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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear fellow citezens of America it has come to my attention that pollution in the United States is getting worse so I have a solution use cars less. It is simple, this will help cut pollution in the U.S as the second biggest polluting factor is gone and can actually help you with a better social life as well as helping rebuild the community.\n\nAs mentioned earlier,cars are the second leading cause of pollution in the U.S and cutting that will help stop some pollution by stopping one of the biigest causes. Stopping the use of cars will cut the carbon in the air and this in turn can lead to a healthier lifestyle as well. There are many neighborhoods that are car-less and we have recieved good results from said neighborhoods as well as car free day is becoming a hit in Columbia as well as other parts in central America. This will also make smog a less likely occurence as no car fumes are getting trapped therefore, cleaner, unpolluted air. This will help prevent the same pollution levels like in Paris pop up here.\n\nA life without cars can also posotivly affect the social lives of many people. As people are more likely to just walk and talk with freinds or just walk or bike to the park. people in car-less communitys like Vauban have even said they feel less stress now that they don't have cars. Young Americans have even started loseing intrests in cars and would rather take public transport or carpool with freinds then just take their own car. And as a result are tighter with their freinds and family then before.\n\nPeople who use cars for transport are less likely to use the sidewalk or ride their bike and as a result sidewalks and bike paths are uneven and ragged. Therefore without cars, things like disrepaired sidewalks or roads would come to our attention. For example Car Free Day in Columbia led to the repair of sidewalks and 118 miles of bike roads and more sport centers parks and shopping districts have started to pop up. Getting rid of cars can help us rebuild the community with more parks and public centers and hangouts. This will also lead to better security as less people will get hit by cars, less car accidents and overall better security.\n\nIn conclusion my fellow citezens, please consider makeing this community car-less. for their are many advantages for doing so in this community from the enviromental, to the social and to the health benefits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using this technology is valuable to read peoples emotions. The doctors and prof. say that the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-d computer model of the face;all 44 major muscels in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit. Also Dr. huang observes that artists such as da vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\n\nDr. Huang also stated that most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communication. Dr. Huang also gave some examples of what movments to do in front of a mirror. For example raise your lips at the corners of your mouth. second squint your eyes slightly,to produce wrinkling (\"crow's-feet\") at the corners of your eyes. Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheeks up,toward your eyes.\n\nThey even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In the real smile, the Zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. Meanwhile,muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the Zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. So based on what i put down on this final draft my claim is that this kind of technology is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every planet in the universe dies.Scary thought right?Planet Earth is the only planet in our solar system with life on it.That is why it's destruction would be our doom.Human development has brought us to the ability to actually leave our home planet and visit other parts of space like Moon and Mars.\n\nVenus,according to the article, is the second planet from our star and is the most Earth like planet in our solar system.The importance of Venus exploration is a big step for humanity to understand how other planets might be sustainable for life.For example, in the paragraph 5, it states that about 30 or so miles above Venus' surface the air preasure and temperatures are survivable for humans.One of the problems with other planets like Mars is the solar radiation which in Venus' case is not the problem,according to the article.Even though, I think that exploring Mars is much more benefitial because of the ability to explore rocks and actual ground of the planet which you can't do on Venus because of it's rough conditions on the ground, I think it's in the best interest of all of us if we explore both planets in order to save humanity.\n\nThe technology today has brought us many benefits but also shortened our planet's life time.Knowing that there is no proof of other inteligent life that we know of in the universe,at the moment.Ruining our planet is a reckless thing to do.That is why I think exploring Venus along with other parts of universe is important.\n\nNote:This is mine so don't try using it without giving me credit for it!\n\nEvery planet in the universe dies.Scary thought right?Planet Earth is the only planet in our solar system with life on it.That is why it's destruction would be our doom.Human development has brought us to the ability to actually leave our home planet and visit other parts of space like Moon and Mars.\n\nVenus,according to the article, is the second planet from our star and is the most Earth like planet in our solar system.The importance of Venus exploration is a big step for humanity to understand how other planets might be sustainable for life.For example, in the paragraph 5, it states that about 30 or so miles above Venus' surface the air preasure and temperatures are survivable for humans.One of the problems with other planets like Mars is the solar radiation which in Venus' case is not the problem,according to the article.Even though, I think that exploring Mars is much more benefitial because of the ability to explore rocks and actual ground of the planet which you can't do on Venus because of it's rough conditions on the ground, I think it's in the best interest of all of us if we explore both planets in order to save humanity.\n\nThe technology today has brought us many benefits but also shortened our planet's life time.Knowing that there is no proof of other inteligent life that we know of in the universe,at the moment.Ruining our planet is a reckless thing to do.That is why I think exploring Venus along with other parts of universe is important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" Owning a vehicle helps get people from one place to another faster then just walking but some people really don't understand that there are advantages to not owning a vehicle. In the excerpts \"In German Suburb, life goes on without cars\", \"The end of car culture\" both by Elizbath Rosenthal and \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" by Robert Duffer, all explain how limiting car usage can help lower emission and conserve resources.\n\nIn the excerpt \"In German Suburb, life goes on without cars\" by Elizabeth Rosenthal explains why limiting car usuage would help lower emissions. For example, \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. Cars are polluting the eniviroment that we all live in and are destroying the atomosphere because of all these greenhouse gases swirling through the air because of the use of cars. Furthermore, referring to another excerpt \"The end of car culture\" from Elizabeth Rosenthal also, proves why limiting car usuage will lower emission rates. For instance, \"What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down to two to three years before the turndown...it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants.\" As you can see owning a car can be a advantage to your personal life but the enviroment is suffering because of the fumes from the vehicles everyone own but if less people start to walk more, ride bikes or even hike the enviroment wouldn't be suffering from so many emissions.\n\nLikewise, in the excerpt \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" by Robert Duffer highlights how limiting car usage can help conserve resources. For example, \"After days of near-record polution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city...[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world...Cold night and warm days caused the layer of air to trap car emissions.\" Going back to what Rosental was pointing out emissions are still triggering the atmosphere. But, that is not the only thing that is being blamed for pollution. \"Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has...[a] tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in Western Europe, accoring to Reuters.\" Without any gasoline nobody will be traveling from one place to another so to conserve resources people are better off limiting the usage of their cars.\n\nIn conclusion, using cars less would help to lower emissions and conserve resources such as in this case gasoline. If everyone keeps driving aroud in cars the air is going to be full of Greenhouse gases and eventually resources to run cars will soon run out. Then without a car to take people where they need to go people will have no choice but to walk, ride a bike, or take public transportaton because everything id worn and ran out. This is why limiting car usage is a advantage for fellow citizens because it helps lower emissions and conserves resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While\n\nwriting the \"Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author knew almost everything he or she needed to know. The auhtor knew the risk and danagers, the benifits, and even the history. With the author knowing the facts I think he or she didn't do a good job of realy supporting his idea, that exploring venus is valuable due to the fact that, he has more negatives than positives that cancle out the beinfits of the exploration.\n\n\"Researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else.\" If researchers can't take back sample or any physical testing iteams from Venus, It'd be a huge waist of time. Not only a waist of time but also more importantly money. That's important because if you can see the planet that should be just enough, instead of spending millions of dollars on a dangerous space mission for you not to be able to take test samples and to risk lives flying astronounts through a \"highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\"\n\nNot only does Venus have a high acidic atomsphere but it also has a really high level of pressure that\n\nwould \"crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans.\" This statement alone completely debonk's the authors entire idea that exploring Venus is a great idea. The idea of exploring Venus after reading that argument shouldn't even be close to being considered due to the fact that we wouldn't be able to get a ship in the air space of Venus. But if we were to even get a space craft\n\npass Venus's highly acidic atmosphere without melting, then the spacecraft would more then likely slowly be crushed.\n\nLast but not least, actually landing a space craft of any sort, with it lasting for a long enough time is virtually impossible. Due to Venus's \"surface tempurature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,\" It'd liquify many many melts. Not only is the ground tempurature scortching hot but Venus is full of \"erupting valcanos,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\"\n\nIn conclusion, that author did not do a very good job at supporting their idea. The main reason the author failed to do a good job is because he or she had more facs to go against their argument, and aso their arguement was almost just an imagination of a way to explore venus by hoveirng 20 to 30 miles off the surface.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient I hunting bow shoot far deer come nice clearing behind brush I think patient person deer comes close get bow ready mind makes think like It going come close walks slow possible go And patience comes end get ready shoot got really pays", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should libraries careful put place establishment Of course Libraries kinds people walking everyday Certain rated material put certain spots certain people The library strict material people library look day day basis Libraries need become little organized Libraries people come library everyday People different ages anyone welcome come library With said children ages come library time pick kinds material Children course ca nt read everything library They stay within appropriate rated material selection So library censored strict material children ca nt get hands material nt seeing time lives You would want seven year old child seeing inappropriate offensive material right Libraries put material adults eyes one completely different section library would want children come library see With decreases chances children getting hold material see Also books library think children able see might offinsive another set people would nt want children see So books show racism maybe another kind discrimination goal book make suggestion still book wrong hands bad thing especially childrens minds The libraries really need stop think second book really appropriate age group even establishment Libraries become children checking books thats problem I think children need parents concent check book library libraries care Library check inventory notice book missing guess time already late Children able walk right books days know one even think took book without checking When children find piece material library know nt suppose know cant get library might decide take book The sercurity wont think twice check child result childs mind corrupted Guess blame though library Ise nt something child got material friendly neighborhood library Oranization key Libraries need orginize material better plane simple It s really hard They need review content thier putting shelves establishment I feel people library lazy personally If gave little effort maybe children would nt get hand material buisness getting hold Just pay attention whats going library Their books everywhere right Their children correct The children appropriate rated section library maybe book adult section library stumbled accident Though accident still happened prevented prevented sake children All need little organization As see following libraries nt children much It s okay everyone welcome library questions asked people need stay designated place library Children nt allowed adult section saftey Also book adult side nt childrens section anything happen corruption rise We need stricter libraries Better sercurity children looking material Also library really needs look material decide appropriate readers look material Organization key worries use bit effort wo nt problem anymore", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is place where can travel,stay with animals,and have fun time. Those are just a few reasons of many reason.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys travel a lot with animals. They cross the Alantic Ocean and the Pacific Ocean alot. They also travel to places like China or Europe so if like travel Seagoing Cowboys program is the place to go.\"The cattle-boat trips unbelievable for a small town boy. Besides helping people, I had the side benefits of seeing Europe and China.\"\n\nAnother reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is you can stay with animals. If you like animals this is the place were you can visit them while you are traveling to drop them of. You can feed him while you guys are traveling. You would have to keep an eye on them and make sure they don't do anything.\n\nThe final reason you should be in the program is that you can find ways to have fun. Like volleyball and baseball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Some other games you could play to pass time is table-tennis,fencing,boxing,reading whittling. You wouldn't be bored after droping off animals because there would be enough room to play games.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is place where you can travel,stay with animals,and have a fun time. All those reasons are why you should come join the Seagoing Cowboys program. I think this is a great way to interact with animals and other seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been part of our daily lives for decades and have become somewhat idolized in American culture. But cars are slowly killing our planet and are speeding up the Greenhouse effect taking place within our Earths atmosphere. We've become entirley too dependent on cars to get us where we wish to go, making many people lazy. Cars also emit gasses that can harm our internal body structures, causing problems with lung diseases and just the simple act of breathing. Many cities from all over the world have taken measures to limit the use of cars in daily life, making their homes cleaner and healtheir to live in. More cities should start to do this as well to help save our planet and oursleves.\n\nEnvironmentalists have hated cars for a long time because of the harmful effect it has to air we breathe. When near-record levels of smog filled the air of Paris, they enforced a temporary driving an in efforts to reduce the smog and within five days the smog cleared enough to allow citizens to start driving once again. In America, the number of drivers and car owners has been steadily reducing since 2005 and many experts belive it will continue to. A revolution could be started if enough people stop driving personal vehicles and instead walk, bike, or even just use public transportation.\n\nPeople have adjusted over the years to things being given to them without them doing much to get it. Cars contribute to this and have caused laziness in many car owners. In Bogota, Columbia they have initiated and annual car-free day where everyone has to get to their jobs by means of biking or walking or taking public transportation. Carlos Atruro Plaza rides his two-seat bicycle with his wife to work and both like the idea of limiting air pollution caused by cars. Pollution from cars can be dangerous for humans as well as the environment. By breathing in harsh gases we could aquire diseases such as COPD and lung cancer. Cars allow people to live unhealthy lifestyles in comfort while unknowing of the harm its causing. They are an insidious problem.\n\nCars have been gradually degenerating the planet and harming the people who use them. Thankfully many officials are working hard to limit this but we all have to contribute. Our planet will die if we dont do something to stop it, and if our planet dies, whats to become of the human race?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This graph describes the selling of a coffie shop in an office building during a weekday. Generally, the sales are greater early in the morning and late in the afternoon/evening. By considering the receipts made during the all day, the product more sold is coffee.\nFrom 7.30am to 10.30am the coffie shop used to produce the higest amount of selling of the all day. The shop sell 265 coffee and 275 pastries. The selling goes a little bit down from 10.30 to 5.30pm and after that until the shop closes at 8.30pm the sales made increase again. In particular product less sold in the less productive hour is tea. The shop usually sell only 85 tea in half a day, from 10.30 am to 5.30pm. In the evening from 5.30pm to 8.30pm coffee and sandwiches are the product more sold. Respectivily, the shop sell 200 coffee and 110 sandwiches.\nCoffee is the most sold product. Instead, the less sold is tea. While people used to buy coffee at every hour of the day. Instead, people used to drink tea mostly in the morning and after there is a drastic deacrise of the selling relative to this product. Sandwiches are sold during in the hours that corresponds to lunch (200 sales of the product) and dinner (100 of them are sold). By contrast, people used to buy pastries early in the morning (275 pastries) and in the afternoon between 2.30pm and 5.30 pm (150 pastries).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir gratitude great memories Narcisco obviously grateful towards parents teaching love family friends come first Narcisco talking lot memoir great family memories friends family coming dinner mother cooking kitchen traditional Cuban food listening traditional Cuban music He learned friends family members love spend time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars shouldnt be allowed there a bad sign of bad luck to anyone who drives them at all. They are also not safe even though some people think they are. Think about it why would you want a car if your not really driving it??? What type of sense does that make thats the whole point of having a car and your license is to drive your car. If your not driving it then you should have it its really a waste of money if you buy it. Driveless cars are a bad idea and there not safe.\n\nFirst of all they can cause a wreck and as it said in the article if somebody gets into a wreck who can they blame it on. The driver, or the car who knows who acually did it. And what if its the cars fault what if it catchs a glicth or something. What if the car has a glicth and blows up who's fault is that the person who made it right??? Who's gonna pay for the persons funneral if they so happen to die.\n\nNo one knows you see regular cars dont catch glitch. Regular cars dont drive there selfs because the person behind the wheel drives the car not the other way around. Thats the whole point of them making a car is for transportation but what is the point of having a machine drive you around and thats the whole point of you buyin it. Is for you to have fun driving it if you make driveless cars then teenagers are going to think that they dont need a license to drive a car. There going to get in the car and let the car drive them around.\n\nTheres no fun in buying the car if you cant drive it thats why you bought the car. Whats the point in getting your license if your not the one driving. And also if you havent noticed your putting your life in the hands of a machine. Also 90 mph is fast if you didnt know 90 mph can kill somebody in a mature of seconds if that car gets a glicth.\n\nThis whole idea should just go out the window because it cost alot of money to build a car. And now by them trying to build a car that can drive itself is going to cost even more money. Also what if a old person is driving the car and they see the windsheild wipers blink. That could cause and accident real quick who knows whats going or in there head when they see that they could get scared and start swerving. And these are some reasons why they shouldnt make driveless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Less cars are getting sold on a yearly basis, which is trimendously changing everything in the world. Countries have started noticing when the polution rate spiked up, causing people to make a change. Stated in the fist article \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emissions in Europe\"(Elisabeth Rosenthal). This is saying that in just Europe alone cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions.\n\nThe people did not react as you would expect. After noticing the statistics of the rise of problems cars make, they where actually exited for the change \"As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\"(Heidrum Walter). What is being mentioned in this statement is that hardly and of the people that live in Vauban do not own a car and they are happy about it. Now because of situation like this people are going for a more healthier alternitive like walking and biking to there destination.\n\nIn some places it is now starting to become a law like in Paris \"motorist wih even-numberd license plates were orderd to leav their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day\" (Robert Duffer). In the begining that law did not go well with most drivers. About 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their car impounded for their reaction to the fine. In Bogota it was the third straight year cars have been banned, only allowing buses and taxis and the violators will face a $25 fine. But although some residents do not mind \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air polution\" (Carlos Arturo).\n\nNow auto mobil companies are looking at the stats and seeing that every year their sales are lowering because of the changes going on. Now fewer people are starting to care about getting their licence to drive. The world is changing for he better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In passage DO Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit deserts feature positive affects cyclist The desert contained rolling hills When cyclist goes hills takes energy due laws gravity Because cyclist used energy go hills enough energy feel sorry The hills energy lost tired became The desert also hot dry Obviously since deserts California June would make become thirsty He stop water tarlike substance came instead When stopped later water cool likely refreshing Riding bike hilly dry hot desert cyclist became tired thirsty", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if your every emotion could be understood by a comutor? Well now there is a new technology that helps computors to predict your emotions. There are many uses for this. One use is in a classroom. The technology could adjust a lesson plan based off of the students emotions. But what happens when a student is having a bad day and all the sudden, their school laptop starts telling them what they feel. They may think that this is an invasion of privacy.\n\nThis technology can also change an ad based on your emotions. What if you are angry and all the sudden not only is there an ad, but it keeps changing to something different. The computers supposedly computes what emotions you have, what if they are wrong and geuss the wrong emotion\n\nAccording to Dr. Huang facial expretions for each emotion are universal, but what about children that dont expres emotion. Will this take the lesson plan and make it more confusing? Could this Make an ad that they can tolerate and turn it into one that they hate?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars would be a help to society and the economy. I believe so because with driverless cars, everyone will have the same driving skill as everyone else and we won't have people on the road who are either horrible or a professional at driving. Everyone will drive in the same way which will make it easier to avoid other cars and crate less car accidents and collisions. They also use less gas which will stop people from paying for gas so often and will be able to ride their driverless cars much longer without spending as much money on gas.\n\nWith driverless cars and their sensors, they could possibly be more aware about their surroundings than the average person. When people are driving they have blind spots where they can't see who is around them, with the sensors all around the cars, it will be hard to miss any object coming toward or is near the car from any direction or area. With the car being able to see objects, people who are carless or uncarful or are little kids and don't check to see if cars are coming while crossing the road or getting something in the road, could get hurt if not noticed. All people in a car should be aware about their surroundings when driving, but not all people are. Some girls could be doing their make up or texting. Guys could be texting or just being to careless. They are the ones who would hit an oncoming person or kid in the road and possibly killing someone who is married, young and loved by many people. This would cause them to be arrested and have the guilt of killing someone or potentially killing someone. With the driverless car, if someone wasn't paying attention, the car would make up for it by always being attentive and aware. The cars would either stop or move out of the way to make sure nothing happend to the innocent passerby.\n\nBeing in a car that does all the work could get a little boring though i'll admit. But, being bored and keeping people safe rather than having fun at the wheel and puting other people in danger is the better way to go. this could also stop people who get disoriented at the wheel as well. Some people either are very sleepy before already driving, get bored while driving and become sleepy, people who are blind and still need a ride, or are even drunk when about to drive. The driveless car can help with these problems as well. It will stop peolpe from going in ditches or hitting other objects. some people are nervous about driving and this could help them alot by not making them drive but still have the ability to go places on their own. With all these helpful actions these cars will do for people, I don't see why it could possibly be a bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "laughed today Many believe laughing beneficial everyday lives heard saying laughter best medicine comes idea positive mood make feel better Close idea Laughing said relieve stress makes seem approachable someone know yet The quote Laughter shortest distance two people accurate opinion I relate way friends I act way I act towards strangers When meeting someone new making joke laughing kind breaks ice make conversation lighthearted easy When I younger best friends name hung nearly everyday school We shared everything favorite color hair even friends We girls everyone though sister hung much We kind friends could take one look start laughing thinking past memory Like time went wrong movie time went lunch together I remember going lunch like day though easily years ago One day went daily kindergarten class together like always except today going get come home My knew going need take car shop day told us could tag along good would go lunch All day best behavior wanted go lunch hang rest day around lunch time thought well car I ll take girls lunch pick way home So dropped car headed local restaurant lunch When got restaurant took drink orders I decided would good idea get big blackberry slushy type drink When came table I really excited I started drink really fast maybe little fast When sudden whoosh spilled face clothes everywhere hair face eyes I embarrassed I surprised hast ice fell face I started crying right front best friend She trying hard laugh biggest smile face When I looked laughing I humiliated I worried friend would make fun clumsy said happened After I got cleaned I realized silly I I embarrassed time laughing But I thought I would laughed The whole car ride home giggled little drink disaster could hardly look without saying something spill would think start cracking Even though first I though would make fun laugh making silly accident ended laughing together made us closer friends Our memories little girls last minds remember silly creative things used little things would fun us We always great friends We still best friends every one us bring something makes us think day little girls bust laughing I believe laughter best medicine Although course laughter never conquer cure diseases fight cancers I think makes stronger take treatment happy positive outlook something look forward something nt want miss Laughter make sick person forget illness make carefree living moment I think laughter much powerful realize So consider question instead made someone laugh today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It short story Rough Rode Ahead cyclist pushed extremely harsh setting trying get Yosemite National Park In story narrator takes trip Yosemite National park getting directions two older men narrator nt know road ahead indeed rough One narrator states I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated The narrator really really taking beating travel rocks dry climate really takens tale From reading story setting good general store finds end Like title states setting story Rough Road Ahead", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presented negative and positive aspects of driverless cars, I'm going to present why we shouldn't have driverless cars. Driverless cars can be dangerous. People would have to be more alert. New laws would have to be made and more.those are the reasons I don't think we should have driverless cars.\n\nFirst, driverless cars are dangerous because, someone can be sleeping and then a road work site may come up. Also when a driver wants to take over the car all he has to do is hit a switch.This is dangerous because, what if someone hit that switch on accident, then got in a crash.\n\nSecond, people would have to be more alert. Like people are alert enough already. I see this as a concern because, If people were alert enough for this technology shouldn't they be alert enough for are old technology. This doesn't apply to everybody but, there are still people who crash the regular cars.\n\nLastly, new laws would have to be made. This sounds like it will be a hassle. Along with that if someone got hurt, they wouldn't know who to blame \"-The driver or the manufacturer.\"\n\nThis would also make it difficult to know where you were able to drive your driverless car because, it may be legal in one state but illegal in another state.\n\nThose are the reasons why I don't think we should have driverless cars. I feel like we should work on improving the cars we already have first, and their safety. That's why I think driverless cars are dangerous, and should be avoided for right now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would it be fun to be able to know what emotion or emotions others are feeling, stictly off of facial muscle movement? Yes, it would be quite interesting to have the ability to have some insight on what other people are thinking and feeling. Although the Facial Action Coding System is a very sharp piece of modern technology, is it truly a valuable invention? Yes, it is impressive and intelligent, but it does not seem to serve a larger purpose within a classroom enviornment. Thus, although the Facial Action Coding System is an impressive piece of modern technology, it is uneeded in a classroom enviornment because it is impractical, unecessary, could potentially be very stressful.\n\nTo begin, the Facial Action Coding System is impractical in todays society, especailly within a classroom enviornment. In the text it says that, \"your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" So, in order to place this cutting-edge technology within schools would be a huge financial burden. Most schools only contain practical technology due to a strict, government driven budget. Attempting to fit such a modern piece of technology into the school system would not be practical, and in many cases, it would not be possible either. If the Facial Action Coding System was put into school systems, it could have to possibility to help decode bad mental health in some cases, but it could also cause the government to go even deeper into debt. Thus, because the Facial Action Coding system is predicted to be incredibly expensive, it is not a practical item for a classroom enviornment.\n\nNext, the Facial Action Coding System may be neat, but it is also unecessary. According to the text, it has the capability of showing when \"a smile is not being truthful,\" but lie-detector tests have already been invented for that. The article also states that,\"A classroom computer could recognize whne a student is becoming confused or bored,\" yet this is very evident in the body language of a student. Teachers do not need need a software that tells them that their students are not interested in their teaching material because it is shown through their actions. For example, if the student has their head down, is engaging in their own conversation during the lesson, or tends to sleep during class, this portrays to the teacher that they are bored or uninterested. Therefore, because there are already similar inventions and because observance of body language is a very practical tool, it is unecessary to use the Facial Action Coding System within a classroom enviornment.\n\nLastly, the Facial Action Coding Sytem has the potential of being very stressful to a student. A computer system that is able to publicly expose ones emotions could stir up fear and anxiety that was not within them before. Someone who has is struggling with their mental health does not needed to be reminded of this through their test results, especially while at school. There are plenty of other treatment options for issues like these. The Facial Action Coding System would strip students of emotional privacy, which could potentially stir up stress within a student. Considering that students are already under enough stress with standardized testing, the pressure to perform well in academics and athletics, and to fit in, they do not need an added stress in their life. In conclusion, the Facial Action Coding Sytem would do more harm than good and could potentially damage the mental health of the students.\n\nOverall, the concept of a the Facial Action Coding System is very captivating and intriuging, but it does not have many practical uses. It would place a financial burden among the school systems and could potentially stress students even more than they currently are. Thus, the Facial Action Coding Sytem would not be valuable wthin the clasroom setting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have diiferent views about how they can maintain their health. some people think that proliferation of sports facilities can maintain fitness while others aduce that it just has few effects and other practises are required. However, according to me , only sports cannot be helpfull for being healthy ,some other measures are anticipating too.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, sports plays an intergral part in maintaining health. As we know , sports acitivities like cycling, football and many more ,requires extra strength and helathy diet to be active in these type of games. Morover, playing sports regulary increases the flexiblility of a body as well burn extra calories through sweeting. Although, sportsperson gain healthy bones and muscles as well as feel full of beans. For instance: a person can maintain fitteness by running as well as use public facilities like parks for good . Even though, government should provide more sports facilities to people who live in a small towns.\r\n\r\non the other hand, only athletics cannot help people to stay fit or healthy ,but undoubtly, there are some other obligatory methods that should be followed to stay healthy. For example, if a person is playing sports regularly but do not eat proper diet, it would be harmful for their health and athletics cannot help with it . However , a proper balanced diet and avoiding junk food is the key point to maintain health as well as decrease obesity rate. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, better diet along with games is the better way to stay healthy and fit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ability for a computer to be able to detect emotion by the twitch of a muscle is incredible and seems almost impossible.\n\nFor a computer to detect percentages of emotions, such as with the Mona Lisa (who is supposedly 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry), is even more impressive.\n\nThis type of break-through technology can be very useful in the near future to help in the medical field or the law field, but in a classroom?\n\nThere is no value in using this technology in the classroom to calculate the emotions that students are feeling. Not only is it an unnecessary cost added to the already minute educational budget, but it is also an invasion of privacy.\n\nThe budget for education in America is absurdly small and it won't be going up any time soon.\n\nThis would mean an increase on taxes which no one would like.\n\nAnyone that has been in a school knows the quality of the computers.\n\nThey are cheap, slow, and just overall trashy.\n\nThe fact that schools can't afford to get better computers shows a lot about the budget.\n\nMost people have a computer that performs much better than the school computers.\n\nThe author says ,\"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode the Mona Lisa's smile\" (D'Alto 7).\n\nThis would mean that not only would schools need to purchase brand new computers that have the high capility to run these algorithms, but you would also need to purchase the software which can actually do the facial decoding.\n\nThis would be an outrageous cost because of the limited avaliability of this technology to the public.\n\nIt simply wouldn't be possible to include this epic technology in classrooms.\n\nWhile the having the actually money to acquire the new computers and software is already a huge problem in itself, the privacy of students is an even bigger one.\n\nIn order to detect emotions on someone or something's face, you would need a camera.\n\nHypothetically even if we did have the budget to get all the required technology, we would still need to have a camera capturing every movement of student.\n\nDr. Huang claims, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto 6).\n\nIn order for the computer to recognize when a student is becoming confused, the camera must be turned on a filming the student work.\n\nThis footage would then be sent to the software where it would then thoroughly analyze the little movements and twitches of the student's face.\n\nThis itself is a very serious invasion of privacy, not to mention the possibility of the software being hacked and footage being retrieved from the cameras.\n\nThe whole operation of installing and using this software is a law suit waiting to happen.\n\nTechnology is incredible and can be use in a variety of different, effective ways.\n\nDr. Huang's innovation of a computer that can actually detect the facial emotions of a person is absolutely surreal.\n\nIt seems almost futuristic.\n\nWhen this technology is used in an appropriate setting (like a hospital or a court room) the possibilties are endless.\n\nIf used in a school where the software would be recording and taking pictures of students and thoroughly analyzing these images, it is not only a blow to the education budget and to our wallets, but it is a serious invasion of privacy and a lawsuit waiting to happen.\n\nFor use in a school, the negatives heavily outweigh the positives so for now, we should just let our teachers do the lesson modifying.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist road He road snakes trees road The road like snake cause waved hug hill made go fast hard star dark hill stipped know one would ride hill rash would easier ride hill cause people would people help get hurt There also lights ride night cant see going un less put light bike himilet ride easier hill night That light features setting affects cyclist going hill know one help need help get", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Owing to the advancement of technology, more and more educational institutuions are offering online courses. As a result, students are given additional freedom in different aspects. In this essay, I will elaborate on why I believe that this is a positive development and outline main benefits.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the opportunity to attend lectures on the internet platforms istead of inperosn, contributes to a solution of the main struggle of nearly every student, financial strain. Namely, having classes on campus is followed by few costs which can be easily avoided by simply staying at home, including all transportation fees and expenses of eating out for instance. This may seem insignificant, but when compounded, it usually cause headaches to both, pupils and families. Hence, without a need to visit a university, student might save a considerable sum of money on a yearly basis. \r\n\r\nMoreover, attending educational institution is frequently highly time consuming, especially for the learners who live further away. Not only the transportation can take you a lot of time but it leaves you nearly none freedom for the time management. In other words, opportunity to organise your day to a little detail, including meal breaks, lecture time or leisure activities, leads to higher productivity and consequently more free time. Therefore, the less strict the time-table is, the more enjoyable the individual will find studying.\r\n\r\nIn conlusion, I am of the opinion that off campus education is strongly advantageous and thus the positive development. Hopefully, more universities will offer such programmes in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, society places pressure on individuals to have a good looking. Therefore, many spend a large amount of money on cosmetic purposes to make themselves look young. However, I am convinced that this is a detrimental trend.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are many possible causes resulting in adults wanting to look younger. Firstly, the main reason is that advertisements from cosmetic companies, using young models as presenters, mislead people's thoughts about the fact that beauty means youth. For example, individuals tend to buy skincare products after young celebrities hoping that their skin will be healthy like those influencers despite the fact that those influencers are so much younger than them. Secondly, another reason is that people love to be admired by others for their beauty. It is a fact that when getting older individuals tend to feel insecure with their appearance, so many decide to buy costly cosmetic products or even undergo plastic surgery to look younger. \r\n\r\nPersonally, I believe that the increasing demand of adults wanting to look young is a negative movement, as this can be harmful to their health, both physically and mentally. For instance, there was always news about people passing away from undergoing unnecessary plastic surgery. Moreover, this has a negative effect on anyone who experiences their ages naturally, as they might lose their self-confidence when comparing themselves with others. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the trend of people wanting to have a youthful appearance is potentially caused by the influence of advertisements and the individuals’ need to be praised, I am of the opinion that this is undesirable progress, especially in terms of damaging people’s physical and mental health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During my life i have watched meny presidental elections on my telivision. To me the Electoral College on papper should work, Should being the key word. As I read the paragraphes on both why the Electoral College work and does not work I have decides the side with not haveing the Electoral College.\n\nHistorical evidence and evidence from this paragraph piont to not haveing a Electoral College. One reason for this was when Al Gore lost the presedency but won the populure vote nation wide as stated in Source 2. Anouther piont is that if the people have so munch power over who is voted to be presedent then how do we have a presedent that the people did not want the president but the person is still elected, its an outrage! One example of how the Electoral College chould be a distaster waiting to happen is that rthe votes are tied which may seem not likey at forstn glance but say if the votes are tied the presedency is thrown into the House of Representatives which lets face it, in the end the desision will not be approved by the people and the people will then barly have a say on who gets to be presedent or not. Another thing is the Electoral College can also be vary bisest towrdes one party or the other. This is evident because if a certine party got more electors than another party which whould led to a canedat from one party have more support then another.\n\nSource 3 talks about how sure thats its posssable for their to be a tie in the Electoral College but its unlikey supports what im trying the say in my earlyer Paragraph, that even though a tie is unlikey it is still possible to happen the chance is still their. This paragraph also says the everyone is a president but if that is the case then why dose the poeple that \"we\" vote for the eclectoral College help vote for the presedent insted vote for the other canadate is an atrosidy on its own. The winner-take-all system is one that only afects the swing states because if thoughs states have already voted then the staes the already votes whould be for not because the numbers for who gets voted whould be already in favor of one state or another. The fact the larger states have a bigger say in who gets voted on is not fair. the is becuase if all the big states vote for someone and about 1/4 of the smaller states vote on one end of the scale and the other states vote towrdes the other end of the scale then the ballence whould be off and one side would overpower the other side by fact of shear numbers of votes compared to the other side.\n\nAfter reading over my responce and the evidence that I have profided form the paragraph hear I have with great pride that i have argued my point across to you that the Electoral College in papper is good but in reality is only a crumbleing castle waiting to fall into the tiny bites and pieces that it should be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative ideas of driverless cars. Some say that driverless cars will be the future to public transportation, but others think that dirverless cars should be illegal even to test on roads. The development of driverless cars should be illegal.\n\nGoogle has had cars that could drive indepently but under very specific conditions. Google's driverless cars are not truely driverless. These cars still require a driver to navigate in and out of driveways and if there is complications in traffic such as contructions sites. The driver must stay alert at all time is complications are ahead of them.\n\nFor some smart cars there must be electrical cables sending signals to the car. But without the opition of smarter roads manufacturers how will the car sense what is ahead? The manufactors would have to install more motion sensors, which requires more money and time that people do not have. Humans are far better off to control the car, rather the car control them.\n\nThe driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. Lawmakers know the right way to get the alert the drivers if something is happening ahead. Most traffic laws are written with the conclusion that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. For most states it has been illegal to even test ccomputer-driven cars.\n\nThough some people believe that driverless cars should be legal to develop and drive.Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions that the driverless cars will be the future of public transportation. The use of driverless cars can decrease the use of gasoline and can be less harmful to the community. If driverless cars become popular there will be less accidents. Yet the people would still have to navigate the cars into or out of driveways and through construction sites.\n\nThe author of this article presents the reader with a positive and a negative aspects of driverless cars. some people believe is a great idea to develop these cars, But technology always has a down fall to it, if someone is injured by the driverless car who is to blame.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is hard to imagine car-free or car limiting cities, but it could happen in the near future. Many people like owning and driving cars. However, cars are causing major problems in some areas of the world, so we could see less cars in the future.\n\nOne of the biggest issues that cars cause is the carbon emissions that they release. In America, the second largest source of emissions are from cars (Source 4). This doesnt' seem like an issue to Americans, but in places like Beijing, China, which is one of the most polluted cities in the world (Source 2), emissions are very harmful. Citizens of Beijing have to wear mask when they walk around the city so that they don't get sick or poisoned from the carbon emissions. Even a 1st world country, like France, had carbon emissions that rivaled Beijing(Source 2). So as you can see, the emissions that cars give off could become a more serious issue in America, especially if you live in a place like New York City. If more cities become less congested, they will be much safer.\n\nSpeaking of New York City, cars are already a big issue. If you have been to New York City, you should know that the streets are so congested with traffic that it is faster to walk or ride a bike to get around the city. Not only are the streets congested, the air is very polluted from the emissions given off by cars. However, in Vauban, Germany, residents are giving up their cars for streets that are mostly \"car-free\" (Source 1). Few residents own cars and that means that the streets are quiet and clear and greenhouse emission have drastically decreased. Residents say that they are happier without cars and eaverything they need is within walking distance (Source 1). This could quite possibly be what happens to many cities and suburbs in the near future.\n\nThe last thing that I would like to fill you in on is that car ownership in America has been steadily declining. Research has shown that the number of young peole driving has decreased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009 (Source 4). Because of this, many people use Public Transport to get where they need to go. This is likely due to the fact that many Americans don't have the money to buy cars, so they don't make it a priority (Source 4). Also, young people feel less inclined to drive because they can connect with their friends through the internet (Source 4).\n\nBy no means am I saying that you should not own a car, I'm am just explaining to you that a car-limited future is looking more and more possible. In many ways it could be very beneficial, but it still has a long way to go before I can see it becoming reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I as a highschool student disagree with the idea of putting emotional facial recignition in school. Us as a society already have lost a grip on society when it comes to technology. Our youth can't even have a true conversation face to face and struggle expressing emotion or creativity due to technology growth. I think we should have less technology and teach or youth how to ask when they want something, if there bored or confused then they should express that on there own not have a machine do it for them. We should teach our youth the confidence in being able to express feelings not make it easier for our social to be wiped away with this facial recigniton. We already rely on our basic tecnology such as cellphones, and computers to get homework done, cheat, solve the most basic math equations, and as I expressed before take away our ability to be social with our peers. With this facial recignition it will most likely be avaible to most people so in that will might lose almost all social activity in the future if we keep relying on technology to do it all. Instead lets make your be proud and confident in say they don't understand, lets make them understand that theres more then a screen, more then what we type and to see what is around us. This is what i feel is best for our youth. A life without any smart technology at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nHave you ever thought on keeping the Electoral Vote or change it by popular vote for the president of the United States? I think you have. Well, we know what Electoral Vote is, the founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. On my opinion the Electoral Vote should be changed in order for people to vote for the president they want.\n\nTo begin with, the Electoral vote has a job to do. For example,if someone wants to run for president and the electoral vote has no voice in the selection there is a probability that the person doesn't get a change to talk to the people. As stated on\n\n(Source 3)\n\n\"..... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors.\" This means that we the people have no right on electing the president. Every vote for a president it first goes through the Electoral Vote hands and then they decide whether or not to set him as a president.\n\nMoreover, the Electoral Vote is like the king of a country, it decides the president and its votes. In the Constitution there is an amendment that says evryone is equal . however in this except from\n\n(Source 3)\n\nsays otherwise, \" So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaing than small states does...\" The founding father were part of the Constitution but also part of the Electoral Vote, which have been taken that amendment way too far.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral Vote is been taking evrything to their power. They should be removed from electing presidents. They are going to be", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear computer co computers negative effect Why would go outside could play life like games I lthink games th removed people could enjoy great things life If people nt day people would pay attention way re destroying nature", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting durables able dock Some obstacles nt caused building self nature took part due forceful winds height feet hard pilots dirigibles steer ship close enough tie This situation occurred dirigible Los Angeles fearing wind would blow ship onto Sharp edges buildings area Witch would cause shell get punctured leading disaster captain failed attempt reach building december Another obstacle builders faced existing law airships flying low urban areas witch would put civilians street risk Another obstacle large enough dirible would put stress buildings frame", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view is that other people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. One reason is because you get to go to different places. Another reason is because Luke was already for this because he worked on a farm with Katie.\n\nYou get to go to different places like Greece, and by time he got to Greece he was 18 years old that meant that he could draft for military service. Then he could see Europe and China. They crossed the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Caring for the animals during the crossing kept luke busy. They had to feed and water them two to three times a day. The stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nLuke was already for this because he worked on a farm with aunt Katie's farm as a boy had perpared Luke for hard work but not the dangers at the sea. He had different jobs each time. The second time he was a watchman. And his job was to check the animals every hour.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke. It had opened the world to him. But he was greatful for the opportunity. It made him more aware of of people of other countries and their needs. And the awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nThat is why Luke's point of view for people to participate in the Seagoing Cow boys. And I think that it would be good for people to do what he did that way you get to go to different places that you may of not been to before. And that way you get to see what it's like on the sea taking care of all the animals and all of the jobs that you have to do.\n\nIt would be cool if people would do what Luke did that way you get a learning time where you get to see what it was like for Luke and do what he did I think that it would be cool I we did that. And If we did what he did I think that it would be fun takeing care of the animals and on a sea ride and going to different places that are in different countries to see what there life is like and how they eat and things like that would be cool.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The\" \"Face\" may look like it's a human face but it's not. Anything can make anything look drastic or cool. But there is no way that it could be a human inside of Mars. It's way to sketchy for it to be like that. So I'm gonna go ahead and tell you why I think this is why I don't think it is a human at all.\n\nThe face structure hasn't changed any of those pictures. If it was human, in a couple of months or years (maybe), your body becomes rotton and turn into nun but bones. If it was human, then it would have body parts along side with it. There's no body parts near it except rocks and holes. Besides, the picture look like it was taking from a pretty far distance for the head is bigger then that boulder next to it.\n\nThe fact that I know that it's not a face, notice how by years go by, the face starts looking like an sand temple. The thing with it is that on the top of it, it looks like another face on it, like a rebuilded electronic robot. But, when 2001 came by, it started looking like an a map or a super hard shell. All of these things that were on Mars looks different by the years. Now, in 2016, I bet it looks like a guided map to wear it started to wear it landed at.\n\nThere's no doubt that this is just some random structure because there were no oxygen, nor water, on mars, in 1976. It's pretty much impossible to live there unless, your from NASA. Then again, there still are rumors about alien's existing. So what if there was a alien who killed an human and left it there? If you notice now, the structure of the \"Face\", how it fades away, it starts looking like an cracked shell.\n\nI want to believe that there is life on Mars, but the thing is that Mars \"probably\" have alien's there. As no one has thought about it, alien's could be legit. Just because we see a face on Mars means one thing, but the fact that it's whole entire bottom half of it's neck-to-bottom part is gone. Just because it changed up doesn't mean,\"Oh, it must have cleared up since it's been there for a while\". I doubt that because, no human being can walk on Mars with no protection on that can keep him/her alive. If your going to Mars, make sure you need a quite bit of protection. But, if you actually do see an alien, just run, because it's best staying alive instead of wind up dead in the middle of no were on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Forida senator, I argue to remove the Electoral College and replace it by changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. Voting is not fair to the people because they can't vote for the President, only for the state electors, and even if the candidate that won the most popular votes, may not be elected. Also, the winner-takes-all system is not fair to voters because the candidates don't spend time in states they cannot win in or small states and mostly in swing states.\n\n\"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" The passage stated in paragraph 10. Voting has changed over many years, but I think that people should be able to vote for the President and have that candidate win the election if they get the magority of popular votes. If the people want to have that candidate as the President, so be it. Although the Electoral College may help by not having a tied election and have a \"Certainty of Outcome\", but it should be what the people want and vote for. In my opinion, it would be better to not feel like you're putting in a vote that isn't what you wanted. The vote from the people go to state electors for them to choose and that is not truely fair to the people.\n\nThe candidates should spend time in all states to try to get their vote instead of the winner-takes-all system; therefore, it should be removed. There are people in the state that have voted for that candidate but they don't go to the state because they only focus on the swing states. I understand that they do go there to try to win the election and become president, but they should at least spend some amount of time in other states. \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\" As stated in the passage in paragraph 13.\n\nSo overall, the electoral college should be replaced by having the popular vote be the decider of who gets to be president. It's fair to the people and to the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days many people believe that children can actually benefit by spending time on television, video and computer games which are products of technological advancement. In my opinion, such games in the virtual world has limited utility with respect to development of children.\nOn the one hand, there are newer inventions in the gaming arena that has led to the development of very creative and complex video games to which many children are hooked day in and day out. This helps our younger generation’s brain development and in becoming competitive, in some cases learning about actual games. For example, there are games like cricket, tennis where children gain knowledge about real world games and then there are visual graphic games where they learn how to survive or even save planet! \nOn the other hand, there is nothing like playing actual games out in the open with other tiny tots. There kids get to interact with other kids, learn and experience human emotions, make new friends and indulge in physical sports. This helps one in becoming fit physically and developing stamina that will hold them in good stead in future. Some kids actually find their passion in particular sports during this phase and go onto become successful in it in future. For example, cricketing world might not have seen a Tendulkar had it not been for his early introduction to Cricket in his early years.\nTo summarize, a bit of time spent on virtual games isn’t really harmful but there is no substitute for a child’s growth and development than actual physical games. Due to academics and school leading paucity of time, one can spend meaningful time on only one the two. I would prefer kids spending more time in playing games out in the open.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author did a great job to explain \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" They said its dngerous because of the sulfuric acid and the carbon dioxide clouds. According to the article it is impossible to land a space craft, because it won't survive. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanks venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's Atmosphere. my thesis statement was it is challangeing until you start.\n\nThe reason i said that was that NASA knew it was going to be interesting and difficult to explore becuase of how the atmosphere is built. They kept giving example of how diffecult it would be to send a rover to Venus. \"but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable or melting tin\" There just saying its gonna be harder than whet it looks like.\n\nin conclusion it is going to be a tidious, challenging and interesting work to get a rover to Venus. In the article it said it was gonna be dangerous but they should keep exploring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that the face came from aliens while others believe that its just the part of a land. I believe that it is just a part of the land that the planet has formed over time. When we take a look at the pictures we see a face. The pictures that were taken were in diferent years. The first picture that was taken was in 1976, it is a little blurry but it shows a face.\n\nThe second picture that was taken was in 1998, the picture shows a face but the face looks like it is sinking into the ground.\n\nLast but not least the third picture was taken in 2001, this picture dosen't really show a face. The third picture that was taken looks like a rock, the face is no longer there to show. Alot of things change over time and the face is one thing that has definitly change. Once something has changed it's more than likely to never be the same again.\n\nIn paragraph 10 it says that on April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the face in the field of view. The team captured an extordinary photo. They also said that each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\n\nThe picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. Like i said people can believe what they want. If they believe it was aliens then they can believe that, but if they believe that it is just landforms then they can believe that too. We can't control what people think or anything cause they can think what they want.\n\nI still think that it is just part of the land that the planet has formed. I think this because the face looks different in every photo. I mean yes there are things that look like other things in this universe but after time they start to change. Things are not always as they seem and thats my opinion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traffic is an increasing problem nowadays, in many countries and towns around the globe. That is caused for two main reasons that I am going to explain in this essay and also give some solutions.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the main reason for this situation is the rising population living in the world. Every day the amount of earth's population is dramatically growing, especially, with the constant evolution in the field of medicine. Because of that people's life expectancy is rising and there is always a need for new houses and roads to be built, since more and more people are using cars to move around. \r\n\r\nMoreover, with economic development someone could be more easily able to afford a car, which may be more convenient for them to get to their work instead of using a bus. \r\n\r\nTo solve this problem the governments should promote and develop more public transportation, since in that way more people can avoid using the roads in their own vehicles. For example, the underground and overground trains are a very sufficient way to complete many crowd's needs to move around instead of taking a bus or a car. Furthermore, the trains have their own railways and during their stops they don't interfere with the street.\r\n\r\nIn addition, one other action is to upgrade the existing roads so that more means of transport can be used in the same driveway. For instance, creating more lanes is a smart plan to lower traffic.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is a political decision to educate nation in order to change habits and needs a solid political will to create a better world for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"\n\nThis program has been a very good experiance, ''luke has said.\n\nI got to learn how to feed the animals and keep watch.\n\nIt? even better since Don is with me. I think that this Seagoing Cowboy is a great program. Since this is such a great progam I should convince other people that they should join. There are many reasons why.\n\nPeople should join us. People should join the\n\nSeagoing Cowboys. The first reason why is that there could be more people feeding the animals,water them two or three times a day. They could make sure thet there was hay for the animals. Also the people can be a watchmen or two. The people could also be night watchman.\n\nThey could just help others. Some people could go on an other ship and do other jobs there. They can have some animals in a pen. They can have a person to care for them. They could have the same jobs on the first ship but be on another ship so they can deliver the animals and get more done and be able to deliver them at the same rate.\n\n\"If I asked more people to come and help it would be a huge opportuinity for them to take. they would get the experiance to serve the ship and do what has to be done,\" said Luke. Everyone who took the chance or job would be a huge help. We could have many ships go out. They could get the job done.\n\nSo explorers, if you would like to have an adventure this is the job you may want to try. People will realize or they will be aware of people in their countries and their needs. As a group effort people make a difference. This job would be good for you. This job isn't all about hard work. There are some fun things too. You would get to meet other people as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear To begin I understand people nt like computers used If computers bad nt used I see also bring good bad These points computer wellfare bring sourses interaction people computers going advance time Even though people think overused still use So even I use computer lot could used good First foremost computers get sources online ca nt found books Their search engines find topics Then find source info could skipped They show side story nt say book projects used go library home step nt considering For instance people lot time research Furthermore people interact friends computer They talk send pictures play games For example play xbox I talk friends lot time Even video game fun quoted I computer friends work This shows even large important still use work people say using computer like learning ride bike My mom told story met dad fixed computer job So I parents computer None less computers begining improve So people reason computer This advancement going advance wo nt way stop thus people chance stopping outbreak computers Then try stop computers eat brain We know garbage To conclude I implore try change habits others I people want use computer I say sources friends advanement", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not safe they are not safe because the car is driving it's self, but a human still has to be holding the wheel. There could be more accidents like this then normal. People are not going to be able to drive if it comes to the point where all cars are driverless some people would agree, and some would disagree like in this story. The cars can only handle driving functions up to 25mph how it says in paragrapgh seven. Some states also dont like the fact that there are driverless cars.\n\nIn some of the states it is illegal to do a computer test on the cars this is stated in paragraph nine. Some of the cars have been driverless since 2009, but not all the way. If there's an accident it would be the technology, technology is always not correct. This is not a good idea some of the people would get bored how Dr. Werner Huber said.\n\nDriverless cars would change the world how it's stated in the first paragraph. Why drive then? Why not ride a taxi, bus, or train instead of having a car that you can not drive. They should not make every car this way just some, and leave the rest how they are. That way there won't be arguments with other people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author makes some very good points in both the positive and negative aspects.\n\nIn my opinion, I think that it would not be a good idea to have a driverless car. A reason for this answer is because we cannot let technology take over our lives. We have been getting lazier over the years and we have technology running our lives. Yes, there are some great things about a driverless car like having vibrating seats when you are about to hit something or how we get notified when we need to do the driving. It's all great until we end up sitting back and relaxing to let things do our job. We need some control in our lives, not some technology running our lives for us. One other reason that I dont like the idea of driverless cars is that I'm a first time legal driver and I've been waiting for a long time to be able to drive. But if we end up with driverless cars all around, then anyone who's had their hopes set on learning how to drive, then they wont be able to do that anymore. Driverless cars take the fun out of doing that. They say in the article that \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" They say this and then they describe how they can make driverless cars fun. Some of the ways they named is by bringing in-car entertainment and all. But I feel like that would just be a destraction because if we get caught up in all the entertainment, and for some reason like manufacturing messed up he warning system or we couldn't hear the warning system, then we could potentially wreck or even worse, die. The article does talk about how they want it to be safe and all, but how can they be safe? Its all electronic and every electronic ends up failing at some point.\n\nHonestly, I'd rather not have driverless cars in the future, but if it ends up happening, I'll probably not use one unless I have to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One I patient waiting game arive I waited years come finele came I started like eany kept time I I sat froant porch rest never came I went The next I came I checked mail empty I slamped coach watched tv I looked front packeg game s story patients", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I would say to a person who thinks that the face on Mars was created by aliens is this , for one we have never found any living things besides bateria and organisims on another plant. The reason why I say this is because NASA has no proof besides what they think is a face created by aliens on Mars. I have watched many shows about space and other shows like Brian Games. Brian Games had a show about faces, and it said that you can see an object and make it look human or make it look like a face, such as a specific flower that might look like a face. This is what those scientists are doing in this very situation. They are mistaking a natural made land form on Mars as an alien build face. There are many ways this landform could have been made. It could have been made by wind and rocks blowing across what you could say is a landscape. As you can see from the landform is that it has faided away over time and now looks like a lump of sand, which wouldn't you think if aliens made that they would fix it up and make it look like a face again? So this is my argument on why I believe that this is just a natural made landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author did a very good job on writing this article he made me imagine the all the heat venus has on it and the clouds with acid in them like in paragraph 3. He did a good job on describing the stars and Venus saying its the brightest star. He gives good ifermation about why we cant explore it and research about it.There is good ifermation about nasa and doing research about Venus like in paragraph five he says that NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to study venus by hovering above the planet like planes do when theres a storm. Does a good job on telling the audience what NASA is working on for example in paragraph 7 he tells us that they cant put a regular elecronic device they will melt so NASA wants to get an old computer from ww2 and engineer it to handle Venus's atmosphere and conditions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alright over all \"The challeng of Exporing Venus\" was a intresting article to read about but I think a couple things could have been done better. for expamle, the first paragraph was useless information that you wouldn't need to know at all and the 2nd Paragraph with the facts on Mars. Other than that I think the author of this article did a pretty good job at supporting his ideas that it's indeed a challenge to vist Venus but the insight will be priceless.\n\nSo the first paragraph is useless information that doesn't really get the idea across at all. The fact of that they started off with,\" Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\"... is a bad way to start off with because as a person with basic knowings of Space related stuff I have never came acrossed this name. It could misleading to some to start off to say by the way Venus is sometimes called \"Evening Star\" because it now seems like we are going through nicknames of plants instead of saying that we should explore Venus and the challenge behind that. I would take out the whole first paragraph and use the begennings of the 2nd paragraph to make an introduction. For the 2nd paragraph the stuff about Mars I don't want to hear, this should be about Venus, so take that out and you would be gold.\n\nAlright, now that I got the bad stuff out of the way on to the good stuff. after you get through the the 1st paragraph and the begenning parts of the 2nd paragraph, you then find out the main idea behind this article which is that we should try to find out more about Venus although the challenge behind it. So I also like that it did some background on past mission to Venus which lead in the the challege behind exploring Venus which was done well might I add. After that it gives a possible way of getting past this challege and give insight about that and then it ended off with recapping on the main idea of the article.\n\nSo as I said before this was overall a very interesting article to read and I can say that I did learn some new things. Although there was a bad start to this article , I would say that the author of this article did a good job with supporting his ideas with background to the topic, the challenge that we face and how over come that challenge was all done well. If I had to rate how well this author did with this article out of ten I would give them a eight and a half.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test Saeng nt want give yet In story Saeng mumbled I mean like kind atat She found still shaky say words home Saeng still upset misses home Vietnam When Saeng puts hibiscus ground feels alive Saeng wants feel home United States Saeng nt going give driving try harder harder pass test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Companies usually select talents through interviews, whereas it is regarded by some people that there could be some better methods to substitute interviews. From my perspective, I only partly concur with this opinion.\n\nThe interview definitely has its drawbacks. To begin with, the interviewing period usually lasts too short to thoroughly examine one's technical skills. Consequently, companies are likely to hire those who are not actually equipped with the basic skills that they demand. However, this issue can be resolved by holding an examination with ease. That is to say, the interview is literally not the only one to select employees.\n\nNonetheless, it cannot be totally replaced yet due to the fact that interviews play an indispensable role in employment. Firstly, the Interview is to some extent the most efficient method to test a candidate synthetically. For instance, an interview tends to inspect not only a person's basic technical skills but also his capability of enduring pressure, which can be vital in his future career path. Furthermore, most international corporations have implemented the method of holding interviews several times to test one's general abilities. Although a single interview may let some unqualified candidates pass successfully, the multiple tests won't neglect those employees.\n\nIn conclusion, Even though there are shortcomings in interviews, which means it may fail to examine the candidates' authentic abilities. However, this issue can be tackled by mixing different forms of tests or increasing the number of interviews.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea pretty clearly about studying Venus is a worthy pursuit dispite the dangers.He gose on talk about how Venus is the \"twin\" to earth.He also talks about the make up of Venus's thick atmoshpere is made up of.The author also talkes about if the Venus is our sister planet why is it so inhospitable.Those are just some of the ideas/pieces of evidence he had to support his claim.I will go into more detail on how they support his claim.\n\nThe authors choice to bring up how Venus is our \"twin\"(planet) is one of his main points i would say it support his claim but also counters it.He talks about how occasionally Venus being the second planet in our solar system is closer to earth then mars.That quote is very intersting because that gives more reason on why we need to explore more about Venus.He gose on to talk about how we have sent numerous unmanned spacecrafts to Venus But he also states how each spacecraft they sent never even touched the surface of Venus.That alone is already a pretty big diciding factor on if we should send humans to Venus.\n\nAnother thing that the author also brings up the make up of the planet this topic provides more insight into Venus.Not only does he talk about the atmosphere being made up of 97% carbon dioxide(CO2) he also talkes about the surface temperatures on the Planet.The surface temerature of Venus is 800 degrees Fahrenheit that is way higher then anything on earth.Even the Atmospheric pressure is high at 90 times greater then what we experience on earth.He does say how these conditions are far more extreme then anything a human encounter on earth.Very solid evidence on that paragraph he states a lot of thing that could help his claim by showing we would have to work with in order to even get close to the surface of Venus.\n\nThe last point that i will be addressing is how if Venus is our sister planet to Earth why is it so inhospitable.He states how astronomers are facunated by Venus because is may well have once looked like earth.He goes one to say that it was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.That right there could be enough to support his claim it gives more reason on why it would be good to study Venus despite the dangers.This part of his evidence is really cricial because this give most of the support on why they should study Venus.\n\nOverall all his points really support is claim that suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents.alothugh they were pretty good at supporting his claim i would say that there is only one that is more imortant then the others.The author should consider giving more strong pieces of evidence if he does this agian i would really help his claim alot more.If i were NASA or another space orgainazation i dont think that this woudl be a sutible article for me to be conviced that studying Venus would be good despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers are becoming more similar to humans over time, as new technologies are developed. One such technology allows a computer to recognize a person's emotions based on the movement of muscles in their face. Some say this technology can be used in the classroom to slow down a lesson for a confused student, or make it more interesting for a bored one. However, the truth is that while this technology certainly has its merits, it may not be reliable in the classroom because it cannot accurately determine a person's emotions, understand their cause, or properly respond to them.\n\nAlthough fairly accurate at times, this software that detects emotions may not be always accurate. For example, according to the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the software calculates that the woman in the famous painting \"Mona Lisa\" is \"2 percent angry.\" This is likely untrue, and Leonardo da Vinci probably never intended this. She does not appear angry, and if anything, da Vinci simply could not recognize facial expressions well enough to accurately depict the emotions that he intended the subject of the painting to have. Additionally, the article states that there are six basic emotions the software can detect: happiness, sadness, anger, fear, disgust, and surprise. These emotions are useful, but this also means the computer cannot detect emotions like guilt and confusion. These are very important emotions in the classroom, and the computer must be able to detect if a student cheats on a test or does not understand a concept. The software is very limited in detecting emotions, and this could lead to adverse consequenses.\n\nSometimes, not only are a person's emotions unclear, but the cause of a person's emotions may not be obvious given the current context, because people often live in the past. A student may appear to be confused, but only because the student does not understand a joke they heard before the lesson. The article says that the computer could recognize this confusion and modify the lesson, despite the fact that the student's confusion has nothing to do with the lesson in the first place. Also, if a student does not understand a certain part of the lesson material, the computer will not be able to detect the exact part; the student will be confused no matter what part it is. The computer will be forced to explain and clarify everything, when the student may only need a small part clarified. In a similar way, the student may still not understand the material afterwards, but the computer cannot ask the student why this is so, because it only detects the student's confusion.\n\nWhile detecting emotions and their causes are important in the classroom, the most important thing is responding to them appropriately. For example, if a student is feeling sad, this will likely affect their retention of the material being taught. However, the computer likely cannot alleviate or eradicate this sadness, because it is most likely caused by an outside source. The computer may try to comfort the student, but the student will know that the computer does not actually feel any emotions and will not be comforted whatsoever. Additionally, the student may feel bored, but the computer may not be able to change this if the student feels that the material being taught is boring, because the computer has no choice but to teach this material to the student. As a result, even if the computer can detect a student's emotions, it may not be able to do much about them.\n\nNo matter how useful this emotion-reading software is, it should not be used in the classroom. It may falsely detect an emotion and change the lesson when unnecessary. It could also assume the wrong cause for an emotion, leading it to make a lesson longer or more thorough when the student understands it already. Additionally, the computer may detect emotions well, but it may not be able to fix them or change them, making the software pointless. Technology may have great benefits, but detecting emotions in the classroom is not one of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One I patient I waiting sister law tell brother tell us could come hospital room see brand new baby My father mother waiting sister bother I waiting room lobby At time probably hour half waiting I guess I could say I patient Also ten fifteen minutes I would get walk around I shaky nervous jumpy But probably nt help I drank three cans pepsi right rushed time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facs bieng Facial Acting Coding System is an invention that is really helpful to many people i think that it can help people in so many ways. alot of time people can be hiding and emotion and not show it but it could be helpful for something to tell what they are feeling so that they can either help them or feel that same emotion that they are feeling. Sometimes humans can show many emtions and we might not know whet they are for example there ar ethe simple emtions such is happy, excited, sad, anger, but then there are other emmtions where it might be mixed like happy but sad or angry and sad and sometimes emtions we might not even know what they are and that when the Facs comes in to see what emtion someone might be feeling. There can also be a hiddin emtion within someone when someone might seem happy they might show it on the outside but in the inside they are probly feeling another emotion. One way Facs can be very helpful is by knowing wether that person is going thru some stuff for example a person could be thinking about commiting suicide but nobody would know until their facial expression shows that and it might not be a sad facial expression it could be a diffrent one but with the Facs it would be able to tell someone right away what emotion they are feeling. In conclusion i think that this is a very smart thing to to to be able to recognize or scan somones face to reveal their facial expression is a fenominal idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why should you join 'Seagoing Cowboys' because you get to cross the Alantic Ocean 16 times! Not just that only, you get to take care horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Just like real cowboys, instead you get to be riding a ship while taking care of the animals.\n\nAlso, as a Seagoing Cowboy you don't just take care of animals, you can also help people that needs help. By doing their jobs for them. When cowbys are done putting animals that had been unloaded they get to do their fun games, like playing baseball and vollyball games!\n\nWhen you get served as night watchman you get check on all the animals every hour but have to watch out where your going because you might slip or fall down during night time. You have to be calm and wait because it takes long days to arrive the place they have to go. Crossing Atlanic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States takes 2 weeks and a month to get to China.\n\nFor traveling you get to see new places you never seen before! Like Luke seen the side of Europe and China! In China you get to see the castle in Crete and marveld at the Panama Canal!\n\nI think being a 'Seagoing Cowboy' is fun when getting do to these things.Visiting new places, taking care of animals, different jobs for 'Seagoing Cowboy'. Also helping people in other countries for their needs makes Luke happy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author mood happy Narciso s talk family one little apartment bliuding thank got", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that aliens created the Face on Mars. Do you belive that to? I think that The Face on Mars is a natural landform here is why. \" The caption wrote huge rock formation\" which would most likely mean a natural landform from what N.A.S.A. stated when they unveiled the photo of the rock formation. Also has not found any evidence of life on Mars to this day.\n\nN.A.S.A. had also said \"That if there were objects in this picture like airplanes, on the ground or Egyptian-style pyraminds or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" Also in the pictures that are in the article ther are no signs of any homes or camps or signs of life.\n\nThis also proves the theory that it is a landform \"what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West which would mean that this is somthing similar to what we have seen on earth before. The Jet Propulsion Lab said \" Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa.\n\nAlso if this was something created by aliens or an ancient civilization wouldn't it be deteroryating over time. From the rearch that NASA has done it seems that it has not changed at all over the past 25 years. So do you belive that aliens created The Face on Mars? I don't but mabye you do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From Laughter first day school last year I walked doors school hoping I would make friend two I sure would happen I hoped best I entered first class sat table unknown faces I wanted say something afraid reactions The teacher made us play couple games introduce Those nt really help Everybody tense awkward I wanted already make friends For rest day classes like Everybody tense awkward like something keeping us quiet Not knowing anybody nt help situation bit That first day The second day I walk school doors determined make friends I thought jokes I could say interesting thing I could share sounded like stupid ideas I walk humanities sat table friendly looking girl The teacher told us introduce students table sitting For minute silent wanted introduce bad I could nt stand silence longer I looked back pack grab pencil I see note mom saying make friends honey great day school I started laughing I thought funny mom actually wrote note stuck back pack It unexpected I felt like child I started laughing I looked I saw girl next laughing I knew I say something I I said names call short Whats name The girl looked smiled said names Then I asked middle school came questions We stared talking exchanged numbers became good friends From laughter would known A year gone still friends We always laugh started talking A days ago I told I felt second day school I told I scared introduce She said felt way nt know either Since I thank mom writing note without I would nt laughed made laugh I would nt made great friend", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to Article,it says that there's this new program that can identiy your emotions.Whether your hiding it deep within you or actually expressing it,the program is still able to identify your feelings.It's also said that this program can really help out in classrooms.Is it really necessary for a computer program to be able to read and identify students' feelings?\n\nYes,I think computers should definitely be able to read students' emotional expressions.Not only that,but overall the program should be used in classrooms as well.This computer program is a huge advancement in technology.It's really cool of just the thought of a computer knowing how you feel,especially when it comes to school work.\n\nSchool Work can be boring sometimes.It's almost to that point where your falling asleep.It really frustating when your half asleep and trying to do work.I know this because it's happened to me before and it's not because I don't get my 8 hours of sleep.When someone is bored, whether they're working or doing something in this case school work,you don't try very hard.You just want to do it and get it over with.Sometimes you end up not doing the school work.When you don't turn your assignments in,it leads to bad grades.I don't think anyone wants bad grades.When something is really interesting, actually take the time to do it and\n\ndo they best can to complete.When your interested\n\nin something,in this case I'm talking about school,you actually learn something and you're able to master that skill being taught.\n\nIn the article,they talk about if the computers from school were to have the program and sees that you're bored or just confused it changes whatever you are doing like an online course into something more your level or mor interesting.I believe that this will help kids so much in their learning.Many kids are shy or afraid to ask questions when they don't understand a topic.When you don't understand something,your not able to do it.There's many kids who want to learn what they're being taught.With this program,that confusion can just go away.\n\nWhen your bored of something you obviously don't want to do it or you just don't try your very best.With this emotional expression program,that can change.It's said that if it sees that your bored,it makes the program more fun.Who wouldn't want to have fun doing schoolwork? it's like having your own human instructor.This will really help kids learn more.This will make them pay attention more.\n\nThis program seems very useful for educational purposes.It modifies whatever you are doing based on your facial expressions.It makes learning for students more easier.Not to mention it will also help teachers with their teaching.This program is very efficient and does't waste any time. This is the holy grail of education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes paragraph Saeng realizes miss old home needs adapt new place Saeng misses old memories homeland A wave loss deep strong stung Saengs eyes swept her But begins realize everything changed things still familiar overhead flock canada geese flew faint honrs clears yes familiar Saeng now When Saeng realizes everything changed gained strength continue new life new country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph Saeng failed test It takes time hibiscus bud It sound like good end plus would want take test snow", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In contemporary society, the primary purpose of schooling has been under heated debate. Many people hold the view that transforming students into good citizens and workers is the fundamental goal of education rather than concentrating on individual betterment. From my perspective, I agree with the given sentiment and this course of the essay will elaborate carefully to provide the reasons for my personal opinion.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, it is likely universal that a good individual should be useful to certain communities. It means that a well-skilled person might not be defined as a good one if those harms or are unsupportive to society. Therefore, schools in which children's perspectives could be changed officially and openly should mainly focus on educating moral lessons and qualifies alongside particular subjects or skills. Being community-minded, for example, seem to be a necessary characteristic which is needed to be taught by school education, especially in fast-paced life in which there is likely sympathy insufficient. In a nutshell, a community could not be prosperous unless every single citizen is dedicated to bigger purposes.\r\n\r\nHowever, it is indicated that generally moral lessons are unlikely the only target of schooling since the development of societies relies significantly on single and personal innovations. specifically, Throughout the countless year of humankind's life, there was numerous innovative inventions and explorations that were undertaken by genius brains that have been changing human life totally and positively such as America's exploration and invention of the internet and computers, or chronic disease treatments. Therefore, alongside the primary goal, seeking and nurturing individual talents should be taken into consideration in order to create a quality workforce for our community. Seeking talent shows, for example, specific courses, and modern facilities should be provided free for children when they are still in school seats.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in spite of individualism development in contemporary society schools should play the main role in educating the young generation to turn out useful and well-educated people in their community. Besides, increasing personal betterment is not likely less crucial, however, it does not seem the major purpose of education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are different opportinuities that desighnated as a volunteer positions to build society by using young population and some peoplehave proposed that It is a good way to empower society without a huge amount of expences to pay to workers , however, it seems they don't want to see the harmfull aspects in a long time ,because, teenagers must familiar with cost of living and economical life as a human ,so, I disagree with the volunteer working for our young part of the society , because , it would growth unawarness of economical issues in their mind ,so ,I will explain in following sentences .\r\n\r\nIn a beginning, benefits of volunteer working are limited to companies and big instituitions that want to grow inn speed and cheep way ,in addition , if these positions have a good designation in higher level of professionist in governments ,it has a huge effect to reduve national budjet for services in community like repairing jobs, health_care services and education ,however, quality have sacrified indteat of quantity to accessibility all layers of population to have a free labour ,and this theory is more famous in Europe and England during early of 1900 ,however, the long outcome of these methods is reached to revolution like we saw in France, so , volunteer jobs might helpful for short time situation nor in a long time ,because, economic principals to manage cost of living as a family ,ust teach to youngesters and unpaid job would give them false confident to handle difficult situation and they have not act as a eminent person in their future life for their family and society ,likewise , even in less amount of money we must use of teenagers for doing in workplace that they got awarness of importance of money in living in the world .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , this idea of unpaid jobs is harmfull for flourishment economic mind of young people and reduce their ability to solve problems that would rise up in future regarding economical status .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"My postion on driverless cars\"Im for it i believe that it good to consider what we can do with todays technolgy,so we can head into the future and become more open with ideas like this one.I also suport the person Google cofounder Sergey Brin I believe if this technolgy it would greatly imacted the world.The new level of technolgy in car could lead to more invation in other nomal day idum also smarter cars mean smarter people we could help reduss the car crash deaths by the human eleral like texting and driving drunk driving or just not paying tasion to the road.The technolgy in the new cars would help save lifes and help the world out by its enfsarment in the trails porting system of the world these smart road system would make everthing beter and help the people who stuck in the old way of thing come into the furter. Also driverless car airnt really driverless some of the cars have special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps control of the car if he or she hold on to the steelingwheel of the car also some smart cars have seat vibraters that would tell the driver they were in danger of backing up into something well reviruseing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You can't always see how a friend is feeling or if they are lying to you about how they feel. This technoogy can Help kids who are always faking their emotions because they don't want people to see that they are upset about something. For some \"tough\" kids, they act as though they are big and bad so that they aren't the one getting picked on.\n\nJust by a simple picture, using this technology can help children not fake their personalities.\n\nIt is unhealty for childen to think that it is okay for them to fake their true feelings. If they never let it out it can cause severe depression causing them to chang their eating and sleeping habits.\n\nAccording to paragraph 7, just by smiling you can make yourself happy. Also, Acording to the Facial Feedback Thory of Emotion, moving your muscles into certain emotions will not only express emtion but produce that same emotion. By using your hands to put a smile on your face and leaving it there will send good feelings through your body.\n\nThis technology will help eveyone who needs this kind of help, as in needing help controlling your emotions. Highschoolers tend to need more emotional support having more responsibility and freedom. Technology has come a long way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humans. One of the many smart species on planet earth. The species that seems to think they can do anything, including going to Venus. Although Venus is highly dangerous with its high temperatures and extreme clouds of carbon dioxide, it is a worthy pursuit that could be a great benefit for the knowledge of anybody living on earth.\n\nThe information that could be gathered is rather incredible. Already this world knows a few features Venus holds, \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" It is so amazing to think that already we have this idea of a planet. With hard work and dedication it could be valuble, to further investigate our sister planet. Even though the conditions the planet are critical, we know the dangers. There is a benefit to the planet, \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" The author knows what to say, because they know that the conditions are harsh. And great reward the sccientists recieve what they would need from this raging planet.\n\nThe value of this planet is not known only because there is not enough strive to make it happen. The \"human curiosity\" is what leads this planet to greatness. Scientist that want this mission, have to be willing to do whatever it takes for knowledge. They have to \"get up close and personal despite the risks.\" Those risks will lead to everything that a scientist could hope for. There is no reason to not believe the author when they say the mission will be worth your while. Only because there is something magnificent about that planet so similar to ours. the author so confidently states, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" They so beautifully say what is needed. Imagaination and the need to innovate, for future greatness, is so important for the challenges ahead. Although this world still has unknown factors, finding out incredible things about Venus could change science, and could change the world itself.\n\nVenus is our sister planet, one of the closest to us. How has our natural kick for curiosity not taken over? Humans always want to know everything. Making it clear, there is no point in just letting this fantastic adventure wait. Danger is always a component in exploring something new, that is why humans are knowledgable and powerful. So scientist should not hold back, they need to bring all their smarts to this adventure, and really make something great. It could result in the most indulging finds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In dream like causes auto pliot cars would be sweet. You could go for a ride and enjoy the ride. you would see more until you reached you destanation, however a\n\nunresponsable driver could deal with some major problems.\n\nFirst off driverless cars could\n\nbe dangerous, Yes it would be nice to sit back and let your transportation do all the work for you, but it could back fire. Example, you may be driving and looking out the side window and if there was a emergancy you might\n\nintercept witch would turn out peachy. So to this you would probly be less foucs on the road. Also with not being foucsed you would have less control of the steering wheel. Then\n\nwith self driven car your car\n\nis probly filled with all kinds of entertanment so again not being foucsed.\n\nAnother thing you could run into some llegal trouble. it is llegal for companies to even test auto pilot cars so what makes you think you could drive one. Oh here is a good one it's not safe, i mean i wouldn't want to be in a something i had 10% control over that smart right. with that if you get an injury who would be to blame? you for not being responsable and foucsed on the road or the manufacturer?\n\nLastly you are not being a responsable driver. letting technology do everything for use we could forget how to do things and we would become a undomanit organism in the food chain. basiclly would be come a even lazier group in sinsiety. Lastly i don't would to cause any injuries or conflicts because i wasn't being resopnsable.\n\nCearly auto pilot cars should be rethinked.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus seems very interesting when thinking about it. All of the beneficial things that we can study and analyze. Studying other planets have always been helpful to mankind and helps people gain insight on our solar system around us. But at the same time exploring these planets are very dangerous too. Not because of animals or humans but because of the harsh living conditions on other planets. So I will tell you why I think exploring Venus is not worth the pursuit of exploring.\n\nMy first reason of why I think Venus is not worth the pursuit is because of the difficulty of exploring Venus. In paragrpah 6 it states that ships orbiting over Venus with lights can't see the ground because of the dense atmosphere. Which makes it hard for scientists because if you can't see anything you can't analyze any data that you get because of Venus's features. But it does state that NASA is trying to find new ways of exploring Venus but it's not as good as hands on exploration. Which is good but most likely not good enough to find out what they want about the planet.\n\nMy second reason of why I think Venus is not worth the exploration is because of Venus's conditions and features. When reading about Venus the conditions are very extreme compared to the conditions on Earth. Such as clouds filled with highly corrosive sulfuric acid or temperatures that average over 800 degrees. Making it the planet with the hottest surface temperature even though Mercury is closer to the sun. Also the atmospheric pressure is great enough to crush an accustomed submarine that would be able to dive into the deepest parts of the ocean and liquifies metals. But having similarities to Earth such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and etc.\n\nSo in conclusion I feel that Venus should not be a planet we heavily invest in and scientists should try other planets before Venus. Because of the harsh conditions that it would have on humans. Because of the difficulty in analyzation. Making Venus a non-reliable source compared to others. So that is why I think that Venus is not worth exploring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author created mood showe true love family home explaining culture family grateful parents He starts going detail culture Rich culinary skills a love cooking passionate cuban musci I adore day builds base mood showing home always filled food arts heritage He goies talk family nothing blood relative explained true family many many cultures came together great solidarily friendship CAPS thanks parents everything moving showing important family friends never forget parents turn simple house home That mood expressed quthor culture family showing gratitude parents giving basis life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is a fast growing resource in the world today and the availability of such is quickly rising. In many schoools, technology is becoming an important aspect of everyday life. Not only does technology enable students to keep up with classwork outside of school and on days they do not attend but it also allows for more flexibility. If the technology that students use everyday had the ability to determine how they felt about certain lessons, then not only would it benefit them but it would benefit teachers as well.\n\nTechnology that can determine someones emotions was once thought to be a thing of the future but now that future is here. Professor Thomas Huang has been able to create a computer algorithm that determines human emotions by scanning their facial expressions. Imagine the possibilities with such software!! The most benefical area in which the computer algorithm could be used in is schools. '\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"' (Huang, Parahgraph 6) Not only would teachers be alerted when students were becoming distracted from their teachings, but they would also be offered suggestions on how to improve the lessons. Software such as the type that Dr. Huang has created could improve test scores across the nation and ease the workload of thousands of teachers. Why not use it?\n\nHence forth, technology that determines human emotions would be largely beneficial and effective for a large portion of the worlds population. Schools would experiance the most postive results from the software seeing as it would be able to adjust lessons to fit students learning curve and it would also reduce teachers workloads by creating lessons to fit students needs. The only negative aspect of Dr. Huangs software would be the cost of installation, but with the positive outcomes that would follow, whatever cost paid would be well worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The first obstacle expanded use New York City lake suitable landing area Because long one thousand feet length four blocks New York CityThe second dirigibles hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable And realized much worst accident could taken place New York located They rethink re plan And another one winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many nations, parents have the freedom and the right to opt any form of schools for their beloved children such as single gender school or co-educational one. However, the dispute about the pros and cons of attending single gender schools has been aroused in recent years. Some people suggest that its demerits will have an adverse influence on children's later life. I personally agree with this statement for several reasons which will be further discussed and elaborated in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, single gender schools limit the interaction between two genders. As the school is the place for children to learn how to form a friendship and respect the difference among individuals. However, without the experience of socializing with the opposite sex, it might be hard for them to blend in the real society in the future. For instance, they will meet and cooperate with the opposite sex at workplace like supervisors or fellow colleagues, lacking the skill of interacting with different gender, they might have the problem of socialization. Consequently, co-educational schools can provide the platform for students to learn how to get along with the different gender.\r\n\r\nBesides that, there is a higher possibility of occurrence on school bullying. Some pupils work well with the peers who are the same gender, while others do not. By example, it is common that a more feminine boy is taunted and intimidated by those assertive students because he looks like a girl or skinny. Similarly, a girl who has less interest in the latest fashion is also easily get bullied in the school. Accordingly, the single sex school is not suited for every kid and the pressure from peers may be stronger than other type of schools.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the restriction of interacting with the opposite gender and the intense stress among peers is the main demerits of the single gender school, and both can harm the minors mentally and physically, even cause the irreparable results. Therefore, I approve the given statement and suggest that parents should be more discretion before sending their children to single sex schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Green favorite colorLaughter indulging part life variety people enjoy enjoy Humor happens infectious The sound roaring laughter far contagious cough sniffle sneeze When laughter shared upon one another binds people together increases happiness intimacy Having pick one million laughter memories I nearly impossible decide every moment I spend opening mouth bursting hahaha joy excitement I try indulge person I spent exact memory happened It many us one enthusiastic times twelve months year I going hosting pool party friends I needed clean happened awfully disgusting year long seasons weather decided bring I nt think would much deal way I would able host party parents permission know well enough I average typical teenage girl probably texts texts day So since I ca nt keep white somewhat sweaty hands phone already feeling happens next If taught I dropped Your absolutely wrong Not surprisingly cleaning pool one hour I finally finished I texted boyfriend telling pool longer green anymore He replied I questioned I sent wrong message wrong person I checked history turns I wrote poop longer green anymore I literally mortified I nt know emotion feel expect later day I decided pretend nt happen anymore So later day pool party started Everyone showed looked weird way usual I ecstatic pumped favorite song favorite singer As everyone showed present bag hand I wondered brought presents nt anybody s birthday casual pool party welcome everyone s favorite season So I asked question best friend told CAPS know nobody s birthday texted us telling us green poop feeling well went buy I petrified honest actually laughing insanely hard So I stood front guest told really happened laughed historically Without exception kept party going I eventually saw boyfriend coming I walked laugh compassion nt mention one word happened Once party became dawn decided bonfire get cozy loved one us friends bond one another You guess happened next began talk happened earlier I honestly say I nt think I laughed hard fifteen years alive Rapidly curfew almost expired day friends left made nickname CAPS funniest part story I never forget friends left boyfriend decided take get burger local also known best hamburgers town As finished eating mother came along baby boy I take seconds life carry make dummy looking face order make jiggle bit little I know baby eaten So imagine happens next green vomit gets I honestly mad embarrassed I laughed hard I could feel abs working tears eyes coming I believe everyone lives special moment desire worship forever It sad embarrassing even comical quality type moment indulge memory So till day I still known CAPS friends doubt I ever forget memory", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The short story Winter Hibiscus written author Minfong Ho ends main character Saeng promising spring geese return winter hibiscus begins bud would retake failed drivers test Mingfong Ho writes story heavy imagery symbolism hibiscus found floral shop represents connection Saeng homeland bittermellon loved Saeng unbearable people represents Saengs hard time connecting people And Saeng budding hibiscus returning geese representative new opportunity pass drivers test better adapt life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced multiple obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Although obstacles fixed early others brought builders attentions later The first obstacle builders encountered modifications needed done building s framework The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation CAPS nine The Empire State Building would able support mooring mast without essential modifications done This process costed extra sixty thousand dollars The second obstacle builders faced even brought building completed The wind factor made nearly impossible able dock dirigibles Even dirigibles tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast CAPS With pedestrians located ground factor made extremely unsafe The final obstacle faced law Under already existing law airships prohibited flying low urban areas Blimps docking mooring mast would violating law The architectures engineers Empire State Building clearly look necessary building mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho I think author ends paragraph shows determined pass When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again This shows determined geese migrate every year flowers always bud every year She keep coming back like geese hibiscus She determined pass test fit sooner later If determined might never pass fit new society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Unmasking the face on Mars.\" Is it created by aliens or not? some may think it's a face created by aliens but we have some evidence to state that the face on Mars is certainly not created by aliens, just another weird formation just like on earth.\n\nThe Face on Mars is not created by aliens beacuse when doing research we were able to find that a rock may have hit and the formation of the rock formed to a face. If it \"were\" that aliens had created that it would be impossible especially it being two miles big, we would've seen the aliens. Just like on earth there are weird looking formations that have us saying if it's even possible for it to be here on earth. The unusual shadows that made it look like Egyptian Pharoahs had us thinking twice but it defintely was a councidence. On April 5, 1998 when Mars Surveyor flew over Cyondia for the first time they found it it was just a natural land form and was no alien monumeant after all.\n\nThere is more evidence to stating that The Face on Mars was not created by aliens than there is stating that aliens did form it thats why we as in Nasa belive The Face on Mars was a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People will always dream of a better future for themselves and that dream of a better future should include driverless cars. The development of the driverless cars should occur because the cars will be a better type of entertainment, will improve the safety of people, and will be very alert.\n\nFirstly, the driverless car development should occur because it is a better type of entertainment for the driver. \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over--something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" This quote supports this because the car's entertainment can be turned off, when necessary, unlike today's telephones. The car makes it safer to be entertained, while driving, because the car knows when it's time for the driver to be responsible.\n\nSecondly, the driverless car development should happen because they are safer than the today's models of the car. \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" This quote supports this because the advancement of technology that provides safety, is beginning to include the cars. The driverless cars are part of the advancement into the future and are very beneficial for people's safety.\n\nWhy should humans trust driverless cars, mindless computers, instead of humans that have always been alert? Humans do perfectly fine by themselves. They should be trusted because driverless cars are actually designed to be more alert to everything and their surroundings, to prevent bad things from happening. Humans are not designed specifically for that. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This quote supports this because it shows that the cars are paying very close attention to all of the details, so that the driver will only have to be alert, when it is necessary.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless cars development should occur because the cars will be a better type of entertainment, will improve the safety of people, and will be very alert. People's safety is the most important thing and the driverless cars are the next step to the improvement of that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship become major topic comes books music movies These censored people nt want young kids read listen watch materials What adults Books music movies taken shelfs libraries censorship fair adults Books rewriten wo nt offevsive language To A classic example Changing offensive language book would totally ruin This book mainly racism whites towards african americans altered readers would nt get sense racism If libraries books censored put shelf censored books adults could still able read Music another peice material censorship gotten hold Offensive language taken songs uncensored cd s sold stores censorship Some adults like original songs original words Libraries carry explicit clean verions cd s suitable kids ones adults listen Movies another peice material censorship taken They rated suitable ages suitable children older rated suitable people older These rating good guidelines parents ones make final decision whether child able watch certain movie Libraries kind movies shelfs If twelve year old kid wants watch rated movie able consint parent guardian Censoship good thing nt need taken extreme If adult wants read censored book still able read local libary young kid wants watch rated movie able consint parent guardian", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are two different views about the effect of computer games on children. While some assert that video games have a bad influence on young boys and girls, others argue that it would be beneficial for them in many ways. Both groups provide compelling reasons to justify their assertion which will be elaborated on in this essay.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a group of people believe that playing computer games is an absolute waste of time. That is, playing computer games deters children from spending time on activities which are essential for their well-being in the future. For example, children can learn a foreign language, which will be helpful for them to find a better job when they become adults. Another reason for opposing video games is that they change teenagers' behaviour in a bad way. A good illustration of this is violent video games; children who play video games containing violent scenes tend to be aggressive at school.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others believe that the benefits of computer games cannot be neglected. One benefit of these games is helping children nurture their problem-solving abilities. Designed strategically, most video games encourage children to use their cognitive capabilities, so they can think better and act more wisely in real-life problems. For instance, a child who plays strategic games regularly performs better in circumstances that require using the ability of negotiation. Moreover, in some cases, video games persuade children to do sports. For example, there are many children finding football interesting because previously they had become familiar with sports in a video game. Consequently, although many believe that computer games stop children from doing physical activities, ironically, it helps children to find their passion in the sports world.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, whereas a considerable proportion of society asserts that computer games have a devastating effect on children's behaviour, I believe that playing these games can be beneficial for children because by playing video games, they can be better decision-makers, and in some cases, they may find doing sport charming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many differences in telling which is a geniune smile and which is a false smile, and technology can help with differentiating the true meaning of smiles. The professors in the article help show how computers can understand what people like and dislike. The professors in the article explain how computers can identify facial expressions and the result could be a long term effect. According to Professor Huang and Professor Sebe, a computer would be able to identify if someone is faking a smile or is geniunely happy in their life. A computer that can recognize facial expressions can greatly help people by showing if they are unhappy or depressed, and show advertisements that people are interested in.\n\nFaking a smile can mean multiple emotions are present. If someone is faking a smile, then that person could be depressed. In paragraph eight, \"in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways ... using a different muscle.\" Computers and facial experts can tell if someone is unhappy by examining the subject's face and deciding whether they used their zygomatic major and the risorius muscle to smile. The subject's life is affected by an expert or computer telling the person that they are unhappy, which can lead to the person getting help. Achieving better health could all be from the idea that a computer is able to tell if someone is unhappy and a result of that is the person seeking help. In paragraph nine, \"moving [one's] facial muscles not only exresses emotions, but may also even help produce them.\" Computers can recognize if someone is making a facial expression and that works by making emotions for the person to feel any type of feeling. Because of computers recognizing what a person is feeling, computers should be able to communicate with a person and express to that person what they are feeling or experiencing.\n\nAdvertisements also help show emotions. In paragraph six, smiling when a Web ad appears, might make \"a similar ad ... follow.\" Computers can tell if someone is enjoying the advertisements and might add another similar ad that could be enjoyable for that person again. Advertisements can add to the health of a person by allowing that person to experience happiness and adding another ad to the web is just increasing their health. However it is different for a person in a workplace or classroom, according to paragraph six, such as a classroom computer can \"recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Boring ads can decrease a persons health by making that person have less motivation to do their job or work. Advertisements have an effect on people's health in which so adds to why computers should be able to communicate with people about their feelings.\n\nComputers should be able to communicate with people about their feelings, because it can help people greatly in the aftermath. Computers can help by discovering if the person is unhappy in life or can increase their health by allowing that person to experience a happy moment. A person who discovers that they are depressed from a computer that tells them, can expect so much. A person can expect to achieve happiness by seeking help. Computers also increase a persons happiness level from the advertisements that pop up on a computer. What goes to show is that computers should be able to continue communicating with people about their feelings for it helps people recognize the greater meaning in life such as happiness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I strongly agree computers effected people positive way Since people using computers technology gets higher people acess much things Computers good convinent provide entertainment Have ever wanted know capital weather To find answers look computer The computer convient whenever question anything use computer Take cousing courthey example everyday teacher asigns definitions homework So looks definitions computer instead taking time find dictionary However nt person thinks computer convinent When surveyed people voted question something computer convinent item use Professor says CAPS since people learning use computer becoming convinent everyone In conclusion many people rely computer information would nt want take away would It s bored How go computer The computer great source entertainment Whether listening music playing games talking friends always fun computer For example neighbor comes home school She usually extremely bored goes computer plays games talk friends also talk cousins live But one talks relatives internet When surveyed people agreed talk relatives places computer Dr says The computer main source entertainment teens adults would nt want take away main source enteratinment would After school many teens adults go rushing computers different reasons But conclusion computers positively affected people amazing convinence great sources entertainment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars has been a controversial subject for about 25 years now. Some people think it was created by aliens, while others think it's a natural landform, as proven.\n\nTo start off, why would scientist lie about a possible life form on a different planet? If they had any evidence or clue there was life form, it would blow up fast. With information becoming so popular more people would take interest in the subject, resulting in more funds. If anything, scientist would want to find new life form.\n\nAlso, there has been a lot of photographic proof of it being a natural landform. There has been different pictures form a handfull of different times, wouldn't you think there would be some kind of evidence at all if it was really made by aliens?\n\nNot only is it more logical to assume it was a natural landform, there is no evidence against it, but evidence to support it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several individuals support that when it comes to taxes, governments should be having as priority public health maintenance. Other individuals believe that governments should be having a preference for other issues in the matter of taxpayer payments. I believe that well-being comes first with respect to public welfare. \r\n\r\nThe people who believe that politics should be giving more attention to health protection assume that public health is an important measure for any society. The reason for this belief is related to the functional structure of both political authorities and the community. Likewise, I presume that public health care outlines the importance of an exceptional society's function. For instance, a significant number of countries have weak systems of health care, like Greece. In this vein, when a global health crisis comes, such as Covid 19, the countries with low budgets and undeveloped health facilities will not be ready to confront this health crisis with the necessary means, because of their lack of them. \r\n\r\nOn other hand, there are citizens who support that governments should be investing the money of taxes in more significant issues. This opinion rises from the concern that there are high leveled and more relevant issues which the authorities neglect. In this case, I personally believe that is also essential for the political authorities to give more attention to other fields, such as education and illiteracy. To further illustrate this point, the lack of education and the high rate of illiteracy might affect the public welfare as a total in society. As a result, this point could cause high unemployment rates and lead to undernutrition and homelessness and that could be definitely not functional in a community. \r\n\r\nOn balance, I believe that both sides have critical arguments about the importance of health care and the importance of other issues. My opinion tends to agree more with those who outline the priority of taxpayers' money on public health care.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story pharagraph figures happened like failed test wanted end remembered happy thing Also wanted end show something bad happened next going The author wanted show wouldnt give goes wants And wanted last pharagraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show determination hope The geese hibiscus symbolize saengs determination always come back matter Saeng back take test like geese also back The hibiscus also symbolize faced adversity also It taken new paces new homes much like saeng harsh winter coming near future However always finds way come back bloom spring saeng hopes taking drivers test The author included last paragraph show symbolism saeng geese hibiscusThat author concludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe everyone free read listen watch choose Anything publically exposed goin seen anyhow I think shall person want read something mature themself If child think parent shall charge decision libarian Books movies music forms entertainment People read material entertain nothing wrong entertainment Everyone loves entertainment put limit unfair If public mean released certin circomstances age maturity Regaurdless book magazine everything dont want people see always show somewere else tv internet The public library people go get books larn something u yake book shelve someone might miss education somthing I would nt take book shelf put read might good thing child gets book knowledge somethings If read let read instead hiding makes children anxious read see If public library let read people children shall free anything library unless wise consented parent anything publically exposed book magazine movie shown internet tv children see want rather elders agree Nudity perfanity violence provocative materialare everything days even cartoons way kepping children people apart everyday livng", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the text had said seagoing cowboys program allowed him to exprience adventurs and visit may many unique places. Luke had no idiea his life would change soon after his high school graduation. He would work two part jobs like the grocery store and the bank. His friend don will invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He knew the oppertunity of a lifetime. It was 1945 world war 2 was over in Eruope. To help these countrys recover their food suppleys,animles,and more. UNRRA hired \"seagoing cowboys\"to take care of the horses,younge cows,and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and don signed up.\n\nLuke turnd 18 before ariving to Greece,which meant he could be draft in the military service. Luke had made nine trips. Luck traved the high seas. It took two weeks to cross the alantic ocean. The eastern coast of the united states to china. caring for the animals. They had to feed and wated two or three times a day. Stalls had to be cleaned. Helping out anut Katie's farm as a oy had to prepared. Luke had hard work. His was to cheek on all the animalsevery hour. After makeing an hourly report to the caption. He slied down the sleery ladder on his back.\n\nLuke also found time to have fun an the bored;The cowboys played baceball and vollyeball games in the emtpty holds where the animles had been housed. Talbe tennies tournaments,fencing,and more. Bing a seagoing cowboys was much than an adventure for Luke. Luke is grateful for the opportunity. that is my writeing is about Luke becoming a seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that being able to use technology to read students face's in the classroom would be a valuable use of technoloy in the teaching community? Personally, I think that it woud be benificial all round, only having slight problems, but in all a good use of technology in the classroom that could have some very benificial uses in the class in way of student deveopment. By saying \"Benificial use in the class in way of student development\" I'm meaning that if it was used in the classroom it could be a very useful tool in helping student's become more developed in school. For exapmle if someone is having a bad day and they show having 70% anger or sadness for example, then the teacher or other students could try to help cheer up said person so that they aren't occupied by the thought's of that bad day and could focus more on schoolwork.\n\nAnother example is that \"What if it could detect boredom in the class\" Well, that would be a great use of the technology. If a computer program or the teacher can scientifically tell if someones bored rather then guessing it, then they could use that information to help improve classes or lessons so that student's are more engaged, and use the before and after results to see if students are more engaged and wether the new improvements to the course or class was helpful or not, and wether more changes need to be made.\n\nNow some concerns for the use of this technology can be made, like privacy or concent matters arise. Such as if someone is having a good or bad day dosen't matter, and the teacher or someone of the like would want to use it on them to see what the student's emotions are but the student dosen't want their emotions read, either for personal reasons or just not wanting to be used. So in reality some people would be opposed to the Teacher or maybe even other student's knowing their emotions on which they may not want.\n\nSo in conclusion, I think that the technology to read a persons emotions would be valuable in the teaching communnity, not only for changing classes or courses up to better keep the attention or interaction of studesn't, but to even help the student if they have problems that they may not want to share, wehter it's out of fear of anxiety. While it may have some drawbacks, it could provide to be a very useful tool in the teaching community if used properly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author clearly presents positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Comparing future driverless cars to today's taxis, the cars would only use half the fuel of today's public transportation. The cost of the driverless car may be expensive, due to the additional sensors and assistance that the car provides. Google has owned driverless cars for specific conditions. Their cars have driven abundance of miles without a crash, but these vehicles are not specifically driverless. When there is a conflict with pulling in and out of a driveways or traffic issues, the vehicle alerts the driver to take over.\n\nMany people would believe that driverless cars can make a positive impact on our future society. The text states, \"For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors.\" According to the text, a driverless car would have to have many sensors to be fully safe. That information is a pro to driving vehicles like these. The text also states, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This is an example that high-technology sensors can help prevent crashes from happening.\n\nAnother example that the author presents positive aspects of driverless cars is that a car company, BMW, announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" According to the text, \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold on the wheel.\" Many people would love the idea of driverless cars, but people also need to be reassured that they need to be alert when being in a driverless car. Many people will take advantage of the idea of having driverless cars, but people also need to be reminded that driving is serious to theirs' and others' health. The author also states that none of the cars developed so far are driverless. It is always best to make sure that people are aware of this information.\n\nThe text also states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" When a driver loses focuses when driving, that driver will be alerted when the road ahead requires human skills. The sensors will be ready to get the driver's attention whenever there are conflicts along the way. Drivers need to be prepared to take over at any time. Furthermore, manufacturers are considering to add heads-up displays in the vehicle.\n\nAlthough Google cars prove that driverless cars are safe to drive, people can argue that driverless cars could be expensive in the future. With all the technology, sensors, antilock brakes, and driver assistance, people will wonder if driverless cars are expensive. People should be able to have a vehicle that they can feel safe in. With this invention, people will have the urge to be able to own one.\n\nThe text also states, \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\" Furthermore, automakers will make sure that nothing will go wrong with this inevitable invention.\n\nAll the evidence in the text illustrates that driverless cars will take over in the near future. Driverless cars will have a positive impact on our society. Driving will be safer for everyone with the advanced technology that has been invented. The idea of having driverless cars could be far from us, but with all these inventions, we are growing closer to fully have these advanced vehicles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI ask you to change the voting methods to popular vote instaed of Electoral collage because the candidates for presidency give no importance to small states that do not have many electoral collage votes; focus more on those that have many Electoral collage votes and candidates for presidency dont need to be the most popular of all to win the presidency.\n\nCandidates don't really care for small states with small population because they know that they don't matter in the resultof them being elected as president or not. According to \"The Indefensible Electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer \"Seventeen states didn't see the candidates al all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get so see a single campain as. \"You may ask yourself why they didn't see any of of this well one thing that both of them share is that they dont have as many electoral collage votes as other states like Califoprnia that has 55 electoral votes. And it's a winner take all the less popular candidate from the state doesn't get any votes at all.\n\nYou dont have to be the most popular in the nation in order to win the precidency and its a winner take all. According to the \"The Indefensible Electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer \"Voters vote not for the president, but for a slater of elctors, who in turn elect the president.\" For example when bush was running for precident he was not the most popular in the natuion and Gore was, in the end Bush was elected president for winning more the electoral votes then Gore. This is unfair for many people because more then half the nation didn't want Bush but yet he was elected without the popular vote.\n\nHowever According to \"In Defense of the Electoral Collage: Five reasons to keep our despised methods of choosing the\n\nPresident\" by Richard A. Posner there is less likely to be a dispute over the electoral collage votes then in a dispute over the popular vote. It also requires a a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. \"The electoral collage avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast.\n\nThis is why I ask you state senator to change from Electoral Collage voting methed to The Popular voting to elect The President Of The United states Of America because the candidates for presidency give no importance to small states that do not have many electoral collage votes and care more for those that do plus the candidate doesn't have to be the most popular in the to win the elections to become the President of the U.S.A.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered how a computer could tell what your emotion is?. Well this new software can tell exactly what and how much of a certain emotion your face is expressing. This software has already calculated the famouse painting Mona Lisa and has given us quite the calculation of her emotions and they only want to make it better in the future.\n\nDr.Paul Eckman is the creator of FACS (Facial Actions Coding System) (stated in paragraph 3) he claim that he has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, agner, disgust, fear and sadness and associated each with characteristic movements. This is only the beginning for FACS because in the future they wish to improve this software to the point of it being able to adjust our computer depending on our facial expression.\n\nbut of course not everyone is onboard with this idea, and i dont blame them because i too think that this is going a bit far. Considering the ideas and promises he made about being able to change an add just by smiling or frowning seems a bit much for a computer and not all websites and programs are not going to be compatibale at the begining. Also what if it miscalculates and views your confussion with anger and changes something that you didnt want to change.\n\nIt can tell the difference in a smile and a forced smile however, just by the way you smile it can calculate if its real or fake. It can look at slight and small muscle movements on your face and compare it to a real or fake smile and by judging the appearence can make a accurate guess. It does this by making a 3d computer model of a face and all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles, movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\".\n\nLike it or hate it this sofware exists and dosent look likes it going anywhere. I do see problems with it for example, what it if dosent understand you emotion or cannot calculate your exspression in time and cannot adjust. Im sure they can iron out all the flaws and bugs withing the program but nowadays people will still be paranoid and convinced that this is a government sponsored project just to be able to keep a closer eye on citizens and just want to spy on us without a second thought.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars would be a good thing to add to our future. So far it sounds very reliable. It can do many things such as it can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. I really think this would be a good invention, especially for the teens who recently became a driver. It can help prevent more accident. And causes people to be more aware of their surroundings.\n\nThe driverless cars can do many things. It has special touch sensors that makes sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. It vibrates when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. It also notify when the driver need to take over. And the best part is that it has cameras watches the driver, while the driver watches the road.\n\nThere are few negatives that come with the driveless car. Such as that it needs help to navigate through work zones and accidents. Which is not that bad, because it alreadys alert you when you need to take over. So you have some time to get prepared. And if technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer? It depends on the situation. For example, If the car is alerting you to take over and you're not paying attention. Then that would be your fault. It also sensor for you to keep your hand on the wheel. Or the people in the car with you could've been distracting you. Another example is that you buy the car and some of the sensors are not working. Like the one that is suppose to tell you that there is something behind you. Or the heads-up display is not working. Then that would be the manufacturer fault. They gave you a non-proper working car. Which if you have waranty on the car, you can get a new one that works properly.There are many different situations where is could have been the driver's fault or the manufacturer fault.\n\nThere are many negative and positive things to say about the driverless. So far i think the positive out weigh the negative. I think once they are done with the test, it would be a great smart car. I believe it would lower the car accident rates. Here are just some of the reason i think the driverless car are a good inventions. I think we have a bright future ahead of us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet that is like the second planet Sun. It is bright and has it's own good. It is also close to the Earth, which they call it Twin. It is very easy to spot. Not alot of humans studying Venus can actully be on the planet for too long.\n\nIt's got \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97% of carbon dioxid\"\n\nwhich meaning the air around it is very thick and it is not an easy area. Getting close to it is impossible, studying it is impossible, and thats why were are still on about how to really get a real definition of what venus is, a hard to learn lesson.\n\nThey say that Venus is a place that we can't really figure out but we still learn about it because it was once a place that was filled in with water, and was supported it in with various forms of life, just how where we are living, the Earth, today. Venus is close to the Earth whcih is an easy place to visit, and it is covere with a sediment surface of rocks and have the similar features of what we have now in the Earch. We are trying to learn about Venus so the NASA group is trying to discover hoe it works and so they came to the point of flying jets and stuff around there. They are also trying to test some testing therte to see what it can handle or hold. They using some divices that was used bnac in 1940 which was during the World War ll. Venus is resistant to heat so when using teachnology there, it all is gonna have to be used in different.\n\nWe try to do what best we can to get to the Venus and to study it by using imaginations, and innovations", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverless cars I think could be a very good thing to this world. There are some down falls to them but if we put in the right time, i bielieve that we could make it a very useful tool in our enviroment. In this passage i am going to tell you why i bielieve that we should go to computer cars, or at least computer cars that give the human the right to driver, rather than only human conroled cars.\n\nMy first argue is that it could help us with drunk or tired drivers. For example if someone was out late drinking, or was intoxicated. They could easily get home with out anyone being worried about there safety or safety of others because the computer is taking care of all of that. There would be no more drunk driving and i think everyone agrees that would be a great thing to happen in this world.it would save many lives every year. Also with tired drivers, say that your on vacationand have a gery long drive ahead of you. or coming home from a very long day of work. and keep nodding off while driving. You could just flip the car into computer mode and have the car drive without having to worry about falling asleep behind the wheel. Also the driver wont have to worry about being distrcted by screaming kids, loud noises, your text messages popping up while driving etc.All those distracts gone. This is a computer is does not reconize any of those actions. It will only know its job, and that job is to drive the car safely\n\nMy second reason is i think it would be much safer in genral. imaired drivers or perfectly fine drivers.it doesnt matter who you take. Computers are smarter then humans they will not make the same dumb mistakes humans make like running a red light, or going above the speed limit, or driveing reckless in snowy icy conditions.The car will do everything it has to do to keep you and your\n\nfamily safe. Also if everyone on the road has computer driven cars. no body will have to worry about crazy drivers everyone will be calm and okay. Because a safe device is in control of your.\n\nMy last reason is the police. I bielieve\n\nthat if these cars become a thing the enviroment will become a better place. Also there will be less police chases. And im not saying the police will be off the road completely but if they dont have to worry about reckless drivers as much, they will be able to go out and deal with much more serious crime, because they know that these computers will follow the rules of the road. Say one day there was a police chase though. These are computers here. the police should be able to hack into the car and shut it down completly before any harm is done to any one.\n\nThose are my 3 reasons that i bielieve that computer driven cars would be a great resource to our community the police services, drunk or impaired drivers, and just safer driving in general. If you dont think that these cars are safe, i think you should change your opinion before they would be relased they would under go numerous ammonunts of testing to make sure that, they okay to be driven on the open roads. once again those are my 3 reasons. thankyou for reading.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To begin, large number of private cars may have contributed to the traffic congestion. In many developed and developing countries, majority of urban residents are consist of people with a middle class background. In fact, it is not uncommon for a middle class family to possess more than one vehicle. Driving private cars is not surprisingly the preferred way to commute, because of the sense of privacy and autonomy that it offers. As a result, this may lead to high volume of traffic during peek hours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cooperation among children is the first step to being a model citizen and a nice person. It is essential to learn to cooperate since childhood to improve this comportment's key and for somebody is crucial to learn it at school, especially in a team sport. In this essay, I will argue why I moderately agree with this view.\r\n\r\nIt is common knowledge, that sport at school represents one of the most beneficial activities for children, one of the ways why it is functional is because of the significant lessons that you can find out only by playing, for example, cooperation. Young boys can define a goal for the match or even the training and reach it in an easier way if they do it together. Sometimes at school, conflicts born among students and sometimes they can be resolved with a little bit of cooperation spirit during a basketball or a football game.\r\n\r\nThere are also alternative methods to teach how to cooperate at school like using, in general, cooperative learning or proposing team research or games. Use at is well cooperative learning means, consolidating the class which has to listen to each member's opinion and answer in a polite way and without any tension. Another advantage is the presence of the tutor, this figure can help students with more difficulties, and because of the inexistent lack of years in comparison to a teacher, the kid could feel better with the explanation.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, this essay argued why it is true that having a team sport at school can help to cooperate but I definitely do not think this is the best way ever, because there are other modes with which achieve a cooperative action.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people perceive that, pursuing a tertiary education in a college or a university is the best route to become successful in a career, While others reckon that, it is better to go to a job straight away after completing the school. In this essay, we will discuss both the statements, and attain a reasonable conclusion. \n\nFirstly, in schooling the students are not specialised into any particular disciplines. Moreover, through the whole journey, they tend to learn the basic things, which may aid in managing the day to day activities. However, it is definitely not sufficient enough to build a career. For example, to work for a company it is mandatory to learn specific and relevant skill sets. Thus, it is very clear that, schooling, education doesn't provide all of these necessary requirements. \n\nSecondly, a student gains enough exposure, and experience during his college times. In addition, he is categorized to a particular major, and he is trained according to the industry requirements. Which, on the other hand, gives him an upper-hand in building his own career. For instance, as a part of the college curriculum, students are emphasized to undergo industrial training for better employment prospects. Therefore, holding a graduation is an obligation for a good job.\n\nIn conclusion, it is apparent that, having completed a degree in a particular group, enhances the performance, and also adds up weight to the race. Lastly, relying only on primary schooling, will never fetch any stupendous amounts of fortunes. Eventually, to reach bigger heights in life, good education is really important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"making mona lisa smile\" it talks about being able to tell someone's mood. Is being able to tell someone's mood in a classroom valuable? I think it is very valuable. I think this because the teacher could be able to tell if you understand something or how you feel about it. Another reason is because You could be able to tell how your friend is feeling my last reason is because when a painter paints something you would be able to tell how the painter wanted you to feel when looking at it.\n\nMy first reason for why i think this is valuable is because a teacher could be able to tell how you feel about something new she is teaching. For example \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,Dr.Hung predicts\"(paragraph 6). This is stating that the computer sofware would be able to tell when you are confused or bored and could help the teacher.\n\nAnother example is \"she's 83 percent happy,9 precent disgusted,6 percentfearful, and 2 percent angry\"(paragraph 1). This computer sofware and cell all of your emotions at once and there percent. This is how a teacher would be able to tell how you're feeling.\n\nMy second reason for why i think this is valuable is because you could be able to tell how your friend is feeling. For example in the article is states that \" Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy,worried, ect (paragraph 5). This states that you cant exactly tell a persons every emotion by just looking at them so this would be able to help know their emotions. Another example would be \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one\" (paragraph 7). This also means that if a friend is lying abou how thye feel or putting on a fake smile the computer would know its fake. These are soem examples on how the computer is valuable when it comes to friends.\n\nMy final reason is because when a painter pants something it would be able to tell how you feel when looking at it. One example I found in the article is \"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face while it shows just how much this computer can do\"( paragraph 6). This is explaning how when looking at the Mona Lisa painting it is supposed to make you smile. Another example is \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition sofware tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa\" (paragraph 4). This is explaning how it shows the real face or in the painted face. These are some examples of how this is valuable to paintings.\n\nThis new technology called Facial Action Coding System is valuable to students in a classroom. This new technology can help teachers undertsna dhow a student is feeling about the subject. It alos helps with friends and paintings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im going to except the offer because Luke wants to take care of the horses,cows, and mules that are going over seas but if you like animals you should sign up or if you like takeing care of animals then get down here and sign up. I know because in the story it said the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) hird \"Seagoing Cowboys\"to take care of the horses,young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up. And if you have not been on the ocean and would like to well sign up. Or if you have not been to arround the world you would like to be a seagoing cowboy I know this because in the artical it said \" They got their seaman's paper and boarded ths SS Charles W. Wootster for greece- with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. So if you like all these things sign up I know I would because I think it would be an awesome experance to get to see and know I think you would have fun too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries public reason interest people different types entertainment I know people opinions things variaties every single person different In opinion I think certian materials banned becuase mature content others think appropiate Disagree alright ever stopped think issues like Im going list reasons explainations opinion becuase I think point good concepts I believe banned First present society everybody different views opinions things discussed The public right entertain themself way would like choose material subject matter would like Taking away entertainment would telling wear clothes would like drive car want If walk library see subject fit standards interest simply walk away find suitable subject matter Some people look things totally different way like different styles entertainment mean somebody else dose nt Second You would takng jobs away many people love People issue content books movies sometimes based author feeling even life maybe like Others write real life events things happen normal people everyday looked upon people write stories whole world see Criticizing subjects entertainment downgrading different forms art Pretty much people feel like ok mature subject discussed book painting hipocritical Lastly If material pulished today wanted shelfs library would even printed sold people world It people like problem like bothered ever In opinion think form entertianment banned taken away society anyway would taking peoples joy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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