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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A considerable proportion of citizens adopt a preconceived notion that atrocities are considered equal in the eyes of justice despite the legal category age. I strongly oppose the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.\r\n\r\nTo commence, leading a minor to an equivalent prison for adults has numerous negative repercussions on the generic development of a human. In other words, the type of nutrition that generally includes insufficient nutritional elements is not appropriate in terms of adequate body’s growth. Moreover, there are certain rules inside the jail that oblige prisoners to adjust their daily routines which will affect various physical aspects such as sleeping hours and though works. As reported in the Times magazine in 2015, a significant number of suicide cases under legal age has been registered in police records due to detrimental treatment inside penal institutions. Hence, the experience of balanced punishment facilities has proved harmful effects on the healthy involvements of a young individual. \r\n\r\nAnother compelling reason to support my view is that the mind of a juvenile did not attend a complete maturity in order to be convicted similarly to grown persons. This means that special tribunals are allocated for juniors. Additionally, numerous countries rely on rehabilitation centres because they believe that minors need special care that will provide a second opportunity for a prosperous future. To demonstrate, I had my relative who was addicted to drugs,however, the Canadian government procured required assistance which led him to the way of salvation. Thus, conviction is treated differently according to the mental level of each person.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people consider that crimes people must be evaluated identically among social groups. I totally disagree with this statement because of unfavourable consequences on the natural growth and mental completion of an adolescent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To be fair,both the electoral college and a popular vote are good ways to decide an election. Although,a popular vote may have more pitfalls than the latter. The electoral college is definitely the best way to pick a candidate without much confusion. The electoral college may have some down falls too but the benefits out weigh them.\n\nA popular vote also has some benefits. In Richard A. Posner's passage\n\nIn Defence of the Electoral College he states,\"The electoral college is not a democratic method it is the electors who elect the president not the people\"(source 3 p15). If this was our voting method the people would be choosing the president, not the electors. Plus the people dont even know the electors their voting for. In the passage\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College author Bradford Plumer states,\"The state picks the electors [and the voters dont even get to pick who the electors vote for]\" (source 2 p 10). Basically the people have no control over who they elect.\n\nIndeed there maybe limited control for the people over voting for their canidate;but the electors usually pick whoever the people voted for. The electoral college also is a easier way to decide who wins the election. Theres almost no way there can be a tie in an elctoral vote. Richard A.Posner states,\"The winning canidates share of the electoral college invariably exceeds his share of the poplular vote\".\"[Even if the popular vote winner wins by a little he wins all the electoral votes]\"(source 3 p 15).Which means there is no confusion as to who wins.\n\nNot only is the electoral college more organized; but it makes the president have to appeal to many regions of people. Richard A. Posner states,\"[Not one region has enough votes to win an election so the president has to be liked by other regions as well]\"(source 3 p 19).This means that at least half the country must like the candidate for him to win. Swing states are also important in the electoral college. These states are the ones that really care and study who will be the best president. Another statement from Richard A.Posner states,\"[People in swing states decide the election and] are the most thoughtful voters\"(source 3 p 20).So the candidate must be trying to make sure they please the people.\n\nThe people may like a popular vote the best,but the most organized and beneficial way to elect canidates is through electoral college. The electoral college not helps with organizing it helps people know the candidate. They know the candidate because the candidate must go to each region and get to know the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should we ever visit the plant venus?venus has the hottiest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.This plant is very close to earth and stays more to itself.Its not a dangerous planet if humans can survive there.Whats the important claim of all of this?\n\nOne claim that he gave was venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions\n\nby staying up and out of their way.So it wouldn't be always something wrong with venus\n\nbecause it stays in its own lane.For example in the article it says at thirty-plus miles above the surface,tempertures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit.Its very survivable for humans so it wouldn't hurt us.\n\nI feel like the claim i choose was what he tried to support the idea with because its telling us venus is not a planet with a lot of danger it just really tries to stay out the way rather than others.Also its a cool planet to learn about like its the closest planet to the earth.Its easier for our humans to go into space to see and learn about it.\n\nNext,its very survivable for humans to go.\"Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted three weeks in conditons.\"I grabbed this sentence from the article because it just tells on why its safe for humans to survive on that planet.I just feel like thats very important for people know he gave evidence for his reasons why its survivable for humans.\n\nThis article was most about him giving information on the planet venus.Also give reaons on why we should visit the planet venus.In the text it states A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioide blankets venus\".The article just tells us good information that i didn't even know about this planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought you seen something and you look really close and it's something else? Or have you thought something was one thing but it was different? That's what they think happend with Mars. They think there is aliens and that aliens are making faces.\n\nI think people are going crazy. People are watching to many cartoons and they are starting to think that aliens are real. People on talk shows, books, and magazines are talking about it. There is a face on mars and they think it's aliens creating them. I think they it just happend from natural landform. To me it looks like an Egyptian-style pyramid. I didn't see any aliens in the photograph. There aren't homes where they could live. At first scientists thought that it was a Martian mesa, because that is common around that area.\n\nWhat do you think about the whole thing? I think that people need to go up to mars and really see what is going on. So, we can go and show everyone this there aren't any aliens, and they are just a myth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First, the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Venus can have a lot of dangers, since it's closer to the sun and the sun is really hot all 365 days a year. Venus is never going to be like Earth, it has all four types of weather all year around and Venus has only dangerous weathers all year around.\n\nSecondly, a piece of evidence that supports my claim is in paragraph 3 it says, \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. \" That piece of evidence shows that Venus has a lot of chemicals in their air pollution and that's why barely any people go visit the planet. Next, another piece of evidence that supports my claim is in paragraph 3 it says, \" On the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. \" That piece of evidence shows that Venus is a very hot planet since it close to the sun too, that means of one day you would go to Venus you would have to drink a lot of water to stay hydrated. Lastly, a piece of evidence that supports my claim in paragraph 3 it says, \" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments liking erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. \" That piece of evidence shows that Venus can have any type of weather every sinlge day that is different acorrding to the temperature.\n\nIn conclusion, that's why I think the author suggests that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The conditions in Venus are too extreme for humans to handle. People that would go to Venus probably would only last maybe a day. The next day they would want to go back to Earth and never come back to Venus again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be very useful in the near future. When we all recive one, that can be alot more safe for us but only if we all get them. Having a computer that is programed for our safety can be very helpful protectiong our lives. We all should have driverless cars as soon as they get out because they can save lives and help free up our very bussy scheduals.\n\nIf we get driverless cars everyone has to have one for this to work the best in my oppinin. If we all have driverless cars on the same roads as some other normal cars, that can bring danger to us. Trafic can't move as smoothly as wanted because the driverless car would have to worry about the normal car and consily deal with his driving decitions. This will end up slowing down trafic and possible making the human take over which is not the goal.\n\nIf everyone had driverless cars they will be no chances that the cars will crash. They are programed and in comunication with the other cars relaying information back and forth of where it is going and what lanes it needs to be in. The cars will let you in and you will never be hurt in a car crash again.\n\nHaving a driverless car can free you up to get some much needed free time, or get some last minite work done. If the car is driving you can sit back and relax. You can even just sit and look out the window and see all the things you would have missed driving with your eyes always 100 percent focest on the road. No more consitly worring about what the person ahead of you is doing or some one comes out of nowhere and hits you, causing your death. With the computers everyone will be driving the same, meaning you can get to your desination fast and safe.\n\nAll in all the driverless car is the safest and smartest idea I can think of when it comes to the future of driving cars. It has so many advatages to it you couldn't cover it all. To the safety of your body, to getting what needs to be done. Taking away driving is the most resonable thing you can think of doing. Driverless cars is just the smart way to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading excerpt The Mooring Mast easy see project faces numerous obstacles overcome The builders Empire State Building lot plate order allow dirigibles dock For example builders modify strengthen frame also construct mast dirigibles could dockIf A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether NUM would add enormous amount stress entire building This steel frame Empire State Building strengthened Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework NUM The builders Empire State Building also construct mast dirigibles In end architects designed shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside stepback design imitated overall shape building NUM This idea adding mast dirigibles Empire State Building creates much work buildersThis excerpt The Mooring Mast easily illustrates obstacles builders Empire State Building overcome From modifying frame constructing mast builders sure greatly increased workload", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He supports the statement extremely well. The first three paragraphs are just information on venus and have no real connection to the statement, but the rest of the paragrpahs do. He starts off by claiming, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" and this is huge. Scientists are currently, and have been, searching for a planet similar to ours, in hopes of discovering life. It seems almost impossible that life here on Earth is the annomoly. The Author then talks about ways humans could get close to Venus. He proposes that humans could fly around 30 miles above the surface, and study Venus that way. These key pieces of evidence are crucial the the claim that \"studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" All in all I believe the author did an extroardanary job supporting why humans should try and study the planet Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a futuristic thing that everyone has always been dreaming of. They are cars that can drive themselves while the passangers just relax and sit. Now, although this may seem like a very good and helpful thing us humans could use, it has its problems. Which is why i think we should not have driverless cars.\n\nOne of the reasons that I believe we should not have driverless cars is because a lot of taxi drivers would lose their jobs. Even though in the passage it says that it would use\n\n\"half the fuel of todays taxis\". If the cab drivers lose their jobs, we could patentially be hurting a family. Although it does not seem like a very big issue it is still a problem that comes with the car. Unemployment rates are already low. Having people lose jobs due to a car? It doesnt seem very fair to struggling families.\n\nAnother reason i believe we should not have driverless cars is, its patentially more dangerous. Even though the car could have more knowledge of what to do, because thats what it was made for. See the problem here is that with all of the computers involved with the car it is easy for hackers to hack into them. If a hacker messes with the computer software it could really mess up what the car was designed to do. If someones computer in the car starts to glitch and fails while driving this will end badly. Multiple wrecks could happen all at once. Just like the passage says \"if the technology fails and someone is injured who is at fault\".\n\nOne argument a person could use is that the cars would have more knowledge about driving than an actual person would, which could be helpful in reducing car accidents. People drive wrecklessly all the time. Which yes, this is true. Think about the future though. If we have only driverless cars in the future no one would even have the slightest idea on how to drive. I am sure they would at least get the basics of driving but what if one day the computers just fail and the internet is no longer of use? People who are on the road when this could occure may die. With with this kind of problem, their would be far more fatalities than a couple of wreckless drivers on the road.\n\nIn conclusion I believe that we should stick to our regular cars. So many things can go wrong with driverless cars. Wrecks could happen, and many people could die. Although even with regular driving fatalities can happen I just think it would be much safer to stick to our regular cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally, I do agree with the new technology of the Facial Action Coding System. It can help in many many ways in our future. In paragrah 6 Dr.Huang says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" \"Then is could modify the lesson, like and effective human instructor.\" That can be a great way to improve grades and finding different ways to helping people learn.\n\nThe FACS can find out many expressions, but the first one that caught my eye was how it can detect sadness. More people in this age are dealing with depression and sadness. If a computer can find out if people are sad we can help them with it. It was proven that 1 out of every 6 highschool students think about suicide. If we have computers in the classroom that can tell us how we feel, we can find out if they are sad and help them to make them better.\n\nReading a students emotions can also help them with finding a class. The new technology can read peoples expressions during a class, so if your emotion is mad or sad they can help you find a new class with something you are interested in that can possibly help out with your future job.\n\nI really think this new technology can help with many problems in the classrom and even in the world today. It will most likely take a long time to get them throughout every classroom in the world, but once we do, I think it can fix some learning problems and help peoples emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What impact books mature people kids Recently people trying censorship libraries seen kids reading acting lately I disagree censorshiping libraries Instead censorshiping libraries maybe section explict books things preventing little kids reading First instead removing books maybe consider making section people certain age Make section back library ask confirm old enoughThis would let libarary keep books would keep construmers happy important keep parents happy Another reason censorship libraries would number construmers would slowing drop This would make construmers unhappy library drop popularity books people want read I also see trying censorship libraries kids behaviors With censorship libraries would keep little kids acting way book But would better censorship libraries keep people read happy At end I disagree censorshiping libraries would upset people read probably library poplurity would drop means people would stop visiting library So people disagree act libraries stay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus written Minfong Ho author concludes story paragraph sum The author used keep reader wondering", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Nick D'Alto's article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" he talks about a new technology called the Facial Coding System that enables computers to identify all kinds of human's emotions. This could be a very valuable tool for classrooms, but it also sounds scary that computers are consuming more and more of students' time. In some ways the technology to read a student's emotion can be very helpful, but there are also many cons to the technology, which should make so it should not be used outside of the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Acting Coding System is and will be helpful in the future to students' learning. While a student is using the computer it can tell if they are learning and concentrating or bored and tired. Also, if a student seems intrigued by a certain assingment or video, the computer can see that and produce more that are like it. Lastly, if a student is struggling, but he does not want to admit it the computer can see that and communicate with the teacher of the classroom.\n\nEven though the computer is helpful, there are many possible problems. First of all, just like the article said, humans can already tell when other humans are happy, surprised, angry, discusted, scared, or sad. If we can already read human's emotions why do we need a computer to look at one another to read their emotions? Just by simply looking at a friend we can tell if they are having a good day or if they are struggling. We have lived without this technology for many years so why do we need it now? It seems like humans are only wasting their time trying to create new technology like this for example.\n\nStudents and their parents alike should fear these computers. If parents want time with their kids, and if they want to help with their kids emotions these computers will ruin the parent's chances. The Facial Action Coding System is helpful now, but in the future it may take away from family time, and the students might go to their computers for help instead of their parents. This system could create a disaster in the world if people do not go about it the right way. Finally, with these computers humans would not be able to hide any of their emotions. Some emotions are meant to be inside and stay that way. Not everyone needs to know all your deep dark secrets. Especially a computer system does not need to know your secrets.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could be used in many different ways. If the technology is not used right then the world could be changed for the worse, although if it is used only in the classroom (the right way) then it could be very helpful to students who struggle. Overall there are pros of the system, but we need to be cautious with the new technology and make sure that it is used in only beneficial ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My Position on driveless cars,I am all for it. In my opinion I think driveless cars would be a great idea. Just imagine a world where no one needs to spend there money on cars. Also imagine a world were there would be barley any car crashes,less acciedent deaths,and aslo more relaxation when driving. That sound like a pretty good world to me.\n\nDriveless cars would be a good idea beacuse it will give the future a terrifc public transportataion system. Also the dirveles cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer alot more reliability than a bus. Driveless cars would drop the killing rate in the world. I say that because there are alot of car accidents that happen where some people dont make it. Inside a driveless car there would be special touch sensors to make sure the driver keeps hold of the weel,GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vechicle is an danger to keep the driver alert,aslo the driveless car would announce when the driver should be prepared to take over the wheel.\n\nThe driveless car would be a great, and safe improvement to the future. Automakers are still continunig their work to make the driveless cars to reach all limitations for them to be apporved. In my opinion driveless car would be excilent!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have always been apart of daily human life. I think that cars are fine the way they are. The idea of the driverless car is a great idea and would probably make the roads safe but take away from the freedom we have today with them. Cars are just fascinating to people just really like to drive them if we have driverless cars then we dont get to enjoy what we love. The idea of having cars use less gas and have more flexibility as stated in paragraph 1 is a great idea but why can't we just have that for normal cars.\n\nIn paragraph two it states \"Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves\" but not many movies have actually done that and its just and idea that sounds futuristic. The thought of just sitting there and maybe watching a movie in your car as it drives you sounds boring. If I wanted to watch a movie i'd stay at home, but driving is supposed to engae you it's a joy. Maybe have public transit be driverless but even with that a lot of people would lose their jobs\n\nbecause of driverless cars. Bus drivers, garbage men, conductors, pilots, taxi drivers and especially race car divers.\n\nHaving cars that have no driver may also pose a big safety risk. What if the program malfunctions or if you get in to the car and need to get away fast, for driverless cars you would probably have to type in you're destination and you cant just get in and drive. Manual cars can do anything that the driver wants. That may also be dangerous but it seems that it has more things that can't go wrong as long as the law is enforced. What if your sitting in your car and you fall asleep. That can be a problem because the car might need you to take over and you're not consious. Even if the car wakes you up, you're not in a position to drive, you literalty just woke up and everything could be blurry and you're senses are not ready.\n\nThis I dea is not totally crazy but has some good things about it. While you sit there you can do work on a laptop or play a game. This can also give the driver more time to interact with the others in the car without having to pay attention fully to the road. Going to sleep would not be a good idea because of the need to switch between automatc driver and manual. That is very unconvienent because it might get easy to get tired if you're not doing anything and you're just sitting there.\n\nThe driverless car is a contraversal subject. It's a great inovaton and can halp mankind in certain ways but the idea just can't catch on completly. Taking away cars that we drive just won't catch on. Thats just one thing people love to do, is drive. Mayve for long roadtrips or parllel parking and for even backing up, yes please make driving assistance but just driving in general should not be messed with. Plus there are many safty problems if something doesn't go right in the car and it could end up hurting or kiling people. So cars should stay here and we can work on them more to make them safer and more fun but driving should be her to stay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Joining the Seagoing Cowboys group was one of the most greatest accomplishments I have ever made. If you choose to do something in your life, it should be becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. I have some very good points on why you should join.\n\nThe first and main reason is this program helps people. It supports people's horses, young cows, and mules, since this program is for those who are struck by natural disasters or for wars that have taken place where they live. It also supports the animals living space. The cowboys must feed and water the animals 2 to 3 times a day, the men have to haul oats and hay from the lower holds of the ship, and they have to clean the animals stalls.\n\nthe second reason is that if you turn 18 while on a Seagoing trip and you get drafted, this counts as your service to the military.\n\nThe last reason is when you are going to these countries you have these gorgeous and unique places to visit and sightsee. I have seen the Acropolis in Greece, the streets of Italy from the lake on a gondola ride, and I have even seen the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nIf you become a Seagoing Cowboy then you can experience and support all three of these reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars is something that can potentially make driving a little more safe. Driverless cars are not completely driverless though because they alert the driver when they are needed to take over. Sensors used in cars are also beneficial because they can give information that can cause the car to apply brakes and reduce power from the engine. Therefore, it allows for a better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nEven though driverless cars can do some things on their own, the human driver must still remain alert and be ready to take over when necessary. For this reason, it is necessary for the car to be ready to notify the driver when a problem occurs. GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object, and the Google car announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. These are both ways that can alert a driver when it is time for them to drive, which can help people to be ready to focus while driving.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars can be beneficial to us and help drivers while they are driving. The drivers of these cars must also be alert as well too. There are sensors and other developments that can help with this process and notify drivers when it is time for them to take control. Everything will not happen right away because it is a process that will take time to be sought through and manufactured correctly. So in the future, maybe we will see more driverless cars then than now and it will be a beneficial way to the driving in our country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think I should be working with a bunch of cracked ribs guys. Oh shut up you are just tring to get out of work,said Jon. Luke spoke back saying,no I Iike this job. Theres no way you actilly like this job,theres just no way. As this arguement went on Rob was silantly siting there,not getting involved but then Luke asked him for backup. Luke is right, how would you feel Jon if someone was yelling at you for getting hurt,said Rob. Shut up,Rob don't you agree with me that it is not fair. Not fair? The mans ribs are shatered.\n\nShatered? His ribs were touched. Luke yelled at him if he wanted his ribs touched by him. Then Jon backed out scard but he did'ent give up. The reason Jon is doing it is because he thinks that Luke purpesly broke his ribs. You see Jon did'ent have a choice to come here because he was forced by his mom. His mom sent him because he would not move out of there house and she wanted him gone.\n\nJon dicided that he would go talk to the captin about it. The weird thing though is he did'ent tell them that are else they would come too. So he went to the captin telling him lies. The captin got really upset and went to talk to Luke. The captin was very angry now and he was just about to push Luke over bored but he did'ent because he would go to jail. When he reached Luke he yelled at him. Luke asked why. Wy are you yelling at me captin? You know exacily why I am yelling at you Luke. No I really don't.\n\nI am yelling at you because you purpusely broke your ribs. Where did you get that from captin. Jon told me that he herd you say that to yourself. Look Jon told you lies because even if I did do that I don't talk to myself. You don't, yelled the captin. No,said Luke. Great now I have to talk to Jon. Im comeing too,said Luke. So they went to talk to Jon. They found him in the lounge. They walked up to him and started to talk.\n\nThe captin told him that he had giving false infomation. Jon talked back and said he is lieing and he really did do it on purpose. The captin ignored it. So Jon told them his story. The reason I thought he purposely did it was because I thought all the people here were forced to do this too. Luke told him that he joined with his friend because they thought it would be fun so they did it. After they did it once Luke wanted to do it again because he liked it so much. After they told each others storys they settiled there argument and became best friends.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter best part life It usually expresses feeling happiness joy The expression almost seems contagious way one laugh goes hand hand smile could improve someones day drastically Possibly best part laughter hard come many things world worthy laughter I personally find laughing I around people I enjoy Some people think key happiness love joy possibly happy I think key surrounding ones love care everything seems better around They comparable sunshine everything better presence My favorite memory involved excessive laughter took place warm day friend s house outside city limits It must around The air warm overwhelmingly hot It seemed like perfect afternoon My friends I hanging playing catch football building fire happy We components needed best night lives The vivid memory I playing catch I threw deep pass friend running ball ran straight fence He got laughing laughter spread That could say set tone rest night The rest seemed like could straight movie Everything going right feeling good It quintessence happiness Laughter everywhere smiles stretched across faces us It best memory laughter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient I doctors ipointment Me mom ben waiting almost hr call Twenty minitues later nures calls She says sorry wait Thank patient Then mom took get something eat waiting minitus later gives us food drive Sorry thanks patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The anachronism that is the electoral college is a system that unfairly represents voters and can possibly lead to catastrophe. The much simpler solution would be election by popular vote where every voter in every state matters rather than the system of the electoral college that discounts many voters opinions. The arguments against popular vote are either illogical or inconsequencial and we as a nation should pay no heed.\n\nThe biggest and most obvious problem with our current electoral college system is that it unfairly represents voters in the states. An example of this unfairness towards voters propagated by the system is expressed in \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner where it is stated that in the 2012 election between Romney and Obama Florida gave all of its electoral votes towards Obama when he only won 61.7 percent of the vote. This method completely exludes the opinion of the minority, that 48.3 percent of people in Florida who didn't vote for Obama got their say taken away, their opinion no longer mattered to the election because all of the electors were given to Obama by a small majority. A second unfairness to the voters is the attention taken away from any voter not in a swing state. In the article written by Bradford Plumer named \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" it is said that in the 2000 election that seventeen states got no attention from the candidates whatsoever. This system gives undeserved attention to a few swing states which will decide the election because of our outdated system of the electoral college. If popular vote was instituted the attention given to voters of all states would be equal as every vote from every state matters.\n\nA problem with the electoral college that could possibly outshine the unfairness of it would be the potential for catastrophe that it brings. As is stated in \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer the electors presented by the states according to popular vote are not even obliged to vote for the candidate they said they would. Even though this may be a rare occurace a single elector betraying his party could cause misrepresentation of millions of Americans. Another possible disaster would be a tie vote in the electoral college. This situation, as explained in the same article, would cause a vastly unfair election incomparable even to the unfairness of the normal system. This horrible system consists of each state getting one vote for the president which when you consider that some states have many times the population of others means that millions upon millions of people could have the same say a a couple hundred thousands, an injustice unthinkable in our society and one that could be stopped by instituting a popular vote system.\n\nThe arguments against popular vote presented in \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner are unrealistic, unsupported, or insignificant. The argument presented as \"Certainty of Outcome\" says that a dispute over popular vote would be much more common but provides no evidence to support the claim, invalidating it. The article's second argument states that candidates would have more incentive to stay in their region if popular vote were implemented but this entire argurment relies on the fact that there are not enough electors in any one region in order to elect a president. Although this is true it doesn't matter because the same is true of population, no one region has an overwhleming population advantage over others and population is what matters in popular vote. The third arguement is the most illogical stating that the electoral college's tendency of causing only swing states to matter is actually a good thing because it increases the education of the populations of those states by the increased attention by the candidate, therefore the educated would decide the vote, making it more accurate. This is a parochial and shortsighted viewpoint, not considering the fact that the system of popular vote would make candidates pay attention to all populations, making all voters more educated rather than having some elite educated aristocracy in the swing states. The articles fourth argument is possibly even more deluded than the third, stating that large states get more attention because of the electoral college which balances out the fact that states have hugely varying populations but the exact same thing would happen in popular vote because some states have larger populations and candidates need larger populations for election in popular vote. The electoral college in this instance changes nothing meaning that the argument leads nowhere. The only argument presented in \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner that has any merit is the fifth which shows that popular vote could lead to possibly complicated run-off elections. Although that is a disadvantage of popular vote I believe that the vast unfairness and averting disaster is worth the cost of slightly complex run-off elections.\n\nTo support the eletoral college one must rely on unrealistic or insignificant evidence. This \"evidence\" can be easily refuted and outwieghed by strong evidence from the opposing side. To support the electoral college you are supporting unfairness and catastrophe and to any reasonable person that is not a very intelligent idea, making the need for popular vote irrefutable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No matter how safe you are you csn always make a mistake. If you take your eyes off of the road ever for a split second ypu csn cause a major car accident. My position on driverless cars is that they are affective and needed.\n\nIf you go on a road trip through several states your legs tend to start cramping or start to hurt, if we had autopilot cars then you could give our legs a break from driving and relax while the car does all of the work. In the Google's modified Toyota Prius it has a video camera mounted nea the rearview window, thisway if a little kids ball rolls behind your car while you are backing up you can see the child and not injury them or possibly kill them. In the BMW \"Trafic Jam Assistant\" the car is designed to sterr, accelerate, and brake itself but it still needs a driver to have their hands on the sterring wheel. This means that the human driver must remain alert especially around work zones and around accidents. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver, meaning that the driver still has to be alert while driver but if something happens the car could stop itself keeping everyone in the car safe.\n\nDriverless cars are going to happen soon. Automakers including Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan are planning on having cars that can drive themselves within the next 4 years. If we have autopilot cars then it would give us a whole new feel on driving. Sometimes change is a good thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock architect could simply drop mooring top building s Flat roof Like Also rather building utilitarian mast without ornamentation architects designed shiny glass chromenickel stainless stell tower would eliminated inside With stepback imitate overall shape building It", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The invention of driverless cars is a terrible idea. There are way too many concerns to deal with.\n\nThe law plays a big role in driverless cars. It is illegal to test computer driven cars in all states except for California, Nevada, and Flordia. If driverless cars are made, new laws would have to be made. The country would have to legalize the testing of driverless cars. A law would have to be made incase accidents occure. People may attempt to sue the company if the if they get into an accident. Who would be to blame: the driver or the company?\n\nDriverless cars would still have to have a driver in the car incase the car itself cannot perform an action. That is a concern. The driver would only be needed for a few things, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. The driver would get bored. They might get on their cellphones. They may even fall asleep. The driver would not pay attention. That would cause an accident.\n\nGood things can come out of driverless cars. The public transportation would benefit from driverless cars. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. The driverless car would use half of the fuel of today's taxis and would offer more flexibility than a bus. Driverless cars could fundamentally change the world.\n\nThe biggest concern with driverless cars is saftey. Many malfunctions could take place. The driverless car would take a lot of sensors. There would be sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, four automotive sensors, an intertial motion sensor, and a spinning sensor on the roof of the car. The sensors would use laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. The driverless car would also need a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror. The video camera is used to detect what is behind the car. The driverless car would also need a GPS system to know where to go. Those three features would be needed to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. If any of those features malfunction, the car could go berserk. There could be an accident. That would cause saftey issues, and saftey is the biggest concern.\n\nDriverless cars should not become a thing. Good can come out of the driverless cars, but there are many more cons than pros.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars shouldnt have been created in my opinion . They are more likely to cause more accidents because no one would actually be driving the car.They need to many things to happen in order for these cars to be sucessful. For example, they require massive upgrades to roads that already exist. These driverless cars wil be very expensive. I believe that driverless cars wouold be a good a invention to see but wouldnt be a good a invention that is put out in the world.\n\nIn the text they talk about how human drivers should remain alert and be ready to take over the wheel. If a car is supposed to be driverless why should the human driver have to take ahold of the wheel. The car should be able to drive and be put in all situation that an happen. If these cars where made to do something they should be able to do it in any position. In conclusion, Automakers should make sure that the cars are 100 percent safe before tbey put them out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this would be helpful to use this technology to read students.\n\nI agree on using this type of technology because you could tell how people and students are feeling. This is also helpful because it would be easier for teacher to help you out when your confused and having trouble with things when some students are to shy to ask for help. These classifieds 6 basic emotions of people like disgusted, happy, sad, fearful, angry, and surprise. Computers can even know if your happy or sad, some people don't really talk and mostly spend time on their computer so also for the computer to know if their happy or sad is helpful.\n\nFinally this is helpful because people could be going through a hard time or has something that you don't know and you could even be helpful on telling them to talking it out and giving advices to them. This would make them fell better than usually.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A car that doesnt need a driver? For many years I thought I would just read about it or see it on tv, but now they actually built a car that can drive it self. I believe this would be one of the best inventions on earth. I support this project because its highly possible but as long as it has the saftey and laws i believe it will be a suscessful invention.\n\nA driverless car can be highly helpfull an extremly useful to every one.I believe it would lower the number of accedents and deaths due to cars all over the world. We wouldn't have to worrie about our teenagers going out and getting into an accedent because they were texting or calling someone while they were driving.We wouldn't have to worrie about drunk drivers as much iether because the driverless car.There are alot of people dieing from texting,calling,and even drinking and driving and even if the driverless car lowers the death or accedent ratio number then i think its worth having.\n\nAs we know it takes alot to make a driverless car.Google co-founder Sergey Brin has been doing alot of reaserch such as in 1950's General Motors created a car built a car that could run on a special track with out a person but the road had a cable\n\nconnected to the car that sent radio signals to the car,Engineers at Berkeley\n\ntried something similar,but they used magnets with alternating polarity.The car read\n\nthe positivee and negative polarity as messages in binary codes.They worked well considering there time and they required massive upgrades to exsist in regular roads with traffic and people all around.\n\nWith this people might say what if theres some problems or even some mis-signals with the driverless cars and thats highly possible and it could be big problems as such as law suits or accidents or even death.Rest assure the law isn't going to let this car on the road if there not completly sure its safe for everyone that uses it.But people could also abuse the power of the driverless car and be absolutly careless of the car and just not pay anyattention to the road or the things in its surroundings.But really that already happens with regular cars but the driverless car the like a better line of defens.\n\nOver all the driverless car will be a great help to the people all over the world and will help stop the accedents and deaths from happing all over the world.We should all come to gether and embrace this idea.Its a step up in history and it could save the next persons life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "“Some believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.” Introduction According to people perspective leadership is a god gifted quality that cannot be learned but that people’s perspective and nothing in this world can’t be learned with dedication and repetition. Leadership is an action not a position. The matter of fact is that the practical meaning of leadership is far different from theoretical world. The bookish language will assist you for sure but to be a great leader, a person should hold two qualities courage and persistence along with hard work and that leads him to enormous victories. In my opinion if a person has this god gifted quality and yet does not utilize his true potential in terms of leadership that means he runs his own life by himself and on the other hand if a person aims to change he will ;indeed. ‘’Man cannot remake himself without suffering for he is both the marble and the sculpture’’ There is an example of leadership qualities of Nelson Mandela who always think for the next generation, never focus election. He always motivate his nation, and picked his nation from the darkness to bright future, he always talked about rule of law and never broke any law. And for those who think that leadership qualities can built actually they were talking about politicians and politicians always show-off their activities just act like leaders but they are not leaders and they not have leadership qualities, they always focused just on the next election to make people fool. The best example of such type people of is Nawaz Sharif from Pakistan. That applies to the fact that if you are desperate enough to attain heights of success then for sure you will attain. This then ends the contradiction that leadership is a quality people are naturally born with, with dedication anyone can learn the art of leadership, coming to the conclusion of my essay. Leadership always born naturally the their qualities are GOD-GEFITED but peoples can also learn a lot Good Qualities as leaders have, with the passage of time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Among different groups of people, there is one who's of the view that juveniles should work part-time as free labor to take part in the development of their society. In addition to this approach being good for society, it plays its role in raising better adolescents. This essay will argue how his style of arrangement in a community help grow more responsible individuals, which leads to the emergence of a closely-knit society. \r\n\r\nWhen the youth of an area are made to consume their time in part-time jobs, it makes them responsible. Too much extra time on someone's plate can make them feel useless, creating more chances of them going astray. While on the other hand, if young kids will know that they are expected to finish their day-to-day assigned duties, it will make them warier toward their responsibilities. So, it can easily be constructed that taking part in the development of a place where teenagers live makes them responsible people.\r\n\r\nNow, when we look on the other side, which is the community itself, we can say that when this behavior is practiced in an area, it makes the whole community a closely knit one. When, from an early age, children are made to do certain tasks, they interact with each other, eventually making them aware of their neighborhood. Research on a community in London showed that how a society where kids were doing some free community work turns out to be more peaceful and happy as people care for each other.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we can establish that when children in their adolescent years are made to perform certain duties, they grow up as more responsible citizens, leading to creating a community which looks after each other.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State Building faced obstacles use hydrogen air currents existing laws attempting allow dirigibles dock building The first obstacle builders encountered use hydrogen dirigibles outside United States Hydrogen considered highly flammable big safety issue A German dirigible destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey The owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area town New York NUM If occurred New York damage could lot worseAnother obstacle builders faced violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast NUM dangerous pedestrians streetThe final obstacle already existing law prohibits airships flying low urban areas The law would make illegal ship ever tie building NUM law would allow dirigible approach New York In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted owners Empire State Building faced obstacles use hydrogen air currents existing laws attempting allow dirigible dock building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development on these cars. I am for these driverless cars because humans can still be in control of these cars, and it makes sure to alert the driver if anything bad could happen. If they have tested this car enough and made sure its safe for a family I would buy a car like that, nothing says family road trip more then a road trip you can actually spend with your family. No one has to be stressed out or focused to much on the road if they have driverless cars because everyone would be able to just talk and have nice family time on the way to there destination.\n\nI also think that it would be more of a safe choice for people that have gone out for drinks and when they leave are possibly intoxicated because it would decrease the amount of drunk driving crash cases. If the driver doesn't have to drive and doesn't have controll of the car the indiviual and others would be more safe. Even if the driver could be unsafe from driving or anything of that kind the car has a sensor that will help with skids and rollovers.\n\nA driverless car would aslo reduce the amount of texting and driving accidents or even accidents talking on the phone. If you text and drive its like closing your eyes atleast five seconds while you are driving and in those five seconds anything could happen no matter how careful you think you are being. It's almost the same thing when talking on the phone and driving but it's not like closing your eyes its making 50% of your attention to talking to that person, and the other 50 is on the road not having your full attention and maybe fighting with someone on the phone while you are driving cuz it can be very dangerous. I believe driverless cars could decrease the amount of people that get in accidents due to being on the cellphones.\n\nThe owner of the car could get tired of not being able to drive but that is why they could make the car so that if that driver could drive the day he or she would like. Since everyday might not be the safest days for a driverless car, the owner of the car could always take over for snowy days or any kind of bad conditions. Driverless cars dont always have to be driverless, it could be the owners choice if they want to drive that day or not.\n\nIn conclusion, i think driverless cars could be a great idea for many safety reasons and for easier everyday lives. People would not have to worry about as many car accidents or safety issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be a good thing. They reduce the percent chance of getting into an accident, help the driver navigate certain traffic issues, and makes the road safer for everyone. With these problem solvers, we can further the safety of others and help save lives.\n\nAccidents happen every day. Sometimes they are even fatal. Driverless cars can reduce the number of accidents in many ways. Car companies are equipping cars with a safety break that will break for you if you don't in time. The car can do this automatically and help reduce wrecks. And that is only the start to driverless cars.\n\nTraffic can be a pain and can cause frustration in anyone. With driverless cars, you can navigate your way through it easier, faster, and safer. This allows people to be late less and again can cause fewer wrecks. Everyone is safe, happy, and on time.\n\nDriverless cars can have a way faster and safer response time as well as being able to drive safer without human error. Once again making roads safer with less accidents. Pidestrians are safer as well. We have only just begun to touch on this technology and have already made things better and safer for everyone. What can happen in the next 10 years?\n\nNow with technology you can never be sure of everything. something could always fail or break. But with how far we have come with technology, We could improve everything and make it better, more reliable, and of course, safer. Look at how far we have come in 10 years. So much more is possible. In a few more we can discover more ideas and safer concepts and put them to use. We can fix those technological issues.\n\nSo in the end, driverless cars can reduce the percent chance of an accident, help the driver navigate traffic issues, and make road travel safer for everyone. Driverless cars have a much faster reaction time then humans and can fix human error when driving. All in all, I believe that driverless cars are a good thing and can make driving and road travel safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that going to a higher education is the finest way to have a successful career, but there is an opposing statement that said getting a job after finishing high school is better. This essay agrees that attending university or college is more appealing than finding a career.\n\nIt is crucial to acknowledge that people tend to be specialized in a particular sector. The Industrial Revolution has made an enormous impact on the way humanity works with information. Therefore, more and more organizations want to specify their products. In order to get qualified and pursue a financially viable career, degrees and certifications are needed to step into a high-medium level and more company. Furthermore, with a ,qualification we can get another chance without starting all over again. When we have achieved a certain standard and do not want to continue the course due to some reasons, we can always take 1 step back and choose the alternate which is more suitable and comfortable for you.\n\nThere is a number of people who argue that experience is far more vital than bachelor's degrees. Experience and enthusiasm can also play an imperative role in selecting prospective employment. For instant, barber is one of the trending jobs in Vietnam, while servicing is the priority of the job, people tend to go to an older and well-known shop. Another point worth mentioning is that study further costs immensely in both financial and time. While studying and attending expensive courses, other people might earn a salary and get experience which will be essential for their job security and promotion.\n\nIt is the writer opinion that finding a job and earning financially is good right after graduating, it is too risky for a long term because the brand could replace you with a younger and more productive worker and pay them less. Although experience is needed, fundamental knowledge about the major sector is important too.\n\nAfter graduating school is the most crucial time in people’s life whether they will be financially comfortable or make a bad mistake in choosing their path. Higher education is safer and more stable way to be successful in pursuing a dream career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an argument that centres on sports competitions of children at school by which to taught as a main class or it has nothing positive affects to kids. Even though, that can show negative side to them, in my opinion, I highly believe that competitive physical activities need to young people.\n\nOn the one hand, people say that let children know about competitiveness might give bad effects to them. To begin with, competition can be hurt to their mind of co-operation with friend, if they learn about race before collabolation with others, in the future kids will be trusted nobody. In addition, if young ones cannot be together the society will be collapsed very soon. As a result, children cannot have friends and be alone getting futher and become a island that will be very big risk to the society in the futher. For example, in Japan, they are strugling issue about Hkikomori, which is people who just stay at the own room because they felt they are looser them self.\n\nOn the other hand, I highly believe that competitive sports are very helpful to learn something for their future. Firstly, they can be learnt about teamwork with friend, most sports are usually teamwork, so kids will know how to team going and their rolls in the group. For example, under 20 years old football team in my country was very issue about their school life because they are helping friends more than others and always trying to do together with people who around them. Secondly, children can be more healthy, commanly sports make them physically and mentally stronger, which is one of the most important thing for kids. Lastly, it is one of method for finding their future or dreams, if they are trained well they could be a sports star of course not everyone but the rates gone higher.\n\nIn conclusion, although learn competitive excercise from school could show negative side, in my point of view I am convinced that there is more positive effect to kids.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this greatly fasinating artcle is informing the reader of the wildly amazing benefits of trying to explore our neighboring planet Venus but at a very dangerouse and intimidatingly servere cost such as, acidic gas, unpredictable weather patterns, bone crushing gravity and blazing temperatures but in contrast gives reasons for traveling there such as the planet being a new home and a way of escape to us earthlings .\n\nThe very first servere danger, the author explains is in paragraph three as they get into the specifis of the sulfuric atmosphere as stated \" Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\" this line shows that this dangerously corrosive gas creates a huge problem for the space program NASA.\n\nThe next neighboring issue is also the extreme blazes of heat that come from the planet Venus itself show in paragraph three \" On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit\". The author also states that Venus temperature would \"liquefy many metals\" this peice of information reinforces the many dangers of space travel towards Venus as even an unmanned space craft will be torn to shreds and scorched like tissue paper.\n\nThe author also lightens the mood by stating in paragraph four \" recall that venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\". This new knowlegde gives the reader a new look on Venus as in the future it can be considered a new home.\n\nIn final conclusion this authors amazing article has given information on the dangerouse downsides to the exploration of Venus while imploying some hopeful upsides to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To have success in our career path opinions have the sight that the most useful way is an academic one and other opinions this direction that getting into a job immediately after school is the better solution.I partially agree with the second opinion, the experience base sight due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.\n\nTo explain the not educational side and in defence of that it is good to maintain that you never ever will be able to learn in university or school about a title as much as you can determine from a real sense in life. Actual cases and problems are the best teachers especially, for a junior person who wants to enrol. To make it clear let me continue with an example. Imagine a situation where you face a communication problem with a business team and your issue is how to get answers to your requests. You can back to your books and search for various methods to communicate with humans and then try each of them to get the result. But what is the best solution in that place? It is better if you have several experiences about this issue at work and as a result of that, you know how to have particular behaviours with diverse communities. According to that example, I believe that having Empirical knowledge is key in the business world. In addition to that, there are a lot of benefits in meet different experts in your field. You can learn a lot from them.\n\nSo moving on and talking about the other side, undoubtedly, there is a huge sea of differences between educated people and not educated ones. A lot of changes will happen to a man or woman in the education process about both his or her sides. They have changes in their characters and their behaviour besides becoming a knowledgeable human. To clarify and as evidence, you can compare two people around you that have or do not have an educational background and think about their treatment with other people. Besides, these certainly, you can not ignore the impacts and needs of a base of academic and well-researched theories and facts to make you able to start a job as an expert. You need a starting point and education gives you the best one.\n\nIn conclusion, probably the best approach is to care about both sides and reinforce each of them at their time to use their pros for any situation. Choosing an academic way or raising your occupation background by getting into a job to progress your career path are both useful but you should make them balance and have all of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Benifits on Limiting Car usage\n\nCars are one of mans geat creations but they are great because they are eassy not because they are good. In hevy populated areas cars make up about 50% of the greenhouse gas. and in just europe family cars make up 12% of green house gas. Some cars are efficient more than others but those tend to be more coastly.\n\nFirst, green house gasses are a big part of the reson for global warming. Green houses also affect th ozone which could help to prevent it. Paris band driving because of how many people drive it started creating a smog and if that gets thick enough it could affect your respitory system. people who drive in countries where it was band they will be fine.\n\ncaust is a big part of beeing enviornmentaly friendly. I have a truck and it only gets about 18mpg which isnt that bad but my friends mom has a prius that gets like 40mpg and it can switch over to electricity. Cars with good fuel efficiency generaly are more expencive.\n\nIf people who have bikes ride them to say dinner once a week insted of driving they will save an amence amount of money just from not buying gas. Gas was just up to about $4.00 a gallon but now its at an all time low but we dont know when it will go back up. There are a tn of people in this world that are over waight and just walking like one a week could help.\n\nTo sum it all up, if every body just hepled out when they can the world can be a better place and maybe people can live longer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist making way Yosemite National Park longer difficult dangerous way go He takes awee going way old folks says havent gotten porches since carter office I think tha tthere would reason listen though wisdom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the Article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming\" has a very distinct view on cars. Majority rules that even though these computer cars are more efficient, it can also be endangered for the drivers due to any conditions. These smart cars need more power than just a start button they need sensors. For instance the Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, etc. These smart cars are just too much not just for one person but multiple. These cars may seem fascinating but once you get that bill you'll think other wise . The expenses on the material , technology , and anything else you want will break your pockets. So why even bother when you can have a normal SUV truck that you drive on the regular.\n\nOthers may vouch that \" Regurlar Cars \" are basic and dual. They need something that will keep them up to speed. Of course regular cars may cause you more gas, fix broken parts , and more focusing on the road than having the car that can do it itself. But do you really want to waste all your time putting money into a smart car. Thats only going to last for almost a year before you give up. These high technology sensors are nothing new , of course . In 1980, automakers used speed sensors. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger surroundings.\n\nAre these smart cars actually keeping citizens safe? In 2013, BMW announced the development of the \"Traffic Jam Asissitant\". The car can handle driving functions at speed up to 25 mph, But special touch sensors make sure the drivers keeps hold of the wheel. A regular 2009 lexis doesn't need the stability of an assisstant nor these high risk sensors. this car can obtain the same ability of a smart car. So, whats the difference high technology cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Wow!! thats very exciting, even though notifying a driver about upcoming navigations such as work zones, accidents. Human drivers still must remain alert and be ready to take over when situations like that occur. Why investigate into something you cant actually control , but can also harm yourself and others.\n\nThese sensors can go out at anytime developing a more dramatic problem upon yourself. By having a regular car you can just go to the gorage an get it fix. Instead of waiting for days to get all the technology back up to running you'll be out on the road an no time. Considering that its more cheaper an less parts to fix. Human aspects on technology is very inconsiderate than rallying on themselves to get the job done.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car, bikes, walking and such are many forms of transportation. Cars are the main favorite overall. But as time continues we see that the drastic need for cars is growing smaller and smaller because we are now seeing the bigger picture; limiting car usage is a bigger plus than a negative.\n\nIn Vauban,German the surburb is going \"car-free\". Rosenthal speaks about how Vauban allows cars but there are only two locations where they may park these cars. If you want to park your car you must buy a space for $40,000, and a home along with your parking space. Due to these facts 70% of Vauban families do not own a car. An advantage of this limited car usage is that people like Heidrum Walter speak about how she is much happier and less tense without her car.\n\nVauban is in an area that is more accesible to public transportation and closer to stores. The closeness allows people easier accessablity to buses, or walking and biking places. With everything close its easier to get to point A to B. Also reduces pollution and greenhouse gases due to the fact they aren't using cars to get to there locations.\n\nIn Source 2 Duffer, speaks about how in Paris bans are being placed against the usage against cars, due to the fact Paris has a high level of smog. Paris had motorists with even-numbered license plates on Mondays leave there cars home or suffer a fine. On Tuesday motorists with odd-numbered license plates were to leave cars home or suffer a fine. The advantage of this ban is that having so many people leave there cars home on Monday allowed the smog to clear enough that the ban for Tuesday was rescind. If Paris were to do this ban for a couple of years there smog issue would be completely gone. This would be a major advantage for them, it would give them less pollution, not as many people getting sick due to the smog, and a less car dependent city.\n\nAn event was created in Bogota, Colombia called A Day Without Cars. Which was to have people go car-free for a day. Colombians used many other transportations such as biking, buses, and hiking. This event allowed smog to be reduced due to the fact Colombians could not use a car this day or be fined. Also this event helped spark other areas want to pertake in this event. This was a huge advantage having many other places join A Day Without Cars; this meant more areas helping reduce smog and helping many more areas become aware of the fact cars dont have to be the only form of transportation people use.\n\nAll in all if areas become less car dependent, there shall be less smog, pollutions and lastly people wont have to travel as far due to the fact everything will be closer. The smaller amount of cars we have, the more positive outcomes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im alot things surley readerBut believe able publish anything want topic weather grafic novle didry maggazine nothing taken shelf offencive offends dont pick much less read Say wanted write book people say disgusting would still able write sell anything anyone problem try band get rid instead dont get rights every individual person able use full exstent used Call old fashoned I beleive freedom speach freedoms lost solders freedoms every single day live I think drinking every week wrong dont see news yelling deal like people deal things dont like hope essay ive made good points making sacrifices dealing things act something shouldent able change thank taking time read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you seen venus in the sky while your star gazing? although venus is often refered to as \"earth's twin\", it is challenging to explore. venus is one of the more challenging planets to explore for a couple of reasons. those reasons are, the caron monoxide, sulfuric asid, andand the severe temperatures.\n\nvenus is covered with a thick blanket of carbon monoxide. this is one of the reasons that makes it very dangerouse to go there. based on the article \"the challenge of exploring venus\", venus has \" a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon monoxide\" .this mutch carbon monoxide is very dangerouse.\n\nthe even more chalenging part is the sulferic acid.\n\nthe clouds on venus are filled with sulferic acid. not only is that dangerouse but the sulferic acid is,\"highly corrosive\". highly corrosif is almost like saying flamable.\n\nand if the sulferic acid wasnt dangerouse/hot but the temperatuer alone is enough to kill you. here on earth we experience heat but on venus the heat is extreme. in the article it states, \"on the planets surface ,temperatures average over 800 degrees farenhieght\"\n\nif you were wanting to try making it, good luck, but based on the information it seems like it is not recomended. so stay home on earth. enjoy the fresh air and life that awaits you. it is to dangerouse to waste your time on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that we should not use driverless cars, in my opinion they are an accident wating to happen. The arguments saying we should switch to driverless cars sound far fecthed. The text uses statements such as, \"the cars would use half the fuel of todays cars\", \"they offer more flexibility\", and that \"they are much safer\". These arguments are invalid in many ways that I will explain.\n\nThey text says that driverless cars would be cheaper than cars that require a human to handle them, but they are not. Driverless cars aren't even driverless, they still require a human skill to take over when the car cannot comprehend what to do next. Driverless cars would be much more expensive to obtain and operate than a normal car. Driverless cars have many different extremely expensive gadgets needed to even make it semi-automatic, they require position estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an internal motion sensor. A normal human operated vehicle does not require any of those things, so if a person did wish to get a driverless car, they would be paying a substantial amount of money and even more for fuel, to keep up with the parts and technology, and for gas. With a manual car all you have to do is purchase it (for a much smaller amount) and pay gas money and body shop bills should they arise, but still yet, it would be a lot less than the driverless car.\n\nThe text also states the driverless cars offer more flexibility than a manual car, this is untrue, they actually offer less. With a manual car, you are the driver and you choose where to go and what to do, with the driverless car you are supposed to tell your GPS where to take you and that's all the input you have. But what if the place you are trying to go is on a road that doesn't show up on the GPS? Now that driverless car is pretty useless. They are much less flexible than a man powered vehicle and much less reliable.\n\nLastly, the text states that driverless cars are much safer than manual ones, this is invalid. Their arguments for such a statement are, \"driving in a fun new way\", \"you can have in-car entertainment\", and \"you would be able to text and drive\". These are crazy reasons that a driverless car is safe. First of all, driving doesn't need to be fun, you just need to get from point A to point B. Secondly, there should be no in-car entertainment. Playing games, watching tv, etc. should not be done while driving, because the \"driverless car\" still needs to be operated by a human, this is a deadly distraction. And again, with the texting a driving, this is a lethal distraction that should not be suggested to do, even in a driverless car. If you were to be texting you may not notice your driverless car signalling you to take over, and consequently, you will be in a wreck.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should be kept a thing you see in movies, fictional. There are too many risks and dangers to a driverless car and the price would be unaffordable for most. The driverless car is an unthoughtout idea that makes no sense. There are too many problems with the driverless vehicle for it to be reliable and safe, so we need to stick with the manual cars instead.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author in this article believes that the pursuit of studying Venus is well worth the dangers and obsticles it presents. Although the author presents many reasons why this exploration would be difficult, they proceed to explain to us the benefits of traveling to Venus.\n\nOne of these difficulties would be the thick atmosphere on Venus. In paragraph 3, the author states \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\". This could make it difficult for any spacecraft to make it through the atmosphere. Next he concludes to inform us that the clouds on Venus are highly corrosive. Found in paragraph 3, the author claims, \"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid is Venus's atmosphere\". On top of the thick atmosphere it also contains highly corrosive clouds. Next found in the third paragraph, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince on our own planet\". This makes it difficult because we have to make a spacecraft a material that won't melt. We also have to find a material that can handle the atmospheric pressure. The author told us in paragraph 3 that this atmospheric pressure could crush sumbarines that were made specifcally for this kind of pressure deep in the ocean.\n\nIn the next paragraph the author states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". This explains to us the reason why scientists are so curious about this dangerous planet. The author continues to tell us in paragraph 4, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\". Scientists are curious if this planet, so similar to Earth, has ever supported life. In paragraph 8 the author tells us that the challeneges of getting to Venus has value. Also found in paragraph 8 the author claims, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\".\n\nAlthough there are many risks that involve traveling to Venus, the author also supports many benefits of doing this. From what we know about the article, I can say that the author believes all of the dangers will be well worth it. He doesn't only believe this to be true for Venus, but also for any other travel beyond Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars are Coming\" the author presents the reader with both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. In my opinion , I don't think these cars are needed. Therfore , I am against the idea of driverless cars.\n\nThe car has alot going on. It has sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four autoative radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and lastly an inertial motion sensor. I think that with so much going on that something will go wrong. I wouldnt want to pay a fee to get something on this car fixed. Nothing listed here sounds cheap !\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \" Traffic Jame Assistant\", in which the car can handle driving functions up to a certain speed. Im afraid that in this manner, many people would forget they are allowing their car to drive and get distracted. One might pull their phone out, or apply some lipstick in their mirror.\n\nYes , the car \"might\" notify the driver if danger is upon the them, but many cars glitch. It would be awful if someone thought their car was going to alert them for danger while they are on the phone and a glitch happends. Then , lets say , the driver gets into an accident and goes to the hospital for surgery. Who would be responsible for this accident? The driver, who thought their car would alert them of danger, or the maufactuers of the car ?\n\nIn conclusion, I do not think that this car should be getting developed and sold to the public. I think this car is too risky and would cause a lot of problems, and not just finacial problems either. Would you like to drive on your piggy bank and insurance, or drive normaly to and fro ? I think the cars today are just fine, and that companies are just coming up with these things with their fancy names, just to get some money in their pockets. This car should not be on the roads, but companies can play around with them at testing facilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" describes a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System which enables computers to recognize human emotions through a high tech computer, briefly asking the question, that if we should use this type of technology in class to help recognixe the people who are happy or sad, confused or bored as brought up in paragraph 6.\n\nNo we should not allow this type of technology in classes to find out peoples emotions whether if they are getting the class, if they are bored, or if they are sad, This is a complete invasion of privacy that will get no where if used.\n\nIf used this technology is all based on facial features meaning that if we smile were are automatically happy or if we have a serious face we are emotionless (talked about in paragraph 3 and 4) which is not true because we have a mask that we out on either way, whether it is happy or sad.\n\nTherefore I conclude that we should not put this Facial Action Coding Systems in classrooms due to the invasion of privacy, how horrible it would be with every single expression a pop up notification would be show through out everyone in the classroom and this will be a distraction for students along with professors and anyone in that class. I believe this should not be put in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When building mooring mast Empire State Building architects faced many obstacles spontaneous combustion nature airship related laws The first issue faced builders spontaneous combustion Due accidental fire Hindenburg owners Empire State building realized dirigible lit building results would even worse debris would fall busy New York streets A second issue builders faced mother nature Because violent air currents winds building constantly changing Is would mean even docked tethered back ship would still spin Normally lead weights held dirigibles fields New York City would dangerous could snap fall pedestrians Finally laws set place regulating airship flight held back construction These laws set limit heights urban areas making dock Empire State building even approaching illegal Builders mast Empire State building faced many obstacles construction fires nature law", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the seagoing cowboys. I think you should join them because it willl be fun. You and your friends can go over seas. I also think you should do it because its a good cause. This is why you should join the seagoing cowboys.\n\nYou will have lots of fun. Things you'll do are help people. You will also get to see animals and have a good time. You can do cool work and fun stuff with other people. This is how fun it would be if you went on the seagoing cowboys.\n\nI think you should join the seagoing cowboys. I think you should join them because you'll see stufff you'll never see in your life. When I was on the boat I saw many beautiful thing. You should also join because you will make new friends. The best reason why you should join is because you will be help someone in need. This is why I think you should join.\n\nThis is why you should join the seagoing cowboys. If you are interested in joing contact me at PHONE_NUMBER. You'll have so much fun if you join. I also think this is the one of the most helpfull things you can do. This is all the reason why I think you should join.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Healthy lifestyle is paramount to leading a long and happy life. Some believe that governments should shoulder the responsibility for its citizens health. While others believe, it is should be an individual choice. It's a very commendable if an individual is able to make right choices in the matters of his/her well-being. However, the problem stems from the fact that many people fail to make right decisions pertaining to their health.\n\nEvidently, putting the responsibility of healthiness in the hands of people, clearly doesn't have a good success rate. In today's world, diseases like obesity, diabetes and cancer has become global epidemics. The majority of these illnesses are attributed to abysmal eating habits and lack of physical exercise. And there is overwhelming an amount of research out there that could support these claims. However, if governments take the responsibility of the healthiness of its citizens, it has better chances of combating these diseases. The reason being, governments can easily get access to the best research available out there to combat these conditions. Also, it has the best doctors and research facilities at its disposal, which makes it easier for them to come up with the solutions to eradicate these diseases.But\n\nBut, there are also quite a number of people who advocate that the decision of lifestyle should solely rest with the individuals. They claim that the excessive indulgence of government in the lives of people might come off as controlling. And nobody appreciates being constantly told what to eat and how much to exercise. In fact, there is a chance people would do the exact opposite as a form of protest towards the authority.\n\nThe government that strives for the welfare of its citizens is more likely to build a strong country. At the same time it should refrain from being excessively invasive on the health related decisions of its people. No matter how much effort the government puts in, at the end of the day every citizen should possess his own individual accountability. We as responsible individuals, should put our own sincere endeavours in leading a sickness free lifestyle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would nt say computer house helpful It provides useful information everyone It used personal use talking friends If child house might search something internet school If need directions place want find specific person computer help If child likes run phone bill like talk friends tell use computer These many ways communication made computer even email If need make quick plans maybe movie couple friends send email message Now text people right computer If re afraid someone might get email time enter cell phone number text It s free Now world become technologically advanced schools often tend tell students look something computer maybe homework assignment posted webpage If child computer home Make hard homework Also perent decides start business computer would required cant profits talk customers A computer also make signs business business cards Need directions restaurant Or maybe local gym A computer help find directions almost plan earth reliable website get directions You also learn specific people type name If need someone phone number nt phone book use pages help So I hope see computers effect people positive way They help keep touch friends save money They help students learn could possibly help start business home If need directions help finding phone number computer help multiple ways Having computer could make draw perspective everything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One hot day family I went There new ride open called shoot rapids It brown tall water ride tunnel two hills As walked see long wait said hour wait We really wanted go decided wait When got line outside sweating And make things worse annoying little boy talking food something It really annoying We half way threw line nerves kicked I really scared I knew I brave suck About Later people away ride My heart pounding knees shaking I thought I going die Then sudden broke We wait another As time past finally got water ride I regret I screamed cried Im glad I didnt chicken That time I patience regret", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that the cost of fuel for means of transport increased by the government can minimize environmental dilemmas. This essay will argue that the disadvantages of this development will outweigh the advantages.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, one of the greatest benefits is the decrease in demand for vehicles that used gas. Not every family who owns a private vehicle will be willing to spend more money on transportation and as a result, they have to find an alternative, for ,instance public transport. Furthermore, companies will also have to cut down their usage of fuel if they want to keep their revenue unchanged. In both ,cases the rise in fuel cost would result in fewer emissions and therefore result in reduced environmental issues such as the greenhouse effect and damage to the ozone layer.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are a few problems with this viewpoint. Firstly, increasing the price of fuel can have a negative effect on the national economy. transportation is one of the basic foundations of almost every economic field. Products and materials need to be delivered many times before they are ready to be sold to customers. The higher expenditure of production will lead to lower demand from customers and therefore the loss of the company’s revenue. Secondly, in many countries, for example in Germany, a part of an employee’s fuel cost will be paid by the company as a government policy. In the end, the higher cost will not directly affect many people but rather the expense of the government. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing the price of fuel will not actually be the solution to many environmental problems when we look at it in the whole picture. To help reduce the emission from private means of transport, the government could instead encourage people to use environmentally friendly vehicles like electric cars, in which the user could benefit from lower taxes or road fees,...", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe uncensored books movies music magazines library taken shelves put single room library labeled The children go library libraries space kids books kids go parents someone older teenager dont know looking pick random book shelf andor rack Some people think nt like weary might see go little room marked However nt want anyone see go room simply nt go So secluding books magazines videos etc keep children picking book uncensored pictures grabbing video parents look end film kid might want keep seeing stuff like reaches puberty eager sexual entercourse boygirl Having said hope see idea sectioning stuff keep stuff keep sexual entercourse early age thirteen As far music goes really nt way completely keep kids listening music rap foul language sometimes talks sex drugs kids think artist wrote song made big shot drugs sex look turned The best way eyes keep kids listening rap parents let listen However music like even hiphop rarely references topics rap music I could also argue parents watch kids aware consequences actions take due reasons take action diciplining kids actions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Setting plays big role story Without desert hot would confict There would importance saving water would dehiderate And long flat roads symbol journey still got far way go straight roads turn hills shows change journey something better happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist There", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nacisco happy even though poor She loved heritage still adore today She proud cuban She good relations house She great neighbors Her parents hardworking supported Her family good relationship family friends She appreciated parents done They gave career beloved country move better life Her friends family refugees came house time Her baby sitter became first friend In celebrated first birthdays These event would stay memory She would never forget parents turned house home belongs Her life always filled music love So even though hard times still apreciated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Countries have started to limit the usage of cars. the limitation of cars can be very benifitial. evidence from the articles can show that limiting cars can benifit us citizens.\n\nTheir advantages to limiting car usage. For example, evidence from the article says \"Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\"-except the main thoroughfare, where the tran to downtown freiburg runs, and a few streets on one edge of the cummunity\". this shows you that if people are willing to give up their cars it can benifit the cummunity. Information from the article shows \"On Monday motorist with even-license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine\". Limiting car usage can really help the enviorment so when people drive their cars on a no car day they do get fined. evidence from the text shows \"In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday\". If we let car usage be limited it can be a safer place in the streets without no traffic and less cars. according to the text \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve saftey\". This evidence shows that limiting the use of cars can make the enviorment safer in pollution and in health wise becaus epeople wont be getting into car accidents as much.\n\nmany countries have limited the usage of cars. limiting car usage can be benifitial in many ways. Evidence from the text shows that limiting car usage is for the better not for the worst.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people that were effected by world war 2. They got their seamans papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, wich means he could be drafted for millitary service. When he was discharged in 1947 he has made nine trips the most trips a seagoing cowboy has had.\n\nIt took the seagoing cowboys two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Luke was busy caring for the animals during the crossings. The animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. The stalls had to be cleaned and Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship\n\nThere was alot to do over seas Luke helped alot of people over seas. he crossed the pacific ocean 2 times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time family went wait line one roller causter I sayed witch one Well I wasnt patient sister I pretty patient After ride I forgotten long took get go ride My parents remember thought left park drove somewhere Well many times I patient like time friend took two days put music She gotten touch wanted put music So asked I wanted music Well I said yes Even though I know I cant spend day without using looking But thing I could patient Ok two days finally gave back I thanked asked took long She said composer taking forever infer like forever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Millions of people use cars in their everyday lives whether its driving to work, school or even the supermarket. With the amount of people on the streets on a daily basis, its not suprising that there is a major traffic issue in Miami. Most people dont realise how big of an issue this truly is because in reality they just need to get to and from work. I'm here to inform you about the beneficial alternatives to driving everywhere you go.\n\nWhether going to work or driving your kids to soccer practice, a way of transportation is a must. Most people choose the \"easy\" way out and just hop in their brand new luxury cars. But what if I told you there is an easier way, a more efficient way? All around Miami, there are metro rail stations. These stations are clean, safe, and not to mention useful. There are busses, trolly's, and even metro movers that can take you all around the city. the trains, busses, trolly's and metro movers all run on a schedule. An easy way to limit your gas bill, pollusion and time wasted in traffic is to simply set up a route to where you need to go and catch the appropriate mose of transportation.\n\nTime is always on peoples mind, whether you have enough time to go shopping for a new dress or maybe stop by grandmas house. all things require time. Everyday millions of Americans spend hours stuck in traffic due to rush-hour. This means less time spent with family andmore tijme bonding with the annoying car horns constantly beeping. If you could switch to another mode of transportation you could cut time commuting in half. The Metro rail avoides all traffic regardless and if more people start thinking like this then the bus might soon be avoidingall traffic too. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two says \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Everyday she walks verdant streets listening to the delightful sound of people chatting and children playing, something she was unable to appretiate with her windows rolled up as she drove around town.\n\nSo many fuel consuming vehicles on the street on a daily basis can't be too great for our enviroment, don't you think? It isnt, all this pollution is causing a nasty smog all over the world, some places more than others. Paris tends to have more smog than Europe but not too long ago, Paris had 147 micrograms or particulate matter per cubic meter compared to 114 in Brussels. This smog makes it difficult for dilivery companies to complete their jobs. This smog isnt good for us either just think about what you are breathing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To the state and the state's country, the election of our president must be seen carefully and wisely. As the citizens of the state, people must realize that choosing someone to take control of orders and regulations and the way the country evolves, is a process that needs to be thought of and taken fairly. The president is to serve the people of his country well with responisbilities that can vary to meet the needs of the country,but the electoral college seems to become more and more unfair to those who vote. It must be changed to meet the needs of giving a responisble president, a more trustworthy election and the votes cast must be directly towards him rather than the electors. In other words, the Electoral College must be changed to become more fair towards the citizens.\n\nThe United States Of America, is of course a massive country with large variations of different needs. All over, there are people who vary in opinions, beliefs and lifestyle which can cause the Election of the president to become an important subject matter. To meet the needs of so many people, instead the Electoral college must not choose a president that takes up space, but instead have a right mind to be responisble in taking charge of the country and the people.\n\nThere are many reasons why a responsible president must be choose. Things like creating rules to attend the needs of all citizens and create equality amongst them, to keeping harm from out of reach, the Electoral College should become much more wiser in choosing the right ruler to take control. In the article\n\nWhat Is The Electoral College by the office of the Federal Register, it states that the election process is held every four years along with the after election prepared by the govenor titled \"Certificate Of Ascertainment\" which sums the canadidates and electors as well as the winning canadidate. It is obvious that the voters only know so much of what they vote for and do not really get a good taste of how the presidential canadidate is like. It can be clear that as a blind election, the voters have no hints of who they might be voting towards and in the end can cause a major catasrophe if a canadidate has very little intentions for the states. In agreement to the article the text\n\nIn the defense of the electoral college by Richard A. Posner it begins to sate the election of Romney who, by increasing his plurality and possesing only regional appeal, lost the peoples desire to vote for him thinking that the man has no regards for their interest and does not have any intentions of improving their needs or helping with creating a community where the people can rely on Romney. The actions taken began to change the thoughts of the citizens and create a petrifying conclusion that the man was not on the run to be everyone's president. This dilema could have been changed around if Romney had shown that he had cared more for his state and his country and thought more about the needs he could fill and the actions he could improve, then many of the voters would have most likely shown repsect and a desire for the man to be choosen as their new president. On the opposing hand Romney had not shown any of those qualities or passion which had caused for him to be thought of as unresponisble and selfish.\n\nThe country has more than thousands and thousands of people to serve and direct. It can be understood that having a large amount of citizens can result in uncertainty towards the election and the votes cast, yet it is yet to be changed to a more reasonable way of confronting it. With many systems such as \"Winner-Take -All\" due to states titled as the \"Swing States,\" it can be an untrustworthy election fo rmany voters around the country. The election process not only need to be changed to select a more responsible canadidate, but to create a more trustworthy system of itself.\n\nThere is very little equality when it comes to elections especially, when the states are giving an unreliable system to choose for them. States that are considered \"Toss Ups\" are selfishly awarded the system named \"Winner-Takes-All\" due to how they apparently pay closer attention to the campaign. In the article\n\nWhat Is The Electotal College by the office of the Federal Register, the method is first introduced in paragraph 7. Stating that the purpose of the \"Winner-Take-All\" system is not only,but to award all electors to the winning canadidate. It is said to be unrelaible and untrustworthy due to it's focus on states that appear t have more attention towards the election. On a more basic level, some states such as Rhode Island and South Carolina had not even witness the campaign and even leaving a few voters to have no say. Going back to the misunderstanding of the election of Romney,the country wittnessed an iresponsible canadidate that had ran for president. With the unreliable ridiculous system \"Winner-Take-All\" some states may or may not have even experienced how Romney had acted and his intentions towards the elections and the campiagn. With very little knowledge of the presidential canadidate and with limitations of voting and campaign ads, there is very little trust given towards the election process especially with more than a few states that are not being taken very seriously, with very little say. If the Electorial College could give off more information and more become more reliable towards all states, the process would be less sinister and more apreciated.\n\nThere are many more other factors in which the Electorial College must be changed to meet the appropriate dilemas and needs of the voters and their intentions towards the campaign. On the other hand, it has not changed at all only to stay unfair towards the entire country and possibly cause a catasrophe.\n\nLet us say, there have been many incidents where elections have been on the edge of a major dilema. Wondering why a straight up orderly process can go to the point of a catasrophe, can all be easily explained as unfair.\n\nAll can be simplified in the article\n\nWhy Even The Best-Laid Defesnes of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer, states back to the disater factor of the election of John F.Kennedy. It states back to the 1960's where faithless electors had pushed aside the votes and sayings of Louisiana had decided to vote for whomever they had wanted. It had caused a problem of course since the votes where not even of the people, but of the selfish sick minds of the electors who toke the process into their own hands. In the same paragraph it staes back to when the state of Hawaii had sent in two slates of electors to congress. With the unreliable actions of Richard Nixion, had validated his opponent's electors of course to win over the campaign. once again another issue arises in the article\n\nFive Reasons To Keep Our Despised Method Of Choosing The President, it agrees with the unfairness of the electorals by giving the example of how the Electorial College had turned off the potential voters due to the knowledge that their votes will be uncared for. In paragraph 23, it states that in the state of Texas, it was known that the votes would have know effect of the campaign what so ever. It aslo had staes that voters in politcal elections have no care rather than to express the political refrence than what the peole think or decide. This sums up that the process is unfair to many of the states voters and must be changed to become more open and share the equality with those who are losing thier trust.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electorial College mut be changed to meet the need of those who agree that is it irresponisble when givng a repsonisble president, a more trustworhty election and an unfair process. Yet this can all be fixed simply by changing the ways it is run and to give more freedom for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives mood created author love sacrifice In memoir author shows love showing love child parents also showing love throughout community The author shows sacrifice showing parents give order child better life In memoir talks lot neighborhood cultures came together great solidarity friendship It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people This shows closeness people neighborhood represents love well Sacrifice shown Narciso s parents They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved This shows parent left behind representing sacrafice At end author also mentions I never forget house s gracious neighborhood many things I learned love This ties mood throughout memoir Love sacrifice mood throughout memoir author created", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "n recent years, some people believe that the government increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles is the primary way to solve the environmental problems, whilst others hold the reverse viewpoint. I disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the front and centre in this favour are that cars are necessary means of tools for commuters due to inconvenient public transport in a rural area.Moreover, it is undeniable that the exhaust gas emitted by the usage of automobiles causes environmental pollution. However, raising money for fuel does not solve the root of the phenomenon. For instance, people need to pay more for fuel in order to get to a specific location, which does not change the probability of use. This indicate that this policy would not improve much environmental issues.\r\n\r\nAt the other end of the spectrum, transportation indeed plays a vital role in our daily life. Considering carbon dioxide emission, it is the leading cause of air pollution. Therefore, the government may divert some budget to build more facilities for public transport. On the other hand, if they provide some discounted ride plans for taking ones, it would be a better way to decrease the chance of the use of private vehicles. The monthly pass is a salient example. Based on such compelling evidence, it appears that government incentives may improve air pollution. \r\n\r\nIn summary, the growing use of automobiles is an issue that needs to be addressed. It is widely believed that the promotion of public transportation can solve environmental problems nowadays.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In exerpt The Mooring Mast builders faced obstacles attempt allowing dirigibles dock One example obstacle builders face attach mooring mast top building In paragraph nine says The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof They come safe way attach Another example obstacle strength modified building paragraph nine stated A thousand foot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame The last example paragraph nine explained The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundren feet The Stress might much building could cause building collapse In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon builders faced many obstacles allowing dirigibles dock Empire State Building New York City", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author very well suggests and supports the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author does a very well job at suporting his opinion and making sure the he/she stays on topic and uses perfect gramar for the reader to understnad.\n\nThe author gives facts about Venus and even teaches the reader a few things about the planet that maybe some readers didnt know about. For example in almost every paragrapgh the author sates more than two scientific facts. they're are not the boring facts that some readers might already know about either they are interesting and true, he/she also provides expamles and what happened in the past/ what is happening in the present like in paragragh 6 and 7.\n\nAnother reason on how the author did a great job on supporting his ideas is because he had 8 great paragraphs and also had a attention grabbing introuduction, a body and a conclusion. The author asked questions which kept the raeder interested and made the reader think about it and form their own opinion which is really good in a article epecially is the author is trying to pursuade someone, aslo it made it more interesting to read.\n\nIn conlusion the author did an amazing job at supporting his/her's idea. The author shows that he/she knows that they are talking about, states facts, has good punctuation and spelling, makes sure subject and verb agrees, and also makes it fun for the reader to read.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society, the decision to have offspring is postponed to later in life. In this essay, I will describe the reasons for this trend, pros and cons as a consequence of this decision. Firstly I will give examples of possible causes, secondly, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this situation. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, we live in a very busy lifetime which, is driven by growing expectations from nations and families, focusing on material achievements. We are more stressed and self-absorbed, constantly worrying about our future and careers choices, therefore, we can not afford to have children. Another example which, explains an increasing trend, is the lack of support from the male side, regardless of looking after their offspring. Women are most of the time left with babies at home to provide them with the required care, moreover, ladies spend their time having unpaid housework such as laundry, babysitting, cooking, cleaning. Many females don't want to risk their careers and become housewives.\r\n\r\nAdvantages clearly work in favour for women hence, they become independent from their partners and have freedom of choice and get a better education, progress in their chosen profession before they decide to create their families. Furthermore, females can grow in power and become leaders of society, providing peace to this world because they are driven much less by their egos compared to males. However, disadvantages become significant; causing a decreased number of youngsters, for instance, European countries have calculated that soon number of elderly people will reach 60% of all population for that reason we might experience a growing economic problem, lacking people to work for older generation's pensions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that the positive side of this trend outweighs the negative sides, giving more opportunities for better woman's education and jobs. Females can build their careers and after feeling secure create families.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir feeling thankful This mood says Their rich culinary Skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful This mood thankful author thankful culinary skills still Another mood thankful says I always grateful parents love sacrifice This mood thankful thankful parents love sacrifice Another mood thankful says I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done This mood thankful thankful done could never courageous This mood memoir created author", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary world,people have faced myriad of health ailments like obesity,anorexia,chronic illnesses due to several reasons.It is often argued that who should be responsible government or individual for mankind lives.This essay will discourse the both views and i believed both are equally responsible for that.\r\n\r\nThere are people who tend to believe that healthy lifestyle substantially depend on individual person living style and eating habits.The elementary reason is due to sedentary living style,people has faced numerous pressing problem related to health.For instance,people are prefered cars instead of walk.The other reason is bad eating habits as folk love to eat adulterated food or fast food instead of home meals that directly hamper their heath,adversly weaken their metabolism,immune system.So,the inappropriate way of living styles of individual and unhygeinic cuisines utterly affect the mass lives.\r\n\r\nThe other people think that government need to provide miscellaneous health care systems and heath education campaign to general masses.Authority should spent proportion of their budget to health care system.For instance,Australia government provides free health services to there residents.Secondly,authority should imparted health education program to people as they are not conscious about harmful affects of fatal diseases.Government must enlighten them about adversely affect of diseases.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,I firmly believed that lifestyle of human totally reliant on both individuals as well as authority.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The limiting of cars in our community can help us significantly reduce pollution, save money, and improve health.\n\nTo begin with, the amount of pollution caused by cars has dramatically effected the enviroment. Acording to the text the capital of France in only five days of car smog. The amount of smog riveled to the smog capital of the world Beijing, China. That was only five days of car smog. If we keep this up, the first the sky will turn black and then it will fall and world will end! Hopefully nobody wants the world to end because of smog. To reduce the amount of smog and pollution caused by cars we can all reduce the usege of our cars. Therfore, the limiting of cars can significantly reduce pollution.\n\nNext, limiting cars can help us all save money. To illustrate, we all like that \"Cash Money\". And all cars need gas to work, and the funny thing about gas is it cost money; alot of money actually. So if the limited useage of cars happen then, is we save that \"Cash Money\". As you can see the reduction and limiting of cars can save us that \"Cash Money\".\n\nLastly, the limit of car useage can and will improve health by making people walk. You see people every where are getting over weight. So by makeing them walk or use other modes of transportation we can lose weight and improve health. Thus, the limiting the useage of cars can and will increase health.\n\nTo conclude, the limiting of cars in our community can help us significantly reduce pollution, save money, and improve health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars. The space craft Viking snapped a photo of what look a human face on mars. The face is two miles long from end to end. Many conspiracy theorists think that the face is alien made. The face is not alien made though.\n\nThe theorists wanted to know proof that it wasn't alien made. So April 5,1998 the Global Surveyor flew over the face and took a picture ten times shaper than the first picture. Thus you could see that the face was formed not by aliens but by natrual formation.\n\nThe theorists where still not happy about the photo take. On the that day mars had a dust strom that day so the picture kinda had a haze to it. So the mission controllers had to prepare to take another picture. So they did and on April 8, 2001 on a cloudless day on mars the picture was took.\n\nOnce agian the picture showed that there were no alien houses or monuments. The picture was taken with absolute maximum resolition. So you could see every little detail on mars. Scientists concluded that the formation was made by lava coming to the surface and making a formation that just happend to look like a face mage by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus has been in our solar system's life for trillions of years now. Since the beginning of time humans have always looked up to to the sky with wonder and hope. Hope that one day we'd be able to take a better peek past our large atmosphere. One day we did finally achieve this by using spaceships and sateltes. Even though we achieved this, like many humans we'd still want more. There's always more to see out there in vast open space.\n\nFast forward many years later to present time. We've discovered most of the planets near our planet, Earth. Technology has even came so far to let us see things thousands upon thousands of miles past Earth. Even letting us have a glymps into other solar systems, but people still want more. It's always a good thing to want to learn more than you already know. One of the major things many people want to know are what planets we might be able to call our next home. The two major planets being Venus and Mars. The author of the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" breaks down this topic very well.\n\nThe authors claim within this article is that how there's a lot of dangers that come with Venus, but it's still worth studying and examining. The author states, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features that are analogous to those on Earth.\n\nThe authors claim is a claim that many could probably pick sides with. The author constructs some good points and informs the reader about Venus's past while doing so. He even uses opinoins from other sources than his own words to back up his claim, these opinions/ideas coming from The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA). The author of the article states, \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one partiocularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venujs would allow scientists to float above the fray. . .NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbibe have been tested in chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and has lasted for three weeks in such conditions\". This text shows how other people, even NASA may feel about the idea of traveling to Venus.\n\nThe author of this article ends the article very well. He finishes it off with encouragement to the exploration to other planets near us and how we should keep pushing thru the dangers that may lie ahead. The text states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". This sums up the essential idea being this essay. People more than likely can agree with his statements, although on the other hand many people may not.\n\nTraveling to other planets may have its risks with it, but its always worth a shot. Learning more about our other planets like Venus can help us evolve as humans and help revolutionize the ideas behind space and the planets in space.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As stated in the article, the Electoral College process consists of the selction of the electors, the meeting of the electors, where they vote for PPresident and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The Electoral college consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President. A state's entitled number of electors is equal to the number of members in its Congressional Delegation. There is one for each member in the House of Representatives, and two for every Senator. There are many reasons why the voting process should be changed to popular vote instead of the Electoral College. The two biggest reasons are as follows: Unfair elections and the freedom of the people.\n\nAs stated in the third source, the Electoral College is often considered an anachonism and is unliked across the nation. The reasons for which vary greatly from certainty of outcome to big states to swing states. Certainty of outcome means that one of the Presidential Candidates has to be cosen to become President. There are no recounts in Electoral College, whoever they like the most becomes President, and that ins't fair to the people. Bigger states tend to have more members in the electoral college. This can greatly influence an election if a big state like Texas favors one candidate over the other. Swing states are the states that recieve more atention than other states due to bias, greatly influencing votes. In my opinion, this is something that needs to be changed.\n\nCitizens of the United States of America are the ones who are supposed to decide who should be the President of the United States of America. It isn't right to select a few people from each state to decide who the President will be. That power lies with the people, and nobody should be able to take that away. The votes of millions and millions of people are out-weighed by the votes of a few hundred men and women. This is unjust and unfair in every way. If all the people in the United States wanted somebody as President, but the Electoral College disagreed, the Electoral College would win. Why should the Electoral College have more power than all of the people of the United States; they shouldn't. The power to decide who is President of the United States of America should always lie with the good citizens that live here.\n\nI hope that the voting process will change. I hope that it will finally become fair. That it will become what the people want it to be. It should be what the people want it to be. We the people of the United States have the power to change this, and we should work to change it. The voting process should no longer be the Electoral College but should be dicided by the people and only the people. The voting process needs to be fair and needs to be what the people want it to be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story parapraph ties together I think author uses also say spring pass test I really like part says spring snows melt I like explains wants puts mind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Written language has been in human history since many thousand years ago. It was first developed through ancient egyptians and other old civilizations to keep history safe and remembered. It was then reformed for learning, teaching, documenting know-how and building new civilizations. From the Latin to the modern English, an enormous amount of changes and developments have emerged. Such things were derived through the intent of humanbeings to use easier language to deliver its usages. I am of the opinion, that changing language and using it in a more relaxed way could destroy its basis and strong meanings, which it shall deliver in its original form.\nUsing a less formal language for writing could be associated with multiple different advantages. More people will be able to write using a language easier and faster, if it is in a more relaxed way compared to the formal version of it. So using such easy version of the language, could promotes the amount of written work, which accordingly supports the idea of keeping our culture remembered. For instance, the amount of written stories in English has doubled through the years after making the english a more easier language to apply and write with. Furthermore, such more relaxed language will help many non-fluent speakers learn and use the language faster, which shall increase the amount of people speaking this specific language.\nOn the other hand, a couple of critical disadvantages could be distinguished applying such strategy in the written language. Maybe the amount of written ressources increased massively in the last couple of hunderd years, but what about the quality and sophistication of such materials? Are these materials concrete, concise and accurate? Are those materials capturing the needed knowledge within the current generation successfully? These questions trigger that easier language to use doesn't neccessarily mean better documents, but rather massive irrelevant amount of expolited work.\nTo summarive, I tend to be of the opinion, that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of using a less formal language in writing. The long-term perspective could be significantly critisized, as only short-sighted point of views, shall think, that such methodology of written language helps human civilizations thrive in any way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy It seems way It looked like happy Why would nt happy That mood created author memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i belive that the driverless cars should be allowed. the driverless cars can help drivers in many situations. the driverless cars can do things a driver can not do as fast as the driverless car. the driverless cars could still be controled by drivers in areas where the system would not be able to drive or respond to the situation.\n\nin the article in many instinances it says that diverless cars would still have drivers in situations it could not navigate. the driverless cars would be fully functioning by itself and with the driver so it would not just be a robot driving around by itself. the driver would still have to be aware of the situation or the car would get there attention as to avoid accidents. the driverless cars would still have drivers in side of them.\n\nthere are many resons why the driverless cars should and should not be aloud but i belive that they should be. there are many resons why they should be and these were only some of them. driverless cars are safe and should be aloud in my oppinion and that is why i support driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of technology give us a lot of opportunity to develop themselves and our economy. Nevertheless, the growing of technologies are shared our society to two parts: one part become richer, another become poorer. Some people think that it is opposite effect for our society, while others believe conversely. In the following paragraphs I will present both opinions and present my perspective.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly, the range of technologies are increased our economy and the intellect of people. People become more affrodable to knowledge because technologies give us opportunity to work with our mind not by hands, therefore we safe our energy to think For instance, people who take a chance, become rich: producers of TV, computers, phones and other devices, also people who can work with technology, because they are demanded in the market place.\r\n\r\nBy the way, we know a lot of people who cannot work with devices, computers, especially elderly people. It is hard for them to find jobs. Another point that people who work by hands waste their time and make less things than equipment. To illustrate this, modern industries use equipments, few operators and manager who can control it. Therefore, a lot of people can find job, because workers by hands not are demanded in the contemporary world.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is a bog problem for our society, and without job people cannot to educate their children and be healthy. In my point of view people have to be adapt and flexible and be open to knowledge and new resources not only to be rich, also to live with their society equally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The contribution of women from arts to science is remarkable. Still, there is one sector where women hold just one forth of the positions and, that is the Tech sector. Many feel long working hours and gender pay-gap are the main culprits. But there is a solution to every problem and tech companies should be more open minded and flexible towards women's participation in the technological sector. \r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that women tend to be better off, when it comes to managing work and personal life. And, one of the major reasons for less women entering in tech jobs is because of the poor work life balance. As many technical positions require long working hours and even working at client sites. In countries like India, women are compelled to either look for a lower salary job or get married. Thus, employers prefer male professionals despite plenty of well deserving women in the market. \r\n\r\nBut there is still a glimmer of hope and things are improving rapidly. Many companies have started flexible working hours along with work from home options. This trend has allowed women to continue their working even after marriage. For instance, women can now work from home and can manage their families and kids, without leaving the premises. This trend has just brought women back into the tech scene and created a pool of independent women. \r\n\r\nThis essay discussed the reason why only 20 percent of women join tech jobs because of family and work life balance issues. In addition, this discussed the solution of implementing new work policies and allowing women to work remotely, and can bring back women into tech roles again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program? I hope you would all want to participate. It is a lot of fun. You also get to learn about different animals like what they eat.\n\nA reason why you would want to have this is, you get to save animals lives and get to be with animals. The person didn't agree with me. He said \"What if you are alergect to many kinds of animals?\" I said you can wear a protected suit that animal's hairs couldn't get into the suit. He still doesn't agree. Then he says \" What if you get sick or hurt?\" I said we will help you.\n\nAnother reason would be, you could be able to see the rest of the world. You also get to see stuff in that country you go to, when you save the animals lives. He agrees and says\"That would be cool but would you ever get to have fun on board?\" I said yes but you have to make sure that you do your job every hour like feeding the animals.\n\nAfter that many people joined the Seagoing Cowboys. Especially the people who were at the argument. One week later I went back on board and started saving animals lives again. It was a lot more fun with more people on board with me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people like to argue that the face like form on mars was created by aliens but i disagree. There are many landforms that have been created with face like forms but that does not mean aliens have created them. For example NASA stated that they take photos of mars all the time, year round to use on research if there were aliens then why have they not been seen or found in any of this phots they take.\n\nThe text also states that scientist belive its just a natural landform. Also there are many rocks that we find and many landforms that look like faces and different types of objects but we never assum that they were created by aliens. These landforms are called or campered to butte or mesa landforms. Also if there were aliens then how did they make this landform and how did the \"alien\" even get there or survive on that plante.\n\nIf there even were aliens then were are they because if they lived on mars we would definetly be able to see them and see where they were living.\n\nSo I belive that the face on mars is just a natural formed landform and those are my reasons why.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a paradox. One's tongue will twist while affirming this phrase, because it is simply not meant to be said. Driving is driving. It is not jumping in an automatic car expecting to be safe. Have you ever used GPS navigation, and were you agitated from the robotic voice? That is the clear description of what electronic cars would be. Driverless cars is an interesting invention; however, it will not be tolerated.\n\nRobotic waitor's, robotic cleaning, and robotic cars? What- no. What would humans have the pleasure to do anymore? Imagine a futuristic world, where the joy of cleaing up the house to suprise your wife is gone. Driverless cars are another step to sloth. Several people already use the technology excuse to be shy of what is needed. If teens, or adults had the chance to skip the saftey percautions of driver's e.d they would. Sure its easier, but is it really productive?\n\nDriverless cars are useless, and should not be accepted. Sooner then later, all jobs will be replaced by technology. Sure there would be spots to maitnence the technology, but that is anti-social. This society is already masked by devices. And generation upon generation is receiving technology at a very young age. Communication is required for survival, and there is invisible barries between technology and humans.\n\nOne of the greatest concerns for driveless cars is the saftey precaution. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Comming\" does a great job addressing saftey concerns. However, every point that is mentioned rings a caution bell. Driverless cars apparently are dependent on the driver. Whenever construction or accidents come up the driverless car requires human assistance. Imagine a death threatening situtation is arising. The human driver is too focased in on doing everything else other than driving. In fact, this person keeps a whole entertainment box in the car. No matter how advanced the car's warning is, there would be absolutely no time to prepare.\n\nDriverless cars will not dominate the roads. Technology already strips too much away from being a human. Driverless cars will take away semi trucker's jobs, and taxi driver jobs away. After that, there will be a whole new invention taking even more jobs away. Driverless cars are a lazy, and unsafe concept; and it shall not be tolerated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf As author feels anyone else right take uncensored books shelf books left Depending person books offensive I dont think books able taken shelf anyone everyones preference books different I believe libraries keep unsensored books certain section children easily kept seeing reading unappropriote material age And lastly experience led believe warning certain books saying material could appropriote People right take book shelf would unfair people The library quiet place meant people come read type book homework study groups undergo research practiaclly topic number books based one persons opinion unfair everyone else might enjoy genre Libraries books one main resources researching internet many eople still prefer books day I think freedom taking book shelf would endangering process learning discovering To reduce number uncensored books found children people find offensive certain section library books That way people interest books read also kept away dont want read I think taking away type book unfair people everyone like different genres books uncensored books one section fair It would also easier parents knowing children wont find books material shouldnt reading By disagreeing right take book shelf I think book uncensored material marked type sticker binding warning If one sees sticker knows dont want books type material easily return book argument I experience trying find book school project later finding material really wasnt appropriote school This made find new book project I didnt want completely take book shelf away one else wanted read warning right would easier situation In conclusion I dont believe certain materials taken anyone Taking away books would spark many disagreements even though one person might find something offensive doesnt mean every person As mentioned putting uncensored books different section putting sticker binding would give clear warning anyone wanting read unsencored books I think every library needs take consideration topics help people reduce issue people children finding uncensored books section", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studyng venus is a studying venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presentes, Thay found venus is the closets planet to earth in term of density and size ,venus is something right around the corner. and also '' venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system'' that mean venus havae differents weather,climate. venus planet is so inhospitable, like no body can live there.\n\nhas one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus, venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\n\nthe radiation would not exceed earth levels. that was to hurd for them but survible for humans. ''rendering standard forms of phography and videography ineffective''.that show many rearchers are working to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.\n\nThe nasa is working on other approaches to studying venus,the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.''but tend be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions'' that show they neede be carefully in the extreme physical condition.By comparison systems that can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces,\n\nThe earth and leyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but they will should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation, like generation about something importants for example venus was probably covered largely with oceans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is worth pursuiting despite the dangers it can present. Venus is the closets planet to earth in idensity and size and occasionally the closest in distance too.\n\nFirst, some people often referre Venus as Earth's twin.\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\"(paragraph 4). NASA and scientist would want to pursuit Venus. Venus could have been like Earth long ago.\n\nSecond, Venus has some appereances like Earth.\"The planet has surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\"(paragraph 4). Venus could become like Earth again in the future.\n\nLastly, Venus has the same elements but higher.\"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\"(paragraph 3). Having the same elements would want scientist and NASA to explore Venus\n\nVenus is worth pursiuting despite the dangers. If Venus is similar to Earth, Scientist and NASA would do anything and come up with something to try and be able to explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New software has been devloped that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. According to some new computer software that can reconize emotions. The children said (hold up! Can we accually \"calculate\" emotions like math homework. the evidence is that there is a computer that make's a 3d model of your face. In the artical it says that the computer can even show mixed emotions. The computer could even store's simaliar ThIng inside of someone.(indroducion ) . It will be great for a teacher to use because you will be able to see the he or she is confused of if they are bored and etc. They made that because thier is alot of that have thing wrong with them the just dont like expressing thier feelings. But to wrap it all up animate faces are more expressive. the cumputer is cool the way it can scan peoples mood. Another cool feature about that I personaly like is that how it could the you what bones and how many bone are inside of your body. And it's cool because most people do not like to communicate so the compture tells you what are they thinking and also how are they feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a heated debate about road safety. Some people claim that the only way to improve road safety, taking strict measures and apply punishments for the violations. I would say road immunity is not just fenced in by limited options but some real determinative factors can be effective on it. I will declare my opinion in the following of this essay.\r\n\r\nThese days, you can hear through the press and media that thousands of people are being died on road trips. And it arouses a sense of downbeat and letdown among officials. They are seeking a way to drop this statistic. On the one hand, events that happen on the roads can be influenced by a huge variety of issues. For example, how to construct roads, and whether they follow existing standards or not. Also, another option can be the cars on the roads, whether they are modern and up-to-date with maximum security or are run-down. An outdated car besides that can be harmful to the air and environment due to pollution like exhaust fumes, and also can be the reason for road disasters and irrecoverable losses. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the cause of a part of these events is human and might be to blame. It is partly brought about by disregarding grave immunity issues. Such as speaking on the telephone, being tired and sleepy, and at high speed. Sure, under these conditions, one vigorous way to decrease the events and crimes is fine and stricter punishments. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reaffirm road safety is not just surrounded by human causes. There are a lot of options that should be taken into account in order to improve the rate of immunity on roads.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world has been suffering from the burning issue of pollution created by different kinds of vehicles. It is believed by some that a rise in fossil fuel prices can reduce usages of cars and other conveyances which will impact the environment positively. There are both merits and demerits of this trend and this essay will explain that an increase in fuel cost is not a proper way to reduce ecological problems.\r\n\r\nAt present crude oil is the main source of fuel. Therefore, an increase in oil costs can even worsen the current situation because it is the only reliable gas source. In addition, no matter how expensive the oil customers will try to purchase it, unless an alternative is provided by the government. For example, a hike in taxation for tobacco goods did not reduce its sales and the same will happen with petroleum as well.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the authority should impose strict laws and introduce more public transports, so that general people prefer to use communal transportations instead of using private cars. Secondly, Scientists should focus on the development of alternative energy which can be available in the market at is less price that will not impact the surroundings widely. For instance, Tesla invented electric cars that can perform with an electric power source, which is renewable and in results zero carbon emission. Hence step by step we can eliminate the greenhouse gas release. The outcome will be a clean and green atmosphere.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, all the above data shows that only increases the fuel price will not reduce global warming effects. Some strong alternative measures need to be implemented to tackle the situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people are of the opinion that the fund which is used to explore the universe should be spent on more practical sectors instead. While I concur that the ambition of studying outer space is justifiable, I believe that the government should use this amount of money for other purposes which bring more benefit to citizens.\r\n\r\nOn the first hand, for decades, it is undeniable that the growth of humanity has been mostly based on people's curiosity, which makes exploring celestial bodies more necessary to keep pace with the world's development. Firstly, the technology for aerospace investigation is one of the methods which has triggered people to reach certain achievements. For instance, scientists carry out many studies in the labs located on other planets to find more resources to provide to the earth's life. Besides, the experiments on the universe distinctly bring some benefits in the future such as broadening knowledge about interactions between planets, then people can predict upcoming disasters due to out-of-the-earth factors.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is apparent why many are in favour of allocating the money which is for space exploration on more advantageous aspects. The most conspicuous reason is that humans in recent years have faced many problems, particularly, environmental degradation and severe transmitted diseases. In detail, the environmental concerns are more and more significant because there has been no practical measure to tackle factory waste and emission. Otherwise, owing to the budget shortage, not everyone around the world is accessible to medical services which have been a burden to the healthcare system. Meanwhile, beyond-Earth research requires a large amount of money which can be used in finding proper solutions for those existing problems.\r\n\r\nIn view of the arguments outlined above, I conclude that although getting to know about the cosmos is important, improving current problems is more a priority to society. All things considered, from my perspective, space exploration is not a proper way to use the government subsidy in this situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people may think that driverless cars would amazing, but i think thats taking a big risk. Safety should be number one when it comes to driving and when your on the road with a driverless car that could be really unsafe. Techology is advancng but i still dont think people today can find a way to make a car a hundred percent driverless. There would be many conflicts that come with driverless cars.\n\nWhen your on the road your safety should come first. Any thing could go wrong with the sensors or other technology while its on the road and then there will be a accident. Lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. What if someone was to hit the car and total it but then leaves how will they know who did it and what to do about it. Laws shouldnt have to be changed for a car.\n\nHaving a driverless car on the road could stir up some problems. when someone gets in a accident with the car how will they know who's fault it is? The owner of the driverless car and the owner of the other car may even get into an argument all for nothing if you ask me. To be on the safe side i think we should just stick with the regular cars today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the Seagoing Cowboys progam?\n\nIt was to help many countries that had been scarred by World War II.\n\nThese people helped with cattle and other animals that were shipped to Europe to help them.\n\nPeople were asked to help by the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration, or UNRRA.\n\nPeople should join the Seagoing Cowboys progam because, you get to help other countries and people, you get to see many parts of the world, and you have fun.\n\nIf you are in the Seagoing Cowboys progam, you can help other countries by giving them animals for food and work.\n\nIt makes you feel good about yourself.\n\nThe article says, \" It made me more aware other countries and their needs.\"\n\nThat would make someone feel good about themselves for helping other countries.\n\nWouldn't that make you feel good?\n\nIn the Seagoing Cowboys program, you can see many parts of the world depending on where you are going.\n\nYou could see Italy and other countries.\n\nThe article states, \"Besides helping people, I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China.\"\n\nThat would be very exciting.\n\nHow would you like to see a bunch of different countries while working?\n\nYou wouldn't have to pay for travel\n\nWhile working for this program, you would also have fun.\n\nThe people aboard the ship would play games on the way back to get more animals.\n\nThe cowboys would also play baseball and other games in empty ship holds where the animals were on the way there. Also the article even states that they played games.\n\nEven though you are working, you will still have fun.\n\nSo, if you are in the Seagoing Cowboys program, you will have fun, you will feel good about yourself, and you will also get to tour and visit many different parts of the world.\n\nMany people helped with the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThey helped many countries in Europe.\n\nThe cowboys still got to do what they always did, help with animals.\n\nSo, do you think that you would want to become a Seagoing Cowboy?\n\nOr at least be in the program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir mood created authorFirst I feel mood created author happy sad I feel sad moved Cuba left friends family careers loved behind They also struggled personaly financially braving harsh northern winters yearning native tropics facing cultural hardships Although sad I also felt happy I thought even though moved place loved one thing made feel home I think home home Just like like like back home I felt mood happy sad memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay setting affects cyclist different ways For example couse must tough dehydrated says rolling hills rough roads Another example dangerous animals like snakes came across In conclusion reasons setting affects cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scribe:\n\nWe started on our journey to help the other countries the reasons to join the program help those countries recover their food supply and animals and more.\n\nIt was nice that my friend invited me on this journey i accpted it because\n\nit sounded really nice and interesting.\n\nIt is nice to help the people where im visiting because of what happened and it is fun.\n\nWhen World War 2 was happing it was very scary and made famlies not which it was unable to eat and was very poor.\n\nThe people enjoy when we try to help them.\n\nIt was a long ride in the boat but it was worth it.\n\nLife was hard for them when world war 2 was going on and it was a scary time and some of them left during that time.\n\nsome of the people were in the war and it was more scary for them but they had food that was given to them.\n\nWhen we talk to the people that were in or not in the war they tell us that the stories about when they were in or out of the war and it seems like a scary situration.\n\nI would not like to be in that situration\n\nI think that i would probly move somewhere where there was not a war going on even if I miss my family.\n\nIt is nice that people are willing to take up their time to help the people.\n\nWe have met so many people that are nice and people from our homeland.\n\nSome of the people left this land when there was war. The reasons\n\nwas that they were scared of being hurt,\n\nalso they were not wanting to be poor and not have food.\n\nThe time in Europe was very fun now it is time to go to China.\n\nWhen they were working two part time jobs it was very difuiclt for them because they could not afford for food or spend enough money for a house incerences and home.\n\nwhen they did two part time jobs they were unable to\n\nspend enough on their family.\n\nUNRRA\n\nhelped 44 nations to get them back on food supply.\n\nyoung cows and muels were shiped over sees.\n\nThe sea going cow boys were part of the 44 nations to help\n\nthe horses, cows and muels.\n\nwe are allmost to China,\n\nthe waves are huge and we are tried our best to carry the animals over.\n\nwe think it will take only one more week to get to china althrough\n\nit could take shorter\n\nor\n\nit could take longer it all depends on the weather.\n\nwe see the land and we think we will be less than a day from getting there.\n\nwe will right we are now in china and we are going to get our passport checked\n\nand then we are on our way to helping familes.\n\nit is fun\n\nto help the familes. we needed to learn chinease\n\nbefore we left our house.\n\nwe now are starting to read chinease we have not known lots of chinease but we are starting to learn because some of the familes were in America during the war and know a lot of Eniglish.\n\nThe familes in China are\n\nvery nice and we have learned a lot of food to cook because of visiting the people.\n\nAlthrough\n\nwe have come to an end it is almost time to say goodbye. we have one day left.\n\nWe have said goodbye and the familes said we can come whenever we want.\n\nWe will have fun and we will talk to them from our homeland.\n\nThe boat is ready and we are onboard for our homeland america.\n\nit is time to rest because we have a big day coming up. we got the good rest and we see our home it is time to say goodbye and have a nice trip when you come to help familes in Europe and China.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways One ways affecting discription makes seem hotter really He says neihbor hood two hundred degrees He saying really hot The features setting affected I mad seem hoter taking far", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author presents a strong argument suggesting a worthy pursuit to study Venus depsite dangerous endeavors, however, his statments regauarding un-reliability on current technology, the necessary actions to conduct research, and numerous failed attempts to reach Venus greatly outweigh the good outcomes of this mission. Venus is considered the planet that is most similar to Earth. The passage explained that scientist speculate if there was once life on Venus considering it incredible geographical and size similarities to earth. Although further research could test their theories, Venus has very extreme weather conditions harmul to man and other objects. A closer look and gathering of evidence is expected to make this mission a success. However, modern day technology is barely able to keep up efficiently by just the use of humans. These issues are far too risky to consider pursuing.\n\nVenus has features such as mountains, craters, and even valleys that are also seen on Earth. According to the article, its atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide with temperatures averging 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth with can crush nearly anything that tries to reach its surface and even liquefy metals. The second paragraph discussed how spacecrafts in the past barely lasted a few hours and since there hasn't been a spacecraft sent there in more than three decades. This evidence shows that despite the success of reaching Venus, we are not even close to even slowly progressing and fixing smaller issues with spacecrafts traveling there and back to Earth. By not providing evidence of some sort of pregression or steps closer to considering sending humans to Venus, the author weakens his arguments over the better outcomes of conducting research.\n\nConducting research requires numerous forms of evidence, samples, test, etc. In paragraph 5, the author makes suggestions of creating a spacecraft to sustain temperatures of at least 170 degrees Fahrenheit and levitating thirty-plus miles over the surface to observe the planet. Although this may be the most safest and efficient approach, he even stated that it would require getting \"up close and personal\" to collect samples. The whole idea is to reach Venus and collect data to compare to Earth and Venus' previous history. Without being able to collect samples, the author weakens his argument to study Venus despite the dangers it presents.\n\nLastly, modern day technology is known for its speed and cinvenience to access information. In paragraph 7, the author discussed how electronics we simplified to last at least three weeks in simulating conditions to Venus. He explained, \"modern computers...tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physicakl conditions.\" He supported this claim by informing readers that older technology, mechanical computers, have been re-evaluated and seem to have better calculations but involve levers and such. This weakens his argument because it would mean that this mission wouldn'tt be helpful if the right technology can't be utilized to help calculate and evalutate information.\n\nAll in all, the author makes very good claims as to why NASA should continue to pursue further research on Venus. It would help determine if there was previous life, if it once operated as successful as earth, and if Earth could potentially be headed in the same direction. However, the extreme weather conditions, actions necessary for research, and un-cooperative technology make this pursuit seem far less worth it considering how danger it is for humans and even the spacecrafts sent to examine the planet. Ultimately, the project can be deemed as impossible if facts given in the article remain the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion I think computers nothing people lack exercise sleep I think persons decision computer long want The person computer obviously care sleep When people computer I think dont play much start get fat decision Also time comes going realize need spend less time computer exercise However need time limit computer limited time eating right exercising Being computer people dont get chance interact family friends want lazy stay computer The family friends get angry dont want hang anymore within couple months friends Nature good smells good looks good computers make people stay inside day I think time outside Also computers sometimes make kids want clean room chores addictid computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that there is a face on the surface of Mars, while some also believe that it is just a natural landform. NASA was searching for a possible landing spot for Viking 2, and they'd come across something that looks like a face. However, what they are actually seeing is a natural landform. The \"face\" is a mesa, a common landform here on Earth.\n\nThis face isn't a rare occurance, we have things just like it on Earth.\n\nAccording to the article, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\" (12) This landform, just so happens to be on Mars, so it gives people all the more reasons to believe that life on other planets is actually a thing. In the Snake River Plain of Idaho, there is a Middle Buttle that looks just like the one on Mars. Some like to believe that there could be other people out there, but really, the face is just another landform.\n\nScientists and astronauts have been searching for life on Mars for many years, but so far haven't had much luck. This landform is just another thing NASA needed to add on to their list of conspiracies. Not only that, but it seems as if the people are very entertained with this. The article tells us, \"The \"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" (5) It is crazy how much attention one landform on another planet can get.\n\nThe story tells us the picture is decribed as \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" (3) This is a natural landform that could easily be mistaken with a human head. The rock has the qualities of a face, and it isn't hard to see how it is believed to be a face. With no life on Mars, and plenty of research having been done, this is just another rock formation.\n\nSome who believe that this is actually is a face, I can see where they are coming from. When people believe in life on other planets and finding a rock with human-like features, it is quickly assumed that it is a human. However, this is a common, natural landform. Earth has them, so it isn't so crazy that Mars does too. Even with a face shaped rock, Mars doen't actually have humans living on them.\n\nPeople can believe that a face was found on Mars, or you can believe that it is just a rock. Whether or not it is, plenty of research has been done to back it up. Pictures, labs, and scientists can all prove that this is a not-so-rare landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology is not valuable because ,it will not always be accurate .You can't tell from a 400 year old painting that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy ,9 percent disgusted ,6 percent fearful ,and 2 percent angry .That just doesn't make any sense .You can usually tell what kind of emotion a person is feeling .Just by looking at a persons facial expression you can tell if someone is happy ,sad ,or mad .\n\nOn the other hand though this kind of technolgy could be useful .Here is how this program works .A computer constucts a 3-D model of the face ; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human msucles .The movement of one or more muscle is called an action unit .The computer detects 6 emotions happiness ,suprise ,anger ,disgust ,fear ,and sadness .\n\nIn everday life you can tell how a person is doing .Like if my friend walked up to me with his head down ,I can most likley tell ,that he is sad or angry .You can also tell persons emotion by looking at body movements something a computer can't do .\n\nThere is another benefit to this computer .If you are in class and you just have a blank stare the computer can tell if you are confused or bored .Then it could also modify the lesson .Another example is for online advertisment .If I see an ad that I like and I smile ,then I scroll down and see a similar ad ,but I frown ,it will change the ad just becuase I frowned .This is the same technology used in video games and video surgery .\n\nIn my opinion i dont think this kind technology would be valuable .It might not be accurate all the time and it would cost a lot of money .Instead of using this you can just look at a person and see there emotion .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Some people say computers negitive contributor society In opinion computers positive impact world around us I believe gives people handeye coordination way organized Not people still interacting others nt beleve read details ll feel way I When consider computers give us handeye coordination s way use computer without typing No matter re typing short password page essay ll alway type allows better movement hands This later help sports get exercise Since computers become popular thing think future typing using computer could handeye coordination gives theory whatever think type addition handeye coordination computers provide organization big concern present day life Do picture files laying house Well s need With computers store files neatly might bark easy find everything becomes locate Even doctors computers medical needs give time Computers give organize Furthermore computers continue help instead store say keep friends I talk friends family far away keeps us together gets I m saying always good thing need face face interaction Although arent able get good way talk To conclude computers positivly effect lives We re able get handeye coordination stay organized trouble bring people together nt person You learn new things like people places far away though people think opposite know computers benifit society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagen no longer having to sit though a boring online lecture, being able to find the lecture helpful and not a drag or a bother. Well with technologies like Dr. Huang and Dr. Paul Eckman's FACS or Facial Action Coding System, that is quite possible. With a technology that is able to read and recognise facial expressions, it can help improve students online lectures and help them pay attention and focus. A technoloy like FACS that can read emotions through facial msucle movment would provide the education system with a better way to connect to the students and aid in their emotional focus to the lectures and assignments providing a valuable aid to student education.\n\nEven though humans can already perform similar actions, being able to tell what those around you are feeling by looking at their face. Humans can only \"calculate\" how such individuals are feeling and many fail to get a appropriate calculation. As Dr. Huang notes, \" most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" so for a computer to be able to read nonverbal expressions is very helpful as most students are kept to themselves. A computer with the FACS tecnonly would be able to recongize a studetns needs when learning on line. As Dr. Huang states, \" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored [allowing the computer] to modity the lesson.\" This ability to recognize emotions through facial movment can help improve the students performance by modifying lessosn to meet their educational needs. As some students already have trouble focusing in class and loose attetnion when lessons are boring or they just simply don't understand. Technologies like FACS provide the students with an adaptive and responsive system that will help them improve their focus and learn more affectively.\n\nOn the other hand some people may argue that technologies like FACS are an invasion of privacy. Or that these technologies can not really tell your emotions. These technologie dont do anything millions and millions of people do not already do everyday, read facial expression. The is what tecnologies like FACS do they read and recognize facial movments to determine emotion. Just like all of us do when trying to figure out the feelings of those around us. These techonlogies use a complex level of facial recognition invented and tested by proffesionals like Dr. Huang. As well as Dr. Paul Eckman who studies anatomatical movments and sturcutres. Being able to classify six basic emotions those being, \" happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\". Even though these six can not analyzse every single emotion it will analyzse the one expressed the most.\n\nAllowing those around, like teachers and instructures to aid in figuring out what is wrong with an individual and how to help them perform better.\n\nSo overall technologies like FACS which are able to read facial muslce movments are benefitail to student learing. A technoloy capable of adapting to analysed human emotion will help studnets learn , focus and feel more attented to in their learning. By identifying the emotion these technologies can also help teachers and guidecne counselors work towards aiding those students which are emotinally depressed and need help but wont verbally say it. Such technologies not only offer a way to aid and improve student attention in learning but also help those students who hide their emotional prolems, which affect their learning by having teacehrs and counselors provide that help thanks to technologies that can read emotional expressiosn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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