abolish the electoral college. Many things are wrong with the electoral college, we don't directly vote for the president but for the slate of electors, who eventually vote for the president. It in no way benefits the people, they have no control over who the electors pick. In many cases, people have decided to not even vote because there was no hope.\n\nIf there are greater chances of everybody being president, not only is there a fool running the country,he isn't going to worry about your interests or needs. If your own president won't help your interests, potential voters may be turned off. Isn't that horrible, to feel that our president isn't our president? Knowing that our vote will have less of an efect, we won't want to vote. Voters in presedential elections are people who have something to say and actually want to express themselves. They are not the people who don't care and just vote to vote.\n\nYou and the rest of the senate should consider this very deeply. It isn't just benefiting the people, but congress, the whole senate; and most importantly, the president. It will make us a better nation and one as a whole. I hope you take this into great consideration and make the change. The only way to get back the peoples trust and votes is by taking baby steps. This is one great step and good things may come out of this.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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"content": "It’s been observed that competition in sports is influencing the young of this era. Some people believe that it’s healthy and good for one’s development especially when it comes to their education while others are not true believers in this. They think that it’s leaving a poor effect on teenagers’ education. Although sports are healthy activities for the human body, its effect varies from person to person.\r\n\r\nBecause of the multiple advantages of sports, it’s considered a healthy activity. When it comes to competitions, passion to win contributes towards polishing one’s personality. A part of the population is in favor of such competitions in which teenagers can learn to progress and win. Passion to win can play a vital role in someone’s educational history. So, people believe that if someone is competitive in sports, they will have the same attitude for their education.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, people also think that when someone fails in any sports competition, they get negative vibes, which causes too many unavoidable situations like politics, jealousy, and so on. One can do anything to win which can harm others. It’s not limited to this only but they can join any extreme which can be disastrous for anyone involving that competition.\r\n\r\nSummarizing the idea, I would say that competitive sports are good if they are conducted with the right terms. Competitions make one more proactive and smart. Rules should be fair enough to accommodate all involved parties. Although some people are not in favor of this, we can educate them by conducting healthy sports competitions in every educational department.",
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"content": "Technology developed majorly past decades It helped mankind much buildings new inventions These ever growing concern whether s beneficital People become lazier many things could I think benefits us We learned many things The computer shows man kind capable We learn many cultures Students use studying making projects look better I asked concren He says expand knowledge There concern much paper lose every year With computers makes going green possible You make powerpoints computers instead using much paper long essay We could tests computers I think future based everything computers You email instead using letters For example friend said school nt use paper uses computers They saved money paper powerpoints etc I miss family I want see Not talking phone I use computer talk basically I asked people perfer using computer talk family use phone said perfer computer I know I m trying great side The games horrible computer People play play day long Online games make even fun thus make lazier There many games computer s horrible says In conclusion computers something help us long time benefits us Except fact games I agree bad side I hope I shown independent person statement true",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist mo water hills deserts When cyclists saw water wanting jump thought water lack like battery acidThen hills slowed water The desert made want water even That features settings affected cyclist",
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"content": "The mood created auther memoir happy parence sacrinefying wanted themselfs thinking family needed Also show different Cuba They show love well mother would invite people ca nt find job stay unil get back feet This author fells memoir",
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"content": "When I thirteen older brother dissuaded going spend day fishing I got bed morning throw pair old torn blue jeans downstairs get breakfast On way I could smell sweet aroma eggs hash browns made mouth water My brother finished plate My mom handed plate I reached bottle sitting across ate said We ll leave hour I said okay went eatingAfter breakfast gathered poles tackle boxes put car along old boat kind jacked old neighbor lady We put stuff van mom drove us town It eight morning would nt get back home till three four afternoon depending fishing There little store town creek went right behind It small creek I grew I thought knew expect We put behind store mom left telling us safe It chilly morning little cloudy The water cold brother said I wear waiters I thought silly seeing would boat Burt I put put boat water This first time ever even used boat exciting As went stream water got fast loud embankment like wall outside world As took next corner A water fall tall man Not kind would see movies good enough eyes Right middle big rock water went around sides We pushed right agenced rock thrown boat grabbed rock dear lifeWe stuck I looked brother kneaded say waySo said let go let water us As soon let go like om back two thousand pound animal rodeo lasts second When boat sunk waiters filled instantly took hold boat pulling us stream We lost gear except tackle boxes oar stupid boat It took finally got boat water poured water water I scared life This suppose fun fishing trip game survival We could nt turn back way got home go rest way I cold wet nt options We continue tried sink We spent day carrieing boat around rapids throw brush day mellowed could put boat back We got big pool big could fit house There small rapids running right throw middle It dint look bad bean dissuaded extra car full We went around rapids pool As went burly braised end rapids boat went I tried keep sinking waiters heavy As tried swim shore shoe fell went stream Being stupid chased belly get The water faster I thought I let I swallowing much water could nt breath I could feel begin get deeper soon I could nt touch bottom My shoe right front I finally got burly anything left I got shore law choking water After ten minuets I got went back I think freak luck survived day I learn lot day laugh",
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"content": "In some countries, there is a proliferation of people are gaining momentum in searching for the past story of the house or building they stay in. This essay will explain why and how people doing so.\r\n\r\nTo start with the first reason, people want to know about the quality and safety of their homes. For example: people will find details for the property quality, especially the construction builder, materials used to build the house and also the architecture structural in order to avoid deleterious consequences in the future such as building collapse. The second reason is to cast about the Chinese geomancy of the house location and direction. For instance, people want to live in a place that suits them and they believe that the house can give them a better fortune if it has a finer position. Last but not least, the third reason is knowing the legacy of the ownership status, so as to prevent the occurrence of unnecessary lawsuit problems.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, there are ways that people are able to access the history of their living place. One of the common ways is browsing on the internet, this is a vital tool to explore all relevant information about the premise. Some people may be able to request from their local council or even ask the neighbours living in the neighbourhood.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is commonly believed that knowing the place you stay is much needed because I personally will be hunting what is the past history of my house and let myself living peacefully in my own shelter.",
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"content": "I think the development of these cars could help with so much. I am for the development of these driverless cars for three reasons. First because they help asist drivers and warn drivers of possible problems, they could help with preventing car accidents, and they also allow the driver to still have control over their vehicles.\n\nThese driverless cars allow drivers to drive easy without worry, because they warn the driver of any possible accidents. These cars would be very helpful in many aspects. For example the \" Traffic Jam Assistant\", announced in 2013 by BMW, can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves and notify the driver when the road ahead might require human skills, such as navigating through work zones or around accidents.\n\nSecondly, the use of these driverless cars could help prevent a lot of car accidents. The \"Traffic jam Assistant\" can also handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but its touch sensors make sure the drivers hands are always on the wheel. Also GM has developed seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\n\nLastly, these driverless cars are good to use because they can still allow the driver to be in control of the vehicle if the driver decides they want to drive themselves. The driver would just have more security by having a driverless car.\n\nIn conclusion i think having driverless cars would benefit people a lot. Developing these cars is a good idea because these smart cars or driverless cars help asist drivers and insure security. They could also prevent car accidents,and they still allow drivers to be in control of their vehicle. These are the reasons why i support the development of these cars.",
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"content": "Is it or isn't it? I think that it isnt. There are too many reasons why it is just a landform and not a human. For example it says \"A few days late NASA unveiled the image for all of us to see. The caption noted \"huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head\" this is why I think it is a landform.\n\nAnother reason I think it is a landform is because as we got closer to the ground of Mars is got clearer and clearer. It came out to be a mesa. In the 70's they didn't have to best cameras so it looked a little blury and came out to be a face.\n\nAs cameras got better and better it became clearer and clearer. If they were to do it today they would really see what it was. The text says \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\n\nThis means that it was proven that it was a land form. If it was a human or a living creature we would be able to tell. Some people think it was a conspirasy. I think it was because if it wasn't we would still be looking at it.\n\nSo people can think what they want but I think it was a landform. Is there life or Mars? If there is will we ever know?",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper people using computers However everyone entitled opinion Some people nt like s people like like Computers let communicate faster play sorts games provides information Nine ten people love computers Unlike sending writing letters people instant messaging much faster easier way talk another person Sending receiving letters take days weeks hand instant messaging takes seconds Even better s Instant messaging way communicate friends family also video chat Video chat like talking phone also see person re talking You talking video chat someone another country guess It s also When make long distant calls costly video chat wo nt cost penny pockets Not computer good communication also play fun entertaining games Everyone enjoys playing games whether re one eightytwo There websites internet among game sites Most game sites virtual games play online There s one player two player party This means could play alone friend whole family Everyone time Also computers could fun used work The information It s like personal library home touch finger Either re research project want informed internet help subject All search topic need whether s cooking certain dish learning space trying spell word anything think ll In conclusion computers useful things examples I hope think computers way I millions people As see computers impoved lives human beings",
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"content": "Houses are the place that people live which is meaningful for them. Some of the people take an interest on realize the story or history of the houses where people live in. In my opinion, there are some reasons for people to figure out the history of their home with some methods. \r\n\r\n Most of human have a sense of belonging of where they are from or where they begin. Similar to people learning the history of hometown or country, people are curious about everything close to them. Due to houses are the place that people start up and come from, so people are willing to spend time on understanding the detail of their homes. To be more specific, it is common to see there were lots of impolite architects are building the house with shoddy work and use inferior materials. It actually affected a lot to safety of living which is pretty important to notice about. In order to have satisfying place to live, it is necessary for people to understand how the building comes from. \r\n\r\nTo obtain the information about the house must ask someone who takes part in the manufacture of the house without doubt. While the house was building by parents or architect are the people who make lots of decision sand choices on the shape or elements of the house, no one is clear than they of this. If the house where people live in is a symbolic building of the city, it is easier to figure out the process and story of the building from public organization or websites on the internet. \r\n\r\n\tHouses are meaningful for most of people. People are interested in the place that they lived in are normal phenomenon, some basic methods help them to understand the details of the building.",
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"content": "Undoubtedly, it is true that traffic congestion is a concerning issue in cities and towns around the world. In this essay, I discuss about the possible reasons behind this ever-rising problem and how can be tackled in an effective way.\r\n\r\nDefinitely, the first and foremost for the traffic jam is the increasing number of vehicles on the road. Nowadays, most of the commuters relay on their own cars to reach their destinations. They think that it would save their precious time, unfortunately it makes congested roads. In order to resolve this matter, the government has to implement frequent public transport system at reasonable cost at anytime and anywhere. For example, the government introducesthe train which helps people to travel anywhere in the state . It's name is Vandhe Barath which saves time to travel long distances.\r\n\r\nThe second reason for the traffic congestion is the neverending road works which makes the queues of vehicles on the road. In Kochi, one of the busiest cities in India, construction of flyovers, pipe line installation etc do at peak hours, as a result, it leads to traffic jams. The best solution for this problem is that works on the road should be done at non-peak hours and travellers should be notify in advance. Such ways help to reduce the intensity of traffic block \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, traffic congestion is an ever-rising concern in major cities due to increasing number of vehicles and road works, it should be handle with possible solutions like introduction of more public transport and less busy hours road works.",
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"content": "Do you believe driverless cars a good alternative to human driven cars?\n\nWould you feel comfortable letting your car do most almost 90% of the time?\n\nDriverless cars means all the driving institutions and schools will be out of business and the workers in those professions will be out of a job.\n\nMy personal opinion on driverless cars is that even though you might not have to do so much of the driving like you had to before driverless cars took over, you are putting your life and the lives of the passengers in your car with you at risk.\n\nI believe that if driverless care become a thing companies that produce their own versions of the driverless cars.\n\nIt will put a lot of liability on them.\n\nIf a computer in the car were to malfunction and maybe skid off the road killing everyone on board the company who produced the car just killed a few of their customers.\n\nGoogle's Sergey believes driverless cars will take over and the car buying and selling industry will tank.\n\nInsurance companies could aslo go out of business because if computers were to take over control of the car well then there wouldn't be any accidents.\n\nPeople who buy these cars put so much trust and faith into these cars thinking that since it is controlled by a computer it is percect and knows everything about every road.\n\nHere is the thing, people forget that the computers in the car and the GPS systems, radar, and a lot of other technology was made my man.\n\nThe people who built the on-board GPS, radar, navigation, and other systems could have messed up on the production of the technology and maybe the GPS had a glitch and thought a body of water was a road and drove their passengers into a body of water killing them.\n\nMy overall opinion about driverless cars is that they are not a good or safe alternative to a human driven car that is controlle by a living person.\n\nI belive it is more enjoyable to drive a car than have a computer drive for you.",
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"content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System is going to be the next biggest thing is facial recognition software. While it does seem unethical and useless there actually are many uses for the Facial Action Coding System. Whether it be detecting exactly how much of a specfic emotion one is feeling to using the imformation found to brighten and improve the user's day, it also has a complex and unique technology behind it.\n\nThe FACS (Facial Action Coding System), is able to detect exactly how much of any specfic emotion that one is feeling. When experiments were preformed on the emensly timeless and classic painting, the Mona Lisa, painted by Leonardo da Vinci, it was recognized that the exact feelings in the painting were, \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\" (D'Alto paragraph 1). While this in and of itself does not seem like useful information, it still is information that noone had ever knew before. Who would have known that behind that small Mona Lisa smile, was fear, disgust, and anger?\n\nWithin the use of FACS the computer itself can bring up different videos and or pictures to help improve the owners overall mood, or solely provoct a laugh when the owner is feeling sad. \"The Mona Lisa demonstartion is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this cimputer can do. Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appers on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student us becoming confused or bored,' Dr.Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrcture.' The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expensive for video games or video surgery. 'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,' notes Dr.Huang. 'So computers need to understand that too.'\" (D'Alto paragraph 6). While again these things seem unethical it can open up a brand new door for facial recgontion technolog and overall improve the mental health or adults and teen alike. In our society teens and adults often struggle with mental health disorders. Using a computer like this can be beneficial to everyone alike because nowadays everything is done electronical. Having a mental disorder or feeling something on the inside is hard to detect and the use of this software could very well help expand the actions of being able to identifiy those feelings that lie underneath the mask of emotions.\n\nThe software itself behind FACS is intruguing and astundingly complex using several different methods of determining how the user is feeling. \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an 'action unit'. Then Dr.Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS. Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" (D'Alto paragraph 3). So the science behind this technolgy is not all comouter programmed, the has been research done by trained profesionslas as to correctly adapt the facial recogntioning software. As though it seems this entire process is done by computers there is also a human componate interowoven within.\n\nAs a whole as it does seems unethical the Facial Action Coding System is just he step forward needed in facial recognization. Using this technology allows us access to different way of identifiying emotions unknown to the public before. Using a mixture of both computer and human inferences and research we have made a new way of finding, improving, and helping others using facial recognition.",
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"content": "The cyclist affected features setting lot For example dry hot place makes thirsty Then ghost towns make hard get supplies Also bad road slowed The bad roads even would probably hurt bike roads also would make work harder",
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"content": "Have you ever felt like you are being watched? Have you ever felt like you've been pressured to smile. Have you ever thought, \"Hey, there is too much technology now. Lets go back to when we didn't have any of this.\" Well this is what this writing is going to be about.\n\nIn the text, it specifically says that your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. This means we would have to go out and buy a brand new computer that can run the complex algorithms to decode our face. It would just be too expensive. It is also the latest software of Prof. Most likely meaning we would have to buy or pay a subscripiton for the program. Which, would be more money you would have to pay to see what emotions your face is displaying. so in th end, you would be paying at least a couple thousand dollars for something to tell you your emotions. I honestly don't think it is worth it at all. When we already do it everyday. When we see our friends, we ask why they are soo happy or why they are frowning. We don't need to pay thousands of dollars for something we already do on a daily basis.\n\nIn conclusion, I think this is just a waste of our money. Yea if other people want to spend their money foolishly, then they can. But just know I will not be one of the customers because this is a rather follish way to spend a lot of money. If it was like only one hundred dollars or cheaper. Yea maybe I would buy it. So in conclusion, it is not the best item to buy.",
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"content": "Dear senator,\n\nI strongly believe that we should demolish the electoral college system. It is highly unfair and can cause the wrong person to win. The system also has and will continue to cause controversy and rightfully so.\n\nTo begin with, the electoral college system is extremely unfair. With this system in play it is fairly easy for the wrong canidate to be elected it has happened before where the person with the most popular votes meaning they had the majority rule has lost because of the way the opposing system is run. This occasion may occur from time to time because when voting you are voting for the electors not the actual president that you want to win. The system is very faulty and there is no guarantee that the electors will vote for whom they are saying they will.\n\nTo continue, the system has caused and will continue to cause great amounts of controversy. Some people may refer to it as undemocratic, outdated or even irrational. Even though all people may not agree with it there are reasons it is still in action. It is highly unlikely for there to be a tie, the swing states play a huge role in being the deciding factor of who wins and it allows all states to be equal in the amount of electoral votes they put in in ratio to the population of the states. So there are some good things about the electorlal college but some will surely argue that they are not enough to outway the bad. Maybe we should just get rid of the college and take the easy way out by using majority rule. It really does make the most sense.\n\nLastly, the system makes some people feel as if their votes are worthless. In states such as texas that is made up 0f mostly republicans the democrats do not feel it necessary to vote because of the system. If most of the people are republican then the democrats already know that the opposite side will get the most electoral votes therefore it is pointless for them to vote. Another state in which this occurs is california where the majority of people are democratic therefore the republicans dont feel the need to vote. In my opinion everyones vote matters so we should run the elections that way.\n\nTo conclude. the electoral college should be done away with. It makes people feel like their opinions on the matter of who runs this country dont actually mattter. It is highly faulty meaning the candidate with the most votes does not always win and lastly the system causes loads of contraversy and will continue to until the problem is solved.",
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"content": "Have you ever thought about why venus is a worth exploring pursuit? Venus is extremely dangerous because of it's hot temperatures that can average 800 degrees farenheit.But there are many things astronomers can learn about venus. The astronomers could learn how close the density and size of venus is to earth.They could see why carbon dixiode blankets venus if there is no form of life there.They could test what things will melt on venus.Lastly,they could find out why there are no longer oceans on venus.\n\nVenus is the Earth's twin acording to the author,venus is the closet planet to earth in terms of density and size.The astronomers could examine why 97 percent of carbon dixiode blankets venus.They could go to diferent parts of venus and see if the temeperature rises or lowers due to the high temperatures on venus.They could see how long it will take venus to destory a vehicle used to tavel to venus.They could see what metals will melt on venus so they could use osmething else on the ship that will not melt.Finally,those are all the reasons astronomers should explore venus.\n\nIn all based on the evidence venus seems like a worthy pursuit.there will be many great things that will come out of a trip to venus.Astronomers will have more knowledge to share about venus.People could get their questions about venus answered.In conclusion,that is why venus is a worthy pursuit.",
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"content": "Metropolitan cities all around the world have their own charms and benefits, but, at the same ,time there are other many significant issues which need attention. One of them is the increased number of transportation on the road and resulting traffic congestion which in turn causes delays and extra time on roads and also stress to everyone. This essay will discuss the causes of the high volume of traffic and solutions to prevent this problem. \r\n\r\nFirstly, it is true that each one of us dreams to have a car at some point in life. Therefore with affordability and paychecks, most of us, buy cars and in fact usually keep one car for each earning member of the family. Car-pooling arrangement does not even exist in a family, leave the neighbourhood. While, not alone personal desire, another reason to blame for the number of vehicles on the road is the poor public transport system. Connectivity issues and distant working places do not give a good choice of travel by the public transportation structure. Hence, people prefer to take their own car. \r\n\r\nFor example, in cities like Melbourne, New Delhi and Shanghai, often there are crowded roads ,especially during morning hours due to a lack of adequate government transportation and distant places. \r\n\r\nNext, how to improve and solve this issue of high number of vehicles. This can be resolved with a change in individuals' attitudes as well as with government support. Most important is to have more community buses and government should give a system with improved connectivity to places and promote and provide a clean and safe public transport system. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the rising figure of transit vehicles on the road is a common issue in major cities of the world. In my opinion, the aforementioned reasons and the corrective measures would help in future conditions for the same.",
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"content": "I think computers good use find places Another reasons good talk friends computer You play types different games get pictures good homework That computers good need First reason need computers map us Also could look places never saw want get go computer",
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"content": "Have ever watched seen book even movie think kids reading watching I heard many books There even music adults listening There parents strick kids watch hear read sing I know fact parents would want letting childern read watch hear kind stuff When think music books movies need childern reach I think movies books even music bad language violence bullying need hidden childern Bad language apporaite kids hearing age ten even older When hear bad song coming little kids near turn station differnet station If little kids hear kind language well saying young Another book song music taken shelf ones violence If kids watch hear read violence likely start violent start hearing reading When walking around scared walk getting attacked If see someone reading watcing something think right tell reading watching Violence bad little kids young Books movies music bullying taken Bullying answer everything even though many think If think good little kids learning bullying wrong It bad thing little kids Bullying also gets trouble caught bullying Have ever thought book taken shelf The books I think taken shelf would ones bad language violence bullying Childern hearing reading bad language They also watcing anything violence Lastly reading anything bullying",
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"content": "Driverless cars both have good and bad aspects. I have reasons on why we should not have driverless cars. With driverless cars it makes people more lazy, accidents are more likely to happen, and a lot of people are not going to know the rules of the road as they should with driverless cars.\n\nIt is lazy to have driverless cars because people would feel since they don't have to drive they don't have to pay attention to the road. Also, most people will just sit there on their phones and chat and think that it's okay. No one will actually pay attention because of the fact that it is a driverless car, but they do still need to be driven by a human when it comes to specific complications. Such as, when there is traffic or certain road conditions. If people are not paying attention then how exactly will they know.\n\nAccidents are more likely to happen with driverless cars. All drivers should be aware of the rules of the road. If the driver is not paying attention and the car is in need for a human to drive it is likely that the car will lose control and an accident can happen. That would make the roads more dangerous than they already are. That's why if there were driverless cars the driver still needs to have all eyes on the road.\n\nFor new drivers with driverless cars they will not know the rules of the road like they should. If they are driving a driverless car they most likely are not paying attention to the road and knowing exactly when to go, when to stop, and what the signs on the road mean. Without knowing the rules of the road it is hazardous for you and other people driving. If driverless cars are to happen everyone should still practice they rules, especially if the car is in need for a human to drive. That will make the roads safer.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars shouldn't be taken into consideration. It is hazardous and more likely to cause accidents. People should be very careful and know exactly what they are doing if there will be driverless cars.",
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"content": "The Face On Mars. A wonderful bit of scientific information that has become yet another pop icon. Many do believe that it is proof that there is life on Mars or on other planets. But even though we too would like to believe in such an existence, it is not true. This \"Face On Mars\" is just a natural landform that has the resemblence to a human profile.\n\nThe reason is that the face is just another landform. It seems like this has been repeated a multitude of different times, but lets look at the facts. We all know of certain landmarks or features that you find as you drive across the countryside and think, \"That looks like my dog!\" as you drive by a stone. That stone that you thought resembled your dog was just created by weathering and erosion. Why would this be any different than that? In the article, a man called Garvin talks about this by giving some different examples. He says that the face is actually, \"The Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\" Many things can be created to look like amazing things using wearthering and erosion.\n\nNext, the weather. In the article, it said that on the first time that any human made device was able to take a picture of this it was apparently hazey out which made the picture look a lot different than what it looked like the second time. The second time that they took the picture, it came back just another landmark.\n\nFinally, the people behind it. What I can alos say, is the human imagination. The human imagination is a place where everyone frequents and dreams up everything and anything. This is whats happening here. What is happening is people, scientists and conspiracy theorists alike. People want to and believe that there is another life form out there somewhere. This can lead to false information, accusations, rants, and many other things that can be put to a theorist. As much as we would like to believe it, we can't. Mainly because we don't have the cold hard facts to put it with. So as long as we don't have the information or evidence to put with it, we can't know anything for certain.\n\nThere you have it. Say what you will. The face is real. The aliens just moved it some place else. Your not looking in the right spots. Your keeping valuable information from us. The government is after us. The space aliens are real. The weather was just bad, thats all! You need to update your camaras adn equipment. We are highly trained in the science of aliens and space, we aer professionials. All I have to say is, all in good time, humans, all in good time.",
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"content": "Venus is a planet that is in our solar system they called the Evening Star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, venus ir eatrh twin venus is closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. venus´s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximimity to us. A thick atmosphere of almosst 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. this mining that venus humends can not brid becouse of the carbon dioxide blankets and the temperature average over 800 degress\n\nfahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of\n\nvenus would allow scientists to float above\n\nthe fray. the NASA are making tinks to know more about venus and what venus have more on his panet. NASA work approaches to studying venus. for example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus´s surface and hve lasted for three weeks in such conditions. another project si looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gaind on the planet itself, but also becouse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. but this how is venus and how the NASA and other peolpe are finding what is venus what is in venus and if humends can life in ther is so much thinkg that we need to know about what is out said of the earth and what can do to us. but is good to know more abut other planets that we do not know.",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System should be used in classrooms. This new technology can help students avoid unwanted articles or advertisments, recieve more help, and become genuinely happy.\n\nWhen students go online to do research for a project, they come accross different websites. The internet is full of useful information, but it can also show us innapropriate images or unwanted advertisments. Students can get rid of this by just frowning. Paragraph six states, \"...if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" The new technology can help students avoid bad articles and advertisments. Students will recieve more research material that is reliable and useful for projects.\n\nNot only is their studying going to improve, but their comprehension in lessons. When students study or go through a lesson online, they may become confused or even bored. Students will make a confused facial expression, and the computer will recognize it. Paragraph six of the article states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" The computer will give the student more help as if it were a real instructor. Their comprehension of the lesson will be better because they will get more help. Students would recieve a better instruction that is compatible with their own needs.\n\nMaking facial expresions to make the computer help the students learn will also make the student happier. When people smile they genuinely feel happiness, so when students smile to the computer that they understand the lesson, they become happier. Paragraph nine of the article states, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" The computer will give the student their own personal needs in learning and when that makes the student smile, they will feel the true emotion of happiness. Like the article states in paragraph nine, \"'Putting on a happy face' actually works!\"\n\nStudents will benefit greatly if the Facial Coding System is installed in schools. It will make the internet a better place to research, address each student with their own learning needs, and make students happier learners. New technology is expanding and the future is waiting for us. If we want to help the education of students and their ability to feel emotions and not become robots in the future, we must put the Facial Coding Sytem in schools.",
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"content": "I going write time I patient One day family I came back church I asked room I could make breakfast would answer phone grandma grandma talks lot It oganizing For example I kept paceing back forth I sat After hour patientience mom grandma said goodbye hung phone I finally got breakfast",
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"content": "Was there a man on Mars? Magazines say yes, but the scientists have continuously said no. On May 24, 2001, NASA's ship, Viking 1, found something on Mars that had the facial features of a human. Scientists have proven that the piece of rock thought to resemble a human face is no more than just a natural landform through unusual shadows, facts that have been talked about with many scientists, and images taken that agreed with the facts.\n\nFirst of all, NASA stated that they thought this landform was just another mesa found on Mars. The difference was that this strange, possible mesa obtained humanly facial features. Later, the fact the that the \"facial features\" on the mesa were due solely to unusual shadows, which gave the untrue image look like eyes, nose, and a mouth.\n\nNext, the fact that the mesa is only a natural landform, not a face has been confirmed with countless scientists. On April 5, 1998, everyone was waiting to see what decision would be released about the mesa. Was it once a face of a person or just another landform on Mars? It appeared on the JPL website that there was no alien monument; it was just a nautral landform. Scientists have confirmed this. The only reason that it is even questioned is because people wanted to have been able to say that there was a face on Mars, even if it was proven otherwise. There is much more publicity for authors especially to say that there was a face on Mars. Unfortunately, scientists know the most in this situation, not authors.\n\nLastly, scientists took pictures to prove their evidence. In September 1997, Global Surveyor took a photograph of the landform that was ten times better quality than the original Viking picture of the \"face\". People who are not scientists still disagreed, so NASA and other scientists continued to take images. By the time it was 2001, the mesa did not look like a face anymore. The picture shows that it is clearly just a mesa.\n\nIn conclusion, people would be crazy to try to attempt to disagree with the scientists because of how many facts they have to prove their hypotheses. First, they explained why the mesa only looked like a face because of the illusinating shadows. Then, they confirmed it with other scientists. And lastly, the scientists took many photographs of the mesa that finally proved their point. Scientists proved their point by explaining unusual shadows, confirming information with additional scientists, and taking countless photographs of the mesa.",
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"content": "Throughout the article it is made known that Venus is an oustanding yet harsh planet. However Venus is one of Earth's closest neighbors and the planet most like Earth. Scientist believe that at one point Venus could of maintained a form of life, and for some reason still have hope to visit. Astronomers to this day are fascinated by Venus and would soon love to find a way to make a landing on this very earth-like planet. However, why are astronomers so fascinated by this planet?\n\nVenus has many features that are analogous to those on Earth. However Venus has an atmosphere almost ninty-seven percent of carbon dioxide, and on the surface temperatures average over eight hundred degrees. Venus isn't the closest planet to the sun but is still the hottest. Even though some conditions are different Venus still has many conditions similar to Earth.\n\nThroughout the article it is clearly states the similarities and differences between Earth and Venus. In paragragh three the author shows just how a like these two planets can be. \"Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on its surface.\" These conditions listed are very similar to those of the conditions on Earth. However Venus may be similar in some forms, the differences between the two planets has prevented Venus from being discovered.\n\nVenus may only ever be discovered through a ship flying over thirty miles above the landscape of the planet due to how harsh the conditions are. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Farenheit,\" this claim by the author comes to show that even from a distance the conditions of Venus can be felt. Coming any closer to the planet would put those on the journey in a very dangerous situation.\n\nHowever despite the harsh conditions and nearly impossible ideas, atronomers still attempt on landing something on the floor of Venus. Venus is the closest thing to Earth, and astronomers want to believe that one day it did or one day this planet will hold life.",
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"content": "These days in many countries , the most percentage of people are interested in historical topic such as house or building they live in . there are many reasons for this and in addition different ways for research about that .\r\n\r\nOverall, each building or houses has story , when you decided to build new house you think about design ,space, rooms or other parts. Then nowadays many houses are so old and many generation with variouse lifestyle live in that. Many people , especially youngest would like have aware life, they want to know about past or history of their space , because in their belief, previouse people that lived there have so effect in the energy of space.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, history of everything is belong to past and the best way for get information is talk to elder people and another way is study historical book and ducumentery. In these ways many people are interested in talk to old men or women then compare the dataset.\r\n\r\nIn result , in my idea is so important for us to having true information about our living place and our home , because we spend more time in different part in our house ,we should know about the past and story of that.",
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"content": "Due to easy access to the Internet, many academic institutes, and especially universities offer virtual courses instead of in-person classes. It seems to me that this should be considered as a possible development.\r\n\r\nThe main advantage of online programs is that the students can attend the class from wherever they are comfortable ; therefore, the transportation charges for coming to the campus every day will be reduced. Also, the university doesn't have to pay extra charges for maintenance, power, etc. Hence, both the university and the students can save more time and money. Furthermore, these courses can be recorded and the students can rewatch the parts they missed during the class. They won’t be limited by the class hours and can study and work on the courses at any time of the day. Since the sessions will be recorded, teachers will be more careful about what they say during their presentations and can minimize potential mistakes.\r\n\r\nOnline courses can be beneficial for the teachers too. They can stay at home and prepare for their lectures and have more free time for responsibilities besides work. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, holding classes on campus might include some other benefits. First, the key advantage of in-person courses is the physical interaction between the teacher and the students. This can affect learning significantly. Moreover, asking questions and connecting with the class environment is less challenging in person and this help students to focus better and get on with the class easier.\r\n\r\nAlthough the specific views on this issue may vary from person to person, I believe that the advantages of online courses outway the disadvantages and therefore, this should be considered a development.",
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"content": "Using technology called the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) in a classroom is not a good idea.\n\nThe FACS enables computers to read human emtions such as sad, happy, scared etc.\n\nIt uses a 3-D comoutuer model of the face and and the 44 major muscles to read your emtions.\n\nUsing the FACS in a classroom is not a good idea becuase it can cause distraction, limit human contact, and limit the amount of one on one time a teacher has to help the students.\n\nThe FACS should not be used in the classroom becasue it could cause distractions for the students.\n\nThe students could be more focused on what the computer says than what the teacher is teaching.\n\nIf the FACS breaks down then a student could feel left out and sad and that could distract them from performing their best in school.\n\nThe computer could also allow students to get off task and only focus on what is happening on the computer, or if the FACS is built into a regular laptop it could cause students to play games or do other things on the internet than learn in the class.\n\nThe FACS can be very distracting to students so they sould not be found in the classroom.\n\nIn school we meet new friends, bond with teachers and have human contact all day long.\n\nIf the FACS is in the classroom it could cause all of that to disapear.\n\nThis means that teachers could become less engaed with the class and students can become less engaed with learning.\n\nDr Huang states that \"Most human communication is nonverbal, inculding emtional communication\".\n\nCOmputers do not have emtions like huamns do.\n\nThe computer may be able to tell how we are feeling but they can not make us feel better if we are sad, or scared, or in destress.\n\nThis can cause students to feel more isolated and make them more sad, or scared etc.\n\nWhen students feel this way it could ause more school violence.\n\nFACS should not be in the classroom.\n\nThe third and final reason that the FACS should not be in the classroom is because it can limit the teachers one on one interaction with students.\n\nDr. Huang states \"A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confused or bored\".\n\nTeachers are there to teach to interact with the students and sense if they are confused.\n\nIf the FACS does that for them and helps the student if they are confused then the teacher is not there to help the student.\n\nThis could also cause the student to be more confused if the computer is teaching them instead of a real life teacher.\n\nFACS should not be in the classroom because it will limit the contact between student and teacher.\n\nThe FACS is an amazing innovation, but it should not be found in the classroom.\n\nIt should not be allowed in the classroom becuase it can be a distraction to students, limit human contact. and limit the amount of one on one time a teacher can have with a student.\n\nIt is important that school is a place to interact with others and futher your education but having a computer read your emtions in class will damage the school experience.\n\nTherefore the FACS should be found in the classroom.",
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"content": "As the world keeps moving, making adapations and innovation which encourages artificial intelligence working instance of humans's duties. Some people believe that the main factors are humans do not have enough experience and creativities while other oppose that companies saving cost by using artificial intelligence. This essay will examine why the new generation teenager cannot provide job and my prespective will be discussed. \r\n\r\nIf the world is a big competition, experience is an essential role for runner to approach the goal. From my point of view, the initial reason why new students do not have opputunity to apply is that their do not have experience. For instance, most employee need employer who have a working background. To illstrate, one of the way to receive the job is to gain experience which organizations do not have to waste the money of training and another sources. \r\n\r\nThe another reason is that after the covid-19 pandamic has been spreading extremly fash which let various factories use an artificial intelligence which their do not prefer fresh graduated pupils. Futhermore, this is cheaper than the human resource. To explain, if they is no food, they is no life. Food provides energy for human to do acticities in dairy life while it will not happen with the smart devices. This means that it will save the budget and time at the same time. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, in my opinion, why companies do not allow the graduted students to apply is that after covid-19 they have new way to save cost which they do not have spend on the new employees anymore. Lastly, the company tries to save cost by provides oppunities for people who have an experience.",
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"content": "Dear people think computers used much helping people become weight even obese This maybe true computers also teach hand eye coordination give people oppertunity learn far away places people even coordinate Over I think computers effect people positive way reasons Computers help teach hand eye coordination I know probably thinking huh How computers All staring screen But dismay computers teach hand eye coordination It playing games people watch screen click hands They dont stare mouse play games By teaches hand eye coordination Scientist provine people computer use least hours week better coordination people dont computer Just statistic alone speaks thousand words alone Handeye coordination thing It helps play better sports like baseball helps future jobs As tell without computers hand eye coordination People think computers used games reality teach us things world Without computers people would know nearly anything thats going countries For example day mom checking email came access stay young starving That story changer anyday life takes food granted Without computer mom would countries Because live whats going countries Are less fortanite computer help remind teach us whats going world everyday One main advantages computers allow people communicate Even grandmother said without computers I wouldnt close I today CAPS grandmother use website skypecom This websit allows talk person see Because site like Im allowed stay contact able see grandmother lives faraway Without computers wouldnt possible Not computers let talk people far away people close I often find asking friends computer homework whens next test etc Computers make easier connect people near far In conclusion computers help different ways The world would upside without They give people ability learn far away places people teach hand eye coordination allow people communicate Computers flaws also positive effects I think shine tiny flaws Thank",
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"content": "For this essay, i will show how using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable.\n\nThis technology can be very useful in a classroom, in many different ways. One way this technology could be used in a classroom is shown in paragraph 6. Paragraph 6 states 'For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.' This would be used for videos being watched in a classroom, because when an ad before the video wanted isn't interesting, the viewer is not as interested in the video asked to watch. But if the ad is interesting, the student will be more interested in the video.\n\nA second reason this technology would be useful in the classroom is also stated in paragraph 6. Dr. Huang says in paragraph 6, 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' This would be extremely useful for having schools have a better passing percentage. This could make the student more interested in learning, making it easier to pass students. This would also make learning less stressful on students, and might even make it a little fun.\n\nOne more reason this technology would be valuable in school is that it can help teachers figue out their students, and make it easier to help them. This would make it easier for teachers to help students because it would show the teachers who their students are a little more than things do now. It would also help the teachers know if their students are actually trying, or if they're just trying to get the answers from the teacher without learning for themsleves.\n\nThese are just a few different ways that this technology would be valuable in classrooms, but there are plenty of reasons not stated in this essay of how it would be valuable in classrooms, both for the students and the teachers",
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"content": "I believe we should continue in the making of autonomous cars. There is much to be discovered on it as well as much to be put into it. I would be very careful if I drove one yes, but I do believe the car is capable of what they need and whatthe people need. Yes it will still need human assistnce once in a while during the times of \"...navigating through road work or accidents.\" Which will keep the ddriver still in control and not putting others and themselves in danger. As said in the text \"The google car simply announces when the driver should be prepaired to take over.\" This may become a problem seeing as most people think that if a car is auto-drive then it needs no human-asscistance and they may just leave it be and let it do it's thing. They decided that to make it easy to tell the driver \" Hey, you should help me drive.\" To help with this they put in a vibrating chair to vtell the driver that they should take over. Itis said in the text that some states will welcome these cars once proven safe. This is why I believe they should continue their work. They have things to discover and things to apply to it. They will correct any mistakes and learn what needs to be done. I believe that these cars will one day be perfected and \"driven\".",
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"content": "While technolgy is being developed as time goes by, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", is when technology wasn't good and for that, no one couldn't tell what she's feeling before FACS (facial action coding system) revealed her hidden feelings. Having a technology that can read expressions is valuable and should be allowed. There aren't many affects to it and it would help many people to express or show at least a sign or a feeling.\n\nbefore feelings were being revealed and shown by a machine, people we're already talented and smart enough to tell one another faces. In the article, the author told us that it's not hard to tell when someone is either sad or happy, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" this quote provides us information that looking at someone's face can give us a lot of hints, even if they try to aviod it or show it. which means it is natural for somone to know notice it while some can't. Another thing that the author tells us is that the muscles are visible and that there's nothing to hid when parts of our faces gives the viewer an opourtunity to either guess or say what they see, \" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" this quote perfectly explains that there are many majors and units where it deals with the muscles and movement in our bodiues. It's easy to tell with or without parts of the face showing.\n\nLastly, the machine. As technology increases, a machine called Facial Action Coding System, solved it better than using our proper eyes. Dr. Paul Eckman, who combined his thoughts to create the machine, and Dr. Huang, who helped Dr. Paul Eckman build the machine, helped themselves and others to know the hidden feelings of Mona Lisa and sooner will be used on others. In the article, it talks about how Da vinci made Mona Lisa look different while he was drawing/painting her, \" Yet Dr. Huang observes that the artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions.\" this quote means that Da Vinci was smart enough to switch up on the painting and made it seem so realistic and looked like she's going through a lot.\n\nWhile the readers recieve a lot of information about the technology and how it works, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", was more of a for than against. There's nothing wrong using it while its helping scientist know what's going on inside a person's mind. Not enough of against dosen't mean this article is not helpful, it can still be helpful and especially for those who are for it. Technology is helpful and valuable to many subjects or topics.",
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"content": "The I patient One day mom I went eye doctor It first time going We went lady wait doctor call us We sat minutes band hear doctor calling name We go inside doctors room I sit things Later yells us meet one doctor We sat waited Then hear name go The worst thing I saw medicine table I really scared The lady asked look open eyes wide After took medicine going eyes I scared medicine eyes burned little I didnt want I wanted stand run outside I couldnt eye told keep eyes closed came back When came back done I thought wasnt bad",
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"content": "This article was stating that Venus is Earth's \"twin.\" It is the closest in distance as well. Venus has many things wrong with it before anyone could ever live on it. Venus could be our nearest option for planitary visit. There is Earth like qualities but, it is very dangerious. Scientist still study this world because they know that if they could have a landing that was successful then they could finaly really start to explore the suface.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth. At times we may be closer to Mars do to the speed at wich the planets spin but we are usually closest to Venus. Many spacecraft have been sent to Venus trying to learn more of it but each time that it has been attempted, it has only been able to last a few hours before failing. Venus is a challenging planet to be studied.\n\nVenus has many issues but there is profe that there may have once, long ago, been covered with oceans and had plenty of adaptable life on it. Today there are still some places on Venus that have Earth like features. Land forms that look the way Earth's do. There are valleys, moutains, and craders.\n\nThough it is true that Venus is closest to us and may be the best otpion for visitation one day in the future it still has many problems. The planets surface area is an avaerage of 800 degrees Farenhheit. The atomic pressure is 90 times as much as Earth. At this point in time Venus is enhabital. There must be more reasearch allowed on Venus to find out if anyone could ever step foot on it.\n\nVenus must be researched more to learn as much as possable if it is said that it is the most livable planet. It has many dangers, yes, but that is the vary reason it needs more attention. The more time spent on reasearching Venus the more likley that we will be able to maybe reverse the effect to make it look as it did those any a years ago when it had bodies of water and valleys.",
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"content": "Dear state senator,\n\nEveryone has their own opinion on whether or not you should keep the Electoral College or if you should change the election to popular votes for the president of the United States. My opinion is that you should change the election to the popular votes.\n\nTo begin with, The Electoral College is a process. In the article \"Does the Electoral College work?\" it states that \"the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" The Electoral College process consists of picking the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and the vice president and then the counting of the electoral votes by congress.\n\nNext, The Electoral College has a few things wrong with it. In 2000, Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency to George W. Bush because Bush recieved 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266 electoral votes. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now. When voting you don't even get to vote for the president. You vote for a slate of electors. It would be nice to actually be able to vote for who you want to be president. The Electoral College is unfair, outdated and irrational.\n\nAlso, If you were to change to the popular vote, it would be fair. Everyone would get to put in their opinion on who should be the president of the United States. I think that if everyone was to be able to individually vote for their president, there would be less chaos and arguements about the election and also the new president. But, it is possible that the winner of the electoral vote won't win the national popular vote. But, it is very rare. Some people don't bother voting because of the fact that their vote will have no effect. They have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote.\n\nIn conclusions, I think that changing to the popular vote instead of keeping the Electoral College would be the best thing for the united states. Everyones vote will count, it would be fair, and more people would pay attention to the elections and vote. Like Bob Dole said, \"Abolish the Electoral College!\"\n\nSincerly, a concerned student.",
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"content": "One way we know that is was now created by aliens i that there was no sign of them when we went to Mars.\n\nPlus we know that it is to hot for there to be living creatures.\n\nMost all of us have has known that mars broke away from the sun that is why it is so hot there. Mars is a big hit in movies, books, magazines, and talk raidio shows.\n\nSome of the people that has went to Mars have taken pictured of what looks like faces in the outer layer of the planet.\n\nHow we knew Mars is off of the sun is that it is close to it and it looks identical in almost all the ways possible.\n\nMars is called the red planet cause of its enormous amount of red on it.\n\nwhich leads to say it is from the sun.\n\nPlus it is close to 100+ degrees on the planet plus the heat of the sun doesn't help that at all.\n\nResearcher still wanna way to find out how to make it where people can live on any of the planets.\n\nBut there is one problem there is no oxygen up in space so those up there would die in a matter of seconds.\n\nI think Mars could be a bad planet to keep going on cause there are more things thhat can go wrong up there. They risk lives every time they r up in space.\n\nIf one thing is done incorrect the hole thing fails and then some lives amy be lost.\n\nThat is all i have to say about this topic of Mars.",
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"content": "I completely disagree with the notion that achievements play \"no\" or less role in the success of celebrities and people are influenced by their glamourous and wealthy lifestyles. In the first para,I will be discussing the importance of achievements in their success and in the latter one I will be presenting my arguments about the influence on people of the glamourous world.\n\nFirstly, Filmstars are always discussed in the media for the work they do and the achievements they made. Their achievements always influence people to follow their dreams. Glamour is part of their work as they are supposed to be presentable all the time. But the hard work they do in their projects to make a movie is the only factor which affects their achievement. Nowadays people are wise enough to know whom to follow and on what basis to follow celebrities. To exemplify, recently in this pandemic situation actor Sonu Sood has helped lakhs of migrants to go back to their home and provided them with all the facilities spending lakhs of rupees.Moreover, Actors also come for help in the time of crises to help the people of the nation in every manner.\n\nSecondly, there are a majority of young people who are badly influenced by glamour and wealth. They are the one's who wants to live a lavish life just like celebrities. They don't see how or from where celebrities have raised themselves to live this life. They don't see their struggle and start judging them only seeing their appearances on the media. Youth needs to be more intelligent while deciding whom to follow and whom to not. To exemplify, Amitabh Bachan is a veteran actor from whose life youth can learn a lot but if they'll start the following somebody like Ananya Pandey than only glamour they can see and not talent. Accordingly, make a wise choice in selecting your role models.\n\nTo conclude, I would say instead of judging celebrities by seeing, one must read more about them, about their academic qualifications, their involvement with the society, only then one can make the wisest choice and have a role model to follow.",
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"content": "Every car is a good car as long as you keep your car updated and fixed up and dont let everybody in your car or drive it cause thats how you car get messed up, you have to dodge the pot holes to. Long as you know how to drive a car it shouldnt matter cause if you can really drive you would know hot to function cars alot. The article think that google cars are not good cause alot of people not aware of driving google cars. But it dont matter what car you drive along as you know how to dodge cars and watch the other cars and be real carefully and never drive without you licsence. So i think that people shoud choose they cars wisely so they can know whats going on and not have a accident cause they dont no how to drive the car they in. Always be safe.",
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"content": "Public opinion is divided over the effective way of being updated on world news. While some people tend to be informed of news by conventional papers, others prefer alternative media platforms. I personally lean towards the latter view.\r\n\r\nNewspapers are known as the best way to get news for several reasons. A key reason could be that, papers are one of the most reliable media with a long history behind them. In newspaper offices, news are under supervision of specialists and educated staff. More precisely, the editors check the authenticity of the news before publication and make sure that it is not a rumor. In addition, the elderly are usually not interested in using smart devices to obtain news owing some physical problems or complications in using these devices. For example, my mother can’t easily touch her smartphone screen because she has lost her fingerprints due to doing host of housework\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, with the advancement of technology, other media outlets have become more influential in informing about news. To begin with, Individuals can easily access many online news websites anytime and anywhere and perform multiple activities simultaneously. For instance, I usually listen to podcasts or news on YouTube while I am painting. Moreover, some people believe that the modern ways of receiving news are more sustainable than using newspapers. By getting news through mass media or social media, there is no need to cut off trees to make papers and also no additional waste is produced.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are some convincing arguments in favor of using newspapers to be informed of news, from my perspective, other media platforms are more beneficial.",
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"content": "The author is giving facts about Venus, Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,\n\nmaking it simple for evem an amaetur stargazors to spot. The author thinks studying Venus is good. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus is sometimes right aroumd the corner- in space terms- humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud- draped world. Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, tempertures averange over 800 degrees Faherenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expierience on our own planet.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on it's surface. Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nWhat i kearned is that venus is a dangerous planet and nobody can go there because they will die. People tried to go to Venus but they couldn't go.",
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