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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When children commit crime, many believe that they themselves should be punished, where there are those who argue that the parents of the children should face legal justice instead. In my opinion, parents should not be personally liable to the wrongdoing of their children, since they themselves have not committed a crime, and cannot therefore be responsible. \r\n\r\nSome may argue that since children have not fully developed their mental faculties, that behaviours performed by them must be copied from their parents. Therefore, parents that teach their kids anti social behaviour therefore shoulder some of the blame for their child misbehaving. Studies have shown that children growing up in abusive households, for example, are more likely to grow up having psychological issues of their own. Thus, it might be suggested that since children’s cognitive functions are moulded by their parents, they should be punished \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, to punish the parents of children implies that the child has no free will. Although parenting does play a part in individual action, it must be pointed out that individuals also have a degree of autonomy (this of course by age; a four year old does not have the same level of cognition as a seventeen year old). Furthermore, to convict parents of crimes their children commit would be to indict them for acts they simply have not done - it could also be the case that the child was raised perfectly well, and still decided to become a criminal. Therefore, since it cannot be proven that a child’s criminal action is purely because of their parents instead of their own volition, their parents should not be punished. \r\n\r\nOverall, I argue that since even children past a certain age have a degree of autonomy, we should not put a legal punishment on parents of criminal children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that adolescents ought to need to do free community job in their leisure time because it helps not only teenagers but also the community as well . I totally agree with this notion that because it helps to get an invaluable training to the teenagers and free access to primary supply to poor people. This essay will explain why youngster involved in voluntary task in their free present , followed by a reasoned conclusion. \r\n\r\nFirstly , neighborhood works help younger people to receive the greatest work experience from it . After completing school or tertiary education and in their free time do some unpaid job because this is Avery good platform for getting ample knowledge as well as a good experience. Also , they learn many worthwhile skills such as community, interpersonal, time management and so on which helps to get the best job in their future . Furthermore, ,currently employers demand not only a high quality but also some skills in employee's CV . For example , fresh graduate doctors start to do practice in the rural area for some time in order to achieve knowledge and experience about how to deal with patients in real-life situations. However, the Government should provide a stipend and small incentives to volunteers as motivation for them to work more and efficiently .\r\n\r\nAnother benefit to the community itself . Poor people can access free primary services like education and health services from professionals. In other words , people who live below the poverty line , they are already struggling to earn money for fulfilling basic necessities like food , cloth and shelter . Therefore, they do not invest their remuneration in a child' s education and health . If a professional doctor provides free medicines and diagnosis without taking any charge from them , it will more benefits to poor and needy individuals. Moreover, these services has great benefits for the nation's development. For instance, graduate teachers provide free education to poor children in primary and secondary schools so that poor children get free access to it . thisDespite , some rural people hesitate to take free services without any particular reasons . \r\n\r\nTo conclude , I strongly agree with free community work by teenagers because it gives valuable work experience and knowledge of their field and the community can get free services from experts such as education or health services and so on . I recommend that the government start to take the initial step towards this .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nIn reference to our state we would prefer keeping the electoral college instead of abolishing it. Under the 23 Amendment of the constitution, the district of columbia is allocated three electors and treated like a state for pupose of the Electoral college. If you take this away, there will be anarchy all around us, and I assure you that you dont want this to happen.\n\nThe electoral college is a right for us, and it lets us know that we have a right, and a say in this country. It would be wrong to take that away from us.\n\nWhat have Richard nixon, Jimmy carter, Bob dole, and the AFL-CIO all, in their own time, agreed on? They all agreed on abolishing the electoral college. And they are not the only one's who have said it. According to the gallup poll in 2000, shortly after Al Gore, thanks to the quirks of the electoral collge, won the popular vote but lost because of the 60% of his voters prefered a direct election to the kind we have now. This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders.\n\nI urge you to please consider your peoples feelings on this matter and consider not abolishing the electoral college.\n\nSincerly, a concerned citizen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author is supporting his idea about the studies of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. In the article the author gives reason and evidence why. There is a posiblity to live on Venus, but still too dangerous.\n\nVenus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because it may well once been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system. In paragraph 4 it says \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains,and craters.\" There is even a posibility that Venus was largely covered with oceans and could have supported various form of life just like Earth. Venus can be a possibility of Earth travels. The dangers of Venus is the 97% carbon dioxide on the planet. In paragraph 3 it says \" Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" Venus atmosphere is more dangerous than ours, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in our on planet. Can Venus be a planet we live on?\n\nTo get an understandment of Venus NASA need to get close and personal despite the risk. In paragraph 6 it says \" Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. \" NASA is working on different approaches. One example they gave in the article is some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide. This have been tested in a chamber simulating on Venus surface, and lasted three weeks.\n\nOur travels shouldn't be limited by the dangers and doubts, but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation, like the author says in paragraph 8. At least try if there is a possiblity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Through out this whole article it seems like the author wants someone to go to Venus. He is giving reasons and facts throught the passege. I believe the author wants it explored.\n\nPretty much all of paragraph 8 explains it. \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead is into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" That whole sentece showed that the author was voting to go to Venus not against it. He supported his claims pretty well, after reading this I feel like it could become possible in the near future.\n\nAll of this article is scatter with facts and evidence on why humans could survive on Venus. I beleave the other is very set on the idea of humans on Venus. After reading this I feel like it could become possible in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think censorship allowed libraries many people diffrent oppions type books like readI nt think people remove books type materials hte dislikeMany people think looking diffrent types materials look right imformationI feel limit books libraries whould less resources help imformation trying recieveMany people find hard imformation wonted local libraries Libraries able find books music movies magazines wont needBooks never tooking self allowed shelves imformation needed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that there are methods which are better than an interview form that seems to be a key method to choose the right employee for a job in big companies. In my view, although an interview enables employers to more precisely understand the soft skills of an interviewee, some tests and exams test the hard skills.\n\nAs for business, the personal characteristics of an individual is a main selecting criterion to choose an employee who has much more prospects. In other words, for many companies are more important soft skills than hard skills because a willing, open-minded human can have high productivity and efficiency despite some knowledge gaps. For this reason, many heads arrange meetings where they strive to understand the inner abilities of a person. Thus, in almost all situations, an interview is a necessary event and a fundamental method .\n\nHowever, some jobs require deep knowledge in a certain field of science or engineering where tests and exams will be more appropriate and essential ways to select the right worker. The former reason is that the workers, while they are creating machines or modelling them on computers, do not have a chance to make a mistake. For instance, the aircraft's engineers have to construct a safe well-developed aeroplane to preserve air accidents. The latter reason is that for scientists workers many soft skills are less important than education and experience. To summarize, for technical specialisations employers have to analyze hard skills.\n\nTo conclude, to choose the best employee the main criteria method depends on a working area. If it is a science or engineering, the heads of companies will prefer to oblige potential workers to pass the exam. If it is a business field, in almost all cases, an interview will be more useful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars shouldn't be coming honestly. In my opinion, I don't like the idea of driverless cars very much. It seems a little bit too risky for me; but I'm going to give some reasons why it would actually be a good reason to have driverless cars. First, you would be able to just sit back and relax and watch the road while you're waiting for your turn to drive. Second, you could also grab something on the floor while your in the drivers seat, like if your kid dropped something in the back of the car and they can't grab it, you can try to grab it because the car will be in motion by itself, but you still need to be very cautious on the roads at all times. Third, if you were running late to work or where ever you needed to be, you can make a quick phone call or send out a text and tell them that you will be late for whatever reasons.\n\nNow, lets talk about the negative things. Some of the negative things I don't like about this is that what is the speakers in the car went out and you ca't hear the manufactuer of the car tell you when to take the wheel, or if the car automatically went out of control and you had no poweer or stering of the wheel; you'll be screwed then. To be completely honest, I wouldn't even try to drive a criverless car because I need to know for sure that I'm going to be safe when I'm in the car or driving with a person or a few people among that. I wouldn't feel safe at all, what so ever. Espcially if I was in that car with someone else who is driving, I would feel very uncomfortable, wouldn't you? I mean, seriously. The manufactuer of the car probably doesn't always do its job right, even though it said in the passage that a driverless car has never been in a crash or accident, you don't know what the future holds and anything could happen at any point in time. The car could stop working at anytime too, espcially if it was a plug in/charge car.\n\nQuite frankly, I don't think I like this idea of a driverless car. It seems unsafe and risky, espcially if you have the wrong people in the car with you. If we all had no choice but to buy a driverless car, looks like I'm not buying one. I'll be walking or biking everywhere I go. Would you consider buying and using a driverless car for the rest of your life?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers that detect emotion would not be useful in a classroom because it would add extra work for teachers, and the computers wouldn't be immune to network problems and other things of that nature. They also probably will make mistakes in detecting emotions, and possible cause problems for students and teachers. There is also alot of contrversy on the data that computers already collect on their users everyday. With that why would parents want their childs emotional data collected and sold off to companys just to give them better ads. While there may be some good reasons for having emotion detecting computers the bad outweigh the good.\n\nComputers knowing how their users feel would cause alot of problems for society as a whole, especially if it was implemented in schools. If this new technology was placed in our schools for everyday use, there is a high likelyhood that there would be many problems with it. Dr. Huang states,\" A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(D'Alto, 6) The idea behind this is brilliant; a computure will make class less boring and more understandable for students who may be struggling. The flaw in this logic is that teacher would have to make more than one lesson, and they would then have to put in the conditions in for which lesson the computer should give the children. This would add alot of extra work for a teacher where as if the teacher is instructing the whole class they can take a moment to clarify if students look confused, and then that is all and they can move on without having to make diffrent slides or another worksheet. Not only would the teacher have to put in more time, but the student would possibly be on a totally diffent page than the rest of the class due to diffrences in possible lessons. One other very likely problem that students will face is problems with the actual computer becasue it will lag, or they will have problems with the WIFI. Then how will the student be able to get their class work done.\n\nThere is also a lot of contrversy surronding the data that computers already collect on their users everyday. It would be safe to say that a majority of parents and gardians would not be fine with thier childrens emotional data being collected, and it then being sold off to give them better ads. Becase in all honesty children are not only using school computes for educational purposes, there are many students who are playing games, looking at articles, and in general not doing school work. There is also many times teachers tell students to look things up, and anytime something is looked up online there are ads. RIght now these ads are mostly targeted towards things that have been looked up in the past or things that have been clicked on. Dr, Huang says,\" For example, if you smile when a Web as appears on your screen, a simmilar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be diffrent.\" (D'Alto, 6) Why would parents want Google ad generation to know you child looked at a random ad and just so happened to smile? It doesn't make any sense. Also not only does the program that caught that lovely smile know, but now the people the company owning that program sold it to know too. One thing that should not be sold for profit is someones emotional data.\n\nNow the reasons that people would want emotion reading technogly in classrooms should be addressed. A student might do better in school should they be able to have a lesson almost entierly catering to their intrests.\n\nDr. Huang states,\" Then tit could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" ( D'Alto, 6) This would mean that the student would be able to have a lesson that they understand, and that they would be interested in. This would promote more learning and better grades.\n\nThis tecnology is a bad idea for teachers and students alike to have emotion reading techonlogy placed in classroom, and there would likey be an poutcry from the public to remove them due to their emotional information being sold to companies. The bad outcomes just outweigh the positives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story affected cyclist physically mentally They affected physically rough terrain heat desert mountains Also didnt follow plan map cloe I think anxiety whole thing took toll physical well It affected mentally every town passed every building passed deserted idea people stress This mentally messed thought going die thats good anyone I really think thinks right listen crazy old men anymore Maps dont go crazy dont really get outdated maps dont lie obviously learned lesson", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think about driveless cars is that it could be benifitual to the everyday workaholic but not the someone who doesnt plan their day. There are positive things to having driveless cars and their are negitives things too.\n\nSome advantages to having driveless cars would be it would be less car accidents. That would reduct death by car accidents. Another thing would he would give you time in the vehicle to do the things you need to get done before you reach the destantion your going to, such as if your going to a meeting and you have a powerpoint to finish. They also would make roadtrips or long drives more safe because human errors would be gone if the human isn't driving. As the passage says the driveless taxi system would use less fuel and more flexable than taking a bus route. For bigger cities this would be a great way to keep emmissions down and keep this air cleaner.\n\nHowever, their are some negitive things too. Like would the driveless car have the sensor capability to slow down when on a bumpy road or driving in the direction of a large pothole. Then you would have to worry about a blow out or damage to the driveless vehicle's wheels. You would have to think about repair costs of the vehicle's wheel if it has a bunch of sensors too. I would think that the driveless vehicle would have trouble in a rural area or on farmland where there aren't streets, just dirt roads. I would also think what would the vehicle do in the event of a crash on a freeway? would it stop and shut down in the middle of the roadway, or would it need the human to take control during the accident? Also what if the vehicle was in the path of an emergency vehicle? Would the driveless car be aware? The idea of something going wrong is too great of a chance.\n\nWith all the innovative ideas about driveless vehicles on the roadway, Im unsure if its a good idea or a bad one, but I do think it would be something to use for a big city and see how it would work out. It is a cool futuristic idea but are we effecient enough to trust vehicles to drive themselfs safer than a human? Im not sure but, its a good idea to try.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "'' Hello my name is Luke I will be giving you some reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.''\n\n''This all by my experiences from being part of it so here we go.''\n\n''You will go to Europe and many countries and help countries recover their food supplies,animals,and so much more. We take about 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. ''\n\n''To me the cattle boat trips were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small town boy.'' '' Besides helping people , I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.''\n\nMy favorite thing about being in this program that I think you should join is that I got to see Aropolis in Greece and taking a gondola ride in Venice, Itlay a, a city with streets of water, and seeing\n\nPanama Canal on the way to China. And you could do that and so much more if you join.\n\n\"The unique thing about the program is that you get to do lots of things for example, we have to feed and water the animals about two to three times a day ,so that keeps you busy.\" ''We also have to pull\n\nup from the lower holds of the ship some bales of hay and bags of oats and the stalls\n\nalso have\n\nto be cleaned.\"You could also be a night watchman which you will take care of the animals at night every hour and make an hourly report to the captin , which I had to do once.\"\n\n\"If you are worried that you don't get breaks well thats not a problem because especially when the animals get unloaded we play games like, baseballand volleyball games in the empty animal holds and we did much more games to help pass time.\"\n\n''Not lying to you this was much more than an adventure, it opened a new world for me.''\n\n\"These are basic things why I Luke Bomberger think you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of date spent watching them that has a more significant impact on offspring. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer scion are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When heir become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, scion would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of moment in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills. On the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. Firstly, in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behaviour. For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides, in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how offspring behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, products whose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively. In conclusion, although both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence, parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density\n\nand size, and also closest distance. In the article, \"Earth, Venus, and mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes weare closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration forcing for sending humans to stody Venus. The NASA says, they possible solution to the hostile coditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\n\nThe challenging to study Venus is that in the article, \"since no spacecraft survived the landinf for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\"\n\nAlso, the challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The temperature average of on the planet's suface is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit including the atmosheric pressure is 90 times greater than our own planet.\n\nAccording to the article, \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of anyplanet in our solar system even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" They also discussing to visits to ots surface because Astronomers are fascinated by the Venus. So, It may have been the mostly like Earth planet in our solar system. In the article, \"the long ago, Venus was probly covered largely with oceans and could have supported variuos forms of life, just like Earth.\" Venus still have some feathure just like Earth.\n\nIn conlusion, It's challenging to study Venus but It's helpful of imagination and innovation. Also, human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors according to the article. It gave us a lot of experince and gain knowledgeable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is to turn the cars into something different. In the text, it states that no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore. It, also states that Sergey Brin can imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because they don't need them anymore, because he envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets or some type of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. I think that people should use their cars because a taxi is not always going to be availiable for them. So, they need to drive themselves places instead of having a taxi take them where they need to go.\n\nAlso, in this article it states that the cars Sergey Brin foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer way far more flexibility than a bus. It, also stated that he believes such cars would fundamentally change the world. I disagree with the taxi system because there won't always be a taxi availiable for you when you need to go places.\n\nIn my opinion, people should start driving themsleves to places they need to go instead of a taxi always having to go and always pick them up and take them where ever they need to go. I think it's a waste of gas for a taxi person always wasting there gas to go pick up people that have a car but don't want to drive it. I think taxi should only pick up people that don't have a car and take them places.\n\nThe text also states, that some companies are making computer drivern cars. In the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that could only run on a special track. It states, that the track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front of the car. Furthermore, it stated that engineers at Berkeley tried something very similar but they used magnets with alternating polarity than an electrical track.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the auther did a good job writtening this artivcle because he use good detail to catch the reader and to think a little more about planet venus the auther is sau that ( In space term- human have seat numerous of spacecraft to land on this clound-draped world. Each pervies mission was unmanned, and for good reason, sice no spacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. May that is the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three deacades) say the auther in the artivcle.\n\nThe auther also say in the artivcle (that the atmospher of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are in the clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venis atmosphere. He said the on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degerees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet.) Also the conditions are far more extree than anything humans encounter on the earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deppest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any plantes in our solar system even though mercury is closer to ur sun.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruping volcanoes powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Astronmers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. Still today venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet venus hasa surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. Furthermore , recall that venus can sometime be our nerest option for a planetary visit, a crucal consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nI like this article because it was fun to learn somthing new and that the article and the author was good at laying out his article and also putting in detail and fact what he new about venus it was super easly to do the question. I think that the auther supports the idea vey good in the article because he lay it out for you and that he/she give out fact to supports the reader and to help out a little.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental pollution has been a major concern to the society. Some folks argue that increasing the oil price is not the best solution to mitigate the environmental issue. I on the other hand agree with the notion above that increasing the cost of petrol decreases the frequency of its usage thus contributing to environmental advantage. \r\n\r\nFirstly, increasing the costs of fuel is one way to combat pollution. This is because, by inflating fuel prices, people will hesitate to spend their money on gas when they can spend their money elsewhere. For example, in Australia, people will not fill the tank of their vehicles on any other day other than Tuesday as the price of petrol is highly expensive. They need to fill up their vehicle with petrol, but are forced to wait until Tuesday just to fill up their vehicle tank when the petrol price is relatively cheaper. Moreover, they will start exploring other modes of transportation such as buses and trains since the fares are cheaper than their spending on petrol. \r\n\r\nSecondly, increasing the costs of fuel will directly affect the demand for fuel-based cars on the market. As a result of the rise in oil prices, there is less demand on the market for a vehicle that operates on petrol and diesel. It will further encourage people to explore other transportation that uses alternative energy for example electric or hybrid vehicles. For instance, a big brand like Toyota has started to produce more hybrid and electric automobiles as there is more demand for these types of vehicles in the market from consumers. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I completely agree with the statement above as increasing fuel will be beneficial towards the environment since it will encourage the community to be vigilant in their fuel spending and forced to consider alternative options such as using vehicles that source from renewable energy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Joe Kurmaskies Rough Road Ahead Do Exceed Posted Speed Limit several features effect cyclist and I travelling high deserts California June Kurmaskie Deserts June extremely hot dry caused cylist become dehydrated quickly Flat road replaced short rolling hills The change flat lands hills made ride strenuous cyclist These conditions directly affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last 30 years, businesses have grown to a big extent, some people believe that commerce is not just about making a fortune but also has a lot of other responsibilities, this essay totally agrees with that statement and will provide several arguments to support that opinion.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, leading a multimillion dollars business doesn't have to be only about making money, there has to be a room for charity and philanthropy in their budget, for instance, corporates should help the government fix some problems like homelessness by building apartments and houses for those who are in need. Moreover, helping the state renovate facilities as well as infrastructures in the poorer areas, for example, repairing roads in the rural regions and constructing hospitals and healthcare centres in the disadvantaged zones, all that at the companies’ expense.\r\n\r\nSecondly, corporates have also other social responsibilities, assisting in saving the environment should be a top priority, a good example is in promoting recycling by placing recycling bins all over the place, along with funding recycling industries, in this way the waste will be minimized .There is, in addition, one further point to make,- it is in investing in renewable energy like solar or wind energy so society will be less dependent on fossil fuels, a good example is investing in electric cars and making them affordable for everyone; therefore, the emission of greenhouse gases will be lessened. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, business is not about only making money but also has tremendous obligation towards society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lots people good patient Im good But traveling along distance learn patient Several times year mom sister sometimes dad I drive house She lives hours away near My loves family visits dont mind taking one weekend every months go see Ive least times life time My mom works night shift well known hardware store Usually works So gets work would pack leave I always bring keep entertained But time I sleep One time I drunk lots pop hyper I annoying mom lot So I put keep entertained But time I sleep One time I drank lots pop hyper I annoying mom lot So I put started acting like idiot singing along songs Until died I felt heart break little I couldnt fall asleep I still hyper I started listening radio could listen country Since going traveling away control tower cool radio stations Finally reached The store always stop get gas food go I got even pop I gave tiny evil laugh I handed items mom In car I finished food bored There nothing car I angry point I looked window sighed Soon enough I fallen asleep I woke sound us pulling drive way running come greet us Finally I survived yet another ride house Then I remembered drive home Even though I make trip several times year Im almost positive never stop getting bored ride Being patient one favorite things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The public confronts a phenomenon in which looking younger than your actual age is considered a significant trend in modern society. In order to keep a young look, the community pay a lot of money for these kinds of services and products. The factors on it would be speculated as active promotion of the beauty industry and rapid development of technology in this sector. According to my view, drawing greater attention to our appearance and spending much value is likely to demonstrate the detrimental aspects no matter how beneficial it is. Now, I will try my utmost to jot down the phenomenon below for arriving at the conclusion in the end. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the beauty industry gives much attention to its promotion and advertisement in order to increase its demand in the market. In doing so, they cooperate strongly with celebrities or famous figures. The companies in the sector would earn more income if their partnered model will be in the eye of the public on account of people considering them as models or influencers. Having seen the status quo in Mongolia, beauty products from Korea are still in high demand due to the greater distribution of Korean drama since the year 2000. In turn, people, especially women's beauty standards and norms have changed little by little, women like Korean figures are considered beautiful due to the influence of Korean soap operas. To reach that beauty standard, Mongolians who have different facial shapes spend so much money, time and effort, it will increase our living cost, but worthless. \r\n\r\nAs far as another potential factor is proposed with the high development of editing programs, software and applications. An artificial and unrealistic appearance is disseminated to the public and it also affects public preferences thanks to the usage of these programs. Case in point, a virtual model who has a perfect figure and outlook made by the computer has drawn public attention in the latest years. These non-realistic figures lead to setting the beauty norm in society and affect to community's behaviour. From my point of view, an artificial beauty norm brings us more pressure and tension. In order to reach a high beauty standard, people spend their time, effort and wealth unconsciously. \r\n\r\nOnce and for all, I would leap to a logical conclusion that the active promotion of the beauty sector increases its demand in the market while the high development of technology related to beauty leads to setting the impractical beauty standard in the community. Therefore, I strongly consider that spending too much money on our appearance has more and more adverse effects on society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are differing opinions regarding consuming agricultural products or buying products planted in our country. To content the food demand, it is necessary to deliver food abroad. However, from my perspective, I prefer to consume domestic foods to support local farmers.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, Taiwan is an intense island with limited resources. People would like to exert each land’s value. To make the world operates more efficiently then importing is essential. For instance, Taiwan imported numerous economic crops from America due to mechanical farming methods are much cheaper than Taiwan. Regarding worldwide, the same products which make the less consumption of natural resources are more environmentally friendly. In this concern, shipments of agriculture and trading products foster eco-friendly.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nNevertheless, the complex economic system is not only for efficiency but also for employment rates. Concerned with the entire worldwide operation, if people solely consume aboard products, it could cause abundant farmers to lose their jobs. Furthermore, recently the farmland decreased and was substituted into factories. It could lead to other environmental issues such as air pollution and decreased species diversity. With the healthy awareness arousing, citizens prefer to purchase local products than imported foods, which even are more expensive. People care about the food’s quality and it can reduce transportation distances. Besides, accelerating local district economic growth can make the country's system operation more stable and also could enhance social bonding.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is still essential to import agricultural products that Taiwan’s weather is not suitable for. However, consuming local products can make people more healthy and improve job opportunities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" Nick D'Alto introduces a new idea of using computers to intepret emotions from facial expressions. Dr. Thomas Huang envisions a possibility in which online classrooms could use facial analysis in order to more effectively instruct students. However, despite the possible benefits facial analysis could provide online classrooms, things like privacy, practicality, and effectiveness are obstacles that must be addressed.\n\nPrivacy has long been one of the post important aspects of life. The same holds true for the internet as well. People value their anonymity, and they often go online in order to be someone else - someone different than they are in real life. Facial recognition requires access to the face, something many internet users are not fond of allowing, especially on the internet where everything is effectively open. Counterarguments might say that online classrooms could keep images of faces secret and secure, but every since the invention of technology, hackers, crackers, and similar people have always been able to exploit security issues and gain access to the databases with images of faces. Many people would rather no one see their faces and have no customized ads or information as opposed to having a computer know \"when [they're] happy or sad.\" While facial analysis may prove to be quite a useful and revolutionary technology, many users would forever remain wary that their privacy (and their face) might be compromised.\n\nPraticality also remains an issue for would-be-users of this technology. As D'Alto writes, not everyone's \"home PC [can] handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile\" (and subsequently their own). Many would be unwilling to buy a more powerful PC simply to allow the facial analysis software to work. While most, if not all, people acknowledge that education is important, powerful PC's often cost over one thousand dollars, a price that many are unable or unwilling to pay for a convenient online education. Also, there remains the issue of the technology itself. How would it be distributed? Would it be software or would it be built into computers? Would there be a price tag attached? These are all questions that affect how practical this technology is. Imagine people empty their wallet of a couple thousand dollars only to find that the algorithm only comes preinstalled on certain computers, or is incredibly buggy and doesn't work properly. People might argue that users should educate themselves on how the system works before even considering buying the product, but often, for products like this, the information is woefully incomplete or exaggerated. Until the technology can become accessible to the average everyday user, it will fail to successfully be implemented in online classrooms.\n\nLastly, there remains the question of truly how effective it would be. Softwares relating to human qualities are often rather inconsistent and require extensive testing. Emotions are also a tricky thing, as people sometimes try to hide them or fake them. While D'Alto states that \"to an expert, faces don't lie,\" in a educational setting, that often doesn't matter. Most students are often relatively reluctant to learn, possibly putting their face in a perpetual cycle of anger, disgust, sadness, or even fear. In school, education carries on regardless of emotional state. While teachers do care about the emotional wellbeing of their students, they still must teach like the do any other. In general, emotions are often ignored in the face of studying and education - students study what they need to, no questions asked. This raises the question of truly how useful would facial analysis be in an online classroom? There isn't much computers can do to adjust to human emotions. Computers also lack a soul, so they therefore lack emotions and empathy and sympathy. Without those, how could they possibly understand what a student needs? Humans, as D'Alto states, indeed \"perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" However, humans can also react much more appropriately. Also, there is no guarantee that the technology would read emotions correctly. And unlike fingerprint scanners or facial recognition, there is no second chance with emotions. Either the computer interprets them incorrectly or correctly. The fact remains that having a facial recognition from an online, unemotional avatar simply would not provide many advantages over a regular online classroom.\n\nNick D'Alto's \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" provides a detailed analysis of a new, potentially revolutionary technology that could prove incredibly useful in future projects. Facial analysis has the potential to totally revamp our online experience. However, the online classroom isn't one of those places. Due to privacy, praticality, and effectiveness issues, facial analysis seems to be a ratherless worthless technology to implement in an online classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a car can get you places much faster than walking or riding a bike. But there's a price you pay either on gas or the co2 emisions coming from the muffler. It is extreamly bad for the planet and we need to take action. Reducing car usage will releive you and you wont be as stressed. In some countries they have a car-free day where millions of people ride the bus, hike or walk. Thats in BOGOTA, Columbia it is smart of them but its going to take a lot more to make a change for the best. (source 3:Car-free day in spinning into a big hit in Bogota)\n\nConjested cities are known to have smog and that is nothing but air polution. And all of that polution isnt going anywhere. it stacks up causing a greenhouse effect and harming the air we breathe. But theres always going to be people driving cars unsless stricked rules are made up. we need to enforce that we only have one earth and everytime someone steps inside a car we are harming it. There are other means for transportation and we need to stop being lazy and carpool or take a taxi or bus and limit the emitions or else we are bound to doom ourselves in a co2 filled planet. (Source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars)\n\nBut banning car driving can harm the economy greatly causing the unemployment rate to skyrocket because the car companies couldnt sell anything. And transportation keeps everything running throughout America and the world. So the greatest idea would be to create a car that doesnt burn up emitions and sends them out into the atomosphere. We couldnt just get rid or all cars because our world is dependent on them. but we should use them smarter and drive durng sertain times.\n\nso all in all we should just keep on driving and do the best we can to stop all the air polution and try to make the world better for future genorations. and we just need to get smarter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face was proven to be a mesa by Cydonia. In the passage it states that Viking 1 took the first picture of it but it wasnt so clear. The pictures tooken by Viking wasn't as sharp and could have been easily mistaken as a face. When Cydonia took it however it was more sharp and more clearly visible as a mesa. Another thing the passage said was that there could have been a shadow when Viking 1 took it. With that shadow it made it look like there were eyes on the mesa.\n\nThe pictures of Cydonia were 10x sharper than Viking so it made the pictures a lot easier to notice that it was a mesa. When they took the picture the first time there were clouds since it was winter and not everyone agreed that it was just a mesa but had alien markings hidden. When people said that NASA went to take another couple pictures when it was a sunny day without clouds. The Cydonia's picture proved that there were no alien markings because of how much better the pictures were than when Viking 1 took it.\n\nThe Face was just another lasd form on Mars that looked like a Face because of shadows and an ok picture from Viking that wasn't that clear. With better equipment you could tell that it was a mesa like those on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Marcia article The Mooring Mast explains obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Nobody involved realized building would nt sturdy enough allow thousandfoot dirigible docked This pressure wind pressure would transmitted building s foundation The Steel frame would also need reinforced costing sixty thousand dollars Several problems arose due pedestrian safety issues foreign dirigibles used highlyflammable hydrogen fuel instead helium Everyone involved project realized hydrogen cause fire many people living downtown New York could lose lives dirigible would dangling feet crowded endangering countless pedestrians law banning airships flying low urban areas making illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Although Empire State Building never got fulfill s purpose international landmark heart New York", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The seagoing Cowboys program really! I mean wow, what a way to say volunteers. Luke's in this article really convinced me to really not do what he does. Man that whole animals and sightseeing sounds fun but, what if I was on a mountain and... No not now your going to have to read on to find out what I was going to say.\n\nWell wasn't that fun to just pull you into my argument like that. Well let's just begin. What I was going to say was that, what if I was on a mountain and just was sitting at the edge rolled over then SPLAT! I'm some red paint,clothes,and Puerto Rican on Mount Everest. Luke never actually mentioned any safety factors or danger factors in this article. What if a shark ate the front side of the boat and then me! Or I accidentally step on a tiger tail and it make me into a Puerto Rican smoothie! Their are so many dangerous things that can happen!\n\nI mean look we do have some upsides to the program too. Like helping people with their animals on their farm. Then you have to take care of the crops so they can sell them to get money or use them for their own to eat some delicious meat. There also is the sightseeing that I was just talking about. You could go see monkeys,elephants, and much more.\n\nLastly, should you apply for the job. Well it's your choice I gave you some ups and downs on the job. Yet, you decide. I think I changed my mind I totally do not want to go there because I'm not going to die.\n\nNow in conclusion the job could be good or bad depending on who you are. The way I see it is that I'm probably going to get killed so no. Yet, you may see things differently like maybe you want to be up close and personal with a bear or tiger. Now this was just the warnings and God things of the job and, if you want to get it good luck.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face was dicovered on May 24, 2001. It was discovered by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. \"NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" But the Face is just a natural landform discovered on Mars by NASA.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team took a picture of the face. It was discovered that there was no alien monument. On paragraph seven, the text states, \"snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos....There was no alien monument after all.\" This proves that they found out the Face was not an alien monument.\n\nBut many people were still not satisfied so, on April 8, 2001, Mars Global Surveyor went to Mars for a second look. On paragraph ten, the text states, \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" On paragraph twelve, the text states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West.\" So, the Face that they found on Mars was just a natural landform after all.\n\nUsing evidences from the texts, we learned that the Face was discovered on May 24, 2001. We learned that many people believed it to be an alien monument, but it was not. The Face got looked a second time, on April 8, 2001, but with the camera's absolute \"maximum resolution.\" In the end, they found out that the Face was just a natural landform and not an alien monument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood family tried move home country start new life new country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you really think the \"Face on Mars\" was created by aliens? The \"Face\" is nothing but an ordinary landform of Mars. Pictures, common sense, and science have proved that.\n\nFirst, there are pictures that show what the \"Face\" really is. The \"Face\" is nothing but a common mesa(2). The mesa just looks like a face because of a coincidence.\n\nSecond, any person would know that NASA would rather have money than another secret. The discovery of alien life on Mars would be very rewarding in cash, and the defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars(5). They want there to be an ancient civilization because it would mean tons of money for them.\n\nFinally, science proves that theory to be completely wrong. There have been absolutely no signs of any life whatsoever on Mars(7). If there's no life to build it, how can it be built by life?\n\nAs I said, the \"Face of Mars\" is nothing but a common mesa. All of these reasons have proved that. Now, if you excuse me, I have to get back to my research.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes I believe libraries remove certain materials book shelves found offensive someone First oerson nt go library get offended Also liberian know whats appropiate library And items like ones offend people even public area A person doest go library see something offends People go library read study quiet time And people go use library resourse find situation feel offended book movie magazine autor says writeing People might get offended stop going library Also liberian incharged items wants display library If liberian feel book okay displayed dispay book offensive someone else asked remove book And book resourceful study liberian keep area people want book ask Stuff like even published public area I think law allow offencive literature music movies etc In libraries Now days people allowed donate items litereature intertainment libraries think people make sure items donateing okay displayed So yes I believe offensive materials shoud removed libraries Because libraries places go quiet time read get offended The librarian incharged wants dislay Aand last stuff like even public area", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because, it would be an amazing experents to do. Luke also saw the world differently after he went nine times. They also saw some amazing things. You get to take care of animals. So if you like taking care of animals you'll like the cattle-boat.\n\nCaring for the animals during the crossing kept Luke busy. It's an amazing opportunity that you'll get to do and have fun while doing it. You would also get to play games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. Table-tennies tounaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nThere are some ups and downs in this journy. You have to leave your family for a few months. Life at sea isn't that easy. When it's raining make sure to be extra careful going up and down the ladders on the boat. You can get hurt or even thrown over board.\n\nIn the end it is all worth it. Going on this journy will change on how you look at life. It will make you aware of people of other countries and their needs. It will probably even open up the world to you. So if you sign up or your friend asked you to go with them. Just go because it will will be the time of your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Information about the thousands of visits from overseas to three different European natural places during 1987 and 2007 is provided in the given line chart.\nOverall, it can be seen that the number of visitors increased significantly in the three places compared to the initial year. Although, visits to Europeans lakes demostrated more changes over the 20 years than its counterparts.\nIn more detail, the most steady growth was experienced by the visits to Europeans mountains. For example, from 1987 the number of visitors grew from 20,000 to almost the double 20 years later. Similarly, visits to the coast also rose after a slight fall in 1992, reaching almost twice as much since 1987, with 75,000.\nThose visiting Europeans lakes subtantially increased over the years from 10 thousand to a peak of 75 thousand in 2002. Despite falling for about 25 thousand in 2007, the visitis to this place remained higher compared to 1987, with 50,000 at the end of the period.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe that Smart Cars are positive or negative to aspects of driverles cars? Some people believe that Smart Cars are a negative because was if something happens to the technology who is going to be responsbile the driver or the manufacturer. Although ,I would have to say Smart Cars are a postive, because the Smart Cars would have sensors, and speeds up to 25 miles per hour, and the Smart Car is controlled by technology so the car can control itself through accidents , break itself, amd through work zones. Adding to that, the Smart Car lets you know when there is a problem accuring and it gets your attention.\n\nFirst, Smart Cars are a postive aspect to driverless cars because the cars would have sensors. The sensors would monitor the surrounding of the Smart Car. In the aricle its says,\" auto makers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock breakes. With in 10 years, those sensor have become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-controll skids or rollovers\". The sensors are placed everywhere aound the car such as:on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, and 4 automatic radar sensors etc. Meanwhile, those are just some of the places.\n\nNext, the Smart Cars can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 miles per hour. In the article it says, \" But special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. In facts, non of the cars developed so far one completetely driverless. With that being said, the Smart Car isn't completely driverless, the driver is still driving just not the entire time. The driver is needed when pulling in or out of a driveway. Also when there is an accident or a problem.\n\nThen,since the Smart Cars are controlled by technology, the car can control itself through accidents,break itself, and throught work zones. The Smart Car also lets the driver know if there is something wrong . In the article it states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human drivers must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. The necessitaties the care being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever the problem occur. GM has developed driver's seats to vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\n\nFinally, Smart Cars, are a postive aspect of driverless cars because, they have sensors, good breaks, and still need drivers to control them. Although, some people might think its negative because whos going to be the one responsible if the technology messes up the driver or the manufacturer, it would have to fall back on the driver and the manufacturer. The Smart Cars have been tested so they should be postive and smart aspect.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chart provides information on purchases at a mini restaurant in the week of october (7th -13th ).\nOverall, the sales were much more attributed to dinner consumption than lunch across all the days of the week , with a drop in sales by the weekend.\nThere is an observable steady increase in lunch sales as we move across the week. Purchases worth $2400 was made on monday and a slight improvement on sales by $50 on tuesday and a further increase in sales to $2595 on Wednesday.There was however a dip in sales on thursday, with an immediate rebound increment on friday to exactly $2500.However, the sales dopped drastically to $1550 on Sunday.\nRegarding Dinner sales, we can see that a revenue of $3623 was realised on monday. Afterwards, the purchases became relatively stable at arround $3850 from tuesday to thursday and a further rise to $4350 on Friday. Similarly to lunch sales, there was also a drop by the weekend to about $2450.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The effects of greenhouse gas emission began to take their toll on the earth's atmosphere simply by its own natural output. As time has gone on though, and humans and their ways of transportation have evolved, greenhouse gas emission is becoming more of a problem. Automobiles, mainly cars, play a huge role in the production of nasty fumes and gases that become trapped in the atmosphere. For example, in Europe passenger cars make up twelve percent of total greenhouse gas emission, and in heavily congested areas such as the United States-it can skyrocket up to fifty percent!\n\nSome nations/countries are beginning to take a new approach to battle the \"War of Greenhouse Gases\". As studies have shown that national driving levels and the amount of people purchasing cars and earning their licenses are dropping after their peak in 2005, people are more and more willing to put down the car keys and put on their running shoes. One of these places in particular is the city of Vauban and is located in Germany. It is a middle-class to upper class community and its citizens can be considered pioneers of suburbia. Vauban does not permit driving in it's limits, besides the main thoroughfare, and a few side streets. Car owners buy a space for their car for $40,000 alongside a home.\n\nWhile some might argue about the practicality of not driving your car if you have one, it's shown to be extremely beneficial not only for the environment, but for people as well. When you go outside, whether you're headed somewhere or just on a casual stroll, you may reach Nirvana as you enjoy the true sounds of nature. In places where cars are permitted to drive, you might hear the sound of birds chirping outside your window, or the calm rustle of leaves rustling in the wind, but the rumbles, roars, and honks of a car are not far behind. In areas such as Vauban, the beautiful sounds of the world won't be drowned out by a greasy hunk of steel.\n\nBesides feeling at peace, a life without a car is a healthier life! Now, when you want to go somewhere, you must rely on your own two feet. Those two feet, bicycle, skateboard, etc. will be all you need to get where you're going! Unlike many places though, everything is within walking distance for convenience and to encourage you to take these steps. Notice the physical and emotional changes in yourself once in a place with no cars-you'll feel more relaxed, less rushed, and your body will thank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist s adventure much affected setting It seemed though worse setting became worst personally felt For example hit ghost town laughed Once got fork road saw less exisiting civilization says This sight troubling Once moves gets discouraged Rough Road Ahead sign It seems though dehydrated gets worse things became The climate story also becomes difficult The land first flat easy ride got harder bike cyclist grew wary delievious knew keep going The area cyclist enormous effect emotionally", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is giving us all this information on venus. Venus is the closest planet earth in trems of density and size, and venus is the secound planet from the sun. Venus of course has more powerful weather then we do here at earth so that why they say that it is possible that venus was like earth with water and living thng years ago. They have eruoting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, frequent lighting. Venus has the hottes surface temperature of any other planet even thuogh Mercury is the closest planet to the sun.\n\nResearchers cannot take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else, from a distance. They may want to test more thing further in to venus but at some piont they cant take any of it cuased of the effect that can cuase or danger they can be in, o that way the wat to make stronger machines to go out to Venus so that they could make more invistigacion on in\n\nVenus.\n\nNasa is working to get more studing of venus if possible, they had some simpliied electronics that lasted for 3 weeks. They are lokking for simething stronger that last more then 3 weeks so that they can get more studing on Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, I dont think that using a facial coding system on your computers would be usefull or we wouldnt need it in a classroom. The only reason that could be useful would maybe be for a lab or in a phycology class. They wouldnt come to any use in a classroom because most kids in a class dont show much emotion. the process would take a while to do in a classroom also because it has to take a 3-D model of your face and makes all 44 major muscles in your face to determine if your happy, sad, anger, stressed, disgusted, etc.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding Sytem can detect your emotions even when you are trying to hide them, The software weighs the diffrent units in a face or in a painting or a picture. People can perform this same type of research just by looking at a person or a friend. But the software can get every emotion just by looking at the persons muscles. The software can also pick up if a person is putting on a fake smile because of the muscles and there facial expression.\n\nAccording to the Facial Feedback Theory of emotion if you dont put a fake smile on and actually smile this could help produce these emotions. Some drama club teachers use a technique that helps the emotions look more realistic. The drama coach makes the actors or performers smile then frown so it helps them produce this emotion faster and more realistic.This helps the crowd with the emotions because people often imitate other peoples facial expressions unconsiously. But this could be a huge step for the science of emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever seen anything unusual and thought that it was just a natural landform, but other people thing it was created by extraterrestials? Well, some people argue that the Face on Mars was created by aliens and some people believe that it was created natural. I believe that the Face formed naturally. I believe this because of the camera quantity and the shadows and clouds of the planet.\n\nFirst, I am going to discuss the camera quality. The quality of the camera is important so that the picture of the Face is clear. When the scientists first took the picture of the Face in 1976, there was an unclear picture. As time went on the cameras got more and more advanced that to the point you could see every detail of the Face. In 2001, when scientists took a clear picture of the Face, they identified it as a mesa, a natural landform in Western America. Also, they said that if there were any other alien landforms like egyptian pyramids that it would show up in the picture. Last, in the passage it states, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This quote from the passage proves that the Face is a natural landform and not created by aliens. This is how the camera quality prove whether or not the Face was created by aliens or is a natural landform.\n\nNext, I am going to discuss how the clouds and shadows of Mars prove that the Face is a natural landform. First, the shadows of Mars gives the Face an illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. In the passage it states, \"Huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, mouth.\" This shows that the Face is not really a face and it is actually a natural landform. Next, the clouds on Mars can throw off the cameras vision of the face. When the MGS took a picture of the Face when it was cloudly on Mars the picture was unclear and scientists could not see the Face in detail. Although, in 2001 when the MGS explored Mars, it was not cloudy. MGS was able to get a clear picture of the Face and scientists identified it as a natural landform and not an alien creation. This is how the shadows and clouds of Mars prove that the Face is a natural landform.\n\nFinally, the camera quality, shadows, and clouds of Mars prove that the Face is a natural landform. The better the camera quality the more proof there is to say that the Face is a natural landform. Also, without the clouds and shadows of Mars, the Face is easily identified as a natural landform. To conclude, this is how the quality of the camera, shadows, and clouds of Mars prove that the Face is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technological advances on transportation that are being made today are amazing. Starting with wheels built in to shoes, then to bikes that can be folded up and put in a backpack, and now driverless cars are becoming a thing. Many people think that driverless cars are a huge advantage, but they deprive teens of the excitement of getting to drive for the first time, eliminate basic responsibility that every young adult should take on, and can be responsible for major damages. Self-driving cars are not a good idea.\n\nPicture this, your sixteen years old, so close to getting a lisence and being able to drive yourself wherever you want. You walk in to your class to take the drivers test, heart pumping, palms sweaty, butterflies in your stomach, feeling like your getting ready to go down a giant hill on a rollercoaster. You open the car door, sit down in the driver's seat, only to find out that it is a self-driving car. Most teenagers and even some young adults long for the feeling of being able to drive a car. The small, yet riveting sense of freedom, being able to drive wherever you want, whenever you want. Self driving cars will just take those feelings away. Sure, you can still go places, but it is not as satisfying as driving yourself. Freedom is not the only feeling driving gives someone, it also provides a feeling of responsibility.\n\nHow many times have you seen a program that shows a teenager driving their parent's car and crashing it, and the teen says \"Ah man, my parents are going to kill me!\" and then come up with a crazy sceme to fix it? A lot. In our culture today, this subject comes up on a regular basis. One of the first, major responsibilities that is given to a teenager is taking care of a car. Being able to drive it carefully, keep gas in it, and not violate any traffic laws is part of growing up. It shows that an individual is ready to take on some of the harder responsibilities that life brings. If there are driverless cars, then it takes away many of the learning oppurtunities. Driverless cars also bring many safety hazards.\n\nRobots being created today are capable of many things. Having emotions that react to their surroundings is not one of them. If a human were to hit an animal, many might pull over to see if it is alright. Robots will not be aware of this and will simply keep driving. If it were to hit a human and keep driving the owner could easily face charges of fleeing the scene, even though it was not intentional. If the car were to commit a traffic violation, would the owner of the car be the one recieving the ticket? Questions that can not be answered are reasons why we should just not have driverless cars. Why risk the safety of people and animals, in order to not have to drive?\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are reckless, take the fun out of growing up, and have an impact on how people will live their lives. Ultimately they can not be controlled at all times, leaving them to be somewhat unpredictable. There are many questions about them that can not be answered. Driverless \"smart\" cars are not safe.They should not be made and put on the road, endangering the lives of many living things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I think using computers good thing effect exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends Here three reasons support oppinion people learn internet children school go online find homework internet effect everyday life My first reason I think using computers good people learn internet You know people say learn something new everyday Well wondering something re think something internet help find re looking great site find re looking It also images need picture project need My second main reason using internet good go online check subject If nt want homework recessthe next day sick No go online schools website click teachers names see homework This way still time go side play friends interact family members My third final reason using internet good effects everyday life good way If nt tv idea weather like go online see s going snowy rainy This tell need jacket rain jack need use shovel hold umbrella The internet useful everyday life In conclusion I think using internet good effect exercise interacting family To support I stated people learn internet children access homework missed day internet effects everyday life good way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship around long various mediums art In many cases censorship many would agree suitable material anyone create enjoy But serious issues censor deemed suitable certain audience even whole country What gives select right ban given number imaginative creations even aspects lued nature Censorship still usefull tool many governments employ accomplish wide variety tasks considered ensure safety minds bodies Some widely know cases despicable tactic control come countries In countries materials deemed potentially hazardous wellfare heavily policed many cases destroyed The noteworthy instances occured would gather large amounts books people burn massive rallies The people enthralled leadership would often times freely relenquish books resistance cases join throw books The thing still occuring today wtih censor still internet surfing possibilities In popular search engine attempted set shop country quickly entered dispute censoring certain materials Some months argument began censoring people company completely removed bans short time much dismay During time reported main search topics many social reformers different religions sanctioned religion But one country takes cake censorship re restricted policed technology country The common people live called CAPS In home country promised many rights protect freedom citizens We promised freedom speech well press censoring libraries would restrict If stand protect rights Are people people Why allowing censorship intellectual creations place created provide access said materials less fortunate gain knowledge understanding If people allow blatent restriction given freedoms position first place Our country founded later almost torn apart men women willing risk order protect freedoms country Are descendants people If allow squander hard fought earned forefathers The censor often poses questions cause one wonder CAPS really better way They point every great work intellegent art deviant nature create innapropriate pieces art Pornography prevalent examples pointing restrict would stop hundreds children roam libraries bookshelves also provided internet services It reasonable question take consideration answer I believe always job parent guardian bring child It simply enough drop child local library hope find something interesting Helping child find want journey taken parent child And believe censor nt always right acceptable general As author Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us Censorship around long time likely never fully cut functioning That sadly inevibility avoided But amount occurs daily life directly affected much freedom willing stand", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of youngsters should be required to do gratis society activity in their leisure time has been a controversial issue for recent years for people and experts. I firmly believe that this idea can be beneficial for teenagers and the community. The upside and downside aspects of this notion will be discussed at length in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nIn today's generation, every youngster has to learn behavioural guidelines to get how to face and deal with personal and social challenges. Participating in group works and doing gratis activities can help teenagers release family dependence. as a result, they get to socialize with another. For instance, partnership in collect the rubbish from nature such as park and forest with students in their free time that execute in many schools of different countries.\r\n\r\nAs a result, they get the rule of co-working and learn how to protect the earth and the environment. Also, charity works, for example, assist needy families in any way can train teenagers with kind personalities. So these unpaid and communal activities will be advantageous for young people and society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from my perspective, each community must plan and design an acceptable schedule for dividing the communal tasks between teenagers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Innocent and young, children grow accustomed to the utilization of cars in society. Hot Wheelz, battery-powered Barbie SUVs, Hess Semi-trucks, and other deviations of play-friendly cars introduce the car culture to Americans from nearly the first day out of the womb. Mothers, fathers, aunts, uncles, neighbors, and grandparents depend on their cars daily. This reliance on cars consequently impacted America's environment. However, limiting car usage reduces society's carbon footprint, slowly eliminating the encompassing pollution and stress of the developed car culture.\n\nAll vehicles alike release carbon emissions into the atmosphere, polluting the air and smogging our cities. Suburbs, especially, rely on automobiles to provide needed transportion. Experts state that car transportation in suburbs \"is a huge impediment\" (Source 1) when discussing \"efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes\" (Source 1). In the car-intensive areas of the United States, passenger cars hold responsibility for \"up to 50 percent\" (Source 1) of greenhouse emissions. This constant car usage pollutes American skies. Elisabeth Rosenthal states that car usage reduction \"will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment\" (Source 4), especially in America \"since transportation is the second larget source [of emissions]\" (Source 4). Cutting down on cars for alternative, public, or group transportation provides a solution to the car epidemic of suburban America.\n\nIn other societies where limitations of car usage occured, the majority of its denizens replied positively. In the car-depleted suburb of Vauban, Germany, \"57 percent sold a car to move [to Vauban]\" (Source 1). The influential idea of a suburb without traffic jams and long drives to stores attracted 5,500 current residents of Vauban. Futhermore, car bans in Paris reduced emissions and cleansed the air \"after days of near-record pollution\" (Source 2) and \"five-days of intensifying smog\" (Source 2). During this ban, \"congestion was down 60 percent\" (Source 2), relieving traffic and pollution. In Bogota, Colombia, a \"car-free day\" (Source 3) promotes \"alternative transportation and reduce[s] smog\" (Source 3). One Colombian businessman commented cheerfuly, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" (Source 3). The relief of traffic results in the relief of stress, which city-drivers appreciate.\n\nIn America's evolving society, and the evolving global economy, limiting car usage stands benefically. Reducing smog, eliminating the stress of traffic, and preserving the environment, low car-usage societies appeal in all current circumstances. Progressively, the world may see a day where car usage is antiquated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of exploring venses \" the author suggests that studying venus is a wrothy prsuit despite the dangers it presents. The author thinks studyinfg venus is a worthy pursuit because venus is the most earth like planent in our soloar system. \"venus is the closest planet to earth in term of denstiy and size, and occasionaily the closest in distace too.\" the author belives one day that people cuold go there and vist and study on venouse more or maybey even live there, \" imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher ataltitude to fly over many stroms,a vehicle hovery over hovering over venus wuold avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out their way\"\n\nBut studying vesue is pretty challageing and dangeus because being able to study tha planent you have to be on it and that diffcult because \" a thick atmousephere of almost 97% carbon dixide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of hihly corrosive sulfuric acid in venuis atmoahere.\" and \"since no spacecraft suurvived the landing for more then a few hours. maybe this issue explans why not a single spaceship has tuoched down on venus in more than 3 decates.\"\n\n\" noumerous facters contrirbute to venus's repuaton as a challenging planet for humans to study on.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of worsening traffic conditions around the globe has become a matter of discussion for many. In my opinion, lifestyle choices and unreliable public transport are some of the prime reasons to name the few. In this essay, I shall outline the main causes for this development and analyse the possible solutions to this problem.\nTo start with, there are numerous predominant reasons, that could be fueling this trend. Firstly, in our modern society, working class individuals often face the lack of personal time. Thus, it is necessary to minimize its usage on various activities throughout the day. One of such activity is travelling to and back from work. For example, a recent study conducted at Stanford University, showed that 95% of people in America, use their vehicles only for driving to work. Secondly, even today, many countries are facing a number of challenges in making their public transportation more reliable and efficient. For example, during a survey when people were asked the reasons why they do not prefer buses or metros, a majority among them blamed the inefficiency and crowded stations as the primary culprit.\n\n\nSo what can be done? I believe this problem has to be tackled on a number of levels. First, the government could enforce new regulations that prevents from driving cars of certain license plate. For example, recently in India, goverment banned the use of cars that have even license plate number on specific days in a week. Furthermore, by fixing the issues that are being faced by the people in public transportation, goverment could encourage its use.\nIn conclusion, this is a topic which raises many questions in contemporary life. From the given arguments and examples it is clear that both the views have strong supporting grounds. In the future, it will be fruitful to review the reasoning stated above in order to realize any improvement in this direction.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus is because Venus is the second one from the sun and it more challenging to be their because the way they are really close by the sun and can be really hot to to be their. Another thing is that is that no one can last their by the way the temperature is because every missing they could send to Venus they could not be up their for long because their spacecraft can't handle being up their more than a few hours.\n\nThe way Venus works is that is very hard to be up there for to do a mission or such because one reason is that they need a propeer vehicle to go up their and have certain items to have to surive and have proper equiment for to be able to handle that weather to do mission and proper gear so they won't get hot in the suit or whatever so they can have a test dummy go to see how would handle the suit and get controlled from down here and see how it works until they try real people to test out the suits if they feel comfurable and for there able move around\n\nso when there up there they can feel good and can do there mission to complete it and for there spacecraft to get it also test out if it can handle to much heat and can be able to come back down with the power it needs or however it works to move around and can handle a certain of time or to see how much time it can be up there to not get stranded up their and to not get stuck up their.Another thing is to see if they can handle enough oxygen up their and for if there able to stay there a night to rest there.\n\nFinally is that Venus is a way that I think can be like a project that we can invent new technology to improve for people to go outta and to come out new invitions for the inviroment also it can get someone enough money if there would be willing create something like that would to succeed in themself for their enviroment that would like to get enough money for there invition and can start to build more so people that want to take a tour or would to go try out too another thing is that sometimes there could be a risk for to not be able to come back or so if it didnt work as well but it can make someone happy for to have a way to go up to space and wasting to much fuel and something that would not to exspensive and can save people the resources and money that are not going to need to waste again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article Making Mona Lisa Smile, the ariticle states, \" She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 2 percent angry.\"\n\nThe value of using the technology to read read students' emotional expressions is a good thing. in the the text it states, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" Each muscle has a different job to do in the artical one of the examples that is given it the orbicularis oris muscle. This muscle is aroound your mouth and it tightens when you get angry.\n\n\"Eckaman has classifiied six basic emotion- happiness, surprise,anger, disgust, and sadness- and then associated with characteristic movements of the the facial muscles.\" All muscles are different, each muscle controls a different part of the face. In the article, \" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model musr move like human muscles.\" People show various amount of facial expressions and by using this technology researchers can tell what peoples emotions are.\n\nIn this study of facial expressions researchers found out that there are many types of facial expressions.\n\nThe subjest of Leonardo da Vinci's painting of Mona Lisa during the Renaissance is a major topic of this research. Mona Lisa shows four emotions: happy, disgust, fear, and anger. The software that Dr. Paul Eckman has created known as FACS which stands for Facial Action Coding System. The FACS can recogmize all of Mona Lisa's emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Unmasking the Face on Mars is a really interesting article. It is very real looking in the pictures so you can tell it can't be fake unless its photoshopped. In 1976 the face wasn't very clear as to what it was. You can tell its somethikng strange but its hard to make out a face.\n\nI wonder how the face got there? Was it aliens? Was it asteroids? How did a face get made on Mars?\n\nIn 1998 its a little cloudy now but you can clearly see that there is a very strande object on Cydonia's surface. This can't be photoshopped because photoshopping doesn't look this realistic. You can now make out eyes a mouth and a nose clearly on the surface of Cydonia. What will NASA do next? Will they figure out how this face got on Cydonia? Will they be able to figure out how the face got there? I hope so.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" was very popular. It has starred in a Hollywood film, it appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store checkout lines. People have wondered how it got there and how long it will be there. Will NASA's team figure out what made this mysterious \"Face on Mars?\" In 2001 The face was very clear about it being there. What does it look like today? What will it look like in 10 years? This is a very questionable article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank. When his friend Don asked him to go on a cattle boat Luke couldn't say no. It was and opportunity of a life time and Luke knew it. In 1945 the World War ll was over in Europe and many countries were left in ruins.44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Rlief and Rehabilition Administration).They hired seagoing cowboys to take care of all the animals. So Luke and Don signed up.\n\nIn August 1945,they received an order to go to New Orleans. They arrived on the 14th of August the day the pacific war ended says Luke. They got there papers and got a boat called the SS Charles W. Wooster and headed towards Greece. They were delivering 335 horses and enough hay and oats to feed them. Be for they got to Greece Luke turned 18 years old. That ment that he could be drafed at any time to go to war. When he told them that he was on a cattle-boatr trip they told him to do it for the Military Service. Luke had made nine trips that more then any seagoing cow boy has ever made.\n\nThe cattle boat trip was an alsome trip for a small town boy Luke say. besides helping people he also got to see different countries like all of Europe and China but when he saw Acropolis in Greece it was special to him Luke says. It toke Luke and Don abount two weeks to crose the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast that is a long time on water non stop that would make me sick and never ride a boat again but sometimes you have to do things you dont want to do.\n\nWhen Luke was little he helped his aunt Katie's farm ou when he was a boy and he has worked hard ever since that is my dream is to work on a farm. It did not teach him the dangers of the sea though. When he was on his secened trip he was a night watchman. He had to check on all of the animals every hour and that was easy i bet because of him helping on a farm when he was a kid that was the same but it was on a boat. When he was reporting to the captin one time he slipoed and fell on the ground and a peice of meatal stop him from going over board.\n\nSo that was my eassy on Luke and his life I really liked this story alot i would have wrote more but i am about out of time so thats all i got. I found out that that peice of meatal craked his ribs so he could not work for a acouple of days witch that might of hert his body every day till it was helled but i do nt know because i am not Luke and that is the end of my story.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently,the climate change is becoming increasingly serious due to the unlimited resources excavation.This has triggered an intense discussion.Some people believe that climate change may negatively influence the economic development,whereas,some other people advocate that a greater amount of opportunities would be exerted.Personally,I strongly agree that the adverse effects outweigh the advantage for larger business odds.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the changing climate could result in a lower production of planting.According to the research,by 2030,the total production of wheat,rice and corn may decline by almost 5%~10% due to the global warming which is a kind of climate change.Moreover,in arid areas,a great amount of engineerings in factories that require plentiful water could conceivably be forced to terminate the operation because of the lack of water source.Therefore,uncertain climate conditions presumably lead to the serious falling economy.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,more business opportunities are potentially to be accompanied with the natural catastrophe and damages to human health.This means that more artificial food might be produced to replace the decreased plantings.What’s more,it is undoubtedly that climate change will be detrimental to individual’s health.It perhaps rises the probability of disease and death rate and thus elevates the infections.In light of this,more advanced medical machines tend to be generated and lots of relevant medical staffs are of great inportance for treatment.Similarly,more precaution works for avoiding the disease like masks towards haze weather or related measures would be in demand.Hence,this tends to boost the development in economy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,although the economic prosperity whatever from human’s daily life or health issue would be brought,however,in my opinion,the disadvantages involved in environmental damage and worse physical conditions for humans should be in deeper consideration and these factors are inevitable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars has been an idea for many years. Now it's actually happening, companies are starting to test cars like this for near years usage. I think cars should be driverless because it helps people save money, the cars are safer, and they're modern.\n\nDriverless cars help people save money by people not having to buy cars. The passage states in the first paragraph that, \"Google cofounder Sergey Brin, envisions a future with a public transportation system with driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\" If people just call the taxi service they won't have the need for a car, so they'll save a bunch of money. With that buses and taxis would use have the fuel they use today, so it could also help with pollution. Also with the taxi system people can be picked up quicker than with taxi services we have today, so people can get to their jobs faster or anywhere.\n\nWith driverless cars they're also safer than normal driving cars. The passage mentions an idea of having cameras on the driver to make sure they're alert and paying attention. The car itself has the power to control brake when needed and reduce or increase power from the engine, the car is better at response and control than a human driver alone. There is still the possible mishap of having an accident, but the accident could either be the driver or the car's fault. When the car knows of construction work or too much traffic about to happen the car alerts the driver to start driving, so the car can avoid any accidents happening on its part.\n\nThe driverless car is so much more modern than the normal driving car of today. Modernizing cars started in the 1980's, automakers created the antilock brakes and now those have grown to something bigger;the wheels of today detect out-of-control skids or rollovers. The car also tells the driver when to drive for example, GM has developed seats that vibrated to tell the driver to take a hold of the wheel. What's truly so modern about driverless cars is cameras on the rear wheel, rearview mirror, also rotating sensor on the roof, GPS reciever, and inertial motion sensor. All those features are being tested on a Toyota Prius, but the best feature of all is the 3-D model of the surrounding around the car to show the driver what their surroundings are.\n\nI'm personally for driverless cars because they help save money, they're safer, and they're modern. Of course there is still things to work on the cars and some legalizing to be done for states. Driverless cars are the thing of the near future that's for sure.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Earth is the third planet in our solar system , and the big rock we humans inhabit in todays time. Living on Earth, conditions are pretty good with inhabitable surface temperature, low atmospheric pressure, and breathable air. Our space neighbors, however, aren't so lucky. The two closest planets to Earth are Mars and Venus. Venus, however, is the most closely related to Earth is density and size, and distance in some cases. The only problem is that Venus has a very harsh landscape, and humans even fitted with the most capable technology wouldn't last very long . So,why should we study Venus if its one of the most dangerous neighbors you could ever have? The author who wrote this article claims that Venus's surface can reach over 800 degrees fahrenheit , and have an atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than Earths. The author emphazises, though, on the fact that Venus \"may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" The author then proceeds to elaborate on this, stating that Venus may have once covered with various lifeforms and may have been covered largely with oceans, and that studying Venus could solve some of the biggest planetary mysteries . Paragraph 4 states, \"Today, Venus still has some planetary features analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" The author then proceeds to state how The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has been exploring some ideas to send humans to Venus for studies. Paragraph 5 states, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape... a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\"\n\nIn Paragraph 8, the author then concludes with stating that , \"meeting the challenge presented by Venus has value.\" The one thing the author did not clearly address in the article is why studying Venus' landscape would be benificial , and worth risking lives. The author states, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think Venus is worth studying despite of all its dangers? Some people think Venus needs some more exploration and some people do not. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by saying it is very similar to the Earth, by stating the theory that Venus was probably once like Earth, and because although Venus has many dangers we shouldn't limit ourselves to them. The author gave many valid points on why Venus should get studied although of its dangers.\n\nVenus is very similar to Earth. They're probably the most similar planets in the solar system. Learning about Venus could probably help us learn more about the Earth. The author says \" Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" The author probably wants to say that maybe if they created a new spacecraft and sent it down we could possibly retain more information from it because we haven't done it in so long and the technology has advanced.\n\nVenus was probably once exactly like the Earth. The author stated \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various lifeforms, just like Earth.\" The author points out that Venus STILL has very similar features that are on Earth. Maybe if we study Venus we could learn more about the Earth, maybe even the Earth's future.\n\nVenus having many dangers is exactly why we should study it. According to the author, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has no value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" If we study Venus it would lead to more knowledge and inovation. Venus's dangers should motivate us.\n\nVenus is worth studying despite all of the dangers it represents. The author's purpose of\n\nwriting \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is to persuade that Venus is worthy of being studied. The author gave many points on why Venus should be studied. All of the authors points were all very valid and reasonable for why Venus should be explored. \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author suggests that studying the planet Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents in the article,\"The challenge of Exploring Venus\",is when the author first states that the planet venus is the second planet that is closer to the sun.When the author says that the planet venus is the second planet that is closer to the sun for two reasons,the first reason is that the planet venus is the earths twin because they both have the same size and density. Which I find that a very amazing thing and it also gives venus another nickname that the planet venus is known for.The second reason,is that the planet venus has simular features like the earth,like the earth and the planet venus both have a surface of rocks,valleys,mountains and craters.\n\nWhen the author states that the planet Venus is worthy,even the depite of the dangers that it presents,is because the author is trying to tell the reader that the planet venus is worth looking for or finding even by its dangers.If you wanted to either watch veuns above,to search for venus,to be in space with venus,then you would agree that the planet venus is worthy.But,just because the planet venus might be worthy in many ways,like being the closet to earth out of all planets,the be a twin of the earth and to have the earths features,some people might think that it is worthy even if it is dangerous.When you think about the authors meaning behind his/hers statement,you will maybe understand what the author really meant when the planet venus is worthy,despiting its dangers.\n\nDespite the planet Venus being worthy,the author also mentioned that the planet venus has dangers that it presents.When the author talks about the planet venus having dangers,the planet venus has dangers that may be more dangerous than the earth.Even though the planet venus is the twin of the earth,but there are not only simularites beween these two planets,but there are also differences between these two planets.The first difference between the the planet venus and the earth is that the planet venus is a challenge of a risk,and that for scientists to study venus would need to get closer to the planet venus.\n\nJust for the scientist to get closer to the planet venus,is even more dangerous for many of reasons,first the planet venus is already hotter than the earth.Which means that there is a higher risk of scientist either getting cooked or roasted.According to the passage,the planet venus is 800 degress fahrenheit,which is very hot! And to make things worst,the planet venus is 90 times hotter than earth,and hotter than any of the planets in the solar system.Which is why the planet venus is in weather,known as (Venusian Geology),and it would be understanding that venus is RELATED to Erupting volcanoes,Powerful Earthquakes and Frequent lightning strikes!\n\nAccording the the author's statement,the author of this passage had great points of both views about the planet venus.The author shows how the planet venus is a worthy planet,even with its dangers it is still worth it.Although,this planet may be dangerous in some ways,but this planet is also a fascinating planet mostly because this planet was covered with oceans a long time ago! The fun fact,is that i find that very cool about the planet venus because,it tells how this planet came to be and how it was first discovered.The second thing is that the planet venus is a big part of NASA,which that NASA tested venus and found interesting facts about this planet.First,the planet venus is was tested for the CHAOS,meaning the craziness in this planet!\n\nAlthough the author had statements about this planet,but the author also had great reasonings behind the planet of venus.And since the planet venus has both simular and different features of the earth,it is really an wortly planet!Even if scientist have to take risks just to study this planet by being up close,it is still kind of worth it because that the only way that scientist can study the materials of the planet venus.And lastly,even thought the planet venus might have dangerous hottness and more,the planet venus is still worthy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author states this FACS machine can read emotions just by looking at someone is non-sense but this could be true. It decoded the facial emotions of the Mona Lisa and saying all her emotions just by looking at it, i wan't to beleive it can do that.\n\nThe author states that Mona Lisa is \" 83 percent happy, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" The algerithym only gave us 91% of the Mona Lisa emotion what about the other 9%? The FACS machine reads your 44 major muscles to read your emotions which is amazing and kind of silly at the same time. This all the machine does but it could be helpful to figure out if someone is really upset about something going on, but it could have some draw backs to it. The FACS machine only read 91% of the Mona Lisa and i want to know the rest of it!\n\nThe positive aspect of the machine is that it could read emotions and facial muscles to see if the kid is thinking about suicide if it could do that. The FACS machine \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognizer software tracks these facial movements.\" This shows that FACS is devolping that one day could helps with emotions and other various life problems like helping us recognize friends that are going through a rough patch in their life. These sentences from the text \" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actully describing each facial trait the conveys happy, worried etc.\" If Dr. Huang devolps the FACS machine more to helps more with friends emotion when feeling down or even our parents if neccesary. This could have a huge impact for students because teachers can with problems in your just by recognizing your facial movements and emotions.\n\nThis FACS machine may have some down sides to it because this could be a invadement of personal space, say if some doesn't want to talk and use this machine to do so then you used the machine without that persons permission so this machine as long as it used for people that really need the help i don't think this machine will last much. This text from the passage \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, \" Dr. Huang. \" So computars need to understand that,too.\" Another upside to this FACS machine is that it could become a human inscrutor \" A classroom computar could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\" \" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effecttive human instructor.\"\n\nThe FACS machine could be a huge help with students that struggle emotionaly with anything, so for final conclsuion the FACS machine can a huge help to students but also be a invasion of personal space, because some students don't know that their computars have this program and reads their emotions without them knowing ahead of time. This FACS machine should be installed if the students want it to be installed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear home nothing You cant play basketball friends hand eye cordenation You want learn arnt books And want talk friends Thats would happend dident advances technology No handeye cordenation wouldent able learn far way places coudent online Ccomputers benifit lives many ways To begin hand eye cordenation important Without woudent able ware even hold pensil peoples hand eye cordenation emproved using computer That proven say head human reactions CAPS knows hands oversized part body computer help movements hone hand eye cordenation said interview sience magaziene When clumsy break things Importan things sumtimes like broke mothers glass vase could helped used computer In addition computers give us power learn faraway places No books people prefer looking information computer book fact Some people wouldent heard earthquake wasent websights brodcasted updates Campers weudent heard In front page spread promote use computers instead books Books could outdated computer always uptodate answers Also people need able talk online Bisness meetings governments plans chatting friend People need able stay tuch If presedent couldent vidio conference would flying everyware Emale way talks coworkers I located far away much easier makes bissnesses major incoperations flow CAPS way kids talk seems says lets feel like part somthing biger Now happy healthy educated young old amaricans They research whatever want Its amazing technology alows talk online research faraway places practice handeye cordenation That sounds like good thing So computeristic fist good So agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming soon but they could be harmful as well as great to people.They help the drivers that need something from the backeat, but also the car might have small problems and could get in a car crash, they could also help the driver for when they've had a rough day or stressful day they might fall alseep but when the car cant driver by itslef anymore the seat well vibrate and the driver well wake up from it.\n\nThe driverless car could poeple out alot of parents that have young kids.For when they dropped something adn there crying the driverless could go by it self while you get whatver fell. Mostley for moms when your baby has a dirty diper and you hvae to change them because no one wants a smelly car.Most parents would love the driverless beacuse it helps them out for stuff that they could do in the beackseat.Not useful for only parents but for everyone.\n\nDriverless cars are helpful for people but since its a new invenation its might have some small problems with it.Some drivers might get into a car crash because they have never used a driverless car so they might be confused about to use one and that couls cause a crash and could involed people that didnt do anything.Olderr people might not like this car because since they are older then most of us there not going to be able to know how to use it.Teenagers would love the car just because its able to driver itslef but they might not know hoe to control it when something bad happens to it.\n\nPeople are going to love and hate the car because they might not like how it drives it self but people are going to love it.There is always a good thing about this car is that to able to drive it itslef, but the car might lose control of it slef and stuff like that we dont want that to happen.\n\nThe drivess car is a good idea for alot of people but people might not want it but it well get popular over the years when teaanagers want to the car just for it does.Driverless car is good to new drivers also incase they dont know to to drive and they do something wrong the driveless car could just turn on mode and help the driver from a crash. Driverless cars are good and also might be harmful to people but people well also love it when they get it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Obesity has become a severe problem in many developed countries like the United Kingdom. Some people argue that governments should implement laws related to nutritious food, while others believe that it is individuals' freedom to eat what they want and it is their obligation to improve their own health, and I agree with the latter's viewpoint.\r\n\r\nSome people argue that policymakers should implement regulations to encourage people to consume more nutritious meals. For example, governments could mandate all restaurants to include more healthier food in their menu. In this way, diners will have more options and the likelihood of them having junk food could be reduced. On top of that, politicians could also make it compulsory for restaurant owners to include more nutritious ingredients in their meals such as tomatoes and carrots which are rich in vitamins, otherwise, they will face harsh penalties. As a result, no matter what individuals ordered, they will enjoy a nutrious meal.\r\n\r\nHowever, I hold the view that rules and regulations are not good enough to improve public health. Ultimately, consumers have liberty to decide what they like for their meals. Therefore, a better way to improve public wellbeing is to raise their awareness of a balanced diet as well as the drawbacks of eating junk food all the time. Knowing that consuming junk food that contains high cholesterol and sugar would lead to high blood pressure, heart attack and stroke, the mass would be more inclined to reduce their consumption. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, whereas it is true that legislations will contribute positively to people's health by providing meals which have less sugar and fats, I argue that this approach is not adequate.To enhance people's wellbeing, governments should launch campaigns to increase their awareness of the impacts of an unhealthy diet. As a result, people would automatically switch to a balanced diet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience long task rewards weigh time waited thing waiting From waiting computer start line rollar coaster patience rewarded However many people patient CAPS learn time patient monks In short trile lots patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increasing pollution of the environment ,some persons deem that one of the best ways to solve the environment problem according to increase the price of fules.But i do not think that is the best solution.\r\n\r\nSome folks believe that one of the best solution to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles.Because higher fuels prices increased people’s spanding on cars and other vehicles so people will reduce the frequency of using cars.Tail gas include carbon monoxide ,sulfur dioxide and other gases harmful to environment ,it can cause air pollution and green house effect or acid rain.So increase the price of fules can help to protect the environment.\r\n\r\nHowever,I deem that way can not solve the problems from the root.Because environment pollution problem is a complex problem,it can divided into air pollution,land pollution and water pollution.Vihicles and car tail gas just occupied a small proportion. If it can be solved ,environment problem can not be solve absolutely because water and land pollution.In addition,if the cost of fuels increased,there will be some rich folks use the cars as usual.So I consider that the better solution is that goverment should encourage bicycle companies to dispense a certain amount of free cycling cards to citizen,this can attract some people to choose this environmental frendily to commute.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,increasing the cost of the fules indeed a good way to relieve the environment problem,but i think provide free and environmental friendly transportation to people is a more adaptive way and can solve this problem more effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not being able to focus on the class is one of the inherent characteristics of children in their learning journeys. In my point of view, this can attribute to two main reasons: mismatched learning method and development of game industry. This article will explain the reasons and give corresponding solutions.\n\nIt is irrefutable that we learn differently. Some obtain knowledge through read a lot while others prefer to listen to lectures. However, there is a prevalence among most of the countries nowadays, such that children are taught in the same way. In other words, schools today fail to provide every student the environment that conducive to learning. Consequently, since children dislike what is imposed on them, they no longer pay attention to the classes in school. Furthermore, considering the advance of technology, game industry is thriving nowadays. As a result, mobile games are creeping into our daily life. Consequently, since more toddlers are more incline to play rather than study, such games might act as a strong distraction in children’s studies.\n\nHowever, things are more complicated in the first case than the second one. In the first case, in order to keep toddler concentrate, we must make them enjoy the environment of learning at school. In other words, we must encourage and help every child to develop a learning style that fit the most. This involves long time communication with parents and teachers. In the second case, on one hand, parents must control the amount of time that their children have spent on mobile or computer games thereby minimize the negative influence that such games have on toddlers. On the other hand, game companies should introduce real-name system to prevent children from playing some highly addictive games like PUBG and CSgo.\n\nTo conclude, the unfitted learning style and the development of electronic games are the major factor contribute to poor focus in class. Parents and game companies should do their best to help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience personal thought turns action Ive patience many times I use go store corner block I stand long line actually went halfway point block I went got stuff went end line A half hour past five minutes til closing time I get window pay things minute closing time I actually standing line nothing The owner store let get total things free I got half stuff I wanted half house hold things So patient really pays unlock many different treasures So start running patience leaving impatience behind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Information is presented by the bar chart which illustrates the figure for houses built each year in Derby and Nottingham over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2009. Overall, it can be seen that there was a clear trend that houses in Derby were built more than that in Nottingham each year over the survey period, except for the year 2000, 2001 and 2007.\nTurning to the first main feature, there were just under 50 houses which were constructed in Derby for the first two years between 2000 and 2001, while the number of houses in Nottingham was an exact 50 and a little more than 50 in 2000 and 2001 respectively. The figure for houses in Derby then increased considerably to approximately 75 in 2002, which exceeded the number of houses in Nottingham, and plateaued at more than 100 until 2006. On the contrary, in 2002 the chart depicts a noticeable decline in the number of houses in Nottingham to less than 25. Nevertheless, the number of houses in Nottingham rebounded and rose to around 75 in 2005 before dropping suddenly to nearly zero in 2006.\nTurning to another main feature, whereas in 2007 the figure for houses in Derby remained unchanged at above 100, the number of houses in Nottingham soared to almost 200, exceeding the number of houses in Derby. The last key feature to point out is that the number of houses in Derby jumped dramatically to nearly 350 by 2009 while the number of houses in Nottingham experienced the third drop to almost zero in 2008 before the number of houses in Nottingham increased dramatically to 250 in 2009.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph To show final determination strength Saeng given Its almost though its taken plant To show get back pass Test The plant becomes comporting item reminds homeland She returned plant To show mother found shaky even say words at home This shows much misses home But able realize new home everything becoming familiar To", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The unmasking the face on Mars is not a real face. As much as we wish here at Nasa that it was and there was an ancient civilzation on Mars so our budget would be higher but it is not. It is a natural landform, kinda like the Middle Butte In the Snake River Plain of Idaho. We have check mulitple times since there was a little haze in the first photo but we do not fly over it often. It took 18 long years to get to the bottom of this and it is simply just a natual landform. We are certain.\n\nWhen we finally released the image we titled it \"huge rock formation.\" It cause huge attention to Mars which we were indeed greatful for but in the picture it was formed by shawdows giving illusion of the eyes, nose, and mouth. \"Face on Mars became a pop icon, was in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and was the talk of grocery store check outlines for the next 25 years. You might think since we found that landform on mars it means there is life on Mars but that is information we do tnot want to reveal at the time. There is just no way that that was created by aliens but here at Nasa we wish it was. As you can now see it is not.\n\nI understand there is a lot of theorist that ssy it was created by aliens but the truth does not lie and that we did not take the pictures at the right time because it was cloudy but once again we went and took more than one picture to make sure we were postive. We thought at the begginning what you did but there was factors that show it is not. We felt it was important because of the tax payers and to get the bottom of it and after 18 long years of questions we finally know it is just a ladnform", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's modern world, technology has increasingly become a larger part of a person's daily life. Compared to a decade before, society now has technology that can actually help one in their daily life. An example would be smartphones. Smartphones aid many by keeping events in their calendar or messaging co-workers for assignements. Technology is seen in schools, workplaces, entertainment centers, restaurants, cafes and more. As new innovators continue to improve and progress in the making of technology, it will lead the world forward into a future of endless possibilites that technology has to offer. One being driverless cars. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the development of driverless cars is supported through several of the points the author makes, such as how driverless cars would help cut down on fuel usuage, how there are many safety precautions implemented in these cars, and also that the technology now makes the development of these cars more affordable than before.\n\nOne point the author made at the very beginning of the article included how driverless cars could reduce the amount of fuel cars normally use today. Currently, fuel usage is a concerning problem as prices climb higher because of\n\nthe fuel resource getting smaller. According to Google cofounder Sergey Brin, he believes that the creation and use of driverless cars can help with the fuel issue. Sergey Brin believes that, \"the cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis\" (paragraph 1). By using less fuel, society can save on the limited fuel the world has to offer and therefore make the use of cars last longer. Cars are used all over the world to get people to where they need to go and without that fuel, it would make it much harder for people to travel or get to places in cases of emergency. In addition, because the driveless cars only use half of the fuel of today's taxis, it could help drivers save money or for those who are not as financially well off, make driving an affordable option for them. The development of these driverless cars could change the world by not only saving fuel, but also making it more affordable.\n\nWith the development of something that had never been attempted much before, there comes a sense of caution and safety. In the driverless cars that had already been created, saftey measures have been implemented, making it so that the humans driving the cars could stay safe. For example, the Google car will alert the driver when to take over in complex situations. For GM, they have developed seats for the driver that vibrate to alert the driver of danger when backing up. Already, the development of driverless cars are going smoothly and being taken with safety accounted for. Even though there can be dangers to these driverless cars, manufacturers are making sure that they prevent accidents by implementing the technology necessary to keep drivers safe. In addition, even though they may be driverless cars, humans can still take over when things get tough, which is explained in paragraph seven. By inlcuding these examples, the author helps support the idea that developing driverless cars should be continued because of how safety precautions are taking into making sure the drivers will be able to sit in the car with the option to take over when necessary.\n\nAs mentioned earlier, the world today has made tremendous progress in technology which allows innovators to develop something that could not have been done before. In modern times, the technology has advanced far enough that it makes the development of driverless cars possible. According to Sebastian Thrun in paragraph six, he believes that technology has finally caught up to the dream of making driverless cars a reality. An example would be the senors that are used in driverless cars that would have cost millions before 2000, are now readily available and cheaper to use. Because the technology today has reached the point that it can be used to develop driverless cars, it makes it easier and more affordable than they would have been a decade before. This signficant point develops the arguemnt that developing driverless cars should be continued.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the development of driverless cars are supported using points by the author such as how they can cut down on fuel cost and are more affordable, while safety measures are accounted for in the creation of these cars and that the technology today makes this all possible. Everyday actions are taken to make a dream a reality. For the innovators of technology, they strive to make the dream of a technology run world a reality. To start, they begin with the development of driverless cars. The driverless cars of today and the future will show the world and mankind just how far people have come from the the very beginning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I disagree computers important people research online colleges online stores Those top reasons I m going give details My first main idea computers help students find important information help students find important information project You wikepedia help find information battle important history one example I went american historycom find good information alley happened People also look lot stuff involves school You get research earth happens My second main idea computers good people finish high school go college Some colleges found internet go college home computer One example cousin She goes college internet take care two children Whenever watch television see commercial online colleges trying tell go school online My third final reason computers good people stores online store look store Children like go shopping alot ca nt go mall stores nt want go You let see want buy online going stores It shipped door without going anywhere My mom sometimes orders nt go It gets shipped house less week There main reasons people computer They find research online schools online shopping stores This help people understand computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An array of people believe that the retired community shall be supported financially by the state and some say that is not and they should be self-supported. I strongly admit that there should be a government financial scheme to support the retired crowd and both views are discussed in detail below.\n\nOn the one hand, social security is a very important factor in any country. The state should look after the children as well as the elderly population to ensure the well-being of the nation. Just take an elderly individual who devoted his whole life to the betterment of the country. He or she may be an engineer, teacher, doctor, farmer or a housewife and dedicated their own energy to developing the country for a long period. I strongly believe that dedication should be paid off financially when those are retired.Hence it is very important to establish a social security fund to look after the retired generation.\n\nOn the other hand, some public says that everyone should save plenty of money while they work, to use during the latter part of their life instead of expecting state financial support. That is individuals are expected save a certain percentage of their own earnings for themselves, instead of spending all for their families. That can also be materialised, if their earnings are sufficient enough and this could relieve the government from the burden of looking after adults. However, as all cannot afford the cost of living while saving for themselves some kind of state-owned fund is a must to look after the aged generations.\n\nTo conclude, I opine that there should be a financial package available on request for retired people to support them and enable them to live a peaceful life during the latter part of their lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am a scientist from NASA trying to explain to someone that the Face is just a landform. I have asked the person, \"why they think the Face is not a landform.\" The person said, \"since it's alien made you guys are try to hide it from the public.\" I told the person, \"that we gave the same photos that we took to the public. So, what we saw everyone have seen it and that is not alien made.\" But the person had also added, \"I think the picture in 1998 was planned to be taken in the winter.\" But of course that was not true at all, but the person keept saying over and over again.\n\n\"That was never planned but that is a mistake that we made\" I said.The person said, \"If you guys made such a simple mistake like this on the how can you say the Face is not alien made.\" I told the that it's not easy to take photo of just one spot on Mars with the Viking 1.\" I Also said, \"yes we did not have to share the photo but we did. The reason why is so we could get people eye's on Mars. But we had never kownen that it would turn out to be like this. So, I am ready to get all of this over with. Do you have anything else to say.\"\n\nThe person said, \"it's not only me saying this stuff you know!\" \"Yes I do know that but just because others say somrthing does not mean that it is true. They do not have scientific facts that it is alien made. But what we do have is the facts that it is a landfrom.\" The person started to think this all over. But the person started to talk \" okay we do not have any facts about it. But you guys do although I do not want to trust you guys. Anyways what I am trying to say is now I think it is a landform.\"\n\n\"So, Now this is all over now right\" I said. the person did not sat anything but had nodded yes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear readers modern world sent back time quickly drive car get groceries must ride damage hours simply buy milk Entertainment dull hard receive books learning Ending usage technology computers would surely first step sending us back barbaric time Computers present job opportunities educational opportunities way communicate others Furge continue using computers without computers modern civiliz would lost Firstly important note economic crisis development manufacturing computers creates thousands jobs In fact year jobs created alone accordance development computers customers buy products stop losing jobs would lost progress ve made economic crisis would surely fall Do fair people nation wish responsible catastrophe Recently stated cover page article without development computers technology people would without jobs undoubtedly many educational opportunities woulf lost childred stop using computers Computers present easiet way research gather information CAPS top nothe educational provider history A group young brilliant teachhers headed implemented program using computers This program lets students view interesting way world cultures videos For keen visual children much better way learning using books In fact superintendent schools recently stated newpaper planed implement program schools year He needs town support idea come recently sent fliers local citizens bearing impressionable heading CAPS Goy youto expand learning using computers communication vital part using computers In fact internet acessed computer offers fastest way communication telephones CAPS computer expert computers offer ever telephones Not one converse internet also webchat exchange files important data market sell items customers CAPS stop using computers deny magnificent way communicating My sister lives result I barely get see even talk Then mon bought laptop able speak Sge helps ne mt personal problems without way talking worl lost Now modern civilized world You parents heading work child goes enters wonderful learning center computers In favorite sister s currently writing email This fantasy possible continue use computers They presnt jobs educational opportunities way communication You use tim still enjoy nature fun friends dear readers forget computers Computer usage keep", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story chooses end story sentence story mainly Saeng failed drivers test saw hibiscus reminded home made feel better In paragraph Saeng says And rich sweet scent familiar talks nice flowers familiar reconized scent Saeng already upset leaving home coming failing drivers test made worse saw flower reminded home felt little better So author uses quote end story way show enough courage try flower blooms", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, kids have difficulty staying focused on their lessons in school. There are some reasons why this issue happening and there are some ways to solve which I will elaborate on to a conclusion in the following paragraph.\r\n\r\nUsually, the lessons are messed up with their focus because of the amount of material they receive. The more they get the subjects, the easier their attention gets lost. Hence, they end up with distrub the whole study. In addition, the method of the tutor giving the materials could offend the atmosphere whilst students try to build their core. For instance, a teacher who taught without having a break for some minutes could make the pupil feel sleepy in whole time. \r\n\r\nTo solve this issue, the educational program should be revised by a group of the workforce. They have to evaluate and break down the syllabus which can be absorbed by their pupils. Hence, student attention can be built in the teaching section. Furthermore, lecturers should ensure their classes are enjoyable. By giving a break in the middle of the course, the pupil's mind can be refreshed immediately. Consequently, they can build their centre point until the last period of lessons.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the difficulty of staying focused in class is caused by the amount of materials in a day and the style of teaching by the personnel. This issue can be solved by syllabus revision and changing the method of faculty training their students which could build their concentration with fresh minds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it seems more important for employers to consider the job applicant’s social skills before their academic records. In my opinion, I strongly disagree as not always good social skills are enough to complete a task satisfactorily, as well as having academic qualifications are not a guarantee of dealing with the job appropriately. I believe that the combination of both aspects should be the best criterion in order to select an employee.\n\nTo begin with, employing people based only on their social skills would probably be insufficient as they may not be well prepared to do the job. For instance, it has been claimed that, far away from being overrated, university studies are necessary for society as many people are being formed in short Online courses trying to take faster paths to get a job while the truth is that 90% of them fail getting hired as they profiles are not enough to deal with all the situations of qualified jobs. This means that it is absolutely necessary having reliable qualifications that allow one to work professionally. However, I am not saying that only academic records are enough, we all definitely need to have acceptable social skills if we really want to succeed in a working environment.\n\nOn the other hand, considering the other extreme of only taking into account their academic records it also does not guarantee successful employment. For example, it has been proved that numerous business sales with competent personnel that were not kind enough at the time of dealing with people, were losing sales dropping their numbers considerably. This explains why it is important to understand that qualifications and social skills contribute equally to the performance of a better job.\n\nIn conclusion, employers who think that it is preferable having great social skills than to have professional skills are wrong, as considering one on top of the other, no matter which one is, would decline in failure as both are truly important. In my opinion, I strongly believe that employers should consider both aspects in order to choose the best candidates, which the criteria would be performing a good job while using their social abilities to interact with other employees and clients, working naturally as a part of a team.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In ths artile \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they talk about how cars can drive on their own. Although, it talks about how the driver still has to stay catious. If drivers still have to be catious and take control when theres road construction and what not, then what's the point in having a drivless car. To me it's just having like to drive yourself just without pushing the brake or gas. You still have to keep your hands on the wheel.\n\nI just dont feel that drivless cars are safe. I'd rather have to drive my own car then to have the car doing all the work because then again it says in the article that you still have to be aware of where your going and if there is any road construction, also you have to have your hands on the steering wheel just for it to activate the sensors. My question is, lets say I live in a place where there is bad weather, of course the huge trucks are going to come clean the snow, but sometimes pot holes form into the street. So do the driveless cars go aorund them or do we have to be catious too, and even if the car does go around the pot holes, how does it know not to hit the car next to them, or to go on the grass, or even the side walk.\n\nSome people get motion sickness when they are in a car. As an example, someone I know gets motion sickness if they sit in the passanger seat of the car, but are fine if they are driving and handling the car. What if a person gets sick everytime they go into the driveless car because technically they aren't driving it. In the articale it stated \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel\", in concern, what if a driver lost an arm and isn't capable of holding both hands on the steering wheel for the sensors and is used to driving with one hand.\n\nAll these concerns have to be thought while processing these cars. Drivless cars to me just aren't the new thing and a lot of more accidents are going to happen. Not a lot people read the manuals, they just buy the car and drive it. How are they going to know they have to navigate through work zones or around accidents? Why would there be accidents if we relied on a driveless car to take care of our driving for us? Drivless cars seem cool and interesting but when you start to realize the facts into this it's not so great after all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because Venus has a lot of similar features to Earth. It is for this specific reason that Venus is considered Earth's twin. The author supports this idea by giving us all different type of examples on how or why Venus is the way it is and why we consider it to be Earth's twin. For example in the article it states that, Venus is the second planet from our Sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars orbit the sun at different speeds. These difference in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. These are our other planetary neighbors. It also states in the text that a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think about the devoplment of these driveless cars is that they are point less.There are no point of making these cars I think its a waste of time and money an heres why.\n\nThe reason that I think its a waste of time and money because who needs these cars? There are people to willing to drive people around around for money insted of these cars.Also these cars will make the bus drivers and taxi cabs lose there jobs over a car that will cost about two million dollars a car.There are some good things about it though because what if a person was intoxacated an they needed a ride home they could call that cab and make it home safetly because they would not be driving.\n\nAnother reason that i think they are point less becasue they will be waiting on the law saying that they can drive on the street.The law is only worrying about the safety of the people,what if one of those cars get into a wreck whos fault is it the drivers or the cars since the car is driveless?Also why I think this is point less is becasue who has enough money to pay for the car?Nobody will really buy the car because it will cost a lot around about one or two million, an what if something goes wrong with one of the car pieces you would have to pay a lot of money for that piece because its not free.\n\nIn my overall opinion i just think is a waste of time becasue I think that we could be spending time on something that is actcully useful to the world insted of a dumb car also it is a waste of money there are no reason for spending a lot of money on a bunch of senors and lazers when you can just drive you self thats why people are lazy now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "one time I patient We way see point The family us We car vans I like van car car It like hour drive I car mom sister We takere like hour First I fane I family talk bye like hour I patient And I could mom like patient gone get Im like I want She like got day Then stop get something eat Then", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is dangerous because its one of the closes starts to the sun. Since venus is so close to it makes it the second hottest planet in space. Its hard for them to examine it closely because how hot it could be on the planet so the sit safe at a certain vantage point.\n\nVenus is close to earth witch makes itthe twin like in terms of density and size its close but distant a little from venus. So say if we get close to the sun earth woukd basically be like venus. Venus and earth is right around the corner from eachother so wat makes it different from eachother shouldnt the earth be hot too. To really think about it hot would it be if we were like venus.\n\nThe atmosphere is 97 perdent of carbon dioxide blankets venus which could really explain where the heat come from or take place in. Theres acid in venus atmosphere the pressure is 90 times worst than what it would usally be on earth. Its over 800 degress on that plante which makes it a baby sum or the son of sun. Venus has one if the worst tempature ever it gets so hot that it woukd kill us humans in a instant if we think about it. But they said venus is like the earth twin. So do you think that it was once life on that plantet before in the past and the sun ruined it so there no more life everything is excint on that planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Smart cars are said to be the car of the future. They are said to be \"a driverless taxi\" but will they be as afficiant and great they are planned out to be?\n\nThese cars are going to be made by the Google company and they have been wanting to produce these cars before the year 2000. They did not have the technology needed such as sensors, computers, and mapping. They soon knew it would be impossible until their need were met, developed and built. They say they would need so many cameras and sensors to make this dream car come alive.\n\nI do not think I am for this car creation. Yes it would be great to not have to drive but what if you had this amazing car driving itself and you were so tired you just happen to fall asleep and there was an accident you were unaware of and you were going right toward it, how would you know it was there? How would the car get around it? The positives about this car is that you don't have to do much. It will have its many cameras and sensors to know where it is going.\n\nWhat if you are in your magnificant car and it is driving on its own and a little kid runs out in the road, what happens then? All the negatives about this dream car are system malfunctions and the fact that you still need a driver to watch the roads. So, you can't relax; you have to assist the car. What's the point of driverless car if you still need a driver to assist it? BMW added new technology were your car will drive up to 25 mph, but you have to have a driver to activate the touch sensors. Yes, they will steer, speed up, and slow down on its own, but having a driver watching everything is still necessary. If the technology fails while you're in you fabulous car resulting in an acciednt, who is responsible? You or the manufacturer?\n\nAll in all, I do not believe I am for the future \"driverless\" smart car because you still need to watch the roads as you normally would and if the technology fails, I would not want to be sued or injured. Would you be for the so called \"driverless\" Google car?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our modern life, the majority of individuals point out that almost all teens should be demanded to do volunteer activities in their leisure time to assist the local public as they strongly believe that this would be beneficial for teenagers and society as well. From my point of view, I disagree with this controversial topic. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, in many ,countries the employment of children is prohibited. To begin with, several inhabitants argue that these days , education is crucial in everyone's life because it determines the way to realize a person's full potential, the youngsters might study well in order to be the master of their future jobs and to take a better lifestyle. It is undeniable that the young generation should be free to learn hard some important subjects such as maths which is a really difficult topic for most of the inhabitants for this reason they have to revise their lessons a lot to achieve their goals. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, young people should enjoy their childhood as they are younger rather than others who will have a longing for doing some kind of entertainment activity to just have fun. Thus, I would resort that young people should not be encouraged to do some type of industry which is related to local government. If they have more free time, they will be able to play several sport exercise which is an effective method to stay healthy and survive for much more time. For example, in Russia, almost all students and kids ought to attract to study hard and they must be professional in their products that help the country's future condition instead of volunteering struggle without any sort of fee \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, these days, as technology has been developing day by day, the youngest should be free at all times to do some kind of their effort. In my opinion, the young generation should be free to do some kind of activities themselves a lot that would open the door to get the aims of students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Iv always loved laughter life I nt know I could live This started One day I good day Nothing could made laugh Friends would tell jokes would make funny faces That didnt make laugh one bit There one thing havent tried made laugh sister completed one thing I would never forget day sister I water balloon fight On hot day sister I would always play water balloon fights one time one water balloon hit face I also one water balloon guess happen hit face We could stop laughing breathless laugher My sister desided tell story I good day even people tried make better making laugh The one thing one said one time Until sister reminded told story I start laughing day Then sister took outside water balloons ready start throughing eachother That day good day turned best day life Thats day I would never forget laughter Thats I love laughter life makes good days turn best day life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When riding bike seem hard For cyclist every thing becomes serious The determination win best even kills In essay estimates dder cyclist When really people knowledge Some things hard cyclist rough roads Not chance killed dehydration ran Riding bike really hard work ride hundred degree weather Drinking drink drink never water No water hot could cause heat stroke As road get worse chances get higher tumble weeds snakes way determined win After said faced horror nature brought knew wrong wrong intelligants", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\n\"It can be argued that the\n\nElectoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying thier state-Democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote.... But of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and in spite of that, about on-half the eligible American population did vote in [2012's] election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election....\"-\n\n\"paragraph 23\" \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep out despised method of choosing the president\"-by Richard A. Posner\n\nIf the president was elected by popular vote then the voting would truly be up to the people and not electoral votes given to each state. that puts a limit on it. If the president was choosen by a popular vote then it would be more of a demacratic society like we are expose to be. A Electoral college is not democratic at all the people aren't voting for the president directly and they dont even use the peoples votes in the count. If they do they count it less then they do when the state representitives elect the president. the only true way to see \"what the people want\" is by switching to only a popular vote: it is ran by the people, voted by the people, based by the people. haven't you ever heard the term \" Give the people what they want.\"? Well what are we waiting for? It's time to change our voiting systems and fast before we hit a whole in the Electoral College. The constitution states \"We the People\", what happened to the people when it comes to voting, we get to vote but we aren't voting for the president (directly) like they have the U.S. citizens thinking. We are voting for someone to hopefully vote for our choice. My only question to you senator is, why hasn't the Electoral College been abolished yet? The people even know that their vote will have no effect right now, like it says in paragraph 23, source 3 \"knowing their vote will have no effect.\" Last I checked the peoples vote is expose to have the whole effect... thank you for you time senator. I hope to see changes soon!!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nTo my understandings, we still use our Electoral College to vote for the President of the United States. So basically, whenever we vote for a President, we're basically voting for a slate of electors. But you probably already knew that. I thought the whole point of voting was to vote for who we want, not pick someone on the side to vote for us. To me, it is only fair that we rid of the Electoral College and change it to an election by popular vote.\n\nWhen I am old enough to vote, I would like to see that my vote counted for the President and not a group of electors. One main problem with the Electoral College is the fact that the trust can be betrayed. What about what happened in Hawaii in 1960? When Vice President Richard Nixon luckily precided over the senate, validating only his oppenent's electors, but made sure to do so \"without establishing a precedent.\" What if it happens again? You are voting for someone that could be anyone not holding a public office.\n\nIf you really think about it, the Electoral College is unfair to voters. Think of it like this, you're in a class of 30 and you get to vote on who is your new class president. You all vote but the teacher only counts 10 of the kids' votes that have a higher ranking. It is not fair to the other 20 students because they all voted too, but their votes didn't really count.\n\nThe Electoral College can be thought of as unfair, outdated, and irrational. It would be so much easier if we just counted the votes from the citizens of the United States in a majority rules fashion. This way, everyones' vote counts and we wouldn't have to worry relying on someone to make the vote for us.\n\nI am writing to you State Senator to show you how we, the United States of America, really feel. Isn't it true in Amendment 1, that we as the people have a freedom of speech? Well I think my speech should be heard and I want you to listen.\n\nSincerely,\n\nRachel", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers because in the article\n\n¨The challange of exloring venus¨ that says that many reaseachers are working on inovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus ans it wont be dangerous. i believe that the people who are trying to go to venus or sent something to venus should do it because you never know what other kids of things are out there and if we dont try news things we wont discover new stuff .\n\none reason we should try to go is only becuase of the insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because humans curisoity will likely lead us into many eqaully intimdating endeavors and if they have doubt that their nort going to make well the new inovations that wont hurt us and it will now longer be dangerous .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many diffrenet views when it comes to driveless car, but im here to explain why it is a good reason to have driveless cars. ONe of the first reasons why driveless cars are a good idea is first that cars are getting smater, and saferfor the driver and passangers, plus they tend to cost about the same as much as a normal car. For example In 2013 BMW announced the development of \"traffic jam assistant\" and this car could handle drving functionns at sppeds up to 25 mph,but special touch sensors make sure the driver holds onto the wheel. A second reason why driveless cars are a good idea is because it will help people who are drving for long period of time. for example the \"trafic jam assisant comesto play so say a driver happens to fall asleep and lets their feet off the gas the car will keep drving and control the wheel unitl the driver lets go of it and thats when the car lets a alarm off so that the driver can wake up and hopefully pull over safely. One last reason why driveless cars are a good idea is because if we happen to make drvieless cars for people in general then we could do it for people who drive as their work for example truck drivers. usually they have to make it to a certain destionation at a certain time to deliver something. Usually this can be very dangerours not only to the truck driver but to the people is their cars trying to drive around the truck driver. Hopefully i have changed oyour mind about this whole is driveless car good or bad discussion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports their idea very well. The story is very convincing to start off. The authornmakes sure to mention a lot of evidence to back up his/her statements. The author mentions a lot of facts with another fact to prove it is true. The author did good with trying to get their point across because of all the points they made to back up his statement.\n\nThe reason I think the author did good is because the author seemed to know what they were talking about.\n\nThe author mentions how Venus is most alike to Earth. Also that is just one of the many statements the author makes. The author had also used other statements to compare to why we could go to Venus. The author even gave their own idea on what think is possible. The author uses plenty of facts to help his idea and what he/she is trying to say. The author even says how NASA is working on approachesto study Venus and that helps make the essay even better. The author does not see his idea as a risk and more as a challenge. The author seeing it as a challenge shows he confidence in his idea. The author also uses how Venus has so many things alike with earth that it should be explored.\n\nSo all in all the author made a good essay and did well supporting his idea. The author was consistent with his/her idea.\n\nThe author made sure to use important facts to support their idea. The author was well rounded and did not seemed biased with their idea and was very convincing with what they said.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story Winter Hibiscus ends story Saeng saying vowe shows important flower For example hibiscus flower gives determination reminds home Saeng says hibiscus budding I take test again The hibiscus flower gives confidence It reminds home Vietnam moved Therefore author concludes story certain paragraph symbolizes importance flower", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though there are dangers in trying to explore another planet, you know there is always good things that you are still able to go do. Some people will risk them selfs to find out what is in our outter world and what we are able to discover. Then you know those others that don't like to take them risks and would rather wait for so long instead of doing it right there right now. Going to another planet like Venus can be really cool to think about because you never be there before or no one really has been there and you are able to discover and find new things to bring back to \"earth\". But on the other hand you have to knwo what you are going to deal with, like how is it over there and what are the bad things that might come your way.\n\nVenus is known to be a very dangers planet for any things or someone to take land of or step foot. The text states, \"While Venis is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" This text ssays that it might looks and seem easy to explore from a far but going up close is another hand. Venus is a very pleasing planet or even like to be called star to look at. The first paragraph says, \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\" Like I said above they love too look and explore from a far but going up close to this planet is a big danger zone.\n\nPeople have tried to take land in Venus but all was unsuccesfull. Paragraph 2 states, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more that three decades.\" As you see people have tired and tired but never could properly land and have time to explore and get what they wanted and needed. It was like somethings in that planet does not want anyone to be there or find something on there. The good thing out of this is that venus is like earths \"twin\". So that means people are possible able to survive in venus if we get a chance to land and explore.\n\nThe weather is eveywhere on venus. For humans to be here they would ahve to wear protected suits. In paragraph 3 says, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of high corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere.\" These conditions can be very hard for us to be going through and and on top of that for us trying to move around it and still explore can be very difficult. \"temprature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Having to go through this wether and trying to survive I get why people would rather explore it from a far and not uo close. Having one of the hottest surface temperature is a big deal to risk. On this planet many things happen like earthquakes, lightning strikes, and erupting volcanoes. \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" Some people see this as once in a life time and living your life to the fullest but others would take this as a suicid because they would not want to go through all this and possible suffer.\n\n\"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Venus is the only other planet that is like earth and has characteristics like our land and oceans. It was cover largely with oceans and various forms of life just like our earth. In paragraph 4 says, \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogius to those on earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mounatins, and craters.\" This planet is a wonderful planet from the outside and far away but going up close and exploreing, I'd say can be scary. But know that there is another planet kinda like ours makes you think. Can humans really live on another planetn other tham earth itself.\n\nMany many people have tried and tried to find a way to go to Venus with out destroying the ship. So that when it came to mind. When we land somehow it breaks down and doesn't want ti work anymore. But what if we make a spaceship that does not touch the ground and floats. Paragraph 5 states, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" This will get us up and away from the unfriendly ground condions. even though it might be toasty but would feel a whole lot better. In paragraph 6 they say, \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rocl, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a torough mission to understand Venus would nee to get up close and perosnal despite the risks.\" So as we are above Venus but not on Venus there is a possible way but rather not take anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While some people believe that authorities invest plenty of money into the arts instead of spending more on health and education, others support such kind of investment. This essay agrees with a necessity of contribution into the arts, and I will try to explain this basing on few examples.\r\n\r\nThe first agrument in favor of this is the importance of the arts in our life. For example, observation of numerous amazing sculptures and painting fosters a culture of perception of the surroundings. Moreover, such elements are a bridge between the past and the present, helping to understand how our ancestors saw the beauty and uniqueness of nature, people and the relationships between them.\r\n\r\nNeedless to say, governements should finance the arts to give people an opportunity to have mentioned benefits.\r\n\r\nSecondly, for small countries this is a good chance to express themselves thanks to their representatives in various types of art. For example, my homeland is a rather small country, but the famous composer Aram Khachaturian made it famous throughout the world. In addition, if the country organize cultural events, it would host a plenty of tourists, and, consiquently, would have income into the economy. Finally, I do not think that the investment into the arts is a big fraction of the national budget, hence I am convinced, that the society should not warry about waste of money.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while education and health are crucial for any country, I wholeheartedly believe, the paintings, music, and sculptures play also a significant role in our life. Moreover, in some cases, art events can be beneficial for society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator...\n\nThe electoral college has recently been a very controversial topic in the world of politics. Many believe that it's a significant system, that's why the Founding Fathers created it, while others argue that it doesn't necessarily work as well. The Electoral College is a process in which there is an agreement between the president's election by a vote in Congress and the president's election by a popular vote made by the citizens. There should be a change in the system into changing election by a popular vote since the Electoral College is not only an outdated system, but it gives the citizens no control over who Congress will be picking.\n\nTo start off, the process of the Electoral College should be changed since it's an outdated system. As stated in \"In Defense of the Electoral College\" it says \"The Electoral College is widely regarded as anachroism, a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\" Even the article that seems to be favoring the electoral college introduced it as so. It can be seen that it is a process that has been around since America itself, but America has constantly been changing and innovating and it needs a more flexible system to cast the votes. In \"What is the Electoral College\"? it states that \"THE FOUNDING FATHERS ESTABLISHED IT IN THE CONSTITUTION AS QA COMPROMISE\" HENCE THIS IS STATING THAT THE SYSTEM WAS CREATED A LONG TIME AGO AND IT NEEDS SOME CHANGES.\n\nTO CONTINUE, THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE SYSTEM SHOULD BE ALTERED SINCE IT DOESN'T GIVE THE CITIZENS ALOT OF CONTROL AS TO WHO THE CONGRESS WILL BE PICKING. IN \"THE INDEFENSIBLE ELECTORAL COLLEGE, IT SAYS THAT 'THE SINGLE BEST ARGUMENT AGAINST THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS WHAT WE MIGHT CALL THE DISASTER FACTOR.\" WHAT THIS IS, IS THAT THE VOTERS HAVE NO CONTROL WHOM THE ELECTORS VOTE FOR. AS WELL, IN THE SAME ARTICLE, IT STATES THAT \"AT THE MOST BASIC LEVEL, THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS UNFAIR TO VOTERS. BECAUSE OF THE WINNER TAKE ALL SYSTEM IN EACH STATE, CANDIDATES DON'T SPEND TIME IN STATES THEY KNOW THEY HAVE NO CHNACE OF WINNING.'' WHAT ALL THIS SAYS IS THAT, THE VOTERS HAVE NO IDEA WHO THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE IS PICKING, AND IT SHOULD BE CHANGED TO ANOTHER SYSTEM.\n\nTO CONCLUDE, THE ELECTORAL SYSTEM SHOULD BE ALTERED TO A NEW SYSETM WHICH IS FAIR AND MORE TRUSTFUL TO THE VOTERS. NOT ONLY IS THE SYSTEM OUTDADE, BUT IT DOESN'T GIVE THE VOTERS ALOT OF CONTROL. A NEW SYSTEM SHOULD BE INTRODUCED. ALTHOUGH MANY AGREE THAT IT SHOULD BE CHANGED, ALSO SOME BELIEVE IT SHOULD STAY HOW IT IS. THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE SYSTEM SHOULD BE ALTERED, SO THIS WAY, THE PEOPLE HAVE THE VOICE, NOT ONLY THE GOVERNMENT.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship libraries A yes No I believe censorship libraries There many things offensive harmful libraries I dont see would come abserd idea To way many ways people get offended I remind almost changed plege flag country getting rid word god people dont believe god Now suppose get rid good books child friendly Think amazing books movies magazines would removed libraries one person says I find book offensive says I dont think book apporaite child people like book wont able read anymore beacuse one person There sections libraries reason Just put naughty books eightteen year older section younger kids dont see The people want get rid called dangerous books childern make libraries sound like porngrapic shops Most libraries filled horrible bad books cause child mentaly scared forever Hell really mant books anyways Now sometimes bad book end kids section dose mean remove book forever form people want read book All librarie workers make sure put books rightfull spots nothing bad happen The bad books adult section child frendily books another Have libabrie workers watching area make aure little kids dont go libabrie This prevent childern seeing bad books adult section In conclusion I answer question saying There way many good books would gone forever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage. The ways they are limited are not driving your car everywhere you go, not having your car at all and just ride the bus or bike.\n\nIn Source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars many people live n Freiburg near France dose not have a cars the reason being in paragraph two its states \"Vaubsan's street are completely \"car-free\" except the main throughtfare, where the tram to downtwon Freiburg runs, and a few streets on edge of the community.\" This quote indicates thats people from Freiburg did not have a cars or they didn't use them.\n\nSome may say that having a cars free day is a good thing according to Source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota. In that source in paragragh twenty four Carlos Arturo Plaza made a great point which reads \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" This shows limiting car usage you can lower air pollution which helping the enviroment.\n\nAlso in Source 2: Paris bans driving dur to smog in paragraph ten. Which states \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Which shows limting car usage can lower air pollion, which was shown in Source 3.\n\nTo Conclude, Limiting car usage can be tought from someone who drives there car all the time. But if people really see what there doing when they limit there car usage they would be helping the enviroment. In all of the sources made valid points on the advatages of limiting car use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The value of not using this technology is great, because its just more reasonable to know your own moods ftom your expressions instead of a computer. I say this because it's more natural to use your own mind instead of having to with a computer. This is my opinion of this article, because it makes you have to use your mind instead of having a computer to use it for you.\n\nStudents should use their minds when it comes to this, because you will be able to tell other people moods and yours also. In the text it states,\" The facial expression for each emotion are universal.\" What this means is that the facial expressions we use are used all over the world. So why not learn them your self instead of having a computer to do it for you. When you travel there will be facial expressions every where so it's best if you learn them on your own so you will understand what there moods are.\n\nWhen you can tell people's mood from their facial expression and you address it to the person they might think your smart. In the text it states,\" Moving your facial muscles not only express emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" This is also another good reason to read facial expressions, because it benefits you in a mentally way by reading people's body language. Another way it can benefit you is because it shows your actaully paying attention to the person's emotions.\n\nWhen you use an computer to read people emotions just imagine doing it non verbally and using your mind to read it. In the text it states,\" In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" For an example if your friend is looking down or happy you will most likely be able to tell from their facial expressions. I say this because us as humans we use facial expressions everyday so why not be able to read them.\n\nAs you read this passage this can be a life lesson, because it's used in everyday life. As we get older and years pass we will always use facial expression so it's best to learn them instead of a computer doing it for you. This is my opinion of this article, because it makes you have to use your mind instead of having a computer to use it for you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel like this technology can be both usefull and not as usefull as it intends to be. It can help the teacher learn if what there teaching is so boring that the students may never get it in there head. I also feel like the tecnology can be more of a distraction then help.\n\nIn the artical the Nick did explain how the device can calculate the emotion of the person so the teacher can tell if the student is having a bad day or not. I personal dont know but this tecnology might be able to tell if someone has told a lie or not.\n\nThe face reader also seems slightly useless in school. I feel like it would still take time to process the face it is scaning. The tool to mee seems as if it has no actual educational falue to a school enviroment for learning. I aslo feel like the students emotions should not be open to everyone that they don't want it to be open to.\n\nHere I feel as the face reading computer will not help play a huge role in a school seting. It might be fun to play around with and learn how it works but what it can do is just not worth trying to put into school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "FACS (Facial Action Coding System) would be useful in places like classrooms. FACS would be able to read a kids emotion, it would help student counsulors address the problem of a child, and quite possibly stop another school shooting from happening. The sooner we have FACS in our school, our schools will be safer.\n\nStudents may not come from the best homes. So they could be worried about their parents getting a divorce or afraid that their drunk dad is going to throw a beer bottle at their head because of their grades at school. FACS would be able to pick up on their emotion of sadness and fear and inform the teacher so that they can eliminate they problem. As the article said FACS would help by detecing when a student is confused or bored with the lesson and it would change the lesson to make it better understanding or more interesting.\n\nFACS could help student consulers better understand kids that they are consuling by reading their emotion. If a kid who has a poker face goes to the student consuler for help, the student consuler is going to have a hard time reading their emotion. But with FACS the student consuler would have a much easier time finding out what the problem is and adressing it quicker.\n\nFACS might even be able to prevent another school shooting. FACS would be able to read when a Student is getting angry or sad. FACS would also be able to warn a teacher when that child is getting angry or sad so that the teacher can address the problem.\n\nIf we want our children to be safer and more educated then we should put FACS in our schools. FACS could eliminate distractions and quite possibly help kids in their homes. We might never see another school shooting again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The challenge of studying Venus\" is a very interesting story. In the story the author tells us a lot about Venus and its harsh conditions. The title describes the story very well. Venus seems like it would be very challenging to explore and the author gives many reasons why it would be so difficult. For some reason though he doesnt really list any benefits to exploring Venus.\n\nThroughout the whole story the author is just making Venus sound like a horrible place. In the article he writes \" Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" Again he is describing Venus to sound like an awful place, so why would you want to explore it. Another good claim he makes is that, \"since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\"\n\nWhy would you go explore Venus in a space craft if all of them were destroyed. If it where me i would not want to explore Venus, the author has given me plenty of reasons not to.\n\nThroughout the story the author does list at least one benefit to exploring Venus. In the story he writes, \" it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Yes i can agree that would be a great reason to explore Venus, but here are the downsides to that. Venus now is not like Earth, it is more like a destroyed Earth. The author writes \" on the planets surface tempatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit.\" You cant even walk on the surface without burning up, how is this like Earth? The author also mentions,\" Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans.\" All those oceans that may have been their are gone now. Why would we explore a destroyed Earth?\n\nIn conclusion the author does not give many benefits to exploring Venus. All he really did was list the benefits to why we shouldnt explore Venus. In my personal opinion if i where a scientest and somone read me this i would not want to explore Venus. In the end i do not believe the author makes a good case to explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear lot talk computers effect society Some experts say computers good society think opposite computers bad society make children obese decrease person social skills even make children less educated Computers plain bad In recent years studies show children use computer often less likely less willing get active Dr says The children use computers time waste active A study conducted shows children use computer hours day obese children use one hour less day Computers keep children inside day A child computer wasting time active The main reason children become fat computer easier go computer walk exert energy Computer direct cause child obesity threat society Some think computer increase social skills dead wrong On computer talk friends like actually talking On computer talk privite say ever heck want In public say something bad get lot trouble A computer offers face face interaction So person uses computer often social gathering usually awkward My cousin spends time computer I went christmas never took eyes screen Computers destroying social life millions people Did know people use computer often usually less smart kids nt Experts computers say computers used infenite nolege The key word fraise kids knoledge finger tips nt mean use On many projects homework assignments I record kids say CAPS I copied printed article google copying printing students nt learn anything Computers slowly making people less educated Ever since invention computer people seen promise society Now computers destroying society making people fat socialy weird less educated So people still think computers good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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