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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology for a classroom full of students will not be valuable. Although it would be interesting to see what the students are feeling during a lesson. How is the data going to be of use in science? The students can express their feelings, but what are the researchers going to do with this information. This technology should be used, but not in the classroom.\n\nIf we do end up using the system to detect emotions where will the data go. It will help the video game industry with the evidence from paragraph 6 \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" Why only put this into a classroom put it into the robots we are building today so they seem more human-like, so they can become more advanced than a ordinary robot. The direction the researchers are taking are great, but the choice of where to put it needs to be different. Just putting it into a classroom would be a waste of time and money.\n\nThere is so much wasted potential if the system is put into a classroom.\n\nwe could use this technology for bigger and better things. For instance better facial recognition security systems so it can be more accurate reading faces and does not open or let in anyone that looks like the person. Or lock the person out of anything that is protected by facial recognition. Another example of how this could be useful in other ways is the facial recognition can be used in the police force to find a match of a person that was caught on camera to be tracked down and captured. The way that the researchers are using it for is inefficient and wasteful and should not be implemented in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that the Electoral College prosses is practical? Do you think that it is okay for someone else to vote for us? Well, I dont think that it is right, and there are some reasons I am about to tell you that may change your mind about the whole process of voteing and electing a president. Here are a few points I am going to cover in this essay about Electoral Colleges: over sixty percent of people do not agree with the electoral process, it it outdated and not accurate, also the electorers have proven to be untrustworthy in the past.\n\nMost people dont really understand what the Electoral College is, or what it is about, so let me just inform you about it a little. The Electoral College is a process that was established in the constitution and it is a strategy that we use to elect out presidents. The citizens vote for the president, but so the the electors in the Electoral College. There are over five hundred members of the Electoral College, and if a canadate wants to win presidency, he/she has to gain 270 of the Electoral College's votes. Each person running has a set of their own electors. Many people believe that this should not be used as a way to elect a president because in the past, the Electoral Collage made Gore loose the presidental election because although he had more popular votes than Goerge Bush, he has less electoral votes. Some people argue that the Electoral College is trustworthy, but how are my fellow Americans expected to trust a group of people who have betrayed us before?\n\nAnother reason why I dont think that we should keep the Electoral College is because so many people disagree with it. Everyone has their own reason for not liking it, but sixty percent of American voters agree that we should not have it and we need to find a new system for electing presidents. Most people lost repect for the Electoral College after what happened with Bush and Gore, but many people think that it is old and outdated, and that it doesn't really make any snese to use it and that it is irrational. I'm not saying that just because a lot of people don't like something, that we should change it, I'm just explaining that if only fourty percent of the nation agrees with something, then maybe the majority should win! Some people might say that the Electoral College was put in the consitution and that we should keep using the process because we've had it for so long, but with time, things change, and just because we've used something for a long time, doesn't mean we shouldn't upgrade.\n\nDon't you think that it is great to live in a free county where the citizens make the rules, and what is in the best interest of the people is what is taken into consideration more than what the government wants? Well, the Electoral College isn't what \"we the people\" want. We want to be able to choose who we elect, not another group of people. Some may argue that the electoral congress is good because if two canadates get the same amount of popular votes, the Electoral Congress acts as a tie breaker, but I'm sure that we can find a better way to break the tie than having untrustworthy people decide the fate of our homeland.\n\nThis is why I think that we should get rid of the Electoral Congress, too many people disagree with it, there are many flaws in the system and it is old and outdated. I hope that I have swayed your opinion and that you are part of the sixty percent of Americans who are hungry for change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays new digital technologies are spreading fast and making a significant impact on people. Every day we see how artificial intelligence is conquering the world. Many of us are afraid of the fact that in nearest future robots totally replace humanity in various types of work. I supposed that this might happen but not very soon and I would like to explain my point of view. \r\n\r\nStarting from the first industrial revolution people have been trying to make production easier and cheaper. Many centuries ago huge machines completely change the lives of millions of citizens and peasants. Today smart devices help to conduct different complex surgeries, protect scientists during dangerous nucleonic experiments and also do a lot of simple activities such as cooking or washing. Over the next few years, electronic gadgets will replace humans in many areas of hard and routine work. Someone will lose their job, but not everything is so sad for a person.\r\n\r\nArtificial intelligence will not be able to create real art like music, paintings, cinemas and so on, it won’t help to resolve mental problems and people's relationship issues. Robots will be faster and stronger than we but they will never learn to feel and to empathize. It means that humanity has a chance to tocontinue perform, dream and invent, generate ideas, which will be implemented by machines.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, technological progress cannot be stopped and we should not be afraid of it. The positive impact of using artificial intelligence will be incredible if people find ways to control and manage it. Nevertheless, there will be no rivalry between a human and a robot. Everyone will take their place in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator , i strongly believe in keeping the electoral college to be in chare of the way the elections would proceed instead of changing the outcome of elections to popular vote because voters may not believe in what the candidate's intentions for the people but may like the candidate, it is more organized , and the people would be pleased with the outcome.\n\nThe electoral college is a great way of proceeding with elections because changing the way our election system is to one of popularity voting would not be wise because voters may not believe in what the candidate's intentions are for the people but they may like the candidate. There is more of a certainty when the electoral college is in charge for example when Obama was running against Romney he only received 61.7% of the electoral vote compared to the 51.3% percent of the popular votes that have been casted for both him and Romney but because of the majority percentage of electoral votes that were casted in his favor.\n\nThe electoral college is more organized than a popular vote because if a voter has voted for example Obama for the electoral vote but voted for Romney for the popular vote it would be unorganized because of the split vote between popular and electoral which is recquired the majority of when in a public govermental election which could impact the whole future for the nation. The election for Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 they both had only a 43 percentage plurality of popular votes while also winning a majority in the electoral college which was (301 and 370 electoral votes) . When no candidate fully wins the majority of the votes that were casted they wouldn't have to recount the votes of have a re-election which would drain the economies money because of the high amount of money put into one election in the first place just to have another election, whereas the electoral college can just step in and rectify the situation just by producing a clear winner on their own instead of going through a long process just to find out who the clear winner is all they have to do is debate among themselves who they believe the people would be happy with in the long run .\n\nElectoral college is the best way because in the long run the people would be pleased with the outcome that they have voted for because if it was turned into a popular vote election people who voted for a specific president wouldn't have won just because they aren't popular amongst the people that are voters iin that year's election . However the popular vote election may also be a good idea because if the voters cast a vote for you in the popular election that should essentially like your intentions that would benefit the countries needs and demands that are recquired for us in the long run.\n\nTherefore the electoral college should stay in charge of all decsions having to do with the elections for new presidencey when the time time comes because if it was changed to popular vote people would vote for the candidate that they like the best instead of the candidate with the best intentions for the nation, it is considerably more organized than a popular vote election , and the people would be end up being pleased with the outcome in the long run.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus could be dangerous but curious. NASA is willing to build a spacecraft to see what Venus is like. Although the spacecraft has not gotten anything from Venus. NASA has failed many times so they have not sent a spacecraft in decades. And that is one of the things that makes Venus dangerous.\n\nVenus is like \"Earth's twin\" they say. It used to have oceans like Earth. They had mountains, valleys, and craters. Although, they do have some danger too. Venus also has a very high temperature that goes up to 170 degrees Fahrenheit. They also have dangerous earthquakes and storms. NASA has tried to get rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. But they have failed and it was too risky that could put danger in lifes. Although NASA is studying and researching more and more so we could see the life in Venus. Which hopefully one day we all would see.\n\nVenus is very similar to Earth but does has its danger. Maybe one day, we could see pictures or rock or sands or Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nMany people go back and forth whether or not to keep the Electoral College or switching to popular vote to decide on who our President of the United States will be. The Electoral College just isn't a fair way in deciding who the President will be. Just because that canident won the Electoral College and not the most popular vote out of the whole country, does not mean that should be President.\n\nThe picture provided in source 3 shows a map of the \"breakdown of the number of electoral votes given to each state.\" Throughout the map you can clearly see that each state does not have the same number of electoral votes as all the rest. When people go out to elect the President they have to understand that they might not be in control of that vote honestly counting. We basically aren't choosing the President we want. We are choosing the electors for that President who will be voting for you and the state. It's sad to see that even if a President does win the popular vote out of the whole country that they still, may not become President because of the Electroal College. It even says in source 2 paragraph 9 \"over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" If more people are against the Electoral College then there must be a change.\n\nAlong with people feeling as if their vote doesn't matter, there could be a \"disaster factor.\" A disaster factor is when you vote for the candidates electors that then go and vote for the President of the opposite that you wanted. Yes is happens \"rarely\" but it still has happened. It says in source 2 \"back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors withnew electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\" They were going to do this so that the popular vote whould not be counted for Kennedy. People have to keep in mind that if we vote for who we want as the President we are voting for electors that at any point in the election can change their mind and not vote for who you originally voted for. If electors do, do this then we have no control over it. It's like we've been told that our opinion doesn't matter or count in our country that is supposed to be free, we also have rights that prove our voice is allowed to be heard.\n\nOn the other hand like stated in source 3 people may argued that \"each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee\" but then it goes further on to say \"it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\" That statement proves that it is unfair and not right not just to the candidate but to the people who overall voted for them. It also says in source 3 that \"no region (Soth Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" But it sure does play a big role in deciding whether or not the President you want to win, will win or not. Also because of states being more popular than other states the Electoral College might as well say that those states are better than others, which is not true.\n\nOverall, the Electoral College voting method should be changed to popular vote. It will make people feel like their vote actually matters and by having a popular vote the voting throughout the whole country would be more accurate than the Electral College way. With the amount of electoral votes given to each state it isn't fair to say that each state is even. Also with the chance of a disaster factor happening, people would feel more comfortable with knowing once their vote is in it will stay that way and not be changed by something that they can't control, especially by someone else. Our voting method must change and change quick.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People talk about how driverless cars are going to help the future, and its going to keep reckless drivers from being in control. Now, if you think in some aspects technology today still has not ever ran right, so why try make something so advanced if we can't even get the little things down first.\n\nThe world now in days has come to a point where technology is doing everything for us, as we come to a point where we rely on our Phones and computers to do everything for us. Dont get me wrong, technology does have its advantages, it can show us things that we never were taught how to do and help us with our history, it does help with alot of things but is it not kinda sad that we rely on it now.\n\nI believe in some aspects that a car so advanced could decrease wrecks and reckless drivers, but if people now and days would straighten up and be the safe driver that they need to be then we wouldnt have to make a car so advanced to drive for us. Everyone is relying on their electronics to do everything for us now, but dont you think its kinda pety that we need technology to do things that we can literally do ourselves. They say in the passage that the smart car is going to need the passenger to take over on somethings, but is it not kinda scary knowing someday that technology isnt going to need our help and its going tobe doing everything for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of whether giving longer prison sentences lead to a decrease in the rate of crime or some other alternative solutions might be helpful to reduce the rate of crime. Although it depends on each country's crime rate and cost, I believe some alternative solutions will be realistic for reducing crime.\nFirst of all, some people believe giving a long sentence will be not only a safe solution, but also useful to pay an attention to other people not to commit a crime. They state that this is the best way in terms of cost, and the organization well systemized. They believe the crime rate will go down as a result.\nOn the other hand, some people oppose the system. The longer prison sentences have an influence to some extent. But for the victims and their families can not be convinced, and if alternative systems are well organized, some crimes might be prevented in advance. Therefore, it must be necessary to deploy the military or police in a specific area where crimes often occur. This is effective to inhibit the crime rate.\nFinally, crimes, criminals often sporadically emerge, even if the government stipulates the law which serves long prison sentences. This is ubiquitous around the world. Therefore, the most important point is how people need to become aware of dangerous situations and avoid not being involved. In addition, governments need to delegate stronger authority to the police and military to patrol around the specific area twenty-four seven, as comparatively higher crimes occur in the town. This might be costly, but it is worthwhile to configure a safe society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, robotic science has achieved several advancements in creating robots and becomes part of our society ,However some people consider that they are necessary for the development of the future of humanity, on the other, hand some part of society has negative views about it. This essay will discuss the views of both viewpoints of society.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, robots take up crucial functioning in many fields like medical, manufacturing, cinemas, packaging, space exploration, laboratory research and mass production of consumer and industrial goods which creates a better future for humans. Production cost is slashed with the inclusion of automatic and machine arms, as they reduced the requirement of labour in performing repetitive work for example assembling body parts of cars, assembling mobile parts, doing quality checks, etc. \r\n\r\nMoreover, critical surgeries which require precision and are vulnerable to human error like eye surgery, plastic surgery, and heart surgery seem realistic with the advancement of mechanical arms in medical science. Therefore they are able to serve our society in a better way for its future development.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, automation impacted adversely, as with the dependency on machines most of the production houses are adopting machines in place of humans for cost-cutting and to make cheaper consumer goods. Because of this most people are losing their jobs and becoming unemployed, which spread poverty and crime in society. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, robots play an important role in the areas of medicine and production ,However it has some adverse effect which needs to be controlled by the government by placing stringent rules on the use of automation in labour-influenced areas. Hence in my opinion they are undetachable arms for the growth of the human future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of facial recognition software in a classroom is valueable. The ability to calculate the students emotions could prevent them from being confused in the class, and so they don't drag behind is beneficial to the students. It would be used for calculating the facial expressions of the students in the classroom, and reading if they bored and confused with what the teacher is teaching, or if they find it fun and creative. With this, the computer could tell the teacher to modify their teaching to them, so the student can enjoy learning the lesson. However, every student is different. What some students find boring or confusing, others may find fun and creative. Not just that, different students learn at different rates. To fix this, the computer would have to modify the lesson just specifically for them, and change the learning style of the lesson to something they more prefer, without changing the lesson outright. This way, the student can understand the lesson, and doesn't fail the lesson and/or class. As well as that all the students can generally stay on track with the curriculum, and don't fall behind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience person patient wait thousand years answer Or heshe understanding problem stuck I always think saint patience deal wife children job time keep cool That amazing Patience person always need help give patience around I think patience calm doesnt lose temper helps need little boost patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author makes the claim that, although the conditions on the planet Venus are very hazardous and harsh compared to Earth's, which makes it harder to explore, Venus should still be explored and studied. I do not think that the author convincingly supports this argument in the reading.\n\nIn the fourth paragraph, the author states that because Venus might have once been like Earth, astronomers are fascinated with Venus and humans should use resources to explore it. However, the author makes this claim without supporting it with facts. The author also fails to provide an argument as to why we should not use resources to study Mars instead. Mars is also close to Earth, and might have also been more like Earth and supported Earth. However, Mars has a much more hospitable environment than Venus, so drones have already been sent to Mars, done research, and survived. The possibility of sending humans to Mars is also much more realistic and might be underway soon, because Mars doesn't have sulfuric acid clouds and 800 degree surface temperatures, as opposed to Venus. Mars does have its challenges, however these challenges are being researched and solved to possibly make Mars more inhabitable, and they have been for some time.\n\nAlthough Venus could be interesting to study, as anything is, we already have studied it in the ways we can, which is why we know what we know about it. We have explored it in the ways we currently can, and, based on the argument made in the passage, I do not think humans should use resources to further explore it, especially since we do not currently have realistic resources to do so, and the exploration of a more realistically studyable planet is already underway.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "this story is about cars and pollution and how much people get fined with even numbered license plates plates to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine of $31 and mobile world congress and improve safeties also a study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009 also other people havent bothered to get their licenses because either their lazy or just dont simply want to get their license i on the other hand do have my license also i am 16 years old and have to wait a year to be able to drive alone and that's if i pass the driver's exam wich im confident enough that i will but anyways back to the story demographic shifts in the driving population suggest that the trend may accelerate the drop percentage of 16- to 39-year-olds getting a license while older poeple are likely to retain their licenses as they age. Obama The President Of The United States gambitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse gas emissions , unveiled last week. The third straight year cars have been banned with onlly buses and taxis permitted for the day without cars in the capital city of 7 million. Also gas price has been lowered to an incredible price that everyone's pretty much satisfied you could say but theres always the people that complain because it is always like that theres ungrateful people and theres grateful people when other people can't afford gas money believe it or not i'd be surprised if they lowered grocery prices wich would be better for the country in my opinion it just makes everything better thank you for listening", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the integration of driverless cars into the current-day road system would only pose a threat to the majority of drivers. Incorporating a new form of transportation into a pre-existing form would only complicate the roads more than before. Cars have been around for roughly 100 years and society has adapted to this certain form of transportation that is used world-wide. Although driverless cars seems very advanced and the engineering involved in their production is beyond my imagination, driverless cars will have a negative effect on the current-day road system.\n\nBeing a teenager, I am approaching a new level of responsibility and encountering a world very foreign to me, driving. Having the ability to drive brings a whole new world of responsibility to teens all over the United States. Although there are many teen fatalities due to driving, I believe that driverless cars will not thoroughly incorporate the new level of responsibility that teens have as they approach legal driving age.\n\nAnother aspect of my argument pertains to the current driving and road laws. The reading states that a majority of the driving laws are focused on keeping drivers and their passengers aware that safety is achieved through alertness. Traffic laws are formed based on the idea that human drivers are in control at all times. Integrated driverless cars will interfere with the traffic and road laws that are in place today. If driverless cars became the popular form of transportation, would new traffic laws be incorporated to adjust to the new form transportation? Or since driverless cars are operated by computers, would there be the need for traffic laws at all?\n\nAlthough driverless cars could bring a very efficient form of transportation, they seem to add too much technology to a long-lasting form of transportation. Driverless cars will take away the aspect of great responsibility from teens and new drivers as a whole. And driverless cars will only complicate rules, laws, and regulations of our road system that have been in place for decades. Ultimately, how much are we as a human race willing to give up to technology?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard of the Seagoing Cowboys? Well if not then your in for a real treat, The Seagoing Cowboys travel across the ocean with animals of all kinds including cows, birds, horses, sheep, and even pigs! I think you should be a part of the Seagoing Cowboys, because of these reasons that i'm about to talk about in the passage.\n\nWe began bringing these animals and supllies to those in foreign countries after World War 2 because, after the war many cities and towns were left with nothing but rubble. So we brought the people of these towns animals for meat, and milk, and even just to have a friend. If you did join the Seagoing Cowboys, you would see more of the world than most other people, including China, Crete, Venice, and Europe.\n\nIf you choose to become a Seagoing Cowboy then there are still some things that you may need to know. The first thing is that some voyages can be hard and scary at times, but just as you keep your cool then you should be fine.\n\nSecond you must be able to get along with the others on board or else its not going to be the most fun adventure of your career.\n\nAlthough those are all fun things, some people would focus on the negative things about the Seagoing Cowboys. Such as you would have to leave your family in order to go to these foreign countries, But you are able to go back to them, and you have a choice of going back to them, or going on another expedition. Another thing these people may say is that the animals might have deseases and so you could get very sick, but the animals are vaccinated before going on the ship to these countries.\n\nYou have now seen what the Seagoing Cowboys truly are, I hope that you learned something about us in this passage, even if you don't become a part of the Seagoing Cowboys just know that we only try to help the victims of the war.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be a good and bad thing. It is a bad thing for many reasons. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisioneour future full of cars that do not need a driver as our public tranportation system. But what he doesn't realize is the problems that will arrive when the driverless cars arrive.\n\nSergey is right about one thing: \"...such cars will fundamentally change the world.\" The world will change in many ways. The new cars will take jobs from people, their independence, and it's overall not a safe environment.\n\nThe driverless cars will overpower regular cars today. No one will need regular cars so car dealerships won't sell cars therefore they will go out of business. Driverless cars will also take peoples independence away because getting a car is a big milestone in a teenagers life. And they will not have that peace that comes from having your own car. There will always be that robot controlling what you do.\n\nIt is also not a very safe environment becausse there is a big chance that the driverless cars can malfunction and not alert the driver of incoming problems. So in conclusion, driverless cars is a bad idea because it takes jobs and a sense of independence from people, and it is not safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel as if the technology is very adavnced to notice every kids face in a room. I believe it would work! If the technology can work on a masterpiece from centuries ago, why wouldn't it work on a couple of students?\n\nIn the text it says \" By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions\". A classroom full of kids is at the huighest, 31. I do believe that the technology can do just that. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\" A classroom has more than six people in it. So the technology is more than advanced.\n\nTo conclude, the FACS can notice every muscle in your face. The technology is so strong! \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" It can focus on all 25 to 30 children faces at once. The technology will work on the kids in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If there is one thing this country has, it is the will to always come up with new ideas to make objects better. In this case, it is to improve cars. Many people may believe that the idea of a \"self-driving car\" is insane, but I believe it is possible. Driverless cars are coming, and will be here sooner than we know it.\n\nDriverless cars look like any ordinary vehicle. What is on the inside of this car is what counts and makes this vehicle so special. The cofounder of Google, Sergey Brin, states, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" This is a wonderful concept when it comes to the struggle of finances and affording gas money. It is also healthy for the ecosystem. Since there is not a ton of fuel in use, the fumes that are let into the air are not as bad. These cars could change and are safe for the world.\n\nPeople around the world might be confused on what exactly a driverless car is; hence why they would be skeptical of this new idea. The driverless car has set out to be a car that takes over the resposibilities of the road for you. According to the prompt, \"Telsa has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" These promises to improve the cars will be a start to a better life.\n\nThere are many reasons and proof as to why this plan could actually work. \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating3-D model of the car's surroundings. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" According to this passage in the prompt, that has already been figured out. If there are skeptics about safety, it states, \"In the 1980's, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels int the creation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" All of the fears one may have with this new creation has already or is being worked out.\n\nDriverless cars are making progress and they are coming. There is still work to be done on this impressive idea, but that is why it was estimated for the future. With everything the companies have created so far, there is no doubt that they will accomplish this task in time. They are changing the world, taking one step at a time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology called Facial Action Coding System enables computures to identify human emotions. The process begins when the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face. The fourty-four muscles in the model must move like human muscels. Dr. Paul Eckman creator for FACS calculated the emotions of Mona Lisa. I do not believe that FACS is important for the students to learn about.\n\nThis technology is not important to what is going on to in the class room or in todays world. The students in highschool have other things they have to be getting ready for like graduation. There are standards into graduating on time or even early and I am sure learning how to caluclate emotions from a computer and pictures is not one of them. The technology is in the path of achievment if the activity is in a progam by its self and not in the high school or middle school. Some students are pushing the edge to gradutate as it is. This will be something they will want to do and they cant if they are behind in their classes. These students already have way more technology on their hands now adays than they should. The technology is upgrading each day. FACS is not something that would help someones career with in the futrue. School's should be about helping kids get ready for the future. They should not make everything the students be on the computers. Some people want to contain the knowledgement about the expresstions on other peoles faces than gradution than they should take a class about FACS out side of school. The kid in elementry are not going to know what paper and pencil's even are if we keep coming up this technologys like this that we dont really need. I would not want a computer telling people, or evem myself, what mood i am in. I know what mood I am in. I would not want my parents to know if I was mad because I would be mad at them and not want them to know. If people wanted you to know their feelings they will most likely tell you how they feel. The Facial Action Coding System is the waste of a schools money. The money that is put into the FACS is way more than a school could possibly They could use the money to fix something around the school. The FACS is just way out of hand.\n\nThe new technology called Facial Action Coding System enables computures to identify human emotions. The process begins when the computer contructs a 3-D computer model of the face. The fourty-four muscles in the model must move like human muscels. Dr. Paul Eckman creator for FACS calculated the emotions of Mona Lisa. I do not believe that FACS is important for the students to learn about. Students should focus on getting a diploma, rather than knowing someones emotions through a computer and picture.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opionion on Driverless Cars Are Coming is a goood idea because,when people are on the roads during traffic when they get off work most people are tired and trying to rush home.And sometimes people get in to car wrecks and they get injured real bad because sometimes they brakes won't work. And I think with this New Driverless Cars idea is good because the car is watching the driver and the car will not move if the driver is not paying attention on the roads and the Driverless cars has execellent brakes so if you murge in to traffic and another car was driving fast the car would stop.\n\nThe Driverless Car is also good for people when they are going out of town because there are a lot of people that get tired of driving and they want to go to sleep.The Driverless Car will take over and drive to your destination and the driverless car will also let you know when it is your turn to go back to driving .And the driverless cars also can drive without anyone being in there and they are really good on the road .And The Diverless cars are good because they don't take up a lot of gas and people would not have to worry about taxi's or city busses. And the driverless cars also have camera's in there so the car can se what you are doing at all times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unpaid society jobs should be mandatory for teenagers during their free hours to ensure both teenagers as well as communities are getting benefitted. I completely agree with the opinion as while doing so, these children will learn and gain invaluable experience, further, it will give them a sense of happiness and achievement by helping others.\r\n\r\nFirstly, learning starts at a very young age and if this can help and serve the nation that would be an achievement. Even though books gives them knowledge, they are not getting enough exposure to learn about society and its problem. While helping the needy, they will not only learn practical aspects of life at a very young age but also will give them real-world experience. For example, young kids give free classes to poor kids and help them to achieve success in life.\r\n\r\nSecondly, helping people in need gives young children a sense of achievement and happiness. Because these teenagers don't get opportunities in school, helping during community work will help them realize their good work. Since they are enthusiastic and fast learners, can be a good medium to share new technologies with older people. For ,instance young children help older ones learn new gadgets such as iPad or use an app on phones.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my view, although paid tasks can be lucrative, young ones should not be focussing on the money but rather the achievements and experience they can get while working free for community work. Schools, along with the support of parents should encourage these young generations to start helping the nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "FACS\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", Nick D'Alto goes into great depth about how a new computer system, Facial Action Coding Sytem, can revolutionize multiple industries. He began to describe the famous Mona Lisa drawing and how they were able to calculate her facial expressions with the new facial recognition system. He then broadens the topic by explaining how the computer system actually works. After going into even greater detail about the computer process, he begins to describe the many benefits that the Facial Action Coding System will bring. After reading this article, one can agree that the Facial Action Coding System should be implemented into classrooms to read student's emotional expressions for various reasons.\n\nFirst of all, the use of Facial Action Coding System could enhance the education levels being taught in classrooms by individually designing lessons for students. At one point in \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", Prof. Thomas Huang states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto 6). By modifying the lesson to the students' needs, this can improve testing scores in classrooms, ensuring that most students will easily learn more based on their facial expressions.\n\nSecondly, the Facial Action Coding System can help with discipline areas among schools. In the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", Prof. Thomas Huang explains how muscles contribute to a large portion of reading facial expressions. At one point he claims, \"To an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity aren't being truthful\" (D'Alto, 8). By pointing the idea out of spotting false facial expressions, the Facial Action Coding System can be used in schools and other places to help detect people who may be lying or trying to hide the truth. Instead of adults trying to pry kids open and \"spill the beans\", they can simply use the computer system to recognize certain facial expressions and then start from there.\n\nOverall, there are many benefits to the Facial Action Coding System, and although some may be more beneficial than others, they each take part in bettering academics and schools in general. By personalizing lessons and helping with disciplinary actions, schools can loosen their grips from a tight load of work on their shoulders and allow the Facial Action Coding System to \"lend a hand\". One can really see how incorporating this system will not only benefit the staff and faculty of schools, but also the many children striving for excellence in academics and character.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME from LOCATION_NAME. I wanted to adress the positivity in keeping the Electoral College. The Electoral College has a small chance of winning with a Electoral College vote than a popular vote. Every state is important because everyone's a president. Also, there are swing states which is a winner-takes-all method.\n\nThe Electoral College has a small chance of winning with a Electoral College vote than a popular vote. Although in 2000 the Electoral College vote happened it is very unlikely to occur. Reason is that the Electoral College exceeds the share of the popular vote. Even a slight chance of a state plurality could cause a landslide electoral-vote-victory.\n\nIn the Electoral College no region has enough Electoral votes to elect a president. This means that a region needs to influence another to have atleast a elected president. For example, Romney was a solid regional(South) which means he focused in one region not the others, concluding his lost. So, it was very likely that Romney would not win because of his appeal to one region.\n\nIn the winner-takes-all method in the Electoral College induces the candidates. This was seen in 2012's election. The ost thoughtful voteers would have to decide the election, making Electoral College very fair.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think fine people spend lot time computer instead time exercise enjoy nature interact family friends persons choice either stay computer day go outside Computers affect peoples lives good ways bad ways People stay inside day nothing besides sit click buttons Good ways educates many ways computer watching reading interesting things could end learning something learn school Its good go computer little bit day could exercise become lazy fat But go outside sometimes wont worry getting exercise helps body I think computers great way fun You chat friends webcam video chat friends A cmputer great way communication Millions people use computer working Without computers life would ten times harder people world People like accountants use computer job They store data computer remember things could nt write piece paper People also make websites internet help educate like type word could give definition People also make engines engines engine website searches things type type something get looking My whole point explaining peoples choice would like time Because computers internet connections ar nt free It nt even anything bad brain It mostly educates People even go school online learn study things internet Plus could get places working computers You could make programs anything would want So statement okay spend alot time computer instead exercizing going see friends family enjoy nature I think computers fine nt matter long depends learning playing games day lazy get fat", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There times life I really patient I remember I airport My parents I waiting terminal flight waiting minutes heard announcement CAPS gone wrong plane fixed hour eventually found back door slammed hard broke one parts They needed new part emergency slide would work An hour waiting sounded okay But another announcement Im sorry get part right away The wait minimum hours sounded worse I kept calm My mom well freaking Three hours passed four My laptop iPod ran power I fiddling fingers heard CAPS turns get part tomorrow morning big ughhh swept accrcoss terminal But luckily received free night hotel flight The wait exhausting patience got", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People think the face on Mars was created or a sign by the aliens. Well Im here to prove them that it was a natural landform. It couldn't have been created by aliens because NASA would have picked something up.\n\nMy first reason why the face was just a natural landform, is because in the text it states that '' The sensation was short lived. Scientists figuered it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia.'' Meaning that the face was just a natural landform created because they are common in that area.\n\nMy second reason why the face was just a natural landform, is because in the text it states that ''the team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing.... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.'' Meaning the face was just a natural landform and it had no connetion to aliens.\n\nMy third and final reason why the face was just a natural landform, is becuase in the text it states that '' What the picture actually shows it the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. It reminds me most of middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. Meaning that the face on Mars looks like landforms here on Earth.\n\nIn conclusion, the face was just a natural landform. The face was not made by aliens, it was just a natural landform, which are common in Cydonnia where the face appeared.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In life time oppinions topics problems world There question ponders mind Is censorship libraries problem right If parent I think I would able understand I mite want book removed shelf thing though unconstitutional That oppinion censorship libraries aloud When I twelve one time library I reading back book mom approached told book little graphic reading It Now I older I realize mom would nt want reading book like age That one reason I understand one would want book removed shelf book remind us never another world war I also think everyone right oppinion somthing done One thing I obserbed kids read bad things look bad things really big impact life future present That reason s self good explanation I think instead censoring books type boundaries posted types books read beyond certain age child wants read certain type book child must legal gurdian time With said I come I believe good idea done libraries I think book mite somthing little bit appropriate put section rated like movies If somthing little bit inappropriate language cursing books put section people age thirteen like movie Basically books put sections depending rated like movie If book rated must age seventeen read This idea could really good solution way books would removed also books kept harms way children Honestly I parent I would want children indulge reading books talk sex violence vulger also belief oppinion right able read see want On thing I think need think things done past huge benifits country Our four fathers one hundred years ago wrote document called This document amendments These amendments state right speak oppinions read want right live free life To remove books shelves unconstitutional I nt know I know people gone constituotion found great place world My basic belief remove book shelf impervise everyone happy If world would get harsh things books come solution There answer books burned master pieces Cencorship continue libraries wo nt books left", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable beacuse i don't think the technology can tell how someone is feelings 100 percent correct. Technology can't read humans minds nor humans face so i think the use of this technology is not valuable to read the emotional expressions of students. It won't be good for some people who want a private life feelings if the technology is showing how they feel every time they get happy or sad.\n\nTechnology are always not smart,technology can hurt humans too they're not always helpful. Just because you enjoy using it does'nt mean others do. I think that this technology to read emotional expressions of humans is bad to use well it's my oppion i don't know about others people but im pretty sure they'll agree with me.\n\nWhat if this technology brng harm to some people,its not a good idea to read people feelings some might like it but some might hate you. So i don't think this technology is valuable. It might be helpful to read students's emotional expressions but what if the students dont want that like they want they private feelings,they don't want to share with anyone only themself or maybe friends. Who want someone to going around and use technology to see what they feelings? Nobody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Globally, educating the younger generation is more significant as compared to an illiterate adult. While many people hold the view that the government should invest its resources in educating older people, I vehemently disagree with that position. This essay will discuss the benefits of investing in the education of the younger population and the demerits of prioritising educating the adult. \n\nFirstly, if the state directs its resources on the youths it will yield tremendous fruits. This is because, at this age, they can give their best output in terms of their studies. These younger folks are not distracted by family or job-related stress and they mostly do their best in order to succeed academically whilst the adult in most cases would be occupied with family issues and they tend not to concentrate on their studies. To illustrate, my dad went to school at age 40, by then, he had my elder sibling and I and I can reminiscence that he used to leave school to take me to the clinic whenever I was ill. However, I am of the opinion that authority spending its monies on adult schooling will be a detriment to its economy. \n\nMoreover, the youths find it easier to learn and comprehend new skills and ideas whilst it is difficult if not impossible for grown-ups to cope with learning as it is said, \"it is challenging for an old dog to be taught a new trick\". For instance, when I was in grade 5, I had a classmate who was 28 years old and could not memorise the multiplication from 2 to 12. In that regard, I strongly believe that government should not use its resources to educate the uneducated grown-ups but instead utilise them for the education of the young. \n\nIn conclusion, other jurisdictions prefer to empower their youths educationally than adults. Also, I do disagree with the views of several people that the government should embark on educating the adult. Despite there might be some truth in it, however, if the government did such a thing, in my estimation it will be a catastrophe for its nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone patient one time life I remember I every patient one day I ten year old It popcorn A small little popcorn cernal cought throught That aginizing day I patient One day two year ago I ten years old swallowed popcorn cernal going movie I remember eating one last piece popcorn popcorn box trowing box away Well right soon I walked door eaten popcorn peice start bother My mom I waked target nearby get supplies errands I started get really thirsty popcorn cernal I asked mom would buy drink thirsty said credit card That meant could things could buy pop I understood So I tried think This hard Soon pulled next mandd bank My mom needed get money pay tennis instructer I asked could please hurry popcorn cernal lack thirst hurting She said going fast could minutes away home I knew like fifteen minutes away I nt argue The cernal thirst starting get It felt like three hours fifteen minutes time finally got home I threw door open ran inside get water I ran opened fridge opened bottle water hugged whole thing Then I went outside help mom bring supplies things drank water smile In conclusion learnt patient sometimes I patient get home drink water I always patient pays I always happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe in the supernatural and in the paranormal. Others on the otherhand dont. Then there are people that believe in aliens and in various life forms on diffrent planets. If we ask the question \"Is there such thing as aliens and if so how do we know?\" In hollywood there has been many movies made about aleins and about other life forms in the galaxy (ET, the Men In Black series, and Indipendence Day). The reality is that we don't know if there are really aleins, we just have faith in the unknown.\n\nThe people that believe aliens exist had a feild day over the recent discovery by NASA in 1976-2001 by the Viking 1. The viking 1 found an astonishing rock form that took the shape of a humans face. the first thing most people said was, \"There is alein life on mars!\" These people could be right, we have been serching for dozens of years for other life foarms, and its the perfect time to find a breakthrough in science and in astronomy.\n\nTo others the belief of the face, found on mars, made by an alein is a hoax. It is just a story for the public to stay entertained. The face on the surface of mars is just a rock and it is made by natural movement under and on the surface of mars and not by a life form such as an alien. In the article\" Unmasking the Face on Mars\" the author says, \" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" The face in mars brings apn no new information to astronomy because there has not yet been any proof of any life on mars.\n\nThe faith we have in this \"mission\" is more faith than we have had regarding new creatures in the deapths of the sea. When we think of ailens we see big eyed weird headed creatures, but how do we know? The answer is that we dont. We have no assurence that there are aleins and they look and talk how we believe they do. There are manyh possibilitys on how landforms made the face such as the hardening of lava, tectonic plates, astroids or other rocks that entered Marses atmosphere,or it could have been made by the rotaion of mars .\n\nOver all the idea of aleins makes a good hollywood movie, but it doesn't make a good reality. As Mr. Garvin says, \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hight as the Face on Mars.\" Until the day we physicaly see another life form, we won't have any further helpful scientific discovery regarding aleins.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion driverless cars will be useful in the future. I think they will help out alot of people in the world. Driverless cars will change the world in so many ways. Im sure that if companies are thinking of making driverless cars, they will first will test them and make sure that they are safe to be on. Driverless cars should be made to help out the world.\n\nDriverless cars will be useful in the future, because lets just say your on your on a long road trip and your legs and arm get tired, well you wouldnt have to worry about anything because your car can drive on its own. Driverless cars can change the world by controlling the car, like incase you get tire or your falling asleep. There has been so many death and accidents over people being on their phones. People now and days wont let their phones down, well if you own a driverless car you can be on your phone and not worry about driving. Driverless cars will also change the world by using half the fuel that todays taxis and bus use. Many companies such as Google have test driverless cars and most likely wont release them until they are sure that they are safe to drive. When the driverless cars come out you should worry about them being unsafe because different companies that are planning to release a driverless car will test them before releasing them. In the passage i read that they have already created cars that can steer, accelerate,a nd even brake themselves well just think about if they could drive you to where ever you want amd you not having to drive. The driverless cars sound like they will be safe, in the passage it says that the car will tell you when the driver should take over, incase of a traffic jam or work zone area. In the passage its says that most states it is illegal to even test the driverless cars, I dont think that is right because how will they make them better or find out if they are safe if they cant even test them.\n\nIn my conclusion i will tell you thatDriverless cars hsould be made and make sure that they are safe to be on. And teh only way to find that out is to be allow to test them like in states thats illegal to. I told you why Driverless cars would change the world, not just helping people get around but actually helping out the world. I think Driverless cars should be made and i already told you my reason.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear,Senator Of Florida\n\nYou should keep the Electoral College because the founding fathers of the United States Of America established it when they made the constitiution. The Electoral College helps the selection of the electors where citizans of the United States Of America vote for presidant and vice president. You should also keep the electoral college because alot of people help with the Electoral College. If you the Senitor Of Florida take the Electoral College away 538 electors will lose there job and more. The president needs a majority of 270 electoral votes these votes come from the Electoral College.\n\nThe 23rd admendment of the Constitution the District Of Columbia is allowed to have 3 electors. These electors are treated liike a state for purposes of the electoral college. Each canadate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. If the Electoral College these people wouldent have their jobs. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. We the people of the UUnited states Of America help choose our states electors. After the presidential election our govener prepares a Certificate Of Ascertainment. This cerificate lists all of the canadates who ran for president.\n\nAt ther most basic level the Electoral College is unfair to voters because of the Winner take All syaytem in each state, because of this durning the 2000 campain seventeen states did not see there canadates at all. The Electoral College is outdated and unfair. It is also irrational.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers helped research I search many things help patient keep important information organized question leading doctor I agree say computers good use society today People already becoming lazy television You ca nt balme computers With websites people keep touch They make plans one another go walk park dancing These things keep people healthy active tiptop shape Computers help people keep contact others CAPS patients email schedule appointment let think something s wrong say s With computers email distant family friends learn problems quicker Most people tend pick phone someone calls crisis You also nt worry running phone bill chat bud instead using hours worth minutes You learn much information faster How feel one called told bestfriend died mom find reading newspaper You d extremely upset I know I email family stay touch old new friends So anything bad happens person nt know hoe tell could email It s much easier telling person theirmom died email phone To hear pain person s voice make want cry You feel pain So understand computers great benefit today s society You ca nt blame computer s people becoming lazy since television already If person want s lazy s decision shoul nt go around blaming pothers things one else s fault persons This great way keep contact s Plus think information learn Not family friends world Thank taking time read essay I hope see things way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers by giving us an idea of what NASA is working on to get around the danger, giving us reasons why Venus is a sister planet to the Earth, and by showing us some key items that we could research. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in density and size. It is often referred to as Earth's twin because of this. However, their are some dangers to eploring the planet more in depth.\n\nThe author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth today.\" The author put this piece of information in to show that we should do more research to show that life once exsisted on Venus. This planet could hold forms of life ,but we don't have any research to prove it. Going to Venus, depite the dangers, would give us more evidence or materials to prove that Venus is even more or less similar to Earth, This would also help us understand our solar system more as a whole.\n\nThe author states, \"NASA has one particuraly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" The author put this piece of infomation in to prove that NASA is trying to come up with possible solutions to explore Venus. However, they arent working out so well as a vehicle like this would prevent them from collecting any rocks or gases to bring back and research. Studying Venus could lead to an abundance of solar power and the radiation would be minimal.\n\nThe vehicle NASA is planning will not allow researchers to take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else or that matter. The author states, \"Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmoshpere, renddering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" This is to explain that the dangers of going to Venus far outweigh the saftey. There is lots of research to still be done on Venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers by giving us an idea of what NASA is working on to get around the danger, giving us reason why Venus is a sister planet to the Earth, and by showing us some key items that we could research. The author states, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" The author put that piece of information in to explain that the dangers are worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If a person has money, it does not mean that he is happy. Despite that economic of both developed and developing countries is growing. People from developed countries don not feel happy like they used to, whereas people from developing countries feel happier than they were ever before. Now I am going to outline why this phenomena happened and tell about the lesson that can be learned from it.\r\n\r\nIn the case of developed countries, people have never starving. Food was available and people could bought it whenever they wanted for relatively cheap price. Decades ago work was not as hard as it is now, moreover people could easily take a rest as they had a plenty of spared time. People took such good conditions for granted. Nowadays people who are getting richer do not feel happy as they supposed to do. This happens because of hard work and tough competition between people . Their ambitions that encourage them to pursue their goals do not allow them to take a rest and spend pleasure time with their friends and family.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand developing countries had never lived in good conditions. People usually had no money to buy food or another stuff. That conditions encouraged them to work harder. In the present days they become richer and consequently they can afford things that they could not in the past. That’s why they are getting happier.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I must say that we should appreciate what we have and spend more time with our family and friends. Also we ought to remember that someone never had a chance to make their life better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Safety prominent issue human lives risk idea likely successful Most foreign dirigibles contain hydrogen element highly flammable paragraph posed threat passengers people docking station well Another potential obstacle violent winds top building These winds would cause back dirigible blow around freely wind Even proposed solution weighing rear dirigible lead weights dangerous lead weights would left dangling high pedestrians paragraph A final obvious obstacle builders Empire State Building preexisting law prohibiting airships fly low urban areas paragraph Even safe docking station landing would illegal Although may seemed like feasible plan time idea dirigibles docking top Empire State building safe practical one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is thought that attending an educational institution or college is the optimal choice to succeed in a career path, whereas others believed that working immediately after leaving school is a better option. This essay will discuss both points of view.\n\nDue to some benefits, some students make up their minds to join the labour market after school. First, working helps them start earning money so that they can be financially independent and take care of their families. In fact, as some live in poor conditions, going to work when graduating high school is the sole way to cover daily expenditures. Second, having a job after leaving high school provides people with first-hand experiences. There are a number of learners who are not into academic learning. Therefore, they prefer to learn other skills such as beauty, online selling or sewing by starting to work. It proves that a lot of people without degrees are able to have successful careers. \n\nHowever, there are some advantages that graduates can gain when studying further at university or college. The first positive aspect is that students can have a chance to enhance their expertise. University equips students with the necessary knowledge and skills to perform well in their majors. The second good point is that degrees and certificates offer people a wide range of job opportunities with high salaries. Nowadays, the job market is very competitive and a lot of jobs require academic qualifications, so it is better to build a good profile. \n\nIn conclusion, university or college is a good option to climb the ladder in a career path. However, stopping studying further does not mean that people give up learning but they will obtain skills in other ways. Therefore, depending on each circumstance, individuals can decide their own future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now, for some people, cars are a way of life. Nothing pleases them more than the feeling of a stering wheel on their hands, or the growl of a healthy engine. Those people probably could never live without their cars, but you probably can. Well, maybe not living without cars entirely, but at least reducing your use of them. It'll be a lot safer for the environment, and it'll cause a lot less traffic jams. So let's see why you can go a few more days without your prized Hoda Civic.\n\nNow, you've probably had this fact jammed down your throat more times than you care to count, but, cars produce a lot of gas, which isn't really easy on the environment. According to the New York Times article, \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" And according to the Chicago Tribune article, \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" by Robert Duffer, \"Last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter.\" So, less car usage means less greenhouse emissions. Yes, there are cars out there that are more \"fuel-efficient,\" but they still require lots of energy from the environment. Not only that, but using your car less often will mean that you won't have to deal with one of the biggest evils in the world.........traffic.\n\nNow, think, when have you ever been stuck in traffic and actually enjoyed it? Now, if you were to ride a bicycle or take a subway, you wouldn't have to deal with that! Already, some cities around the world are finding alternative ways to avoid those jams. \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" by Andrew Selsky, tells of how the capital of Colombia is doing so. \"It has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths...Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaraunts and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" This means you'll be able to get to work or to that first date a lot quicker! Sure, people using less cars would strike a big blow in the automobile industry, but you don't neccesarily have to never drive a car again! What about on those long road trips, or when you have to carry a lot of passengers with you? A car would come in handy in such scenarios, but not neccesarily every scenario.\n\nIn summary, driving less would be more efficient because it means cleaner air and less highway congestion. So, after reading all of this information, do you think that you have what it takes to get from point A to point B without having to get into a driver's seat? can you take your hand off of the steering wheel long enough to open yourself up to other transportation options? Go ahead, try.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator, The Electoral College as controversial as it is can be a very simple choice to either keep it as it is, or to change the voting process to a popular vote process that in which the people vote directly for the President of their choosing. I believe that you should consider changing the Electoral College to a Popular vote voting process for reasons such as, the fact that only \"one half of Americans are voting\" because they do not believe that their vote will count in states such as California and Texas because the voters do not believe that the candidate will carry their state anywhere(In Defense of the Electoral College section 23). Another reason is because of the winner-take-all system the candidates will not campaign as much in states they think they will win over without going there and they focus on the \"swing states\" instead.\n\nSenator, one of the reasons that I believe you should consider changing to the Popular Vote process is because \"only one half of the eligible American population voted in the 2012 election\"(In Defense of the Electoral College section 23) for reasons I believe is that they do not think that the candidate running will go somewhere with their state and the fact that they do not think their votes will actually count towards the President that they would like to win. Also the fact that segreagationists will try and corrupt the voting process in the Electoral College, i. e. When John F. Kennedy was running for President segregationists tried to replace Democratic Electors with other electors to try and go against Kennedy therefore giving the opponent the upper hand(The Indefensible Electoral College Section 11).\n\nSenator, on the contrary I would understand why you would like to keep the Electoral College because of it being a set compromise that the founding fathers created, making voting equal by letting \"qualified citizens in congress\" have the last word into the decision (What is the Electoral College Section 1). In a way I see how you would think that the Electoral College is a fair system because the people are still choosing somewhat who the Electoral College elects and the fact that anachronism is a factor that plays into the Electoral College greatly(In Defense of the Electoral College Section 15). The Electors elected should be trusted truthful people and they are to vote for the nominee in honest fact of who got the most eelectoral votes(In Defense of the Electoral College Section 16) but sometimes even if the electoral votes are calculated and are higher the popular vote could be higher than the electoral vote even if its a rare occurance(In Defense of the Electoral College Section 16).\n\nSenator, as you see both sides of this controversy you could also see that the Winner-take-all method is all in all unfair. In the winner-take-all method the candidates that are in the election will take more time to go to the bigger states and try and have ads for their campaign posted in there and not in the littler states they believe they will win without campaigning there. The candidates will focus even more on the \"swing states\" because they believe they will have more luck in those states than the other smaller states. \"Seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't see a single campaign ad\"(What is wrong with the Electoral College Section 13) this fact goes to show that the candidates would rather focus more on the larger states and \"swing states\" than go to the smaller states; this makes those smaller states less encouraged to vote because the candidates don't even bother to come to them to campaign.\n\nSenator, in the end I strongly believe that you should think about changing the Electoral College to a Popular Vote process because it will give the voters an incentive for them to vote, for them to decide who wins and who will run their state or country. Power to the People has always been a great thought to keep running around in your brain for me. Before you discard my thoughts in a mere second think about it; would you like the people of your state to be unhappy with you and disappointed because they had no choice in what is happening around them? or would you like the people to be excited for the new changes in allowing them some freedom of choosing what they want and not what others want?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng dissappointed failing drivers test also upset missing home Vietnam Walking home spots little piece Vietnam right united states She buy beautiful winter hibiscus saebba remind past The end story combines two different countries cultures almost worlds life When says when come back referring geese To geese symbolize life life became accustom The hibiscus also symbol life It symbol life past VietnamIt brings back memories buying plant like getting little piece home When hibiscus budding attempt test When little piece home gets bigger try When stable culture get still firm grasp ready", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the recent times, we have seen a huge concern on towards the increase of wastage across the world. Some people, tend to believe that wastage and recycling of products should be taught to children at schools, whereas some believe a children need to be taught at home. In my essay I will share my views on both opinions. \nTo begin with, there are many advantages to teach the child the benefits of recycling and wastage at school. The school can add a course on wastage and recycling of products which, will help create awareness. When the child is made aware about the importance of recycling and avoiding wastage, they tend to become more cautious. In addition, the child also, learns from his surroundings, when he sees that his fellow students are taking steps to reduce wastage and recycle products, he will also get influenced and will engage in practising the same.\n\nOn the other hand, the parents also need to educate the child on the effects of the wastage of products. It can start with small steps, such as ensuring the child does not waste any food. The parent can also give responsibility to the child, where he would have to ensure that, the right products are disposed at the right bin.\nIn conclusion, it is important in todays world for the child to be aware of waste reduction and recycling of products. However, a joint effort needs to be made by the school and the parents in order to educate and make the child practice this in reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced problems attempting allow dirigibles dock The problem issue safety Most dirigibles using highly Flammable gases hydrogen This could detrimental problem dirigible ever caught fire New York s public Another problem working nature There violent air currents constantly shifting atop building causing back ships swivel around mooring mast The dirigibles could nt simply weighed back would safety hazard The last problem builders faced law At time existing law airships flying low cities To tie ship Empire State Building would considered illegal", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System or FACS seem to prove promising and useful, but the fact is, technology malfunctions. This system could work great, I truely belive that. It's a great idea and The people who came up with this idea are completely brilliant I'm sure, but this is too advanced and too new to be put in schools just yet. Plus why do we need it if peple read people just fine, if they care.\n\nI belive this is a great thing and that students would benefit from it. all of the facts seem to be pointing to a huge sign in my head that screams, \"This is useful!\" That part of me isn't wrong, by any means. and I belive this system, if it worked and worked well, could do great things for students of all ages.\n\nAnother part of me feels like it's too early on for it to be very successful. Technology malfuncions, and by that I mean technology malfunctions a lot. On top of that, people read people fine, if they care enough to. So, I can only wonder why do we need a computer to understand us when other we understand us?\n\nI still believe this is great and the minds who created and believe in it are great. But, like I said, I belive it's too early and\n\nI'm sure all of the kinks haven't been worked out completely. Why should we need technology to understand us if we understand eachother?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The develepment of driverless cars is a very unique and intresting topic. The driverlass cars would come with many pros,and cons. From making a living off of them to the cities and counties using them to benifit the citizens.\n\nMy belief among with many others is that as a country we do not need anymore reasons for us Americans to be lazy. Although I believe that there would be astonishing benifits with the Firefighters/Parametics using this equipment,there should also be limitations. \"There cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This show that there is obivisly some reliability behind these machines. The should be used for the elderly,wonded vetrans,and emergency response teams. Although they should not be used for just a lazy or overweight person that wants to take the easy way out. In my personal opinion,and assuming it is for the use of a healthy person they should not be allowed. The furthest it should go for the average person is as the car had its own little auto-pilot for long rides and so on.\n\nI would like to further research thses cars before I can give an educated opinion, but from what i have learned from this artice is that I am aginst Driverless cars. It will cause more trouble then helpfullness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can Driverless Cars Truly Be Driverless?\n\nDriverless cars throw people off because how could a car be driverless when the driver still has to be paying attention to the road? The driver has to be prepared at all times to be ready to take over the wheel. Drivers can not fully rely on driverless cars because drivers have to pay attention to the road at all times, drivers are trusting a computer with their life, and the dangers of bordem behind the wheel.\n\nDrivers have to pay attention to the road at all times, even if the \"driverless\" car is driving. The driverless car can not drive through work zones or around accidents, so the driver has to take control. The driver has to stay alert and ready for anything to come their way. The Google car announces when the driver should be ready to take control, but shouldn't a driverless car be able to drive on it's own? Eventhough the car can drive itself, the driver is still in position like they're going to drive too.\n\nDrivers are trusting a computer based opperator with their life. What if the car was to get in an accident? Whose fault would it be? Drivers can't fully trust a computer to drive their car because they computer could mess up, and could cause an accident. What if a kid were riding a bike, and were to suddenly fall into the street and the driverless car did not read it? That would cause a big uproar for driverless cars. They are not proven to be 100% safe for the world around us.\n\nThe dangers of bordem of not driving could be very serious as well. The driver has to pay attention to the road at all times, but they are not driving. This could cause serious bordem, and could lead to falling asleep behind the wheel. At least when driving is occoured the driver has something to do.\n\nNow a driverless car is not a bad idea. The text says that driverless cars use half the fuel that cars use today, and that driverless cars have driven half a million miles without a crash. Driverless cars could be the future, but there would still need to be a lot of work done to the cars to make sure they are completely safe for drivers. Instally cameras in the car would also help with teenagers, and some adults to not be behind the wheel on their phone, which could lead to less accidents. So, driverless cars are a good thing that could come into society.\n\nDriverless cars sound dangerous right now, but as technology advances, they could help in the future. As of right now, driverless cars not be fully relied on because drivers still have to pay attention to the road, computers can crash, and the dangers of falling asleep behind the wheel could be dangerous. Driverless cars are not ready to be on the roads yet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Lives mood portrayed cheerful warm happy The way author described home early years provided image large happy family throughout passage For example paragraph states Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This portrays image life author s home friendly loving Another example paragraph says countless extended family members came went often someone staying us temporarily able get back feet This means family close would always look eachother So conclusion mood memoir portrayed happy upbeat loving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars are that we should not trust them as much as they say we should. Regauredless what the compony says about the safty features , car do amd will always mess up in some way. Which will come to the point of who's fault was it in the first place. The compony not meeting thier standards or the buyer not watching the road.\n\nSome reasons a disagree with the driverless cars are because of the roads. Most roads these days are being redone or having construction builders on them all the time. As it says in paragraph 2 \"dealing with traffic issues, such as difficult roadwork or accidents caome be a complication for the car.\" These car will have no idea when a crash will occur and when it does happen will the driver be able to control the car in the small amount of time that it has to move? Knowing the driver of the car will be very important to have the car. Knowing how it works and all of the safty procations will have to be known imediately. The driver may rely to much on the car's safty and let it drive them. In my opinion the call will be asisting the driver not driving for it. Making sure the driver still keeps his hands on the wheel and taking proper precations will be very esintual\n\nfor the car.\n\nThe BMW that was announced in 2013 told the people what they wanted to here and told them the core standards of the vehical. Here is some details about the car, \"The car can handle speeds up to 25mph , with special touch sensors to make sure the drver keeps his/her hands on the wheel while in motion. When the car needs human asistance the seat will vibrate to get the drivers alertness to take over for navigatio.\" some of those features have been thought through, but it dosent mean they are 100% protective and safe.\n\nThese car's for the future are all around great ideas but they are not ready for drivers in this era. Too many careless drivers and wrecks happen to often , with \"robots\" driving would just be even more dangerous for the people around us and thier safty.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi name I writing article today talk things nt library There many many things nt exposed children sexcism racism rarted pornography So today tell things First books racist comments exposed young childrenWhy Because setting bad example might think say things thats book Another thing sex books I know read stories talks sex sorts things So sum nt allowed public libraries The second thing nt allowed public libraries movies Things horror movies porn many So young children exposed things damages mind young age It teaches things nt know get little bit older The last reason I feel many things nt libraries magazines Those magazines show everything type naked photos These really need exposed young children Our little girls think ok take naked photos post books internet So things banded libraries many different reasons So think I saying Just think children exposed innappropiate things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting make ride cyclist hard It lot hills would make use energy Also desert hot dry This makes author need water normally would The author said I traveling high deserts California June The author knew dangerous travel without water said I could drop heatstroke If setting cooler would much danger", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think University or College is one of the important sector for a student which help them to make their future bright while other believe that after finishing the school student should involve in work directly rather than going to university. This essay will discuss on both views and explain why university education plays a crucial role in achieving career goal rather than going for job after school level.\nIn one hand, studying at university will make learner more responsible as they become more mature after school life, which fascinate them to achieve their career goal. Furthermore, the student will get more opportunity to learn more about the subject in which they are keen. For instance, student who wants to persuade their career in the engineering field can learn more about the math and physics subject. Therefore, it will be easier for them to work practically if they have theoretical knowledge. Moreover, they will become more serious about their goal so for the successful life they will study hard. Hence, university study is importance for their goal achievement for prosperous and success career.\nIn other hand, many people believe that they should indulge in a fieldwork after finishing their school life. Many people think this because they believe it will aid younger people to learn practically. Moreover, they will earn money to feed themselves and the family burden can be decrease. Furthermore, they use to analyse theoretical study is not imperative if they got jog with good salary. For instance, a recent study concluded most of the people want their children to finish their school and search for employment to make them independent rather than admitting them in university.\nHowever, in mine opinion education always make humankind generous and successful. So more we study, we get more knowledge especially in case of children. If they choose college after school study, they can make a choice of the subject according to their interest and can motivated to grab more information in related field. Hence, they can easily achieve their goal if they do their further study in college.\nTo conclude, University degree is necessary for bright future, as children will get more chance to evaluate their interest. Therefore, it’s always the best idea to make them persuade to go to university rather than searching for job after completing school study for jolly and successful life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future of the world.\n\nThey undoubtedly will overall help the constant struggles drivers face in todays economy.\n\nDriverless cars would have a postive impact on the world like coping with chaotic gas prices, having advanced technology to travel places without the assistance from humans, and by having fun while also safe heads up displays for entertainment purposes to help cope with the stress of driving.\n\nThe increasing and decreasing of gas prices throughout the whole world is a rather chaotic and dissapointing time.\n\nMany people spend a lot of money on gas which sometimes is needed very frequently.\n\nWith the help of driverless cars, the conservation of fuel will save the average gas consumer money.\n\nDriverless cars are able to use considerably less fuel than taxis today.\n\nThis is one of the many solutions that society needs without having any other major changes occur.\n\nThere has been a major increase in sensors in todays cars.\n\nWith the updated sensors throughout the years, it has been easy for car companies to put that technology to use.\n\nMany cars have sensors embedded within them which can help alert the driver the possibility of danger.\n\nDriverless cars with updated sensory can allow the car to speed up or brake when needed, sense other cars and objects around it, and many other major increases in technology.\n\nWith the help of these sensors, the world is one step closer to having driverless cars.\n\nAll that is needed now is technology and sensors that can help detect construction and other interferences so that it is able to control and drive without the assistance of a human.\n\nLastly, watching movies, texting, talking on the phone, etc., have always been huge no no's while driving.\n\nWith driverless cars, there is a possibility of many different options with heads up display.\n\nMany manufacturers are beginning to look into heads up displays that can serve as entertainment systems or that will allow you to use your cellular device on, but automatically shuts off in the case of an emergency or when the driver needs to take over.\n\nThis major and otherwise impressive improvement to cars will help people deal with the increasing bordom that comes with driving.\n\nWith all of these changes and improvements in technology, it is easy to see the reality of driverless cars in the future.\n\nFirst, driverless cars will help with the insane gas prices that are in todays economy by taking half the gas that a normal car would normally need.\n\nSecond, with the improvement in technology, driverless cars will be able to go to and from places without the assistance of humans.\n\nLastly, the addition of heads up display entertainment and allowance of cell phones being shut down when assistance is needed from humans will help people to cope with the stress and bordom of driving and will also add safety to the equation which is most important.\n\nThese are all the more reasons why smart cars will have a positive impact on our society in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard about the \" Challenge of exploring Venus \"? Venus is the second planet in our solar system. Its often said that Venus is Earth's twin beacuse it's the closest plant to Earth. Venus has the hostest temperature of any planet. The author has given us an idea that has said \"that studying venus is a worthly pursuit despite the danger it presents\" the author well supported this idea by gives us infromation of the danger and study of venus .\n\nThe authors idea had talked about danger in venus. In the article it says \"Venus has the hottest suface tempertature off any planet in out solar system, even though Mercury is the closer to our sun\"( paragraph 3 ). This means that venus is stranger beacuse it is the hottest it not even the closest to our sun. In the article it also says\n\n\"Planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further vists to its suface?\"( paragraph 4 ). This means that scientists are trying to get human being to venus but they know that its way to hot to send people uo there. The article also says \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even mosre challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere.\"( paragraph 3 ). This means that there is a 97% carbon dixide layers and that the clouds are highly damange to human beings. All this information supports the authors idea of the dangers of having humans go to venus.\n\nThe author also talks about the study of venus. In the article its says \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administation(NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus\" ( paragraph 5 ). This means that NASA want to send humans to study venus . The article also says \" NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbon have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for 3 weeks in such conditons\" ( paragraph 7 ). This means that scientists are wanting to use old electronics to send them to venus and test them out to see if the old electronics can help the scientics get fast studies. The article says \" Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate whenit comes to extreme physical conditions.\" ( paragraph 7 ). This means that modern electronics have less abilitys then the old electronics and it they are more useful for venus.\n\nLearned about exporing venus now! Venus is dangeruos for human beings. Human being might last for a couple of mins but still wont survive . But scienitistis want to have a different option for human being to not go to nvenus and use old computers .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus\n\nVenus is the closest planet to us in our solar system, which means we should explore it. At least, that is what the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" believes. However, he does not support this claim very well as he gives only one vague reason to explore it, he names several dangers and obstacles of exploring it, and provides very few actual solutions.\n\nFirst of all, he does a good job of naming the several dangers and obstacles of exploring Venus such as the extreme atmosphiric pressure. The main problem though, is the temperature wich as the author states, \"average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,\" (Paragraph 3). This poses a problem as most metals and other materials melt at such high temperatures. However, the author fails to give very many solutions to these issues.\n\nThe author only provides two solutions to the numerous problems that he previously stated. Those solutions were to stay above the atmosphere where it is not as hot, and to create mechanical computers that were more reinforced. These solutions would be all well and good had he not brought up a problem with the first in which he states \"peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only little insight on ground conditions\" (Paragraph 6) thus, it is not a true solution to the problem at hand. But maybe there is good reasons to keep trying to come up with new ways to explore Venus.\n\nSadly, the author only provides one vague reason for which scientists should still try to come up with new ways to explore Venus. This reason of his is,\"It may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (Paragraph 4). The problem with this is that it does not go very deep into why it being similar to Earth matters. A scientist at NASA might understand any signifigance in that statement, but an average person might not. For that reason it is a very weak argument.\n\nIn short, The author does not support his idea for exploring Venus very well because he only gives one vague reason to explore it and he names several dangers and obstacles of exploring it while providing very few actual solutions. Had he named more solutions and reasons to explore Venus it would have supported his idea far more. He named too many dangers without ways to properly combat them, which is why the author's support for his claim was weak.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "recently, there are many developments things have been done in the structure sector because in some communities many individuals ask about the history of either houses or buildings. in this essay, I am going to answer the reason for these questions and the best approach to investigate and research.\r\n\r\nActually, there are many reasons that push people to be interested in their houses or buildings. first of all the most common reason is to check the infrastructure of the house because it is so important for people .For ,instance if someone decides to make some repairing operations in his house, the first thing he checks is the detail of the structure. Secondly, some folks prefer to know everything about their accommodation because it is considered a crucial thing in the buying if they decide to buy a house they prefer to know all things about that home.\r\n\r\nThere are many ways that individuals can research about the house and building. one of the most famous ways call the contractor who has made those houses or buildings because the contractors know all things that people are interested to know them. Although the straightforward method that asks neighbours of that house because they clearly know about anything which likes to ask.\r\n\r\noverall, there are many causes that lead people to research their accommodation firstly because they need to check the infrastructure. secondly, because it is so important in buying operations. ,also individuals can do this thing by calling the contractor or just asking neighbours about that structure.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would like you people out there to come and join our program the Seagoing Cowboys, I gunratee you will have a great time. We go to many different countries to have a amazing adventure and very wonderful time with friends or family. We nation named UNRRA your about to find out what is that Nation, that nations was make to help countries recover ther food supplie which was lost, and animals decreasing. Almost 44 nations come together to make that ONE nation.\n\nThis program is\n\nlife time decision you can't miss it for anything. If you like animals well you need to come on this trip we have animals on board with us to take them oversea, We have many unique animals on with us\n\nthe passage states that they are horses; young cows; mules; pigs, However we just don't leave them in the boat with no feed or water or shelter we help those animals we feed them everyday, We keep them clean and there living areas clean so they wont get ill or get any kind of disease to spend to the another animals.\n\nSo I want you to join our program why wouldn't you join so we can save those animals from\n\ngetting any diseases or dieing from hungrier, or thirst. We just not there for the animlas for the countries too, We go to many fun and exciting countries. Have you ever wanted to go to a countries so bad? Well we can take you there, too sight the Magnificent things in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper Are aware families ownership computer Maybe informed least half family issues related The issue bond computers possitive effect negetive effect mankind In opinion I feel invention taking negetive toll society I say nowadays inappropriate websites children veiw takes away time family But mainly recent issue Without doubt youngsters expertly website ll told maybe could find one accident Who knows All I know many count adult websites children ages log everyday This unacceptable person prohibited computers No responsible parent would caught dead year old adult website computers make harder parents With experience computers take away time I computer always never spent time She said day I peel bananas never got computer would right right Whenever brother I got computer ll stay day But every ve together much I feel computers negetive effect society recent I called office one day informed crew com befriended using boys girls drugs prostitution People take advantage computers end reading peoples infos This could prevented wasnt Now s chance I hope feel way comes negetives positives computers But remember computers keep websites nt good young kids takes away time family mainly recent issue", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear press I believe computers terrible impact society reason I believe true kids go braindead people call Also kids get obese witch already greatly growing process The last reason kids get bad eye sight The first reason I believe computers bad impact society kids sit eat computer get addiction keep getting fatter ar nt getting exercise This problem children getting fat already brought topic something like s going get better time soon Studies show kids computer hour half day actually going braindead This means becomes new trend kids next generation smart wo nt able keep countries fall behind something trend setting issue want country stay one piece The last least reason kids forming bad eye sight This also bad future generations If let catch generation need glasses almost like domino effect These reasons computers bad impact society kids get obese go braindead develop bad eye sight", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No one knows what the future holds and we never will.\n\nGoogle cofounder, Sergey Brin, has developed something that people have always wanted to, but have never accomplished.\n\nAccording to resources, Google has had cars that can drive independently, under specific conditions, since 2009.\n\nNow, in everyone's head is \"Oh I can fall asleep behind the wheel with no worries at all\", this is not true.\n\nEven though the car can drive itself it still gives the driver alerts to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\n\nSo with that being said, will driverless cars be around in the future?\n\nThis argumentative essay will be about the positive aspects of driverless cars because even though it has flaws, with the technology that is present today manufactuers will defientely find a way to fix every last one of them.\n\nAlmost everyday human beings come in contact with reckless drivers.\n\nReckless drivers are a danger to the rode, but what if sensors were put on cars to make them stop at the time they are suppose to.\n\nWell, senors back in the 1980s could probably never do that, but now in the present they are way more advanced than ever.\n\nSensors detect and respond to the danger of ridiculous skids or rollovers causin the sensors to apply brakes on the individual wheels of the car and reduce the power from the engine.\n\nThis will have a better response on things than a human being driver could do by themselves.\n\nSafety is defientely a big concern in this world so manufacturers do have to take extra precautions when making this product.\n\nThings are still be remanufactured as the days pass, but these driverless cars are not really driverless so to speak.\n\nDrivers will still have to pay attention to the road in case of any danger that the car can not simply do by itself.\n\nThe car does give signals like vibrating seats or annoucing over a speaker.\n\nThat might sound boring so Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW prohect manager driver, is trying to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\n\nSome manufacturers want to discuss possible car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\n\nThis would help with texting and driving, so with that being said this is actually a safety feature.\n\nPeople purchasing the driverless vehicles have many different questions, as expected, but with the amazing progress that manufacturers are having there will be none.\n\nEvery safety hazard is put into play with making this vehicle, even the enivornment.\n\nIf they can achieve all the needs of drivers then there will be less public transportation and instead a driverless car public transportation taxi system.\n\nGoogles cars have driven more than half a milion miles without a crash which means the accident rate would certainly decrease.\n\nWith the way everything is looking, as far as safety wise, driverless cars could be a possiblity in the future.\n\nTo conclude this argument on why the world should invest in driverless cars lets go back and look at all the positive aspects.\n\nFirst the sensors, then the dereasing of texting and driving rate, and last the enivornmental aspect of it all.\n\nAutomakers are continuing to solve some minor problems that occur over time as they test these babies out.\n\nIt is said that Tesla has projected a 2016 car release with the car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\n\nMercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to release cars by the year 2020.\n\nWill driverless cars make a huge sucess in the future and will they stay around if they do?\n\nWe have to see what the future holds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, as more consumer goods are manufactured, more damage has been inflicted on the environment. I will outline several reasons for this and put forward some measures to this issue.\n\nFirst of all, the increase in the production of consumer products harms the environment in two ways: the chemical by-products from the manufacturing process and the mass production of disposable goods. As more goods are produced, more toxic wastes and emissions are released from factories into nature. Water sources are contaminated, and the air is severely polluted, which results in the deaths of many marine and terrestrial animals. Also, to accommodate customers’ ever-increasing demands, more single-use products are introduced, most of which are non-biodegradable. Though having a short lifespan, these products can remain as wastes for thousands of years, turning our planet into a huge landfill and posing a threat to the living habitats of all creatures.\n\nActions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts on the environment arising from the increasing amount of consumer goods. First, companies should promote the use of eco-friendlier materials. For example, the giant coffee chain Starbucks has recently replaced plastic straws with reusable alternatives made of materials like paper or bamboo. In addition, many governments are also encouraging the development of more sustainable manufacturing processes. For instance, many states in the U.S offer tax breaks and incentives for businesses using renewable energy, and some firms are even allowed to purchase green energy at cheaper prices than traditional fossil fuels.\n\nIn conclusion, there are two main reasons why the environment is severely impacted by the increase in the production of consumer goods. To address this issue, governments and companies must join hands to make the production lines more environmentally friendly by switching to greener materials.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a new breakthrough in computer facial recognition software. This breakthrough is called the Facial Action Coding System, also known as the FACS. The FACS is a facial recongnition software that is used to determine someone or something's emotions. In the article, this software is used on the Mona Lisa, to determine that she is eighty-three percent happy, nine percent disgusted, six percent fearful, and two percent angry. Some people beleive that this software could be useful in classroms, and i agree to an extent. This software would not be as useful to students in a traditional brick and mortar school as it would to somebody taking an online schooling program. I am an online school sudent and the FACS could be helpful in several ways.\n\nThe first way that this software could be helpful to a student would be detecting if they are bored. Much like a teacher would, if this software noticed that a student was bored during class, it could take action to engage the student more. An example of this could be if a student was simply reading through a lesson, and became disinterested. The computer could then suggest that the student watch a video on the subject instead. This would bring the student a different type of lesson, and slightly change up their day to engage them more.\n\nAnother way that this software could be useful in an online schooling program is it could detect when its students were feeling frustrated. If a student is feeling frustrated, then the software could take action against that, having the student either take a break, or putting the student in contact with a teacher so that they could work through the subject together. This would help the program have a better graduation rate, as it would help struggling students.\n\nThe final way that the FACS could be useful is to detect if a given student was sad. There is a rising problem among students, and that problem is mental illness. The most common mental illness is depression, and this program could help with that on some cases. The FACS could help by detecting that the student is sad, and alerting the student's parents, or possibly even a teacher to get in contact with the student, and talk with them about their emotions. This system is obviously not perfect, but it could help detecting early signs of depression among students.\n\nOverall, the FACS could be very useful to an online schooling program. The software could be used to detect if a student is bored, if a student is frustrated, or even if a student was sad. These are all of the reasons that the FACS would be helpful in an online schooling program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine you are sitting at a computer in a dull classroom learning about something that you don't really care about. Boring, right? Don't you wish that the lesson would teach to you in a way that you would understand or would keep you interested? The use of a software like the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom could make that very thing possible. It could be a very valuable resource to students.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,\" predicts Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science. If the computer can tell when you are enjoying the lesson based on your facial expression, then it would be able to create more lessons like it. The use of a software like the Facial Action Coding System could make students excited to learn about the next math lesson or historical figure.\n\nYou could come to class excited for what that day will teach you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the use of technology is increasing dramatically. As a result, some people believe that it builds a huge gap between poor and rich class, however, others think that it removes the economic gap between these two different classes of the society. I agree with the former view because I think that new technical devices create a gap between people of the society.\nAlthough, both well-off and poor people are using new advanced techniques it makes a space among a group of people. Most of rich class people use advanced gadgets, luxury lifestyle, et cetera. They can easily afford these valuable items to live their life more convenient.. The use of modern technology facilitates moneyed persons to explore their business. For instance, many people promote their business on social media websites. This promotion facilitates them by increasing their customer volume.\n\nOn the other side, some people ponder that up to date technology assist many middle and poor class people to enter in richer class. There are plenty of sources with whom they can explore their talent and become a famous superstar. Many youngsters belong to the average class family are working on YouTube as a blogger and content writer together with they are earning a handsome income per month. Doubtless, modern devices help people by providing them a chance to earn money. Therefore, it aids to eliminate the cavity between both classes. \nTo conclude, undoubtedly, the use of technology is mushrooming and it becomes popular among people of every class. It is not true that the use advance devices make rich richer \nRather, this advancement abolishes the difference between people of the society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I we're to be for, or against this project, I would definitely be for it. In my opinion, self operating cars would be an amzing achievement for mankind. I would honestly be very cool too.Google company worker and founder of the Google Car project Sebastian Thrun says, \"There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting.\" So, just how driverless will the cars be in the near future? Here are some reasons as to why it would be a good idea....\n\nFirst, mankind would take a huge step in advancing our technology. For a car to drive itself, would be amazing and life changing. Not only would we achieve something so great, but something that would revolutionize technology and the world. There would be a lot less car accidents as well. Now, onto the safety of the driverless car...\n\nDriverless cars may not seem safe, but trust me, manufacturers work hard all day long to make sure these cars work properly and function normally. We already have cars that notify you when you're getting close to an object, or when you're about to hit something. It won't be very long until driverless cars are in full effect. According to the story, Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car than can drive on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan also plan to have cars tthat drive themselves by 2020.\n\nSo, to wrap things up, I personally think it would be a great idea. It would be a alot safer. It would cause less crashes. It would revolutionize technology and the world itself. Just thinking about it, it sounds like a really cool idea as well!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"face\" on Mars has become something of an controversy since an image of it was released back in 1976. The fact that people to this day believe it is still something created by ancient alien life bewilders NASA. Conspiracy theorists have concoted thousands of theories relating to NASA withholding information about extra-terrestrial life from the general public. None of which, have ever been proven, and/or ever had any solid evidence to back them up. Therefore, the face on mars is not the result of extra terrestrial life, but more of the result of hundreds of years of weathering and shaping.\n\nAs stated above, many conspiracy theorists believe that the \"face\" on Mars is the result of an utterly alien civilization. That is just not true. They accuse NASA of trying to hide it, yet, there is no evidence to support this. The discovery of an ancient alien civilization would greatly benefit NASA. The amount of funding and support they would recieve would be massive. Those within NASA's ranks that believe there is extra-terrestrial life out in space would have reached their lifelong goal of discovering it. There would be a huge incline of investors and programs willing to support and back-up NASA in all their endevours. Therefore, if NASA concluded that this \"face,\" was the creation of an ancient alien civilization, they would have no reason to put their finding out there into the public, without stating what they believed it truly is.\n\nAnother piece of evidence for the \"face\" just being a naturally formed feature, such as a butte or a mesa, is probably the most obvious fact. If NASA didn't want people to know about it, they would not have had it published for the general public's viewing. If NASA didn't want people to know that they had found evidence of an alien civilization, would they publish it and try to get people to believe that it was a natural formation? Of course not! It would have been a lot simpler to withhold the image and keep it secret rather than publish it. People make mistakes, but such a large government company such as NASA would have thought a little bit more before they published a picture they didn't want out there.\n\nFinally, the last piece of evidence is another obvious one. Back in the 1970's, we did not have the sort of technology we have nowadays. The cameras were not as sharp and nowhere near the amount of pixels today's photography equipment has. The \"face\" was photographed twice more after the original image surfaced in 1976. The first picture was very blurry and was the main reason that people belived it was that of an alien civilization. In the original photograph, each pixel spanned about 43 meters, versus 2001's 1.56 meters. The second picture taken was a lot less blurry, and was taken in 1998. It showed a lot more and a allowed for almost no question that it wasn't what NASA said it was. People were not convinced, due to the fact that it was taken during a cloudy season on Mars, and was said to have obscured markings that might have led to it being identified as alien. The last picture was taken in 2001. There is no question with this picture. It clearly shows a natural landform with no strange markings and/or features.\n\nThe face on mars is not the result of extra terrestrial life, but more of the result of hundreds of years of weathering and shaping. After years of doubt, it is quite obvious that Mars' \"face\" is simply a natural formation. It is time for conspiracy theorists to put to rest their old, worn out ideas in favor of noble pursuits that can be backed up by solid evidence and scientific fact. It turns out, Mars's \"face,\" is nothing more than it's butte.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Trying allow dirigibles dock Empire State building caused way many obsticals builders Dirigibles one thousand feet long would make realistically impossible dock size would add stress buildings frame builders would reconstruct make frame stronger Most non CAPS dirigibles filled hydrogen hellium I highly flamable cought fire pedestrians could seriously hurt Finding later existing law airships flying low would make illegal dirigible even fly near Empire State building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone patience Everone patience depend long patience short patience People always say Patience vertile need lot patience espacially grade teacher When get way teachers expect older kidsyoung adults well behaved Now job focus adults patience might highlong Like dad lawyer deals adults patience close mom My mom still deals adults grew four brothers oldest My dad expects people time within couple minutes When ever I say come pick mat seven oclock seven oclock Now mom comes picks I say seven oclock maybe ten minutes either way That story people I know Patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Newspapers have a huge impact on people's beliefs and the way they perceive things. In my opinion, this phenomenon is a positive one because it enlightens individuals with happenings around and the globe and at the same time educates the public with authentic information and opportunities.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the newspaper is a medium through which people can get acquainted with adequate knowledge of what goes around. Similar to televsion, radio, and the internet, the newspaper is another effective media platform that carries informative news about current happenings locally and internationally, which can broaden readers' visions and open their minds. In addition, the newspaper is beneficial to people who do not have access to other media platforms and can make them equally informed as others. Specifically, people from underdeveloped countries or rural areas where there is a constant interrupting power or internet supply can rely on newspapers as a source of information of ongoing pandemic.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people can be educated and benefit through newspapers since the material is very reliable. Different from all kinds of posts, videos, and advertisements that pop up on the screen, information from newspapers are more authentic and appropriate since it can be sourced from a specific writer. It is unnecessary to worry about children being misdirected by inappropriate content or elders being deceived by fake posts from newspapers since the authorized publishers are more trustworthy. Moreover, great jobs and scholarships advertised in newspapers can provide people with better career prospects and education opportunities, which can greatly improve readers' lives.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is doubt that newspapers can bring enormous positive impacts on humans, as they can widen people's perspectives and spread great opportunities with credible materials.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie describes trying biking trip California In essay describes weather I traveling high deserts California June While directly characterice weather reader confin clear image sweltering heat desert summer When author comes across ghost town followed dilapidated shack finally sign read Rough Road Ahead hope finding Yosemite Park gone The hopelessness situation made author want give thinking going die desert dehydration exhaustion This related anyone lost unfavorable conditions feeling helplessness fear goes along It feels like everything nothing working favor author experiences description trip Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It takes patience hunting After deer seasons patience paryed I using bow ran point walked He yards stand I called closer Then yards stand I took shot buckled minutes I waited find felt like life time Then I got stand ran yards droped When I got I excited nt point point back Do remember use regin blood head patient could shoot deer lifetime", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I come attention many us disagree weather computers negative positive effect people I believe computers benefit society Many people today s modern world spend way much time computer could exercising spending time family friends enjoying nature Read I sure agree First computers becoming problem society interfear physical well The continuingly growing Not population size people According recent survey every people overweight obease The main culprit percent obeasity eating actually electronics Especially things like computers said surgean dealing severe case obesity Obesity hard thing get rid All instead sitting hours staring screen America needs get outside It simple riding bike taking dog walk Whatever get computer go outside gym exercise Secondly computers interfere family friends I know personal experience parents hate kids miss family dinner wo nt go friends need finish next level game need look something internet Family friends important thing life unfortunatly people Psycologist discovered overall family friends count beside make much happier enjoyable person eliminating computers lives create happy pleasent society people Doing everyone favor Furthermore cut back hours computer better chance expeirence wonder s mother nature offer us Most people nt realize much missing going outside There amazing things right backyard probably never get expeirience addicted playing computer years ago people able function fine computers able people never even camping So next time feel like spending another hours computer take walk I m sure amazed find outdoors In conclusion computers benefit society They keep people away going outside enjoying nature spending time family friends I hope I convinced see side argument thank time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mister Norton\r\n\r\n I have visited your courses since my teen years.They have improved my Spanish skills and have assisted me in my knowledge-hunting.However,as you know currently I am working as a cook in the \"High Street\" cafe.Firstly,I had a flexible timetable,but now the cafe is the lake of staff,hence to this I have to change my shifts.Due to,this I can't carry on your course anymore.However,the staff manager told me that in the next 2,months they will be searching for new members for our cafe.Perhaps,in the nearest,future I will be able to continue my studying.I have no clue if I can pause my studying and continue it for some months or if I must start applying next semester,but if you can provide me with such a useful opportunity it is going to be perfect. \r\n\r\n Hope you got me right,hope we will find the right way to deal with this problem. \r\n\r\n Sincerely,Andrew", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.so therefore the author was saying its not going to easy by saying despite the dangers.The study of venus is a worthy study because you'll learn things you never knew like venus is referred as earth's twin,venus is also the closest planet to earth.In terms of density and size besides mars.venus has a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide which blankets venus.Venus also has challeging weather like clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid.\n\nOn venus the planets surface tempertures average anywhere from 800 degrees and up fahrenheit.The type of atmosphere the planet have's its not very suitable for spacecraft's to stay for no more than a few hours.That's why the author stated that is has dangers but its very interesting.The conditons that are on venus is far too extreme than any humans encounter on earth.So if can infer that if astronaunts went to venus they wouldn't probaly survive for long.\n\nI don't understand why the scientist keep discussing further visits to venus surface either.Because venus is a so custom planet but like the author states in the passage.Venus is so fascinating to astronomers because it is the most earth like planet in our solar system.The author believes long ago venus probably was covered largely with oceans and could've had supported various forms of life just like earth.I can't really agree on that with the author because of the facts stated about venus.\n\nI think that the national aeronautics and space administration aka (nasa) should overly think about sending astronauts to study venus on a blimp-like vehicles hovering.Around venus because even if all the math and calculations are right you have to think.If the astronaunt scientist can survive more than a hour or 2 will have enough time to get information about the planet.I don't quite think its a good idea cause of what if some exrosion or anything happen.while astronaunt scientist are there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I wait waiting room I got broken foot I waiting hour half It really boring everybody got go front us Sometimes hard patient mom I sat chairs hour half Finally nurse said CAPS I went wait doctor come took like good twenty minutes And doctor wanted know I broke foot So wait nurse come back put cast And also took long time first put like five layers cloth put like two layers cast thing I wait dry So patients hard sometimes everybody patients", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that we shoud include this type of technology into the classrooms. So that this way we could know what a student is thinking about the subject he is learning. If he/she is bored the teacher can maybe think of a way to make the class a bit more fun or entertaining in a way. The text states \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This type of technology could also help with class debates were the teacher says something like who ever wants pizza raise your hand and who ever wants salad raise your hand. Which ever one gets the most votes is what we will eat. And some where between the kid some one might say make sure to vote for pizza or else were not friends anymore and with the machine we could detect if a kid is truthful to what they voted for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sports are one of the well-known and suggested activities for teenagers as they are able to develop their physical and build interpersonal ingenuity. A number of people believe that students could positively gain teamwork accomplishment from pastime. On the other hand, intense athletics ought to be limited to some of them, and cooperating dexterity is able to be learned through other activities. To summarize, the essay will demonstrate the three reasons why athletics is not only the best option.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, team sports should be considered as an option in the school curriculum since it is suitable for a number of students. A large number of people have the limitation including health issues. They, consequently, are not able to join in the games with a high level of intensity. Also, they would rather prefer to do other pastimes than physical exercises such as conducting general research or building business plans. This could also support their learning process skills and work as a team. Accordingly, this is why schools should provide various choices for their learners due to the encouragement of diversity.\r\n\r\nSecondly, gaining teamwork prowess from athletics requires the right guidance from mentors to avoid negativity and violation among young adults. As the competition will be participated by adolescents, their mentality and thinking processes might not be fully developed and sufficiently mature. They might end up fighting or cause adverse emotions in the competition. The trainers, therefore, might ought to strictly monitor and provide suggestions to the players to deal with tension.\r\n\r\nIn summary, sports are one of the proper methods for practising collaboration with budding youth, but they should be optional rather than compulsory. In my advice, there are numerous ideas supporting the sets of required artistry for young people, so the schools should continue finding the best ways to develop the learners' capability.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the next representation of the future. With the new and improved technology, 'hands free' cars are the latest, and greatest inventions. Hands free cars can navigate themselves through almost any obsticale, and by 2016, some cars will be \"capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time\"\n\nThe idea of technology driving itself, is a debatable topic. Is it safe? Am I in danger? The questions are endless, but in my opinion, this car is a major improvement in the car industry.\n\nHow can this car navigate itself and not crash? The answer is simple, sensors. Their sensors are located around a large portion of the car, and some sensors are capable of spinning all the way around to get a three hundred-sixty degree angle. For example, the text states, If the car is in danger, the sensors will quickly send the car the information of it's surrondings and depending on the situation, it will apply the breaks on certains wheels, and reduce the power of the engine.\n\nThe \"driverless car\" can steer, break and acclerate by themselves. The car itselfs, will alert the driver when they need to apply human skills. For example, when driving down an interstate, you suddenly come upon a crach scene. The scene backs up traffic for a total of two hours. The car will then alert the driver, they need to take over due to the clustration the accident has caused, and the moving the car needs to do.\n\nThe problems automakers are currently facing, are believed to be solved shortly. The car itselfs, has \"driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" I believe this car is safe, and an improvement in the car industry. It offers many opportunities, and can go far in the field of automotives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely known that one of the most important modern science inventions is robotic system. In spite of its popularity, some people strongly believe that use of robots may have some negative effects on humanity in the future. In my way of thinking, it is the best thing that scientists have ever invented and there are no certain doubts that it will be one of the most crucial things in every industry. So, in this essay, I am going to prove my viewpoint with several arguments.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is necessary to understand that some field, such as mining or car producing are so dangerous for workers. For example, according to statistics, there are about 100 catastrophes in mining sector annually lead to the human’s deaths. As a result, a lot of companies all over the world have begun to use smart machines to reduce the number of dangerous situations during the working process. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, one of the possible reasons to scared is too smart AI system. Some part of society believes that in the near future robots would become uncontrolled and would become an enemy for humanity. Nevertheless, modern scientists consider that it is utterly unrealistic way, due to the fact that people mostly are so careful, especially in these field. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that it is very important to use new technologies. However, under no circumstances, should people expect that everything would be all right and do not use all the possible ways to protect themselves from the unexpected future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Occupations will be done by machines such as Artificially intelligent robots in the future. It is possible that unskilled jobs may finally be done by robots, while some other jobs which require expertise and experience will be taken over by individuals. This essay shall discuss why some jobs are going to rely on humans rather than robots. \n\nRobots may eventually substitute all human labour that does not need any talent or complex human skills. Numerous companies will be addicted to intelligent robots because not only can robots be significantly beneficial in terms of finances, but also time-consuming. In supermarkets, for instance, countless cashiers have been replaced by automated systems that cost enormously less than employees and it works much quicker than humans without being exhausted. Besides, these devices require no vacation and most importantly no holiday pay. For these reasons, machines and intelligent robots will be involved in people's lives more frequently in the future.\n\n\nOn the other hand, some specific workforces cannot be replaced because technology and machines will never achieve the capacity to do them since they require 'human touch'. For instance, psychology, medicine, and education will need the expertise and study. Robots will never be able to achieve what has taken thousands of years of study, research and experiment from explorers and experts who sacrificed their lives in the battle of science.\n\n\nTo sum up, it appears to be that infinite menial jobs will be taken by robots. However, sophisticated jobs that require human skills, experience and science will always exist. Ultimately, I am inclined to believe that jobs that are expertly done by humans may not be correctly done by machines.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Society has given a lot of things to humankind; it is our moral responsibility to give back to it. However, there is a bunch of groups who think youth should spend their leisure time working for society without getting paid. My opinion doesn’t stand with this. In the forthcoming paragraphs, One is going to discuss both views and evolve a conclusion from them.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, Many elderly people are living on their own. Due to some unavoidable circumstances, be it education or career, the kids have to move out of the house and the parents become helpless. There are many times when they need some helping hand. For example, buying medicine or helping them buy groceries for them. At such time, These volunteers can be like boons to them. It gives volunteers an opportunity to work for society and at the same time, the aged people can save their pension money.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, Every small work done by the youth for society should be acknowledged moreover, if the acknowledgment is being given in terms of remuneration then it can motivate teenage. For instance, If a teenager spends their weekends working for some needy people and if they are getting paid for the same then they can use that fund to purchase books or even to pursue some skills or course. Secondly, This also helps them develop a sense of responsibility, and the learnings from it can be used in their life\r\n\r\nTo conclude, Every small piece of work should be appreciated. How will you feel if you spend an entire day at the office without getting paid? Similarly, If teenagers are contributing to society then they should get paid. In my opinion, small gestures can motivate other hundreds of other teenagers too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I want to change the election by popular votes instead of the Electoral College because even if the president gets popular votes, it wouldn't matter anyway. They will have to vote the president by using the Electoral College. It wouldn't be fair because \"Most states have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.\" That means if the president gets the most popular votes, it won't matter.\n\nBack then, presidents wouldn't accept the Electoral College. \"What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college!\" They all thought that it wouldn't be fair if the popular votes wouldn't count and the Electoral College has its defenders. The thing that's wrong with the Electoral College is because \"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" So if someone were to vote for a president, they would be voting for a slate of the 34 Democratic electors. After that, they pledged it on the president that they voted for.\n\n\"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.\" It's because of the winner-take-all system that happens also on each state. So candidates think they know they aren't going to win and never spend time on other states as well. People also think that the Electoral College is unfair because they never get to see the candidates and they won't know who they're going to vote. People only relied on Bob Dole. His goal was to \"Abolish the electoral college!\"\n\nWhen people also vote for a presdential canidate they actually vote for the slate of electors. Which was why Gore had more popular votes than Bush, yet he had fewer electoral votes. But there is one way to settle a dispute of the outcome of an Electoral College vote. \"it happened in 2000-but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote.\" The Electoral College also has a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal but has enough electoral votes to vote for president.\n\nSo now we all know how the Electoral College is unfair. Because of the constant votes that don't matter at all yet they always make sure to vote that president and all of the popular votes wouldn't matter. That's why I want to change to popular votes than the Electoral College does. All we need to do is work together to over come the Electoral College so the votes can be fair and we would want to vote for the president that we want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I agree computers benefits society The computers positive effect people like handeye coordination I helps learn country religios thing You communicate meet people chat tru computers Another positive fact computer find information need fast In words computer help lot people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that you guys should all become a Seagoiing Cowboy with me so than we can adventure the world and ride the waves together.\n\nThis will make it a lot easier to do the job as a Seagoing Cowboy. We will be able to ride the waves together. And have more time to play around and have fun because the job will get done faster then if I am by myself.\n\nAlso I think you should join the program because we can experience the world together and learn new things about being a Seagoing Cowby and new ways to make the job go by faster and so we can have more fun. Then after we find out more ways to do the jobwe can explore the ocean on our way to our destination. There is kinda some flaws because it will almost always smell pretty bad and some days it will take a long time to get the job done. But on the other hand it will be full of fun adventures a long the way with a lot of fun times coming right our way.\n\nThese are all the reasons why I think all of you should become a Seagoing Cowboy. It is also for boys and girls so anyone can come and work with me because the more the better and faster the job will be done.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are lots of unpaid tasks in every society which must have done, and who is better to do this kind of work except students who have more free time. This can be useful for them and their community at the same time. This is a belief among a part of people and I fully support this idea, so, in this essay, I will extend my point of view on this issue briefly.\r\n\r\nIt is clear to everyone that youths are the backbone of all societies. This means, it is obvious that they have to become ready for their future life as a responsible and reliable person, because living after childhood and teenager-hood is totally different and serious, therefore, it cannot happen unless we let them experience some social work and learn array range of things from it. These types of activities can help them to learn how they have to work together. For instance, painting their schools as volunteer work is not something that they can do individually, so, cooperating will be learnt to them in this way. On the other hand, a myriad range of children spends most of their leisure time playing video games instead of having friends, hence, they suffer from their ability to communicate and make friends. But, when they try to start doing this unpaid community work, they find a chance to make new friends and improve this skill within themselves.\r\n\r\nOn the other side of this equation are governments and their usual financial problems, and this is one of the things that we always witness in their whining. If they do not need to dedicate any money to some of the work in a country, it could help them to use that money for some more essential social services. As an example, if teenagers take part in cleaning their neighbourhood, the government would use their human source for other work and they can also save lots of money from wasting. Moreover, there are some works in approximately all societies which are low paid and none of the adults accepts to do them, nevertheless, they are vital to be done. In this situation, adolescents could help their country, and in this way, both sides would achieve advantages from it.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it would be great if teenagers use their spare time to help their society by doing voluntary work, and I believe it has plenty of benefits for both sides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding is a goof thing to have because then people could be able to tell if your having a bad day or if everything is okay. Now the coding of the Mona Lisa is a cool thing to read but the coding can happen to real life people. The doctors in this story pay attention to evry little aspect of the face and can tell right away if you mad, happy, sad, and/or disgusted.\n\nIf we used this technology to read students emotional expressions it would be easier to talk to people about them and why they occur. For instance, the Mona Lisa is a wonderful picture but all the emotions that she had are what make it so famous. If someone could have talked to her or helped her with anything then maybe this would have been a regular picture that nobody would have seen intersting. The science it takes to discover a facial expression is a lot. To discover expressions it take a mopdified PC and some humans to help along the way. In paragrpah 7, the author explains that no regualr PC can handle the complex algoroithams used to decode emotions. Ways that the humans help the computer is by looking for the easy emotions that we see everyday. The scientist also give a test to the reader to see if they got what it takes to decode themsleves. The simple steps that the author gives away are the steps the Doctors used to decode Mona Lisa. If the scientist could decode the Mona Lisa then they should be able to decode actual human emotions.\n\nWhen scientists recommend to put a smile on your face, then do it because it really lightens up the mood and makes yourself feel better and not be down on yourself. Actors put on such a good show because they put a smile on there face for they make themselves get sad or mad. But the Facial Action Decoding System should be used to help decode human emotions because people do not like to talk about thing, if the decoding actually helped us humans, then maybe we could live a nice calm life and talk things out with eachother.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertising and its influences have long been a topic of numerous debates, especially in recent years. In this regard, some people argue that the impact of advertisements on shoppers is neglectable. However, in contrast, the majority number of people including me hold the view that advertisements could channel the shoppers' choices in an effective way. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will support this point of view with likely explanations.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is widely accepted that the modern human is leading a consumerism lifestyle due to indulging in social media platforms and being bombarded with commercials offering an excessive range of products. This means that huge enterprises meticulously target individuals, particularly younger consumers, with impressive adverts on social media platforms such as Instagram and Telegram. As a result, this level of omnipresence of new products with gimmick options makes it inevitable for young people who spend most of their time surfing the internet. The latest statistics in the UK, for instance, have demonstrated that nearly 60% of people who spend a certain time on the internet buy at least one or two items every month under the direct influence of online advertisements. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, the fact advertisements could be functional in terms of making customers aware of various features, options and models of available products in the market. Thanks to the informative form of adverts, people have an opportunity to compare different items they need in terms of prices and features to make the best decision, which would have not been possible otherwise. This trend is quite beneficial for both individuals and companies as it increases sale figures and boost the economy in society. Apart from that, driven by advertisements, the time devoted to shopping sprees has diminished substantially due to the fact that before attending the malls or shops people exactly know which items and brands they want to purchase. For example, when I have to buy a mobile phone I do not waste my time in the shop since, thanks to the adverts and pops on the Internet, I am already familiar with the exact features, costs and quality of every available smartphone in the market which makes the process of buying in the shop significantly lower.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, despite the fact that a minority group of people do not trust adverts anyway, in my opinion, most people, especially younger ones are affected by advertisements since not only it could enhance their knowledge about different goods but also can stimulate demand and interest to newly produced items.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars might sound cool or interesting but are they really a good idea? Although the idea of driverless cars sounds really cool, it has some negative aspects. Driverless cars may not be as safe and fun as they make it seem. Some of the ideas that make the car seem safe may cause more problems. Developing completely safe and driverless cars seems very hard.\n\nIn paragraph 7 it says the car notifies the driver when the road ahead requires human skills; the car might not be quick enough to notify and it could cause and accident. Maybe something gets in the way and it all happens so fast, the car would not be able to notify the driver so that the driver takes over. Paragraph 7 also mentions that the driver must ramain alert but that seems a little difficult due to the fact that your not driving and might get distracted easily. Paragraph 8 talks about in car entertainment but I think the would completely distract the driver; although the entertainments turn off when the driver need to take over, the driver would probably need more time to try to focus on driving. Just like texting and driving, the incar entertainment can be a distraction.\n\nParagraph 7 aslo talks about the car watching the driver while the driver watches the road, so would it be another human watching through a camera? If it is not another human how would the car be sure that the driver is paying attention? Even though the camera thing seems like a very good idea, it might not be very effective. Paragraph 9 talks about the technology failing and whos fault it would be. How could they decide if its the drivers fault or the manufacturers fault? Maybe the car took too long to notify the driver and an accident happened, how would they know who to blame?\n\nSafe and completely driverless car would be amazing but it seems hard to create a safe driverless car. Some people think diverless cars are more safe than regular cars but they might be equally as dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the concept of \"responsible tourism\" has gained popularity, as more and more people have become aware of the impact that tourism can have on both culture and the environment. Responsible tourism is defined as tourism that takes into account the social, cultural, and environmental impact of travel, and seeks to minimize negative effects while maximizing positive effects. However, some argue that it is impossible to be a \"responsible tourist\" due to the nature of tourism itself.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, it is true that tourism can have negative impacts on both culture and the environment. For example, in areas where tourism is concentrated, local cultures can be threatened by commercialization and homogenization. Additionally, tourism can lead to overcrowding, pollution, and the degradation of natural environments. It is also true that many people travel to popular destinations without considering the impact of their visit on the local community and the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is also true that tourism can have positive impacts on both culture and the environment if it is done responsibly. Responsible tourism can help to preserve and promote cultural heritage, by supporting local communities and promoting sustainable practices. It can also help to protect the environment by encouraging sustainable travel and reducing the impact of tourism on natural resources.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is not impossible to be a \"responsible tourist\". While it is true that tourism can have negative impacts on both culture and the environment, it is also true that tourism can have positive impacts if it is done responsibly. By being aware of the impact of travel and taking steps to minimize negative effects while maximizing positive effects, tourists can play a role in preserving and promoting culture and protecting the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author represents both positive and negative aspects of driveless cars. Driveless cars are easy and cool to have but when it comes to safety, operating driveless cars and who's fault. That's when the problems come although they have some positive outcomes.\n\nFirst, Sensors and computer hardware and software show improvements to make driving safer. Also lets driveless cars handle more driving tasks on their own. In the text it states that \" the combination of all this input is necessary for the driveless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" For example, in Google's modified Toyota has sensors in the left rear wheel, rotating sensor on the roof, video camera mounted near the rearview miror and other things.\n\nSecond, when it comes to operating driveless cars, who is really driving? They're special touch sensors that make sure that the driver keeps hold of the wheel. Driveless cars can accelerate, steer and brake themselves but its designed to notify the driver when it requires human skills in the road. For example, around accidents and work zones that means that the driver must remain alert and be ready to take over the wheel.\n\nFinally, most driving laws focus on kiping drivers, passengers and pedestrians safe.The text also states that \"lawmakers know that safety is the best achieved with alert drivers.\" Although if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in case of an accident but if the technology fails. Who's fault is it the driveless car or the driver?\n\nThe author illustrates positive and negative facts about driveless cars. They might be safe and an opportunity to prove technoly is improving. Although there might be some problems along the way automakers will continue to work on the problems to get solved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagrams show the process that occurs when making carbonated drinks. There are various steps in the process starting with Water cleaning to Package for supermarket.\nIn the first part of process is Water cleaning, Raw water will be sent to factory to filter it including using water softener and chemical to clean all water before sending it to pump. The second part of process is Heating evaporation and carbonation, the pump will send to electric heaters which heating evaporation occurs through a cooling pipe. Then, carbonation by adding carbon dioxide. In this part water will be changed to carbonated water. The next stage is Mixing, the carbonated water will mix together in the mixing tank. In this part, the tank will add coloured including syrup and flavour as well. Then, filter the water again for Filtering and filling where live in stage 4. Water will fill into 2 parts which are Bottles and Cans. Finally, packaging to supermarket for selling worldwide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever dreamed about visiting a different planet, that is considered Earth's twin? A planet that is very similar to Earth from density to size is called Venus. It is also very close to Earth that it even has it's nickname, \"Evening Star.\" Though Venus is planet Earth's twin it could be very dangers and difficult to analyze the planet, but it won't stop sicentists from that. The occurings of what happens in the planet, and why sicentists wont stop them from exploring Venus.\n\nVenus is the second planet from the Sun. It for sure has different things that planet Earth doesn't exprenice. In Earth no one expreince the temperature,\"over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" It would be impossible for humans to even live in such a hot planet. If they do send scientists they will have to be hovering in the air becuase of the extreme temperature. Venus has some similar things that Earth would have very dangerous volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning that occur. So, why would NASA send sicentists to explore Venus?\n\nThe conditions in Venus is nothing like Earth. Though some people might think there's not reason to go and explore Venus some think there are reasons. The author of this article says that it is wroth going to see Venus and analyze it. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\"(paragraph,4). This text from the article shows that venus was once like earth with similar features. Other evidence from the article comes fgrom paragraph 4,\" ...Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" If it had\n\nsome type of water in the planet now it would be very worthy to visit and even if not now, it could still be worthy becuase it could of in the pass. Even today, Venus has some features that Earth has as well,\"... has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This helps out to why NASA should really be inspired to visit Venus because of the ability that it could of once been earth.\n\n\"Evening Star\" is the nickname of planet Earth's twin. Though it's just the nickname it's actually the second planet from the Sun in our solar system. It would of been just like Earth and it still has somes features similar to Earth. So, let's investagate Venus for a chance to visit and see planet Earth's twin.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nivk D'Alto\n\nemphasized on a technology called the Facial Action Coding System which basically detects a persons facial expressions and identifies emotions such as sad, happy, excited etc.\n\nI believe that the use of such technology in classroom would not prove to be valuable. The article mentions how the computer would alter or modify\n\nthe lesson based on the emotions that are projected by the student. Having such flexible education system would halt the growth of individuals and they would only be able to do as much. For example - if a student is working on a math test and is confused and not able to get the right answer, the computer would detect the expression and provide some easier questions which would make the student happy for a while but would not be beneficial in long run. Another reason would be that students might get dependent on such systems and not be able to give other tests that are not computer based outside of the classroom in real world. It would also be difficult for students to get jobs and work on challenges if they have never\n\nfaced any before.\n\nTo conclude this, I beleive this technology would be helpful in other fields such as medical field where testing emotions of patients, social work in countires where language is barrier etc. but it would not prove to be beneficial for students in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features journey cruel Rolling hills make work harder get The works sweats therefore needs fluids The lack water help Poisonous dont really bother leaves alone The condition roads adds hills Rough roads make work hard get hills So guy getting pretty rough", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everything has two sides and the globalization is not exception. Our first thoughts about this topic include the process of global “McDonaldisation” and, generally speaking, spreading across the whole Globe.Firstly, I would try to concentrate on the positive aspects of globalisation. As far as economy is concerned, like the Global Bank or IMF are always focused on developing the ‘Third World’ and helping poor people to combat their life obstacles (through loans and donations). Moreover, the world becomes an area of sharing thoughts (e.g. philosophical or economical doctrines), which become popular due to lack of barriers.However, disadvantages of globalization are also widely known. Some people insist that because of this process, the spirit of countries and nations rapidly disappears. The integrity, established years ago is on the verge of collapsing. Furthermore, there’s a strong lobby of communists who , that the globalization indicates an uncontrolled reign of capitalists and slave work of lower labour-class. We should never forget about the detrimental impact of global investments on the environment – the green house effect or soar rains are triggered by globalization.To sum up, globalization has both positive and negative influence on our everyday life. I can’t agree with the popular statement that we should try to avoid being affected by it. However, we must not forget about our surroundings and local communities. They have a great value which should last forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For quite some time, there's been deep controversies over automobiles and increased carbon emissions poisoning cities worldwide. China, one the most densely populated cities in the world, is also the most polluted with millions of cars on the roads each and every, releasing toxic gases into the city's atmosphere, and creating a ginormous smog. Even in Paris, there were laws that prohibited drivers with even and odd license plates from driving on certain days, due to the increase in pollutants in the city's air. There are many things that can be done to prevent our cities and capitals from becoming toxic danger zones, but all of them need a little initiative to get started.\n\nAs said before, Paris once put a ban on motorists with certain plate numbers from driving on specific days. On the Monday the act started, motorists with even plate numbers had to leave their cars at home, or face a 22-euro¹ fine. As many as 4,000 drivers had been fined, accoring to\n\nReuters , an international news agency based in London, and 27% of those who were fined had their vehicles impounded due to their reaction from said fine. Traffic on Paris streets had decreased by a total of 60%, significantly easing the flow of transportation and lowering the amount of harmful emissions exhausted into the air. This was enough for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd numbered plates the following Tuesday.\n\nThree years ago, in Bogota, Colombia, a program had been enacted that has spread to other surrounding countries and cities today known as, the Day Without Cars. On that day, only buses and taxis would be permitted on the roads, allowing the streets of the capital city of 7 million to be devoid of any chaotic congestion, clearing most of the roads. The goal of the program was to enbale and promote the use of alternative transportation and reduce smog. Any violators were charged with a $25 fine. Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses, all for the sake of improving the region and getting rid of nasty smog clouds. Even though grey clouds overhead had poured rain on Bogota occasionally, the turnout incredibly immense. \"The rain hasn't stopped people from participating,\" said Antanas Mockus, mayor of Bogota. Other cities such as Cali and Valledupar, also joined in on the fun. Parks and rec centers emerged throughout the city, shattered and askew sidewalks were transformed into smoother and broader sidewalks, and new restaurants and upscal shopping districts have popped up as well. \"These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders,\" says Enrique Riera, the mayor of Asunción, Paraguay.\n\nSo whether it be passing laws on driving cars, pooling in with friends, or just simply taking the bus, there's always something that can be done to limit the usage of cars in today's societies. Alternative transportation may not be as ideal or convenient as taking the family Mustang to work, but it's all for the hope of an easier travel to our workplace and having cleaner air to breathe during the day, and not choking on toxic clouds of death. With the combined efforts of all of us, the adavntages of limited car use are extensive as they are beneficial.\n\n22-euro¹: 31 US dollars", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay, I would like to discuss why I do not agree that youth do unpaid or charity work. \r\n\r\nIn modern times, youngsters are getting lazy and do not want to engage in community service or even household chores. I totally agree that boys and girls need to be involved in neighbourhood duties, I would say it should be obligatory to do assistance for the community, provided pay them minimum wages, otherwise, they do not perform well quality-wise, or even they may not follow the rules if they are not paid \r\n\r\nThis will be a good lesson for children if they are involved in paid service for their city or village. For instance, it will be easy to require them to engage in neighbourhood endeavours if they are paid. Firstly, they feel responsibility, secondly, they can learn how to clean the streets or parks. Thirdly, teenagers learn how to look after nature by planting trees, they are also taught how to trim the trees. Moreover, by doing extra service for the neighbourhood, they feel that they are doing good for residents and do not waste their time, in fact, they refrain from doing other things which are not acceptable by society because it is easy for juveniles to involve in bad things.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the government or local council may struggle with the payment and it will be difficult to require youngsters to do the unpaid performance or they may not work for unpaid service. For example, if they are not paid for their service they might not do the assistance as required or do not attend.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would say that the local council should pay at least minimum wages to teenagers for their social effort, otherwise, the system to make teenagers the job for the community may not work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"it's official: The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\"\n\n(source 2 para. 14) But is it really? The Electoral College is why are nation is what it is. If we didn't have The Electoral College many of our great Presidents might not have been presidents. it's even under the 23rd amendment of the Constitution.\n\nTo begin with, their is a much less percentage of dispute between The Electoral College then their would be over the popular vote. for example, in 2012 election Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote and Romney recieved 51.3 percent of the popular vote. just imagine how differently our country would be if we had Romney as our president right now.\n\nAlso the Electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal, which means that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a President. in paragraph 22 it states the Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balence that large states (population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the senate decreed in the Constitution.\n\nEven though the Electoral College is amazing and revolutionised The United States, \"under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the President, but for a slate of selectors, who in turn could elect the President.\" (paragragh 10) so if you wanted to vote for Kerry you would have to vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry.\n\nin conclusion, The Electoral College is a revolutionary thing that was created by the founding fathers and put into the constitution as the 23rd amendment. it is a easy process that has made the United States what it is today. some of our very own Presidents have won because of the Electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The art lesson in school is often categorized by people as an unimportant subject in today's school. Meanwhile, some people said that art as much crucial as any other subjectsuch as science or economics. This essay will talk both points of view followed by reasons and examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, art knowledge encourage the creativity and the emotional development for childern. Take it for example, paint and music. Paint is allowed people to gain is inspiration in almost everything even when it is not a huge topic. Therefore, in art class the creativity of the youth is forced to be developed wisely so that they may sucsess to make a painting. For instance, music is the part of emotional development that produced from all of over the class journey. It develop from the practice of playing music until they can play music properly and enjoy playing some songs. In addition, music such as piano for example can help people in all ages to calm and relax, or in the other words, provides better emotional control.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, a number of people have said subject such as science, economics or language is more vital than art or sport. It relays on opinions that in the future the need of knowledge on those subject quite unnecessary. For example, many sucsessful people work on either science or bussiness, and if it include art or sport, they have to be super talented or have previledge to be noticed in art industries. So that, parents, undenyingly, direct their childern to avoid those kind of job and choose common job to have a promising future even though their kid is actually have talent on them. Hence, the capability of playing music that children gain for school is often unuseful in their long-term future.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, art is an important subject because it encourage the creativity and help to develop emotional aspect of children, however in long-term point of view it might be unuseful to get an occupation for most of people, unless the have a previldge or extremely talented.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im really patient person one day last Years end school year My older sister baby And I wanted go first nephew So I went grandma mom sister sister one baby Boyfriend There whe lots people use could go time I young see baby born I didnt want My sister got mad couldnt go either left I stayed boring But I stayed I went room visit took hours baby born went nine baby barn around I went home sleep went back seen baby name cute Im glad Right six months old I love I see And older I whole time waiting born Love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think that changing to election by popular vote is the best thing to do. We vote and see which ones most popular and that's who gets to be president. Because more people think he'll be a better president. Another reason is that's what people want. Lastly we wont make the wrong choice. We vote and see who's the best but also theres an election process. We think it would be better with no election process at all. I was imformed that we dont really vote for president, we vote for a slate of 34 democratic pledged to that person. so basicaly were not really voting so and so for president. So it seems like the govenment is fooling us. i just think we the people should vote for president not a slate but the president. and whom ever has the most popular votes wins. The government thinks they know whats best but what happens when people dont go threw with what they say,, we know whats best.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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