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"content": "The mood created memoir peaceful loving mood Narciso says room home usually someon staying temporarily could get back feet In Narciso s neighborhood despite customs cultures came together great solidarity friendship",
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"content": "The first and foremost priority for children is to focus on their studies. It is vital for them to spend quality time on their studies and ensure academic success. However, it is often noticed that children find it hard to focus on their studies and tend to move in a different direction. This essay will discuss a few of the root causes and their potential solution. \r\n\r\nOne key motivation for good education is to get a better job and to settle well in life. As a consequence of increasing population and competition, there is a limitation in the number of jobs and hence creating an increasing trend in the unemployment rate. For instance, in the developing world, in spite of getting higher college degrees, students find it hard to earn a deserving job and end up doing ordinary jobs, leaving no value for their hard work. This situation can be mitigated if authorities can oversee the unemployment trend and create more job opportunities for the younger generation matching their skill set. \r\n\r\nMoreover, in the contemporary era, there are a plethora of bad habits that can deviate children from their education. These negative influences are available both online and offline, providing easy access and making kids addicted to it. For example, the teenage is the time when the child starts to feel independent and is attracted to these traps. Society as a whole, must ensure that children are provided guidance in avoiding such materials. There must be stringent regulations in place to avoid easy access to these items by youngsters. \r\n\r\nIn addition, family relationships play a vital role in the upbringing of children. A stable family can stand alongside the youngsters and mentor them. For instance, in broken families, children find it difficult to focus on their studies, as they are more concerned about their safety and stability. Parents and grown-ups in the family must ensure that the young ones are taken care of and the struggles in the family do not have a direct impact on their kid's education. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are several contributing factors impacting kids' education, and this includes employment opportunities, negative influences and family relationships. The role of family and society is critical to building a generation of well-educated individuals.",
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"content": "Are driverless cars in the near future? Driver less cars have been around science 2009 longer if you count Gener Motors smart roads from the 1950's.In hiensight i belive selfdriving cars have been around for a while and will contiue to play an important role in today's world. I belive that they will countinue to play a more effective role in are lives.\n\nI can see a future with driverless cars because i belive that they have many more applications than just simpily being a self driveing car. I can see a future where driverless cars pick up the elederly or the sick which can not drive any more and take them to werever they desier. As is also dipicted by google cofounder Sergey Brin. He dipicks this when he says that he has imagined a fleet of self driving public transportation vesseles.\n\nIn many ways smart cars aremore reliable than human operated motor vechiles. I also belive that there cons to automated cars. I belive that nothing compares to a human drivers experince and knowledge of what the other person may be thinking. Were as with an automitated machine they can only be programed with sanourous. Ther are also case in which a computer can crash and fail just like a lap top causing the inhabitant of the vechile to have to take over sudenely. Like wise a human can fall asleep at the wheel of a regular car and cause major damage. Where as if they were in an autominous car the assist would be able to take control of the vechile and properley pull to the side of the rode.\n\nSelf driving cars have many safety features on theme some of the safety features are even on many military ships such as the cars LIDAR. Which is a radar used to map under water tunels for scuba divers and the navy. Self driving cars have the power of antilock breaks and lane assist. It even has onbrd navstare. Even with the features and many more in some areas of the country it is still ilegal to even test drive self driving cars.\n\nIn many cases i belive that driverless cars are coming in the future weather we would like theme to or not. Which is why i stand with driverless cars. I hold this stance because i amagin a time where counstriction equiement can run its self up and down dangerous areas of path in stead of leaving the dangerous job to humans. Not only do i belive that autonmius cars can save human live but they can also make lifes little chores easier.",
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"content": "In my argument i am going to go for driverles cars, because it will mostlikly be our future. Smart cars have already hit the market; for example, Google has modified The Toyota Prius.You might be thinking how much smarter can cars get well the Toyota Prius is a great example because, they added an extensive list of cool stuff like, video camra's, GPS receiver's, internal motion sensor's,radar sensor's and so many more.\n\nSome people would not even think of buying a driverless car because,it's something very different and not alot of people cope with change that well. Dr. Werner Huber states,\"We have to interpret driving in a fun new way\" that's interesting comomg from a BMV project manager. Charsmatic minds like his make me think of all of the other BMV managers around the world that have a passion for their job like him. It makes me think of the endless possibilities and diverse ideas.\n\nTo oppose and look on the other hand, the law play's a role in this decision as well as the poeple. The driving laws want to keep everyone in and out the car safe, and that will not happen if the driver is not alert. As it states\n\nin paragraph 9 that it is illegal to even test a computer driven car in certin states, it would not be fair to those states that cannot have computer driven cars and the other states do.\n\nIn conclusion, i still stand by my statement reguarding my advocation for driverless cars. I am not submissing the opposing facts that driverless cars will not be allowed in certin states, there is still a slim chance. In paragraph 10 it explains that automakers are continuing their work to enhance and solve any problems now and in the future.",
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"content": "Censorship libraries major concern school systems many years In many school libraries certain books music movies magazines removed content These items removed common types content wich include use violence sexual acts drug use inapropriate language Many parents young kids always wondering kids school Most parents would want find kids introduced things young age could influence participate activities In opinion I believe certain material school libraries removed public libraries public library divided sections depending age groups Inn elementry middle school libraries items censored young students need introduced things inapropriate violent anyway In school environment kids introduced drug use sexual activity sort health class learn true facts would educational rather hearing drugs sex violence song seeing form movie Many kids watch movies violent inapropriate scenes songs world today exstreamly inapropriate young kids Their also many books magazines read young students school content I believe censorship libraries great thing",
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"content": "In modern day schools it can become hard for students to learn at the same pace of everyone around them, some kids are able to grasp certain subjects and some cannot. The Facial Action Coding System is a useful and beneficial tool that should be used in any educational setting. There are sometimes kids who are having trouble understanding certain subjects and it can be difficult for these kids to speak up and ask for help, with the help of the FACS teachers will be able to help students that are confused simply by studying their reactions during a task. For example, if a student is taking a test or quiz and they reach a question where they feel lost, the teacher would be able to identify the students confussion based on his facial expressions. While it is understandable why people would feel nervous or afraid if they were being watched by a camera while using a computer, the argument has to be made that this program is beneficial to the students of the world. The Mona Lisa example is one that is fascinating because it demonstrates the capabilties of this program, and how it can benefit the learning experience for any student struggling in school. Another benefit to using the program is beig able to identify students who are in distress, students who are feeling unbarebly sad or angry could be helped if a school official used the program to idetify students who facial expression potrayed a great sadness. In the past the U.S. has had trouble with survelliance and invasion of privacy, and while it is not constitutional, the incident should not discourage people from using the program. The program can also be applied to drivers ed students, which in turn would make the program a life saver. In a classroom of drivers ed students the program can be used to identify students who are uninterested or lack attention and discipline them, driving is a serious matter that should not be taken lightly which is why students who are not paying attention should be disciplined. These disciplinary precautions should also be used in highschools, for instance if a student is confused and unprepared a teacher can choose to discipline the student or help the student. Humans are able to analyze and study facial expressions and determine what emotion the person is feeling, but it can become difficult for people such as teachers to keep track of all the differnet expressions they see per day. Instead, the teacher can choose with emotion she is looking for and use it to benefit the students, teachers usually watch kids expressions on days of test and quizzes to see which kids are confused and which are not, but in become difficult trying to study all of the faces of a class with 30 students. With the FACS teachers could simply type in a key phrase such as \"confused\" and find all of the kids in their class they need attention and help. In paragraph 9 the article states that a recent study found that fake smiling can lead to real feelings of happiness, this information can be used to help students who are in distress and just need to smile. Small encounters with teachers are very influential and if a teacher told a student to smile after identifying the student as sad, it is possible that smile will help the student have a better day overall. The program can also be a useful tool to use in classrooms, if a vast majority of students in the same clasroom feel confused or bored the school officials would have to take into account whether the teacher is to blame. If the teacher is not willing to try helping the students and the students continue to look confused, the school should consider firing the teacher for the benefit of the students. Also, if a teacher felt that their job depended on the facial expressions of student the teacher would try to make the class experience understandble and enjoyable which would benfit the students and make their school experience much more enjoyable. If a student has a good experience when they are of young age, they will most likely want to continue their experience in college which in turn woudld increase the amount of college enrolled students. In conclusion, the FACS is a useful and beneficial tool that should be used in all areas of education, while it is a frightful thought being watched the postives out way the negatives and the FACS is a progrsm that will most likely be used in the following years.",
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"content": "A time I pacient I babysitting kids I babysitting acting It hard get calm But I noticed I pacient So I sat told calm would nt So I told time bit quieter I noticed I ignore pacient settle stop trying get attention If I pacient I knew would It worked settle lot I babysitting next time",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered what it's like to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program? If your not in it, you should do it! There are so many reasons to join the program. Don and I sighed up, and you should too.\n\nI got to help animals while everyone else dosent have the time for it. Seagoing Cowboys took care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. f you have any exsperence what careing for animals, you'll be great at this! I used to work at my aunt Katie's farm as a boy, so that prepared me for this.\n\nI got to see beautiful sights when I was a Seagoing Cowboy. You travel ALOT when you do what I did. If you ever wanted to travel the world and see sights that not many people get to to see, then you ought to join.\n\nEven though there is a lot of work to do, and worrying about the dangers of being a seagoing Cowboy, you get to have fun with the other cowboys. They play baseball and volleyball games in empty holds where animals had been housed. And to pass the time, we play table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and played games.\n\nTo sum up my thoughts, if you become a Seagoing Cowboy, you get to help alot of people, animals, and countries to recover from World War II, and you get to do what you love to do and have fun doing it. So thoughs were my reasons why you should be a Seagoing Cowboy.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home Blueprints lives speaker shows many moods The moods gratefulness happiness lifeThe speaker grateful whole memoir But speaker grateful family oppertunity come It says I always grateful parents love sacrifice This shows grateful s saying parents willing sacrifice things would able go better life He also tell us parents left friends family jobs homes come better life childrenThe speaker also shows happiness He says countless extended family members came went This shows surronded people loved made happy It also said would help people spend time comunity people dinner time This also shows happy spending time many family members friends These example moods author created memoir",
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"content": "Setting affects cyclist The cyclist worry road condition If road condition bad cyclist must reduce hisher speed The cyclist also worry day night If night must careful due cars able see In text cyclist extremely hot weather This dangerous cyclist prepared things water",
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"content": "Driverless cars seem like a great idea. They would use less gas, not pollute the world as much, and many more reasons. There are also many negative things about them. They are dangerous, not reliable, and expensive.\n\nDriverless cars sounds dangerous in general. The best way to insure safety is to have an actual person behind the wheel. Even if the car is not fully driverless, the driver could fall asleep or be distracted when the car is notifying them to take control. Even if the number one rule for the driver is to stay alert and to be ready to drive at all times, we are human and we are going to get distracted.\n\nAnother thing negative about driverless cars is that they are not fully reliable. Any technology we have is not 100% reliable. The system can break down in the middle of the road, and someone could die. We should not risk our safety or our lives on a machine that is not fully safe. Yes, the cars we have today are not fully reliable either, but they are safer than a machine in complete control.\n\nLastly, driverless cars seem really expnsive. In order for them to work they have to build all new roads to ensure the safety of pedestrians, drivers, and passangers. They also have to pay for all of the research that goes into building a working driverless car. All of the money spent on these cars could be used to pay off the trillion dollar debt the United States is currently in, or it could be used to help the homeless get back up on their feet and get a home again. There are plenty of things we could use the money for.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars seem like a waste of money and time. We have working cars that have been working fine for years. So why waste money on cars that are dangerous, not reliable, and expensive?",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because, our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Venus had once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, this keeps astronomers fascinated. People are intrested in the topic that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nThe author states in paragraph 2 \"Often reffered to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally closest in distance too.\" Despite the dangers Venus has, It is 'Earth's Twin' we could learn a lot about Venus and Earth if we decide to study the planet more. Scientists believe we say that Venus is Earth's twin because it once was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth does today.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is in the midst of finding other ways to get nearer and study Venus. These Astronomers are aware of all the dangers of getting to close to this planet and all the affects that come with studying up close. But for them to truly understand what comes with Venus, they will take the risk.",
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"content": "In 1976 a face appeared on Mars and later it would become the Face on Mars. NASA has released a few images of this so-called \"Face\" on Mars which conspiracy theorists have been attacking since the start. They believe that aliens somehow created the Face, but why would aliens want to create a face on Mars?\n\nIf aliens did indeed create the Face, then why have we not seen them? Wouldn't there be at least some evidence of alien life forms there? Why haven't these aliens tried to come to Earth? The only ppossible answer is that the Face simply is a natural landform, created by Mars itself.\n\nSome other conspiracy theorists believe that NASA is hiding information from us, but why would they do that if they are low on funding and could use the publicity? The article states that \"defenders of NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars,\" so that assumption can be overruled. NASA presented all the information that they had about the Face to the public. NASA even seemingly tried to see if there were any alien markings by going back to it every time that they could. If they were really hiding something about the face from us, wouldn't it have been easier to not show the face at all?\n\nThe pictures that NASA showed us are not very detailed, and if the Face was created by aliens who were more advanced and intelligent than us, then why is it not bigger? Why is it not more detailed? Why isn't there anything else around it? If an ancient alien civilization created it they would have needed somewhere to live and stay in order to create it, but the article states that NASA saw no other structures around it.\n\nThere are many strange looking features on planets. On Earth we have heart-shaped islands and strange craters, and Mars has some rocks that look like animals. It is not uncommon for us to mistake something for something else. Sometimes we want it to be something else so badly that it does-to us, and I think that for the conspiracy theorists\n\nsaw what they wanted to see. What they wanted to see was a face built by aliens and so they do, and now they are trying to justify their accusations with \"facts\".",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System\n\nTechnology is advancing everyday. The use of electronics in the classroom is growing, due to all the useful tools it provides. Learning styles can vary when emotions play a role, exspecially in the classroom. The new technology called Facial Action Coding System allows for a computer to calculate a humans emotions. The new tool would help increase teachers knowledge of students to a whole new level.\n\nEmotions in the classroom affect the students ability to learn. Lessons are fit to help a student succeed in school. The detection of a student's emotion enables teacher's ability to customize their lesson plans based on the emotion students are portraying. In paragraph five it states,\"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc,\" proving although humans may have the ability to read emotions to an extent, computers have the ability to exactly calculate the emotion. It provides an extra tool that would benefit the way teachers teach in their classroom's.\n\nThe calculation of a student's emotion would allow for classrooms to be more efficient. Time is a crucial factor when it comes to the amount students learn. Emotion ties into the mood of a human. The mood a student has can cause an increase or decrease in the amount of new information he or she can take in. The calculation of emotion can provide the teacher with information on how it may affect their attention span. \"By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions,\"which would better the teacher, leading to a better classroom.\n\nEmotions can be hard to read. All teachers are differernt and read emotions differently. Facial Action Coding System would be of great value in the classroom. It allows more information and knowledge to the teachers, which betters the students. The use of the new technology provides the classroom with ways to personalize the classroom for each individual student. The calculation of emotion opens a whole new door for classrooms all over.",
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"content": "They probably ended like build suspense leave reader good note someone think things going get better Saeng get license They get money",
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"content": "According to the passage of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" The are many pro's and Con's of the idea of having driverless cars. One of the pro's of Driverless cars would be it takes up less money, which means it saves yourself more money and you really wont have to spend all of your investments. Another pro about Driverless cars is that it will most likely fundementally change the world as we know it because if the manufactuers develop Driverless cars then you won't see pedestrians using the bus, train, or the regular automotive vehicle.\n\nAccording to the passage \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", there are also many con's or negative conotations concerning Driverless Cars. One of those con's are a individual might have to take control over the car if needed because if the car won't stop when it is suppoed to yield then that individual has to stop the car . Another \"con\" or negative connotation about Driverless Cars is that the Driverless car is not fully safe. To elaborate about what not safe means, it means it does not have the safety requirements a regular automotive vehicle has such as an emergency brake or turning signals.",
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"content": "Each time author comes point setting isnt appealing helpful loses hope reaching destination finding nice place rest get fresh water For example text states one ramshackle shed several rusty pumps corral couldnt hold lamest mule greeted This sight troubling Kurmaskie The author sort negative sarcastic tone point This shows hes getting frustrated losing hope He also mentions sight troubling shows big affect features around scenery",
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"content": "Computers shouldnt have to tell our emotions. Humans should interact face to face and ask how the person is. Eventually computers will be doing the talking for us. The computer could be useful on historic paintings. With all this technology mankind is going to end up being antisocial and hide behind screens.\n\nIf people were to use this on a daily basis to see how your friend is feeling, it would take the sypathy out of asking how someone is.\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Dr. Huang follows up that statement by saying \"So computers need to uderstand that, too.\" Why have a computer learn these human traits when people can just interact face to face.\n\nPeople make their own decsions and learn from what they did right or wrong. The computers dont need to tell people to put a happy face on or show epathy. If you are not able toread someones feelings or someone cant read yours then just ask. Asking someone shows that you are concerned and care about how they are doing.\n\nThis technology could benefit voters or the Goverment. The computer can tell if a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. The Court house can use it on witneses and the defendant. It can be used in school classrooms but the kids will have to get used to it.\n\nThis technology isnt made for everyday life, it should be used occasionally. There is no need for the use of these machines in classrooms. Kids are learning fine with out them. People should stick to iteracting and asking how someone is feeling.",
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"content": "Why should people always look happy while getting their picture taken? Some people say they don't always have to look happy, maybe becuase of how they're feeling. Other people argue that you should always look happy in your pictures. I believe people shouldn't always have to look happy in all their pictures.\n\nFirst, if people don't want to take a happy picture other people shouldn't detect pictures using FACS just because they want to know their emotions. According to the text, \"Each expression is compared against a neutral face...\" This means that some people have blank faces and show no emotion towards people or their pictures.\n\nAnother reason is calculating emotions. Some people might not want to know how much emotion they're showing becuase they don't care or it may be wrong. Some people could have a smile on their face and they aren't really happy.\n\nLastly, people can think it's not okay or they don't like that people can find out someones emotions through some type of machine. The text states, \"... you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" According to that statement it means that people don't necessarily have to be weird and actually figure out how people are feeling.\n\nSome people argue that it is a good idea for people to use that kind of technology during school or outside of school. The text says, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness...\" This states that people like to know these things and it interests them.\n\nIn conclusion, people shouldn't use FACS to calculate people's emotions because they shouldn't be shared with other people since it's not their business.",
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"content": "Nowadays many cities and towns around the world become more populated which produces problems, one of which is a high volume of traffic. There are several ways to solve this obstacle, but it can not be solved instantly, they need a huge amount of front expenditure cost, also involvement and understanding from every layer of society to make it sustainable.\r\n\r\nFirst, the obvious cause of traffic jams is the high amounts of vehicles on the road, especially, private-owned transportation. This takes us to another problem about why the city populations favour private vehicles rather than public transportation, which mainly because of the bad transportation system in the city, makes it not accessible to all parts of the city. Furthermore, there is also a case in which transportation becomes a state economical profit and makes the people buy more private vehicles, they promote it with a small-affordable downpayment and low-risk credit. For example, in Indonesia, public transportation is so bad and always on the lower rank of state's priority. Although we already have an MRT in the previous capital city, Jakarta, the government still want to make the private transportation company thrives with an incentive for the people to buy it, even though it is unnecessary and can make the traffic jam worse in the long run. \r\n\r\nSecond, to solve this problem the government have to understand why public transportation is important, even though, the profit to the national market is not that high compared to a private vehicle. They ought to make accessible and vast-reach transportation, by using the already existing transportation to be a feeder and reaching into the smaller roads, opening new routes, and increasing the quantities of public transportation. For example, in Surabaya, even though some universities are near bus stops, the students still have to walk over a km without a proper walking path and shading, which makes it dangerous for the people. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are many problems as the reason for the high volume of traffic jams and it is mainly the government's job to solve the problem by making a proper public transportation system in the cities or towns.",
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"content": "There are many programs in the world around you. I know one certain program that I personaly love and think you would too. This program is called the Seagoing Cowboys. I think you should join it because there is so many sights that we can see on our ways across oceans on boat trips, it's an opportunity to work hard, and it's fun.\n\nThe first reason I think you would enjoy this program is because there is so many sights to be seen. I saw many sights. I saw the excavated castle in Crete and marvled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. I also, took a ride on a Gondola in Vencie, Italy a city with streets of water. Like I said these are all wonderfull sights you could see. There is one sight I think was the most special and that was the Acropolis in Greece. Europe and China are a couple other sights. The boat trips do take a while though. For example, it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States, and a month to get to China. These are many sights that make this program super enteresting and fun.\n\nThe next reason I think you should join this program is because it's an opportunity to work hard and show others what we can do. There are many opportunities to do, expecially if you are on the cattle boat. Some of the things to do are, caring for animals, and makeing sure they have been fed and watered, pullying bags of oates and bales of hay from the lower holds of the ship to the upper, and cleaning the stalls. These many things were hard work.\n\ncleaning the stalls was every night and the animals had to be checked daily and nightly to make sure none of them were hurt and fed and watered properly. All of these responsabillities are hard work.\n\nJust because there's hard work dosen't mean theres not any fun, because there is. once the animals and cargo are all dropped off there is time to have fun on board, The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed. Tabletennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. As I said before there are many things to do fun it's not always just seriousness. There is time to goof around and have fun too .\n\nLike I had said before, there are many reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You should join this program because there are so many sights to see on boat trips, it's an opportunity to work hard, and there's time to have fun. I hope this makes you want to join this program because it's a good time to shine. Well, not really shine but, you know what I mean.",
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"content": "Nowadays, the world has become one united opt to technological development, which brings all nations together. Some advocate that international interaction has a great impact on the environment. While others disagree, and believe that it can play an integral role in the commercial and business sectors. I am convinced with both notions, and my contention will be further explained in the following lines. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, international cooperation has an indispensable role in economic prosperity for several reasons. Firstly, it can encourage investments, which participate in increasing the employment rate. Secondly, it can introduce a foreign currency, that can establish a solid base, and strengthen the infrastructure of the government. Furthermore, it can act as a tool for soaring the income of the individuals, which in turn will reflect on the citizen's habits, and lifestyle. For instance, the Egyptian authority has signed a plethora of conventions with a foreign state like Japan; in order to introduce the Japanese strategies and machines to deal with economic hurdles in Egypt. Hence, with international exchange a myriad of advantages will be reflected on the country in numerous sectors not only in business. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, currently, climate change and environmental topics have been heated constantly. Many urge that the foreign conventions will be of great impact on our ecosystem. To illustrate, the presence of novel technical devices have brought numerous inventions that may aid in reducing the contamination that has been created by using fuel, and charcoal. Moreover, it can tackle deforestation, which has been developed in numerous countries. Not only that, but it can also be an active tool to eliminate air pollution and factories' waste products, which act as a source of contamination, that can jeopardize human and animals health. For example, numerous cities all over the world have impeded the idea of sustainable products and renewable energy to mitigate pollution, and produce an ecosystem. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above viewpoint. It can be reiterated that, international assistance can participate in both environmental, and economical sectors. Therefore, the government should increase its collaboration to create a peaceful environment.",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI disagree with the Electoral College and believe we, the voters, should be souly responsible for determining our President. The Electoral College is not fair to the citizens of our state. When we vote for something, we want our vote to determine our President, not determine who our electors will vote for.\n\nWhen a member of their party votes, they may not always vote for that particular party's candidate. For instance, if the Democratic elect for 2016 had an aspect he planned to bring to Washington D.C., that a member of the Democratic party didn't agree with, they should be able to vote for whoever they please. Same goes for the electors, who may swing to the opposite party that particular year.\n\nIn the case of a tie, I do however agree that it should then be up to state senators to take into consideration both candidates and go over their key aspects. Then they can choice what will be most beneficial to our country and what will in the long run help our great state and country as well.\n\nI do not think their should be swing states. I think that the exact votes of the citizens should be counted and go only on that. It should not matter the state or region the voter is in. Instead of voters supmitting a ballot at the local voting site, I think the voter should be able to vote online at a local voting center. In the past, voting has got miss-counted and I think that a more accurate means of voting would be to do it online. That way papers cannot get lost and a computer can count vote so human error does not occur.\n\nI also highly agree with the statement from paragraph 23 that states, \"It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state...\" This is true with states particularly in the North who are made up of mostly Democratic and the South being mainly Republican. After the decisions made by the current president Obama, I think many Democratics will want to try something different after seeing all that has not been accomplished under Obama as of 2015.\n\nI hope Senator, you will take into consideration my statement.\n\nBest Regards,\n\nHannah Strickland",
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"content": "The new technology used to undertstand facial expressions would be a valuable thing in a classroom. This can help alot in schools,because the system will be able to understand the students emotions like confused,or bored,the system can modify and change the learning style. This can increase the students studying skills and also they would learn more efficiently.\n\nThe text states that,a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,'Dr. Huang predicts.\"then it would be able to modify the lesson,like an effective human instructor.'This show that the facial recognition can help students to learn more. The system can help teachers alot in schools to let them know what they need to change to teach better.\n\nIn the future the facial recognizer might be able to replace teachers. The idea is still to far off because the system , still doesn't understand that most human comunications are none verbal. The system could help solve crimes and other things it would be able to recognize if a person is lying or not by their facial expresions.\n\nThe system would be a good way to teach students at schools or at home if possible. Now the students will not be bored in class,neither will they be confused because the system would be able to recognize it and change it .The progam still has alot of flaws but when is solved hopefully, we can have them in our classrooms in the future this could be the most valuable \"teacher\" so far it would be of a great value for schools.",
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"content": "Nowadays, human activities create negative effects on plants and animal species. Following this, some people believe that it is already too late to take any reactions to this problem, whereas others argue that effective measures can be taken to combat these situations. From my perspective, human beings could still make a difference .\r\n\r\nsome people hold the view that the damages caused by human activities to wildlife are irreversible. The major reason is that many species of plants and animals have disappeared from our planet, and it is impossible to get them back. For example, polar bears are not able to take a break while swimming because there are no lands for them to live on as the glaciers are melting as a result of global warming. Meanwhile, human activity is the main cause of global warming. Hence, in those people's opinions, nothing can be done to tackle this problem.\r\n\r\nHowever, on the other hand, the government should introduce a new law about the restriction of deforestation. This is because the disappearance of forests will speed up the extinction of species.For instance, if the government outlawed deforestation, many people would not be able to cut the plants, which helps to protect the habitat for animals to live. As a result, the variety of species is guaranteed. Similarly, individuals ought to raise their awareness of environmental issues . Therefore, it would not be impossible to save the endangered species.\r\n\r\nIn summary, although there are some in saving plants and animals in danger, it is our responsibility to save the world from the negative influence.",
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"content": "Have you ever thought how dangerous it would be to have driverless cars? Some may want to see this in the near future but, I would rather it not come so soon or possible at all. here are reasons why I dissagree with driverless cars. Driverless cars can be very dangerous and could cause deaths. There are alot of things that could happen with noone behind the wheel of a car. Some may malfunction and cause many wrecks as well as cause people to panic.\n\nWho would want to see a car with noone in there controling it driving I surely wouldn't want to see it and alot more people wouldn't like to see it either. Some states have limited the use of semi-autonomous cars. Some of those states are California, Nevada, Florida, and the Districts of Columbia. There are manufacturers that believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe. You never know when the day comes that a driverless car will want to mess up and malfunction.\n\nWith that being said if someone gets injured because of technology fails who is at fault? That is an hard question to answer because its not the person who bought the cars fault the technology in the car messed up its the manufacturers fault. Noone would want to see someone die because of a technology error in the car that someone is killed. It would be such a tragedy for a driverless car to cause an accident and many people get killed. Also safety is a big role when it comes to driverless cars. So this is why i feel driverless cars should not be made.",
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"content": "If it were a real martian creation then you would be able to see possible life forms around it and it wouldn't be facing towards the sky, it would be like a statue, plus it would have been a really fantastic descovery and we would try to make contact with the martians and see how they live and survive on the planet so we could possibly live there one day. NASA would send space crafts and rovers to Mars so we could study the creatures. Finding out how to survive on mars and the other planets is important and is something humans should learn how to do just in case if something happens to earth and we aren't able to go back to it. But as you can see in the pictures it's just a messa, a natural cause in nature, something that happens on earth, but it just so happened to look so much like a face from the possible clouds and blurry picture from the first. Many people at NASA want wanted that to be a statue or something that a living creaturs has made, but as you see in the pictures it starts to look more like a natural cause of natural cause.",
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"content": "I think teaching how to do this to students is a very good idea. Because if we teach this to students we can tell if a person is having a dad day and you can help them out or not. You could also tell if someone is happy or sad. You could tell if they are havin g a dad day and you could try and make them have a good day. You could tell if someone was having suicidle thoughts or is just joking. If you see someone that is happy you could try and keep them happy all day. The author also tells you could not do this with your home PC because it coundn't handle the complex algorithms that you would need for this to work. He tells you what muscles to look for that are bieng used if you try this on a lab partner. He tells you what muscles that are needed for a genuine smile and what muscles to look for on a forced smile. Like in a real smile the person would be using Zygomatic major(muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. But in a false smile the person would be using the muscles called the Zygomatic muscle and the risorius muscle also.",
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"content": "I belive that it was not a alien. i Belive it was just a crater in\n\nthe rock. Ther where many pictures taken and i think a alein wouldnt look as much like a human like the figure does.\n\nFirst,It is not easy to target the cydonia. It is kinda hard to find.There was no alein monument afterall. Many photgraphs where taken of this creater and it does look lke a human being.on april 8,2001 a couldness summer day appered in cydonia. they had to roll the space craft\n\n25 degrees to the center of thr feild.radio talkshows would talk about this topic often.nasa has many diffrent resaons to back up that it was not a alein figure.\n\nsecond,\n\nIt was a big pop icon for a litttle while alot of poeple herd about this from all the publisicy from the whole picture after NASA sent out the picture.Mars is around the same temputer as earth.\n\nlastly,\n\ni think there is most likey life on mars. i think this is just a nother reason to prove there may be life on mars.Some sintest clain the figure look like a acent pharrow. photo graping cydonia became a priority for NASA.\n\nin cunclusion,\n\nThose are some reason why nasa has been making these pictures a priority to find out the big mistory. NASA has good edvidance to supprt why they belive the figure was not a alien subject up in mars. And also other sinintest thought it was a allien subject. The subject was proven to be a non-alein cydonia afterall.\n\nthere is to much lava on mars for any wildlife on it. i beleve all animal life will get extinct from mars. 43 meter per pixel in the best photo takingh od cydonia.",
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"content": "In the findings of earth having a close plant that is similar but he enviroment is very dangerous. For example there is highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. not a singlr ship has landed and been there for more thana few hours.\n\nThe National Aeroautics and Space Administration have been working on ways to get to the \"Sister plant\" for a little while but not over a year. So far they have only sent nonhuman space shutles but they want to send a human to study venus but no ship came back that didnt have a human on board. The conditions are extreme just getting close tot he surface is around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, and the air pressure would be likethe sea level on earth, and solar power would be needed these dont seem like conditions for a human to live in but, they are it wouldn't be easy but its possible. but you may think what about from the area just above the atmosphere since in the atmosphere is deadly, it wouldnt be possible because lights cant penetrate the atmosphere. but NASA is determined proof of this is that NASA has made a chamber that is close if not like the conditions that Venus would proved to you and your body.\n\nSo after all that information my conclusion would be that NASA is working on the best way for a human to live on Venus for a time but, the conditions are extremely intence but are possible.",
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"content": "Recently, a new technology, the Facial Action Coding System, has allowed for the identification of human emotions by computers. This technology sparks the interest of many, myself included; however, I do not believe that there is any use for it in the classroom. The technology in the classroom is not valuable because it will cost money, humans can read facial expressions and body language well on their own, and also it may be a learning curve compared to traditional learning.\n\nThe new technology will undoubtedly cost some money, whether it be the cost for research or the cost of purchasing the software itself. Software licenses can be costly for some schools, and it may be out of their budget. With education heading towards a more digital path rather than a paper and pencil path, schools will be spending more money on computers and digital devices. I see the software as something that will only be used a nominal amount, and overall will be a waste of school funds.\n\nWhen your friend looks like they are having a bad day, you can typically be able to read their facial expressions and body language. This is something that computers will not be able to do as well as a friend or family member. Sure, a computer can read your emotions based on the position of muscles, but a friend can better tell when your mood is off. In the text, the author states, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" The author also states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Generally, a teacher can tell when their students are not understanding their lesson or are bored by reading their body language. They may have a hand on their head with their eyes barely open to show that they are tired of listening to the lesson, or they may have their eyes squinted if they are confused. In paragraph 6 author states, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, so computers need to understand that too.\" This nonverbal communication can be easily interpreted by the teacher, and is not needed to be done by a computer.\n\nLastly, the technology may be a learning curve to both students and teachers. The author states, \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different, A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This technology could be inaccurate and ineffective to students who think to change their facial expressions. They could exploit the software to manipulate the questions in their favor. I believe that the traditional way of teaching is more effective, and if the student does not understand the question, they can ask for help right away or arrange for help at a later time.\n\nOverall, I do not believe that the Facial Action Coding System would be usefull in the classroom setting. It may be innovative and new, but it does not have a place in education. The technology will be costly, it is pointless because humans can already red emotions, and also it would provide a bit of a learning curve for students and teachers.",
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"content": "Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health. On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system. In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.",
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"content": "The diagram presents how the two cutting tools were developed in the Stone Age.\nAs for Tool A with a 3-D view - front, side, and back, the cutting device made 1.4 million years ago looked like a stone with a little bit sharp tip.\nWhereas in Tool B carved for 0.8 million years, thanks to the development of cutting art it was more easily recognized to be of cutting function with a sharper tip on the top than that of Tool A. It was also not as rough as what is shown in Tool A. Besides, the latter was thinner than the former one as be seen from the side view\nDespite their differences, one distinct similarity between the two cutting devices is that they shared the same height of 0.5 centimeters for the top part.\nIn conclusion, it can be argued that our ancestors have been more skilled in creating tools by stone to serve their lives better and better.",
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"content": "There are many debates about Driverless Cars. There are pros and cons. For some, people think this is a great idea. For other not so much. So are driverless cars good or bad?\n\nIn my opinion, driverless cars have ther ups and downs. Some of the positive things about having a driverless car for me is, I think they can take away un-needed stress from the driver. Wouldn't have to worry about little things that's going on in the road. For myself being a unexperienced driver. I might find driverless cars being usefull and a lot easier.\n\nThey're some negitives too. Some times computers might fail. I might run into problems with the law while having a driverless car. Also, the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" is good up to 25 mph. Where I live, the average speed limit is 30mph. Once past 25 mph the system might not work as well.\n\nSome think hands free driving is funner. Some say \"change is better\". Its better to be alert when practicing safe driving. It may be easier to just keep your hands on the wheel and pay attention to the road.\n\nThe outcome for me is, I do not support driverless. For the various negitive reasons being greater than the positive reasons. I find it a lot more safer to drive hands on ; rather than to drive driverless.",
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"content": "When idea get inside protect food Our time way easier old days work hard everything everything given us Our two time periods lot different There arent many days I patient day one I playing football game great sunny I starting quarterback I scored touchdowns I passing touchdown first half At point coaches took starters whole second half I expecting still play nope told sit bench rest game This hard I wait game get bench Im patient person hard I hope Ill never",
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"content": "It class visited library look various books One teacher picked CAPS Right The book written cult domesticity filled ideas submissiveness women devotion home I found book offensive I looking modern perspective Nowadays would considered sexist assume women stay home take care house men work outside home Just piece literature I nt agree nt mean s valued work Certain materials removed libraries found offensive There wide variety people search library finding certain piece material one person finds offensive nearly impossible Materials nt allowed censored reason Materials found library form expression individual created society whole Censoring works would considered violation freedom expression People ages look library find books music magazines Each people different belief What considered work art one person could seen highly offensive another If libraries start censoring books result would small selection drab emotionless materials People visit library find materials interested look around expand interests Libraries need contain wide variety material satisfy knowledgeA library s job educate people enter A good form education exposure different types material Sometimes offending nature novel makes good It gets reader thinking author s purpose The seen offensive work long period time It incorporated issue slavery many people nt ready deal As result book banned libraries schools Now seen one famous works literature That example proves material s reguarded offensive nt automatically value lowered And books left shelf us said Katherine Paterson accurate depiction outcome library censorship materials Part make good work great ability stir controversy among readers Removing controversy remove aspect education along essentially main purpose library",
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"content": "in this section i really think driverless cars vould be good. They could prevent more accedents and they could prevent injery,deaths. If you can actualy save gas with these kind of cars they coud help out with the inviornment. Driverless cars are good but in a case they are bad. what if there is an emergancie the car will proble only go so fast. Im glad that it will vibrate or say something if there is a problem with the roads or something with construstion. I feel like cars are safer with people driving them because thos cars could get old and then the system could start screwing up. then your gonna have alot of recks, alot of cars that proble wont even be operatable. r what if teh car actualy is involed in an accedent then all the techlology could get ruined there to. its reallky hard to decied but i think i would go with keeping people manovering all cars. sure i dont mind like automatic breaks to were you get to close to something and it will come to a complet stop and the camaras to help you back out thats all fine but other then that just keep the people in controle.",
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"content": "first paragraph kind happy came living year happy I born living Simple house situated two family blondbricks building Ironbound section onhappy parents shares kitchens",
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"content": "A time I patient I sitting house hours waiting grandma pick go get friend I believe lot patience get farther wait want",
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"content": "No one doubts that school learning plays a significant role in people’s life. People who receive better education and behave themselves properly in society are highly appreciated and recognized. Some people argue that schools should be responsible not only for the decent behaviors of children but also for providing academic study. In the following paragraphs I will discuss this statement from my perspective.\n\n \n\nThere is some truth in the above statement. Academic organizations are places where kids are taught useful and valuable knowledge, in the meantime, how to behave properly is also one important part of their duties. However, their main task is to give formal schooling and develop children’s academic capability, because they have the most decent amount of resources to achieve this goal. For instance, professionally trained teachers and libraries with thousand copies of academic reference books enable them to become ideal providers of various knowledge. If they spend too much time on teaching students how to behave in their everyday lives, it will be impossible for it to fulfil the educational function as a whole, to make it worse, their valuable resources will be wasted.\n\n \n\nFamily plays a significant role in people’s lives. That is the very first step in the cultivation of a person’s moral standard and social behavior. Parents are the first teachers of their offspring.The reason is quite obvious that kids spend at least five to six years at home with their parents or caregivers before they go for formal learning in schools. Therefore, parents shall set good examples and teach some social rules and moral criteria in order to get their boys and girls ready for the studying environment.\n\n \n\nIn conclusion, schools shall put more emphasis on imparting academic knowledge instead of teaching kids how to behave properly during their growing into adults.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph earlier story saeng talking failed test wanted retake So saeng declared next year geese return hibiscus budding shall take test",
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"content": "The mood created author gratefulness The author created mood telling reader grateful parents love sacrifice The author grateful parents moved United States start lives entirerly Meaning find new jobsThe author explained greatfulness telling parents much courageous could ever The author also said way express gratitude generosity impressed upon early age",
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"content": "The features setting essay entitled Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit affect cyclist tagonizing manner He dehydrated exhausted due conditions environment cyclist became dehydrated lack water also scorching heat desert He sweat much point lost enormous amount bodily fluids The cyclist also traveling unpaved road required energy traveling one paved Therefore cyclist became exausted almost died These ways environment cyclist affected",
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"content": "I believe that he's saying the truth in some parts. He is correct in how we can get to places safer. Im going to tell you why it's a bad thing to have smater cars, driveing less,sensing the world. Also my conclusion on what i think why this is a bad thing.\n\nI feel like having smater cars is nice but at the same time its not. Have you thought of, what if the car doesnt funtion the way its suppose to and it causes an acident. Also what if you command it to take you some where and it gets you lost. What if the police tries to pull you over and the car doesnt stop.\n\nIm going to talk on why driveing less is bad. Well for 1 reason when you are kind of stress you can go out for a drive to distract yourself for a little. Also if we wont be able to drive as much people won't like that because they like to control the car while driving. Also like if you want to take somone on a date it wont be as romantic as if it is for you to drive.\n\nIm going to talk how it wont work for part of the world sensing the world. First of all some people are poor and they wont be able to afford a smart car. Second of all there's people the like to be able to control the car rather than driveing less. Also its very expensive for the people to put new roads and that means the taxes are going to be higher.\n\nIn conclusion i think we should stick to normal cars. Its to much money to do all that. Also its going to be a waist of time if it doesnt work and a waist of money. I feel like we should be able to control the car because you dont know what can happen. Also its a way to get out of the house if your stressed . Also not every one will be able to get a smart car.",
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"content": "Driverless Cars are indeed coming and I think it will change this world for the better. Meaning such cars like these will becomes more and more advanced. The main qualities of this car would be having a much better alert sytem which\n\nwill bring down accidents. It is very fuel efficient, and that it will bring up the economy. Driverless cars will change are world for the better.\n\nI don't think cars in the future will ever crash again.Thanks to the new Driverless car, we can stay safe and secure keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. How you ask. With such a car like this it will have sensors that will be more advanced to detect and repond to danger. The information of the sensors will cause the car to apply brakes in the the wheels which will reduce the power of the engine. It could also handle more and more driving tasks on their own. Talk about safety.\n\nOne of are most important and main qualities of this car would be that its far more fuel efficient that todays cars/taxies. Do you have any idea what that would do for our country. We would have a much better economy, less waste, less pollution, less affect on the wilderness. Driverless cars could gives us all these things, we just need to put it in action and watch it change are world for the better.\n\nThe road to driverless cars are coming with a passion to change the world. We have millions of cars each day creating pollution and climate change ect...\n\nI say that once we have a process of driverless cars taking over, we will becomes very industrialized. This could mean that we won't have as much pollution in Japan or China. We will create more ideas from this idea alone. We could even, in the future, create a sport in which only driverless cars will be in. Driverless cars are not just keeping people safe and secure or having a more fuel efficient car but it will change this world for the better.\n\nThe qualities of the Driverless car can give us all this. We are changing the future of not just America, but the world. Maybe even space. I think whoever makes this idea will become richer that Bill Gates. Its a great idea that will give us hope for the world that we live in. This will gone down in history as one of the biggest impacts on are future. This will change our world in the best way possible.",
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"content": "This technology is valuble to the the classroom in my opinion. I think that because it's good to calculate someone's feelings. The part that got me the most was when 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' Dr. Huang predicts, I feel that's a good idea because some students are afraid to ask for help in front of the class. They said\n\n'the mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face' which is also a good thng. \" Theory of emotion , moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotion, but also may even help produce them' which is also good.\n\nI feel like this would be great thing for science. You can do great, fun projects with this at school. You can use it with your friends. Knowing someones emotions without having to ask is a good thing. When feeling sad and nobody knows it but then technology comes and someone knows and they help you be happy again, or become friends. You can help people become more happy by knowing they're sad and make them smile. You can know what your friendis feelings or your boyfrind/girlfriend. Let's say you don't want to talk about how you're feeling so the technology helps you speak without having too.\n\nWe can have 'empathy' states the article so we might not have to explain ourselfs and explain how we are feeling about a certian soution. You won't have to keep your feelings inside forever. It's a good way to learn about science of emotions even said it in the article. I also think it's a good thing thing to have around kids/teens older people since technology is the furture. This how I feel about the Facial Action Coding System.",
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"content": "All scientists at NASA know that the \"The Face\" is a natural landform known as a mesa. But some people think that Nasa is lying to the public about it being a natural landform. I'm here today to argue that Nasa is indeed not lying.\n\nMy first reason for knowing that NASA is not lying is that a drone was up in space taking pictures of it close enough to show the world tha it was just a natural landform. Viking 1 is the name of the spacecraft that took this photo and some mission controllers were suprised to see a face popu up on their screen. The chief scientist for NASA'S Mars exploration program said \"We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it .\"\n\nThey also got more icture to deduce that it was actually instead of a face it was a natural landform. Thats my first reason for knowing that NASA is not lying.\n\nMy second reason for knowing NASA is not lying is because the landform is called a mesa. Mesa's are more commonly found in the American West. So by thinking hardly about this it comes to mind could people that dont believe, could possibly being saying that this mesa isnt a mesa but something NASA is trying to cover up? But then the question comes to be WHY would Nasa be trying to hide some of this information from the public? Well it comes down to the simple fact they arent trying to hide anything from the public about the face they are giving us the true information and some people just dont thig thats the real actual truth.\n\nMy thrid reason for knowing that Nasa is not lying they made the pictures into digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size so if anything was on the surface such as a shack you could tell what it was. They do that so if they see anything that is a undertiminable object you can clerly tell what it is. The pixels arent as good as they could be today but they had a pretty lea view of what it is. they have the best cutting edge technology and are way more advanced than the open world is today so its highly unlikely that their system wasnt processing right. thats the end of my thrid reason.\n\nSo some people believe that the face is actually just a natural landform but some people such as conspiracy theorists dont. I say that the conspiracy theorists have a point on why Nasa could be lying to the public. They probably think this because of the goverment owning and controls Nasa that Nasa is lying to us like the goverment could be because of their secret projects. The reason the goverment doesnt tell s about some of their plans is because its to keep the United States of America safe from the har of foreign countries. Those were the reasons conspiracy theorists think like they do.\n\nAll that information can signify that Nasa is not lying to us. Though some people may think they are because they are apart of the goverment .But i think that Nasa is doing a great job and woudnt lie to the press. If they lied to the press they would be utting the U.S goverment a bad public view.",
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"content": "The table and the graph illustrate information about the number of visitors of Australia in million from foreign countries from 1975 to 2005.\nOverall, the number of overseas residents who came to Australia incresed in a straight-line progression from 8.8 to 30.4 during mentioned period of time. The most visitors was from Japan - 3.2 and 12.0, whereas the least number was from China - 0.3 and 0.8 - in 1975 and 2005, respectively.\nPeople from South Korea were in the second place based on the number of visitors - 2.9 in 1975 and 9.1 in 2005. In the third place there was European nations - 1.1 and 4.5 at the same time. The number of Britans was 0.9 and 2.9, whereas the number of americans was 0.4 and 1.1, in 1975 and 2005, correspondingly.\nIt worth to mentioned that that the whole number of foreign visitors of Australia in 1985 and 1995 was approximately 17 and 25, accordingly.",
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"content": "In s dirigibles considered future transportation Although useful dirigibles issue enough landing area New York City With mind Al Smith saw opportunity Empire State Building would construct mooring mast top building This would allow dirigibles anchor several hours refuel also allow passengers go Adding mooring mast seemed full proof time new construction plan endured many obstaclesThe first obstacle add mooring mast without adding stress building s frame Architects detected stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet This led second obstacle modifying strengthening steel frame Empire State Building accommodate first obstacle Finally third obstacle expense Modifying building s new frame work would cost sixty thousand dollarsConsequently Al Smith saw great oppertunity Empire State Building faced many obstacles",
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"content": "Driverless cars are so unpredictable, you dont know what will happen, this is why im against driverless cars. All technology has flaws, so why put that kind of technology in cars that go high speeds, where you dont know what could happen. The car could have a misfuction and drive off the road, or hit a telaphone pole. How would driverless cars know where there is ice and where there isnt any ice, where they could\n\nbe going the speed limit on icy roads and slide into other cars, and harm them in the process. People do fine on there own without the help of driverless cars where so much could go wrong. Yes people do wreck sometimes to, but we all make mistakes and we arent going to stop that fro happening, because we arent perfect. It will be a whole different world if there are driverless cars, and why would we want to change that much in that short of time. Nothing is perfect so why take the change and risk peoples lives just to let the rich people have there fancy cars that can drive themselves. It doesnt seem right that normal people wont have the chance to drive one of these cars because they will cost so much money which not many people have millions of dollars to blow on one car that can create so much more danger and havic. So thats why i tthink that we shouldnt give the resonsibilities of humas to technology, which will only make thing worse in the end.",
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"content": "The \"Face on Mars\" has fooled many people into thinking that there are ancient civilizations on the surface of mars. However this \"Face\" is just a landform that has shadows that give the illusion of a heman head. The head has had its picture taken multiple times. The cameras on the most recent pictures is very clear and percise. The \"Face\", shown in the picture, is the Mars equivallent of Earth's butte or mesa.The \"Face is pretty much a detailed landform formed years ago.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, the MGS took pictures of the \"Face\" using its high powered camera. Each pixel can span up to 1.53 meters. The 1976 Viking photo only went up to 43 meters per pixel. Garvin states that \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So, if there were odjects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" The piture's qualluty was so great that you could see the smallest of things. Even is it was a cloudy day you would be able to see a small civilization.\n\nOn earth we have butte or mesa which are landforms common around the American West. The face has the same characteristics as these landforms. Garvin says that \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snale River Plain of Idaho.\" That landform is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa. The mesa is the same hight of the \"Face\" found on Mars. It is possible that long ago a lava dome like the one Garvin talked about formed the mesa or \"Face\" as we know it today?\n\nIn conclusion, the \"Face\" is not a structure built by an ancient civilization on Mars. It's just a landform that cast shadows that give the illusion of a head. Hight quallity photos have showed us that there is no trace of any alien life form that existed. The \"face\" is a sharply detailed mesa just like the mesa formed in Idaho by a lava dome. Even though you want to think that there is alien life out in the vast space we call the universe, Mars is not the home to an advanced alien species like Earth.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist two way This ways pysical mental The pysical ways features affect cyclist terrain If roads long wiredy could wear cyclist They could also become physically tired incline hill steep When its gravity egausting The temperature also crusal factor cyclist pysical ability Nobody want feel like sauna bike riding The cyclist also attracted mentally If terrain looks deserted anything like desert byciclist instintaniously thinks dehydration death If people see dead animals bones would think could die If see vulture circling would get afraid think death worse thing knowing things place time This setting affects cyclists",
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"content": "Im going to prove that people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because you get to to go on advetures and you get to help people. The first paragraph is going to show that you get to go on advetures.The second paragraoh is going to show how you get to help people.\n\nI believe that you get to have fun when you participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. One example from the passage is in parragraph 8 when they show the different type of games they play to have fun.\" The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed\". Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. Another example from the passage is in parragraph 1 \" He was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don Reist invited him to go to\n\nEurope on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a life time. That proves that he had a fun future ahead of him. These two details from the passage proves that participating on the trip was fun.\n\nYou should go on the Seagoing Cowboys program because you get a chance to help people recover the things they lost. One detail from the passage is in parragraph 9, Luke said \" Im grateful for the opportunity, it made me more aware of the people of other countries and theire needs\". Another detail from the passage is in the topic sentence it shows what he did to help people. \"Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times and the Pacific Pcean twise to help people affected by the World War two.\n\nIn conclusion, this is my argument of why people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I think people should do that so that they will know how fun and how helpful there trips are. People should care about other people and not themselves. You also get to go to places you have never been before and see different things.",
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"content": "This program sounds really fun and you should join. Thats what im talking about in my story to day. I hope after this you consider joining.\n\nOne reason I think you should join is it would be a fun experience. You would be able to sightsee while your on the boat. You would get to play games on the boat to pass by time. Most important of all you get to help people and that should make you happy. Thats why I think it would be a fun experince.\n\nAnother reason I think you should join is that its a lifetime oppotunity. You to go to war and save people save our country and would make me smile. You get go on an adventure of a once lifetime and tell me that wouldn't be fun. You also get to serve our country and that is awesome. That why I think it is a lifetime opputunity.\n\nThe last reason is you get to go on a lot of adventures. You get to go places you never been before. You probably will go to the U.K alot. Same for the alantic ocean you will probablay be on it alot. Thats why I think adventures would be fun.\n\nThats my reason and ideas why I think you should come join us at the program. I hope this made up your mind about coming. Alright I'll see you if you come.",
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"content": "It is widely argued that young people should be doing volunteer job in their spare time to assist the local society which will give benefits them and the community as well. I completely agree with this statement as it could improve their personal skills and build a better society. \r\n\r\nFirst, it is significant for teenagers to acquire experience in community service without salary as it brings them to enhance their personal skills such as public speaking and cooperation. These abilities are important not just for their personal growth but also for their forthcoming career. Community service requires them to communicate in the public sphere. It means that this skill is crucial for their CV when they want to apply for their dream jobs. Cooperation, on the other hand, is a basic skill that young people should have. As a result, even though they do not gain material advantages, they will get beneficial skills that are important for their future. \r\n\r\nAnother reason is that they will contribute to building a better society. Young people are considered the best asset of a nation that represents the future of the country as a whole. It means that teenagers have a chance to advance a neighbourhood by doing service. They may assist the community in the field of education, entrepreneurship and others. For instance, university students who live in boarding schools usually involve in the local association agenda such as public gatherings. By doing this, they are considered a part of community building. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, an unpaid job is crucial for teenagers due to benefits to their personal development and society itself. I totally agree as it enhances their public speaking and cooperation skills and they contribute to making a better future for society.",
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"content": "A day family One day cousin husband mom dad gone eat breakfast They grown together telling stories old days made want hangout often They always much fun together I grew cousins around lot time We would always hangout We started talking crazy times nice hear abut old days We laughing storm All sudden cousin farts All us start busting laughing continues fart uncontrollably laughing many people looking us restaurant Here group people laughing one stop farting The laughing got louder well farting mother could take anymore She took one salt shakers started pounding table She wanted drowned sound farts beat red We laughing hard started crying We almost point going pee could hold longer She finally stopped farting pee bad could even walk When got go bathroom walked cross legged slowing All way still laughing also laughing We fun watching stop every often would pee One time stop right two guys chairs She stood laughing cross legged two guys trying best pee The guys really anything sat waiting go away We could tell uncomfortable though I told mom I would uncomfortable random girl bent laughing trying pee I m surprised move would Finally got bathroom Those two guys left came glad see gone When saw could help laugh She laughed us feel bad laughing People still looking us still blushing She wanted go left talked whole way home They coming house play bored games When got home brother joined us game gestures game kinda like sherades We got teams I brothers team My brother went first He started melting ground I shout wicked witch west He frowns says CAPS watch shout things sat watched He whole melting thing got floor started rolling jerking around I confused My cousins shouts poop My brother yells CAPS would anyone want poop We start laughing tells us He waterfall It turn go got horse I want horse I even know horse without making sound I went started hoping around like idiot I felt dumb My team mates made feel even worse could guess life The buzzer rang lost game two points My brother hates lose He got really mad ran stairs On way trips face falls stairs We started laughing made brother even mad He went stairs without falling time stayed room rest The rest us stayed downstairs played games It really fun day I got hangout family get great laugh hanging family something everyone love It one things make feel good",
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"content": "Should we give up our cars in order to live a better life?\n\nThat's the question on everyones mind right now , but it's a no brainer! Places all over the world have done this as an experiment and it seems as if they like the results. Here are a few key points from passages that will help persuade you into joining the idea of getting rid of cars.\n\nVauban, Germany has given up their cars for a better and healther life. So many families in Vauban have given up their cars that 70 percent of them don't even own a car! The reason why Vauban did this is because they realized that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and more than triple that amount in car-intensive areas in the United States. Looking on the bright side of this since there is less space for parking stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway. If you want to drive a car you can always buy a small area for $40,000 that also comes with a house where you can park the car which would have to be a hybrid.\n\nParis did the same thing that Vauban did but in a different way. On Monday mototrist with even- numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine. The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day. Of course there were people who didn't obey the new law and where fined and some even had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine; however, congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog. The only exceptions were plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers since they didn't really affect the pollution as much as cars that use up a lot more gas. Doing this cleared the smog for some time in Paris, in fact, so much of the smog cleared that the French party was actually able to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\n\nInstead of making a law\n\nBOGOTA, Colombia , created a program called car-free day where millions of Colobians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work or to do whatever they had to do. The goal of this program was obvious, to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog (Violators faced $25 fines). For the first time, two other Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event of having no cars except for taxis and busses. By Bogota doing this the parks and sports centers have seen and highly approved of this idea and have turned uneven, pitted sidewalks into broad, smooth sidewalks. Along with the new improvements, new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have appeared.\n\nIn conclusion, getting rid of cars permitly or even just for a day or a week seems like a good idea. Lots of the people mentioned above highly approve of this and say that it actually makes them a lot happier and stress free. Of course the people who don't approve of this idea are the ones who were fined for driving on a no drive zone. All in all i still recommend this idea if things in Florida start to get out of hand and we must resort to something.",
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"content": "The mood story happy paints picture words tells extreme unity happiness house hold neiborhood family He also shows happy grateful ParentsHe paints picture words says My parents originally Cuba And came I born simple house Jersey In house beatiful Cuban music cooking going always family neiborgs paints nice soothing pictureIn story also talks unity neicboorhood made mostly spanish immagrints He talks This shows happy wasIn many places story also says grate ful parents much courage tripAs see mood tory grate ful happy",
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"content": "In memoir author creates happy mood In memoir Narciso Rodriguez talks enjoyed thankful childhood He talking kitchen table surronded family Or say countloss extended family members cane went This shows always people around He also says thankful parents came give children better life Finally says greatful parents I always grateful parents love sacrife memeor author creates happy modd talking childhood surronded family thankes parents sacrifeces made give betters life",
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"content": "Hello,my name is Luke Bomberger and i'm going to talk about the Seagoing Cowboys program. First i'm going to say how fantastic it is being a Seagoing Cowboy. Even though you go on a ship that takes one month to two months it worth the wait getting to the designated area. You can think how many people or animals lives your saving by just becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. Imagine going places you never imagined going, like Greece, China. You can also go see places like a excaved castle in Crete even the Panam Canel\n\nEven if the animals have to be fed and watered two to three times a day it's still worth it. You will be tired from pulling bales of hay and bags of oats even stalls had to be clean. There is good things about being a Seagoing Cowboy like when your on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. We had tabel tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nI hoped you liked what i said about being a Seagoing Cowboy because i loved being at one. I hope you sign up and become one to, thank you.",
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"content": "The Untied states of america have some of the most interesting history in the world from their food,people to the govrnment. They have a system of govrnment called a representative democery in this system they elect people to represent your groups need and want,but the thing that makes them intereseting isn't the way they run their country it is the way that they elect their representatives.\n\nThey use what is called The electoral college to elect their leader this system has it's problems, for an example the people aren't voting for who will be their leader other wise know as the president,but for the people who will vote for the president. Even though this system has it's down side it also helps them in a lot of ways. this stops you form having a popular vote meaning more then just two parties can send their rep.\n\nDo you know the saying if it is not broken don't fix it well the Electoral college is that system america has use this system for so long and they aren't the type of people for change that fast, farther more the Electoral college is only used for the president compare the two system by looking at their other branchs their all doing pretty bad right now. Thats why if it ain't broke don't fix it.",
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"content": "A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can be programed into computers to allow them to identify human emotions. This new technology can be very helpful, and useful in many different ways.\n\nSince the technology is in the early stages of developement, the full potetial of it can not be beneficial right now. Despite that, it should not be overlooked. This new piece of technology can, and would provide students with the help they need.\n\nIn an average classroom a teacher never has enough time to help the needs of all his or her students. With the help of Facal Action Coding that could all change. Each individual student could get the help they need without the urgent need of a teacher. A student could walk out of their classroom and fully understand the subject being taught to them. However, this could only be achieved with the help of the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nIn a typical classroom environment a teacher would not be able to know if his or hers student understand the current lesson being taught to them. With the help of Facial Action Coding System any computer could tell wether a student is struggeling. As stated in the text \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". Now with the help of the Facial Action Coding System a computer could help the student with any struggels, or could notify the teacher.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could also help out by telling if a student is happy or upset. As stated in the passage \"Imagine a computer that knows when you are happy or sad\". With this being put to good use, a teacher or a counselor could tell at any given moment in time if a student could be struggeling emotionally. This could be greatly beneficial to the school distric.\n\nFinally, the Facial Action Coding System could be very beneficial if used to read students emotional expressions. A struggeling student could get the help he or she might need. A student could get help even when their teacher might not be able to help. A teacher could modify a lesson to fit the students needs. In layments terms, this brand new technology should be put to use in the classroom.",
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"content": "Some people believe that firms should have social obligations in addition to being only commercial ones. I completely concur with your point of view because doing so results in firms making investments in their sustainable development.\r\n\r\nIn the short term, taking on societal obligations, such as environmental and social ones, could give firms chances to earn money. Businesses can raise their financial credit scores by meeting their tax responsibilities. This is so that firms have the opportunity to approach low-interest loans and raise money more successfully since they can demonstrate that their tax records are clean. Businesses can so benefit from their competition over rivals and increase their earnings. Additionally, adopting manufacturing techniques that reduce environmental harm is profitable for companies. By employing this tactic, firms can avoid paying hefty environmental taxes and are shielded from boycotts by environmental groups.\r\n\r\nIn the long term, this tactic might bring both new clients and lasting earnings. When exercising social responsibility, such as through charitable endeavors, one is making an investment in the market’s future. This claim is explained by the idea that by assisting the poor in escaping abject poverty and achieving a higher quality of living, businesses are generating new potential customers who would ultimately buy more of their products in the future. Additionally, this tactic assists firms in attracting new clients. In fact, when corporations take on public obligations, they can create an image of themselves as wealth-generating economic units that also help society overcome problems and achieve common objectives. Later, new clients will enter as a result of helping to strengthen relationships and trust between businesses and the community.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, businesses should take on social responsibilities because doing so is a wise investment in their long-term sustainability even though they are economic entities that produce wealth.",
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"content": "The problem situation people feel like things nt library I nt believe things library shelfs taken I think everyone different kinda offensive families One family might okay child watching certain movie listening different kinds usic reading differnt genre s books If took people would nt able express things way want PLus library would lose service people would realize particular library restrictions stuff shelfs would nt want go re going let something looking",
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"content": "Studying other planets can be very helpful. It can provide us with so much information that we might need. In \" the challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. The author says that not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally endeavors.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and sometimes the closest in distance. Each time humans would sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world, it would not survive the landing for more than a few hours. This this might be the issue why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus. As stated in the article, \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us\". So, despite all the challenges contributed to Venus, it's worth of studying.\n\nAs the article states,\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus could have probably support various forms of life, because long ago Venus was covered largely with oceans. The article states, \" The planet has\n\na surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\". Until today Venus still has some features that are similar to Earth. Going to study Venus is not an easy condition but survivable for humans. It's survivable for humans, because at thirty-plus miles above the surface, as to temperture or air pressure, would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Also, solar power would be plentiful and the radition would not exceed Earth levels. Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering from far above the planet would not help, it would provide limited insight on the ground conditions. It would provide us with limited insight on ground because most forms of light cannot penetrate through the dense atmosphere. What's more important is that scientists cannot take rocks or samples of gas from a distance that far. As the article states, \" Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" So, studying Venus from a far distance is not going to help, they need to get closer despite the risk.\n\nStudying other planets should not be limited in distance because of danger and doubts. We should expand our studying dispite the dangers. Studying Venus is worthy pursuit because it might provide some features that are similar to Earth.",
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"content": "I agree that using the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom is valuable. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. This new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising applications for a variety of industries. First of all, it can reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored. It could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\n\nSecondly, The facial expressin for each emotion are universal. Using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions.\n\nFinally, Dr. Huang observes that artist such as da Vinci studied human anatomy help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\n\nAs you can see, the Facial Acton Coding System helps in the classroom.",
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"content": "Has parents ever sent application job Well uncle patient He wanted job kid wanted ice cream One day uncle typed application job wanted When done copied paste email When pressed send hurried grabbed phone hoping job He looked phone right got making sure missed calls messages He knew patient He still waiting call still nothing It one week thinking calling place didnt Then got phone call afternoon quickly ran like cheetah get phone I mom asking got job said sigh I felt bad poor guy knowing yet one day The next morning got call picked screaming CAPS want knowing boss job So apologized also got job He happy knowing waited forever sort patiently got job wanted When went work new job really loved got knew always knew patient everything work great So knowing always patient matter deal My uncle expert Again remember always patient good things come way",
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"content": "A lot of countries spend huge amount of payments on conducting competitions in events such as the Olympic and football world cup games. But, some peoples believe instead they should invest this amount to motivate children to take up sports at a small age. In this essay I would like to express my opinion with suitable example.\n\n\nTo start with, firstly it is really good thought, to encourage children to take up sports at a young age and I completely agree with that as it is a good thing because if we motivate them in young age then only we can get great players. But, what is the point then when they can't represent their county. Due to which they will start losing the interest as well. For instance, we spend a lot of amount on children in motivating them to play sports, but as they grow up and there is no competition, they will loss interest of continuing it as they don't have any objective left.\n\n\nSecondly, this event conducted by countries is not only for one objective. It has many objectives behind it, firstly it encourages players from your country and another country to come together and represent their home country. It also help the country to increase in employment as well as an increase in tourism. It also benefits a lot as it also bring in foreign currency. For example, country who host Olympic games they do spend a lot for the event, but it also allow them to earn back by an increase in peoples flying to that country to see the event which automatically increases in inflow of foreign currency.\n\n\nTo summarize, we should encourage teens to play games, but having sports affair can also help in generating capital which can be used for kids. So I disagree that there should be no event as having events benefit country, raise in jobs, rise in cash flow and it also help in making good relation with other countries.",
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"content": "The obstacles Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock safety people Also As says existing law airships flying low urban areas Another main reason The wind currents violently shifting",
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"content": "I think that the Face they saw in 1976 was just a natural landform. I will be giving you at least 4 reasons why that's my conclusion. After you have listened to my reasons hopefully you will then think the same.\n\nMy first reason why I think it was just a natural landform is becasue first of all I am a scientist and I'm not suppose to think aliens and that kind of stuff exist. Secondly, on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor took a picture of Cydonia for the first time all they saw was just a natural landform. One of my other reasons why is becasue we thought it was just a Martian mesa, witch are very common in Cydonia. My last reason is becasue with the 3D high-resolution images from NASA's MGS it shows that it was just a mesa.\n\nThose were all my reasons why I think it was a natural landform not an alien. Hopefully now you agree with me and think it was just a natural landform too. Also I hope that you have come to your senses and now think that aliens are not real.",
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"content": "How often do you ride in a car? Do you drive a one or any other motor vehicle to work? The store? To the mall? Have you ever thought about how many people in the world do that exact same thing- travel to every destination using a fuel powered motorvehicle. Not many people realize the intenisve damage that they're doing when they turn their key in the egnition. What if you didn't drive to work today? If you're like any regular car user, the thought \"What?! I could never survive without my car!\" may run through your mind. It is possible though, to live without your main mean of transport. Just look at cities like Vuban, Paris, and Bogota; each one has in some way restricted their people's usage of cars and they actually enjoy it! If you limit your car usage, it can inturn result in many advantages and benefits in yourself and in your community.\n\nA not so recognized benefit to giving up your car usge would be the positive consequences it has on your health. In source 1, Heidrun Walter states that \"When [he] had a car, [he] was always tense. [He's] much happier [without it].\" Think about it, imagine all the angry road rage you experience while driving. That surely does not have a positive effect on your mood or health. Driving takes a copious amount of focus and mental activity, such as, trying to navigate, dealing with bad drivers, etc., that after a short period of time, you're stressed out and tired. In cities like New York and Paris, the population is high. This leads to congestion in the streets and excessive amounts of pollution. Warm layers of air, according to Robert Duffer in \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" traps the car emissions. How is that healthy? He also states that Paris had to enforce a temporary driving ban after the pollution levels reached an all time record. After a few days of less driving the pollution went way down. Since people aren't driving, they have to find other means of transport. This could include walking, biking, or skating to destintions. Those are all physical excercises! Your body is getting to work out and you'll mentally feel fresher; more than you would sitting in a car.\n\nTaking a break from driving also can help with the overall look of your city. Pollution doesn't cause the flowers to grow. It certainly doesn't smell nice. It sets a filter over the town and gives off a \"dirty\" vibe. With less driving, there is less nasty pollution being emitted, therefore leading to a cleaner community. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's article, \"In German Suburb, Life goes on Without Cars,\" she gives the good point that since there is a restriction on car and motor vehicle transportation, there is going to be more walkers. If you have tons of people taking the sidewalks instead of the roads, you might need a few more pathways and closer stores that are in walking distance. Andrew Selsky states that \"Parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city; uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks... and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\"\n\nAs stated previously, pollution is not benefiting the environment. Organizations such as the Envronmental Protection Agency in the U.S., are promoting \"car reduced\" communities, says Rosenthal. These communities have far less pollution and are much cleaner. Cities are also promoting this idea and are having days devoted to \"no-car driving.\" In Bogota, Colombia, they hold an anual \"car-free\" day where only buses and taxis are permitted. Any other drivers would be fined. Although fining someone for using a posession they own might ruffle some feathers, it did have a successful turn out and significantly reduced the \"smog.\"\n\nIn conclusion, although the idea of giving up our precious automobiles for walking to our destination might sound impossible, it's not. Reducing our driving can lead to many benefits and advantages in our daily lives. These include an increase in health, an improved look to our cities, and an improved environment all around us. So, instead of picking up the car keys next time you have to go to work, try dusting off the helmet and take a bike ride!",
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"content": "Driverless cars are something that has been talked about for many years now. Google has even tried to create them. They have only gotten as far as semi driverless. Google says that these cars will reduce your feul costs and for public transportation, maximize carrying room for passengers.\n\nThis sounds great and all, but if you are in a motorized vehicle that you have no control over, what happens when if the technology were to somehow fail and you and other people get into an accident. You can get into an accident with a regular car, but the thing about that is, you have some control over the vehicle, while with the driverless car you have none.\n\nAlso another topic about the driverless cars was about public transportation with buses and taxis. If you have driverless cars then what happens to the people who were once taxi or bus drivers. They would be putting innocent people out of jobs, for a potentially unsafe alternative.\n\nLastly what happens when there is an accident, who are you going to blame, the manufacturers or the person in the car? This would create a lot of controversy, the manufacturers saying it was the persons fault for buying the car, and the person saying it was the manufacturers fault for creating and building such a faulty car. Along with that and all the laws that would need to be changed and negotiated.\n\nIn the end it feels like the driverless cars would cause more trouble than do good. There would be a higher risk for accidents because of potentially faulty technology, people would be out of jobs because of a possibly unsafe alternative, and lastly problems with court if someone got into an accident, along with all of the laws that would need to be made, negotiated, and taken out. At the end of the day, these driverless cars would be a lot more trouble than they're worth.",
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"content": "Speeding into the Future\n\nEveryone wants to have the latest and greatest technology. Recent developments in the field of science has allowed the rapid introduction of new inventions. Those inventions are produced and introduced into the market quickly. These new creations are designed to make human life easier. The development of driverless cars should not continue. It should not contunue because there are legal issues that have yet to be discussed, the prices of cars increase, and computers cannot do everything that humans can do.\n\nThe first red light is the issue of all the legal battles that would come with self driving cars. Few driverless cars are on the roads. There would have to be more testing to see if they work better than those driven by humans. The issues that would need to be solved include who would be at fault in an accident. If a person is not in control of the car, they should not be liable for the accident. However, the automaker also really isn't at fault since the consumer bought the vehicle at their own risk. It would be a never ending blame game. Some may believe that changing the laws would be easy. However, this is a complex issue and would take years. The US government looks into both sides of issues extensively, but the opposing parties would make it close to impossible for anything to pass. The government should spend time worrying about more serious issues such as diplomatic relations and solving the social issues of the American people. Driverless cars are a distraction and should not continue to be developed.\n\nIn addition to the red lights of legal battles, there are detours surrounding the price issue. These cars will lead to an increase in the price of vehicles. All the sensors, global position systems (GPS), radars, and cameras will raise the already skyhigh prices even higher. The average car payment in the US per month is over $400. Average new car prices are well over $20,000. With the new technology, those prices will go up. Adding expensive technology will raise the overall price. Some economists and technological enthusiasts would argue that the prices of all the gadgets have gone down-radar was once two million dollars. However, the multitude of devices on the new cars would still add up to a ton. Car insurance would also go up because of the new risks on the road, as well as the fact that cars will go up. The money that will potentially be charged to the consumers is best spent elsewhere.\n\nThe last major roadblock for the journey of driverless cars is that computers cannot do everything that humans can do. In the article, it states that drivers still have to take over when the circumstances are too difficult for computers to handle, such as heavy traffic, backing up, or construction zones. If this is true, can a computerized car be trusted completey to get a person from the starting point to the destination safely? Opponents would argue that car crashes kill thousands of people every year in the United States. They would say that self-driving cars could lower that number. However, heavy traffic, backing up, and construction zones are not that difficult. If the driverless cars cannot do those simple tasks, then investing time and money will not make driving any safer.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should no longer be under construction. Their development should be stalled. There are too many legal issues to manuver, the prices of cars would increase, and computers cannot do everything that humans can do. So, instead of speeding into the future with driverless cars, let us carefully cruise into what science has in store.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows Saeng wants take test wants take test everything else good happy returns like plant geese This true Saeng says When geese come back hibiscus budding I take test This shows maturity happiness happiness She wants something hard maybe even fun everything else returns happy Just came sad geese plant comes back wants help make happy This way happy time",
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"content": "Venus is the closest planet to earth reffering to the density and size. Venus is has the hottest surface temperature making it close to impossble to study the planet for more than a few hours. The author gives details to this claim by telling us that there are erupting volcanoes, lightining stirkes, and frequent lightning. The author gave good details including the avergae temperature of over 800 degrees. This shows how the author gives details on how he supports this claim.\n\nAnother claim with good support is when the author mentions \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. He supports this, by telling us \"eletronics made of silicone carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks\". Then the author eplained how a project in 1940s during World War ll was used by levers and gears and do not require electronics at all. The author gives great details at first but goes off topic by telling us about a device in the 1940s during World War ll. This shows that the author that the author gives us bad details not supporting the topic at all.\n\nThe author gives good support in the beggining, but in the middle gives us bad support toward the end that has nothing to do on what he giving details about. Overall the author gives good support in The Challenge of Exploring Venus.",
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"content": "People have different views concerning the question of how to tackle serious juvenile crime. In my opinion children should be responsible for their crime, yet according to the severity of their actions, immature criminals should be punished the same as adults or not.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, in the case of petty crimes such as robbery or fighting, I argue that young children should be punished with more lenient sentences. This is because they are too young to be fully aware of what they have done or to control their aggressive emotions. Therefore, instead of being punished in the same way as adults by being sentenced with 1-year imprisonment, youth criminals should be punished with community service. By doing so, they can compensate for their wrong acts as well as be deterred from reoffending.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in some serious crimes such as murder, I strongly support the view that the same punishments should be imposed on juvenile killers. It is undeniable that this kind of offence is extremely serious and leaves long-term implications for the victims’ family members. Besides, killers pose a threat to the security of society, so they should be sentenced with heavy punishments regardless of their age. For instance, a Vietnamese teenager still recieved capital punishment due to the inhumane nature in his motives and the ways he killed the whole family. In other words, with serious crimes, strict punishments can act as a deterrent against would-be culprits.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I hold a firm belief that the punishments that youth criminals should receive should be based on the severity of the crime. In particular, while juvenile offenders commit some petty crimes should be punished to a lesser degree, serious crimes such as murder should not be reconsidered no matter what age killers are.",
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"content": "I patient I went doctors When I went doctors mom wait patient long time It felt like years alone hour doctor called us back room wait long period time nother halfhour waited I asked mom why take forever mom said because people befor us oh I said ok",
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"content": "In the article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit depite the danger it present by sending\n\npoeple up into space to study venus and facing the danger and the challenges of exploring venus. In the article they have proved a very challenging place to examine venus more closely.\n\nIn the article they have sent numerous of spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. They have send alot of spacecraft and none of them survied the landing for more than a few hour. The National Aeronautics and Space Administation has one particularly complelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA have a possible solution to hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. In the article in pargraph 5 states that \" solar power would be pletiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" Scientists have a safety way for humans including the scientists to go up into venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely however, they can only provide only limited insight on ground conditon because, most form of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\n\nThe challenges of exploring venus is diffucult astronomers are fascinated by venus becasue it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in out solar system. Since scientist want to take humans up to space to explore venus it also be dangerous because, It cannot take anything for example they can't take rocks, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientists are finding another way. In paragraph 3 it states \" on the planet surface,\n\ntemperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth. It is dangrous for humans to go up their especially, if we are not use to that type of weather.\n\nThe challanges of facing the danger to explore venus and to send human up into space is a big challage. The author have claim that it is possible to send human into space but it going to be a challange without any danger to anyone.",
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"content": "Why author concludes author wants show wont give take test try harder next time overcome challenge give The author wants show shes quitter shes filled determination even though conflicts",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports this idea pretty well.\n\n\"The Challenges of Explooring Venus\" says \"Venus, something called the Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of lights in the night\n\nsky. making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot\". The authoor explain it very carefully and in intersting way. The other thing that author did is he give us an evidens of what he is talking about and he explain it. Like\"On the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrebheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". This part was so important because it is telling about what is the degrees and the time.\n\nSo it's mean the author supports this ideas pretty good. He tell us about everything that we can think off. He explains everything that he says in the aritcle.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast builders faced obstacles safety nature law attempting dock dirigibles atop empire state building First would safe In excerpt stated Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable In densely populated area New York could nt risk dirigible burst flames cause massive chaos Second nature would agree In excerpt stated The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast Because winds New York dirigible would secured well many dirigibles would destroyed instead held place Lastly reason law It excerpt explained The practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas This important reason They could ve taken risks theories one choice They would nt able fight law allow dirigibles fly low To conclude obstacles faced builders safety nature law could overcome get mast working",
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"content": "Driverless cars are not in the best interest for humans. People like to be in control. Men and women won't want to give up their freedom of driving their own vehicles. The feeling of being proud to drive yourself around will over power the easiness of having a car, just drive you.\n\nDriverless cars are not even close to being ready, some can only go up to 25 mph. With highways and freeways a 25 mph car serves no purpose. The article states, \"... but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. If you have to hold on to the wheel, then you might as well drive yourself.\n\nNow, with the popularity of driverless cars growning, some states have outloud the driverless cars. \"In most states it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars.\" Being able to drive from state to state is a great privilage in the United States. Having a driverless car would only be good for a state that aloud it. Vacations across the Us would become much more difficult, if you weren't even aloud to \"drive\" your own car.\n\nFinally, Computers have been gettign hacked sense the first one was invented. A hacker hacks it, the computer malfunctions and all files are erased or it acts on terms that you can not control. Driverless vechicles run on a computer based system. It only takes one terrorist or criminal to figure out how to hack it and crashes could occur within a push of a button. But, these cars could be useful to get a good nap in, or rest so someone isn't tired and driving. They could also help out with drunk driving. The only problem is, that there are to many difficulties that come with these new products and they will never be in the peoples good interest if they are not solved.\n\nDriverless cars are the things of the FUTURE. Right now in present time they are to difficult to make, and dangers within their processing are not correctly set up. Driverless cars would cause a negative impact in our society.",
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"content": "It is often said that people should be able to save money that they earned and not have to pay taxes. I partly agree with this point of view and in this essay, I will give arguments supporting my opinion.\n\nUndoubtedly, people should spend their income wisely to be able to pay all bills related to their households. We should learn to live within our means and avoid being in debt. When people are extravagant, they squander large sums of money and lose track of what they spend. As a result, they have to struggle with a serious debt burden. On the contrary, people who check all transactions in their bank statements put aside a part of income into their emergency fund for contingencies. For example, I am a thrifty person and I set my own budget for every year and try to spend in accordance with it. Consequently, I can accumulate money for traveling and my daughter’s education.\n\nHowever, it is unwise to avoid paying taxes. It is well known that public services such as transport networks, medicine, schools, and so on are supported by governments fund, that includes a different range of income as well as taxes paid by citizens and residents. It is unfair to use public services and do not contribute to the tax system of the country where you reside. Moreover, your tax payments might help people who cannot provide their own living, such as disabled persons or families who bereaved their breadwinners. \n\nIn conclusion, while we should be able to spend money reasonably and do not waste our earned income, nevertheless, we need to pay off all our bills including all mandatory taxes, otherwise, we will enjoy public services that are funded by other people. It is obvious that we should be involved with the state’s budget because we are residents of this state.",
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"content": "There handful problems came along idea docking dirigibles Empire State Building This idea hardly practical safety reasons mostly If dirigible docked one cable extreme tension would put building Also international dirigible dock filled flammable hydrogen catch fire results would catostrophicThe task actually docking would problem well With high altitude winds strong Nothing could prevent dirigibles swinging around building In situations dirigibles would weighted lead weights However fall would land busy city streets New York Lastly law low flying air ships completely dismissing idea docking dirigibles Empire State Building",
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"content": "Everyone has heard of the Face found on the Red Planet from a region called Cydonia, right? It was pretty interesting and a very amazing thing. It became a pop icon and starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows. Everyone believed this was evidence for life on Mars. But that was shut down after another picture was taken of the Face that didn't quite look like a face at all.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 Michael Maling and his Mars Orbiter Camera team took a trip to Cydonia for the first time. There, they were able to snap a more clear and sharper picture of the Face than the original photos. After looking at it, the picture didn't show a face. It just showed a natural landform.\n\nAlthough, the picture was proof that it was just a normal landform, not everyone was satisified. The Face on Mars is found at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998. It was a cloudy time of the year on the Red Planet and the camera used to take the photo had to peer through the clouds to view the Face. Some skeptics said that maybe the alien markings were hidden by the haze of the clouds.\n\nThe mission controllers were prepared for a second look. On April 8, 2001, a cloudless day in Cydonia, the Mars Global Surveyor went to find the Face. What the picture showed was the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. Which are landforms common in the American West.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face was not made by aliens. The Face has nothing to do with aliens and wasn't made or created by them. The Face isn't The sharper pictures taken in 1998 and 2001 show proof that the Face is actually just a natural landform.",
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"content": "Nowadays, the upward trend of fuel consumption is one of the main reasons for environmental degradation. Some individuals believe that the price of fuel should be increased to tackle this problem. Although I agree with this opinion, I think that the increasing rate of fuel cost would also have negative effects on society.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, raising the price of fuel will be far beneficial. According to this, many people would avoid driving their own cars since they will not be able to afford the high cost of fuel. Besides, they will be motivated to take more public transportation instead of their private cars, resulting in decreasing the heavy traffics. Therefore, the lower consumption of fuel will improve the quality of air, reducing many health problems. For instance, many people have died annually as a result of lung cancer and respiratory diseases that are caused by air pollution.\r\n\r\non the other hand, increasing the fuel cost would have many drawbacks. Firstly, the public transportation cost will be escalated due to the expensive fuel. Secondly, the transportation expenses for businesses would also be raised. In such cases, companies will be forced to increase the prices of their products to compensate for these high expenses. Thus, people would be burdened with higher living costs. If the government can control these increasing rates of transportation and goods, the solution of high fuel prices would be more advantaged.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while increasing the fuel cost could place many people under the pressure of difficult economic situations, I agree that it is vital for solving environmental problems.",
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"content": "The \"human face\" on the Mars was not an alien creature, it was a natural lanform, created by the force of nature. Here are the reasons why the \"Face of human\" is not created by aliens. First, the \"human face\" 's shape changed when photography technology improved. Second, digital pictures showed that there was no living creatures or flying objects around the \"human face\". Third, mesaes were common on Mars.\n\nIn 1976, people used film cameras to take pictures, these camera had low graphics, when you zoom in the pictures, the pictures becomes large pixels. But cameras nowadays have much smaller pixels, it allows us to take more detailed pictures. The \"human face\" was unclear in 1976, it only appeared as a human face shape. But in 2001, it becomes very clear , you can see the details on the \"human face\", the shadow of the eyes disappeared, the surface was full of scratches.\n\nThe digital picture in 2001 gave scientist a lot space to work on the \"human face\". The scientists zoomed in the picture to find living creatures on the surface. The result was that there was nothing on the surface but dust.\n\nThe \"human face\" is actually a mesa, it is unique because it was big. But there were a lot of mesaes on Mars, they had different sizes and shapes. The \"human face\" was the special one, its outline was formed by wind, luckily it became a human face. These mesaes are just like the lava dome in Snake River Plain of Idaho, they are both formed by natural force.\n\nWith these three reasons, scientists are able to prove that the \"human face\" is not an alien creature, it is a natural landform.",
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"content": "I think reason author ended story paragraph time thinks ready retake drivers test Before made move dishearted failed test Maybe picked spring time gives time get together practice spring time",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock These obstacles included redesign modify building structure dangers dirigible catching fire swirling winds state law The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof NUM This building originally built capability This meant order meant sixty thousand dollars modification spent Another obstacle faced natural dangers dirigible Dirigibles likely chance catching fire displayed Hindenburg If accident happen densely populated area New would catastrophe Another obstacle winds building always swirling rapidly Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swiveled around around mooring mast NUM This would dangerous something large spinning round round The last obstacle faced builders state law aircraft flying low mooring mast This would make illegal mooring mast used This probably considered Overall poor planning created many obstacles builders letting dirigibles dock",
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"content": "I think books music movies magazines anything thats offensive took shelves lil kids read books dont need hear reed offensive things But time peope wan na hear reed things like area librarie materials like kinds libraries offensive books movies magazines reasons take offensive materials shelves could racist offening certin things people nt wan na see reed white people hating black people black people hating white people type racist things It shouldnt alounded hurt someones feelings I observations reading books school librarie came acrossed words offensive like books use word nigger since im black s offensive know saying still say kinda touches way Im sayin offensive towards people way could like said instead offensive books shelves one area materials like could found stead material childeren people get offened The last thing wan na talk childeren people dont wan na see nasty things books kid wouldnt want childeren c nasty things could offensive books also talk drugs people dont wan na hear read people also wan na see read things like like older people diffent point views things thats one area libraries materials like In conclustion think hear take say material thats books music magazines offensive anybody race could offened see read place libraries",
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"content": "The story I read is called Unmasking The Face on Mars. I will conveince people that it was not created by aliens. That it was a natural land form amd mothing else.\n\nThe face on Mars is a natural land form that is just rocks and the shadows that made it look like a face. The way the rocks were fromed they made it look like a face when it really was not. The shadows from the planet also played a part in the story. It gave an illusion that the eyes, nose, and mouth peolpe just wanted to make a big deal of nothing.\n\nThe way the people tried to make it bigger than what it is that makes people more hype and they are going to think that it life on Mars. There is nothing on Mars like an other life froms. It was just a crazy story that somebody made up to get people to panic or take intrest in nothing. All they did was make free addvirstivement for NASA thats really all they did.They was all over the place they was in magazines, books, Hollywood films and haunted grocery store checkout.\n\nSome of the scientist wanted it to be a alien artifact but they knew it was not. If it was aliens it could have been big for the NASA funding. They could have had a lot of money to buy more stuff to get more on the face. It had to shoot threw clouds to see the face so the clouds could have made it look like a face. It was also winter time so that could have played an important part in the Mars face story. If thier're is any thing there you would have saw it in the image three times bigger than the pixel size. If there was a plane on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even a small shack, you could see what they were.\n\nThats why there is no aliens on Mars I think it would never be any life in Mars. If there ever was any life on the Red Planet it would have been found. There will never be life on Mars as I am concerned.",
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"content": "With public transportation unit many challengers expected problems unable solved Based excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State Building faced plenty obstacles attempts allow dirigibles blimps dock In regards docking dirigibles breaking existing law airships flying low urban areas Which made builders procedure illegal Also dangor citizens New York City due weather conditions dangorous passengers workers dirigible Lsted states The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This goes show project checked safety precautions times",
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"content": "The smile of the Mona Lisa has\n\neluded people for centuries. The slightly smug look suggests an\n\nemotion that not many people can detect. Luckily, there appears to be a software that can detect one's emotion based off of the facial movements one makes.The software was developed by Dr. Huang of the Beckman Institute, and there could be so many uses that this technology could be applied to. One such example is the classroom, where teachers will know when a student is becoming confused or bored. However, one must ask the questions that this technology brings. In essence, this software is not useful, applicable or effective inside of the classroom because of the cost of the software, the intrusion of privacy, and a host of other problems. Computing technology could have the ability to be useful inside of the classrom, just not this kind.\n\nThe first point that would make teachers unsure is the cost of the software. In the article, there is no mention of the cost of the newly developed software. There are numbers, indeed, but they are simply percentages or single numbers. Based on what the article said, one could assume that the cost of this technology would be high. This would not be a very effective tool for an average American school, but the tech could be applied to richer schools or universities.\n\nSecondly, the software is an intrusion of privacy in the school. Although most public schools are indeed public places where civilians expose themselves, it also has a private element to it. Think of it as a small shard of individuality and alone time, like when one is at lunch. The software, if mounted on a camera or a tripod, would be able to observe every single student and every emotion in the room. Schools do need safety, indeed , but the use of this technology in an academic situation just seems proposterous. An alternative use would be to use this technology in hospitals, where nurses could percieve the emotion of patients, and whether they are in pain or not.\n\nAlthough the technology developed by Dr. Huang and his colleagues is certainly impressive, the use of it in a school enviroment seems odd and misinformed. Schools are still meant to be relatively private places where people can feel safe and secure. The costs of this technology is unknown, but it is likely that it is not cheap. Artificial intelligence is meant to be used as efficiently as possible, and although scientists do have free reign on what they use this software for, applying it in schools is not the best way to make use of it.",
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"content": "Driverless cars will be a bad idea in many ways. They could maunfuciton and create a crash or maybe even death. The car can also watch you, People prefer to have some privacy instead of being monitored 24hrs a day. You have too be on alert everytime you get in the driverless cars. Its like driving people buy it too not drive. Driverless cars are not yet ready to function and Im guessing they will never be.\n\nDiverless cars will casue to much problems. You never know when something can go wrong. The article states that the car notifys the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, the driver could be sleeping and not hear it and maybe cause a crash. If the car is diverless then the car needs no human skill to function it in tough situations. The car can also cause traffic jams if the car breaks it will automatically shut off since its broken. The car can only handle 25 mph so that means no freeways or public roads. also if your in a hurry how are you going to get there in time.\n\nThe car will be to expensive, If the brakes dont work your going to have to reapir them right away. If the sterring decides not work properly will the car is operating things can go down hill. A bmw part can cuase up to a million dollars imagine repairng the driverless car proberly like 20 million. They say the want to make driverless cars a taxi how much will it cost to get a ride and who will be responsible if the car crashes will your in it.\n\nImagine buying a driverless car and you dont even drive it and get in an accident and you are responsible for the damage. From my point of view it has to be the companies since the owner is not tecnically driving. I would be pretty mad if i had to pay for the damage,the car is driving itself and the companies program it to do that. Imagine how much the car will cost and the insurace,alot of money.\n\nDriverless cars is not a good idea in our world becuase its not safe. The car can only go 25 mph and you need to stay alerted 24/7, I rather drive than let a car drive for me. People will feel safer if a human operates it than a machine. Driverless cars can cause accidents,traffic jams and even death. The driverless car doesnt know how to hands tough situations like roadblocks, tough traffic if you get pulled over will the vehical even pull over. If the car crashed I am pretty sure the company will have nothing to do with it since you bought it. The car can get in an acciedent and you didnt even drive but you still have to pay, I would be mad. Our society is not ready for this yet and hopefully they dont waste there money on something that can lead to bad things.",
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"content": "The innovation computers great leap discovery Unfortunately negative aspects magnificent invention detract novelty With computer came plague exercising disinterest perhaps even inabilty enjoy nature On top destruction mind monster cruel cause many declining relationships time friends family middle internet game As unique intriguing computer might slowly destroying mind Increasing interest monitor tends result decreasing care exercise well decline amount exercise gotten day While playing computer mind racing body sits unmoving activity done Indeed addiction awful enough person moves get food use restroom go bed parent demands All day s food settles stomach little none burned Meanwhile severe cases person entranced bedtimes pushed later Sleep essential body mind going without damaging Nowadays computer detracts sleep exercise body requires Even nature suffered advent computers Fewer people went admire beauty Nature wonderful teacher circle life natural way world Oftentimes parallels drawn wild tamed Attached people computers experience world fullest Some argue flora fauna found online seeing picture different almost cheating compared beside plant able study angles rather unmoving form The experience Also computers indoors true world chielded view Even nowadays laptops one brought outside user would focusing screen around Computers severely cut admiration nature Even family friends suffer computers around Many people barely pay attention conversation focusing screen They tend onlypretend listen half time Even chatting friends online conversation disjointed attention probably focused another part internet Frequently conversations without computer nearby mind focused something earlier day Relationships suffering computers fault Computers sucking society day Much done computers like study faraway places easily found books Computers resulted lack exercise less time nature strained relationships generally unhealthy lifestyle Through returned little society Why world continue put computers negative effect humanity",
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"content": "i would make cars to use for transportion but i would not let everybody paid 500 for the car notes. then telvison have a long been fascinated cause it been there longer so when i get done i would make my cars and telvison. we got make alot drive way and it going be alot traffic. some people dont crash that mean it alot people can drives. Some people can't drive because they didnt pay attienion on the road because text and drive then they crash. people like us we follow the direction on the road so we wont get crash or ran over anything so the car wont get hit by any thing. but we can get together on the road some people like to text and die i dont wont nobdy to see that. Some people dont pay attenion to the light on the street oor not in the right lane or turn when u suppose to turn that why we got lot driverless. Then alot people dont got they driver liences. Then people dont be in the lane right turn when u suppose to turn. some people can't park right because they dont pay attetions. that why we dont get caught. if you can't find what you want then u can get a navigating so you can be on your way to whatever your you go. that why driverless are coming.",
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"content": "The author created mood immense gratefulness The author knows every family Cuban possibly get together truly happy grateful Not every family work well everyone else Not every family satisfaction sharing giving others This feeling gratefulness parents The authors consistantly praises courageous acts even going law help need The parens brought happiness welcoming different sharing happiness The author incredible experience eternally grateful wonderful parents",
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"content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" is about the author explaining why it is dangerous and not easy to study.\n\nThey do know somethings about the planet but think we should explore it more. The problem is is that Venus is dangerous and not fit for people or spieces to visit it. They explained that the planet is almost 97% carbon dioxide, and the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Even on the planets surface it is dangerous, the average tempature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmoshperic presure is 90 times greater then ours. There also have been reports of erupting volcanos, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes. It is literally hotter then anything in our solor system, including murcury.\n\nSo why would they want to explore Venus more? Astronomers are fascinated, thats why! They think it could've been like Earth a long time ago. There have been signs of oceans, and perphase could've held life. The planets surface of rocky sediment and features such as valleys, montains and craters all say something to the atronomers. They also think that Venus is the nearest option for a plantary visit, so they could study if this is true. They want to make it as safe as possible when people actually go to Venus and it would be a big movement for th people of earth if we went there and survived.\n\nThough the planet might not be safe, they want to engineer Venus safe products so they can one day visit Venus. It would be productive studying what it is like and bring back samples of rock, gas, or anything else they can find. As long as everything goes as swell as planned they could know more about venus and more about what we can do to make the Earth a more healthier place to live on, so it won't end up like Venus. They also give a speech about \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts, but should be ezpanded to meet the bery edges of imagination and innovation.\"",
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"content": "With mechanization, machines have become an extension of our everyday life. In earlier days, many household chores were done manually ,however, nowadays population rely heavily on the gadget to complete different home jobs. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of using machines in our daily life.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, with the discovery of electric machines, much of the housework has become easier to carry out. A number of tedious household chores that required a great deal of human effort have now become a piece of cake. For instance, washing clothes by hand and cleaning the house using a broom is now replaced by washing machines and house cleaning robot machines. Furthermore, another benefit of using electrical appliances at home is that it saves time. As machines can assist in completing multiple tasks simultaneously, most of the work around the house can be finished quickly. For example, previously chopping vegetables, grinding ingredients for food were time-consuming feats because they were done manually. Nowadays, with food processors and blenders, this can be done by just flicking a switch.\r\n\r\nHowever, the advent of machines in housework has its drawbacks. Electronic appliances have made humans complacent and lazy. As machines took over manual work, people are relying heavily on electronics to do even small jobs that don't require much labour.There is an advanced refrigerator now available in the market which will notify the user when the items inside are running out. This feels like an unnecessary thing as people can easily know the items to be purchased by simply opening the refrigerator. Secondly, as machines became common more people are susceptible to diseases like bodily issues, diabetes because of inactivity. Previously manual jobs made people stay in shape and healthy as it required physical effort but because of ,machines humans are becoming unfit.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though machines have made our life easier and save our time it has made us inactive and victims of many diseases.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that the exploration of Venus is worth its risks. In the article, they state that it would be worth investigating because there is a potential that humans could survive there, but not without its challenges. The author provides a fair amount of evidence that states Venus could be an issue to gather information about. Overall, the author provides a contradicting article and is somewhat difficult to understand what side he supports, exploring Venus or to not.\n\nThe author provides reasons that Venus should actually be looked into. The reasons the author provides are: the geographical conditions on Venus used to be similar to what Earth has today, that the planet is the closest planet to ours, and could have at one point, \"...supported various forms of life, analogous to those on Earth.\" The author doesn't provide a lot of evidence for any of these reasons other than the types of geographical features that are similar between Earth and Venus. The author does, however, provide technology-related solutions to the problems relating to how we could explore Venus. The author provides blimp-like, manned vehicles that could get within 30 miles or so above the planet. The author also provides simplified electronics made of a material known as, silicon carbide that could survive three weeks in the conditions that Venus has. The author then concludes his reasoning with how, \"... human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This simply means that we're just as likely to do something as risky and fear-inducing as exploring Venus and that we shouldn't be imaginatively contained because there are dangers that could possibly limit our expansion.\n\nWhile the author has some reasons supporting the exploration of Venus, they have provided many challenges NASA, or any other space program, would have to overcome and downfalls to the planet. The author provides reasons such as: no aeronautic vehicle has been able to survive the landing for more than a few hours, the planet's atmosphere is almost 97% carbon dioxide, the temperature is 90 times greater than Earth's (800 degrees Farenheit), the pressure on the surface is enough to crush a submarine accustomed to diving in the deepest parts of our oceans, and how our use of modern computers would be limited due to the extreme physical conditions that they would have to withstand. The author provides an abundance of, somewhat, overwhelming reason that we shouldn't continue to proceed exploration of Venus.\n\nWhile the author provides some good reasons to explore Venus and what it contains, they also happened to contradict almost every reason with why it would be a bad idea to pursue it, which is fairly counter-intuitive. The author perhaps meant to give these reasons to warn us and for us to bear the information of how it could go wrong, or how it would be a struggle and then come to terms with the idea that it would still be a good idea to explore Venus. But again, its also comprehended that the author themself doesn't want us to explore the planet. I feel that the author clearly portrayed the distaste that the exploration could bring and less clearly of why and how it would be a good idea.",
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