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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System presents a possibility for people to understand exactly how others are feeling just based on their facial expressions. The technology creates a 3-D computer model of the human face which includes all 44 of the major face muscles. The software then analyzes the face, taking into account all movements of the muscles. This computer model is then compared to a neutral face that shows no emotion to identofy exactly what that individual is feeling. The Facial Action Coding System offers a great opportunity for students to clearly understand the material they are learning, confidently be able to excel on a standardized test, and receive a better education overall.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will alllow students to understand the material they are studying much more clearly and completely. The system can evalutate a student's face and be able to show whether that student is happy, bored, or confused. If the student appears to be bored or confused, the computer could then possibly modify the lesson and make the content easier to understand or enjoy. This would have extremely positive effects on classroom productivity. If all students were able to completely understand material, they would not only be well prepared for a standardized test, but they would also be prepared to continue their\n\npath in life towards a university or full-time career.\n\nMany students stress over certain standardized tests. Some students don't understand the material they have learned leading up to the test, while others just don't do well on tests. This software could dramatically increase the overall scores of students' standardized tests. The use of this software could also help to alleviate the stress of some students that are preparing to take these standardized tests. Because certain tests are used to determine whether a student can enter a certain university or take a certain class, the Facial Action Coding System could also allow students to pursue the career that they enjoy. It would allow them to take the classes and go to the universities that apply to their own personal interests. Overall, the system could help students achieve their life goal when they otherwise might be unable to.\n\nBecause the Facial Action Coding System would allow students to test into classes they enjoy and possibly enter their dream university, it would directly help that student to get a more fulfilling educatiion. Without the system, some students are unable to take certain classes or attend certain univesities because their grades or test scores may be too low. If they are able to take classes they enjoy at their dream university, then they will be more prepared for the world they encounter when they leave high school or college. Attending a university that they enjoy could allow individuals to receive a degree in a field in which they are passionate and pursue a career that they enjoys that could also benefit them with a steady income and insurance benefits.\n\nBecause it allows them to get a better education, clearly understand the material, and be better prepared for certain tests, the Facial Action Coding System presents a great possibility for students to be successful. The system would allow students to clearly understand the material by analyzing their facial patterns and showing whether they are happy, bored, or confused. It would allow students to better prepare for standardized tests because it would help the students to clearly and completely understand what they are learning. This could also allow them a chance at a better education because higher grader and better test scores could allow them into their dream university. This would enable them to get an extremely benficial education that would set them on the track towards success. Because it would better the education of students around the world, the Facial Action Coding System would be very valuable in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraphto show saeng determined She says going take test shows determined Even though saeng failed driverd test going give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Life without a car in the vaubans family did not seem like a big deal. Mainly seventy percent of them did not own a car at all,some of them just got rid of their cars to move to the vauban's street. They sound like they much happier without a car because having a car for them is too tense.\n\nhowever some of the childrens did own at least bicycle. Somehow middle-class famillies from other places to shangai tend to make their homes. Experts find that people who have a car are responsable for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissons in europe. In the united state up to fifty percent in some car-intensive areas. They separated surban life from car use to smart planning.\n\nEfforts have been made in the last two decades to make cities denser,they are now thinking about the suburbs. the vauban experienced the most advanced experiment in low-car surburban life. They're trying to make suburbs more compact and more reliable to public transportation. After that new approach, they have placed a walk away on main street like the highways rather than the malls. Surburbs play a huge role in a new six year federal transportation. Most of appropriations had by law went to highways and only twenty percent to other places.\n\nWhen pollution started strict rules were made. Many people were to leave they car home or pay a twenty euro fine .On monday even-numbered licences plate had to leave they car and the odd-numbers on the following days. In total 4,000 drivers were fined ,cars was getting impounded for reaction to the fine. People still think its was better then the car fre. Rivaled beijing and china are the most polluted cities in the world because they much more populated.\n\nAccording to obama ambitious goals researchers think that people should buy fewer cars getting less licences as we're moving on each year. People would soon realize that obama real goal was to end the culture of car \"the end of car culture\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays we are surrounded more than ever with technology, and robots are becoming more and more common in various types of scenarios. Of course, there are just about as many pros as cons to their presence in human lives, but overall I consider their role in human development to be very valuable. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I do agree with the fact that these androids have been considered to contribute enormously to human development. They are great at performing repetitive functions, such as those involved in the production of different goods. They are also amazing at carrying out very detailed actions and can be seen now participating in a few select surgeries. Not only do they excel in many different responsibilities such as health care and production, but they also allow humans to focus on more complex and sensitive projects. For example, they are very good at practical work but aren't as effective when it comes to taking care of the elderly. This type of task requires a more empathetic and emotional approach, which remains a more distinctively human capability.\r\n\r\nDespite all the amazing work robots do, there are quite a few negative effects on society that must contemplated. To begin with, since these machines can execute simple duties originally performed by humans, they are gradually taking over people's positions, affecting the labour market drastically. For instance, it is becoming more and more common to see cashier-free checkout points in supermarkets all over the world. There is also a concern about safety-related efforts performed by bots. For example, in the industry of autonomous vehicles robots are given partial control of a vehicle that transports humans and must overcome a series of different obstacles to get to their destination. In my opinion, there is no doubt that they have still a lot to learn to be able to perform such complex human actions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while robots undoubtedly contribute significantly to human development, we must carefully navigate the potential drawbacks they pose. Striking a balance between embracing their positive impacts and mitigating negative consequences, such as job displacement, is crucial. Society must proactively manage the integration of robots into various sectors to ensure a harmonious coexistence, safeguarding both efficiency and human welfare.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy is lots of fun. If you like animals you get to spend hours and hours with them. You get to play games to pass the time when your going back home. There is things to see so go sightseeing. You will be overseas so don't go if you get seasick.\n\nWhen you are a Seagoing Cowboy you get to see things you might have never seen before. In paragraph 5 it says Luke got to tour a ecavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to china. He also saw the Acropolis in Greece. You get to see these things maybe once in a life time.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys get to spend a lot of time with animals. The animals are mules, horses, and etc. You have to care for them all the time. You have to take them to the places they need to be. It says in paragraph 3 that you get plenty of oats and hay.\n\nWhen you have free time you can play games to pass the time. In paragragh 8 it says that the crew men play baseball, volleyball, table-tennis tournamnets, fencing, and boxing. They play these games in empty holds where animals have been housed. The fun things to do are thoses. So being a Seagoing Cowboy is fun to.\n\nThat is why being a Seagoing Cowboy is fun and cool. When your a Seagoing Cowboy you get todo all this cool stuff like sightseeing, games, animals, and you get to be overseas. People might not like this job but I personaly think it sounds\n\nfun. So come be a Seagoing Cowboy today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The question of what influences a child's development is an ongoing topic of discussion. Some assert that the family is the primary influence, while others argue that friends, music, and movies play more significant roles. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives, discussing how families shape children and considering the impact of external influences.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, families play a crucial role in the growth of their kids as primary caregivers and mentors. For instance, parents who actively encourage a child's curiosity and nurture critical thinking significantly contribute to their intellectual growth. Additionally, when parents model positive behaviours like kindness and cooperation, these actions help them understand and adopt essential societal norms. These early lessons not only impact their current behaviour but also establish a foundation for future decision-making. In essence, the family serves as a cornerstone in fostering not just the child's immediate well-being but also their long-term growth.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, external factors like movies, music, and friends wield considerable influence over a youngster's thoughts and behaviours. The lyrics of songs and the content of films, encountered by nearly all youngsters, shape their perspectives and understanding of the world. For example, exposure to melody with positive messages or films that promote empathy can contribute to their emotional development. Furthermore, the influence of friends should not be underestimated. Friendships often involve shared experiences and fun, significantly contributing to their mindset. Children engaging in dynamic and friendly environments may develop essential qualities like open-mindedness, adaptability, and teamwork, which are valuable beyond the confines of the family setting. In this way, external influences, including media and peer interactions, play a vital part in shaping their worldview and social skills.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while many children are initially shaped by their families, others are influenced by their surroundings. The environment, including peers and external factors, can also play an important part in determining the kind of individuals they become.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Deer Senator:\n\nThey should keep the Electoral college, Because its where people vote to choose who's going to be the president and the vice president. If they have 538 electors they have to count them all not 270/538 because its not fair. I am Agree with the \"Certificate of Ascertainment\" they can have a certificate even if they did not won.\n\nThe State conventions, the presidential candidates, the state party's central committee they all should vote or choose at the same time. Voters get confused because the state convention, presidential candidates and the state central committee don't make up their minds....Why American people should considere themselves lucky if that was Back in 1960's, what makes them so sure that American people are going to be lucky again? well they might get lucky this time but not always they're going to be lucky every year its difficult and we are in 2015 now.\n\nPeople should STOP thinking about what happen in the 1960's it might happen again okay but that was 45 years ago. Why A catastrophe? why cant they live in peace and stop hatting or whatever's going on.\n\nIf they keep doing that it might be a fight or a war between them, and we dont want any fights or wars this year. The electoral college have to change for good if they dont they wont see any votes when its time to vote..Segregationists they have to stop being rasists because people from all over the world are voting for them and they are all from different races.\n\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many good reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys. For example they get to help others from different cultures, the seagoing cowboys can learn about their different cultures, and maybe even learn a different language. The seagoing cowboys get to deliver different animals arcross the ocean to also help others in need of livesock. Seagoing cowboys helped a lot to help fix the ruins that World War II left behind.\n\nAfter delivering the animals or other things the seagoing cowboys get to go exploring in the area that they had to ship the animals and others to.\n\nLuke had just came to Europe on a Cattle Boat not even thinking that he was going to be a seagoing cowboy. Luke and his friend Don Reist had heard that the job helped other families around the world. They decided to sign up for the job. The Seagoing Cowboys helped recover all of teh land, animals, and supplies after many, many wars. Luke may have gotton hur during the job, but he still kept going.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story plays huge part final outcome The author makes mention travelling high deserts California June This sentence alone tells reader hot And hot standards gets degrees maybe noon That means day starts By noon s past Also author comes sign marked Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit makes note hes going mph Before reaches sort civilization already drunken water last tentalizing sips This main problem lack water He drank beginning ride thinking hed okay regretted later", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the best feelings as a teenager is owning and driving your first car. Just having the feeling of being free and driving is amazing. Driverless cars is a bad idea and should not go any further with the project.\n\nSo far three states and one country have approved just to test the idea, that should throw a red flag. Pursing the idea of driverless cars is bad on oil companieses, tire companies, mechanics will go out of business, and just not having the feeling of driving a car is not right.\n\nFirst, yes it is good to have gas prices down, but that could cost someomes job. Tire shops income would decrease becuae they would only focus on driverless cars. People would not get their cars painted anymore. Your looking at a lot of people's job in jepardy. One of the biggest question i think would be, where would all the none driverless cars go if everyone had a driverless cars. I gurantee not everyone would be able to afford a driverless car.\n\nSecond, mechanics would go out of business from not fixing cars everyday. These driverless cars all deal with technology bases. And the company of that car would have to handle the maintnence. Everyone would get to places way slower, and if one of these driverless cars crashes the it would be a huge traaffic jam to everyone else.\n\nLastly, not having the feeling of driving your own car is horrible. What would happen if this driverless car were to malfunction and go out of control and kill the driver. And because the car is driverless by technology someone could hack it and change your route. That is why driverless cars is a bad idea.\n\nIn conclusion, pursing the idea of driverless cars is bad on oil compaines, tire companies, mechanics will go out of business, and not having the feeling of driving your own car. Bottom line about driverless cars is a terrible idea. So many things could go wrong, and people would just start getting lazy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, actors are more popular for their money and glamorous lifestyle than rather than for their contribution to the industry, which can have a detrimental impact on the youth. I my opinion, I completely agree with the aforementioned sentence.\nFirstly, typically stars have a big fan following especially major the portion of their following is youth. Followers always try to look, behave and live according to the similar lifestyle as their idol. In the current situation, it can be seen that celebrities are spending a lot of money on exotic cars and on high cost cloths which is very appealing to their fans. Consequently, they try to do the same which might not be feasible to their budget.\nSecondly, after gaining the stardium in the industry, they start drinking or smoking in the public places which makes young generation think that it is cool to smoke and drink since their role models are doing it. Furthermore, celebrities are often used for marketing and advertisement purposes for goods that are unhealthy and high in price. Promotion of this product from them manipulates people’s decision and they end up purchasing those expensive goods without thinking.\nFinally, life style of celebrity always seems tempting to their fans, and they try to achieve the same thing by any means as a result sometimes they might end up in unethical activity which might land them into jail sometime. People start doing criminal activity in order to gain finance they require for spending money like their favourite actor.\nIn conclusion, I believe most of the time celebrity’s bad behaviour in public places impacts people in a more negative way than the positive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, hotly debated topic by many is alterations in climate and their impact on our planet.However, some argue that such changes are indispensable and humans have to cope with it by adopting various strategies.While some believe that avoidance is better than cure.In my view, finding new techniques to counter adverse climate conditions far outweigh the avoidance due to unstoppable factors.\n\nOn the one hand, the prime cause of this adverse climatic change is the uncontrolled population leading to pollution resulting in global warming in the long run.A growing number of the population will utilize the natural resources like fossil fuels and oil for their transport and industrialization, which will result in rise of environmental temperature.So, there are abundance of methods being employed to counter this global warming either by ensuring strict laws on power plants, and use of public transport or check on privately own vehicles.For instance, The guardian reported in some article of march last year, that preventing climatic changes by forestation help repairing of ozone layer significantly by more than 5%, thus having a positive impact on climate.It is, therefore, the ultimate responsibility of all mankind to ensure the things and measures which can prevent the climatic changes.\n\nOn the other hand, It is a bitter truth that we have to bear this global warming due to certain unavoidable factors, so everyone should take part positively in improving the climate of our planet.There are several techniques which can employ on an individual level, which can cumulatively contribute better to atmospheric.Firstly, the modification of individual lifestyle, such as walking, exercise, less use of own vehicles, usage of bicycles.Secondly,improvement of public transport, maintenance of cleanliness and tree plantation are the key things to do.So there are countless ways to enhance the integrity of our atmosphere.For example,I was privileged enough to join a local community service club which taught me very comprehensively about environmental changes and their impact through various seminars and tutorials, which I consider the most beneficial in understanding the global warming and the role of common citizens to counter it. Hence,numerous strategies can be used, in addition to, avoidance as well.\n\nTo recapitulate, although, avoidance can result in significant impact on the climate conditions, but, in addition to that, vital role of mankind by employing various methods cannot be denied.I consider, it should be encouraged through massive awareness for the betterment of our planet", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars next big thing ? Sergey Brian cofounder of Google sure does thinks so. Sergey thinks drivless cars could be the next public-transport taxi system.\n\nFirst off I agree with driverless car. Driverless cars sensors could help prevent accidents. The text states \" The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" This quote for the passage explains that the cars great technology is a big help for preventing accidents.\n\nAlthough being in a driverless car might get boring , you can look at it has assisting. For example when your at a stoplight and your not paying attention to when its your turn. The driverless car has already got you covered. another exaple is when your trynna park and you're worried about hitting another car or pulling up on the curb the sensors on the car is a great help.\n\nIn conclusion, Google driverless cars sounds like a good idea. its helpful, safe,and very thought out. So why not make driverless cars the next big thing?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent time, increasingly individuals decide to have children after long period after they marriage. There are several reasons why people prefer to have children later in their life In my opinion the demerits of this trend outweigh the merits. \r\n\r\nRegarding reasons, the primary reason couples prefer to have first children after while is they looking for financial stability. To illustrate, they want to make sure they have enough money in order to provide better life for their future babies. For example, often couples when they start the first job they earn low salaries after period they salary increase gradually . Sense of freedom is another reason why many couples decide to delay having children. To put in other words, couples often prefer to enjoy their live namely, travel around the world in order to experience a new cultures without worrying about to look after children, which this can reduce stree in the couples. \r\n\r\nHowever, I would like to argue that the drawbacks of this phenomenon significantly far more than benefits. The first disadvantage, people who decide to have children later in their life can face challenges to upbringing their future babies. This is due to the fact the, increase the age gap between partents and their children, which can leads misunderstanding between generations. The second disadvantage women who become pregnant in senior age are more likely to birth children with defect genes .Furthermore, also pregnancy at older age make mother are more vulnerable to develop serious diseases such as, cancer, heart attack, high blood pressure. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, there are a number of reasons why some individuals decide to have children later in their life including, financial stability, feel of freedom, on the other hand, In my perspective, the downsides of this trend outperform the upsides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator, I am writing to you because I feel that we should abolish the Electoral College. The Electoral College swipes away the meaningness to choosing a president. A nation does not need to rely on a slate of voters to make desicions for us, as an independent induvidual I know that this country should follow the moral laws of which it was founded upon.\n\nWith a system like the Electoral College in place, voting becomes pointless. People vote because they feel like part of something bigger, having a slate of electors decide for you takes away the self pride that comes from voting. As mentioned in source number one\n\nWhat Is the Electoral College?\n\nin the 2000 election the president that won popular vote (Al Gore) lost the election because the Electoral College had the majoraty voting for George W. Bush. The Electoral College takes away the individuals voice.\n\nThe College does however provide a reliable service. For instance if there were to be a tie in popular votes, the College's vote would balace it. Still, the downsides of the Electoral College outweigh the benifits. As said in source number two \"We need to abolish the electoral college\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" did a decent job at discussing how studying Venus is worth the time and money. The author discusses intresting topics such as the idea that there were oceans and even life on Venus at one point. Though these would be nice, there are also many dangers listed.\n\nThe author makes it very clear that there are many dangers that would come with studying Venus. Some of these dangers are 97% carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, clouds made of corrosive sulfuric acid, 800 degree heat, and atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than Earth. The author then goes on to say that these challenges could be avoided in some ways. A solution the author proposes is an idea made by NASA to make a \"blimp-like vehicle\" that would let explorers observe in less extreme heat and much less pressure. From there, the author states that solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels, which is immediatley followed by \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" Though this would make many people think that Venus' exploration is possible, the author then brings up more skeptisism with the ideas of of photography and videography not being effective and not being able to get samples without people touching the ground.\n\nThe author had conving points that would make sense for anyone to want to visit mars, but were overshadowed with doubt that it could actually happen. Therefore, the question is raised if it is worth continuing to use millions of dollars and the possibility of losing life to learn what a planet was like in the past which as of now is not capable of sustaining life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To whome it may concern,\n\nFrom my knowledge based on the sources i've been given on the Electorial College, I strongly beleive it should be abolished. To me it seems senseless to be voting for a slate of electors rather than a president. Also, anyone not in office can be an elector so that means they may not be the best person to be representing your vote. The electors may only vote for who they want rather than go with the vote of the people which is why I beleive the president should be elected by popular vote. This would also mean there would never be a tie. In the event of a tie the House of Representatives would take the vote. So the representative of Wyoming representing 500,000 voters would have the same power of as the representative of California, representing 35 million voters. it should be quite clear why popular vote would make more sense. We have outgrown the electorial college as a nation.\n\nThank you for your time,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars will soon come into the human race and take over the driving so that all the human will have to do is be ready in case there is a miss moulfuction. The world is getting lazier and lazier as the driverless cars get popular in some states, however, in other states the driverless car is illegal to have and test drive the driverless cars. Driverless cars would be great to have but what would power them. Would they be solar powered or battrie powered, if the were solar powered and you needed to got do something and it was a cloudy day with no sun? When the driverless cars come into the human world are they going to be a big hit or are they going to be a flop? If human don't have to driver unless they have to it will give people more tme to do work if they need to. If some one worked for a big newspaper it would give them just a little bit more time to get a story done compared to when they had to drive to work.\n\nIf some one needed to be to a certin place in a rush would the driverless car be fast enough to get them there? Could the driverless cars be wifi capatable, however, that would put the price of the driverless car at an even higher price. Driverless cars are driven by a binary code, what is the probability of some one hacking into the control system and cause the car to do what they want it to do and not what the driver wants to do. The driverless cars have the antilock breaks so that could be a plus if it hit a slick spot in a major snow event. Will the driverless cars be two wheel or four wheel drive, if they are four wheel drive the driver could go almost anywhere. Driverless cars could help in wars becuase the commander could lead his troops in to battle and what if the tanks where driverless then it would give the fighter in side more oppertounity to fight out side the tank insted of in side of it. Drivers around the world would probobley enjoy a little more freedom in the world of driveing. The police force would not have to worry about drunk driveing and texting wile driveing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every day we receive constant announcements from the mainstream media sent by selling companies that try to catch our attention on their products. This essay will argue that customers can easily fall into the trap of the advertisements' persuasive influence to purchase a particular product and suggest measures to safeguard ourselves from being sold.\n\nAdvertisements are the most effective way for companies to acquire customers and attract a wide range of clients. Every publicity spot is designed to awaken a specific portion of democracy's interest and push them to purchase a product they did not even plan to buy. For example, behind a ten-second announcement hides a massive amount of work performed by economists, psychologists and marketing experts to make it look more attractive and persuasive. Provided that these people know how to manipulate the mass through mediatic instruments, I believe publicity does influence our choices, both at a conscious and unconscious state, in a highly effective way.\n\nOn the other side, advertisements can only spread through mainstream communication channels, namely TV, phones, newspapers and billboards. Therefore, one possible method to avoid getting influenced by them is to disconnect from these tools when we feel overwhelmed by the quantity of news and commercials popping out from our mobile: one can avoid temptations by fleeing from them. Another measure that can be taken into account to preserve our willpower when purchasing an item is recognizing that advertisements might not tell the truth. Although they give the illusion of promoting something unique and unreplaceable, their expectations are disappointed when customers receive it at their houses.\n\nTo conclude, people are constantly bombarded by commercial spots, promoting videos or pictures that strive to convince us we need what their companies sell. In my opinion, ordinary people are definitely influenced by these powerful tools even though they might not recognize them. However, there are some solutions that people can adopt to safeguarding themselves as aware customers, such as fleeing from the mediatic stream of news and commercials and keep their eyes wide open, wary about what advertisements may and may not show.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different opinions when it comes to providing financial support and attention to elderly people after retirement. While some people believe governments are accountable for assisting these individuals, others argue that individuals should plan their retirement ahead of time. However, in my opinion, governments could provide better support to the senior citizens of their country.\n\nIn the past, most families supported their parents and grandparents during their old age, which is a fact that is changing in today's world. Now, more and more people try to avoid giving any support to their elders and this trend has been growing day by day. In this case, governments should make some effort to subsidize the cost of living for these old aged people, who could not earn money because of their higher age; furthermore, housing for the aged can be built at the cost of tax money, which could at least provide a comfortable shelter to these people. Consequently, senior citizens will not suffer due to poverty or homelessness.\n\nUndoubtedly, it is a good idea that people should also plan their retirement ahead of time to avoid suffering at a later age. However, it would be extremely difficult for people who earn a lesser income every month to save some money for their future. Even though a large sum of money could be saved for this purpose, no amount of money could assure a sustainable life. Governments could play an important role here to implement some saving systems which could make life easier for elderly people. Consequently, this will benefit senior citizens to live a happy life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir really grateful family nothing blood relative paragraph Also shows grateful family paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done This shows really happy grateful actually realizes many sacrifices much love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The big corporations like NASA have been studying planets for decades, recently Mars has been the most studied, but Venus has come to spike the question of is it safe to be pursuited and should we try. The author of this believes its worth the risk and goes into explaining it, they do this rather badly. The author brings up random facts, does not support the claims that are brought up, and doesnt site credit from which he got all of hiis sources for the claims he makes.\n\nSo, throughout the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author starts to make claims to try to support their opinion. However most are randomly brought up and do not go with the other information brought up in the topic. That is what the author tends to do throughout most of the paragraphs such as 2, and 3. For example in paragraph 3 they mention, 'Venus has the hottest surface tempeture\" to \"Such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans.\" These facts are brought up when talking about the planet without transitioning to the next fact, but just saying it in the next sentence. As well as brinigng up random facts the author also does not support the claims that they say with evidence.\n\nAs for the last topic, the author does not support the claims that are said throughout the article. They say claims such as them saying that venus has value in paragraph 8. After that of which was said they brought up, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited.\" That does not support the main claim that the author makes in that paragraph. Also in paragraph 5 they say, \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" They give no piece of evidence to support that claim and move on to the next topic. As well as them not supporting the claim, the author does not give any credit to the sources where they find their information from, which makes the facts questionable.\n\nThroughout the text the author gives claims and does prove some of the claims but not others with evidence that they do not give a source too or credit. This makes some of the information pieces and evidence questionable at\n\nfirst glance. For example the author says, \"Temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit\" but does not give any credit or cites where they got that information from. They do this on mainly every fact that is mentioned throughout the article. Such as all the facts from paragraph 5, and 7.\n\nThey throw out facts but do not give where they find it or from who they got it from. That is a main issue of the author's throughout the article.\n\nThe author supports his statement but does not cite his sources, they bring up random facts, and does not support the cats being brought up. So the author did a bad job on supporting their claim.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir love Narciso family much love able overcome struggles help others overcome allowing stay home live They allowed people nt even apart family become part family loved cared possiably even selves gave everything cuba come america better future children The amount love house turned form ordiary house loving caring compassionate selfless home Narciso everyone community family created That mood memoir created", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today computers are used almost everywhere, it is impossible to imagine our life without PCs, Internet, mobile phones and other computer devices. It is reasonable to think that people look forward to the future of computers., computers make our life easier, we can easily get information about any product we plan to buy or place we plan to visit in a second using a personal computer and . Scientists predict that in the nearest future it will be possible to smell a new perfume using the Internet and watch 3D scenes at home like we do in the movie theater. According to forecasts of HR agencies machines will replace jobs of cashiers, and civil and military pilots. Some corporations in Japan are already sellinghousewife-robots, which help old people to keep their homes clean.Despite the fact that computers help us, they make us dependent. Apparently, people spend more time behind monitors than ever before. And some of them feel a need for more time to be spent with people in live contact. In addition, a breakdown of one of the important modules of a specific computer can entail serious consequences. to mention the computer problem that occurred in the end of 1990s, a problem related to the coming year 2000 (Y2K) and catastrophes that were predicted. Fortunately imminent disasters did not happen. However, it is difficult to imagine what could if all the predictions came true.We live in a technological era, computers penetrated everywhere with all benefits they provide and all dangers they hide. However we are satisfied with them and sometimes we even thank them because they help us in communicating, studying, doing business, entertaining and saving lives in critical situations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authors claim is being able to detect exactly how other people feel. The technology is valuable to the calssroom becuase it can tell whether the student is confused and it can help explain problems more. The software is promising because in the beginnning of the article it talks about how Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 pecent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\n\nLater on in the article it talks about how the computer constucts a 3-D model of the face including all 44 major muscles. Eckman calssified six groups of emotions that everyones had before such as, happiness, surprise, anger, distgust, fear, and sadness. The Mona Lisa trial was to show just how much the computer can do and hwo it has its own algorithms. The technology is more reliable than us guessing, becuase we can fake emotions to friends, but what the computer reads is something totally different then what we were thinking.\n\nOverall, the technology is valuable for school because they've already done a trial run of it and it worked how they wanted it too. It gives instructions on how it works and what you should do. It'll help teahcers nad students during school, and it can help them learn more if they're stuck on a problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The hot day June riding bike desert The cyclist rode sun way Yosemite National Park The old men told go map even though way years When cyclist started day ready go He thought would able stop get water regulary found middle desert water around The man pushed stopped thinking water He even put pebbles mouth suck would able keep mind water The man smart situation knew This experence made stronger", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading the articale of \"the challenge of exploring venus\".Thinking about what I have read the author is trying to tell me.Wilth the author giving many well example on why we should contunie on trying to get a better understanding of venusn.\n\nThe author has givin many claims on why we should study venus on a closer scale.Claiming that even thou venus is a proven difficalt and dangerouse plantet to vist. Stating examples on how the planet is diffect but with an benifetal of study.The Author saying in the artical \"striving to meet challege presented by venus has value,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet inself\n\nbut also beacuse humans curisity will lead us into many equally intimdating endevous.\n\nIn my conclusion of reading and thinking of the artical I stat that The author has a great instetion of study and exporling no matter the cost or preperation of the area and danger that come with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author Narciso Rodriguez set good mood One thing compare United States Cuba He also made kids parents seem like nice people set friendly mood Another thing show much kids thanked parents making sacrafice Overall I think Narciso made story cheerful story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is rightly said that artificial intelligence will take over human life in this growing world as technology is getting more advanced day by day. The day is not so far when most of the human tasks will be taken care of by trained robots using technology such as machine learning. This can make human life easier but also complicated at the same time. In this essay, I will discuss both views and share my opinion.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, In our daily life, we have seen that artificial intelligence plays a crucial role in our society. To elaborate, most of an individual's activities are taken care of by automated machines and making their life easy and stress-free. For instance, a fully automated washing machine intelligently senses the cloth type and wash the clothes accordingly. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, technology has gone too far these days, it not only help solve people's problem but also provides the best solution out of it. To illustrate, there is new AI tool that makes everyone's life easier such as Alexa, Siri and Chatgpt. By using voice commands, individuals can get most of their work done in just a few seconds. For example, Alexa plays music and set alarms by just to listening the voice commands and Chatgpt provides a solution to any problem by just typing the question. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people are losing their jobs as most of their work is taken over by artificial intelligence. To explicate, call centre jobs replaced with new AI tools and machine is capable enough to take care of these day-to-day tasks. To epitome, these days, in restaurants, robots are serving food to customers instead of waiters and eventually people's losing their jobs.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, new technologies certainly make one's life easier and better but on the other ,side people are losing jobs as big companies such as Amazon and Google are more focussed on cost cutting with the introduction of new technologies such as machine learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artists these days are much more recognized for their glitz and fame than that for their actual accomplishments, which sets a negative example to the younger generation. I disagree with that as not everyone is known for their glam and fortune but is famous for their hardwork. Firstly, I would discuss about how celebrities play a vital role in the younger generation as many take them to be their inspiration and secondly, not only celebrities make money, they also do charities and help in need. Celebrities play vital role in modern society. More recently, there have been many superstars who have become famous for their talents in singing, sports. Celebrities can be the persons from the entertainment industry, sports and even politicians. Significant celebrities can spread any ideas and go trends around the world; Not all the trends that go in having huge views in any social media platform have a positive note on today’s young generation, but people like Michelle Obama has her Podcast on YouTube and Spotify whose words are true inspiration. Furthermore, celebrities do good deeds which help many. Teens these days have a biased behavior , in order to have an positive vision on life Some celebrities do donate their wealth to charities, many celebrities talk about their ways of achieving their dreams but they also support the teenagers to dream big and achieve them. Nevertheless, they might not always have good deed; after all they are humans too. BTS have millions of fans across the globe; BTS have made positive impact on fans. They inspired them having dreams, love themselves and help others. BTS have donated million dollars since the pandemic has started. To conclude, Celebrities world revolve around glow and money but there are instances where there work inspired many young people in pursuing their dreams. Judging them by their roles they do is wrong as they are humans too and they too make mistakes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was just a teenager that had two jobs.Luke worked at a grocrey store and a bank.He had a freind named Don Reist.Don Reist invited Luke to go on a cattle boat.Now Luke is going to tell you some reasons to join this lovely program.Reason number 1 you can make alot of money and have fun at the same time.Reason number 2 you can serve for your country and you wont have to fight in the war.Luke and his freind will play game with you while your on the boat so you and the other people can pass time and wont be board.This job comes with a danger,Luke has broke his ribs doing this job just because of a ladder so watch out for those things.\n\nSo now its time to talk about why some people dont want to do this job.Reason 1,because of the water and some people dont like horses.So do you think you have what it takes to do this job if you do go to any gas sataion or bank.The supplyes you will need are a sleeping bag,a pillow,fire starter,and a grill so you can cook your food because they dont have a place to cook so you have to cook yourself.Just remember you will come to this job and get a good paycheck good bye!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram provided depicts a multistep process on the complete growth and maturation of the honey bee.\nOverall, the lifecycle occurs over a five step repeating series, starting with the mating of the male and female honey bee and finalising once the honey bee as fully matured into an adult. This cycle lasts a total period of 34-36 days.\nIn the inital stage, the male and female honey bee mate with one another. Once inpregnated, the maternal bee lays around 1 to 2 eggs on a flat surface. This process takes place after a period of three days and is repeated as such on each third day. Next, the layed eggs hatch once they've reached their 9th or 10th day of life, giving rise to the newly born nymph. The nymph then moults three times during it's growth and development, at days 5, 7 and 9 respectively, until it has matured into a young adult. Over the next 4 days, this young adult honey bee further matures until finally developing into a fully grown adult. The cycle then repeats once the now fully developed adult male or female once more undergoes intercourse with it's counterpart.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I patient plenty times one I mostly remember I waiting friend get home school I missed schoo waiting I plenty things I played xbox I got computer But xbox I saw one friends come online He lives Moures After got online played day I got watched I bored Nothing I got computer still bored So I tried take nap didnt work After I tried play xbox another hour nowaround got bored I still played another half hour till I redid account listening music played till got online We played day till night", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to see other things in space like our \"sister plant\" Venus? In this article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author was supportinhg his ideas of why we should go and explore Venus our \"sister plant.\" The author explaied why he thought exploring Venus was a good idea and why we should keep looking into it. In this article the author does support his ideas in exploring Venus. Scientists are finding new ways to vist and test Venus surface, scientist are talking about what Venus has to offer, and Venus is so much like Earth.\n\nFirst, Scientists are trying to find new ways of testing and even visting Venus. There have been a couple of approaches on studying Venus. NASA has been working on this \"simplified electronics\" that are made up of \"silicon carbide.\" NASA even tested it in a \"chamber simulating the chaod of Venus's surface\" (the challenge of exploring venus 7). The simplified electrons had lasted up to three weeks in the simulation.\n\nSecondly, Venus is just like Earth. A very long time ago venuse was covered largely with oceans and some scientist think that Venus was able to support diffrent various of life forms, and still today Venus has some features that are \"analogous\" to those on earth.\n\nIn concluison Venuse needs to be explored becasue it has some of the charticsts that Earth has and it will help us expand more and have us venture out further more in or solar sytem and more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At the present time, there are a lot of people, especially graduates, who are unemployed. This might lead to many issues which directly affect the individual and society and there are lots of measures that can be taken in order to tackle the problems. \r\n\r\nMany negative effects on both individuals and communities could be observed. On an individual level, it is hard for people to make ends meet if they do not have a stable job. In this day and age, the costs of living in many countries are now on the rise. As a result, those who are jobless might be stressed and have to live under a lot of financial pressure. As for the society, high youth unemployment rate may be accompanied by high crime rate among young people. They may resort to crime and involvement in illegal activities such as robberies in order to make a living. \r\n\r\nOn the bright side, there are still solutions in order to solve the problems. One major measure is to equip undergraduates with practical skills necessary for their future careers instead of focusing solely on theoretical knowledge. This may make it easier for them to get used to their job. Another solution is that the government should promote the activities of job centers. By doing this, the unemployed can seek advice on possible careers that are suitable for their abilities and needs.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, youth unemployment could be seen as negative for both society and individuals and various strategies can be adopted to address the issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are innovating more and more as time goes on. Developers have created several new driverless cars in the past decade. No cars have yet been invented that are completely driverless, but models do exist in which the automatic car system does retain most of the control. Driverless cars, in my opinion, have the potential of creating many issues for the drivers and their safety, as well as for the manufacturers too. Driverless cars honestly do more good than bad for their users. I believe that driverless cars should not be used in most if not any instances due to the conflict they can cause, the safety hazards they can create, and the problems/strains the technology used may possess.\n\nTo begin, I believe that driverless cars have the potential of causing major conflicts. For example, if the technology used to operare the car glitches, or causes the car to wreck or become damaged, conflict most likely will arise amongst the driver and the car manufacturer. If the driver is injured, who's to blame? Imagine all of the tedious and numerous lawsuits that will emerge in instances like these or similar to these. No technology is perfect, and some of these driverless cars are bound to make mistakes, small or fatal. The users of these cars are clearly put at risk for some pretty serious accidents and/or injuries by relying on these cars to drive them around for the majority of the time, espcially if they are using the car to help them get somewhere in instances of drunkeness, tardiness, or health emergencies. Driverless cars can cause countless types of conflicts along with the ones described; would drivers really want to put themselves at this much risk just for the sake of driving less?\n\nTo continue, driverless cars create numerous safety hazards for not only the driver, but as well as the manufacurers and other drivers on the road. Relying on technology to drive you around is potentially dangerous for the passengers. Even if the car does notify you when you need to step in and drive, would you still fully rely on it for the rest of your driving? As I previously mentioned, techonology is never perfect, and it could glitch out at any moment. What if you are in an instance where you absolutely cannot drive and you were relying on the car to help you out with that, when suddenly the car glitches and is unable to drive you? Crashes can happen in these instances, risking the safety of the car's passengers and also other drivers on the road. Not to mention, the manufacturers would then face the blame of these accidents. Even people testing the cars face great chances of these risks. Driverless cars cause a surplus of safety hazards, so is it really worth it to put yourself in those types of situations in the first place?\n\nTo contribute to this argument against driverless cars, I'd also like to add that driverless cars may possess technology that may have certain types of problems and/or strains. These cars may have been tested for safety and maybe even reliability at first, but how can the manufacturers and drivers really ensure that the technology these cars operate on will remain spotless for the remainder of its use? The answer is simple, they can't. No technology is ever one hundred percent reliable in any instance ever. No technology is ever one hundred percent perfect either, but if it's your car, that's a whole other story. As I said previously in this argument, these driverless cars are bound to glitch at one point or another for some of its users. These cars have a fairly high risk of these instances occurring. Most drivers probably would not want to rely on this technology to drive them, especially in times of their greatest needs of transportation. The technology used to operate these cars has the potential of glitching or having great errors. The risk of this is too great for some, including myself.\n\nIn conclusion, I am against the use of driverless cars. Although the article provided tried its best to illustrate the pros of these vehicles, I do not agree. The cons of these cars definitely outway the given pros. There are too many risks that come along with driving these cars. No matter how much these cars have and will advance, there is too much of a risk with using them, as well as relying on them in any instances, even in times of desperation or need. Regular driving will always be\n\nmore reliable as well as probably more safe too. Driverless cars should not be used in most if not any instances because of the conflict they can cause, the safety hazards they can create, and the problems/strains the technology used may possess.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Entering classroom I began shiver anxiety I new student fourth grade transferring public grade school school kept head swimming questions I put aside I stepped room large white NUM exterior wall I swear I could feel bones literally shaking nerves Surprisingly one approached I came I noticed surrounding brunette No one really even took note I teacher looked After introducing class I looked back brunette previously surrounded group tobe peers She smiled I stood feet uncontrollably glued ground looking blankly seconds When someone told girl new student class I understood everyone staring I soon became green envy attention got I unintentionally fairly jealous child I noticed everyone wanted friend I got somewhat ignored I stomach slowly twisted knots day I began form feelings suspicion dislike towards girl Even name sounded suspicious I never life heard anyone named Luckily I sat opposite side classroom And even month passed I still felt uncomfortable near I stubbornly avoided My birthday soon began creep first month I beginning find people I wanted friends people avoid Unfortunately even people I gradually grown weary invited birthday party class party I nt want anyone left since class thirty people I could deduce word party would spread around people would begin talk I knew I nt built enough reputation people know I really personality actually like As I putting invitation everyone s beige square cubby I hesitated I came across NUM This number The number girl bizarre name I undeserved grudgelike suspicion I cursed violently I put birthday party invitation cubby When day party finally rolled around I everything set I imagined I even perfect cake picked The guests began arrive knocking glass door temporarily staining little grimy knuckle prints came alone As I opened door timidly immediately shoved gift shyly muttered breath CAPS birthday I welcomed traditionally I everyone else showed backyard The party continued go several directions mom gathered everyone around I could blow candles stepped next With confused expression face mom leaned whisper birthday would blow candles I could nt believe The person I selfishly pretended exist person I share cake After blowing candles everyone left party ended I silently pouted share birthday another person After party I walked house find sitting steps Her mom apparently could nt pick another hour I came casually started making small talk A minutes later brother ran huge glob frosting hand He yelled birthday threw face I shocked nt know He ran downstairs room I continued stand mouth gaping Then I heard someone laughing behind I turned around see giggling And without warning I started laughing And neither one us could stop It moment I realized I wrong We spent rest hour playing laughing time mom came begging sleepover Although unsuccessful I grown understand girl someone I wanted get close first laugh became best friend continues best closest friend today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The next essay will talk about the reasons behind the need of some people to find out about their own family history.\nI believe in certain young countries as USA for example, it is completely logical to feel the need of getting to know where your roots come from.\nWe have to take into account that in many cases a sector of the USA population only know the nationality or the history of their grandparents, and their grandparents have very few information of their own parents, so the total history of their family is quite sort. I am spanish and lived for one year in the state of Washington with an american family. It was very surprising for me to find out how proud that family was of its european roots. It took me a while to understand their feelings. I needed to put myself into their shoes. To give a live example, my american Dad had even visited the northern part of Norway, close to the Artic Polar Circle to look for a distant cousin he had figured out he had. My american Dad was the happiest person on earth when showing the picture of his cousin and him taking a beer in Norway.\nI believe there are many reasons for someone to dig into history to have a deeper knowledge of his own family. Firstly you may get a better understanding of the behaviours of your closest relatives. Also you can find the reasons behind the colour of your skin or your eyes.\nTo summarise, I strongly believe it is positive to get to know more about your own roots and about your distant relatives to get a better understanding of youself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an ongoing debate about wether a government economic progress is far more important than any other type of progress, for instance: social, technological or health advancements. Although this perspectives are both valid, I believe that authorities do not have to value economy over everything else because it leads to overlooking the basic needs of society.\nOn the one hand, prioritizing economic progress is important because it is the basis that sustains every countries' needs. Without a strong economy, governments would not be able to afford education or health. For instance many studies show that wealthier countries tend to give their citizens a better life quality.\nOn the other hand, other types of progress such as educational, technological and health developements can lead to better outcomes in society. For instance it has been proven that countries with the best quality of education tend to be more peaceful and have less crime rates than those where education is not a priority.\nIn my opinion education, health and technological progress when available to evryone can lead to better developement not only financial but also in the equality of opportunies which is the key to much more content and peaceful societies. Governments that value economy over everything else tend to forget that the true value relies on the people and their needs, not in making money. Economy progress is part of a developed society but should not rely at the centre of issues because well being and good quality of life is a complex goal that requires success in many areas of society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join Seagoing Cowboys. I joined when I was almost eighteen, and it was a great experience for me. I am sure it would be for you, too. There are several reasons you should join.\n\nFirst, it helps many countries, such as China and Greece. This program was formed in 1945, right after WWll. This means that many countries are in need of food, animals, and supplies. We just take care of the animals on the way to Europe. Then, we give them to different countries so they have a source of food and animals.\n\nSecondly, it lets you see many countries. It helps you to experience things you otherwise wouldn't. You can see new things, try new foods, and meet new people. You can also tour and see new places. I saw the Acropolis in Greece, rode a gondola through the canals of Venice, toured a castle in Crete, and saw the Panama Canal. This was a great opportunity for me to broaden my horizons, and it could be for you, too.\n\nFinally, it helps you learn new skills. This job teaches you responsibility, because you have to feed and take care of so many animals. On my first trip, there were more than 300 horses! You have to feed and water each one several times daily. Plus, you have to clean thier stalls and groom them. And that is just the horses! There would also be cattle, livestock, and other animals. You also have to learn how to communicate with people properly. If you are on a boat for two weeks to a month, you can't mess around or fight.\n\nAll in all, joining Seagoing Cowboys is a great idea. It is a great opportunity to help other countries, see new things, and learn new skills. I urge you to consider joining this program and having a great experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author suggest that studying\n\nvenus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because he believes venus has value. also our curiosity will lead us somewhere. he believe us traveling should not be limited of the danger or doubts.\n\nthe danger will expand our curiosty of the world and beyond i. the author gives many and good a things to support his claims. He wants people to explore expand the imagination and curiosty by travelung and studying.\n\nThe author says in paragraph 8 \"venus has value not only because the insight o be gained on the planet itself\" the author is saying that there are many opportunites we have from studying venus he says how it could inspire our curiosty. paragraaph 8 \"human curiosty will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". He's bassically saying how us studying venus can inspire us to find new things and explre many things our human curiosty can make studying venus more worthy of doing it he wants us to get inspired and find many intimidating endeavors. The Author says how we shouldn't let our travel on earth and beyond be limited because of the dangrous posibilites. The author wants us to keep studing and exploring he wants us to expand or imagination and innovation to the edge. paragraph 8\n\nin conclusion the author wants us to study venus and other places not just earth to expand our imagination. the author wants us to expand our curiosty to new things he wants us to travel and see a lot of things on earth and beyond. I believe we should study on venus and other things. i think is worthy for us to explore. We shouldnt let anger and doubt hold us back from explring and see new things in life and outside of our home. the danger will only get us more curios and will want to expand our imagination and curiosty from it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the new technology to read students faces in the class room could be of some use, but I also think that it would not be of use in the classroom. The reason I think it would be useful is it could help a teacher understand some of the kids facial expressions.\n\nA teacher can read the childs face to see if they can help then when they are sad and dont tell anyone, but I also think that it would be an invasion of the childs space, because sometimes when kids or even adults get mad or sad and they dont say anything to anyone it's because they dont want people to know. It could help in somecases like when a child is being bulllied at school and they dont tell someone then the teacher could use the device to see that the child is either sad or mad or even both.\n\nI support and do not support this at ther same time. i support it because I feel it could be helpful but I do not suppot this because I feel if a child needs help with how they are feeling they will go to an adult they trust, weather it be a teacher at school or a parent or even a friend at achool.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally I think computers good influence people There one greatest inventionsWith computers listen music watch research things projects good time Computers help people create listen watch make music When computer get influenced musicians create music And eating music need go Into computer add beats different vocals You also watch Not exactly whatever show d like see Some people even create movies special programs Thats though Alot questions answered computer research Cures different disease like cancer found Even small research projects like Who founded easily found one quick google search Yeah might getting lazy makes peoples lives simpler For instance intead reading dozens books could search internet answers You even take classes online impressed Another great effect people computers socializing fun Socializing computers effective socializing person gives quieter people like chance say whats mind Plus wont akward silence moments like usually seems phone Oh I mention facebook On I love facebook I get keep touch family friends I longer see I used close friends switched schools I never heard Until I found facebook Same many people And younger ones ll bored billions games online How could go wrong Sounds like computers positive effect people But guys think Can one big negative weigh ton positve I think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graph illustrates the changes of unemployment rate in 2012, of two different area, urban and rural, in Australia. The most noticeable thing in this graph is rural areas recorded higer unemployment rate than urban areas in all quarters, but in the whole year, the unemployment rate in rural areas decreased while that of urban areas increased.\nTo be more specific, the unemployment rate of rural areas in Australia largely decreased from 6.5% to 3.5% in the first and the second quarter, while the unemployment rate of urban area rose from 2% to 4%. However, in the beginning of the third quarter, this tendency changed. The unemployment rate of rural areas increased 1% on the third quarter, while it decreased on urban areas by 2%. However, the unemployment rate of urban areas increased after the third quarter. Except the little recession on the end of the third quarter, the percentage has consistently increased and reached to almost 5%. in contrast the unemployment rate in rural areas plateaued from the third quarter, and it remained around 5%.\nTo sum up, rural areas had higher unemployment rate than urban areas, but while it decreaed 7% to 5%, the unemployment rate of urban areas increased from 2% to 5%, and the difference between the two got tiny at the end of 2012.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the aurtor gives a strong reson why we should study venus dispite the dangers if venius. by giving the resons why studing venus will give us a more knowladge of how the world works, and how it will helps us with scientific advancements that are made for the need of using towads studing venus and with thoese advancements will help us learn more about earth itself. As he states in his writing that NASA\n\nis using electronics made from silicon carbide in a chamber simulatng the chaos of venus's surface and he talked about the envision of a computer that made calculations by useing gears and leavels and do not use electronics at all.\n\nso do to the tech they would develope do to needing to help them study venus's surface. would infact help us advance in science as well as technology. which gives us more of an understandment of how the world works.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I writing think computers really effect people bad way I say becuause go internet get much excirse You also nt get good grades That s bad thing Plus computer really wierd people I really want guys hear story Go outside mom I m computer computer much want want get exersce nt get excise wo nt healthy want get excise Also obese nt want For instance gym class want healthy So get good grade Do want bad grades That sums You got On report card When spend alot time computer get addicted get addicted homework grades drop You get bad grades school Then possibilty stay back Plus parents flipout This one reasons computers effect people bad way When go computer clue talking unless thier friends There many cases kids getting stolen facebook myspace kid goes websites kids always danger There cyber could find live information For instance case myspace kid thought talking year old boy really talking something year old guy Then girl went missing weeks That So never trust computer When take real good look computers see good All reasons They get nearly amount supose Your grade plummet stay computer trick So even know communicate friends Its worth", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist lack water date information rolling hills If date information would probably got water town thats empty almost empty like ghost town cyclist said", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars coming? I hope not. I don't think having a car based on technology would be a good thing for us. People should drive their own cars and not have technology do it for them. People need responsiblity.\n\nIf a driverless car breaks down on the road, who is there to take care of it? No one, so it could just sit there forever. Driverless cars can be more dangerous then cars with people in them. Say there is a person walking on the side of the road, will the car see them? If the car didnt see them and hit and killed them, who would be responsible? You can't blame anyone, because it's no ones fault. That is why we should not have driverless cars.\n\nSay it was snowing outside, and the driverless car didn't sense that the road was icy and ran into the back of another car that was stopped at a stoplight. Driverless cars will just cause more and more problems on the road. We need to stick to actual people driving cars to keep the road more safe.\n\nNow I know that driverless cars would help people in many ways. It would save money for some, and possibly give people free transportation, but it's just not worth it. They would cause many more accidents on the road. Yes they would save money, but having non regular cars would save lifes.\n\nPeople just need to realize that having driverless cars is not the way to go. We need to not be lazy and drive our own cars. We need responsiblity. Having driverless cars would cause more and more problems than we need. That is why I think we need to keep non driverless cars on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view convincing people to participate in the seagoin. In the passage it states that you can make nine trips morethan the other seagoing cowboy. In the passage it also states that they had benfits of seeing Europe and China. This kind of proves how Luke's trying to convince.\n\nAnother reason that luke trying to convince you. In the passge it states that Luke torned an excavated castle in crete and marveled at the panama canal on his way to china. Another detail from the passage is that Katie farm as a boy had prepare Luke for hard work but not for the dangers at sea. This also can of proves how Luke trying to convince.\n\nLuke's point of view is first person beacuse he talks about how he got into seagoing cowboys .In the passsage it states that he had bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Next ,It states that a small strip of metal along the edge stopped his slide ,keep", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The additonal to Facial Action Coding Systems in classrooms would be extremely valuable to schools and making them a more efficent, healthy, and conflict free place to learn. In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author discribes new technology to better understand how one shows emotion with the face. It also offers several possible uses for this technology including in school classrooms to detect emotions of students. If implimented the FACS could be used to engage students more, find signs of mental illness in students, and help school staff to stop conflict before it gets to its worst point.\n\nThe article suggests that the system could \" recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored ... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" While the current times could certainly not see an A.I\n\nmake a good, well writen curriculum versus an actual teacher. This could be a way to collect data on the emotions of students, and have instructors modify their plan to be more engaging if many students are bored or more slow paced if most students are confused. It would also provide a more unbiast source that other more conventinal ways of evaluating lessons like a questionaire. As during a questionaire a student many be more likely to lie if they like the teacher and give them a more positive score or lie and give them a more negitive score if they dislike the teacher. Many times in highschool class rooms the teacher will ask if there is any confusion and many students who are shy or introverted will hesitate to say anything. However, with this new technology teachers could know if any students were confused with relitive certainty. Helping students who may lag behind otherwise, this would in turn raise graduation rates and help the school in general.\n\nThe next possible use for this in classrooms would be to offer a possible recommendation to a doctor on if the student has a mental health problem. An example could be when a student is distracted often and shows other signs of the illness the algorithm could recommend the student to go into a real doctor to get ADHD tests done. The inventor of this system has already said that it could be helpful in another medical setting saying it could \"make computer-animated faces more expressive-for...video surgery.\" so it could be useful in this way as well. Obviously this would not be 100 percent reliable, however, doctors could use it as another source of data in additon to their medical expertice.\n\nThe technology could also be used to stop conflict before it begins in many schools. Bulling is often seen as one of the hardest problems to stop in school, but a school may have an easier job at doing so with this system. For example if the emotions of strong emotions like, as the author states that the system can already detect, \" anger..., fear, and sadness\" then a conflict mediator can go the place the emotions are happining before something like a fight, bullying, or threats can get to their worst points and prevent them from happining.\n\nThis reasons that the Facial Action Coding System could be used in the educational sector are signifigant and far reaching.This introduction to schools could be just what schools need to fight low graduation rates, growing mental problems in the school system, and qualm the conflicts that often erupt between students. The end result being a better school system in general with the additon of this technology to classrooms around the globe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wonder if there is life on Mars? Many believe there is, but it has not been proven. NASA have been searching for the answer for years. On the Viking spacecraft 1, they spotted a shadowy likeness face of a human on Cydonia that went on for nearly two miles. But, how did it get there? Many believe Aliens, but really the face is just a natual landfrom.\n\nTo beginning with, there is no physical evdience to back it up. Scientist believed it was just another Martian Mesa. There common around Cydonia, and coencidently this shawdow looked like an Egyptian Pharaoh. When NASA soon sent the photo out to the public, the caption wrote \"huge rock fromation ... which reembles a human head.\" If NASA believed that it was just a rock formation from the start, then why would it be Aliens once the public seen it?\n\nSecondly,\n\nthe image was simply just a illusion. Our minds are able to turn anything we look at into a face, as long as if the items are in correct positon. Have you ever looked at the front of a vehicle and thought it was smiling? That was simply just a illusion. When the huge rock formation was seen, it simply was our mind thinking it looked a face, but it really wasn't.\n\nLastly, the rumors of it being Aliens did not begin until the photo was realesed to public eye. If NASA did not believe it was aliens then why would we? In that time period, NASA had not found life on mars and still have not. There is no water to show signs of life. When the media saw the photos of course they immediately will say Aliens. NASA simply, wanted peoples attention to go to Mars for funding. On April 5, 1998, when the Mars Global Surveyor flew over ,and took a better picture it was soon realized it was just a natural landform.\n\nThere is no proof that Aliens created the face on Cydonia. It was just a natural landfrom. Until NASA is able to find proof that it is aliens on Mars that it will just be a natural landform. The Alien theory was proved wrong by Mars Global Surveyor. NASA had lots of logical deails on why not it was not Aliens.The Egyptian face was just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on these new smart cars is that I feel the just shouldn't even create them. They could cause accidents, it could be pedestrians in the street, traffic lights messes up alot, and IT COULD JUST BE DANGEROUS period.\n\nWhat if someone was traveling down the road in one of these new smart cars and they got so used to the smart driving and stirring itself and the driver falls asleep or something. Example, my dad for instents, he travels ALOT and he gets so tired of being the only one driving for hours and hours by himself, so he would feel like this is the perfect car for him, but me knowing him, he would just lean his seat back put his shades on and let the car do all the work, and ends up falling asleep or something, or get on his phone and misses his turn. Also the cars could most likely cause accidents because there is always alot of people on the road driving really SLOW in front of you and, and the smart car could be set to go an certain speed and hits the back of the car in front of you. Pedestrians can be in the street at the wrong time and the smart car is just still going and hits the pedestrian. Traffic lights stop working or acts funny also and out of no where you might think you have the right a way to go and the light could just red.\n\nPoint blank period there could be to many dangerous thigns that can happen with these cars, seriously. Would it be the driver in the smart car fault? No, because there not the ones driving, it would be GOOGLE'S fault.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, they're said to be the future of our word by Google cofounder Sergey Brin. Is this really neccassary though? A driverless car seems to be a cool idea to think about but not neccassarily something we want in our evetryday lives. There are many reasons why making driverless cars apart of our REAL world is not a great idea and these cans outweigh the pros.\n\nOne major reason to why these cars would be a bad idea is the major safety issue. There is a reason why traffic laws are written under the assumption that the only safe car is a car driven by a capable human. A car this high tech would be extremely hard to garuntee safety for the people. This car could lose control and or malfunction and hit another car, a person, or anything in it's path. The car could cost someone their life or a lot of physical/mental damage and under the expense of who? If these cars become a thing and something would happen such as a crash between the car and another human, who would be responsible? The manufacturer? The passenger? How can we really judge who is at fault? Who would be responsible for paying the victims medical bills? It certainly should not be the victim themself.\n\nAnother reason this car is an uneccassary idea is expense. This would be a seemingly expensive car to produce and buy. This product would use so much money that could be used for different things. It also would put many people out of their job. People like bus drivers, taxi drivers, ubers, and normal car manufactuers. These people being jobless will only weaken the economy causing more money to be lost.\n\nLastly, what about the environment? This machine would produce so much chemical waste poluting our earth. To make the car it would require factories to burn more and all that smoke and waste will go into our atmosphere. To make the car run it would most likely require more fuel. The exhaust from that kind of car would not exactly haelp our environment be healthier. We do not need anymore pollution to our world.\n\nSo think, just think for me. Is this car really something we need? Is it really something we want? I'd say it is not. We do not need such an awful machine roaming around. This car would be a very bad idea and this car is not something we need to manufacture. This car should be something to keep for the movies and our imagination, not the real world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is there any advantages of limiting car usage? Whether it's for the environment or even your health, there are some advatages that overall can help you. Lets be honest, cars aren't cheap and i don't really see them getting any cheaper but walking from point A to point B is free. It's kind of like killing two birds with one stone, by walking you save the environment from the gas you would be burning and you're saving money at the same time.\n\nLimiting or even completly getting rid of driving can help you become a happier or even tense free person. Driving a vehicle, escpecially on a congested highway or road can create road rage causing you to become more stressful and aggrivated. In a suburb in Germany, residents there are giving up their cars, something they have never done before. They seem to be working efficiently without their cars, still being able to go to the store and work. It seems that they like this way of life better, stress free and no worrys of getting stuck in traffic. Like what Heidrun Walter explained in source one, she said \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" People are so infactuated with the thought of driving and cars but they don't realize that driving all the time is effecting your health. Personally, I think it's some of the reason as to why there is so much obesity in this world.\n\nNot only is driving all the time bad for your health but it's also bad for the environment. Paris had a problem with there being so much smog, that they actually had to enforce a partial ban from driving. The partial ban was working, it was said in source 2 that after five days of intensifying smog, congestion went down 60 percent in the capitol of France. The partial ban worked with trying to clear out the smog to help the environment so well that the French party rescind the ban for odd numbered plates on tuesday's. Source 3 explained that in Columbia they were going on there third year of cars being banned except for buses and taxis. Just like in Germany people seemed to being adjusting and liking the idea of no cars on the roadway. A business man named Carlos Arturo Plaza, said that \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" referring to Columbias third year of banning cars.\n\nEven if you just have to go right down the street, people hop in there cars and go, when in fact you can just walk. An official of Transportation for America,David Goldberg, expressed about how depended we are on vehicles. He said \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.\" And change is what seems to be exactly happening. In source 4 it was said that there seemed to be a decline in America's love affair with their vehicles. According to Doug Short, who is apart of an investment research comapany said that \"When adjusted for population growth, the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter.\" Maybe people are starting to realize that you don't necessarily need to drive and that it's more of previlge then a must.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The effect that advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us remain unaware of how it moulds us to meet the needs of competing companies. Actually, a large number of advertisements may be harmful to consumers and therefore should be better controlled in the mass media.\n\nThe negative influences of advertising from competing companies on consumers are beyond doubt. It is easy to change people’s needs into greed. In fact, advertisements from different companies constantly encourage people to want diverse things. Thus, surrounded by the advertisement, people are too unwise to perform a balanced act between income and expenditure. In other words, many consumers are convinced to overdraw the money they do not have. As a result, what seems to be good for the economy begins to backfire because advertising from competing companies may mislead consumers deeply into credit card debts which they could not afford to pay before the deadline.\n\nAccordingly, some proactive methods are suggested to be applied. Firstly, the government should take serious action to counteract the negative effects of advertisements from competing companies. One effective approach is to establish and impose strict censorship aiming to advertise on mass media. Also, the local TV station and Internet website should increase the costs of these advertisements to be shown or published through the public media. In this way, the current enormous qualities can be reduced and minimize their negative impacts.\n\nIn summary, the drawbacks of advertising to customers may motivate people’s greed and add huge financial burdens. Consequently, various actions should be taken by the government, TV stations and website managers to reduce these negative impacts and protect the rights of consumers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mustangs, Mercedes, Hummers , and the \"Punch buggy \" are just a few brands of vehicles well known in America . Vechicles today are big factor in life for the reason that cars are used every single day all around the world as transportation and although we have the bus or other ways to get to places , driving is the most selected choice to get to a location. With that being said , vehicles being used everyday has it positives and negatives . Positives could be how it takes you to a location quicker than riding a bike or taking a walk , but have you ever thought all the negatives there is when a car being used has ?Could you only imagine a world without car? It may seem like a crazy idea to think a world without cars but a life without cars could be a well functional world for the reason that cars could have contribuation to polution in our air or could make the world a so called different place.\n\nIn Addition, driving could have a contribution to pollution . Many may not think about it but cars emissions pollute the air we breath. In a article called \"Paris bans driving due to smogs\" it states how \" after days of near record pollution in the air ,Paris enforced partial driving to clear their polution. Also how cold nights and warm days caused a warmer layer of air that trapped cars emission when used in Paris.\" Pollution in our air may seem a bit scary but the movement of less driving has already began without us noticing .In another article named \" The End of Car Culture\" it speaks on the subject \" there has been a decrease in America in buying cars and driving.\" Which is a great start to a better future in our world.\n\nFurthermore , We can make the world a so called differnet place for the better. In a article called \"In German Suburb, Life goes on Without Cars\" it states how \"their world with any cars has been sucessful by making where they live more compact and accessible to public transportation. This new approach now stores can be placed a walkway from main street than malls along a distant hallways .\" Many places around the world have made a step to a better world for example in a article named \" Car-free day is spinning into big hit in Bogota\" it states \" they had a day free of cars aka driving free to reduced thier pollution and have a more clean better world . Results from this event turned out sucessful , for that other countries have joined this event.\"\n\nIn Conclusion , A world without cars may seem crazy however just think of all the damages it does to the world than the positives because pollution is not something easy to get rid of and by stepping up to make change as it already began will help us live in a better clean world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The computer software to read a humans' faces can be helpful, but it can also be harmful. It can be helpful to know what kind of lesson plan that your students are interested in and what ads to put up on their computer. It can be harmful, because what if the student does not want to talk about their emotions and they are having a rough day. Not everyone would want to have the feelings known by everyone.\n\nThe computer could use your emotion to manipulate you, and make you do things you woundn't normally do. Like bring up ads to make you spend money that you don't nesessarily have. Or bring up ads that make you go on a website that you really aren't supposed to be on. All of these things can cause trouble and the emotion reading software may seem like not such a brilliant idea.\n\nThe software may malfunction sometimes and read your emotion wrong. Giving you things on the computer that you do not want to see. You can become irritatible with your computer knowing that it knows how you're feeling all the time. It can become scary, and it may feel like someone is watching you just because your computer knows your emotions.\n\nNot everyone would want this software on their computer, so it may not be as profitable as it was initially intended to be. When you are in a bad mood you don't want little things bothering you. Which means you don't want ads popping up evrywhere; even though you are interested in those ads you may not want them popping up too frequently. The software maybe inaccurate sometimes and that may cause problems. Evidently, this is not a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever took your time and studied venus ? Well you should because there is things that we need to find out about venus like if humans can go there or the things that are on venus.\n\nTo begin, Venus is a unknown place that you should study. You should study venus because there are alot of things that people dont know about venus here on earth that scientist have been trying to find out. Even if venus is as hot as thinks it is, it is still good to find out things about venus to further our knowledge about this place. According to the text, \" temperatures would be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans \" (Paragraph 4). This proves that there is a posibility that we can go to venus one day and check it out for ourselves. You could be the first person to go to venus and see what it is like for youself and come back to earth and give people knowlege about venus.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus might seem like a dangerous place to explore but our technology is something that could help us get to venus and gain more knowlege about this unknown place. You should study venus, you may be the only person to ever travel to venus and give all the curious people facts and share your experences with them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is worth pursuiting. It is Earth's \"twin\", its the closest planet to Earth. It can be a big benafit to know about Venus and its past. Its easier to get to Venus than to Mars. Venus has familiar features like Earth with in the sediment of Venus.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. We have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus, no spacecraft have survived the landing for more then a few hours. NASA has been working on studying Venus to make chambers to simulat the chaos of Venus surface. NASA making electronics to last for three weeks in such conditions.\n\nVenus has clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than in our own planet. Venus has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting.\n\nThe temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit in Venus. Venus has looked like it had been support for life long ago. NASA has a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the Venusian landscape to see more what the ground looks like. Venus is a challenge to be able to land and exploer and it might be the next plant humans will land on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would rather have flying cars by 2020 those cartoons promised me as a kid, lets be honest. Driverless cars is a step closer to that. As generations and generations go by, we as a whole world and society have become so busy that we are using our cars everyday to get to one place to another. People want to explore and adventure the world and see new places. Yet it isnt idealistic as many of us cant find the motivation to spend the money and energy on gas and long road trips. Having driveless cars enocurages all the above with productivity, spending less money, and time management.\n\nNow when I ask my parents for a ride they will most likely tell 2 things, either its too far away, or that they are too exhausted to drive. Which is understandable as they might fall asleep on the wheel which is very dangerous for the driver and the passengers. Also they dont to waste the time, when they could be using their precious time to do something important. Refering back to paragraph 7, \"GM has developed driver's deats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger...\" Which means\n\nthe driver can multitask on their other work while waiting for their turn to drive. Also they dont need to worry about falling asleep because most the time the car will be able to drive with no problem. This encourages people to be more productive and go out more.\n\nHaving a car is expensive. It can be stressful paying for car insurance and being anxious not to get in an accident or else your rates go up. Having to pay every few days for gas money; money piles up. That is why people save the chance to not go out unless they really need to. Referring to paragraph 1, Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions that driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Using public transporations means saving thousands of money each month and being able to use on more traveling and family expenses.\n\nI can relate to a lot of people, when i say that i can be late to many important meetings because of transportation. Having driveless cars means it will always be within your reach to get a ride in time to go to that interview or meeting. Being sble to be more timely mannered means that more people will be able to be more flexible with their schedules and get more things done throughout the day without being in complete ruins.\n\nI believe that anything new and drastic can make anyone doubt new ideas and innovations. But once we get use and know how the driveless car works hands-on, it will become a normal routine that'll put into play in our daily lives. There will be more people who will put their own ideas that will keep on advancing the driveless cars and more new technology. Then perhaps in 2030 those flying cars will come around.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that others should participate in the \"Seagoing Cowboys Program\" becuase it is a unique opratunity that a lot of others might not get to have the chance of doing. Being in that group is a very big responsibility, and chance to show others what you can do and what you are capable of. \"When I started playing football a lot of peoel thought i wasnt gonna be able to do it and they though that i would get hurt and break a bone and not even be on the field as much as i wanted. But it turned out that the coach put me in a position that no one would ever expect from a girl, The QB. My friends and famiy then knew what i was capable of donig.\" You just have to show them what you can do and prove it to them.\n\nI am a very brave man that decided to do the job that I am doing now becuase its kind of like the story in the bible. There are a bunch of animals in a boat on water, floating across the sea. There are many bad things that could happen that you might not even see coming from a mile away. The job that I am doing now is a VERY risky job that not a lot of pepole are brave enough to do for them selfs. You have to be very tallented and brave to walk over here and get on a boat not knowing what is gonna happen.\n\nTo be one of there people you have to be physicaly and mentaly prepared for what is coming your way, you can never tell what is gonna happen in the future so you alawys have to be prepared for it. Luke probably had a lot of bad things that happened to him like when there was a bad storm one night and he was climbing the ladder to get to the captin and he slipped and fell and broke som of his ribs. If you think that that is bad then when you get into the job you better be prepared be a lot more sever things can happen to you while you are on that boat, you might never be able to tell what is coming your way.\n\nIf you think that you are prepared please come and join the Seagoing Cowboys Program , I promise that you will never regret the decission that you make. The program will have a lot of trainning for the peolpe that might have no other way of getting in shape where they are now. But if you are realling wanting to join makes sure you are in good shape, physicaly and mentaly and come hop on a boat with us and take a trip across the sea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The population in cities is constantly increasing, and thus housing crisis is a most common problem big cities are facing today. This is a major concern for governments as it not only increase the cost of living, but also affects the quality of life for its residents. I do agree that only governments can solve this problem by taking various measures, such as restricting landed houses to save the space, encouraging vertical residential buildings and gradually expanding the city.\n\nIn the olden days, people lived in landed independent houses as there were lots of spaces in the city. However, this is not possible in the modern cities as the city population is increasing rapidly, and resulting in a space shortage situation for accommodating housing for all. One of the action governments can take is to discourage building new landed houses and encourage people to live in apartment flats. For instance, the Singapore government has built thousands of high-floor residential flats through a housing development board to accommodate its ever-growing residents in an affordable way. It also stopped permitting for building new landed houses to deal with the space crunch.\n\nSome governments are also looking at options for expanding the city to create more residential properties. For example, Bangalore, one of the fast growing cities in India is continuously expanding by incorporating more residential properties and other infrastructure at the outskirts of the city, which gradually becomes part of the growing city. However, this option is viable only when there are enough spaces surrounding the city. For cities like Hong-Kong and Singapore, which are islands, the only option is to grow vertically within the city. Solving the housing shortage is an issue that requires proper planning and big investment and residence of a big city have very little to do and the government seems like the appropriate authority to solve this problem. \n\nIn conclusion, the cities are growing rapidly and so the residents of the city also grow. Thus, it is the responsibility of governments to take appropriate measures to create a better living place at an affordable price for its city residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People without occupations are increasing; hence, people suppose that children solely need to study until high school. From my perspective, I am totally against this viewpoint and will elaborate on some reasons to justify this stance.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the primary rationale would appear to be better growth. That is to say, when children possess more opportunities to access education, they can develop all aspects of their mental and physical health. It means that they can study some subjects, typically math, gymnastics, and science. Therefore, they can boost their brains to acquire new information and have sufficient knowledge for working in the future and enhance their major competence with top-notch initiatives.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, another motive relates to higher soft skills. To be more specific, they not only broaden their horizons but also receive a variety of meaningful lessons and experiences pertaining to strange situations. Moreover, if they are taught for a longer time, they will meet some practical behaviours and then know how to apply their expertise to solve difficult circumstances. As a result, they know the ways to go through ups and downs as well as obstacles. For example, they are educated in good communication abilities to team up with their peers in order to obtain the best results in their work. From that, young generations effortlessly implement these things for their career later and reach their summit of professions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it would be logical to conclude that giving up going to high school should be rejected by virtue of better growth and higher soft skills. In fact, higher education should be advocated because of its numerous merits for future work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author makes really good points on how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can benefit us in the future. In the article, Nick D'Alto makes a few points on how this new technology can benefit students in a classroom. Having this new technology in the classroom would be great so teachers can detect wether their students are bored or tired.\n\nHaving a Facial Action Coding System will benefit an ordinary classroom in various ways. In the text it states,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" This shows that if the students get confused or bored then it'll instruct the teacher who will then explain it to the student or make the lesson seem more interesting. This is important because it can help teachers out when they teach a new lesson.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System will benefit classrooms all across the globe. It'll be able to detect the students' emotions and report the information back to the teacher. Then the teacher will then know how their students feel about the curriculum and if they need extra help or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author created sense love care Narciso Rodriguez The author talked sense family people nt become one community In explains In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship It closeknit community honest hard working immagrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need shared feeling acceptance although different cultures ethnicities learned become one family rascist enviroment shared parents made difficult decision move new place leaving loved ones behind children s better future CAPS showed lot admiration parents based always family members neighbors around kitchen table meals In says There way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon demonstration important family friends The author shares feelings love toward parents memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, violent video games and films are extremely demanding among all age groups. while some people believe that these are detrimental to societies, others assume they are harmless and relaxing. Both views will be discussed in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some families are worried about the harmful effects of violence shown in movies and games on people. They believe that people are more prone to act cruelly in real life by watching brutal scenes frequently. Therefore, these films should not be available to be seen worldwide. Exciting music and visual effects are usually added to violent acts making them more addictive and as a result, people will be more likely to watch or play similar films and games next time and will get used to them. I agree with this view since research has shown that the crime rate is much higher in societies in which people have unlimited access to brutal scenarios.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some others do not consider violent pictures harmful. This group state that virtual goings-on has not any impact on the individual’s real life and that playing such games is relaxing. They think adults watch these movies to be distracted from everyday life’s stresses and get the energy to back to work. Personally speaking, I disagree with their opinion because I am sure people will be impressed by violent scenes unconsciously. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although one view is that watching bloody movies is an amusement, I believe it might have deteriorating effects on community health and it should be banned.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars shouldn't be legal, yet even made.They can be dangerous and it's never 100% that they will never cause an accident we (humans) could've prevented if driving ourselves.\n\nLike stated in the passage paragraph 8, why should a driver have to wait their turn? I believe if you get a car and want the safest way of driving, drive yourself. There is yet been any evidence that we (humans) should at all trust computered objects. Technology still gliches so why take the chance of your driverless car gliching and if coming into a dangerous situation it cant warn you in time? And as said in the passage paragraph 9 when in an accident who is at blame? The driver or manufacturer? I'd say both should have a part especially with financial responsibility paying half. Before even putting out a driverless car there should be YEARS of testing to make sure anyone in a driverless car will be safe as possible and never in danger.\n\nAll in conclusion i still believe that driverless cars shouldnt be used because no matter how much the maufacturer states it's safe and effective, it could always lead you in danger. Now driving yourself you can know for sure if youre leading yourslef in to danger, and that will be totally on you. You won't have to ever assume or worry about getting hurt because of another computered device, you'll trust yourself. Which is more safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports his idea well. I agree with him because he makes several valid points and its logical. Throughout the article the author states how Venus is our sister planet and was once an Earth like planet. By saying this he proves how we are trying to make our way to our sister planet and also throws in more ideas.\n\nFirstly, the author states in paragraph 3 \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" This quote from the passage shows how the author is trying to get the point across that Venus is very inhospitable. This helps support his idea because it then allows him to state ways on how we would be able to reach our sister planet and gather more data from it.\n\nSecondly, the texts states in paragraph 4 \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Eath. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This supports the authors claim by stating Venus was once a planet just like Earth and was able to Host life forms on it. By researching Venus more we may be able find out what caused the demise and of the once habitable planet.\n\nThirdly, the article states in paragraph 5 \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, tempatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Eath. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This supports the authors claim because it show just how we could survive Venus harsh conditions. He says it wont be easy, but with the rate technology is advancing we will soon be able to make a Venus trip possible.\n\nIn conclusion, I would agree with the author because getting to Venus may take time and advancements in technology, but it would all be worth becasue we would get to see the origin of our sister planet. We would also possibly get to see what caused Venus's demise. By finding the cause of Venus's destruction we could possibly prevent it from happening to our home planet. As the author stated \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lots of people think the face on Mars is an alien or something else,its really not. The face on Mars is not an alien because there is no proof of it being an alien. Only few people have said it looked like an alien,but they have no proof of that being true. Lots of scientist and NASA have proof that its not an alien and that it is something else thats there. People who think that the face is an alien, they are wrong.\n\nThe face on Mars is not an alien because NASA said it was a sort of rock formation. Also that it looked like a human head. NASA never said it looked like an alien or that they had proof of it being an alien. NASA said \"NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose,and mouth\". NASA also gave proof that the shadows gave an illusion of the rock formation that it looked like a face.\n\nAnother way that it did not look like a face is that MOC said it was just a landform on Mars. MOC also said that the face was not and alien and revealed what it actually was. MOC said \" MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos...anxious web sufers were wating when the image first appeared on a JPL web site,revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all\". MOC had proof and a picture that the face was not an alien and that it was something diffrent.\n\nFinally, you can see that most of the scientist said it was a type of landform or something else. They never said that is was an alien. They all had proof and a picture to tell us that it was a natrual landform. The face is actually a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa which is a type of landform. The face on Mars is not an alien at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people think kids see certain things found offensive Like books music movies magazines I believe books thing removed libraries shelf It parent choice child look listen But days child parent authority nt let watch listen something make kids want Since want find away watch listen ever They even go behind parents back probably wo nt care get trouble With new generation authority limit much children see today Children see lot things interested find different types ways Computers televsion radio three differnt major ways finding things maybe offensive kids interested time Young parents believe one reasons kids know movies books music magazines They say things things young people know young age That make kids think alright parents ever maybe So let parent choice child see Cause either way going able find away get", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys Program is a great experience.\n\nThis is a very helpful thing to do and gives other people what they need.\n\nIt is a great experience, and helps you think of other people's needs, not just you own.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys are hired by the UNRRA, or the United Nations Relief and Rehabitation Administration. World War ll left a lot of countries in ruins, cauising lack of food and other supplies.\n\nWe go to other countries to bring\n\nthe people there animls and supplies.\n\nOn these trips we sometimes get to go sight seeing while we are there.\n\nI have visited the Acropolisin Greece and taken a gondola ride in Venice, Italy.\n\nEach was fun and enjoyable, even if we can't stay that long.\n\nOnce we drop off the animals and cargo, we have plenty of space to play games to occupy our time. With to cargo holds empty we can play games such as:\n\nvollyball, basketball, and other fun games. Also if you get drafted, you won't have to go to war beacause yo uare already serving in the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nOverall, the Seagoing Cowboys is a fun experience. You help people and have fun along the way. Join the Seagoing Cowboy and have a life changing experience that can help you later in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human is easily affected by outside factor and is curious about what relates to themselves. That’s the reason in recent years, there are many people are trying to explore the events happening in their living house past few years. \r\n\r\nFirst, the rising of TV shows, especially documentaries about the house with a special event which involves the war, the spirit story or famous person cause the curiosity of the owner house. In addition, nowadays, people prefer buying the old house which is transferred through many owners than the newly built house. The people start to follow the show and track the history in their place which not only makes them satisfy their wondering but also makes them feel safe to continuously live in this house or building. For example, the HBO TV show “Finding Ghost” create a wave of people who believe they are also living with spiritous power in their house, then people tried to contact the “ghost hunter” whom main characters in the shows to help them catch all wandered spirit or they will ask their neighbour who is living a long time in this area.\r\n\r\nIn addition, the exploration about their own house brings to people the certain knowledge and help them easily in re-construct or sell the house with the price they expect without waste money to the estate agency. It is quite a popular trending around the young owner, who want to change the house style with low cost and the only choice is doing re-construction by themselves. They need to understand the way their house was built and what the previous owner did with the house structure to help them have an effective strategy. It also saves them the cost to hire an external human resource. The information is normally accessed through the website about housing or the previous owners.\r\n\r\nThe interesting about the historical housing where people live to bring to people certain information and makes them feel more comfortable when living in their own homes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Natural environment was disturbed by increased human production of goods. Most outputs made up by natural such as products of wood, sand, wool or stone. Generally speaking, human could protect our nature.\n\nNowadays, building had been illustrated continuously, following by a consumption of people lifestyle. Most people are not interested in things that are not their own due to they ever though that eccessential to their life. For instance, wealthy people wanted to wearing neccessary that made them look well, they supported the customers that design there clothes which was made from wool like a fur coat or scarf. Moreover, furnitures such as carbinet or table was made from wood, glass from sand, stone was made into various decorations set up in the house. By the way, every natural things was sold by normal people who work in woods or another, or rural persons who can harvest those produce to sell to entrepreneurs in order to produce the products to sell to the wealthy. which of these will be expensive.\n\nI realize, the government must set limits on how these natural things can be utilized to meet human needs. When used it must be known to bring it back to endure instead in order to keep the nature intact not disappear or gone. I feel that natural essential apply the human life, could not seperate them out.\n\nTo summarize, it true that human behaviour were demolished to the natural environment so, citizens could help each other apply for protecting our nature in order not to be damaged too much and will have to use for a long time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aouthor want to know is in venus people can live ove there. The sientificts try to probe maybe in years the humans can live there like marth they do\n\nquiz with robots they send camaras to take pictures for see how is ove there. The NASA do a lot spedittions to marth but no to much too venus and venus are one of the most big planets in the solar system. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) is the organisation them work in all about space.\n\nNASA is working to make a bettter oportunitys to know more about venus they send robots to venus or marth and the moom too. they make a better oportunitys to study venus, for example they simpilified electronics, A thick atmospere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus the conditions are so far more extrteme then anything humans can resest is different the encounter on Earth.\n\nThe environment of venus is so different then the Earth is a many sustans contaminate or can be radioactic for the reason the NASA do expedition to venus for see how look like venus, to take simbiontecs or just taste the environment. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940 during the World Ward II. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nThe NASA wnat to make more experimrnt with people but they not are there yet because can be dangers or like anyone wanna go to venus if they don't know if is save or if is dangers for they judt experiment with robots right now just with robots for now. They stell doind more test sending more robots for do more test for know if can Humans live in venus or in can people go for do experiment with the environment. They go more to the moom but they start goint to othe planets for know more about if Humans can live in other planets so basically that's what NASA wanna do it study planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "History always holds enormous curiosity for people being keen to unveil its mystery in the present day. Most of them have no clue on where to embark. Rather than waiting for an apple to fall accidentally from the tree of inspiration, they found that some historical buildings may be an anchor for their exploration of mystery. The enthusiasm and interests in this pursuit are certainly not driven by satisfying our intrigue that discover tales or scandal anecdotes, but by some pragmatic reasons. \r\n\r\nOld constructions witness a city's aesthetic and cultural history, helping to give people a sense of place and connection to the past. Let us take the Potala Palace—the highest palace in the world as an example. The Potala Place, namely the Winter Palace, is surmounted at Red Mountain top in Lhasa Valley (Tibet, China) at an altitude of 3,700 meters since the 7th century, enclosed within massive White and Red Palaces. The Polata Palace is painted in red and white; a fresh coat made of honey, milk, and sugar is applied every autumn. As a religious Tibetan Buddhist, visiting the Polata Place every few years is my sporadic pilgrimage to the sacred site, which also is the starting point of my lifetime religious journey. As increasingly more background narratives I accumulated over the years, a bond has been firmly established between Buddhism and a spiritual believer-me. \r\n\r\nWhen it comes to real estate, delving into the past of a house before purchase is what a savvy customer would follow. Suppose an owner possesses the facts of his listed property thoroughly, like construction date, building materials, decoration style, house structure, and the information of the former owner, which can help him know whether he can nor cannot altar parts of the building. At the very least, it could prevent him from causing irreparable damage to original features, which he would be keen to retain if he knew their worth. Alternatively, he wants to put it on sale; in that case, the property's stories can be capitalized as marketing pitching to enhance its price, especially any historical figures once involved.\r\n\r\nThere is a load of sources available out there to facilitate our searching. Online and offline. The Internet engine can access a wild collection of information without an immense amount of time spending on digging through thousands of papers in the library. Besides, a community survey can be employed as an offline alternative to make up those unlisted on the webs by talking to the local people with frist hand experiences. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, the knowledge of architectural history gives an understanding of the ideas essential to shape the past societies. A building can reveal much about the culture that produced it. Ignoring the past would trigger a failure to nurture our pride and cultural identity as an ethic and a nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper want people memorized computer miss world around want kids spend hours day computers playing games could outside getting fresh air The question computers good effects bad effects people The obvious answer bad effect People constantly use computers teach bad habbits search inappropriate things IF people always playing games computers go jag The answer never People constantly computer nt get enough exercise One reason lot people obese nt getting enough exercise Computers nt helping situation Some people say CAPS I ll spend hour computer I go work But one hour computer turns two hours two hours turns three know ve wasted wrote day computer nt exercise Also many games computer really nt stop playing Yes games really entertaining nt spend day playing You play fun game fifteen minutes go get air As computer mesmorised lot nt get enough exercise Second people go bad habbits For example kids always On website talk friends On computer problem people dont use Too much get used writing like Then kids start writing school even know Also new websites put personal information This makes easy strangers learn Lastly easy people even search inappropriate things Everything internet little kids going curious They search inappropriate words ad pictures one would ever know people past inappropriate information others see impossible take And parents nt know children searching inappropriate things kids going keep know wont get caught So see computers negative effect people It causes individuals easy inappiopriate things So go limit time computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This piece of technology allows us to read the emotional expressions of our peers and well, paintings, such as Da Vinci's, Mona Lisa. From this, it has been discovered that Mona Lisa was eighty-three percent happy, six percent fearful, nine percent disgusted, and two percent angry. I believe that the information recieved from the Facial Action Coding System is valuable.\n\nIn today's world, we rely so much on technology that it's hard to see a world without it. We all use technology everyday whether it be a computer, cellphone, or even a television. With advancements and improvements in technology, that leads us to believe that the accuracy of technology is reliable. In the article, the author talks about the software. The emotion-recognition software can track anything from a real face to a painting, and tell whether or not the person is angry, sad, mad, or happy. Humans use this same technique everyday. In the article, the text states \"you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" Well that's just what the Facial Action Coding System does. Facial expressions are universal. Based on the article, we can tell that technology is more fast and efficient working than ever. Technology is like our brains, it processes things quickly and with accuracy.\n\nMost of the time the human eye can tell how someone is feeling, but we are not always certain because it is difficult for us to desribe facial features. There's no need for that when upcoming technology can do it for you. In the text, it tells us that artists study human anatomy for precision when painting the face. The software Dr. Huang uses detects the small things such as the slight curve of a lip or even the squint of an eye to determine emotions. The Mona Lisa shows us just that. An example from the text is \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar might follow.\" This is because even our computers can detect our emotions and follow it with an ad similar to how we are feeling.\n\nFrom the article, the reader can even try the expressions for themselves to test the accuracy. I think the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. If the student is stressed or mad but not willing to confront a teacher about how they are feeling, the teacher can know based on the technology or even looking for the small things such as a curve of the lip. This may take stress off of students as well as adults.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses concluding paragraph draw whole story together She speaks driving test geese hibiscus plant three subjects found story says snow melts geese return referring geese mentioned says She lifted head watched distinctive V etched evening sky She went change much like geese every winter She realizes many things thought strange befere become familiar We go changes Saeng bigger one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Obstacles nature safety issues weight well length dirigible obstacles builders Empire State building faced trying allow dirigibles dock They hopeful idea Empire State building equipped age transportation dream aviation pioneers saw risks First nature winds constantly shifting due violent air currents This means dirigible made lighter air would swivel around mooring mass weight support keep Sometimes winds might even prevent dirigible get close enough like US Navy dirigible named Los Angeles approached mooring mass could nt get close enough Another issue safety It stated outside US dirigibles use hydrogen instead helium used US Hydrogen highly flammable dangerous asset millions people When owners Empire State Building heard German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire imagined situation New York highly populated Lastly size weight dirigible The dirigible NUM ft held single cable would add stress building s frame In order prevent would modify frame These obstacles plus many showed idea destined never fulfill purpose", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"All of our development since World War ll has been centered on the car and that would have to change' said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation of America. It is imperative that our fellow citizens take the initiative to limit car usage for the whole purpose of saving time,conserving resources,lowering emissions and improving safety for ourselves and others .\n\nLimiting car usage is an effective way in reducing our air pollution(smog).Most of our greenhouses gases are the result from the use of car or fuel engineered automobiles.\n\nSource 1:In Geman Suburb,Life Goes On Without Cars states that \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of the grennhouse gas emissions in Europe.. and up to 50 percent in some carintensive area in the United States\", this means that most of our greenhouse gases are resulting from the overusage of cars that emit an abundance of CO2 into the atmosphere which generally has a negative effect on the enviroment. If car usage were to be limited that would mean the greenhouse gas emissions would be reduced which will then lead to a reduction in air pollution. Implementing the reduction of car usage would have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment,since transporatation is the second largest source of America's emissions,just behind power plants.\n\nCar usage has contributed to cities low safety level. This is because cities are more denser with the use of more and more cars. If car usage were to be limited that would mean that these cities would be better to walk around in and other alternative transporatation methods such as bicycling and public transit have an easier way of getting around to save time according to\n\nSource 4: The End of Car Culture.\n\nThis implication may have a negative result in lost revenue in the car industry,but which is more important the world we live in or money? There are many more alternatives than using cars that emit greenhouse gases such as plug-in cars,hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers as stated in\n\nSource 2: Paris Bans Driving due to Smog.\n\nWith the reduction in car usage that would mean that the resources that were needed to support the vehicle would be conserved because there would only be a small amoun of it being used. With the reduction in the usage of the fuels then the the remaing amount would be for other purposes that would need it or be saved over time if the US were to need it in the future.\n\nTo conclude if limiting car usage would be in then it would just have a positive efeect in the worl we live in. Not only will limiting car use would reduce the amount of smog being produced but it will also increase the United States safety level and conseverve the resources as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a computer guessing everyones emotions, and tell wether their sad, happy, confused, etc. Well a 3-D computer can model all 44 major muscles. Dr. Paul Echman the creater of FACS has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. using video imagery the computer can track these facial movements, the software can even recongnise mixed emotions. Inorder to identify all movements of one or more muscles is called an action unit. Using video imagery and recognising the facial movements the software can identify mixed emotions each expression is compared against a nuetral face. Every human can make the same face everyday, but you can probably tell when your friend is sad or happy just by looking at their face. While for somepeople its hard to tell when their friends feel happy, sad, confused etc. Dr. Huang got a picture of the Mona Lisa and made people look at it to tell if a computer can recognize your feelings. They also showed people a web ad that appears on a computer screen, If the person frowned the ad would change and when you smile a similar ad would appear. Dr. Huang predicts that a classroom computer will recognize when a staudent is becoming bored or confused.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The newspaper front Oh much want relax natural free air advances technology feel s job always updated I believe advances technology negative affect people People nt exercising interacting family friends person ability enjoy nature Exercising means getting hear pound body sweat endorprimes ultimately make feel better front support natural urge exercise People support advances technology say CAPS able teach handeye coordination coordination important body whole also put account well voted cardiologist world says people suffering heart disease attacks every year goes say many links theorized going problem But none seem well theory I believe peoples lives overcome technology More cases samt people addicted computers Its unbelieveable individuals higher chance developing heart disease There many healthier things absorp Like tennis example In tennis develop handeye coordination order hit ball Correctly Tennis also increase heart rate burn fat cells help lose weight Statistics show people say tennis actually made confident This people able determination lose weight head healthier feel world Is nt attitude everyone needs Nature helps us even nt notice Like trees take release oxygen Oxygen key life Trees also home many living organisms Like saumel woodpecker even owl They rely trees survive But hours realize nature Nature beautiful thing peoploe say enjoy relaxing outside listening birds singing morningsongs dear minding business feeding young watching But advances technology also ruin time belance nature Technology needs power source google example states press business surely enjoys nature needs also run corporation They go say get energy oil coal according scientists like boy say oil primary source big corporations It nt keep mind fact million year And deplleats protection get ozone layer Speeding development climate change without advances technology better safer earth generations come Oh sure says sue sarcastically But since texting nt know ask If advances technology people could make right decisions texters say miss interpreted others texts means bad decisions accross world also say particifated sexting like ther sending peictures language Underage children participating illegal activity advances technology chief crimes head police department says ever since invention cell phone ability send pictures text need cases child pornography people age without advances technology cellphones would nt even possible minors Advances cellular device also kept families farmer farmer apart parents sya children appreciation lease recieved cell phones And kids wine cell phones say nt think need family interaction anymore Do believe message school future generations I thank reading article I hope experiencing side debate children need interact families enjoy nature start exercising This impossible advances technologe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the humens Evening star for the other planet in the terms of desyntli in\n\nspeeds these\n\nthe differns that sometimes we are closer to mars for peoles and austrunabt we need vivits to the other planet Earth Venus and ,mars they we need to go to the other planets like, mars and Venus and each preobiob mission they leaf to the world the humens is in the good reason to since no spacegrafth, numerios factors contribute to Venus´s reputation as a challenging planett for humans to study, despite its proxymity to us the other´s planett.\n\nEarth like planet in our solar system long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with ocean and could have supported varios forms of life just like Earth, today venis still has some features that are analogios to those on Earth planett.\n\nfor the nationality space nasa has one particulary compleying idea for sending humans to study Venus Nasaś possible solution to the hostile conduction on the surface of venus would\n\nallow scienticts to float above the fray imagine a plimt like veicle, just as our jet aiplanes travel at a higher altitude a over many strom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many years ago, during the period of the Reniassance, a famous Reniassance painter, Leonardo da Vinci, created his well known piece, The Mona Lisa. Although the painting is beautifully designed, it is also extreamly detailed, showing Mona Lisa's facal features and structure. A newly known software has been able to detect each facial feature, and determine the emotions of people based on the posititions of the muscles in their face. The Mona Lisa was used as an experiment to show how she may have been feeling during her experience of being painted. The article says, accroding to Professor Thomas Huangs software, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nThis technology could become a very useful tool inside of a school computer to identify the emotions of a student. Everyday, students are forced to deal with numerous thoughts and feelings, that could be distracting to their learning capabilities. Many students, could simply be bored with their school work, making school lessons harder to process and stay focused on. If the Facial Action Coding System is brought into the computer learning world, it may be possible to make their everyday tasks seem simple, and improve the learning inside of schools.\n\nIn todays world, technology is a growing encounter. It's used almost everywhere, specifically inside schools. The Facial Action Coding System can be used to identify the emotions of students, and make thier learning easier.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" This prediction came from Professor Huang, meaning if a computer can process a students face, by detecting the emotions of every student, it can easily switch certain lessons, and make that lesson seem less boring, keeping the student entertained. This software can increase test scores, and may help encourage students to focus on their learning abilities in order to grow to be succsessful.\n\nA students everyday school life can be challanging, or even stressful. But, it is possible to switch up the textbook way of learning, and transition to a mordern technology that will work to influence the way students are completing their dailey work. The Facial Action Coding System will provide an accurate idea of how future students will be perceiving the work they are given, and improving the goals of teching students the importance of becoming succsessful. This making technology based learning a better way of education", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people are debating over wether the \" Face on Mars\" is a natural occurance or if it was allien made. Some people think that NASA is trying to hide there findings so NASA defended themsleves and said they wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. Nobody will ever belive the same things but it has been shown that there was no allien activity on Mars\n\nConspiracy theorist believe there was alliens involded in the makeing of the \"Face on Mars\". Sceintist have taken pictures to prove that it was a natural landform and their were no signs of alliens. Even when people said the camera had bad quality NASA took another picture with a more advanced camera. When NASA got their second picture back it showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms that are commom around the American West. Even if there were alliens that created this why would NASA keep it a secret they stated they want there to be a civilization.\n\nThis shows that NASA was not hiding anything and that there was no actual proof of allien life on Mars. Without proof of life then nobody can conclude that the \" Face on Mars\" was made by alliens. NASA has more evidence than a conspiracy scientist would. Wether or not the sceints had reason to back up their theory it would most likely be weak because NASA's evidence is based on research and not a working conspiracy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it states the dangers of Venus it presents is very dangerous. Venus is very hot to even land on. Venus is also the brightest star. Lots of spacecrafts had tried landing on it. They never lasted more than a few hours. A spaceship has never landed on Venus in three decades. As said in the story. \"The temperatue of Venus's average of 800 degrees Fahernheit.\" The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what anyone has experienced. Venus's conditions are very extreme and it is more than what humans experienced. It is very hard for scientists to take samples of rocks, gases, and other things that may be there on that planet. Just because of how far they are from the planet it is very hard to even see what they want to research on the planet. They tried taking photos and videos, but they are far above the planet it is hard to tell. Many researchers are trying to work on allowing machines to last long enough to make sure they get as much research as possible. Researchers are looking for despite of risk taking. In conclusion, Venus is proxmity to us which means that it is hard to study because of various dangerous factors it brings to researchers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With new technogly developing helpring us advance in the wrold we often forget how to slefmange our own control \"Driverless Cars\" should not be created, due to more careless driving. Everyone is all about the future and what it holds for us and how we can adavnce our life style,like how we drive. Thrugh out the years how we creat and run our cars have changed through a little help of new technogly that is being made every year. We hear see cars now that can help avoid crashed, traffic and also help navegate \"2013, BMW annouced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\", but how much are we relying on the car then our self as a driver?\n\nBMW developed a car that \"steer,accelerate, and break themselves.\" this new addidtion to the cars is very helpful in surten ways. For example have having the car for 7 years or so how do we knwo that the technogly will stay the same insuring that the vehical is still safe for the roads? \"Google car simply annouces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" If the driver should be ready how can that be if the driver devlopes bad habbits that rely driver t o do evrything, there for the driver will not be prepared causing more then likley a car crash.\n\nDriver takes classes to know the basic knowoldge for the roads. It has become very helpful for the alerting driver if thet are to close to a car when parking or when they have been in a crash they deveopled the first aid assistance. Giving the driver and pasangers the help in case all wrose causes.\n\nThe idea of puting a camera in the \"Driverless Cars\" is not so much the best idea due to the concern on a young to feeling pressure if they are doing the right things. Teens tend to do wrose when they knowthey are getting monituered , this creating a downfall in buying a car.\n\nIn 2020 driverless cares should not be realsed due to any mofuction. being tested driving theres always that one care that wont fucion right and can cause mager sufering. Money out into this car only the higher living people could afford because of how much they are putting into the car, to the income inf making these cars will be low.\n\nWe should stay improving the satey and technogly we put into the cars but the self driving should not be developed in the car. The saftey of the new drivers can stay focus adn not rely on the car for all the work. Over time people will form bad\n\nhabbits so it is safer to have the river have all controll of ther vehical. This should be baded by all the staes not just \"califorina, Nevade, Florida adn the Distric of Columbia.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries books magizines movies ectThe library wonderful place read quite placeIt also offensive place peopleThey think complane bikker But activities removed library shelves But whose oppenion anyways If I found offensive book movie magizine shelf library I would leave Apparently bad thing wouldnt shelf So I got offensive I wouldnt look pick I mean simpleA library full well everything would enjoy Many diffrent people like diffrent books movies read watch means library right put ever want Even offensive people With experences library nothing came across offensive Im kind person dose nt care However I seeen books ware author making fun people Also seen book ware author writting black people used treated book witch major racism black people It could unfair situation people kids inapropreate book shelf see That could offensive children parents Or could even magizine But books magizines ect tooken shelfs effensive people If libraians took offensive books shelves would nt left Everyone diffrent things offend If dont like book take friend read turn back library You also talk library manager tell issue offensive given Books movies magizines ect library They could offensive If think dont look read Its simple get dont", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the article, I think this technology would be very useful to students in a classroom. The article states \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" The video imagery tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. It also can be identified by mixed emotions.\n\nThe classrom computer could recognize when a student is confused or bored. That's not what we notice everyday in life on a computer in class. This computer will be able to recognize our emotions as if we were happy or sad. If we smile, a smiliar ad will appear on our screen but if we are unhappy then the ad will be different. It can modify the lesson like an effective human instructor. The same technology can also make computer-animated faces more expressive! So that could be for video games and also video surgery.\n\nThis tecnology will even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. Its all about muscular action units. In a real smile the zygomatic major lift the corner of your mouth. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the different muscle, the risorius. Not all computers can just detect our facial expressions just like that. This technology can do just about that!\n\nIn conclusion, this technology would be great for students to have in the classroom! Not only will this technology detect their facial expressions but moving your facial muscles can help produce them! This technology would be able to indicate very specific emotions that not us humans would be able to tell what kind of emotion someone else is having. This will show us how technology is getting better and even smarter. How interesting technolgy is getting everyday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, although fascinating and revolutionary, are not a good idea. There are many flaws about the current driverless cars that are on the road today. Humans need to operate it in order to navigate through complicated circumstances, smart roads to help solve that problem are very expensive and non-practical, and there are many legal troubles stirred up by these vehicles. These problems are simply not worth the idea of a smart car. In my opinion, driverless cars should stay off the road.\n\nThere are many flaws that come with driverless cars. One of these flaws is the fact that the skills of a human operator are required to navigate these \"driverless cars\" through complicated situations, such as road construction or driving around an accident. In the passage \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author states in paragraph two, \"...Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways, or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" If a human operator has to take over the \"driverless\" car periodically, there is no point in even having a car that can drive through simple traffic with ease. One solution to the fact that a human operator must take over when facing roadwork is the idea of smart roads. Smart roads would use a cable to send radio signals to a receiver on the front of a car. The trouble is, replacing ordinary roads with these smart roads would be \"simply too expensive to be practical,\" the narrator states in paragraph three. Legal troubles involving driverless cars are a whole different issue. In paragraph nine, the author explains, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" Driverless cars are bound to malfunction at one point or another. New laws would have to be established in order to properly provide justice in the case of someone's injury or death. This problem is too tedious and not nearly worth the idea of a driverless car.\n\nThere are too many reasons to go against the idea of a driverless car. Human driving skills will be required and used anyway, smart roads are very expensive and non-practical, and there are many legal troubles involving smart cars. Perhaps in twenty or so years when these problems can be efficiently solved, smart cars will be a good idea. But in this day and age, with these problems, driverless cars are not worth it. Smart cars should stay off the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Many Reasons To Be A Seagoing Cowboy\n\nHellow my name is Luke and im going to tell you the many reasons to be a ¨Seagoing Cowboy¨.First, of all it allows you to go to many countrys that you may not get to afford to go to,and you get to tour if you have spare time to see many historical features like battle grounds. You may even get to see festivals and help thousands of people at the same time. If you have time after you did all the chores for the day you may be able to play games like baseball,volleyball,table-tennis tournaments and boxing but their is not just that theirs lots more to do.\n\nNext, you may find time to go danceing or discover may cultures. You can eat new foods learn new games and spend well earned money on clothing and furniture. If your on your way home maybe you can fish or go sight seeing. If you get lucky you may be able to see the watery streets of Italy or Greece. To me the ¨Seagoing cowboys¨ program helped me see a lot I didnt know existed. These are the many reasons I went and loved the ¨Seagoing Cowboys¨ program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should we limit car usage\n\n?\n\nThe debate on weather or not we should limit car usage have being going on for years now and it is still going on to this day. The reason being that cars play a major role in our society and most people can't get throught their daily routines without one.\n\nCars play a mojor role in our society but they do also play a mojor role in poluting the environment. In Europe cars are responsible for about 12 percents of greenhouse gas emission.... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the united states. This has a mojor impact on our enivironment espicially the atmosphere, the exhaust that our vechiles put out are being taped in the atmosphere which is why we have global warming. Cars put out so much of this stuff that the ice glacies melting, temperatures rising and drought throught areas in the world but thats doesn't mean that even thow they cause so much damage we dont have to rid of them.\n\nGranted, vechiles are responsible for getting us to our destinations form point A to point B, we depend on these machines wheather it is to get to work, school transporting the sick..ect. Our daily lives have a certain time range depending on how fast and how much time we can spend on a certain objective, car limit the amount of time it would take us to walk or bike thus giving us more time durnig the day. they come in really helpful in emergences too such as when someone is need to be rushed to the hospital.\n\nTherefore limiting car usage would be the best idea. Paris has more smog that any other europen capitals, so they enforced a partil driving ban to clear the air of global city after a week smioglevels went down cangestion was down by 60 percent it was thhat bad that it even rivaled bejing chian. The smog cleared enouf to rescind the ban for ood numberes plates on tuesday.\n\nSo you can see that limiting our car usage can have greately help our eniviroment and thus making it last longer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the novel The challenge of exploring Venus tells us that Venus and Earth are called twin's because Venus is the closesy planet to Earth in terms of density and size and is also the closest to our planet too. We want to explor Venus but \"each previous missions was unmanned, and for good reasons, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" We also have to pay attention to the fact that Venus has a \"97 percent carbon dioxide blanckets around it, so that is even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" We want to explore Venous because \"it may once have been the most Earth-like planet in out solor system\" because \"long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. In conclusion we really hope that someday we might be able to go and explor Venous or find a way to get there first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars the reason i am against it is because the saftey aspect. Also the technolgy could start not to work , they dont know how their going to make the laws and some people wont be paying attention and cause more accedients then their already are. Which is very bad.\n\nSo one question I have is , what if the technolgy starts not to work in the middle of the road ? That could cause many problems becouse people could sue them. That could also cause a lot of people to get hurtand that wouldn't be good. The article said the cars will have sensors in more places than you will ever know but what if one of those sensorrs don't pick anything up for it to stop it\n\nself ? Then thats another cause of a crash we will have to deal with.\n\nSpeaking of crashes and accedients , they don't know who their going to blame for being at fault for the crash. Whoever they pick their going to have to make new laws and get a whole lot of paper work done. Then the company and driver will have to deal with court and that is going to cause major conflict between the two like the story said in pharagraph nine. I know the driverless car is supposed to prevent crashes but you still have to look at this and make sure everyone will be safe.\n\nAlso the fun part is driving and their takeing that away from people. Like the story said \" the driver will still have to be alert for human like situations\" but most people will not be paying attention they'll be on their phone or talking to the passenger. Even if the car does alert them they either won't hear it and crash which will be very tragic.\n\nFinally that is why I don't agree with driverless cars. The saftey aspect is not 100% . The technolgy still needs to be worked on to make sure it works at all times. They need to know how their going to handle the laws. People will need to pay attention and where not sure they will do that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author of the passage talks about both postive and negative aspects of drivless cars. Many people around the world may like the idea of driveless cars becuase, some people just might like the old fashion way. Being able to try something new can be exciting, and entertaining drivless cars could possibly change thw world some day. What some poeple dont know is drivless cars have positive and negative points about them, the car can function up to speeds of 25 mph, but sensors makes sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. A negative thing is that the driver must be alert and be ready to take overa situation at any time.\n\nDriverless cars do have postive things about them, that would make a person want to go and perchase one. The cars have been drivne more than half a million miles without a car crash, but the drivless cars can still alert you when thier is bad road conditions, traffic problems,\n\nnavigate you through accidents , and construction areas. The cars themselves are made to steer, accelerate, and brake themselvs, but the cars do have you use human like skills like navigating through work zones, and around accidents. GM has developed drivers seats, inside the car that vibrate when the vehical is in danger of backing up into anoher object. The car also has flashing lights on the windshield ,using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.The car is set up to watch the drivers, because tey dont want anyhting bad to happen to the driver.\n\nDrivless cars also have major probles or negative things about them. The cars work simply well, but they all required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was would be to expensive to be practical. Without smarters roads, manufacturers turned to smarter cars, but they wouldnt know how smart the car would have to be in order for that to happen. The sad thing is the driveless car still needs a driver, it would probably have the other driver upset and bored. The driver must stay alert and be ready to take over when the situation\n\nrequires. In some states like California, Nevada, and Flordia you aren to allowed to drive a test computer driven car.\n\nI wouldnt really want a drivless car due to the negative things i read about it in the passage. Anything could go wrong with the car, and who knows i might have to take up the blame for it because it is my car. I really wouldnt want to sit and watch someone else drive the car, it would get annoying and I would probably get mad.\n\nIn conclusion driveless cars have positve and negative things about them. They can drive up to 25 mph, and they know when their is a bad road condition coming up.The cars alert the driver when to pull over, or when it it is bad traffic. The bad thing is someone has to be in the car with you, and you would just sit there and watch them drive. The road would require more road updates to drive the car, that would take millions of dollers and its expensive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Faicial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotion. The decussion about the Faicial Action Coding System being good or bad has been brought up. I agree with the clame that the Faicial Action Coding System is actually good and could be usefull.\n\nOne sorse of evidence suporting why I agree the Facial Action Coding System is a good thing. It states in the selection that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This would be a good thing to have because now in days almost all class lessons are starting to be set up on computere. Say the teacher is looking at her computer and the students are all looking at their computers how would the teacher be able to look at everyones faces and see their emotions towards the lession because your face emotions say it all they say and tell exactly what your feeling. It also states \"The computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" With this technology the teacher wouldnt have to worry about is her students getting the lession or not or if its to easy and boring for some students. The computer would do it for the teacher. This would also allow the teacher to persicely point out who knows what they are doing and how need help. With most students they wont say anything if they arent getting the lesson because either they are afraid to say something or dont feel comfterable asking for help. With the Facial Action Coding System the student wount have to say anything because the computer would pick it all up just by the face your making. Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" meaning the Facial Action Coding System could change the lesson acording to your face emotions. To eitther make the lesson harder cause the computer picks up that you are bored, or make the lesson a little eaiser because you face emotions show you are confused and not getting it.\n\nAnother reason why the Facial Action Coding System is a good thing is becaue it could tell what the subject of some paintings are. Most famous paintins the artist is dead so they arent here to explain what their painting means or is showing so with the Facial Action Coding System it can do it for us. Take the Mona Lisa for example everyone always says that not a smile what is Leonardo da Vinci trying to exspress with this painting. She's 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. This was able to be identified by the Facial Action Coding System. Allowing us to know what everyone has been asking about the painting the Mona Lisa.\n\nAnother reason why the Facial Action Coding System is a good idea is the computer can pick up not only one emotion but yet pick up mixed emotions. This computer wont just allow you to pic up if the person is happy, sad, or mad. It could pick up if the person is worried or anciest at the same time and you would be able to know exactly how they feel. When you look at a person you can only pick of mixed emotions if the person tells you exactly how they feel but with the Facial Action Coding System it can tell you without even having to ask. Also it could tell you if they are hiding their feelings and dont want to tell you how they really feel.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a good thing and a good idea because it can denifit teachers in class to be able to tell if their students are getting the lesson or not, be able to explain art when the artist is dead and cant tell you what hes trying to exspress, and can also tell you exactly how someone feels even when they dont tell you exactly how they feel. These were just a few examples of how the Facial Action Coding System can be usefull and im sure there are plenty more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles The Empire State building faced law That airships flying low urban areas The problems Empire state building faced The US Navy driigble los Angeles approached The mooring mast could get close enough tie force ful winds The first obstacle faced attempting allow drigibles dock existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever fly building The second Reason builder faced ob stacles attempting allow dirigible dock US Navy drigible Los Angeles approached mooring mast could get close enough tie forceful winds They wind would blow dirigible sharp spires These obstacles Empire State building faced allow dockin", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Unmasking the Face of Mars\" talks about a face formation on the planet Mars that people think was a creation made by aliens. Others think the the face is just formation that formed from natural events. Scientists say that the face is just a natural formation and others think that the face is acutally made by aliens. I think that the face on Mars is actually just a natural formation that occured making the face that is shown. Here is why I think that the face is made by natural events.\n\nThe face is actually like other buttes or mesas on Earth that are commonly found. According to the article, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa-landforms common around the American West.\" The face on mars is almost like areas found on Earth making the face seem like it is just a common thing that forms like a butte. Are the buttes or mesas on Earth made by aliens too if the face on Mars was made by aliens? No. The buttes or mesas on Earth are accually formed from natural aspects.\n\nThe face could have been formed because of the weather conditions on Mars. According to the article, \"The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The Camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\" The weather conditions on the Red Planet could have been bad on the day that the face was formed. The face could had just been naturally formed because of the weather phenomenon going on in Mars. The planet just could have had bad weather conditions during the time.\n\nWhen Mars Glodal Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time in 1998, a picture was taken and a natural landformation revealed that there was no alien monument after all. According to the article, \"And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mas Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, reavealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" That means that the face found on Mars wasn't actually an alien monument. Just a natural landform. When the monument was taken on a sharper picture, the alien monument was actually just a natural formation.\n\nNow you might say that the face found on Mars is accually an alien monument. However, the monument wasn't actually made by aliens, it was made by natural events. According to the article, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. `It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,` says Garvi. `That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the ame height as the Face on Mar.`\" There could have been a volcano that erupted and the lava from it could have hardened forming the face that is on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion, th Face on Mars is actually just a natural formation that occured making the face that is shown. The face isn't made from aliens. The face is just a regular formation that occured rom natural events. The face might have been made from aliens according to some people but in reality, the face is made from natural phenomenon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our world is driven by technology. While there are different technologies available with capabilities beyond our imagination, some people think that it makes the gap between the wealthy and the poor bigger whereas others think that it actually has reverse effect. This essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nSome technologies are made affordable only to the rich people. The possible reasons are there are too many resources involved, and it is not a necessity. As a result, these technologies are seen as the exclusives to the top few, extremely wealthy people in the world. For instance, we have heard about the millianaires paying a visit to the moon. Without a doubt, this is using some top-notch, advanced technology that will safely bring someone who is not a trained astronut to the moon and back, as well as hundreds of people to work on this project. For these reasons, not every one can afford for this technology, but then, does every one need it?\r\n\r\nVarious technoloiges are made available to people from all kinds of financial backgrounds nowadays, especially those technologies that are essential in our daily lives. Whenever a new techy item comes out, it would be expensive at first but it will eventually be affordable for most of us after the market competition. For example, when a smartphone was invented a decade ago, it was expensive and usually, only one person in a high-income family can afford to have it. However, more affordable smartphones became available in the market from different manufacturers around the world which makes the price of smartphones go down significantly. Nowadays, almost everyone, both rich and poor, has a smartphone.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although it is true that some advanced technologies are only available to the rich people, there are still lots of them that are affordable by people from any background and usually, these are the ones essential in our lives. Therefore, I believe that technology reduces the gap between the different social statuses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke has many more adventures coming up and you can too. You will be able to visit many unique places just like Luke did.\n\nBeing in the Seagoing cowboy program will also give you the oppertunity to help people by sending food and animals over sea with you. You would have to care for the animals too as to help on the trip.\n\nA seagoing cow boy can visit many places. Luke got to visit Europe,China,Acropolis,Greece, ride a Gondola in Italy,and tour a castle in Crete.\n\nBesides visiting all the great places when you are still onboard there is plenty to do besides feeding and watching the animals all day. Luke played games and you would be able to also. There is baseball,volleyball,tennis tourments,fencing,boxing,reading and more. You don't have to sit around and do nothing.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is a great idea. You get to help people in need of resources, visit different unique places,and even have fun onboard. You can do all this maybe more like Luke did.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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