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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued by some that without developing the economic status of their countries, the citizens will suffer bad economical conditions. Others claimed that the suggested improvement would put some impact on the environment and hence, it is not necessary. From my point of view, there are some inevitable costs for the development that humans must pay. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are some reasons for those who believe in the ultimate importance of economical prosperity. Firstly, it provides opportunities for a greater portion of the community to be financially stable. For example, getting a job will not be a headache for graduated students. In addition, this will raise the financial abilities of the country which can lead to peace, creativity and several good deeds required.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, individuals who claim that the expected development had devastating impacts on the environment are afraid of certain measures. In the first place factories, industrial manufacturing, and huge production facilities can produce large amounts of greenhouse gases that scientists are still not able to find solutions for it. Also, such excessive development comes with a fixed cost which is utilizing natural resources, and therefore, there will be no reservations for future generations. For example, many ORPIC countries used most of their oil resources during the past three decades. Therefore, they are against the vast economical growth, and I agree. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are different views about the impacts of economical growth among individuals. However, regardless of the direct impact of the growth on people life, governments should find a way to eliminate the negative environmental side effects expected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despiting all dangers by making it seem like a challenge and having interesting facts about what kind of planet it is. The author starts it off by referring to Venus as \" Earth's twin \".\n\nIn the artcle it states,\"often referred to as Earth's \" twin \", Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size.\"(The Challenge of Exploring Venus 2). This explains how they start to talk about Venus being interesting. Then the author starts talking abut how Venus is a difficult planet for humans to study and details about it. Sometimes, us as humans like challenges and they like to test their limit to see how far they can go. In the article it states,\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging plnet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\"(The Challenge of Exploring Venus 2).\n\nThis explains that they see it as a challenge. Another reason that the author supports the claim is they start stating unusual facts about Venus despite the circumstances. In the text it states,\"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\"(The Challenge of Exploring Venus 3). This explains that they draw in more attention stating unusual facts. The author also talks about how professionals like astronomers find it interesting. In the text it states,\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our system.\"(The Challenge of Exploring Venus 4). This explains why people who go up into space see it as a fascinating thing.\n\nThe author makes it seem like Venus is our closest option to visit for space travel. The author tries to infrom us that studying Venus is a good thing by looking at it as meeting our curiousities and as us getting insight on what it really is. In the text it states,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because of human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavours.\"(The Challenge of Exploring Venus 8). This explains how they appeal to this as gaining insight on the planet and seeing it as a challenge.\n\nThe author of this text supports the idea that going into studying the fact that Venus is a great pursuit despite the dangers by providing infromation that'll make you curious and having you look at it as a challenge that us humans would want to complete.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Some people say that we should have facial recognition in the computers in schools so that if the student looks bored or confused, the computer will change it up a little bit for their liking. It will also be able to help teachers know when a student needs assistance or needs a more energizing lesson. Using this technology in classrooms is valuable because it will help teachers change their actions and might help the student become more engaged.\n\nSchools all over the world would really benefit from the Facial Action Coding System. By using this, there could be a possibility of more engaged students and finally result in higher test scores. Dr. Huang says,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Not only will teachers result from this, but students will as well. Just by using the computer system, we will be able to tell how a student is feeling in that classroom or during a certain lesson. If we could see the facial expression, be able to figure out why, and change something to fix it, that would be very effective in the school setting.\n\nAlthough this would be really great, many people could say that not all students have the same feelings about things so if a teacher changed his or her lesson based on one student, then some of the other students might not be as engaged or delighted. It wouldn't be right to do something based on one student rather than twenty-five. If a few students are very engaged in this lesson and they are paying attention and getting something out of it but other students are confused, if the teacher decides to make a change for the confused students, the students that were engaged in the lesson may become unengaged or bored. That would be the downfall of using this sort of technology.\n\nA very appropriate setting for the Facial Action Coding System would be online schooling and home schooling because both of those are mainly based on the one student taking that course or class. If the camera on the computer sent a signal to the online schooler or home schooler, it would be easy to make a change in the lesson to try and get the student more engaged. Having a student pay more attention and be more engaged in a lesson could actually help raise test scores because if someone was doing something that was actually fun and they could actually retain the knowledge, it might be effective.\n\nUsing the Facial Action Coding system in classrooms is valuable and effective. It will help students become more engaged and pay more attention. It will also help raise test scores at least partially because they will be able to remember what they learned when it was something that they liked. While some might have contradictory thoughts, it is mostly a valuable piece of technology that should be used in many schools across the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughing one key components relationships others It lightens mood situation really lift sprits I m bad day It often ice breaker I meet someone new help get closer friends I already On first day school freshman year I met girl named We writing class boy named sitting us I talking schedules said something made conversation slightly uncomforatable I looked saw heard said look face somewhere embarrassed close laughing I smiled mouthed word awkward turned away This cue okay laugh subtly I nt know first laugh would lead many friendship would develop almost instantly After first week schedules changed students shuffled around found every single one classes together except We probably spent time laughing classes getting work done I m exactly sure managed pass classes Spending much time together matter time enough inside jokes fill dictionary Nearly word sight something related one jokes send us fit laughter Sometimes nt say anything I ll look ll burst laughing Because friends often question sanity When start laughing ll look eachother us clue ask okay They nt understand us way understand eachother People always get names mixed even though look nothing alike Our names dont even rhyme start letter But I ca nt really blame We re much alike From activities participate way think could almost person She makes laugh every single day s one best friends another one friends constantly making crack Whenever I m I m always terrified peeing pants She s close ve gotten better friends year We lot classes together year s probably ve gotten closer We re always stupid stuff together laughing whole time For example I like laugh obnoxiously loud exaggerate ha s someone tells really lame cheesy joke Our biotech teacher loves tell cheesy jokes re class sit together anticipating one jokes laugh We also like chew gum mouths open order make chewing noise louder I often laugh hard I ca nt even chew I know I ll good day I m She make laugh way lot friends ca nt It comes deep within point ca nt even breathe tears running face It makes entire face sore even eyes scrunched long She s fun person around I m glad one friends Laughing important part relationships I people If friends could nt make laugh friendship would much boring Nothing would fun If I never laughed I d never happy s life I m willing try Life hard It s easy s always going smiles smooth sailing There s going sadness rough waters But matter tough life get I know I ll friends like share laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story way show determination I also believe symbolizes adaption season changes Saeng take test Everything soon go back normal adjust like Everything almost familiar now NUM", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people choose to say that the Face was created by aliens, but I am here to tell you that it definetly is not an alien structure, simply a natural landform. In 1976 I must say, it certainley did resemble a man made face. Though now that we have a clearer picture from 2001 it is very obviously just a natural landform. It resembles landforms similiar to the ones around the Amercian West. It is really just the Martian equivilent to those particular landfoms. The two are so similar in formation and shape.\n\nThe most recent picture is so clear and high definition that even if it werre some kind of shack or Egyptian pyramid, you would know it for a fact. The picture taken in 1998 was on a slightly cloudy day, so I understand the doubt from some of you. Though we did take another picture, and it was on a very clear summer day, and it is mothing but a simple lava dome, that has taken the form of an isolated mesa about the same height os the Face on Mars.\n\nIt was very hard work just to try and get that picture, and I would like to assure you that it is definetly no \"Martian Made\" structure. We got very close on a very clear day, and you can definelty see that those were just shadows, and nothing short of a dissapointment. What you don't understand is, that it would benifit us if it was a Martian's craft. It would give the tax payers evidence and reason to support us and give us their money to support the cause. SO therefore I rest my case tht clearly we are not lying because it would benifit us if there were Aliens crafting these thing, but the simple fact is, there isn't.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a coding program that can read emotions, some say this could help in the classroom to tell if students are ingaged in the lesson. This system was created by Professor Thomas Huang and Professor Nicu Sebe, leaders in their fields of expertise.\n\nThe usage of the Facial Action Coding System in schools to determine if a student is getting bored, tired, or angry at a lesson could be very useful. If a student were to get angry or bored during a lesson they are more likely to not pay attention and if you are tired you may not retain the information as well. If your computer could sense this and alert the teacher or change the lesson accordingly then it would give students a better working enviroment and a better chance of doing well in school. This 3D construct could also help teacher's understand their students better and help them learn more efficiently. This can also see through a fake smile and know the students real emotions which is important in case the student is trying to fake it through the leason when they really need help. According the the professional Dr. Huang, he predicts that, \"A classroom somputor could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then is would modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nSo in conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System can read emotions and see the real emotions present. This could lead ot improvements in the classroom so that teachers and the computor can alter the lesson as needed to the specfic student and their needs. This is a good idea because it will improve the work enviroment created for students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I writing persuade put article paper computers bad benefits people Computers make unhealthy bullying takes place computer effects school First computers bad effects people makes unhealthy I say people nt get enough exercise Then get obese enoughb exercise Eventually get diabetes obese time The next reason lcomputer bad effects kids get bullied internet This important kids get bullied feel bad Then get depressed This called cyber bullying One example guy came school talk son son killed bullied internent school That bullying important issue computers bad effects people My third final reason computer bad effects people kids bad school bad school spend much time computer stop homework stop preparing tests quizzes Also kids get distracted school think care going home going computer Kids also bad school eventually think school waste time drop It proven fact kids dropped school kids always computer said school waste time Thats computers effect school Now remember computers bad effects people makes people unhealthy People gets bullied effect schoolwork That computers bad effects people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As cyclist continues ride changes begin occur surroundings ultimately affects cyclists attitude When first starting journey Yosemite cyclist started morning with strong legs smile face He received information older locals would help cut amount time took arrive Yosemite National Park However riding cyclist realized perhaps older mens travel advice little dated barely water left hydrate surrounded nothing road desert cyclist couldnt help laugh It sad hopeless laugh mind least I still energy feel sorry At point cyclist mad using map brought instead listening locals Although cyclist remained determined find water begun lose hope suddenly came across bait store Here able rehydrate renewed spirit continued journey time using map", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir joyfull The author tells us loves cuban culture They listen music cook food s house warming The author also loves family He nt argue enjoy time together I think author joyfull happiness surrounds house", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world a community show a tendency to become parents in middle age. This essay will argue that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will argue that the background received to mature ages makes the process of growing children more conscious and uncomplicated which is more beneficial for families than weak sides that are related to declining a health condition in that age.\r\n\r\nIt is commonly known that in their 30s people usually accumulate sufficient experience, have a stable job and some properties. That's all can be considered as bright sides for planning pregnancy, because families in most cases don't have big financial difficulties anymore, they are more prepared to be parents than in younger ages when probably they would be busy building a career or finishing education. A recent British survey showed that women who started their motherhood after 30 years old feel happier and more confident having offspring than those who did it earlier. Another point might be the ability to take responsibility for such important decisions which make planning children more conscious and morally prepared. As a result, children in such families are growing up in more favourable conditions getting enough attention and appropriate upbringing.\r\n\r\nDespite so many advantages, having children at older ages may be challenging due to some health issues. Possibly, older parents don't have so much energy as youngsters and after 30 years people more often face chronic diseases which make parenting time slightly more complicated compared to young parents. However, a lot of personal examples prove that this drawback can be solved easily by taking care of a health and preventing some predictable conditions with a family doctor.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the fact that older parents are more prepared mentally and physically to have children clearly outweighs the potential health issues which can be prevented in advance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I first read the Article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" I was sheocked at how this technology was able to read emotions off of a painting. It described her as 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. This is all identified by software innovated by Prof. Thomas Huang, in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe. Dr. Huang and his colleaugue are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. I think it's a good idea becuase it could help people better understand the emotions of people who don't communicate as much.\n\n\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" says Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" Using video imagery the new emotion-recoognition software tracks these facial movements; in a real face or a painted face of Mona Lisa. This sofware can also identify mixed emotions; each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). This really shows how much a computer can do. Dr. Huang said \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Your home PC can't handle complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down simple instructions that \"encode different emotions.\n\nI think that this is a great step towards the future and the possibilities could be endless when understanding emotions. It could not only benefit yourself, but others around you in how your feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article that we read it told you about cars being able to drive themselves, that alone tells you how much technology is changing around us everyday. It's scary to think that not that long ago we didn't have cars at all. Even when they were finally invented they are nothing compared to the outstanding machines we have today. But as time goes on there eventually needs to be a point that we say no to some advances such as this one. The idea of cars driving themselves is unique but I personally don't think they should be used in our day to day lives. I also feel as if the public wouldnt feel to safe on the roads knowing that some people aren't even putting a single eye on the road but rather on there Iphone.\n\nTo continue on my last point many people would probably find it very worry some that the person is off in there own little world since the car would be doing all the work. Yes in the article it said that the human driving could take control at anytime, and that the driver must pay attention to the road for things the computer cant pick up yet. In reality most people arent going to be looking at the road if they dont have to since something else is doing it for them.\n\nSafetly to yourself and everyone around you while on the road is key, thats why we take permit tests and drivers license tests. They take these test to prepare themselves and other young people on how to drive well and safely, this gets way more complicated when you start adding things. With new cars that can drive themselves, that would mean that the governement would have to start creating more laws to protect everyone on the road. It would also mean that not all teens would learn affectivly learn how to drive if they keep turning that fucntion on in there car.\n\nAt the end of the day though no matter how many laws you put up there are always gonna be people that break them. There's a high chance that the amount of accidents will increase with more and more teens thinking that they are invicible using the car and that the car will do everything. But in reality when they need to manually drive the car themselves it will be to late and there will have been an accident. Yes there would be smart individuals that would always pay attention and follow the laws but a few rotten apple are going to ruin everything for everyone else.\n\nThe article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" was an intresting read and I enjoed it, if you couldn't have already guess but I am against the idea of such things. I like the idea of something like that finally coming out of the books you read as a kid becoming a reality and I know some people will buy it. I had my personal choice and I clearly stated the bad part but that doesnt mean there aren't any good ones. I believe that everything must be used in moderation but this one there is no easy middle really, you either have it or you don't. If this is eventually added into what we deal with in our daily lives then i hope people use it responisbly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the advent of information bombardment, more people read daily news as a hobby. Paradoxically, others see no relations between news and people’s lives, hence suggesting reading news would be consuming their time. This essay will discuss why I totally disagree with this proposition in terms of educational perspective.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the news offers a wealth of general knowledge. Particularly, the phenomenon of watching news program would help people in gaining a comprehensive overview of everyday problems. In fact, people also would have more topics to be discussed in everyday conversation. As a medical practitioner, for instance, by reading updated news in their specialized sector, would bring them expanding and accumulating their knowledge in depth. Thus, by reading and watching a variety of categories news would lead people to bbroaden their mind. \r\n\r\nIn addition, shaping reading habit would bring a massive societal advantage. For example, newspaper and TV programs would break the semnsational or bad news to make the incident known. Even though the incidents are not relevant with their lives,yet these would make them aware and the wrongdoings would be lessened due to being condemned by society. As a consequence, society would have more awareness and become more law-abiding people. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this essay provides numerous benefits of reading or watching the news involving knowledge gaining and social merits. In my point of view, I completely disagree with the stand that the news has no relationship with people. If people carefully manage to identify the right news for them, it would bring tremendous advantages to them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author is saying what scientists explore Venus even with the dangers it holds. he shows us facts why we should do it and showing us the bad part about it. do you think we should go to Venus?\n\nthe author is saying even with the condictions of greater than Earths we should still look closer to Venus. The author says \" the plaanet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\" (para.3), which shows that we can't get close to the atmophere of we could die. We don't have the right stuff to go to the planets surface ether because the author says \"such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans\" (para. 3).\n\nthe planet Venus is most like are planet on our solar systems, the author says \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size\" (para.2). NASA has idea for a blimp-like vehicle to be on Venus to the don't feel as much pressuer and hover over some clouds the author says \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the fray\" (para.5).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is a challenging discussion about the function of technology in the community ,one group believes technology has been responsible for complicated lifestyles,so, it must remove from life ,however,I disagree with this statement that automation must vanish ,so ,I am going to discuss this viewpoint to reach a direct solution.\r\n\r\nIn a beginning ,some people opine that development of machinery has been made many problems for people and for their opinion they have been exampled for getting a job , they have to learn the last version of computer programs such as Excel ,Word ,and SPSS ,while, in the past , all activities had done by human's brain , in addition of , smartphones and artificial intelligence has been widely spreading in daily activities ,for example, when costumers will go to a restaurant they must use QR codes to observe the menu ,so, all of this has been complicated process to drink a coffee.\r\n\r\nHowever, machinery innovations have been created many convenient methods for the community such as,present transportation system are providing short journeys in long distances and this progress is depended on the newest tchnology equipment,furthermore, laptops and computers in remote schools are available to local students ,so, they can access great classes by simply pushing their fingers on their laptops.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the elimination of technology will stop the development of society in many directions such as education and transportation and it means individuals have to spend the rest of the day on primary activities such as drawing a table for accounting instead of usage from computer programs or many hours will waste on the roads to reach destinations ,so , I disagreed with the removal technology ,it seems that is a deviation from right thinking .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laugher Laughter express delight fun object joke Laughter something large benefit life happend everyday scedual Without laughter could nt express happy going side would particullar feeling life except frowning proven fact cose wrinkles beacuse many muscles uses For laughter day thing show friends family horses number one reason frown tured side You think horses cant smile talk ways showing personality make laugh Shere smart clutsy goofy times Mostly make laugh giggle like little brothers sisters There one time I always locked away back mind It took place midday beach I friend two horses saddled ready go Both us horses felt energy rush saw waves pouning shore salty smell noses Once hit sand running side side wind wistling past ears like moving train The horses heads equaly pointed towards ocean When got water horses pranced danced arounds like yearlings would walk tell water tell drenching us soon next wave would come rushing weed swerve around try beat wave shore After five hours adventuring caves sand dunes starfish worn decided call day It around dinner time eat dinner watching sun go finsih perfuct day beach We put horses back trailer I shut trailer door I gave horse good pat neck I walk horse tured head gave nudge like saying thanks good time Driving home I knew perfuct day laughter times I laughed injoyment also face hurt little smiling much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I strongly believe technologies kids adults use computers I strongly believe people bad affection people addicted spend less time family friends Finally spend less time excercising great opportunities self Clearly think lettng students adults use computers take mind make addicted computer This bad addicted something go back This means time anything For example micht forget life around us live Addiction hard get live life box play nonsens live life fullest Over addiction everything including computers horrible Without doubt spending much time computers rott brain make lazy Meaning less excersise less active This problem specially teens Teens computer every week cell phones ipods many Alot teens get cranky become node neisty parents testing As people dont excercise move around alot cause severe consequences like obesity cancer Obesity usually happens eating food also ahppen eating exercising People arent moving become lazy desire anything effect Overall computers cause people excercise less active cause Lastly Computers make people spend less less time family treat computer computers In everyday life teens cell phones computers listening music electronics causing If goes alot teens loose people Computers waste time make affect people use computers electronics", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever since I born laughter big part life without I would boring grumpy person Even tough I experienced many moments full laughter one specific moment always comes mind About year ago mom I went trip visit family It first time twelve years mom I could go visit immigration problems After toughs years past mom I managed get legal residency united states As soon got residency free could go visit family without come back illegally When mom I got airport mom started crying full emotions first time twelve years going see mom dad brothers sisters As soon gone trough airport security baggage claim made way exit grandpa agreed pick us When got outside airport small little red started getting closer closer driving towards mom I The car forty feet away mom suddenly dropped luggage started running toward small red car I idea elderly person driving car When car parked aged man stepped vehicle gave mom one longest emotional hugs I ever experienced entire life must hugging least fifteen minutes crying eachothers shoulders When finished hugging mom calls name I start walking toward When I face face mom older man mom tells man grandfather looks dad tells meet grandson For first time long time I grandfather I stood shock He amazed big much I changed toughs long twelve years gone without seeing contact When I reached hug griped hard nt let go told day happiest day life Me grandpa started loading luggage car could head home meet rest family When got done loading everything car headed home The long ride home bit weird uncomfortable nt much talk car It fifty minute ride home reached destination small little town called texcoco It nice little clean town lot small stores lots two story middle class houses streets full cars people walking bicycles different I used back united states When got house group twenty people family friends outside gate waiting us When done seedling got done meeting relatives got together family dinner One uncles really stood really funny always acting like clown one set mood house wherever went As days past I getting comfortable people around started fun About two weeks past uncle invited one stand comedy shows day I experienced laughter ever jokes original trueIn cunclusion laughter one elements life without I could happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am agaisnt the devlopment of these cars. What would be the point of having a driveless car thats not really driveless. I am agaisnt the devlopment of these cars because it would be very expanisve to fix, does most thngs a human can do and driving problems may occur.\n\nFirst, if the car was to break down and the sensors were messsed up it would be very expanisive to fix. According to the article, \"Totyota Prius uses position estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever and an interial motion sensor'. If you were to get into a bad car crash and wrecked the car and wanted to get it fixed it will be super expansive. Mainly because all though sensors are high tech and advanced. So basically your fixing the car and paying for all the technology it needs which is going to be alot of money.\n\nSecondly, the \"driveless\" car does mainly what humans can do theirselves. In the article it says after all the listed sensors, \" The combination of all this input is neccessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\". It also says later in the article, \"They can steer, accelertae, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\". If this \"driverless\" car can do what humans can do themselves then what is the point of making the car. Ecspically not if the car isnt really driving. Someone would pay all this money to do something they could have done themselves.\n\nLastly, with this \"driverless\" car driving problems may occur. technology does crash and does disfuction and may move faster than us. In the article it says, \"even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or manufactuer?\" The article makes a valid point. If those cars a developed those type of questions will need to be answered and conflict will occur. Technology can cause an accidnet just as easily as a human can but if that happens who is at fault? How would the situation be handled?\n\nIn conclusion, I am agaisnt the developmnent of \"driveless\" cars. For the three reasons listed and more. \"Driveless\" cars are expanisive to fix, does most things a human can do and can cause more problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The youth of our society are extremely important to our future and even present. Everyday children, teens, and young adults are making a change and facial action coding could help with just that. We of course will be living in the future so it's probably best to make sure is the best it can be. Using technology to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable because It can be used to find the best teaching method for everyone, teachers could better understand students, and it would show what topics are easier and harder to learn.\n\nBy knowing how a student feels in class it can show us how to find the best method for teaching. In the text is says, \"it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This quote shows that lesson could be tailored to each individual student. By doing this all of our youth would exceed an average persons intelligence. This would create a society where everyone can understand a concept in as little as hours.\n\nTeachers could connect with their student better if they knew how they felt in their classroom, thus creating a better learning enviroment. The text states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" A teacher could use this information to determine which students actually need help. One of the biggest problems in the classroom is a disconnect between teachers and students. If this facial recognition was implemented then teachers would know how to correctly approach a student.\n\nIf technology was used in the classroom this way it would also help us know which topics are more diffuclt to learn. In the text Dr. Huang stated, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" This means that the information given from this technology would not be corrupt. The data from the students would change the entire school ciriculum. It could be used to determine standards that need to be studied for longer, or to find out if they need to be taught at all.\n\nTeachers, students, and the government all benefit from this kind of technology in the classroom. The information and data we could recieve from this is extremeley important and should be recognized. Using technology to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable because It can be used to find the best teaching method for everyone, teachers could better understand students, and it would show what topics are easier and harder to learn. By including this technology into school, the future of politics, science, and any other topics would be vastly changed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders Empire State Building encountered many obstacles construction according article The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted The biggest obstacle allowing dirigibles blimps dock forces nature wind gravity As article winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents It unsafe passengers dirigible pedestrians close blimp turbulent air Also flammability hydrogen blimp caused problem unsafe possible fire hazard feet long floating close populated place New York City In addition laws airships could fly close urban areas prohibited dirigibles even coming close mooring mast Empire State Building A test run US navy dirigible Los Angeles proved dangerous impractical dirigible could even get close enough tie All mooring mast Empire State Building genius idea many obstacles sprung use", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience understand dont complain A person patient one wait dont every two second A person like succeed life getting getting closer First She coming town row next This night When someone going pinch go I wake PERSON disappointed force CAPS poor set fest I think pet In mind I praying say word responded CAPS When I got home mom mad letter agreed Why I fall history Next week came We sat say something I took deep breath patient complaining I nodded head smile big looked like lips fall A weeks later I got little better every day Her name She nice thoughtful She told I progressing waiting seeing results Finally hundred points came I nervous confident time That test going wish met A week later passed A smile face good job got A It hard begging I patient I got good grade wait dont hag see results end Patience helped I know future tolerant A person patient person accomplishes goal", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would be the impact of emotional recognition software in society? For educational purposes, analysis shows that students who are more interested in what they are learning will do better in that class. So if we could figure out if students are enjoying class they will do better. This technology may also change the way we buy things, based off of exosure to advertisements. I believe that using this technology is an all around good thing.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang, of The Beckman institute, and with Prof. Nicu Sibe of the University of Amsterdam, both experts in their fields, are working to better the relationships between computers and humans. They are developing software that can detect emotions expressed through facial features. This technology can be used in schools to detect how students feel about their classes. Each year many students fail classes purely because the class is boring to them. If the software detects that a student is broed in class, then the instructer can change the corriculum to make it more interesting or involving for the students.\n\nThis facial recognition technology can be used for the market of consumers also. If a consumer is presented with an ad that makes them smile, it would be smart to show them more ads like that one. This will increase the expose of ads that make the consumer happy, thus prompting the consumer to perhaps purchase the product that they smiled at. This would not only benifit the consumer by recieving products they enjoy, but it would benefit the producer of the produst by making a profit off of the consumer.\n\nThis is why emotional recognition technology is benefitial to the general society. It is able to beefit schools and education, and it is able to benefit companies selling products. This techology is the next step in developing a more educated and connected society. So why not further pursue the development and evolution of this software.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That Venus is the closest plant to earth,almost has the same density and size to earth but is the second planet away from the sun. It can go up to 800 degress fahrenheit on a average scale has 90 times more atmospheric pressure than earth can crush a submarine that is bulit to wistand the water pressure deep below. Venus is more hotter than mercury which is the closest plant to the sun has erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lightning dispiet the harsh elements and lack of life support. Has some similary features to earth like valleys,mountains,and craters. NASA is planing to send humans to Venus to study it's natural elements to see if it's suitable for humans.\n\nNASA is still planing on making a trip to Venus but it will be a diffuclt change to acivemen do to it's harsh climate. Their plan is to sent scientists to float above the landscape. But the ship orbiting above the planet can only provide limited sight on the ground because most light couldn't go through the dense of the atmosphere. They could not take any miterals from Venus they have to get up close and personal to the ground dispiet the harsh cilmate. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels not easy conditions but should be survivable for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience take time something When able wait hurry pushing shuvinig rushing like thing bad happen Being patient also means understanding come tolerents calm cool peace love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you guys ever wanted to be able to get different oppurtunities while helping other people? If your answer is yes I think joning the seagoing cowboy program is perfect for you. let me tell you some reasons why you might like it.Maybe the reasons will change your mind if your answer was no.\n\nOne reason you might want to join is you might want to see and explore other places.It took me two weeks to make it the United States and a month to get to China. Thats a perfect oppurtunity to see different parts of the land.Maybe you like to rescue animals.I rescued alot of animals during the trip I helped feed and groom them and help them find a home.\n\nThis job is not all just work.You can also have so mush fun with the people you work with. When me and my team returned and unloded th animals thats when the fun began.We all played basketball,volleyball games in the empty holds were the animals were housed.We also had tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling and different games also help pass time.\n\nMy most faviorite part about being on this team is being able to help people.Not because I need to because I want to.Being on this team is like having a second family that is always there for you.This job might open up a whole new world fore you.But you will never know inless you give it a try.\n\nIn conclusion this program is absolutly amazing.You are able to see and do so many things.You make a family,you help others,and so much more.Maybe the job still is not for buat as I said before you will never no inless you give it a try.In my opinion i sugest you give the program a chance for all you know you will end up loving it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars nowadays are a big part of our lifes, they take us to where we need to go and help us go to far away places. Even though cars are important in our lifes, there are alot of advantages to limited car usage. Some places such as VAUBAN, Germany have given up their cars. \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park--large garages at the edge of the development, where car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" This results in less people owning or having cars and reducing green house gas emissions from tailpipes. \"Passangers cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gass emmissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (source 1). Private ownership of cars are slowly choking our cities, if we limit our car usage little by little it may have a huge effect in our ecosystem.\n\nIn continuation, there have been situations where the air pollution got so bad that they had to ban driving so they could clear the air. For example in Paris, \"after days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of global city\"(source 2). The drivers were fined a 22-euro fine if they did not leave their cars at home. In the end the smog cleared and the French party recinded the ban for odd-numbered plates. This is one of the many examples that proves that just by having less cars driving around it eventually changes the way the atmosphere looks and cleans the atmosphere a little.\n\nSmog is a sign of high air pollution, it indicates that the air is not healthy and this can be harmful to our enviroment. \"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" As indicated in the passage(source 3), \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", just one day without cars can reduce smog imagine if we go weeks without a huge number of cars driving around. This idea might sound crazy to some people but it has suprisingly helped the enviroment. This however is not the only advantage of reducing car usage. Some other advantages are that if we go to our jobs in a bike everyday or just go for a walk instead of a drive we are also being more productive and active, hence making us healthier.\n\nAlthough some people might find leaving their cars behind is a bad idea, studies have shown that people who do so gets used to the idea and find less reason to resume the habit of car commuting. For example instead of driving to the beach we should ride our bikes or take public busses to get there. Without cars we learn to appreciate the beauty of nature more and notice things about the place were we live that we have never seen before. I have came to notice that when you are driving you really dont notice things because you are to busy focusing on the road, but when u have a walk around your neighborhood or anywhere for that matter you see things you have never noticed before and you leaarn to appreciate nature more. The idea of leaving our cars behind is hard for some people, but if you think about the effect it will have on the enviroment it is worth it.\n\nIn conclusion, car-free cities might sound like a joke to some people but it is helping out in clensing our enviroment increasingly. As indicated in the passage, \"The End Of Car Culture\", \"If the pattern persists--and many sociologists believe it will--it will have beneficial implications for carbon emmissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of Americas emissions, just behind power plants.\" We are responsible for how our enviroment is going to look like in the future years, wouldnt it be better for it to look like a beautiful clear sunny day or a foggy grey fuss? Quiting a habit like driving is very hard but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir grateful In paragraph author says My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful The author proves says grateful Also paragraph author says I always grateful parents love sacrifice That also shows grateful author Also paragraph says I ve often told admiration strength perseverance I thanked repeatedly That shows grateful author thanked parents Finally paragraph author explains learned true definition family Then says And I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love That also shows grateful author says gracious neighborhood many things learned The mood author created grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical,\"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" it appears to show that there is a face on Mars.\n\nThere is a scientist that I work with that thinks that it was made by aliens, but I don't think so. I don't think so because there has never been any real sightings of aliens and there is not enough research to prove that it was made by aliens. Here's why.\n\nFirst off, there has never been any sightings of real aliens. People have been trying to see if there are actually is any and other life forms in our solar system. People have claimed that they've seen aliens, but there hasn't been any evidence that makes that true. I think that it is a natural landform because there has been many other objects on other planets that look like they had to be made from aliens, but they soon found out that it was not.\n\nSecond, there is really not enough research covering this specific topic. Yes, NASA has taken pictures of it through out many years, but thats all they've done. No human has ever stepped foot on Mars so no one really knows if it is really made by aliens. Though the pictures that NASA took looks like a face and people think thats there's no way a person could do, that makes me beleive that if humans can't do it, then neither could aliens.\n\nAs time goes by and NASA takes more pictures of this object, they will soon realise that this \"face\" is just an object that is on Mars, and that it is not created by any aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you be willing to join the exquisite Seagoing program? To help the many countaries that were in ruins,the 44 nations made the UNRRA.The UNRRA stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation, but our program is going to help them too. We have a myriad amount of exuberant people that are ready to explore the world. Our program takes you all around the world to help countries that don't have food, see beautiful sights you've never seen before, and to learn all about the places we'll go.\n\nWe will be like a spaceship zooming all over the world. We will be the altruistic people in the world ready to make our mark. The Seagoing Cowboy program is one of the best programs of all time. If you can't believe that, then I guess you better join the club then. Our club need to help so many people that are suffering.\n\nWell, I guess you better be signing up now. You are allowed to sign up at any time. You are also welcome to take the bus we will be providing for people to ride on. I can't wait to go on the best trips, especially the trips that we can see what was left from Worl War II. We can put the remainings of World World II in a couple of mueseums. When we put the remainings in the muesuems, everybody can see what great deeds we did and then we can bring food and make food to the people that suffer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is a very interesting landmark. Some people believe that aliens created this mask while NASA believes the Face is just a natural landform. There are very important reasons why the Face is just an ordinary landform and this essay will list them all. I will try to convince a person why the Face is a natural landform.\n\nFirst of all, the Face can't possibly be made by aliens because pictures show that it is just a natural landform and not an alien monument. This was very disappointing to some but it was the truth. Evidence of the pictures still didn't satisfy some believers. They still believed that the alien monument was the Face and that there are aliens in the world. So again, a camera went up on the MGS to look through the clouds. Once again, the pictures revealed it was not an alien monument. Still, people continued to believe that the alien markings were hidden by the haze. Many people wanted to believe that the monument was from aliens but really it was just an ordinary landform.\n\nStrong alien believers took to thinking that NASA was hiding something from everyone. This doesn't make any sense because why would NASA put the picture of the Face out for everyone to see when they wanted to hide aliens from being alive. Also, aliens would be a great discovery to NASA and would help the institution. Everyone would want proof of the aliens and NASA would make millions of dollars if they got pictures of these \"aliens\". This again was proven false and showed that the \"alien monument\" was really just a natural landform that formed over years of rocks and dust.\n\nEveryone was stuck on the idea that aliens were real and that's why the Face is there. But in reality no one has any evidence of aliens even being alive. Now people think that the Face is proof, but again they are wrong. For a third time, Mars Global Surveyor took some pictures of the landmark on a cloudless day. It was a very clear picture that couldn't hide anything at all. They searched the whole perimeter and there wasn't any small shacks, airplanes, or pyramids hiding to prove the opinion of aliens being alive. Thus, it finally showed the majority of alien believers that the Face was an actual landmark that wasn't built by aliens. They actually found that it resembled Middle Butte which is a similar height to the Face.\n\nThere is too much evidence to still believe that aliens have created the Face. There is no proof that aliens have built this landform and that, in actuality, aliens are even a real, living thing. Even though there is an enormous amount of evidence there are still some people who live for aliens. The Face, as a natural landform, has so much reasoning that there is no way around it. This incredible natural structure is, in fact, not built by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is another debates today whether a seat of learning ,such as university or academy, should serve as a logical path for recent high school graduates. It is mostly agreed, that continuing education possess a series of advantages such as practice-oriented learning and possible tight knots with the industry professionals. Furthermore, the absence of a standart skillset for career-starters and lack of network play as major drawbacks of formal education skipping. The essay will outline both viewpoints and the final opinion will be presented in conclusion.\n\nFirst and foremost, investments in full-cycle education, upon a Master Degree, have been considering the smartest decision throughout centuries, relying not on skills and knowledge obtained, but on informal connections and industry acquaintances. Through the educational process, pupils had built a strong friendship, which often outcome in communities creation and business partnership, especially desirable in sharing first risks during a venture. For instance, well-renowned colleges, such as that in Oxford or Yale, have had a tradition to come withtogether a studentship , deepen their roots into national government and international politics. All in all, one of the major pluses of being educated formally is to obtain useful links with exposure to exclusive and highly prestigious spheres.\n\nSecondly, among the number of negative sides is a practical inability to being admitted to top-notch international firms because of necessary skillset miss. The point is that universities help to gain skills needed for attaining an internship and become more experienced, thus pretending on higher positions within a company's hierarchy. For example, there is no room for analysts in investment banking or consulting firms , which stand apart from other career paths as the most desirable and lucrative, without any relevant experience in the field. To summarise, academic faculties always aware of most recent career changes, and will just simplified the career start, when you are in the formal programme. \n\nTo summarise, even if a poor network will not harm you heavily, for the enterpreneurship way as an example, not having the ability to meet interviewer expectation on professional programmes knowledge does not let you put the leg in the door. Thus, it is absolutely recommended to become literate in a particular field with formal studies, having chances to jumping high in a career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did aliens create an amazing masterpiece on Mars or are you just imagining that they did? Aliens surely do not exist or are for sure not on Mars. It is theretithized that aliens have formed or made an object that seems to look like a human face. I think that aliens didn't do it in many different ways. Such as, this object resembles different landforms that co-exist on Earth. Also, by using our satelittes, we would've already seen pictures of them. Finally, many different factors could've made it to look as if resembling a human face. Just because we wonder about something, doesn't mean that it's really there.\n\nFirst of all, this object resembles different landforms that co-exist on Earth. Different landforms that it resenmbles are rivers, volcanos, and mountains. This closely resembles the Snake River Plain in Idaho because of it's swirly indentions. Also in one of the pictures it looks as if it have hot boiling lava bubbling inside of it. And finally it shows high elevations such as the Rocky Mountains. This \"alien created object\" looks very similar to the many different landforms on Earth. This is one of the many reasons why it was not made by aliens but if there were any aliens wouldn't we have known about them by now?\n\nConcequently, using our satelittes, we would've already seen pictures of the aliens if they lived on Mars. With all of the advanced technology that we have today you would've thought that our satelittes would've taken pictures of the aliens, right? Some reasons why we should've already seen aliens are that we have satelittes that can take high definition pictures, not only but also; we've launched many different programs towards Mars to take pictures but none of them have came back with positive results for aliens. And finally the rovers that we have sent to Mars have come back with little information about vital items needed to survive on a planet. With high definition pictures we can tell if there are any shelters, food, water, etc. on Mars, however there's not. Then again many different space progams hav launched satelittes to take pictures, but there is no vital signs. Finally the rocket propelled rovers that have landed on Mars have came back with little information about items needed to survive. There it is, another good reason and reality why aliens did not create this human looking landform, but it might've just been positioning why we thought that it looked human.\n\nFinally, many different factors could've made it to look as if resembling a human face. Different factors such as the position of the sun, clouds, and or temperature could've made this \"plain\" look human. The sun might've made the shadows of different hills look like eyes and a mouth. The clouds could've covered or angled the sun to make different shadows on the hilly area. Maybe the heat waves deformed the plateu to resemble a human. Nobody knows for sure and unless the exact same situation happens again we might find out, but until then I beleive that it is not possible that aliens made this landform.\n\nIt is possible that aliens exist and I don't doubt that they live without of our reach but I think that it is not possible for them to exist this close to us and we have not found out about it yet, therefore they are not real.\n\nEveryone wonders what is beyond our reach, but just because you imagine it does that neccesarily mean that it is real? I think that all the examples like it looks like landforms on Earth, we should've seen picture of aliens, and many different factors might have effected our view are definitly reasons why aliens did not create this. Wondering and believing are both good things but if you don't focus on the truth of reality, you will not suceed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nI am writing you concerning a topic that is very important to our country, and the citizens that preside in it. The electoral college is the current method of determining who will be elected as the president of the United states of America. As you know, it does so by allowing our citizens to vote for electors that then choose who they want as president for us. Citizens will most often vote for an elector that has sworn to vote for either the democratic or republican party's candidates for president. However, I don't quite agree with this method of election. Through my research on this subject, I have discovered that not only do these citizens not have the access to vote directly for who they want to run their country, but also that many electors go back on their word and vote for another party's candidate. I believe the system should be changed and the president should be elected through popular vote, and I'm not alone, according to a Gallup poll taken in 2000, over 60% of the population agrees with me.\n\nIf the popular vote elects the president, every citizen will have their own choice on who they want as a president. In an electoral college, many people will merely have their votes casted aside becausetheir decisions or thoughts aren't the same as eveyone else in their state. Though some people say an electoral college is positive because it requires the candidateto have more than just regional appeal, but if people in that state like a specific candidate, even if they vote for an elector, the rest of their state may not like that candidate, and that person's vote will be cast away.\n\nAlso, the electoral college doesn't always follow the peoples' vote. For example, if there were to be a tie in the electoral college, the election would be given to the\n\nHouse of Representatives. Since many people vote for a different party candidate than who they vote for, for the House of Representatives, they would not get their vote for president counted for anything, and the House may choose the president they don't want, without getting a say in any of it. Not to mention the 2000 election when Al\n\nGore got more votes overall, but Bush won the presidency due to the unfair, outdated system of the electoral college. The electoral college puts the decision of who will be the president into a couple hundred peoples' hands, instead of every American citizen.\n\nAnother reason for changing the method to popular vote is the fact that all of the electors count the same. Since each state only counts for one electoral vote, the one elector from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, will count for the same as the 55 electors from, California, who represent 35 million voters. That simply isn't fair because it's the same as saying the opinions of only 500,000 voters in Wyoming are as influencial and important as the entire 35 million voters' opinions from\n\nCalifornia. The fact that not all American citizens, promised to be able to vote for who will lead their country and influence their everyday life, are able to do so is absurd.\n\nMany people argue and say that just one vote won't make a difference, but there are 34,500,000 people in California alone that are being disregarded and not counted for anything more than the 500,000 in Wyoming.\n\nWhy should the people living in smaller states have more influence than those with larger populations? Why shouldn't those 34.5 million people in California be able to make their own decision and choose their own vote for the President? The entire population of every single state in the United States of America, that has the legal right to do so, should be able to vote, and to have their vote actually counted for something instead of just having their decision made for them by someone they've never even met. With the popular vote deciding who will be president, everyone will matter just the same, which is how it should be since we are all created equal, and we all should have the equal power to decide how our country will be governed and who will govern it, we should all be counted; not just the small percentage that is at the top. Thank you for your time and consideration.\n\nYour fellow Floridian and American,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A New Technology\n\nAre Facial Action Coding Systems the way of the future? In this article titled \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author explains a new way of technology. This technology is called the Facial Action Coding System and it gives computers a way to recongnize a persons emotion based on their facial expression. The author also includes that this technology could be implemented in schools in the future. I believe that using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is valuable because it can help determine if a smile is not genuine, or if a student is confused and needs help.\n\nThis technology should be implemented in schools because it can tell if a smile is not genuine. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful (D'Alto par.8). By having a computer tell if a smile is not genuine while a student is researching something for a project or taking a online test this could be very helpful. For example a student is researching something for a group project and is having trouble conveying to the group members that he/she does not like the direction the project is going in. The computer could be able to recongnize the fake smile the child is putting on and alert the teacher to solve the problem. Another reason that using this technology is valuable is because it can help determine if a student is confused and needs help. \"A classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"(D'alto par.6). This would help in situations where a student is taking an online test and is confused ,the computer can detect the confused expression on the childs face. Then the online test can be changed to fit the students needs. This technology can also help when a student is reading taking an online test and is becoming bored. The content can be modified to be less laborious and more interesting to the student.\n\nTechnology is advancing every day and soon computers in classrooms will be able to detect students emotions. This article went into detail about a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This technology could be very valuable to read students' emotional expressions because it can help determine if a smile is not geniune, or if a student is confused and needs help. Maybe one day computers will stop lagging too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studying Venus is worthy because it use to be just like earth and thers alot of things we still need to discover because it could be habbitable for humans to lie on it later in life and if with the right tecnology we could explore and learn about the planet more.\n\nIn paragraph 4 the text states \"if our sister planet is so inhositable why are scientists even discusiing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. Today, Venus still has some Earth like features that are analogeous to those on Earth. Also in paragraph 5 the text states \" Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions but surviable for humans.\n\nthisa rpoves that venus is worth the pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are an everyday thing, you need them to get to work, to school, to pick up your kids, but what happens when the cars drive themselves? People have long dreamed of cars that drive themselvs, but most people dont know that google has had them sence 2009. Those cars arent compleatly independent, they need a persion to control them, or rather \"help\" them, like on high trafic areas, or around crashes. there are many advantiges and disadvantiges to the automatic car, but should we have them? Well, there are many reasions we should.\n\nIts no surprize that every single car is as save as phisicly posable. At google, there cars have drove half a million miles without a crash. thats because every car is compleatly loaded with sencers to keep that from happening, let alone the persion in control of the car. another amazing feature this car has is that you can not use the automatic drive without both hands on the wheel, so the driver must pay atenton. That also makes it imposable for texting at the wheel.\n\nIts no secret that aoutmatic cars are the future, with its advanced safty features and its convenence. All this car really needs is suport. Tons of people are compleatly against this idea of cars driving themselvs, but they have no reason to. Its safer, and easyer. This car will only get better with time, so hopefully, everyone will come around in time. so know you know what happens when cars can drive themselves, the real question is, will my story drive you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "people less exercise enjoying great outdoors They re people less family friends times I say computers This machine great resource people starting get adicted We need reach messgae people Yesterday I went local library found computers library All computers filled people line people ready go next I ask people homework said teenager Another come paly I also ask stay fit I nt like fit said beautiful lady CAPS fit nt esay always computer said teenager The response I got people unbelievable If nt stay fit going survivie dieases cancer This reason pently witj fit I nt know I care family I would never spend rest life infront computer instead love ones In I surprise find projects homework research take half time family Do computer find resort friends fanily ca nt minutes The great doors one best places quit amazing large area If looking doors computer thats time could family member ever My father says great buit live The days getting shorter lets live like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone knows important laugh Everyone different laugh powerful moving devastating hurtful Someone said Laughter shortest distance two people I agree statement everyone different laugh laughs many different reasons laughing powerful someone make laugh upset unhappy could change everything feeling Laughing way connecting others laugh good time hurt need someone Laughs surprising never know going laugh could little joke funny elaborate story told Over I moving back I nervous scared new kid Even though I knew people I used live nothing going change fact I new kid Not long I moved I got reconnected old friends mine I known since second grade I lived My friends I always good time laughing crazy All us girls lot past years nice see talk happened us gone done thing became friends different people still close friends time It good spend time see much changed We changed lot past years And fought caused drama us moved away almost everything together since little kids probably still friends high school collage almost school would starting three friends mine wanted something together one last time school started So planed one big sleepover one friends lives able come sleepover us It like second grade I nt think I ever laughed hard life Not long got laughing talking great time That night sleeping thinking something fun friends decided would fun go asked mom said long nt go far way home phones us case need call pick us It still little early waited get dark walked store street house bought bags bags toilet paper It still nt dark late enough go watched movies went mall stuck feet hot tub I nice back old friends We stayed finally dark late put black clothes owned disguised selves would could recognize us looked pretty convincing We put big jackets could hide toilet paper jackets someone saw us walking would nt see toilet paper We tried quit sneak houses dint work loud could stop talking laughing We loud could nt hear kids late bikes also They got closer close realized guy friends know school got board went bike ride They helped us houses getting really late decided head back This one I never forget much fun agreed never laughed much anything It hard year us great see familiar faces spend time true friends like used", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "T\n\nhese two articles both shows reasons why we should limit car usage. I know people are going to be like, \" How am i going to get to work?\", \" How am i going to do this and that with out my car?\", but if you sit down and really think about it there are some very good reasons why us fellow citizens should limit our car usage.\n\nOn paragraph 3 source 1: In German Suburb Life Goes Without Cars, it says \" when i had a car I was always tense. Im much happier this way, a media trainer and mother of two as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and he chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor\" in this quote it talks about how a mom is going green and starts walking and bicycling instead of driving every day. If you drive everyday you lose alot of money thru out the year spending on gas, car repairs etc. and you pullute the air, now a days the air that we breath is getting worse and worse by the years passed but we could fix it if we limit our car usage. With going green and limited driving you could start walking and get good excersise, our world to day not doing so good and one main reason is because of pullution and obesity. You could knock both of those out by just simply walking to the store instead od drving and losing gas. Cars are graeat dont get me wrong, they have been the a big impact om our world but it changed over the years as people started buying cars and gas prices and oil prices are going up, we should all just go green for a while.\n\nIt will help if you just stop drving one time a week, that will make a impact to our society. I dont think people shouold be fined for driving a car that they payed for and that is theirs, if you could talk well and a good persuader you could change the mind of the citizens. Hopefully the world changes and goes green a little more eery thing helps.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient hand thing one day I learned lesson It mom woked say lot When got car I didnt know I going paitent whole day First way market got stuck traffic jam mins hour When finally made market stand line mins I told mum Im ready leave said I patient inpatient bad thing After left take grandma doctors took almost two hours call name take another get checked After went shopping clothes shoes mall crowded busy We mall like four hours time standing lines Finally went home time mom start cooking I learned I need work patient part life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are alot of ways we can get to one place to another and by using drivers but using a driveless car can be dangerous. It can be dangerous because the technology can fail and people could get hurt. Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.\n\nIn reality google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. their cars hae driven more than half a million miles with out a crash. but so far google cars arent truly driverless they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadworker accidents.\n\nSensors are nothing new, of course. in the 1900's automakers used speed senors at the wheels in the creation of antilockbrakes. within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and resopond to the danger of out- of-control skids or rollovers. The information from the snsntors can cause the car to apply brakes on individ wheels and reduce power from the engine allowing far better resoponse and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nFurther improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving taks on their own. In 2013, BMW announced the development of traffic jam assistant. the car can handle driving fuctions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\n\nIn fact none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents, this means the human driver need to remain alert and be ready if something serious happens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author of the story says that venus is very worthy pursuit because it is the closets to earth. What he means by saying closest is terms like density and size of venus is the same of earth. The author also says venus is our planetary neigbor. Venus does orbit the sun at diffrent speeds then us so that could be a diffulcty for us to get to venus to. we usaully are closer in time to mars then we are to venus at times.\n\nHumans have already tried landing diffrent types of of space crafts to venus. those space crafts have all failed or have not survived more then a couple of hours on the surface. It would be very hard to survive in venus because of its condition its covered by blankets of corbon dioxide, clouds are corrosive sulfiric acid, 800 degrees weather, and the pressure is 90 times greater then earths. but venus could have all been eath like at one point. Venus could have been covored in oceans and supported many forms of life. scientist want to make blimp like cars so the humans that are sent to venus wouldnt have to touch the ground of all those gases.\n\nThis is why scientist think it a worthy pursuit to keep studying venus. they are getting closer and closer to overcoming this challange. they have allot of options on how to survive on venus. Once they get it it can help us with allot of things. thats why scientist wont stop studying venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I LOCATION waiting line water roller coaster line really long line called easy pass wait hour go machine get eazy pass ticket decided wait really long line So half hour later went I started get really board I asked dad wanted play game called slapps So played little went past half way started regreting stay huge line already hour move half way market About ten minutes later I stopped playing slapps dad hands beat red hands barrely even red So waited waited three quarters way After ten twenty minutes later boarding raft We went cave stopped like fourty feet splashed huge amount water It turns wait worth So time I showed patients", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that computers should be used to identify human emotions? I think they should. There are many ways to help people if we used the technology. It could be used in schools to help teachers teach students, it could be used to tell if someone is lying, or it could be used just for fun.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System (FACS) can be used many ways in schools. It can be used to help teachers find a more easy way to help students learn in school. The FACS can help teachers see if the students are happy the way that they are learning. If he system reads that the student are bored the teachers should try to teach the studens a better or more fun way.\n\nThe technology can be the new lie detector test. Police could use the tecnology to question people. The FACS could read someons face to see if they are lying, scared or nervous. The FACS could also read if someone is telling the truth. it could read if someone is not making a face or a neutural face.\n\nThe FACS could also be just for fun. It can read a friends face if you tell a joke, if they do not like it and they make a fake smile the system could read that too. But if they really do like it the system can read their face muscles and show its a true smile. If the FACS could be used by anybody, it could be used for a lot of different fun things.\n\nThe FACS could be used for many things that we do in our lives. it could help teachers, policemen, and even you. Now, do you think that you would ever use the Facial Action Coding System?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The architects Empire State building faced several obstacles constructing mooring mast One would purpose suppose serve docking dirigibles original design building could handle In paragraph says A thousand foot dirigibles would add stress buildings frame Because realization make sixtythousand dollars worth modifications paragraph obstacle would face would additions new floors They originlly designed building floors addition mooring mast builders make extra top detail could observatory boarding dockThese first two obstacles although difficult nevertheless solvable Some obstacles builders face fixable The first dirigible s filled hydrogen highly flamable Due location Empire State building downtown New York little accident could cause huge problems city Also thwy take consideration winds top building The Empire State building would high altitude would high winds These winds would cause dirigibles unstable also safe With last two obstacles mooring mast still built served design instead dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever looked a photo of someone and wonder how they feel? Yes well now you can Thomas Huang form the neckman institute for Advance Science at the University of Amsterdam. Im all for this Facial Action Coding Sytem. It could show us how people long before use felt when getting there picture painted of picture taken. people could know how family member and friends felt before they past away. what if we could know how animals felt with the FACS?\n\nWe dont know how people felt back then, we didn't know what they were going through, but with the FACS we could get a general idea of how they felt at that time in there life. Say you had a family member that passed away that you never met before but you want to know if they were a happy, sad, or mad person you could use the FACS to know so you dont have to hear it from someone else. Wouldnt it be cool to know what animals are feeling? If this FACS could show us how humans felt wouldnt you like to konw what your pets are feeling if your pet was sad and you didnt know,but you use the FACS you would know and then you and do something with your pet to keep the happy. Now you might be asking how does this FACS work well ehrn the computer constructs a 3-D computer modle of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. examples your frontalis pars lateralis muscles when you raise your eyebrows you are suprised, your orbicular oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. these reasons i just listed are why i support the FACS!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this passage the author talks about one of our plantes in the solar system named Venus. The author talks about earth like Venus is and reason why they cant go and reason why they can go and give differnt examples on how we could get that done. The author also talks about the natural stuff like valcanoes and earthquakes, and the conditions of Venus.\n\nIn paragraph one the author give us some little facts about Venus such has how we can see Venus from Earth itself and another name for Venus that many people may have never heard of\"Evening Star\".\n\nIn paragraph two the author talks about Venus is Earth's \"twin\" and missions to get to Venus. A spacecraft hasnt landed on Venus in 3 decades due to the harsh conditions. That is no excuse. The mission to land on Venus is a challenge at hand but it can be survived by humans. There were differnt ways they could approach Venus. The 1st way is to basically hotair ballon on Venus and the 2nd way is to just land. Its very challenging but can be done.\n\nIn paragraph 3 they talk about how Venus is earthlike. Some examples are that Venus has oceans, valcanoes, lighting strikes, earthquaks and much more.\n\nIn the next serval paragraphs the author talks about how and why they could get to Venus. SO they would use a spaceship to get there but would hotair ballon on the planet itself to stau away from everything. The only problem is there isnt technolgy good enough to render photos that are taken from the ground below. There fore if they really want smaples and all that thye have to get on the ground. Its survivable but the conditions are harsh and challenging.\n\nThe author then wraps up the story talking about how we strive to meet these challenges and where it can lead us. I feel like we should amd should be able to study Venus from a close range. I think the dangers can be overcomed with lots of training and simulations that are inspried by Venus's harsh condistions. I also belive that we can survie venus with good technology. I know we have it we just done want to release it into the world which makes sense but at the same time we could have billions of people living on 2 differnt planets. Our technology is not quite there yet though, but we're getting somewhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses supporting claims very well in his article. Stating how we could use machanical computers to put on venus that can withstand the 800 degrees fahrenheit. Where regular computers would not survive. Or the use of silicone, in the article it states that the silicone was able to withstand 3 weeks of venuses harsh eviorment. Or to use space crafts.\n\nWith these types of advancements this could help us learn more about venus. And how its features are very similar to earth. Which might have had water or even life forms at one point. Studying venus could help us discover new technology or materials. But it would come with challenges the idea of using a spacecraft to hover around venus orbit, could help us but the dense cloud cover would make it difficult to see.\n\nThis resherch could help us find new ways to explore space. Which could help us not be limited to what we can achive from going forward in space exploration. From new materials to information to why venus became what it is today. With this information maybe one day we could make it on venuses surface but only time will tell.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im against driverless cars, because they are not safe. Some people may think that driverless cars are reliable and cool, but driverless cars can only do certain things. drivers still have to drive the cars when its their turn and most likely people wouldnt be aware of their surrounding, because they would lose track of the road. Driverless cars work off of a special copmputer and could be dangerous becuase the computer may suffer malfunctions and cause the car to go off the road, run into things, or any type to put the driver in danger.\n\nAlso, driverless cars are dangerous because it could cause wrecks and put maufactures in a horrible place. because the costs and expenses of the wrecks would come back on them. I would get bored sitting in a car waiting for it to be my turn to drive. Most likey I would fall asleep and lose track of the road. it would also cause me to be on my phone and not paying attention to the road. Driverless cars is a mistake for the future. Maufactures would have to complete a simple computer system that everyone could get familiar with, becuase all people do not know all the aspects of a computer and doesnt know how to work one.\n\nWhen\n\ndriving driverless cars the same rules should still apply as to driving a motorized vehicle. You hav to be on your P's and Q's while driverless cars, becuase anything could happen in a quick second. Even though GM has developed a seat vibrator to alert when the driver needs to take over, but still not safe because the chair could stop working and then the driver wont know what to do. Driving should be fun in a way and not boring just sitting and waiting on your turn to drive. Not all people think driverless cars are safe, because they think about what could happen if the computer would stop working.\n\nHowever most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. When its comes to driving you dont think just about yourself, but for other people to because it would be the driver responsibilty to be aware of their surrounding with pedestrians and also have to think about special needs kids.Cars are more safer when the driver has contorl of the car at all times rather than sitting in the car waiting for your turn to drive. Why have to stay alert and wait on your turn when u could do that yourselrf by drving a motorized vehicle.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are not safe, and I dont agree with it, because they are not reliable and makes driving boring. also, having to stay alert and waiting on your turn to drive can cause people to go to sleep, and lose track of their surroundings while waiting. It can cause uneccesary accidents where as maufactures would have to pay for the costs of one's car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A driverless public taxi system? Or complications waiting to happen? Driverless cars are becoming a thing that most car companies want to get their hands on designing. After considering some of the cons to driverless cars such as; they are not completly driverless yet, they conflict with the existing laws of the road, and in case of of an accident who would be to blame?\n\nDriverless cars may seem like a great idea at first, until you actually look in to the idea and its complications more. They haven't made a completely driverless car yet. There are several cars out there like the BMW Traffic Jam Assistant car and The Google car who can steer, brake, and accelerate themselves. The cars are not completely driverless, the cars still have to alert the driver in the car when pulling into or out of driveways, approching roadwork, accidents, or other complicated traffic issues. While the car is driving this will allow some drivers to become disracted (by eating, texting, talking on the phone, oher people in the car,\n\nand a number of other things), this could cause them to not hear the car when it tells the driver to take over to drive through what ever obstacles could be occuring. With a distracted driver like this the likleyhood of accidents is sure to increase. With accidents come blame, and who is to blame if the car malfunctions? Their will be many cases from accidents just trying to decided who is to blame for the accident. Was the driver at fault for owning a car that malfunctioned and didnt tell them to take over? or is the manufacturer at fault for their car not doing what was said to suposedly do? There would have to be some type of law made to determine who is at fault for the accident in what cases. In addition to that law they would have to revaluate and modify other laws just to make driverless cars legal to drive. Laws today are written assuming that drivers have they're hands on the wheel\n\nand are in control of the car the whole time, but with driverless cars those same assumptions cannot be applied. Because, of this today there are\n\nonly 4 states that allow limited use of semidriverless cars.\n\nSo are driverless cars really worth all of the complications that come with them? is it worth making a completley new set of laws to apply to he cars? Playing the blame game?\n\nThe increase of accidents? For these reason i suggest you think about how cool a driverless car really is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, the author tells about a new technology called the F.A.C.S. It stands for Facial Action Coding System. The system enables computers to identify human emotions. I think that the use of this technology, to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Yes, there are some aspects of the technology that cause some concerns to people, sure.\n\nThough it may be difficult to except this new technology for some, but in my opinion I would have to say that I think this is a valuable form of technology. They gave the example of how they used the famous known painting by Leonardo da Vinci,\n\nMona Lisa. This painting includes the portrait of Mona Lisa. She is smiling in the slightest with her hair down and her emotions appear to be happy. The Facial Action Coding System (F.A.C.S.) used the painting to see if it could recognize her emotions. The results appeared to be \"83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry\". Of course we cannot really know if that was her real feeling at the time but the system concluded that was what she was feeling at the time.\n\nThey make the point that we can tell if a friend of ours is happy, sad, angry, fearful, etc.. Though we can not tell for sure, and we definitely would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys all the possible emotions we have. The computer system would make it so we would be able to identify what emotions we were having if needed. The new computer software would store similar anatomical information as electronic code. The F.A.C.S. enables the computers to identify our emotions to an extent that we can not. The system would be helpful in many different situations.\n\nIf we had computers that could do such things as they said in office buildings, hospitals, etc..\n\nit would help out a ton. In office buildings they could be used by many people to determine if you're happy with your job or what you're doing at the time being. In hospitals it would be helpful to determine how the patient is feeling. You could put one computer in every room to help and see if a persons facial expressions could tell how they feel at the moment. It would benefit the nurses or the doctors so they would know how often to check up on the patient.\n\nThe most helpful place they could be would be in schools. Many teachers give out assingments on the computer most of the time now. If we had the F.A.C.S. in our schools it would help to tell the teachers if we are learning. Our facial expressions give off a lot more information then we would think. As the author said in the article in paragraph six, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" If we had the Facial Action Coding System, it could help the teachers by reporting to them if we seem like we either have the information learned or if we were having difficulties with the homework.\n\nOur face tells a lot, according the the article and Dr. Huang. With the F.A.C.S most of them can all be told. It is a valuable system that most schools should have to determine the emotional expressions each student has. It could raise grades if the teachers would know if we were struggling just by the facial expression we make while doing our homework, test and projects. It is a very advanced system that could cause some problems for sure but the benefits would be outstanding.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This type of technology that can read human emotions should happen, this being made already whether we say yes or no to it its gonna happen no matter what anyone saids. This technology that can read peoples emotion. This could become greater coming impact to the future in someway it could help us. Lets say if we were catch a crimmnal we would know what there thinking depedning on thier emotion if there scared happy sad, if man kind can have this type of technology then we would never have to worry about how our girlfriend feeling and they wouldnt have to go through alot trouble trying hint at us that there mad or sad we just pull a computer or sum sorts and know what there feeling. Being able to tell human emotions. this technology would be able tell teachers or parents would know that soemthing is wwrong with us. this type of technology ciuld be used on students and teachers could how we understand and feel about these feelings we have while were in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People use computers everyday There s many reasons way re always They could talking one family relatives Also re probally looking jobs There s many things people nt tell lives Many people use computer talk one old friends catch things Also could talking one family relatives There s thing called webcam people use could see one another Buisnesses people always computer need print documents probally got send something another country Buisnesses people also lots work computer They still exercise quick jog also thats choice want stay health plus re busy people Other hand people go computer buisness people re talking family member old friend students parents Tons students projects everyday got computer look information Parents hand also help children also talk relatives looking new home job If people busy let work want need Once done could excerise nt want people told go take walk anything healthy s lost We ca nt They re getting better everyday s effecting us effecting If want computer re also getting bad eyesight much light", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientist at NASA may have seen a earth form on Mars. Scientist have carmis and tecnogley that can see if they are lying or not I believe that there is or was a life form on Mars. 1979,1998, and 2001.\n\nIn 1979, a Mars Global surveyor picked up then frist picurtie on Mars. They say the face is a human facce. \"New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reval the Faxe on Mars for what it really is a mesa.\" so by see that it is a mesa it could or could not be true what do you think?\n\nApril 5, 1998, there was another face on Mars but this time it was more clern but not alot. \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image frist appeared on JPL web site, revaling a natural landform.\" they say there is no alien monument after all! Do you think that is ture?\n\nMay 24, 2001 something happend around Mars and NASA got it on carman. They say they seen another face on Mars. \"NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing site for its sister ship Viking 2, When it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" They say it could come from the Red Planet called Cydonia.\n\nThough all that I still think there is a good canse that there is a human or something on Mars planet no matter were it came from. Now I don't it came from CYdonia if there is a planet that is called that. With All the years they put in to see if it is true or not and camrose picked up face so i think it is true. They first picurte on Mars was 1976, then 1998, and last they seen it in 2001.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the advancement of modern technology and globalization,in this contemporary era,scientists tell us several tasks are essential for our health and others are awful. In spite of realizing that millions of individuals pursue harmful acts.In this essay,we will discuss the main causes of this phenomenon and also suggest techniques to alleviate that conundrum.\r\n\r\nTo begin with,it is important to acknowledge that a few satisfactory deeds provide us with some specific positive impacts and solutions.For example,getting up early,taking physical exercise ,doing yoga,reading books to get knowledge,playing games, gossiping,road trips with family,walking in the park,having breakfast time and so on,as these are capable of delivering fit people in society,resulting in a more stable community.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, terrible ventures ,for instance, spending more time on mobile phones which decreases the power of eyesight, putting earphones on ears for a long time reduces the efficiency of the ear,eating junk food frequently to those extends high pressure,risk of heart diseases , high pressure etc.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, up-to-date tech has a bit of advadvantaged and drawbacks and it relies on how mankind uses them.However, we cannot hold a single moment without high techs,as these are part and parcels of our daily life.As a repercussion ,the latest interests have made the existence is easier and more comfortable as well as entertaining.Nevertheless,recent actions have not only jeopardized but also include crucial matters.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,from my point of view, we can resist unwelcome hobbies by improving public awareness, and upgrading outdoor sports.In addition,if we support arranging communal programs where people would spend hours gossiping with others.Furthermore, the discussion shows about health professionals can also provide assistance.Therefore ,we can gain safety and sound gloves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author makes a valaid point. In the passage he said that Venus may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. It is often referred to sa Earth's twin. As it is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\n\nVenus might of had been largely covered by oceans and could have supported various forms of life. To this day Venus has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus has a surface that has rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe dangers of traveling to Venus are extreme. Unlike Earth, Venus has an average temperature of 800 degrees and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on Earth. The clouds that surround Venus are highly corrosive sulfuric acid.\n\nNASA has one compelling way to battle the harsh conditions. They would send astronauts and scientists to float 30 or so miles above surface in a blimp-like vechicle. The scientists would be above the fray. It will not be easy conditions but surviable for humans.\n\nHowever it would be limited because they are above the surface. At least they could study some of the planet. The author states that our travels should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nThe author stated the the pros and cons of the exploration of Venus. He implies that we could learn alot about Venus and even Earth by studying Venus. So he did a support his idea well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D'Alto, Technology can indicate whether a human is happy, surprise, angry, disgusted, fearful, or sad. This article provides an example in paragraph one, indicating the emotion in Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. The new software designed to recognize emotion, uses a 3-D computer model of the face to help with the process.\n\nDr. Huang predicts this technology can help students in school on a lesson. If the lesson is making the student bored or confused, the lesson can modified to ehlp the student retain focus. I do not think this is a good idea because if one student enjoys it and another doesn't. They both may end up learning the same subject differently, which would dramaticlly effect a students examen scores in school. Not all students act the same on different subjects, some enjoy math more than english, some enjoy english more than math. It's all about perception. It would be unfair if one student gets a more enjoyable lesson and the other to get the normal lesson.\n\nThe new software, the Facial Action Coding System, should be used in other ways instead of schooling reasons. Maybe the future could bring different ideas to the constructors of this machine.\n\nThis is why i think the Facial Action Coding System shouldn't be used in this way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think computers help people learn thing like want job look computers Also problem help go could go computer look like could go look else go I think great thing look people computer could talk see realy cool You look coltures computer want learn Like favert person know look computer videos look different sites really cool There games play online alot game fun game learning games Math game science game different games Also us othere people planing game game It realy cool I think computer nt bad people computer help lot", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future car(s) seems to question everybody. My argument with this is for two reasons; it would use less gas and it will let you know when you are needed. Cars and gas go together like Jack and Jill. So being that the upcoming Driverless Cars will make a difference in that.\n\nWe all hate paying such a high price for gas but we still end up having to. If the Driverless Cars are made and sold they said in paragraph 1 they would use half\n\nthe fuel of todays taxis. My second reason is because unlike the 2013 BMW when you are needed with your attention the car will vibrate providing you with knowledge that something is going on the road or wherever you are.\n\nConcluding my argument I do believe the Driverless cars should be made and released. For multiple reasons it could help and dramastically change the future. That is why I think they should create the new Driverless Cars", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Man conquered its environment with advancements and technology, they make life easier but some are harmful to our environment. Automobiles were derived from carriges but unlike carriges automobiles requiered some kind of power to run on. Most vehicles in modern day run on gasoline, Diesel, or electricity. They make transportation easier for us but like every good apple it has its rotten side. Fumes produced by the burning of Diesel and Gasoline are harmful to our ozone. The fumes produce a green-house like effect and trap in the heat contributing to global warming. Although Desiel engines have improved and are now cleaner our atmosphere is still taking a sucker punch. Almost every family in the United States owns an automobile, thats millions and millions of people driving increasing carbon emmisions. If less people used their personnal vehicle they could save money and diminish the amount of pollution produced by their automobiles. There is no way we can obliterate car use because we have built our world centered on car use but we don't have to stop driving we could simply reduce our impact by using public transportation, walking or riding a bicycle. Walking or driving a bicycle could relieve stress while commuting and traffic jams increase your stress level do something for yourself and our environment and decrease your stress level.\n\nThe are many many reasons to decrease our reliance on automobiles yet even with many benefits we refuse to do our part. The amount of fossil fuels available in earth is limited, in the past decades we have used much of it there will soon come a day when we will experience a shortage of fossil fuel. The day will come regardles of anything because of our relaince in this source of power but we can slow down its arrival by using less. Americans use thousands and thousands of dollars a year to fill up their tanks, when they could walk or car pool and save money. They could use that money to pay bills, make improvements in their home or make a college found for their kids. Yet many preffer to drive and just burn their money away. The use of public transportation doesn't only save you money it can increase your comminities economy.\n\nWhile i'm all for saving money there is a greater cause then just saving money. Although is obvious we could all use a few extra bucks in our wallet we could also use a healthier planet. We breath in the fumes that automobiles produce, carbon is not good for us its a health hazard. We are polluting the air we breath our body needs oxygen not carbon and yet that's a high percentage of what our lungs inhale. There is also the concern that carbon emissions are causing holes in our ozone layer. The ozone protects us from all the harmful rays that the sun emmits like Uv-rays. There has been an increase of people sufferring from skin cancer in the last decade. why you may ask, well carbon emissions make holes in our ozone layer which in essance allows harmful sun rays to reach us. With a certain amount of exposure to radiation our cells experience mutations caused by the harmful rays and essancially give birth to cancer. Many people die because of this disease and we lament their loss but not enough to make a change. Pollution produced by automobiles has many negative effects on our environment, and health. We could decrease the damage by doing our part and leaving our car parked in the garage.\n\nIf saving money and having a cleaner environment isn't a good enough reason to limit you car usage then do for your own health. There is more to life then just driving impatienlty in a car you could walk and enjoy nature. Our reliance on cars is unhealthy for us and our environment. We are polluting our beautiful planet and causing an increase of health hazards. There is only so much fossil Fuel left we can waste it all at once or make it last a little longer. I myself enjoy the pleasure of just driving to a store rather than walking but i preffer a healthy environment over a car ride. Do your part walk, take a bus, or car pool with your friends. Every grain of sand counts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, numerous individuals can communicate with each other and see news events every day using social media. There are some advantages in this situation, but personally, I believe there are more disadvantages.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, our technology has developed; we can use IT devices and easily access the Internet as a result, we can communicate with each other using social apps like Facebook and Instagram. However, some people use smartphones the entire time in their houses, so they are apart from society and feel lonely. For example, in South Korea, many folks use IT gadgets such as tablets and laptops, and they have social media accounts which can communicate with each other and see a lot of news. However, some communities make fake facts and fake news so some individuals believe that and it leads to crime. Furthermore, because of that, they stay at home for a long time, which leads to feeling lonely and frustrated. Eventually, they do not want to work, and that kind of life will bring various diseases like obesity and diabetes. Therefore, communicating with each other using social media is not always an advantage for our societies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, today, we can see news and other people's lives using social media. Furthermore, if some countries start a war, their folks take a photo or record a video and directly upload it to their social accounts so we can find out what is going on. For instance, Russia and Ukraine started a war in 2021, and many Ukraine buildings were destroyed. But, at that time we did not know what was going on in there and what was true. Russia announced that it did not kill any innocent nations, but a few months later, numerous Ukrainians took photos and videos and uploaded their social media eventually, all world citizens found out about Russia's murder. For this reason, the use of social apps is beneficial for our societies.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, communicating with each other and seeing news has pros and cons. If some communities use social media bad way, it is harmful to our communities but we cannot live with IT devices because this era is a digital era. So, we should use those technologies to balance, and that will be good for our lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Car maybe great for future but why do we need it? We can not just depented on the teacnology, we can drive by our own hand.\n\nDriverless Car can be use for someone who can't see or someone who doesn't have hands. It will be useful for thoese types of people because if they drive by themselves without seeing or without a hand, they can get in really serious accdient. So, to avoid that serious accdient, we need the Driverless Car for people who can't see or people doesn't have a hand.\n\nAs much as we need a Driverless Car for people who can't or people who doesn't have hands. On the other hand, we don't need a Driverless Cars because sometime teacnology can not be trusting. For example, if the Driverless Car get into\n\naccdient, who can a driver blame on?\n\nCan a driver blame on a Driverless Car because the driver didn't drive the car.\n\nTo sum it up, I think Driverless Car might be a great cars for some people. Some people might not think Driverless Car is a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I think computers good bad effects people Some people sit around day playing games lazy Other people actually use computers things need Also people need computers jobs I agree people spend day front computers spending less time exercising Would rather play games day instead spending quality time family friends Not I would much rather friends outside family picnic park lake For people though story much different Some people need computers advances technology everyday life A lot jobs today require use computer example working bank use computers day I also think students rely computers work A lot students type reports things school computers Students also use computers look information The internet good source students I know internet come handy school projects maybe something simple looking word I also see people dont really care advaces technology computers Some people dont need anything probably thinking people way much To I honestly find computers useful I talk online family I hope liked opinion computers remember useful people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the auther suggests that studing Venus is a worthy persute despite the dangers it presents. I really dont know how to feel about this, there is alot of bad but there is also some good. For an example of the bad stuff there is a thick atmosphere of almost 90 percent carbon dioxide, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric asid in the atmosphere, and to top it all off the surface timperature avreges over 800 degrees, space craft cant last more than afew hours on Venus. In my eye im saying that i would not want to explor Venus. the good parts about it is that you get to lurn something new about a planet, if you huver 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian land scape it will only be 170 degrees fahierneit and it still has some Earth-like fetures (is the most Earth-like ).\n\nVenus is also sometimes called the \"evning star\"or Earth's \"twin\". Venus is the 2nd planer from our sun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper opinion effects computers people obese people People tend get moody seems computers addictive I think computers huge effect people The nubmer one thing people every year becoming obese leave chair sit inside day Also get lazy nt want get order food delivered right hause The next idea get enought exersise nt sit day nt move But move get something eat go get phone This limit kids adults hours less computer time day next reason people computers tend get Like one second happy get computer sad They get couped inside whole day They nt see enough people nt see If hour day moody ness would change People need lot exersise maintain weight muscle last receson computers effects people people tend act addicted computer Like playing game day nt realize get addicted stop playing day People need leave computer something else like ride bike play sport In conclusion I trying tell taht good people stay inside day play computer hazardous health putting hgih risk obesity So please listen ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am very one sided with the way I feel about driverless cars. I feel that driverless cars are dangerous and hazardous. The cars could be more prone to crashes then when a person is at the wheel. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This states that the cars are safe for only a period of time. An all computerized car is just asking for the worse when it gets older.\n\nDriverless cars aren't even really driverless, so what's the point? \"But so far, Google cars aren't truely driverless.\" The idea of a driverless car may put a person to ease, to where they aren't paying attention to the road ahead. The at ease person may become stressed when the car signals to take over. They might not even be ready to take over the wheel. This is a risky thing when coming to complicated traffic issues.\n\nThese driverless cars also seem to be very expensive, something not the everyday person could afford. The car has even been know to be to costly without the price of the car itself. The article talks about the use of smart roads for the smart cars. \"These smart-road systems worked suprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" The car itself needs a lot of mechanics, such as Dubbed LIDAR, to make sure the vehicle can mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\n\nThe article talks a lot about the future of these driverless cars. But I do not think there will be such a future. With the concern of a person's life at risk, the driverless cars will intimidate many. The cost issue will also be an intimating factor. With manufacturers such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan, many will not be able to afford it. Overall, the bad outweighs the good for this project. The driverless car is simply just not worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, in some nations, people would like to know more about the history of their houses and apartments. It is because of curiosity and assurance of the infrastructure and safety of the houses which can be derived by asking neighbors and the city council. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, the main reason for seeking out the history of residence is privacy and safety. Due to the rise of crime in particular burglary, in many countries, people want to know about the equipment of the houses to deter this problem, protect their possessions, and if the house needs to be facilitated, necessary measures will be taken. Another reason is that they are just curios to explore the past of the place they live in, in terms of the materials were used to construct it, how much it can resist natural phenomena such as thunderstorms and earthquakes, the age of the construction, who lived there before and was he a good person or not?\r\n\r\nThese individuals can gain information related to above inquisitiveness from the old people in the neighborhood who have been living in this district for many years. They can give them many useful information about the past of their house especially if there was a burglary. Moreover, they can ask the municipal council to give some data or difficulties related to their building. By way of example, when my father intended to buy a house, he found out that the house could not be safe against thieves so after buying that, he installed some camera in different parts of the house in order to increase the safety. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people are interested in knowing about the history of the location where they live is rational as they want to guarantee their safety and know more about the resistance of their houses which can be obtained by asking older residents and the city council.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons for the resignation of young people from schools and I am going to mention some of them as there are simply too many. I am also going to give suggestions on how to solve this problem.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, students are coerced to get good grades so that they can get into a good university and most of the time the coercion is caused by the student's parents who are worried that the student won't get into a good university. That alone can cause anxiety and there is a high chance of them dropping out. Second, there are bullies that are in school. The person who is being made fun of will not have a great time at the academy and hence will drop out. Lastly, most of the students get burnt out from sitting in one place and then change places after some time, which is very similar to being a prisoner where the school is a prison. As a result, most of the pupils leave.\r\n\r\nThere are of course ways to solve this problem. One of them is fixing the school system as calculus, trigonometry, isotopes, and almost everything, in general, isn't going to make an impact on most students' lives. Making the subjects optional and not mandatory will make a big change in the rate of students who drop out.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are many reasons why students drop out and solutions to the dilemma that is the resignation of students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people beleive the face on Mars was made by aliens but other beleive it is just a natural landform. I am writing this to tell you the face on mars was not made by aliens and the face on Mars is a natural landform. By reading this you will learn claims to support my argument and evidence to support my claims.\n\nThe face on Mars was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia but this one had unusaual shadows that made it look like there was a face. On April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. The picture was clearer showing the real landform. The passage stays, \"a natural landform, there was no alien monument after all\".\n\nWhen the pictures were zoomed in, the pictures actually shows the Martian Equivelent of a butte or mesa which is landforms common around the American West.\n\nThe human head was formed by shadows giving the illusions of eyes,nose, and mouth. The pictures taken by Michael Malin proves the face is just another landform.The defenders of NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. If there was a civilization on Mars it would be very good news for NASA. It would be an outbreak and a huge discovery.\n\nSome people think that NASA wants to hide the fact that there might be life on Mars. It wouldn't make sense for NASA to hide it because NASA would make tons of money if there was life. NASA's chief scientist, Jim Garvin said, \"We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" By Jim saying that it shows that they are eager to get pictures and it wouldn't make sense if they were trying to hide evedince to want to get pictures so badly.\n\nDo you still think the face on Mars is from Aliens. The pictures that are now available of the face now show what it really is because they are clearer than ever. After reading this article you should now know that the face on Mars is actually a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So we come here to discuss a topic. A very intresting one if you say. This topic has history to it and some people don't like this topic. Some people don't like this topic because of the way it works. This thing i'm talking about is the Electoral College. And I personally don't like this thing. that is because it is so outdated and unfair. Look at the 2000 election. Al Gore, an amazing guy, \"had more individual votes then George w. Bush.\" This guy would of been a great president but \"Bush won the election, receiving 271 electoral votes to Gore's 266.\" I believed this was unfair because one person could of one but another man had got more \"popularity\" votes and won. Now tell me why that is fair?\n\nTo start this fire burning inside me, the Electoral College is so outdated and unfair. \"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualifed citizens.\" This means that the people of the state can vote buts it really not going to count. These people want a good president and it happened in 2012. Alot of Southern states like Mitt Romney and they voted for him. He got alot of votes and was beating Obama. But Obama got\"61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percentpf the votes for Romney.\" Romney had change in his eyes and the Electoral College didnt care and took that away from him.\n\nTo conclude this, the Electoral College is unfair. They take people's chances to change this country and do new things for us. If we had Mitt Romney, America might of had better imployment and a better system. We would of probulay had more money and had a better chance of going to college. But the Electoral College is unfair and had to take that away from Mitt and gave it to Obama. It's so outdated and unfair. For God's sake, its from 1700's! We need to get a better system of voting next time or people or just stop going to vote because they will know thay their votes mean nothing to the college and they will stop. If these people stop voting.... then we better have a backup plan to restore the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face of Mars has proven to be one of NASA's most mystifying cases to ever be solved. Twenty five years ago, as NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars, it snapped a photo of a startling image resembling a human face. After releasing the image to the public, many people became fascinated in the \"face\". This rolled the ball for many people to believe there was an ancient civilization on Mars. However, modern technology and expertise of numerous scientists have discovered the face is merely a natural landform. The use of more efficient cameras have diminished any hopes of alien life on Mars.\n\nNASA's Mars Exploration Program has already identified the area on which the face is found as Cydonia. When the face was first seen in the Jet Propulsion Lab, scientists figured it was a Martian mesa, which were common enough in Cydonia. Although it was abnormally figured in the shape of a human face, scientists already knew mesa's were prominent in the area of Cydonia. Also, modern technology, such as a Mars Global surveyor camera, has revealed the fact that the Face on Mars is nothing but a natural landform. The camera's absolute maximum resoultion picture ensures that no \"alien markings\" were hidden by haze, as some skeptics argued. In the 2001 image, each pixel spans 1.56 meters, whereas pixels in the 1976 image spanned 43 meters. Therefore, the better camera quality ensures the truth behind the Face on Mars: a natural landform.\n\nSome people argue that, due to the cloudiness on the planet, alien life could have been hidden by haze. However, NASA sent the Mars Global Surveyor on \"a cloudless summer day in Cydonia\" and captured another photo. Garvin explained \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" Garvin knew if there were any pyramids or shacks, the camera would have been able to capture it and he would have been able to see it. Thus, there is no chance haze could have hidden the aliens. People also argued that the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence NASA would rather hide. This is not the case. Authors thought this would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. Therefore, the belief of life on Mars is simply just for the public. It has been in Hollywood films, books, magazines, and radio talk shows. The Face on Mars was used to engage the public, not neccessariy to inform.\n\nProven from better camera quality and scientific knowledge, people can know believe the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. If any civilization was there, the Mars Global Surveyor would have been able to seen it. Also, mesa's are common in the Cydonia area, where the face was found. In conclusion, better technology from 1976 proves the Face on Mars is a landfrom, and there is no chance any life on Mars exists based on the face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argue that museums are entertainment places.while others believe it is an educational places. However I am with museum as educational purposes and this essay will examine the reason.\r\n\r\nTo begin with,museums from the enjoyable perspectives, individuals prefer visiting museums to enjoy their time and observe the differences between past and present . In other words, individuals travel abroad to visit museums in their vacation because they found relaxation and they feel inspired .For instance, the survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos University showed the number of visitors who visit Oman museums yearly more than 100 thousands .Therefore, it seems logical that museums are one of the entertainment places.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, museums from educational perspective, it is the best way to learn specially for students because explaining subjects likewise history with visible materials it helps to understand the subject better and it gives students cleare idea but, if they study without trip to museum the information in the book is just abstract words . For example according to Oman TV student understands the Mona Lisa subject more when they see it in museums and they know all the details related to this painting.This means it is a method for studying and the benefits of museums for education purposes is huge, \r\n\r\nTo sum up, although some argue that museums is enjoulyable places because people go there to enjoy their free time. I believe it is educational due to the learning trips give the learners all the information that they need and it is a visible method.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just imagine how many information you can get reading \"the challenge of exploring Venus\" It can teach you a lot of things that maybe you did not know before.\n\nThe author speak about Venus how if he went there, he give you a lot information about the planet like, to Venus people sometimes calle \"Evening Star\" and explain why people give it this nickname. Explain the Venus it is really close from our planet and scienfics should examine better. Maybe the author thinks that there can be life.\n\nVenus is Earth's Twin because have almost the same density and size, and occasionally th closest distance. He says the other planets orbiut the sun a differents speed too. What he means is that sometimes we are closer from mars and others from venus.\n\nVenus is a planet not really safety because a thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, The temperatures can be 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than our planet is, There is not humans who can resist this.\n\nVenus was a planet almost like the Earth, it was covered with ocean and various froms os life. And today still have stuff like the Earth so this mean that scientific should verify this planet better. Maybe is our next planet to live?\n\nVenus maybe could be our next country, no one knows, is amazing and would be amazing if in a future we have to live this planet to another. The posilibilities of that this can happen are not a lot, but if th Scientifics or the NASA find a planet identical to this wil be a big step for the humanity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries way knowing happened past whether fact maybe fiction No matter type book still tells us story another place another time Libraries censored Taking away one book one sentence seems vulgar inapropriate young readers wrong I understand reading books adult material drug abuse sexuality lead experimentation life At least exsistance earth find curious something try see like It learning experience History would likely touchiest subject libraries mainly asshamed acted like thirty plus years ago discrimination wars middle east Some countries even teach history students school embarrassed happened afraid might happen students know happened Reading knowing ancestors help us lead better future distroy Today s media overflowed adult material suitable kids If anything need start censoring broadcast television also post leave libraries alone Most books libraries like forty years completely pointless remove already educated young minds forty years I truthfully know would want remove books censor sharpie marker All giving readers less material read In elementary educators required teach students spell I walked third grade classroom watched girl spell CAPS thinking correct spell The excuse teachers teach spell learn reading books everyday Well guess gaming systems iPods little kids taking reading like ten years ago going lot future adults know read going like CAPS spell encyclopedia CAPS know I nt taught spell You see I mean going take away ability spell better take away books becuase things teaching future spell simple words Today gaming systems iPods intertain us daily basis No one taking reading way relieve boredom sitting couch watching television And reduce reading material teens young readers incouraging us read You taking away interesting parts book To truthfull I read reread book many times good story extra sizzle I enjoy books drugs alcohol family stress war stories even sexuality mainly books without boring When read books like make feel better life I interact others I learned deal things books Most knowledge comes types books I would hate children able read materials I age learn books", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that haveing this kind of technolegy can have a mager outcome for the class room in a good way. the resaon that i think this is becuse if someone in the clase room is aheving truble the teacher can notice it and find out why, the can also help in the class room in a whole diiffrent way to we would be able to see if theres mabey something else going on like some trubalse at home, i also think that this could also help the teacher find out whats wrong but i think that it could also help a kid that has somekind of problomes like depreshin or anger menaegment esuse and get them the help they need.\n\nI feel like this can graetly help the teachers and the student if his technolgy was inpeminted in the class becuse not only will it help the teachers see what the probloms is but they can aslo take acton not like now, sometimes as humans we are to ableves to are surrundings and not pay attenton to the ones around us but if this was inplemented they could do like the article said \"recognice when a student is becoming confused or bored, then they can modify the lesson\" when they modify the lesson they can get more feed back of what kind of things cach the atanton of the student so that they can make more lessons similer to that one and getting them to learn more.\n\nAn other way that i think that this kind of technology can help is it can help onther people then the teacher like a counsler or someone else. the ressone that i think this is becuse if the student is feeling more sad or frustrated then usel it not not be becuse of something he dosent understent at schoole mabey it could be a problem at home or out of school. befor we could not have seen this that easly but with is technologey we could take acton imedalitly and help them. like they said in the article \"most of us would have trouble acually describing each fasial triat that convays happy, worried, ect\" becuse of this i think that haveing this could realey help out many people.\n\none last ressone why i think that haveing this could help out would be that the teachers could find out taht some student has depreson or anger manegment problomes so that that student can get that help that they need.\n\nI really think adding these computers that can decode your emosons can really help alot at school becuse they can help the teachers find if they understand the meterial, they can also help people like counslers find out if thers a problme at school or at home, and the last resson why i think haveing them here at school would be to find if any students have a problom like depreshon or anger manegment probloms so that they can help them out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many people who believe that taking interviews is not the finest way to assess the appropriate candidate for any job. There are other ways that determine the quality of a candidate for that role. This essay will discuss why interviews are significant for many professional jobs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, In every country the first process of ,hiring is taking an interview of professionals for job positions in every organisation such as private or industrial. In my private ,firms interviewers check the candidate's communication and knowledge through interviews so they can hire that person on basis of his skills. Moreover, this is the best medium to know about the person's ability for a position that an organisation gives him for his knowledge. Therefore, the suitability of a candidate depends on their knowledge or communication skills.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, most labour jobs do not require an interview because these jobs are based on daily wages so it's difficult to interview them on a dailly basis. There is no doubt that interview is one of the significant processes to hire a great Scientist , Programmer or Doctor but in a labour ,market it's not necessary to interview them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the vast majority of professional jobs required a complete process to hire a multi talent skilled person , so there is a much need for interviews for these positions without that no one can get skills knowledge about these candidates.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should we limit our uses on car usages, some people se the limiting of car usage as less tense. \" When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" said heidrun Walter, a mother of two. when you have a car you'll have to find space for it as well as a house to buy. There are only two places to park at the edge of a development, where a car-owner has to pay $40,000, along with a home. passenger cars are responcible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in the United states. with less cars people have the advantages of being a walk away from a store instead of a highway. With less cars that give off gas emissions the less our ozone will deplete. More and more people are using hybrid cars because they dont give off as much gas emissions than regular cars that take diesel. Depending on the weather of the night and day could really effect the greenhouse effect of our planet. If ther was a cold night and a warm day this could help the warmer layer of air to trap the car emissions, which depletes the ozone layer that is protecting our planet.\n\nParis one of the most leading countries in the world with the car emissions ended making people stop using their cars because of all the smog that was being created. People who used their cars were fined $31 and if they complained about that their car would somethimes be towed away. While the rule of no cars was in effect the traffic jams in france were down over 60 percent. Think about what this could do to the United States. The smog had cleard so much that Paris eventually allowed odd numbered plates to drive again on Tuesday. \" 'It's a good oppourtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution' said Carlos Arturo as he rode with his wife on a two seat bicycle\" ( Andrew Selsky, Source 3). The no car rule is sweeping over the nations, because of this rule there has been over 118 miles of bicycle paths in Bogota, Colombia.\n\n\" Municipal athorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event and were enthusiastic 'These poeple are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders' Said Enrique Riera, the mayor of asuncion, Paraguay. As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly down by 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January of 1995. Part of the explantion lies in the recession, because cash- strapped Americans could not afford new cars, and the unimployed weren't going to work anyway. These people could not afford cars but they could have afforded a bike if they wanted to. They could have rode to work on a bike or could have tried to find a job on a bike it's that people are starting to get to lazy to do important things like ride a bike. With cars theres gas you have to pay for along with the insurence, that's a lot of money.\n\nLucky for us Americas love affair twords vehicles seem to be coling down. When the number of child growth grew, the number of miles driven dropped steadly down in 2005. With cars the rodes are more dangerous anything could happen to anyone or anything. The percentage of 16-39 year olds that are driving dropped, while older people retain thweir licenses as they age. A study last year was found tha driving by younger people dropped by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Bill Ford proposed partnering with telecommunactions industrys to create cities in which \" pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improive safety\". In Germeny the banning of cars resulted that 70 percent of families donot have cars, and 57 perecnt sold a car to move there. In doing all of these thing this could help stop the greenhouse effect on our planet and start saving it insted of killing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear news Computers great machine use People research learn topic subject let people talk friends online I think computers good effect people Computers one great inventions They helpul everyday life When people need write paper school project research need need know thing topic nt know look questions internet If writing paper need answer internet Suppose want go family vacation california plan whole trip right computer book flight get hotel room even see see whole world right computer If want learn another language learn entire language computer Also busy go collage want take another class even schools online The computer great way learn new things Finally talk friends online websites like facebook myspace great ways keep touch friends naother positive way instant message friends family without wait long response back If want friends message I think computers positive effect people They helpul many ways people research learn new things talk friends I hope see point view samething everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars coming can seem like a big shock or disappointment to the generation, but it also could be just the begining to a great new advention. The Driverless Cars are safe for the environment, helpful for teen drivers including completly new drivers\n\nand also can prevent less accidents from happening in the future.\n\nPollution and the ozone layer being destroyed is a huge problem for our Earth to this day. Cars give off alot of gases causing this pollution in our atmosphere. Driverless Cars could be the stop to all of this pollution happening all around us! Now this is something that you can't just say \"Heck no i dont want to ever have a car like that!\" The Driverless Cars can help save money that id coming out of your own pocket while also helping our environment.\n\nAlthough driving a car that is able to drive itself can have its negative effects its can also be very helpful when it comes to the safety of yourself and the people who are also in the vehicle along with you. The Driverless Cars have special touch features that make sure the driver is in fact keeping hold of the steering wheel. Having this feature avalible on a car can be very helpful for careless drivers who do not keep hold of the steering wheel. Also having the ability to to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves can be a great way to warn the driver when roads ahead require human skills like navigating through work zones, around accidents, and going threw difficult traffic.\n\nBeing able to have control over your own vehicle and also your vehicle having control over itself can be an extraordinary way to teach new drivers how to operate a vehicle. The Driverless Car can be a perfect way to teach teens getting their licences or permits the proper ways to properly operate a vehicle. The Driverless Cars are able to stop themselves when coming close to hitting an object; this feature can be best used for teens just in case they get carried away and start to loose control ove the vehicle. Antilock brakes and drivers assistantwill be helpful when learning how to break at the appropriate time and also having assistance if something goes wrong in the mense of your driving.\n\nAlthough the Driverless Cars seem strange and unusual they can be very helpful and useful to our generation by helping teens learn how to properly operate a vehicle, saving the planet from pollution and the destruction of our ozone, and also creating a safe environemt for all drviers on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Though I believe why change what's not broke; there are many people out there who believe driverless cars are the future.\n\nThe positive aspects of driverless cars are as follows: there are sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes: these sensors have become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids, these vehicles have a traffic jam assistance to signal to the driver that it is time to take over to navigate work zones and accidents, they can steer, accelerate, and break themselves.\n\nThe negative aspect of the driverless cars are as follows: more laws would have to be created in ensuring whose liable for the accidents as well as keeping people safe, it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars in many states, and to ensure the safety of pedestrians and drivers, traffic lawa will change and not just regular laws and least, they are dangerous.\n\nSo therefore, I say stick to what's not broke. The world is becoming lazy and there are certain things we need to keep to ensure safety for our citizens. The negatives outweigh the positives. The driverless cars sound just like what they are DANGEROUS!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self driving cars? I am against having driverless cars. Something could go wrong. Our teens growing up wont even know how to drive or the importance of driving. Its just another way for the people in our society to be lazy.\n\nI dont think that we should have driverless cars because anything could go wrong. The driver might miss their turn to take over the car and they could crash. There could be something that goes wrong with the computer system, and the car just goes out of control. It could go swerving all over the street and driver might not be able to take control of the wheel. There could be anything that goes wrong, and like the article said who do we blame for it? The driver or the manufacturer?\n\nWhen our teens grow up and start to drive and everything they wont even know the importance of driving. Its gonna be like they only need to learn the little basic stuff because most of the time the car will be driving its self. I think its importanat that they drive on their own so that they will have expierence with driving. Teens should know that driving is really importanat. Also self driving cars will give teens an excuse for texting and driving.\n\nThe people in our society is lazy they dont like to do anything. Most people hate having to drive. That just gives everyone another reason to be lazy and not have to do anything. You can easily just sit in the acr and let it drive you. Plus i feel like it would take up alot of gas. THe people woul probably even forget how real driving actually is. There will be more laziness.\n\nThats just some of the reasons why I think that we shouldnt have driverless cars. Yes, there are some positive things about having them, but i dont think thatys even right to have them at all. No teens learning the importance, More lazy people, possibly more accidents also. I just think that we should keep it how it is now, people driving their cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar graphs shed light on impetuses driving people to choose the major of MBA and job applicants' qualities considered by recruiters.\nOverall, there are mainly two features manifested by the diagrams. First, satisfactory employment opportunities are the major reason for choosing this degree. Second, personality and relevant academic experience are regarded as the most critical qualities by a majority of employers.\nAccording to the first chart, the percentage of interviewees deeming job opportunities to be the major reason for choosing this major reaches 65%, while any other reason is reported by less than 20%. Notably, serving other people is the most uncommon driving force, reported by only 8%.\nAs shown in the second chart, the percentage of recruiters valuing personalities most is the same as that of employers attaching the greatest importance to academic experience, each reaching 25%. Other relevant experience and presentation/appearance are reported by 20% of employers respectively. Qualifications are deemed to be the essential quality by the smallest percentage of recruiters, 10%.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph talking Saeng vowed silently thinking happen long time ago mom plants garden Saeng thinking everything comes back return Spring snow melts things geese retorning take test She vowed silently That thik author conclude story paragraph included wit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has advanced vastly in the last few years. Most companies and people would say that they think driverless cars would be a good idea. That they would helpful in many ways. Yes driverless cars would help in numerous ways but they also have negaive aspects.\n\nDriverless cars are going to be very expensive. In the article it was mentioned that other companies have tried numerous ways to make a driverless car but they had to make adjustments to other surroundings not just the car itself. They built a new high technocal rode, if you would call it that. The car would drive driverless, but you would have to have sensors in the rode directing/helping the car while it was driving. In the article it was talking about how much money radars would cost. They would cost two hundred million dollars. That is just for radar that goes ontop of a hill. Think about how much money it would cost to rebuild the roads to put in the new sensors for the car to work. If you wouldnt go with the new rode idea and wanted to focus more on the details of the car that would cost more money. Your building a new car with many new adjustments to it. In the article it was mentioned about all of the different things you would put into the car. A video camera mounted near the review mirror, sensors in the wheels, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and inertial motion sensor are just some examples of new adjustments made to the cars that were metnion in the article.\n\nDriverless cars are more dangerous. In the article it was mentioned that the drivers would still have to be allert during driving becuase the driver would have to take over the car during accidents or road emergencies. If the driver wasnt alert enough or was distracted by something else and the car need the driver to manual drive there would be an accident. The car would have to put something in the car to alret the driver fast enough before anything serious happened.\n\nCompianes are all for driverless cars and are still advasing technology to try and recieve a car so magnificent as a driverless car but they need to stop and think about all of the possible things right and wrong with a driverless car. The money and accidents are just a few examples of the flaws of the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sharing data is a dilemma in some domains such as business, scientific research and academy. One group argues that data sharing is beneficial while others points out its harms. This article will inspect both sides of the argument.\r\n\r\nPeople thinking information share is a way better than confining sees sharing as an investment to the field. By increasing the amount of data in the area of work, they will foster the devolepment and get benefit in return. For example, if a scientist makes the data used in a research public, it will grab attention of other scientists making them work on that topic. Furthermore, it expensive to collect data for the ones working on it. As there is no cost of data share, it is much more efficient to helping others than letting everyone to collect its own data. \r\n\r\n\tAlthough benefits of letting othere to use the collected information is so appearant, some people pay attention to potential harms of it. Firstly, the data might be confidential and private. For example, gender preferences of the people attended to an experiment might be used against them if revealed. In addition to that, sharing the data might create economic threat to the instutition that collected it. As companies invest money to this data in order to make profit, not keeping it to themselves makes their position worse in the competation.\r\n\r\n\t\r\n\r\n\tBoth views of the arguments has pros and cons but every case should be inspected independently. In most of the cases, data is neither confidential nor high valued. However, potential harm that unconfining a data might be so devastating where benefits are much limited in some cases.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars will be fun to have because just thinking about the future when they come it will alot different when they come out and like when you get a text you all you have to do is look and reply dont have t o drive the car.\n\nLike or a phone call you just answer. I think this driveless car will help out alot of people. Because now you cant look at your phone because you can crash but in the future i think it would be good for a driveless car.\n\nSometimes you will need to look at your phone just incase yuo can tell when somebody breaks in your house or when you get a important phonce call and you really need to answer it.\n\nAs a human i would love to have a car like that because it would be fun and because like think about how much people would be much happier in there life time instead of happening to wait till a red light ot check your phone or messege.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Controversies surrounding what the purpose of going to school is never seem to cease. Many individuals opine that the main significance of sending kids to school is to make them became a great citizen, whereas others assert that it is to make one’s personal improvement. I fundamentally concur that the purpose of going to school is to benefit the kids themselves, not for making them a fine worker.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, those who believe that having an education at school can stimulate their work abilities. To be more specific, people can work with their team-mates at school and learn how to get along with a group of people. If you study alone at home, you won’t have a chance to do so. Furthermore, you can continually grasp your opportunities to ask the school teachers questions, they would be happy to answer you.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the goal of having an education at school isn’t that simple. It is about fulfilling your own dream, not just for blending into society. To illustrate, if you want to become a doctor, you will have to study in the medical school for 7seven years. Moreover, you won’t even remember the detail of your life in school, yet can recall vividly what those most valuable things you learn at school are.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, even though there are individuals submitting that going to educated institutions is to try to fit into the society and become a citizen with a better behavior,I still consent that there are more meaningful aim in doing so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a driverless car is spectacular, but it is not a smart choice. Though a driverless car is far ahead it is stated \"... we grow closer to the destination every day.\" Many problems can occur With a truly autonomous car, such as people becoming lazy, Young kids easily being able to steal the car and run away and the change on crudentials for being able to operate the car.\n\nEven though there will be times people will need to manualy pilot the car the may not notice or react in time to save themself or others. The auto-drive feature would give drivers a way to text or do other activities on their phone, which is another hazard to be constatly aware about.\n\nImagine the adults of the house are sleeping they just had a arguement with a thirteen year old and they decide to run away, even without the skill to drive they get away due to the auto-drive feature of their parents brand new car. The driverless car will make it easier for a car to be stolen by a underaged driver. With the key to the car they can simply plot a course to a location out of state and away from their parents.\n\nTheir are many problems cost wise that can occur, such as people not being able to afford the new car or the government funding a new way to earn a driver liscense. With a new way to drive an automobile comes a new way to earn the way to earn the resposibility to as well.\n\nSame as the government has to dedicate money the will have to dedicate time to passing new laws to pertain to the car. as said by the author of the passage \"Still, even if traffic laws chang, new laws will be needed to cover liability in the case of an accident.\"\n\nThose are the reasons why a driverless car is not a smart option for the world, and it should never come to be a workable object. although there are many more problems these are the most concerning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people who live in urban city have many problems. This essay will explore the example of issues they face and whether goverment should recommend them move to rural area.\nI believe there are two main types of issues people live in urban city face, and I agree with the opinion that goverment should encourage people to leave crowded area.\nFirstly, people live in large city struggle with noisy sound. Currently, big city, especially capital, have a lot of people and transportation system. These sometimes sounds noisy. It disturb people forcusing on something, sleeping in better condition. I remenber that these noisy sound sometimes prevented me from studying in my house when I was high school student. This experience clearly express how much noisy sound disturb people's comfortable life.\nAnother main issue that big city resident face is crowded train. Since there are many people who commute, people have to ride on crowded train, which is uncomfortable for users. Moreover, crowed train is more risky for users facing incidents compare to ordinary one.\nThis is also serious hardship for population living in large city.\nTo solve these matters, goverment should recommend people to live in regional areas. It would not only makes people release from issues that I showed above, and also it may get rid of risks that incident occur. In fact, a statistics show that people who live in rural area feel happy compared to people who live in large city.\nIn conclusion, population who live in city face many issues like noisy sound and crowded train. And if authorities encouraged people to move to rural regions, people would feel spend more comfortable life, as they release from some uncomfortable that they feel in large city.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays teenagers learning a large number things from different sources which they get easy access. Also this view is supported by some other have a strong counter argument that youth should be educated at the learning centre that they do not make waste. However, to contrast these other opine that adolescents should teach by their families. In my point of view youngsters should learn at home. Both sides of these debates analysed in this essay before drawing the conclusion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, as the economy is facing a plethora of threat from the disposal, garbage it is advisable for parents that they initiate and make an effort to resolve issues. It is possible if they taught to their children that how rubbish can effect for several diseases. For instance, they might show the list of diseases that brought by waste. As a result, teenagers can understand how dangerous it is. Apart from this, parents themselves be an example for tackling this one. For example, they can start a community service to clean their city. Which lead to make an even more clear concept in their mind. It is obvious that why this point of view garnered support.\r\n\r\nHowever, if university start to campaign it would be much more efficient as active as a group can be even much better than as an individual. Such as, if children are doing this in a group they can learn that this is the major responsibility of them. Despite this, the institution also adding their effort in such campaigns. Which make them self fulfilment of their duty. Therefore it is comprehensible why this is popular among many.\r\n\r\nTo conclude with, after musing both sides of the argument I believe that children should learn to avoid waste at their home. As it is difficult to learn at school. There is sufficient demonstrate that this is not the case.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the authors idea that study Venus is a worthy pursuit, did not meet all criterias. The author provided many facts about the planet Venus, but didnt give a clear explaination on why we should pursuit the study of Venus. In paragraph 8, the author's reason to pursuit the study of Venus was that \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation,\" the author has a valid point on that we should try to go beyond our limites, but he also relies on the fact of human curiosity and the gained insight of the planet itself. He does not take into concideration that we have attempted to explore Venus, but failed because the tempeter is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and has a pressure that is over 90 times greater then we have experienced.\n\nIn paragraph 2 and 3, it shows that we know the risks of trying to travel to Venus, with many attempts that have failed, and with the information about the planets thick atmosphere, that is almost 97 perent carbon dioxide and clouds of sulfurice acid, one small mistake could cause the whole mission to fail. With the information we have now, we know that the planet Venus is curently changing and getting hotter, it includes that \"not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" In paragraph 5 and 6, it provides us with the information that even if we are able to travel to Venus, we would have to stay close to the sea level on Earth keeping us at a safe air pressure, we would have to be 30 or more miles above and the temperatures would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nIn conclusion the authors idea to travel to Venus does not lead anywhere, his claim is not well supported and is made up of him own curiosity and he does not give a vaild reason. Travling to Venus is not a worthy pursuit that we should do, without our imagination and innovation met, we are forced to work harder to achieve our goals and to do more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today final day tryouts The deciding day Tryouts I patiently waited hand envelopes girls I didnt know could handle CAPS youve left building open envelope said CAPSs fair If everyone opens people dont make team sad bummed girls would jumping joy would make girls didnt make feel even bummed left Be patient leave building called name I came grabbed envelope She dismissed us some girls opened envelopes right away But didnt make karma I waited I got outside I could barely I needed know I Patience isnt lovely thing always l opened envelope I made team I excited I glad I patience surprised", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wonder how your student is doing in the classroom, or if they actually get what the teacher is teaching them? Well now you can thanks to the new technology called \"the Facial Action Coding System\", which detects facial emotions. I feel that we need this technology in our schools to help students actually get what they are being taught. This new technology can detect weather the child is into what they are learning or if they are bored and can change the subject depending on his or her's emotion.\n\nNot every student has the same intrests, for example on kid might love football while his bestfriend loves horseback riding. This is the same thing as school subjects, and how students learn way different. We need this new technology in schools to help kids learn in the way they want to learn it. This is now possible because of \"the Facial Action Coding System\".\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the Facical Action Coding System was able to detect emotions on the Mona Lisa painting. Mona lisa was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. How does it know all this? With a 3-D structure of the face the model of the face the 44 muscles of the face must move like human muscles. This information is in paragraph 3. After the computer has scanned the model they rely on a psychologist to figure out the rest based on the expression of the face.\n\nAlot of things can be detected by facial expressions, and it can help us understand why people act they way they do or feel the way they do. Like i said as for students if it can detect wether they are happy or bored with the lesson it can also change the question that doesnt make them bored so they actually like learning.\n\nThis is why i think all schools need the Facial Action Coding System because it can help students learn more in the classroom without having to learn about stuff they arent really into. This technology also gives them a chance to learn subjects in the way they understand learning it. Hopefully one day the new technology the Facial Action Coding System will be in schools helping students learn they way they need to. We have the technology we might as well take advantage of it!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the following passage the author describes a new type of technology being developed that can read emotions, and people are planing on applying it to the classroom, I think this is a good idea, and that we should do this.\n\nIf we use this technology in the classroom we could predict if people are not understanding, or are bored with their current curiculim and change/adapt it to fit more to them.\n\nAnother thing that can be done with this technology is that we could help lower the suicide rate. By using this technology to detect peoples state of depression we will be able to get them help before it is to late.\n\nLastly using this technology at school we could detect peoples agresson in school, and be able to come up with more educated guesses of as to who might use violence tendancies at school, or who might be being harmed at home and give them the treatment needed.\n\nIn conclusion I think that having this technology will be a benificial step toward a better future. This technology might even be able to help lower suicide rates in young adults, increase understanding of curiculim, and potentially prevent school agression such as bullying by giveing people the proper treatment needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram compares how males and females from Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, the United Kingdom, New Zeland and USA were busy in 1995 and 2005.\nOverall, the employment rate of both men and women in 2005 considerably outweighed figures for these gender groups in 1995. Moreover, the men's level of busyness had the highest proportion in Iceland (83%).\nIn 1995, males from Iceland had the highest proportion for level of busyness, while females had the highest figure in Switzerland, 70% and 56%, respectively. In Britain, both gender groups had similar proportions in 1995, approximately 52%. In contrast, the employment rate of men in New Zeland and Australia exceeded by almost 35% the employment rate of women in these countries.\nAs for 2005, the disparity between the two figures was almost the same in Switzerland and UK, while in the former males had the highest share with 78%. Women also ranked second in other 4 countries. In contrast, in USA, the contribution of females was 2/3 as high as that of males, as the latter was responsible for the largest share with 70%.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart gives information about the number of people, aged 20-24, with an university degree, who have not found a job, in an European country between 2008 and 2009.\nOverall, by far more male graduates were unemployed throughout the given time.\nIn January 2008, around 10% of the University absolvents without a job were men. The number of unemployed men with a degree decreased for the next months before experiencing a significant jump, to over 15% in October of the same year. In 2009, the situation seemed to get stable, any major jumps or lows can be detected from the data. But, in October 2000, the percentage of graduate men without employment rose dramatically to over 20%.\nOn the other hand, around 5% of the female graduates could not find a position. The percentage of women decreased to around half of the amount as in the month before for the next two months. After that, in October 2008, over 10% were without a job, which was a massive increase compared to the year before. The trend of female unemployed graduates declined before jumping for the rest of the given time. Half of the graduates without a job in October 2009 were female graduates.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It can be valuabe because it will keep students from getting bored and falling asleep or not paying attention to actully staying on track. In paragraph six he says that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" He also says that \"Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication and computers need to understand that to.\"In paragah 5 he says that\"The computer can even be used on paintings such as the \"Mona Lisa.\" In paragah 1 he says \"The Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy,9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry'. Could any normal person say that about the Mona Lisa I don't think anyones possibly of doing that. Therefore I think that reading the emotional expresions of students in a classroom is valuable becasue it could change the way students and other people learn and think about school They'll be alot more motivated and more focused on their work because the computer is adjusting to how they feel weither if its beening bored or confused it could modify itself to make it not as boring or have the student actully understand it. Its also changing the future if technogly such as video game chartchers and video surgey its making their faces more exoressive which gives gamers a sense of knowledge on how the chartcher is feeling about the certian suitation their in or by giving gamers a certain type of feeling toward that chartcher like their there in the action or have a feeling of like what they would do in the situation or the game.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt Narciso Rodriguez s book home reading last sentence I never forget parents turned simple house home reveals true mood memoir The mood author gives excerpt warm comfort happiness In first paragraphs Rodriguez describes simple apartment first lived really nothing anyone would consider special But memoir goes talks family friends really turned little house home His parents created traditional Cuban home mainly consisted kitchen cuban music traditional cooking always went What really established sense warmth community happiness memoir talks nt blood relative considered family everyone welcomed home All immigrants though hardworking immigrants created closeknit community Everyone s arms wide open speak The great act giving thanks contributes mood displayed within memoir The last paragraphs state Rodriguez s parents came selflessly give children better life even meant struggling personal hardships The author talked admires parents appreciates everything done teachings family traditions welcoming anyone matter background really turn simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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