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"content": "Climate change is becoming a significant threat over the world. Some people argued that we should adapt to survive with it rather than try to solve it. I completely disagree with this opinion as we still have time to tackle this matter so that we could reduce the impact on human beings.\n \nThe Government and individuals have responsibilities to combat climate change, and they can use several measures to protect or at least mitigate the earth’s climate. In terms of government, they could impose laws to limit carbon dioxide emissions, which causes global warming. For Instance, the Government could impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies, and therefore money could be invested in renewable energy resources from solar, wind or water power. In terms of Individuals, they could become energy efficient by using public transports and bicycles. It only would happen if people will be aware of all these issues and their consequences. For example, conducting an awareness campaign on the importance of creating greener spaces by plants, trees and avoiding deforestation is the best way to educate people so that they can participate in reducing this problem.\n \nIf we cope with this problem rather than solve it, there would be severe results. Hence, there would be melting of polar ice caps, which causes an increase in the sea-level, leading to disasters like drought or flood. Obviously, these disasters coincide with diseases band famine. For example, people who are living in low-lying areas and don’t have safeguards could face problems like scarcity. Therefore, they are fleeing to other countries due to climate change. As a result, we would see outbreaks of disease, as well as increased homelessness and poverty.\n \nTo conclude, it is clear that without solving this issue, we cannot survive with a healthy life, So the best way is to use several measures by government and individuals so that we remain protected from their consequences.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When you talk about \"unmasking the face on Mars\" what are you really talking about, well it is a natural forming landformation on mars.When people talk about haunted grocery checkouts, put in movies and books you really think about that pop icon \"the face on Mars.\"Since the first photograph taken in 1976 the formation has looked just like a face.\n\nJust as easily it could be a alien statue it could be a mesa on the Red Planet it is know that mesa are highly common. After a few days of discovery the first photot was released to the public by c aptioning the photo \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head.\" it enages alot of attention.\n\nWhen man can reach the Red Planet we will be positive what \"the face on Mars.\" is. Not everyone is satisfied with the picture eveidence. Acoriding to the article the face is located at 41 degrees north on the martian latitude where it was winter in April '98 a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board had to perr through clouds to see the face which may have caused the image to be incorrect.But the chances of these results be incorrect is 1 in 100 the photo was taken by specialist doing their job.\n\nAs if the stress was'nt enough they were sent back up to the Red Planet in the summer of 2001. And whenhey returned with pictures of a rock formation it was certian that the \"face on Mars\" was just an odd rock formation. With shadows like a face and rocks like a head the face will continue to be a pop icon around the world.Even if the face is only a natural landformation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This is about a computer program that can tell you about your smile. It tells you the percent of your smile like happniess and sadness. No emotions are safe. This computer can do a 3-D computewr model. The computer was developed by Prof Haung.\n\nThe technology can tell you on what your emotionsin your smile. This technology can identify students emotion expressions. It can exactly detect in what that person is felling. Prof Haung has put in an algorithms into the computer so it can give you the percentiges in your smile. The comptuer uses Di Vinci's 6th code for this program. The computer can tell you if you are happy or sad in your smile.\n\nTo sum up this programing. This computer graming can tell you anything about your smile. No ordninarly computer can do what this computer can do because it doesn't have the hard drive to do it. Dr. Hung has a partner that helped him build the computer. The Prof. name is Nicu Sebe. They both developed this program for the comouter that can tell you if you are happy or sad.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Computers topic ask Sure arnt good dos nt mean use correctly souce life Computers helpful many ways information post The social networks help kids get interactive world During school kids projects without computers Read I explain details Computers know one worlds greatest information posts ten people survayed said computers value everyday life The earthquake haiti recovalng half world wouldnt know computers heart dont take away valued info world Secondly would say I told kids socialy retarded ever Well true Over worlds people rely intractive websites comunicate Fact children friends internet ever You dont want ar know person kept kids living I dont think Lastly people school use computers projects instance horrible hand writing bigest project year So turned computer type gets But CAPS computer would gotten project In fact teachers wear tell kids type hwprojects says CAPS year kids pass class typing would flunk got point importantly To sumit lazy enough read story essay Computers used everyday needs finding information Makeing friends projects So gon na person sits back lets happen going get stop maddness Its choice think socity retarded dumb kids fail grade yearSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Social work is always an essential factor for society. In recent days, there are arguments that young people must involve them to do social activities without salary and it will enhance both environment and the people who involve in it. I strongly accept that involvement in such activities helps them to understand the view of society and more individuals involve them to take part in the activities.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the youngster’s able to understand the difficulties in society. When people take part in social development activities, they easily look into the issues and provide their solutions for the improvements. For example, my friends and I were a part of the NGO academy and we were involved in cleaning activities during our summer vacation. In addition, people involved in such activities will gain a certificate. It will help them to highlight it in their resume and increase the opportunity on getting jobs.\r\n\r\nIn addition to the above, working in social reformation jobs without grand will attract people in the same age groups. Many youngsters feel shy about involving themselves in unpaid jobs but looking at the same categories of people at work will encourage them to participate. For instance, when I was a kid, I was not bold enough to take part in the activities until I saw my friends involved.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the involvement of people is always essential for social development and it is a personal decision to work on paid or unpaid jobs. I strongly believe ,the involvement of youngsters in activities without getting paid will help them to see the hurdles in society as well as more people involved by looking at their presence.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "From the article, \"The challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it pesents. This paper will show how the author provided evidence in supporting this idea.\n\nFirst, Venus might have once been a fertlie plant like Earth. There in evidence of Venus being covered with large waters and forms of life in the past. Second, scientists and reseachers are finding ways to allow the machines to last long enough to provide knowledge about the world of Venus and discover new things. Thrid, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of distance, density, and size. This shows that it will not be as hard getting to Venus rather than any other planet.\n\nIn Conclusion, this proves that exploring and studying Venus out weighs the dangers it presents itself.\n\nThe past life of Venus should not be unknown just because of its dangers and hardships that block the way to knowing more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear newspaper writer I think computer posative effect people helps people around world learn speak different language helps people talk friends around world helps people making easier write letter send people work bosses need report end day Those three reason computers posative effect helps people learn speak different language without spending lot money like using rosetta stone spend us dollars online dont spend dime best part free The slogan rosetta stone I spent less money months formal classes I think new slogan better learning company anyone else That helps people learn different language also helps people making easier talk friends aim web cast ever text make easier talk friends internet The reason created people dont travel far away places spend money tell friend important news one thing So conclusion dont spend lot money tell friend something The third reason computer helps people people san e mail theor boss faxing final repoet big interview new position place work helps boss making easier read better could japan boss could florida take like minutes get bosses computer That easier send messages boss The three main reasons learn different language without paying dime talk friends easier send messages boss easier calling Those three reasons computers posativeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concluded story paragraph make clean slate like started So past longer haunts Saeng sounds bit relief takes mom plate I believe feels better end paragraph sounds sure She sounds certain sounds want start says snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again To sounds like brand new person Who forgotten pastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial\n\nAction Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. This is very vaulabe and could be great for classrooms. For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen,a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be diffrent \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"then it could be used to modify the lesson, like an affective human constructor.\"\n\nthe facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" obeserves Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly). using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facia; movements-- in a real face or in the painted face by mona lisa.\n\nin fact we humans peform this same impressive \"caculation every day. for instance, you can probaly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\n\nOf course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. Dr. Huang observes that artists such as Da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisley enough to covey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. Perhaps Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms are a different sort of \"Da vinci code.\n\nwe should really give, Facial Action Coding System a chace because\n\n\"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to understand that,too.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, the extent of environmental issues that we are facing has become vast. The first feasible solution that comes into people's minds is increasing the cost of fuel. I personally quite agree with this idea but I believe that it's not the best solution.\r\n\r\nrising global warming and garden gases cause people in some developed countries to think about the right ways to prevent a huge catastrophe that is a threat to human lives on the earth. in my opinion, increasing the price of fuels is a little efficient because it leads to individuals who care about the environment using alternatives, for example, public transportation, carpooling, cycling, utilizing electric vehicles, and walking which leads decrease in noise pollution. But education is always the best, we should be aware people of the disasters that we will face in the future and offer them some substitutes for cars with the positive impacts that they have on the earth. If governments set some limitations and rules about using cars in major cities, it will influence social behaviors.\r\n\r\nAlthough, these solutions are useful and encourage a considerable numerous to profit from buses, underground, bicycling, and so on. But it isn't a good idea for some people who live in rural areas and small cities in which there isn't enough public transportation at regular times. In some of these districts, there is just a bus that transfers people one or two times a day. Therefore this view is irrational.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the thought that the cost of fuel should go up isn't reasonable and it doesn't consist of benefit all folks. So, the power of education shouldn't be overlooked and we had better invest in superior education about this problem everywhere.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There's a face on Mars! Just kidding its a buttle or mesa landform. In 1976 NASA has sent Viking 1 spacecraft was snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2. when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a humans face. Couple days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The face on Mars has since become a pop icon. Some scientists believed the face was an alien artifact.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 when MGS flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Revealing a natural landform. there is no alien monument after all. Some people was not satisfied because they wanted to believe it was an actually alien artifact. But no, the MGS had to go take another photo to prove its a landform.\n\nSome people ain't satisfied because they think the camera didnt get a good enough pictures of the alien markings cause they were hidden by haze. Everyone is wishing its alien face on Mars but instead they are getting a landform. Gravin says that they dont pass over the face very often because its not easy to find Cydonia.\n\nOn April 8, 2001 Malin's team has took another photo of the face. but we all know its a landform. if there were objects in the photo like airplane on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks. The pitures is actually showing you a buttle or mesa landform. So when the MGS said it wasnt a face people got upset and wanting them to take another photo.\n\nSo for everyone who is believing thats the face on Mars is wrong. Its a landform common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plian of Idaho. says Garvin. \"Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars. So from now on its a landform not a face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Self driving cars in my opinion is a cool consept and could become succeful in later years but in my eye are technology is not advance enough for this to work out. In my opinion society is still not ready for this type of tehchnology nor are they willing to be wise with it. Self drivin car may help drivers in some way but nothing is perfect including these cars. Kinks in the these car are always going to be present so may be fixable some may not. These problems or kinks could be small or really big. My reasonig are as followed.\n\nSelf drivin car are going to be dirvin be technology sensors and a mainframe to recieve this data as talk about in paragraphs 5 but these sensors and computer hardware and software are not gonig to last forever like almost everything it going to break. Lets say this software breaks in the middle of the freeway or while driving through traffic not only do you put your self at risk but the people around you as well. In addition to this, the car will have to be driven manually and is going to have to be fixed and the self driving car will no longer be a self driving car till it is fixed and in my experience with computer software and hardware its not cheep to get it fixed and to imagine getting software that complex fixed is going to come at a high cost. There is also another risk to using this technology, hackers they could hack into your automotive's hardware system and cause many problems on the road. Weather also play a key component the heat could overheat the system, the rain could fry it, cold could freeze it and brake it and etc. Also the cars inablitiy to drive hazardous roads which is inform to us in paragraph 7 means that the switch be autopiolt to manual is going to have to happen this appens in other modes of transportation like airplanes. But given that not all drivers are reasponsible enough to always chhep there eye on the road when they are driving imagine them going at 30 miles per hour not paying attention and the car switches to manual.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The new technoglogy presented to us is great. It has helped us live beter and longer, it also has helped us excel in knowing the world better, and we are all smarter because of it. But should it dictate our every day life?\n\nThe way we are letting technolgoy rule our very own lifes today. Thomas Huang has come out with FACS (Facial Action Coding System) to determine how a student is feeling in the classroom. I feel that we should not have facial technology to determine student current behavior and feelings.\n\nThis new technolgoy in todays school would be a major privacy problem. What if the student wants to be left alone and the teacher keeps bothering him/she because the FACS tells the teacher that the student is confused but wants to figure it out on his own. This invasion of privacy teachers should not have acces to because it is not their job to get invloved with the personal life of the student.\n\nBut it could be usesful to use in school at the same time. The program could detrimine if student needs help or not according to the text \"A classroom computer could recognize\n\nwhen a student is become confused or bored.\" There for it could improve the students education. But at the same time it would call for more individaul contact with the student because everyone learns differently.\n\nIt would also be very expensive for every school to get this technology. So it would not be fair to only have the higher public schools to get this program and the people who need it the most will not have access. Also what if there was a malfuction in the system how would we know not to trust it.\n\nOver all i feel very uneasy about this technology. All though there is evidence to back up this program up, it would still be a major violation of privacy. And when would the teachers know when to back away from the student if they\n\ndo not want help. in conclusion i feel this program should not take affect in school at any time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Influencing plays vital role in everyone's life and most of the masses from young age are often influence by their same age people. Although, it have several advantages yet it also have some disadvantages. This essay describes both sides.\r\n\r\nTeenagers learn more from those who are in similar age because they fell more confident in front on them as compared to teachers or parents. Also,they can share everything with each other including personal matters without any kind of shyness,moreover, young students learn easily and faster due to peer pressure which help in their academics. For instance, according to the survey of 'Times of Japan' 90% school school students perform better because they study with their same age friends during the lockdown period. This happens because students who are shy in class,they feel free to ask anything with their friends.\r\n\r\nHowever, sometimes things goes wrong and the reason is peer pressure because sometimes youngest join wrong group as a consequence,they lost right track. Apart from this, In this technology world, most of the students spend their time with social media sites and when they influence from their influencer they quite studies in between and try to do those things which the influencer done in his life without as research and they face failure and the cause is peer pressure.\r\n\r\nIn summary, peer pressure has both merits and demerits but, its disadvantages do not outweigh its advantages. Because its cons seen in rare cases.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Car accidents have become a growing problem around the world. Anything from drunk driving to texting and driving has caused people to injure and even take the lives of many people. The development of computer-driven cars have the purpose of using innovative technology to prevent these events from occuring while also allowing drivers to have more freedom behind the wheel. Everyone should switch to computer-driven cars once they are fully developed because they contain sensors that allow the car to carry out many of its own functions, are able to alert the driver if their assistance is needed, and have in-car systems that prevent accidents that would occur through texting and driving.\n\nTo begin, these computer-driven cars already have many featurres that allow the car to do the same thing as if a human was driving. The article on driverless cars states,¨ BMW announced the development of\n\n¨Traffic Jam assistant.¨ The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph.¨(driverless cars are coming 7) allowing everyday drives to the gas station or the grocery store to be eliminated and the simple act of getting into the car as if it were a cab, to be carried out. Also,¨ They can steer, acelerate, and brake themselves.¨ (driverless cars are coming 7) shows that the cars are just as handy as if a human was driving them.\n\nNext, other sensors alert the driver as needed. In case there is construction or another type of barrier that might confuse a driverless car, there are sensors to alert the human in the car that they are needed. The driverless cars will have installed,¨ in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.¨(driverless cars are coming 8) allowing for a fun ¨Drive¨ to the destination while also having a safe one. To further support this idea,\"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.¨ (driverless cars are coming 8) reassures the idea that one can enjoy the ride while also knowing they are safe and can take over when necessary.\n\nLastly, driverless cars can prevent accidents caused by cell phone use while driving. Cell phone users are not aware of where the car is going if they are looking at their phone. When the article says,¨ something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.¨ (driverless cars are coming 8) reffering to the heads-up system, it creates a feeling of saftey knowing one can still be interacting with technology while being aware of what is going on with the car. Also, ¨ In this way, the car-system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.¨ ( driverless cars are coming 8) seals the deal that driverless cars are a innovative new way to prevent accidents through cell phone use.\n\nThe ability to carry out similar functions as if a human were driving, the addition of sensors that alert the driver when needed, and the ability to prevent more car accidents through cell phone use are what make driverless cars a necessity to the world. Though some have argued it would be hard to trust the technology, tests have proven otherwise. The technology and innovativness of the car are very promising. Ultimately, having a driverless cars is what everyone needs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that it is essential for adolescents to do unpaid jobs due to the fact that it brings some specific advantages for either teenagers or the whole society. It is my firm belief should not do unpaid job due to some reasons. \r\n\r\nSome people point out that doing unpaid jobs bring specific privileges for teenagers. The most powerful argument in favour of this idea is that this kind of job broadens teenagers’ horizons in some way and they learn to be more altruistic. The ability to be helpful without any expectation cannot be easily obtained. Moreover, youngsters’ time is extremely precious; therefore, they need to make the best use of it. Additionally, from these people’s point of view, doing voluntary jobs expands their skills and prepares them to go through the fierce society in future.\r\n\r\nHowever, this idea cannot be easily approved. We can say beyond any doubt that teenagers’ time is valuable. Working during these years is more beneficial since it is a way to be more independent and they are taught to be more responsible and manage their money. Hence, doing unpaid jobs highly probably do not result in any advantageous points. Without any doubt, these kinds of voluntary jobs might have moral effects on teenagers. In this case, they are no longer apathetic to society and its problem. Having said that, it would be difficult to ignore their effort and leave them without paying any money in return.\r\n\r\nTo recap, working essentially during youth is extremely crucial since it brings a wide variety of benefits to them. I tend to think that juveniles’ efforts should not be ignored and they need to receive their income fairly to be more optimistic, hopeful and encouraged to outperform in subsequent yearsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Could driverless cars prevent less accidents and be more safe for other drivers?\n\nDriverless cars could prevent less accidents for drunk drivers, texting and driving, and other people who are on the road.\n\nOther drivers on the road get in accidents and get killed from the people in the other car. The other person could be drunk and hit them. or they could be texting and get into an accidnet with other people. But if we have driverless cars we could prevent those people from getting behind the wheel and being in danger of killing other people for there stupid mistakes. It wouldnt only save the life behind the wheel but it will help save thousands of more.\n\nthousands and thousands of people die every year from texting and driving. They have made apps on your phone to prevent you from it, there are commercials to stop you, and there is even a law now for it. But it still seems like they can't prevent this from happening. But with driverless cars i feel like the number of accidnets for texting and driving will decrease. It could just be a safer and easier way for people.\n\nDrinking and driving is one of the most talked about and one of the biggest leading casues in accidents. If you got caught drinking and driving and you get pulled over you can go to jail for it. They have all these ways to try and prevent you from doing it. They even have sad commercials on television for it. But if we have driverless cars than it would be a much safer place on the road. there wont be thousands of accidents due to drunk driving now. and it will save not jsut your life but many others as well\n\nIf we could prevent drinking and driving and texting and driving by using driverless cars i think it would be a better world and it would save thousands of lives in the worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While few people think that weather has an eminent effect on an individual's path in life,others consider that wealth has a substantial effect.I believe that climate has the most effect on one's life.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,there are people who opine that weather plays a significant role in people's life because they are experiencing severe effects of climate change.According to them,slowly changing weather conditions,rising sea levels and other extreme weather events are devastating.It is commonly believed that there are people who struggle to earn money,support their families and build a stable home,this is getting harder every day as the climate crisis continues.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,there are others who think that wealth is playing a major role in the region because in this modern ,era everything is dependent on the economy ,For instance :If a person wants to leave a healthy and happy life they need more wealth for that .To raise the economy government is struggling by keeping taxes and GST on the economy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite people having different views,i believe that climate has the greatest involvement in a person's life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pusuit despite the dangers because we get to know more about Venus and in the future we might get to live there. Venus are almost like earth. One of the challenging thing about Venus is a thick atmosphere. And closest to the earth.\n\nVenus is like Earth because is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. And also the closest in distance. But the orbit of the sun move at different speed. Since is the closest, Human sent spacecraft to Venus. It is the challenging planet for human to study.\n\nVenus has thick atmosphere. I think it will be hard to survive. The temperature is over 800 degree and the atmosphere is 90 times greater than Earth. Venus also have the hottest temperature. Venus may once have been the most Earth like planet. It was probably covers largely with oceans and forms of life.\n\nThe challenge of visiting Venus has value and we get to see how it look like from the insight. Also human curiosity will lead us intimidating endeavors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this story the author is talking about how humas have not made it on the planet of Venis. At least that we know about. The article said that scientits think there may be life or have been life on the planet.\n\nWith scientists thinking if there is something up there on the planet there is a good chance that they will be able to find out soon with all the technology we have today.\n\nWith all the things we have today I think we will find something on venus. If we do then there is a fact that there is aliens that are alive, unless they are just like us but from another planet. And that planet is closer to the sun than earth.\n\nI think with all the things in the article we will find somthing or that there was something there on venus at some point. It could of been a trillion years ago or there is still life on it today we will just have to find out. Time is the only thing that we have on are side.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers because the researchers want to be able to see and study the plant, it also was the closest planet to being Earth-like, and they want to be able to study\n\nVenus' geography.\n\nBecause Venus has always had such a high temperature and a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets, the researchers have been trying to send droids and robots to the planet. But, barely any of the Rovers can make the landing. In the passage it states ' Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft has ever survived the landing for more than a few hours.' it also states 'Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more then three decades.' This shows because Venus always had been a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nVenus, sometimes, is called the 'Evening Star' even though it isn't a star. Venus is also referred to as Earth's \"twin\", and it is the closet planet to Earth. In the text it states 'Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.' Venus also seems to have familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. This shows because scientist are saying that Venus still has some features that are analogous to Earth, as of today. It is also the nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nScientist, in the passage, also can't get close enough to Venus to even study it's geography. In the passage it states 'Hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.'. It also states' Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. But, the researchers would like to do a thorough mission to understand, despite the risks. This shows because they are willing to work on new innovations that would allow their machinges to lat long enough to at least get some knowledge of Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, scientists are trying everything that can, despite the dangers, to try and come up with a mission to take people or rovers to Venus and study it. Maybe get some samples and study the rest of Venus' geography. Then they can decide if it really is a sister to our planet Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The bar charts show the amount of music albums purchased by British people with different age range and sexes. Three different types of music are in focus namely pop, rock and classical music.\nOverall, we can see that people between 25-34 has the highest purchasing power, standing over 31 per cent in pop, 29 per cent in rock, and 17 per cent in classical music. Meanwhile male listeners and British in the age of 16-24 also contribute greatly in pop and rock music, with approximately 28 and 31 per cent and 30 and 32 per cent respectively. female is considered a moderate consumer, accounted for 29, 25, and 7 per cent in pop, rock and classical music respectively.\nPeople between 35-44 seems to share demand between pop and rock rather than classical, yet also can be seen having the least interests in buying music albums, with less than 20 per cent in overall. Surprisingly, despite having the least consumption in pop and rock music, with 10 per cent and less, the elderly of over 45+ is more into classical music which contributes over 20 per cent.\nTo sum up, pop and rock music are seen as the most popular music ganre among people in the age from 16 to 44, both male and female. Meanwhile, classical music is mostly listened by people who are 45 and above. Though, the trend of people in the 25-34 consuming more of classical music can be expected more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This technology would be useful in many ways. This technology could be very valuable, but it also could be too much for us to handle.\n\nWith technology like this it might make learning things online more interesting.\n\nImagine reading a boring documentory about a hero you are writing about for class, as you continue to read the article, a suggested website pops up with interesting facts about your person with more information.\n\nNow you are more interested and the computer has done its job to change your feelings on this presentation.\n\nWe could use this technology to do many other similar things like that.\n\nMaybe one day you are just down in the dumps and all these videos you are watching are just making you feel worse and even more bored than before.\n\nThen a suggested video pops up and you are able to watch it and laugh and it was able to take your horrible day and turn it into just another good day.\n\nThese are the nice things this kind of technology can do for us.\n\nAlthough you might think it is strange to have a computer know exactly how you are feeling when you sit down at in front of it.\n\nThere would never be a dull moment in front of the computer though.\n\nMaybe you are just sitting around and you get bored and have nothing better to do so you get up and you make your way to the computer and play with the emotion detector just by making faces at your computer seeing if it can guess how you are feeling.\n\nTechnology is advancing quick, it is nothing like it used to be, but either you have to run with it or get ran over.\n\nThings are changing fast we have to change with them.\n\nThis is why this technology is so valuable, we can use it in many ways even if its not important.\n\nWe can still get use out of it, so why not make it a thing? In the article it says \"She is 83 percent happy, 9 percent digusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry\" talking about the Mona Lisa painting.\n\nNow you cant tell me that that is not cool at all.\n\nIts pretty amazing what they can do with technology these days so we might as well adjust to it instead of push it away.\n\nThat is why we should be able to have technology like this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "How would you feel if someone knew how you were feeling all the time? Well now they can. Scientis have created a new software that can detect human emotion to see just how exactly you're feeling. Is it useful? Or is it invasive? I think that it is useful, and here's why.\n\nOne way that facial recognition can be helpful, is that it can be used in classrooms to better the learning enviornment. According to paragraph 6, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becomig confused or bored.\" This can be useful for many teachers who have studnets that are confused but don't want to speak up. This can be very helpful for schools and change the way we learn for the better.\n\nAnother reason facial recognition can be useful, is in relationships and partnerships . Many people say that they can't tell how their friend or partner is feeling, but with this new software you just might be able too. In the passage it states that \"you can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look on his/her face. Of course, most of us would have toruble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" We might have had trouble detecting those emotions in the past, but not anymore. With this software you can always tell if your friend or partner is angry, sad, worried, or in trouble.\n\nLastly, one of the most important reason to why we need this computer software is for medicine. According to the passage, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games and video surgery.\" If doctors had this kind of technology to use for video surgery, it could change how we precieve medicine. This can make videos more realistic for new surgeons that are trying to learn how to operate. It could save someone's life.\n\nWith all of the infromation we have learned from the passage, I think that it is safe to say that this new facial recognition facial software is going to help us in the long run to better the way we learn and change the way we think.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on Mars isn't created by aliens, it's just a landform made. There is evidence to prove that the Face on Mars isn't created by the aliens. The face on Mars isn't a creation made by the aliens. It isn't because why would the aliens want to create such a thing like that? On paragraph 8 in the passage it states \"The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter '98- a cloudy time of the Red Planet\" is what it says. If that was true, that it was a cloudy winter climate then the aliens wouldn't have enough time to be doing a creation like the face. The aliens would have no clue on how to do a face on Mars. The Face on Mars is just a natrual landform, nothing else. The aliens didn't do a face on Mars. To prove that, evidence from the passage says \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natrual landform.\" the web even says that it's just a landform. When the web surfers wanted information about it the web just said that it's a natrual landform. The whole Face on Mars is a landform that scientist found on Mars. The Face on Mars from 1976 till 2001 changed a lot. In 1976 they didn't have much technology to see the face clearly, so they thought it was a face of an alien because the picture was blurry and it looked from a blur that it was an aliens face. Until now in 2001 technology made it clear to see that it's just a landform that is cracked and looks from far away like a face of an alien. Evidence from the passage states that \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resoluion.\" the team took a photo with an amazing camera to make it clear that it wasn't a face. It made it clear to see that it was just a landform. As you can see that the Face is just a landform and not a face of an alien. NASA wants to make you think it was a face of an alien but it really isn't. The researchers found evidence of the Face on Mars that it's just a landform. Don't make pictures fool you, because sometimes they aren't as clear as you think.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph show hope She believes pass test everything back normal spring In spring geese return hibiscus budding This makes feel home always like moved Also likes geese hibiscus things might make feel comfortable This author concludes story paragraph show hopeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I would argue yes this could be a valueable. The reason this could be valueable is because this can be used anyhwhere in classrooms work offices police office etc. People wouldn't be able to lie about what they done or how they feel inside. This could become a lie test for people who comit crimes.\n\nI believe this new technology could become a great tool. The teachers when they ask a student if he/she understand their face tell it all. This can also help teacher who at times don't know how a student feels and relate with the student. If the students aren't into a lesson the teacher know so she maybe come in at a different point of veiw. This would not only be a good tool but it could make people better at their jobs.\n\nThis new technology can be use in the court. When people lie they put on a different face with the kind of tool the courts can detect if someone telling a lie. This new technology tool can make jobs like easier and take stress off people knowing that they did the right thing. This can also tell if someone gets mad and about to lose control which can also be a sign of guilt.\n\nThis new technology tool can be of great use in the at docter office or the emergancy room. This tool can help se how much pain a person is really in and what they can do to help. This can also see if someone is liying about pain to get pills to sale. This can also see if someone needs help mentally and what can help or be of great use to them. This new technology can help after a women has given brith to see if the baby is doing well.\n\nI think this new technology tool can be of great use to our society. This technology open doors to a better life a better school for kids. This technology can be useful because it helps people see the things wrong about them. This technology can be used anywhere helps peole who needs help this can also help people descirbe how they feel in the inside. I do believe that this invention would have a great use in society and benefit many people in the work force.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I belive thier sesorship live belive freedom I sensorship waymy thoughts people find book offensive slould read book thay heard bad book thay dident like way cover looks thats thier problem dont ruin everyone els likes booksay two people found book offensive five people liked book dose mean removedWhat one thos five people favorite book gone asked librariean said well two people flaged book offensive removed CAPS book person one time school read book class called farenhite I thought good book time I head people wanted ban book people didTwo words thos people coolI think walk librarie sould expect see alot different ideas thats freedom woulds pefectSo saying thay come new system librareis majority people flag book offensive thay dont want kids seeing thay sould seperate thos books movies magazines ets erery thing els remove themA message thos people If one thos people finds picifice book ofensive know thay stay side librareiethats thoughts views sesorship librariesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I believe computers benefit society positive way Without computers would able social We also would ability reseach school online running business would even difficult Without computers society would far advanced Being social important quality life main way social days texting chat online friends Facebook skype give users ability make new friends find long lost friends chat friends I personally skype facabook I able access everyday Without I would nt able chat friends school except sports texting Everyday I workout lift weights go facebook whole statement spending less time exercising time computer false Facebook skype past everyday life without I know I would social Computers also part everyday life I use research school typing paper As seen handwriting great I end typing lot homework Without computers teachers would able read work Computers also help making graphs data tables science lab reports Without computer graphs would handmade presentable Overall computers used everyday school either research type homework Education plays key role society use computers education would receive would My last reason believe computers play positive role society computers keeps businesses running Without computers businesses would unable function could function would awful slow Since society far advanced businesses need computers order complete jobs Expenses income saved businesses computers done paper could lost ruined Computers also simplify work businesses speed tasks would takes long time hand done complete tasks could acheived without computer Computers play large part worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There certain age bookshelf certain aged people aloud look It s like adult section library Theres reason removed shelves I would understand little kids could come see books movies offended scared thats would make certain section older mature people It would depend offends people would make offended Some things could would bad little kids see make sure couldnt get reach young kids matured people The way would say remove really offensive racism things like Censorship libraries opinion good thing Just fact people might like things would library things library So I would say yes cersorship librarySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I thinks all of you should come on the seagoing cowboy project. I have expericed many cool things and have learned to take care of animals. The sea going trip was the best time of my life.\n\nThere were many dangers at sea but I had trained for all of them. There were also some fun times were we played baseball, table-tennis, boxing, reading, and whittling in empty holds where there were no animals. I got to wake up every morning and go out and watch the sea and feel the cool mist on my face it felt wonderful. I had much fun on this trip.\n\nThe seagoing cowboy trip has many things to offer if you are a cowboy it is great for you if you are a sailor you can do this trip as well. Going on this trip you will learn many resposibilites. You can also learn to take care of the animals.\n\nThe travaling took some time but if you traviling you will love this program. I saw many amazing things that without this trip I would not of seen. I saw iconec land marks and met some pretty cool people. This trip was the best.\n\nTaking care of the animals was much fun. The animals kept me busy that is for sure. If you are into animal care-taking this is the trip for you. It was also much fun going to new places and getting called sea cowboy.\n\nThe reasons above prove why you should join the sea cowboys. The cowboy teaches how to be a cowboy, how to be a sailor, and teaches you resposibilites.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Major car companies say that driveless cars will be the next thing. Since technology has became more advanced it has allowed componies to experiment in this field. People could love the new car or hate it because it could mean giving up control.\n\nMy position on this topic would have to be a no for the driveless cars. Driving a car is a big responabilty and a dangerous one. When driving a car, people have to alert and focused because at any moment somebody can pull out in front of you. A car probably will not be able to tell if you need to brake suddenly. There are just a lot of what if's surrounding the topic of a driveless car. Yes, there are risks with driving a car yourself and not driving the car yourself.\n\nIn the article it stated that cars have the technology but not enough road mapping technology. Like sensors on the road for telling the car where it is at but having every road with sensors on it will cost too much money then a driveless car is worth. From the text, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer.\" This statement can go both ways like the person was not paying attention so it's his fault or the system failed so it's the manufacturer fault. It would be the drivers fault because they are there to make sure everything goes smoothly and nothing happens. Just because a person has a driveless car does not mean that they can not pay attention on whats going on around them. Even though the system did fail to work.\n\nIn many ways driveless cars can be a good thing. One example from the text was that you can travel longer and not have to stop and rest. The text states, \"Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danfer of out-of-control skids or rollovers. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This statement gives the driveless cars a pretty good chance on winning people over to drive the companies car. The car would include all the needed material somebody would need to drive a car themselves. Addition to that it would make driving safer on roads and reduce wrecks and deaths by car. So yes, driveless cars has a lot of advantages and disadvantages.\n\nThe driveless car could be the future. Does the advantages out weigh the disadvantages? Are people willing to give up the control and let technology take over the roads?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In persuasive essay m going write offensive material banned library shelfs couple reasons going help I think shouldnt take anything shelfs libraries My first main point take material shelfs libraries material people might find offensive others getting affected want material shelfs I think movies books taken shelfs material kids experience help future My second main point take offensive material shelfs would movies books like bambi scoobydoo material libraries offensive people ways different others I found movie book library yet I found offensive Also might well even library would movies books whole building offensive material people could find cd s books movies People hear cuss words probably everyday whether school home So words actions movies bad people real life saying I think every movie book movie book Scary movies real books There sex inapropriate things movies thats also certain age even get movies To summarize I talking last couple paragraphs I think take thing shelfs libraries beacuse hurt others theres needSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage in society. Many countries have made changes in there towns, cities, and villages to use less cars and gas. Many countries have made days to not use automobiles. The effect on not using these transportation devices have made great effects on the enviroment.\n\nIn Vaunban, Germany, 70 percent of residents have given up there cars. These changes have made people, including Heidun Walter,a mother of two, happier in there community. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Walter. This idea of less car usage has other effects in Europe. In France, Paris enfored a parial driving ban to clear the air of the city. The city had 147 micrograms of particlate matter per cubic meter compared to 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found. These changes have caused a positive impact in there cities.\n\nIn Colombia, Many citizens have enjoy the yearly event of only having buses and taxis in the streets of Bogota. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza. In the third year of the event, the Colombian cities Cali and valledupar joined Bogota for the first time. In America, citizens have passed their driving peak. In the United States, Americans have driven less and bought less car in recent years. President Obama Has also have goals for greenhouse gas emission.\n\nThere are many advantages of limiting car usage in society. Many countries have made changes in there towns, cities, and villages to use less cars and gas. Many countries have made days to not use automobiles. The effect on not using these transportation devices have made great effects on the enviroment. In Germany, France, Colombia, and America, these chnges are having amazing changes in their societies. The world will be healthier with these changes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A harmful of people assume that scientific research ought to apply itself to deal with problem related to health on a global scale. Meanwhile, others believe therre are more importaint issues worth focusing on. In this essay, I will discuss both sides.\r\n\r\nFor the first statement, I believe that it is absolutely true. In this day and age, more and more people are prone to severe diseases such as cholera, cancers, etc. some of them are perháp incurable, deteriooate the myriad of lives and bring about the fiancial burden to the family or the patient. According to the date, the death toll has gone up considerally since the beginning of the 21st century up till now by virture of those diseased. For example, recently the outbreak of Covd-19 pandemic, at first there were no vaccine and proper ways of treatment to patients. Thank to the scientist they have discovered many ways to prevent and even eradicate it. If more scientific researches are taken place on world health problem, there are more oppunities to save lives of people all over the world.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, world health problems is not the only things scientific research should focus on. First of all, the problem raising the red warming, posing a threat to not only humans, but also the Earth, it is eviromental issues. It is actually serious. It inclued air pollution, soil pollution, greenhouse effects, etc and perhaps the most serious one is global warming. The outcome of these issues are disasters, all of which stem from the human's excessie activitíe. Moreover, scientist research should concentrate on even ways to improve the livingg standard. There are still tons of homeless people, and the unemployment rate is still exceeding the average.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I believe that scitentific research should definitely care for the world health problems, but not to ignore other significant issues posing threats to humans.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A world with driverless cars would be a very simple world. With newer and more advanced technology being invented everyday, it\n\ngets safer as well. Although driverless cars are not completely driverless yet, it's still a great start to an amazing future.\n\nI am a new driver, meaning that I am just learning how to drive, and I have to admit; it's not as easy as it looks. I think it would be wonderful to live in a time period that has driverless cars, or at least be able to witness them being made. The majority of our cars now are already operated by computer systems, even though humans do the majority of the work required to control a car. The human kind as a whole isn't always the keenest when it comes to being aware of our surroundings, and being able to have a car that allows us to pay more attention without actually doing anything could take away a lot of the pressure for drivers, especially teen drivers.\n\nFuel consumption has always been, and probably always will be one of the top issues associated with cars and driving. But with the creation of these new, driverless cars, the amount of fuel consumption should go down according to Google cofounder, Sergey Brin. The health of our planet is a major concern, and having millions, maybe even billions, of cars letting out gas is not making it better. If we can create a car that requires less fuel (which means it'll produce less gas into the air), then that is one thing we can check off of the list of things destroying Earth.\n\nSensors and lasers are also great contributions to the completion of driverless cars. Although they would, of course, still require the driver to be on stand-by, 98% of the energy to opererate and drive the car would be done by the car itself. Technogly is continuously advancing, and at an even faster pace, it's getting hard to keep up. In no time we'll all be driving in cars that don't actually require us to drive. Sebastian Thrun seems to have the same idea, considering that in just the time frame of the 2000s, we've created GPS, computers, laptops, and touchscreen cellphones.\n\nParagraph eight asks us \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" I think these are great questions! I know that as a new driver, I would totally miss not being able to drive, so why not create a car that gives you the option of deciding if you want the car to drive itself, or if you want to drive! Of course no one likes traffic, and who likes 16+ hour car rides to Florida? These could be the times that the car would drive by itself.\n\nAll in all, driverless cars could be one of the many successes of man kind, but safety is still an issue. It's a great thing to be able to come up with the idea to create things such as driverless cars, but it's even better to know your'e the one who perfected the idea, and turned it into a reality. We are living in a reality of an innovative generation that's only just getting started. I can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe my car will be flying by then, too!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Libraries many people like people Libraries almost every town People like go read book get computers activities families But things people would really want things age might prohibited times Do think advantages disadvantages library fair enough everyone Most people really think must always go library things irresponsible person damage done item checked late turn could ammount money buying item If responsible person fine But think libraries putting stuff going let one touch check So going let one person get item library removed least one person want get item would rude librarian tells Libraries stick old old section kids kid books A section middle schoolers teenagers A section high schoolers adults mostly everything work fine Just want make fair everyone since public library town Now facts opinions stated hopefullly libraries librariens think going put going put shelves public library make fair everyone So think advantages disadvantages library fair enough everyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir intresting First parents originally cuba arrived united states After living year furnished one room apartment twenty one years old Rawedia Maria twenty seven year old could afford move modest three room apartment I would soon call home I born simple house situated twofamily blondbrick building Ironbound section Newark New Jersey Thats mood intresting author creationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is undeniable that single-sex schools and co-educational ones are totally different in terms of school policies. However, some people propound that sending their children to co-educational is more beneficial when they grow up. In my opinion, I agree with this statement. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, co-educational schools has many benefits to children. To put it simply, most parents believe that co-educational environment is more pleasant as there is no separation between boys and girls, which is important because kids will be able to have better understandings of other genders. Also, such environment promotes life-long friendship. The earlier students know each other, the longer relationship lasts. Take an example of Thai students, almost all schools encourage children to have friends from other schools by local community activities. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is considered by many that single-sex schools are outdated, which many countries have already abolished this practice for many decades. To put it further, it seem to me that this method have many drawbacks. Firstly, it encourages children to become highly competitive and isolates children from other genders. That is to say, children might never have an opportunity to get to know friends who have a different gender, therefore, they will have a much smaller circle of friends, compared to the co-educational schools. As a result of this, some students may lack of relationships with other sexes. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, most parents find co-educational schools more advantageous because they can have better chances later in life. From my perspective, I completly agree with this notion.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Censoring We know language foundation human legacy Language spoken mean anything speaker trying communicate To take books shelves steal words mouths many great speakers We obligation keep created alive If something forgotten nothing happened If nothing happened reoccur good bad To hide away words children wrong If word print word mouth lead discoveries would come reading book But even importantly good hiding truth When many speak tragic incidences speak CAPS forget If forget youth learn There nothing print conveyed different communication form Our written pages literature The books read property humanity read educate us mistakes well triumphs A commonly debated topic world censorship The novel displays life truly like one racially barbaric times One might argue fact uses offensive n word times To one might argue stood loved A book time displaying friendship black white man truly ground breaking feat The n word common place time period friendship black man white man Is really important child knows another offensive word bound discover eventually anyway important learn color skin change person Do take opportunity child learn really matters away To take one book away take away Censoring one piece literature opens doors debate every piece ever created The world seen happen things get censored During dictatorship nearly everything internet books newspwpers television programming movies music magazines censored dictatorship wanted got The people brainwashed rose shot Do let world come We better literature shows In words censor media literature surrounds us deprive education freedoms critical well future generations Do hide free speech authors hide children let us make mistake made Let us educate children future humanity Let repeat Let us innovate create new better world Let us allow words flow freely Let us allow legacy liveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe many books library avalible everybody goes public library Yes offincive items library book racism african americans No person takes offince itmes around even go library The library open everybody Lets suppose young child take himher public library As looking book child reaches highest book heshe reach pulls shelf lands floor open You look see happened see book lying inappropriate picture right infront child Thats fault librarys Although many times librarys fault certain books responsible check area looking I think select area inappropriate material kept And person get select area must show membership type identification sign waver saying material checked cause trouble take offince anybody customer around And view subjectSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Practice 8: Choose the correct answer: 1)Which places provide the tourists with tourism information in many origin countries? A.Flea marketB. tourist information offices C.Vocational collegesD. Supermarkets 2)The country from which the tourist comes if called the _______ country. A.destinationB. vacation C.originD. native 3)What is the purpose of the job of public relations? A.To establish a good attitude toward his country among the public (people) B.To gain a lot of money for a resort C.To compete with the other companies for the advertising contract D.To pay salary for the staff 4)A _________ office promotes travel to the destination country. A.representativeB. travel agent C.tour packagerD. tourism information 5)What is a meeing at which somebody talks to a group of journalists in order to answer their questions or to make an official statement? A.Press conferenceB. Public relation C.Family gatheringD. Manufacturing process 6)Newspapers, magazines, and books are print _____ that spread information. A.mediumB. media C.brochuresD. advertisements 7)Another word for lectures is ______ A.meetingsB. speakings C.tellingsD. talks 8)In which language must employees in public relations and advertising be fluent? A.ThailandB. Chinese C.GermanyD. English 9)A ______ is a printed pamphlet about a place, product, or company that is used for advertising. A.boarding passB. Visa C.brochureD. passport 10)Which one is NOT a medium of communication? A.RadioB. Television C.Newspapers/ MagazinesD. Public transport Writing Write a short paragraph for a sightseeing tour to introduce the guests to one of the tourist attractions in Binh Dinh province.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "NASA's Viking 1 space craft was circling Mars looking for a spot for its sister ship to land when it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. In 1976 a picture was taken and you can see a large nose two eyes and a possible mouth. The picture taken in 2001 has a better pixel scale than the 1976 picture. The 2001 picture shows a deformed nose a covered eye and a possible mouth.\n\nGarvin in Paragraph 12 of the article said \"It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" There are confirmed natural landforms just like the Mars face forming on Earth. Just because an interesting looking landform forms on a different planet does not mean that it is alien made. Landforms can form by lava, wind or water erosion. Mars has wind, water and molten rock just like Earth.\n\nBased on the area the landform is located you can tell that the \"face\" is not alien made. Number one the area does not have any houses, shelters or buildings. This area is mainly flat land.You would think that there would be some sort of buildings or shelters near the formation. Number two this area has another landform in the same shape. The other landform does not look like a face but the base of it looks like the face's base.\n\nThis landform is not alien made due to where it is located, how it is shaped and how it has changed over time. This landform resembles a formation in Idaho. Just because this mound looks like a face does not mean that is alien made. You can tell just by looking at the images that weather pushed dirt or sand over a mound.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Every day, people come into contact with others, whether it is simply by walking past other people, or talking face to face, or even staring at others from across the room. Since everybody has a face, everybody is able to make certain facial expressions that show certain emotions. These emotions are what allow others to respond in a certain way, and are the roots of interaction between human beings. While technology can be doubted, accurate technology with the application of this concept of reading human emotions can help in ways humans may not be able to and in turn benefit students in the classroom.\n\nDespite the doubt towards the inability of the Facial Action Coding System to accurately analyze human emotions, it has been proven that all it really can pinpoint the emotions by closely tracking the muscles on the face. Since muscles on the face respond to human emotions, even the smallest of movements may evoke a certain feeling that can be caught by the system, something that is very difficult for a human to do. One example of of how a muscle movement may show emotion is, \"your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're surprsied; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger\" (3). One's muscle movement tells a lot about what they may be thinking inside, and would take an actor in order to hide this. In everyday circumstances, assuming one does not intend to lie, especially for the purpose of this technology, the Facial Action Coding System can relate the movements accurately to human emotions. According to D'Alto, Dr. Huang created the technology to utilize video imagery in order to track even the smallest of movements (4). Human eyes have their own limits, and may even be limited by one's own lack of attention. Because of this, humans may not be able to catch such small movements, so in this way, this technology can be more powerful than humans in detecting emotions, which proves to be especially useful in a classroom.\n\nOne way the Facial Action Coding System can prove valuable to students in a classroom is the ability to input the detection of the emotions into the general system so that it can adjust its actions based of the emotions. Dr. Huang says, \"A clasroom computer could recognize [...] then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (6). In a circumstance where a teacher may not be available, the computer can act in place of the teacher and may perform with greater accuracy because of its existence as an objective technology with adequate information about the muscles on the face. Using responsive technology such as this can help students learn things cumulatively based on their observed understanding through emotions. In a large classroom, this would allow for multiple students to go at their own pace, instead of adhering to the general direction of the entire classroom, thus improving the students' comprehension of the content. With the application of this technology to education, students can advance at their own pace with confidence of their understanding.\n\nAnother way this technology can benefit students is its effect on the emotional development of the students. Using the system on the computer, students can also figure out how the computer responds to their own facial movements. By becoming conscious of this, students can apply the same analytics to their own life and become better at recognizing other people's emotions as well. D'Alto mentions how fake smiles and real smiles can be differentiated by the different muscle movements. When someone shows a real smile, \"the zygomatic major\n\n(muscles that begin at your cheekbones) lift the corners of your mouth\" (7). However when someone fake-smiles, \"the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius\" (8). Learning about this distinction from the way the computer may respond can also help students interact with their friends or classmates. When a classmate feigns happiness, another student can reply in a way that can support the classmate. This technology not only helps students excel academically, but also emotionally, which can ultimately make them better people.\n\nRegardless of how students intend on using the Facial Action Coding System, the system can reap many benefits in the classroom. Simply being aware that this system can identify human emotions can improve the way people see themselves and others. The system itself can act as an extra sympathetic person and see things humans may not regularly be able to see. Since all human interaction revolves around emotions, this technology can be applied in many more ways, not just in a classroom. With this technology, the world has the potential to become more developed in the realm of academics and emotional consciousness.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Old age is the grey age in which the older have need support as well as care. Some people think that government ought to provide health care and support economically after their retirement while others believe that the older people should invest for themselves before retirement. However, I believe that the elder people should save their money during their job and I will eleborate to this notion in upcoming paragraphs.\n\nOn the one side,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The topic library censoring increasing past years It discussed many people decision never reached I say library censoring I would found love reading libraries censored like I think censoring libraries It would impair basic rights Such right freedom expression And right freedom pressWe would longer live free country totalterrian state Though would put age restriction certian things please debators I think many would agree proposed Thus children would able read listen materials apporiate age Though parents censor children read listen libraries It s parents introducee children music magazines books If parents started censor materials early debate would going The topic library censoring discussed debated increasing rates past years Some want censor libraries though best choice said that right censor libraries thier books usSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to travel around the world and help people and animals at the same time? Well you can if you join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The Seagoing Cowboys program is an excellent program to join because of the experience, jobs you could do, and the cost.\n\nMost people have a great time on this trip because they can visit many places and sight-see while they are helping others and animals near you. I have visited places like Greece and Italy. I got to ride a gondola in Venice and visit an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal when I was on my way to China. When we were dropping off animals, we had time to play games like baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. One night, I was on the boat and I got the job of being a night watchman for the boat and the crew. Since the boat was full of animals, I had to check up on them every hour for the entire night.\n\nTo be in this program, there aren't many requirements to get accepted. The requirements are that you have to have a diploma from the high school you went to and you have to be devoted to helping animals and humans around you. You also have to show respect to the captain and our crew members and you must show good character toward many others.\n\nLuckily, there isn't any cost to be included in this amazing program. I was working two part-time jobs which were a grocer and a banker before my friend, Don Reist, invited me to travel the world with him in a cattle boat. The boat I got boarded on was the SS Charles W. Wooster and we were heading to Greece and 335 horses and hay were on board. It was obviously an interesting and marvelous experience.\n\nTo sum up my thoughts, boarding the SS Charles W. Wooster and signing up for the Seagoing Cowboys program was the best decision I have ever made and it was the best thing that has happened to me in my entire life. With the experience, cost, and job options you have on the cargo ship, it is an excellent choice to make. I'd suggest that you sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast builders Empire State building faced many problems Their first problem architects could simply drop mooring mast top flat roof The weight mast would make framework crumble builders modifie strengthen steel frame empire state building Secondly foreign dirigibles highly flamable making highly dangerous two moor overapopulated New York city Also nature problem The winds top building strong d dangerous moor And finally law dirigibles flying low urban areas The mooring mast atop Empire State building good idea dangerous highly unlikely lawSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Because going practice get better driving flower blooms go take test agin And try harder next timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Car usage all over the world has reduced and been reducing slowly. Some of the advantages of limiting car usage may be the reducing of pollution or just to save moeny. Also due to many different reasons, even if it's for their own needs, or to just minimize the pollution going on in different parts of the world. In many places car usage has been being limited for countries all over. If it's China, Spain, Columbia, Paris, Germany, or even the United States of America. Not all countries have taken part in trying to reduce the use of cars to an all time low. That may just be their own choice. While other countries are sure trying to cut the usage of car for a variety of reasons. Some places in the world are doing it so they can cut some of the pollution done to the world. And if you think about it if half of the world tryed as hard as they possibly could to try and minizie pollution the world wouldnt be so pulloted. I know cars aren't the only things that cause pollution, but its a pretty big part of the daily life for any person no matter where they are.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany a suburban area has almost completely given up driving and even owning a car. \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park\" (Rosenthal 2) but it cost a lot of money to even own a parking space. \"Car-owners can buy a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" (Rosenthal 2) That price may just be enough to keep people from owning a car all together. According to the article \"\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, 70 percent of Vauban's Families don't even own a car and 57 percent sold a car just to move there. Isn't that crazy? Imagine life without cars, it has advantages and disadvantages of course but advantages can lead to a positive outcome no matter what the reason is. By people in Vauban not owning cars they are most likely saving a lot of money because they don't have to buy the car, pay the ridiculous amount for a parking spot, and pay for the gas thats going to end up pollution the world anyway. Just a few of the many advantages in reducing or cutting out car usage completely.\n\nDue to all the terrible and mass amounts of smog in Paris, France, they enforced a \"partial driving ban to clear the air or global city\" (Duffer 10). For example, in this article called \"\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\n\n\" by Robert Duffer, on monday motorist with even numbered license plates were told to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22 euro fine which turns out to be $31 U.S. Dollars. And then the same thing would happen to those whose license plates ended in an odd number the following day. This had to have cut pollution a huge amount. If you think about how many people are living in Paris, and you think about them all staying off the road due to a ban then you may be able to understand the amount of pollution that wasn't produced during this ban. Now Paris, did this for the advantage purpose of reducing the amount of pollution they had in their air and by not adding more to it. It couldn't have a negative impact they were doing something good for the enviornment even if it didn't really help that much. Out of the whole city of Paris about \"4,000 drivers were fined,\" and \"27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine\" (Duffer 12). Another advantage that Paris had due to them banning car usage was that \"Congestion was down 60 percent\" (Duffer 14). The ruling French lifted the ban when the smog cleared up enough.\n\nBogota, Columbia turned what they did as a tradition, into a big hit to tons of poeple in other countries. \"\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\n\n\" by Andrew Selsky informed the public about what was started a few years ago back in Columbia.\n\nFor a day cars except for buses and taxis were banned. In the city of \"7 million, the goal is to promote alternative transportation and also reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines.\" (Selsky 21) Due the day without cars, the city of Bogotas has \"118 MILES of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American City.\" (Selsky 27) One advantage they had was that because of the day with out cars the parks and sports centers have been in the best shape they could possibly be in. They also did have to reduced the amount of pollution that was being put into the air, because it was such a big hit to other cities and countries.\n\nYet another article by Elisabeth Rosenthal called \"\n\nThe End of Car Culture\n\n\", is stating the advantages in the United States and what has happened with the reducing of cars. \"Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" (Rosenthal 29) The minimizing of cars in The U.S. has some advantages those being, \"Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions\" (Rosenthal 29). New York City for example is home to the heart of public transportation due to all the taxis and the subway. Not many people in New York city drive or even own a car due to the congested streets, and the ridiculous amount of money you have to have just to park it like it was in Germany. Crazy amounts of money to park a car is just an outrage. The advantage here would be the money saved by not even owning a car and storing it. Another one would be the traffic is bad but not as bad as it would be if more people had cars. Public transportation is huge in New York. It's already expensive enough to live in New York imagine if there werent as many taxis and if the subway wasn't there at all. Picture all the pollution there would be.\n\nTo wrap up everything, as stated there are many advantages to reducing car usage all around the world. If it was to reduce smog or pollution of just to save money they are still advantages to decreasing the amount of times you use a car. If something is in walking distances why not just walk instead of taking a car and wasting money and also polluting the air (unless it's a hybrid). The limiting of car usage is slowly but surely growing all over the world. Yes, cars are faster to get places, but why waste the money and clean air to be somewhere quickly? Think of all the advantages there are in reducing car usage not the disadvantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This article is at the \"The challenge of Exploring\n\nVenus.\"\n\n\"Evening Star\" this article state in, venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.\n\n\"Twin\" this article state in, venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\n\n\"The venus blanked.\" The article state in the venus atmospere have almost of 97 percent of carbon dioxide.\n\n\"Venus surface.\" the article state on the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greateer than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nThe article essay, thia articlo explain about \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nvenus is a planet nd look like a star because brightes points of light in the nigth sky, and tambien is a \"twin\" is the earth's twin, venus is it really closest at the eart and tambien look similar in the size and in the density, tambien look are similsr in the distance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Let s say walk public library look upon book racist offensive You believe book nt shelf take I believe right take book shelf It nt books either music movies magazine many others The authors right freedom speech go way around There many reasons I explain The first reason person might come back place I mean somebody walks library trys find book read think ever come back offended one A little back I library I noticed book offending It talking jokes black people I believe nt right people equal matter look believe The next reason could cause rate materials go If somebody gets offensive censored material going report cause rate drop low No library wants hold books music movies magazines reported community nobody wants How would author feel material getting reported somebody getting offensive If author wants offend anybody nt even bother publish The last reason get rid materials Nobody wants look something offends How would feel took movie home watch family bad stuff didnt like You get offended complain Complaining bad business especially government building If get rid things offend people would nt problems I believe certain materials removed shelf sombody offended There really three main reasons One person might never come back place Next could cause rate success drop low The last get rid materials complains Now believeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Coming teenager offensive books magazines movies removed local library A library place go relax read Most books movies filled sex gang violence drugs In generation sex durgs gang violence seem high risk everywhere Books suppose learning Offensive books movies set bad habit younger childrenThese reasons offensive books movies also magazine removed local libraries Sex gang violence drugs seem appear everywhere generation Whenever open magazine find different topics deal either sex drugs violence Children never exposed type offensive behavor You able open magazine learn somthing brand new Books good reseach paper school project sometimes cant find looking topics Reason cant find looking every book magazine look threw covred topic dont want As teenager book I look always sex gang violence If younger children countiued read bad topics create bad habit child They say involved read Bad habit could lead many things killing smoking pregnacy s Thats parents guidence children Being I never offensive books movies magazine local library Offensive books movies cause many problems It drive children sont need wont able learn many bad habit book movies able learn something local librarySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I patient wherever I go dentists office orthodontist doctors office The first time dentists office I wait get teeth cleaned I usually sit end magazines The next place I patient outhodontist I sit wait first room crater Ipod minutes call second room I wait little longer get bracer frightened Once I get office I wait guy tighter Finally doctors office sit big waiting foom long time wait lady call get getting shuts wait patienty doctor As see lot things take patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I belive author saying new start I say everything coming back I also say Saeng knows whats important take seriously That I think author saying end storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The way the author suports his idea is good enough to understand the danger and consequences of it. starting off on paragraph 1 the author let's us know that venus is\n\nthe secound planet from our sun. He also let's us know that venus is simple to see from distance but its every challenging to examine when you're closely. The author lets us know earth and mars are is other door neighboors. The author tells us that venus is hard to examine being close to it due to high tempeures.\n\nThe author also tells us that there haven't been a spacecraft that has touched down on venus for more than 3 decades. The author supports this with saying that spacecrafts only survive a few hours. meanig that venus is a very hot planet which makes it hard for humans to study it. NASA is working on electronics made of slilicon for us to be able to study venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea in every way he could when he said it was challenging for humans to study venus. He let's us know why and how he mentions in paragraph 3 that the atmosphere is thick of almost 97 carbot dioxide.\n\nHe also tells us that tempeture avarage aare over 800 degrees fahrenheit letting us know humans can't suprt that type of tempeture. He also calls out some solutions on how humans could live in venus but he let's us know that the conditions would be bad but that it is survivable.\n\nThe author let's us know in parageraph 7 that NASA is working on simplified electonics made of silicon. And that the ones that have been made have lasted about 3 weeks in such conditions . He also let's us know that another project is looking back to an old technolgy called mechanical comuters. He explains that these computers were used back in world war ll they were very important he let's us know that it did not require electronics at all he explains mddern comuters are more delicated. what the author is saying that these computers are resistant compared to the compiuters we use now in days the author explains his view and supports it in every paragraph.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The bar chart illustrates the number of minutes of telephone calls in Australia, made to various localities or devices, from 2001 to 2008.\nOver the course of the eight years during which the data was sampled, it can be noted that the number of phone call minutes made to mobile phones has increased by the greatest proportion. In 2001, 2 billion minutes worth of phone call time was recorded. By 2008, this number had increased exponentially to 46 billion minutes.\nThe bar chart illustrates that between the years 2001 and 2005, the number of phone calls made to local numbers gradually increased. However, from 2006, these calls decreased steadily until 2008, with a number that is only slightly higher than national and international calling minutes.\nThe number of phone call minutes made to national as well as international locations consistently increased in the allocated time frame.\nIt is also clear that local telephone calls account for the majority of phone calls made in Australia, and telephone calls made to mobile phones account for the least.\nIn summary, the number of telephone call minutes made in Australia in different categories, varied during the years 2001 to 2008.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think snows hope really missed homeland kind found peace serenity around says That least could hold to meaning bud I think upset missing home missed grandmother wash hair put dok mallk I think since really nothing else flowers reminded homeland text said where fine toothed come hibiscus hedge well gentle grandmother missing thing I think putting posistion brought place misses people homeland beautiful things well always kind part home flowerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It class messing around desk like usual isnt usually patient kind person Then teacher asked question class thought head one best answers hand shot straight air One first hands raised CAPS Lots answers NUM PERSON berry said berry kind round person big glasses see But students love teacher CAPS whats answer I scratching head Okay CAPS language good answer though There hands air In head wanted blurt answer knew time going least try patient CAPS last people go NUM PERSON berry exclaimed raging impatience inside head outside looked calm could CAPS said CAPS metaphor answered CAPS youre right metaphor CAPS darn answer mumbled breath But even though another classmate took answer happy knew waiting patientlySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "What if we always knew what everyone was feeling? It sounds like it would be great if we could always detect one another's facial expressions. However, every human being has a different individuality which sets them apart from everyone else. That individuality is what makes that person unique, and can effect the way that a technological device percieves them. Everyone thinks differently, learn in different ways, and expierence different things.\n\nWhile it seems like reading the expressions of one another may be a good thing, you cannot depend on the technology when you do not even know how accurate the technology is. By the way that the technology is described, it seems that the process reads one's emotions based off 6 basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. However, humans feel much more than these 6 emotions. We can feel emotions such as confusion, passion, and boredom. If the technology is basing some one's emotions off those 6 universal emotions, the data cannot be completely accurate because those emotioins do not work together to create boredom or even confusion. The feeling of confusion is a comeplelty different emotion, it is not affected or made up of one's happiness or anger. A person cannot detect confusion simply from reading only 6 universal emotions.\n\n\"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor,'\"(D'Alto). While that would be particularly useful in an academic field, it may not work as well as anticipated. Every human being is unique and different, so therefore, they can become confused for different reasons or get bored of different things. What one student may find boring, another may find quite interesting. If that lesson plan changes for the student who is becoming disegaged in the lesson, it will affect the other student who use to find the lesson interesting, it may cause that student to then become confused or disinterested. That is a flaw with technology, it cannot benefit everyone equally because every human being is uniquely different and can be affected in different ways.\n\nMany tend to hide their true feelings simply because they do not want others to know their true emotions. To read students' emotions in that way is an invasion of one's privacy. When people are sad, they hide that feeling because they either do not want to think about what is making them sad, or becuase they do not want to make the people around them sad as well. Reading the facial expressions of people, especially those who conceal their emotions, is similar to reading one's thoughts, which invades their private thoughts and emotions. When some one is hiding their emotions, that is their private feeling and should not be shared nor invaded unless with permission granted by that person.\n\nAll-in-all, the technology cannot be proven to be accurate since it can only read 6 emotions and many people expirence a much more vast variety of emotions, than the simple 6 universal emotions. Including the fact that everyone is unique in the way that htye think and project emotions and thoughts differently. The technology also cannot change the plans for students effectively since a change for one student could harm another student academically. And finally, to read one's emotions, including the emotions that they conceal would be invading their privacy. People hide their emotions for a reason, and those emotions should be kept to them, they should not be read because they are considered one's personal thoughts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You should join to help and say I helped that country. I think you should because there are things you have and other people don't. I also think that it should almost be a requirement to help people to go to heaven. I think alot of things should because I am like that.\n\nI think a lot about others believe it or not. I love other people and apparently Luke did also. He understands the true meaning of love. He even knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime to help people in Africa,Asia,Haiti, and other places like that he had to understand that time is too valuable and other people give that time away to you to make you a better person and he is using it that way. Not saying this is all good there is downs too. Every rose has its thorns.\n\nIt is a lot of time that people spend with others. It was better for Luke I think because he was a good person. He had a heart of steel to make himself not say no to miss out on people in his family to go help other families. I think that was the best thing to do for anybody. He missed his mom,dad,aunt,brother/sister,nephew/neices,and his other friend to go help other people. Which makes me wonder if he's a Mason.\n\nI know that he had to miss out because that was so much time taken up ,not wasted but taken up. He spent 2 weeks on each trip and then did it 16 more times! Reasons not ot would be. You could die in fog. I'm not sayin I wouldn't go but I wouldn'tlike to have the thought of dying in my brain. I bet more than once or twice he thought of dying and cried.\n\nI know I would go but I wouldn't go 16 times because of the fact. There are sharks,squid,octopi,and plenty of other animals. The oceans are the most unexplored places on earth. People die millions of times a year because of the ocean and I have a high paranoia level so my paranoia would keep me on my toes. I would be so scared at times. There are 60 foot sharks named megalodons and can swallow me whole. There are plesiosaurs confirmed in the pacific. There is a six gilled shark that is 20 feet long. almost all sharks can taste a drop of blood 400 yards away. If they swim underneath a boat with 335 horses and 1 of 335 is bleeding or in labor. (the tissues and blood)I would die. I would probably have a heart attack.\n\nI can't stand my paranoia. My friend was going to let a train go over him to prove he wasn't scared but I put a little paranoia in him because under a train gets hot enough to crystalize a rock and make it look like silver. What would it do to my friend. Back to the water.\n\nPlesiasours started as lizards. Lizards have a third eye. It senses changes in lighting. Ripples and vibrations shift lighted areas. Horses make alot of noise and stomp alot. Stomping causes vibrations.\n\nI was swimming in a river and I thought about rivers monsters when a log touched my legs I freaked out! I swam as fast as I could screaming \"jeremy wade jeremy wade\"I was out of the water and on my grandpas house boat. I said hit the sand dam. From then and on I never went past clear water.\n\nI don't think about stuff like look down its a log or stuff like that. I almost pee my pants when I see a spider. I think its because of me watching national geographic channel everyday and knowing what every animal does and how it hurts you.\n\nI thought one time a jamaican cockroach could kill me .At the time I was three or four. My finger now was about as long as this cockroach. it stood up and it ran towards me. I was in my moms work and there were alot of animals there so I ran into the pig room. That was the day I figured out my mom would get me a mexican rat. From then on No roach came near me .But my fear is still here.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Freedom without a car\n\nAround the world in different countries millions of people live life without a car. They either walk, run, jog, ride their bikes, or go on the subway just to get to work or go somewhere. Here are some facrs to know why life without a car is the beat way to life.\n\nFirst, Having a car is wonderful by choice if you want it. A lot of families are so much better without a car. One women from Vauban says in source 1 \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" So not having stress is one of the ways that you wil get rid of and not having your blood pressure up. Let's say if you wanted to buy a house in Germany, you have to pay for that house monthly and on top of that have to pay an extra $40,000 just to park you car. That's a same that you just bought a house and have to pay for a parking place and dont froget about cellphone bills, morgages, water and electric bills, and much more. Without a car will bring less money out of yor bank account.\n\nAlso, to having car payments you have to pay for gas too or your going to be walking to work while your JAG sits at home in the garage. Diesel fule has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline in France. If you have a car that doesnt run on diesel the sorry hun you have to go somr place eles to get you gas. Car traffic... who doesn't like coming home from a long day of work and then have to wait in car traffic for longs of period of time. You are actualy waisting up all of your money and gas just sitting there waiting for traffic to move.\n\nLast, maybe in the future there will be not that many cars being made. Studies shows that Americans are buying less cars. In source 4 it says that Americans can't afford new cars and with so many people not able to work and people getting into car accidents who knows they might invent moder bikes. With the government asking for so much on us and with the prices of gas getting up to $4.00 a gallon people want to save their hard working money. And without emassive amounts of money coming out of your bank you can maybe plain for a family vacation that doesn't cost as much as a car payment for 2 years.\n\nIn conclusion, to my perspective I don't want to pay for a car thats going to be more than what my house costs. Without a car I can go on long walks and be adventureous. See something that I haven't see since I was in a rush in the car. You never know what or who you will see when you are living free without a car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Using the Facial Action Coding System to identify human emotions would be beneficial and valuable for students to use because it will help them to experiment a lot of many more ideas, if they are upset or mad the machine can help them to smile more,and help the teahers or any other authority to help determine whether a child is lying to them or trying to figure out the truth.\n\nThis machine can help students and many other kids to further expand their imagination and discover many new ideas in the future. If a stduent or kid wants to see how this machine or system works, the student or child will look at it and examine it. It will further their knowledge so that if in the future this young child wants to experiement he'll know or have an idea of what he wants to do or make. This can be passed down to many other people or showed to them.\n\nLooking at this machine or system can also help a person or child to better their happiness. If someone is upset or mad and they try to do different experiments with this or trying it with their friends it is usually to help happiness come upon someone's face. It said in the article \"moving your facial muscle not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\". This basically means by doing different activities or experiments with this system, can help boost a persons happiness.\n\nThis machine or system can also be valuable in a sense where if a child is in a classroom wtih a teacher and he does something wrong and the child does not want to admit to it. The teacher can use the machine or system to determine whether the child is lying or telling the truth. Not just for children and students but for anyone. In the article it said that the system is sometimes used to detect a lie \"to an expert, faces don't lie; these muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\n\nDeveloping this machine or system to students and other people can be very valuable and be used in many different ways it can be used to help studnets come up with many new ideas for the future, help to change their mood if they are not happy, and to help detect a lie form a child or any other person or authority. This can be beneficial in so many ways to many people and it can change things for good in the future yes there will be complications along the road but thats why there can be extra adjustments to better improve it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator of Florida, I personally feel that the electoral college is just plain unfair. I don't think it's necessary to even have it at all because what's the point if the votes aren't equal for all states? it's a very irrational process. It isn't right if a president wins the popular votes but doesn't win by electoral votes and it results in him/her not becoming president. If someone votes for a slate of electors and they end up not even voting for who they're \"supposed\" to be voting for then what's the purpose of electing them anyway? There is no purpose unless you want the other party to win which i highly doubt that. The electoral college affects the voting of states because if the majority of their state is republicans and they're democratic, there vote isn't really going to matter because majority wins. This process makes no sense to me.\n\nThe amount of electoral votes that your state gets depends on your states population and not the size of it. I somewhat understand why they do this but at the same time it doesn't seem very fair. Yeah, i know life isn't fair but for something like this that has a possible way of being fair doesn't make sense not to be. Alaska with only 3 electoral votes should be able to have the same amount as california with 55 electoral votes. Since it isn't actually equal like that i feel that they should just choose who wins and becomes president by popular votes. This way would be a lot more fair because it wouldn't actually matter how many people lived in your state, it would just matter how many people voted for which canidate.\n\nAnother reason electoral votes aren't right to me is because if a president wins the popular votes but not the electoral votes then it almost seems likes one of the types of votes is useful. It seems like this because then he/she may not win and become president even though they won the popular votes. The canidates shouldn't have to rely on 2 different types of votes because obviously one isn't fair. I feel that in a situation like this having popular votes is just a watse of time because it seems that the electoral votes are what matter the most. Not having an equal amount of electoral votes for each state really defeats the purpose.\n\nThe voting is done by the party's nominee that then elects a slate of electors to vote for the canidate but the problem is you can't always trust that they will actually vote for the canidate that they're supposed to be voting for. This isn't the only issue, sometimes the voters get confused and accidentally vote for the wrong canidate resulting in more votes for the opposing side. This is a another reason why i feel that the electoral college should be abolished for good.\n\nIn conclusion, the electoral college is just really not needed in our goverment. It is equal for all states which affects the vote. Also the canidate doesn't win based on only popular votes, they must win they majority of the electoral votes. Lastly but definetly not least, the voting by the slate of electors isn't certain and isn't always accurate. These are some of the main reasons why i feel that the electoral college should be left in the past as an anachronism.\n\nSincerly,\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is just a natral landform. Why i say that because, aliens are not real and they can't create the landforms that were seen. If there where aliens then it would been more information found on NASA. If no human or thing cant't breath in space a alien shouldn't be able to breath there either. There would have been extra evidence found in space if there was a alien seen.\n\nEvedence was found that on the monitor a face apeared on it. But a few days later NASA unveild the image for all to see. The caption noted a ''huge rock formation . . . whitch resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.'' a NASA scientist added. '' so, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!''\n\nPersonally i think there are no such thing is aliens but if they were there would be alot done to earth and landforms. The NASA scientist has done a great job on taking the picture of the artifact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In many countries, society tends to do research about the history of a shack or a building where they dwell. In this essay I will outline the reasons for this and how can folk research instructions about houses.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons why crowds try to find the historical meaning of their apartment. Firstly, there is an understanding of what their ancient relatives did. For instance, a lot of communities found out that they had some nobleman in their bloodline. In addition to it, an apartment or a building with a historical value may be a valuable investment. After some period of time, the price of this building can increase. For example, some traditional houses with unique architecture in China are very expensive as they have extremely interesting and valuable historical backgrounds. Thirdly, some criminal action might be done there as well. For instance, there can be a stock of drugs or even a dead body might be found by accident. If the police make an investigation about it, the householder will probably face an enormous number of problems.\r\n\r\nRegarding the methods of research, there are several different ways how the public can find info about the historical meaning of the building. For instance, in many countries, before purchasing a residence, a population may have an access to material concerning the previous owners of this place. Also, people can find news and interesting facts about the place on the internet. Nowadays, almost everyone has an access to the internet, so it will not be a complicated process to search it out.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many , countries' communities become more interested in the history of their dwellings because of the family backgrounds and financial benefits. There are many approaches to finding data about the historical part of the building. the crowd can use the internet, TV programs, some chronicles and documents .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The driverless car would be cool, but it would also be pretty dangerous. The driverless car would be awesome for when you have a night out and dont feel like driving or dont have a driver to take you home. But they said it could posssibly mess up at times , and you would have to take the wheel.\n\nThe sensors in the car are a big help ,but if oneof he sensors goes bad while your driving ,it would end very bad. It also says that the car alerts the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating through work zones and around accidents.\n\nAnything can happen to anyone in a car, but i think being in a driverless car is way more dangerous. In the article it says that the car watches the drivers while the driver watches the road. I think the driverless cars would be awesome,but you would need to watch very closely on everything while you wre riding in one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many perceptions and mindsets of human had contaminated with a information of news letter such a paper, tabloid and gazette, even it is from a internet. The statements might be comes with several reasons. I taught it is totally give a negative views for any ages who believes without evidence.\r\n\r\nMany people assume that newspaper is one of practice way to get a lot of information in all sectors as government, hot topics of artists, environmental issues, politics, sports, and much more. If it is spread in society led to bad feelings who had read the news, one of the reasons for the problems is makes people becoming a hates and over negative about some things, moreover without evidence and being a hoax information. the thing becomes pro and contra in society, especially people had belief of what their read in newspaper. \r\n\r\nConversely, if companies who produce the newspaper should filter the information with accuracy and concrete evidence, might be led to good news for anyone. Mainly, this paper could also be alternative tools that make peoples being a criticsism and positive viewpoint which developing of mindset.\r\n\r\nin conclusion, peoples who reaching out information from newspaper had a differences of views. So, the human opinions depends fact of any output. therefore, it is should be pay attention to disseminate of process the information in newspaper.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author continuaslly shows that they belive that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author said in paragraph 5 that NASA was working on a \"blimp like vechicle\" that would hover over the landscape. in the same paragraph they said that this vechicle would hover at about \"30 or so miles\" above the terrain. In paragraph 5 the author said that the ship would have to stay at 30 plus miles high in order for the tempeture to stay \"at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit\". Also in paragraph 5 the text said that the \"air pressure would be close to sea level on earth\".\n\nIn paragraph 6 the author includes that \"many scientist are working on innovations that would allow are machines to work long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus\". In paragraph 7 the text say that NASA has tested some \"simplified electronics made from silicon carbide\". These \"simplified electronics\" have been proved to work for about \"3 weeks\" in a \"chamber simulationg the chaos of Venus's surface\".\n\nThe evidence that was displayed shows that the author and scientist think that a trip to venus would be a worthy cause. The text started out with facts about the planet of venus. Then the author slowly talked about how to safely study venus and the equipment that would be needed to do so.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph show loved flowers That met whole lot When failed driven test sad An flower made feel better snow failing waits untill spring come faith take testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story winter flowers gone time planting grew mature like says text things used think strange becoming firmiliar shes getting hang things Because shes learning ready test next springSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Technology has come so far in the past decade. Once thought to be an idea straight out of science firction has now become a reality. Using the technology to read emotions could be beneficial in the classroom. It could tell when a student is sad and needs help, or angry and needs to be stopped before something bad happens. Either way use possible use for this technology are endless.\n\nThe techology would be useful in the classoom, epecailly in high school where all sorts of emotions are runnung wild. \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear,\n\nand sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of facial muscles\". ( paragraph 3 Nick D'Alto). Eckman's technology uses 3-D modles of the human face and can calculate which expression it has by using the facial muscle groups. Each different emotions uses a different muslce in the face, so the computer would be able to see which emotion is paired with what mucle group. This would be extremly beneficial in school, because schools are now becoming more advanced with each student having their own personal laptop. The software could be pre-insatlled on the computer before being handed out, and moniter the students emotion when using it.\n\nThe technology of being able to read emotions could also help a student when learning. Now that schools are becoming more personal, some teachers are even doing their classes online. \" if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\" ( paragraph 6). The internet changes to you emotion, and according to Dr. Huang schooling will to. The face reading software could detect when a student is bored or confused, then the lesson could be modified. Changing the lesson when the student is confused or bored could really help the student pass the class. When people are bored or confused, nothing sticks they just forget, so the purpose of reading emotions could be very benefical in school.\n\nAs humans, we already have the ability to tell what emotion a person is feeling just by looking at their face. But as humans, we also have the ability to lie about our emotions, and sometimes, we are fooled by false emotions. However, Eckman's program can detect and read through forced emotions. Forced emotions uses differerent muscles than the natural emotons. \" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful\". ( paragraph 8) At school, this technolgy could be used to read past a persons fake smile, and determine wheather the student needs help and support. When we smile naturally we use the Zygomatic Major that lift the corners of our mouth, and the Obicularis Oculi ake the crows feet in our eye brows. When we do a force smile, we still use the Zygomatic major but the mouth is stretched sideways and we use another muscle, the Risorius. In a time where all sorts of drama occur, false emotoins are sure to sprout up. So the ability to read emotions would be viable in school.\n\nTechnology has always helped us from time to time. We use technology to get around places, manufacturing goods or escaping danger. But the technology to read human emtion truly is something special, and this technology would be valaubale to the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Would you be willing to join the exquisite Seagoing program? To help the many countaries that were in ruins,the 44 nations made the UNRRA.The UNRRA stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation, but our program is going to help them too. We have a myriad amount of exuberant people that are ready to explore the world. Our program takes you all around the world to help countries that don't have food, see beautiful sights you've never seen before, and to learn all about the places we'll go.\n\nWe will be like a spaceship zooming all over the world. We will be the altruistic people in the world ready to make our mark. The Seagoing Cowboy program is one of the best programs of all time. If you can't believe that, then I guess you better join the club then. Our club need to help so many people that are suffering.\n\nWell, I guess you better be signing up now. You are allowed to sign up at any time. You are also welcome to take the bus we will be providing for people to ride on. I can't wait to go on the best trips, especially the trips that we can see what was left from Worl War II. We can put the remainings of World World II in a couple of mueseums. When we put the remainings in the muesuems, everybody can see what great deeds we did and then we can bring food and make food to the people that suffer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of driverless cars is a thaught that could be very beneficial to todays world. There are arguments on both the bad and the good of having these autonomouse vehicals roaming around. Though i think that it would be a good idea for having the driverless cars.\n\nThere are a couple good reasons thatare given by the artical showing that they are a good idea. One is that they could be a very benficial way of getting from point A to point B. Also the cars they are producing now have proven to be very useful in being able to drive themselves well when put on the road. The car could also alert the driver if they ever need to take the wheel instead just in case of an emergency.\n\nThose driverless cars could be very useful. And i think that they are a good idea to build in todays world because they are extremely safe and reliable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that it would be valueable to use Facial Acion Coding Systems to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It could show the students mood and how their feeling that day, how they feel about the work that is assigned and help improve the grade point averages of the school and behavior as well. This can only bring a positive impact to a school.\n\nKnowing someones emotions and how they feel can tell you a lot about someone and how you should act around them. If we could use technology that shows how a student feels it would show what they are comfortable with in class and can dictate what a teacher could do for school work. As said in the article \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\" meaning that using technology to find out a kids emotions in school will also help them produce new emotions.\n\nIt will only help the classroom if the students and the teachers are on the same page. Knowng how the kids feel will help improve the productivity and the enjoyment of the classroom. This will all help make schools overall grade point averages and good behavior go up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People right listen read watch whatever want It people s choice read watch listen They able change person taking offensive movies books They go somewhere else People right read listen watch feel good If others find offensive problem People make decisions right I feel tell someone certain thing make want Taking offensive books music movies magazines solve problem society offensive others mask Taking sudden make people stop offensive others wo nt libraries Every book music movie offensive person take offensive stuff nothing left read It something deal So I agree censorship libraries It take away right read view want also take away offensive movies books almost every book Everyone feels one book another offensive take away books nothing left librariesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many debates about Driverless Cars. There are pros and cons. For some, people think this is a great idea. For other not so much. So are driverless cars good or bad?\n\nIn my opinion, driverless cars have ther ups and downs. Some of the positive things about having a driverless car for me is, I think they can take away un-needed stress from the driver. Wouldn't have to worry about little things that's going on in the road. For myself being a unexperienced driver. I might find driverless cars being usefull and a lot easier.\n\nThey're some negitives too. Some times computers might fail. I might run into problems with the law while having a driverless car. Also, the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" is good up to 25 mph. Where I live, the average speed limit is 30mph. Once past 25 mph the system might not work as well.\n\nSome think hands free driving is funner. Some say \"change is better\". Its better to be alert when practicing safe driving. It may be easier to just keep your hands on the wheel and pay attention to the road.\n\nThe outcome for me is, I do not support driverless. For the various negitive reasons being greater than the positive reasons. I find it a lot more safer to drive hands on ; rather than to drive driverless.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars is the next big thing like it or not. There's alot of things that come with driverless cars, one example is if you where in pain and couldn't drive THE CAR COULD DO IT. Also there is some people that don't know how to drive but need to get around with driverless cars they problems would be solved. In fact the rate in car problems and the law would be reduced. I honestly think that life with driverless cars would be a better life.\n\nIf there was an emegency where you could not drive yourself to safety how would you get there? With driverless cars you could go any place in any condition as long as you're able to move ther car in you direction. With driverless car you 5 year old child would be able to get you somewhere you needed to be if you guys were in that situation.\n\nDriverless cars is an big deal for those that don't know how to drive. Because driverless cars can drive on thier own you dont have to have any logic about cars or how to drive them as long as you know where it is that you're trying to go. There is many people that catch the bus because they don't know how to drive and alot of times the bus be late. These are people that need to get somewhere important but are late so they miss out.\n\nLife with driverless cars would help those out that always have run in's with the law when driving. Driverless cars would help because they can maintain they own speed level and what they are going to run in to. Also driverless cars can help out help out those who drive drunk. It can help them out and those that are around them by gettin them home safely. I think that is a very big deal to people.\n\nAs you can see driverless cars are the next big thing. Not just because the things that I stated above but because we are moving into the future and every thing is becoming more advanced. Some might not like the fact but that is not gone stop the car companies from making them. The next big things are approaching and I just wanted to give you a heads up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author gives alot of interesting facts about Venus. They even have a nickname for Venus its called the evening star. Well they call it the evening star because its one of the brightest points in the night sky. Venus is proved to be a very challenging place to examine closely. Also Venus is a planet in our solar system its second from the sun.\n\nVenus size compared to the Earth is like his twin and is the closet planet to Earth in density and size, sometimes on a occasionally distance wise to. The author states how they have sent space crafts to Venus to land and the missions were unmanned for a reason. Author makes a strong statement and says no single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more then three decades.\n\nNot a single spacecraft and even survived on Venus. The very thick atmosphere has about a 97 percent carbon dioxide that blankets Venus. The information the authors gives to us about the atmosphere and its whole planets are very detailed and explains everything about the planet. He even goes on to talk about the temperatures average over like 800 degress fahrenheit which is insane.\n\nWhen the author says that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit i think he wants people to discover new things about the planets but most about Venus. I think they are trying to discover more facts about the planet and what other ideas he come up with. I also think the author wants to get even closer to the planet despite all the dangers. He goes on to say that the National Aeroautics and space administration NASA they have compelling ideas for sending humans to study Venus. The scienctists are trying to find a way to mabey get a spacecraft on Venus or a vehicle hovering over Venus. But the 170 degress fahrenheit and air pressure would be close to seal level on earth. More interesting facst's the author is giving is and goes on about if their plan to get a hovering vehicle over Venus from a safe distance they can videography ineffective samples of gase's what rock's alot of information they are trying to get about venus. But those samples cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\n\nWhen the author states the challenge of exploring venus is they are trying to get more information about the planet. They want others to discover something about Venus and mabey help them out. The author gives alot of interesting facts about Venus so people can study about this planet. So they can get the most out of his studies that made and put to this acrticle for people to get into studying about this planet no matter the despite of danger's it presents its a awesome planet to study well put by the author with lot's of information on Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper I writing letter explain I think computers good My three supporting reasons computer time s chance might gain weight becom obese You would rather computer hang family lastly wo nt friends talk Please read hear story First always computer going get go outside little wo nt important Also going eat get exited going want eat Then ll start getting overweight nt want exercise Secondly would spend less time family You would think going hang later So play get addicted So family would grow apart And would lonely gave family play game computer For last reason matter wont friends I think wo nt friends computer time wont even bother go park play go gym try get sports wo nt meet anyone The friends would likely friends computer That never meet real life wo nt socialize life hang In conclusion I think good idea computer become obese spent less time family wo nt friends talk I hope enjoyed letter take considerationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, there is no doubt that people are becoming more aware of global warming and its consequences. However, some people belive that rather stoping or being more cautious about climate change, we opt to find a suitable method to live with it. Personally speaking, I strongly disagree with this statement.\n\nOthers say that we should avoid fixing our planet's current state because global warming is a long-term issue that requires a lot of money to raise constant awareness and to resolve different issues, regards to this matter. Moreover, they think there are more vital and immediate issues that need more attention and investment than nature catastrophies, since they have not seen any servere effects yet. Let's not forget that, for the last two months, many Americans, especially people who lived in Texas suffered from snowfalls, which has never happened before so many residents lost their home, because they never experienced such events so theyr house cannot withstand the harsh conditions. This nature phenominals or disaster happens due to climate change.\n\nOn the other hand of this issue, many argue that if we hesistant and do not start solving this problem because we might not see how serious the outcome can be, our younger generations need to suffer much more heavy consequences, which can be very difficult to control and resolve. This is because, according to some professors and researchers that are specialised in the weather, they said that changing of the climate is an issue that is being built up overtime so it needs to be handle as soon as possible. For example, sea level rising in many Europeans coutries or costal cities is a major problems, since for the next 30 to 50 years, if we cannot construct enough dams or finding the practical solutions to control the global temperature, they these whole area will drown, which can lead to many serious consequent effects.\n\nIn conclusion, people might say that we just need to find a way to live with the problem, but I believe that the sooner we deal with this change, the better the outcome.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Educational institutes are not only important for the theoretical knowledge that is taught in them but also for the overall development of cognitive and social skills of the students. Some believe that high schoolers should be allowed to cross-question and offer criticisms on their educators while others oppose this notion, as it might lead to poor discipline in schools. In this essay, I will discuss the merits of both sides of the argument and state my opinion about it.\r\n\r\nIt is argued, that students should be encouraged to question and criticise what they are being taught as it will help them develop the skill of critical thinking . This will be beneficial to them as they will be able to use this skill to analyze various problems in life and also form their individual opinions. Critical thinking may also save them from misinformation , for example, when they come across some information or propaganda on the internet. Moreover, the habit of questioning will build curiosity in various subjects and may possibly lead to innovation. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, encouraging such behaviour may lead to these pupils becoming overconfident , resulting in loss of discipline as they might start disrespecting their teachers. They may criticize every statement and instruction given to them, which will lead to the teachers losing control of their classrooms. Additionally, students may lose their humbleness and become ruder. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, both sides have their own merits, but on balance, I feel it is important for students to question and offer productive criticisms as it will help them form personal opinions and also lead to innovative discoveries.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are currently being developed continuously.\n\nAutomakers are continuing their work and testing problems ahead that will soon be solved in driverless cars.\n\nMercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\n\nAs technology advances, the standard of living for humans begin to change.\n\nFull driverless cars should not be invented.\n\nNone of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.\n\nThere is a certain point that automakers should stop working at driverless cars. \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" The driver will not watch the road in a driverless car due to the attention span of a typical human. \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" The driver, indeed, will get bored waiting for their turn to drive which would lead to more distractions when it's his or her turn to drive. The driver will not watch the road in a driverless car due to the attention span of a typical human.\n\nDriverless cars being created will lead to more distractions to the human eye.\n\nLet alone without driverless cars, humans constantly get distracted while driving.\n\nThe invention of driverless cars would allow humans to be more active on their cell phones and such while driving.\n\nDriverless cars will distract humans from their environment.\n\nIf a driverless car causes an accident: will he or she be aware of the situation before someone gets hurt or will the attention of the human be elsewhere?\n\nDriverless cars may be a blessing for lazy humans, though, a car can not be perfected to where it is one-hundred percent impossible to get into an accident.\n\nDifferent laws would have to be created in order to allow driverless cars into roads.\n\nAre driverless cars worth a big change within our transportation system of laws or could we drive how we normally drive ourselves with no change?\n\nThere is nothing wrong with our transportation system in todays society.\n\nDriverless cars are not safe.\n\nImprovements are being made, although, changes within our transportation system are not necessary.\n\nA lot will have to change for driverless cars to be used on a daily basis such as laws.\n\nDriverless cars will allow us to get distracted even easier than we do today!\n\nWho do we blame after we actually get into an accident while \"operating\" a driverless car - the driver of the manufacturer?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author wrote this article called \"The challenge of exploring Venus\" because he wants to study more of Venus called the \"Evening Star\" he wants us to lear about how Venus is important and where or by what its by in outer space. NASA wants possoble solution of the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above. NASA wants to explore Venus and learn more about it in this article it gives us some facts about Venus they say that Venus is Earth's twin is the colsest planet to Earth terms of density and size and accasionally the closest in disnatce to. Venus is the second planet from the Sun. I think thats tuding Venus is a worthy pursuit i agree with the author we should learn more about Venus i think its\n\na great idea to learn more about it and what it is made of this a great oppurtunity for those whi like to travel and would like to tavel to space it would be a great idea to know more about Venus and walk on is and feel it would be cool.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting car usage can only be positive\n\nWe don't need them if we all work together\n\nCar pool denser cities alts will be available (public transit)\n\nCost effective and convenient\n\nSidewalks > roads\n\nConvenient(s1l6)\n\nBetter for us(can still interact without over-driving)[interactive biking/walking | online interaction]\n\nGiving our cars up in this day and age seems impossible; but if everyone can work together, new opportunities will arise that'll outweigh the convenience of having a personal vehicle. We won't need cars if we all work and cooperate with one another. Not only that but it'll become more cost effective and convenient as a whole in the long run. Once all is said and done, limiting car usage can only be positive.\n\nMany questions would arise if this idea was approached, wouldn't we take longer to get places? Isn't it inconvenient and a step-back from personal commuting? The answer would be yes, but for the most part it's the point. Sure you make take longer to get places by car pooling or taking public transit, but if anyone is doing it there'll be no comparison of time with personal commuting, personal commuting will be gone. If no cars were available cities would compensate with free bikes when commuting or public transit. The no-car weekend in Paris allowed free public transit, so in the long-term it'd also be free (Source 2). City planning would be modified to compensate for the increased commuting time; making the long commutes a little easier. If we all work together we won't need cars, and in the end it'd be positive overall.\n\nIn a world of reduced personal commuting, the cost of living would improve as well. Money spent on gas or car maintenance would be nonexistent. Instead of using taxes on expensive roads, they'll be used on inexpensive sidewalks, just like in Bogota (Source 3). With the extra cash from no car expenses it'll be easier to purchase luxury items you may want. Cities will be made with convenience in mind, placing key stores in easily accessible areas, similarly to Vauban's store placement (Source 1). This would answer the question of inconvenience, A ten minute drive can become a ten minute bike or walk with strategic placement. In the end, a reduced car usage society would be more cost effective and convenient, a definite positive compared to an automobile society.\n\nCars are definitely important to many people, but only because the majority have cars. Take everyone's cars away and they wouldn't have a reason to need one. If we all work together we won't need cars, people will help one another and cities would be planned better. In this society you'd have more money to use as you please, instead of using it to survive. Most important of all, the time to take a car someplace rather than any other alternative would be the same; important locations can always relocate for everyone's convenience. A world without cars can only be positive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this present times, celebrities becoming known for their glamour and wealth rather than their achievements are setting bad examples to the young people. I vehemently agree with this given statement. This essay will expound my on my point of view and provide credible examples.\n\nFirstly, the most discernible aspect is that it corrupts the minds of the young ones that material and physical things are most important. To clarify properly, the young people will neglect values like diligence and perseverance and will just focus on how to become rich and famous. An optimal example of this can be the business tycoons, where they are known on how many corporations they have. Little that the youth knows that it was due to their hardwork and determination that bought those business tycoons on where they are now.\n\nAnother point worth considering is the neglection of talents and skills. It is deemed that achievements accomplished by an individual is what makes him a significant figure of the society. For instance, Elon Musk is repsonsible for the successful production of Tesla car, a fully powered electric vehicle. But unfortunately, people only knew him of being the wealthiest man in the world.\n\nIn conclusion, celebrities are setting bad examples to the young people of today due to the fact that what they have accomplished and achieved are blanketed by their glamour and wealth. The celebrities as well as the society should be role models for the youth for them to grow up and be a respectable individuals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In modern society, individuals have to spend more time and energy on their work to avoid decreasing the economy under huge pressure. These situations lead to a lack of time which keeps them company with their family members and friends. I believe there are certain factors responsible for it, and its affection can not be underestimated.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the price of dairy products increases rapidly over a decade which enhances the stress to live a satisfying life in urban areas. To pay for these items such as clothes or organic foods, youngsters have to work harder to earn the money personally. Moreover, the peer pressure which promotes people to compete in this long-time job still keeps rising with the growing population. Take the case of numeral big companies reducing staffs, more and more youngsters who have attended a company less than three months are fired during this period. Therefore, if a person desires to have a decent job, improving own competitiveness is an emergency. In addition, the support from governments might fade in these years, which means the pressure on citizens grows. \r\n\r\nThis situation not only influences workers themselves but also affects the whole family and society. To be more specific, the intrinsic cores of the harmonious family are accompanying and communications. And the loss of the main family member who is busy with working may lead to unhealthy relationships. For example,the absence of a father or mother in a child's growth intends to change the child's personality.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, the frequent missing appointments with friends will accelerate the break of friendships. \r\n\r\nIn nutshell, tough production without reasonable rest will harm close relationships and personal health.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that using technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is beneficial. This is because students maybe struggling from depression or anxiety. It is easy for people to fake a smile or not act sad. Using the technology today, society can figure out whether or not someone is in a good mental state. This technolgoy does not just calculate one eotion, but multiple emotions. It would be a good idea to use this new system of calculating emotions because individuals misinterpertate another person's mood. With using this device humns would have a clear and better understanding of how someone is feeling. \"The Facial Action Coding System\" can help teachers with their job. This device can detect whether a student is bored or understanding the material. If teachers new this, they would find a better way of teaching. The device is 'all about those muscular action movements, they even indiate a difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\"\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is valuable in the classroom because it can tell the differene if omeone is being truthful or not. If a student gets in trouble and chooses not to tell the truth, this device can detect it. The article states \"to an expert, faces don't lie, these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" It's also important to detect students emotions in the classroom. The teachers never know whats going on with a student. For example a student could have a rough home life, that could lead to making bad choices like self harm. It's important to know what a student is feeling so they can get help earlier on. Not only is that a good thing to know, but it's important to see if the student understands the material being taught. If the student is unsure what is going on in the lesson, the teacher needs to find a way to help the student understand. If students are bored or confusedduring the lesson, the teacher needs to modify it. Teachers can do this by making work more hands on and intresting.\n\nIn conclusion The Facial Action Coding System is a smart and effective way to indicae someone's emotions and shouls be used more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In short story Rough Road ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Limit Joe Kurmaskie features setting affects cyclist When old codgens house confident told shortcut Yosemite giving confidence needs leaves still confident settings changes mood cyclist miles te pedal cyclist arrives first town despair ghost town still confidence lack water continues couple miles comes small fork pump Thinking cool water goes pump finds tastes like battery acid Now desparate water dehydrated towns around began pedal pedal hoping find town around When find town water setting relieving better find water In end setting effect cyclist back confident desperate water used relieved water foundSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear state senator I feel like we do not need to keep the Electoal College and we need to change the election to popular vote. Even Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all agreed on abolishing the Electoral College and I agree with them. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. Most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown in the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote for the vice president. The electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take all all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the\"swing\" states. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all. It's offical the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best known arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. It's ghard to say this but Bob Dole was right, we should abolish the electoral college.\n\nThe electoral college is a non democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocate of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense, it is the electors that elect the president, not the people. when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it happened in 2000 but its less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidates share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The next essay will talk about the reasons behind the need of some people to find out about their own family history.\nI believe in certain young countries as USA for example, it is completely logical to feel the need of getting to know where your roots come from.\nWe have to take into account that in many cases a sector of the USA population only know the nationality or the history of their grandparents, and their grandparents have very few information of their own parents, so the total history of their family is quite sort. I am spanish and lived for one year in the state of Washington with an american family. It was very surprising for me to find out how proud that family was of its european roots. It took me a while to understand their feelings. I needed to put myself into their shoes. To give a live example, my american Dad had even visited the northern part of Norway, close to the Artic Polar Circle to look for a distant cousin he had figured out he had. My american Dad was the happiest person on earth when showing the picture of his cousin and him taking a beer in Norway.\nI believe there are many reasons for someone to dig into history to have a deeper knowledge of his own family. Firstly you may get a better understanding of the behaviours of your closest relatives. Also you can find the reasons behind the colour of your skin or your eyes.\nTo summarise, I strongly believe it is positive to get to know more about your own roots and about your distant relatives to get a better understanding of youself.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood story comfort When author describe home everyone welcome made feel people comfortable safe loving enviornment When turn house home feel comfortable many comforting loving memories The author said many people came house eat Cuban foodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One time hard wait I patient end One time family I going world The morning I woke I excited I really wanted get air port go world packed car drove airport In car brother I talking excited Once got airport got supper excited When got area wait plane workers told every one waiting plane us plane gon na around one hour late My whole family I really wanted get world soon could would wait walked around air port got something eat Then wait twenty minutes My family I set talked knew getting plane Being patient really help soutitionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hey! The names Luke Bomberger,And it's really \"cool\" to be a Seagoing Cowboy,How bout' you be one to? When your a Seaging Cowboy you can go and explore places that look interesting to you,oh...and I went to Veince,And I guessed it was pretty intersting and also,Italy and China. I \"graduated\" in highschool and I had two part jobs until someone offered me a job as a Seagoing Cowboy,Well..I couldn't resist,but to say yes.\n\nAnyways....\n\nTheres also different reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys,its not all about exploring new things if you already knew, You can learn play stuff like \"sports\" or learn values or get some pointers of working as a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nWill you ever help someone,So we can make it seem like were \"useful hard workers\"? Hope so.. :|\n\nBut....\n\nIm glad to be a \"Seagoing Cowboy\",And I hope join us and we can do lots of things together to help eachother out,remeber im Luke Bomberger and Im a Seagoing Cowboy!\n\nBye Bye :PSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that the Face is just a natural landform on Mars because no one has any reall proof that it is made by aliens and the astronauts might have just gotten lucky and taken the photo when the shadows were in the right place.\n\nI think that there is no proof that aliens made it because even NASA said that is was just, \"A huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth,\" I believe that this quote means that not even NASA thinks that the Face was formed by aliens they just believe that it was just shadows on the rock. Another example from the text that makes me believe that it wasn't made by aliens is that, \"People think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars,\" I believe this supports the claim that there is no proof of aliens because if there was then NASA would have already put in the papers so that could get money to go and explore Mars but, since they haven't put out any information about Mars obviously they haven't found anything to prove that there is life on Mars.\n\nThe second reason I believe that it was not aliens who made the face is because the astronauts might have just taken the photo when the shadows were in the right place. I believe this because the text states that, \"What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West,\" I believe this piece of evidence supports the claim because it proves that the shadows were only causing an illusion there was not eyes, or nose, or mouth they were only shadows that were in the right place. The second piece of evidence that I believe supports my claim is, \"\n\nScientists figured it was just another mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like and Egyptian Pharaoh,\" I believe this supports my because even the scientists believe that it was only shadows that made it look like the rock had eyes, nose, and a mouth.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that the Face is not made by aliens because there is no proof it is made by aliens and the astronauts might have just taken the picture while the shadow made the rock look like a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no scepticism that corporate openly organize sports events to promote their products in public. Certain individuals think it has a negative effect on play. I disagree with this statement and I will discuss it in upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\n Corporate has been beneficial for play in anyways. The primary advantage is that \"children know about traditional games. To illustrate, in recent times, most teenagers spend their free time to plays video games Big companies help them to know about conventional games. For,instance in the previous year in Canada NMT tyre company organizes a big kabaddi cup to influence the new generation. Thus, the new generation connects with old games\nFurthermore, another benefit is that multiple corporations give an opportunity to new talent. To elaborate , nowadays people have a lot of talent but they did not find any better way to kick start their carrier. So, multiple corporations give a chance to show their talents. For example, IPL is very famous in the world. It is known as an Indian premier league. In this ,league lots of large companies give a chance to new cricketers. As a result of this, many freshers find a better way to start their carrier.\r\n\r\nHowever, It is also has a negative impact on sports because some agencies sell drug-related products. Such as pan masala and alcoholic drinks affect badly on human life. These agencies spend a huge amount of money on advertisements for influenced to buy them. As a result of this some human beings buys this product after that they have a habit to consume it on regular basis. After ,that they have a serious health disease.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, corporate has been beneficial for sports in anyways. With the help of big companies children know about their conventional games and also freshers take an opportunity to show their talent.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper stand hole computers thing becoming big issues people spending time books instead comuitateing friends family exercising injoying nature Just like expert tinker siad book called computers To much time computers rackemed saven hours outsiad make wnight people get coumite shion friends family I bet know kids siting thier cowth play vite games Another people need exercis leading country abeast due litle exercise mostly computersAnd last importint well people injoy nature fullist blivie jack cup thinks said PERCENT people injoy nature years longer people likely heart I think computers bad people jackup sisintsits many percentages wellSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people that were effected by world war 2. They got their seamans papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, wich means he could be drafted for millitary service. When he was discharged in 1947 he has made nine trips the most trips a seagoing cowboy has had.\n\nIt took the seagoing cowboys two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Luke was busy caring for the animals during the crossings. The animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. The stalls had to be cleaned and Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship\n\nThere was alot to do over seas Luke helped alot of people over seas. he crossed the pacific ocean 2 times.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "First of all, the face of the earth was created but not created by someone. So many people did millions upon millions of researcha dn it appears that the scientest thinks that is was just another Martin mesa which is really common thoughout Cydonia. Some people think it is just a huge rock formation, the authors reasoned it would be a good way to enage the public and attract attention is Mars.\n\nThe face of the mars has become a pop icon which is also know as like the popular thing everyone is talking about, I mean even talk shows are talking about it. It is so popular they ar putting it in books.Again some people believed it was created by aliens. Is that even real? Many people went into outerspace just to get pictures of it and to see it in real life. Thousands of people were waiting for it to go viral, but did it ever?\n\nNot everyone\n\nwas satisfied with this master piece. The face on mars is located 41 degrees north martian lattitude where it was winter in April of '98. A cloudy time of the yaer on the red planet. The camera on board had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. Perhaps, said skeptics alien markings were hidden. Over time mission controllers prepared to look again. This is very very hard work to do and whoever does it creds to you. Mars global surveyor is mapping the spacecraft that normally looks straeight down and scans the planet like a fax machine. They don't\n\njust pass over the face very often.\n\nIt then appears that who ever came up with this stuff is so weird. On digital things you can make anything 3 times bigger than the pixel size. In reality the picture has shown Martian equibalint of a butte or mesa. Which is landforms common around the American est. That is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa abouth the same height at the Face on Mars.\n\nIn my opinion, whoever thinks something like this is true you are insane. No alien is going to draw or do whatever they did on the face of mars. LIke no if you do think that you are seriously crazy.\n\nAleins are'nt even real, but this was a very very intrestin topic to talk about and it just sums up all the stuff from NASA. This article has brought my attention ever since I started reading over this topic.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "A great day adventure sister invited christion school called nice sunny day turned sunny day Woke first day visiting sister new school went classes teachers kinda wired friends second period went class teacher said put running shose besause going run mountian sister forgoten put running shose teacher sent go get got shose class already quarter mile away school sister desided take short cut took road seanic root We ran hill really steep sister got half way hill slid butt way went I went I ran hill faster I ever ran life I hit pavement bottom I like tumbleweed huricane sister helped started running tword class shock sister looked like sister looked like got done playing mud hand looked like I got hit truck face covered dirt sister got back decided get cleaned went showers showers similer ones shower curtins shower I used curtin came medel hook I wasnt smart used plastic stepping stool ground still wet I took shower stool sliped pinkey got cought hook I sliced open main vain pinky I started getting lightheaded I passed sister friends took sisters room put bandade still passed After woke found self blanket really uncomferterbul bet sister waiting wakr told never scare like agien said I told I thought funny ran hill I didnt much damage except give scrapes pinky made passSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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