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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "a time in the futur where no one needs to buy cars because there will be a fleet of driverless cars is not a safe futur. In paragraph nine the article says \"most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" Making a driverless car removes the alert driver wright out of the eqation. And a car without an alert driver isnt a safe car, at least not in law makers eyes.\n\nIn states like California, Nevada, Florida, and the district of columbia it is illegal to test computer driven cars. The rest of america should follow suit though the article says, \" manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\" For the time being there not safe enough. though there are constant development being made to the driverless car. There are still to many hole in the ideal to make a safe apperance on the road.\n\none of the advancements is that the cars have \"Traffic Jam Asstancet.\" the article say they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" If the driverless car cant handle a workzone or accident. Then it diffinitly can't handle roads with wondering children and dogs.\n\ndrivers get distracted while driving there self driven cars. they couldn't handle a driverless one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author various moods In paragraph In I born simple house situated twofamily young parents created traditional cuban home The mood nuetral kind happy author talking house In paragraph They Struggled personally financially braving harsh northern winters yearning native tropics facing cultural hardships This mood author talking parents hardships Also paragraph I always grateful parents love sacrifice This also shows mood happy author grateful These various moods author memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should NASA Go to Venus?\n\nOur Solar System, Earth, Space. Many astronomers want to get more information on our Solar System and the planets on it. For example, Venus. NASA should not make ann exploration to study on Venus because of the risks and the affects it could have on humans.\n\nIn the article,\"The Challenge of exploring Venus\", it states the interest NASA has on Earth's \"twin\" Venus. However many of the condtions on Venus are very different from our home, Earth: Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in our sola system,\" (Paragraph 3). With hot conditons many risks can arise.\n\nWell, What about Humans? As in the last Paragraph Venus' condtions are not very safe. NASA knows the risks that could play out, but they believe it can work: ''NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scienetists to float about the fray,\"(Paragraph 5). With the right technology, the risk of Venus's hot and rocky could be elminated, with a few \"minor\" problems.\n\nWith NASA's possible \"sollution\" to explore Venus, it would eliminate some problems but the overall condtions would make it hard for humans. This is seen in Paragraph 3,\"Tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\". Even with NASA's sollution,the heat and the enviorment would not prevent that much harm with this sollution.\n\nSome people might say that even with the condtions being risky, it is still survivable: \"Not easy condtions, but survivable,\"(Paragraph 5). However Venus's weather and condtions can be very unpredictable. It would put peoples lives in danger not knowing what to predict. If NASA does have a sollution will it be able to be ready for unpredictable weather and conditions:\" additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface,\"(Paragraph 3).\n\nHowever some people might add that there are conditions on Venus that humans could survive, like solar power and less radation,(Paragraph 5). These things would be somewhat \"okay\" condtions for humans, with NASA's sollution in place.\n\nBut overall a trip to Venus would cause many risks and problems due to the conditions and affects they would have on humans. Therefore, sciencetists should not study Venus with the dangers present.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a technology that is fantasized on television and prompts continuous research and development to turn this fictitious utility into reality.\n\nThe autonomous cars drive maneuver themselves without human guidance to the desired destination of the passengers thus relieving consumer participation.\n\nTechnology being currently developed is not far from this reality as the autonomous cars of Google have independently \"driven more than half a million miles without a crash\" since 2009.\n\nThough the cars are autonomous they are only compatible in specific controlled environments and traffic situations as the user has to regain control while navigation through roadwork or accidents and pulling in and out parking.\n\nThe smart technology is ideal but the inadequate advancement of the technology prohibits it from being compatible with the ever changing and complex nature of driving on public roads in modern society.\n\nThe current technology only allows the vehicles to operate on organized roads in specific conditions but this is not allows the case.\n\nDriving conditions always change as changes in weather and the condition of the car itself change.\n\nThe threat of dangerous driving from other drivers is always present especially if they are impaired.\n\nThis is assuming that not all vehicles on the road are autonomous but even if there were a transition from analogous technology driving into autonomous driving the transitional cost would be a large factor.\n\nAnother factor is the training required to adequately maintain and operate an autonomous vehicle as the vehicle is conditioned with \"position-estimating sensors, a rotating sensor on the video , four automotive radar sensors\" and so much more.\n\nTechnology is not infallible and as such drivers would need to be trained in situations where the vehicles technology fails or not suited for.\n\nThe legality of the vehicle is another concern as the use of autonomous vehicles is not legal and \"in most states it is illegal to even test computer driven cars\".\n\nThe pubic and legislative view of autonomous cars would need to drastically change before the public application of these vehicles.\n\nFurther the liability of the accidents would need to be discussed of whether the driver or the manufacturer is at fault.\n\nThese factors play a role into the practical application of autonomous vehicles.\n\nThe application is ideal but the timing of aplying it is uncertain.\n\nRegardless as the safety and intelligence of the technology improves it will become more appealing to drivers and the technology would reduce energy consumption.\n\nThe technology would improve road organization and drive a path to the future of transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly yhe right everyone else And books left shelf us states Katherine Paterson Books movies world censored removed libraries day day due explicit content I believe books movies magazines removed shelf genuine purpose Explicit objects censored human judgement children s parents right exclude material child s life material useful life someone learn Children everywhere influenced books magazines movies even songs Some people argue harmful materials affecting kids behave act I however believe child superb morals values know right wrong For example child happens see pornography magazine lingering shelf local grocerey store know matter temping buying pornography magazine would wrong From birth parents constantly teaching children right wrong They attempt teach children basics drugs alcohol smoking corrupt health nt matter child sees someone drugs movie hears song teenager getting drunk They influenced using logic infer read listened nt always right thing Everyday children s parents right exclude harmful material child s life After superior figure child s life child always look lead way At local theaters seventeen see rated CAPS movie A lot theaters allow child view rated CAPS movie matter age long parent gardian present Movie theaters feel child s parent would help immensly parent choosing child watch particular movie instead child viewing movie without permission If parent nt want child view raunchy movie simple say NO simple If parent feels movie decent child watch go ahead let watch material Parental agreement always main factor determined whether child could view particular movie read certain provacative book If offensive books movies removed shelf would living structured world one would learn already knew Life possibly become rather boring Although people find books songs offensive others contribute materials A child pick book start reading discover disturbing thoughts never would encountered beyond picking book They would never learned things Reading information like creates move advanced society Adults children becoming smarter day Any parent would agree would love opprotunity arise children become smarter wiser already Songs movies books magazines could provide child Reading escape jungle wild monkies children They use book get away struggles everyday life get lost within lively pages If books censored thrown equates less books child could opprotunity discover I read even classes world allowing students read The The teachers find book inappropriate students This unfair student novel inspiring life changing definitely missing Also movies songs provided one s pure entertainment nt always matter crude A child young adult learn things never thought imaginable provided public materials In conclusion books magaizines movies music one s individual way expressing themself They censored human judgement parents right exclude offensive material child s life material matter crude used learning tool If material removed local libraries almost like authors punished unique Our children wo nt exposed much therefore wo nt learn grow Do really want society prohibit intelectual thinking think certain material offensive Think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a technology of the future. If perfected, driverless cars can solve many of the problems caused by drivers today. Driverless cars will also benefit the environment due to the little gas they consume. Finally driverless cars will benefit those who are not in the shape to drive. The technology of driverless cars helps more than it hurts.\n\nFirst of all, there are too many problems when it comes to driving. Some are minor and some are major. When you introduce driverless cars to the road, many of the problems will be easily solved. Some drivers are stupid and aren't very aware of their surroundings while driving. They make lousy mistakes like running into mailboxes, running stop signs, and even crashes. When driverless cars are involved you are less likely to get into an accident. All commutes will be more efficient, and there'll be less accidents out on the road.\n\nWe all know that money plays a major role in everyone's lives. People try to save as much as they can and it will be easier to do that with driverless cars. These new cars will consume less gas, which will allow you to avoid spending all your hard earned money on just traveling. It isn't just money you're saving but also the environment. Using less gas means less fumes that are getting into the atmosphere. Pollution will be less of a problem, allowing us to live healthier lives.\n\nIts ineveitable that people drive their cars even when their not supposed to, when their drunk, tired and even on drugs. When these types of people get behind the wheel, you're not going to expect anything good from it. So driverless cars not only benefit those who aren't in shape to drive, but also those who were first at risk of danger. Less DUIs will be given to wreckless driver, assuring others on the roads more security. No more innocent people will become victims of dangerous driving.\n\nDriverless cars will be the next big innovation of our daily lives. They prevent drivers from making mistakes on the road which lead to bigger problems. Driverless cars also saves the consumer's money by being more fuel efficient, and saving the planet. Finally, driverless cars assure everyone more safety by preventing wreckless from getting behind the wheel. Driverless cars will benefit all of us, allowing us to live safer lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" The reason that 44 nations joined the program was because, when World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins, people around the world had got together from different nations to help these poor people, that got there town destroyed, house/apartments, and also helped the animals get taken care of. In the text it says, \" to help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA ( United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration)\" UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys\".\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys are people to help take care of the horses, young cow, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke had been traveling with food supplies for the aniamals and that people need. On Luke second trip he served as a night watchman, his job was to check the animals every hour. Being a sea going cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke. It opened up the world for him. Luke was glad that he was able to help other people from other countries to help when World War II ended. He was also glad to help take care of these animals so they can still live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph showing hibiscus inspires gives comfort person could try For example Saeng failed drivers test disappointed On way home saw hibiscus went florist shop try buy Saeng took peddle plant held tightly closed eyes The plant reminded real home vietnam loved The hibuscus became form comfort Saeng since failed drivers test even though plant one home By author ending story Saeng saying wait hibiscus starts budding take test shows hibiscus helps overcome obstacles life helps get hardships faces", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship one many important issues facing world today Many argue materials considered offensive damaging society tolerated Others believe freedom speech universal right extend forms human expression The issue complicated concept appropriate children Are materials acceptable adults kids Questions plagued humanity hundreds years simple solution Today many people think censorship bad word In fact nothin inherently wrong concept censorship It people begin abuse power censor materials censored problems arise For example many countries restrictions selling owning copies PERSON book wrote sort mission statement While many ideas contained within book horribly offensive still censored People right read book form opinions teachings government s place decide While oppressive dictatorship massmurder crimes reading There materials available rightfully censored taken adult hands If someone understands reading able form educated opinion material nobody right stop expanding knowledge expressing themself creating similar material However issue changes completely one considers children If adults want view pornography read accounts extreme violence business However concepts obviously inappropriate children decent parent would nt want young kids filling heads things Children need slowly gently introduced concepts fully understand In case children careful censorship necessary healthy development When comes libraries materials banned If libraries meant places learning one right limit information contain However mean limitations Libraries offer children s section many would contain materials appropriate youngsters Then becomes parents responsibilty ensure child stays section When parent believes child ready explore adult section free take kid This system gives parents ability keep children away harmful material without taking hands adults Many would argue unsupervised children could gain access inappropriate material really issue needs handled parents library After s better kids see something nt adults read censored material In conclusion censorship concept place society must used carefully When goal protect people especially children harmful material used sparingly However power use censorship attack ideas disagree becomes form oppression Above else people must free educate form opinions express If someone nt like piece material leave alone never try take someone else s hands", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. It allowed me to visit unique places I would have never visited with the salary I made. This all happened by my friend. The Seagoing Cowboys let me see the world. It was an adventure of a lifetime.\n\nYou should really join the program, because it's like you visited places people usually don't visit on a day-to-day basis. On the ship you can choose to do many jobs. I chose to have a job as a night watchman. The watchmen got to watch over the animals on the boat.\n\nOn the ship you an never get bored, because there are Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games that helped pass time on the ship. I did some of these acitvites myself, I might add. After the animals were unloaded, it was the best time. We\n\nhad a lot of time on our hands. We also got to play some volleyball and baseball games in the homes where the animals had been housed.\n\nNot only do you get to travel the world, but you also get to help countries in need of supplies and other recources. \"We arrived August 14,\" There is this rush of excitement when I helped people get food and supplies for their families and communities. It is one of the best feelings ever known to humankind.\n\nThe UNRRA was hiring \"Seagoing Cowboys\" so Don and I signed up for this opportunity. I would never trade an expirence like this. It may take months to do this job, but it is all worth it. You can create a better world by doing this. I never knew about this untill a friend talked about this to me. His name was Don Reist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seeing all of the positives and negatives of driverless cars, I do not not think driverless cars should be developed. There are some great things provided with driverless cars but I think the negatives over rule the positives of these cars. Therefore, I do not support the development of them.\n\nAs stated in the article the car must be able to know what to do when there is road work or an accident and the cars we have now that are partically driverless are not capitable of such things yet. Even if these cars were programed to know what to do in many different situations, like in road work or accidents, there is always the chance the car is not programed to know what to do in one of these particular situations because it is that common or it is something new.\n\nIn the process of making these cars completely driverless in the meantime the car still needs an attentive person in the driver seat so the car can be taken over when it needs assistance. Which can be very dangerous, considering the driver can fall asleep or not be paying attention. In the article it is brought up how some manufacturers have ideas on how to keep the drivers focused so they are prepared to take over the car when needed. Such as in-car entertaiment or flashing lights. But these features could potentially stop working at any time while it is driving itself and if there is nothing to alert the driver to take over the car this can result in many dangerous accidents. Then it will have to be decided who is responsible for the accident the person or manufacturer? Which brings me to my next point.\n\nIn the article it is mentioned how new laws would need to be created if driverles cars are developed. Which means a lot of time spent making up a bunch of new laws for driving these special car when there are already the well known laws of driving. Meaning these laws must be clearly stated and known, especially with them being new laws. If the laws are not well known then that can cause problems if there is a case where the car malfunctions and there was an accident and the person who owns the cars does not know every new law or may thought they understood the new laws but there is more to it than that person thought. This can create a lot of confusion and problems in these cases. If someone who owns a driverless car lets someone else be the \"driver\" of the car and does not know everything they should then who should be held reliable for any probelms that could occur?\n\nIn conclusion, making driverless cars is not something that should be developed. There are way too many things that could go wrong dealing with the driverless cars. Anywhere from the programing of the car, the person driving the car, to the laws dealing with these special cars. There should not be different sets of laws just because you have a car that must be drove by a human or a driverless car. That creates too much confusion on not only the owner of their particular car but also on law inforcers and courts. There should only be one set of laws for driving that way there is less confusion and commplications. Also, not having a bunch of new laws means there is less pointing fingers to whose fault the situation is, because the people involoved with the situation should know what the already known laws are. So that is why I do not believe the developent of driverless car should happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Come to Seagoing Cowboy Pogram\n\nSeagoing Cowboy Program is the best program anyone could go to in their life.\n\nIf you come to Seagoing Cowboy Program, you wouldn't regret it one bit.\n\nYou will have a once in a lifetime opportunity if you go to Seagoing Cowboy Program.\n\nIn the beginning,\n\nif you have nothing to do, then go to Sagoing Cowboy Program.\n\nIf you go to Seagoing Cowboy Program, it will be a once in a lifetime opportunity and it will be a time you will never forget.\n\nLuke got a chance to go to Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nHe knew he could never pass up a once in a lifetime opportunity, so he went and his whole life changed.\n\nLuke and Don signed up to recover these countries food supplies, animals, and more.\n\n\"UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\"\n\nIf you love helping animals, then this is the right job for you.\n\nLuke and Don had the chance to travel all over the world and go overseas to a different country.\n\n\"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger... it opened up the world to him.\n\nIt made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"\n\nLuke Bomberger and Don Reist could never had done something that is as amazing as the Seagoing Cowboy Program and they will never forget it.\n\n\"In August 1945, they recieved their orders to report to New Orleans.\"\n\nTo sum up my thoughts, you now see that Seagoing Cowboy Program is the best progrmathat anyone could ever go to in their lifetime.\n\nYou wil have a once in a lifetime opportunity if you go Seagoing Cowboy Program.\n\nIf you go to Seagoing Cowboy Program, you wiil have the best time of your life.\n\nGo to Seagoing Cowboy Program in the very near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story great motivation older man still healthy feel like teenager It showed much effort put goal survive Forty miles peddled forty miles drink water cyclist interesting story ginaupup", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the future, specialists predict that most of the work done by humans will be replaced with robots. Having machines replace humans has both positive and negative aspects, we will discuss these in detail.\r\n\r\nThe main advantage of using robots to perform a task is its performance and accuracy. A robot can outdo a human in terms of perfection and quality. For example, the aviation industry has zero-tolerance for errors, and so they prefer automation to manual labour. Another important advantage of employing a robot is increased productivity. A robot never takes a vacation nor it requires a break, they can perform their duty round the clock. To illustrate, manufacturing industries can utilize an industrial robot to perform repetitive tasks. \r\n\r\nAlthough there are positive sides to using robots to perform jobs, there are equally negative sides present for the same. One of the main disadvantages of using robots is their high maintenance cost. For instance, machines tend to wear and tear, run into technical glitches it is often required to maintain and upgrade. Another negative aspect of replacing humans with robots is joblessness. In this age, when the population is growing at a rapid phase the need for a job opportunity is scarce. Adding to the existing job crisis, introducing robots will escalate the joblessness to a new height.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there are positives of using robots to perform work, there is some significant negative impact. Proper care should be taken to strike a balance on how much work can be replaced with robots.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph wants us know shes giving test The author wants inform readers shes giving I take teat again clearly states still hope Author wants continue test find right flower This author concluded story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Some minor obstacles frame strength building Other obstacles major nature controlled In paragraph nine author explains thousandfoot dirigibles moored top Empire State Building would add stress building s frame Also wind pressure building s foundation would affected In order allow dirigibles dock frame building would modified strengthened As nature great affect use mooring mast would almost impossible dirigibles tethered onto building The wind would send dirigibles swiveling around mooring mast author describes paragraph fourteen Other obstacles builders faced dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium landing fields weighed back blimps would lead weight would nt safe dangling pedestrians last problem existing law againts airships flying low urban areas Though builders Empire State building faced obstacles allowing blimps dock still became well known building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time parants weres patient I wouldnt dinner One night dad made chop soey dinner I didnt like chop soey The smell made gag But dad loves chop soey makes time We sat I ate potato dad gave whole scoop chop soey Im gon na it I said I hate chop soey dad sat patiently table waiting plate fine I said I CAPS meat it I took fork stired chop soey around looking meat After I ate meat I said CAPS I done dad laughed stubbornness CAPS vegetables it dad said CAPS I hate celery I whinned After half hour war wills dad I wanted leave table patient I ended eating chop soey leaving table That dad patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advances in technology and transportation have made globalization much easier, accordingly multinational corporations have become considerably more widespread all over the word and as a result, it is more common to be an expect than it was in the past, some people believe that the children of those families could benefit from the experience of living in foreign countries, while others oppose this idea. I, for one, consider myself to be one of the advocates of the second opinion. In the hereunder paragraph more details, with more insight of both opinions, shall be indicated.\n\nLiving in a foreign country would be a great opportunity to learn about a new language, as well as being exposed to a different culture, such experience would help in widening the spectrum of any individual, regardless of age, thus children will be enriched by being those different experiences, becoming more open minded, making it easier to accept people from different backgrounds with different habits and customs, moreover learning a new language should enable youngsters to be more quick learners, studies show that learning more than one language at a young age could aid them in acquiring other subjects that are not related to their linguistic abilities, such as mathematics and science.\n\nOn the other hand some other opnions, such as mine, are disagreeing with this idea, since raising younger generations in foreign country could adhere them from learning their native language, because most countries only teach their local language at school, especially in elementary levels, unless one of their parents is able to dedicate part of his or hers time to teach the child the language of his parents country, but this is not always achievable, because usually parents who live outside their homeland are less likely to have enough time for this responsibility or they might not be even have enough knowledge to teach their mother tongue efficiently, in addition the child would unfortunately would have less opportunities to practice his native language, as a cause for living in a community that do not use this language. Also the youngsters might be detached from their local culture, as a result of not having any hands on experience with it.\n\nTo conclude, I restate my opinion that children raised in foreign countries might suffer greatly from living abroad, to mitigate those negative effect their parents should encourage them to learn their native language, whether by themselves or by the aid of centres that could help them in learn their homeland language and they could minimize the cultural gap by strengthening their ties with other citizens of the same nationality that share similar background, in order to be accustomed to their native roots.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, by technological progress, the amount of research which conducted by scientists or postgraduate students has increased. In these kind of situations, some individuals believe that the amount of money which is dedicated to professional research is limited, and by notice to this issue, it is better that the financial advocation cover scientific research instead  of less valuable one.\n\nThere is common belief that scientific research has more definite benefits for society, such as medical advancement, technological progress, and environmental solutions. By concentrating on scientific research, governments can ensure that limited funding is allocated to endeavors that have merit and positive impact on the world.\n\nFurthermore, investigating on scientific research can contribute to economic growth. On their opinion, this kind of research not only could be beneficial for society but also could be helpful for economic growth. For example, governments can share this research during international collaboration and receive funds or get help from other scientists on other parts of the world.\n\nOn the other hand, some individuals think less common issues such as history, literature, and art could be beneficial too, because they not only foster a sense of belonging and patriotism among people from all walks of life, but broaden horizons.\n\nIn conclusion, I suppose there are more elements that show the significant importance of scientific research such as positive influence on the world and economic growth. While we shouldn't neglect this issue that less common research also are essential for our children's futures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some have opinion that government must give importance on economic growth whereas other people think that it should give attention towards the social condition, equality, and environment. This essay will first discuss how economic development will improve the progress of nation and secondly why the government should show interest on poor condition of social and environment.\r\nOn one hand, financial sector development plays a vital role in growth of country. An increase in economy, it leads the administration to reduce poverty in the nation by developing job opportunities and also funding for school, hospital and on infrastructure. For example, people being educated results in well-paid job which improves their lifestyle.\r\nOn the other hand, the authorities also need to put effort on developing low situation of society and surroundings rather than focusing only on economy growth. The government should consider the area of social justice, equality, and also on the environment. Further, in the country, people should have equal rights, if not it leads to more injustice in the society. Therefore, the government should introduce stricter laws to overcome these poor conditions. For example, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection in the development of state. Additionally, on protecting the nature, pollution is reduced and future generation will get a green environment.\r\nTo sum up, the administration has to assure on the economic growth for the development of the country but also should give equal importance to the social condition, human rights and on environment to maintain peace in the country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think patience like somebody someone waiting someone get bathroom person go bathroom Like I patience I want go store said wait patience My whole family patience friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Freshmen year season I eight years I made varsity school first year high school Being freshmen varsity squad everybody knew I The short kid varsity squad eighth grader I junior state wrestled way brackets without full match Meaning I pinned everyone first round I could nt touched Going high school I knew I would nt easy time like grade school I completely right My coach funniest person I ever met life teacher since grade role model way life He made funniest jokes wrestlers team A lot people disliked got along great I ended season freshmen year wins pins losses I still day nt pinned Which got wrestler year awarded coach When season rolled around regionals I knew I shot go state There six guys weight class four six I previously beaten early season I worry match ahead wrestle mistake free At pound weight class bunch little kids I definitely experienced weight class I got seated first seed The second seed He dropped weight could try take seating state My first match I wrestled The match shortlived I pinned seconds After match I walked coach told quote I never forget CAPS lonely top view excellent quote stuck head throughout next matches I second third matches semifinals I one round away going state automatically I wrestled weighed lbs I knew good wrestler even though I pounds I getting ready wrestle I seen warming across gym jumping around getting warmed I see trip fall face My coach seen thing started making fun funniest thing I ever witnessed I wrestled match pinned double overtime go state My coach walks says CAPS took long pin someone ca nt even warm without falling face three teeth total mouth He lost lot different ways He adventure man He loved white water rafting loved sport When I moved I far away idolized coach still hit facebook chitchat To day still funniest man I know still idol", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge OF Exploring Venus\"\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon doixide blankets Venus. On the planets surface tempratures average over 800 degree fahrenheit, and the\n\natmosphere presure is 90 times greater than what we exsperience on out own planet. the presurte will crush a custom diving submarine and will melt most metals into liquad. Venus has the hottest surface temprature then any other planet in out solar system but murcury is the closest to the sun and is beyond high temprature and presure.\n\nVenus was once known to be the polantet closes to earth becuase they say there was water on venus many years ago and they think there might have been somesort of life form. Earth and venus was once known as the twins because they are simular in desity and size thje changes in speed means somethimes we are closer to mars and sometimes we are closer to Venus.\n\nVenus is the second planet from our son. Venus is the closes to earth in distasce to. Humans have sent various spacecrafts to land onn Venus but unhumand becaus ethe spacecraft onlky lasts for little more than a few hours (NASA) is still trying to study venus to this day. Astronomers Know Venus is uninhabitle but they are still trying to study venus and find the planet vasinating NASA is still working on other methods on trying to study venus. MEeting the challenges that venus has", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a revolutionary change on the automotive world. Driverless cars a good thing, because it consumes less fuel and it can go on for longer distances. The idea of driverless cars are good for the enviroment, the humans, and the future. Driverless cars are good, because it helps reduce the amount of pollution release, the amount of accidents, and it makes it easy to learn.\n\nDriverless cars consume half the fuel than today's cars, making it safe for the enviroment and the people around it. with driverless cars people can pay less for fuel , raising the economy. \" the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus.\"\n\nDriverless cars uses lasers beams. dubbed LIDAR, to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. Driverless cars have the technology to drive by itself except on construction roads and alternate routes. It has four automotive radar sensors, alerting the driver of park cars behind him/her. This technology can help prevent accidents caused by cars.\n\nAlthough driverless cars are not a fully, safe, developed invention, google stimates that by 2020, everybody can have a fully operational driverless car. Driverless cars can help with the enviroments, can make humans safer on the roads and it can reduce amount of pollution left by today's cars and taxis. I think\n\nthat these invention can help not only the humas, but also the economy of the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a great idea because they will drive without needing human skills most of the time. People will be able to do other things while the car is moving but they will have to pay attention to their surroundings. Driverless cars will still need human skills in order to navigate through work zones and around accidents. Since driverless cars will require human skills, the driver must be alert at all times. So wouldn't people get bored just by staring out the window and waiting for their turn to drive?\n\nI support driverless cars because the cars would be driving themselves and the drivers will be able to check their surroundings and do other things. Today, many people are dying or getting injured badly in car accidents because they are driving recklessly. People are doing things such as texting and driving, speeding, and much more. Drivers who like to text and drive will be able to do that more in driveress cars because they will drive themselves and once it is time for the driver to take control, they will notify them. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. Manufacturers plan on bringing in-car entertainment and they will be instantly turned off when the driver has to take over. The in-car system is a safety feature and safety is a big concern out on the road.\n\nWhile driverless cars seem to be more safe than regular cars, traffic laws seem to disagree. Traffic laws say that the only safe cars have a human driver in control at all times. Testing computer driven cars is illegal in most states due to this. If traffic laws change, then new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. Driverless cars still have a long way to prove that they are reliable and consistent. It could possibly fail and someone could get killed or severely injured. Then it would cause problems between the driver and the manufacturer. People could sue the company if problems were to occur.\n\nAutomakers are working on making sure that the driverless cars are one hundred percent safe. They are making sure that all the problems are solved. Some companies are planning on releasing cars that will be able to drive themselves in 2016 and 2020. Driverless cars sounds like a great idea and there have been some issues about them. Due to the issues, it's best if we test them and make sure they guarantee safety. Right now, it is best to wait and drive safely in our regular cars. Each day, we are getting closer to the day when driverless cars are first available for sale.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Few people thinks that working in community in thier free time would be beneficial for teenagers and should be unpaid as they are doing the social work. There are some merits and demerits, but I think there are more disadvantages compare to advantages.\r\n\r\nOn the one side, there are few advantages for the teenagers like get a chance to understand about different cultures, getting the recognization from the community. From the community side hiring the volunteers will help them to save the money. For instance, 6 school boys from Tilak school were given a opportunity to help the blind people whenever they get a free time they can go to blind school. If they help the blind people, school will provide the certificates to the boys. Because of this initiative, blind school got benefited from those boys. \r\n\r\nOn the other side, from teenagers perspective, getting unpaid for community work would be demotivating. Moreever, they will work for less hours which will not help either of the communities or the teenagers. One of the recent example, I saw was the students from the Little flower school, where they had given a task by the school to clean the road twice a week. The main idea for this was the teenagers were getting lots of free time and they could spend a few time would help the near by people and the school. But the teenagers ere not happy because school didn't provide any stripend nor prize. Teenagers weren't coming for the work and hence this decision was taken backed by the school.\r\n\r\nAt the end, if any sort of prize or stripen is provided to the teenagers it will give them motivation to do work and it might be beneficial for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I got braces I nervous hard patient I waited waiting soon fifteen minutes assistant called first told going second took xray teeth third put metal bonds really strong glue back teeth fourth put brackets really strong glue Then assistant put wire brackets metal hands finally asked color I wanted put I free go The whole process took two hours I sit dental chair long I lot patience hard I That time I patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will be taking about the Unmasking the Face on\n\nMars. I believe that the aliens did not find the face on mars. I say people found it on mars.\n\nMars is now Famous for the face.\n\nThe face was on mars. The face was a pop Icon. The evidence I have that it says that it was in Movies books Haunted grocery store. Thatfor I know it is a pop Icon. To Mars because nothing ever has been found on Mars because it is super hot to do anything on it and ut is made out of sand. So that for I know the face was there before the aliens found it. The Face was on mars because the title of the article is Unmasking the Face on Mars. If you read the Article you would now that. The face is important to Mars and to the scientist Becaus e this is the fist thing found on Mars. The Face will Stay on Mars as long as it does not get damaged some how or disform\n\nI conclued that the face will be there forever and ever. The Aliens did not fine the face. I am so mad that the you think that the aliens found the face but they did not The scientist found it so think again because if the Aliens did found out that they did find it then we should say sorry to the Aliens for thinking that we found it. I say That we should discuss with our own sicentist to find out who found the face on mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When Al Smith wanted make dock Empire State Building wasnt really thinking straight That horrible idea Passengers would risk lifes going dirigibles He probably wasnt thinking safety things going looks The obstacles would encounter words death idiots would go weather The weather huge factor windy could dirigibles go course crash The make landing pad would crazy would buy floats make landing station wasnt smart guy letting dirigibles landing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should be a Seagoing Cowboy because\n\nit is a good program to do. If you like farm animals, and taking care of them. Then you will really like this job. Be careful not to get hurt. Make sure you take good care of the animals.\n\nThe program is fun you get to travel around the world. This job is a one in a life time chance and I like every one will enjoy this job. A lot of people that like those things would be good or great at being a Seagoing Cowboy. I know I enjoy it, so I think you will like it to. You will have lots of fun.\n\nIf you are a farmer or you help take care of farm animals then this would be an easiy and fun job for you. If you do it or ever do the job you should encaurage other friends and family to do Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nBe careful and do not get hurt. I smashed my ribbs during a storm, and about went over board. It was scarie and I was glad to still be alive. When storms come make sure you stay in a safe place. I think if you do this job you should always be careful not to slip or trip over anything in the way while feeding the animals.\n\nTake good care of all the animals aboard the ship. Feed and water them all two or three times a day. When you feed them make sure they have a hay and oats or grain.\n\nYou will mostly have younger cows and mules on the ship but you will have other animals to. Their will be a few horses because they are going to the World War II and the UNRRA.\n\nThese are the reason why I think you should be a Seagoing Cowboy. This is a one in a life time chance and I know you will like it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe the state should finance social services like retirement pensions for adults instead of spending its budget on public services like agent needs while others say individuals should save their funds during their working years. This essay will delve into the upcoming paragraph and subsequently will explore perspective in turns.\n\nOn the one hand, I believe the state should definitely allocate a large part of its budget to public services. The economic sector determines the overall quality of life, ensuring the basic sector such as schools, hospitals and roads are available to all the citizens irrespective of their income and social status. Public services are the primary needs of society and thus need proper funding. \n\nFor example, the absence of medicine in any country will create significant problems. That's why the authority should adequately finance public services in the first place. Becoming old is a normal thing for everyone however younger citizens participate an important role in the country's economic growth.\n\nOn the other hand, retired adults are a vital part of every family. Who encourage their close ones  as well as provide their experiences. I think adults must save their funds during their working years. However old people also are an integrated part of society. Some ancient could save their money but most of the old society could not save money because of high expenses. I think the regime should provide free medicines and treatments for low-income citizens.\n\nFor instance, Sri Lanka provides free hospital   treatments for people.\n\nIn conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, I believe the ministry should allocate its budget for argent needs.\n\nHowever old population are also a crucial unit of society. I think the government should implement a long-term concept for this problem thus if not it becomes a huge impact on their life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever feel like you should join a Seagoing Cowboys program? You should join the program because it helps the world, saves people and animals, and it good if you do join. That is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program and that you are helping many peoples lives and saving people to not run away and fight back.\n\nFirst, it helps the world by in 1945 World War II, was being taken over by Europe and Europe made so many countries leave the ruins and it was just not right for people to move out of their countries. So 44 nations formed a group called the,\" UNRRA which meant (the United Nations Relief and Rehailitation Adminstration.) So I think it would help if more people joined and you could beat the Europe people who wanted to fight.\n\nThen, save the people and animals by UNRRA had hired the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the young cows, horses, and mules that had been shiped overseas. That is when Luke and Don had signed up. So after they had signed up in August 1945, they had got a orders to report to New Orleans. When Luke and Don arrived on August 14 Luke had said,\" The day the Pacific war ended.\" Everyone got their seaman's papers and boarded that had SS Charles W. Wooster, headed to Greece with a cargo of horses and enough hay to eat So I think that if more people sign up more animals and people will be saved.\n\nLast, good for you to join Seagoing Cowboys program its good by saving peoples lives and animals lives and by keeping the countries save so people can be happy if you join. And that if you join you can be rewarded will a big surprise in the end of the war that is going on. So now I think that you should always think before youself and join.\n\nIn conclusion, you should always join to be happy for what you did and joining would help the Seagoing Cowboys program. So for last try to do something new and it will really pay off if you try new things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this technology might be helpful for students, but it could also be a bad thing. It could be good for students becase it would show how they really feel about the work so the teacher would know that their confused, bored, or angry. In the paragraph 3 it talks about what it is capible of in facial recognizion and how it could chage a lesson to better suit a student just by their facial expression. I also believe it could be a bad thing. For example would you like someone to know what you're thinking just by your exepression. Lets say your're talking to a friend of yours and they ask you what you think about their favorite song and you know its their favorite song, but you really don't like it all and you dont want to maybe hurt their feelings by saying what you really think, so you might say \" it's ok\" or \"not my style\". Now think if this technology was out there that you might not be able to do that, and you might not be able to hide how you really feel. That is why I think this technology could be a good thing and a bad thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While constructing Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock To begin dangers allowing dirigibles made outside United States May nonAmerican dirigibles made hydrogen much flammable compared United States helium balloons To avoid repeat explosion dirigible Lsted states owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place above Downtown New York winds top building wild attach dirigible safely top The author clarifies Even dirigibles thethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around back could weighted lead weights using neither practical safe This shows order ship still enough able moor dangerous Lastly law passed making impossible fly close enough building able moor Marcia Amidon Lsted says An existing law airships flying low urban areas This makes possibility landing dirigibles Empire State Building illegal", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to some people, today’s music can create bad infuclence on youngster and on the other side, it could bring the positivity amoung them. This essay will explain the both sides. \r\n\r\nMusic is a power a one can have to express their feeling and it can infulence people’s mind. If the words are positive it will bring good energy between people. As example, when people listen to religious music, it help them to keep their mind clam and stable. According to survey happened in a local newspaper, people usually listen to good music in a morning to have a good day as well for good mood for the whole day. Some people even analysize that music help them to focus more into their work. Therefore, mostly in the malls and stores people play good music to keep everyone’s mood good and for positivity as well. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, music has some bad impact on people as kids these days learn all the foul words from music which is not good for their upbrining. Young people follow their favourite artist bad habits as well such as somking and driniking in music vidoes. Music also become a resaon to have fight amoung people. For example, a music lauched by a indian singer last year on the religious matter became the ground of fight amoung different religious people.\r\n\r\nIn the conclusion, music is a power to infulence all the people in the world therefore usage of right words and music can a create big difference in the socitey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are creating an harmful environment with problems such as smog and traffic. Reduction on car usage can help these problems. Although cars may be a faster transportation, they add on to the havoc of the environment. Reducing car usage has many advantages. It would help develop a better environment and improve people's well being.\n\nAn advantage of reduction of car usage is it helps develop a better environment to live in. Some areas which have cars create a lot of smog which is unhealthy for the environment. For example, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog\" (Duffer). Smog is formed by cold nights and warm days which causes the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Without so many cars, this issue can decrease. It will help the environment progress and be safer for everyone. Statistics show that \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (Rosenthal). Cars are causing air pollution. If cars are still the dominant transportation, the environment will still suffer from air pollution such as smog. It's safer to use a large vehicle such as a bus to get around because a bus can hold many more people than a car and would ultimately give off less gas than the population of people who use cars.  Another safe way around town would be vehicles which don't give off gases into the air such as bicycles. A safer environment is a better environment.\n\nAnother advantage of reduction of cars is improvement of people's well being. With air pollution from cars, humans inhale toxic gases which can be detrimental to their bodies. If car usage plunders, people's bodies will feel better. A businessman said \"It's good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" (Plaza). Lowering the number of cars being used helps relieve stress. Nobody wants to be stressed out from traffic or being late to work. With cars there is always a place where there is traffic. Ultimately, reduction of car usage has numerous effects that benefit the society. A media trainer and mother of two stated, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (Walter). Without a car, you don't have to worry about being severely injured since most of the population would transfer to the use of bikes or walking. Because the population would start a trend of riding bikes and walking, most of the roadways would now be unecessary to have and they could be built into something fundamental such as a park, a housing area, or a food market. There would be less worries altogether and this could be more beneficial to the society.\n\nThere are many positive effects from reducing car usage. Environment will progress and people's well being will improve. It's beneficial for everyone to limit the use of cars and find other transportation. There would be a safer environment from less smog and rush-hour restrictions. Also, the environment will be people-friendly from more parks and sports centers. Limiting car usage effects society positively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is not something that I would want in the future. When u think about it in some cases it could be very useful , maybe for someone who is handicap or for people who aren't good with driving. I think since the driverless car is basically a computer system regulating everything there's more of a chance for an acident then it would be if a person drives instead. If theres a car that swerves in front of you to get in a different lane and the driverless car doesnt stop in time theres going to be a bad accident. But if a person is driving theres a better chance of avoiding that conflict because they can brake faster or move over because their alert of whats going on around them 24/7. Driverless cars is not teaching you anything either because it's doing everything for you i think that the driverless cars can be dangerous. The driverless car is something that i dont think should be envinted because it doesnt seem safe and its not really benefical.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think the driverless car would be a good thing; however, other people like me, would disagree. It would be hard to concentrate just on the road, especially if you are not even actually driving. There is a good chance that with all the notifications from the car, that you would be able to get control of the driving in time, but there is still a chance that you would not make it as quick, and could lead to a bad accident. Also with the accidents, if you hurt yourself or another person, the blame would still be put on the person in the drivers seat and not the car. The driverless cars are too risky and dangerous, and just are not a good idea.\n\nIt is hard enough to keep your eyes and concentration on the road while you are driving, so why would it be easier if you were not driving, and had nothing else to do accept sit there and wait until a device in the car alerts you to do something? It makes no sense at all. Many people easily get caught off guard by things in the vehicle anyways, and having them sit there with nothing to do just makes it riskier. Some people may have quick reflexes, and can react fast to a sensor or other alert in the vehicle, and gain control of it before an accident occurs. However, that is only some people and not everyone. People can never be completely sure that they could react quick enough to stop an accident in any vehicle, but they have a better chance if they already had control, and did not have to regain it. Accidents happen all the time, and the blame always goes to the driver of either one or both vehicles. So even if you are driving a driverless car, and you get in an accident, it will stillbe your fault because you should have got control of it. Nobody can blame just a car for the accident, because the one in the drivers seat was still basically in control.\n\nDriverless cars are a bad idea and should not be put on the roads until they are made better and safer. Right now they are too dangerous and have too many risk factors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays there is a growing concern over the substitution of humans for machines. A great number of positive and negative aspects of this revolution are being discussed by experts. I believe that the disadvantages clashes with the advantages. I will discuss some of these incentives and drawbacks in this essay.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, machines have undoubtedly brought us a lot of benefits. First, the arduous occupations which are not only dangerous for employees but also implausible are being done by vehicles now. Secondly, it has resulted in manufacturing products in huge amounts with faster and better outcomes. For example, it takes about a year for a human to weave a carpet by hand while machines are producing hundreds of carpets with various designs in a day. lastly, a portion of expenses of products is being paid to the staffs which can be omitted and result in cheaper products.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, although there are definitely some benefits with machinery product, it has brought us a lot of problems. For years artificial intelligence had been viewed as a safe substitute for mankind but recently people are taking a fresh look at it after mistakes that have been made by it. For instance, surgeon robots were expected to provide better surgery on patients; on the contrary, they have resulted in many deaths. In addition, watching machines doing our chores might be preferable to doing them by ourselves but it suffers from disadvantages that put a lot of people at risk of unemployment. Moreover, laziness will ensue.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, designing vehicles to do the human's responsibilities concludes to a faster job with less effort and expenses. I am not completely in agreement with the above-said view because more defects, unemployment, and inactivity are inevitable drawbacks that should be taken into account.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do Not Exceed Posted Speed setting used alter cyclists mood reflection situation For example statement the cool pines rushing river Yosemite name written them helps describe cyclist situation The idea lush cool water vegetation gives hope increasinlgly hellish trip The beauty setting also reflects comfort would come reaching Yosemite good setting equal good come Later cyclist comes across one ramshackle shed several rusts pump corral couldnt hold lamest make This depressing setting symbolizing complete loss hope And inteact point cyclist becomes troubles situation While pedaling desert cyclist becomes even factory tumble seed always symbol deserted area cones The nile setting affect mirror mood nothing new There many examples literary technique throughout history For example story The deslated land filled wild beast symbolize cause change personalith surrounded uncivilized people creating tears clothes hunt like dog The setting desert uncultured Part colonial simultaneously cause reflects change The setting essay Do Not Exceed posted Speed Limit used important character development", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System is a new technology that could be a great chage in the future. The use of the new technology to read the emotional expressions of studdents in a classroom could be very helpful. When the computer recognizes when a student is confused or bored, it can help the teacher pay more attention to a specific part of their teaching and help the student understand. This new technology would help students suceed in school, make it easier to detect how a person is really feeling, and it would let the world see the real emotions behind many paintings.\n\nThe new technology of emotions called the Facial Action Coding System, would allow students to get help in school. Many kids are scared to ask for help on something they're learning in class. The author states in paragraph 6,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" When a student is becoming confused or bored it usually means they don't understand what is happening. Once a student stops asking for help, because they never really understand, it becomes a repetitive action. These students try to hide their emotions during a class and the teachers don't ever realize. This new computer makes it so much easier for them. It helps modify the lessons they're learning and really understand it. It would help students not only learn the information better but it could also help them detect how their friends are feeling.\n\nIn the world there are many of our friends, family, or even strangers on the street that we can see their emotions by their facial expressions. We always think someone feels a certain way but we are never sure of it. Many people replace a real smile with a fake one and hope nobody notices. In paragraph 5, the author states \" you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" There are dozens of people who rarely show their emotions, so it may be really hard to see how they feel. With this new technology it wouldn't need to be hard because, the new system does it for you. The new system can help many people in the world truely know how their friends, family, or even strangers on the street feel.\n\nMany people go places and see artwork all around, many of them could be portraits. The author first starts the article talking about the Mona Lisa portrait designed by Leonardo Da Vinci. In the first paragraph the author states \" she's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" Now, many people may look at the Mona Lisa portrait and just see a woman with a smirk, but it is way more than that. Leonardo Da Vinci had his own way of portraing her emotions and althought it can't be seen by the naked eye, the new system can see it. The new system allows people to connect with the masterpieces that the artist have created. Every picture is worth a thousand words and even more so, a thousand emotions. With the new software, it is able to detect the exact emotions of the paintings and it could help expressing them to the people who go and see them.\n\nThe world has many changes every single day, some may be good or bad but the new system Facial Action Coding System could be life-changing. There would be many people using it to detect either how they feel or how someone else feels. It would help students suceed in school, make it easier to detect how a person is really feeling, and it would let the world see the real emotions behind many paintings. The Facial Action Coding System could change the future in a good way and it would help many of us know how many emotions someone is really feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that education plays an imperative role in shaping pupils’ manners as good persons and developing their competencies for their careers, instead of offering benefits for each pupils’ happiness. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement. This essay will provide what I believe.\r\n\r\nAlthough schooling is equal to the certificate, it is not necessarily related to how successful their lives will be. Some successful celebrities did not graduate from the traditional education system. Take Steve Jobs as a sample. He had the biggest business model, Apple, because he knew how to utilize his knowledge as well as his creativity at the optimal moment. Also, he was renewed because of his persistence in learning habits, reading, and self-regulation, which he learned at school rather than his degree. Therefore, students benefit from schools not only by being loyal citizens and qualified staff in our society but also in their personal successful life experiences later.\r\n\r\nMoreover, students should adapt to living in this society with their peers at school, such as how to survive in daily life and how to socialize with classmates. Otherwise, they can be self-educated at home rather than schooling. In my country, there are increasing numbers of course providers which teach students about survival, such as cooking in the wild, doing domestic duty, and training the high communication skills. Learning cookery and domestic cleaning can allow pupils to grow up quickly and take after themselves without others’ assistance. Also, the well-established communication skills can offer positive effects on learners’ lives no matter at work or in their daily lives. Again, education providers offer merits not only on students’ character and career but on their happiness.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, school students do not only learn about being good citizens and being successful professional persons, but also educators should look after setting up their personal happiness simultaneously.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this era, arts play a significant role in children's life. Some people concur that children should read arts subject in their education while others believe that it is waste of time and they should focus on important subjects like mathematics and science. This eassay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why art is an essential subject for children's in their primary classes.\n\nFirstly, it helps us to show our feelings and emotions. With help of this subject, student's know about the history and get knowledge about their freedom fighters like Bhagat Singh. Moreover, if school's make arts subject compulsory for students, then it helps to bringout the hidden critivity and with this tallent, they can get good jobs in near future. As an example, Indian painter Ramesh Sharma, got their name and fame from his artistic drawing skills. So, this subject is important for students.\n\nOn the other side, some people believe that it should be an optional subject and children should pay more attention on other compulsory lessons. They thought if students pay more attention on this unimportant subject, then they did not get good marks in their examination. If they did not get good marks, then they will not survive in this compitative society. For instance, According to Indian Times, now days, 25% students did not qualify for the jobs as they scored less marks in their academics. That's why some people believe that it is a waste of time.\n\nFinally, I concluded, importance of arts subject can not be neglected in education. As, it helps to bring out the hidden talent and art is what differentiate us from animals. However, students should study other subjects too in order to get good grades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently, the Government’s spending money has never failed to provoke debates among people. While some people claim the fact that splurging money on space exploration is not justified, the opposite side makes a statement that there are more beneficial tactics. I would contend that the authorities' budget should cash in discovering galaxies while still investing in finding the solution to famine in equal measures. \r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, exploring space plays such a paramount significant role since it is considered an ultimate key to human existence in the future. Currently, the ever-growing irresponsible actions of people around the world are accelerating day by day, which causes the relentless degradation in Earth’s quality. Consequently, it is necessary for the Government to find a new inhabitable planet in case the earth is destroyed, which is the back-up plan to maintain the human race’s long-term existence. The Mass and the Moon research can be cited as promising examples for practical insights. Hence, it is irrefutable to note that exploring outer space brings a wealth of redeeming features.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there is still a steady stream of urgent problems that need huge financial support from the authorities, especially famine. Apparently, there is a wide range of inhabitants who are suffering from the alarming issue that they do not have adequate food to eat. For example, there is a high death toll in Africa due to starvation. Therefore, it is necessary for the authorities that they should also provide more money to handle the famine. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that there are some convincing reasons to spend money on technology for galaxy exploration. Meanwhile, the Government needs to take starvation into consideration in equal measures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Countries around the world rely on economic growth as it plays an integral part in its growth. While few individuals have arguably put forward the statement that economic broadening is the only solution to put a halt to hunger and penury. Although, another group suggest that this growth will have a negative impact on the environment. The following essay will decipher both the viewpoints of this argument and outline my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, A country's gross domestic product (GDP), since it is linked with the economic wideninig, if improved, can lead to decline in famine and poverty. Although a lot of factors contribute to this development for example, if a person gets quality education, this will align to the self development of that individual as well as contributes to the economy by creating value through productivity like manufacture goods, services, etc. As a result of this it will lead to a better standard of living for an individual and increased purchasing power which in turn saves he/she from sufferings like poverty. Provided that the employment growth can be accelerated and this in turn safeguards people from not being able to meet their basic needs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artificially intelligent robots continue to dominate our environment to the point that they might replace humans entirely. Even though it may be feasible to use artificial intelligence in most job fields, there are some professions that can be done only by humans because they require an understanding of people's emotions and psychology. This essay will discuss the reason why there are exceptional jobs that must be worked out by humans. \r\n\r\nJob desks that use human labour are most likely to be taken over by smart technologies. By using artificial intelligence, industries would benefit by spending less budget and time. For example, there have been some heated discussions on social media that illustrator is no longer needed since people can generate their own art by using prompts only. Consequently, artificial intelligence might be seen as an effective choice to replace human jobs. \r\n\r\nHowever, robotics replacements are not suitable for professions that need human understanding, such as psychologists or marriage consultants. The essentials of these professions will never be achieved by robots unless there is a great development where they can mimic humans completely. For instance, humans know how to feel and handle feelings, whether it is love, sadness, or anger. Overall, there exist a big difference between humans and robots that makes it impossible for all work to be replaced.\r\n\r\nIn the near future, there is a high possibility that robots will take over most human jobs. Simple work will eventually be done by robots but there are still certain jobs that are in need of human assistance. Therefore, not all careers can be carried out by artificial intelligence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock A problem faced build mooring mast without derigible would add stress building s Frame In paragraph says A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress buildings Frame Even though builders made mooring mass unsafe moore dirigibles building The greatest reason one safety Most dirigibles From outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen flammable In builders faced many obstacles could manage moore dirigibles building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We should use this tecnology in kids classroom. In the text it states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored', DR Huang predicts. Yes if the computers was like that it would make it eazier on teachers and students because not everyone learns at the same pace and if a student is bored it would change its couse to fit the student. Also in the text it states According to the facial feedback theory of emotion, moving your face mucles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. This means that if your making faces like putting on a fake smile can actually work and make u fell a whole lot beter. This is science and would a fun activitiy for kids. The only downside would be that that is two much time on computers and cell phones which arent good for the kids health but this is a new day and age and its hard to escape technology. To conclude this would be a great experience for kids and it will help all people with expressing their fellings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been around for years and years.\n\nThey have become more advanced than ever before.\n\nThinking about driverless cars seems so futuristic and unreal, but that's not always a bad thing.\n\nThere are so many things that contribute to driverless cars whether it be effective or harmful.\n\nThese new cars have many pros to them but also many cons that put me right in the middle of the arguement.\n\nFirst of all, I never thought that I would be alive in the time that invents the driverless cars.\n\nThat is one positive thing that contributes to my thought of developing these cars.\n\nJust think of how futuristic this is! Science and technology has advanced tremendously in the past few years and will continue to forever.\n\nWe know from the article, that the driverless cars would use half the amount of fuel than regular cars, which is so helpful to our world today.\n\nAlso, they have gone more than half a million miles on their own without a single crash.\n\nThat seems pretty effective to me.\n\nThey way that technology is succeding in these last few years shows how safe scientists are trying to make our planet.\n\nOn the other hand, not everything about driverless cars are perfect.\n\nThough this article told us that the cars can go more than half a million miles without a crash, what happens in extreme conditions?\n\nA car by itself does not have a sense of right and wrong.\n\nAs humans, we know what things are right and what things are wrong when driving.\n\nI do not doubt that the driverless car have something built inside of it that creates that sense, but nothing can compare to a real life reaction.\n\nAlso, the car would not have a natural reflex like humans.\n\nThe way that humans react to certain situations is natural and fast.\n\nThe driverless car would not have that ability.\n\nWho's fault would it be in a crash? I have a feeling that this arguement would create alot more contreversy than needed.\n\nThe driverless car or the driver? Most people would blame the car and the buisness because why take the blame when you could easily turn it to something else? This horrile thinking would not create a more peaceful world.\n\nAnother point is that humans will become way to dependant.\n\nOur world is getting very lazy and this wouldn't help.\n\nBeing too dependant on these driverless cars will make everyone not want to ever do anything for themselves anymore.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless cars can be a very big advantage in our worlds technology and enginerring but is it too much?\n\nIt is great to see the scientists make new inventions and try to save money, fuel, and time.\n\nBut what I am most concerned about is laziness.\n\nI want to see our world beocme more independant and active.\n\nInstead, we are becoming too dependant on the world doing things for us and not having any motivation.\n\nSeeing driverless cars out on the road would scare me a little bit.\n\nNot seeing htem would make me feel more independant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What students are going to follow after high school will decide their future career, so making a good decision is very important. Many people believe that getting a university or college degree is the best option after finishing school, meanwhile others think that starting with a practical work is more beneficial. In this essay both opinions will be discussed. \n\n \n\nNowadays most well-paid and convenient jobs are only available for high educated candidate, that explains why a large group of the community believe that studying at the university is mandatory to achieve success. For instance, a student who will graduate as a dentist, a physician or an engineer will get his dream job so easily, that will lead to a high life quality and better mental and physical health. Thus, the importance of having a diploma in order to have a good career is a common belief among people. \n\nHowever, other people are convinced that working straight after school is the best option. That can be explained by the fact that young people get the chance to gain a lot of experience with a real job rather than following the theoretical traject. Furthermore, a person can never be independent, unless he or she has a stable income, which is mostly not possible to have as a student. Earning money also affords a comfortable life. It is statically shown that in the Netherlands, 50% of people who chose to work have their own cars, in contrast only 7% of students own vehicles. \n\nIn sum, both working and studying have their own advantages, whereas people will always look at life from different perspectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I late like usual bus barley time sit moved I saw friends sitting seats directly behind one I stopped said CAPS guys make hard choose I smiled sarcastically sitting behind motioned sit I gave quick smile told I would turn around talk smiled leaned head seat I gave five minutes quiet started talking About time arrived middle school swell time Until I fine But soon bus left middle school uproar laughter Everything said made laugh everything I said made laugh After left middle school though little sixth grader came sit front us boy annoying He kept turning around giving I weird stares asking us many joints smoked Of course made I crack even I blabbing I stuff biology book But I talking notes The boy obviously thought I talking joints Well one I smoke try let ever come near I thought absolutely hilarious thought I meant joints sitting left head seat crying laughing hard Seeing I laughed even harder sounds coming us silent deadly laughter The boy still turned around stares added eyebrows As soon passed fruit packing company started taking us Now I m trying learn I nt faintest idea saying us Neither Of course nt know talking either He leaning isle talk native speakers also watching us huge smiles faces Being comedian I I decided start talking could know sixth grade He course quieted right speakers howling laughter I mean I shedding tears time got bus After got I decided check ol looked like trying sleep I gently nudged looked I personally forgotten back got stop CAPS Do need doctor asked confused grin faceI tried talk laughing words CAPS came pea soup CAPSk really scare retorted serious face CAPS come I m suppose scare The freshman scare sophomores sophomores juniors juniors scare seniors I explained laughing Still sounded like pea soup CAPS still scare personally Do nt belted laughing I put face seat lowered head could see eyes I eyebrow thing I move eyebrows one side forehead wave motion I thought I making laugh Which I outburst made even people look us I mean attention fine But boy still would interrupt I He blurt bueno bueno I would look He course soaking attention He I think insulted mother pointed outBut I nt care point I happy mood I nt going let someone I nt even know ruin Both I looked see stop coming It really something think back done together bus The famous disappearing bus driver ride hilarious day proof reading paper bus ride Good times I told getting bus laughed I Finally bus reached stop I crossed road headed home For fun I decided look back bus I saw boy starring I lost", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process put in place by the founding fathers as a compromise for the election of the President. It is a combination vote of the Congress and of the citizens of the United States. The Electoral College is on of the most disputed political topics right now. The electoral college is a proper method for electing presidents because it forces presidential candidates to have transregional appeal and it rules out the possibility of an election where neither candidate recieves the majority of the votes.\n\nThe Electoral College doesn't allow a candidate to win by gaining their electoral votes from one region. As stated in source 3, \"no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president\" meaning that if a candidate were to only campaign in a region that they knew would vot for them, then there is no possible way they would win. For example, in 2012 Mitt Romney was a favorite in the south so he had no incentive on campaigning heavily in other states because that he had won the south over completely. Not only did he not win a major electoral state, Florida, but he also didn't campaign in ohter states for which he gained no electoral votes. Even by some chance that they win, there is a very small chance of them being reelected because the regions that they didn't campaign in will feel disenfranchised and that will cause them not to vote for the president again. So if a candidate doesn't camapign in all regions that doesn't mean he won't win the election the first time, but he is likely to lose the reelection.\n\nWith the Electoral College process in place, it rules out the possibility of an candidate not winning the majority of the votes. For example, their have been two elections where a president only had 43 percent of the popular votes, which some people would think that would be enough, but the those presidents had the majority of the electoral votes which is what caused them to win. Even though there is a slight possibility of this happening, there are always those couple of states that are last minute decisions and are called \"toss-up states\" because nobody ever knows who will win that state over and it might be a state like Louisiana, who only has 8 eletoral votes but 8 votes is enough to break a tie and even win the election for someone.\n\nOn the other hand, some people might argue that the Electoral College method might turn off potential voters due to a candidate showing that they have no interest in carrying that state due to what party that state carries, but no one voter can decide an election, and that is because the voter doesn't vote for what president they want, but for what electors they want who in part will vote for the candidate. Though they have a valid arguement the Electoral College is still the right method for the job.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is the proper method because it forces presidents to campaign in multiple regions and it rules out the possibility of a tie in the election. The president is suppose to rule for the people and some people might not vote for a president just because they don't like them but with the Electoral College the right president wins.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear post I thinking way computers affect lives Oh topic I agreeing experts say people sending much time computers less time things I believe everyone including spends lot time online Even research nt think would better stick head book get information The thing apires computer games virtual kickball outside The main reasons I trying get computers hold us back physically able help us going away computer even going outside would better I mentioned computers hold us back time spend daylight burn things I say instead going outside We want stare screen play games chat friends Online chat especially effect people trading fun day one talk online back internet I also believe time limit computers push social go things Unforthetly computers end waiting nothing Another reason computers ca nt physically help us make us active I one I cheerleader I constantly youtube learning stretch new things Even though I learn spend time watch s done I get hurt ca nt Which I try getting cut gymnastics teacher physically help interact I m Lastly I believe less time spend would help us much better I know hour online I feel lazy I nt want anything However I go outside I feel full energy I m active Being computer feels better better To sum computers great much nt It really hold us back worse health Oh one last thing much time makes less active However thank reading", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In all of the science and engineering around the globe this product can be very useful for many human beings. These masterpieces can also be just another old machine that was made for nothing. I do not see many people buying the Facial Action Coding System and believing in its capabilities.\n\nFor most machines designed in the modern day technololgy, they can be very high tech and up to date. After reading the passage \"Making Mona LIsa Smile\" I wonder when this technology was discovered and when it was engineered. Therefore if the Facial Action Coding System was engineered in past decades that machinery could use an update and that update could carry the porgramming needed to discover those inside feelings.\n\nAlthough this inovaltion is very useful in a way there are some flaws. For example most people use their inside expression for their outside expression and show their true emotion. The machinery can also miss inside expressions that are not expressed through emotion. For example for some humans like myself we can feel one way in our heart but show a different way in our attitude.\n\nWhile reading the passage the author strategically described the emotions of Mona Lisa in the first sentence of the article. The author described the painting by Leonardo da Vinci as \"eighty-three precent happy, nine percent disgusted, six percent fearful, and two percent angry.\" This description given by the machinery is very descriptive and full of detail. Let alone how do you get this amount of research from a painting. If anyone can scan a painting and describe the exact feeling shown, then what could come back as information from a human?\n\nWhile all machinery can be very useful in a helpful amount of ways they can also have flaws. Although with the right programming and technology the inovation can overcome its flaws. After reading this passage I believe that the Facial Action Coding System is very useful and can be the next big discovery.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ok, so people think that the aliens made the face on Mars or might be an alien territory, but no. If aliens made a face on Mars, shouldn't have they came to Earth by now? They could've ruled us by now. The Face is a natural landform on Mars.\n\nTo prove that this was not caused by aliens, NASA reported,\" Huge rock formation which resembles a human head that is formed by shadows give the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" It is all just an illusion. We have seen some illusions in our past lives in space and maybe on Earth. You think that you see a human in the forest, and figured out that it was a tree.\n\nNASA has send an aircraft or a ship that was called Mars Global Surveyor. The camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. When the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing an natural landfrom. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nSo, if you think that is was the aliens, there's the proof. Aliens didn't create a face on Mars. It was just a landform that web surfers and/or NASA saw. Like I said, aliens should have taken over the galaxy. I guess not. I think they are so nice. You see aliens in youtube videos and movies. Some people think that th video was just edit really perfectly to make the aliens real. Why would the government or Area 51 make this a movie? Are they now spreading the word. Some people think it's real by the theories on what happened on the mountain in North Carolina. Some people in think that an alien spacecraft landed on Nevada. I don't know anything about aliens of course.\n\nThere it is, the face is a natural landform on Mars. I have proof that it was not a creation from the aliens. I can't say anything now because I'm speechless. I already said whtat needed to be said in the conclusion. I hope this argumentative essay convinces people to think that the aliens didn't create the Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear town paper I would pick computers There couple reasons I m computers able talk friends online able learn stuff also play video games One reason I would computers talk freinds online So facebook myspace talk friends day wanted What I mean simply typing want say friend receive exacte words ll reply For example wanted say hi friend would look hishers messages reply So able talk friends online one example I computers Another reason I would computers able learn things So wanted learn language would go google something try find fast easy site What I mean goto google whole bunch site s come want find fastest easyest site So abe learn important things like language another reason I m computers The last reason picking computers play video games What I mean borde noone talk get computer play mind numbing game educational game class For example science class played game computer gravity learning educatinola game So last reason I m computers I m computer play games So know I m computers I computers talk friends online learn stuff play video games", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays,People put more of an emphasis on his story about the building they live in. In this essay, I will briefly explain several reasons before the conclusion is reached\r\n\r\n First of all, with the rapid improvement of technology. We can simply find out many information online about construction currently. For example, \r\n\r\nthere are some websites contain more details including materials and when the building construct. Moreover, If residence search for the information by themselves, they can avoid be lied by a civil end dishonest engineer and construction.\r\n\r\n Secondly, if people know more background story about their house, they will have more enthusiasm on it. For instance, some European now find out what their building experienced in the past. If they know that their houses witnessed the World War 2 or even much older than the owner they will become respectful. In addition, these make people realize the value and treasure their houses.\r\n\r\n To sum up, It seems that understanding the story behind our house become a trend. It is a significant process to become a owner before people realize all details truly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should library able remove book movie shelves someone happens find offensive I believe answer question everyone world could find something library could considered obscene offensice However library decides remove every piece literature art possession someone finds offensive walls shelves core would bare I m sure seen heard many people offended silly things children s novels pictures magazines song lyrics I know I seen people become livid offeneded piece literature art made But seeing reactions I ve come conclusion someone find offensive another person could find beautiful For example paintings nude men women looked wrong disturbing also seen masterpieces others Everyone opinions things s library s job worry opinions wrong right There really way avoid offending someone without completely clearing walls shelves library Simply anything could seen offensive anyone I know I ve personally found books disturbing graffic However nt mean people nt able read something young woman found offensive Offensive pieces literature art often best kinds evoke emotions people although maybe intened emotions make people think You learn lot re looking something put strong emotions With everthing going society culure today around world someone bound offened everyday something Religious groups offened way cover book drawn pictures teen magazine politcal leaders offended journalists writing You see simply way avoid offending people To s truly surprising libraries still worrying censorship television shows showing sex drugs violence People obviously getting offened television shows airing see s The television shows still aired Offensive people still watching people still reading books looking pictures listening music someone point found offenseive If library decides take every offensive piece literature art would left My friends answer nothing A beautiful creation bring back horrific memories someone else nt make bad creation A novel makes stomach turn knots teach ve ever learned whole entire life I hope people realize something offensive someone nt make wrong Just someone decided thought piece literature art wanted see read nt give right deprive someone else chance read see As clearly see libraries nt waste time censorship matter hard try someone find something bothers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Two many privaleges freedom speech freedom expression Although bodies work percieved offensive inappropriate I believe still available public Some might agree topic expressed even offensive inappropriate others removed libraries negativity These offensive harsh pieces literature could even used show public considered rude offensive inappropriate thought learning tools instead banned Every person right opinion others agree person say change fact right beliefs Katherine Paterson says All us think book hope none children children taken self I read literature considered offensive disturbing literature I glad I educated people thought acceptable behavior I know teach others despite book said know describing people living I believe would grave mistake remove materials public eye many ingorant historical beliefs others affected nation countries across globe All books educational though harsh used show right wrong If taken shelves libraries people especially children could start think certain idea incorrect offensive completely appropriate acceptable As someone said CAPS know history bound repeat By removing problem would creating another issue For example many books written history convey hatred discrimination towards cultures ethnicities religions lifestyles If works literature banned available public many people would know wrong show hatred towards others different This type literature provides usefull information allows people see large amount people thought life years ago taught people actually people living", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not agree with technology to read students emotional expressions should be used because it is just a waste of money. I honestly believe that teachers or former students should know when someone is upset angry or happy. I mean it would be irrelavent for a school to spend thouasands of dollars to know when someone is upset. Teachers should be able to see if their own students would be upset.\n\nSchools could spend the money on more important things like for textbooks gym equipment sports classrooms or even build another part to the school not some emotion detector. But hey it is 2018 anything could happen. In paragraph 5 it states \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\"\n\nDR. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" How could that even work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper brought attention nice sunny day like somebody would want inside The sad truth many people wasting time inside computers rather enjoying day Computers negatively affecting population We getting point whole world might absolutley crazy nothing done For one obese children world Generally children running around burning calories even people teen years Instead kids sitting front computer screens virtual games emails Even chores around house could bring obesity rate lot sitting butt staring screen day The whole screen thing brings next point Staring bright flashy lights long good brain computers cause child ceizures year The radioactivity computer could also mess lot giving cancer cure cancer yet figure everytime computer long putting life risk The longer youre radiation going youre brain Do really want cut life short knowing one could almost called suicide youre reading ve warned So ve basically covered effects computers body physically The computer also effect mentally socially When comes along time world computer know vacation lose everything learned school Its proven computers cause memory loss So get back school ca nt keep s going frustrating nt If would ve read book time computer maybe could ve gained knowledge rather using Computers affect socially everybody wants sit inside computer people fun alone nobody talk computer would like computer friend The debate topic could rage days still winner honesty go turn computer think really worth Think everything would lose everything could never get back would rather something would gain future Its choice responsible enough make one would benefit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pay disparity is a growing concern in many large organizations all over the world. While some people support the idea that top-tier officials should earn higher salaries than other employees, others are against this notion. Both views will be discussed in this essay, though I personally feel that the directors of these companies should be paid higher salaries.\r\n\r\nMany people think it is unjustifiable to pay managers a wage that is 10 times more than an employee earning the lowest salary in the company. The reason behind this thought is the member's mindset. They believe that the salary paid should be based on the employee's contribution to the growth of the company and not the position of the worker. They argue that a regular employee works much harder and even does extra hours and hence contributes more than the higher authorities towards the success of the organization. This discretion in salary creates low work loyalty and poor motivation among the staff.\r\n\r\nHowever, these people do not understand that salary is not directly proportional to the amount of work done. The remuneration of the higher authorities is based on competition. The board members set a standard salary for executives on the basis of the carcity of competent managers. Moreover, the manager has a lot of responsibilities. Even though he is a manager, he still has to manage his team, manage different projects, make and submit reports to the higher-ups, etc. Therefore, is it justifiable to pay high compensation to the directors of such organizations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, every employee in a company feels that everyone should be equally paid. But in my opinion, the managers should be paid higher than the others for the proper functioning of the institution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea becuase we should study Venus becuase it is important to study about a planet that is close to the earth.Besides all its dangers that Venus has i think it is a good scientific thing we should learn about. In the article it stated,'' Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfuly to our knowledge of Venus.I know this becuase it stated in the article and i learned about in science class and we did a whole project on the planets and i like Venus better than the other planets.It stated in the excerpt,''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys and mountains.'' I know this becuase it stated in the expercet and we learned alot about this planet and i think they should do more investigation on this planet.Venus is a importnat planet to our world and schools should study that planet on how it contributes to the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A driverless car, such an amazing invention as it takes away human error. All of the money and lives saved, the simplicity of diving with absolute safety, but is it too good to be true?\n\nDriverless cars are bringing more damage than they will help with. Taking a person from behind the wheel is one of the most dangerous things that could happen. \"Smarter\" cars are based off of sensors that will need replaced throughout maintenance. What if one of these sensors is to go out while driving at 40 miles per hour, coasting off into another lane, running a stop light, or even locking up in the middle of the road? These cars are rolling hybrid death traps.\n\nDriving assistance is not much better. There are claims in the article that these cars will make sure the driver is paying attention, but it is absolutely the opposite. Many wrecks are not only because of the person having distractions in the car, but distractions of their own. Gazing off, paying attention to things outside the car, while you are not paying attention to the road in front of you. Hands on the wheel, looking forward, right as you hit the car running a stop sign. Even better, once the car realizes its about to be struck, it has the potential to stop, directly in harms way.\n\nThese cars will not make it in a society like ours. Alone with all of these facts, cost of maintenance will be outrageous for the average consumer. It will be another 20 years before they are truely viable to the avereage public. These cars\n\nhave many new parts to them that will not be availible to the aftermarket, and even then, will be horrendously expensive. Hundreds of dollars in sensors, if not thousands, but the most important expense? Your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some planets are to dangerous for humans to land on,but their also planets that humans can land on without putting their life at risk. We also send robots to explore planets for us,but sometimes we cant do that eaither because of the weather on the planets. The planet Venus is very dangerous so that means no human or robot could land on it.\n\nOne of the dangers of the planet is it has a very thick atmosphere. In the text it states \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus.\"Its hard to get through the atmosphere because its thick and has alot of carbon dioxide in it. Once you passed this challenge you have to get passed another challenge. It states \" Even more challeging are the clouds of higly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\"\n\nOnce you have made it to the planets there is extreme temperatures and high atmospheric pressure.\n\nIt also states in the text ,\"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nIt also says \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth.\n\nScientist are still interested in this planet becuase they believe it could support life form on it. It states in the text, \"Well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" It also states \"Long ago , Venus was probally covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like earth.\"\n\nThe planet Venus is far to dangerous\n\nfor humans to land on it or robots. Theres planets that humans can land on and there's planets that humans cant land on. There's planets that are really dangerous and there's some that are not as dangerous as others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System mesure your muscles to determine your mood. \"The computre contructs a 3-D compiter model of the face; all 44 major muscles\". That is how the Facial Action Coding System determine your emotion.\n\nThe use for the Facial Action Coding System can be use to help out in many different areas of work. For example \"A classroom computer could recunize when a student is becoming cofuse or bored\". That helps so it can chang up the lesson so the kids can stay focus and intrested in learning. It can also help in the cartoon and video game industry but \" Your home pc can't handle the complex argorithems used to decode Mona Lisa smile,but we can wright down to a simple instruction that \" encode\" different emotions\". So it can help video games and new 3-D cartoons by giving them more realistic emotions.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can also detect people who are forcing an emotion out. this can help people by knowing how they realy feel. That can chang the world, it can help find people who are suffering from depression and get them help. This devise can help by having people put on a happy face. \" Moving your facial muscles can not only expresses emotion, but also matbe even help produce tham...Putting on a happy face actually work\".\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is valuable in the calssroom and in the the holo school. it can help nursses, counselers, prenciples; it can also go to colloges to help people study for lawforce feild.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a controversy about whether we should make efforts to fight climate change. I think it's necessary, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirst, it affects our life negatively. It has been reported that there has been an increase in the sea level on account of melted ice, which can be ascribed to global warming. Such a situation will lead to a loss of living habitats around the globe. Take some scientific reports as an example. Many scientists have detected that the sea level will rise about 6 meters in 2100 because of the melted ice in the south pole and Greenland. As a result, innumerable tropical islands and low latitude areas will be drowned. \r\n\r\nSecond, it will bring countless natural disasters. It's expected that global warming will influence the precipitation largely, which can boost the probability of fierce hurricanes. In the past years, the US and the UK experienced the attack of fierce hurricanes several times. From 1095-1930, there were about 3.5 times hurricanes annually; and from 1995 to 2002, this number ascended to 8.4 times. It's worth mentioning that every attack of hurricanes kills hundreds and thousands of lives, and can cause a loss of millions of dollars. \r\n\r\nThird, it brings about diseases. Due to the extreme climate caused by climate change, those affected places provide a superb growing environment for viruses; creatures like mosquitoes and rats grow rampantly in those areas. As a consequence, they can spread diseases quickly and broadly. Take Malaria as an example. Malaria has killed numerous people in Africa. It is spread through mosquitoes, it always takes place in tropical areas because of the wet environment. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe climate change is a huge problem, and it should be tackled as soon as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist first didnt know going took directions people wasnt really sure It hot running water idea snakes His water running sings kept thinking would never take directions old guys would stick future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I waiting whole year day come Today birthday I cant wait open presents eat cake I turning friends coming everything It great day First I wait mom home work So today I going go swimming going go hike finally friends come party start We games presents cake My mom said sister automatically invited I dont like rule Maybe next birthday uninvited My mom work She left sister ate breakfast going go swimming We pool right beside patio front yard Sometimes sister mad throws Other times bigger My older sister friend spending week us moved away decided would come visit Thats decided start throwing pool One would always grab legs would grab arms would swing threw pool well I got mad kept happening threw fit cried told going acting like baby deserved treated like one put diaper highchair forced eat baby food Of course I crying I like baby food highchair put diaper By time didnt want go hike wanting mom home Finally mom home even better brought pizza I excited friends coming pizza perfectMy mom change work clothes decided time take nap well I dont need nap thats knew something I decided I went took nap actually really fall asleep mom time cleaned decorated went got friends woke walked living room mom friends screamed surprise I definitely surprised After long fun party time cleaned put garbage away cake flies would The next day mom went back work I swam played day It great day got wear new swim suit got also play new floaty toys I got I got lot stuff little sister trying find way hot water pool trouble house didnt fit faucet bathroom thats went moms room used bathtub put hose way back door We definitely accomplished mission By time heard lot craziness I went go see going smoky I went kitchen sister yelled sisters house meet road I ran got saw fire trucks speeding drive way comes mom racing freaking making sure everyone In end I found burn birthday cake trying preheat pizza I kinda upset burnt I I look back laugh sister day still burnt spoon lock lock gate simple dummy lock fire fighters didnt know cut chains I guess lesson learned preheat always make sure nothing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today in the world everyone needs a car. A car is one of the most used and most needed appliances in the world today, but cars also cause many accidents, injuries, and fatalities. One way to avoid accidents is by allowing the car to assist with the driving. If self driving cars becomes a common thing there will be less accidents, less drunk driving, and less deaths. Many people believe that cars should stay manual to the driver because the enhanced amount of technology for a self driving car could have a glitch or have a technology fail. Although there is a great fear of this happening to the new style of car, many cars already use extended amounts of technology. The cars being created today have better, more enhanced technolgy that cause the smarter car to help everyone.\n\nThe average car made today has a great amount of technology already being designed into the car. If a self driving, smarter, car is created for the average customer the difference between the smarter car and the average car made today would be the amount of sensors. Many people may question having an extended amount of sensors in the car because the more sensors the more likely a sensor has a chance to fail. While the fact of a higher possibility of a sensor failing is true but there is already a great amount of sensors in cars today. Also, new cars being developed will have a better sensors than the sensors currently in cars. Sensors in cars today detect seatbelts, open doors, and impact of car to deploy airbags. Advanced cars around the world today already detect the surroundings of the car to help avoid crashes and improve parking. One flaw of the technology of the typical car to day is that a driver does not always comprehend or listen to signals and sensors being given by the car. In order for safer driving to occur cars must become more self dependent. Smarter cars will immediatley understand and react to the sensors in the car. Also a self reliable car will help fatigued and worried drivers. The car could automatically program routes via GPS, relieving the stress of directions. Another area of concern raised by those who oppose the smarter cars is that pedestrains will be in greater risk of harm with a smarter car if the car has a malfunction. This is a true problem, but the smarter car is not full reliant of technology. The car will still need guidance of a driver who can see pedestrians and stop. None of the cars developed are driverless, although the cars have its own sense of direction, acceleration, steering, and braking can be done by the car alone, the driver has the final decision on what the car will do.\n\nAlthough many critics oppose the idea of having a car that has so much power and freedom, the smarter car is safe and functional. The smarter car is the next generation of cars and the next great invition that can change the lives of everybody evryday. Most people who think a self driving car think that there will be no need for a driver when that is not at all true. The smarter car still requires a licensed driver but it can provide great help and security to the driver. The self driving car can do many more things than the average car which makes the new car of tomorrow a smarter car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty-five years ago a photo was taken of a natural landform that appears to look like a face. Many people will argue that it isn't a natural landform but, more of an alien artifact. While the two sides still don't see eye to eye they both have evidence that could support their belief.\n\nWhile, some people think that the face on Mars is \"bona-fide evidence\" that there once was life there. NASA has defended that remark by saying that they wish that it was a mark of ancient civilization but, it's not. NASA has also made it a priority to photograph the face because, they felt as if it was \"important to the taxpayers\" to give them evidence that it wasn't an alien landform.\n\nSo, in 1998 they flew a shuttle over Cydonia, the face/lanform, for the first time to go take pictures of it. Thousands of people were waiting to see pictures of it. It had turned out to be just a landform ,like NASA had said, not an ancient lifeform. Many people disagreed with the pictures that NASA took because they had stated that it was cloudy during the time they had taken the pictures on Mars so, they couldn't really get a clear shot of the face. While NASA agreed with them that it was a cloudy time of year on Mars they are still sure that there has never been life on the planet.\n\nWhile NASA hasn't changed there opinion because it is in fact just a landform. Many people still want good proof that it could quite possibly be acient civilization. So, they prepared to send up another. This time they sent it up on a cloudless summer day so that no-one could argue that the weather affected the pictures. NASA was right again. This time they took up a camera that zoomed in the structure and it didn't show anything new that would have meant that there has ever been any life there.\n\nAll together, these facts prove that it is just a landform. A scientist named Garvin was quoted saying \"That's a lava dome that take the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" The face is indeed just like a landform that we have here on Earth. Although the other side of this long running debate did have some evidence that might have made NASA think twice, there is still more proof that it is a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wished you could just sit back and let your car do all the driving? Well that may happen sooner than you might think. Driverless cars technology is improving everyday and soon it will be more accessible to more people. Driverless cars are cars that do all the driving for you. You still have to be in the car ready to take over in case of an emergency. Driverless cars may sound like a cool idea but there is a lot of debate over this topic.\n\nPersonally, I think driverless cars would be a good idea. I think since we have the advancing technology we should give driverless cars a try. You would still have to be in the car ready to take control and I think that is a good idea. The problem with driverless cars is that they won't be ready for unexpected danger on the road. A good way to solve this problem is to have a driver ready to take the wheel.\n\nA benefit of driverless cars is that they would use half the fuel taxis use and be more flexible than a bus. Reducing how much fuel we use would really help the environment. I think more people would supprt the idea of driverless cars if they knew the benefits like reducing the use of fuel.\n\nThe biggest negative effect of driverless cars is the safety. Since there is not a person behind the wheel ready to react there is a bigger risk of collisions. A computer doesn't have the time to react in that type of situation. Right now California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Comumbia are the only states allowing semi-autonomous cars to be driven. Manufacturers of these cars believe that other states will follow as soon as driverless cars are proven more reliably safe.\n\nI really think driverless cars will be here soon in the future for everyone to drive. With developing technologies it will probably happen sooner than you might think. There are many positive and negative effects, but I think the manufactures will work them out. Driverless cars will be a positive effect on the environment and society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "people surveyed agree use computers benefits society I personally concern people computers positive effect people There multiple reasons I think use computers really benefits society including teach good handeye coordination give people ability learn abour faraway places people even allow people talk online people Once I believe computers positive effect people First s proven fact sports physical exercise involve handeye coordination extent The computer help reach people young age good handeye coordination When person uses computer keep eye screen still able use mouse keyboard This takes alot coordination think nt even love look mouse keyboard typing know everything People disagree I m saying often use excuse people spend much time computers nt getting enough exercise However I believe true The handeye coordiantion people learn computer help improve skill coordiantion sports example baseball person looking ball catch samee time move arm catch That handeye coordiantion helps This proves computers benefit society teaching people handeye coordiantion In addition teachers believe computers used great tool help students learn Computers give people ability learn far away places people They give people acess information foreign place people available resources areas On computer one go search sight type place whole world Then search dozens information place pictures society advencing technology people learnings learn wtih great button In addition think s also tool schools Teachers students projects different countries people student easily information computer Computer benefit society way teach different loaction people Computers help people become interested different topics even inspire people go faraway places hack different people Finally people asked kind way contact people online whether email facebook Computers allow people take online people In modern society important person friends great keep friends live far away nt connecting computer great way keep touch Those disagree opinion believe spending time computer means less time family friends I believe taht opposite Since living modern ages families understand kid leaves college might going far away even across country Having computer allows family chat easy way keep contact talk People talking line another way computers benefit society Its never Computers benefit society They reach people handeye coordiantion use life Most importantly give people ability learn faraway places people Lastly allow people talk online others living modern time society advancing everyday computers huge part They positive effect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are more and more people trying to figure out the history of their house or building. They research those information for many reason and there are plenty of methods they can approach.\r\n\r\nThere might be some interesting clues in historical buildings. For example, traditional Chinese buildings often decorated by wooden and stone cravings and pantings about plants and animals on the walls. While learning the history of the building, people could find out the stories about those art works. In addition, when people studied history of their houses they could gain knowledge of their ancestors. They would know how to improve their life and how to avoid some troubles.\r\n\r\nAs technology technic developed rapidly, people could collect data easily via internet. They could find out almost everything thruogh their computer or smart phone. However, some notes and pictures which had been recorded dacades ago might not be shown on the internet. In this case, people could go to libriary to borrow some books, especilally local libraries. It is another way to learn history of people's houses by having conversation with the elders who lived in their neighbor hood. \r\n\r\nA lot of people wanted to know the history of the house or building they live in. It can tell them who they are and gain some usefull adiveces of life and fun stories from their ancestors. People can get those informations in different ways such as doing research on the internet, borrowing book in libraries, and talking to elders who lived next to them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about joining the Seagoing Cowboys? If you haven't you definetly should. Just go ask Luke Bomberger. I am going to to be talking about his story and his reasons and stating some of my own. This job will actually make you want to get up in the morning to go to work, it's so awesome. Keep reading to find out my reasons you should definetly join this program.\n\nMy first reason is being able to travel to all these different countries and knowing your helping someone in need. This program is to bring animals to countries that need these anamils to survive. We are needing extra help to save all these children and family's in need.\n\nHave you ever thought of wakeing up to see the beautiful bright blue ocean with the the juicy red morning sky right outside on the deck, well you can do this everyday on these long trips. Any shift you are working you get nice things like if you work morning shift you get the beautiful sunrise. While you are working you get all these extra nice things, I'm sure you'll love it.\n\nMy third and final reason is, YOU AREN'T EVEN WORKING HALF THE TIME. On the way back ,witch is half the trip, you have no animals to deal with so no work. In the article the author stated, \" Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed.\" There so many games you can play even while your on the boat, its a win win for you.\n\nLet's do a recap on why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program, my first reason was that you are helping the ones in need. Next I talked about the view you have always wanted when you wake up,it's great. Finally I talked about that half the time you aren't even working. Thankyou for reading my this passage and I hope you think about becomeing a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My argument that I am going to state in this essay is against driverless cars. The idea to me sounds unsafe and dangerous.\n\nI think that driverless cars are a bad idea because, they can malfunction at a point of time. Although the companies have an idea of alllowing the car to be able to alert the driver when he/she should take control, it might not work one day and could cause a horrible accident. Yes, the idea sounds great, but not all good ideas are safe especially when involving lives. Another thing that tells you that this is an unsafe idea is that although it is a \"driverless car\", it still needs someone to take control when it can not. Which shows a red flag to which these cars are not safe.\n\nFrom what I read in the article, I think that the best way to drive a car is to drive it yourself. The article itself notifies that a human must still take control when the car can not, and that is basically what you do to when the car isn't driverless. No matter what, a car must still have a driver to assist it. Having a real person monitor, control, and drive a car is the best and safest way, to me, for transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fellow citizens should know the advantages of limiting their car usage of drivng less car can reduce the pollution, For example the article \"In German Suburb,Life Goes on Wihtout cars\" it says \"expert says its a huge impedmient to currenty efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpopes. Cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emission\". Thats why its important to cut back, If not... They could ban driving. For Example the article \"Paris Bans driving due to smog\" Paris almost of near the record pollution, so paris enfored partial drivng ban to clear the air of the global city. And there was 1 article about \"Car Free Day Is Spinnning into a big hit in Bogota\" talks about banning cars and only transportation is bike, walk, and busses.\n\nIn the article \"German Suburb,Life Goes On Without Cars\" people who ownes house has to pay for Parking space stated \"Car ownersship is allowed but they must buy a parking spaces which can cost up to $40,000\" cause of this people who dont have money rather buy a house instead of a car so they dont have to pay $40,000 for a parking space. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars and 57% sold a car to move to germany.\n\n\"Paris bans driving due to smog\" Paris bans driving becuase after days of near record pollution, Which made Prais enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Mortorists with even numbered license plates were order to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine which is $31 in USD. And some drivers dont even enfored the rule for example \"4,000 drivers were fined for not coperating with the rule enforced by paris offical. Diesel fuel was the blmamed since France Car which is made up of 67% of cars fueled with diesels. its a good idea for Paris to ban driving for certain amount of days because it can clear the air up with pollutions.\n\nIn \"Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" they have banned driving for 3 straight years. the only transportation you could get around is buses and taxis is permmited for the day without cars in the capital city of population of 7 million. People who violate the banned of driving could faced a $25 fines, the turn out was large, despite gray clouds thay dumped rains showers on Bogota. As the mayor says \"its a good oppertunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" in this case i agree with the mayor because having a stree-free pollution can lead to a heathier state and a clean enviroment.\n\n\"The End of Car Culture\" President Obama ambitous goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions. Many sociologists believe it will have benefical implications for carbon emissions and the enviroments, since transporation is the 2nd largest source of american's emission. For example companys like \"Ford and Mercedes have been rebranding themselves as a mobility companines. with all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habits. Company who offer transportation for example in New York theres a new bike sharing program to reduce car transportation.\n\nSo as a fellow citizens its a good idea to cut back and save on money, and pollution to our planet earth. everyone wants a clean and safe enviroment. One thing you dont want is your country to ban or limited driving which makes you take the city bus or call a taxi.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi my name is Luck Bomberger and as you may know i have crossed the Altantic Ocean 16 time. Why? You might ask because i wanted to help people recover from War World ll. And i could also trave the world.\n\nWhile helping so many people i was able to see Europe and China. While in Italy I took a ride in a Venice, Italy a city with streets of watere. It was amazing not only did i see amazing places but I was able to work with a lot of amazing animals.\n\nIt took to weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean for the east coast of the United States and a mouth to get to China. But carry for the aniamls took a lot of work. I had to feed them and clean up there mess. But working in my Aunt Katie's farm when i was younger helped me a lot.\n\nWe also had a lot of fun off the boat to. When we let the aniamls of the ship we woiuld us the empty holds to play games like Vollyball and Baseball. but i have also got hurt in the ship where i have broke my rips.\n\nSo in conclusion, there where good times and bad times while on board and being able to help people but there homes and towen back together was a opportunity of a liftime and im clad I was able to do it with my Friend Don.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Receiving, the topic of criminal sense is the product of being treated in abysmal conditions, while others think that unacceptable behaviours create crime. From the prior experience, this writer argues that social factors affect human beings due to careless childhood.\n\nIt is vital to understand that human nature can be adversely affected during growing age. Take an example of once people around a child did some pulling actions, which can be noticed by the young and the would likely act in the same way to the others. This leads to the standard of bad habits and they can even cause some potential risks of being a murderer at an early age. Hence, parents should put their children in a safe zone in order to prevent some miserable things around them.\n\nAs this point may be true, yet, once criminals acted, they knew what they were doing was wrong, but their habits made them think what they did was for the right purposes. This is because crime's behaviours are not being punished ever since they have made a few mistakes. Not far from the fact that people will do anything to protect their best things even though they have to break the law. Thus, it can not be given to the crime is created by their nature.\n\nIt is this writer's opinion that people need well-education, which concludes mental health. It can be self-evident that the community is responsible for the youngster's behaviour, let the children walk in the right path. Therefore, people, especially children should not lack attention.\n\nTaking all points into account, society's actions can lead a potential criminal as well humans ought to remember what they have done and defend the roots of crime once it happens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Study of Venus\n\nIn \" The challenges of Exploring Venus\" the author talks about studying Venus and sending humans to explore the planets. The author supports this idea by giuving many good points as to why studying venus is a good idea, despite all the dangers and risks. \" Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it possible for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\" This is the first clue that the author is going to be supporting hisidea with good points.\n\nThe author thinks that becasue Venus is the planet closest to Earth it is worth studying despite the proximity to Earth. In paragraph 2 it says, \" each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This proves that most the spacecrafts that they have sent to Venus didn't survive. In paragraph 2 it also says, \"Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\" This shows that Venus hasn't been touched in so long that we don't know what has changed and it's about time that we study the differences that has occured throughout three decades. Overall, it's been a long time since Venus was last studied and the author thinks it time to study ther changes now.\n\nThe author talks about how astronomers think Venus is facinating because it was once the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. in paragrapgh 4 it says, \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This proves that Venus, to this day, still has some features that really similar to those on Earth. In paragraph 3 it also syas, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This means that Venus once had all the things that Earth has today, like oceans, animals, and other living things. All together, there were things very similar to things that are on Earth today, and studying Venus could give us the elent of surprise as to what they find on the planet today.\n\nThe author states that the temperature on Venus would still be warm enough but the air pressure would be close to sea level on Earth, it wouldn't be easy conditions but it would be survivable for humans. In paragraph 8 it says, \"striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This means that there are so many people with so much curiosity and all that curiosity could lead them to finding soemthing new. It also says in paragraph 8, \" our travles on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This means that people shouln't hold back on exploring something because of any doubts that they have or the possible dangers.\n\nIn conclusion, the author of \" The challenges of Exploring Venus\" thinks that is it a good idea to explore Venus because of all the features similar to Earth it used to have, Venus hasn't been toucghed in so long, and because people could lead us to find new things on the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways One way cool pines keep sun beating getting heatstroke Another way towns went either bad water becoming dehydrated The heat sun make feel funny hoping nt seeing mirages", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local news paper I think computers bad effect people really early age Starting thirteen adulthood People spend hours time computer canbe exercising type activity doors Computers make people feel like life taken away form Spending much time computer really damage person posture It said get computer state comfortbility comes lean backs bent periods time Imagin person cramped tight space eight hours person gets joints muscles stretched point tensions This bodys get computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "World War ll was over in Europe and many countries were left in ruins in 1945. To help these countries recover their food supplies,animald and more,44 nations joined together and formed a UNRRA. The UNRRA stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration. The UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the animals that were shipped overseas. Like horses, young cows, and mules. So my friend and I signed up. We think you should sign up too.\n\nThe UNRRA was hiring \"Seagoing Cowboys\". This was a chance in a lifetime. It is good to join the UNRRA,because you help out people. It also helps you see new places you never been to. It helps you see new things. It a chance of a lifetime. You can buy things from every place you go too. You can tour around places. You can explore that new pace and you can also meet new people or friends. Maybe even if friends of your moved somwhere else you would probably go there country and see them.\n\nIt takes about two weeks to get from the Atlantic Ocean to the eastern cost of the United States,and a month to get to China. Yes that might be awhile,but you can still do things on the boat. You also have to take care of the animals. You have to feed and watered two or three times a day. There is also a thing called night watchman. The night watchman has to check on the animals every hour. Just because you have work dosen't mean you don't have time to have fun. You can play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds. You could also play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,reading, and whittling. The games helped pass the time.\n\nI am just saying that you should sign up. Even though you have to do work you cant still have fun. You can visit new countries. You can tour around buildings. You can also explore the country. You can do many things if you sign up. You also help people if you sign up. By helping ship animals, food, supplies and many more. You wouldn't only be helping one person you'd be helping people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happiness second paragraph talks parents made simple home traditional Cuban home heart kitchen Also Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative Also parents sacrifice lot get point This mood memoir happiness I never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the technology described in \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" would prove to be extremely beneficial to modern classrooms that rely heavily on technologies to instruct students. In an age when online schooling has become a mainstream learning option for many students, as well as almost all schools providing computers for instruction, this facial recognition would be able to detect when a student has lost focus and is in need of assistance. This would in turn increase not only the vigiliance of instructors, but also the effectiveness of a lesson. Although the computer needed to run such a technology may not be readily available to most classrooms, the overall effectiveness of the Facial Action Coding System would prove to be a invaluable tool when utilized by educactors.\n\nEmotional expression reading technology would provide a net increase of classroom instruction efficiency. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a sutdent is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson..\" The modification provided by the computer would recapture the focus of distracted students, who are perhaps using their cell phones, and modify the lesson based on their specific facial responses. Not only would the increased assistance from the Facial Action Coding System increase the effectiveness of a lesson, but it would also help ease the load placed on singular instructors. Instead of simultaneously watching the class and demonstrating material, an instructor with the assistance of the Facial Action Coding System would be able to shift their entire focus to the lesson at hand. This would greatly increase the quality of the instruction material, thus proving its value in a classroom setting.\n\nIn summary, the Facial Action Coding System would prove to be most essential to today's modern classrooms that are plagued with distractions. Computers with this system would identify lagging students and modify lesson instructions to regain their attentions. This would allow for teachers and instructors to shift away from their roles as disciplinaries, and engross themselves in classroom demonstration and the effectiveness of their lessons. The Facial Action Coding System would provide an extreme boost in efficiency to the learning experience of students across the world, thus proving its extreme value in a classroom setting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood excerpt caring The parents would nt pretty much given lives away start new give children better place live They perfectly good life back home gave away children That mood excerpt caring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that studying arts is a crucial for students studying in school. However, others disagree and think that inclusion of this theme in the curriculum leads to losing of prestigious time. I believe that the inclusion of art will assist pupils to a great extent in several ways.\r\n\r\nSome insist that Arts is a most significant topic for students in education . This is mostly because this subject helps in the all-round development of a child. For example, activities like dancing, singing, drawing, acting motivate a child to obtain a career in Arts which is a positive development. Hence, this helps a juvenile to learn various skills and techniques and become creative and innovative in life.\r\n\r\nConversely, some assume that learning Arts is an under-utilisation of precious time and believe there is no future. Firstly, society overlooks the importance of fine arts and focuses only on the careers in science and technology. For instance, some parents force their children to become professionals like doctor's and engineer's and discourage them in paying attention to the artistic side. However, like other subjects, this is also extremely vital.\r\n\r\nFinally in my ,opinion I strongly believe that students should have knowledge of arts and this could be obtained through studying in school by including arts topics in the syllabus which will develop youngster's innate abilities.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, arts is a very interesting and essential discipline in school and cannot be neglected. This subject is necessary to build skills and unique abilities in children. Therefore, this subject should be made compulsory in Academics.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An alarming number of people today consume sugar-based drinks, whether it is in the form of soda, energy drinks or fruit drinks. Often consumers are lured by their widespread availability and convenience, however, marketing campaigns also play a role, targeting young people and giving them the perception that sugary drinks are not as unhealthy as they actually are.The availability of these types of drinks has greatly increased over time. They can now be found in almost any store or restaurant, which makes them easily accessible to almost anyone. The fact that they are often cheaper than alternatives, such as water or freshly squeezed juice, makes them an especially attractive option for those on a budget. Marketing campaigns for sugary beverages have been quite successful in creating positive associations attached to these products through advertisements on TV and billboards. This encourages people to consider them fun rather than unhealthy and normalises them within society.Luckily, reversing the rise in popularity of sugary drinks is still possible, if we act now and attack the problem from different angles. One of the very first steps should be educating people on the health risks associated with high sugar intake so that they can make better-informed decisions when selecting what type of beverage they consume. Companies should also be held accountable by law for their misleading marketing campaigns aimed at children and teenagers who are more likely to believe the false claims about their products’ health benefits without fully understanding what’s being sold to them. Schools, colleges and universities, and any institutions catering for young people, should consider banning sugary drinks and replacing them with refreshing alternatives without added sugar.Overall, it is important that we recognise the potential health risks posed by consuming too much sugar from soft drinks and take actionable steps towards reversing this trend in order to ensure our long-term wellbeing. Through greater education, government regulation, and increased corporate responsibility we can ensure that more people understand why reducing their intake of sugary beverages is important while still allowing them to access enjoyable yet healthier options.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As technology develops more, we need to consider what is valueable and what should be left behind. The Facial Action Coding System would be beneficial to read students' emotional expressions. Being able to adjust or identify how a student is feeling might prove to be invalueable.\n\nBoredom is a very common feeling in school. It disengages students, stopping them from participating and paying attention all together.\n\nAccording to the article “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” Dr. Huang predicts. “Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.” Technology continues to play a more prominent role in education, this technology could help every student learn and stay interested. Identifying what the student is feeling could make crucial adjustments to the learning plan and the students would be better off for it.\n\nThis technology could be valuable for students in a non-academic way. Teachers being able to understand what a student is feeling could be life-saving. People experience problems of different kinds every single day. In paragraph seven the article states, \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" A teacher identifying that there is a problem with a student would allow them to talk with that student who might be going through a hard time in there life and provide some relief to a student who might feel burdened or stressed.\n\nThis technology would be very valueable in the classroom. Being able to adjust a lesson plan could help students stay engaged and understand the material better. Identifying sadness or any other negative emotion could help with any problems someone might be experiencing at home. The Facial Action Coding System would be benficial to students' mental health and overall well-being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should we stop using cars especially to our everyday advantage? Cars can pollute the air running on normal gas rather then hybrid cars though. Why is being car-free such a big hit? Will the use of cars come to an end? Not driving cars can be good for us in many ways.\n\n\"Congestion was down 60% in France after 5 days the smog rivaled in Beijing, China, wich is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" (as Robert Duffer says in pragraph). The pollution can spread and make it worse some where else but be pollution free there. In france diesel feul is to blame for their pollution 67% compared to 53.3% of gasoline. Not using cars for only just a small amount of time can get rid of much of the pollution. Some people say its more stress free to not have cars around.\n\nBeing car-free is becoming more known and more people are trying it. There has been less traffic jams too. \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" (as Andrew Selsky states in pragraph 21). Also that of having no stress and nonpolluted air. In Bogota, Columbia cars have been banned for 3 years. People are being more active and walking more, this is helping a lot because everyone is getting more excercise and being healthier and having no pollution is a plus because you can also breathe easier.\n\n\"Studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" (as Elisabeth Rosenthal states in paragrah 29.) The United States is very cultural based on cars. The use has dropped drastically because in 2013 the miles driven was 9% below the peak. A part of it was because some people dont make much money or have jobs. sociologists believe that being car-free can be a benefit to society but bad for car companies. More people are using technology to communicate rather then driving somewhere too see them in person.\n\nBeing care-free is a great way too live your life, theres so many advantages to not having to use your cars. This helps save money from gas or car problems. It helps you be healthier and more active. All in all it even helps pollution one of the biggest problems we have and a main cause is the gas from cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As climate change has posed a threat to human beings, there is a view argued by some people that it is better to coexist with it rather than take preventive measures. From my perspective, I am not in favour of this opinion, believing that both individuals and governments should work collaboratively to reverse the trend, thus lowering the risks and repercussions brought by climate change.\n\nOn the one hand, humans are unable to make a compromise with climate change, so that we can live with it in a proper manner. For one thing, there is not much leeway for us if we do not stop some human activities that are harmful to the Earth. For example, greenhouse gas emission results in global temperature rise, which makes the sea level increase to a certain degree, thereby immersing many cities and towns on the land. As a result, millions of people will become homeless, and it may trigger a shortage of food supply, therefore threatening the survival of humans. For another, under no circumstance cannot we find a way to live with the phenomenon, because it puts all of us in the danger of homelessness and poverty. \n\nOn the other hand, actions should be taken to preserve the world as much as we can, in case it is too late to save us from climatic deterioration. To begin with, individuals ought to make an effort to go green, which in turn can limit our contribution to the trend. For instance, we need to shift from self-driving to taking public transit, in order to consume less energy. Furthermore, manufacturing is one of the main culprits contributing to climate change, and the government needs to place higher taxes on them, in an effort to drive them to use more renewable energies and produce effectively. Consequently, those actions will exert a positive influence on the exacerbation of climatic change. \n\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that we must address the problems caused by climate change instead of coexisting with them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story Winter Hibiscus paragraph chose wanted portray reader even though Saeng experiencing hardship leaving old home behind could still find good life new beginning In final paragraph winter shows represent hard times past spring represents optimistic future new beginning Although Saeng grieving lass past could still find happiness In story knew hibiscus cran home She finds hibiscus semblance reminder old home Also story says Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quite repetition season upon season almost familiar now This quote leads final paragraph shows acceptance appreciate happly live new home The final paragraph says snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again When things familiar things remind old home come back Saeng strength try accomplish good things new life new home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes sentence showing girls cofidence It also gives enough time get ready next test Also knows ready flower starts bud", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "he here are the great value of using technology.\n\nthere is sofeware that can recongize emotions better ways foe human and computer to commmunic. I know what you thing we can calculate human emotion.\n\nthe process begins with thecomputer conster a 3-d mold of the face there are 44 mojor muscles in model that make a action untit.\n\nclassfild as happyiness , suprise , anger , disgust , fear , and sadness when your frontails rise when suprise or you orbicular oris will tightens your lips to show anger . facial expression are univer observers .\n\nCan track exprees in the mona lisa as human everyday we perfrom samne imprees calculation every day tell if your freind is sad by looking at her or his face look at human art we can see what the painter or paniting was express . with this you could ue a mirror that look at your face express to see a differt of a genunie smile and a forec one new computer sofeware we cold maybe croack a new da vinvi vode thing tenconly is be come great use of our time see what engone the paint is desiceing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with having driverless cars. Cars as it is now are very expensive and if they made these 'driverless\" cars then they would be 10x more expensive. If one of these driverless cars were to breakdown the price of getting this particular car fixed would be very costly.\n\nAlso the passage informs the readers that the car still need manual preformances in times such as backing out of a driveway or pulling up into a driveway, in times where you have to pull over for the police, or when you see an emergency on the side of the road so you have to switch lanes to avoid hazards all human skills that a car cant preform by itself. This car still needs humans to preform somethings maually so in the end you have to be alert at all times about the car and how its going and the roads to make sure they're safe for you to drive on and there are no hazourds on the road. These types of cars seem to be taking a long time to come out as well because they have some samples of this type of car made since 2009 and they keep having to modify this car several times just to make it safe for people to drive. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia haven't let these cars be used until it is proven to be safe and reliable; as of now the best car is driven by a human operator.\n\nIn conclusion,I disagree that we should have driverless cars. It is expensive, it is also costly to repair, it isnt proven to be a safe car yet, many places still dont allow this car in their area.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the epoch of industrialization, nature has been damaged due to our overuse of resources. Nevertheless, to the best of my knowledge, I believe there are lots of methods to cope with this issue.\n\nThere are two primary causes that can be attributed to environmental degradation. Firstly, the production of goods is most dependent on nonrenewable power. In fact, oil and fossil fuels are imperative in maintaining the energy for vehicles to run and machines to operate, though these release a huge amount of pollutants, leading to climate change. Secondly, nylon is disseminated throughout shops and restaurants by our unawareness of this impact on the environment. In fact, nylon has a chemical structure that is difficult to recycle in the very short term; however, it is overproduced by the needs of consumers. As a result, nylon is not recyclable and harmful to nature.\n\nTo solve this problem, people of all strata must join hands together to reach great levels of success. For example, the government should practice renewable resources, such as wind and solar power in that these are clean energy and healthy for nature. Furthermore, the producers should exhort the use of other alternatives besides nylon. Taking some big company as an example, McDonald campaigns the shift from polyester fibre to paper straws in each of its agencies around the globe. Therefore, they are successful in reducing this great waste to outside nature. \n\nIn conclusion, factories and individuals are the main factor in the environment dying down, but we can address this difficulty by enforcing appropriate methods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When we see the famous painting of Mona Lisa we typically do not see it as an example for the Facial Action Coding System. This is a system that reads emmotions, but this painting along with this new technology helps humans understand how are we feeling.\n\nThis new technology is valuable in many cases and in classrooms in not the ecception because it can help students have a diffferent learning enviroment.\n\nThis is 2018 and we need changes, good changes. The way that we learn is changing really fast and now there are better methods to help students understand and learn, for example: apps, websites, homeschool ,ect. By the use of this new technology students can have the chance to have a better education by having the help of a program that can see your facial expression and determine if you might need another teaching method that can help you improve your learning skills. For example in paragraph 6 says: '' A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confuced or bored'' Dr. Huang Predicts .''Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'' this shows how effective this new technology can be to students that want to have a better education. With this program or technology students do not have to worry if the teacher do not know how to explain a specific subject in a different way that the student can understand. This new technolog is valuable because is prepared to have multiple ways to teach a subject so the student can understand it in a way that could help them memmorize the subject.\n\nThis technology called FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is going to change for good the way we all learn. With this new system we can all learn in a valuable and enjoyable way, thats the work of the system to have you enjoy learning. Are you ready to enjoy learnign with FACS?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newpaper local newspaper power say feel effects computers give people I believe computers give great effects people teaches handeye coordination gives people ability learn far away places allows talk people In people agree idea computers Firstly using computers teaches people handeye coordination For example grandmother told knows use hands eyes well using computer This types researches information day long In computers designed help eyes hands focus Secondly computers lot interesting information faraway places quotes I always use computers work helps learn many new things lets wife I search details trip want go people agree stated However people say computers give wrong information many times find wonderful website never lie Thirly use computers let talk online video chat friends family world How benefits seen relatives ages buy ticket visit video chat It gotten people much closer see world whole different way instead wasting cell phone minutes go buy laptop computer camera video chat Lastly taking people active peoples life important In conclusion great eye coordination able research faraway places always allowed video chat talk family online I want tell whole world computers useful people use everyday without problem Lastly best feeling ever make everyone smile knowing believe spending time computer teach lot", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi im writing topic patience I think patience important world Because one patience everyone would running crazy like banshees getting mad al time It important patients In life its always fair wait turn For example I go get allergy shots I patient Because people got first act get served first I also patient football games everyone play I play spot whole game Lots people arent patient make people patient Another term patient inpatient Everyone needs sort patience That world need little patience THE", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on the driverless cars is that they would be good to have. A big reason for this is because if they had driverless cars recks would decrease and people wouldnt get hit crossing the road.the reason I think this is because the cars would have computers that would be smarter and more observent about there surroundings. They would be able to respond to situations better than what humans can. This would also make distracted driving a thing of the past because humans would not be controling the caar but instead it would be a computer with sensorse.\n\nA big problem we have now is destracted driving. It causes alot of accedents and caused deaths. a good way to have no distracted driving would be to have diverless cars. Not only would it stop accednts from acurring but also would minumize the deaths due to car crashes. The car would have a laser beam that forms a 3-D model of the cars surroundings.\n\nHaving a car that drives it self would also make parents less afraid of there kids being behind the wheel. If thes cars can drive themself then ther will be no reason parents should be afraid of there teen getting hurt. most car crashs are caused by teen drivers. if cars drive them selfs then teens wont get into car crashs and maybe saving there lives.\n\nThe only big problem of having driverless cars would be the price. if not every one can afford a driverless car it wont make crashs go aaway. yes it will make then less likly to happen but if not everyone can afford there will still be crashs. there will still be people driving and not just driverless cars. if they make driverless cars they should make it to where every one can afford them.\n\nIn conclusion i think that they should have driverless cars.It would help in many ways and make travleing safer for everyone.it would also reduce the number of car crashs. Also it could save lives of people. thats why i think we should have driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]