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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our world is becoming more and more automatic. Everyday things that people use to take an hour to do can now be done by a machine without any labor involved. This can make things easier and seemingly better, until something goes wrong. These ways of doing things automatically have hidden problems that are not good about them, much like the driverless car. Driverless cars are not a good thing because of the extra cost, the complicated maininence, and the possible safety hazards.\n\nCars cost a whole lot as it is, but driverless cars will cost a whole lot more. The radar on the top of these driverless cars cost 200 million dollars to devolope, as stated in the article. That is just more money added to the cost of these cars. That is not even counted the many more electronic softwear that has to go in these cars in order for them to drive themselves. As many people know, electronics are expensive these days, and adding a whole bunch more to these driverless cars will make the price skyrocket, which is why I am opposed to them.\n\nWhen people are driving their own car correctly and how they should, they can see everything around them, and if something were to go wrong, they can manuever however they want to in order to avoid the problem at hand or stop it as soon as possible. Also, there are so many things to take into acount when driving. Such as the sudden moves of people or animals or other cars, and a person can also adapt their driving in certain weather conditions, which was not mentioned about the driverless car in the article. If there was no way that someone could avoid an accident and they had to drive into a ditch in order to get out of harms way, there would not be alot of damage done. These crazy but possible events are the reason that driverless cars are less safe, because would a driverless car be able to do the same thing at a moments notice? It could beep and turn it over to the driver, but the driver is unprepared and unaware of what is happening, because they got so bored since they were not driving that they have not been paying attention. There are so many factors and scenarios that have to be considered when talking about driverless cars, and I think the possible danger of them outweighs the benfits.\n\nLike mentioned in the first paragraph, the cost of the extra electronic parts of these cars is more than enough to dislike them, but now emagine if one of these parts were to go out, now your self driving car cannot function properly. Fixing electronic problems are very expensive, as sensors for various vehicles today can cost over one thousand dollars. And we are dealing with more complicated technology than just a single sensor. These electronical problems are the most complicated to fix, and that means that they cost a whole lot more to fix than a normal, easy mechanical problem like a spark plug. That is why these driverless cars are a bad thing, because of the expensive maintenence.\n\nWhy can't people just sit back and enjoy the ride and the pleasure of driving? If taught correctly, this is the safest bet. The cost of electronics for a self driving car are very expensive, and a human driver that is aware of his surroundings and how those surroundings react when driving is far more safe that a self driving car. The maintenence of the expensive electronics will be a mechanics demise when one of these magic cars come rolling in the shop. Which is why I am against self driving cars because of the extra expence, the risk in safety, and the cost of maintenece.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senetor,\n\nT\n\nhe elecoral collage should stay the same because it worked this long right and it will keep working as long as everythis is fair. The country is based on our votes and that is how it should be because we are part of this country and we make it a free country. This is how our founding fathers stated this country and thats how it need to be our country has the best presedent that we could have in this type of situation because he is a colored man and there is nothing wrong with that. If we did not have an electoral collage it would be harded to keep things in line such as how the voting works and how it should be decided that we have the best presedent we can get at that time for our country. As an example we have been fighting on Iran and alfaganastan for a long time and presedent oboma did the best he could with the best that he had to make sure that we were still a free country and the we were safe from terrorism. The electoral collage was a good iead and still is so thst way we do always have a good presedent or for anything that this country need to vote on it always keeps thing in order and fair to this country so there for it is what this country need in order to make the best we can with the best we got.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many different planets and celestial objects living in our great solar system, but none of them share similarites with Earth, such as density and size, as Earth's twin planet and neighbor Venus. Venus is located very close to Earth, so close that we can effortlessly see Venus with the naked eye during the night. Sadly, however, that is currently the safest way we can look at Venus without being in any danger. Several unmanned spacecrafts have been sent to observe Venus, but all of them only last for a few hours when first entering the planet's atmosphere. Covered in a blanket of carbon dioxide, clouds filled with sulfuric acid, along with a surface tempurate of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, the conditions on the planet's surface make it impossible for humans to last even twenty-four hours on the planet! Despite all the challenges and dangers there are to Venus, there are many who still want to get to the planet. The author of this article explains why exploring Venus is important and worth the trouble despite all of its challenges.\n\nFirst, the author explains why astronomers are so facinated with Venus in the first place. He starts out in paragraph 4, where he states that astronomers think that Venus was alot more like Earth long ago, even to the point where they believe that Venus had an ocean. Also in paragraoh 4, the author states that despite having various dangers, Venus also has similar features as Earth, such as vallies and mountains. The author explains that the main reason why astronomers want to go to Venus is because they want to be able to explain all the similarities Venus has with Earth, with a potential of Venus becoming the next Earth.\n\nHumans like to challenge themselves and do not like to back down from a challenge, and the people at NASA are the exact same way. The author tells us that NASA has been planning different ways to actually get a living being to Venus. For example, in paragraph 5, the author explains that NASA has a theory that they could send a spacecraft into orbit around Venus, similar to how the International Spacestation orbits the Earth. The author explains that while the tempurature would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, it would still be hot enough for humans to survive. In paragraph 7, the author explains that NASA is still working on ways to get to the surface of Venus. The author tells us that NASA is redeveloping mechanical computers that were used as some of the first computers. Unlike a laptop or a phone, these computers would be able to be less resistant to pressure and heat, and even works without using any electronics! It is a much safer bet using these than our fancy phones.\n\nThe author of this article gives us many examples of why Venus is worth the trip. It has alot in common with our home planet that astronomers are amazed at how similar they really are. Astronomers are looking for many Earth-like planets, and the author explains to us why they believe they have found one in Venus. The only problem Venus puts in front of us are its harsh climate and tempurature. But with what NASA has in development, we can overcome those obsticles and finally land on Earth's sister planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present, the question of why fewer farms for their livelihoods in the countryside remains a conundrum. I will give my own points about the causes of this trend and whether it is good for youngsters to work in farming.\r\n\r\n Firstly, fewer people do farming jobs in rural areas because those involved are usually underpaid. Consequently, it becomes a real hurdle to lead their family to a happy life while living a low standard. Everyone desires to have tasty meals, to live in gorgeous houses, to send their kid to well-reputed schools so they would never accept such a low wage . Secondly, extreme working conditions are another burden that people have to take on. For example, when it is in the middle of June, farmers are still in the fields on a daily basis although the weather is rainy which is detrimental to endure. In contrast, even an office worker can get a higher air-conditioned working complex. In other words, this profession is the last choice and people avoid it because making a living seems to be impossible.\r\n\r\n Those above-mentioned pieces of evidence show that there are a lot more well-paid careers for people to choose if they leave the remote area to study in the city. Such as doctors, architecture designers, and other rewarding roles, so I strongly disagree to let youngsters work in the profession of cultivating. Moreover, if students become farmers, they will waste all the time and money that they spent on academic education because watering and collecting do not need high level of qualification but health, all of their accomplishments at school are unusable then. For instance, unlike farmers, well-educated IT developers can earn much more in a month. In addition, those people also have the right to experience other perks such as being flexible in working schedules, which farmers could never have .\r\n\r\n In conclusion, there are a few key reasons for the decreasingly attendance to the work that provides agriculture products being little amount of pay and a poor working environment. Due to this, the young should consider having another choice which is more try-worthy with more creature comforts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Does censorship really helf setback libraries Does try mask really might happening world try make feel happy horrendous place live To one person book could offensive neighbor could whole new opposite meaning Its perspective Personally think taking offensive book libraries could diaster In one book read year class CAPS This book distopia people burnt books nt send right message society People numb feelings could outcome censorship libraries around Libraries place sparks imangination ages censor things suppose happen Looking books past defied offensive taken shelves libraries banned read class school mostly womens rights Some bad words others dystopias If took af books pertained topics many books would ave left And matter best friend girl equal rights jobs big deal living past Theres also fact innevitable get away cursing everywhere go All along streets schools sometimes even church So around real life ca nt read Now people cenorship libraries say something affect children dont want reading book think offensive say cenor Its choice raise kids parents think imagination instead old old Its good varity things read nt limit brain All think people would want censor books crazy could potentually taken way hand distpoia society would form Children dissillusioned world could Think next time think book could arise tension people think taking away rightsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator in the sources \"What is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defences of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer and also \"In Defense of the Electoral College: five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" by Richard A. Posner, the authors of the article discuss the pros and cons to having an electoral college. The citizens of the United States would be more pleased if the electoral college stayed as opposed to it being ebolished.\n\nTo begin, having a electoral college will be better for the nation and people.\n\nfor example, the article \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing a president\" the article states \"A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is very possible- it happened in 2000- but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote.\" this claim provides a true statement on reasons why we should keep the electoral college. This statement means that disputes are less likely with their method and their is a certainty of an outcome.\n\nAlthough keeping the electoral college is a valid idea, there are some problems associated with keeping the electoral college as well. Of course, there are difficulties with in the curcumstsance where we keep the Electoral Collage opposed to disspose of it. the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer, Plumer made several claims opposing of the electoralcollege, such claims include \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters\" and opinons like \"Its official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irration\". While Plumer did put his point across as to how the system is unfair we must take into consideration how it is more reasonable and appropriate, in \"in defense of the electoral college: five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" the article states that \"The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal\" which is fair and less stressful.\n\nin summary, the best option would to keep the way things are rather than changing things up and and creating a more stressful, unorganized system. Although Plumer made accurate claims as to some of the faults in the system, there was far more proof in keeping the electoral college and keeping things the same.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This new technology to allow us to read students emotional expressions is brilliant. Reasons being is it allows students to show their true emotion regardless if they act happy, or sad. This will more likely have less kids hide their emotion and can truly be worked on. It can be the difference between life or death. To prove that this technology can be used in advance, most of us know the famous picture of the Mona Lisa. Using this advance system most people will say she is just happy and smiling, 'but she's actually 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry'. Obviously we have more then one feeling but this is an prime example of showing this can work on other people and pictures from years ago and still show their full emotions, most people can claim to be happy a lot and be completley devasted. This will be the future to help towards others and will soon help for the greater good.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I m patient sometime I m impatient But matter impatient l even impatient comes waiting big traffic jam He huffs long delay sighs gets impatient He says things like CAPS s scary traffic jams long lines But long line great relief pastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet at the sun and Venus is the closest planet to Earth in the terms and density but sometimes our planet Earth is closer to marsand sometimes to Venus some spaceships were sent to venus but none of the space ships survived the landing and that was the chalange of humanity to study.Venus has a atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide and the tempeture of venus is almost 800 degres Fahrenheit\n\nand the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then we experience on Earth the pressure and the carbon dioxide are so extreme in venus.NASA has something because they ben sending humans to study venus i think that NASA has a idea venus solar would be plentiful and radiation would not be as Earth level its not a easy conditions.Nasa is working on studying venus because NASA wants to make electronics as computers and mechanics these devices envisiond in the 1800-1940 during world war 2it may sound shokind but this devices dont electronics at all old computers are enormously powerful,flexible and quick but their also more delicate when it comes to physical conditions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this story you are going to read how luke is trying to get people to be a seagoing cowboy. Like what they do what they get and how they do there job.\n\nIn my job we get to help out. You get to take care of animals, you get to go places and cross oceans. You also get to take care of animals like horses and other animals. Also you get to see things you have never seen before. You get to help the animals and you help and then you fell good for helping something or someone. You will be able to see things and do things that you always wanted to do and you will have fun and just help.\n\nAs you read my story i hope now you want to be a seagoing cowboy because you will get to help and fell like your being loved for doing something good.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Sea Cowboy\n\nWhy would anyone want to be a sea cowboy ? Their are many reasons why some people want to be a sea cowboy . What do you have to do if your a sea cowboy ?\n\nHow long do trips take and when would you ever get the time to have fun ?\n\nThe sea cowboy in this story was just an ordianary person before his friend don invited him to go to europe on a cattle boat . He says \"its a lifetime opportunity \"\n\nto him .\n\nTheir are many reasons why some people want to be a sea cowboy .\n\nSome people could of just signed up for no reason .\n\nYou had a chance to become a sea cowboy because in europe and other countrys were left in ruins. This was to help the countries recover their food supplies animals and other important things the need. 44 nations came together and formed the UNRRA ( united nations relief and rehabilitation administration.\n\nWhat do you have to do if your a sea cowboy ? The sea cowboys take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. The first time luke got on the cattle boat their were 335 horse being shipped .\n\nLuke was always busy caring for the animals during crossing.\n\nThey also have to chack on the animals hourly .\n\nHow long do the trips take and when would you ever get the time to have fun. It took two weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china.\n\nHow would you not get sea sick from riding a boat that long ? luke got to see some amazing sites when he was riding the cattle boat .\n\nLuke also found time to have fun on board. The cowboys played baseball and vollyball in the empty holds where the animals were . This was after the animals have been unloaded also table tennis tournaments , boxing , reading,and whittling and other games also helped pass the time.\n\nSo after all being a sea cowboy isnt so bad .\n\nYou now know how long the trips take and if the yever had time to have fun. The reasons some people wanted to be a sea cowboy. Also you learned what you had to do to become a sea cowboy . I can tell you its probably not the easiest thing in the world to do .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A group of elderly citizens is now being lonely due to not being able to move with the younger family members from place to place, as they lack physical health conditions. This essay will discuss the premise associated with senior citizens being on their own in contrast with an explanation of resolving this matter.\n\nThere are innumerable individuals who are self-made person and too stubborn to be dependable on someone else, including family, therefore, they face the dire companionship issues because of self-esteem. On the other hand, there are people who long for the love of family members, but, since being busy with work life nor their kids neither relatives, have enough time to spare for them. As a result, they end up in nursing homes in the supervision of a full-time nurse because of a health condition. \n\nHowever, just like every lock has a key, there are possible ways to overcome loneliness for an aged person. If each family member takes less time from their busy schedule to spend with the elderly, then situation won’t be this much empty for them. For example, organizing a weekly get together with all the children will cheer their minds. In addition, support groups for the parents and grandparents, where they take a walk in the park, practice laughing therapy with their own agers is a miraculous option to overshadow the isolated feelings.\n\n To conclude, for a time being, everyone is entitled to face isolation and non-adaptive situations, which doesn’t mean there is no escape to this remote sense. With the help of family and friends, plenty of solutions can be figured out while physical health can be improved by daily monitoring.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Am I against or for the driverless cars?\n\nI in my opinion am against having driverless cars. I have decided this because I love to drive, I injoy driving and going in and out of plces.\n\nThe reason why I have chosen this is because havind driverless cars could be a big terrible deal. For example , the car has a mind of its own but what if some day it has a glich and you are inside the car, the glich will seel the doors and windows. When you know the whay to go, turning right at a stop but the glich or mistake it makes the auto go to the left.\n\nI injoy driving, I would not like to be lazy and not learn the street names or where my destination. The driverless cars learn everything for you, how are you going to invite a friend from outside who does not have a drierless car. You cannot help your friend get to the destination if you do not know the streets or dirrection to go to.\n\nI for sure am against the driverless cars.\n\nAre you against having the drverless cars or do you agree for them?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Science is moving forward faster than most people can process. Robotics and Artificial Intelligence are a few of the fields that stands out the most, because it can ease the day to day. We could say that Part of a country development can be measure through their technological advances and how it directly affect soceity. \r\n\r\nAn advantage that stands out of having robots doing human's jobs is the precision level a field can achieve with its tasks on a daily basis. For instance, medical procedures done with a lasers, which would be thousands of times more precise than an expert doctor's hand. Also on an industrial level, cutting and assambling machines has been optimized by other machines and robots. Another advantage would be the improvement in the time frame to produce goods or deliver tasks, As it has being with car production. For example Ford is known to be the first car company to introduce the assambly line to their production, making it the first company in the USA to produce more cars in less time.\r\n\r\nMoving aside all the good it could bring, we must also put in a scale the human capital being compromised due to big industries not needing their skills anymore. Nowadays doing the job of houndreds of people excaving we have very impressive machinery that can do the same job being operated just by one persone in lesser time. In the other hand, one of the fears of humanity is that Artificial Intelligence could achieve a level of development that might take decisions of its own and reveal against humans.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, among all the good things robotics, Artificial Intelligence and technology can bring, we must establish a clear path and goal for our future, so we can combine both human and robots working together, value human capital and work with precision and on time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the development of driverless cars. Automotive companies have made some really good products and worked really hard, but i feel like it is pointless. There would be a few benefits of a driverless car, but as they said in the passage, no car is completely driverless. If you have to do the same thing in a driverless car that you would do in a regular vehicle, then I do not see the point. I feel like driverless cars are pointless, going to be expensive and promote lazyness.\n\nIf you have a driverless car, the passage states that you still have to pay full attention and be ready to grab the wheel at any time. If you have a regular vehicle, then you also have to pay full attention and hold onto the wheel as well. The only benefit you would get from this would be a break from steering for a few minutes until you are to take control. People have been driving for years, vehicles have been advanced to be safer and more efficient for years, so why do we need technology to do this driving for us?\n\nNot only do I believe this is a rediculous idea, I believe driverless cars would be very expensive. In the very first sentence of the passage it reads \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" If nobody is buying cars, how are vehicle companies going to make money? Their income will quickly decline, if not dissapear all together. I can imagine the price of these driverless cars would be threw the roof. Making these driverless cars calls for an abundance of advanced technology and the cost would be much higher than any standard car.\n\nHow hard is it to get into a car seat and steer a wheel? Teenagers begin driving at ages 15 or 16, if driving was too difficult I do not think people would start so young. Transportation is a big part of everyday life. We have managed to drive ourselves place to place for may many years and we will be able to do it for many many more. 2016 is a very big year for vast changes in technology. Businesses have created so many spectacular devices to do everyday things for us, such as, GPS, robots, hoverboards and many more. The society today is a huge promotor of lazyness. We do not need technology to do everything for us when we are completely capable of doing it ourselves.\n\nA driverless car may seem very beneficial to many people, but I honestly believe it is just another waste of time and money. There are far more cons than pros in this argument. It is very dangerous, pointless, expensive and it promotes people to be dependent and lazy. There have been some very useful inventions but this is not one of them. I strongly disagree with the idea of driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My thought on drivless cars is that they can be a help but then again they could cause promblems.\n\nI think driveless cars can help because it could help do things a lot faster, and help a lot with other things. It has some good thing like warning you, help on gas miliage, and drive it self. you really wont have to drive ou just sit and let the car take you by it self.\n\ni think it will make promblems because you wont need alot of gass and if u dont need gas no one will make anymoney because you wont need all of it and there will be alot of oil in the ground beacuse no one is bringing it up because no ones needs it to make gas because of these new cars dont need a lot of gas. It will make more promblems because you dont have to drive the car will drive for you and if the car is driving for you and all you do is sit you will forget how to drive and if something happens and you have to take over you will not know because you forgot how to drive beacuse you sit for so long and let the car drive it self.\n\nMy thought on driveless cars can be both prostive and negitive. i think more on the negitive because more people will not have jobs that you have to drive because you dont have to drive because you have a car thaat will drive for u. so i think it can be a good thing that we have them but at the same time a bad thing to.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology would be valuable to see if a student is having trouble in the class room. To see confusion and being scared that they might not perform well. this could help teachers get to the students that really need the help. Grades would theoretically go up now that the students that had trouble are getting the help they need. There are concerns about privacy to a computer tracking and watching you the moment you get on.\n\nThe technology would greatly impact teachers and students because now teachers now have a way to see how students are doing. Teachers could watch on their computers and when a icon comes up on a certain student that. They are showing signs of distress or confussion she or he could go over there and help them. Like said earlier grades of students would go up if they got the help they needed. The computer system says it watches for facial muscle movements and twitching and others like if the person is blinking a lot. Would set off signs that the computer measures and calculates how and what you are feeling. Also worry about privacy of students and teachers a machine watching you the moment you get on. That keeps a record of how long you were on and what you were doing of course most computers already do that. Maybe if it goes outside a certain range of school the software will stop but the computer can still be used.\n\nThe software like this one could help teachers help educate children to be the best they can. By going to the source of their problems seeing exactly the problem their having trouble with. There are positives and negatives like there is to everything but this could really help and boost kids to excel to their bests.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME, I'm here to talk to you about keeping the electoral college. The electoral college is a prodess that our founding fathers established. Its said to be in pur decleration as part of the 23rd amendment. For so the district of Columbia is allocated 3 elctors but only for the electoral college. With saying we vote every 4 years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. When a citizan votes for their candidate choice they are also voting for the candidate's electors.\n\nThere are ups and downs to having the Electoral College. For one the peoples opinion should matter. They were given a gallup poll in which over 60% of the voters prefer a direct election. In 2000 we had our great fiasco which was the biggest election crisis. Eventually the electoral college fixed it. When ever the votes are tied the house of representatives get involved which can change the whole election.\n\nWith saying all of this there are 5 reasons to keep our lovely electoral college:\n\n1) Certainty of outcome:\n\nDisputes are possible but very unlikely to happen. There are a total of 538 million votes. So its very easy for there to be a landslide of a vote.\n\n\"In 2012's election Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney recieved all the basis.\"\n\n2) Everyone's President:\n\nOne region (south, northeast, etc.) does not have enough votes to elect a president. In saying that no favorite candidate recieves any electoral votes just because he increased his plurality in states that for a fact he can win in.\n\n3) Swing States:\n\nThe winner-take-all method shows the candidates that they should pay attention to the toss-up states. These states will pay very close attention to the candidates campaign, showing that they need to focus on their campaigns. The toss-up states are more likely to be the thoughtful voters and the most thoughtful votes should decide the election.\n\n4) Big States:\n\n\"A large state gets more attention from presidental candidates in a campaign than a small state does\"\n\n5) Avoid Run-Off Elections:\n\nThe electoral college avoids having an election in which no candidate recieves the majority of the votes.\n\nThank you,\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In these days people are starting to believe that artificial intelligence is taking over the world. The question is robots are a replace for human in the workspace? In this essay I'm going to say what I believe in this matter.\nFirstly, There is no way to create a machine that can replicate how the human minds work. Scientists them self fund the human mind is unique and a miracle. However, robots taking jobs are possible. For instance, jobs like customer service, security. MoreOver, These jobs which do not require a lot of effort and could be automated because theses jobs does not require any skills at all. To illustrate, a job like customer service the employee should follow the easy steps. For that, the robot will not face problems that require human interfere and it should be automated.\nSecondly, To make a machine work or understand a thing you have to feed it with a huge amount of information. Moreover it takes years of researching and trying to make a robot do one single job that people takes among other. For example, Scientist from MIT published a paper it says that machines. Such as, Siri took years to develop and it could not match how humans think or respond and it will take many years to be a good speaker as any body.\nTo conclude, I don't think that machine is going to take over peoples career. In fact robots will make life easier. And will help complex job and kill easy boring jobs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story Rough road ahead plays great role characters journey Some features mentioned story heat rough road long crippling hills abandoned Grape Juice Factory The heat story drives cyclist dying thirst best conserve water trip dry dessert heat doesnt allow Then comes rough road ahead The cyclist trys keep steady secure pass peddels along bumps breaks road The long crippling hills next line cyclist use energy work hill wipes sweat eyes make sure mirage sees abandoned factory This cyclist loses hope doesnt receive water soon sure eaten birds Then easily rounding band troubles thirst fear behind Gary Wilber Fish Camp rushed bathroom drink refreshing water sink pride accomplishment overwhelmSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I Luke Bomberger was part of the Seagoing Cowboys. Ihave seen a lot of unique things sence I have been on the ship like Dolphens, unique buildings and statues. Im going to give you some facts on why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. Number 1: you can traval the world if thats what you dream, if it wasnt your dream thin you would still seethe things you wanted to go see Number 2: it could change your life like me you could get a job their and paid a lot of money. i cant read your mindbut why would you want to take this job or go. I left when it was1945. In august 19 thy recievedd orders to report to New Orleans. I was on the boat on my way to europe , and world war 2 was going on about time i got their world war 2 was over. It took memonths to get to europe, but when I got their it was worth the wait.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Automated Cars\n\nSelf-driving cars have always been a dream of the future, but now, geniuses at Google, Mercedes-Benz, and other big companies, are meaking this dream seem more like a reality. Although most people instantly jump to the con's of automated cars, there are many pro's as well. One pro thats easy to think of, is the sheer respect you'd have from having an self- driving car. Remember when Batman pushed a button on his belt and his car came straight to his location? Well that can be anybody with self driving cars. Automated cars would also be in sync, knowing where other cars are, and what those other cars are doing. There would be less accidents because ther would be no more human error invlolved. Self-driving cars would greatly change how we live, but those changes would be for the better.\n\nAntagonists of automated cars always tend to ask, what if the car goes haywire and tries to kill people? Now think, when has a computer ever tried to kill you? The idea of computers or robots taking over the world, like in movies, is completely insane. Technology simply cannot think or behave that way. There should also be a kill switch in the car, if you are a passenger, and you something goes wrong, there should be a button that will cut off power to the entire car, stopping it dead in it's tracks. The other cars behind it, would be able to stop in time to not hit the car. Of course this is if the other cars where automated, most humans just cannot react in time.\n\nGoing off of that idea, these self-driving cars can communicate with eachother. They can send information back and forth. Constantly knowing where the other cars are, where those other cars are going. They can also send signals that there is an accident somewhere. For example if there is a accident on a street, the other cars will recieve this information and they can find an alternate route instead of congesting the road and worsening the situation. But of course, the main goal is to decrease the number of accidents that occur.\n\nMost car accidents and deaths, occur due to humans driving hazardously. Whether it be drunk driving, texting and driving, or simply bad driving, these all share one thing in common, a human's error. You can drink or even be drunk in an automated car, the car will still get you to your destination, if you can insert the destination. This would not promote drinking, it would simply take drunk drivers off the wheel. In a fully automatic car, you can do anything really, text, watch a movie, play a video game, anything. Lastly, bad drivers would be off the roads.\n\nSadly though, this would take out the joy of driving. Maybe some manual driving can still be allowed, maybe on a closed course. Because some people, including me, love to drive. In conclusion there are many pro's to self-driving cars, mainly being safer roads with less accidents. But automated cars are still far to come, because technology, laws, and simple approval are not where they need to be to see a large amount of driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today road accidents are increasing due to careless driving or disobeying rules imposed by governments.Some argue that implementing strict punishments and imprisonments will be the only way to reduce offences commited by drivers.I disagree about this phenomenon even if imposing punishments for driving offences can act as a better solution for offences but other alternatives may also be implemented to adress this issue effectively.\r\n\r\nFirstly, imposing rigid rules on driving offences would reduce accidents on roads.In fact, it can be noticeable that many accidents cause due to careless and drunk driving wheareas many pedestrians will suffer serious damages sometimes lead deaths.Therefore, imposing srtict punishments would curb such offences such as imposing high fines and imprisonments for drivers.For example, Norway is the country who has the most strict punishments for such offences and whom has the lowest death rates based on road accidents.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand its obvious that stict rules can curb the situation, but it would not be the only method to improve the safety.Governments can improve awareness programs to keep people informed about rules that need to be followed on the road.In contrast, governments can start awreness programs in schools and urbanised cities as it would help students and general public to learn road rules and consequences of commiting offences.However, aforemnetioned activities will also enhance road safety.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although strict punishmnets like high fines and imprisonment would improve road safety, it would not be the only solution for address this effectively. Politician and media coverages should also come into practice to aware children and general public about road safety.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting adds sense ergancy The cyclist running water middle dessert If forest subburbs would grave He talks passing dieing He exclaims nt really matter I going die birds going pick cleanSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There was an funny looking landform on Mars. That other scientist had tooken a picture of in 1976 and mars that look like a face icon. the picture was blurry and we couldnt really tell what it was so many people had did research on it. Many scientist like me and different people thought it was different things. Like just a regular natural landform in Mars and others think it is a face that a lien had left there to show a icon. We also had a arguent over what it really was. Me as a scientist and other people that thought it was a icon that aliens marked.\n\nI, as a scientist disagree about what many people think it is. I personally think its just a regular natural landmark in Mars. Others think its a icon for something a alien made because its shaped as a face a few scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. Some people think the face is nonafide evidence of real life on Mars. Us scientist had describe the icon which resembles a human head . its formed bve shawdows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and a mouth. This have attracted alot of people attention to Mars.\n\nThis icon have became very popular. For example in pargargraph 5 its says \" its starred in Hollywood Films, appeared in books, magazines, and is in radio talk shows. This shows that the icon is really popular and many people know and talk about the icon.\n\nAround April 5 in 1998 Mars global flew over Cydonia for the first time and took a better picture of the icon for we can tell what it was more cleary then the other pictures they had. We discovered that it was just a natural landforn and there wasnt no alien icon.\n\nThere was nothing else really said about the natural landform because we know what it is now but we also know that its not essay to target Cydonia.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, more and more consumers use ebooks and other kinds of text on the internet instead of buying books at a bookstore. I personally believe that the merits of this trend are more significant than the demerits.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are certain drawbacks of storing information on the internet. First, reading texts on a smartphone or computer too much may cause some health problems. If one uses smartphones or other electronic devices too much, they may have eye problems such as short-sightedness and astigmatism. Also, sitting in one place and using a smartphone for too long may also cause back and neck problems. Second, there could be copyright issues when consumers use books online rather than paper books. Information on ebooks is often less censored than books published in the market, so many publishers and authors may lose profit from writing books. For example, in Vietnam, there are a lot of websites to read books for free, some of which are really expensive but are free online.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that the benefits of consuming books on the internet are weightier. To begin with, reading ebooks is more convenient. The main reason is that readers can find their favorite books easily on the internet so they do not have to go to a bookstore to find them. Instead, they can stay at home and read their books. Also, people just need to have smartphones or computers and wifi and they can read books whenever they want to read. Moreover, the cost of ebooks is lower than published books. This is mainly because in addition to the cost for the content of a book, there are many other costs such as paper, storing and shipping. For instance, in Vietnam the cost of ebooks is lower than published books. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although consuming books and information online has certain downsides, I am firmly convinced that the upsides are more considerable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on the driverless cars are definitley a no. While the whole idea is interesting and fascinating it is also exteremly dangerous. Maybe the daythey actually perfect it and it is deemed safe i would accept it but as of right now my opinion on the entire things definitley a no, because while people would need to have alert drivers alotof them arent and even when we have driverless cars the cars are going to still need some human amount of interaction and if the person for instance is drunk they aren't going to be seen as very useful to it.\n\nPeople are most likely going to take advantage of this car and this whole thing and i know its not going to be pretty when they do, im just really not for it.\n\nThere are companies such as General Motors trying but they would have to change all the roads for it which is obviously way to expensive to ever do. Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar they used magnets with alternating polarity and it still also wouldnt work out because of the road expenses.\n\nEverything that has been done still needs somekind of human interaction and i believe that is the way that it should be so that nothing bad happens because like in paragraph 9. They talk about \" Even if traffic laws changed, new laws would be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. if the technology fails and someone is injured who is the one at fault? the driver or the manufacturer?\" i agree with this, no one would know whose fault it would be it's honestly just taking an unnecessary risk, putting live in danger to those around the smart cars and to those in them.\n\nThere is alot to be done and there is alot to come because these companies are making several advancements and several attempts, they aren't going to stop. it isn't just to make things easier i believe that alot of these people just think it would be cool, it's less work for the person and thats just going to start revolutionizing the fact that \" humans don't need to work\" let's have someone else do it for us. I don't like it at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental problems, such as global warming, overfishing, and a decrease in biological diversities, are urgent tasks that are faced by many governments. While I agree that increase oil prices for cars could be an effective way to tackle environmental problems, I could argue that there is much that governments and individuals can and should do to protect the planet.\r\n\r\nIncreasing fuel prices is certainly an immediately effective way to alter people’s purchasing behaviour. The expectation is, as the oil price goes higher, the number of people who drive cars will decrease. This would lead to less carbon dioxide emissions and better air quality. But this method might only have short-term effects, as some people are just not sensitive to price and will continue driving cars.\r\n\r\nA more feasible solution could be a long-term solution involving educating the general public, especially the young generation. Environmental problems are rising at an alarming rate due to the fact that people are not aware of how their lifestyles, for example, not using public transportation and using plastic bags, could have a severe negative impact on the environment. By raising awareness and educating how each individual could live an environmentally friendly way, the problems could be solved gradually in the coming generations.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, business owners also have a role to play. For example, banning the use of plastic bags and replacing them with renewable material can help to minimize the “white waste” and contribute to a cleaner environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing the fuel price would help to protect the environment to an extend. But more importantly, governments, individuals, and business sectors should act collectively to create a greener planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the development on driverless cars is not a good idea. I feel that if we have more driverless cars, people would be more tired in the morning time and in the evening. Many people, in the morning, drink or load up on coffee to help them stay awake while driving on the road. If we didn't have to drive our car, we wouldn't need to hydrate on these sugars, like coffee. We would all stay up every night and think since we don't have to wake up and drive in the morning , this isn't a bad idea.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", they state how humans not being behind the wheel when the car is driving is too dangerous. I agree with that statement because what if something strange were to happen, and all of a sudden the car was running out of gas and no one was there to fill it up. Are the going to then design a car that fills up gas on its own? That could put a lot of buisness's out of work. Gas stations wouldn't necesarilly be needed anymore because no one would need to stop by. Truck drivers who deliver gas in their trucks would be out of a job because no one would need the gas. They could then make the cars run on electricity, but that would mean more money toward everyones electric bill.\n\nAnother reason i beilive that humans not behind the wheel isn't safe, is that crashes would be more bound to happen. Many people do not understand that when a person is behind the wheel they are more cautious; they look out for what could or could not cause an accident. If I were to be driving and I were to notice a car without someone monitoring the steering wheel, I would be a little frightened. The car could be thinking that I am going to make a right turn, but really I am continuing straight, and the car could run right into me. Who would then have to pay for the damages? Me, or the car who was running all by itself?\n\nThe idea of how safe the driverless car is, is very hard to beilive. In the article when they mention how the brakes will be on the steering wheel, and how montiors make sure that the person driving keeps ahold of wheel, makes you want to buy the car and see how much it helps. The thing I find hard to handle is how much the price of the car will be. This smart car is only going to make our human population more lazy, and less independent. If we spend the majority of our money on a car that will only drive us where we need to go without assistence, we are wasting our money. They make many nice cars, that are very safe, and capable of getting us where we need to be, without doing it all for us.\n\nWhen I think about how fast new products and developments are coming around in our world today, it makes me wonder how are we and our children later down the line going to survive in the world to come. Everything being made in today's world is turing humans into couch potatoes. We all have easy ways to deliver things to people through mobile web, and social media. The last thing our world needs is a computer programmed car to drive us wherever we want to go. We should look at our products and try and use them to make our world better and less expensive. Not to try and make our world and humans lazy, and less hard working.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He wanted to jion the program because it would be an opportunity of a life time for luke. He could travel the world see new things meet new people and make more friends when he goes to the program.\n\nHe wanted to jion the army service and help out so the told him to say in what he was doing and that he was on bored with the army. He helped take horses to greece on ship and that is hard to do with 335 horses on bored the ship,and he had to take care of them by feeding them,getting the poop up and out of there cage. When he was helping one night he almost fell off bored the ship and went into the dark Atlantic but lukly there was a melt bar that stopped he from falling off the edge of the ship.\n\nWhen the horses got off the ship the men could play basketball,volleball,and table tennis with all the men on bored.\n\nHe started in 1945 with his friend from high school .When he left the army in 1947 he was glad to do all those things he had done to help all those people in need. He was als hapy that he got to travel to all the places he had always wanted to go to in the world to help people he didn't know that was in need that he got to know as a friend.\n\nWhen he was done he went back home and did something new with his life again to see what he could learn about then.\n\nMy conclusion are that he was really happy for helping peopl in need. I think what made him the happy's was that he got to travel the world to help people. He went to China,Greece,and other cool place like that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are a great form of the new technologybut some people are for and some are against this great piece of technology.Automakers are working hard to solve problems that many people have with transportation .lawmakers just want to achive the best for the safety of people that't why the law is more focoused on keeping divers safe.\n\nDriveless cars are the new way the the world is improving the everyday life.Many people hate this time of technology as they think it could harm many people.Other people have fallen in love with this new idea of cars and want it to develop more and more till it's world wide.we cant denie that the briliant idea of driveless cars is a great and amazing piece of technology. Auntomakers are working hard to develop this amzning piece of technoloy.Most humas want this piece of tecnology to get more advanced so they can use it to its full potential.\n\nAutomakers have garanteen that the problems ahead will be solved as it states in parahraph 10 of this article.\"Automakers are conyinuing thier work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved.\" many people celebrate of hearing this but others hate that they are creating this type of technology.many humas protest everyday to this new piece of technology but are not sucessful at stoping the project of the driveless cars.The law supports both ways of this new technology but they have some good questions for this new piece of art as it states in the article \"if the technology fails and someone is injured,who is at fault- the driver or the manufacture?\".\n\nThe law cares the\n\nmost about humans rights and safety.The article states \"most driving laws focus on keeeping drivers,passengers, and pedestrians safe and\n\nlawmakers know that safety is best achived with alert divers.\" meaning that the law makers dont really agree with this type of technology as they want alerted drivers behind the wheel to keep people safe.The new technology was alert systems as it states in the article \"...but are\n\ndesigned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires muan skills...\" meaning that drivers have to remain alert at all times and if not the system will alert them.Most of these new technologies will help drivers be alert at all times and\n\nwill improve the life of some bussy humans that dont even have time to drive.This type of techonology will help improve many lifes and would do a great danger to thers that dont like new type of things like this.\n\nDriveless cars are a great part of the new generation and a great way to improve the life of many people.these technologies will help people and worry others as they dont like the idea of driveless cars.As many people say everyone is difrent and has their own opinions in the new technologies that the world is creating for us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In order to sell these smarter cars the buyers have to understand what types of things they can and can't do with the cars. To be safe the buyer must know what all the signals mean for when they need to go back to fully operating the car instead of leaving it on driverless. They also must become comfortable and fully understanding how the car operates. One last thing they need to know is that is they do not understand someting inside the car and continue to drive it and they have an accident it is fully on them to cover the cost of the accident becasue it is their job to understand how it is driven.\n\nFirst, for safe keeping reasons the buyer and soon to be driver of this driverless car must fully understand, remember, and be very comfortable with how the car operates, its signals, and teh way it drives when the driver isn't actully driving. Before the buyer actully drives away with the car I need to make sure they fully understand all the signals, noises, buttons, and switches inside the car do and mean. If they do not know what these certian things do they buyer is bound to do something wrong or misunderstand and either crash the car or cause maulfunctions in it. Being overly safe and always aware of the safe keeping things inside this car is a very important key in buying this car.\n\nAnother thing is to fully understand how the car drives. This is an important key thing in any car that someone decides to buy whether it is a smart car or not because being comfortable with the car you will possibley be driving for a long term time is very important and should play a key roll into if you buy the car or not. Also understanding all the signals is important but undertsnading what will happen after the signals is an even more important roll in the car. If traffic acts up, there is an accident, or you see an emergancy car you have to take control over your car and make sure you so the approperiate things in order to make a successful stop, pass, or any other thing you may have to oporate that your car cannot do.\n\nFinally, in order to be a succsessfull driver in this driverless car you must maintain and understand that safe driving is a must! No matter what car you end up buying you must undertsnad that any malfunctions, wrecks on your behalf, or lack of paying attention is all on you. If you get a speeding ticket, in a wreck, or anything in between it on you as the buy to fix any type of payment or fee. It is by no means Google's fualt if you wreck this car. You are still the driver and technology still has flaws.\n\nIt is important to understand all of these saftey, awareness, and driving skills so you can be a very succsessful driver and maintain safeness with in your smarter car. Even though this is a smart car you still need to use your common sense and understand that sometimes it is best for you to take on what the road has in store for you up a head. Always be safe!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It school boring usal came cruches I freaked ran told broke leg wasnt allowed hang whole month It hard waiting whole month hangout safety important amusement It weeks friend breaking leg I doin well bothering I proud I got help around school It weeks later almost better I excited went bought gift The next crauches cast back foot thats story time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers good effect people teach people hand eye coordinating events history cultures great way relax fun Computers teach hand eye coordinator training hand go brain tells eyes show Hand eye coordination important It help people drives decreases reaction time help people write neatly If help driver turn wheel faster hit break I think hand eye coordination could help driver stay accident Think climber trying grab mountain He would able see grab quicker Most people nt know things like many soldiers many countries world The internet great place find history world things wa nt know A lot americans nt know history alone world history You google anything want ended collapsed You also learn either interesting useful things like food recipes contents paints Or could keeping need yahoocom Computers lot fun You talk friends listen music play games three time That s scratching miss favorite show There hundreds websites let watch free Did want hear favorite bands new album You listen legally free youtubecom playlistcom many websites Between learning cultures fun computer great interactive friends family improve hand eye coordination learn something newSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph says Then I Will take test again believes Flowers Flowers adapte circumstances They determined places They overcome obstacles Maybe wants see lays ahead hopes right Flowers maybe likes springSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Decoding teenage emotions and facial expressions proves difficult for adults, but now there is new technology to help those students learn more effectively. The help of Facial Action Coding brings new opportunities to the classroom with prospects of working lessons around what each individual student is feeling. The system would bring better learning to students easier with help of individualized teaching by recognizing when a student gets confused or unhappy with the lesson.\n\nA computer with this coding system in its hardware could change the way students learn and how teachers teach. The learning process would be more individualized, because the computer works around what makes that specific user smile. \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" The computer will ultimately pick what to show on the screen based on one's past reactions to previous stimuli. This system would help students understand a lesson by changing the way it teaches to help the student. It would no longer be one teacher teaching a lesson broadly, it would be one computer teaching a lesson that specifically helps the student. This would lead to more efficient learning and overall better test scores. The computer with Facial Action Coding System will turn a struggling student into a more efficient and educated student.\n\nThe use of this technology would be effective by using accurate ways to study students' facial expressions. Developing an accurate system is the foundation of an accurate learning environment for students. The system is a facial expression expert; it knows when you are actually enjoying something or not through studying the specific muscles you use. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" Each muscle holds a different purpose, and the Facial Action Coding System studies each one to pinpoint which emotion is being expressed.\n\nThe developers of this product have studied greath lengths over this material, and suggest that da Vinci did the same. The accuracy of their product is based off of psychologists, professors, and doctors to get an accurate description of basic human expression and muscle movement. \"Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" Having an effective foundation to the software will lower the risk of inaccurate studies of facial expressions.\n\nTo conclude, the Facial Action Coding System is an asset to classrooms everywhere. Struggling students can learn effectively without raising a finger; all they have to do is react as they normally would. The accuracy and development of this software helps read each student's individualized emotion such as confusion, boredom, or anger. The computer acts as an individualized instructor, acting on each emotion and reaction to new material.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think I should be working with a bunch of cracked ribs guys. Oh shut up you are just tring to get out of work,said Jon. Luke spoke back saying,no I Iike this job. Theres no way you actilly like this job,theres just no way. As this arguement went on Rob was silantly siting there,not getting involved but then Luke asked him for backup. Luke is right, how would you feel Jon if someone was yelling at you for getting hurt,said Rob. Shut up,Rob don't you agree with me that it is not fair. Not fair? The mans ribs are shatered.\n\nShatered? His ribs were touched. Luke yelled at him if he wanted his ribs touched by him. Then Jon backed out scard but he did'ent give up. The reason Jon is doing it is because he thinks that Luke purpesly broke his ribs. You see Jon did'ent have a choice to come here because he was forced by his mom. His mom sent him because he would not move out of there house and she wanted him gone.\n\nJon dicided that he would go talk to the captin about it. The weird thing though is he did'ent tell them that are else they would come too. So he went to the captin telling him lies. The captin got really upset and went to talk to Luke. The captin was very angry now and he was just about to push Luke over bored but he did'ent because he would go to jail. When he reached Luke he yelled at him. Luke asked why. Wy are you yelling at me captin? You know exacily why I am yelling at you Luke. No I really don't.\n\nI am yelling at you because you purpusely broke your ribs. Where did you get that from captin. Jon told me that he herd you say that to yourself. Look Jon told you lies because even if I did do that I don't talk to myself. You don't, yelled the captin. No,said Luke. Great now I have to talk to Jon. Im comeing too,said Luke. So they went to talk to Jon. They found him in the lounge. They walked up to him and started to talk.\n\nThe captin told him that he had giving false infomation. Jon talked back and said he is lieing and he really did do it on purpose. The captin ignored it. So Jon told them his story. The reason I thought he purposely did it was because I thought all the people here were forced to do this too. Luke told him that he joined with his friend because they thought it would be fun so they did it. After they did it once Luke wanted to do it again because he liked it so much. After they told each others storys they settiled there argument and became best friends.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was working two part time job. There were the grocery store and a bank. When his friend Don invited him to go Cattle boat.\n\nYou have fun doing the jobs sometimes. You can see lots of beatiful views and countrys. After you were done they played games like basketball or volley ball.\n\nYou would have different jobs on the ship. You would help people or animals survive.\n\nYou could play table-tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,and whittling. Also games helped pass time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is like a adventure.But being a seagoing cowboy saw much more than an adventure to luke. It made more people aware of other countries and their needs.\n\nIt was a open world for being a seagoing cowboy.\n\nIt is hard bieng a seagoing cowboy because u are in kindof a dangers ischue for you.\n\nYou can have lots of fun being a seagoing. There are some that you can save and some cant. Sometimes you are in a danger zone or some tipe of zone.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars sounds so futuristic, but I wouldn't trust one. Something can go wrong with the car and there wouldn't be anyone to blame. Not that I'm looking for someone to blame, but someone could get injured or hurt very badly just because a car stopped working. A lot of people been in car accidents before, now imagine how bad it would be if the cars drove themselves! It would be nice to not have to drive and get drove to, but how can you TRUST a car?\n\nAn accident can happen using the driverless car and what would happen? The passengers can't be blamed, the car can't, and neither can the manufactors. A lot of technology has stopped working or can get broken and a lot of stuff can happen with one simple mistake. Now imagine that there would only be driverless cars, how ridiculous does that sound! How are the cars even going to know the laws?\n\nMost people would say the car would have a computer that would know the laws. There's always new laws and how would the computer know the new ones? What if the computer gets the laws mixed up? A computer can stop working and you might not even know it! If a person mixes up the laws they can get a ticket or even get sent to court for not knowing them. It could keep the roads safer. The car messes up and what would happen? The car gets taken away? It goes to get fixed?\n\nMost driverless cars that we have now, still need a driver. How pointless does that sound? Might as well just drive it yourself. Texting and driving is a big issue in the 21st century, people will think they can now text with the driverless car and won't even notice what's happening on the road. Driverless cars aren't going to make the world better and neither will they stop accidents from happening. Once a driverless car gets into an accident, no one will want one. I'm pretty sure it will happen someday and it would then be pointless to keep manufactoring them.\n\nDriverless cars are just too much. It's like paying for a computer to drive you. You can't trust one! They might crash, break, and even do something you didn't tell it to do. Not everyone might agree with me, but I know for sure that no one would buy one after an accident happens. Please don't risk your life by buying a driverless car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though the era of driverless cars seems to be approaching at a quick pace, I would not expect these inventions to take off. Driverless cars at first come off as worthy devices for transportation, but they will soon enough come into contact with conflicts and difficulties. When looking at these types of cars, one must consider factors such as safety and convienence. Could this new mode of transportation really be great of society? Driverless car development should be reduced and held off.\n\nLaws across the states, except for those such as California, Nevada, and Florida, have restricted aspects of driving that would enable the use of the driverless car. Most focus on keeping the people in general safe from harm. Let one say, however, that driverless cars are allowed to become more used and tested within the United States. New laws would have to be created in order to figure out who is liabile for accidents. Would it be the manufacturer or the driver at fault? Driverless cars would have to jump obstacles such as liabilities and state restrictions inorder to even be considered for use.\n\nIn addition to state conditions, the conditions of safety and attention for the driver must also be considered. As the car drives itself, the passengers in the device may not even be paying attention to the events at hand. Sure, manufacturers have made ways for the car to catch someone's attention, such as viberations or flashing lights, but such means can't always be reliable. What if the passenger or \"driver\" is asleep or even medically impaired? Many will probably look at the driverless car as a means of safe transportation due to a physical or mental disability. Accidents are prone to happen if the car itself can't be relied on one hundred percent without human skills.\n\nLastly, there is a possiblility that this new mode of transportation won't have enough of a budge to take off. Even if the new car seems like a great invention, it might be too expensive to pull off. For example, Google's Toyota Prius uses multiple sets of technology, such as radar sensors, laster beans, and cameras. If one were to mass produce such a complex device, it'd surely take mass amounts of resources and money to construct. Furthermore, will drivers be attracted to driverless cars? They might wonder whats the point of getting in the car if it has the chance of still needing human correction. The chances of this new technology becoming more popular with society is low and unpromising.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars have a numerous case of setbacks. Federal and state restrictions when it comes to driving handicap the cars from being used widely. Not all drivers will be capalbe of using such devices and everyone should be accomandated for. Money and interest also have to be considered before even launching such a complex invention. Driverless cars come with too many aspects that should set it back in development in the upcoming years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using cars for everyday life in cities and towns is a normal, everyday event people do for their carrers and personal lives. In bigger cities, a pollution problem has been mostly caused by the cars, because of the immense ammount of them being used everyday.\n\nSome cities around the world have commited to the car-ban and the outcome has been on the postitive close to every time. Opening stores in a walking ditance, instead of malls on distant highways. The advantages are not just for you, they are to the whole city or town you may live in. The exercise and the people chating about on the streets with a clean air and no conjested roads to worry about. Since the peak of driving in 2005, the cars on the road and the amount of lisences have declined. The make of this is once again positive.\n\nCars on the road can change in your area if a large amount of people strive to do so. This could be a new generation of how transportation evolves for years to come when we are biking, walking, or just strolling around stores walking distince from you!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hosting international sports tournaments such as the World Cup and Olympics can be a major event for some countries. Some people believe that it improves the hosting countries reputation, while others believe that they waste financial resources. I agree with the former view. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before reaching a conclusion. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, many suggest that there are many other aspects that should be taken care of rather than building new venues and stadiums for games. Governments should take care of ameliorating and improving infrastructures and healthcare services. For instance, many people criticized Brazil for hosting the World Cup events despite the rising rates of poverty and declining medical services; saying that this money should be spent on these areas instead of building brand-new stadiums which be left derelict after the event. As a result, Brazil experienced major financial challenges after the World Cup because they had spent so much money preparing for this event.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, several individuals opine that such international games can have economic benefits in spite of the costs required in organizing them. This because many people flock from different nations to attend these competitions, therefore, revenues can be increased because of tourism. Moreover, this will encourage more tourists to travel to this country. For example, when Egypt organized the African Cup of Nations, people learned more about Egypt. As a consequence, more visitors decided to visit Egypt, and income from tourism increased.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although it is argued that money spent on well-known sports competitions should be used for improving existing public services, I strongly believe that they can be a way to maximize a country's income through attracting more visitors and tourists.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers can help shape the world. With the help of computers, we can tell the emotions of mona lisa. Imagine all the things the world can do with that technology. Children can be helped if there emotions can tell if there bored so, lesson plans can be more exciting to them.\n\nHelping children understand lesson plans is hard and have them not be bored of it is harder. Being able to scan there face and tell if there bored or not is crucial. The ablity to change there learnig style by just resding there emotion is amazing. So many kids will pass school like it was nothing. The dropout numbers will soon be little to none due to a computer reading there emotion. School wouldn't be a boring place to kids anymore but, a fun place to learn interesting subjects.\n\nReading a kids emotions is benificial in the schooling enviorment. There are so many benifits to it. Thinking its not is absoulutly crazy. The reading will help them in school to better educate them and see what learning style best fits them. The child is not giving up anything only simply learning what ways they learn the best.\n\nThe reading of kids emotions will be the best thing to the world. Kids will be less likly to dropout. They would learn in a better way. They wouldn't think school is a boring dumb place anymore and woulnd actually love to come to learn. Thats why reading kids emotions will help the education of kids in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist One reason features setting affect hot outside makes need water An example I hitting water bottles pretty regularly I traveling high deserts California June example hot outside A tarlike substance oozed followed brackish water feeling somewhere neighborhood two hundred degreesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story Winter Hibiscus concluded story pharagraph author wanted show Saeng finally going start getting used new home She wont spend much time dreaming past And warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng broke wept I believe thats needed get lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, the existence of advertising has crept into many aspects of daily life. From my perspective, this tendency has raised many disruptive concerns relating to the issues of manipulating public opinion and fostering overshopping.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the popularity of advertisements can form a negative perspective on daily activities. It is true that the high density of advertisements leads to memorable footage stuck in the audience's minds. This might have the impact of changing their mindset in the long-term whether they are exposed to too many of these advertisements. For example, people watching car advertisements usually recognize that the background of these tends to be decorated in a luxurious way leading to a mindset that only the high-order classes can buy them. Because the target audiences of car sellers are often the high-income people, however, it could be seen that advertisements release in the public eye. Thus, it is understandable that many people hold a belief that owning a car is a represented aspect belonging to the rich community. Nevertheless, it is noticeable that this is a mistrustful idea and stereotype, and many forms of advertisements are manipulating the public to push their sales.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the high density has not only shifted people’s perspective but also led to detrimental activities. Firstly, many advertisements promoting their items tend to constantly repeat not only on TV and smartphones but also on billboards whether people going out, this would stick in customers’ memories and lead to a feeling of curiosity or fear of missing out. Therefore, trending products are usually hunted and attracted by a plethora of consumers. However, there are a variety of top trending products from several aspects of the market, leading to the customers’ tendency to splash all their money on them. It reckons that this is an expenditure habit and also harms the surrounding environment due to the high demands of producing too many items. Zara, a fashion brand, for example, is a well-known case of fast fashion. This company is usually boycotted because it would like to release a new collection for every new season and overproduct them. Therefore, the consumption is always lower than the production and the leftovers actually contribute to the global garbage dump more seriously.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is true that many advertisements around daily lives have many highlighted negative impacts, including distorting the audiences’ views or breeding overconsumption.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you remember when you went on a long trip from Indiana to Texas and it took 24 hours or more of constant driving? Or the time that your dad was falling asleep on the road on the way home? Or even heard of that guy that got in a car crash while he was intoxicated? What if there was a car that didnt need you to drive but drove you from Point A to Point B? Well, Google is coming up witha driveless car. Driveless cars would a big change and benefit because it would reduce accidents, give more freedom for drivers, and there would be a less need to buy cars.\n\nMany people have been in many car accident due to intoxication, sleepiness, and texting and driving at the same time. People lose focus of the road when they are distracted of different things around them also. Google has been creating and programming cars so theycan drive accident free and so cars become more efficient. Driveless cars have many sensors to help with conditions of the road and work zones. If Google was to develope a perfect driveless car we would have nothing to worry about.\n\nAlso it would allow the drivers to have more freedom to talk to their family and friends without keeping their eyes off the road. Google has created driverless cars but are not technically driver free. Google's driverless cars are not entirely driverless. The cars need the driver for pulling in, pulling out, traffic jams and work zones. If any of these things were to happen the driver would need to take\n\ncontrol of the car so they wouln't crash. In the 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could save energy and gas.\n\nWith the supply of driverless cars, the less they would need to buy a car because there would many taxi driverless cars that will drive people to their destinations . Many people have different opinions about driverless cars . Although Google says they try to make your car safe as possible for you and your loved ones. Driverless cars are coming and will make a huge impact on everyday life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children are the backbone of the country. I strongly think they should do any sort of social work or service in their leisure hours which can be useful for the society and for them as well. The analysis contained in the following paragraphs will explain this topic in a appropriate way. \r\n\r\nAs it is said 'A man is known by his characters', I believe doing social work without pay will help in building character of the teenagers. They will develop feeling of self-confidence. This can also help in learning various attributes such as being humble, polite, generous, punctual and more over being social. \r\n\r\nNowadays in this technology era, it is important to be involved in good works rather than wasting time in unuseful ways. For instance, on of my friend is busy on weekends for raising funds for charity through exhibitions. This has transformed her a lot by developing a sense of being helpful to needy's. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, it can help a number of people who are poor or in need of support. As these people do not have enough funds for raising their children in a good school. Such kinds of social acts can benefit them a lot. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, I would like to say children and youth have the capabilities to transform themselves and the communities in a far better way by organizing and engaging in different social activities. This will indeed make them better human being and responsible citizen which will eventually help in the growth and development of nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The of Exploring Venus\" that they want sent humans to study the panet. The scientices double think to send\n\nhumans to Venus because the condition aren't easy and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience. NASA still wants to approach to Venus to study the planet knowing the danger. According to article Venus has the hottest surface out of all the solar system even though it's not the closes planet to the sun. Besides all the pressure and heat, Venus presents additional impediments like volcanoes erupting, earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nBesides all the dangerous things in Venus, scientist say it's the most Earth like panet in our solar system. Long ago scientist believe that Venus was covered with large oceans and could have been some way of life. Today, Venus still has some feature that the Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that Venus has it up and downs but I believe that it is worth scientist to keep on studing the Venus because it's the most Earth like planet in our solar system.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many countries, history plays an essential part in the community. Because of this, there are a significant number of people who were building interest in searching about the history of their house or building they live in. The reason for this is mainly the curiosity about the story behind the structure, and society can research this by interviewing their old generations.\r\n\r\nMany individuals are fascinated with their ancestral house and formulation of curiosity their mind about the materials used and the story of their home. This may lead to some cultural beliefs and superstitions of society, such as where the door should be, the placement of the ornaments, and even the stairs of the house are important. For instance, my aunt is a believer in superstition; thus, she always does the particular placement of their appliances and sofas in their home.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, researching this matter is possible by asking the seniors. For example, I obtained the history of our ancestral house with my grandparents, who used to give me information about the story of why our house was built like this, consequently, because of the typhoon that was hit our town. Moreover, a piece of additional information can be taken through modern technology, where considerable information can be seen and tackled.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, several individuals are turned into the history of the house or building they lived because of interest to have an idea about the story, and it can be obtained through word of mouth by the elders.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years or more there have been a face on the planet Mars. Many dont know how it got there or where it came from, but many people have different opinion about this face on Mars came to appear to what it is. The face on Mars is a natural landform, many think its not but it really is. This natural landform was first discovered by NASA when their spacecarft landed on Mars on May 24, 2001.\n\nWhen the Viking spacecraft landed on mars they noticed an unusual thing on Mars. They noticed a face. Many believe that this shows evidence that there was life on Mars and others think not. This face is actually a natural landform of Mars. In the text it says that\n\nafter the MOC team took a shot of the face tem times sharper then the Viking`s image, it was revealed that this face was a nutral landfrom of Mars. Many were disappointed and many still didn`t believe it. To me I feel like this face it a nutral landform. Maybe it`s just made up of meteriods compacted together, or just lots of craters, and other ideas, but this face is a nutral landform which turned out to become popular. In the text it states that this face became a pop icon, was in Hollywood films, in magazines, on radio talk shows, and more. In conclusion, many people think the face is bona evidence of life on Mars and evidence that NASA would reather hide, people like conspiracy theorists.\n\nThis face on the surface on Mars in a natural landform, even if people believe that it is evidence of life on Mars, or its not a natural landform. Scientist believe that it is evdience of life on Mars , but it turns out to be no life or alien existace. In addition it was proven that this popular face is a nautral landform of Mars. Many don`t believe it and many do, but it doesn`t matter about their opinions because it was proven that this face is a natural sudstance on Mars. This amazing discovery became popular over the years and many people would like to explore it one day. In conclusion, this famous piece of history was dicovered by NASA and was proven that it was a natural piece of landform and that is all that it will be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Some people say that we should have facial recognition in the computers in schools so that if the student looks bored or confused, the computer will change it up a little bit for their liking. It will also be able to help teachers know when a student needs assistance or needs a more energizing lesson. Using this technology in classrooms is valuable because it will help teachers change their actions and might help the student become more engaged.\n\nSchools all over the world would really benefit from the Facial Action Coding System. By using this, there could be a possibility of more engaged students and finally result in higher test scores. Dr. Huang says,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Not only will teachers result from this, but students will as well. Just by using the computer system, we will be able to tell how a student is feeling in that classroom or during a certain lesson. If we could see the facial expression, be able to figure out why, and change something to fix it, that would be very effective in the school setting.\n\nAlthough this would be really great, many people could say that not all students have the same feelings about things so if a teacher changed his or her lesson based on one student, then some of the other students might not be as engaged or delighted. It wouldn't be right to do something based on one student rather than twenty-five. If a few students are very engaged in this lesson and they are paying attention and getting something out of it but other students are confused, if the teacher decides to make a change for the confused students, the students that were engaged in the lesson may become unengaged or bored. That would be the downfall of using this sort of technology.\n\nA very appropriate setting for the Facial Action Coding System would be online schooling and home schooling because both of those are mainly based on the one student taking that course or class. If the camera on the computer sent a signal to the online schooler or home schooler, it would be easy to make a change in the lesson to try and get the student more engaged. Having a student pay more attention and be more engaged in a lesson could actually help raise test scores because if someone was doing something that was actually fun and they could actually retain the knowledge, it might be effective.\n\nUsing the Facial Action Coding system in classrooms is valuable and effective. It will help students become more engaged and pay more attention. It will also help raise test scores at least partially because they will be able to remember what they learned when it was something that they liked. While some might have contradictory thoughts, it is mostly a valuable piece of technology that should be used in many schools across the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Aliens had nothing to do with the face on Mars, even though there may be slight evidence. The face on mars was just a natural invention, that came from piled up rocks, dust, shadows, and old storms, in my opinion it is just a crazy sight of nature.\n\nThere were excited and anxious web searchers waiting to see the image that first appeared on a JPL web site. The web searchers only found that it was a natural landform, and there was no alien monument at all.\n\nIf there were any other objects in sight for this face to have been created by aliens they would have been captured because you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than a pixel size. For example, if there was anything like small shacks, or even airplanes they would have seen them, so therefore, aliens couldnt have made this face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It would be a great thing to move into Venus for all humans because some point the Earths surface or the Orbit of the Earth would be destroyed that it would possably bring to kill millions of people around the world, or it'd be easier to say that humans will most likely be extinct for ever. I see that it's a worthy, right, & brave to be doing reasearch, tests, & ect. on Venus when it might be a bit dangerouse because there are just millions of babies, kids, parents, and grandparents around the world that it would be awefull to see them die at a very young age, I don't see that it's a right thing for humans to suffer the pain and to see their last memory of there loved ones dying. Venus has had water before in its planet, so i believe that if venus has had water, it would be possable to bring & to be having plants, anilmals, and living things to be working together in Venus so that it's capable, possable of growing a new nation, and developing more people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is arguable that teenagers should do unpaid community volunteer work in their free time. I totally agree with this statement as it could be an opportunity for teenagers to learn and develop the skills from doing unpaid work as well as to serve the community which they live in.\r\n\r\n On one hand, there are many benefits for teenagers to learn and prepare to do the future work in the real world by doing unpaid community work. For example, firstly, teenagers will get an idea on how to use their knowledge and apply the skills they have learnt from the school in real work by doing community work such as school events. Secondly, these community works could help them to develop communication skills which they could use after graduation. Thirdly, they could get connection of many people in the community while they are doing unpaid community work. The connections they got could lead them to get a paid work when they finish from the school and start to look for a job.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is arguable that they could do paid work during their free time instead of doing volunteer work. Firstly, the paid work will help them to get more money and they could help to support their family for daily and living expenses. Secondly, they could learn to manage the money while they are doing paid work. This could help them to learn the money management skill which they could use this skill to manage their daily life in the future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my opinion, it may not be necessary to get teenagers to do the paid work while they are studying at the school. They could learn the skills for work while they are doing unpaid work without getting high pressure from work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think the voting should be based off of the most popular vote. When we go to vote all we're voting for is electors to vote for the president they choose. In my opinion the people of the United States of america should get a saying in who they want as president. If the voting was based off of the most popular vote, it would be fair to everyone.\n\nFor example in 2000 when Al gore recieved more individual votes then George W. Bush and Bush one ,that was unfair because more poeple wanted Al Gore as their president rather than George W. Bush. The president is going to be ALL the people in the United States president, not just those 29 electoral voters president. In 2012 Obama won the election because of the 61.7 percent of the electoral votes not by individual votes. If the voting wasn't based off of the electoral votes than maybe the united states wouldn't be so much in debt and have so many people not wanting Obama as our president. Maybe Romney would have been a better president and have took the U.S out of so much debt. After all, 53.1 percent of individual voters voted for Romney.\n\nRomney's chances of winning by electoral college were thin because since he was in the south he had no incentive to campaign heavily in those south states. Many voters don't vote because they know their vote won't matter at all when it comes to voting for the president of their choosing. If 35 million people vote in California, it would only count as 55 representatives. Is their really a point of them voting? no point at all.\n\nIn conclusion, if you really want a fair win for the president ,the president should be chosen by the people , not the electoral college. When i'm old enough to vote i hope it will be based off of who the poeple want as their prestident not the electoral college.\n\nSincerely, a student who's parents voted for Romney.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient geing I took ever get I patient getting system I took ten mounts get birthday gamestops taxlor get I car hours get went one frist game stop looked one insed good condashi I got three games time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have have you ever wanted to learn more about something like about a person or maybe... a planet? This essay is on unmasking the face on Mars, is it real? or fake?\n\nWell is is in fact real in here are the reasons why.\n\nFirst, it is real because Twenty five years ago we spotted something weird happening on Mars. One of our spacecrafts, The Viking 1, was getting pictures of what may be possible land sites for its sister ship, The Viking 2. It was then that we noticed something strange, it was like a shadowy likeness of a human face. It had an ENORMOUS head nearly almost two miles end to end. it ALMOST looked like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nNext, a few days later we unveiled the image for everyone to see...even though we were not sure how everyone would react. But to NASA's surpise, everyone loved it it was in movies, books,magazines etc. There were some people out there who didn't belive it, said it was probably fake and that we were just trying to scare people into thinking aliens were real. But it was real alright and we have the evidence to prove it.\n\nThird, even though few scientists believed it to the Face of an alien artifact, the photos of Cydonia became important to NASA when the Global Surveyor (MGS) to the Mars in September. After 18 years, the Viking missions ended. Not every one was okay with though. The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north latitude, it was winter in April 1998. It was a cloudy time of the year on Mars. We tried to take a look at it one more time but it was to late. When the cloudiness ended on mars we had put another spacecraft on Mars. when we got pictures back you could then all the detail and more on the face.\n\nEven though some people may still not ever believe it, we just want them to just acknowledge the thought of '' What If?''. Then maybe they could see that this really is an anicent alien mark.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have always been seen and thought about in an idealistic world where the human population wears shiny silver jumpsuits and talk in weird tongues. However, with the recent advancement in this feild, our generation will most likely see driverless cars, turning the idealistic into the realistic. Driverless cars are a positive step forward for humanity, but we must stay coherant about the skills used to drive. There are many positive attributes that driverless cars attain. It is a feat in itself that science and engineering have advanced this substantially. However, we can not become completely depenable on driverless cars.\n\nThe driverless car frontier is one that has many positive effects. The main attribute to driverless cars is that it eliminates the area for human error when on the road. This not only makes the roads a safer place but it will also decrease the percentage of fatalities by car accidents, which is the number one cause of death for teenagers. However, because driverless cars can also make errros, they still have a driver who in reality, has a lot of the control. This factor will help work around certain variables such as construction done on the road, or an accident nearby. Not only do driverless cars present safer roads, they also have the oppurtunity to be less harmful to the enviornment. Sergey Brin predicts that these cars will use half of the fuel of today's taxis, causing less pollutants to be released into the air, which will make the world a less toxic place. Taking everything into account, driverless cars will most likely decrease the accident rates and pollutants released into the air, creating positive results that will significantly change how people consider driving.\n\nThe fact that the technology for driverless cars is available is astounding and contributes to culture growth. This technology offers inspiration and a bridge to discover new technologies that will help the world. Today it is a driverless car, that will decrease the amount of accidents and make drving safer, but the possibilities for tomorrow are endless. This could cause a rise in young people that want to make the world a better place inventing things in the name of science, which could create amazing results. However, even though this technology offers so much to humanity, it could also take away.\n\nWhen driverless cars are available, humans still must have the skills to be able to drive on their own. When humanity is presented with a new toy or resource, everyone usually becomes lazy and does not take into consideration the skills that they are losing because of it. Driverless cars are not truly driverless, a driver still must be present to deal with the variables that the technology within the car cannot predit. Because of this, it is vital that the general population does not become lazy and still knows the basic skills to drive. As a culture, everyone has become so dependent on technology because it makes our lives easier. Everyone must retain and remember a world without all of the technology and driverless cars to still have a general knowledge of how the world works. Driverless cars are an amazing technology that will be presented to us, do not take advantage of it.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars present many positive attributes and the technology used to make it will inspire many other new invention and advance the engineering feild in a monumental way. However, humans must not take advantage of the technology that will be given and become lazy, it will make the cars counterintuitive. Driverless cars are the next step forward for humanity, but we can not become lazy. It is truly difficult to imagine of a world where manual drving is considered odd. But, driverless cars are the next step towards turning the world into something completely safe and truly amazing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many young people work on a volunteer basis and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I disagree that we all should force teenagers to do unpaid work.\r\n\r\nMost young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. The school is just as demanding as a full-time work, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. As young people have free time, we should stimulate them to enjoy it with their friends or spend it doing sport and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of they finish their studies.\r\n\r\nAt the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used and parents, who would not want to be talked about how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is definitely the best system.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Teenagers could choice work for free and help others, but in my opinion, we should not make this compulsory.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy does sound like a lot of fun. I think being a Seagoing Cowboy would be fun.\n\nFirst you are helping others.\n\nIt sounds fun to do, you have something to do, you are being a hero. you get to do a lot of traveling and sightseeing\n\nYou get to see things you have never seen before.\n\nSeagoing gives you the chance to see different when you travel. You kinda become a role model when you are a Seagoing Cowboy. You are looking out for others i think you should be responible and caring to be a Seagoing Cowboy. It could be a lot of fun and make you happy to protect people. You are making people feel safe.\n\nIn conclusion i think the Seagoing Cowboy program is good for people and they should join it. It's an important and fun job, sometimrs you get hurt and it can be dangerous but it awesome. Just be careful with dangers at sea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present day with advances in globalization and technologies, climate change has been increasingly present in our life. Although some people claim the population should mitigate its impacts, others believe in the opposite idea. I agree with society should fight for a cleaner world thinking in the next generations. This essay will discuss both views and I will explain better my opinion. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the world is claiming help due to the consequences of climate change. Some people believe that the population just should learn to live with these negative results but I disagree about this idea. If every person would do a thin part, in the end, we would have great and ambitious results because small actions can be valuable and essential. In addition, for example, if each person thinks that it help is inefficient, nobody will help. The more aware people, the more help and better actions we will have. \r\n\r\nThe population needs to strive to fight for the planet. Not only ordinary individuals but also large companies, governments, and influential organizations should endorse the importance of taking care of the planet. Owing to climate change, lands are been cleared which leads to the presence of deforestation and desertification even more ubiquitous. As a result, animals and vegetation are decreasing in number because of a lack of natural habitat, furthermore, people are losing their homes and suffering from droughts and flooding. Is not acceptable to think this phenomenon is normal and thus we just should wait without any effort. I claim society must do any effort to change this complex and sad reality. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, climate change has been transforming the world into an uninhabitable site. Whether individuals do not anything to overcome this situation, consequences in the coming years will be inevitable. Hence, I agree the population should fight to save the planet. This essay argued both views of different opinions about climate change and I explained my opinion in more detail.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driveless cars are a bad idea . There are so many things that they still would have to improve before they would be safe. They arent totaly driveless anyway because you would have to stop and start driving when ever you come to construction or and accident on the road. Im going to tell you some reasons why i dont beleive they are a good idea.\n\nThe first reason I dont believe that it is a good idea is because they dont know how to drive through construction or accidents that have happens on the road yet. You could be driving down the highway and as many accidents that happen you could just come around a turn aand then you would have to be watching very closley to know to start stearing the car. This could cause some mayjor issues as in causing other wrecks to happen. I know if I was driving down the road with a driveless car I would be kicked back an relacked. If you come apon a wreck though you could also be in a wreck because you were not ready.\n\nMy second reason I don't think they are a good idea is because they wont have a clue who to blame if there was an accident. If you got in a wreck with someone would it be your fault or the other person or would it be the cars fault that you crashed? They wouldn't know who to blame for the wreck. If someone was to get killed in these cars the family and friends would blame it on the cars. They could have big problems with this because it may have been prevented if the car wasn't driveless.\n\nMy third and final reason is what would be the price for these cars? I know that they most likley wont be affordable for some people. Yes, the rich could pay for this car because they have a lot of money and they dont have to worry about anything but thereselfs. What about the middle class and the poor? They already have to worry about there house payment and many other things. Will these cars be manditory for everyone to have so we don't have driveless cars and regular cars on the road at the same time? If so many people will have some serious trouble buying the vechile because they are short on money.\n\nThis is why I believe that these driveless cars are not a good idea. Yes, some people may think they are the best thing ever. Some may just not care. I truley believe that we will be much safer and the other cars are more dependable if we just stayed with the old fashion you drive the care with a gas pedal and a brake. New technology is a good things but in this case I think that they are taking things a little too dar.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A google cofounder, Sergey Brin, has invisioned a new public safety transportation system. His ide is driverless cars, the cars are expected to have many safety features, use less fuel, and expand carrying capacity. But are they really as safe as they are made out to be? How can this new idea affect manufacturers, drivers, owners, and insurance companies? Will this new technology solve any problems that drivers currently face, or could this vehicle create more?\n\nTechnology often does not work as it is supposed to and this causes frustration. In this case, if the technology does not work as it should it could be at fault for human injure or even death. If the vehicle is on autopilot and isn't familiar with its location it is possible that the vehicle could go off course or glitch. In certain situations, the vehicle may not do what we think that it will do. It will need our assistance, but if we are not notified then a driver may not know and it cold cause an accident. This brings up the question asked in the pasage, would this be seen as the drivers fault or the manufacturers?\n\nManufacturers and drivers may end up getting into many disputes over the technology within the vehicle. The problem is that the driver could ie and say that the vehicle never notified him/her even if they were actually controlling the vehicle. Insurance companies, manufacturers, and owners of these cars could be put into situations that they never woud have been put into if it weren't for the technology. Technology is a privledge, and it does not workm all of the time. Manufacturers will make thousands of hese vehicles, who's to say that you will be the one to be in the next newspaper add because your car didn't quite work as it was meant to?\n\nThere is always a risk with everything that we do. Driving a car has a risk, you could be struck by a drunk driver or end up in a ditch. Things do happen, but these self driving cars can not fix all of these problems. There will still be other drivers who refuse to use the driverless cars and they could cause accidents. If a drunk driver is about to hit a driverless car, what makes you think that your safety is guaranteed? There is always a risk, question is whether or not the risk triumps the expected safety of the vehicles.\n\nIs it possible that the owners of these vehicles will be notified to take the wheel but instead they are asleep or not paying attention? Drivers could abuse the safety features of these vehicles and make it look as if it was the manufacturers faut rather than their own. The car watching the driver feature could help in this case but not in all cases.\n\nThese cars can still be dangerous as far as safety goes. That does not make it a bad idea though. Problems could lead to solutions and solutions may lead to the success of the vehicles. Also, the idea of using less fuel and having a wider space capacity than most other vehicles is also a very good feature to the vehicles. But can the manufacturers pull it off? It is likely, but will it ever actually happen? These vehicles may appear sooner than we think, we'll just have to see if they become a success or just another idea that didn't meet its expectations. Only time will tell.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders faced multiple obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building One obstacle dirigible would add much stress frame building landed The building would modified costing sixty thousand dollars moreAnother obstacle faced gas inside dirigible Some used hydrogen extremely flammable Since New York highly populated something go wrong would unsafe Also winds top building strong The back dirigible would swivelling around mooring mast The last obstacle would illegal ship ever tie approach building The attempt allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building failed There many obstaclesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Housing shortage has become a serious urban social issue in many parts of the world. It has been argued that only when the government has taken actions, can demand for homes be fulfilled. Yet to the best of my knowledge, the government alone can not cope well with housing shortage.\nOne of the main objections to government intervention is that it would hamper the private sector and simultaneously pose a huge burden upon the state. In countries where the government is on a tight budget and the homeless population is large, the involvement of private property developers is required and recommended. Not only does it release the government from the burden of funding large-sized construction programmes but it also fosters the housing industry. Given its role in attracting public consumption and accelerating economic development, the housing industry should be at the mercy of the market, rather than the government.\nAnother drawback of state control over the housing market is that it could result in the stagnancy of construction quality, functionality, facilities and other aspects of housing. Apartment blocks or other residential constructions would be built in a similar pattern and the cityscape would be monotonous. Excessive uniformity, especially in the size and number of rooms, will fail to meet comprehensive requirements raised by citizens on properties.\nDespite these objections, government intervention is essential in some segments of the market and can render more resistance to citizens. Single parents, the people with disabilities and other disadvantaged people are among those who are not ready to afford commercial housing. The government can provide them either with housing allowance to purchase their private properties or directly with economical houses.\nAs indicated above, in addressing homelessness and inadequate housing, the joint effort of both government and private sector is required. While government intervention would impede the property market and negatively influence the supply and demand relationship, government assistance is essential for low-income families and vulnerable individuals in need of housing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In paragraph seven it says that in 2013 the BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" (meaning that the car can move but it still needs assestance from the driver) is proof that this Google car is not safe. It says that the driver seat will vibarte when the vehicle is in danger of backing in to an object. But what if the driver is sleep and the car dosn't react in time and not only will the car be damaged but will the driver be ingerd and will the object that was involved in the acedent be damaged.\n\nIn paragraph nine it states that \"presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Now they came out with a car that doesn't need a driver (only in emergences). That they still have to come up with some sort of law saying that when in an emergence that ether the driver or the maker of the car will be acconted for.\n\nI think that these cars are not safe and that they put driving at a grater chance for car crashes becase even thow technolagy is improving there are still malfuncutions and the car can stop, run into things, and turn on by its self. The cars are alsoeaser to be hacked and that someone could take over the car. Than that person life is in danger.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pollution is growing in today's society. Many people consider that the best way is the rising price of petrol by the government. I completely disagree with the idea and I believe that various other measures would be more constructive.\n\n Firstly, the government should invest to use renewable energy sources such as wind and solar rather than non-renewable sources It would be a better solution to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and global warming. For example, the United States has proved its efficiency in solar power by producing energy. This practice can help to clean the environment and improve energy production. \n \nAdditionally, individuals could perform a significant position in making the environment more reliable. In other words, by not using immense amounts of plastic which is a dangerous contaminant of the soil. For example, consumers use and throw away plastic bags while shopping instead of applying paper and cloth bags. Natural bags much better methods to reduce environmental problems.\n\nIn conclusion, there are other effective and efficient ways to solve pollution problems, rather than increasing the cost of petrol.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been an enigmatic quandary as to whether education is the most effective way to renew criminals. However, considering that having a job is not a crucial factor when it comes to crime and education requires a lot of time, I state that legislating strong regulations would be prioritized over anything else.\r\n\r\n To begin with, the crimes of intelligent people lucidly demonstrate the matter pertaining to this theme. In our society, there are various types of crimes which was made by different types of people. It is common to witness financial fraud or adopting expedient made by ruling class people. Besides, those crimes committed by intelligent people are much more deteriorative to society than simple crimes. Such examples clearly prove that having a job or higher education does not guarantee to prevent or alleviate of crimes. That is why I think education for people in prison does not effectively shrink crimes.\r\n\r\n Furthermore, time-consuming clearly explains the issue at hand. The effectiveness of education requires a lot of time and patients to renew criminals. Besides, it also needs vast cost and effort to grab realistic performances. To save budgets and time, I believe that putting effort to build strong regulations and penalties is a much more powerful way than other methods. People will have an awareness and be careful of their behaviours if there are firm regulations. Consequently, people would not make vicious crimes and crime rates would be declined.\r\n\r\nAt first glance, it may seem like education is the best way to decrease crimes. However, the examples of fraud or expedient made by the upper class, and considering the time-consuming of education, I state that we should make much more powerful regulations than before to reduce vicious crimes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The architects engineers workers builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting attach dirigible dock top building The first troubling encounter builders could simply drop mooring mast top empire state building The engineers architects needed make dollars worth repairs strengthen buildings frame work Mother nature also problem The constantly shifting winds would make hard stay landed unless weighed Even weighing zeppelins proposed threat weight falling killing innocent person lastly law prevented dirigibles flying low city If spike another building hit popped ballon would absolute disaster Overall many obstacles preventing idea dirigible dock ever become trueSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We all had dreams about having flying cars and driveless cars, but now we can almost say our dreams are becoming a reality. Automakers are working on manufacturing driveless cars. Driveless cars will eventually help us all in the future, when they are developed. If someone is drunk driving the car will for the most part drive itself with the help of sensors. If someone has fallen asleep in the car and something bad happens the car will alert the driver. First the automakers thought of making smarter roads, but with out the option of smarter roads, the manufacturers then thought about smarter cars. They did not know exactly how smart the cars would have to be but they knew for sure that they would need a lot of sensors to start out with.\n\nTo help support the claim that driveless cars will be helpful in the future is the fact that they will have many sensors. The new driveless cars will have a position sensor on the left rear wheel. This helps the car stay in between the lines while driving. The next senor will be a rotationg sensor on the roof so the car knows where other cars are around it and when to stop at red lights, stop signs, yield signs, etc. It will also have four automotive radar sensors and an intertial motion sensor, to detect the movement of other cars. The car will still have a speed and brake sensor also to know how fast it is going and when to stop. The driveless car will have a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, so the car knows how far and if there is a car behind them. Lastly the car will have a GPS recevier so the car knows where it is going. All of these sensors are installed to keep the driver safe and improve on how the vehicle can drive on its own.\n\nThe car is also very easy to take control of. For the things the sensors can not sense the car will alert the driver when they need to take control. The human in the car should always remain alert for when these problems may occur but if they can not the car will send the driver an alert. The new driveless cars will have seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. If the driver has fallen asleep then the vibration of the car should be firm enough to wake them up. Now while the driver is just waking up they do not really know what is going on, so the driveless car will also announce that there is a problem and the driver should take control. By the car announce when there is a problem is very helpful because if one of the sensors were to go out then that would be a problem and the car will announce it and the human will take over.\n\nEven though the car will be very helpful there are some problems that could occur. The only way to know for sure that someone will be safe while driving is to have a human in control at all times. Driving laws are focused on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and the lawmakers know that safety is best achieved when the driver is fully alert. That is why the driveless car will have many sensors for when they sense a problem occuring on the road or occuring within the car. When the sensors do sense a problem occuring the car with alert the driver and let them know that they need to take control by vibrating the seat and announcing the problem. Though many people think driveless cars are not safe, automakers are continuing to work and test the cars until we can know for sure that they are completely safe for all drivers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys started right after the end of World War II, and it was to give supplies to those in need. The Seagoing Cowboys Mainly visted Europe and China . The main Items Sea Cowboys brought to the other countries were lifestock, and building supplies to rebuild cities and towns. Like in the story, To be a Sea Cowboy you have to be willing to travel around the world and also to spread your heart to others and help them. These are some reasons why I think Seagoing Cowboys are so great!\n\nThey take over night trips, and even month long trips or Even maybe YEAR long trips to go to people. Now, I do like helping others but if had to take month long trips that would be a nightmare so, their really giving somehting up for others. These people as in the story could just be 18 which is really young and still go out on the open waters for so long. You might think might they die of bordem, well no, because on the there and back they usal have sports like baseball tournments where the animals are staying. They also play ping-pong and foozeball which are table sports. Next, I will tell you about the incredible journeys you go on.\n\nNow, I bet you proably have the world at your fringer tips now cause of devices and I know I sure do. In 1945, you have to think, I mean their entertainent was listenig to the radio, or playing outside. When the Seacowboys traveled the world there was so much to see and do. In the story it mentions them going to Greece and seeing amazing things and also, Luke had turned 18 and could be accepted into the military. Luke had Choosen not to though because, being a SeaCowboy was already enough of an honnor.\n\nThe Seacowboy spot was an overall honnor to and it was escpesailly fun. This paragraph will be about some of the animals onboard. The usual was Horses and water/feed, this is another reason you would stay busy on the 1-3 month long trips. Luke says\" The cattle boat trips were an unbeliveible opportunity for a small town boy\". Luke also had other exprinces with animals since he said he had worked on his moms old farm, so if you've every worked you have been a great fit fo the Seacowboys.\n\nNow I have givin you great facts and reasons to join the Seacowboys. You get to see and live in other peoples cultures. You get to travel the earth(Europe and China) mostly those two. See the WWII reckage which was an important time in history. Lastly, Live with animals on a boat and see how they act and behave for a couple of months. If I had the oppurituinty to go and become a Seacowboy I would, would you too?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a new and upcoming thing in our world today. Drivers having to constantly steer and brake is a thing of the past. Now, cars drive themselves and humans are no more required to be the drivers, but the passengers. But many people don't believe that this is the road we should go down. Could going completely driverless put humans in even more danger than we are today? After reading the article, development of driverless cars should be stopped because they cause more crashes, prove technology is unreliable, and show that who to put at blame is unknown and will cause problems.\n\nDevelopment of driverless cars need to be stopped. These cars not only seem to not need human drivers, but means that we're in trusting these cars with our lives. Today, car accidents are a variety of reckless driving, simple mistakes, etc. But what they have in common is they're all accidents that humans have committed. In the article, paragraph 7, it says humans will be notified by the car when a situation gets too complicated or diffcult for it to handle. But by the time the car notifies the passenger, won't it be too late for the human to react and take over? Driverless cars putting us humans in situations like this will only cause panic for us, when we aren't even suppose to be driving, but passengers,\n\nand cause even more crashes. Driverless cars don't need to be developed because they'll just put us in more danger than we're already in.\n\nTechnology is the main component these driverless cars utilize to actually be able to drive by themselves. In paragraph 5 it says, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on the individual wheels and reduce power from the engine...\" In our world today, technology and manufactured devices malfunction all the time. It's just what happens because humans don't know everything there is to know about everything. What if to say this happened to the sensors in the driverless cars. If the sensors just stop working, causing the car to stop, putting the passenger in a great amount of danger. Technology isn't reliable, so why should we have to rely on technology to drive our cars? It's just more danger being caused instead of being prevented if we develop these cars. We should rely on ourselves to drive our cars instead of technology because it can just malfunction at anytime, without a warning.\n\nDirectly in the article, in paragraph 9, it posed the question: \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" This is a very important question because it's basically asking who's taking the blame if someone is injured by these driverless cars? This could all be avoided if we stop the development of those cars. Forsay, if someone's injured, would the guilt lie on the passenger who's suppose to be watching the driverless car drive or the manufacturers who made the car in the first place? Chaos and problems will arise if this situation takes place. Both people should be at fault though because they're giving technology the wheel and the path to do what it want, even if it's programmed to do one thing. But like I said before, these accidents and questioning who's at fault can be avoided if we take away what causing this all: technology. Stopping production of these cars will take the blame away and make accidents more clearer as who's to blame.\n\nThe idea of having driverless cars in our world today isn't not going to go away anytime soon, but proving why it shouldn't be develop and not even being an idea anymore can keep them from being a thing in our world to come. Driverless cars not only take the control out of the driver, but take control of the fate of the passengers' lives too. Development of driverless cars should be stopped because they cause more accidents, prove technology is unreliable, and cause questions of who's at fault for crashes. Taking driverless cars out of our streets and sticking to man-driven cars will make the world a safer place not only now, but for our future too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Tax is the important source of government’s revenue. It is said by some individuals that they should not pay tax to government and keep their money with themselves. I strongly disagree with the statement and my viewpoints on this issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.\n\nTo begin with, tax is fixed according to the income of the people if they will not pay the tax then rich will become more richer and poor will become more poorer and it will definitely create the problem of inequality of income and wealth.For instance a survey was conducted in India in 2017 and its result was that India faced the problem of tax evasion in which usually people do not pay tax and find the way to hide their income and this problem had given birth to several problems such as hoarding of black money in foreign countries and exploitation of poor by rich people.\n\nFurthermore, there are some advantages of collecting tax for the government.Firstly, it is the source of government’s income and regime can utilise this money for the welfare purpose of people and this money can be used to built public parks, amusement parks , building bridges.Secondly , taxes are compulsory to make balance between the rich and poor otherwise rich will become more rich and poor will become more poor.\n\nTo recapitulate, I would like to write that it is the main duty of every individual to pay tax.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Olive Oil is manufactured through several ways. First of all, the olives are picked from the trees by the farmers. Then the fresh olives are rinished using the cold water. The machines used are specific and it helps belt to smash the olives. After smashed, the olives become either olive paster or the olive stones. The next step is to put those into a bag with holes. Moving onto the next step, it will be pressed by a certain pressurer. It gives a great amount of weight on the olives so that it can be well pressed. Moreover it will be separated into either oil or water. Then, it will be stored and sold to the consumers. Thus, it is quite apparent that olive oil is manufactured by specific steps. And so more, olive oil is widely used as it is a good source for the chefs when cooking.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, buying a house has been getting unaffordable in developed cities. Some believe that only government could make adjustments to the housing supply, and I strongly agree with this opinion and will explore it in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the critical reason for the overwhelming housing market is that both federal and provincial authorities have established policies to boost the economy in big cities. Consequently, those policies created abundant working opportunities in those areas, which promote young adults immigrating from their hometowns. For instance, the head offices of most companies are located in Toronto, which causes many university graduates to flush into Toronto for better pay and to settle down there. \r\n\r\nSecondly, the provincial government could build some more condos and townhouses instead of detached houses. Although living in a condo or townhouse does not have enough space as living in a detached house, it is an ideal method to satisfy the increasing demands of new houses. By doing so, it is also avoidable that lots of parks and farmlands would be turned into buildings. For example, in downtown Toronto, many old houses have been replaced by skyscrapers, which has been increasing the living capacity of this city and saving green belts for relaxation.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, there are some other ways to help remit the housing shortage too, such as working at home and getting a job in small towns. But by the above measures, the housing problems can not be solved permanently. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, big companies also can help resolve housing problems through online work, but I believe that only the government can regulate the housing market by making different policies, like new job creation and approval of condo building plans.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Offensive media everywhere From books music lyrics culture embraces us Children see inappropriate media pick bad behavior This lead child hard time associating peers Adults also affected inappropriate media see favorite celebrity role model use inappropriate behavior This could make adult emotionally unhealthy become violent depressed Finally world could better offensive media abolished altogether People s lives could enriched good clean entertainment instead corrupted inappropriate media One clearly see offensive media must pulled country s libraries immediatley Inappropriate media surrounding us daily including children What children see imitate even first couple years lives So hear swear word tv see someone drugs imitate Clearly inappropriate behavior child If child exposed inappropriate media long period time think ok use everyday life Their social skills mind corrupted offensive media Libraries pull inappropriate media shelves corrupt child s mind Another reason libraries pull offensive media adults pick different offensive habits well Just children pick offensive habit swearing adults exposed long period time Besides swearing adults also think killing someone ok saw movie They could pick violent weapon try kill someone angry This healthy way express feelings towards someone making angry Our country s libraries pull inappropriate media shelves turn adults emotionally unhealthy Finally inappropriate media pulled library shelves world could better place without Media one root causes people act way If see favorite celebrity getting arrested magazine think ok drink drive Another example people read someone drugs book want try experiment drugs This lead people crazy things harmful lives around Offensive media almost anywhere When children see inappropriate media think ok imitate Adults exposed enough offensive media pick nasty habits like swearing killing drugs inturn lead emotionally unhealthy With inappropriate media library shelves world would better place We would less conflict less deaths better lives enriched corrupted quality media Millions lives could made better libraries pulled inappropriate media shelvesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our rapidly changing world, an increasing number of tasks that were traditionally performed by humans are now being handled by machines. This shift raises questions about whether the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, however, despite there are few drawbacks, the benefits of machines taking over human tasks are indeed far more.\r\n\r\nThe advantages of machines performing human tasks are multifaceted. Firstly, automation signifactly enhances productivity and efficiency. Machines can operate without fatigue,maintain consistent precision, and complete tasks at much more faster rate than humans. This is evident in manufacturing, where automated assembly lines have revolutionized production, reducing human errors, increasing output, and improving product quality.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, machines excel in handling dangerous and monotonous tasks, thereby reducing human exposure to hazardous environments. For instance, robots are widely employed in bomb disposal and in exploring extreme conditions, such as space and deep-sea exploration. This not only safeguards human lives but also facilitates the collection of valuable data.\r\n\r\nNonetheless, the transition towards automation is not without challenges, including potential job displacement and the dehumanization of work. As machines become more capable and efficient, certain jobs become obsolete, leading to unemployment and necessitating the acquisition of new skills. Moreover, the overreliance on machines can erode the human touch and creativity in some work settings, potentially affecting job satisfaction and mental well-being.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting story afects cyclist many ways For example story said At point tumple weed crossed path This saying desert somewhere hot I know usually see tumple weeds hot places Thus desert affect cyclist already low water place hot desert made get even dehydrated Another feature setting story affected cyclest hills climb This affected already dehydrated climbing hills made work caused lose sweat become even dehydrated Those two examples features setting story affected cyclestSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that I would like the idea of driverless cars but then again I wouldnt. At my point in life right now I like to drive. If this would happen in the time period now I wouldnt like it. For older people it would be good because some older people cannot drive. They are not capable of it.\n\nDriverless cars will still need the drivers help. When pulling out the driveway or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. I think that if where gonna have driverless cars then they should be able to do everything. What I mean by this is, they should be able to pull out of driveways and navigate through roadwork or accidents without needing the driver to take over. If where gonna make smarter cars to do these types of things then we need smarter roads as well.\n\nIn my opinion I think making these smart cars should not happen becasue like i said you need smart roads for smart cars but it is too expensive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying venus is a worthy pursuit because it can be another place where people can live and help us know if we can grow plants in venus as a resource if we needed to. We can also use solar panels as electricity in venus so people can be able to study on how will things work or act if it was in venus. Venus can be aslo dangerous of it's acidic atmosphere and it's tempertures. Venus has had numerous of spacecraft sent into it to look, but none of the spacecraft has survived. Venus has a reputation as a challenging planet to study for humans.\n\nVenus has a acididc atmosphere and can be harmful to people to study if there were a smart and good plan to send spacecraft and has a high tempertures, in paragraph one sentance two it states \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus\" also on paragraph three sentance three it also states \" on the planet surface tempatures average over 800 dgrees ferenhit\". This means that venus has a carbon dioxide atmospher that can be dangerouse to huimans trying to reshearch venus, it also has a high tempertre avrage that humans probably can't survive a hour in venus.\n\nVenus has had spacecraft land there but couldn't survive a few hours on venus, in paraghraph two sentance two it states \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud drapped world\" it aslo states on paragraph two sentance three it states \"each mission was unmanned and for a good reason since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This means that humans have sent spacecrft but also couldn't manage to survive when its in venus. If there were some creative way that humans make a spacecraft it will prabably not survive the harsh tempertures and the acidic atmophere.\n\nVenus can be a challenging place of world to study for humans because of it's 97 percent carbon dioxide, inparagraph two sentance six it states \" numerous factors contribute to venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study.\" This means that humans are having a bad time studying venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who are keen on exploring the origin of their current accommodation. There are several causes behind this trend, which is approached in different ways.\r\n\r\nFirstly, one of the deep-rooted causes for this phenomenon is that knowing the history of where they are living enables them to understand the value they are having. For example, being aware of the current land as the result of competing between two regions in which many soldiers sacrificed may help residents to protect and maintain carefully, so as not to take it for granted. Secondly, having historical knowledge of one’s house makes them feel proud of this. Especially, if the house has an extended story, it could be added value in some acquisition deal. Finally, another reason for this tendency is that it could be a story or a legend to tell to the next generation.\r\n\r\nWhen it comes to researching methods, one of the most effective ways is searching on the Internet. Thanks to the development of technology, the Internet plays an important role in fulfilling all necessary information for human life. For instance, just by one click, everything they need is shown apparently. Also, people could be able to ask either the broker, the previous house-owner or eventually its neighbourhood before buying a house to know clearly about its history. Last but not least, books and newspapers are also considered to be critically important for carrying out this research.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are many means to explore one’s interest or broaden one’s horizon about where they reside. Of course these actions stem from certain purposes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After the graduation of a school, each and every teenager faces a very pretty dilemma of whether to get a certain job or keep continue their education. Whilst there are a number of beneficial aspects of getting down to work, I would firmly state that it is better to acquire a university or college degree.\n\n\nThose who choose to start to pursue a work career straight after school can provide numerous benefits for the student. As leading a profession requires independent decision-making and responsibility, a teenage prone to have a substantial progress in a blink of an eye. Consequently, the teenage starts earning money and learning how to manage financial means, then one will be capable of financing oneself. Moreover, they can gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. So these all may lead to promotions and a fulfilling career.\n\n\nHowever, I support the students to continue their education because of some reasonable factors. Undoubtedly, academic qualification certified by university is a must in virtually all the job positions. For example, on no account can a person be hired as a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having a relevant degree. Hence, those graduating university have high tendency to have access to more and better job opportunities than the applicants without or fewer qualifications. One more reason to pursue education is the competitive state of job-marketing since hundreds of candidates sometimes apply for the same position. Therefore, youngsters with no diploma from high education may conceivably fail to acquire a job in their future career.\n\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that students would be more likely to be ambitious if they continue their studies beyond school level.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph illustrate true meaning hibiscus The hibiscus symbolic Saeng several ways important represents change growth ability overcome obstacles Upon seeing overcome childhood memories sentimentality However must adjust new home wants grow person She survive hibiscus survive winter Also Saeng vows in spring this hibiscus budding I take test again She determined succeed hibiscus represents triumph obstacles It stands survival endurance lifes disappointments challenges failing drivers test starting new life strange foreign country The authors choice end story paragraph exhibits Saengs ultimate understanding strength symbol hibiscusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building ran obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Because modifications would need make order mooring mast would cost sixty thousand dollars It expensive modification could simply drop mooring mast top flat roof Empire State Building The stress thousandfoot dirigible would put building s frame would much obstacle The builders needed strengthen modify steel frame Empire State Building order hold dirigibles desiredSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient wait stay put someone something Some people patient But people patient Like waiting line store someone lot thing bit rush Now yo could rude yell scream crazy mess could wait patient maybe let cut Thats patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some consider raising fuel prices as the most effective method to resolve global environmental issues. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with this argument as it has the potential to disrupt world economy and global peace severely.\nTo begin with, transportation, industrial production, and even energy generation sectors run their operations on oil. If the oil prices are increased, it raises the prices of the products and services of these sectors as well. As a result, this affects the general public’s ability to afford basic products and services which is known as inflation. This does not only affects the households but also slows down the overall growth of the economy. For instance, in developing countries, it is often observed that whenever the petrol price jumps up, the economic growth jumps down. \nMoreover, increasing the fuel cost not just disturbs the economy, it can promote instability as well. When people are unable to afford the basic necessities, they get frustrated. This often leads to protest and sometimes these protests are converted into violent demonstrations, which not only results in the loss of public property, but also human lives. For example, in recent days, a protest against oil prices increase in Iran spread across the country which compelled the authorities to contain it by force and restricting mobile and internet services in the affected areas. \nIn conclusion, I think that without any alternative options for fuel, increasing the fuel prices is not the solution to the global environmental issues, but a trigger to affect the world economy and global peace and stability.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter forms bond two people good laugh turn uncomfortable situation pleasant one A fantastic example power laughter would first time I met mother s boyfriend My father died I thirteen since I stubbornly resented new man mother attempted bring life This iron clad resolution ended two sisters sat dinner One mother announced invited new boyfriend meet children My sisters I forced scrub house top bottom order prepare guest mother cooked giant pan lasagna When house clean dinner cooked I dressed grievous occasion My obsessive compulsive mother made change clothes least thirty times deemed presentable enough meet man whose existence I beginning despise At precisely six thirty blue pulled driveway I shot mother steely eyed glare I opened door buffoon thus dreaded dinner began My determined hatred began soften soon I saw means expired tall tan years older mother judging wrinkle strewn skin silver streaked dark hair matching mustache He sort friendly pleasant appearance makes immediately likable My giddy mother sullen children sat eat cheerful stranger My younger sister warmed first She share love snakes lizards things I deem creepy crawly A common interest brought together I knew My older sister adored lively conversation football ensued sister discovered fans consequently formed bond team After winning siblings tried charm liking He attempted talk movies music sports animals even politics nut nothing said could melt icy disposition I determined hate start amount charisma would break persistent stubbornness Eventually gave focused entertaining people like Over dessert jumped standup comedy routine cleverly disguised story recent flight He went ridiculous security checks overly cheerful flight attendants really hate job corny safety videos I tears laughter eyes I remembered I made solemn vow loath I fought hard resume former demeanor stand chance sense humor The triumphant smile slick wink shot across table told Sure enough best friends night ended Eventually I conversed movies music found similar tastes common interests nothing friendship They simply fueled fire The power laughter brought us together like magnet washer Just shortest distance points straight line laughter straight line He mother still together ever since came lives laughter constant companionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist ran rough settings way park The first town came ghost town Then running water ran tambleweeds large snake front He water rough roads ahead came across juice factory No one water know longer would came tp another town That I say features setting affected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using this technology in a classroom would be valuable because if students weren't interested in what they're doing it could tell and could modify the work to make it more enjoyable. It could also help if the student is having troubles and could tell the teacher to help the student if the student is confused or needs help to get a better understanding of what is going on. It could also help if the student is having troubles outside of school because it can tell if you're sad or mad.\n\nThis technology is valuable in the classroom because if the student is loosing interest and getting bored it could notify the teacher and the teacher could make the lesson more interesting. Making the lesson more interesting could help the student in school and maybe make their day better. Making the lesson more interesting could help students get a better understanding of the lesson and help bring grades up.\n\nThe technology could also help if the student doesn't know whats going on and needs one on one help and maybe a tutor. Since this technology can read facial expressions it can read wether or not the student is confused because the student will have a confused look on their face. If this happens the teacher can ask the student if they need help and even if they say no the teacher will know thats a lie because the technology says otherwise.\n\nSince the facial action coding system tells wether you're happy, sad, or mad it can help with problems outside of school. If the student is having troubles outside of school it will affect the behavior and what the student does inside of school. The technology can tell if this is happening and can let the teacher or someone else in the school and they can get help for that student. If that student gets help for those problems that can help with grades and behavior in school and can turn their life around for their well being.\n\nUse of this technology can help improve students grades and test score because of it being able to tell emotions. If the student is confused it will know. If the student is losing interest it will know and the teacher will become aware and can change the lesson or work to make it more enjoyable and interesting for all the students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would it be like to live in a society without the use of cars? Well some cities and even countries have begun to limit car usage such as VAUBAN, Germany where \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars\"(Source 1). There happens to be many advantages to limiting car usage such as: less polution, less stress, and better cities. The positives of limiting car usage are very great and would have a positive effect on any city willing to set up these limitations.\n\nThe first advantage of limiting car usage is the effect it will have on the enviroment. According to Source 1, \"cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\". All this polution and emission not only effects the enviroment but also leads to \"intensifying smog\"(source 2) wich is not only bad for the enviroment but also bad for people. The use of cars may not be the only source of emmision, but it is \"the second largest source of America's emissions\"(source 4). Many cities have already realized this and have begun limitations on car usage. Just think if all cities put a limitation on car usage how much fewer the percent of emissions would be and how great of an effect it would have on the enviroment.\n\nAnother positive of car limitation is its impact on cities, towns, and comunities. Bogota a city in Colombia participating in the limitation of car usage has seen the positive effects on there city. Bogota \"has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" wich means more people biking wich means less people using cars wich means healthier people(source 3). This city also has seen an increase in the building of parks and sports centers, restraunts, shopping districts, and smooth sidewalks. Limitations on cars also leads to an improvement of the town's people, because people such as Carlos Arturo have used the limitations as \"an opportunity to take away stress\"(source 3) or Vauban's Heidran Walter who just feels less tense and \"much happier\"(source 1). Not only will these limitations positively effect cities but positively effect the overall mood of the people too.\n\nThere is a long list of advantages of limiting car usage. The advantages include: a healthier enviroment, improved cities, and happier people. Limitation has already started in many cities arouend the world, because these cities see the many advantages to limiting car usage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builder Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock First stated para graph A thousandfoot drigible moored top building would add stress buildings frame This shows obstacle order enable happen funds would needed The funds leading stregthing modification steel frame Thus needing redo fundamental building blocks operation Second greatest concern safety This brought hand drigibles flammable They consist Helium extremly flammable gas Also drigible mount top Empire State Building back would swaying around around This possibly chance dismounting crashing densly populated area people These reasons obstacles attempting allow drigibles dock top empire state buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whether a university’s role should be to prepare graduates for specific jobs or simply to educate without a particular vocation in mind is a debatable issue. This essay believes that universities fulfil both purposes. The essay will first discuss the function of vocational courses, followed by a discussion of more traditional tertiary education.\n\nSome students have a very specific job in mind when they enrol at university. Medicine, dentistry and accountancy have clear career paths and they allow people to focus on and then undertake a certain profession upon graduation. This suits those who have decided on a career and it avoids them wasting time studying a more general subject like English. For instance, in the United States, you must complete four years of higher education before you can study law and many feel that these four years are a waste of time, that would have been better used focusing on their chosen discipline.\n\nHowever, this is not suitable for everyone and many people have no idea what job they would like to do when they are 18. For these young people, it is better to do a non-vocational course, such as philosophy and simply add to their intellect without a career goal in mind. If they were forced to study a more practical subject, they are more likely to quit or become disillusioned because they don’t see the point of their chosen subject. For example, The Times recently reported that only 50% of law graduates actually want to become lawyers at the end of their studies.\n\nIn conclusion, the function of the college is to both prepare students for the workforce and provide knowledge and which one a person chooses should depend on their preference at the time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All around the world different countries have been noticing some things in life that are just better without cars or atleast less cars. With less cars things are more calming; its also better for everyone, including the enviroment.\n\nTo begin with, things can be way more calm in a life without cars. Many people happen to beleive that cars can change how you feel for example \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way\"(3). Heidrun Walter always felt tense with a car now she feels calm and relaxed. Life with less cars can be so much more relaxing without all the loud annoying noises cars make. In Vauban they are making some changes to how the people live so they can live more easy and calm. \"Vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in a low-car suburban life.\"(6). The way this civilization is all the people live close by and everything is close by so you dont really need a car. If everything is close by everything can be more fluent and calm.\n\nIn addition, it may be more calm without cars but it is also better for you and the enviroment. \"passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emission in europe... and up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\"(5). Wherever you are in the world greenhouse gasses will most likley affect your environment in some unnatrual way and that is not the best thing for you, the people you know, or all the plants and animals. Without cars polluting earth we would be way more healthy and many animals may not be endangered or extinct like they are today.\"how much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid.\"(7). If you drive less its not just better for the environment and your health it can also be better for your wallet. If you drive less you save money on gas that you can use for many other things. Overall driving less turns out to be better for everyone.\n\nIn conclusion, people driving less can make life easier and calmer, it is also better for people, plants, animals, and don't forget your wallet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "there are several arguments about the institute. many nations argue that the main goal of the academy is that what is what to make students better-disciplined citizens. while other public believe that a school is a place where they just give offspring knowledge and give good grades. I agree with this statement because seminary institutions teach good qualities and skills that are important for offspring today. I will give some of my opinions which I will explain in this essay\r\n\r\nfirstly, young generations learn good habits and skills at faculty. the teacher trains each junior to follow the routine and makes the scholar a disciplined and organized person. in addition, the moral values that are taught at hall bring up the heir of the best quality. Maravich department plays a very important role in the upbringing of scion a. for example, r9m during the lesson, many practical lessons are given that are related to the psychology of the graduate to them they are given a task, for example, to choose bad or good what is right or wrong. Today, many schools focus on certain subjects that may help an undergraduate's future career instead of spending too much time on extra subjects for sports or extracurricular activities. \r\n\r\nSecondly , the priority task for the academy is to teach the rules а. of civil behaviour. as a result, it will help to reduce the number of crimes and accidents that occur in the country and maintain discipline among residents. they still have to teach them to follow the rules of aesthetics and, of course, the law of the country and religion. for example, today the most developed countries, this factor is a vulnerable place for them in many cases, many citizens of these countries do not follow the rules and do not maintain discipline. this can be seen in the following situations such as garbage in the streets unclean condition of public transport and in many cases violation of traffic rules and environmental pollution. my opinion is that only an institution can effectively educate these qualities of a nation that offspring from different ages were taught these positive qualities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I repeat that the institute is fully responsible for а ensuring that offspring become qualified members of society. and for many societies, seminary educations is importantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The nasa is woirking on other approaches to studyng venus, for example some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venu's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nA thick atmostphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venu's atmostphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmostpheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nThis is a challenge about Explring Venus. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of destiny and size, and occasionally the closestin distance to. The national Aeronauticsand space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. They want to learn about Venus, and Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story about driverless cars, shows why or why not we will end up having them in the future. It lets us readers and individuals have an opionion for if we feel comftorable about this action taking the world to a whole new level or not. There are very good points and reasons taking up on both sides of this arguement.\n\nA few reasons why this shouldnt happen on the road has better points than what we would think. When we hear about driverless cars, we get excited because that means less for us. But we dont worry about ther consequenses it will cause. These cars still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, suach as navagating through the roadwork accidents.\n\nThey want to make new roads which would cause years of traffic.\n\nSome goods about it when it gets all figured out is that wreck percentages may be minimized and it could take you somewhere youd need to be like the hospital or something important that you arent capable of driving to. Also sensors would be more advanced then what they are in regular cars.\n\nNow, these are some facts and solutions to this arguement. whether driveless cars should be brought to consideration in the future or if they shouldnt.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals believe that watching TV is not good for young adults in every way, while others would argue that TV provides a good impact on teenagers, as they get older.Although, watching TV enhances a child's curiosity as well as knowledge, I believe that watching TV is bad for their health.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, many individuals believe that watching television is beneficial for heir during their growth stages because that offspring get different knowledge and it enhances their curiosity about various aspects of the World. Television contains different genera of shows and programs where children learn new social skills as well as get knowledge about different cultures and traditions from society. For instance, there are various programs such as Science of Stupid on National geography, Minecraft, best from Waste and many more, from these types of shows they develop new skills.\r\n\r\nMany people opine that watching TV is harmful to young children because it is cause various health problems. It is observed that many children suffer from serious health issues regarding their eyes where they have low vision problems or blindness as well as suffer from mental illness due to overconsumption of television. Moreover, it is seen that many adults have anger issues because of their addiction to TV. For example, in India, children watch around 6 to 7 hours of continuous TV which is seriously affected their eyes and health due to this behaviour around 35% of children suffer from low vision problems in their early life stages.Therefore, I believe that watching TV is not good for children.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reiterate my view that TV is on the whole advantageous for children, ,,however the effects of television viewing depend on the program, genre, and the time limit allocated to TV viewing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are benefits to getting a job straight after school, there are also good reasons why it might be beneficial to go to college or university. \n\nThe option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career. \n\nOn the other hand, it is also understandable that many students choose to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college may not be able to compete. \n\nIn conclusion, there are convincing arguments for starting work straight after school, but higher education can also lead to a successful career.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people set their goals to be finish advanced learning at university. Otherwise, some choose to apply for work instead of getting a diploma from college. Pros and cons of early employment will be discussed in this essay briefly. \nStudents that struggle with financial problems tend to stop reaching higher level of academic and enter the workforce after finishing highschool. Working early will help them to be sustainable with their daily purposes like accommodation. Moreover, they can support their family finance and gain more experiences in life, compared to their peers. So that, jumping straight into work after school will help people to avoid some expenses like tuition fee, living costs, which is pretty expensive and instantly make money to afford their lives \nHowever, this seems to be not an ideal choice for numerous people. Recently, it might be difficult to get a job steadily without a degree from university. It is because in today’s society, jobs mostly require technological knowledge or computing skills because of the rapid development. So that, without some specific diplomas, people could only enter labour work like plumber or tailor factory, which has lower wages and maybe worse working environment than intellectual work.\nOverall, joining a job after school is really useful if people want to support their finance problem. Otherwise, it might be a shortage for them from having chances to enter in a better workplace and to have higher salary.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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