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"content": "Not being able to exactly calculate what an individual is feeling is not always simple. Imagine being able to immediately detect another person's emotion. The Facial Coding System has the ability to do that. This is a recently invented software that can identify one's emotions by tracking facial movements. There are many great aspects to this new invention. The use of the Facial Coding System in classrooms to read the emotional expressions of students in our classrooms, should be put into action.\n\nThis software will make learning less stressful, and more efficient for the student. According to the article, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". By putting this software into play, one can avoid being \"confused or bored\". It will postively influence the student's education since it will have the ability to \"modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" Not only the student will benefit, but also the teacher since it can be time-saving for them. In the article it also stated that, \"Empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconciously imitate another persons facial expression.\" This demonstrates how we \"unconsciously\" can come to the conclusion of what someone's emotional state is. Most teacher's do not know why their student is acting or responding the way they are. By the use of this invention teachers and students can avoid many debates and students could gain emotional aid. Learning will be successful.\n\nWe need this in our classrooms. We have heard and experienced lots of negatuve aspects from computers but this is why experts are developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate, like the Facial Action Coding system. Who would not want to see students more engaged in learning?",
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"content": "So I'm driving in my nice great black colored Handa with black rims and green neon lights. But let me stop there I do not want to get into all of the details of the car. Like i was saying i was driving and next thing you know BOOM!! I collided with a nasty old rusty out fo style truckand ruine my car. I called 1800-411-pain and they will handle it. I guess i have usage for this car anymore and I can just walk. my point i\"m making is that you don't need a car to get you where you go all the time. citizens can use other sources of transportations. Citizens need to take advantages of limting car usage for the u. s. and the world. i'm going to i'm inform citizens about advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nFirst of all, a lot of citizens love their cars like i did. What some citizens don't know that cars are dangrous. Well I think everybody know that because of all the accidents and crash but I'm not talking about that. I'm talking about the pollutions. That the air is being polluted. Secondly, That is not the only thing. Riding bikes, walking, taking the bus, and taking a cab can help stop pollution. Now I'm not talking about taking away all cars. We have to take advantages of limiting the car usage.\n\nHonestly, walking is not that bad and so is riding a bike. It is really good workout. It is also safer than cars if you don't trip or fall off your bike.\n\nAlso citizens won't cause congestion. Citizens don't also have pay bill and loans for their cars if you don't have one. Now i know some people have job to get to, so all you have to do is to wake up early for work ride a bike or take the bus arrive to work on time. If you was late and something comes up just make up a lie about why you are. At least you are helping out the world. Most of all, when you drive a car then a cop stops you and give you a ticket even though you didn't do nothing wrong. You can avoid that by just taking a bus. Also going to waste money on gas and the bus only 2 dollars. Like I said I'm saying that you should get rid of your car. i'm saying take advantage of limiting car usage.\n\nIn otherwise, in Vauban, Germany life goes on without the usage of cars. As a result, 70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. They had to give residents ticket if they drive their. All I'm trying to say is take advantage of limiting car usage.",
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"content": "In today's generation, People across the globe tend to make kids later in their lives than how they used to be earlier. There are various reasons associated with this. I would like to describe both advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nDue to modernism, people across many countries decide to make children later in their life. There are several causes for this. First and foremost, In today's competitive world, it is necessary to settle in their lives in order to provide the best future for children. For example, have a career, house and also enough wealth. Secondly, in today's world, people focus more on mutual understanding between their partners which results in having kids after several years. Thirdly, some people are of an opinion that they should enjoy their lives before family planning. So, all these factors contribute to why people decide to have kids later in their lives.\r\n\r\nThere are several advantages of family planning later in one's life. For example, they can provide the best education and satisfy all the needs of their children. Subsequently, people also enjoy their lives which is difficult after having kids. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are disadvantages as well, by the time children grow up, parents will be old and they cannot enjoy every moment with their kids. Furthermore, researchers have proved that after a certain age limit, it is difficult to have children and might also result in miscarriages and death. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I would argue that the disadvantages of having offspring later in life outweigh the advantages. It is really important for humans to be blessed with children and they should make proper planning to avoid various problems which might affect them later.",
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"content": "When Luke first started the program he thought it was a opportunity of a lifetime. He knew it would be a good thing for a small-town boy like him. He wanted to be able to help out others and that program was an awesome way to do so.\n\nHe got to spend time with animals, got to play games occasionally, got to be helpful, got to see amazing sights, and got to see his friends. The program was an awesome way to do a lot of things. One example is how Luke got to tour an excavated castle in Crete. He also got to see Europe and China. That is unbelievable opportunity for a boy like him. Luke got to have fun by playing baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy can be an awesome adventure. A quote straight from Luke was,\"I'm grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" Another quote from Luke was,\"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\" That proves that even if you had to work you were still having the best time ever. The job as a Seagoing Cowboy is more than just hard work, and being miserable. You actually get to enjoy your time.\n\nIf you want to have a great job I'm sure all the Seagoing Cowboys will agree that you should be one of them. Yes, you do have to work hard, but that isn't a reason you shouldn't join. How many other jobs do you get to see amazing sights, or play volleyball and other games. As a Seagoing Cowboy you even get to help people out with their country and their needs. This is why I think you should be a Seagoing Cowboy, and I'm sure Luke agrees ,too.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast builders Empire State building face good amount obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock upon s mastThe wind proved big problem blimps Not would swing dangerously tethered mast occasions dirigible actually approached Empire state building could nt manuver close enough due wind The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Another thing stood way Empire State Building s dock used danger presented buildings people The gas hydrogen dirigibles used float highly flammable When German dirigible destroyed fire owners realized much worse accident would densely populated area The third final obstacle faced law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building With potential danger discouragement s wonder Empire State building never used docking dirigibles",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper editor I would like make benifits owning computer For example learn many thing would never able also go chat rooms talk friends people even make teaching esyer Computers many countres standard use learn many things bring one tribes look like alein object know use open eyes ever many people remote ribes areas dont even know theres man meon Another great thing computer pay bills taxes insurance credit cards othe payments good cant get house place closed wont get late fees even help save large amounts money Many people use computer socialize joining online website twitter myspace talk veiw pictures see friends Also message friends Further many people play games computer single player online millions players time also hook gaming system computer play people even yet hints cheats The biggest reasons computers benifit though revolutionized school homework instead work sheet go computer print email teacher Another reason computer amazing makes research projects home work much easyer redrable ean give much broader view topic By far best thing ahead computer fact many teachers use teach show videos Therefore much easier learn stand thing wich help us future successful Also many kids pay less attention teaches giving lecture computer playing video grasp students attention much better These reasons I think computer excellant invention every family school one I hope find persuading puplish",
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"content": "lot discusion whether computers effect people positive way negative way I believe computers effect people negatively I think people lose people skills talking computer computers also lead danger people tend forget priorities life From know people use computers use talk friends people around world Instead hangingout friends talk computer hanging person wo nt reconize facial expressions given certin people talking person get full experience communicating You get tome voide addition facial expressions You also get body language ca nt get computer unless using webcam Computers led many dangers These dangers effect every user families many cases young teenagers tricked ader users showing parts body making teens believe older user relate problems age sometime teen persuade leave home neighbor hood meet user Also another type danger cyberbulling Cybe bulles lower yourselfesteem The bullies call names pick sometimes make feel suicidal If hadnt computer none dangers would occuring With computers people lost judgement top priorites Some computers uses tend forget important things life family schools work health Some people would rather stay computer hangout family friends Others tend choose homework work social life computer instead Since computer alot seem ignore health They nt exercise much nt eat healthy So opinion life without computers would good everyone People would still people skills would nt much danger people would focus important thins online social lives",
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"content": "Have you ever imagined a car that can drive for you? Google cofounder Sergey Brin is working on developing cars that can completely drive by theirselves. He calls these vehicles driveless cars. He envisions a future with cars driving humans around. He and I believes that such cars would fundamentally change the world around us.\n\nI believe this a safe way to go. This developement will prevent many careless accidents. It'll help save lives of those intoxicated drivers, who cant stay focused on the road. It'll help those who may need to take a nap while driving long distances.\n\nI strongly believe that this is a safe way for the future drivers. They won't have to really drive, just assist in certain situations when the car is near a roadblock or an accident. Some cars can already drive independently under certain conditions. The road to the truly autonomous car stretches ahead of us, as stated in the passage.",
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"content": "The author concludes story sentence When come back saeng vowed silently spring snows melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test winter hibiscus symbolizes new beginning For example back home town hibiscus s everything fine normal lived life well moved us didnt hibiscus failed driving test feels miss placed doesnt fit So saw winter hibiscus felt found something help feel home ease almost She felt sense security In conclusion author ended sentence new beginning hibiscus means new start",
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"content": "To prove that it wasnt done by aliens is because ive read the passage and this is what I found. New high-resolution images and 3D altimertry from NASAs mars globel survey spacecraft reveal the face on mars for on Marsfor what it really is called A mesa. Twenty five yaers ago somthing funny happened around mars NASAs spacecraft was circling around planet. A few days later,NASA unveiledthe imaage for all to see. Although few scientist believed the face was an alien artifact photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when mars global surveyor [MGS] arrived at the red planet in sSeptember 1997 eighteen long years after the viking missions ended. So it was true that aliens did not do that to mars because aliens are not real and also NASA even said that they did it on mars they said it was an accident that happened in September 1997. Also in April 5,1998 ,when Mars global surveyor flew over cydonia for the first time,Micheal malin and his mars obiter camera [MOC] team snapped the picture ten times sharper than the original viking photos.",
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"content": "It is argued that whether continue further education or being employed after graduating with a high school diploma is the best way to gain more career success. While it is agreeable that both views have their own benefits, the writer prefers the former choice to the latter and will highlight the reasons why.\n\n Firstly, it is undeniable that continuing the study at universities or colleges leads to more advances and opportunities for future careers. Studying in universities applies not only to making a firm foundation of recognition and improving skills, but also gain more specialist knowledge and extending relationships in an academic environment which gives higher opportunities to get success. Furthermore, it seems that the qualification after graduating with a college degree gives more possibilities for well-paid jobs afterwards.\n\n On the other hand, initially finding jobs at eighteen may have plenty of difficulties to be able to succeed in the future. Despite improving life skills and having practical knowledge, it requires a longer process than studying at university to be successful. Moreover, having no tertiary education means losing the chance to be employed in a high-salary job and it is easily dissatisfied with the job application.\n\n To conclude, going on the study at university and college is likely to bring more possibility and chances to succeed via higher-levelled knowledge and relationship from making friends than immediately getting a job as it takes much more time and effort for living and career. Hence, this essay has shown it is better to study in university to achieve career success.",
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"content": "Limiting car usage would be great for both you and the environment. If we didn't use cars as much, we would get more exercise, save more money, and limit the amount of air pollution we produce. We would start to notice changes for the better in our health, our budgeting, and the condition of the environment. I have gathered evidence from a few different sources to back up these claims. \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\", \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Botogta\", and \"The End of Car Culture\" all go into detail about the benefits that did happen or could happen while we limit car usage.\n\nOne advantage of limiting car usage is the increase in exercise it will give you. Did you know that 70% of America is overweight? An advantage to walking or biking places that driving doesn't have is that walking or biking will get you active. It will help you burn calories and it will give you the self-confidence of being in good shape. Sure, it might be hot out when you walk or bike places, but this problem can be solved by simply dressing appropriotely for the activity. Wear something that you know you'll be comfortable getting excercise in. One business man riding a two seat bicycle with his wife (instead of driving), said, \"It's a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution\", (Source 3). Walking or riding your bike to get places rather than driving to them will give you more time to think. If you think too much on the road, something dangerous is bound to happen. Walking to places is a great alternative to driving not only for your body but for your mind, and this, to me, is a strong advantage of limiting car usage.\n\nAnother advantage to limiting car usage is you will start to save money. Gas bills start to add up, especially considering the constant inclination of prices. Not only gas, though, but other costly needs such as getting your car's oil changed or tires replaced can also turn out to be expensive. Cost plays a huge role in whether or not teens and young adults will get a car when legally eligable. \"There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39-year-olds getting a license\", (Source 4). A large amount of teens just now getting their licenses are unemployed, making the car expenses impossible for them to pay on their own, making them rely on usually a parent or relative. Money has always had a significant effect on how people transport from one place to another. Limiting driving all together would save you gas and repair money, and saving money could never be a bad thing.\n\nFinally, a significant advantage of not driving as much is that it would limit the amount of air pollution on this earth. \"...a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions in Europe\", (Source 1). Though we may not notice it, air pollution is constantly contaminating the earth. Air pollution is extremely harmful to inhale, almost like how smoking is extremely bad for your lungs. Reducing the amount of driving that we do would reduce the amount of air pollution we produce with it. Walking or biking does not pollute the earth the way driving can.\n\nAdvantages of limiting car usage are not only good for the environment but are good for us both physically, mentally, and financially. If everyone started to limit the amount of time they spend driving per day, just imagine the change we might start to see in the community. We could start by walking to the grocery store or our friends' houses instead of driving, and then maybe bring on a long-term change, such as walking to school if it's close enough, or walking to the bus stop so you can ride the bus with other kids instead of driving your own car, creating more air pollution. There are other advantages to limiting car usage, but these are the top three advantages we will begin to notice if we act soon enough.",
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"content": "The table campares the number of male and female employees from the year 1851 to 1901, also comparing the number of factories that developed during the same timeline, in England amd Wales.\nIt is very clear from the table that while the number of factories increased more than double from 1851 to 1901, the number of total employees decreased drastically during that period.\nThe number of male employees in 1851 was 287,100, which was almost 100,000 higher than the female employees. 10 years later, the amount of male employees witnessed a sharp decline. However, the same for the female employees did not show much difference. The numbers showed a downward trend for both male and female workers till 1901 where it was 31000 and 30000 respectively.\nThe number of total employees was 477,100 during 1851 while the number of factories was a mere 225. The manpower decreased to a point that it reached 61,000 by 1901 while the number of factories doubled to 600 by the same year.",
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"content": "Dear state senator with all do respect I feel like electoral college is unfair. Why you may ask? because in reality us the U.S citizens aren't getting to actually vote directly for who we want. for example in paragraph 10 in the second source it is stated that the way that college electoral voting works is by letteing the people vote for representatives that represent the actual candidate. In other words lets say that more than 100 people vote for a certain candidate well those 100 peoples vote will not all be counted because that particular candidate may only have 37 representatives.\n\nin addition that makes our votes less valuable! The voting method should actually change to popular vote, because that way it is equal or even and no one is being left out and every persons vote counts. Also the popular vote for president of the U.S is better because in that case there is more possibilities of candidates to last either longer or even have a better opportunity in being elected as president.\n\nThe whole point of having popular vote is so that us the citizens feel equal and also free because this is a free state and the whole meaning of this nation was that we the citizens get to pick our president. Another thing why I feel like popular vote is more better is because it would make the governments job so much easier. For example all they would have to do is collect votes and see who has the most. Instead of having to know that the votings are unfair with college electoral voting..\n\nThese were my reasons why I feel like popular voting for a president is a much more better choice than college electoral voting.",
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"content": "Yes, it is valuable it is able to accuratly define the expression of a students. Technology is a very powerful this in the new world, we are able to do almost everything so this is a very important task to do. Being able to figure out if students are actually concentrated or not is very important.\n\nMona Lisa is a painting that was made by Leonardo da Vinci it was able to\n\nidentify what she felt and even the percent of what she was feeling.It is able to identify what muscles you are moving and read your real emotions not the false ones. Fourty-four muscles in the model move like our human muscles \"Yet Dr. Huang abservers that artists such as da Vinci studies human anatomy to help them paint facial muscle percisly\n\nenouh to convey specific emotions\"\n\nDr. Huang is the creator of FACS this classifys basic human emotions such as happiness, suprised ,anger, disgust ,fear and sadness. Not only could this be used in the class but also on pictures of presidents, art and maybe even older artifacts.It might be even important to identify a students expressions but things. \"A classroom computer could reconize whan a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\" paragraph 6 Making Mona Lisa Smile. This way tecahers will be able to get the student back on track.\n\nStudents in a class can get very bored of what the subject is about and when a teacher talking for a long period of time this may cause a student to became distracted by another thing in class. With this technology the teacher will be able\n\nto know if the student is confused and not really paying attention and fix the problem.",
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"content": "I dont much patience Ill tell story time I It sunny day outside school I homework So I invited friends going landslide skate park We home wasnt My mom said CAPS hes two minutes go him So I mad I writing note put door reads CAPS go late Sorry time next time CAPS But I signing note pulled That story I patients",
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"content": "There many times memoir author created mood One time author created mood described traditional cuban home In kitchen heart home Also cuban music mixes aromas kitchen This gives mood hunger great food Another time author created mood described lived closeknit community This shows author grew helping people While helped return This gives mood wanting help someone need A third time author created mood described parents caring people His family always helped people considered family This creates mood hope family knew people would Clearly many times authour creates mood reader",
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"content": "Driverless cars are safety hazard to people, the economy, and the roads. They also do not serve much of a purpose other than making it so people can be lazy on the road.\n\nThe first issue with driverless cars is that they would cost way too much money to the production companies and to the government. Taxes would be made to create laws and regulations regarding the cars. The cars would feature new technology that people would need to learn and the initial cost of that technology would be very high. The article claims that the driverless cars would use 50% less fuel than a normal car. How can they back this up? One can assume that the car is using a GPS software to take the car from point A to point B. Not all GPS software is accurate when it comes to locations. For example, I know of a location in my town that shows up as several different locations on the different GPS services. When I type the address into Google Maps, it shows up at a completely different place in relation to its actual location. The cars are still going the same, if not greater, distances than a driver-powered car would be.\n\nThe government would need to create new laws for the self driving cars, which will only lead to more issues. Like the article states in paragraph nine, if there was an accident with a driverless car, who would be charged? The driver or the company? The company doesnt want to be charged so they could make claims saying that the driver should have been paying attention, but the issue with that is that if the driver isn't actively driving the whole time, one can not expect them to be ready on the fly to grab the wheel and solve the situation all of the time.\n\nOne issue that the United States has nowadays is the big terrorism scare going on mainly between the USA and ISIS, the Islamic terrorist group that has already claimed many lives internationally. The article stated that the cars have computers in them. They also need to know in real time about accidents, weather, etc. so they would be connected to the internet via satellite. This signal could be intercepted by a terrorist group and cause even greater issues. The terrorist group could track the car down, hack into it, and then control the car to do whatever they want. It would be like an RC car, except on a much larger, more dangerous scale,\n\nMost of the people \"driving\" the cars will probably be safe about it, but there will still be a percentage of people who wont be, which will lead to a rise in car accidents. Some people will use the self driving cars as an advantage to their laziness. They can use it as an oppurtunity to get on their devices and not pay attention to the road.\n\nThe final argument is the purpose of the cars. Do we really need these cars or are they just another luxory item for the upper class to show off? Unless GPS software is perfected and the cars are proven to be safer than driver-powered cars, it would not be worth the hassle to spend money on them.\n\nDriverless cars are a risk to the safety of the people. Without proven, tangible evidence that they are safe, inexpensive, and have a real purpose compared to normal cars, there is no reason for them to be on the roads.",
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"content": "The engineers who presented this more refined idea of a car that does not need a driverbecame the pioneers of this technological evolution and self-driven car laboratories sprung up around the united states of america.\n\nThe most obvius benefit of having a driverless car is the fact that people do not have to drive it most of the time. Also due to the fact that it is a hands free type of thing, drivers have more freedom to do whatever they want while inside the car including reading, texting, eating, and so on.\n\nthe main issue with having a progam do all of the work for us is that there is less interacttion between people. There is already a huge dilema with people being outgoingbecause of social media;now people can ignore\n\neachother while in there cars too?\n\nThe concept of a car that does not need a driver may seem futuristic to most people, but that concept has become one of Google's most popular innovations aside from their universally-known search egine. The idea of a self-driving vehicle is very appealing to many people, but in reality 'driverless is really driver optional'. It is reasonable to predict that in the future that there will no longer be needed for driver's liscenses. hpefully they will be able to perfect their driverlesss cars and lead humanity to the future .",
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"content": "Man driverless cars, thats a big topic. Matter of fact it's a huge topic, honest;y anything science related is usally a big topic. Like driverless cars, but the question we all seem to have is; would driverlsee cars actually help us out or will they be a burden on us. I know it sounds stupid to say burden but trust everything comes with pros and cons. Im not agaisnt driverless cars but at the same time neither am I am for them. Yes it might be easier with them but at the same it could harder. These pros and cons you're bout to read will for sure make you rethink on driverless cars cause at the end of the day i want whats best for everyone but at the same time everyone is entiltled to their opion.\n\nDriverless cars have some huge pros and not enough cons. Well at least in the futer they don't but now yeah heavy cons. I'm saving the cons for later but for now we're sticking with the pros. The biggest pro for driverless cars is no gas. No gas? Yes no cas, because driverless cars would more than likely be elctric as said in paraghraph 1. Also I'm making this argument because in the future we'll have lots of solar power and Nuclear fusion, all this will add up to a cleaner better world. Because Driverless cars be would be the start of the next chapter in the indrustrial revolution. The death of fossil fuels is what i think is the greatest outcome of driverless cars. But this probaly wont happen for many years. The death of fossil fuels at least, its gong to be a minute before we get Nuclear Fusion to work because we need Helium 3. But that's off topic.\n\nDriverless cars have two huge cons. Laws letting people be able to let people test em out and drive them except in California, Nevada, Flordia, and the Disrtrict of Columbia however are letting these cars be tested and worked on so the future can be awesome. But back on topic, how can you fix and/or create something when its illegal in nearly the whole United States. I dont know about you but that would be real hard. Here's the thing though manufacturers believe that as the days go on and more test are done proving that these cars are safe soon more states will follow in the foot steps of the 4 states that already have as said in paragraph 9. Positve thinking. The next con would making them driverless. Right now the cars are only able to do certain task. Unlesss you count the Google car which can all most drive its self but cant qiute do it cause if something to tricky gets in there path say a wreck or a traffic or even consturction the car struggles as said in paragraph 7. but thats a con for now, mopre than likely in the futer this con will no longer be an issue. We hope at least.\n\nMan though Driverless cars that's something I never thought I would have never thought about. like I said earlier I'm not for or against driverless cars cause i prefer to drive a car like a normal person but still I won't say it wouldn't be helpful one of these days when i get older. Those were some good pros and cons I hope after reading this you'll rethink driverless cars and make a better choice about it. Till next time see ya.",
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"content": "I believe that driverless are something that should continue being developed. Sometimes risks must be taken in order to advance in deptartments such as transportation. I believe that if we allow this to continue, it could lead to great advancements in transportation and will lead to making long distance travel much easier and much more safe. I'd like to ask anyone who is against the development of driverless cars this simple question: \"Can you imagine a world where there are no car accidents caused by tired drivers or by people who are texting while driving?\"\n\nSome might say that these cars are currently too unsafe to test. I personally disagree with that idea, as it sets a bad example for future experiments. Cars themselves would not exist if they had not been tested by someone brave enough to try them. Neil Armstrong would never have set his foot on the moon if he had not been brave enough to test the rocket that had been built for his crew. If we are too afraid to try something, even if it isn't as grandiose as stepping foot on a heavenly body, then what will that be saying to the ambitious young engineers that would like to build a rocket to send the brave young astronauts to Mars? We cannot sacrifice scientific advancement for the sake of safety.\n\nTo say that the cars being currently tested are unsafe is seemingly an exaggeration in itself. For example, cars with the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" have sensors equipped in the steering wheel to assure that the driver has both hands on the wheel at all times while the car's autopilot is in progress, assuring that the driver can take control at any time. This is actually something that is already quite common in airplanes. Would people who argue against these cars be afraid when a pilot puts their airplane on autopilot as well? If not, then I don't quite see why someone would be so afraid of these cars.\n\nTo say that these cars are too radical to test is just not true. These cars are driven by computers when not being driven by their human passengers. Computers are capable of doing calculations in a matter of seconds that humans might take hours to do. Some might contend that computers can make mistakes. I must rebuttle that humans make mistakes far more often than computers ever do.\n\nStopping development onthese cars would be detrimental to not only progress in the field of transportation, but in the field of scientific advancement as a whole. We cannot continue to fight new ideas simply because they could possibly be unsafe. Mankind did not reach the top of the food chain by running away from the unknown; We reached the top by running toward the unknown.",
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"content": "The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is an amazing tool but using it in a classroom is both helpful and pointless. Being able to find out a persons emotions is a good thing to do but everyone isnt the same and emotions are the same way. people's emotions work in different ways and sometimes people can assume that your either angry.happy or sad just by your facial expression but in all honesty your just cool and thats the problem with the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) because first of all technology isn't always right second of all technology can't reveal or say how a human or person feels because its not that person and the FACS was programed to study facial movements and mucles like it says in paragraph 3 \" the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer modelof the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\" but what if the expression on the person's face that the FACS is programed to think that is the expression for sadness isnt that at all? What if its just that person's regular face and acutally could be happy but because the computer is programed to take the expression of sadness because of his or her facial muscles in conclusion the technology from the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is impressive but it wouldnt really help much for students in a classroom.",
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"content": "Nowadays, new populations are being curious to looking for history of places where they are staying becouse they prefer to know validity of it and foundation to prevent from disasters, hence people use internet and neighbours information to fullfil it. \r\n\r\nFirstly, knowing ancient values of buildings has more benefits in the near future because if residential people suspect to sell their landmarks to new owners, they will gain more economical prospects due to past history of it. Additionally, their houses may be celebrities owernership at the beginning, hence new owners will have higher opportunity to reach more profit. Moreover, before buying expensive house people have used to search capabilities of house for facing disasters like floods and bad weathers. Therefore, when they go through the history, definitly researchers may get knowlege of it, which leads them to get precautions before purchacing. Consequently, buyers already protect from future disadvantages as they have evidence from the past.\r\n\r\nSecondly, people have been finding past of building with using more parthways. There are more online searching engines available in modern society. So, someone do it with simple set of finger movements to know past few decades of the house. As well as, buyers willing to implement from residential senior citizens about background of the houses without depending unrealistic advertisement. For instance, four reporters have shown that as people have been updated about history, they bought new houses efficiently. Forthermore, people have more resources to go through right of knowing before it becomes own property.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, new generation are eager to be aware of history of residential places, hence they look at either online support or humman resources who live in nearly as convenience and efficient approaches fot realise it.",
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"content": "In today age and day techonolgy is changing humans life everyday by taking thier jobs.This techonolgy is most likely to be out in next 5 to 10 years.\n\nIf this techonolgy start working the way governement wants it will cause negative and postive conflict in the world.\n\nThier is only few positive things we can take from driverless car. The first postive thing is we don't have to drive many more.Therefore we will not get tired of long hours drives. The second postive thing is we will not get lost on road because the car GPS know where we need to go. The last positve thing it will help alot of special need or handicapped people who can't drives a car by himself.\n\nThier are a lot of negatives things we can take from driverless car. The first negative is crash. Crash happen with a mistake a driver makes while driving. In this case If the driveless car gets into a road accidents. Therfore all the blame will be put on the car company. The second negative is techonolgy If a small piece of equipment or wireing messes up, it will damage the car. Therefore the driver will be availble to drive his or her car.\n\nIn my conclusion I explained why the driverless cars can affect our daily lifes. I also explained the positves and the negatives about the driverless car. I personal thing driverless cars are the future and it will help to grow our knowledge about techonoly even more.",
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"content": "world without computers Where would get information Would religh television magaziens information changed Or would ever get reports done work home work I know many people nt write neat one read Basically computers effect lives much good way would chaos Computers allow people learn type improve around skills hand eye coordination let us connect places familiar see family members allow people online education help economy Computers effect us good way change every day lives children days type A recent study done showed kids older already know type keyboard Computers big effect us many skills people nt ignoledge enough Because thoes kids know type spell better I remember one time I middle writing report online I got word I nt know always trubble spelling So I took time typed one letter time correct This example shows computers effect everyones lifes even younger kids The way get information computers like way hands get information brain move For example babies learn walk religh brains show s done This like natural disaster earthquake religh computers show us tell us going something like could happen Computers effect us way many things might never know world without Computers effect families everyday lives giving online educations My year old cusin told happy mom could go back college home could spend time together I know might think computers make families get apart actually bring closer together There one choice computers effect us good way They help us learn type connect us world bring families closer together Without computers would nt today",
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"content": "I think that the use of Facial Action Coding System is a good way to help out students in class, because if the computer senses that the student is bored it can modify the lesson as said in paragraph 6. Also it can help out a student to bring their mood up if they don't feel well.\n\nThe first reason why I think that the FACS will be valuable to students is because it can help a bored or confused student to learn an easier way. If the student doesn't understand the lesson, the computer can change it by applying easier and more interesting ways for them to learn. Also the student wouldn't have to worry about making time with a tutor because the computer can help out during class.\n\nThe second reason why I think that the FACS will be valuable to students is because it can help them bring their mood up. In paragraph 9 it states, '' Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion can help someone to produce emotions by just moving their facial muscles.\" If the student feels upset the computer can find different ways to change their mood. The computer can be a therapist to the student by helping them forget about their worries or why they were upset, it can help them have a good day at school too.\n\nThese are the reasons why I think that FACS is a good way to help out students in class. First, to make lessons easier and more interesing. Lastly, to help students to be in better moods.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is just a natural landform although, many others would disagree. Sure, there are many theories of how it could have been made by aliens but, where's all the evidence? There is no evidence for aliens having built the Face and, saying the Face is a natural landform makes much more sense.\n\nSome people have said that it has been built by aliens but NASA is just hiding the evidence. NASA would not hide such evidence even if there was any. NASA would be able to profit if they found proof of ancient or modern lifeforms that built the Face. NASA would receive a bunch of funds to go explore Mars, there would be many people lining up to go, and many more positions at mission control buildings would open up. This would give NASA a lot more oppurtunities to go explore and make money.\n\nOther people have been saying that maybe the evidence hasn't been found yet, but aliens have built the Face. Clear pictures have already been taken of Mars and of Cydonia and show no evidence of aliens living there or having lived there. Pictures haven't shown huts or any other buildings where aliens could have lived. There are also others who say, \"How does a natural land formation end up looking like that?\" Well, the features on the Face are really just shadows of higher points on the Face or holes in the Face. There are also many landforms on Earth similar to the Face such as buttes or plateaus.\n\nThis shows that aliens did not make the Face and that NASA wasn't hiding evidence about aliens building it. It also shows that there is no evidence of aliens having lived on Mars or currently living on Mars. If there were no aliens on Mars, how was the Face made by aliens?",
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"content": "Florida Senators,\n\nThe Electoral College is an unfair process. With multiple presidents winning the popular vote and losing their presidency, it is nondemocratic. Myself, along with many other people across the state, believe that elections should be based on popular vote rather than the decisions of 538 electors. Although the Electoral College has its advantages, I believe that a majority vote by the people of the United States would be more accurate as well as fair.\n\nThe Electoral College is a winner-takes-all system, meaning that candidates spend lots of time campaigning in the \"swing\" states rather than others. In 2000, seventeen states didn't even get to see the candidates. This means that almost 34% of voters didn't get a real feel for who they will be casting their votes for. Even though presidents should focus their time on big states with larger populations, it is unfair to the smaller states who don't get any visits from their candidates.\n\nWith the Electoral College system, voters vote for a slate of electors, rather than the presidents themselves. This means that when you cast your vote for Barack Obama ,for example, you are not voting for him. you are actually voting for a certain number of electors who contribute to the candidate's electoral votes. Electors can be anyone not in public office and they are usually chosen by the state. This is a corrupt system because the electors could be anyone, and change their ideas to not reflect the views of the people. In 1960, Louisiana legislature segregationists almost replaced all of the Democratic electors electors with new Kennedy-opposing electors. The errors and problems in this system could be much greater, and goverment officials must be monitoring it at all times.\n\nIn the event of an Electoral College tie, the president election decision would be given to the House of Representatives, and the vice-president decision to the Senate. This doesn't seem too terribly bad, but one representative from Wyoming would be representing 500,000 voters, and would have as much say as the 55 representatives representing 35 million people inhabiting California. This is not fair because of the widespread views of people in each state. There cannot be one candidate that the whole state agrees on, as people's ideas differ across the states.\n\nThere are many reasons to keep, as well as dispose of the Electoral College. The negatives outweigh the positives and a popular vote would be more democratic. We are supposed to be a democracy, and democracies thrive on the views of the people instead of electors.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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"content": "Capital punishment is always associated with ignorance and intolerance. In fact, we must acknowledge that some people disagree with this kind of penalty, but others vote in its favor. Portugal was the first European country to end this kind of penalty. Since the 19th century, tolerance and respect for life important values. Moreover, we can affirm that remains under the same codes. Maybe because of a religious view point, the respect for life is a typical value in the Old Catholic world.Those who are in favor of capital punishment mostly live in developing countries. However, this is not just an image of the Third World countries. Actually, the USA is one country where this kind of punishment has its rates of application. The state of Texas, in particular, is at the top, supporting this measure against crime, especially those involving serial killers and crimes against children. In a society dominated by fear and government control, it is foreseen that this penalty will continue .Maybe this is not a simple question. As we can see there are several values here and of course cultural behavior. The roots of the question are religious, cultural, ethical and even geographical. The world is divided and the law systems show this division. The solutions, however can lead us to other questions concerning revenge and justice. better to kill a person because of his crimes? Can we admit that a life sentence could be a much better sentence? In fact, rehabilitation is the right way especially with an accurate psychological evaluation first. Some people are lost forever, and in my opinion some murderers and other criminals will suffer more in jail. In this sense, capital punishment is an easy way out.",
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"content": "Requirements for having an academic qualification for applicants are debatable. Some people argue that job applicant's social skills are more valuable than their degrees. This essay will explain why having academic qualifications is far more beneficial than the other.\n\nAcademic qualification is one of the prerequisites when searching for a job. These people studied hard to land their dream job. Education is necessary, due to the fact that this will mould the knowledge and understanding of a person, in the subject or profession that they are aiming for. Having the knowledge is critical in executing a satisfactory result at work. Social skills alone can't bring you anywhere. For instance, some of them are often called \"people pleasers \"at work. They only know how to talk but don't have the capability required to do a job well. That's why companies are hiring employees based on their Educational backgrounds, qualifications and skills.\n\nOn the other hand, having good social skills is also critical for employees to build camaraderie in the workplace. Having a good relationship with your colleagues makes for a better working environment. In contrast, when there is a barrier among co-workers the quality of work may be affected. However, let's not forget that some people are considered introverts but are good at their jobs.\n\nTo conclude, possessing a degree is critical for a smooth flow inside the company while having good social skills is also beneficial among the employees. I would say, that it go hand in hand but ,still I believe, that, having the qualification far more outweighs the other.",
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"content": "Today I going talk certain materials books music movies magazines Should removed shelf found offensive In todays world hard please every living soul Every one going disagree something life time Life know everybody lives different way different place everybody read book listened music even read magazine time People interpride different others Therefore I personally dont think take articules library learn something unless s something like pornograh deffently take My conclusion cant please everybody I think shoul nt take things library help student learn",
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"content": "Features setting affect cyclists greatly Things like weather terrain temperature altitude make break cyclist In essay heat hills road challenge cyclist He keeps going eventually gets civilization This lets know cant mother nature control",
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"content": "Saeng promises In spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test agan The hibiscus meta phorica Saeng childhood Evidently grew Vietnam moved She misses homeland flowers remind homeland She overwhelmed memories breaks cries Change difficult thing overcome adjust especially moving foreign country She cope though planting winter hibiscus way coping She knows eventually adjust major change realized that many things thought strange become almost familiar now She promises retake drivers test hibiscus blossoms like Saeng flower changes also When hibiscus finally overcome cold dreary winter months blooms Saeng know ready take test flower also symbolize going changes The geese story also symbolize changes migrate south winter avoid cold return home warm enough Like Saeng avoid test winter spring feels comfortable",
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"content": "In many countries, the number of the younger population who are less than 15 years old has increased significantly and to a certain extent, this has a detrimental effect on the society, workforce, and the country. This essay is going to shed light on both current and future effects of this trend in countries where the younger generation predominates the bigger portion of their population. \n\nWith regard to the current effect, an increase in the proportion of the younger generation puts enormous pressure on education. To be specific, parents would have to suffer to get their children admitted in a good school due to excessive competition. Furthermore, the government also needs to increase the training of teachers as well as build more schools to meet the needs of students to go to school. If there are insufficient schools and qualified teachers, many poor parents would be forced to send their children to work and earn and this will increase child labour in many developing and underdeveloped countries. However, increasing the younger generation is not always a burden because they can also support the community also contribute to the family by sharing the workload. \n\nIn terms of future influence, the growth of the younger generation boosts the economy developed, in turn putting pressure on employment for young workers. The developed countries, which have greater economic stability and be able to create plenty of job opportunities in the future, the under-aged population, who are accessible to absorb science and technology could become an abundant and a dynamic labour force thrive in modern industries that require a lot of intelligence. On the contrary, if the bucolic fails to ensure jobs and business opportunity when those children will become adults, the outcome would be catastrophic. The unemployment and crime rate would surely rise and that would negatively affect the society. \n\nIn conclusion, an over-rising proportion of the under-15 population has both advantages and disadvantages for most countries. Conversely, if the government has proper development policies, the younger population will be potential in all aspects of that country.",
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"content": "Have you ever heard of high-resolution images and 3D altimetry? If you haven't, it is technology that helps us scientists here at NASA take a closer look at images from the Global surveyor. We have been doing this for quite a while now, and in 1976 we got our first picture of a \"Face\" on Mars. We call it the Face because it has formal structures that look like eyes, a nose, and a mouth. We were very curious about this structure, so we decided to send the surveyor back to get another perspective. We got our second picture in 1998, which came out more clear and looked more like a face. In 2001 we went back for a final time, and we have concluded that this form that looks like a Face is nothing more that just a natural landform.\n\nYou may not believe me when I say this, but trust me, my job at NASA is not only performing tests, but also to put the results into a viewers' perspective. Around 40 years ago, we recieved a funny photo of what looked like a Face, however, technology wasn't too strong back then. With all the tools that we use today, we were able to hypothesize that the Face is just a Martian mesa. A martian mesa is a huge rock formation, it just so happens that this rock had shadows around it giving it the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nTo prove this hypothesis correct, we sent out the Mars Global Surveyor to snap pictures that were ten times sharper that the original photos taken of the Face. After observing these photos, we concluded that the Face is just a simple natural landform, and there was no life on Mars and no alien monument after all. Conspiracy theorists did not believe the tests as they were taken on a cold winter day, they said aliens may have been \"hibernating\". So again on April 8, 2001, we went back and took another shot. This time we were able to finally conclude once and for all, that the Face is nothing but nature on its own course.",
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"content": "According to the article ''Driverless Cars Are Coming'' Google has had cars that could drive indepndently under specific conditions since 2009. The article also states that Sergey Brin, the cofounder of google envisions a future where a public transportation system can include driverless cars. Cars that can drive independently have great positive aspects such as the car driving itself, the car including some of the latest technology, and lastly the person in the car having the abillity to regain control of the car.\n\nDriverless cars can have a positive impact on our society. Cars that can drive themselfs can impact greatly on those who are hurt, or in need of the car itself in a case of emergency. BMW had announced in 2013 the deveopment of ''Traffic Jam Assistant.''\n\n''Traffic Jam Assistant'' can assist those who are in the car with letting the person in the car see what is happening. The car being able to drive around, does in fact have a stopping point. The car would then have to let the person in the vehicle know that they need to gain control of the car. The car also includes a program called Dubbed LIDAR which uses laser beams to create and update a 3-D model of the cars surroundings to copy the skill of a human at the wheel. Google and many other companies are trying their best to augment the capacities of these driverless cars.\n\nThese driverless cars do include most of the latest technology. They include sensors, which have been around since the 1980's. Yet Google and the other companies are still working on adding more technological features to the driverless cars. Most of these feautures are videocameras inplanted near the reaerview mirror, inertial motion sensors, GPS recievers and other things such as a spinning sensor on the roof. These technologies can make driverless cars safer for people on the outside and for those in the inside of the car.\n\n''Driverless Cars Are Coming'' states that all of these things, or the combination of all the input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\n\nIt is important to know that when being inside a driverless car, the person inside can regain control of the car. The person in the car is capable or does have the abillity to regain control of the car. Which means that the human in the vehicle would need to remain alert at all times while the car is driving itsself, especially when an emergency situation or crisis occurs. Driverless cars can not drive themselfs everywhere, they do need some guidance. The car can steer, accelerate, and stop themselves, but the car is designed to notify the driver when the car is in need of assitance or when they require human skills such as navigating through heavy traffic, work zones, or around accidents.\n\n''Driverless Cars Are Coming''\n\nincludes information about how there are these great new cars that are able to drive themselves. They are a positive impact on the lives of many people. People can use these cars when an emergency pops up, such as a mother about to give birth, and not being able to drive herself somewhere. The car having the latest technology such as the car including a facinating program called Dubbed LIDAR which uses laser beams to create and update a 3-D model of the cars surroundings to copy the skill of a human at the wheel. Lastly for a person to regain control of the driverless car in a case of emergency. The article stating that GM is developing a drivers seat to vibrate when the car is in danger of backing up into an object and announcing to the owner or person in the vehicle to be prepared to take over. Driverless cars are the future.",
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"content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger well by telling the reader what happens in Venus and giving details about the benifits of Venus. In paragraph 4 the author used words to make the reader take its head off of Venus being an dangerous planet and how scientists are discussing futher visits to its surface. The author states, \"astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planer in our solar system. The author mentioned this in the article because he wanted to let readers know that even the people who go on Venus come back to be suprised about the things Venus has in the solar system. Also another reason why the author supports the idea that studyimng Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is stating how NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. He states this because he wants us to know how focus these people are on Venus. He gives the people who are intrested in traveling planets details about what projects are being made, devices that are going to make the studies of Venus better and testing out Venus's surface seeing how long it was lasted. Finally, in the last paragraph, the author makes an influence about how audience shouldn't really worry about the dangers of Venus when traveling and look how good it could be. In the paragraph he said, \" Our travels on Earthand beyond should not be limited by dangers an doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. In conclusion, the author uses great details about supporting the idea that studying Venus is outcomings of it that are benifical are good even with the dangers it presents.",
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"content": "In this contemporary epoch, technology made life more convenient for everyone. Whereas, elder ones used less modern gadgets and internet. In my opinion, there are many advantages for older people of using smartphones and internet such as communication, exercise and check-up's and many other and some another methods to encourage them, which I shall discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. \n\nTo begin with, owning to several reasons that emphasise, the benefits of mobile phone towards elder people. Primarily, as many children are went to far from home for their career goal.So, older one's want to talk them and they like to use smartphone for calling purposes. Moreover , some individuals liked to go walking and exercises and they wanted to check the number of calories.Thus , they can burn more to become healthier person . Therefore , there are many positive effects and the best way to usage of mobile phone.\n\nOn the other hand , there are some aspects that determine, the methods to encourage all age group of individuals to use this technology. To a greater extent reason is that advance function of the mobile phone. For instance, iPhone provide a function that measures heart rate of the person, which keep inform that person about their health and there is emergency calling of IOS . This software helps in bad situations such as if preson had an accident at any place .Immediately, the software of iPhone calls to the family of that person .As a result, this things encourage the users to attach with the technology.\n\nTo conclude, it is clear from the above discussion that there are abundant merits of smartphone qnd internet , which makes people lives more convenient and comfortable in every field.",
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"content": "In recent days, various TV programs have increased every day. The effects, it can give advantages and disadvantages in the quality of TV programs. I strongly believe this can be deployed for human lives. \r\n\r\nLooking into more detail, the value of the negative of this improvement can affect every level of humans like children, teenagers, adults and elders people. It will give more information that can not be filtered because of the amount of information from television. For example, there is a lot of information about the celebrity that they can watch on TV programmes.The value of the news, can not be known by people. They can believe the information naturally without cross-checking the information. The results, people will follow the information instead the information is real or fake. This can make followers wrong in directions. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the growing of TV programs can make advantages for citizens. First, they can choose a variety of programs based on their needs. They can filter which program they want to watch. That means they can improved the value of their lives based on their hobbies for example. Second, education can be learned everywhere not only at schools. Children can get information from every TV program that brings news about something new to learn.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, a variety of TV programs can make people more intelligent and learn everything that can make their lives better than before. They can also share information with each other who have similar concerns. They can discuss based on what their was watched before.",
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"content": "Leonardo Da Vinci was one of the greatest reniassance painters of the time. His study of the human anatomy allowed him to create pictures that captured the humna state. On of his most well known paintings is the \"Mona Lisa\". The Mona Lisa is a women that has sort of complacent facial features. She doesn't really look happy or sad. This was the popular thought up until a new technology was created. This technology is called the Facial Action Coding System. This technology is able to deduce what emotion a person is feeling. It is able to do this whothout the person even showing an obvious emotion. This technology can also be implenmented in many spheres of life, including in the classroom. The use of this technology to read the expressions of students in a learning envionement can help students learn more efffectivly by allowing for immediate feedback from a student allowing for the quick shift of a lesson plan, and being able to help and support students emotionally.\n\nThis technology can help get immediate feedback from students. In almost all class rooms nation wide there is a similar routine. Learn something, practice it for homework and then see if a student is understanding it by taking a quiz over it. While this may be effective, it can be imporved ten fold with the Facial Action Coding System. The technology could understand emotion of students in present time. A teacher wouldn't have to wait to give out a quiz to see if students were having issues. They could teach the subject and then immediatly know if students are having difficulty unerstanding it. Dr. Huang, the creator of FACS, states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". If teachers are able to recieve this information, their teaching would become more effective. Teachers could change lesson plans in order to fit the needs of the students, and give extra support and help to those children that are still struggling. FACS can also help excite studnets about learning. This is important because no matter how much a teacher trys to help a student, the studnet will not imporve in anything if thet do not want to learn. If computers are able to read if studnets are excited or bored by a lesson, teachers would add visuals and what not to make it more intersesting to a student. This would make them want to learn, not them being required to learn. totality, the ability to be able to percieve students emotions would help students academically by allowing teachers to change lesson plans that allow for more excitment and understand in classrooms.\n\nTo continue, the FACS technology would help students be more emotionally stable. While school is a vaulable place to learn new information and facts, it is really a place for children to grow and become more independent and better human beings. While grades matter, the emotional and pyschological health of a student is far more valuable. The FACS technology could act as an army of school counselers. High School and Middle School students tend not to share their emotions, even with their parents. FACS could idntify students that are emotionally troubled, have depression, contemplate self harm or even have mental illness. Once students like these are identified then counselers and social workers could step in, allowing for students to be helped. Right now students that struggle with these issues do not share their feelings. They do not get help and carry on like they are fine. While many may turn out to be okay, even one taking their own life or somebody's else, is too much. While FACS may not be able to help or eliminate all signs of emotional distress, it can surely make a difference. Another benfit of using FACS is that it reads emotoins silently. Students don't have to potray a certain emotion for the technology to understand what they are really feeling. If a studnet is asked how they are, they probably give a surface level, I am fine, answer. The technology reads through that completely, eliminating awkard one on one conversatoins with conselers, and allowing for all students to be reached.\n\nWhile there are many positives to this technology some might argue that computers cannot actually calculate human emotion. They argue that human emotion is not somehting that can or should be understood because it would ruin the entirety of feeling certain ways. However, while some arguements may be warranted, many are based off of falsehoods. To begin, emotion can be understood on a scientific level. Emotion is in the brain, not the heart. The way the FACS understands emoion is simple. It maps out a 3-D model of the face, looks at the shape and positoin of all the muscles, then it associates the different facial movements with differet emotion. For example, your orbicularis oris (muscles around your mouth) tighten your lips to show when you are angry. It even works when a person it trying to mask emotions. During a fake smile, the zygomatic major stretches the mouth sidways, while in a real smile the zygomatic major lifts the corners of the mouth. These examples can show how science IS able to understand emotoin, probaly better than most humans. Arguments that use that falshood, that science is unable to understand emotion, is completly false.\n\nIn conclusion, the ability to read the actual emotion and reactions of students in class rooms is extremely valuable because it allows for greater understanding and excitment of a subject, along with the ability to help students be emotionally stable. If this technology is implemented into schools, studnets will overall do better, feel better and make a brighter world for tomorrow. FACS is something revolutionary that hopefully all of us can learn somthing from.",
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"content": "How many absolutely love read Well im going first confess I prefer reading Meanwhile whether I prefer differ readings types I despise negative books Censoring books important today s lifestyle One make inference looking cover book The cover oftens creates vivid image usually promote general idea Let s look reasons I feel graphic offensive books removed book shelves What younger children like read Although kids wild imaginaion authors shouldt fill heads many crazy ideas First kids days either grab book shelf show interest quickly automatically assume s Furthermore kid comes across offensive book could hurt feelings Books supposed provide eductional information entertaining They dirty discouraging towards certain people More importantly many different races even around world Many different races take interest new books learn new ways When come across books teaching races actknowledging bad examples thier kind feel discouraged Whether s movie magazine books even song never offensive towards anyone When authors publishers song writers movie producers release items think surroundings Thier main concept entertain sometimes entertainment quite bashful Most importantly contains sexual gestures removed without debate It s offensive parents young children visit libraries A public library open sections books movies cd s magazines vivid There s wide range books laying around one come across one strongly offensive I believe word whether book belongs shelf I ve experienced yet believe could happen anytime world today If parent I would nt encourage sexual magazines books shown public library Finally debate older dirty minded people counterargue topic Who says children allowed adult sections Why discouraged people reading books setting bad examples Those questions counter I ve written today Adults allowed personal section adultlike books movies magazines Kids age stick searching books areas fields provide interest In conclusion counterargue could winning side however I still believe offensive books removed shelves Book lovers around world want enteratinment good ways The younger children time right need influenced proper way Furthermore better way help improve society removing offensive noninfluential books libraries Lets make inference say work remove offensive books younger children become educated",
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"content": "How would you like your camero to drive you around all the time. You can have a car like this and let me tell you: driverless cars are a good idea. This is proven by several high points in this article. Driverless cars currently have set backs also pointed out in this article.\n\nRigth now people are working too bring a new mode of tranportation into play, the driverless car. These machines have the ability to cut gass price too half. They can go on while a driver rest. These machines can make deliverys without a driver, which would help the economy.\n\nOnly one problem, they not ready. Currently the car can only do so much without needing assisance. It cannot navigate complicated traffic and, it cannot drive around roadwork.\n\nYet this is not to be worried about . As technology advances we make more improvements to the system. Soon driveless car will be able to handle all problems thrown its way. Untill then keep your eyes on the road we are still waiting.",
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"content": "Technology has come a long way in only the last few decades.\n\nScientists and engineers are trying countless new ideas. Over the past few years they have experimented with new notions involving the \"smart car\", enabling a car to be driven without the aid of a human being.\n\nThis idea, however is going too far.\n\nCars need humans.\n\nSmart cars could lead to numerous safety and liability issuse.\n\nMost of the \"driveless\" cars still need a driver.\n\nThey are \"semi-autonomous\".\n\nWhen not having to drive, the driver would most likely become bored.\n\nEven Dr. Werner Huber admits that, \"The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge\" (8).\n\nWith this challenge in mind, some have introduced ideas such as putting up in-car entertainment systems.\n\nHowever, having to switch back and forth between driving and the entertainment would be a hassle, especially if it were just a short trip.\n\nAlso, with someone who travels a lot and spends a majority of their time in the car, the systems could become tiresome in the long run, and they would most likely become bored again.\n\nWithout the human brain controlling tthe car, and only with the reliance on the engineering, the smart cars could malfunction and numerous accidents could occur.\n\nEspecially after a few years, the cars could become old and rusty and even the high precision put into making the cars perfect could run haywire.\n\nStates such as, \"California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia\" (9), who have outlawed computer-driven cars agree in terms of limiting the use of semi-autonomous cars.\n\nNot being able to control the car, people's lives would be in danger and it could cause cases such as cars driving off the side of the roads or crashing into each other.\n\nThe possibility of all of these crashes also brings up a liability issue, \"If the technoogy fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?(9)\".\n\nHaving the issue of the smart car would only create new problems, like having to create many new laws.\n\nCases like these could lead to sueing and hundreds of court cases which would not bring any positive aspect to the table.\n\nDriveless cars should be banned for at least another few centuries.\n\nCars need the intelligence and control of the human mind.\n\nThese autonomous cars could lead to liability and safety issues which would make lives, in turn, harder on the majority of the population.",
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"content": "Hi my name is PROPER_NAME and I work for NASA discussing with someone who thinks that the face was created by aliens but I said \"Well it couldn't be created by aliens because we all know is that aliens are not real\" and so I am still trying to figure out how this face has been created.\n\nWhen I saw the pictures from 1976 to 2001 I saw one of the pictures and the picture from 1998 it looks like that something has hit the face and causing it to destroy it and to me it looks like a metor hit the face and in 2001 the face looks like its fading away and in 1976 it looks like it was popping out but when a metor hit it its goes away.\n\n\"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photoraping Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept.1997, eighteen long years after the Viking mission ended.\" Paragraph 6.",
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"content": "Driverless cars could be the way of the future. As these cars are being created, more and more states will allow for the uses of them on their roads. I personally think that driverless cars will be good for the world, but they will have prices as well. Driverless cars will help prevent accidents, will help the environment, but will also change the demands for certain jobs, possibly leading to job loss or gain.\n\nDriverless cars will significantly help lessen accidents on the road. With computers and sensors running the car, the car will be able to see and think faster than we can. The sensors will also be able to see 360 degrees around the car too. This will help with car collisions, as well as reducing the amount of pedestrian injuries. These cars use position-estimating sensors, video cameras, radar sensors, GPS, and inertial motion sensors in order to correctly drive without a driver. With all of this technology improving day by day, we could definitely see driverless cars in the future.\n\nThe driverless car taxi-like system could work great. With people only needing to pay for the taxi-prices, people could use money, in which would be used to purchase a car, for other things. Gas would be used much less with these cars, hopefully, due to expanding eco-car technologies. Gas would also be used less around the globe because things like crashes and accidents will happen much less, so traffic will be reduced in many places. This will help with the air pollution that cars now create.\n\nThese driverless cars, however, will also lessen the need for doctors in the world. Doctors and sugeons wouldn't be needed for fixing up people from an accident. This could lead to a decrease in the amount of medical school students, possibly leading to even more unemployment if teachers are layed off. This will greatly change which jobs would be in high demand. Driverless cars will also make jobs, though, as people will be needed to fix, maintain, and build the cars.\n\nI believe that driverless cars could be a great thing for society. With more money for people to spend, people might donate more money to charities and to people who need money more than themsleves. Drilling for oil could become less demanding, leading to the saving of many environments. Jobs would be created for people who can build these cars, come up with new ideas, work on and repair these cars, maintain the cars, and so on. These cars would really change life as we know it now, but that might not be such a bad thing.",
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"content": "Driverless cars can very well be benifical to our future,but those driverless cars could cause problems with consumers and the companies selling the cars.\n\nThe technology needed for making a fully driverless car is not quite in our reach, but in the near future we might have all the technology that can propel us into having driverless car. In the article it says that the cars we have now are not completely driverless and can only assist the driver. That means that drivers still have to be paying attention and take over when the car meets road work or any unexpected thing that might pop up.\n\nIf cars went driverless the driver would get bored and not pay attention to the road. Which could lead into the car having an accident. The car would have to have an added feature to it to keep the drivers attention while they are being drove by the car.\n\nThe driverless cars would have an impact on the road laws as well as people of non-driverless cars. The article says Road laws would have to be changed to cover the liability of an accident. If the road laws have to be changed due to driverless cars what would the drivers of non-driverless cars do. The driver would have to adapt to new road laws focused toward cars that drive themselves.\n\nThe technology could flat out be a bust and not co- operate with the driver or at all. The article states if the technolegy fails then the companies who made those cars would be to blame. Which could be a bankruping end to a company.\n\nThe truly autonomous car strecthes on ahead of us, but we grow closer each day is a statement from the passage that car companies should stop talking about. Driverless cars seem a to big much time and money for something that could glitch and end someones life. Driving assistance is more what should be focused towards that way the driver is in control yet is being watched closely by the car.\n\nThe driverless car can be seen as the next big benificial thing; but it could cause problem with many people and companies.",
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"content": "In a big city or a rual area all you see are cars flying past you at high speeds and releasing their gas fumes into the atmosphere. Having no cars is a great solution to having no traffic and less polution. Without cars our air would be fresh and it wouldnt take as long to get from place to place.\n\nAlthough many people have cars and drive them regularly it is not always the best choice. Having no cars would be a drastic change to society but it would also be a major change in the way we travel and breathe in air. In Vauban, Germany the residents have gave up on cars. The streets are car free. \"As a result, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there\". This piece from the text tells us that hardly any one is driving a car their. One of the residents says \"When I had a car I was always tense. Im much happier this way\" this lets us no that without a car the resident is much happier and is not tense. Car release greenhouse gas emissions from there tailpipes. In the article \"In German suburb, life goes on without cars\" it says that \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\". That is insane to think that much is released, but its happening daily from everyday car users. The environmental agency is trying to promote car reduced communities. Polution got so bad in Paris that they had to enforce a partial driving ban. After enforcing this the texts says \" congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog\". So limiting their drving in Paris reduced the smog. It is not always the best choiceto drive all the time exspecially if you job or social event your going to isn't far. In \"The end of car culture\" it says \" organize your summer jobs and social life around where you can walk or take public transportation or car-pool\". By doin those things it will reduced smog and gases getting into the air.\n\nBy not having any cars it would reduce polution, give us safer air to breathe, and it would be easier to get from place to place with any traffic. Cars release tons of gases and polute the air. WIthout cars it would reduce that problem. With less cars on the road and mostly public transportation it would be easy to get around instead of getting caught up in traffic. So not having cars wouldn't be such a bad thing after all.",
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"content": "The problem of collaboration between parents and children still remains the one of the main problems which significantly affects the state of each family and society in general. According to sociologists, there is currently a tendency to decrease the relationship between parents and children. Children of past generations used to get much more attention and care from their parents than they do today. However, is this a real problem? Let's look at some facts that might confirm or reject this statement.\r\n\r\nNow days every child is using different gadgets in daily life as well as at school, when he is playing or studying, from sunrise to downlight. At the same time parents doing the similar things but on another level. They’re building career, they take care of their health and body, they’re concentrating on themselves. Children and parents are living together, but in separate worlds. They obviously don’t need each other, because they can always make up for the lack of care and attention in virtual reality of various social networks. \r\n\r\nWhat can we say about children of previous generation? I remember my childhood very clear. My parents worked hard every day to ensure a normal life for me and my sister because it was a difficult and unstable time. I’d spend all the time at school or at art classes or with friends playing basketball, walking and discovering my small world. Hence, I never suffered because I was deprived of my parents love, neither I never felt alone and abandoned, I suppose as well as my friends. \r\n\r\nTo summarize briefly, I would like to note that in every time there will be diverse problems within the family between parents and children. Of course, sometimes we might feel miserable when we don’t get enough attention or carry. But we have to constantly remember that our parents love as no one else and do everything for us.",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System that reads emotional expressions would be valuable in the classroom becuase it could tell the teacher how the students are feeling about the assessment and it could help the techer be more effective in students learning.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be helpful because it could tell the teachers the emotions of the students towards the lesson and it can be used as a communication tool in the classroom. For example, the article says \"Dr.Chang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\". Therefore, the technology is a valuable tool becuase it helps the teacher and students communicate for better learning. Too add, the article also says \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness. Hence, the evdience shows that the technology used can help students and techers communicate for a better learning space in the classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be valuable for teachers to understand how the students are feeling about the assessment and help them get a idea for what they can change to better the students learning. For example, the article says \" A classroom computer could recongzie when a students is becoming confused or bored\". Therefore, the use of the technology can show the teachers the emotions that the students are having to help them be more focused or not confused. Too add, the article also says \"Then it could mofify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". Hence, the evidence shows that the technology can benifit the teacher by help them change around there lesson plan to ensure better learning for the student.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can also be valuable in the classroom by helping the teacher understand the student is counfused without verbaly talking to the student. For example, the article says \"Most huamn communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". Therefore, this shows that if the student is feeling embarresed becuase he/she doesn't understand something then the teacher can come over and explain to the student whats going on or how to understand the problem with them feeling like that. Too add, the technology also can tell the teacher the students is having a bad day and wants to be left alone. Hence, the technology is valuable way for teachers to know whats going on with the student.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is valuable because it's used as a way to show student behavior it shows how students are feeling about the assessments, and it could be helpful to teachers by showing them what the students like and don't like.",
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"content": "When I really patient I wonti pcar mother cook lazuge I haved scence pass away My mom cook first birthday cooked first birthday party goned My mother cooked pans It good gone soon put I say soon I mean soon I turned years old My mother big birthday party My mom died open heart sergrey She years old She alto friends furnal The furnal nice But getting back I writing In I asked To cook She said ito girl coust much make I said want gived money cook food She said save little money I said its okay take money buy lazangae cook She said girl I say So I hurry put money pocket Then I keeping moving When got truck said I going cook I get money I pay bills In cooked The day cooked My antyes came got brother sister got got When wont I I stood watch get stop getting Selfer got I tell anoft I live house My brother sister lives The lanag lasted days When cooked I happy I brang school ate lunch",
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"content": "The need for charity organizations has been increasing during the pandemic. Some people argue that schools should add volunteer jobs to their graduation requirements. Doing so is beneficial for both students and the community. I completely agree with this statement. \r\n\r\nFirstly, it is crucial for children in development to learn the importance of dedication to their own association and become responsible folk. No one could survive without help and support from others. A majority of teens have not noticed this truth as they only do something when they are sure that they could have a huge outcome from that. For example, they decided to work at the convenience store because their salary is sufficient. By volunteering in their free time, they could learn from people who are dependent on outside resources such as shelters, which leads students to re-think how fortunate their situation is. \r\n\r\nSecond, increasing the number of assistants in the volunteering task is significant for the neighbourhood. During the pandemic, the portion of the family is doubled, who are not able to afford basic life. A supervisor at the local food bank in the neighbourhood stated that because of the overwhelming number of customers, a shortage in staff occurred and some of the customers have to leave the place without being fed. Introducing students to such places would be an exceptional support that cannot be described in words for the association.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree with the idea that any educational institution should encourage its students to perform at charity organizations in their free time. This will make students mentally mature and dedicate themselves to their own community. Furthermore, this idea would be an outstanding help for shelters that are overwhelmed by the growing number of customers.",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author, Nick D'Alto, provides information on FACS (Facial Action Coding Systems). I beilieve that this technology is valuable, because it could be used for educational, political, and entertainment purposes.\n\nThe first reason that the FACS system is valuable is that it could help students learn. D'Alto quotes Dr. Huang when he says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it coud modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(D'Alto 6). This technology would make sure that every student has the help they need if they are confused. D'Alto also says \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive -- for video games or video surgury\"(D'Alto 6). The FACS could be used for medical training as well as every day learning.\n\nSecondly, the FACS could be used for politics. In the article D'Alto states \" The can even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\"(D'Alto 7). This applies to politics, because politions who are ingenuine would be easily caught. D'Alto furthurs this thinking by saying \"these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" polititian or celeberty isn't being truthful.\"(D'Alto 8). This shows that this field of study is already applied to politics, but that the FACS will only inporove our ability spot the fakers.\n\nLastly, this technology could be used for entertainment purposes. D'Alto mentions that mimicking facial expression is used in the acting world. D'A;to say that an acting coach has his actors \"carefully reproduce smiling and frowning faces as a way of creating these emotions on stage.\"(D'Alto 9). The FACS could help these actors more accuratly display the emotions their characters are feeling. Another way D'Alto says FACS could impove entertainment is by saying \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive--for video games\"(D'Alto 6). Making the characters in video games more expressive would have the same affect as making actors expressions more accurate. It creates a sense of realism and emersion to the audience, thus inproving the experience as a whole.\n\nIn conclusion I believe the FACS system could be very valuable in many ways.\n\nIt can help students study, call out fake celeberties or polititians, or make entertainment better.",
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"content": "Hello my name is Daniel, I think that driverless cars are some what of a good idea and also a bad idea. The reasons why driverless cars are good are because we dont have to drive, they could drive themselves for us, we could go anywhere we want, so we dont have one person driving and the other people having fun in the back, they could all have fun together.\n\nThat's where it may go bad what if the driverless car goes out of control because probably the system shut down and causes a small or big accident, and then theres injuries or even death depending on how serious the crash was, just because there was nobody at the wheel.\n\nSure you may think that driverless cars are awsome but could you actually trust it enough to drive you places or take your kids to school enstead of you taking them or going out to places like resturants, the mall, or amusement parks. Like I said before the driverless car could go out of control and cause an accident.\n\nIf I had to choose a car or a driveless car, i'll prefer to choose a normal car because I think that they are more safer then a driverless car, I think that its awsome to drive yourself around instead of a driverless car, like for example there are many people in this world who like to drive fast and go to places on time. I may not know a-lot about driverless cars but I think that it will always change speed when it passes a new speed limit and stay constant. There is also another reason why people may not like driverless cars because they are always being tracked, and I dont think people like being tracked or spyed on.\n\nI've seen many accidents that have accured with driverless cars, like here's an example that i've seen where there was a women driving a google car and the google car crashed into the another car at a high speed and she suffered many injuries. I think that i wouldn't want a driverless car if the cant even stop when a crash is about to happen. Also in the artical it said they sometimes you have to take control of the wheel when the driverless car cant drive in sertain areas, so that meens there has to be someone at the wheel at all times because it also said that you sometimes have to wait until you drive. Who wants to wait until it says its your turn to drive, I mean I wouldnt what if you where doing something and it started telling you its your turn and you dont reach the wheel in time and you crash. If you where driving a normal car you will always be alert becuase you may never know when you'll crash but you will always be at the wheel driving yourself around.",
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"content": "Have ever library asked yourselve following questions Who reads Why Are kids reading watching stuff Do kids check Or ever wondered said self statements I nt want kids pick read This offensive This goes morals I nt know kind freak convention I m part Lets get This place wack Ever consider books get banned library Who bans books I think things offensive pull shelves I think stick side library put age certain age check books I dont think cussing books offensive When person No matter goes world They going learn hear curse words People use like words and the They going hear till thier grave Wheather chose use s thier choice For banned moved diffrent group books sexist raciest alot sex really grusome I think go upstairs mushy romance wacked western I mean people could go check adult library area The staircase circulation desk When busy go upstairs check see young children I think The top level certain area adult area They mushy lovey dovey stuff cow boy shoot stuff offensive stuff The stuff much sex really raciest really sexist grusome stuff like people killing people funAlso adult magazines Do nt act like nt know im talking You know go aisl market girls thier bikini half naked Then cosomos upstairs I mean talk give pleasureable sex I would hate little year old year old pick thing would scarred life Then main level area teen books You know vampire books heros crazy fiction stuff magazines movies nt bad Then bottom level children level Games puppets movies easy books That sums I dont think anybody able ban book I think open anyone There huge meeting With mayor couple teachers one english teacher level parents librabiens The person wants banned tell everyone stuff Like Author Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But right remove book shelf also exact right everyone else And books left us",
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"content": "What library A library place go books movies music magazines etc With things person research use entertainment Should censorship libraries In opinion censorship library If complaint offended something library removed shelf would nothing left use library Many people like go library relax good peace quiet time library let minds flow imaginate dream They nt worry offended book However censorship library good thing used delicately For example moving grown books section children read nightmares picture saw What I m trying say censorship library low standard If library high censorship everything taken shelf point going library would empty room If someone offended something library depending severe offended take appropiate measures For instance something offended someone unintentionaly leave something offends someone intentionaly race ethnicity something like would appropriate take shelf Having low censorship libraries would good would good quantity stuff research would topics choose let imagination soar While time would worry severely offended",
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"content": "When this land mass was first found in 1976 there were many thoughts about this object on Mars were created.\n\nNow that modern technology has helped aid us, we have a clear image of what the land mass is and can be.\n\nThere is much evidence to prove that this is a land mass.\n\nIn 1998 a Mars Global surveyor had captured an image of what it turned out to be, a mesa.\n\nMany people who believe in aliens thought this was a sign of hope for civilization on Mars. So when the news came in about the face, people went on about there ideas and theories of life on Mars.\n\nThe formation of the mesa was thought to look like an Egyptian Pharoah.\n\nThe idea that scientists concluded was that the mesa was formed to ironically look like a human head.\n\nThere were shadows that formed a nose, eyes, and a mouth and people were tricked into believing that there was an ancient civilization on the Red Planet.\n\nOnce there was actual proof that it was a mesa, the theories died down.\n\nBut in the end, is NASA actually hiding evidence from us?\n\nIs there actually an ancient civilization?\n\nWe will just have to wait and find out.",
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"content": "The Empire State Building wanted allow dirigibles dock top To would need build mast top dirigibles could hook refuel They ran lot problem right bat kept running The first problem many could plop mast top would unstable cause much stress structure To prevent ended modifying strengthening structure whole costing sixty thousand dollars Once figured equal wind pressure think bring dirigibles answer simple electrical winches The next problem safty dirigibles outside used highly flammable hydrogen blew would good densely populated city Another safety issue nature s violently shifting winds solve problem ground would waive back lead weights keep sweying air lot people could unsafe The final nail coffin plan law bidding airships fly low urban areas",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper everday technology developed One biggest popular machines technocle society computer Some people nt like computers The think computers ruining social skills healthy bodys The reason I m writing presuade people realize greatness lies inside computer For starters computers help us recivegive One great featurs computers give email Without email would completley loop For example snowday childs school recive email usper intendent saying school si cancled Without email woulde nt able know Another example say lost voice terrible cold You nt feel good need call work report sick Now re stuck voice computer could simply emailed boss Another posative tool computers gives us making communicating esayer With social networking avalible like twitter yahoo messanger It nearly impossible stay contact friends faimly using look old friends faimly Once youve found friend request become online friends Once youre online friends instant message video chat look status browse photos So computer nearly impossible able keep touch The last final reason computers great make shopping much esayer used amazon ebay overstock know I m talking buy almost anything online From electronics animals The list endless With computer even get house hold groceries online For example say home work explosive diharrea But need go grociery shopping You ve toilet day alls youve got laptop Well shop online So see computers help us communicate shop get recive",
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"content": "This map describes the possible areas for a leisure centre. It is clear from the graph that the three selected areas have different characterestics which make each of them as unique place.\nAccording to what is shown, place A is very close to some industries and that make it unsuitable to be a leisure center. Moreover, this area is not healthy due to the pollution that comes from the industries' smok.\nFor the second area (B), this location is close to the some buildings where people live and that is good choice. However, the only negative of this place is that it will be noise. However, location C is the beast due to its location. It is located faraway from any kind of pollution. People can breath fresh air and enjoy the grean areas.\nTo summarize, we could say that, location C has several positives that make it the best choice for a leisure centre.",
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"content": "Limiting car usage will most definitly lead to an overall better economy due to several reasons. Less car pollution will clean up the air, there wouldnt be much traffic and people will take local buses and taxis so that would reduce emissions. All around the world, differant countries are doing things to limit car usages and they definitly work.\n\nIn Germany, there is a community called Vauban where cars are not permitted unless you pay for a $40,000 parking space. This is helping lower emissions and they have noticed a differance. There are stores and resturants that are in walking distance to the people so they do not need to worry about long distances. When people have necessitys right near them, the only thing they would ever have to worry about is getting to work, but there are taxis and buses that can do that for you so there is no need for a car.\n\nDifferant places around the world are also limiting the uses of cars. In Paris, they enforced a partial driving ban to clear up the smog. What they did was made it so odd and even liscence plate numbers would switch off each day so that it would cut the number of people driving in half. If you get caught driving with the banned liscence plate number for that day then you would have to pay a 22 euro fine. Traffic went down nearly 60 percent because public transit was free of charge for the days cars were banned. About a week later, the French party decided that the smog had cleared up enough for them to lift the ban.\n\nIn other countries there are special days in the year where cars are not aloud. In Bogota, Colombia, there is a certain day where all cars are banned and only buses and taxis are permitted and violators would face a $25 fine. Many other cities and counties are seeing that these days would help clear pollution and they ar very intrieged by it and more than 118 miles of bicycle paths have been made since the mid 1990s. Many diffrant parks and sports centers have been built across the city and upscale shopping districts and resturants also bloomed.\n\nMany people are finally realizing one of the biggest pollution emissions and are trying to cut back on the number of cars on the road. Everybody should try carpooling or taking public transits and taxis instead of driving thier own cars. It would drasticlly reduces smog as proved by many differant countrys car limitations. Even once a year if they had a day where noone drove, there would probably be a noticable differance in the pollution levels but noone will know for sure until it happens.",
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"content": "It could be of good use. For example say you have a student that isnt having a good week. Lets say you cant fully tell if they are in a good or bad mood right. You could just bring the \"FACS\" Machinery and let that be the judge. We could also say that there are people who know how to hide emotions physically. So looking at them might let you think they are happy but really they are sad, lonely, depressed, ect. That would be another good momment for that to be there. To let you know how the person is really feeling.\n\nThere are both pros and cons to having this machine ill go over the pros first. Some pros are that you will be able to tell someones mood. Aswell as that you will be able to tell if someone is lying about there true feelings which could really be a problem when it comes to things like depression leading to suicides and things. Finally being able to know someones emotions could work to your favor as a teacher say someone is confused but to shy or scared to ask. Use the \"FACS\" machine to get them out of there. Some cons would be things like it could take priceless time out of your teaching to use the machine. They didnt give a estimate of how long it takes but i'd expect it to be a pretty long time. Also it could take a big price hit on the schools around the nation, I couldnt imagine this being a cheap device. Finally it could be useless. Some teachers wont take time out of their class to use it because frankly they just dont/wont care. Which would be a total bust seeing that the school would waste so much money just for it to go to waste.\n\nI honestly think its amazing how someone can tell you how they are feeling at that moment. The diversity must be off the walls. it must be 1 in a million to get the same feeling. Its crazy the things we can do now a days with technology. People are coming up with more and more ways to initiate a more satisfactory lifestyle. Its always good to see someone take that inititive and start something like this. Seeing this I wonder what could be next.",
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"content": "Dear congress, 1. I belive that everything you guys do is amazing. Except onr thing, the Elecotoral college. In my opionion having one is just a waste of time, money and effort. Why spend money on Electores when you can just spend that money on anything else, you could let the people of the U.S decide thatb for themselfs. Accoring to a artical i read about the year 2000 , 60% of voters would rather have a direct election from popluar vote then to have the Electoral college (source #2).I f more then half of the U.S popluation(which is in the millions)wants there to be no electoral college and have the president win due to popular vote, then what are we waiting for?\n\n2. Think about it, if the people where the ones to pick the u. s president they would choose someone that they think would be best for the country. There might not be any conflict in the white house about who picked who , because they didnt choose anyone. The electoral college consist of 538 members each state having more or less depending how big there state is,for exampel texas would have more then ohio since its much larger. or florida aving more then new york ect......\n\nA majority of 270 electoral votes most be given to a party for that president to win.\n\n3. In conclusion, i think that a electoral college is use less and they should let the people decide on their president.",
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"content": "I think that the use of the technolohy should not be used because then parent would be complaining how it is not fair for a teacher or students to know her sons/daughters expression. Also I personally think that we shouldn't allow them because then teachers would always be focused on the kids that aren't as happy and are confused on the work or lesson they are learning. I also think that it would also be a good idea for the whole school because if a student is to shy to speak up and they dont know how to do something then the teacher can talk to him/her after class. I think that using this technology will be to much too and the school will have to use millions of dollars just to buy some for a whole class. I know this becuase the author says \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode mocode Mona Lisa's smile. Then they show us how we can do it at home and how we can make use smile or happy. In the artical is states \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. (\"Putting on a happy face\" actually works\" So at the end of the day I personally don't think we schools should have this type of technogoly and be more focused on other technologys like finger print sign in or school resources.",
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"content": "If humans were to use this technology, who is to say we would not advance it, and take it much further. That could be problomatic. Reading someones facial features could be a good thing, but also a horrible mistake.\n\nIf we were to use FACS in a school setting, it could be used to show if someone is lying or cheating, because it would read their expressions. Then what would happen would be that students may try to cover the senser or camera to block the machine, making it outright pointless. Not to mention, it would be ripping the users confidentiality away from them as it may record what the user does to more easily tell their emotions. Now it recording the emotions is not bad, but the people who could get their hands on it are. It does state in the text \" 'The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.' \" This may be true, but if that is the case, why cant we just read emotions ourselevs, instead of making a robot do it for us.\n\nThere is nothing wrong with asking if someone is sad or mad, but there is someting wrong with telling them how they feel. If compaired to anyone who makes the same expressions, how are we to be certin that they are our emotions, and not someone elses. Yes we all frown, and we all smile, but; what if some of our ways to show our smile are different, then it may be computed incorrectly, causing someone or something to go wrong when using this program. This is why we should not use FACS in any place. It just rips away our own thoughts, replacing them with a genric persons emotions.",
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"content": "Autonimous cars are a reality. Corporations such as Google, General Motors, and enigineers at Berkley have all created, to a certain extent, autonimous vehicles. A few more companies including Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan have announced their plans to have autonimous vehicles by 2020. But are autonimous vehicles really the best? Who would be responsible for crashes? Will they be as safe as regullar vehicles? Will they be able to be hacked? Even though the autonimous car is possible is it really safe?\n\nFirst, how would autonimous vehicles respond to a wreck? It is clearly stated in paragraph 7 \"but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills\". So what happens in the event of a crash? One car wrecks and it causes a huge domino effect. One car after another, pile up because they do not know how to deal with the situation.\n\nSecond, in the event of a wreck who is responsible? The owner of the vehicle or the manufacturer? While the vehicle does belong to the owner and he did know about potential problems, the manufacturer should be able to deliver a completely safe vehicle to a customer.\n\nThat brings me to another issue. No one can confrim 100% that an autonimous vehicle will not wreck. There wil alway be human error in the manufactoring process. Now you might say; but they will be assembled by robots, so there wont be any human error. Well: who assembled the robots, who programmed them? Humans did, thus introducing human error into the problem.\n\nAnother thing to be worried about is terrorism. Will these cars be able to be hacked? A terrorist could hack into an autonimous vehicle and use for whatever he desires. He could drive a bomb anywhere he wants. No place would be safe or out of rech of a terrorist.\n\nAs you can see there are many propposed problems with autonimous cars. Wrecks, responsibility, human error, and terrorism are just a few of them. The truth is that there will always be some sort of problem with autonimous cars. Glitches and human error willl make sure of that. The idea of a fully autonimous car is fascinating, but are they really the best for america?",
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"content": "Driverless cars should not be something that is utilized this early on in time. Driverless cars could be a high advancement in autonomous technology, however, the safety risks and other such cons outweigh the benefits. These vehicles do not have the evidence to support that they would definitely be one hundred percent safe when driving out and about the actual roads of life. Granted that Google does have test runs that have occured on controlled courses, but these can be very very different from actual public streets. Driverless cars put our own people at risk solely because some would like to be lazy and not have to drive themelves.\n\nDriverless cars pose a large threat to the general populace. These autonomous vehicles could potentially take hundreds of lives a year; possibly thousands. Although there may be some good things about switching to autonomous cars, there are many more bad. These cars are robotic, and not human operated. The human brain has a very efficient way of knowing when something is unsafe, and preventing that from happening. These cars couldn't notice if there were road traffic ahead, and if they were to continue driving, it could cause an accident. The same scenario goes for if there were someone walking across the road, a pedestrian.\n\nThe idea of putting a camera into this car to watch the driver is ludicrous. Privacy is a very big deal these days, and there aren't many who'd sacrifice that for anything. The fact that the driver would be continually watched whhile in the car would turn many people away instantly. Judging by the risks involved in this vehicle, it may take a lot to get it approved, and if nothing else, you should try to have the people on your side.\n\nAnother issue of these unmanned vehicles is the limit of travel. What if somebody were wanting to go on a road trip? These vehicles surely only have a specific operating range, judging by the fact that they were said to be put in place of a taxi service. The efficiency isn't enough to outweigh all of these risks and con's. The safety risks and other such con's outweigh the benefits of driverless cars, however, they have the potential be a high advancement in autonomous technology.",
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"content": "A time I patient fishing grandpa north siting day trolled chanel least times And time got bites never caught fish We tried usal routine wasnt working well I decided change bit I gave grandpa idea turning boat around heading towda shigle bay He agred problem lot rocks going thats last thing need prop get broken But took chances modered I direted go soon enter bag bam We see pale bend far hard believe fish I got net grandpa grabed pole started real evently go surface wallege smiled said looks like fish night story patients tested fish I caught biggest one lake",
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"content": "The author thinks that studying Venus is a great opportunity because Venus is one of our neighbor planets, and we have many things in common. One of the andvantages he mentions is that \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit\" because he knows that space travel takes a lot time, and we have to take the chaces we get to do it. He also explains to us that Venus is similar to earth, for example, it has familiar features like the surface, valleys, mountains and crates. Venus also has one of the hottests planet temperature in the solar system. All of this tell us that even though is a little dangerous, and sometimes there can be hostile conditions that it's worth it because we have created solutions.The author says that NASA came up with a way that humans could possible go there, and not be in harms way. The idea that they came up with was to have some kind of \"blimp-like vehicle\" that could hover or float above\n\nthe frey so that humans get harmed. Lastly we can see that the things that we could discover from Venus could probably benefit our planet since Venus is similar to it.",
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"content": "Since 2009 companys such as google have been developing diverless car. The earlier models could only drive under certain conditions, because of the lack of available technology. With the technology that is availible for the scientist today and is being developed driverless cars can truely be driverless. These driverless cars are not being approved by many states in the country. These state's lawmakers are under the belief that that are not safe, even though the cars are still being developed and requires human assistance. Driverless cars are the future of the world, which people and lawmakers should accept.\n\nDriverless cars should be developed because they are the next milestone in technoloy. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" it is stated that Google cofounder Signey Brin, \"Believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" He correct because driverless could be used as a form of public-transportation which would save fuel and be flexible than than our present public-transpotation. The driverless cars can also allow people to have more time and the ability to multitask in the future. So by allowing the present day driverless cars to be tested in move places would allow for more development to be made to these cars of the future.\n\nDriverless cars will be the next major breakthrough in technology. Car company such\n\nas Telsa, Mercades-bens, Audi, and Nissan are developing and working toward a future with these cars. Driverless car can be used as a more substainable replacement for public-transportation. With more support of the peolpe and lawmakers the idea of truly Driverless cars can be achieved through more developement. Being against the development of thes cars is being against the future of technology. Instead people should accept the driverless cars with open arms.",
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"content": "Art is considered mandatory for the young ones at school, however, others believe the time should be used for other purposes. While knowledge in art is useful as it may aid people in expressing their sentiments, I think more time should be allocated to other subjects such as science and language as that would help build their career. \r\n\r\nKnowledge in art is useful as it helps children to express their feelings. Already from early on, children learn to communicate by artistic expression. They dance, sing or draw sketches that reflect their emotional status. Learning about art can help children understand how feelings can be expressed through artwork. For example, studies have found that children that are abused often draw sad faces and use dark colors when asked to make a sketch. Although knowledge in art is useful, I do not think children should be made to learn about art as there is so much more to focus on during the years at school.\r\n\r\nScience and language are more important to learn and are worth the time to a much larger degree than art. That is to say that children that spend time with these subjects will be better trained for further studies, thus helping their chances for achieving high grades at school which makes them better qualified when applying for university and further studies. For example, in Finland, science and language are the main subjects that children are taught in school and these children have good grades and are better prepared for further studies than in other countries. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, while art is seen as essential for some as it can be useful for expressing sentiments, it is of my opinion that other subjects such as science and language should be a larger part of the children’s curriculum as these pave the wave for further studies and careers.",
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"content": "I think that limiting car usage would be something good. My reason is for less car accidents. Many people drive reckless and speed and this is what causes these car accidents. We can save alot of people from getting injured in car accidents.\n\nIn this case we can also save traffic and causing people to be late to their jobs. This is why we should limit them also because of the gas rate. In this way we can save alot of money. Gas has been really expensive and this case we can save money and cause less accidents.\n\nNobody is willing to keep driving to stay safe and save gas money. \"70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars and 57 percent sold their cars\". I think that limiting this car usage would be a good thing for all of us. We would just have to find a safer way to get transportation.\n\nIn other ways alot of people drive around drunk and they cause alot of car accidents. This is something that is not fair for us innocent drivers. We would just have to find a new way to get us all transportation. Driving is something pretty dangerous though cause their really is alot of crazy drivers out their.",
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"content": "In this article of the \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" I wouldnt beable to choose which side to be on with using this technolgy to read students' emotional expressions. Is it good for us to know how other people may feel, or is it invading in our own privacy. Our expressions are key to alot, but does this technlogy work I mean what if someone faked an expression and the technolgy gave us the wrong data back.\n\nThis technolgy proves Mona Lisa's expression, \" 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\". Do we know that for sure? That she was feeling that way at that time, it is a painting. The artist could easily make a mistake on her face and give the wrong expression. This technolgy can be right, but the exact percentage of the persons feeling, that person doesn't even know that so how can a computer tell us it?.\n\n\" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles\". There are six emotions this technolgy collects thats happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This technolgy can be good for our future to tell us some what of the persons expressions, but I domt beleive it will give you the 100 percent truth in things.\n\nComputers aren't smarter then the human poulation itself I mean we created them. It might be smarter then one human, but not at. Someone can move there face and it doesn't have to be an exact expression. Without this technolgy knowing all expressions how is it going to know are right one. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored; bored maybe, but some people don't show expression to those things. To an expert, \" faces dont lie\", but humans lie all the time and yes you can tell by there face most of the time. But people get a way with murder, robbing, stealing, all from lying I mean did they tell form there face there were? No, because nothings 100 percent and I believe nothing can be that powerful to come up with those kinds of calculations.\n\nFrom the short description of my thinkings, you tell me what you thing? I make these faces all the time, but yet doesn't mean im having the expression on what they make. No body should need a computer to tell what your feeling. Ask that person ? Don't let technolgy make up the world. There trying to find a expressions, movments, and etc. all with computers. Robots are being made from us, are world is changing so fast. When is this going to change ? Soon there going to have robotic figures working in businesses or fast food resturants or resturants period. We are left with what ?",
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"content": "After reading Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Speed Limit I noticed setting adventure affected narrator First heat cause narrator uncomfortable thirstier While moving refers trip waterdeplating one quote shows lacking water major problem Also refers road rolling hills shows reader seem go forever This lowers narrators hope getting quickly Also desert gives author low hope reaching destination The setting affects narrator physically mentally",
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"content": "I vow against the value of using technology to read student's emotional expressions. My reasoning is big data companies will configure this to their advantage and bordeom in a classroom can guide someone toward something higher.\n\nTo begin,\"Big Brother\" will exploit this in order to make money off of it unsuspectedly. The text gives an example of what the technology can do in terms of personalizing ads. It does not matter who someone is big data companies, will find clever ways of gathering anyones data in exchange making life more simple no matter if that person is student or not. Once the data is stockpiled, it is on the internet and avaliable to anyone that pays for it.\n\nSecondly, bordeom as terrible as it sounds is good for the brain. Bordeom in the text is mentioned as something that looms in the learning environment and this new technology can help create a more effective lesson. The second society lets such algorithms coexist with AI that is when the people lose control of their lives; because, it will let robotic minds make decisions for society. Boredom is misunderstood, it can allow society to have think beyond the surface and allows someone to excel as they then understand the joy of a subject has detierated, now looking anew.\n\nTo conclude, \"Big Brother\" would manipulate this technology to profit and boredom is beneficial. Not everything is what it presents itself as on the surface.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is very outdated and confusing. Most American voters believe their votes elect the president even though they really don't. In truth, American voters are electing electors that instead go to the District of Columbia and vote the new president instead. As infuriating as this sounds, seeing as most Americans want a direct vote so a president is elected by popular vote, it's not entirely bad, but it isn't the best election system. The Electoral college is a system that should stay.\n\nMost Americans that are angered and upset when they realize their vote doesn't have as much say as they though are usually the ones who fight to abolish the Electoral College. While this is true, it is also accurate, most people don't even know that they aren't even voting for the president, and their vote is only electing their state's electors. As upsetting as that is, it's mostly just like choosing a new senator or representative to represent the state. This is the same idea, our state votes for a number of people to vote for us. If we win the democratic side, democrats will vote for the democrat (they rarely betray us) candidate.\n\nWhile the winner-takes-all system is unfair to those who do not agree with the side the state chose overall, it provides a clear system to clearly elect a new president. Candidates always try to persuade states, oftening visiting them to sway them to vote for electors that will go to elect them instead. Looking on the results, it's safe to say the Electoral College, as upsetting as it can be, is a voting system that should stay until we can find a better one. Abolishing the system might make it more of a direct vote, but the Electoral College is organized.\n\nSincerely,\n\nA student.",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", by Nick D'Alto, the author informs readers of newly developed technology that has the ability to detect human emotions such as happiness, sadness and even frustration. The development is thought to help improve gaming and video surgery, as well as help instructors in classrooms determine what to change in their course. However, communicating with facial expressions is not always effective as most of the time, a person's thought does not match their facial expresssion.\n\nThe use of muscle movement is prevalent in determining the emotion displayed by the subject. As the article suggests, \"it's all about those muscular action units. They even indicatie the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" The usage of muscle movement to determine a subject's emotion can be extremely useful, however it does not calculate what a person is acutally thinking. Rather, this context only uses facial movements to reveal what a person theoretically should be feeling. In many instances, the correlation of a facial emotion to a person's thoughts is completely irrelevant, as most do not express what they truly believe. In the passage it says, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" This proves that each person has a different visage for what they are feeling, and a single expression such happy being associated with raising the corners of one's mouth, can not be used to determine the emotion of everyone across the world. Since there are so many variations of expressions of different people, the possibiltiy of determining someone's emotion through muscle expression is not plausible as their happiness might display boredness to a computer program.\n\nComputer program's can not always correctly detect what one is thinking. As it states in the article, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, too.\" The statement that \"human communication is nonverbal\" signifies that human communication goes beyond just the expression on someone's face, and rather deeper into their thoughts that a computer system can not calculate. Robots used to calculate emotions on the exterior also can not connect with a human as itself displays no emotions or feelings therefore making it unable to effectively communicate with an individual as it does not know that individual and has no ability to read inside the person's mindset. Human thoughts are also more complex than instructions that suggest a person is estatic based on their muscular movements. For example, a person may try another's cooking and say they absolutely enjoyed it. However, in reality, they disdained it but lied in order to not hurt the other's feelings. This is an example of how someone's words do not show what they truly mean. This is the same case for facial expressions. There is more to a person's thought than the mere eye can see. The article questions this saying, \"Can we actually \"calculate\" emotions-like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movemets we humans use to express how we feel?\" By comparing the calculation of human emotions by robots, to doing math homework reveals that this new technology is very analytical and does not focus on the deeper thought that one may have. Math is usually subject with equations, showing that this comparison makes it seem as though human feelings are meer calculations through facial movement. Although the use of technology to determine emotions is fairly advanced and could be useful in some scenarios, technology and robots can not one hundred percent determine how someone actual feels as a person's thoughts dwells deeper than the image they put on.\n\nThe variety of human emotions that people differently display along with a robots inability to read exactly that a person is thinking makes the usage of Facial Action Coding System in classrooms uneffective. Although the advancements of this technology will bring along new ideas in the world, this tool is uneffective as far as determining what a person is truly feeling. The algorithms used to reveal a person's mindset can only go so far as what they are theoretically feeling through their muscle movement. Communication verbally should be used amongst human's to display ideas and emotions in order to improve a classroom or even the society.",
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"content": "There three main obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock densely populated area violent air currents existing law airships First dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Since dock would downtown New York higher risk dock blowing due density Secondly nature great obstacle There many winds top building wind currents constantly changing violently gigantic fear dirigible swiveling around hitting another building Finally dock could never allow ship tied legally due existing law airships flying low urban areas The dirigible would safe entire idea drop For reasons obstacles many builders Empire state building faced attempting allow blimps dock",
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"content": "Are aliens real or just a myth? Aliens have supposedly done many things on the planets. The question is, did the aliens create The Face on Mars? Or is The Face just a natural landform on Mars? There are many theories on which one is true.\n\nThe Face on Mars is just a natural landform on Mars. There is a theory that has been going around for centuries, that aliens created The Face. Many people will believe whatever they hear on T.V. or anything that draws the media attention. People forget that they need facts and or evidence proving something. Otherwise it will only ever be consindered a theory.\n\nMars happens to be like Earth in many ways. There was once water on the red planet. That has facts to back it up. Mars is believed to have once held life, it may or may not be true. NASA is still working on whether or not Mars had life there once. Yet, since Mars is our sister planet, also may have common characteristics. As in there natural landmarks. But, if there is actual proof on aliens, maybe they did make The Face.",
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"content": "It really nt matter I go library get book teacher school makes But library able put whatever want shelf library devided sections kids young adults adults If person nt like sees shelf library nt look check Just one person nt like dont mean someone else dos nt Librarys nt make people look check something nt like people complaining They getting checkout books movies music free unless becomes due So people stop complainging library shelves",
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"content": "Dear The issue us people addicted computer S I think In addition people task many things like hang family friend importantly enjoy life In way computer privliges like enjoying life Say friend computer includes webcam video messaging That s life well im trying say yall talk see private conversations Computer s dont alway take away important people things life Some computers help take school learn write essays learn read much Computers success people Only thing take away fun family friends cant blame computer Imagine life without computer would How survive For example giving homework computer theres way project school How would Some people need computers I think thought knew going get excited cool computers shouldnt much new technologies life Now probably see I think need computer sometime benefit society",
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"content": "In beginning I woke sleeping felt real sick I took shower put clothes I told dad can I go doctor I feel sick said we leave am Then I wait couch brothers dad mom talking showers After I wanted yell complain going slow tried acting beautiful I didnt When finished look keys found It dads favorite music stayed watched whole movie In middle went doctor stay waiting everyone get turn turn We actually made appointment They checked bothering nothing I left I still waited brothers finished In end I pissed I wait get car My dad said Are happy You said feel sick nothing wrong you went home thinking I patient whole day I saying I learned lesson patient day go fast",
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"content": "These days, celebrities are getting more fame for their glamour and wealth rather than their accolades. Some people seem to think this is not good for the younger minds who are getting inspired by them. \n\nThere are several aspects to this mindset. On one hand there are many platforms on social media for becoming a star overnight. All of the success has rounded down to the views and likes these days. Grades and results seem to be things from the yesteryears. As access to social applications is increasing, the number of people getting famous is also rising. Consequently, new generation is following them more as the days go by. \n\nSimultaneously, they are fantasising the life of glamour and wealth rather than focusing on their studies. Media is becoming tremendously influential in the lives of young people. \n\nOn the other hand, the pressure created by p the parents to get a particular score has also driven children away from studies. Subsequently, they are getting attracted to the easy way of becoming an icon and earning money. Mobile and computers were used as recreational therapy but they are becoming an escape from the stresses of life. Young people enjoy scrolling through social media and having a good laugh after a hectic day.\n\nTo conclude. Although media has gained power over the minds of new generation, but household plays a role in shaping them too. Parents need to damp the pressure down and understand their children's passion. This will help the juveniles to be inspired by their professional ideals. In spite of focusing on glamour and wealth they will be more concentrated on the achievements of celebrities.",
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"content": "The mood memoir moving heartfelt By way author writes family feel warmth love family provided young parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today tell quote much impact Narciso Rodriguez s parents life It also explains crafted parents intelligent I always grateful parents love sacrifice deffinatly loved family",
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"content": "Children are the backbone of society and will run everything in future. So, people tend to say that youth should participate in social work without expecting money in return. Because it can nurture their skills and character. I also agree with this notion of youngsters’ dedication to community jobs.\r\n\r\n To begin with, the main reason is, it enhances personality and inner satisfaction. When teenagers start working for society then they interact with people of different cultures, ethnicities and languages etcetera that polish their communication skills. That helped them to be successful among team members. For instance, adolescents exchange words with rural individuals to teach them to send their children to school. Instead of being selfish, adolescents learnt about verbal and non-verbal talk; touch therapy, patience, silence, cooperation and helping others. Meanwhile, serving the human-beings, youngsters inculcate new abilities from an early age.\r\n\r\n In addition to this, teenagers can utilize their free time for productive things. In fact, they can avoid destructive habits such as playing video games or roaming with friends by devoting that time to the needy population. For example, school-going boys can teach illiterates in their spare hours. Likewise, they can donate money as per their capability. However,generally adolescents have less cash but intention matters most. Hence, this can be beneficial for them personally as well.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, community service is advantageous to both societies and to teens as well as an identity builder and a responsible future citizen. Although, this is a good deed it should not be a distraction for them.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows much Saeng grow experience determined This last paragraph afters sudden happy ending rather sad story gives reader role knowing mom character confident enough try The whole story filled sadness Saengs family move new country start However one thing acts escape gardening In Vietnam seemed nice garden enjoyed much Now garden plants remind homeland life used Although saddened passing driving test Saeng finds plant makes happy seems rejuvinate passing test The final paragraph seals deal shows confident happy memories thinking",
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"content": "Nowadays, it's been noticed that the impact of the Printed press is more influential in shaping up the thought process of every individual’s attitude. In this ,essay we will discuss further about the pros and cons of it. \r\n\r\n First to all in the ages, Reading journal is beneficial for those who likes to do debates within their circle. It covers certain domains such as sports, business, commerce and trade, politics, entertainment. Broadsheets provides a wholesome information about the current affairs. In my opinion the impact of Tabloid is positive. \r\n\r\nFirst to all in the ages, when internet wasn’t invented but there was an authentic source of newspaper which helps to enlighten people's regarding the current situation of that era, which ultimately leads people toward acting proactively. For Instance, In 1947, during the partition of Indo –Pak the newspapers was the only source on which people's believed and took preventive measures before the chaos happened. It also makes the people aware of the ongoing situation in the economy.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, biased Information in Newspapers, leads to a negative influence on the reader’s mind. As they do not able to comprehend the reality of ongoing activities. For instance, in the most newspapers they shows an edited picture of models just to increase the sales of the newspapers. As a recent news that been broad casted by CNN and in that news it was clearly shown that a trending magnize :the News\" jsut got high rank award from canadian government due to great progress in expending business. just because if their images \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there is a saying that a pen is more powerful than a sword so the newspaper plays an important role in making up the perceptions, either negative or positive.So far as my opinion is concnerced I beleived that that staememtn is true each and everynews has its pros and cones on the perceptions of the society.",
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"content": "One day I sisters football game My mom droped us game go work When I got car asked I money I said said going hungry I said game started I got really hungry I checked packets happened I found bucks I went see long line The long almost street I sat back trying let line get shorter But line gotten way longer I ran line I stand line mins I finally got line I stood gate watched sister cheer came us asked bye fries I said line long said please I went back line moved way slower When I got back said took long I said look line one times I patience",
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"content": "Although the Facial Action Coding System in a classroom is usefull, it isn't very valuable. Their are pros and cons about have the facial coding system.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will tell whether the students taking tests are confused or distracted, but the state gives out tests that the students have to take because its still work their supposed to do no matter how bored or unhappy they get. In paragraph 6, it states that it could modify the lesson for the children if they're bored or confused which is helpful if its fun or freetime. The childrens facial expressions may not be how they actually feel which would make the calculations go wrong. Instead of a computer detecting if a person is sad or confused, the teacher should.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is not valuable, the teachers should detect whether the student should do a certain lesson no matter how fun or boring it is, not the computer.",
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"content": "Many obstacles occured builers Empire State building allowing dirigibles dock One obstacles mooring mast The winds top Empire State Building constantly shifting dirigible tied mooring mass would swivel around mooring mast Another obstacle builders experienced process already existing law allowing airships fly low urban areas Due fact Empire State building New York urban area dirigable idea would likely never worked The dirigable unable fulfill destiny obstacles builders faced main reasons",
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"content": "Childhood is often painted as a happy, idyllic time in our lives, but in reality, it's a precarious era of high emotions and crucial development. One of the best places to demonstrate the vast range of emotions a child or adolescent experiences is the classroom. Triumph, frustration, bitterness, and indifference are all commonplace feelings at school, and analyzing and understanding these are crucial to creating a better system of raising and educating children. That is why the Facial Action Coding System would be a fascinating, tremendously beneficial experiment that would revolutionize psychology.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a new software, designed by Prof. Thomas Huang of the University of Illinois, that constructs a 3-D computer model of the face and analyzes the movement of the muscles to indicate emotion: for instance, when you smile and raise your eyebrows, you might be 50% happy, 30% surprised, 12% sad, 5% afraid, and so on. There are six basic emotions: happiness, sadness, fear, anger, disgust, and surprise.\n\nIf we are capable of calculating human emotions through facial muscles, then we ought to use that power and knowledge to better ourselves. Let us attempt to understand our children, in order to judge and improve the education system.\n\nFor instance, a child might be surprised or angry when they do not understand a concept. Through the Facial Action Coding System, the teacher could more accurately guess which of her students grasp a concept and which do not. Additionally, reading emotions would aid educators in finding the best method of teaching for children of types, enabling more to become successful. This would lead a massive decrease in standardized testing and other measures of measuring how far along a pupil is in their studies. The Facial Action Coding System would not only enlighten teachers, but would save the government and schools precious time and money.\n\nFurthermore, school life almost always overlaps into private life. Two students who are dating or are friends will continue their relationships outside of the classroom. Conversely, troubles and victories at home frequently bleed into their school work. If a child is having a rough home life or experiencing personal loss, they might not be as focused on the quality of their schoolwork, or, in extreme caes, act out. Teachers cannot be the sole support system for students, but they do have a responsibility to ensure a child's physical and emotional welfare, whether it means settling petty disputes or recommending therapy. Imagine the multiple lives that could be improved if the signs of unhappiness could be detected and addressed. On a darker note, the Facial Action Coding System would be most expedient in diagnosing depression, mental illness, and the tell-tale feelings that too many youths suffer from before thoughts or attempts of suicide.\n\nFinally, utilizing such a powerful tool in the classroom would revolutionize child psychology. New branches of study could be devoted just to scrutinzing the way a face shows feeling. Experts could see how certain elements and events in life affect a child. A greater empathy would form, shortening the widening gap between generations, especially in this epoch filled with technology and new ideas, and allowing humanity to unite. A more focused, diverse view on society can be discovered through a child's eyes; we can improve our society, piece by piece. And all this can start with the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nThere are those who feel that subjecting children to these trials is an invasion of their privacy and imical to their natural development. It is true that a child should not be exposed to an excessive amount of software, and it is a valid complaint that invading their mind can be harmful. However, with responsible adults, the Facial Action Coding System can pick up on the children's discomfort and address their issues, from whatever cause, with more honesty and empathy. The Facial Action Coding System is a victory for psychology, and when used right and in moderation, it will benefit all parties.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will revise psychology. It detects the six basic emotions conveyed in the muscles of a human face, paving the way for an increase in enlightenment in our society's perception of childhood and coming-of-age. The Facial Action Coding System will assist teachers in determining their students' progress, help them grapple with their unfamiliar, often frightening emotions, and create a fresh look at child psychology. Despite the expense and the risk that scientifically calculating a child's feelings will hurt them, it is at least worth a try to see what a student can feel in a classroom and start making improvements in education and understanding humanity from there.",
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"content": "The author gives facts all the through the article about venus. \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\" Saids the author. Each previous mission was nunamed, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for mare than a few hours. The author explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study. Which means for the author to get this much information about Venus, is kind of crazy in a since.\n\n\"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" The author has all of these facts, numbers, data, proof, ect, to back up everything that is being said through out this entire article. Also, the author talks about the conditions of encounter on Earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. The author supports the claim by telling us all of the facts and details about Venues. That makes sense and goes right along with the article. \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even through Mercury is closer to our sun.\"\n\nI like how by reading this article, you can learn many things; new things. That you might not have even known before. Not just about Venus; but about our solar system as a whole. \"why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" The author creates questions through out the article to make the reader get into the article more. To get the reader thinking. The author gives reasoning.\n\n\"Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system.\" Venus is a lot more important and more powerful than any. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather prersent additonal impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. The author is taking in facts about Venus and still asking questions. The author isn't going for anything less.\n\nThe author begins to add the \"howevers.\" Which indents to come up somewhere in this article. \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions.\" ..Then\n\nthe reasoning starts to approch; \"Because most forms of photography anmd videsography ineffective.\" It's like a cycle through this whole article. The author brings out the facts then the reasoning behind it.\n\nWith supporting the facts, the author tends to go back into the pass sometimes telling us how it use to be back in those times as well. \"These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.\" Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexabile and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. I like how the author is very careful with the wording and how she/he puts things.",
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"content": "When it comes down too \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\"people think of aliens.That is not true and here are reasons why.The article says things like its a natural landform and if it was aliens or Egyptian-style things you could see it threw the digital image.\n\nAccording to the article it says,\"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site,revealing . . . a natural landform.\"This shows that there was no alien monument after all.Another example is,\"As a rule of thumb,you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\"he added.\"So,if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks,you could see what they were!\"This means that there wasnt no alien or eygtians it was a natural landform.\n\nAn oppser would say it was an alien.Nasa is just trying to hide it and keep it an theory.Thats not true because it has no evidence.\n\nTo conclusion the article says its a landform not an alien or Eygiptian-style anything.There are a couple reasons why its a landform like the research.",
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"content": "In many countries around the world, an increasing number of people show great curiosity and interest in the origin of their living places nowadays. This essay highlights the primary causes for this trend and describes how they figure this out. \r\n\r\nOne of the main explanations is to be aware of any social problems such as robbery and crime that may have occurred around their accommodation in the past. It is surely a reliable reference for them to decide whether to continue to live there or to move to another place. Besides that, those who had no choice of changing location, probably have a plan to prevent such threatening issues. In addition, researching the history of the building, which means thoroughly understanding the building age, the original structure, and the purpose used by the previous owners, is to answer their concerns about its quality and sustainability. For instance, a house or a building that was constructed over 10 years ago with traditional design and has suffered from many different objectives of the other landlords, cannot ensure its long duration of use.\r\n\r\nThere are several ways to learn about its history. Firstly, it is quite easy to access and search the information such as the previous owners and what the building had been used for via the Internet. Moreover, by visiting and asking neighbors who have lived there for a long period, residents may collect tons of news, especially some rumors and thrilling stories that probably are not published to society. Someone even asks the retail agency and government officers directly for more details.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in some countries, inhabitants these days are more excited to learn about the stories of the place they live in, for various reasons including their safety and their houses’ life expectancy. To explore that kind of information, residents have tried some approaches including searching online and questioning locals and relevant organizations.",
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"content": "The author suggest that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents becuase the author thinks that they are \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\".\n\nIn the text it states that \"since no spacecraft survived the landing for mote then a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity us.\" and what i think the author means that venus would be a very challenging planet for humans to study despite that its proximity to us.\n\nThe second thing that the author states is that \"such an enviorment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest part of oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" meaning that the temprature in venus is so hot that it would liquefy so many metals. The author says that \" tempratures would stillbe toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. not east conditions, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nThe last thing that the text says is that \" Our travelers on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovations.\" meaning that when humans go to venus and they should expand the very edges of there imaginations and innovations, that they will discover wonders about Venus.",
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"content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. This is valuable becuase some students have emotions they do not want to share and could end up being bad for either the student or someone around the student. This technology can also help students in art or in computer science classes.\n\nIf student is going through depression and the student will not tell anyone this technology could tell what emotion the student is feeling. \"at least according to some new sofrware that can recognize your emotions.\" This software can also help students by checking if they're having trouble in class.\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\"\n\nLastly this emotion recognition software can come in handy in art, computer science, or graphics and illustration class. These classes have either something to do with videogames or animation of some sort.\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery.\"\n\nThe use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it helps students who might have issues in school wether its depression or just problems in class and it can help art and graphic students in class.",
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"content": "Nowadays, one of the widely discussed and important topics is environmental issues such as pollution and climate change. Some people believe that it has occurred due to the material and wealth growth of state, and it has no solution. I completely disagree with this statement, because it is possible to prevent environmental damage by negotiating with society which have great influence and finding a solution.\n\nTo begin, there are plenty of public that are the main source of some vital fossil fuels or minerals. By manufacturing these kind of materials, they are causing land and ocean deterioration that are also affecting many species. However, apart from developing region, there are some reasons for damaging the environment. For example, citizens of poor community don't own private bins or don't have educational lessons about where litter can be tossed. Consequently, they are spreading rubbish around them and increasing the amount of distributed waste.\n\nSecondly, we can avoid infection disasters with just a few straightforward rules. If people commence throwing out the trash to the special bins and collect spread waste in the surroundings, we will be able to the win fight against natural damage. Furthermore, scientists are trying to discover new ideas on how to solve environmental problems and there are several successful inventions. For instance, scientists say that if we reduce the production of carbon dioxide, it is possible to overcome climate change.\n\nIn conclusion, all aforementioned points illustrate that running countries in a developing process has a great impact on natural abuse, but there are more crucial measures that we have to embrace for the future of the world.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist wouldnt put sitting rain would nt ride bike Anther one wouldnt sitting city nothing around trees rivers",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered why we, American people dont get to choose our electors? I always ask my self that question and never know why. In my opinion i think that the election should be by popular vote by the American citizens. The electoral college should be abolished because it is unfair to voters and irrational.\n\nThe first reason why the electoral college is absurd is because it is not fair. It has a winner- take- all system in each state. Candidates dont spend time in states that have no chance of winning. Into that, the article \"\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral college\n\n\" states \"\n\nState legislatures are currently resposible for choosing the electors\n\n\". So technically they give us a category of presidents to choose from!\n\nThe last the second and final reason is it is irrational. Although the founding fathers of the countries establlished the electoral college, that doesn't mean its still valid. There have been many mistakes and disasters in the previous years. In the same article it says \"over sixty percent of the vote would prefer a direct election over the one we have now\". This proves that im not the only one who dissagrees on the electoral college.\n\nIt makes sense why people will actually like the electoral college. Considering that it is an easier way for us to vote and takes less time. However, a direct election really gives us the freedom that American people deserve. What is the point of voting for a president when you dont have the freedom to vote for the one you want?",
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"content": "In the passage, the article shows how the Mona Lisa smiled. The authors explains to us to new techonogly called the Facial Action Coding System (F.A.C.S). The F.A.C.S. is usable to students in a classroom environment, because it makes the students better readers, makes the reading fun, and keeps the reader engaged.\n\nLike I said, the F.A.C.S makes the students engages learning. In the paragraph, it says that if the student looks bored, the computer can change the way the reading so the reader can can be brought on track. Also, if the reader zones off like every high school student, they can get the attention of the computer to make the reader go back on track.\n\nAlso, I said it makes reading fun, but how do you making reading fun? Clearly the Facial Action Coding System; the computer program, has already dont that. First it can tell if the reader is having fun by looking at the student, and if the student is happy and will keep it there, and if it is sad, it will brighten up the student. Also maybe the computer can hide ads if the student kept on getting frusterated.\n\nLastly, the author claims the that F.A.C.S helps the reader read more effiecnt and better than ever. For example, like I already said before, if the reader happen to zone off ibnto space, the computer program can get our reader's attention back on the reading. Alos it helps the reader because the program acts as a teacher as well, getting the teacher's attention if the student looks to be angry at the computwer.\n\nThe computer program wouyld be a great addition to all schools in the United States and would bring back fun learning. I hope they will bring this program to our school one day to hep me out!",
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"content": "Overall Score: 3.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "In many countries, a growing number of people are curious about (intrigued by) the history of buildings they dwell in for several reasons- fear from superstition, loss of saving. Moreover, people can get enough information about facilities through their real state agent or construction office. \r\n\r\nOwning a house or apartment is a huge investment for the majority of people. Therefore they are keen on taking precautious measures to secure their financing, which can be threatening if the building or the house has terrible notorieties. For example, if a criminal act has occurred in a building or a place, such as murder or others, people fear such incidents will somehow have consequences on their lives. Even if what they believe is just a myth. Besides, this bad reputation could drop the market value of the place. \r\n\r\nDue to these facts, people should be inquisitive, especially (provided)if these decisions would have an impact on their family. Also, now dwellers can reach whatever information is needed through various channels. By asking your realtor, neighbor, fetching data from the internet, or paying a visit to the construction office, they will be able to provide enough information for that place. After that, if anything goes awry, people would blame themselves. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in many countries, people are more intrigued by the history of the places they intend to live in, for various reasons as their families' safety and money investment. There are a number of ways that can help them acquire this information: internet, offices.",
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"content": "Overall Score: 5.0",
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