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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time patient I taught pitch easly devoloped nice windup delivery arin angle But didnt stop asked wanted stop said no time went started get better better He enjoys throwing mph fasiball cetcher On days hes unaccurate doesnt gave keeps trying doesnt wine number two starter rotation Thanks seltons patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, sometimes is called \"Evening Star\", most people say that Venus is like a 2nd Earth. It was able to support life forms, like animals. Plus it's the closest in distance. People wasn't able to go on Venus because it's so dangerous. Some people haven't tried going there for three decades. But NASA,has a particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\n\nNASA's way is to allow people to float above the fray of Venus to avoid the conditions said planet, like our jet airplanes. Plus at thirty-plus miles above the surface. temperatures would still be toasty around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\n\nNASA is working on a way to approaches of studying Venus.\n\nSo, in conclusion, Venus can be explored if your above the fray of it. So NASA is gonna keep making sure that people can explore Venus without having to deal with it's Not so easy conditions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, cinema has changed all together, stars get more famous for their lifestyle and wealth rather than for their achievements, which posses a negative impact on minors, is it so? I would agree with the statement mentioned above.\n\nNowadays, cinema does not give anything new or mysterious, film producers just take up the same concept which has already been used in movies that were made back in the period of 70's to 90's which is kind of boring, however, film producers still make a profit out of them, why does this happen? Viewers do not go for the movie, which has a new concept rather they prefer going for a movie which has a well known actor or actress, for example, a person would like for of Khans rather than anyone else. Which is kind of biases discussion. \n\nToday actors do not have to struggle a lot to get a film if you are a star kid, although this is not the case with a struggling actor or actress as they have to first prove themselves, which won't be possible without of the support of public because if film does not make a profit for a film producer there are high chances that film maker would disgard the actor who worked in that film even if the film gets a scucess then also film producer prefer star kid over the new actors. \n\nTaking in count above mentioned scenario, I would completely agree with the statement, actors or actress gets more fame on the bases of their lifestyle they possess rather than their achievements in the film industry, which all together has a negative impact on minors as they want to do what actors are doing without knowing its results.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "REMOVING BOOKS FROM THE LIBRARY BECAUSE THEY ARE OFFENSIVE IS A GOOD IDEA I DO NOT AGREE BECAUSE THE BOOKS SHOULD NOT BE GONE FOR GOOD THERE SHOULD BE AGE LIMITS ON BOOKS BOOKS THAT ARE OFFENSIVE SHOULD BE ONLY ALLOWED TO ADULTS OR A CERTAIN AGE GROUP THIS WILL HELP WITH CHILDREN NOT BEING SCARED TO HELP KEEP HISTORY AROUND AND FREEDOM OF SPEECH BY MAKING AS AGE LIMIT ON CERTAIN BOOKS WE CAN KEEP CHILDREN INACENT AND PURE WITH BOOKS SUCH AS DATE KIDS OR UNDER SHOULD NOT READ THAT BOOK AND UNDER ARE STILL NIEVE LITTLE KIDS DO NOT KNOW ABOUT SEX OR EVEN PREMARRITAL SEX WITH AND IS GIRLFRIEND HAVING SEX EVERY OTHER CHAPTER ITS VERY INAPPORITE FOR A CHILD TO READ ALSO WITH ALL THE TORTURE PARTS IT WOULD SCARE A LITTLE BOYGIRL OUT OF HISHER MIND WHEN GETTING RID OF OFFENSIVE BOOKS WE REMOVE HISTORY THINK ABOUT WHERE WE WOULD BE IF ANNE FRANK DID NOT WRITE HER DIARY WE WOULD NOT KNOW HOW BAD HILTER REALLY WAS WE COULD ONLY ASSUME WITH GETTING RID OF BOOKS CAUSE THEY ARE OFFENSIVE IS A RIDICULOUS REASON BOOKS ARE ONLY OFFENSIVE TO SENATIVE PEOPLE BOOKS KEEP HISTORY ALIVE THINK WHAT ARE WE WITHOUT HISTORY FINALLY FREEDOM OF SPEECH IS WHY THEY SHOULD SAY AUTHORS HAVE THE RIGHT TO WRITE WHAT THEY WANT IF THE READER DOES NOT LIKE IT AND FINDS IT OFFENSIVE THEN THEY SHOULD NOT READ IT IF SHAKE SPEARE WAS TOLD HE COULD NOT WRITE HIS STORIES WE WOULD NOT HAVE THE TRAGETY OF ROMEO AND JULIET SO MANY BOOKS WOULD BE LOST IF SOMEONE COULD WRITE BECAUSE IT WAS OFFENSIVE BOOK THAT ARE TOO OFFENSIVE OR INAPORITE FOR A CHILD TO READ THERE SHOULD BE A AGE LIMIT ON IT IF WE GET RID OF CERTAIN BOOKS WE GET RID OF CERTAIN HISTORY AS WELL GETTING RID OF THOSE BOOKS TELLS A NEXT COMING AUTHOR THAT FREEDOM OF SPEECH DOES NOT MATTER TO OFFENCIVENESS SO KEEP THE BOOKS AROUND ITS ONLY WORDSSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many obstacles stood way docking dirigibles empire state One obstacle builders faced law stating airships could nt fly low urban areas Also builders would reinforce parts building support stress dirigibles would place frameLastly nature would allow dirigibles safely docked due fact violent winds would shift back dirigible making sway wildly These obstacles made sure dirigibles could docked empire stateSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While some people believe that teaching art to children is important, others, think it is just a waste of time. In this essay I will discuss why studying art is important but also why some people think the opposite.\r\n\r\nTeaching art in schools could have a positive impact in children as it helps them to develop creativity skills that are necessary in every activity or job later in life. In fact, especially at a young age, students needs to express their emotions and characters through artistic activities. Moreover, studying ancient art as well as contemporary art might motivate some of them to become artists or art professors at university.\r\n\r\nHowever, in todays world most of the job positions require a strong knowledge in mathematics. \r\n\r\nBecause of this, it is surely more important for young students to spend more time studying other \r\n\r\ntopics instead of learning ancient art. For example, if you are very good at math you can apply for universities such as software engineering and you will probably find a job right after your studies. In addition to that, it gives you a better salary which in turn will allow you to be indipentend at a young age. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is importnat for children to study art and develop creativity, however, in this modern world it is advantageous to spend more time learning math and other scientific topic as it will be easier to apply for a job.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When builders almost ready place mooring mast top Empire State Building big problems became apparent caused complications docking dirigibles One factor law dirigibles could nt low city could accidently crash building fall onto crowds Another factor air currents around tall buildings especially Empire State Building height feet Even dirigible tethered mooring mast winds would violently rock could crash building fall streets A recent factor arose Hindenburg dirigible burst flames hydrogen flew New Jersey May Nobody wanted risk happening New York City either So flammable hydrogen violent air currents law builders complications building mooring mast allow dirigibles landSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author talks about machines and computers that can tell what a person is feeling like. The author does make very valid points in the article, explaining and giving well thought out details about the process as it helps us readers understand. The author claims that this machine can tell what you are feeling by ur facial structure in the moment and how your cheek bones and eyebrows and other parts of your face affect that. This is very valuable because the author has plenty of evidence behind it all. An example is the Mona LIsa. They inspected all of her bones in her face with one of these machines and results came back and seemed very valuable with reasoning. This also could easily help students like us in the future, students are very well off task a lot of tines and makes it very boring for us to learn things. So machines like this can keep us and teachers on track when we are not focused or even learning.\n\nStudents very often get bored of learning the same way and same pace as others. The students get very eager to learn a new way and not the same all the time. These machines can recognize when we arent learning properley by telling that we are bored or not focused. For an example in the article it states that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is confused or bored\", \"Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This explains how we could be getting a new way to learn just by a machine guiding us by itself to do so. This could very much help students everywhere out, because we know that all student dont learn as affective and the some pace. So the students who need it all slowed down a little can have a much better learning experience because it can tell when you need this kind of help.\n\nThis technology would definitley help out students now and in the future, it gives them a more wide and better learning experience. This FACS is very intelligent telling what and how people are feeling in any type of moment and situation, just by bones in your face. Now affording these in classrooms might be a big issue because they will be overpriced for schools to even have some if any. Low income schools will be in a very tough situation with this because unfortunatley lower income schools are the ones that need these machines the most, to help the chidren get the type of education that they want, and need. So as long as prices arent varied by place and can stay low, all schoold should have these types of learning tools because it really does help these children, and could have a better success rate in lower schools.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many conspiracy theorist think that NASA is hiding something about the Face on Mars. Some of the scientist at NASA also though that the face was an alien artifact,so we had to make another voyage to the region of Cydonia.This time we snapped a picture ten times more sharper than the last revealing that it is nothing but a natural landform. there was not an alien monument at all. Some people still wasn't satisfied Conspiracy theorist said that wrispy clouds where hidden by haze.\n\nAs we prepared to look again. \"Cydonia is not a easy target\" said Garvin. Neverthe less, on April 8 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-- The team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. So if there was anything on the ground you could see what they where. What the picture actually showed is the Martian equivalent of a mesa found on Earth.\n\nSo therefore proving any Conspiracy theorist wrong the face on Mars is actually just a Martian landform shaped as a Egyptian Pharaoh formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi, Im luke, If you are sitting around looking for adventure, stop by the seagoing cowboys program and find your adventure. We can help lots of people and so can you! We can take care of horses, cattle, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nOnce you get your seaman's papers then you can aboard a boat as you travel across the 7 seas, with cargo full of all sorts of different animals like horses, cattle, and mules. It takes about 2 weeks to cross the Atlantic and the sheep have to be fed 2 or 3 times a day but you will get used to it.\n\nYou can also have lots of fun once you get on the boat. there are games you can do to pass time, The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nThere is a lot of sight seeing on the boat too, you get to see China, Europe, Acropolis, Greece, Italy, and lots of other great places around the globe. You can take a granola ride in Venice, Italy of maybe even tour a castle in Crete, and marvel at the Panama Canal. Like i did There are lots of fun things you can do at the Seagoing Cowboys!\n\nSo if you you like to have adventures, sight seeing, or even play a lot of fun games, come on down and sign up for this wonderful journey. We can take all the people we can can get!\n\nSo sign up at 4354 Seadog Lane, Florida. I think you will enjoy it, I know I did.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Technology is going to take over the world.\" Albert Enstine said, that the world is going to be taken over by technolog, believe it or not it is. We already have teens and adults that are always on their phone texting while at dinner and stuff like that. We don't need cars that can drive there self because what is the purpose of teens getting their licence. Why would we need to do that? Yes, I don't know because the car can drive itself.\n\nI disagree with this passage because we already have perfectly good cars that drive fine. For example, a teenager might think that its a perfect car to drive so they can text and talk on the phone. They might take it the wrong way. I know the car has to have to hands on the stearing wheel, but that does mean they ae going to try to make another car that you don't have to even have to be awake when you are driving. This is seriously getting rediculous.\n\nIn realality, yes it would be pretty cool to drive a car without really doing anything but you have to think about peoples saftly. What would happen if the car takes them to the wrong destenation. Then you are out of luck because your lost. What if the car trys to trun when there is another car next to you. Then what are you going to do? You can't do a thing about it. So, just kiss your life good bye. For example, about getting lost there has been people that has been on a road trip and has taken a GPS and hasn't worked and took them somewhere they didn't want to be. Not everything should have to deal with technolgy because it is getting to the point where is it taking people life away.\n\nIn addition, in\n\nparpagraph 4 it states that they are going to put sencors on the wheels. That is a pretty bad idea if ou ask me. What if it stops working right when your making a turn, and you can't see because of the blind spot. Yes there is absolutly nothing you ca do to. In pharagraph 5 it says that they used sensors in the 1980's but this is the 21 centery we are not going to trust are car with our life.This artical says that on 2013 there has been cars that can handle driving functions at the speed of 25 mph. This is pretty funny because the average speed is 30 to 35. What if you are on a interstate and you have to go 80 mph, and you don't have cruse control or even any energy doing anything then you are screwed.\n\nIn conclustion, these cars should not be used for the safty of our lives. We should not have to be able to drive this these conditions. We prefer to have the old cars but a little updated and i'm not talking with all of the stupid technology in it. This is what we need.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a life without cars....There would be no noisy horns blowing, no polluted air, less car accidents, etc. I can give you a million reasons why the world would be a better place without everyone driving a vehicle.\n\nWe constantly try to make the world safer and go green by recycling, planting trees, clean up parks and beaches, drive hybrid and electric cars but we need to do something different like drive less and walk, carpool, or ride bicycles to get where we want to go. It will make the world more efficient , peaceful, and reduce stress among the people who wake up late and rush to school or their jobs.\n\nAs you inhale and exhale, your body takes in the air around you, which is filled with bacteria, cigeratte smoke, gases, oxygen, etc. We would make the world cleaner if gas wasn't polluted in the air. The gases from vehicles destory our trees which provide oxygen to us human beings. You wouldn't want people to get lung cancers and lung diseases from them everytime someone tries to take a walk outside just to enjoy the view of mother earth. Driving less will allow the air that we breath to be safer and less polluted. So, what happens if people drive more and forget about health? Well, eventually our ozone that protects us from the sun will break down and it will cause something that is called \"the greenhouse effect\".\n\nOn the daily basis, there are car accidents and non survivors of a crash. It breaks my heart to see a family die because of a drunk driver on the news or someone crossing the street is hit by a car and the driver drives off as if nothing has happened. If people drove less, the rate of car accidents and deaths by hit and runs will decrease. When people drive they are unprepared for anything that might happen under the wheel, that is why seatbelts and airbags were created but a seatbelt and an airbag may not be reliable when a car is flipped over and a person cannot get out of the car because their seatbelt is locked and sometimes the car may explode. You will have no worries if you drive less and walk or ride a bicycle more often.\n\nBeing happy and in peace is better than being stressed out. Driving less will take away stress from your daily routine. Going for a walk or riding your bike around the neighborhood will make you feel revied and you'll get to enjoy the pulchritudinous nature around you. You'll even want to ask yourself \"where has this been all my life\"?...God has created the world so precious and I know he took his time making it. People take hikes, vacations, and trips to the beach to enjoy the views of world. It would be best to take a break from driving.\n\nYou can get plenty of exercise if you walk to work or school instead of driving. Think of all the obese and lazy people that do nothing for themselves and drive around thinking that it is okay to not exercise at all. Walking or riding a bike will decrease stress, and your chances of getting heart disease. Most people in America die from heart disease and cancer. Just by taking a walk or a ride on a bicycle, you may save yourself from the ugly illnesses.\n\nFinally, the advantages of limiting car usage are allowing the air to be safer and less polluted, decreases car accidents, takes away stress, and allows you to get the exercise you need everyday. If people take time out of their day just to take a walk they will be wanting more and better things for the earth.\n\nAll the people of the world will be proud to say that they've done something great to save what we've got left.\n\nDriving is a privlege not a priority. So, the next time you decide to drive think of all the good things you'll be able to experience and how much you'll be saving the world from disaster.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this artical wants us to expand our research of venus even knowing the danger that comes with trying to go more in dept about this research.Nasa has already tried to study this planet even considering to send people up there to study it first hand but due to terrible terrian can not send rovers or any tpye of equipment.\n\nNasa knows that neptune is like the earths twin in a way these two planets are extremely close and we think its just that easy to study the planet but its not if we were to send people to venus it would go so good because venus temputure averages to 800 degrees fahrebheit and the human body can not handle that.Also not metion that venus has a thick atmosphereof 97 percent carbon dioxidblankets venus.\n\nWe do have supicion that there might some kind of life form living there due to the fact the venus is coverd largely with ocean which can suppot some kind of life form.But there is a reansonable\n\nway we might be able to study the planet whith having to land on it or send rovers Nasa has found a new way by sending a \"blimp\" hover 30 or so miles above venus a comparason is like a jet flying high altitude.\n\nIf this plan does go through it wont be as bad but still pretty hot at a wopping 170 degrees fahrenhiet.But researchers can not take samples of rocks or gas or anything else.Recently Nasa has conducted an expierment they have made a chamber simulation the chaos of venus's surface and have lasteed a week so it might be posible after all .\n\nVenus has a lot of value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself.The author is a outgoing person wanting to discovery new life study a planet that is very difficult to study based on it radition and temputure.In conclusion the author has a good reason why he wantrs to study venus but its going to take a lot of technoligy and stratagy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several reports in top-rated newspapers around the globe have confirmed and encouraged young generations to have the opportunity to learn from their community on the weekends or after school hours. According to some people’s opinion, youth should spend their free time on non-remunerated jobs to increase their social and future job skills. In this essay, I will summarize it would benefit the community.\r\n\r\nFirstly, many people can say that if teenagers do community work, they will avoid any negative actions against their own community. Working for the community increases the value of helping others as well as the sense of belonging and makes them stop reacting negatively forward with what they have built. For instance, in New York, there is extra work implemented after school where aggressive kids grow their own plants in the community garden to keep them calm, show them how to give to the community and value their work and effort. \r\n\r\nSecondly, non-paid community work should allow the youth to learn some social abilities to relate deeply to society that they have never been taught in school. People gain a wider range of experiences once they start their adult life. This may lead to new ideas for cohesion in society or a greater feeling of individual fulfilment after the work done in the community. As a result, collectivity is created as a benefit of all these activities. For example, a few studies centres in Europe have as an extracurricular subject at school where people get together in a range of nonprofit activities focused on helping many people in need.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, young adults would benefit from social activities that make them avoid negative behaviour toward their own neighbourhood. Also, learning useful skills to improve the relationship with others and gathering to support each other. From my point of view, I completely agree with the idea of young generations spending free time helping other people in exchange for life lessons and foment higher connection with a society which reduces any kind of attacks on the community and the number of problems in society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" did a well job of writing about how Venus should be explored, even with all the dangers, or challenges, it holds. They go on to talk about many things they have researched. They also give a persuasive way of thinking.\n\nSome examples of the author welly writing their article would be things such as: They did their research on the planet, and they also did research on subjects that come with visiting the planet. Those subjects would include scientists experimenting with heat and silicon, and old technology. In addition to that, the author also included a way that scientists could visit the planet as safley as possible. They also give reasons as to why we should be trying to explore Venus more than we currently are.\n\nSome examples from the text that protains to them doing their reasearch would be exerpts such as \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\" and \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" As for doing their research on technology that could help them get to Venus safely, there is an exert for that as well. Those would be \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in suc conditions.\" and \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\" Now, as for the way of the author listing a way that scientists could look at Venus safely, but from a veiw, here's is the part from the article that supports that statement: \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. The author also writes about why we should go to Venus. Some evidence that they did a well job on that is \"not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endevors.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the author has done a good job at writing their article about exploring Venus. They talked about all the things they should have, and did it well. The uathor mentioned specific facts and experiments. They also gave their own opinion, which gave the article a little more flare to it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I dont think computers something people using Computers something somehow become addictive From people gaining weight every day sit computer chat day Then terrible people internet disguise themselfs look like year old boy really year old man Lastly people days using computer sorce reading instead books I think computers ruining life many people For starters people today becoming overweight either wacth much sit computer eat day Once start computer ll never stop Especially multitasking eat use computer The big problem people think s better sitting home enjoying nature exercising It really nt good people dont get computer start enjoying life Next everyone online say make false accounts like There men say really With posting pictures someone Just remember careful Lastly people todays day age use computer read books instead going library book store I think bookstores going run business technology days When I younger I said I going read book I really reading one I nt reading computer People need cut electronics In end I think computers real waste time There reason people computer instead exercise Everyone needs stay away bad people online Also please start using normal books instead online ones I think computers need stop taking world start needSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I was once asked to write a letter about keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote. My Opinion is that they need to change Electoral College. The three reasons why they should keep it is because, its not fair,it dosen't waste a lot of time,the electoral votes given to each state.\n\nTo Begin with, Electoral Voting seems very easy. Electoral College consists of 538 electors. They need a majority of 270 electoral votes to elect the prsident. But their a lot of things wrong with the electoral college too. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election. And voters vote not for the president,but for the slate of electors, who select the president. The Electoral college is unfair to voters. Becasue of the winner take all system, the candidates dont spend much time in the states they know they dont have a chance of winning. This is one of the reasons why they should change Electoral college.\n\nTo Briefly Continue, The Electoral College isn't a good system to use in my opinion. But the System dosent waste a lot of time. This is probaly the only reason they still use it today. All they do is go state by state seeing the candidates group of electors votes. This process takes about 3 to 4 Hours to see what candidate won to be the president of the United States Of America. The President election is held every 4 years, on the tuesday after the first monday in November. But this is another reason why the Electoral collge system needs to be changed to popular vote.\n\nLast But Not Least, The electoral votes given to each state sucks. Its not fair Texas gets 38 electoral but New York only gets 3. Way more people live in New york Than Texas. If they used election by popular vote everyone has the choice to pick which candidate they want to be president. And The elctoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism. Its hard for a democratic to win it. The Electors that elect for president not the people. This is another why this needs to be change.\n\nTo brieflty conclude, the system needs to be changed. its not fair to have and electoral voting system. the people dont get to vote for the candidate they want to win. These are some of the reasons why the system needs to be changed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a computer that could dectect your emotions during a lesson at school. This type of technology, although it may sound crazy, is not out of reach. A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System can enable computers to indentify and understand the complex ideas of human emotions by recognizing the different muscle movements in your face is on the rise. This technology was even used to pinpoint the emotions of the famous 'Mona Lisa' who no one could tell exactly what emotion she was feeling. This software is great for solving an age old mystery, but it could also benefit many students in the classroom and beyond.\n\nHaving such a futuristic software in the classroom could help more students learn. As a student myself I can personally say that sitting through a boring lesson is never fun. To make matters worse, being confused on something but the teacher just doesn't have the time to sit down and explain it one on one. We could eliminate these experiences all together by adopting computers that can pick up when we are bored or confused. This technology will then change the lesson and adjust it for the student,making lessons more personalized and easier for the student to focus on and understand better. For medical students, virtual surgery can be made more realistic. If computers can understand human facial emotions then it can make video animation depict human faces better. Dr. Huang of the Beckham Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois notes, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communiation. Computers need to understand that too.\" There are many facial muscles that the computer can recognize. Such as the difference betwen a real and forced smile by the 'zygomatic major' or the muscles that begin at your cheek bone, or even muscles called 'orbicularis oculi pars palpabreaus' which is responsible for the crow's feet around the eyes. Faces dont lie to the experts. These muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a celebrity or politician isnt being one hundred percent truthful.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that having this cutting edge computer system in schools nationwide would improve learning in the classroom, sugery experiences for up and coming doctors, and all around awareness for human emotions and nonverbal communication amongst eachother. Hopefully you can catch these computers coming to a classroom near you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" Venus is also known as \"Evening Star\". Venus is one of the brightest points in the sky at night. It is also the second closest planet to Earth,that's why we can see it at night. Mars is also close to us but only at certain times, it all depends on speed otherwise how fast it orbits around us. The atmosphere on Venus is 97 percent carbon dioxide which means there's no air, the clouds are made of corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperature is over 800 degrees fehrenheit.\n\nThe atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater, so if we were to send any type if mechanical transportation over there, it would into liquid as soon as it gets there. Venus has the hottest surface temperature than any other plant in our solar system. Venusian geology says that their are additional impediments the erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning stikes. That means their are multiple natural disasters going on at the same time. Astronomers think that long age, Venus was like our planet (Earth).\n\nThe planet has a surface of rocky sediment like mountains, craters and valleys.\n\nNASA thinks that they could put a blimp or some kind of futuristic jet airplanes in outerspace. In the article, NASA was talking about electronics made of \"silicon carbide\". If NASA could add silicon carbide to a jetplane and some how remote control the aircraft, it might work. I noticed how the author capitalized the \"Venus, NASA, Earth, and all the other planets. Also I saw how the author punctuated and put a comma in between sentences to take a breath when speaking. I liked how he put a lot of detail into what NASA thought they should do. I read how they planned out what kinds of tranportations they could send to Venus. They even tested the conditions with certain matierials and objects.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present.The uses many great suporting details to suppert the idea.The nature of Venus was very intense.\n\nOne way the author support the idea is that he/she talk about the temperature on the planet Venus.In the passage,the author uses \"On the planet's surface,temperatures average over 800 fahrenhiet,and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greter han what we experience on our own planets.\"The author uses that to explain how hot it is at veus and how much the pressure is compare to earth.The author also stated that \"such an environment would crush even s submarine accustomed to driving to the deepest part of out ocens and would liquefy many metals.'The quote explain that anything metals or not would get destroyed on the surface of venus.\n\nThe author also support the idea by comparing how venus used to look like to the venus today.In the passage it say \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth.\" The quote show the defference of Venus long time ago and today.There wouldnt had been a challenge if the old venus still exist today.In the text is says \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters.\"The quote explain some of the features that Venus have compare to earth still.\n\nIn conclusion,the author details on supporting the idea was fantastic because he/she give great details about venus.Even tho it was dangerous at venus,scientist are still trying to discover more arts of venus and get more explanation on the surface of venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are hard to read. You think you know what someone is feeling by their facial expression. Just take the Mona Lisa for example. What precise emotions is the woman trying to potray? That is why Doctor Thomas Huang invented the new software that can detect emotions. The new software should be used in the classroom to determine the emotional expressions of students.\n\nDr. Huang said \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" This means that trying to understand what someone's facial expression is saying or how they are feeling is hard to understand. \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recogntion software tracks these facial movements.\" The software reads every muscle in the face and its position at the time of the expression. It then determines what the person is trying to communicate through their facial expression. This could be helpful in the classroom by seeing if someone is confused, happy, bored, or tiresome.\n\n\" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" This says that the software is capable of keeping the students attentative to the lecture and can help a student understand the subject.\n\nThe software is also capable of spotting when someone is lying. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" The software could be used in the classroom in the following ways: to see if a student really understands a subject, can be used as a lie detector, or can be used if a teacher knows what they are teaching. Going back to the facial movements, a student could say they understand something but really they do not. Just listed above, the software will detect if the student is lying about that.\n\nWhile some would oppose this software, it would be beneficial to be used in the classroom. This would be the same thing as adding computers to schools. Many were against adding computers into schools, but now they are used every day by every student. The government could use this software on interrogation and in the courts; stated above, it could be used as a lie detector.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to technological advancement, people do their work from home, which is beneficial for them. However, some people believe that working from home favours employees, not employers. I agree with this statement and give my viewpoint on the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThere are many merits of telecommuting. First of all, people could not travel to the office due to this it saves their time, and the cost of travel from office to home also reduce. Secondly, telecommuting workers spend enough time with their families. For example, employees can enjoy their time with their children, such as dropping their children at school and looking after their sick families at home. Finally, many workers have disputes with their colleagues at the office and this affects their work productivity due to working from home having less contradict with the employees and giving their full concentration on work. That should help them to achieve their goals and complete their project in the given time.\r\n\r\nEmployers could not take any benefits from telecommuting. Many business-man have rented significant buildings for office use, while workers work from home hence, the cost of the office is a waste of money. Moreover, the internet problem between the meeting. To exemplify my point, technology is unreliable because sometimes, between the critical zoom meeting, many employers and employees have internet problems that take time to resolve these issues, and employer meetings fail with the client.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, working from home has some benefits for the employees. Although, the employers have some issues with this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that Actions from the government are the only way that solve the housing shortage issues in big cities. However, there are many other circumstances which would affect the housing market, I believe actions from the leadership find a faster solution for accommodation-related issues.\n\nOn the one hand, Authoritative steps can prevent the housing crisis in metropolitan areas since action from them needs to be followed by everyone. Moreover, By introducing residential beneficial schemes the government should make entry into the housing market to construct homes which creates a strike that balances supply and demand in the houses. On top of that, People elected entities should be vigilant to deal with any unprecedented or unexpected fluctuations in housing prices.\n\nFor example, In Hyderabad, Since, most of the housing market is controlled by the government, we hardly see any terrible crisis in the market.\n\nOn the other hand, As it is considerably dependent on the global market and due to several factors the crisis can take birth. Because of the higher interest rates and less purchasing power people are more hesitant to buy a house or build a house which may cause a shortage in supply. Only making blame on the government does not help in rectifying the housing crisis.\n\nTo conclude, though I agree If the government starts introducing housing-beneficial schemes which make the housing crisis less severe, Still, I believe, It can also experience vulnerability due to terrible global economic conditions and many other factors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars should be accepted. Theses cars arent really much dangerous. The cars can since when its in danger so it sends vibration to the seats and also, has blinking lights. They also, state that drivers have to stay alert and they have cameras to make sure that the driver is paying attention so, furthermost these cars should be acceptable. I also,think that the driverless cars are a bad idea because everyone isnt as alert as others.\n\nIf the car has to pull into the driveways and out of them this is very safe you will be focused on paying attention to your surroundings. If your not paying attention to your surroundings others would be alert of whats going on due to your lights blinking. Alll of these things makes it really safe to drive a driveless cars. When your backing into something the car will alert you and your seat will vibrate that is really getting you more alert. The car also announces when its time for your part so people will be notified that its there time to take the will.\n\nThere's also some bad about driverless cars. What if a person who buys a driverless car is death and cant hear? What if someone who buys a driverless car cannot feel? Those are some negative affects. What if someone getsinto the car not knowing that you will have to know how to drive and get into a car wreck beacuse they dont know whats going on? These cars can really be a positive and negative affect on peoples lives.\n\nI personally think\n\nthat the person who buys a driverless car should have a drivers license and be aware of whats going on. I think that everyone with this car should be tested with the car also so people can know whats going on in the cars and when your not paying attention. These cars can really change hidtory and be a positive impact on peoples lives and also negative depending on how you treat your authority with this car. I think this car should be a privledge.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "get I need open evelope My mom said We spanted stairs envelopes mean report card letter card checking account balance We got downstairs saw camera envelope starrer back said radio We open says congroduclotions tickets first I looking awe sister freaking Then mom told aunt going us Surprise kept coming coming Another huge surprise lines girls lined front doors oak music Then security started move spread girls got pushed quarter mile away standing hours later waiting I see boys head pop window music say girls After said girls went crazy screaming hours later started let people The theater cozy warm cold hours felt good Iyaz Was special guest get us warmed When got every girl screaming lung He sang concert great experience first concert everSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows saeng going accept new home reconize similarities old home hold memories close help overcome obstacles facing life I ve seen kind blooming along lake It s flowers ar nt pretty its strong enough make cold months winter hibiscus That s matters This sets similarities old home new home This shows things change also This leads conclusion Saeng relizes always memories old home use help overcome troubles shes goingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Autonomous cars seem like they would never happen, but our world is changing and they are just around the corner. Autonomous cars are cars that are driven by a computer and not a human. Although, a driver can still take control when needed. The computers know know to drive and when to stop or go. In the article it states that the autonomous cars will use half the fuel of today's taxis and they are more flexible than a bus. The new cars though are not in total control, the drivers still can drive. I do not think that the driverless are a good idea and they should not be developed. They are dangerous, very expensive, and making our world more lazy.\n\nTo begin the driverless cars are extremely dangerous. Some people will have the driverless cars and some will be normal. The driverless cars let the driver take over if needed. The seats will vibrate, the voice control will come on, or any way to get the drivers attention; according to the article. What if the driver fell asleep and is a very hard sleeper. The cars might not be able to wake him or her up in time. Then, resulting in a crash or even more tragic. I think that the cars that are not driven by a computer are in danger. The driverless car will know when to stop and go at a stop light, but what if another car goes on accident and they did not mean to. It could be a pile up and a mess. The cars are just not safe enough for me to think that they should be developed.\n\nAnother reason I do not approve of driverless cars are that they are expensive. Yes, they do get better gas millage, but the cost of the cars to begin with is going to be outrageous. Somepeople and companies are not going to be able to afford the cars. The cars savings on gas will never compare to the crazy cost of them to begin with.\n\nIt states in the article that the upgrades to existing roads will be simply too expensive to be practical. I agree with this statement completely that the money will not be practical. The cars do have more flexible schedules than busses, but i would rather ride a bus than a very expensive car. There is a possibility of it getting into a crash and then you would have to get it fixed with even more bills. The car is just too expensive and crazy.\n\nLastly, the car in my opinion is lazy. The world today would rather have someone else care for them and for them to just relax. Yes, relaxing is nice, but you have to know what work is. The car is just another way for the world to be lazy. Driving is not that hard on your body, it is moving your feet and paying attention. The car just allows the world to have another way to be lazy. I think that it is good for your body to pay atttention and keep your eyes on the road. It makes you not drift off and think about what you are doing. The people that will have to take control after the car can't go through crashes or traffic will not be on their top watch. They probably will be sleepy or not paying attention. I just don't like to think of another way for society to have a reason to be lazy.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not agree with the development of driverless cars. They are dangerous, cost a lot of money, and they are a way for people to be more lazy. They will not benefit our society in any way. People have more control over a car than a computer. The money that people don't have should be used on food not cars. Somepeople are having a hard time providing for their family let alone having a car payment too. Also society is lazy enough without these driverless cars. The development of autonomous cars should not happen because the cars are never going to benefit society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think libraries nt removed material shelves even thoug offensive The libraries shouldt removed offensive material even though might offensive people people still might want learn topic For example nt like In books offensive stuff stated Some might take offensive people diffrent race relegion might want learn said Just people read doesnet mean going agree People might point view one right telling one person ca nt like If cenorship starts occur libraries communtiy places I think people going get mad might bigger problem people offensded material They might think told ca nt read listen believe inThat occur bigger conflict get lot people furious I think simplier library haves materials shelves people getting offended ignore read listen something gets furious They might offended one person says cares everyone going think agree said Its person point view let stick think believes Not everyone right perfect youselvesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear news paper I think computers good learn thing s faraway places using also hear recent news communicate people In school lot research projects places focus places around world When use computer read articles place also get pictures use slideshow photo story Their also educational websites kids go learn math facts multuplication tables computer good learning tool The computer keep uptodate news news website post minute minute things world news tell world kind desaster happened far away place side world A lot time families spread world chat family friend s moved simple chat room catch happening s lives s good tool family stay touch computer lots benefits lot people around world use learning About faraway country chatting cuson lives california also knowing whats going home townSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many probelms that our world is facing right now are pointed back to car usage. Problems such as congestion, high levels of smog, pollution, and greenhouse gas emissions in many places are all discussed in these articles.\n\nThese days people can't get see themselves going on with their life without a car but in places such as Bogota, Columbia they have a set date called \"The Day Without Cars\". The day without cars is a car-free day, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.(paragraph 20) Many people in Bogota choose to hike, bike, skate or take buses in order to get to work or wherever else they need to be. Some Colombians even enjoy it, such as businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza who said \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" (paragraph 24)\n\nIn the article \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" places such as Vauban, Germany are even giving up the usage of cars. Vauban's streets are completely \"car-free\". (paragraph 2) A media trainer and mother of two in Vauban named Heidrun Walter described how the change to not using cars has affected her in a positive way when she said \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" (paragraph 3) Experts say that automobiles have a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. (paragraph 5) When places like Vauban begin to reduce or completely end car usage, the greenhouse gas is also reduced and helps to reach the goal of a more healthy and clean society.\n\nThe article \"Paris Bans Driving Due To Smog,\" Talks about cities such as Paris that have tried to forcedly ban driving. The reason for doing this was in hope to \"clear the air of the global city.\" (paragraph 10) Even though there were many who did not participate in the ban of cars in Paris, congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France. (paragraph 14) Not only did this effort of less car usgae reduce congestion but it also reduced the level of smog in the France.\n\nFor many people cars are just an excuse not to exercise. For example, someone might say \"Why should I walk when i can drive?\" or \"Why should I bike when I could take a taxi?\" People are so busy and caught up in work and being the best over everyone that exercise and physical condition are the least of their worries when really, it should be at the top of their list of importance. If someone decides to walk or skate to work everyday they would be in a healthy state of being and not have to worry or stress about finding extra time after work or school to exercise. If car usage is limited, our community would be drastically more healthy, physically and mentally.\n\nThe amount of car usage has a great affect on many things in our community and our world. Car usage affects not only the pollution in our living conditions but also our mood and for some people, their happiness and stress level. The limited amount of cars also forces us to seek different forms of transportation that are not all motorized. Without cars people sometimes choose to walk, bike, skate, or even run to where they need to be. Not only does this improve our pollution problem but it also improves our physical and mental health. Limited car usage has many advantages and could make a very positive impact on our world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My argumentative essay to convice someone that the Face is just a natural landform my reseason is because ''scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa'',''a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all,'' and lastly ''the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa.\n\n''I got these three facts for Paragraph 2, 7, and 12. Supporting these details for the story is in pargraph 7 it says that ''Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing ...\n\nA NATURAL LANDFORM.'' Although paragraph 5 is just to get it popular in Hollywood because it says ''It appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years.''some evidence from the article to support my claims was ''What the picture ACTUALLY shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa - landforms common around the\n\nAmerican West.'' In paragraph 6 a FEW scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a prority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS).''\n\nIn conclusion I know that this a natural landform and the could have be a freak accident or something. If this was the case, then there would much more of these Faces in outerspace and not just on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to identify facial jestures is the unthinkable. If we where to use this type of technology everyday it would be very unusal for the simple fact that school isnt about using technology to tell someones emotions. I don't think it would be really a good idea though to have that in school. The reasoning behind that is because the students would get to destracted from what they are suppose to be doing. Then it would be a destraction to the teachers to, because everytime something seems wrong with a student they would have to take time and try to scan their face when they are not paying attention. It could also be an amazing idea for trying to tell if a kid is starting to form depression or is always sad. The reasoning behind that is because then people have a better chance at trying to help the person in need. It also wouldn't be that of a good idea because if you sitting at home sombody could be watching you through the camera since it would automatically try to evaluate how you feel. Another down flaw to it would be is how would customers come up with the money to buy such edvance techonolgy. After all said and done by the time they get the computer they would have something better to reconize your emotions with. To be able to have this type of technology in a class room would not be right, for the simple fact when you come to school you come here to learn and get the right education you need in life. that is my reasoning behind the FACS ( Facial Action Coding System) why I would not recomend on having this type of technology in my classroom. After said and done it would be to much of a hasial and a destraction when it comes down to using the FACS computer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming. Who will like them? Who won't like them? We will find out if they're ever made. Will they get approved in states that they are not allowed in like will they change their minds about the glorious cars. Will some people move states just to get the car? Will there be a petition on letting the car be welcomed into the community? Will the car even be bought by people. Ask yourself these questions when thinking about a new product pros and cons and\n\nhow wil it benefit you.\n\nI feel like driverless cars are a great thing if we really didn't have to drive them. If you have to drive the car is it really a driverless car? I don't think so. When most people hear about a driverless car the first thing they think is \"I don't have to drive the car AT ALL because it says driverless so i shouldn't have to be alert when problems come up in the vehical.\" I believe if you're going to give something a title make sure the title fits that project or item well because lots of people get offensinve and think they are being cheated out of their money if it's not 100% accurate.\n\nIn paragraph 7 they state \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly gte the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" When people hear the word driverless they they read the text above they are going to think \"The car really isn't driverless because I still have to be alert when the car is in motion. In paragraph 8 it seems Dr. Werner has the same opinion as most people \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive? The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge. This isbasically saying don't give something a name its not really about.\n\nThink about the pros and cons when coming out with such and advanced product like this one. It's good for sleepy drivers because if there is not traffic coming up due to construction and they doze off they car is able to possibly get they driver home safely. When it comes to parking the car could park if the driver is not good at a certain type of parking. If you have glasses and you cant read the speed limit the car could read the speed limit and adjust to how fast it's suppose to be going. In school zones if you are not paying attention the car could detect a school zone or when people are crossing the street and stop or slow down.\n\nThe negatives to the driverless car is the car could possibly malfunction at a bad time like in traffic. If the speed limit is below thirty and the car meesses up and reads fifty and oyu get pulled over and get a ticket you can't really blame it on the car because its not driverless at all you're still in it and could be held accoutable. Texting is another problem humans get distracted very easily and if they see that the car can do all the work they will possibly reach for their phone and begin texting but this is a problem because when the car is trying to alert you that it is your time to drive then oyu could not be paying sttetion and get into an accident. Children, if your children are misbehaving and it's your turn to drivr you can't always turn around and get the child together because that can result in an accident. Sleepy drivers can be a good thing but also a bad one because somepeople are heavy sleepers and won't feel the vibrations of the seat. Drunk drivers might find this as an oppurtunity to try and get home safe without driving but you have to remember that you still have to drive.\n\nHonestly to me if you're going to consider a car as driverless you should have a little more pre-cautions and teach the car a little more. Like how to drive threw construction ares or maybe in traffic know when to stop and go. If the driver falls aslep the car automatically pulls over. Make sure malfunctions don't happen when the driver is driving. All this project needs is a little while longer with testing to see if people actually like the car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, it is believed by some that studying at university is essential to success while others think that students should go to work after finishing high school. Although there are certain reasons why students should go to work, I personally think that studying at university is more necessary. \n\nOn the one hand, getting a job after school can have several benefits. First, having a job after finishing high school can help save time. This is mainly because studying at university takes 4 years or college takes 3 years. In that time, one may have achieved a lot if he or she goes to work. Second, getting a job after graduating from school can be financially beneficial. The main reason for this is that people do not spend too much money on tuition fees. Also, getting a job can help them earn money in order to cover their living costs.\n\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that going to university is more significant to future success. To begin with, students can get a good job after finishing university. The main reason for this is that a lot of companies require university degrees to apply. Going to university, people can learn more knowledge and practice in their speciality. Moreover, by attending university, people can have a chance in the future to develop themselves. This is mainly because they can study higher education such as master's and PhD. In addition, they can do research in the field that they are interested in.\n\nIn conclusion, while getting a job after school can have some merits, I would argue that university can give students a better future in their careers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper name I think idea based people need computer good statement My oppinon say people use computers much dont yet exercise When true fact computers Programms watch weight Stocks etc also Technology helps people around world websites programs names video chat instant messaging way teen stuff like computers help people video chatting emailing people rezemates jobs based On showing people recent jobs And giving details showing people reading article technology computers also help save Most reasons need tech equipment people use fields navy dealships world industry Why good well point view business need order stocks store carriers For field use sean pregnacy pulse radar s And negative point side readers based mostly people get addict technology truht people really need technology look around everything world mostly made technology people agree computers help people speak email lives help find family friends give directions point view tel dean readers interacting technology Is good way nto control ways computers way I make sites audio interesting Technology allows people ways help people Find create ways making money interesting positive comes using person world goes thru tech equip These days people read article pass story people take technology negative terms help think positiveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the 1960's driverless cars seemed more as like a futuristic fantasy rather than reality, but in todays world, they just might be the next big thing. In the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track (Ph. 3). Although this was the first concept of a \"smart car\", the roads would need an unrealistic upgrade that would cost extremely to much. Today however, we have the technology to make real driverless cars. The toll of human error has been evident in the auto-age as more accidents happen every year. The use of driverless cars, or at least almost driverless cars, will be benificial to the future as less accidents will happen, preventing more casualties.\n\nToday, many cars all across America and the world have road assistance and antilock breaks, but this still gives drivers the oppurtunity to make a mistake and cause an accident. For example, BMW created a system called \" Traffic Jam Assistant\". The car is capable of handling situations at speeds up to 25 mph. This is not bulletproof though, as the human driver still has to be alert when navigating through construction and accidents. Developers though, are getting closer to having real driverless cars. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90% of the time (Ph.10).\n\nTechnology today makes creations and inventions capable of almost anything. We have had extreneous experience with sensors and radar, two things that are almost required for a driverless car in the upcoming future, to make one. In the 1980's, more than 30 years ago, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes (Ph. 5). With all of the experience gained, we now can make real driverless cars. Infact, we all ready have. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009 (Ph. 2). Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but roadblocks and problems do lie ahead for a true \"driverless car\".\n\nTraffic laws are written with the asssumption that the only safe car has a human driver in contral at all times (Ph. 9). As a result, many states restrict the use of driverless cars on the roads. As driverless cars are a relatively new idea, restrictions will be diminished in due time. Opposers of driverless cars have also made the claim that liability will possibly be the dimise of driverless cars. The discussion of whether or not the human in the seat or the car manufacturer will no doubt be on the minds of lawmakers, but they would quicky come to the conclusion that it would be the driver's fault, since the driver bought the car and knew what he/she was getting into. Manufacturers would also make a liability agreement required in order to driver the car.\n\nAlthough driverless cars will not probably be 100% driverless, the creation of almost driverless cars is not far down in world history. The use of driverless cars, or at least almost driverless, will be beneficial to the future as less accidents will happen, preventing more casualties.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": ",Honestly it would be valuable to the students in the classroom beacuse paintings like that are you non emotional and you most likley can read the emotion on their face. Now if facial action coding system work properly I think that every class should get one judging by the picture I think the machine is off with the emotions by a little because if you think about it back in Leonardo Da Vinci times it wasnt a trend to smile in pictures so thats why most of the greatest historical picture of people look like they have mixed emotion. Back to the technology , its a good and bad idea to have one but if you know how to work it then every Art and English teacher should have one but there might be some pros and cons about the machine on con could be is that it could have a malufunction or crash which would cause the people who have it to get it fixed. A pro about it is that now you can tell weither or not the picture of the person painted back in historical times were happy,sad or angry all that matters is that the thing works and I think it would be a good idea honestly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology does not determine your mood. Technology are used to search of dectect information. It is used to help others to learn about something. You can't calculate how people really feel. You'll never know how people feel unless they tell you theirselves.\n\nTechnology does not tell how people feel because the results of people's feelings may not be accurate. It does not detects how really happened. Also, it don't express people's personal issues. Just because people smile, don't mean they're really happy. Some people may frown. But that does not mean if they are really upset.\n\nYou never know how people feel because they do that just to make it seem like everything is okay. But things they people go throught is not alright. Technology does not tell the actually truth when it comes to personal problems. Also, it will not express what people have going on in their life. The results when technology will not be a hundred percent true about human emotions.\n\nTechnology are not always accurate about people. Dectecting people's emotions may by looking at facial expressions by technology will not work out. Technology is for research, networks, tools,power points, and also microsoft word. Technology on my opinion don't determine people's mood. But technology can show things that you don't know about.\n\nFinally, Technology does not determine people's emotions. Technology is for research about thing or people that you don't know about. It can't show you the truth about people's emotions. Sadly, it will not express how people really feel about something or someone. Therefore, people theirselves can only tell you what their emotions really are when they frown or smile.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter I d like call CAPS Because matter language tongue speak something funny occurs natural reaction laugh This reaction present people takes place s contagious helps bring everyone together Laughter also emits sense happiness joy return makes people feel free open join laugh well In many instances awkward situation hand laughter plays big role lightening mood making atmosphere little comfortable In laughter big key success annual Our consists around people including cousins close friends see easy get know interact everyone However dinner time like switch sit next relatives would nt normally sit next At first s usually awkward sometimes even frightening younger kids end sitting next loud opinionated aunts uncles That decides crack one hilarious jokes My somewhat awkwardness Not necessarily enjoys awkward situations rather enjoys watching play Eventually halfway meal eating close utter silence decides stand give little toast Following speech always concludes well rehearsed joke gets everyone laughing Some younger cousins nt always understand play words But really gets going listening aunts uncles hoot holler things like CAPS CAPS help mixed obnoxious laughs After fun dies awkwardness always seems drift away leaving us feelings happiness joy I described earlier I believe feelings directly correlate lightening mood helping get everyone comfortable happen sitting Once things occur conversation gets flowing everyone ends getting know member otherwise might gotten chance truly meet Laughter one keys happiness life without life would dull boring Laughter also power change situations make better part In laughter changed situation life better like done many times since In eyes laughter best If really want get know person make laughSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars are coming\" Here near the future we will be having more Driverless cars in the streets. It would be a good idea to have them for many reasons. \"A driverless car is not truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when your in a complicatd traffic iusses\" it would keep us away from a lot of wrecks, benifit the older people, and much more. \"in 2013, BMW annoucedthe development of\" \"Trafic Jam. They can steer,ccelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the drivr when the road ahead requiers human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\" In other words the driver would have to be aware of taking over the sterring weel when the situation requiers. \"as a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars. california, nevada, florida, and the District of culumbia have led the coutry in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars.\" 'even if trafic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liabilty in the case of an accident; if the technology fails and someone is injured who would the blame go against- the driver or the manuacturer?\" this would be a great change for the world and would save more life's, they would also have to make it fun to. \"some amnufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertaiment systems tat use heads-up displays. such dispays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over- something not available to drivers tryig to text ith a ell phone. in this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concer.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's argued that Art should be mandadory for children at educational institutes. Against this ideia, There are some who claim that it would be waste of time. This essays is going to disscuss both ideias and choose which one is more resonable.\nArt is a extremaly difficult field to thrive in. The job oportunities are scarce and the wages are lower. For this reason many people think that investing in art as a suject at schools is a waste of time for children who are learning to be able to work and support themselves in the future. For instance, a famous actress in my country said in an interview that she had to study acting without her parents knowing this. They were against her choosing this career because she could not make a living from it.\nChildren are significantly more creative than adults. Studies point that when we were born, our right brain side, which comands artistic and creative skills, is more developed than the left side. Children start to lose their creative strengths as soon as they start to learn exact subject such as Mathematics and Quemistry, which are procesed by the left brain side. If they stop using their right brain side at that early stage, this can lead to a poor innovative thinking in the future. For example, in a recent survey at Melboune university 95% of the IT students, acostumed to deal most of the time with numbers, declared that they are not creative at all.\nAnalysing both sides, it is clear that art is not the easiest filed to have professional success. However, this essay agrees with the view that children should not be deprived of learning art at school because it would help them to keep their creative skills. Eventhough they do not work with art in the future, Creativity is an asset for thinking outside of the box and having flexiblity to either deal with the diverse types of obstacles in their ellected profession or to innovate.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be viewed in a both positive and negative way. Depending on how you look at driverless cars and from peoples perspective you could argue both ways. Driverless cars are more positive because they are cheap, they are safe and it is also smart transportation.\n\nOne way driverless cars are positive is because they are cheap. In the passage it says, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibily than a bus.\" With the prices of fuel being cheaper, the cost of a ride would be cheaper. Therefore, more people can afford the ride and that would be a greater profit from what is currently being made.\n\nAnother way driverless cars are more positive is because they are smart transportation. In paragraph 4 it says, \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an intertial motion sensor.\" Having all of that technology in the car would make the car a \"smart\" car. Also, with all of that technology in the car you would figure that you are going to have a much safer ride.\n\nFinally, the last way driverless cars are more positive is because they are safe vehicles. In parapgraph 2 it says, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" Facts like this would make one riding in this transportation feel more safe about their ride. Knowing that a car has been driven a lot of times, in far distances and hasn't crashed is really good advertisement. People would love having transportation that they know they can be safe in.\n\nThough driverless cars can be argued as a negative thing, it can also be argued as a positive thing because of some of the things the car has to offer. Having a drivless car can be very helpful and beneficial to peoples everyday lives. Driverless cars are more postive because it is safe transportation, it is less expensive and it is safe transportation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why carefull get libary Libaries books knowledge fun rommance action adventure desterbing grusium Kids lot times pick books pornagerfy grusium action This causes kids act different ways They act hyper mean people even children They sneeky things behind parents back Why think need act way cool nt understand makes look ugly So take parents saying days Even take books bad children lot books left Because days books something bad mind So need carefull books put libary books take libary It causes world change fast Now libarys great place kids learn Books teach new things expand knowledge The libary kids reports essays important people come Some kids go get book enjoy From point view libary one favorites places Any books involved count Having books causes imagination come take us adventeres us never get Sometimes books cause things happen families Some causes us nightmares bad behavior If try take books help familes come together also nt take books cause things go wild Because people kids think need books survive world Which really books ect causes mind picture things make us think need Other writing materials even movies cause problems world today Magazines girls much clothes things make boys minds wander Movies even worse picture right front faces I saying magazines movies bad mind also helpful Magazines help us research happening world today They also talk many subjects like cooking room decerating decerate weddings etc Movies help us research also show us happened back Like watching docromentries people happened past We nt need take every movie magazine without So need carefull put libaries It cause us bad behavior bad dreams So help solve problem We take books magazines movies etc really bad mind So help children grow well behavied mature Also one thing books magazines movies good thing use right How know got good book We find right books us following heart instinkesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I read the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" I thought about whether I was for it or against it. Turns out I am for it. There are many different reasons as to why I am for it. As I explain my position think about yours; Is this invention worth all the time and money? Will it help out our economy? What are the pros and cons?\n\nIn the article it states, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" I think this is definitely a plus side. If their driverless cars use less fuel that would make our economy so much better! Also, let's talk about the air! The air would be much more cleaner than it is today and air pollution would go down tremendously! What a pro to this driverless car!\n\nAnother reason as to why I am for driverless cars is less accidents. If the car is driven by a computer than I think there would be less of that. You would not have to worry about other drivers texting and driving because they would not be the ones driving. Another reason is drinking and driving. If a person has had a few drinks but has driven they can just get into their car and have the car already to go with the computer driver! Less accidents like I said.\n\nAs I conclude my position on driverless cars I would also like to talk about how over the years automobiles have come a very far way. In the article it talks about in 2000 there was no way they could have made a driverless car that without the technology today and the mapping driverless cars would not even exsist! Automobiles have changed the world as we know it and think about what driverless cars could change.\n\nMy position on driverless cars is yes I am for them. There are so many pros to this invention that I have to be for it. In the end, it will most likely help with automobile accidents, our economy, and the world's condition. So, are you for it or against it?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The possibility of technological error and the necessity of modifying the law are among several issues that we face with driverless cars; therefore, driverless cars may not be the most ideal solution to safer roads. Although I believe that updates can be added to enhance safety features and prevent reckless driving, I think that the concept of having driverless cars to such an extent is dangerous.\n\nTechnological error is certainly the most significant of the negative aspects that driverless cars present to humans. Driverless cars have their faults just as humans do, and the benefits that these cars provide are often outweighed by error.\n\nAccording to paragraph 9, \"technology fails,\" and when that occurs, \"someone is injured.\" Another perspective on this topic is human reliance on technology. Even though people can be alerted when something is wrong, not everyone will pay attention to those warnings. They may take advantage of the fact that the car drives by itself, which could lead to dozing off or even to drinking behind the wheel. Humans also couldn't develop motor skills as well. Alertness could decrease because some people may believe that they won't have to be aware of their surroundings while in the car. In addition, coordination and perception could be effected because people may not feel the need to improve on those skills since the car is driving instead. Paragraph 9 states, \"lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" This applies to driverless cars in that it implies that some may become lazy and unattentive while in an advanced car.\n\nLaws may have to change drastically also, and it may be difficult for many people to keep up with the modifications. This could mean that countless people will have little knowledge of the rules of the road. In the article, it is brought up that \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Contrary to this, driverless car owners may feel that it is unnessary to learn traffic laws because the car itself will be driving. Ignorance results from that way of thinking, and ignorance can lead to unsafe driving conditions and reckless driving. Besides traffic laws, various other laws will need to be upgraded or invented as well. The article mentions that \"new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" In other words, it would be necessary to create laws that distinguish between driver and manufacturer fault. It would be difficult to determine who exactly was the cause of an accident, which means that there could be many aggressive cases between owners and manufacturers.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars wouldn't exactly be for the benefit of the world. Their abilities are extraordinary, but it is not to be forgotten that with technology comes error. Driver awareness is essential to safe roads, and unfortunately driverless cars can cause less driver alertness as humans begin to rely soley on technology to assist them in their everyday lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys programe because it is a good for you. It is kind of like helping people. You get head over seas to go on trips. You can get seaman papers and board the SS Charles W. Wooster and you are headed to Greece-with a cargo of 335 horse plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nIf I (Luke) got to get in for nine trips I bet you can get more trips than him. Those trips are so fun you will go to sleep right when you get home. You can be a small town girl or boy like me and go on unbelievable trips. You can also tour an excavated castle in Crete and marvel at the Panama Canal on your way to China.\n\nIt takes about two week of fun to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a great month to gwt to China. Caring for the animals will keep you busy but with lots of fun and happiness. If the animals kept me busy it will keep you busy for a long time. The animals have to be fed wartered three times a day and that is going to be so fun that you will be worn out with fun. You will have fun scrubbing the walls with your frinds because I had fun. Anything I have fun with you will have fun with just trust me.\n\nIf you help any one out in you familly with a farm you will be parpared for this, I bet, and if you had not helped out with a farm before, its going to be just as easy as the others. On your second trip you will serve as I night watchman so you would have to get in all the sleep\n\nthat you can, and I know all of ya'll like to sleep because it is good for you. And ya'll will be worn out on top of that. Here is what you have to do; Feed the animals every one hour.\n\nTry to find you so time for fun board, I did. Exspecially on return of trips after the animals had been unloaded. I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir mood author created memoir two ways first happy created able use america s beautifulfriendlyness Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative knowing hope anything achived I never foreget parents turned simple house homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The terrain described essay add affect strugles cyclist For example author says their cars buildings sight adds affect really middle nowhere Also adds lot affect comes upon abandond juice factory thirsty puts stones mouth gather saliva Also finally finds water oldtimer asks knows best way goSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every four years, the United States is turned into a political battleground by the campaign for presidency. The electoral College, the voting method used since the nation began, Is being highly questioned on its efficiency now vs the efficiency 250 years ago. However, the system has survived because it works. Despite its flaws, the Electoral College does a good job of simplifying the presidential election and eliminating disputes or a potential crisis. It produces a clear winner, it makes sure that the president is popular in all areas of the country, and it puts the weight of the campaign on the swing states.\n\nIn most presidentai races, the president wins only by a small margin. rarely is there a landslide victory or a complete vote for a president. This small majority can lead to many disputes over the credibility of counting the votes in the individual states. This is why the Electoral College helps the voting process. The Electoral College helps the voting process because it produces a more clear winner. For example, in line 21 it claims that \"In [2012's] election, for example, Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote sompared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney\". This shows that while the popluar vote can be extremely tight, the winner gaining sometimes less than 1 percent of the popluar votes, the Electoral College helps the system by giving the winner a landslide advantage and therefore clearing up any claims over the credibility of the popular votes which the loser can produce. Also, the Electoral College helps prevent the situation of no president winning the majority of the votes. the introduction of third parties can sometimes mean that no party gains more than half of the votes. However, the Electoral College helps deal with that situation. In 1968 and 1992, Nixon and Clinton both had less than the majority, but won because they had the Electoral College in their favor. This is why the Electoral College still works today.\n\nThere are some areas of the nation that are very highly populated. The southern and western regions of the nation are becoming more and more populated, and the northern regions are diminishing in size. By popular vote, a president who wins the southern regions alone would have a good chance of winning the nation. However, that system does not work under the electoral college vote. The Electoral College is a good system for voting on the president because it requires a president to be popular across the nation. Under the Electoral College, a president can not suffice by winning the votes in a couple of states. They must get points from states across the nation and then will it add up to a victory. This is good because a president with only a regional majority will mainly focus on the region which he is based on. The other regions will be disregarded, and not paid as much attention to. The Electoral College prevents this outcome. This is another reason why the Electoral College is a good method of picking the presidency.\n\nMost states will have a tendency to almost always vote for a patricular party. The real difference in Electoral votes lies mostly in the states who will vote either way, or 'Swing States\". The Electoral College is a good thing because it puts the emphasis on the states who will vote either way, ensuring the credibility of the candidate. These swing states know that they are the ones who decide the election. Therefore, it is the voters in these states who pay more attention to the campaign, who research the candidates more, and who listen to what the candidates have to say. This is a bonus for the Electoral College because it means that the candidate who will be elected is the candidate who will do best for the country, not necessarily the most popular. Because of this, the Electoral College should remain the system of voting on the presidency.\n\nThere are arguments that the Electoral College should be abolished. That the system of sending electors to congress to vote for them does not work because they can't guarantee that the electors will vote for who they are supposed to do. However, the chances of that happening today and the elector getting away with it are very slim. Today, The people and the government know exactly how much votes each state gave to each candidate, and they know exactly how much electoral votes a candidate should get. So even if you manage to add a vote to your candidate, It's very likely that someone will do the math and figure out that something's not right with the votes.\n\nLike every system, the Electoral College has its flaws. However, the system is the best we can put in place to elect a new president. The system still is used after 250 years because it easily simplifies the disputes that can easily occur over the tight popular vote margins. So the next time you vote for the president, You'll know that you are voting in the most efficient democratic system to date.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some big cities, especially in Tokyo, Osaka, and Yokohama in Japan tend to build taller buildings like skyscrapers. Other local cities and places where are scarcely populated are built wider. This is quite understandable in terms of space, and there might be some solutions to dissipate populations around Japan.\nInitially, the main reason why people tend to gather in big cities is that there are many opportunities to get a job. There are famous headquarter companies and branches that are based in foreign countries. Therefore, more and more people move to the big cities so that many taller apartments and buildings are built to let them live in the limited space. There seems to be stressful due to people being densely populated, but infrastructures are well organized, especially transport, medical care, and security.\nIn contrast, the population in the countryside becomes less. Therefore, there is plenty of space to build houses in the wider area. It seems to be well-relaxed and comfortable to live in a slow-paced lifestyle. But, it is apparently more difficult to obtain a new job, and lacking transport, so they need to rely on cars. In addition, the number of hospitals is much smaller than big cities. These issues are long controversial as a first world problem.\nFinally, as Covid-19 spread worldwide, many people are started to work at home with a lap top computer. Innumerable companies adopted IT systems that are able to work remotely. In addition, some companies had already stated this systemized working style will not change, however, Covid-19 completely ended. This means that many people do not necessarily need to live in big cities. Therefore, if the transport system is well organized, especially establishing and improving a train, which works faster and more frequently. This effort will be not only helpful to dissipate the population outside of the big cities, but also promotive to tackling with great infrastructures to countrysides.\nIn conclusion, as a result, the densely populated cities will be able to reduce its population and increase the population in the countryside. As a result, some issues will be resolved and become well-balanced solutions. Finally, it might be able to build wider houses in big cities with reasonable prices than now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some may argue that children should have the cooking subject of the science of nourishment in their study curriculum and they should learn how to cook properly, However, others believe that it is squandered of time and children should study more vital subjects and. I am opposed to the latter view and believe students need to learn to cook. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, cooking is one of the basic skills which is needed for becoming independent. Children must learn to provide food without their parents’ observation and it will absolutely make their adulthood easier because they will be able to cook for themselves without any problem. In addition, nutrition has an important effect on health. The sooner children know the nutritious food, the more they try to have a better diet and it helps them to have a healthy lifestyle. For example, children who are educated about the drawbacks of junk foods try more to avoid them as much as possible. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, STEM subjects like mathematics and physics are more essential for their future career path. Recruiters of most companies assess the scores of core lessons before anything else and it shows the important role of these lessons. To put it in other words it is almost impossible to be fit in job application without studying those subjects and individuals will lose the career competition in the future. However, I think due to the importance of healthy nutrition in children's quality of life spending limited hours per week on cooking will not harm other lessons.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe despite the fact that some subjects are crucial for people's job opportunity in the future cooking should also be taught at schools because what people eat completely affect their health status and children must be educated about this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring planet Venus would be a challenge due to it's conditions. Even though Mercury is closer to the sun and Venus is right after it, Venus is still much more hotter. NASA is attempting to send out scientists to outer space to study this planet up close. They sent out space crafts ships to take photographs that didn't do much due to the light and how it cannot penetrate the fog. Humans cannot step foot on that planet but they can study it from a distance.\n\nThis is going to be tough for NASA to overcome this dangerous mission. Venus is a very hot planet that has the temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit on its surface. The atmosphere on it is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than our planet earth. What makes this mission difficult for Astronomers is that the clouds there are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere.\n\nEven though there are risks, NASA is planning to send scientists up close to Venus to get a better view of studying it. Scientists are conducting tests on what is safe to use against the heat. They have discovered that they can use mechanical computers which were used in the 1800s that can caculate by using the gears & levers are resistant to heat pressure. If they use the mondern computers, the physical condition will end up melting because of the high temperature. They also need to find the right materials for their spacecraft that can withstand the conditions.\n\nAt a safe distance, NASA was using small Spacecrafts to take there photos and videos so they can study it. As the results, they say that the pictures were too bright to see anything. The videos they captured ended in the same result because the atmosphere was too dense. They cannot obtain any samples from there due to the heat. That is why they are planning on sending humans to study it.\n\nThis concludes that NASA is going to send the Astronomers to outer space. This is going to be a major achivement if they overcome this. Most likely they are going to send them there to study it. Even the high risks, they are willing to go that far to discover the unknown. They say that Venus use to be much like earth, so why not and compare the planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When going library expect see various books movies music magazines maybe items If person looking book maybe could offensive race culture religion etc still able check book Libraries shouldnt able control situtations s persons choice adults choice read kinds stories In country allowed express opinion The includes free speech insures anyone express personal feelings opinion certain matters If person would want check book could offended another individual technically law right I m condoning someone read books listen music even watch movies could hateful cruel law ok people want read listen watch works Libraries government funded organizations Therefore meaning dont right disregard works The government pays books purchased library This means need books people would want read interested even though gruops people might agree job I m encouraging reading novels listening offensive music citizens allowed listen want read anything want thats country meant stand freedom When I think think freedom say I m proud country stands stand freedom even comes small things lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building threw many obstacles They consulted experts taking tours equipment mooring operations US Naval Air Station The builders also meet president formed airship transport companySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is arguable that the overwhelming majority of nations favour the children apprenticeship rather than mature individuals who are believed that the ruling powers should squander public funds on them. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since the national future relies on youngsters. Albeit, adults play their role in regional development. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments.\n\nOn the one hand, the advancement of a nation depends on how the future generation is trained. In other words, this investment in them is a must since they are the future doctors, engineers, and teachers. For instance, the recent research carried out by the University Zambeze pointed out that the most successful nations throughout the world are those which frittered a significant amount of money on Boys and Girls. As a result, vital regional sectors are equipped with specialized personnel, which helps communities. Furthermore, the best way to guarantee the nation's advancement is undoubtedly through education on children.\n\nOn the other hand, adults are also part of the republic's development. The role is to transmit the experience to the younger generation in different spheres of knowledge such as education, pharmaceutical, industry, and security. Moreover, it is their duty to secure a peaceful transition from one generation to another. For example, in African countries, despite the majority of local adults being illiterate, they are vitally transmitting their past livings to young ones. Consequently, Boys and Girls are prepared in an earlier stage to take charge tomorrow.\n\nIn conclusion, notwithstanding the pivotal role mature people play in society, it is meaningless to spend a huge amount of money on them. However, equal action on children is justified because they are guarantors of the country's amelioration. Therefore, I still strongly disagree with the statement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Those pie charts give information about average house expenditures during two different periods of time, 1950 and 2010. Below I will describe both ones in details about what it was like during those two different periods of time.\nFirst of all, we can see that during the year 1950, people used to spend 72.1% from their income to pay for rent and 22.0% in 2010, that means, we have seen a great decline comparing those two years together. The percentage for food which is 11.2% in 1950 and 34.0% in 2010 mark in a great increase in the recent times.\nThe percentage for healthcare during 1950 and 2010 are 2.4% and 4.5% respectively marks in increase giving an idea that people are paying more from their income for healthcare. We have seen a huge increase for those two period of times for transportation which is 3.3 and 14.0 for transportation.\nIn terms of education for those two years, the percentage almost stays the same 6.3 and 6.6 respectively with a little difference between both of them. For the last point which is for other things not mentioned here, maybe for unexpeted items and other stuff that they might not been buying on a monthly basis, we can see the percentage increasing. Maybe household members spend more on items that can't be counted in a monthly budget.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator\n\nI am writing this letter to you to tell why i think we should change from Electoral College to election by popular vote. See the thing is Senator the Electoral College seems like a biais to me, its unfair to the people. Many Americans dont vote because they fair that that votes won't go to the right person because in truth and in facts when the American people vote they're not voting for who's to become president they vote for the electors and not knowing that the electors dont always vote for the same person the voted for so all Americans are doing is meaningless voting because they dont really have a choice they may think they voting for Obama and the electors voted for Romney. And thats why most Americans dont vote.\n\nI feel it wouuld be best if all voting is done by popular vote , because either way all of the American people dont get a say in the voting rules but at least they know that there not being cheated.\n\nBecause when they vote by electoral college most states dont even get the chance to vote because its small or under populated , which is unfair not because you know a state is small and it might not make a difference doesn't means they dont have the right to vote its totally unfair.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I going see friend lived end street I walked taking scene sun going young ones playing laughing carelessly A boarder waved I nt trust enough wave back since seemed like weird o mean anything I finally got knocked door She answered seconds afterward oh hi exclaimed smiled kindly I finish homework eat I nodded So I went wait park I sat swing swang back forth An hour went I patiently sat I nt know coming decided maybe I go home It getting dark When I got outside I told I go home late I could come back tomorrow That time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A day a quite different than others. The symphony of children's laughter, as they sway their arms in harmony with the pace of their feet, while making their way to school. The crescendo of the birds serenading eachother with their dainty chirps. Inhaling fresh, sweet air. And not even the slightest echo of a car's vroom in the distance. VAUBAN, Germany, BOGOTA, Colombia, and even the global city Paris, are living the average american's greatest fear to clear up the atmosphere by limiting car usage. At least one day, without the convience of a vehicle to take you along your marry way.\n\nParis had a near-record pollution, and just days after the incident, the city enforced a partial driving ban to clear the city's air. Any motorist driving a vehicle with a license plate that contained the print of an even number, faced a 22-euro fine. Same punishment went for a motorist caught driving with an odd-numbered plate the following day. After just five days of the city's recovery from harsh smog, congestion went down 60 percent in the capital. Just goes to show that the slightest bit of effort can make quite a global impact. If only it could become a trend. Which brings me to introduce you to a prime example a trend that is currently growing in Europe.\n\nVauban, Germany, home to 5,500 residents, is an upscale community thriving with suburban pioneers, is a prime example of the type of community trying to make a difference, that is now trending. Where residents must pay a whopping fee of $40,000 for one space, in a large garage, at the edge of the only known car ownership. Forbidden street parking, driveways, and home garages is what makes that bill ever so large. Not a car is to be thought of while walking through the streets fresh air bombarded with bicyclists and walkers.\n\nBut what about the country who has a love affair with it's vehicles, The United States? Well, according to an analysis by Doug Shortof Advisor Perspectives, As of April 2013, the number of miles driven driven by Americans was at it's peak in 2005, and has durastically dropped thereafter. Transportation for America is a fast growing coalition of people in the US who are promoting, and supporting the communities that are less dependent on cars. David Goldberg, an official of Transportation for America, stated that \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change. How much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid.\"\n\nTransportation for America isn't the only agency standing to make a difference, either. The Enviromental Protection Agency promotes communities with reduced car usage, and it's about time that legislators are cautiously starting to act upon this main contributor to the problems of pollution. At this rate, if the pattern persists, Sociologists have determined that all of this will have beneficial implications on the enviroment.\n\nKnowing that it is possible with just the slightest bit of effort, don't you want to join in on saving mother nature?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During bikers adventure heat lack water affect In short story cyclist feels lost says I traveling high deserts California June This suggests rider faced extreme heat desert ride He also says The water bottles contained tantilizing sips This quote shows faced heat also lack water These facts quotes show clear threats biker faced long bikerideSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Sample EssayApproval of the medicines for human use is a tedious process which involves a series of tests often performed on animals. While some people support this idea because it makes drugs safer for human consumption, others believe that it is an unethical practice. Personally, I am in favour of the idea that medicines should be tested in all possible scenarios before being released to the public.Those against animal experimentation argue that animals have the same rights as human beings because they are the outcome of the same evolution process through which humans came into existence. Infecting them with viruses and exposing them to bacteria, to create a conducive environment to test a chemical substance may cause excruciating pain to these lab animals. Any failed test can mean that the subject either loses its precious life or suffers for the rest of its existence, and understandably, some people are against what they consider an immoral practice.Nonetheless, if a drug is released into the market without a thorough end-to-end testing, it could cause severe damage to anyone who may consume it. Every day a large number of animals are being mercilessly killed by humans for their mere flesh and skin. There isn’t a big difference between killing an animal for food and sacrificing its life for testing a chemical composition, because both actions are helping the human race to survive. What’s more, the life of one animal used to test a life-saving drug could help many people live. This is why a large number of people believe that testing drugs on animals is a matter of survival.To sum up, there are valid reasons why animal testing seems cruel and unacceptable to some, and crucial to others. In my opinion, even though animals subjected to testing may suffer, it is a necessary step to ensure the healing power of a drug.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm choosing to go againts driverless cars. I will list a few reasons in this essay, and describe them.\n\nFirst off driverless cars are exspensive. There are plenty of more important things that the money could be used on, rather than driverless cars. The cars could also lose control and take you off road, causing injury or death. The car could have a malfunction causing wreck poceeding with injury or even death. Also the car could take you to the wrong destination. This can also cause injury or death because the car could drive into a tree, house,ocean, builing, or anything really. The car could run redlights, causing wrecks which can cause injury or death. Also the roads would have to be upgraded and changed. Why change the roads when they can stay the same, save money, and cause less accidents. The way this would cause less accidents is people would know the roads better than if new roads were put in. Also how would the car know if where its going is the right place? People often type in addresses wrong in gps but maybe the person knows where there going.\n\nThese are just a few of the reasons why i chose to go against the driverless car. Keeping the roads the same will cause less accidents. The money can also be used for more important things rather than driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not going to take over the transportation industry. Driverless cars have many negative and positive aspects to the making. Many people have found it hard to believe that they are \"driverless\" cars. There was an article on CNN website on May 3, 2016 that is about how one of Google's driverless cars crashed. The idea of the cars working into driverless anytime soon is not going to happen.\n\nThe positive apects of the car are many, but they are ruled out by the major aspects of negativity. The text states, \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\". The idea of the many sensors they spread across this car is crazy, but they are mimicking the driver, so he or she does not have to drive. Second, \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\". Google cfounder Sergey Brin is stating that his driverless car has less fuel usage than a regular car and many more options than a bus. The positive attributes are crazy on the results they got that could change the environment and human lifestyle.\n\nThe negative aspects of the driverless car are very high in priorities for the company. According to the text, \" Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffice issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents\". This \"driverless\" can is not showing its true meaning of being driverless if it has to be taking over by a driver to pull in and out of driveways. Furthermore, \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer\"? The car is causing many different problems in many different categories. It is saying that they would have to make up new laws of liability for if someone gets injured in a technology malfunction, it sounds like a lot of issues that can not be fixed.\n\nThe driverless car has many issues and advantages that can be handled in different ways. According to the text, \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved\". They are stating that the problems with the cars are being solved by the minute. Second, \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\". It is hard to believe that they can have a car watch a person and be controlled by that. The driverless car is very luxury, but would middle class people be able to buy it?\n\nThe driverless car is a statement that does not mean what it is stating. According to the text, \" Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors\". Those are just a few of the \"driverless\" cars sensors, how is anyone going to be able to see out of the car with all of those gadgets in the way. Furthermore, \" The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over\". The cars name is \"driverless car\" then you have to have the driver take over when you can not do simple tasks like pulling in and out of driveways. The car just seems like it is very far from being \"driverless\".\n\nThe driverless car have not found their spot in the world yet or for quite a while. The concept of having the driver have to take over a driverless car is crazy on how they call it driverless, but need someone to take over the wheel at times. The car has many positive aspects to it and would be astounding if they had found a way to make it driverless, but until then they are not very interesting to me. Driverless cars are not going to take of the transportation industry.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The people of our great nation are told to vote on who they would like to lead and represent them. This is a Democracy and American citizens deserve this right. There have been incidents where the majority of the popular vote from U.S. citizens did not lead to the election of that candidate. This is because of the electoral college. This is the cause of citizens not having the president they asked for. Most American people do not agree with the electoral college. \"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational\" (The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses are wrong, Bradford Plumer).\n\nThe disaster factor is a what the electoral college should really be concerned about. The system allows for many slip-ups. \"The American people should conside themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century\" (The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses are wrong, Bradford Plumer). In 1960, segregationists in the Loisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. Also, electors who aren't loyal to the county have occasionally chosen to vote for the party that they'd want rather then vote for their party's candidate. Popular vote is what our founding fathers wanted in the beginning. They wanted equality between people, and the wanted the people to vote for who they wanted as a leader. With the electoral college, this vision cannot become reality.\n\nThe popular vote is what a Democracy is all about. \"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachorism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the electoral college is not democratic in a modern sense\" (In Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to Keep our Despised Method of Choosing the President, Richard A. Posner). There is no point in having the people vote if they aren't voting for what they need as a nation. We have brought our nation together so that they can decide on someone to watch over them and protect them.\n\nThe Electoral college is non Democratic and needs to be abolishes as soon as possible. There is no more use for it, as the population continues to grow. The popular vote is the way our great leaders taught us how to vote.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Good or Bad\n\nCan you imagine a time in the future where no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore? Well I couldnt imagine a future without buying cars. To buy a car is what mostly what everyone wishes for. Yes there is no technology coming up and by the years it expands more and more each day, but not because of that means that getting the idea of enventing cars that drive themselves is good.\n\nI am against future cars the drive themselves because first there not even proven all the way safe. These cars can get out of control any day and something bad can happen. In the story it says that states will follow as soon as the cars proved more reliably safe, which means that there not all the way safe. Anything can happen and when the driver has control of the driving they know what there doing. The driver knows if there driving right or wrong, But how will these cars that drive themselves know. Imagine one day the system might not work and the car will automatically fail with the system. These cars are'nt safe and until there not proven safe I am againts it.\n\nThe next big reason why I\"m against it is all the money there going to watse on these cars just to make them and when they come out. Theres going to be millions possibly millions of dollars to make these cars. Instead of focusing on something like this we can focus on bigger things. We already have cars we can drive we dont need to be expanding and wasting money on things that are'nt as important. Just more tax money coming out of people things will keep pricing up. Theres no point to invent cars to the next level if cars we have now are good enough.\n\nMy last reason on why I'm against these cars is the when you drive its freedom. Its a priviledge to drive, and when you drive you feel free. If the future brings cars that drive themselves the freedom of the people will be gone. So bringing cars that drive themselves wouldn't be so great for people who love to drive because they wouldn't feel free. Therefore cars are good just where they are.\n\nEventhough some may argue that having cars that drive themselves is good for whatever reson they might think, I'm against. So, can you imagine the future were no one needs to buy cars anymore? I couldnt. Theres freedom when you drive. Its good to be able to drive yourself. This is why I'm against \"Cars in the Future\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" The author suggests that NASA working ans studying about Venus, and how it wored. The solars system was finding where the Venus and close to which planet.\n\nVenus is actually a planet in the solar system, Venus is the second planet from the sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is the closest planet to the Earth in terms of density and size. The experience extreme than\n\nanything humans encounter on Earth, such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to driveing to the deepest part of the oceans.\n\nNASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. However, oeering at Venus from a ship orbitign or hovering safely far above the planet can proide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\n\nMore importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a through mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. The NASA is working one other stuff to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electroics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's suerface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\n\nIn conclusion, there was almost ninty seven percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfurice acid in Vnus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over eight hundred degrees Fahreheit, and\n\nthe atmospheric pressure is ninty times greater than what they ecperience on the Earth. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering thirty or so miles above the roiling Venusin landscape. At thrirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around one hundred seventy degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\n\nThe though of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by useing the gears ans levers and do not require electronics at all. Venus has a value, not only because human curiosity will like lead us into the mnay equally intimidating endeavores.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traveling to venus would be extremely hard to explore and even more difficult to actually settle there and it would take a great deal of time and resources to complete the exploration of venus. The challenges of exploring venus would come from a great deal of differing thins such as the the money, man power and time, not mention all the effort to calutlate all of the needed things in traveling to the planet venus. The problems dont only stop there, the others issues would then be the heat, acid, rough terran, dust storms, and the volcanoes then we have to look at what would the outcome of this expidition be and how would the producers gain all the money, time and effort from this expidition.\n\nNow that we got the negatives out of the way lets look at the bright side of this expiditon and it would be a whole new reasource pool, new discoveries, new knowledge enough to contribute meaningfully what people know about venus and the needed cooperation of everyone in the usa to actually get there but then the courage of this acheviement would be so great the american people would see no reason to stop there. This would heavily improve everyones moral and give people the need and excitment to go where no man has gone before but before that the suface of venus would be challenging to 97 percent carbon dioxide\n\nand highly corrosive temperature but the need for discovery would be greater then any mere obstical in the way of american's need to step pass our own boundries\n\nTo find new and differnt places that the human race could go long after the earth has been dimished of all it's resources. Then the resoning behind this is that the plant might have been like earths long ago with oceans and animals of differing origin then our earth and if the planet venus is similar to our own then the discovers of new and exsotic material might even be more powerful then steel and iron and give the human race the chance to explore farther and father then weve ever have gone before and with new and exciting materials we will have bold and promising people rise up and take up the torch that the people before them left waiting to be picked up and carry it to the ends of the universe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally don't think that's the best way to judge someone's emotions. I think the best way would be for people to go to see a specialist. I think that because technology should not be the way we calculate our emotions. Also any-givin human should be able to tell how they're feeling happy or mad. Lastly it would not be a good idea to let something i have no idea about judge how i'm feeling.\n\nIf it were in my hands I would have a device that could potentially decide my emotions, but I'd also have a person judge my emotions before the computer did anything. The reason I would let it scan my face is because it can go into dept, when a human can't see down into your face muscles. Also I think it would be a good idea because the computers could tell when a student is bored, confused, or struggling to figure out the problem. Lastly, it could be a good thing to do also sense \"most human communication is nonverbal.'\n\nLastly, I don't think the computer will be correct everytime so what if someone is mad and the computer is telling them they're happy? Also I think thatif the computer tells a happy person that they are happy they might get even more happy which is always a good thing for someone to be happy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story using paragraph reasons One reason change Saengs attitude In beginning story Saeng upset hope adjusting new home adding paragraph end story shows hope shes going give Another reason paragraph concludes story show life go toughest situation The fact new season begin figuratively shows Saeng always feel way change In conclude story paragraph good reasonsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I go libbrary every every week Although I nt really read much I usualy get movies music If I get book read usualy magazine something school I nt think books removed If nt read doesent mean people nt If nt like book ignore go simple For instens I found book fathe I would read self I would take shelf Other people might want read It s choice read mine It s like radio know The radio plays songs cuts curis words I nt think messies songs lyrics going aginst artists words The artist sings song people chang words To I nt think thats right It s also like telivtion You see movie theaters bad language bad seens When watch movie telivtion take minuts movie th bad seen cut languge To I think every thing stay I think nt want kids see block nt cut parts movie s fair people If people nt like music swich radio station another area radio Theres need take words Kids going pick words school streets way I also think seence pay much taxes I think get privilage come home watch movies telivtion relaxSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is irrefutable that climatic change is one of the major concerns across the globe today. While one section of the society consider this as an opportunity for creating and expanding businesses, others see this as a drawback for them. This essay will juxtapose both these views, and finally conclude with my opinion.\r\n\r\nWith the dramatic change in the weather patterns, the tourism industry has been harshly hit. Owing to unexpected rise and fall in temperatures in most of the parts of the world, such as extreme weather conditions in India, where summers are as warm as 50 degrees Celsius and in winters mercury level drops to nearly freezing 0 degrees Celsius, tourists do not prefer to visit such places. Consequently, local businesses and overall economy dependent on tourism gets detrimentally affected.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, few businesses such as air conditioner manufactures, fans and heaters manufacturing companies see this as a good time to boost their business as the demand of their products shoot up due to climatic change and consequently they have to increase the supply as well. Their agenda becomes very clear and their business potentially increases in such conditions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though few businesses gain from the climate change, I believe the majority has a perilous effect on them. Climate change is a very dangerous issue which will negatively affect each one of us, even those who are gaining profit from it today. Hence, we all should have a provident approach towards it and be solicitous about our future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is simple to see from a distance but it is challenging to see up close.The author of ''The Challenge of Exploring Venus'' suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers its presents. Here are the details that support this idea.\n\nVenus has a repuation as a challenging planet for humans to study. But astronomers are fascinated by Venus. It was once known as the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit. Its basically more like Earth thats why they call Venus as the ''twin''.\n\nNASA are compelling ideas to send humans to study Venus. Solar would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Temperatures would still be toasty at 170 degrees fahreheit but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. These conditions are not easy but they are survivable for humans.\n\nMany researchers are working on innovations that are going to allow machines to last long enough to contribute in Venus. Also, NASA is working on different approaches to studying Venus. For exampe they are making electronics made of silicon carbon. They have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus's surface and it had lasted for three weeks. Most technology have not even lasted a few hours. Which can be a better way for humans to study.\n\nHumans are full of curiosity and can lead us to many things. Studying Venus is worthy but it has many dangers. Like the author said ''we should be filled with doubts and should be expanded to meet very images of imagination and innovation.''SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are good patient Sometimes I sometimes going tell story I patient normally patient situations like I want school mom take test drop mall meet friends While I waiting I texting internet stomach started rumble I hungry I wanted text mom make rush I get something eat I texting I stopped thought I I knew hard long studied test I didnt want get bad grade I sat I texted people People called mind food After mom finished test came room I asked CAPS go looked smiled said I felt confident know hungry I shouted me to got car went subway I got forest meal With cooking chips drink delicious My mom dropped mall I told friends happened We laughed reason went charlete others places well After I thought I never want I starting started hurt I sat hours nothing never I At least I bounding rime mom Thats one bright sideSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" describes the new technology being used called Facial Action Coding System that enables computers to identify human emotions. The use of this technology to read emotional expressions of common people can be very valuable if it's benifit is known.\n\nThe computer being able to identify if somone is feeling happy or sad could be very helpful, mostly to the person looking at what the computer is showing. Paragraph 6 gives an example that if a person is looking at ads and smiles, then the computer will understand that they are interested, therefore give similar ads, But if the person frown's then the computer will change the ad to please the person. The way the computer reacts to the interest's of a person give it more personality and a better feel of what the person want's, desire's, or is looking for making the person feel more understood.\n\nBeing a teacher in a large classroom it may be hard to know who is struggling when the students are too afraid to ask and can aslo take alot of time trying to explain the lecture again, that is where technology jumps in and save's the day. According to Dr.Huang, he predicts that a classroom computer can \"modify the lesson\" which could help a student better understand a topic and also give teacher more time to be able to teach, as well as not so many students asking for help after class taking time from student, teacher, and possibly parent.\n\nEven if computer tecnology may not be present, it can be helpful to look and try to understand a person's emotion threw their face. Many people rather hide their emotion then face it and get help to get threw that hard emotion, although that can be unhealthy and dangerous, The Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion reveals that \"moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotion, but also may even help peoduce them\" (Paragraph 9) this states that acting to be happy can ultimatly lead to true happiness as well as acting to be sad can lead to depression. That statement can help people with depression or other problems with emotion.\n\nIn theroy, having a computer that can read a person's emotion can be benifitial due to being able to understand a person better and may also be able to cure emotional destress from all around. Having this tecnology can be very valuable in schools and hospitals to help kids and common people get understood when too shy or afraid to talk their emotion out.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" suggests that Venus would be a worthy pursuit even considering all of the dangers that it poses. And yes, Venus would be a worthy place to research, the only downside is how dangerous it can be. Venus poses to be very challenging to study from the plant itself being hard to reach, also given the planets conditions. You wouldnt be able to get accurate data without being on the surface from the thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. While the tempurates above most of the atmosphere are roughly around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, you still could barely see through the thick blanket of athmosphere. While it being 800 degrees on the surface, with higher pressure than the deepest parts of our ocean, Venus still is a worthy planet to study. Venus is known as our sister planet, from how it's size and density is relative to our own. On Venus, there is also evidence of the planet having water on it at one point. with Canyons, mountains, ridges, and valleys. Meaning it probally supported life like our's on Earth. Venus is also the closest planet that is relative to our's besides Mars. To sum all of it up, Venus is a very worthy subject to do more research on, besides all of the dangerous factors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is a stepping stone to achieve a successful life later and it becomes the hottest topic towards citizens. In addition to that, there is an increase in the number of study methods. Nowadays, instead of attending the courses on campus, many universities offer online lessons for their students. In my own perspective, I incline this as a positive development because of numerous merits.\nTo begin with, applying a lesson online which is more convenient can boost the efficiency of the study progress.Instead of transferring to tertiary schools, attendants can completely deal with the course at home which is less time consuming. For instance, my cousin has saved 40-minute-drive to college since he altered to online study last year.As a result, students would be given more time to pursue a wealth of knowledge, they also have more opportunities to perfectly finish the revisions, enhancing the personal improvement.\nOne remarkable advantage worth mentioning is the variety of information. When students go to school, it would be extremely annoying if they have to wait for the slow methodologies of the teachers in order to ensure the adequate knowledge for every member of the class. By contrast, when entering the course online, it is not difficult for intellectual teenagers to freely find out and cope with more complex information.To illustrate that, a recent research in Business Market conducted that about 56% of undergraduate students in Vietnam possess a more in-depth knowledge via online. As a consequence, being a well-rounded person might not be a challenge for young attendants anymore if there is an expansion in internet lessons.\nTake everything into consideration, only by adapting online courses can students achieve more opportunities to utilise all the potentials. In addition to that, it is not wrong to define this change as the positive developmentSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are expensive and way too dangerous to be tested on the road with an indivdual. In the article, it mention about how driveless cars would bring a fundamental change to our world. Despite the fact that it would change our world, the are consequences to these Google cars. For example, how can we insure that the Google car works precisely and that there wont be any mishaps. Although google car may have all the variety of special technologies in the car, is it safe to actally drive the car? What if something tragic happens and the car won't be able to protect the driver? Traffic law are wriiten the assumption that only safe car has human driver in control at al time. Even though the Google car may provide high technology system to the car, its not confirm that it is safe to drive on the road. Many states such as California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have led the country allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars. Even if the law chamges, new law would still be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. Who would be at fault if the technologies fails? It can be really dangerous and can cause serious death when your dealing with inexperience Google car. The developer of Google cars should reconsider that if their cars would actually help change the world or bring more accidents to our world? Google car may inspired many people with their new automation, if its not proven thats its safe, it does not matter whether it can change our world or not.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that teenagers face the dilemma of whether to work or continue their education after school. While there are some benefits to students getting a job straight, I believe that keep going to university or college is the best path to finding a satisfying career. In this essay, I will explain both sides in detail in the ensuing paragraphs.\n\nAdolescents getting a career directly after high school is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, a university degree is not necessary for some industries. In Taiwan, for example, there are a few managers for service professions who assume practical training is more important. In addition, these youth would gain more work experience, become more independent, and even start earning money sooner than other peers who are students.\n\nOn the other hand, I completely agree that it is more beneficial to young people for continuing their programs at university. The major reason is a degree can open the door to better employment prospects. For instance, most jobs, such as medical professions or engineering require academic qualifications, including specific knowledge and skills. Moreover, schools aim to teach teenagers moral values such as tolerance and sharing, which prepare them to be members of society. Therefore, once graduating from college or higher degree, they get better job opportunities, earn higher salaries, and also contribute positively to society. These indicate that higher education indeed brings some positive effects on people.\n\nIn conclusion, despite the fact that there are some advantages to going to work straight after school, it seems to me that getting a higher education is more likely to have better competitiveness in the job market.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many features setting affect cyclist Several main features include cars lading town aint really towns anymore water pump Both examples gave hope none gave relief The town first saw could give water run weakened I arrived first town This place might thriving little spot one time refer word war He saying town couldve given water enery appeared town Additionally biked across water pump well needed He tried pump water got success I pumped handle several minutes water wouldnt cool down A working water pump wouldve huge giving strength bike However misleadingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My thought of the Facial Action Coding System could be very useful in the in school or just in the future.\n\nI think that the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System, would be valuable in the classroom because the students could learn about the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom because in the future there will probably be a career that has to do with Facial Action Coding. They might be able to make one for the police that could decode a prisioner to see if they are lying or telling the truth. The Facial Action Coding System could maybe used in the art side of someones career.\n\nHigh School Consulers could use it if a student was going through a hard time in life, maybe if they have lost someone in there life. Maybe the act classes in a high school could use it to make scalptures in class or something like that.\n\nThere could be a lot of use for this kind of Facial Action Coding System technology in the future the Police, High Schools, Art Schools, or maybe just something for someone to do when there at home bored and want to try something new.\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or muscles is called an \"action unit.\" For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're suprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\n\nWhoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.\n\nSo that is what I think about the Facial Action Coding System, I think it would be very helpful in the classrooms and High Schools, or even maybe in police stations and Art Schools.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator, I am wriitting you this letter to argue about removing the Electoral college. Using the electoral college has caused some disrruption when its it comes to the votes. From the article \"The indefensible electoral college\" it says that \"under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors\". Who are the electors? well anyone can be an elector not holding public office. Can voters control whom their electors vote for? no. these are one of the reasons to remove the electoral college.\n\nAlso, the electoral college should be removed because of the 2000 voting fiasco that happened. from the article \"The indefensible electoral colllege\" it says it was the biggest election crisis in the century\". Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors wioll always defy the will of the people. If we the people vote for our choice to run this country their should not be any of these fiascos.\n\nNext, even presidents, AFL-CIO in their time have aggreed with this. they all want to remove the electoral college. according to the article a gallup pole in 2000, taken shortly after Algore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but won the presidency, over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. Electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take all system in each state, canidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\n\nFinally,the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. This system should be removed you might not know what elector you are votingfor or after that 2000 fiasco why would you still have have the electoral college.\n\nIn conclusion, these are my reasons why the electoral college should be removed. first, you wont know what elector you are voting for. Next, the 2000 fiasco. Finally, because it is unfair, outdated and irrational.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is overwhelming the world that we live in today. The new technological developments have been influencing every aspect of our daily lives. Electronics affect our social life, home life, work places, schools, and shopping areas because of what it can provide for us. Technology devices are being used in car manufacturing to be able to make driving for everyday people much easier.\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin is planning ahead, and making goals, to envision what the future driverless cars look like. Driverless cars are, I admit, are a major safety hazard if you dont use the right equipment, but they could be a great invention to help improve our planet. Brin claimes that he sees that these cars will be able to cut down the use of fuel and be able to offer more flexibility than what a bus has. In less than a decade, we have been able to create and start producing ideas that have never been possible in the history of mankind.\n\nSelf-driving cars has been thought about since the 1950's, when General Motors had tested a car to run on a special track. They used electrical cables, radio signals, magnets to make this concept function. If we are trying to make cars available for the public, then we need to get past the thought of special roads and start making them equipt for the conditions that we have to drive through today. Sensors are now plaing a big role in the making of driverless cars. We use them to see our surroundings, and make sure that the people around us are in not in danger of our driving. Cars detect the objects around us because of these sensors, and now can take control of our brakes and engines when the human driver isn't paying attention. If we continue to improve these sensors, then we will be able to have cars that are able to handle these situations on their own.\n\nPeople who oppose this concept are thinking that sensors can't always be as active, when driving, as what a human driver is. Technological problems are able to cause the sensors to be inable to do their job. This doesn't just create a safety hazard for the people inside of the car, but for any pedestrians that could come across this car. Also, how much would it cost to have a car with this many sensors in it? People who make an average amount of money won't be able to buy these cars if they're prices are tooo high. Sure, all of these are cautions when people are pushing a new and risky idea but it's all able to be solved. The car dealerships can lower their prices, they can run many tests on these cars to find new problems, and even the cars we drive today are having malfunctioning problems.\n\nTechnology devices are being used in car manufacturing to be ablet to make driving for eveyrday people much easier. Everyday we are inching closer and closer to having a new generation of technology, and driverless cars are apart of that new generation. We are now able to do bigger and better things to make life easier for the generations behind us. In a situation like this, the problems are able to be fixed. Instead of being afraid of what could happen, we should be taking steps forward to see what the future can provide for us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the years progress, so does the technology. With each passing moment, there is another achievement being made that will improve people's lifestyle. One in particular is the improvement of cars. Manufacturers have now started to create driverless cars that do not need to be controlled by a driver. However, achieving this goal is harder than it seems, with there being complications and people who disagree with the idea. In my opinion, I think that this idea will benefit the world for all that this car provides.\n\nDriverless cars would be beneficial to people, because it would limit the number of car crashes that occur, because of human error. The company, Google, was one of the first to have independently driven cars. They have had them since 2009, and since then, they have had a limited number of crashes. However, the company has admitted that the cars requires the help of the driver sometimes when it comes upon a road block or construction. This is a small problem that can be easily fixed. It will take some time, but in the end it will be worth it.\n\nI believe that driverless cars will provide positive aspects to people. It would limit the number of crashes that occur due to us humans. Many accidents that happen are a result of reckless driving. Texting while driving is an example of that. Today, cell phones are used constantly. They are used for both communication and research. However, we the people abuse the right of cell phones by using them while we are driving. I for one, disapprove when someone is texting while driving. Whatever text that they recieve or need to send, is not worth the risk of getting in a crash that result in an injury, or worse, cost them their life.\n\nAs there are those who look on this idea with awe, there are also those who believe that it needs to not happen. Some individuals worry what were to happen if the driverless car's technology failed and there was nothing that the driver could do about it. They also worry about the new traffic laws and issurance liabilities that await with thsi upgraded car. I think that these opinions are right and correct, but I also think that they need to look at how many positive things this car brings. Also, I think that those who disapprove of the idea need to give it time. They can not just expect that manufacturers will get it right the first time. No. Manufacturing companies are going to be working long until they get the results that they need. They will continue to work until the car is completely sucessful.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that driverless cars obtain positive aspects toward the world and towards people. it would limit the casualities of car acciedents that occur daily. They woud also help push th ehuman race and technology into a new era. Although there are those who would disagree on this new improvement of cars, there are also those who look at this with excitement. Even thoughit would take time until the car is truly successful and is able to be purchased, it would be a major advancement for those in the car manufacturing business.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Owning a vehicle or lisence is not what it used to be. Today, people all across the globe have given up driving for the many benefits that come along with alternative methods of transportation. These methods can reduce pollution, be cost effective, and even improve people's well being and happiness.\n\nFirst of all, there is a surprising amount of options if you don't want to drive a car.\n\nPublic transportation such as trains and buses exist in most major cities, especially in America and Europe. San Francisco is a busy city with many young residents, and many of these residents are not interested in getting their liscenses. \". . . They organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends.\" Because so many options exists, many people don't feel the need to own a car anymore. Similarily, some cities and towns have been made specifically to be navigated by foot, like Vauban Germany. Towns like Vauban are tailored to fit its resident's needs in everyway. \". . . In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main streer, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\" In Vauban, necessities are convieniently placed so that the town's inhabitents may acsess them with ease, rather than driving around the town.\n\nHowever, alternative transportation methods are not the only reason to give up your car. By not driving a car, air pollution can be decreased drastically. In Paris, France's largest city and international destination, driving was temporarily illegal because of heavy smog in the city. \". . . Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog.\" It did not take very long for traffic and smog to clear up once the ban was put in place, and the famous city began to look like itself once again.\n\nPeople are also happier when they do not drive cars. ' \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" sais Heidrun Walter.'SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author, Nick D'Alto, shows us that this technology that allows it to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. By using example of the human face muscles and Mona Lisa as an example, allows us to get into debt about our facial expression and what they give out to other people.\n\nThe use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of student in a classroom is valuable because it will be able to read the muscles in the face that are being used in the expression we are doing. \" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major musces in the model must move like human musces.\"\n\nBy creating a 3-D model of the face it allows it to have an exact replication of the face and muscles being used; therefore it will be able to show how people are really feeling. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, and, disgust, fear and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" By classifying every emotion with the musces allows the technology to get an an acurrate feeling of the person.\n\nThe use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of a studemt in a classroom is valuable because in the passage it gives examples of the exact muscle and emotion that correlate with each other. \" For eample, your fronttalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your arbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In the real smile, the zygomtic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of you mouth. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different musle, the risorius.\" By using the muscles in the face, this allows us to see an exact repredention of the emotions the person is feeling and will help kids in the classrooms.\n\nThe use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of a studemt in a classroom is valuable because it will allow the student to feel more comfortable in their learning enviroment and lern at their own pace. \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" By having this technology it will allow students to be more engaged in the learning and be able to undestand better the subject.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows Saeng adapting change going winter hibiscus helped Failing driving test Saeng figures give luck takes Also hibiscus survive works towards goal develop Once flower blooms symbolize strength helping Saeng come obstacle Her mother said flower pretty survive She means great Vietnam Saeng stay strongSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays many people are trying to discover the past of their house. There might be a lot of reasons to do this. I suppose, there are two reasons which have a significant role in this. One is curiosity and the other is the antique value of the house and the durability of the house. They can learn through the internet or from their elder neighbours. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, people can search the past of their living space out of curiosity. An old house typically looks different from a new house. Consequently, people may get curious to learn about their houses. They might want to know more about the story behind the construction of the building. Such as, how was it looked before, what kinds of people used to live there, and who was the architect of the residence! Moreover, some may try to connect themselves through the archaeology of the building. Thus, people may get interested to explore more about their living space out of mere interest.\r\n\r\nSecondly, some people may try to find out the history of their house due to safety concerns. They try to be assured whether the house is safe for living in or not. In other words, the time of making a house may help them to understand when they might have to renovate the residence. Furthermore, old buildings have antique value. For example, the media industry rents this kind of house for movies or TVCs at a high price. Thereby, things like safety concerns or antique value could be another reason for people to get interested in the past of their mansion.\r\n\r\nThere are many ways one can research their apartment or building. For instance, the internet and the elderly neighbours are the best sources to research the past of the building. In recent years, the internet has the data of old houses. Hence, one can collect information online. Additionally, elderly neighbours could play a significant role in this regard. They might have much detailed information which cannot be found on the web. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, knowing the history of their own building makes people feel confident and special about their house. If people know about the time when it was built they can take the proper cautious approach. They can talk to local people and use internet platforms concerning facts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was working when his friend Don Reist said if he wanted to go europe on a cattle boat. Luke said it was an opportunity of a lifetime. So he didnt give up the chance to go with him. The reasons you should go is that you can see new places that you have most likely never seen before or have never visited before. You will have an experience of how to take care horses,young cows,and mules that would be shipped from place to place.\n\nBut along the way you'll find out what it feels like to take care these animals like as if you were on a farm because these are animals that would be on a farm. Besides you could try new food that you could have never tried in your life. You could have a chance to meet new people. Also while in that place you could experience what their culture is and also what they do in that culture. The only places you would go to though would be italy,china,new orleans,and greece.\n\nSo on your way these are the places you could explore and visit for a while. So these are the reasons I think you should take the chance to become a seagoing cowboy if you ever got the opportunity to become one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To Whom it May Concern:\n\nThe Electoral College is the cause of many political disagreements and problems whenever mentioned. Although established in the constitution, it is seen as undemocratic by many. The Electoral College takes away the ability of citizens to vote for their president; instead they are voting for Electors, not always loyal to the canidate. As a result, I believe the Electoral College should only be used in instances of a tie between two canidates.\n\nEach presidential canidate has a group of Electors, which will be part of the Electoral College process after the popular vote is taken. The Electoral College proccess consists of the selection of electors, the meeting in which the vote for both President and Vice President occurs, and then the votes are counted by Congress. (Office of the Federal Register)¹ When the popular vote occurs, and the canidates are selected, the votes are tallied, and then the electors of the two canidates attend the meeting, and then the final decision for President is made. This is viewed as undemocratic, because there have been instances where the Electoral College dissagrees with the popular vote. Such as the case of Al Gore in 2000, who won the popular vote, and then lost the Electoral vote and therefore his presidency.(Bradford Plumer)² This caused over 60 percent of voters, to wish for a direct election opposed to the electoral proccess, according to a Gallup poll, also occuring in 2000. (Bradford Plumer)²\n\nAnotherr issue within the electoral college, is the electors themselves. While they may claim to be loyal to their canidate, loyalties can be bribed, changed, or electors may even be replaced with only a certain party (Republican or Democratic). Which occured in Louisiana in 1960. The segregationists almost replaced Democratic electors, with ones who would instead oppose Kennedy, as a sabotage attempt at Kennedy's Presidency.(Bradford Plumer)² There have also been cases in which the loyalty of the elector was switched, and the citizens were seemingly forgotten at the electoral college. While there are over millions of people residing in the United States, there are only 538 Electors, and the fate of our country is put in Electors who can't be trusted.\n\nOver 60 percent of Americans oppose the Electoral college, but there are still some which still believe in the compromise established by our founding fathers. The Electoral College provides a smaller chance of election ties, and an equal vote from each state. While a tie is possible in the popular voting system, it is also possible in the Electoral College, with 538 electors, 269 votes from each side can cause a huge dissagreement within our Legislative System, which could be avoided by using only the popular vote. When politicians and presidential canidates are looking for votes, they most commonly travel to the larger states, because of the larger population. A larger population provides an even larger chance of obtaining voters. But, this leaves the small states with no attention from canidates, and a smaller population weakens the states chance of the canidate they desire. Every vote counts for a canidate,5,559 voters from Ohio, and 3,687 from Hawaii stopped a tie by voting. (Bradford Plumer)² Even the small states contribute in a presidential elections, their votes are just as big as ours, even if their states ae small.\n\nThe founding fathers formed the Electoral College as a compromise, and hundreds of years later, I believe it is time for a compromise once again. The popular vote, should become the deciding vote for who is elected as President, Vice President, etc. With this, the chance of a tie comes, so i propose that the Electoral College remain only for the purpose of a tie in the popular vote, or if state legislature has reason to believe this canidate is not the best for America.\n\n¹Excerpt from \"What is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register,from www. archives. gov/federal-register/electoral-college/about. html. In the public domain\n\n²Excerpt from \" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses are wrong\" from Mother Jones by Bradford Plumer. Copyright © 2004 by Mother Jones and the Foundation for National Progress. All Rights Reserved. Permission Pending.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that it is preferable for adolescents to participate in volunteer work in their spare time. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement. Since it has a clear positive impact on themselves and society. This short essay focuses on why should adults volunteer during their break time. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, young adults should be involved in social activities without getting paid in their spare time, since it enhances their self-confidence. To elaborate more, teenagers will be exposed to various new things. Therefore, a piece of new knowledge will be gained. Accordingly, they will develop their self-confidence in doing similar activities, in addition, adolescents will have the motive to try different works without having the fear of making mistakes. Considering myself, I used to have a fear of speaking publicly. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, I overcome this dilemma by being involved in cleaning my village. Luckily for me, I was chosen to be the leader of a group of ten people. Therefore, I was forced to chat with them. Consequently, I found it not a big deal to be afraid of. Therefore, now I can speak in front of others. \r\n\r\nThe second reason is that it enables teenagers to be engaged with others. To illustrate more, by being exposed to different works adults will meet one another. Therefore, it creates a strong relationship with them, in addition, to with the whole society. To put it another way, today’s adults are isolated from one another. Considering the area where I live, most of them do not know the names of the individuals who live next to their doors. Furthermore, everyone lives alone. However, it has a negative effect on every individual. Since if help is needed no one would help one another due to the lack of relation. Nonetheless, by being in social activities everyone will help each other. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is claimed that adolescents should be exposed to social activities as it has many benefits for them, as well as, for the whole society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author decides end story paragraph show many things First author uses ending paragraph show optimism The whole story sad ending shows hope In beginning says loss deep NUM end says I take test again NUM shows attitude changes cynical hopeful Another reason story ended paragraph show Saeng accepting When story says geese almost familiar now NUM demonstrates even though Saeng sad leave home adapting quite well Therefore author ends story inspiring paragraph show change betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local I think computers benefit society greaty Most today could happen without computers The biggest use computers comunication If re buisnoss trip need send letter company send emil much less expensive paying piece The experts concerns people nt spending enough time family friends point Many people cominucate family friends computers I would hardely yet talk cousin I could nt go facebook I would wait another month find cousin engaged I nt follow If concern face face contact computer cure video messaging site called ooVoo Another way computers allow comunication shareing information Many facts needed school spread hundreds books Over I ve done research project able get facts crime stats Many times researching animal take online modern books note good website travel information Without simple reasearch project could take months Some scientists think people spending much time computer This right wrong Sitting computer watching youtube hours nessasarily best thing However also computer The designed game fun getting excersize Computers like chocolate They good much bad thingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If people limited the use of cars the earth would be able to have enough time to clean its atmosphere, but the only downside to this is that in cities buildings are farther away then they are like in passage 1 where as everything is in walking distance, but in cities that are meant for walking to different locations would cause a major problem with older adults. I do see this happening in small towns but cities would be more difficult to travel to unless they rebuilt everything within walking distance.\n\nNow if America's citizens are driving less each year then let it happen and in a few years come back to the data that is presented in passage 4. So basically let it all happen on its own and not have to force it like Paris has done with giving out fines for whoever is driving a car with odd numbered license plates on mondays and even on tuesdays. I higSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I think computer use good teach people handeye coordination Also people ability learn different states countries I ask people would able interact family friends different towns Those reasons I think computers good use The first reason I think people use computers teach people handeye coordination People know stay focussed eyes also know also use hands time To stay focussed eyes people would wear glasses light Also typing wont keep looking time When people coordinate hands computer know different thats computers good My second reason computers good people ability learn different states countries They also see nice bad countries states look Also able read different cultures religions In states also read wonderful state That s computers good use My final reason use computers good people interact family friends online There lot different websites go search one family members friends You talk Also talk even different state You guys talk lot different things For example family life even miss Thats computers good Those reasons computers good Not teach handeye coordination family friends different states But also play lot different games also type notepad Also stuck math problem use calculator That s people use computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays the climate change is a problem with many nation but some people believe that we dont need find the method to resolve this problem . i would agree that\n\nThere are several advantages of we find these way to resolve climate change. Firstly we should inprove and protect sources of green energy and we is also plant a wide range of trees this make prevent soil erosion and helps these animals have clean food source. Secondly. We can try to limit influences to climate change such as reduce motorbikes using gasoline and buying products which are good for environment. This will them prevent climate change.\n\nthere are some disadvantages of we don’t should solve the clmiate change. Firstly. When we don’t impact on climate change this make them have a bad life. For example, it will impact on life on earth Climate change increases natural disasters, storms, floods, droughts, earthquakes, tsunamis. Earthquakes and floods tend to increase and the climate change can cause flooding or forest fire that can demolish the habitat wild animals. finally climate change will cause agricultural led to soil erosion and The crops are heavily damaged this made famers unable to grow crops and it causes starvation\n\nin conclusion, despite the described advantages of humans can prevent climate change, I suppose that there are also a bit benefits when people find method to resolve this problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper kid There nt computers electronics except telephone The computer advanced helps people many different ways handeye cordination learning able talk online These things benefit society prove advancement technology The computer teaches handeye cordination people nt even realize typing whether typing email essay hands working helping The handeye cordination people learn computer used sports years old tennis player said I used go computer everyday play tennis later eventually computer helped use favorite sport Handeye cordination useful many things surveyed people people say handeye cordination important still everyday activities computers help improve Typing comonly used sending emails fast fun let comunicate When talking computer many new ways popular fast email welcoms aim facebook many nice able talk friends family online options expensive For example many live sister close lives They ca nt talk lot neither calling plans allow call without charging hundreds money They also ca nt fly use plane tickets expensive days Also economy nt great could nt stay intouch webcams come Now see almost every week Many said I considering flying webcams email useful save us lot money People argue sent letters ca nt send baby boys first steps video taped youtube video really cute Also meet new people online ve seen normally stay touch stay much closer Even though computers great fun working learning much easier online When online everything learned amazing whether means earthquake Being able keep track everything one computer amazing teacher says CAPS trying make things electronic protect planet use nt waste paper trees true homework graders online whether look equation photosynthesis find year died online help environment important able computers schools gives chances kids learn things faster like graders math class online hey math gives people information coming people Online read scientists expierement paparatzi s take new boyfriend The computer changed society lot better Now computers part everyday lives people benefit With better handeye cordination able talk friends able learn computer benefits societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is worth studying even with its dangers. Venus has life like stuff like us. Venus could also use ti have life on it.\n\nOur twin planet also known as venus is almost the same size and density. Sometimes its the closes to earth also. Mars orbits around the sun at a differnt sppedd then Earth and Venus. Earth and Venus seems like they go around the sun about the same\n\nspeed.\n\n97 perecent of Venus is covered in dixiode. They also have rain clouds that rained sulfuric acid. On Venus it can get as hot as 800 degress Fahrenheit. Venus pressure is also 80 times greater than it is here on earth. Which can crush a person if they go to venus.If asternots wants to vist Venus then they'll have to stay above the ground becuase pressure is around sea levels and it gets as hot as 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nVenus has a surface of ricky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys valleys, mountainsm abd craters. Just like earth they also have water. Venus could be the nearist option for a planetary vist.\n\nVenus could have life on it with the water and the surface. Maybe when the dixode goes away and the extreme heat fades away or scientist find away to put people on then maybe Venus could have people on it soon.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that there is a growing number of young individuals leaving school who are unable to find jobs after graduation. This essay will elaborate on the effects including the inability to find suitable candidates for businesses and the financial burden on unemployed people, and suggest some viable solutions consisting of providing education and training programs and learning skills matching.\r\n\r\nThere are two primary impacts caused by the high unemployment rate in young people after graduation. Chief of these is that businesses are incapable of finding suitable candidates for their positions. Given the fact that there are millions of young individuals graduating and ready for work who lack vital skills that employers need; thereby, a serious decline in young employees in companies is indispensable. Consequently, Older employees will be overloaded when they need to cover more work, leading to a tremendous influence on labour productivity and a reduction of revenue. Furthermore, this phenomenon also causes financial concerns in unemployed individuals. They are unable to afford basic needs such as accommodation and utility bills which make them become a burden to their family due to their dependence on them. \r\n\r\nFortunately, several measures can be taken to alleviate this problem. The first solution would be providing education and training programs. Throughout these programs, young individuals are able to learn crucial skills including employability skills, job hunting, interviewing, entrepreneurship, and vocational education. After being trained and educated by bringing initiatives and extracurricular instruction, young people can specialize in their skills which are essential for their career prospects. The second measure would be training skills matching. The private sector, educators and governments need to start collaborating to determine what knowledge young individuals should be taught in their study programs. Given the fact that businesses are suffering from a skills mismatch; thereby, they need to promote appropriate education and skill-building for young people from an early age. As a result, after young individuals graduate, they are able to find their rewarding work, which helps them reach their maximum potential.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is clear that there are numerous influences caused by an immense percentage of unemployment including finding suitable applicants for businesses and financial difficulty for unemployed individuals. I believe that steps consisting of providing education and training programs as well as learning skills matching need to be taken to tackle this problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay will include the reasons why people need to challenge exploring Venus. The text states that it will be good to meet the very edges of imagination and invoation to find out if Venus is really real. The author also says that people should be brave to explore on pass the earth and be more open to it.\n\nVenus would be dangerous to explore, because of it 97% carbon dioxcide. They say that the tempperatures average above 800 degrees on Venus. The pressure is 90 times greater tha what we experience on our planet earth. NASA states that they want to send our human kind to study the planet Venus.\n\nThere will be like 30 blimp-like vehicles hovering around the planet Venus. The tempertureswill still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahernheit. NASA is working on other approches right now to explore Venus. These are some of the ways that they are going to try and learn moe about Venus and other planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that Lukes point of viewIf you were going to ask someone to do it then you would it might change your life. In the article is that he his a little nervous that he will be going on a ship for a long time. And he wanted to got out on sea and see what it was like.\n\nHe said that it will not be good that if he gets injured then you will have to stop working and that is bad! He said that it was a little bit bad when you hurt your self and you can't work anymore.\n\nHe said in the passage that he said that he was thankful that the metal rail saved him from going overboard. He said that was in the text was that there was more things to do like playing baseball. soccer. volleyball,and those other sports too. That is what i think that the point of view for luke is.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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