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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto he starts off by telling the percentage of her emotions he says that \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 peprcent angry.\" According to the words of Dr. Huang he says \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" he says how can we truly know that this software actually works? well \" According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only to express emotiions, but also may even help produce them.\" but that doesnt quite answer our question is that data of the Mano Lisa accurate that she's 83 percent happy? we have friends and we know how they feeling becuase we see their expressions on their faces the way they smile or frown our facial expressions say alot about us that's how others can probably get right whats going on in our heads because our head has the most important tool of all the brain. The brain feels evrything it process evrything going through our life sometimes we do things we later regret and our expression changes inmediatily becasue we wasn't proccesing it carefully. In paragraph 6 Dr. Huang says \"The Mona Lisa demostration is really intented to bring a smile to your face,\" i believe it's true because it's not just a painting its a great painting and if the software is actually able to read the emotions it's a great thing that science has evolved a lot over years i believe that if it actually works it would be valuable for students to used it so the public can know how they are feeling and anything is wrong with someone to get it checked up. This wouldn't do harm to anyone and it does sound like a great software that actually work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone today gets offeneded daily So go library see offensive material shelfs different rest day However minds poluted influenced offensive materials right keep thier minds way One solution problem could start rating books magazines like movies The material rated adults gets put one area lirary lower rated material put display public The higher rated put area seen everyday public kept secret thus protecting uninfluenced minds people wanting said material still way Another solution might get rid censored material It opinion experience corrupts mind soul causes man things nature Men nothing better sit read look things ment inside marrage often accoplish nothing great value life time They thus hinderence soceity But accsess material need something fill time In case find good classic read maybe pick dusty shelf This thus leaves labraries choice They leave library way want put offensive material seclueded room remove definent offensive material keep soceity feet accomplishing great feats next generation odserve Thus amount offending someone goes maybe library attendence goesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are soon to be a things that wil become largely debated. Causing wrecks, lawsuits, un-neccesary injuries these cars are death traps. Motorsport enthusiest will not stand for their favorite sport to be replaced or even removed. Also, cars are not just means of transportation, some people take pride in the history of the vehicles, it would be a shame if that was ripped away.\n\nI believe that the driverless cars are not the future of transportation.\n\nThe nice 2016 Chevrolet Camero that you so dearly dream of could be setting in a meuseum in twenty years due to the up and coming changes in the automobile industry. The newest improvement in the world of car is that they will no longer need a driver behinde the wheel. As a kid everybody thought that there would be cars of this nature due to the image that cartoons put into our heads. It is nice to dream of such a thing but, that becoming a reality is not something that should exist. The reason they are in cartoons is because they shouldnt be anywhere else. Being in the real world is a dangerous gamble that could cause many people to be potentially harmed.\n\nThe only plus side of this car is that it will support jobs. By that I mean lawyers and judges because of all the lawsuits that will begin to rack up.\n\nMany people make their livings by using their cars. Racecar driver, smokey, the bandit, all famous because of a car that they drove. I gaurentee that not a single die\n\nhard NASCAR fan woud give up the sport for a car with no driver. Thousands of people gather around annually to wath their favorite drivers take the lead but with a driverless car it will be a thing of the past. Even when they are not wathing a race they will be gathered around their TV wathing a movie, more than likely about cars, and wishing they were at the race.\n\nA car is not just that it is a sense of pride. Project cars, re-builds, and even cars right off the lot are all a sense of pride. Muscle cars, SUV's, sports cars, and hatchbacks are all owned by people who take pride in them. Taking away the pride of sitting behinde a wheel and having full control of everything, having the freedom to go wherever, even if it just sits in the garage it is a sense of something. I dont even hav a car of my own and I still feel honored when I climb into the seat of a car.My firs car will be a car that I take care of, making sure that it is clean and then nobody dings the door, or finders the binder. Cars are pride taking that away is what is wrong with america.\n\nI do understand that having driverless cars gives the availibility to do a lot of things. However, if the car still moniters whether or not ou are still aware of the road whats the point? You still have to watch what you are doing so you ight aswell\n\njust take the wheel. Still having to sit ther with a wheel in front of you and the gas pedals the same why dont you just take control of both of them? I think it is just lazy. Another thing wrong with america.\n\nDriverless cars are not the future of america. They will increase the driving acident number and the lawsuit number. Rip away a great ameican sport. A strip some people of their pride and joys. If we didnt have cars we wouldnt still be america.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives described mood created The mood grateful proudThe mood memoir For example Narciso parents leave home Come United States Struggled financially personally living cold winters facing Cultural hardshipsHowever mood also grateful Narciso grateful Parents sacrificed better life taught made moode memoir gratefulLastly mood also proud The parents come Country courage without Knowledge language culture leaving families friends behind Just Could better Life made mood reader s proud parentsThese moods created memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it talked about the position on driverless cars informing people about the driverless cars and what it can do. Google's driverless car can be a good thing worldwide. The driverless car is safe and it has been driven for more than half a million miles without a crash, although Google is not truly driverless it alerts the driver to take over when it needs pulling out of the driveway, the car is able to handle driving at a speed up to 25 miles per hour, and the car comes with a special touch sensor that can make sure the driver is able to keep hold of the wheel.\n\nThe car is safe and Google has cars that was dable to drive on its own since 2009 and their cars were able to drivemore than half a million miles without a crash or an accident occuring. The cars is not as independent as it should be. When the car need to back out of a driveway it alerts the driver to take over and while it is dealing with traffic issues when the road is busy and need help redirecting where to go when there is roadwork or an accident. The car is safe and smarter on the roads when stuff is not going on unexpectedly on the road.\n\nThe car can handling driving up to the speed of 25 miles per hour which requires the driver of the vehicle to still stay alert because the car can not do everything a regular car can when somebody is driving it. When the driver is not paying attention the driver's seat is able to vibrate and let the driver know when there is on coming traffic occuring or any problems. To also get the drivers attention The Google car can announce when the driver should prepare to take over. The car also flash its lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. If the driver is sleeping when the car is watching the road they also watch the driver and pay attention to the driver to keep the driver safe.\n\nThe car comes with a special sensor to keep the driver and the car itself safe earlier in the '80s automakers did make speed sensors to create antilock breaks and later on the same sensors became advanced to watch out and respond to the dangers on the road that would occur. The special touch sensor can also make sure the driver is keeping their hands on the wheel. BMW crweated the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" to help out the driver alittle bit when the driver is in need of help with this Google car.\n\nThe driverless cars are proved to be safe because it alerts you when situations occur unexpectedly, if you fall asleep or if you are not paying attention the car with vibrate all by itself that way you are alert and see everything that going on around you when you not paying attention, the car has driven for more than a million miles without a crash occuring or an accident, it drives up to a maximum or 25 miles per hour, and the car comes with a special touch sensor that senses things.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increase in the number of visitors to tourist sites, nowadays, It has become a common thing to see used objects and containers thrown around tourist sites. Even worse, some foreigners who come to visit try to brainwash the local people and debunk their culture. Recently, People who have observed this has tried to organize a movement to try to avoid these and be responsible tourist. However, despite their claim, they are yet to get the trust of the public as many people believe it is impossible for every tourist to be responsible. In this essay, I will give my opinion on how hard it is to generalise for large groups of visitors and how it should be claimed and understood instead. \r\n\r\nThere are many visitors who really care and worry about the places they usually go to visit. And they usually come up with innovative ideas on how to improve the system in handling the preservation of culture and environment. For instance, last year 8 Australian tourists who went to visit a historical place in Sudan found the environment around to be in an alarming state. and Immediately after they went back home they were able to raise funds that will be used to clean the surroundings and renovate the historical area. So, although not every tourist is responsible, there are genuine tourists who want to protect the environment they go to visit.\r\n\r\nNeedless to say, however, there is a large swath of people who does things that harm the tourist sites. Some don't care about the objects they use and where they throw them. And others are busy trashing the local culture just because it doesn't align with their way of living or the culture they came from. For instance, during the last world cup people were criticizing Qatar for not allowing similar-gender marriage and trying to impose their own culture.\r\n\r\nTherefore, saying every tourist will be responsible is impractical. But at the same time, we can not generalize the acts of some bad people to every tourist as there are many good tourists who genuinely want to protect the culture and environment. So, the narrative that responsible tourists have started to pay attention to protecting the environment should not be taken literally and it should not be understood negatively. It instead should be encouraged and the people who took the initiative to start the movement should be appreciated as this is how things improve and eventually it might become a norm for every tourist.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I was a scientist on Mars with somone who thought the face was formed by aliens, I think I would disagree. I would disagree because aliens are not real and why would they just made a radom face into the ground. I would say that the land in that area is just deformed. I think that it is just Mother Nature, she put it like that, that spot is a natural landform.\n\nPeople might think that aiens are real but that saying is just a myth that some people that are nerds will belive. I use to think they were real and then I figured out they weren't. If they was real then when people or NASA went to a planet or just into space, why didn't those people every see them? If they did exist why wouldn't people take pictures when they were in space of the aliens? Why don't aliens exist?\n\nIf aliens do exist do you think they would attack you if they saw you? I would think that aliens would be on earth. What would aliens be like if they were on earth? would the Earth still be the same if they was on Earth. Who would controll them if the did exist.\n\nWould aliens be in a zoo, becuse they are a weird like creture/human. people should know that akiens aren't real becuase if they were they would be on earth and people would take pictures and other things. Some could kill you other could hurt you or do other horrible things to you. That face on the ground was a natural landform it was not formed by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you think that the \"Face\" on mars is proof of alien life, you are very wrong. Let me explain why. If you think that it is aliens then you obviously haven't seen the other two pictures taken over the years.\n\nThe other two pictures taken clearly show the mesa valleys and ravines in the formation. it is just a coincidence that it just so happens to look like a human face. The article even says that it is just a natural land formation nothing else. Cameras have proved it and so have telescopes. It is not an alien monument. The pictures that they took just need to be developed more to really show the valleys and ravines in the land formation.\n\nThe second time they looked at the face they used really good cameras and telescopes to see what it actually was! The picture that was taken in 2001 specificly shows what is on the surface of the land formation. So, really when you really think hard about it and think really deep about it it would seem like an alien formation as a sign to us that they are out there. But the photographs don't lie. it is just a natural land formation and nothing else just a really cool coincidence, that's all it is!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi, my name is Luke and I am in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. There are a lot of reasons why I love this program. This proggram is run by UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). They hired me to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. I think you should join this program and help me.\n\nRight away you will notice you can go so many places! If you are a small town boy going on cattle-boat trips, you're in for such a treat. You could possibly go to Europe and China and explore all day. You even get to go to the most special place ever, Acropolis and Greece! Maybe in Greece you'll find yourself at an age old theatre. You could go take a gondola ride in Vence, Italy, a city with streets of water. I got to tour an excavated castle and marveled at the Panama Canel on my way to China.\n\nYou may ask yourself,\n\n\"How am I suppose to have fun and pass time on board? Its very easy actually, especially on return trips from when the animals have already been unloaded. We all played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. All the time on the boat you can find something to do. You always have time to sight-see while you're on it. You also have time for table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games helped us pass some time.\n\nEven for all the work that had to be done, it wasn't that bad. You had lots of time for sight-seeing since it took a lot of time to get to one place to another. Caring for animals during the crossings kept us busy. It just kept us busy, it wasn't very hard. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lowers holds of the ship. Plus, stalls had to be cleaned. All of this wasn't bad at all, you just had to get use to the routine of it.\n\nIn conclusion, being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure.\n\nIt will open up the world to you if you use your time wisely. This program will definitly make you more aware of people in other countries and their needs. That awarness will stay with you, and you and your family could host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. I'm gratefull for the opportunity, and you will be too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System is going to be the next biggest thing is facial recognition software. While it does seem unethical and useless there actually are many uses for the Facial Action Coding System. Whether it be detecting exactly how much of a specfic emotion one is feeling to using the imformation found to brighten and improve the user's day, it also has a complex and unique technology behind it.\n\nThe FACS (Facial Action Coding System), is able to detect exactly how much of any specfic emotion that one is feeling. When experiments were preformed on the emensly timeless and classic painting, the Mona Lisa, painted by Leonardo da Vinci, it was recognized that the exact feelings in the painting were, \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\" (D'Alto paragraph 1). While this in and of itself does not seem like useful information, it still is information that noone had ever knew before. Who would have known that behind that small Mona Lisa smile, was fear, disgust, and anger?\n\nWithin the use of FACS the computer itself can bring up different videos and or pictures to help improve the owners overall mood, or solely provoct a laugh when the owner is feeling sad. \"The Mona Lisa demonstartion is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this cimputer can do. Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appers on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student us becoming confused or bored,' Dr.Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrcture.' The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expensive for video games or video surgery. 'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,' notes Dr.Huang. 'So computers need to understand that too.'\" (D'Alto paragraph 6). While again these things seem unethical it can open up a brand new door for facial recgontion technolog and overall improve the mental health or adults and teen alike. In our society teens and adults often struggle with mental health disorders. Using a computer like this can be beneficial to everyone alike because nowadays everything is done electronical. Having a mental disorder or feeling something on the inside is hard to detect and the use of this software could very well help expand the actions of being able to identifiy those feelings that lie underneath the mask of emotions.\n\nThe software itself behind FACS is intruguing and astundingly complex using several different methods of determining how the user is feeling. \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an 'action unit'. Then Dr.Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS. Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" (D'Alto paragraph 3). So the science behind this technolgy is not all comouter programmed, the has been research done by trained profesionslas as to correctly adapt the facial recogntioning software. As though it seems this entire process is done by computers there is also a human componate interowoven within.\n\nAs a whole as it does seems unethical the Facial Action Coding System is just he step forward needed in facial recognization. Using this technology allows us access to different way of identifiying emotions unknown to the public before. Using a mixture of both computer and human inferences and research we have made a new way of finding, improving, and helping others using facial recognition.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that i think it would be helpful but dangerous at the same time. Driverless cars can help you when you cant see something coming when you are driving . But we also have to be alert because the cars have not develope that much on driving themselves.The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure\n\nthe driver keeps hold of the wheel. in fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer , accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\n\nMost driving laws focus on keeping the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is the best achieved wit h the alert drivers. Even if the laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of a accident. If the technology fails whos fault will it be?. But the law is focus on keeping drivers because they want less accidents if something goes wrong.The also put motion sensors in the car for the acr to know when to brake when a car or something is near. In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of the antilock brakes. Within\n\n10 years, those sensors had become more advance to detect and respond to danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" introduces a program called FACS (Facial Acting Coding System) which is a system that allows computers to identify human emotions. The debate is whether we should allow these in the classrooms of schools to help us learn, my answer is yes, I do believe we should allow this program to be in the classrooms of schools. This program can't do anything but help the students who need it. The worst that can happen is the program turns out to be ineffective.\n\nImagine sitting in a classroom with your teacher, instructor, or whoever teaches you, you do it 5 times a week several times right? Okay so now imagine sitting in that class \"learning\" but really you're completely zoned out, you're just bored and so not interested with the material your instructor is trying to teach you. At this point where you're uninterested with what is being taught is where FACS come's in, this will read that you are not interested or bored and suggest to the teacher that maybe trying a new method might work just a little better. So instead of sitting through this class, bored as ever you can actually learn. If successful this would theoretically make kids more knowlegable and overall greatly improve test scores.\n\nHowever, the question of it not working would always be in the back of peoples mind, this isnt something that we get to only test and unfortunately this costs a pretty penny. as stated in the article \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" implying that it would cost more than a home desktop computer (which is not cheap) to run the program. not including the program cost, But just imagine if this were to work, the program has\n\nalready been tested on paintings, and now we're next. Academically the worlds average would rise due to this program.\n\nNot only would this program be used for school but it would be a little exciting to play with. As stated in the article, \"Shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" imagine getting a picture taken and it tells you how you truly are feeling, even if you tried to hide it. the program opens up paths to things that could lead on further than simply stating a percentage of disgust you have in your face. This is more than just a program, this is very well the future of technology.\n\nIn conclusion yes, I believe 110 percent we should have these in schools. this program can only benefit us, we woud test higher, learn more, it may even make us learn some things we didnt know about ourselves. The FACS program may need some work but if it does what it is supposed to, kids would be extatic to go to school. Why? Because students will be happy to learn about something they are interested about!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time patient christmas came aroud At first wanted christmas get But mom told I wait come soon So I waited waited I really wanted wii consle sims So finally christmass came got wonna Usually patient reason I becaused mom told come soon I learned really want something really want something patient faster comeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author tells us about the new technology, the Facial Action Coding System it describes your six emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. For example, how if you make a happy face at the computer, then you're happy and making a sad face at the computer means you're sad. But is that really how you feel deep down inside? Is the computer really correct?\n\nFirst of all, I agree with the Facial Action Coding System. I agree with the Coding System because the information would be so accurate because the technologhy is shaped as a face just like a human's face. The computer's face was built to have all the same muscles our face has. So the computer can make the exact same face we make and determine our facial expression. That's one way the computer can determine our facial expression.\n\nSecond of all, most people would say how does the computer determine my facial expression. They were faking a smile. The computer uses video imagery to see your neutral face expressions. For example, you can tell by your friends facial expression that something is wrong with them even if they're telling you everything is okay. Like the computer, the computer forms the same impressive calculation, it could paint precisely of how your facial expression is.\n\nThirdly, in fact The Facial Action Coding System, could be in classrooms also. Like when a web ad appears on you're screen depending on your mood, a similar ad may appear, or it won't show again and a whole different ad would appear. It could show you focused or if you're bored in class. I think that would be very helpful to the teachers. Also helpful to the students because if it shows the students bored the teachers won't teach that subject and the students would be more focused.\n\nLastly, the Facial Action Coding System could be really helpful to people in many ways. Like with friends, you can know your friends mood instantly by using the Coding System. Another way it could be helpful is in classrooms. The Facial Action Coding System can come in handy in the future. It could determine your mood even if you don't even know it. So I agree with the Facial Action Coding System.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 NASA scientists took a picture of a landform on Mars. Many people thought it looked like a human face. Some other people knew that it was just a landform that was common on Mars. I am here to tell you that is was just a natural landform. NASA has evidence that will backup this statement. In the following paragraphs I will tell you about the evidence, the camera technology, and how the media affected the responds of people.\n\nMany people will argue that the mesa on Mars is a face. Although it may look like a face, it isn't. In paragraph 1 it says, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common around Cydonia...\" This quote tells us that the scientists were used to seeing these large landforms around the region. NASA wouldn't release these images if they thought aliens were involved. The object you see in the picture is simply a landform with shadows in just the right spot.\n\nBack in 1976, the camera technology wasn't great. Many of the cameras had large pixles that made the pictures blury. In paragraph 10 it says, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" This quote proves that the camera technology has improved greatly. Some conspiracy theorists aruge that even though the picture was not at high resolution, you can still see a face. This may be true,but you can also clearly see the shadows that made it look like a face.\n\nThe media had a significant impact on the Mars event. In paragraph 5 it says, \"It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows...and grocery store checkout lanes for 25 years.\" This shows that the media has made people believe that there is a face on Mars.\n\nAfter going back and taking a picture of the face years after the original photo was taken, you can no longer see the face. In paragraph 10 it says, \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" This goes onto prove that NASA was right the whole time about the \"Face\" on Mars. This statement also shows that NASA was working on this mystery too.\n\nAfter looking at all the evidence and photos you can clearly see that the \"Face\" on Mars is just a landform. If you think there is life on Mars, think again. The face has entertained many people for years, so it is nice to finally put this mystery behind us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the younger generation is more responsible than the old days. It is often argued that some people think this could be beneficial to the growth of youngsters, while others hold opposite views. This essay will discuss the opinions from both sides and give my own opinion.\r\n\r\nPeople agreed that it is not helpful to children's growth if those youngsters bear more responsibilities with several reasons. Firstly, too much responsibility which could depress younger generation by taking many tasks, could destroy their childhood. For example, in many families, many kids about merely seven or eight years old already do houseworks so that they don't have time to enjoy quality time with their friends. Secondly, due to the occupation of time from those houseworks responsibilities, students show the incapable of studying missions. Finally, mental illness affects children's developments without parents or teachers properly guidance by explaining responsibility.\r\n\r\nWhereas, people believed that responsibility could mould younger generation to the better levels. Those adults who own more responsible during their childhood, could be more understandable on the value of the law. For instance, many studies indicated that kids who take responsibilities at their early ages are unlikely become criminals. This is because they fully understand ethic and moral from the lesson of commitment which lead them to have the sense of justices.\r\n\r\nFrom my point of view, I believed that children should bear more responsibilities because of they will show understanding of their parents and build up a strong connection to their relationships. By contrast, these kids could not have a better improvement and always rely on their parents like a giant baby.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although there are some negative implications, I believed that the aspects of positive of children taking responsibility are overweight the negative ones. To make them become more reliable and independent.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a new software that developes the improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. The system has six basic emotions-happiness, surpise, anger, disgust fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characeteristic movements of the facial muscles. The software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared againest a neutral face (showing no emotion. How does it work? The process begines when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\n\nThe argument talks about if the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable or not. The technology will idnetify what the students behavior is like. If a student doesn't want to show what they are feeling, the technology will solve it out. Empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.\n\nI think this technology is not valuable in a student's classroom. The student's emotional expressions will be easy to find out what they are feeling because it's in person. Mona Lisa painting needed the technolgy because no one knows what she is feeling like. This technology will be good use for paintings, pictures, etc, that it can't be expressed. The technology should only be used for educational purposes, not to find out what the student is feeling in daily. It is easy to see a genunie smile and a fake one. In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has revolutionalised the world in the last few years. In the near future, pundits reckon that machine will be taking over the work at present performed by humankind. I propound that using automation has numerous merits such as cost-saving and reduced accidents and the demerits like unemployment and increase dependency. This essay will discuss the reasons why I am holding this view.\r\n\r\nThe main advantage of using robots in performing jobs is reduced product cost with increased efficiency. By the automation enhanced precision in the final product can be obtained because of the reduction in error product will be more economical. Thus, a lot of time will be saved. For example, Amazon is using the fully automated line for their supply and logistic system which has minimised error and save hours of manpower. Therefore, with modernisation maximum utilization of resources can be achieved. Moreover, Space programmes and Military can use machines for their missions and can avoid human loss under extreme fatal conditions.\r\n\r\nOne possible drawback of using robots is the higher job losses. As the work will be taking over by the bots it may result in unemployment because employees were replaced by the droids. For instance, Tesla's new factory has a manufacturing process that is totally controlled by bots. Hence, excessive usage of droids could cause problems for humans. Furthermore, the usage of robots may make the human race lethargic and over-dependent on them.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is numerous positive impact of robotic advancement in our life but also has many downsides too. It has helped humans to solve complex problems under tough conditions. I opine that people cannot abandon technology now but we can ensure not to let it control us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is a program, and its main goal is to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that are shipped overseas. This might not sound fun or interesting. These trips might be half-year long trips, but the trips are life-changing experiences. I'll show you reasons why to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. These reasons are coming from a person who has joined the Seagoing Cowboys and served for three years.\n\nThe first reason is because of the experience you'll gain from the trips. The trips are life-changing. You have the benefits of traveling the world. You get to see and do a lot of things an average person wouldn't do. You get to see Europe, China, and Greece, and many other beautiful places. You might even take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy or pass the Panama Canal. The experience is an amazing one.\n\nThese trips can cheer you up. Like I said before, you get to travel to amazing places and do amazing things. These might sound like fun things to do, because they are. You might ask how you have fun while on the ship in the sea. You can play table-tennis, fencing, boxing, baseball, volleyball, or any other games that helped pass time. You have a lot of fun during the trips. At the same time, you're helping peope and other countries and serving as military service.\n\nLast but not least, you are more aware of the world. The trips open the world up to you. You're more aware of people of other countries and their needs. This awareness can change your life.\n\nAll in all, the Seagoing Cowboys is a great program to join. It's an opportunity of a lifetime. On these trips, you're gaining experience. You're visiting a lot of places and having a lot of fun. Your awareness of the world changes during these trips. In conclusion, the Seagoing Cowboys is a life-changing experience and an amazing opportunity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars are great. you dont have to drive when you are trying to put on makeup or do other things that u dont have time to do when you are in the house. It would make it easier when you have to go somewhere and you do it feel lke driving. There will be self driven cars in the future. It is a big negative on having self driven cars to one messup in the cars system and it can take away lifes. It could be a tragic accident from jus one messup. There is many things that can go wrong but not alot of things that can go right.\n\nHaving driverless cars have its pros and its cons in all I think it would be a good thing. If something goes wrong thought the dealership could have alot of legal problems. Then te us will have to change some of the laws if they make driverless cars. I think that druverless cars could be the next big thing if it becomes a sucess. there become a great what if factor if they go through with the driverless cars. What would be the point if you still have to hold the wheel when you have the so called driverless car about bmw.\n\nI think that driverless cars will be and great thing its will help with everyday driving. It can be just as bad as good . In the long run i think it will be and great thing and people will love it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table compares the propotions of urban and rural residents who enjoyed the four leisure time activities in 1990 and 2010.\nOverall, it is clear that both two groups would like to do some reading in both 1990 and 2010. However, in 1990, photography was the least popular activity for both urban and rural adults, while in 2010, the difference went to the animated play.\nIn 1990, 61% of urban people and 71% of rural people would more likely to take part in the reading activity, which was the most popular act compared to other activities. In the same year, playing took the second place, with 21% of urban people and 26% of rural people participating in respectively. At the same time, 10% of urban people and 18% of rural people choose animated play. However, photography was the least popular activity, with only 7% of urban people and 14% of rural people taking part in respectively.\nBy 2010, read still took the first place compared to other three activities, which had increased to 78% of people in both groups. Interestingly, photography took the escond place, with 17% of urban people and 24% of rural people participating in respectively. At the same period, 14% of urban people and 26% of rural people choose playing. Finally, animated play became the least popular activity, with a small fraction of 10% of urban people and 14% of rural people taking part in respectively.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although Venus has many dangers to it there are some parts of this planet that are very similar to Earth.\n\nBy having so many similarities to earth we could later bring life to Venus.\n\nAs well as Venus is right next to Earth so there wouldn't be many difficulties.\n\nThere are dangers to Venus but there are also some good qualities to it that could help us in the near future.\n\nVenus is similar to Earth, only in some ways but there are many dangers of going there.\n\nAs said in paragraph 3 \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Looking back at this, it is telling us all about the dangerd of even going to Venus. NASA has had previous missions but have failed because the spacecraft couldn't last a few hours after landing.\n\nNow obviously there has to be something on Venus or we wouldn't be going through all this trouble to get there. What is so good about Venus?\n\nYes, Venus does seem like a scary place if you read about it, but the only reason scientists want to look into it more is because of the similarities it has to our Earth.\n\nAs mentioned in paragraph 4 \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nToday, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Scientists want to look more into Venus because of what we could do with it.\n\nThere are many ways that Venus can help our next generations.\n\nAll in all, NASA has been working on a new spacecraft that will go to Venus.\n\nThis way we can find out what Venus can truly do for us.\n\nAlthough there are some threatning things among Venus, good comes from it too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigible dock One obstacles stress Yes stress This thousandfoot dirigible moored top Empire State building held single cable tether adds stress frame building Another obstacle builders faced safety Seeing dirigibles known use hydrogen rather helium would think hydrogen one go Unfortunately hydrogen fire caution extremely flamable So safety definitely another obstacle attempting allow dirigibles dock top empire state building A final obstacle builders faced nature This simply back ship would swivel around around mooring mast repeat violent currents would constantly shifting winds top building There would solution even dirigible tethered mooring mast These obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock informative excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon LstedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a computer that reveals the facial expression or feeling of someone. It is useless in a classroom or student composition. As translated through the ideas of Nick D'Alto who believes that using this computer in classroom or school based activities is a great idea. The computer is showing off how computers can crack the surface of 'amazing', but it is merely depriving and shameless.\n\nThe analytical images percieved by the computer bring no emotional or true connection between a student and another student. Through the entirety of 'Making Mona Lisa Smile', not once does the author mention anything about how the student would respond to these 'calculations' emotionally in a classroom. D'Alto elaborated by saying \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\", this just explains the ideas of the entire reading. The importance of this is outstanding, if the computer is only looking at number and muscle movements, then how would a student possibly react to looking at people as merely numbers and respondents of action, and not true emotions.\n\nThe idea of looking at students and just thinking of there emotions, the thing that makes them human as just numbers is just degrading. The unbareable thought of someone looking at your smile and dissecting it was not covered in the reading, it was seen as numbers for a science class like some small expirement. As said by the author when he asked \"Can we actually 'calculate' emotions-like math homework\", obvioulsy pointing to the fact that yes was the answer. Moreover the fact that exploiting a persons emotions is socially and even scientifically wrong, this demonstrates how the technology is being forced onto people as a tool and not just another 'cool' computer program.\n\nThe computer that can sense emotions or just facial expressions is depriving and shameless for a tool that should be used in more appropriate occurances such as a workplace or new photo taking booth at a mall; not a classroom. This could emotionally affect a student and derail their idea of 'emotion'. Although the Facial Action Coding System is a feat in math and science terms, it is just another step towards the loss of humanity, especially in classrooms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a smart idea in my opinion. There are multiple benefits of having a driverless car, and even though there are disadvantages as well, the pros out weigh the cons in this case. The inventors of these types are cars are extremely bright people and know what they are doing. There have been studies shown how beneficial driverless cars can be and I agree with them.\n\nThe next new thing in technology car wise would be a driverless car. Sebastian Thrun said that it would not have been possible to make something this interesting before 2000 because we did not possess the equipment and tools we needed to accomplish much. However, as time has gone on and technology has become better, we are able to make driverless cars now. The people that are working on the driverless cars are making them as safe as possible. The cars contain many sensors to warn the driver when assistance is needed. For example, in the passage it says, that the drivers seat will vibrate in case the vehicle may back over something. There are also flashing lights on the windshield as a warning sign. The inventors have also created cameras to make sure the car can watch the driver to be sure they are alert. A driverless car would be an amazing accomplishment but as of right now the car cannot do everything by itself. The drivers would still need to pay attention and be ready to take the wheel at any moment. Since the driverless car is still a work in progress, it cannot drive through construction or accident cites easily. The inventors of the car are making it safe with all the sensors and warning signals needed, but sometimes that is not enough, accidents still could occur. If an accident were to occur I do not believe that the manufacturers should be blamed. They have made the car the best they can and would not allow people to drive it without warning them about how the car works. In my opinion it would most likely be the drivers fault for not paying attention or neglecting the warnings of the car. A driverless car will be a fantastic accomplishment to be made. However, we as the potential drivers have to take caution and understand completely how to handle the car.\n\nI know that someday there will be driverless cars that can travel through accident and construction cites without any help. However, until then we must work with what we have and try our best not to jeopardize the chances of building an actual driverless car. We as drivers can accomplish this by being alert when riding in a driverless car and being understanding if an accident were to occur.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Last year birthday I told I wanted everything I said CAPS I want CAPS station So go three morning get best buy So walked store opened door people store So walk game I two text five people section grabed one two But got line half people store already line Then waited stupid line forever literally us like hours get front line We got home This story I wanted patience So I patient two half hours waiting buy werever go use patience get thought treated nicer expectSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When Empire State Building constructed main idea create mooring mast dirigibles blimps dock However first kind idea came many obstacles Before constructing mast stabilize building steel framework modifications stated paragraph nine Dirigibles long previous structure would enough support high blowing winds Safety also issue adding mooring mast Blimps outside United States filled hydrogen extremely flammable instead helium If something happen blimp caught fire could threaten safety cilvians After mast constructed high speed winds obstacle yet would nt even allow dirigibles come close building Despite unique idea letting dirigibles dock Empire State Building many obstacles getting way making idea successfulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Trading plays a crucial role in cultural assimilation. Several individuals deem that enhancing the rate of import and export internationally has a beneficial impact; however, some thinkers opposed this notion as they believe it can hamper countries true peculiarities. This criticism was correct in the past, but in the present context, there are indications that this trade activity has bought various benefits. This essay will throw some light on the perspectives mentioned here.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, with the continuous progress of commerce people and getting in contact with distinct traditions and beliefs which assisted them to broaden their outlook. Moreover, it offers a great opportunity to exchange information, technology, positive thinking, knowledge and ideas. These factors will have a significant impact on the positive growth of a nation. To illustrate, the advent of computers in Asian countries was possible because of the trading relationship with America. As a result of which it improves the quality of living considerably.\r\n\r\nAn added advantage is the strengthening of the economic condition of any province. In this era of globalisation, the developing countries must maintain a balanced relation with the developed ones. Trade is not unilateral but bilateral. By adopting an enlightened policy and promoting business activities a country, can facilitate the exchange of goods services and capital with the rest of the world and flourish their economic development. America helped Gambia, Africa; Nigeria, Africa; Duong Lam, Vietnam to generate revenue from business activities, for instance. Not only it supports a nation become self-sufficient, but it also creates work opportunity and employment.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, the cultural influence of one country can negatively affect the lifestyle and heritage of other provinces. Henceforth, people’s mindset has been controlled by other practices leading their individuality in crisis\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, despite having controversies nations are advised to promote international commerce to develop their own land and citizens living standards simultaneously. Positive outcomes should always be encouraged. Meanwhile, one country must maintain their cultural authenticity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger was join to the program because his friend invine to go to Europe on cattle boat Luke could not say no because they are best friend and if he say no his friend would be sad. So he was joinn to cowboy. In 1945 there was a would war 2 in Europe and manu countires were left in ruind. To help theis countries to bring them food,supplies,horse,cow, chicken and mules to help to survine.\n\nLuke clains is that he go on the boat and left it took them to past the pacific ocen.\n\nThe body is that Luke made it to china so they play game and have fun and they go the mules and cow they was happy and in china they got food for them and there family is very happy and some people does have a home and they build home for them and some people got hert and they lost there family and they are realy sad and they are thankful that they are alive and Luke filled bad for them because they don't any home then Luke went back to his home and he was happpy.\n\nThe endSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the last few years vehicle emissions have been heating and even destroying our atmosphere. Cities and even whole countries are taking precautions to lower the amount of fuel emissons recorded in the air. It's not only that people are trying to cut back to help the enviroment they just arent driving as much anymore for some reason, even in areas that driving would be more useful than other forms of transportation. You may want to cut back after seeing why they did too.\n\nIn Germany there is a suburban city that has given up their use of vehicles. One of the local residents stated \"When I had a car I was always tense, I'm much happier this way.\" You may not notice it but the hustle and bustle of everyday life and commuting may just be putting more stress on you. Cutting out personal commute will not only be making your life less stressful it will also help clear the air in some cities as well. Passenger cars are responsible for nearly 50 percent of greenhouse gasses in car intensive areas in the United States. Something as simple as not driving as often or cutting back totaly can help you and others.\n\nIn Bogota, the capital of Colombia it has been the third straight year of\n\nDay Without Cars. Day Without Cars is one day that all Colombians hike,bike,skate,walk or took public tranportation to get to work. The goal of\n\nDay Without Cars is to promote alternative transportation and reduce fines. A citizen talking part in the action stated \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nNow in America it has been recorded that Americans are buying fewer cars and getting less licences each year. The number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and have been slowly and steadily dropping after. Transportation is is the second largest source of emissions but you can help lower that. More and more people have been choosing alternative transportation than ever before. Also more people have left the sub-urban enviroment and moved to urban ones so alternative transportation is even more needed than before. Also whats the point of driving if you live near the place you work cutting down on emissions is one of the most important objectives right now.\n\nMany great things can and have come by cutting down private transportation. It conserves resources, cuts down on emissions, and also improves safety. Multiple people say that commuting less has made thier lives less stressful than ever before. The amount of smog in cities have decreased, helping to get cleaner natural air those compact areas. Anything you can do to help make your lives easier you should and cutting down on emissions can help make that easier.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do people right limit freedom Do people right limit imagination Do people right limit self expression Many people today s world think Book censorship big deal world today Weather books deemed offensive taken libraries serious issue Censoring books limits self expression also limits knowledge constitutional right free speech I believe people able censor books Censoring book like putting limit human imagination All life people urged think outside box We told kids unique diffrent good thing We told yet writers express themselfs books people told think outside box want censor thoughts By censoring books telling world imagination bad thing Many people want censor books children read offensive matterial They feel taking books feel offensive libraries sheild child bad things world This case People able censor books one censor life Children learn offensive things without books Book censorship limits knowledge At time written The scandels book Because laungauge book used many people thought trash Many people wanted censored Today The famous classic book In fact I required read school Regardless language book used shows part history And think people back would removed form libraries I likely would never read book I would never knowledge I gained reading book It constitutional right write read books choose America built idea freedom Under constitution garentied freedom speech By taking books libraries limiting freedom speech No one alowed tell ca nt read book want read No one alowed tell ca nt write book want write If start censoring books writers forced censor personal thoughts Making writers limits thier freedom speech If freedom speech limited freedoms also limited years come Book censorship censorship gernal good thing limit things If start censoring books giving messege children diffrent bad If freedom speech limited long untill rights limited Where end Before removing even first book shelf need ask ourselvees right limit freedomSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driveless cars is basically a waste of time and money. My reasons that apply to this is that:1. Why would anyone want a driveless car that still requires you to drive?,2. people might get bored and start texting and get a ticket because the police might assume they was texting and driving (which is against the law ) even though they wasn't the one operating the car, and 3. If the car gets you into an accident both the driver and the manufacturer is going to get charge because 1. the driver was in the car, 2. the manufacturer made the car.\n\nIn the passsage it say that 'none of the cars so far are completely driveless, they can do anything but navigate through work zones and around accidents.' If the cars are driveless then why can't they perform all the work that a driver does when driving a normal car alone? 'Most driving laws focus on keeeping drivers,passengers,and pedestrians safe', but how can a driver be alerted if they do random things while the car is operating itself and if something bad happens, it'll be too late to try to get into control of it.'Telsa has projected a car that only autopilot for 90% of the time', well that basically doesn't work.\n\nIn conclusion, I've stated my reason on why I think driveless cars are a waste of people time and money.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I my name is Luke I am a seagoing cowboy. Being a seagoing cowboy is a lot of work but I managed to have some fun on board with my buddys and I think you will meet a lot of nice people if I could have fun you can to.\n\nMy Buddys and I like to play table tennis , volleyball, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling.\n\nThere are a lot of responsirbiltes, you have clean the stalls and have night watch. You get to see a lot of amazing places, I have been to italy and China. You have to be very careful when its raining it can be very silpery and watch where you step if you know what i mean (poop).\n\nAnother reason why I became a seagoing cowboy is it held some new adventure so if you are the advertures type you might want to be come a seagoing cowboy someday.\n\nI'm just trying to say it is a great opertunatie to becaome advertures person or an exicting person and you never no maybe you go down in history some way some how. Even if you don't go down history you will have a lot of story's to tell the grandchildren.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because many students have a hard time in school and with this technology computers could learn whether or not a student is mad, happy, sad, etc. Just from a computer screen reading their facial expressions. So if a student is happy and smiles at a computer screen an ad will pop up but if you then frown, the next ad will be different.\n\nIn the article it talks about a classroom computer that could recognize when a student is bored or confused, Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" If the computer could do that more students wouldn't be bored anymore because of the computer reading the student's expression,Which would keep kids interested in their school work. Which could keep more kids in school and would lead to higher education and more graduated students every year.\n\nWith this technology scientists could study how kids emotions get them when they are at home, school, etc. Which could lead to more better info about kids when they are at different locations. The Facial Action Coding System is very important because It can judge emotions and can keep people happy It has to be valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you think about joining the Seagoing Cowboys progam? If so,then you should try the Seagoing Cowboys. The Seagoing Cowboys are amazing to happen in anyones life,I believe. The trip may be to care for the animal when they're on board with us but, it's a great,once in a lifetime,opportunity. Let me tell you some facts that may convince you to join.\n\nYou may be onboard to care for the animals,like cleaning the stalls,but there is more to it then just that. When you stop somewhere to drop off the animals, you get to sightseeing.When I was a Seagoing Cowboy, I had the benefit of seeing Europe,China,Venice,Italy,and even the Acropolis in Greece. I saw a excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. I went over sea for weeks at a time. Even though the trip was long, it was amazing to see the sights,care for the animals,and,after the animals left,play games like volleyball and baseball in the animal's stalls.\n\nWell,you may have thought that was amazing to hear about, it's better to go and do the adventure for yourself. There are more reason that you should join but,maybe I should let you go join if you let you sign up if you want to. If I haven't conviced you yet, then maybe Seagoing Cowboys may not be for you. I just hope you try to do Seagoing Cowboys and if you don't want to,you don't have to. Well,that's all I have to say,other then, join the Seagoing Cowboys!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" The \"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. it has starred in hollywood film, apperes in books magazines, radio talks shows-even haunted grocery store cheakout lines for 25 years!\n\nSome peole think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conpiracy theorists.\" siad NASA. The face on mars was not made by aliens beacuse it was illusion, shadows, and camera\"s.\n\nThe face on mars was not made by aliens beacuse it was an illusion. The crises on the eyes was an illsion beacuse the shadows a cused by the hole and how the light is hitting it.\n\n\" A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a \" huge rock formation. . . whic resenbles a human head. . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" said the author. illision was caused by how our eyes sees it. our brian is capitbal to form faces on anything that has a human characteristics.\n\nThe face on mars was not made by aliens beacuse it was shadows.\" when it , viking 2, spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" the shadows made the faces but in realtiy the is just a rock there not a face.\n\n\" The Face on Mars is located at 41 ddegres north martian laditue where it was winter, in April 98- a clody time of the year.\" said th author.\n\nWhere the rock is located it make a shade that looks like a face it is always cloudy there.\n\nThe Face on Mars was not made by aliens beacuse of the camer's. \" Malin 's team captured an extaordinary photo using the camera's absoulte maximum resolution, eac pixel in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.\" the photo matter they took another picture on a cloudyness day and the face was kinda gone and the camera ws also the key. the camers couldhave caused a big differance in the picture.\n\nThe face was not made by aliens beacuse it was and illusion by the shadows and the camera. The camers was a big part. the shadows was caused by clouds. The illusion was a brain game. The face on Mars was not made by aliens beacuse it was an illusion, shadows, and camer's.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that self driven cars could be beneficial,they notify you of incoming danger. Even though they are still in developement,they seem really helpfull when you get too tired or nrevous too drive.The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Google cofunder Sergey brin,believes such cars would fundamentally change the world. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions sinxe 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,but so far,Google cars aren't truly driverless;they stil alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating throughroadwork or acidents. originnally,many futurists believedthe key to developeing self-driving cars someday wasn'tso much smarter cars as smarter roads. Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirrow,four automotive radar sensors, a gps reciever,and an inertial motion sensor. The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR,it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings. The combination of sll this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. Sensors are nothing new,of course.In the 1980s,automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. within 10 years,those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-controll skids or rollovers. The information from the sensorscan cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine,allowing far better response and controll than a human driver could manage alone. The self driven cars can steer,accelerate and brake themselves,but all are desighned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills,such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. GM has developed drivers seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing up into an object. manufactors are also considering useing cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road,thecar watches the driver. In conclusion Tesla has projected a 2016 realease for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercades-Benz,Audi and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselfes by 2020.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe controvosy computer whether benefit society In opinion computers wonderful resource soon become household item I writing persuade computers positive effect people I believe computers good thing allow people access knowledge allow people stay contact people dont see often allow people keep know whats going modern life One reason computers useful allow people stay contact people nt see often Today parents nt mind sending children college much actually see using video chat websites like This feature computers big impact life people today People talk people This type often allows people share new inventive things ve discovered Another reason computers useful help people keep touch modern life Many companies erasing newspaper ads putting computer websites Some companies selling items websites shipping buyers With computers students also get homework done send teacher email make school day There even home colleges take class online I believe years people business computers stores sell online Finally last reason I believe computers good idea allow people access knowledge internet There websites soldy devoted history information many things Also blogging websites people debate information get questions answired real people know lot topic Another thing computers helps get informed websites like wikipedia people search topic read history follow links websites want pick apart topic even Overall I believe computers area great resource human kind used things years I believe computers useful allow people access knowledge ability keep touch others keep touch modern life I believe couple years liss stores streets online much cheaper companies So people couple years computers use effectivelySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates clear mood He keeps stating grateful parents family members Also describes house always filled amazing smells cuban music It also says always feeling love happiness air sometimes pushed hard times faced Another thing says even though almost everyone different race everyone got along help others And one final way I know happy mood said everyone honest hard workingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "today we are going to talk about driverless cars . There has been people trying to invent a driverless cars . Which sounds pretty cool and helpful , but i think there is a good side to it and a bad side , or certain situations that you should be able to dirve driverless . But what comes with the manufacturing driverless cars , are new laws , and a little bit more worrys to certian incadents .\n\nyes , having a driverless car would be amazing in some peoples eyes , but i think that its not that big of an idea . there are many things that could happen in certian sittuations . if you get in a crash whos fault would it be ? yours or the other persons ? there is a way to prevent that and thats not to get a driverless car . people who have a non driverless car already dont pay attention to the road . so if a car can drive them they will be at even more of a risk because they probaly will think oh my car drives me i can do what i want . which isnt good at all because when the car sends the signal to get there attention there attention will be completley at something else , which means they might not get the signal , or sine there attention is gone they might get scared to freak out . But i think that a driverless car can be good use for certian sittuations like driving on the highway , and i say this because the highway dosnt have to many turns its just curves and straight aways . but in a city where people are driving towards you right next to you could just be a little bit more risky . If you really want to be at the highest risk of saftey you probaly should stick to driving your self , the social media , talking , and texting isnt worth death , funerals , and a sad family , or even kids without a parent .\n\nI dont disagree with the driverless cars but to me there is really no point in them to me . driving your self is better because you should already be at full attention to driving , and who would want to just sit in a car and watch it drive you ? I hope my essay makes as much sense as it does to me . now the choice is yours .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is not really a alien monument the reason it wasn't is really simple, the alien face was found in Cydonia part of Mars where landforms called Messa are at. Messa can look like lots of things but it is just really a land form. In Nasa we decided to show it to the public because we thought that it would attract people to Mars so they would be more intrested in Nasa in paragraph 3.\n\nPeople started to say we were hiding that it was from aliens, but if we were hiding it then it wouldn't help NASA because if we were hiding it it wouldn't help are budget at Nasa. Even though some people didn't believe us we went back to space to take a better picture of it in April 5, 1998 in paragraph 7. When we took the picture it still looked like a natural landform. After that when people still thought it was a alien monument we went back to Mars and took another picture that was better and could almost see all the little details in April 8, 2001 in paragraph 10. When they took the picture it still looked like a natural landform or a landform from America in paragraph 12.\n\nNASA took 3 pictures and the last one was the best picture they got and it was still a lanform. There is no evidence that shows that it was created by aliens or is an alien monument but we have all the evidence to show it wasn't created by aliens to prove that it is just another messa on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern I writing let know I feel effects computers people My opinion topic I think statements true yes give people ability learn faraway places people also allow people talk line others If computers I would finfished many school process homeworks But experts spending much time thier computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends I know true I know peopel gotten addicted online video games would nt leave computer hours I know I found new website want learn I ll computer instead exercising But even statement true I think computers efefcet people Because without computers alot students would failing classes getting zeros projects class asignments homework Becayse dont quick way look information Also families friends lose contact lost fun way communicate think computers positive effect Do ntSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock mooring mast One obstacle faced lack suitable landing area They would design mast dirigibles Another obstacle dirigibles held single cable tether would add stress building s frame Next New York City would spend sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework Then greatest reason safety came upon That dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium And hydrogen highly flammable On German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey The owners Empire state building realized happened New York big problem would cause The final greatest obstacle faced successful use mooring mast nature From violent wind air currents would hard tether dirigibles mast In conclusion obstacles builders Empire state Building faced attempting allow dirigibles landSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many diffrent people world many diffrent oppions books music movies magazines etc one person dose perticualy like horor movies dose mean movies stores remove horor films shelves creepy sound many people world slasher film freeks live breath scarry movies I like eveything read book listen type music actualy widens taste certain materials feel like everyone try new things Say growing favorite books The would like shaire childhood stories children BUT books stores took The shelves tiger pig could never friends This nonsince many people like many diffrent thingsthere reason sell like otherwise busines failSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world of automotive technology is constanly changing for what engineers believe is the best for society. There are always new and improved ideas for cars, but some of them may not be in the best interest for people. The idea of a car that drives itself seems both unreliable and unrealistic. After reading this passage the idea of a self-driving car seems like more of a hassle than the number one item on a person's Christmas list.\n\nThe \"driverless\" cars of today are far from not needing drivers. Most cars, like the Toyota Prius, have many sensors within the car. Though these sensors do help alert the driver if the car is out of control, they do not fix the siuation or get themselves out of it. I have been in a Toyota Prius on a dangerous, icey road, and the car did alert the driver when we were out of control, but the car did not correct the situation it rather made a loud beeping noise and had a flashing signal on the dash. These cars are not driving themselves, but instead relying on the drivers to pay attention to their warnings.\n\nSelf-driving cars are also a problem when it comes to legal situations. Dr. Werner Huber believes that entertainment while driving is a great idea for drivers who still need to pay attention to the road. So what happens when a driver is distracted and does not adhere to their self-driving car's warnings? Well the same probelm that occurs with drivers every day. There will still be wrecks and deaths. These cars are not making the roads a safer place, but instead making legal situations more confusing by not knowing who is at fault for an accident.\n\nThough these cars have no large, positive effect on society engineers still continue to work every day on them. These cars are not changing what the base of a car is, but are getting plenty of attention for it. Self-driven cars are unachievable, and they do not benefit society in a positive way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Boom the sound of ginourmous truck slamming into a house full of people , smoke everywere there's about to be a fire many people are unconcious or dead. More than half of the people in the house are rushed to the hospital. As you can see there has been an atrocious accident because of that vehicle. Their should definitley be a limiting of car usage because their would be less car accidents , people would be able to spend less money on cars and we would have less air pollution. Also having a car can cause a lot of stress or tension for people.\n\nObviously we're having a lot of problems with money in this world , if we limit car usage that would really help is us out a lot. See as it states in source one paragraph two '' A car-owner buys a space, for forty thousand dollars , along with a home.'' With those forty thousand dollars you can do a lot to help the world . It aslo says that fifty seven percent of the people who live in a suburban area sold their cars just move where they live at now. Who needs a car when you can just walk ''stores are placed a walk away, on a main street rather than the malls along some distant highway. ''source one paragraph 6.\n\nPollution is destroying our world and we need to help stop it, so here's an idea lets ban driving due to smog says Paris. Their was an enforced partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Do you agree with that? well I do and here's why . Paris has more smog than other European capitals so if they don't stop the smog it's going to be horrific for their city. Source three paragraph twenty one '' the goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.'''Not having cars for one day is brilliant idea because is an improvement to the city of Bogota.\n\nTheir is a lot of disruptions an accidents going on because of cars mainly because of the traffic so if their was less cars it would be more peaceful. Usually when there's traffic you hear a lot honking and there's a lot fines for that. The fines are very expensive to pay so you're wasting a lot of money. Also when people are honking they don't realize that other people are sleeping . Everyone needs sleep , some people can't sleep through everything so all it takes is one honk and bam they're awake. Sleeping is really needed in your life imagine notgetting enough sleep because of traffic well yeah that would suck an a lot of people already go through that .\n\nSo in conclusion what I'm saying is car usage should definitly be limited at least in some countries or states. Money is a really big problem we have that needs to be solved and this is a great way. People living in a surburan area have to pay more just for extra parking places. Air pollution is very bad for the world with les cars that will stop as well. Traffic is not good for the world either because it is stressful an it is not good for people to be stressed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is really just a big mistunderstanding. I strongly say that because there so many reasons what this could be. The text says only a few scientists thinks the Face is an alien artifact, I could see if there was atleast half but theres only few. There is nothing really that proves that its an alien artifact, therefore I would say believe that its just a natrual landform.\n\nIn the text it says that when they took the picture it was winter. That means its a cloudy time for Mars. So the clouds could b messing it up and making it appear as a face. Even on Earth if we look at a cloud it can make the shape of a face or anything. The article also states that the Face on Mars is about the same height of a lava dome. Which means this could be a lava dome mixed with a cloud and that cause it to look like a face.\n\nSo we would never know intil someone physically go and see it for themself. So I strongly believe that this is just a big mistunderstanding.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a NASA scientist, I believe that the \" face \" on Mars is a natural formation. I dont believe that aliens could have formed this. During my work, I have discovered many different ways to make you believe that the face is natural.\n\nThe scientists that work with NASA, such as myself, have found many different reasons as to why the formation looks like a face. During our time photographing Mars, we have been equiped with much better quality cameras, which help us see things better on Mars itself. Over the years, we have discovered that when you use a higher quality Mars Global surveyer (MGS), the \" face \" no longer looks like a face. Still some people didn't believe us the first time we got photographs of the land mark, so went and did it again. This time, we made sure that there weren't any clouds that could default the photos of Mars. What we found out by looking at these photos is the the facial features are simply just shadows. Take the eyes for example, while photographed from the middle of the land mark, there is a shadow being created by the sun. From this angle, the sun makes the land mark seem as if it had eyes. The \" mouth \" is simply just a hole in the land mark, which looks like a mouth while photographed from the middle of the land mark. There is no way aliens could be the cause of a natural piece of land on Mars.\n\nNow that you understand what the \" Face \" actually is, I hope you dont still think aliens were the cause of it. There is scientific proof that it is a natural piece of land that just so happened to form on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted building mooring mast Empire State Building hindered many obstacles builders face Firstly stress dirigible s load wind pressure would hurt building s frame Builders fix problem making sixty thousand dollars worth modifications building s framework page paragraph After mast s construction two obstacles arose Firstly dirigibles used hydrogen flammable After German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire builders realize danger letting accident happen densely populated New York City The mast s greatest obstacle nature Since winds top building away shifting due air currents back dirigible would swivel around mast Builders thought using lead weights fix problem dangling weights high pedestrians street neither practical safe The last obvious obstacle existing law airships flying low urban areas Though builders owners able overcome first obstacle given construction mooring mast Empire state Building future obstacles prevented mooring mast fulfilling purposeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In attempting let dirigibles dock Empire State Building builders faced many problems The first problem fact dirigibles outside US used hydrogen instead helium The problem hydrogen highly flamable would huge risk hydrogen dirigible city full pedestrians could catch fire hurt themSecondly wins height Empire State Building always shifting presented great risk pilots If dirigible got blown course could collide tall buildings city The US Navy dirigible Los Angeles got blown course strong winds pilot could take hands controls fear hitting buildingsLastly preexisting law would made illegal dirigible entered airspace around Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions is a smart idea but i think that it wouldn't be such a good idea because of how it might be set up. The use of technology reading human emotions is not as valuable as it sounds. The system wouldnt really know how someone feels because anyone can make a face to make it seem like they're hapy or sad etc.\n\nTechnology reading peoples emotions is not a valuable thing. The software or system would only be reading peoples facial expressions and not how they really feel inside but only what they show the software. The software says it has caculations like math problems and has percentages and also says that it will recognize the subtle facial movements. the text states how the process will start, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles.\" The system will be only be able to look at your facial expression only and try to predict the humans mood. The text states \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and the associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\"\n\nThe FACS, Facial Action Coding System is not a good idea. The technology is not accurate towards peoples emotions on the insude but only to what humans show. The facial expressions does not bring out the real emotions. \"Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions...\" The software only goes off facial expressions and the movements of muscles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mostly everybody man focused today is when i become a teenager , get a job and get my first CAR .Cars are good to get around but there are some advantages of limiting car usage , like pollution and more money you have in you pocket for youself. Thats sounds good right? I know !\n\nTo begin with ,Paris has banned driving to smog (pollution towards the greenhouse).Contaminated air we breathe isn't good for are lungs-just are health period. Consuming to much carbon and make us very sick and ill. Somethings we need to get to are pretty far and to get to places on time is faster by car- which most people think but isn't the case. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Plug-in cars , hyrbrids , and or cars carrying three or more passengers would be good but what about are power plants , cant they be used for something else? Cars are a good tool to have but its causing problems in our greenhouse that we need to stop\n\nMeanwhile in Bogota , car free day is going in a great path. Many of us been in traffic jams before,right? Sitting at a light 3 times before you get to go .Do you ever think walking would be faster ? On car free day in Bogota,Colombia Colombians didnt use there cars and didnt complain about it ; they used bikes,skates or skateboards , even took a bus! Now, thats sounds like some good resources to me. We all like good days and not stressed one so leave the car in your drive way and start using other things to get you to where you have to go. This could be a community thing to everyone aound you , every citie , and every state.\n\nFouthermore , Car dealer ships need business to , start making that dont produce alot of pollution into the air we breathe , use resources that wont cause mot damage , the ozone layer isnt at its best and we need to save it before it gets worse , take action before its to late !\n\nIn Conclusion , can be very useful but why use them alll the time ? theres other things that can get us around like bikes , buses or even just walking . Driving all the time can be a bad habit . Pollution is a biggie as well , pollution are air is very unhealthy , but car makers are about what the car is about and not what its producing to are world. No need for gas today ; ill walk!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the way of the future. Driverless cars could be more than just a way of transportation: they could be cheaper, safer, and more entertaining. With new innovations and improvements that modern day technology provides, driverless vehicles could become the only mode of on-land transportion that is needed.\n\nDriverless cars are cheaper than the cars of modern society. The cofounder of Google, Sergey Brin, imagines a future in which driverless cars replace today's taxi system. Brin forsees driverless cars that \"would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" Brin also envisions that the driverless cars would provide \"far more flexibility than a bus.\" In the past, the sensors needed for these driverless cars \"was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred millions dollars.\" Now these sensors have become cheaper and easier to access.\n\nThese driverless cars of the future would be a safer option in adition to being cheaper. The driverless cars have sensors all around the car, including the roof, the rear wheels, \"a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.\" These sensors provide angles and points of view that the driver can not see. The sensors created using modern technology \"ha[ve] become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" With these new sensors that will just continue to become more advanced, less accidents will happen on the road.\n\nThe driverless cars are not only cheaper and safer, but they can provide a more entertaining and fun way to driver on the road. Although one would think that driverless cars that would still require a driver may become \"bored waiting for their turn to drive,\" Dr. Werner Huber has come up with a solution. Dr. Werner Huber, who is a project manager at BMW, has come up with a way \"to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Driverless cars could provide entertain for not only the driver, but the whole family. Movies could display and the front overhead and then simply go out of view when the driver needs tend to the road. \"The in-car system is actually a safety feature\" and can be more safe than \"drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\"\n\nCars that do not require a driver are the future of today's society. These cars of the future give a cheaper, safer, and more enertaining alternative to the regular driving of the 21st century. The driverless cars will continue to make advances with today's improving technolody and those cars will pave the way to a brighter, better future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To promote, I would like to start off by saying I am one who is all for new technology because it is the 21st century after all. Technonlogy has become an everyday thing such as the iphone or even somehting as advanced such as CGI movie technology. These are great attributes that will help us learn and will help our future to further develope the technology we have discovered but for something as a Driverless car might be a little to dangerous for us just yet.\n\nIn addition to my previoues paragraph, I will enlist you on the negative outcomes of why Driverless cars. To begin the name \" Driverless Car\" is a false adverstisement because these so called cars aren't even 100% driverless. In order for these cars to work they still ahve to operated by a human being at somepoint why the car is active. In most scenarios the car can accelerate, brake, and even park itself without human interactions. For other situtaions such as construction blockinh you near by exit or a terrible wreck on your way home from the work,\n\nthe cars sensors will not be able to manuerver around the problems that lie ahead so you must then take the job at the captain's seat and control the vehicle yourself. Already we haven't even spoke about the danger of these Driverless cars and we are given many reasons to disagree with it's exsisitance.\n\nCarrying on, cars such as the Toyota Prius have been Driverless cars for quite some time but not everyone wants to drive a Prius becaus may not suit their liking or needs. Therefore with this being said this is another negative outcome for those of us who want the newtest brightest technology and are disappointed because they don't simply make the technonlogy fit our needs. Also included in the Prius is tons of technology such as senors for parking and close bumper action, a rotating sensor on the roof, a GPS, and a rearview mirror camera. This car comes with many surprises and features that suit the tiny geeks in all of us needs. Even though this car seem very safe with sensors and cameras mounted at every nook and cranny, what if we were to get into an accident and the physical features of the car were repaired but not the technological features. What would we do if we had relied on our sensors to help us brake and instead of the car breaking it were to roll back and hit someone else vehicle? Also maybe the car could have a malfunction and accelerate instead brake causing an accident. Who is to blame now, th ecompany who made such a safe 21st car or the driver who wanted to be with the new times and have the the greatest piece of technology out there on the road?\n\nWith more to say, what are we do about the pricing of these Driverless cars? Sure they may be twenty two thousand dollars and that may be a deal with some of the customers that purchase them but what about the technology underneath the hood. Such as the radar which was a hilltop program just being discovered and was a very advanced program when first sought out by Sebastin Thrun. He was the founder of the google project and used radar in many of his cars. What if we were to somehow damage the radard and a customer used this radar everyday because they were a business man or woman who travled day. What would they do if this two hundred million dollar piece of technology broke. Of course it's just the program that cost that mcuh but would the company fix it or leave it to their custmor considering it's their car or \"problem\" now?\n\nIn conclusion, to my rebutal of the posititve outocmes of Driverless cars I speak about how if we were to even think of purchasing one of these vehicles would it's phycial appearance even suit us? Howevee if that doesn't change our mind about not buying one then maybe the type of protectioe it offers will because no ones wants to be hurt by something they absoulutly adore. With that being said we would most defintely not purchase such an item espeacially if the car didn't offer full coverage on it technological material because paying for an expensive car is enough, why woudl we pay for the technology they made to be fixed again because of their faulty work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay i will be talking about whether the use of Facial Action Coding System In a classroom is valuable. I think that a FACS would be useful in a classroom because it can detect emotions and if there are kids sad or upset. The teachers could do something about that cheer them up or talk to them and it could help some people like therapy they could use it on there patients and get a better understanding and talk to them more around that on how they can change there emotion. If they are sad,fearful,disgusted because kids could give a smile but you dont know if its real or not in paragraph 1 it tells you that mona lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This has been my understanding of why we should use FACS in a classroom i have talked about a claim for or against the value of using thistechnology. I have also shown evidence from the article to support my claim.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having kids at older ages is common in contemporary society. The advantages are more than the drawbacks because people are more mature to care for their young ones are also able to grow in their careers and are usually financially more stable. This essay will expand on the above points with relevant examples and a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nFirstly, With age comes maturity and preparedness for parenthood. Unlike young adults, who are most times not psychologically ready to be parents, mature adults, on the other hand, are mentally prepared and usually capable to withstand the pressure of catering to their kids. For example, they usually have a well-planned structure which enables them to effectively care for their kids and also run the home front.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What consitered offensive If took books music movies magazines people found offensive shelfs would nothing left Everyone diffrent mean get offended diffrent ways By taking shelfs would providing smaller education students around world Things learn school slavery wars pollitics Now things could offend many people take shelfs school libraries children idea history going current world What drugs alchol many parents talk childern uses controlled substances without sources never know harm someones body Everyone takes something offensive everyone takes thing offensive So say offends people If thats case nt take books movies music magazines away childrens schools libraries Adults get offended would take resources away also including newspaper By taking away one call offensive land us dark ages books local news movies nothing one person say whole world considers offensive Everyone right read write want No one say offends everyone Someone get offended talking ones race another get offended talking someone even get offended talk cute little kitty cat Everyone looks everythings diffrently So try control us one All people think diffrent know want read hear watch selfs nt need someone tellSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process that has been used for presidential elections since the Founding Fathers established it in the Consitution. This system does not necessary give the voters a direct vote, but rather a vote for a slate of electors that vote for them. The voters intrust that their elected slate will vote for their favored presidential canidate. It brings up the argument whether this system of voting should be changed or kept. The Electoral College has some of its good points, but over all, it needs to be changed. Voters need a direct say in their vote, and this system turns off the interest of potiential voters.\n\nThe voters of the United states should have the ability to directly vote for who they want as President. After all, the people are what make up the country and should have say. \"It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational,\" says Bradford Plumer in\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong .\n\nThis means that the Electoral College is unfair to the people because the slate they vote for might not even vote for their canidate. Also, in the same article, Plumer states, \"Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" This means that there is a chance that the electors could vote for whoever they please.\n\nThis system of voting does not give the voters a direct say as to who they want, but also turns off the interest of voters who should be voting for their country. \"Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know that have no chance of winning...\" as said by Plumer. People within those states would have no motivation to vote for their president because their potienial president did not come to their state to convince them to vote. The canidates are only focused on getting majority of the electoral votes, and not who the people really want. \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets ddin't get to see a single campaign ad,\" Plumer had stated. These states lack any information about the potiential ruler of their country just because the canidates are focused on the states that will help them win.\n\nAlthough \"each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for a party's nominee,\" as said by Richard A. Posner in\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five Reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , the possibility of having a winner based on electoral vote and not popular vote is very much possible. For instance, the 2000 election, Gore had won popular vote but due to the electoral vote, Bush had won the election. Gore won the vote for the most popular all over the nation, but because the electoral college had a majority of Bush, it was like the nation's actual vote did not matter.\n\nThe Electoral College is unfair to the people because they do not get a direct say for who they want, and the canidates only focus on states that will help them win based on electoral vote. The people need a say exactly who they want and should not depend on others to do the vote for them. Canidates should not only appeal to states that would make them win, but also to other states so the whole nation knows exactly who might be ruling over their country.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I nt think censoring books movies needed opinion Very many people protective They need calm face facts Eventually everybody come contact almost everything mentioned books point life Life unpredictable anything happen moment You probably end reading books supposed anyway get older The people think censorship library books likely get way least community I think libraries organized way walk know section want They books adults one section books teenagers different section books kids another section library This would help parents go kids keep right spot This would also help way find book know type book Another good thing would help library signs catergorize books So walk teenager section looking good mystery book You look top book case ceiling signs This would help majorly people never library nt know search book library The next thing would movies magazines music categories adult kids teenagers They would sections books time seperated signs section say movie music This way kids nt roam around find certain movie want roam around adult section find The movies magazines nt exactly categories mystery things like normally movies well known books time period A good thing would keep little kids right section would color lot bright colors attract attention If little kid goes section dull boring wander adult section stumble across something parents nt want The kids section could lots colors teenager section could maybe one color adult section could dull colors All ideas would work keep kids entertained They also take interest reading interested walking library These ideas I would work well There could things would keep kids interested little bitSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that overweight people are more regularly seen everywhere, others said that it is better to raise the price of fattening foods, which could help to overcome this issue. However, I disagree with the hike in the price of those food products .\r\n\r\nIt is sometimes argued that increasing the price of fattening foods may be the most reasonable solution. To begin with, it will discourage people from consuming unhealthy foods, leading to a reduction in obesity rates. For instance, if a bottle of soda costs twice as much as a bottle of water, people may be motivated to select the water instead. In addition, it is a known fact that children are the victims of obesity, and they inherit the condition when they grow up. Therefore, the rise in the price of fattening foods such as fast food or street foods would make them stop or eat less as they have minimal pocket money when they study.\r\n\r\nHowever, I strongly believe that increasing the price of fattening food may not be the best solution . Firstly, people may continue to purchase these foods, even at a higher price. This is because fattening foods are often more affordable and convenient than healthier foods. Thus, they continue to consume high-fat food items and ignore their health problems. Moreover, increasing the price of fattening foods may affect low-income individuals. For instance, a low-income family may rely on unhealthy and fast food due to a lower cost compared to healthier foods. If the price of these foods increases, they may no longer be able to afford them and may even be forced to rely on even cheaper, unhealthier food options.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while it may be tempting to think that increasing the price of fattening foods is a simple solution, it fails to address the root cause of the issue and may affect low-income individuals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should offensive material removed library I think many reasons I disagree idea Many books movies magazines ment offend people let reader know author feels I think books movies magazines etc stay shelf removed left Seems like would remain would dictonary I think Katherine Paterson said Children children taken shelf making big mistake So seems offensive people Topics gosip politics gold mine authors Yet people find topics offense probably due persons backround If aomeone find read offensive stop reading Instead people deside go rampage magazine whatever read banned life others read Readers choice read whatever want disagree subject move lifes At library I attend many poeple different shapes sizes walk door everyday Many like different subject others commen find everybody reading different topic Sure someone gree author never decide go crazy Instead go pick different read enjoy People read want enjoy bash wuthor writing In read s I found times stuff disagree Instead going deep end getting excited I choose think author coming try understand side On hand movies ment one type audience instead another audience see s material This still get movies whatever material banned library When box says rated teenagers means four year old watch parents get mad If people followed box says listen guidlines would problem I disagree said books magazines movies etc removed library People right read anything see anything want disagree well deal In exprience I found problem community library people wanting content removed Once people start following guidlines reading boxes still disagree maybe something But keep nations libraries way todaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face On Mars\n\nHave you ever seen a face before? Of course you have. Now a face has a mouth, nose, lips, and eyes. Everyday everynight you see a face so of course you have seen one. Well a face on Mars had appeared when NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landin sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormus head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. So was it a face or just a mesa as the scientist say?\n\nFirst, Have you ever seen a alien face before? No? Well i haven't either, I would like to say that how are we sure that this is a face of a alien? Think about it just because we see something like this or appeared while taking some photos of Mars. How are we sure that this is a alien? Maybe it is just a mesa, If it was a alien wouldn't you think we would of at least see some sort of facial hair or anything of that sort? If we think of aliens we would think of them having a green apperance or having a weird body form. So if we think that aliens have a weird body form or some type of weird face, than why would we think that this face is a alien? Like i said before maybe its just a mesa of some sort or maybe NASA just created it to make it seem like this was a alien to hide something else that had to deal with the government or economy.\n\nNext, Is life on Mars possible? Or on any other planet besides Earth? There is a negative possiblity that this is true, if you think of the facts why is it that Eath is the only planet that has water, gravity, animals, air, and any type of landscapes? If there was other life in the galaxy wouldn't you think there would at least be one more planet like ours? So how are we sure that this face is a alien? Do we have any proof of some sort to make this statement true? Possibly not and possibly yes. So on in April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveuor flew over Cyndonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbirter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL web site. But not everyone was satisfies with this photo.\n\nThan, Is this photo true or is it all just a fake? Well I personalitly believe that this whole thing of the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is completly fake. This is also is just my opinion, I will give you the reason on why i personalitly think that this photo is fake. First I was convinced that maybe there was a possibility that this photo was true and there might bee life on other planets in the galaxy. Than I had to re think on what I was believing in and what I was maybe sure that this was a face. I realized that this was all fake, my reasons for this opinion is that if you look at the photos in 1976-2001 all of these photos seem rather accurate on how this face looks like. Today is the year 2016 if NASA did believe that this was a face rather than a messa in Mars than why haven't we seen anymore photos of this so called \"face?\" Why did they stop providing us with evidence that this photo is a alien or just a mesa? If NASA certintly thought that this was a alien we would have at least seen some evidence of this opinion or fact.\n\nIn conclusion, My statement of this photo is a fake. I have given you the reason on why it is fake and why it should just stay as a fake rather than a life. What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" With these statements from other people than it is not a life or a face on Mars, it is just a fake so the government can hide something or just get us humans to get distracted? Who would know? Only the government would know on either to prove this as a fake or as a real alien face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern classroom, technology plays a key factor in the everyday life of a student, whether it be researching for an assignment in English class, or simply using an online textbook for Chemistry class. In any case, the most important thing about technology is its use to the operator, and a good way to put this is that \"a computer is only as smart as the person controlling it\". That is why emotion-reading technology like the Facial Action Coding System is paramount to keeping the computer as user-oriented and personalized for the most productivity.\n\nIn the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, D'Alto talks about how Dr. Thomas Huang, a professor at Beckman Institute, created a set algorithms fit to calculate one's facial expressions by targeting all of the fourty four major facial muscles to measure percentages of emotion based on the average human muscle uses for certain emotions. In today's world, technology like this is already being put into place, but on the smaller scale of simple facial recognition. From apps like Snapchat that scan your face to put funny animal features on your face in a picture, smartphones unlocking at the simple notion of a face, or even military-grade scanners to track down the bad guys, it is evident that this sort of technology has plenty of useful properties.\n\nFor previously saying that this technology could track down terrorist leaders, it may be difficult to understand why or how this technology could possibly apply in the classroom. Actually, D'Alto gives examples of just how the Facial Action Coding System would work towards a brighter future through school. In Paragraph six, D'Alto explains that in a computer-centralized classroom, computer-camera-friendly software would have the capability to adjust a lesson or video based on the viewing student's facial responses. This adjustment to the student can completely revolutionalize education, as learning would not have to be some generalized, bland experience fit for all, but instead have each lesson mold to fit anyone.\n\nWith all great ideas, there are some implementation and safety issues involved. For one, the applicable software required for something like this in a large classroom setting would be difficult: with distractions in class like talking to friends, or working on pencil and paper along with the computer, a somewhat buggy program could read a facial expression of disgust or laughter while talking to a friend as a negative response to a lesson, possibly messing up the learning experience. In another aspect, some people are already paranoid about being watched by the government, and this could be an understandable fear to some extent. With serious issues like online security breaches and threats towards schools, it could be quite possible that people intenting to harm or threaten students could hack into camera feeds that would be more available through learning programs and watch students, or leak photos with threatening comments on social media.\n\nIn a general sense, it is difficult to say whether or not programs like the Facial Action Coding System should be integrated into the daily education of students at school. On the one hand, a personalized learning experience would bode well for not only grades, but general understanding and enjoyment in school. In the wrong lighting, though, the technology could be more of a threat than a help when it comes to school safety. If paired with the right software and protection, I believe with no doubt that the technology should be used to better the technological experience in and out of the classroom, and with this growing day and age, it is uncertain what else could come about in the near future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The benefits of a driverless car are as follows. Humans don't have to buy cars, humans don't have to drive cars themselves, we can save money on paying for gas for cars we don't have, we can have cars that can completely drive themselves without human assistance. THese cars can better help the future by reducing the pollution chain created by all of the people in the world driving cars. In the article it asks the question \"can you imagine a time in the future when on one buys cars because no one needs them?\". This would better help the world because if you only had to take over when it was absolutely necessary then we really wouldn't need to take over the wheel. Then by the time we need to take over the wheel we could've been asleep for hours and not even have to worry about falling asleep at the wheel at night because our smart cars can drive during the day while we drive at night or visversa. Drvierless cars means a whole new world is opend up for what we could do after that. We could train robots to be cops or even soldiers. If this driverless cars project works out theres no telling where we could go from here. I can't wait for the future because the future is going to be great and there's going to be lots of advances that we never thought would ever happen. Like floating cars, completely driverless cars, floating sidewalks whatever you can think of. The future is going to be a good place but it all starts here with these driverless cars and if they're successful then it's off to the races and theres no telling where life's going to go after this phenomenon. Driverless cars are always something people said are never going to happen but they've been working on these driverless cars since the early mid 1950's. If these cars happen then we're on a course to being the number one country in terms of technology. Imagine being the number one country in terms of having the best cars on the roads. Computer based cars that can handle anything the roads try to throw at them. That's what i think about when i think about driverless cars. If these driverless cars work then you know China, Russia, France, England all those big countries with lots of money are going to want to but these cars. If we sell them those cars then we just might be able to get rid of America's 7 trillion plus dollar debt that we've been in since about 2010. If this happens then America will own the car industry and we'll be able to do whatever we need to in order to make sure that we get the most money possible for these cars. We can own many more things and can spend the money we earn from the driverless car industry build up our military, rebuild cities, help our allies, or whatever we can think of to spend it on. my guess would be too further improve these driverless cars. If i were the founder of these driverless cars i would give myself alot of credit for going so far with this project to almost have completely driverless cars on the roads of America. It would be a reat accomplishment i woudl love to be known for and i'm sure the founder of this project is very proud of himself for knowing that he probably just saved America from a huge debt that will be on us for the rest of the time we exist. Driverless cars are a phenomenon that were created and have been worked on since about the ealy to mid 1950's all the way until today. We have further developed our technology from the 1950's which gives us a greater advantage on actually being able to make complety driverless cars unlike back in the 1950's where their technology was far behing and we didn't have the capabilities back then like we do now. Driverless cars are the greatest advancment in the world today and that's just a start. The thing these driverless cars show to other major countries is when America puts their mind on something we're going to get it done. Driverless cars can be a pain to try to fix, recalibrate, and do all of the things necessary to make sure they stay up to par with the technology they;ve hooked these cars up with. In these driverless cars there is about half a billion dollars woth of equipment that makes them function like they need to. Without this equipment then this whole rpoject wouldn't even be possible. Thanks to the dedication of the Google corporation, General Motors, Nissan, and others we have made huge jumps in the technology race and if we keep working hard at this project these driverless cars will put us. On top of the boards for technology. Driverless cars are probably the most technologically advanced product o earth. Althought these driiverless cars aren't available to the public just yet I feel like in the next three to four years they will be available and safe for us to use. There are many benefits to having a car that drives itself. It makes you look rich though that isn't everything, it makes you look like you think it's truly that smart, and it just makes younlook good when you have a self driving car almost like chaefurring you around. I know if i had the money that i would purchase this driverless car just so i wouldn't have to drive myself anywhere my car could just take me there. There are so many benefits to having a driverless car. You don't have to be afraid of driving on highways and interstates, you don't have to be afraid of driving on snow and ice covered roads because the driverless car will do thst for you. You don't have to worry about speeding because the car automatically knows the spped limit of thst road and doesn't go over that speed limit.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are growing numbers of men and women choosing to have children later in life these days. In my opinion, the financial advantages of this trend far outweigh any perceived downsides.\r\n\r\nThe most significant tradeoffs of this relate to opportunity and maturity. Many individuals decide early on in their career to wait until their mid to late 30s to have children. The natural risk here is that if the relationship ends before that point or they then have trouble conceiving, they may end up childless. This possibility is lower today due to advances in fertility science but still exists. Furthermore, having children is a maturing experience. If an individual waits until late in life to raise a child, then they delay the experience gained and may later regret their decision. Most parents would openly admit that parenthood is a life-altering milestone and defining moment of adulthood.\r\n\r\nNonetheless, the disadvantages detailed above pale in comparison to the economic merits of delaying childbirth. Firstly, most young parents are not in an ideal situation in their careers. Many working parents earn low salaries and work long hours. Once they have a child that means the majority of their day is occupied and they may feel trapped and overburdened. It is then difficult to switch careers or move to a new location as well as afford all the expenses incumbent on parents. This often results in parents becoming resentful and projecting their animosity towards their children or significant other. In contrast, parents who are firmly established in their careers, earn decent salaries and have savings set aside have both the time and energy to devote to raising their children well without having to stress about making ends meet.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite marginal risks concerning the opportunity and experience, it is an overall positive for financial reasons that many prospective parents are putting off childbirth. Therefore, this trend should be welcomed and encouraged.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest the reader to study Venus isnt directly in the text but he/she gives you the idea that you should look into it. Throughout the article the author talks about Venus and others planets in out solar system. but he mainly talks about Venus and Mars. The author tells us that Venus isn't actaully a Evening star, it just has that name because it is closer to the sun. Venus is also referred to as Earth's \"twin\" because it is the closest planet to us in density and size and sometimes distance. In the text it says \"Venus can be right around the corner in space'. Even though Venus is right around the corner we have still yet to land an actually spaceship on it. There hasn't been any space craft the a has been successfully on Venus for more than a few hours.. Although in paragraph 6 it says ''many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to long enough to contribute meaning to our knowledge of Venus''. This is tell us that there is still stuff to learn about mars and this story isnt complete.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Opinions are divided as to whether raising the cost of energy fuel is the best method to tackle the global environmental problems. In my point of view, I partly agree that this kind of arrangement would be an effective idea.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why I encourage increasing charges of energy fuel. Firstly, the factories and households would not be able to decrease domestic expenditure if they still used power fuel entirely, therefore renewable energy would be more popular and valued rapidly. Secondly, to some extent, people will tend to disuse their car ownership and ,consequently there is an immense growth in use of public transport that is more environment-friendly, leading to gradually preserving our available energy fuel. In doing so, the greenhouse gas emission along with CO2 gas which have negatively affected the ozone layer over the years would be decreased and have a positive impact on the environment globally.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it does not mean that the solutions how to handle these environmental troubles proficiently should be only focusing on the cost of fuel, due to the other factors that have still adversely affected our surroundings such as deforestation and gas emissions emitted from many industrialized factories. If we are less concerned about other important elements, even if a growing price of fuel can make people decrease pollution, those are human activities, the unusual temperature or disasters would remain constantly being the insoluble main issues. I’m convinced that these distinct problems are caused by the combination of various factors, not only the natural available gas. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would agree that the rise of fuel cost can be the most excellent way to help decrease these environmental issues if the other factors are worried and diminished as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many steps are taken by academic institutions to improve the quality of education. Some people think schools should give a right to students to give feedback regarding their teachers. On the contrary, others believe that students will not respect their teachers if they evaluate their teachers. I am in agreement with the latter view. This essay will discuss both views in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, Some folks believe that teachers should also be evaluated by their students. It will help to improve the study in institutes. Many believe that some students are capable to learn but they are not satisfied with the teaching methods. For instance, if a class in a school is slow and a teacher's teaching method is fast and some students do not get what is in the particular topic and it lower their grades. If pupils will not give feedback on this and a teacher will continue his speed. Hence, that's why the community believe that feedback is necessary to improve the quality of the study.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others and I believe that if scholars evaluate their teachers it will increase disrespect of teachers and indiscipline in the class. Firstly, If a student does not like his teacher for a particular reason other than teaching he will take revenge by giving poor feedback. Secondly, It will affect the study of the students they will not take their study seriously. Moreover, teacher will also not teach them with interest. As a result, a teacher and student relationship get disturb. Overall, It affects the teaching and education system.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, this essay discussed the reasons of why the community believe that feedback is necessary and others oppose it. In my opinion, by criticized a teacher one cannot improve the education system. There should be others method to improve the quality of an academic institutionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The second planet from our sun Venus also sometimes called the Evening Star is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky. Venus is also called the Earths twin.There has been no spacecraft that has survived the landing on Venus for more than a few hours or less. Not a siingle spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Getting to Venus has been very challenging for the astronomers because we don't really know much about the planet for sure. Also 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus and the clouds are full of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere, which is impossible for humans to survive in such a condition.\n\nAstronomers want to research the surface of Venus because they are fascinated by Venus and also because it may once have been like Earth according to the study. Studying Venus can really help us determine the planet and what was going on in Venus before Earth was created. Everyone has a bunch of questions about if there could be life on other planets or that if there was life on the other planets before Earth. Astronomers and scientists will really help or give an answer to everyones questions if they land on Venus in the future. Although it's very dangerous for the humans to even land on Venus, no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours or less. Scientists also say that long time ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. They also say that the planet has a surface of rocky sediments like Earth and that it inlcudes valleys, mountains, and craters. Getting to Venus will be a very dangeous mission for the astronomers and their technology will probably help them survive for more than they can now.\n\nTo send astronomers to Venus NASA has came up with a compelling idea for astronomers to study Venus. NASA idea would allow scientists to float above the fray, this would avoid the ground conditions by staying up. The conditions for flying like this are survivable for humans but they are not easy conditions. NASA is also working on other approaches to study the planet. They are also going back to the old technology they use to use furing the World War II. All the risks that scientist will take to go here will come with a huge value for everyone and it will clear everyones doubts. Scientists and astronomers should do everything to meet this imagination and innovation for our people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people think that the electoral college is not reasonable. I don't think they're wrong. The electoral college is very unfair. It is unfair because the people's votes might be overuled, the electoral college is biased, and they may not pay any attention to the people's opinions.\n\nFirst of all, in some cases the popular vote might not be of any value. Besides, the popular vote doesn't matter in the decision for president it elects members for the electoral college. So if I wanted to vote for a republican president but the electoral college ends up voting for the democrat I would have wasted my time going to vote. Clearly, the electoral college's vote overrules the popular vote.\n\nIn addition to overruling the popular vote, the people on the electoral college are biased. If the people who are on the electoral college are biased then, they might not take people's votes into account to their electoral vote. I know no one would want their vote to be ignored so this is another reason why the electoral college should be abolished. If a democracy means the people decide who their leaders are, then why are there other people who might not represent the people chosing our president. Quite obviously, the electoral college is biased and might not care about the popular vote.\n\nFurthermore, even if the people's votes go to the electoral college, the college might not even pay attention to the reasons people give to vote for someone. Most people don't really care that their votes go to deciding who is on the electoral college, but they are missing the point. The electoral college are made up of human beings and they will say no to ideas they don't like. I don't think that the fate of our country should be resting on the idea that if one person doesn't like someone they will reject the idea. Obviously, the electoral college might reject some ideas just because they don't like them.\n\nTo conclude, the electoral college cannot be trusted to decide the future of our great nation. This group of electors might be biased, their votes overrule the popular vote, and they might not be open to opinions. Consider these reasons for the electoral college not deciding the future of the United States. These people cannot be trusted to vote for our new president.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent days, various TV programs have increased every day. The effects, it can give advantages and disadvantages in the quality of TV programs. I strongly believe this can be deployed for human lives. \r\n\r\nLooking into more detail, the value of the negative of this improvement can affect every level of humans like children, teenagers, adults and elders people. It will give more information that can not be filtered because of the amount of information from television. For example, there is a lot of information about the celebrity that they can watch on TV programmes.The value of the news, can not be known by people. They can believe the information naturally without cross-checking the information. The results, people will follow the information instead the information is real or fake. This can make followers wrong in directions. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the growing of TV programs can make advantages for citizens. First, they can choose a variety of programs based on their needs. They can filter which program they want to watch. That means they can improved the value of their lives based on their hobbies for example. Second, education can be learned everywhere not only at schools. Children can get information from every TV program that brings news about something new to learn.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, a variety of TV programs can make people more intelligent and learn everything that can make their lives better than before. They can also share information with each other who have similar concerns. They can discuss based on what their was watched before.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, modern people are willing to keep themselves fit. Although many individuals believe that the authorities should make the laws relating to nutrition, other feel that each person should be responsible for personal health condition. Personally, in my opinion, the state should subsidise the healthy nourishment manufacturers, and individuals should be responsible for their health.\n\nOn the one hand, it is true that citizens may get a benefit from a healthy lifestyle. In this case, the most important thing is consuming a nutrition. Furthermore, they should avoid unhealthy food, such as takeaways, junk food and fast foods. However, consumers' personal preferences should not be influenced by the governors. For example, if the consumers are keen to purchase unhealthy nutriments or nutrients, the state should not influence on their choice.\n\nOn the other hand, authorities can prevent the people from buying such kinds of products by introducing new taxes. Furthermore, the laws regarding nutrition can prevent many negative trends among the youngsters and adults. To illustrate, many negative trends such as obesity and overeating are caused by unhealthy food. In addition, the government should build sport facilities for town dwellers where they can do exercises such as jogging and swimming.\n\nIn conclusion, although many people believe that government should make laws in order to prevent citizens from negative trends, others feel that each individual should consume whatever products they want. Personally, I believe that the authorities should motivate people to keep them fit, and purchase products from reliable manufacturers and producers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir love appreciation Narciso appreciated parents They gave home Cuba job even happiness Love loved alot family meant alot family said family people care one another even blood related doesnt matter It s Love carenessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I absolutely do not agree with this article. From what I've noticed over the years as something new has been invented, is that usually over time or right after you use it is that it becomes faulty. Ithink that driverless cars could easily malfunction over someones road rage or even if someone ran or fell into the car too hard. For example when they said this in the text, who is at fault when an accident happens,\n\nis it the driver or the manufacture? When an accident does occur, even if it was the cars fault, the driver is to blame since they were in drivers seat and car at that time. But i also think that when this does happen, the business that created the driverless car will lose a lot of business from this.\n\nIn this story, they describe more good things than all the bad things that could easily happen. I also feel that this car is only going to make people lazier, so they should keep it as its always been, its not like the accidents that occur are ever going to change. Also it doesnt really make a difference because you still have to do some work so its not actually a driverless car, it kind of contradicts its name don't you think? They mentioned how when it comes to complicated traffic such as avoiding road work, accidents, and navigation, this is where the driver comes in and takes over. Because of this people will easily forget to actually pay attention and stay alert as to when they are needed to drive. This company can not, and im sure a lot of people can prove this, guarantee that all of the people who drive these cars will stay alert and ready to take action. People will continue to talk and text on their phone while driving, they can't change this fact either. Even though this car is almost fully driverless, it's not really changing anything.\n\nThe driver less car does not need to be made because it is just going to make driving dangerous for a lot of people, especially fro people who walk to every where they need to go. There will be even more car crashes and accidents beacuse the drivers automatically think the car has control over everything and that it knows what it is doing. Imean it could work out well if the car was fully driverless but its not, well it still might if it never becomes faulty or malfunctions, and it might not because if there is something that really needs to be fixed, the driver might not know and then there, another accident or car crash.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders faced many obstacles trying make possible allow dirigibles dock top Empire State Building They could add steel mooring mast top building would add much stress frame foundation building If going add mooring mast needed modify strengthen building s frameThe problem builders faced safety They consider fact may dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen highly flammable The Building densely populated area downtown New York City The last obstacle builders faced nature The winds top building strong air currents frequently shifted This would made dirigibles swivel around mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features surrounding cyclist effect greatly All around hills rough terraine sand tumble weeds These features leave thinking die life around Everything dry vivid thats makes feel The old rusty water pump shows hasnt used ages black tar pumped help negative thought lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders empire state building faced several obstacles attempts allow dirigibles dock One changes wind current The dirigibles steering systems could tethered however wind could overpower systems causing loose controll crash Another obstacle fear another Hindenburg accident On May hinden burg dirigible like dirigibles contained hydrogen highly flamible gas ignited burned keeping casualties mainly men women board however incident happened highly populated number deaths would increase due pedestriansSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Space. It can be a mysterious place. All of the planets in the solar system hold secrets from long ago. One planet impaticular that caught the attention of people's eyes is Mars. An acient rock formation that resebles a face of an acient pharoh made Mars' popularity soar, and most people think it was constucted by aliens years and years and years ago! I believe, though, that the rock formation is simply a normal landform because many factors show that it is nothing special including that the sun casted unusual shadows, the best photo we could possibly take showed no life forms visible, and the fact that it looks similar to an Earth landform, the Middle Butte, in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nI believe that \"The Face\" is just a rock formation that can cast some unusual shadows and was not created by aliens. Many factors could have caused the unusual shadows. The sun, whenever it is shining, can make objects cast the craziest of shadows. In this instance, it is apparent that these shadows look like eyes, a nose and a mouth of an acient pharoh. When we released the photo, we knew it would be good puplicity for Mars and us that people believed it was a face. It also made people believe of life on Mars, which is information we would liked to keep private, but that is not all the evidence that supports that aliens did not constuct it, or were even any help.\n\nAnother factor that comes into play when proving no aliens have made it, is the fact that even the best photo we have ever taken shows no life detected on Mars.\n\nWhen we first took the photo, we knew it would dominate the internet as well. We made sure to discern the digital image to three times the size of the normal pixel size so we could see absolutely everything. There was no shacks or little aliens running around building pyramids or any giant state-of-the art face rocks popping up here and there. The only thing the picture showed us was a Martian duplicate of a butte or mesa. There is even more facts that still stand, though.\n\nThe final fact that shows there is no possible way that aliens drove to Mars, found a rock and sculpted a face in it is the fact that it is remotely similar to a landform found right here on Earth. In the American West, Idaho to be specific, many of these unusual buttes and mesas show up. For example, the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It is just a plain, old lava dome that took the form of an isolated mesa. It is even the same height as \"The Face\" on Mars. This proves that most planets, not just Earth, can just normally make rock landforms, and aliens had nothing to do with it.\n\nIn conclusion, I stick with my facts and claim that \"The Face\" on Mars is just a normal landform with special traits that may reseble a face. These facts stated are more than enough proof that aliens, or any life form for that matter, were asisting with the creation of \"The Face.\" Even though some people are oblivious to the fact that aliens were no help, these facts still stand as tall as a skyscraper. When the sun,shadows,photos,and simple Earth landforms come into play, it is obviously impossible to believe that aliens were there when this normal rock formation was created. Think about these facts before basing a decision on a little rumor that is spread.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ¨Face\" on Mars is a mere coincidence. There are many formations like this one on earth. When using the Mars Global Survey spacecraft it´s high resolution camera picked up no signs of any type of advanced civilization. Authors of magazines at the time also hyped the ¨Face¨ up, to get more people interested in Mars. This story has been used in an array of entertainment, from movies to magazines.\n\nOn Earth there are formations called buttes, ¨ That´s a lava domes that take formation of an isolated mesa...¨ according to paragraph twelve. Also in paragraph twelve it states that on Earth these landforms are most common in the American west. These particular formations are especially common in the Cydonia region of Mars. Finding these landforms in this region are so common that the scientists at NASA were shocked at how much it resembled a face, knowing it was not an alien artifact. Another reason that we know it is a butte is because it was not only photographed once or twice but three times!\n\nThis landform has been photographed by two different spacecraft, the Viking 1 and the Mars Global Surveyor. These spacecraft were spread apart for a span of over 25 years! The Viking 1 picked up the best images it could for it´s time but the much more recent Mars Global Surveyor has a much better and more accurate image of the ¨Face¨ than the 1976 photo. The Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) also took two clear photographs of the landform while the 1976 image is blurry to say the least. In 1976 the image was so fuzzy that no one could tell what was there, which led to reporters and authors to excite the public more than what was necessary.\n\nIn 1976 authors and reports hyped up the find of this ¨Face¨ on Mars. Authors did this to draw more attention to Mars, which because NASA serves the interests of the people and the government was an outstanding thing but it went to far. After all a face on a planet not all that far from us makes a great headline. Not everyone exaggerated it though NASA, as said in the article, upon releasing the pictures to the public stated ¨huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.¨ The face on Mars was also used in afilm and in countless magazines across the country.\n\nThe ¨Face\" on Mars is merely just shadows playing tricks on the eye. The Face is merely a landform with shadows in all the right spots playing an illusion on those who see it. Over the years many claims, false or true, have been made about the Face on Mars and they aren going to stop anytime soon. So far no evidence supports the claims of conspiracy theorists, however that doen´t mean they never will. The ¨Face¨ on Mars has had many stories told about for over two and a half decades, and they are not going to stop anytime soon, but it is important to know that science has not proven anything about the ¨Face¨ on Mars, yet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Car That Can Change The World\n\nDriveless cars have been one of the ways for the future of technology to grow rapidly. People all acrossed the world have been wanting self driving cars for decades. Cars that drive themselves can be both a blessing and a curse because of all the different aspects to consider. By finding both posistive and negative reasons for driveless cars to be manufactured, and the laws to let the engineers create them, we can better understand all aspects of the future of cars.\n\nThere are inciteful reasons why self driving cars are helpful and useful. One reason driveless cars are a good idea, are the new sensors installed within the car. With new sensors, people driving the cars can be safer from accidents such as backing up to far, not looking at the road, and breaking too late. ''Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own''(driverless cars are coming). On the other hand, self driving cars can be seen as a threat and should not exist. Something to consider before wanting a self driving car is to ponder why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn’t drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive? The solution to these problems are to bring in-car entertainment and information systems. However, if the manufactor doesn't do this then what will happen to the sales projection and loss of profits? only time will tell (driverless cars are coming soon). Lastly, the traffic Laws. ''Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. It is illegal even to test computer-driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars; manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe''(driverless cars are coming soon). Driveless cars may seem like a good idea at first, but many accidents will follow even if the manufactors put every kind sensor in and entertainment in the vehicle.\n\nIn conclusion, the positive and negative effects as well as the legal prospective, indicate that the manufactors and engineers still have a long way to go before the traffic laws will let them even test on the road. The question to ask now is If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As author says Venus is dangerous to send humans to study the planet, the author does state we should still try and don't let the challenges stop us from doing so. the author states Astromnomers believe Venus was probably covered largely by oceans and could've support various type of lives. Have similar features like earth. Venus could be the nearest option to visit.\n\nAstronomers are facinated by Venus beacause the believe \"it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" meaning a similar discussion about Mars. They believe that Venus, long ago, \"was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\" demostration it could be an interesting visit to Venus and if the statements or beliefs are true, Sciencetist might find an answer why Venus doesn't support life or the bodies of oceans dissapear if it did have those features in the first place.\n\n\"Venus still has some features that analogous to those on Earth\" meaning there could've been a possibility about life on Venus but also was discover that \"the planet has a surface of rocky sidiment and inclused familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\" demostrating interesting theories people can make why those familiar features are in Venus and how they were created if no life existed there.\n\nFinally, Venus \"can be our nearest option for a planetary visit,\" for example: and \"end of the world\" scenario. People could travel to Venus to start a new life there, if researchers make an innovation to make it safe to land in Venus and probaly restore life in the planet if it did long ago.\n\nThe conclusion is, the reasons above explains why studying Venus is worthy despite the dangers. The visit can inspired a lot of researchers to make trips on othe planets that they may think it was Earth-like at some point or supported life in it.\n\nThe planet Venus may have a thick atmosphere meaning a human won't be able to survive; however, the innovations that can be created for those problems can solve it. The features the planet has might help us and make us understand why now Venus doesn't support life anymore and how humanity can avoid the same problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In your everyday life, just about anywhere you go you will see people traveling from place to place in their own veichles. Is the idea of us, as indivisuals, not owning our own motor veichles even an option? The idea of not being able to transport where you need to be when you need to be there is a terrorfying thought. But, when put into consideration you will find it some what reasonable.\n\nJust think about it, all the toxins released into the air and all the traffic we can be stuck in for hours at a time! Reducing the clutter and the use of oils is enfact very possible. Residents in Vauban, Germany have copletely almost completly cut owing cars out of their community. 70 percent of Vauban's familys don't own cars while 57 percent sold their cars to move there. With mostly \"car-free\" streets with the exception of the main thoroughfare, Vauban has forbidden driveways and home garages. Though car ownership is aloud if the car- owner buys a space to park it, Vauban is leading an example of an alternative way that communities can live reducing greenhouse gas emissions.\n\nThis example has most certainly envulenced Paris enforcing a partial driving ban. pollution, a large issue in the streets of paris, is being reduced with a driving ban fining anyone who did not leave their cars at home. After five days of this ban, congestion in france was down 60 percent.\n\nThough completely banning cars may be found inconfiniate or extreme, Bogota, colombia, takes place in this uprising craze by devoting one day a year to \"The Day Without Cars\". By doing this they strive to promote alternative transportation and reduce clutter in this capital city. Violators of this event would recieve 25$ fines. The community who participated in this event have found alternate transportation, and comfort in a break from the clutter. Businessman Carlos Arturo is quoted \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\", he rode a two-seated bicycle with his wife to get from place to place. As more Colombian citied participate in the event Municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the eveny and were enthusiastic. Enriqur Riera, the mayor of Asuncion, paraguay stated that \"These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders\".\n\nThese changes are most certainly revolutionary and are changing the way we see our lifes and the way we see transportation. The idea of us working, learning, and living without indivisual automoblies is becoming to look like a huge possibilty. The fact that there are communties taking part in this act, reducing polution and clutter, show that this very well could be part of a change for us and the way we live. With the owner-ship of automobiles and drivers liscenses going down in america, Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University and director of its Mobilitier Research center, stated that \"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the print as well as the electronic media tends to dedicate large amounts of airtime and space to detailed reports about crimes.Personally, I believe such details should be strictly censored, if not banned altogether.\n\nIt is widely known that the press provide the public with criminal content in order to increase newspaper circulation and TV rating.These days the primary purpose of journalists covering the details of criminal acts is,more often than that, to boost newspaper circulations and TV ratings. Consequently, a great deal of crime coverage is rather biased, exaggerated or fraudulent, which only result to terrorize communities and leave law-abiding people increasingly apprehensive of about crimes.\n\nAn even more detrimental fact is that detailed reports of crimes exposured on the press may provide the potential criminals with instructive learning materials, which would be hard to obtain otherwise. This may help those who are in the process of panning a criminal act perfect their plans, avoid the pitfalls and make themselves harder to be tracked down by the police. Thus, without the prevention on criminal details the unlawful behavior would be more and more severe and the social harmony would be broken.\n\nMost importantly, particular coverage of heinous crimes may further traumatize the victims of crimes because they have already suffered greatly for what they have experienced.Without their consent this could only add to theses innocent people's mental suffering and they may do some extreme actions.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly hold my point that any descriptions of crimes should not go unchecked as any longer as they may be false may further drive up the already-high crime rate and may bring even more suffering to the victims of crimes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempts allow dirigibles dock One obstacle installing mooring mast architects could nt simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof weight blimp moored top held single cable tether would add stress frame The stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmit way building s foundation The builders would modify strengthen build accommodate new situation Another obstacle faced cost would take sixty thousand dollar s make proper modifications building s framework Also safety another major obstacle would make people going safe Most dirigible countrie s used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The area s densely populated accident city would much worse The greatest obstacle nature winds building constantly shifting due violent air currents even dirigible tethered mooring mast back would swivel around Dirigibles moored open landing fields could weighted weights using would dangerous dangling high pedestrians Many obstacles practical reasons could nt moor Empire State Building There existing law airships flying low urban areas make illegal ships tie building So long obstacles faced attempting allow dockingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, people have become more interested in historical stories of the buildings where they stay. There are several preconditions for this trend and various methods are used to find the stories behind people's houses or buildings.\r\n\r\nThe people's tendency of finding out the story behind a building has increased significantly among the societies due to several reasons. First, people believe that some buildings are constructed with specific purposes so that they just want to know about why their ancestors built those in certain places. Moreover, some buildings feature unique and intricate designs. It makes some people curious about how the buildings were built and what materials were used. Therefore, people try to figure out what their mind think by looking for the history of those.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some methods used for understanding these aforementioned histories. First, through the enhancement of technology, people can get plenty of information that they need. Citizens, nowadays, have become more creative of using the features of technology such as internet and social media to uncover something, specifically about what is the story behind a building. So, they can easily derive the information without requiring a hard working. Next, people can ask their grandparents or older people around them to get information why their houses were constructed. The stories from our ancestors are usually more valuable and knowledgeable so that we do not only understand the history but also know how that building can be existed.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people finding out the history of their houses or buildings because of some factors and there are several ways to uncover those histories.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There difference right wrong Most us learn us nt We choice either face done wrong lie get even trouble already Ever wondered something wrong nt think first Well one times I nt thinking first I nine year s old I playing park joking around playing old rusted blue swing set good time Nothing much park shoot hoop s run around go monkey bar s ton s bacteria drenched slide play tag energy see s two rusted broke car s look like centuries say s dumb brain We go throw rocks car s guy s I shack head nodding wide grin face say s zero tolerance negatively say s nt car s owned somebody How would feel someone idiot kid s came wrecked car s I think second well point I would flip chicken idiot kid s car We looking thinking Sixteen minutes go still nothing With idiot brain say car s nt belong anyone They nt even look like move look s like sitting sense dinosaurs walks mumbles self idiot kid s I already know re going get trouble I look like saw ghost We finally start heading towards rusty broken car s On way clumsy feet trip s piece wood Finally get two rusty broken car s I pick rock I think second ask okay I Just pure pressure guilty conscience I threw rock One kept throwing rocks pipes car parts logs beating gigantic metal pipe I leave exhausted take break look done rusty broken car s The two car s look like hit tornado I start laughing head s We kept laughing almost wet selves There one around one saw us At least s thought Was four day s later back park I sign About go home park tall blond old big feet lady walk s us asks us live We kid s time I say without even thinking one tiny bit I leave right street s second last house I ll show would like The lady big feet reply s would great thanks I start walking home wondering lady want know live Get around block see lady s car front house I look I knew thinking thinking I m screwed The lady big feet ended owner two rusty broken car s I nt know say Just thought going mind telling I m screwed Never grounded whooped hard life If lesson s I learned would nt touch anything respectful treat everything respect even s idiot kid s This shown I right wrong telling truth face done wrong think something actions get s troubleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people work for parliament for their whole life such as banks and lawyers etc. Thus, they believe that the government should look after them once they retire since they have worked as normal citizens. While others think that it is the worker's responsibility to care about their own future.So,they should save cash when they are capable of earning.I will discuss my opinion in the next paragraphs. \n\nMost of the people who contribute to society have professions like soldiers and sportsmen.Moreover,there are many circumstances when they have to risk their lives for the nation and civilization.So,it is the government's duty to look after them once they retire by giving them a pension of certain amounts of wage. Because they will not be able to save capital by working on the country's border.For instance, there may be some injuries that can result from not earning payment.\n\nHowever, in other professions where one does not need to risk his life namely doctor and teacher, should take responsibility for his own future by saving funds in his working life instead of having bad habits to follow ,for example, drinking alcohol and smoking.authorities should not look after them without any special situations.Besides, higher-ups should encourage young ones to save funds. ,also they could hold conventions for their minor employees.\n\nTo sum up,Although it is necessary to care for old generations by giving them a pension for their contributions.but this should be considered by authorities per person's job risk and opportunities of saving funds with keeping people’s behaviour in mind before giving them loans and pension since one should be responsible for his own future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow what an awesome new thing! The Facial Action Coding System is now an option for possibly being in classrooms, I think that's great! What a way to see how students truly feel, whether it's an over the computer assignment, or even just taking a test to see how they are doing. Personally, I believe putting them in classrooms would be a great idea and would benefit not only the students, but also the teachers. The Facial Action Coding is just another form of technolohgy but this one could actually be useful. This technology could help teachers have a moral thought about what their students weaknesses really are.\n\nIf these type of useful tools were put into classrooms, I feel like it would overall help teachers alot. It would help them with knowing how their students are doing, and what their moods really are. The Facial Action Coding System has a way of showing different emotions, so therefore it would be able to show the teachers if their student is struggling with what they are learning about. Assignments can also be different for some students, some kids think things may be harder than others, and the Facial Action Coding System could justify that. With having a classroom full, I'm sure it isn't easy to debate if every student is understanding the material the way they should be.\n\nTechnology has really come to be something so helpful with our lives, just like this system could be. Personally, I strongly agree this should be used more around the world. Why not add somthing like this into classes so students have no way of hiding their emotions, because we all know most students don't tell their teachers how they are really feeling. Teachers would now know their rough spots, and see what percentage of the students really are confused or just bored, which could benefit them with teaching techniques. There's only so much a teacher can tell by just the facial expressions of students, but now they actually have a tool to help them know a student more.\n\nUsing technology in a classroom is something that is already occuring in everyday life but putting something like this should really be thought about. It could help students with knowing that they have soemthing that can see how they are feeling, and make them more honest about their feelings instead of holding in their questions. If students are confused or lost on a subject, they won't be able to hide it anymore. Teachers would be able to pull one aside and have a talk with them on what they are confused on. Lets say majority of a class all had a rough spot, and most of them didn't get it, the teacher could change up their way of showing the material to help benefit their students.\n\nEnjoying school and understanding it is an important part of life, school is what determines your future career. With this form of technology, things could be alot easier for teachers, college professors, and even for the students that are taking in the material. Everyday life would be completely different in a school enviroment because students will no longer have a way to show that they really aren't understanding just by the help of the Facial Action Coding. I strongly believe this should be in classrooms to just be the back up eyes for a teacher or professor so if they need to chnage their teaching style, they can do so. The Facial Action Coding is a great new way of technology, and it should most definitely be used more each and every day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Back in 1976 an image was captured by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. In that time technology wasn't as good as it is now. So the so called Face started to spread quickly. Many people thought that this was created by aliens.\n\nNow first of all aliens haven't been proved real yet, so if aliens aren't real then how can people say aliens did it. In the first image taken in 1976 I can understand why people are creating theories. But if you look at the one taken in 2001 you can clearly see that it is a mesa. Even in 1998, when technology was advancing, you can still see that it is a mesa or just even a type of landform.\n\nLike Garvin says \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" and I agree with him completely. I bet if we looked now with the technology we have with could see little rocks on the ground because our country is so advanced in technology. Since we don't see Cydonia alot because we don't pass very often , I don't see us seeing the Face for quite a while.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate development is the greatest threat to human life on earth. However, some people consider that instead of averting it, we should find a way to adapt to it. Although there are convincing statements on both sides, i believe that we still have to tackle this issue.\n\nOne of the main causes of temperature change is global warming. If both the government and people can take reasonable actions, this can be well controlled. For instance, the government can stop the generation of power from fossil fuels, which causes the emission of carbon and can be detrimental to the society. Also, the government can implement green taxes on industries that emit carbon-di-oxide, and invest in other renewable energy such as solar, wind, and hydro power. Furthermore, individuals can try to limit their carbon footprint by flying less and using public transport.\n\nTrying to live with climate revolution is a very dangerous idea because in the near future, climate change will make our planet inhabitable. Because of global warming, the polar ice is melting causing sea levels to rise. Provided that there is an increase water sea level, natural disasters like flooding and drought are likely to occur. As a result, this will make people lose their homes and perhaps migrate to another country.\n\nIn conclusion, weather diversity is becoming a pressing issue, I reiterate my opinion that there are different ways of tackling this problem by creating a new source of power and using less vehicles. Therefore, both the government and people have a role to play.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be a smart idea\n\nI think that driverless cars would be a good idea. According to the article, there are many positive effects of having a driverless car . With the improved technology, having a driverless car can illuminate the hard of having to hold the steering wheel. Not having to hold the steering wheel while driving the whole time, can be a relief to the driver in case if they may want to take a break. Creating driverless cars may even cost the price of cars today to drop, in which it may be affordable to others.\n\nWithout a doubt, the idea of driverless cars can have a major impact on the world and insutry today. In fact, there are many reasons why driverless cars can have a positive effect on the world. It plays a major part in safety. One reason is the driverless car would reduce the amount of accidents that occur around the world each day. For an example, in case if the driver decides to take a break from driving the car would take complete control. This can be very helpful to drivers who are in a situation in which they have to do two things at once. Also, it may even reduce the amount of tickets received to drivers by police in they feel the need to use there cell phones. Allowing the cars to opperate themselves would decrease the risk of having to watch the road and focus on other things. It can be beneficial because, as stated in the artilce the car alerts the driver if the individual in the car decides to fall asleep.\n\nRefferring to the last paragraph, the car alerting the driver can have a positive effect on the drivers saftey. Alerting the driver to wake up, will decrease the number of accidents that occur. Over the years, many people have died around the world from falling asleep on the road while the vehicle is in motion. Advantages the driver has of the driverless car is the driver can take control of the car when it is need. The driverless car allows the driver to take control under rough situations also. Situations that can occur are, heavy traffic, road blocks , work zones, and maybe even accidents. GM has also made seats in cars that vibrate that alerts the driver. Many manufacturers plan to create cameras to make sure that the driver of the car is focused on the road. Things like these can be helpful to drivers because, many drivers tend to get distracted while driving, no matter wat the case may be.\n\nOverall, the driverless car can be a dependable creation. Many driver would not have to worry about holding the steering wheel for long periods of time. Also, individuals would not have to worry about falling asleep while the vehicle is moving. The vibrating seats, cameras, and alerts sound detected in the car will help keep the driver aware at all times. Even if the driver does not want the car to drive itself, the driver would have the ability to drive the car on their own. Creating this invention would change the world forever . The cars that human being drive today would be history. Driverless cars would be one of the biggest inventions of all-time. Many people around the world may buy these cars because, it would take away the headaches of driving the cars that we do today. This would improve the industry of cars and manufacters who create them, because of its spontaneous abilities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming ready or not. Many companies are racing aganst time to try to be the first company to get their driverless car approved. Depending on who you are this could be a good thing or a bad thing. But this doesn't seem like wise choice me. If driverless cars become a thing in future young drivers like me won't learn how to become a saver driver because the car does everything for you. Plus if the car maulfunctions and you get in an accident who's fault is it yours or the car manufacturs fault. Another thing is if there is a new type of vihicle on the road they would have make new laws and would need to change others.\n\nHaving a car that can drive for you is like making someone do your homework all the time and when you have a test you won't know anything on it because you didn't do the homework. If you have a car that always drives it's self you wouldn't know how to drive when you get behind the wheel. Now you are probably thinking what about going to Drivers Ed. Yes that would be the smart thing to do. But their are going to be people that think that they don't to take it because their drives it's self there is not point. But there is it is to make you a better driver and be safe the road.\n\nYou are going down a two way street and there is a stop sign up ahead. Your are calm. You think the car is going to stop. But it does as you make it half way through you hit a car. Who's fault is it. This is another problem that the manufacture and people that are thinking about buying a driverless car have to think about. To be honest I wouldn't want to ride in a vihicle that I can only control certain parts of. Because if the car loses control and crash and die you hit someone and they die. How would you feel. You couldn't have done much to save their life or yours. That is why companies should really thinks about the negative of have a driverless car.\n\n\"Many of the driving laws focus on making sure that drivers, passengers, pedestrians are safe\". Many of the laws are about a person being behind the wheel of a car. You take the driver out the picture then what. You have to come up with new laws that will make sure that self driving are safe so that no one gets hurt.\n\nShould driverless cars be a thing. No I don't think so. I hope you will agree with me and my statement to make the roads a\n\nsafer place and be behind the wheel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it becomes current for people to have an offspring later than few years ago. Many reasons are behind this new practice. In consequence, advantages and disadvantages will be outlined in this essay.\n\nFirst of all, work and travel are the main benefits. Indeed, contrarly to our ancestor who didn't have the chance to go to school. The new generation have the opportunity to have a job directly after being graduated. In this case, they generally prefer to report the time for a juvenile in order to be more focus in their work. Moreover, without children, it is most simple to travel around the world and discover a new culture. I fact, they can also do it with an infant, but without it they can feel more free and less preoccupied. According to my own experience, for instance, I decided to have a child around 40 years old because I would liKe to have the capacity to realise dream, such as go to America or be graduated before to share my life with my children. \n\nHowever, to have a baby make people feel complited. It is a privilege to have one and become parents. So, have an infant late does not give them the opportunity to live with them for a long time. For this reason, it is preferable to have a child around 30 years old and spend the time before for traveling and builting their professional life. To give an example, it is possible to quote the professor Mark who in his article for the CNRS gives some statistics about the situation. Almost, 30% of the parents who have an offspring late (around 40 years old) lived only 20 years with them. \n\nIn conclusion, to have a juvenile late could be on a one hand, the chance for people to work and go outside the country without being preoccupied by someone else. On the other hand, they cannot live with them enough. If it is managed properly, advantages could outweigh drawbackSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electorial college should not be used because you dont exactly vote for the president. the electorial college is to voulintary for presidention voting. 3 reasons why the electorial college should not be used because you vote for a slate of electors, they would have the advantige in votes, and it over rules the poeple vote.\n\nOne reason why this method should not be used becaus you vote for a slate of electors. instead of voting and using the poeoles vote, you vote for electors to elect for you. it comes from a variaty of places of whom is the electors. which lead to the biggest election crises odf 2000.\n\nAnother reqason why this method should nt be used is because they would have a advantige in votes. Republicans would mostly build up the election group. which is over 300 polititions.\n\none last reason is that it over rules the poeples vote. if the poeple vote is up to 40% and the electorial vote is 60% it would over rule our vote. which leads to a obviouse winner in the election on the camopaighn run.\n\nthe reason the elecctorial colllege should be banned is, you votefor a slate of electors, they would have the advantedg in the vote run, and it over rules the poeples vote.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people delve into the stories of their homes simply because they are curious. Many historical buildings have been torn down, which makes those that remain uncommon treasures in the city. As a the results , it is likely that residents in the surviving buildings can't help finding out more about them, such as when they were built and why they look the way they do. There are also people who do research to find a sense of connection. With concrete residential buildings everywhere, neighbourhoods nowadays look very alike and, therefore, it is hard for people to feel something special about where they live. However, by learning about the buildings that once stood there and the people who lived in them, for example, a sense of connection and involvement may be fostered. The best way for people to explore, I believe, is to ask the elderly in their neighbourhood. Many seniors have lived in the same neighbourhood all their lives. They have seen it change around them. They have witnessed people coming and going. Talking to them can definitely help one uncover some intriguing stories of the place where one lives. In conclusion, curiosity and a desire to seek a connection are two possible reasons why people investigate the history of their homes. To find answers, they should ask the old people in their neighbourhood for helpSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been on a road trip or just a long drive and said \"I wish this car could just drive itself\", that may become a viable option sooner than you might have though. Google and other major corporations have been working around the clock for years trying to make that dream become a reality and are getting closer than anyone could've imagined, but do you really trust a computer with the lives of your friends and family.\n\nYes technology has come a long way the past few years and for the most part it has made positive impacts on our day-to-day lives but we cant just forget the downsides of all these new tech gadgets. Think about how easy it is for someone to hack into your laptop or phone and get all of your person information. How long do you think it would take skilled hackers to find a way to get control of your self driving car once they are released, 6 months maybe a year and you could have thousands of peole trying to gain full power over your vehicle and they just might be able to.\n\nLets also not forget that computers and other devices malfunction quite often, more frequently then we'd like to admit. Have you ever been on your laptop while constructing an important document and your system just completely shut down without saving? That has happened to me and many people I know and we all thought it was one of the worst things that could happen. Can you imagine what would happen if you're on the middle of the expressway taking a nice road trip with your family and your car just shuts off in the middle of the highway surrounded by 10 ton trucks that could crush your small self driven car like it was an empty soda can. I can risk losing papers on my hard drive due to a malfunction, but im not willing to risk my life to one.\n\nSure everyone has dreamed of a self driving machine but now that you know all the things that could inevedably go wrong, does it really seem like that cool of an idea? Lets say you can afford a car that drives it self, can you afford the damage you could be held responsible for if something goes wrong with the vehicle. Can you afford to maintain and repair a 2 ton computer that has enough technology to drive you around? I hope that the facts i have told you today will help clear up and questions you've had about if its worth it or not because when you really think about it, it's truely not.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are on the rise in the U.S. Lots of different car companies are trying to continue the development of driverless cars. I personally think that they are a great idea, and their are many reasons why i think that. A computer driving the car is safer than a human, if a plane can go on autopilot why can't cars, and last but not least, the human in the car can take over any time.\n\nI think that if all computers were controlling cars on the road it would be much safer than all humans controlling cars, and this is why. People get distracted on the road all the time. Other people in the car, their phones, things happening outside while they're driving and some people even drive drunk! The computer will never get distracted by the surroundings, giving it ultimate focus on the road. All the human has to do is stay alert and make sure they're ready to take over when they need to use their human skills.\n\nPlanes are put on autopilot all the time, and the people that make driving laws think driverless cars aren't safe. If that's the case, everybody should be scared for their lives when they get on a plane. Planes are put into autopilot a lot, and have no problems. Sometimes, autopilot flies the plane smoother than the pilot. The driving laws think that people will not pay attention to the road with a computer controlling the car, but even when they're driving people still dont pay attenion to the road 24/7. So with a computer driving it, you atleast know something is watching the road.\n\nThe last thing i have to say is that when the computer can't handle a situation, the driver can take over at any time. When the person needs to take over, the car quickly alerts the driver so they can handle the situation. GM developed a seat vibrator for when the car is about to back up into something. Other options are flashing windshield lights and even the cars having cameras so they can watch the driver while the driver watches the road. So work zones and accidents wont be a problem,\n\nThe three things i have said: Autopilot, a computer driving is safer, and the fact that a human can take over any time are just a few of the reasons they should allow driverless cars. Soon they will be a big thing in the U.S and around the world. Automakers are continuing the development of them and soon they will be on the road. I know i'll be getting one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have yo ever wondered what it would be like without a car in America or anywhere else? well im going to give you a little on how it feels not to have a car.\n\nFirst, Vauban Germany- Residents which they are an upscale community which they are suburban pioneers with just a few soccer moms or commuting executives. French and Swiss borders streets are \" car-free\" except the main thoroughfare, where Freiburg runs. Owners must get a larger garage or the must park on a large edge which can lead up form $40,000 just right along with a home. As the results came in 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own a car and most of them like 57 percent sold their cars in order to move where they was from to be down in Vauban's. As Heidrun Walter say \" I'm much happier this way\" she is just a mother of two and she walks right along verdant streets where the swish of the biycles and the children and adults chattering instead of hearing a loud motor coming up and down the streets where her and two children walk on.\n\nNext, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. They enforced this law on a Monday for even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a big fine. The same would apply to odd-numbered plates on that following day. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined and according to the Reuters about twenty-seven people had their car impunded due to they got into a phyiscal altercation with the police officers when they was handing them their tickets or they wouldnt comply to the rules that they had made so that they could clear the air. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to about 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe, according to the Reuters. The smog cleared enought Monday for the ruling French party to rescined the ban for odd-numbered plates on a tuesday with the complaintes from delivery companies for the lost of revenue, while they didnt expect to have a hyrbid cars with only carrying three or more passaengers at that time.\n\nFinally, Bogota, Colombia a capital city where during most days they hiked, biked, skated or even took buses to work during a car-free day like yesterday, leaving their cars on the streets nearly devoided a traffic jam on the side of that street. Just being it's third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Days Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogotoa. \" The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,\" said Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus. Carlos Arturo Plaze and his wife have rode a two-seat bicycle so that they can help stop the smog. In the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily which lead to that most of Americans either dont have jobs in order to pay to get a new car or that people with jobs either brought cheaper cars which held aleast amount of gas. There was a drop in the percentage of 16-to-39-year-olds getting their license, while most of the older genertation just retain their licenses as they age, Mr. Sivak's research has found.\n\nIn Conclusion, Having cars in certain places is a dangerment not only to that city or state but to their people and the air pollution which can lead to way more dangerous things.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I writing concern people computers You concerned people computers nt spending time either excircising enjoying nature interacting family I agree fact people computers become lazy nt spend time interacting activities I one day made survay many people agree many people computers nt interacting activities people I asked said agree corse others nt care much Many people think s normal I checked web site specializes weight get feet loose weight eazily web site I read article web page paragraph sec states obesity caused either computer andor lazyness Of corse people might disagree people disagree big time athleats I chate pro player said CAPS I kid nt things either home work playing outside friends Even big time athleats agree Well conclusion I agree fact fact people computers makes lazy interact familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a parent is an extremely complex task as anyone would agree, a lot of crucial factor goes into consideration, and the choices a parent makes to nurture his kid ultimately defines the person they would become while growing up, attention to detail is a must and a parent should consider all the aspects of a child's growth and not just stick to either.\r\n\r\nI moderately agree with the claim as encouraging children to spend less time studying and more on doing physical activities is not only a good recreational break for a child, but rather a physical development aid as most of our body evolution takes place during childhood, and transformations can be phenomenal.\r\n\r\nStudies suggest that children who perform more physical activities have more brain advancement than children who don't perform any type of sports. According to science, any sport / exercise pumps more oxygen into the blood and triggers a neurochemical response in our brain for tolerance and growth.\r\n\r\nin conclusion, it's not only a balancing act for a kid between mental and physical activities but a major overall spike in functioning and progress.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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