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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is a natural landform because new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey reveals that the Face on Mars is really a mesa.\n\nIt's a natural landform because on April 5th, 1998, the Mars Global Surveyor snapped a picture ten times better than the original Viking photos and it turned out to be exactly what they said it would be: a natural landform. The reasons that it's a natural landform are that on April 8th, 2001, a cloudless summer day on Mars, Malin's team in the Mars Global Durveyor captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's maximum resolution. Also, the pixel technology in 2001 allowed them to see things as small as airplanes on the ground, Egyptian-style pyramids, even small shacks! Last, but not least, the picture actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\n\nI believe this because Garvin says that the Martian landform reminds him most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. He also informs us that it's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, tracking news reports and socializing with others through social platforms has become a norm. In my opinion, there are more advantages than disadvantages of applying technology.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, it is a more timely and efficient way to access news events. For instance, the journalists can publish the articles immediately despite how far they are away from the press company and update at any time later. Compared with old methods in terms of the printed newspaper, news spreading on social platforms is more broad and fast since readers from all over the globe can read or watch immediately on the internet. In addition, we are living in an era of information. As a result, everyone can access or even contribute to updating an incident.\r\n\r\nSecondly, another benefit social media can bring is to socialize with others more effortlessly. The advent of technology allows people to keep in touch with their beloved ones regardless of their physical location and time. For example, although my friends and I are currently living in different countries, we can make comments or chat with each other at any moment once we see the posts or pictures from Instagram or Facebook posed. Furthermore, it is cost-effective and time-saving since we do not have to travel to meet up.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some drawbacks of using social media to follow the reports or interact with others. First, we still need to be cautious about the facts in the articles. Hence, the source of the report should be tested or proved to be true before being released. Also, some people who lack self-discipline may spend all their day online and get no real business done.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe that the advantages of technology far more outweigh the disadvantages as long as the usage of social networks is properly managed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator i think that the electoral collages  should stay because .With out the the electoral college we could not have a party that is the tie breaker. So then we could not have a president .and they all so vote for the ''president and vice president all 538 electors but to win the vote a party must have 270 of the votes to win ''.and to have equal there are 2 senators and one member of the House of Representatives.\n\nBut a electors are chosen by the candidate's political partys  by law .In a certan way  and then be given a responsibilaties . And on every first monday in november the people vote for the prisedent that you want to win. but you are voting for the candidates electors  but each state has a plathora of electorals like texas has 38 electors and californa has 55 and florida has 29 so does new york they are given more because the more populatina a state has the mor electorals you can have . and one other good reason that electoral college is more sofishint way then popular vote because \" the winning candidate shares the popular vote and people starte to bicker about how to share it .\n\nThe large states  restored a good porshine of the weight in the political balances because the larger states have a bigger population so for example Obama got 29 elactoral votes  and the person who won would get 3 extera elactoral votes . but it is easeyer for the larger states to get attention from presidentail candidates in the campianes than the smaller ones because of how many larger ones have more electores vote then the other smaller ones.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have been noticing that artificial intelligence robots will probably be able to take over human’s place in different jobs. This event is most likely to happen with jobs that don´t require complex solutions, while humans force will still be needed for some intellectual focused activities. This essay will discuss why most jobs will be carried out by machines, but some of them will keep relying on humans. \r\n\r\nIn the future, most menial jobs will eventually be done by robots because human skills are easily replaced by artificial intelligence in certain basic activities. The development of modernized software will help machines learn different types of human tasks, and companies will prefer to use these machines instead of humans, because it will probably be cheaper and faster, increasing their production and profitability. For instance, many companies worldwide have already been using artificial intelligence for customer service, solving their client’s problems through online chat bot. This is less expansive for companies, since the artificial intelligence can work unstoppable, and the machines will also treat all the related complaints in the same way, which may increase solution rates and client’s satisfaction. For these reasons, basic jobs that can be automatized will most likely be replaced by machine and artificial intelligence.\r\n\r\n\tOn the other hand, there are many jobs that require very complex and specialized skills, which can only be acquired with years of study and practice. In my opinion, it does not matter how far humans will be able to get with technology improvements, some specific skills will never be replaced by software and machines. A range of traditional professions are good example of jobs that will not be replaced by artificial intelligence, such as lawyers, psychologists, and doctors. Even though machines can learn specific skills related to such areas, the automatic way they operate will never be able to reach the individual issues or cover all levels of details that a complex problem would require. Imagine that a new disease has been discovered, if doctors did not exist, treatment for this new disease wouldn´t be possible until a new machine learn how to treat them, since it takes time to develop a new artificial intelligence. In other words, humans should not be replaced in sophisticated jobs. \r\n\r\n\tThe society cannot disregard that machines and artificial intelligence are very useful for a variety range of purposes, including jobs. As explained above, in the future humans will be replaced by robots in many basic jobs, and some companies have already been relying on them lately. Even though the introduction of artificial intelligence in the labor environment is a trend worldwide, robots will not be able to replace humans in sophisticated activities that requires intellectual thinking and complex solutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers strong negative effect society stronger positive one Computers days advanced allow talk friends allow acess information efficiently increased man power scientific research Almost every teen screen name allows chat online friends This function keeps kids touch active Eventhough instant messaging distract kids daily life also amazingly helpful Just last week friend mine forgotten write homework easly contacted online I able let know matter seconds Like wise online communication also talk video chat right friends everyday get go hang friends easy alternative Not quick easy s free Computers keep kids phones jucking bill causing loud annoying phone bill conversations limit texting The important effect computers society gathering information The internet allows people acess millions websites light speed Every second day someone internet searching date would go library get Computers key part society depend without would lost They provide easier way life us lazy need survive The internet keeps us updated informed whats going around world without even going We need internet could nt acess without computers One largest aspects life computers helped us research Computers multiplied man power giving us organized way store date Recently I watching show computer testing items process would take human weeks They also help us different creative people With computer came smaller compact computers till able fit palm hand They lead us think greater things life keep earth safe stop damaging much They re lead us research unknown areas world years ago scientist pad paper nt dare even think Computers linked world communication information exelled us greater heights understanding came Overall society needs computers overwhelming positive affect society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The most prevalent solution for people who are convicted of crimes is imprisonment in several countries. Nevertheless, some people argue a more effective way would be education. In terms of the committed crime, I totally agree that imprisonment would be the best way as a conviction, which is beneficial for self-reflection and social impact. \r\n\r\nProviding a plethora of prisons seems the most favourite preference for some countries in order to undermine devious criminals. This selection may be opted to protect communities from the offenders since they do not recognize if there is a villain in surrounding that will emerge the next crime possibility. Moreover, it looks helpful for the offender to do self-evaluation and behave in positive manners when they are settled inside, so they may realize their mistakes . To illustrate, in Indonesia, the persuasive methods is not efficient enough to decrease the number of criminals, so entering the offenders to jails is the main conviction if they are being accused. They will be arrested and investigated with the police officers and processed into prisons. Consequently, the criminal rate plummets significantly, and the societies feel safe and convenient to do activities outside. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, applying education methods, such as mediation or rehabilitation does not support making the offenders feel guilty and give up doing the crime, even though some people still believe that this approach would be effective. Nonetheless, there is real evidence that it is not useful to combat the crime, Canada as an example. This country has the jeopardy gangster that will savage murder and cannot bargain with anyone, including the government officers. Thus, it is mandatory to do a harsh procedure to raid them and put them into jail.\r\n\r\nIn summary, I considered preferring imprisonment as the best way since it has several benefits of the aforementioned rather than using the persuasive method like education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We enjoy freedom read listen watch like How would feel freedom taken away Some people believe censored books music movies magazines removed libraries I believe right read listen watch whatever choose children talk parents first censored material We know everything okay certain age groups read see listen That mean item removed completely though Instead child talk parent censored item The parent decide child mature enough item Also materials removed libraries completely someone mature enough reading listening seeing chance I remember I middle school I really wanted read novels I saw library My mother believed I read novels age My mother I worked compromise I could read novels approved She said I older I could read novels I wanted I found compromise fair I knew I old enough read novels would still shelf waiting We right read listen watch enjoy younger children age groups monitored That mean need completely remove materials libraries though When children old enough read watch listen materials able go library knowing shelf waiting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that these days information technology has invaded our space and dominated our home leisure and work. However, the question: is dominating our lives by this technology have a negative or positive impact on our lives? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.\nOn one side of the argument, some people argue that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is integrating technology in every aspect eases our lives and decreases hardworking. For example, advanced houses with integrated voice commands give the person the ability to achieve multiple tasks without any physical activity. Moreover, the technology allows people to connect multiple devices with an email address and control them remotely. One good illustration of that you can switch on and off your home AC while you are at work by the WIFI technology.\nOn the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact using advanced technology increase the number of unhealthy people. People often have this opinion because people become lazier, and their daily activity dramatically decreases making them prone to diseases.\nAs we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that using advanced information technology should be limited to simple tasks, so at any point if a technical error happened you can resume your life without any obstacles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Of all things that you would want to learn about the human face, what would you want to know about the most? In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" author Nick D'Alto explains why and how emotional expression is valuable. In this instance, being able to tell what emotions people would have by using smart computer programs such as the \"Faciak Action Coding\" system would be revolutionary. This would be an amazing ability to have because it could most likely help people with a lot of life problems.\n\nD'Alto explains that by calculating the facial muscles in the human face, his example being the face of the Mona Lisa, you could instantly detect each emotion like a simple math equation. This would be very helpful because it could help people with things such as school. D'Alto supports that claim by quoting Dr. Thomas Huang, who says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", and that if the computer does recognize the situation \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human\n\nThis techonlogy should be valubale, and usable. It would help the human societcy amazingly. This could possibly even be helpful to people with mental illnesses and other disabilities, and solve the problems of people who are suicidal or depressed. Facial Action Coding is the next big thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artilce '' The Challenge of Exploring Venus , the author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents . The author supports the idea of studying Venus is a pursuit despite the dangers because it should be fun to learn about and people could know new information about venus and whats on the sun and the earth . In the article it says ''Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additonal impediments like eruptiing volcanoes , powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface . My conclusion for this essay is talking about what venus does in the sun and the earth and how it acts towards peoples cells . I would say that Venus sounds hot and cool because theirs a lot facts and information about venus that people what to know about and how Venus has a value to the sun and the earth . And I like how Nasa has a idea to send people to study Venus and see what Venus is like and what it looks like . The author supports the claim because the author is talking about what people are doing and what they are seeing in Venus and how the author wants to see people go down to the earth and see Venus .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When think book think happy kids books mysterious dark books What I say offensive books Most magazines music books movies take shelf today happy mysterious think When I think movie I want watch I think something im going injoy something im going shut middle What pick movie look good front cover read back sounds good get home watch little sister brother exact opposite Do turn Do turn waist money anything Offensive books movie music magazines cleared store If going finish Im going watch read book going make feel good person make feel good If people sit write act play able speak oppinion good People feelings going hurt something enjoy take shelves Do something We success something people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the value of using this technology to read people emotional expressions. A few reasons I am for this experiment is because you can see how people feelings are, if a person has a hard time showing/ expressing their emotions to others, and see how others feel about you or another person.\n\nThis experiment can contructn a 3D facial model on a computer and pop right out and see how that person is feeling. The computer can classifiy the six basic expressions on a person, such as happiness, surprised, anger, disgust, fear, and saddness. Scienctist did a lab experiment on the famous Leonardo da Vinci's painting Mona Lisa. The experiment was to see if Mona was trying to smile or if she was being serious, so they experimented to see her expressions.\n\nThe technology associates with facial movements and mussles, that the computer can detected a false smile and a netural expression. The technology of the computer can detect if a person has a real smile or a forced smile on their face. A way to see if a person is forcing their smile is by looking at the sides of their mouth because the smile is stretched on the sides of your mouth using a different mussle, the risorius.\n\nThe theory of the experiment is not only tp show and figure out you expressions/ emotions but it can also help you with producing them. The whole story is talking about showing the emotions of your peers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change is considered one of the most urgent and devastating topics that need an immediate action from everyone, world leaders, experts, and common people to find sustainable solutions.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, throughout the years, several elements had a negative impact on the environment which contributed to the climate change crisis. Such as the greenhouse effect and waste products. And it is worth mentioning that human beings have the lion's share of this dilemma. However, it is up to us to find the solutions to save our motherland and minimize the damage we have done so far.\r\n\r\nLooking closely at climate change and what it holds of unfavourable outcomes for humankind I have to say that I agree that it will badly affect businesses ,especially in the long term. Looking at farms for instance, farmers will face a difficult time in planting seeds due to environmental changes , which, in turn, they will not be able to provide their products to the farmer markets, as a result, both the farmers and the sellers will face financial difficulties. Another example is industrial processes, if we didn't find alternative resources that hold lower negative impacts than today's resources, then, a lot of workers in factories will be at risk of losing their jobs.\r\n\r\n Having said that, I do not think that it will create more job opportunities. I can understand that some people think of this idea as a good opportunity but I think they only are looking at the short term.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, continuing on the same path as today will, eventually, result in business difficulties, thus putting workers and employers at risk of losing their jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some nations, there are significantly increased curious people about searching the history of the their accommodation. This essay will give several reasons and how the people search for it.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, some of the many reasons why people are fascinated on their house because of the value and importance of the materials of the house, most especially the history behind the house. Furthermore, the materials used in building are one of the prime subject; how it was perfectly planned and build causing the building became steady and sturdy. In addition, the profits can provide also to the owner because some buyer are attracted with the house with tremendous history. For instance, one house in our village, it was easily sold because the owner of the house is a famous star. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, The most common research material today is the internet, with the technology today, everything is within reach with just one click in the computer. Additionally, the interesting houses and building can be easily seen in the web and also the word of mouth such as the people who travelled in the place and they essentially give the story to their friends and family. For example, if I want to visit the place and learn which places has a beautiful scenery. I would instantly researched the web or asked a friend who visited the place.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the people are interested in history of the place because of materials used and the most vital thing they used in researching is the internet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is from the NASA facility er do not have fool proof on what made the crator in mars we don't have full evidence on what happend on mars. The face on mars is a mystery and very intersting phnominon and leads to very meracisly things in the future but for futher notice we cant say it was aliens. NASA scientist dont believe that this was alien trying to send a signal or a message to us for all we know a astroid may hit mars and we didnt know.\n\nOn the flip side people and scientis have belived and wondered if aliens are real and there is many cases to make people believe there are alien living amungst human along with movies, games, and toys. We are all fasinated by space and still think aliens are real and some think that aliens are not real.\n\nWe may never know what amde the face on mars if it was aliens or just rocks making shadows and if we ever find out why there was a face it will be a sight to see in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local news paper computers good idea every developed country uses computers Also learning fertileze comunication comercialy implortant Computors also make life easier many people Computers learning let vast information available I personaly find many world events bringing yahoocom Computers alow learn new learning cultures world done computers The last way computers learning informing us everyday thing like get stain pronounce word make new dish much Computers also crucial communictaion We use computers talk freinds facebook You also meet new people useing pc Everyone uses computer basicly meet enyone The last reason computers important commercial stand point computer help alot small bussness letting known Domestic seller huge companies compette customer Furthermore internet generates alot money people becausethey use cyber billboard In conclusion computer usefull learning communication comercial Therefore computer supported looked upon", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is a natural landform and was not created by aliens. First of all why would NASA hide something like that from us? Second of all the Mars has not shown signs of life form, it has been vacient for as long as we know. Though it has been in moves, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and more for more than 25 years, don't beleve everything you here or see in a movie it's not factual.\n\nNASA couldn't/wouldn't hide something like aliens from us. They have all of the facts they need to determen that this was not done by aliens. They have done reaserch and test to determan that its not done by aliens. Aliens are just mithical creatures.\n\nMars has been empty for as long as we have been able to go to Mars. It is just the rock formation and the shadow giving it the affect of looking like a face. The pictures show it was just rocks. The first one 43 meters per pixel compared to the new image that spans 1.56 meters both show the same thing.\n\nThe Face has been in moves, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and more for more than 25 years! Do you beleve in every move you watch,every magazine you read, or how about every talk show you listen to. Unless you do you probly dont beleve in this alien nosnese you beleve in reaserch and facts. NASA has come up with these facts to prove its not created by aliens.\n\nThe Face created by an alien is just a conspiracy theory. It is shaped like a face but it is the shadows that make us beleve it looks like a face. Do you think some how that aliens have made it so the shadows are alaways there so it always looks like a face.\n\nMars has as many aliens as we do here on earth. Secrets and lies all come out eventualy. Here on earth there is life formes but not on mars. This face has been everywhere but so has celebrties are you going the beleve everythig you here about them. This is all just a conspiracy theory and conspiracy theorys corupt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the course of history, we have witnessed numerous global issues successfully addressed thanks to cross-border cooperation. Therefore, a number of individuals are of fervent conviction that this is the core to ensure the resolution of urgent problems around the world. Although it cannot be denied that this holds true to some extent, I personally believe that international cooperation is not the only way.\nOn the one hand, it is conspicuous that cross-border cooperation has substantially contributed to ameliorating and eliminating countless worldwide issues. To illustrate, global warming, which has aroused extensive concern due to its disastrous repercussions, calls for the participation of all nations to improve the situation. A series of international conferences, which have been held in the past few years by the UN, has brought about positive outcomes. Thanks to the wholehearted support of member countries, gas emissions from industries and domestic activities have been considerably falling, paving the way for preventing global warming from getting worse.\nHowever, the executive bodies of each nation are also responsible for tackling these pressing matters. To begin with, there is no arguing that every country has its own problems, and its government cannot depend on foreign aid to start paying attention to them. In other words, it is incumbent on the governments to deal with its own issues. Furthermore, success in the resolution of internal issues sets a platform for better international cooperation. A stable condition of a country in terms of politics or economy would facilitate the success of cross-border cooperation to a large extent.\nTo conclude, in the context of globalization, international cooperation is of profound importance when it comes to solving urgent issues, but each nation can make contribution by handling its internal matters as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people in the community believe that youngsters should do some kinds of charity in their leisure time; therefore, both these precious minds and the public favouring this habit. I fully agree with this argument and the details will be discussed in the essay below.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, a person should realize the importance of being a part of the society; besides, he should understand and always remember that populations should only stand still with a sense of humour by knowing the meaning of living in the same neighbourhood. This habit will penetrate into the personality and become a spontaneous behaviour of the person if it is learned in the early stages of life as a routine lifestyle. \r\n\r\nFamilies or teachers can support the youngsters to attend to some activities related to the benefits of the community such as helping the old people’s groceries. Meanwhile, a teenager can participate in to any kind of environmental cleaning activities in his free time either for having a good time with his friends or to make his vicinity cleaner, which are helping his community to become a better place. A group of researchers from Oklahoma State University Social Psychology Department have concluded that a teenager’s mental health would become better if he/she attending a couple of organizations related to the public without taking any money from that.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, young people should help to their community in their spare time so that not only their mental health and the community’s well will become better as well which I also fully agree with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus also known as Evening Star Is planet no to different from the planet earth. However this planet shows many challenges that don't allow us to learn more about it. The author males it very clear that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports his idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger many times in this article for example in the text it says \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one paerticularly compelling idea of sending humans to stufy Venus.\" How are we gonna send humans down to a planet we dont know that much. This is just one of the many text eveidnce the author put in the text to show Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThe author from the very start of reading this article shows that Venus is well worth the time and effort we are putting towards it. In the text it says \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size\". Venus and Earth are alike in many ways for example Earth Venus and mars are our lanetary neighbors they orbit thr sun as different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times closer to Venus because how it says in the text \"Venus is sometime right around the corner in space terms.\" This is other example on how well the author supports his idea of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present.\n\nWe have tried many ways to try to learn more about Venus but there are many things getting in our way of learning more about Venus for example in the text is says \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this could-draped world\". We are more then exicted to try to learn more about Venus but thats not the only thing stopping us from learning more In the text is says \"However peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limtied insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" As you have read normal taking photos will not be enought just to learn and see how Venus surface is we need to go down and see ourselfs however that will be very hard somce no spaceraft survived the landing for more than a few hours as stated in the text. The author shows why his statment of how Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present in many ways.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated with Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system a long time ago. If Venus was once like Earth maybe it can be again because our Earth will not last forvever we will need somewhere else to go and maybe that place is Venus. In the text it says \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varous forms of life just like earth today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet has surface of Rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys mountains and craters.\" This text evdience shows why we are interested in learning more about Venus and once again supporting the idea of the author that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present.\n\nThe author has shown more than once that he strongly believes that Venus is well worth all the time and effort they are putting into it. However this planet shows many challenges that don't allow us to learn more about it. The author from the very start of reading this article shows that Venus is well worth the time and effort we are putting towards it. Astronomers are fascinated with Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet. We have tried many ways to try to learn more about Venus but there are many things getting in our way of learning more about Venus. In conclution The author never let up on his idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars should not be a thing that evolves in our country. I think this because it will just make everyone lazier than they already are. Here are a few other reasons I also think they shouldn't evolve this idea.\n\nFirst of all, it will make our country populace lazier than we already are with all the technology we already have. Second, these cars can't even fully drive themselves anyways and it may take years before they completely can. Lastly, like it states in paragraph nine, who would be to blame if the car hurt or even killed someone? Would it be the person who owns the smart car or the manufacturer of the car? Technically the person who owns the car isn't driving it so it would be the manufacturer, but they sold the car to the owner. Maybe both of them?\n\nAll in all I think these cars were a good thought that really shouldn't be carried out any further due to lack of compatibility with the road and things going on around it. Maybe in the future these cars could make a comeback, but right now we just don't have the right technology for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have seen it in movies for years. Cars driving on their own. It is no longer science fiction, it is now a reality. Google has had driverless cars since 2009. Some people think this is a great idea. Others think it is a waste of time.\n\nThe people that agree with the driverless car idea have some valad points. According to the article, ¨The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today´s taxis and far more flecibility than a bus.¨ That is a huge win for the idea of driverless cars.\n\nAnother perk to driverless cars is safty. The text states, ¨they needed a whole lot of sensors.¨ Google modified a Toyota Prius by putting position estimated sensors, GPS reciever, a rotating sensor on the roof, and a video camera on the rearview mirror. These sensors help the car make a model of ist surroundings in order to mimic a human driving the car.\n\nIn the text BMW says ¨The car can handle functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.¨ This would cut down on the amount of accidents that occur in traffic jams. This would also cut down the number of injuries that take place related to cars.\n\nThe people who dissagree with the idea of driverless cars state that the components could fail. This is a valad point, but if all driverless cars have a system that allows the passenger to take controll during an emergency situation the accident can be avoided. Weather people are ready for driverless cars or not, they are coming, and the idea of driving yourself to work may become a thing of the past.\n\nThe positive possibilities that come along with driverless cars far outweigh the negative possibilities that come with them. In five years or less, people driving themselves will be in the rearview mirror.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther saying we need to know more about our sister plant and neighbor. Knowing what's on Venus could help us know if life is out there or not. If we get more informason it could help a great dill with are informason about speace.\n\nGeting to know adout Venus could help us know a lot more about what is out there. With Venus being our neighbor we could find thing we dont know about plant life or animals. In the 4th paritgrasph it says 'Today,Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Eath'. this could mean there are somthing about Venus that we dont know about .In the 8th pargraph 'Striving to meet the challenge pressented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into mant equally intimidating endeavors.' Us striving to know more and wanting to know is the first step in the right place. even those the staces are hight and there are so many good thing could come out of this there are some risks to becaues we dont know what is out there,and yes that can be could but it can be bad to find life that is unfreindly to us and want to hurt us.\n\nIn conclusion I think that the binifit far out way to dangers of harmful life. So I thank it would help to know more about our neighbor plant and if life lives there. Becaues if we know more it could help us a great dill.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is improving everyday to make our lives better. Our society wants to improve on many things to make our lives productive. One of the main things they are currently working on is driverless cars. The google has been working on their driverless car. That project has been going on for 7years, and they have not been able to progress much. Driverless cars are waste of money, ineffcient to humans, and will cause controversy in the future.\n\nThe idea of driverless car originally was desgined as a car without human involved on the road. Now the techicians are claiming that we need humans to control the car otherwise this idea of driverless car would not work. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" That would be very aggriviating having to drive whenever the computer can´t.\"This necessitate the car being ready to quickly get the driver´s attention whenver a problem occures.\" that sounds very inconvenient. The passage is saying that we shoould always be alert of any mistakes that the computer makes. Humans might as well as just drive with our hands and feet. The car needs to be completly human control free, otherwise this technology will be very inefficient.\n\nThis idea of driverless cars isn´t just inefficient, it will cost money. This process of testing their prototype seems very costly. The author mentioned that one of the sensors costs about two hundred million dollars. Google needs to realize that not everyone has two hundred million dollars in their pocket. This isn´t the only sensor that the car has either. Other sensors on the cars seems very costly as well, because these specific types of technology was not around a long time. The prototype itself seems very costly, and they are not still completly driverless. A person still has to be alert so that it does not do anything dangerous. Trying to create more prototypes and ideas costs money too. If we are not progressing much, why do we need to waste so much money on something that may not even be efficient in the future? Driverless cars are wasting money on something they will not go anywhere in the future.\n\nSomehow, in the far future, we do end up having this driverless car. It will be completely efficient and convenient to use. Now the society has to make new laws that apply to this driverless car. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault, the driver or the manufacturer?\" We have to think about these kind of things and decide the best option. Our society already has many controversial laws, like gay rights or gun rights. The government does not need any more controversial laws to deal with, our society is already messy enough. Driverless car will be very controversial when they are introduced to our society, it is not worth the time and money to manufactur cars that will cause controversy.\n\nDriverless car idea was interesting at first, but if we look into negative side of it, it does not sound very intriguing at all. This idea is wasting money in general, and it seems so far very inefficient to our human lives, and it will cause alot of controversy later in the future if we do have driverless cars. Driverless cars are waste of money, ineffcient, and will be controversial.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the article, fellow citizens are imformed about the advangtages of limting cars. As it says in the artcle \"As a result, 70 percent of Vaubang' familes not own and 57 solid a carpercent throw a cow.\"I'm much happier his way\" \"All of our development since World War 2 has been centered on the car, and that will change\" says David. Not only were they focused on the car, that was all that mattered at the time. Not only were the people trying to make a change \"An offical of Transportation for America, fast- growing coalition of hundreds of groups in the United States, who were promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars. Mr. Goldberg added \"How much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid.\" in the United States, the Evironmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities\"\n\nNot only are they trying to reduce and/ or limit car useage \"After days of near car pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Cars are not the only ones taking act in this \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plaes were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day. Backing down wasn't an issue because according to the article \"Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to Reuters. Twenty-seven people had their car impounded for their reaction to the fine\". The article also states \"Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline.\" Buses and taxis?\"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and textis permitted for the Day without Cars in capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog\"\n\nThe article not only states \"The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Begota in the mid-1990s. it has seen the contruction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor.\" but it also states the end of the car culture. \"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those a new pirorities, as do a proliferation of car- sharing programs across the nation. A study last year found that driving by young people decresed 23 percent between 2001 and 2009\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it is a good thing to do for you to do when you are older. Why, because you have fun on the ship you are on. It is a good opportunity for your boy or girl to do when they are older to do the program. You get to be with animals when you are on the ship. It is a fun thing for people to do,so do it.\n\nYou have fun on the ship. \"The cowboys played baseball,volleyball games (in the empty holds where animals had been housed),table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time on the ship.\" It is a good opportunity for your kids, if you have any or you can just go to the program. \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy or girl.\" You get to be with animals when you are on the ship. \"UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\"\n\nYou might say that it is a long time for your kids to be without you. But here is why you are wrong, \"Caring for the animals during the crossings kepts your kids busy, they had to be fed and watered two or three times a day, bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship, and stalls had to be cleaned.\" If you are not willing to give up your kids you can go with them if they want you to.\n\nYou might also say that there is a lot of dangers at sea for your kids. But here is why you are wrong,\"A small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic.\" The small things can keep your kids from doing something that is bad or you can do it yourself. That is why your kids should do the Seagoing Cowboys program it is the right thing to do with your kids or yourself. Have fun at the progarm.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know that people are saying that this is proof that aliens inhabit Mars, but trust me, this is not proof. I wish this was proof. It's exactly what we need to hear right now. It's exactly what we've been needing to hear for years. We wan't to find evidence of life on Mars, so why would be hide any signs from you?\n\nIf you still don't belive me, look closer at it. Some images the face is more clear than others. That means that the eyes and nose that you see are just shadows. Aliens wouldn't make an artifact that only looks like a face from certain angles. They would want it to stand out.\n\nSome of you say that the alien markings are hidden behind the wispy clouds. Well, we checked again at a time when it was clear and you could see everything fine. There were no alien markings. Like I said, if there were we would have been extatic. The whole world would have known about it within a few days.\n\nI know it has become a huge pop icon, and I'm sorry yo ruin this for you, but it has to be done. It's just a landform. It's very common around the American West. It resembles the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. If you still want to think that it's a face created by aliens then be my guest. Nobody can stop you.\n\nFor those of you who now believe that it's a natural land mark, Nasa is just as disapointed as you. We wanted it to be created by aliens too. It would be pretty nice to finally have actual proof in the existence in aliens. Hopefully our trip to Mars will help us find proof in their existence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patients everything ever hear words When waiting line test food restaurant stuck traffic Youre annoyed angry words come mind patient everything one time I waiting longer line ever waiting see ordering counter I rush I class I get five minutes When I could counter I saw empeloyees rushing around trying tralicly get orders Then I saw reason holdap There old man front line trying despreately order I didnt blame wich choices didnt know pick lost line wasnt patient harry up One said come on another I waited patiently thinking line wasnt really fair I suggested choice ordered Sure I way minutes late class I patient understanding towards old man comes around goes around say rest day I felt good good deed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education for universities always developing and changing for students to study easily without worrying about anything and nowadays they offer online classes for the one who cannot attend regularly because of difficult transportation or far distances. And I believe that this trend has so many benefits for everyone with current situations.\r\n\r\n Although online classrooms are already available in some universities since the covid-19 pandemics has happened, after that, almost every universities in the world have online courses now. By teaching from online, students does not need to care for physical contacts and focus only on studying and even they are sick or ill they no longer need to be restrained by fearing of infecting other people. Moreover, they will have more free time as there is no more transportation to get to the destination place because we can learn from the home with comfort. Also, students can now study from any universities from anywhere in the world despite their home countries.\r\n\r\n There are still left advantages for this phenomenon beside aforementioned ones. For example, because of the fees for online learning are always cheaper than learning on campus, people with tighter finance can now afford for their desire subjects. However, whether many of positive facts are existed, few drawbacks of this phenomenon also need to be considered. The most crucial thing is that there will be less practical practices for students compared to the campus and it is not possible for them to learn and practice in practical subjects from online. Lastly, there are still people who prefer more campus than online for the reasons which they think they feel unsatisfied and not effective learning from online.\r\n\r\n Overall, it can said that even though some few disadvantages are existed, its positive developments are outweighing them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author makes Venus seem cool to explore. But he also makes it extremley clear how it's so dangerous to go to the planet. He states that not one single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proxiity to us.\n\nSome details that the author gave us on why Venus is dangerous are; Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting stirkes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. A thick atmospher of almsot 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of higly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface the temeperatures are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Now Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solor system. Long ago Venus was coverd by oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth today. The planet still has some features that are similiar to those on Earth. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and creaters.\n\nAs written\n\nabove I have stated all the facts that the auhtor gave us on why Venus is so dangerous to explore. I've also stated the facts on why the astronomers are fascinated by Venus and why they want to do more reserch on the planet. Venus can sometmes be our nearest option for a plaentry visit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, there have been arguments that going to single-sex schools brings more demerits than going to co-educational schools which is in the parent's hands to decide which choose in several countries. I partially agree with this statement because of two reasons.\r\n\r\nFirstly, there are so many reasons why parents decide to go to single-sex schools for children such as the child who has some disadvantages when relate to girls due to traumatized or something. In this case, it is difficult to go to a co-educational school by the child. Moreover, children are possible to concentrate more about study because there are no relationships with other genders. From this, a lot of kinds of reasons there thus, established the type of schools now. \r\n\r\nSecondly, getting experiences of co-educational will affects becoming an adult. For instance, generally, when we became an adult, we join a company to do work at that time. It will increase some opportunities to relate with women, commonly. In this case, the person who gets used to relating with the woman is better advantageous for working in negotiations and, keeping better relationships among a company. For this reason, there are merits as well to going to co-educational schools.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people believe that in terms of going to single-sex schools brings some disadvantages than go to co-educational schools though, it is possible to decide by parents. In addition, it depends on the child's situation but, there are so many advantages to going to co-educational schools as I said.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature setting making cyclist frustrated thirsty confused The features making frustrated thought going right way really going", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many individuals who have developed a passionate interest in figuring out the past of where they dwell. Several reasons can be presented for this increasing tendency and this desire can be fulfilled using different means.\r\n\r\nOne of the main reasons why people tend to know about their accommodation 's past is that they do this to satisfy their curiosity. In other words, it is something instinctive. It helps them to explore their surroundings to ensure there is nothing threatening them. Furthermore, they are very conscious of the fact that there might be some negative background issues associated with where they live. To illustrate, in case of some illegal activity, their current house could be occupied by criminals in the past. So, it can bring about some detrimental consequences since it can cause danger to the residents of these sorts of places.\r\n\r\nPeople who are interested in searching the history of their accommodation can use a wide variety of ways to do what they intend to. For instance, talking to the elderly like grandparents or gathering information from the neighbours who have been residing there for a long time would be a great way to investigate the longevity of where they inhabit. Another method to search the history of the house is to take advantage of public facilities such as a library. Surfing the net would, also, be another option. Reading books or websites,which provide information on local history, seems to be a convenient means of carrying out research for this purpose.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many people nowadays are in a need for finding out more about the background of the houses which is due to their instinct and in order to avoid some undesirable things. In addition, this can be done by obtaining information from local folks as well as using online and offline written resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Each day tons of food is being wasted in many ways in the world.The major wastage is happening with teenagers because they don't know the importance of the food and the effects by wasting it.\nPrimarily,parent's are responsible for this immature behaviour.They don't teach their children the importance of food.As when they grow up they will join in the hostels and do the same thing there of course the teachers have the responsibility to look after them and advising them to not waste food,but students now a days are not obedient to listen after teacher.\nSecondly,Events like marriage have the greater part in wasting food because they will cook the food to the maximum because in the middle of the marriage if the food get's completed then it will be status issue for them so they cook for the maximum.\nThe worst part is if the people haven't appeared for the wedding then the remaining food is all wasted.\nIn conclusion,it is healthy way to educate children to not waste food from the childhood and also it is important to cook only for the confirmed members.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "MAY 24, 2001 is when it all started something unusal landed on plant mars a head that was about 2 miles long from end to end.ALSO it showed shadows of a unusal face with a head a mouth eyes nose and whatever else.ON the day of\n\nthe strange unusal head falling on the plantet of mars its was very strange because it had unusal body parts.\n\nIts says that there must have been a Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on mars thas when the scientist figured out that it just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia.only thing is that it made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh a few days later NASA unvieled the image for all to see. Caption noted a ''huge rock formation''... which resembles a human head ..... formed by shadows giving all illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth''. The author reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to mars.while discussing it with one of the the scientist it was very strange because alliens kept getting brought up in our conversation its was all seeming very strange to me.Then i finally discovered that what if its was brought down by alliens strange feeling i kept getting i didnt really want to believe what the scientist was saying to me abut the alliens.That next day i couldnt queit think well bout alliens was gettting brought up back to back in our conversation.\n\nAfter all that we talked about it was just a natural landform silly me thinking what if alliens did bring it down but that couldnt seem true.my adive is that if u think something is strange and unusal discover it first you might find out all the information on it.Always keep in mind is you discover something and find out the truth you get a better feeling about yourself and other thing too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming' It tell bith postive and negative facts about driverless cars. I believe that there should be drtiverless cars this is where I stand. Driverless cars have been worked on for a while now. So far they have developed software to help the advancedment of driverless cars. I think that driverless cars will provide more of a positive impact on the world than a negative one.\n\nDriverless cars have been worked on for a while now. Its been since the 1980's the used sensors attached to the wheels of cars of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, they are more advanced with better response times than ever when indanger and all around. In the late 1950's, receivers to capture radio signals th guide the car on a special track.\n\nSo far they have develped software to help the advancedment of driverless cars .In 2013, There was a develpment called \"Trafic Jam Assistant\"announced by BMW.This helps steer,accelerate, and break themselves. however they notify the driver when it doesn't have the skills to drive it in a certin situation. It can function up to 25 mph. There are also vibrations in the drivers seat to notify of an emergancy. This can mean that the driver still needs to stay concentrated on the road when the sitiuations occur. There have beeen ideas considering useing flashlights lighs on the mwindsheilkd and other heads up display just in case.\n\nDriverless carts really aren't driverless now. Most of the software for the car still needs someone to drive the car. The software hasn't really advanced so much the needs to be no one conentrating on the road ahead. These are just to help progress the advancement for driverless cars and increases safety. So even if the sofware fails the car still has the driver attention on the road. All they can do now is help the driver and other become more afe when driving incase anything happens.\n\nIn concluion, the driverless cars now aren't completely driverless and needs the drivers skills so that means it can provide more safety than less. If it can continue in success the driverless cars will be much more safe than now. Driverless cars can use half the fuel of today's cars and can offer more felxiblity when driving. The cars can have better response times than humans can in the future. Driverless cars will provide more of an increase in safety then what we have now in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders many obstacles order allow dirigibles dock To start lack suitable landing area This tough obstacle builders needed think place extremely large dirigibles could land crowded place like New York City Next figuring safe way getting mooring mast top Empire State Building This another tough obstacle mast placed top building would add stress building s Frame dangerous Lastly importantly problem nature At top building constantly shifting wings due violent air currents This extremely dangerous obstacle winds could cause dirigibles constantly moving shaking Also weighted lead weights prevent affected wind weights would dangling pedestrians street To allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building builders many different obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph trying explain us plant going bring good luck The snow melt geese return hibiscus plant start budding Its starting fresh new beggining Since failed driving test start spring In conclusion I think author concludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, I don't litke the idea of driveless cars. Have you watched iRobot? with all the robots, and driveless cars? That's how I feel like the world would be if we get driveless cars. I know it's not a real movie, or based on a true story. Without the robots, that's how our world would be set up like. Let me give my reasons.\n\nFirst, not many states have driveless cars. So, you know it's not that popular, or even out there yet. The first time it comes out everybody is going to be wanting it, then laziness walks into the picture.That means that since people don't have to drive, nobody is going to try and get there license/permit. Which can be a hassel. We can't let the electronic take over us.\n\nSecondly, the prices of the cars are most likely expensive. Teenagers are going to waiste their college money or even something more important than that to go purchase a car. Why buy something like that when it's more to the world? What if something goes wrong with the car that makes it not driveless anymore? Then that's another fee on you. Then wrecks/car accidents will be all your fault.\n\nThirdly, it will get boring just sitting there waiting on your turn to drive. Who would want a driveless car that still needs a driver? Like the passage said. Just sitting in a car not doing nothing can get boring quick. You would have to have the patience, and the time to have a driveless car.\n\nEventhough my reasonings might sounded good, what if having a driveless car wouldn't be bad after all? It just might be fun, and you just might like it. Even me perhaps. Not driving, or anything just sitting there can be fun. Instead of driving you can sit there blast music all the way up and dance. Who would love to do that? Also, you might be really tired one day, and you just have to drive somewhere. That would be a good reason to a have a driveless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\n\nThe human the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual and better response and control than a human driver could manage alone\n\nWhile the driver watches the road the car watches the driver.\n\nnot available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone The problems ahead will be solved tesla has projected a 2016\n\nrelease for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90percent of the time.\n\nThe road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us but we grow close to the destinatione every day.If the technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer. As a result in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars california nevada, florida and the district of columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars.\n\nThe psychological aspects of automation are really a chellenge admits Dr. werner huber a bmw project manager driver and have to interpret the driving fun in a new way but car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays.\n\nThe in-car system is actually a safety feature and safety is big concern\n\nthis necessitates the car being ready to quickly get driver's attention whenever a problem occurs and those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given bar chart presents how many unpaid-work hours are weekly spend by married females and males. These kinds of work include childcare at home, housework, gardening and other forms of such activities.\nIt is clear from the chart, that married males spend constantly just below 20 weekly hours on average on unpaid work, regardless of the number of children they have. On the other hand, married women spend more hours than their spouses, and this period seems to increase proportionately with the number of children in the family.\nAs is shown by the chart, married women without children attribute 30 hours on average every week for unpaid work. Compared to childless married women, women with one or two children spend around 50 weekly hours on average in those activities. Turning to women with more than two kids, they have the most time spent on unpaid house work, with 60 hours per week.\nOverall, this gender related trend can be related to the traditional premise that women ought to pursue most of the work at home while men are supposed to work outside earning money for their mutual survivorship.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, it is common for people to upload knowledge to the cloud rather than to memorise them in print media, which had been popular in the past. Despite there are some dangers of losing information due to technical issues, I believe that the benefits of unlimited storage capacity and easy accessibility far outweigh any drawbacks.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the main disadvantage of uploading everything to the Internet is the risk of losing information. If there is a cyber attack or a technical error, online content will disappear, and there is no feasible remedy to fix this problem. This would never happen if the information were stored in printed material, which was used widely in the past. For example, Conestoga College recently reported a cyber-attack on its e-library, which resulted in losing most of the scientific research in the chemistry department. However, I believe that technical problems can be prevented by using cybersecurity services from reputable companies to protect the data of individuals and organizations.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that the benefits of this trend are much more significant. In the past, people faced difficulties finding information because they had to read many books in a library or school. They also experienced the challenge of finding places to keep valued books because of the large number of them. In this era, people can store whatever they want in clouds or virtual spaces, which are not only inexpensive but also allow them to have unlimited capacity. Moreover, they also can easily access any knowledge with a click of a mouse, which is faster and more convenient than before. For example, OneDrive allows users to upload up to 500 GB to their accounts at only 10 US dollars annually, and they can download these files in less than 5 minutes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is a drawback to using the Internet as an alternative storage solution regarding the risk of technical issues. However, it seemed to me that its advantages far outstrip this drawback in terms of the larger storage ability and the convenience of obtaining information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you make a choise to do the Seagoing Cowboys program? Well if I were Luke I wouldn't go beacuse there are alot of other things he could do. He could stay in his home town and do the job he already has.\n\nIf I went I wouldn't be able to see my family every day. I like to have an oportunity to see my family a lot like you do most of the time. We go play cards and go out to eat all the time. When you aren't with your family for a while, don't you get scared? I like my family and I have them by my side to help me with what I need.\n\nIf I went on the trip and started a job on there, I could probly make more money than working at a store. It would help me with things like getting a new car because I would have a lot more money. I could make a lot of money but it is a dangerous job. I could die from it if something goes wrong with the boat or if I fall off the side of the boat. Would you really risk your life just to make more money and buy nicer things for my family? I know I wouldn't.\n\nIf I were on the boat, I wouldn't have much of anything to do. I would have my friend but what could I do with my friend. I would be awake while my friend would be asleep. If we were up at the same time we couldn't plat football or anything like that. So that means we couldn't do a lot of things to do together.\n\nAfter thinking about it I still wouldn't chose to go on the Seagoing Cowboys program. Think about all the things I talked about. I wouldn't be able to see your family. I can probly make more money but risk your life. I can't do anything on the boat. So I would not chose to go on that trip.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Description of\n\nMona Lisa\n\nWhat is the difference between smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage - says Constantin Stanislavvsky. Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?\n\nWe humans everyday perform or express the same impressive \"calculation\" such as any subject like math homework or science. Through all this the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. In paragraph 6 lines 6 and 7 this states that while the use of technology can read our emotional expressions \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. In the use of technology then it could modify the use of how people have their emotions and expressions.\n\nMeanwhile, some computers can handle the use of emotions people have and their expressions depedning on how they calculate emotions. Not only can the computer detect the feelings it makes a 3-D form of the human face or a 3-D image of the painting. In paragraph 4 the first line the article says that \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang, ''even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly). However, everyone has emotions, feelings, and expressions, but some you can not verify or tell how they are feeling or whether they tell you they do not know what is their suggestion to it. Computers need to know that as well.\n\nAs in paragraph 2, everyone has emotions that just you can not verify or tell of how they are feeling or their confused and bored. In excluslive this software can be very valuable to many students in very many ways although, it is going to help them with observing many emtional faces and expressions. Not just the computers can help them observe the faces in paragraph 6 lines 8, 9, and 10 \"The same technology can make computer- animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery. Within this information if students feel sad, worried, and happy this all at once the software in the computer can still detect the emotions of this human or painting.\n\nIt takes so many muscles just to frown, so why not smile it it takes less muscles just by muscles you can tell the way someone is feeling, when someone is happy they get wrinkles by their eyes. Stated in paragraph 7 line 8 \"In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. It is all about the muscular action units.\n\nIn paragraph 9 lines 2, 3, and 4 it says \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. In this information, To an expert or computer system, faces do not lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smilimg\" politician or celebrity is not being truthful. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, there has been a rapid spike in industrialization across the globe resulting in huge population growth. As a result, many cities worldwide are experiencing problems with traffic congestion. In this essay, I will discuss the major reasons contributing to this problem and effective ways to tackle this issue.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are two main reasons for higher roadblocks in towns and urban areas. One of them is poorly maintained roads; many cities do not have properly developed roadways, resulting in huge traffic jams. For instance, metropolitan cities like Mumbai and Bangalore are prominently known for their higher traffic volumes. Another major contributor to this issue is the over usage of private transport vehicles. Many people prefer commuting in their own cars and this leads to excessive crowding on the city streets. For example, according to a recent survey, more than half of the Asian population prefers travelling in their own cars; thereby leading to higher traffic volumes.\r\n\r\nTo remediate this problem the following actions should be taken; one of them is to construct proper multi-lane roads and flyovers that can cater to the commuting needs of citizens. In addition, introducing metro trains in towns could also prove to be beneficial. To cite an example, many cities in North America have multi-lane bridges and flyovers so that vehicles can be easily managed on roads. Another way of dealing with this problem is imposing an extra tax on the usage of private cars and vehicles. When jurisdictions take such a concrete step, people will be compelled to utilize public transportation facilities, thus reducing road jams. For example, in countries like Sweden, a majority of people prefer travelling in public buses and trains.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, improper streets and overutilization of private cars are the primary causes of huge traffic jams observed in urban areas and towns. Constructing wide multi-lane roads and imposing taxes on the usage of private vehicles are effective ways of tackling this situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think computers negative affect us How many people acess camputer daily america many people go least hour That means people cant exercise wasting many posibility physical sound good Think everything done write letter I got got materials sit back After In done writing put materials away put letter mailbox walk way back Well I Now think write email sitdown move fingers Do see difference instead getting good walk friends house talk himer Did know literally computer Instead around add anything computer gives away information information lead everthing wouldbe gone All go online Believe phisically get hurt computer long thing computer happened grandpa wood chair day get ardthritis muscle thing th", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People say that there is a face on mars. They said that it was just a rock formation. Or it could have been just dust on the ground. I don't think it was an actual alien. It could have been a glitch in the camera.\n\nI think it could have been a glitch in the system. I do think that there are living things in space. I know some people think it is a real alien. Some people think it is just a rock or a dust. But I do think that it is just a rock or a dust.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" only happened 25 years ago. The tech back then wasn't really good. The tech could make up just about any thing. It could make a shape of an animal. NASA called Mars \"Cydonia\" for another name.\n\nNASA also said that it was a face of a Pharaoh. They said that the rocks looked like a pyramid. But I never seen the picture of the faceyet. If I see it I might change my mind. I still don't ther is any living creatures on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author create mood grateful cooking skills parent s loveOne way author grateful cooking skills The author grateful mom dad s cooking skills For example My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful way author grateful parent s love The author thankful parent For example I always grateful parent love sacrifice The author love parent love sacrifice In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates greatfulness cooking skills parents love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When my friend Don Reist offered me on a trip to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I had to say yes, I knew I would never be able to do ever again. It was really fun doing it and special at the same time because I got to help people in need and see Europe and China. I also played a lot off games and we got to just sit there and look at the Pacific Ocean.\n\nFirst off the best part was that I got to help people in need. I mean these people had nothing everything they had got like wipped out. I got to go all over the place just helping people. All the places we got to see were all so pretty and delightful. By the time i go discharged i had alredy made nine trips that is the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nNext getting to see all over Europe and China was also really fun. I got to take a gondola ride in Vencice,Italy, that is the city with streets of water. A fun part was after the animals got unloaded. We played games like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whitting in the empty holds were the animals used to be.\n\nFinally all in all the trip made me understand there are people in other countries that need help. If you were everable to do this and you did I bet you really enjoyed yourself. Hopefully by all of these details you will want to sign up for a trip to go to Europe on a cattle boat. It is not all fun and games, your really have to do stuff like feed the animals. If it wasn't for my friend Don Reist I would have never got to witness this amazingness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe in aliens? If so do you believe them living in outer space or perhaps on a different planet? Imagine if you worked for NASA and you found pictures about an \"Unmasking face on Mars\". What would you do or even think about if you had seen faces on the surface of Mars?\n\nI work for NASA and I have have found pictures about a face on Mars and through my perpectives I believe that its an alien on the surface on Mars. The reason why I believe this is an alien because the face is an absolute landform of an alien. These photos were taken 1976, 1998 and 2001. In 2001 the face evolted more like a face of what humans it was of humans but I've been doing research that these faces are from aliens.\n\nAlthough it does look like a human face theres no body connected to it unless the body is stuck underneath the surface of the planet, but through my research I insist it's an alien. I do not have proof it is one but theres no proof of it being a human either. When the Mars Orbiter Camera went around Mars the face still had no evidence if it was either a human face or an alien artifact.\n\nIn my case I still prove this to be an alien. We've done plenty of research and nothing has been found is it is a human face or an alien. My question is if that it was a human why wouldn't have we known it was a human if it died. Where'd the rest of their body go? Perhaps it was trapped under the surface but in no question I still believe this is an artifact of an alien.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article i will show you how we shouldn't let danger and doubts get in the way of what we should go do and research. We can study venus even with the danger that we might get hurt or injured but that will have to be tested. That is why we have technology so we can explore these type of things without geting hurt or injured. He or she whoever wrote this article agrees heavily that e should explore more crazy places that we haven't been. We jus cirling around earth finding the same things when we can goto another planet and figure all about the life that used to live there or already does. In the article it says\"Our travels on earth and beyond should not be lmited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". This shows that we should stop being scared go explore more stuff and be advetures courages something differnt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke just got out of high school. He now has two jobs, one at the store the other at a bank. Then out of thin air his friend don ivites him to go on a trip. Don was going to Europe on a cattle boat to help people in ruins from World War II. so Luke thinks, this is a opportunity of a lifetime so he said yes to Don.\n\nSo they get on the boat where they are taking 335 horses plus their food. The whole crew takes turn caring for them. There are also nightwatch men who watch the animals through out the night. On one rainy night Luke was the watchman he went to tell the captain his hourly report. After he did he slid down a slippery ladder and landed on his backside. His heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship. A small piece of metal stopped him from going overboard. He was happy to be alive but he could not work for a few days because he had cracked ribs.\n\nHe turned 18 on a trip to Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. When his draft board found out that he was on a cattle boat trip they told him to keep doing trips. Lukes most fun times where on the way back from somewhere. Because they had dropped off all of the animals so they could play in the huge place where they had been.\n\nAnd after all of the adventures he was happy that he had the opportunity to do that it really opened up the world to him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Trading plays a crucial role in cultural assimilation. Several individuals deem that enhancing the rate of import and export internationally has a beneficial impact; however, some thinkers opposed this notion as they believe it can hamper countries true peculiarities. This criticism was correct in the past, but in the present context, there are indications that this trade activity has bought various benefits. This essay will throw some light on the perspectives mentioned here.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, with the continuous progress of commerce people and getting in contact with distinct traditions and beliefs which assisted them to broaden their outlook. Moreover, it offers a great opportunity to exchange information, technology, positive thinking, knowledge and ideas. These factors will have a significant impact on the positive growth of a nation. To illustrate, the advent of computers in Asian countries was possible because of the trading relationship with America. As a result of which it improves the quality of living considerably.\r\n\r\nAn added advantage is the strengthening of the economic condition of any province. In this era of globalisation, the developing countries must maintain a balanced relation with the developed ones. Trade is not unilateral but bilateral. By adopting an enlightened policy and promoting business activities a country, can facilitate the exchange of goods services and capital with the rest of the world and flourish their economic development. America helped Gambia, Africa; Nigeria, Africa; Duong Lam, Vietnam to generate revenue from business activities, for instance. Not only it supports a nation become self-sufficient, but it also creates work opportunity and employment.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, the cultural influence of one country can negatively affect the lifestyle and heritage of other provinces. Henceforth, people’s mindset has been controlled by other practices leading their individuality in crisis\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, despite having controversies nations are advised to promote international commerce to develop their own land and citizens living standards simultaneously. Positive outcomes should always be encouraged. Meanwhile, one country must maintain their cultural authenticity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet in our Solar System, Venus gets often referred as the Earth's \"Twin\" due to the density, size and occasionally the closets in distance too. we will never realize or really understand the stuggles and experiments people have to go through just to visit Venus .\" Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\"\n\nIts not any bodys fault that nothing good has come from Venus, Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine also a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Jet airplanes travel and fly over many storms. NASA is working on more apporaches to study Venus and learn more , the good and the bad. They have enormously powerful computers that works with mechanical ,pressure, heat and other forces.\n\n\"vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit so humans would feel nice and tostey but its also not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. The Challenges of Exploring Venus can be very scary but also very worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "imagine kids schools run able research computers Would okay kids option typing homework Do think adolescence would want waste paper messy handwriting mistakes I would hate live like I hate live like I know peers would agree This one many reasons computers positive effect people Other reaasons include citizens world need easier way communicate people work home I know would want upset many people taking away computers would First think schools runs Now picture kids turning eight page essays teachers typing would taken three Imagine kids night scribbling words away cramped hands typing write quickly possible These children computers therefore teacher take time try comprehend illegibal students handwriting I almost see kids screaming eyes darting around struggle finish high priority papers If computers would happen children Also students use computers research learning different parts world As I doubt say research negative affect school kids I mean unless nt want learn Secondly I want close eyes Think calling best friend lives He pick walk clean shiny black computer You hear clicketyclack keys write message wooshing sound moniter maes press send It kind amazing advanced technology send message matter seconds You could nt possibly say hard work put makng computers positive effect could I know I talk friends time telephoone You see family long distance calling I nt computer I would never able talk I know lot friends issue time difference locatiions makes hard call people Have ever problem Would want effect could nt talk friends anymore Most importantly I would like tell story When five daddy used tuck bed every night It favorite part everyday But I six dad got job required work late every night He stopped coming home tucking I nt understand young I I cried every night three weeks After three weeks dad s boss told could work home computer His work gave computer back tucking every night still If nt possible effect I nt know Many people able work home computers another reason computers helpful citizens world I m needs computer work Although I see people oppose computer I completely utterly disagree Computers help people working learning even communication People think computers cost much find almost price range I agree citizens spend much time computer still totally positive effect people world I know agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should the Facial Action Coding System be used in a classroom environment? Would being able to tell a students emotions help with giving them the lesson? I think it would for a few different reasons.\n\nI think the Facial Action Coding System should be used inside and outside the classroom. It would help the teachers know what is going on inside the students heads. In which then they could give the lesson in a way that the students could feel better about their work. This also would help the teachers know what may be happening in he students lives. The Facial Action Coding System could also be used to look at pictures of people and see what their emotions were when that picture was taken. The Facial Action Coding System could and should also be used at everyday jobs. It would let the employees boss/bosses know what emotions they are feeling while working. Which would then let their boss/bosses know whether to fire them or change their work environment. Which in the long run would lead to happy, not as upset, or any other positive emotions the employees could have.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System should definitly be used in classrooms, and even in the workforce. I think this technology should be released to the public as soon as possible. Even though most people can read others facial expressions just by looking at their face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy? You should because there are lots of cool places to see. Also you can have a fun time on board. Third you get to help others in need. So listen to what I have to say.\n\nFirst you get to see a lot of unique places. In the passage it states that Luke(or I) got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. He also visited an excavated castle in Crete. I also marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. I loved it So I know you will. You should also go to help others that need help.\n\nYou will get to help others in need if you become a Seagoing Cowboy. First, in the passage it states that I had to feed and water the animals atleast two or three times a day. Second, if you are eighteen you could get drafted. That's another way to help. In the passage it stated that I could get drafted, so they told him to stay there and keep working with the Seagoing Cowboys. Third you also get to help work with the Seagpoing Cow boys. If you are a good worker and kind this would be a great job. If you like the Seagoing Cowboys you will like the fun.\n\nIn the passage it states that I had fun on board. One reason is they would play volley ball, baseball,and table tennis. Also, the Seagoing Cowboys did fencing and boxing. Except if you are layed back and calm you can read! You have a lot of fun things you can do on board.\n\nIn conclusion, you get help. You get to have fun. Last but not least you ge to see a lot of amazing places! So, to sum it all up... you will have a blast if you become a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the creation of cars that can drive themselves can have a mainly negative impact on the world for a couple of reason one is it would make many people jobless, if the car malfunctions a passenger can suffer a crash that is fatal, and if we needed a emergency ride how fast would it be able to make it thier to pick us up. these are all main concerns of any human being so do you think making these cars is a good idea?\n\nFirst, if the creation of these cars were to actually succeed in making the new public transport system then it would put many taxi drivers, bus driver, and trolly drivers jobless. If all of the taxi drivers and etc. drivers were to get fired then they wouldnt be able to pay bills making them most likely homeless wich would be putting more weight on an already existing problem. Just for these cars being made it already makes a major problem even larger wich would degress america even farther than it was before. so thats my first reason that i think counting the progress of these cars would be a bad idea.\n\nSecond, what if there was a malfunction? would we still be safe? these are the questions that should be asked, If there was a malfunction in one of these cars would we be safe most likely not because there is no driver to take over if this happens and its because its a driverless car. Accidents if there was a accident would the car company be held accountable or the passenger. There is already so many car related deaths just think how many these cars would add on to that. thats my second reason that these cars will be a bad idea to keep manufacturing.\n\nLastly, In the article it says that we would no longer need to buy cars because the driverless car will be a public transportation well, what if there was an emergency and someone would need to be rushed to the hospital how fast could it come pick you up and get there. Not only that but if a another person was throwing up or bleeding in the car how many people would still wanna use it. Diseases would be another problem it would cause more spread if somone were sick and in a car and then another person had gotten into that car later then they have a possibility of getting sick too. thats my third and last reason that making these cars are a bad idea.\n\nIn conclusion though many people think this would be a step up for america or even humanity it wouldnt be mainly because for every problem it fixes it causes two more. Those are my three reasons making tons of people jobless, accidents may increase, and emergency plus diseases.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change is becoming a major threat in over the world. Some people argued that we should adapt to survive with it rather than try to solve it. I completely disagree with this opinion as we still have time to tackle this issue so that we could reduce the impact on human beings.\n \nThe Government and individuals have responsibilities to combat climate change and they can use several measures to protect or at least mitigate the earth’s climate. In terms of government, they could impose laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions, that causes the global warming. For Instance, the Government could impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies and then that money could be invested in renewable energy resources from solar, wind or water power. In terms of Individuals, they could become energy efficient by using public transports and bicycles. It only would happen if people will be aware of all these issues and their consequences. For example, conducting awareness campaign on the importance of creating greener spaces by plants, trees and avoiding deforestation is a best way to educate people so that they can participate to reduce this problem.\n \nIf we cope with this problem rather than solve it, there would be severe results. Thus, there would be melting of polar ice caps, that causes an increase in the sea-level, leading to disasters like drought or flood. Obviously, these disasters coincide with diseases band famine. For example, people who are living in low-lying areas and don’t have safeguard, they could face the problems like scarcity. Therefore, they are fleeing to other countries due to climate change. As a result, we would see outbreaks of disease, as well as increased homelessness and poverty.\n \nTo conclude, it is clear that without solving this issue, we cannot survive with a healthy life, So several measures would be used by government and individuals, could be the best solution so that we remain protected from their consequences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood passage warm personal Narciso reflective passage parents unselfish gave life Cuba give Narciso better life Narciso goes saying unselfish parents take people give people better life Narciso s parents caring meaningfull He continues mood talking true family How s someone blood related care love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist putting unwanted places starting man took advice many older men dont even know area anymore So riding man seems lost trying follow advice comes across many unknown unwanted areas He starts good comes Rough Road even says sometimes life feel cruel Then come large snake middle road scary enogth slow ride past thing taking road Coming thing strong hard young man", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should have driveless cars. I think they are a very intrestinig and good idea. It would be really advanced to have drivless cars. It just shows how far we have come in technology.\n\nThey will not be completly driverless which is a good thing in my opinion. Because you can still take control whenever you want or when it is needed. Like the article stated \"All are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" They just seem safer than regular cars we drive. Because they are so motified to do so, they put so much work into these cars and technology I think there would be less accidents. Like stated in the article \"uses postition-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotationg sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" All that technology has to be safer than a regular driver. They are made to be extremly safe\n\nThey have so much technology pun into them to make sure we are safe. I know they will be safer compared to regular drives. Also, we can still contol them if we want, which is a lways a plus. Those are some of the reason why i think we should have driveless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever dream about sitting back and relaxing on your way to work? Many people have. With the new technology that is being improved upon each and every day, that might just become a reality. Tesla projjected a 2016 release for a car that can drive on autopliot for 90% of the time.\n\nI don't want this new technology to be a part of my life. I think it is too dangerous of a concept to just \"give it a try.\" Cars have been driven by humans for over 100 years, that's how I believe it should stay. There are a few states that believe so too, as they have laws that prevent testing computer driven cars there. I think they should continue to develop the technology and get it spot on perfect before I'll accept it. There are also Lawsuit concerns, if there is an accident who do you blame? the one in the vehicle or the people that made the car? That's a little bit confusing isn't it?\n\nMany people believe in this whole driverless car technology, but I say just leave cars alone and continue to let humans drive them to avoid all the confusion. With a little more investigation into the topic and a little more research I believe this could become a smoother process for the manufactures, but as for now leave the cars be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Around 25 years ago, NASA's Viking 1 caught a glimpse of a \"face\" like figure on Mars. Ever since those photos have been released people have said that there is aliens on the planet Mars. The fact that people still believe it is aliens is highly immature, it's just a natural landform that created from an impact.\n\nEver since people saw the face on Mars people started to believe it was aliens. It is just a natural landform that formed either after a meteoroid crashed into Mars or the tetonic plates pressed against each other and created this face like structure.The \"Face on Mars\" has soon became a large attraction to the planet. Very few scientist believe that it's a ancient civilization of some form.\n\nAfter so many people assumed that there is some type of life living on Mars NASA sent out another spcaecraft called Mars Global Surveyor (MGS), it arrived in September 1997, 18 years after the Viking 1 caught the glimpse of the face. As soon as they photographed iti on April 5,1998, the picture came out 10 times sharper and people were unpleased with the way the face had changed over the years.\n\nWhy would people believe in a story that does not have the proper facts? People could think and say that there is an alien life form on mars or they could say, that there is no alien life form and people who make stuff up are immature and childish. Just because the face on Mars is shown in Hollywood films, written about in books, doesn't mean that there is enough facts that prove alien life is on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion, the face on Mars is just a natural landform that was created by the tetonic plates or by a collosion between a meteoroid. There is no living life on Mars nor will there ever be any signs of life on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When it comes to living in a house or flat, apart from the decorations or prices, the history of them is interesting. The desire to find more information regarding the current accommodation is becoming popular in recent years. I believe it is rooted in human's intrinsic, and I am also convinced that technology has opened up many options in favour of that.\r\n\r\nIt is my view that people are curious and willing to find out more. The majority inhabitants living in some ancient countries have more curiosity, due to the places where they live. Nobody can dismiss the fact that this sense is much more vigorous regarding their houses or buildings because they come into contact with them constantly. For instance, in Scotland which is one of the oldest nations all around the globe, its citizens are aware of each historical event about their houses due to this compelling reason that they are more able to find out interesting historical events in comparison with other people. Thereby, the natural desire of finding background information plays a pivotal role in raising this sense.\r\n\r\nI further believe that we can ignore the productive roles of technology and the internet by no means. In several years ago, there were not any tools or facilities that made a contribution to people regarding getting historical information of their accommodations. Individuals merely were able to trust the ancient stories which might be wrong or irrelevant. However, these days the internet brings numerous positive influences on people's knowledge. They can get online and find whatever they want just in a few minutes, and they also share the information with others. For example, in the UK, there is a website, and fellow citizens enter their home's address. This website shows all the history of their buildings, ranging from the ownerships of ground to current events. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe most people are interested in finding more data about their accommodations, and it is completely logical due to the nature of being human. Also, from my perspective, they can take full advantage of technology and the internet to catch much more reliable and credible pieces of information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading this controversial essay on Electoral College and how it affects other and our \"American People\" I feel personally a bit ashamed at our own country that we allow all this nonsense to have happened. In my opinion I would want too ban the choice of Electoral College, because first off we're looking way too deep into our system of voting, is it really necessary too compare our states number of votes with another's just to possibly get noticed? Why dont we take things into our own hands and not count on voting for some stranger to do the work for us.\n\nIn one of they many paragraphs I had read, it simply stated \"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that out to be (overruled)\" that doesnt sound like everyone here in America is fully williing too agree to all of this, and I wouldn't blame them.  I don't understand why we cant just vote directly for the president ourselves! I mean after all, he is going too be our leader. I just would never put that type of a big decision in somebody else's hands who I don't even know at all, and especially if I know its not completely certain that whomever I had put my vote in for is at a 50/50 chance of winnning as it is.\n\nIf there is already an apparent list of five reasons all about retaining the Electoral College because of its democratic pedigree, just is another reason as too why I'm against this kind of voting system. With having the first reason listed as being \"Certainty of Outcome\" should really make the person reading that question themselves on if they're making a right decision or not. You would have too go through a lot of trouble and paperwork as it is whenever voting for someone, At least I would like too know that I'm not basically giving my one vote away for technically someone else to do it for me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter important part lifeThe best way pass time laughing friends family Think back fun times ve ll find laughing That s laughter fun go hand hand Everyone likes fun therefor everyone likes laugh Laughing good many ways keeps happy helps maintain healthy relationships others relieves stress Also lot people laugh nervous I m one people Especially re put awkward situation Like speech front class I remember first speech high school s one scariest things I ve done It year I slouched chair tried get low possible teacher could nt see I would nt make eye contact either I put back pack front order block view Every time d look around room pick another person go I d hold breath hope nt Every time nt I would breath relief Finally getting people I knew doom would soon await I decided take chance peek back pack see teacher looking next victim What I saw I looked eyes meet mine I tried hind behind back pack late She already started call name What I I thought Should I tell I m ready Should I try get I wiped sweaty palms blue jeansThen I stood started walk toward front room I could feel nervous knot building stomach With note card hand I began speak My words quiet shaky My speech uniforms school I agreed As I went I could feel start trip words Then I started laugh I always I m nervous I could hear people room start snicker I smiled looked note card continued speech After wards I felt big relief get It nt perfect laughing I messed helped get without falling apart nervous Although everyone reacts way laughing help relieve tension situationsBut always careful laugh situations s appropriate It s good constant stress Finding things laugh good way relieve stress Laughing might right behavior get A speech help keep together make Laughter important everyone It s good way fun others keeps happy Laughing good way relieve stress Your relationships grow stronger find things common laugh If learn laugh re sure fun happy life I know I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is not what it used to be, its not the most effecent way anymore. The people should decide this time, I am not saying get rid of it. But we should change it.\n\nThere are many people who agree with me. Over sixty percent of the vters would like a more direct system of voteing (according to a Gallup poll in 2000). And so did Ritchard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, The U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and AFL-CIO.\n\nThe main reason why people want a change is for all the qurks in the Electoral College system. For example, if you lived in Texas. And you wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electoers. Witch in most cases would be O.K., but they could betray the party and vote for whom they please. It doesn't always happen but the possibility is real.  And people, like the segregationists back in 1960, could have gone agenst their party and pick electors to go agenst Kennedy.\n\nAll we want is a change, it deosn't have to rewrite the Constitision. But the Electoral College must go. We can make it happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that Earth had a twin? Well not exactly a twin, but a planet that is very close to Earth in terms of it's density and size. That planet happens to be\n\nVenus. Since the planet is very identical to earth, we are all going to want to explore it. Exploring and studying Venus comes at a cost though, it is a worthy pursuit despite the presentation of it's dangers.\n\nVenus is a planet in our solar system. It is referred as the \"Evening Star,\" as its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. It is the second planet from our sun. Many people confuse Venus with being a star, because of its nickname. trying to examine Venus more closely then of the safe vantage point of Earth, can be very challenging despite it being simple to see from the distance.\n\nWe are all closer to Mars than Venus sometimes due to the speed changes at which they orbit the Sun by. Us humans send a variety of spacecrafts to the cloud-draped world for it to land on. No spacecraft has survived the landing for a couple hours. This means that all the previous missions to mars were all unmanned. All of these failed missions have explained why Venus hasnt been touched in more than three decades by a single spaceship.\n\nAs you can tell Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study because of its reputation. The atmosphere of Venus is very thick as 97 percent Carbon Dioxide covers all of it. The planet's tempatures on the surface average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is greater than what we experience on Earth by 90, all of these conditions are way more extreme than what we experience on Earth. Trying to visit Venus would completly liquefy and melt any spacecraft near it.\n\nMany scientist are trying to explore this planet despite its inhospital conditions because it is very identical to Earth. It used to be one of the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, Which facsinated many Astronomers. Venus was probably covered by many bodies of water and forms of life could have been supported, just like Earth. The planet now has a rocky surface with many valley's, mountains, and craters that makes astronomers itch to further expore it. Despite it's very hard conditions to even get near the planet.\n\nVenus is a very cool planet. As it is very Dangerous to further study and explore,It is all worth it in the long run. The planet has very many earth-like qualities. So it would be smart to see if there was any signs of life. Venus is worth all the dangers because its a worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nMy letter is in regards to changing the election to popular vote for the president of the United States. I believe that we, the people, should have the opportunity to choose whom we wish to become President.\n\nThe reason why people go out to vote, is because they have a specific person in mind. Although throughout election time, many people are brought to different conclusions that one candidate is better then the other, or they both have their flaws yet, they strongly represent one thing the other candidate dispises. Either way, there are those types of people who just cannot decide. They may be left undecided, and have changed their minds by the time it's ready to vote. It's a big deal for people to go out and take action. So what would make the electoral college change one view of voting? Its the fact that we aren't really voting for our president. We are voting for our electors of the state, to vote for our president. And on top of that, there are still many people out there who don't have a clue that their actually voting for someone in our state to decide for us. Although the electoral college does help make the presidential election less complicated, it's the mere fact that WE aren't making much of a difference.\n\nThe electoral college doesn't only have a few minor set backs, but it could tarnish out dreams of who we wanted to be president by way more than we could've expected. When it comes to voting for electors, its a difficult thing when it comes to how many electors represent which political party. Democrat, or Republican. Say one wanted the one candidate running for president to win, and he/she were Republican. That person would go out and cast a vote for a slate of however many of republican electors there are for that state. The part that gets a lot of people is that there could be fewer Republican electors then there are Democrat electors. Say one still wanted the Republican candidate to win and they voted in their residential state which was Nevada. IF Nevada had 4 Republican electors then that meant anyone who voted for the Democrat electoral wasn't chipping in much to the election. In the end, all the electors votes are counted for each side, and because Nevada had only two dedicated Democrats, the chances of the Democrat candidate having less electoral votes then the Republican candidate, has increased. If this problem happenes for several other states, then the chances double, even triple.\n\nIf this doesn't make you think that the electoral college should go, then think again. The electoral college is definitely unfair to voters. Any chance of unfaithful electors, could happen. It could make one feel betrayed that they voted foe a specific elector to do one job. Which was to help select the president the voter wanted. Whats the point in putting your trust in someone who could just easily turn around and NOT vote who you wanted? There is no point. But that's what we're doing when we vote. We are making it an option for that to happen. So why not vote by popular vote? Why not avoid all the issues the electoral college can cause for us? We should be lucky that back in '00, that was the biggest election crisis and it COULD'VE been worse.\n\nIn conclusion, we the people, should have the opportunity to vote and actually have our vote counted. Because every state doesnt't have the sam eamount of people in each, the chances of there being a tie in the presidential election, is slightly unlikely. Other then there being a tie in the nationwide electoral vote because the votes add up tp 538; an even number. We shouldn;t put ourselves through this, and truth be told, the election is confusing as it is. I say, we should get rid of the electoral college. It's not needed, and a pain.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is extremly valuable. The Facial Action Coding System could help detect when a student is bored or confused. It can help the teacher to decide how to help the students. The system can make things easier for the students to understand. The Facil Action Coding System could help most likely help all students.\n\nWhen students aren't understanding the lesson that is being taught on the computer,the system can recongize the students facil expressions and see that the student is confused and the system can notify the teacher to help the student. Also when students are bored or falling asleep it can notify the teacher to get the students attention or wake the student up. The Facil Action Coding System can see certain things that the teacher can't see. If a teacher asks the class if they understand a topic and a student says yes ,but they\n\nreally don't understand the teacher would most likely not see that the student doesn't understand. The Facil Action Coding would see it though and notify the teacher.\n\nIn conclusion the Facil Action Coding would be very helpful to the students and teachers. It can help students if they are confused or bored. The system can help teachers understand what the students are struggling with . It can help tell if students are lying about if they underdstand the topic or not. The Facil Action Coding Systems can be benefit everyone in a school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created memoir could happiness gratefulness love The author describes memoir parents left country Cuba give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country love CAPS The author express gratefulness saying grateful culture sacrifice parents CAPS To conclude author also express feelings house use live learn real definition family really happy welcomes parents use refugees arrival country At end author says I never forget parents turned simple house home CAPS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by giving us reseans on how it could be Earth like. The text says \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The text also says \" The plant has a rocky surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This shows that Venus may be Earths sister plant like plant.\n\nThe author also supports his idea by giving us facts oliving on it. The text says \" At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" The text also syas \" Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable.\" This shows that we can still on Venus.\n\nThis is why I think the author supported his idea with great infromation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Becoming a seagoing cowboy means that you would take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that are being shipped overseas to other countries that need to recover their animals from World War II. It may sound like a lot of work but is can be very rewarding. On my many trips as a seagoing cowboy, I was able to spend a lot of my time with friends and was able to do some sightseeing in other countries. I was also able to learn a lot about animals just from taking care of them. I hope that you choose to become a seagoing cowboy.\n\nOne reason for becoming a seagoing cowboy would be that you would learn a lot about animals. I was able to learn a lot of body language from the animals. I now know when an animal is nervous or angry. I can tell when a horse is calm and happy. Knowing animal body language may help you not get a broken bone from being kicked by an angry horse or cow. You will also learn how to take care of the animals. I already knew how to take care of some of the animals from working on my aunt's farm, but I learned how to care for animals a lot faster from doing it hundreds of times everyday.\n\nAnother reason that was fun about becoming a seagoing cowboy was that I was able to spend a lot of time with my friends on the trip back to America. All of my friends and I loved playing sports, like volleyball and table-tennis, in the empty holds where we kept the animals. We also shared stories and games that some of us had never even heard of. I learned many fun stories and games that I now pass on to others today.\n\nMy last reason to convince you to become a seagoing cowboy would be the sightseeing. While we were in another country, we had some time to go sightseeing. I was able to tour an excavated castle in Crete. I took a gondala ride in Italy and saw the Panama Canal. I also learned a lot about culture. I learned how bad things can be in other countries after wars. It made me more aware of the people and their needs in other countries.\n\nI loved the opportunity to become a seagoing cowboy, even if it was for a short period of time. I was able to learn animal body language and more about how to take care of the animals. I was able to see many great things like the castle in Crete and the Panama Canal. I also learned about culture in many other countries and some of the hardships of living there. The trips made me more aware of the hardships every person in other countries face every, single day of their lives. I hope that all of these reasons convinced you to become a seagoing cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom the right thing to do? What does this type of technology help other students on? Can it help people comunicate with others in the world? Is forcing a fake smile a good thing or bad.\n\nFirst, using the \"Facial Action Coding System\" to read students emotions during class is good because it can let the teacher know how they feel. For an example, if a student was taking a test or a quiz online and was slacking off or getting tired, the computer would switch the questions up until they find the right questions to ask when the student face expression chamges. While doing that, it helps them stay on track and not get bored that easily. The system recognize emotion by the every muscles on your face. This new envention even figured out how Mona Liza was feeling by just technology.\n\nNext, can it help comunicate better in the real life world? By using this new Facial Action Coding System, Students can now study what kind of emotions are shown when talking to other people. What I trying to say is that, they can find out when they are fake smiling,laughing, or even interested in the conversation. One example on fake smiling is that is you can see the bottom and upper teeth at the same time, they are really not smiling but just smiling to not make anything wierd. If someone that you are taking with is not interested on the topic guys are talking about, you can notice by simpily looking into their eyes and if they are just looking anywhere besides making eye contact, they are not even paying attention to you.\n\nFinally, making a fake smile, is that a good thing? According to the Facial Feedback, moving your face muscles to smiling not only expresses emotions, but they also helps your facial muscles produce them. By even smiling actually makes you happy. To me, being happy is the best, why not to other people. A drama coach by the name of Constantin Stanislavsky, made mostly all his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning to create their emotions on stage. Feeling someone else's emotion stage may happen because we are not used to seeing that.\n\nBy using technology to see how stuents are, is that the good thing to do or bad? Does this type of technology help students. Can the Facial Action Coding System help people comunicate with others in the world? Can fake smiling help people around the world?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think aliens exsists? Do you not think that the Face is not natural landform? Do you have evidence? I don't think you do. You may have heard otherwise, but you're mostly not right. You need a claim about aliens, about how the Face is a natural landform, and evidence for your statement. Let's look at some stuff shall we.\n\nSo I have some claims about aliens. I don't think aliens are real. If they are I don't think they are smart enough to build the Face on the Red Planet. I also don't think they would be near the Red Planet. They don't live on the Red Planet so it might've been hard to find a way to get from whever they are to the Red Planet. Aliens probably didn't have a full set of fingers to build the Face. They also probably would be floating everywhere because there isn't any gravity to hold them down.\n\nThe Face is a natural landfrom. If anything were to be on the Red Planet the marks would be there. There isn't any markes left. I quote the evidence \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" Nothing was there, but skeptics thought otherwise, \"Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\"\n\nI have some evidence for my statement. I quote from the story \"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept.\" They probably did this to 1.) see it better and show it to everyone and 2.) prove that alens didn't create it. \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This shows that aliens could not have been on the Red Planet to make the Face. \"Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\" People still think aliens were there just their markings were hidden by haze, but I think other people like me believe that they weren't there.\n\nDo you still believe in aliens now? Yeah they could be real, but it is highly unlikely. Do you still think that the Face is not a natural landform? Just remember\n\nto think about the claims and evidence against. Who do you belive now yourself or the other people?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Trying to detect someones emotions is like playing the game \"Clue\", it's a mystery and very hard to figure out. But what if there was a software that allowed a chance to put the individual infront of a camera and the thought of guessing was no longer an option, because all the answers are sitting on the screen? Professor Thomas Huang from Beckman Institute has created such a software, a software that has the ability to calculate someone's emotions much like in math class. This new software can open doors for the future, and give us new advancements in the classroom, but could it be an end to simply asking if some is okay? Could this be the end to emotional privacy, or simply emotions?\n\nThe new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has many promising attributes and the ability to open new doors for technology and learning environements in the future. It being able to calculate emotions as easily as math problems, could help us decode a lot of the mystery that is the human mind. The process starts wiht a 3-D computer model of the face, and contains information of all the 44 major muscles in a human face and with the help of psychologists, it can classify six emotions and associate them with movements of facial muscles. This type of technology has the ability to be used in a classroom to watch when a student is getting bored or tired to help the teacher better themselves when teaching. Or maybe even help in real world situations when someone goes in front of a jury, or even during interviews for a job. But how accurate is this new software, and how do we know we can rely on it?\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is seemly flawless with many positive outlooks on what is instore for us in the futrue, but has two big questions sitting on its shoulders. How can we rely on this system? And how do we know that this is even an accurate reading? When thinking about someones emotions, one thinks of the individuals emotions as diverse and extremely different from everyone elses. So how can this software accurately read individual emotions around the world? Dr. Huang says \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\", he firmly believes that his new software can identify the most mixed emotions with the use of video imagery and emotion recognition. This however, still does not provide us with a good example of how we can be sure that this is a reliable way to read someones emotions and could potetially ruin human socialization and emotions toward one another.\n\nWhile this new software may seem like the \"next big thing\", there are many ways that this could potentially ruin the human race. Society right now is circling around the phone, it is how we communicate, have a social life, and figure things out. It is in our way of life and we have adapted to the idea of constantly having a phone at our beck and call. So why not add in another way of relying on technology, but this one can help us figure out someones emotions, since simply asking \"Are you okay?\" is too hard and time consuming. Why not just stick them in front of a camera to have it tell them how they are feeling instead of trying to listen to how they feel and talking with one another. This new Facial Action Coding System has the ability to open many new doors, but it could close the door for human socialization.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is an advancement in technology and has the abilities to open and grow our future. It had the ability to help out in classroom environments and give more support during other real life situations. But with it can come the destruction of human socialization and emotions and make a total mess of how we interact with each other. While trying to figure out someones emotions is very difficult and challenging, it may be better to stick with such ways rather than completly giving up what makes us human and causing a catastrophe in the human world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The boy who ride wave paragraph is mostly about a boy named luke Bomber.\n\nwhen he got his graduation depolma and he had two part time jobs in a grocery and a bank. His friend Don reis asked him if he wanted go to with him on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't pass it up it was a lifetime opportunity. In world war two was over 44 nations came together and made the UNRRA and they started hiring seagoing cowboys.\n\nThey sailed on a ship for two weeks to ship to bring animals Luke was mostly busy by feeding animals but when he didn't have anything to do he boxed,Table tennis,read books and whittled. Luke was 18 when he got to Greece and he got draft. Then they told him to keep doing what he is doing for his service and he was climbing a ladder and feel off and broke his ribs. He didn't have to go to work for a few days he also visited China,Europe,Venice,Italy and he tour a castle in Crete. Also he toured The Panama Canal.\n\nLuke also cross the Atlantic ocean sixteen times and he crossed the pacific twice! When luke was young he would help out on his aunt Katie's farm to prepare him for hard work. Seagoing cow boys were more then a adventure for Luke he said himself.\"It made me aware of people of other countries and there needs. It opened up the world to him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming in the near future. There is debate for whether or not we should allow them on the public roads. People say that driverless cars are perfectly safe and that it can save the amouont of gas used currently by a lot. I think that we should allow driverless cars because they can reduce the amount of driving related accidents, car companies are already planning to release them to public consumers on specific times, and we can reduce the amount of gas used.\n\nDriverless cars can reduce the amount of car accidents and reckless drivers. The driverless cars use sensors so it makes it safe for the drivers. Sensors are already being used on cars, for example, the Toyota Prius uses sensors on the left rear wheel,a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, and more sensors. The sensors are very advanced so they can detect and respond to danger faster than a human. The sensors can tell the car to apply brakes with a better response time and control than a human could possibly do. Sensors are only getting more advanced so it can only get safer in the future, and it is perfectly safe to use them on driverless cars. Some people may say that it is possible that a sensor fails to work or technology can get messed up, but the chance is rare and it would cause far less car accidents than if a human had full control over the wheel. The smart cars still allow control from the human and the car alerts the human if they and the car are in danger, so if something were to happen, the human could take control and try to stop it. The car still allows people to steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. The Google car announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. GM made driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. Google has been testing driverless cars since 2009. Some companies are also considering using cameras to watch the drivers to make sure that they are alert and paying attention in case something happens where the human would need to take control. There has been over half a million miles on them and no crashes so far so it is perfectly safe to the consumer to use.\n\nThe driverless cars can also be used to reduce the amount of gas used today by a lot. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, said that the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. People spend a lot of money on gas and it is expensive so if we can reduce that amount by half, then people can use that money they're saving on more important things and can possibly improve our economy.\n\nCompanies are already planning for the future. Car companies are making driverless cars and have set dates to when they will be available to consumers. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan for the release of driverless cars by 2020.\n\nDriverless cars are in the future and companies have already planned for them, they are perfectly safe, and they can reduce the amount of spending money on gas. Driverless cars can do way more than they can do bad, and the bad is no worse than what is going on now so we should get ready for driverless cars in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's world, obesity is becoming a big problem in many parts of the world. Recently, the number of obsessed people is increasing so fast that some suggest that, the main culprits like fast food and unhealthy food, needed to be taxed to discourage people from consuming too much. This essay will try to argue that increasing the price of junk food will not help people fight this obesity crisis.\r\n\r\nIn human history, obesity was never run rampant like this before. The obesity pandemic is a very modern problem, in the past, it is very hard to find poor people who were overweight in contrast to the present where most of the obsessed people come from low-income households. The main cause of this is that most of the time the only food these low-income people can afford is either low-quality and low-price fast food or heavily processed food that has low nutrition but high sugar and fat to compensate for the low-quality ingredient used to keep the price low. By levying the tax on junk food industries it will, in reality, make the problem much worse than it already is. If junk food increases in price then it will force people who can bearly afford to consume this already low-quality product to find the even lower-quality alternative.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, rather than put a tax on low-quality food it is better to spend money subsidizing or cutting taxes on healthy food options. If the root cause of obesity comes from overconsumption of low-quality consumption goods then the solution is to change the consumer choice. Since food is an essential part of life it is impossible to tell people to eat less expressly to those low-income who bearly scrape by even with low-cost fast food. Giving some incentives, like lowering taxes on healthier option products or subsidizing high-quality unprocessed ingredients, to fast food chains and food manufacturers to produce healthier products for the same price as the unhealthy product can help solve the overweight problem in the lower class who the most susceptible to the obesity pandemic.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion . For many people being obsessed didn't come from their personal choice but the lack of choices that cause them to resort to fattening food for sustenance. By giving those people a healthier affordable option, it will help them much more in the long term than to just increasing the prices of junk food which is their only option for food. And that is why I strongly disagree with increasing fast food prices as a solution to the obesity problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The last paragraph story When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again I think author concluded story paragraph show adapting starting accept change I think throughout story upset really liking change And warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng broke wept The text says This last paragraph seems optimistic talking flower blooming geese returning seems like starting accept change In opinion author added paragraph finish story show Saeng starting accept change optimistic", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. I agree with the author that scientists should study Venus. I will be giving three reasons that supoort why they should study more about Venus.\n\nMy first reason that supports my claim is that it's a good idea for scientits to study more about Venus because in the text it says, \"often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" because they say that Venus is like Earth's \"twin\" it would be nice to get to know more about Venus and how they are alike, what things that have the same and different.\n\nBut I also think it's a bad idea to send people to Venus and study more about it. It's a diffuclt task since the text says, \" on the plant's surface, temperatures avergae over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" Venus has the hottest surface temperature, so it would be hard for people to even stand that. In the text it also says that it's been more than three decades since a spaceship has landed on Venus. Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\n\nOn the other hand, I still think it would be a good idea to keep studying more about Venus. But to keep people safe, they should invent things that they can use so they can land on Venus without any danger. For example if NASA's wants to send people they should find ways where they can walk in Venus but keep the people safe. Since the text says, \" researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" because of their saftey. However researchers are finding ways to innovations that would allow their machines to last long enough to contribute.\n\nIn my conclusion, I think it's a good idea to study more about Venus since it's next to Earth. And so they can study more about it and find ways to make it stay for us humans to be there, if anything happens in the future. We can always go to Venus to live but only if they find ways were we can stay alive there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The limiting of cars in the world and commuinities sounds terrible but in a way its not all that bad for one reason it helps reduce smog in the area, people get more physical activity by walking and by cleaning up the city new business will come to the twon/city you live in people drive there cars everywhere they go, to the store , the mall, out to eat even if its in walkinng distance people relay on there car to get them where they need to go and this is a big problum because its creating unheathy smog in the environment that people and animals live in and by relaying on cars to get them where they need to go the people are only making the situation even worse then its becoming. Smog is like a poison fog created by cars and things of that nature and is put into the atmosphere for people to breath into there lungs and is but into there body just beacuse they \"need\" to drive where they \"have\"to go in such a hurry.\n\nwhen you remove cars for an extended period of time or just the day people are forced into physical activity to relay on when they have to go places like the store, the mall, out to eat ect. its good for people just to get out and exercise instead of someone saying im going to the drug store that is a 5 min walk down the road. now its alot more reasonable if the place your going in like 5 miles from where you live then yes drive but if is 5 min walk just walk its not going to kill you. even if its just biking up the road to get the mail it still beats driving for no reason on somthing you could walk/bike to get.\n\nIf you remove cars once a week, evan once a year you could clean up the town/city you live in to bring new business to the town you live in and new busnisses means new jobs so that an econome increases in the town because it been cleaned up and new busniess has be created in your town.\n\nin these three paraghaphs ive given three great reasons why imiting cars is a great advantage and help the small towns to big cities around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" The author explains why it would be a good idea to explore our neighboring planet of Venus. Despite all of the possible problems that can easily arise, the author claims it is a worthy pursuit. From evaluating the article personally, I believe the author supported his argument very well with even being able to counterargue many counterclaims by stating different innovations and different ideas that can make travelling to the \"Evening Star\" a reality.\n\nThe author claims it is important to study Venus due to it's striking similarities to Earth. The author states in paragraph 4 that scientists believe that Venus was once the most similar planet to Earth, once believed to probably be covered in oceans and probably even supported life. Even today, it is speculated that Venus has many land masses like ours such as mountains, valleys, and craters. The author also states in paragraph 4 that Venus can easily be our nearest option for a planetary visit considering how close it is.\n\nAlthough, the horrible conditions of the planet have not allowed any human made spacecrafts to land on Venus for more than a few hours before being either torn apart or simply returning. However, after this claim from paragraph 5, the author uses support from NASA to state how humans could still visit the planet, however, will have to only hover over it about 30 miles into the atmosphere to avoid getting into serious danger. The author claims that although these still are not perfect conditions, they will be suitable for humans to survive in. The author then goes on to compell the arguement that they would not be able to collect any samples or even photo or videograpghy due to it being dangerous or ineffective. He therefore states in paragraph 6 that if scientists are seeking to conduct a thorough mission, that they need to get up close and personal with the planet.\n\nThe author also states in paragraph 6 as well how many scientists take Venus as a challenge and are actually coming up with different innovations in order to tackle Venus' tough environment with a surface that can reach up to 800°F and the immense 90 times greater pressure than Earth. These technologies include mechanical parts like found in the first computer had in order to be more resistant to heat and pressure being made from silicon carbide, which when tested in a chamber that simulated Venus conditions, survived a staggering 3 weeks.\n\nLater, in paragraph 8, the author states that being presented a challenge to get to Venus has value. \"Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endeavors,\" the author states in paragraph 8. The author claims that if we are able to tackle an astonashing feat such as Venus who is our neighboring planet, then we have unlocked the key to tackling many greater challenges.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe the author supports his claims very well due to him being able to understand the dangers of the challenge. However, the author then was able to find different supporting facts and innovations that can make a trip to Venus by man possible and seem more appealing nevertheless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes this technology to read emotional facial expressions of students in the classroom or in the school period. This can help better the schools safety and help students.\n\nThis technology can be beneficial to the teachers in the classroom.¨ A classroom computer could recognize when the student is becoming confused or bored¨. This device can help teachers check is a student is confused or doesnt know how to complete the assignment that they have to work on and complete. This device can also scan to see if the student is tired and the teachers can get the student to stand, help around the classroom or do an activity to prevent the student from sleeping. The emotion scanner can detect if the students are bored and the teacher can change the assignment needs to be done so the students can enjoy doing the assignment and not be bored in class.\n\nThis technology can help the students either make friends or get the friend help. The article says ¨ It´s all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one¨. This can help the student make new friends if they are new to the school and needs to make friends they can use the device to check if the person they are trying to talk to is interested in being friends or is just faking his smile to make you think one way. Another way this device is useful in a classroom is it can scan and see if the student is feeling sick and needs medical attention or if the student is feeling upset and needs to step out of class to get himself/herself together and ready for class.\n\nThis tech can also be used to see if the student is telling the truth. Nick D´Alto says in this article that ¨ By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions(nasnin da Vinci´s masterpiece¨. This can be used to check if the student had stole an item in the class and is lying about not having the stolen item. The teacher can also check to see if the student is telling the truth about missing assignment,attendance and having their needed items for the specific class.\n\nThis is why this technology would be useful in a classroom or in the school building.The administrators can check and scan the student to see is he/she is planning to harm a student or the school. This can help keep the school and it´s students safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"-article says that venus have the same size and shape.They call the Venus as Earth's twin.Venus and Earth is neighbor.The Venus is dangerous because Venus have Eight times more temperature than Earth,90 times greater atmosphere and the surface is rock solid.\n\nThe Venus temperature is high because of volcano's and the surface is not cooling down.When volcano\"s blast,the temperature gets more hotter and hotter.97 percent carbon dioxide and only 3 percent of oxygen and other air quilties.Anything that touches the surface will melt because the temperature is 800 degrees fahrenheit.There is sea lots of seas in the venus but the temperature is so high that the water is boiling and scientist's if we wear a fire suit on venus,it will not work beacuse the fire suits can only hold 600 degrees fahrenheit.Scientist are desinging a vehical that can fly above the surface of venus.They are discovering this because scientist can go to venus discover new things and explore more in venus planet.Scientist said that in 1800s the things was used in can survive the venus's temperture.In venus the air pressure is so high that a airplane can't fly in venus.The spacecraft cannot survive because the temperture will not be okay,it will melt and the air pressure so high that spacecraft cannot go fast.The danger of venus is surface,air,heat and atmosphere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Highly motivated youngster were in a hot debate whether to go for higher studies or Job after completing school. While many people do their higher studies to enhance career, many still tend to prefer job immediately after school. This essay will discuss why getting job after school has its benefits but why studying at university is ultimately superior.\n\n\nMany individuals count on to work after high school. Privatization of colleges is the main reason behind this as their tuition fees are too high, which many cannot afford. For instance a well know university in Australia and Canada has an annual tuition fees of 100,000 USD plus other charges. Being able to work after school saves unnecessary spending on higher studies not only this but also they will gain life experiences and independence.\n \nBut not everyone faces the same situation and can afford paying huge amount for higher studies which many individuals think is better way for wealthy career. Many of these individual have good highly educated and financial background. For instance a good job title and an handsome salary is only possible after completing higher studies.it goes without saying that higher studies despite being costly is a quicker way to achieve higher goals.\n\nThis essay discussed why studying at university is ultimately superior to enhance career but why starting a job immediately after school is merely a matter of compulsion. In my opinion having higher studies not only gives you better career growth but also a good life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you join the seagoing cowboys progam you could see new things and visit new places. When I did the progam I seen so many things.This progam allowed me to see the world around me differntly. I got to see many beautiful buildins and statues.\n\nThe progam allowed me to see hao WW2 affected other people on earth. It felt good that I got to hel other while learning new things. I got to help livestock\n\n\" When my draft board learned that i was on a cattle-boat trip they told me keep doing waht i was doing.\"\n\nI had the enefit of seeing Greece and China.But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\n\nThere were also many fun times on board.Durning return trips after dropping the animals off. We would play things like baseball,vollyball and bossing to past our time after unloading theanimals.Table-tennis tournaments,fencing,reading and whittling and other games helped us pass time.\n\nThis progam helped me much more it opened up the world to me.It made me aware of people opf other countries and there needs.That awerness stayed will stay with me for my whole lie. This lead my family to hosting a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years to come.\n\nIn conclusion, joinig this program hepled me see new. I had fun with the people i met during the program. I learned alot of new things during program in wouldn't have learned if in didn't join thye program.I learned how WW2 affected different people on earth. Looking back on this makes me happy that\n\nmy friend asked me to join the program with him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today businesses make every effort to generate more income, perhaps by advertising or getting advice from business consultants. Apparently they are merely focused on the financial aspect of their businesses and have forgotten about the social impacts of their activities. Having access to cutting-edge advancements in social sciences and humanities, businesses seem to be more liable for their activities.\r\n\r\nConsider a lingerie selling shop with a huge explicit picture of a graceful woman hanging on it's wall. You and your kids are taking a walk on the street and your kid might stare at the picture, but what comes to his or her mind? Explicit contents on business advertisements might draw younger generation’s attention too much and affect their moral and ethical standards which is likely to have a negative effect on their behaviour towards the opposite sex. As human beings, irrespective of being business owners, we are responsible to guarantee a highly acceptable level of moral security for our youngsters.\r\n\r\nImagine a chunky little boy coming back home from school. Every day on his way, he sees a gigantic billboard advertising a mouth-watering sandwich. Restaurant owners and fast food sellers, either deliberately or unintentionally, are encouraging our kids and children to eat more and more unhealthy food. But have we ever reflected on the adverse effects of having this trend continued for years and even decades? Our societies will definitely confront a variety of illnesses for decades to come and we will face a surge in illnesses like hypertension, diabetes and heart attack. \r\n\r\nAs these two examples suggest, businesses have a great effect on our societies nowadays. They are closely tied to many aspects of our lives today, from moral, ethical and health concerns to educational, political and many others. In my opinion, governments, business owners and all individuals have to think of rules and regulations, either legally or even morally, to maintain an efficient and productive society for people to live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During construction Empire State Building several obstacles builders faced dirigibles able dock Empire State Building The first obstacle builders faced figuring modify strengthen steel frame Empire State building accommodate mooring mast top building These modifications would cost sixty thousand dollars lot money back Once builders finished framing entire building greatest obstacle constructing mooring mast came This obstacle nature violent air currents would back blimps swivel around around mast The blimp would need weights hold steady weights would hanging people street neither practical safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affects cyclist manyway The hills long Every town fear appert rodes rought The heat also affectes He affected health wise", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I have to say, thats some pretty cool stuff, tecnology that reads your facial expressions to state your emotions, Awesome! I think this is a very useful tool for classrooms. Lets say I'm in chemistry, and I know everything my teacher is explaining, what's going to happen? I'm going to get bored, right? So this would be an exellent tool to use in classrooms, to make the lesson more interesting, and try to get me to be involved. Let me give you another example. It's history, I'm running on 4 hours of sleep because I had so much homework to do lastnight and on top of that, my familiy and I had to go to a last minute family thing, and we have a test today. I'm either A: going to fall asleep, or B: misserably fail the test. It would be great if the machine could see I'm tired and we all get 20 extra minutes to study before the test. So in conclusion this technology sounds really interesting and really cool, I am personaly all for the facial recignition technology of the future. This would be a great tool for teachers, who can't get students to focus, and parents, who can't get their children to tell them what's wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir born place heritage family live close decision move As states home one lived child paragraph Narciso says always greatful parents love sacrifice It took lot move glad house Cuba first birthday warmth kitchin humble house found definition family says I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do like I like Maybe maybe What offensive compared varies ends Why Everyone point view You agree others care There many includes religious beliefs independence experimenting Religious beliefs important would agree Certain material world maybe offensive kind Such gay rights This apply everyone else accepting For ones accept tell open minded Unlike rebels going state mind I believe important go along religious beliefs Independence assume already Whether music movies magazines etc offensive others effects Why It know right wrong So non sense things caught attention Should take control get rid No It bother You take independent Experimenting self contained As simple It likey people arewere influence I siutation I m known crazy child family My dad would always lecture careful I hang I m As teenager I let words pass I always youngest people I hung Was I ever influence Yes Did I ever get hurt No I say I experimented life Does hurt observe experiment bad It usually varies Religious beliefs disrespectful To independence one control Experimenting choice What offensive I state mind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author wants to study Venus and other people agree we should. Studying new things are awesome and interesting. It can thake up to many years to learn a new planet. People are trying to find out if there's more life out there. Is it possible to live a different planet without any problems?\n\nThe people who are studying Venus have to learn the dangers of the planet. They should also learn the temperature and the seasons. Study if there's water for survival and are able to plant or make food there. The most important thing of all is to study is there oxygen to breath.\n\nDiscovering new planet is a challenge and time. It could take forever to send a robot to the planet. The research also takes time to know and what it is. They can also discover new never seen before stuff. Overall time will be a big role for this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is not really know planet and all we know about Venus is that there are some dangers because no space craft has survived more than just a few hours. Not a single space craft has landed on Venus in more than three decades! A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\n\nOn the planets surface, temputures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than wht we experience here on earth. Venus has the hottest surface of any planet in our solar system. Venious geolgy and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes.\n\nAstronomers are so interested in Venus because long ago Venus was litrially just like the earth that we live on now! Long ago Venus held oceans and probably could support various life forms, just like earth. Many researchers are working on innovitions that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningful to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nSo in the end we will someday get to go onto Venus to learn all sorts of things about that we don't yet know it may not be soon but it will happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther suggedts that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. I agree with the author, studying Venus could be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presests. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot, and the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. \"Venus, sometimes called the 'Evening Star', is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot\"(Paragraph 1).\"Often referred to as Earth's 'twin', Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distant\"(Paragraph 2). However, I think studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. I have couple reasons why I think studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nFirst of all, about 97 percent of a thick atmosphere blankets Venus are carbon dioxide. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is working on study about the planet, Venus. If NASA is possible to make spacecraft that could go to land on the surface of Venus, it will be difficult people research on the planet because 97 percent of the atmosphere are carbon dioxide. This condition makes different envionment from Earth.\"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\"(Paragraph 3).\n\nSecondly, the average temperatures of Venus is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\"(Paragraph 3). It is not possible that people stay on Venus on this very high temperature.\n\nFinally, the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what they experience on Earth.\"the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\"(Paragraph 3). For example, if a person's weight is 70kg, the weight will chage t o 630kg on Venus. It is difficult to work on researching on enus.\n\nIn addition, beyond high pressure and hean, Venusian geography and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. \"Beyond high pressure and hean, Venusian geography and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\"(Paragraph 3).\n\nTherefore, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density nd size, and occasionally the closest in distance. However, because of some reasons that I mensioned above, studing Venus could be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some countryes do not have the right for vote for who they whant to be president, and the candidate who gets to be the president takes the freedom and security of any person who oppose to him.\n\nIt is not fair that something like that could star to thake place in the United States. This country is for the ones that are looking for freedom to have the right to argue their way of thinkind and express, in a good way.\n\nWe have the right to know the candidate's potential, knowledge, way of thinking, how he will governate the United States, hir goal for this country, his expectatives, and if he is able to be a leader. Because if we do not have the right to vote, our way of thinking and our rights is not important. The country depends on the persons who live in there, too. There has to be an agreeement  between the citizens, because there has to be a leader who can be able to defend the country and citizens.\n\nThe Electoral Collage does not has a democratic method of selectiong a president, and if there is a tie in electoral vote, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives , where state delegations vote on the president and the Senate would choose the vide-president.\n\nThe Electoral Collage is unfair to voters, outdated, and irrational. The disaster factor was the biggest election crisis, and considerinf that the state legislatures are are responsable for picking the electors.\n\nThe Electoral Collage method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\n\nThe people needs that the president can have the potential to carry the state.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars in my opinion is a little off the charts due to the fact many things can happen. The author states that\n\n\" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufactureer?\" And the Author states that;\n\n\"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Driverless cars is a bad idea.\n\nDriverless cars are off the chart because some states such as : California, Nevada, Florida , and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars. Now thats nowhere near half the country. If driverlsess cars do go on there will need to be more laws and regulations. Driverless cars are off the chart for many ways and reasons.\n\nThe author states that \" If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer? I personally think it would be the manufactuers fault for 1, making the product. 2, not knowing all things that can go wrong in accidents. And 3, not being able to help the driver out in sisutations like accidents,or traffic jams. Manufacturers would be in charge do to the fact they made the car and they should know everything that goes with the car both good and bad.\n\nPresently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. This statement I feel is so True because if a human isnt in charge of the car then there are many chances bad stuff will happen. But in reality theres a human behind all the computer work and GPS's . But as a person not driving yet I feel if a car is controlled by computers it can cause and led to many accidents and injuries. So Driverless cars is a bad idea and will aqumilate many accidents and injuries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expresstions of students in a classroom, is not a very possible idea. The factial program is great, and it could help out in may type of things and or other jobs, but it's probably just as it could help, at the same time it wouldn't do much help at all.\n\nThe use of this new technology would do a good, in certain kind of jobs. Such as in a police department, it could be used when interogating suspects. As to having this technology used in school in a classroom a stated in the text \"A classroom computer could recognize\n\nwhen a student is becoming confused or bored...THen it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Yes it could help the student understand but it could so accidently ruin a lesson for the student. I'll explain what I mean by using a senario.\n\nPicture a student in class and this facial action coding system is in the class as well, a lesson is being taught and the students understand with the exception of a couple that are lost and or confused about the lesson. The FACS (Facial Caton Coding System) helps out those students by explaining the lesson in a why the students understand but, there's another student that's frusterated but not about the lesson. The student undestands that lesson, but the reason he's frusterated is about something else, possibly something personal. The FACS will detect the boy's frustrations thinking it's about the lesson, comes to help the student but just frustrates him even more. If it was a regualr human teacher, the teacher would was if the student understood the lesson, as the student tell the teacher that he did the teacher then would ask \"What's wrong\" and if not. At least the teacher would know that it's something else and nothing to do with the lesson being taught.\n\n\"In fact we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday.\" This quote in the beginning of paraghaph five is telling us that, we as humans can do the same task as a computer. What we don't do that the FACS can its detect every single emotion that a person shows as stated in the first paragraph, \" 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". We as human don't measure emotions being showed by percentage like the FACS, we only see the emotion that mostsly being shown. And that's good! If in a classroom while looking at students we see their main emotions, the emotions that stands out the most and not worry about the other emotions that aren't as noticable. It's not that the other emotions are less impartant, it's nothing like that. It's just that the main emotions come first and slowly make our way to the other emotions,\"One step at a\n\ntime\" let's make it one emotion at a time.\n\nA computer, or machine can be better than human depending on the situation. But one thing is for sure, a machine can, and will not be better than a human on detecting emotions. Us having emotions and being able to detects other human emotions is what makes is human. Being able to detect other's emotions and have sympathy, helping other and understanding human emotions is something a machine can't do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]