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"content": "The main argument for visiting Venus is a very simple one the author presents in paragraph 2: it is considered by many to be \"Earth's Twin\". Despite this however, the atmosphere in Venus is dangerously hot, over 800-900 degrees kind of hot. It would burn anything that entered its atmosphere within seconds. It would be incredibly difficult and expensive to visit Venus first out of all of the planets in out solar system.\n\nFor one the atmosphere is so hot to the point to where NASA would be spending millions of dollars into developing a ship that is built for that kind of heat and pressure. Even then we cannot be 100 percent sure that it wont just burn up upon contact due to all of the sulfuric acid in the atmosphere that would have to be taken into consideration. Mars would be much easier for us to get to first, it's bigger, nowhere even remotely close to how hot Venus is. Even having a sort of blimp like vehicle hover 30 miles above the atmosphere might not help. What if one of the so called volcanos on the planet erupted and hit it? That is millions of dollars out of the window right there alone. The planet is simply put too hostile for human interaction. Mars would be a much safer option for human beings.\n\nIn conclusion, the overall idea of us going up to Venus is one that is do-able, but that is far off in the future. We do not have the money or resources to even think about going up to that planet yet. Mars should be first and foremost up for discussion if we are going to investgate another planet. Venus is too dangerous right now, when technology improves for us we may be able to, but for now, we should stick to trying to land on other planets that are less hostile and unpredictable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no denying the fact that a number of employers consider focusing on social skills more than academic qualifications. \n\nOn the first hand , nowadays , several companies are searching for workers who had quite perfect cleverness in social abilities , while they expect that it is more significant than the person who had academic qualities . However , choosing a person with this kind of skills may return the company with fine results for it is own good. For example : if the employee got some social skills , he will be able to help his company to improve in being more famous and well noun in society . Farther more, raising the name of any company by using social skills could find and locate a superior position better than the other rivals in the business world. \n\nMeanwhile , on the other hand , others are more believers in the opposite side , they consider that academic qualification is more worthy than social skills , it might be an ability besides the first . However, companies normally need someone to do a specific job so that must be done by an expert person depending on the requirements such as the architect , no one else can do his work even if he got social skills .\n\nIn conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points of view, I am more agreeable with focusing on academic abilities because being someone experienced in any speciality is harder than getting expertise in social skills . Even more , in my opinion , each company approximately will be needed to have a worker with the helpful skills of society and somebody else expert in special academic quality.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you remember science fiction movies as a child? Do you remember imagining what it would be like if the world was able to advance that far in technology? Well, the advancement of technology is continuously evolving. Cars may not be able to fly yet, however, scientists are growing closer to creating a car that does not require a driver. This driverless car will be a great milestone in the evolution of technology.\n\nWith driverless cars, a public-transport system could be created around the country, according to the vision of Google cofounder Sergey Brin. According to Brin, people would save money because they would not have to worry about buying a car or spending money on fuel. Since this system would be similar to a taxi system, the cars would only use half the amount of fuel as today's taxis, benefitting the environment. This system would also be more flexible than the bus system.\n\nIn order for these cars to \"see\" the road and its obstacles, it must have a lot of sensors. According to paragraph four, one of Google's modified cars uses position estimating sensors on several areas of the car, allowing it to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. Even today, many cars have antilock breaks. Paragraph five states, \"The information from these sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This supports the idea that these driverless cars will be \"smart\" enough to actually drive on their own, and possibly more efficiently than a human driver.\n\nFurthermore, the invention of driverless cars will be safer. For example, in the case of a drunk driver, the car will have the most control. There may also be instances in which the car encounters an obstacle that requires human control. Efforts are still being made to find a solution to this problem; paragraph seven states that some cars notify the human by announcing it to the driver, and other cars might have a vibration feature built into the driver's seat.\n\nSome might ask, if there is an accident, who is to blame? Well, this would depend on the case. If the accident was caused by a malfunction in the car, then the manufacturer is to blame. If accident is caused when the human is controlling the car, then the human is to blame. Now, if a car was compltely driverless, then that question is much easier to answer. Others may also ask, what will the human do while they wait for their \"turn\" to drive? According to Dr. Werner HUber, a BMW project manager, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Entertainment and information systems could be developed to keep the driver awake and entertained. This system may sound distracting, however, it is actually a safety feature because it can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take the wheel.\n\nIn conclusion, the evolution of the driverless car would make the roads safer, benefit the environment, and save money for many people. The threat of reckless and drunk drivers would decrease, the air would be cleaner, and car rides could potentially become more fun with the possible entertainment. Several companies, such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan, see the potential in these driverless cars, and have high hopes for the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is very dense and very thick with carbon-dioxide and because none of our spacecrafts can reach Venus because of the extreme temperatures of 800 degrees fahrenheit , it also can melt our spaceships like its nothing , it has volcanoes ,earthquakes , lighting because of all this our scientists can not get through the cloud of carbon-dioxide\n\nand study moon rocks and the surface of Venus.as for NASA they are creating new ways for us to get to venus and hopefully land on the surface of it. maybe get a moon rock or two, they even are thinking about how long will our powerful machines will stay in the planets atmosphere but our spacecrafts should be made strong enough to get close enough to the surface and get some pictures and then those pictures will be sent back to NASA for further investigations for about how we can see the past and history of Venus. and thats why we will be able to get as close to Venus as we can.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Alot people different ideas believe computers benefit society I one believe computer useful many things The first reason I believe one lot schools need students projects Second computer gamed help kids learn Third I believe good way relax The first reason believe computers good many kids school need In school lot projects might need type get picture If nt computers would way could Also persuassive waiting pieces We would need computer type make looks better Many people might say could write But I believe typing might faster neater people The second reason I believe computers good many good games help people I know many different games text readable Computers good s good way relax Aint people get home work tired But instead going sitting couch whole night could go computer fun game little Many people say watching tv going computer things But play educational game might ok But something fun computer every often In conclusion I believe computers good one many kids need school second lot educational games good way relaxSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face is just a natural landform and not evidence of an alien attack. There are many reasons why this landform is only natural and not any type of alien proof. One of those is that if NASA found a secret alien civiilization they would tell us because it would help increase their budget. Another reason that it's just a natural landform is because it is just like some other natural landforms on Earth and other mesa's on Mars. The last reason that I will be talking about in this essay is that NASA is scietifically trained and would know if it was proof of alien's existence but the conspiracy theorists aren't scientifically trained and would be less likely to know exactly what it is.\n\nThe first reason that it's just a natural landform is that NASA would tell us if it was proof of an alien attack. It states in the text that \"defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars\" which shows how it would help increase their budget. Since the Face is so popular and has even become a pop icon if NASA were to find out it was proof of an alien attack they would most likely tell us because since it is so popular it would give them a significant increase to their budget. That is just one of the three reasons that I will b talking about in this essay.\n\nThe second reason that the Face is just a natural landform is because it is just like other landforms on Earth and around that area on mars. In the article it says \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa--landforms common around the American West\". That passage from the article shows that there are landforms on Earth that look similar to that one on Mars so it couldn't be proof of an alien attack. The article also says \"scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an egyptian pharaoh\". That shows that other landforms that resemble the Face on that part of Mars isn't uncommon. The only thing that made the Face stand out from other landforms was the shadows which made it appear to have a face that looked like an egyptian pharoah.\n\nThe third and final reason that I will be talking about in this essay is that the scientists would know better than any of the conspiracy theorists would so we should believe them. NASA has no reason to hide the Face from us because even if it was an alien attack, as I stated in paragraph two, it would help increase their budget. Other conspiracy theorists believe NASA is just trying to hide the proof of an alien attack but if that was what they were doing, they wouldn't have released a picture of the Face at all. Also when NASA realeased a new high resolution image in 2001 and a 3D altimetry of the Face, the landform no longer reseambled a face, which is proof that it is just a mesa.\n\nThose 3 reasons are the reasons you should believe scientists and not think it is an alien landform. NASA has nothing to hide since it would increase their budget. They also are more trained in knowing what landforms on mars are than any conpiracy theorists are. The other reason is because there are many other landforms on Earth that resemble faces which could be compared to the Face. Those 3 reasons are why we should all stop trying to make conspiracy theories and just believe what NASA is trying to tell us, that it's just a mesa.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast many challenging obstacles builders attempting allow dirigibles dock Al Smith fourterm governor New York determined outstrip Chrysler building making Empire State Building much taller He goals building would equipped For age transportation dream aviation pioneers The first obstacle involved expanded use New York City lack suitable landing area Al Smith however saw opportunity mooring mast added top building would allow dirigibles anchor For several hours refueling service let passengers Al Smith s ambitions enhance building s height encouraged overcome obstacle Another problem however actually constructing mast led new obstacle Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications done Empire State Building could nt thousand foot dirigible moored top building If dirigible held single cable tether would add stress building s frame Even though obstacle modifications building adjusted problem builders able create mast As progress Empire State continued difficulties kept arising made goas Al Smith much farther awayNot knowing fate mooring mast Empire State Building builders realized afterwards mast s purpose became obsolete The issue mainly safety dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable They noticed mast s construction could tragedy dirigible go flames densely populated city Another important obstacle interfered attempting dock dirigibles Empire State nature It stated winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The builders knew weighing back dirigible would unsafe pedestrians Even obstacles builders Empire State Building continued try allow dirigibles dock time idea faded away basically gave project Al Smith s goals left uncomplete challenging obstacles end manage establish Empire State Building tallestSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus gives us fastinating information about the planet. Venus is sometimes called \"Evening star.\" The planet is one of the brightest points of light in the sky. Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus is a worthy pursuit to study dispite from its danger it presents in many reasons. Venus is a part of our solar system, and it's also important.\n\nEarth is often concidered just like Venus, they are like twins but only reffered by density and size. Venus had ben proved a very challenging place to examine and to study. It may be the closest to the sun but safe vantage point of Earth. Mars and Venus are actually Earth neighbors.\n\nConcering that Venus is by the Sun it must be hot there. Well that's correct, on the planet surface the tempeture is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atomsphric is over 90 times greater than we experienced on Earth. Venus has the hottest surface in any planet in our solar system although Mercury is closer to the sun Venus is 10 times hotter. With that type of heat it's like erupting volcanos, earthquakes, lighting strike, and even more.\n\nYou might ask yourself why do scientists want do travel to Vensus at all for new imormation with that type of heat? Well they are fascinated by it as well as you are reading this story. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration also know as NASA, wants to be able to sent humans to Venus, but wiht heat like that it is impossiable. Even sending a rover wouldn't last a day. Over 800 degrees is very hot for a 30 or so miles vehicle. Wouldn't be easy conditions for the rover or humans.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is the brightest and dangerest planet yet has to be the most fascinating , most information ever. Venus is the cloest planet and the hotest. Studying the planet Venus is very interesting. Striving to meet the challange to be on the planet is dificult. Our travel to Venus will soon come to being able to live on it. Scientists are trying to find more imformation and figure out what can be done and what can not. For these reasons i think studying Venus is a worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face that was found on Mars may be made by natural causes. There are many reasons why this odd shaped figure would be made by natural causes, like gust of wind throwing rocks around could make that human like face. Or something that can pick up big boulders and can move them into place. There are many reasons why this face showed up, but aliens are not one of them.\n\nWhat might have caused rocks to move into place to create this human like face is large gust of wind. Or something that is really strong. Or it could have been a big pile of rock and just formed over the years into a face. In the story \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", there is more then one lump of rock there is two. The second is just not shaped like a face. There are spots everywhere on this planet with lumps of rock. Most of them are formed by erosion. Erosion is the process of being broken down. There could be parts of the lump of rock that wasn't strong enough to hold it's self up. They may have fell in to make the eye shape. The nose could have been another small pile of rock that made it look like a nose. This is from up high it may look different down low. It may look like a big piece of rock. There are different views or angles you can look at it.\n\nOther people may think that aliens did this. But there was no traces or marks left behind that can detect an alien. In the story it says, \"There was no alien monument after all.\" Now in the story it says that all the traces of the alien that did this were covered in haze. In paragraph 12 it says, \"\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West.\"\n\nThey strongly agree that this is just natural causes. Now they are probably still doing some testing or research about this face. But they strongly agree that it is just a natural cause. Formed by erosion,or gust of winds,or even soft spots.\n\nThey shape is another crazy thing added on the list of things that NASA sees on different planets. This is just another figure made by the planets natural causes. Thats why NASA believes it was made by natural causes and nothing like aliens. This is just another cool object found on a planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people die due to car accidents everyday. Whether it be from human error or drunk driving, money or a jail sentence will not bring your loved one back. You neveer be aable to spend another day with the person you love because that teen just had to send one last text message. Car accidents can cause someone's sinset in the blink of an eye, but this all changes with driverless cars. Driverless cars would be useful because it uses half the fuel of a normal car and they are more safe than normal cars too.\n\nGlobal warming is a big headline of the news. This is because if it continue's the oxygen while because depleted and humans will cease to exist. As scientist try to solve this problem, we continue to make it worse by driving wherever we need to go. Ofcourse this isn't only factor, but it is a big part of the problem. By driverless cars using half the fuel of a normal car, the use of driveless cars will give scientists more time to find a solution for global warmiing. If scientists had more time, they would have a good chance of figuring out the problem based on the way technology is advancing today.\n\nDriverless cars would also enhane the safety on the roads. Driverless cars has a lot of sensors that provide the ability to detect all of its surroundings. The sensors will make it so that there aren't any blind spots on the car, which humans have with normal cars. Without any blinds spots, even if a small child runs behind the car, it will react and spare the child's life.\n\nDriverless cars are the future. Safety is one the main priorities of the creators of the driverless cars. This is why so much safety is ensured. Without the outstandingly high levels of safety, the driverless car would just be another cool car that rich people have to show off, but this is for anyone who desires the assurance that they are safe while on the roads, and that what makes driverless cars amazing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Being a celebrities, their life is an open book to the public, therefore it is common that most of them do not have privacy at all. How it affects them on how they live? In this essay, I will discuss in details why I agree that well known people cannot live freely. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the celebrities are role models that people are idolizing and fantasizing them. Some of them are acting what the community want to see. They need to be pretty, well mannered and glamorous for them to be loved and accepted. Nowadays, because of social media people are easy to access them, thus they can follow them and some can be connected to them. In addition, it is true that anyone can publicise them with a photo or video that can be taken on their mobile phones. By that, they can post it without the permission of that individual, thus invading their privacy. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, some individuals are making this for living, such as, they are selling pictures and videos to the publishers, they are callig them papparazzis. They are famous and popular because they are making the news about them whether it is good or bad. But some of them are trying to ignore and live their lives, however there are still victims of being published. It causes depression, stress and even danger not only in their lives but also to their families. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, being popular can be beneficial but it is moreSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Increasing in interests about money happened in many countries worldwide. Obviously, aguements about wage and income has become popular topics for people. This essay will demonstrate reasons behide this and some possible consequences followed the statement.\nTo begin, in the modern world, social media plays a major role in which people, younger generation in particular, communicate with others. This can be a dominant cause leading to daily conversations about financial issues. For example, a plenty of contents posted on digital platforms, such as Facebook and Instagram, are related to financial knowledge. This perhaps normalize the topics about financial to be more acceptable than in the past.\nFurthermore, luxury products have become an indicator of social status for younger generation. With tons of advertisements involved in every kinds of medias, people tend to spend their wealth on artificial things more and more. For instance, I experienced with a few individuals saving over a half of their monthly income to be able to purchase a high-end watch.\nAlthough having converstions about money might help people to understand deeper about money management and how improve themselves to get higher wage, this could lead to overspendings which could have a huge negative effect.\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that a widely used of social media and advertisements of luxury products are two major causes of a rising in popurlarity of talking about money. On one hand, the situation can help equip people with better knowledge about money management and self-improvement. On the other hand, daily discussions about money has a potential to raise an importance of external artificial objects.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days, pollution is increasing dramatically by many factors, and it is believed that raising the cost of transport will be the best way to solve this global issue. Although people may agree with this way, I fundamentally disagree with some aspects of this action.\r\n\r\nThere might be several arguments in favor of increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. First of all, there will be some people who cannot afford the new price of fuel. For example, they have to pay more for petrol then their expenditure has to increase, and their income may not come to that expectation. Secondly, if the government increases the cost of fuel, there might be no change because people still keep using the transport for their work and study. Consequently, the problem has not been solved but people will have some difficulties in lifes. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the growth of cost in fuel may have considerable benefits in reducing many types of pollution. Initially, instead of driving cars, or other vehicles, people will try riding bikes to improve the condition of the environment. Secondly, people will have a chance to reinvent their consumption, for instance, depending on their income, they will calculate the average money they should spend on fuel and other essential activities. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, to deal with the world’s environmental problem, increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles is not the best solution, and I am strongly in favor of remaining the unchanged cost in this field.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local Newspaper In opinion computers help plant The new technology makes life easier handle The computer help teaches handeye coordination You talk people new way entertained Computers teache handeye coordination typing Whether someone knows typing fast help hands Also fact typing without making also helping makes hand easier move The typing giving hand lots exersise hands moving place The move excersise get Computers really help handeye coordination alot Computers also help talking people To talk people far away better talk computer webcam see You able talk people different countries Also computers able used business meetings business talk another different locations Like part business project hong kong boss set meeting see going Another way use computers talk people speak person able see person Like oerson hospital re able go talk seeing throw computer Computers great way use communication Computer also new way get entertained They entertain games play There games come computers lot games internet Other bored time play thousands game click mouse Also bored watch videos like youtube You listen te musicor watch comedy videos Video also show way express feel sat comedy horror sad videos Also teenagers ways talk friends like facebook On website talk anyone friends list In end computer help kids adults teenagers With clicking mouse find new powerful way technology And able got better handeye coordination talk people get entertained So go get computer amazedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today s books libraries sometimes offensive Yes I know thing happen history Other books others They killing shooting drugs ect First I nt want children growing thinking okay steal drugs anything sort Iv seen books meaning libraries The kids might think good books read I think wise Books fourth graders read bad words Secondly fun read know You look way im age read kind books letting little kids read books okay people If would take really bad books music movies magazines takes one person It wouldn fair person next might think way Next okay take movie watch even ask music lesson As long okay watch lesson Im saying think would right Not everone think s People kids watch lesson kinds music movies As long okay perant okay Lastly kids kids Have grow way want grow Yes might sound dumb next person sounds okay At end day still get teach lesson kind stuff booksSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting effect cyclist ways The roads nice smooth turned hills It hot day June sparse water supply He peddling deserts California The last thing effected wasnt many places stop waterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars is a great idea, these cars would make a huge change in the world because these cars would be really helpful, but there are some adventages and disavenges of the use of these cars, one adventages is that can drive by themselves, but a desaventage is that if the sensors don't work what would happen?.\n\nDriverless cars would be really helpful for people and mostly for people that travel a lot they fall sleep, these cars would help them by taking control and so no one get hurt. Driverless cars have sensors that help to create a 3-D model of the car's surroundings so this would help the car to see if there is any danger and if the is the car will notify the driver to take over and take another options. Cars like these ones are a great idea, it will allow the drivers to take a rest when they are tired.\n\nCars like driverless cars are not perfect and they are not 100 percent safe, these cars can be really expensive too and not everyone would buy them. About safety the sensors that these cars use what if they don't work? what would it happen? if the sensors don't work the cars will not alert the driver if there is any danger and this will end up in an accident and would not be good for the manufacturer and the owner, these were some reasons why the manufacturers want to put cameras in the cars so the car can see the driver and know whether the driver can drive or cannot drive.\n\nSome manufacturers like GM they have developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. Other car that tells the driver when they should take over the car is the Google car. Cameras in cars can help a lot because while the driver is watching the road the car is watching the driver. Some manufacturers are considering bringing entertainment for these cars and information system that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off when the driver needs to take over. This new tegnology in cars is really good, but how much these will cost? No one knows yet. I strongly agree with the develop of the driverless cars because this will really help peole and will help to reduce the cars accidents.\n\nDriverless cars are defenitly are great this new tegnology will allow the driver to take a rest and then take over any time. The sensors that the cars have help to avoid any danger. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have these new cars drive themselves by 2020, the cars they try to make will be the best option to have less cars accidents in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author happy The love Of cooking still today I eternally grateful Passionate Cuban music Which I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen I always greatful parent love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done They lives teachings basis life My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life The author s mood happy grateful parents give author better life leaving s behindSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As we look back through the records of histroy, humans have made and continue to make an extraorindary advancment in technology. These transformations in technology have worked and cooperated with humans to make life better. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" new advancements in self-driving cars are presented. Though there are many drawbacks of the idea as of right now, humans will make another historial breakthough as they always have. I believe the idea of driverless cars should be promoted due it being more safe, efficient, and helpful to our everyday lives.\n\nThe first reason of why I support driverless cars is because of how much more safer it is. If you look out to our world today, machines have replaced so much of what used to be the works of humans. That was because of machines being more capable of precision and safety. Many factory works have been transferred over to machines who do not have to rely on anyone else and additionally does not have to be concerned about safety. In the same way, we can see how much more safe driverless cars are. Google has proven this because their \"cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" In our world today, there are car accidents occuring every minute of our lives. If we can reduce the amount of accidents through driverless cars, then the lives of people will be more safe. Because of how driverless cars can ensure the safety of humans, I support it.\n\nThe second reason why I defend the idea of driverless cars is because of how dependent society can be towards these cars. Although driverless cars are not as developed as we wish to, they will be completed to perfection in the near future. With driverless cars being perfected by manufacturers, they will be more cooperative as they can coordinate themselves with other driverless cars so accidents will not happen, and they will find out the shortest distance and time to a certain destination. Google's cofounder Sergey Brin envisions of a more sophisticated car that enables more efficientcy than that of the human: \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" With the development of these cars, they can replace all the cars humans drive with a great transportation system for public-transport and commuters. I support driverless cars because of how they can steer the world into a better place.\n\nLastly, I endorse self-driving cars because of how helpful it will be to humans. If you were in in an emergency situation where you couldn't drive but needed to go to a hospital, driverless cars would literally save your life. Not only that, but if you are a child and you have no one that can drive you to your game, or grocery store, or friends house, you never have to ask anyone ever again for a ride. A driverless car would always be there to help you in your times of inconvenience. Because of how convenient driverless cars can be, it is one more step of why I defend driverless cars.\n\nNo matter how crazy an idea or an invention of technology may be, they were made to make the lives of humans better. Every invention had its own times of adversity: The lightbulb, computers, planes, and even the car itself. Every piece of technology had to go through numerous amounts of trial and error to become what it is today. This concept applies to driverless cars as well. We are merely in the stage of development and trial and error so that driverless cars can be made to perfection for the comfort of human lives. I support the idea of driverless cars because of how safe, efficient, and life-changing it will be to humans.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The part of public believes that taking part in community activities has significant advantages for young people, individually and publicly, while there is no income. As with the group of people, this essay supposes that this type of work, if done by someone, will lead to both improving individual skills and making better conditions for where they live. In the following paragraphs, these will be presented, respectively.\r\n\r\nAt first, it can be said that being a member of a group, undoubtedly, can bring numerous invaluable experiences, particularly in the early teens. Although earning money could be considered a responsibility for everyone, regardless of age group, attending non-profit teamwork programs couse to promote self-improvement and a professional-looking personality, extensively. As a sequence, people would be able to achieve their desired positions, socially and professionally, as it makes them extremely happier than past. For example, the 2013 study, done by Cambridge University, has shown Juveniles who assign a part of their daily time to charity activities, were more patient and kind than others, they didn't.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, from society's point of view, it's a good opportunity to find new and inspirational answers to all sorts of dominant challenges in the country through citizen cooperation. Besides that nowadays there are various communities in any nation that focus on a specific problem, which allows all humans to have a better life. As an example, in Italy, there are lots of environmental campaigns that try to reduce their carbon footprint by increasing public awareness and imposing pressure on the government.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, for secondary students, being a member of a community, without any income, not only gives them a sense of satisfaction and pride and lets them correct some personal traits but also makes their city more livable than before.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Leanardo da Vinic is well known for the Mona Lisa. She is known for having a small smile or not being very happy. A computer program detects that she is 83 percent happy. This computer program is made to understand and know emotions by facial features. I believe that this technology is valuable to students because it can detect facial features humans cannot detect.\n\nIn addition, Facial Action Coding System deals with the little details of an expression. FACS takes a 3-D computer model of the face and examines all 44 major muscles. Each expression is compared to a neutral face. The article states, \"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worries, ect\". Students should be using this program for science. They would be able to study emotions to know what they are how they are shown. Also, the drama club or threater of the school could use FACS to make thier acting more meanful. There are so many more emotions than happy or sad. This program can help students learn how to show their emotions. \"Empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.\" We may react to someone's emotion state too quickly so we don't react in a positive way. With this program students may be able to connect with one another, on a higher level. Therefore, Facial Action Coding System would help students show the little deals to an expression.\n\nIn the final analysis, I do believe that the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable piece of technology to students. This computer program would allow students to study expressions. They could see the little deals for a facial expression more clearly. The students would have a chance to study the science of emotions. They would be able to connect with one other.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today I'm writing about The Challenge of Exploring Venus. Venus is sometimes called the \"Evening Star\". Its one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from the sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nFirst, there's a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater that what we expreinced on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liqefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather presnt additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nHowever, peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atomosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to out knowledge of Venus.\n\nLast, NASA is working on other approches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important rolein the 1940s during World War 2. The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nFinally, I'm talking about all the things i talked about in my paragraphs. I talked about Venus and it's nickname, the amosphere percent, orbiting and hovering and then the NASA.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With the advancement of modern technologies nowadays, people have debated whether scientific studies must aim at finding cures for diseases rather than other areas of concern. This essay will discuss either side and then explain why I prefer for research to give equal importance to all the issues that matter in our society.\r\n\r\nTo start with, people are suggesting that more thorough research should be spent to deal with the deteriorating health of our society. They are concerned that more and more people are becoming sick thus, focused research must be implemented to have answers to the health problems that our communities are facing nowadays. One good example is the current pandemic. To further elaborate, it has been 2 years since the COVID 19 started and yet, there are still people who die because of the virus. Vaccines may have been invented but it does not necessarily free us from the detrimental effects of this phenomenon.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some are debating that other issues like economic stability, public safety and the likes are equally vital to the health issues that need to be focused on. They believe that being healthy will not be enough to survive thus giving importance to sustainable living and being safe is a must. In particular, having peace of mind, of not worrying about day to day life will give also a healthy life thus life's function should come as equally important.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as others may point out that health issues should be focused on research, I believe other society's functions should also be given equal importance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "currently, there are more and more people make a decision not to bear offsprings when they are young and wait until they get older. in this essay, i would like to give some reasons for this and in my opinion, there would be more negative impacts than positive ones. \r\n\r\nthere are some reasons for this trend. due to the rapid development of the world, people have to work harder in order to contribute to their nations. as a result, people are too busy and do not have much time to take care of their children. similarly, the world is advanced, which leads to more expensive equipments for child-rearing. people before having a child, have been used to a freedom life where they spend everything on themselves. therefore, they might not ready for looking after a child. \r\n\r\nhowever, i would argue that this trend might have more more negative influences than positive counterparts. because of having later age pregnancy, there would be some negative impacts on their children. according to reasearch, pregnancy after 35 may lead to autism, disablility, impaired cognition. this leads to childern grow up might be a burden to the society. having children in their later age might also cause a significant gap between two generations. as a result, parents might experience hard time to understand and communicate with their offsrings. if parents bear offsprings when they were young, there would not have any generation gaps. \n\r\nin conclusion, there are many reasons why people prefer having children when they get older however this could lead to generation gap and physical disorders in the next generationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "How features setting affected cyclist story Do Not Exceed Posted Limit dangerous life The cyclist traveling Yosemite National Park hot The cyclist traveled miles miles bike past deserted towns This place might thriving little spot ghost town The terrain threatening twenty two miles cyclist overcome short rolling hills would use energy make thirst water even stronger The cyclist water hot day helping After grueling journey cyclist used strength go local bait shop drank sink trechorous environment exposed The features setting story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit life threatening almost killed cyclist due lack water terrain overcomeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are an advancement to the world. Driverless cars are the future of technology. They are giving jobs to engineers that didn't have jobs before.\n\nDriverless cars are being put in movies and television because people are so fascinated by the technology being used by the drvierless cars. People are trying to make these cars into a reality. Google is testing cars, \"under certain conditions since 2009.\"\n\nEngineers are already using inhancements in the cars that are being developed in today's world. They have invented antilock brakes and driver assistance. These inventions are being used so that people can be safer when they drive. People are inhancing these vehicles so our society can feel safe on the roads with their vehicles.\n\nPeople who are against driverless cars, they might point out that these cars still have to have the driver to take over in some conditions like constuction on the roads. They also might say that the cameras in the cars that watch the drivers would be an invasion of privacy. They might also say that driverless cars might not be able to detect if there is a person or an animal in the road. They may also say that the in-car entertainment would be a distraction from the road and the person driving wouldn't know if something like an accident was about to happen.\n\nDeveloping these cars and the inhancements in the cars are being developed to keep people safe. They are being developed to help people with disabilities that might not be able to drive. This is the future of our nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, technology is developing faster than ever before. Unfortunately, not all of us have a financial opportunity to live in a modern high- tech world. When some people think, that technology make a gap between rich and poor humans, other think it cause the opposite effect. In this essay I will discuss both opinions and try to find a right view.\r\n\r\n With the developing of technology our everyday's life becom more digital and a lot of modern devices are available. Therefore, our life is changing. For example, we use digitalisation on our workspaces and in our homes in order to make lifes much easier. In addition, our habbits, flavors, and goals are chaining as well. Majority of people living under the poverty line, however, still does not have an opportunity to use all modern devices due to its cost, so their life is much different. That may be a cause of the increasing the gap between rich and poor people.\r\n\r\n At the same time, digitalisation makes lots of opportunities for poor people to communicate with those, who are rich. There are many examples, how an asking for help, job search, and even finding a soul mate has spread and been successful due to the Internet. So, in these cases, technology constricts the gap between people of different social backgrounds. Futhermore, most of the an available for poverty- stricken persons devices help to understand what does rich life looks like, what do rich people dream and interest about. That is why I am convinced, technology binds all mankind together.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, technological progress has huge impact on our lifes, although it does not separate people. Due to the Internet humans have an opportunity to fraternize, to work and even fall in love with people of different spocial status.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my opinion, I feel that drivless cars are both a pro and a con. I say that because there are some great points that comes along with the idea of drivless cars, and there are also some not so great ideas. Meaning that having a drivless car may give you many benifits and set backs all in one.\n\nA pro and also a great point for having a driveless car is that there will be way less accidents. It states in the passage that, \" while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" Meaning it will send an alert to the driver if they're texting and driving, or basically just not paying attention to the road.\n\nA con to having a driveless vehicle is that it'll be very expensive to buy one because of all the technology and sensors they're using within the car. It states in the passage that, \"Within 10 years, sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to danger of out-of-control skids. Meaning that they puts lots of work into this car to make it safe for the customer, but in the end they put lots of money into it as well.\n\nIn conclusion, I still stick to my opinion on having a drivless car is both a pro and a con. Although the car may be highly advanced and gives you a higher advantage of being safe, it'll also be alot of money. If i was ever asked the question, \" Do i see myself having a drivless car in the future?\" The answer would be, I dont know.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars are not widly choosed over walking because things are to close and with less people driving less co2 emissions with is cutting back on the green house effect. 12% of co2 emissions are from cars and passenger vehicals. David Goldberg says '' since world war II transportation id growing quickly. Do to cars and there emissons pair has put a ban on them till the smog they have created clears up. Cold nights and warm days cause the emissions to get trapped in the air. Obama wants to put curb on the cor emissons and all the pollution that its causes. The united syates has long been the prime culture for cars do the birth place of the model T was in Detroit. Cars seem to be the big thing in the united states. Number of miles driven have grew scence 2005. Resources are getting closer and closer every day having none. The united states leads in car emissions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This story believed never giving story perseverance Saeng really believed could pass driver s test although disappointed result found way cope loss The hibiscus flower means lot connect homeland thing beauty something needed ugly time It s always hard adapt new country short period time I know s like one small thing goes wrong You snap feel lot worse actually You feel helpless alone like hibiscus growing next highway photo Saeng vowed take drivers test hibiscus would bloom spring I think hibiscus really symbolizes Saeng personSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am Luke Bomberger and I have been to very unique places in my life time. Right now I work part time at two jobs in grocery store and at a bank. But what I didn't know that my life would change soon after I graduated. So thanks to my friend Don Reist he invited me ot go to Europe with him on a cattle boat. So of course I couldn't just say no because if I would have to be just carzy It was a life time opportunity.\n\nIt was in the year of 1945, it was the time of World War II. So to help people recover, 44 nations joined to form a UNRRA. The UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. So the next thing you know Don and I were signed up.\n\nIn August 1945, we received our orders to go and report to the New Orleans. \" We arrived August 14 ,\" Luke said. Which was the day the that the Pacific War ended. They got their Seaman's paper and boarded up the SS Charles W. Woodster, headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses and plus enough hay to feed them all.\n\nLuke's birthday happened before arriving to Greece. He turned 18 which meant he could be drafted to military service. \" When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle boat trip, they told me to justto keep doing that for my service.\"\n\nBut the trips we went on were unbelievable opportunities for a little small town boy like me.\n\nIt took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the Eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Caring for all the animalsand the crossingskept me busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bag of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nHelping out on my aunt Katie's farm as a little boy helped me a lot to prepare me for this job. But not for the dangers on the seas that I had to face. On my second trip I was watch man for all the crews out on the boats. My job was to check all of the animals for every hourSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever gone to school feeling sad, depressed, anxious, gloomy, alone and no one asks you about it?, have you ever just wanted someone to understand that your feeling a certain way, do you think maybe things would be different if someone could detect what was going on. Now there is way of making this happen, its called \"Facial Action Coding System\" it anables computers to identify human emotions just by taking a glance.\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face and all 44 major muscles move like real human muscles. They create an action unit then they clasify each movement and muscle used to describe what emotion is being transmitted. Could you imagine having a computer be you're friend, I could. I think this system would improve not only the learning cuality but it would improve students to get help if they ever need it, teenage years are hard sometimes and adding school stress to them can be harsh, this computer would detect if any student ever had a problem with their mental health and we could solve those silent problems before they get out of hand.\n\nAcoording to the article \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" these features could help speed up the learning process and give every student exactly what they need to get all of their learning done.\n\nThis technology could adjust to everyones needs and we could become better everyday, the future depends on the little details we need to fix, I think complementing this system would be a great way to start making a change.\n\nMy argument may or or may not influence your point of view on this new technology, but after everything we all go for the pusuit of happiness.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of technology suchas, Facial Action Coding system, is totally uneccessary in the classroom setting. Claiming that \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' \" is an ineffective way to to really, truly get through to the students. Instead of focusing on adding more technology to the classroom, maybe giving teachers a better salary and better education would help the teachers teach better, then the students would understand the material better. In the article, it says \" we humans perform the same impressive 'calculation' every day\". If humans already have this natural ability, then adding more technology into the classroom that teacher could already be doing, is uneccessary and distracting. I am sure there are some upsides to this, but it really just feels like an invasion of the students privacy. In the article is says \" ' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrucor' \"\n\nThe teacher can not just modify an entire lesson because one student is confused, that is unfair to the students that understand the lesson already. Instead, the teacher could work with the student individually and help them with what they are having trouble with. All in all, adding more uneccessary technology into the classroom would be distracting to the students and an invaison of their privacy. The \"Facial Action Coding system\" could be useful somewhere else, just not the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Accidents on roads are one of the main causes of many injuries around the world. In order to enhance the road safety level, some people believe that people who commit on roads should be punished with more serious measures. In my opinion, I agree with that idea but it is not the only because the government funding should also be involved in.\r\nInitially, using stricter penalty may raise human-being awareness. They are likely to be more collaborate and focus when using their vehicles, as they would not like to throw an amount of money away. That, indeed, can improve the accidental rate as careless drivers are particularly the group that is the root of many road avoidable incidents. What is more, high penalties encourage people staying indoor and using public transports, which is an imaginative solution for reducing pollution released to our environment as well.\r\nOn the other hand, I am convinced that government spending on upgrading infrastructure is likely to improve commuter safety. If the highways didn’t have a sufficient lighting system, there would be no doubt that travelers struggle, especially during night time. In retrospect, the areas that have accidents taking place frequently usually relate to intersecting junctions, lack of signs or mirrors and unstable road surface. These obstacles might possibly be solved by reinforcing civil infrastructure which is funded by incentives from the state. In Vietnam, for example, there was a enormous inclination of the number of traffic accidents and the mortality rates when government allocate more resources to transportation aspects.\r\nAll in all, punishing more seriously on drivers offensing is a method to be safer on road, however, to achieve the optimal consequence government funding should take precedence over.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the passage \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about Facial Action Coding System (F.A.C.S.) and how it can read human emotions whch brings up the topic of can it be useful in schools and teaching our youth. To be fair its a cool idea maybe something you play around with at home or with some freinds but there's really nothing to benefit from it. for enstance say you use it on a student and find out they're upset or angry you still wont be able to change the fact that there upset. Another reason it would pointless is because not always but for the most part you can tell how someone is emotionally by body language and behavior as stated \"you can proabably tell how a freind is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" . So theroretically speaking why spend some of the schools budget on something that we can do without technology that generally would have no benefit on education. So in conclusion there would be no value in adding this type of technology to the classroom.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowdays, student have the apportunity to study in a university or college to improve thier skills.However,the question is how can the young adult become more innovative and productive if they realise the importance of going to eduction societies insted of working dirctely after graduated from high school.I completely agree with this idea because it help people to become more dependable,in this essay,I will consider both sides with examples and effects.\n\nLearning after high school hleps people to become more responsible.Additionally,this is wonderful for young people to learn the importance of gaining independence.for example,some students start going to anther city to study,so they will definitely get many experience and discovering themselves.Morwover,after graduated the students are become keen on to study and follow thier own dreams.consequently,in the future people are going to become much happier with thier result and more sensible and comfortable.\n\ngraduates who start going to work straightly might bring many negatives.Firstly,they might get exploited by bad people to do the worst jobs.Therefore,alcohol and drugs are more likely to used by young people so, the problem can spread easily.Furthermore,most of the workers get lower costs,because they do not have degrees.As a ,result crimes could spread quickly in our communities.\n\nIn conclusion,education has become an essential part of our lives so people should study and learn new information because of the improvement of new technologies.I completely agree with this idea because we need to learn to improve our skills and to offer their needs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Most people have oponions that the most essential thing for achieving success in any field such as art and sport is natural talent. Other people disagree with this statement and believe that everybody in their early ages can become a professional sportsmen or artist if they are exellently taught. From my point of view, this is an extrimely controversial topic. I honestly believe that children who are interested in the subject they learn and who have natural abilities for some fields can become more successful than those who just encouraged by adults. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and then give my review to the issue.\nOn the one hand, children who have talents from their births can become advanced in the chosen area because they have natural willingness and abilities to succeed in this field. Those youngsters can spend hours without any interraption in the process of making and creating something. By doing this, they improve their abilities and boost their skills, which become more adcanced in each step. Additionally, they are very involve in their studies without stimulation from others that their achievements are inevitable. For example, my son who is three years old enjoy painting and I always notice some improvements in his paintings, that means that he improve his skills in daily basis.\nOn the other hand, children who do not have talents or nutural abilities for great achievements in any field can be encouraged by adult professionals, who can educate as well as motivate them. For example, when I was a child, I was impressed by music teacher who played the piano in the kindergaten which I visited. After her wonderful performance, I asked my mother to register my for my education in the music school, which was close to our home. So, I was quite motivated to fullfill my dream in getting musical background, that is why I studed hard every day during seven years. I am not only become a musician and got my certificate with exellent marks, but I also won some musical competitions. So, willingness to become successful in chosen field is essential issue.\nIn conclusion, children who have talents and natural abilities for achievements in any field are easely can become successful because they do not need additional motivation from adults, whereas children who found the sphere which they interested in even without talent can improve their skill by allocating more hours and investing more energy for implementing their dream.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author attempts to convince the reader that studying Venus is worth all the dangerous problems one would face trying to study the beautiful planet.\n\nThe author starts off his argument by stating how \"challenging\" it is to examine Venus at a close proximidy, and procides to state all the factors of studying Venus and explain why it is so dangerous to explore this planet. The author first states facts about Venus that would affect a mission to the surface. These comments are mostly about it's atmosphere, stating that the thick atmophere is \"almost 97% carbon dioxide\" and contains high amounts of sulfuric acid, which as a result, causes the temperature to average at \"over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" And to top that off, the atmospheric pressure is \"90 times greater then planet Earth's,\" suggesting that a submarine that was made to endure Earth's deepest parts of the ocean would be crushed on planet Venus. Later on, the author explains why we should even try to learn more about this supposedly miss understood planet. The author claims that astronomers are \"fascinated\" by Venus because they believe that it could have been the planet most like Earth in the solar system at one point in the past; possessing \"large oceans\" and being able to \"support various forms of life,\" and that even now Venus still has traits that could hint to the idea that it used to be a lot like Earth, such as having a \"rocky sediment\" surface, along with valleys, mountains, and craters. Although the author could have gone more into depth in this subject; inferring that astronomers should study Venus' surface because humanity wants to know why this change may have happened, and if we could avoid Earth following the same path, his argument as to why we should study Venus' surface is highly valid and valued as a strong reason despite the dangers.\n\nOverall, the author of the passage, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" has a strong, thought out reason why humanity should explore Venus close up in the years to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One day going friend house birthday party I knew birthday party going lot fun even though going I I nt know going fun turned though The whole day waiting could go house I packed bags got everything ready sleep As one way called said get house look right The whole way dad driving house kept eyes right side rode nt quit sure looking though As got closer saw something bushes It I told dad honk knew pulled pants mooned us I laughing hard whole night kept thinking look dads face Little know nt going funniest thing happened night Later I went walk dock house While dock bat flew almost fell water cause scared I standing behind laughing hard By time getting kind dark neighbors really loud So ran dock neighbors house hid started yelling things quiet It funny idea yells coming kept looking around confused We started laughing hard could hardly quiet We wait neighbors stop looking around trying figure telling quiet That s funniest thing happened either As walking back house heard car coming made plan I stood middle street stood ahead hiding bushes The plan I going pretend fight going run bushes pretend shoot So car starts turning corner start fake fighting As car gets closer starts slowing come running bushes Pretends fake shoot I fall ground like really hurt trying hold back laughs man think got people car good Then realize way actually shot gun shot sound So people car come closer laughing hard hear even see When got closer realized family friends coming party knew fake whole time When got darker outside found huge watermelon took bridge house We brought video camera put night vision threw watermelon bridge When hit water mad really loud sound split bunch tiny pieces That night one best funniest nights ever The next day fun continued going lake swinging rope swings water got really bad rope burn hilarious I always best time together tons laughs A lot happened night overall great birthday I m glad gotSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My opinion on this topic about driverless cars is that it should be taken seriously. Throughout the history since cars were invented, there have been many accidents due to drivers or pedestrians. We should take into consideration that if humans cant seem to handle every day tasks on their own, there has to be another solution. For example, we have been with this idea of driverless cars since the 1950's. Possibly some facts from the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" might change your mind.\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin has a bright mind and sees a future where no one would have to buy cars anymore. He's not the only one who has thought of this idea though. Many movies have scenes where cars or transportation has no human needed in order to function. Not only will it benefit from decreasing accidents, but will also use half the fuel of today's taxis and has more flexibility than a bus.\n\nHumans always make mistakes, its part of life. So when driving can also end lives because we cant seem to focus too long on one thing, having transportion that works productively without human flaws is a better idea.\n\nPeople since the 1950's have been creating systems where cars can manually work on their own. This has been an important aspect in our lives in order to improve safety. Google cars and others that made been from different companies all have new improved technology on their cars. For example, these driverless cars have sensors to detect things from instinct.They alert when they see work zones or even accidents, so the driver can help it back to safety.\n\nIn some states its even allowed to drive some semi-automated cars. Imagine a world where its simpler and more reliable for transportion. The world would decrease the percentage of accidents. Not only will it help you, but also our environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives happy mood The author talks passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen In paragraph makes house seem happy joyful In paragraph author also says within walls young parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen makes author seem happy since like cook Narciso Rodriguez talks simple house parents welcomed refugees celebrate arrival country celebrated first birthdays mood seems everybody liked come house This whole memoir Narciso Rodriguez makes mood seem happy warmSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating a debate over whether the investment should be allocated on developing technology for space discovery or other aspects to bring more immensely favourable benefits. From my personal point of view, I am well convinced that it is of essence to invest in technological research, notwithstanding several pressing issues such as the educational system. \r\n\r\nIt cannot be denied that the cutting-edge facilities in the planet's exploration play a paramount significant role for human beings. Obviously, in this day and age, due to environmental degradation, the appearance of various natural disasters are making the survival of humans seriously threatened. Thereby, the relocation for the significant breakthrough in spacecraft technologies which might precisely predict strange objects in space or other horrendous affairs coming to the Earth. For instance, it might help people avoid an eclectic mix of grave issues such as floods, asteroid collisions to effectively minimize the unmeasured loss of lives and property. Therefore, it is irrefutable that investing money in space exploration might bring a wealth of tremendous redeeming features of human life.\r\n\r\nWhile the imperativeness of allocating money on galaxy exploration is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those on the other significant aspects are neglected, especially when it comes to the educational system. It is such a common norm that people are residing in a knowledge-based society where education is the backbone industry of the prosperity of a nation. Hence, investment in applying the high-tech teaching devices that can do wonders for the potential students in the most decent condition to become a productive labour force. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, albeit there is a flood of other aspects that need to invest money in the present situations, space exploration is still a pivotal aspect that should be invested to prepare for the global unprecedented issues. Therefore, I would contend that all of the mentioned aspects should be financed equally.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "First off, I would like to tell you that we have conducted a series of research to prove that aliens did not make this structure, it was just a naturally formed structure. When we first took the picture with the spaceship, Viking 1, we didn't have the best camera strength that we used to take the last picture. This led all of us to believe that it was a face on Mars, and almost everyone sought to it that is was a sign of life on Mars. Soon we just figured out it was another Martian mesa on Mar's surface, nothing special.\n\nWhen you look at that first picture we took, I could understand that you would believe that it was made by alien life. After slaving over all of the research we had done to prove it wasn't and released it to the press, you still believe it was aliens? Just to make people more happy with the news, NASA snapped another picture with the Mars Global Surveyor. It showed that it was just another NATURAL land form. There was no alien moniment to show. Though not everyone was satasfied with the results.\n\nWhen they took that photo, The Faces on Mars was located at 41 degress north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98. This is a cloudy time of a year on the Red Planet. So people wanted to have a clearer image since the picture had to be taken through a layer of clouds. Finding the Face on Mars wasn't an easy job, but we found it again and snapped a thrid picture in April of 2001. This certain picture showed that it was just another Mesa.\n\nSo in conclusion, would you now still believe that this is an alien made structure. After all the research, would you still think that it was a alien made structure? Looking at the photos clearly show that it has only bumps that project the shadows that made the Face on Mars to look like just that, a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The world is a very dangerous and busy place. Scientists are always trying to find ways to make the world a simpler place such as cell phones to make calling peoplemore simple than using land lines and the internet to make finding information a faster and easier task. Technology has changed the lives for many people.\n\nFor years, people have thought of ways driving can be inproved by technology. Acording to the quote ,\" In the late 1950's, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track that was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to the receiver on the front end of the car.\" engineers have tried to make self-driving cars. It wasn't until 2013 until the nearly perfected the model called the \"Trafic Jam Assistant\" which could go up to 25mph and has touch sensors so that the car knows if the drive takes his/her hands off of the wheel.In my opinion, I think that self driving cars are very helpful and could help prevent a lot of deaths per year, because the car wouldnt make the same mistakes a human would. Such as falling asleep while driving or driving while intoxicated. So I think there wouldnt be as many crashes happening. According to the passage,\"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on auto pilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\"\n\nwe will have perfected self driving cars before we know it.\n\nSo in conclusion, I believe that these new and inproved cars will help better the world and its people.Technology has changed the lives for many people. and it will also change it for people in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Mr:Senator I am in favor of keeping the election by popular vote for the president of the United States. I think our country deserve the right to elect our president the person thats going to make the laws and better things for us. Some of the people yet can't vote but they watch the interviews the campains you make. What you are preparing for us for the future for our childrens parents and animals. For every single thing and we judge you the way we think is supposed to be we want our country to be better to be the best . We dont want some people we dont even know how they think to select something for us .Alright maybe sometimes we make wrong elections but we all humans and if we make the wrong decition later we can't judge you because we elect our president our ''saver''. Electoral collage is not a bad option but Im in favor of voting by popular vote for the president of the United State . Voting is a privilage we have it let us use it . Let us pick and make our mistake . Try to tell us by the campians congresist let us know you. The way you think so we can be sure in what hands our putting our futures our sons and daughters future. The electoral collage constists in 538 electors. A majoritiy of 270 electoral votes is requiered to elect the President. The presidential election is held every four years on Tusday after Monday in Novemeber. New year isn't a new life . The elections is new taxes , new laws, new benefits. Thats a new life .When you vote for a president you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors. Democrats and Repunblicans they all had have ups and downs . But they still make their elections. Being in favor of election by popular vote give us the people the right to decide . The right to choose something good our bad the right to know what we need and want from the new President. If we choose by popular vote is that more people want somebody because that somebody offers something better. Because everyone or allmost everyone is confident about that man. About what his offering us . Elecitng our president by popular vote ill be a great idea . You will make the people happy. And you are giving us the place as citizens of the United States that we deserved. These is the greates country, this is the best country in the hall world everyone want to come here because of the equal rights you give us. Because the liberty of expretion. Thats a previlage . Aren't we allow to use it to the the maximun . This is a free country and we had to fight hard for that our ansesters. Electing our President of the Unirted States by popular vote is the best they could do . Im in favor of it and that's my opinion.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I would argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states and not keeping the ellectoral college. there are many reasons why i say that and will do that. some people might still want electoral college because of the certainity of outcome, everyones president, swing states, big states, and last but not least to avoid run-off elections.\n\nin my opinion i think we should change the election by popular votes instead of ellectoral college, because we the people .. vote for who we think should be head or our state and who we think is going to be in charge and do they thiing and make our a state a better and safier place to live. We dont vote for electors ... so many people can vote on one paticular person to be head of our state and president and the other person can only get 3 votes but in ellectoral collage he/she can have more electoral votes and they win the election .. even tho the other canidate has more popular votes.\n\nThe other reason why i might want to change rhe election by popular votes instead of ellectoral college is becauise of the \"disaster factor\". Which the state legislature are responsible for picking electors..... and the electors would/could always defy the will of the poeple.\n\nThose are the two main reasons why i would argue in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of united states and not keeping the ellectoral college.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Is the landform on Mars created by aliens or just a natural landform. In the article '' Unmasking the Face on Mars'', it talks about this landform on Mars. Some conspiracy theorists say that the landform was created by aliens. NASA says that they wish that there was an ancient civilization on Mars. In my opinion, the face on Mars is just a natural landform because it is not seen as much often, it is proven not to be created by aliens, and the landforms are common around Mars.\n\nFirst, the landform can not be seen as often. In paragraph 9, it says that mission control scanned the planet and they rarely pass over it. Mission control also took pictures of it. They took pictures to have a better look at the landform. In April 8, 2001 Mission control used Mars Global Surveyor to take more photos on maximum resolution because it can hardly by seen. So that is why the landform can be seen less than usual.\n\nSecondly, the landform is proven not to be created by aliens. In paragraph 6 and 7, it says that on the scientists' research they found that the landform is not created by aliens. It is not created by aliens because the landforms are common in that area. Also that when they tried to find the answer, they used photos they took with maxium resolution on it. So that is how the landform is proven not to be created by aliens.\n\nThirdly, the landforms are common on Mars. In paragraph 12, It says that the picture of the landform is common. It also said that the landform is like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. In the text is says,''that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa is the same height as the face on Mars. So that is why the landforms on Mars are common, not created by aliens.\n\nIn conclusion, the face on Mars is just a natural landform. There are many reasons or details that says that it is a landform. Some reasons or details are that the landform is common on Mars and that it proven not to be created by aliens. The reasons for this is the formation of rocks. So that is my opinion on why the face is just a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "First of all,Driverless cars are a great idea to have in the future because it helps prevent alot of accidents and would be cool to have. I think they should do more stuff to the driverless car like add a entertainment center so the driver would be entertained and more people would probably be interested in buying one in the future. Driverless cars would be wonderful to have in the future because they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves without a human having to do anything and it would notify a human driver to take over when the situation requires.\n\nAlso, manufactures are considering to use cameras to watch the driver while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver so that the driver is not texting or doing other things while driving, which would prevent accidents or being pulled over and given a ticket. A negative thing about having a driverless car is that drivers would get bored when waiting for their turn to drive. But, some manufactures hope to bring in some car enterainment and information systems so that the driver would be entertained in having something to do when they´re not driving.\n\nFinally, driverless cars would be great to have in the future because it has all this new technology inside that would keep you safe and entertained when you´re not driving. Although, driverless cars has some negative things about it that would need work on but overall, I would reccomend it to people to buy in the future. Also, this specific car would help prevent alot of accidents and deaths from a regular car because a driverless car has a camera to watch what you´re doing so you are safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir talking boy s life parents living nice people I think authors mood would like happy Nice caring people rude Its careing love happinessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of Facial Action Coding Systems mis a new recent peice of technology that is used to read human emmotion through facial expressions. In this essay I will be telling you why i beleve this is wrong and give you evidence and the downfalls this tech coulkd have.\n\nPeoples emotionms are practically personal buisness of the person who is feeling that way it shouldnt be anyone elses buisness what he or she is feeling. It would also cost alot of money to aforrd the tech that has been built to run the algorithims \"Your home PC cant handle the complex algorithims\". That excerpt from the last pragraph in the artical tells me this must be very costly to use in a classroom enviorment. One down fall if this new tech also is \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" this c ould cause problems with being able to trust computer programming to tell us the emptions of anyone because everyone looks diffrent and has diffrent facial expressions for certain emotions or what if some crys when they laugh or laughs when they are frustrated.\n\nSo in conclusion this technology can be very costly and may have a chance of ebing somewhat inaccurate and can be an ivasion of someone personal privacy. Hoipefully i opened some new doors to you and hekped you see this technolofy in a diffrent way than before.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Money cannot guarantee people's happiness. It is proved by experts that although economic growth has made people richer, people from developed countries feel less happy than they were before. In contrast, in poor countries, wealth make them happier. I will outline the reason why this phenomenon happened.\n\nIn the case of developed countries, they are never starving. In the past, they can found meal everywhere and able to bought it. Before technology advanced, they already went to work such as farming or work in a factory. They had enough money to prevent them from starving. Another reason is the time of working. They worked several hours and have time to take a rest. Meanwhile, in recent year, they work overlap time hours. They have no time to do their interest or go on vacations with their family. It is because of competition among people. Their ambition encourages them to pursue their goal and achievement for enhancing their status.\n\nOn the other hand, residents of developing countries feel happier than they were before because they ever lived in a lack of education and food. In the past, it was really hard for them to buy some food and studied in formal education. But today, since they are richer than before, they can get both of those terms. They can buy an important stuff for their life. Another reason is they can manage their time working well, so they still have time to interact with other people.\n\nIn conclusion, I must say that what we can learn about two cases above is to love our life. It is true that we need to work and earn money for our life but it cannot be denied that we need to enjoy our life with our lovely people. So, we need to thanks for everything we have and we got.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered what else is beyond this planet earth. There is much more out there than what we know. The universe is a very great mystery. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author focuses more toward the planet Venus. Venus is much more than what we believe it is. Venus is not just an ordianary planet it's much more. There are other things that could be threating on Venus because NASA does not have enough information as stated on Paragraph 2.\n\nDiscovering Venus may be harder than NASA thought. First you would have to get the materials to be able to survive in Venus' enviornment. The materials to build the space ship and for the ship to function well. The people would also have to be trained very well for the circumstance they will have to face. It will be a challenge for the people going to Venus, but in the long run it will be helpful for NASA to retrieve all the information about Venus.\n\nNow the cost will be something very big. The suits for the people will cost a lot of money. The suits would have to withstand very high heat. The ship would have to withstand very high heat tempatures as well. The technology required will also be very expensive. Everything required for the mission will cost a lot of time and not only that, but a fortune.\n\nSince NASA doesn't know much about Venus they would have to send people very smart and with a lot of patience because in tough situations you will need to be calm and alerted. Venus also might have things we have never seen before like creatures or objects. The people in the ship would also need to have very good communication with each other. On Paragraph 4 it states \"Astronomers are fascinated bu Venus because it may very well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solor system.\" NASA would have to make many caculations and work to get to Venus.\n\nIt takes hard work and dedtication to get to where you want to be. Getting to Venus will be a challenge for NASA in many ways. NASA would have to cunduct a lot of research. NASA knowing very little of Venus will be even harder to get there. They are currently trying to get more research from Venus and are trying to make plans forpeople to head to Venus safely. NASA is curently working on many other approaches to learn more about Venus as stated on Paragraph 7. NASA will one day be able to send people to Venus and will be able to open many more doors to the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The reason why I think you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because i think it would be fun to do all the things that they do and to help out the people. And to take care of the animals like it said in paragraph 6 It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Caring for the animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Stalls had to be cleaned. But like it said in paragraph 9 But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. Im grateful for the opportunity, he says. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus would be worthy of study because of it's similarities to earth size and density. According to the article, \" Oftern referred to as Earth's \"twin\", Venus the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance too.\n\nIntroduction\n\nWe should try to study more information about Venus despite the risk we will have to take.\n\nBody Paragraph\n\nMost scientist believe that Venus was the most Earth-like planet out of all other planets before it's atmosphere and suface made it one of the most inhospitible planet in our solar system. If we can manage to Make the ships and suits able to withstand the toxic, radioactive, acidic, and extremely hot enviornment ,then we would be able to handle reaching Venus, and study it without suffering to many risk. By Studying Venus, we would also be able to obtain new elements and materials that could make us able to experience a whole new aspect of science and technology.\n\nConclusion\n\nThese are all the reasons why I believe that we should try to explore science, so the we be able to learn new things about other planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A true story laughter My favorite memory laughter happened two years ago I meet friend I meet I walking walking We bumped right First mad saying CAPS watch going calmed went separate ways I went food court even ten minutes behind right We waited line I stood awhile I apologized running earlier She said CAPS I watching I going watching floor I walk We laughed little turn get food After payed I asked would like sit alone time The reason alone parents shopping We started talk schools go goes private I told I went We freshmen year loved band I noticed meet band competition We bumped way least year ago bumping As coming one rooms band warming I coming across room get room band warming two doors I walking like walking I watching floor I walked Also got mad well We laughed awhile laughing thing way We changed lot knew would good friends I guess laughter someone tell well good friends Laughter big deal friendship I mean whats point friend nt even laughter awhile awesome memories I still hang day still ca nt believe meet twice waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today im goin to tell you about why you shoud join the seagoing cowboys. One reson is you get to go place. the secon reson is the it a avantr. The thrid reson is it well be fun.\n\nOne reson you should join is you get to go place. Like in the article Luke get to go to the panmala conal, Europe and China.there one reson you should join the seagoing cowboys.\n\nThe secon reson is it trelreting. Luce\n\nwas on pontrel one night and the, catin slip becuse of the rain and broke a rib. Also you at sea so it make it even more exsiting.that the secon reson you should go join the seagoing cow boys.\n\nthe third reson is it funny. It fun becues after after droping of the hores\n\nyou and your crow can play gane in the pins where the horses was cep .there the the third reson why you shoould join the seagoing cowboys.\n\nThis is why i think you should join the seagoing cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Few people strongly feel that robots will certainly play an imperative part in the upcoming future and there are few who argue that artificial machines may create a detrimental result on society. Nowadays, Technology is improving by leaps and bounds in this modern world and all are moving towards modernization.\n\nFirstly, recent scientific research states that the majority of the things will be automated in the upcoming days. Secondly, most of the students are eagerly interested in robotics, a subject that deals in handling and controlling the robots. Robots are preferred over humans in order to minimize the required manpower and to cut down the expenses for a particular organization. For instance, there is a restaurant in which waiters are replaced by excellent robots which emulate the same work done by mankind. Consequently, this technique saves a lot of expenditure for the companies.\n\nContrarily, on the other hand, this top quality robots will surely make the life difficult for job seekers as it reduces the number of job opportunities. In addition to this, life of the common man becomes simpler and therefore making him a couch potato which is a negative sign. Furthermore, there are many departments where robots may not be as efficient as humans. If robots grow in large numbers, then logical thinking capacity levels go down in individuals.\n\nTo conclude, in my opinion robots undeniably play indispensable role in the community in various fields such as science, medicine and automobiles and also at the same time it causes a serious impact if not handled properly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir author sets happy mood remembering child hood home He recounts good things happy memories entire memoir He also speak cherished childhood memorys good cummunity parentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is an argument whether national politics should outley more budget on health and education instead of spending it on the arts to large extent.\r\n\r\nFrom the viewpoint of agreement, the idea can be thought a much more rational and realistic without dought. Health is a matter with human lives and education is critical factor to develope the worldwide society, so both are crutial on comparison with the arts.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, with no doubt, the arts are job for some civilizations, and the job tends to be difficult to make a living. For this reason, there is a neccesity of more economical support in this area. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, governments could decrease the proportion of money on the arts because it is possible for artists to earn profits by other jobs than arts, but illuness people need to pay big amount of money as soon as possible sometimes depending on their health situation. And there is no way to overcome the taff situation except for governments' support. This is why I advocate the agreement with the statement.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While driving, an individual can be confronted by a variety of issues; an assortment of reckless drivers barreling down the street, disregarding their surroundings; animals strutting across the road right in front of your moving vehicle; the police officer who seems to contain a vendetta towards anyone who drives three miles per hour over the speed limit -- most drivers have experienced this and much more. Multiple actions can be taken to avoid these troublesome scenarios, but the primary solution for this problem of dangers associated with cars may just be the simplest one --\n\ncut down on driving . It has been discovered in multiple articles that the minor actions of riding the bus to work or walking to stores, instead of using a car, can have a positive impact on communities.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany, residents have stopped using cars, only using \"...the tram to downtown Freiburg runs, and a few streets on one edge of the community\" (\n\nRosenthal,\n\nParagraph 2) for a way of industrial transportation. The purpose in the reduction of car usage in Vauban is not only to make suburbs \"...more compact and more accessible to public transportation...\" (\n\nRosenthal , Paragraph 6), but to also decrease the amount of greenhouse gases being released into the atmosphere. Vauban's actions have been successful in that not only has the release of greenhouse gas decreased, but the residents of Vauban have also thrived without the use of transportation by cars.\n\nIt may be true that much of the world's populations may refute this style of living; they might believe that society will take two steps back along the line of progression by this small change. It has been proven due to thousands of motorists being fined after \"...a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\" (\n\nDuffer , Paragraph 10) was implemented. The reduction of car usage is a difficult prospect, but there have been scenarios in which this has been a positive change in society. In Andrew Selsky's \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", a description of a city's participation in a car-free day is given, and Selsky also characterizes that other surrounding cities participated because it was such a successful idea. Carlos Arturo Plaza mentions that the car-free day is \"...a good oppurtunity to take away the stress and lower air pollution...\" (\n\nSelsky , Paragraph 24).\n\nThis idea to cut down the usage of car transportation may not end up being a solution to any major problem, but it definitely will be a step in the right direction. If actions are taken to reform the typical transportation options, the world will be making progress towards better conditions for its inhabitant's posterity. Is it too difficult to simply walk down the street to purchase groceries? Is it too difficult to make actions for the improvement of our environment? Is it too difficult to not use cars for at least one day?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Electoral College has been established since the founding of our country. It is a system that has been tried and tested to work over the course of centuries. It should be upheld for it's ability to produce a solid outcome, and though it has the possibility of failing it's faults are not worse than the popular vote system, and that the Electoral College fosters a presidency campaign that appeals to multiple regions of the United States. This fair system allows representation of the people's will, just like the rest of our government does.\n\nFaith in a certain outcome of the presidential election ensures that the vote has as little complications as possible, and is a reason the Electoral College is necessary. According to source one, \"What Is The Electoral College?\", each political party has it's own set of electors that equal the amount of congressional delegates per state. Usually each state has a \"winner-take-all\" method, so the presidential candidate that gets majority in your state will get all of the electors that represent their party, not just most of them. This is beneficicial to the outcome of the election becuase it makes the ability for a candiate to get majority vote much simpler. There is less of a possibility of a tie, or an outcome where no candidate wins. Source 3, \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep out despised method of choosing president\", states that \"even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state...\" , therefore allowing the candidate to secure all votes to their side, instead of having the votes divided on the line of majority rule, and causing rifts between Electoral College voters.\n\nNo system is perfect, and the Electoral College is not exempt from this. \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\", Source 2, argues that a term called 'disaster factor', or the possibility of immenent disaster due to the Electoral College system, is why the Electoral College system should be abolished. The passage uses individual instances, like the fact that in 1960, segrigationists in Lousiana nearly appointed Democratic electors that would vote against their candidate, or that in rare instances, \"faithless\" electoral voters would vote for the other side. These are strawman arguments, using specific instances to come to a conclusion that the whole system should be abolished. While the Electoral College system isn't perfect, neither is the popular vote system. The popular vote system has a higher chance of causing a tie between candidates, and it doesn't have a \"winner-take-all\" standard. In a tie, the vote would be given to the House of Representatives, which, according to source 2, \"..can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people..\", as citizens often vote one party in for president and another for Congress.\n\nIn addition, the Electoral College fosters a more nationwide appeal for the candidate's campaign. Source 3 brings up the fact that no region in the United States has enough electoral votes to elect a president. The \"winner-take-all\" system further benefits this, because in order to win, candidates have to focus their attention on states where their majority vote is insecure. They will not focus on regions where they have essentially secured the majority rule and therefore secured all the electoral votes. In popular vote, they would have to focus extensively on those regions, as the few that are not in the majority would need convincing. Source 3 goes into detail as to why a regionally picked candidate is not a proper show of the will of the people. It states that \"The residents of other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised - to feel that thier votes do not count, that their new preident will have no regard for their interests...\", and so having a trans-regional appeal is essential to properly representing the will of United States citizens.\n\nOur Electoral College system should be defended and kept. It has the ability to produce a solid outcome, has flaws but ones that are not more disasterous than other systems, and drives candidates to try and present a national appeal. A single vote does not decide an election, the representation of our people should not be split in half, divided. The Electoral College does its best to give the nation the president it deserves.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I waiting line ride I really wanted go I huge line It like big line domminus I like waiting big lines Like kids I dont wine fuss waiting In head Im thinking I whould get go ride I dont scream shout though I try stand still wait The second go tic tac tic tac Just waiting line get shorter smaller Minutes later finnaly turn go rollercoaster I exited I went ride fantastic The thing minute line I wait like hour Well well That line worthSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I dont see the point it in. I honestly wouldnt find it helpful at all, its basically a lie detector test on your emotions and/or smile. Whats the point in seeinf if someones genuinly happy or not? Is the person that is doing the Facial Action Coding System on me going the help me become more happy? Help me make make my smile more genuine? If theyre not going to then i dont want the Facial Action Coding System done in me and i do not suuport it or see the point in it.\n\nIn the passage it tell you how to smile. It says raise your lips at the corner of yours mouth, then squint your eyes slightly, holding that raise the outer parts of your cheeks up toward your eyes. If the passage tells you how to smile the obviously dont care if your smile is genuine or not. Most importantly theyre not thinking about helping you, if your smile isnt real. It also doesnt say anything about helping or getting help if it does turn out to be a fake smile. Therefore i know thats not their intintions.\n\nIn conclusion i do not feel like this is valuable at all! I support my decision because if youre going to have me sit and smle to be analized, just to find out im not genuinly happy. You should then take a further step to figure out why and help. Not just use it for data, its just a waste of time and money in my eyes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe pulled shelf found offensive Many people taste like read write Therefore wide variety things shelfs people enjoy best Books magazines offensive also entice reader personally love books drugs sex many inappropriate things In fact favorite book banned school library If took inappropriate books library What would read everything peachy kin time Its real life read little fantasy world know isnt true I know wouldnt want read Just like books magazines every one taste music like country classical metal maybe even rock If took songs offensive shelf would make people angry That s like playing song radio thats offensive many songs played radio degradeing women played radio Why cant library going able listen song radio anyway Most movies days gory offensive many aspects Many people interested movies If watch movie movie theatre cant check library Some people go check movies shown school watch absent What would movie got taken shelf Fail I know would become angry would happen Keep offensive books music movies magazines library shelfs People eventually see hear watch even library Even take offensive materials still going get sooner later matterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When there is a decision on if I were to choose driverless cars or not, I am in the middle. I feel this advancement could greatly improve some safty hazards occuring now a days. Even though it may help in some situations, it still leads alot of room for disaster itself.\n\nI feel as though was the driverless car could help is all the drunk drivers. With this advancement drunk drivers wouldn't be as much of a worry. They could get in the car and arrive to their destination as safetly as they would sober. If people were to take these cars we wouldn't have to worry about red lights and the car flying by running the red light about to hit you, or losing as much control. As long as the person in charge of the car can put in the right destination, I don't see why this would be such a problem. I feel the advancment would also lower the rate of texting and driving. Now if someone were to answer the phone or something they don't worry about losing control of what they are doing. The car would keep you on a safe path. The car would know about its surroundings with the spinning sensor they are talkin about. Would be able to keep everyone safe- people inside and outside the car.\n\nEven though this may be very helpful, there are so many things that could go wrong. In the article they mentioned that the person would still need to pay attention, so they could take over at anytime. This could be very dangerous. What if the car notifies you that you need to take control, but there isn't enough time? Then what do you do? The person \"driving\" could also get very sleepy while they just sit there. If the person were to fall asleep and the car is needing them to take control, then they are going to wreck. People not having something to do can be boring and a hazard. You need them 100% focused, but it'll be like school. If they don't have enough entertainment or focus, they will be lost and not know what's going on. Another problem is that the car is all technology. At any minute your car could stop working or have a malfunction just like a smart phone. The car could need you to drive, but the notifier isn't working so you got in an accident. With this you could fight with the manufactutrer saying it's their fault and they think it's yours. This could cause serious arguements amongst people.\n\nI believe there are great advancements that could come from this, but also some major issues. Nothing about this could 100% be safe but could be alittle safer than things right now. Either way this goes weither they make the cars or not, they should know they cacn fix the car all they want, but they can't fix the person \"controling\" it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Lots of people think that there is ancient life or aliens on Mars but there is not. Many different teams captured pictures using high tech camreas. The defenders of the NASA budget also wish there were alien life on Mars.\n\nNASA recently discovered what everyone thinks is a face on Mars. A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all the people to see. the captions says '' the huge rock formation which resembles a human head as formed by shadows giving the illuion of eyes, nose, and mouth. There are still people that don't trust it and say that there is alien life on Mars. MOC took a picture ten times sharper reveling nothing but a natural landform.\n\nThere is no alien monumant on Mars because if there was the defenders of the NASA budget wouldn't wish that there was ancient civilazation of Mars. If there were aliens on Mars NASA's budget would sky rocket. Then NASA would be able to fly to Mars and see for themselves that there was ancient civilazation.\n\nThousands of patcientless web surfers were waiting for the image to appear on the JPL website, reveling nothing but a natural landfrom and no alien monument at all. Malin's team also captured an amazing picture using a camrea that can scan pixels 1.56 meters per pixel compared to 43 meters per pixel in the Viking photo of 1976. The picture that Malin's team took showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are common around the American West. It reminded Garvin most of the Middle Butte in Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nTherefore, there are no aliens on Mars because of all the many teams that have taken pictures have given proof that it is just a natrual landform. the NASA budget squad only wants there to be life on Mars that there is not any so they are going to deal with the same budget.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Kat was a twenty-two year old girl who was driving to the store late at night. She had realized that she needed to get her little brother a present for his birthday tomorrow. Kat was tired from a long day of studying for her upcoming collage finals, so it didn't take long for her to pass out at the wheel. Kat's vehicle sped into a tree off to the side of the road. Kat died from her injuries. But imagine Kat had been guiding a driverless car. When Kat fell asleep, the car would have sensed itself going off course and would have corrected its path or woken up Kat. The advantages of a driverless car would apply to more than just Kat's situation. Driverless cars would be a luxury for drivers all around the world due to their advanced safety features, automatic transportation, and convenience to the driver.\n\nThe impact that driverless cars could eventually have is exponential. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" has many good points on to what they could do for the world in the future. At one point the article reads, \"...how much smarter did the cars have to be? For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors. The advancement of the sensors used would help to stop many of the car crash deaths in the United States and beyond. The automatic driving feature would give the driver so much time for other things. You could read a book on your way to work, or play a game with the kids while on a roadtrip.\n\nSome say that a driverless car is much too dangerous, and that a machine can never be better than a human. They believe that humans will always be needed to drive cars. This is understandable as a computer driving a car is a foriegn concept. However, they would be wrong in their assumption.\n\nThe \"Smart Cars\" being developed today are not more efficient than a human, however, this will most likely not be the case for long. With the current rate of technological development, We will have cars that can drive themselves without human assistance within the next 30 years. The next generation might be used to only learning the very basics of driving, as they might not need that skill.\n\nWith all the good that driverless cars could do for the world, it's a wonder anyone questions their value. The potential for safety and convenience is much to high to pass up on. Driverless cars are the future of our roads. Very soon, driverless cars will be sold at car dealerships and open to the public.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are soon to be coming out all over the world but they have some positives and negative side effects to it, such as a positive being it is driverless and it saves a lot of gas, or that it is safer and easier, but then there are negatives such as it being boring for the driver, the price that it takes for it to be able to drive all over the world by itself, or the fact that it breaks some laws. But in the end they all make up for it because it really is worth the trouble.\n\nThe negative side effects aren't that big of problems that make it so we won't make the cars because they really are worth it because in the long run after you pay off the car you will be saving so much money on gas and time beacause they work with a gps so you dont have to worry about getting lost or taking a wrong turn. But then the side effects include, how boring it is for the driver to just sit there the whole time and just has to watch the road and be ready to take the wheel due to a car accident or road construction, the cars are also breaking laws while they are being tested because it is illegal to have a operating car that is driving without someone in the car driving it, but eventually the laws will change and make it easier. These cars will take a lot of work to get them street safe and able to actually drive on its own.\n\nThese cars really are worth the time and money that google is putting into them because they will make up for it in the long run by keeping the streets save and making and saving money that could be used again to make this world right again.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Unpaid community work is a topic that sparks debate when it comes to mandating it for teenagers. While some argue that it can be beneficial for both teenagers and the community, I strongly disagree with the idea of making it mandatory.\r\n\r\nTeenagers should have the freedom to explore their interests and passions during their free time. This period of their lives is crucial for self-discovery and personal growth. Forcing them to engage in unpaid community work might limit their opportunities for pursuing their own hobbies or developing skills in areas they are truly passionate about.\r\n\r\nMoreover, teenagers already face numerous academic and extracurricular demands, which can be overwhelming. Adding mandatory community work to their already busy schedules would only increase their stress levels and potentially have a negative impact on their mental health\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, mandatory unpaid community work for teenagers is not a viable approach. It is essential to prioritize their personal growth, mental well-being, and the pursuit of their own passions. Encouraging voluntary community involvement provides teenagers with the freedom to explore their interests while fostering a genuine commitment to making a difference in their communities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are not a way that the future should go. Self driving cars will do more harm than good. Developing these cars as a way of the future will hurt mankind. We will lose an entire job sector, an important skill in the form of driving, our laws as stated in the article will have to be overhauled to accomodate this change, and not to mention technology isnt always reliable it will break at some point usually the most inoportune time.\n\nWhen science develops a fully operational car there will be the problem of soon humans will not see the need to learn to drive. This is similar to when humans developed the ability to buy meat from a grocery store now we dont know how to hunt or butcher to get meat for outselves since all we have to do is buy it. This scenary will be the same with driving soon humans wont know how. Then of course what will happen to taxi drivers when their job is outsourced to a cheap computer driven car. Or a truck driver when his job is taken over by machine. The standiard patrol ploice officer wont be able to catch speeders either becasue they arent drving. Changing all of our driving laws will be a necessity. As stated in the article who is at fault the car manufacterure or the so called \"driver\" of the vehicle in the event of a crash. Laws will have to change for this as well. Which goes on to the other part of the problem technology fails at any given time. What happens when this autocar skips a few stoplights.\n\nSo in conlcusion self driving should not be the way of the future. The cons far outway the pros. Jobs would be lost, more people killed, and most importantly humans will lose yet another valuable skill.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are going to be a great change in the future. With a fleet of driverless cars that form a public-transport taxi system, you will never need to drive again. Nowadays people struggle with the fluctuating cost of fuel and the rise in cost of car insurance. With driverless cars, all of that will change.\n\nFor statrers, you will never need to spend money on fuel again. With driverless cars, you will not need to spend thousands of dollars each year to fill up the tank. The text states, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Google cofounfer Sergey Brin made this statement about the driverless cars.\n\nAlong with saving money on fuel, you will also save money on car insurance. Every accident you have, from a huge wreck to a littel bump into a light pole, your car insurance will go up. With driverless cars, you will never need to worry about car insurance again. The driverless cars have sensors that constantly updates a 3-D model of the cars surroundings. The text states, \"The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" This shows that a driverless car is much safer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You ask how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enable computers to identify human emotions. Here's my explanation of why I think it's a good creation.\n\nI think that this is a good creation because if you dont know how someone if feeling in a picture you can figure out by this machine. I aslo think this a good creation beacuse its taking technology to a new level. You might ask how is it taking technology to a new level. Its taking it to a new level because there actually building a machine that tells how someone if feeling. Thats just amazing! Thats one reason why I like this machine.\n\nPeople might wonder how do they know how someone is feeling through a picture. Or people might think maybe there's just putting something to make it seem real just make us think. Cause it's not possibly to show someone feeliing from a picture because you don't how that person is feeling inside. So thats why this machine can be bad.\n\nI personally think thats this is a bad creation becuase its a waste of time to me. Why would anybody want to know how someone is feeling through a picture. When there reaction shows how they are feelings. Thats why I dont like this machine. This machine is pointless!\n\nThats my reasons why I think thats this machine is going to be a fail. And there's other people that might like this creation. To me though I dont like it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A new trend is starting to spread rapidly across America and all over Europe. This new trend is the baning of automobiles. There are many problems that come with the luxury of owning a car. Although it get you from point A to point B in your every day life, it can also be harmful. Some advantages of limiting car use is less pollution, reduced traffic jams, and lastly to come out of a recession.\n\nTo begin, pollution is a major factor that harms the earth. One of the main cause of pollution is car use. For example, China is known for the most polluted cities in the world. However, another exampe would be in France, diesel fuel was blamed becasue France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western Europe. Becasue of this, they banned the use of automoblies for the day to air out the smog. Limting polluton will allows us citzens to breathe easier and go on with our daily hetic lives. Also limting the use will, \"have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviorment, since transpotation is the second largest source of Americas emissions.\"(source 4). This quote shows how beneifical limiting car use would be.\n\nFuthermore, another main aggravating problem is traffic jams. For example in Bogota, Colombia its program was set to spread to other countries and instead of using automoblies they hiked, biked, skated , or took buses to work. Becasue of this it limits traffic jams and also cleans the air up a bit. It also allows people to walk moe freely on the sidewalks. Their goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. The violators were faced with 25 dollar fines if they did not participate in the program. \" public transit was free of charge from friday to monday, acording to the BBC.\" (source 2). This was a major factor that pushed citzens to choose an alternative option.\n\nAlthough, it might be reducing car production, many people are slimply not purschaing cars as they did in the past. One main reason is becasue many citzens are going through a recession. \"As of april 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.\" (source 4). This explanation certainly lies in the rescession becasue many Americans now-a-days can not afford new cars and the unemployed werent going to wrok anyways. By limiting car use, many citzens can then not have to always worry about gas money and the \"what if\", if they get into an accident.\n\nTo conclude, There are many advantages in limiting car use. Deomgraphic shifts in the driving population show that the trend countines to drop and the percentage or 16 to 39 year old drivers are more likey to not get or want their license. Most young people dont really care about what their ride looks like. a car is about getting from point A to point B. At this rate, soon the \"car culture\" will slow down and might clean up our earth a little more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Be parent responsible child censorship Censorship really unavoidable issue If dont want read magazine book watch movie dont watch Myriads amount people avoid every day dont want see many people read watch bad types movies It personal choice dont exposed dont want Those censorship try ways keeping children away bad dont try remove completly One reason censorship provides hordes information expands mind different ways The material bad material get choice read think good kids corrupted It kids expand imagination well However think children wait certain age read watch material mature enough seperate reality fiction Also teaches good might learned anywhere else Numerous articles real life going today I think great kids adults know going world If leave kids darkness leave right oponion Any parent tell child something bad never really know unless experience The make minds usually best Another reason censorship escape people There people enjoy reading fiction tacky things life It keeps going regular day basis You never know somebody enjoys If somebody bad day want read watch like find unable good chance poeple furious If unable I like would probably angry depressed It alway ferocious topic If want keep children sheltered fine people handle dont want public access Also keep libraries dont want dont give kids library passes However supervise It costs money go buy books borrow library People dont money dont want books shouldnt go pay kept whoever needs kept The last reason Censorship keeps people interested It also teaches oodles information Not entertain also much vocab pick books I personally learned books hardly pay When dont money guy buy books want library information availiable rather going store Whoever finds offensive thats fine There nobody forcing take items shelves business people see either If people really want read items going one way another banning one place going remove censorship world Children already exposed school telivision They need learn appropriate material want understand real worldCensorship viewed good bad neutral Nobody forcing view hand nobody force stay away Let people make decisions If keep complaining numerous amounts complaints right back Censhorship taken sticks stones break bones words never hurt With said dont avoid inevitableSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A claim that evaluates the author idea is... No matter how hard they try and study about the Venus and learn how to land there safetly, its still going to be a dangrous. like every time u send some one there to study, the spacecraft cant land for a hours and they get in danger. The author kinda want people to just give it up. no matter what you do, Venus will be Venus. In the article it says \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". Venus is a earth twin but u should never dream to go there. There is no spacecraft that survive landing in Venus. In the article it says \"No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". The spacecraft cant survive it because the Venus is so hot. NASA is working on other approaches to studing Venus. They be sending people to Venus just to study Venus. They are trying harder and harder. They are now using some old technology called mechanical computers to study Venus. The mechanical computers were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll. NASA wont give up on studying Venus. People didnt know what Venus is before. Back then, Venus was coverd by tree and and mountains just like the earth. Now you can see it at the night time. Venus is called the \" Evening Star,\". It is one of the brightest light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. The Venus is the dangrous planet that u should never go. No spacecraft servived the landing for more than a few hours. NASA is working very hard to study about the Venus and maybe wanna map everything on it. Venus is the \"Evening star,\" that u can see it at night time. People who wants to study about Venus are now using old mechanical Computers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that reading the expresion of someone is a very important thing. And the technology that is being used for it is amazing and very useful. in the artical it says that \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smaile and a forced one.\" That is a very useful thing to be able to do when it comes to knowing if the person is really okay or if they are not telling the truth. The technology they are making escpecially inventions like this will one day change the future.\n\n\"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent happy.\" To be able to read a persons emotions like that and basically know how they feel and what they are thinking is revolutionary. This technology can build off into so much more. This could lead into so many jobs especially law inforcement. Becasue this could tell the cop annything they wanted to know just buy having the computer read the suspects face and know if they are telling the truth or not.\n\nAnother thing the author says in the artical that leads me to belive this is a wonderful inventions is. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are uneversal.\" this statment basically says that they know your truth feelings and emotions and you cant hide it. Because the expressions are the same for everyone. another amazing part about this invention is its ability not only to read the persons face and emotions. The computer can read the emotions on a picture or in a painting.\n\nFor example they used the Mona Lisa \"It's the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting.\" This opens up even more doors into what this invention can be used for. If it can read off a picture or a painting then they can use it to find out so many other things in history on other paintings or photos. This invention is amazing and truly a revolutionary peace of equipment.\n\nSo i conclude that this invention is a great tool for many things and it will be used for many great things to come. This will change the way some people work and how they do there everyday tasks. This can branch off into so much more then just reading someones face. It really will revolutionize and change a path for the future if they build off of this invention in the right way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports the idea of studying venus with ahuge ammount of facts. like that venus use to be able to hold life like eartdid or that its super hot and too hot to put anything from earth on beacsue it will melt but personally i think that the author had no point in what he worte. he made it clear that no one can with stande 170 degree temperature and that no metal is gping to be able to withstand the heat either. so with that temerature no human life and no robot could go to venus. right? no. the author also made it clear that venus was like our twin and it use to have charestics like pur plant.\n\nFrom the water covering the planet to the air. but now venus has a thick aptmosphere and we could never live on venus. that not the only reason though there is no water source its to hot and we couldnt breatth beacsue of how this the aptmosphereis in venus.\n\nWe nor no animal could withstand the heat on venus but the author argued that we could but in all reality we couldnt and it sint even a smart idea NASA is putting money into to something that wont worl and its pointless beacus eit 170 degrees and no one wants that. wed die. metal will melt and until we come up with non melting metal no one will live on venusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The amazing discovery of the Face on Mars in 1976 was a shock to all who heard and saw it. Is it real? Is this proof of aliens? Is there really life form on Mars? All these questions were being asked by the people of the United States and NASA itself.\n\nIf you saw an enormous head two miles from end to end, wouldn't you think that it came from aliens as well? I would. I understand where people were coming from when they saw this image. But lets look at the facts.\n\nFirstly, this digital image was 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So, if there were objects in the picture like egyptian pyramids, egyptian houses, or other proof of life, you would be able to see them. Second, there were several martian mesa's near Cydonia. What makes this one any different? Lastly, if this was evidence that there was life on Mars NASA would not be hiding it. This would help their budget. Why would they hide this amazing discovery?\n\nThe human race are the highest creatures on the food chain. We were created by God in his image. There is no other life than this. NASA's discovery of the Face on Mars is yet another discovery of an amazing landform that God created. Not aliens. It is clear to see that this very high resolution picture is yet, another mesa.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays many individuals are arguing over the topic of whether leadership is something innate or could be acquired through life. In this essay I will be discussing both views and why I tend to believe that leadership is a trait some people are born with but also it could be developed through life experience.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, people who opine that leadership is something that people are born with base their argument on the fact that some individuals are born with charismatic personalities and have a powerful presence which is something that can not be acquired. Moreover , being articulate and having good oratory skills are essential skills for leaders to have. ,Also people can not learn to be positive, inspiring and enthusiastic.\r\n\r\nHowever, we can not ignore the fact that life experience plays a major role in shaping people's characters and personalities. For example, we have Nelson Mandela who became a powerful inspiring leader because of the hardships that he faced and conquered throughout his life. This indeed is evidence that leadership traits are something that can be acquired later on in life. Furthermore, leadership requires assertiveness which can be developed and learned over time.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , although it is a fact that some people are born with natural attractive characteristics which is something necessary that every leader should have. However, I do strongly believe that life hardships and experience are key factors in developing leadership traits.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is a good job for those who own farms or are just good at taking care of animals. You could travel all over the world.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboys you'll travel to many places. You travel to places like Greece, Italy or China. The Seagoing Cowboys take care of horses, young cows, and mules. They have to feed and give the animals water three times a day.\n\nOn their way back to get more animals, even they had some free time on the ship and at their stops! The boys and men play in the rooms where the animals were held. When they dropped of some animals they could tour the place. That gives a lot of chances of traveling the world for free! It is fun to go to places you've never been before. You leave animals in one place, spend a few days there, then keep on traveling.\n\nThose are some of the reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys. There are many more but a few can do it. You should join the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The question is: created by aliens or just a natural landform? To the uninformed citizen, their answer would most likely be that the Face is created by aliens, and that we should all prepare for Earth's destruction. However, a well trained scientist at NASA, (like me), knows that the Face on Mars is obviously a natural landform.\n\nYou might be wondering how the Face on Mars got it's features. It might seem as if it was manmade because no amount of corrosion could make it look like an \"Egyptian Pharaoh.\" That answer would be half correct because even though this natural landform is not manmade, the Face's features have not been created by corrosion. Shadows simply appeared in the picture, making it seem as if it were a face of an ancient pharoah. The Face is just another Martian mesa that is commonly found around Cydonia.\n\nAlthough it is important to know how the Face got it's features, it is also important to know why NASA promoted this Martian mesa as \"the Face on Mars.\"\n\nNASA decided that promoting the pictures of the Face could make the public more interested in Mars. We were correct in this sense because it definitely attracted people towards Mars and it's peculiar landform. However, we were incorrect in the idea of promoting it as a Martain mesa that had the features of a pharoah. This image confused the public, and people started believing that there were actual aliens on Mars and that these aliens had made the Face. No matter how many times scientists released research that demolished the idea of life on Mars, the public twisted the story so that it was more interesting.\n\nEven though there was an abundance of research showing there were no aliens making the Face, NASA went out and took more pictures. These images showed that it was only a natural landform, and that there are no actual features on the Face. As I said before, the features were merely created by shadows.\n\nOf course, people still argued that NASA was wrong. People kept saying that the \"markings\" were hid by the clouds, and that these images were simply a failure on NASA's part. This failure being that they somehow forgot to take into account that there was clouds. However, as NASA was more than careful taking these pictures, the images were as accurate as possible.\n\nThe Face on Mars may just be a hoax, but NASA's research is nothing of the sort. NASA has proven that their detailed research is used to make sure that the public is well informed. The Face may have just been a natural landform, but the public's enthusiasm for these images, (no matter how skeptical), is something that can never be recreated with shadows.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This article is about the unmasking the face on Mars. So the people went to Mars were Garvin and his other friend that went. They took pictures and they seen a face.\n\nNow Garvins' friend said it was a alien that had done this. But there were no proof that aliens did this. They saw no movement on planet Mars. So they called it Martian mesa. On the red planet name as Cydonia. That's where it happened. The face looked like an Egytain Pharaoh. Something funny happened to Mars around/about 25 years ago. Now if I was up there I would start researching this object. Knowing what this was. Where it came from and other things that are important to the shape figure.\n\nSo now we know that the people up in space looking at this object are saying it was something that has been there for 25 years, they don't know who done this. All the NASA knows is that they probably know where it came from and things they aren't just saying the full information. So this was about unmasking face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some people believe that the government can make laws regarding nutritious food in order to improve public health, while others say that a person has the responsibility for his own health. Although the state can make strict laws about the selling of nutritious food items, this essay believes that people can alter their lifestyles to become healthy.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are those who think that the authorities can impose strict guidelines on food companies in order to enhance public health. This is because if some food companies and restaurants are not providing food up to the government’s standard, then strict action should be taken against those. For instance, it has been found in a recent survey by The Sunday Times that peoples’ health can significantly be improved when the government imposes strict laws on food companies about the nutritious value of their food items. However, I disagree with this viewpoint because of the following reason.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is thought that men and women can improve their health standards on their own. This is because they can include more fruits and vegetables in their daily diet and can do some physical activities by making small changes in their daily routine. For example, I was a fatty person and used to eat junk food daily. But when I started doing exercise and eating healthy food by making changes in my lifestyle, I have become a healthy person. Therefore, I believe that someone’s health depends on their own by altering their lifestyle.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the government can make laws to boost public health, I believe that it is a person’s responsibility to become healthy by changing the way of living their life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "No, FACE is not created by aliens. as a person who works for nasa face is not created by aliens. i say this because Face is a naural landform found on mars. if you look at the pictures you can find that the imagae is getting clearer and clearer. Have you ever seen an alien in real life? do you belive that an alien has seen a human before? At first NASA\n\nthought it was just a martian mesa that made it look like a eygptian pharoah. Afer a couple days had past we unveild the image wo the whole would could see the photo. When the image was seen by people the caption under image was \" It ewsembles a human head, with eyes, nose, and mouth.''\n\nHave you even seen an image that it looks like a person? Well, that's what we found on Mars. After a few years had past on April 5, 1998, Michael Mailen and his Mars Orbiter Camera got a picture ten times better from before. When the picture was uploaded a website it was revealing a natural land form and no alien monument after all. Since the image was uploaded not everyone was satisfied. Skeptics, still beleve that alien was hiddenby haze. To prove skepicts wrong MGS went for a second look. When they went they captured an extraordinary picture of ''Face'' for the second time.\n\nFinally I can say that ''Face on Mars'' was not created by aliens. The image actually shows that the Martian qquivalent of a buttle or mesa which a common around the America West.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The world is very interesting place to someone who love to find out about the history. In some countries, a large potion of population are becoming interested in search about the history of the house or building where they live. The following paragraph highlights what are the reasons for this and how can they research about it with relevant examples.\r\n\r\nFirstly, every countries have at least one kingdom in their land and have some tressurry or valuable ancient things in there0. Moreover, those are countless and sometimes never touch the human eye. So three – quarter of middle age people are interest to finding out those for get valuable income. For example, in India “Thamilnadu “ public every day canning in side of the house to finding secreate In there land. Secondly, some university and school crowds are becoming love to find how the post pupils build their houses, what are the metirials and equipment that use, what are the technological advance in follow them to build high quality building. However, those are very interesting to more and more crowds than other previous and they research as hobby as to learn and educated what are the history of the houses and building around them.\r\n\r\nAt that time, the community mainly use library, museum, early analysis papers to finding encitant time. However, I think that, asking older people of that area is the best option is to research ancient strutures.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, history of the old structures near they live in is becoming most interested title around the crowd and this essay I explan the reasons and methods what they use.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "According to the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the Facial Action Coding System is a recently-developed software that detects muscle movements in the face and calculates them into emotions. There have been suggestions to utilize the technology for classroom computers in order to calculate each students' expression to modify the lesson based on emotions of boredom or confusion that the students may display, but I personally disagree with this idea.\n\nThere is a reason why I disagree with the use of the FACS technology for classrooms. In the article, Dr. Huang states that a classroom computer could \"modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"\n\nwhen it recognizes a student's expression of confusion or boredom. I disagree with this because I believe that the computer would modify the lesson based on the majority of expressions that the students display, which is ineffective if the majority of the students understand the lesson while the minority does not, for example. In a large group of students, such as those in high school and college classrooms, I do not believe that this technology would be very effective. However, I do believe that this software would be reliable if used in smaller classes, like those in preschool and elementary.\n\nThe FACS technology is valuable, and would be a great addition to our lives, but I do not believe that the technology would be effective if it is implemented into our education systems. Thus, the FACS software should be used in other industries, as it would be more useful that way.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "That photo is not an alien. What photo am I talking about? The photo the NASA took of the \"face\"that is shown in a lot of places. In the arcticle its says,\"The Face on Mars has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk showseven haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" Lots of people believe it is an alien, but it is not. It is not an alien because it is just a natural land form, it is hard to target(because it never moves, small and blends in with all the rest of noraml mars), and people say it looks like a normal natural lava dome (and it does).\n\nIt is just a natural land from. It is only shaped like a face. There is nothing odd or strang about it besides the shaping. It just happened to look like a face. In the texts it says, \" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This shows it had nothing to so with aliens, it was just a land form.\n\nIf it was a living thing, or used to be living shouldn't move around?Its not easy to target Cydonia, says Garvin. This shows it is one spot and small. It also proves it blends in like in other natural land form would do. If it was something special you would think it would be easier to find. If you don't look very closly you don't even see the face at all.\n\nNot only is it natural land, but it is also reminds Garvin of a lava dome of Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, says Garvin. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. This again proves if you ignore the fact that it looks like a face, it looks completely normal. It looks like a normal thing any planet would have, even earth.\n\nSome may agrue it looks to much like a face to not be something like an alien. Even though it is funny how much it looks like face, there are too many facts proving it isn't anything different from everything else on the planet mars. It just happened to be the way it formed it looked like a face.\n\nThere are many things proving, this thing on Mars is not an alien or created by aliens. First, it is just like anyother land form, just a \"werid\" shaping. Second, it blends in, is small and doesn't move. (This makes it hard to target.) Finally, it reminds people of a lava dome, again showing it is just shaped weird to us. The face got the attention of the public for a while, like the text said,\"The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" But, everyone needs to let it go because it is nothing to talk about since we now know the truth. It was fun for a while, but if you still believe it more than a normal part of mar's natural land, you will look like a fool. I guess we will have to keep looking on other planents to find live or \"aliens\" because so far it is for sure not on mars!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "it is argued that taken in volunteer charity by an adolescent can bring many advantages to themselves and society as well. I agree which the young generation involve in volunteer to training attitudes themselves and reduces the government's burden at the same time.\r\n\r\nAs we know as the young generation needs to be trained in their growth journey, so giving a serious, challenging work such as volunteer activities, it's can improve the teenager's attitudes regard to the work. On the other hand, the teenager also can trigger the power and capability that seems may be hidden. For example, in volunteer work, young people are deal with difficulty frequently, however, they need to focus and patient to delve and solve it, from that, they will gain a special and unforgettable experience during work. \r\n\r\ndespite the community, work can share by adolescents, nonetheless, the unpaid work of the government face will become less. Due to the government need focus on their political and economic issue every day. Nevertheless, the burden should be rise up if the volunteer community add on to the states, on the other words, both of important affair will failure implement because of distracted by states. For instance, Blood donation, one of the periodical events often joined by a volunteer with others professionals’ physicians work together, to increase the work efficiency over the working periods.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the teenagers can take benefit in join the volunteer community to shows that the ability on themselves to achieve their personal goals meanwhile, the states will more pay attention to their crucial roles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many students are using computers in school, but unlike teachers do the computers know when the student is bored or confused? The Facial Action Coding System is a computer able to idenitfy your emotion. This technology can be valuable to students using computers to learn because it can detect their emotion and modify the lesson for the student.\n\nComputers are very much used by students on a daily basis, and it teaches the student a lot of content. When the student becomes bored or confused the computer can't recognize that like how a teacher would be able to. Having a computer that could tell the emotions of the student behind the screen and modify the lesson would be very benificial to the student. As stated by Dr. Huang in paragraph 6 \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, So computers need to understand that, too.\" This shows that the computer knowing your facial expressions and being able to detect your emotions is something that can be very useful. This new software is a great way for humans and computers to have better communication.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can be very useful to students to students who use computers to learn. This is useful to students because this software is able to detect their emotions and modify the lesson they are being taught. This computer can tell exactly how the student is feeling which is helping the student and computer have better communication.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, it is believed by some people that man should join the society works for free which can be helpful for the society as well as for adults . I agree with this statement and will discuss the positive views about this. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, when a teenager starts free work for unpaid society , it will expose their mind. To elaborate, when adults join the free welfare community , it will help them to expose the world in a new way because ,in these organisations , person will get a chance to meet new people from different thoughts . For example , a research conducted by the University of Columbia on 100 teenagers , who works for unpaid communities , they get more sharp mind as compared to their counterparts . Thus , it will be very helpful for their prospective too. \r\n\r\nFurthermore , unpaid work helps teenagers to gain new experiences. To explain with, whenever adults join the free work community , they can get a chance to get new experience in life , which would help them to get a well earning job in future . To exemplify , an article written by the Mr Brandim Bradlee \" the chief editor of Washington newspaper states that student who works for free societies an early age will earn more in their future . Thus , they can get a secure forthcoming in their activity.\r\n\r\nTo conclude , unpaid work for societies helps teenagers to get more exposure and experience in life and this thing is very helpful in their upcoming life to get a good job and for a good future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "If you thimk it is a alien civilisation you are mistaken. If you think it is where is the evadence like houses. I think it is a natural land like we have here on earth. It can be an astriod hiting the earth or it could very well be a mountain like we have on earth. Another thing i think it could be is an un earupted valcanneo like an other thing we have on earth. Also it can be where the inside of the planit has bin pushed out to cause a natural land form. There can also be other things it can be. The people that think that it is an alien civilisation they have to back there rason up with a lot of information and very detaild information to get me on there side. Even then I probibly wont believe them it would have to be a very low chance i would take there side.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some persons believe the investment in aerospace improvement is not that necessary. There are other methods of using wages wisely. This essay rather agrees with the statement.\n\nThe growth of science is extremely essential for humanity. The exploring branches of science such as biology, physic, and chemistry has been brought humans to where we are now. Human has been travel almost all the Earth's surface, on the ground to the deepest of the ocean; now it is the space turn. However, undeniable that space-travelling travelling uses a huge of pay without any guarantee what humans will get back from their research. Nevertheless, for a developed country such as America, England, Russia, China, and other mighty nation that has enough financial stability and can manage the purse properly. Division of bill for cosmos research appropriately might be a good chance of the next step of humanity growth.\n\nHowever, in the case of an undeveloped country, such as Thailand, Laos, Myanma, and other countries, uses numerous payments on planetary exploration while its people still suffer from the country's economy is exceedingly not a smart idea. There are various things that national need and assume it is more quintessential than interplanetary visitation. For example, good public transportation, quality water, worthy salary, proper habitation, and etc. Those are what the government should focus on before anything else.\n\nIn conclusion, this controversy depends on the condition of each country. Galactic oversight is valuable when the budget is not perturbed by its nation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Interviews are commonly used as a way to screen candidates at large companies. However, some people argue that interviews are not an effective way to recruit employees. I agree that relying on interviews alone can sometimes lead to hiring the wrong candidate. However, I believe that when used in combination with other assessment methods, such as group activities and quizzes, interviews can be a valuable tool in the hiring process.\n\n \n\nOrganisations are increasingly using group activities to assess candidates' suitability for their roles. This allows them to see how potential employees react under pressure and how they handle conflict. These simulations give organisations a better understanding of candidates' values, behaviours and thinking patterns. As candidates often lie in the interview and tend to act like robots answering the questions the way the recruiter expects, the information gathered in the group work can then be used alongside interview results to make final hiring decisions.\n\n \n\nPersonality quizzes can be another useful tool for assessing job seekers' profiles and determining their strengths and weaknesses. Such tests can help to identify which candidates are naturally good mediators and which ones will require more direction from others. If one of the criteria for the role is to hire someone with strong leadership skills, then mediators may be the best option. \n\n \n\nInterviews are just one piece of the puzzle when it comes to recruiting. While they can provide valuable insights into a candidate's qualifications, it's important to use other methods as well. This will help the company to validate the information provided by the candidate and make a more informed decision. In the end, it's important to remember that no single method is perfect. Using a variety of methods will help to give you the best chance of finding the right candidate for the job.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe this article is good and bad for safety. The only thing that makes me wonder is how does the car know exactaly when to stop some things about the driverless car makes me think it won't work how they want it to. I don't really know if it's a good idea or bad. I like where it said in the article won't drivers get bored I personally wouldn't like the car driving on it's own. If there was a technology fail you wouldn't know who's fault it is. I do find it cool but you can't always trust computers. In the article it says testing computers is illegal in most states so if it's illegal then it must not be that safe. When it has been around for a while and been tested by a couple of people then I will think it is a very good idea. I like how it won't let you text while driving that is really safe becuase then drivers behind the wheel could get distracked very easily and you wouldn't take over when the car needs you to take over.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A day dreadful patience can leave Im bored I complained I waited answer I guess resorted ignoring We waiting lazy people load truck Impatient guys Thats Im gon na go talk guys see whole holdup Wait dont touch anything said So I sat cold bored hangry waiting seemed like hours Finaly got back told might another The things impatient men resort We sitting getting pretty impatient We decided go walk After got food went back truck City slickers plain dumb A fork lift driver somehow managed get fork lift stuck trailer Thats He got heard hollers screams FINALY After yelled bit finally got back road That day I learned thing I definitely dont patienceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on mars could not be made by aliens because the face on Cydonia change over time, its a rock trasformation , and there woukd have been more things to prove life on mars. The thinking that aliens is a bit over bord.\n\nThe face on the red planet \"Cydonia\" changed over time. If there was life on Cydonia the face wouldnt have changed like it did. In 1976 it looked like a shadow face. 1998 it had a white tent to it. 2001 it had racks like a rock. The face would had stayed the same if there was living life on it.\n\nAnother reason is it looks more like a trasformening rock. People tend to already had a picture of what soemthign is in there head. When the people that took the picture saw this thought it looked like a face. When you tell poeple what something looks like they wont fight you because in there head they seen it. The rock is just a time changing thing. 2001 it dosent even look like a fcae that they try and make you see.\n\nOn earth we have thing to prove that we live on here. On the red planet they only found this one thing. If there was life there would be more things to prove it and sooner. 1976 to 1998 is 22 years. In 22 years there has been only one \"face\" found. 1998 to 2001 is 3ish years. The same \"face was there but it was different. So 25 years has pasted on anf there has only been one thing the shows that there could be life on the red planet.\n\nNow I under stand that it does look like a human face yes. And different people have went up there just to take picturse of it. But if there was life on this planet it dont you think it would have shown itself a little bit more and not hide for 25 years giving us one piece of evidence that its real.\n\nIf there was live on plante Cydonia it would had been more things to prove it. Also The face didn't stay the same. Another reason is a rock is more believibale then aliens. Just something to think about is they did think there was life on a different planet but earth dont you think they would tell people and not try and hide it for as long as they can. They would want the world to know more about it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "First of all how does this even look like a face? I can understand if you think the picture from nineteen-seventy six looks like a face,all you need is a little imagination for that picture. Also how can you believe that it was created by aliens? Even if there were other life forms besides us , they are most likely billions of light years away. Scientist have not found proof of aliens on mars. They have not seen or photographed any to back your statement.\n\nThe Image you see here is just a landform. In two thousand one they captured\n\na picture of the \"Face\" in higher quality reavealing that it was not some alien structure. The picture shows that the \"Face\" is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landfroms that are common around the American West. One sceintist named Garvy said \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Which Garvy said means \"That's a lava dome that takes the from of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" Scientist have proven that this is just a landfrom.\n\nIn conclusion, the \"Face\" on Mars is just some landfrom. Not created by aliens or any other from of life. The landfrom is the Martian equivelant to a butte or mesa which are common around the American West. There is not any proof of alien species, so it is innacurate to say that the Face on Mars was created by aliens. There are pictures that prove that this is just a landform. Scientist also have proven this is just a landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Today I am going to tell you why you should go to Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys program is a program where you go out on a big boat and you go on the seas and travel to different crountries.\n\nI am first going to tell you why you should go. You should go to the program because you get to see all different kind of countries like Greece, China, and Europe. Why would you not want to go to different countries. Other people might say it's way to dangerous because you might run out of food or the boat might sink and you might get lost while you are out in the seas. You will not run out of food because the person who is encharge packs 6 months of food. If the boat does sink, there will be another boat behind us. You will not get lost because there will be other people there with you and there will be maps.\n\nWhen you get to a country like Venice,Italy there will be a city with streets of water so we can stay in the boat. What you can see at the different countries is where people live, what kind of houses does the people live in, and you will be aloud to take pictures so you will never forget your time at the countries and the boat.\n\nSo that is why you should go to the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will have alot fun while you will be on the trip. So make sure you pack alot of clothes and pack your bag for a avdevture.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "I believe that using the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom can be valuable. It could be valuable becuase it could allow a teacher to know what a student is feeling. For example in the text Dr. Huang says \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused.\" So this technology could very much be useful in the classroom to help prevent a student from staring off into space. Teachers could also benefit from this technology by being able to tell if a student has become confused and can then help that student.\n\nThis technology can also help teachers experiment with how they teach and use the technology to see what captures their students attention more. In the text it states that \" it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor.\"\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can recognize emotions that some people would not be able to recognize on their own.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus is also the most like Earth. We know little about this plannet. One thing is for sure we do know is, it is dangerous. Is Venus worthy of pursuit even though it is dangerous?\n\nThe author of the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" propposes it is a fantastic idea. The dangers are a small risk to take to gain more information about this planet. The author states all of the following reasons to support his point.\n\nVenus is the most Earth-like planet, this may mean that the planet could support other life forms. It is the closest in size and in some cases distance to Earth. Venus has shown to have earthquakes, erupting volcanoes and lighting. These are all things that happen on earth as well and no other known planet. Venus probably had large bodies of water at some point as well, making it able to support life forms of some sort. The structure of Venus is made up of rock, valleys, mountains and craters. Earth and Venus have multiple simalarities.\n\nThere are also many dangers to visiting Venus. The atmosphere is made up of 97 percent carbon dioxide and has great amounts of highky corrosie sulfur acid from clouds. The pressure on Venus is 90 times greater than Earth. A huge danger is the temperature of the planet. Venus can get to over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. All of these things are a hazard to life.\n\nThe author of the article states all the pros and cons, but also states the knowledge that would be gained. As the phrase goes knowledge is power. The Information gained from pursuing Venus would be a huge advancement in history.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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