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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting greatly affected cyclist For example cyclist California extremely hot place desert June These features made dehydration keen possibility Another example paragraph ten It explains rough road tumbleweeds large snake made hard cyclist keep balance without water Also essay describes building poster small child drinking refreshing glass juice made cyclist think water become thirsty Although thier possitive effects setting cyclist The pebbles aloud keep mouth moist think much thirst Also bait shopped allowed opt something drink die dehydrationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The hydrogen dirigibles highly flammable winds shifted lot existing laws made illegal dock area Most dirigibles time Were floating hydrogen rather helium With builders found hydrogen flammable risky land dirigibles could catch fire whole city The excerpt also explained nature huge issue Air currents high top buildings vicious shifted rapidly would make dangling dirigibles high risky Lastly obstacle breaking law The law airships flying low urban areas With obstacles would difficult builders face unreal dream would yet remain dreamSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "May 24 2001. About 25 years ago NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was going around the planet taking pictures of landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2. Then it saw some kind of shadowy like figure that kind of looked like a face. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa that is common in Cydonia.\n\nA couple days later NASA leaked the image for everyone to see. The captian said \" huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The face on mars has now become popular. It ended up being on magazines, in books, talk shows, Holloywood film, etc. Other people think its bona fide evidence of life on Mars.\n\nSome scientist thought it was alien artifact. So on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and took a picture ten times sharper than the orginial photos. There ended up not being an alien monument.The face was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in 98 of April. So the camera had to look through clouds to see the Face.\n\nThey were ready to look again. On April 8, 2001, no clouds, Mars Global Surveyor looked close enough for another look. \" We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary picture using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\"\n\nWhat the picture really shows is the Matain equivalent of a butte or mesa. They are landforms common around the American West.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho author ended story particular paragraph symbolize new beginnings The story failure shame felt Saeng failed driving test finding familiar hibiscus plant gave new lease life By buying hibiscus Saeng reminded home giving single hibiscus new unfamiliar place thrive She able make connection plant The spring symbolizes beginning new year budding hibiscus represents start new life Saeng wants restart life plant restarts life retaking driving testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Facial Action Coding System is a great achievement and that it really would help students in the classroom. It could help students stay attuned and stay motivated. While i'm sure some students may goof off with it, i'm also sure the majority of the impact would be positive. So yes, i agree with this being put in the classroom. I think that students would benefit greatly.\n\nAs we read in the passage, the Facial Action Coding System could calculate an emotion and then adapt to it. As stated i paragraph 6, \"' A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\"',... \"'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"' I believe this is saying that after reading a students emotion, the computer can adapt to the students needs for maximum effect. This would make it easier on teachers and students alike. The teacher would no longer have to rush around and between multiple students at one time. Students also would not have to waste valuable time waiting for the teacher to be available to assist.\n\nAll in all, i think it would be beneficial to add FACS to the classroom. We are told that it would help students with learning. We can also believe that if the FACS is accurate, it could change the world. We could tell when a student would be in need of support, either the computer changing to help the student, or the teacher assisting him. The only negatives i could think of is incorrect assesments of facial recognition or a breach in privacy. Other than those two issues, it would be wise to add this new technology to the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, our environment is degrading day in and day out due to an increase in the amount of air pollution. It is often argued whether increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles is the best possible solution, while some opine that there are better ways to resolve the issue. I completely disagree with the latter, and this essay will elucidate my assertions in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nNowadays, people use vehicles for various reasons. Increasing the cost of fuels could lead to not only a reduction in the use of personal cars but also will increase the value of transportation of consumer items. For instance, trucks carrying customer goods will be affected if the petrol cost is high. As a result, this cost will be transferred to the end user, and the value of goods and services will scale up tremendously. Therefore, in order to curb the ever-increasing air pollution, a hike in diesel and petrol prices will do no good to society at large.\r\n\r\nBy contrast, in case the public commute is improved and made faster, people will be encouraged to use them frequently. Moreover, the government authorities can motivate personnel in order to buy electric vehicles by spreading awareness via campaigns and providing subsidies or tax exemptions for car loans. For example, in Mumbai, because of the recent metro lines, which are air-conditioned and provide better connectivity, a considerable number of citizens have stopped using their own transportation and are travelling by themselves. Thus, there are better ways which can be actioned if we want to save the environment.\r\n\r\nDefinitely, it is the need of the hour to look after the deteriorating environmental conditions otherwise, it can lead to devastating effects. Having said that, a potential hike in the fuel cost might push some personnel to avoid using personal cars, but this action will also have side effects on society. Hence, it is not one of the best solutions to resolve the problem. So, a better way would be to promote the electric versions and optimise public transportation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" The Authir talks about how there is new technology that is call Facial Action Coding System or FACS for short. FACS enables computers to identify human emotions in picutres, and aslo videos. In the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\" The author states that in the famous Mona Lisa picute by Copy Leonardo\n\nDa Vinci the renasissance painting. The painting of Mona Lisa her facial expersion was \" She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted,6 percent fearful,and 2 percent angry.\"There is no way that technology can scan a painting from the 1600's and find the painting facial expression out.\n\nIn paragraph 4 the author says \" \"The facial expresions for each emotion universal observes Dr. Huang\" \" .\" even though indivisuals often vary degrees of expression \". Dr. Huang is saying that it is impossible to find out someones emotions in a photo of them. In paragrah 3 the author says \" The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face ; all 44 major mucels in the model must move like human muscels.\" The author is saying that there is no possible way that a computer can scan a persons exspression in a photo because of the the camreas frame and the movement of the person in the photo.\n\nIn paragraph 7 the author says \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" The Mona Lisa painting was in the 1600's it is impossible to figure out what was her expression. The author goes deep into the article to tell the reader that technology can't identify human emotions. In paragraph 6 the author says \" Tyhe Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face while it shows just how much this computer can do.\" The author is explaing how technology is syncing into students brain and mind.\n\nIn parargraph 5 the author says \" In fact,we humans perform this same impressive ''calculation'' every day. For instance, you can probaly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" The author is saying us humans have questions about others expressions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How the author support his suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents is, venus is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to sopt.\n\nVenus is the secoynd planet from our sun.\n\nVenus is also referred to as Earth's twin, Venus is also the clostest planet in distance.\n\nVenus is sometimes right around the coner in space terms, humas have sent numerous spacecraft to land in the cloud-draped world and no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\n\nVenus has not been touch by any spaceship for more than three decades.\n\nThe article also said, \"on the planet's surface, temperatures averge over 8-- degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving in the deepest part of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\"\n\nAt thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\n\nSolar power would be plentiful and radiation would not ecceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nThese are the reasons why the author suggested that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In quote wrote talks books taken shelf provokative This interesting quote She talks things taken shelf prevent children seeing In everyday life things said movies music magazines kids never watch hear read Some movies way provokative Directors try cover know trying get across Some scenes get control stopping People wish could close eyes would When parents get movies try keep scenes hidden children The parents want get child bad ideas movies saying To many children take movies extreme try act like actors actresses children end getting hurt actions Music especially one There lot songs world involve language drugs sexual content Many parents want exeposed way soon If people listen might want try end going wrong path words said Mothers want go get child jail something like song like listen That mothers dream go There many magazines try expose women They use try see magazines This wrong A little back magazine took pictures girl tried expose wrong Parents want children look get wrong idea When girls look model magazine try like model They girls end underweight sick maybe drugs Parents see take magazine away approve Some parents let kids get away much They censor children Some kids try get around helping Everyones point view different People think scene provocative another person look say nothing wrong It depends society feels whole situation If take movie music say would contents shelfSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author supports the idea of studying Venus despite that it has many dangers. The first way the author supports this claim is that not a single spaceship has landed on Venus in more than three decades. The second claim the author makes is that Venus's surface has very hot tempratures. The third way the author supports this is that he states that astronomers are fascinated by Venus.\n\nNot a single spaceship has landed on Venus in three decades. The article says that no spacecraft has survived the landing more than a few hours. NASA wants to send humans the Venus despited this fact.\n\nThe second claim is that Venus has very hot tempratures. The surface of Venus averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is over 90 times greater than what we experience on Earth. Venus has the hottest surface temprature of any planet in our solar system. The author states that these conditions are not easy, but they are survivable for humans.\n\nThe author lastly tells us that Astronomers are fascinated by this planet. He states that it was once the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. Venus today has some features that are analogous to Earth. For example, the planet includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nDespite that Venus could be dangerous to physically study, the author does support it. The planet is hot, no spaceship has landed on it in decades, but it is still fascinating for astronomers. Venus has value, and if it is studied more, astronomers will gain insight on the planet. At the end of the article the author states that \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" That is how the author suggets that studying Venus is a worthy persuit, despite the dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe everyone right choose book banned form children public Everyonehas owen belief reads rights even watches library perfect way We books find offensive beliefs somebody else might want come along read certain relgion certain topic If books made library books wanted d lot debt d build libraries everyone instead one allows us enjoy favorite books place So problem book movie form library weshould keep children awayfrom item inform subjected itemSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir positive one The author tells parents immigrated Cuba born He never said one negative thing life growing Newark New Jersey He mentioned parents love cooking love passed He said grateful He also mentioned along cooking Passionate Cuban music He described neighborhood made cultures came together great solidarity friendship As final sentence author stated never forget parents turned simple house homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the program called the United Nations Relief and Rehbititation Administration. Because the program is for countries that needing help after World War 11 was over.\n\nThis program will bring all the thing such as animals, food supplieds and much more to help the countries get what they need. You get to go on a cattle-boat trip to different places around the world that need help because of the War that hit those places. You get to feed the animals on the boat you have to clean the stales that they are in and you get to you don't just have to work you get to play different games and see different places.\n\nThis program will mean a lot to the people in the different counttry that you are doing this for them and could make you feel better that you helped someone in a different county that got hit by the War so this is a really good opportunity that could last a life time. So if you are a animals and traveling kind of person this jod is right for you. This is why you should join the program that could save a country or mutiple people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on the driverless car is that it could be useful. But at the same time it could end up being extremely dangerous. With the kind of world we live in, such a car could become a problem. And could have some safety an liability issuses. Here are some examples of how it could turn out to be a bad invention.\n\nThe added safety features don't include drivers who are texting. It's kinda pointless to have a driverless car if those heads-up safety features isn't limited to drivers who are trying to text while driving. New traffic laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident. If there is an accident, it will be hard to discern who is at fault for the accident, the manufacturer or driver.\n\nWith liability issuses like this it is much too risky to contine to make advancements on the car. There are one too many safety issuses with such a car. Faulty design, limited coverage, new traffic laws, boring,and so on. It is extremely pointless to even have started to invent such a car. And could turn out to be too much of an expensive investment for those who want to increase the manufacturing process.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had a great time going to diffrent places and taking care of the animals to help other people.Luke says people should join the Seagoing Cowboy program\n\nbecause they would have a great time exploring the diffrent lands and countries.Luke also said that you can find time to have fun on the ship, especially when you return on the trips after the animals had been unloaded.\n\nLuke said you also should be careful for this job, because you could get injured.Because thats what happened to Luke, but he didn't get hurt that bad but still be careful.One night it was rainy and Luke was going to the captin to make his hourly report.Luke was about there but he slid down a slippery ladder on his back side,Luke shot feet first toward an opening side of the ship.But a strip of metal along the edge stopped his side,keeping him from flying over board into the dark Atlantic Ocean.Luke was happy to be alive,but he did crack some ribs.So Luke couldn't work for a couple of days because of the cracked ribs.\n\nLuke also said that people could play baseball,volleyball,table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,and could also just read or whittling.Luke says being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure than just going somewhere.It opened up the world to him and he is grateful for the opportunity.Luke is more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nLuke's awareness stayed with him,leading his family to host a number of international students and exhange visitors for many years.Thats why Luke want's people to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.So he hopes to see people there soon.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having this complex system know your emotions could be estatic. It could change the way we feel about technology. Modifying animations, making us happier, and surfing the web are all results to the new update. Way more people would enjoy interacting with the media. It could change the way we live our day to day life using technology.\n\nWhen video games just came out, you could barely see the facial expressions of any of the charcters. As time evoled, we started to update how 3D features were in the game. With this technology, they could make computer- animated faces even more expressive. This involves updating video games or video surgery. When we can see more of the features, it starts to feel more like real life.\n\nOur facial expressions speak louder then our words. Using muscles like orbicularis oculi, zygomatic major, and risorius we can create a smiling face. In fact if you see yourself smile or someone makes you smile, it can make you happy. While seeing someone else's facial expressions can make us imitate that person and have empathy for them. Facial expressions can change a lot for humans.\n\nJust while you are on facebook or any social media, the coding system is watching you. If you smile at an ad that appears on your screen, the next ad you see may also catch your eye. This technology is making sure we do not get bored while surfing the web. If you frown or look confused, the system will recognize it and change the next topic to something that interest you. We all know we use some type of social media and find something we do not like.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is an amazing update. Seeing someone's facial expressions making me happier, modifying animations, and changing unwanted ads are all great factors of the new technology. As most of the world uses technology, this is what we need to keep it going. Everyone likes an evolving world and likes a new change. It is amazing how the 44 major muscles in our faces can run how our technology is.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays a lot of primary schools are starting to introduce the teaching of animal care and general agriculture. Many people think that primary children should study and understand how to grow vegetables and keep animals; this essay will discuss why primary school should learn about this two arguments and how the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.\nIt is very important study and understand how to grow vegetables and how to keep animals, especially in a younger age. Most of the kids, that frequent the primary school, have this desire of having a pet and, the opportunity of studying how to take care of it in the school, can make the child more aware of the responsibilities that he will have if, one day, he has to own one of them. At the same time, for a primary children it's also important to understand how vegetables grown and what's the process behind that , learning about this arguments will help the kids to appreciate more the food and, as a consequence, in the future there will be less waste of it .\nIt's clear that the advantages will be more than the disadvantages, if there are any. If every kid will know more about the arguments, the world in the future will become a better place, with more respect for the animals and more appreciation for the vegetables that, will also help people to make a healthier life.\nIn conclusion, this essay discussed on how the introduction of subjects like animal care and general understanding of how vegetables grow, will help the kids to become better adults in the future to make of this world a better place.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All libraries books readers matter age The books shelf arranged arranged alphabetical order last name author first I think reading materials books music mvies removed due graphics reading material Every bookshelf arranged age difference spread apart books bookshelfs If child would appropriate isle age styled books less children would pick wrong book If children would understand listen follow dircections find specific age appropriate books less accidents children taking wrong book bookshelf would occur If children would take wrong age appropriate book bookshelf I would think parent would responsible take back get right book child If parents would responsible taking action child understand taking wrong book bookshelf Would nt children understand parent take wrong book back would learn I think reading materials books music movies magazines removed due graphical features reading material The books bookshelf arranged alphabetical order last name author first All libraries books readers matter ageSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Facial Action Coding System would be a great thing for the class room in some cases.I say that because it is good to know how you student is\n\nfeeling so he or she could interact better with the class. Eckman classified six basic emotions that it could identify happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness.\n\nThe\n\nFacial Action Coding System was a good creation.One of my biggest tings I dont like about it is that what if your student in class doesnt want you to know there emotions? I say that becauser there are times where I dont care what poeple think I feel like and there are times where I don't want anything to do with anyone and wouldn't want to let them know my emotion. Some might think its there personal bussisnies of what there emotions are.\n\nOverall this creation was a good invetion for the world and class rooms.This could really improve the way students learn and interact in the class room. This also could help people physicallly, like when going to the doctor or somthing like that, could help the doctor how your feeling.This was agood invention and we should use this creation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience waiting something When rush thats patient When patient dont rush another meaning patience stay calm thats patience staying getting angry Some people say losing patience means get angry Those meaning patience time I patience I wait comei wait I wait I wait I didnt rush say birthday In bible say patient I It wasnt telling coming I still wait finally cameSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there has been a widespread argument that students face obstacles to focus on school's subjects. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and also explain some solutions that may emerge of this.\n\nAs we know that children tend to be active during school time because movement and social interaction are their way to recharge the energy. They are easily to get anxious and bored by sitting for a long time and listening to the teachers explaining materials, so they do another activity. As a consequence, when it comes to studying, it causes them tired. Secondly, it is a natural that the amount of children's attention time is not as much as adult, they may spend less than 90 minutes which the adult usually have. For instance, if children are encouraged to focus on linguistics lecturers, it will surely lead them to a distraction. \n\nHowever, every challenges could be addressed by including parents to help students overcome their problems. Children's guardian can give time management training, so children have a clear border on which occasion they should focus. As a consequence, they spend an effective time to study in a class and reach an optimum result. Besides, parents have big authority to discipline their children by giving them reward and punishment systems. For instance, if children is attentive to study in a certain time, they would receive a present so it motivates them to make a progress day by day.\n\nTo conclude, by nature, children have limited capacity to absorb school materials straight forward, because the lack of attention power, however it can be solved by contributing parents in a way of time schedule and rewarding schemes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay I conclude many features land affected cyclist For example text states ridiculously large snake blocked majority pavement front me If greatly afraid snakes could ruin whole trip The cyclist scared came fear moved Also another thing changed cyclist lack water Not enough water could bad As stated I could drop heatstore gorgeous day June There many features effected cyclist journeySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When cycling outdoor sport setting matters greatly If cold need jacket Hot need water Depending secure could life death It could realy hilly might get tired water could die Also depends city burbed small town desert highway factors play huge roll cyclingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the prompt, the author supports his idea poorly. The author is trying to prove his point that Venus is worth our time and resources to explore for some further insight to a planet close to us. While this topic is interesting, it is unlikely. The author immediately tells you how harsh the planet is, not introducing it in a way that would make you think it is possible to explore. Then, after explaining the conditions, the author describes a few ways that we could try to research it, and these few ways are inefficient.\n\nBy telling us how the planet's surface is harsh and unforgiving immediately, the author presents the idea that it would be too hard to explore. The author even describes how not a single mission had lasted more than a few hours on the planet. After this description, they then try to prove to the audience that it is reasonable to research the planet further. Their argument is that since the planet is closest to us, it should be explored. While the planet does happen to be close and similar to earth, that gives us no reason to explore it. As said in the author's previous paragraph, the planet's conditions are inhabitable. The planet may at one point have been relatively similar to earth, but over time it has become completely different. This gives us a large reason to not want to further research this planet. The other argument that the author makes is how there are certain ways we could research the planet. One of said techniques of research is to have a \"blimp-like vehicle\" hover around 30 miles above the planet. While this idea sounds interesting in thought, there are many problems with it. In this paragraph, they describe why they think their idea would work. They think that we could develop this vehicle to resist the 170 degree temperature and air pressure similar to that of the ocean, not to mention radiation. With our current technology, it is plausable that this vehicle could be created. Plausable, however, does not mean we can. We would not only have to develop a type of airship that could resist temperatures of 170 degrees and keep it's crew from overheating, but we would also have to make it resistant to high pressure comparable to the ocean, something we see with submarines. The reason why this alone is a huge problem is because we only see submarines underwater, not 30 miles above the surface of a planet. To be able to make something that can resist high pressure, high temperature, and be able to have enough fuel to stabalize itself, is beyond our current technology.\n\nThe author has reason to want to explore Venus. As a race, we naturally want to explore, but some things we just can not. If conditions were to better over years, this idea may be considered once again, but as of now, it does not seem to be possible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argue that it is impossible for developing countries to further develop without damaging the environment. In their opinion, economic growth should be the first priority of the government. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, economic growth is important, but it cannot be at the expense of the environment.\n\n\nTo commence with, when nations develop, they will require more resources. For example, developing countries like India and China need more fuel to power their growth. To explain, excessive consumption of fossil fuels, unfortunately, leads to the emission of carbon dioxide and accelerates the rate of global warming. Countries could better handle this problem if they start developing sustainable sources of energy.\n\nAnother point to consider is that, all countries should invest in green and clean energy sources. For example, in nations lying on either side of the equator there is considerable potential for harnessing solar energy. Countries that produce excess amount of green energy can sell it to other countries. Rich nations that are technologically and scientifically more advanced should share the newer and greener technologies with poor and developing nations for a better tomorrow.\n\nFinally, Environmental problems are not limited to any particular country and it is foolish to claim that only those nations that pollute should do something about it. Before long, the impact of pollution caused by rapidly developing nations will also be felt in the developed world.\n\nTo conclude, since our survival depends on the environment, we cannot ignore environmental problems on the pretext that they are a byproduct of development. Of course, there is a need for development, but it is time we said no to developing nations will also be felt in the developed world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The engineers constructors Empire State Building definitely faced large overwhelming complications trying build allow dockings dirigibles blimps First original plan right bat modify building found actual height another building taller come something fast fix Secondly Hindenburg disaster realized dangerous zeppelins fly urban areas put law whole idea basically tossed And make matters worse violent gusts air updrafts would nt make docking Empire State Building safe passengersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The problem of whether or not some countries should establish sports facilities for achieving a good range in the sports industry has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that creating a building specialised facilities is necessary for people, I claim that it would have a positive impact on the development of sports skills and keeping a healthy lifestyle for all dwellers. \r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why allocating money to sports construction is a useful decision for all countries. One of them is that sports facilities would be affordable for everyone. Sometimes people can't allow buying a subscription to a gym or activity circle. It would be a great contribution to maintaining an active lifestyle. Another cogent reason is advancing some talents among the young generation. This phenomenon could prepare sportsmen for different kinds of international competitions. For instance, according to the statistics of the Worldwide Sports Community the countries which support and promote sports buildings for citizens have special respect on a national rank. \r\n\r\nI personally believe that establishing specialised equipment is relatively positive for several reasons with the main one being that it extends longevity. In addition, the promotion and propaganda of sports objects can lead to plummeting in smoking and an addicted population. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, establishing and improving this kind of activity would lead to positive effects. Nevertheless, recognizing the importance of this irreplaceable part of social structure, it is advisable to encourage the government to be more generous to their dwellers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closet planet to the sun. Although Venus is distant and safe vantage point of Earth, it is a challenging planet for humans to study. The author suggests that studying Venus is worth exploring but its dangerous. Venus has dangerous conditions and extreme tempretures\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it is the most earth like planet in our solar system. The text states \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This quote shows how Venus has earth features and scientists want to learn more.\n\nVenus has extreme tempretures which make it difficult for scientist to get information. The text states \"therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\". This quotes explains how Venus is worth exploring despite the risks.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is worthy studying despite the risks. Earth and beyonds shoulds not be limited by dangers. Curiosity can lead us to new things.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author many moods memoir One moods happy A cuban feast always filled air scent music life Love This quote shows happy Another mood grateful I always grateful parents love sacrifice This proves grateful These authors mood memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist several ways First rolling hills make hard pedal land Flat road replaced short rolling hills shows terrain changing difficult course One long crippling hill also shows hills effect cyclist Another feature setting desert high temperatures This caused cyclist become dehydrated Trying keep balance dehydrated state I could drop heatstroke show hot cyclist One final feature effect cyclist old abandoned factory The sight boy refreshing glass juice makes cyclist lose hope doubts survive I hung head abandoned factory juices dreams tell cyclist lost hope sight building All features setting negative affects cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In parallel with the incredible development of technology, online curriculum is gradually replacing the face-to-face classes. Personally, although this movement has some negative impacts on students, I am still more inclined towards the benefits that it can bring to the learners.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, offering distance education has some vital downsides. Frist, when taking part in this study method, students may suffer from the lack of virtual interaction with teachers and peers. Due to this reason, they may hardly broaden their knowledge, seek for further advice or supports from the others, especially in cases they get stuck with confusing information. Second, learning online require a lot of self-disciplines if students want to complete all the tasks of the courses on time because of various distraction coming from surrounding environment such as noise pollution, the unstable Internet connection or even the temptation of games or social media.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, from my perspective, the benefit of delivering the online program brings more pros outweighing cons. It provides students with the more flexible and cost-saving lessons which do not require the students to pay school facilities fees. Furthermore, by this type of education, learners can easily access to whatever programs they prefer without the barrier of geographical distance or the lack of time due to work while studying. They can also proactively adjust the time schedule and the pace of study to balance it with other essential activities, for instance, the time for caring family members, doing exercise or even entertainment. It helps student remain not only their learning motivation but also their physical and mental health by preventing them from overload, stress or depression. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having online course to choose at almost universities benefits students in various ways. Despite the occurrence of some drawbacks, I believe they could be soon accounted for basing on the development of technological tools teacher can use to support their main lectures such as real-time chatting app or team meeting software.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views on success in life. While many people argue that good plan management skills are the most important element to success in life, others believe that other factors, such as fortune and hard work, are more important. This essay will discuss both views in detail.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are several reasons why people might think that having good time management skills is important. Firstly, good planning skills lead to people's lives being more organized. This is because being able to plan everything well helps people to know what to prioritise in their daily lives. This ensures that everything is under their control, meaning their lives would not drift in directions that they might not expect. As a result, their work efficiencies could improve significantly. Secondly, good plan management skill is a key factor to achieve a work-life balance. People with the ability to plan things well tend to know how to allocate their time in a more organized way. This means that they might have more time to care for themselves and their beloved ones, strengthening their family bonds. This could positively improve their mental health.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, good time management skills would mean nothing if one is not hardworking enough to pursue the scheduled plan. As a result, the planned schedule would stay as a plan that is never completed. In other words, time management skills would be meaningless without hardworkingness. Moreover, hard work with determination will prepare people for their later lives when they are involved in the labour force.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while having good plan management skills is important, other factors such as hard work can not be neglected.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If I was asked to go for driverless cars or against it, I would be against it. Yes I know we're at the point when technology is used for everything, but I believe that the use of technology can be harmful to us. I'll give you four reasons why I am against driverless cars. It will affect our skills about cars, how it's function. Second, teenagers or anyone won't learn how to drive. Third, it might be dangerous because of the weather. Fourth, the driving laws can be changed.\n\nIf we had driverless cars, how are we going to learn or know about them? We can't always learn from technology. There is going to be new engines and everything, but I bet we can't learn about it that quickly. It took more than 60 years to understand this cars. We cant just throw all that away.\n\nHow are we going to teach teenagers how to drive if we have driverless cars? We won't be teaching them nothing, except to just put itself to drive. I bet teenagers want to learn how to drive on their own or from their parents, without the use of technology.\n\nThe weather can cause many destructions. If your car is destroyed because of the weather, you are able to fix it with different parts. It may be expensive, but imagine the new technologySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think its possible for a computer to create an emotional expression of a human face? A software created by professor Thomas Huang, of the Beckman institute for Advance Science at the University of Illinois, which allows a computer to create an actual emotional expression of a person. The whole idea of a computer to create emotional expressions would be benifical to use in different arts like entertainment, artificial inteligence, and even posible to save lifes.\n\nUsing the computer software could be used to create facial animation for entertainment like movies. This coding system would be perfect for movies when trying to make a giant fictional beast to life with real facial movement. The Facial Action Coding System would not just work only for the big screen movies, but as well for video games. Games themselves are created entirely in 3-D models in the computer, for the facial software to make facial animation for the characters to make them even more real.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be great for make a new block-buster movie or a new hit video game, but it could help led the way for potentially creating a new system ofSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA. The United States form of a dominating space academy. The Viking 1, was in fact NASA's spacecraft that was launched in 2001. The spacecraft was set course for the small, red planet that is simillar to Earth. The planet is called Mars. Viking 1's \"sister\" Viking 2 was supposed to be landing on Mars, and that's why Viking 1 was sent up in space to begin with. While Viking 1 was snapping photos, its camera picked up a weird face-like structure on the surface of Mars. Some believe its a mysterious face that \"so called aliens\" built. I believe that their reasoning is just a bunch of garbage. What I think that is, is just a simple and natural landform made by the underground volcanoes, sandy surface, and rocks that landed there.\n\nOne reason I believe that this is a natural landform is from looking at the photos. The \"face\" isn't any perticular shape that any man or alien would want. The landform would be shaped as a circle, square or any other simple shape, and it would not be so ridgid and cracked. If you were to look at the photo furthest to the left, you would assume that it resembled a face, but If you compair that photo to the one taken twenty-five years later, you would begin to understand that to photo was out-dated and that the camera was not as clear as the one taken later. In addition, why would an alien make a structure of a human's face.\n\nThat part of the theory makes more sense if you take into consideration the angle the camera could have been taken at. Notice photo two? Its seems to be taken at an angle where there looks like there is a small mountain range looming over the rest of the area. This is key evidence explaining how this is just a natural landmark on Mars.\n\nIf you still do not believe me, then this next part will. If you think about it, why would NASA keep an amazing discover like this a secret? The answer is that they would not. If NASA went worldwide with their \"face\" they would make more money than millionaires or even other space academies. It does not make sense that the academy would keep an alien encounter hidden.\n\nIn conclusion, NASA is either brave or very stupid not to tell people about their \"face\", or people just want to get their word out to make other people critisized, make other people feel stupid, or they just want to feel like they are correct when they are clearly not. Therefore; This \"so called face\" is not a face, but it is just a land mark that was naturally constructed by the elements and not alien life-forms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think that we should keep the Electoral College. By keeping the Electoral College, there will be no problems in elections to where no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. The process is like a \"winner-take-all\" system. In the Electoral College a presidental candidate must have trans-regional appeal.\n\nTo begin, there are run-off elections. Run-off elections will make sure that no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast. The Electorial College will help make it clearer to see which candidate is the winner. For an example in 1992 Clinton had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, then won a majority in the Electoral College.\n\nNext, the Electoral College has a \"winner-take-all\" process. States such as Florida (29), Texas (38) and California (55) have a high amount of electoral votes. If there was a tie between two candidates and the votes from Florida were not put in yet, one of the candidates has a better chance of winning. Most candidates will try to persuade and win the higher states votes so that they will have a better chance of winninig. What's nice about the Electoral College, it causes the toss-up states to pay close attention the the campaign.\n\nFinally, every candidate running for office must have a trans-regional appeal. None of the regions in the United States has enough electoral votes to elect the new president. When a canidate goes and campains in one region without thinking about he will not gain his electoral votes. Normally a candidate that has only regional appeal will be unlikely to be a successful president.\n\nTo conclude, the choice of keeping the Electoral College would very very wise and helpful. The Electoral College makes sure that there are run-off elections, it has a \"winner-take-all\" system, and that every canidadte running should be trans-regional. Even though in the Electoral College is not democratic and that only a slate of electors vote, a decent amount of times of when the people would pick that one candidate the electors would pick the same one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a car that could drive its self sounds amazing. It could change the whole world if you can just sit in a car and not do anything to get to your destination. Who would not want to have a car that could drive its self. A car that could do that would be pretty amazing, but would it be safe?\n\nI would have to be against the development of self driven cars. It would be nice to have a self driven car, but it would be safer to drive it yourself. There are many things that could be bad about a self driven. For starters, how much would it cost? I imagine it would be expensive because of all the things the car is going to have. Many times electronic divices sometimes come defective. So a self driven car would probably have those defects.\n\nSafety would probably be the biggest issue. In the article it says that most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. The article brings up a good question,\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer? Developing self driven cars would just bring more conflict and won't make driving safer for people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many conspiracies that the face was created by aliens but none of those conspiracies have evidence to back them up.From most information scientists have gathered they collected the information that it was just a natural landform. There is no evidential proof that aliens even exsist and many other things in space are created by natural landforms.When the web surfers surfed the web thet foiund the JPL image and it \"revealed that it ewas a natural lanform.There was no alien monument after all.\" There was also very similar rocks in the Amerucan West that formed naturally as well and that showed the the space rock can be formed the same way the other rocks were formed. As Garvin says in the article \"it reminds me most of Middle Buttle in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" This means that this is not the only rock and there are other very similar one's that's why it is percieved to be a natural landform because if it was formed by aliens how did they do it very similar to the other's?\"If it looks like the other one's that it is easier to say that it is a natural landform. Not that it is just easy to say but the aliens theory is just not as thought out nor' does it give as much fatual evidence as the real reason which is in fact that the \"Face of Mars.\" is createc by natural landforms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I read the passage I think Luke really wanted to do something good for the world or in other words, help others in need. If Luke wanted to tell someone to join the Seagoing Cowboys then he would want to in include the feeling he felt after seeing how much better people started doing after they helped them. He would probibaly also include that when they were done transporting the animals they got to go sight seeing and he would tell the person he ws trying to convince to join the Seagoing Cowboys that he got to go to/see Europe and China, he got to see Acropolis in Greece, he also would say he got to take a gondola ride in Vinice, Italy, with streets of water, and he also got to tour an excacated castle in Crete. I think Luke would have a great attitude and he would want more people to meet. Luke was very good at seeing hope for everything and he had good reasons on why someone should join the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, the technology has helped people to communicate with others through the means of social applications, and update them with recent events. In my opinion, the advantage of technology outweigh the drawbacks.\r\n\r\nIn the contemporary era, the advancement of technology has made it possible for individuals to interest with the people they know. It was not possible in the past as letter and telephone were the only means to communicate. A letter may sometime take months to reach the receiver address and calls on mobile-phones were expensive that people in lower-income groups cannot afford. The development in Information Technology and the Internet has made it viable and economical. For instance, social applications are pre-installed on the phone, which enables a person to interact with the other user registered on social website. Some people argue that because of this advancement people are not interacting face-to-face; however, it would be difficult for individuals who are a thousand miles away from each other. \r\n\r\nSecondly, a person may now has access to different newspapers and magazines around the world, which may provide informations about current events. This is because of digital media and availability of electronic papers. It has benefitted largely to businessman and investors having keen interest in the international market. For example, a stock broker, established in India, may purchase or sell a stock in the UK by accessing the current news of the country. Furthermore, it has also benefited people who adulate celebrities and sports-person, as they may be updated about the sporting events. People may argue that digital newspaper cannot be accessed by people who are unaware of using latest technologies; in contrast, the printed paper are still unavailable. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are few drawbacks of technology, the world has largely benefitted as it has made possible for people, around the world, to interact with each other regardless of their geographic locations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" is about a man named Luke. Luke first started out working two part-time jobs at a grocery store and at a bank. Then his friend Don invited Luke to go on a cattle boat ride to Europe, but Luke couldn't say no.\n\nThen the reason Luke started to work with the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" because he wanted to help the people with their cattles, horses, and mules. Also to help countries recover their food supples, animals, and more, 44 nations joined to help to form UNRRA. Luke also join to travel across the ocean and se new places too.\n\nThen Luke work hard to feed the cattle, horses, and mules twice or three times a day, Luke started to work hard by bring up bales of hay and bring bags of oats from the lower holds of the ship to feed the cattle, horses, and mules everyday, and cleaning the stalls for the aniamls to comfortable when the animals are on the ship. Then on one rainy night after Luke made his hour report to the captain. He slipped on the leader and landed on his backside, but he was stopped by a small strip of metal on the edge to keep him from flying overboard. Luke broke his ribs and could not work for a couple days to his engary.\n\nIn conclusion Luke and other people had a hard life during the year that they had, but they still had a good life during the year with their families and friend that are there to support you no matter what happenes during those year they had together.Also you should always work hard to complete your goals in life like Luke did in the story. When Luke completed his goals he got the best out it and he was happy all his life and his dream came ture to be a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" because he worked hard with the cattle, horses, and mules by getting them to places the animals need to go.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental problems, for instance, water, air and sound pollution are giving government great pressure as it deteriorates the people’s health and decrease the country’s reputation in the world. It is considered by some that governments should raise the price of fuel for transport to eliminate the environmental problems. In my opinion, I disagree that rise in cost of fuel is an effective solution. However, I believe that there are other better and long term solution such as using renewable energy and improving public transportation.\n\n Raising the fuel price will only be a short term solution because people will continue the use of transportation as there are no other viable options to run the vehicles. In fact, people will eventually accept the high fuel price for their own convenience to travel everywhere they wish with their own car. Besides, due to increase in petrol price, the transportation costs increase causing price of goods to rise, creating a detrimental domino effect in economy and increase the people’s burden. For example, shipping fee for online shopping which is free before, now is charged due to higher transportation cost.\n\n On the other hand, I believe that a more effective long term solution is using the more sustainable energy such as solar energy, hydropower and wind energy to run both private and public transport which emission of harmful gases, for example, carbon monoxide and sulphur dioxide which contributes to deteriorating of air pollution. Furthermore, vehicles using renewable energy often engines produce lesser noise which can enhance the sound pollution. Government should take actions in improving public transport to engage people to use as well as older transports usually are not eco-friendly.\n\n In conclusion, increasing the price of fuel is not the best way to resolve the environmental pollutions. Thus, I believe that use of the sustainable energy and new, high quality public transport can significantly improve the environmental problems.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars are an innovative technology that is exciting because it demonstrates how technologically advanced we are becoming as a society. The idea of a person being able to sit back and relax while their car drives them to their destination is disirable; although, it is impractical. In this case the negatives outweigh the positives, and that's what I'll be analyzing in this essay.\n\nThe United States obesity rate is higher than practically any other country, due to the tipical, American, sedentary lifestyle. Driving a car requires almost no physical capability what so ever, because it's essentially sitting in a chair, and using your hands and feet to control the vehicle, and this should'nt be too difficult of a task for an able-bodied person to do. By people having their own personal computerized taxis drive them around, this only furthers the lazyness of not only Americans, but most of the western world as well.\n\nModern technology is an amazing thing, except it can be unreliable. Electronic devices malfunction all the time so there is a possibility that a driverless car could as well, but the consiquences could be much more fatal given the fact that a car can easily cause harm to people inside or outside of it. If someone whos self driving car ran into another car or a pedestrian without their control, who would be blamed? It wouldn't be fair to charge the person sitting in the car, because they had no control over what their car was doing; however, the victim of the accident needs to be compensated in some sort of way. This exact point was brought up in paragraph 9 of the article, and they reached no verdict on what would happen in that scenario.\n\nThere would be problems with the traffic laws that are put in place right now, because \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" (paragraph 9) laws would need to be changed in order to include driverless cars, and this would be an inconvience to the every day citizens. And the article never specified weather or not these cars would be programmed to only go the speed limit, or to flow with traffic, so there could be driverless cars cause traffic jams or they could be driving to reckless for some people's liking.\n\nWith all of this said, driverless cars, in theory, sound like a technological breakthrough that will make everyday life easier ; however, there are too many possible implications that exist, so until these problems are solved, self driving cars can not become prevalent in today's society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I strongly believe that we have found something on mars and that it is just a natural landform. Their are many ways people can take this matter but since I am a scientist at NASA I can tell you what really happened. People may or may not believe me but I know what happened and I hope that you can listen to what I have to say. Aliens in my opinion are not real and I strongly think that they only way that a face would be on Mars is by a rock formation that happened.\n\nWhen we looked at the pictures that they found of the rock formation there we saw a head,nose,and a mouth but ther were also formed by shadows. Then came Mars Blobal Surveyor and helped out and got more pictures from the rock. They got pictures that were ten times sharper then the orginal pictures. After all they concluded that there was no alienen moument at all and that is was made out of rock.\n\nThe people thought that it was a alien moument and got frustrated and that we were wrong. Of course there had been things about it on tv shows and radio talked and maybe even in grocery stores. You might think that we wnated to hide from what we saw because it wasn't what we would have hoped for. The truth is that we didn't want to make up something that wasn't real because then everybody would believe that and then it would be also bad for NASA. NASA goes into outer space and we find stuff that we haven't known about and that interests us and makes us what to go out there more.\n\nWhen people then make up things about hiding it they only think about what people around them that are saying. They don't go up to space and they don't see what we see in space. Even if there were life we would share that but lieing to people about life in Mars is not right. It's not fair for people to think that their is life just because we saw a face. We even had help from other people to help us. They helped us with the pictures and with those pictures we could also tell there wasn't life.\n\nI concluede that what we have found is real and that there was only a rock foundation. We don't want people believeing that wrong thing and for NASA then that also would be bad because then we couldn't discover all new things that we found to everyone. I hope that I have convinced you why there wasn't an alien monument but just a rock formation from Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view the seagoing cowboys program is great. it's becuase you learn new some inpornt tips and skills. it theches you thing. like how skills you'll need later on in life. after you make nine trips you'll be ready to get drafted to the military. when you get ready to go to the military they tell things that you'll going to need there. They helped luke prepare for hard work. on your second trip you serve as a nightman. luke loved being on board because all the wonderful and fun things they do.\n\nIt opens up the to you. you will ride in a cattle boat every where you go. you will learn how to servie in the pacific war. you will broad a lot of different boats. you have to maked nine copmte trips before you can be drafted to military or the army. They have a lot of tools and skills that you will need when the program ends. in the program it takes a lot of hard work and you need to be strong because you have to lift a of boxes. you will glad that you went when the program is over.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart sheds light on how employment rates of each gender changed from 1995 to 2005 in six nations: Australia, Switzerland, Iceland, Britain, New Zealand and the United States.\nOverall, there are mainly two trends suggested by this diagram. First, the employment rates of males were higher than those of females in both 1995 and 2005 across all six countries. Second, this period witnessed an increase in the employment rates of both genders in all countries.\nAs shown in this graph, the large gender gap of employment took place in Iceland, Australia and New Zealand where the difference of employment percentage between males and females reached approximately 30% in both 1995 and 2005. In the other countries, the difference was between 10% and 15%.\nIt is also apparent that an increase of around 10%-15% in employment proportions appeared in each gender across all nations, especially in Australia where the percentage of employed men rose from about 56% to 70% while that of employed women went up from nearly 26% to 38%.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the so called face is just a natural landform. It is just a mountain with shadows that create an illusion of a face. In the very first picture of this landform it was very blurry, now cameras has evolved so now it is clear.\n\nNASA wanted to figure out if this was a ancient face or an regular landform. So , 22 years later NASA went back to Mars to figure out what this landform is. With the technology NASA have they took pictures of the landform and they found out it was just a regular landform.\n\nNASA wanted to do a double-check so in 2001 they took some more pictures. Now the pictures came out more clear than the last picture in 1998. Then NASA proved once again that it was just a natural landform.\n\nThose are the reasons why that it is a natural landform. It was proved twice and the pictures were accurate, 3 times better the vision the last time they took a photo. Even with all the evidence some still believe that it is an acient Egyptian pharoh face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a wothy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nVenus is a planet from our solar system is simple to see from the distant, exploring venus is a challenge because present dangers. Numerous factors contribute to Venus' s reputation. More challeging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphera; NASA is working to studying Venus.\n\nFirst, \"Venus, sometimes called the \" Evening Star, is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot\" because is simple to see from the distant. \"it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\" ; exploring venus present dangers because is a planet close to sun.\n\nSecond, numerous factors contribute to Venu's reputation for study to humans.\"often reffered to as Earth's \"twin\" because venus is closest to Earth in differents factors like density, size and sometimes in distances too.\n\nThird, \" Even more challenging are the couds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venu's athmosphere\" because their conditions are extreme to humans on Earth. High pressure, geology and weather present additional impediments to see:\n\nnaturals reactions like erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and this make difficult to study venu's. NASA is working to studying Venus and they try differents things using materials with differents elements to see how reaction each one for example; \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tasted in a chamber simulating the chaos of venu's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such contions.\"\n\nIn conclusion, really exploring Venus is a difficult challenge because differents factors are impidiments to humans to study close. weather, high temperatures and geology is not a good help to know more about venus because not reaction like on others planets like Earth. Actually NASA is trying and trying differents projects with simple electronics in our life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the idea of driverless cars appeals to many, is it really practical for modern day America? Sergey Brin has proposed and imagined this utopian idea. The creation of these seeming easy cars would actually make everyones life harder, not only on the roads, but in the court rooms as well. These cars would obviously be extremly costly to make, and would put stress on all tax payers if roads were to be remodeled. The idea of driverless cars is impractical and shouldn't be taken seriously.\n\nThere is a quote that states, \"Be careful what you wish for becuase you just might get it.\" What this quote boils down to is that as much as one might want something that aesthetically pleases them, it may turn around to be a truly awful mistake. Driverless cars cause more trouble then they are worth. A prime example would be, if a driverless car were to be made, having to switch the roads and the designs of them. Tax payers already pay for the seemingly never ending road repair, let along new roads for cars that arent even a necessity. Many engineers at Berkeley attempted to use magnets in driverless cars that could read in binary code. They discovered there needed to be grotesque and expensive changes to pre existing roads, making the whole ordeal impractical. After realizing that roads were too hard to deal with, money wise, Google tried to make cars that were smarter. With all of the upgrades required to make a smarter car, the cost of the driverless car wouldn't be fathomable. How are people supposed to drive cars when they cost too much to own and take care of?\n\nAnother huge problem with the new cars is whither a human in the \"driver seat\" would be assisting or driving. If a car could go forward on its own, but can't drive under certain conditions, how is it really a driverless car? If a person in the car were to fall asleep while being drove by the car, then there were to be an accident that the car couldn't handle, how would the car alert the person it was time to drive. There is a big reason as to why people dont hop out of bed and into a car. The brain needs time to adjust and wake up before attempting a process that can quite legitimately kill people. A single car accident can kill many people. Pretending that driverless cars are a toy isn't an option. People with health problems wouldn't find a driverless cars helpful either. Awareness of people who cant feel vibrations, cannot hear, and cannot see, would all be in danger riding in this type of car. Without being in control of the wheel and acceleration at all times reduces the feeling of needing to be alert in the car, causing more careless accidents that could have been avoided if the car had an alert and ready driver.\n\nIf one of these careless accidents were to happen, who would be to blame? With the idea of driverless cars, sprialing and time consuming court cases come along. When accidents happen, usually the two drivers are taken to court, with the exception of car recall cases. When two driverless get in an accident it leaves the question as to why two, in fact driverless cars, would hit each other. This also brings up the question as to if they are even driverless cars. A driverless car would technically have to be driverless and not need a human assistant to run properly. Thus saying, more car companys are more likely to get sued in the court of law for murder, vehicular manslaughter, and many other charges most car companies don't get hit with using regular cars.\n\nAnother pretty famous quote states, \"If it's not broke, don't fix it.\" Today's cars are fully functional and drive almost perfectly on the roads we have now. To switch the great thing that is going on now would be useless. In this economy, America does not have money to throw around. To mass produce driverless cars is and forever will be unconventionally excessive. In order to save time, to save money, and save citizens from dreaded jury duties, driverless cars should remain in the movies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the technology to read the emotion expression of the students in the classroom is valueable. It can show how people really feel and waht types of emotions they have at that time. This can aslo help people when they are drawing pictures to see what moods they have in their pictures .Yes I think that this well be helpful this can help people in the further when they are making pictures and they want the picture to have a certain mood.\n\nOne good example that they use in the storie would have to be when they tell about the that the \"Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy , 9 perecent disgusted , 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" I think that can come to good use like how do they know all of this form one picture. An how can this one 3-D computer do all of this on a picture . How can the computer tell the model of your face and how can they tell all 44 major muscles in in your body . They also tell how you can do is your self by looking in the mirror . An thy give you you the steps to try it out youself and what you need to do. I think that this computer is going to be good use for people thta studie pictures for a living it can tell them thing that they would not be able to see with there eyes. The storie tells about the muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus and what it dose to the picture . An you cant do this on your computer at home and that it wont be able to handle it .An your facial muscles not only expresses emotions.\n\nIn conclusion I think that this would be good to have in a class room setting. I thin that this would rely help people that want study this kind of thing in collage . An it would be as geat idea to put it in schools so that they can start when they are in school and it can help them if thats what they want to do they get done with school. I that this 3-D computer will come in good uses on other old pictuers to tell the mood in the pictures.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some controversial ideas heating a debate over the fact that some people claim the state’s coffers should be invested in different fields which have more advantages for society rather than being allocated on space exploration. While this thinking is valid to some extent, I would contend that astronomy is instrumental for society in this day of age.\n\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, space traveling plays a paramount significant role in addressing the earth crisis. With the explosion of population and an ever-increasing demand for a place to live, humans exacerbate environmental degradation by chopping down the forest for new buildings. Hence, imbalanced diversity, floods, earthquakes occur everywhere and are becoming more severe. By exploring space, people can have a firm grasp of university and other constellations which can allow people to settle in to tackle this alarming problem. Mar and moon exploration can be cited as a convincing and underlying example. Although those may not gain any fruitful achievements, they open humans to a new world where a new earth is a potential scenario.\n\nWhile the redeeming feature of space exploration is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if that of public services such as medical care is ignored. Evidently, the government’s investment in healthcare systems is of essence. In fact, a large number of people currently suffer from serious diseases due to criminally expensive prices of medical systems, thus, they may well be a burden to the community. Therefore, by cashing on the healthcare system to make it more affordable, people can enhance their health and be able to participate in the labour market, directly contributing to national prosperity.\n\nTo sum up, it is indisputable that space trails might positively impact on solving the environmental deterioration in quality. Nevertheless, it would be unreasonable to invest all money in space travelling and neglect other fields like healthcare systemsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear press I believe computers terrible impact society reason I believe true kids go braindead people call Also kids get obese witch already greatly growing process The last reason kids get bad eye sight The first reason I believe computers bad impact society kids sit eat computer get addiction keep getting fatter ar nt getting exercise This problem children getting fat already brought topic something like s going get better time soon Studies show kids computer hour half day actually going braindead This means becomes new trend kids next generation smart wo nt able keep countries fall behind something trend setting issue want country stay one piece The last least reason kids forming bad eye sight This also bad future generations If let catch generation need glasses almost like domino effect These reasons computers bad impact society kids get obese go braindead develop bad eye sightSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using the Facial Action Coding System would not be valuable. It wouldnt be valuable because what ever the coding system can see the teacher can see, you can use the money on something else, and what if it does not work.\n\nUsing the Facial Action coding System would not be valuable because it can not tell facial actions better than a teacher. A teacher is human and has emotions so a teacher can look at a face and see if anything id wrong with the student. And if the student is trying to hide how they feel sometimes humans can see that too but would the coding system beable to? I don't think so. Thats why they should use the money to create this on something else.\n\nUsing the money on something else is the way to go here because the coding system would not be useful at all. Schools can use that money on so many other things that will actually make a difference. Like maybe things in the school need repairing or new computors. The money could also be used for new textbooks that teachers can teach out of. Plus what if these machienes don't actually work the way they are supposed to.\n\nIf the Facial Action Coding System doesn't opperate like it is supposed to then that would mean we would have to fix it. Not any old repair man can fix this complex machien. so that would mean it would take a long time to fix it because a special repair guy from like the company or something has to send someone over to fix it. That could take weeks and that would mean the coding system is losing it's value because it is not doing what it needs to do. Like they say time is money right.\n\nSo in coclusion the Facial Action Coding System would not be valuable because the teacher can do the same thing, it would be a waste of money, and if it breaks down and needs to be fixed who is going to fix it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be very effeiciant. There are many pros to having them and it would be very beneficial for many reasons.\n\nLike Sergey Brin said, these cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis. Since we're already started to run out on this fuel, having these types of cars would benefit us very greatly. If self driving cars could get better alerts for when the driver needs to do something, it would be easier for people to multi task as well. Self driving cars would also be better, because less crashes would happen. From the text, sensors can cause the car to apply brakes and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response than a human driver could manage. More improvememnts could make driving much more safer.\n\nAlthough the self drivng cars are not completly driverless now, it would be very possible to do so with funding. If it were possible to make a car completely driverless, there would not be so much doubt about them. There would also be much more safety. Self driving cars would be very reliable. If it is possible to have them by 2020, a lot could change about transportation.\n\nDriverless cars would definitely benefit people today. It seems like a very possible idea. Although there are some flaws about it now, it could definitely happen in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" when it is no star at all. Venus is a planet right next to Earth. The author provides examples of the advantages of exploring Venus such as getting a better understanding of Venus, its the closest planet to Earth, and its the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. The author believes a worthy pursuit is to study Venus despite the dangers it poses.\n\nFirst of all, exploring Venus would give us a better understanding of this planet and why it is important we study it. On the planet surface of Venus the tempertures average over 800 degrees, and because of the dense atmosphere most forms of light cannot be penetrated. In the article it states, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astromomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system...recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" With the author adding this in his article it proves that studying Venus could benefit the human race in the long run.\n\nSecond of all, Venus is the closest planet to Earth. This gives Earth advantages of being able to send out a spacecraft to land on Venus. The article says, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too, Eath, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner...humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world.\" With this in the article it shows that being able to send out spacecraft to Venus expands the curiosity and imagination of scientists wanting to explore Venus.\n\nFinally, Venus is the most Earth- like planet in the solar system. In the artice it describes, \"Long ago, Venus was provably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Eath. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This proves that Venus could of been just like Earth today.\n\nIn conclusion, the authors suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despute the dangers it presents. The author gives us evidence of why its important such as, we would expand our understanding of Venus, it is the closest planet to Earth, and its the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. There is no garantee that the study of Venus will continue, but there are many reasons why it should.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thinck for the emotional things of the technology is kind of more advanced like every moment they do something different they always have to make a digital and some other people don't really get about the digital things they get lose really easlly and for some other people is more likely an easy thing to do but not always because it has their difficulties and they are challenging so they have to do it right or they will mess up the photo, and theirs a conclusion about this and is kind of creepy that now computer can easlly detect the movement of our facil guess what they mean like emotions and other things that's on our faces but i think it helps people to understand how things work and how our selfs are doing if their mad, sad, happy etc. there is better ways for humans and computers to communicate not only by facial recognizing, all the software of all the people are different and computers softwarre is just way different then humans it just takes time to figure this out quickly. things can actually change from good to sometimes bad and it's not the way to show their expresion that has been having by the other kind of people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way they used there evidence have a lot of good points and details to support what they're talking about. If we can leran how to get sanppuls from Venus and know how to get it back in it old frome maybe one day some of us could can live on it.\n\nHow the author supports there idea is base off the facts of there little articaol is that Venus used to be like a twin to are Earth. So that could mean there used to be living organisum on the used to be twin planet. But there is a way to study it. It just,chaillageing you see Venus is now an unfrogiveabul planet and gos thuoe hieh tepuchers hardly any of the technoulugy NASA sent there alot of them can't even last for atlest severl hrs. But theres still a chanes we can laran more about Venus. NASA evean sent some of us there just not too close to the planet or we will tran in to chinken nugats, and no one wasts that.\n\nWell base of what I said here my conclusion is that it is worth larning about Venus and even other planets. We need to know are soler systum... it going to be a challen, but we can do it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author grateful The mood grateful gives thanks parents For love sacrifice NUM This memoir based definition family Rodriguez explains Family means many things It means helping others accepting everyone parents giving life children could better one He recalls many people mother father help The people neighborhood related blood still family The courage selflessness parents leaving country start He tells admiration strength perseverance NUM There still way express gratitude NUM also states He forever grateful parents lessons formed lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that we could live in an unpredictable environment that results from global warming, whereas others argue that we should find a way to prevent climate change. I totally agree with the latter statement. In this essay, I will give reasons to support my opinion, including examples from my experience.\n\nFirstly, not only humans but also animals cannot survive in a harsh environment. Therefore, I think finding a way to live with it is wasting our time. In contrast, we should encourage communities to prevent climate change. For example, due to global warming, the weather is getting hotter. Consequently, some people in Africa are suffering from it, and some of them died because they could not bear the weather. Another good example is that one cannot live without animals and plants. If the ecosystem of plants is destroyed, it will affect animals. Unfortunately, humankind will get a negative impact as well.\n\nSecondly, even if protecting the environment requires huge efforts from communities globally, it will lead to a powerful impact and a last longer solution. For instance, dwellers in Australia are confronting with bushfires every year. Australia alone could not prevent this problem, as global warming needs cooperation from everyone. In addition, rising of the weather one degree Celsius may cause some animals extinctions. Nevertheless, societies could stop this issue by paying more attention to adjusting the way of living now, such as eliminating using plastic bags, reducing gas, etc.\n\nIn conclusion, people should immediately start to prevent climate change from today, since it will worsen in the future. Besides, I firmly agree that people should stop doing harmful things to nature because this is the only way to live longer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do exceed posted speed limit many features setting affect cyclist First beginning story says The sun beginning beat down temperature beginning rise really affected cyclist plenty water supply Next story says I travelling high deserts California June Californias temperature really high June one hottest months year The temperature high cyclist much water left This affecting cyclist tired hot getting dehydrated Finally end story terrains changing hills road smooth pavement dirt road hills making cyclist cycle harder go past making tired Also temperature still high barely water left By end ride setting roads temperature distance ride made cyclist exguasted dehydratedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are leading us more towards the furture, but would you really put your entire life in the \"hands\" of a vehicle. These cars wont be all the way perfect, they will have flaws in them. The following reasons are why I am againest the driverless cars.\n\nAs I said in the above paragraph, they will have flaws. The article states in paragraph 7 \"This necessitates the car to be ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" What if it fails to do so? Sensors could go out and fail to alert the driver in time and potentially cause a car accident. Sensors also wont be able to catch every tiny detail along the way. In paragraph 5 it says \"Those sensors had become more advanced to detect to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers\" It also says \" Furthur improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" Their are multiple situations where things happen and humans can't even see it quick enough. So why will machine sensors be able to?\n\nSergey sees a future with fleets of taxi cars driving themselves. Saying that \"The cars will use half the fuel of todays taxis.\" Cars stop working and break all the time. Many people know how to fix their own vehicles. Yet if you change the interior of the cars they wont know how to anymore. So when the car breaks they are going to have to spend more money on the car getting fixed then what the car is worth in the first place.\n\nIn paragraph 5 it says \"Sensors and computer hardware and software have made it possible for a safer way to drive and that can handle more driving tasks on there own.\" All the drivers will have to do is watch the road and when some thing like road construction comes about they will take over because the car will alert them of it. The cars wont be 100% driver less so as long as the driver stays alert any problem can be solved.\n\nDriverless cars are dangerous. This may be something that could be made and brought out into the world in my lifetime. Having driverless cars are dangerous\n\neven if there is actually a car in it. The possibility of having a car accident is high.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently many folks decide to give birth in old age due to financial independence and maturity to cope with the stress that comes with childbearing, thou infertility and congenital abnormalities are more in old age .The benefits are more than the disadvantages, I will expatiate on these in my upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples\r\n\r\n To begin with, older people are financial independence and they can face the financial challenges that come with childbearing without looking up to family and friends for assistance unlike the young folks and they will be able to give quality and adequate care needed for the children, more so they are physically, emotionally and psychologically mature to cope with the stress that comes with childbearing, their reproductive system to is mature for childbearing, moving on older folks are mature enough to ensure discipline and training of their children die to experience compared to younger ones.\r\n\r\n Furthermore, in as much there are benefits of giving birth at an older age, it comes with some challenges too, there is a high rate of infertility in older folks due to hormonal imbalance, also the level of congenital abnormality is common in people of older age compare to young folks and secondary infertility is another issue with old people too.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people decide to give birth in old age due to financial independence, maturity and adequate care which are necessary for childbearing and are lacking in younger people while the negative effects are infertility, and congenital abnormalities which are not common in young folks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On morning every one family members wake oclock Me brother sisters told mom can play labtop said sure guys wait others turn said ok played Each person one half hour play things I let brother sister play first Im oldder one I wait ptiencetly town Well turn wood take playing game things wold day done Or tomoro done That wold next play And thats I say I patience home respect brother sistersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced numerous obsticles attempting allow dirigibles dock One main concern dirigibles use hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen flammable If dirigible explode densely populated area would desasterous The greatest obstacle successful use building s mooring mast nature A mooring mast used docking airships dirigible zeppelin With large air crafts docking top building winds violently shifting dangerous back ship would swivel around mooring mast posing threat Dirigibles moored open land feilds could weighed lead weights With dirigible moored Empire State Building would dangle high pedestrians neither practicle Constructing Empire State Building challenges obsticles architects would hopedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In years past, the number of people interested in, and using cars around the world has dropped noticibly. A marked shift in the \"car culture of the world has occured, leaving many wondering what is tocome.  Limiting car usage has many positive aspects, such as saving money, that people tend to be less stressed when they do not drive as much, and reducing pollution and greenhouse emissions.\n\nOne of the many positive aspects of reducing car usage is that one will save money if ones car usage is reduced. In an article by Robert Duffer  called \"Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog,\" he says: \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were orderedto leave cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31).\" In Paris, car-owners were charged money for using cars on certain days. This was done in an effort to reduce traffic in the city. Another article that addresses this is \"The End of Car Culture\"\n\nby Elizabeth Rosenthal. She says: \"Part of teh explanation certainly lies in the recession,  because cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars...\" Cars are a costly thing, and many people cannot afford to put the money in to having and maintaining an automobile. Car cost so much,so reducing,or even eliminating usage will save anyone a great deal of money. This is one of the many advantages to limiting car usage.\n\nAntoher reason to limit car usage is that people tend to be less stressed,and more happy when they do not have a car to worry about. In \"The End of Car Culture\" by Elizabeth Rosenthal, she talks about Heidrun Walter, who say thatshe is actually much happier no w that she does not own a car,and that owning a car was very stressful. No one wants to be stressed,so why would people want to put themselves through the trouble of owning a car? Lowering car usage has been shown to reduce stress, which is a good thing for people, mentally and physically. Andrew Selsky also addressesthis in \"Car-free Day is Spinning Into a Big Hit in Bogota,\" where he says \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress.'\" As is outlined here, rducing car usage lowers stressin many people, which is definitely an advantage.\n\nReducing polution and greenhouse gas emissions is another advantage of limiting car usage. carscreated emissions dangerous to the environment, so reducing usage will have a positive effect on the environment. In \"Car-free Day is Spinning Into a Big Hit in Bogota,\" Andrew Selsky discusses the mayor of Bogota, Colombia's descicion to have a day free of cars in the city. \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" In Bogota, as in most cities, smog from car pollution is wide-spread. Lowering car usage lowers the levels of polution and dangerous emissions in cities. A similar situation is outlined in Robert Duffer's \"Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog,\" he says \"After days of near-record polution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" This gives further evidence that reducing car usage will lower pollution and smog in cities around the world. Concurrently, Elizabeth Rosenthal, in her artilce \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" she says \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gass emisssions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" This provides further evidence that cars release an enormous amount of pollution, and usage must be lowered.\n\nLimtiting ones car usage has many positive consequences, some of these include saving money, reducing stress, and lowering polution levels. These are all great reasons to limit car usage, and many people are beginning to take hold of these advantages around the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie surrounding setting affected cyclist The setting somewhere outside Lodi California early summer The cyclist took advice old men led difficult places get As sun made things better water started deplete getting Yosemite much harder The cyclist traveling high deserts California June When terrain started change flat road rolling hills cyclist pushed even harder get destination The sun hot air dehydrated faster After traveling along crippling hill cyclist stop even tried sucking apebble effort take mind thirst When found habited store exhausted relieved Then features setting big effect cyclist The weather dehydrated terrain exhaustedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless care? Why do where really need them? Has it come to the point that us the human race is becoming so lazy that we can't even drive and navigat are own cars, that we need computers to drive them for us. In all reality the driverless car is a good idea and for people with disabilitys it would be a god sent for them, but for the comman people who are just so busy with texting or gaming to take time out of there life's to drive to some places that the wanted or needed to go to is a little much I feel. The car is more of a cruch to take the streets and boredome of driving away form the peopel that spend there life's fracking out bemuse they need to see every post on Instagram. There real is no need for that driving can be fun some times in boring in others but the normal person needs to learn who to deal with situations like that. Dr. Werner said that they inventers would have to interpret the fun of driving in new ways such as entertainment that would only stop went the \"driver\" of the car needed to step in and take control of the car. The fact that the inventers would have to find something for the driver to but attention in to is odd to me they should still have to focus on the road even if they aren't driving. The added ditrations aren't needed really they just become more of a negative for everyone.\n\nThe positive aspects of the car are there and would be very binifecial to those who really need the help. It would only take minamle stranght, stratagy, and or skill for a handycap person who couldn't drive or need help driving for long distances, or even mentally disabled people who don't know what the are doing all of the time. Yes it would take a little knowledge to drive and work with the cars but it would make the lifes of thes people so much easier and convenient for them to have normal life's like the rest of the people who can drive.\n\nBut as for the people who just want to have these cars for fun or because they seam fun or cool at the time those people would only have a negative impact on mine and many others view of this. Those people who get the car to just not have to learn how to drive or that are to busy to drive them self are what makes this idea bad. I actually loved learning how to drive, yes it was hard and teddies but in the end it gave me some skills that i wouldn't have ever learn by texting or playing games on my phone. I may speak out of my zone because I am not handycaped but I feel that thoes people that are would love to have the chance to drive them selfs to be independent and not need the help if they really didn't need it. There is other down sides but not only the laziness of the people who have the cars but who would take the liability aspect of it. Who would be at fault if the car didn't work properly like they thought it would and it a acidity killed some one or really hurt that person? If they car never said hey lazy theres a problem and u need to take over would it be the company's fault for the error or would it be the driver who was playing games and not watching the road like they should have been the whole time?\n\nI feel the questions should never even be asked and the idea worked out and found better ways to make driving easy for thos who need it and for them it would change there life's for the better and not just for the people who don't feel like driving. This whole thang to me would just give another excus to all of the lazy people out there to be even more lazy. The idea of the car could only be a positive if it where made as a aid and not a inabliler for thoes who seek to find the easy way out of the situation every time they where but up to a challenge and or task that they didn't want. So, ask your self do you want to be apart of the slacking society or do you want to find the way to push forward with enventions that wouldn't make the population worse.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face on Mars\" is believed by you and other people to be created by aliens, Extra-Trerstrial beings from another planet. Given that Mars is a planet that has liquid water and has climate and weather just like Earth, I do not support this contriversy. here are a couple reasons why I think this and why I think you should believe me too.\n\nFirst, on May in 2001, NASA unveiled the image of the Face for all to see. The caption say it was a \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows making it look like eyes, a nose, and a mouth. Given I already stated that Mars is somewhat like Earth, Earth too has rock formations made by nature. some examples are the Grand Canyon, the Appalachian Mountains, and Mount Fuji. These rock formations on Earth were maybe caused by a volcanic eruption, an earthquake, or some type of natural disaster. maybe on Mars, those could hapen. Mars has sand storms powerful than any blizzard. It may cause some sand to build up and possibly get near water and clump up and eventually harden into rocks. This could eventually build up bigger and bigger, making shapes and it's own holes. In other words, nature on Mars could have made this formation.\n\nNext, It has become a pop icon. Starring in Hollywood fims, in books, magazines, radio talk shows, etc., You and other people might beleive anyhting you see in pop culture/ on TV. I don't blame you though, most things on TV or in some type of reading or a popular information source happen to be true, but a magority of it is mostly houxes and lies. People think that because it was on TV, it's true evidence of life on Mars, most conspiracy theorists say that NASA would rather hide the truth of life on Mars because they don't know IF there's life on Mars! Most theorists say that their used to be an ancient civilization on Mars, but who knows?\n\nFinally, some scientists believe the FAce as an ancient alien artifact, photographing Cydonia, a reijon on Mars, became a priority, a vital/crucial thing to do for NASA when MGS arrived at Mars in September, 1997, eighteen years after the Viking missions concluded. Jim Garvin, cheif scientist for NASA's MArs Exploration Program explains, \"We felt this was important to taxpayers, we photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good look at it.\" Later on April 5, 1998, MGS flew over Cydonia for the first time. A team took a shot (ten times sharper than the original Viking photos). People were anxious to see what it finally was......a natural landform. Aliens didn't make the Face after all!\n\nTo conclude my claim, the \"Face on Mars\" was just a natural landform on Mars. It has many landforms like this just like Earth does. Even though it has been in pop culture and seen on TV, it doesn't mean it's real and truly built by aliens! And finally, most people believe it was an ancient alien artifact. but in reality, it wasn't. These are the reasons, claims, and evidence that the \"Face on Mars\" is truly a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He sed that the boat was good andit tolk a long time to go to aferk and one rane nit he fell on the loder and something stop his fall the co boy played a lot of sports and he leeding his famels and he ekplord in the se cor.\n\nloke was a sekd for coboy and he thot his lifewould chang afterhis high school year. there was a war in 1945 over in Europe. they lift so they can help those people and so they can have food. luke turned 18 befor and wich meant he could be drefted.\n\nit tolk a lot of weeks to crross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern cost. they were helping them with aunt katie's farm as a boy ahd prepared luke.\n\nluke found time to have fun on boared. The cowboy played baseball basketball and volleyball. he also they were\n\nplayed boxing reading, whittling and they were also playing games.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Isn't there enough technology in this generation already? Aren't there still some people that are trying to catch up with the newest forms of technology?\n\nIn my opinion, the invention of driverless cars should not continue. There are some individuals who have some struggle catching up with the current technology that we have now. On this present day, a teenager must be sixteen years old to earn a driving permit. The laws are currently changing because young drivers are causing many accidents now than at any other given time in history. The risks of an accident will be much higher if driverless cars are permitted into our world and generation. In paragrph nine, the article states that the only safe car has a human in control of\n\na vehicle at all times.\n\nThere are some risks in considering driverless cars. What if these \"helpful\" cars cause more harm in this generation? There are many factors that can considers these cars to be harmful. Some examples are: laziness, malfunctioned cars, and technical errors. America is becoming more advanced each day with the new forms and modles of technology that are being invented. For example, this past Christmas, the invention of the hover board was released to the public. These boards were seen as entertainment. Some people were roaming the sidewalks, hovering above the ground instead of walking. I strongly believe that driverless cars will have the same effect on the people of this generation. These cars will viewed as entertainment and will not be taken seriously. Cars are not toys! One wrong decision or a single distraction can greatly impact the life of an individual.\n\nOn the other hand, driverless cars can be helpful in the way that a machine can provide more safety for pedestrians and obey traffic signs better than a human can. It can also help to decrease the common problem that most drivers have: speeding. If a computer is in charge of getting a human from one place to another the chances of speeding and other common problems are relatively low.\n\nEven though driverless cars can be viewed a s helpful, the reality is that there is too much technology in this present day. The last sentence of paragraph ten implies that technology is advancing quickly. If we do not use these cars it will help to avoid major accidents from occurring. There are some drivers who are not responsible enough to drive a modern car. What makes society think that people will be able to manage a driverless car that has new tchnology? I strongly believe that the world will be much safer without the use of mechanical cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a heated discussion about whether humans should take actions to protect the species from the impact of human activities. Although it is argued by some people that it is too late to take any action on this problem, I hold the opinion that we can still adopt effective measures to improve this situation.\r\n\r\nSome people believe that the negative impact that humans have exerted over the ecological system is irreversible. Thus little outcome can be seen if action is taken from now on. For example, the breakthroughs that humans have achieved in genetic science cannot bring extinct species back to life. Moreover, genetically modified organisms might affect biodiversity, and the possible knock-on effect is yet to be foreseen. In this case, the action that aims to protect the species is neglectable. \r\n\r\nHowever, I would argue that effective and timely measures are pivotal in protecting plants and animal species from further harm. If people stop burning coal and fossil fuels and alter to renewable energy, then we are more likely to avert global temperature rising up to an unprecedented level, and more species are able to survive because of that. If we start enhancing people's awareness of protecting wildlife, then communities are more likely to work collaboratively in to conserving endangered species. Thus, the negative impacts of human activities on species can be reversed.\r\n\r\nIn summary, while it is true that it is too late to rectify some of the damage that humans have imposed on plants and animal species, I would argue that effective measures should still be taken to prevent the problem from exacerbating.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The settings features important cyclists one water food try might carry waterbottle snack need know going need bring extra In story I read didnt bring enough last got directions bad trouble Its important cyclist knows going whats around nt get lost acsess food waterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many cities, states, and countries are trying to find solutions to our problem of pollution and smog. Many have established car free days or car free suburbs which have helped to better or environmet.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany there is a suburb in which has limited the usage of cars, seventy percent of the families living there do not own cars another fifty seven have sold their car to move there. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" stated by Heidrun Walter a resident and mother of two. This statement shows that by selling or not purchasing a car you can avoid stress however this may not be true for all people. Not owning a car allows us to save money by not having to pay for the car or car insurrance. \"Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\". Limited car usage would lower these numbers to take a step forward in bettering our environment allowing a better future.\n\nAs well as car resricted subburbs some cities have other ideas to reduce car usage. Paris had previously installed a plan to have drivers with even numbered license plates to leave their vehicles home and odd numbered plates to leave their vehicles home  the next day \"Congestion was down 60 percent\". This shows that this idea to ban vehicals based on license plates can work, however 4,000 people were fined due to non cooperation. Paris was not the only capitol to try and lower personal vehical usage, Bogota, Colombia for three years has had a day in which cars have been banned only allowing taxis and buses, the goal is to reduce the smog in a capitol city of 7 million. Despite a rainy day most citizens participated in the car free day \"It's a good opportunity to take away and lower air pollution\" stated by Carlos Arturo Plaza. Foregin cities and countries aren't the only ones trying to lower pollution, \"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less ang getting fewer licensences as each year goes by.\" Although riding a bus or other public transportaion or an alternative to a gas or diesel vehical such as a bicycle may take longer than a car but it has shown to be worth the extra time.\n\nThere are pros and cons to limiting the use of gas and diesel vehicals. Many countries and cities are trying to promote car-less suburbs or car free days to help contribute to the reduction of smog and pollution.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you happy the way you vote today, would you be happy if we were to change the way we vote for president. Because they are thinking to change the electroal vote. I think that we should keep the Electoral College because it has been doing us good for a long time, and if we do change it, it would take a while for us to get used to it.\n\nThe first reason why it think that we shouldnt change the Electoral College is because it has been doing us good for almost 300 years. Let me ask you a question, do you change or fix something thats not broken,Than why change the Electoral College. We have had fair Elections in the pass and we still do, people vote for who they want as president of the united states, and if they get the better half of the votes than they are president. As we saw in 2012 when \"Obama received 61.7 percent of the Electoral votes compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him  and Romney....because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all- basis, even a cery slight popularity in a state creates a landslide electoral vote victory in that state\" which is in source 3.\n\nThe second reason why I think that we should keep the electoral college is because it would take time for us to get used to the new method. Since we vote every 4 years and if we get a new way to vote there will be a few that wont know how to vote the new way and when it comes for it to vote again people will forget how they voted for the president. So if they vote for the person who they actually dont want its not like they can vote again. But as I said earlier its easy to vote with the Electoral College as its a winner takes all. The electoral vote does have a couple flaws that could be changed easily but in all other ways the elctoral vote is the way to go.\n\nAnd thats why I think that we should keep the electoral College because one it hasd been doing us good and it will take us a while to get used to the new voing system.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building faced various obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Most importantly danger involved ambitious plan Blimps outside commonly used hydrogen highly flammable gas instead helium After German dirigible destroyed fire owners Empire State Building saw true danagers accident like downtown New York Successful use mooring mast another obstacle The winds high altitude made difficult dock Once docked dirigibles would dangle pedestrians neither pratical safe The existing law airships flying low urban areas create probles After Los Angeles failed reach mooring mast high winds owners started see unsolved problems By late s idea quietly disappearedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The excerpt The Mooring Mast describes creation The Mooring Mast purpose extending height Empire State Building Although s concern Mooring Mast serving docking area drigibles also known today blimps After th floor frame built skeleton mast steel stainless steel glass windows issues concerning landing drigibles arose within publicThere major reasons Mooring Mast Empire State Building never really completed One reason safety The excerpt explains dirigibles outside US used hydrogen instead helium And using hydrogen extremely flammable They used example German diriglie Hindenburg destroyed bc fire reason problem wind currents Winds extremely violent Dirigibles would move sway alot bc strong winds And moving dirigibles least ft long dangled high urban areas nt safe people walking itThirdly issue law airships fly low urban areas also safety hazard people It would illegal dirigibles tied mooring mast cities filled wpeople risking might fall onto peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do think books music movies magazines media material libraries censored Why information knowledge held people Learning exceptional person reading also human race There two arguments cenorship libraries I believe allowing censorship libraries In everyone given right free speech Taking someones work blocking unorthodox offensive takes away persons rights Also people go libraries find something They look knowledge taking away persons learning capacity harmful everyone When one article gets censored another artical gets censored soon material offensive unorthodox We take away man kind s capacity learn Many reasons support censoring minor offenses inappropriate language songs books movies magazines Also obscene graphic material movies magazines These small issues blocked censorships make clean version All minor adjustments easy make Taking media shelves needed The material serious enough Minor adjustments made people allowed read listen watch A library made forwhat people want learn Taking away seriousSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's life changed after highschool, like anything is possible after you graduate. Luke may be just a small town farmboy, but his future is pretty bright. Luke worked two part-time jobs, so you can tell that he is hard working. Then his friend Don Reist gave him the opportunity of a life-time. To be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboy program is where people go around the world on a boat to help people and animals. After World WarII, it was a great opportunity to go and help people and animals from other continents recover from this catastrophe. Reasons to become a seagoing Cowboy is, you get to help people and animals in need of assistance. Helping people is a good thing to do and it makes you feel good and the people you help feel good too. You also get to explore all of the exotic, unique places around the world when you are traveling. Those reasons are few of many.\n\n\"Seagoing Cowboys, to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up.\" paragraph 2. Luke and Don felt a need to help and put their time and effort to help these people and animals.\n\nEven though Luke and Don care for people and love animals, some people wouldn't take the opportunity. Most people love animals and helping people, but some just don't like animals or they are too selfish to tak some time to go around the world and help other people with things that you already have and they don't. Or people get seasick or are just too paranoid to go on a boat because they think it is going to sink.\n\nBesides, the portion that has most people who would do something like Luke and Don, are people around us and we will always have those kind of people.\n\nTo Luke, his life changed after this wonderful experience. His adventures opened up the world for him. \"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more that an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity\" he says. \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" And that awresess stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.\"\n\nparagraph 9.\n\nThat is what something like that can do to you. Something great, like this opportunity, could open your eyes to see that you just helped someone in great need and that makes you feel amazing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "there is an argument about students should go for a work then start to go to the college. I totally argue that it is better to go straight to the university.\n\nOn the one hand, some teenagers believe that it is waste of time to go to the college. They want to make money early by their own so they decide to take a job. This can help them gain the experiences and the solution in life easily. Moreover, they might open more and more relationship and partner in their business or working.\n\non the other hand, some people can not adapt to the new environment which is making money by themself. Therefore, they choose to go to the university continue learning and get a degree to apply a good job before have a work. Furthermore, having much knowledge can be a streng for yourself and your work.\n\nTo conclution, it seems to me that student are more likely to be sucessful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience one worlds important lifeskills Having best friend live across street great He older sister named blessed downs syndrom This basically means doesnt understand things fast I You also see way acts one happiest people I ever met Knowing well I also comes downside You need extremely patient When talking lots people would give leave doesnt get closest friends developed patient like kind Having neighbor one greatest things could happened She made master one important lifeskills wonderful person I guess great teacher bad day grateful everyone blessedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are going to change the world. They are much safer than any person could dream of being. They could help the economy greatly by saving money from personal transport. Lastly, the cars could simply help in a smaller way, by taking away the stress of driving. For these reasons, driverless cars are a positive advance in today's technology.\n\nDriverless cars could be much safer than human drivers. A person must have fast reflexes to avoid an accident, but even so, there is always the danger of just not being fast enough. Advancements in technology, such as sensors and driving tracks, will make these cars more aware of their surroundings than people. Using this technology, the world would never have to worry about the dangers of driving drunk or a careless person behind the wheel. Therefore, driverless cars could be much safer and save many lives.\n\nOn another note, driverless cars could greatly help the economy. With no need for personal vehicles, people could instead rely on public transit. This could be very helpful, as the money saved could go towards the community. For example, the money saved could go towards the project of changing the streets. Using car tracks could make the driverless cars safer and more effective.\n\nMoreso, the cars could do something simple that would go a long way to making people feel better. Driverless cars could help by relieving them from the stress of driving. Most people have a lot of their minds throughout the day and a lot of things to worry about. While the car drives itself, the occupant can take the time to relax and enjoy their surroundings. Being able to sit back and relax for a moment could be beneficial for everyone.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are an amazing opportunity that people need to take advantage of. Saving lives, saving money, and saving people from stress are all worthwhile goals that driverless cars could help achieve. Driverless cars are too advanced to let go to waste. The advancements in technology are an amazing feat that people should use to assist in daily life. Driverless cars are going to change the way people feel about transportation in a positive way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that if the Facial Action Coding Sstem was a thing i think that more kids would be disrespectful towards other to the fact its not that predictable on wheter your hiding emotions or nah its curiosity on you. We might have a program that an red emotions but it not going to ead accurate with trying to store everybody elses emotion grandted its going to be huge like donal trump wwhich he will one day end core 40 and these i steps becuz we have to tke the test to graduated but the disabled oesnt yeah OK thank u, dumb but we will ivential not and give us easier test becuz our teachers arent goood at exlanning i step so seems like a better buisness bureau call lol fix the way teachers teach i stepand maybe we could paass like sriosly who actually grades these becuselet the state because then we could get some good teachersbfrom it. tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttthhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. look at people in the real world\n\nlife like u do u think u had to test on tis to graduate heck no u didnt but now look you have a high paying ob so come onSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why people look back something laugh action taking place For example witness someone hit car During event nobody would laughing There would likely people rushing frantically help ambulances everywhere But see people get hit cars time considered comedic On hot something quite similar happened friends I live next I know one spot called It pretty strange name due fact water actually greenish color reflection tree s surround The thirty yards wide nobody knows deep impossible touch bottom The main attraction cliffside ranges feet feet On side beautiful golden beach massive tree s behind The hike one mile steep decline leads right cliff s edge The bed gorge lined way shaded day except mornings On particular day I going bring My friend daredevil Although s good athletic things willing try anything He also homeschooled freshman year high school s also pretty socially awkward definitely used resisting resisting negative peer pressure On hand I kid crazy things I pull I gainers cliff s edge feet water Somehow ended getting pressured trying one well As getting mentally prepared stunt gave count We shouted time He ran cliffside like I showed jumped brought knee s chest Nothing happened That problem tucked never rotated He fell like rock His back aimed strait water There seemed like second pause moment jumped cliff moment smacked water His upper back first thing make contact water giant splash sound clap almost loud small firecracker seconds later emerged water attempting breathe air entering lungs I shore beach across lake Simultaneously looked nobody laughing everyone looked worried All booked water It yard swim get way I first one He panting still intense state panic I stayed away got almost NUM pounds grabbed around torso first I grabbed legs finally got took hold arms We pulled beach could safely put feet dry land Who knows would happened panicked would made beach Although kind fault pressuring first place After almost hours basking sun calming sun started setting behind gorge shadows closing us shoreline It We decided explore little bit also find sunshine We stood noticed entire backside purple Not ginger skin impact water created quite contusion Everyone except saw busted laughing memory previously happened looked behind saw discolored back CAPS hold back bursts laughter Laughter coming everyone This first time I ever hung Laughter brought us together Now share spot friends nothing sticks like day To day still reminisce hot day attempted gainer cliff Laughter shortest distance two five peopleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many students state that it is very difficult for having focus in the schools presently. I believe that this issue was caused by a profound effect of screen addiction and social media. However, parents and teachers as primarily shoulder the responsibility could overcome the problem through having a strict rule and giving a deep advise for students. \r\n\r\nStudents usually use an advance technology such as laptop and gadget in order to improving their quality in education and as the entertainment in today’s world. Nevertheless, they might be not always use them wisely. As a result, students are commonly having screen addiction because of they are eager to interact with other people through social media. Moreover, students might face a negative experience like bullying in social media. This condition could lead into devastating consequences for students including difficulties for having focus throughout learning process. \r\n\r\nNonetheless parents should have a certain rule about using electronic device, which could lead into positive effect. Parents could limit the time for gizmo’s utilization by children. For example, children could use their gizmo only for about 28 hours in a week. Furthermore, teachers could also provide advises about how to using social media wisely, which could give solid understanding for students. For instance, teachers could give a brief explanation about how to prevent bullying that come up from other people in social media.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, students might not have focus in their study because they face screen addiction and bullying in social media. Implementing a strict rule for using electronic device and giving advises could be one of the best solutions to tackle the problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter huge part everyone s life It s used express several different emotions It s used bridge gap people break awkward barrier People laugh mistakes show others make mistakes Some people communicate laughter know feeling For instance one time long car ride bored fall asleep So I began laughing friend laughing different ways carried whole conversation laughter Laughing bring others together sharing common interests everyone laughs I laugh others I m sure Laughter huge part life honestly life would boring depressing I laugh much sometimes side stomach hurts bad I also make lot mistakes clumsy get laughed lot My family close hilarious family make lot mistakes constantly everyday For great grandma s planning surprise party While planning grandma kept getting suspicious asking So kept telling going get stripper So managed talk uncle bobby stripper climbing box ended scaring grandma Until day still talk day laugh time Everyday aunt acts ridiculous funny way time laugh She always dancing music commercials singing opera My great grandma always eats foods make pass gas s hilarious sometimes nt even realize My great grandma also likes dance also hilarious dance moves knows far different ones today I believe laughter family would close With laughter would close friends You bond laughter sometimes forces ask questions get know people ways would It makes comfortable around people able share things act silly worry appearance Laughter also change emotion mad happy instance For example riding dirt bikes younger cousin decided wanted go swamp bike I told nt wise knew possible go getting stuck yet tried anyway So assumed got bike stuck since one help get bike unstuck It took forever us get bike As soon tried drive got stuck yet another time I upset cousin getting ready yell leave fell mud head first instantly changed mood Even still today laugh matter even though nt think funny time Even though laughter good also bad laughing others hurt crying laughing stupid ignorant pranks even laughing people making bad decisions Decisions drinking drunk people funny fact drunk drinking You actually influence people make bad decisions laughing Laughing makes think s making others laugh So laughter healthy also unhealthy waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because around the world natural disaters and other sorts of things are happening across this Earth we need to help. In the text it says\"UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses ,young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\"\n\nMore people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program becauseit is an opportunity of a lifetime.\"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small-town boy. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. o was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,and a city with streets of water.\"\n\nTHink about joining the Seagoing Cowboys this way,when you sign up like Luke and Don did it will open you up to more than just going places, joining will open you to everything.\"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger . It openedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the use of the technolohy should not be used because then parent would be complaining how it is not fair for a teacher or students to know her sons/daughters expression. Also I personally think that we shouldn't allow them because then teachers would always be focused on the kids that aren't as happy and are confused on the work or lesson they are learning. I also think that it would also be a good idea for the whole school because if a student is to shy to speak up and they dont know how to do something then the teacher can talk to him/her after class. I think that using this technology will be to much too and the school will have to use millions of dollars just to buy some for a whole class. I know this becuase the author says \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode mocode Mona Lisa's smile. Then they show us how we can do it at home and how we can make use smile or happy. In the artical is states \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. (\"Putting on a happy face\" actually works\" So at the end of the day I personally don't think we schools should have this type of technogoly and be more focused on other technologys like finger print sign in or school resources.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Luke Bomberger and I am in the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). In the UNRRA you get to go to different place and help families gets back on there feet form World War 2. You get to bring them food, animals, and more, 44 nation joined together to form the UNRRA. If you are a hardworking person then come join the UNRRA.\n\n'' The cattle-boat trips are unbelievable opertunity for a small-town boy!'' Luke says. I have toured Venice,Italy, a castle in Crete, and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. ''You get to take great trips in the UNRRA.'' I said.\n\nAlso working with the animals is a great way to pat the time by working with them. Working with animals is so much fun. You can tell them you secrets , you can play with them, you can just fell in love with an mailman that you can't share everything with them.\n\nThen seeing the smiling faces on the people's faces when you give the food and water it just amazing. It make you feel good inside like a warm good tinglying feel that you can't get from anything else. You just feel like you made a huge difference. It a happiness that you can't buy with money I would not trade it for anything in the world. It gives you a reason to get up in the morning. Working in the UNRRA was a great disison that I have made defintitley not one of my mistakes.\n\nAlso when you unload the animals and go and great more it is a lot of fun on deck. You get to play with your other ship mates and play baseball, volleyball, whittling, boxing, read and more it's a great way to pass the time. A great way to bond with everyone on deck.\n\nIf you a hard working then you will enjoy this job. You have to work hard to succeed in this job. You will definitely need to be a hard working to like this job.\n\nIf you are a hardworking, animal loving, adventure seeker, love to help others, love to be on boats, then this is the job we for you. So come join the seagoing Cowboys program and be apart of the UNRRA. Come help families in need.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some believe of the opinion that adolescent should join local community in their leisure time, while other convinced that the teenagers do not need to do that. This essay will express complete agreement with the first viewpoint and will justify how this will be beneficial for their own improvement.\r\n\r\nIt seems undeniable that human is a social beings that need others to rely on. Linked to this fact, helping each others must be the core intention for every individuals including adolescent. At the end, every job that is exist in the world will give feedback for everyone. A teacher, for instance, they will teach and give knowledge for the students. All of the job will get salary as they carry a benefit to citizen. \r\n\r\nInstead of wasting their leisure time on gadget, it will be great for juvenile to do positive activity like join local community. Although this job is unpaid, stripling who join local community will get some benefit like upgrade their interpersonal and problem solving skills. For instance, charity that is held by a local community will help others to solve social problems and rise the quality of life. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it has been argued in this essay that gather with local community will be good for the juvenile to fulfil their free time rather than doing something unbeneficial. It is because this activity possibly increase their self development.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I really patient I baby sitting going great kid started fighting It two little brothers course They hiting kicking youngest one biting I told stop They started toy So I went back room told stop So stoped good little brother started copy everything everybody said I said stop youll go room So stoped everybody good rest night mom dad got home whole different story So thats time I patient little brothers sistersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The emotional exprssions of students in a classroom should be vauluable . Why do i think that ?\n\nTeachers could know how there students feel about the topic there learning or how much the get it or not.\n\nAnother one is when your a manager at a store you can see how people feel about your store if theres alot of stress going on in their head.\n\nThe text states that \" Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion , moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them \".\n\nWhich means it helps them com alive in the real world.\n\nIf your sad and was to put on a happy face it would probably help you get happy or to get a better attuide for the day. In this story it says a \" Drama couch, Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emothions on stage\" to better them when they had to come on stage infront of people to peform. The actors had to make it come real for people to enjoy it. He would also put them in other peoples life to see what there emotional state was and how they were feeling.\n\nThe muscles are called \" orbicularis oculi par palpabraeus\" these muscles are acting when you get mad,sad,happy,frustrated and other emotions. So yes, i think you should have this in the world to see what people are feeling around you . It can do what computers can do . Like if you were to smile at a ad they could bring it up to make you even more happy or to get you to buy something. If you were to frown you would get a ad to help you smile or to laught.\n\nIt can also perdict when a student is bored of a topic. these are my reasons why I feel this way about this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "a time in the futur where no one needs to buy cars because there will be a fleet of driverless cars is not a safe futur. In paragraph nine the article says \"most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" Making a driverless car removes the alert driver wright out of the eqation. And a car without an alert driver isnt a safe car, at least not in law makers eyes.\n\nIn states like California, Nevada, Florida, and the district of columbia it is illegal to test computer driven cars. The rest of america should follow suit though the article says, \" manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\" For the time being there not safe enough. though there are constant development being made to the driverless car. There are still to many hole in the ideal to make a safe apperance on the road.\n\none of the advancements is that the cars have \"Traffic Jam Asstancet.\" the article say they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" If the driverless car cant handle a workzone or accident. Then it diffinitly can't handle roads with wondering children and dogs.\n\ndrivers get distracted while driving there self driven cars. they couldn't handle a driverless one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I am going to be writing about is the seagoing cowboy and they rode the waves the\n\nboys names are John,Luke and his friend are\n\nseagoing cowboys that help people with their need whaile they are on a boat.\n\nMy first reason is they join this program to help people to live when their country got ruind in worlld war two so there are people called the seagoing cowboys, and they go to different counties to help people get their counties back to new and the way they do that is they take food like cows, pig, any animals they need to stay alive is what the breing to the other counties to live.\n\nMy second reason is they go to all the counties that need help and they help them all they can but it take two months to get to china from eastern cosat of the united state it might take them a month to get to where they are going but they still get there.\n\nMy thired reason is they go to different counties and it opens up their eyes to the world and they have fun on the way back from their trips they play tenis and they box and they play volleyball and they play basball to pass the time because with out the animals on borad they are not watching the animals because they have no anamials to watch so they have to do something so tehy play game and they get back home and they go on another trip to a differebt country so they can help them\n\nMy fourth reason is they go to all these country to help becasue they know if it was them in trouble the other would come help them out with the food and stuff they need to live and they go to all these country to see the way the counties are and how the look and what makes them different btu if they do not go they will never get to see all they counties they get to see but they might be ruined but they go to fix them up and make them new again so them cab see how other people live their live and to see whats the same and whats differennt about their country and whats the same.\n\nMy fithy reason is if your are going to help somebody you need to help the ones overseas because they do noy have what we have so people need to go ove rthere and help the people that need the thing we have and just give it to them and we need to give them money to help them out with the stuff them can buy over there but if we do not help them they can not have all the nice stuff we have.\n\nIn conclusion I think beig a seagoing sowboy would be fun to help other people and to get to see all the counties the see would be fun and it wounld be the best feeling to help other people in\n\nneed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There's a lot of different opinions on driverless cars, whether it's a good idea or not, or if it's actually safe. There's many positive effects of owning a car that you can just sit back and relax, and enjoy the ride. There will be many different choices for the in-car entertainment that the passage talks about for the person. Although there's positive effects, there's also negative effects. What happens if the car has a disfunction, who's to blame? There's a lot of things you have to change too, driverless casrs can be so costy.\n\nDriverless cars is a great idea. In the passage it talks about how these cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis. In past tests of the cars it's been said that their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, and they still have ways to alert the driver just in case the car needs help and can't fully take control of certain situations. The passage says that these cars have sensors that can have the car apply it's brakes on any wheel and reduce power from the engine way faster than any human.\n\nAlso, there's still many negative effects of having a driverless car. These cars can cause major arguments, for example in the passage it asks, \"if the car has a disfuntion and they get an accident and someone is injured, who is at fault?\" That can cause big arguments between the driver and the manufacturer. It can cause arguments between poeple who also own a driverless car. Some will ask questions like-- \"what if this happens to me?\" It can be amazing to own a car that does almost everything for you, but there can also be down falls.\n\nThen, if everything is successful, still switching everything up can be costy. The cars still need to be improved with a whole lots sensors, which costs money. Not only will that cost a lot of money but for these cars it's required for massive upgrades to to roads. In the passage they're talking about new benz's, Audi's, and Nissan's, which are all expensive cars. Not everybody is going to be able to afford a smart car, so they could really be making expensive changes for something that not everyone's going to trust, and buy.\n\nTo come to a conclusion, driverless cars could end up being successful and be a really good idea. Still, not everyone will be able to afford them, and not everyone will think ideally about the whole idea. It's amazing that technology is advanced enough now to let the driver sit back and relax, and alert them if anything bad can happen. Not everyones going to trust it, ecspecially if it's still risky that the car can have a disfunction.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are becoming the next new world thing. When I hear driveless cars, I think of a car moving around from place to place by itself, no human needed at all. There's one little problem with that. The cars don't know how to drive in situtations like roadwork and accidents, or pull in or out of the driveway. Yes, they are just beginning to build these cars but what will happen if something truly goes wrong and you can't take control.\n\nDriveless cars are said to be able to drive every where without the help of humans. How does this work? Sensors. The sensors read and pick up what is going on around the car. There is also a camera on top of the car that creates a 3D image for the car so it knows it surroundings. What happens if one of these sensors doesn't work correctly or the camera malfunctions? Does the car still stop itself or will everything mess up and the car crashes.\n\nPeople who drive have always been in control. They know how far it takes to turn or when to turn and when to actually stop the car before hitting the one infront of them. These self-driving cars may know all this but stops \"working\" when there is a problem up ahead such as roadwork or an accident. That's the only time when people are truly in control of the car. People will get so used to not having to pay attention to the road that when the car needs them to actually pay attention, will the signal the car sends to the driver get their attention?\n\nThe biggest thing about driving and the laws is safety. The driver must pay all attention to the road and know their surroundings just to be safe. With the self-driving car, is the driver and all the passenger truly safe. Another thing is lawsuits against companies. If the car and technology fails who is to blame, the driver or manufacturer.\n\nI think that self-driving cars should not become a thing in the near future. People will have no control, technology fails, and lawsuits are filed. These driveless cars are just an accident waiting to happen. Yes, they are a step up in our technology filled world, but safety should come first before anything.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental degradation is a rising issue in the contemporary world. According to the number of people, the surge in the price of fuel is a way to mitigate this problem. I agree up to some extent, however, there are other major solutions, mainly restricting waste disposable and deforestation.\n\nAdmittedly, increasing the cost of the fuel is a basic option to cope with the environmental issue. Price hike of the ammunition such as petrol and diesel means, less private vehicles usage, as people would opt to other options for transportation such as public transport system; hence air will not be polluted, as there would be less smoke released from vehicles. China, for instance, in 2016, had been able to decrease the air pollution up to 13%, by introducing fuel’s price increase. Thus, price increase of ammunition is one of the basic measure of saving the environment.\n\nOn the other hand, I think there are other effective strategies to address the nature related problems. Firstly, banning waste disposable from industries and factories is one way of solving the rising water pollution issue. This is because disposable materials produced from different industries drained off in the sea and contaminate the water. Which in turn is devastating for sea animals. Another viable option is to discourage deforestation. Cutting trees lead to the deficiency of Oxygen, which is an immense requirement for the better environment. For example, International organization of climate protection has conducted a study that each year climate is becoming deteriorating by the 25% decrease in the production of Oxygen, owing to the deforestation. Therefore, controlling disposable products and prohibiting cutting trees enormously assist in keeping the environment safe.\n\nIn conclusion, to control the degradation of nature is a sparked topic these days. Some people say that increasing the fuel cost is a way. In my view, this will be helpful up to some extent, but there are other efficient measures such as preventing raw disposable materials and cutting trees.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "CAPS hurry friend said I know patient I said Being patient means understanding tolerant A patient person experiences without complaining One day basketball game away different school My team I went bathroom I last one go stall They left one girl stayed Being patient ways good thing ever heard something like Patience virtue Well dont get usedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever had a question in the classroom but were too scared to ask?\n\nHave you ever not understood the lesson, even after pages of notes? The Facial Action Coding Sytem software has a solution for that. The Facial Action Coding System is a computer software that allows computers to identify different human emotions. The use of the Facial Action Coding System as a means to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can help students learn and understand what they are learning in a more proficient manner.\n\nEach teacher has their own specific way of teaching. With the number of students most classrooms hold these days, it can be hard for a teacher to gauge how well each of their students are truly understanding the information being taught. In paragraph 5, Nick D'Alto says, \"In fact, we humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, mosrt of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc....His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" Students don't always ask for help when they need it, and aforementioned, teachers don't always realize when their students need help. The Facial Coding System would allow the computers to anatomically, correctly identify the emotions of the students. \"A classroom computer would recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" D'Alto says. This technology would allow teachers to better understand how well their students are understanding and obtaining what they are being taught, and could help them to modify their style of teaching for the students.\n\nThe Facial Coding System would not only be able to identify the students emotions. It could identify the students emotions as well as modify the lesson if the student has become confused. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" The FACS software mimics that of a teacher. Instead of having one certain teaching style, though, the system could modify the way it gives out information. This would be effective in a classroom because students can't always understand the way their teachers teach. The FACS software could change its teaching style whenever the student was confused, giving the student experience to multiple different methods of effective learning.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is such an efficent way for students to learn that it might replace teachers! The softwares ability to gauge the emotion of students and in return modify their lesson is a proficient way to help students learn and to help teachers understand their students level of understanding in the classroom. FACS software is a valuable piece of technology and would be extremely valuable in a classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Readers I believe Computers good country positive affect people This saves paper sending emails save money also learn new things different countrys like lastly iteract people know talk use technowlogy advantage These reasons computers positive affect society wayore live First computers help save environment leting us cut trees make paper Do know many trees cut day around trees imeditly taken mills turned paper But thet stopin piles loging sites leftrotting put good work I feel trees feelings like us ca nt talk mouth So cut tree like robing Using computers save trees stop happening She one reason think computers positive impact love society Secondly learning learn lot computer look I learn many things day school help computers I feel computers use excellour learning lot lot shorter time would find book subject youre looking Computers made things lot impact children new things I use computers So computers good thing bad thing Finaly talk interact friends techknowlogy advanced much nt see world prospective like take cell phone example see mostly likly phone But open find You find micro computer thats capable surfing inter playing music smaller size computers revolutronized way look world techknowlogy talk play games usiing techknowlogy see every day used techknowlogy hike game station even car rardo adn used help using ract one toher So I veiw techknowlygy good thing In conclusion techknowlogy positive negative impact positive negative influence Techknowlogy help us everyday lives helps save environment letting us talk save paper button Techknowlogy revolunoized wat mankind lives veiw society us good thing end And I concluded techknowlogycomputers positive negative impact socuotySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people agree that volunteering work will benefit the young generation and also community cohesion. While I agree that assigning an appropriate workload of volunteer jobs to teenagers would encourage them to realize the importance of responsibility in the association they work in, I also agree that all efforts put into volunteering work could affect their academic performance as a student.\r\n\r\nThe main reason why I believe that volunteering activities would be beneficial to the young is that working with peers contributes to enhancing the social skills of young people. Joining a volunteer group with friends from the community would improve teenagers’ multiple abilities such as cooperation, communication and other practical skills. Besides, adults are usually too busy to help the elder neighbours who are indeed the helping hands, while their kids are more flexible and available to assist those older people. For example, young children can help disabled aged people with garden cleaning. Hence, tightening the bonds of the neighbouring residents and enabling a harmonious community finally.\r\n\r\nHowever, the young generation should put their educational achievements as the first priority and then be able to consider sacrificing the rest time for neighbourhood volunteering. It is because the energy of the individual is limited, so young adults should organise themselves in a reasonable schedule instating of putting all efforts into volunteering in their free time. Additionally, we can not rule out the possibility that unpaid work is sometimes tedious and strenuous, thus making students waste much time on the jobs. For instance, volunteers at the food bank in the community usually distribute food to low-income families. Therefore, it is necessary to consider the disadvantages before letting pupils work for free.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think meaningful volunteer work is of considerable importance to the young generation in social progress, and they should also make sure it is suited to their needs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]