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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this cutting-edge era public face a lot of health risks and diseases behind this situation some people say that government should focus more on reducing environmental problems and household problems. In my point of view , there are other factors that also affect people's health. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will precise more and then give appropriate conclusion to this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, human face more problems than past era due to bad environmental conditions that lead various health disasters such as flu, cough, heart problem, stress among all ages people even small children as well suffer from the disease. Governments have the responsibility to take care of their citizen and provide them healthy environment. Apart from this authority, it should make rules and low for those who harm environment and pollute it. What is more? note only the environment but also housing is one of the other concerning issue people have no clean water in their homes more ever they have not much space for leaving that also in engenders.\r\n\r\nTo be more precise, there are some other factors as well; stress levels in floks also increase due to their unorganised nature and lack of sleep during the night and more frequent usage of phone and computer systems. Apparently, all citizens faced cutthroat competition from their counterparts as a result their struggles and difficulties are increased day by day. Additionally, being unemployed they face difficulties for their survival and unemployment also leads poverty among young people then they feel inferior. Adding more information, people's lifestyles are known more flexible so they have not much time for exercise that also lead illnesses such as obesity. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, not only environmental and housing problems in people's lives but there are other reasons as well governments should focus on all these factors properly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet Venus may be one of our most valuable assets to understand our planet, but Venus has some dangers we cannot ignore. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author does a good job of suggesting that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers by explaining the value of exploring Venus, the dangers, and how the dangers may be overcome.\n\nVenus is very similar to Earth, sharing approximate densities and sizes. The planet also shares geographical features with Earth, such as rocky sediment, craters, and mountains. It is possible that hundreds of years ago Venus really might have been the twin planet to Earth. Astronomers have reason to beleive that Venus was home to oceans and various life forms. If we learn more about this planet, we could find the key to unlock the knowledge of how our home planet works. This supports the author's claim that we must study Venus further by providing reasons knowledge of Venus would directly affect everyday life on Earth.\n\nThe author also uses the possible dangers of exploring Venus to explain why we must pursue Venus, through all the challenges. Venus has a heavy atmosphere of mostly carbon dioxide, making it impossible for humans to breathe freely on the planet. The pressure on Venus is so great that a person would be crushed, not to mention the extreme temperatures over eight hundred degrees Fahrenheit. It would be impossible for an astronaut to explore on the planet's surface without proper technology. Adding to the already intense conditions, Venus has volcanoes, eartquakes, and frequent lightning, which present their own problems. The dangers help prove the author's point that even though dangerous, we must explore Venus.\n\nThe author describes possible solutions created by NASA to show that it will be possible to explore Venus, even with the dangers. NASA has proposed an idea of humans studying Venus from a vehicle hovering the planet, but this would not be optimal because the exploration would be very limited. Viewing Venus from thirty feet above would be better than no exploration at all and would create livable conditions, so it is a relatively safe option for gathering knowledge on the planet. Another idea is using mechanical computers on Venus. The computers can make calculations, without electronics. These computers are also more likely to withstand the extreme conditions of Venus, unlike modern computers. No plan can be one hundred percent safe, especially in a danger zone like Venus, but the benefits outweigh the risks. The author does a proficient job of portraying this in the article.\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author presents the idea that Venus should be studyed intently, despite the risks. The author does a good job of explaining this by telling how we could benefit from knowledge of Venus, telling the dangers, and solutions to overcome the dangers of Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, the author talks about how the Facial Action Coding system works by analyzing the movement of facial muscles to enterprate human emotion. This kind of technology would be useful in many situations, especially in a classroom setting. Schools can use this system to further understand the needs of students and find more effective ways to teach, based on the way a student feels. Kids that are too shy to speak their minds about a subject and ask for help could really benefit from this innovation. It allows for administrators and teachers to help out a child that looks confuzed in a subject.\n\nThe article states that \"A classroom computer could recognized when a students is confuzed or bored\". This allows for the computer program to modify the lesson in a way to create a more effective way of teaching.\n\nBecuase it can detect when a student is bored, it could also make the lesson more fun for the kids. This creates a postive stigma towards learning new things which build confidence and motivation. If more schools started using this technology, we would see a rise in test scores and attendance. This is true because more kids would want to learn.if it means that they are having fun while doing it.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is very useful in terms of creatng a better school environment for kids. It would detect things such as confusion or boredom which the schools can use to change the way kids learn for the better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day girl really wanted go school shoping hade wait mother said dont get money got later mom said wait tell latter new stuff room mom get back said going go mom said go get jacket upstairs room went upstairs get jacket went room saw new cloths five pere new shoews hade scream came stairs told mom thank said welcome mom said I told I going get stuff said wait payshentSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist depending setting much skill need Like going hill really need know control bike If going mountain lots bumps need skill Usually riding shady area wear clothes keep cool But going sun need wear light clothes The setting affects rider muchSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they state postive and negative things about driverless cars, driverless cars are not a good part of our future. Driverless cars can be dangerous and they are not as dependable as peole might think they are. Cars that can drive themselves may malfunction and cause a wreck, and get people hurt. Driverless cars are not a good part of our future.\n\nDriverless cars are not yet fully driverless. The text states \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\". The driverless car still needs human control when navigating through work zones and accidents. Humans need to stay aware at all time while this driverless car is at work. The driverless car is not dependable for human beings to do something else while in the car.\n\nDriverless cars are a waste of our time because humans still want the thrill of driving a car. Young adults are excited to get thier license and drive out on the open road.These people want to experince driving by themselves and depending on only themselves. Humans would not fully trust a driverless car, because they would trust themselves more going on familar roads than a robot taking them a different route. Driverless cars would be taking away our freedom to go where ever we please. People would not keep their full attention on the road if they knew a driverless car was driving them, they would wonder off into space and not focus on the road. Driverless cars are taking away our right to drive.\n\nHaving a driverless cars mean relying fully on technology. Technology can fail and leave you stranded on an unfamiliar road. The text states \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine\". Driverless cars could freeze up and not do the right action they were supposed to do. These cars could break at the wrong time and cause a major life threating accident. Depending on technology alone is very risky, human beings would not have anything else to rely on, except for themselves alone. Human beings depending on technology alone is a very dangerous concept.\n\nHowever driverless cars can be a good thing for the human race. Driverless cars could prevent less accidents and wrecks from happening. These cars could be the future for people to get more down while they are in the car, but driverless cars need a lot of work and improvement before any human being with a license can go out and buy a vehicle like this. Driverless cars could be a improvement to the enviroment, by cutting down on the gas they use. Driverless cars can also be a good thing.\n\nOverall having a driverless car is a dangerous and wreckless thing to buy. Driverless cars are not dependable. Humans like their freedom on the road and enjoy driving their own automobile. People would lose the excitment of first getting a car and license if they didn't have to work for it. Driverless cars are to technology based and could malfunction easily. Driverless cars are not a good part of our future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Saeng hibiscus plant similar comes adapting surrounding plant keep continuing like Saeng test But I know says Then I take test again saying saying thrive like hibiscus plant So conclusion really much like plant continue many seasons come also adapt changes like hibiscusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patients something everybody In order someone patient understand tolerate things might hard I one people Patients sort gift It takes time patients always hurry For example one time I heard someone talking basement So I went see house I walking I heard giggling excitement I kept walking I heard voices coming behind door I went open I saw kinds gifts I saw two people mom dad They hurried closed door told go stairs So I ran stairs tell brothers I saw They excited everything The next day went I could wait next day So I waitedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses are always want to make good revenue, but it is common nowadays that peoples are expecting them to contribute to society. I strongly agree with the idea that businesses pay back to society than solely aim to make profits.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, companies need to make money to continue their businesses in this competitive era. To clarify, they need to make enough income to cover the expenses of employee salaries, rentals and utilities. Moreover, businesses also require to invest in research and innovations to improve the value of their products/services. If the organization is losing and struggling to cover the costs they may face difficulty participating in social activities or giving a helping hand to the community.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, businesses should not mainly care about making money; they should also try to take responsibility to help society. To illustrate, the company to donate a certain amount of money from their profits back to the community and participate in social activities such as fundraising to support the needs in the local community. In addition, paying the right amount of tax to the government is a way to give back to the community as this budget may use to build the improvement on healthcare systems, educations and infrastructure of the country. Furthermore, the businesses should also care about their staff well beings and helping them to have the standard quality of life by supports. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I completely agree with the idea that companies put the same efforts to make money and take the social responsibilities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im going to tell you if the facial action coding system is a good or bad idea. First the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit. Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\n\nThe facial expressions for each emotion are universal, observes Dr. Huang, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression (like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vincis masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\n\nIn fact, we humans perform this same impressive calculation every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\n\nYet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\n\nThe Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. Imagine a computer that knows when youre happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, notes Dr. Huang. So computers need to understand that, too.\n\nIn conclusion the technology to read peoples facial expressions is a great idea because the computer could help students out if they dont understand the work just by reading there faces.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Câu 1: _________ is a tour that we have to spend a lot of money with high-quality services. A.Luxury tourB. Adventure tourC. Relaxation tourD. Fun tour Câu 2: What is a game played over a large area of ground using specially shaped sticks to hit a small hard ball (a golf ball) into a series of 9 or 18 holes, using as few strokes as possible? A.taking photosB. playing golfC. doing YogaD. swimming Câu 3: What is a pamphlet with information about something? A.translatorB. exhibitionC. attractionD. brochure Câu 4: Which one is NOT a tourist attraction? A.Information officeB. castleC. botanical gardenD. waterfall Câu 5: What ‘s that pagoda _______? – Long Khanh pagoda A.understoodB. knownC. calledD. said Câu 6: In a conversation : A : Hi, do you have any free ______ of the city? B: Sorry. We don’t have any left A. maps B. manualC. cartsD. cards Câu 7: Another word for “Sightseeing on foot” is ________ A.adventure tourB. walking tourC. holidaysD. reservation Câu 8: What is a public green area in a city, used for recreation? A. art gallery B. theaterC. pond D. park Câu 9: ________ refers to all the ways of spreading information, such as newspapers, radio, television, and other means of communication. A. Front DeskB. The director C. Media D. Tour guide Câu 10: Tourist: We’re only here for one day. What ________ that we see? A.do you recommendB. you say C. do you preferD. do you wantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper Those support advances technology believe computers positive effect people I one agree Computers wonderful devices allow people ages learn world s people It allows people talk family members live far away freinds sometimes buisness associates Technology also provides education Do nt think socializing learning two important aspects everyday people Learning new things interesting actually see Books helpful defending made Internet websites gives pictures uploads almost every week Therefore know want book next visit Yes books give tons information much thousands websites right minute Want learn speak spanish look fast easy internet No need look look hundreds books get one little fact Throughout everything day chatting friends good way relax fun Whether s close friend coworker There several ways talk friends phones texting instant messaging even video chat Yes cause time away family easily say goodbye friend talk later Finally learning huge deal people today Well advanced technology found ways educate students fun way Websites colorful fun teach kids multiply read About children attached colorful objects books words So parents guardians computers arent bad re actually goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many of you people who believe in the paranormal think NASA is trying to hide that there is life on Mars. You can put your doubts to rest bacause there is multiple evidence that \"The Face of Mars\" is NOT an alien formation.\n\nAs shown in many photos of the face there are unusual shadows in this formation that do seem to appear to be a face. But there are also many formations on Earth that take the shape of faces and everyday things. \"What pictures actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West\" says Garvan, who is the chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program.\n\nAcording to Gavan when they first took the pictures of the face they were very surprised by this discovery, but later dicovered \"...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" \"it was just another Martian mesa, commom enough around Cyndonia.\" Cyndonia is an area or Mars. So, once again it has been scientifically proven that there is no alien monument or formation.\n\nThere are many pictures, blurry pictures and well taken pictures, of the The Face of Mars that show that there is no alien monument. The formation is just your every day mesa that just so happens to look like a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship around awhile lot people agree censorship lot things like telivision books magazines almost everything Some people going little bit far comes older teens There little kids nt things censored Like go see rated movie adult watch movie For little kids I think things censored young They dont need hearing bad language anything Parents also care child hears reads young Some parents nt even care see hear end getting trouble teachers say It seems like younger kids always learning bad language bad habits I think sad nt around They pick alot stuff young like role model I believe older teens like mature read book library might bad word Im sure hear time bus town They going hear anyways try stop going end hearing Books suppose help give real thing You ca nt throw books censor Everybody different opinion opinion When get certain age start mature realize bad things say I believe high school books magazines anything else nt censoredSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the self driveing car could take the died reat you to like 70% of car wreaks would me by the self dirveing.\n\nHowever the \"televtsoin and movies have long been fascinateing with cars that could drivr themself\" thats just no going to happen like whenn they start getting in to wreack with other car and smi there going to think that was nut that we start to build then that got in to many wracks.\n\n\"Lets begin by looking at which companies are making computer druven car.\" What would they do if there computer want out of the car would it shut down or would it just keep going?\n\nWhy dont we just start spending the money. How it needs to be spent than trying to make this self driveing car we could put the money in to the schools then the car we dont need the car we need schools so us kids can have a better life with out selfdirveing car.\n\nIt's like why would we just have to keep the cars we have now they are still raning\n\nthere are like 6 milling none self driveing car why do we need the self driveing car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers that are able to detect emotion would be not be helpful in classrooms. This technology would aid the fact that students, including myself will often get bored and not feel that it is neccisary to do assignments. Getting bored usually also incudes not finishing the assignment. This can tell teachers to move onto a different subject or to take a break. However this can be varied greatly by how the student is feeling overall and the amount of sleep they got the previous night.\n\nIf the student has gotten poor sleep the previous night or nights they can be in a shifted mood overall. If the student is sick or has an issue this can make them groggy or moody. This heavily depends on how accurate the computers are at detecting emotions and also given that many variables are involved. Computers that can detect emotions will replace the teachers need to be able to read emotion and tell by themselves that a break is needed or that it is getting boring.\n\nIf computers were added into schools that can detect emotions interactions with teachers would be pointless. The computer can already answer questions more than a teacher can, now knowing that computers can detect emotions is outrageous! The mechanics and pyschologists are doing the right things. Although schools are not a place for this technology. This equipment is best for the medical field and knowing the emotions of patients through depression and mental issues.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The meeting is the principal for selecting the mass big firm. I agree with this statement the interview is a reliable method.\n\nTo begin with, many reasons why a press conference is an important method for applying recruiters. First and foremost, the statement is the only method by which employers can get any ideas about the candidate's personality, and social skills and also know about her nature. In ,hearing candidates get face-to-face communication.,Also employee can judge her ability how to handle any situation ,hard work and pressure and not only ask study questions but also know about her knowledgeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think driverless cars are better than regular cars ?\n\nIf you ask me i think regular cars are better. I also think driverless cars are dangerous. Im going to give you few details why i think regular car are better and driverless cars are dangerous.\n\nMy first reason i think regular cars are better is because when driving a regular car you have to pay attention. If your car drive by itself you can lose focus and forget where you was trying to go. Its say in paragraph nine that in five different states its illegal to test computer driven cars. My last reason i like regular cars because it keeps people active.\n\nI think driverless cars are dangerous because it has way more technolgy. If driving and you car glitch and brake on it on it may cause accident. Another reason i think its dangerous is because with all that technolgy it can cause a easy fire.\n\nThose are my reasons i think regular cars are better, and driverless cars useless if you still have to put gas in it. Now write me a essay on if you think driverless cars are better then regular cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently, a great number of people want to reach their goals rapidly and instantly. From my point of view, this phenomenon is mainly affected by the technology advancement and this statement has both positive and negative aspects which I will discuss in this essay.\n\nOn the one hand, due to technological development,people are able to do approximately every type of work or exercise within a few minutes and the impact of smartphones is undeniable. Consequently, the ajority of people are using smartphones or laptops in order to do everyday tasks which phenomenon has made people’s life easier and flexible. For example, people in the past had to go to the theatre in order to buy tickets, however, nowadays it could be done online and it saves a huge amount of time. Thus, currently,people want to get things done instantly.\n\nTurning to the phenomenon of doing everything instantly, it is obvious that due to the evelopment of the technology people want to reach their goals rapidly. Therefore, in some cases,it is a positive development because people try everything to reach their goals and doing it faster is very beneficial. However, sometimes people can do something rapidly with not analyzing the quality of their work that’s why sometimes things done instantly can have bad effects.\n\nTo conclude, if the present generation wants to get everything done instantly, that is because they grew up using internet technology. While this trend is largely positive, in my opinion, over dependence on anything is bad.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Varied opinions have been put on the table when it comes to technology. However , some say that technology leads us to more complex lives and the better solution is to spend a simple life without it. In this essay , I will discuss this more in detail in paragraphs to come and explain whether I agree with the notion or disagree with it .\r\n\r\nThe first and perhaps the most important reason behind the disagreement side seems to be automation gives many chances to people to live a comfortable life . By , this I mean that many countries have the best transportation facilities which help the masses to go anywhere within a short time . Furthermore , people have mobile phones which can be helpful for buying anything online and do payments, these can save a huge amount of time as well as money because of this people do not have to travel long distances.The second reason appears to be students have the facility to learn through online classes due to the advancement of technology. For example , during covid 19 , all students did their studies online and gave exams on computers and laptops . \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , people use mainly mobile phones for doing everything such as shopping and payments . As a result , the time of walking to the shopping centre for buying and going to places for paying bills has reduced . This can lead the masses to health problems and also reduce the time of socializing with others . Moreover, people do not have enough time to relax their minds because if machinery increases day by day then employees have to work more . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion , I do not agree with the notion because technology provides many opportunities to people and it depends on us how to use.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper opinion effects computers people positive effect Three main reasons people learn cultures places people work online first reason computers positive effect people help learn cultures around world Learning cultures important people travel need know respect second reason computers positive effect people help learn places around world world Learning places important could get lost It also helps telling places famous visit third reason computers positive effect people people find jobs online Other people work online This benefits people positive way In conclusion computers positive effect people helps people learn cultures places jobs aroundSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our normal day as students we are in constant stress, for the homework or tests that we have in a day, and this can also change our emotions through the day, and this stress could also make us do things that we don't usually do. That is the reason why we need something that can know our emotions and help us to manage it.\n\nFor example, there is a student who has a lot of presure, from his house or school, from his tasks that he has to do in his home or the homework that he has to finish and tests that he has through the week. This presure can cause a lot of different changes in his mind, like lose of concentration in the class or get stuck in something. However, with the help of a program that can read the emotions of a student; the teacher can know when he has to slow-down, so the student can understand better the class or spend more time with him to teach it.\n\nAnother use for this program can be recognize if a student want to do something bad, for example, the program can read the anger or a fake smile, and this could prevent a suicide or murder. Because we have seen a lot of students doing this. We have to ensure the security of the others and know when someone needs help.\n\nThe classes that are at distance needs this too. Because the teacher don't know how the student is doing it; he is just looking at the grades. With the implemantation of this can improve all this classes, because the computer can recognize if a student is getting confused or bored; then it could modify hte lesson, like an effective human instructor.\n\nFor these reasons the students need a program that detect excatly how they feel; that can help them with studies, or know if they want to do something bad, so the persons in charge can handle this before it happen, and not just for these reasons we need there; in the future there will be more applications for this new technology that can change how we live our lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Expliring Venus,\" the author supports the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He does this by showing us the challenges Venus withholds, then gives us solutions to the problems and tells us why we should even explore Venus.\n\nFirst, he provides problems the reader might have with exploring Venus.The main problem presented is Venus' weather conditions. It is stated that \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challening are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric ascid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenhite, and the atmospheric pressure is over 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet\".\n\nWith all these problems, it would seem quite unlikely to the reader that humans would be able to effectivly explore Venus. However, the author does provide solutions to these problems. The first solution is \" a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\". Then , the author provides more ideas like \"simplified electronics made of silicon carbide\" or \"old technology called mechanical computers\".\n\nNow that the author has answered questions the reader might have about exploring a place like Venus, he shows why we should explore Venus. The main reason why we should explore Venus is that it will prepare humans for even greater and tougher challenges. The author states, \"Striving to meet the challeng presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiostity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\".\n\nIn conclusion, I belive the author does a good job of convincing the audience that Venus is worth exploring. By answering doubts the reader might have, the author is able to easily show that we most likely are able to explore places like Venus. Then the author gives a very strong reason as to why we should explore Venus at the end of his writing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our new society, numerous citizens advocate that it is better for the young to work with no payment in their free time. I assume that whereas it could be beneficial for both teenagers and the state, it could also have many problems too. Altogether, I totally agree with this statement.\r\n\r\nThere are at least two significant reasons why some people disagree with children's working. Firstly, a huge number of people believes that teenagers must concentrate on their school's lessons. To be more accurate, they claim that children should work neither in educational seasons nor in the summer. Working could contribute them to missing the chance of success in the future. For instance, students who go for a job may be undermined in their school's scores. Thereby, they must be curbed in their activities, especially working for free. Furthermore, many presume that it would be quite early for a child to take a responsibility for a job, even works with less responsibility, such as charity works. To illustrate, it is alleged that teenagers should enjoy their childhood and gain experience by playing with their counterparts and video games. Thus, it is not acceptable for them to consent their children to work.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe there are dozens of reasons why community work could be a better choice. To begin with, although they work free and do not yield money, they learn a lot of lessons that they cannot be taught anywhere, such as how to work in a team, how to take a measure for solving a problem, or experiences about accepting ramifications of their actions. Besides, regarding the future, finding a job could be much easier for a well-experienced teen than a zero skilled one. Finally, a developed community roots in their volunteer workers, who work for enhancing society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the fact that it is essential and compulsory for students to pay attention to their lessons, it would be a win-win situation for those who intend to gain more experience than their pals and help their community advance as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today i will be talking about some good reasons to join the program seagoing cowboys. i will also be trying to get people to sign up for it. I think it would be a great idea to sign up for it.\n\nHere are some reasons why youu should sign up. You could help people out by going and helping with the food supplies, horses, cattle, youn cows, mules,and more. It would be doing a good deade too.\n\nAnother good reason is it might be a opportunity that you may never get to take again or if you wanted to try it too see if you like it.\n\nIf you are 18 though you could be drafted for military service so if u ever wanted to be apart of the military service it would be a good idea to sign up. Another good reason is if you wanted to just go and look at some new places this would be a good idea because they travel a lot and make a lot of trips.\n\nGoing on trips like this to places that need help because they just got out of worl war ll can make you see how much more help thses people need then you do. Another really good idea is that if you ever wanted a chance to help out with animals and stuff and never got a chance to this would be a good idea since they help out with all that.\n\nIn this essay i was trying to get people to sign up for seagoing cowboys. I hope the reasons i gave you was helpful enough for people to see that it would be a good idea to go and help out all the people that are in need and to help out with the food and animals and stuff. I hope some of you who read this will sign up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational. On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their objects that many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions. On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life. In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the concept of \"responsible tourism\" has gained popularity, as more and more people have become aware of the impact that tourism can have on both culture and the environment. Responsible tourism is defined as tourism that takes into account the social, cultural, and environmental impact of travel, and seeks to minimize negative effects while maximizing positive effects. However, some argue that it is impossible to be a \"responsible tourist\" due to the nature of tourism itself.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, it is true that tourism can have negative impacts on both culture and the environment. For example, in areas where tourism is concentrated, local cultures can be threatened by commercialization and homogenization. Additionally, tourism can lead to overcrowding, pollution, and the degradation of natural environments. It is also true that many people travel to popular destinations without considering the impact of their visit on the local community and the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is also true that tourism can have positive impacts on both culture and the environment if it is done responsibly. Responsible tourism can help to preserve and promote cultural heritage, by supporting local communities and promoting sustainable practices. It can also help to protect the environment by encouraging sustainable travel and reducing the impact of tourism on natural resources.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is not impossible to be a \"responsible tourist\". While it is true that tourism can have negative impacts on both culture and the environment, it is also true that tourism can have positive impacts if it is done responsibly. By being aware of the impact of travel and taking steps to minimize negative effects while maximizing positive effects, tourists can play a role in preserving and promoting culture and protecting the environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A number of individuals have the notion that children should learn how to draw and make use of colour in institutions while other people think it is error-prone. Visual arts evoke emotions through an expression of skill and imagination. In the course of this essay, both views will be discussed to form an opinion. \r\n\r\n Firstly, children should be given an opportunity to learn art be it visual or fine, this makes them express their selves, giving them a wide range of imagination and also to recreate it in paints and drawings. To illustrate, my brother loves to draw and play with colours, he said he loves drawing because it gives him the ability to recreate and create things in his own way and style. To conclude, when they learn to draw and paint in school, they become so engrossed in it thereby making a good career,hobby and opportunity for them. \r\n\r\n Secondly, visual drawing has become less recognizable in our society because people have diverted their selves from the reality of creativity through craft as such most people find it time-consuming to allow their children to do visual or fine art. They prefer them going into stuff they think will make a good Carrier for them: without knowing the effect it causes on them emotionally and physically. For example, my neighbour warned his son not to involve himself in craft or any art subject, the reason is it will not be of good pay to him in future. This made him very sad and gloomy because he would rather love to draw and paint than solve some boring maths. In conclusion, we should give into the profession of painting and drawing.\r\n\r\n By and large, fine art is a way of communication. In my opinion, youngsters should be encouraged to learn the art of painting and drawing as this can make a lifetime career for them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that we continue our studying on venus, even though the planet gets really hot at 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than earths. But most people believe that venus might have bee covered in oceans at one point and could of had many different life froms on its planet.\n\nThe author is trying to say that if we continue our studying on venus and if we land more spaceships on venus we might be able to find out if oe day we could live there or if one day we could send men and women up there to find out if there was some sort of life forms and if the planet once held many differnet stuff that we didnt know that existed.\n\nThe author also informed us, readers that venus has the hottest surface temperatures of any planet in our solar system. astronomers are also discussing if venus could in habit more life forms if they figure out what could be worn or if life forms could live on venus. The author then explains the terrain of venus and its rocky sediment, and its valleys, mountains, and craters. and then also explains that venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit and crucial consideration given the long time frames and space travel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern civilization world an educational degree plays a vital role for a constant sucessful job life. However, some people argue having a degree from the university or institute is a good pathway to an amazing life and some people are against to it as they think getting a job after school is much more effective way to lead a sucessful job career. In this essay I will discuss the pros and cons about the above topic and share my views.\n\nOn the hand, great work offers are considered to having an educational degree from a standard institute with higher educational values. Having a degree helps to find the job easily as well as it also means that the candidate has gained all the required knowledge about how the job has been done. However, it also makes finalically much easy as a one can earn enough money to look after himself. For instacne, according to the survey done by the UK research of educational developement board states that more than 75% of students who have an educational degree from standard university or colleges lead a stable and happy job life. However, holding a reputed degree means having an enoromus amount of knowledge about one particular area of study which makes the candidate an expert in the specific area.\n\nOn the other hand, receving a work right after the school will only makes the candidate stick to one trade and limit the learning ability. Although, it does help him with certain skill but eventually it will be difficult to grow in a particular field of trade as the candidate does not have adegree. For example, a candiate who has started working right after his schooling in a manfucaturing company had an offer to become a senior production manager, but the major requirement was to have a specialisation degree from any standard university. Therefore, in this kind of situation a specific field degree is more useful. \n\nIn conclusion, I believe that having an educational degree from a standard college or an institute is more sucessfull. On the other hand it helps to gain promotions in an organization and can have a stable income.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Postgraduates are facing difficulties in that having lack of funds for their research. While there are some people argue that the governments should give most of their supports to the field that is highly effective in terms of the countrys' development, I am convinced that all the major is equally important to be entitled the same amount of funds.\n\nAdmittedly, it is true that science field contributes to the major part in developing the country. To be specific, space, technology and healthcare, which is the key parts in order to make a better qulity of life are all related to scientific studies. There is no doubt that these subjects require rich materials and sometimes field placements, which is never cheap. Thus, only focusing on science field can be seen as a sound investment in that countries with advanced scientific research are guarnteed to be well-developed.\n\nNevertheless, I believe that other parts of the studies deserve the same level on how much the government consider the science field crucial. Apart from science, liberal arts should not be neglected in terms of the fact that it is influential to the economy. To be specific, countries where there are number of famous artists and widly known construction attracks myriads of tourists, which eventaully aid in boosting the country's economic level. However, as government only support science related major, people will likely to avoid studying in the field that have poor educational conditions. In other words, the country will have a huge gab between science and other liberal arts, which will result in a devastating impact on the economic level.\n\nIn conclusion, although science is considered as the most useful field of study for the government, I am firmly of the opinion other subjects should not be deprived and finances need to be well balanced between all the subjects.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever gtten your hopes up for something special, but you secretly knew you wouldn't get what you wanted? That is how some felt once they discovered the \"Face on Mars\" wasn't actually a face. Many convincing facts led NASA's employees to believe this natural landform was actually a human face. However, there just so happened to be a few more facts and pieces of evidence to tell otherwise.\n\nIn September of 1997, Cydonia became NASA's number one priority when Mars Global Surveyor arrived to the Red Planet. The article says this was eighteen long years after the Vikings missions ended. Jim Garvin explaines how they felt this landform was important to taxpayers and they photographed the Face as soon as they could get a good shot at it. Beacause this mysterious form exsited and NASA payed so much attention to it, it shows that they only used solid facts to explain how this landform was created naturally and not by aliens.\n\nIt was not until Apri 5, 1998, a year after Cydonia became their priority, the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, as stated in the article. It also says Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture which was ten time sharper than the original Viking photos. This comes to show that NASA did not just go off one photo taken eighteen years before hand. Eager web surfers were anxious to find out something juicy, such as alien life form on Mars, but to their surprise the Face had occured naturally.\n\nThe web surfers and many other people were not satisfied with the outcome and were not going to give up on their hopes, but neither was NASA. The critics said how the \"Face on Mars\" is located 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was cloudy on Mars when the photo was taken. NASA then prepared to look again. Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor drew in closer for a second time. Garvin stated, \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of veiw.\" The pixels in the most recent pictures taken spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixels in the best 1976 Viking photo. Garvin also adds how you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size. This means that it is the clearest image you could take and if there just so happened to be things such as airplanes on the ground, Egyptian-style pyramids, or even small shacks the picture could have clearly captured them.\n\nAlthough many wanted to believe the Face was anything but a natural landform, NASA used strong facts and evidence to fight the arguement and convince people otherwise. I strongly believe The Face on Mars is natural and was not created otherwise because they used all facts and has three different pictures one of which could have spotted things other than the landform, but did not. Nothing but the truth was caught on camera and that is that the \"Face on Mars\" is nothing but a natural landform, and nothing more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, the second plant in our solar syetem, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one one of the brightest lights in the night sky. Venus is also often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" since Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Since its distances is close to Earth, scientists have wanted to study and examine this planet up close, but this would prove to be dificult. Each mission to Venus was unmanned, and for good reasons, since many spacecrafts dont even survive the landing for more than a few hours. This explanins why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. In the following paragraphs I will desribe the dangers that are on Venus, why scientists want to study the planet, and what are some new approches to studing Venus.\n\nTheir are a lot of reasons why humans can't travel or study Venus. One of the reasons why we cant study Venus is that the atmosphere is completely comprised of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, which is toxic to humans. The second reason, are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Another reason is that on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more exstreme for any human to handle; the environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of Earth's oceans and Venus's environment would liquefy many different types of metals. Beyound high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present more additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nFor all the dangers towards humans, why do scientists discuss further plans for visits to Venus's surface? Many astronomers and scientists are fasinated by Venus because it might have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Many people say that long ago, Venus was probably covered with oceans and could have supported different forms of life. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planets surface is similar to Earth, it has a rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Overall Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nSince Venus is impossible to study at this time, NASA is working on different approaches to studying Venus. For example, simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface, and the result is that the electronics lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is loocking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\n\nistep sucks.................SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars is extraordinary and could be a great plan and a great source of entertainment. Who would not want a car that drives by itself? The idea is great but it could potentially bring a lot of bad baggage along with it. The world does not need driverless cars because it is unsafe, defeats the purpose of driving, and is a waste of money.\n\nDriverless cars are very unsafe. In the article it talks about all the things they can do, for example, it can steer, accelerate, and brake all by itself! Somehow, someway this is possible, but is it consistent is the question? Throughout the article they talked about tests they did and the results that came with the tests. While describing them the author used phrases like, \"It worked well.\" Only one paragraph in the article they were 'for sure' that it worked. For someone to drive such a car they should have specific clarification that they would be safe while inside this vehicle, and they can trust that they have no worries and that this car will do 80% of the work for them. Also, if the car does most of the work for you, then what is the point of having a car?\n\nDriverless cars defeat the purpose of even having a car. All of the processes you go through as a teenager with getting your permit or license is diminished, and in a sense you did all that work for nothing. The point of driving is having a quicker way of getting to the places you need to be instead of walking, biking, etc. In paragraph 10 it says that an automaking company named 'Tesla' is making a car that can be on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Ask youself, why would you waste your time on getting a car like that when you can ride the bus, train, limo, or taxi that would do 100 percent of the driving for you? That would just make me feel like I'm wasting my money on senseless things.\n\nDriverless cars are also a waste of money. Automakers spend millions, maybe even billions of dollars making prototypes of these cars and testing them. Every time one of the test cars do not work they have to go and make a new one which is money that could be used for something a lot more efficient. The automakers to this day are still doing this, which is throwing money out the window. But not just the automakers are wasting their time and money, if people were to get this car they would be wasting their time and money also. People would waste thousands of dollar on one car that is pointless. Rich or poor this would be a senseless investment, because there are cheaper ways to get where you need to go. Taxi's, limos, buses, and trains are all great affordable ways of transportation. The automakers could find something that is a lot better and cheaper that could change the world.\n\nDriverless cars is again a wonderful, awesome idea. It would definetly have a lot of popularity and publicity but is it really worth it in the long run? The automakers can find a lot of things that could change the world, and this is something the world does not need. The world should not have driverless cars because it is unsafe, defeats the purpose of driving, and is a waste of money.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of \"driverless cars\" could be potentially beneifical to the world, but they could be potentially non-beneifical to the world as well. The cars supposively could change the world fundamentally and would \"use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibilty than a bus.\"\n\nbut that doesn't jusitify the reason to produce these cars. The production of these cars propose several of issues for the driver and the manufacturers of the cars.\n\nOne issues proposed is that if the \"driver\" where to be in the car when the car gets in a wreck, who would be at fault? This causes a huge problem for the driver. Machines can never be 100% correct. Machines always have a potentially risk of not operating correctly because after all, they are a man made product. In order for the driver to be at fault and the manufacturer to not be at fault, the manufacturer would have to make sure that their product is always operating 100% which is something that is impossible to do.\n\nHowever, that does not mean that driverless cars could never be a thing. In the future when the cars can be proven safer than they are today, more manufacturers and consumers might consider using them. Safety is always the main concern. If the car fails, it leaves the driver behind the wheel without any control over the car, which could be very dangerous for the driver. It could lead to many lawsuits against the manufacturer for not producing a safe car for their consumers.\n\nAs of today, driverless cars do not seem practical for the everyday driver. The cars just are not all there yet and they can not be succesfull until they develope fully. Some things that they could do to improve these cars is implement more safety bags, seat belts, and other devices that improve safety. They could add a engine override that allows the driver to kill the engine before a major wreck.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System has a good use for modern day. Plenty of students have troublesome days. The new system can stop a outbreak waiting to happen. You can use F.A.C.S. to detect stress in a student.This can stop the outrageous acts in today's modern life.\n\nStudents go to school to put in hard work everyday. They also have things to take care of once their out of school. Some situations that students encounter puts stress on them. The F.A.C.S. can help out students detect problems going on in their lives. It can even detect when someone is faking their facial expression. That's the unique thing about the F.A.C.S..\n\nThe F.A.C.S. can stop the kidnapping's that happen. Some kids are taking against their own will everyday. You may see people that are held captive but are just afraid of speaking out. The F.A.C.S can save their day by reveiling how they really feel. Which would then lead up to a investigation. I am for the F.A.C.S. because it can benefit in so many ways.\n\nUsing F.A.C.S. can save the world as we know it today. So many people have disaggreements because they don't know how to express their feelings.The new Facial Action Coding System can help out todays issues sufficiently. Helping someone relieve all their stress is just music to my ears. Just expressing how you feel can settle alot of today's differences.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should ge rid of it because if people vote for a preident and then they dont get what they want there gonna get mad and revolt aginsit the government. and heres why i think we shoul get rid of the electoral collage.\n\nIn the electoral government voters dont vote for the president but for state of electors and i thinks thats wrong and then they turn and elect the president. It is called a disaster factor in 2000 there was al gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60%of the voters would prefer a direct election. They dont want the one we now have. If you vote for a president youd vote for a slate of democratic electors pledged to the president you want to vote for. The elcotors can be anyone not holding public office. And it depends on the state you live in on who is a elector sometimes people get confused and vote for the wrong cantidate.\n\nThe electoral collage is not a democratic methode of selecting on who WE WANT AS PRESIDENT and we dont get a say on we dicide on who we think is best sutible for running the united states. and we have to get other peple diciding on who runs the country and manyu people think we should keep the electoral collage hers why i think we shouldent. Its not fair for small states becuse they have less of a voice then big states and the dont get much of a say in we they want as a president. Ther are some good reasons on why we should keep it but its what the people want.\n\nSome good reasons on why to keep it is becuse it can avoid run off election the electoral collage requirws candidate to have trans regional appeal. A dispute over the popular vote compared to only 51.3 precentas steated in source 3 number 2. The electoral collage is overall unfair to voters becuse of the winner takes all system in each state candidates dont spend there time on states they cant win. so they go stright for the swing states and that not sair to the smaller states. And thats why smaller states feel left out cuse all the candidates want to go to the big states and try to win them over insted of allthe smaller states.\n\nOver all the electoral college is unfair outdated and irrational and that why i think we should get rid of the electoral college its not fair to any voter that wants to vote and think taht there vote isent gonna matter so they dont vote. This is why i think we should get rid of the electoral college and why is is unjust and its not what we want.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are very dangerous. They are not reliable because you still hvae to keep your hand on the wheel. They can not drive through work zones, accidents, and the driver must remain alert. I think we should put a hold on driverless cars for now.\n\nBig car barnds such as Mercedes Benz, Audi, and Nissan are planning to make cars that can drive themsleves by 2020.\n\nA big question for people is what if the technology fails and someone is injured, whos fault is it-the drive or the manufacturer? That is what states are trying to figure out right now and can't come up with a solution. In a few states such as California, Nevada, Florida, and District of Columbia have made it illegal to test computer-driven cars. I believe this is right because we can't have our lives in the hands of technology.\n\nIn this case we should put away driverless cars and have humans take control of the wheel. Our lives are too precious to have a computer have control of it. Our lives should not be in undeveloped driverless hands.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology involving computers, smartphones, and even cars are slowly but surely taking over our lives. Cars are one of the most purchased and used items of our world and without owing a vehicle or having other means of transportation, life would practically be hard. The world around us is constantly changing and with change comes new and fresh ideas. One of the new ideas that is thought to help improve our lives are driverless cars. Driverless cars (also known as taxis) are cars that can drive themselves around while the passengers are at rest as they wait to arrive at their destination. Although driverless cars sound exciting and fun, are they really? These new driverless cars are not completely driver-less, take the fun out of driving, and will cause several issues down the road dealing with accidents and injuries.\n\nGoogle has created cars that are driverless and that can drive themselves under certain conditions. However, these cars are not completely driverless. Driverless cars tell the driver to take over the wheel when the car itself cannot perform human driving skills. Such as pulling in and out of driveways,going through accidents and construction sites,and on certain roads and streets. Driverless cars can acccelerate, steer, and brake themselves but overall these cars are still not completely driver-less. The point of having a driverless car is being able to simply enjoy not having to drive, not wait until it is your turn to take over the wheel.\n\nTake a look around you. We have smartphones, computers, and even elevators to help make our lives easier. Studies have shown that the country that has the highest obesity levels and that also happen to be the laziest are Americans. Technology is the creation of something that helps make doing ordinary tasks easier and according to many doctors these new inventions involving computers and phones have made us more and more lazy. So what's next ;cars that drive themselves? What happened to taking a drivers test at the age of 16 and praying that you passed ? What happened to the thrill of being able to drive your parents car (legally) for the first time? Is that now going to be taken over by these new driverless cars? Driverless cars would in fact take the fun out of driving.\n\nOverall driving has become the worlds' \"norm\" for our way of living. Yes, having a car that can assist you while driving would be very helpful, but having a car that drives for you would not. In that case, what would be the point of owning a car when you could instead call a taxi? Everyday our world is changing. Ideas and inventions are growing bigger and better by the second. Driverless cars are smart and creative inventions but cars were created to help make our lives easier;not live our lives for us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars of the future are on their way. The innovation and brilliance of engineers across the globe are bringing them into the world, but should they? Safety, laws, and a lack of jobs are major concerns pertaining to the invention of driverless cars. It would be an incredible advancement in modern technology and it is worth the risk.\n\nTechnicians, inventors, and engineers are working together to create the ultimate driving experience of not needing to drive. It allows for other things to be done while on the open road . While eyes will still need to be on the road and hands will still be at ten and two, drivers can sit back and relax almost as much as anyone else in the car. Drivers and cars become co-pilots and take turns driving throughout the day.\n\nThe car has the ability to help out in many cases in which the human driver did not happen to notice the animal crossing the street. In dangerous situations, the driverless car can the police and auto-park or continue driving or whatever needs to be done in the scenario.\n\nSafety concerns with the car failing can be left to the manufacturers who created it because the consumers can not control what the car has been programmed to do. If the car interferes with the driver while he or she tries to drive. In other situations, like the driver was not paying even though he or she still should be the blame falls on him or her.\n\nThe only problem with driverless cars is that If driverless cars become a part of everday life, where will all the people who drove the city buses and taxis go? Their jobs are being taken by robotic systems in cars and their expertise will no longer be needed. They will be laid off for the most part because robots do not need to be paid to drive people around. The money will go to that company to buy more driverless cars to do all of the work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of the story \"The challange exploring Venus\" poorly support his claim that we should look into exploring Venus. He does not proparly compare a list of other options and does not examine in detail the dangers of these illogical actions.\n\nAlthough the thought of exploring Venus the \"Evening Star\" sounds fun, the author does not realisticly support this idea. He claims that NASA has considered sending humans above the planets harsh terrain in a blimp like vehichle in order to aviod the storms. The idea sounds great until considering that, \"reasearchers cannot take samples\". In other words even if NASA manages to send humans to Venus through this method reasearchs still wouldn't be able to find anything worth studying. The author does not take into account the irrational sense this would make neither does he consider what will happen if something goes haywire, the power runs out, or if the storms and clouds rose higher.\n\nIn addition the author also presents the idea that electronics that NASA has tested in Venus' condition have lasted three weeks before giving out. Therefore it is infered that humans can simply use advanced technology in order to study Venus. The authors reasoning is more realistic in pointing this out, however the author unfortantly has not considered any other planets. The size and structure of Venus is close to Earth, as stated \"Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size\". He includes this key detail in order to claim that maybe one day Venus might be \"survivable for humans\". However the author fails to consider or even mention any other planets and their climates, he does not consider any other options such as Mars. Because even is Venus' size and shape are similar its climate is not. In addition if Venus is the best option he does not show readers why through a series of comparisons which greatly diminishes the article.\n\nDespite the authors attemps at persuading readers that the pursuit of Venus is worth the risk he doesn't consider the facts dangers and holes in the attempt theories. The author does not seem to consider the cliamate change in Venus, neither does he mention the possiblity of other planets. After all what would be the point of traveling through Venus and later realizing that there was a better option. Although the author would like our travels to be guided by \"imagination and innovation\" they only work if govern by a clear plan and logical thinking. Both of which the are unfortanatly lacking which gives weak support to his ideas.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System, FACT, is a new technology that anables computer to indentify human emotions. This technology is really helpful for teacher and student in class base on the use of it is to read the emotional expressions.\n\nThere are 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles, it begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. In order to indentify human emotions, there are six basic emotions are happiness, surprise, aner, disgust, fear, and sadness, and then associated it with the characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Then using video imagery, in real face, weighting the different units, the sofware can identify mixed emotions and compared against a no emotion face. In our life, we perform this same calculation every day, you can tell someone is happy or not by just look on their face. But computer can't so this technology could teachs it, so it can know people well and give out the best experiences.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Not all students are good, not all students are interesting with the lessons, so this is a really helpful idea for the classes. Teacher or the computer now can know well how is the student with the lessons. If they are happy, that meant the lesson is interesting, if they are bored, the teacher now know they need to change it so everyone is interested with it.\n\nBut that is all we need, the system can stop at this. There is no need for the computer to go further than that. If more than that, the computer could collect every informations and storage it, it's seems to be very scarry.\n\nThis technology is useful if that is all it can do. Use this \"FACT\" in the classroom is a good idea for the improvement of studying environment. It is also a very need thing for the computer to give the feedback when it know more about humans.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology is very valuable and could help techmology in classrooms advance even more. For example someone could invent a software that teaches students through their computer screen and if the software sees the student is bored it could show them something interesting or if it sees the student is confused it could ask them a series of questions based on the content and ask them different things based on what the student is confused om. I see this technology being used in classes like theatre, a student could be graded on how well theyre character is being played based on the role of the character and how well the students emotions were close to that character. This sort of technology could also be used on animals, if a dog were sad there could be an application using this software where you scan the dogs face and it tells you what emotion they are feeling and based on that emotion you would know what to do to help the animal. there are many other ways you can implement this technology in todays society. In conclusion this new technology is very valuable and could help us further the worlds already great technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mood created author memoir Narciso Rodriguez The mood creates happy proud mood The author happy wonderful family proud family accomplished proud home Also environment growing taught family nothing blood relative He sets happy mood thinks whole community family He proud mother father For example says came selflessly immigrants give children better life And also says I never forget parents turned simple house home This mood I think author created memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "5-21-01 something happen on Mars, a human face was printed on Mars! The people that seen this was on a ship calledNASA\"S Viking ship 1-2 were in there ships taking pictures of landing sites. But before I get to telling you this, we think the human face is just a\n\nnatural landform. A few day later the NASA'S unveiled the image for all to see, it captioned,\n\n\"A human head.\" THis face started shownign up in hollywood films,in book and magazines.\n\nBut I think this might just be a landform because, how could a face just appear\n\non mars, did someone go to mars we didn't now about or, did someone that went to mars put the face in the ground, or did someone die on mars and there body goes underneithe and forms a face. No, none of that happen because\n\nno one ever knew about it or heard about it, and how could they go to mars without a ship, and they are no such thing as aliens\n\nin the 21st century which we are liveing in now and if it is no one has heard about it so no in this case something happent with a rock or heave hard object and soon or later it form into the ground and it kepted forming from under the and it starts to llook like a humans face.Even MIcheal Maline said it was a landform not an Alien print or nothing like that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars? Sound fun! Or maybe it could be dangerous. I dont think in the future we should develop these driverless cars.\n\nYes driverless cars sound cool. You could chill while driving. But i think it is dangerous. Many people may not pay attention to the roads since they are in this driverless car. Thats a big part of safety while driving is paying attention to othter cars and your surroundings. People in this driverless car may be on their phones texting and other things. They may not notice that they are about to get in a wreck because they totally depend on this car to do all the work for them. I do not think that in the future we should have driverless cars, I think it would distract the drivers.\n\nI also dont think we should develop these cars because you cant always depend on techonlogy. Everything isn't awlays correct with technology. What if the person in the driverless car is not focused on the road, and is about to get in a wreck; the sensor on the car notifys them too late. And boom! That would put their life and other drivers life in danger around them. I think driverless cars take the drivers attention aways from the road.\n\nDriverless cars shouldn't be develpoed in the future. They are dangerous and take away drivers attention to the road.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our modern ,world it is hard to live without studying. To achieve success should we continue studying at university or give up after school.\n\nIn ,schools we learn basic information. At universities and ,colleges we study wider data. After finishing school, everyone chooses an occupation, which likes or that is helpful for his or her future. I think if we study well at school, we may enter the university to continue studying. In most ,countries there are authoritative universities. They are better than other universities and there are various methods, which is interesting for students. There are more opportunities for undergraduate people in any field.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge Of Exploring Venus\" Is an article talking about venus it talks about how is difficlut exploring venus is and no one has been to venus in decades. On averge the tempature is over 800 degres Fahrenheit these conditions are far more extreme then what a human has encounter. they are comparing to a submarine\n\nif it went down in the ocean the submarine would instantly be crushed by the metal and the pressure of the water. Venus is very fascinating, venus once may been like mostly earth plant long ago.\n\nVenus was probably covered largely with oceans so this means that is can be various formed of life just like earth but Venus still has some features that are analogous to those like Earth. The planet has a texture almost as if its pure moutains,valles and craters this means that there can be life in Venus.\n\nVenus forms a ship orbiting this means that it can provide only limted in sight on the ground beacuse most forms lights cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Researchers cannot take samples of rocks, gas or anything else from there. Therefore scientists are seeking to conduct there missin to undrestand more about venus and how its like in there. In conclusion venus does has a value the reson because of its value also beacuse the human curiosity will likely lead us into many equal oppertunites this can become a big inpact on us if we try to go to Venus and explore the plant are knowledge can be expanded to learn many things about Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate whether the news is irrelevant to human life and therefore, it is not worth spending time reading paper-based news and viewing news programs on TV. I consider myself an opponent of this thinking.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is undeniable that there are some people who think that media articles are useless and time-consuming. Evidently, they can read up to thousands of articles on a daily basis, nonetheless, very few of the news helps them make better decisions for their life, line of work or careers. Weather forecasts and political news can be cited as striking examples because both of them do not greatly affect people who are fully concentrated in business. Thus, receiving news might have no irrelation to some people.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, news feeds are tremendously beneficial to humans in daily life and reading news is not a time-wasting activity. Since news is often categorized into a wide range of topics, each of which will draw the attention of a certain group of audience. For instance, while fans will be concerned with their celebrities' and idols' news, residents would like to stay well-informed about the outbreak of Covid-19 in a particular country and in the world. Therefore, human’s distinct interests in diverse fields are always the glue that links news with people’s lives.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I am a proponent of the statement that news is not related to people's lives and I would contend that reading newspapers and watching television programs play a paramount significant role in helping people stay up-to-date.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's time, human activities are having a dramatic effect on climate change of our planet and some people think that rather than taking measure's to prevent climate change, we should learn to live with it. I firmly disagree with this opinion and in this I will provide certain example's to back my argument. These days, the carbon dioxide levels in the atmosphere are at there highest level's since the past thousand's of years. This has caused many problems. For instance, people who live in polluted cities have difficulty in breathing, low fertility rate, lower life expectancy among infants and much more. All this combined with global warming and man made pollution has made it extremely difficult for nature to maintain it's equilibrium configration. This all amount's to drastic changes in our planet's climate and can also cause many natural habitats to go extinct. Under such circumstances, only us humans will be able to adapt to the climate changes, but not other species. For example, consider the case of fishes. The continuous increase of the greenhouse gases in the atmosphere has led to the vapourisation of polar ice caps. This has lead to an increase in the sea levels around the world. In such circumstances, the amount of human waste deposition into the sea and oceans around the world has also increased which has led to the deaths of countless fishes in these waters. Moreover, in some instances, these fishes were found to be dead on the shore of beaches and some found to be floating dead on the surface of the water. This is just one of the few examples that goes on to show, that although humans will be able to adapt to all the climate changes and find a way to live with these changes, majority of the animal kingdom population won't be able to do the same. So in a nutshell, instead of finding a way to live with the changing climate, one should looks for ways to minimize it. By doing so, we won't only be saving our own natural habitat, but we will also be creating a more stable and livable enviorment for the future generation's to come. Comments: Post a comment on \"IELTS Recent Actual Test With Answers Writing Practice Test 6\" Name E-mail Address Type comment here... No comments yet. Share & get evaluation from community --DELETED LINK-- Copy URL Get Evaluation from an IELTS Expert Start from $19.99SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be the future, but it is a future many will have to be dragged into kicking and screaming. Humans are known to make mistakes from time to time, and they certainly make mistakes while driving, but to keep humans from driving at all is a ridiculous notion. The development of driverless cars is one development of technology that should be stopped because of safety hazards, an increase in human lethargy, and inhumanity.\n\nWhen humans make mistakes while driving, people often get hurt. When technology makes mistakes, the stakes could be much higher. In paragraph Four of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", it says that LIDAR will \"form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" If the LIDAR is damaged and makes a mistake, the car could easily run into or over a pedestrian, an animal, or even a building. The driver should be able to take over in case of an emergency, but \"the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires,\" (Pragraph 7). Drivers today are sometimes too lazy to brake or drive when needed, so expecting them to be constantly paying attention when they are not the ones driving is like expecting someone riding a train to always be prepared for a crash. It isn't going to happen. This leads to human lethargy.\n\nDrivers today often get in accidents becasue they are not paying attention to the road. In fact drivers will often pay attention to their phone or some other electronic device. Distractions such as these lead to serious injury and even death. Adding an entertainment system to a car seems like it could be a death trap, but \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems,\" (Paragraph 8). This means that a driver can not only be distracted by other people in the car or his or her phone, but the driver can also be distracted by the car itself. True, paragraph 8 also states that \"Such displays can be turned off instantly,\" but that means that a driver would need to be ready to act at any moment. The adding of entertainment systems to cars could lead to even more human lethargy and even more disaster.\n\nNobody enjoys being constantly watched and surveyed. Everyone needs their privacy. Driverless cars may lead to an invasion of privacy. This is because \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road,\" (Paragraph 7). Consider all the things that can happen in a car. People chat, flirt, argue, discuss, and even have intercourse in cars. If a camera is constantly watching, it means that someone has the ability to view all of these things. This is an extreme invasion of privacy, and violates a human right to safety.\n\nDriverless cars are expensive, dangerous, and invasive, and the world can only hope that they will never become a reality. If humans are always completely enveloped in technology, there will start to be no time for human interaction. Without human interaction, the world will crumble and will lose any hope of peace.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would there be a face on mars? It could be a computer image hicup.\n\nThe land erodes. There are a lot of things that are natural and look like faces.\n\nBut, it still might not be natural. No the rock formation is natural.\n\nFirst off, it could be a computer image hicup. What I mean is That the camera that is moving takes different pictures of one area as its moving. I can relate to another \"alien\" sighting. A comet passing earth was thought to be a triangular UFO\n\nbut the telescope took three different pictures at once and gave it that UFO shape.\n\nSecondly, The land erodes over time. The land could have eroded land could cause a \"face\" to appear. This \"face\" is nothing more than a simple act of nature and its way. In the top picture over time you can see it erode away, especialy the 1998 photgraph.\n\nThirdly, We see things that look like faces everyday, wether its clouds or land formations. We see our faces everyday, so its easy to compare. In the top picture you can see a land formation, but scince we know what a face looks like its easy to compare to. In the picture, yes we can see some definition but its still just a land form. For example the man in the moon, it looked like a face but wasn't.\n\nOn the other hand, it might be. Most theorists claim it appears to be an Egyptian Pharoh. The theorists also claim that the martians built the pyramids. It's a theory but it might be possible.\n\nIn conclusion, No it is a natural landform. It could be a computer image hicup.\n\nThe land erodes. There are a lot of things that are natural and look like faces.\n\nBut, it still might not be natural. If it is unnatural then there could be other life out there.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hunting turkey hunting need extremly still quiets lot patience If move even musle turkeys run away Some times sitting hours hours waiting one shot I remember I hunting dad sitting tree fro probablee three hours finally turkey came unfortunutly I shot dad scared away I still patience stay another hours That example patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is often known as the more dangerous 'twin' of Earth. It is located two planets away from the Sun but is hotter than Mercury, the planet next to the sun, even with it being further away. Although Venus is similar to Earth in size and a few other things, thick sheets of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid coat the earth, making it very difficult to research. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author presents reasons why Venus should be researched, despite the precautions scientists would have to take.\n\nVisiting Venus does not indicate a need to be on the planet's surface. When thinking about being on and researching a planet, individuals would think about what it would be like to be visiting \"erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\" (3). A solution made by the National Aeronautics and Space Administration claims they could possibly send scientists to Venus but instead of landing, they would \"float above the fray [of Venus]\" (5). This would allow scientists to do some more research on the difficult planet and keeping them safer by only introducing them to \"170 degrees Fahrenheit\" and \"air pressure [that] would be close to that of sea level on Earth\" (5). NASA is already introducing ideas that are very noteworthy and realistic for more exploration on the planet Venus.\n\nResearchers are building machines and working innovatively to allow more time in Venus for further research. Years ago, rovers and spacecrafts were sent to Venus but \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\" (2). This information helps conclude how dangerous the planet is and how cautious scientists, researchers, and astronauts would have to be to visit or study more on. In recent years, NASA has worked more on building an electronic device completed with silicon carbide that \"lasted for three weeks in such conditions\" when \"tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface\" (7). This brings another level of excitement for the future of planet exploration because it extends the 'life expectancy' of the spacecraft. Some researchers have also been working on an old mechanical computer technology used in the 1800-1990s. They believe this may be effective on Venus because \"mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces\" (7) rather than more modern technology, which tends to be more fragile. The future of machines that could orbit Venus is worth pursuing for information and it may be a game-changer for all occupations wanting to learn more about the planet itself.\n\nAlthough there are many valuable reasons as to why Venus is worth studying for, the author includes some evidence that indicate why Venus exploration is not succeeding as well. It is evident that the planet is clearly not accustomed for human settlement. The author reveals to the audience that \"such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals\" (3). This explains why a person has not visited and how deathly it would be if someone did. While the author explains how humans can explore even just above the clouds of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, there is also evidence that \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance\" (6). Despite these facts given, the article ends with \"our travels onEarth and beyond should not be limited by dangerous and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (8) and this contributes to why visiting Venus is worth it, making all the reasons against visiting less effective because they are not explained as thoroughly throughout.\n\nEven with all the evidence and reasoning behind why the earth is too dangerous to study, the author believes Venus is a worthy pursuit as it is a challenge for the future of space exploration. Scientists and researchers have all the information they need to figure out a plan so they can pursue active studying on the planet Venus. With all precautions aside, Venus is worth spending time on if they can figure out how to do it effectively without too many troubles and hassles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an ongoing debate about whether customs and traditional ways of behaviour are still relevant in today's modern life. Although some argue that many customs are outdated and no longer serve a purpose, others believe that these traditions are an essential part of our culture and should be preserved. In my opinion, I agree with the latter group and believe that many customs and traditional ways of behaviour are worth keeping.\r\n\r\nFirstly, customs are an essential part of our cultural identity. They help us understand where we came from, and they provide us with a sense of belonging. Our traditions are what make us unique, and they connect us to our heritage. For example, the celebration of festivals and ceremonies is a tradition deeply ingrained in many cultures. These events bring people together and provide a platform to exchange ideas and share cultural experiences. As a result, traditional ways of behaviour are essential in promoting cultural diversity and social cohesion.\r\n\r\nSecondly, many customs and traditional ways of behaviour have practical benefits that are still relevant today. For instance, the practice of eating together as a family is a tradition that has been passed down through generations.p, and it has been shown to have many benefits, including improved communication and stronger family relationships. Similarly, many customs and traditional ways of behaviours that promote respect, honesty, and integrity are still essential in modern life. These values are universally recognized as positive, and they help to foster strong communities and relationships.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though some argue that customs and traditional ways of behaviour are outdated and no longer relevant, I believe that they are an essential part of our culture and should be preserved.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for diverless cars. I think that this will be better for us in the long run. I also think that driverless care will be better for the elderly and they can still get out and go places instead of having to have someone drive them everywhere sense they will only have to be driving at certian times.\n\nIn the passage it states \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" This is saying that even though they are driverless cars, there still has to be someone there ready to take over. I feel as if old people can take over when needed and then resume to being the passanger. The driver would only be driving for a short amount of time when needed. I think that this will also benift the elderly because they might feel better about themself knowing that they still get to drive and feel young again.\n\nIn the passage it also states \"GM has developed diver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" This is saying that they do know the dangers of backing into an object and that they have addressed the dangers, and that they have also found a way to slove the problem by adding in sensors. I think that the sensors will help a lot as long as they are updated and working properly.\n\nIn the passage is also states \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This shows that the compinies that manufacture diverless cars know the dangers of navagating through dangerous spots such as accidents or road work. The compinins have addressed the dangers in many ways and have tested what they have found to work in many different ways.\n\nIn the passage it states \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by brining in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the diver needs to take over- something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone\" They want the ready to interperate that this could be a better safer way of driving sense social media and texting are big distractions while driving. This would be beficial to the driver because they would still get to relax while the car is driving, but at the same time still feel in control when the drivers assistance is needed.\n\nI feel as if diverless cars will be benificial to us in many ways. They could possibly help prevent car accidents and be very useful to the elderly. I believe that diverless cars will become very popular when they come out because will will see the positive side of them and see all the different ways that they can benifit us in the long run.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Falling love The falling part easy I remember minute I fell love Everything shined everything sparkled You infinitely beautiful eyes We fun human beings capable Every time together thought mind happy together worry would ever leave I never wanted imagine life without As child always title kid smiles time thought got glow Everybody saw would ask CAPS Your happy I ve never seen like That saw power love something see together When one us would something neither us could stop laughter When stomachs hurt hard I love I grew love every part Especially laugh From hear say laughter shortest distance two people I would agree Being able laugh someone able hold front magical Its something makes relationship last I guess kinda like glue sense My brother closest get best friends guess spare time We laugh Hes someone silly dumb goofy still laughs still loves although brother still holds respect great It also stress reliever My teacher told My health teacherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is very similar to earth and is very close to earth. Venus is very intersting because not only is it very similar to earth but it has many intersting differnces. Like earth venus also has valleys,mountains, and craters.\n\nThe only problem or problems is that it is very very hot. Not only is it 800 degress fahrenheit but it has a very thick atmosphere and it has a lot of carbon dioxide. If you go a little bit above the surface it wouldn't be as hot and the air pressure would be close the earths air pressure.\n\nIt would be survivable for humans but the conditons woul not be easy. If you were to go to Venus and you brought your phone or tabet it would melt because it would be exposed to acid and very very hot heat. Venus is a very intersting plant because it share many simalre things with earth but it has many many dangers with in its atmosphere. Many scientists and astronomers are very very fascinated dispite all the dangers they still want discuss further vists to our sister plant.\n\nVenus has many dnagers but that shouldn't stop us nor scientist and Astronomers to plan future vists and learn more new things about venus. We should research more and learn more for the future. At the end it would be worth learning and creating things to help us vists Venus more .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When there are good quality education nations dominantly flourish ethically as well as technologically which help to boost state wealth and create an ideal society. It is thought by many individuals that the basic aim of the institution is to make youngsters fine residents and professionals instead of giving them an advantage personally. I would argue in the favor of the mentioned statement and will further explain the reasons behind this.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons to support this notion. To begin with, For teens the first learning place as a learner are academies. Since children are being started edification at a very early age, which is the finest period for them to pick the positive and negative aspects of the surrounding easily. Furthermore, They will always go with the same thoughts throughout life as this era is the best for their mental grooming. To illustrate, According to my country local survey, 80% of the people who are keener to follow laws are universities graduates.\r\n\r\nSecondly, The other reason for concurring with this statement is, As institutes are using modern pedagogy along with brand new techno appliances for practical work. Moreover, these teaching methods allow them to learn new developments in science and using this modern equipment make them more skilful and well rounded. Additionally, such people could go easier in their professional careers later on. To cite an example, the National University of science and technology, Pakistan is using modern lab experiments during academic tenure,devoting 70% of the workforce to the multinational companies functioning inside the country compare to other state institutions.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I completely agree with this statement that the main purpose of educational institutes is to make teenagers good dwellers and prepare excellent personal. This is due to schools being the early place for children to be interacted with and these tuition centres are using modern teaching ways to create a workforce. Given this situation, It seems that authorities need to provide vast educational networks and make sure to give access to each citizen to the cheapest education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think I need to get people to join because people needs our help and they need food and i need to help the people becauseIi travled all the way from new orleans and\n\ntheir not that much people and they might die and they are injured animals need to be saved and they need to be warm and take care of and people say no about helping I will try to talk to them about helping and all of that\n\nit is very sad that the people has to deal with that war and thats why i need helper thank you for your time. but one more thing please if anyone just join today I will be so glad those people dont need to be in the war thank you. I got to see venice and greece and germany and all of that it was awful seeing the ruins in the countrys.\n\nI helped people like giving them food and shelter building them homes and giving tthem water food and shelter and I help the animals I took care of them and one more thing i was helping a animal and the ship shook very hard and a piece of metal jabed me in the ribs so I could not work for a couple of weeks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is definetly something that should be in the classroom for various reasons and some you may not think about at first.\n\nFirst off, as the paragraph describes, it could be used in classrooms for the most obvious reason. This is when the teacher is teaching the software could give an alert to the teacher if the student is becoming confused with what they're teaching. This could help the teachers slow down or go more in depth to what they're explaining if they see that a student has become confused at that moment. This could overall help many students for this reason.\n\nSecond, one of the less obvious reasons is it could tell if a student may be distressed or sad. This could help when students don't have the courage to come out and say that they're upset outright. Maybe a teacher could get an alert that a student is upset or distressed and could try to talk to them about whats going on, or give them a pass to..say a counsolers office to get help. I could definetly see this helping, but some may find it intrustive on their own personal lives.\n\nThird, and final reason, it could see when the students are angry or frustrated. This is more closely related to the second reason. When a student becomes angry or frustrated it can become very hard to concentrate on what's going on in class rather than whats going on in their mind. This could also open up\n\na wide variety of help options. Say a student is angry, perhaps the teacher could let them go for a quick walk or to go get a drink, or maybe even offering them candy. The second solution would be, just like the second point would be to send them down to the counsoler to talk about whats going on.\n\nOverall, I personally would not mind this being implemented into schools, but I'm sure many students would see this as very intrusive on their personal lives and may not want people knowing whats going on. I think this would be a great idea for getting people a wide variety of help with their emotions they may or may not be able to deal with.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the rising trend of animal-related conservation, many people claim that there is an abundant amount of attention and resources distributed to wild species. Personally, I strongly disagree with that idea due to the following justifications.\r\n\r\n First and foremost, the most outstanding reason underlying this idea is that provided heed and reserves for wildlife organisms are not adequate. It is because there are numerous species presenting on the globe so it would necessitate greater preservation. Secondly, illegal animal-trading is still extremely common nowadays. This is to say that there are still no strict laws or punishment to ban as well as prevent such inhumane activities towards innocent creatures.\r\n\r\n The second justification is that it is human that causes detrimental extinction for wildlife. To be specific, extinct creatures would lead to the loss of natural diversity unbalance of the ecosystem, causing a plethora of devastating consequences. Thus, the local authorities should invest budget in scientific research to find out the most sufficient strategy preventing living species from extinction. Additionally, due to a huge amount of human waste and toxic emission, consequently, causing harmful damage to feathered and livestock species. Hence, the government bodies should enforce drastic rules or regulation to alleviate the current situation.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, the world is still lacking of proper countermeasure and capital in terms of preserving the animals and birds. In addition to that, there are also kaleidoscope of illegal trading of species and organism’s extinction are still prevailing. Therefore, the given statement appears not to be completely rational.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Housing shortage in large metroplis can result in overcrowding, hygiene and even health problems. In order to deal with these issues, thorough and centralised government planning together with firm execution power is crucial. Thus, I firmly believe it is only through government led movements that alleviation of the problem could be realised.\n\nSome may propose that land developers and citizens have a role in aggravating the housing problems: developers can accelerate the process of building housing estates, while citizens can move to areas further away from city centre to reduce the congestion. Of course, these would rely on their conscience, which is often lacking. Who wouldn’t want to live in the proximity of their workplace or school, with all the shops and daily necessities in place? My friend, for instance, prefered to live in Sydney in a tiny flat as she felt it was extremely convenient, rather than go back to suburban areas which was remote and isolated. With the government’s policy in place, giving monetary incentives or welfare rewards to those who comply with increasing residential supply, the scheme would be much more efficient.\n\nHousing shortage in cosmopolitan cities can be attributed to two main factors: insufficient supply of residentials areas and rapid surge of population. The government, having the highest authority, has a pivotal role in regulating supply of houses to citizens. It is crystal clear that the government has the highest power to enact changes in society. They can design policies to ensure adequate supply of land is provided for residential use, as well as putting a limit to the population rise, therefore reaching a balance between man and space. Singapore is a glaring example, where the authorities have put together reasonably priced and spacious public housing estates for its citizens in the past decades, relieving the pressure on living space. Hong Kong, on the contrary, without such large scale public housing plans in place, finds itself constantly lacking in quality apartments to house the needy. \n\nTo conclude, housing problems could only be properly handle by the government. Without the officials led change, it is extremely difficult and inefficient to ease the pressure on housing supply. Therefore, in my opinion, government support and action is the only way out for the paucity of living space in large urban areas.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a bad idea I disagree on this idea. I think driverless cars is a bad idea becuase its unsafe I fell like its going to be more recks. Driverless car would not fundamentally change the world. Televinson and movies have long been facinated with cars that could drive themselves but, not all movies all real.\n\nMost driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars. If the technologly fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer? I think it is the manufacturer fault becuase that what the people are going to blaim it on they giong they didnt have full control of the car but, if they had full control of the car it be a differnt story.\n\nAnother reason why I think its a bad idea becuase if your are going to make driverless cars why are they not compelety driverless? Driverless car on movies look nice so that mean driveless cars are going to cost more and some people cant afford it. I also think it a bad idea becuase some kid like to play in their moms or dads cars an what if they push button they didnt know of in the car starts taking off and the kid get hurts that wont happen with a normal car thats why i think driver cars are bad.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet that catches the attention from stargazers to people who work for NASA. Venus can also be seen eassily by amateur stargazers because of it's brightest points from the light in the night sky. Venus can be called Earth twin becasue we have the same density and size in terms.\n\nNational Aeronatics and Space Administrations has sent people in space ships to Venus for studies of the planet. Also studying if Venus if it had harsh conditions like, temprature level, radiation level, life forms, and Etc. If hovering or orbiting Venus above safely you can see visable ground and some conditions. Space ships can't fully land on Venus because of density.\n\nOld technology has been big impact on society, inventors, and innovators. mechanical computers help during World War 2 doing caculations by using gears. Now computers can be used for games, research, and personal uses. The same thing when the first moving transportation came it inspired people to innovate more ideas like buses, different cars, planes/jets, space ships, Ect. As you can when the future gets better maybe we can fully discover about Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like seeing different places and different countries? If so you should join the seagoing cowboys. You will be able to see lots off different cities and countries. Do you like to help people in need then you should join the seagoing cowboys. Lots of people need help ,they need food supplies ,animals and many other things. You will also be having lots of fun and you will be able to enjoy yourself.\n\nThere are lots of other place to see and different foods. If you join now you will see different cities,countries and foods. There are lots of diffent types of food to try and maybe you might really like one type of food. Cities are diiferent from other ones they may be alike but not really. There are different types of cities to see . Countrys are way different nthan other ones and some other ones speak a different langue. Don't you think it would be great if you to lean a different langue?\n\nWhen you would come back to your home you would be ale to teach others different cultires and lanuges.\n\nHelping others is a great thing to do and very inportant. There are lots of people without food or cloths to wear. People need help because their towns have been destroyed and they have nothing left for them. They also need animals to perduse meat, wool, and they can sell htem so they can get money to buy things. Lots of those people are dieing from hunger or they are out side with no place to sleep or even sit. They need our help,they need your help.\n\nYou might be think how am I going to get there. We will take you by boat but you might be wondering that seems boring and we will have nothing to do on the boat. There is lots of things to do on the boat. You can feed the animals as we take to different places. Does that seem boring to you if so you are right but there are othering things to do such as baseball and volleyball games and other games. On the back that is when you can really start having fun. SInce there are no animals on the boat that extra space can be use as a table-tennis room and you can have tournamets. You can also have fencing,boxing,reading, whittling.\n\nDo you still think you will not like being Seagoing CowBoys? There are many different food,cities,and countires. Helping the people in the need who dont't have food suplies and animals. Also all those fun games you would be able to play and how you would be able to make new friends and talk to different people. That seems like a great program i would join and i have joined the Seagoing CowBoys. To see different things,to help lots of people ,and to meet different people and have a good time with them. I don't know about you but I sure would want to be a part of the Seagoing Cowboys. If you would join the Seagoing Cowboys program you would have a great time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I hear think computers effect people Will I disagree say I think computer help us learn things faster Haveing computers helps community learn My first reason I think keep computers helps people hand eyes coordination jobs With skills typing work places like city type every day work hard They also learn facts sociatis Without knowing type get top class jobs My second reason telling us computers helpful helps children better school learning type high school learning math sce social studies language arts Computers also helps kids young age math character like dora elmo others So learning computer help learn fun time Which know parents would like Even new born babys learn read write math grow president one day My third reason helps send things world Without computers would old fashion style Also computers talk family member live far away In state country see long time Or chat old school friends back day You also buy thing computer In conclution I told computers effect people telling child better learning parents also I also add helps get jobs help hand eye cordination school So computer help communitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With technology making advancements everyday, it is natural that we adapt and adopt new forms of technology in our lifes, houses, hospitals, schools and even prisons,however, some technologies might get too far into our lives and into our heads.\n\nA new software developed at the University of Illinois promises to read and detect facial expressions that reveal how we felt at the moment the picture or camera footage was recorded. The project is now in early stages of development but is already able to read paintings and describe what they feel.\n\nIn his text \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", Nick D'Alto states that \" if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\", stating that the software can be used to monitor people and detect what products they take interest in, which is an unethical way to push companies into people's lives; moreover, the author claims that students can have their facial expressions monitored so that if they become bored, the computer can adjust the lesson to make it more engaging to the student. Although students have different needs, the usage of surveilance to capture their interest can be compared to the way babies are shown colorful and animated things to keep their attention, which can make the student's attention span even smaller than it has become, alienating and making them more dependant of technology.\n\nIn conclusion, the usage of this software to either sell products or monitor students is unethical at the least, and can lead to an even more alienated population.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, when society is developed, more and more people believe they deserve to get more benefits like spending free time going to shopping centres. In this essay, I will discuss about pros and cons of this problem.\r\n\r\n Firstly, shopping centres and supermarkets are places where people can use their money to buy goods, which also brings them better feelings like reducing stress. Moreover, it is a method that helps develop the economic background of the country. Teenagers will spend their time shopping instead of doing organized activities like sports or music, it just might they do not want to do them.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, going shopping can be harmful for teenagers when they have not earned money, which means their money almost come from their parent. This is a negative point because young people are not aware of how difficult to earn money . In addition, if they spend too much time going to the shopping centre, they will skip work have to finish. That is a big problem.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, young people spending their leisure time at shopping centres has both positive and negative. Positive things will be more when they know how to use money and manage timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, an increasing number of people make the decision to put off the time to have children. This may be caused by several reasons. I personally believe that young men deciding to have children later in life has benefits exceeding its drawbacks/has more benefits than defects.This essay will set light on/ discuss both merits and the possible defects of this phenomenon. \r\n\r\nConsidering the bad global economic trend, parents are facing the harsh challenges of raising a kid. Nurturing offspring needs guardians to have a sturdy/ solid financial foundation, so young couples accumulating more money for their children would be a wise choice. This argument rests on the idea that time is rare for the ones who just entered society and are striving hard in their careers. As a matter of fact, children’s physical and mental health requires a large amount of companionship from their parents. If they don’t get sufficient care, the kids will have a higher tendency to mental illness and even harder to establish/ build friendly relationships with other people. In addition, lack of social experience is the last but not least problem of this parent generation. With life expectancy becoming longer, young people at this age cannot find the chance to refer to other’s experiences. \r\n\r\nBy contrast, some drawbacks of delaying the time to give birth have been shown and the first letter is that the later a mother gives birth, the more serious damage would be done to her. Furthermore, this action will even course an ageing population and lead to an economic recession for the whole country. However, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh the disadvantages as the degree of happiness is determined by the healthy index of new generations. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion/ In a nutshell, putting off the time to have a kid has many advantages,but there is still one drawback to making this decision. As the age of young people goes up, they will have more financial foundation, time to spend with their families as well as the experiences to raise kids.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be an amazing new technology to introduce to the world. The ability to simply call a taxi and have a driverless car pick you up and take you wherever you wish, whenever you wish will revolutionize the way people get around. The technology may be in its primitive stages as of now, but soon driverless cars can help to automate many tasks that are currently being done by humans. Driverless cars will be an excellent addition to the modern world.\n\nNot only does the driverless car make sense practically, it also has many safety benefits. If all cars on the road are driverless, they can communicate much better and have much less risk for accidents, unlike with human drivers who can only control the car so well. The automated cars will be directly linked to brake systems, so if there is a need to brake, the car is hydroplanning, or another emergency is occuring, the computer system onboard the car can easily and effectively stop the car from spinning out by applying specific amounts of brake to each tire, as explained in section 5 of the story. Another safety measure taken with driverless cars is the ability for a human to take over. Google's driverless car will notify its passengers if they need to take over the wheel, as explained in section 7 because the task on the road is too difficult for the car to perform. Assurance of the ability for a human to still control the car is very important, since even though the computer systems onboard the car may be very smart, humans have the ability to judge most situations better than any computer can.\n\nOne counterargument to driverless cars is the loss of jobs. This is not stated in the article, but it would be an issue with driverless cars regardless. Many people working as taxi drivers, trash truck drivers, freight truck drivers, or any job involving driving can lose their jobs. This is a problem, especially in the US where there is already a shortage of jobs. Although driverless cars will bring many benefits, the cons of them have to be talked about as well.\n\nDriverless cars are a scary prospect. The thought of a car driving itself can make many people uneasy. If done correctly, however, driverless cars can revolutionize the way that many things today work. With companies such as Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi and Nissan planning to have fully automated and driverless cars on the road and ready to go by 2020, driverless cars are just that much closer to becoming a reality. Driverless cars would make an excellent addition to the modern world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been subject to debate that whether museums play a greater role in education or entertainment.In my opinion it seems to be both of them acceptable in same pathway as enjoyment or educational.\r\n\r\nfirstly ,a great conviction can be made by indicating the range of facilities they offer for joy.A good illustration of this they exhibit their value cultural artistic and scientific artifacts in attractive way supporting sound commentaries with headset to use.nevertheless museums play a pivotal role in entertaining all people in spite of age gap with depicting statues imaginary beings and items which show roots of human civilisation.for instance tools which has used for hunting in \"stone age\".\r\n\r\nnobody deny that facilitating sound resources for educational purpose are a great opportunity who do research. anybody can absorb knowledge on ancient history which are portraying powerful strength of our ancestors.Certain museums are fully equipped with electronic access of information and trained staff for guidance.\r\n\r\nto sum up by balance approach towards both of above views it can be easily made a sound environment for education and entertainment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph reader something think aboutWhen author concludes something like heshe wants reader make ending pridicshon And times means sequelSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not everyone invent new ways transportation future Al Smith learned hard way hired team builders install landing docks dirigibles Empire State Building The team ran numerous obstacles caused problems derailed progress One problem arised weight dirigible would add stress buildings frame reenforced steel Another issue safety Dirigibles outside United States ran hydrogen instead helium highly flammable The important problem nature Wind made maneuvering difficult violent current could potentially fatal passengers pedestrians They also fly close ground urban populated areas Although idea Empire State Building used airdock innovative practical well thoughtSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I home alone I felt nobody I home alone uncle sick parents went go visit I scared I felt left So I prayed prayed I fell heard nothing back So I fell asleep I heard voice talking I running field grass I saw man dressed dating walking came mud sitting anymore I ran asked man replied said little child look lonely I angel one I come tell father said talked long time I feel scared lonely anymore one cloud sky said go gurdian angle After rose deol I never forget angle And time I needed patience hear voiceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A good education is one of the most important parts of someones life.\n\nIt will normaly determine where someone will end up in their later life.\n\nEducation is also a big factor in being able to get the job you want to or have the life you want in general.\n\nIn a society where education is so important it we should always think of ways to help students through their education and give them the tools they need to succeed.\n\nBy using the Facial Action Coding System we can help teachers in their daily lives and we can provide students with a better more personalized education.\n\nIf we were able to use the Facial Action Coding System in schools it would help teachers emensly.\n\nWhen a teacher wants to see how their students react or feel about a certain lesson they could use this software to tell if they should try and teach it differently the next time or if they think they change how they teach the lesson.\n\nThis software could even help narrow down how certain groups of students might like to be taught so that they can be taught in a more suitable way for them.\n\nThis software could be very useful in learning more and more about how students feel about certain class or lesson they are taught.\n\nIf a student feels bored in a class and they are not being challenged at all in that class they can be moved somewhere they can be challenged by the work they are doing.\n\nA student could be getting annoyed or confused with a certain lesson or class and\n\nnot ask for help, but if the teacher knows then they could try to help that student\n\nin whatever it is they are struggling with.\n\nIf this software is used in schools soon or further down the line it will be very beneficial to the students and teachers who get to use it.\n\nIt will help to provide a better education for students.\n\nIt will also make that education more personalied and better for every student.\n\nThis will also help teachers connect better with their students and create a better environment for them.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System should be used in schools to help teachers with their jobs and to give students a better more personalized education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders went lallow dirigibles dock wanted put mooring mast top Empire State buildings flat roof problem stress dirigible s load also heavy wind pressure transmitted buildings foundation ft And since The steel frame Empire State building would modified strengthened accommodate situationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboy and UNRRA program because you get to see many unique places. Another reason is you get to help people by getting them food and helping them stay alive. Another reason is you get to help hungry soldiers thatare helping our country. In the passage Luke wanted to join the program not just to help people but to see all the amazing places in the story Luke said his favorite place was Greece. You could also see some amazing animals along the way.\n\nLuke liked Greece and the other places so much is in Greece he liked Acropolis. He liked the other places but Greece was his favorite. He also went on nine trips! The most of any Seagoing Cowboys. He also had to clean the stalls of the lower levels of the ship sometimes. One day he had to stop working for a couple of days because of cracked ribs because of flying overboard. The best part of being a Seagoing Cowboy is having fun. The cowboys played baseball,volleyball,and table-tennis and alot of other things too but Luke really loved being a Seagoing Cowboy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This \"Face on Mars\" should'nt be a big deal, I mean its only a natrual landform why do we need to keep going back and take pictures of it because you and other people think that it was created by aliens. The\"Face on Mars\" was not created by the aliens and if it was wouldn't that mean that they were trying to reach out at us, if the aliens were trying to reach out to us dont u think they would of done it a while back and if so have a better plan then putting a face on mars.\n\nWhen NASA unveiled the image for all too see the caption note they put said \"huge rock formation....which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" Even NASA didnt thing much of it other than it was a huge rock formation that was on mars. If NASA thought that it was a formation created by aliens they wouldnt of ever let the \"Face on Mars\" star in Hollywood films, appear in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store check out lines for over 25 years!\n\nSome people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, Just like people say that their keeping Area 51 a secret.\n\nIf it was really evidence of life on Mars then they would of hidden it like you guys say they do with Area 51.\n\nThe people who went out and took another look at Mars because people said that it was cloudy and that perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze said that\n\n\"As a rule of thumb, you can dicern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" they went on by saying. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" What they found out is that the picture actually shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-LANDFORMS common around the American West. I hope all of this proves my point to you that the \"Face on Mars\" was just a natrual landform and not a marking created by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient tolerant understanding Many people patience others I sort middle heres time I patient It bright sunny The sun shining like theres tomorrow To bad I couldnt play outside I busy kicking back eating popcorn watching big event It could give bragging rights I figure I need hope patience brother yelled happy face loser lions winning steelers loosing he added CAPSt get happy theres still plenty time left I replied worried look face I afraid I d loose taking deep brother I patient The clock winding It The score lions lead I still bit worried I never lost hope As game coming end back I steepless made awsorde pass I screamed dancing jumping around I told brother who loser huh wow took patient hope I told Patient mean lot Not I learn brother get little competive wait tolerate whats happening around youll end getting rewardedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes,In many provincial the administration likes to invest much amount of arts. Some people concur with this. On the other hand, some think the government should spend more on health and education. In the upcoming paragraphs we are clarifying both of this.\nArts is a important sector of government. It is the opportunity to show our ancient culture,custom and traditions. By the set up of many museums based on art. Government can set the country as a best tourism country. Secondly more invest in the arts can be a great source of income and increase economy of the province. In these days established of these museums are a great source of income.\nOn the other hand invest in developing arts. The administration should give immense importance to health and education. These are the foundation of success country perhaps of the arts. If the country is unfit or educational . The construction of arts is mindless. The government should open many health and education institutions, moreover government should spend exorbitant amounts on modifications of health and education committees rather than museums\nIn my opinion regime endorse to health and education besides of the arts because education plays a greater role in the development of country and state.I concurred artists identifying us with culture and religions. But in these days we need education institutes rather than an art museum. At last administration should build more school so it can install a prespeous provincelSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story like let readers know daughter saeng would come back take test loves Garden sotherefore forget springSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The usage of this technology that read emotional expressions of student is not valuable in its prospective. By doing this, we are just wasting money on something that is not revelant because no matter how many activties or different materials they are in a classroom, kids are still not going to be happy to go to school because it is the nature of students to do so. Although it is something fasinating to the people, personally I don't see the point that there is to be able to have it. The technology cost a lot of money but what is its truly purpose for us, how would it benefit us in any way possible. Would it make things easier to identify people's \"emotions\", or is it something that would benefits us in the history aspect of it.\n\nThis technology would really help scientist know more about different signs of emotions and how to deteact them. However, is it necessary to have a classroom computer that could recognize when the student is feeling an emotion in class that could easily be fixed. Teachers have a job, that is helping student learn more everyday and also helping them on the way to get there but the teacher needs to know when to help them in every way. Teachers need to know when the student doesn't understand what is going on, it is there job to guide them and give them extra help no matter what. However, the computer may not be a bad idea because\n\nif using the computer helped us discover how Mona Lisa felt when she was being painted. It could really help us when people commit suicide and know what they were truly feeling before they committed it.\n\nIt depends on which type of person you truly are to determine and if the technology is actually valuable to you and if it would benefit you in a way. There are different view points who think that the emotional expression technology is valuable and it does help them in someway but that is only if you are a scientist and you are doing a trial with a group of students. However, I still support my opinion because I still don't think it would benefit me in any shape or form. The technology could open up more minds that want to know more about facial expression and love the subject. Which in that cases then for you the technology would be very helpful towards you in so many ways. But doing a classroom computer would not change help the student or be valuable to them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Holy Avacadoes! A new computer software has just come out, and it is designed to insure that this software can recognize our emotions, feelings, and best of all... FACIAL EXPRESSIONS! You may think this is a good idea, or maybe even a bad idea. Never the less this was not intended to be a quote \"AS SEEN ON TV\" commercial promoting a computer software for $19.99. It may be a good piece of technology, and a smart way to see things from another perspective. While many may argue that using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, is valuable. This may be the best idea I have ever heard of, espcially in an age where people are using facial recongnition to recognize who is coming in and out of the schools, and people can track others medical histories, and so on, and so forth. Classrooms should be more reliable when it comes down to facial recogntion, and cyberbulling.\n\nOne example on how classrooms should be using facial recognition especially with students, can be shown on paragraph #7 whenever the author mentions that home computers can't always rely on facial recongiton, but that school computers can and should. \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions.\" As this paragraph is shown to readers, the author is trying to mention a point that home computers can be slow, and may not recognize faces easily, and that right there can lead to stalkers, and hacking occuring as well. Not only that but school computers can get hacked too, but with facial recogonition, they can stop that from happening.\n\nAnother example on how classrooms should use facial expressions especially with students is displayed fully in paragraph #5 when the author states that quote the \"calculation\" to recognize faces is so complex now that you can recognize everyone's face on a computer no matter if you mention there name. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look at her face.\" This shows us the readers that we can identify peoples faces, on either a computer, or in person. It can be very useful for counslers because they can identify who this person, or people are walking into there offices.\n\nFinally, the last example on how classrooms should use computer facial recognition especially with students, can be traced to paragraph #9 they claim that quote \"(Putting on a happy face\" actually works!) this shows us the readers that whenever the computers try to recognize your face, they can also see how you were feeling, whether it was happy, sad, or even emotion. And pictures can be a good recource to identify a cas, or in the case a student.\n\nIn conclusion these examples I showed were good whenever it came down to finding out what students are in where, but it can help not only in a classroom, but aslo in the world of law enforcement, and our phones. But if you use it incorrectly, you may have serious trouble in your hands.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars can help the world for the better in many ways. Some may argue otherwise. These cars can help us by reducing care accidents. Also these care consume less fuel. Finally it's just simply an easier way to travel.\n\nFor starters, car accidents will be reduced tramendously. Google has been testing their cars since 2009 and have not had a crash yet, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Having less accidents on the road will decrease the mortality rate for driving and simply make driving a simpler and safer activity to do.\n\nAlso, fuel consumption on these cars are way lower. That can help the environment in an extremely positive way, and help slow down global warming by not producing as many green has gasses such as carbon dioxide. \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" These cars can really make a difference in our world tomorrow.\n\nFinally, it's an extremely easy and convienent way to travel. By having us not drive, we can do other things that we wouldn't be able to do while we are occupied by driving. It's an easy simple way to go about driving and can make long car rides not as bad, because you have other things that can keep you entertained while the car does all the driving.\n\nI know driverless cars will soon no longer be apart of the future, but as apart of the present. These cars will help our society and help environment greatly. I believe driveless cars are the answer to lots of our problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a computer to read a student mind in a class room is valuable. Coming to school one day and the kid won't tell u there frustration. You can just use the computer to scan how they are feeling. That will also help the teacher to find out how can they help the student.\n\nAlso,having technology that can read people emotions can help someone who doesn't want to be helped. In the classroom the computer can tell you if the student is confused or bored. When the computer picks up on the student feelings. It will be up to the teacher to give that student more help and excitement.\n\nThere are different ways to tell emotion. Just by looking at them you can have your opinion on whats going through there head. When you have a computer that tells you there emotion you can have a fact on there emotion.Using a computer technology can solve a problem way more easier\n\nTeachers doesn't always know whats going on in there students head all the time . Having a classroom computer that can tell your emotions is very valuable. The computer can help better behavior and the students education just by telling you how they feel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The maps show the modification of a university sports court from 1990 to the present. \n\nOverall, the studied area's west and south have undergone the most changes, while the opposite pattern is true to the heart and the north of the court. \n\nRegarding the west of the university sports court, the park vanished and made room for the basketball court. There used to be a car park northwest of the court, which emerged and replaced the tennis court. The previous tennis court has been located in the southeast of the court and doubled in size afterwards. \n\nTurning to the right side of the university sports court, a new building is established, encompassing the sports facilities, including the cafe, reception room, changing room, fitness centre and indoor pool. While the cafe and reception room have stayed unchanged, the changing room has been enlarged and adjacent to the fitness centre, which altered the old tennis court’s position. And finally, the current indoor pool is the area of the previous outdoor pool in 1990.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter big part life I believe laughter good healthy relationship This true story laughter s affects lifeLaughter good thing body mind soul lightens mood I m feeling I m glad say I lots relationships many blessed laughter My mother I good relationship together almost time re together room bound laughter My mother I laugh time silly things We laugh laugh time nt even know re laughing She make laugh ridiculous things I m also pretty sure s person get spit drink dash board silly face made My mother nt one I good time I remember conversation I good friend mine way people laughed I told I noticed people usually laughed different vowel sounds like e It seemed odd I ever heard people laughing vowels I u She thought thing I came idea laugh vowels I u Of course people busy lives notice us laughing oddly fun never really realize hard laugh occasion upon My mom I aunts house trying desperately laugh We decided facial cleansing mask seen The mask made whisked egg whites toilet paper dip toilet paper egg whites plaster face wait least fifteen minutes s completely dry take wise nt work The three us instructions told us dismayed saw final results efforts We nt upset looked repulsive upset looked like bunch crazy ladies found exceedingly difficult burst laughter The site mother aunt ridiculously funny I leave room fifteen minutes face could dry After fifteen minutes I came back find mother aunt bathroom drying others face hair dryer After seeing I could nt stand longer I started crying laughter mask cracked hard work went drain day one funniest days life laughed together hard abdomens hurt I love laugh I ve said I personally many different forms laughter I laugh really hard I laugh air lungs forget breathe What looks like others I clue I must red faced girl rocking back forth Other times I kind manly ha ha lucky get hear snort The thing I m trying say laughter good thing made big difference life I nt know I would without I love laugh I think I would die I could nt laughSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people argue that companies should focus on their employee’s performance for achieving tasks rather than noticing the way they dress. Does an employee's dressing really matter for identifying his work quality? I do not agree with this notion . I believe that focusing on employees’ working efficiency will not only encourage positive competition among staff, but it will also help to increase the financial growth of a company. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nDressing appropriately is primarily important when a firm has a staff of diverse cultures. Firstly, people from various ethnicities wear different apparels which not only represent their traditions and religions, but they will also show their attachment with their norms. Secondly, employers need to understand that there would be significant consequences if they ignore a standard dress code. For example, wearing an unethical dress such as a short skirt can be mentally challenging for a Muslim girl who is working on the same floor as it is against their cultural and religious beliefs. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nSimilarly, executives' efforts to have acceptable clothing in the workplace will also enhance working efficiency. If employers give freedom for dresses then people might be focusing on fashion, talking about different apparel brands and shopping malls, which in result can cause significant damage to business efficiency as people will be spending too much time on these activities. So, businesses should try to develop scenarios where productivity is maximized rather than encouraging an activity such as dress freedom which can harm them in the long term. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we discussed how cultural awareness can be appreciated when business executives focus on employees' working dresses , and how a healthy working environment can be created by focusing on personal choices such as wearing dresses and jewellery.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology that reads emotion? sounds like a crzy mad great thing huh? well let me tell you why I think its a bad idea for the rt community..\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author talks about this \"amazing\" technology that can read emotion from a 3D picture. The reason that I think the Technology is a bad thing is becasue yes its good that the technology can read emotion of paintings but its not at the same time.\n\nIts not a good thing becasue thats the art of looking at the art, to figure the emotion out on your own, seeing the different emotions and seeing the anger or the confusion instead of having it told to you. thats the beauty of looking at the art and in my opinion the Technology ruins that beauty by telling the emotion.\n\nthats why I think this new emotion reading technology is bad for the art community and isnt valueable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage will most definitly lead to an overall better economy due to several reasons. Less car pollution will clean up the air, there wouldnt be much traffic and people will take local buses and taxis so that would reduce emissions. All around the world, differant countries are doing things to limit car usages and they definitly work.\n\nIn Germany, there is a community called Vauban where cars are not permitted unless you pay for a $40,000 parking space. This is helping lower emissions and they have noticed a differance. There are stores and resturants that are in walking distance to the people so they do not need to worry about long distances. When people have necessitys right near them, the only thing they would ever have to worry about is getting to work, but there are taxis and buses that can do that for you so there is no need for a car.\n\nDifferant places around the world are also limiting the uses of cars. In Paris, they enforced a partial driving ban to clear up the smog. What they did was made it so odd and even liscence plate numbers would switch off each day so that it would cut the number of people driving in half. If you get caught driving with the banned liscence plate number for that day then you would have to pay a 22 euro fine. Traffic went down nearly 60 percent because public transit was free of charge for the days cars were banned. About a week later, the French party decided that the smog had cleared up enough for them to lift the ban.\n\nIn other countries there are special days in the year where cars are not aloud. In Bogota, Colombia, there is a certain day where all cars are banned and only buses and taxis are permitted and violators would face a $25 fine. Many other cities and counties are seeing that these days would help clear pollution and they ar very intrieged by it and more than 118 miles of bicycle paths have been made since the mid 1990s. Many diffrant parks and sports centers have been built across the city and upscale shopping districts and resturants also bloomed.\n\nMany people are finally realizing one of the biggest pollution emissions and are trying to cut back on the number of cars on the road. Everybody should try carpooling or taking public transits and taxis instead of driving thier own cars. It would drasticlly reduces smog as proved by many differant countrys car limitations. Even once a year if they had a day where noone drove, there would probably be a noticable differance in the pollution levels but noone will know for sure until it happens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I understand experts saying people spending much time computers nt agree Im writing today tell opinion effects computers people time usage computer dead If please continue I would like share thoughts Computers today consuming world People spending way much time computer I believe set timer long computer Lets say set hour limit get I think would help spending much time inside gon na able get enough exercise nt good health Please continue learn use computer Parents set good example kids If parents use computer child think s ok If child starts spending time computer wo nt spending anytime friends Kids today need spend time outside playing games computer Also parents child need spend time together computer cant spend time together Please read go computer dead Computer dead term I call want use computer We need healthy computer usage If nt could start get withdrawls computer spend time computer If go computer dead slowly start take lives I think happen hard get stop using computer Please read finish reading letter Thank reading need mange time issues use computer computer dead I hope consider thoughts Thank time spent readingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading the article called, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\". And about how there is a machine that can actually read peoples emotions and put their emotions into percentages. And how they used it to find out how the Mona Lisa was feling when she was painted i think that is truly amazing. i think that we should use this technology at school to read the students emotions.\n\nI think its a great idea to use for school, so teachers can tell how the student is feeling and can find a way to help them. In paragraph 6 the author uses the exmple of how we could use this new technology during school for example he wrote, \"If you smile when a web ad appears on you screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, th next ad might be different.\" And instead of ads they could be explanations on how to do a problem. I think that that would inprove the students learning.\n\nIn conclusion i think that we should use this new techonoly to our aventage and use it in the classrooms so we can tell which students need help and which one doesn't. That way we can help them. They might even learn even more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The life lived child paradise eyes He learned family really people cares eachother matter And eyes whole community one big family His parents kind giving generous everyone Despite different customs elsewhere cultures united one family They would lend hand anyone needed know d Throughout life d never forget wonderful childhood things taught GenerositySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in these modern times children facing toward the digital world. however, there is advantages and disadvantages giving free time for children spent time on TV, video, and computer games. In this essay, I will examine both sides and then explain why I believe how these equipment are good for children's' development.\r\n\r\nfirstly, let children watching TV can improve their focus and knowledge. for example, watching National geographic channel and news channel can improve knowledge of children and also they can pratice their focus. furthermore, play educational games on computer can improve problem-solving skills for children. for instance, children who play crossword challenge they can learn about varied vocabulary which is can improve their speaking. \r\n\r\nsecondly, there is also disavantages from those activity. if children get addicted on watching TV or playing video games, it will reduce their physical activity, exposure to voilence and inappropriate content, it will distractions from homework and other responsibilities. along with that parents have big rule in this situation. the parents need set the rule for their children. for example, when the time watch TV or video games and when time for study or do assigment . \r\n\r\nin short, obviously parents have an important rules for these situation. these situation can give positif effects or opposite in depends how parents handle and control their children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting author cyclist definitely effect mood physical condition To start mentioned the high deserts California June implied weather hot causing author sweat bikes along Next change terrain soon approaches rolling hills difficult bike Finally author sees sign reads ROUGH ROAD AHEAD DO NOT EXCEED POSTED SPEED LIMIT becomes discouraged bike even capable reaching speed limit still manage getting past rough road After passing road approaches picture boy drinking juice posted juice factory Seeing sign likely perpetuates thirst leaves exhausted frustrated Such features surroundings played large part authors change moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper many people addicted computers They think computer help yes others helps work education Most children addicted computer games children addicted computers For reason computers lot effects people It might affect children s education might cause bills electricity went higher The worst computer home reason millions teenagers got killed always talking online people nt know Computers sometimes dangerous people Do people still need computer Having computer home good specially children This computers affect education Parents nt want happen children A lots uneducated children stay home drugs street Yes computer help studies computer help studies projects children computer want play games That s lot nt learn anything school learn lot computer games They stop computer games Also computers home cause people s electricity bills went higher nt computers Other people think computers ca nt give problem computers works electricity pay electricity bills If electricity bill year nt computer might go high bill computer It s big problem Nevertheless computers dangerous Computers good bad Without doubt teenagers killed talking online strangers people Most website like danger months husband wife got killed The husband killed wife single relationship status She got shot husband However husband killed They re got shot Talking online meeting strangers people nt know reason lost Parents computers home unless use needs room children ca nt use Now time agree Do need computers home Can live without computer We nt need computers home yes live without computer We activities family exercise health go picnic friends fun go vacation whole family Local newspaper I want tell people stop computer tell go family fun activities go vacationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you be willing to figure out what is going on in Vebus? In the articule The Challenges of Exploring Venus there are scientist that want to find more about Venus. Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin\". Would you be willing to explore or send Items to explore Venus, so we can know more about it?\n\nIts would be amazing if NASA could get samples of the rock, gas, and other things on Venus. The reason it would be amazing is so that we can know how Venus is just like our earth they call Venus Eath's \"twin\" so it would be amzaing if they had a lot more in common. NASA is willing to send people there but the only problem is that it is to hot there for people to go there and land there and take samples. The only way NASA said they could send people was if thyey could hover over Venus at about thirty miles or so, that is about how high a jet airplane fly. NASA would like to make things so that humans do not have to risk there lives to get samples so NASA is making some things in the articule it says this\n\n\"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplidied electronis made os silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulatiing to chaos of Venus's surface and hahve lasted for three weeks in such conditions\"(7). Nasa finally thinks they have found somethng they could use that was made a lon time ago. it is called the mechanical computer the device was first envisioned in the 1800s and played a important role in the 1940s during WWII. the reason scientist believe they can use this is because the device makes calculations by using gears and leavers and do not need electronics at all, so they are saying systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nAfter all would you decide to help out and figure out more about Venus? Scientist are doing a great job so far with everything they are figuring out about what could be more helpful to them. They also know that is can be safe for them to hover over Venus instead of landing on it and having a horrible tragidy. They have a lot of leads of what they can use and lets hope he can find more out about Venus in a couple of years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affects cycles affecting altermmation continue For example miles looked upon ramshackeled sched several rusty bumps corral This sight troubled In desert water tasted like flavor battery acid It also goes say test inner spirit It also states went along drops water tumbleweeds This passage shows obstacles go made little confidence Although situation somewhat unbearable still kept strivingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today is an era of globalization and modernization and technology play a significant role. Some people believe that because of technology we have seen a wide gap between the rich and poor people. While, an army of people observes that, technology, plays a vital role to bring the rich and poor community together. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument, and provide evidence why technology enhances the gap between the wealthy and a derived class. \nTo begin with, a wide range of products is available in the market, that's based on technology. People from the higher class easily bought expensive products as compared to the poor class community because they have money. Second, Wealthy pupil also completes their work in a time by the use of computers and other electronic devices. But, lack of knowledge and less availability, poor people can’t afford expensive items. For instance, According to Hindustan Times, the gap between the rich and the poor people increases because of the advancement in technology. Therefore, Technology is responsible to widen the gap between the two. \nOn the opposite side, some people claim that technology is helpful for both localities. They also believe that with the help of mobile phones, people can easily communicate with each other. They also think rich and poor people can also entertain themselves by sitting on a single roof like cinema houses. This is possible only because of the technology. So, according to them, technology helps to bring the two communities together. \nTo put it in a nutshell, I pen down, saying that although technology brings two classes together. But, it increases the gap between the two, as rich people have money and they can easily buy the product that is based on technology, however; poor people cannot.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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