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"content": "Every day, thousands of people lose their lives to automobile accidents, property is destroyed, lives are ruined, and more importantly, the Earth itself is dying. All of these things can be avoided though. By reducing the ammount we use cars, we can make a great change in the world. In the following essay I will show you, the reader, how reducing car use can change the world, and hopefully convince you to begin using your car a little bit less.\n\nThe first advantage I will share with you is that using less cars means denser cities. City planners will make cities more dense to accomodate shorter walking distances. This makes going places much more convienient, and less space in the world being taken up by cities. This not only helps you, but all the people on Earth, as less forests are being destroyed to be used for land for unnecessarily large cities. Denser towns and cities also means that you can spend more time doing things you want to do, instead of traveling to where you want to go. In a very dense city, you can walk down to a coffee shop, order a coffee, walk over to a nearby store and look around there while your coffee is being made, then walk back, get your coffee, and walk to work in the same time it would take just to drive to work in a less dense city. Thins will be more convienient, and more environmentally friendly.\n\nAnother advantage to less cars being used is lower greenhouse gasses and other harmful emmissons. After just 4 days of reducing driving in Paris, smog levels went down drastically. If all harmful emission cars are banned in the world, the evironment would return to a much more stable state in no time. This would improve the life span of the world, and help not only humans, but also many animals to survive longer.\n\nThe final advantage I will talk about is the economical advantage to not owning a car. When you own a car, you have to pay for the car itself, plus insurance, gas, and you have to maintain the car to keep it running. This takes a lot of money out of the pockets of many families. Without a car, you can spend much more money on more needed things.\n\nToday I have informed you about the many advantages to using less cars in society, these advantages include denser cities, less greenhouse gasses and other harmful emmissions, and more money to spend on other things. Thank you for reading.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives mood gratefulness Mood means overall atmosphere authors words I think happyness matter happens Rodriguez always gratfull She care lives simple house bunch people happy home In paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice I would looked gratfull happy Also last sentence says I never forget parents turned simple house home These perfect example mood greatfullness happynessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Last researches, parade marked raising in obesity rates in the world. Some thoughts assume that we could reducing this issue by impose higher cost on unhealthy food. However, it's not a surefire way also not fair.\r\n\r\nPeople who reap high remuneration don't care about extra-taxes as money don't constitute any impediment for them, to illustrate, increasing fatten food few dollars is nothing for them. Consequently it could influence just low income people.\r\n\r\nMoreover, by applying such solutions, it will generate a financial problems for a numerous ventures as well as economic issues, because processed food not only important industry it is economic changer. so, huge companies in this sector for example, kfc, macdonald's and pizzahut, will not obey this measures.\r\n\r\nThere is always another side to a coin. so for sure increasing price for processed products such as, burger, pizza and instant pasta, might regulate this phenomenon, because it will minimize the desiring in such products, in other words, it can change the consumer conduct. also this extra levy could use in improving obesity health centers, furthermore make conceived advertising companies to expand the knowledge about overweight matters.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although levy more charges on fatten foods could manage the issue, it is not the optimal solution. Thus, we should looking for other ways to cope with this matter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do believe certain materials library removed shelf found offensive I believe certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive Some reasoning logical reader I m sure want read something thats true interesting Libraries consist books everything think Libraries really learning offense anybody manner The reason I believe removed everybody equal everybody likes read books There offensive books I think theres many kids would like grab book orginal offensive way Books created read interest laughter enjoying From students school I spoke said really bad day turn music helps makes feel alot better day gets easier They say dont depressed thinking something made mad day Well experience books I tell somethings sometimes I feeling I grabed book The first time I realized books really helpful I m also talkling magazines music movies Well honest I m big reader I enjoy listening music sometimes songs relate make fell alone Also helps learn cope things could never coped makes feel relaxed Just friends said feel relaxed read book So point know I know music offensive books Does drive us crazy No actually helps us It helps us showing us away daily streesful lifes sometimes learn books songs people deal stress So learn alot things feel offensive books music As tell I m huge music fan lots songs offensive bug much I hope I gave kind shock music books shouldnt removed offensive It s music amazing well books need space sometimes two things us either help us learn feel relaxed calm Thank reading I hope I persuaded enough reasoning Remember music books alot alot fun never gave chance try sometime That s end conclusionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear student I believe computers many bad effects people Most people think computers new helpful technology There many things going cyber world Computers quite helpful school research work important stuff many bad effects Kids days attached computers almost day getting home school means barely homework projects important assignments getting distracted computer There parents get tricked kids homework reality kids times meeting tons strangers social networks networks Once decide meet person strangers many things go wrong everyone nice seem internet It shows dangerous kids using computers much people young children pre teens teenagers able view many harmful inappropriate things anyone ages nt viewing Another concern people spend day computers probably eating type junk food nt exercise gain weight well fit physically becomes health issue kids age much older people age much older turns bad health life people From people spending nearly day computer nt able go discover new things exercise hang friends fun spend time families I also strongly consider computers laptops stay kids room lock room day even stay till really late even past midnight becomes real issue kids adults get early school work usually late This pretty much shows computers great people time In order people able use computers life plan schedule long use computer might help lotSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that some people tend to download their affable music songs via the Internet, which causes a negative impact on the music industry. However, others reckon that this activity does not affect the artists. I think that there is a negative impact on musician performances.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, nowadays we see some breaches in terms of illegal downloading of their favorite music songs. This is because there are throngs of people who would like to get music singles with no fee, which causes a detrimental impact on musician’s profit. Consequently, they may lose their inspiration and it can lead to their poor performance with all that entails. I agree that this may have a fruitless effect on not only their future concert tours but in general on their future career. For instance, some popular singers in the UK have left their music industry because they do not get enough motivation and reward from their fans, who do not visit their performances.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are no downsides in the proliferation of downloading their music through websites. This is because they earn a chunk of income sources, which is usually made by singers, such as: concert tours, a bunch of private concerts and shows.Besides, publishing their music on YouTube provides them a tremendous effect and income,where they can earn some money on watching and downloading their songs from it. Conversely, they have a prosperous life without making ends meet. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reckon that there is a negative result from illegally downloading songs via the Internet. However, there is a neutral effect on them, which can evoke some possible opportunities for their future career like using various sources of income via YouTube channel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people, including nasa, believe that \" the Face\" is just a natural landform. Yes, it is odd for a landform to look like a face on a planet thet doesn't have rain fot it to erode like that. It is a very agruable topic because there is really no proof of life on Mars.\n\nFirst off, the Face on mars is simply a natural landform. For all we know the face could've been there for a while but we never saw it before becasue Mars could've rotated around to that side. Also that was the first ship that NASA sent to Mars to take pictures, therefore it could be older than we think.\n\nSecondly, the only reason it \"has\" eyes, a nose and a mouth is because of shadows and clouds. The way the light is shining upon the Face it is casting a shadow to make it appear as if it really had facial structures. It was also a cloudy time of year on Mars when the pictures were taken.\n\nNext, Most people can agree that it is very odd for something to look like a face that isn't man-made. NASA isn't 100 percent sure that there is/ is not life on Mars. Therefore we can not make a correct statement that the Face is man-made or not.\n\nThen, you have to take in consideration that NASA waited 18 years to go back and get more pictures. If you look closely at the pictures, the Face changed in those 18 years. It faded away naturally over the years. You can see that because you can't really see the facial structures that good anymore. If there was life on Mars they would've repaired it. If you look at the picture from 1998 at the angle the picture was taken at, it looks as if it is a mountain.\n\nFinally, It is most likely a natural landform because it faded away never repaired. The clouds and shadows upon the Face make it appear as if it was built. There is no proof that there is or is not life on Mars. For all we know there could be aliens on Mars but NASA is not for sure that there is because they have never stepped foot on Mars. NASA has only had a rover to take pictures. Only pictures is all that NASA has.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are going to be great becasue they react a lot better then we do and they calculate how long it takes for the car to get there and they are right most of the time. Google cars have only had one crash that happened a couple of months ago. It calculated that the car had enough time to get out in front on the bus becasue there was sand bags in the road but the bus was going faster then it thought and pulled out in front of it and the bus hit the google car. Google cars are smart they are smarter then people becasue we do not calculate how long we have til we can turn we look and turn that is why there are so many crashes these days becasue people do not know how to drive.\n\nPeople do not know how to act right behind the steering the steering wheel i did this report on reckless driving there are people out there that do there homework brehind the wheel and change behind they wheel. In a google car you could beable to do that right quick and take your hands off the wheels and if your seat vibrates just hurry up and put your shiurt on or put your book up and just grab the wheel. I just got my drivers license a couple of weeks ago and I always have to be paying attention when I am driving becasue people do not look when they are driving so if I was in a google car they would notice it before I do and they could stop me from hitting they car or even save my life or another persons life.\n\nGoogle cars are going to be great when they come out there will not be that many crashes anymore and you will not here of all of these crashes from where humans where driving. But accindents will still happen when google cars are driving there will never be where nobody crashes google cars can miss calculate the speed of something and it can get in a wreck but it will react better to a stopping vehicle then we are.\n\nWhy would anyone want a drivless car that still needs a driver? The reason is that there are always going to stuff out there where humans are still going to be better then computers if there is a crash on the road we can miss it more easlily then the google car can and then it will not take as long as it would for the google car to calculate the savest route. Google cars can see little kids running out in the roads before we do and they can stop faster then we can even see the kid run in the street.\n\nHopfully when Google cars come out where people can by them there will not be that many drunk driving accidents becasue they could prevent then crashing. They should make a thing where you have to do a breatheliser test beforfe you even get in the car so that it could call an actually taxi with a real person so that if the google car would have to do something where you would have to drive so that the car would not get in a wreck with you being drunk.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I patient I went cediar point I wait line along tine priencse ther lot people longest word drogster I almost anhour ride teenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "I agree with this author whenit states that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerous it presents. I agree with the author because although studying Venus might be dangerous i dont think\n\nit could be worth it after all. in paragraph 3 it quotes \" the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than we experience on our own planet these conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on Earth.\" This quote shows how dangerous it could be for humans to go to venus. In Paragraph 5 it states \" At 30 plus miles above the surface, tempertures would still be toasty at 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful. and radiation wound not exceed Earth levels. Not Easy conditions but survivable for humans.\" This quote shows that it would be very hot for humans, Yes they would be able to survive but what human would wanna live all their life in 170 degrees which could most defenitly casue heat strokes. In conclusion this is why i agree with the author when he stated that Venus could be dangerous.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "'Space. The final frontier.' This is a very commonly used phrase that is the helm for space exploration. Since the beginning of time, humans have looked up to the sky and wondered what might be in that vast place above their heads. The problem is, there is simply no technology advanced enough for scientists to explore all that lies around them. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author definitely states the challenges of exploring the planet, but does not effectively support their claim that it is worth the risk.\n\nThe author presents the challenge of Venus's inhospitable environment in relation to the Earth by simply laying down the facts, without defending their side. In paragraph two of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the text states, \"Each previous mission [to Venus] was unmanned...since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author gives an explanation to the quick deaths of these spacecrafts as well, clearly outlining how hostile the environment is. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon blankets Venus...the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" The author goes on to list more negative attributes, such as the temperature, which averages \"over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\" It seems, so far, that the risks definitely outweigh the rewards. The author then describes technology that would help scientists explore Venus, but it is clear that this tech has not yet been developed.\n\nThe author mentions \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus\" which is that \"scientists [would] float above the fray.\" The problem with this statement is that the technology has obviously not been tested yet, and very likely not even developed. The author's use of an uncertain word, \"possible\", connotes uncertainty and doubt that this idea will even work. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" then proceeds to counter their own argument in the next paragraph: \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can only provide limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere\". In addition to listing yet another drawback of the environment, the author blatantly states that the previously mentioned idea would not work for proper exploration of Venus. The author is simply relying on the reader's emotions and assumed interest in space to agree with the author, rather than presenting facts to back up their argument.\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does give a couple good reasons for exploring Venus: initially, the fact that it was once the most Earthlike planet. \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" The author then goes on to describe these features: valleys, mountains and craters. Another reason is given: \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration...the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\" It is assumed that the author ends this sound claim with a statement to pique interest, but it does just the opposite. The use of an interrogative relays to the reader that even the author, who is arguing for space exploration, is uncertain how these explorations will be accomplished; this effectively discredits the validity of their statement. The author relies too much on objectiveness to get their point across, and that is how they fail: to propose a strong argument, one must back up their claims with facts to persuade readers, not simply state facts in relation to the negatives of a situation without refuting them.\n\nIn conclusion, the author presents a weak argument that is backed up by unfinished projects and an assumed advocacy for space exploration. Rather than give the cold, hard facts of opposition and counter them with more facts that support their argument, the author gives no definitive research on how scientists will go about exploring Venus. The author simply states ideas, accepting them as sound solutions to any problem that space may throw at them. The vast unknown is not something to toy lightly with, lives and multitudes of financing are in the balance. There is no room for possible ideas, one must know with proof that these inklings of imagination will be sustainable when put to the test. Space may be the final frontier, but this argument persuades readers to believe that time is yet to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "How well something is said and in what way it is said to the audience plays a role in how the big or small the impact is; Depending on how well written something is makes a difference as well. In a passage called \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author gives an excellent essay on why traveling to Venus is a worthwhile journey.\n\nFor example, the author states, at one time Venus is believed to have been the closest resimbled to Earth. In paragraph 4, the text states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supportes various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The planet has a rocky surfaces and also has features such as valleys, mountains and craters. The author states,\"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable..\" This proves that the author presents relatable evidnece that the journey to Venus is a worthwhile trip.\n\nThe author gives NASA as an example of the information that is provided in the passage. In paragraph 7, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus...\" The author states that NASA is working on using a device like a modern computer. The paragraph also states how there are problems with NASA's idea as well. The author gives an acurate example to help the reader picture what it would be like. This proves that the author can give evidence that supports the overall claim.\n\nOn the contray, the author gives more background information than what good could come from studying Venus. The author states all the information that desscribes the atomosphere and what the surface of Venus is like but gives very little information that concerns the reason why Venus should be explored. However, without the background information about Venus's surfaces and atmosphere it may not be understood as to why the journey to Venus is such a trouble. The author provides information that can help understand the reason that astronomers should study Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author does well at supporting the idea that the trip to Venus is worth taking. The author states information that is from reliable sources, such as NASA. This proves that the author has a well supported idea that studying Venus is a worthwhile pursuit even thorugh the dangers that are going to be faced. The author provides a wide variety of reliable information that supports his claim allowing for a strong claim. The author gave a well written essay that can appeal to all people and change their mind to see in the way of the author's claim.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Computers beginning problem many households I feel many people becoming addicted computers People like likely gain weight little social time spend much time inside In article I recently read experiment computer use Dr professor stated findings showed people addicted computers leave homes run errands When happens interferes lives well bodies bodies need sunlight Furthermore study also showed people go outside computer much tend happier study s patients started joyful stopped going computer often I like people around happy grouchy nt I noticing kids school gaining weight These kids recently started going computer couple hours time everyday This bad health body If someone sits computer day eating food worked turn fat Moreover statistics show obese people weight loss class gained extra weight sitting computer day If people treat bodies way could end type condition Last week intervied year old best friend ignoring got computer Now friend nt want hang friends In addition people become addicted computers become less social friends people like parents teachers When people push aside social time computer games chat rooms movie websites lose large portion life This stopped parents put foot set limits make kids spend time outside As clearly see computers benefits many disadvantages Addicted compuer users become less social nt go outside start pack pounds effect world full people sit computer day eating food gaining weightSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The growth of consumer products manufacturing has caused some problems to the environment. There are several reasons to this issue including the use of non-biodegradable materials in its packaging and the emissions from manufacturing process. There are some actions that can be implemented to solve this issue. \n\nThe increase in production of consumer goods that can harm the environment is caused by two factors, the using of harmful materials both in packaging and production process. Some companies have used the materials which cannot be recycled for the future used such as plastics. As more products are fabricated, more wastes are generated. Moreover, to produce their products, they still use some machines powered by fossil fuels. Carbon dioxide is produced when fossil fuels are used, and its emission can lead to pollution. \n\nThere are some potential solutions to resolve this problem. Firstly, the government should ensure that companies use eco-friendly materials for all their kits. For example, in many companies such as McDonalds and Starbucks have used the paper box and the straw which made from bamboo. Secondly, the increasing of emissions could be reduced by giving lower price to the companies to use a renewable energy in their manufacturing process. As a result, the companies would be attracted to use the safer sources to create their products.\n\nTo sum up, there are two main reasons why the environment experienced a damage from the production of goods. This problem can be tackled by forcing the company to use the biodegradable materials and giving them affordable price of the green energy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some people prefer to have friends that have identical opinions as them. Whereas, others like to have a companion that disagrees on some occasions. From a personal perspective, I believe that it is always good to have friends that differ from opinion for the sake of one's betterment.\nThe opinions of a person are indicative of one's personality. Therefore, it is justifiably to choose friends that have matching views. Having similar ideas and characters means that there is a lesser chance of conflict between them, making their friendship last much longer. Also, opinions are reflective of the interests one might have. This means that having friends with standard views can make life enjoyable, with mutual interest activities getting organized frequently.\nOn the other hand, having the same opinions does not always prove to be beneficial. People make mistakes all the time, leading to catastrophic results. One can decrease the probability of making mistakes if good friends that are sincere and not afraid of passing on their opinion are around. One might make use of their experience opinions to avoid life-altering errors.\nIn my opinion, one should always have friends that are sincere, differ in views, and are critical of one's actions. However, the difference in the views should be kept in limits to keep the friendship going.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some people claim that nothing about the past is valuable for life in the present day. From my perspective, it is not true. I disagree with this statement because people can, indeed, learn significantly from previous human behaviours and nature patterns, as it often happens in cycles, in other words, it is repeated from time to time, so it proves that one day the knowledge gained might be useful in the future. Additionally, many discoveries and pieces of research, that were made in the past, applies to the present time.\nAt first, it has been proved by many geologists that, despite the global warming, the weather follow a cycle pattern. This way, it is possible to predict the future challenges that the humankind will likely face, such as seasons of extremely low or high temperatures. Moreover, the same trend applies to the human behaviours. It is known that some situations will probably be repeated, such as wars and economic crisis, and this is considered part of humans' evolution. Therefore, knowing that many aspects will likely happen, in a similar way, in the future, proves that the knowledge about the past is relevant.\nBesides that, it is valid to state that many discoveries from earlier ages, such as the medicines and the technology advance, are vital for nowadays life. People should not take them for granted, as most of the things that the global population has achieved, once, depended on the previous researches.\nIn conclusion, individuals should, indeed, learn from the past. Firstly, because some situations can, similarly, happen again, and secondly, because it is the way to fully understand our recent achievements and our modern life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper I believe computers extremely useful tool society It helps people learn new things different cultures Also lets communicate friends family internet example using facebook Finally provides accurate research tool school projects interviews First learning different cultures helps world stay together For example learn Each class teaches us respect culture However people nt chance get land education turn internet If computer nt exist might know lifestyle mi away us We would nt know lifestyles extremely difficult luxurious Also would nt know could help For example earthquake It s one step closer world peace war conflicts Secondly computer helps communicate friends family world I remember one time I mailing family friends risking life I knew could nt come back town I started email video chat Whenever I saw face I knew everything okay I nt know I would without internet Other ways lived could Also communicating friends internet sites like extremely useful Finally use computer educational use For example research projects study tools essays Whenever research internet This extremely reliable accurate However websites fake easy great research use school projects Also I know many teachers school blog page put study links handouts case lose Whenever test coming teacher would links go help use study Also another website helps us study vocab It also many games learn vocab words As see computer helps us daily use makes positive impact society From educational purposes learning cultures socializing friends helps us get life As successful newspaper people I assume understand much computer made positive effect societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "An array of people believe that the retired community shall be supported financially by the state and some say that is not and they should be self-supported. I strongly admit that there should be a government financial scheme to support the retired crowd and both views are discussed in detail below.\n\nOn the one hand, social security is a very important factor in any country. The state should look after the children as well as the elderly population to ensure the well-being of the nation. Just take an elderly individual who devoted his whole life to the betterment of the country. He or she may be an engineer, teacher, doctor, farmer or a housewife and dedicated their own energy to developing the country for a long period. I strongly believe that dedication should be paid off financially when those are retired.Hence it is very important to establish a social security fund to look after the retired generation.\n\nOn the other hand, some public says that everyone should save plenty of money while they work, to use during the latter part of their life instead of expecting state financial support. That is individuals are expected save a certain percentage of their own earnings for themselves, instead of spending all for their families. That can also be materialised, if their earnings are sufficient enough and this could relieve the government from the burden of looking after adults. However, as all cannot afford the cost of living while saving for themselves some kind of state-owned fund is a must to look after the aged generations.\n\nTo conclude, I opine that there should be a financial package available on request for retired people to support them and enable them to live a peaceful life during the latter part of their lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Patience something need get everyday life To patience means understanding tolerant Most people much others Like brother whole lot There five kids family girls boys I going lie I annoying sometimes My little sisters brother obnoxious But older brother obnoxious one freaks little thing say But one time I dont know got This going interesting We sitting home one time big bottle patient amay would usually get fists ready So sisters brother I kept fighting missing around brother We would tell shut even smack Yet would sit like nothing wrong would usually beat siting I would usually fight fit time didnt care I serious starting get worried wasnt like So I got smacked right across face fingers sliding check leaving bb face red four finger mask patient ever since start annoying But I think point I cut thread calling nice got left wide open smack Before I knew I floor crying I ran tell dad Oh I mention I m daddys little girl I think couldve figure brother one got trouble much patience tolerant things well got cracked dad fingers least I never got trouble Thats daddys little girl comes handySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In metropolitan cities, the shortage of accommodation is getting a bigger problem for the citizens, whereas many believe that the government is the one who can tackle this calamity with their own rules. I agree with this statement, and I will fortify my views in the following paragraphs.\n\nTo begin with, in my mind, the populaces are moving to the cities for various reasons. For reasons, it could be a job or a university education. I just recently read one article, students have different opinions, many say, that admission to a university is far easier rather than finding space for living, and it is irrefutable, for instance, the article delineated that is this not a problem for one country, it is a global delinquent, and everyone is suffering with it. For example, in Ireland, finding a flat is trickier than having a seat in the institute. Humans are obliged to pay a very high amount of money to live, they feel unfair and is true. Many of them sleep in their vehicle due to a shortage of space. All over the globe, most students are in a trouble rather than anyone else. Nevertheless, international students have several disruptive than the locals.\n\n On the other hand, the administration must pay attention to resolve this matter, and I am sure they can because having the power they are more eligible to look out for this tension. In addition, many countries had a law for infrastructure and people must follow them, likewise, if they look through all the perspectives and ease some law enforcement about the residential structure then it could be possible to get this phenomenon. For example, if the population will be allowed to build multistore buildings maybe we can get a solution for living. Although to my knowledge, many nations are eager to retain this challenge by putting bunkers, it is not a permanent cure. \n\nIn conclusion, the shortage of space has created a crisis among the citizens. Government must go through this and try to change their laws about infrastructures unless in the future it will be a huge burden for all nations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph wants right next time Whats saying try every year get right impress mother In conclusion I say paragraphSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think the technology would be good for classrooms. It would help the teacher to probaly not get into a shouting match or altercations with students. It would also be good for the students know what type mood the teacher is in.\n\nThe technology could solve so many problems in the classroom. The only problem would be when to use the computer. I imagine the compucter isn't little either.So at the begining of class you probaly couldn't just use it. The technology does work though because it read Mona Lisa's face, and the painting is hundreds of years old. Us as humens make the same calculation everyday.Like in paragragh 5 I could tell if one of my friends isn't in the best mood just by how their facial expressions are. It would create less problems for the students and teachers.Like i explained in the intro it could help us students and teachers help each other out, because anybody could be having any type of day.\n\nWe could help other feel better about what's going on in their life, help others if they don't quite understand,etc. The only thing that needs to happen next is to make the technology more portable, and easier to access. Other than that lets make this happen so we evolve as a country, and as the human race.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The pie chart illustrates the percentage of Australia's population by country of birth namely: Australia, UK, New Zealand, China , Netherlands and other nations. While the table represents the percentage in where this people live in.\nOverall, Australian born comprises most of the country's population. With regards to the type of area they dwel in, most of them live in a city than the rural area.\nTo begin, Australian nationalities has the highest percentage of 73%. Followed by other nation with 14%, taking up about one fourth of the population. While UK's percentage is half the former. In addition, New Zealand, China and Nertherland has a percentage of 3%, 2% and 1% respectively.\nWith regards to the table, amongst the five, Chinese race has 99% of their people living in the city. Also, the rest has a percentage of Netherlands (90%), UK(89%), Australia (83%), and New Zealand (80%). While the remainder of the people live in the countryside, with New zealand having the most population with 20% and China being the least with 1%.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever thought what it would be like not having to pay for gas everyday? Many residents in Vauban, Germany feel that going without a car was the best desicision they have ever made . The reason why they feel that way is because of this quote \"large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, Along with a home.\" This quote is basically saying that many residents in Germany would be spending over millions of dollars for a house and most of the money would be on one parking space that they necessarily dont need. To all you fellow citizens out there thinking if i should limit my car usage or just keeping driving in a car paying for gas everyday. From my poin of view I dont everybody needs a car. Some people just buy cars just to sdhow not knowing the reasons for having a car. Car use up alot of gas and cars pollute the air really badly. \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" This quote is basically showing that many cars in Paris have been polluting the air making it hard for others to survive .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast certain obstacles foundation support nature safety challenged building docking station dirigibles The first problem architects faced docked dirigibles placing much stress building To combat problem drastic changes building would made The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation CAPS This change stated cost sixty thousand dollars Another obstacle builders faced upon constructing mooring mast nature At height wind currents violent unpredictable Despite tethered building dirigibles would spin twist around mass unsecure dangerous aspect Lastly except claims greatest reason successful safety violations mast great Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident would densely populated area downtown New York CAPS The moor provided severe risk safety people New York This problem served serious problem thus serving obstacle builders mooring mass The building s foundations nature safety violations served problems builders creating mooring massSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars can be dangerous to use for many reasons. I am against driverless cars for many reasons. The driver of the car might not be alert when they need to be, the car could cause a crash, Also it could do the wrong thing at the wrong time. Theres many more reasons but those are the main ones.\n\nWhen driving a driverless car the driver of the car must be alert at all times. If the driver feel asleep behind the wheel thinking its okay because the car drives itself something bad could happen. Some people are heavy sleepers and might not wake up if the seat just vibrate and that can cause a serious car crash. Also if someone is paying attention to something else like their phones or maybe children in the back seat something can easily happen when it is the drivers turn to drive and they aren't paying attention to the road or whats going on becuase they depend on the car to do everything.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars are dangerous is because it could cause a crash. If the car isn't alert when it's sudden road changes or if something instantly happen like a crash infront of it then thedriverles car could crash along with it. Also if its construction work and the car doesnt know about it the car might just take the wrong turn or go where its not supposed to go because it didnt know the sudden change of whats going on. Also if the driver is expecting the car to kow what to do the driver might react late to the sudden changes and the car might just drive off the road or somewhere its not supposed to be. Also if the traffic laws change and the car doesnt know it could run into another car and do something that could hurt the driver and other passengers.\n\nThe last reason driverless cars are dangerous is because it could do the wrong thing at the wrong time. Lets say something happens to the car or the cameras on it or radar gets damaged and now the car can't tell the difference between the yellow or green light. The car could easily speed up when it's time to slow down and cause a crash with another car. The driverless car also might not know whats going on when people are at stop signs. It could be the other persons right away and the car might go and cause a crash to happen.Also someone could push the brake and the car probaly thinks it should keep going to it might and cause a serious car crash.\n\nThat's the main reasons why driverless cars are dangerous. They can cause something bad to happen, Th driver of the car might not be alert when they need to be and the car could do the wrong thing at the wrong time. All these reasons could lead to a car crash which could cause the people in the car to die. Thats why I am agaisnt driverledd cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am a scientist at NASA my name is Jeff. There is a face on mars and people think its by aliens well I know its not by aliens. It is just a natural landform on mars its nothing big it wasnt made by aliens and a lot of people think its by aliens and then a lot of people agree with me also.\n\nThis face on mars is a natural landform anything can happen on a planet that we have'nt been on yet. We do not know what this planet is capble of and whats on the planet of mars. Well I think that it wasnt made by aliens becuase it gets more noticable by the years pass then it dissappers in a different year. Well Im sure our planet looks different from space in different years.\n\nWhy would aliens even want to put a face on the planet. Im sure if there was aliens on mars they would'nt be carving a face on there own planet. Im sure there living there life on mars not knowing we even exsit thats if there is aliens on there. They wouldnt what anything with us if they did I think they would have made more signs then just two dots and a straight line and they would have made the face more noticable and it dissapears after a couple of years that is probbaly of there is wind or something that might have blew away they face. We had our best people look into it and they think its a landform to they got pictures and eveidence that its just a regular landform!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on Mars was found 25 years ago by the spacecraft Viking 1 while it was snapping photos of possible landing site for ship Viking 2. While snapping its photos it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face,some people believe its a natural landform others believe it was made by aliens. Accoding to the text its a natural landfrom because the rule of thumb, the Martian is equvialent of a butte or mesa, and some skeptics say markings were hidden by a haze or it could have been because of the weather.\n\nAccording to Garvin, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size.\" also, \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on thr ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\"! In the picture of The Face on Mars if there was anything that could be making this landfrom you would be able to see it.\n\nIn paragraph 12 it explains that the Martian is equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms wich are common around the American West. If aliens were to make The Face on Mars they wouldn't know the sizes of natural landforms. Also,even though The Face on Mars, is on Mars it deosnt mean that natural Earth things can't happen there either. Garvin also states, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River PLain of Idaho,\".\n\nAccording to paragraph 8 and 7 not everyone was satisifed with the pictures that the MOC team snapped that were 10 times sharper than the original Vikings photo. When all of the web sufers were waiting for the first image of The Face on Mars it was revealed to be a natural landform with no alien monument after all. Some skeptics also say that the alien markigs were hidden by haze. On April of 1998 when the skeptics say their ideas it was cloudy at that time and on Mars it was winter.\n\nFinally The Face on Mars is a natural landscape. Even though most people may argue over what it really is or who made it, there is enough information to prove that it is a natural landform. According to Garvin, people need to use the rule of thumb, and he believes that its the size of a natural landfrom, and some people say it was covered by an alien haze or it just could have been because of the cloudy weather.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is a wonderful landmark in the region of Cydonia on the planet Mars. Some think it was created by aliens, but this is, in fact, not true. The Face on Mars is really just a regular natural formation and had nothing to do with aliens.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a landform on Mars in the Cydonia region that has shadows and ditches that represent a human face. It is very unlikely that this could have been formed by aliens. According to the passage, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or eveb small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The picture is basically the same thing as a natural land formation on Earth, like a hill or mountain. The pictures taken were at the camera's maximum resolution, so if there were alien life, we would have seen it. The ludicrous notion that aliens had created the Face was just a conspiracy theory probably caused to freak people out or make them think that there are aliens on mars.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face on Mars is a normal rock formation, similar to those on Earth. Alien life had nothing to do with the creation of this landform, even though it looks like a face. If aliens do exist, then it is still unlikely that they created the Face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think venus would be worthy to explore because we dont know what on there for all we know there could be life on venus we just need to explore it more. We only had the chance to explore it only for a few hours.\n\nOn venus there is a lot of danger do we know that yes but so is going to the moon. And did we risk going to the moon yes we do we knew it was gonna be really dangerous but we chose to do it anyway. We know its dangerous going into space but we still did that anway. So whats gonna stop us from going to venus will it be dangerouse most likely but that shouldnt stop us.\n\nIn conclusion i think we should take the risk going to venus, Who knows what will find we may find nothing or we may find a life changing event or we all might wast our time we will never unless we try to take the risk Because things in life will be dangerous. So that is what i think about going to venus.\n\nI\n\nthink when it comes to studing this planet it is worth the danger. We can find ways to make it less dangerous do you think people did things nowa dayz know it was dangerous yes and this is where we are in life now. The planet maybe very hot but none of that is gonna stop us we should push through the danger. I belive there is always something to find no matter how dangerous it is sometimes that how we learn how thigns are. venus is another planet it has so many dangerous things but it also has so many things we can learn. Like has there ever been like on the planet or is there life hiding on the planet.\n\nOut of all of this this is what i think what should happen we should take the risk we shouldnt let anything get in our way. Nothing has stopped us before going to space why should we stop now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe electoral college is in fact not best form of electing the president of the United States of America. When using the electoral college for voting for president, voters are not really voting for the president. Instead, they are voting for a slate of electors who then elect the president. Voters can't always control who their electors vote for, so it is all in the hands of the chosen electors. The electors must be trusted to pick the choice that their people want, but we all know that not everyone is as trustworthy as we would like to believe. The electors could possibly vote for the party that was not wanted in the first place, which is a problem. This brings about many possible issues for the people of our country.\n\nHaving to vote for someone who then is being trusted to vote for who you would have rather voted for yourself is a huge issue. Not only could they vote for the wrong person instead of the one that you wanted, they could potentially bring the country great danger if they vote for someone who could bring about bad things to our beloved nation. The electors could always defy the will of the people.\n\nWe could save the time wasted having to vote for someone else who has the potential to vote against who we wanted to vote for by just having a direct vote for who we wanted to vote for. Having a direct vote would give the exact opinions straight from the people of the country, and there would be less arguing and hatred for who becomes the president. The whole country would be able to voice their own opinions instead of who they believe has the same opinion as them.\n\nHaving a popular vote instead of the electoral college process is a time saver, and helps the people of the country. It allows the people to vote for who they actually want directly, instead of voting for someone to then vote for the president that they want. It would give people a greater influence to vote, knowing that their own vote actually directly affects the outcome of the presidential election. It would potentially eliminate all of the electors, saving time, money, and a vote for the next president of the United States of America.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that enterprises should implement social responsibility initiatives along with efforts to make profits. I strongly advocate this perception and will address some agreement points in further paragraphs.\r\n\r\nIn the first place, a variety of companies and their industrial emissions play an outsized role in driving global climate change as they directly cause pollution during producing process. In other words, the waste from factories, namely pharmaceutical ones contaminates airways and landfills, resulting in a myriad of environmental and health problems. For instance, if a person frequently consumes fish in polluted water bodies and breaths contaminated air, he is easily prone to cancer in later life. Therefore, entrepreneurs had better use the money they earn to make up for societal consequences which they are the main driver of. \r\n\r\nIn addition, social responsibility works as a platform for corporations to market their images. It is a matter of fact that community-oriented firms often enjoy a leg up on their competition, thanks to superior brand imaging; as a result, increase customer retention and loyalty. For example, Elon Musk has successfully attracted environmentally-minded customers with his line of cutting-edge electric cars and green automotive products. Hence, embracing socially responsible policies goes a long way toward attracting and retaining customers, which is essential to a company's long-term success.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, regarding all the above reasons, I believe that carrying out socially responsible activities is a perfect chance for businessmen to compensate for what they have done. Also, this method helps them promote positive brand recognition and gain long-term achievement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Empty streets,with eerily devoid traffic jams is an example of what happens when a city bans car usage. Cleaner air, and less stress are two of the many reasons why the idea of limiting car usage is becoming popular. Many cities are taking place in what they call a \" Car-Free Day\" in which they participate in a day without cars. Taxis and buses are permitted only, with the goal to promote alternitive transportation. Bikers covered the streets and hikers flooded the sidewalks as a result of car-free day. Violators were faced with fines of $ 25.\n\nA day without cars is considered part of an improvement to many cities. Cars cause major damage to the world around us, smog is one of the many reasons places like Paris are reducing their car usage as well. Car usage reduction has beneficial implications for the enviorment we live in. Paris is a testimony to that statement. With smog polluting the global city, Paris was forced to create a partial driving ban to clear the air. WIth France favoring diesel fuel over gasoline, Paris had more smog than other European capitals. Therefore, Paris decided to make motorists with even-numbered license plates leave their cars at home. Same with the odd-numbered license plates the following day. Reuters claim that up to 4,000 drivers were fined, and 27 car owners had their vehicle impounded due to their reactions to the fines. After the ban was implemented, the smog had cleared enough for the French ruling party to remove the ban off of odd-numbered plates the next day.\n\nCar reduced communities are finding that being less dependant on cars is helping by drastically reducing greenhouse gas emissions. Less pollution is a major goal being achieved by this concept of reduced car usage. \" It's a good oppertunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" Carlos Arturo Plaza commented as he rode his two-seat bicycle with his wife.\n\nFellow citizens it is our responsibility to stop pollution, take a stand by reducing your car usage. Ride your bike to school or work instead of driving. Walk to places near by and give your car a break. Consume less gas, stop choking your city. Make an impact today, put your car away. Global pollution is adding to the problems of our global warming today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the Facial Action Coding System is valuable. The author included many pieces of evidence to support his claim.\n\nThe author used factual evidence to support his suggestion that the technology they used is valid. For example, he compares a fake or forced smile with a real smile to compare the muscle movements between them. According to the text \"... in a fake smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" This shows how the muscle movements can actually prove that this technology can have some effectiveness using these signs.\n\nThe author also uses experts opinions to support his valability. According to the text \" To an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isnt being thruthful.\"\n\nThis shows how even experts use muscle movements as a way of telling if someone is being thruthful or not.\n\nI personally believe that this technology is creative and unique but i dont see it being very helpful to our society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars have been an issue to our community for a very long time. Car usage has been a problem to our pollution and emission. Limiting car usage would be able to help eliminate the smog that is polluting. There are beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment. May there be many ways that limiting car usage could be an advantage to us.\n\nIn Bogata, Columbia, barely any Columbians use cars as a transportation. Most people hike, bike, skate or take buses. There's such thing as a car-free day because, the whole main goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. \"\"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" (Selsky, Paragraph #24), limiting car usage would be less stressful by not having to worry so much about cars. People have been fined for causing accidents due to the smog in the air from cars in Paris. Delivery companies even lost renevue when cars were being made. New communities are becoming less dependent on cars. In Germany, areas for cars to be parked are limited, suburbs are becoming more compact and accessible to public transportation. Limiting the car usage would avoid traffic jams, accidents and even death. Cars will never really become a thing that will just disappear into thin air.\n\nIf all people did was use cars as transportation, there would be no way in getting that exercise and fresh air you're supposed to get. Due to pollution, it wouldn't be fresh air if everyone keeps driving all the time. Once in awhile, riding your bike or taking walks to places that are nearby where you're staying, would be a healthy decision. Instead of being lazy, walk to wear you're supposed to be.\n\nAdvantages in limiting car usage is endless, many reasons come to show that car usage should decrease. Car usage is causing a lot of smog in our air, traffic jams, accidents and etc. If United States had the opportunity to do the \"car-free\" day, it would show our community how much decreasing our car usage would be like. \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" (Duffer, Paragraph #10), shows to show that limiting car usage should most definitely become a thing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A new type technology was invented called Facil Action Coding System, this enables computers to identify human emotions. We have 44 major muscles in our face and by using a 3-D computer model it will help the computer better see your emotions. It's belived that by using computer codes to help see emotions can help at school. It could also help us with our personal life.\n\nPsychologist Dr. Paul Eckman creator of FACS had six major emotions. '' Movement of one or more muscels is called an ''action unit''. The six major emotions are happy,surprise,anger,disdust,fear,and sadnees. When you are feeling sad, your face muscels change and when the computer see that change they know u are feeling sad.\n\nWhen you are on the computer and your computer knows that you dont like an ad it will change to something differnt.''A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.''. This can help the teacher by helping sudents or pick up the pace so students dont get bored or confused. And most comunacation is non-verbal and by emotions.\n\nThis tecnology can also help us with our personal life as well as school. We can usually see if one of our friend is happy or sad we do this every day. So why do we need a computer to this for us. Well if we dont know the person we mught say something wrong. And with the help of tecnology we can better understand it. BY making the a little move on how you feel it can change your emotion.\n\nThe theory of emotions states that just smiling makes you happy and changes your whole mood. A drama coach says '' he had is actors reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of cresting these emotions on stage.'' Emotions have a way of changing techology helps us grow and help us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Readers Local Newspaper More people use computers everyone agrees benefits society Those support advance technology believe computers positive affect people They teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online people Others different ideas Some experts concerned people spending much time computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends I agree experts many people take computer serious always want Though users think nothing negative using computers Such increase light bill payment obesity like experts said CAPS time interacting family friends users computer cause light bill user constantly computer must cnstantly computer constantly causes light bill increase I connect I used user computer guardian would yell Ever since I brought habbit od user guardian stated light bill gas decreased Another reason user computer must decrease thier habbit obesity Obesity man women overwieght My imaginary friend user imagination He light many others never exerciszes friends constantly computer Last least CAPS begin slack interesting friends family As I stated paragraph two I used user I would nt accept invitation could nt go movies friends I would nt help around house These main three thing I would nt Then I learned abuse computer waste time I also learned responsible That s I think many In conclusion sa constantly user healthy many cause obesity Also user increased light bill wont spend time interactingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face-like structure found on mars is just a natural landform. It looks like landfroms we would find on Earth and the photograph we took in 2001 says the same thing. Consider the following reasons why this landform was not created by aliens.\n\nFirst of all, the landform looks like a mesa or butte from the American West. Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASAs Mars Exploration Program, says \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, says Garvin. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" The author of this article says, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West.\" The Face is not made by aliens. It is just a landform the happend to look like a face.\n\nSecond reason is this. The landform that looks like a face is the same as the other matian equivalent to buttes of mesas. There are other mesas on Mars it just happens that this one looks like a face. If you look at a 1976 Viking 1 photograph of the Face on Mars, you see there is another mesa or butte below the Face. This mesa or butte has no special form or image. It is just another mesa or butte. The Face is not made by aliens. It is just a natural landform the happend to look like a face.\n\nThe last reason why the Face was not made by aliens is because in 2001 NASA took a new, clear picture that shows the landform is not a face. In 1976 the Viking 1 took a photo that looked like a face. This is where the idea of aliens making the Face came into play. In 1998 a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) took a picture that did not quite look like a face but did not quite look like a nature land form either. It convinced some it was natural and some still believed that it was made by aliens. The author says, \"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001a cloudless summer day in CydoniaMars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look...What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West.\" The picture of the Face from the MGS in 2001 convinced most people that this was really a natural landform and the Face was just a coincedence.\n\nThe Face found on Mars is not made by aliens. It is a natural landform called a mesa or a butte. The picture of 1976 is misleading and out of date. The newest picture taken in 2001 shows the real, updated version. The landform is a mesa not an alien made creation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One back couple friends I beyond bored Nothing seemed fun movie get food even call sounded entertaining parents told us go something outside Before leaving house slips pantry grabs two hefty rolls wrap I think I idea walk away house I clue re walking keeps saying follow We follow pack street show Cold confused sit parking lot waiting cars gone Once cars gone informs us He tells us something cousins awhile back You three people roof scoping road four CAPS I question dumbfound look face CAPS people putting wrap across street The plan cars coming distance hop fence put wrap across street cars drive stop CAPS sounds fun uh happens stops wrap takes looking whole operation laughs little bit CAPS inconvenience driver wrapping roadways sounded lot fun black ops Everyone gets position Mark roadway secluded area bushes While posted roof giving us updates oncoming traffic We get call saying clear awhile I hang phone tell guys ground We get fence quick time start first layer wrap I get another call It s saying three cars almost location We drop wrap bush get back fence The comes close s cop Of course We stay hidden bushes cop takes huge roll wrap We left one roll enough calls s clear We go start set prank We wrap around times make tight possibly could Perfect CAPS incoming Go Go Go yells mark trying get fence We make time go prone field Laying anxiously someone whispers comes The slams s breaks driver gets He looks wrap disgust looks around kids responsible lets big hahaha roof even hear perfectly The guy walks fence looks around bit mutters foul words breath He nt even bother continuing got backed CAPS god dude hilarious I say wide grin come dashing field scared expression faces CAPS yells scurried different directions Mark I jolt fence hide play structure awhile While rest boys booking safe We eventually meet back house without getting caught authorities It s nights like laughter really plays key role big group friends like I The laughing running makes us closer group brings us togetherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think the the Face was not created by aliens because even though it looks like it has a mouth, eyes and a nose doesnt mean its a face. When the Viking 1 took the photo in 1976 it was blurry so you couldn't tell wat it was. To people that believe in life on other planets or universes they would say it was created by aliens. Some people think that because of the picture of the face they think its bona fide evidence of life on Mars. In 1998 when Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped pictures ten times sharper then the Viking 1 photos there were no face on Mars. Instead they saw a regular Mars mesa or butte that some people compare it to. Of course in 2001 when they took another picture and it looks like just a natural landform. Each of the 2001 pixel image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. People compare the landform to Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. With the new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft revealed that the the face on Mars is actually a mesa. Not a face created by aliens. With that evidence the Mars face is a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper I believe computer good society student s studies online We spend time family friends want little bit time We learn much computer lot facts After reading essay I hope agree position student s put notes laptop study class computer need look something history class internet High nt like going library go internet source So student project due teacher wants neat computer write project neatly The computerinternet became big source learning society nt agree Our time time spent families friends came Go outside play sit play games Our families little bit time computer wo nt hurt nobody We nt forever friends search something useful talked families go online searching could nt fire People countries see enough visit wan na country need resource date A computer constantly updated new fact s everything I hope reading agree position Mostly every person computer effect lives lot A computer great resource public People wan na meet new people use computer student s want great grade project wan na present nicely I believe agreeing good choiceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you honestly think that from reading the article \" Unmasking the Face on Mars\" and from reading theories and looking at pictures of the face that it is a real face? Honestly people it is a natural landfrom. If you look at the three pictures taken in the years 1976,1998, and 2001 you see that it is very blurry at first, but then throughout the years you get a better look at it. As the years go on the \"face\" loses its shape and doesn't look much like a face anymore. The landform is cracking and it looks from the sky like a mound.\n\nMy first reason I think that the face is just a landform is that the way it is indented, it could be a mountain or a tall hill. If so, then you could see how between the years 1998 and 2001 the face could have had an avalanch or a simailiar situation happen to it. Cracks form and it looks like by 2001 the left side of the face has a huge indentation in it. If you look closely in the 2001 image taken from the spaceship \"Viking 1\"\n\nif you look at the outline of the face's shape, you will see how it kind of slants up like a slide. That is reason to beleive that the Face could be a hill, or a mountain or even a small or large mound.\n\nOkay so econdly, do you believe in god? If you do then did you ever think that since god created everything, that he might have created this so we could study off of it and learn scientific facts. He could have put it there so we can study it and learn and eduacationally grow smarter with this. Another scenario is he put it there so people who want to be scientists or astronauts, that they could see this out in space and have a deeper curiosity for the thin they love and are interested in, whether that is space, or landforms or astrophysics. You never know it could happen.\n\nI can see how you might think that this face structure is not a natural landform. You never know it could be a mound put there covering dead bodies. I know it sounds gross, but think if there is or was another species out there living on mars. Aliens or extra terrestrial creatures could have buried important objects or heirlooms to them there or have buried family or other creatures who have passed on there. You never know, but I can see why you might think that the face is not a natural landform. If I think about it too much my curiosity is kind of wanting to believe all of the unknown stuff such as history or mysteries unknown and veiled by this \"face\" object.\n\nIt could be a landform of mysterious identity. It could be a mound of buried treasure or bodies. We may never know. As it says in the passage,\" An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the red planet called Cydonia\" [1] This face object may just be there to arise our curiosity. But one thing is for sure. This face in the region of Cydonia on the red planet of Mars is a mystery for sure. Buit I can agree with what you might think for in this situation, the possibilties and scenarios are endless.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both posotive and negative aspects of driverless cars. I am personally against driverless cars. One reason that I am against driverless cars is that drivers could get distracted and not pay attention to the road. Secondly, what if there is an accident who is to take the blame the driver or the manufactioner. Also there are many saftey concerns with driverless cars.\n\nFirstly, driverless cars can cause drivers to get distracted. One way they can cause drivers to become distracted is that drivers could think that because the car is driving by its self that they do not have to pay attention to the road, when they shouuld be. Secondly, driverless cars may cause drivers to be more tempted text while driving. Although, the cars come with built in saftey alerts what if the driver does not notice them. In the article paragraph eight states \"the psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge,\" admits Dr. Wener Huber, a BMW project manager driver\" , it also says that they would have to find away to keep drivers focused and make driving fun.\n\nSecondly, what would happen if there where to be an accident in\n\na driverless car and someone where to be injured. Who would take the blame? The driver or the manufactioner of the car.\n\nWould you want to take that risk. In paragraph nine it says that \"new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\n\nFinally, what about all of the saftey concerns that come with driverless cars. With all of this extra technology being put into the car you will have to wonder if there will still be room for all of the standard safter requirements. Also what is to happen if one of the sensors controling the car fails and does not alert the driver in time to move out of the way of a possible accident. In paragraph four it states that the driverless car can \"mimic\" the skills of a human at the wheel, however the human response time could be faster and more effective than that of a machine. Some people may even use driverless cars as a reason to drive or get behind the wheel while they are under the influince of drugs or alchol, which can be a majopr concern to yhemselves and other drivers on the road.\n\nIn conclusion although driverless cars maybe an amazing thing to imagine or dream about I do not think that is the way we should head for thr future. Driverless cars may cause drivers to become distracted behind the wheel. Also, who is toi take the blame if there is an accident in a driverless car. People may become to reliable and dependent on the car to drive them that they will not be prepared to stop an accident from happening. Finally driverless cars could be a huge saftey concern to drivers. Driverless cars may also help to be an excuse for people to drive under the influence, text, or even sleep while behind the wheel. I am against driverless cars and think that they should not be a main source of traansportation in years to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People are lining up, waiting for hours on end to vote for a new president of the United States. That president won every single person's vote, but did not become presient. He did not become president because the ellectoral college voted for the other person. That is unfair because no matter what the citizens say, they are not even completly sure that the president they voted for was going to win. For example, in the year 2000, a little bit after Al Gore, they won the popular vote, but they did not win the presidency because they did not win the electoral vote, according to Source 2. Citizens of the United States should be allowed to a direct vote because in 2000, 60 percent of voters voted that they prefer a direct election, and because the voters are not voting for the president, they are voting for a slate of electors.\n\nTo begin, according to source 2, \"If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you would vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won statewide election, they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 electoral votes.\" This quote from Source 2 is explaining what your vote couts for when you go to elect for a president. Those electors are anyoen who doesn not own a public office. Who elects the electors is the state.\n\nIn addition, this year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency and yet, the electoral college still has its defenders, states in source 2.\n\nAll in all, the electoral college is unfair to voters, because the winner takes it all system does not work in every state.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire Building faced obstacles attempting allow derigibles dock The architects realized could put mooring mast top building without modifying strengthening steel frame building The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would add much weight framework could cause collapse They strengthened framework bottom building top putting shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower top building The builders faced obstacles successful completing goal The mooring mast used docking station still looked final peice makes Empire State Building stand buildings downtown New York CitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The given map depicts the existing and proposed layout of a house’s ground floor, and some changes in design took place. Overall, there were a number of proposed notable changes to this area.\nOn the whole, some new furniture was added, while some existing layouts were removed or renovated in the proposed floor plan.\nThe most prominent change is the new, bigger stairs in the north of the ground floor replacing the existing hall, smaller stairs and the storage under the stairs. In addition, new furniture was added, and the empty field on the west side of the floor and the kitchen was filled with kitchen furniture.\nThere were also some extensive renovations to the internal doors and walls. First, the existing internal doors placed face to face in the north of the ground floor are planned to be moved next to the entrance, replacing a part of the existing internal wall on the west side. Second, the eastern internal wall is proposed to be demolished, and there will be no longer a block between the new stairs and the living room.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's market, many corporations emphasize their use of recent technologies and methods to produce innovative goods. While the efficiency of these new products may not always be absolute, this essay contends that they generally prove more effective than older counterparts, a trend driven by both consumer preferences and societal benefits.\r\n\r\nTo begin, consumers inherently gravitate towards new products, believing them to offer superior results compared to outdated alternatives. For instance, the recent launch of Versace's Sunscreen in January 2024 exemplifies this trend. Marketed as not only harmless but also capable of protecting the skin against harmful sun emissions, this product likely incorporates the latest advancements in technology and production methods.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the relentless pursuit of innovation by businesses deserves commendation, particularly when aimed at societal advancement rather than solely economic gains. Pharmaceutical companies worldwide are actively exploring new methods to develop more effective treatments for debilitating illnesses like cancer and osteoporosis. The commitment of these companies to leveraging innovation for enhanced efficiency in treating various ailments is both admirable and beneficial to society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the prevalence of deceptive advertisements may pose challenges, the overall trend suggests that humanity stands to benefit from the continued advancement of new products. By prioritizing innovation and societal well-being, businesses can contribute to a future where the adoption of novel technologies and methods leads to tangible improvements in our livesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the cars of the future. Humans are getting lazier and lazier and we need technology to fulfill our needs. Driverless cars are the perfect solution to our laziness. They are safer and more reliable than regular cars. Regular cars pose a threat to our safety. Regular cars have to be driven by drivers who aren't always paying attention to their surroundings.\n\nDriverless cars may sometimes need to be driven by a user in certain situations. In the event of road work or an accident, the driver must take over the wheel and steer around the hazard. Companies are working on new technology so that cars become completley driverless. Companies are trying to put car-entertainment systems in vehicles so the driver is entertained.\n\nIn a few years, there will be driverless cars. There is no doubt about that. It is just a metter of when, and how they will come about. I am all for driverless cars. They are the future of automobiles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Books movies magazines music offensive way aloud showed public If offensive things aloud showed I personally think would help country full racist people documents Everytime pick magazine watch television show famous actress musician see embarrassing aspects lives world This right People shown respect allowed privacy life If nt actress musicians would nt television shows watch There would use radio s There would reason would nobody sing songs us Why would want embarrass guys anyways They work tails produce new things us Books libraries sexual assualts Books like school libraries reason Why would want child read something like book school Expecially foul language materials school Books library good examples vaulgar sayings This disgrace school Movies big concern Any child young adult could go movie section get type movie even rated restricted Would want child brining home movie nudity film I remember one time little sister brought home movie local library This movie total disgrace library nudity foul language lots violence I could nt believe I saw My library would something like library Children go pick movies My mother went made complaint restricted movies children films She said movies seprate rest You certain age rent movie Or atleast parents permission Every local library school library taking action community Lets keep children young adults away violence By allowing school libraries local libraries saying s ok letting violence We put stop prevote good attitudes So please take violence shelfSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is true that growing business and cultural contacts are part of the modern process of globalisation. While some people mourn the loss of national identity which they believe occurs as a result of this process, I disagree with that view on the basis that it is important to embrace change and accept new realities. \nThe expansion of business and cultural exchanges across the world is a positive feature of contemporary life. Companies have broken into new markets by doing market research and taking into consideration local differences in consumer demands and preferences. They introduce new products without dismissing traditional ideas. The appearance, for example, of McDonald’s fast food outlets in Malaysia, China or Vietnam is not incompatible with the success of restaurants serving time-honoured cuisine. Such innovations do not necessarily mark the disappearance of traditional ways of life and to accept new customs is to extend choice for every consumer. \nThus, it is an exaggeration to maintain that these developments will lead to the loss of a strong sense of identity in countries. For example, people in many former colonial nations have embraced change, but they still proudly preserve traditional cultural traits. In India, English - the language of the former colonial power - is widely spoken, but this has not led to the disappearance of local languages or indigenous cultural practices. Therefore, joining modern culture does not always mean that national or local customs have to be abandoned. On the contrary, enforced isolation from trade and cultural contacts with other countries will have the inevitable consequence of withdrawal from all the changes taking place globally. \nIn conclusion, I would argue that the growth of contacts in commerce and culture is a positive development which will not destroy national identities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Beep.. Beep.. Beep... That is the sound of someone's heart monitor at a hospital. can you imagine waking up in the hospital after a car wreck. Well it's happened plenty of times, but the accident was never caused by a driverless car. What about the new laws they will have to make for these new cars? These cars will never happen, and if they do they will cause many accidents in the future.\n\nIn the article I had just read it says \"Even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" Say you were to get in a wreck while driving a driverless car, and the car wouldn't use its break so you went through a stop sign and hit another car and someone was killed in the accident. Who's fault is it? Is it your fault for hitting the other car, or is it the manufactures fault for not safely making your vehicle?\n\nDriverless cars are not safe and never will be. Technology always has a glitch somewhere. In the article Driverless Cars are Coming, the talk about sensors in paragraphs four to seven. \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This was said in paragraph seven of the article. But why would they make these driverless cars if they can only reach 25 mph.? Most people would want a driverless car for interstates and highways, because those are the most boring roads in history.\n\nDriverless cars are not safe, they can cause many accidents and who's at fault, you or the manufacturer? Companies just need to stop trying to make driverless cars because they aren't going to be sucessful for society today. Cars need to be human driven and that's all. No driverless cars are coming, not now not ever!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The driveless cars are a good development because it could fundamentally change our world. The driveless cars would stop the driver from getting tired of driving around because the car drives itself. Also the positive turn of this is that the driver can take a break and admire their sorroundings. Including, the driveless car let's the driver take control whenever the driver wants. Another good thing about this car is that it lets the driver know what's ahead of the road for them so that they are aware of what's going on.\n\nThe driveless car lets the driver know when they have to take over by flashing lights in the windshield, driver's seat vibrating, sensors to make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel, or like Google's cars that tell you when so. Also, the driveless cars are in someway safer because drivers tend to fall asleep or let their minds wonder of, so by having the driveless car your making it safer for those around and even the people in the car.The driveless car is a good benifit to have because it's safe and it's an advantage for drivers. It's also a good for those who hate traveling in cars making it a new and exciting experience.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.The author supports his idea in good ways.One example the author is to use solar power on Venus stateing,\"Solar power would be pletiful,and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.Not easy conditions,but survivable for humans.\"Another example stated in the article,\"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines ot last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\"The final example stated in the article states,\"By comparison,systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat and other forces.\n\nThe first examples shows the reader that it wouldn't be hard for people to be able to gain energy on Venus becasue we could use the sunlight as energy.The first example also shows that it wouldn't be impossible to live on Venus even though it is 170 degrees it is still survivable to people to live on.The second example shows the reader that researchers are working on machines that would be able to give researchers knowledge on Venus that could better their understanding.The final example is to show how the old computers that were made of gears and levers were much stronger than that of todays computers.The author states that,\"Modern computers are enormously powerful,flexible,and quick,but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions.\"With this the author shows their point on why the modern computers would be less useful then the computers made of gears and levers.\n\nFrom using solar power to gain energy,to creating machines that could stand the harshness of Venus,and from using computers that are made of gears and levers the author supports thier idea of studying Venus very well.The solar power would be pletifula and the living conditions would be survivable.The researchers are working on machines to last long to contribute meaningfully knowledge for Venus.The sytems that use mechanical parts would be more reistant then that of modern electronics.In the end the author shows how important and unimpossible it is to study Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Now a days, people having varieties of opinion like in order to get a good carrier in future either should go to work on early stage of life or having a masters in subjects. Presently, more than 80% of world population parents supporting their children to have a degree in reputed colleges. Here, in upcoming paragraphs explained how much education plays a role in carrier growth.\n\nIn todays life, every children creates a target while studying in school. During childhood itself will find a path for successful growth. So, parents were taking action to be graduate in top colleges. Because, most of private companies seeking employee who have atleats minimum graduation in particular field. For example, in construction field the supervisor will take individual who gave degree on civil engineering. According to level of education, company will pay the salary. In public sector, if we want to write exam atleast required any degree to apply for examination. Hence, education which plays important role to get dream job.\n\nIn case of person who works at early stage without any college degree will be knowing more about the job. While comparing to educated people they might know more about work life how to handle circumstances but when it comes to high paying companies along with experience education will matters more. Hence to certain extent growth might be stabilised as straight line. Currently, students choosing authorised colleges or moving abroad for study inorder to get high payment in MNC companies. Hence, it is important to study in colleges to make a bright future.\n\nIn conclusion, I would like to provide my opinion as to have a successful carrier children should choose colleges not only for getting degree certificates but also fo build up a behavioural attitude and good communication skill across the people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The development of these cars have both many posituve and nevative things to them. They can really help the future in ways that kigjt nkt be possible at this time. In my opinion i tyink that these cars would be a bad idea, because there are mire bad thungs that could happen than good things.\n\nSome people might just say they are good for the future without knowing the consequences for any possible accidents.\n\nOne reason why these cars would not be good woukd be if there is an old person that can not drive they could consider one of these cars. The problem is that if it is time for the driver to take over the car and if the driver does not know how to drive, this would lead to a problem. Accidents could occur if non drivers are in the car. It could lead to a critical stage of punishment in case you are in a fatal crash or get stopped by the police.\n\nMy other argument is that these cars could potentially stop working if they do not have proper items for this car.\n\nMost people arent going to have the right things for this car, if they crash the car might not function the same and proper way of how its supposed to work. This car could break down for no reason.\n\nI feel like these cars would be more helpful in some way but you also need to look at the negative things of this. Every positive thing always has a negative thing also.\n\nThere are going to be consequences if the car is not used right. It might not be affordable for most people either.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus, somethimes called the \"evening Star\", is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky. Sounds beautiful right ? It's nickname is misleading or mistaken since Venus is actually a planet and not a star. Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus has been proving to be a very challenging place to examine but we still making the effort to do so. The real question is, is it really worth it to study Venus?\n\nIs it worth it to study Venus? I think it is, Venus is a ideal planet to study even it's name is worth it. Venus is often referred to as \" Earth's twin \" since Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. \"Venus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that blankets it and what's even more challenging are the clouds of high corrosive sulfuric acid.\" This shows that Venus is difficult/handful to study but it's a beautiful planet to explore. This shows that Venus has the challenges, difficulities and the obstacles but scientist thrive to make a challenge to study it. On the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we exprience on our own planet.\n\nFurthur more, Venus's conditions are far more extreme than anything humans have encounter on Earth. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. That's insane. \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes\" This shows that Venus has the same characteristics that Earth would too and that they act like the same. We have earthquakes, volcanoes and lighting as well as tornados and tsunamys. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. This shows that Venus is exactly like Earth with valleys, mountains, and other characteristics. Which is fascinating to discover.\n\nAdditionally, \" Astronomers are to fascinated by Venus because it once been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. Venus was once like Earth covered with oceans and could have supported various forms of life \". This shows that scientists and astronomers were fascinated with Venus because it was like Earth's twin it had what Earth has and it acts like Earth. It also shows what it was a long time ago and what it has till this day. The NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. \" Most importantly, researchers cannot take a sample of a rock, gas, or anything else\". This shows that they seek to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus. They got to find different ways to find out the studies of Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, I still think its worthy to study Venus because it's facinating to see it's like Earth's twin. It's been proven it's a challenging place to study and scientist still choose to study it, although Venus is called the \"Evening Star\" its a planet and not a star it's still fascinating to explore and discover new potential things it has to offer. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited on doubts but should be expanded to meet the edges of imagination and innvations. Wrapping all my evidence I still think it's worth it to study Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests hat studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and supprts this idea carfully by giving clear evidence in the text. He goes on to describe the likelyhood of the past on Venus, the conditions in which sutdying the planet would take place, and how studying the planet may benifit the human race.\n\nTo begin with, the author makes a valid point by starting off with an explaination of the likely hood of Venus's features being closely related to those of Earth. The author goes on to tell the reader about the crucial consideration of visiting Venus. In the artical, it clearly states that \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solr system.\" (Paragraph 4.) And goes on to tell, in detail, how \"Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" Giving clear examples of the likely hood that life could have very well been on Venus.\n\nFurthurmore, the author also claims that the conditions Venus demonstrates, while studying its features and possible living conditions, could very well be possible given the right equiptment and procedure. The artical claims that Venus can, very well, be studied, and that \"Many reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningful to our knowledge of Venus.\" (Paragraph 6.) Given this example, it seems as though the author has a very well thought out point.\n\nIn addition, the author goes on to explain how benifitial studying Venus can be for the human population, and for the sake of science and curiosity in itself. For example, in paragraph 8, the author states \"Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" In other words, this tells us that we can and will gain from the planet, and possibly grow knowledge wise of the unknown mysteries on Venus.\n\nTo wrap things up, the author states clearly the facts on how dangerous studying and taking in information on Venus could truely be through-out the artical, but also gives valid points on the subject to support to his idea that \"studying Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers it presents.\" Including how it benifits, and the likely hood that the past could become a mere future depending on technology and the studys that can be found. The author makes very clear and considerable points in his argument.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driveless cars are a bad idea. Driveless cars can be unhealthy many ways.\n\nIf you have a driveless car that means that you won't ever have to leave your house. So all you'll be doing is staying at home raising the obesity rates by not getting out of the house and walking around the grocery store or going to get the gym to excerise because you have a reason to be lazy. These driveless cars give people a reason to be lazy and to just stay at home. It's also very unhealthy for your mind. Your basically going to isolate yourself from the outside and will aviod interacting with people. I dont think we need driveless cars. People need to have a reason to get out of the house but with a driveless car all you gotta do is stay home and just be lazy. Driveless cars are\n\nbad idea if were trying to lower the obeisty rates. More and more people will just be getting fatter if they dont have to put an effort out to get out and more people will just be living off the govnerment. I will never be a supporter of driveless cars. I might be a supporter of driveless cars where you still have to be in the car. I mean now a days you can order your grocery's off line, so all you'd have to do is use your credit card online and send your driveless car to the grocery store to pick up your groceries. I dont't ever think we need a car where you dont have to be in it for it to leave.\n\nI think if we have driveless cars we should have the ones where you have to be in the car for it to drive even if your not steering or oushing the pedal. And whats the point of having a driveless car?! If you have to go somewhere then you will have to be in the car no matter what!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Advantages of limiting car usage is less car polliution from the gases released from the car and also better health from using other ways to get around such as walking or riding a bike as a form of excerise.\n\nTo begin with limiting car usage opens up other new options If you don't depend on a car so much. More money In your pocket because you not paying for gas nor keep the car maintance up no more.\n\nThe more you drive the more you polluting your air from the chemicals from the tail pipe of your vehicle hiking , biking , or skating are easy simple excerise you can you for transpertation. You'll know your environment better from exploring It these methods are better for the earth.\n\nIn some cities such as New York they've started a bike sharing program and Its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs across the nation.\n\nAs of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was In January 1995. All these charges, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit.\n\nTeens of this generation Is starting to organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car pool with friends. People all around the world are starting to realize the benefits of reducing car usage and taking contol of the situation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir PERSON Home The Blueprints Our Lives writen mood created author grateful The mood grateful thankful throughout memoir grateful parents They showed nt bloodrelated family Caring always loving important He also lot respect parents They moved better life better theres also others alwaysed welcamed friends family even people need help home made feel welcomed loved Thankful grateful respected mood memior feltSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on mars is a natrual landform.It is a natrual landform because in 1976 Viking 1 took a photo of marses surface.It showed what it apeard to be a face.In April 5 1998 we sent globol surveyor to orbit over the spot.The picture it took was 10 timessharper than vikings photos.When the picture came up on our website it showed that it was only just a natural landform.\n\nIt was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude.It was april 98 on mars.It was a cloudy time on the planet.We had to see through the clouds to see the face.Mr garvin says its not easy to target the face.It was actually hard work.The surveyor is a mapping spacecraft.It normally looks straight down to the ground.It scands the planet for information about things.It scans it like a fax machine,In narrow 2.5 km-wide strips.\n\nIn April 8 2001, a cloudless day on mars,Global surveyor went close enough to take another picture for us.We used it maximum resolution.Each pixiel in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters,compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best Viking photo.The face on mars actually shows is the matian equivalent of a butte or mesa, landforms common around the American west.Mr garvin says it reminds him of the Middle Butte in the Snake River in the Plain of Idaho.Its a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear glad see debate computers good bad human society Well I would like state opinion good In letter going tell bad stuff computer good society Well I dont think computer good society dont workout much use I say fact I use workout computer games came I spent hours day playing I time spend family I outside commaction like topic life Plus I know lot people feel way The computer like addiction I say hit power button cant get All commution website hard get starting put games wont log fast THe different website play video things funny Like find click things look thing else Dont get wrong see talk family members dont see dont ime go park fun enjoy nature like looked I dont think get rede computers spend least tine know I know people going upset waht I say society addicted computer Every look theres computer I going leave one would pick computers lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter huge part life fact wanted see grandfather final days I remember five years old loved draw nt matter long fun My grandpa would give helpful tips shading texture image One favorite things see smile face I figured use techniques We would always good time together artist painted pictures house along restaurants I spent childhood grandparents lived I ca nt remember last time lanes bowling alley remember first time It grandparents much young kid like Another time years back grandpa went heat coffee microwave instead putting coffee found potatoes He instantly made hash browns good laugh There lot wish got grandparents like go fishing even camping Yet lot grandpa also painted boy scouts derby wooden race car When ever race competition boats cars planes one paint He would come every race see odd reason got place time My grandparents also collie dog named named young He I grew like buddies together grandpa I would always go walks together My grandpas favorite thing dog train He s obedient dog I ve ever seen would go mail man get mail bring back opened closed doors rope would even get grandmas slippers bedroom When lived everyday school would picked grandparents go house wait picked mom old enough alone Grandma would always help math homework cook dinner afterwords grandpa would help drawing turn favorite show When young would go house morning grandpa would recorded favorite show CAPS Every morning routine breakfast Later life I became independent nt go house often I used something I cant take back A home videos I ve looked recently reminded good time grandpa recording chase dog around kitchen table stubbed toe Apparently humorous family laughing hysterics Another time I younger grandpa barber shop owner cut hair years house one time nt know mullet knew hair style I pleaded pleaded finally gave gave mullet hair cut astonished looked like immediately hated The last I spent grandpa I bought lot s presents family Thanks job eastern part state able get heating blanket covered whole bed couple movies favorite chocolates I honestly say happiest I saw long time made happy When day reflect everything gone notice best times laugh awaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Being patient hard sometimes easy others Like example I always get really early morning lay couch Same brother We get round turn tree Then eyes light get loose presents get open First lay couch stare trying figure got Then find another chair stare different angle We end upon couch We get yelled twice go back bed But use never Then start getting gosy We go bedrooms try find something keep minds never works raither Then go back couch About go kitchen make coffee mom dad say always need coffee open presents go wake When finally crawl bed rush drink coffee see got Finally min later finish let us open presents It took long pays endSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "No one doubts that school learning plays a significant role in people’s life. People who receive better education and behave themselves properly in society are highly appreciated and recognized. Some people argue that schools should be responsible not only for the decent behaviors of children but also for providing academic study. In the following paragraphs I will discuss this statement from my perspective.\n\n \n\nThere is some truth in the above statement. Academic organizations are places where kids are taught useful and valuable knowledge, in the meantime, how to behave properly is also one important part of their duties. However, their main task is to give formal schooling and develop children’s academic capability, because they have the most decent amount of resources to achieve this goal. For instance, professionally trained teachers and libraries with thousand copies of academic reference books enable them to become ideal providers of various knowledge. If they spend too much time on teaching students how to behave in their everyday lives, it will be impossible for it to fulfil the educational function as a whole, to make it worse, their valuable resources will be wasted.\n\n \n\nFamily plays a significant role in people’s lives. That is the very first step in the cultivation of a person’s moral standard and social behavior. Parents are the first teachers of their offspring.The reason is quite obvious that kids spend at least five to six years at home with their parents or caregivers before they go for formal learning in schools. Therefore, parents shall set good examples and teach some social rules and moral criteria in order to get their boys and girls ready for the studying environment.\n\n \n\nIn conclusion, schools shall put more emphasis on imparting academic knowledge instead of teaching kids how to behave properly during their growing into adults.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. There are many ways that this can and cannot work. It would be great to have the students potentially have the best classroom experience possible, but that is not always the case. The system is a great idea, but it may not work for everyone. After all, it is technology, so it is not guaranteed to work one hundred percent of the time.\n\nMany things can go wrong with the FACS. Not everyone has the same shape of face or the same shape of muscle in their face, so can it really tell the exact emotions of everybody? Computers are great things in our world, but they do not always work the way you would want them to. This software would most likely have bugs and glitches for a while before they even come close to perfecting it. Many things can go wrong.\n\nThe article states that humans perform these \"calculations\" everyday. Why do we need a computer to calculate our emotions when students can go to a classroom and have an actual human teacher? The article provides much great and helpful information and pros to this software. Logically thinking, people can come to the conclusion that they do not need a computer software such as the FACS to cope with their emotions. The FACS may be valuable to very few people.\n\nThe FACS is just showing how people are not developing the social skills they should have. In the article, Dr. Huand states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". Students should just go to class and have a real human teacher so they can ask them for help if they are confused or bored. Computers should not have human qualities that sounds ridiculous. Dr. Huang also never mentioned what the FACS would cost either, it could be hurting peoples' pocketbooks.\n\nThe use of the FACS to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. As stated earlier in the essay this is what real humans are for. This is also coming from a high school student who does not take online classes. This software would not be much help to the students who go into school everyday and see real life teachers and not computers. Dr. Huang could have mentioned much more in this article, he focuses on all of the pros of the software but none of the cons. The article is quite biased and its purpose is to hype students up for a cool new software.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While humans have been attempting to explore space for centruies, they often run into many problems and sometimes lose hope for scientific discoveries. Many of these explorations have been a topic for discussion due to all of the risks an astronaut could endure within their flight. As the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" tries to fully dicuss the worthiness of exploring Venus despite its dangerous setbacks, the author does not achieve this message by primarily focusing on the dangers of Venus and how other space exploring programs are improving technology for this exploration.\n\nThe author of this article primarily focuses on the atmospherical and environmental dangers Venus has that makes exploring this planet challenging. As the author was giving back ground information about Venus being Earth's \"'twin'\", he discusses that, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus’s atmosphere\" (3). As this information was given, it provided insight into what the dangers of Venus are, but sadly the author stays concentrated on the challenges exploring this planet than the reasons why we should explore. However, knowing background information is important to understanding why scientists have not been completely success exploring Venus, the author was trying to convey to the readers that despite the dangers, scientists should study Venus. When trying to convey a message like this, the author needs to primatily focus on why a scientist should explore Venus and not just the challenges of the atmospherical pressure, atmosphere, the rock sediments, and the volcanoes.\n\nMoreover, the author does include a highly trusted organization, the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA), to add details to his argument, but the details provided only include how scientists are making technology to explore Venus. The author does not include any information as to why these scientists are trying to explore Venus, but states that, \"NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\" (5). This statement that has come from NASA does give readers an insight into how explorers and scientists are going to study Venus, but he still does not provide information as to why we need to explore Venus. While the author does stay focused on the topic of how scientist should dodge the dangers of Venus and continue to explore with his uses of statistics and this statement from NASA, he does not include reasons as to why it would be worthy to overcome all of these challenges of a planet that is basically inhospitable.\n\nThe author of this article does not achieve his goal of persuading his audience that Venus is a worthy exploration despite the dangers and setbacks of technology because he primarily stays focused on why Venus is so dangerous and how scientists are improving technology to survive these trecharous elements. While the author could have added and taken out some information to better his argument, he clearly decided to stay focused on the dangers of Venus. To better this argument that Venus is worthy of exploration despite the setbacks, he should have included why scientists are so eager to explore Venus and how it would benifit our world today.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author Narciso Rodriguez memoirs proud parents happy lived us Alegria graced kitchen table often The author happy remembering memories unhappy unpleasant It s romantic lonely sad s happy funfilled friendly fulfilled I never forget parents turned simple house home Narciso appreciative parents moving could better life education expresses gratitude toward lot I always grateful parents love sacrifice writes told courageous thing ever could done admiration perseverance strength really love appreciate parents everything main theme memoir The mood created Narciso Rodriguez proud admiring parents happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The bar charts illustrate five different methods of how the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the UK deal with waste products. The five methods are recycling, underground, incineration, chemical treatment, and dumping at sea.\noverall, recycling is way more in Korea while underground dumping took first place in both Sweden and the UK.\nFirst, Morethan two third of the waste is recycled in Korea while incineration is more than half in Sweden. Korea dumps 22% under the ground and incinerated less than 10%. Sweden, on the other hand, recycled a quarter of its waste but incinerated a fifth of the garbage.\nSecond, the UK dumps most of its waste under the ground incinerating only 2%. Chemical treatment and dumping at sea both share 8% of the UK's waste product.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Advertising plays a crucial role in marketing products and services and becomes increasingly prevalent in our daily life. Personally, I believe that advertisements bring about both positive and negative impacts.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there exist several benefits of advertising. Firstly, advertising can provide potential customers with information about products and services, which helps increase sales for businesses. At the same time, customers are informed about newly-launched products. Hence, they would have more options in selecting the best as well as the most suitable items, raising comforts and living standards among consumers. Another plus point is that advertising generates a wide range of job opportunities in different sectors. Artists, painters and copywriters exemplify those who contribute their talents and creativity in designing logos and preparing content for commercials.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, some shortcomings of advertising should not be overlooked. Enterprises usually exaggerate the quality of their devices in the hope that they can boost sales. This can result in confusion among customers when it comes to opting for production. Furthermore, as companies pour a huge amount of money into promoting their equipment, they need to raise the prices to ensure their profits. After all, those who must pay higher costs are none other than consumers. Finally, commercials encourage people to purchase more items that they do not actually need, resulting in a waste of money and an increase in the number of unused output discharged into the environment.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, based on the aforementioned explanations, it seems to me that there are both positive outcomes and drawbacks as advertisements gain in popularity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear editor I think computers good thing house They re helpful entertaining For example make easier keep touch far away friends family help learn things know important news also entertaining people ages This computers one valuable things home One many things computer help keeping touch family members friends live far away Computers serve purpose someone use facebook twitter skype using one I love facebook I keep touch family members says Also researchers say people facebook skype twitter accounts become closer families people nt A computer used educational purposes also Many people like use educational computer games prepare elementary schoolers school CAPS s fun gets son prepared says local mother talks computer game Studies show computer games better preparing child school textbooks worksheets One everyone s favorite reasons keeping computer house entertainment When computer anyone play cards chess pinball game websites like addictinggamescom go youtubecom watch videos much much I like spend free time addictinggamescom says Also taking poll I found kids teens prefer online games board games As see many reasons computer house important There also many I listed However I think main ones keep touch friends family use computer educational purposes entertainment I m grateful computer house I use everyday purposes everyone else family A computer one important things average homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Opinion I nt think removed books tell back Movies tell rated It mom s dad s fault They one allow us read watch listen even play nt want us learn shouldt even get us reason get us kids spollied want every little thing world parants buying make happy The parants ones blame The kids blame They ones want go rated movies get rated video games offensive language kids also say offensive language suspect know means The kids heard bad word go parants say what word mean It happen I said words parants When I fist read heard watched told parants means I got hit saying word I thought self want hear I mad ever said word I wished I go back time never say parants I nt know I kept saying could nt get head I got trouble saying I heard stupid word wished never heard I heard many times I could nt get head like knew ment I knew nt know said randomly I preaty sure nt tell parants one told parants got hit still woundering ment still red mark face thinking wrong deserve I found ment never said long time till someone got mad started say Now two opinions still stands blame parants kids take stuff offensive us kids learn bad words The choose mine beacuse mine would blame kids nt take stuff offensive language lot us nt find offensive us others Just consider what decide people matterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "She saying start new leaf spring comes around going start new leaf going better driving test I think concluded paragraph shows Saeng quiter going try harderSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of cars around the world are having an impact on the envoirnment today. Being able to limit the use of cars would be benifical to your wellbeing and the enviornment.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany there is a suburb that doesn't have any cars. People are allowed to own cars but there are only two places to park, which are the two large garages at the edge of the development. Also the owner must pay $40,000 for a space, along with a home. The majority of the residents do not own cars and say they are happier this way. This community is an example that is trending throughout Europe, and is trying to kick start a movement called \"smart planning\". \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\"(Rosenthal 5). The air is becoming very polluted and there are efforts being made to try and fix the issue.\n\nIn Paris, there was a day of near-record pollution. They decided to enforce a law banning certain cars on certain days to try and help clear the air. On Modays, people with even-numbered licence plates had to leave there cars at home or pay a fine of 22-euro or $31. About 4,000 people were fined that day. The congestion was down 60% in paris as well, and the smo cleared up enough monday for the French to decide on the banning of odd-numbered plates on Tuesday also.\n\nAslo in Bogota, Colombia there is a day without cars. There goal is to promotes alternative transportation and reduce the amount of smog. Anyone who violated this law was fined $25. \" It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said buisinessman Carlos Arturo Plaza(selsky 24). This trend is spreading, with other Colombian cites joining the event.\n\nThe end of car culture is among us in the United States. Studies have shown that people are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licences as the years go by. The number of miles driven in the United states peaked in 2005 and is steadily dropping . As of April 2013, that number has dropped by about 9% and is equal to where the United states was in January 1995. The new generation are not finding drivin or even etting a licence a priorty anymore. They plan there work and social life by were they can walk or use a alternative transportation. Bills are being made to help with the amount of pollution made by cars and are trying to gie the people more opportunities to use alternative transportations.\n\nThe amount of pollution created by cars are effecting our envoirnment. As shown in the example of paris, that by limiting the amount of cars o the road you can prevent some of the air pollution increasing the quaility of the air. Also not having to worry about driving has decreased stress in some cases. Overall limiting car usage would be beneficial to your wellbeing and the enviornment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When ever bad things said ever effected people read days That s hot present lifetime No one wants read boring article unless s meant I m going share opinions certain materials books music magazines ect removed shelves found offensive I observations experience reading articles called offensive prove opinions In opinion ones work taken shelf due thing I m sure worked awful lot placed shelf So reason taken If stuff got took shelves I would shocked upset So one reason nt It could hurt people emotionly Following statement times nt want seen embarrassing Such athlete interviewed article got suspended sport due violations athlete cursing control I would put article away also public wo nt see one put blast Finally everyone knows types movies music ca nt put display public So would ask movie someone go get back due explicit content explicit lyrics G CAPS movies allowed shelves rated behind counter music I pretty sure clear audience I shared opinions different views censorship libbraries thoughts topic read persuasive essay You read thoughts experience observations common sense topice If write essay censorship libraries would comeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Television programs have been rapidly increasing these days due to the technological advancements and wide acceptance of public.\r\n\r\nFew people believe its good to have more number of Television programs as it gives more options to choose, whereas some believe it diminutes the quality of the daily soaps.\r\n\r\nNow, I'd like to discuss about the positive affects of more number of television programs due to certain reasons, which are stated as below:\r\n\r\nVariation - More number of daily soaps will increase the diversification of genres in which they are made. Example - Nowadays, people have started scripting daily soaps on biographies of a person or a crime series which is based on a true story.\r\n\r\nCategorisation - Earlier children's were not been able to choose from variety of programs and had to be a part of a family daily soaps. Having said that, those daily soaps were not meant for their ages. However, due to the increase in number of programs on television. Children's can watch series/programs of their category which suits their preferences and IQ.\r\n\r\nIncrease in numbers of the Television programs also have its affects such as their quality deteriorates and many more. I'd like to discuss some below:\r\n\r\nOff-track - Every daily soaps and their channels try to produce and present the best which their competitors are delivering, though they sometimes go obnoxiously wrong and portrays something which they even didn't wanted to.\r\n\r\nCommercialization - TV programs have been focussing on increased ratings and earning more money, irrespective of the quality they offer.\r\n\r\nConfusion - Enormous collection of programs on television has actually made people confused. Public is actually confused to watch which programs based on their genres preferences.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, more Television programs definitely gives freedom to choose from but still, the best TV programs restricts to very few of them because quality of the daily soaps decreases drastically. Therefore, lesser the number, lower the confusion and bests options to choose from.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports the idea of studying Venus under harsh conditions the planet has by giving us information on how NASA is creating new technology . In the passage in paragrahph 3 it is stated , \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray . Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape .'' This idea supports the author because NASA is making a device so humans do not have to put themselves in danger . Also the device will help with receiving information about Venus .\n\nAlthough , the device that NASA is built is going to help us . The author give us exellent information about about old technology that might helps us get through to Venus . \" Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisiones in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War 2 .\" This piece of evidence that the author gave us is important because the devices make calculations by using gears and leverand do not require electronics . This is key because the new technology might be powerful and work fast . But it is easier for modern technology to break down in extreme physical condition .\n\nLastly , The author suggest that studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author gives us a last solution that NASA can use and is the best option located in paragraph 7, \" For example , some simplified electronis made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus and have lasted for three weeks on such condition .'' In this text the author explaines why this is the best way to receive data from Venus . This product will last longer then other in such harsh condition and still be able to get information in the time being there . This is how the author suggest the best study for Venus despite the dangers .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Mooo!\n\nHorses, young cows, and mules are interesting mammels.\n\nLuke Bomberger went on a adventer were he could watch these animals.\n\nHe also got to go to Europe and China. Dosen't that sound fun? This paper is about the adventer Luke took. There are many other good parts about taking this trip.\n\nLuke had a oppertunity of a lifetime when he signed up to be a Seagoing Cowboy. First he got to see the acropolis. Then he got to ride on a gondola to see Venice, Italy. He said he had the time of his life. He also liked watching the animals.\n\nIf you like animals you get to take care of them in a boat or water vessle to Europe or Asia.\n\nSome of the animals need help. There also other fun things to do like tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, baseball, and volleyball.\n\nIf you like trips, sports and animals you would be perfect to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A lot of animals need help.\n\nYou can help them by being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nYou can have fun too taking a trip or playing sports. Sign up now!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My position towards driverless cars leans more to being against it. The driverless cars sounds pretty awesome, but why do we really need them? Are they really important to our future? Why can't we stick to just normal cars? I think the transportation that we have now is just fine. The driverless cars will use the same amount of fuel that a normal car has now, but the main problems are that we'll become lazy and who would be in fault if an accident ought to occur.\n\nFirst, the reason I am against them is that no matter how the company who is making these cars tries to make the cars safe, it will never be completely safe. It'll be the same with having normal cars. Because for example, if the sensors stop working for whatever reason and you're in a risk of an accident, you'll most likely be in an accident. And the big problem is who will be the one to blame. The manufacturer or the owner driving the car?\n\nAnother reason I am against the cars is it will cause problems with the health of people. I'm not saying the cars will make us unhealthy; I'm saying that people will become lazy. Since we no longer will have to control the car, it also will makes not want to even simply walk. Even as much as I don't like exercising, walking is one of the most important things for our health. And having driveless cars will change our mentality that \"Oh! Why walk when we can just use this car that will take us anywhere we like?\"\n\nAlso, having these cars can be a benefit but not completely. I understand that it could work for people that are overnight drivers or busy business workers. But normal people? What really are the benefits for us? It works if we want to go to work, but there's already subways and buses for that.\n\nIn conclusion, my opinion in driveless cars doesn't go completely against it, but it does leans more towards that side. Unless, I'm more convinced, then my opinion might change. I, myself, think the driveless cars are fascinating, but it really isn't a need to have them. And there is still many risks on the line.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today’s world due to the advancement of technology new inventions are coming into existence. It is true that ‘Necessity is a mother of invention’. Internet is just like a wonder box, which contains every type of information. it has also proved a very important tool to connect people with one another.In today’s modernized era nobody has sufficient time to write letters to their loved ones. it also takes longer to send or receive any informationthe Internet is the easiest way to send messages to our loved ones. Communication can be either in the form of e-mail or through text messages sent via to mobile phones. We can send and receive messages straight .today’s young generation mostly prefers to do chatting through the Internet. During such chatting we can write messages and get replies straight away. voice chatting is .the advantages and disadvantages resemble two sides of one coin, also some downsides, causing people health problems poor eye-sight, back ache or migraines. Today’s teenagers usually prefer to spend their time on the internet rather than in other physical activities, which causing them to have a weaker physical health.To conclude, I would like to say that the Internet is one of the most modernized and most successful tools, not only for regarding every field in a very short period of time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The conditions California desert horrible cyclist The temperature extremely high humidity dry The roads also lot hills cyclist use energy heat go hill hill hard There also stops refill water long way bad neat lack water energy extension leads major dehydrationThe conditions along trip good cyclist dangerousSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine growing up in a city 30 miles above the ground and wearing a suit all the time to protect yourself from the envirement. This is life on the planet of Venus. There are many dangers such as the temperature being 800 degrees Fahrenheit, the pressure that is 90 times greater than what we experience on earth, and clouds of sulfuric acid everywhere but is it worth it?\n\nIn this article there are many reasons to not explore Venus, some say it may not be able to be done but NASA belives that if we use a blimp like vehicle to explore 30 miles above the surface then the temperature will drop to around 170 and the pressure will drop aswell.\n\nThere is a saying \"The needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few\" and in the situation of our planet being compremised in one way or another that is very true. If we need another planet to flee to we could go to Venus but we would need exstensive research first in order to find out if it is even possible to survive on that planet.\n\nLife would be a lot more difficult living on Venus but based on this article it might just be possible. Living on Venus would mean we would have to make tons of improvements in our technology so they wouldn't be totally inferior in the extreme conditions of Venus's weather. Our tech would have to able to handle all of the heat and everything else without over heating and exploding all the time.\n\nIn conclusion I think the author did a good job in explaining the conditions of the Venus and all of its surprises it holds for us to find. The author also adresses the technology advancements we would have to make aswell as gives us motivation to explore and create by saying \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It important author concluded story paragraph It reastablished meaning hibiscus important Saeng I showed determination overcoming problems living new place Without paragraph would left assuming come Saeng In stories would worked case needed When first saw hibiscus broke becaus could remember home land This hibiscus important story By restating importance end helped reader follow come next eventhough story come end It important express In last paragraph says This hibiscus budding I take test again The buds represent new beginning Saeng new chance overcome problems This paragraph important without events would left hanging The meaning story much clear readerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars. Everyone has cars. On the street, in their driveways, in parking lots. You think everyone uses car. Well your wrong. Not everyone has cars or uses cars for that matter.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany residents given up their cars to walk the streets. Where we generally park in like parking lots, parking garages, street parking, home driveways, and home garages are all forbidden. In Vauban their streets are completely car-free. They do allowed cars there but some people just want to walk to safe their community. But if you have are car you can only park in two places. Those two places are your house, and large garages at the edge of the development. I would never give up my car to live in Vauban, Germany. In matter of fact 57% of people have sold their cars to live there. To believe or not 70% of Vaubans families do not own cars. To me its hard to think that people actually walk everywhere they go.\n\nParis bans driving to clean the air of the global city because of pollution. Due to the ban of driving people who are caught driving will be fined 22-euro which is $31 in america. France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Its hard to believe that diesels make up 67% of France, compared to 53.3% of average diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe. The smog cleared enough that French part rescind to ban odd numbered plates on Tuesday.\n\nToday Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions. This thing has left people like researchers woundering a fundamental question \" Has America pass peak driving?\" As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was neraly 9% below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.\n\nIts carzy how some countries have no cars allowed policy. Some countries baned cars, dont allow them on the streets. People would go carzy if they didnt have their cars and had to walk everywhere they want to go.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Yes, I think the technology will be used to help students and I do think it will be very helpful to some students.\n\nIn schools across the globe today, there is more technology than ever before. Schools are giving their students Apple Macbooks and ipads and all of this other stuff just so the students can do work on them. I think with the FACS, students will get move involved in using a program they have never used before and they will be hooked.\n\nWhen you give a todler a toy, what do they do with it? They play with it. What do you do when you give a student a ipad or any kind of electronical device, they are going to play with it and they are going to figure out how to use it. I think the FACS will really improve all of the highschools attendance rates and improve all things behavorial becasue all of these students will be stuck on the FACS. This in all honesty would be a good decisoin for schools becasue not too many schools offer programs for students to learn how to read facial emotion. If students were able to read facial emotions, I think students would be more nice to each other and people would have respect for each one another. You don't want to mess with someone that is having a bad day because your good day could go bad because of them and now you are both upset and your negativity could bring others down too.\n\nStudents would also like this class if they are big into health and all of the muscle groups. Learning the muscle groups is good to know becasue its extra knowledge to have. Having extra knowledge is good because you never know when you will need it. People always say \"I already knew that\" but the question is did you really? If you were to ask anyone around the whole world right now and you asked that person where is your Zygomatic major is i bet they couldnt tell you.\n\nIn my opinion I think that students should learn this in school because it will help them 100% in the long run. They will be able to figure it out in no time how a person if seeling that day and they will gain some healthy info in their brain about the muscle groups.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do think libraries remove certain materials shelves People different oppions whats good whats bad I read seen lot books life time I hear people telling oh dont read book bad book But I ask I know s bad book I nt even given chance books music movies magazines offensive Yet still want read listen watch look If tried remove offensive books libraries would nt anything left shelves Katherine Paterson said If I right remove book shelf work abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us Katherine Paterson makes great point quote Why remove book people think offensive Ask question CAPS know s bad book nt even given chance judge book hear Find oppionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.(NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\n\nTherefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, there are a growing number of people who are interested in investigating their houses or their living space history in some countries. This essay will provide several reasons behind this trend and suggest a way to practically find a reliable source to do it. \r\n\r\nThe first and most common reason is safety. Public search documents of criminal records to estimate how safe their house or living space is. This action was actually supported not only by the older generations, but also by the government. Because of this awareness, it also affects house prices later on. The second reason is simply chasing fun, especially for people who intend to live in an old apartment or any traditional building. For example, many residents in Tokyo, Japan voluntarily bought and live in a place that had a “once in a lifetime” event, such as the location of a meteor fall or the house of one famous storyteller from the 18th century. Lastly, motivation comes from business aspects. for instance, content creators prefer to explore and stream online about their visits to unusual places including their own houses. \r\n\r\nWhatever the reasons to dig up the past, people should understand that there is a legal way to find the right information. Contacting the authority is the most popular and easiest way. Because anyone can contact their housing agency or local police department unit. Moreover, different areas applied different policies regarding prices, however in the majority of places it doesn't need additional cost. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people's enthusiasm for learning about the past events of their house is influenced by three things. Namely, estimating the safety level, purely for fun, and business. The public can legally get those documents by making contact with the right authority.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Limit Joe Kurmaskie many settings affect cyclist One example would came water pump tried get water water didnt come working handle rusted water pump strength A tar like substance oozed Kurmaskie Another example came across rolling hills scaring heat also came across snake took pavementSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In 1976, NASA was taking pictures of Mars and found what looked like a human face looking at them. When the news got to the public they emediatly jumped to the conclution that it was an alian artifact. I can reasure you that it is nothing more than a natural landform that looks like a face.\n\nWhen NASA went back to retake pictures on April 5,1998, it showed that there was nothing at all but a nautral landform. The public still were not agreeing on it just being a landform due to them taking the pictures on a cloudy winter day. So the NASA team took pictures yet again on April 8, 2001. This time a cloudless summer day.\n\nGarvin, a NASA worker, says,\"If there were objects in this picture like airplains on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The 2001 pictures showed the \"Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa.\"\n\nSo I rest my case. Even though an alian civilization on Mars is a really awesome thought, its proven to be not true. The face on Mars is no alian arifact, but just a really cool natural landform that looks lilke a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nPerhaps you may know about the 'electoral college'. In my point of view, I would keep the electoral college because it's better and the process has been the same in decades. So why change it?\n\nThe Electoral College is better because it's more fair. In the story, What Is the Electoral College?, it tells how the voting for president and vice president works.\" one for each memeber in the house of representatives plus for your senators\" Meaning the state votings plus the the number of members in the Congressional delegation. Also in the the story, What Is the Electoral College?, it states \" Each candidate running for President in your state his or her own group electors\"...... \"but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are\".\n\nIn other words, canadiates that are running for President have their own people to elect them but the state laws say that candidates are suppose to be elected by their responsibilities. Even though other say \" the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational\" I think it is fair for how they process the Electoral College because it let's the candidate that you or that your state is voting have the opportunity to make some changes in the world.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Is the face on Mars an alien artifact of just a natural landform? So far we have no real proof that aliens even exist. Also in 1998 the JPL website revealed that it was just a natural landform and not made by aliens. Also NASA would be just as excited to reveal that another life form has been found, that wouldn't be a kept secret.\n\nSo far we have no real proof that aliens exist. If there were aliens wouldn't we know by now? There are lots of alien conspiracies but nothing that proves aliens exist. UFO spottings are just the same. You may think theres an alien in there but whos to say its not just a flying frisbee. And the crop circles how do you know the farmer doesn't just like to have a nice looking crop.\n\nLots of people believe in aliens but what are they basing these beliefs from, one blurry picture? We can say there may be evidence of aliens but no proof.\n\nWhen the next Mars Global Surveyor flew over we got an even better picture. Lots of people were anxious to find out what the story behind this face was. Later theJPL website revealed something that shocked, relieved, saddened, and angered the people. The website had said that there was no alien artifact just a natural land form. How after all of that can you still think there are aliens? Well some people still believe. There are all kinds of things people think that show us there are aliens. But just about every one of them is some kind of misunderstanding.\n\nIf we had found aliens we would be eager to share our discovery not try to hide it. People say that NASA is just trying to make us think there are no aliens. The truth is we wish we had found them. It would have been much more exciting to find aliens than some sort of natural landform. Some people think that this is evidence that we are trying to hide our discoveries. I really do wish that we had found aliens. Talk about a pay raise! But, there is still no strong evidence of aliens.\n\nI think by now it is safe to say that aliens don't exist. So far we just have no real proof of aliens. Not to mention that JPL already confirmed that the face was just a natural landform. Also theres that part about how we would benifit even more for finding aliens. People can still have their conspiracies but that can't change the facts. THERE ARE NO ALIENS!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "An often debated topic is whether a government should provide its country’s artists with assistance or not. Many believe such assistance is a prudent use of a nation’s wealth and should thus be supported. However, others feel this kind of spending is wasteful. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay before a conclusion is reached. According to many, government funding of the arts can benefit a country’s cultural identity. A good example of this is the anime art culture of Japan. Today, anime is a globally recognized art form and as such, a huge draw for tourists. As this shows, providing government assistance to artists can have positive ramifications across different channels within a country. It is thus understandable why many people support this stance. On the other hand, many argue this kind of spending is wasteful. The core of this argument typically spotlights developing countries. People basically feel that among these countries government money may perhaps best be used to solve social problems, such as establishing safe drinking water and roads to rural communities. When looking at the discussion in this light, the merits in not utilizing government funds on artists can be seen. After examining both sides of the question, it is felt that in most circumstances government assistance to artists begets greater benefits to the country at large. Thus, it is hoped nations around the world responsibly tailor financial aid to their artists in a manor that best benefits the needs of their people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The advancements technology developed much become comenly known us normal house hold use every day work home schools bussneses become comen used item everyday life Emails researching questions world around us It required almost every job application school every thing It s complete age Computers every day thing email thats something I dont worry also used file tax return Also used make reports people Computers also become comen used thing school use reports studies home work Also buiseness use comunicate corprat uses wide stance technoligy rec got whole bunch apples Last Computers required jobs going list state schools military defence jobs missles A thier satlelite communication shut dwn comunications cell phones one plaines twin towers nitro atrack tracking truck gose rest I know computers classifieded And computers needed society use every day thier comenly used requirdedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of exploring venses \" the author suggests that studying venus is a wrothy prsuit despite the dangers it presents. The author thinks studyinfg venus is a worthy pursuit because venus is the most earth like planent in our soloar system. \"venus is the closest planet to earth in term of denstiy and size, and occasionaily the closest in distace too.\" the author belives one day that people cuold go there and vist and study on venouse more or maybey even live there, \" imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher ataltitude to fly over many stroms,a vehicle hovery over hovering over venus wuold avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out their way\"\n\nBut studying vesue is pretty challageing and dangeus because being able to study tha planent you have to be on it and that diffcult because \" a thick atmousephere of almost 97% carbon dixide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of hihly corrosive sulfuric acid in venuis atmoahere.\" and \"since no spacecraft suurvived the landing for more then a few hours. maybe this issue explans why not a single spaceship has tuoched down on venus in more than 3 decates.\"\n\n\" noumerous facters contrirbute to venus's repuaton as a challenging planet for humans to study on.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Undoubtedly, crimes are dramatically increasing in many urban areas around the world, especially among children. It is caused by many factors such as environment or drug abuse which are solved in different ways. In this essay, I will discuss the cause of the problem and guide the ways to figure out this situation shown in the following paragraph.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the most important cause of crimes in kids, is their environment, including family. This is obviously to say that family is the basis of their lives. If the family keep an eye on them and try to help them with their problems, they will know how to get rid of them. In contrast, if their family ignore them, children will try to solve the problem by themselves and it can be the worst way or illegal way. Moreover, teenagers are the age that wants to try new and interesting things so they tend to try some drugs or illegal substances such as amphetamine or marijuana. it can lead to unconsciousness and unintentional. From that symptoms can make them do something wrong, for example, crime or hurt themselves without guilty.\r\n\r\nHowever, the problems listed above can be solved. Firstly, the government should take an action like making a policy to increase the punishment if children do something wrong or use drugs which are illegal. Secondly, the family should keep an eye on them because the family is the one who could notice their behaviours when they are sad or change their actions, the family should take an action with them without violence. And finally, the school should teach them more about crime and how to protect themselves from dangerous situations with open-mindedness. For examples. schools should teach and give information about violence in their cities to make them think about how dangerous it is. and try to solve that problem in small groups with their friends. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the environment is the most important which definitely impacts young people's thoughts and consciousness so if everyone in the city manages their environment well there will have less crime. Furthermore, it is not helpful if we try to control everything but the children still do the same behaviour so the significant change starts with them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As time goes by, many technological advances come about and many change the world we live in. Within a few years there have been many new inventions that have completely revolutinized the way we live. Some people like the new ideas that are brought up and some don't. It all depends on who has a purpose to use it. The idea of cars that can drive themselves have came up and have some scratching their heads. Many do not want to have one of these cars and the developers are trying to find ways to improve them. As they continue to test them and see if they are ready to be sold to the public, the public can only wait and see how this will turn out.\n\nVehicles have been improved year by year and there always seems to be a new model that comes out and is said to be the 'best' that has ever been made. The people want them and no matter what, there are always some things that bug the owners. As new models come out, the prices of the vehicles go up. Just imagine the price of a new car that is able to drive itself. We have no idea how the cars will affect our everyday life and what changes it will bring as well. I personally believe that these brand new cars will not be a good thing to have. It could cause anger and we could only imagine the price to get one repaired if it were to be in some sort of accident. With a slow limited speed, it would cause the other drivers on the road who drive normal cars to be very aggrivated. The weather also brings up a new con in the public's mind as we wonder how the car will run in something such as snow or heavy rain. The car is drives itself until it reaches things like moving past an accident and moving through work zones. It may have the driver bored out of their mind, waiting for their turn on the wheel and has people wondering if others are able to be in the car with them. Could the car cause accidents and will be available to all who are able to afford it? There are so many new ideas that can have positive and very negative affects.\n\nThere are still many questions that stay in our heads that we want to be answered. The car still has some time until it is publically released, but we are all anxious to see what this vehicle will do to our lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Tick tock tick tock Every mustle body urged run look dad Tick tock tick tock But I stayed put eyes scanning crows Tick tock tick tock And I saw Tick tock tick tock I ran forward gave giant hug The clock head stoped ticking Hi gon na tell time I patient I think I really patient I got back trip friend I waiting airport dad come pick I exited see I gone two weeks I really homesick It took everything I go looking I knew I couldnt go running I patient In end worth would harder find I went looking As see I think I patient waiting dad airport Thank listeningSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "I would favor changing the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The president is more important than the electors. Who knows if the electors are being paid to choose a president? The people vote for what they want and need. The people should get what they want, not what the electors want. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\n\nTo begin with, the electoral college is not fair! For example, you can have 500 people voting for you, but then your opponent has 55 electors voting for him. Then most likely your opponent would win you but why should he win you if you had more people voting for you? That is really unfair. Also its like a winner-take-all system.\n\nTherefore, the electoral college is out of date. We are in the 2000's, not the 1960's gentlemen. This system is very old style, it was even used back in the 1960's when segregationists almost replaced the Democratic electors. This electoral college is a disaster factor. All it does is makes things harder and worse for the state.\n\nAll of these reasons is why we should get rid of the elecotral college and change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The electoral vote is just not fair to anyone. It is so old styled which should be changed. Its a really bad system thats hould be removed. The electoral college should be changed to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 3.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Most professionals consider that if the country is affluent, any upgrade in their economic wealth does not affect the nation by providing them with extra satisfaction. I disagree that the richest country has the enthusiasm to build and create more profitable businesses without thinking about money or amenities. This essay will discuss that. I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.\n\nTo begin with, economic wealth has a vast impact on the nation. which makes society achieve holistic goals. In addition, the citizens who are satisfied with their living seek a new challenge to integrate themselves with positive objectives like charity, building startups, etc. For example, in Norway, people are very affluent. they implement themselves with no voluntary work.\n\nDespite this, it can be more adequate for rich countries to fund and support other middle-class nations. However, the satisfaction doesn't rely on economic wealth. Because satisfaction comes from daily habits, not from wealth. many people are rich and they have a productive ritual which makes them more productive and sociable helpful and not introverted. Therefore, economic wealth instigates diverted ideas rather than false unsuccessful economics. For instance, rich countries implement new systems and methods in other countries to enhance their economic wealth.\n\nIn conclusion, it is frequently said that the richest countries have a high income rate which makes society mindful, and creative and has the energy to launch a successful business and assist poor countries in raising their economic wealth. I strongly believe that supports my point of view.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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