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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author includes doesnt want leave audience guessing would happen next Then I take test again This quote saying failed test plant never going give spring comes going try I feel though author added give better understanding feels leave homeland come place dont understand flower situation story When thought plants smelt gave old feelings homeland close grandmother She use plants free growing rather seeing pots room grow By seeing got Saeng break cry In conclusion I feel though author added paragraph end understanding let Saeng new place new culture never give test feels passed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Advances computer technology positively affected society live today Computers teach handeye coordination help kids learn inside outside school connect world socially These amazing devices done nothing harm new generation In fact done quite opposite Computers excellent way teaching handeye coordination People opposed using computers believe make kids lazy ignorant This case The coordination gained using mouse games sports like baseball lacross Players look incoming ball guide stick mitt catch ball As see coordination essential sports It also needed simple every day tasks around house These could plain taking trash cooking meals We overlook fact easy jobs like still require coordination A misplaced pot could pour boiling water floor cause huge mess W lucky live world good teacher handey coordination Computers worlds knowledgeable teachers No matter hard try using computer learn something The internet best cache information In current day age environment growing concern Paper made trees must cut It takes forty years tree grow seconds cut one Schools everywhere use computer keyboards work instead paper pencil Since students familiar computers enjoy working writing The average kid could learn hour computer would whole day school The transiton needs made Computers also massive social network Instant messaging primary sources communication If nt computers I would nt able talk friend moved two years ago This one example social networks helpful They help people stay connected old friends work All major corporations use computers invest sell products store information Computers ultimate way communicate Obviously computers growing exponentially popularity The put use Imagine ecofriendly country nt cut million acres rainforest every year The benifits computers endless Three handeye coordination knowledge communication", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story type paragraph author knows its bond happen I know paragraph says in spring I take test again She preparing next year This I think paragraph ended story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few decades, because of the growth in competition among companies, customers are forced to watch advertisements for their products and services. Due to these competitive advertisement campaigns, a sheer number please are influenced by their content. The underlying problems along with feasible solutions to tackle the detrimental effects of product videos are analysed in the ensuing paragraphs.\n\nFirstly, different strategies adopted by companies to attract more customers have influenced almost every group in our society. To explain further, even though these companies focus on boosting their revenue, they inject false and exaggerated ideas about their products. For instance, certain companies list their products as number one among others and claim that they are using natural products to attract more buyers. In contrast, they find loopholes in the law to slide through the complications of further complaints regarding their videos. Moreover, nowadays many pharmaceutical companies are targetting toddlers and mothers, and they have almost become successful. Today, rather than feeding homemade clean edibles to the kids, parents tend to provide pediatric supplements by the influence of promotional videos. Therefore, not only parents but also their offsprings believe that those products are better. Hence, a large number of people get scammed by such product based footages.\n\nSecondly, there are various plausible measures to protect customers from getting mocked by these companies. First and foremost, governments should monitor and impose robust rules to evaluate the genuinity of every advertisement that pops up on the screens. Although promotional footages are necessary for legit companies to list and promote their products and services to the public, such strong rules might restrict fake and phishing content from appearing on the tab. Furthermore, the consumer court should form a branch which tests and research every single product that gets showcased in supermarkets as well as on internet pages to determine their quality of them. As a result, most of the unwanted clips of certain products as well as services might be avoided by replacing them with solid products.\n\nTo conclude, the influence of advertisement is an acute problem, because it induces impacts on the preferences of people when purchasing. Although the challenges are improbable to be eradicated within a short span, there should be concrete measures from the legal side to mitigate the adverse effects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it might be good to learn because the nicknames. Venus is called Evening Star, but that's not right. Venus is not a star, it is a plant. The article aslo put in there how it is aslo called Earth's twin. It is how ever Earth twin in terms of density and size.\n\nHumans has try to send spacecraftto land on Venus, but couldn't because how hot the plants is. it is about 800 degrees fahrenheit. that is why a spaceship hasnt land on venus. how ever that make it a challenging planet to learn about.\n\nScientists are still trying to learn from it. They are trying to find out a way to put a spcaeship on Venus. The only good reason why is because Venus is so much like Earth. Venus has a rocky sediment such as valleys, mountains, and other craters.\n\nNASA is still trying to send humans over there. NASA want s to send a vehicle to hovering over venus such as 30 or more miles above Venus. the only reasonwhy there got the idea is because an airplant fly over storms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Isnt funny laugh change senery mood like someones face expression make person laugh nowhere outrageous laugh hear sounded funny I personaly stages I like call contagious circle laughs In past I cheered laughing hearing others laugh At times even I cheered others makeing laugh laughing humourless jokes It feel good laugh end long lasting giggles I feel refreshed useing energy make noise friends pick clown group They think im hilarious joke popper I pop funny jokes I personaly dont think im funny reason makeing laugh I laugh There one joke I made cheer friend It made everyone fall floor laughing It walking store seeing different nationalitys mothers baby s How mother treats baby s differently At end I tell african american mother yells baby shut I use cuss word thats inappropriate writeing piece You get idea Anyway friends still day ask tell joke always laugh loud first time I told There always one person life totaly obbsesed laugh love way sounds I personaly fell love boyfreinds laugh looked darn cute The first time met picking cousin park I friend trailer park dad lived time Malikye boyfriend laugh made want scream CAPS funny I wanted run tickle death couldnt ever stop laughing Most people know hate laugh think obnoxious He even hates laugh I dont know I addicted It funny even hearing someones laugh give feelings A laugh shows sound shows personality charecter Laughing big importance life It shows much person helps many people I love laughing People full laughter without world would dull unhappy place I dont know anyone would want Evil maybe even evil laugh shows charecter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Katherine Paterson I thinking items listed taken offenisve well I believe free country people treated equal im trying get newpaper organization keep fact add Yes restictions things solve age buying make people use By I think would solve alot issues taken away would alittle serious magazines moivesSo keep set higher restiction sells things fine dearly zack", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, the second planet from the sun, can be seen shining bright in the sky. However, not much is known about the neighboring planet. The authors uses information about Venus and possiblities for the future to help support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nVenus is referred to as the earth's \"twin.\" Though Venus could not be any more different than Earth, it poses a possibility that it may have been similar in the past. \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\" (paragraph 3). \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (paragraph 4). To explore Venus and find connections of Venus to Earth could lead to future breakthrough of a habital planet.\n\nTo show the exploration of Venus might not just be empty hope, he proposes ideas atronomers may have to analyze the planet. \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray...Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\" (paragraph 5). However, this may restrict close observations, especially since limited light can penetrate the planet's atmosphere. To solve this problem, the author proposes another solution. To overcome the delicacy of modern computers, astronomers are thinking of going back in time and using mechanical ones. \"By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces\" (paragrah 7).\n\nIn the passage, the author presents both solutions to complications with the mission and possible breakthroughs that the mission might bare. Either by staying out of range of Venus's atmosphere or using mechanical computers, the hardships of surviving on the harsh planet could be overcome. The rover or blimp may bring back valuable information that may indicate a Earth-like haven from back in time. With endless hope and possibilities, the author has shown the worth of a mission to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author created warming loving tone Narciso created mood including greatest aspects home For example paragraph explains endless celebrations family friends formed backdrop life warm home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Don't we all want life to be just a tad bit more easier? Even if it's in the smallest way possible. With the Facial Action Coding System, this is possible. I think that the use of the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is not a bad idea at all. Especially if you are using it in a classroom of any school. It might be a little dramatic and weird at first, but we would definitely adjust. For example, when the article said that the computer could read my facial emotions to detect if I like the ads that are popping up or I don't. This would be helpful to an extent, only for me though. I personally wouldn't want any ads at all in my face constanty, they start to make you lose focus and become annoying. So at this point, what do I do to express I don't want them at all? But other than that case, I believe that the Facial Coding could actually do us some justice! In paragraph 6, they showed a perfect example of the benefits of the facial coding system. When it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", all of us students can probably relate to that in some particular way. I do find myself at often times where I get bored with the assignment on the computer screen. Especially when reading a super long excerpt or something of that sort. The computer should be allowed to notify if I am feeling bored or \"uninterested\" and then immediately change the lesson to something of a more appealing sort. Teachers are busy people and we students understand that 100%. With this new facial coding, they will no longer have to search the web for educational and inspirational fun learning websites for us to enjoy. The facial coding can just transition it for us. And no the facial coding would not let us browse the web for anything innapropiate. Everything would and should still be school appropiate, because it could be programmed to do so. So no more worries teachers and staff. Technology does seem to be taking over more and more everyday, but it is also becoming very beneficial. Let the Facial Action Coding System take control, and take a step backwards. This could also help us in another way other than school. It could help celebrities and artist that paint. Some artists or painters paint portraits of people or the objects right in front of them. With the Facial Action Coding System, artist can no longer worry about so much if it will look identical or not. So if the person they're painting is having mixed emotions and you can't really tell how to make them feel or look. The facial coding can give you every wrinkle, every smile to include in your artwork. It will improve not only your art, but the happiness of others because they will be under assurance that you know 100% what they will look like in the painting. The Facial Action Coding System will not solve everything, but it's sure to make life a little more easier, and isn't that what we want?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What are your thoughts on the Facial Action Coding System? I think it is an amazing idea. This could help students and people all over the globe. It could help teachers get the lesson to the students. This could be a revolutionary tool of our era.\n\nFirst, I'm going to talk aboout how this could help people around the world, especially students. If a student is confused by something while they are online the FACS tool could pick this up and help them understand it better. In the passage it says \"it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This could help the students get a better grade in the class. If someone is trying to find something on the interent and they have a disgusted look on their face the FACS could then try to help them find what they are looking for. This would be very beneficial to people all over the world.\n\nNext, I will talk about how the FACS tool could help teachers. Sometimes if a student is feeling sad the teahcer cannot tell because the student will just fake that nothing is wrong. If the classroom computers, or a school computer, had the FACS program on it the teacher could then see if the student was sad or not. This could also help the teacher because they can find out what their class is struggling with and they can help them work through it. This could lead to higher percentage of students passing the course and maybe even a higher graduation percentage. These are just some ways that a teacher could benefit from the FACS program.\n\nThird, I will talk\n\nabout what the creation of this tool could mean for our era. With all the new facial recognition devices it seems about right for this kind of tool to be on the horizon. Phones now can unlock just by showing ones face. We have made humungous strides in the technology part sof society and I think this could be another one if this applied to computers around the globe. This could benefit everyone. It would not matter how old or how young you are. It could help both young and elder people understand different concepts that may have trouble with.\n\nIn Conclusion, I think that the FACS tool is an amzing idea.I would love to see this tool on all computers one day. This tool could help anyone do anything that they can dream of. Being a student in some honors classes I know that some of the content can be very difficult and the FACS tool can help each and everyone of us understand it. This could help me in some classes that I might not be the best student or understand the best in. Life and school can be hard but I think this tool could make them both a little bit easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear residents come attention controversy whether computers good thing andor helpful society I strongly believe computers helpful resource make day day life easier Computers help us many ways including making learning easier helps students better nad serves great teaching tool One reason I support computers make learning easier You might ask hao screen keyboard make learning easier sounds crazy true Let s say re middle student assigned write paper designated topic instead spending hours upon hours looking right information library could google search topic You exactly need know front within seconds prettty cool right Still nt believe computers helpful What I told allowed students better That s right computers allow students better Websites edline allow teachers post students grades quickly How helpful When take quiz treacher grade quizzes And things like absentees weekends vacations day get quiz back gets delayed Sometimes kids nt get quizzes back two weeks took By time get back time chapter test grade found nt one sections This lowers ability test But grade posted internet days time study know study test As see computers helpful students good teachers The answer yes computers good teaching tool Has ever happened No matter much teacher explains seems like speaking another language showed cool video youtube explaining Would learn better visual front I sure would Computers also great teachers gives ability email teachers problem get latest information s going Do understand computers useful I hope realize useful computers make learning easier allow students better great learning tool These many reasons computers useful I hope keep using community", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is not what you think it is. It is not some alien built statue; it is a natural landform. If you see the most recent Mars Global surveyor photo, you can see that the mesa doesn't have any of the facial features like the Viking 1 photo.\n\nWhat many of conspiracy theorist don't realize is that the Face on Mars benifited NASA's funding tremendously. The article says that, \"The Face on Mars has since become a pop icon.\" The article also states that the people who defend NASA's budget wishes that there was an ancient civilization on Mars. Therefore the conspiracy theorist are just making bad theories.\n\nNASA also made sure that the Face was just a natural land form. For example the text states that when the MGS arrived at Mars Jim Garvin said that, \"We felt this was important to taxpayers.\" Which means that NASA wanted to find the truth for everyone, not just themselves. Another example of this is when they got the first photo and realized that not everyone was satisfied, so they prepared to look at it again. The text also states that they used the camera's absolute maximum resolution to capture the image. Not only did NASA waste their budget once on the conspiracist they did it multiple times.\n\nSo in the end it is illogical to still believe that the Face on Mars is really an alien built monument. NASA sent numerous missons to photograph this landform just for the conspiracist. They also have no reason to hide that there is an ancient civilization, because funding is something that they need to keep NASA running. Therefore I believe that the face on Mars is really just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that I think they can reduce pollution. I think this because they would run on electricity, use less fuel, and reduce greenhouse gases.\n\nThey would run on electricity because they do not use gasoline. Using gas would cause the cars to produce a gas that pollutes the ozone layer of the atmosphere. Polluting the ozone layer causes it to deteriorate, which when done enough, can cause it to dissappear and let cosmic radiation get in. Humans can lose brain cells when the gas is breathed in.\n\nThe would use less fuel because they would be more effecient. Using less fuel would make the car travel farther than before. Being able to travel farther would make longer trips seem shorter because of being able to go longer distances without stopping. We would not have to stop at recharging stations if we put strips of land on the road that could recharge the car.\n\nThey would reduce greeenhouse gases because they run on electricity. Whenever cars produce these gases they can cause health issues to humans. It can also cause problems with the air and water, also causing health issues. Greenhouse gases can also kill off other animals as well as various sea creatures.\n\nThat is why I support the use of driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I think kid s alowed go computers So talk relitives across The want I family members I talk evry day I laptop say I relitives I belive I email They told mother living So I asked seaid yes true I looked mom lived Thanks computer also I learned one The So I asked mom I go said yes So I went sister even visited family members point I tell looked exacly I pichered tall coverd trees Birds scwerwels climing trees thing surprised house top mountine For sale I wished mom thier love So ever time go rent house thanks computers Lastly even look people internet I herd criss rock almost died So I got home I went laptop looked I said nothing That say one thing surprised The seaid geting divorce From wife I think peorson said That almost died missed read So I look fraverit people Thanks computers time accet people computers use lern think everyone sayes So I hope make good chouse But befor choose think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the auther supports this idea by explaining to us the things about Venus. The auther explained to us all about Venus, but Venus isn't like earth it used to be a long time ago. Venus could've had oceans and probably could've supported some life forms. Now Venus isn't so much like Earth it still has some treates like surface of rocky sediments it also has valleys, and mountians. All these things sound familiar becuase of here on earth but don't be fooled Venus is about one of the most dangers plantes to vist. Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The surface of Venus is average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we have here. Us human could never survive on there the climt is just crazy there even tho Venus is second from the sun it still has the hottist surface of all plantes. Besides all of those crazy condions Venus also has erupting volcanoes and the wether there is also bad it has powerful eartherquakes, and freduent lightning strikes. The auther also said that scientists even wanted to vist the plant but how could they even survive the condition of the plant. It says that the dont want to land on it put more like hover above it becuase the extrem tempiters could easily melt everything. But even tho they won't land on it the air would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. But our new genertion is packed with smart ideas and things that can keep us safe from extreme condions like Venus it's self. I think one day we might just be exploring new plantes and you never know might even explore new unvirses. I think our populion will keep growing and one day the earth wouldn't be able to keep all of us and everything will start runnng out faster and faster. The auther did a good job writing about Venus and it's extreme courses and how he thinks sceintist one soon be able to go and explore it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the development of industrialization, people use more and more machines in factories and farms. I believe there are more benefits rather than withdraws for human society.\r\n\r\nThere are lots of advantages to using the machine instead of using manual work. Firstly, it will be more effective and productive to use a machine to do the repeat work, especially in an urgent situation like making masks. The news said there were hundreds of mask-making machines taken on board by textile factories overnight to make masks to keep people safe from the Covid-19. Secondly, using machines will benefit people who own small businesses such as dairy farms, fresh organism vegetable delivery, and fresh juice factories. Owners can use the advanced machine to cultivate the seedlings or making lemon juice automatically instead of hiring many people to work for them. \r\n\r\nIt will be an optimistic circle for people to use machines profitably. For example, workers can be stimulated to learn how to manipulate and maintain the modern tech machines imported from another country like USA or China. Workers can be survived from the intense physical work, which may cost their health and safety. Instead, they can be trained as a skilled worker to manage the machines in the factories. Furthermore, people can use machines to do dangerous work in a severe environment, such as making gold in extremely high temperatures. They can less mistake than human bodies and reduce the human-made risks.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are more advantages and positive effects for people to use machines, which can develop human’s health, wealth, and well-being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern era technology is increasing and people are showing so much interest in the modern technology, and in this essay, I will discuss the effect of it on surroundings and own mankind who lost their jobs to commence with the environment affect of online shopping. We can save over time and there is no need for a physical establishment Due to which we can save Overland for the purposes what is Apple my friend Siyda Ridda all done Fizan and he said he's learnt or agriculture and get extra profit with a lad. Another benefit is that we can't wait traffic jam in cities and we can all relax at home with the help of online shopping for them or talking about the jobs or people using online shopping Can not like Voice, they cannot afford their employee salary therefore in many companies jobs hiring rate decreased and unemployment take rice. Moreover, if we completely depend on it so then those people who do not possess the knowledge about online shopping cannot order of bread and butter. In conclusion I think online shopping for white axolotl facilities, but we cannot adopt in computers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, the author talks about the dangerous it presents in Venus. Venus is Earth like planet, it supports some forms of life. It has some valleys, mountains, and craters, similar to Earth. It would be a great option for space travel. However, the author discusses that there are many challenges to study Venus.\n\nVenus is almost impossible for human to live. The atomospheric pressure in Venus is 90 times greater than it is in Earth. The temperature is 800 degrees fahremheit average. The author says that, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes makes researcher harder to approrch.\n\nAuthor did a good job of showing specific number to makes reader easier to understand his idea, such as showing 800 degrees or 90 times more. Also, he showed \"dangers\" by making many comparasion to Earth, which is very familiar to us and it ade easier for us to understand.\n\nIn conclusion I think author well supported his idea. The author first showed why it is worthy to study Venus. And then, he discussed what type of dangers are present.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author writes about the idea of exploring Venus. The author mentions many obstacles, that make the exploration of Venus hard, but he also talks about why it is important for us to explore the planet.\n\nOne of the most important reasons, to explore Venus, is the fact that Venus could once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. The author writes\n\n\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". The author also brings out the fact, that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nIn Paragraph 8 the author writes about how exploring the planet would not just be for the information, but to feed the curiosity that humans naturally have. According to the authors opinion, if we can defeat the problem that is exploring Venus, we will be more confident and innovative facing equally intimidating endeavors in the future. The author expresses his opinion about exploring by saying\n\n\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expnded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"\n\nSo in Paragraph 4, when the author says \"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable\" he means that the insight we would gain and the satisfaction of feeding our curiosity makes Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. I truly hope,that the challenge of exploring Venus will be defeated, because it could possibly change the way we see our World.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D' Alto , the author explains a new technology called the Facial Coding System, and how it allows computers to identify human emotions. It also says in the text that it could possibly make education better for students by identifying if the student is bored or confused. Which is not not true.\n\nIn the article it goes on to say that it doesn't even identify those two emotions. There are only six emotions the computer system would be able to identify , reffering to the quote \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions - happiness , surprise , anger , disgust , fear , and sadness- and then associated with each charecteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" Every person shows emotion differently , so it would be a guessing game in all honesty.\n\nIn the text it states that we all preform a similar calculation , \" in fact we humans preform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day\" . In reality you would never really be able to tell how someone is feeling just by the expression on their face . Sure some may say that if someone is smiling its 95% positive that they are happy when it could be just a blantantly fake smile . The computer would assume that the person is happy , but could never tell what that persons true emotion is just by the way their face muscles are moving.\n\nIn conclusion using a computer to help students by identifying their emotion based on if they are confused or bored would not work because one, it doesn't have that feature , and two it could all just be their face. A computer is not built to know a human because each and every one is different.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because Venus is the closest planet to Earth In the terms of the density and size, and on distance too, but each previos mission was unmanned, no spcaecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. It's been three decades since a spaceship has touched down on Venus, Is a challenging planet for the humans to study even despite of the proximity to us. Also, there's a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets on Venus, but what's more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the Venus atmosphere.\n\nThe temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and also the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what is on planet Earth, the conditions are far more extreme than anything we humans encounter on Earth. Even if Mercury is closer to the sun, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet on the solar sytem and it also presents additional impedimentslike powerful earthquakes, erupting volcanoes.\n\nIf the scientists know everything about this why are they discussing about visiting Venus if it isn't a good place where we humans could be and live at, because we wouldn't even be able to live for a day just as the spacecraft that didn't even survided just only for a few hours. Probably long ago just as it says on paragraph 4 that, Venus was maybe covered largely with oceans and it could have supported various forms of life just like here on Earth and Venus then also has some features that are analogous to Earth. It's better to keep studying Venus then to just go visit it, because there would probably be stuff on Venus that the scientist don't even know about and then the people that would go visit Venus would be in such danger. In conlusion, scientist should still be doing research about Venus, because everything they have known recently about Venus it sounds really dangerous just to go and see it on their own then they would put their lifes in danger, and I don't think that's what they want so It's better to keep doing more research about it instead of just going without knowing everything about the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First, while I was on the boat with the Seagoing Cowboys, we had many things to do. One of them was that when the animals were off the ship we played baseball. The ship was big enough for it which was great for us. When the animals were on we learned new things about the animals. The male horses were the hardest to feed. They always kicked, but the females were nice and gentle while I feed them.\n\nNext, when we went to China I saw so many cool buildings. Even some that have not even been seen no where else. I also saw the Acropolis in Greece. That was a great thing to see. In Venice, Italy I took no a gondola ride though the city with streets of water. I never saw anything so beautiful in my life.\n\nThen, what I learned on this trip was that helping others that lost something in a war is pretty fun. I got to learn new lauguage and what they ate before everything was taken from them. Doing this will help u see how hard it can be when a we come and you never know that one of the days you live you will feel how they felt when they lost food and a home and even loved ones. Doing this your becoming a better person and people will look up to you for that.\n\nLast, with the honor to do this wonderful thing I became a honorable person. Even though something like this can change things and the way people look at me. I was just a average boy until I went to the Seagoing Cowboys which changed how I even looked at people and myself. Doing this program will change your life and teach people how to be a great person.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since our inception, we humans have dedicated our lives to improving the lives of ourselves, others around us, and our children. Making life easier is the reason we work, and driverless cars are the next great innovation. Transportation will be revolutionized by this vital step in our path of conquering what we once thought was impossible. Through careful planning and development, Google's driverless cars will be a great leap in human progress.\n\nDriverless cars will be safer than cars on the road today. So far, Google's cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. This shows that accidents on the roads in the future will only decrease with the introduction of driverless cars. The article also states that \"further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software...make driving safer\". Progress in technoloogy will make cars much better drivers than they are now. In fact, \"information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes...allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" Cars without humans drivers are a boon to those who care about safety on the road. With this amazing new technology, there is no reason to be against these overwhelmingly fantastic new features.\n\nGoogle's driverless cars will also be a better experience for the driver. Driving is a mundane task; many people must commute for hours just to drive to and from work. Fortunately, manufacturers of driverless cars hope that there will be \"in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays\". Because these displays will also be able to be turned off instantly, these will not subtract from the safety of the car. These entertainment systems will be great for those who do not enjoy driving. The future of driving is one that will bring fun along with its plethora of safety features.\n\nGoogle's new cars are something to be excited about because they bring safety and entertainment, which will benefit the lives of drivers around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that the Face on Mars is created by aliens. The Face on Mars is not created by aliens. One reason we know the Face on Mars isnt real is because aliens aren't real.\n\nThe Face on Mars wasn't created by aliens. Aliens aren't real if you think about it this way. In many little kid books most of the time this is a bad guy or a vilan. The vilan or bad guy could be a gross nasty monster and we all know that those monsters arne't real. In the \"book\" the aliens would be the monster and we know that monsters aren't real. Another way we know it wasn't made by aliens is from many scientists.\n\nIn paragraph 6 is states that, \"Although few scientists beleived the Face was an alien artifact.\" There fore this shows that even famous scientists don't think that the Face was made by an alien. In paragraph 7 it also says,\" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform.\" This proving my point that aliens didn;t make the Face because it occured naturally on its own. The last and final way we know it wasn't made by aliens is because of the camera they used.\n\nIn 2001 if you were to take a picture it would make everything in the picture 3 times bigger. Therefore if the Face on Mars was to have been made by aliens then you would have been able to see them in the picture. In conclusion the Face on Mars isn't made by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been observed that the youth take a gap from their study after finishing their schooling instead of getting admission at The University. There are several betterments and detriments to such a viewpoint. Both aspects are elaborated on further in the ensuing paragraph.\n\nDiscussing the benefits, the prime reward for travel is that the young guns can learn about the culture. By this,I mean that as student roams around the world during their break, they will learn about different traditions, languages and social skills. Therefore, they gain their approach to adapting new things into their life, and become multilingual people. Moreover, students get practical experience while doing part-time jobs. In other words, the pupil learns about maintaining financial condition, enhances knowledge about businesses as well as finds their choice for further study. For example, the admission department from the University of Pennsylvania concluded that the students who get admission after a gap, results are exceptional compared to other pupils.\n\nThere is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like as it's earning good and the work is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be experts in that field , however they do their studies then they have a degree and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small scale .\n\nIn conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a job , but they can not be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in school and university education", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph illustrates the amount of air pollution from different causes in China, the U.S., Japan, and Australia in 2021. Overall, China had the highest level of air pollution from industrial activity, transport and electricity generation, while Australia had the lowest level of air pollution. The main cause of air pollution in Japan was industry, and that of USA came from transport.\nIndustrial activity in China produced air pollution the most at 80 PPM, followed by transport at 70 PPM. Electricity generated air pollution the least in the country, but it was still higher than other three countries (just below 60 PPM). However, Australia, generated air pollution from the three activities at just below 20 PPM.\nAmerica produced air pollution from transport (at just under 60 PPM), followed by electricity generation (at just over 30 PPM), and industry at just under 30 PPM. Japan's air pollution came from industrial activities (at above 40 PPM), followed by transport, which was at 30 PPM, and electricity at 15 PPM.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist never taken advice older men The map would lot safer easier People seem always look shortcut including He could died heat stroke lack water He perseverance though never gave saved Being situation setting I would given", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The tech company Google is often seen inventing new machines and programs. It is hard to not see or hear about this massive company these days. Google has always made new ideas and creations, like the recent Google Cardboard which allows people to use their phones as a virtual reality headset. However Google has also begun to develop their own driverless cars, which has captured the attention of some people. While the development of driverless cars is something many people would like to see come to fruitation, there are some issues that will arise due to these driverless cars.\n\nWith everyday life as it is accidents will happen and a few car crashes are expected to occur. In these situations it does not take long to gather information about the reasons as to why the crash occured in the first place. With all of the needed evidence gathered the affected parties can quickly find the one responsible and bring charges to them. However if the crashed vehicle was in fact driverless then they must begin to re-evaluate the problem, who exactly is to blame for this mishap? Would the person who was riding within the driverless car be the one charged, or would the blame fall onto the shoulders of the manufacturers? It can no longer be said that the rider was the person who made the mistake and caused the crash, perhaps due to a distraction, because the car was driving itself.\n\nThe development and use of driverless cars may prove to be benefitial to humans after the appropriate laws have been created. Google, Tesla, Audi and more companies have turned their sights onto autonomous cars and have begun testing and developing them. But once the development is finally completed new laws will need to be created in order to determine who would be liable in a case of injury. Driverless cars may be something that many people would like to see become a reality but the issues it brings must be addressed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why venus is so big?\n\nMy article is \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" this article use logos (Facts) to explain more about Venus and the challenges.\n\nVenus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\", is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Often referred to as Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. (NASA) is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified\n\nelectronics made of silicon carbide have been tested is a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the in sight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nI think, we have to innovation our technology because we don't know what we are gonna find out there, species, beings livings, or something else. We need to be prepared first. It's gonna be hard, if we go right now probably we die.\n\nI think is interesting to explore more planets to find more beings livings, but some of the planets are gonna be hard to explore.\n\nby: STUDENT_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience kind thing people patient still complaining thats patience Patience waiting kind People loose patience easily really cool nice someone waits say phone talking someone else even internet something Its poliete patience I dont know definition gon na guess I think person waiting patiencently quietly person even need get somewhere", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The feature cyclist good it erodding say paragraph I would describe fun It also looks time one bes time Here examples happy competive thin full Im going explain examples First looks hoppy becaus story said the morning strong legs smile face phase hoppy felt My second example competive seems like competive person bcouse heathy lead take ride bike My third example way becasse soid As easily sounding bond trouble thirst fears behind part made feel", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We (NASA) have recently discovered the \"face\" on Mars which has been a big thing since we gave the information out to the world.\n\nA lot of people think it's an actual face created by aliens because the time before we discovered it it was foggy up on Mars so they think aliens must have did it then.\n\nDo you think it's a real face created by aliens or just something natural that happened? Since you said yes your wrong and now I'm going to give factoral information to support my answer.\n\nFirst we did think that it could have been a real face too but that didn't last very long because every happening has to have an explanation.\n\nWe figured it was just another Martian mesa but it did turn out to have unusual shadows making it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nBut that's all it was just unusual shadows that appeared on the \"face\".\n\nWe then later revealed the image for everyone to see and it sure did give a lot of attraction to Mars.\n\nThe \"face\" appeared in movies, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even in a haunted grocery store check out line for 25 years!\n\nThen everyone thought that that was actual evidence of life on Mars!\n\nNASA kind of did wish that there was ancient civilization on Mars.\n\nIt was our priority to take bunch of pictures of this controversy to come up with an explanation for all this for everyone to understand what it really is.\n\nSo in 1998 when the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, the (MOC) team shot a picture ten times that was even more clearer than the originals.\n\nEveryone was exited, waiting for the picture to come out on the internet to figure out what it really was.\n\nThe picture then finally came out and it turned out to be a natural landform!\n\nNot very exiting, huh?\n\nBut still a lot people didn't believe us because in the winter of 1998 it was very cloudy up there and some beleive the aliens were hidden by the fog.\n\nSo in April 2001, we went to get a second look and this time we used the best camera we could find that picked out every detail.\n\nDo you think they found alien evidence?\n\nNope we didn't, it turned out to be a butte or a mesa.\n\nSo now you know the real answer.\n\nEven though it does look like a face and is very unusual we found the facts.\n\nBut could maybe someday we find weird alien evidence up in space on a planet?\n\nWe'll see!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nIt can be a challenge becuase Venus is one of the brightest light of the sky and it would be dangerous because it's too hot, Venus is to closed of the sun and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere.\n\nThe temperature at Venus is 90 times greater than here at our planet it is at 800 degrees to be specific. In this conditions is more extreme for humans explore Venus. the author says \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun,\"(paragraph 3) This is because it present additional impediments like erupting volvanoes.\n\nFor the Astonomers it isnt' that dangerous because they still want to visit Venus because they said it is probably covered largely with oceans and inchlude such as valleys, mountains and craters. That's why they are so exited to visit Venus and see if is true.\n\nThey said that the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable but they are options and it they are more safe. The Nasa want to venus be more simple for humans so they can visit Venus they want the temperature would be around 170 defrees. Not perfect but the survivable for humans.\n\nIt seem it is a challege because the of the greater temperature but for some people it is not a problem they still want to know more about Venus and explore how it looks like it", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter Shortest Distance Between Two People A thing done since birth laugh Laughter something incredible world human existence something relieves awkward situations brings people together makes life little bit easier Laughter something everyone shares common Some people find laughter different things others still laugh together Many times life laughter helped tough situations brought close someone made life enjoyable I remember I trying volleyball team It first day tryouts I really nervous I nt know anyone I never even heard people I going competing There one thing I knew though It shared common goal making team successful Tryouts began I felt like wondering I even I ignored kept working hard Tryouts went okay rest week still something nt feel right I still felt like I nt belong It last day tryouts girls warmed little I still felt little uncomfortable After last practice time announce teams I really nervous cause I nt make Or I everyone hated team He announced names I beginning give hope said name I excited girls seemed annoyed name getting called When I got home I told parents excited I told I nt really know anybody kind felt like outsider They asked I tried talking anyone I said really nt try talking I thought I My mom told I could get know put I thought realized I really nt I ignored much ignored I also nt I really cool person I fun around I reason I crawled shell time I decided next day practice I would put The next practice I showed partnered girl named It awkward first quiet passing ball back forth Then I started talking making jokes laughed I laughed great time The rest practice went great The awkward moments faded away laughter We worked hard joked around laughed I really felt like bonding They laughter brought us together All time felt like far away different really nt like Having fun laughing together showed us much common I believe day laughter brought team together I never forget day It day I learned important laughter relationship getting know someone well brings people together That season volleyball I made many new friends I also learned valuable lesson awkward situation always turned around laughter Today I still talk girls team still today laugh together known someone nt mean fun laughter fade away I believe get stronger Whenever I meeting new people I always try break ice lighten mood something funny I think big point lives happy fun laugh togther That exactly I plan", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, some people believe that it is good to share information about scientific research, business and the academic field to many people. Others reckon that such informations are too important or too valuable to be share for free. Here are discussions of the statements and my opinion.\nBy development of the technology, people can more likely to access to valuable information such as experimental results and interviewing results of citizens than before. Some people use it for their academic interests or for the business strategies, so that people believe that such information contribute to companies profits or individuals' advantages in academic. For example, many of the medical students read dissertation of diseases, which were written in the past. By reading and using the scientific information students will become excellent professionals.\nOn the other hand, people can access informations from any countries via internet. Recently, increasing the cyber crimes is the serious problem all over the world. Therefore some people reckon that it is too risky to share valuable informations. If information on valuable national research results is leaked, the country would had enormous loss for the economy.\nTo sum up ,sharing as much informations as possible is useful for the everyone to improve their academic skills and contribute to their companies, while easier access to every aspects of informations might bring disadvantages such as information leakage or cybercrime. In my opinion, I mostly agree with it is good to share information, but I believe the source of information needs to be careful not to misuse the sources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "hey I believe certain materials book music magazines etc nt removed shelves found offensive First I know people different views appon things magazines books music And I also know somethings offensive nt offensive perople Such music kinds music And I know people find rap music offensive doesnt Because A lot people nt find offensive relates Second I feel people find offensive would ignore would nt problem Because I know maybe type magazine book even type music listen offensive someone else might find offensive I bet someone else finds offensive So judge things would nt right Third I m pretty sure something library offensive library would nt But maybe would take time worry self instead worrying s offensive s world might better place And yes understand people different views nt let get us So see I believe certain materials books music magazines etc nt removed shelves found offensive Because billions people earth I doubt would give answer Because So many people different opinions beliefs appon things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are coming may be sooner than expected. Googles cofounder has a dream of make every car to be driverless and run on half the gas taxis use. Since the beginning of the 21 century technology had a major boost computers, sensors and mapping are now up to date with the real world doing things people would dream about in the 1980's. Now that the technology is capable of doing what we want, we should try to progess the technolgy of the world only to help with accidents, and make lifes tasks easier.\n\nMaking the driveless car is a challenge that can be accomplished it just requires time for it to happen. Google has already made a car that drove half a million miles without crashing ,but it nedded very little assisstants. Knowing this its only time until they finally make the car that doesn't crash and can drive without any assisstant from a person. Google modified a Prius that has a spinning sensor on the roof that makes a 3-D picture of everything surrounding it. With this and other cameras that allow it to see its blind spots it has the capacity to go a step further in\n\nhaving the car a reliable source on the road.\n\nMost states outlaw the test of computer driven car such as California, Nevada, Florida and the District of Columbia. The minds of people change once shown it trustworthy. So that once everyone sees that the car is safe to use on everyday roads it would be another step into making driveless cars. But some might say that if the computer crashes that runs it that would end up crashing the car. Well with problems there is always a solution and the only thing would be to add a backup computer that lets it reset itself so then it's able to continue on its route.\n\nFor the reasons wirtten driveless cars are no more a thing of the imagnation it would be able to have one in tthe near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What we say matters and shouldnt be taken lightly\n\nAmerica is a country of opppurtunity. And many people come to this country to escape or change their harsh living style. When the founding father created the consitution.\n\nI'm sure that they expected the system to last, and for the citizens to have a say in what happens to our home. but now is our government is denying us our, chance to make a difference in america. Voting.\n\nMany people think that the Electoral college is a place, But it actully is a process. the fonding fathers established it in the constioin as a comprmise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. But now it is a way for people with a big pocket, to get there say, in who get to be president. In source 2: the readers are told that over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election. What this tells the readers is, americans don't feel like their vote actually counts towards the election anymore.\n\nNow people are starting to wonder, Whats wrong with the Electoral college? The answer to that questions is, under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. To any american looking at this process happening and knowing their vote doesnt really matter. would feel like an injustise has been done to them, and they are absolutlly right. In the constition it say , That americanshave the freedom to vote, both men and women. so as a citizen of american, WE should be able to choose our president not an elector, from the electoral college.\n\nAs an american the citizens should be able choose who they want for president. It is not only unfair and unjust, that our votes don't have any pull. But it is also going against what our fonding fathers worked so hard to perfect. A naton where the people's words matter. The people who work hard everyday, teaching our children, and protecting our citizens, the people who lay down their lives for this country. The people who support this country , no matter how many injustices are thrown at them. Those people should have the most sway in choosing our president. Not the people who have had to never work a day in there life, or the people who are not grateful for this country. when a person who holds a position in an american government office, is easily paid off, It s time for some new, loyal, and dedicated workers. who work just as hard as the rest of america.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College shows many reasons why we should change it to popular vote. Like for instance The Electoral college is not fair, but by voting with popular vote not only will more people vote but more people will vote for who they want to vote and not get confused and vote for the wrong candidate.\n\nTheres many reasons why the Electoral College isnt fair like, how Bradford Plumer stated during the 2000 campaign a variety of states that didnt vote because of not being able to see a campaign ad and they did that because some candidates dont focus on the states that they know theyre not gonna win. But by voting with popular vote you get to vote for who you want, everone gets to vote because every state would be equal and people would vote for the president and not for the slate of electors.\n\nyes, maybe the Electoral College could be good for something for like winning. Also if you think about it, it could be worse like even worse than the 2000 fiasco election, and plus the Electoral College avoids run-off elections so thats a good thing if you want a clear winner.\n\nOther than that popular vote is much more sufficient than Electoral vote because its much more fair and with popular vote everyone votes on who they want to vote and every state gets the same, equal treatment as the others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued by some politicians and media authorities that violent content media has been worsened to individual’s behaviour and community, others think these are not causing any harm. From my point of view, violence in any way has bad effects on person’s mindset and society.\r\n\r\nDepends on past events, violent contents has been added to films as the best way to help the viewers understand more and have better vision about realities around the world. For instance, terrorist scenes and concepts of robbery are more easily imagined throughout watching and hearing documentary films. In addition, benefits greatly from playing violent games, not only enhance cognitive-skill by training the brain to handle complex situations but also help improve decision-making skill. Therefore, people consider watching films and playing games which involve violent content as a learning tool and not having any vital influence on people's behaviour.\r\n\r\nMany developers and programer have abused the aggressive instinct to increase the excitement of the games and films. Murder, killing and bullying were seen as normal or enjoyful until it influenced real-world by forming violent lifestyles which may cause criminal behaviours. Virtual and reality can be mixed, gamers and viewers will be led to accept these violence and consider it as the truth and legal in the real world. It not only affects the subconscious but also involves unconscious mindset where people can’t control themselves. According to that, we can deny violence can’t cause bad effects on people and society.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, these violence depends on the perception of each person. In my point of view, I strongly belive that it will influence the harmonious life where consist of people and society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that driverless cars could be both a harm and a help to people. What happens if one of those cars goes under a super malfunction or some of its safety units stop working for whatever reason and there is someone or multiple people in that certain car. But, then again they could prone some serious accidents and save a lot of lives. For example, the passage stated that the car is smart enough to know its limits on what it can and can't do. It also gives off certain signals to the driver such as vibrating seats to notify the driver that the vehicle is about to back into to something and flashing lights on the windshield. It even uses a camera to see that the driver is still alert and focused on the road.\n\nSo me personally, I wouldn't use a driverless car as an everyday get around car. I'd probably use it to go around the block or make a quick grocery run.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph tell reader Saeng going take test The author wants tell reader fail test know wrong shes going correct For example Saeng said then I take test again Saeng feel sorry fail simple test wants retake test snow melts", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes, i feel that for there to be a Facial Action Coding System in a class room would make a big difference. In a class room students can get board and start to dose off , not totally engagin in what needs to be done. With a FACS it could help a teacher know what the class needs and so see whos understanding what fully.\n\nAt times in a class room it can be hard for students to foucuse for a number of reasons such as : The topic is ' boring', not totally understanding, the teacher isnt explainin it clear enough. For what ever reason a student has for not being able to foucse the FACS could help let the teacher know that that students may need individual help, or that she/he needs to make the lesson more intesting due to the lact of enthusism or focuse dring that period. In paragraph 5 it states that \" infact we humans persorm the same impressive calculation everyday.\" Although this may be true, at times we may not be as accurate as we'd like and we miss things. The FACS could also be a help in some students lives who are going through somthing and need someone to talk to, such as depression or stress. The FACS could indicate that they are destracted, worried, or scared about somthing witch could result in the teacher sitting them down and being the person they needed to talk to.\n\nAll in all i belive the FACS would be a good handy tool in classrooms as a way to read students expressions. Not only would this help teachers to make certain topics more intresting but it could help in the personal lives of children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Actress and singer Audrey Hepburn once remarked, \"Nothing is impossible. The word itself say I'm possible!\" The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" agrees. They claim that although venturing to a planet that is seeminly un-explorable is dangerous, it is also a worthwhile and necessary mission. By justifying why it is crucial to continue our efforts to explore Venus, and additionally through their explanation as to how this can safely be accomplished, the author of this article strongly supports their idea that studying Venus is a noble pursuit despite the many obstacles that it creates.\n\nOne way that the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" supports their claim is by explaining the sheer value and benefit of going to Venus. While it is true that several conditions on Venus' surface are inhospitable and unable to support or sustain human life, the author claims that \"astronomers are fascniated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" (para 4). This might lead to discoveries that could help us understand or predict Earth's future evolution patterns. Besides this, Venus is at times the closest planet to Earth as \"Earth, Venus and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus,\" (2). This could be extremely beneficial to both the inhabitants of earth and for future space travel because Venus will sometimes be our \"nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel,\" (4). All of these statements and claims that the author make support his/her claim that the exploration of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it entails as they are quite literally explaining to their readers why exploration is as important as it is. This tactic has the ability to make audiences aware of the importance of such a mission, and hopefully persuade them to agree.\n\nAdditionally, the author supports his/her claim by revealing how a mission to Venus can be carried out in a safe, mannerly way. This, in turn, aids in convincing readers that might have originally disgareed with the author due to the fact that Venus' \"conditions are fare more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine assustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals,\" (3). The author, after making this counterclaim, refutes it by talking of some solutions to this ever-looming issue: \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions of the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape,\" (5). The author talks of how the air pressure, temperature and radiation would all be survivable for humans. Some, such as the air pressure 30 miles above Venus, would be almost identical to Earth at sea level. The author also disscusses other potential solutions, such as possibly using silicon carbide, a material that has \"been tested in a chmaber simulating the chaos of Venus' surface and [has] lasted for three weeks in such conditions,\" (7). These all are possible ways to make a trip to Venus much safer and, more importantly, they all help support the author's claim.\n\nOverall, the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" makes a claim that although Venus has some exceptionally dangerous conditions, it is a planet worth exploring. They support this claim very well by explaining the importance of going to Venus, and providing a few solutions that might reduce the risk factor of this type of mission. All in all, this author, much like Audrey Hepburn, proves through this article that they feel that nothing is truly impossible, not even a trip to Venus. After all, like Hepburn says, the word does state \"I'm possible!\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles trying build mast One problem lot pressure stress would put building dirigible dock This high wind speeds sheer size dirigible The designers make sixty thousand dollars worth modifications building s framework account pressure Another obstacle law airships flying low urban areas This meant dirigibles would allowed even get close building let alone dock Eventually obstacles safety issues hydrogen inside blimp highly flammable caused idea dissappear", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper think children spend much time computer The issue going around computers good effects people bad ones I strongly believe bad effects people I believe people spend time computer exerciseing Another reason people argue teaches hand eye coordination well sports playing My last reason people argue thing helps learn people far away places books thing I know alot people feel computer good effects truth bad ones First people spend computer exerciseing People rather stay inside play games internet go outside play tag sport On talk said In people alot wieght also said number wieght people world So I believe people get computer exercise Secondly people think teaches hand eye coordination sports Instead computer learning hand eye You could side learning hand eye coordination Again instead sitting computer outside running around haveing fun learn hand eye coordination My last reason people argue people use learn far away places people books People rather look stuff computer soon re finsh start playing games computer Also information might even true Because people hack sights time change things ca nt hack book The thing change rip pages waste money new book So I believe books reliable Now time make disicion computers good bad effects I believe computers bad effect people Other things could teach remarkable hand eye coordination great sources place computer Most importantly people spend time exerciseing computer Now time go ahead put front page newspaper let whole world know", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computer-driven cars are a new and exciting thing for people to try, but it's not all fun and games when the driver looses focus due to the lack of awareness they have when not physically driving and controlling their own car. The freedom a computer-driven car gives allows the driver to not always pay attention or possibly fall asleep at the wheel.\n\nI myself wouldn't feel very safe knowing that it was a computer and not a human driving the car in front of behind of me. I agree with lawmakers in most places stating, \"the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" If the driver in the car is in control at all times that gives them no opportunies to fall short or not pay attention. The quote,\"..they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of drvieweays or dealing with complicated traffic issues, sucha s navigating through roadwork or accidnets.\" tells that the driver is alerted when there are complicated traffic issues. The driver becomes too dependent on the car to drive for them leading them to believe that they dont have much to do. It says that the drvier is alerted when pulling in and out of driveways, where a child could come out of no where on the sidewalk entering the driveway. The car may or may not pick the child up on its sensors quick enough, and the child could become badly injure, then the driver/manufactorer would have a lawsuit on their hands.\n\n\"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" If the google car only announces when the driver needs to take over, what if there was a deaf person in the drivers seat? Or someone blasting their music loud enough to the point where they were unable to hear the announcement? That person wouldn't hear them leading them to not know when to take over, which could result in a life being lost.\n\n\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" The technology used in the cars are no gurarentee and fail at any moment. Someone could be entering a working area and the car may break down on them right then and there. If there is any possibily that the car could shut down or stop working it's not a safe object to be on the road.\n\nThe fact that the drivers become more dependent on the technology of the cars than themseves allows the driver to be unaware of their surroundings. The safety of others (pedestrians) is compromised with computer-based cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The facial action coding system would be a really good valuable tool for students in a classroom because it can teach them the impact technology can have in the world. In the article I learned that the facial action coding system has many ways to process the human facial expressions. I also learned how they can be very valuable.\n\nIn the text it states \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" This product could be really good for students classroom because if the student's face shows the computer that they don't understand something then the computer itself can pull of something help them out. Also another reason why this product can be valuable for students in a classroom is that it can teach them the importance of technology and why having technology can lead to better understanding on things. In the text it also states\"\n\nThe same technology can make computer animated faces mor expressive for video games or video surgery.\" This line right here tells us that is can lead to better things such as making faces with more expression.\n\nThese are all the reasons why the facial action coding system is vauable for students in a classroom. It can show them the advance in technology and help them with things that express on their face. This is why this product will be vauable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Paternity leave is very important for the Women, so that, they could give to their children without any problem. Some people think that leave from the job should be given to men who are going to have a baby. Let us discuss this statement before concluding with an opinion for a better understanding.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, Baby is a part of both woman and man lives. Employers give paternity leave only to wives who are going to give birth to a child which is unfair for husbands. Fathers also desire to spend a lot of time with their new baby. For example, playing with them knowing their small habits and so on. These are very interesting as well as happy moments for them to remind one day. Thus, Time off for fathers should be entitled for their happy life with a new baby born.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, Helping wives at the moment of their pregnancy period is another reason to give time off from work to their husbands. At that time, it is very difficult for women to do household chores. If their partner have leave from work, they could take care of their wives. Despite all these, Employers also get benefit from giving time off to their male workers. To be clear, At the delivery time, fathers are very stress and unconscious. They are unable to concentrate on their work as a result the employer can loose profitably.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, After having a big discussion, I am in the favour that fathers should be entitled for paternity leave. Helping their wives or having benefit for employers are the two reasons of this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi! My name is Luke Bomberger. Hay, i've got an idea. How about I tell you about the time I had the chance to travel across the world on a cattle-boat trip as a seagoing cowboy.\n\nIt was year of ,1945, and World War 2 had just ended in Europe. I had no idea that my life would change shortly after my high school graduation. I was working two part-time jobs in a grocery store and a bank. That's when my friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I couldn't say no. I knew this was a once and a lifetime chance.\n\nShortly before reaching Greece I turned 18. That meant that I could be drafted for military service. When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service. I had made nine trips-the most of any seagoing cowboy, before I was discharged in 1947.\n\nBeing a seagoing cowboy was a lot of fun, and I miss being one but life must go on. Now that you know my story I hope that you become a seagoing cowboy, because to me your not really living if you don't have a big enough heart to travel across the world just to help other people. Honestly you don't have to travel across the ocean just to help others. Even if all you did was help your community I would still call you a hero.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I will be informing you about why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program, if anyone had the opportunity.\n\nSome reasons people should join the program is because people can save life's. A lot of countries need help and it's not very much people to help them. Anyone can make a difference in the world. It doesn't always have to be people you help, it could be animals too. You would be able to travel the world, go places some people have never even heard of before. Luke Bomberger says, \"I'm grateful for the opportunity, it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"\n\nLuke Bomberger traveled to, New Orleans, Greece, Europe, China, Venice, and, Italy. That's all over the world. Would you want to travel to all of those places if you had the chance?\n\nLuke had a awesome experience being a Seagoing Cowboy. He got to see the world in different ways. If someone called you to invite you to the Seagoing Cowboys program would you go, or would you pass the opportunity?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some beliefs that when there is a mixture of nationalities, a country can improve it's development. In my opinion, I believe these statement can be both true and false at the same time.\nMixture of nationalities may promote country's development as some particular nationalities are more proficient in one particular activity than another nationalities. For example, Jamaican has a superior body in running. They are the whipping out all the gold medals in running. Each nationalities has it's own strongness, so they can help each other to develop the country.\nOn the other hand, development in the country may not be fast when different nationalities are in one country due to the conflicts between the locals and the foreigners about culture and language differences. Such conflicts may rise and result in slower development as there are going to be communication difficulties between the local citizens and foreigners. In addition, local citizens may be annoyed of foreign people taking away their jobs, creating more anger between each other. To exemplify, USA is one of the country that has multinational population. USA has developed a lot over a past decade and is a leader of technology but at the same time, it contains many social issues such as race hatred. USA is expected to develop less compared to other countries for many reasons, but mainly due to intelligent and competitive foreign experts leaving their country.\nIn conclusion, I believe different nationalities will play a critical role in the country's development. However, the government should educate their local people to understand and respect other country's cultures in order to maximise the productivity in their country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator i was wondering what the electoral college was. And iv noticed that its unfair .Because of the winner-take-all system,the posablet of a tie. of couser there are more reasons but those are the top two.\n\nMany american people think the electoral college is unfair Because of the winner-takes-all system. Which is when candates dont spend time in state they know there not going to win. For example in the 2000 campaign seventeen states didnt get to see who they where even voting for. And some of the largest media markets didnt see a campaign ad. Ever one should at least get to see who mit be running the U.S.A. If the president was picked on most poppler vote the people would see who there voting for and also see what there are plans are for the U.S.\n\nAnother big reason the electoral college should be changed is because of the posablet of a tie. Many people are worried about this because the responablaite of chocing the president would be the house of represantives. Which is unfair because each state has only one vote. For example let say florida represenates 400,000 people, they would have as much to say to texas who represenates 1 millon people. But if the president was chocien by polpular vote then there could never be a tie and voter would have a changes to vote for who they really want.\n\nAll and all the electrol college should be changed. Because of the winner takes all system and the posablet of tie. The college has worked for a long time now but i think the american people are ready for a change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "it is often said that different unpaid work should be taken by all the youngsters. They should help the public in the society.It helps to increase their responsibility and avoid different crimes.However, it also wastes lots of time.In this essay, I will examine the merits and drawbacks.\r\n\r\nThe main advantage is that it aids them to ignore various offences. When they are not involved in any kinds of tasks and works,they may be attached many offences.In addition, these offenders have not felt guilty.A good illustration of this is that a research of Oxford University is that almost 70% of criminals are adults who have no link with any work. Another merit is that it makes liability among them. Any responsibility cannot be grown in the younger by any force. It is the best method.For example, in undeveloped countries, most of the residents do not want to take duty of their parents. they are afraid of taking this responsibility. If they can be involved with this social work, in future they are not panic.\r\n\r\non the other hand, the drawback is that it destroys their worthy time which is very important for their professional life. Moreover, when they will not get a job,They will feel depressed and anxious. as a result,they may be attempted suicide. For example, most of the pupils face different problems without a good job.Because they spoil valuable time.Day by day they are districted from their society and family.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although unpaid works make adults a good attribute and sense of liability, it also wrecks their valuable time in their professional life.As a consequence, they feel embarrassed by community and family members", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "people have different viewpoints about whether should people put a stop to climate fluctuation or accept it. while i accept that people should stop climate change, i would argue that people should also try to live with it\n\non the one hand, there are numerous of reasons why the governments and individuals should prevent climate change. due to the rapidly natural disaster caused by the global warming, people might face a great number of difficulties. for instance, storms or droughts have negative impacts on crops. this might lead to sufficiency of sustenance. if there are not any storms or droughts, crops would be intact and therefore there will not be lack of food. additionally, rising temperatures also has horrendus infulences on species. since the temperature is becoming higher or lower, the extinction of worldwide species might occur. for example, polar bears might become calsuaties of climate change due to lack of habitat, which is resulted from melting ice. this may lead to the disappearance of polar bears. if the temperature is persistent, the polar bears would not vanish\n\non the other hand, individuals should also manage to live with the climate change. the world is getting hotter or colder which might improve our adaption. for example, living in cold place such as russia might boost our immune system. this might lead to a stronger and more flexible body. since there is a rapid development of technology, people might evolve. for example, in the year of 3000, people might have a new form, a stronger, more powerful, intelligent, persistent than the old ones. as a result, people might have a longer life expectancy and have the competence to do everything that used to be out of their league\n\nin conclusion, coexistence between climate change and humans appears reasonable. in addition, individuals and the government should also prevent the climate change", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the unmasking face on Mars is an natural landform. The reason why I think that it is an natural landform is because, there are alot of things on this earth that looks like somone made it that shape or form but really it just so happened to be that shape or form. Earth has many werid things shaped on it that we thought could never happen like for exmaple, the way that our moon or earth is shaped. Nobody actually took the time out of their day to make it round, it just was naturally formed like that. Also it states in paragraph 7 that it was just a natural landform.\n\nI dont think that it was created by an alien. The reason why I think that it wasn't created by an alien is because, we really don't know if aliens exist or not. Aliens have not yet proven that they are real and also, even if it was an alien then i don't think that aliens can make that big of a print (even though we have never seen them before but, im pretty sure that they can't). Also, they don't have any evidence that it was a face they just have an picture that may be an face but, nobody knows for sure yet.\n\nIt is not an given state face that it may be a face it is just somthing that somone came up with, some people might say that they think it is an alien to other people might think that the idea is crazy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Effect on competitive sports has become long contradictory among many people, whether it brings such positive or negative contributions to teenagers' education or not. Despite it could lead to a potential backfire among players, the critical thinking that may occur during the games may offer more benefits.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, teenagers who play sports with high competitiveness and pressure may bring a high possibility of conflict, thus affecting their learning process to collaborate with others. To illustrate, in a football competition among schools in a particular area, students have an obligation to bring sovereignty to the school during the game. As a result, it will give the students a big pressure. Furthermore, the pressure given emerges the high competitiveness. If it is not followed by a conducive environment to ensure fair play, conflict may occur. Moreover, backfire feelings attributed to the deterioration of students' collaboration sense with others during this period of conflict.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, sports which have a high level of competitiveness will teach students to employ some sort of meticulous strategy by which they can develop good survival abilities. For instance, in the previous example, corroborating with the coach and school committee, students will have a chance to learn about making a good strategy for winning the competitions. Likewise, they also have a pivotal role in applying the strategy in the game field. By this act, students can reap the beneficial aspects of making and applying strategies that can be applied in their daily lives. It includes the ability to arbitrage conflict and to make a peaceful situation.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the high competitiveness of sports has two sides, the positive and negative ones. It is plausible that the latter will bring a devastating issue for the educational context by its potential conflict. But, the former is deeply teaching the students to deal with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a Cowboy who Rode the waves , the author talks about the Seagoing Cowboys program. Not only does this program help victims , but it can save many cities that would soon start a war. Luke went over the Atlantic Ocean 16 times to help WW2 victims and help their community grow and rebuild their city. There are more than 1,000 victims in each world war that happens and just imagine how many animals were killed too.\n\nOne way you could join the Seagoing Cowboys would be to simply sign up for it, since Luke claims that he just signed up ,as stated in the text. You could also join the UNRRA and get the opportunity to get to choose every branch that could help victims in need. Even though Luke signed up to help the Cattle boat, he got to go sight seeing in China, Acroppolis , Venis,Italy and the Panama Canal.\n\nOut of all of the time, Luke was on the Cattle boat , but in the text it states that he did the same things on his Aunts farm, but did not help him at sea. One day a bad storm hit and he landed by the animal pens and landed on a pice of metal , he could not work for a few days because of his broken ribs. He was happy to be alive but when the animals were shipped the crew would play lots of fun games. He had done this 9 times to and from where they were getting dropped off at. Also, he crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times.\n\nAfter doing this job he helped get awareness of everything and why other people needed to join . He helped most victims with getting a new home and rebuilding their city. Luke enjoyed doing this job and loved playing with the crew after the animals were loaded. For Luke this was more than a job. After all he had to have a little adventure , right?\n\nIn conclusion , Luke loved his job. It was as it was all an adventure. The text states that it opened a new world to him. After that he raised more awareness. All i know is that he will , Survive !", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am going to tell you reasons why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nOn the other hand I will also tell you why it is important to join the program.\n\nThough it is not like a regular fun camp you go to.\n\nIt is a camp where you help others.\n\nIn the article it said \"It was 1945, World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left ruins.\"\n\nThe article also said \"To help those countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).\n\nI will now give you reasons why you should participate in this program.\n\nOne reason to join the program is you are able to help so many countries, people, and even soliders that fought in the war.\n\nAnother reason is you don`t just help people you get to see different places.\n\nYou can also tour the city or wherever you are at when you have free time.\n\nAlso one other reason is the program opens up your eyes to many different things.\n\nLuke said \" It opened the world up to him.\"\n\nLuke also said that \" It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"\n\nAnd those are my reasons why you should join the program.\n\nI hope you choose to join the program.\n\nIf i were you i deffinetaly would join it.\n\nThough I learned something from this.\n\nI learned that it is good to help others.\n\nThe world does not revelve around you.\n\nWell that`s it for now until next time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely believed that one solution to environmental problems would be for governments to raise the price of petrol. While I consider that this might be an effective measure, I would argue that other measures might have an even greater impact.\r\n\r\nIf national authorities raised taxes on petrol, this would address two environmental issues. Firstly, in terms of private cars, motorists would limit the number and length of their journeys to compensate for the extra expense. Governments would then be forced to upgrade and expand public transport provision, as people would still need to travel to work, to school or to travel to shops and hospitals, for example. Secondly, from the perspective of freight services, more goods would have to be transported by rail rather than by truck. Both these measures would cut down on emissions from vehicles and help to reduce the greenhouse effect.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, while this rise in fuel prices might be a useful stopgap measure, governments could adopt transport policies which would be more effective in the long term. The local authorities in London, for instance, introduced a congestion charge on all vehicles visiting the city centre. They use the money raised to subsidize the cost of fares and to invest in transport infrastructure. In turn, this has improved the air quality in the city, as a result of the reduction in exhaust fumes. Another policy would be to introduce free bus and train passes, as the increased use of public transport would reduce pollution from private cars and help in the effort to combat global warming.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a sharp rise in petrol prices would be a useful environmentally-friendly transport measure, although in the longer term other steps would be more effective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars safe? Majority of the world drives cars. Cars are used to get you from point a to point b. Cars are an example of moblie transportaion. Driverless cars shouldn't be on roads because they aren't safe, they seem too risky, and driverless cars are exspensive.\n\nFirstly, driverless cars aren't safe. Driverless cars sound like a good idea but what if they cause trouble? According to the passage it states,\" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers,\n\npassengers, and pedestirans safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" If drivers aren't alert when driving driverless cars then it would cause a lot of accidents. In some states it's illegal to test computer driven cars.\n\nSecondly, driving driverless cars seems too risky. You have to be alert when operating a driverless car, and this means you can't drink and drive. When you drink and drive in a driverless car you're putting yourself and others around you in more danger. If your driverless car's technology fails you could get injured and so could your passengers with you. Driverless cars need to be proven safe before they actually hit the roads.\n\nLastly, driverless cars are exspensive. The \"smarter cars\" would be really exspensive if they ever hit the market. If making the cars was so exspenive, imagine buying a driverless car. Cars that operate with a driver are also exspensive but they most likely cost less than driverless cars. Driverless cars shouldn't be worth your money.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be on roads because they aren't safe, they could cause trouble, and their exspense could be really high. Driving cars is a responsibilty. If you don't take driving seriously you could get yourself in trouble and you can hurt or injure others. According to the article it states,\"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" I agree with this sentence from the article because with a human driver it could help keep driving a little more safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Historical literature is an interesting topic to indulge in. In many regions, the public are deeply involved in investigating the past of a dwelling or building they live in or are planning to move. This essay will explore the reasons for this behaviour and the practical ways in which the research for it may be facilitated.\r\n\r\nThe primary reason why folk are more interested in learning about the past of a building or condo is curiosity . curiosity is a human instinct. Secondly, safety is another thing that a person looks for when choosing a place to live in. Learning about the past of the building helps in knowing more about the nature and kind of persons who lived there and avoid future repercussions. For instance, in some countries population has even moved into houses where terrorists used to live. Furthermore, superstitious communities investigate whether any murders, suicides etc have happened in the past years. They believe that those ghosts will haunt them for life.\r\n\r\nThough the research is quite laborious there are a number of ways in which it can be accomplished.First of all, interviewing the elderly and local society about the past of a shack, what all incidents have taken place till date etc.The past of the community who have stayed there can reveal a lot of information. Also,surfing the internet for articles and information relating to a particular building or locality can also boost exploration. Furthermore, analysing old documents can reveal the person to whom the apartment or land was registered and thus more details about the past can be collected.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Background Investigations about a property or land result mainly due to safety concerns, curiosity and beliefs of society and there are tremendous ways in the modern world to accomplish these tasks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\", Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" Venus is the planet that will one day (hopefully) be able harbor life on its surface. The planet, Venus has been exlpored before and NASA has found many interesting stuff about it. Venus has been called \"The Evening Star\" due to it being so close to the Earth and us being able to see it in the sky at night. Venus is also known for its dangers and beauty and many secrets that have yet to be uncovered. NASA is trying to figure out ways to get to the planet more better than before. Will Venus be able to support life even with its hot humid condictions?\n\nVenus has shown NASA that is has many wonders on its suface going from atmosphereic pressures to its rocky terrain. Unlike Earth, Venus has sulfuric acid filled clouds and its air is made up of cardon and nitorgen. Earth is the only planet in our solar system that has the ability to support life as we know of.\" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported life, just like Earth.\" So how come its hard for Venus to support life well it has to do with volcanoes this planet is litter with them making it harder to live on. Not only that Venus has scorching tempatures that reach a whopping 800 degress Fahenheit greater than that on Earth. Venus should be able to support life because it can use solar energy and it has radiation that could be harmful to human body system.\n\nNASA has been exporing this planet for so long that they will need new\n\neqiument. Due to Venus being so hot NASA is only able to orbit the planet take what they can see with their eyes but not hands. Another reason is that because some forms of light can not penetrate throught the dense atmopshere, NASA can't take the videos of photos that are needed. \" For expamle, some simplfied electronics made up of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chacos of Venus's Surface and lasted for weeks in such conditions.\"\n\nNASA has used many other technolgy to try and see if they can explore the planet even more. So can Venus be able to support life as we know of or it won't be able to support life?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well for one if we limit car usage, gas wouldn't pollute the air as much and make Earth a much better planet. I think it would be much better to limit the use of cars because then there wont be as much deaths due to accidents and serious car wrecks. Not as much drunk drivers just a bunch of drunk walkers. I feel that if everyone either walked or biked everywhere, the community would be a much better place as a whole. You would be able to meet new people everyday.\n\nYou would never have to worry about car insurance anymore because you wouldn't have a car! No more money for damages or issues with the car. The community would just be a lot more peaceful if cars weren't involved with our days society. Just like when Heidrun Walter stated when they had a car they were always tense. Now that they don't they are much happier! The Environmental Protection Agency is already promoting car reduced communities, which I think is a good idea!\n\nI think we should also have a day like Bogota had when they go a day without cars for their improvement campaign. They have constructed 118 miles of bicycle paths. This would also improve traffic if we cut down on cars in the United States. New restaurants and shopping districts could be made from the outcome! As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak in 2005 and is now equal to where the country was in January 1995! A study last year found that young drivers decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009! Im all for cutting down on car usage in the United States! I think it would be an awesome opportunity to be apart of.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believed that the Face on Mars was proof that aliens created this. But it's just a land formation and nothing else.\n\nIn the Viking photo, there was a landform that looked like a face. This picture was shown to the general public to see in 1976. At this time, the picture had an image span of 43 meters each pixel. This caused the photo to be more blurry and unconclusive for NASA to decide if it was a real alien monument. In 2001, the MGS was able to take photo of the face. This Picture had an image span of 1.56 meters, thus creating a much more clearer photo. And what they saw was just a landform. This pictures was so much clearer that IF there was alien life on this planet, we could see their homes and shacks or etc. But we didn't.\n\nSo that is why all these theories of aliens creating this face is just science fiction. But this face it just a landform that we can all see.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should become a seagoing cowboy,it helped me learn about other countries. On my way to many places like China, I visited many other countries like Italy and Greece. Being a seagoing cowboy is hard work, but if you are like me you will have had to do chores or work on a farm, doing these helps. For me it helped so much the work seemed easy! If you join us you can come on trips with me!\n\nYes, you might say it is hard and will get boring, but if you say that them you aren't even giving it a chance. Just because there are cattle you have to watch and you think you always have to watch them. You don't, you only check on them every hour. Even if you think it gets boring, think again. On our way to our destination we visit many places like Acropolis in Greece which was to me the most special place we visited. but we still visted other places like Europe, China and going on a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. We even have lots of sports and other fun activities! We even have tournaments for table-tennis, also you can play baseball, volleyball, fencing, and boxing. If you don't like sports you whittle or read. Now as you can see no time goes to waste.\n\nWhen you are a seagoing cowboy going many places helps learn how other cultures live. It also helps meet new people and learn new things like how to play sports and whittle if you don't already know. Going to Greece and seeing the Acropolis and like I said before it was special to me. I hope you come with me. But if you don't then you are missing out on a real good treat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New devicies and technology is being created every day. One of those creations are driverless cars. Driverless cars are cars that can drive independenlty. Google cofounder Sergery Bin is envisioning future cars that are able to function without drivers. Famous in Movie and television, driveless cars seem like an interestining invention but the real question is whether they are truly safe or not.\n\n\"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigation through roadwork or accidents.\" Technology seems to be progressing and getting better, but technology still has its technical difficulties. Currently we have cars such as Google's modified Toyota Prius, which use sensors. Sensored cars play a major role in inspiring the idea of creating driverless cars. Sensors go way back to the 1980's where automakers used sensors for speed at the wheels in the creation of 'antilock brakes'.\n\nAlthough antilock brakes and driver assitance are improving they still have a long way to go until driverless cars are created. I believe with all the improvements and creations technology is coming up with we will soon be able to have inventions similar to driverless cars. Driverless cars will be responsible for the passangers in the car, and in my opinion I don't think I'd be able to trust a computer with my life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, they help us get from point A to B in a shorter amount of time, but at what cost. Cars are a large source of stress, produce large ammounts of pollution, and seem, even now, to be going out of style. Cars are a luxury, not a necessity, and now they might not even be as usefull. More and more people are putting down the car keys and choosing instead to take a bike or bus. Cars are just too stressful to be a necesity.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany, many people are giving up engines. According to the\n\nNew York Times,\n\n\"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars,\" showing that life can go on efficiently even without a car. Life might actually improve without those money eating tanks. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" says Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two. This car free philosophy is even becoming a trend! There are hundreds of groups in the United States promoting communities that are more independent of cars, called \"car reduced\" communities. But stress isn't the only thing cars produce. Cars are huge contributers to pollution, and reducing car usage would greatly benifit the enviornment.\n\nPassenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent is some car-intensive areas in the united states, acording to the\n\nNew York Times . Paris actually enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city after days of near-record pollution. The ban was enforced with a $31 fine. Even with 4,000 drivers fined, congestion was down 60 percent and the smog cleared enough that the ban could be lifted the next day. Using more enviornmentally inclined sources of transportation will deffinetly help leave a cleaner planet for future generations, and the generations already here. Cars are conveinient for short term gratification, but the long term effects might devastate the enviornment. Cars are not needed, and might not even be prefered for much longer.\n\nA study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009 in the united states. Bogota, Colombia even becan a \"car-free day\" in wich all cars, besides busses and taxis, are banned in this capital city of 7 million for an entire day. Violaters of this ban are fined $25. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Plaza. This event is even starting to spread. For the first time two other Colombian cities have joined the event. Using cars is becoming less and less common, and it's a trend the enviornment can enjoy.\n\nIn conclusion, cars are a hiderance. Cars are stressful and cumbersome objects, getting rid of them would help reduce stress in the population. Cars are high contributers to pollution, creating smog and causing problems. Also, cars are a comodity that is being used less and less. People are putting down the car keys and picking up a bike. So why not join the trend?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's a good idea that the author is creating an idea about build and engineering driveless cars, but is it really necessary? The idea is good but what if something bad happens like something could wrong with the engine, or the stearing wheel could lock in place while the driver is trying to take control of the car when he/she is getting in a situation. There's a bunch of things that can go wrong.\n\nThis idea of driveless cars is good because that way the drivers dont have to do as much anymore they just sit back the only time they'll do something is when they are about to get in a situation. In the article it says \"the cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\" that means that cars in the future are going to use less fuel. That's anither good thing about this idea is that cars are going to use less fuel. Some companies are already thinking about the idea of making driverless cars. One major thing about this idea about making driverless cars is that it's going to cost a lot of money.\n\nIt's going to cost a lot of money to make these cars. It says that in the article \"in the late 1950s, Gerenal Mortors created a concept car that could run on a speicla test track\" so I'm saying that the rode are going to have to be different now. These cars could be smart like they will need to have sensors to be smart. Driverles cars probably won't be toching the floor, they could just do something with the ground that way cars won't have to touch the ground.\n\nIn some ways the cars cxould be bad. Like something could happen with the engine. People could lose control if they are trying to stop. Something could go wrong while they making it. There's a lot that can go wrong.\n\nOverall this idea is a good one it just has it's advantages and disadvantages. The future could probably be better with driverles cars. I just think that this a good idea, and that the future would probably slightly better with these cars, becasue we wouldn't have to use that much fuel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to the accelerating pace of modernization, people have been influenced by the different ways of pursuing their jobs. Therefore, research indicates that in the coming years' a large proportion of people will choose to telecommute. In my opinion, people will definitely consider the option of work from home, but despite this, there will be still a few professions which need human presence rather than a digital environment. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are numerous reasons why most of the occupation could be done while sitting at a home. Because modern technology has made it possible for both the employer and employees to carry on their jobs anywhere and anytime. It is seen that online social media portals provide the opportunity for people to start their offline and online business so that they can work from any corner of the world. Consequently, the trend will bring cost-effectiveness for the worker as they could save their time and money to commute to and from the work. According to the convenience point of view, it is anticipated that the vast majority of the population will choose to work from home option. For example, the Enagic Company of U.S.A, offering the number of online employments and people are earning a handsome amount of salary while working at their own pace. Thus, online occupations are an absolute imperative.\r\n\r\nConversely, there are few jobs which could not be done during our homestay. Because these kinds of professions, demands the human-beings involvement which is otherwise impossible to pursue if there will be the absence of an individual. For instance, a doctor could not examine their patients from the home, no doubt there are virtual appointments available for the people but in the cases of serious medical conditions, the doctor's presence is necessary. Overall, it is true that jobs such as corporate, project management, software developer and many more could be easily done from one's comfort zone, though lifesaver occupation is in the demand of expert's presence.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is true that the influence of technology is escalating in the work sectors. Likewise, in the future, more and more work will be done from the home. I firmly agree with the notion, but all jobs will not be part of a massive shift.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I graduated high school I would work two part time jobs. I would work at a grocery store and a bank when Don needed me to. It's 1945 we recieved our orders to report to New Orleans. We arrived August 14th a quite warm day actualy. We got our seaman's papers and then me and Don borded the SS Charles W. Wooster, then headed off to Greece. I had turned 18 before arriving in greece, which ment I could be drafted for military service. When my draft bord learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip they told me to just keep doing that for my service. By the time I was discharged in 1947, I had made nine trips-- the most trips any Seagoing cowboy has made. The cattle boat trips were an unbeliveable oppertunity for a small town boy like me. Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acroplolis in greece was something special. So was taking a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, a city with sreets of water. I also toured an excivated castle in crete and I marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. It took about two weeks to get to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the Estern part of the United States and a month to get to China . Taking care of the animals kept me busy, all of the animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Helping out on my aunt Katie's farm as a boy prepared me for hard work, but not for the dangers at sea. I also learned to have fun on board. We played baseball and vollyball in the empty holds were the animals were held. But being a Sea cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. I'm greatful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people in other countries and their needs .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of Facial Action Coding System could be a good thing to use in school. It also can be used for help better how teacher do things. At can also help a pyschologist find students with problems or mental issues. Another good use for it is could help the students in there ability to act in acting classes.\n\nFirst reason why it could be a good thing for schools is that you can use the system to check if the students are bored or confused, so you can change how a teacher teaches in a different style. It also could change how the students learn. In the text I says this '' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'' It would be good to use to help students learn what are some of facial expression and learning what muscle cause that movement.\n\nAnother reason why it would be good to use the system is to use in acting class. A lot of school have classes such as acting, drama, and threater. How this would benfit a student is it would help then try to get the facial expression that they would need for a certain part in acting or in play it also and help produce emotions. In paragraph 9 it says this '' according to the facial feedback theory emotion, moving your facial muscles not only express emotion but it aslo may even help produce them.'' Then it goes on to say ''constantin stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way to createing these emtions on stage''.\n\nFinally another reason why it would be good to use the facial coding system is it would help the school psychologists if there is a student is having problems and they are hiding their problems . If would help alert the pyschologist if they are going threw depression or suicidal thoughts. it would help the pyschologist so they find a way to make them happy so they do good in school and keep track of what they are doing. In paragraph 5 it says this '' you van probably tell how a friend is felling simply by the look on her face. Of course most of us would have trouble describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried etc.''\n\nSo with conclusion these are some the reason why it would be good to use Facial Action Coding System. It would be for schools to think about these option and what it can do for students. Thank you for your taking your time to read this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He is saying that mabey one time there was things living there like there were trees and water . Many things like nature and that its really hot and that its possible that humans can go . but that it will be hard to stay up there because there happends to be a challenge of who can get there first and NASA wants to send people to Venus to get and gather research . NASA is looking at electronics that they are making so that they can last up there just becase it can be up to 170 degrees in venus and they need to make everything to be resistant to the warmness and heat . Also the prssure that it will give beacsue all those things can just melt and that we should keep learning . not being scared of whats ahead to see what else is out there and to see what other kind of information we can get from going to Venus and exploring more and more and also that the scientist need to get really close to see what\n\nis happening and to gather material tto see what they happen to contain and to see what minerals there is inside . they aso want there inventions and machines to last a long time to gather as much research as they can .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys are people who are hired to take care of young cows, horses, and mules that are shipped overseas.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys take long trips and travel on ships.\n\nThey do this because they take care of the animals that are being shipped from place to place.\n\nWhenever I graduated my best friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nI was so excited and read to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nI was just a small town boy or cowboy.\n\nI learned so much and had the best time ever on my first trip.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a great program to participate in.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboys you will get to take care of animals.\n\nYou would be helping keep the animals healthy and safe.\n\nSometimes it feels like you are in a forest or a barn.\n\nThe program provides you with a job that isn't completely boring.\n\nSome of the animals that you will take of on the ship will be mean and some will be friendly, well kind of.\n\nEverybody knows that everyone has a bad side, even animals. The animals are so intersting and is so much that you can learn on the trip.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program involves traveling.\n\nThe places you would see are so interesting.\n\nThere are some many things that you can learn when you visit a place.\n\nYou will be able to see almost ever place we travel to take the animals and some of the places are very historical.\n\nThe views and sightings of all the places will either amazing and shocking or crazy and sad.\n\nSome others may say that this program is just a waste of time and there is no point in participating but, they aren't right because all of the places that you will visit are places that you can learn about and build knowledge on.\n\nLike for example if you wanted to be a photographer you would have great views to photographing or paint.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program give you a chance to see amazing views. It also gives you a chance tolearn the history of places you don't know. But, most importantly it give you the chance to take care of animals. The Seagoing Cowboys program is a great program to participate in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been observed by many pupils that they have a difficulty to focus on a lecturer while period.There are several reasons for such a situation and aslo some primitive steps can be taken to overcome this issue.Both reasons and measures are elaborated further.\r\n\r\n To begin with, the foremost one is a mobile phone.To explain it, nowadays almost all students have own cellphones, regarding it they lost in a watching movies, web series and playing games.Also some of them attend extra tuition on online classes, due to this issue in the school they cannot put mind in a lecture.Moreover, the school environment, to elaborated it,some schools have strict rules as a times, uniform, extra classes also some teachers behaviour like sometimes pupil get badly treated by a class teacher.Hence, may be all of this reasons the scholars cannot focus on a studies.\r\n\r\n One the other hand, some effective steps can be taken to solve this problem.Fisrt, the parents should encourage their kids to the sides effects of the mobile phones,aslo they can fixed limited time for it.And could talk about advantages of education.\r\n\r\nSecondly,the school should provides a positive etmosphere to students.For example, can fixed the sports classes instead of the extra classes. Disciples get a relex as well as a happy regarding it, furthermore, the school department could encouraged to the mentors that they should be talk and solve their doubt with love.Aa s result, might be can focus in the study.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, it has no doubt that in recent times pupils are getting tired with education,due to the mobile phone and a restriction of school.\r\n\r\n But this all issues can be measured by the parents as well as the departmen of the school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays many students are unable to focus on their studies. The two main reasons for this problem are they find difficult in following the lectures and distracted from other students, but soultions like asking teachers to repeat important points and staying away from distrscting people will help them to regain their attention. \r\n\r\nFirstly, students always find difficult to follow speed lectures, because some times teachers have to cover large portion of syllabus. While this children eventually lose their focus and they whave to wait untill they get notes from teacher. For example, some schools in Canada conducts the exams for every two months, so lecturers have to cover quarte portin for test, in that rush they will teach very quickly at some time students find it hard to know what they are learning. Another cause is, students often get distracted from other children in the class, this happen very regularly where they lose concentration at some point. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are two solutions for this problem. one after every class teacher should give a brief summary about the discussed topics and while listening some important topics students should sit in other place till the topic compltes. By conduting a conclusion section students can listen the missed lecture again and can solve their doubts if they have any. Another solution is, by changing his or her seat place while any important lesson is going this will help them not to distract form their fellow mates.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, children can lose focuss at classes immediately if they feel hard to understand the lecture and disturbance from other children, but by reviewing the teached lessons and small seat changes can possibly solve these problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I grade I put mible set I went put mible set bruck went park I wate shag went ice making I hart line people got ther pard munem axyer went ice starting day went back house build mible mirne art way went house plade outside inside house", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features particular setting affected cyclist many different ways Upon arriving ghost town early journey felt slight amusement situation But soon became troubled became aware several rusty pumps weak corral next ramshackle shed The cyclist additionally experienced bit irony approached mph speed limit sign complete warning strictly obey On bicycle pace mph could even reach mph speed wanted Before reached appeared abandoned welchs Grape Juice factory cyclist felt twisted amusement yet laughed The text states It sad hopeless laugh mind least I still energy feel sorry myself suffering discovered fish camp modern bathroom working sinks The cyclists relief immense overwhelming urge seek Gary Wilber owners kiss", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The recent development of technology has threatened certain types of occupations. Hence, some claim that in the near future almost all jobs will be invaded by these machines. In my opinion, of course robots will play a significant role in the future, but they will not take over the whole job market.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, each an every machine or robot has been designed and developed by human minds. Yes, it is true that these artificial creatures can do a lot of things. But, someone needs to program with correct instructions in order for them to operate. No machine can take their own decisions because they are not capable of thinking. Therefore, there will always be vacancies for jobs that need intelligence. Moreover, these devices should be designed by someone, always those tasks are done by human beings. For instance, a robot can instruct to repair a car, yet it could not instruct to design a car. Because that needs a higher level of intelligence. Another common fact is that robots cannot process empathy. As a result, they would not be used as judges and doctors who need social skills.\r\n\r\nNonetheless, certain categories of jobs will be taken over by these artificially intelligent machines. Most labour works do not need much of brain power. Those work only needs to repeat some actions. Hence, those types of work will be done by robots in the future. As a result, people should move away from work that only needs physical strength and learn the work require metal skills. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, although some jobs are taken over by robots, these electronic and mechanical devices will not be able to take over the occupations that need empathy and higher intelligence levels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, more and more students choose to study finance, management or other subjects instead of science in university around the world. There are many reasons contribute to this phenomenon and this would definetely impose negative influences on our society.\nIn terms of the factors, the reason is mainly due to the job market. Firstly, we have to admit that the number of science job vacancies in the market is significantly lower than the other occupations, like the nurse, the accountant, the lawyer and so on. Besides this, the science is comparatively difficult than the other subjects. If you want to be a qualified scientist, you are more likely to spend more time on learning and researching, maybe three years more than the other subjects. So, very naturally, few people would like to take the risk of learning science.\nHowever, science does play an extremely important role in our society. If not enough people study science, it may impede the development of the country. Science represents the future of our nation because it could help to improve the development of technology and then make new technologies into pratical products. A good example can be seen in the United States, which has experienced a huge development in science during the past decades and has created a lot of advanced products, such as the Microsoft and Artificial intelligence, which has bring great benefits to this country in return and make it become the most powerful nation in the world. In contrast, if very few people learning science, the nation may remain at a standstill and lose its competitiveness.\nIn conclusion, although few people want to study science, the government should take efficient measures to encourage the public to study this subject to help our society improving continuously in the long future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the position on driverless cars, I beleive they are a good idea. Driverless cars allow you to use only half the amount of fuel used in normal cars today. Also the amount of sensors can help an unexperienced driver learn how to drive and you would not crash as often with a person steering the car. The idea may seem a bit rediculous, but it will be better for everyone in the long run. There will still need to be a driver who will navigate through work zones and around accidents, since the car itself, however well engineered it is, cannot do that. A driverless car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves so there would be less crashes on the road to deal with instead of people not paying attention like they do nowadays.\n\nYou might think to yourself \"Why can't we just use the same way to drive cars that we have been using for years?\" The answer is simple: innovation. There are always new inventions and things being created from scratch. Why not use the latest invention and at least try it out to see if it works like it should?\n\nSecondly, the cost is not as much as you would thing something like this would be. The driverless cars actually cost about the same as any other normal car would on the market today. The cars only use about half the gas of today's taxis and are far more flexible than a bus.\n\nThirdly, safety. Everyone is always worried about the safety of these new inventions. These cars would be safer than most people beleive them to be. the driverless cars are just as safe as the cars with drivers in them or the normal ones. There is now new inventions that state manufacturers are considering using cameras to watch the drivers and the roads would be much safer that way. Also it can respond to danger of out of control skids or rollovers that can damage any vehicle.\n\nLastly, everone wants the newest and latest invention anyways, so why not give it to the people? Do it!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do think the use of the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is valuable. This new technologly can identify the emotion of humans. I would expecially recommed this in a classroom. The new technologly would make it easier for teachers. The FACS could be a subsitute for a teacher.\n\nWhy I think this new technologly is good is because it can tell weather the students are happy, sad, mad, bored, or confused. With there being many students in the class, teacher isnt able to see and tell every students emotions. By adding the FACS to the classroom ,it would make it easier. For example the passage said \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen , a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This technologly could modify the lesson ,like an effective human instructor.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. This would be a real good improvment in the schools around the world. This new software has promising applications for a variety of industries. This why I argue for this claim. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More often machines replace humans to do their jobs. There is no consensus in society is it positive or negative development. Some of them say that robots are better then people, because they are doing work faster and without mistakes. But, on the contrary, it extent to unemployment. So, in my opinion it is a bad trend. So I will try to prove you that with examples of The Goverment of Ukraine report and professor Jan Danilov's research.\r\n\r\nThe first reason why this development bring more disadvantages, is that many workers are losing their jobs because they are replaced by machines. For example, report of Ukrainian Goverment said that more and more jobs that used to be done by humans are now being done by machines. For instance, for the last 5 years the number of workers had decreased by 13 percent. So this is the first reason why i think it is a bad trend.\r\n\r\nThe second example why this is negative development proved by professor Jan Danilov. In his research he studied how people and machines doing the same job and he came to conclusions that pay workers are cheaper then buy machines for it. So this is another reason why replacing humans by technological devices is a bad tendency.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion I think it is a negative development when many jobs that used to be done by humans are now being done by machines. In my opinion it is a negative trend and society should choose people instead robots.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders mooring mast face They thought going easy task accomplish shown paragraph eight Al Smith asked mooring mast responded It s level right No kidding We re working thing This shows truly sure Smith goal s simplicityAlthough determination great factor building world wide known monument problems kept standing way success For example paragraph author describes Empire State building would able fulfill s purpose even though workers ve known better She states When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York kept pooring one natureFinally workers gave project postpone due mainly safety reasons By late s idea mooring mast almost disappeared All really matters tried took one dream", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although the idea of driverless cars might sound life-changing, I see very little aspects on how this could positivly affect our world. Therfore, I do not support the idea of driverless cars. Driverless cars would take away jobs. They could possibly also take away \"milestones\" in our lives. It seems to me like this idea came from pure laziness.\n\nFirstly, driverless cars will take away a huge milestone in upcoming generation lives. Remember when you first learned to ride a bike? Now think about the time when you first sat behind a car's steering wheel. This milestone that I am talking about is learning how to drive a car. Future generations will have no need to complete this with the idea of driverless cars. The permit test and drivers test may not exsist in the future with driverless cars around!\n\nSecondly, driverless will be responsible for the disappearance of road police officers. Today, we see these men and women monitoring the road and keeping everyone safe. We will not need them anymore, because of driverless cars, no matter what, driverless cars would most likely obey all speed limits posted. You may be thinking,\n\n\"well won't it be a safer environment if driverless cars obey the speed limits?\n\nYes, you are correct. But what if a glitch occured in this technology generated car, and it decided not to follow it's regular \"code.\" This would be a huge issue on the manufacture's part.\n\nLastly, the idea of driverless cars put into action frightens me. Think of how lazy we would all become. Technology is already immensely over-taking our world, and driverless cars are solving not one issue. Yes, being chauffered around could be relaxing once in awhile. But what happened to earning the things you worked for? To me, driverless cars are the start of us, humans, being handed everything on a silver platter.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not support the idea of driverless cars. Why not? Driverless cars will take away milestones, they will take away jobs, and they will make us lazy. What's next? No need to walk around anymore? Will we have everything at the push of a button? Who knows, it is up to us to start voicing our opinions to decide what happens with these ideas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most modern day book movies music etc fairly good job placing warning form CAPS sticks covers But books practice began happen found offensive books today Why Well s many books past use words today found offensive But books movies music fault like parents try make seem There examples catagory today s society Take book The written example In story words used describe people time Back wrote book perfectly fine use words people today s modern world book list banned It offensive use word people today parent groups others trying get book pulled shelves hopes erasing done past I nt believe book banned s content rather well teaches reader words If teach student high school college class history culture time nt banned It read Movies rating system reason There movies meant younger audience People must certain age rent buy view kind movies leagally Not many people listen system even though exsisted years A horror film suitable young age believes everything sees Movies nt banned gives nightmares makes emotionally aware right wrong That fault parents They ones let watch movie first place So movie nt held responsible If movie intended mature audience s way stay And brings us music There lot music today s age considered offensive There pure genres free cursing used many others today But children teen adults find favorite kind ca nt change minds The governement issued music containing harsh words horrid images mind gruesome scenes elements offensive people must carry sticker The black white CAPS sticker When parents see sticker download whatever using know likely right listen Does nt mean parent actually going listen time means slight chance minds tainted garbage So conclusion I believe movies books music contain offensive material removed shelves Just offensive one person nt neccessarily mean another person There ratings things reason keep children seeing help level harshness given today s society People still argue books The The CAPS many many books like banned They always fight movies A DATE CAPS s removed store shelves gave nightmares gives nightmares saw And always try fight say artist like suited Well pattern going years Those books made many years movies intended adult audience young age artists trying make money like everyone else So parents try argue shelves remember might parent s fault letting view first place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though Driveless cars are a big step in technology I believe that any mistake in the process of inventing dirveless cars may be fatal to the driver, passengers, and or pedestrians. I believe trying to make the everyday life easier is great, but we cant depend on technology for everthing because everything doesnt always go correctly. \"This necessitates the acr be ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occur.\" This statement from the passage shows that technology can not do everything right 100% of the time. im pretty sure if I out my life in the hands of something I want nothing to go wrong 100% of the time.\n\nEven though GM has came up with ways to get the attention of driver's such as vibrating seats, flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. While all of them may be good ideas, everything comes with flaws such as how would this work on a person diagnoised with sleep paralysis ? \"If technology fails and someone is injuried, who is at fault the driver or manufacturer\" thsi shows anything could go wrong at any point and time. Ask yourself would you let yourself, family, friends, or children drive in something that one small mistake could cost them their life ? With Driverless cars any mathmatical error could end dramatically for a driver, Passenger, or pedestrian.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author sets mood The mood set happy greatful loving In paragraph states They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life The author happy parents In paragraph states I always greatful parents love sacrifice And paragraph states I never forget parents turned simple house home The author loves home memories friendships holds greatful parents provided", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on mars is not made by alians it is a land formation.\n\nAlian life does not exsist, and if it does not in ower solar system.\n\nAlians have yet to be proven real and I dout they will in ower lifetime.\n\nThe face is a lava dome, like the one in the Snake River Plain in Idaho. It also happens on Mars, it is purfectly normal. What the picture shows is a butte or mesa, not an alian thing. There are no alians ether, if they were real which they're not we would have gotton pictures of them to but we didn't, because there aren't any. There isn't proof of life on Mars because there is no life on Mars.\n\nThere are no alians and there never will be, and the face wasn't made by alians it is just a lava dome. Until the proof of real alians we can't really\n\nsay it was made by alians.There are land formations just like it on Earth.\n\nIt is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'll Drive My Own Car\n\nWould you want a computer in control of what could possibly end up being your life? I do not support the idea of driverless cars. As technology developes, people seem to want to become lazier over time, but we should still be driving our own cars. Im going to stick with driving myself because I trust myself more than I trust a computer, I enjoy driving, and the cost of the change.\n\nFirst off, I would trust myself with almost anything before i trusted a computer or machine with it, especially with something that could possibly cost me my life. So many times throughout history, recent and distant, machines have caused many misshaps that could've been prevented if a human were to do the job. Computers are very complex and can be used for great things but driving just isnt the exception.\n\nSecond, driving can be fun! Many young men and women are extatic to gain the privalige of having a license so that they can enjoy the feeling of being in control of something thats made for them. Cars are also used in sports, driven by proffesional drivers. Just imagaine how boring it would be to watch a car race if all the cars did the exact same thing due to no one controlling their actions! Driving is seen as a bond between man and machine and that shouldn't be taken away.\n\nLast, the cost and confusion of changing over to driverless cars would be horrific. For one, the cost of cars would raise due to more expensive, and unnessicary, technology that is installed within the vehicle. Another point is that it would take a lot of time and effort to build acomputer system that knows all of the roads, twist, and turns of everyday driving, plus it would have to be constantly updated\n\nto keep up with the fast changing world we live in today. Also, people in less fortunate countries or areas wouldn't be able to afford such a thing, we wouldhave two different automobile worlds.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars aren't a thing that should be implamented into our world. People would not trust these computers as much as they trust themselves, people enjoy driving themselves, and the cost of the changes would just be unreasonable. We as people should be in control of something as important as our own lives. I dont know about you, but I'll stick to driving myself, instead of a computer doing it for me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author creates memoir feeling relationships love called extended family The author emphasizes relationship Narciso Rodriguez s family surrounding neihbors close could family The author incorporates feeling overall joy happiness boy even though small house could still turn loving home The author shows much boy loves heritage fun parents taught love cooking cuban music This memoir shows poor still fun interesting life lots friends fond memories Narciso thankful parents shows appreciative simplist things iand home The overall mood memoir would thankfulness The characters thankfull everything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello, I am here to tell you why I believe that people participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I think that would be a good way to see the world and go place you never been before and you can go over seas and help other countries in need.\n\nIn the story A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves it state in paragraph 4, in World War two over in Europe and many other places they was left in ruins so 44 nations joined togethere to form a UURRA and they hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the animals they was shipping over seas. That is why I believe participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program is a good thing cause you can help other countrys in need.\n\nIn the story it sate i paragraph 6 that the boy Luke that was in the Seagoing Program he was over seas for two weeks before he had got to china. That is one of the reason why i think that being in the Seagoing Cowboys is a good way for you to go places you never been before\n\nLast, the passage state in paragraph 9 that being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more that a adventure for Luke Bomberger. This is why I choose to think that it is a great idea to be in the Seagoing Cowboys program cause you can see stuff that you never in your life seen before and have adventures.\n\nThis shows why I have stick to believe that it is good idea for people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology can be beneficial in several aspects of everyday life, but reading emotions should not be one of them. According to the article, the technology to read human emotions is possible and can be effiecently used to detect how a person is feeling. This technology is certainly impressive but does not seem very beneficial to the average student and can be seen as slightly intrusive. Therefore, this technology would not be valuable in a classroom due to the small amount of benefit that it would provide and its intrusiveness, as students should have a right to keep certain emotions and feelings to themselves.\n\nIt seems unnecessary to use this technology when emotions are already fairly easy to identify without the use of a computer. Body language and facial expressions can already easily be analyzed by humans themselves to reveal emotions. To quote the writer of the article, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\" (D'Alto 5). This depicts that technology is not required to identify the basic emotions of a human being and is therefore unnecessary.\n\nIf a person is not blatantly showing his emotions with body language and facial expressions, then the person wold likely prefer not to express what he is feeling or thinking. All human beings have a natural right to keep their thoughts and emotions to themselves as they please, and technology that can reveal emotions at their deepest depths can be intrusive. An example of this can be how computers use cookies to track what people are searching on the Internet in order to produce advertisements directed toward the user later on, which often disturbs people and makes them feel uncomfortable. This may be the same situation if computers have access to human emotions. The private feelings of a human should not be exploited by a computer, and therefore trespasses a basic right of humans which allows them to have their own private thoughts and emotions.\n\nThe final reason that this technology would not be valuable is because there are little uses for it. Detecting emotions are not really relevant when using a computer. The author of the article states many examples of how this technology can be used on a computer, and the use of using the emotions to determine the type of advertisements would match emotions and what the user is feeling does not seem very important or beneficial. Overall, the implementation of technology into a student's everyday life would not be useful, therefore making it seem pointless rather than valuable.\n\nTherefore, the idea of implementing technology that read emotions would not be valuable in a typical classroom. Despite the consistency of the technology working successful, it would be worthless to bring into everyday lives as people do not need advanced computers to identify other people's emotions. The technology would also be extremely intrusive, as it would exploit the private thoughts and emotions of people that would not want their emotions to be detected and make them feel slightly uncomfortable. Alongside these reasons, there is practically no use for this advanced technology in a typical day of an ordinary student. For these reasons, while the concept of reading emotions may be interesting, there is not much benefit that will come from the use of this technology and therefore implementing it into classrooms would be a prodigious waste of money and effort in order to provide a minimal benefit for students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undeniable to say that the issue of housing scarcity in ports has become a matter of discussion. It is being argued that the law is the only one that can solve this problem. To some extent, I agree with this notion. This essay intends to discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.\n\nTo commence with, there are umpteen reasons why only authorities can solve this problem. Primarily, the regime should run campaigns to encourage entities and give the benefits of living in villages that will cure this housing scarcity . To illustrate , in 2015 Maharashtra province started a campaign on Instagram and Twitter which shows significant results. Secondarily , politics should provide jobs. To elaborate, human beings are migrating to places in the search of jobs as in metropolia there are a lot of opportunities. If people get these facilities at their home place , they will not move to urban areas.\n\nHowever , there are some other factors are also which may help in this situation. First and foremost , parties and builders play an important role. They can give their priority to skyscrapers and flats as these buildings cover less space as compared to bungalows which require more space. For instance , in Singapore , the majority of human beings tend to live in flats.\n\nTo recapitulate , although centres have more opportunities as compared to villages. authority should take some decisions to tackle this problem. ,However entity should not forget the advantages of countryside areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What the article to presenting is the fact that facial expressions are all readable, and can be calculated to give a precentage of what emotion some is feeling. So would a software machine like the Facial Action Coding System be a useful tool in schools? The answer to that is yes starting with the fact that can it be useful tool during school.\n\nFor a teacher to do their job and educate their students it may not be required. The system can help identify when a student truely doesn't understand what the teacher is saying. This gives the teacher the chance to present the idea that they can come to them and ask for help. This would surely improve grades for thsoe students that are failing but want to try hard. Another help scenario that the machine can be used for is to identify when a students might be suffering from depression. This will open a gate for either a teacher, consulor, etc to go up to the student and ask if there is something terrible going on that might be severly effecting that students life.\n\nSo hvaing the Facial Actions Coding System would be a useful machine to have in schools. It will most definitly improve how much some students are progressing. There are probably more way that the machine could make an impact on schools around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You always see your friend sitting there with the same old plain face and wonder \"Is he alright or not?\". Well soon you will, scientists have made a machine the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nPeople nowadays you can never tell what their face is expressing. Their are multiple emotions and only one face to show it, but what are people feeling? Well we most certainly can with this new machine created by Dr. Paul Eckman. It is called the Facial Action Coding System (FACS).\n\nThe value and how it works is incredible. First the computer scans a copy of your face. Then makes sure all the 44 main muscles on the computer\n\nmove like human muscle. After that it scans your face and shows what emotions you are expressing. FACS scans these 6 basic emotions; happiness, sadness, anger, fear, disgust, and surprise.\n\nThe value of this technology is amazing. Just scan your face and it tells you what emotions you are experessing. Like the Mona Lisa which was just a painting even figured what emotions it was showing. Soon the will put this tech in a classroom and if a student was confused or lost\n\nthen it will show the lesson and teach it in a different way so the person can understand.\n\nHopefully in next few years we get this technology. It could help us a lot when people are confused or down.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the last few years, the debate regarding museums has been raised. Some people believe that museums are a place where you gain knowledge and education. However, Some others claim that historical places like museums should be attractive and enjoyable to the public. I believe that museums are educational places but also they can be entertaining to attract more visitors. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, a historical gallery is a place where the visitors explore the history of nations. In addition, they can learn about the tools as well as the methods that had been used in the ancient era. For instance, the Louvre museum exhibits ancient Egyptian clothes and statues. As a consequence, such galleries should not accept any entertaining activities that will disrupt the tourists. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, recreational activities inside the museums will attract more community members to come and learn about our history. Furthermore, such activities will enhance the people experience as well as encouraging them to bring their children. For example, display a relevant adventure movie with high-quality sound, this movie may focus on some historical events in order to gain youth attention. Moreover, some ancient venues organize competitions to bring more participants as well as more media coverage. As a result, more revenue can be generated to support the employee's salaries together with expansion projects.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, museums are a great venue to gain knowledge regarding ancient events. Although it is an educational zone, we can include some enjoyable shows. Such activities will motivate more youth and children to visit museums. This can include movie shows and competitions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human being is one of the key factors in today's modern society. As a result, some believe that it is essential to allocate more money to trigger people living healthier than studying treatments for the illness. From my perspective, I disagree with this statement because of the following reasons.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the more money uses to promote citizens, the more awareness those understand about healthy lifestyle. Building many facilitated public parks, for instance, will encourage dwellers being active, doing more excerise or outdoor activities there. It can lead to decline the number of adults safeguard from some problems related to their bones. Moreover, children and doodlers will have a spacious outdoor areas to play with their friends, instead of staying home all day long, addicting in video games. As a result, it might cut down the rate of obesity in these ages.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the cure is the biggest concern to lengthen the life expectancy. There are many diseases which do not related to the lifestyle threatren human life recently. The Covid-19 pandemic, for example. stems form the virus which made the death of meny people around the world even they are healthy or not. Therefore, living in healthier way just help human reduce the effects of sicks, it can not protect them certainly from some world-wide illnesses. In addition, not all people can have a chance to live health even though they aware of that due to their hetic lifestyles. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, producing medicines for illness should be the first priority to maintance the human life, instead of allocate budgets to stimulate healthier lifestyles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses play a contributory role in societies for making money and many other reasons. In my point of view social responsibilities are as essential as financial support in countries that clients have to consider them as the most important thing for establishing businesses; thus, I strongly agree with this idea.\nFirst of all, not only can a company’s income increase the number of employees, but it can also develop the standard of living. Simply put strong business can provide great job opportunities for young people so that they can get married easily or they can spend their energy in positive activities; thus, the rate of corruption will be decreased. Secondly, Innovation will happen in the society by financial support that means enterprises can allocate a especial budget for searching and exploring new ideas to bring more convenience to people’s lives. A good illustration is Apple Company; as it develops its investment by selling more products. the reason was increasing human resource and new products leading to it, being famous. \nIn addition, money is not the only reason companies have to work. there are a bunch of reasons, especially the health of society and environment. climate has been changed by companies so the big responsibilities is paying attention to their industrial activities. furthermore, factories have to work without adverse effects that take time and effort. They can encourage people to use products having few or no side effects on the environment or they can invent devices without harmful effects on the society.\nIn conclusion, businesses have big responsibilities against to the human life by two reasons and both of them have the special places and it can be negligible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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