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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued by some that the government should spend lots of money on education, whereas others believe that more money should be spent on free time activities. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are a number of reasons why people believe that government funding should be forwarded to education. First, education is seen as a fundamental right and a means to provide equal opportunities for all citizens. In fact, government funding can ensure that every child has access to a quality education, regardless of their economic circumstances, by creating free classrooms and classrooms in mountainous areas. Second, investing in education is investing in the future of the country. This means that well-educated citizens are more likely to contribute to the workforce and drive economic growth. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are compelling reasons for governments to allocate resources to support free time activities. First, engaging in recreational activities can improve mental health. In fact, leisure activities can reduce stress, anxiety and depression. As a result, mentally healthy people are more productive and optimistic. Second, leisure activities can contribute to better physical health. This means that regular exercise, sports, and outdoor activities can help prevent chronic diseases, reduce healthcare costs, and improve the quality of life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, with the aforementioned, although free time activities bring benefits to both mental and physical health, I believe that funding education is definitely important since it can increase the future earnings of a country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever occured things read take home libraries young children Certain materials found libraries sometimes age appropriate even offensive people Not books music movies magazines offend people condone things also give children right learn things know things rated shouldnt learned library Most music todays society appropiate content used sex drugs violence last fall I visited shools library I came across movie I thought school appropiate shouldnt seen without parents verification Anything sex drugs give young teens children right away even read heard saw school im walking town I see teens things shouldnt done first thing first thing heor says I heard movie Most public lbraries movies book music etc shelves nt appropiate shouldnt welcomed young children librians busy cant watch entire library make sure secured put away juveniles Most time child read looks interesting fun Todays books condone violence guns drugs sexual content front cover making hard child want read In school library time books age appropiate public library s public library children adults books shouldnt shelves rated things In conclusion libraries need watch s checked matter Id asked", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a dream come true to many people. Although they do sound useful, there are numerous problems still to be worked out. Driverless cars are better for getting from place to place, but are still not completely driverless, and cause contraversy with laws.\n\nParagraph one states that Sergey Brin, google cofounder, \"foresees cars that would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Fuel is a very costly thing for the common man who likes to go places. If the car takes half the fuel of today's taxis, that is less money spent on fuel. Fumes that hurt the earth's Ozone layer would also not be as prominent. Since the cars would be more flexible than busses, they would be able to get around faster and more efficiently.\n\nHowever, driverless cars are still not completely \"driverless\". Paragraph seven states that in 2013 BMW came out with a car that can steer, accelerate, and brake itself, but still notify humans when they need to take over. Safety hazards are at hand when you have humans who are goofing off doing something else and not paying attention to the road or signals the car gives off.\n\nFurthermore, the widespread use of the driverless car would cause much contraversy with certain laws. Driving laws are made now with the idea that a human is making a concious decision to drive and put their safety, as well as others', on the line. So, it is obvious who is to blame whenever a wreck happens. With these new smart cars, who would take the blame? Would it be the manufactorer or the person in the car at the time? New laws will need to be made to ensure safety among humans.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not think we are ready for driverless cars just yet. Driverless cars are better for getting around, but cause contraversy with laws and still are not completely driverless.The negative possibilites at the time seem to outweigh the positives. With more development, I think that the driverless cars will be close at hand in the foreseeable future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear several reasons way I advances technology harmful socitey opens doors strangers outside world Its also takes away family friends Lastly also takes away enjoying life outside internet One severl reasons way I feel advanced technology harmful socitey opens doors strangers teens adult s etc The probem never really know whos side door chat room people miss guide thinking someone example theres show called dateline This show young teens put selev s online grown young men click picture opens chat line I say opening door dont know s side door So men online makes teens trust make feel safe friend hey I come sometime young teen thinking thats friend says yea sure Dont forget dont see picture come s three men looking quick fix If know I mean This go s dateline tv show imarge many kids teens thing difference dont get caught Secondly harmful socitey takes away family friends It takes away kid s family start fill love computer It take away friends might say hey let s go mall drink youll probably say check somethings online This one move slowly away computer start lose people important My last reason harm society teconogly takes away living life thing s wan na like online bunch stuff everybody else say s cool Do think feel cool example someone posted something saying guys lodon cool got ta go youve always wanted go thing get enough air outside like skin get pail icky I feel way In covlsion though people might think advanced tencogly good well cleary open doors danger take away friends family Also takes away life offer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough Road Ahead Joe tells cyclist heading Yosemite National Park problems faced For example heat major issue cyclist face In story said Drop heatstroke shows setting affected negative way story heat major part setting affected character", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the current world, governments of some countries are spending huge tolls of currency on creative works. Although, well off communities are in support of such acts of authority, most people are on the opposite side and according to them more money should be invested on the development of health and educational facilities instead of arts. Personally I am in the favour of latter and in the subsequent ,paragraphs I will be describing the reasons for taking the side.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, creativity is something that people may admire after all their basic needs are fulfilled while most countries fail to provide all the basic necessities evenly to all their citizens. Despite this fact, many governments intents to provide huge budget for recreational facilities in order to get higher revenue since well of people are most likely to spend on amusement at a high cost. But as an administrative body, they should focus on the even distribution of facilities and make a greater investment in the development of quality education and improved hospitals for all as it is their basic right as citizens.\r\n\r\nAnother thing to add up is that when the govt provides more emphasis on amusement over education or health there is a huge possibility to decrease the overall growth of that particular country which may lead to a crisis in further hand. For example, improper medical facilities may result in a disease outbreak or a lack of educational facilities may lead to unemployment problems a larger scale. \r\n\r\nOverall, governments of all countries should make a balanced budget so that creativity gets attention after meeting the needs of the health and educational sectors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming\n\nWhy do people think its good to drive cars thats drive them places? Cars can put you in so much danger that you wouldn't expect your self to be in at the time you are drive. So many thing can happen while you are in the car and you wouldn't even know. You can end up going to the wrong place and the car wouldnt even know. so have a driveless car nah i wouldnt want it im all the way against that.\n\nHave a driveless car can be very dangerous you can be in so much danger when you are in a driveless car like in the passage it say that \"within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers\". How would you know if that is true? Wow by someone telling that it is or somebody testing your car out before you drive it. People dont always tell the truth about there brand you see they siad in the passage that \" within 10 years \" key words 10 years all of the things they done put ion there cars in 10 years you wouldnt know if the car was good or bad for you. It can turn around in put you im so much danger and you wouldn't even expect that from a car that the dealer told you so much good about.\n\nSo much thing can happen while you are in that car. People fall asleep while drive all the time. Some people just dont watch the rode, they be to busy on there phone. Now what if your driveless car was just ride and the machine shut off and have you start drive out of no were. You wouldn't even no because the machine had cut off and it didn't even say anything before it had cut off. An you was just in your car relaxing and on your phone and then BOOM a big crash would happen, that would be your life. You wouldn't want a machine that messes up your life its better off get a car that your can drive on your own 24/7. So much things can happen in a driveless car.\n\nWhile have a driveless car you can put in a destination and they will end up send you to a spot that you didnt even want to go. You could be going on a road trip and wanted to go to texas and the driverless car just sends you some were else and you would be so anger. You could let a friend brorrow your car to go to a doctors appointment and they wouldn't know how to frunction your car when they see a rode bllock a head like in the passage it had said \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigation through work zones and around accidents. This means ther human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\". and your friend wouldn't even know.\n\nSo have a driveless car nahh im okay so many things can happen that people diont even think about. It can put you in danger. You wouldn't know what will happen and plus it can send you to the wrong destination. So why do people want driveless cars i really dont know but i wouldn't take that chance at all. The ones who do buy it have fun the ones who don't good thinking.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Venus, is sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\".\n\nVenus is a planet where life cannot exist because of it's life surviving and high temperature conditions. In our solar system Venus is our second plannet close to our sun.\n\nThe author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pusuit despite th dager is presents. There is a lot of danger in this planet, Life can't be found in this planet do to the extreme temperature of the sun which it could go up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit and 90 times more the pressure of the Earth. Why would the author think that studyng venus would be a good idea? According to the text \" Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like.\"\n\nThis show how the author that studying venus is a worthy.\n\nAnother reason why the author suggest that studying venus would be a worthy pusuit despite the danger is that Venus was probably covered with oceans and it could be our nerest option for a planetary visit. According to the text \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes famliar feature sych as valleys,mountains,and creaters. Furthermore, recall the Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crusial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\". This supports what the author suggets.\n\nWhat the author suggests is something thst is really worthy pusuit the danger is presents because Venus could even become the next \"Earth\" in a near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars fading into the past!\n\nTransportation is the one thing many have all depended on since they can remember. The major transportation system many use more than others is cars. What would happen if people failed to use these cars, and whent with a more alternative way to go from point A to point B. Some people from Germany, France, Colombia, and even here in america are transitioning to this \"alternative trasportation\" age.\n\nEurope the land of open skys, great land, and smog. As seen in source 2: \"paris bans driving due to smog\" \" On Monday motorists with even-numberd license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31)...\" even though 4,000 drivers where fined that day, congestion was down around 60 percent in the general capital area of france. Smog \" formed by vehicle emissions (mainly from Diesel Fuel) gets traped under a warmer layer of air due to cold nights and warm to hot days. paris itself generally has more smog than most european citys.\"Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter(PM) per cubic meter...\" The smog was erradicated so much that the ruling french party decided to do the same for odd-numberd cars the next day. In Source3 : \" car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" The \"car-free day\" idea spreaded to places like Bogota, Colombia and other bib places that even smaller cities joined in. \" In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, of took buses to work during a car-free day...\" even in the rain people still participated.\n\nSource 4: \"The end of car culture\" says \" That has left researchers pondering a fundamental question: Has america passed peak driving?\" even though america is known for muscle cars, trucks , and even the Model T, most americans bettween the general ages of 16 years to 30 years first priority is not having a licence or a vehicle of their own. And this trend of getting a ride or walking is accelerating surprizingly quick.\"MIne (19 and 21) have not bothered to get a driver's license, even though they both live in places where it could come in handy. \" A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009...\" even this act of alternative transportation in a country thats the most developed, rich, and drivable people still dont drive.\n\ndriving is becoming obsolite, literally, and people are sharing the idea that the world might be cleaner, people might be more happy and, the need and fix to drive somewhere is not preasent any more in todays modern society. so in the end cars are faded into the past , and happyness into the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would you want to join the program Seagoing Cowboy? One reason is it's a one in the lifetime opportunity. You also help countries recover the countries' belongings. The fun part is you get to travel around the world, and visit a variety of places! Wouldn't you like to travel around the world and help countries?\n\nI know I would enjoy being in the program.\n\nLuke Bomberger helped recover food supplies,animals and much more. 44 other nations joined a group called UNRRA. The Seagoing Cowboys were taking care of animals. Luke had made nine trips in1947, it was the most of any Seagoing Cowboy! Luke thought it was unbelievable for a small-town boy!\n\nHe felt special helping people and animals, an seeing countries. How would you feel? It must have been busy for Luke caring for animals! Taking care of animals is hard work ,imagine taking care of 15 or more!\n\nWould you enjoy taking care of many animals? When Lukewatchman duty and it had been rainy so it was slippery Luke had slipped and fell he had cracked his ribs and couldnt work for a few days. When they unboarded they played many games and sports. Luke was more aware of other countries and needs.\n\nI think it would be fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy and help countries. would you want to? Helping Countries is very special and i would do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist making tiered scared thirsty cause worry The setting hot California day June cyclist riding heat hills difficult terrain The cyclist describes land says Flat road replaced short rolling hills He also says Over one long crippling hill As cyclist gets doubt Fear thirst start get He says It didnt really matter I going die birds would pick clean When cyclist finds bait shop almost lost hope On way shop says Slowly gaining elevation losing hope At end setting makes cyclist regain strength sees bait shop sees says Then easily rounding bend troubles thirst fear behind me The features setting put cyclist unsteady ride fear hope confidence", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think driverless cars should become a thing. The reason why i think driverless cars should become a thing because of simple reasons .One of those reasons are that the system can become overheated , like say if the people who design this wonderful idea tried to do something new with this car sometimes the system can overheat and they might not be able to control the anymore. My second reason why i think driverless cars isn't a good thing because they can cause accidents. What i mean by that is like say if the car dies out in the middle of the highway and the chances are someone getting hurt ,or\n\nsomeones dies . My last reason is the car is taking too much power in. sp what i mean by that is sometimes when something takes in alot of power it might have a shortage or even a power outage and nobody wants to by in no car that can't even move. So yeah i say having a driverless car is terrible idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "left Right High kick left roundhouse sight The boys arms moving fast barely see His legs striking bag tremendous power CAPS old man yells my boy says you lacking patience The old man named puts blind fold boy named lets jolbs sand bags The first one hits head boy kicks second one busts open grabs third one uses block fourth one The boy learned patient wait enemy strike first", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages in limiting car usage in Germany is to not buy one. Heidrun Walter said, \"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm way much happier this way.\" From people not driving cars, it reduces the greenhouse gas emissons. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percenet of the greenhouse gas emissons in Europe, and 50 percent in the United States. From people not using vehicles, and walk or ride bicycles instead, they tend to take the suburbs to get around. The suburbs are more compact and more accessible to the public than your own personal car. Now that they have taken away personal vehicles and gave them suburbs, the stores are a walk away on the main street, other than a walk on a distant highway. In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency promoted \"car reduced communities.\"\n\nWhile in Paris, they banned driving because of the smog. On Mondays, vehicles with even-numbered license plates were told to leave their vehicles at home or suffer a $31 fine. The same thing with the odd numbered license plates the next day. Almost 4,000 of the drivers were fined because they didn't follow the rules and their cars got impounded. The cold nights and warm days caused the smog to form which made a thick layer of air to trap the car emissions. Diesel fuel is the biggest issue because it makes up 67 percent of the vehicles in France compaired to 53.3 percent in Western Europe. When the smog cleared up on Monday, the French party went after the odd-numbered licensed plates on Tuesday and fined them.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia there is a program that was sent to spread to other countries, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses, left the city and avoided the traffic jams. Cars have been banned to the point were people can ride buses and be taxed with the Day Without Cars in the capital city of 7 million. Their goal is to promote the transportation and reduce the smog. For the first time, two other Columbian cities joined the event. The parks and sport centers were fixed throughout the city. The uneven sidewalks have been replaced, rush hour restrictions have cut traffic, and new restaurants and shopping areas have cropped up.\n\nThe end of car culture is president Obama's goals are to change the United States' greenhouse gas emissions. Recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as the years go on. Mr. Sivak said that when he was in his late 20s early 30s, he was curious about what kind of car he drove, but no one really cared as long as it got you from point A to point B. A study was done last year and it stated that young drivers decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. At the Mobile World Congress last year in Bill Ford, Barcelona and Spain, the For Motor Companys chairman laid the business plan out for the world to see. He said to create the cities so the pedestrians, bicycles, private cars, and other transportation are brought into a connected network to save time, conserve recoursces lower the emissions and to improve the safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in germany people dont have cars like they do in america. in germans people have to have a big place to park there car like a large garage. but i it costs 40,000 dollars to buy the garage. so 70 percent of germany doesnt have a car.\n\non monday motorists are told to leave there car at home or there is a 31 dollar fine. almost 4,000 drivers where fined one day.27 people had there car impounded because of ther reaction to the fine. cars have been baned for 3 years. only buses and taxies are permited for the day. there goal is to promote alternative transport. violators faced a 25 dollar fine.\n\nparks and sprots cneters have bloomed since they have scut traffic. presdient obama has ambitious goals to curb america. studdies show that fewer americans are buying cars and getting less licenses as the years go by.\n\nin america as of april 2013 the number of miles driven was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in january 1995.\n\nnew yorks new bike sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect the new priortiy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NO MOTORVEHICLES? Yeah I know sounds crazy but it is actually very true and very helpful to our \"Mother Nature\". Around the world there have been an ample amount of experiments and even permanent instances that show off the marvelous wonders of no motor vehicles. From the alps of Vauban, Germany to down the street in Paris, France to even meet the other side of the world in Bogota, Colombia. Where there have been complete motor vehicle banning even going to the extreme of redesigning the whole city just to fit there suburban type customs but without the vehicles. Even just a simple banning for two days on motor vehicles just to clean up the air from time to time. As well as having a yearly event where all motor vehicles except for buses and taxis are banned all day long.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany they host home to about 5,500 residents within a rectangular mile. With absolutely no motor vehicles, they are forbidden. I think its actually pretty nice to have a suburban town where the whole town doesnt even have room for motor vehicles. Roads, street parking, parking lots, driveways, and home garages all do not exist in this town. They take it to the extreme where as to live in the town if you own a motorvehicle you MUST sell your motor vehicle first. 70 perecent of families do not own cars and 57 perecent sold a car to move into Vauban. And if you are to own a car you must purchase your own car space at the very edge of the city wich cost up to $40,000, along with the price of your home. Alot of people around the world support this even here in the United States the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities and legislators are begining to act.\n\nAfter Paris came to a near record pollution level they enforced a parial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. One Monday motorists with even numbered license plates were demanded to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine or the the equivalant of $31. The same would apply to the odd numbered plated that following tuesday. Near 4,000 drivers were fined according to a international news agency headquatred in London. Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals with 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared to 114 in Brussels, and 79.7 in London. There smog rate was so bad they rivaled the city of Beijing, China which is known as the most polluted city in the world. The congestion in was down 60 percent in the capital of France after five-days of incredibly increasing smog. But with the ban the smog cleared up enough Monday for the ruiling french party to rescind the ban for the odd numbered plates by Tuesday.\n\nIt was the third consecutive year that motor vehicles besides buses and taxis were baned from the capital of Bogota, Colombia. But this third year other major cities like Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. This day is specifically without cars is part of an improvement campain that began in Bogota in the mid-1990's as an improvement campain. And it has worked it has cleaned up the environment in all three cities. Parks and sport centers have also blosssomed throughout the city. Unequal, jagged sidewalks have been replaced by smooth sidewalks and rush hour has dramatically cut traffic out of the picture while restaurants and upscale shopping districts have been on the rise.\n\nThis culture is very quickly spreading throught the entire world. Even here in the United States, President Barack Obama", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driveless cars because I believe that these cars will cause a lot of automobilistic accidents. I believe this because they are only cars, and although scientist have creted many self operating inventions that work marvelously, cars are different from those invetions because there are more risks if the car were to stop working, many lives would be at stake. I am aware that there are still numerous car accidents now due to drunk drivers, texting while driving, and stuff of that nature, but I feel that driveless cars will cause more accidents, possibly taking the lives of people.\n\nAnother reason I'm against driveless cars is because people will become lazier than they already are, they'll get used to not driving but when they need to drive an older model car, like the original ones they'll be so used to the car driving itself they won't remember how to drive, or they'll forget they still have to pay attention to the road because the car isn't driving for itself now.\n\nAs paragraph 9, Waiting on the Law states \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" If the car operates on its own, the \"driver\" will not be alert to what is going on, and this will cause a lot of accidents as I said earlier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author is talking about going to Venus. The author explains the reasons why we should explore this planet. The author mentions that they should study Venus despite the danger it presents. Venus is the closest planet from the Earth in terms of density, size, and occasionally in distance too. Is Venus so inhospitable, why do scientist want to learn more of this planet? Venus has been proven a very challenging place to examine more closely.Why is it so important to visit Venus? What are the risks of going to Venus? What would the conditions be to go to Venus?\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun. Not even a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decade. Each previous mission was unmanned, no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Studyng Venus is a challenge to humans. Venus atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Of any planet from our solar system Venus has the hotterst surface. Astronomers believe that Venus once was like Earth. In tis article it it mentioned that long ago Venus used to be covered lagerly by oceans and problaby had many forms of life. Venus still have certain characteristics that relate to the Earth like valleys, mountains, craters, and rocky sediments. Returning to Venus is indisputable, scientists and astronomers are trying to figure out the ways to make this mission safe and scientifically productive? The NASA has an idea to sending humans to study Venus. This idea would allow them to float above the fray, temperatures would still be at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. However researchers cannot take samples of any kind from a distance. Nasa researchers are working on safer ways to study Venus. Reseachers are thinking in using old technology called mechanical computers. But why not use modern computers and more advanced technology?\n\nWell modern technology is tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. This challenge is to human curiosity which will lead to equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nIn conclusion in order to visit Venus there are many dangers that could occur. But how the author suggested despite the dangers. In the article mentions many danger of visiting Venus and the ways reseachers are trying to find to visit Venus safe and to learn. Studying Venus would help humanity to discover new things.\n\nThere will be dangers in this challenge but it's worth it. The author explains why they should study Venus and give details and explains the dangers of this challenge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What's your thoughts on driverless cars? Having a driverless car can be very helpful. This can have a big affect on car crashes. Driverless cars could have human drivers more aware of whats going on around them, prevent car crashes, and notifications or alerts on the road. With all the gadgets and tools this comes with, it'll have a big impact on the world.\n\nThe first reason why I think driverless cars can be helpful is because it can have human drivers aware of whats going on around them. There is a tool the driverless cars come with to alert drivers. For example,.. the \"Dubbed LIDAR , it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" The Dubbed LIDAR is an important system of the driverless car. This shows how aware the human would be about everything going around them.\n\nThe second reason why I think driverless cars can be helpful is because it can prevent car crashes. As stated in the article, their are several gadgets that can help the outcome of a car accident. \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the reaview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPA receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" This shows how protective the driverless car really is. After all this protection it could help prevent serious accidents.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars can be helpful is because it can alert human drivers. The sensors that comes with the car is a huge piece of the car. \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This shows the impact sensors have on the driverless cars. The sensors could generate the car at times when the driver needs the most help.\n\nDriverless cars has good reasons on why it should be legalized around the country. This law is only in a few states. With all the back up information and details it should be safe for other states to allow this situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the way i see it the author supported his claim very well.Now i mean yeah who is gonna want to risk there ife to go to this planet.but my paper is bout why you should despite the dangers.Because if you think about life is full of danger we just never seem to see it coming so this is i guess you could also say this is about not being so afraid to try new things in life.\n\nBy the author explaining why we should go and study venusis quite odd but at the same time intreging'but also very dangerous now im not saying i would do it but from the way the author explained it it sounds challenging but fun because we get experince new sights.And i bet there is alot of people out there who didnt even know that venu was the closest planet to being just like earth here is a quote from the passage that hepls explain more about it.\"Astonomers are facinated by venus becuase it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system,long ago\".\n\nNow for my conclusion,most people might say people from Nasa are crazy for even to consider going and or wanting to explore Venus. But in my opinion i would love to go to Venus and explore it but just not as close as Nasa, but its caught my interest to want to learn more about this giant fasinating planet and this is why.\"Venus has\n\nthe hottest surface tempreture in our solar system even though Mercury is closest to the sun.Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geolgy and weather present additional impediments.like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes seeking for probes to land on its surface\".\n\nOk so in i hope no one gets to confused but i will be putting one pro and one con because we all know what pros and cons are.SO hear is i would say the con is ,my con would be th fact that yes i could die within a matter of hours being on Venus and here are some information on that.\"since no aircraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours.Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touhed down in more than three decades\".And now for my pro even though we know of the dangers no one really pays attention to the beauty in things like this because the way i see adn hear from what the author says this planet isnt all destuction here is why i say that,\"Venus, sometimes called the evening star,is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,making it simple for even a simple stargazer to spot\".\n\nNow this is my conclusion .So yes Venus is very destuctive and scary but it doesnt mean you cant see the beauty in this giant sister Venus. So i would say the author has a good idead but at the same time i think we as human should\n\nnpushn our boundry's of the great planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a very neat thing to have but unsafe. We never know what could happen having one of these types of cars. Yes they sound like a really great idea. It can do all the work for you as it says in the article \"they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\" Which is really awesome but what if something happens and all that ends in something bad.\n\nWhat if the car starts to have a malfunction and loses control. Who knows who would also be responible for the inccedent, like the author says \"who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" The driver may have to pay for the damge if they were to be responsible for the problem and that wouldnt be any fun or cheap. Also in the article it asks if it would be boring waiting your turn? So true though wouldnt it be boring just sitting there waiting your turn to drive? Aslo what if drivers are to busy on their phones and a deer pops right out and the car doesn't stop on its own. To put the car together manufacturers had to put so many sensors on the driveless cars isnt that a little to much? Last but not least theses cars can't drive through situations like traffic issues or navigate through roadwork. I do not think these cars are worth it.\n\nHow I feel about driveless cars is a no go. I don't think they should be sold to anyone. These people just never know what could go wrong with them. Very great idea just probably should stay an idea. They would need so much done to them to ever truly be safe for the people. It would take them many years to get to where they went them to be. Like they say \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" That's aways away to be waiting for them to come out, by then they'll have hovercrafts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez creates grateful appreciative mood memoir When talks friends like family makes people grateful close friends While reading many people probably became appreciative parents provided I always grateful parents love sacrifice paragraph This quote make wonder grateful parents themWhile reading people also reflect lived home people love around house", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is no doubt that a person wants to become famous, and he or she uses many social media to be famous in their community. In this way personality is more renowned for their glamour as well as money rather than for their approaches. It also many impacts to young people. I agree with the given statement. The upcoming paragraphs will examine the why celebrities are more famous.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, personalities are more well know than for their achievements. First and foremost step is that, as we know very well, technology is making life easier, faster as well as convenient. In all over the world of people are using many social media for becoming a rich man. Sometimes, their dreams are ruined to the technology, then they spend more and more money to be become in the community. Apart from this, lazy and obese. To illustrate, some individuals want to become well known without any hard work. They give money to industry for becoming famous. These are the major reasons.\r\nProbing further, there are lots of influence on children due to this phenomenon. The first impact on children, for we know that children are future for the country. If celebrities motivate to children, and children enjoy their personal life. They will not only become independent, but also very difficult to opt their career in the following years.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I would say that every coin has two facets. In this way personalities have both impacts as well as benefits, and I think there are more effective on youngsters. Celebrities ought to be more responsible and enjoyed the achievements.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few years, the standard of living of people has improved significantly. These days, as individuals prefer to use their private vehicles, it often leads to heavy traffic on roads. This is a common issue in most cities all over the world. This essay will elucidate the reasons for this problem and the possible solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nWell, one of the reasons for this trend is to park anywhere on the roads. Since the rules and regulations in most cities are people-friendly, citizens take undue advantage of this and feel free to halt their vehicles as per their choices. This usually leads to traffic on roads because it prevents other cars to move smoothly. Moreover, because the conditions of public transportation are not up to the mark, people who can afford to use their cars for travelling purposes do not compromise. For instance, in remote areas where local public commute facilities have not improved, most localities prefer to traveller by two or four-wheelers. As a result, the high volume of personal vehicles leads to jams.\r\n\r\nHaving said that, in order to avoid traffic problems, the law-making bodies must impose strict rules so that people avoid parking wherever they want. This will ensure that there are no roadblocks and vehicles can move around freely. Further, if the conditions of local transportation are improved, people would be willing to travel by them. For example, when the Mumbai metro started, many office-goers began travelling by it rather than using their own cars. This helped the town to reduce the number of personal vehicles on roads and resolved the issue of traffic jams.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, even though the number of vehicle owners is increasing day by day, they can be encouraged to park only at the relevant spots and to use public modes of transportation as much as possible so that jams can be avoided.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The question computers positive effect society Yes computers definetly positive effect society Computers teach handeye coordiantion give people ability learn faraway people places allows people talk people online Computers put positive effect people First Computers teach people handeye coordination I mean computers help people learn use eyes hands time A survey conducted shows people better handeye coordiantion use computers nt Proffessor says people use computer much coordinated othe person great discovery You thinking computer would make less coordianted BUT computers really help handeye coordination people In conclusion get learn hot use computer better handeye coordinated Second computers allow people able learn far away places people mean computer help learn faraway without paying fortune money go I remember time mom dad going go see lot landmarks uncle came house brand new computer parents ended staying home saved large amount op money Famous explorer smome says I go anywhere I always google computer learn life climent etc I know thinking would better experience go really expensive go faraway countries In conclusion computer help save money help learn Third computers lets people talk people online mean people go special websites talk friends A survey done Shows people talk people websites aAmous social worker says CAPS people use websites helps vocabulary social abilities I know thinking websites dangerous viris software prevent danger In conclusion social abilities computers Lastly computers teach people faraway places help social abilities learn handeye coordination Computers help society learning help growth technology today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's most developing and rapid-growing world popularity of an online course is an easy and more effective way. A number of humans believed that higher education should be done online, another side some thinks student have to attend college to gain the degree. While this trend is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that it is a more positive side of this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, one convincing argument can be made that online education is a key development in this century. In addition, there are more benefits to gain research from home such as save travelling costs, we were able to get a foreign degree, get more time class at home. Let's take COVID-19, as an example, due to this a human life stops and students are also not able to attend their classes so they prefer to do an online course. Furthermore, this trend is very useful in many ways and students pursue more than one study at the same time.\r\n\r\nHaving said that, it is also undeniable that some subjects need practical study which makes online debate impossible in some way. However, some studies filed needs a certain level of labs or practical room which makes online examination impossible. The best relevant instance is science Universities, whoever studies in that field they need some specific instruments to performs such kind of task. Additionally, that's forces the young generation to go to college and share their ideas with each other.\r\n\r\nThus, it can be concluded that every coin has it's to side, here I will strongly support online study because of the developing technology and student attend more classes in the different filed at the same time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is said that social networks have multiple platforms for updating events occurring globally. In my opinion, they should use social networking sites to connect with their community. In this article, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using social media applications.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the main advantage of using social networking sites is eliminating communication barriers between people due to distance. Furthermore, using social networks for introverts to connect with each other is a valuable tool that can help them in various ways. Additionally, individuals can learn about the latest news that is trending around the world. For example, there are numerous applications that assist individuals to link up with others who share common passions and offer various abilities required for modern living.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, excessive use of social media platforms can lead to wasting valuable time that could be used more effectively at work. Furthermore, it has become increasingly common for people to lead technologically advanced lives. As a result, cybercrime rates have significantly increased in the past few years. For example, recently, some people have been robbed by fake profiles online. There is no doubt that the crime of stealing personal information online is becoming increasingly serious, so these platforms need to be verified in order to avoid the loss or theft of personal information online.\r\n\r\nIn short, if used carefully, social media can be helpful in finding something for everyone. In contrast, unreasonable usage can lead to significant losses of both time and potentially money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Years ago something happened around Mars. Nasa viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landings sites for its sister ship viking 2 , when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a himen face.\n\nThe face of mars is just another land form because in the article it states that thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image appeared on JPL web site an natural landform. After all it was just cloudy wispy to see the land form.\n\nA cloudless summer day in cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look they had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to the center the face in the field of view in 2001 images spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.\n\nAs the rule of thumb you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. Mars global suveyor is mapping space craft that normally looks looks straight down and scans the planet like a few machine in narrow 2.5 km wide strips.\n\nAnd for these reasons i think that the face of Mars is just an landform not aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our Founding Fathers created a new concept of a way to elect a President, called Electoral College. This concept was created so voting would be fair to everyone, since it is a compromise between the election of a President by a vote in Congress and the popular vote of qualified citizens. Electoral College may cause some domestic disputes between citizens, but in turn it keeps our nation running smoothly. The Electoral College helps avoid run-off election(which can be detrimental to our Presidential Election), it requires the presidential canidate to be \"everyone's president\", and it has a certainy of outcome.\n\nAdditionally, having an Electoral College helps us avoid the problem of elections in which, neither canidate recieves a majority vote within the popular votes. For example, in 1992 Clinton had only a a 43 percent plurality of the popular vote, but won the majority of the Electoral College with 370 votes respectively. The presure of neither of the canidates winning a majority vote could greatly complicate the presidential election process.\n\nArguably there is a possiblility of a tie in an electoral vote, since it consists of 538 electors. But a tie is highly unlikely. Every state does not recieve the same amount of electors;electors are assigned given your states population including the District of Columbia. This means that states with a larger population have a larger say than a state with a small population in the Electoral College.\n\nEven though the Electoral College is the most despised method of choosing our President it makes the presidential canidate have a trans-regional appeal. Meaning, the canidate cannot heavily campaign in a region where he knows he is the favorite of all the states in that region. For example, in 2012 Romney was the solid favorite of the Southern region. But he cannot gain electoral votes by increasing his popularity in this region. Since no region has enough votes to elect a president, he would need to increase his popularity in other regions in the U.S.\n\nOn the other hand, the Electoral College is outdated and voters do not actually vote for the presidential canidate, they vote for a group of electors. Those electors may betray the party of the canidate and cast their vote for whomever else is running for President. The system allows for much worse to happen. A state could send two slates of electors to Congress,and the Vice President could only validate only his opponet's electors.\n\nIn conclusion, keeping the Electoral College is a must. Without it our Presidential elections would be a diaster.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car Free Cities\n\nCould you imagine living in a place without cars? Or even in a place where there were cars,but nobody used them? That is not a place I would want to live in. I enjoy driving my car, and many of my friends enjoy cruising dirt roads in their trucks. Driving is not just a way of transportation, it is a way of life. There are some people that don't want to drive. There are some people that don't want anybody to drive. There are people and governments trying to take away the right to drive an automobile on certain days. It seems like a huge hit, which is good for the government promoting it, because if people had anything better to do, the idea wouldn't last a second. Take the \"Car-free day\" in Bogota, Colombia for example. It was started in the mid-1990s. My source said that millions of Colombians took alternate approaches to getting around on this day. However, I must also take into consideration that this article was written in 2002. There has been a lot of change since 2002. In 2002 I didn't even know how to ride a bicycle, and now I've got my driver's license. I can't really infer how many take part in this event nowadays, but it said millions participated twelve years ago. I would think that if that was the majority of people in the designated areas, then they would've wrote the impressive percentage of people that participated. However, they did not. The article just says millions. How many millions of people? Two million people, three millions people, ten million people? It doesn't say how many millions as if to suggest that the writers of this article think that just writing \"millions\" of people is enough evidence to impress the reader. For all i know, only ten percent of the people in Colombia may have taken part in Car-free day. Also, it says the fine for violating the Car-free day is $25 dollars with the exception to buses and taxis. This sounds more to me like a scam to get people to use more buses and taxis. $25 dollars where I live isn't hardly anything. I can find that much walking down the sidewalk. In Colombia, however, i do not know how much that is. Especially in the capitol city, where I'm sure there is plenty of poverty just as there is in the majority of large cities in the U.S. The article did not specify how much money $25 dollars is over there related to in the United States. So when it boils down to it, the citizens of Colombia didn't have many choices for transportation. They could walk or ride a bicycle, probably the cheapest way. They could take a bus or taxi which would most likely be free, but it would be pointless because if the reason for this campaign is really what officials claim it is- to reduce pollution, then they're just making it worse having people take buses instead of driving they're own cars. I'm positive my car gets more mpg than the buses they're using in Colombia. So I'm sure there were quite a lot of people that participated in the event, but I'm not convinces they all did it for the right cause.\n\nI am totally against taking away cars. I do not care if they take away cars in other countries. I think it would be wrong and unfair to the people, but it doesn't apply to me, therefore I'm not concerned too much. However, if they tried to ban the use of cars in the U.S, I think there would be an outrage. My dad is a self-employed floor installer, but in his mean time he works on cars. He is good at working on cars. If he wanted to, he could easily open up a body shop out of his garage, but he doesn't want to. He doesn't want to work on cars for other people and he don't care about the money he could make doing it. He wants to work on his own cars for no other reason than that he enjoys doing it. His dad taught him how to fix cars. My grandpa was also a mechanic before he retired. He had his own small-town body shop where people from all around would bring there cars for him to fix. He did very well financially for auto-mechanic. I do not share the same love for cars that they do. When i was growing up i didn't want to be in a garage, i wanted to be in a pool or on a basketball court. That's not to say that i don't love my car though, and enjoy driving it. I'm sixteen years old, I've had my license for about six months, and I've had my own car for about 9 months. In source 4: The End of Car Culture, the author talks about her sons compared to Mr. Sivak's sons. Her sons have little interest in obtaining a license. I know very few people like that in my life. Most of my friends and I love our automobiles and we love being able to drive. It's a good sense of self-responsibility that prepares us for the responsibility we will encounter as adults.\n\nIn a world where everybody walks, bikes, hikes, or takes buses and taxis, I would be miserable. I would hate walking or biking to work everyday and everywhere I go. Every time i arrived i would be drenching in sweat. I would hate taking a bus just as much because it would most likely be crammed full of tons of people who are incapable or too lazy to walk and bike to get around. If buses today are already uncomfortable, could you imagine them twice as full? Taxis would probably be the worst. They would be the only means of comfortable transportation. Could you imagine the price of using a taxi in a world without private cars. It would skyrocket. The fare would be outrageous. I hope i never live to experience a time where i will get a ticket and fine just for driving my car on a certain day of the week.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many young adults are seen to be a sluggish generation compared to the older ones. They often display the actions of being spoiled and lazy who can only spend money to have fun. Many believe that these kids should be assigned to do voluntary social work during their extra time instead of just chilling at home. In this essay, I will discuss and state my opinion regarding this issue. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, those adults who propose this idea claim that giving opportunities to young adolescents to do voluntary jobs will benefit not only the kids themselves but also society. Parents think that training their heirs from a young age will help them to overcome social issues in the future. For instance, adults who are used to being involved in local society as volunteers are more sociable. Therefore, they find it easier to get hired for a job,and also are able to contribute to building the neighbourhood. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some disadvantages to this belief. One of the primary negative sides that might appear is youngsters consider it as a common thing. In other words, If a teenage person is forced to carry out an unpayable task, they might end up thinking that it is a common thing to do a job without getting properly appreciated with rewards. For example, if they are employed in a company that requires them to do extra hours without any compensation, they can only accept it as it is because it is seen as a normal thing.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there are convincing arguments on both ideas, I personally believe that training the young generation to get used to work by joining the local community without getting paid and get proper experience to prepare themselves for their upcoming adult lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challegene of Exploring Venus\n\nVenus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is a planet similar to ours. It is the closest on similiarities to Earth and scientificis plan to explore it. However, it could be a bad idea because it has a lot of pollution, high temperatures and weather problems.\n\nOne reason of why exploring venus is a bad idea is the pollution. The text says \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\". It means that there is a great pollution that humans are not able to stand. If people tries to go to Venus they could probably die.\n\nAnother reason is that venus has higher temperatures and weather problems. The article says \" temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater.\" It means that the temperatures are stronger than what we can stand. Humans are not used to it so it would be difficult and risky.\n\nOne more reason is the weather issues. The article says \"Additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthqueakes, and frequent lightning strikes to proves seeking to land on its surface\". The weather is a great issue since they could destroy everything. It will be so hard to explore, not even machins would be able to stand a strong weather.\n\nIn conclusion, exploring Venus would be a bad idea since it is risky for humans. If you still think that scientifics should explore Venus, you can look for more information on internet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There have been many times when people have wished that they could read other peoples faces to know how they feel about certain things or just if they're upset or not. Well, now with new technology there is a computer system that can do just that. However, isn't the whole reason we try to hide our emotions is to keep private things private? I think that having a system like this in classrooms is a bad idea because, not everyone needs to or should know how you're feeling all of the time, and the teacher would not be able to modify the lesson as well because different people will feel different things.\n\nOne reason why having a device like this in classrooms is not a good idea is because we as humans have developed a way to somewhat hide what we are truly feeling so only the people we want to know, can see that. Having this in a class would almost completely rid us of that valuable ability we have. This would tell people what we are feeling even when we don't want them to know, which is a complete invasion of the privacy we all have. Also teachers do not need to know how students are feeling about a particular topic because it should be none of their business, they should not have to change what is being taught because people don't like it.\n\nAnother reason why having an emotion reader in a classroom is because one of the main reasons stated in the article is \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\". This is a problem because teachers will not be able to effectively change the lesson, as everyone will feel differently about it. Lastly, teachers shouldn't really need this because it doesn't really matter how students are feeling about a subject that is required to be taught, so there is not really a whole lot that a teacher could do.\n\nIn conclusion I think that while many times people have wished to know how other are feeling, it is simply not something that could be used well in a classroom. Because, we hide our emotions so that no one else knows unless we want them to and something like this system takes that away. I do not think this is a good idea because not everyone needs to know how you feel, and teachers would not be able to use it as effectively because different people will feel different emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since a number of years, the population from the countryside move to big metropolis for various reasons and consequently capital centre has a shortage of housing. However, the national government is the only one to tackle this issue. I am fully agreed that the authority has the main responsibility to have sufficient housing in commercial cities and I will discuss how to prevent unnecessary side effects in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the main reason that causes the shortage of housing in downtown is increasing the population of migrate from countryside to developed area to work as the daily workers, especially in construction sectors and many industries. Societies are moving to centre which offer greater employment and a higher standard of living. For instance, most of the city's life can access the internet, mobile banking, and convenient transportation system. As a result, accommodation places are more and more demanding significantly for blue-collar workers who can only afford a low budget houses . \r\n\r\nSecondly, another reason is that several side effects have been occurred such as water shortage and electricity getting by hourly. This means that the accommodations and domestic water supplies cannot be separated in urban life while the population and urban water system ratio are not equal, there will be many consequences related to people's health problems , for example, people cannot use sufficient water amount for their water and sanitation purposes. In addition to that, big city life is having good practices and management systems for household waste. If the governments cannot control daily waste, the diseases of diaherra and flu can be spread easily. In this case, people have to spend extra charges for their health. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, increasing insufficient numbers of houses in cities cause not only utility shortage but also negative effects on resident health problems. To prevent the problem mentioned above only the head of the nation can be solved the issue. Personally, I believe that the authorities have the responsibilities to support the country to be developed and arrange national finances to build sufficient housing in the country’s gateway cities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology that was created to identify human emotions is valuable for students in a classroom and their teacheres. Sometimes humans have trouble figuring out how others are feeling by looking at their face but this device will help them know how they feel. It could become a project in a class that is learning about human emotions and they can do a test on a painting and one of the classmates and write similarities and differences. The device is intended to bring a smile to your face when you hear about it so you don't have to work so hard on trying to tell what your friends emotions are. So say your on your phone and an ad pops up and it makes you smile the device would register that and more ads like that will come up everytime but it you frowned when seen the ad then the device won't put anymore ads like that on your device. The device can even identify mixed emotions like it did in Da Vinci's painting Mona Lisa. Dr. Paul Eckman had classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness which is all programmed into the device. The reason why it woudl help a teacher would be because they may not know how to react with a student if they didn't know how they were feelings if their facial expressions weren't showing very well. So if they had the device they can use it to determine how the kid is doing and nothing bad would happen. It is even a better way for students and teachers to communicate better with electronic devices since they are on a rise throughout school districts. All of these descriptions are reasons why kids at school would love them and valuable to student and the teacher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that musems are place where every person, especially youngsters, enjoy and can last their time by observing items, while others claim that this place is a centre of education rather than disneyland. This essay will discusses both arguments and then I will give my own perspective.\r\n\r\nThe main reason why a big number of people visit museums with their children is to expand outlook by demonstrating local history, famous ancestors and old customs. As well as this, young generation only want to enjoy instead of getting knowledge about something. For example, many researches conclude that current generation spend a great deal of time in the social media rather than reading books. In addition, by visiting such kind of places they can be more aware about their country and citizens. If museums are constructed as an antractive place it would catch more attention by adolecents. Furthermore, museums are more likely to be fun and useful for building close relationships between parent and kid. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are several strong arguments who sees museums as an educational place. As far as museums are concerned tradisionalists argue with former opinion. The key reason for this lacking of understanding what museum is by teenagers. Moreover, teenagers seek only enjoyment rather than gaining something that they do not know. Also, items which are exhibited in museums are very historical. Thus people ought to visit for educational purposes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,there are merits and drawbacks of two arguments, hence both notions can taken into consideration. However, on balance, I lean to the idea that supervisors of museums try to use advantages of both approaches.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college isnt an normal conversating subject for everyday life, although it is important. Without the Electoral College We the People wouldnt have a president to help run our country as a whole. The way the College works may be confusing but it all ties together in the end- a new president is elected every four years.\n\nParticurly, there are a total of five hundred and thirty-eight electors. But around two hundred and seventy votes is required to eclect the president. Everyone has jobs. Meaning, they are either all apart of parties or are in charge of an party that has decided to go and represent somebody that is running. The \"state\" of Columbia is in a way treated differently. The reasoning Columbia is quotations is because there was quite a discussion on wheather or not it should be counted, in the end result- according to the article \"Source 1: What is the electoral college?\" \"For soem reason, in the following discussion the word \"state\" also refers to the District of Columbia\". That being said the more votes the better and fair to all of the People. As each candidate runs to be elected for Preisdency the elector has a party in which they support fully and represent one another as a whole. As they represent they start to get people excited for the new incoming President and saying why they believe he/she is the best and deserves to dedicate their time. All of these processes go on because everyone deserves to share their opinion and say and choose their preferred President.\n\nAnother smart point is, everyoen should be given a chance. That being said, no matter if youre a women or man and have the desire to work in the Electoral College or even run for president, I personally believe that everyone should be treated equal and be given an oppurtuninty to show the wiseness and what they have to offer. Stated from \"Source 3: In defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" just so hapeens in number four to say, \"So other things are being equal, a large state gets more attention from the presidental candidats in a campaign than a small state does\". Basically saying that everyone doesnt get the chance to choose if its not given and thats not how we the People need to be, if we want help protecting our country for the ones that are against us with grudges, and to help keep our roadways clean and avaliable, and to help hire us at the jobs we want, then truly we need to support them as well. and give them equality!\n\nIn summation, the electoal college is an important part of our Government and Presidency itself, but all the proscesses and ect. that is also involved also plays a role and makes it just as necessary. Without out we woudlnt be able to vote for the right and needed President because we wouldnt know what is need, required, and more. With it, it makes everything make sense. With all the people that are in the committee makes it ten times better in chossing who and how we want to be represented. Electing our president is just as important of the Electoral College. In other words, without the busy college, there would be no President of the United States of America.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the use technology more useful to read the emotional expressions of the students is valuable is because teaches the students spmething that they never known.\n\nthe articles making mona lisa smile is a claim is because the using of technology to read students emotional expressions makes them think about how can technology so our emotional expressions and the only way to do that is by seeing a friends feeling and by seeing the facial muscles move and precisley enough to show it .\n\nfoor computers to show emotions it has to see the 44 major muscles model and how they move when they react to the emotions if the major muscles model don't move in the computer then we won't be able see the emotions .\n\nthe ways you can sse if youre showing a emotion is going to a mirror and see waht is happening to show emotion iis raie your lips at the corners of your mouth, then squint your eyes slightly to produce wrinkling at the corner of yours eyes, whild holding that raise the outer parts of the cheeks up toward your eyes. and thats what can to do to show emotions.\n\nIn conclusion, technology that is called FACS can show huaman emotions byy showing what creates them by show the mona lisa painting and what caused her to smile and this considers this valuable to the student so they can learn about this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is ideal for humaninty, if Earth became not ideal for humaninty anymore. The previous article about Venus \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is a good article to read, because it describes Venus and it's dangers and it's benfits. It may be mistaken that it is unhabitable for humanity, but there is a possiblity for humanity to live on other planet. There is reasons for saying those things about Venus. This is an other aticle to explain why Venus is habitable for humanity.\n\n\"Venus is often referred to as Earth's twin\" Paragraph 2, is perfect arguement to start with, because as you can see venus is already considered as twin of Earth. It's natural geographic is similar to Earth's, so it already proves Venus could had a possibility of having oceans, lake, and bodies of water in the past. The density and size is same to Earth too so we will have vaguely same space as Earth. Venus is too hot to survive so we can do blimp-like vehicle above venus and still stay in their gravity and have people survive in the atmosphere above the fray. We could send people over there to research first before doing anything, If they makes people feels safer about living on Venus.\n\nThere is reason for saying those things about Venus, the reason for saying those things are that we are currently overpopulating Earth we currently have over 7 Billion people living. We need more room for more people in the future and im concered if we dont move to other planet, Earth will be crowded. It already is crowded in some areas of Earth, like New York, California, New Delhi, and more. \"Our travels on earth and beyond should be not limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edge of imagination and innovation.\" Is a good statment to make to encourage people to explore Venus more. There is some people who hope that we will move to other planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of providing higher education to young people is of utmost importance in several countries. However, cultivating literacy skills in adults who lack the ability to read and write is equally essential for society. Governments should allocate more resources to address the needs of this population. In my opinion, I support teaching every adult and ensuring they attain a high level of language proficiency. Additionally, providing high-quality education for youths is also a crucial policy for enhancing the national economy.\n\nFirstly, leading all adults to comprehensively learn and study a language enables effective communication, especially among elderly individuals. If governments invest significantly in enhancing their reading and writing abilities, it not only addresses issues of word recognition but also reduces frequent conversational conflicts. For example, some elderly adults struggle to send messages with cellphones, leading to difficulties in communicating with their offspring. If governments are willing to allocate funds to educate seniors, generation gaps could be significantly narrowed.\n\nOn the contrary, some parents prioritize cultivating young pupils as nations require a skilled workforce to bolster future economies. The emphasis on education reflects the understanding that a knowledgeable populace is crucial for sustained economic growth. This proactive approach by parents underscores the recognition of the pivotal role education plays in shaping a nation's prosperity in the years to come.\n\nIn conclusion, while prioritizing higher education for young people is vital, investing in adult education, particularly in language skills, is equally crucial for societal cohesion. I advocate for a balanced approach that addresses both segments, contributing to a harmonious society and a robust national economy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We shouldnt have cars that drive themselves. It would be nice to have cars that can do this, but I dont think its safe for the driver. These cars will cause problems if someone driving it gets in to an accident. There could be some defects and could cause an injury to the driver or cars around it. The cars won't even be able to drive themselves all the time there are still some parts where the person has to drive.\n\nThese cars can cause a lot of problems with the people driving it and the people who made the car. There could be law sue over these cars. In the passage it says ''if someone gets into an accident with the car would it be the persons fault or the maker?'' It would just be a lot to deal with for an accident both for the driver and the company. With the cars we have today its easier to find out if it was you or the other person who caused the accident. We should just stick to the cars we have an improve them but not as far to where they can drive themeselves.\n\nWhen it comes to technology there are always some defects with producs. Since these cars are supposed to have technology in order for them to work properly there could be some defects. There could be a lot of things that can go wrong with these cars. sine the car wont completely be able to drive themselves like if there is construction the driver has to take over, and the car tells the driver the system could have a defect and cause the driver not to be aware of this situation. It could cause a damage. There are a lot of defects that could happen to this cars.\n\nI think we should just stick to the cars we have now and upgrade them with better things but lets not go as far to the point where it drivers itself. we should be the ones in charge of driving the car. I think we will be more safe if we just drive it ourselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator, there is a huge concern over who's vote is the real vote, Americas, or the Electoral College \"Your vote counts\" is what the citizens of America always hear when it is finally time to vote. But does it really count the way that it should? The tuesday after the first monday in November, everyone is going crazy lining up outside of the voting polls and waiting to make their vote count for who they want their new president to be. But are they really voting for a President or a state of electors? Whats the point of even putting in our vote if the Electoral College is gonna take over and vote for who they want. It makes no sense at all.\n\nIt is completely understood that they use the peoples votes for who they pledged on but that really has no purpose. Instead of having the people of America vote then why don't we just have the Electoral College be the only people to vote? So basically when the people of America go and vote they are not voting for any president at all. Instead they are voting for Democratic and Republican electors. That completely overrides the whole purpose for the Presidential election.\n\nIn 2002, Al Gore lost the election due to the Electoral College. He had more individual votes but George Bush had more electoral votes. That proves that many peoples vote doesnt count. If more people voted for Gore thats what the people of America wanted and there was proof. So it was very unfair how Bush won because of electoral votes. Why do the people of America even vote if things like that may happen, how come they encourage us to vote, why not just let the Electoral College do all the voting for who they preffer? If the people cant get what they want then why do we even vote for it?\n\nThe only real reason that the people are to vote is to be played. America is being fooled by thinking that their vote does something when really it does nothing at all. If Bush won because of the Electoral College and not individual votes why did the people even vote? If noone were to vote then we would still have a president because, the Electoral College would just vote for who they wanted instead right? So why must America vote? If our votes count then why would we need an Electoral College to assist in the presidential election? America should be able to get who they want not who the Electoral College wants. So the question usually asked should not be, \"Did you vote\" but instead, \"Did the Electoral College vote\"?\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Think about what it would be like if your computer could tell what you were feeling. New software called Facial Action Coding System allows computers to identify human emotions to do just that! The use of this technology to read emotional expressions can be of great value to students in a classroom because it could help students to learn more effectively and be more knowledgable even without a teacher to guide their studies.\n\nThe FACS software could revolutionize online classwork and help students understand what they learn online. By recognizing a student's expression by constructing \"a 3-D model of the face\"(3), 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is confused or bored,'(6) The lesson could then be modified, mimicking the ability of a human instructor.\n\nThe use of emotional recognition technology could eliminate the need for human instructors. \"'Most human communication is verbal, notes Dr. Huang. 'So computers need to understand that, too.'\"(6) If a computer knows how well the student is understanding what he or she is learning, there isn't much difference between that computer and a teacher. Without asking for help from a human teacher, the student could learn the topic at their own pace and difficulty. Schools could be full of computers instead of staff members.\n\nThe use of FACS to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom can have positive effects that make it have value including better education and not having the need for teachers. Students who struggle doing online classwork could greatly benefit and effectively learn. Education across the globe will change for the better because students will be able to interpret what they learn, even if their teacher is not present.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author supports the idea of studying Venus very well. They give informational texts such as statistics and important information that intrigues the reader into wanting to know more about our \"sister planet\". He explains his idea,of studying Venus, our \"sister planet\" , by using facts such as Venus being the closest planet to us, describing the atmosphere the planet has on a daily basis, and incluiding the fact that even astronomers are fascinated by it.\n\nWhen the author said \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth. Despite Earth and Venus being our neighboring planet there's still many accomdations they must keep in mind,yes they have similar mountains and other landmade items, but it's also very different. In paragraph, 3 the author tells us how about 70 percent of the planets atmosphere is consitsed of carbon dioxixde. This would surely put the life of a human in danger. With all of this information and comparing and contrasting being made the author is still able to provide us with accurate infromation about the planet itself.\n\n\"Even astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well have once been the most Earth like planet in our solar system\" the author says in paragraph 3. Breaking it into a segment of fascination for the astronmers because it has so many earth like similarities such as, a surface of rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. The fact that land made surfaces, that are prominently known on Earth,are being found on Venus shocks the readers and provides them with an inspiration to see more similaritites. They go as far as to mention that Venus may have once been scattered with oceans. This surpised me very much considering the fact that a planet a years travel away would have some of the same natural things happening on them.\n\nWhen discussing the possibility of traveling to the planet one day, the author describes the climate as being very hot. Observing the planet from a ship orbiting or hovering far above the planet provides only limited sight on the ground conditions because some light simply cannot break past the dense atmosphere. Due to the almost opaque climate NASA has been working on different approaches in order to study the climate.\n\nThe author does a fantastic job of supporting his claim of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. They included some of the most important ordeals and questions some may have regarding to the situtation. They address the climate, astronomers fascination with the planet,and discussing the relativeness it has to Earth. The author provides a strong claim at the end that somewhat encourages the reader, by saying \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and inovation\" he is saying that our advances in the future should not be limited, but adjusted to meet the requirements needed to expand our knowledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is a wonderful expirience. The trips you took were an unbelievable opportunity. By 1947 I had made nine trips which was the most trips any Seagoing Cowboy has made. These are the expiriences I had being a Seagoing Cowboy that will convince you to join the program.\n\nIt all started in 1945 when World War ll was over in Europe and many countries were left in ruins. Helping people is a wonderful thing to do and that is something I got to do while being a Seagoing Cowboy. I also got to help lots of animals that were shipped overseas in the World War ll by feeding them and caring for them. Some of the animals I got to care for were horses, young cows, and mules. Also by being a Seagoing Cowboy I got to visit lots of different countries and meet new people. Seeing the Acropolis in Greece and taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy was very special to me. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. It is also very fun on board with the other cowboys. We played baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. These games weren't only fun but they also helped pass some of the time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy has opened the world to me. It has made me more aware of the people from different countries and their needs. If more people join this amazing program they will most likely expirience the different countries that I had been to and meet the different people that I have met. The Seagoing Cowboy program is truely a wonderful expirience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng ment take test next spring pass hope winter flower sight flock geese high hopes pass test sees buds hibiscus take test Saeng upset failed time hoping passed next spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mina Lisa Smile\" it talked about how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can read your emotions. Technology in this world has changed a lot. Technology that can read emotions, it's knows when your are happy, sad, fearfull, anger, digusted, and surprised. Can you imagine sitting in your classroom and you are confused but you don't want to say anything because you are the only one who doesn't understand it. Your teacher suddenly comes up to you and asked where are you confused. Would you be surprised?\n\nSitting in school, bored? Confused? Say no more, the teachers can already tell. This new Facial Action Coding System can tell your basic emotions. I think having this in schools would be a great idea. If your shy and don;t like talking in fornt of other people, they can already tell how you feel. They can tell when you are confused on something or bored on a topic. Being able to read your emotions might be a little odd but it would help in school I think.\n\nReading your emotions at school could help with your grade too. If you are confused on something and you don't say anything, your teacher can still tell you are confused and would probably ask if you needed or wanted help. Your teacher helping you with homework and assiments could help bring up your grade. Getting a better grade could help you get further in school and in life. Getting further in life would help a lot. Graduating high school and going on to college. Facial Action Coding System could help a lot in college too. College is harder then high school. So if you had a problem in high school, college is probably going to be harder.\n\nGetting through colloege is going to be a great thing in your life. Graduating college and moving up in life will help a lot. You can go out buy a house, a car, and get a job. Why can you go out and do all that? You can do all those things because you had the oppatunaty, even though you didn't tell you were confused someone still knew because of the new Facial Action Coding System. In the text it says \" it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\".\n\nThis proves that I think they should have the new Facial Action Coding System in classrooms. Having help when you didn't ask for it could help if you need it. Getting though high school and college can be a great help in life, but you are going to need help if you are confused. Some people don't like asking for help and it could come back and hurt them. I think having the new Facial Action Coding System would help a lot in the classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertisements are the form of communication between companies and consumers, which are not only fruitful to the producers but also to the consumers. These advertisements have a great impact on the mass. In this competitive world, Due to the fact that 'When you visualize, you will materialize', most of companies are promoting their products on media using various forms, which has some negative impacts also. I completely agree that people are influenced by the advertisements and some measures should be taken to pacify its negative impact.\n\nTo begin with, nowadays advertisements are everywhere, such as radio, television, internet, holdings and while using the applications. Advertisements, undoubtedly a good source for people to get knowledge about various kinds of available items and its use in real life. However, it creates some bad effects also. Firstly, It adverts in such an appealing way that people become impulsive buyer, even if they do not require an item; Secondly, fast food advertisements are more colourful and attracts children towards the consumption of fast food. For example, advert of Maggi, which was banned last year because of using a large amount of the additives, which are perilous for children brain.\n\nThirdly, In movies or through advert, producers have encouraged the youngsters to bad habits. For instance, Tobacco, Cigarette and liquor; Lastly, to increase the sells, advertisement companies hire top celebrities, whose cost is very high and it end up with a surge in the price of the product and consumer have to bare with it.\n\nTo diminish above negative influence on the society, the government along with individual should take some important steps such as the advertisement which are harmful to the users, they should compulsory have to highlight the bad impacts on health, so adults actually know its effects before using it. Moreover, The advertisements which are related to the children, should be adverted very carefully with the correct information. In addition to that, individual should purchase the goods only if they are useful in their life.\n\nIn conclusion, Although advertisements are good, they should display true information about the product to mitigate the wrong influence on society and nation. To control its bad influence, government and citizen should be smart buyer rather than impulsive buying.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recruiting new employees can be a long and painful process. But it is important for the all organizations and In IT companies. Because the success of any organization depends on the quality of its staff. So, most of the employers conduct a interviews for hiring a new staff. I disagree with the given statement which says that interview is not a reliable method and other methods are better. A number of arguments surround my opinion.\nTo begin with, there are many reasons why interview is an important method for the recruiter. First and foremost, interview is the only method in which employers can get an idea about the personality and social skill of the potential candidates. In interview, there is face to face interaction and candidate have to answer the impromptu questions, which leaves vey little scope for hiding personality traits. Also employees can judge traits like ability to handle pressure, confidence and ability to think outside the box and so on by asking the some study type questions. \nOn the other hand, there are many other selection methods with varied advantages. One of the other common method is prefferd when the focus is on jugging theoretical knowledge of the person. For example, in some IT companies theoretical knowledge is very important because employees have to send a email for their clients. Last but not least, there can be combination of the all the three methods like written tests, followed by group discussion and finally interview. \nTo conclude, I cannot agree that interview is not reliable method and other methods are better. It depends upon the job and company requirement, in some situations conducting interviews is more opt and in some situations the other methods may be more advantageous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its danger of making it a challenge because there are great qualites about this planet that makes it different . One way Venus is analogous to earth is because it has a rocky surface,valleys,and mountains. A interesting fact about Venus that the passage states is that \"its one of the brightest points of light in the night sky.\" Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density of size and occasionally in distance too. The article states that \" A ship hovering over venus can allow very limited insight on ground conditions because of certain forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" but when scientists figure out a way to create a machine that will work in those conditions it willl be worth the wait.\n\nVenus is reffered to as earths twin. A big differnce between earth and Venus is that Venus is over 800 degrees and no one would last in that condtion of heat. Venus has the hottest surface even though mercury is closer to earth. There are many more things scientists can find out,if they keep studying Venus even though it is a challenge because of the high temperature. In conclusion even though Venus is a challenge to study it is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because of howmany differences it has from earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Vroom! Vroom! is the sound a car makes when it starts up. Well not all cars but most cars make that sound. Have you ever wanted to take a nap instead of driving somewhere? Or maybe you don't want to drive? Well Sergey Brin can help you with that. He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. In other words, he thinks that cars will drive themselves around. My thoughts on this is very strong.\n\nThe generation we live in revolves around social media. Teens are always on social media or texting. They are on their phones till 5 in the morning scrolling through Instagram or Twitter. Teens that drive have a habit of texting and driving. I have been in the car with my sister, or my friends and they would just pull their phone out and start texting or checking to see if their crush has followed them back yet. Hello! My life matters! Please put the phone up! Having cars that drive themselves will just make this worse. The teens will never put the phone down while in the car. They will think \"Oh, the car is driving\n\nso I don't need to pay any attention.\" People are coming out with apps to put on your phone that don't let you text if the car is going more then 5mp. The teens will put them and their peers at risk if they think they don't have to drive.\n\nPeople who work and teens who work most of the time have a weird sleeping schedule. I, myself, have a weird sleeping schedule. I am not fully awake when I walk into school every morning. Imagine me driving. I would be trying so hard to stay awake. Having a car that drives itself sounds wonderful but there are multiple situations that I could drive into. First off, GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vechile is in danger of hitting an object. If I fall asleep while behind the wheel but the car is driving itself and it comes close to hitting something or worse someone, it is supposed to vibrate. What happens if I don't feel that vibration and I don't wake up? Having a car drive itself is wonderful but it has multiple responsibilites to come with it.\n\nIn my opinion I would want to have full control of the car. Their are multiple responsibilities that come with a driverless car. It says the car will light up or make a noise to let you know that it is your turn to drive. But not everyone will see or hear those noises. Having full control of the car makes you feel safer in my opinion. We spend up to 2 years learning how to drive and now we are supposed to trust a car to drive us places and keep us safe? I think not.\n\nCars have been around for years. Teens look forward to getting their license everyday and learning how to drive. Changing that would stink! Teens are coming more responsible with having phones turned off while driving or even having an app on their phone that doesn't let them text while the car is in motion. Having the person drive the car keeps them busy so they won't fall asleep. Having full control of the car would make the people a lot safer. What do you think. Should we have cars that drive themselves?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is sometimes argued that by 2050, there will have been an elimination of the traditional teaching method of learners and teachers in the classroom. Personally, I partly agree with this idea and a number of reasons will be discussed in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the viewpoint is reasonable to some extent. The most frequently cited one is associated with a significant change in the relationship between teachers and students. It is believed that the role of teachers will be advisors or tutors, rather than the one who conveys knowledge these days. As this thought becomes true, students will have more opportunities to discover the wider world on their own, which may bring several advantages such as boosting the ability of creativity and dynamics, being more dependent and having a sense of freedom to demonstrate their talent.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I maintain that the conventional method of teaching in class cannot be removed. Firstly, it seems evident that learning at school with a well-trained teacher may be the most reliable method. This is due to the wide range of knowledge we are learning, as it has high quality and is always being put under supervision, we can get access to a useful source of material. Secondly, the traditional way plays an important part in our lives, especially for students. As they have more chances to cooperate with their teachers and friends, which can help broaden their social circles. For example, research conducted by the Vietnamese government shows that more than 70 per cent of students found themselves being helped to overcome depression when spending time at school.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is clear that this point of view has several possibilities. However, I maintain that the typical teaching situation will never lose its role, nowadays or in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the idea of using driverless cars in the future sounds unsafe because of risks of not using them with drivers. The risks of driving a car without a driver are like the risks of driving a car with a driver.\n\nThe risks of driving include going over the speed limit, driving through a red traffic light, and driving into somebody crossing the street. Going over the speed limit can lead to the police putting the person speeding under arrest. Driving through a red traffic light can end up with the driver go into somebody else or making them stop. Driving into somebody crossing the street can send the person crossing the street into the hospital and the driver charged with it. An example of a risk done by driving is while Dad is taking me to school, somebody made him stop by going through a red traffic light just when he is about to go and it was not the driver's turn.\n\nSergey Brin may think driverless cars may change the world fundamentally, but I think they may change the world unsafely. He may say they would go in 2020, but I say they should not appear in 2020 at all. With all of the accidents driverless cars can cause, I have to say no to the idea of using such things. If there is somebody crossing the street and a driverless car goes by without noticing the person walking, there is a chance that the driver can be charged for not paying attention if the person gets sent to the hospital. If a driverless car goes through a red traffic light and crashes into somebody, then the driver can be put under arrest for not taking a turn of driving it.\n\nDriverless cars may have technology like other machines, but they can malfunction and result in causing accidents that normal cars can cause. If the GPS receiver starts malfunctioning and starts heading towards a cliff with the driver not paying attention to the situation, there is a high chance the driver can get into big trouble. If the video camera starts malfunctioning and somebody in another car is speeding, the driver cannot get it to work properly after stopping and the other driver drives into the driverless car. If the wheel starts malfunctioning and loses control, there is a good chance the driver will get seriously hurt and hospitalized for it while losing the car. Like all kinds of machines, driverless cars can get out of control and not into good use for the owner of the cars.\n\nI chose safety over driving in my future and I tell myself that safety is more important than anything just to ensure it will be in my adulthood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today we live in the pandemia world, even if several countries don't have a high risk of infection for the majority of its population. We stiil sit at home rather then go to a restorant with friends and a lot of companies still keep their offices locked.\nOn the one hand office workers from all over the world opened the possibility of working from home. This option gives you more freedom and diversity of places from wich you can do your job: you can meet with your collegues from cafe or library, from kitchen or bedroom. Also, we were forced to keep our social nets with online tools, to communicate with our friends and families. Now we all learned to use such programmes like Zoom or Skype to speak with each other. Probably if we hadn't the Covid, we would struggle bigger difficulties when someone from our buddies would come to another country or town, but now we all know what to do with this, how to keep in touch. We also got to appreciate the power of touching more then before, because we were missing it for these long monthes. How it was nice to hug an old friend after long quarantine!\nOn the other hand we really weaned from normal offline communication. And we can't evaluate how many people started to think that online is absolute substitute of offline. It's obviosly not like that. During online meeting it's impossible to have a normal common discussion because it needs to have only one person speaking. Also people lack of possibility to see each others eyes, so they don't feel enough contact with each other.\nAs a conclusion it is possible to say that situation with increasing popularuty of online meetings is ambivalent. This type of communication save our connections with each other during the pandemia, but there is a risk of substitution real meetings by online in the situations when it is not appropriate. As far I am concerned, I think that advantages outweight disadvantages, but we need to use online communication properly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it is a crazy idea to have \"driveless cars\" on the road. For one, all the work\n\nand testing and the drivers education clas time we took to prepare ourselves to be great drivers would be a complete waist.\n\nA computerized car could easliy malfuntuntion. Is it good that they'd still alert the driver to over when dealing with complicated traffic issues, yes. But i still think strongly that this is a horrible idea. I understand that it's a new big thing but its also a big new dangerous thing. People are a hazard on the road while already having 6 billions hazardist people in regular cars on the road is just a bad combionation and it doesn't need to be made.\n\nHaving a good track to test on like they did in the 1950's is nice and good practice but the real concern i have is when it gets on the real road. They whats it going to do? Because on a speicalized track, yeah changes can be made and things can be fixed and it may run betting alone but when you put it up to the real world hows it going to preform? I would feel no purpose for my license if i don't really get to drive my car if its a computer doing it for me. theres no use. A waist of time. To many areadly failed attempts with smart cars, we don't needs a driveless one.\n\nAnd other are few of many reasons why i don't think and im not for having driveless cars on the road any time soon or in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern many hours day spend computer Too many geuss They warping minds people opinion things go back way used Some people disagree say computers help children school That true honestly couple decades ago average student didnt even computer school teaching materials without usage Also children use computers cheat homework assignments essays I m sure many people would agree helping education schools Another reason computers benefit society dangers Sexual predators sworm internet many people talk strangers internet harmful without even realizing A third reason computers help society see I feel strongly negative effects computers society many reason I hope agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "yes, it is good that they the people that is causeing the damange to the cars pay for they responsibility that they have car insurance so that they can help them with there problems. It is good that have navigation in there car so that they know that they will not have any problems with there destinations, But it is by the law to keep all the passengers safe by them wearing seat belts just in case of any accident.\n\nIt will help if every person have on a seat or may get pulled ova by the law so it wont be no tickets going around so that mean by the person skills it would help to make sure that person thats driving is doing what they are suppose to be doing at the time that they are driving.\n\nGM has developed drivers seats that vibrates when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object traffic jam assissant the car handle driving functions at the speed limit of 25 mph but special touch sensrs make sure the drivers keep hold of the wheel. the combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\n\nThe car read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. these smart road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was too expensive to be practical.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author overall gratefulness As Narciso writes events life notice mostly talks family He says nt blood relative family matters loveNarciso mostly grateful parents sacraficed old lives Cuba better life US Their jobs Cuba great got whatever job could getNot Narciso s family teach love learned real definition family It saw courage took parents turn simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many businesses have to compete each other in order to survive from the rapidly changing world, leading to the high amount of time that employees spend on working. There are also other reasons why the employees work for a long period which I will discuss in this essay. In terms of consequences, I personally believe that spending most of our time at work is the negative development.\nIt is the fact that people have various rationales to work for long hours. A classic example is the dynamic working condition. There are many companies that provide services such as consultation to customers, meaning that if their service does not completely satisfy the clients’ need, such client may decide to use the service from other competitors. Hence, the employees are required to dedicate their time to deliver the best service to the clients. Another common criticism is a bright career path. When the employees work for a long period, they can carefully check their works and, as a result, delivery the works with less mistakes. Doing this way could impress their manager and they are likely to get promotion in return.\nWith a careful consideration regarding the consequence of working for long hours, there are many vital drawbacks. An obvious effect is the increase in illness. People who work very hard have to spend a lot of their time at work. Therefore, they may not have enough time to do exercises, weakening the immune system of their body. Furthermore, with the rise in the amount of working hours, people tend to lack social skills. This is because they may not be able to manage time to join social events or meet their friends, resulting in the less ability to adapt to new environments.\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that people work for long hours because of the requirement in business and personal career goal which, in my opinion, leads to negative development for themselves. This is because this behavior negatively affects their health condition and social competency which are the two most important aspects in our life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, the author suggests that despite Venus' inhospitable conditions, it is a very good idea to explore and descover more about it. He supports that with developing technology, it would not be impossible, just a complicated engineering challenge. The author supports that if the correct methods and technolohies were developed, humans might be able to visit and even live on Venus.\n\nThe author's main reason for claiming that exploring Venus is worthwhile is because Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin\", and for good reason. It once had lakes and oceans that could have supported life. Even though those are gone, it still has similar landforms (mountains, valleys, etc.) and it's surface is made of rocky sediment, similar to Earth's. It is aslo often the closest planet to Earth, trading out with Mars every so often.\n\nIn summary, the author's reasons for supporting the exploration of Venus are that Venus is often the closest planet to ours, it sports a similar geography and other planetary characteristics, and that it might be possible for humans to one day visit and live on Venus, which might be a good thing with the current rate of our population growth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion there many positive and negatives about using driverless cars. Driverless cars can even be very safe and very dangerouds in the matter of seconds. Personally I dislike the idea of making these cars, because i think i would help on ocassions but could really hurt someone . But there is one thing I am worried about manufacturing these cars. Since the car is practically taking over what if the driver falls asleep and dosen't wake up when the have to do something on their own, like going around a work zone.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the \"Traffic Jam\", and i think it is a good idea about how the car can announce when the driver need to take over and that the car can practically be on its own to do most things. But also on the other hand if you did have a car drive and it is not like a car has a human brain and can think when a animal runs past on a dark street. Even the fact that BMW is trying to put in \"in-car entertainment\". Because if they do that the driver has another reason to not pay attention to the road.\n\nI am for the few states that are making even test driving these cars illegal because the car are not reliable enough to have the cars on the road. Tesla is even trying to release a car that will be driverless 90 nprecent of the time in 2016. Which in my opinion is a terrible idea because they are making it so when you drive you pretty much have no control over your car. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan are planning to even make a car in 2020 that drives itself. I think it is unbelieveable that manufactures want to make make a car completely driverless and let the accidents and deaths depend on the driver and not the automakers.\n\nIn conclusion I dislike the ideas of making cars that can be almost driverless and even consider making a car in 2020 so you do not have to drive at all and just let the car drive for you. Hopefully someone will aslo see that this is something we shouldn't be doing and try to correct it before it is to late to correct it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im year ago I foster kid I patience lot things First foster parents got divorced kids I patience waiting till foster mom found home move Secondly I wasnt told I could go home I wait till everything Finally told year half I could go home mom within week I packed waited I patience everyone It hard extremely hard mind crazy hard It took two weeks day get home top I move stuff home unpack day I still unpacking Being foster takes lot patience I learned", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe in aliens or life on other planets? A face shape was found on Mars and many are calling it an alien marking. It is proven that it is not from aliens through research and pictures, however people still continue to protest. Our scientists at NASA have already studied the mark as soon as it was spotted. Also, if the so called \"face marking\" was from aliens, NASA would be all over it.\n\nFirst of all, the scientists at NASA have already studied and observed the marking as soon as we were notified and pictures were sent to us. Later, finding out that it turned out to be nothing more than a natural made landform. The quote, \"scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia\" (2) shows how we found out really what it was. The quote, \"a few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see\" (3) shows how NASA was sharing with the people the truth behind what the marking was. We wished we could have been able to do more research on aliens, but that was only capable if the life on Mars were real.\n\nLastly, if there were real aliens, we would be open about it and do research immediately. The quote, \"defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars\" (5) shows how we wish that the aliens did exist so we could learn more about life on Mars. The quote \"but the sensation was short lived\" (2) shows how we were sad that the landmark wasn't alien made. We would have liked it if we would have been able to research the landmark about aliens but unfortunatly it wasn't caused by aliens. If the marking was real, we have been proud to announce that and would have not keepen it a secret.\n\nOthers might argue that our team at NASA are lying to the public but that is not true. They say that we are hiding the information from the public. The quote, \"some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars\" (5) shows how other people have different thoughts on what we found. Another quote, \"NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists\" (5) shows how people begin to believe and think that we're lying to them about our discovey. However, Our scientists would be thrilled if it really was aliens, starting ancient civilization on Mars.\n\nSome believe that the marking on Mars was an alien marking. We, scientists, have proof that it was not. We have done plenty of research as proof to our conclusion. If the mark was real, NASA would have already discovered all sorts of information on life on Mars. I and the other scientists at NASA believe one day we will discover alien life form but May 24, 2001 just wasn't that day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph teaching Saeng confident vow silently In order teach lessons fact failed test middle passage Saeng tells mother snow gone spring time retake test failed Her mother upset found Saeng failed test first time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever wonder what is like if every one stop using their cars? Imagine how the world would be now. The earth would be clean, we dont have to be worring about the air pollution no more. Many countries are eliminating cars and making people walk to work, school and the mall or somewhere else. In Vauban, Germany every one has given up their cars, the streert parking, parking lot, and garages are forbidden. Almost everyone goes walking or they ride their bicycle. Vauban is a \"car-free\" city. Many people sold their cars to move in Vauban, so that they can live peacefuly and not be so stress over a car. Cause of this idea almost every country is starting to do this. This will help the world to be a better place.\n\nIn Paris,France, they have ban driving due to smog. Paris has been recording the pollution and they have realize that it got out of controlled. People who drives motocycle they would be fined, they would have to pay $31. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined according to the agency. Car traffic when down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five days of intensifying smog. Diesel fuel makes up 67 percent of vehicles in France. Paris has more smog that any other European capitals. Scientists have found that Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter, that is the highest compared to London and Brussels. Now the smog had cleared enough because of the \"car-free\".\n\nIn Bogota,Colmbia, Car-Free day is spinning into a big hit. People that live in Colombia hike,bike,skate or take buses due to the Car-Free. It has been three years that Colombia have been doing these. They banned cars except buses and taxis in the capital city of 7 million people. Their goal is to remove smog and to promote alternative transportation. Colombians that dont not participate and use their car will get fined and they would have to pay $25. Carlos Artura Plaza says \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower pollution\". He rides his two-seated bike with his wife every day when they have Car-Free day. Other cities from Colombia decide to participate on this event. This campaign had started in the mid-1990s, over 118 miles of biclyce paths have been created.\n\nIn recent studies, Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes. Last yera a study was found that young people driving has decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. In USA there has been a large drop in percentage of 16 to 39 years olds getting a license. In other states like New York, they have a program that you get to share bikes. If other countries satrt doing the Car-Free day campaign it will help the Earth, there wouldn't be no more smog and air pollution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you guys ever heard of Sergey Brin? Sergey imagines a time in the future when\n\nno one will buy cars, because we wont need them anymore. Sergey envisions a future with a new way of transportiation system. The car Sergey is working on will be pretty cool, because it doesnt take as much fuel as our taxis today do. This will be a good way to drive when your tired.\n\nI think we should get these car, because\n\nit will stop alot of crashs. Sergey should just make them. They should look the way they do in movies. The google perject that Sergey is coming up with will be cool for the world to see. Maybe it will help us stop the drunk driving.\n\nTo me this google project is something the world has been waiting on and we can really use. I hope we get to use these driveless cars. For everyones safety. I hope Sergey really does this project. Its going make it easyer on everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thinks author concludes story given paragraph show similar hibiscus geese First geese hibiscus goal survive winters Geese fly south winter stay warm This similar Saeng worse thing moved different environment must adapt Also Saeng must experience winter along hibiscus The hibiscus needs tobe strong overcome winter shows Saeng like hibiscus needs strong overcome test If hibiscus overcome its test winter survive cangner", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is an opportunity of a lifetime because of all the countrys and places you get to go to. Like in (paragraph 1) Luke got invited to go to\n\nEurope by his friend Don. You get to do things that you have probably never done before. In (paragraph 2) it says that you take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Seagoing Cowboys would let you see experiences that you have never seen before.\n\nIn (paragraph 5) Luke says the cattle boat trips were an unbelivable opportunity for a small-town boy. (Paragraph 5) Luke says besides helping people I had the side benefits of seeing Europe and China. The article says in (paragraph 6) how hard it was to take care of the animals. Luke had to feed them two or three times a day. To be Seagoing Cowboys you have to want to work hard and like taking care of animals.\n\nBeing Seagoing Cowboys would be really hard work but it would be a fun job to do. Luke says in (paragraph 9) being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for him. Luke says that it opened up the world to him and I am greatful for the opportunitys Luke says.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to have help at school with out even having to ask for it. A resorce that could read emotions would and is voluable in school today so kids can get the best out of learning. Technology is getting so good that it can now read emotions. In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.'' Nick D'Alto talks about how computer solfware can help people with problems just by sencing there face emotions. Technology that is able to, identify mixed emotions, scietificly proven and tested to work, and helps in school, Should be put in all schools.\n\nFirst off, technology that can identify mixed emotions is a great tool in school and every ware. For exampel it could help stop peolpe in court rooms or when you are talking to a offeser. It can tell what persont of feelings you have. It said that the Mona Lisa \"... 83 percent happy, 9 percent, disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" (Pg.1)\n\nThis would help with identifying mixed emotions.\n\nSecondly, It has been scientificly proven to work because Thomas Huang,and Nicu Sebe both from high colloges working on ways that humans and computers can communicate. They stared of with a \"cumputer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\"(Pg 3) They created \"FACS\" this classifies six basic emotions. \"...happiness, surprise, anger disgust, fear, and sadness...\" (Pg. 3) These are all emotions that students have and that could us help from a computer that cares.\n\nLastly, it would help with school. Kids could see a problem on the computer and give a confused look at it and it could pop up a screan with a help page or it could inform the teacher that you are haveing truble. Nick D'Alto stated \" for example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This would help at school so there could be less bad ad to pop up. This will help kids stay safe. If you have a problem and the computer could read your face it could modify that problem.\n\nThis would be a fantastic improvment in schools. It would help kid learn better and it could give teachers a break. It could even help istep graders. Computers in schools and all over the world should have face software because it knows unknow emotions, sceintest Thomas Huang and Nicu are proving it works, and it will help make kids life easyer in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring Venus showed a great amount of evidence to support both opinions, supportive of the idea or not. As we lnow venus is 170 degrees on the surface but ships can take it. Then theres the fact that no spacecrafts sent by humans has ever lasted more than a few hours on the surface of venus.\n\nthere is a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets on venus, and even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmospher.\n\nVenus distance wise is a time consuming yet possible feet. Venus and mars are the closest neighboring plants to us and Venus more than mars shows there could have been life long ago on this planet. Venus consists of valleys, mountian ranges, craters , and many believe oceans once inhabited this planet. Talks of NASA doing a human ran investigation thirty miles aboves venus to do reaserch.\n\nNASA belives that Venus has not easy condistions but survivable for humans. There has been talks of even sending people down there to do research in the future and that could go bad knowing the knowledge you have on this planet. the challenges would be very intimidating and unpredictable.\n\nIn the end these talks on further exploring Venus is very intresting and inthink is should be done at the right place and the right time. Us as humans are curious creatures and should have all the knowledge we can gather on these forigne planets before human exploration. A lot of questions un answered and a lot to answer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many steps are taken by academic institutions to improve the quality of education. Some people think schools should give a right to students to give feedback regarding their teachers. On the contrary, others believe that students will not respect their teachers if they evaluate their teachers. I am in agreement with the latter view. This essay will discuss both views in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, Some folks believe that teachers should also be evaluated by their students. It will help to improve the study in institutes. Many believe that some students are capable to learn but they are not satisfied with the teaching methods. For instance, if a class in a school is slow and a teacher's teaching method is fast and some students do not get what is in the particular topic and it lower their grades. If pupils will not give feedback on this and a teacher will continue his speed. Hence, that's why the community believe that feedback is necessary to improve the quality of the study.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others and I believe that if scholars evaluate their teachers it will increase disrespect of teachers and indiscipline in the class. Firstly, If a student does not like his teacher for a particular reason other than teaching he will take revenge by giving poor feedback. Secondly, It will affect the study of the students they will not take their study seriously. Moreover, teacher will also not teach them with interest. As a result, a teacher and student relationship get disturb. Overall, It affects the teaching and education system.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, this essay discussed the reasons of why the community believe that feedback is necessary and others oppose it. In my opinion, by criticized a teacher one cannot improve the education system. There should be others method to improve the quality of an academic institution", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not the future. The fact that some people are willing to just hand their life to a pre-programmed car is upsurd. Driverless cars have several issues including cyber attack and cost. It is also important for young adults to learn the responsibility of driving and it's benefits. I would also like to point out that the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is incorrect on the notion that gas usage will be reduced\n\nFirst, any competent hacker would be able to easily rewrite the cars programs and commit mass murder. These cars could be hacked for assassinations or just acts of terrorism. These cars would also be under attack from computer virus almost all the time, this would require a costly antivirus software for almost everycar. Driverless cars could easily become weapons against the innocent citizens during a war and are unsafe to mass produce\n\nThe article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" states that gas usage would drop dramatically but currently Bill Gates and several other of the worlds richest people are funding billions of dollars to find a relevant source of renewable energy. Synthetic photosynthesis is being developed, this source of energy allows the turning of gaseous carbon into liquid fuel similar to gasoline. With these predicted advancements fuel will no longer be an issue thus can't be a valid argument in an article predicting advancements in the future.\n\nAnother reason driverless cars should not be developed is that there is a certain level of responsibility required to drive a car. This responsibilty helps mature young adults and also gives them a sense of accomplishment. We as humans already rely on technology way to much we don't need to further increase our reliance.\n\nAnother reason driverless cars should not be developed is the cost. The cost of developing these driverless cars would be in the trillions for each country that participates,\n\nto create these cars almost all major roads in the world would have to be heavily analyzed and improved. All the major roads would have to be fit with sensors and other technology to keep the cars on the road. All the major companies in the world together could not purchase these advancements. For driverless cars to develope the governments of the world and the world bank would have to invest large sums of money, of which most of them don't have. Crippiling debt could be caused by the developement .\n\nAs you can see driverless cars are an awful idea that could lead to crippling debt, mass murder, and even more reliance on technology. This technology is not neccesary for the everyday life as a human being and should thus be forgotten.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has it ever seem hotter than it usually has to you? The sun's heat just burning the skin on your body. Does it feel like if you want to get any where you have drive in a car because it's to far to walk? Cars are our main source of transportation but it is not helping our enviroment. Gas that is used in cars send off green house gas emissions that hurt the ozone layer, a layer of gas in the stratosphere that protects us from the sun's ultraviolent rays. Many cities have started becoming car free because of this harm to the enviroment.\n\nOne of the cities that has become car free is Vauban, Germany [Source 1]. This city has found a way to become car free so that it is good for the enviroment and people can still go to stores or their jobs. What this city does is they make suburbs more compact and make store easily a walk away from a store. It mentions in Source 1 that Passenger cars are responsible for 12% of green house gas emissions. In the United states it is at 50%. All those green house emissions put a hole in the ozone layer making it hotter around the world and letting the ultraviolent rays from the sun hit our body which can cause skin cancer. The design of Vauban is used to structure other cities allowing those cities to use less cars.\n\nThe acumilation of smog can be very dangerous. in Source 2 in talks about Paris having to ban driving due to the amount of smog in city. The people driving would be fined 22 euro. The congestion of the smog dropped 60% because of the ban on driving. Source 2 states that France uses diesel fuel instead of regular gasoline due to a tax policy. Diesel makes up 67% percent of vehicles in France. Diesel fuel is harsher than regular gasosline to the ozone layer because it uses different chemicals and burns quicker than regular gasoline.\n\nIn Source 4 it talks about the United States using less cars than normal. In April 2013 the number of miles driven per person dropped by 9 percent compared to the past. It also states that the amount of young people driving has dropped 23% between 2001 and 2009. This drop in amount of people driving is very good due to green house gas emissions being the second largest source behind power plants. This drop in cars driven also causes less harm to the ozone layer. Source 4 also says that because of technology and the internet people do not have to drive to see and speak with each other. Instead they can e-mail, call, or text each other.\n\nTo conclude, with people driving less cars it becomes better for the enviroment. It allows less smog to build up and hurt the ozone layer allowing ultraviolent rays to harm us. Cities will be designed differently to acomdate the fact of using less cars by making jobs and stores closer to houses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, increasing the fuel's cost wouldn't be effective to solve environmental issues. Thus, I strongly disagree with this trying of solution. In addition, other reasons are included in this unbalance, such as the deforest, agropecuary, humans, etc.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, even with the war between Russia and Ukraine, people didn't stop buying fuel, but they were complaining about the high prices and still using it. Second of all, the car's engines have been changed to hybrid and electric cars, which helps solving the some of the issues. Said that, would be a good action by the factors to reduce the price of these types of cars. Additionally, more encouragement through the government (Public Policies), business (marketing) to people starting to ride bikes, take the bus, or just walk to their destinations, instead of using the car.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the high demand for meat, eggs and dairy products for humans, have been contributing to increase the deforestation. Thus, with a plain land, the farmers or factories can raise more farmer's animals, like cows, goats, pigs, chicken. These animals also pollute the land, rivers and the air in large scale. In the other hand, another problem starts with the pollution that each person makes everyday by not throwing the trash properly. This action impacts the whole cycle of nature. The system improve an environmental imbalances.\r\n\r\nTherefore, changing other sectors of life would help the Mother Nature, it would bring more health to the populations on Earth, and people should have more growth and a wider community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are not widly choosed over walking because things are to close and with less people driving less co2 emissions with is cutting back on the green house effect. 12% of co2 emissions are from cars and passenger vehicals. David Goldberg says '' since world war II transportation id growing quickly. Do to cars and there emissons pair has put a ban on them till the smog they have created clears up. Cold nights and warm days cause the emissions to get trapped in the air. Obama wants to put curb on the cor emissons and all the pollution that its causes. The united syates has long been the prime culture for cars do the birth place of the model T was in Detroit. Cars seem to be the big thing in the united states. Number of miles driven have grew scence 2005. Resources are getting closer and closer every day having none. The united states leads in car emissions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Computers technology best thing ever happened world I hear computers effect people well I dont agree statement Here reasons Computers technology make way easier Talking family friends without spending money If control amount time use computer fine Please keep reading hear great ideas To start computers technology make life easier Think access bank accounts stores reasearch school etc See instead go shoppingfor food could order online trouble We shop cloths household items Itso easy look list pick want instead waiting long line example I went pick items party There long line I got online picked wanted shipped unless hours Its cool even got get want I know sometimes since nt wan na get But go shopping Does nt computers make life easy Secondly talk family friends without spend money This awesome text video chat email free Computers many websites talk family friends like myspace yahoo even ohvoo Mostly video chat voice chat free All sites text free touch example one day I nt want spend talk friend So I video chatted And times better free better Even people long distanceis way much money call So video chat I know would nt wan na spend hundreds dollars phone call bill Please keep reading Thirdly count amount time use computer technology devices fine If limit set time use computer everything wonderful You tell body get pc get work talk friends There s way could addicted something limited If type person something Then nt get computer Like mom gives limited computer laptop school night An laptop weekends There s alway ways addicted You know enough enough Its computers fault Just control To wrap I would like say thank time read letter My reasons computers make life easier talk family friends free control amount time use computer fine Thanks", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that in some nations, an increasing number of individuals want to know about the past and history of the house and building where they reside. The main reason is to make sure that they are safe and people can find the solution to the question by looking on the Internet.\r\n\r\nThe primary cause is that people want to know if the building is safe, so they do not need to worry about future problems. By being aware of who lived there before, why they left the house and how many years before was built, with this information, people can make sure about the safety of the place and prevent disasters such as the collapse of the building. Recent research concluded that in West Asia many constructed buildings are not safe at all, these with small difficulties and issues can cause them to fall down.\r\n\r\nThe best way to find information is by searching on the Internet. This is because normally, important events and things that have happened will be announced and published on the Internet. The Internet is a way that people communicate with other individuals in the world and their surroundings. For instance, on the Internet people can find even information about what is happening at the moment in any country, what they are doing and the problems that they might face.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people want to have more information about the place where they live to ensure and confirm that where they are living is not dangerous and this information can be found on websites on the Internet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to a car but life could be easier without one. The world could be safer without cars, less pollution, less accidents.\n\nStores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway. Cars also cause pollution, which can be deadly to the enviorment. Cars can create smog which could be prevented by having one car free day. People who have cars also are more stressed than those without cars. A car free city would most likely see parks and sports center bloom throughout the city and uneven pitted sidewalks replaced by broad smooth sidewalks. Rush hour restrictions would dramatically cut traffic and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nAmericans would save so much money if they didnt buy a car. It seems as americans are buying less cars each year. Bill Ford laid out a business plan for a world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical or undesirable. Changes are being made by people to limit the use of cars and its a great idea.\n\nLife is much easier without cars. The world could be different and better if improvments are made daily and everyone contributes to limit the use of cars. Too much harm comes from using a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" there are so many reasons for why humans should not go to venus and explore. I agree with the author, the reason why is because first of all Venus is the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, it has beyond high pressure and heat. If you want to hear more reasons for why the author and I agree that it is dangerous to go to Venus then keep on reading the story.\n\nVenus, In the text it states that Venus \"the most hottest planet in our solar system can average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience on our own planet.\" If you think about it who would want to go to a planet that is over 800 degrees Farenheit, this is beyond hot weather, you would get heated up and be thirsty every single minute, and eventually you will run out of water. Another example is \" each previous mission was unmanned, and for more good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spacehip has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" Many astronauts have attempt to go to Venus but everytime they get into an accident.\n\nVenus also has beyond pressure too. An example is that \" beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" They haven't even landed on the planet and these are some causes they can get when they are trying to land. Astronauts have a hard job they have to risk their lives to study outside of this world and study\n\na whole new world. Another example is that \"at thirty- plus miles surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but not survivable for humans.\" These example shows why these people should not go to a new world and study.\n\nAfter reading this you might also think it's a bad thing to study a new world, yeah it would be great to learn what they have but have you ever thought what bad things could happen to you while you try to land or when you landed already. The difficulties you will face. Hard to survive, not having enough food and water. This all shows for why the despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Don't you want to help someone and wake up in the morning feeling good because you know that you saved lifes. Or seeing all different\n\nparts of the world. Or maybe you can meet new people and make more friends. You can do that by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will have a blast meeting new peole and making new friends.\n\nIt dosen't matter were you are you can always have something fun to do. You can take a gondla ride in Venice, Ital, a city with streets of water. Or you can tour an excavated castle in Crete and marveled ath the Panama Canal on your way to china. But thats not the most important thing to do. The most important thing to do is help and save peoples lives. You can only do that when you are finished or taking a break. You can always have fun on the ship too. Like if you finished taking the animals to their countries you can play games like baseball, and volleyball games. Or table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and also games.\n\nOnce you start the Seagoing Cowboys program you can't stop. You can have all sorts of different dutties on the ship. There is something for every one. You better be perpared because you can see some really scary things. Like for example, some countries just finished with their wars so they can look really bad. But you can always help thoose people in all sorts of ways. But most of all is that you help and they know you care. So don't you want to help people and save lives. If you do you can always join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nDon't you want to join and have the time of your life today. The Seagoing Cowboys program is very important to the people. They will be truly grateful of what you did or what you will do. They need your help and they need it bad. why would'nt you want to join its really fun and you get to see the real world. You will really care about the people and they will really care about you. So don't you want to come sign up today and have the time of your life. they will really thank you and I bet you will thank them too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just imagine if you could get in a car, start it up, and set your destination and nothing else, then off you go. The development of the car would allow the driver or passanger in this case to do other things while he car takes them to there destination. The development of this car has already been in the making for while already, leading all the way back to 1950s. Driverless cars would have a positive effect on human life.\n\nDevelopers of this car are thinking of puting a heads-up disply when the car is driving. Allowing one to do other things such as talking on the phone or texting. This comadity amy include a built in internet connection to allow one to see if anything interesting is going on in world. This connection may lead into people checking social media as well.\n\nGeneral motors came up with the idea to use smart roads insead of smart cars requiring changes to be made to the roads which proved to be too expansive. Google modified a Toyota Prius use a lot of senors to build a 3D model of the surrounding are for it to navigate. Sensors such as these have been around for while as well first beeing used to improve brakes on cars so the driver could more easily control the car.\n\nWith these Driverless cars coming in the possible near future and we humans having nothing to do, but press a few buttons and be on our way how would that not be a positive thing. we all know that we like to stay connected to the outside world so with the manufactors ide to but a kind computer/ tv/whatever in a car would be an amazing idea. Also not to mention that these Manufactors have been working on this for decades so they must know what kind problems thay may run into and how to deal with them if the y show up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience waiting Patience dealing teachers school trying understand point view Without patience younger sitting young teacher would constantly fighting Thats patience important Patience constantly exconsiled In sports helps need basic rer whether good bad call Patience also youre going first Patience makes perfect School great place use patience whether learning something new dealing teacher You need use dealing children always trying reactions whether theyre bad In end its call important whether small things Learning big things like testing Its rather patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The areas most likely to consume insect products are countries in central and south america, along with certain parts of Asia. Specifically, these are the countries that are more willing, than unwilling, to eat insect products: Mexico (71%), Peru (58%), Thailand (56%). It may perhaps be that these countries already consume insects as part of their diet. If this is case, it may explain their greater willingness to consume insect products. Some of the countries least likely to consume insect products include Japan (21%), Russia (32%), and Spain (33%).\nIn the United States, specifically, 35% of responders are willing to consume insects. Overall, the cost of purchasing a non-insect, such as buffalo and beef, is lower than purchasing insects. The highest cost is of beef at 3.03 USD/kg, as compared to the lowest costing insect - giant water bug at 2.6 USD/kg. Due to the dieteray norms in the United States, people are more likely to be acqainted with eating and preparing beef, as opposed to the giant water bug - and it may provide nutritional benefits that are difficult to be found in relatively smaller animals such as insects. Overall, the range for purchasing insects as food products is from 10.65 USD/kg to 2.6 USD/kg, while non-insect products are overall more inexpensive, ranging from 0.78 USD/kg to 3.03 USD/kg.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argue that sending their children to single-sex schools would be safer and they can make friends easily while other people think that this can cause many difficulties when they get into the real world.In my opinion, I would like to encourage to send to co-educational schools.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, parents especially whose the girls worry about their children's student-lives.They worry that their children might get bullied in schools, have been making jokes by others or fall in love with boys.So they think that single-sex school is the best solution to reduce their stress and worries.But I don't like this opinion, I think they are just too focus on the present life and don't even think about their kids' futures. For example,when their children grow, they have to face a lot of tensions and problems in their life but I am sure they have to try very hard to cope with their situations because they are way too weak in socialization with people.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a lot of people who think that co-educational school is the best advice for the young. Honestly, life is not very easy as we think. We'll get into trouble more and more as we grow older.We will have to spend a lot of time fixing these.So we should be happy and free in our childhood lives.We should make a lot of friends, run around the playgrounds, participate in every volunteer work. For example, a child who can freely think and work it out without any pressure will be more confident for every decision he has made and can lead to a successful life more than his classmates who are controlled by their parents.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is true to worry about our kids' student lives but we don't need to control their lives. We should only safeguard and help to solve their problems. So I don't think sending to single-sex schools for our relieves is not the right thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think there should be driverless cars. The reasons for this is, the future is always inovationg making life easier,it helps people with disabilities, and it is better for safety reasons.\n\nInovation makes life more convenent for us,and safer than it has before. Like how we have dryers to dry our cloths instead of hanging them on closth pins. Also, how we have vaccines to make sure we dont get diseases. Those are examples of things that have helped the world in making things easier and safer. So there is nothing wrong with a driverless car that is safe and convinent for the average houshold family.\n\nIn the passage it tells us in pargraph 7 that they are already invovating how a car will drive itself. Yes they say that it can not yet navigate itself through work zones and accidents, but they are still improving how to make it fully driverless which can be very helpful to those with disabillities. Disabilities such as paralysis,loss of limbs, blindness, and\n\nEpilepse ,which is the cause of sudden seziurs, which prevents them fom driving. These cars can help them get around without the assistance of another person making them feel normal or indapendent in society.\n\nLaslty, we should have driveless cars because,it actually is safer for every person. Say if a person was driving under the influence. That person could harm themselves and others, but with driverless cars you wont have to worry with that person causing an accident and hurting themselves and others.The only concern with safety is in paragraph 9,that if the technology fails there might be liability issues. These issues can be worked out by setting out laws and procedures for these types of situations to prevent them. which is what auto makers are trying to solve now.\n\nThecnology is always growing, helpin people out, and making it safer for us to live. The driverless car is one of those things.The driverless car gives everyone the equal opertunity to be independent and safe for future generations to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nSome reasons way you should are you get free time and you can take trips with your free time. \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China,\" Luke says.\n\nYou also are helping a lot of people and animals.\n\nWorld War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.\n\nTo help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA.\n\nUNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to care of animals that were shipped overseas.\n\nA man named Luke joined and he ended up loving it.\n\nIt also teches you how to work hard, how to care for others, and how to work as a team.\n\nThose are the exact reasons God sent us on the Earth.\n\nLuke said that he was grateful for the opportunity.\n\n\"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs\".\n\n\"And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years\".\n\nI hope you well join the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the finding of the face on Mars in 1976 many people have been saying that it must have been made from aliens on Mars. However this is not true. If there was life on Mars NASA would have found it by now because it would benefit them. \"Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars-- evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" (Pg 5) So therefor the Face on Mars is just a natural landform because of the amount of pictures taken of Mars and the face, the amount of time taken to research the Face and all of the NASA people saying it resembles natural landforms that are on Earth.\n\nFirst off we know that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform because of all the pictures that were taken. If there was any alien life of any kind on Mars, NASA would have caught it. In the article it says, \"'Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.' Each pixel in the 2001image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" (Pg 10) The author of the article went into even more detail and said, \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplans on the ground or Egytian- style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!'\"(pg 11) This explains how good the camera quality is and how they wouldn't be able to miss anything.\n\nIncluding the amount of picture evidence against life on Mars and the fact that the Face was not made by extraterrestrials, the amount of time spent researching the face by NASA clearly shows they know what they're talking about. The first picture of the face was taken in 1976 and then it was a major hit and they took another picture 12 years later in 1998. Then again after that in 2001. Also in the article it says, \"And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camer (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos\" (pg 7) This quote from the article shows to what extent NASA researchers went to to find out more about the Face.\n\nAs if there is not already a bunch of reasons why the face on Mars is just a landform, a group of people are agreeing with NASA's decision that the face is just a natural landform. According to the article it says, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" (Pg 2) Also stated in the article, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivelant of a butte or mesa-- landforms common around the American West. 'It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of idaho,' says Garvin.\" Those quotes in the article are proof that those same types of landforms happened here on Earth as well and the ones here were not made by aliens.\n\nIn conclusion the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. If there was aliens on Mars making landforms then NASA would definetely use that for publicity and to make the taxpayers happy. However there are no aliens on Mars making landforms and NASA knows this because of the time they have taken to research this along with the amount of pictures taken with high quality cameras and the resemblance of the landform to landforms on Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear know people starting use computers In opinion I think computer benefit society many ways One positive effect people communicate Through computer people able send messages If someone nt phone car simply go online write message click send button This easy way communicate someone lives half way around world well If family members live far away also send pictures friendsfamily places ve They receive also send pictures back Another positive effect computers people learn new things The internet allows search different topics basically everything anything could ever think If go type word like dog ll see bunch websites take websites dogs You find list naming types dogs old dog live dogs found care well etc The internet lets explore new things help find ideas You name got The computer also cames handy nothing If re bored ca nt play outside weather bad broke leg play computer games listen music online write story word document Playing computer games teach techniques help play game better well keep busy If want listen music keep entertained go sites find song want hear It s better listening radio sometimes nt like song s giving If re also mood write story open word document want type whats mind see I think computer facinating tool use You communicate learn new things keep entertained re able something active Just remember whenever go play hang friends family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "School plays an important role in the development of children's moral values and raising the children towards the brighter future aspects. It is believed that kids find it tough to focus on their studies during school. This essay will illustrate the causes and the solution to their difficulties.\r\n\r\n First of all, youngsters finding it difficult due to the use of methods while teaching nowadays, in most of the Western countries they follow modern ways of teaching along with different techniques to uphold their focus in education, therefore, management should include animations, effects to make the class more interesting. Moreover, each class consist of a huge number of pupils which results in a lack of attention. In addition to this, working hours of the schools nowadays have been increased, it's the main reason behind the youngster's lack of interest in education and lack of sports or any extracurricular activities which make them boredom and inactive.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, along with the studies Management should also focus on the health of the younger children. They should build up some playgrounds and activity grounds where kids can have some relax and sporty time there. Nevertheless, the authorities should arrange the students and teachers meetings every weekend by that they can resolve their problems. Moreover, they should keep separate classes for the smarter students so that the lecturer can give full time to one who is lacking behind.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the way of education may vary from time to time still it is the responsibility of the organisation to maintain the system by initiating various ways of educating. The students should also discuss difficulties with the management. Counselling should be initiated between parents, students and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear people computers people use It s brought attension government worried people using much Well I think ca nt use computer much They offer things information communication life skills That nt bad Informaiton something humans live Also schools jobs need know variaty unusual facts Where learn Computers course When teacher gives us research paper walt disney use computers find information With computer I would nt know walt disney died disney world opened That clearly shows one things need computers Communication another aspect lives With computer ways comunicate Yes way dangerous safe When I grade teacher mscasserelle set classwide email us This allowed us email another school This farm online communication perfectly safe As long person using forms communication semresponsible nothing go wrong Where go wrong Did know life skills learned computers As matterafact job involves computer One life skill learn type As I stated earlier research papers need computers well s information You type Most jobs world need computer something Can think job nt require one Ididnt think Information communication life skills important human nature Ithink computers important humans Wether admit everything involves computer degree Can spend countless hours computer Yes need need", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotional output can inpact people a lot. By having a positive emotional expression, it can show what you like. By having a negitive emotional expression, it can show to people what you dislike. By having technology that can accurately show your emotions and how your feeling could help us a great amount. Schools often have trouble engaging students into being interested in what they are learning. If schools implanted this software into their programs, we could find ways to exite certain children. I think every school should have this!\n\nBeing in school can be awful a certain points, even making you want to just not go, but by using an emotion reading software, it could show what interest children. With the ability to show every percent of every emotion you have can show how happy you are in a subject. the procision of this software is insane. For example, they tested the Mona Lisa and said that \"She´s 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" Teachers can use this on there students and they can change they way they are teaching them. By using this software, it can change schools entirely.\n\nSchools can also us this technology for bullying. Bullying in schools goes on everyday it it's hard to know if a kid is getting bullied. With this technology, we can see if any students are uneasy and fearful in school. After they know if a child is fearful or uncomfortable, teachers and staff can meet with the student and see if it's their home life thats making them feel this way or if it's a bully. I believe this technology can help us know if a child is being bullied or abused.\n\nSchools could use this software as a lie detector. For example, \"These muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician isn being truthful.\" This software can help schools to tell if a kid is lying about something. Disaplenary actions at schools can sometimes be wrongly convicted to some students. By having this software is schools, this will help the teachers and staff a great amout. It can also see if a student has done something bad even before you know what they did. Less time will be spent trying to figure out if they are lying or not.\n\nSchools are supposed to be a safe, fun enviroment for children . Technology that can read emotions can help us figure out how certain kids are feeling and what they are saying is true. This technology shouldn't just be in schools, but it should be in many places such as factories and offices. By using emmotion, we are communicating. I think every school should have this!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think many things contributing cyclists state end story First fact time He cycling June hot due summer Second cycling California warm even early And third traveling deserts So put together He cycling hot June day deserts California These things contributed characters state He went dead towns search water found old well pump extremely hot water tasted like battery acid He drank much water begining left spit toward end He lucky find fish camp middle nowhere found water The three things made drink much water first barely left enough", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit rough undergoing story cyclist going though rough climate terrain In story description like scorching path nothingness far human eyes could see In paragraph text says Wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I could die heatstroke empressed climate felt This explains heat felt experience This whole trip sounds suffering", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers don't have emotions, but you do! Imagine technology that seriously works for you, not only at home but also in the classroom! If technology could accurately read human facial expressions the learning possibilities could be endless. For example, think about that one story that you're forced to read that you just can't understand and brings out all your frustrations, with facial expression recognition you probably will never be so frustated again. The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom is unbelievably valuable.\n\nTechnology in the classroom has already begun to advance rapidly with educational websites such as ; Google Classroom, Edulastic, Khan Academy,and Mathia. The facial recognition technology could enhance a students comprehension to maximum potential. In the passage \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author states in paragraph 6 line 6,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr Huang predicts.\"then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\",this kind of technology can possibly boost testing score and even help children falling behind instead of holding them back another year. The text also states in paragraph 6 line 10 that ;\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communcation,\"notes Dr. Huang.\". This example actually explains alot of real world issues in the classroom, such as the fact that some students refuse to even try to communicate their confusion or boredom in the classroom so then they often disengage in the lesson and miss every part that would be essential to reaching standards created by the state.\n\nMany parents or administrators may not agree that this sounds real or possible, but the logic is right before our eyes. In the text the author states how the technology performs the task of reading emotional appeals. For example, in paragraph 3 line 1 the author says,\"The process begins when the com puter constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\". So apparently this process goes beyond just looking at the face,but actually looking for the movements in facial muscles. The author also talks about the muscles that present certain emotions such as the ; the muscles above your eyes (frontalis oars lateralis) raise when you're surprised,the muscles around your mouth (orbicularis oris) tightens your lips when you're angry, and more. This shows that the computer breaks facial expressions down to a science.\n\nSo now what do you think? Computers advance more and more everyday, however facial recognition may just be the beginning. Learning in classroom has become based on all technology in many different forms. Facial tachnology will broaden our horizons with better test scores and happier students that can understand the material evn better than before! The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in a classroom could be a life changing improvement in the 21st century since every student has different wants and needs as far their education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do I believe certain material books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive No book song magazine article movie offensive mean right take shelves Sure right remove book lot things going offend people Just someone comes across offensive book library nt mean go much work get removed shelf Its worth trouble book could simply look past look books If possible anyone take book shelf thought offensive would lot empy book stores Because face people offended easily something believe like religion made fun book read We get offended move find something different We forced read book listen song look magazine We choice choice move read look something different positive go process get removed taken shelf You never know someone else might think maybe article magazine benefitial relating So one person whole community problem book I see removing option", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "IIt is argued by many people that companies have necessary communal duties in addition to making a profit, while others claims that making profit is the fundamental aspect for them so they can focus only their gains.\r\n\nTo begin with, companies budget is restricted so they cannot allocate funds to social investments. To demonstrate, many firms prefer to invest their limited funds to infrastructures for their companies such as new production systems, education for their workers. In 2012, I worked in a company and this firm has a chance to construct a fitness centre for workers, these place probable increased labor’s motivations, while firm owner preferred to buy a new machine for production. Without doubt, this company was eager to allacote funds for public awareness due to this machine was capable for gain more income than personal’s motivation.\r\nIn addition, many companies are prone to social developments. To illustrates, if citizens adjusted better life conditions, they would want to new social opportunities. Without doubt, no firm does not jeopardize their system. According to Hans Brigel, a history professor at Cambridge University, Ottoman Empire’s economy system was collapsed due to globalization. As can be predicted, many labour heard new gadgets, high-quality fabric, especially coffee. Price of the coffee was excess to an Ottoman worker’s monthly salary so citizens wanted an improvement at their income. This improvements affected the budget of the government. Finally, Ottoman’s treasure went to the debt due to personal’s wages.\r\nFinally, some business is eager to allocate a budget for the public duty due to their marketing strategy. To demonstrate, these companies gain customers with their social investments. Kellogs, one of the biggest cereal producers in the world, they invest %20 of their income to UNICEF and Red Cross so they gained customer’s sympathies. As stated by an observation company that they observed 100.000 people who ate one cup of Kellogs cornflakes in their breakfast. Surprisingly, %70 of them preferred to Kellogs due to their social supports.\r\nIn conclusion, social awareness is not compulsory for firms, because paying their labour’s wage and making profits are their crucial duties so they cannot jeopardize their budget for the communities benefits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some futurists imagine a time in the future where nobody has cars. Everybody gets to where they need to be in self driving taxis. Now think, a car that can drive itself. That sounds absurd, unsafe, impossible. Well companies such as, Google, General Motors, and BMW, have been trying to make computer-driven cars since before 2000.\n\nIn my opinion, all of these companies are wasting their time. At this moment\n\ntraffic laws say the only safe car has a human, of age, driver controlling it. As a result states such as, California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia, oppose even testing computer-driven car. Computer-driven cars are going to have to be approved by all the states and state driving laws will have to be changed.\n\nAnother reason I believe we should not have driverless cars is because of all the time and money it is going to take. First of all engineers and futurists have this far. In the late 1950's, General Motors created a car that could run on a special track.The track was filled with electrical cables and wires that sent radio signals to a reciever on the car. Engineers later tried something similiar, they used magnets with alternating polarity. Which is sort of like under traffic lights. These roads worked pretty well, but they would require tons of upgrading to all existing roads, and is way too expensive, it is not even feesible.\n\nSince smart roads were out of the question engineers turned to smarter cars. To make cars smart enough to dive themselves they would need alot of sensors and computer hardware, video cameras, automotive radar sensors, and GPS recievers, embedded in the car itself. All of these sensors and automotive gadgets are going to be very costly and time consuming to install.\n\nIn 2013, BMW made a car that drives itself but has special touch sensor to make sure that the driver is still holding on to the steering wheel. The car can steer, accelerate, and brake itself but is designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skilld, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. So although the car is driving itself the driver must stay alert and be ready to take the wheel when needed.\n\nIf this is as far as technologuy has come who would want a driverless car thath still needs a driver? Why would one want to sit at the wheel and watch the car drive? Wouldn't that be boring? Some manufactures\n\nhope to make it fun by putting in, in-car entertainment and information systems. If you have a television, game system, computer, or whatever entertainment is provided for you, how are you going to be prepared to take over the car when needed? Nowadays it is illegal to even talk on the phone while driving much less watch a television show or play a video game. So \"in-car entertainment\" sounds completely unsafe to me. Therefore I do not think we should use all our time and money to create a driverless car when you can easily drive yourself and family where ever you want to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern era , news media play a pivotal role in human life,and there are several reasons why it is important. Hence, I strongly believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks.\r\n\r\nFirstly , news platforms assist the society to have more information about the world around them. To elaborate, details related to various topics can help a individual in their day today life such as watching a weather forecasts or business news can provide assistance to the personal growth . Therefore, vigiling those kinds of information , people can recognise various weather patterns or business tactics that they can utilise in their personal life . For example , most farmers in India start to harvest their crops by studying weather variation in atmosphere so that , they can get more yield from the cultivation.\r\n\r\nMoreover, it is obvious that news sites have a great beneficial influence in society . Today , people can use the news media for informing the problems that they confront in their life. Thereby, higher authorities can aware of the issues that the communities face in their life and eventually , provide nesscary assistance to the citizens. In addition , people can make use of news platforms for knowing different cultures and talents of individuals among various countries . It is apparent that many regions have various cultures and custums and those details can only be delivered through news sites . Thus , people can recognise those rituals of different lands , and Consequently become aware of these traditions . For instance, in India there is a show called Indian Ideals were different person's can showcase their talent and skills to the whole world.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is clear that news media 's are really important in each individual life because it provides acess to so many information to people . Therefore , I strongly assume that it has more advantages than disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe libraries types books music movies magazines I believe libraries limited things alot people would come library For example I wanted get certain book school library nt else I would go The library variety books point library Some books might explicit child read For music I think library limitedI think music limited alot music cursing I nt think everyone wants hear type music library I dont think person able listen music library anyways library suppose quiet But also people listen type music might disappointed Some music might bad chlidrens ears For movies I think age limited children Thats simple kids able watch kid movies Teenagers aloud watch kid movies teen movies Adults able watch movies That go For magazines types magazines They child adult different sections For example All children magazines go children books All adult magazines adult reading books Some magzines explicit library make sure magazines stay adult section Some books offensive books library provide books All kind books library matter opinion I ve never experience nasty explicit book So anything explicit keep adults section Every book library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author warm happy mood This talking love bonds family He also talking home house become home He also talks people grateful family friends All blends together form happy good warm mood story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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