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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patients something everybody In order someone patient understand tolerate things might hard I one people Patients sort gift It takes time patients always hurry For example one time I heard someone talking basement So I went see house I walking I heard giggling excitement I kept walking I heard voices coming behind door I went open I saw kinds gifts I saw two people mom dad They hurried closed door told go stairs So I ran stairs tell brothers I saw They excited everything The next day went I could wait next day So I waited", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the world around us begins to change blossom with new beliefs, ideas and inventions it makes you stop and wonder. About what? With television and movies creating the fantasy of driveless cars I cant help but wonder what it would be like if they actually exsisted? Well now i know longer have to ask due to the amazing improvemnets, that I am proud to stand by, in technology that turned my childhood dream of driveless cars into a reality.\n\nActually driving a car is a thing of the past as the world steps forth into a new promising future. But what does this new promising future entail? For starters, better access to saftey. Some may wonder how a car without anyone behind the wheel of it can possibly be safe. But the real question is how can it not be with sensors provided onto these vehicals they are built to protect . For instance,Google's Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an interial motion sensor. With all of these sensors' the car aswell pasengers are in better hands then they ever were when dependent on just one person focusing behid the wheel. Now not only is the person behid the wheel focused but the car is focused as well as mimics the skill of a human at the wheel.\n\nThough these sensors arnt anything new they have been around since the 1980's when they would detect and respond to skids or rollovers on the roads. In addition in 2013, BMW announced the devolpment of the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". Which is where the car is able to handle driving onits own. Though the have touch sensors that make sure the driver is keeping hold o fthe wheel at all times.Seeing as although the car is capable of steering, accelerating , and braking\n\non it's own it requires the human to be made aware its their skills are needed. Also GM has created driver's seaats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. So with the sensors of the past combined with the sensors of the Google Toyata Prius questioning saftey is a thing of the past.\n\nThough these drveless cars go beyond sensors on the outside of the vehical they also impact the interior.For instance Dr.Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver says\" We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way\". Which they plan on doing by installing in car entertainment that can be instantly turned off and taken over when needed.\n\nIn conclusion, driveless cars are a thing of the future that are not only amazing cool but safley bound present aswell. Promising not only a better more effect future of public transportation where driveless cars form a public-transport taxi system. Using only\n\nhalf the fuel we use today, saving the world resources. But a chance to turn what once was a dream into an everlasting reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College has been around since the Constitution was established by the founding fathers. The question is, Is it time for it to go? I believe that the Electoral College should be kept, because changing the election by popular vote would not be wiser, and the Electoral College is fair for the people.\n\nChanging the election by popular vote would not be smarter. Source 3 states, \"In 2012's election... Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3% of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\" This source is arguing against the Electoral college, meaning they're trying to make a point on why it's not fair that Obama won with his 61.7 percent. The people vote for their electoral college, for their state. If the electoral college's votes are higher than the popular votes that means that the college is doing their job correctly. Source 3 also states, \"... Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral- vote victory in that state.\" This statement means that even if the popular and electoral votes are both high, the electoral vote wins, because majority rules. Just because the person running for office is popular, doesnt mean they should necessarily win. Electoral votes basically come from the people, and if the \"people\" choose a certain candidate, then that's who should win.\n\nThe Electoral College is fair to everyone. Source 2 states, \"Under the Electoral College system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" This method of choosing the president is completely and totally fair to the people. No, they're not directly choosing who the president is, but they have people to do it for them. As long as they cast in the right vote for the party that that candidate represents, then the Electoral college board should be filled with all the right people. Yes there is a possibility that the candidate someone votes for may not make it on the Electoral college board, but if the majority of the people are represnted, then that's all that matters. Source 3 states, \"...each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that truth is barely betrayed)... however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\" For instance, if the people vote for candidates for the electoral college, and the majority of them are not what the majority of the people wanted, or they lied about being pledged to a candidate for president, then there is still a chance that the candidate that the people did want could be elected, by the national popular vote. Also, the people that are against the electoral college shouldn't be, because the electoral college is not definite. Just because the electoral colleg votes for a certain candidate, does not guarantee that the overall national vote will be that person.\n\nEventhough some people think that the electoral college, should be no more, I strongly disagree, because the college is fair to the people -because they represent the people- and the college is a smart idea. The college works in everyone's favor. For those that disagree, there is always a strong chance that the candidate represented by the elctoral college will not win presidency.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral college is beneficial to the people and a wise idea. The people in the entire country are never going to unanimously agree on anything. Keeping the Electoral college is not only wise, but a safe way to ensure that voting doesn't go wrong, and that the people always get a fair say in government matters.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is said that continuing going to university or vocational training is the best way to get a financially viable career, while there are some people tell that it would rather to have a job night after finishing the high-school. According to my opinion, both views have advantages for career in the future. This writer will provide the evidence.\n\nFirstly, going to university or college, it enables us have a large amount of knowledge in field and improve a lot of skill in work environment such as thinking or the ability to calculate. Most of relevant job skills. Beside, developing academic information is very needed for well-paid job, which is seem considered a compulsory part of billionaire and successful person. Moreover, university in the present, Student have a lot of abilities to develop their skill by themselves and easily to get a job after study univerisity.\n\nOn the other hand, the people who get a social job also have benefits to career. The first reason, nowadays, the consumption of coffee and milk tea is increasing dramatically. So that, there are a lot of coffee shop in anywhere. They also need mature student and gain a lot of opportunities to get a job early such as service profession, washing dishes and cashier. According to social time, student also can get a job in public are such as library, book store even security in park. Those job can help student get some social skill like as communication skill and experiences in behave.\n\nIn conclusion, having a job or going to university have advantages to a successful career. But to be honest, going to study is still better than having a job early. Furthermore, we should work and study hard and be more and more hard working", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present world, there is a huge amount of buildings and houses as many as we can not count. People can look at these in a different way such as interesting issues or economic products. Both of the ways grap peoples' intention. I am going to explain why the public is getting obsessed with finding out about the history of the house or building they live in and how can they find out information about it.\r\n\r\nFirstly, people are trying to research the history of places just because of their curiosity. For example, when folks move to the old house which was established so long time ago they probably care about who had lived here and want to find out whether there had been a famous person or not. Because some people believe that if someone who was really talented or famous they can get positive energy from that person. This kind of thinking can occur with more older houses than new ones. Eventually, residents start to seek the document of their properties and I am of the opinion that they try to use the management structure of assets. Nowadays the system is quite well arranged in conjunction with the government and everyone can fulfil research for finding the track of history.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the public uses the timeline of buildings for trading itself. For instance, folks need to know detailed story of an apartment, especially a loan which is issued with the apartment, when they want to sell it to others. In this case, that information can be found in the national land management system which is operated by the government and the trade between seller and buyer will be reliable. Otherwise, all parties can not trust each other and making the contract is not that easy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, finding the root of the properties is significantly interesting to the public. Hence, the government has to rearrange the search system or rehabilitate the old method to find quickly what the public wants to know to follow customer's needs", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now that we're in 2016 everything is, smater, more inivative, and most of all more technilogical. Driverless cars are a good concpt to me mainly because it ais a more efficiant way of getting around here are a few examples. First example, Driverless cars are cleaner than most public transportation, people who usually take the bus or subway know that public transportation is alot dirtier than say driving. Now that drverless cars are here that can all change. Second example, Many people who are usually tired while driving ccan rely on the car itself to do the driving while they are snoozing, now I know that they still need some human skills to get them going sometimes, but now that technology is advancing that can all be improved in a matter of years. Third and final example, It is more efficiant on the planet than most other cars, in the article it stated that the driverless cars will use half of fuel that regular cars take up. There are electric cars but those discharge very quickly and gasoline cars will damage the planet , now i'm not saying that driverless cars will not run on fuel but they will use half of what other cars do reducing the amount of polluton that is getting spread into the air.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author writes about the possiblity of the exploration of Venus and how it can contribute to scientific studies. He uses many detail from reliable sources like the National Aeronautics and Space Administration for example. The author seems like a very reliable source to listen to about the exploration of venus.\n\nThe author explains to us the danger of Venus exploration by talking about the tempature,atmospheric pressure, constant storms and volcanos. The author then explains to us the readers NASA plans of sending a blimp like vehicle that can fly over Venus without the threat of ground conditions of the planet. He tells us the benefits of such a expedition like it would further understanding of the planet that we dont know much about.\n\nIn conclusion of all the danger the author tells us that it is possible to explore from a distance even though it will be difficult and challenging it possible and he shows us exploring Venus could be very valuable to the human race and could contribute to further space exploration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A fraction of the population holds the notion that humanitarian organisations and donation associations must help their nationalities only. Whereas the opponents propound that, such aids should be available to the population irrespective of their country. This essay would delve into both viewpoints and try to arrive at a rational conclusion.\r\n\r\nBeing humans, it is everyone's responsibility to help needy people. Moreover, supporting the citizens in one's own nation would, undoubtedly, pave the way to eliminate conflicts and crimes. Because it improves the standard of living of the people. In addition to that, if the associations ensure the availability of fundamental needs of the population like education and medical care, in turn, it helps in upliftment of marginalised people in the society. For instance, the Indian government has formed different foundations with an intention of a better life of unprivileged societies in the country. By using the fund raised by that foundation, the government has built some basic amenities like educational institutions and hospitals in different regions across the country.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, as critics postulate, aids should be available to all the people who are in great needs all over the world. There are a lot of impoverished nations, they struggle to meet the day-to-day expenses of their citizens. Thousands of children are dying due to malnutrition throughout the countries per year. To overcome, these situations affluents should ready to donate without any disparities among nations. Also, no nation is self-sufficient. For one reason or another, they depend on each other. Four years ago, in a severe flood in Kerala, one of the states in India, people lost even their shelter. A large proportion of the people were moved to relief camps.Although the state could overcome this crucial time with the financial support of other nations including the United Nations, the UAE and many more. Besides, if the developed countries' organisations are ready to help developing or under-developed countries, it would, eventually, dwindle the financial burden of such nations.\r\n\r\nIn short, even though, helping their own country dwellers by various organisations plays a vital role in making nation progressive, there are many nations find it very difficult to donate their needy people. This should not be overlooked. Ergo, I strongly believe charity organisations should possess a humanitarian concern and should help everyone irrespective of their region.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "introduction\n\nVenus is one the brightest points of ligth in the sky however this is misleading beacuse venus is on of the most dangers places in the universe.\n\nvenus is one of the most dangeour planet to a human to live in the Article venus has temperture of average of 800 degrees fahrehit and a atmospheric pressure over 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet\n\nthese condition are far more experience on our planet.\n\nwe should stop studying venus because if we try to land in venus it\n\nhas the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system so if any human step in venus they will diead because it is to hot for human to live there.\n\nvenus is so inhospitable why are scientists are even discussing further visits to its surface maybe because they wanted to find another place like earh or because they think that earth dont got to much time so they wante a another location so they can be safe.\n\nvenus is so inhospitablle venus surfave is 170 degrees fahrenheit\n\nnot a single criture can survive and venus if we wanted to find another place like earth where we can live in it most defenitily not venus because is so dangerous for our body so what if we leave venus alone and we got to mars wey better than venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is presents. The author thinks that studinging the planit Venus would be usful to us. He says how we could do it in a safer matter than landing on the planit. He has a goood idea of the echnoigy we could us to do it. Also has a good sencse that it is dangris to do it.\n\nThe firts thing that the author dose is telll us how dangers it is or could be if we where to land on it. I think he should have went in to more detal about is in like the sences of all the threts and what would happen if it was to go wrong and we ould have to land on it. Over all I think it was ok\n\njusy needed a little more on that part to explane it just a little more.\n\nThe technoligy we could use for the trip. I feel he has a good snces of the kind of technoigy that we could use as in get sampuls and think of that sences. He knows we'll have to use an older technoigy then what we would use on like say a moon landing. We could use a reguler new computer or machen to take a sample of that. If we was to on Venus it would get destroid befor it hit the ground. He explanse that we could use a computer used in World War II. it was a sistime of gears and levers that will give and answor that would be corect. so that we could make in more stronger so in would last longer in that invierment.\n\nI think it would be a good thing to do to go there to learn about it. It could give us more inscite on out owne plante and why it is getting hot than what it used too. I think the auther did a grate job of explaning it and his reson by it. I just think he needed to explain that one part better and it would have been a little better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author sets happy mood remembering child hood home He recounts good things happy memories entire memoir He also speak cherished childhood memorys good cummunity parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects for driveless cars. I am against the development of driveless cars because they can cause a debate when it comes to whos fault it is, it can also take away the fun of driving, they are also not very productive and can be really expensive. Just the idea of having driveless cars seem so futuristic and perhaps awesome but are thay really safe and actually productive? In the article, the author gave many negative aspects of driveless cars because they can always occur. In other words future cars are not as safe and possibly productive as they seem.\n\nOne of the big issues of driveless cars is who will be held responsible for the accidents that occur. The companies that produce the cars will probably not want to take responibility for the accident and what if the driver does not want to either? The author said,\"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident\". The company will lose millions of dollars and just because of one accident. In other senerios, if the driver is held responsible for the accident it would cost them lots of money as well. So who exactly would be held accountible for the accident if its a driverless car?\n\nAnother reason why I'm against the development of driveless cars is because they take away the fun in driving. Like the author said in paragraph eight,\" Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\". Staying inside a car is boring and its much more boring doing nothing at all. Would the driver lose interest and depend on the car to do everything when really the car also needs an actuall driver? This can cause safety issues. What if the driver does not notice the car is in need of assistance because they are on their phone or electronic device?\n\nDriveless cars can also be really expesive and be less productive then the companies say they are. In the article it talks about how they combined many form of tectnology to finally get an almost finish product. It says in paragraph four,\" The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings. The combination of all this input is necessary for the driveless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\". Could this mean that the car will be really expansive? Most forms of technology are really expensive and this driveless car will contain several pieces of technology just to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. It also says that the car will only mimic a driver, but what will it do when it comes to very complex things such as accidents or taking a much more difficult route?\n\nFor these reason i am against the development of driverless cars.Driveless cars can cause debate, take the fun out ofdriving and finally they can be really expensive and not very productive.They will cause more problems then they solve and are really expensive. Although a driveless car sound really nice its too advanced for this time Era.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a car that literally drives itself seems fun and all, but would it be really? Of course you would just love to be lazy and would be happy that you don't have to drive, but there's a major chance you could be in an accident. Experts say that these cars are 100% safe, but they really aren't.\n\nIf you are going on a family vacation hundereds and hundereds of miles away, a driveless car would be awesome! Your mom or dad wouldn't have to drive that whole way! You wouldn't have to get as much gas either. You could spend more family time together on the way to wherever you're going on vacation. But, driveless cars also seem extremely dangerous to me. Sometimes, things could malfunction. If something malfunctioned to wear the car broke down on the interstate when I was going 70 MPH, I would mostly lkely crash, and get killed.\n\nDriverless cars may seem smart and the next \"biggest thing\", but would you want to risk a loved one or even a stranger's life? No new trend is worth ending a life just because you think it's cool and everyone else has one. Some might agree they are amazing because you don't have to drive it. Others would disagree because you could get really hurt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electoral college is a unfar way to vote for a president becasue it make the government officals bias to the more popular states such as Flordia or Texas. I think that we should get rid of the electoral college because it make the smaller states feel left out compared to larger states. If the president was elected by the population not by the \"Government\" how would it change the way the U.S. worked today.\n\nThe text informs me that under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for the slate of electors who in turn elect the president. In my opinion I think that there should be more than 3 votes or 4 votes for a state to elect a president. If the United States went to a population voting system the elections would be more fair to people that live in the smaller states. The text also informs me that in 2000 the U.S. presidential race, Al Gore received more individual votes than George W. Bush nationwide, but Bush wont the election, receiving 271 electoral votes the Gore's 266. If the case of Gore losing the election a year later Bush went to war on Iraq.\n\nIf the United States went to a population voting system the percentage of votes would increase dramaticly to cause a honest election. If the election where to happen next election cycle I think that it would change the way the United States votes. People are fooled by the president when they say \"I will lower taxes, Protect the environment, or Stop the wars we are in\" I thnk that it's a trick for them to win the votes they need to win. If the population voted for the president i think that the United States would not be in debt.\n\nThe reason I think that the voting regulations is broken is that smaller states like Rhoad Island is a state that gets 3-10 votes and Claifonia gets 55 votes. If the only thing that make people happy is to be heard by the bigger people in life. If you where a 18 year old kid in a small state trying to make a new product that could help millions but your in that state that wont let you be heard by the rest of the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph indicates food price and oil price both how to change in the worldwide scale during 2000 to 2011. Their fluctuations of price were similar.\nIn 2000, food price was 90 points, and oil price was $30. Then, both prices had slowly increased till 2007. Suddenly, food price and oil price both had a drastic jump in 2008. Separately, food index price reached to 220 points，meanwhile oil price was beyond $220 where was the highest price in the historical record. Strangely, both prices dropped sharply in 2009, food price returned to 140 points same as the previous price in 2007, and oil price returned to less $40 same as the previous price in 2005. However, since 2009, food price and oil price both performed a shaking tendency. Finally, food price reached to the new highest points, 140 in 2011, and oil price was weaker than food price, which was $100 in 2011.\nGlobal food price and oil price are the two dominant index to expose the change of the global financial market. They interact with each other.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Intro: It is sometimes believed that the government should add the price of gas in order to tackle environmental issues in the world. This essay strongly supports the statement due to two core reasons; firstly, car exhaust fumes generate a high amount of carbon dioxides in the air, which contributes to global warming. Secondly, gas stations may cause a danger to the wildlife in the area. \r\n\r\nTo start with, vehicles produce a high amount of carbon dioxide through the exhaust pipe. Which causes global warming. In other ,words The gradual increase in the overall temperature of the Earth’s atmosphere is due to the greenhouse effect. This effect is caused by increased levels of carbon dioxide and other gases in the air, many of them released by human activity.\r\n\r\nFor instance, in Mongolia government increased the cost of fuel everybody was ditching their cars and started buying bicycles in order to, fight against the cost of the gas \r\n\r\nMore importantly, around the area of the gas station’s environments are highly damaged and diseased then it is extremely bad for the wildlife. That means if wild animals eat deceased land it is not only bad for their health but also could cause mutation in the process of breeding. For ,instance in the USA there are lots of mutated animals because of this deceased land. So in order to help wildlife and land around the gas station, the government needs to increase the price of the gas.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I totally agree that increasing the price of fuel will affect our environmental problems such as global warming and wildlife mutations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" is about how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System which enables computers to identify human emotions. The FACS is able to classify six basic emotions; happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. This new technology can be useful in so many ways. For example, many kids are not able to concentrate in school because of their emotions. If a student is feeling sad or depressed, it will interfer with them being able to concentrate or learn because their mind focused on something else.\n\nIn paragraph 6 it says, \"A classroom computer could recongize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This can help the teacher better explain the lesson to the student or alert the teacher that the student is getting bored and might end up dozing off.\n\nDr Huang; the owner of FACS, states that most human communication is nonverbal, inlcuding emotional communication so the computers understands that as well.\n\nThis is why I think this use of technology can be valuable in a classroom.\n\nThe invention can increase a lot of students grades and help teachers know what to explain about.\n\nThe FACS can improve friendships and relationships in a classroom as well.\n\nFor example, the students fellow classmates can make them feel better by showing support or being understanding of their feelings.\n\nClassroom fights or arguments will decrease.\n\nFights or arguments sometimes happen when a person is messing with a person who is already in a bad mood ,the person ends up snapping and it fires up a whole argument or fight.\n\nThis could be prevented from happening if classrooms had a FACS computer to identify that persons emotion.\n\nFor those reasons, I honestly think that the Facial Action Coding System computer would be very valuable to students in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author finds ways to evaluate the dangers of exploring Venus as they find it as a worthy pursuit. Since Venus is a planet and it's next to earth, it only makes sense to explore more of what's already been explored. It's been decades sense something has landed on Venus, and no man has ever set foot there. Venus was once Earth-like in it's time.\n\nVenus is something we see all the time. \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple to spot.\" It won't be easy but at least it's close. Every spacecraft sent to this land is unmanned. \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" With this they can build something stronger. They can examine what didn't work and what technologies could be better to use so they can work their way up into being able to go for themslves. Also if Venus was once like earth, theres more they need to look into, as in how and why it isn't so much like Earth anymore. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\"\n\nAs these datails could go on, Venus is something we don't know too much about because of it's dangers. But from past experiences, we could change some things to get us there. By working on new equipment and examining things extra causiously, it could get us to where we want to be to be able to explore this planet we call Venus. As it is dangerous, it can lead to something wonderful as we can discover more things. It's worth a shot!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertisements could be found anywhere in our daily lives. In my opinion, the current prevalence of advertising is a positive development for companies and a negative development for customers.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, publicity are a powerful tool of competition for association. Advertising stimulates demand, expands the scale of production and in turn reduces the cost of production per unit. This not only increases profit but also creates a competitive pricing advantage for group of advertised products. In addition, since it pays to advertise, advertised products are usually of good, if not the best quality. In other words, a company would emphasize improving the condition of products before advertising, which also helps to create a trustworthy brand image among purchaser.\r\n\r\nHowever, advertising is so common that it now becomes useless and a nuisance to client. First, customers are often bombarded with advertisements of the same product, making it increasingly challenging for them to believe the advertising message if all companies claim they provide the best service or quality products. As a result, buyers now often turn to their friends or acquaintances for recommendations, which renders advertising ineffective. In addition, due to constant repetition, people have now developed an aversion to advertisements and try to get rid of them as much as possible. For example, most viewable media platforms like YouTube or Netflix are now using the removal of advertisements as the unique selling points to attract new customers, implying the audience’s hostile attitude toward advertising.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe advertising could assist companies in generating profit and improving product quality. However, due to their prevalence, advertisements are becoming less effective as customers not only struggle to believe the advertising messages but also try to avoid them as much as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the repid industrialisation and urbanisation, some people claimed that the research about where people choose to live is becoming well-known. Hence, what are the cause of this trend and how can people in this day and age can research it? \r\n\r\nFirst of all, to mention about the reason why people are choosing to research about the accomodation they are living. As the introduction made above, this is the industrialisation era, there are more and more firm choose to invest and construct innovation buildings and house for citizens. This is one of varieties way to proof the development of one country. However, the consequences of having tons of buildings and house choices are plenty of them are not reach the quality. Therefore, people tends to do research and interested to finding the accomodate’s premises or history. This can ensure that the house or building reach the requirements and suitable for their lifestyle. \r\n\r\nBeside the quality issues, one more reasons lead to people research about living quaters is to satisfied their self-satisfaction and reach their demands for learning. Several people enhance their knowledge by research the history of buildings or house to fulfill their knowledge. \r\n\r\nTo successfully research about the premise of building or house they are living in, there are plenty of ways to practices it. Thanks to the development of technologies, it allowing human can access to most of the information they have desire to seek through the Internet. To more specific, asking elderly or who is in older generation, they are the truly craves knowledge since all the skills and experenced they have been through. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the reason make people desire to research history of their accomodation are severals, but two of them are to ensure the quality and satisfied their desire to learn and enhance knowledge. To reach to the knowledge of history about the accomodate they want, doing research though Internet or have a conversation with old generation might be effective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars! what a big leap in technology!, My position on driverless cars is that i think that its a very good idea to be able to drive on our own stll, even though the car has acess to be able to drive on it's own. It would make people feel safe to be able to prevent an accident if there was a mounfunction.\n\nHow ever the way technology is improving is truly fasinating, but there will be people out there that would like to drive on their own and be able to take breaks often. But like I said in the previous paragraph they would feel more safe if they where able to control on their own as well as wanting to take breaks here and there.\n\n\"Within 10 years sensors have become more advanced to detect ands respond to danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. the sensors can apply breakes on individual wheels and reduce power from an engine allowing far better response and control than a human drive ever could.\" quoted Google Cofounder Sergey. There could be serious monfunctions, we cant predict that cant happen. So i think it would be safer if we had the ability to choose to drive or not.\n\nBut in a way this could really help us out in the future, say that a driver is not paying attention to the road and they are about to hit a deer.. a sensor could very well come in handy to keeping anyone in the car safe and it also can prevent damage to the car. In other wods this could go either way it could be good but also have some concerns.\n\nSo in conclusion i belive that if we keep working at the technology we could very well have a success at driverless cars, but untill then i think we should really think out the pros and cons of this situation before we advance to the next step. This could very well be and amazing break through but also could lead us in to some complications, so in other words i belive that we should have thwe choice to drive and be able to have this advantage to be able to have this as an easy safe thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Rough Road ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclists effected features setting She first effected old men told shortcut ride Yosemite National Park Then effected ghost towns water give Then almost dehydrated came rickety road tumbleweed huge snake quite difficult get Then end came upon Gary Wilbers fish camp decided make decisions All things setting affected cyclist negative way except Gary Wilbers fish camp saved dehydration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story saying shows confent self pass test could take know pass test set mother talk made feel good confent retake test know could pass test I think author concludes saying end story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using tecnology to read the emotional expressions in a classroom is valuable because we could truly obtain information in the classroom. Using a computer can display what is being shown in the minds of the future generations.\n\nAltering computers with this new technology could prevent students from ever falling asleep while studying, or taking a text. This is because computers could alter the way they process information, to fit the needs of the one that is using it. Dr. Huang says.. \" A classroom compter could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\"..\" Then it could modify the lesson , like an effective human instructor.\" Doing this could improve grades, and up the positive emotions in a classroom environment. According to the Facial feedback Theory of Emotion, \"Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" Using this science, we could alter the way we view things, and even maniulate people into having an emotion you want them to have at that point in time.\n\nEmotions being read by technology, coud potentially be better for our society. Looking at something you enjoy is better than constantly being frusturated while looking at the same ad over and over. Using this , we could further enhance our abilities in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the challenge of exploring Venus people should not go there becuase it is dangerious. In this essay with will talk about three reasons why you should not go to Venus. Here are three reasons one it is too close to our sun, two it has carbon dioxide on it, third it is very hot.\n\nThe first reason about why you should not go to Venus is it is too close to our sun. In the text it states \"In our solar system, Venus is the second from our sun.\" This shows how dangerious this is. This is bad because it is to close to the hot thing in our solar system.\n\nThe second thing is that there is way to much carbon dioxide. This text states that \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" The text also says that \"high percent of sulfuric acid in Venus atomshpere.\" These two quotes prove that Venus is very dnagerious and no one should go near it.\n\nThe third thing is that it is way to hot for humans. The text says that \"On the planet's surface, temperatures avarage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouter on Earth.\" This two quotes also show how dangerious Venus is to humans.\n\nIn conclusion to Vneus no one should be able to go. This text also is so helpful to understand why we should not. No one would want to burn there feet on 800 degree ground to go to another planet. So humans should just stay on the Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus the evening star since its the brightest point of light in the night sky. Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world and each missiion was unmanned since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours and nvere touched venus in more than tree decades. The thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and the clouds are even more challenging since their is highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere and on the planet surface temperatures average is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience on earth and the environment would crush even a submarine. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported forms of life and has familiar features suah as valleys, mountains, and craters and In conclusion if we could possibly bulid something to survive venus we could find some amazing things like if it ever ahad water and find maybe remains of past forms of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cooling From Book Censorship public libraries would insult institution A library citadel knowledge bound society knowledge convey One point library destination researchers offer information must sought find information homes without fear ask questions without retribution library stands pillar safety Books incapable judgment To censor books held library chip away human progress A freedom thought freedom press present within nation increasing presence around precludes idea censorship If book subject criticism opposition books worthy To value one opinion perspective less another debase entire culture libraries arisen Libraries communal institution open views writings The point bringing books together one roof equate give equal standing literature scholarly works From personal experience censorship library cost precious time stolen parts life Growing small town ideas gender sexuality somewhat firmly set search dissenting opinion often fruitless When I visited school s library child searching answers sexuality I found little aid Around library thousand stories man woman falling love never I find fairy tale two princes It I left school I found books exist old school library kept removed shelves restricted More insulting finding books issues completely unrepresented find treated separately Here lies problem Some people believe minority opinions values unrepresented disappear Such point censorship ignoring issue lifechoice point extinction But books shout values They shove information throats Books must read must give consent knowledge Unlike advertisement might accost us unawares must pick book open receive guidance If library done job given guidance I sought I would grown much easily I would learned express accept I might grown easily accept others well In past years effects reaching newest generation searched ways pay homage victims violence What country finds however effectively memorialize tragedies In trying construct monument government culture find little build The products murder bookburning resulted emptiness void As architects created called antimonuments commemorating void posterity memorialize lost One powerful least appears form negative bookshelf solid wall gaping holes form book spines ranging across rows Such knowledge lost bookburning We even describe lost knowledge vanished We must ask missing What views prose beauty taking us continue living never chance glimpse This effect library censorship To remove book natural rightful place shelf set words aflame Once gone forgotten To protect posterity enlighten descendants must work preserve books book appears offensive disgusting brave new Let reader decide value Let person search answers pick leave behind Give book chance power unrealized Leave libraries monuments preservation progression knowledge wisdom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reason 1) luke could get people to join the Seagoing Cowboys Program is tell them all about it and if they like he can get them into the program and they will like it they can be into that program as long as they want.Reason 2) Just cant be doing stuff wrong in that program or u will get put out of the program and them u wont know nothing about known of this Cowboy stuff like them going into war or recovering Countries that were left ruined.Reason 3)Luke can do another way to get people into this program by telling them where they go and all the stuff the around the world and helping people out and how they go into war.Detail 1)In Aughust 1945,they received their orders to report to New Orleans.\"We arrived August 14,\"Luke says,\"the day the pacific war ended .\"They got their seaman's borded the SS Charles W. Wooster,headed for Greece with cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a place that all scientists these days are completely interested in. The reason why they are so into Venus is because first off, how Venus is called \"Our Sister Planet\" which means that Venus has some similar living conditions as Earth does. For example, Venus was origionally filled with mostly oceans that could've supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet according to the article used to or still has familiar features such as Valleys, mountains, and even living/moving creatures. Which makes Venus sound like it was origionally Earth, but you'd be worng there, because Venus has extreme weather conditions such as temperature getting up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit, or the atmospheric pressure is 90 times more greater than what we experience on Earth. This is my story.\n\nVenus is an interesting planet that scientists have been studying for generations on generations. With the information I gave from the article above would bafle any person in the world. A claim that I'm about to tell you will support the author of this article's idea that we should look more into Venus. For example, the information I gave above in the intro are some reasons why we should look into it more. Another reason why scientists should look at Venus more is, because even though it had all of those similar living conditions as Earth has, there's some drastic conditions that'll still make it non-livable. Some things that'll make a difference is Venus' weather conditions, Temperature is at an average of 800 degrees Fehrenheit. Another is because the air pressure would be at the same amount Earths Ocean's are at, which is not livable at all. And another example is that Venus has extreme thunder/ lightning and rainstorms which frequently hit the ground and would cause a lot of fires.\n\nMy final thoughts on this topic is we should study Venus because even though the thing I'm going to give as an example is not on the article. We should study Venus a lot more because, Venus used to or still does have some of the same living conditions, but when the planet has storms or has other negative issues, the planet Venus can get extremely violent naturally. And their weather conditions compared to ours on Earth are drastic, and make our hurricanes or other form of a storm that we think is terrible and powerful (which they are), will make us and Earth feel incredibly weak.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using this of techology to read the emotional expression of the student in classroom is something valuable. Imagine any type of techology in a classroom being able to tell how you feel that day. Using this types of techology can read your facial expression and tell you how your feeling.\n\nThis can actuallyThe way a computer can determine how you feel is by\n\n\" The process begins when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model to the face; all major muscles is called an action unit.\" This heps the computer by your facial expression to know how your feeling and uses a 3-D model to your face only. 'Your orbicularis oris {aound your mouth} tightens your lips to show you are mad.\" Your lips is also a way the computer can tell how your feeling.\n\nThe way peple coummicate is by \" Most humans communcation is a nonverbal, including emotional communcation,\" notes Dr. Huang. Thos means you don't need words for someone to be able to see how you are feeling. \" In a false smile, the mouth is strected sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. Mostly likely a computer is able to analyze you when you are making a fake smile that that's what that means.\n\nThis was a sussceful experience because \"acording to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your faical muscles not only expresses emotions, but alsomany even help poduce them\" It meant that the Facial feedback was able to determine more than just emotions. It can also cause to emotions to people. \" Putting on happy face actually works.\"\n\nI believe a lot of people will agree to use this form of techology to know their students are feeling. This seems to be a very great idea more futher out in the future. The techology use to know a faical expression can also tell us 6 different types of emotions like happiness, surprised, anger, fear, and sadness. I believe every teacher would like to know how each and every student if feeling and if they are going through something at that moment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In order to inform the fellow citizens about the advantages of limiting car usage, let's first talk about how it impacts society, what will happen if society doesn't reduce the excessive amount of car usage, and what they can do to improve societies living conditions. Driving has majorly changed since back then, driving is an everyday thing for society; most kids get dropped off to school by car, adults drive to work, and families go on trips by car. Driving has succesfully impacted society in a positive way in this generation, but it does have some negative and unseen sides to it.\n\nLimiting access to a car can positively change the outcome of a suburb, whether it be the United States, or Canada. According Source 1, \"In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\" That gives the reader an idea of how the suburb is like without the use of cars, everything is closer to your house. You can walk to the nearest bakery or grocery store, creating the central idea of the stereotypical 'perfect town' seen in shows. In order to build that idea, cities around the world are being influenced by that concept. According to Source 3, \"uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" That proves the fact that if cars are used at the minimum, the city will change for the better. According to Source 2, \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\" In conclusion, with less usage of cars, the better conditions the city would have.\n\nIf society doesn't start reducing the amount of car usage in their city, it will end up being a horrible decision. According to Source 2, \"after days of near-recorded pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of global the city.\" That being said, cars cause the city to endure smog, causing leaders to input a partial ban. In order to fathom the idea of how many drivers refused to follow that law; Source 2 states, \"almost 4,000 drivers were fined.\" That can easily manifest the idea of how society won't be able to live without their cars, which can end up being disasterous. Smog seems to be a major result of car usage in cities, but in the future, it will lead into a worse situation. In Bogota, Colombia, an event was created to ban the use of cars. According to Source 3, \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" To conclude, if cities tried to reduce car usage, it'll drastically decrease the risk of smog and greenhouse effect.\n\nImproving the living conditions of society will produce a tremendous amount of positive effects towards the city. According to Source 4, \"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in american behavior.\" That being said, America is planning to attempt reducing car usages in the country. Also according to Source 4, \"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" That also manifests the idea that America itself, is slowly reducing it's numbers of car usage. Whether it be the expensive prices of cars or the hard driving tests, the less people who drive, the better the environment. According to Source 1, \"the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor.\" That forms the idea that without cars driving around, children have an excuse to go walk around outside. Rather than being inside not doing anything, and taking a car ride to where they need to go; Vauban's rule helps provide children with a different and active childhood.\n\nDriving is slowly causing the countries to change, children don't go out that much. Technology already limits childrens excercise and their time outside, but driving causes children to barely be outside. Also, excessive driving can cause horrible conditions towards the environment itself. Limiting car usage and how it impacts society, what will happen if society doesn't reduce the excessive amount of car usage, and what they can do to improve societies living conditions are all explained, creating the idea that the less drivers there are, the better outcome it'll be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist making mood change In its nice shaded cool feels fairly good Hes excited ready take adventure new path His still good mood comes first town As moves water supply deplets mood sinks lower becomes frustrated In ironic twist fate finds Welchs Grape Juice Factory quit He dejected almost ready admit defeat But forces go finally reaches place water relief mixed wariness old man sitting porch He never take granted advice old men ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Last I went And drove hours O go butt hort We got packing spots went back back lot I excited walking towards park I wicked twister surprised asked pick first ride I said wicked twister got I looked line wicked twister guess took minutes get ride I patient day cut corner like people So day I rode almost rides park ate whole pound burgers fries shake So theres story patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist forest This bumpy trip lot troubles along way This along trip But made tough story tell end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this and age , traffic has being became a controversial issue as it spread globally. Due to this ,people endure many obstacles .So, i intend to explore the source of this problem along with some viable solutions to it .\nTo regard with some possible factors of this trend. Firstly .In earlier time , people used to less transportion services and they covered long and short distance through domestic animals ,sometimes by walking as well.Whereas,thesedays , everyone has their private vechicles and they reliable on it for moving farway and nearest destination.Thus,this practice act as promote traffic level on roads.One further point is that public transportation system is less effective because human beings does not reach at their locatin on time as a consequence, they have to use private vechicles which leads to traffic . Another reason is behind that many people who travel rural areas to urban areas for obtaining education ,work,medical services,which helps to increase traffic because they also use private vechiles instead of public transportation.\nMoving further with possible action in the favour of address this practice . Primary and strong action should be taken by government is that authorities provide extra and improve public transportation facilities in order to reduce private vechicle on roads alongwith encourage people use public transportation and spread awerness reagarding health issues which may be occured in future due to traffic. Moreover,companies should allow cab for their employess and people must walk for short distance which may help reduce traffic level.\nIn conclusion . i reiterate that traffic has very diverese outcomes like increase accident rate , pollution,health problems.Therefore , government and humanity can be reduced it with consicious steps.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Looking at the task below, which is concerning the housing shortages in big cities and its wide social consequences, is evident the way in which two several views try to prevail over each other, giving the opportunity to admit a personal idea after having made a comparison.\n\nThe first view is related to the part of citizens who suppose that only the action from the government can solve the problem and the reasons why several people might sustain such an idea as this one, could be many. For instance, nowadays, still got the presence of people without a school education, are consequently brought, their unaware of their potential and also as unknowing of how to act to change the future.\n\nIn comparison, on the other hand, there are people who claim that their actions in the union, can be as powerful as that of the government. The motivation why they believe so much can be because, being citizens of a city, they are aware of the social consequences which could arise due to a lack of action.\n\nIn my view, the fear and right thing to do should be to work together, in every single situation where government and people take part. Therefore, I strongly disagree with both views as in both cases we always found a singular work and never in the union.\n\nIn conclusion, with what has already been discussed, it's relevant to highlight the importance of the government, which has to protect its citizens from futuristic consequences, making the city a safe place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could arguably change the future. Google has been working with semi-autonomous cars since 2009, and these new innovations could potentially solve an environmental crisis here on Earth. Unfortunately, many people think that if a car drove itself, it would be a danger to others on the road and to the driver as well. In many states, even testing these cars is banned. Are driverless cars dangerous enough to merit controversy?\n\nIt's no doubt that driverless cars would be beneficial to our environment since they use half the fuel of a regular vehicle, and there is no reason why we should ever be so afraid of change that we won't permit the research of a potentionally world-changing invention. Surely testing driverless cars is not without it's dangers, but the benefits that we would reap as a result are nothing less than a necessity, especially since the driver is always in control of the vehicle. Google is working on a car that will drive itself and also alert the driver if the car was about to wreck. If America is about promoting anything, it's saftey, and it's no lie that anything this monumental would be set in stone without the proper precautions being taken.\n\nAmerica is taking part in an advancing technological revolution, but the earth is deteriorating as a result. The constant burning of fossil fuels and the invading of natural resources for materialistic goods are pushing our planet to the brink. In times like these, we need to seize opportunity and take action before our only home in the cosmos is reduced to a regurgitated wasteland of the earth's unusable resources. With driverless cars in our near future, we'll be able to create a fully-autonomous public transportation taxi system with no need for personal cars. It's important for us to care about and care for the planet because if we don't, who will?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI believe that the United States election should be changed to popularity vote. wouldnt that be easier than a Electoral College? I beleive so and i bet many others also believe that a popularity vote is way better. I stongrly encourage a(n) Popular vote becuase its easier, less complicated, and faster.\n\nDont you think a popular vote would make it way easier for not just the fellow citizens of America but for you guys? I believe that this would be a great change not for the bad but for the good. The popular vote all you have to do is count and state who had more and bam! its that easy! Its just 123 and your done. Isnt that much easier? Not a long process or any of that. imagine just voting once for the president and being done with all that?\n\nWouldnt having a popular vote be less complicated? you wouldnt have to do the state elector or have any more requirements. All you have to do is whoever has more wins! also in the Elecoral College the voters dont even vote for the president but for a slate of electors?? what is that nonsense? shouldnt citizens have the freedom of voting for who they want as president? I thought this was the land of the free? How would bigger states have a voice if it was the same as the smaller ones?\n\nDont you believe that a popular vote would also be a faster way of the elections? its just 123. Electing electors to vote for you just takes way to long. By the time your done with that you couldve been done with the presidential elections if you wouldve just had a popularity vote from the start. Everything you do is based on time so wouldnt it just be easier for everyone to vote and boom! its all over. Its not just faster for us but for y'all also.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like to travel around the world? Well if you do you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Even if you dont like to travel your demeanor will change when you join this program. We have table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games to pass the time by. You will be so exuberant that you joined. You will be like a kid on Christmas morning.\n\nYou will get to see new places ,and you get to say you have been there before when other people have not been there. You will never be melancholy on this trip beacause there is things to do all the time. You get free breakfeast every morning. There will be eggs,panacakes,bacon,sausage and more. If you join this month you will get a free trip to the next place we go. On the boat there is a pool,and there is a hot tub. The pool and hot tub closes at 10:00.\n\nI cracked my ribs but that did not stop me from having fun. I only had to stop working for a couple days,and then I was better than ever. When joining in this month you get you dont have to pay for a class abought the safeteys of being on a boat. You will be more exuberant than Christmas morning. My freind Don Reist got me into this program,so I hope I can get you to join this program like he did to me.\n\nLets reacap why you should join this program. We have table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games. These help take up time while going to are destination. You get to see new places,and get to tell people abought it so mabey they will join to. If you join in this month you dont have to pay for a class abought safety of being on a boat,and you dont have to pay for the next place we go. You get free breakfeast every morning. When I joined I did not know abought if I would like the program but I did,and im still it and I like it even more every day. I hope your demeanor will change like mine did when I joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. That is why I think you should join this amazing program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author has great supports about why we should study the planet of Venus. He called it Earth's twin. He stated that Venus is the closest planet to be comapred to Earth. The author states that blimp-like vehicles would help with the study of Venus.\n\nThe author said Venus is Earth's twin because it's the closest planet to have the same density and size as Earth. The author states that we could use blimp-like vehicles to not get burnt or crushed because if the vehicle gets 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape everything would change. The temperature would drop from about 800 degress to 170 degress Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure would drop from 90 times greater than earths surface to about Earth's sea level if the vehicle were to be 30 miles or so above the surface.\n\nAll you need to know why we need to study Venus more is all here. Venus is basically Earth's twin so why not study it more. Venus is the closet planet to be compared to Earth with its size and density. Blimp-like vehicles would help with it's flight to 30 miles or so. It would help with the temperature and the atmospheric pressure. Do you have anything to debate about these facts?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had no idea that his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. He was working two part-time jobs in agrocey store and a bank when his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no.\n\nIn 1945, World War 2 was over in Europe,and manu countries were left ruins. To help these countries recover their food and supplies,animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to help the nation they are called the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shiped overseas.\n\nBy the time he was discharged in 1947,Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acroplis in Greece was special,he says. So taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water. A cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nIt took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eatern coast of the United States and a month to get to china. Caring for animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They fed the animals three times a day water,bales of hay,and bags of oats. Stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nBeing a Seagoing cow was much more than an adventure for Luke. It opened up the world to him. \"Im grateful for the opportunity,\"he says. It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nIn conclusion Luke had the best time of his life being a Seagoing Cowboy he didn't no his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. In 1945 world war 2 made places get ruined so he decied to go to Seagoing Cowboys. He help animals like horses,young cows,and mules too. He had so much to do but he did it and yes it was hard but he did what he was suppossed to do. A Seagoing Cow boy was more than an adventure for Luke. It opened the world up to him. He is gratefull of the opportunity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present age, most people have an opportunity to get a higher education. However, some of them choose not to, and after graduation, they start working at various places. In this essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion.\n\nTo start with, in the last year of school every teenager is encouraged to apply to a university or college and get their degree. That is why a vast number of students choose to study there. They are convinced, that it is the best way to ensure a bright future for themselves because it is well known that employers are more willing to give you the position of employment if you have finished any sort of school of higher education. Your degree shows that you are a better expert in a certain field and can do some tasks, which most people can’t. In other words, studying at a university helps you develop some exceptional competencies, that not many people have.\n\nHowever, not all young human beings share the same view. Some of them believe, that it is useless to spend a few years studying and learning how things work only in theory, which is what most schools of higher education are offering. Those people choose to enter the labour market and gain needed skills in a practical way, which is considered to be more beneficial amongst some people. They share a view that theoretical knowledge will not help you in the real world when you start working, and that practical experience is the key. That is why a fair share of students choose to start working straight after finishing school.\n\nOverall, as humans, only we know what is best for us – spending those 3 or 4 years in a university or college or getting a job straight after school. I believe that both of these options can be beneficial for a young person, trying to find his own path, but I personally am in favour of the former view, and I think that it is better to learn some thin", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the upcoming trends that got the majority of population across the world interested is looking up the history of the building they reside in. There are many different aspects when talking about historical heritage, The remains of our ancestors and how we can learn from them or the events in those time that still affects today. When research can be done at your fingertips with the help of vast connected data available on the internet.\r\n\r\nSome people say that the heritage site of one country should be highly preserved and maintenance regularly, Since it is the ancient construct that has last throughout the age. The reconstruction of ancient heritage can be costly and cannot completely resemble the original because the construction material is quite different from our time. Thus, We need to do everything in our power to protect it so that it will continue throughout the ages. These preserved sites can also serve as learning centre for students and tourists who are interested in history. Helping them learn the aesthetic architecture and the recorded history. For instance, In Thailand, A group of historians aim to preserve the city of Ayutthaya, The past capital city of Thailand. Unfortunately, the majority of the city was destroyed during the war with Khmer leaving it in the state that cannot be longer reconstructed due to heavy damage. Therefore, The ruins of prosperous city now stand as learning center for Thai historic and a major tourists attraction point in Thailand.\r\n\r\nThe stored archive of historic building can be access in numerous ways. But the most efficient approach nowadays is through the internet. Since the introduction of the global connection, The approach we took to conduct research has change dramatically. Instead of going to the library and going through all the pages, topic such as historic heritage, is limited resource and not being available in most libraries. These old-fashioned constraint has been replaced by people sharing resources on the\r\n\r\n internet whether it is research paper conducted by group of professors, magazines, journals or even youtube video can be helpful and give you all the information you needed for research purposes.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, learning history about heritage is becoming more popular for the majority of people. With the accessible of the internet, Research and studies can be done way easier than the old fashion style. Giving instant access to all resources needed in many forms such as ebooks, video or photography. This lead to people get better understanding of the history of their country and the prestigious heritage across the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle lot dirigibles outside use hydrogen helium The problem hydrogen highly flammable German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State building realized much worse accident could taken place densley populated area downtown New York City imagine tragic chaotic would Another obstacle builders faced nature The winds top building constantly shifting violent air currents That would ve meant dirigibles could got swept back In conclusion several obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My postion is agaist Driverless cars. From the article they are reliable. The saftey sensors could not function properly due to all the movement on the wrong also with the changes of directions. A GPS may be capiable of this but the GPS is not also controling the car. A GPS is basicailly the same thing as a sensor they work very much the same. The name doesnt even soud safe \"A driverless car\" it soiunds like an idea without very much put thought into it. Only\n\nthree states dont make to it illegal just to test the Driverless Car. That tells us that they are dangerious from all of the possible outcomes.\n\nThe biggest reason to be agaist this product called \"The Driveless Car\"\n\nis because the human is not in control of the vehical at all times. Yes the car has motion seniors b ut there is a lot of activies and movement on the road. On e crash from another vehical and motion seniors can be unsure what to do and where to go. For example what will the motion senior do at a 4 way road. there are too many risks and danerious possiblities.\n\nOther big factors that could effect the technology is weather, water, wifi, the brakes could be second too late before hitting an object. One the first Driveless Cars model is a BMW that can reach up to 25 Mph. Now a car going 10 mph can put someone in the hopstial. A BMW not totally controled by a human at 25 mph can seriously hurt someone. those add to the big number of dangerious possiblities.\n\nOverall just testing this car is dangerious. We can only trust our phones to get the job done only 75% of the time. It would not be wise or \"Smart\" to trust some technoigly that is in the same boat to drive us around at 25 mph speeds.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers take away lives negative way New advancements technology general take away lives negatively It contribute obesity turn couch potato take away social life It s computers arent useful s people using frequently As country obese people decade A good way lessen obese population get comouter chair sit chair play flash games watch youtube videos day sure put pounds Those pounds accumulate fast food companies like contribute obesity computers When someone eats big mac burger go upstairs play flash game go work gym Trust arent going burn calories clicking mouse People often use computer rarely see true beuty nature They busy shooting animated rabbits go see real rabits Would rather take walkin park stare computer screen half hours The world beutiful place less realize Being computer even effect social life The socialize people CAPS know computer less know communicate real people I know I would want real girlfriend virtual one You show watching computer even spend time loved ones Your family much important silly computer game In conclusion I d like say opinion computers used little less Who CAPS want fit nature love popular kid people would spend little less time computer little time reality You could kid like CAPS I m sure adult", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology that reads the emotional expressions on student faces is very valuable for many different reasons. How can these things be used practically and actually make a difference in the the class room?\n\nFirst, how does this technology actually work? The process starts out with a computer making a 3-D model of the face that it will be reading. All the muscles in the model work just like the ones in a real person! The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) will pick from 6 basic emotions and will tell you which emotion it is. The technology is very accurate and has even predicted what the Mona Lisa is feeling. Each expression is compared to a nuetral face.\n\nThe model will have all 44 major muscles. The model will move just like a real person making it fairly easy to know\n\nwhat you are feeling without you having to say a word to anyone.\n\nIf you raise the muscles in the upper corner of your mouth then you are happy, if you lower those muscles then you are sad, The system will carefullt analyze your expressions.\n\nStudents can use this technology is their every day lives. How, you may ask? This is how, when you are watching something and you make a frown the computer will know and give you something else to watch, if you smile it will give you more things like that. If you are in a class using the computer and the student becomes bored or frustrated the computer will know based on your facial expression and make the lesson more interesting and enjoyable.\n\nThis FACS can also be used in video surgery! Students going in the medical field can learn to use this and communicate through their emotions. Communicating through emotion is common, and alot of people do this. Alot of human communication is nonverbal so this could be the perfect thing for some people.\n\nGiven the information it is clear that this technology will be very beneficial in the time to come. Not only will it be used inside a lab it will be used inside the real world. This science will make a change in students lives for the better and it will be remebered for many years to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, an increasing number of people has their children in a later age tan people from past generations. It is agreed that having children at a later age can provide a couple with more maturity and stability. Therefore, the essay will, fistrly, talk about some of the reason why this trend increases with the time, and secondly, discuss the most important advantage of taking such a decision. \n\nPreferences and goals in life changed always between generations, and the younger ones are putting the need to be parents at a lower relevance than ever before. This is mainly because they want to do other things first, and develop their life as individual, before taking the adventure to have a family. Moreover, young people preffer having a little finacncial stability after a couple of working years, to later on take the decision to have kids. For instance, a survey made by the University of Cologne in 2015, stated that more of the half of bachelor students were planning ahead their next 5 to 10 years without the need of having a baby or erasing a family.\n\nEven though many consider that being old as a parent presents many disadvantages, there are also plenty of upsides of it. Maybe the most important one is flexibility, as young people are not needed to rush into being parents if they do not have the time, economic stability, or knowledge. This could lead to benefits at the time to being parents, as they have a more structured path to take. or example, a poll by the German government explained that couples that had a baby at the age of 30 or older were better prepared and had less doubts about their decision.\n\nIn conclusion, this essay is not requesting people to have kids on their thirties, because such a decision is very personal, but it is always good to be stable, to have the possibility of planning the future better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that this Face is an alien, I believe it's really a natural landform. I believe it's a natural landform because we have never seen an alien before, therefore we have no proof, this \"Face\" has changed over the years, which landforms do, and how would've the aliens survived, and shouldn't there be more alien faces if this actually was one? These three things show that the Face was just a landform.\n\nFirst off, nobody on this Earth has living proof of an alien. Yes, there have been several theories, and beliefs that there really are aliens. I think that if there was ever an alien, we would've known about it, and we would have proof. There could be aliens living on another planet, but as far as we know there aren't. We have never taken a picture of a real alien. NASA has taken pictures of this \"Face\", but all of them turned out to be natural landforms. Even though the pictures can look like a face, they always turn out not being one. They tried several times to get better pictures of this landform, and every time, it was not an alien. Until we get proof of a living alien, nobody will fully believe that they do exist. WIthout any proof, there is no sense in trying to get others to believe you.\n\nSecondly, the face didn't just appear one day. It had to have formed for it to look like what it does. Landforms can take years to actually get their shape and looks, and I think that's what this Face did. Scientists said that it looks like ladforms common around the American West. They said that it reminded them of MIddle Butte in the Snake River of Plain Idaho. I think that if it was an alien it would've popped up one day, and it would've been very defined. In all of the pictures I've seen, none of the faces were extremely defined, and therefore there was no actual evidence of a face. Honestly, anything that has formed has the capability of looking somewhat like a face, or at least have a few similarities. I know that object is going to erode away, but this landform keeps loooking less and less like a face. Landforms change drastically because of the weather and conditions they are in, and that's exactly what this Face has done.\n\nLastly, the weather conditions on Mars are not possible to live in, and if there was one face, shouldn't there be more? I don't see how an \"alien\" could possibly survive on Mars. There are no supplies and there is obviously no other life. If aliens are a real thing, they are most likely going to be built similarly to humans, and we can't live on Mars. I also don't see how they could've gotten there, when once again, there's no other life. I think that if there were other faces that I would consider this Face to be an actual face. There is no explanation to how this face even got there, and we can't explain it either. I don't think that it's remotely possible for this creature to survive on Mars, and if it did there has to be more like itself.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe there is no possible way for it to be an alien. We have never seen an actual alien, so we have zero proof, the \"Face\" has changed over the years, and so do landforms, and how did this creature survive, and if it did there should be more of it's own. We don't even know what a real alien looks like, so we can't say it is one. These reasons show that this Face, it is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mars is a very big place. scientict are trying to figure out how or if people would be able to live there. in this picture there is a thing face of some sort.\n\npeople beleave that it happen to be created by aliens. it appears to be that even if it was aliens wouldnt they have to prove if there was such things as aliens. this bump couldve been created by a coment, rock, or even a meteroid. i personaly would have to disagree with the people that think it was created by aliens do to the fact that there is not any proof that aliens even exsist. there is not even any proof that this but couldnt have been a meteroid, coment, or even rocks that hit mars.\n\nin paragraph 3 it claims that a huge rock formation which resembles a human head. in the artical it even says that it most likely couldve been a rock. this is one of the reason why i agree with the way it wasnt formed by aliens it was a rock. alien are yet to be discovered where in this view u cant say that it was a alien it is not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter Something everyone Its natural organic normal They say children laugh adults maybe s keeps children They still let deep instinct enjoy expressed bursts happy noise Laughter always unique every person Some musical laughs others deep belly laughs Then snort snicker kind laugh makes laugh hear Those favorite Someone said Laughter shortest distance two people I could nt agree Laughing people greatest influence relationships friends I five girlfriends I would able live without They support love get bold get comfort zone There many sleepovers two morning laughter us shocking confession horror would rather someone came One particular especially funny It last sleeping porch It spectacular stars air cool comfortable meteor shower happening later evening started conversation favorite catch phrase CAPS guys hows life We around hour saying times CAPS five minutes ago I replied CAPS guys life completely changed said sarcastically CAPS really asked little body curled sleeping bag CAPS personality flip blond stupid CAPS said sarcastically rolling eyes gesture We ridiculous mental picture brain stupid CAPS guys want play would rather piped I thought asleep All I could see red hair covering face CAPS yelled I ca nt handle mind filled horrible mental pictures buried face pillow trying block images CAPS sure I new ones said best evil voice CAPS would rather CAPS yelled together laughter ensued CAPS suggested An unintelligible noise came pillow CAPS say I asked She raised sleepy eyed face I CAPS lazy unless first one asleep I CAPS playing dropped head back onto pillow I agree added I CAPS lazy LOCATION would take four hours get porch cause PERSON I CAPS I CAPS CAPS accept CAPS I CAPS continued bantering back forth till slowly people began fall asleep drifting cool air I last awake I watched meteor shower I sudden epiphany My life pretty awesome right It school stress I laying porch watching meteor shower listening sounds feeling perfectly safe I best five friends I could ever wish We joked first step comfortable people tell everything Laughing someone breaks ice brings us closer together Laying I suddenly realized joking I felt comfortable enough girls tell everything I wanted I never felt That I could anything five people back anything I smiled I closed eyes I imagined laughter I would get enjoy friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is 2018, everything is changing from our clothes, media, social norms, etc. Scientists are moving closer to become independent of labor and moving more towards technology. First it was the car, then phones, now facial action coding system. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" written by Nick D'Alto, the idea of having technology to do decode what emotion you are feeling is central to popular belief. The idea that a camera with a few buttons would be able to tell how you are feeling is absolutely impeccable. The everyday use of technology should not become normal. This society needs to know that soon enough everything will be controlled by technology.\n\nThe article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" has many ideas that I do not agree with. Starting with the fact that putting a facial action coding system in a classroom will be the same as if an effective teacher were to be there. The demonstration of this system itself seems very interesting, but only in the right place and the right time. In paragraph six Doctor Huang explains \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" this mean that the computer will be there physically but will rarely give any verbal or emotional communication. Putting this in a classroom full of students and having it code their emotions is not only a crime to teachers everywhere but also to the students. Not only do the students need someone physically to be there, they also need someone to model for them. All students have different ways of learning. If the students who learn by the teacher modeling, they won't be doing very good with the computer.\n\nNot only do the students need a teacher there as a figure to respect and trust, but they also need their own privacy. Doctor Huang states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" this is not necessarily a good thing. If the computer is watching their every move and facial or emitonal expression they would feel like they are constantly being watched. This is a feeling the children should not be exposed to at an age where you are just being a kid. If the students are being watched, they are then mainly apart of a science experiment that they did not agree to and that is not right.\n\nThe final reason why this computer would not be effective with the kids is that there is a liability factor when it comes to putting one of these in your classroom. You have to think about what the parents' will have to say. Doctor Huang also includes \"If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" this means that the computer is watching every single move you do while you are searching the web. The camera is turned on and who knows if a person might be watching you through the other end. Many parents or even potential buyers may not want this from new technology.\n\nIn conclusion, technology will be apart of our everyday lives whether we like it or not. The different types of technology that we use is what we can control. The Facial Action Coding System is the type of technology that students and teachers should steer clear of. Technology may be able to do cool things, but that doesn't mean it doesn't come at a price.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mooring dirigibles would good moored top Empire State Building One reasons mooring dirigible top building dirigibles would come dock outside US used hydrogen instead helium The hydrogen extremely flammable Hindenburg exploded would unsafe hydrogen filled dirigibles highly populated area New York CityAnother obstacle faced climate problem This biggest problem The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents paragraph If winds rapid back dirigible would swinging around freely This could potentially cause danger back hit building near start swinging control break loose buildingThe last problem faced based story docking dirigibles would law The exsisting law stated airship could nt fly low urban areas If dirigible able dock Empire State Building would low urban area This made impossible Empire State Building dock dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some individuals believe that the only way to enhance road safety is to increase punishments for drivers. I disagree with this view because many drivers may still violate the driving rules when they receive a chance even though the penalty is high and educating their mindset could be another possible way to solve this issue.\r\n\r\nIt is true to say that a large number of drivers break safety rules whenever they obtain a chance. Although governments and authorities are used to control the most sophisticated equipment , many of them are not interested to follow those laws because in their opinion some rules are not relevant and impractical. Moreover, some traffic police are also intended to charge a high amount of money to drivers rather than educating them . In Thailand , for example , larger numbers of drivers are paying money to traffic police instead of obeying the laws and that could lead to the corruption problem as well. Unless governments are taking serious action , public road safety could not expect to get better.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly , educating is more effective than punishing if we want to improve road safety.Obviously , changing the public mindset is not an easy task because governments and authorities might need to invest a large amount of time and money as well. Even though the investment is huge , we could receive better outcomes like fewer road accidents . In the UK, for instance, a wide range of educating roads safety awareness and guidelines can reduce a significant amount of accidents in some major cities .\r\n\r\nTo conclude,even though some people say that more punishments for careless drivers can improve road safety , a lack of proper education can still remain this problem in the future. Unless we educate the public , we would not resolve the problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opition this technology would be really helpful to students in school. If a teacher is teachng a lession and a student or all of them are using compuers then I can see this technology being helpful to the teacher and the student. It could even help a student do better in school.\n\nIf this technology can somehow let the teacher know if someone eather isn't interested or they are interested then it can tell the teacher to do something else. With this knowledge for the teacher he or she can change the lession a little to someones specific liking so no student is bored. With this students can be more focused on the lession at hand. With this, in the future students might be excited to go to school. Also help them if there having difficulty in something.\n\nPeople can even make this technology avallible in other aspects like video games and watching videos or movies. If someone plays a game it can suggest another game like it, samething with movies. With this people can find more things they like to do at home. This will allow this technology to find things someone likes to do and see if they enjoy it. This might even make people feel generally happier in their home.\n\nIn conclusion this technology for classrooms is in my opition a great idea. Not only can it help students who are confused, but this can make them excited to go to school. This will allow students to do much better in school and find how they learn best. Also this can make people be happier at home when doing things they like. People can use this to find even more things that they like even if they never considered it before.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "News is the only medium through which viewers receives day to day updates of the world. Even though newspapers and television news channels have been providing information of the global events, some believe this updates are of no use on individual's lives and should be avoided as they waste their time viewing them. I strongly disagree with this point of view, as they play a vital role in updating and reporting events that bring awareness from events that can affect any individual.\r\n\r\nFirstly, Mainstream media keeps a close eye on the activities of the government and provides updates to the masses. As the government have the power to create, change and remove policies that operate the country. Updating such changes are bought to attention to the public through the medium of newspaper and television news networks. For example, The Government of Maharashtra updated law in transportation safety moderation. Where in an accident, a helper who admits an injured to the hospital was asked to stay in the premice until interrogated by the police. Avoiding questioning from the inspectors, people rarely helped the victim. The new rule stated that it's not mandatory for the saviour to stay and no questions will be asked. This information was widespread through news outlets and changed the attitude of millions in helping injured. \r\n\r\nSecondly, the world we live in is constantly changing some bring good while others bring bad changes. a catastrophic event can have a minor or major impact on everyone's lives. Reporting such events can enable the general people to embrace from it on time. In recent times, with the widespread of COVID-19 virus, television news played a heroic role in spreading the awareness of precaution and informing the affected areas. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, considering to discontinue of newspaper and television news channels as they don't provide relevant news is arguably wrong. As they are the medium from which critical information is passed out to the general audience which can bring a lot of impact on any individual.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There several mood author createdFirst author create family full love home loved family gatered upAlso author talk relationship nationnalityIn addition In family living basement upstairs allmost everywhereThe best example author talk instanters fromAs see great made word loved whole family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree that Venus would be a worthy pursuit even with dangours risk it may have because nobody has ever been to Venus and they could be the first ever to do so.The text states that \" (NASA) has one particlary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to flot above the fray.\" This is a way that humans could study Venus and not get hurt.\n\nVenus is a dangours planet to go to because it is really hot and the text states that \" temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit,\" that is really hot but they would die and it would be worth it because we could get information about Venus and we would know more about it.The text states that \" Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" If they can get that to work we could be the first ever to go to Venus and we could use it to explore other planets and learn about them.\n\nOverall Venus would be worthy to explore evan though it comes with allot oh harmfull risk.But it also could really be benifical if we could go to Venus and get information about that planet and we could go in and maybe vist another planet like Jupeter we could get a lot of information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every book meaning message know Taking book away library shelf decrease knowledge someone might need information Just book certain views offensive mean allowed shelf A book discriminated contets source reader Positive negative books allowed shelve intrested As music movies could place catogoery reasonable Its really neccasary place library place known peace quite relaxation If music movies become hazard welcome library Positive side music movie way comfort good book hand It understandable little tone knowledge within eyes book Magazine another non neccasary object place library A magazine mixture good negative thing obtain Not magazine something use educate Most magazine known entertainment update well known people around globe Magazines removed library The library experience learning envirnment materials good help instead entertainment pleasure Remove book shelf like decrease knowledge could known As remove books allowed matter content book As music movies magazines limited usuage library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you will experance some awesome things. Like ittly's linging tower of puzza.\n\nI wus a Seagoeing Cowboy for selvel years of my life and i loved it. Takeing care of anmales that i love to differnt conyerys. It's a big opturanty to some thing great with your life.\n\nThe best thing about being a seagoeing cowboy is seeing that you are making a differance in some bothys life.\n\nOn the way back from your joney thay have lots of activets.\n\nthars boxing in the pen's of anmails if you win you will get braging rifhts in tell some one bets you. There wus also lots of other things to do like the table tenaces turments thear wer soo fun to do to try to beet the best on the boat. There wus also Baceball,Volleyball,Reading,Whittling,Thease games helped to pass the time on the way back.\n\nThats why i think you shold joine the seagoing cowboys.\n\nIts alys fun on the way back to the U.S.A.\n\n.The Seagoing Cowboys is more than just an adventure for any one its a story.\n\ngoing the seagoinging cowboys is a once in a life optunaty it's fun but also dangeras and a hard working job. thois are some reasins why you shold joine the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting place ghost town author said It hot summer day June course cyclist would dehydrating There one around couldnt ask help It like old town ran old men knew nothing new world told wrong directions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertisements have become one of the key reasons behind any commodities success in today's world. Due to this, often consumers have to face multiple ads from companies. This can lead to wrong influence among the population. In this essay, we will discuss how do customers get influenced and what can be employed in order to make them safe from fake articles.\n\nCompanies have been bombarding normal people with numerous commercials which have had their own effect. These displays can be misleading sometimes, as in many cases the products shown in the reel are not at all similar to the real ones. To illustrate, in many commercials of cars, it is shown performing off-road stunts which is not better for the car in the real world. Another reason which can be highlighted is, some industries can build peer pressure over a specific age by including famous personalities in the bulletins. For instance, alcohol brands often hire prominent characters for the promotion of the brand among teenagers which is actually very appalling. \n\nThis can be brought to a halt by some serious actions taken by the government. Firstly, there should be regulations over the difference between reel and real products. If the difference between both is much higher then impositions should be applied to such establishments. Secondly, if any product is having an influence over a specific generation of the society with wrongdoings, then immediately such organizations should be banned. This can demotivate the owners who are trying to sell their merchandise in an unsound method.\n\nTo sum up, commercials are a part of the modern lifestyle nowadays. They can have merits like an increasing market for more competition as well as demerits as fake or misleading adverts. The demerits should be controlled by the specific bodies of government in order to protect the local community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals believe that teenagers should be forced to do volunteer jobs for serving the society whenever they have spare time. This would be beneficial for both adolescents and local residents. I agree with this notion that it is necessary to engage them in voluntary work. This essay will discuss the positive aspects with examples. \n\nTo embark with, youngsters will be able to comprehend their responsibility towards the society if they do unpaid work. Because when they interact with other members of the group then they come to realize the problems associated with different issues like education, poverty, pollution and many more. Moreover, they could arrange awareness campaigns in towns ,which disseminates information about different sources of income.Child Welfare Scheme, for example, has revealed that many poor families have been helped by school students by supporting them in agricultural tasks. As a result, volunteering makes students the most responsible citizens of the country. \n\nMoreover, unrewarded work helps the teenagers in shaping their character. As they learn how to communicate and handle difficult situations. They can develop myriad skills such as leadership,behavioural and cultural values.Furthermore,they do not indulge in antisocial activities such as theft,terrorism and drug trafficking etcetera. For instance,USA government have saved a lot of teenagers from becoming criminals by introducing volunteer scheme,which has also improved their communication skills.Consequently, inculcating the habit of doing work on volunteer basis will enhance their personality. \n\nIn conclusion, unpaid social service not only essential for local people but also for an individual growth. Teachers should encourage numerous students to take part in serving the community during their leisure time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries community centers Children adults go libraries check new books could give new experiences information If libraries took books inappropriate offensive young adults adults would never recieve new experiences Libraries require sorts books make qualified library If libraries censor books materials might start vanishing well Most young adults read books adventure mystery love A person could find mystery book serial killer main character offensive ca nt rewrite book one person futhermore take book completely shelf That book public property If library took mystery book shelf library taking away experience another young adult reading One teenager s thoughts account teenagers thoughts Libraries take away offensive inappropriate books might influence multibillion dollar industries second guess work The movie industry example The movie industry might second guess directors actorsactresses hiring Actors actresses large influence many teenagers children Imagine child s favorite actor disappeared future movies child would left without role model The affects censoring books magazines go way beyond libraries Music artist might also affected Rappers curse swear music voice opinions personal experiences For example famous rapper He curses music s shows emotion event If music publishers would nt publish work offensive would lose job career This people today s society make living providing entertainment people Libraries right take away books children adults Authors know writing They write shows emotions feelings It thing music artists screenplay writers If movies unicorns movie industry would fall apart quickly Libraries whole need think bigger picture extinguish books experiences thoughts hard work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It makes sense that people think this is evidence of an ancient civilization, but according to NASA they wish it was. Nowadays, with science fiction rapidly advancing it's hard to not imagine or want aliens and any sort of other life to exist because of how extraordinary it would be. Up until today NASA hasn't found any life out there, but they want to and all the other science enthusiasts do aswell. If this was a clue to other life out there, just stumbling upon this was way too easy. Obviously, others like this have been found, meaning this isn't anything more special than a natural landform. If aliens really did exist there is a small chance NASA would just easily stumble upon evidence like this one because if this was real it's too good to be true.\n\nRealistically, there's so much reasoning from the experts themselves proving that this isn't anything unusual. First of all there's a thing called shadows and they can easily turn a natural figure into looking like some human-like structure. NASA will literally use technology we don't have access to such as more high-tech cameras to find out things no one ever knew existed. Obviously there are landforms like a butte or mesa meaning this isn't something never found. In fact there's one in Idaho called the,\"Snake River Plain of Idaho\".\n\nWhen just ordinary people just make an inference it doesn't mean it's true. When thinking about who finds out all the things and goes up to see the things that occur in space it's NASA. Honestly they are the smarter ones, so there's nothing some regular people with opinions can prove. When the picture was shown it shows the landform started to change or deform, meaning if the structure is able to do such a thing looking like a face had no purpose. If it these are signs of an ancient civilization wouldn't there be more evidence discovered by now or wouldn't there be more of these near?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, traffic congestion, which is caused by an enormous amount of vehicles, has become inevitable and more serious in each passing day. There are a variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons for the massive number of vehicles, the most obvious of which is the overpopulation. Nowadays, rural people tend to migrate to more developed cities to get more job opportunities and a higher standard of living that both of which lead to overpopulation. To illustrate, there has been a huge difference between the population density in rural and urban areas - the areas of dense and sparse population respectively. As a result, the commuting demand in most of the metropolises has increased day by day. Another contributory factor is that people prefer to use the private vehicle over public transportation because of the poor quality of private vehicles. Personal vehicle distinguished from public transport by its convenience and flexibility. Using public transportation is extremely time-consuming. Whereas, if people commute by personal vehicle on a regular basis, an enormous amount of exhaust fumes and emission will be release and traffic jam will have no improvement.\r\n\r\nInitiatives can be taken to improve the situation. Firstly, commuters tend to travel to work simultaneously. Therefore, in order to ease congestion, we should change our working habits and government ought to encourage people to stay inside during rush hours. Secondly, the government needs to focus on developing the public transport system. Especially in developing countries, buses are definitely inadequte to respond to the demand of their citizens. The government might consider with regard to other public transport like bicycles. Developing the bicycle system all around the city will bring a lot of benefits to the people and the city itself. It is also safer for the environment and has positive effects on the riders’ health.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, worldwide cities and towns are facing pressing traffic issue these days due to the overpopulation and the huge amount of private vehicle. However, we can significantly curb traffic by changing our working habits and diversify public transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advancement of technology has helped humanity a lot in several ways, such as comuters,phones or even, planes to travel the world. These advancements could help students to learn in school. The facial recognition mentioned in this article is amazing for the following reasons: it could give students an easier time understanding material, it could introduce new ideas into peoples minds about career oppurtunities, and it could draw students focus into their work.\n\nThis facial recognition could help students understand their material better by molding the lesson if the student is confused or bored or possible even distracted. This would be immensely helpful for students who may have trouble comprehending certain subjects like math or English. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson,like an effective humn instructor.\"\n\nBy shaping the lesson around the student it makes it more possible for a student to pass a class and graduate from highschool or college. If the student seems confused the lesson can slow down and work through the problem with them. If the student seems happy then the lesson can speed up and throw harder work at them.\n\nTechnology such as facial recognition in an acedemic situation could take the slowing down of harder classes and us that to drive new ideas of new technology into peoples heads. These programs could take calculus and make it to appleal to students with a mind for working with computers. This would open job oppurtunities for millions of people in the United States alone. It could take biology and slow the lesson to then advance it into so many different branches of biology.\n\nStudents get distracted; it's a thing that happens. what if it wasn't as easy to be distracted. what if your lesson shaped itsel ito something you liked because you undersood it, because you could make sense of what the lesson was about, and pllied it to real world situations. A lot of the reasons students get distracted is because they dont understand their subject or it's too hard so they stop to take abreak and dont come back to it baecause they know that they'll be just as confused when they come back to it as they were when they left. If your lesson slows down to incorporate your confused look or your stares of boredom it could mke the lesson easier to help you understand it which will in turn capture your attention again. I know multiple people who would love to have tis tech, myself included.\n\nThis would be an amazing advancemement in the acedemic worl but it's very far off. When this becomes widespread it would boost the economy of its country by a lot. I believe this technology would be beneficial for the following reasons: it would help students undertsand their material, it could introduce new ideas into peoples minds about career oppurtunities, and it could draw students focus into their work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Millions of people use cars in their everyday lives whether its driving to work, school or even the supermarket. With the amount of people on the streets on a daily basis, its not suprising that there is a major traffic issue in Miami. Most people dont realise how big of an issue this truly is because in reality they just need to get to and from work. I'm here to inform you about the beneficial alternatives to driving everywhere you go.\n\nWhether going to work or driving your kids to soccer practice, a way of transportation is a must. Most people choose the \"easy\" way out and just hop in their brand new luxury cars. But what if I told you there is an easier way, a more efficient way? All around Miami, there are metro rail stations. These stations are clean, safe, and not to mention useful. There are busses, trolly's, and even metro movers that can take you all around the city. the trains, busses, trolly's and metro movers all run on a schedule. An easy way to limit your gas bill, pollusion and time wasted in traffic is to simply set up a route to where you need to go and catch the appropriate mose of transportation.\n\nTime is always on peoples mind, whether you have enough time to go shopping for a new dress or maybe stop by grandmas house. all things require time. Everyday millions of Americans spend hours stuck in traffic due to rush-hour. This means less time spent with family andmore tijme bonding with the annoying car horns constantly beeping. If you could switch to another mode of transportation you could cut time commuting in half. The Metro rail avoides all traffic regardless and if more people start thinking like this then the bus might soon be avoidingall traffic too. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two says \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Everyday she walks verdant streets listening to the delightful sound of people chatting and children playing, something she was unable to appretiate with her windows rolled up as she drove around town.\n\nSo many fuel consuming vehicles on the street on a daily basis can't be too great for our enviroment, don't you think? It isnt, all this pollution is causing a nasty smog all over the world, some places more than others. Paris tends to have more smog than Europe but not too long ago, Paris had 147 micrograms or particulate matter per cubic meter compared to 114 in Brussels. This smog makes it difficult for dilivery companies to complete their jobs. This smog isnt good for us either just think about what you are breathing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In several countries, people nowadays turn into the history of building houses they live in. There are many differences in the Sandalee interest in a building, the balding becomes more appealing. Also in time ,ago it was difficult to obtain information. But now it is the digital age, you can easily search on this topic, and you will find countless information.\r\n\r\nIn history, the facility and horses was not appealing, and all the building was similar to each other. The basic reason they didn't have a clear vision of compression between boulders. For example, the famous ancient engineer called Muhammad said\"The devil up of knowledge of a human increasingly because the standard varied, and public become in impress with this\". For this reason, society become more interested in the story of houses.\r\n\r\nUnclear view is not the only reason for this; in the best, The Limited the knowledge was strongly tough to trace the history behind it, as it tricky pace to get information. My mum was loves designating on houses but she couldn't get enough of information However, the Internet now makes society more comfortable, imagine your research from your house about any designs!\r\n\r\nMany countries around the world have a significant search for the history of their houses. Design diversity is the main reason to answer the way they become interesting. To include, the digital area has been favouring by the search.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "wow thats racist said saw movi white men cant jump yes movie could afended lot didnt personaly thought funny enjoyed cuase true statistics say black people jump higher white people look sense humor comes stuff like everyone remembers sometime someone said something offensive choice take heart laugh life much easyer u dont cry every little thing someone said see since humor movie laughing hard almost peed didnt care singled white people funny kill mochinburd also book lot people called offensive see word lot back different time people book werent saying would offended wasnt offending take little things like heart tough time going life somethings let go roll body conclusion yes lot offending stuff said us cant let get much move move better person long run", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is very important, to us and everyone. that is why we must learn to take care of our car and stuff. Our car help's us get around and go to different places. Like , the mall, walmart, resturant, shoe place, and tones of other places. Scientist and researcher's use their basic knowledge to discover the limiting car usage and sometimes predict. But american's love for car's have been cooling . so far , so good automobiles have been an important travel for us now and back then for the people. Dufferent things are converging, which that we suggest are witnessing a long term -term cultural shift. With changes, people find less reason to resume the habit. many studies have been tested now and last year.\n\nIt has been that young people, decresed down than back then. Automobiles are like surbubs. there where middle families from every where tend to make their home. 12 percent of greenhouse gas emission's. In the US, the environmental protection agency (EPA) goes around various countries and check the enviroment for our car's. that's why you have to be very careful and be also caution. Cars has been banned to, for buses.\n\nThe goal is to promote transportation and reduce smog. violator's faced $25.00 fins and it wasn't pretty either. day's without cars is just days without nothing. this world we live is full of many things to learn and new evidence that has to be proven.\n\nSo, you should always thank technology and the impact it has on. for you, and for everyone else. Different things are coming and different pact is forming. all the development since world war II has been centered on the car. that will have to change then and now . so here's all you need to know about limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article titled The Challenge Of Exploring Venus, the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers of its enviorment by, letting the reader know how much we can accomplish by exploring a new planet similar to earth, and by letting the readers know that our travels as humans should not be limited by any dangers.\n\nin the article the author lets the readeer know how much we can accomplish by exploring a new planet similar to earth by first, explaining that we can discover things that we havent discovered before. In the article it states. \"NASA is workinf on other approaches to study Venus For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface.\" By reading this sentence from the article you can see that scientist are trying to create an object strong enough to resist Venus's enviorment. By doing this you can discover new life or objects that we do not have on Earth that might help.\n\nAnother way the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers is by\n\nletting the readers know that our travels as humans should not be limited by any dangers. The author talks about how us as humans should overcome our fears and challenegs to reach new discoverys. In the article it states. \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" aftere reading this sentence you can conclud that the author wants the readed to expand his mind beyond the horizan meaning, we as humans need to explore more of of where we live and not let our fears get the best of us.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers of its enviorment by, letting the reader know how much we can accomplish by exploring a new planet similar to earth, and by letting the readers know that our travels as humans should not be limited by any dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that this technology would be good thing because, most kids don't share their emotion. If a computer can read how they are feeling, and can help them, it would be amazing. It would also be a little odd, but in the end I think it would be very positive.\n\nComputers already can do a lot of things, such as playing games and looking up stuff on the internet. The text states \"Dr. Huang and his colleage are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\". If computers can now read human emotion, this will be the next level in technology.\n\nComputers are very good at being accurate, like solving a math problem, and doing what they are programed to do. The text states \"...the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles\". This shows that the software will be very accurate, and very smart. This software and hardware will help so many kids.\n\nMost human communication is nonverbal, so if we could have a computer that would read our emotions. That would be good for kids that are sad and dont want to talk about thier problems. The computer would help them to be happy. The text states \"So the cumputers need to understand that, too.\" This shows that the computers would understand that it is communicating nonverbaly.\n\nIn conclution, I am for this technology. It would help kids get through their day, and help them become happy. They would also feel like they have a friend, that understands them. This will be the next big level in technology. Even though, it might be a little weird.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cooperation is a crucial social skill that children must develop early on. I wholeheartedly support the idea that school team sports are one of the best ways to instil this quality in children. Participating in team sports nurtures values like teamwork, communication, and empathy, which are essential for healthy social interactions and character development.\r\n\r\nFirst, in team sports, players must collaborate to achieve common goals, which teaches children the importance of working together for success. This foundation of cooperation extends beyond the sports field into other aspects of life. For instance, you cannot be a champion in soccer if you do not have good teamwork and collaboration, because you cannot hit a score alone. \r\n\r\nSecond, Effective communication is vital in team sports for coordinating actions and making quick decisions. Children learn to listen, share ideas, and support their teammates, improving their interpersonal skills in other group settings. Take a volleyball as an example, where each player has a role and they must communicate clearly to score. \r\n\r\nTeam sports expose children to both victory and defeat as a group, fostering empathy, camaraderie, and mutual respect. These values help children manage conflicts empathetically and maintain positive relationships. Most importantly, from experiencing winning or losing, the kid might understand what the process is. So they did not take everything for granted. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, school team sports offer an excellent platform for teaching children cooperation, nurturing teamwork, communication, and empathy. These skills are vital for their social development and will benefit them in various aspects of life. Embracing team sports as an educational tool can foster cooperative and socially responsible individuals, contributing to a harmonious society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Automobiles, people relay on them. without cars alot of people are lost. they are too lazy to walk or ride a bike anywhere. But, cars arent that great they are actually causeing alot of damage. the pollution that is given off by cars is ridculous. most people dont relize the damage they are doing let alone the affect cars have on your life.\n\nFrist off, cars are responible for 12 percent of greenhouse house emissions in europe. In some car-intensive areas in the United states the greenhouse emissions are about 50 percent from cars! thats alot people are causeing without really knowing if we were to get the word out maybe we could change it and make the world cleaner.\n\nSecondly, the united states environmental agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities. they want to make cities and towns more compact and close together. Because in the suburbs cars play such a huge role. these places arent very compact, so people cant just walk everywhere that would take all day. but on the upside walking everywhere is good excerise so while your getting rid of pollution, your also lossing the obesity rate in the united states.\n\nthen, in Paris they have banned cars due to smog. Anyone who drove would be fined 22 euros (31 dollars). congestion in the captial france was down almost 60 percent. after a little bit of time enough smog had cleared so they could rescind the ban.\n\nafter, in Bogota, Colombia they started a car free day were everyone took buses, biked, hiked, walked or any means of transportaion except cars to get to work. this reduces smog in that area. all of this walking and so forth also helps people relive stress. which wil drop the crime rates.\n\nLastly, in the untied states gas emissions are quite high. but, are believed to go down beacuase in a recent study , fewer people each year are buying cars or getting liscence. they say if this pattern contuines and they think it will cars will stop coming around.\n\nIn conculsion,people relay on them, without cars alot of people are lost. but, in due time all these things will change so it will all be okay. the smag will go away . and the earth will be clean.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author might concluded story paragraph show Saeng isnt stop trying shes work harder As sees Geese adapting chooses try make wew home work After disapear picks says shes try By commiting try things adapt changes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir PERSON Home The Blueprints Our Lives Narciso Rodriguez creates mood readers The mood feeling created story mainly love There many things said memoir express mood love For example paragraph two author talks simple apartment parents lived great place He thankful parents loves The paragraph says unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful people grateful simple things like cooking Narciso loves parents much extremely happy even little things Instead calling Sergio Edelmira neighbors lived us called surrogate grandparents This shows loved Narciso Paragraph says Countless extended family members came went often someone staying us temporarily This expresses mood love neighbors called family Also Narciso s parents allowed live love cared deeply In paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Narciso sees parents lives amazing thing loves much When memoir read mood love expressed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I think computers good thing following three reasons First help people learn looking information different places Second help people talk friends family using Lastly help people become less stressed playing computers games Learning important computers re able learn faster Computers help learn faraway places like It much easier learn computer go library check book If re working project needed last minute information could go computer search re topic Learning computer much convenvent going Another reason computers good talk friends family far away using something called allows someone talk another person using computer These people could live block halfway accrose world My cousin living spain semester college I ve skped many times The cool thing acctually see person re talking computer screen great way keep touch family friends faraway My last reason computers help lower stress level playing games Computer games alot fun play They games range word beauty barn Computer games great way lower stress instead piking self much work ll calming selfdown computer games They also gave educational games like Which country This game teaches geoagrahy fun Computers great thing They help learn faraway places talk people live faraway play fun computer games Computers always going used never put waste Theres always something go computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely debated whether schools should solely focus on communicating formal education or also take responsibility for teaching good actions to children. In my view, I totally agree that schools should play a significant role in teaching good behaviour to offspring, in addition to providing formal education.\n\nFirstly, educational institutions are a child's first formal environment outside the home. They provide an opportunity for children to interact with others, learn social skills, and develop healthy relationships. Besides, institutions should teach them about appropriate behaviour in different contexts, such as respecting their friends, showing empathy, and resolving conflicts peacefully. As a result, these lessons benefit the children's social and emotional well-being and help create a positive and productive learning environment. For example, a school may have a lesson on showing respect for peers, where students are taught the importance of using polite language and listening to peers.\n\nSecondly, schools are uniquely positioned to identify behavioural problems in offspring and provide timely solutions. They may struggle with emotional and behavioural issues, which can affect their academic performance and social relationships. In school terms, they can play an important role in identifying suchlike issues and providing appropriate support, such as consultant and therapy which can help offspring overcome their problems and develop good actions, ultimately benefiting their academic and personal growth. \n\nIn conclusion, while it is irrefutable that academic knowledge is a factor that has a decisive role to play in educational conditions, I would contend that it is imperative that good behavioural training aspects be taken into consideration equally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders empire State building faced alot obstacles One problem landed getting area people get make platform bigger also When dirigibles landed needed fuel would couple hours stopped", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, technology has taken place of many jobs for humans. In the next coming few years robots almost will take a charge of the population's Jobs. Robots always reduce the workload of workers whereas in certain areas it might be not possible to completely rely on them. There are some pros and cons of working with robots.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, robots are mainly used in the automobile industry, Robots are useful in stereotypical jobs when there is less requirement for the human interruption. It is a time-saving machine and works with accuracy because they work on repetitive tasks and they are programmed for that so that they work effectively and efficiently. In addition, It makes humans free and makes them available to do some extra important tasks where human involvement must be required. In ,fact after the robotic machines nation is always trying to upgrade them so they increase their area of work and capability. In Germany, they are doing research and development on making a robot that helps Doctors in the operating room.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Sometimes relying on robots might be harmful. the crowd are going to be more and more dependent on robots, and as a ,result it increases unemployment. In society people buy robots for their office or factory use this will reduce the effort of labours and take jobs and it will directly impact our society and employment. For example, Nowadays in the service sectors like the hotel industry purchase robots for serving food, so it will take job waiters\r\n\r\nIn the Conclusion, robots are useful for us but up to a certain limit beyond, there are always required human and them thinking capabilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, state senator I think changing elections by popular vote for the president of the United States would be better. Each candidate had his or her group of electors. Mostly the political party like Democratic and Republican. he Electoral college is the established Constitution as a compromise between electionof the presdident by vote in congress. Popular votes for the election of the president is more meaningful then having 538 electors and 270 electoral votes. I think the electoral college doesn't work.\n\nIn the electoral college system,voters just vote for the president, but along with that your voting for more electors in their political party. This is a very big deal for the people voting in elections. They have no control of whom their electors votr for. The electoral college is also unfair to the canidates because the winner-take-all system in each state. The best arguments in favor is the popular vote, but some canidates still lose from the presidency.\n\nLooking at the breakdown of the number of electoral votes given to each state-California has the most votes. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. or instance, as Romney was in the South he had no campaign heavily in those states. He gained no electoral votes. In toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-to really take notice inthe competing canidates. Those voters sre the ones to decide the election. Run-Off elections should be avoided, it would greatly complicate the presidential election process.\n\nMy advice to you;as the state senator is to not keep the Electoral College. The election of the populae vote would be more precised. It's maybe 1% unfair because in states like california they have like 55,000 republicans voting for 1 canidate. And if there's a tie in the electoral vote, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about whether youngsters should straightly get a job after leaving school or go to university or college to continue learning. Both two groups have their own reasons, but personally, I am inclined toward the latter opinion. \n\nThere are a number of reasons why some believe that the young had better search for jobs right after school. Firstly, in today’s world, there is a large number of students who choose the wrong majors for studying, leading to wasting their time and a lot of money. Secondly, in some conception, going to work early is an opportunity for the young to experience reality sooner. For example, that young people get a job at the age of 18 means they likely have a chance to be successful earlier than their friends who participate in higher education. \n\nOn the other hand, I would argue that it is much more beneficial for youngsters to continue their learning journey at universities or colleges. The first reason is that if we have a chance to study in a professional educational institution, we will acquire not only essential knowledge about our field but also priceless lessons and experiences from our lecturers. This is so amazing because this can help the young to save a huge amount of time figuring it out themselves and make their career paths more secure. In addition, universities or colleges are extremely good environments for young people to meet and get closer to peers and professors, which translates to some soft skills development such as communication, presentation, and teamwork skills, for instance. These are all vital factors contributing to a successful career. \n\nIn conclusion, although it might seem sensible for the young to join the labour market early, I strongly stick to my opinion that youngsters should go to universities or colleges for a better educational background.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A section of public believes that gallery should be used for entertaining purposes. However, others argue that depository is better if it is used for educational purposes. Both the arguments need a proper scrutiny before forming an opinion and I would like to explicate in the paragraphs to come.\r\n\r\nThe advocates of first view deem that museums are a good way to entertain people. Past portraits and drawings are a source of attraction which gather a lot of people from every corner of the world. Public love to visit these old buildings to spend some recreational period. Moreover, the visual graphics add more taste in the entertainment which mostly people prefer to watch as they visualize a lot of information in a less span of time. University of Britain, for example, states that people get attracted to those places twice where visual and audio for the place runs together instead of just information about the subject has provided.\r\n\r\nOther people argue that museums are proved beneficial if they are used for educational purposes. Museums are helpful in broaden the horizon of the person. Due to the upgrading of the museums by installing latest technologies in them, most of the schools organize trips to the museums in order tocollect infomation about the past, a number of vistors come to visit these buildings to complete projects and know about other cultures and past activities. Considering that, museums play significant roles in connecting different localities by educating more and more people.\r\n\r\nIn the end, both views have their own strong points and one argument cannot overpower the another one. Visual graphics are imperative in entertaining folks and provide relaxation to their minds , whereas information revealing in those videos helps in gaining knowledge about the past incidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many factors that can influence whether society in a particular city chooses to use cars or bikes as their primary mode of shipment. Some of these factors include the availability and quality of public transport, the layout and design of the city, the climate and topography of the area, and cultural and societal factors. In my opinion, it is equal between two choices, which is better than depending on your personal circumstances and priorities. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are several reasons why people might choose to use a car instead of a bike for transportation. Firstly, using a car is convenient. It is obvious that a auto is simply more convenient than a bicycle. It can be faster and easier to get from one place to another in a car, especially if you have a long distance to travel or if you need to transport heavy items. Then, in some cases, people may feel safer travelling in an auto than on a bike, especially if they are concerned about traffic or crime. Finally, cars tend to be more comfortable than bicycles, especially for longer trips. They offer a smooth ride and provide protection from the elements.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some reasons why people might choose to use a bike instead of an auto for transportation. First of all, bicycling has a much smaller environmental impact than driving a car. Bicycling does not emit greenhouse gases or other air pollutants, whereas driving a car does. In second place, bicycling can be a great way to get exercise and improve your physical health. It can also help reduce stress and improve mental health. Lastly, in general, owning and maintaining a bicycle is less expensive than owning and maintaining a car. This can be especially appealing if you do not need to use a car for your transport needs.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the reasons why some cities see more car usage while others see more biking can be complex and multifaceted. It is often the result of a combination of various factors. The decision of whether to use a car or a bicycle will depend on your personal circumstances and priorities. If you are able to bike for your transportation needs, it can be a great way to save money, improve your health, and reduce your environmental impact. However, if you need to use a car for your transport needs, there are ways to reduce the environmental impact of driving, such as by choosing a fuel-efficient vehicle or carpooling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneers,in this experimental new district the streets are completely car-free. People feel tense when they drive so they feel better this way, without cars. They are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars. Some of the advantages of this is that the most percent of accidents in the world are accidents of cars, with this is going to be less accidents. They are being adopted around the world in attemps to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation with less space for parking. With the car reduce we are protecting our environment. Others advantages are about health the cars are afecting the air, with cars out of street we are going to have a clean environment.\n\nWith this we are helping to clean the air of global city. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Delivery companies complained of lost revenue, while exceptions were made for plug-in cars,hybrids,and cars carrying three or more passengers. Public transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday.\n\nIn a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to working during a car-free day, leaving the streets of this city eerily devoid of traffic jams. This is a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution .Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nIn United States studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The United States, with its broad expanses and suburban ideals, had long been one of the world's prime car cultures. It is the birthplace of the Model T; the home of Detroit;the place where Wilson Pickett inmortalized 'Mustang Slly'.But American's love affair with its vehicles seemss to be cooling. When adjusted for population growth,the number of miles in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis by Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives,an investment researchcompany. As April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995. Part of the explanation certainly lies in the recession, because cash-strapped Americans could not afford new cars, and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway. But by many measures the decrease in driving preceded the downturn and appears to be persisting now that recovery is under way. The next few years will be telling. If the pattern persists- and many sociologist believe it will-it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants. But it could have negative implications for the car industry. Indeed, companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves 'mobility' companies with a broader product range beyond the personal vehicle.\n\nA sociology professor cites various factors, the Internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends. The renewal of center cities has made the suburbs less appealing and has drawn empty nesters back in. Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps facilited more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting work.\n\nWith all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit. The childrens to 19 and 21 have not bothered to get a driver's license, even though they both live in places where one could come in handy. They are interested, but it's not a priority. They organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends. This say that people enjoy more the public buses or walk or ride in a bike because they go with friends thay talk they spend they time better than a car, that's other advantage. A study last year found that young people who drive have decrease 23 percent between 2001and 2009. Commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety. Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill to be appreved this year, Mr. Goldberg said. In previous bills,80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport. There are so many advantages about living without a car we just have to help the world be a better place for everybody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke wanted to go because\n\nhe's been kind of stuck in his little town, and also because he's been working alot. But he knows if he goes on the boat he's going to have to do his part to. And it's not going to be easy. But he really wants to go because he wants to help people, who are probably dying or cant take care of their children or maybe there just starving to death and its really hard to find food sence the war is still going on.\n\nAlso there are some remarcable atractions in lots of countries he went to. Like the one gondola ride in Venice, Italy. A city with streets made of water. And he got to meet alot of new people. and got to take care of animals on the boat.\n\nI cant amagine how hard that would be sailing over seas and not knowing what your about to end up in. This story kind of changed my life. It showed me if you do hard work and yet you dont get somthing remarcable, it doesnt matter it matters how many people you might of saved or feed. And you should charrish that for the rest of your life. I know I would.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is thought by some that a university education is a stepping stone to building up a lucrative employment status in life, while other groups believe that getting a job directly after school discipline is the better option . Although tertiary studies can reinforce the future race development of an individual .In my opinion , I affirm that interested students must be promoted to start working straight away after acquiring their basic education.Let us discuss this in detail in the subsequent paragraphs.\n\nTo begin with, let us shed light on the argument that higher study is crucial for a better future. First and foremost, most professionals are highly qualified. In addition, the doctors, engineers or whoever decorating the higher positions in society are well qualified with graduation and post-graduation certificates that made them lead successful and satisfactory careers in their lives. For example, in India, the staff members of the schools are categorised as principals, teachers, administrators and other lower-grade positions based on their academic qualifications which include the level of their degrees that helped them to create a successful pathway.\n\nOn the other hand, there are certain points to support the decision to work without university qualifications. Primarily, personal skills are the building blocks of a successful staff member in his organisation. Moreover, leadership qualities, time management, emotional intelligence and collaboration and cooperation among a team play a crucial role in the achievements of a staff member. For instance, the success of the Microsoft company is the patience and leadership qualities of Bill Gates rather than his tertiary qualifications.\n\nIn conclusion, the overall development of a successful course is the subtotal of educational certificates and the innate characteristics of an individual. In my point of view, the factors behind a rewarding career are decided by the personal interest of a person whether he or she is affiliated with studies or would like to cultivate their personal skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story author says The sun beginning beat trying keep balance dehydrated state This gives idea heat getting steadily depleting water supply At ore point almost gives self despair dies dehydration It seems never reach good continue suffer grueling heat I could almost feel sweat heat cyclist feeling Also I could almost feel lump throat says with luck Id hit bump lodge pebble throat The heat definitely effects mans cycling bad way He exhausted could go without water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"There is an amazing program I joined called the 'Seagoing Cowboys'. It is amazing.\" I told a group of people outside a restaurant. \"Well, you can't convince us to join if you don't give us reasons.\" said a man wearing blue overalls and a plaid shirt. To me, he looked a lot like a farmer. He looked just like a person the 'Seagoing Cowboys' were looking for. \"Let's see. Well, first of all, sir, if I may ask, are you a farmer?\" I asked the man wearing the overalls. \"I sure am.\" he replied. \"Do you enjoy taking care of horses, young cows, and mules?\" I questioned him. \"Of course I do. Why?\" he asked. \"The reason is, the 'Seagoing Cowboys' are a group of people who go to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. \"Interesting,\" he said \"Tell me more. \"Other than helping people, I had the honor of seeing Europe and China. I also got to take a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, which is a city with streets of water.\" I added. \"I always wanted to see Europe.\" the overalls man said. \"Well then, if you want to take care of animals and visit other places in the world, you should join the 'Seagoing Cowboys!\" I exclaimed. \"I think I will!\" the overalls man said. \"How do I sign up?\" he asked. I gestured towards the sign up booth. \"Right over there\" I replied. As he walked to the booth I smiled with happiness. \"Another job well done Luke.\" I whispered to myself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie features path greatlly affected cyclist One way park cyclist came across big snake covered road greatly frightened biker Also roads long bumpy windy The road werent comfortable riding In story Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie features path Yosemite National Park greatlly affected cyclist One way park cyclist came across big snake covered road greatly frightened biker Also roads long bumpy windy The road werent comfortable riding There nothing insight cyclist see The cyclist much energy hope The author states gaining elevation loosing hope Last weather hot dry tired cyclist He water weather energy hope help journey Yosemite National Park", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that from Luke's point of view it looks like a great experience and it would be an opportunity of a lifetime to be a Seagoing Cowboy. By being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to travel and see many amazing places and meet so many types of people. Also if you like animals you are in luck because you get to take care of them while your on the boat sailing across the sea. Another thing you might get to do is have your birthday some awesome like Luke did in Greece. In the following pharagraph I am going to be telling you some things about being a Seagoing Cowboy like what it's like to take care of the cattle, some amazing places that you might visit ,and how you must be careful while board the ship.\n\nBy being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to do so many things and experience them. One huge thing that you would have to be willing to do is take care of all of the animals on the ship sailing with you like young cows, horses, and mules. Like Luke the animals on the ship would keep you busy, you would have to feed them and give them water at least three times a day, pull bales of hay and bags of oats out from lower holds of the ship, and clean out the stalls. Also you would get to go to many amazing places around the world like Luke did. You might get to go to places like Europe and China and see Acropolis in Greece, and maybe take a gondola ride in Venice, and see Italy the city with streets of water. You would also have to be careful while board the ship. One night Luke slipped down some stairs and almost went over board, and because of this he cracked a couple of ribs and had to take a break off the job. It would be quite an adventure to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nNow that I have told you some thrilling things about be a Seagoing Cowboy what do you think? I think it would be so much fun to sail acrossed the world while taking care of animals and going to all kinds of places. It would be so exciting, but it would also make me nervous because when Luke Bomberger was a Seagoing cowboy he almost went over board. I think that by being a Seagoing Cowboy it would open up the world to you and how you thought of the world just like it did to Luke Bomberger who was an amzing Seagoing Cowboy. So know that I told you what I think it would be like from Luke's point of veiw I hope that I encourage you to want to being a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Almost everyone owns a car because people are traveling constantly to get from point A to point B. No matter who it may be, that person at some point in their lives needs some way to get around. Everyday people need to either go to the store, pick up their kids, go to work, go to school, you name it. That doesn't mean that owning a car is a necessity, all around the world many people are trying to cut down and limit their car usage by having a whole lot of other options. There are buses, people can car pool, walk, skate, bike, and many more. People are coming to the conclusion that if we, as a whole, decide to start cutting down on our usage of cars it can benefit the way we live.\n\nLots of people actually don't mind not having a car just yet. Most teenagers do want to get their license and a car but there's so much other things they need to focus on. It really is not a priority for them because they have school, work, plus if they do need to get somewhere they can always take the bus and get a ride from a friend (Source 4). In Germany, there is a city by the name of Vauban, that is known to be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life (Source 1). Vauban's goal and idea, which is to cut down on cars for a better living, has made it'a way around the world, so that other states and countries can aspire to do the same and little by little we could have a world that is not so dependent on cars. The idea of using cars, for some, it causes them stress and they're always tense, not using a car makes them happier, as stated by Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two (Source 1). The stress aspect of this could be due to the fact that in the most recent years, the percentage of car crashes and accidents have gone up. Many people abhor the idea of using cars because they have been in an terible accident themselves or someone close to them. Also, it can even just be all the traffic jams that occur during rush hour, which makes people late and accidents do happen. For example in Bogota, Colombia, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to their designated location, to leave the streets due to traffic jams (Source 3). Since they knew that lots of their citizens were deciding not to use cars they started making uneven, pitted sidewalks into nice, smooth, replaced ones for them (Source 3).\n\nAnother reason why people want to limit their usage on cars is because of all the pollution cars create. Passenger cars are rsponsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States (Source 1). Not many people think about the effects of air pollution like smog, but it is a big deal. Since people don't think about it often, there is no way for the majority of us to try and find a solution to put into action to stop it or help it go down. In Paris, there was a partial driving ban to clear the air around the city (Source 2). Paris' partial ban was their idea to try and make their city a better place. With the ban being enforced and put into play there were about 4,000 drivers fined (Source 2). It turns out that since the driving ban was made the congestion, car traffic, had gone down 60 percent in the capital of France, just after five days of less smog pollution and Paris is typically known to have more smog than any other European capitals (Source 2). This goes to show, that slowly people are actually becoming aware of what's going on and they actually care enought to try and make things better.\n\nAll in all, there are many ways to try and cut down on our car usage for the better. It can be anything from not buying as many cars, to deciding to not use cars at all and deciding to walk, skate, and bike, etc. Not only will limiting our car usage as a whole stop traffic jams, car accidents, air pollution, and more, it will help to benefit our lives for the better whether or not people want to believe it. If things keep going from here, and more and more decide that less car usage is better than over a time span of let's say 20-30 years, there could be a lot less dangerous things occuring in our lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Two biggest setting story desert rolling hills This would effect rider becaus dehydration would experience Being desert would make obviously hot sweat alot hills would make tough body put extrat strain get So together would hard bike ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Face in Mars is Natural Landform\n\nIs the Face on Mars created by an alien? The answer is no, in this paragraph I'm writing some reasons that prove that the face wasn't made by an alien. One of the reasons is that they took a picture 2 sharper. Another reason is that scientist saw a Martian mesa common in mars. And the last reason that I think it's a natural landform is that in 2001 picture 3 show that it was only a mesa.\n\nFirst in 1998 a Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia, or mars, for the first time. A picture was taken and it was ten times sharper. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting to see when the image first appeard on a JPL website. The picture showed that the face was just a natural landform.\n\nNevertheless, a new high-resolution image and a 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft revealed that the Face on Mars was really a mesa. The scientist thought of it as normal because the mesas are common in mars.\n\nAnd lastly, another picture was taken in 2001 an better image with more pixels. The camera had cought the camera's absolute maximum resolution. In paragraph 10 the author states that the picture taken in 2001 the image had 1.56 meters per pixel compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\n\nThat is why I think that the mesa, or the Face on Mars, is just a natural landform. And that it wasn't created by aliens. That is why I think its just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The surface of Mars is a great mystery to human kind, but the Face on Mars is just a coincidental human face resembling landform. The Face may resemble a human face, but there are also many other things that humans think are faces. One of these landforms that may look like a face is the face on the moon and even clouds can resemble faces. Therefore I believe that the Face of Mars is just a natural landform.\n\nAlthough it may appear as a face to many people created by aliens, there has been no scientific proof that aliens exist. It's obvious that the Face on Mars is a peninsula or hill landform that may happen to look like a human face. If there was a peninsula or hill landform on Earth that happened to appear as a face, would everyone jump to the assumption of aliens? Then again there is no scientific evidence that aliens don't exist, but aliens are just made up science fiction creatures that people have come to believe are real.\n\nTherefore the Face on Mars is just a peninsula or hill landform that coincidentally happens to appear as a human face. Just because it happens to look like a humans face and its in outer space people jump to the assumption that aliens are the reason behind the Face on Mars. The entire idea of aliens is just a joke humans made up to scare other humans. In conclusion, that is why I believe the Face on Mars is just a natural landform that happens to resemble a human face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient school lot time When I understanding something teachers someone else busy I wait however long I need alone helping someone else In classes I patient time In art class making box clay I behind little I finish project due week I started working box I much I could remeber art teachers demonstration That start So I needed help I asked friend done would help get caught said yes I getting help When someone else asked help So helped I wailed took whole hour I wailed patient At end hour still waent done said would help next days I said alright I said Id see next day The next day art helped took break worked thing I tried best waited patiently help almost done present I still waiting I asked someone else finished project Finally finished helped rest boy At end hour I finished Then started new project next day simple Thats time its longest time I patient one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wonder if there was life on Mars. NASA made a spacecraft called the Viking 1. While the spacecraft was snapping photos of possible landing sities for Viking 2, it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region called Cydonia. On the planet Mars, I think it was just a natural landform, not an alien artifact.\n\nScientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia. But this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. NASA unveiled the image as a huge rock formation, which resembles a human head. Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact. Photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor\n\narrived at the Red Planet in 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. On April 8, 2001- Mars Global Surveyor took extraordinary photos of the face.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. Those landforms are common around the American West. 'It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,'' said by a scientists.\n\nIn conclusion, On the Planet Mars, I think it was just a natural landform, not an alien artifact. Scientists figured out it was just another Martian messa, but had unusual shadows. NASA unveiled the image as a huge rock formation, which resembles a human head. The face was really a Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. In my opinion I think alien artifacts does not exist and the face\n\nwas just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would you think if a computer could read your emotions? The Facial Action Coding System is supposed to be on your computer and read your emotions. Professors at the University of Amsterdam and the University of Illinois are trying to work with the system to help their students. If you would use this system in a classroom it would be effective because it could recognize when you have mixed feeling about something or someone, when you are confused about something in class, and when you have empathy for someone else.\n\nThe system could help in class when someone has mixed emotions about someone or something. The article stated,\"'even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression.'\" In class, kids show different emotions all the time. The system would help when they were confused about a subject.\n\nIf a student is confused about a subject, then they won't be productive in class. The article also stated that \"'the facial expressions for each emotion are universal.'\" Every human has several different emotions, but one emotion could represent more than one. The students could have mixed emotions about it. The system could help figure out how the student is feeling about something. The system not only helps with the mixed emotions aspect, but also the part where you don't quite understand something.\n\nStudents in classes will get confused or bored while in class. This use of technology will be valuable by realizing it and wanting to help. Dr. Huang predicted that \"'a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.'\"This system on the computer could help teachers and students realize when you aren't quite understanding a topic. The computer could then have a modified version of the lesson for the student to help get them to understand. Dr. Huang said,\"' Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" The computer could help fill in as a teacher to help the confused student. If the student is taking a class online, then the computer could realize the emotion of the student and help out. This use of technology is not only going to be valuable for when the student doesn't understand something, but also when a person shows empathy.\n\nMost people show empathy towards one another, and this technology could help show when someone is showing empathy. The article stated that \" you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" When your friend shows how they feel, you can be effected by it too. The system could help realize if you are not your usual self because you may have empathy for someone else. your emotions could get you distacted from your school work, and then you might struggle in that class. The article aslo stated that \" faces don't lie: these muslce clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" The computer will be able to tell when you have a false emotion on your face. If you aren't being honest with your emotions, then the emotions the computer realizes could effect how you work in class.\n\nHaving a system to help read when you have mixed emotions, are confused, or have empathy is why the Facial Action Coding System can help students in the classroom. The way student feel and act can effect the way students do in their school work. The Facial Action Coding System would be valuable for students in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face\n\nHave you ever heard of a planet having a face? Neither have I. Even though there seems to be eyes, a nose, and a mouth, on a planet, does not mean that this sighting can't be a natural landform, and it also doesn't prove that there is life in space.That is why \"The Face\", is just a natural landform.\n\n\"The Face\", is just a natural landform because they can't prove that aliens are real. People think that they have seen UFO'S in the sky, but how can they prove that it was not just a shooting star? They can not prove it. Not even the smartest scientist or astronaut can prove that UFO'S are real, because they have no physical evidence, Just like Aliens. Out side of Earth is a completely different system. there is very little ways for aliens and life forms to live there. Yet again, they only have weird sightings like \"The Face\" to explain their reasoning for life in outer space and on other planets.\n\nThere is not life in outerspace, or on any planet, even though, the other side would bring up UFO'S,\n\nand bring movies like \"E.T\" to state their proposition, how do we know that these \"UFO'S\" are not just shooting stars or helicoptors, and movies like \"E.T\" are fiction, even though they seem so real and so believable, it is quite obvious that its just not possible. NASA has never had any sighting or any true proof that life does exist outside of our world, and even when they get the slightest and silliest ideas that there is life, they get the worlds hopes up and then when people ask for evidence, they say something like \"there is currently no physical evidence, however research says \"...\". \" You get the picture. it just cant be proved, and most likely wont ever be able to be proved.\n\nfinally, \"The Face\", people are obsessed with, is really just a landform, a very cool landform indeed. There were no aliens responsible for this landform, or any other landform. it was most likely, just created by the draft, or by the seasons of the planets, maybe even created by the gases that are in outerspace. That is why the face on the planet is just a natural landform and in no way related to other life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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