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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea on studying Venus despite all the dangers and doubts, in a understandable way.\n\nThe author states facts from The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) and pursuade in a detailed way of showing that humans can go and study Venus.\n\nThe author also states that Venus was \"the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" which means that Venus was similar to Earth and closest to planetary visit.\n\nOn paragraph 5, the author states that we can have blimp like vehicle floating above Venus fray or 30 miles above Venus's landscape, which is 170 degrees fahrenheit.\n\nThe author claim there can be air planes and jets flying over the storms of Venus. The author also claimed that the radiation will not exceed earths level.\n\nAt the end of paragraph 5, the author states \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" The author claims all these facts on paragraph 5 from NASA.\n\nOn parahgraph 7, the author states that NASA is working on approaches to studying Venus with mechanical computers that only use gears and levers.\n\nThe mechanical computers would last longer than modern computers with silicon carbude.\n\nThe mechanical computers were tested in a chamber simulating the chaos od Venus's surface amd lasted three weeks.\n\nThe mechanical computers were used in 1800s and an important role in the 1940s World War II.\n\nAt the end of paragraph 7, the author states \" By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" which means that mechanical computers would be very important to studying Venus.\n\nWith these details and facts the author gave us, shows how the author was supporting his idea on studying Venus.\n\nThe author had facts from NASA and provided details on in a understandable way.\n\nThe author stated \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" this quote shows how his idea of studying Venus with all the chalkenges and doubts, can possibly happen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All humans can express the way they are feeling. The feelings that are shown are one of the following, happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Not all are truthful in the way they express it for others to see. Being a high school student, I see many kids who are happy on the outside but inside they are sad. When a person is sad and covers up their true feelings like a blanket, it is hard to understand how to help them. With this being said, we must do everything we can to truly figure out how students are feeling in the classroom.\n\nBy understanding the way someone is feeling enables us to help them or accomodate them in some way. For example, a man may go through life appearing to be happy but inside he is truly sad. Since he was wearing a metaphorical mask of happiness, no one was able to understand his true feelings. Prof. Thomas Huang, of Beckman Institute of Advanced Science at the Universty of Illinois, has found a way to understand peoples emotion.There may just be a solution that could help change societal problems relating to schools such as school shootings.\n\nRecently our schools have been not such a safe enviroment due to the high activity of school shootings. Why exaclty do school shootings take place? In most cases, it is because that person was not understood emotionally by his or her peers. Now with the Facial Action Coding System we would be able to understand who throughout our school is feeling the angry, and sad emotions. Dr. Huang stated that, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" Since the facial expressions are universal, this statement only proves the accuracy of the FACS. After knowing who these students are allows the councelors in the school to go and talk to them. This breakthrough discovery may be over looked by some but could be beyond valuable and beneficial when it comes to helping students who are hiding their feelings.\n\nThe aspects of enforcing safety comes into play with this Facial Action Coding System. But this could not only minimze school shootings, but can also be beneficial in the way students learn. If a student is angry in class, they are most likely not going to be listening to the teacher. They will be focused on whatever it is they are mad at. If we were able to scan such kids, we could sit down with them and help reduce their anger in attempts to put them back on track to learn. The students who show no emotion make it hard for teachers to understand them. When a teacher makes a student smile, or surpirse them they are doing their job correctly. Now for a student who is unable to convey his true emotions, the teacher may not know if the student understands the material being taught.\n\nBy having the ability to tap into the emotions of a student is a paramount discovery. The benefits outweigh the negatives in every category. The implementation of the Facial Action Coding System within schools is going to be beyond valuable. This can be the turning point in the education system. By being able to understand how students are feeling, it can reduce violence, and ultimately allow for maximized learning.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To begin I feel everyone admire libraries I feel way one point time didnt even books let alone libraries get books A library place peacful calm environment People come hang library collect good books surf internet check new music aslo relax So answer question Do I believe certain materials removed selves library found offensive I believe things shelf come offensive people absolutely removed You nt environment things offending If things seem come offending make indivuals stop coming library This make library loose alot business due lack service The library place consist love peace harmony It place people feel free relieved stress By seeing hearing something comes offensive tend bring confusion library This also make librarians job much harder They work harder satisfy difficulties seem library Something would offend library music carry Certain types music shouldnt found library An example offensive music CAPS music meaning music types different profanity The music degrading women disrespectful manner Also music s making seem cool violent This come offensive many men women Think wants listen music thats makes women feel like worth anything wants listen music s always talking killing fighting gangs etc People whould like hear soothing relaxing music The music makes happy matter mood The library pick music wisely everyone well satisfied In conclusion stated library great place hang relax It never come place things offensive get removed This would keep less confusion people would continue attend library know nice place reallySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This program sounds really fun and you should join. Thats what im talking about in my story to day. I hope after this you consider joining.\n\nOne reason I think you should join is it would be a fun experience. You would be able to sightsee while your on the boat. You would get to play games on the boat to pass by time. Most important of all you get to help people and that should make you happy. Thats why I think it would be a fun experince.\n\nAnother reason I think you should join is that its a lifetime oppotunity. You to go to war and save people save our country and would make me smile. You get go on an adventure of a once lifetime and tell me that wouldn't be fun. You also get to serve our country and that is awesome. That why I think it is a lifetime opputunity.\n\nThe last reason is you get to go on a lot of adventures. You get to go places you never been before. You probably will go to the U.K alot. Same for the alantic ocean you will probablay be on it alot. Thats why I think adventures would be fun.\n\nThats my reason and ideas why I think you should come join us at the program. I hope this made up your mind about coming. Alright I'll see you if you come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present time, the global warming issue is not a new topic but yet never being taken seriously. Many raise the issue that it is human behaviour to be balmed for endangering plant and animal species. There is an argument whether it is too late or not to take action which will be discussed in the following essay.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, it is undeniable that environmental impacts from humans are greatly destroying the ecosystem for over decades. For example, it is can be clearly seen that the sea level keep increasing each passing year as well as rising in global temperature in the same manner. All of these problems are proven to have resulted from the green gas effect which resulted from industrial processes. Furthermore, the damage is considered to be in the severe stage numerous scientists expect that in 100 years we will reach a point of no return for the global warming problem. By that time, the earth we know would lose half of the living species which may include us. Thus, the only thing we can do is to accept our faith. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many argue that it is not too late but cooperation across the globe is a must. For instance, several environmentalists mentioned that the only obstacle is politics. Politicians in various countries put a blame on laypersons that it is because of their consuming behaviours that destroy nature. However, researchers found that the majority of damages are from major industries such as fossil fuels, coal plastics etc. Therefore, with the right approach of sustainable energy sources and products usage, the damage can be diminished and with the help from promoting the preservation of the animated things, this planet is possible to be saved.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, both perspectives emphasize how dangerous our impact can be on the earth. In contrast, I believe that the second statement mentions we still can save the world first by accepting that the problem is enormous and actions need to be taken immediately.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are a vital part of human life. Although they are sometimes overlooked or seem to not be present simply by looking at someone's face, they are used every day. The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" introduces information regarding a technology which is able to detect the most common emotions. While this invention is widely seen as incredible, if not revolutionary, the Facial Action Coding System's presence is not valuable in classrooms.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System does not have much value when it comes to using this technology to read students' emotinal expressions. The technology itself, while advanced in certain ways, is not that much more effective than a teacher's or students's abiltiy to distinguish feelings. The author, in his article presenting the many positives of this technology, addresses the idea that the system is able, from a 3D model it has built, to analyze the msucles of the face, matching their activity to certain basic emotions. The technology's ability to recognize emotions based on facial features and human behavior is something that humans have been doing automatically for centuries. The specific muscle structure is not necessary to determining one's feelings, as their use show noticeable changes on the face and are visible to the naked eye. Although this might be quicker, the technology would not have much value for classroom situations, as teachers could easily, while paying more attention to their students, notice the same details, identify changes in emotion, and alter their ways of teaching accordingly. Overall, the human's ability to identify basic emotional expressions would render this technology rather unvaluable in classrooms.\n\nSimilarly, the purely scientific origin of the Facial Action Coding System decreases the value this technological innovation would have for students in a classroom. While it might be successful in identifying the emotions of students, the Facial Action Coding System relies purely on the muscle behavior and structure, as mentioned in the article, meaning that no other factors would be taken into consideration. Many factors other than emotion, such as fatigue, can alter a student's appearance or behavior. The coding system would most likely, as a result of these underlying factors, as well as the very limited amount of emotions it can perceive, make the technolgy unvaluable when comes times to read student's emotional expressions. The generalization of emotions detected would produce false or unaccurate results, rendering the program useless in classrooms. The Facial Action Coding System, due to its computerized nature and lack of human perception, would not be a valuable addition to classrooms.\n\nThe lack of privacy this new technology brings makes the invention unvaluable. While some may think this to be a good way to improve student's lives throughout the school day, this facial recognition would raise many questions and controversy regarding student privacy. As the author states in the article, the Facial Action Coding System could be implemented in computers with the purpose of regulating ads and personalizing them to someone's preferences, likes, and dislikes. This is not only unnecessary, but would mean having a constant stream of visual information regarding students being sorted and analyzed. If this were implemented in classrooms, a number of parents and students alike would find this to be an intrusion of privacy, resulting in complaints, debates and overall unnecessary problems added to the education system. While this innovation might be somewhat useful or bring more attention to student's feelings, the excessive problems and controversy it would create makes the student emotional expression detector technology unvaluable and not a good addition to school.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is not valuable in reading the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. The technology, although it could properly analyze the muscles and facial structure of students in classrooms, could easily be matched by a teacher, does not take in all possible factors, and would conjure up many questions regarding privacy in schools. While this program would have little to no value in classes, it could provide help to investigative work. Emotions are extremely versatile and human expressions, although they share some similarities, widely vary based off of each person and circumstance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When it comes to having a computer program to help the teachers know what is going on with the class it should be used. If the program can tell how every kid is doing during class they should be using it. This technology can help with keeping the kids concentrated and help them learn better. If they can tell how the kids feel about a certain subject it can help teachers know that they should stop teaching it and teach another or that they like that subject. IT could also tell the teacher if the kid is struggling with the homework it can tell the teacher to help the kid out. Especially for the little kids who are to scared to ask questions or even middle or high schooler.\n\nAnother thing the Facial Action Coding System could really help with an issue like suicide. If these programs are telling us that there sad we can ask them if there's anything wrong and if they need to talk to anyone. These outputs of how they feel can help the world especially if it can help catch suicides from happening. These programs could also help teach how a certain test or classes make them feel.\n\nMy only problems is time. If the programs take an hour or more plus time you can't really act on the problem imediatly. Also the way that people feel changes so fast that if you do ask how they feel they could be just fine by then. Also another problem i could see is can it take one face or a whole class room of faces. If it can take a whole classroom and spit out how each individual felt at that exact moment then we should us them in classes.\n\nIf they can not do these things they should be worked on till they can do those two things. These facial action coding system should be improved so that it can fo those two things and be put in all schools as soon as possible. This device can change teaching for good and also save lives in the process.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whether all of things taught by teachers at school is valuable or not is a controversial issue. In my opinion, most of knowledge which students acquire in their academic career is beneficial to them. \r\n\r\nThe argument that many knowledge taught by teachers are useless is plausible. There is no denying that some courses have little practical value. For example, elementary politics and history are two compulsory courses during learning at school, but some students think these knowledge are so boring that they do not focus on them. Furthermore , these students are less likely to know how to apply them. Another evidence to support the argument is that students must learn some basic lessons such as math , foreign language and computer technology. Although these things are important for students' career in the future, students do not need to learn them deeply and systematically. In other words , it is enough for children to attain nearly intermediate level in terms of general knowledge. To be specific, there is no need that most of students learn calcus, liner algebra in the university.\r\n\r\nHowever, some people think that all kinds of things learning at school are valuable. This statement is right to some extent. Firstly, the school is a place where people get necessary knowledge qualified for their jobs. If a person want to be a entrepreneur , he need to take a MBA program or something relevant to management and corporate finance. Secondly, students can be moral and distinguish right from wrong through some relevant compulsory courses. It is obvious that this statement exaggerate the fact. Not anything learned at school can students benefit from. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, people can learn ethics and necessary skills for work when they are students. However, some courses are lack of practice and less necessary.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College should be not be abolished and the government should not change to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. The Electoral College requires the presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal, it produces a clear winner and avoids run-off elections, and the Electoral College allows people in swing states to be more thoughtful and choose wisely because the popular vote could be in their hands.\n\nIn paragraph nineteen of the article\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , it states, \"The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region (South, Northeast, etc.) has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" This means that the favorite candidate of a particular region has no reason to campaign too much in those states because that candidate doesn't gain many more votes. Any candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be successful because the people of the other region feel that their interests will be overlooked by the president.\n\nThe Electoral College decreases the amount of pressure of a run-off election. In paragraph twenty-two of the article\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President, it states, \"The Electoral College avoids the problemm of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast.\" So if both presidential candidates receive an equal percent of of popular votes, the Electoral College's number of votes could be the \"game changer.\" The number of votes in the Electoral College produces a clear winner. If there wasn't an Electoral College, then there would have to be a recount of votes and one vote could change the entire election. This could cause chaos in swing states because of the one vote of someone that might not even care who wins the election.\n\nBased on many elections, the Electoral College creates more thoughtful voters in swing states. Those people know that the power of turning an election around is in their hands, so they must use that knowledge wisely, not recklessly. People in non-swing states will vote on a candidate that their peers like or that they heard is \"the best\" even though it may actually be a choice reconsidered two years into the winning candidates presidency. In paragraph twenty of the article\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , it states, \"Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign, to really listen to the competeing candidates, knowing that they are going to decide the election.\" The most careful voters should be the ones to decide because they are the ones receiving the most attention by candidates trying to persuade them to vote for them.\n\nOverall, the Electoral College should not be abolished and the government should not change to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. The Electoral College doesn't allow a presidential candidate to have a single regional appeal, it produces a clear and fair winner and avoids run-off elections, and the Electoral College creates more thoughtful and careful voters, because when you actually think choices through in life, it could make a tremendous impact on yourself everyone around you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people around the globe have started to have keen on knowing more about the history of the place that they currently live in. This essay will discuss some reasons why this situation might be happening, and how residents might achieve their goals.\r\n\r\nThe history of some places is getting the attention of more and more people. It could be because of several reasons. Firstly, it can be argued that many local organisations have posted on social media photos related to interesting sites as they were part of crucial milestones. Take the civil district of Santiago as an example, each year lots of pictures of the Chilean coup d’état have been published on Instagram accounts, which are followed by younger users. This younger population, who did not live in those times saw their houses in the photos and might have gotten interested in knowing more about the role of their neighbourhood in those times. Secondly, some residents have affirmed that they have experimented with paranormal activities and, therefore, they want to confirm their assumptions by researching more about who were the ex-owners of their homes.\r\n\r\nNowadays, there are fruitful tools to learn more about the past, including houses and buildings. One manner to do it is through going to borrow some books from local libraries, which might have fundamental information. Moreover, many libraries might have specialised staff whose responsibility is to help the audience to respond to questions in relation to the history of their locations. Finally, the Internet is considered a quick and efficient way to find out information on any topic. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, interest in finding out about various sites is increasing. This essay demonstrated that there are different reasons to understand why this is happening, and how people can attain it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar charts show some different causes of air pollution levels in 4 different countries during the yer of 2021.\nFirst of all, the most striking information is that China appears to be the main country in which pollution is highly present, in the 3 different areas, during the given period. In fact, their levels of pollution ranged between 60 to 80 PPM, and none of the other countries even reached 60 PPM in terms of pollution during 2021.\nIn 2021, China displayed the highest level of pollution related to electricity generation compared to the other countries. In fact, it was double of America's, as it meant 60 PPM in China. However, although China showed again the highest level of transport pollution with 70 PPM, America was not very far from that figure as it was just under 60 PPM, while Japan was half, and Australia did not even reach 20 PPM.\nFinally, industry pollution in China was even bigger than the other areas, as it reached the highest point with 80 PPM. However, even though Japan was largely behind America and China in terms of electricity and transport pollution, it was the second country of indutry pollution, but it was roughly half of China's. America was under that with just under 30 PPM, and Australia displayed even less than that slightly under 20 PPM.\nTo conclude, China is clearly the country that demonstrated the highest levels of pollution in each given areas, even though America was close to their level of transport pollution at that time. However, despite Japan displayed the second most important level of industry pollution, it remained fairly far from China's, as it was also the case for America and Asutralia.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives mood created author cuban came american without knowing language money made It nt easy though Narciso grateful She also tells alot people came gone parents open arms anyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From knowledge I gained reading excerpt The Mooring Mast I lerned many obstacles making place dirigibles dock The important reason safety Since dirigibles used hydrogen instead helium dirigibles highly flammable If dirigibles ever catch fire New York many lives could danger Another obstacle climate The empire State buildings top going build Mooring Mast bad climate nerly impossible dock dirigible These many obstacles architects face designing mooring mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There several features setting held affect cyclist story For one cyclist riding hot desert This condition normally prevents one obtaining water Seeing water necessity cyclist lack due desert created conflict dehydration Additionally town abandoned triggered spark doubt cyclists mind The cyclist ride brain doubt body desperate hope By time heshe reaches old factory cyclist extremely dehydrated Now head screaming annoyance body screaming lack water This abandoned juice factory almost completely wiped cyclist hope A man little nothing without hope Therefore abandoned factory negative affect Now reason continues hisher desperation survival instinct us In conclusion desert removed water abandoned homes factory removed hope three created negative affect The cyclist lucky survivedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", they talk about the existence of cars that drive on their own. They also include their functions and how they work. The debate that this situation causes is whether or not should these driverless cars should continue to be developed. Driverless cars should not continue to be developed because they can be expensive to make and repair, and new laws will need to be created for safety matters.\n\nDriverless cars can come with a high cost. Not only will it be a big price to pay to make these cars, imagine the cost of getting it repaired if it gets broken. \"Google's modified....uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever..\" These cars include a lot of technology and different sensors, the repair of a sensor can cost someone a lot of money. Also, not only will people be needing a smart car, but the country will also need to be prepared with smart roads. The smart roads will help the electric cars by sending radio signals to it. \"These smart-road systems worked.....but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" The roads can be another cost, this time not only for the people, but for the country. Upgrading the roads just for these cars will just be too much. The driverless cars will do nothing but bring us mroe into debt.\n\nElectric cars can be a safety issue to the community and the drivers themselves. Different states already have all their driving rules set out to keep everyone safe. With these new driverless cars new laws will be needed. \"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault?\" That will be another responsibility that is in the hands of someone. We will need laws for who's to be held responsible, for what actions need to be taken when something goes wrong, and others to keep pedestrians from getting hurt as well. Although the electric cars alert drivers when to take control, you never know when it could fail to inform you and it could be too late. Some states don't even allow the testing of self driven cars.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should be discontinued. Their developement and repair can be costy to people. They aren't proven to be 100% safe to either the drivers or pedestrians nearby. You never know when a sensor can be damaged and you will have to take action right away. Also, there will need to be new laws created to continue to protect the drivers and others who could get hurt. We should stick to our original vehicles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They say Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit. Its a crucial consideration given the long time frames of spave travel. The value of returnung to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive.\n\nI think if we can study Venus up close we'll get a better understanding of the planet, like what materials it has and how the weather conditions are. NASA has a compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. A blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground.\n\nTo meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There have been many studies done to find a new home for humanity. One of the planets that scientist have been looking at as a new home is Venus. Altought there are many dangers- such as the temperature, atmophere, and natural distaters- Venus has many good qualities and is very similar to Earth.\n\nVenus is similar to Earth by its air pressure being similar to the Earth's sea level pressure, being close to the sun having pleanty of solar power, and once believed to have oceans and support life.\n\nVenus is often called the Earths sister, or twin. Venus has a realitively similar size to Earth and is actually the closest in distance to Earth. Scientist believe, altought not able to land on Venus, that Venus has a similar surface to Earth as well. Scientist say that Venus has a rocky surface and, as the article says, \"... features such as valleys, mountains, and creaters\" (paragraph 4). With this, it is also believed that Venus once had oceans. If Venus had oceans, there is a chance that Venus can support life on its surface.\n\nNot only is there a posibility that Venus might have had water, the air pressure is very similar to the sea levels on Earth. In Paragraph 5, the article says \"... the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth\". This means that those who lived on Venus would not be crushed by the weight of the air pressure. On other planet the air pressure is heavy enough to crush a person and is not suitable to live on.\n\nAnother reason that Venus would be suitable for humaity is because it is the second planet in the solar system and is exposded to a lot of sun light. As many people know, there is a big need for energy on Earth. As a result of this, the Earth is running out of fossial fuel and that is one of the reasons the Earth is dying. If humaity lived on Venus there would be a big source of solar energy, which is renewable energy. But like everything, there is a down side to living so close to the sun.\n\nVenus is the hottest planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is the closest planet to the sun. Venus could melt many of the metals that we use in our everyday lifes. Because Venus is the hottest planet, the temperature can reach an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Not only can the surface temperature be high, but there is 97% level of carbon dioxide in Venus' atmophere. Scientist have proven that humans would only withstand three weeks on Venus because of these conditions.\n\nEven though there are many things stopping us from living on Venus now, there are still many things that we do not know about the Earth's twin. There is still so much more to explore on Venus. But for now we know that the air pressureis similar to Earths sea level pressure, it is close to the sun having pleanty of solar power, and is once believed to have oceans and support life. And one day Venus might need to become our new home. But until then, the human race will stay on Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reasons you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because you see unique places, travel and lots there are lots of oppertunities. You can have lots of fun in this program. It almost becomes like its not a job because there are so many things you can enjoy.\n\nIn this program you get to see so many unique and beautiful places. I got to see the Acropolis in Greece which was very special. I also got to see a couple more which are, Panama Canal in china, and a excavated castle in Crete. I think anybody would want to see those places. As you see these you will never forget and make great memories like I did.\n\nAlso in this program you get to travel to so many marvoules places. I got to go across the Atlantic Ocean 16 times! Thats crazy! I also went across the Pacific Ocean twice. I also got to go to some different countrys. Right before I turned Eight teen I went to Greece. I also got to see Europe and China. Guess what, I went to even more places! I got to go to Venice, Italy and Crete to. This is a great program for you if you like traveling.\n\nFinally there are so many oppertunities in the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to see so many places, and see things so many things, and do things you never thought you would as a little kid. It could also change how you act and show respect. After you go through this progam you will be a totally different person. In a good way. It can show you how to be respectful, and whatever else you need.\n\nIn conclusion chose the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to see things you never thought of seeing. You also get to travel all over the world. Don't forget all the oppertunities this program can offer. Come to this program if you want to help our world. Chose Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certain individuals declare that granting the economic assistance and caring of the old population to be catered by the state, while others object this notion, saying that it is the responsibility of the person to preserve the money for their retirement during the youth. My personal perspective is although it is a burden, the authority should fund the elderly crowd because the state has an obligation to do so.\nTo begin with, arranging the financial assistance and looking after the whole elderly community is an extremely difficult task for the government. This is because, the ruling authorities have a plethora of other domains such as health, education to develop, and deploying a large sum for funding the elderly can compromise other sectors. For an instance, recently, Sri Lanka restricted the large annual budget, which was devoted to granting living allowances the elderly, and diverted this budget to the sector of education to be more benefited and productive. However, I disagree with this notion because disregarding the older population is ethically incorrect.\nOn the other hand, implementing strategies to comfort the life of old people is an obligation of the government. In fact, these people productively contributed to the nation during their youth through involving the workforce, and neglecting them in their old age is morally unacceptable. Hence, the country should facilitate their life during the old age. For an example, recently in India, people have protested against the ruling party and compelled to give a pension to all retired individuals because they have served and contributed to the country during their youth. Therefore, I agree with this school of thoughts because the state is responsible for the every category of people in the community.\nIn conclusion, national policies should be established to care and fund the elderly population. This is because, the nation has a strong accountability to safeguard these people, who work for the country, despite the fact that devoting a large budget for the elderly is a great hardship for the ruling party.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that this new Facial Action Coding System technology could be very good to read the expressions on students in schools. I think this becuase it could help councilors tell if someone is sad or depressed. It could help show teachers if the class if happy with how they are teaching the class or learning the material. And finaly it could show the administrators and Lunch crew of the school if the students are disgusted by the food or if they like it.\n\nThis could help the schools councilors tell if a student is depressed or sad.In the text the author mentions how this new technology will be able to give a percentage of emotions a person is feeeling. So if a councilor looked at a kid who was 83 percent depressed then they would know that something is wrong and could talk to them and thier parents to make sure everything is alright with the kid and prevent anything bad from happening.\n\nThis new tecnology could also help teachers tell if their class is happy with the way they are teacher the class. Ussually if a class is happy with the way the teacher is teaching then they will learn more in that class. So if they use this and half or more of the class is over 60% happy then they know that they are doing a good job teaching and making sure people learn. But if half or more of the class was under 69% happy the teacher could change the way they teach to make the students more happy.\n\nFinally this new technology could be used in the schools cafeteria by the lunch staff and administrators. Most kids eat lunhc at school rather than buying and bringing thier own lunch. So the school could be able to tell if the students liked the lunches they served or are disgusted by the lunches they serve. And if they are disgusted by it then the school can try to put together a new school lunch menu.\n\nIn conclusion I think that this new Facial Action Coding System would be a very good thing to have in schools. They could help make the students at a school more happy with the school and the way it runs which would also make students learn better and actaully want to come to school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is a very contriversial topic. Some people think it is an acient alien structure. Others think it is just a mesa or a butte or some other type of landform. Here are some of the reasons why we know it is just a natural landform and not an acient alien ruin.\n\nThe first reason is the most recent picture taken by NASA. You can clearly see in the picture that it is just a landform, not a face. All of us at NASA admit that there was a little bit inside of us that hoped and believed that it was a face. An ancient alien landform. There were even some who still believed it was a face from the first pictures taken by the Mars Global surveyor in 1998. But, with the latest pictures being at the maximum resolution possible, everyone now knows that it is just a mesa, a butte, or some other type of natural landform, and not a face.\n\nThe second reason is we couldn't find anything else that looked even remotely close to an acient alien artifact in our most recent pictures from MGS. As a rule of thumb, you can desern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So if there were anything else on Mars that could've been from aliens, we would've been able to see it. And we didn't see anything else. Also, we haven't found anything else that could hint at an acient alien life form in the past 15 years since the last pictures have been taken. Even with much better cameras, and better techonolgy in general.\n\nThe third and final reason is that the mesa was found around the Cydonia area of Mars. Mesas are very common around this area. Maybe if we found the landform in an area were mesas and mountains weren't as common, we would've been a little more skeptical about it. But everything surrounding our findings points to the fact that it is just a mesa.\n\nThese are just some of the reason why we know that the \"Face on Mars\" is just a mesa of another type of landform. And to conspiracy theorists who think we are trying to hide something: If it were an ancient landform, we would tell the public as soon as we found that out. Imagine the amount of money we would be making. In conlusion, I hope that I have conviced you of the truth today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process begun a long time ago due to the lack of educated and literate citizens in the United States, whom the government did not believe were eligible to vote for any president under any circumstances. Now that our literacy rate in the United states is now more than 80-90% (or so I believe), I don't really think that the Electoral College is useful anymore.\n\nThe Electoral College is a process describing 538 electors voted for by the state who will vote for the new president every four years. A majority vote of 270, one more than half, is required to elect the new president. The number of electors for each state equals the number of members in it's Congressional delegation; meaning one for each member in the House of Representatives that represents your state, and two for your Senators. However, I think that a popular vote, or having the citizens themselves vote for the president, may be more useful.\n\nThere is an off chance that electors may vote for a candidate that their citizens did not want to choose, or the chance that two slates of electors may be sent to Congress, etc. Another prospect is the idea of a tie in the electoral vote, which would mean that there would be 269 votes for both Presidential candidates. In the event of this happening, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, in which the state delegations would choose the president. This may be fatal, however, because states like Wyoming, which only have the population of 500,000, will have as much to say about the fate of the United States as a state like California, home to 35 million people.\n\nA lot of people usually are in favor of the Electoral College due to certainty of outcome and swing states. Swing, or toss-up states are the states that are undecided until the very end, and could very well change the entire tide of the Election. \"Voters in toss-up states,\" reads one argument, \"are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-- to really listen to the competing candidates-- knowing that they are going to decide the election.\" But should we really leave such a large and important decision up to such few people? A mere 538? And even less for toss-up states?\n\nOverall, I think that the Electoral College is outdated due to it's lack of need anymore, does not fit the democratic and equal methods of the United States (for the most part), and leaves too large of a decision to too small of a group. Popular voting may just be the solution to this problem, and although popular voting may not be perfect either, it might help us figure out who we really need for our president, rather than leaving it to just a small group.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be in out near future. I personally think that driverless cars will be a neat addition to the worlds automobiles, but may also be bad due to of safety issues.\n\nFully automated acrs may be a cool idea depending on hopw manufactures persue these ideas. Immagine needing to go on a long trip and not having to stay awake for the whole drive, then immedately crashing when you get to your destination. immagine being able to sleep while you travel the world in the comfort of your own car. Imagine not having to focus on the rad at all and be able to take part in conversations and games while driving on the road. this could be our future, but may not be a a very safe one.\n\nIn the story it says,\"Presently, Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in controll at all times.\" I agree with this statement because what would happen if an automated car \"looses connection\"or \"dies while on the road\" resulting in a collision causting people their lives? who would be at fault? You? the Manufacturer? things like this have to be discused before you can even think about seeing a fully automated car in any future. Regulations need to be set so we can pass laws that allow SAFE automated cars in all of the world.\n\nAutomated cars will be a neat idea to bring to life, but it might be a little bit further into the future than you might think, but it may be the next big step in public transportaton. All we need to do is to figure out what to do if something happens while on the road.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This would hard risk begin cycalist taking desert As know desert get boiling hot bike ride could get enjoyable quickly Also thing see miles rode sand empty factory moral easily dray quickly Its overall way setting give lostSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper editor More people using computers everyone thinks good idea Those support advances technology believe computers positive effect people Other experts disagree I think computers positive effect people let learn anything world let talk online people teach hand eye coordination I think computers helpful Dont love oppritunity research anything part world want learn I m sure everyone computer With computers use search engines like google yahoo ask many I know computers help research time I projects write papers school The internet great reliable cango researching topic shcool even looking answer simple question My next reason computers let talk people online Things like facebook email myspace webcaming let communicate people anywhere world For example I aunt lives christmas family used cousins webcam see talk couldnt special holiday Also things like facebook myspace let put pictures chat friends family world My last reason I think computers positve effect people playing computer good leisure time activity There kinds fun games play even let compete people around world For example internet checkers game lets compete someone else There many websites let pick games want play huge selection Its obvious computers positive effect people research talking friends family leisure activities I hope agreeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article talk about Driver cars, and can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars? Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation like cars form a public-transport taxi system. He believes such car would change the world. In 2009 has specific conditions. There cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. I think so than use cars in the actually is very important, can you move in other places or country with a car, but has a probability of to have an accident in the way.\n\nIn paragraph 3 talk over General Motors created a concept car thah could run on a special test track. Is created in 1950 with an electrical cable and Engineers at Berkeley. During the years Google's modified Toyata and uses position-estimating sensors, a video camera, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver and many things more. In paragraph 5 talk about sensors are nothing new, In the 1980s, automarkers used speed sensors for crearion brakes. In alll information than have the cars during 10 years the sensors are advanced, and have power individual engine.\n\nSebastian Thrun, founder of the Google car project, believes that the technology before 2000 and cost two hundred million dollars. He buys at Radio Shack. In the paragraph 7 talk abuot than in 2013, the BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistan.\" In this year the changes are many like the Google announced new laws or like driver, The physical aspects of automation are really a challenge for Dr Werner Huber of the BMW project manager. Automarkers are continuing their work and has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent like Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan they have a project in 2020 in to have new shapes in the cars, or to give functions for the community during the years, because is very importan to know over many things in the actually and have a good grow in the destination every day with people than make a good job in the community.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challegenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despiote the danger it present. Even though the author knows the condition of Beus he suggest it anyway because tyhe author is drieven with curiosityThe author claim that Venus could once be a just like Earth today. The author also claim that Venus is Earth's \"twin\" making it closest to visit.\n\nThe author claim that scientists are so fascinated by Venus becuase it was it well have been the most Earth-like plant in our system. The author says that long ago Venus could've been cover with oceans and might have even support various forms of life. The author suggest that there are familiar feature on Venus to Earth right now such as: rocky surface, valleys, mountains, and crator. However, the author also stated that Venus conditions are far more extreme than anything humans can encounter on Earth.\n\nThe author also claim that Venus would be a good place to vist because of how close Venus is to Earth. Venus is call Earth \"twin\" along with Mars because of how close they are to each other. The author claim that this would be a good option for a planetary visit, given the crucial consideratin of the long time frames of space travel. Even though the average temperatures is to extreme, NASA are working to a solutuion to study Venus by humans.\n\nIn conclusion, the author suggest to visit Venus because Venus could very well have been the most Earth-like planet and because of how close Venus is to Earth. The author is driven with curiosity to gain an insight on Venus. The author consider the possiblelity of visiting Venus both safe and productive. Visting beyond should not be limited by dangers and doughts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although traveling outside of the Earth seems very cool, there are many risks that have to be taken into consideration when choosing what adventure may want to be taken next. In this paper, being shared will be opinions on how the author supported his claim, some of the ways the author backed up or tore down his claim, and finally we will share some of his claims. With Venus being a completely new terrian to be looked at, it is diffivult to show how the planet would react to tests that NASA would like to try with sending a space craft onto the surface of Venus.\n\nIn this first paragraph, the authors claims are going to be shared with the readers. The author stated some very interseting things when it came to finding new ways to travel up to Venus. The authors views on traveling to Venus were more one sided towards going and risking it to try and make a new ground breaking discovery. The way the author was describing some of the methods of trasnportation that could be possible to the austronauts that could potentially be travleing up there, was very sided towards him wanting to go through with anything that NASA wanted to try. This quote from paragraph 8 states, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imadination and innovation.\" This quote from his article is that we should not limit what we do, but oh do not forget that the risks are kinda high and your sruvival rates might not be the best. This is an opinion that the author is feeding to us that risking peoples lives to go to Venus, in test missions, is more important than actually trying to find a solution that will work one hundred percent of the time.\n\nIn this next paragraph, being discussed will be some of the ways the author either stood up for or tore down his own claims. In paragraph 7, the author states, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus, For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such ocnditions.\" This quote is stating a back up to his claim that he is making. With NASA working on traveling to Venus in the near future, the technology could also be used by researchers who are trying to allow people to go to Mars and investigate what is going on there. The technology they are talking about in this article might be about Venus, but it is still and option to use it for other projects as well.\n\nHowever, there are still a few ways that the author tore down his own claims that he was making about the mission its self. In paragrpaph number 6, the author states, \"However, peering at venus from a ship that is orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" This quote is showing that the author had thrown out one of his ideas but then he starts tearing it down because he is stating that it will not give the information that is neccessary for this trip. With the author tearing down one of his own ideas about how to get up to Venus and get information on it, it is a little harder to try and trust some of the options that he is putting out.\n\nThe author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" made many claims about how NASA could get space ships and different things onto Venus to show whats going on there. In this paper, it was stated that the authors views on traveling to Venus were more one sided towards going and risking it to try and make a new ground breaking discovery. The author was able to give pros and cons to all of the options that were as options for equipment that could be used to get the information that is wanted from Venus. In conclusion, the author did a great job on proving his points and views on ways to get to Venus, and how we can do it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive that driverless cars are a good idea. Personaly, I don't trust people on the roads. People get distracted easily, can have slow reaction times, and sometimes just are not safe. Driverless cars can fix all these problems easily.\n\nOne issue is that people easily get distracted. Smart cars, on the otherhand, are complety built for the purpose of diving and analizing the roads. The feature most appealing to me and that fixes this issue is found here in the passage, \" Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\".\n\nThe second issue with drivers in cars are the drivers reaction times being to slow. Some people just do not have the reactions to be able to use the breaks fast enough to avoid accidents. These cars do it instantly, as stated in the passage, \" The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply breaks on individual wheels and reduce power from ethe engine, allowing far bettter response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\".\n\nFinaly, sometimes people just are not safe. Doing anything from texting while driving or taking erratic turns without signal can be extreamly dangerous to themselfs or anyone around them. These cars can prevent that by even forcing people to watch the road constantly or alerting us when danger is ahead. \" GM has developed driver's seats to vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\". This is only one of many safty enhancing developments to smart cars and the protection of the \"driver\".\n\nIn conclution, smart cars are a great idea. With these cars people will be safer than ever. No more driver error, distraction, slow reactions, or danger to themselfs or to others around thm.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Given all the facts about driverless cars, I still think driverless cars should not be a future technology. They are too costly, mostly require the driver to maintain contact with the wheel and in the case of an accident, who would be the cause of it?\n\n\"Driverless cars\" is a broad term. Mostly because all the current driverless cars require the driver to maintain contact with the steering wheel and stay alert at all times. Not only that but the cars can only \"handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph,\" which is not that fast. This is why the term :Driverless Cars\" should be renamed to \"Assisted Driving Cars.\"\n\nAnother thing to consider is the cost of all this. One fact is that \"in the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that would run on a special test track.\" Even though the roads worked and did what they were supposed to, having to upgrade every road to have that feature was unquestionably exspensive. So that never happened and everyone decided it was time to move away from the roads and go into the cars themselves, via making them driverless.\n\nLast but not least is the accidents. Accidents happen every now and then, but even though the cars are banned in most states and they have only driven \"more than half a million miles without a crash,\" a crash would most likely happen if the cars were sold commercially. But in the case of an accident, who would take the blame? The Driver or the Manufacturer? I believe it would be the driverless car fault.\n\nIn conclusion, I wouldn't want cars to be on the road driverless, because the money,time and resources needed to do that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology to read a emotional expression is not valuable .Because computer are wrong everyday they are the smarts thing on earth but they still get stuff wrong once in a while . They don't know the true feeling of happy and sad . They just computers .\n\nThere millions of reason why it not valuable well for one a person could be looking happy in the picture but be reallly sad emotional . I see it everyday at in the world .Like for explain when someone die and they go to a furel you got to look cool or happy ,but on the inside your heart broken and never be the same . And you take a picture on a computer and it would say you are happen but you really not because computer don't know emontional they just know knowledge .\n\nI mean don't get me wrong it a good tool it see people emotional . But that why we got eyes for , to look and see things .We dont need computer to see people emotional we can tell by the way a person talk . If that person sound like he or she got a additon (come back) that mean that person is in a bad mood and don't want to talk at that time . A computer wouldn't even know he or she in a good mood or not by the way they talk. Another good reason why it's not valuable.\n\nDoes computer even have emotional?\n\nI don't think so but they can't tell people emotinal . Compuer don't know what true happence or sadness mean they just tell us whatever they programer put inside them. True happness is something you don't feel its just there . Sadness is somthing thats doesn't feel good something that hurts on the inside.\n\nSo yea computer really can't read people expressions just from the face . If it so great im looking in the computer now can you tell me my expression they probably say im sad but im not m just worry . to pass his test so yea computer are not valuable to expression for people emotionalSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A day I patient one day I really happy birthday coming I couldnt wait see I getting I though week begging mom tell I getting The days past fell like got even longer longer I tried tried day day try take peak I getting I always got caught So finally mom told stop thinking patient would name faster So I waited seemed like takeing forever The next day I woke brother came jumped said ahah I know getting dont And I jumped said How come know I dont Thats bad tell please And said then I got walked room went mom said I give up looked said patient go faster four days left then I walked away Then days started go faster birthday came I happy finally see I getting And day I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter great joy life If people never laughed life would dull boring favorite experiences involve good time One best experiences laughter going camping friends last I never forget experience last During middle beautiful sunny calls getting bunch guys go camping I come Immediately I parents let go exception turning job application I left camping After turning application I got car picked makings peanut butter jelly sandwiches left adventure After I got destination driving miles river I nt see anyone two huge tents friends supposed Looking camp site attacked bears trash laying around camp fire still going started searching friends I found passed one tents tried wake dead asleep knowing sat shade large trees surrounding us good degrees outside After five minuets herd splash went investigate We walked towards river found friends jumping ft rock river went join fun After jumping times headed back camp awake huddled around camp fire returned camp told jokes night All us really bonded three day camping trip joking boys I would nt get rid memory s anything After camping returned home worked lot rest ever since really good friendships camping buddiesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sharing data is a dilemma in some domains such as business, scientific research and academy. One group argues that data sharing is beneficial while others points out its harms. This article will inspect both sides of the argument.\r\n\r\nPeople thinking information share is a way better than confining sees sharing as an investment to the field. By increasing the amount of data in the area of work, they will foster the devolepment and get benefit in return. For example, if a scientist makes the data used in a research public, it will grab attention of other scientists making them work on that topic. Furthermore, it expensive to collect data for the ones working on it. As there is no cost of data share, it is much more efficient to helping others than letting everyone to collect its own data. \r\n\r\n\tAlthough benefits of letting othere to use the collected information is so appearant, some people pay attention to potential harms of it. Firstly, the data might be confidential and private. For example, gender preferences of the people attended to an experiment might be used against them if revealed. In addition to that, sharing the data might create economic threat to the instutition that collected it. As companies invest money to this data in order to make profit, not keeping it to themselves makes their position worse in the competation.\r\n\r\n\t\r\n\r\n\tBoth views of the arguments has pros and cons but every case should be inspected independently. In most of the cases, data is neither confidential nor high valued. However, potential harm that unconfining a data might be so devastating where benefits are much limited in some cases.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar and line graphs illustrate temperature and rainfall average rates per month in a city of Kolkata. The precipitation level is measured by milimeters, whereas temperature is introduced in Celsious.\nOverall, precipitation high level can bee seen in July, while the lowest level is in December. The temperature reach a peak in May, then gradually drops it's lowest level in January.\nThe starting point for the precipitation measurement is January where average level is over 50 mm, after which the line graph is steadily growing and showing 100 mm in May. After May graph climbs sharply and peak at over 300 mm in July, after which it's gradually declines in the next two months. The precipitation level is dramatically falls in October such as 150 mm and afterwards in December it's become nearly 1mm.\nThe temperature graph fluctuates. The grap is starting in January (20 C) it's showing a growth and reach it's peak at above 30 degree in May. After it temperature gradually go down, remaining unchangable during two months in August and September (well above 25 C) and after it slightly dropping.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Information of day-to-day events flow in people's life thanks to the media. It is argued that news are not as important as some try to tell, due to the dwindle link between personal situation and the happening. Despite the existance of futile stories, the majority of them are connected to mankind present and future, providing details that could have the potential of changing lives or prevent some dreadful issues. In my opinion, human-beings knowledge is power, hence any news need to be comprehended.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, stories broadcasted on medias are plentiful and releated to various categories. It depends on people to distinguish which are fundamental for their conditions and the ones sold only for the mere reasons of obtaining followers. For instance, gossip can be a pleasuring reading, useful to disconnect from serious matters. However, it is not comperable to the latest update about finance, politic, current history and environment. Announcements regarding these topics can have an enormous impact on mankind's life, such as losing capital invested on a market that faces a negative trend or a different political faction elected which plans of sustaining small buisness owner at the expenses of important firms.\r\n\r\nAnother reason why it is a good habit to learn about news is for personal enlightment. Although some events are not strictly related to some human-being condition, perhaps due to the geographical situation of the story, is a valuable practice to acknowledge the happening. Not only is enhanching people's culture, but also implementing personal growth. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though some people believe that it is not worthy to comprehend discovery without direct connection to theirs lives, I strongly disagree due to the benifit that acknowledging can produce in everyone lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author thinks studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.I think studying every planet is worthy.Learning every planet is good to know for the people who wants to go to space.For the people that wants to go to that certain planet.Learning about planets is very important to some people to understand many think sthan planets.so many people want to go to alot of planets that nobody have went to.\n\nThe author says Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet.\"Even though Mercury is closer to the sun.Beyond high pressure and hear,erupting volcanoes,powerful earcthquakes,and frequent lightning strikes ro probs seeking to land on its surface.That statement shows Venus is the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our system.\n\nThe author also states NASA is working on approaches for Venus to get information and see what they can experiance there.\"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbidehave been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\".Thats saying that NASA actually sent electronics to go discover Venus and when discorving with that electronic for three weeks.\n\nIn paragraph 8 it says,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value,not only because of insight to be gained on the planet itself,but also because human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"The meaning for that sentence is trying to discover Venus is not that easy,they have a limit they cant push because it wont work.They dont want to do so much and cause a problem snd shouldn't cause any harm humans or anything els that they dont want in danger.\"Our travles on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginatopn and innovation\".And in this last sentence of pargraph 8 meaning is that they saying That you should be opened minded and go ahead and discover every part of earth beacuse theres so much to see its very fun or cool or can say some beautiful places in Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a world with more than 190 countries, we can observe different approaches to the problem of accommodation. These communities are generally divided into two big parts one of which, is the sufficient number of big cities that are experiencing shortages of places to live. I totally agree with some, who believe that governments should take a series of actions to overcome this problem. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, with the advent of technology, the population is migrating from rural areas to economically stronger cities and in most cases, the reason for that is not their interest in bleeding-edge applications. For example, people in villages or in less organized infrastructural places are relocating for better jobs, living standards and education. When the governments concentrate their all attention on building new working places, educational institutions and governmental establishments in some areas of the country, they lead other parts of their region to economic regression. Therefore, particular cities are overpopulating and environmentally damaging. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it might seem not clear, but the main source of this kind of issue is the dishonesty of government workers who are corrupted by dictators at the top of the country. Unfortunately, average citizens should have to obey these strict rules despite the threat to their lives. As a result, many people are ready to live in the small corner of megapolises, in order to get a job as a cheap working force to earn some money in their homelands. In some cases, even they have to leave their borders and relocate to developed regions for a better life. A good example of this might be countries of far Eastern and African countries, where personal interest and civil wars are highly exceeded. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe, that the problems like house shortage in a particular part of the world are directly related to the government's attitude in their areas. Wisdom and fair contribution of resources among people are the best solutions not only for that case but also for other aspects of the issues in the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can explore places see how other people live. The program lets you sightsee the Atlantic Ocean and you can see certain animals that live in the ocean. The program teaches you about hardwork.\n\nI was working at a bank when my friend asked me if I wanted to join him in the Seagoing Cowboys program I accepted. It was the opportunity of a lifetime. I heard the program taught you about other countries what they had been through. Some countries helped out in World War two then Europe bomed them. I went to help pick up ruins of the citys left.\n\nI crossed the Atlantic Ocean four times already I helped over 2000 people. I was glad to join the program because I got to meet people that I became friends with and they joined the program. I got more and more people joining the program soon we had 15000 people helping us. I crossed the Atlantic Ocean eight times already more than any other Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSome people didn't join I didn't pressure them to join I became friends with them,but sometimes they would ask me if they could join i always said ''there's always room for one more.'' I let other people join the program they became friends with everyone. I would sometimes have people that i didn't know join the program.\n\nThat's why I would join the program so you could make friends and have more people join the program. You could also beat my record of fourteen trips back and fourth. You could also see the animals in the Atlantic Ocean that's why you should join.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless or computer-driven cars are not practicle for everyday use, will end up costing the country a lot of money, and compromise the safety of the others. In order for a car to be completely driverless the roads will have to be changed, and senors will need to be added. However, adding sensors to the roads will cost the country a lot of money. Also driverless cars still require a driver to be fully engaged, because the car will not be able to steer in contrustion or difficult traffic situations. However, the driver of the car will not be fully engaged because the car will be doing most of the work, and this will compromise safety of the driver, passangers, and pedestrians. Lastly, the technology in the car could fail and cause an accident and put not only the driver at harm, but othes on the road. In the event of a car accident of a computer-driven car could also cause legal toubles, because instead of a person being at fault, the accidents could be caused by the machinery in the car not working properly. Driverless or computer-driven cars are not practicle for everyday use because they could potentially endanger the safety of the driver and others on the road, and driverless cars will end up costing the country a lot of money as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days a large number of couples decide to have babies after spending at least few years since their marriage. According to some experts, there are various reasons which urge parents to have children later in their life. Career, changes in social belief, women empowerment, escalating living expenses, increased life expectancy are some of the major causes of this trend. In my belief advantages of having children later in life outweigh its demerits.\n\nFirst, a growing number of parents are very passionate and enthusiastic in terms of career development and their profession is the primary reason they do not expect to have children in the early stage of their marriage. It is intuitively obvious that in this age of huge competition, unemployment and economic crisis, people around the world are constantly worried about their career and job promotions. As a result, parents decide and determine to postpone their first childbirth. Second, women empowerment has changed the old way of life where a woman's sole responsibility was to look after the children. Since many wives are working these days, they decide to take babies after they reach a stable job position.\n\nFurthermore, social belief regarding giving birth of children has changed dramatically and people are more concerned about the living expenses than the number of babies they have, unlike older generations. Additionally, parents who study full-time in universities can not concentrate on their studies competently if they become parents. Enhanced life expectancy and changes in the social belief are two other reasons for this trend.\n\nUndeniably people who either work or run a business can reach to a stable position before becoming parents. Thus they can take better care of their babies which would have been impossible if the baby was born earlier. It is often a fact that having offspring early in life can escalate expenditures and financial responsibilities of parents. In particular, if the parents cannot allocate time for them, they grow up with psychological issues. Such young parents often lack the knowledge and time they need to properly take care the baby. Ultimately, parents might put their career at a risk as well as the future of their children if they become parents before they are mentally and economically stable.\n\nReversely, having offspring in early life have few advantages. Such parents have new members in their family and their isolation would be extirpated and they will become more family-oriented. \n\nIn conclusion, despite the pleasure of having a new baby in early years of marriage, parents who decide to have babies later can primarily, readily and precisely focus on their career, can easily fulfill financial requirements and have sufficient time to persist, strive and struggle in order to have a stunning, and illuminated future in life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper think computer good bad effects people It bought mind people fight computers doubt I think computers positive people think arguments people find ability talk online people help school work First computers gieve ability learn faraway places This really helpful want learn go computer end google CAPS By ll find lot info I I tried So computers giving ability learn faraway places really helpful human society Second computers people talk people around world This really helpful want learn people around world This different googling fatcs people This free google online chat someone In thoughts thats best way helpful friends family dont computer help school work This helpful students could world different This remind time I project nine planets I find lot info also means lot books lot reading So I easiest fastest way project I went internet get info I needed So I completed project headed teacher She gave project grade I got I misspelled name doesnt matter What I tell computers help students school work like projects thinking I know computer positive effect three arguments computers give ability learn faraway places allow talk online people help school work Please take side think computers positive effects human societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion I feel that the FACS does not need to be used on students in a classroom.I say that because I don't think it would be very valuable. I also feel that it really wouldn't be useful.\n\nI say that it wouldn't be valuable for a few reasons. One reason being that people can read when a person is down about something at the time, also can tell when someone is bored. A second reason i say that a FACS wouldn't be useful is because just by how someone is acting or how someone is doing something can help you determine what is going on with them.Another reason I feel that it would not be useful is because the tone in someone's voice and how they talk to you will help you realize what is going on with them.Those are my reasons why I feel that it is not a valuable thing for the classroom.\n\nIn the end i still feel that there is no need for us to have to have a FACS for the classroom. It seems as if it wouldn't help out much when people today can already tell how one is feeling.That is why I feel that a FACS would never be valuable to the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We know it wasn't created by aliens! If it was then we could have seen it in every picture we took. Instead we could only see in in the picture in 1976. Also if we would have thought that it actually was a atrifact from aliens then we wouldnt have made it public right away we would have went to go get more information, but the public wasnt satisfied so we went back and got them the information they wanted. Last but not least when we went back in April 8, 2001 (on a cloudless day) and took a picture it clearly showed that it was not built by alien lifeforms.\n\nWhen the pictures were took they were all taked in different time periods. In each picture they were different. In the first picture the face is clearly shown but we didnt get a clear enough picture, so we went back a second time to see take another one. In the second picture it is slightly hard to determened if the face is there or not. So of course we still werent satisfied, and yet again on April 8, 2001 we sent ANOTHER ship so take ANOTHER picture, i need to remind you this is on a cloudless day, and when the (multiple) pictures were taken, it was just some old hill with nothing special to it.\n\nA few days after recieving the picture NASA made it public! If we had truly thought that this was a \"Acient Artifact\" we would have kept it secret and not relised it publicly until after we (knew) that it was created by aliens. Which shows that we always knew it wasnt a alien artifact after all.\n\nI can see why most people had thought it was a acient alien artifact though. I mean most people dedicate their life finding out if there is more lifeforms out there. So most people had to have hope. For the sake of what they chose to do with there life.\n\nIn April 8, 2001 NASA went back to snap ANOTHER photo. This day (to remind you) was a cloudless day. So we knew it would be the perfect day to snap the finishing photo. The photo that would settle everything. Not long after the photo was snapped NASA recieved it, and for some it was satisfying to find out that it wasn't a acient alien artifact. Others (on th other hand) were devistated (for the same reason in paragraph 3). The debate was over it, was and is official that it wasn't a acient alien artifact.\n\nNow do you understand? Have i finaly conviced you that it isnt and never was a alien life form. The facts i found in the article are pretty spot on to what happened so i hope i have finaly conviced you that its nothing special just a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day family I went point I excited When arrived I rushed car We got ticket map decided ride wanted go We gon na go dragon long line It felt like wasnt even moving I patient I excited try ride family finaly moved bup bup finally We next We got seats made sure backled nice tight The roller coaster couple minutes long worth wait That time patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting really takes determination away cyclist The hills made ride difficult It says over one long cripping hill bulding came view This shows hills hard says long crippling Another thing setting building He extremely thirsty becomes abandoned grape juice factory said by looks beth Grape Juice Factory bottling plant These two several examples setting affecting cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Automatic cars. They've been invented like everyother automatic thing in the world just to make humans more lazy. There can be nothing good about automatic cars. What if they run out of batter down a four lane highway? What if they run out of gas? What exactly will the cars be run on? No matter what there will always be risks.\n\nSay you and your family are driving down the road in one of these automatic cars and maybe the road is icy. The car slides but no computer can drive like human driver. The car slides off the road into a ditch and kills every member of that family. Who is to blame? The car, or the manufacturer? The manufacturers of the car, if they want to sell the product make sure that the car is totally accident proof. And that is completely impossible. With drunk drivers to texting drivers. You never know what the person coming at you is doing. You can never predict what that driver is gonna do while they're coming at you. And it's not your fault. So why would anyone ever want something they don't have complete control over?\n\nAnother thing. We have automatic trains and subways cars yes. But, they are guided on a rail that is also watched over by a trained person. These automatic cars have no complete guide and just go off of gps? Sun flares cause gps and phones to go wack every now and then. So what happens when we have a sun flare and the car shuts down or malfunctions while its going say 50-60 mph? That could kill and entire family and some. Again, who is to blame for that? Who is to be at fault for something like that caused by nature? You can't do anything to prevent it. It's impossible.\n\nHow expensive will these be? Only the rich will have them. These aren't something that just everyone will be able to get there hands on. Like Hover Boards. They sell for around 700 dollars and they catch on fire. What kind of waste of money will it be if people go to pay for an expensive car and it malfunctions in the first day that they get it. many companies will lose alot of money and there isn't a thing they can do about it. There are too many risks to the automatic cars.\n\nAll though the risks are there, the grand theft auto crime rate would go down. I mean, how would one go about stealing an automatic car? How would the get away quickly if the car doesn't even go fast enough? Atleast police would have to worry about people trying run from them in one.\n\nIn the world of automotives, people have to be careful on what they buy. Is it safe for the family? Is it fun? Is it reliable? The risk is too high to have completely\n\nautomatic cars. There will always be something that could break, or just not work.\n\nIf they could make a car that is \"automatic\" but at the sametime can be controlled by a driver, then you have a product worth selling. At one moment if a mother needs to take care of her child, she could put the car into say something like an autopilot and take care of her child. But only for a short period of time would the thing work. Then if the roads are bad or say you need to be able to control the car from and accident then you could rely on the car and not have to worry about a thing. Yes it could still malfunction but, you are less likely to crash whne the roads are bad or someone is about to hit you.\n\nThere will never be a completely safe car but manufacturers have it down to where ford can automatically back up and parrellel park themselves with a camera. Cars will always be expensive, and cars will always be dangerous.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way I think about this articale is that I dont think that it will be a good idea for use. because what if you where puting on a face. If we put this technology into are computers it would mess with people that look like they are struguling for a person that is just boted and does not want to do it. So they would wast there time if it would go throw a deminstration about how to do it. Even if was a thing that was just for your computer it would not be fun. Do to the fact that it mite mess with what you are trying to do.\n\nOne the part with people puting on a face what if you where smiling but was acutually sad just for the fact that you had to. Many times when you see a picture it may look like he/she are acting like that but are actualy not so it could through it off and mabey get you confused on the way.\n\nOn the other hand it could help you like if some one was thinking of some thing and you could not help them or dont know if to do somthing or not. Mabey you could make it into something small like a app on a phone. People would use it to have fun with while walking or try to make it a game among friends that are around you and see if you can tell one anothers expreshons.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"You can live in your car, but you can't drive your house.\" This is a quote my teacher used to tell me as advise for the future. This was a way of saving money if you had to choose between paying rent or paying your car bills if you were in this situation. However, what he did not realize is its more useful to use less of your car.\n\nUsing less of your car improves the enviroment. Using less will reduce the pollution in the air that we breathe in. When we reduce our car use we reduce the amount of resources like fossil fuels and nonreuseable resources. When we use cars and create pollution we also create a smog, but when we stop using cars we can clear the smog. In paris, they banned car use for a certain amount of time and it reduced the amount of smog. In fact, in the article\n\nParis Bans Driving Due to Smog , it says \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\"\n\nAnother thing that reduces is your payments for your car. How can you pay for a car if you don't have one? The answer is you don't. Without a car you don't have to pay car payments or repair payments. You also don't have to worry about getting fines or looking for parking spaces. In the article\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , it reads \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park- large garages at the edge of the develpment, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\"\n\nIf you are not already worried with you car payments, you would be worried about your children's safety. Accidents happen all the time from cars. And if you're not in an accident you could be the one with a car breakdown on your way to work. Now you may say, I need a car because I have to drive to work or drop my kids at school. Than here is a solution, in the article\n\nThe End of Car Culture it says, \"Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has fascilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work.\"\n\nMy teacher's quote about paying for cars is more useful than paying rent is incorrect. Using less of your car is an advantage to improving the environment, spending less money, and increasing safety in the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet every edges of imagniation and dinnovation\", this quote from the article can show us that the author has a very strong claim/argument about wanting more travels and exploration to be done in space even if that meant that dangers and consecuences would occur. The author wants to have more exploration happen in space, he focuses his main point on Venus and talks a little bit about Mars. He says those are the closes planets to Earth so it would be possible for space travel. The author is obvioulsy passionate about this topic about wanting to have more research done about planets beyond Earth.\n\nThe author definently supports the idea of having more studies and research done about Venus. The author believes that even with risks invloved in the research/explorations of Venus, that they should happen anyways,\"scientists seek to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" The author for this artcile even shares some of the risks that Venus holds to us humans, \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospehric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". The author states that he thinks of risks as \"challenges\". The author even includes that at some point in time, Venus may have been inhabitable just like Earth and that it could have had many seas and various forms of life living on Venus.\n\nIn conclusion the author wants to have missions and more research done about Venus. He dosen't care about the risks or the\"challenges\" that there would be during further research of Venus. The way he talks about wanting all this to happen and showing some facts and some data about further research on Venus shows that he fully supprts further studies and research about Venus. He wants it to happen, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" He wants us to expand beyond Earth and let our curious minds explore Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern era, the co-educational school has become a controversial trend in recent times. School journeys play a vital role in children's life. However, some people concur that parents should choose co-educational institutions for their children while other people have opposed this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of these trends and thus lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are adequate evidence are obtainable to substantiate reasons. The top-notch concrete is attending co-educational school, which makes children should treat everyone equally with respect and care. As a result, more chance to reduce the crime rate of rapes and abuse in society. Another infamy root is most of the jobs involving in mixes of females and males. Therefore, it's easier for an individual can communicate with other genders people without any resistance. Thus, the above-stated reasons for co-educational schools of its bright side are self-evident.\r\n\r\nWhat is known is that half full for some may appear empty half for others. So people in general trends to distinguish that parents should enrol their children on single-sex schools which has multifarious reasons. A primary reason is children can distract by other things which affect performance in academic records. For instance, boys had affection toward women which lead to many problems. Furthermore, women feel more comfortable and safer studying in single-sex academic institutions. Hence, it's apparent why many are in favour of this trend.\r\n\r\nIn recapitulation, I reiterate that there are strong factors supporting that to educate in co-educational schools has more merits by considering gender equality. Consequently, I firmly agree with the given statement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming soon but they could be harmful as well as great to people.They help the drivers that need something from the backeat, but also the car might have small problems and could get in a car crash, they could also help the driver for when they've had a rough day or stressful day they might fall alseep but when the car cant driver by itslef anymore the seat well vibrate and the driver well wake up from it.\n\nThe driverless car could poeple out alot of parents that have young kids.For when they dropped something adn there crying the driverless could go by it self while you get whatver fell. Mostley for moms when your baby has a dirty diper and you hvae to change them because no one wants a smelly car.Most parents would love the driverless beacuse it helps them out for stuff that they could do in the beackseat.Not useful for only parents but for everyone.\n\nDriverless cars are helpful for people but since its a new invenation its might have some small problems with it.Some drivers might get into a car crash because they have never used a driverless car so they might be confused about to use one and that couls cause a crash and could involed people that didnt do anything.Olderr people might not like this car because since they are older then most of us there not going to be able to know how to use it.Teenagers would love the car just because its able to driver itslef but they might not know hoe to control it when something bad happens to it.\n\nPeople are going to love and hate the car because they might not like how it drives it self but people are going to love it.There is always a good thing about this car is that to able to drive it itslef, but the car might lose control of it slef and stuff like that we dont want that to happen.\n\nThe drivess car is a good idea for alot of people but people might not want it but it well get popular over the years when teaanagers want to the car just for it does.Driverless car is good to new drivers also incase they dont know to to drive and they do something wrong the driveless car could just turn on mode and help the driver from a crash. Driverless cars are good and also might be harmful to people but people well also love it when they get it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a widely-held belief that the simplicity of our lives has been impacted by technological advances, especially during the last century, and our lifestyle has turned into a more complicated one. Some believe in solving this matter by living a more simple life without using technology. I can not entirely agree with this notion due to the rationale which will be explained in this essay.\r\n\r\nTechnology has offered a host of virtues in our lifestyles. Firstly, the most positive aspect may be that the advances in technology have led to many breakthroughs in different medical fields. These discoveries have substantially led to the development of diverse treatment ways of disparate diseases. For instance, many illnesses that required hospitalization to be managed in the last decades can be controlled by oral medications daily at patients’ homes nowadays. This action brings about a more straightforward life for patients and their families than before and would not be possible without technology. Moreover, by the leading-edge technology, people can have long-distance communication with each other with their devices through voice or video calls, which leads to an effortless way of contacting under special circumstances. For example, during the Covid-19 crisis and the lockdown, people could do teleworking and actively participate in their working meetings online from their houses. Thus, technology brings about a new simpler method of communication in the modern world.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, those who agree with the omission of technology from life to live more simply may have adapted to the conventional ways of life and are afraid of changing their habits. An alternative hypothesis may be that they do not have the know-how to use modern technology; thus, they refuse it. However, not using technology in today’s modern world not only may lead to a more complicated life, but also bring about isolation from the world around us.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it appears that advances in technology have positively influenced our lives and made living conditions more bearable for us, such as in disease conditions or the lockdowns due to them. Nevertheless, there are always people who cannot or do not want to adapt to new transformations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Museum is built to deliver knowledge and information, however, it is argued that it should be entertaining or educational. In my opinion, it might need both of them.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, if the main purpose is bringing entertainment to visitors, it needs to create joy and pleasure to attract them. It could be for kids or adolescents, who are easily getting bored with words and silence. Their attention mainly is from pictures, toys and even games or activities in order to memorise those information efficiently. Moreover, a group of students might think sitting in class to study is quite passive. Going to the museum allows them to view in person the related objects such as paintings, handwriting notes or sculptures.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people suppose that the main purpose of a museum is for education, it must be used in teaching and learning academically. They tend to separate entertainment and education, and as a result, museums should be more formal. Furthermore, it is also the way to pay respect to others who require a quiet and serious atmosphere to enhance the learning quality. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it seems to me that museums should be both entertaining and academic depending on the group of people in order to attract more visitors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mars has aliens! Many people believe that the landform on Mars was created by aliens, but here at NASA we have found that landform was actually created naturally. The landform is referred to as a Martian mesa, which is common in the region of Cydonia, but this has shadows that make it appear as if the figure has a face. Since the discovery of the form, it has been in movies, books, and radio talk shows. Some consipiracy theorists say that the form was actually created by aliens, but why would we want to hide the fact that there is life on Mars when in reality it would benefit here at NASA. The landform is Martian mesa formation much like the Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho.\n\nThe Martian mesa is the term used for the landform. It is very common to find them on Mars in the region of Cydonia. The Martian mesa was naturally formed, but with its shadows, it looks much like a face. In 1998 Mars Global Surveyor was close enogh to actually see if there were any alien monuments and turns out that there wasn't any.\n\nHere at NASA we recieved a lot of attention when the \"Face\" was discovered. If the landform was actually created by aliens, why would we try to hide it? The landform had no monumemts near it when looked at by the Surveyor. \"Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" People wanted there to be something because it would benefit us.\n\nIn the end, the landform was found to be a Martian mesa. There are many mesa's in the region of Cydonia and that's a part of how we found out how it was a natural landform. Also the Surveyour verified that there wasn't any other monuments near the landform. If there was any life on Mars we would want to tell the people so they can be intrested in the activity at NASA, but for now there has not been found any life activiy on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter many benefits happiness joy bonding others adreneline helping releasing tension joking made daily basis around Laughter something shared among people especially re dumps This emotion one brighten anyday bring enjoyment Laughter huge part life From family friends boyfriends stangers laughing always big deal I love able look someone see smile alot means probaly laugh alot happy person How I tell Well starters dimples cheeks crows feet corner eyes Really crows feet nt matter old happen laughing smiling time squinting sun The biggest part laughter contributed life relationship Usually laughter relationship make last longer The reason relationships last longer let person see fine laughing part life I believe laughing relationship best part Lets say partner dumps going let moody day going try make laugh cheer When I m relationship partner moody I try hardest cheer I love make people laugh And I m grouch boyfriend helpful tries make feel better comfort see wrong So laughter relationship obviously happiness Therefore work person re So spread joyfullness life make people happy Another part laughter life friends If nt know well let tell I m shy first I warm ll see I m outgoing person Like friends say I weird I enjoy laughing alot making others laugh When I m around friends dumps someone always end get laugh No matter upset I always get laugh pretty much anything since I really easy person entertain Being around people like watching comedy movie act They always finding way funny annoying Such obnoxious stupid things others never s embarassing Well embarassing nt mean nt least If nt give us give us attention How suppose know whether s funny nt want try something new How suppose laugh others laugh matter stupid So nt knock try The person said laughter shortest distance two people true false Is really shortest distance longest I honestly believe could short distance You nt want snooty crabby time never make friends relationships And nt friends relationships make laugh enjoy If re happy person experience joys life everything around You wo nt put smile face spontaneous person afraid Laughter benefit man kind And laughter life showed much brought others much experience enjoy Those enjoyments explored boyfriends friends family around time This one emotion definitely one brighten anyday bring happy expressions every ones faces Share laughterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus is most important to the Earth that is close to the planet where people in. Sometime the challenge of the planet is for humans to study, apprently it's proximity to us. The author support the idea that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers becuase sometime Venus is right around the corner and human will sent some spacecraft to land. Not only studying Venus will pursuit other life, but some scientist are looking forward to work with the Venus to undertanst more of the challenge that they will know more about.\n\nThe first reason why venus will pursuit despite the danger it present is that venus are also a planet becuase the reader know that it's the second planet that from our sun. It could be a bad idea that '' Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface \". This is way studying are needed to be used with protection at any case that involved danger.\n\nThe second most reason important about the challenge of Venus in this planet as an enviornment would crush can be made as \" these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth \". Because of this solar system like Venus impact the hottes surface temperature of the planet. The challenging of Venus consider many researchers into working with the machines that probably would allow them to constribute it's to be knows as knowledge.\n\nMost third reason that will be know is that scientics are more knowable to learn more about Venus than other people because they are more to understand better. More likely, \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation \" just as we know about how it should not be limited, most people woun't know what to do unless they know what will be next in their challenge. It somehow need to be survivable for humans as well into going forward on something that is challenge.\n\nIn conclusion, the challenge of Venus is really important to most of the people because venus is like the second planet that need to be look out for and this the reason it dangerous to explore. All it take was to have a scientics that are impresive to know where it actually is.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "well i think Driverless cars would be reckless and could be dangerous rather than helpful as it says in paragraph 2 it still alerts the driver to take contol of the car when backing up or pulling into places like garages and other things. Also As it Says In Paragraph 3 It reads binary code well in my opinion what if the car cant read the binary code one day what if it just malfunctions and in paragraph 4 it says it needs alot of sensors and a couple of video cameras. after reading this article i still think the who driverless car thing is a reckless invention and not a very good investment with our tax payers money so i really think driverless cars should not be invented and googe shouldnt waste their time on it.In Paragraph 6 it says something about antilock brakes well what if that just dont work and someone gets in a brutal car crash over that malfunctioning.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few decades, the issue of housing shortage in an urban area has been a major concer because the pricely land caused serious problems in society. Althought some people claim that only goverments can deal with this issue, in my opinion with a combination both of the goverment and individual, this problem can be tackled as I will discuss in the following essay. \n\n\nThere is no doubt that goverments have power to establish legislation and subsidies. For example, goverments will fine real estate agencies if they overcharge in the amount of price to live in the city, Therefore, real estate agencies would provide a reasonable price to sale. Furthermore, another thing goverments can do is to provide financial supportted who buy housing in the city . A good example of this is Taiwan goverment share a proportion of money to subsidies people who buying a husing in the urban area. As a result, citizens can alleviate the financial burden. \n\n\n\nOn the other hand, individual also need to take actions in order to deal with this issue. People should try find vertical apartments instead of private twonhouses in urban area. For example, In Sigarpore, the marjoority people tend to live in high-rise building so that more people can live in the city. By doing this, apartments can accommodate more population in the urban area. \n\n\nIn Conculsion, despite the fact that government should take most responsibility, from my perspective, a combination of government and individul should be accordinated to solve the proble. Provided benefits as well as are encouraged people to live in urban area, this phenomenon can be alleviated.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports studying Venus despite the danger it brings in many ways. Venus is the closest planet to earth that us humans could posibilty go and explore. But, there are many enviroumental issues in Venus that we could not with stand. So an alternative was given to us. We could go far above the surface of Venus but we still would'nt get the full discription of Venus.\n\nVenus is just like earth is some ways, but we would never be able to go there due to the conditions Venus has. If a human went to Venus even taking every safty percauton there ever was they would still die. \" A thick atomshpere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atomshpere. On the planet's surface, tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what er expirence on our own planet. These conditions are far extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroument would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many meatals\". But maybe there is a different way we could \"explore\" Venus.\n\nAn alternative was given to us by NASA most likely the only way humans would ever be able to encounter Venus is any way. Going above Venus's surface where the conditions would be bareable and looking at Venus from that perspetive. \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet air planes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 Degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would no exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivavle for humans\". This idea seems to be the only way to ever be able ot see Venus.\n\nIf humans did successfully did go to Venus we may could discover amazing things that we would of never could even to begin to think existed ever. Venus is a mystery to humans and we want to know what that mystery is. Going to Venus would expand our knowelage we know about planets in our solar system today. We could possiblty discover many new species, rocks, life, and many other extranorady things. \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us to many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Saying that going to Venus would be a huge pro for humans. Finding new discoveries could possibly change the world.\n\nVenus is an extranorty place that humans have no idea about. Going to venus would improve the world today in many ways. Exploring other planets and what we could possibly find would end all the curiosity and being new inventions for the world today. The author for sure supported the idea about going to Venus and studying it despite the dangers its presents. The author provided many details and explaination to prove he supported this idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, a variety of nations have occurred a phenomenon that habitants have been keen on detecting the past of their accommodation. In this essay I will show the reason for this tendency.\r\n\r\nI contend that trend has 3 main reasons. First, the possessor wants to increase the value of their accommodation by finding the history of the place they are living. If the house or flat has famous celebrities or someone who has had influence in the past, it will gain the valuation of their home. For example, imagine that William Shakespeare had lived there and had wrote one of his famous stories, so It is such a great experience and it can help you to get attractive from people who want to buy your house. As I think they should go to the council to see when the house was built and then they can search the Internet for more information. Moreover, another part of people who believe in spirituality that can affect their own wellbeing placements of furniture and decorations, can result in an imbalance of invisible energy forces. They will meet the predecessor or priest to get the prediction about who used to live in the house before and they ask for receiving some kind of amulet to protect their self or their family from the evil spirits.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as owner become interested in the history of their house because of valuations and superstitious reasons, they can easily acquire the necessary data by talking to others or surfing the internet. It is advisable that all residents follow this practice to prevent any potential threats.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nIt has caught my attention that \" The Electoral College\" may not be the best suit voting system for our nation. The people expect a Democracy were every single vote counts. Unfortunetly that right is being stripped away, for the goverments own good. We go to vote for a fellow canadite, not a slate of electors. Electors in which are not guarenteed to to vote for your desired canidate. The states seem to over look the fact 60% of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind they have now.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, we the voters do not vote for president we vote for the electors,based on popular vote we choose the electors that repersent our state, that elect the president for us. The people involoved in the elections are those with political preferences, and it is not fair to strip them of there right to vote directly for the leader of the free world. For example many men and women follow the election when it comes time every four years, to see who is going to be the best head of house, he best comander and cheif, and the best leader of our country. The president should be a person the people respect and trust with everything they have. But unforutnetly the Electoral College does the deciding for us, all the devotion of politics and reaserch for our favorite candidates goes to waste.\n\nIn additon the next vaild argument against the electoral college is what many may call the disastor factor. Consider the fact that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors who could always defy the will of the people. For example in the 1960's the Loisiana legislature almost succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors that oppposed John F. Kennedy. And in the same cercumstance other electors have occasionally refused to vote for there party'd candidate and vote for whom ever they please. Yet perhaps one of the most worrying things is the situation in which the electoral vote becomes a tie. In that case the election would be given to the house of representatives. In which, the state delegations vote for the president and the senate elects the vice president. Beacuse each state only cast one vote, the single represenetive of california represents 35 million people. Hardly able to reflect on the will of the people.\n\nTo conclude, the electoral college is unfair, untrustworthy, and bias. This great nation is a democracy, the people choose . Not the representitives of the candidates who do not always express the will of the people. I must agree with my fellow 60% of voters in there desire to iradicate the electoral college.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has improved immensely just in the last sixteen years. According to the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", before 2000, a rover was \" device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars\". Now, humans are trying to create cars that does not need a driver. Though technology has gone far, it has not gone far enough to accomplish such a feat.\n\nThe main issue with driverless cars is safety. Though there are numerous sensors surrounding the car and the driver is notified when they need to take control, there still isnt enough for a car to work on its own. Even if the car reached the technological point to ensure the safety of the passengers, another large safety concern would be other drivers on the road. Yes, the driverless car can sense when it is about to ensue a collision, it does not have the capability to avoid it, just lik any other car. So, as a human, I would rather trust myself for my safety over technology.\n\nWhen it comes to the law, texting and drinking while driving is illegal. If driverless cars were created and used, humans would be breaking two laws that harm drivers the most. Yes, the driver will be notified when they are in need by lights and a vibrating seat, but if they are under the influence they will not be able to anyways. If they are distracted in any way by texting, food, etc. then they will not be in a ready situation to take control of the vehicle. AS a driver, it would be nice to sleep and the driverless car would allow that, but that would be just as dangerous as sleeping behind the wheel in a regular car. The driver would not be ready to take the wheel or they would not even notice when they are in need to take the wheel. Creating a heads up display would add to this distraction and would take on the role of texting and driving.\n\nThough there are many negatives, the reader understands that there are positives. Using less gas would be extremely nice and would help economy. If driverless cars got to the point where it was only public and no one bought cars, then money would be saved by all. And, with the sensors, the car can drive very well on its own and it is at a very good point right now.\n\nWith the positives, though, it is not enough for the driverless car to save someone's life. It does not have the technology to avoid other drivers. And, driverless cars will never cancel the use of regular cars because not everyone will trust them. Driverless cars will create controversy, just as the passage brought up \"Whose fault is it in an accident? The cars or the drivers?\" Though driverless cars have come a long way and have very good ideas, they need much more work before they can be trustable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ageing population has led to increasing concerns about pensions and their future sustainability. There are conflicting views on whether the government or the private sector should be responsible for old people during their retirement. Although private pension is becoming popular, my view is that it is the government’s responsibility to provide financial stability to its senior citizens in retirement. \n\nTo begin with state pension programs will help alleviate poverty for older citizens after retirement. For example, in Mexico, studies showed that 55% of its workforce benefited from state pension programs and while those in non-contributory programs alleviated poverty by 20%. These programs are usually tied to employment, so that workers will receive financial and health care benefits when they get old and stop working. In some countries, the state pension plans also include non-contributory programs which benefit those workers whose employers were not compliant with superannuation systems as well as for those individuals that never worked by reason of disability, incapacity or possibly no proper education. \n\nFurther superannuation schemes provide social security for older people in the later years. Such schemes (often mandatory) encourage long term savings. There is also recognition that adults during their workforce years do not provide for their senior years because of current consumption over savings and insufficient saving for retirement when the person is younger. With government retirement programs, there is a redistribution of income within a person's lifetime to enable accumulation of wealth. This is illustrated when a 20year old may not even consider pension contributions upon entering the workforce and focus more on household expenditure or mortgage repayments. \n\nIn conclusion, government funded pensions benefit older citizens through poverty alleviation and social security which I think should only be institutionalised through the state and not burdened on individuals in the private sector.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are actually not coming! There would be so many recalls on driverless cars if they made them. Driverless cars should not be made because the cars that are made now have enough technology for a person, the human driver would still have to be alert in the car in case something major happens, and also it would be safer if it was just a human driver, instead of a computer driving it for the person.\n\nDriverless cars should not be made because the cars that are made now already have enough technology for the person. Is it really necessary to make more cars with more technology when there's already enough that have been made? As it says in the article, \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\"It is unnecessary to make more cars with technology when there is already enough. So why do we need driverless cars?\n\nDriverless cars should not be made because the human driver would still have to be alert just in case something major happens. What's the point of driverless cars if the human driver still has to be alert? As it says, \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\" The point of driverless cars is so drivers won't\n\nhave to drive, not for drivers to assist when the car needs it.\n\nAnother reason driverless cars should not be made is because it would just be safer if it was a human driver instead of a computer. Sometimes computers mess up, so what would happen if it messed up while driving? As it demonstrates in the passsage, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Human drivers are way safer than computers.\n\nDriverless cars should therefore not be made because, the driver would still have to alert in the car. It would be safer if it was just a human driver. Finally, the cars that are made now have neough technology for a person. Driverless cars are unnecessary and therfore should now be made.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it really worthy to spend a life time just to see Venus? In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author supports the idea of studying venus is a worthy pusuit despite the danger because there's a safe conditions, its not easy to go to Venus and explore but its a worthy timimg and NASA working on making a mechanical computers.\n\nFirst reason of how the author supported his idea of studying venus is worthy by telling the reader about the saftey confitons that are avalible. according to the article it stated \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow seientists to float above the fray\" another qoute is \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\" these two quotes are explaing the saftey conditions that are avalible for those who wants to explore Venus.\n\nAnother reason of how the supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is by explaing its not easy and telling us that peering at Venus provide only limited insight on ground conditions. according to the article the author stated \" however, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions beacouse most of light cannot penetrate the sense atmosphere, rendering standard froms of photography and videography ineffective\" another quote is \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" these two qoute expalined how the author support the idea of the text beacouse he's telling us what it takes and how.\n\nFinally, the author supported the idea of studying Venus is worthy pursuite despit the dangers by telling us about the new invintation of the mechanical computers. According to the text, the author stated \"NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus\" anthoer quote is \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers\" these two quotes means that new stuff coming up to make it easier and safer to vist Venus just like the author idea of studying Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supported the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by explaining to the reader in the article that there's a safe conditions, its not easy but worthy and finally by telling us about the new invitions to make it easy and safe visit to Venus. so Venus might be a worthy spending time to go see!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient I witch little bad girls sisters house My sister asked I wanted spend I god kids came That sister rembend go So morning left kids hours So I wait patiently come back FinalySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that there should be more open squared spaces and colossal parks in all cities and towns. I do completely agree with the given statement and would give supportive points in this essay. \r\n\r\nFirstly, places like parks and gardens with beautiful flowering plants and trees provide an identity to a city or town and undoubtedly provide considerable benefits to the surrounding community. Furthermore, these are beneficial for personal health as well. \r\n\r\nFor instance, children can have outdoor sports, and adults after their busy tiring work life can have a relaxed time as well as can do routine walking in a healthy space. \r\n\r\nSuch spaces allow citizens to appreciate nature's arts and to have knowledge and connections with its vast beauty among city skyscrapers, industries and other townhouses. One can easily understand and appreciate this while sitting in the Royal Botanical Garden in Melbourne City or Hyde Park in London. These cities are recognized by these gardens and attract even tourists.\r\n\r\nAnother very significant point is about their role in cleaning pollution. As we know, these days air pollution is a major issue due to traffic and factories and it is considerably affecting people's health. Therefore, it is essentially a requirement these days to have spaces on every corner with implanted trees and plants in the form of squared spaces and central bigger parks. Trees and surrounding greeneries clean atmospheric pollution by absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen. \r\n\r\nThis thus keeps people away from many air-borne diseases and stress and they can work more efficiently with a healthy body and mind. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is a fundamental need nowadays to build parks in the cities and towns for the benefit of its people and our earth and I completely agree with the given statement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree of the production or development of driverless cars. The cars that are being developed to be driverless sounds like it could work but there are to many factors that are holding the car back from actually being safe and driverless. It will take many computer run test to make it accident free or cable of going through traffic like humans. Weather could have an effect on the devices that are making the care driverless, they could malfunction and that could lead to a car crash. How much will these car cost when they are sold to the public. Are we going to depend on the driverless car to much.\n\nA car crash happens everyday, cause of humans. Sometimes the weather has an effect on the accident. Driverless are can still get in car crashes, cause the car will be a computer with standard driving skills, but humans can change the way they are driving when ever. Driverless cars cant do that, they will still have a driver in the car just in case the gets into a situation. How reliable will the alert system be. If it doesnt work right the car could get in a crash and injure or kill the driver in the car and the one it crashed in to.\n\nWeather could have an effect on the driverless cars abilitys. The Devices it has could be damaged by the rain of hail of storm. Which could leave the car blind in what device gets damaged. If the device is damaged then the car could possibly get into a car crash. What if the driverless car gets in to a fog and cant see with the cameras it has. That could lead to a car crash. Also the driverless car could get hacked.\n\nWill anyone be able to afford a driverless car when they eventually become the only car allowed on the road.\n\nThe car that Tesla has released to the public is not a cheap car and also its not a fully driverless car. So when they release a fully driverless car to the public, will the middle and bottom class of people be able to afford these, Probably not. The Government will have to help out people that need to buy a driverless car, and we are already indebt from many things.\n\nOnce these car are released, humans will be to dependent on these cars. Eventually they will be used for military purposes. Which would cost alot of money. Also the cars will be electricals, which they can be destroyed by a EMP bomb. A EMP is a bomb that destroy any electrical thing in its blast radius which means the car will be effect. That would mean a waste of money. Taxi company would close down cause of driverless car. Taxi require humans and driverless cars don't. Many people would lose there job cause of driverless cars. Also what about Sports races. Like Nascar, there car would be replaced by driverless race cars. There no entertainment in that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars our making their way into the modern world. Everyone of the \"driverless\" cars still requires a driver to pay full attention to the road. With the technology that we have today the cars we drive are getting smarter and smarter. You have many popular car companies all making these cars. Each one of their cars is different.\n\nAs much as driverless cars would be fun to hav, they would also take out some of the fun that drving brings. When you drive a car you get to control where the car goes and what it does. If every car was driverless in the future then what wuold be the point of having different models and types of cars. Every car could look the same. You wouldnt be able to drive that sports car or luxury car you always wanted to because a computer would be doing it for you. Theres no fun in that. Just because we have the technology to make driverless cars does not mean we should. Lots of cars have GPS and sensors to help warn them of whats around them> But if you use this technology and use it to make something that is simple and fun to do, your taking the fnu out of it.\n\nDriverless cars would not be as fun as driving the car yourself. It wouldnt be hands on. It would also be hard for the driver to pay attention to the road if all their doing is sitting in the drivers seat doing nothing. You would not be able to get a feel for how the car handels if our not even driving it. All the car collectors and just people in gerneral that really like carsbecause they get to drive them. They get to get a feel for how they handel. They also get to drive the cars that they wanted to since they were little. If you start to make driverless cars then it takes the fun out getting into a car that you have always wanted to drive ever since you first saw it and you can not because it is driverless.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Riding in a Car With No Driver!\n\nImagine how cool it would be to be able to get in your car and go to your destination without even having to drive. Sounds crazy doesn't it! Most people would be like \"yes, this is a great idea!\" but they don't take in consideration the dangers of this \"driverless\" car. The car can only do so much but certain human skills are needed while driving. Therefore, the safest way to drive a car is with a human in control at all times.\n\nMost people would question themselves how the car really works. Well the answer is, sensors. According to \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the driverlesss car has sensors on the left rear wheel, a roating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirrow, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an internal motion sensor. It also has an antilock sensor so the car will be able to know when to break and what not. The driverless car can reach up to 25 mph at the most. These qualities can drive a car but is it really considered a \"safe\" car?\n\nWhat do you do when you reach a point where there are accidents and work zone areas? Of course the car is technologically smart enough to drive itself, but there are certain situations that require human skills to be able to navigate the car. According to the BMW company, the driverless car has \"alerts\" that notifies the driver when to take over. For example, the driver's seat vibrates to notify the driver when the vehicle is backing into an object and flashing lights on the windshield notify a heads-up display. These alerts are somewhat helpful to the driver to let them know when to take over but is it still safe to drive it, be a passenger in the car, or be one of the surrounding cars or pedestrians around the car?\n\nIf the car was really safe wouldn't it be popular now and used everywhere around the world? The traffic law says that the only safe car has a human driver in control and alert of its surroundings at all times. In most states it's illegal to even test computer-driven cars. Imagine you are in a rush to work and are already 10 minutes late. The Driverless Car can only go up to 25 mph. That's not even the speed limit for most streets. Only a human would be able to drive faster and in full control. Let's hypothetically say that one of those driverless cars were to get in an accident. Who's fault would it be? The driver or the manufacturer of the car? Most people would argue that it's the driver's fault for not being cautious but isn't that what the whole point of the car is for? To be able to drive in any circumstances. The driver can't control the car itself, the driver is only there when needed. The safest way to drive a car is with a human in control at all times. Only a human has the skills of knowing its every surrounding and will be cautious enough to know what to do in certain situations.\n\nA driverless car may sound cool and all but it's not the safest way to get around town. There are certain situations that require human skills like knowing how to drive on the interstate, driving around work zone areas, or through accidents. Even busy streets are a big thing! The best way to maintain everyone safe is to have a driver in control of the vehicle at all times. I mean, would you still want to get in a driverless car after knowing what the consequences could be?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI personally believe that electing a President by popular vote is a great way to elect the next president. The reason why I state this because ,when voting in an electoral college the people are voting for a slate of electors instead of the President they want to be in office. But on the other hand,the popular vote declares the candidate that recieved the most popular votes is the next president. We the peolpe want to vote for the next person to run our country , not a slate of electors.\n\nSometimes the election doesn't go as planned. Back in the election of 2000 Candidate Al Gore had more popular votes than Bush ,but Bush had more electoral votes and became President. I bet the people of America weren't to happy about that outcome , this was the first time this happened since 1888. Let's look at the election of 2012 , it states that our current President Barack Obama had \"recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney .\" It also states that residents of other regions that don't neccesary have electoral votes want a popular vote because \" residents of other regions are likely to feel disfranchised to feel that their votes dont't count that the new president will have no regard for their interest , that he really isn't their president .\" Now if the country went by a popular vote the peolpe would have a president that meets their needs and betters the economy for them instead of regions only getting what they want ,now everyone has their president. The President they voted for, not the slate electors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For many people, including myself, we have days when we are happy, optomistic, and just in a good mood for whatever reason. Then we have days where are sad, pesemistic and overall just in a bad mood.\n\nOn paragraph eight of this paasage it states that faces don't lie. while I do think that is true I do not think we are at a point where this technology can be accurate enough for us to be able to determine our emotions. Although I do not think it is accurate right now I do believe that in the future technology will able to accurately read our faces and find our emotions and this article shows why and how it is possible.\n\nThe first way that this passage shows us how emotion reading is possible is by bringing us an example in paragraph one of the Mona Lisa. The paragraph says that she is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This example right here is meant to show us how the technology can work but brings us more questions that we hopfully get answers for. In paragraph three lots of backround information is given to us so that we can get an idea on how they were able to determine what the emotions of the girl in painting are. the author talks about the main emotions humans show and how technology can now allow us to mimick the muscles that humans have in their face and the movments they can make. In paragraph four the author elaborates a bit more on the technology and how it can be used to search for those mixed emotions. The author cites quotes from Dr. Huang, one of the main people behind the project, in order to give insight to the readers who may not fully belive that reading emotions through technology is possible. In paragraph five it states that if everday normal humans can also read at the very least the basics of human emotions based on how a human looks. It could most certainly be possible for a computer to do it but better as well. In paragraph six Dr. Huang talks about the possible futures this technology can go with more advances. He says that if your computer can read your emotions it can help a student with their homework or exlcude ads that do not appeal to that person. He also discusses about how versatile the technology is and that it can be used in order to improve the facial exressions for characters in video games while maintaining a more realsitic look that many video games have. In the last two paragraphs it shows how you can try to recognize some emotions yourself like a computer would.\n\nI do think that this technology will go somewhere and has the potential to be able to with the rate that it is going. Being able to read the emotions of the girl in the Mona Lisa is already an impressive accomplishment. For the time being we will have to wait and see where it goes but I know that I as well as many others are very excited to see when this type of technology will be integrated with everyday life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building deal multiple problems involving safety Because Al Smith wanted build building larger Chrysler Building decided put mooring mast dirigibles top The building s frame modified construction mooring mast could begin putting top would stress frame bring Another issue landing dirigibles They could weighed flat land top building would many people could injured something went wrong There even law dirigibles flying low urban areasThe builders work way around The biggest obstacle seemed safety peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Authors that present a well-developed, convincing argument can have a large influence on their reader's thoughts. In the passage, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author explains the different reasons as to why Earth, as a whole, should further study the planet of Venus, alotting all its difficulties. While the kinks of being able to go to Venus are still being worked out, this author gives insight as to why this barren planet is still important.\n\nThe first idea the author had was related to the atmosphere of Venus. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the coulds of higly corrosive sufuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" In Paragraph 3, the author does not give a higly convincing argument. Humans need oxygen to live, so how is it expected for them to survive on a planet that has little to no oxygen? It is not possible to change the chemical makeup of an entire planet. The argument displayed by the author is not credible in any way and does not give any reason as to why one would want to continure research in this area.\n\nThe next problem that Earth faces in studying Venus is that temperatures on this planet exceed 800 degrees Fahrenheit, a temperature found nowhere on Earth. This temperature is beyond the maximun limit that human can edure, which leaves behind the compelling factor of wanting to study more of this sister planet. The author also states, \". . . and the atmospheric pressure is 9 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme that anything humans encounter on Earth.\" If the conditions of Venus are so bad, why should we be expected to study more of this planet. Similar to the carbon dioxide in the air, there is no way to change the temperature and pressure of an entire planet. Once again, the argument given by this author is not convincing.\n\nThe author uses an idea proposed by NASA for humans to study Venus. They say that they could use hovering vehcles such as a blimp to fly over the planet, somewhere around 30 miles high. While 30 miles is a long way abover the planet, the temperature would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, which is not ideal for reseachers. \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" If studying a planet is as difficult as the author is saying here, then Venus should be abandoned because even if NASA was able to study it, there is obviously no way that the planet will ever be suitable to live on. The author's arguments so far have all been a lost cause.\n\nThe author does explain that Venus may have been previously similar to Earth-like conditions, including oceans to support forms of life. He states that it has similar features to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters. While this may be too, Venus has come a long way in that it is no longer able to sustain life. Even if it previously was similar to Earth, that means that it has gotten worse over time, which says that from here on, it will continue to grow worse.\n\nProven by the author, Venus's conditions are far too extreme for the technology we have today. This planet is increasingly too dangerous to be explored, therefore the research toward it should be abandoned, and pushed more toward studying other plants, or even other solar systems in order to find another sutiable planet for humans to comfortably live on.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What you gonna do after high school is an important decision inactivity. Most students would go to a prep faculty because they have confidence in it is the most appropriate measure to success in growth. However, others believe getting straight to a career, learning in practice and gaining some experience is a more accurate move to advancement. This essay will discuss both views.\n\nOn the one hand, studying at an educational institution will give you \n\nthat security you have a knowledge of the position of employment and the certificate will prove you know how to do the situation. It becomes clear over time that employers will choose people who are well-educated individuals rather than other less-educated people for high positions. For example, 86% of the students who pass the prep institute got an assignment after graduation. It entails going to an educational institution is an accurate approach to advancing in one's career.\n\nOn the other hand, not everyone thinks of this action . Some individuals assume the academy is the waste of time and not necessary to go to. And will say attending an educational institution and spending 4 years on learning along with reading unnecessary loads of books that you might forget or not even use of them is a useless thing to do. Those who got a position right after school become more experienced and tend to achieve more in the heart. For example, there is a lot of case of people who were working and reached more along with gaining valuable lesson, while others still learning at the academy.\n\nIn conclusion, the educational association is an accurate and understandable use to reach more in the heart. But being gainfully employed can give you an important lesson that leads to success.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars are a good idea. These kinds of cars could help with every day chores and even getting kids to school right on time. Even if some states deny what a driverless car can do, that does not mean that they should not be tested.\n\nOne of the perks of driverless cars is automated taxis and buses. With taxis and buses being automated we could set up specific routes on specific days, to ensure people are getting to and from work. These automated vehicles can also take the fastest route to get you to your detination without using much gas.\n\nWhen we automae driverless cars people will no longer need to purchase a car, because the driverless taxis and buses can get you there faster than you can yourself. Without having to buy a car we would have enough money to pay for college and other important items. If you cannot afford to ride a taxi or bus then it should be put on a tab that you have to pay by the end of the year or you soend time in jail.\n\nSome people are very stressed out before work or school. Automated driverless cars could help releive stress by letting the passenger relax until they arrive at their destination. The taxis and buses could potentially avoid traffic jams by taking alternate routes to get to the destination.\n\nIf a tire pops or the engine starts to fail the driverless car will pull off the side of the rode and call rode-side assistance. The car can also sense if a child is uncomfortable in the seats adjustment, So the car can automatically adjust the seat to comfort the child. Also if the car itself malfunctions you could hit the emergeny stop button which will give the passenger control of the car.\n\nThese were my eight reasons for saying hat automated vehicles should not be banned.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if your city had a car free day? Or what if they banded the use of cars because they caused too much polution? Not using cars can be a big advantage not only to us but to our world, our oxygen. Not using cars can really make a big difference.\n\nOne disadvantage of driving cars is that they can cause smog in the atmosphere and polute our oxygen. In\n\nParis Bans\n\nDriving due to Smog by Robert Duffer, that is exactly what happened. It says that \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the ar of the global city\" (10). That was a smart thng to do because cars are the main reason our air is poluted. There are many solutions to our air being poluted like not using cars when its not necessary or getting hybrid cars that can save gas and the money in your pocket.\n\nPeople actually lke the idea of not having to drive cars. You wont have to pay for gas as often, you can just ride a a bike or walk like these people did in the excerpt ,\n\nIn German\n\nSuburb, Life Goes On Without Cars by Elisabeth Rosenthal. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" (3) Some people like the idea of not having to always stress about their car but other people think differently and want to depend on their car to take them places.\n\nWhat if you absolutely need your car and you ahve no other form of transportation? Maybe having a car is a nessecity to some people. \"...generation will start buying more cars once thaey have kids to take to take to soccer practice and school plays...\" (42). Once people start seeing that they need a car then they will have to use their car and of course wll polute our atmosphere.\n\nWhether you chose to use a car or not we still have to take care of our enviroment. Recycling counts and so does not littlering, but at the end of the day its our choice if we want to actually help our enviroment and make a difference to our atmosphere.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The claim of the idea is about the challenge of exploring venus.\n\nHE TALKING ABOUT THE PLANET OF VENUS, SAYS THAT VENUS AND EARTH IS SIMILAR BUT THERE DIFERENCES BECAUSE IN VENUS NUMEROUS FACTORS CANTRIBUTE TO VENUS'S REPUTATION AS A CHALLENGIN PLANET FOR HUMANS TO STUDY, DEPITE ITS PROCIMITY TO US.\n\nSOMEONE HUMANS HAS ONE PARTYCULARY COMPELLING IDEA FOR SENDING HUMANS TO STUDY VENUS.\n\nSOME SIMPLIFIED ELECTROCNICS MADE OF SILICON NOT CAN HAVE BEEN TESTED IN A CHAMBER SIMULATUING THE CAOS VENUS'S SURFRACE AND HAVE LASTED FOR THREE WEEKS IN SUCH CONDITION.\n\nTHE NASA TALK ABOUT A WORK ON ANOTHER SPROACHES TO STUYING VENUS.\n\nVENUS HAS VALUE NOT ONLY BECAESE OF THE INSIGTH TO BE GAINED ON THE PANET ITSELF.\n\nAN EXPLATION OF EVIDENCE FROM THE ARTICULE IS A THICK ATMOSPHERE OF ALMOSTS 97 PERCET,, ON THE PLANET'S SURFACE, TEMPERATURES AVERANGE OVER 800 DEGREES.\n\nTHE CONCLUSION IS THAT THE HUMANS NOT CAN SURVIVE IN VENUS THOUGH ABOVE ARE SIMILARES.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring other planets sounds fun right? Well exploring planets like venus poses a big risk. With the atmosphere being mostly carbon dioxide and the the surface temperature being over 800 degrees, why would NASA want to keep visiting the planet even though it is a hazardous trip?\n\nThe planet Venus is Earth's sister planet but it has many differences from our planet itself. Venus' planet surface is 800 degrees farenheit and the clouds are made of sulfuric acid, which are two very dangerous features. The pressure is also 90 times greater and the planet experiences volcanoes that erupt, earthquakes, and various lightining strikes. All of this aside it is believed that the planet was the most Earthlike compared to all of the other planets. It is said that it was covered in oceans and now it still has craters, valleys, and mountains. Meaning that life on Venus could have been supported long ago.\n\nExploring the planet doesn't sound easy given all of the circumstances. NASA has come up with some ideas on how humans can get a closer look of venus without being harmed in the process. They thought about a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the fray\" so that humans could get close enough to the surface without touching it (paragraph 5). The soloar power there would be enough and the radation wouldn't be worse than Earth's at 30 miles above. \"...some simpified electronics made of silicon carbide...\" some electronics have been tested and put in simulators that recreate Venus' atompshere and they have lasted for up to 3 weeks (paragraph 7).\n\nIn conclusion the planet Venus has many hazardous risks ranging from the atmospheric pressure to the sulfuric acid inside of the clouds. NASA has worked on many ways to try and get humans down into the planet to observe it. The many ways NASA has tried is only getting them closer. Even though it sounds fun to explore a planet but with the risks, it is better to not explore some of the planets becasue of the many risks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although knowing the computer screen can read every muscle in the face, technology like the Facial Action Coding System should be a definite go to in the classroom. The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) can \"calculate\" emotions of humans by \"[constructing] a 3-D computer model of the face\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 3). Technology like the Facial Action Coding System should be a definite go to in the classroom. Being able to recognize students emotions could lead to better grades, more involvement in school, more help to produce happier students, and a healther school enironment.\n\nOne issue a lot of students have with schoolwork is they are not interested in the topic, so they do not want to do it. Many kids are more fond of doing work that fits their likeness then some boring lesson. With FACS, the lesson could morph to just that, \"just like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 6). This could potentially cause students to work more efficiently, getting better grades then ever before. Technology like the FACS can also \"recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 6). If a student is confused, the computer can then intruct them how to correctly do the acitivity, which could then help the student get a higher grade.\n\nMany schools today are starting to distribute computers for each individual student to use them for school. As this shows, technology is definitley hit a piece of everyday life. Having something like FACS could be the way to really finally connect the computer to the student. Students with lessons at school morphed more to the way they prefer to learn could cause more involvement. Students interacting more in school to lead to many things; grades higher (as noted in the first paragraph), testing scores higher, students actually wanting to go to school, etc. Having computers get the students more help and more involved would even help the teachers focus more on the activites that are most important.\n\nOn a serious level, bullying is an issue at many schools. Although some do not have to encounter it, many do. Some even take their lives because of it. Many teachers at schools could be missing the signs of a depressed student. With FACS, this could be the way to then get the teachers to notice and reach out to help. Technology like this has a good chance of lowering the suicide rate if it can help teachers reach out to the saddened students. Helping those kids could then lead to finding the bully, lowering the bully rate. Of course, it is known that children are children. It will not end bullying, but any amount of lowering the rate will be helpful.\n\nAll in all, the Facial Action Coding System should be programed in students computers across the globe. With technology that can even identify \"mixed emotions\" like shown in the Mona Lisa by Leonardo Da Vinci, school could definitely benefit for the students. Being able to recognize students emotions could lead to better grades, more involvement in school, healthier school environments, and possibly producing happier students. The more the school can improve for the students with technology, the better the children will be for the future to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should come and participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. There is alot of intresting stuff to do there. So just read a few facts that will make you want to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program.\n\nWe get to take care of stuff like \" The horses, young cows, and mulces that were shipped overseas.\" You get to go to many diffrent places. We get to go to an \" excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal.\" We get to help lots of people that need it. It takes a long time to go over the Oceans. \" It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern cost of United States and a month to get to China. You have alot of stuff to do to keep you busy. If you get hurt you will still get to do some fun stuff. \" Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass by the time.\"\n\nSo you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. It is a lot fun and there is a lot to do. We need you. Now do you want to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the facial action coding system in school systems would be very useful. FACS could help with child development, produce more effective teaching methods, and help students in general\n\nChild development is one way that this coding system could help. If we were teaching basic emotions by making faces and seeing what the system picks up, students could better understand the improtance of body language and facial expression. Dr.Huang explains in \"making mona lisa smile,\" that \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\"\n\nanother way the FACS could be valuable in a classroom setting is helping teachers keep students interested. by using computer programs to teach lessons and using this system, teachers can figure out which programs make students happy or make them bored. As stated by Dr. Huang th computer could : recognized when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" then the lesson could be modified to help said student.\n\nfinally, the prgram could help school faculty to figure out when a student is having problems. if the system is used through class computers school wide, staff could see if students were feeling in a negative way and help them through whatever maybe causing the sadness or anger such as death of a family member or bullying.\n\nthe facial action coding system is very valuable and would be put to exceptional use in the classroom setting.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not agree that the face on Mars was made by aliens for a couple of reasons. The reason one because nobody has found life on Mars Only samples that they can never find to be true. Another reason for my disagreement is because even if there were some aliens that made that face the government wouldn't leak that information to the public because that is something they would call classified just to keep everybody from going insane. I also disagree because in paragragh seven when they flew over Cydonia for the first time on April 5,1998 they said that there was no alien monument after all. From my understanding what the last paragrah is saying is it is just a landform not created by aliens just made by land such as dirt,dust,mud or whatever is on that planet. Also in the three pictures that look like they are changing every year they took the pictures so maybe Mars has storms which causes the dirt or dust to shift or move around I mean u wouldn't say the aliens know what time the scientist take the pictures so the change the look of the face that would be outragoues. The last reason for me thinking that the face is a landform and it was not created by aliens is because it clearly states in the reading that they found out it was just a \"messa brutte\" which is a landform so that gives the answer right there. This is why I degree with whoever says that aliens formed the face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author presents the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, by telling us that we can gain even more motivation to uncover more hidden secrets. The author is very passionate about space, but in particular Venus is of interest. The planet Venus is very interesting. Despite Venus being right next to Earth, we don't know too much about it.\n\nThe weather, and other bad conditions on the planet, prevent people from being able to explore Venus. The author also talks about NASA and how it is working on making some sort of device to help explore the planet. With all the bad conditons that Venus has, the planet can not have pictures or videos taken. Researchers cannot take samples of rocks or gas because of the bad conditions the planet has. This is what leads people to want to know more about something even if the risks are high.\n\nThe article states in the last paragraph, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This tells us that even though the dangers in studying something does exist, we should try everything possible to answer the questions that we might have. Finding the answer to peoples questions will lead people to more questions, and that is a good thing.\n\nIn the end, all questions have value within them. FInding out and studying the things that people don't know will help better understand things. Even though their are risks present, being able to figure things out is even more important.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Formal schooling for the young is of immense significance for a country’s socio-economic development, however, some people are convinced that more money should be allocated for educating illiterate adults. I agree with this view to some extent and will analyse the issue in the following essay.\n\nOn the one hand, government budgets in many countries, particularly in under-developed and developing nations, are limited. Therefore, if more funding is spent on improving adult literacy rates, the education of children and adolescents may suﬀer as a consequence of less funding. Eventually, maintaining a suitable level and quality of education, for both children and illiterate adults, may become an impossible task with limited funding, possibly negatively aﬀecting the education of both groups.\n\nHowever, due to a decrease in the number of blue-collar jobs, thanks to automatic processes, a large number of illiterate adults who work in such positions are being made redundant, and therefore increasing the unemployment rate due to their lack of literacy skills when searching for other types of work. This situation not only reduces the standard of living for many people, but is also an underlying motive for a rise in social problems, such as crime, homelessness, and poverty. Providing formal schooling to adults who cannot read or write proves to be a useful measure to reduce the negative consequences that may occur in a society with high levels of adult illiteracy.\n\nIn conclusion, state funding may not allow an adequate amount of money for the education of both the youth and adults to take eﬀect. However, I still believe that if more money is spent on educating illiterate adults, social welfare in such regions will benefit tremendously.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The moode author memoir happines He states growing around envirnorment gave sence family says house felt lik cuba He whole family respected others Thats authors moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars. You see them in movies, you joke around about them and\n\nsome people even see them as an actual thing in the future. Cars that drive by themselves all they need is a human to be alert in case something happens. It has everything from comfortable seats and entertainment systems. Its uncertain to be entirely safe, its most likely going to be very expensive and lastly, its just lazy. Having driverless cars is absolutely NOT a good idea.\n\nI know it sounds awesome, a car that can drive itself?! That seems IMOSSIBLE. I mean who wouldn't want to just sit in a car and just wait to get to your destination? But I disgaree with the idea even though its genious. The idea of the car isn't entirely safe. Studies show that its been driven about half a million times, without a crash. Well thats most likely just a few people on the road, but driveless cars will be ALL OVER THE WORLD if approved by the law. There absolutely no way that you're not going to get in an accident. What if the car suddenly breaks down out of nowhere? Technology does seem to do that very often. And a car breaking down in the middle of where ever you're at isn't only dangerous for you, but for everyone around you.\n\nCan you imagine how much money it costs to build those cars? Now imagine how much they'll be when you buy them, ecspecially when companies like Mercedes-Benz, Audi and BMW are making them, normal cars alone are very expensive. We shouldn't be spending on money on building stuff we can already do ourselves, drive. Also, when it breaks dwn, which it will eventually, it will be extremly expensive to repair. It might even take a long period of time to fix and not everyone has that time, not everyone has that money either.\n\nLaziness. I'm not saying its entirely a bad thing, lazy people invented most of the stuff we use today. Think about it, lazy people made washing machines because they were tired of washing clothes, and then on top of that they made a dryer. The laziest people even built cars! They were tired of walking so they invented them for faster and easier transportation. Theres a specific amount of lazy you can get and driverless cars is the absolute laziest. I mean just sitting in the car waiting for your turn to drive while the CAR drives you? Thats crazy! If you can drive your own self then why expect a car to do it for you, it was built for YOU driving it. Also, entertainment systems in the car while you wait for your turn to drive? Not only is it distracting but the driver will be so focused on whatever they're doing they're not going to want to drive. So they'll be more focused on the show while driving becausse they think \"oh well its driveless, so it will keep me from getting to an accident if I get way too distracted\" then they end up in an life or death situation because they thought was ok to be on the entertainment divces in the car while they're lives and everybody elses life are at risk.\n\nTheres so many things wrong with this idea. It doesn't matter how many people approve it, its still very unsafe, expensive and is an extremely lazy act. They built cars to take YOU places, where YOU control the wheel, where YOU'RE responsible for whatever is to happen, now who is there going to be to blame when something does go wrong? You or the car? You can't expect everything to be done for you. I really hope this doesn't become legal, I hope they change their minds and just drop the entire idea. Driveless cars should definately NOT be the future it should be just a bad decsion in the past.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These many advancements computer technology people people In ill You spend less time exercising ll gain weight Spend less time enjoying nature means youre lost anything natural spend less time friends family probbaly prove saying computer bad thing much certaintly First spend less time exercising nt exrcise gain weight could stuff could risk health This bad thing anymore goes far ca nt even move So sounds scary plan time computer nt happen time limited waste stuff computers think go computer maybe go jog outside Next spend less time playing nature Nature beautiful destroyed nothing There hundred maybe said us truly help environment think hundred thousand people alot people earth Its crying shame see something beautiful die us nothing help Finaly spend less time friends family This important reason The main course family important best friends whole wide world Your friends important Your family might leave life computer carfully Your friends dust important friends make laugh good times cheer upset Just nt forget gone Well three reasons work computer sound like good reasons lets recap shall First spend less time exersing important Next spend less time enjoying nature important Finaly less time friends family important So hoped enjoyed essay ve learned something So remember much good thing bad I ll leaveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Techonolgy that does not need a person to help or navigate it is being discovered and used in the modern day world today. Driverless cars are things that would greatly help our society in many different ways. I am one who agrees that driverless cars should be allowed with guarented safety for all. However, many states have banned even to test a computer-operated car anywhere. Althought this discovery would help solve many problems on the roads that drivers face.\n\nMany accidents have acured on roads, espically if an individual was drinking and apperating a car. The individual has no control over his actions or what he is doing at the moment stepping into the car. The car may be operated by the indivdual at first, but would soon take over sensing the problems. It would take control of the vehicle and safetly navigate it to its destination, without any accidents. This would cause less accidents on the roads and almost complete safety to drivers around them.\n\nWhen an accident occurs most people driver themselves or the injured to the hopsital for help. The hospitals are able to help them, but sometimes they are not able to do a thing about it. The driverless cars would help ensure that most people get help for loved ones or themselves. While, the car is driving they are able to stop the bleeding or keep the victim conconsions. This would save the lives of millions of people and children. The driverless car would create a faster way to get help for an individual.\n\nThere are times when a peron is running late to an important meeting and does not have time for usual day things. When the driverless car an individual does not have to worry about starting to warm up in the winter, it would be automatic. They would be more concered with getting ready and being prepared for work or school. It would give a bit more time and less worry to someone, who owns a driverless care. Then soon the indivduals would be on their way to contine the day\n\nThe driverless cars may do many things that can help us grealty in the modern world. It would not just be a thing that is advanced, but it may save or help many people. It's sensors can detect different things and should be allowed to be legal and tested. The develpers in Californa, Florida, Nevada, and ect. have begun to allow using semi-autonomous cars. I think it is time that something that is safe and advanced to be on the roads.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez created mood happiness joyfulness Narciso Rodriguez creates mood showing generosity parents towards son family friends I also feel another mood Narciso expresses loveiI say parents sacrifice everything wanted better Life son The faith struggle lead children better times dove endure hard times In quote love Narciso s parent s new better life would need sacrifice thirs That feel love mood protrayed memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph provides closure Saeng story Saeng upset fact failed test towards end story realizes things happen sometimes control happens youve also got pick happens knocks When seeing geese hibiscus realizes everyone everything adapt something new time Saeng might failed driving test drive differently Vietnam adopt way drive along rule laws This author concludes paragraph waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, teenagers are supported to do the community work in their free time which is made some people think that youngsters should not get a wage from this kind of job. And this might be beneficial for them. From my judging, I believe that people should get paid whatever the job is.\r\n\r\nFirstly, doing the community work without pay might teach young adults about sharing and caring but it would be better if they earn what they have done. Some rewards can teach them to know how to manage money as well. Furthermore, this might be the opportunity for them to find their pathway about what to do in the future such as social worker, teacher or career that be relevant.\r\n\r\nSecondly, as I mentioned earlier, everybody needs to be paid when it is working. Even it is community work or charity stuff, there is a lot of costs that have been devoted. For instance, they need to give their time to taking care of children with special needs, elders, disabilities or they have spent their time studying about working methods carefully. Obviously, there are expenses for travelling to the workplace.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, teenagers who do community work without money returns might get benefits in some way but they can do this kind of effort with the reward and still be heartwarming. In the future, the school should provide some extra points for them and it might encourage them to be interested in social work and would love to help people more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After World War II many countries have beebn left in ruins and in need of supplies. To help these countries in need, 44 nations joined together and formed the UNRRA. The UNRRA Hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to go overseas and help deliver supplies to the other countries.\n\nAs a Seagoing Cowboy it is your job to take care of the horses, young cows, mules, and other animals kept aboard the ship that are being brought overseas to the countries in need.\n\nIt will take about 2 weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean and about 1 month to cross the Pacific 0cean.\n\nCaring for the animals will keep you very busy, they will have to be fed and watered about 2-3 times a day.\n\nThe animals foods will have to be brought up from the lower holds of the ship and their stalls had to be cleaned. Besides just takijng care of animals and helping people you will have the added benefit of seeing places like Venice, Italy or Greece or other places.\n\nIt wont be just all hard work you will be able to see places you might have not seen before. On the way back there is plenty of fun to be had, like play games where the animals were held. You will be grateful for taking the opportunity ot do this, it hopefuly will make you more aware of the people in other countries and their needs. It will surely open up the world to you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are useful but in a way can be very dangerous. Those type of cars are like robots and have sensors. Driverless cars may seem helpful at first but what if they malfunction? They can forget to do what they were built to do. Like warn you when you are about to bump into something or if your driving to fast. It's better to use your own brain and control your own car, intstead of letting smart cars control themselves. Crashes can happen if your not paying attention, and you loose attntion on the road because you think your driverless car is helping you.\n\nDriverless cars may seem helpful and cool but they can also put you in great harm if you don't have control of the steering wheel. Like the article said the driverless cars have a antilock brake, what if the brakes jam or stop working? Those cars also have sensors. What if the sensors stop working and if it's a driverless car, why would you want to drive a car that can drive on its own? You would get tired of letting the car drive on its own. It's much safer to drive your own car instead of letting a robot like car to drive for you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is not a worthy pursuit. There are too many factors involved in studying this planet and lives could be lost. Losing lives over science and research\n\nis just not worth it.\n\nIn paragraph one the authors states how \"Each previous mission [to Venus] was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" If a machine can't even handle the conditions, why let a human try to? In paragraph 3, the author explains the conditions and why Venus inhospitable. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" In addition to this the author states \"Even more challenging are the could of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Temperatures average 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" These conditions could kill anyone instantly. Sending anyone to Venus is too much of a risk and would most likely be a suicide mission.\n\nHowever, there is an upside to exploring Venus. The author discusses the idea of hovering over Venus to avoid these dangerous conditions. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" Hovering over Venus could be a solution, although \"researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" Researchers can't take photography or videography of Venus either because \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Exploring Venus just doesn't seem like an option at all due to all the obstacles.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is not a worthy pursuit despite all the dangers. The evidence above further argues and emphasizes that going to and exploring Venus is not worth it. Losing a life or lives just to explore a planet is not worth it. Hopefully, in the future when scientists and researchers create the necessary tools and equipment to explore Venus, we can and will.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida State Senator,\n\nEvery 4 years, many people vote for a president they think will lead the United States to greatness; some, however, don't know that they are voting for the Electoral College to vote on their choise. This act of using the Electoral College is, by definition, not democratic. Didn't our founding fathers create this country promising democracy and people representation? They did, and that is why the Electoral College must crumble. Florida State Senator, we need to change how our country votes on its leader; we need to use popular vote for the president of the United States because this method is more democratic, the people representing the Electoral College are flawed humans, and the nature of this type of election forces some states to be ignored. Florida State Senator, you must take action against the flawed Electoral College!\n\nBecause of the function of the Electoral College, the people aren't truly represented for. According to Source 2, the voters--the ones supposedly voting for our new president--vote for a group of electors instead. Due to the power of the Electoral Colleg, electors can vote for any candidate. This process we have every 4 years is truly un-democratic. For example, during the 2000 election, Al Gore was the candidate with the most popular votes--this meant that the majority of the citizens of the U.S. wants him to be president. However, Al Gore lost since the majority of electors from the Electoral College voted him. Lastly, in the case of a time, the lection will truly be un-democratic; the House of Representatives will have to choose the new president. The people may allow continued usage of the imperfect Electoral College, but there is still one major problem: the Electoral College is made up of flawed, easily manipulated humans.\n\nAccording to Source 1, the electors are made up of people chosen by the candidate's political party. Immediately, these electors can easily decide on the candidate to vote on; it's just the matter of the amount of electors each candidate has. Also, the electors are human beings, and everyone knows that humans are flawed creatures. According to Source 2, electors have been replaced to be against the opposing candidate or wait until the last minute to vote. Although, according to Source 3, the electors are chosen and are given trust, others can still influence them. Candidates or even political parties can influence the electors to vote for their chosen person. Lastly, Florida State Senator, the nature of the Electoral College forces some states to be ignored.\n\nFlorida State Senator, as you may know, the candidate for presidency usually go to the \"swing\" states to win \"the people's\" vote. People, however, from the non-swing states are generally ignored. During the 2000 election, 17 states weren't even able to see a candidate they are voting for the title of president. Although it is understandable that candidates go to the \"swing\" and populous states, there is no excuse for ignoring thousands of people from the small states. The president of the United States is the president for an entire country, not just a region of it. Voters from the non-swing states will still want to see the candidate to decide on who to vote for, even though they aren't voting for the actual candidate. The Electoral College is imperfect and un-democratic!\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College and its electors must be disbanded so that popular vote will be used in determining the new president of the United States. According to both Source 2 and 3, the process of voting a group of people to vote for you is un-democratic. Electors, the people making up th Electoral College, can be manipulated and coerced into voting a specific candidate. Lastly, non-swing states will be ignored; this will anger and frustrate them since not one candidate tried to persuade them. Florida State Senator, you must, in the best of your ability and then some, try to topple down the un-democratic roots of the Electoral College. The people, the ones who must truly decide on the president, will be immensely greatful towards you; in a 2000 poll, 60% of the voters even stated that they want a popular-vote type of election. Florida State Senator, I implore to you, abolish the Electoral College in the same manner as with slavery. Many people will thank you!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am aganist the development of driverless cars for many of reasons thats a bad choice for people to agree to aproved this. The purpose of driverless cars is bad idea just without thinking it I already know its going to cause some problems. As for one reason what if theres a sitution where the car doesn't know how to respond to the type of sitution. Second reason what if the car has a issue that can indanger your life , third reason driverless cars can increse many people grow obeasted.\n\nThey said that the cars knows some situtions that could happen but theres of things that could go wrong. What if theres something that some traffic works for got to put a sign will the car know not to avoid it no it will not know. Say if you told your car to take you to a place maybe the cars GPS could go wrong it could take you somewhere you might know of. What if there was a fire nearby and your car wasn't programed to avoid fires.\n\nWhat if you told your car a command but doesn't respond then your stuck trying to frigure out the problem.Say if the car took you a wrong turn but you tried to tell it to stop but doesn't your gonna have to wait so it can finsh its distenation. Another command you might tell yout car to do was to give u control of the car but it doesn't let you have control what im trying to say your car now has 100% control.\n\nDriverless cars is bad for your health theres many reasons why. Ok one many people are going to take advantage of the cars by not walking or just taking the car everyday. That doesn't seem healthy its more like making people more lazy than they are today. These cars is just making a loop hole for people that can't walk to many place thats something to understand but for those people that can chosen not to. So I say let the people that can't drive that actually need these cars not those who use it for no reason other than being lazy.\n\nThe Driverless cars is a great idea but maybe they should revise it before they make it for everyone. Also they should make sure that the car should respond to commands and know all the situtions that could happen in everyday lives of people with these cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story determined succeed She misses homeland everything gardens grandparents etc For example walked flowershop smells flowers like used back home She smelled flower reminded grandmothers long gray hair freshly washed But saying last sentence said hibiscus budded next winter take test failedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been something that movies and tv has shown throughout the years. Wouldn't having driverless cars be a great addition to the society and the world around us? Having these cars could bring many positive effects, and could even cause less crashes, helping the death rate lower. Driverless cars could reduce speeding, crashes, and they could also even advance in computer software, making driverless cars more safe than having a human driver driving. Driverless cars should be developed in the near future.\n\nDriverless cars could reduce speeding, and wrecks. According to the article, \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Also, \"Manufacturers are considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road, the car watches the driver.\" These cars could keep us safe. By using this technology, we should not be scared to get in the car, and be distracted by our phone.\n\nAnother thing driverless cars could do is reduce the amount of deaths from drunk driving. If a driverless car could drive someone who is not sober, wouldn't that be safer than having someone who is not sober on the road driving. How many deaths are caused every year from drunk driving? Well, having these driverless cars could reduce that problem.\n\nIn addition, technology is arising in the world today. According to the article, \"In the 1980's, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creaation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out- of- control skids or rollovers.\" Also, \"In 2013, BMW announced the developement of \"Traffic Jam\n\nAssistant\". The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25mph.\" \"The cars can steer, accelerate and even brake on themselves.\" If the technology has come this far today, wouldn't the technology advance in the future, but better?\n\nSome people might disagree and say \"Why would we want a driverless car if its not completely driverless?\" Well, with the technology going at the rate it is today, it wont be a problem in the future. Also, in paragraph 7 it says, \"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" This shows, that the car can drive by itself, but to keep everyone safe, it uses precautions, and had the driver help out with making simple duties. \"It is a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\"\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should be developed in the near future. They can help reduce the amount of wrecks, lower the death rate, and they can be a fun, new addition to the world today. These cars have many positives, and should be allowed to be distributed by manufacturers. Having these cars just means having a safer world today.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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