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"content": "Though idea allow dirigibles dock Empire State building seriously considered safety reality made unrealistic feat In order mooring mast successfully hold dirigible worth modifications made framework building Still got way greatest safety Most dirigibles outside used hydrogen gas rather helium highly flammable The owners Empire State building realized bad dirigible fire would took place densely populated city New York Wind also serious factor disassembled idea If dirigible tied mast back ship swing around lead weights question Blocks lead hanging pedestrians streets New York neither practical safe idea An additional obstacle existing law would allowed airships fly low close urban areas Even attempted ships would hard time docking forceful winds These stumbled across attempting allow dirigibles dock building idea longer considered",
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"content": "Nowadays, pupils are acquiring a knowledge in the single-sex schools which were selected by their parents, and it is claimed that it will has drawbacks in their future life. I partially agree with this notion. In the following paragraphs I shall put forth my argument to support my point of view.\r\n Firstly, due to less communication with the opposite gender anyone will sense a discomfort and also one’s professional life affected badly. In other words, pupils, who went to only single-gender schools grew up shy and weak. For instance, personality who wants to get a job should pass a conversation in which checks ability to capable of performing under cruel circumstances. Hence, if this is a graduate of the single-sex school, the individual does not have a challenging work. Whereas people who have attended mixed-gender institute have proven to perform excellently under any critical situation.\r\n On the other hand, co-educational institutions have a badly discipline issue, which interfere of their studies with allowing various contradictions. However, separated gender schools can avoid from these problems and as a result, everyone would completely focus on their lessons. To put it simply, it is proved that almost all of the graduates who gain an education in single-sex high schools have more ability to concentrate comparing with conventional institutes. Therefore, this type of schools does not waste special time and improves attention skills.\r\n To sum up, I believe that young generations who were not attending co-ed schools are not able to successfully and develop professionally.",
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"content": "In the passage the author explans how people have had trouble getting spacecraft to survived long enough to get samples of Venus. The author tells the reader many ways that could help the spacecraft to last longer on the planet for earth's scientists can gather samples and learn more about the planet. The author explains to the reader different ways humans could live on Venus and why we should keep trying to gether information on the planet. In the passage the author strongly supports his claim that studying Venus is a worty pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nIn the passage the author states that \"NASA has one particurlarly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\" making it safer for scientis to study the planet. Same as how jet airplanes fly at higher altitudes to fly over storms on Earth a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus by using simplifed electronics made of silicon carbide. These would allow the the craft to last longer on the surface and allow the scientists to gather samples from the planet to better understand Venus. Another project is looking back at computers that was used in Worl War II called mechanical computers. Using no electronical devices thes computer use gears and levers to make caculations. These computer are not delicate and can be used in the tough terrain on Venus.\n\nIn the final the author talkes about the value of of further exploring Venus. And raises the qustion of what could be gaind if we spent time gathering informaton from the planet. That human curiosity will likely guide us to many equally intimidating endeavors. And finally tells the reader that the dangers and the doubts should not limite us but to expand our limits to the edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nIn th passage the author explains that further exploring Venus is worth the risk and dangers that may come forth on the planet. the aouther explains ways that could make the trip on Venus safer and last longer for scientist to gather what they need to further understand the planet. And that we shouldn't limit what we can do and push for more and better outcomes and not be pulled down by the dangers and the doubts.",
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"content": "To me, driverless cars come with way too much risk. Driverless cars would put many lives in danger. The testing process may even become a problem as well. Not only that, but these cars would be super expensive, too.\n\nFirst off, cars are already really expensive as it is. Imagine having a car with cameras, sensors, and other things to help make it work. These cars would need a lot of sensors to be able to act like a human driver. That much technology in a car would make the price super high.\n\nAlso, what if something went wrong while being tested? These cars have to be tested on public roads to see if they work or not, right? A lot of people's lives would be in danger in that case. A driverless car would not be reliable in a lot of traffic or road construstion. No matter how much technology is put into a car, it will never be able to react as quickly as a normal human could.\n\nFinally, if everyone had a driverless car, people would get lazy. What I mean is that people would no longer want to pay attention anymore. If people thought the car could do all the driving by itself, they would probaby fool around and not pay any attention at all. When people don't pay attention to their surroundings, they get hurt. Like I said before, a car would not be able to react like a human could.\n\nIn my opinion, driverless cars should not be made a thing. With testing them on main roads, people relying too much on the car and not paying attention, and the price, these driverless cars are not a good idea. Although people may think there are benefits to the driverless car, there is so much more risk to them.",
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"content": "Driverless cars should be used soon,because some people need to feel safe when driving. This passage states that \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe,\" this states if the driverless cars were safe then people could start driving them. The drivers might feel more safe when the car drives by its self. In conclusion driverless cars should be used soon,because some people need to feel safe when driving.\n\nDriverless cars could be very handy for people who have alot to do when they are driving. In this passage it states \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\"This means that if you have lots of things to do when you are driving you can do a few .These cars are made to be safe. In conclution driverless cars could be very handy for people who have alot to do when they are driving.",
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"content": "In regards to being for or against driverless cars, my stance is mainly against them. The reasons for my standpoint are fairly simple, especially for one who may feel the same way. For one who may not, this is the argument.\n\nThe first reason for my stance being against driverless cars is because the idea of a car controlling itself seems unsafe. There is no way that driverless cars would or could be any safer than cars with drivers behind the wheel. It is considered by many that \"the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\". Also, the next reason behind my standpoint on driverless cars is that they are not completely necessary anyhow. There really is no point in having a driverless car if a driver is still needed for certain situations. The question being asked about the situation is \"why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\".\n\nMy stance on driverless cars falls against them. Driverless cars are no safer than a car with a driver, and the point of a driverless car does not exist if a human driver is needed behind the wheel at any point in time.",
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"content": "I think that using technology to read students emotional expressions is not valuable. I think this because some students can give a false smile. Another reason why i believe it is not valueable is because some kids really dont show emotion on there fase.I beleive that you cant really calculate how your feeling.\n\nThe reason why i think that students can fake a smile is because in paragraph 8 is says people can politician or celebrity isnt being happy. If you show no emotion onyour face the computer would say you are bored.Also it says that the technology can only tell if a person is showing happiness, supprised, disgusted, fear, and sad; those are only six classified faces.People have more emotions then just those six emotions so what if someone has a expression the technology cant find.\n\nThe reasons why technology is valiable to read a students face is because it can read your faciul bones. It says in this artical that the computer can tell the slightest movements and details on a persons face. The way the technology knows how you feel is simple if you are frowning it shows sadness. It even knows when you genuinly smile and force one it says in paragraph seven in a real smile the zygomatic major lifts the corner of your mouth.In paragraph 8 it says your orbicularis pars palpabraeus makes crow-feet around your eyes determining its a fake smile.For determining if you are supprised the technology can tell if you are supprised by if you raise your eyebrows.When someone is angry there orbicularis oris tightens your lips showing anger.Those are the reasons i think that technology can read emotional expressions.",
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"content": "In the challenge exploring venus the auther says \" Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. My opinion on this topic is that venus is probaly a good place to explore and study. On a later date the earth might go threw global warming and we the people of earth will need a new planet to survive. I think that we should send a monkey to venus and have him hover above the atmosphere to see how he does with its envirment. Maybe land him and let him lose to see how he adapts to the eco cystem if he lives or dies type of thing and if he survives send a human. To see if man kind can adapt to the eco system or if the die. Then depending on how that person does we could try to build a eco dom were the atmosphere is similar to earth to try and see if they can grow crops and animals and trees to try and make oxegen.\n\nSo that they can make a coliney on venus. then maybe they can one day get as evolved as earth and we can move people on the venus. And start their own little countrys but in order to do that they will have to do more research because they will have to getoxygen and water on the planet so it will be inhabitable by humains and animals and plant life so in conclusion they sould do more research on venus.",
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"content": "Books shelfs reason All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us Katherine Paterson wrote The quote short words means allowed children learn children Libraries non fiction fiction books well magazines music movies I like learn little bit everything course things I dont like learning I young I like discovering things There times I like discovering new things I dont know life ends In words I m surrounded reality come fantasy world Magazines also lot trouble sometimes yes s life also dramatic things people A library good place learn lots things You learn history presidents countries important people music etc Honestly thing I go read check books books I learned lot There material shouldnt read discovered young Theres material strong children learn grown bunch Libraries different stickers labels books children warning signs age There times good learn life becareful strong There books teach lot I learned lot old books new books I nt think books removed yes strong owns choice read There racist books reason s make fun people Magazines also sometimes good teach good things keep updated whats going around world There also magazines talk drama criticize famous people I dont think important showing people s personal lives criticizing That deffinetly good children learn age Magazines nt removed everyone else decision read look Music library mostly music like centuries ago also great composers No music nt removed everyone different taste music There s also new music everyone different taste choose want listen listen Movies big part life I think Theres lot I learn From slavery future movies I learned lot There also videos rated etc It choice watch movie without one telling us There different reasons certain books music magazines movies offend people also significance Books racist people made fun learn went I m glad I I grow I know learn I m young read something I think allowed s everyone I dont think nothing removed shelves even material offensive",
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"content": "Google anounces that they have came out with the newest transportation sysytem in 2009. Google has managed to manafacter a driverless car.Whither this achivement in transportation is the next big thing is all in the hands of the creators.\n\nAlthough, if we really think about this new tecnology it is a huge game changer in modern day life. The driverless car would provide better fuel milage,better alert systems, and higher tecnology to prevent any accident.\n\nDiverless cars have been the next big thing from any ordinay car. A new future has been exspected in the car manufactoring bussniess.\n\nA vision of better transportation. Google has manufatored a car that uses only half the amount of fuel that a car would us. Incridible enough this car is way more flexable then any bus, and convinit.\n\nWithin ten years , new sensors in thease driverless models have been able to react and resond to any form of danger soon before a typical human driver. New antilock brakes were a creation made in the 1980s that is futured in thease cars. Its all works threw speed sensors on the wheels that activate this new form of tecnology. Making the driverless car an exelent idea. An even fasinating adcivement driverless cars have form modern day to day cars is that they are inhanced with whicked new tecnology. With high tense sensors to doubble LIDAR, it is created to uses better laser beams to appear as a 3D surrounding, This inhancment alone will increase the safty of humans during the later hours, and almost act like a fog light. Not to menchine thease new cars have a vedio camra mounted near the rearview mirrior, and a GPS reciver.\n\nAnother cool and fisinating new gimic this driverless car has is that it transfers controle to the diver when tricky situations occur. This alows the driver to be alerted and in controle rather that putting the diver at risk of danger. With the car anouncing this comand the driver is then notified that its time fore the diver to take controle. To make this safer for others and the diver manufactors have been considering using camras to watch the drivers making sure that they are indeed forcused on the road. This is also a good way for legeal rights to be inforced if in case an accident to see who was to blam. It comes in handy many ways. There for I am defending this argument that driverless cars should be manufactored, and put for sale. They are indeed a great ahivement in the caring indrusty and will be way more convinit and safter than a typical car now and days.",
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"content": "In this ceaselessly changing world, environmental problems have taken up the shape of a hideous monster. Some people support the idea of increasing the fuel prices for cars and other vehicles to curb this issue, but perilous gases from vehicles is not the only reason behind the current environmental conditions. This contentious topic has profoundly debated in several forums. I will reason my stance diligently before implicating a rational conclusion.\n\nWe cannot conclude that the aggravation in fuel prices will help since vehicle by products are not the major contributor in the egregious pollution level. Instead, various other measures might prove to be more significant. For example, penalizing with hefty amounts can control the reckless burning of farmlands, near Delhi region, making the air quality critical. Educating the individuals and promoting the idea of planting more trees can mitigate the tremendously burgeoning level of pollution. \n\nConsumption of plastic is also worsening the existing problem. Banning plastic and moving towards cloth and paper products will support in reducing the ruckus. Industries and factories being the major pollution contributors should have a meticulous waste management system. Disposing of everything in the oceans is not the appropriate way. Recycling of resources should be given top priority. \n\nAs it is rightly said, as you sow, so shall you reap. With our existing attitude towards environmental issues we might create a stifled condition for our coming generations. We should understand that there is enough for everyone’s need but not for greed. It is high time that the resources are judiciously consumed, recycled and not wasted.",
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"content": "Nowadays, people have been researched details of their buildings or apartment in some states because of some reasons I describe now and recommend some way to research this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, of course, safety is the major reason for interesting houses or buildings, especially for old, long ones. This means that old ageing constructions faced some difficult situations such as ruined, collapsed, and eroded. So, construction engineers need to find these buildings’ specifications of technical conditions and thus solve the problems associated with amortization and depreciation. An example can be seen that the old European towers and castles have been repaired by local council fund and protect from danger of the ruin. Furthermore, the studying history of the buildings may be good for modern high technological skyscrapers. For instance, Singapore’s engineers adding some special technics to modern high-rise buildings from the ancient construction that contain a lot of architecture skills that we do not know. These ancient technics may improve our method of construction and contribute to our environment (for example we are possible to use ancient ventilation instead of air conditioning).\r\n\r\nTurning to possible research methods, I think the most effective research method is that scientists explore all types of buildings in the world and publish this research material for the public. This material will be used all around the world and everyone can possibly learn about reconstruction from it. Moreover, local museums and libraries are the best sources of the history of the buildings and people need to research their building’s materials from their local amenities. Finally, the internet browser is the easiest way to research their house, but some specific information would not be limited.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, ever more increasing people interested in the history of the building because they need to know how to improve buildings’ condition and how to make maintenance their constructions, and also professional engineers study ancient constructions entirely for looking good methods. It seems to me that consolidated research material would be created by scientists for the public and this would be the best research material. Another good source may be local cultural amenities and the Internet.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI have recently read some interesting information about a process of voting called \"The Electoral College.\" It seems to work quite well in favor of getting the \"right votes\", however I do agree that there are too many possibilities and factors that could go against the public views and be in better favor of the government. As I recall, the government was set up for order and protection of the people. I am young and most people would probably judge the fact that I am so young to be stating things as political as this, however, I do seem to fathom more about political issues (like this and other things) than most adults even know. Judging by the unbiased information I was given that shows me two sides of the issue, I'd say that though The Electoral College seems to work, there are so many factors that favor the government rather than the people.\n\nOn one hand, yes. The Electoral College does seem to work. It gives a fair amount of Electors to each state due to their Congressional Delegation and we are given the information that we, The People, are voting on the Electors rather than the President but there are too many factors to that. We must take into full recognition that electors do not have to be faithful toward the end to the President they were going to vote for in the beginning. We must also consider the fact that the Electors are people not in public Office. I am assuming that means that they must work for the government rather than in the public. I must state the possibility that there could very well be some possible, underhanded things going on in the government for the assurance that a particular Presidential Candidate is chosen to win the election, all based on the fact that they are chosen by the Electors. This came to mind because of paragraph 11, under \"Source 2: The Indefensable Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong.\" Within this paragraph, it stated that the Electors need not be faithful to the President they said they would vote for in the election. As well as this, the government was made for the people and the people hardly seem the get an advantage with the Electoral College since we have to trust a group of human beings that could very well be unfaithful.\n\nOn the other hand, Electors not sticking to what they said rarely happens (Or so we are told). As well as that, the Electoral College seems to work well and has a certainty of the outcome and avoids \"Run-off\" elections. However, the government was made for the public and therefor, I do believe that the people should choose their president as long as everyone is completely informed with uncensored information aboutb how everything is run, what that President, as well as what Congress and the other branches of Government intend to do whilst the current President is in Office. Many people don't even bother with trying to understand the way our government works and just completely trusts and goes along with whatever the government tells them but I think that is wrong! For a healthy government and a happy population, everyone must be informed with uncensored information and understand the outcome of these actions and how it willl affect them in the short-term and long-run. It is difficult and takes longer than what everyone would like but who wants to live in a so called \"Democracy\" that looks like a form of Oligarchy. Given the information I read, it doesn't seem fair or right. it seems like a form of control; a form of Oligarchy; a lie.",
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"content": "Dirigibles blimps seen transportation future In order add height yet serve purpose architects Empire state Building decided build mooring mast upon building accommodate aviation pioneers mast built gave building desired height usage docking station dirigibles would never fulfilled The obstacles builders attempting allow dirigibles dock included height building wind speeds safety civilians The height building feet thus violent shifts air currents The wind top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigibles tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast Dirigibles also used hydrogen fuel lead weights weighed however using mast hydrogen use lead weights provided safety hazard civilians Builders created mooring mast dock dirigibles idea caused problems never fulfilled",
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"content": "Computer technology is evolig every year and its begining to change the way the clssrooms are held as well. From books to computers, emails, grading systems etc. Recently there has been something else in place in schools too. Facial Action Coding System, which enalbes computers to identify human emotions. In schools the computer can scan your facial expressions and make the activity your doing more intresting.\n\nThere are universal signs of emotions like happiness, sadness, anger, fear, surprised, and disgust. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. They tested this on the Mona Lisa and it could detect her mood in the painting. It calculated that her facres was showing 4 different moods just by her face. Imagine what it can do for schools in the world.\n\nI believe it is a great idesa to have these software emotion-recognition in schools because it can give students a better way to learn. If the computer can see that a student is annoyed by what they are doing it changes the way the activity is going to get the students more interested in what they are learning. The more the student gets interested the more that he/she learns just by actually paying attention. The computer can also help make grading easier as well. When a teacher is grading the computer can see that he/she is surprised at all the grades in the system.",
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"content": "Imagine if your online school computer could analize if you are understanding your lesson on exponents or not? This could one day be possible. Prof. Thomas Huang and his collegue Prof. Nicu Sebe, are working on a new software that can recogize your emotions. It may know if your happy or sad and by knowing how you feel it will read how you feel about the subject. This technology would be of an imense help in virtual classrooms. This technology could also analyse pictures and videos taken before to see how the person feels while at a public event, or in a old family picture.This technology could help many fields including the advertising industry, as it could tell how you feel from different ads, and change the type of ads you see as suggested by your reaction to them.\n\nHowever how would the computer know if we are happy or sad? \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of all the face\". In the 3-D model our muscles are copied exactly and the computer analyzes how we feel based on our expression. As if it scaned your face at a family reunion where you don't to be there, but your smiling for the picture. How does it know if your smiling for real, or if your smiling so you don't apear bored in the picture? \" In a false smile, the mouth is streached sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius... these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\"\n\nIn conclusion Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe new technology is a inovation that could help many different fields in many different ways. It would help people really see how people feel about a certain topic or person. It could help stores know when a person is mad or annoyed at their products or staff. This new technology would be a great partner with facial recognition working side by side to know how each person feels. This new technology would be important to an online classroom as with an online course you never really truly\n\nunderstand if a person is frustuated with the material, or if a person really feels motivated and understands what they are being taught. This New technology would be a great addition to the teaching field, and would help students learn to their fullest potential.",
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"content": "An increasing number of criminals have done by children and teenagers in some regions of the world. The main causes of this problem are the lack of parents’ attention and living with so-called bad environments. Several solutions should be implemented to punish them.\r\n\r\nFirstly, parents are working so hard in the office resulting lack of attentiveness to their sweet ones. In the development of children, once they do not feel the love of adults, the children tend to do crime for the sake of getting attention. For instance, fighting each other or stealing in a supermarket as a prerequisite to enter a gangster that they think can engage the love of a family. Secondly, it is mainly because of living surrounded by unsupported environments. Fighting and verbal abuse have been affected their thoughts which enable them to think and live positively in society.\r\n\r\nThere are two possible solutions to punish the youngers. One way is through physical punishment by sending to children prison. This is intended to do the rehabilitation and teach them moral and ethical behaviour. When they come back to the community, they will have such positive insights as well as new skills that hopefully help them to live in a society. Another way is by giving the love and attention of parents to them. By loving them unconditionally, it would affect the children’s psychology that they are loved. In this manner, feeling supportive parents would make them more precious.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the main causes of the problem are lack of attention and effected by bad environments. However, the criminal numbers could be decreased by punishing children with physical reinforcement and giving them parents’ attachment.",
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"content": "Allowing dirigibles dock Empire State Building took obstacles First lack suitable landing area New York City To solve Al Smith added mooring mast top Empire State Building This would allow dirigibles anchor several hours refueling service let passengers onAnother obstacle allowing dirigibles dock Empire State Building stress added building s frame one thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether To accommodate situation steel frame Empire State building would strengthened modified Over Sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework The final greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Lead weights would used weight dirigibles landed open fields But losing lead weights Empire State building would dangling high pedestrians street safe",
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"content": "The author of this passage supports the idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers with good points. The author talks about the dangers of exploring and also why it would do good if we explored. In my essay I will talk about the pros and the cons of exploring Venus.\n\nThe author thinks exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit because \"human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\", this basically means that goinng to Venus and exploring will lead us to exploring more and different parts of the solar system. Not only that but also the insight to be gained on Venus, \"striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself\" getting insight on Venus and how it is on that planet can be impotant not only because we learn but because we can discover new things. The other reason Venus is a worthy pursuit is because \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". Where and how we explore things should not be limited because its dangerous, we should do beyond impossible to explore and discover new things. Although these are good points there's also a few issues.\n\nIt is extremely hot in Venus, \"Temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". Not only is it hot but the clouds are dangerous, \"the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\". These are good reasons to not go but NASA is already working on new equipment for the exploration \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus\" knowing how NASA works they're most likely doing their best and will make it possible to explore Venus.\n\nIn conclusion the author is correct about Venus being worthy to get explored even if theirs danger. Even if theres a bunch of danger and doubt it is still worth exploring. NASA is working on equipment to help out and because it will motivate more explorations to happen. Their are more pro's than con's in exploring and it will be possible in the near future.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a huge step of development in technology of thr world. Diverless cars were developing since 1980s, but until now, many manufacturers still can not create a best car that can be \"driverless\", which means human does not have anything to do with the wheel. Driverless cars are not needed for human because the systems are caused too expensive too many other details to do to create a perfect \"driverless car\", the human still needs to drive the wheel, and if technology failed by not following the traffic law, who will be responsible for that.\n\nFirst of all, to make a perfect autonomous car that does not need human to drive that will cause a lot of money and a lot of details to connect to the car. In the paragraph 3, the author said: \"The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car.\" and then, the author said: \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expnesive to be practical.\" And in paragraph 6, he said: \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack.\" A perfect driverless car costs too much for systems and details.\n\nSecond thing, It is called a \"driverless car\" but driver still has to drive the wheel. In the paragraph 2, the author wrote: \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of griveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accident.\" In paragraph 7, he said: \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation reqires.\" And in paragraph 8, A BMW project manager driver said: \"'Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their trun to drive.\" These showed that a driverless car is still needed a driver to drive the wheel, and of course human will get bored of it.\n\nAnd the most important issue, who will be responsible if technology failed. in pragraph 9, he said: \"If traffic laws change, new laus will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" He means by that if new laws come out, how will the autonomous car know and follow to law. And he said: \"If the technology fails and someone is injuried, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" And the auhtor said: \"...traffic laws are witten with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\"\n\n\"Driverless car\" is not useful and needed for human. It costs a lot of money to buy or create a new one, it is still needed human to drive depends on condition, and if the technology faied and someone is injured, who is at fault and reponsible for that.",
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"content": "If you were in Europe on a cattle boat what would you do? First of all here's some things you would do or what you want to do.\n\nOk 1945, world war was over in Europe, and many countries were left in reins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA [ the United Nations relief and rehabilitation administractor].\n\nUNRRA hired seagoing Cowboys to take care of the animals that were shied overseas. Those were the things you would've had to do.\n\nThe thing that you want to do is help people out you would have the opportunity to go to Europe and China. It would take about 2 weeks to cross Alantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. So caring for the animals is a nice and helpful thing that would keep you busy. Stalls had to be cleaned out every single day and you have to feed them. Helping out at a farm would prepare you for hard work. You would be very happy in Europe on a cattle boat exspeacally if you are a man. You would get little hurt but not for long. You would play a lot of games like boxing, playing volleyball, basketball and more. It would be a adventure if you are a seagoing cowboy.\n\nThose are somethings you would have to do and what you would want to do.",
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"content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. He thinks that becaue what if something happened to Earth, Venus is the closest to Earth shape, size and all. It is survivable of humans but not easy conditions. A claim that support him is \"Venus has value, not only beause of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". He also says \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innvation.\"\n\nHe thinks that we should expolre Venus. I think we should and shouldn't explore Venus. The reason I think we should is that we can get some cool information on the planet and how it became and what used to live there. The reason we shouldn't is that it may take time away from other planets that we can explore that has less dangerous weather. I also think the risks are to high to be exploring a planet like that, cause it could be a mistake and end in death. That is what I think we should do in the later future.\n\nThe text suggests exploring and studying Venus is a good thing, and that we can do it. He thinks that Venus can be a great help to us after we explore it. The reason he thinks we should explore is that its the closest to our planet, Earth. He gives some suggests like \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the cloest in distance too.\" That is the reasons the author gives for studying and exploring the planet of Venus.",
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"content": "The author supports the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers very well.\n\nThe author describes the \"sister planet\" of earth as very hot, and inhospitable place. venus has \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide,along with heats over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and atomspheric pressure 90 times stronger than what the people of earth experiences.\n\nNASA has a particularly compelling idea for sending humans to venus, such as a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles or so above the rolling venusian landscape. the conditions will be hot with temperatures of about 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but safe air pressures for humans to live with.\n\nHowever the astronuats will not be able to gather data or samples from the planet. NASA is also working on other ways to study venus. As an example simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber that simulates venus's conditions and have lasted for three weeks.\n\nMeeting the goals that have been set to study and examine venus will bne hard, but it can be done. In conclusion the author has presented and supported enough facts to prove that venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.",
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"content": "People ues computers benefit society More people use agree vertual portals information comunication extremely helpful Think paper made trees coarse get paper must cut tree first whole wasteful process get paperIf everyone used computers would nt cut beautifully lush trees And also ever needed get information fast Well instead going book possibly searching hours finding information internet would much faster Lastly future everything eventually run computers later They ll never get old Computers extremly helpful endless information A lot people sensitive enviroment re treating earth They looking new ways help world green possible An easy alternitive paper computer Once school assigned paper looked information computer easily typed sent email teacher Not single peice paper used Ok know computers use lot energy honest nt Many people around world use solar panels gain energy sun power lights computers etc The use computers extremely eco friendly like said great alternitive everyday wasteful use paper pencil Do want look information fast Well computer All type need search engine info need Instead using book wastes trees slowly find information use simple computer job A poll token shows students school use computer look information get faster accurate results Do want slow information found boring book The future far away It already using computer much Ok computer show cause distractions headaches used long great invention future Instead going restaurant ordering ll order computerstouch screans More people coming beter faster computers Everyone using computers love difenetly used future I hope see amazing computers They re enviomentaly useful great alternitive paper help find information need fast proffesor grant states work computer without would lost And lastly future world They later technical world",
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"content": "The vast majority of the population deems that the fundamental duty of the school is to convert graders into decent dwellers and employees rather than to improve them as individuals. Although I advocate strongly with the opinion of the majority, I think that schools also should care about each child as an individual.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, it is essential children are prepared to be members of society. Education gives students more skills and knowledge. Likewise, well-educated children can learn to be independent as well as this helps to find work. In this way, children become altruistic people, they tend to contribute positively to society. Moreover, schools aim to teach the young generation moral values such as tolerance and sharing. For example, our school curriculums include respecting teachers as well as other junior and senior graders, doing their homework, keeping the environment and loving their motherland.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, emphasizing the capacity of each child helps to blossom hidden abilities. If the academy implements this tendency, most graders can know anything related to their favourite subject as well as they will be professional trainees in the future. Furthermore, a huge number of students prefer to study as individuals. For instance, among schoolers conducted a survey about which one better general or individual study in the one school of the UK. This research showed that almost 70% of students voted for the letter.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, I think both of them play a vital role in our society. However, schools should turn kids into good citizens and trainees.",
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"content": "The concpet of emotion is one that is very complex, and many scientists have not yet discovered the true depths and reasons as to why they exis. However, emotion is a part of humans, as it allows us to develop as people in a common society. It can sum up the last 24 hours of your life, or last 24 years. This just depends on your situation. Reading emotions is similiarly complex, as there mave been many attempts to do this. From the silly mood rings that can be purchased at local stores, to the complex analysis by human psycologists in order to determine the specfic issue, there have always been attemtps made at trying to understand and remove the mask of emotion. With new technology, this may be possible. While there are numerous benefits with technology presented by Dr. Huang, the idea of reading human emotions in a classroom should not be implemented; the concept of inaccuracy and misinterpretation, the distracting elements of the entire situation, and cost and expenses needed would not be worth the positive outcomes, which may even hinder the learning environment overall.\n\nWhen discussing the technology used in the algorithm, Huang states that there are 6 different emotion expressed by the machine: happiness, surprise, disgust, fear, anger, and sadness. Huang then states that the machine uses various facial features, and links each feature with the corressponding emotion. While this may be accurate fora still image of a painting of an individual, the use of this technology should not be permitted in a school classroom. Although the concept of inaccuracy is rarely mentioned throughout the essay, it still may exist. Inaccuracy in determining the emotion of a moving person may result in inaccurate results. Misinterpretations may also occur, as students may be trying to conceal their true feelings on the inside, while expressing a completely different emotion on the outside. Also, accurate interpretations may result in the student becoming self-aware of how they show themselves, and could allow them to be subjectaed to ridicule by other peers. More serious issues such as depression and sucidal thoughts may raise more awareness for respective staff, faculty members, and parents, but it would also increase prospects of bullying in various school and outside environments.\n\nAs the majority of students know, school can be very distracting. The entire environment and various situaton smay distract students from acquiring the needed knowledge and education that they require. Implementing a piece of technology that detects emotion would only add to the ever growing list of distractions. It may serve as some help for the teacher, but for the majority of its use, it would either be abused by students making faces and playing around with it, or it would locked away, due to the growing distraction it serves. Its use in the classroom would be very limited, if that at all. Teachers would generally see no use for the technology other than a distraction to the learning environment. Instead of providing teachers with beneficial informatiuon, it may easily be hindering the students overall education. Adding on, the benefits of reading the emotions of the students with a machine would be worthless to many, as those who are having trouble concentrating or suffering from issues that are non-school related tend to go to the school psychaitrist. Many students who are concerned with something would much rather to talk to another human being rather than having a piece of technology determine what they should feel.\n\nThe entire operation of setting up emotion reading machines in in of itself can be expensive. As mentioned by Dr. Huang in paragraph 7, many common home PCs would be able to handle the algorithms and thecomplexity of the process. The same can be implied for many school PCs. Althouogh it may only cost a little over the price of regular PCs (which is very improbable), schools would have to replace entire labs and teacher PCs in order for it to be used in an effective manner. The cost of this alone would be very high, not to mention many other updates to the school software that may be needed if this were to occur. The benefits of having this information would not be worth the cost, as their would already by many behavioral specialists and school psychaitrists that can help without the use of new technology. The process of determining a fake smile that is described in the passage is one that can be used, but its effectiveness and use would probably be very limited, and inaccurate; the information that can be used by the personal test described in the passage would also offer no valuable outcome, other than determining if someone is faking a smile, as mentioned in paragraph 8.\n\nTo conclude, the use of emotion detecing software should not be implmented in a school environment, as it could be inaccurate, very distracting to the learning environment, and extremely expensive. The benefits would not be worth the negative aspects, and that is why schools and classrooms should not implment this technology; it would not only be invaluable, but may also the hinder the education process as a whole.",
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"content": "Things mean much one person start I going say Katherine Paterson saying correctThey re alot around world senceitive things house around life wouldnt want anyone touch Or around One important thing I means much gave us right passed away Me wanting listen long time But cant get nerve We like someone thinks want walking grab ahold like So say something Thats one thing like anyone touch Because means much us Most think crazy like anyone around touch I say around area crazy things touched For example clock hanging wall I want knock get away That something bestfriends said still feels way still day But I mean feel everything around us means alot But get back situation get fustrated things hanging wall things cases thats years years Its means much Its cause mean kind reason gripe It means much I say means alot I mean bunch bunch There trying say means anything want bothered Just try understand trying say Because could mean much could get point watch also Just help But store Katherine Paterson wrote saying right thing also probably things life means alot You reconize important alot impotant things life could one Just try see feel alot around world around Just remember whats important someone help keep eye good friend everybody else",
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"content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock making sure dont bump buildings use rope drop papers They trying make sure dirigibles pop touches buildings It also trying keep dirigibles away nt get close thats droping papers ropes built little tunnel dirigibles go wo nt worry getting popped touch building",
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"content": "I think that Luke should join the program because he would make a good college student there. He is working two part-time jobs such as working at the grocery store and the bank with his friends. Also being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass time. And that awareness stayed with him leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.On Lukes second trip he served as a night watchman.\n\nA small trip of metal along the edge stopped his slide, keeping him from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. He was happy to be alive. But Luke couldn't work for a couple of days because of his cracked ribs. He always helped his aunt Katie on her farm when he was still a very young boy he always worked very hard. Also LUkes heart raced as he shot feet first toward an opening on the side of the ship.",
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"content": "Dear Sentator,\n\nMy associates and I, have thought long and hard that we should have the Electoral College removed. Why? The Electoral college is unfair, outdated, and boring. We feel as if we should spice things up and be able to decide and presidents wit a majority vote rule. I know what your saying, \" The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no cnandidate recieves a majority of the votes cast.\" With that I want to include that, if a state were to have it's own vote within the state and turn that into a vote then use that as a majority rule everything would be much easier. For Instance, in florida if lets say 72% vote President Obama, then that would be a vote for obama from florida and with the other 49 states doing the same thing then we have a easy way of using the majority rule.\n\nBob Dole was right we should abolish the electoral college. Why should we vote for someone who half the time picks the president you dont want. There are many reasons why we should ban the electoral college we dont nessesarily have use the majority rules method, but any other idea besides the electoral college i would go with any day. Why? Would you want to keep the electoral college? Why? Do you think this is helping america, its not really doing us harm, but why?\n\nI see you might argue that the electoral college is widely regarded an an anachronism, a non-democratic method of diciding on a president. Is needs to be overruled by another method or even the majority rule. Considering you tried to i assume balance powers by making us vote for electors, who actually they get to vote for the president. You also might say their are five reasons you might want to keep the elctoral college. The certainty of outcome, everyone's president, swing states, big states, avoid run-off elections.\n\nAnd with all that said. I want just want you to think of other possibilities to use to replace Electoral College. I assur you that if the it is removed and you use the majority rule something similar you can decide a president much faster.",
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"content": "I agree with the author when he suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit.\n\nAlthough I agree even more when he says that is presents danger.\n\nThere are pros and cons on working with Venus. I agree with him because if him and his scientest discover things dealing with the phisical in venus or just plane facts it could do well for them.\n\nYet, the cons are extreme. In paragraph 2 it states \" No space craft survived the landing after a few hours.\" The space men are going to have to learn new techniques in order to discover and survive. Another detail to go along with that cause is in paragraph 3 where it states \" The conditions are far more extreme then anything humans encounter on earth.\" Theres gonna be a lot of tracks the men are going to face and have to learn to adapt.\n\nIn paragraph 4, it says that \" atronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like thing plamet in our solar system.\" Maybe this is why the author suggest to look into it becuase it was once like us. Maybe he wants to know how it change so much.\n\nMaybe in the near future we can be able to discover why those things happendand why.",
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"content": "In the artical\n\nthe author talkes about the studys on Venus and its danger. The author also talks about the similarity between Venus and Earth. In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author suggests that studying Venus and the danger it presents is important.\n\nIn the story \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is important. In the\n\nartical the author says\n\n\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" In the\n\nartical the author also says \"Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. ... The\n\nplanet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Both of these two quotes show how the author fealt about the studyes of Venus.\n\nIn the\n\nartical \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying\n\nthe danger Venus presents is important. In the\n\nartical the author says \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" in the\n\nartical the author also says \" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThe both of these quotes shows why the author thinks it is important to study the\n\ndanger Venus\n\npresents.\n\nThe\n\nartical \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is about exploring new places and geting more knowlege. In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author propose that studying Venus and the danger it presents is important.",
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"content": "The authur supports the ides that studying venus is worthy pursuit because in the stroy the authur says\"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms density. They also say in the differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to venus. Astronomers are facinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system because long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life , just like the earth we live in now. also venus planets gots rocky sediment and includes familiar feature like mountains,craters and futhurmore. The Natinal Aeronatautics and Space Administration had an ides of making wants humans to study venus they also want some thing like a jet so they can fly over Venus to fly over many storms and also to look around planet venus.\n\nIn the article it says the nasa are working on other approaches to studying venus because how alike this planet. these are the projects that they are working n is silicon carbon, also they have been mechanical computers these devices were first envisioned in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940's during the world war 11.",
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"content": "The issue of the growing tendency of advertising in modern life has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that the advertisement brings a lot of benefit to both businesses and client. On the other hand, others insist on the opinion that advertising increases the cost of the advertised commodity. Viewing from my perspectives, I personally think that exhibit has both advantages and disadvantages.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, commercial becomes an inevitable tool for the company. Firstly, advertising creates corporate brand value by creating contents and logos. For example, the popular Nike’ Just Do It slogan has attracted a lot of purchasers to buy their shoes so that their sales and profits have increased significantly. Secondly, the customer could know the information of new-launched brand and have more choices for the demand. For instance, Nike’ company has released a variety of products such as shoes for lifestyle or sports to meet the needs of customers and promoting this on the website to help customers get clear details of the product. Finally, advertising generates many job opportunities such as content creator, a designer so that it reduces the unemployment rate in the world.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, other people think that the cost of commercial activities is expensive so that customer has to bear high prices when they buy the advertised brand. However, most customer nowadays finds out the information and select the new commodity through advertising.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, an advertisement is a form of modern business that every company needs and get customers to have the best choices with high qualified merchandise",
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"content": "Television is good entertainment for all ages. But it has pros and cons. Some people believe that it is not good to see television for children in all ways whereas others think that it helps to develop their growth. In my view, both points are true as will be explained in the following essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the effects of watching television cause some major disadvantages, particularly what the subjects they are watching. For example, if they continuously watch Wrestling programs then, they tend to imitate this hence they start fighting with friends or other students in class. Moreover, these entertainments make them more addictive and become less concentrated in studies. Besides that, they will pretend to the action movies or thriller movies in their real life. Therefore, it causes very dangerous situations especially resulting in spoiling their life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, if children are watching good programs providing knowledge to their life and studies is beneficial. For instance, programs such as a documentary about wildlife sanctuary or travelogues about different places give vast ideas about different things. Furthermore, good entertainment is also essential for their mental development to develop thinking capability and raise their art skills. However, it is important the amount of time they are spending on this. In addition to that, language skills also can develop by watching different language programs.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, watching television is a good practice if they are used in a good manner. Nevertheless, the content and duration are predominant according to age. In my opinion, television entertainment provides positive and negative effects, apart from avoiding watching television selective programs are excellent to provide knowledge and development.",
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"content": "There many different obstacles builders empire state building faced attempting allow dirigibles For example wind top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Because weather caused able build mooring mast Another reason using empire state Building would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe It could easily kill people roaming around Lastly could empire State Building It existing law airships flying low urban areas",
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"content": "More people use computers everyone agrees benefits society I one I think decent amount time computer benefit But I belive computers huge part peoples lives I think people get computer get exercise people would much healthier took time computer exercised instead On computer look places see beautiful pictures places nature even people But people got computers traveled enjoyed nature would able live see picture Everything would much fun got experience read Another reason I feel strongly people spending less time computers nt spent much time interacting family friends computer much seems like drift away friends family Almost busy see So see I highly disagree overuse computers",
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"content": "I completely disagree with the notion that achievements play \"no\" or less role in the success of celebrities and people are influenced by their glamourous and wealthy lifestyles. In the first para,I will be discussing the importance of achievements in their success and in the latter one I will be presenting my arguments about the influence on people of the glamourous world.\n\nFirstly, Filmstars are always discussed in the media for the work they do and the achievements they made. Their achievements always influence people to follow their dreams. Glamour is part of their work as they are supposed to be presentable all the time. But the hard work they do in their projects to make a movie is the only factor which affects their achievement. Nowadays people are wise enough to know whom to follow and on what basis to follow celebrities. To exemplify, recently in this pandemic situation actor Sonu Sood has helped lakhs of migrants to go back to their home and provided them with all the facilities spending lakhs of rupees.Moreover, Actors also come for help in the time of crises to help the people of the nation in every manner.\n\nSecondly, there are a majority of young people who are badly influenced by glamour and wealth. They are the one's who wants to live a lavish life just like celebrities. They don't see how or from where celebrities have raised themselves to live this life. They don't see their struggle and start judging them only seeing their appearances on the media. Youth needs to be more intelligent while deciding whom to follow and whom to not. To exemplify, Amitabh Bachan is a veteran actor from whose life youth can learn a lot but if they'll start the following somebody like Ananya Pandey than only glamour they can see and not talent. Accordingly, make a wise choice in selecting your role models.\n\nTo conclude, I would say instead of judging celebrities by seeing, one must read more about them, about their academic qualifications, their involvement with the society, only then one can make the wisest choice and have a role model to follow.",
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"content": "In The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted learn plans Empire State Building also learn Mooring Mast used s original purpose The Mooring Mast planned used docking station dirigibles blimps One reason Mooring Mast could dock places outside US used hydrogen instead helium The excerpt states Most dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium highly flammable huge fire highly populated area Another reason would work violent air currents The excerpt states The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would wirled around mooring mast problem would worry mast taken The last reason law The excerpt states existing law airships flying lower urban areas The building mast close humans let dock mast brilliant idea could done dream",
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"content": "Although our \"twin planet\" has extremely intense conditions, it provides an impeccable opportunity to gather new information and make new discoveries. Although Venus is very similar to earth in size and density, it has some immense differences making it extremely difficult to further explore the planet.\n\nThroughout time, attempts to explore Venus have been attempted. Although few of them turned out succesful, learning experiences were taken away from the trials. A number of things contribute to the dangers surrounding the large planet. The corrosive acid and sky rocketing temperatures make it impossible for any human to get into close proximity with the surface. However, these dangers do not stop the extreme curiosity of scientists. The author claims that venus was once the most earth like planet in the solor system. This sparked the curiosity of scientists, because now there was so much information to learn, but no way to learn it. The close proximity from Venus to earth made it our nearest planetary visit. Venus was sitting right there with abundant information and discoveries, but was impossible to explore. Luckily, discoveries have made it possible to come into closer contact with the planet.\n\nAlthough science is the fuel to the fire, exploring venus is more than just for scientific purposes. Finding new ways to overcome what some may call the impossible says a lot about the human race. Dangers and set backs should not limit the things we are capable of accomplishing, but push us to overcome whatever is in the way. Finding a way around the dangers of venus will not only have a huge impact on the scientists of the world, but also prove what hard work and determination can achieve.",
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"content": "In Winter hibiscus Ho narrator never clearly indicates test Saeng failed However subject matter word choice clear test important Saeng mother also new life Throughout story saeng s longing homeland powering The flood memories came back purchases hibiscus obviously painful part everyday life Saeng working working hard keep memories Vietnam alive knowing must learn live customs lifestyle There somethings dosent need change like passing test Saeng realizes use memories keep spirits alive use motivation This last sentance story impowering learned use things together memory change when hibiscus budding I take test again",
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"content": "The features setting affected cyclist mainly desert There stores rivers lakes hot roads long even snakes road It made harder didnt much water drink",
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"content": "The provided data compares the amount of milk manufactured in 1990, 2000, and 2010 by country. Overall, throughout the years, the Netherlands topped the chart, followed by Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala. While the amount of milk produced in Tanzania and Guatemala eased up, Australia produced fewer milk as the time went by.\nAmong the countires, the dairy produced in the Netherlands and Australia were much higher than the other two. The number of litres produced in the Netherlands slightly fluctuated but remained the highest, which were all in the eleven millions. On the other hand, the Australian also started in their eleven millions in 1990 and 2000 but drastically plunged to nine millions in 2010.\nMeanwhile, Tanzania began significantly lower at 87,000 litres in 1990, leaped up to 142,000 in 2000 and continued to edged up to 155,000 litres in 2010. At the bottom of the table, stood Guatemala which produced only 26,000 litres in 1990. Although the number doubled up to 55,000 in 2000 and constantly rocketed up to 84,000 litres in 2010, the Guatemala finished at only half the amount of Tanzania.",
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"content": "It is true that the advent of technology hasbrought tremendous benefits to human life. While technology can narrow the gapbetween social classes to some extent, I believe that some technological products have set affluent individuals apart from others, as will now be discussed.\n\nOn the one hand, it is true that technology has transformed our lives and reduced the gap between individuals. The availability of technological products has allowed massive numbers of people to live a comfortable life in almost the same way. For example, today nearly every household has at least a television, a fridge or an air-conditioner, all of which help to increase the overall standard of living and narrow the gap between the haves and the have-nots in society. The spectacular growth oflow-cost airlines also means that more people are able to take a flight to the place they want to go to.\n\nLooking the argument in this light, some feel that technology has bridged the gapbetween the rich and the poor. On the other hand, I side with those who argue that some technology has separated wealthy individuals from poorer ones. Many technological products areprohibitively expensive, and only the rich are able to afford them. Luxury cars and private jets, for instance, have created a shining image for the owners, giving them an aura of confidence when they appear in public. Those who live on a meager income, in contrast, could merely enjoy a frugal life with mediocre but necessary consumer products. The idea of possessing the latest technology in the home might befar-fetched to bourgeois individuals.\n\nIn conclusion, although some technological products are produced for the masses, I believe that some others contribute to the difference in lifestyles between rich people and poor ones.",
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"content": "In the current scenario, Traffic Congestion has been one of the most daunting problems experienced by most of the urban people in towns and cities. In this essay, I am going to highlight the causes and the remedial measures to be exercised in order to solve this hurdle.\r\n\r\nFirstly, let us take a look at the causes for the traffic crowding in cities all over the world. To start with, there is a tremendous growth in population in recent years and particularly, in metropolitan cities which ought to see a rise in cars in the city. Furthermore, due to lifestyle enhancement in urban societies,rural people migrate to urban areas which further leads to traffic related problems. The another reason for constant usage of car transport is the unreliable and ineffective public transport as these services have been reduced due to lack of proper funding. The third reason is that society has, in general, become more mobile and in order to lead a luxurious and comfortable life, are greatly inclined towards car as their mode of transportation.\r\n\r\nWhen it comes to remedial measures to solve this problem, we all should rise together to eradicate this issue. The government should provide reliable, decent and safer public transport facilities and initiate optimum funding for the same. This would encourage citizens to use public mode rather than their own private vehicles. Also, government should enhance the roads quality and suppress potholes to ensure smooth functioning of transportation.\r\n\r\nTaking everything into consideration, cities are facing severe traffic related problems due to population growth and poor facilities. However, there are several things that government could do to address the given problem and also we, being the responsible citizens must follow.",
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"content": "Venus is the second planet in our solar system, and despite how close it is to Earth, is largely unexplored. The reason why its been untouched for around 30 years is that Venus is too hot and has too much atmospheric pressure, which would crush and melt any spacecraft on its surface. Another reason is that there are clouds of corrosive sulfuric acid. However, NASA is working on ways to study Venus more safely.\n\nIn the passage, the author talks about why astronomers are facinated with Venus. They talk about how how the astronomers think that Venus used to be more Earth-like than it is today, with its valleys, mountains, and craters, in paragraph 4. Though in pragraph 3, the challenges presented by trying to study Venus more closley have more negatives than positives. One of the biggest problems in that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of the planets in the solar system, despite that Mercury is closer to the sun than Venus. Another problem being faced is the immense atmospheric pressure, which is around 90 times greater than Earth's.\n\nThe author also talks about how NASA is trying to find ways to counteract these problems. One example that they give, in paragraph 7, is that simple electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber that closley emulates the surface conditions of Venus. NASA has found that the technology lasted three weeks under those conditions. Another way that NASA is trying to solve the problems of Venu's surface is by using old, mechanical computers, which don't use the same kind of technology as regular, modern computers, but gears and levers instead.\n\nIn conclusion, putting a spacecraft on the surface of Venus may be a possibility in the future, or we may never find a way to keep a spacecraft on the surface for more than a few weeks at a time, which is cost ineffective. But as the author says in paragraph 8, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts, but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"",
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"content": "The mood created author grateful For grateful parents arriving In likes cook Cuban food listen Cuban music The mood I think also grateful parents brave coming hes grate ful parents love sacrifise siys never forget parents turned simpe house home",
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"content": "My opinion effects computer people A good effect computer people teaches good handeye coordination work doctor anything needs would help better jobs Another reason computers good effects people let chat famile memebers case family went whole new countries trip beable see s like Another one would could learn another states countries around world It tell many people like type culture found probably I want learn texas I look information tell found capital many people live Another good thing could play games friends like types shooting games racing sport arcade type",
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"content": "The scientists here at NASA has uncovered a new discovery.\n\nThe NASA Viking's 1 spacecraft picked up an unusual picture.\n\nThe result was a face. People lately have been curious about how it was created. Some believe aliens did it while some believe it's a landform. That's why we're here for. To prove that it was just a natural landform. Who was here at that time is trifle.\n\nFurthermore, there are evidence proving that it's a natural landform. First of all, do aliens really exist? Are there evidence showing that aliens really do exist? We haven't concluded a lot of evidence about that topic. Some scientists are blabbermouth here so they'll say anything to attract people. Here is an example, some will say it's created by aliens to attract some curious eyes. Face here is another thing to be experimented on. Let's go farther, shall we?\n\nIn addiction, other people who are into fantasies might say they disagree with scientists. There is a reason to believe that statement. People objects because they think since it's Mars, aliens live there. But in reality, theres no such thing like that. According to the article, it's said that\n\nMOC snapped a very clear picture of Face and it was revealed that it was a natural landform. No aliens built it in the end.\n\nScientists at NASA didn't know what it was at first because of the poor image. We tried to do anything to learn more about the Face. It was really hard because of how it was shaped and where it is,\n\nCydonia. That's a really hard place to find. We, first, thought it was just a rock and shadow. But a high class spacecraft proved the theory wrong.\n\nIn conclusion. Face was revelaed by the NASA scientists that it was a natural landform. Some will still disagree but scientists proved it right. In the end, aliens had nothing to do with it. It was just Mars and Face. Looks like the scientists unmasked the Face and revealed what it really was, a mesa.",
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"content": "The mood author created memoir love author finds family nt blood related In author s neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together solidarity friendship NUM The author loves thier parents came many immagrants give children better life NUM The author greatful parents Mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture NUM The author s parents gave great life moving turned simple house",
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"content": "The bar chart respectively illustrates the percentage of Australian people who were living in urban, rural and town among those who were born in and outside this country in 1995 and 2010.\nIn general, in these two years, the proportion of people living in cities had an increase, no matter where they were born. In contrast, the proportion of people living in other two places both had a decrease.\nAt the beginning, the figure of the percentage of city citizens all had a significant increase. For those who were borned in Australia, its number grew from about 50% in 1995 to over 60% in 2010, while for those who were borned outside Australia, there was a 20% increase. Meanwhile, in any given year, the percentage of people who were borned abroad lived in cities was higher.\nSecondly, for those who lived in town, its proportion went down no matter in which year and where peple were borned. But for thoes who lived in rural areas, it is totally different. Although for those had the same birth place, its proportion also went down, the percentage of people who were borned abroad lived in rural areas is higher than that of those who were borned in this country in 1995, yet it is opposite in 2010.",
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"content": "Technology has done amazing things. It has even changed the way society goes about their dails lives. For example scientists today are trying new and creative methos to get children and/or kids invovled with what they're learning in the classroom. They are even going as far as making it to where computers can read your emotions. This is a good way to teach students based on the fact that some students may not be good with asking the treachers questions, or they may not be good with speaking out if they don't understand the lesson. This way they won't have to, and the computers be a tool to help them stay intrested in the lesson and also move foward to the next.\n\nNow some people may be thinking that this won't work, and that how not everyone shows there emotions the same, and yes even though that is correct the scientisit made sure to have a variety of emotions. Even including the mixed ones, such as the painting of the Mona Lisa. \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in a real face of in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece.).\"\n\nThe fact that da Vinci studied human anatomy makes it easier for the scientists such as Dr. Huang to collect data, and/or use the emotions they have based on the painting this man painted. \"His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" This is also a good way to talk about the fact that people can even most of the time read emotions based on what you're friend is doing, or the face that they're making.\n\nNot only are all of these emotions universal but these emotions were also tested by the way the face muscles in humans bodies change when a different emotions occurrs. \"Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis ocuil pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet arounf your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic majoe and different muscle, the risorius. To an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politican or celebirty isn't being truthful.\"\n\nUsing computers to help us teach students is a goos idea. People frown apon technology a lot but in some cases, such as this one, people are only trying to make the lives of the future society become easier then it is, and/or better then it would've been without technology. This will later help us improve as a society and become better with all the things we do in our daily lives.",
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"content": "There many obstacles Empire State buildings owner faced One obstacle enough room dirigible land To help solve problem architect added mooring mast increase buildings height Another obstacle steel frame Empire State building would expanded order height added building Altogether would cost The main reason obstacle safety The owner make sure dirigible flammable Wind nature also played big part deciding go idea The strong winds would make dirigible swing constantly shift This would make dirigible hang people streets New York safe The idea landing dirigibles top empire state building neither safe practical many struggles obstacles plan like ever follow",
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"content": "In a couple of years, cars completely controlled by humans will be outdated. There are positive arguments and negative arguments about driverless cars. I am for positive cars for multiple reasons.\n\nMy first reason that driverless cars are a good idea involves drunk driving. If a preson is drunk and trys to drive somewhere but can not concentrate, he will not be able to drive the car. The text states, \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills, such as navigation through work zones and around accidents\" (Driverless Cars are Coming 7). If a person is drunk and does not respond to the car's warnings, the car will not navigate through the work zone. This feature will elimate accidents caused by somebody who is drunk and is not able to properly function a car by himself.\n\nAnother reason why I am for driverless cars is car awareness. According to the text, \"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming 5). These sensors will completely eliminate blind spots. There are sensors all around the car that will warn it of a different car that is close to it. Many accidents are caused because somebody was going to change lanes on a road, but they did could not see the person that was in their blind spot.\n\nMy third reason that I am for driverless cars is that they have a gas milage that is twice as good as the cars that people drive today. One example from the text is, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\" (Driverless Cars Are Coming 1). Not only will these cars have a better gas milage, but they will also be able to get to more places than a city bus would be able to go. If driverless cars were used instead of regular cars, the world would use half as much gasoline as it already does. That would mean that the world will be able to us gasoline for twice as long and it will take the world twice as long to run out.\n\nIn conclusion, I am for driverless cars. Driverless cars would be much safer on the roads than if humans were controlling cars. Many more lives would be saved if there were driverless cars, and much more gasoline would be saved for the future. Driverless cars will have a positive impact on the whole world.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir I would say loving mood throughout whole memoir Narciso Rodriguez talks loving caring selflessness parents For example paragraph states They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved Also near end paragraph says In Cuba Narciso Sr worked laboratory Rawedia Maria studied chemical engineering In United States start lives entirely taking whatever work could find The faith struggle would lead children better times drove endure hard times two reasons I believe mood memoir author created loving mood Also paragraph says countless extended family members came went often someone staying us temporarily untill able get back feet My parents always kept arms doors open many people considered family knowing would us That final reason I think mood memoir loving mood",
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"content": "Addressing the constantly changing weather issue has long been a challenging task for many scientists. However, there are some who think that people should make adaptation to climate change in lieu of developing an approach to stopping the effects of it. In my opinion, I do not completely agree with this viewpoint because I believe it is not too late for us to deal with this problem.\nTo commence with, several measures could be taken by both Government and individuals to hinder climate change. Firstly, Government should incentivize people to use public transportations instead of private vehicles. This would decrease in the amount of vehicle exhaust which comprises a tremendous carbon footprint. As a consequence, the amount of carbon emissions would be reduced, contributing less to global warming which is a part of climate change. Secondly, people, as individuals, could utilize products made from non-plastic to reduce the amount of plastics. Plastics cannot be completely destroyed, it could remain beneath the earth and pollute the soil. Furthermore, when burning plastic-based products, a large carbon footprint would be dumped into the air. Therefore, by using non-plastic products such as paper bags or paper straws, we could limit the amount of carbon dioxide which leads to global warming.\nAdditionally, trying to live with climate change might lead to several disastrous repercussions. Take Australia as an example, there were forest fires which destroy a large area of Australia land and kill thousands of animals. This disaster is due to the considerable increase in the temperature which is unprecedented in the past. Another serious disaster is the high rainfall patterns in China, making Government release tons of water in hydroelectric dams. As a result, many houses and villages were destroyed, and thousands of people did not have the accommodations. Those disasters are due to the climate change. Therefore, accepting and living with it is not a good idea.\nIn conclusion, although some may have opinions that people should try to adapt to climate change, I believe we should stop it.",
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"content": "Many uncommon things happen causing people to be very fascinated with a certain subject. Any time something to do with space occurs, many people freak out or become fascinated with the subject. When something to do with space does occur, then usually people believe alien life forms. But with a cleaner and better camera the photos revealed that it was a natural landform and not an alien monument after all.\n\nWith an even better camera lense than before the picture is still proof that shows it is a normal, typical landform. Even with small objects you would still be able to clearly see if the object is a landform or a alien life form. The natural landform is equivalent to a butte or mesa. The \"face\" on Mars is still a like to a normal landform on Earth.\n\nThe form can not be life like or be alien like due to the amount of information and facts that NASA has to back up its ideas. The conspiracy theorists don't have as many facts as NASA to back up their information and ideas. NASA has majority of the information and facts which over rules the conspiracy theorists information and facts.",
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"content": "Heavy traffic congestion is causing troubles in different cities and sub-urban areas all around the world. Growing population and becoming solvent financially are the main reasons for such enormous amount of traffic on the road which can be controlled by decentralizing the cities as well as implementing appropriate traffic rules.\nAs most of the people are moving to cities and towns to lead a modern life with all sorts of amenities, high traffic volume is increasing immensely since most of them are looking for a better living. Despite of having limited areas to live, many people are moving in the cities from rural areas which are causing excessive pressure on the road. However, because of the financial development of the city-dwellers, many of them are able to buy their own vehicles instead of using public transports. Since the number of private transport is increasing greatly, roads are becoming more congested to hold on to the large amount of vehicles. According to the latest report from BBC, almost 50 new vehicles are entering on the street of Dhaka, which is the main reason for the unthinkable traffic congestion of the city. According to that report, growing financial flow and excessive population are the main reasons for such amount of traffic. \n\nDecentralizing the cities and implementing traffic laws will reduce the traffic volume efficiently. Since most of the modern facilities are available in urban life, decentralization will make sure of availability of those facilities in rural areas as well, which will demotivate rural people to migrate to the city areas. In addition, strict monitoring on traffic system will also ensure free flow of the traffic which is essential to reduce the traffic volume. Dhaka Metropolitan Police have imposed high penalty for breaking traffic laws in Gulshan and Banani recently, and the traffic condition of these areas have improved dramatically. \n\nTo conclude, it is quite certain that high traffic volume is causing due to the increased population and improved overall economy, while maintaining traffic regulation properly as well decentralizing the cities will help to improve the whole scenario.",
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"content": "I think that this face reading technology should be used for students in a classroom.\n\nI think this because if a student is confused or doesn't understand a question sometimes it is embarassing to raise your hand and ask a question. Often times when students ask a question that other peers don't have they can get made fun of and bullied for it.\n\nStudents could also use this technology for when they are bored in class, if the facial action coding system sees this it can put new activities on the computer to keep the student focused and on task in class.\n\nOne con to this idea that i have noticed is that it would be very expensive to get this modern technology in schools across America.\n\nEspecially catholic schools that recieve a big chunk of their spending money from donations and need money for every need of the building, athletics, academics, etc.\n\nI strongly support the idea of having this technology in classrooms across the United states, I feel like it would raise the level of quality education and even lower the level of bullying across schools.\n\nI think they should avoid using this in elementary schools because it should be important to learn to\n\ndevelop good social skills and how to communicate with people while you are in elementary school. However, in grades 6-12 i think this technology could be extremely benefial to students.",
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"content": "Exploring Venus\n\nThe author supports the idea about study the planet Venus because this article talks about that Venus is a planet that was like the Earth ithasa surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. But Venus has the hottest surface temperature of our solar system even if Mercury is closer to our sun. The National Aeronaustics and Space Administration (NASA) is thinking about to send humans to Venus, many researchers are working on innovation that would allow our machines to have knowledge of Venus. Venus is the closest in distance and neighbor of the Earth and Mars even that, the pressure is 90 times greater than the any preassure of the Earth and that Venus's temperature is around of the 170 degrees but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on Earth.\n\nIn conclusion, scientist are trying to innovate the technology to support the conditions that Venus has, and study more of it, like what kinds of thinks human can find in the planet, or some resources that we don't have, the curiosity of human should not stop by the danger that is outside of our knowledge.",
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"content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph show Saeng wont give keep trying In story memories old country encouraged strong For example flower made sad end made better Also beginning didnt really like new changes missed home end memories back home new country Those reasons I believe author concludes story paragraph",
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"content": "Just another day working at the Jet Propulsion Lab. Day's at the Lab went by as any other day for the scientist's, not finding anything new up in space, just a few minor event's here and there, but nothing big. I went in my office, and was informed today we were going to try and find any possible landing site's for Viking 1's sister ship, Viking 2. As usual we went to work. Orbiting Mars for what seemed like an eternity! I'm literally bored out of my mind, until out of the corner of my eye I see something, not just a star or anything, but to my eyes looked like a human face staring right back at us through Viking 1.\n\nConfusion is all us scientist's felt when we saw that face on Mars, just plain fear and confusion. Nothing was spoken much about it among us scientist's since we were all super shocked and speechless, that was until we were on our lunch break. All I heard was \"Alien's\", really alien's can they possibly pin this \"face\" on Aliens! The table next to me also seemed to think alien's made this Egyptian-type face. I dont know what came over me something just clicked and I said \"How can you possibly pin this on alien's?!\" of course this started a one-on-one argument with me and another scientist \"What do you mean, how can it not be Alien's\" he answered. \"First of all, it was spotted near Cydonia, a part of Mars where Martian Mesa's are commonly being found everyday, so how do we not know it isn't just another Mesa?\" \"If you think this is a mesa, how would it take form to look like a human being's face? Dont you think that is too much of a coincidence to happen?!\" at that I left it alone, maybe it was too much of a coincidence, but that wasn't going to affect my thought on the \"Mesa\"\n\nThe word on the \"Face\" spreaded around the world, becoming a hot topic for people everywhere, most of them thinking it was made by Alien's. I didnt really get much into it until that scientist kid came up to me again, \"Still think it wasn't made by alien's?!\" \"Of course, why wouldn't I?\" \"How can you not think it was alien's! The picture became known to the world and everyone think's it was alien's, which they are probably right!!\" \"How can we know for sure this was created by alien's!? Think about it we dont have great technology yet, that \"Mesa\" was in the form of a face because our photo was too blurry and it was really cloudy!!\" I really didnt want to end up on the wrong foot with this guy so i just walked away.\n\nApril 5,1998- I walk into the office and apparently we are going to take a look at Cydonia for the \"Face\" again. This was actually a releif to me, because I know that now our technology is way more advanced and we could see with a sharper picture what this thing really is, a mesa. So it happened Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and took a picture ten time's sharper than the old one! As to my conclusion, the egyptian face ended up to be a mesa! This mesa took form of a face because of the shadow's that went over the mesa. As I heard of this new's I couldn't help but look back at that one scientist, and whipering \"Look who the right one is now!\" with the most accomplishing smirk on my face that I can make. ;]",
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"content": "How would you feel if a teacher knew how you were feeling? Woul you feel uncomfortable? Or would you feel annoyed? Today technology is able to do that. They plan on using it during class to detect weither a student is confused or bored. If they used a technology to see if im confuse, annoyed, or bored I will not like it.\n\nIt does sound nice to a teacher to tell if a student is confused because they can help them, but if the teacher calls them during class the student will also feel embarass. Some students will be going through stuff and if they dont want talk about it and you ask them how their doing it will make them even more upset or really uncomfortable. In the article it says, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" What if therre is more emotions? How will they calculate that? Everybody is different how they know if some is happy but their actually upset. Everybody makes different faces when their happy, scare, and etc.\n\nIn conclusion, i feel like this idea is not a good plan. When im at school i want to feel comfortable, and if somes annoys me then it's okay for me to know im annoyed not the teacher business. Everyone gets bored at one point, I bet 80% wake up saying, \"I dont want to go toschool, it's boring.\" Plus what if these calculations are wrong, technology always a bug or something so why should we rely on a technology to tell us how we are feeling? I dont want nobody else to know if im upset or not it's my business.",
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"content": "One time planned fishing trip know He told pack suit case three days worth clothes I said said going tomorrow causins ryan I excited I flew room pounded cloths looked everything I would need I asked said going fishing trip river pike The I got new cherrywood fishing pole really nice underspin real So I got fishing poles ready packed went sleep I could get early come alarm went I tierd I could barely see uncles house I get ready Once got uncles house met left I wanted sleep car I couldnt got cool huge cliffs hills even sas bear river stopped went river clear mud hole withe millions frog When finally got made wait unpack Once causin got unpacking went right store fish first cast I caught little incher After caught nothing came back got roasted hotdogs fire The next morning got early fished lake caught nothing That night went fishing river still caught nothing The guy owned cabin said cath pike rained seven feet wernt feeding The next got early fished In morning I one hit nothing afterward At lunch found little eat lunch actual rock cave scared bear Later went little canyon really hard clime I almost fell halfway I got looked root We saw another bear eating berries video taped killed chipmunk rock threw Wham almost took pole I fought ten minutes I waited waited digantic pike shapped line I still never seen pike",
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"content": "Nowadays, the wide variety of technological advancements are increasing and bring many benefits to human life. While technology can narrow the gap between social classes, i would argue that improved equipments have created a distance in social relationship.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, technology has improved many opportunities for poor people in income activities. Unemployed people can find available jobs that don't require qualifications or experience. For instance, they can easily find housemaids on applications which helps housewives to earn a stable salary. Moreover, many volunteer associations are established by people with well-off lives to help some diffilcult situations through seeing on internet. For example, a huge of people use modern phone that they often share or see the hard life of people with poor conditions that their lives are better after.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the cost of technology is quite higher which is not suitable for all the people in society, such as Artificial Intelligence (AI). Both technologies are facilitating rich people to lead a more productive life. Futhermore, it not only improves lifestyle of favouring rich but also creates barriers for the poor people in availing some fundamental rights as health and wellness services because these thing are expensive. For example, private hospitals are normally equipped with the most advanced technologies which costs a lot to treat cancer and some cases had dead because of lacking of money. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I admit that technology plays a crucial part in our life, but it was made for human purposes because today's society often pursues material life, technology creating a gap between rich and poor is inevitable.",
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"content": "First of all,plenty of international tourism promotions have widened the tourists’ interest about travel abroad.As a classic question and answer by George Herbert Leigh Mallory and the reporter of New York Times about why he enjoys hiking,he said the reason is that the mountain is here.It has to be admitted that both new culture and unknown adventure deeply catch their excited hearts.\n\nSecondly,during the process of a sweeping trend of exchanges between countries,it is much easier for tourists to have an international trip.A simple case in point is that 10 years ago if a person wants to travel abroad in China,he would prepare his procedure a month in advance;in contrast,he can start his trip three days from the time he had this idea.\n\nFrom my point of view,the international traveling wave can bring many benefits.Obviously,the new tape of trips can enhance cultural exchanges such as the global popularity of Chinese food and western cuisine.In addition,this trend also helps improve countries economy and develops their service industry.For instance,France,New Zealand,India,Thailand and so on are the beneficiary of this wave.Among these countries,tourism accounts for nearly 20 percent of Thailand’s gross domestic products and most of these accounts are provided from international tourists.",
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"content": "What would it be like without cars? Well acording to the passages there are a lot of cities that are trying this car free world. The one city that are free of cars is Vauban,Germany. So lets see how they like the car free communtiy.\n\nThe frist place were looking at is Vauban,Gremany. they have a total car free rule. they cant have car in the town . but if they have to park them they have to buy a space for $40,000 along with a house. As a result 70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars.57 percent sold a car to move here. Vauban completed inn 2006 , Is a example of a growing trend in Europe, The united states and elsewhere to separate suburban life from auto use. As a componet of a movement called \"smart planning\".\n\nThe end of car culture. President Obama's ambitious goals are to curb the United states' greenhouse gas emissions. Unvail last week, will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in America behavior,recent studies suggest that America are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year gose by. Americas love affair with its vehicals seems to be cooling down. when adjusted for population growth ,the number of miles driven in the united states peaked in 2005 and stedily dropped thereafter. Therefor if the pattern is perists and many sociologist belive it will ,It will have benefical impacts on the world's carbon emissions. so let all try to be car free and hgelp the enviroment!",
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"content": "In recent years, many people are concerned to discover the history of their residence. This essay will explore what might be the causes and methods of how society can find out the information. \r\n\r\nThe primary reason for exploring their residence is due to the huge investment in owning a property. Therefore, they are keen on taking precautious measures to secure their financing, which can be threatening if the property has terrible notorieties. For instance, if a criminal act has occurred in a building or a place, such as murder or others, people fear such incidents will somehow happen in the future. This bad reputation could drop the market value of the place. Besides that, homeowners are more concerned about the durability of their house structures due to climate change that affects every continent in the world.\r\n\r\nThere are various methods to discover it. The first one is to find any news related to the districts you live in on the internet. Secondly, to interview local residents in the town as they have been living in a particular area for a long time, they must have heard many myths as well as experienced some by themselves. In this case, individuals can acquire first-hand evidence. Thirdly, paying a visit to the construction office as they can provide the details about materials to build the houses. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in many countries, people are more intrigued by the history of the places they intend to live in, for various reasons such as their families' safety and money investment. There are many approaches to find out how the houses are built: internet, local persons and offices.",
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"content": "Undoubtedly, these days, either people have to find a way to better weather conditions or adapt themselves in response to climate changes. It is often argued that people are able to adapt themselves to climate alterations, but it lasts for thousand years. I fully agree with this fact that it is better for people to remodel climate and not to try to reconcile themselves with this situation. In turn, this essay will discuss why preventing climate remodeling is better than adapting to this circumstance and the possible ways for people to alter climate.\n On the one hand, the more climate alters, the more life becomes harder. That is to say that people were able to suit themselves with the present climate within the millions of years, therefore humans cannot live easily with altered weather, while are able to quickly exchange their conditions lives. As a strategy, people can plant trees to decrease global warming, which nowadays is converted to a serious problem for governments. Trees are unthinkably capable to absorb the CO2 (carbon dioxide), which in high concentrations can damage human body cells and eventually leads to cell death. For instance, in forest countries, several kinds of cancers such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are extremely rare. In my opinion, enhancement of cultivated trees can secure the survival of planet Earth. To sum up, tree cultivation can help people to change the climate, significantly. \n On the other hand, the more increased consumption of fossil fuels, the more altered climate. Approximately all scientists believe that consumption of fossil fuels increase the atmospheric pollutants as well as the weather temperature causing several damages to the environment such as increased melting icebergs and fires. For example, in the recent decade that the weather temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 oC, the rate of fires over the world increased by up to 12%. Therefore, usage of fossil fuels is considered as the main agent of global warming. I believe that consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced by humans to decreased atmospheric pollutants happens. To take something into consideration, people have to decrease the consumption of fossil fuels, significantly. Alongside these contents, in some situations, people can adapt themselves with difficult environmental conditions not easily but hardly.\n Some people are of the opinion that modification of climate change can happen easily, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that the enhancement of cultivated trees and reduction of consuming fossil fuels can help people to propel the climate changes to the desired side.",
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"content": "Dear I think computers bad wonign homework people playing much computers getting aditivf computers dayise mit talking people nt thr computer vary dagis sam thing haveing myspace teh computer vaery dangish ther dad people going computer people pating bad stuf computer",
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"content": "The diagram illustrates the way in which drinking water is produced from rain water.\nOverall, converting water from nature into those for human daily use is a cyclical process that consists of collecting, filtering, storing, chemical treating and making the new product for reuse.\nAfter falling from the rooftop, the water is collected by the gutter, following the direction in the drain underground. Once there, the water has to undergo the filter, which mechanically removes its impurities. This is the initial cleaning step for rainwater.\nThe water is then poured into a storage tank, waiting for the next cleaning experience. In this stage, it is transported to the water treatment. Chemicals are essential for this process as they will deeply remove the residue that cannot be washed by the water filter and make water fit for consumption. Finally, the water experiencing double cleaning process, is delivered to households for different daily utilization. And once it is used and becomes rain, it goes through the recycling process all over again.",
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"content": "Being able to prove someones true emotion through a science method is a bright idea. Therefore, after reading about the Facial Action Coding System it is very benefical in many ways. In paragraph one the experts states that \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Meaning this data isn't just something from a lab science teacher this is acurrate data from a new coming modern software. Having a computer connect with humans on a different level than just historical information can only help the society. Experts are only trying to better the way the human brian and body functions. In the text it states that Dr. Huang and Dr. Nicu are coming together to increase better communication between computers and humans. \"are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\". These two master minds are making sure readers know every step by step it takes to create this software without doing any harm. For example \"computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the faces; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\". Meaning the software must reflect off a human like body or it wouldn't function correctly. \"Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit\". After the doctors finds out what it takes for the software to be a sucess they then go deeper into networking with a psychologist. Reaching out to the creater of FACS (Facial Action Coding System) Dr. Paul Eckman. Knowing that this software isn't basic Eckman simply starts out with the software using only the six basic emotions, which are happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness. In the text it states that these facial expressions are world wide \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\", Experts say that the FACS can identify true emotions through a real face or painted one \"the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real or painted face\". In paragraph 5 it states that experts studied closely to make sure a painted face could be useful with the software \"studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions\". This new software can help students function in the classroom when they are confused or bored they can easily get help rather than being ignored \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" says Dr. Huang. Using this software can let others know when someone is genuine happy or if they are just putting on a show. \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one\". experts say in a real smile the corners of your mouth is lifted rather in a forced on your mouth is being stretched. The Facial Action Coding System isn't only helping society grow it's helping science better as well \"making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions\".",
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"content": "In memoir author obviously seems grateful thankful states multiple times passage When recalling memories proves warm happy mood The cookings skills parents passed says s grateful passionate Cuban music says still adores day The author also states s sense family blood relative neighborhood well All different cultures neighborhood Spanish Cuban Italian came together great solidarity friendship The author thankful fact s actually told parents could never done something courageous The mood memoir strong positive way also writes way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age To wrap memoir mentions never forget parents turned simple house home",
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"content": "Cars, they are used for many purposes including taking the kids to school, going to work and many others but have you ever thought about what vehicals are doing to the Earth or the people on the Earth? Well cars have to use gasoline or diesel to move that is just how it always has been but these fossil fuels are actually poluting the Earth, and making the air we breath very \"smoggy.\" If we can limit our usage of our cars there can be many advantages including having cleaner air to breath, more excercize, and also less expenses. Humans could survive without cars if we give it a shot.\n\nTake a deap breath outside, what do you smell? Listen, what do you hear? Cars honking? A loud engine of a diesel truck? Well most likely because cars have been around for a long time and without them how would people get to work or school, but have you ever thought about what these cars and trucks are letting out of their tailpipe? Source 1 \"In German Suburb,Life goes on with cars\" says that there has been \"a huge imediment to curent efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes\" these greenhouse gases are clogging up our atmosphere and our air. Without cars air pollution would go down emensly, and would be a big advantage. In Paris there has been \"near-record polution\"- \"Paris bans driving to to smog\" By: Robert Duffer.\n\nNow a days when people hear excersize they would run and hide but it's mostly because we have all these vehicals that can take us places without the dreaded walking or running. Americans today can get a cheeseburger in minutes through a drive-thru in their vehicals but have you ever imagined life without a car, in Columbia on \" The Day without Cars\" as said in \" Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogata By: Andrew Salsky \"Columbians hiked, biked, skated...to work during a car free day\" and even \"parks and sports centers also have smooth sidewalks\" which has \"dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants...have cropped up\" The car free day has made excersize a little easier, and now with smoother side walks and more sports centers people in Columbia can have more opportunities to take a walk.\n\nWhen you have a car its not unusual to have to go get gas atleast once every one or two weeks, but these expenses can pile up when you have to buy gas or even the oil change of your vehical. What if you get in a accident will your insurence cover it, cars and trucks take a lot of expenses and it can be hard to pay for it all and when President Obama gave the ambitious goal to lesson the greenhouse emissions last week \"Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\" -\"The End of Car Culture\" By:Elisabeth Rosenthal. The usage of less cars can has a great advantage on your wallet.\n\nAs said in \"The End of Car Culture\"- \"Pedestian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and piblic transportation traffic are woven into a commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected networkto save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" Limiting your car usage can have many advantages including making Earth's air cleaner, creating a way for more excersize, and also less expences. Cars will still be in use but maybe we can limit it to only a few.",
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"content": "Luke really enjoyed the Seagoing Cowboys program. If you like helping people or takeing care of things thin this is the job for you. The Seagoing Cowboys helped take care of cows,hores, and mules that where over seas. Luke was 18 before arriving in Greece, that ment he could sing up for miliary service. He was on his cattle-boat trip when he signe u for the miliary. They had plenty of food and water to feed the anmials and themselves.\n\nWhen you are a Seagoing Cowboy you get to travel a lot of places. Luck had been on 19 trips before they discharged him in 1947. If you like traveling then this is for you. They went all the way to China and it took them one whole month. They went to a lot of different places. Luck though all of his trips where very special.\n\nLuck had come a long way since he was a kid. Luck grew up in in the country. He helped his aunt Katie out on the farm. He didn't have the best life when he was a kid. When Luke became a Seagoing Cowboy it opened up the world for him.\n\nWhen Luke was a Seagoing Cowboy it was much more than an advernture even though he did travel a lot. Luke was very greatful for the opportunity. Luke saw that other countries don't have a lot of stuff like we do. He saw that they where in need. That awareness stayed with him almost his whole life.\n\nLuke didn't just work he had a lot of fun on board. They played a lot of games like fencing, boxing, table-tennis tournaments, games, reading, and whittling made the time go by pretty quick. It was a lot easier to play the games when the animals where unloaded.\n\nHe sometimes went to places where war had just ended to help them in need. They also played baseball and volleyball games in the empty spaces where the animals usest to be.\n\nLuke was a very kind harted person. He never though about just himself. He would go back and do it all over again. Luke was a very thoughful person. Tell me would you ever be a Seagoing Cowboy.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows Saeng come weaknesses succeed newhome What In spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again It means shell try Test try new test make like wheres shes",
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"content": "People in some parts of the world are increasingly being curious to know about the history of their living buildings. There are some possibilities for this fact, for example, some individuals are proud of living in an ancient house with historic items belonging to many years ago, or they are admiring ancient architectures, and so on. \r\n\r\nAs the first reason for this case, some people are willing to live in a historic building due to the feeling they might have, such as being part of their profound history or being loyal to their past kings. For example, almost everyone is trying to keep their old museum safe not only to attract much attention but also to save it for their posterities. Therefore, they desire to share this feeling with other ones. As another reason, some individuals are interested in studying past history, and one of the best ways to expand their knowledge is to refer to the architecture of that time in which there are many mysterious hints.\r\n\r\nSome feasible ways to find out more about the history of their buildings are reading as many books as possible. Although some manuscripts are not reliable to some extent, they may ask an expert librarian to help them find original books. Another possible way to research their houses is to use the Internet; for instance, there are a large number of websites that provide significant information about some regions' background, which can probably underestimate the era of the building around those regions.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, an increasing number of people are becoming fascinated to know about the history of their living buildings due to the good feelings that these can give to them or their enthusiasm towards architectural houses. For these reasons, they can easily find some information about their houses.",
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"content": "Driverless cars will bring great benefits to the human race. They can provide a level of safety that many people are unable to provide, and they can allow for new freedoms and options for those on the road. They can take people to the hospital if someone is injured, and they can also bring a person to his/her home, if needed. The possibility of driverless cars is slowly becoming a reality, thanks to the work done by various companies. Google has already created a modified car capable of maky of these things, and other auto makers have followed in Google's footsteps. Automated cars will be helpful in the future due to the safety brought by the introduction of promising technology, and the steady progress in the fields of robotics and cars.\n\nThe technology used in driverless cars is very advanced, able to process information and respond in the time comparable to a human. They can respond generally better to dangerous situations than that of the human mind as well. \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\"(2). These cars are trustworthy in a safety sense, and they know when it is neccessary to give control back to the driver.\"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead repuires human skills\"(7). This means that not all control is relinquished to the car. Truthfully, most of these driverless cars actually build from a driver assistance system, where the car helps the person drive rather that drive for the person. Automated cars can soon be possible for all of humanity.\n\nHumanity has already come a long way from the past, when people would dream of robotic cars. Car companies have developed technologies that can make those dreams a reality. \"'There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting. The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there, and the mapping wasn't there. Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars.'\" Nowadays, cars are now able to have their own radar systems. Google modified a car to have a motion sensor, GPS, and four radar sensors. In the future, many automotive companies plan to have their own driverless cars. Tesla plans to have a car by 2016. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan will push to have automated cars by 2020. Progress is already happening in the car industry.\n\nDriverless cars are a possibility for humanity. In the past, people would dream of being able to sit in a automated car. Today, the world's first robotic cars are being produced. There are those who oppose the idea of having a robot drive, but there are results that speak for the effectiveness of driverless cars. In the future, there will be many more automated cars, and there will also be many less deaths and injuries on the roads.",
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"content": "Luke thought it was fun to participate in a Seagoing Cowboys program. It was an adventure for Luke also. Luke got to play games and meet new people. When Luke and other people had some free time they would play baseball,volleyball,and table tennis. Luke's job was scary sometimes one night Luke was the watchman. What a watchman does is check the animals every hour after making the report to the captain Luke slipped on a slippery ladder on his back. Luke's heart was pounding when he was going feet first into an opening side of the ship ,but a small thing of metal along the edge stopped him sliding. Luke was very happy that he was alive, but he could not work for a little bit because of cracked ribs. Luke's job is scary sometimes but most of the time it was an adventure for him. Luke said that this program \"made me more aware of people of other countries in needs.\"\n\nThe awareness stayed with Luke leading his family members to host a lot of international students for many years.",
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"content": "Dear State Senator\n\nThe Electoral College is very unfair to voters. Voters can't always control who there electors vote for. It's not fair to just have like 20 representatives voting for a whole entire state of like 40 million people. What's the point in voting for a president if your not really voting for a president when your actually voting for candidate electors who will in turn elect the president.\n\nI believe the process should be thrown out all together. The Electoral College is an unfair, outdated, and an irrational process. The winner take all system defines the word unfair. It awards all electors to the winning presidential canidate. Then the governor prepares a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\"which declares the winning presidential candidate who will represent your state. Where in that is the citizen's say? Exactly we barely have any \"say\" in anything.\n\nI understand the Electoral College process has been in place for a very long time but its time to just get rid of it. Im quite sure citizens of america don't like feeling like they have no say what so ever. Voters also get confused about the electors and often vote for the wrong candidate. The best arguments in favor of the Electoral College are mostly assertions without much basis in reality and the arguments agaisnt it are spurious at best.\n\nThe most worrying thing is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote which will cause for the election to be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Its not democratic in a modern sense and is very unfair. With so many problems being associated with the Electoral College it would it be easier to just get rid of it and do us all a favor.",
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"content": "In story Do exceed posted speed limit many features setting affect cyclist First beginning story says The sun beginning beat down temperature beginning rise really affected cyclist plenty water supply Next story says I travelling high deserts California June Californias temperature really high June one hottest months year The temperature high cyclist much water left This affecting cyclist tired hot getting dehydrated Finally end story terrains changing hills road smooth pavement dirt road hills making cyclist cycle harder go past making tired Also temperature still high barely water left By end ride setting roads temperature distance ride made cyclist exguasted dehydrated",
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"content": "I Luke Bomberger was part of the Seagoing Cowboys. Ihave seen a lot of unique things sence I have been on the ship like Dolphens, unique buildings and statues. Im going to give you some facts on why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. Number 1: you can traval the world if thats what you dream, if it wasnt your dream thin you would still seethe things you wanted to go see Number 2: it could change your life like me you could get a job their and paid a lot of money. i cant read your mindbut why would you want to take this job or go. I left when it was1945. In august 19 thy recievedd orders to report to New Orleans. I was on the boat on my way to europe , and world war 2 was going on about time i got their world war 2 was over. It took memonths to get to europe, but when I got their it was worth the wait.",
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"content": "\"Hello everyone and welcome to Cloud Nine News. Today we are going to talk about a spectacular program called The Seagoing Cowboys. I'm Alex your host and this is Lucy co-host!\"\n\n\" Hey laidies and gentlemen! But I'm not the only new person today give it up for Luke. A very experienced Seagoing Cowboy.\" The last of Lucy's sentence was hushed by the croud cheering and clapping.\n\n\" Thank you everyone but it's not me that you need to cheer for it's the Seagoing Cowboys. I'm here to tell you about what they did for me. The oppertunity was astonishing for a small town boy like me I remember saying on my first day, the cattle-boat trips were an unbeleiveable opertunity for a small town boy like me. It's true too I mean it was a great thing for me. I thank my old friend Don Reist for my going.\" The croud cheered.\n\n\" Besides the benifit of helping people I got to explore many different places. I got to go to Europe. I got to go to China. I even got a tour of an excavated castle. Not only the oppertunity was great but being able to travel was amazing.\"\n\n\" The crew was awsome. When all of the cattle or whatever animals we had were off. We played baseball and volleyball where the animals were. Then we did table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games to pass the time.\"\n\n\" Wow! Maybe i should join and be the first Seagoing Cowgirl...\" Lucy decided to but in.\n\n\" That'd be really neat,\" Luke praised the idea. \" I think I'll tell captain about that.\"\n\n\" Okay now any questions?\" Alex sounded desperate to get off the cowgirl idea.\n\n\" You with the red shirt!\" Lucy called excidedly.\n\n\" How long were you in the program?\"\n\n\" I don't remember how long but I know that I went out to sea 9 times!\" Luke answered.\n\n\" You in the blue shirt with the neat sign!\"\n\n\" It's not a question it's a comment. I'm going to join the program!\" After the boy said that murmers spread across the room most saying \"Me too\".\n\n\" Well there you have it the reasons and answers to questions about the Seagoing Cowboys Program see you tomarrow night with a laundry cleaning women..?\"\n\n\" Bye Luke!\" Lucy called before the show ended.",
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"content": "It is often considered few masses argue that news is a waste of time, so it is nothing to relate with an individual's life. while reading news articles and watching a news channel is a waste of time. Thus I completely disagree with the statement which leads to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nAnalyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind in that worldwide information is essential for everyone. Therefore, in the contemporary ,era multifarious people use to read current affairs on a daily basis so they can be updated on the time. Moreover, the news channel runs 24 hours. Thus, it will help individuals to look around at what is happening over the globe. For example, a survey conducted by The Times of India mentioned in their article that a maximum number of humans use to read newspapers in the morning. Hence, few people miss reading the news early in the sunrise, so acknowledge daily updates on their cell phones.\r\n\r\nProbing ahead, reading and watching the news is not a waste of time. Furthermore, it will enhance your knowledge. Besides, daily news help to spread awareness among netizens, so they can have a precaution in their life. However, some news is found to spread fear in society. Hence, to decrease the crime rate around the globe. For instance, some researchers use to look around various resources in newspapers, so they can innovate new things with common notions. \r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, according to the, argument one can reach the conclusion that reading the news is not a waste of time. Thus, it helps citizens to know about various happening in the world.",
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"content": "Television has become an important part of many people's life. Some may consider it a bad source for children due to the addiction whereas others believed it has many benefits based on the knowledge gained from from it. In this essay i'll give my opinion based on the pros and cons of television for children. \r\n\r\nTV has been used since years for the purpose of political news, education, entertainment etc. It has many advantages for child development as it provides programs related to worlds history, giving information about the different things around the world such as various animals, arts etc which helps them to develop various skills and improves learning abilities. It also provides entertainment for the children which would help them have some relaxing time from the daily busy schedule. \r\n\r\nAlthough TV has many advantages for the child's growth and development, it has many disadvantages too. As long term use of it makes addiction for the children which leads to distraction from rest of the things as they find it a good thing to spend time whereas it leads to weakening of the bonds with family, friends and physical activities. kids may not like getting involved in social gatherings and meeting people. Long hours of screen time would have an impact on child's eyes, mental health and thinking ability.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion it has both good and bad effects on the child's health and development. But it totally depends on the parents how they allow the children to use it.",
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"content": "Dear newspaper name I believe computers negative influence people When people computers day less time exercising They alot danger spend less time family These reasons computers dontbenefit society In time spent computers equals less time exercising With obesity rate rising one wants unable regular activitys With spending time computer would using get weight unhealthy It also makes many people feel self consiou If dont enough time exercising keep eating become even self consious More bring danger family There many places internet meet new people But know people seem If spend time computer increase chances get personal assuts even give personal information So take risk Just get computer Even dont meet internet assuter still glued computer cauzing likley harrased I definatly dont want family The last reason important family If spending time computer family This time verry important never know family gone And verry scarry topic think I know people spend time family On another note survey shows children spend time family less minutes computer grades higher classes Would nt want make honnor role school In conclusion computers negiteve effect people Spending time computer causes less time spent exercising dangerharm people less time spent family Would nt rather spend less time computer Thank time",
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"content": "Lukes point of vew is that Luke is trying to get people to partisapatein the seagoing cowboys program. it would be a good thing because people get to see the sea. And geting to be able to see the sea is a one in a life time chance because you may not be able to get anouther chance to go in the sea on a boat. anouther thing that would be cool to see is the world war ll just got over and you could see the boats and all the debre that the world war left behind.\n\nSome people may get scared because they are in the middel of the sea and they lile to be with there famielys at night so the familys can keep them safe.\n\nsome people might think that when you are in the middel of the sea you are risking your life and you should not risk your life to go at sea.\n\nThe trip is much more than just any adernarry trip the trip will open up the world to you or any person that might go on this wonder full trip to go see what the sea looks like.\n\nAnouther thinn is that all the money that you spend to go on the trip goes to the people that need the money the most will reseve the money.",
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"content": "First,Professor. Thomas Huang of the beckman Institute for advanced Science at the University of Illinois working with\n\nProfessor. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate which the proces begin when a computer constructs a 3-D computer Model of the Human face that contains all 44 major muscles in the model that must move like Human.\n\nSecond,The Facial Expressions of some individuals often show varying degrees of expression and the new emotion-recognition software tracks facial movements in a real face or in the painted face if Mona Lisa. Each expression of a Human is being compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). In fact us Humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\" everyday.\n\nThird,Mona Lisa's Demonstration really intended to bring a smile on your face, For example: if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad will follow but if your frown the next ad will be different,which makes the classroom computer recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor and with the same technology it can be used to make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.\n\nLast,Our Muscles called Orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's feet around your eyes, in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorious. But, to an expert faces don't lie; the muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\n\nIn Conclusion, The Theory of Emotion is about moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions,but it also may help produce them, And empathy may happen at some point of time when we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.",
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"content": "In this contemporary world, diseases are being increased rapidly and also several new issues are arising. However, there are individuals who opine that environmental pollution and housing issues should be controlled by the government in order to reduce sickness. It is somewhat true in my opinion. In this essay, I will state my clear opinion.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the main reasons for environmental issues are the increased number of motor vehicles which emits harmful gas which affects both humans and the surroundings. The department should conduct test for every vehicles and should impose strict fines on the illegal one's. Apart from this, the authorities can also increase the public transport facilities which will reduce the usage of private vehicles on the road which will surely decrease the pollution. An another reason is the burning of unwanted chemicals which damages the respiratory system as well as the ozone layer.",
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"content": "Environmental pollution has become a threat to mankind. Imposing heavy taxes on fuel consumption for vehicles is considered by few as the most fitting solution to combat these ecological crises. I do not agree with this statement because there are several alternatives to tackle these problems.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, increasing the price of petrol will help to reduce environmental changes to some extent.But it will have perilous impacts on the market of society. Petrolpetrol is an integral part of transportation. Therefore, the high cost of this fuel will not only cause the prices of all essential commodities to increase but also the value of the currency in a particular nation will start depreciating. Moreover, this will lead to inflation and in turn surplus the poverty ratio. For example, in 2019 the cost of all fuels such as petrol and diesel were hiked due to which the economical status of the country was detrimentally degraded.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the government can take alternative measures to mitigate these issues. Primarily, the usage of renewable resources as a substitute for petrol and diesel will act as a booster to curb environmental depletion. For instance, biodiesel is made up of vegetable oils and animal fats and it emits a low level of gases into the atmosphere. This can be widely used in most transportation modes.\r\n\r\nSecondly, by improving public transportation and diminishing the amount of travelling, the governing authority can motivate people to use public transport instead of individual cars. These measures can help to keep the climate clean and also reduce traffic congestion.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, amplifying the cost of non-renewable fuels is not a feasible option. Instead, improving the efficiency of public transport and investing in renewable energy sources are better alternatives that ought to be considered.",
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"content": "Do you enjoy traveling? Do you want to travel the universe?\n\nScientist have been working on finding ways to travel to other planets near us and then maybe one day travel farther.\n\nStudying Venus is a worthy pursuit because, it is one of the closest planets in travel, its weather conditions and its geograhy is the closest fro any other planets.\n\nIn our solar system there are 8 planets and the nearest ones to us on Earth are Venus and Mars.\n\nBecause they all orbit the Sun at different speeds it would be possible to land a spacecraft on Venus or Mars.\n\nWell, Scientist have done just that, they have landed rovers on both Mars and Venus.\n\nAt Mars the rovers were safe and not in any hasrh conditions.\n\nOn the other had at Venus the wether conditons are so bad that the rover survied for more than a few hours(The Challenge of Venus).\n\nEven though scinetist have landed some robots it is not safe for people to go.\n\nThats way we need to keep studying Venus to find a safe way onto the ground for people.\n\nAlso, Venus can sometimes be the nearest option for a planetary visit which is helpful considering how long the time frames are when traveling in space(The Chanllenge of Venus).\n\nEveryone wants to at least find a new something to explore.\n\nEven though it is the closest planet the weather conditions are sill very unsafe.\n\nWith a 97% carbon dioxide blanket that covers Venus and the temperature being over 800 degrees Fahrenheit(The Challenge of Venus).\n\nWith all the hot temperatrues and the unsafe air it would be intresting is scientist found a way to sirvive.\n\nAlso, because of the high pressure and heat Venus' weather presents its own challenge with erupting valcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes(the Challenge of Venus).\n\nEvery explorer didn't know what was behind their gaze until they went and looked.\n\nSceintists will find a way to make it possible someday.\n\nFurthermore another reason to study Venus, is it has very simular geograhpic features that show it was probaly covered with water from the amout of valleys and mountains(the Challenge of Venus).\n\nAfter water drys up it leaves behind evidence, for example look at the Great Canyon.\n\nIt is evdient of water forming it.\n\nAlso, Scintist can tell it was probably covered with oceans and life forms was the amout of carters(The Challenge of Venus).\n\nCraters make a good habit for animals that need shelter and when a medorite hit the ground all of the chemical in it goes into the ground and helps the envronment.\n\nLike nitrogen, for example, is a chemical that helps plants grow and is found in the ground.\n\nSo, in conclusion, as a group we need to keep up supporting scintist with their plans for the future and traveling throgh space. Who knows it might happen in our lifetime or in the next.\n\nThe important thing is not to let anything keep us down.\n\nLet's keep moving forward and upward.",
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"content": "the floor wasnt made by aliens because the way its made thats how the floor is only why it has those bumps because mars is a old place but there are aliens that live there mars is a old planet made a long time ago and if i was a scientist theres no way aliens could make mars cause they still havent found aliens and aliens are smart but they aint that smart they dont have the brain to make mars if i was a scientist i wouldnt think they was aliens that made mars but it could be a possiblty that aliens made mars but they dont have the proff yet scientist are we searching to see who made mars the floor of mars are just bumps cause mars is a old plant that was made a long time ago if i was we searching mars i would know that aliens didnt build mars cause they still havent found bodies in mars. the bumps on mars could be aliens but theres no way it could because they still havent found evidence in mars that aliens made it they couldnt find no body of aliens bodys",
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"content": "An improving the quality of education is the top priority of every nation. some think that students have the right to evaluate their's staff members while others say that this can lead to affecting negatively. However, this essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the school adminstration should be motivated to their's pupils which is any problem about their's staff members in classroom and they do not explian clearly any lesson while students tell freely to the management. This can lead to developing to tehir's knowledge as well as the teachers also would give more attention and explian briefly. In addition, the management should put in a suggestion box in every class inside and the students would be written any compliants without mentioning name. Taking Melbourne for example, in every school has followed to the suggestion box, thus, pupils can get more rights and wisdom from the quality of teachers and this can create a close bonding with tutors and students. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, this extra right can be affected student's respect and behaviour towards the professors, sometimes they unwantedly criticize their's tutors, thus, this can distroy the harmony relationship between teacher and school children. If a school girl only gives respect towards professors otherwise she always gives more attention to find out any mistake to lecturer, as a result, academic result might affect. For instance, in India has followed these kinds of suggstion box in classroom, thus, the students did not give more focus to their's academic syllabus instead of they have liked to find out mistake to the examiner lecture, hence, the management have stopped immediately this new right. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the school commitees should be encourged to their's pupils will tell openly about their's examiners mistake and evaluation about their's teaching method. This can affect the students respect and obey towards teacher and classroom. However, in my opinion, about this, these kinds of freedom would be affected respect and discipline who are pupils towards their's professors. I believe that this kind of process should be stopped in all tutorials.",
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"content": "Exploring other planets sounds fun right? Well exploring planets like venus poses a big risk. With the atmosphere being mostly carbon dioxide and the the surface temperature being over 800 degrees, why would NASA want to keep visiting the planet even though it is a hazardous trip?\n\nThe planet Venus is Earth's sister planet but it has many differences from our planet itself. Venus' planet surface is 800 degrees farenheit and the clouds are made of sulfuric acid, which are two very dangerous features. The pressure is also 90 times greater and the planet experiences volcanoes that erupt, earthquakes, and various lightining strikes. All of this aside it is believed that the planet was the most Earthlike compared to all of the other planets. It is said that it was covered in oceans and now it still has craters, valleys, and mountains. Meaning that life on Venus could have been supported long ago.\n\nExploring the planet doesn't sound easy given all of the circumstances. NASA has come up with some ideas on how humans can get a closer look of venus without being harmed in the process. They thought about a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the fray\" so that humans could get close enough to the surface without touching it (paragraph 5). The soloar power there would be enough and the radation wouldn't be worse than Earth's at 30 miles above. \"...some simpified electronics made of silicon carbide...\" some electronics have been tested and put in simulators that recreate Venus' atompshere and they have lasted for up to 3 weeks (paragraph 7).\n\nIn conclusion the planet Venus has many hazardous risks ranging from the atmospheric pressure to the sulfuric acid inside of the clouds. NASA has worked on many ways to try and get humans down into the planet to observe it. The many ways NASA has tried is only getting them closer. Even though it sounds fun to explore a planet but with the risks, it is better to not explore some of the planets becasue of the many risks.",
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"content": "When I I wanted one thing wold You know girl would want baby ball I want rex toy bigest meanest dinow plant well I little It cool ti could walk talk run bit Ever time I go story I would go toy part story find rex look eyes say you mine one day You know relly want somthing mom says chismist coming When ant comeing till months But I wont months So I thought I get rex befor months I got I clen walk bog better school hopefully work So I ask mom mom I start good stof I get chismast thing week said no get thing chismis I mad I cry But month long I opening gifts time I thought I open gifts I look arond one good time I But I dont see rex I said even thow I like gifts I still dont rex So I sidely walk room My mom came room big box Could I jumped bed fast mono dont see I looked box lot babys doll Then said go stars ther rex looking happy see",
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"content": "The mood memoir gratefulness happiness For example paragraph says My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful This shows thanks parents loving cooking Skill cooking eternal gratitude Also paragraph says I never forget parents turned simple house home happy grew grateful passing traits loves hard work",
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"content": "Dear Mr./Mrs. Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is a process created by the founding fathers of America to choose a pesident by a vote in Congress and by a popular vote of qualified citizens. I believe this is not a very effective process. I think that we should go to popular vote because it allows the citizens to have a vote and it is not up to people that alread run our country and it allows the president to be chosen fairly.\n\nTo begin with, the electoral college is not a good idea becuase it allows citizens to have a voice and it is not decided by people that already run oour country. If we resorted to this method, there might be a higher voter turn out because the citizens will feel that they really have a say in who runs the country. They won't think that if they vote for one person and they win, that some lousy people in Congress will come in and make a different decision and go against the majority. This will make more and more people want to make a difference in the country. Then we will have more concered citizens and the U.S. will be a better all around country. As stated in Source two, \"voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" That fact is why we should absolutly not have an electoral college. Then if we don't have an electoral college then we will have a higher voter turn out. Then after that, the good ole USA will be a better country than all of the other countries in the world ccombined except for our health and education. That is just one reason why should not have an electoral college.\n\nAdditionally, we should not have an electoral college because it will then allow us to chose the president fairly. With not having the electoral college vote on a president, it would make theh voting system more fair and not based on a few people. Then when people try and figure out if they will vote or not, they will think, \"hey, my vote does matter becuase there is no electoral college to spoil my vote!\" This would make for a much better run country becuase the citizens have a voice in the government. The only reason a citizen would not vote would be if they were critically injured or they didn't like any of the canidates. This is just one of the many reasons why we should get rid of the electoral college.\n\nIn conclusion, we should get rid of the eclectoral college because it would give the citizens more of a voice and it would make theh voting process more fair. This would make the government and the country run smoothly and a lot better than if we keep the electoral college.\n\nthank you for your time Mr./Mrs. Senator",
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"content": "In many societies, a number of children face difficulties to pay attention or concentrating on their studies in school or tutoring. When we think about we were young, most of us suffered in this situation. The main reasons for this situation are due to lack of concentration and kids thinking that a class is boring. These reasons are coped with each other. Children consider that a class is boring so a lack of concentration cause in their study.\r\n\r\nTo solve this problem, we should think about how children can concentrate on or pay attention to their class. First, schools and teachers should make a study funnier. To make a study funnier, teachers have to research for class so that younger can enjoy their class. First, in the research from Seoul National University and Konkuk University, researchers found that most children prefer classes held outdoors. Also 70% of children who answered that they prefer classes held outdoors wanted to have outdoor classes every day. In this research, researchers found that children's concentration in a class had increased rapidly compared to normal classes.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, teachers and schools should consider with quality of studies. Not all teachers, but some teachers' teaching quality is very crappy. In the research from Korea University and Waseda University, researchers found that 65% of middle school students in Korea and 59% of middle school students in Japan speak that they can not concentrate in their classes due to a tutor's quality.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, teachers and schools should make an effort to increase the quality of their studies and ask students about their preferences for classes. Also, when societies take care of the children's studying climates, students will be able to concentrate on their classes.",
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"content": "It is often argued that employers consider wearing work uniform is far important than the the performance of their workers. In my opinion, I believe that the dress code is only applicable to certain proffessions while it is unrelated to work context in some jobs. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, there are some jobs requiring people to wear certain attire because it represents the nature and the responsibilites of their profession and enables others to recognize them. A typical example of this is that some medical professions such as doctors and nurses have to comply with a dress code because they help patients to distinguish them from regular people. This would result in encouraging employees to follow the rules and be more discipline toward their supervisors and clients. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, specific uniforms are not related to the work practice and identity because these occupations are more likely tied with achieving the organizational goals and better performance. Technical companies such as Facebook and Google, where programmers and designers have the freedom to wear casual clothes, value more the innovation and productivity of their worker. One of the significant outcomes of this is that workers would become more motivated to improve their skills and qualifications so that they could help their companies to record more profits. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, complying to a certain dress code is utterly related to particular occupations because they are considered an identification of the work nature whrease other professions place more significance on the job performance than job uniform due to the importance of achieving the company's objectives.",
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