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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries books short long everything Their good bad books depends opinion reader There reason someone offended book library removed shelf The books shelf library everyone read one removed someone else missing chance experience reading book Would food destroyed nt taste good No would nt get So d someone right remove book offended nt right views something opinion nothing Your views lives street removing book pushing views somone else In conclusion books question could good bad eyes next person read Pushy people nt normally liked others Books meant read interpreted reader That one person right take shelfSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I were in this sigtuation I would defenitly use the claim that aleans are not real in my essay. One example I would use would be to ask him(her) how many natural strange rock formations are their on earth. The only possibal answer would be more than he or her could count. That simpley prooves my point evan more.\n\nOne other thing that I would say would be \"if aliens made it... why dont they come back to take care of it. If you study earths history you would find that most if not all ancient or religious artifact is protected. If this happened on earth and supposed we do think aliens are real and sufisticsted then why wouldent they go by the same practice. The third point that I would make would be if, they could create a rock form of that size would suggest thst they are revolutionized and would have large civilazations. Yet we have found no proof of any alien cicies or districts.\n\nso in conclusion I would all in all say that my pionts are more than convincing and that he should be the wiser by now. And if he isnt... Too bad for him.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author gives the reader basic insight on what Venus is, its history, why scientists are trying to explore it, and the challenges scientists have faced.\n\nOverall it is a very informative article and the point of it was to convince the reader that despite all of the struggles there is that comes with exploring Venus, that it is worth exploring anyway.\n\nThough it is an admirable arguement, it is simply not supported throughout this type of article.\n\nIn the article, the author does not support his or her argument well because of his or her informative over-kill, lack of analysis, and lack of data in his or her favor.\n\nTo begin, the author gives us too many facts that are simply just an introduction. In paragraph three, the whole paragraph is stating facts about Venus and its atmosphere.\n\nFor example the author states that, \"...atmospheric pressure is 90 times great than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThis does resonate with the arguement considering that it is about how Venus should be explored despite the challenges.\n\nThe real problem with this example is that this is placed in the third paragraph and everything before it was also facts.\n\nThe author spent three paragraphs talking about the weather of Venus instead of analyzing how it should be disregared and we should explore it for better reasons. Additionally, the author gives facts that have nothing to do with the arguement provided.\n\nIn the second paragraph, the author states that, \"...sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\"\n\nThis simply has nothing to do with the supposed topic.\n\nNot only is there too many facts, but these facts have nothing to do with the topic and the author seems to -in fact- trail off a bit.\n\nMultiple times.\n\nAdditionally, the author seems to provide no analysis towards the plethera of information.\n\nFor example, the first true analysis is seen is in paragraph five when he or she states, \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nBy the time someone is writing to paragraph five, there should already be an extreme of amount of noticable analysis before that.\n\nThe basic structure of any arguement would be to state a fact, and give a well thought-out analysis about that fact and how it applies to one's topic.\n\nThe noticable structure here, would be an overwhelming amount of facts, and then slight analysis by assuming that the evidence speaks for itself.\n\nWhen you have that much information thrown at the reader at once, the evidence really doesn't speak for itself.\n\nThat's where the supposed analysis comes in.\n\nThe analysis is supposed to connect the dots for the reader and explain how it applies.\n\nIt seems that is lacking here.\n\nFinally, the author seems to be arguing against themselves with the type of evidence that is being presented.\n\nThroughout the whole article the author seems to be only stating the things wrong with this idea.\n\nFor example in paragraph two, the author states that, \"...no spacecraft survived the landing for than a few hours.\"\n\nThen backed that up with no analysis on how that should be worth the risk so scientists can can continue exploring.\n\nThis is a problem because that is the point of the article: that despite all the risks, scientists should perservere. That's is not what followed that unsettling fact, though.\n\nAll that followed was more facts.\n\nAdditionally in paragraph six, the author finally states a good fact on how exploration can continue, but then follow it with analysis that once again goes against the arguement.\n\nFor example, after talking about the solution NASA has made to this problem, the author follow it with, \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can only provide limited insight...\"\n\nThis was a poor choice of support because the author is basically going against his or her idea, without reconciling it.\n\nIn conclusion, the author makes it unclear which side he or she is trying to prove.\n\nIt is a very well-written article, but only for informational purposes.\n\nIf one it looking for a well-supported idea on how despite all the risks, science should continue, this article is not the place to look.\n\nIf anything, it seems that the author is arguing against continuing to explore Venus-considering all the facts and analysis that went against the idea.\n\nOnce again, this is a well written informative article, not an arguable one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story great motivation older man still healthy feel like teenager It showed much effort put goal survive Forty miles peddled forty miles drink water cyclist interesting story ginaupupSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people argue that the younger generation should volunteer for free in their spare time, which would be beneficial for them and society as a whole. Personally, I completely agree with this view as described in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, people who participate in community activities have more opportunities to meet a lot of people from different regions and backgrounds. They can see all aspects of life through which they will learn how to communicate with different people, have compassion for each other, and how to work in a group. Besides that, participating in volunteer activities is the perfect time for children to develop skills such as time management, communication, and problem solving, which are strong points for them to compete with other candidates when looking for future work.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it also brings a lot of benefits to the community. Firstly, the local government does not need to spend the budget to hire people to do community work. They may spend those funds on health or education investments. Secondly, young people's participation in volunteering helps reduce the number of crimes and robberies in the country. For example, taking part in community activities helps them raise awareness and stay away from illegal activities and the community will get quality citizens.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think parents should encourage their teens to take part in the activities of serving the community in their free time. because it has a great advantage both for society and for adolescents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus has been in our solar system's life for trillions of years now. Since the beginning of time humans have always looked up to to the sky with wonder and hope. Hope that one day we'd be able to take a better peek past our large atmosphere. One day we did finally achieve this by using spaceships and sateltes. Even though we achieved this, like many humans we'd still want more. There's always more to see out there in vast open space.\n\nFast forward many years later to present time. We've discovered most of the planets near our planet, Earth. Technology has even came so far to let us see things thousands upon thousands of miles past Earth. Even letting us have a glymps into other solar systems, but people still want more. It's always a good thing to want to learn more than you already know. One of the major things many people want to know are what planets we might be able to call our next home. The two major planets being Venus and Mars. The author of the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" breaks down this topic very well.\n\nThe authors claim within this article is that how there's a lot of dangers that come with Venus, but it's still worth studying and examining. The author states, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features that are analogous to those on Earth.\n\nThe authors claim is a claim that many could probably pick sides with. The author constructs some good points and informs the reader about Venus's past while doing so. He even uses opinoins from other sources than his own words to back up his claim, these opinions/ideas coming from The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA). The author of the article states, \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one partiocularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venujs would allow scientists to float above the fray. . .NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbibe have been tested in chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and has lasted for three weeks in such conditions\". This text shows how other people, even NASA may feel about the idea of traveling to Venus.\n\nThe author of this article ends the article very well. He finishes it off with encouragement to the exploration to other planets near us and how we should keep pushing thru the dangers that may lie ahead. The text states, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". This sums up the essential idea being this essay. People more than likely can agree with his statements, although on the other hand many people may not.\n\nTraveling to other planets may have its risks with it, but its always worth a shot. Learning more about our other planets like Venus can help us evolve as humans and help revolutionize the ideas behind space and the planets in space.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At beginning ride cyclist feeling good strong day well journey beginning The sun begins beat cyclist remains upbeat still feeling good barely noticing heat When arrives old rusty water pump feels disappointed tastes liquid resembles battery acid The terrain begins feel like hill makes struggle even worse The cyclist drinking water becoming tired He comesto rough road says sometimes life feel cruel lets reader know feeling negative affects presumed nice bike ride snake blocks path becomes dehydrated The cyclist feels refreshment relief sign fish camp thirst replenished takes satisfying gulp water restroom The water feature setting refreshes cyclist hot sun rough terrain unknown area features make cyclist feel lost tiredSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author spports the idea of the challenge of exploring Venus pretty well.\n\nThe author gives us many facts about Venus like the average temperature, atmospheric pressure, and the blankets of carbon dioxide.\n\nThe author explains how we havent had a spacecarft survive a landing on Venus this makes it very difficult to explor Venus if we cant even get a unmanned sapcecraft there. With an atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and average temperatures at 800 degrees. And an atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes makes it hard to land on its surface.\n\ni would say the author did a pretty well job just off the frist 4 paragraphs giving all this imformation and explaining how hard it is to explor Venus uses facts.\n\nUses NASA to explain what we would have to do as humans to be on this planet and explor it it pretty difficult if you ask me .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Poverty remains a pressing issue in most developing countries, and one proposed solution is a provision of up to six years of free education, aiming to equip individuals with essential literacy and numeracy skills. In my opinion, I agree with this approach.\r\n\r\nWhile free education is a crucial step towards poverty reduction, it is not a standalone solution. Equally essential are adequate infrastructure, trained teachers, and quality educational resources. Merely providing free education without ensuring its quality may result in a system that fails to deliver the desired outcomes. Therefore, governments could focus on holistic educational reforms, including teacher training programs, school infrastructure development, and curriculum enhancements, to maximize the impact of free education initiatives. For example, in China, alongside the introduction of free education policies, the government invested in teacher training programs and improved school infrastructure, leading to enhanced learning outcomes and noticeably higher student retention rates.\r\n\r\nHowever, free education itself can significantly increase access to schooling, particularly for marginalized communities and children from low-income backgrounds. Financial barriers often prevent children from attending school, perpetuating the cycle of poverty. By eliminating tuition fees at young ages, developing countries can remove one of the major obstacles to education and ensure that all children have the opportunity to learn. For instance, in India, the implementation of free education policies has led to a rise in school enrollment rates among girls from disadvantaged communities, encouraging them to escape unfair conditions and pursue better futures through improved employability. This inclusivity in education can help bridge social and economic gaps, fostering a more equitable society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly agree that offering up to six years of free education can be a powerful tool for overcoming poverty in developing countries. By prioritizing education and implementing necessary reforms, developing nations can better empower their citizens and reduce poverty levels in the long-term.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patientce I patient I want go wisconsic Iwas patient way driving I possent I fishing complaining boring I wasnt sleep ground The whole camping trip I patient Story begins took hours In car tv I wolened I looked outside say moose I screamed moose rooms boyfriend mike stoped backed first time saw moose Then got set tent went fishing I patient fishing bite wom I patient I got fish day Then came back sleep groind There bumps rocks nt complain thak comping The next day way back I could nt fina tv nt drink I go bathroom A sign said station exit I patient went bathroom get waterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why are there no driverless cars on the roads when it is the 21st century? What kind of future will mankind have if we do not have self-driving cars in the 21st cantury? Now, imagine a world where cars drive themselves. Imagine if you did not have to imagine that. Driverless cars can be a reality. Right now driverless cars are not entirely driverless but manufacturers are working hard to make these cars safer and easier to use. If we had driverless cars on the roads, we could get more work done, there would be less accidents, and we would not have trouble driving to our desired location.\n\nAn average person in America spends much of their life in a car. People have places to go and work to do. People are so eager to get things done faster that they will break the law to be on their phone and drive. If they have to spend half their time driving to locations, they will achieve less than they actually can. What if humans could get their work done as they are driving? They will no longer have to think of their phone as a distraction from driving and get things done. That is the power of driverless cars. If a person has a 45 minute drive, they can get 45 minutes worth of work done during the drive. Instead of wasting 45 minutes of their life driving, they can do something useful that will affect their life in a positive direction.\n\nAccidents are caused by the driver's mistakes. People are emotional creatures. They get stressed, angry, and sad so very easily. It is hard to focus on driving when all those emotions are in a person's head. A driverless car do not have emotions. It can focus all the time. It's main job is to keep the driver safe at all times. If the car malfunctions, the driver can take over, but a car cannot take over if the driver malfunctions unless it is a driverless car. The car also has many safety features that warns the driver. GM manufacturers have developed a vibrating driver's seat. The chair will vibrate anytime the car is about to run in to an object.\n\n20 years ago, there were no such things as a GPS or a phone that could tell a person how to get to their destination. Even now their are people out there who do not know how to use electronics to their advantage. For example, grand parents do not easily learn how to use their phones to their advantage. They might get lost easily, but if they drove driverless cars that would not be a problem because the car would drive itself. Before, manufacturers were having trouble making a driverless car because they did not have the right materials. Radar for example used to cost two hundred million dollars. Now it's something you can easily buy at Radio Shack.\n\nThere are many negatives to a driverless car but the postives outweigh the negatives. People are still doubting that a driverless car is not safe but that is why manufacturers are working to fix that problem before they put them on the roads.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You say board fast Most people cause get woods theres nothing except watch waist make one noise see nothing whole hunt Hunting patients great reward doe buck whatever youre hunting rite sight There sometimes I impatient theres times I patient I younger I important I would got walk around I got older I got patient like I got first deer eight point Hunting take patients I like funSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When Designing dock dirigibles top empire state Building oBstacles faced One proBlem couldent drop mooring mast top empire state Building Because frane Building So Because proBlem The come way modifey frame Building Building could put added stress mooring mast Another problem faced dangerous I deemed dangerous Because dirigibles filled Hydrogen extremely flammable couldent happend Hindenburg happen floors aBove city streets crowded people So Were oBsticals faced building mooring mast top empire state BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author talks about the dangers of exploring Venus, he also talks about much safer ways to explore the planet.\n\nParagraph 2 says,\" These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus\" This means that being able to determine where the spaceship is headed would be quite difficult considering the act that it may take a while to get there and the chances of Venus moving are pretty high.\n\nLastly the paragraph also states,\" Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survuved the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author says that Venus is the closest planet to being the most Earth-like because of its familir features, for example, Venus has valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn Paragraph 3, it says not only are there \"clouds of highly corrosive sufuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\" but there's a thick atmosphere of about 97 % carbon dioxide \"blankets\" Venus. Paragraph 3 also states,\"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" At last, the passage states,\" also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\"\n\nAll of this information is important to have in mind if NASA were to suggest we leave planet Earth to go to Venus for a planetary visit just so we know what to expect and be aware of the precautions we should take.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When curcling around mars the aircraft had taken pictures with they had captured a face on mars. this got back to the people wich made them belive that there was some kind of alien or life form on Mars.When having more photos the scientist had noticed that the face came from clounds which had made it look like a face,but while taking more photos the face was actually rocks in mars.In the passage it states the face had came a pop icon, it was in 'Hollywood films', it was even in 'haunted grocery stores' the face was used for 25 years.The face was also used to attract attention to Mars and which it did.\n\nAfter reviewing some more photos the monumit was not an alien artifact after all.The face looked like Egyptain pharaoh because of the shadows. On earth tit was common sighting in the American West,also over the years the face was starting to fade so sayin gif it was an alien artifact the face would have not disapear or start to fade away and they could oly see it when it was very sunny on Mars or when it was very cloudy.\n\nTo make sure they sent Mars Global Surveyor to take more photos and the photos came out ten times better so they could see the photo. Also there is a 'lave dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars', and revealing that there was mo alien momunment after all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advances of limiting car usage is not only helping the communtity but also yourself. In Vauban, Germany 70 percent of their families do not own cars, and 57 percent saold a car to live here. people find it better to walk to places rather than having to use a vehicle. \"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation America. The Environmental Protecton Agency is promothing \"car reduced\" communties. Delivery companies complained of lost revenus, while exceptions were made for plug-in cars. it was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. Two other Columbian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. In parks and sports centers their pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth, sidewalks. With all these changes, poeple who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit. New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyricketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, proposed partnering with the telecommunities industry to create cities in which \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources lower emissions and improve safety.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a number of corners in the world, there is a growing interest in researching the historical background of the appartments occupied by nation. This essay will consider possible causes of this interest and decide on how people can accomplish this goal.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, knowledge about the history of the building contains much valuable information such as the date of construction and which materials were used. These facts contribute to safety of the building and its financial and historical value. For instance, if residents know that the house they live in is obsolete or made of breakable wood, it is much easier for them to determine what actions and renovations should be undertaken in order not to let the building be destroyed. Moreover, knowing what historical events took place in a specific building or what architect designed a facade might rise the building's costs significantly and make it unique. Taking Almaty, my hometown, as an example, there are expensive appartments in the city centre which have faced a lot of important historical revolutions and were constructed in an outstanding way attracting local celebrities.\r\n\r\nWhile doing research on the history of the accommodation can have numerous advantages, it is challenging to obtain precise data because the only way to do it by examinating official documents from the local authorities. The problem is that people must prove that they live in the certain building in order to find out about its history. For example, in my country, this issue is common because the access for information about the living areas is limited and can be granted to dwellers only, However, it is still feasible to determine the decade when the house was built judging by its design because this feature changes every time.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the rising interest on the house's background is reasonable due to safety concerns and the desire to establish the house's worth. I would recommend to conduct research based on documents issued by reliable sources because it's the most accurate data.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think a computer can pick up your emotions? Day after day many students around the world enjoy school, but their is also a huge percentage of students who don't enjoy school but they are forced to go. I myself like the envirorment around me while im at school, but others feel like school is a dark scary place due to bullying, lack of concentration, tiredness, etc.\n\nSubjects such as math, and science a good portion of it is based on computers. Not everyone around are visual learners more so easier to learn from a book or an article. So when tasks like these come up, people tend to stress alot and get panic attacks. That usually ruins someone's day and makes then upset at the instructor who assisgned the work but they have to act normal and do the assignment like everyone else because there is a possiblity of consequences if they don't do it. So when Engineers or Doctors say a computer can detect your mood it's seems like a bad idea because students keep things and emotions to themselves while at school and the input the computer giives about the students emotion can be false. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions--happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness\". 4/6 of those emotions are what kids feel at school.\n\nIn conclusion the technology system we have these days are insane. It definately has changed the game if you think about it. Many Scientists have many plans for the future and it's gonna make a big impact on the world and change many lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless cars seem like a pretty cool idea. They will help cause less accidents and it will reduce the chance of texting and driving. There are many benefits and disadvantages about these cars. These cars could hopefully stop the number of deaths from accidents that occur. They do, however, need human assistants in some situations.\n\nOne advantage about the driverless cars is that is hands off, well most of them are. One has special touch sensors that makes sure the driver's hands keep hold of the wheel. That is actually really good because just incase an accident was about to occur or is occuring your hands would already be on the wheel ready to take over. Another advantage is that it will use less gas than we do now. That could save the driver a lot of money.\n\nThere still are some disadvantages though. When an accident does occur with a driverless car no one would know who to blame. It could be the drivers fault, the cars fault or maybe even both the car and driver. The cars are not designed to handle driving through roadworks or accidents. The car also cannot pull in or out driveways. The driver will have to take over and handle those situations. Most states have made it illegal to test these driverless cars. The driverless cars now do cost a lot of money to produce. They involve a lot of sensors, which does cost a lot of money. I think the only reason this car would suck to have is because the driver would have to take over sometimes.\n\nIn all, the driverless cars would be great to have out on the roads. They would be a safer way for people to get from one place to another without many accidents happening. There are also sensors on the vehicle to alert th driver when they need to be ready to take over. For the most part these cars do all the work. There are just a few things they would be better at.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a healthy lifestyle is getting progressively popular among all people around the globe. Personally, from my point of view, it is a great course and modern citizens have got many advertisings, as well as mass media. Additionally, in terms of involving new individuals, this strategy has to be prolonged, plus it would be very efficient to include special sport and educational programmes into a free package which will be accessible for all citizens. Moreover, provide an affordable cost of healthy food in order to ensure that they are on the same price level with fast food and other insalubrious products.\r\n\r\nAccording to this course, we can notice that plenty of individuals want to be fancy, sporty and keep up with the times. For instance, in Russia, especially in Moscow there is one very famous and special grocery network which provide high-quality products, it also contains very nice design and many bonus programmes. Consequently, the majority of neighbours prefer to buy everything there and in connection with this have become involved in this image of life. Furthermore, the Internet and especially social networks are full of photos whit sporty and young strangers, which can motivate other people to follow their image. \r\n\r\nOverall, modern society has got many motivating features and mostly they are successfully working. However, it would be helpful to afford them more opportunities and engage new participates. For instance, in several regions of the United Kingdome, there was a special educational programme, whose propose was organizing personal consultations and monitoring the statistics. Finally, it was a very useful idea, because they had got many positive results with improvements in the health condition of these citizens. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to stress, that since many individuals have found out this style as a fashionable and modern, they want to be a part of this movement. However, in many countries, it is still very expensive and not available to all citizens. Looking towards the future, it is no doubt a given that in alignment with the current course the modern society on a good way and we should continue together and will help other individuals have become a part of it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An emotionless human being can easily show that they are extremely happy but feels different.Computers can easily read ones facial expression but it does not neccessarily calculate ones emations.I think the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of a student in a class room is not very valuable.\n\nMost facial expressions are very easy to read but not so easy to explaining one's actual emotions as the author says, \" you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course most of is would have trouble actually describing facial trairts...\" ( paragraph 5). If practiced very well one could fake how one is feeling as people can not read one's emotion a compute cant unless on learns all of the facial emtions. A human being can actually confuse a device as will as they can confuse another.\n\nIn my opionon the use of technolgy to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom are not valuable at all because until we learn how to reads ones facial expressions on if its fake or not computers will be no better at reading them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pollution is a remarkable phenomenon that moved upward in the current decade, because of the availability of numerous factors causes. One of the various elements is the fuel that burns through machines. In general, there is equality between the benefits and detriment that comes from fuel at the same point. As the statement mention, upsurging in the fees of fuel to a decline in the ratio of users to protect the environment could be a solution. Through this essay, I will demonstrate my standpoint that significantly disagrees. \r\n\r\nInitially, the government has the power to control the amount of fuel spent to transport that spread into the air and reflex nefarious to the environment. Moreover, there are multiple finance majors that will affect as a result of the rose in the price of fuel which is connected to the global country's economic stability.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, the impact of reducing the consumption of vehicles in specific will play a huge role in the value of fuel or gas and make it less precious. Therefore, there are priceless elements in the world and fuel is an essential example that has demands on it in all life areas. Public transport such as trains or buses, if the fuel becomes unavailable to owner own car or individuals there is a likelihood to increase the passengers inside them. That will lead to new stations costing billions.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo summarise and briefly from my perspective I found the point in the topic unrealistic, so I completely disagree. Environment request protection from all other injurious elements such as plastic waste as an instance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" By Nick D'Alto the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify humans emotions. This technology is very valuable for the classroom. The statment is true because as said in the article the computers will be able to read ther emotions and adaped them selfs to make it seem more intertaning. This technology would play a mager roll in learning. the text states in paragraph 6 that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\",\" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\",that help for students and teatchers would be amazing. Plus what would it hurt ? its not a painless unnoticable process that helps the students get a better education. With this in our cumputers it can read the emotions of students better then the teacher ever could and can get the learns more focused and smarter. This technology will help out students more then ever and is to valuable to pass up and should be in every classroom posibleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today's, cutting-edge technologies change human being life significantly. subsequently, This matter affects storing way of books. Although some communities believe that e-book destroys the nature of the book, others think that this technology gives a new and better meaning to the book. In this essay merits and demerits of both points of view will be discussed.\r\n\r\nNew tools and inventions in the last century, give people improved methods to store data like text. This way of storage is more intelligent because we can transport these very easily. To illustrate, the transportation of 1000 reports in the past was a really huge work to be done but now we can move them on a CD. Moreover, disasters such as war, flood, earthquake, and fire could destroy libraries and consequently millions of reports in a fraction of a second. To clarify, keeping bills on hard disks is safer. In addition, using hard disks for storing statements eliminate neccecety of cutting trees to write books. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, from the readers' point of view, reading bills on paper is more comfortable. for example, they claim that e-book affects human eye health. Additionally, they say electronic books do not have the same good feeling as paper books. Also, researches show that concentrating on a subject is more when you read it on paper.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, like other technologies, keeping reports on hard disks or reading them on the screen has both negative and positive sides. However, I think its advantages are more than its advantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's world, it is believed that there are a lot of people who think that the government should increase the level of air polution and solve problems with housing because it is good way to preven illnesses. In my opinion, as there are a variety of diseases that are resalted from bed environment and poor leaving infrastructure, it is a good idea. \r\n\r\nOne reason to support my opinion is that air and water have a significant impact on people's health because all off people need it to stay alive. Moreover, humanity should try to save environment in good conditions if people want to care about future generations. For instance, according to new research, which was writed in the USA, genetic diseases are more common in the areas with high level of plants and roads. \r\n\r\nAnother reason to support my point of view is that there are some areas on the planet where people does not have enough money to build home with comfortable facilities. It is known that some of people does not have access to traditional beathrooms and even pure water. Thus, because they may not wash their food, it resulted in different illnesses. For examle, in South Africa, where numerous people have poor facilities in ther houses, a lot of kids die before their first birthday due to infectiones diseases. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, I believe that the government should focus on environment polutions and housing problems because it will help prevent a lot of genetic illnesses in the future and also will safe lifes some of people from contagious diseases.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend?These days a vast majority of people want to lead an independent life. The fundamental reason lies in people’s educational qualifications that fuel their craving for freedom in life. This can be seen as a positive trend because living alone is likely to nurture a mature mindset at early stages of one’s life.Many people are well educated to stand up on their own. Tertiary education broadens their horizons, and they wish to experience freedom of life. With a very good educational background it becomes easier to find a well-paid job, and with lucrative income they gain confidence to lead an independent life, thereby achieving their goals. For example, engineering graduates can find a job in another town and their salary is enough for them to move and settle down there. This enables them to move away from their family and live on their own.Living alone helps one to develop maturity, which can be seen as a positive impact on individuals and the society as a whole. Being independent means young people have to face life challenges alone and going through this process improves their resilience. They become more responsible, as they have to take care of themselves and develop budgeting skills and saving habits, for their future needs as well. Better planning of their finances nurtures the custom of wise spending at early stages of adult life.In conclusion, the reason why many people wish to live independently these days is because their education level gives them both the awareness of freedom in life and means of achieving it. Since living alone promotes one’s maturity, it seems to be a positive trend in today’s society.This response covers the task requirements by addressing the two parts of the question, why people choose to live alone and whether this is a positive trend. The ideas are clearly explained and supported, the information is organised in paragraphs in an easy to follow way, and the level of coherence is adequate. A range of complex sentence forms is used and there are no grammatical errors. Overall, this essay is likely to score Band 8 in IELTS.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughing one things best I talk almost everyday never get tired laughing We talk everything even saddest thing world able make funny way s one things As best friends s job make feel better one calls crying s job make laugh funny know job well done In uncle died I called crying eyes said everything going okay think good memories I One ones I could think funniest story life even though I still crying tears laughter I knew uncle would want laugh right laughing I met spent week get know new people getting closer That week one funniest weeks whole though nt click week later found alike thought Some people say two people much alike friendship nt work Well true yet false When alike talk everything yet hit differences disagrees starts fight fights bring people closer together Even though nt see much nt mean ca nt best friends What best friend lived different state mean nt best friend anymore No means nt see much would like Even though live close nt always time see one another finally get see nt dull moment About month gotten bad car accident went skate world crutches could nt skate nt stop fun making full laughter She dancing music top seats yelling CAPS wont ever see people life little fun By got almost everyone group dancing stools I nt regret one thing happened I laughed year We dancing screaming three hours one parents got went home That I never forget A girl recovering horrible car accident made best When things nt work way wanted go life wishing happen differently look back couple years road see fine make laugh somethings hard laugh good thing get point think something happy funny try laugh Laughing always made feel better knowing I make someone difficult life laugh pee makes feel good It makes feel like I done something good life I willing help struggles To makes life life worth living Though cant help everyone every single one struggles sometimes helps know I planed many lives would like live looking back I laugh heart I know never happen Even try best make happen I doubt But worth laughter good time make Believe going happen awhile I know looking back years laugh Laughing good way get rid fear anger stress It makes think good times life lets know fun life Though fight I nt think anyone able tear I apart laughter done We true friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A large amount people use computers daily everyone agrees technology benefits society I think computers benefit way life many ways This useful technology positive effect people allows people send receive research vast variety information easily people use computer get information get quickly reading book specific topic They say powerful technology effective quicker My cousin I given research paper He used several books get information topic I used computer The project took days took whole week complete computer programming expert said Computers made receiving information much faster I vehemently believe everyone device Moreover computers help communication There many ways keep touch people world like email chat rooms websites like These websites great tool keep touch family friends even fans lead singer band said CAPS way talk fans directly ad post updates upcoming tours albums Not isit great bands great college students My older brother college student communicate websites seems like never far away The computer also help business Meeting done different webchat service Emails great way send information business meetings held internet benefited work ethics Please heed advice use internet computer It benefit way communication way getting informationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Astronauts risk their life by exploring the different planets in our solar system. In the article ''The Challenge of Exploring Venus'' talks about how dangerous it could be to exoplor it. Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because it was once the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit, and NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\n\nVenus may be inhospitable now, but it was once the most Earth-like planets in our solar system. In the article it discusses how Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. It states that, ''The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features [like] valleys, mountains, and craters.'' Meaning it has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus is also the second planet from our sun.\n\nEarth, Venus, and Mars orbit the sun at different speeds, which could lead to planetary visits. ''The differences in speed mean that sometimes we ae closer to Mars and other times Venus.'' Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and no spacecraft survuved the landing for more than a few hours. Venus has proven to be a very challanging place to examine more closely.\n\nThere are inhancements that NASA are trying to improve for differnt approaches to studying Venus. The author exclaims, ''A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.''\n\nAn example of what NASA is trying to do is to create simplified electronics made of silicone carbide that have been tested to in a chamber that stimulates Venus's surface; this electronic has survived three weeks in such conditon. What's even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. So imagine exposing a cell phone to acid or heat capable of melting tin.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future for cars is expanding over the course of the years. Driveless cars should not be delevoped in modern day society. This is because one, it does not make any sense, two, you would have to make too many changes in society for the cars to work properly.\n\nDriveless cars would cause many problems in modern society. For instance, \" Presently, traffic laws are written with assumption that the...liability in the case of an accident\" (9). In other words, the laws for driving were made under the cricumstances that a human would be behind the wheel at all times so in order for a computer to be in charge of a car the government would need to shift the laws around to make that possible. The government should not change the law around for a computer that is not liable because techniqualities can happen at anytime on the road. Also, \" Why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver?\" (8). This is to say that, the car that the manufacturers make is supposed to be \"driveless\" but it still needs a driver behind the wheel to guide it. Specifically, what is the whole point of making a car that is supposed to be controled by a computer but still needs human help, its like making a purposless car. There is no need for a drivless car if does not neccessarily drive itself.\n\nDriveless cars should not be created in today's world because it will cause serious confusion. Depending on a computer to take the wheel of a car is a bad idea and then making it a \"driveless\" car that still needs assistants from humans does not pursuit the purpose of making the invention. Therefore, this creation needs a little bit more work to be a life changing experiment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day man patient He thougt everything wanted would come right way His name soon reliesed everything came right wanted So got really mad saw house sale really nice house But people living house werent done moving everything house Then discovered patience key its time move So point always patient rest lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Happy, angry, sad, disgusted, fearful, and suprised these are all emotions that drive our life. Now what if you could know exactly how someone is feeling in a few seconds without having to ask them? Or be able to detect if someone is feeling suicidal ? In the following paragraphs you will find out ho that all is now possible thanks to Dr . Huang's Facial Action Coding System.\n\nThe Facial action Coding System or FACS for short is a new program that reads your emotions. This program uses a scanner to find the location of your muscels in your face and then calculates what your mood is in a precent. For example in paragraph 1 it says\" She's 83 precent happy, 9 Precent disgusted, 6 Precent fearful, and 2 Precent angry...\"This is how you would get your results. Now think of all the things this could be used for.\n\nDepression, one of the biggest killers in the world and most of the time goes unnoticed by friends family and loved ones. Now what if you could tell when someone is depressed and could help them.With this program you could do just that. Think of all the lives that could be saved and young minds that wont be wasted. But what if the computer could make these people smile as well.\"if you smile when a certain web ad pops up a similar might follow but if you frown the next one will be diffrent.\" as stated in paragraph 6. This means therapy could be in your own home where all you have to do is look at your computer.\n\nThreat detection , What if you could detect when someone is angry enough to shoot up a school or rob a bank or commit a crime. Since this program can give you prentge of moods immage how much safer schools will be when you can stop a shooting before it happens.Imagine a world that you could be proud that you kid lives in. Now some might say that this would be unethical or something out of a movie that would be bad in the wrong hands. But there is really no bad in this if you can stop a crime before it happens and do it ethically there is nothing wrong with this.\n\nGrades can be hard to keep and everyone learns at diffrent paces. But as stated in paragraph 6 \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is confused or bored then adjust the lesson to how they learn.\"This would allow the teachers to have more of a one on one experince instead of having to teach everyone at once. With grades on the rise immagine 20 years after that when these people creat buisnesses and become the future economy and how well they will be prepared for the real world.\n\nIn summary this FACS program could be one of the greatest inventions ever. Wether it be stopping crime / depression or helping to teach students. This program will revolutionize the future of our world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's incredible how the technology is able to know your emotions. It's like the techonology is trying to communicate with us, but will it be useful for school and teachers? In this passage I'm going to tell you, why having the technology is valuable and useful for school and teachers.\n\nThe use of this technology that is able to read the emotional expressions of studnets in a classroom is valuable becuase it's important that the teachers know the emotions that her students. This technology can help the teachers understand the students btter for example, the teacher is giving a lesson the teacher needs to know if they're bored or confused so he or she can do something about his or her lessons.\n\nIf the students are bored then he or she can change the ways they teach, by adding some fun activities to try and keep thier students attention, enocourage students to learn and pay attention to what the teacher is teaaching. If the student is confused then the teacher can try and help the students by giving them more examples and talking about the topic more. Having this sort of technology is great becuase many of the students don't want to ask their teacher for help when they're confused in a certain topic. The students might be afraid that the teacher might get displeased or made fun of from the other students.\n\nIn the text \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" states \"A classromm copmputer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\". It says that the computer can read the students emotions when they are bored an confused, like I said before.\n\nIn conclusion, Using this sort of technology would help many teachers and many schools because they would know how his or her students feel. Also, help them with thier lessons and way of teaching. Creating new ways to teach and enocurage the students to learn and be in school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author explains that Venus is a very difficult planet for humans to study despite the proximity to us all. It has been proved that it is a very challening place to examine more closely. Even more challenging they say are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Venus's tempature average is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater then what we expierence on Earth.These conditions are far more extreme then anything humans encounter on Earth. An environment like that would crush even a submarine that is accustomed to diving in the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquify many metals.\n\nAstronomeres are still fascinated by Venus despite all of the risks of even being near the planet. They also believe that Venus may once have been the most earthly like planet in our solar system, As the author says in paragraph 4 \"The value of returning to Venus seems Indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\"\n\nNASA has been working on other approaches to study Venus. An example , some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and lasted three weeks in such conditions.\n\nLike in paragraph 8 it says \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This tells us that learning more or even being able to explore Venus has a great value. There are so many risks willing to be took just to explore Venus and being able to know such fascinating things that no one else knows is worth not knowing if you will be fine or even come back at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why You Should Join the Seagoing Cowboys\n\nThere is an exciting program called the Seagoing Cowboys. The Seagoing Cowboys are a group of people who travel the world to help other countries. If you like working and exploring the world join the Seagoing Cowboys! You also get the experience of helping people, also meeting new friends.\n\nMy first reason for joining the Seagoing Cowboys is that you get to see the world. In between trips you can always stop to go sightseeing with friends. You can even get a job doing cattle-boat trips where you take trips to other countries that are overseas. While you're sailing overseas you can stop to see a famous landmark as long as it's close by. Such as Luke, it states in the story where he went to go sightseeing in between trips. \"So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Also where it states \"Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nMy second reason is that you get the experience of helping people and their country. It tells you in the story, \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can help your personality too, it can make you kinder, and help you show humility. It also says in the story \" And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nMy final reason is the experience of making new friends, and having fun with them. You can make new friends in different countries, also people that you work with. Some people that you become friends with can become your best friend for life. It states in the story what fun things you can do with them too, \" Luke also found time to have fun on board , especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. \" The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped past time.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many reasons you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. You can join for the experience of helping people, the experience of seeing the world, or you can join to make new friends and having fun with them. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can also help strengthen you're personality, and help you be aware of people and their needs and wants.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do Computers Society This question might answered forever I opinion might effect everyone world I hope Exercising great way stay shape sit day dont chance stay shape So everyone fit eventually fat Whik sit playing game everyon side playing park swimming pool fishing lake Sitling destroys life bot physically socially Lastly stop spending time friends family Also stop interacting new friend old ones find new ones Lastly I sit miss awesome life waiting since remember So next time friend says go online school say d rather nt want get addictedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From last two decades advancement in techonology grows drastically, that day is not far when its gonna replace humans everywhere. This improvement will introduce its own pros and cons that I will discuss in following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with benefits, robots will be quicker because if same job is assigned to an indvidual and a machine it will be apparent second one will finish the wrok faster. for example,, to build a five stroy bulding genral labour will take atleast two years but when its replaced by robots it will be only the matter of few weeks. Therefore, this replacement will save time. Moreover, quality of work will be improved significantly. As when human beings perform chors its less likely to be error free as compared to technology. According to the study at the Oxford university the automated car tesla avoid 90% of the accidents that human drivers cannot.\r\n\r\nMoving towards the drawbacks firstly, will cause unemployement when most taks will be completed by mechanical beings then folks will be jobless. For instance, Kiosk machiens at retaurants replaced the cashiers. Secondloy it will produce unhealthy society because people will always relay on robots to do even basic things like, having a cup of water or swithing off lights from bed these will result to no physical avtivities and will make society lazy.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, like all other wonders of science robort will be one of them and I believe weight of advanatgeos will be more than disadvantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir generosity Narciso Rodriguez author talks much generosity parents He says My parents always kept arm doors open many people considered family They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends carrers country loved In memoir Narciso says always grateful parents love sacrifice His dad worked laboratory Cuba mom studied chemical engineering Cuba In start lives entirely taking whatever work could find He says house I learned real definition family He also says I never forget parents turned simple house home parents generous grateful brave courage We grateful aour parents sacrifice us sacrificedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to a few people, teenagers while they are not occupied with studies could spend their time in doing free volunteering work in the local community, this is believed to be useful for both the community as well as the teenagers. In this essay, we shall discuss these views with appropriate examples and my opinion. \r\n\r\nLet us start by looking at how volunteering could help school children. Getting children involved into work that contribute to the society is a good means for them to get engaged with different kids of their age. This helps in socialising, as well as they could built on variety of skills such as learning to work in groups would bring in leadership qualities, generate new thoughts and learn to deal with emotional situations. Moreover, this provides many children who might not be smart in academics a chance to express their innate abilities, such as a girl good at arts might use this talent to her advantage and could use it in the right place where her innovative ideas are valued, these services give such kids oppertunity to shine and in a way they can identify their strenghts. \r\n\r\nOn the contrary parents fear their children might deviate from their lessons and might take interest in other activities. For instance a child scores drop in a subject, one of the parent attributes this as a cause of spending time in extracurricular activities. In addition to it when they are occupied in these, they ignore their homework, the assignments are left pending, this overshadows the merits of volunteering. And the concern stated by the elders cannot be ignored. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I would like to state my opinion that free community work should be encouraged by all to make teens aware of their envirnoment and the good it brings with it. Neverthless, there is a need to strike a balance between education and the time one spends in devoting to the community, If we can allot a particular time for these extra events and make sure that kids complete their school tasks, in this way our children can grow intellectually and develop interpersonal skills.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is how humans are trying to explore Venus. They have never put there foot on Venus before. They say its earths twin planet. ITs sometimes called the \"Evening Star\". Its the secoond planet from the sun. Theres alot of troubles about getting to Venus and how dangerous it to be on Venus.\n\nNo spacecraft has ever made it over a few hours on Venus. No\n\nspacecraft has landed ther in more than three decades.The new technology doesn't have a high compasity of heat. They though about using the technology that they used in the 1800s and in the 1940s during World War II. They used gears for technology back then and they are alot less fragile like todays stuff. The dangers of going to Venus.\n\nIts very dangerous to explore Venus. No human from earth has ever been on Venus before.The atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide on Venus. The surface of Venus average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what it is on earth.\n\nPeople wanna go to Venus because before the humans got on earth they believed that there was creatures on Venus.\n\nNASA has an idea where there gonna fly a ship 30 miles above the surface of Venus to look at its surface. NASA believes that it will be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit and the air pressure would be the same as it would be on earth at sea level.\n\nTheres alot of dangerous things to gettin to Venus. I believe we can make there and explore. With todays technology we can do about anything. Theres alot of dangerous factors tho to getting on Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views concerning the question of how to tackle serious juvenile crime. In my opinion children should be responsible for their crime, yet according to the severity of their actions, immature criminals should be punished the same as adults or not.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, in the case of petty crimes such as robbery or fighting, I argue that young children should be punished with more lenient sentences. This is because they are too young to be fully aware of what they have done or to control their aggressive emotions. Therefore, instead of being punished in the same way as adults by being sentenced with 1-year imprisonment, youth criminals should be punished with community service. By doing so, they can compensate for their wrong acts as well as be deterred from reoffending.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in some serious crimes such as murder, I strongly support the view that the same punishments should be imposed on juvenile killers. It is undeniable that this kind of offence is extremely serious and leaves long-term implications for the victims’ family members. Besides, killers pose a threat to the security of society, so they should be sentenced with heavy punishments regardless of their age. For instance, a Vietnamese teenager still recieved capital punishment due to the inhumane nature in his motives and the ways he killed the whole family. In other words, with serious crimes, strict punishments can act as a deterrent against would-be culprits.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I hold a firm belief that the punishments that youth criminals should receive should be based on the severity of the crime. In particular, while juvenile offenders commit some petty crimes should be punished to a lesser degree, serious crimes such as murder should not be reconsidered no matter what age killers are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face has been the main topic of discussion. People believe that the Face was created by aliens. The Face is not a alien creation but rather just a normal landform on the surface of Mars.\n\nIf the Face was an actual alien's face then NASA would've found the alien of that size by now. However, the Face is too big to be the face of an actual organism. Upon further examination, the Face has been found to be just a landform. The enhanced picutre taken in 2001 proves the fact that it is a landform. The camera technology was not advanced enough in 1976 which is why the photo looked like a face.\n\nMany conspiracy theorists claim that the Face was made by aliens but they don't have enough information to protect their claim. Many people who have seen the enhanced image of the Face believe that alien marking were covered by haze. That claim was brought down after NASA took another picture on a cloudless day with a maximum resolution camera; you could see everything in the picture and there was no alien markings.\n\nOther conspiracy theorists claim that NASA is hiding the truth about the Face and its alien creators. That may raise some thoughts but if there were truly aliens who created the Face, NASA's budget would rise quickly to find those creators but none were found.\n\nOverall, the Face has been proven to be a natural landform and not a alien creation. NASA has been looking for more life on Mars for many years but no life was found; aliens are just characters of fiction.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is just a natural landform, it is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, not a face. Why is it not a face?\n\nThe reasons why it is a mesa, it is just an illusion formed by shadow giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth. The Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picute ten times sharper than the original Viking photos, when it was revealed on a JPL web site it was just a natural landform.\n\nNot eveyone was satisfied, people said that the camera on board MGS had to peer thorugh wispy clouds to see the Face. Skeptics said that the marking were hidding by the aliens.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" Each pixel in the camera spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meter per pixel in the 1976 Viking photo.\n\nSince the photo taken was so good that if there were objects in this picture say an airplanes or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see them, but there weren't any.\n\nIn conclusion the picture actually shows that the landform was a Martian equivalend of a butte or mesa. There are landforms that are common around the American West. An example would be the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, it a lava dome that take the form of an mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir I think mood warm nice oneOne example warm discribes home For example says paragraph Within walls young parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen This warm mood think kitchen think warm room sweet eromahs delicious food ovenA reason nice mood cultures got along treated like family For example says paragraph All theus cultures came together great solidarity friendship It nice alot racism time cultures overcame togetherThe last reason warm nice mood apreciates parents done For example says paragraph I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever This saying greatfull parents left Cuba give better lifeThats I think mood memoir warm niceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change is one of the important problems of the Earth. Some people think that, instead of suppressing this issue, humankind needs to find a solution for living with it. When it comes to me, this point of view is false. \n\nClimate change occurs because of global warming, which is strengthened by human activities carried through industries, factories, cars and etc. The biggest cause of warming is the emission of greenhouse gases which consist of more than 90% carbon dioxide and methane. Fossil fuel burning for consumption in such activities is the main source of these harmful gases. It has several consequences for the environment that demonstrate changing of permanent weather. For instance, Carbon dioxide causes Ozone depletion that leads out to high temperatures. As a result of rising temperatures, evaporation level is going up, storms and weather extremes are being intensive, Arctic ices are melting, and desert areas are expanding. Of course, these variations have unpleasant outcomes such as the death of local animals of particular regions, increasing level of infectious diseases, food insecurity, water scarcity, and economic losses. \n\nIt would be a great mistake for people to remain indifferent to such an important problem for the reasons listed above. To prevent mother Earth, governments can implement several policies against harmful human activities. For example, to encourage entrepreneurs to improve technology with less waste, to increase the level of recycling, to apply a tax over the production of emission, to decrease the number of cars by replacing some of them with bikes. Maybe, after all, people will be able to reduce their impact on the environment.\n\nTo conclude, climate change is a serious issue for our planet, it has many negative effects on the environment and people shouldn't be motionless against this problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should become a Seagoing Cowboy, like in the article \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" for many reasons. One reason, is that you get to help animals and people after WWII according to the text, \"World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more,\"(2). You get to transport animals to new areas to graze. You'd be able to help people get out of poverty.\n\nYou could also get to see places you don't usualy see. For example, \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,' he says. 'So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.' Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete\"(5). Most people would never see those places in a lifetime.\n\nSpeaking of lifetimes, most people who live average lives will probably never get a chance to do this. \"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy,\"(5). After the job, you may never do it again.\n\nWhile riding the boat, you still get time for fun activities like \"Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\"(8) So, you won't be completely bored while riding to the next area.\n\nLuke(the charicter from the story) also said that \"being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. 'I'm grateful for the opportunity,' he says. 'It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.' And that awareness stayed with him,\"(9) So over all, you get to make memories of the places you've been, and help people and animals in need, better understanding the world around you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Will the use of the Facial Action Coding System valuable to use on students inside the classroom. The anwser is yes the coding system would be valuable because you would be able to detect other people's feelings and when they are trying to hide them or not. \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how others people are feelin, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others\"(D'alt).\n\nHow can the FACS be helpful inside the classroom? Well first of all the reason that it can be very helpful is say someone looks down or very angry for some reason and you kinda can tell but you can't tell just yet, furthermore you use the coding system and you can find exactly what percent there anger or sadness is. after that you can go confront them about what there feeling and see of you can help them and make sure they are doing just fine. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness- and then associated each characteristic movements of facial musvles\"(D'alto 3).\n\nWill the FACS be breaking peoples privacy? I think that the coding sytem will break peoples privacy and I don't think thats right but sometimes you have to go into someone privacy to help them out with a problem. I think that the FACS system has a few falws but this will help schools so much that are trying to help kids with problems that they really don't want to talk about or figure out why they are angry, disguted or feeling fear for like a test or something however I do think that the coding system will help a lot of kids and even the teachers could use it for like projects or something fun for the kids.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Part of the population believes that in order to succeed is necessary to acquire a college or a university degree; while others claim that it is more beneficial for succeeding get a job as soon as the high school period is over. This essay will discuss both perspectives and give an opinion accordingly to the arguments presented. \n\nTo begin with, those who defend the necessity of finishing the university or college program normally say that theoretical knowledge can make the difference when people are competing with their peers in the labour market. Moreover, the degree represents the proof that someone has the minimum required technical information and is qualified to perform some professional activity. To illustrate that situation, to be accepted as a doctor or a nurse in any hospital or clinic, it is mandatory to complete a university education. \n\nNevertheless, in some businesses areas such as technology intelligence, companies are not looking for proof of theoretical knowledge in their employees. Therefore, it seems to be more profitable start looking for a job as soon as teens finish school. Furthermore, acquiring subjectif skills such as learning how to work under pressure or developing important practical skills in some field might reflect in more chances to succeed in some careers than achieving a degree. \n\nTo conclude, after all the facts presented, I share the belief that to succeed in some professional areas it is important to have a degree before applying to a job and for others it could be more profitable to start looking for a job after finishing some school program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I highly encourage you to enter the Seagoing Cowboys program. Here are the reasons why I advise you to join this wonderful program.\n\nMy first reason is the fact that you will be able to help those in need that suffered from World War II. Many families have lost many things, and this would be the chance for you to help them regain them. You would be highly honored for your striking courage.\n\nMy second reason is that you would be able to see global landmarks throughout your journey. Luke was a witness and he said that, \"the trips were an unbeleivable oppurtunity for a small town boy.\" You would learn what it is like to travel far and wide across the Atlantic Ocean.\n\nMy last reason is that not only would you be able to see global landmarks, but you would also be able to enjoy yourself throughout the trip. The passage states that the cowboys played baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, and reading, whittling, or games also helped pass some of the time. You wouldn't just have to sit there and do nothing when the work was finished, you would be able to entertain yourself with activities.\n\nThis demonstrates some important reasons why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. Please take what I said into mind, and join this organization. Thank you for your time, and please think about entering this wonderful program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people say the face on mars was made by aliens ,or some force of life. I beleive that it was just a natural landform. There are picture taken by NASA that shows a landform that looks just like a face ,and there is other rounded forms of land near it ,so that makes me think its juat land. If you think its by aliens then you must think its because the aliens that we see have spaceships called UFOs. That would make a person think since they are smarter then us that they had amde it with tools of there own. Or even that they made a life form that guards the planet and stays in the ground until someone comes and intrudes.\n\nI would think in a more literal state ,for an example i would also think a meteor had hit the planet in such a way that a piece flew off and looked just like a human face on accident. Although few scientists at NASA beleived that it was made by aliens, i still beleive that it was made by natural causes.\n\nOn Sept. 1997 which was eighteen long years after the first picture by the spacecraft called the Viking. The new picture was so high def. it showed 1.56 meters per each pixel. YOU could se what exactly was arounf the face and even on the face. The land was rough so that explains to me that the face was built by natural cuases not by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In world never know someone might writing There re many materials world I think nt appropiate someone reading watching listenning ect You thinking anyone makes hisher decision read watch listen Well I agree I believe materials nt rate properly age I think materials banned people age kids everyone You thinking wrong nothing wrong books music movies ect opinion materials offensive proper I seen many materials I think proper people age looking In movies example rating right movies much violence language You might think s big deal course I In opinion materials low rating people age It s surprising kids yelling hitting acting like rebels parents Many things kids get books music movies ect This many reasons materials banned kids You ask Well first kids learnning everything watch see listen I mean kids nt even think They nt care think s okay I think parents alert offensive materials shelves say something banned Why banned materials everyone Well first even want watch see listen things right You thinking fun s enjoyable nothing wrong Well right also wrong I certainly agree watched things fun enjoy things world us Why people crazy things day In opinion I think mostly get books music movies ect I think book shows offensive things banned everyone matter It s right thing If nt want see world get control already Well need something materials offensive banned good We certainly nt want see kids yelling hitting actting like rebels us We nt want crazy person coming hosue crazy things us s learn materials shelves It s come materials banned people age kids everyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I nt think removed shelfs Everyone right read point time To little kids rent book If complaining s volgar sexual Then nt take away Try something else adult section One person love book violence hand person real religous ca nt stand see There many view points topic The parents nt want kids exposed type life style Some people nt really think bad next person If s book dislike book shelf nt like put plain sight Should really one make decision takes Some people nt know kids like read If final thought gets taken affect kids reading habbits What kid wants read horror book choose let kinds books shelf Then nt want read books left shelf I d rather read book interests book I dislike My point view topic simple I nt think parents controle read long s appropriate I think decision left government say book nt taken awaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "my position on driverless cars is more easy then doing everything on your own driverless cars are basically like smart cars. smart cars sometimes when u dont come to a complete stop they a stop for u because u wouldnt want to reck it if u need help backing up and u having trouble the car will help you a driverless car is beter den a driverless cab anyday,why would anybody want a driverless car when u still need a driver ? when u have a smart car u can talk to the car to send a text message out instead of almost crashing the car because u trying to give out and important text.\n\nLets say if you get into a accident m the technology fails and someone is injured u would think its the manufacturer fault because it stopped you before when really its your fault because u didnt come to a complete stop on your own its not the cars fault all the time to stop you when got your own breaks when you can stop own your own.\n\nWould you like to have a car that can drive for you sometimes or would u like a car to drive for you all the time, a mercedes-benz or a audi ora nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020, If you can handle driving functions at the speed 25 mph,the car has a special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel so that the car wont get out of control none of the cars completely devolped so they are completely driverless.\n\nThat means when the car is on the road the driver watches the road n the car watches the driver to make sure the driver is paying attention n making sure the driver not running into anything and make sure that the driver not crashing into anything , that means if a situation requires the car has to avode the situation before it gets into a reck , the car developed drivers seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into any object, also the google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\n\nas a result un most states it is illegal even to test driver a computer sriven cars, because some of them are dangers or have to spend hundreds of millions of dollors for those computer cars because they very smart, still even if traffic laws change new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident because at the end of the day its not the cars fault if someone gets injured .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I must admit experts centainly right cause I know people stay computer day thats really good ask Instead computers learning faraway places talking people go exercising relax interact family friends Exercising much better computer I say say When computer sitting playing online games checking things whatever case get board hungry I know theres snacks around whatever Instead computer hours maybe even day getting fat There many ways exercise You take walks go joggin could play sport I mean lot things computer I know people could workin day still come home computer Rest good also You nt always jump computer could relax watch movie eat pop corn enjoy could even take nap little something nt always get straight computer really nt use The way I see family computers always going time one important Friends nt always dependable really nt need around selected thats point Both family true friends feelings spending time computer gon na leave come back home something nt right Tomorrow nt promised live today So enjoy life got chance spend time something active family friends really computers try balance timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days people are keen to discover their surroundings including their family trees, their villages or the exact place they live in such as the building itself or the house. I believe, this comes from human’s explorer nature while richness of information sources make it too comfortable to reach the answers quickly.\r\n\r\nPassion for finding something new is rewarding and exciting for people, so we have always found out something during history- a new continent, strange fish kind, new chemical formulas or gravity and so on. If a person grows up in a house, this place becomes a shelter, a sweet memory, somewhere with familiar faces. It triggers the kids to make experiments on the strange places of the house and this experiments turn to passion to search about some facts such as who lived in this place before, which architect has built this area, which historical states this region had belonged to etc. \r\n\r\nArchives, libraries, collection of old newspapers, and especially internet today link us easily to information about the past of the places we live in. One can google just the name of the district and wikipedia will suggest how old this place is, which popular historical people have lived there etc. Or people ask their elderly ones how they acquired their properties- so many channels help us to learn about the past. When I was a kid, I used to question my dad and grandfather that what they did during their young years and that way I learned that the first and most lovely place I lived in and grew up was a reward to my grandparent for working hard on the factory. I remember this made me to have a look at old family photos to see the past designs of our house. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, past has always been an interesting topic for people to think about. Maybe more information on the surroundings make us more confident on the future. Exploration love and many resources to learn about history lead us to dig more about the past.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Materials offensive people point view removed shelves If people offended materials nt pay mind certain materials If everybody paid attention offensive entertainment regardless kind people would upset time There many things people see hear read offensive Do nt take everything seriously offensive things joke someone trying get attention When sit think television shows would watch everyday least one moment s says something offensive In example I watch television show nights says something racial I nt pay show kind attention I know s show trying get rating So really comes I goin watching show next night What historical people listened everything everyone esle said Then black culture history would nt CAPS today I probably would nt able take test im right So nt take everything serious everyone type humor If removed everything offensive today Some favorite actors singers would nt famous actors singers love respect today All grammy s award shows watch television would There kinds different genre music Some words different artists use would offensive still release songs re words My conclusion anything anyone offended offensive People nt take everything serious might joke ignorant person needs attention When I younger mother always said sticks stones break bones words make So nt take everything serious I mean s media tell take seriouslySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever just wanted to get in your car with no one but yourself but didn't want to drive? I have, it seems like it would be an interesting thing to do. To many people I'm sure the thought has occured.\n\nIt seems like such a simple concept, a car with no driver being capable of driving itself, but it isn't.\n\nI don't think that driverless cars are the best idea for the world today.\n\nI don't think the world is quiet ready to fully grasp the concept of a 100% driverless car.\n\nYes, we have been aware of the concept of a driverless car since 2009 thanks to Google, but I don't think our nation, espically the US because of our very high debt, is in a good enough state to introduce something like the driverless car.\n\nBeing a teenager in high school, I personally enjoy driving places by myself, so the idea of a fully driverless car simply dosen't apeal to me the way it would to an older man or woman who can't drive well or drive at all.\n\nAlso, I think it would be a big problem determining who is at fault for the accident when one occurs, the person in the autonomous car or the company who made the car that was responsible for accident.\n\nNot knowing who is responsible seems like a lot to worry about, possible lives could be at stake if the wrong choice is made.\n\nCars without a real human driver might be an intertaining thought but I feel they will be very dangerous more often than safe.\n\nIt is impossible to program a car to have human abilities.\n\nThe skill and saftey of a human driver would be nearly impossible for anyone to replicate.\n\nDriverless cars would hurt our nation more than it would help.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ther artucule says envelope el study of venus in venus for the exploration\n\ncomplete of venus he author claim that is dangerous for the estudent because en venus the temperute is more cold and is difficult , others thing very importan is that venus have 97 parcent of carbon dioxide and 800 degrees fahrenheit besides of the density that have he planeta venus other option is mars but not change much is same that venus only the temperature change on little but the estudents want know\n\nthe planet venus only with clothes special for have success in the study od he planet so the NASA wint more planets for when he planet eath have dangerous of destruction have more planet for life with no dangerous and survive the humans with water , oxygen , food , work , family , friends, law , reproduction ,and more that nothing happy . for this he all the planet earth need much money for pay el studing in venus the exploration and construct in other planet for survive , is all of the articule , i think that if is possible have life in other planet in all galaxy exist a opportunity is mi conclusion if have opportunity in other planet only lack more tecnology and money for all this process in others planet . all this says the articule only explain when i think and boliver of this theme .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses sentence conclude story show Saengs hope restored Throughout story Saeng sad misses home She feels hopeless new land hibiscus reminds home brings back memories home grandmother makes want back home The author adds part geese leaving also leave home The hibiscus symbolize strong make moving strange landSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock A practical reason law airships flying close urban areas like New York The law would make illegal dirigible even approach building The greater reason issue safety If ship came dock use hydrogen highly flammable gas explosion possible harming everyone bellowThe greatest obstacle shifting winds air currents Even tethered ship would swivel around tower getting tangled In conclusion idea dropt though ships tried dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever laughed hard could nt really breathe started cry well I tell I time laughter big part life I remember family I went eat dinner one night My grandpa wanted go chinse food mom little brother grandma grandpa friend I went chinse That ngith memorible night whole table laughing I When I got done orering food waiter brought us appitzers thats trears laughter came It ten minuates talking boy liked said name crab puff went launching toward could nt help laugh loud hard As I sat laughed happened I seen could nt really open mouth laughing hard cheeks hurt laughing ended drooling little sauce bowl soy sauce seeing I new I could nt help tell The night came end ended dumping water waiters son I appologized waiter night son Her son said ok happens time Laughter big part peoples lives laughing make happy bring smiles peoples faces make memoriesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary epoch, there is a widely held perception in many parts of the world these days that customs and traditions have become irrelevant to this fast-paced life. Although there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that nations' cultural heritage requires amelioration for the sake of better relations within nations and families. In this essay, 2 of the primary reasons why I totally agree with the need for a change in traditional ways of thinking will be further elaborated.\r\n\r\nTo embark on, first and also the most crucial reason relates to the fact that inherited traditions have become an obstacle that hinders different people from various ethnic backgrounds from socializing. In other words, if every nation tends to preserve its customs, the world will suffer from global wars ,particularly when obstacles between countries have blurred. This can be witnessed by social media platforms which permitted such fast transactions of information between various nations. Therefore, what can be said is that in order to cope with the requirements of globalization, the traditional ways of behaviours ought to be drastically changed. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, the undue keeping of inherited traditions gives rise to conflicts among families since the current generation has a completely different way of thinking. This means that when breadwinners start to change their obsolete thoughts, they will communicate more efficiently with their minors and such a massive generation gap will be resolved. One particularly salient example of this is parenting courses in which guardians are taught how to get rid of their old thoughts and become equipped and updated with the latest information. Accordingly, in a final analysis, I would contend that since the current generation has special needs, custodians have to understand their needs.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that not only does the superfluous preservation of traditions worsen the communication among nations but also this occurs within families. Thus, I am convinced that parents ought to tackle this issue by attending children-rearing programs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper CAPS computer continous subject controveries ideas made like senior scientis I believe computer used help people connect friends long distant relatives says right computers bring people together whether friends families relatives far countries also helps everyday needs like homework First people things computer including homework finding store checking traffic weather You play games connect friends learn recipies react wreckers football game creating link around world people find information one another learn large corporations find computer useful CAPS using I find willing participant charities says charity fund raiser Second using people share wares sites including People also create websites share wares coowner The duct wallet company also raises money started create website hopes raise awareness terrible event happened like use expand buisness CAPS stay past door future open succesful owner using computers people gather data others create new inventions help world People create diagrams computer send data company hopefully create Computers arent plaything serious pieces equipment help world Although people might find sides computers always able think good side I hope use article prove computers arentSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever think about how you spend your free time and who you spend your free time with?\r\n\r\nOn the other hand ,is it better to spend more of your free time with your friends or with your family? In my point of view it is better to spend my free time with my family members.\r\n\r\nFirstly,I should say without family, life will be empty indeed thus we need to have more strong communication with our close relatives. moreover, friendship relationship is necessary in our life time too.\r\n\r\nSecondly,we have to think about different types of activities and interest that we have arranged for our free time,I believe that you can find some of the activities out more joy and fun if you do them with your friends for example ;studying, shopping, attending graduation celebration, participating our friend`s wedding parties,also there are many hobbies that you would prefferto find out them with your immediate family and close relatives such as new year holidays, birthday parties,etc\r\n\r\nThirdly,infact spending free time with your family depends on how busy your family is ,clearly;if your family members are busy and have less free time to share it with you,hence you spend more free time with your friends\nFinally,honestly my family is my priority in my relationship attitude, to spend my free time with them and of course my friend groups to change my mood and energize me a lot\r\n\r\nIn conclusion ,I`d better spend appropriate time with both groups family and friends which is needed for any people who is eager to have a healthy relationshipSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology have made great impact on the development at various fields. In the past, many works are done with the help of hand, but nowadays, machines are required to complete a task. It has both prons and cons which I will discuss below.\r\n\r\nOn the first hand, there are few drawbacks of using machine equipments because there will be few job opportunities,if all activities are done by machine. For instance, In many big multinational companies such as Mac Donald's and Pizza World have kept robot to serve and as well as to make a food's ,from this worker's do not have enough work to do. If all task are done by robot,there will be no use of hand. Therfore,there will be increasement of a poverty due to less vacancy of a job.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are more benefit of using machines because it can save time. For instance,In Asia there will be time limit for work from 10:am to 4:00 pm and by just clicking on machines, it can complete task as soon as possible. However, people can give time to their family and also enjoy their day at leisure period. Aditionally, use of machines have made people life easy and comfortable.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, technology have positive aspect on people's life because it can save enough time. It has more advantages rather than disadvantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College shouldn't stay the same, in fact we shouldn't even have it anymor the reasons why we should not keep the Electoral College is because we are voting for electors, the tie that occurs in a election and representatives in states. There is so many problems with our constitution and the Electoral College is one of them.\n\nYou may not think voting is what it seems to be. We don't vote for our president like we should but instead we vote for electors, in which all the electors in that state gives the president their vote if the majority of the population voted for them. Wouldn't it just be easier if can automatically add up all votes for each president since we are so technologically advanced? I say we just let the people of the United States vote the way we should vote and everything would be easier and there would be less complaints.\n\nA tie that occurs in an election is unfair. The House of Representatives is now responsible for the election. The winner-takes-all is also a big problem. The eclection is basically in the \"Swing\" states because the election is so close. So i guess the smaller the better. \"The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" Says Bradford Plumer in the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong.\"\n\nThe biggest problem in he electoral college is the representatives in the states. \"Wyoming, representating 500,000 voters, would have as much asthe 55 representatives from California, who represents 37 million,\" Says Bradford Plumer in paragraph 12. That makes no sense at all. Why would a smaller state with a smaller population have more votes than a bigger state with a larger population? That is unfair to the citizens of the United States and is unfair in the election.\n\nMy arguement for this voting process could continue on. Agree or disagree, you still know that there are tons of problems wrong with the Electoral College. I hope one day it'll change and less talk and arguements will occur, it's time for a new voting process.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System, a program that can determin the emotion of a person. This new program will surely help in the feild of phycology. The use of this program can be almost limitless when used corectly. Now that this program is real how should it be used. Should it be used to help the police find potental victums or used to see how people are feeling at work or school.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto he talked about its potential use at schools and how it could benefit schools by determinig if a studient is not learning or not happy. The use of this program has pros and cons, but in todays world it might be best to use it.\n\nAnyone who keeps up with the news should be able to say that the world is getting more messed up every day. In the last few weeks there has been another school shooting. To think about what would make a kid go and shoot people at a school or anywhere is hard to imagine. This is where this program should be implented at schools. The program could be used to anylise the daily emmotion level of students. If a studient is always unhappy, scared, or anything that shows a bad emmotion for a period of time the school can then act an see what the studients problem is. Nick D'Alto said that it could be used to help students be more ingaged and enjoy school more. This should not be used, unless the kid is being home schooled or using some form of an online class. This is because there is no way for a teacher to consantly moniter their students wheil teaching and there is not a good way for them to adapt when nessasary in the time that they have. Also kids are already unhappy to be at school and not too mention how teired they are.\n\nFor this program to be used at school it should only be used to monater their happyness levels to prevent studients from doing bad things like commiting suiside or doing a school shooting. Any other use would be hard to anylize and or use in the way that Nick D'Alto mentioned.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There were many details from the article from Luke's point of veiw that supports convincing others to join th Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nOne detail from the story that supported it was that World War II happed in Europe. That is an important detail because during or after a war, the counrty is most likely going to be in ruins. Also, in the article, it says, \" many countries were left in ruins. To help these contries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA. UNRRA hired 'Seagoing Cowboys' to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" That detail is very important because \" Seagoing Cowboys\" are a part of the UNRRA, which is a project that helps recover food supplies for countries that got destryed or maybe in a war. That is very important because those countries were left in ruins, and people were left without food. And some of those peple were already injured.\n\nAnother reason to join the program, is because they get to travel around the world, and have fun doing it to. This is a good reason because lots of people dont like traveling long distances, beacuase they think its boring. But in the article, it says, \" Luke also found time to have fun onboard.\", and \" The cowboys played baseball volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\" That detail, supports that you can do activities to help pass time, have fun, and make to trip worth-while\n\nMy last reason to join the program is beacuse you would be helping a lot of needy people. Not only does the UNRRA help lots of people, but so does the 'Seagoing Cowboys' that come along with it. That program also helps a lot because they help feed and take care of animals that other people might not be able to.\n\nThose are my reasons to\n\npersuade someone to maybe join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\". If not the Seagoing Cowboys, then maybe the UNRRA. I hope reasons like these could change someone's mind, and maybe help them join.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" it describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computersto identify human emotions. In the article it says, \" Shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2percent angry.\" This tells what emotions they got after calculating the results. To be able to start this process it starts with a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\n\nTo be able to tell what type of emotion someone is feeling with a picture and a computer is pretty valubale. Someone could seem happy and in a good mood but really they are five diferent other emotons. Us humans can preform this same calculation every day, the text says \" For insatnce, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there face.\" This statement is ture but to be able t us a computer if someone was going through something and needed help they would know wht to help them with depending on their emotions.\n\nThis\n\ncomputer system would be very helpful within a classroom. Now days most learning within a school have to do with a computer. If a studnet is learing and seems to be getting distracted or puts there head down, the computer would be able to tell the teacher that a particular studnet is getting bored before they even start to get off track.\n\nThis is more than just helpful to studnets , it is helpful to people with jobs where they sit at a computer all day. It could send them a message saying \" You are starting to get bored, take a minute to breathe.\" That would save them time and it would be easier to get work done within the day. In conclusion, these cpmputer systems would be very helpful to studnets, and work places.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features cyclist rough hills snakes heat amount water The hills give breeze going going give hard time The snakes hurt bitting The heat could make sick The amount water really hurt dehydratedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress buildings frame So obstacle workers working would dificult situation chalenging work building like Another obstacle I would say would wind pressure thouandfoot dirigible hung single cable must difficult obstacle wind blowing hard Over sixty thousand dollers worth modifications made buildings frame work must challenging obstacle alot work would take get done sixty thousand dollers worth work frame workSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process that consists of 538 electors. The process is also the selection of the electors, and the meeting of the electors where they vote for the President and Vice President. The Electoral College should be changed to the election by popular vote in my opinion. Obviously having certain electors voting for president does not really take the populations vote into much consideration.\n\nIn 2012's election Obama recieved more electoral votes, but he did not win the popular vote and still got elected as president. What was even the point of the population voting if their votes did even count in the end. This upset a lot of people and probably got people to the point where they do not even want to vote anymore, cause their vote does not matter anyways. If the election was based on the populations vote, more people would vote and be happier with the results knowing that their vote actually has a say in electing the president.\n\nEach state can only cast one vote. Wyoming has one representative and California has fifty-five but they can only cast one vote. This makes obsolutely no sense. Each state may as well have 1 representative because no matter how many they have they only get one vote. Most voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference which is what the election should be. The election shouldnt just be for 538 people to decide, it should be for the citizens of the United States of America.\n\nDear Mr. Senator i really hope you take this into consideration. I hope you realize that the Electoral College is upsetting the people of the United States. Without the Electoral College it wouldnt matter how big a state is or how many representatives it has because it would be the peoples votes. A large state would not get that much more attention because there would not be any representatives. Many people would realize it is a lot more fair this way. Thank you!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez mood created author loving caring appreciative loving basicly called everyone thier family For example paragraph says My parents always kept thier arms thier door open many people call family knowing would us Another mood caring wanted thier children better life A example My mother father come country courage give thier children better life leaving thier friends families career country loved This shows care thier kids One last mood appreciative The barriers work strong high parents accept might able find Jobs deserve start thier life These moods created authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars impose major safety concerns for citizens on the road. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" goes into detail about one of the latest projects automotive companies are working on: self driving cars. Giving the readers insight on both the positives and the negatives of these automobiles, though the negatives seem to outweigh the positives in my opinion.\n\nIn paragraph seven the article brings the readers attention to the numerous amounts of sensors that companies use for these cars. This would mean that the car would be able to sense incoming cars or objects around it. That being said, it also brings up a lot of concerns. Things go wrong all the time for regular cars such as the air bag not working, the brakes giving out, and malfunctions that cause them to shut down altogether. So, if these things happen to regular cars, what's keeping them from happening to self-driving cars?\n\nThe text states that the passengers will be notified if anything goes wrong, but what if they aren't? That could possibly leave the passengers completely unaware of an impending problem. Whether that problem be a construction zone, heavy traffic, an object in the way, or even another driver. This would leave the passengers completely vulnerable to an accident.\n\nThere is also another problem with the \"self-driving\" cars, they are not completely self driving. It is said that in these cars there either has to be a driver\n\nready to take the wheel at all times in case of an emergency or they have to have their eyes on the road and their hands on the wheel at all times. This would mean that even in the self-driving cars there are many situations in which the passengers will still have to drive.\n\nSelf driving cars involve way to many risks that can be detrimental to the lives of the passengers and the people around them. I agree that in theory they do seem interesting but in reality it doesn't seem possible to have a fully functioning, safe self-driving car. Self-driving cars are one of those projects where the current risks are too drastic to ignore.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "excerpt The mooring mast many obstacles builders Empire state building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The first thing safety And states used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The greatest obstacle use mooring mast nature back ship would swivel around around mooring mast They would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The siggests that studyiing Venis is worhy in pursuit despite the danger it presents becuase he want to explore that place.They say Venus is the planet closest place to the planet earth.But also it has the hotest surface.Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. Also it says it has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nThe planet Venus has many wonders undiscovered.Like they believe back then that Venus used to be just a big ocean.But now its just a big dry planet and thats why they should find more about the planet.Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, moutains, and craters.Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of spacece travel.\n\nAlso notable, Venus has the hottest surface tempeerture of any planet in our solar system.Even though Mercury is closer to our sun.Beyond high pressure and heat.Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruptupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nSo there are plety of things at Venus and plenty of secrets to unlock.But also NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus.For example, some simplified electronics made for silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\n\nIn conclution the siggests that studyiing Venis is worhy in pursuit despite the danger it presents becuase he want to explore that place.They say Venus is the planet closest place to the planet earth.But also it has the hotest surface.Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. Also it says it has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my own opinion, I think that technology should not be able to read a students emotional expressions because people are not a big fan of technology reading their emotions, technology is taking over the simple things in life, and what if a student doesn't want their emotions read out loud.\n\nThe first reason why I think that technology should not be able to read a student's emotional expressions is because a lot of people don't like the advancements of technology these days. some people want life to be simple again, where all you had to do was talk to a person, and figure out how they are feeling. Not technology that can read a persons emotions, and its kind of lazy. Social communication is based around how someone can personaly connect with someone else by figureing out what their emotions are.\n\nThe second reson why I think that technology should not be able to read a students emotional expressions is because technology is taking over the simple and easiest things in life. People need to be able to have a simple confersation, and try to figure out someone elses emotional state. Not this new technology that can read emotions for you, if people can read emotions correctly they can get off on the wrong foot with someone.\n\nThe third reason why I think that technology should not read a students emotional expressions is because what if a student doesn't want to say all there emotions out load, and doesn't want anyone to know all of their emotions.Someone probably doesn't want to share that they are scared or they are having fear. Most people don't want their emotions read because they want other people to figure them out themselves. The software reads your emotions in percetages, so it gives you more than one emotion, and that will give people more stress if the software gives more than one emotion to people they don't want them seeing.\n\nIn conclusion, the reason that I think technology should not be able to read a studnents mind is because people are not a big fan of technology reading their emotions, technology is taking over the simple things in life that people need, and some people don't want there emotions read out loud so people can see or hear them. In my opinion, I think that technology is getting way to advanced and we should go back to simpler times.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to become a hero? Have you wanted to help people through tough times? Well I know the job just for you! A Seagoing Cowboy. My name is Luke and I was a seagoing cowboy. One day my friend invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I knew I couldn't resist the opportunity. It was 1945 and World War II was all over Europe leaving cities in ruins. Luckily, many nations came together to help support Europe. The UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were being shipped overseas. My friend and I both signed up.\n\nWe joined the group because we knew it would be an experience of a lifetime. We also wanted to help people and animals in need. It felt so good to be able to be called a hero. You also get to see many countries and their landmarks. They give you freetime to go and explore the city or town. You learn so much from the cultures and the different people who live there. Although it takes a lot of time, it is definitly worth the trip. You are so proud of yourself for helping people and animals. There is a lot of work involved and you have to be willing to do it. In the end though, it pays off.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy opened up a whole new world for me. It was definitly an adventure that I will never forget. It made me more aware of people and their needs. My family hosted a number of people from all over the world. It brought a new light into our eyes. We now know that not all people have what we have. We learned that we need to stay humble no matter how much we have. So go ahead, see what new adventure is waiting for you as a Seagoing Cowboy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author presents both negative and positive aspects for the driveless cars. I think that there are positive and also negative aspects for the driveless cars. In the story, the author states that google cofounder sergey brin imagines a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore. He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driveless cars form a public transportation taxi system. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\n\nThere are positive and negative aspects for the driveless cars. Some of the positive aspects are how the driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Google has had driveless cars that could drive themselves under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\n\nBut these driveless cars also have some negative aspects about them. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specfic conditions since 2009. When it says specific conditions I'm thinking that it can't really drive it's self all the way. Google cars aren't truly driveless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. So what roadblocks lie ahead for the autonomous car?\n\nDriveless cars may not be a good aspect for the future because the driveless cars are not really driveless after all. When the driveless car is driving itself sooner or later the driver would have to take over and start to drive their selfs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mister Norton\r\n\r\n I have visited your courses since my teen years.They have improved my Spanish skills and have assisted me in my knowledge-hunting.However,as you know currently I am working as a cook in the \"High Street\" cafe.Firstly,I had a flexible timetable,but now the cafe is the lake of staff,hence to this I have to change my shifts.Due to,this I can't carry on your course anymore.However,the staff manager told me that in the next 2,months they will be searching for new members for our cafe.Perhaps,in the nearest,future I will be able to continue my studying.I have no clue if I can pause my studying and continue it for some months or if I must start applying next semester,but if you can provide me with such a useful opportunity it is going to be perfect. \r\n\r\n Hope you got me right,hope we will find the right way to deal with this problem. \r\n\r\n Sincerely,AndrewSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that employees should be forced to comply with a specific dress code or it is their outcome that matters. Personally, while I agree that the way of dressing should be considered as an irrelevant factor in many workplaces, I believe that dress codes still exist for good reasons in some professions.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, staff's productivity is much more important than how their appearance is. If employees have been restricted to a certain regulation related to clothing, they might not feel that much freedom to produce creativity. For example, there is a furniture company in my hometown which is famous for its avangard design not determining any dress code to curb its staff. Moreover, by introducing any form of dressing, workers might lose the chance to present their personality to their co-workers and that company therefore would not have a progressive, positive atmosphere to boost applicability.\r\n\r\nHowever, it has been proved that in some careers dress codes are effective factors. Firstly, a certain, well-known uniform can provoke a feeling of trustworthiness in people's hearts. For instance, we would not rely on a fireman or a police officer if they did not dress up in their specific uniforms. Secondly, in some places like hospitals certain clothes are not only pivotal to cleanness but also inform people of data like how they are talking to whom they should refer to by their differences. Finally, similarities in the way of dressing could lead to a sense of unity in any company. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although the performance of workers is vital to employers and dress codes should not be forced, I believe that there are still positive aspects of following dress regulations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology rapidly advancing and has many benefits. These benefits can be seen anywhere but especially in classrooms, as schools are always looking to innovate in new ways to make their students smarter, more comfortable, and learn more overall in class. One of these technologies is the Facial Action Coding System or F.A.C.S which allows computers to identify human emotions, this technology would be very valuable to students and their learning experience.\n\nThere is lots of value in adding this to the learning experience. For example a computer could adjust the lesson by seeing the look on your face. It can do this since the F.A.C.S. system can quantify the muscles behind human emotion giving an accurate representation of what the person is feeling. If a student is happy with the lesson the system could be used to shorten this lesson since the student likely already knows it and if the student is confused or disgusted by the lesson the program can continue it till they are satisfied with their skills in it and have learned what is neccessary.\n\nThere are some cons to the F.A.C.S system right now though. First, the F.A.C.S system is expensive and requires a super powerful computer to use. Second, A student may be satisfied even when not knowing a lesson. Third. the F.A.C.S system could be incorrect in some aspects as it does not have as wide a range of emotions as we feel.\n\nHowever even though it is flawed these flaws can be fixed. It is likely in the future that the cost of the F.A.C.S system go down as things like telephones and computers have done. It is also very likely that the accuracy of the F.A.C.S system goes up as time goes on things like the cellphone and television we're very primitive concepts at the beggining of their life but have advanced and flourished since then. So the flaws of the F.A.C.S system in schools are minor compared to the benefits.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is truly changing the game when it comes to technology. Soon, it could change the education field as well. This could cause a revolution in education make it easier for students to learn and easier for them to excel if done right, which hopefully it will be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When my friend told me about how he was going Europe and wanted me to go, I was the happiest man alive. I was happy that I was going to Europe, but even happier that I was going to be a part of the United States Relief and Rehabilitation program. On this program you have the chance to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. This is a wonderful opertunity for everyone to take.\n\nI said that the cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy. We have fun doing our work and also have fun with our extra time. When the animals our dropped of, on the way home we play games such as table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whilltling. This games help us pass time do we are never bored.\n\nWhen I was little in worked on my aunt Katie's farm which had prepared me for the dangers at sea. On my second trip I served as a watchman. My jobs was to check on the animals every hour and report back to the captain. I was running back to the animals when I almost fell over the rail. There are a lot of fun things to do on the job, but there are also some risks you take.\n\nI am very grateful for this opportunity because it made me more aware of animals and people of other counties and their needs. This awareness stays with me leading me family to host a number of international visits for many year after.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think censorship matter library due fact books magazines music movies liked different people everywhere If like something said seen materials read watch listen People different tastes like listen watch read Some people might like rap music might like rock music People like rock music might like rap languauge used songs This people listen types music listen type music find offensive I like rock metal music rap little offensive I lot family members say shouldnt listening music language Some people say reading certain things prefferance sitting doctors office would like read magazine sitting around If start going magazine find something like take offense either keep flipping pages put magazine You think people enjoy interested something might find offensive The best thing put think directed towards Magazines sorts stuff hidden beyond pages sometimes look cover see things written magazine Sometimes help decide rather read Movies always fun watch matter occation Some people like certain movies action comedy romance drama Some people might like action due fact violence almost movies Some might like comedy rude humor There alot types movies producers fault like People make different movies everyone alike Some people might get offended contents movie could help reading movies seeing I think cencorship matter library due fact books magazines music movies liked different people everywhereSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It seems that the ‘click’ has become the mere criterion of media and thus, in order to maintain a steady stream, news reports and reviews focus more on eye-catching and stunning events and achievements like glorious actresses on the red carpet and entrepreneur on the rich list. This emphasis on appearance and triumph but ignorance on courses and other factors definitely delivers wrong messages to the whole younger generation. \n\n \n\nIt is undeniable that idols with remarkable achievements empower ordinary people in different aspects in social contexts like war heroes, diligent scientists, devoted actors and talented players, who indicate the importance of precious qualifications people should acquire and the process to their final destinations. However, all these are neglected with the promotion on wealth, the result of exertion, and glamour, partly nature and partly nurture out of wealth, for general people, especially the young, are hardly able to observe.\n\n \n\nAs a result, there are several negative impacts our society should bear as a whole. Now that the path to fame is hidden and its urge is irresistible, youngsters will have to deploy their own strategy in its realization. Therefore, various and sometimes extreme behavior like crimes and live self-mutilation do harm to others and themselves. As well as that, their confidence can be destroyed when they realize it is impossible to fill the immense gap and this may lead to idleness. Another group of them may imitate those standards and ways of living, luxurious but unaffordable, which put the young in plastic surgery and debts and cause a series of social problems. \n\n \n\nBased on the reasons aforementioned, many youngsters step off the right track because of appearance and money-oriented social values, and the press thereby should not advocate gleaming parts of celebrities’ stories, but also reveal the hardship and industriousness at the back.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In view of the food shortage around the world, the idea of having insect-based protein is raising. According to recent research on the willingness to consume insects as food, it shows that the countries likely to accept insect products are Mexico with 71% of people willing to eat insects, followed by Peru and Thailand, which have 58% and 56 % of the population accept the idea. While Russia, Australia and USA against having bug-based foods the most that only 32%, 34% and 35% of the general public are willing to taste insects.\nHowever, it is doubtful that utilizing insect-based food is a solution to the food crisis. The research also stated the market price of insects. The general price of insects is at least double compared to plant-based food like rice. The price of some kinds of insects like weaver ants and bamboo caterpillars is even triple the price compared to beef. Having bugs as a new protein source is still a question mark at this moment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It day I way school My friend walking lived street He lived houses away always walked school together Well particular day decided wear pair sneakers absolutely traction bottom shoe snow I slipped times never fell We laughing I would right middle saying something id almost fall We got school started telling everyone I joined It pretty funny even school I would almost fall floors wet dried snow I thought walking home changing shoes I would wait lunch I could nt leave school would get trouble After first period I found puddle water started sliding across fun My friends tried shoes much traction The bell rang second period start I headed class It fun trying get class I slid around everywhere Once I got class teacher told going field trip ponds I skip teacher walking right behind We boarded bus started heading ponds My teacher called names make sure He must done every minutes It pretty annoying The bus driver playing country music I nt really mind country music day I nt really want listen I went get ipod pocket found nt I left house I rushing get school We finally arrived ponds unloaded bus begin field trip Our teacher told us go close ponds fell would soaked bus driver would nt let us back bus I thought talking smack I asked bus driver serious The bus driver told got wet would wait us dry nt get seats wet Again I thought bunch bull We met tour guide dude started listening tell us history ponds used While walking around ponds I started slide ground I grabbed onto friend I would nt fall pretty bad balance fell Everyone started laughing well My friend nt think funny first But got started laughing joked I could nt stand right On way back school talked learned would want go back learn even volunteer work ponds I thought would pretty fun I nt slip around whole time We unloaded bus headed school I found little puddle found earlier nt dried I got running start slid across I nt fall time The bus brought us back time last class day unfortunately I got gym asked teacher going playing He told going upstairs wrestling mats play dodge ball game Upstairs wrestling mats small area went small class I lucked big time take shoes play mats I got done bell rang tell us school I got dressed normal clothes headed home My friend waiting outside We started heading home I slide around every step I took The sun melted top layer snow turned ice I looked laughed He laughed The whole way home I skating ice It really fun day Except right I got home I fell deck step icySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When drive I patient When car I really patient takes hours plus extra time spend going restroom lunch plus stay night But road That I need patient I bring car bag entertain I contains book ped paper My dads laptop also A big factor ipod Exposcally I dont like legs got hate felling But end result I love patient enough get end factor bestSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, more crowds argue that the authority should take responsibility for and provide financial aid for the old population who are already retired, while other groups of the community claim that the public have a responsibility for themselves they should an aware to save cash during their working years to find their retirement. I fairly believe that the ministry should pay more attention to old people who have not able to produce and earn wages now.\n\nIn terms of disadvantages, it is obvious that if politics take more concern for the retired crowd, this means that taxes on the population who work now will increase. Take an example, when the government plans to build something new facilities such as a nursing home, which bill they spend all from a group of community who working now. Furthermore, it is hard to ensure that old people will use the money that the government support effectively. Take some examples, according to the daily news, more and more elder population spend money on a gamble or drinking alcohol instead of spending money on what they need.\n\nDespite the above disadvantages, I consider that all inhabitants have a responsibility to take care of the community who have hard work for half of their life. Moreover, the government can do many different types of things to improve and make their life better. For example, the care can set up more activities and more elderly concern centres, convene volunteers to visit these old people's homes look after them, and chat with them, that kind of thing doesn't spend a lot of cash but make earlier people feel valued. Also, for those crowd who don't have offspring and were born into poor families, it is difficult for them to effort daily costs without a working salary, that's why the regime should give them financial aid. Moreover, the ministry can build training courses and give the retired population an opportunity to work again.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that with unbelievable energy gathered from individuals’ power, the government has a responsibility to every country's residents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this technology is a great idea. I believe that this technology could help students in school, because there are a lot of students that normally don't like the way that the teacher is discussing the topic so the student wouldn't pay any attention to the teacher therefore the student doesn't do well on that topic because he or she didn't like the way that the teacher was disciussing it.\n\nI believe that this technology would increase our graduation percentage all across the U.S and different countries. The main reason that students don't graduate is because they either didn't know the topic because they didn't pay attention to the teacher while they were discussing the topic becasue they didn't like the way it was being described to them. Or just becasue they didn't care about school and didn't want to go anyways, so they just went and didn't pay any attention.\n\nThis is why I believe that this technology is an amazing idea. For one reason it will increase our graduation percentag and it will help the fact that students might actually like going to school because they enjoy the way that the topic is being told to them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Years ago, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft had snapped a photo of a peculiar mesa. While searching for a landing site, it spotted a landform shaped like a human face. This picture was snapped from a region of Mars called Cydonia. Mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab were quite surprised to see a face staring back at them on their monitors. Not long after, it was simply brushed off. Martian mesa's were common around Cydonia, even though this one had been a little more strange. A few days later, NASA released the photographs for the public to witness, attracting many to the wonder of Mars. It had become very popular after that, so much that it became a pop icon for a while.\n\nIf a fellow comrade were to say that the Face was created by aliens, I wouldn't disagree or agree. It's just another discovery that the world is making, and it would be a bit unnerving to think that there is something wandering Mars. \"It could've been the planet's wind, scratching off bits of the rocky hills.\" I would reason. There may be a few people out there who would agree and there are some who would disagree with my idea. I, personally, would be skittish about other lifeforms in the galaxy. I like to believe that we, as a race, are alone; But that can't be possible, now could it? There has to be someone else out there, in this ever expanding universe. It wouldn't be reasonable to not think that we're the only ones here, waiting for something to come and find us, or us find them.\n\nBut, right now in this moment, I'd say that it was just a natural landform. \"It was there for a while probably.\" And I would look at them in the eye, believing that it was just a unique mesa and only take it like that until furhter evidence. I would have to see it to believe it, as some say. I would have to look at an alien to actually say that they are real. Until then, I will keep believing that there isn't someone else out there.\n\nIn conclusion, there is no real way to agree or not. Most likely, there are other lifeforms waiting for us out there. It would just be a matter of time, a game of hide and seek for all of us. I just hope that we find peaceful beings, who don't want to take over our world. For now, though, it is just a landform that we can find on Cydonia often.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reisdents of VAUBAN that are car owners are allowed to park in two places in a large garage. alos at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home. some of the citizens where not to happy about the plan of having no car almost 4,000 drivers were fined, according to reuters 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine.\n\nAt the Mobile World conress last year in Barcelona, Spain, Bill Ford, executive chir man of the Ford Motor Company, laid out a bsiness plan for a world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical or undesirable. he proposed partnering with the telecommunications inustry to create cities in which pedestian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportaion traffic are woven into a cconneted network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\n\nLevittown and Scarsdale, Newy York suburbs with spread-out homes and private garages, were the dream towns of thw 1950s and still exert a strong appeal. But some new suburbs may well look more Vauban-like, not only in developed countries but also in the developing world, where emissions from an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today education and sport play a very important role in our lives. Some parents think that studying the subjects of their children is less important than the activities they do which I strongly agree with that do exercises have to have more time and attention than studying and the reasons will be presented in the coming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, doing exercise helps to be healthy so that people can makes everything well when they have good health. However, the students can focus more on their learning because the activities they do recharge them with a power they need to concentrate. So, when people play and do activities they will be more effective and have a positive impact on their bodies that can impact positively on their lives a whole.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, playing games can help children to communicate better with whom they play with and that can make them have a positive personality with high self-confidence and this can help them to build a strong personality and develop relationships. Therefore, when children contact with weird they will have a new idea, information and sharing culture influence with others. For example, some games require many numbers of players and this can make them help each other and lead the team very well. So, people can benefit from sports they do in many ways.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, doing activities is considered one important factor for a healthy lifestyle which can work as a power and an energy for students to continue their days well. In my overview, I agree that doing activities is better to do it much more because it can make people healthier and I advise parents to let their children play outdoor games to be able to enjoy and get more energy and clean breathing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of driverless car has been in the minds of many for years. Some companies have come a long way since the idea was first thought of. I strongly believe the topic of driverless car should be one to truely think about because it could help so many people in many different ways.\n\nAlthough these cars have some problems they can easily be corrected if enough people come together and really think about it. It is progress that one company has created a car that it will do 90% of the driving for people. These cars are the turning point for the enviroment as well because they will allow the car to use less fuel which means less pollution for the earth.\n\nPeople have pictured cars that can do so much more than the cars we hace today. These cars use numerous sensors to detect any possible trouble for both the driver and the car itself. This can be the start of something even bigger and better in the future depending on the people who truely care about it and wants to see progress done.\n\nAs stated these cars can help many people with different problems. say you are sick and need to go tp the hospital but can't phisically drive yourself, that is were the driverless car comes in. Without the need for a human driver at the wheel the car can drive you to the hospital with no problem.\n\nIn conclustion if someone asked me my position on driverless cars I would straight out tell them to go for it because I strongly believe that it will help the human population, the enviroment and above all it will change the world for years to come. Who knows what will come next for these cars or for anythings on earth for that matter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story plays huge part final outcome The author makes mention travelling high deserts California June This sentence alone tells reader hot And hot standards gets degrees maybe noon That means day starts By noon s past Also author comes sign marked Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit makes note hes going mph Before reaches sort civilization already drunken water last tentalizing sips This main problem lack water He drank beginning ride thinking hed okay regretted laterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many resons that people should do that. #1 is that it it would be some much fun to go explor places that you havent been befor, and go see all the unic culters that many people dont ever get to see in their life. #2 is that you could get closer with some of yor friends and family if they go with you, or invite you to go with them. Reson #3 is that you could meet new people learn other languiges too. Also you cold become part of a family they could take you in and youk cold have another really close friend from some were far far away from were you live.\n\nIn the story Luke said\"It would a chance of a life time.\" An I think it would be a chance of a life time. In my opinone I would do it. I would love to go on a trip tio eventure around the world. I love learning new cultres and to see what what it could help me with in my life. Also that it would be cool to do a report on all the places that you whent to in the proses. If I were him or any one els that got the opertunity I would say yes to doing it.\n\nIn my family its important to learn and get youst to doing thatbecause my famoly dose alot of edventering. We go to the D.R, Hawaii Colorado, and alot more places too. I think that any kid that gets invited should that, because what they learn stiks to them and it stays with them for a long time and if they dont then they missed a big opertoonity to do that.\n\nI went to the DR for the first time when is like 5 years old and I learnd a lot of spanish when i as there. I also made a lot new friend people my age people that older younger than me too. An we bonded rely whell and i didnt know how to speek a word of spanish!!! I had a translator that helped me know what they were saying tio me and for them to tell the kids what i was saying too. i leand a lot of spanish when i wa there and i still know to say a lot of things in spanish too. I still kow my beat friens name in the D.R. We taught eachother how t say the alfabet in English and Spanish.\n\nJust saying I had the best time of my life and I stayed in the same place the hole time and I still lernd a lot in one day.\n\nAnd the hole time I was there I was so happy till it came to the part when I had to say by to all my new good friend that I made there. Its hard to leave but then you get to all the other places and meet other people there too.\n\nPeople that want to explor should do this in order to see what ist like and if thay want to do this for the a long time or not. Just one time at a different place then were you live is awesome because you never want to leave. You could also go see uther animal sthat you have never seen befor in a zoo or that you have never herd of too. I love to see knew thing even if I have heard of it,or not, or seen it, or not it is still really cool to experiance that. An I think kids, aldolts, teens, or eve the elderl would stil love to see that or experiance that time with the family.\n\nAnd that is my reso to do tha or a least tr yit out for the first time. It could only come once in a lfe time dont let it go to wast, because if you did than you made the biggest mustake of your life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars Is a natural landform. It is formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes. Even though many people beileve it was created by aliens few scientist do not. It is a natural landform, because a few days after the spacecraft was circling around the planet, and taking pictures NASA unvieled the image for everyone to see. The caption read, \" huge rock formation... wich rembles a human head.\"\n\nParagraph 7 on April 5, 1998, Mars flew over Cydonia for the first time. The team was taking pictures ten times sharper than the original photos. Thousand of web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared seeing that, it was a natural landform. Also that there was no alien monument after all. There is proof that after (MOC) took better pictures they were able to see that there was no alien monument after all.\n\nIn my conclusion the Face mistaking as something created by aliens is really just a natural landform. According to paragraph 12 the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given pie chart depicts information on UAE government expenditure in 2000. And total budget used was AED 315 billion. Overall it is clear that two expenditures, Social security and Health, and Health and personal social service occupied almost half.\nTo go into detail, Social security spent the highest cost, just AED 100 billion. It is approximately a third, compared with a total expenditure of AED 315 billion. In addition, Health and personal social service was the second highest cost of AED 53 billion. Its expenditure is around one sixth in total. As a result, these expenditure will be AED 153 billion and it is almost half expenditure spent for them in total.\nAnother worth notable point is that Education spent AED 38 billions as the third highest money went. Interestingly, these three expenditures, Defence AED, Other, and Debt interest were almost the same. It was 22 billion, 23 billion, and 23 billion respectively.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, also known as the Evening Star. People now a day just know it as a world we can't reach or just anthor worthless plant.\n\nThose claims are false and the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" tell you it all. The author's studys show that Venus is a world we need to explore becuse of the informatiom we can get from it. Also the chance of it being a second earth.\n\nYes Earth has a sister plant, but its not as good as people think. Venus is not in a condition for humans to live on, a human aircraft has not even been on the plant in over a decade. According to the aritcle \" A think atomosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\" thoses number are not good for man. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature of any of the planets in our soler system. Atmospheric pessure for venus is 90 time greater then what we experience on our own plant. Yes venus is not a good place to live, but its a good place to explore and here is why.\n\nVenus might be be a big gassed up plant but there are sighs of it looking like our plant once. Studys have shown Venus to have covered big oceans and forms of life. The plant still has it's rocky sediment that have features simlar to mountains, and valleys. Imagine if this was a plant like Earth, and think about how much we could learn from it. Mankind could learn about rocks and how things died so we can be ready for our plant when are dies. If we started to study Venus more in dept i feel like we could uncover more detail, about what came before us and how things happen.\n\nAll in all i feel like we need to study Venus just becuse there was once sign of life. The anwsers we could get would help our plant alot, becuse who know our plant might be like Venus one day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The first obstacle described paragraph A thousand foot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would stress building s frame This means would need strength whole building If nt building would maybe fall The next obstacle described paragraph The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature This means wind strong would take land safely Also wind could cause dirigible fly away The obstacle described paragraph The practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas This means could target destroy building Another thing ever fell would kill lot people These obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock overcome project cancelledSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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