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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Driverless cars may, or may not come. There are alot of things that the future may hold, and driverless cars may be one of them. From my point of view i do not belive that\n\nin the future we are going to have driverless cars because, cars are just like something that the world needs. Not having cars would just make the world\n\nmiserable.\n\nIn paragragraph two shows how google cars aren't 100% driverless . so in my oppion if google cant do it, it is going to be hard for other people to create it. The aurthor makes a good point of the story, but i dont belive it. In the story it states that alot of brand name cars would be able to drive themselves. Well many years ago articals stated that around this\n\ntime in 2016 we were suppose to have flying cars.\n\nNow days people makes things sound so good with the technology. exspecually with cars.I think in the next couple of years technology will get better, but for now ii think they should stop syaing what they are going to do and how they are going to do it and do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this reading, the author is talking about exploring venus, but all his evidence speaks differently. I believe the author does not support the clam that Venus is a worthy pursuit because the evidence given is mediocre. He contradicts himself in many paragraphs proving why we shouldn't send people over, and has not given any reason why we should go over there.\n\nIn this short persuasive article, the author does not pursuade at all. In paragraph two, the backround of Venus is given, but it's not stated why its important to visit this planet. \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\" The only valid reason givin in this short story is when it is said in paragraph 4, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" This statement gives no reason for traveling and researching Venus except for the fact it used to be like Earth.\n\nThough it is said Earth is one of a kind, this article states Venus is the most like Earth planet they've ever found. That could be a valid reason to explore and consider inhabiting, but it is proven with evidence that Venus is inhospitable and would serve no purpose in researching and visiting. In paragraph three, it is said, \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" These conditions are said to be inhospitable in paragraph four. It is also said, \"Such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our ocean and liquify.\" This evidence says the planet is almost impossible to visit and collect data on, except in the fifth paragraph, it is a very long explanation as to how we could even study venus. This is then contradicted in the sixth paragraph by saying photography and videography are ineffective because of the thick atmosphere, and no samples would be possible because the ground conditions are too bad for humans, and even metal.\n\nIn conclusion, the evidence the author has given us condradicts and outweighs the evidence given for the idea Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, meaning he did not support this idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thet face on the red planet was not made by aleans it haped naturaly. Also theres no prove that the aleans did it just like people think that the pyramids were helped by aleans to build the pyramids. But the face looks like an egypion pharaohs face. What we can see is that it looks like a humans face. The face was first seen in a Hollywood film and think the face is bona fide.\n\nBut NASA still has no prov of alean ecestens. NASA took a pictur of the face and proved it was a nateral formland and that there was no aleans but not evryone was oky with that. Other studed the pictur and ther were alean markungs hidden by haze. So NASA went back even tho it was going to be hard work. They zoomed in as much as posebl. They colled see things that looked like littele airplanes ,or Egygtian-style pyramids or even small shacks.\n\nLike on Earth ther are things that look like other rhing but cant be ecsplandd how they were formed or how they were formed by. That is my finel conclusion of the face that if marked on the red planet. I think it was made naturaly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is wise that election is chosen by popular vote. I think that it should be kept this way, and all that are Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote. Election by popular vote is an easier choice and makes things more simple. It could give candidates more of a chance to get elected. Time would be wisely saved if all states had the same system, it would give people more of a chance to get elected.\n\nIn the Electoral College voters vote for a portion of electors, not the president. The Electoral College is unfair to voters, this process is just undated and not right. A lot of states may not even see their candidates. If election by popular vote is used more than the places that don't, then they should be changed.\n\nIt is just easier to decide when there are more or less voters. The Electoral College just has less of a chance to be kept. If every state did the same to elect then it would be easier to decide who should be the president of the United States.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is not a legitimate face or a creation of aliens. Conspiracy theorists seem to think it really is. The landform is comparable to the multitude or butte or mesa landforms found here on Earth. The picture taken in 2001 has three times the pixels sizes compared to the pixels in '76, also if this Martian landform was indeed crafted by aliens it would benefit NASA a lot.\n\nThe Face on Mars can be compared to the lot of landforms in the Western America. One scientists, Garvin, recalled \"it reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River in the Snake RIver Plain of Idaho.\" This can also be a reminder of other landforms, such as the Appilachian Mountain or Old Faithful- the water geyser at Yosemite National Park. In Cydonia, there are also quite a few odd landforms. The Face is just another one of the many unexplainable formations on Mars.\n\nThe day the picture of the Face was taken, the people in the spacecraft had to go through many misty clouds. That day was a cloudy day on Mars. The picture taken had three times the pixels than the picture taken in April of 1998.The picture was clearer and one could see that the shadows that creates the parts\n\nof the face are just only shadows. The only unusual thing about it was that it looked \"like an Egyptian Pharoh.\"\n\nThe main reason conspiracy theorists would believe the Face in an alien craft is because it is an unusual landform. NASA scientists wanted more attention toward Mars and they wish there really was an Ancient Martian colony. It would benefit NASA and its funding.\n\nOne now can come to the conclusion that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. The Martian landform is quite similar to the ones found in western America. The original picture taken in '76 had less pixels making the picture appear odd, and if this was a formation created by aliens, NASA would use it as a benefit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, these days, climate alterations are happening extremely. It is often argued that either people have to find a way to avoid weather changes or must try to live in these horrible situations. I fully agree with this fact that although people can adapt themselves to climate changes, it is better to keep weather circumstances constant. In turn, this essay will discuss why preventing climate remodeling is better than finding a way of living in this situation.\n On the one hand, the more climate alters, the more life becomes harder. That is to say that people gained the capability to adapt themselves to the present climate within the millions of years, thus they cannot live easily with increased temperature, which happened recently. As a strategy, people can plant trees to decrease global warming, which nowadays is being converted to a serious problem. Trees are unthinkably capable to reduce the temperature and are able to absorb the CO2 (carbon dioxide), which in high concentrations can damage human body cells and eventually leads to cell death. For instance, in forest countries, several kinds of cancers such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are extremely rare. In my opinion, enhancement of trees cultivation can secure the survival of planet Earth. To sum up, tree cultivation can help people to prevent the climate change, significantly. \n On the other hand, the more consumption of fossil fuels, the more changing climate. Some people declare that consumption of fossil fuels increase the atmospheric pollutants as well as the weather temperature causing several damages to the environment. Hence, for preventing climate changes, consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced. For example, in the recent decade that the weather temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 oC, the rate of fires increased by up to 12%. So, usage of fossil fuels is considered as the main agent of global warming. I believe that consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced by humans to decreased atmospheric pollutants happens. To take something into consideration, in some situations, people can also adapt themselves with difficult environmental conditions not easily but hardly.\n To summarize, some people are of the opinion that modification of climate change can happen easily, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that the enhancement of trees cultivation and reduction of consuming fossil fuels can help people to avoid the climate changes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood grate full cuba central goverment sneek get Cuba Well felt Great full What parents give better life I usto like parents took plane stay overdid We usto nothing docoments years passed gotting documents finally beloved green card So great full honorable parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think Facial Action cording system should not be able to identify human emotions. As in pargraph 1 it says, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent,and 2 percent angry\". What if those percentages are wrong. Those percentages could not be real just by looking at the image she could of been happy. Those emotions are just identified by a computer, not all technology could be right. The computers/technology just identify but could be wrong by looking at the face of the image/picture they have used to dectect the emotion.\n\nAs in pargraph 3 it says, \"The process begins when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model of the face\". Ther computer cops the face of the image and copys and make it 3-D. The expression is compared against a neutral face. The motion that is shown is showing no emotion at all which. The computer that they use shows wether the face is happy or sad.\n\nThe computers use calculation to show wether the face of the image is happy or sad. There is certain muscles in every face that make the bonestructor make it what you look like. There are six emotions that are used every day sad,mad,happy,scared,disgust,and susprised. I think computers/technology should not be able to dectect the emotion just by what the picture/image looks like. There muscles that move in your body every day that is called an \"Action unit\" as it says in pargraph 3.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more and more people are using their own private car as the major means of transportation. But, overusage of car from people can lead to air pollution and destruction to the environment as greenhouse gases are produced, which are harmful to our body. To solve this problem, many countries are encouraging people to use electronic car or campaigning to use bus or train when they commute.\n2 weeks ago, I saw an environmental documentary from the television and I heard the cause of air pollution. There were many factors that could effect the air pollution, but one of the factors was the usage of the car. When we ride a car, the car produces harmful chemical gases such as carbon dioxide that lead to foggy weather. If we inhale this gases often, our lungs will become unhealthy and in worst case, lead to death. Therefore, over-reliance on cars will increase the number of people with lung disease as they produce bad chemicals.\nTo prevent production of harmful chemicals from the car, many people have to use bus or train for transportation rather than their private car, so government have to do campaign to use them and make festival to persuade people to use public transport. This will help the environment to reduce greenhouse gases and people to inhale more fresh air than before.\nIn conclusion, many people prefer to ride the private car as it is more comfortable, however, the consequences of usage of car are harmful to the environment and people's health, therefore government should educate or persuade people to use public transports instead of riding a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author thinks that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. Venus had previous missions that were unmanned. There would be no spacecraft that survived the landing for more than a few hours. These issues would explain why not a single spaceship would land on Venus in more than three decades. Venus is a very challenging planet for us humans to study it.\n\nFirst of all, what would be more challenging would be studying the clouds of its highly corrosive sulfuric acid. \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest part of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" This means that with any condition that the Venus is having they would be very extreme. Venus has the hottest temperature than any other planet in our solar system.\n\nSecondly, since the National Aeronutics and Space Administration have an idea of sending humans to study Venus. They have to make sure they are safe and that they are aware of what the humans are going to do. \"Peering at Venus from ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmostphere.\" Researchers think that seeking to conduct a mission to understand Venus would have to get close to our planet.\n\nAlso, when the sientist had approached on studying the Venus they had simplified some electronics that made silicon carbide. These have been tested in a chamber stimulating the chaos of Venus's surface.\n\n\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" Once the scientist had finished their research they have found their conclusion.\n\nIn conclusion I think the author is right because we have to be aware of what is close to our planet and if it's dangerous or not. The Venus was very challenging for humans to study. It had many things that would confuse the humans while they study. Venus is just another normal planet like ours but it has its own differences. Venus is a hotter planet even though Mercury is closer to the sun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had just graduated college and his friend Don Reist invited Luke to go to Europe with him. Luke said yes because it was an opportunity of a lifetime and he could not pass it up. Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLuke said, \"Being a Seagoing Cowboy he got to see Europe, China and he got to see the Acropolis in Greece.\" He got to see so many great sites. Luke toured an excaveted castle in crete and he marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nLuke had to travel a lot. But, even though it took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United states and a month to get to China. On the long journey\n\nLuke stayed busy by taking care of animals. Taking care of animals and traveling was not all Luke did on the boat, the cowboys played lots of games. Some of the games they played was baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals lived. They also did table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling and other games to pass time.\n\nLuke said that \"being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure.\" For Luke it opened up the world to him. Luke had a lot of fun seeing different sites, meeting new people, playing fun games and caring for people in a different, and better way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I agree experts said computer shod used becouse said people dos need computers becouse important computers serch fast people communicate computer People computer houses becous need need sometime take minutes word look computer see second thus way shoud stay computer need computer thus important becouse time unother stand sometheng looked counter like stolen homework know important person learned computer easy Some people computer home But go thing away I think spend time famely But computer become need Some people games play But important home work people Jobs need computer need compute like one wants police officiar police officiar They littler computer car serch store thas important police I know thus moust famely wants together spend time famely abot us future need computer help us need computer future And thas oppeneang help agree words", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "''Are you kidding me, you actually think that figure on mars was created by aliens?'' ''Yeah I do, if it isn't aliens then who or what made that face on mars.''\n\n''I dont know how that got there, but i'm telling you now it wasn't made by aliens.''\n\nAs you can see the three different photos showing the figure on mars was just a misunderstanding. In the 1976 photo it looks blury, but in 1998 and 2001 photos you can see it more cleary. In the article it states '' The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.'' So that means the clouds made it look like a face.\n\nAlso during 1976 the pixels on the camera could have been bad so it could't take clear pictures. In the image 3 it shows it more clearly, so that means technology has gotten better. According to the article it says ''Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. That proves that the camera in 2001 was better then the camera in 1976.\n\nNobody will ever know if aliens made that figure on mars that looks like a face.\n\nIt could have been a butte or a mesa. For example in the passage it states ''There must have beem a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on their monitors. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\n''So there, I proved to you that the face on mars was just a mesa.'' ''I don't care what you say im sticking to my opinion.'' ''Okay what ever, I know i'm right and you're wrong.''", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common instinct which has been observed in most communities that they have become interested in fetching about the pre-history of the building they live in, and this essay will discuss the main reasons why people can research this practice and will be concluded at the end. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, curiosity is not only a key factor, which has been identified in most individuals but also keenness to know the pre-history of the estate will lead folks to gather information about the house they live in. Consequently, the crowd would be interested in finding the truth about their home before they step in. For example, an article had a survey which unveiled that 60 per cent of the population across the globe are eagerly capturing predecessor's data of the building they live in. In addition, getting pre-information is necessary and it will reveal legal issues of the building indeed.\r\n\r\nFurther, there are many ways that people can research vacant homes or buildings. Firstly, consumers can go to the local county which has registration data about equity. Secondly, individuals can check with indigenous folks who are residing around the house. So, this is one of the best ways to know about the history of the building. For instance, we can see in the USA, if you need to buy a home, aspirants must get the no objection certificate from the roads and building department. Consequently, consumers will get a clearance certificate before purchasing any home.\r\n\r\nTo summarize, after a thorough discussion of the above it is always recommended that communities must research any properties or buildings before they occupy, and there are many ways to know about the property before purchasing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supported his idea well. They gave us exaplmes, comparrisons, and even facts.The author in this story supports his details by comparing life on venus and how it is differient from earth. The author in paragraph 3 talked about the tempeture there and how its a lot differeint from earth.\" the planets tempeture on average over 800 degrees fahrenheit.\" This is much greater than our home planet. The National Aeronautics and space administration (NASA) believe that maybe we could live on Venus. This evidence is in paragraph 5.\n\nThey have been testing silicon in a chamber and they\n\nsimulate the pressure and tempeture that is on Venus and it has lasted weeks in the chamber. This evidence is in paragraph 7. They compared that our technology is more fragile now and that the surface and tempeture on venus is enough to melt tin and to image what it could do to our current\n\ntechnology. This evidence is from paragraph 7. In conclusion the only real way to know if we could live on Venus is to stimulate the temptures and pressures and we test it out our selfes before sending people to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The latest technological advancements provide people with various entertainment resources. While there is an opinion that video games and films with violence could provoke many dire consequences and therefore should be banned, others disagree and think that it is just a way to unwind. In the essay, I will examine both views and explain why I consider that the content is dangerous not only for adults but also for children. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, mental stability is crucial nowadays. Indeed, when people are exposed to different stressors, it affects a lot on their mood. For example, while a person unconsciously absorbs negative information throughout screens, he is prone to constant feelings of depression and apprehension, and this, in turn, may even lead to suicide. Moreover, such a situation happens even if people do not perceive violence as something bad. \r\n\r\nThe other point that is worth to be mentioned is the exposure of the young generation. Indeed, children are more sensitive to information that they see during playing or watching video games. As a result, when they are exposed to brutal scenes with murders, for example, a child might get used to violent actions and eventually consider abnormal behaviour as normal; thus, in the future, he could become a criminal or even a murder. That is why I think that we should prohibit children to play games that contain scary scenes. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many people underestimate the influence of pictures that can be seen on screens. Regardless of whether people think that it is a relaxing activity, I think that there is a severe impact on adults because they become more depressed and on children since they change their attitude to the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses fatcs to support why Venus is a realluy hard planet to study cause landing a humanon the planet will be very difficult and dangerous. In paragraph 3 it says that the planets surface is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than here on earth. So really from what we can tell off what theauthor has said, humans will not even last a second on the planet because it is really HOT.\n\nWhy till this day are scientist still trying to discover it more? Well some believe that long ago their was water and that the planet was covered up with oceans just like the earth is today. They speculate that the planet venus had supported life just like the planet we live on, but again they are the second planet away from the sun so they really get burned up and maybe thats why the oceans went away. But today Venus is very similar like Earth because the planet has some very rocky surfaces just like our planet does and stuff andf also mountains. Researchers are looking to see if they can build a suit that would withstand the heat and the acidic clouds the planet has.\n\nThe author has used many details and has describe venus in many ways. the author has also compared Venus to Earth despite looks. So really in conclusion i think that going to venus will be very hard to do but its not impossible. If somehow their was a suit that would withstand the heat and acidic clouds than maybe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates specific mood Same throughout memoir The mood memoir comforting happy mood One way mood talked enviorment Showed great sense family I think family I see mood comforting happy Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative This showed mood family always took people made feel welcomed reason mood comforting happy talked people nice kind everyone met It close nit community honest hardworking immigrants extend hand people necessarily kind Clearly need This memoir showed happy comforting mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author feels that further studys on Venus are dangerous but worth the time and effort. In this passage he discribes the conditions and states the challenges that come with the exploration of Venus\n\nVenus, our lovely \"Evening Star\" or our \"Sister planet\", sounds beaustiful doesnt it. Don't be fooled by the nicknames of this planet, have you ever heard \"Looks can be deseaving? If so you shoud keep that in mind when you are thinking about Venus. Venus is the second planet from the sun but\n\nhas the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the entire solar system, even with Mercury being the closest to the sun. With an atmosphere of almost 97 perent carbon dioxide, and temperatures 170 degrees miles away, living there would be impossible. On the surface there are erupting valcanos, huge earthquakes, and probes that land on its surface have been reported to be shocked by lighning. Venus got the Sister planent name due to its similar dencity and size to planet earth, there also is a therey that Venus was one coveredwith oceans, rocky sediments similar to valleys and mountains and could have been obtaining\n\nsome type of life forms.\n\nHumans are known for their curiosety, even when it could leave them dead. In order to do any further reacurch on Venus, technologys that can withstand insane amounts of heat would have to be created then tested. Scientists have yet to explore enough of Venus, it is difficult to collect rocks, dust, or gasses for any type of examination. I feel that in the future, a scientist will create a device that can help explore the surface of Venus safely amd effectively.\n\nReading this passage really made me interested in learning about venus, and i also feel that further exploration would be worth waiting for the correct technology. Further studies would be effective because we would know more about the mystories of space.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez mood created author The mood authors creates writing passage cultural like Because reason That uses good detail decribing home character For example Cuban music I adore day This shows beautifull cultural musicAnother way cultral mood says My young parents created traditional cuban home This shows took Cuba brang Also wanted like home missIn memoir ways describe mood author created But I think cultral mood one bigger ones Thats I showed two paragraphs", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. in the fourth paragraph it says venus is the most like our solar system. \"long ago, venus was probably coverd largley with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\". i believe scientests should go to venus or at least try. if they can get there and study the planet, we will find out new stuff. what if scientists figure out there can be life forms in the planet. that would mean we could have a whole new world. in paragraph 5 it says \"The national aeronautics and space administration (NASA) had sent a human to venus\". when they sent that person he/she survied. \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. every day people are studying this planet. i think maybe one day people will be able to live on venus and that venus might be our new planet. this is why i think studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although earning money is one of the most important factors when people conduct business, those who run companies should take social responsibility. In my opinion, while generating profit is the top priority for each company, I agree that firms should have the responsibility to society.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons why firms should allocate resources to help the community. Firstly, this may help companies promote their public image and increase their sales figures. For example, big corporations such as Vinamilk and FPT should have philanthropic activities such as providing scholarships and giving charitable donations to help those who are less fortunate. Secondly, production processes may lead to serious environmental degradation such as pollution and global warming stemming from factory emissions and the irresponsible disposal of chemical waste. Thus, firms should spend their income installing waste treatment systems and solving these environmental issues along with the governments.\r\n\r\nHowever, The efforts of businesses to earn their profits may bring some tangible benefits to society. The first reason is that they have the opportunity to expand their businesses thanks to their income. So, this creates new job opportunities for workers and reduces crime in many countries. Another reason is that the more money companies earn, the more taxes they pay to the government. As a result, authorities can have more revenue to spend in key fields such as education, health care, and transportation. So, this contributes to improving the quality of life of local communities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although I recognize that increasing profits is the fundamental principle of business, I would argue that all companies should be responsible for society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. This essay will discuss both these views with examples and show that while some people esteem physical strength, it is important to think of mental stretgth as a companion of physical strength which give any person in sports agility and flexibility.\nPhysical strength has been supported by many people as an important factor for success in sport. Those who think that physical strength is more important believe that it is a person's physique that is required to win any sport. For instance, in a study conducted by the Australisn National Team among sport fanatics in Perth, 80% of participants stated that physical strength was everything that any person involved in any kind of sport required to be succesful. Some participants in this study cited soccer as one such sport requiring physical strength. These findings were supported by another study conducted by a PhD student at the University of Sydney. The student concluded that while mental strength was important in any physically inclined sport, it was difficult to measure brain resources recquired to engage in sports like running.\nOn the other hand, some people think that mental strength gives stamina and agility to any person involved in sports. One prominent argument in this school of thought is that the body is a slave of the mind. Every action taken by the body is a response to the triggers initiated in the mind. Therefore, nourishing and strengthening mental capacity translates to physical strength. In a research study conducted among college students in America, it was found that mental strength was more esteemed than physical strength. It was argued in this study that mental strength was the breath that gave life to physical strength.\nIn conclusion, it can be argued that the reality of both mental and physical strength and their role in supporting a succesful sports career is not painted in black and white. A physically strong person needs to use their mental strength to plan and outwit their opponent. They also need tact and flexibility of the body which stem from the coordination between the body and the mind. As such, both mental and physical strength are important in supporting a successful sports career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affects cyclist setting wont lots hills Also water For example story He says hilly area Also says buliding self make scared So setting affects cyclist hot dry cimate water builiding peole ask direcions would make scared lost fearful going happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again I think author includes paragraph show persistant Saeng Saeng persistant trys test also trys get used new country It demonstrates story says quote This quote shows Saeng try something fail determined try succeed Also story Saeng moved one country another This huge jump confident persistant The way author concludes story when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again definitely portrays Saeng main character persistant person purpose quote", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not A Face\n\nThe Face on Mars is just a natural landform, although some people believe that the Face is bona fide edvidence of life on mars I can insure you its not. I can give three good reasons why I am insisting that this sculpture is just a rock. First of all we had a better camera when we went back to investigate. Second of all we double cheaked our reasch. And third of all both results proved that it indeed was just a landform, much like Americas.\n\nIn 1998 we send a special team called the MOC to investigate the Face. The MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original photos back in 1976. These photos came back stating that it was a natural land form. But not everyone was satisfied. At that time the MOC had took the photo it was winter in April '98 on the planet- a cloudy time of the year on mars. The camera might have been fogged.\n\nTwo prove ower statement in 2001 we sent the MOC to take a second photo of the Face this time during the planets summer and with an even better camera. This newer camera had higher definition than the other two. When results came back they, again, stated a natural land mark.\n\nAs you can see not only did we cheak once but twice both supporting NASA'S claim that \"the Face of Mars\" was just a rock after all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that, the principle goal of school is to make their students an appropriate resident and employee.This essay completely agrees with the given statement as these will give benefit to the whole nation and the students become successful employee in the future.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, during a schooling period, each and every pupil is being taught by their teachers to become a generous and a responsibility towards the country.If an adolescent do any wrong thing, an educator stops them and teach that how hazardous consequences happen due to this.For example, The London Times newspaper reveals that, 50% of students who grabbed moral values what they learned in school, are now a genuine citizen and achieve respective social status in the community due to their well being.Hence, by learning cultural values through the tutors, a person will give his determination for the amelioration of the nation.\r\n\r\nSecondly, school grants up to the mark education to all the kids.Students who take this seriously would pursue a higher degree at the university due to their strong curriculum base in the school.Just then, by doing work with his intelligence, he will get all the success in his employment.In order to this, he could earn a good amount of money, which makes his life easy-going and luxurious.For instance, Delhi Public School stated that, their 30% of students, who was always cleared their exam with above 80% are now at the top post on their respective branch.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, instead of teaching a beneficial skill to the pupil, I believe that the major focus of school to make their pupil a good resident of the country and a successful employee will lead to fruitful consequences not only for the whole nation but also for a children themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow derigibles dock In excerpt author states nature one biggest problems mast The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The author explains wind top buildings dangerous dirigible The winds top buildings constantly shifting due violent air currents The author also describes dirigible would affect wind Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast Those obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow derigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Their are so many advantages of limiting car usage, for example having no car might even make someone happy, Heidrun Walter says \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Also driving cars can cause a lot of pollution, passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of the green house gas emissions in Europe. France had intense smog because of vehicles, it went 60 percent down after five days of no vehicle use.\n\nAnother benefit of no vehicle usage is instead of driving a car, you can go hiking, biking, skating , or take buses to your destination. \"It's a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two seat bicycle with his wife. The day without cars has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, which is the most of any other Latin American city. Parks and sports centers bloomed throughout the city on the day without cars in Bogota.\n\nAlso, in the United States Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses. Instead of driving vehicles to work, one can carpool with a workmate. New York has a new bike sharing program anits skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect new priorities, aswell as car-sharing programs across the nation. Driving by young people decreased 23 percent as of 2001 to 2009.\n\nEven though driving a car might get you to your destination quicker, it is better to go on a train, bike, skate, bus, taxi, carpool, or even walk because when you use a car too much you pollute the Earth. Biking, skating, and walking can also be fun sometimes, so stop driving a car and do something more alternative and less air pollutive, save the Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The overall mood created author memoir one complete gratefulness The author extremely thankful parents sacrifice love care selflessness He also creates mood happiness unity overall loving seen throughout lifetime The author describes gratefulness towards parents remembering leave cuba native country friends family jobs behind wished give child wished better life opportunities could found He thanks parents repeatedly throughout memoir love caring family friends selflessness brought life He describes situations parents make new friends family around neighborhood sense love friendship unity found As family got larger author talks childhood small threeroom apartment made completed home When details combined along language I ve thanked repeatedly mood feeling utter gratefulness felt throughout memoir Narciso Rodriguez", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty Five years ago, a strange object was is the eyes of our fellow astronauts. They had seen a face looking object on the Red Planet called Cydonia. Researching for quite awhile, I knew it was nothing but a natural occurence. My fellow scientists thought the same as I did. For many years, people have assumed it was created by aliens.\n\nMesas are common around Cydonia. This one just happened to have an odd characterisitc; the face like shadow. This makes the skeptics believe it was made by aliens, but it is just natural. Few scientists believed it was an alien artifact, but I personally knew that anything strange is able to happen.\n\nWe photographed Cydonia as much as we could. At the time, it was winter. By it being winter, it was very cloudy. Many skeptics believe that there is alien markings hidden by haze. We took another look at Cydonia is April, when we could get a clear shot. Our extremely detailed camea captured nothing but the same face. If there were to be any artifacts left by aliens, our high resolution cameras would have caught them. In a clear picture, there is nothing visibly there.\n\nIn the picture, we could see there was a butte or mesa which are landforms common in the American West. The mesa or butte on Mars has been compared to the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho.The Middle Butte is a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa aroung the same length as the Face on Mars. If you were to compare the two, you can infer that they are similar. That is proof that the landform can occur naturally in any way, shape, or form.\n\nViking 1 captured our phots the first time and they were not clear. So when we took a better picture, the public could see it was a natural landform. We put alot of research into this phenomenom to see if it could be from aliens. Skeptics may doubt us, but we know and we did the research. For any skeptics with theories, I would be glad to reassure you with my own credible knowlede that this is extremely incorrect, and that you should belive the people who have learned so much more. These landforms are common but there is no control over how they form.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, advertising is the heart of sale for many marketing and service-based firm, and due to the high amount of competition majority of the agency spends a high amount of money on advertising to influence people to buy their product. I completely agree with the statement and the reason behind this will be explained in subsequent paragraphs with measures to protect a high amount of advert.\n\nFirstly,It is true that most consumers follow their favourite celebs on different social media platforms and the firm takes advantage of this fan base to purchase their product via advertising their respective product. To explain further, most of the Indian celebrity adverts for many clothing brands with different look, and consumer consumes their content on a daily basis so they are influenced to buy the same clothes that their role model wear With this trick firm influences many individuals to buy their product.\n\nSecondly, the Agency collects lots of consumer data on a daily basis and uses the same data to showcase its product via advertising. To explain further whenever consumer visits their website they store their data via website cookies and then they try to create urgency to purchase their product Whenever you open any social media like Facebook or Instagram you often see the product that you had searched for on the internet because firms have your data and they use that information to attract their potential client via digital ads. \n\nIt is necessary to make some rules for companies to make advertising and not make false promises in their advertising to prevent this government plays a vital role, the government has to make some laws for making ads with this we prevent the overwhelming ad. Firstly, it customer's responsibility to check the brand's details while purchasing any stock. Secondly, a buyer must not buy anything just their loveable celebrity advertised that. like, the advertisement is done by Ajay Devgan, which is basically for tobacco products that are harmful to our health even though he even didn't taste them for themselves.\n\nTo sum up, I totally agree with the view which stated that consumers often purchase the product with ad influence. although it is necessary to make some laws for adverts thus consumers get the right product.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A group of public argue that young children should serve a community free of cost in their leisure time, which helps to carry out fruitful results for both of them. I strongly support that view of people because doing social tasks will not only help teenagers and chance to explore skills but also provides helping hands to people.\r\n\r\nBeing engaed in social working, give mentally and physically satisfation to juveniles. In their busy lifestyle, they don’t have time for extra curriculum activities, get more depressed. But working on community task give a chance to them to divert their energy in a good way which helps to reduce their depression. For example :- a study carried out by a university in the United States in which get results that adolescents who serve for community for 10 hours are less likely to feel depressed as compared to those who do not work volunteer.\r\n\r\nLikewise, doing volunteer work with youngsters give aid to society for a better living environment. Many organizations effort for the improvements of structure and environmental conditions of the society which leads a people to obtain the superior quality of living style. like:-In India a campaign was started by the Indian Prime Minister with unpaid workers in which they sweep roads and planted herbaceous trees on the sides of roads to overcome air pollution which ultimately benefits local crowd.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think, volunteer work is two-sided benefits, so during step forward for public work by juveniles utilize their energy in a positive direction and individuals get welfare in society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to travel the seas? Or be a cowboy? or BOTH? Then join the Seagoing cowboys! The Seagoing cowboys help recover their food supplies, animails and more! 44 nations come and join together to form the UNRRA. The Seagoing Cowboys help contries recover from the World Wars.\n\nOnce you get on to the ship, there will most likely be a cargo ship of 335 horses with hay and oats to feed them. There are jobs like, feeding the animals, the animails needs to be fed and watered two or three times a day. The stalls had to be cleaned and on your second trip, You might be lucky enough to be a night watchman. Night watchman are soupossed to check on every animal every hour.\n\nWhen you are a seagoing cowboy, there is fun and adventures. it can take up to a month to get to china and about two weeks to cross the alantic ocean. And, after the animals get unloaded there will be games like, Baseball and vollyball games in the empty holds where the animals were housed. Table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games also helped passed the time when they were on their way back to the U.S.\n\nBeing an Seagoing cowboy for Luke was way more than an adventure in his opoion. It opened up the world to him, and made him aware of people of other contries and their needs. If Luke was not to be part of the Seagoing cowboys, he would probaly be stuck with his two part time jobs in an grocery store and a bank and could probaly miss a huge opportunity of going on an adventure. To conclude, You should join the Seagoing cowboys to have a great time with friends, travel,help out contries and especsilly, go on adventures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "many people world think always computer good talk people online learn world But people disagree I one people Spending much time computer really affect life People stop exercising nt enjoy beauty nature life nt spending enough time family friends So I hope read letter take information consideration First people spend lot time computer nt getting exercise body needs They become lazy nt want anything This bad affect health rest life People become overweight since got lazy always computer wo nt go get exercise body needs People need enjoy life By always computer wo nt able many fun healthy things body You go play sports fun getting exercise Many people try encourage family friends But family friends lazy anything always computer Instead stay inside house cooped nt get enough fresh air This horrible thing Your body needs fresh air start enjoying life little people Finally people lose contact family members friends busy computer playing games I know I would nt want lose friend internet ever I nt think anyone else would want either I lost friend two I nt talk much I used I busy computer games I felt horrible I nt realize I I really would nt want anyone else lose contact family member lose friend internet Its horrible nt feel like anymore Once I would like tell always internet good You become lazy want anything etc people nt enjoying life fullest lose contact family member lose friend spend much time computer I hope reading realize computer always good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus ia a worthy pursuit despite because thick atmosphere is\n\nalmost 97 percent carbon dioxide,venus have been\n\nearth- like planet in our solar system, also venus orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions.\n\nAtmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide because on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmopheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. In the text it states \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to driving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" so i think this means that nasa will not send humans into venus becasue they are not 100 percent if its safty for humans , or any objects.\n\nVenus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. Venus have been earth-like planet in our solar system. In the text it states that \" venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\" In the text it also states that \" today venus sill has some features that are analogous to those on earth.\" Wow this is scary how an other planet had living things in it. But this can still\n\nprove that it can\n\nhave living things.\n\nVenus orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions.researchers can't take smaples from venus because the distance.\n\nIn the text it states that \" many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long anough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.\" This shows that researchers are doing what ever it takes to find what venus is all about.\n\nI believe Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, and venus has been earth-like planet in our solar system, also venus orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college has many reasons it should stay , but more reasons why it should be gone. The electoral college is giving people false hope in the election, yet many people think there choosing the president , or they have voice when really the choose the electors who choose the president. The election should be chosen by popular vote afterall it is the peoples \"say\" who runs there country.\n\nIn the electoral college who really has a voice apparently not the people. In the article \"What is the Electoral College \" author \"The Office Of The Federal register\" it proclaims \" You help choose your state electors when you vote for president because when you chose your canditate you actually vote for your candidates electors. It is evident that many people really not dont know who there \"voting\" for in the democratic government . We have discovered the decision isn't in the people hands , but did we think about how \"the electors could always defy the will of the people\" in the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College\" author Bradford Plumer says , and he makes a valid point no matter if your candidate wins by a landslide the electors still choose who becomes president.\n\nAnother reason why the electoral college should be changed into popular vote is because each has a diffrent amount of electors. If you thought not being able to actually your president was wrong, but what about your state having fewer or more electoral votes ,and thats the deciding factor on if your candidate wins. Author of the \" The Indefinsible Electoral College\" Pulmer states \"at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voter, because of the winner-take -all system in each state,candidates dont spend time in states they know thaey hace no chance in winning\". The electoral college should be done away with imediately not only is the democratic system is not so democratic , but its not letting the peoples voice be heard.\n\nFuthermore it is evident that the election should be based on popular votes. And if its based on popular votes the people voices will be heard , and they will actually have a say in which candidate wins . And isn't that why America is so special because it lets peoples voices be heard. Dont take that distinctive factor away because it makes\n\nThe United states\n\nOf America what it is today \"\n\nfree\n\n\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you do not know how your life going to be and it is a huge and amazing opportunity.\n\nYou will be helping others who been affected by World War ll. You will be able to travel places you never been like China or the Pacific Ocean. You can get a chance to go to Greece and see wat it is like out there and get a chance to get out of the USA.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys program and help the poor and homeless people get in the UNRRA so they will not be hungry and live a better life. You casn help all the people. in Europe and give them food and stuff so they do not starve to death and try to get them a home and thery will not be left out and hungry.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboys Program you can see the horses and feed them and stuff. Some people love animals so they can help out with the horese and other animals. You will have the Nightwatch and go and see iuf all the cows and horses are on the ship. But when it is raining and nyou on nightwatchb you will have to be careful because you can slip and break your bone or crack them and even worse you caN slip off the deck and be in the ocean or where you go but if you slip off there are some strong currents that can pull you down and you can drown or they can pull you away from the ship and take you to a island", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now days people get offended anything In todays trying time readers listeners even wirters trying get want consumer wants Even though stories books articles completly bogus nt matter Dont let others opinions ruin everyone else Many people get offended days absolutly nothing feel need somthing whitch nesessarly nt bad thing nt good thing eitherIt freedom speach thats constitution says meaning folks right read write say anything please Fake bogus writings small problem readers writers People reading articles book believing every bit read write even hear radio recent times It hard believe anything days never really know facts unless experence self Opinions big thing folks look still goes back freedom speach Reading writing wonderful thing around longer human ever know Just nt let readers opinions get way great thing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator: I'am writing you this letter to inform you that I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College. Why? Because this progress is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. A dispute over the out come of an Electoral College vote is possible, it happened in 2000. All of this reasons are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal.\n\nThe Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast. It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. In Electoral College the electors are the one who elect the president not the people and my opinion is that its a good idea because not everyone has the same opinion. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors.\n\nThe meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. This process consists of 538 electors. The amount of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the President. The district of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of The Electoral College. Each candidate that is running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors. It is necessary to have this groups so you can be the president.\n\nWell Senator I hope you like this letter and feel sure why you have to keep the Electoral College. I know you would keep it because you are a good Senator and you want the best for everyone in the state. Remember that this is very important for the people who think that you should keep this very important process that has grow in all state of the United States of America.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want a driverless car? Well this might change your mind. Many people think if you get a driverless car you can just sit there. No doesn't work that way let me tell you why.\n\nSergey Brin, cofounder of Google. In the story they said,\"He envisions\n\na future with a public transportation systym where fleets of driverlesscars form a public-transport taxi systym\".\n\nSegey sees driverless cars in the future but does he see safty. I don't know lets see. In the story \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they mentioned Google cars aren't really driverless. They only say driverless to make people think it's cool so they get all those people to buy the qoute on qoute driverless car.\n\nLike the article said driverless cars aren't completely driverless. In 2013 BMW created something called Traffic Jam Assistant. The cars can only go up to 25 mph. BMW put special touch sensors to make sure the driver has control of the steering wheel, acceleration and brake.\n\nIt's really up to the owner of the car to make the decion to drive this vehical. They're making it safer but for now its not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Accommodation is an essential need in our lives. The scarcity of shelter can cause serious problems. Some people believe that it is the state's responsibility to solve the shelter shortage. The government can act by creating affordable housing trusts , introducing new home zones and giving incentives to small builders. I completely agree that it is solely the authority's responsibility to solve shelter deficits in cities.\r\n\r\nThe creation of affordable housing trusts aids by giving people mortgages to buy apartments that can be paid over a certain timeline. Building more apartments and giving loans help to mitigate the problems of housing in towns. For example, an apartment can accommodate a tremendously higher number of individuals than a house which occupies and wastes land. Furthermore, the government can introduce new home zones in virgin lands which are nearby the metropolitan. This is done to empower individuals who want to build houses and are unable to purchase land or apartments in the city. As a result, it helps to decongest the number of people in towns and provides solutions to housing problems.\r\n\r\nAlso, the government should give incentives to small contractors to enter the market of constructing houses as independent builders. Likewise, this helps people who are unable to afford professional builders to build their homes. In doing so the authority will be increasing the number of houses for its citizens.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion ,I believe that it is the state's main responsibility to curb the lack of homes in the metropolitan area by providing several measures to accommodate its citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Technology can be a good thingbor a bad thing depending how one uses it.\" Technology is made to facilitate life for us.\n\nIt would be a good idea to have driverless cars beause it could benifit us with so many things. For example,we wouldn't have to worry about a phsyco taxi driver abducting us in a busy and noisy city because,like the article says , we would have drivless cars who take us where we wish. Nevertheless,having a drivless car would really benifit us with money. The cars Sergin Brin forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexablity than the bus. \"Yes,it will save us money but i would rather pay for my fuel than to risk my life with technology safty we're uncertain of.\"\n\nPeople may be worried about the safety to,of course. The driveless cars will use sensors. Sensores are nothing new since automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. Within those 10 years sensors themself have became much more advanced. Further improvments in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving on their own.\n\nTelsla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time ,mercedes-benz,audi and nissan plan to have cars that can drive themsekves by 2020. The road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us,but we grow closer to the destination every day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the Face from Ailens in Space?\n\nMost people belive that the face on Mars is from aliens on the planet. I disagree with the face being from aliens on the planet and there are a few reasons. It could just be a mesa (a type of land form on Mars). NASA had only unveiled the face to the public so it would get popularity and fame. Lastly the face is equivalent to a landform like a butte or mesa common in the American West. But most though most people belive that the face is an alien artifact.\n\nFirst reason the face is not created by aliens cause. It is a mesa from Mars\n\nsurface. A mesa is usally common on Mars cause they are all over the planet. Also the picture from the spacecraft shows. That it looks like a face but the shadow makes it look like a human face. So over all it is just the way you have to look at the mesa.\n\nThe second reason the Face is not made by aliens and just a mesa because. NASA just want to make the face popular and let it get fame. The space program wanted fame to get money of the Face and try to let every know about it. The Face was in a movie and in books,magazines,and talk shows. That is the only reason NASA unveiled the face to get fame and engage the public.\n\nLasty the finally reason it is not made by aliens cause of how there are land masses like it. The face was equvalent of a butte or a mess landforms are common in the American West. The face can aslo appear on Earth cause it is a landmass.The only reason people thought it was an alien artifact cause of. The shadow that made it looked like a human face.\n\nIn the begining most scientist belived that the face was an. Alien artifact the was created in the ground before we were able to find it. Also people would start to make theorys that aliens know us and sent a symbol that showed us we are not alone. After the sceintis try to see it was a alien artifact. Later they found out it wasnt an alien artifact.\n\nIn concluison I belive that the face was not created by aliens cause of. The face could just be a mesa. NASA only used it to get some fame to the face. Lastly the face was equivalent to a landmass that could happen on Earth. Then some people belived that it is a alien artifact. NASA is always right when they show these kinds of thing to the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is now a new technological software called the Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions. I personally believe that the use of this technology, to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom is valuable. There are many details in the passage that support my argument.\n\nIn paragrapgh 6 of the article, it proclaims, \" \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\" \"Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" In the real world today, students often begin to get bored during, or simply just very confused on the material they are working on. When students begin to get confused or bored, their engagement in learning declines. To have a technology software that could modify the lesson like a human instructor when students are confused, or bored is very valuable.\n\nThe text also states, \" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" When teachers are finished teaching material, they often ask if anyone has any questions. Some students will lie and say they understand the material when they really don't, because they are too embarassed to be critisized if they don't know how to do a certain problem. With this new form of technology, teachers could actually see if everyone is grasping the imformation they are learning,and not just sayig they are when they are not. This is a major advandcemnt in leaing for all students.\n\nThere are many reasons as to why the use of the Facial Action Coding System, which enables computers to identify human emotions, for stuents in the classrooms is valuable. Students often always have negative attitudes or emotions that affect their productive learning. Having this technological system will help teachers understand how students are feeling, and will better approach students. When teachers correctly know how to approach certain students, the students learning will prosper.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI am writing you to explain why the Electoral College system of choosing the president should be changed. The president should be chosen based on popular vote instead of the current system. The Electoral College system is unfair to certain states and somewhat confusing to others. I am certain that my views on this issue are not the only ones.\n\nFirst off, the Electoral College system is unfair to states. Candidates for president don't spend time in states that they know they have no chance of winning in. This is due to the Electoral College morphing the states into a winner-takes-all system as said by the Office of the Federal Regiser in \"What is the Electoral College?\". This means that the winning popular vote in each state wins the electoral vote for that state as well. The thing is, however the number of people voting compared to the number of electoral votes is unfair. I am aware that the number of electoral votes comes from the state's population, but imagine this; California, which has 55 electoral votes gets visited by this to-be-president and wins it over only by a small margin. Wyoming, which has 3 electoral votes, doesn't get a visit by this candidate because he thinks that 55 votes is more important than three and a large majority of this state votes against him. The candidate then loses three electoral votes, but wins 55. Sounds like everything works out well right? Wrong. The other half of the voters in California combined with the majority of voters in Wyoming could have taken the vote if it weren't for the Electoral College. With popular vote the candidates would have to actually care about the states like Wyoming instead of ingnoring them with Electoral College. With the popular vote system everyone has a say.\n\nTo continue, the Electoral College should be replace because of the confusion it causes. Most people believe that when they vote they are voting for president. However, what they dont know is that they are actually voting for a slate of electors. This slate of electors then votes for who they want to be president, and this might not always be the choice you want. With the popular vote system there would be no confusion and no voting on people who you want to vote for you. Do we really know who we're voting for? Or are we just going on luck? The reason why so many americans do not vote is because they think that even though they vote, they do not have a say on who's gonna win. With the popular vote system we could directly vote on who we belive to be the right choice for president.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College system should be replaced because with a popular vote system there would be fairness to all states and no confusion on who you're really voting on. With all of this said, I hope you consider my request and try to make a change.\n\nYours truly,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars could be a alien artifact, but its not. The Face is only a natural land form. The reasons are, conspiracy therorists think NASA would hide evidence of life on Mars. It takes time to prepare for the pictures. It looks like landforms on Earth as well as Mars.\n\nConspiracy therorist think NASA would hide this evidence from the world. Nasa shows an image with a caption that says \"huge rock formation.\"\n\nCydonia became a priority for the Nasa program. Later another team when to go get pictures of the Face and all they found was a natural landform.\n\nIt takes time to prepare the pictures and the launches. NASA sent only 3 teams to go and look at the Face. The reason they did that is because of how much time it could take to prepare for these journeys to space.\n\n\"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" (paragraph 11).\n\nThe Face looks like landforms from Earth as well. The Face landform reminds \"Garvin that it looks mostly like Middle Buttle in the Snake River of Idaho,\" (paragraph 12). \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about he same height as the Face of Mars,\" (paragraph 12).\n\nThe Face of Mars looks like landforms we have on Earth. It takes time to perpare for the space missions. Finally conspiracys think NASA wouldn't show the evidence or hide life. Most of these things can even help the mesa of the Face be another landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent Times, it is a common trend among people to give birth to their offspring when they are old, the demerit surpasses the merit because people will have enough time to groom themselves in order to nurture and grow with their kids,in ,addition they might have made enough money to raise their children, though growing old has its own demerit because giving birth at that age might cause health complications which however could be managed with a lot of care. My points will be explained further in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\n Parenthood comes with a lot of responsibility which one has to be fit mentally to bring forth to children and manage them accordingly, growing old before giving birth will enable the couple to be mature enough both psychologically and emotionally in order to nurture and cater for their kids, as well as having enough time for their children thereby able to meet their needs.\r\n\r\nSubsequently, Young age gives room for youngsters to hustle and make money in order to get ready for the task ahead of raising kids, bringing forth babies at older age will be easy and it will allow people to be able to afford the needs of their children if they had concentrate on making money instead of bringing forth children. For example, some young people cannot bear the expenses of reproduction thereby making them irresponsible to their kids, working hard instead of focusing on raising babies will prevent the shame that comes with not being able to cater for needs.\r\n\r\nHowever, giving birth at a younger age will enable people to grow with their kids and have enough energy to bring them up, also it helps to reduce the complications that accompany elderly procreation. For instance, a reduction in reproductive hormones leads to infertility, also complications in pregnancy.,\r\n\r\nTo conclude , if there is enough time to focus on careers as well as achieving goals at a younger age instead of giving birth, it gives room to be matured both emotionally and financially thereby leading to raising better children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will be talking to you about how scientist's are thinking of putting things on the planet Venus and i wll also talk to you the fasinated thing our planet Venus has to offer. Let's get started shall we.\n\nWell Venus is sometimes called a Evening Star. It's so bright that young stargazer would be able to find it. Venus is very hard to get a good look at, it's the second planet from the sun. It's name can be misleading, and the planet is refrred to earth as our \" twin\" plaents. We haven't been able to send a spacecraft over there yet because of the fact that the stuff we send over there are not able to survive for less than an hour. Scientist's have onle been able to send robots and teven they can't find a safe landing sight.\n\nThe clouds on Venus very corrosive since they have sulfruic acid in them. The air is also 97 percent carbon dioxide. The planet also has the hostest surface, it's tempurature can reach 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric preasure is also 90 times greater than Earth's, but despite the planets dangers it would be a worthy pursuite. For example the planets atmospheric preasure is so strong that it crush a submarine that can go into the deepest part of the ocean.\n\nScientist's are fascinated by the planets Earth-like apperence. They think that long ago there use be a form of life that could have been very much Earth-like. The main reasonfor why astronomer's are so fascinated by Venus is because it looks very much like Earth. For example it has valleies, river bank's, and even mountains. Scientist's are thinking of sending a blimp like aircraft that can fly or hover at least 30 if not higher miles the planet's surface. The tempurature would range around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The best part would be that there is plenty is solar power.\n\nThis essay was written by\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I honestly do not think that driverless cars are a bad thing or a good thing. They are good in alot of ways. We could use them for transpotation as we always have, but as humans always do. When we stumble across new technology, we always try to find a way to make it a weapon. No matter what it is, a social thing, or just a toy. It in some way harms us or the enviroment.\n\nDriverless cars could turn into driverless tanks, walking turrets, and eventually actual robots. Don't get me wrong there are so many upsides to this invention. No more people getting hurt in car crashes, no more polutants coming from vehicles. Now it's only a matter of time before everything becomes electrically powered, might as well start with the thing we use most.\n\nDriverless cars are the future, and all humans strive for the future. I am in full support of this idea, beacause there is more good than bad that can come from this invention. But of course i'm one person, in order to get closer to the future we all must strive together to reach it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it would be cool but freaky in a way to see this human like face rock on a different plant, do we even have anything like that on our planet? I would tell them that aliens aren't real, that's what I think. Nobody has ever found a life form outside of plant Earth. The face is just made up of rock and its facial like features are shadows, like the eyes, mouth, and noise. Its just a shadow giving it the looks but the rock is in a shape like a human head. A NASA person even said it just formed over time, its a molded rock and shadows but if NASA did find another life form outside our planet, would they tell us or keep it a secret. It is a little weird that a rock on another planet looks life a human face, maybe there is something out there trying to get our attention.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past, the historical facts about particular buildings could interest only architects or estate agents. However, in modern-day society, residents themselves are becoming more curious about the place they currently live in. This trend might be caused by the historical significance of the building as well as the supernatural aspect of it. Internet articles and neighbours might be seen as a research medium.\r\n\r\nThe historical value of certain places receiving more attention from the public. That is due to the fact that the vast majority of local organisations share information related to some crucial historical events by the means of social media. For instance, in some countries government publish pictures of houses and buildings that were destroyed during wartime, as a remembrance of the hard times. This in turn results in the younger generation, who did not live in those times, recognising their homes and growing interest to investigate the story behind the walls. Additionally, some people experience paranormal activity after moving into a new house. In order to confirm their assumptions, they begin to research previous owners and the house itself. \r\n\r\nNowadays, there are fruitful tools to learn about the past of the buildings. Individuals could use the Internet to find articles related to any house they are interested in. As an example, certain states in the USA have websites specifically dedicated to buildings and their part in historical milestones. Furthermore, people, who live in the same area for a long period of time, could help with a better understanding of the past of a particular architecture. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the growing keen on people's desire to investigate the past history of their place of residency is undoubtful. Such phenomenon is explained by youngsters being curious about historical events and how their homes partook in them. Moreover, the paranormal activity could lead to individuals' research on buildings. In order to conduct these investigations, residents could use online sources as well as other people's knowledge on the history of the location.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technolgy of you can calculate the emotions of people just by pretty much just scanning your face is pretty cool. I believe that this is cool to have in classrooms and how teachers can teach us how to use this.\n\nThe reason why I do want this technology is classrooms is because teachers now can understand what is going through our heads when they are teaching a lesson. They can understand if we aren't getting the information that they are teaching into our heads. They can use this in the furture to better understand how to teach and how to make lessons better. This technology can change the world. This could also help in a school way by artwork like the Mona Lisa. With this technology we can now see her emotion, and with other paintings or artwork just like this. We can now connect to the artist who made it. People all over the world can now understand the artwork.\n\nAnother reason why I think we should use emotional expressions is because in the past we really can't know what a person is feeling. You can try and hide it or you can put on a fake smile and everyone believes it. We can use the emotional expressions to prevent sucide. 8th grade to 12th grade, everything is changing your friends, your family, your school, and your teachers. When growing up into a adult life can be very rough. This could help because now we ca see how needs to and how we can help them. In this acticle it says \" classifed six basic emotions. Happiness, surpise, anger, digust, fear and even sadness.\" We can get emotions out of that are to scare to come through but are wanting help but dont understand how to. Doctors, and scientists are study even beyond how this works.\n\nIn this essay I talked about how an technology such as the emotional expressions can read off emotions. Teachings, changing the way how this could save people's life, and last six basic emotions. The world would change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally think that we should work to achieve the goal of driverless cars. If we were to have driverless cars, there would be far less traffic accidents. There would be no reason to need to get a speeding ticket and it would save the mojourity of people a significate amount of money. Like it said in the passage it would half the fuel needed. I agree with their argument accept for the fact that the passage stated that it should be only puplic transportation.\n\nThe fact that google has a car that is opperated by a computer most of the time shows that we are well on our way to achiving the goal of driverless vehicals. Even though there are times that you have to drive yourself, it is very close.\n\nThe problem with having autonomous vehicals is that they would not have the same capibalities as a person. The are times that ther are paths or roads are not able to be driven except by a person. If the road is badly damaged, you can't drive normally or you will have the risk of damaging your car and needing alot of money to repair it.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that we should further advance towards the goal of driverless vehicals but keep the availabillty to give the driver a choice if they want to drive themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, news is an important part of everyone's lives, although certain people believe that it has no relevance. Therefore, they suggested that watching and reading news is a waste of time. Having said, I still believe that news is a significant factor in the daily routines of a person, and some reasons will be discussed in the next paragraph\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the news is everywhere and it readily available to everyone, from students to senior citizens and also from poor to well off citizens. News can be learned from the newspapers and watching news programs from the television, and also other media like radio and smart mobile phones. There are lots of scenarios that portray the relevance of news on people's lives. Firstly, in our general knowledge, it gives us information on general happenings around us, not only locally but also international events, we gain awareness of an outbreak of war that might affect our way of communicating and dealing with the issues. Secondly, it provides information and prevention of some diseases, and ways to keep a healthy lifestyle, in the health news. Lastly, in leisure and travel news, it shows the sites in a particular place for tourists to visit and activities that are available for a traveler, therefore, promoting tourism.\r\n\r\nWhile specific individuals believe that news is not connected in our lives, it is still evident that a majority's daily lives are affected by the news from the paper or television. An example of this is the news on coronavirus, which always discussed in the news. That is why everyone is aware of it. It shows a noticeable change in their everyday habits like wearing a mask, sanitizing or washing the hands now and then and avoiding handshaking with friends that is usually a normal routine when meeting a friend or a colleague. Another instance is when traveling to a different place, awareness of the culture, tradition, do's and don'ts, and what to expect are also provided by travel news. Furthermore, these pieces of knowledge will affect the way the traveler will visit a particular area. \r\n\r\nIn Conclusion, the news plays a vital role in our lives, and it affects us in how we go through the day. Although some belief otherwise, I strongly agree that our activities are always affected by the happenings around us, which is usually seen in the news.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author states that a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The author also states that this techonology can be useful in classrooms. Dr. Huang states that using this technology could \"modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". But does that make this technology really that useful in classrooms? I say no.\n\nIf this technology would work in classrooms like Dr. Huang says it would, it would be terrible. Obviously just like every technology, there are ways to trick it though this one seems extremly easy. Dr. Huang states that if it detects that a student is becoming confused or bored, it could modify the lesson. It is very easy to fake being bored or confused. For example, say a student is doing math homework and the computer detects that the student is confused but the student is just faking it. The student would be getting spoonfed the answer! Students need to figure out how to do problems without too much help and that is why we have teachers. My next reason is that when these students are being taught that being bored or confused willl alter what they are doing to be more fun or help you, their minds will be programmed that way. For eample, if a student that has used this technology gets an job and he has to do something boring, he will think that if he is bored everything will change and it will beome more fun. This, obviously is not the case. The worker will still have to do the task. Students will not be trained to do boring or confusing things without help.\n\nMy next reason is already a huge problem for schools today and that is money. Schools already waste hundreds of thousands of dollars on technology such as computers. Also, schools have to pay teachers and get lots of food. If this technology was able to be used in schools, students would either move to a different school that has this brand new useful technology, or the school will go bankrupt and close. Noticing how advanced and useful this technology is, it would not be cheap. Especially when the author even states that \"your home PC can't handle the complex algarithms\". This means schools would have to get powerful enough computers to run this stuff. This, of course, would be very expensive noticing how many kids are sometimes in one school.\n\nIn conclusion shipping this new technology to schools would be catastrophic. It would be extremly expensive. It would be very easy to trick, and will not prepare students for real life. Bringing this technology would not be smart and would instead be devastating. Schools across the USA would quickly run out of money and close down while schools that cannot afford this technology would quickly lose stundents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a well-known or maybe to some well - heard of planet in our solar system. It's also known as the \"Evening Star.\" NASA has a \"particularly compelling idea\", for sending humans to study Venus, as the reader may notice from the text. We are told that Venus may have some interesting things being discovered that may lead to new studies. It's dangerous and takes caution, but is it worth it?\n\nAs the reader can tell from the text, the author states mutliple reasonings for why it would be worth it for humans to do such studies on Venus. One of those might be for the fact that Venus is often reffered to as Earth's \"twin.\" This is because Venus is the closest planet to Earth within being of terms in density and size. Plus, it's super close to Earth so it's one of Earth's closest \"neighbors.\" It's found within the text also that Venus may have contained bodies of water such as Oceans and who knows, maybe lakes here and there. Due to the planets' surface of rocky sediment, it's possible that there were familiar features sich as valleys, mountains, and craters. It is said that maybe once there has been or maybe still is some form of life on our neighboring planet.\n\nAnother thing that ties into why it would be worth the study is that what if we could send humans to maybe live on Venus? It's definitely a work in progress due to temperatures going to around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nSurviving human lives on Venus wouldn't be easy due to these conditions but that is why NASA is digging deeper into what can be done to make it suitable for human lives. Though one other thing shared with the reader is that the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth, which is a holdback but it's of course possible for adaptation in the right conditions which need to be discovered. If it's possible that other forms of life lived on Venus then why not humans too?\n\nThe third reason for studying Venus being worthy is that human curiosity can lead to an endorsement of new ideas. Of course that is why NASA is such a thing. The way our bodies work have been in discovery for years and years. Which leads to the idea that if we can figure out how and why our bodies function in certain conditons on Earth, how could and would our bodies function on a planet that is closest to features alike the sun.\n\nThese reasons explain to the reader why the author might believe that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers; because, who else is to make these discoveries and what if NASA were to find information that could help us learn a bit more about our own planet. Plus, more about the human life can be something that we learn more and more about. And lastly, who's to say that curoisity killed the cat? Well of course it's everyone; but, with new studies and leads we can figure out how curiosity saved the \"cat\" and taught that \"cat\" new things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today there are different thoughts about museums among a number of people. Some of them think that museums should be interesting place to enjoy with family, however, others believe that museums are place which can teach something historical to visitors. While enjoyable places can sometimes be useful for us, I believe that learning something which people do not know is more important.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, enjoyable places can attract humans more easily. It is great place to visit and have a rest. Of course, it is not easy working hard and long hours without any breaks. That is why all age of people need this kind of places to entertain. For instance, whole family visit there and spend their weekends interestingly. It helps to improve s sense of loving between parents and children.\r\n\r\nO the other hand, museums are historical places. They were created to educate about history of the area which they situated. There are enough parks and cafes to hang out with family and friends. It is very interesting to know about way of life our ancestors for all humans especially students and even foreign people. We know that we have attractive history. The museums can contribute to economy of the country. They help to develop tourism. The last year more than three million tourists came to our country to visit our historical cities. \r\n\r\nMy conclusion is that, I can understand why people visit museums, but, it seems to me that learning is more important than entertainment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel like this new method of technology can be very helpful in classrooms. Apart of me disagrees that it is. I feel like this method of technology, can be helpful, but it also is an evasion of privacy. It's cool and all to know that your computer can detect if your happy or not, but it's also creepy to know that your being watched. Someone has to be able to know how your feeling. The teachers can use this in classrooms and I feel like it would be affective. Therefore when class is dismissed and there is no reason to use it, who knows what the computers or watchers can do with this material. It can go both ways, it can be helpful and affective in classrooms, but who knows what can happen after that. If the teacher is in the classroom with them, there should be no need for the program to be in school, but if its a diffrent type of enviroment and the teacher can always be there, I feel like this program would work perfect. If the teacher gets notified when the student is dazzing off, or playing around, it can really help the students to be more attentive in class. That being said I think it is all just a matter of the enviroment and the influence in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Because society is beginning to transform into a technology-driven culture, it is necessary to adapt new forms of technology in all aspects of life. From the Industrial Revolution in the late 18th century to the present day, humans have been\n\nconsistently progressing on all fronts towards an electronic-based lifestyle. Driverless cars should be implemented in today's society due to their ability to analyze a situation, their faster reaction rates, and their ability to allow humans to complete alternative work and save time.\n\nAs the technology evolves to fully adapt these driverless cars into roadways, there is an increase in the ability of these cars to monitor the situation around them. Driverless cars contain a variety of sensors, from position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, to a GPS receiver, to a LIDAR sensor installed on the roof (Paragraph 4). Together, these gadgets create a 3-D model that the car is able to use to assess the situation; this combination of sensors allow a mirrored system to a normal human driver. These sensors are able to catch certain objects that humans may not necessarily see, from a small pot hole to a potential hazardous object entering the road. These sensors have reaction times that are unmatched by humans. Because the program's wiring is able to assess and intepret the situation of a car instantaneously, it is actually a safer alternative to human driving.\n\nWhile there are issues with liability following an accident with a driverless car, the evolution of sensors will eventually create a 100% success rate for crashes. From the 1980's invention of antilock brakes, scientists have progressively developed more advanced systems to increase the reaction rate and safety standards within a car. Since 2009, Google has been testing \"driverless\" cars that have driven over 500,000 miles without a crash (paragraph 2). Because the accident rate among Google cars (0%) is much less that the accident rate among human drivers, implementation of driverless car software may be the best alternative for the safety of humans.\n\nBecause the software for driverless cars is not perfect, drivers need to sta aware of the situation around them. However, as the software is perfected (through more sensors and ability to drive in traffic, construction conditions, etc.), there will be more time for drivers to complete work within their cars. With 100% driverless cars, humans will have complete frredom to do whatever they want while driving. For example, driving under the influence of alcohol is a serious issue in today's society. Because alcohol has the ability to numb certain brain centers, humans are not apt to drive in that condition. With a 100% driverless car, inebriation will be OK and accidents will occur less.\n\nCompanies should continue developing new technology for driverless due to the numerous benefits it will have on society. The entire aspect of driving will be impacted with this new program. Because there is increased safety with driverless cars, development with this program with benefit society has a whole.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a controversial notion heating a debate over the fact that the authorities’ way to spend the money. While some claim that the government ought not to fund space exploration, the opposite makes a statement that there are more optimal tactics to use this money. In my opinion, the government should spend money on both space and other fields. \n\nUndisputedly, the authorities ought to pay for exploring the universe because of its tremendous benefits. When the advanced systems for space are updated, people can find a myriad of potential planets to inhabit if the earth can not be livable anymore. Because of the population booming and the reckless action of humans, the earth may be demolished by the pile of rubbish or climate change. Hence, researching the universe can bring advantageous influences on meeting the ever-increasing demand for accommodation and reserving our lives. For instance, there are some outstanding discoveries about other planets such as Moon and Mars although the former has no oxygen and the latter is too hot for people to settle in. The significance of space exploration is undeniable so the government should fund it.\n\nWhile the space’s systems should be funded by the authorities, other fields such as education are also taken into consideration because they are the backbone industries for the development of the economy in every area. If the students are in good condition, they can have the ability to help the economic situation thrive. Moreover, institutions can create qualified employees having a thorough understanding to have a firm grasp of not only the knowledge but also the transferable skills. Thus, they can enhance the productivity of their company, which leads to the improvement of the nation’s economy. For example, the authorities can decrease the tuition fee and provide the scholarship so that most students can get access to school. Because of the benefit, it is worthy of paying for other fields \n\nTo sum up, the significance of space exploration and other fields is taken into consideration so the government should balance both of them in order to enhance people’s lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally don't think this is very accurate.\n\nOnly because how could you make yourself do facial exprtions.\n\nI feel like you facial expressions just come naturally and you dont have to make yourself do them.\n\nsometimes you mess around and make your facial expressions but most of the time you dont.\n\nAlmost always when you make facial expressions you don't even realize your are making them.\n\nI think how they put this article is not right.\n\nSomeone made this painting but didn't purposly think of the facial expressions.\n\nFor example when i draw somthing i don't think in facial expressions the whole time i just draw it.\n\nI dont see how this person could be thinking in facial expressions instead of just drawing the picture.\n\nMaybe he was thinking in the facial expression i don't know i'm not him but if i were i wouldnt be.\n\nI think you can't make yourself smile i mean technically you can but it wouldn't be a real smile if you just smiled to smile.\n\nFor me to smile i would have to be happy about somthing or someone.\n\nIt's just like you cant make yourself cry if your not sad or just crying.\n\nIt wouldnt mean nothing if it wasent real.\n\nSo again i don't think you can make someone just smile in a picture because they could just be posing and that could not be there true feeling at the time.\n\nI mean it could but posiblly most likely it wouldnt be.\n\nI dont see me smiling when i pose for a picture i might be giggly but only because im shy or don't really want to do it but i wouldnt just smile bcause im happy.\n\nIt's just like taking a picture you have to smile for a school picture but no one really wants to but \"you have to\".\n\nI hat esmiling for pictures when i really don't ever want to unless im taking the picture my self. Which is quite often not going to lie.\n\nI do get forced to take family picture though and i hate it.\n\nI also hate taking school pictures but those are required every school year.\n\nOk that is all i have to say really.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Varieties of information we gain today is intriguing because of the spread of the Internet use. It is argued that those who are interested in search for the past of the residential properties they live in have increased. Admitting that there are many kinds of reasons, depending on the value systems, the answer varies. All in all, I reckon that there are some reasons and ways to search, discussing in the following.\r\n\r\nFirstly, our houses, today, can be easily looked into the past in the Internet, and their information may become more interesting than others. Once we are familiar with the usage of the Internet, what we can research is apparently understood. Hence, people choose the information from their alternatives in the Internet. I ponder that the history of their houses tends to be more interesting than others because what we want to know fluctuates day by day, and that information may become the most attractive in one day.\r\n\r\nNext, the methodology of figuring out this information is complex, i.e., there are not only the Internet but also the perspective of others who are close to the houses and know that information. To begin with, the initial information they obtain must be the Internet because the Internet is the cue that people start to look into that information, as I mentioned below. However, what they can acquire from the Internet may be limited, and thereby they start to hear their families and neighbours. They may have lived in those estates in the past, figuring out further information the Internet doesn't possess.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the phenomenon in this theme is thought to be the advent of the Internet and that information is inclined to become the most intriguing in some day, whilst the method is considered to consist of investigating from people's family and neighbour as well as the Internet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The rise in the production of consumer goods affects the natural environment. In my opinion, this phenomenon leads to the extinction of flora and fauna and the growth in the proportion of deforestation.\n\nFirstly, many companies use national materials such as the skin of some animals to produce something. In other words, one of the requirements for some big corporations to run is animals product. For example, massive beauty product manufacturers use an animal to test their new merchandise which is harmful to the environment moreover, they use animals’ skin to produce bags or wallet which increase the rate of extinction. Secondly, the increase in this trend line exacerbates deforestation which is treating the environment. Put differently, many of these products need wood to produce so, this catastrophe encourages companies to destroy the environment.\n\nTo tackle these problems there are several ways that companies can do to mitigates the impact of activities. On the one hand, they can search for alternative sources instead of using animal materials. For instance, they can use manmade raw materials to produce consumer goods. On the other hand, to restrict companies from cutting trees, the government must put harsh roles on them. For example, companies that need natural facilities have limitations to using them and if they want to use more from natural sources they must pay high taxes.\n\nIn conclusion, the growth in the proportion of consumer goods results in the elimination of the natural environment. These problems lead to many courses like as extinct of flora and funny and some damage to jungles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Joining the Seagoing Cowboys Program\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboys program was the best choice i ever mad.if you join this program, you will not be disipointed. Most people who join this program are extreamly happy even after they leave it. There are many good things to come out of this program, for instice you will get to see new places, care for animals and people, and get many new oppurtunites.\n\nTo begin with a good thing to come out of the Seagoing Cowboys progam is the new places you will get to see. It does not matter where youwork in this program, but you will see beautiful and majestic places. You can see places from Italy to China. You could see places like the Acropolis in Greece, the breathtaking city of Vence Italy, or the Panama Canal. There are even more places than that.\n\nAdditionaly, the opportunites that you get in this program are amazing. Your opportunites won't stop when you join there but only will grow even\n\nmore.You will see the world in a whole new way. You will be happy at all times.\n\nIf you work hard at your job you will never fail. You will get to do things that you never thought possible.\n\nThe most important thing about joining the Seagoing Cowboys program is the animals and people you will be caring for. After World War Two, many countries needed help to go back to there original state or close to it. If you join this program you will help people and animals that are in need. You will have to like animals to like this program. You will have to give people food and supplies to help them.\n\nThere are many good things about this program. There are many good things about this program. you will get to see new places, get oppurtunities, and care for people and animals. Joining this program will be a good choice for you. You will not regret it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, the sister planet to Earth. When considered for exploration, there are many different reasons for or against exploration. Among the agaist exploration reasons are the immenent danger and hostile atmosphere. But with new research and development of technology, slowly we are getting to the point of being able to possibly reduce the risks of a failed mission. The author of \" The challenge of Exploring Venus\" agrees about the rewards of exploring Venus.\n\nThere is a fair bit of evidence to support the exploration of Venus, chief among them the proximity to Earth, reducing the amount of time needed to arrive on Venus if we time a launch correcty. The other reason is that there is new research into old technology from the early 1900's to World War II, known as mechanical computers. These machines are simpler than you think though. All they are is a bunch of gears and levers and don't require electricity at all. Considering Venus's hostile conditions, this approach seems well guided in the thought of repurposing and reusing these ancient machines.\n\nAll things considered, if these new developments are sucessful, and the timing is right, than we could possibly hear an announcement about a manned mission to Venus. Most likely not tommorrow, but it is possible in our lifetime to hear about this. The author supports the claim of possible exploration, and therefore with newfound evidence and reason, so do I.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that getting a university degree is the best path to succeed in life, while others think that ones do not need to graduate from a university to become successful. In this essay, I will be discussing both views and giving my opinion.\r\n\r\nNowadays, a standard to be employed in a good company in order to earn a high salary is to have a university education. In other words, most organizations require their employees to have at least a bachelor's degree. For instance, in Thailand, a degree from a particular university can determine what company each person can join, which is the more reputable university, the better job position. In contrast, if a person has lower education levels, one can only become a labour force or worker.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people can become successful without university degrees. For example, the most popular social media platform, Facebook, was established by a university student that later decided to drop out of school to pursue his career. That is to say, without university degrees, one can achieve success in their career. However, the chances are slim for ordinary people, in which the possibility can be only one in a million. To succeed while having lower education levels requires talents, money, and lucks, and most people do not acquire all of these requirements.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some persons can achieve promising careers, the chances that it will happen to the majority of people are slim. Graduating from a university is the best guarantee that one will be employed in a good firm.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think patience waiting something want happen dont want happen Sometimes hits uninspected Specaly cedar point need lot patience Beep Beep I hit alarm clock force I hope thing would turn Butt I going cedar point I count wait So I got took shower ate breakfast great mom made blueberry mudines I got close pack week early I edsited I put clothes car brother sister mom dads could get going quicker The car ride wasnt grate three hours long tv carso didnt take long normally occupied like shorter car ride brother sister I When got howtell awesome like storys high And also use elevator get room ont floor My sister amazed stuffed animals wainted buy furry things couldnt My mom woke us come rides open min got So I raced bed running around like I got fire butt trying find clothes So found clothes raced around get shoes others side bed So time dressed showered rides going hour walk gate got one ride called million ofcare The sigh said hours wait sorry ride know got started difficutys seatbelts others technical difuctlelys sorry So mom said wait ride realy fun So waited waited I patience I buy hot dog I ride blast hours park Was fun go tomorow And I got hot dog That story patience cedar point want fun Sometimes got patinced get want", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont really know why wold they need smarter cars then we already need that would just make everything diffrent more then its alrady is why cant they just make other things that the world really needs . for example bulldings for those that dont have an home,or are living under briges. why cant they make hospitals in other places were thy need them insted of cars that are smart how are they gonna help us we alredy have cars that can transport us why cant they use that technology to make the world better bye making smart cars is not gonna make it better some people are not even gonna be able to buy them because of how expensive they are going to be,how are the rest goona get them ,with what money are they going to buys them. people that are now going to know how to us them are gonna have trouble and even mabe cause a acsident because they dont know how to us them .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a celebrities, their life is an open book to the public, therefore it is common that most of them do not have privacy at all. How it affects them on how they live? In this essay, I will discuss in details why I agree that well known people cannot live freely. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the celebrities are role models that people are idolizing and fantasizing them. Some of them are acting what the community want to see. They need to be pretty, well mannered and glamorous for them to be loved and accepted. Nowadays, because of social media people are easy to access them, thus they can follow them and some can be connected to them. In addition, it is true that anyone can publicise them with a photo or video that can be taken on their mobile phones. By that, they can post it without the permission of that individual, thus invading their privacy. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, some individuals are making this for living, such as, they are selling pictures and videos to the publishers, they are callig them papparazzis. They are famous and popular because they are making the news about them whether it is good or bad. But some of them are trying to ignore and live their lives, however there are still victims of being published. It causes depression, stress and even danger not only in their lives but also to their families. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, being popular can be beneficial but it is more", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform. There is no civilization on Mars. What made you think that there was a face on Mars was the shadows being casted on the landform. We have many of these landforms on Earth.\n\nNasa took the picture of the landform and wanted to attract attention to Mars. According to the story, Nasa unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illustion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\"\n\nThe authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars, and it did. (Paragraph 3 and 4)\n\nNasa wanted to show that there was no face on Mars. Nasa took another shot of the face. They felt that is was important to taxpayers. On April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. The image first appered on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform not an alien monument. (Paragraph 6 and 7)\n\nAnother fact is that we have many landforms like this in the United States. The story states that, on April 8, 2001 Mars Global Survetor drew close enough for a second look. What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin, \" That's a lava dome that takes the form of a isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" (Paragraph 10 and 12)\n\nMany people took the Face on Mars too far. People made the \"Face on Mars\" in movies, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and it even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years. Some people thought that Nasa was hiding evidence that there is life on Mars. Nasa would have wanted people to know if there was life on Mars, because Nasa's budget has been cut.\n\nThis is why the \"Face on Mars\"\n\nis only just a landform with shadows on it that makes it look like a face. People have just taken the situation a little too far. There still could be a chance that there is a life form on Mars, but for know we know that the \"Face on Mars\" is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, as more consumer goods are manufactured, more damages have been inflicted on the environment. This article will outline several reasons for this and point out the appropriate solutions.\n\nTo begin with, the production of goods tends to harm the environment in two main ways which are the chemical by-products from the manufacturing process and the mass production of disposable goods. Firstly, since more goods are produced, more toxic waste and emissions are released into nature from the factories. For example, carbon dioxide causes greenhouse phenomena and any chemicals that disastrously contaminate the water, air and soil environments. These chemicals can affect the environment in the long run. Secondly, to fulfil the ever-increasing demands of the customers, more single-use products such as plastic cups with more affordable prices are introduced. Indeed, most of those products are non-biodegradable and have a short lifespan. Hence, that will soonly turn the planet into a landfill and pose a threat to all alive creatures. \n\nActions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the adverse impacts of mass production on nature. Firstly, governments should encourage a sustainable manufacturing process. For instance, in the US, governments put lower taxes on businesses that use renewable and green energy to manufacture. By doing so, the manufacturing process emits less chemical waste into the environment. Secondly, companies should introduce sustainable products to the markets. For example, people can also change to canvas shopping bags for eternal use instead of plastic bags that can be used one or two times.\n\nTo abridge, there are two main reasons why the increase in production harms the environment. To address this issue, governments and companies should join hands to make the production lines more environmentally friendly.\n\n,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it talked about on how Venus is a worthy pursuit to explore but it has a great danger that it presents for the reason that theres procaution to take before going to Venus.They would have to see how the oxegen it gives out and also to see if theres anyone living there such as humans or creatures or animals . Another thing they would have to worry about visting Venus is the way its planet gives out enegry,tempature,\"impediments such as erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\"(3)\n\nThe author explained on this article on how Venus would help us to find new planets that we are able to live at and to also grow and expand the human population in different planets.In Venus they also believed that we are able to explore new expirements.The author explained on paragraph 4 that \" Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth.\" This short pharse that the article has it explains on how there can be life in this planet that theres humans or some type of people who we still have not seen yet. The author also explains on how he considers Venus as a \"twin \" of earth that theres water at venus and maybe be oxegen at Venus also . Venus is the closest planet to earth .\n\nThere is also dangers to seek a new planet. Theres alot of procautions to go to new planet . It says in paragraph 3 that \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon diocide blankets Venus.Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" This part of the paragraph it explains that if we did go to this planet the heat would be so hot that i believe that we will melt the second we get there . It has a great danger of death if we do go to Venus and its a risk to the people who are still studing Venus.Venus has the hottest tempatures for the reason that it goes a fast rate around the sun so it keeps hot all around its planet. Its also a great danger for the reaosn it has additional impediments such as valcanoes ,earthquakes,lightning strikes .(3) All of these inpediments we will have to see before going to Venus.\n\nAll of these explains its reasons on why we should and should'nt go to Venus.For all of these reasons i believe and the author too that we should start studing Venus becuase it is worthy pursuit. What the article says that they may be new chances on finding new areas and explore new things that may benifet us in the long run . Theres a chance on finding new humans and new type of cures and to be able to find new types of examples .We have noted that theres water in Venus and that there heat and we see that Venus is close by our orbit and it the closes to Earth . But we should not stop seeking new things to explore we should let the human mind to knowlege even more that we should not stop for danger situation that we should risk and hope for the best . For the reason that theres even more things that\n\nwe havent seen with our eyes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood story sadhappy I think happy says loved cook And thanked parents teaching cook Also In paragraph Its paragraph dedicated parents I think sad paragraph says parents good Jobs came united states startover", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper Computers usefull tool school report something effect really need thoes computers When using computer school project hassel One many problems people fased using computer freazing project computer frezz s verry time consumming Another problem pop s pop s couse virouses computer gets virous leads becoming slow Witch leads us next problem slowness computer becomes slow verry digital There several problems risks come computer One health problem become hermet stay inside day attached computer Another problem become verry obease getting physical exersise One risks using computer could end getting fassebook myspase meating one protending one get abducted molester There alternations could make instead using computer One alternation could go local library cheak books topick wanting information Another alternation ask teachor shehe could leand class text book But main aternation computer old fashon books So choice CAPS realy need computers live choice", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features surrounding setting affect cyclist hiher performance example In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted SPeed Limit setting full hills twisting rising desending All things working energy cyclist Also lack people towns give cyclist hard depriving time finding water supply heshe dehydrate Third weather essay great deal affected cyclist hot desert California cyclist hydrated continue bike ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wonder why scientiest go through so many hoops just to descover nothing? The article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is about scientiest who want to study Venus despite the troubles it may bring. People can see Venus just llke kids can see stars when they go hide in seek in the dark. It is similar to the Earth and that it is the second planet from the sun. It is proven that it is challenging to examine Venus and space man have not survived the experence. The author does not fully support his clam on why scientiest should prusue Venus.\n\nIn his article it states so many risk factors of why astronomers should not study Venus. Yet, he states that he still wants to prusue Venus even when it can lead to death. In Paragraph 2 it states thats that no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. No spaceship has even touched Venus in more than three decades. The author still thinks it is a good idea to study Venus. In Paragraph 8 the author states \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Yet, the author gives us a proven fact that nobody has survived even being close to this planet.\n\nAnother reason that the author does not support his clam is by saying in his article that researchers cannot take sample of rocks, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Then the author goes on to say \"Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" In other words, the author is stating no matter the risks, such as death, getting a sample of rocks and gas on Venus would be better than saving a life. If astronomers where to pursue something like this and they get the sample of rocks and other stuff they need. Then the astronomer dies lets say a day after, is the rocks really better than a human life? Then, they find out that the rocks do not work for the study and there is a life killed because scentiest really wanted to study a plant that is probably not even useful to the society.\n\nThirdly, the author states in Paragraph 8, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only beacuse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also beacause human curiosity will lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors.\" First of all is this statement really why the author thinks it is a good idea to study this? That beacause human curiosity is a big enough reason to explore a plant that can have many deaths that can lead to the outcome? Now a days if scentiest say people can actually fly and that all they have to do is jump off a brigde; most people would do it. You know why? Because scentist told them too and that is what makes it \"okay.\"\n\nThe author does not support is clam in that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author states all the facts to prove that Venus is very dangerous but gives us little to say about how or why scentist can study Venus without astronomors getting hurt. Venus is a dangous plant for people and as humans we should not atmpt to go anywhere near it. Even if \"curiosity\" does take over.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that it is no need for the manager to care about their worker’s clothes because the most important things are their work quality. I think that it depends on the type of job.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are so many companies have not required their worker to have a dress code anymore. First, not all jobs need employees to wear a uniform or formal clothes. For example, the designer often works with computers so they do not need to dress up beautiful, they can work with casual clothes which help them more comfortable and get a high quality of work. Second, Apple and Facebook are two incredible companies, and both are not requiring their employees to wear a uniform. The purpose is to create an amazing work environment, a fun, creative place to enhance the quality of their staff’s production.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some occupations that workers must wear in a formal way.\r\n\r\nThere are jobs that if employees do not care about their dress, their work quality will go down. For example, it is necessary for the doctor to wear their special clothes which can antimicrobial while operating for the patient. In some cases, the worker’s clothes can show their politeness and respect to their customers. For instance, receptionists always have to dress in an elegant way to create a great impression to the guests.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, although I believe that the way a person suit cannot affect his nature of work, in some specific jobs, employees should have a dress code to get the best of their jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around mooring mast United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist mood cyclist happens journeys desert town For example mood changes old man asks map attitude changes cautiousness new new road went terror thought gon na die I gon na die birds would pick clean pride old man asks map author says I good map But journeys Yosemite setting changes goes desert type place goes bait shop rest Then probably merry way destination", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Home family one thing us love The mood author created heartwarming appreciation explains comftable home everyone together good time Not Just together together Growing enviroment instilled great sense familly nothing Blood relative Narciso Rodriguez show appreciation parents loved much make important change give better life wiched deseverd They made change even though meant leaving behind families Such bravery hadThe author left us knowing appreciation home grateful parents hispanic heritage", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you know what it feels like to be in venus ? it not here is a tad bit of ideas . the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it\n\npresents are that venus have a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket venus . for example '' a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus.'' this is showing one of the dangers that is in venus . Also venus is a very hot place . for example in the text it said '' At thirty-plus miles above the surface , tempatures would be still toasty around 170 degrees fahrenheit .'' thats showing that it is a very hot place and no one shouldn go to visit . it is\n\not easy conditions at all but suruvial mode would ant civilian like to visit in a couple of years . for instance ' not easy conditons. for istance in the passage they said ''not easy condtions , but survivable for humans.'' Venus isn't meant for humans it just anpther planet without life. Its a not such worth living trip . Venus is like another planets it just had stuff added to it or something .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car Free Cities\n\nMany people use cars for different reasons, some to get to work, some for their jobs but i bet these people don't know what they are really causing when they step into their car. Some people throughout the world have been reducing cars in their cities, and the changes they are making have huge advantages on the city.\n\n\"Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs\" says Elizabeth Rosenthal. Stating that automobiles, or cars, have made and astronomical change in the suburbs, or small neighborhoods on the outskirts of big cities. Some pros about not having cars are that more people are exercising and losing weight, and reducing the pollution in the air. Some even say you can get where you're going faster when not using a automobile.\n\n\"It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\", says businessman Carlos Arturo. Implying, you dont have to stress over being late for work by filling you gas tank up, its a sign of relief knowing you can get places without your car. Redusing car yuse also helps you save your money, by spending money on gas, or even waiting on taxis to get you where you're going can also be tough.\n\nIn colclusion, there are many advantages on why you should limit car use in big cities. Even though some might not agree, its still a risk to take and make your city a cleaner, more happy place. Even though this might be a incipent to car limiting, it might be able to grow througout the next coulple of years if people work together to stop automobile transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wonder why the world is becoming so much warmer by the minute? Not many people stop and realize what's the real problem. Us humans are the major problem in this situation, we don't see that we are taking what we have to an advantage. To our factories, cars, or even trash. The main one that is causing our greenhouse gases to rise is our Power plants, but following behind the power plants are vehicles. Cars have become a major impact in our lives, from hurting one another, to hurting the place we live on. Car-free cities are going to help make a big, helpful change in peoples lives.\n\nIn the city of Vauban, Germany 70 percent of the families do not own a car. Vauban is called a \"car-free\" place, cars aren't allowed on the streets of vauban. Many people sold their cars to live in vauban, all around vauban wants a healthy way of living. Vauban allows car ownership, but the cars are only to be parked in two places which are the garages. \"When I had a car i was always tense, I'm much happier this way,\" Heidrun Walter said. It is a much healthier and less stressful way of living, new ideas will always come in handy. The United States Enviromental Protection Agency is promoting \"Car Reduced\" communities. Hopefully they get someone to tag along with this promotion, and get supporters to enforce it.\n\nBogota, Colombia is going on their third straight year of a \"Car Free\" city. They are wanting to reduce smog, so buses and taxis are permitted. \"It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" Carlos Arturo claimed. There was a consequence to the ones who didn't follow the rules, which was a $25 fine that they had to pay each time. Eventually, Two other Cities in Colombia, Cali and Valledupar, latched on to the idea of a \"Car reduction.\" You see many people walking, running, riding bikes or skateboarding. A lot of people like this new idea that people are going by, it's an great way to step foward to save the earth and its problems.\n\nOver time, Americans haven't been buying cars, driving less, and over years less people get their license. America is hitting its driving peak, The number of miles driven peaked in 2005 and then decreased signifigantly since then. Not many can afford a brand new car, or the insurance, most people are unemployed and dont work at all. Cars have been around for a long time, but over that time period it has caused major life impacting issues. \"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift,\" said mimi sheller. Many people aren't aware of this \"Car Free\" idea, which is an disadvantage. If this idea was spread through televison, newspapers, or even social media many people will pick it up and take it into consideration.\n\nIn an overall sum up, it is better to live \"Car Free.\" You wouldn't have to stress yourself out about gas prices, fixing your cars, or your world becoming a big ball of heat. If Transportation and power plants are the two major impacts in our lives, we need to knock one out. Until, we can get some second options on power plants our best choice is to forbid cars. We have many other options to get around our city, running, walking, riding bikes or etc. The \"Car Free\" idea is very creative, not many people would take inisuative to help make the world a better and safer place. With an exception of a few, buses and taxis will be there for long distance trips. Cars caused a huge impact on our lives, but hurting us and our home which we call earth. The business plan is \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve saftey.\" Think of all the advantages cars have given, but think about all of the disadvantages the cars have showed. Which one out weighs the other? Cars aren't always there to help us, life is all about choices, it's time to make yours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Drivelesss cars should not continue to develop. There are many reason for it,and three of the could be that it can still cause problems on the road even though it been developed fully. Even though its been fully developed not everyone is okay with it. The driveless cars can also take away the experiance way from a young adult wanting to drive their own car. These are only some reasons driveless cars should not be developed even more.\n\nOne reason is that driveless cars can be a problem on the road because yet being fully develop there is a possiblity something could go wrong with it. On the road anything is possible and it will come when least expected. Maybe with all this developing in it it can cause a greater damage then a regualar car would. In the article they talk about who's fault it would be if something would go wrong with it. The people driving it should not have to take the fault for because they didn't make. Yet they would only by it because of what the manufatures say about they will try persuading the people to by it.\n\nAnother reason is that not every state is okay with this because they might know the damage these driveless cars are capable of doing. With not every state okay with it, the manufactures could have a less chances of selling much of thses cars. In the article they only talk about four places that have considerer the driveless. They would also have to have new laws in order to over they rules of the driveless cars.\n\nA third reason is that driveless cars would take way learning expireances from young adaults that would actually like to drive their own car. In the article paragraph eight they say \"We have to interpret the drivnig fun in a new way.\"This is like say you can as well stay home and do nothing. When you drive you can learn many things like road signs and road name without even knowing it. Something they also talk about is about driveless cars bieng safe because peole will be able to text on their cell phones while driving. This is not okay maybe the only way some poeple can stay off their phones is when they are driving and they are trying to take that way. People can as well just stay home and be on their phones all the time and text all the time. This car would probably just make people more lazy.\n\nWith all these negative things that could happen with this car is why it shouldn't be developed. They can be a problem on the road,not every state is okay with it and they could take away driving experiance from young adults that would like to drive their own car. There are many other reason out there for this car not to be developed even more. It would just probably just cause more problems in place were there is plenty of problem. This is why driveless cars should not be developed more then they already are.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Chllenges of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author uses many details from the article to back this claim up.\n\nIn paragraph 8 it says that the natural human curiosity will always lead us to discover new places even if we know theres risks. it states in the paragraph that \"but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally inyimidating endevors.\" we will always be looking for challenges and solutions with explorations and many other things. Also in paragraph 8 it states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself.\" This proves theres valuable informations we can learn about Venus despite the risks.\n\nVenus at one time was also the closest thing to earth. In paragraph 4 it says \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" this is a worthy persuit because we can discover many things like how did it lose its water, did it used to have life, what event made it unhospitable, etc. To further more go into it the author says, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Getting to know more about Venus could possibly let us know more about Earth itself.\n\nLastly in paragraph 5 it says even NASA has hopes of discoverying new things about mars and maybe being able to get man on another planet. tThis would be huge for mankind. It states \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" Also stating imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\"\n\nThese are only ideas right now to NASA but could be a possibility to us as humans if we take risks and pursuit studying Venus despite the dangers.\n\nTo recap the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Theres details in the article supporting this claim. Like in paragraph 8 saying the natural human curiosity wil always push us to discover new things no matter what. Or in paragraph 4 that Venus was the most like Earth at one point of time. In paragraph 5 its an idea that we have man on Venus but that idea can be a reality in due time if we keep studying Venus. These are the details supporting the authors claim that Venus is worth pursuing despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story say going grow season chang She new country failed drivers test She feels hibiscus reminds back home In story mother says Ive seen kind blooming along lake strong enough make winter I think Saeng relate flower make winter tha make new country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hey my name is Luke Bomberger and I would like to tell you about my time with the Seagoing Cowboy's program. The Seagoing Cowboys program was an oppotunity of a lifetime. I'll tell you my story of how I got there and what I did, Well I was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when my friend Don invited me to go on a cattle boat I couldn't say no, I knew iy was an opportuity of a life time . It was 1945 and World War ll was over in Europe and many countries were left in ruins,to help these countries recover thier food supplies and more 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA . UNRRA hired the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses and young cows things like that . Don and I signed up . We arrived August 14 the day the Pacific war ended . Caring for the animals kept me busy,they had to be fed and watered 2 or 3 times a day !! I also found time to have fun on board especially on return trips after the animals have been unloaded .\n\nSeagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for me .\n\nSounds fun right ? You should participate . Help some animals !!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in classroom is highly valuable to the student and also to the teacher, because you can see what the student is feeling about the current topic or subjuect you are going over in class. If they arent really enjoying it then you can find ways to make the topic more fun and enjoyable.\n\nFACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a system in which it can calculate human emotions through facial expressions by reading all 44 major mucsles in your face. Eckman has classified six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness: and then associated them each with characterisitic movements of the facial muscles.\n\nFACS would be a really great step in classrooms! it would make classrooms way more enjoyable because teachers would be able to tell how you are feeling at that moment during a project, a lesson, or even notes. Based on what the class room emotions are during these things will base on how the teacher fixes or makes these things more enjoyable for students to have fun learning, and actually want to learn.\n\nIn the article they give us a great amount of examples on why this would work such as: The Mona Lisa demonstration, A Self deomnstartion in the mirror, and demonstrations on a computer facial model.\n\nFACS would be a great oppurtunity in helping education in the United States become more enjoyable, and having higher graduation rates instead of the current percentage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sciencest are trying to make a car that drives you around without you having to do hardly any work. They are called driveless cars. Taking you places without you having to make every turn.\n\nIf you think about it, the driveless car sounds expencive. It is \"something that was simply too expensive to be practical\"(3). The cars would have to have many sensers and even magnetic ways.\n\nThis driveless car would have to have antilock breakes and driver assistance. They would also need \"a rotating sesor on the rood, a video camra mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an interial motion sensor\" (4). Those thing would need to be in every car just for them to work properly.\n\nOne way that a car could move on its own is with a \"track that is embedded with an electrical cable that sends radio signals to a reciver on the front end of the car. Also a simualr way is with magnets and the car would read the positive and negative polarity as m,essages in the binary code\"(3) and they would need to upgrade all the existing roads.\n\nIn concion making every car a driveless care would be millions of money and would take so much time. Making new road and make sure that every car is save to drive in would be the biggest risk of all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a common belief that nowadays teenagers have to face up to the accepted and validated by their friends or peers.In my perspective, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand,a notable upside is that peer pressure may motivate young people into discovering new interests that they may not have considered otherwise.This means,if they have pressure by their fellow millennials they will try their best day by day.To illustrate, after seeing photos of their peers at the gym, an adolescent might feel encouraged to take part in similar physical exercises, which is helpful for their physical health in turn.Besides young people usually take others, especially with whom they have close intimacy, as role models. Therefore, if peers can set a good example for their counterparts, they will probably achieve improvement in both academic and social aspects.When teenagers look at their friends get successful they will have an effort to keep up with them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,the negative should not be overshadowed by the positive. It is worth mentioning that the stress originating from a comparison among children would make them feel inferior to others, which leads to the fear of expressing themselves as well as potential self-distancing from family and friends. This can be an alarming issue as the worst consequence that may follow is suicide.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,although peer pressure can prove conceived by supporting motivation, it is extremely tiny when compared to its multitude of drawbacks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story setting affects cyclist many ways He tries get directions people asked really didnt know talking Thats careful ask Then needs drink dosent work well water ends tasting like battery acid Then cyclist begins way finds difficulty road The difficulty road The road bad condition must slower speed limit At point felt like gon na die Lucky found bathroom drank sink", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You shouldn't take advantage of cars because they are bad for the environment. I understand it's good and important to have a car, but if your going to the park that is two blocks away with your kids you shouldn't go in a car; you should walk them two blocks because it's good exercise and many people do need it. Always depending on your car isn't good because one day you might not have it. Cars break down very easy and you also should be walking if your going a few blocks down. Vehicles are great but also very bad; people tend to depend on their cars to even go down the street, you should be able to walk and get the exercise you need if you don't normally exercise.\n\n\"Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\" except a few streets.\" That's good that Vauban is trying that because you will soon realize that their wont be so many obese people and many people will be more halthier. Taking a ten minute walk isn't so bad and your exercising so it's helping your health conditions. Many believe if they don't have a car they can't go anywhere, when in reality they can they can walk their if it's not to far and if it's somewhat far then they can walk to the bus stop and take the bus.\n\n\"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" I belive that, that's good what Paris did because all that smog isn't good for the environment and is bad for people. If you work far or your gonna go grocery shopping or do many things then I understand to use a vehicle but ig your going down the street their's really no point of driving a car when you can just walk there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Derigibles modernly called blimps widely regarded latest greatest form transportation These derigibles needed quick means refueling unloading passenger eficiently safety At time derigibles became popular modern day skyscrapers Empire State Building Chrysler Building dominating skyline New York City Al Smith former governor New York heading efforts construct Empire State Building came idea building mooring mast top building would help dirigibles dock refuel unload cargo quickly efficiently Although time idea thought practical workable never put use safety concerns found later Architects These safety concerns included fear constantly shifting winds due violent air currents well air space restricting laws prohibited airships flying low urban areas Although idea seemed revolutionary time many obstacles stood path glory", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus has the good and the bad. You find out so much about your planet and others. Like whybdonthey call Venus an \"Evening Star\" when its actually a planet. With Venus being provern a very challenging place to examine, ist hard to find out more abiut it. Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite that dangers.\n\nOne of the big dangers studying Venus is the temperature. Venus is the hottes planet in our solar system. The planets temperature averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than then on our planet. The conditions are way more extreme then what we've encounter on Earth. In addition to the heat there's erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nWe could be living on Venus. Venus has the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus used to be covered with oceans that could've supported various forms of life. Even today Venus has rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is an opttion for a planetary visit.\n\nThere are solutions for the temperature. NASA's solution is to let scientist float above the fray. A vehicle hovering 30 miles above the Venusian landscape. It would be like airplanes flying over storms, but in this case its a blimp-like vehicle flying over the 800 degree surface. The vehicle would be thirty-plus miles above the surface. Solar power would be plentful anc radiation would not exceed Earth levels, survivable but not easy conditions.\n\nTrying to meet the challenge by Venus has value. Human curiosity will most likely lead us to many intimidating endeavors. With the dangers studing Venus, helps us incase we need to move to another planet. Studying Venus is dangerous but, it has its perks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think libraries censored one form another keep certian types book away people How really help Even remove certian book music library nt mean people wo nt still get information somewhere else Besides many things people censored probably bad I think better one read somthing happen experince Like Katherine Paterson said let people get rid book music think bad people read listen left Nothing Through people think censorring libraries greater good many bad side much good effect When people try censor things normally take things shelfs get rid But today world technology nt stop people obtaining goal We internet lets people upload book music share So yeah many able get book library almost always find online In result trying censor libraries removing books music really anything How determine censored People different idea ok public Some book get removed could insult group people related way Then loss business make poeple mad time In way nt better people learn bad things like crime death ways nt real nt hurt When things like happen book normally nt stop They show results situation handled Which could come help people end sort situatuions later life Which makes really hard determine censored nt Katherrine Paterson even said let people censor think unmoral nothing left Everything gone every person world would find something every book could find bad Even book people agree censored people think way No books would left censored libraries people could find thing bad unmoral every book Overall censoring libraries ends pain worth It stoping people obtaining information another way There way decide shuld censored And censoring somethings lead people wanting things censored leave nothing In conclusion censoring nt really stop people ends leading bigger problems end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are a wonderful thing. They are perhaps one of the worlds greatest advancements and technologies. Cars get us from point a to point b. That is exactly what we want isnt it? We as humans want to get from one place to anther as fast as possible. Cars are a suitable to do that. They get us across the city in a matter of minutes. Much faster than anyhting else we have. A train isnt going to get me across the city as fast as my car is and neither is a public bus, but those other forms of transportation just might be the way to go. Don't get me wrong, cars are an absolutly amazing thing but, maybe they just cause way to much stress, and maybe they hurt our environment in ways that we don't think they will. With a bus or a train you do not have to worry about washing your car or getting frustrated when stuck in a bad traffic jam on I-4. Also there is not as much pollution in air hurting our environment. You might not think so, but there are many advanteges to limiting our car usage.\n\nOne advantage that not only humans would benefit from, but also plants and animals is that there would be a lot less pollution in the air hurting out environment. Right now our cars give off gases that are extreamly harmful towards our environment. These gases are called green house gases and come out of the exhuast pipes in our cars. Your car alone dosent give off much gas but collectively, our cars give off enormous amounts of gases. This is especially true in big cities like France. In France, their pollution level was so high it was record breaking. due to that france decided to enforce a partial ban on cars. This is described in the second article \" Paris bans driving due to smog\", by Robert Duffer, \" On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were orderd to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day.\" After France limlited driving there congestion was down by 60 percent. \" Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France\". So after five days of intense smog, 60 percent of it was clear after not using cars for only a little while. Even across the world in Bogota, columbia they are limiting driving and reducing smog levels. In the third article \"car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", by Andrew Selsky, it describes the annual car-free day they have to reduce smog. \" the goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog\". So all over the world people are relizing that wilthout cars, we are insuring the saftey and well being of our environment.\n\nThe second advantage that would come with limiting car use is less stress. Everyone knows that driving a car causes emence amounts of stress. Getting caught in traffic is a major cause of stress in someones life. Haveing to repeatingly wash your car just to get it dirt again causes stress. Having people in the back of your car screasming and yelling all while music is blasting, causes stress. So obviously driving causes stress. If we were to limit our car usage we would not be as stressed as we usually are. There would be no traffic, no car washes and no one screaming in a small confineded space. In the first article \" In German Suburb, life goes on without cars\", by Elisabeth Rosenthal, a citezen named Huidrun Walter, states \" When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". So with out the stress of a car Huidrun Walter is a looser and happier person, less stress equals happier person. In the third article, \" Car-free dai is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", by Andrew Selsky, it states \" It's a good opportunity to take away stress...\". If we have the opportunity to take away stress, why not take it. It is a huge advantage in our lives to limit driving if it takes away stress. No one wants stress, no one needs stress, and if we have an opportunity to take some of the stress away, take that opportunity.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many advanteges to limiting car use, one being theat we get to help the environment and two being that it helps reduce stress. Our environment is already screwed up in so many ways, if we can help it to become the healthy enironment it once was, then do it. Stress is proven to impare your personal health, no one wants to be unhealthy and no one wants stress in their life. If you want the environment to get better and you want to reduce stress in your life then take this advantage and impliment it. Some might not think that this is an advantage, but i just explained that it is a clear advantege that has been proved to help the enviornment and reduce stress. Limiting car use is a very effective advantage that really does work in more than one place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System would not be valuable towards students in a classroom. One example is that not all humans could possibly express emotions the same way therefore the student may not express an emotion completely. Someone could keep a straight face and feel many emotions. A direct quote from the passage is \"she's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry,\" which I disagree with because it is unrealistic to know all the emotions a person is possibly feeling and especially how much percent of each emotion. I think it's absurd to trust this technology. The computer may be great and have all this amazing technology but there is no way that it could calculate emotions correctly. Another reason I disagree with the Facial Action Coding System to be valuable in classrooms is because not all classrooms need computers to work the way the class does and is supposed to. A direct quote from the article I disagree with is \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I believe that is where the instructing should be, within the instructor. I however agree that the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable to video games. A direct quote to support that detail is \"the same techonlogy can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or videosurgery.\" My final reason i disagree with the Facial Action Coding System to be valuable in classrooms is because the example the article uses does not really support their claim in the strongest ways possible. The direct quote that leads me to believe this is \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" The author should have used more persuading evidence to allow others to think this techonlogy would actually be important or valuable in any situation. These are reasons I do not think that having Facial Action Coding Systems in classrooms would be valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The strength and prospect for the global media to shape the views of today’s youth and educate them are significant. However, while some opine that the global media and international news, as part of education, have no important impact on secondary education, others believe that international news should be studied by those pupils to reap its benefits. This essay attempts to examine the issue by diving deep into it. I believe that international news as part of the secondary education syllabus is important.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, global media enriches young people's understanding of contemporary affairs and enhances their views and perspectives. It is due to the fact that international affairs, as part of education, not only make them more conscious and knowledgeable but also connect global youths on the same platforms. For example, a study run by Oxford sociologists showed that the media heavily influenced teenagers’ knowledge of contemporary affairs which has a highly positive impact on making them aware of the world. This awareness makes them global citizens and encourages them to share ideas.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, many critics argue that teenagers would be negatively affected by the global media’s focus on negative issues of international events like wars and civil unrest if they are included in their education. This is because exposure to violence often leads to depression and the youths may grow an apathy toward our history and global politics. For example, recent surveys have discovered that despondent teenagers usually cite the dismal state of the world as a source of their depression. Since mental health is an important objective of secondary education, it is, therefore, questionable whether the study of international news would benefit young students.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is clear that there are reasons for and against the study of news in secondary school. However, educators and authorities can make it more useful by adopting proper policy and teaching methods, and reap the benefits of teaching young students international news as part of their academic education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mona Lisa's facial expressions were \"determined\" by the Facial Action Coding System. It determined that she was \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angery\" (D'Alto). This super high-tech machine can identify your emotions based on analyzing the muscles in your face. But is the technology really needed in classrooms?\n\nThe knowledge of emotional expressions to teachers can be very beneficial. Everyone knows that kids don't learn the same and keep up at the same pace. Teachers could use this for kids to know how comfortbale they are with the lesson. In the text it states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor'\" (D'Alto). This shows that FACS can help students who don't understand the lesson, by looking at their facial expressions, and changing the lesson to fit them.\n\nOthers would argue that facial expressions for every person and emotion are different. As the author pointed out in the text, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" (D'Alto), people will disbelieve because not every person shows the same emotion the same way. Some oppossers would argue that the addition of the system to education would drastically bring up the cost. Making schools more expensive and put schools at an advantage.\n\nAlthough I agree with the fact that not every face makes the same expression,\n\nFACS can identify the way the muscles move to indicate the emotion. In the text it states, \"This process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\" (D'Alto). This quote shows how the system works and to identify the muscle movement in your face. While, yes the cost of education will increase due to the addition of FACS, the benefits will outway the costs. Like any technological addition to schools, they use funds and sponsors to help pay for that stuff. Helping kids find a new way to learn and helping them succeed, seems a lot more important than costs.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System will help teachers and students world wide succeed. When teachers know how to fix their lessons based on how their students learn, it makes the job easier for them and they get to see their students grow. Although the FACS was able to identify Mona Lisa's facial expressions, they can be used for so much more in the real world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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