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"content": "At present, there are the call of action for our social movement, and one of them is related to sexual equity. Many countries in Europe or Asia supported the legal marriage in LGBTQs, howere in some religious culture, the topic are very sensitive to be discussion and in worsely the LGBTQs were banned.\nLove and being in the relationships depend on people' s mutual feeling. There is no boundaries of love, even they have same gender or different races, or even speak the different languages. Therefore, if they decided to settle down and live the rest of their lives together, the social determinants will be no longer to influence the relationship.\nIt is acceptable for the caring and understanding to maintain their marriage lives. As long as they could stay together and share thick or thin time together. The couple could have the good qualities of lives, some developed countries supported and launched legal LGBTQs marriage.\nIn conclusion, I strongly agree with legal LQBTQs marriage, so far they could share the moment together , they could extend their life expectancy and they could build the everlasting love until the last days of their lives. To love is to cherish their moments together.",
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"content": "At present, inventions of applied sciences are hotly debated subject of popular media.It is often argued by some that a huge variety of latest gadgetries are enhancing differences between wealthy and poverty-stricken people over the period of time because of affordability.Meanwhile,others claim that newest technology has narrowed the gap between affluents and impoverished as a result of accessibility.This essay will explore both sides of the argument before reaching a logical opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,the supporters of the idea that technology is extending gap believe that latest equipments and devices are non-affordable for needy.As these are so expensive that poverty-stricken population are unable to purchase and avail such facilities.Take the example of India,where millions of people are spending their lives below the poverty line, whereas,in another part of the country,well off community is enjoying the perks of all latest devices.Thus,technology has increased difference because of costly items.\r\n\r\nWhile,on the other hand,advocates of the view that technology has reduced the space between the well off and poor claim that all newly invented items are easily accessible to all.As, with the expansion of trade between nations, these all gadgets are easily available at all places.For instance,during the economic revolution in Japan in the late 1970s,almost every Japanese was having all latest devices concerning to education which subsequently brought about a revolution in the country.Hence, technology has lessened the space between rich and poor due to accessibility.\r\n\r\nWhereas,I believe that latest inventions in technology have influenced the social life of people in both ways.In order to reduce the gap, prices of items should be reduced and made available for all communities.\r\n\r\nTo sum up,the difference between well off and poor can be decreased by making the items affordable for people as well as providing an ease of access.",
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"content": "Should materials people find offensive removed libraries No I think materials removed libraries A librarie lots different kinds books magazines music movies One reason I think librarie sorts different books everybody nt like read thing Like example kids could love read scary gory books others could like read books sports love stories So maybe kids read sport books could offended gory books would nt fair take librarie kids like read gory books Another reason nt remove magazines books etc nice get read look different things People would get bored librarie books war Kids need learn read different kinds stories Also librarie different kinds magazines kids could learn lot interesting facts You find lot amazing things magazine So four magazines thing kids would nt discover anymore cool facts A librarie place kids like go enjoy peace quiet look read different things So I think started taking specific things librarie I think kids would stop coming librarie A librarie contains awsome infromation kids could learn start taking things many kids come librarie learning new So I say I would keep things librarie I would remove You want people come librarie dont want jeperdize people coming librarie I think start removing things going less less people come eventually maybe librarie get shut buisness So leave everything shelves",
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"content": "The author ends story paragraph show Saeng found hibiscus plant Like plant Saeng going overcome obstacle She try driving test plant overcome The harsh blutal winter months The plant bloom spring show restrency adversity Saeng also overcome adversity faced failed driving test realizing much missed homeland Saeng sense bloom spring The winter representing despise homesickness present living happly taking test overThe hibiscus reminds The story ends paragraph show Winter Hibiscus taught something overcoming obstacles",
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"content": "I am against the development of these \"driverless cars.\" I am against these driverless cars because they cost alot of money and will only create more political issues in our counrty. There is also way more important problems to try and fix. These cars indeed are one of the least important. Especially when time is such a scarce thing and building these cars would take up so much of our time.\n\nBuilding these cars would cost alot of money. This article states that since the late 1950s, there has been companies that have tried to make this world a better place with driverless cars. Clearly its been a long time since the late 1950s and we have still not made it possible. The smart- rode systems these companies created worked well but this article states it was way too expensive. If back then the materials needed to make these cars were very expensive, don't you think our advanced technology now will be way more expensive? There are lots of things required for this car to work and with every little mistake, justice must be served.\n\nLaws are not an easy thing in our world. We have a great law system, but yet after years and years it is not perfect. This article states that new laws will be needed in order to cover liablility in the case of an accident. Why should we work on making new laws instead of prefecting our laws now? We already have a great focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. We can make it better but we must not lose our focus. Focus is such an important thing when improvments need to be done.\n\nYes, we have had great innovations in our generation. Our technology has advanced by alot. It does make it possible for there to be cars that actually are driveless. But we must also think of the more importants things in life not just cars. We need to make out government better. We need better ways to stay healthy. We did need great transportation, the safer the better, but we need to work on more important things right now. Time is such a scarce thing for a human and we should spend it on things that actually matter.\n\nI am against these driverless cars because they cost alot of money and will only create more political issues in our country. There is also way more important problems to try and fix. Maybe one day we will realize how people went to jail for something they didnt do and all we did was care about a more entertaining way to get us from one place to another. This can work, but we all have to be on the same side first.",
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"content": "Knowing how people feels can be very helpful. Knowing what to do or what to say, comes from that the fact that, we know who i in the bad mood or even in a good mood. The technology might be advance today, but in today's world, it can't tell us, as humans, how we truly feel. Technology isn't as good as it seems.\n\n\"In fact, we humans perform this impressive 'calculation' every day\" (Par. 5) We, as humans, know that we can do anything we wish upon to do, if we tried hard enough. We, as the people, have different emotions when it comes to similar problems. We, sometimes, don't know exactly what to do when it comes down to some problems that is being thrown at us.\n\nIn some useful ways, technology may be helpful, but in other cases, it's really not at all. I do agree, that, technology can be helpful in reserached things, but when it comes down to just verify what humans think, know, etc., it's not very resourceful. I'm against techonology telling us how we feel, because it could be false. Life should be known to be unique and different, not the same and being turn out to be something we not.",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College should be kept despite it's lack of giving people a chance to speak up. Although, the Electoral College is a \"non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner.. it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential canidate you're actually voting for a state of electors.\" Yes this may be true but, have you thought that they created the Electoral College to help citizens live better? What if, someone with no education comes to vote and chooses someone who wants to take away government funds away from school's? Wouldn't that affect us? In other words, you want to ruin school's life by taking away funds and it doesn't really have to be school it can be anything just beacuse, you had no idea who you were voting for? The Electoral College does allow us to vote, but they make sure we aren't choosing someone who can affect the United States drasticly.\n\n\"The Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potiential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, knowing that their vote will have no effect but of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.\"(Source 3) Brings me back to one of my claims, yeah you do want to vote, but what if you don't have no education but you want to vote just for the hell of it? Without the Elecoral College your vote will count, as well as others and the group of senators won't be there to make sure you don't choose whomever and make a horrible decision. Although the Electoral College makes it seem like your vote won't count believe it or not, the Electoral College atually makes the most suitable decison for us, the people. Without the Electoral College, we'd have probably different world.. meaning they fix our choices dumb or not, they come together and they choose what's best for us whether we,the people have an effect on it or not.\n\nDespite the fact, our voice may not be heard as loudly as the state of electors, we still have an impact, and without the Electoral College it may be a drastic impact. The Electoral College should be kept, and not changed into the most popular vote wins. You don't just vote once and hallieluja, there is a process and that's where the Electoral Colleg takes hand and make sure we choose someone mosly suitable. The Electoral College should be kept, it is very helpful despite it's cons...\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\nSCHOOL_NAME",
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"content": "Patience whats first word comes mind hear word Waiting I know thats main word mind Here story I patient Every kid dreads meap testing completely silent Its hard enough quite But its harder next friends girl We meap writing writing wrost But I done I felt really good quiet everyone else Thats story I patient",
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"content": "Being patient easy thing maintain It takes self control order patience Having patience important gon patient maugio wait turn going hire looking impatient person First family I going trip leave I couldnt go sleep I woke I tired I couldnt take nap I nap turn deep sleep Next I finish packing I really tired show I ran hour left When I done packing I started watch tv keep awake I cant go sleep Then cousin diper changed I change I get called said lets go I happy I get go sleep rental van In conclusion I maintain patience really hard really sleepy I tried different things keep awake worked What really make angry I change diper I maintained patience",
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"content": "In short story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho author conclude story special paragraph order mutul Saengs game wanting home also show learning overcome obstacles Saeng wishes way homeland keeps reffiring wants back I mean its like one atat Saeng continues stumble doesnt wish mention home brought tears In addition mentions test makes buyin fake testIts its real one She refuses buy real one reminds driving test sad already The test reffs plant drivers test Saeng also ends vow flower represent hope hibiscus budding I take test The emotions test situations allow stronger This vow end story shows willing strong come end",
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"content": "This story patience Patience needed life Sometimes get frustrated need patience One reason someone something gets mad need patience get trouble For example get mad someone start fight youll get huge trouble Or try something cant need patience break something get trouble Another reason patience working someone teaching someone need patience dont hurt feelings cant something right They might get mad want A third reason patience know someone keeps getting mad keeps humiliating need patience himher Just ignore person dont get trouble If wouldnt patience things could end drasticallyso patience Without patience get trouble lose friend lot things could go wrong Thats need patience",
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"content": "Nowadays, the newspaper has a huge connection to human life. You can easily see people reading the news everywhere. Although there are many advantages that the news brings to our daily lives, there is a part of society that believes the news has no connection to people's lives. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this idea, which will be explained in the next few paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the mission of the news is to bring the latest information to everyone, not exclude any kind of wealth. Because of the improvement and collaboration between traditional\r\n\r\nmagazine and technology, the amount of information that the news brings to our lives are massive. There are many topics that are related to our normal routines such as the price of energy or the latest diseases. Reading newspapers is not only a way to keep yourself updated but also a way to protect your physical health from random factors that are caused by this polluted environment. \r\n\r\nSecondly, magazines or newspapers will be the resources to help you improve your personal aspects. There are many excellent resources for different types of magazines like economic, financial, and health care. For example, the Economist is a newspaper that covers all kinds of topics relating to the economy, and it is updated every day by the top professionals in the field. Therefore, you can learn and expand your knowledge from the newspaper.\r\n\r\nReading newspapers not only keeps you up to date on current events, but it also helps you in your personal jobs.Despite consuming much information may not be good for some people ,however we can't deny the benefits that the news has brought to us. After good consideration, the idea that our life wasn't going along with the news won't be completely true not only in the present time but also in the next few years.",
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"content": "At night time, when you look at the evening star, you're also looking at a planet called Venus. Venus is also known as Earth's \"twin,\" which is a very incredible planet, one that is almost similar to Earth itself. However, we don't know much about the planet itself. For astronomers and scientists, exploring venus had lead to nothing but failure one drone after another. The author from the article explains in great detail on why these group of scientists shouldn't give up but instead should push themselves harder to reach that goal.\n\nVenus is a complicated planet for scientists to explore. \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours,\" (Paragraph 2). With the temperatures being an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit on the planet's surface, the thick layer of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide in its atmosphere, and the surface having a pressure that is 90 times greater than our ocean floors, it's very difficult almost impossible for scientists to even understand the basic's of the planet. The author also explains \"why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" (Paragraph 4). Well, in (Paragraph 4) the author also tells us that \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" After hearing that fact, who wouldn't want to learn more about Venus and, with the advancements of technology and discovring new materials, the goal for exploring Venus may come true one day.\n\nWith the issue of trying to explore Venus means scientists needs to come up with a new approach which in (Paragraph 7) explains perfectly well, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbine have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II. The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" Even with the advancements of technology today, we still need help from technology back then too.\n\nWith our thirst for knowledge and understanding a force we don't understand yet, pushes us to do wonderous things. The author of this article helped show us if we managed to successfully make it to Venus and study the forces within it. We may have a second Earth in our solar system and our journey to the stars will have finally begun.",
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"content": "A time I patient mom broke hip When mom broke hip moved slower grandpa probally asking hour make patient CAPS follow every went wasnt patient I think mother would worse condition mean took almost fifteen minutes walk bedroom Normally Im patient person happened I patient Im glad I patient I patient I My mom proud behavior I actually grew days help needed Being patient good thing look life different now I imagine patienti mean Im glad mum get hurt Im glad consequence problem After big accident hapend I learned everyone needs little bit patience like one example I thought I small away ever patience without mom",
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"content": "The setting affect cyclist many gruding harsh First lack civilization contributes uneasy feeling inability refill water bottle Second heat uphill bottles taking tollon aplists physical mental strength Third water bottle emptying alarming late due third relentless heat In paragraph four die exospodent cyclist reaches first town This place striving spell morning fit traditional definition ghost down came house rusty water pump sped brackish near boiling water support porched cyclist physically mentally",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper opinion computers benifet people help people need gives people entertainment So computers benifet people first reason computer help people need help like instace write paper need look something reseach use computer long main cwayshion look formula So see computer benifts people second resson gives people entertainment myspace twitter And social networks like watch tv listen music websites also So I said computers give entertainmen third resson helps people different contries ca nt go see instans web cam Or home schooled dnt see kids age talk computer So see I say computer So see I say computer benifical cause give entertainment let communicate help people",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph story started Saeng failing test going buying plant comfort confessing mom The plant related memories homeland failed test felt depressed sad She cried show pain bought plant cheer As told mom felt pain mother made favorite food helped plant plant She knew wasnt like old plant thought memories knew couldnt give came right time going try test It relates helps readers understand story little better shows wasnt going quit Her mother understanding goes retake test prepared That relates back story",
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"content": "Yes, the Electoral College Works because in source one it tells the reader the steps you have to take in order to be able to work. For example in paragraph five it states how each candidate running for president has his or her own group of electors. It also states that the electors generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but some state laws vary on how electors are selected and for what there responsibilities are.\n\nIt is a hard process to go through in order to be a candidate and get voted to be president because people have the right to choose who they want and why they want the person to be president. Some reasons why people want the person to be president are because of the things there going to do like make the country better or improve the government while they are in charge for four years. Reasons why they might not want to choose the person as a president could be because of many reasons. Source two states how some voters do not vote for the president but vote for the slate of the electors who in turn have to elect the president.\n\nSource three mainly talks about the five reasons to keep our methods of choosing the president. A good example is how in the catogory certainty of outcome it states that president Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the elctoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes casted for him and Mitt Romney. Most voters that end up in swing states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign as it states in paragraph twenty. But, big states lose virtue by population. For example Obama who won the vote only got twenty nine electoral votes out of the state of Florida. In Wyoming he only got three electoral votes so this means that larger states get payed more attention than the smaller states do.\n\nIn conclusion the Electoral College does work but, it all depends the how many people vote in each state and how many the electors decide to vote.",
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"content": "The Empire State Building faced purfictle placing thousand foot dirigible top Building would worket Because wind wait back would kept dirigible place ment dirigible would swinging back fort gave riesct dirigible poking sharp point corner Empire State Building exploding dirigible New York City putting thousand life dinger The also faced getting micheenery needed mooring mast Another obstacle face getting aprover safety hasits happing hindenburg lakehurst New Jersey",
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"content": "In the article the author talks about how a Facial Action Coding System (FACS) and how it can help students learn inside of the classroom. The author brings in evidence from the people who made it themselves Prof. Thomas Huang in collabroration with Prof. Nicu Sebe. They give many valid reasons as to why this should be brought in to schools and how it can help with the students with their learning and help further their progress. FACS should be used in schools everywhere.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang gave pretty amazing reasons as to why schools should equip FACS, one of those reasons was that FACS can determine if a student is confused or bored, then make the lesson easier and more fun for the student. Many student across the world can have trouble comprehending anything they just learn or are in process of learning, imagine the computer just automatically making it easier for them to learn the lesson without the teacher having to stop and repeat it. This would make many students understand their material and do better on test or quizzes, maybe students would actually even do more of their homework. Aside from just helping students with grades it could help teachers determine the type of mood their students are in that day to know whether or not they are having a good day. Teachers often get mad at students for putting their heads down or not doing their work not knowing that, the student could be feeling sick or just not having the best day.\n\nThis would help teachers to know not to really bother the student unless truely needed to. On the other hand it can also help students with their friendships, students often have trouble when trying to figure out if their friend is okay or not. When a student's friend is not okay they often try to figure out what is wrong with them, commonly asking the questions like: are you mad, sad, happy, etc, usually the friend either tells them, or the student guesses, sometimes they won't ever find out because the friend won't say. This can a lot in friendships because once the student\n\nfinds out they can talk to their friend or a trusted adult depending on the situation. This can help many kids feel like they aren't behind and can give them, a different perspective about school itself.\n\nAll in all this would be an amazing device that can help better students career and brighten the future ahead of them. FACS should be brought into schools to help students progress in their learning and even higher many kids goals for their future. Here and now stands an amazing creation that shouldn't be wasted on small things it should be put to the use of children everywhere.",
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"content": "Lots of people think that there is ancient life or aliens on Mars but there is not. Many different teams captured pictures using high tech camreas. The defenders of the NASA budget also wish there were alien life on Mars.\n\nNASA recently discovered what everyone thinks is a face on Mars. A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all the people to see. the captions says '' the huge rock formation which resembles a human head as formed by shadows giving the illuion of eyes, nose, and mouth. There are still people that don't trust it and say that there is alien life on Mars. MOC took a picture ten times sharper reveling nothing but a natural landform.\n\nThere is no alien monumant on Mars because if there was the defenders of the NASA budget wouldn't wish that there was ancient civilazation of Mars. If there were aliens on Mars NASA's budget would sky rocket. Then NASA would be able to fly to Mars and see for themselves that there was ancient civilazation.\n\nThousands of patcientless web surfers were waiting for the image to appear on the JPL website, reveling nothing but a natural landfrom and no alien monument at all. Malin's team also captured an amazing picture using a camrea that can scan pixels 1.56 meters per pixel compared to 43 meters per pixel in the Viking photo of 1976. The picture that Malin's team took showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are common around the American West. It reminded Garvin most of the Middle Butte in Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nTherefore, there are no aliens on Mars because of all the many teams that have taken pictures have given proof that it is just a natrual landform. the NASA budget squad only wants there to be life on Mars that there is not any so they are going to deal with the same budget.",
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"content": "I think books sould removed people know reading dont like book sould leave There reson people would whant remove book reson alot people like different kinds books If would remove books would alot people mad people mighit really liked book wanted someone else read That book might also family really long time want everyone family enjoy book It would also good remove book remove book get books would cost money get books also waste papper Another reson would good idea get another book replace old one people might like new book place book lose money good So thays I think would opinion removeing book would turn good book store lose alot money got rid good book broght back reallty bad book",
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"content": "Driverless cars are not needed and unneccessary. Driving a motorized vehicle is already dangerous enough. This world does not need the option to rely on, what are supposed to be, \"Driverless Cars\". The number of recks in the world due to reckless drivers is too much and we do not need to have driverless vehicles to make the matter worse. In paragraph 7, it states that as of 2013, \"that none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.\" It also mentions in the same paragraph that the \"driverless cars\" require an alert driver that is ready to take over at any time. What is the point of a driverless car if the driver is always meant to pay attention and rely on themselve when a potential saftey hazard gets in their way. There are always going to be more reckless drivers than careful drivers and that fact could cause a lot of issues. Why should we give reckless drivers the privilage of a somewhat driverless vehicle? Why should we put the safety of others at risk? Not only is the practice of driverless cars illegal in most states but the laws that will come with the new driverless vehicles will not be followed by most. In paragraph 9, it says that laws will be made to ensure safety, but to ensure safety those laws require alert and careful drivers and like mentioned in my previous paragraph, there are simply not enough alert drivers in this world to ensure safety. Manufacturers cannot guaruntee everyone's safety. Just like motorized vehicles today, they apply many safety features to ensure safey, but there are still hundreds of people dying everyday because those safety features were not good enough. Why ensure laws that are going to be broken? Why ensure safety if there is still a possibility that something could go wrong and a person or more than one person could lose their lives. Driversless vehicles are said to be completely driverless by 2020 accourding to paragraph 10 but, is that really true or is it mostly true?",
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"content": "The text is telling the readr that the new technology that is called the (face action coding system). th enformatiom frome the text and according to some new computers softwere that can recognize emotions. The software is the for advanced science at the university of illinois working in collaboration.\n\nthe information that the auther said was that she was\n\n(83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry ). thats good infor matin frome one picture and thay scand the picutre and found that out.\n\nWhat the text did was give me a lot of information and i never know that technolgy do that and it tells peopl waht pople face apretions is so nobody wont be confused.\n\nin the text the process begin when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model of the face of all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles is called an action unit . the computer scan emotions",
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"content": "Numerous characters deem our conventional school program will alter, and students will not be attending in their classroom; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm pupils will be studying school. Besides this, the old educational program will be lasting as usual. I reckon the current model will surely change by 2050s.\r\n\r\nFirstly, from my perspective, I view the revolution has already started. Thanks to cutting edge of technology, now we have more options to continue the lesson and business. For example, all schools, universities, and companies stopped to work because of coronavirus, rendering people to live under quarantine, but still, my school' teachers have been lecturing their lessons using the internet and social channels including Facebook, Google Meet, and Zoom. Hence, this trend will definitely influence the traditional tutor and students interaction.\r\n\r\nSecondly, this brand new teaching approach is more sustainable and effortless than any method had existed before. As arriving at university and coming back to home takes a lot of time, we usually do not attend class when we are ill. However, we can take a course from schools using a mobile phone or computer today, which is simple and has no obstacle. For instance, since I started to acquire knowledge from the internet curriculum; I realized that it took fewer hours than taking a tutorial from the school. Thus, I prefer this new trend and presume its enhancement is inevitable. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from the arguments and examples given, I firmly believe gaining information process will involve in 2050, as adolescents and children are advocating this new internet-based way of informing.",
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"content": "It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals in some countries that people are increasingly want to discover the historical meaning of their houses. There are certain reasons to as why they want to know the tradition of their buildings, and there are some methods which should be taken into consideration in order to figure out it. \r\n\r\n Finding out the history of houses can be a key factor in increasing the value of individuals' properties since some places have crucial histrorical meaning. In other worlds, some individuals' houses might have been built up on the important relics. For example, recent media in Korea has revealed that a man who searched the histroy of his building found loyal families' graves including priceless treasures under his house. As the example clearly illustrates, some people who are lucky can find huge value of their houses through the research. What is more, searching the meaning of houses is important to be sure about safety. because people are concerned about climate change such as floods and earthquakes, the history of houses is essential to find out how these buildings can endure natural disasters. Therefore, it is reasonable to point out the value of searching the history of buildings.\r\n\r\n However, there are certain ways to find out the history of houses. Firstly, using materials such as the Internet and books can be the easiest way to know about buildings since it is easily assessible. People can use the Internet which is the sea of information to search for their houses, and they can borrow local books from local public libraries. Secondly, inhabitants can ask their neighbors who have lived for a long time in a place. They might have experienced, heard a significant number of stories and superstitions. For instance, a man who was a soldier remembered a battle around a house helped a landlord to found war heroes' belongings around the property. As a result, these heroes' heritages can go back to their families. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, there is no doubt to point out that people tend to find the history of their homes due to the value and durability of them with using the Internet and books, and asking their neighbors.",
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"content": "I couldn't imagine a future when no one buys cars, I think it would be weird. Driverless cars forming a public-transport taxi system? To me this wouldn't be a good idea because humans will eventually start to rely on driverless cars too much. People should just keep it how it is because there is certain things a driverless car can't do for you. Even if the car isn't completely driverless it can still be dangerous.\n\nWhat if the car doesn't signal or get the humans attention quick enough and something bad happens? This can also be a huge waste of money seeing as there has to be so many sensors in the car. They can't be cheap, especially if they make a lot of driverless cars. But with all of the sensors and GPS receivers, the cars can mimic the basic driving skills of a human. Driverless cars also make sure the driver keeps a hold of the wheel while the it is driving.\n\nThough the cars rely on humans to take care of driving situations such as navigating through work zones, and around accidents. GM developed vibrating seats to notify the driver if they are about to run into something, and Google cars announce when the driver should prepare themselves to take over, which are both good ideas. It could be kinda awkward knowing that there is a camera watching you the whole time your in the car driving.\n\nWhy would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Maybe someone doesn't feel like driving the whole time and no one esle is in the car that can take over driving. Some good things about these smarter cars are that they use half the fuel today's taxis and offer more flexiblilty than a bus, they have sensors to warn people about certain things, and their sensors can caus the car to apply barakes on individual wheels, and reduce power from the engine. Those examples aloow far better response and control than a human could manage alone.\n\nBMW announced the developement of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" Which can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, and notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. One option under consideration is flashing lights on the windshield. Bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays is actually a safety feature. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving 90 percent of the time. So people still have to be prepared for the other 10 percent.",
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"content": "Environmental issues are escalating at an alarming rate ,especially pollution; some groups of people opine to solve this problem by increasing the fuel pricing for four-wheelers. Although this method would be proven effective, there are other alternatives that can be considered.\r\n\r\nTo begin, an increment in the cost of fuel can help to reduce atmospheric problems because it would become difficult for folks to spare money for fuel from their earnings. Most of the people who belong to lower to middle-class families would be unable to fill up their vehicle's tank to commute, hence reductions in the number of automobiles could be seen on the road. Therefore, it would be a significant step by the state towards improving the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, some other measures are recommended to enhance environmental conditions. First and foremost is to impose a tax on automobiles to make them expensive as this could lead to less congestion. The predominant reason behind air contamination is carbon dioxide which eventually gets lower with no more unnecessary buying of cars. In Japan, tax imposition is extremely high on new buyers of cars and buses, thus Japan is a pollution-free country. In addition, the introduction of electric vehicles can not only improve the air quality but also there would be less consumption of fossil fuel. Consuming petrol and diesel enormously makes the resources less available for the next generation, whereas vehicles running on electricity help to control excessive consumption and contamination.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the method of increasing fuel rate is not the mere way to save the environment, a few other measures including a tax on vehicles and the introduction of eco-friendly cars can be meant to cut down excessive contaminants in the air.",
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"content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System can be valuable to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom because we can know how that person is feeling at the time. Would you like to know if a person is feeling sad,happy,bored, or even angry? Of course,not only do we know how they feel but we can also take a step futher on helping them. If a person is depressed we can talk to someone close from them and explain what they are going through, or advice them for that person to take therapy.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is also a great start to poeple who are new to school or even to sports. If a person feels sad because they arent doing as good as their other teamates, The coach should use the software because it will let him/her know why that person isnt really trying in the sport. Another reason why im for it is because teachers really dont know when you are bored or confused. Especially if you are one of those shy prsons that dont like raising their hand. By using this software teachers can go up to you and explain you with what you are having trouble. If a student is bored with what the what teacher is teaching, she should probably try something new to get the students attention. This technology can also show us when someone has a fake smile for example if you think that you have a friend that really isnt your friend and you talk to her she might be giving you a fake smile because she probably doesnt like you.\n\nThe use of this software can determine if you are having problems in your house,the expressions that will show would be sadness and probably anger. In todays world you may be going through a lot but people may not know and they would treat you like garbage. This would then cause you depression and probably then commiting suicide. Having this technology \"Facial Action Coding System\" in hands can help you stop somone from danger.\n\nhaving this technology can ressolve a lot of problems with putting yourself into it. Every perosn has a falling action and a resolution to their story. With just a facial expression it can change realtionships and friendships.\"Making people smile\" is what we need with Facial Action Coding System!",
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"content": "It is believed that cities provide a better life in the comparsion of the life in a small town or a village. However, some people consider that the life in big cities is generally hazardous for the health of people. In my opinion, although big cities provide many amenities to the people but the city life is not good for a person when it comes to health.\nThe main reason is continuous increase in population. Metropolitan cities attract people from small towns and/or villages in search of better opportunities, good education for their children or medical facilities. This migration makes these cities overcrowded. As population increases, there will be many vehicles on roads. More traffic will lead to more air and noise pollution. Likewise, as the population increases, the demand for housing also will escalate. To fulfill the demand of housing, local government has to reduce the green space to built more buildings in the city which will lead to more pollution. Obviously, pollution causes many health issues.\nAnother reason is stressful and busy life in the big cities. People working in big MNC companies in the cities, have deadlines to complete their work. If they are not able to meet the deadlines, it will affect their growth in the company. People in metropolitan cities are so busy that they don't have time to take care of their health. Living in a continuous stress without taking care of the health leads to many health problems.\nTo conclude, the life in a big city is very stressful, busy and surrounded with a lot of pollution, which is not good for health of an individual.",
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"content": "I agree that the Facial Action Coding System will be helpful in students and at schools. Because the system can detect a student's emotions, it can help a teacher learn more about that specific student. By knowing that a student is off guard or not paying attention to a certain lesson; the teacher can help that student on the lesson one-on-one. Not all students have the same emotions, so the students may not be getting taught well enough because of how the student might feel. The system can help a teacher realize that a kid might be mad and needs a certain activity to do before the class starts a lesson so the student can be content. Since more lessons will most likely be taught on computers, the teachers do not have to worry about wasting paper and money.\n\nThere is a downfall to all this greatness. More students will be on computers. That can cause damage in the eyes or brain. Some parents might not like the idea of their child being analyzed by a computer. Since the computer will use the camera to see the students face, the camera will have to be on. Parents might not like having their child exposed. Some teachers might not like the idea of having cameras on in their room for the same reason of being exposed.\n\nAlthough there are more benifits than problems in the system. Students can be happier if the teachers notices that they are sad and actually do something about it. If the student is happy they will most likley be on topic on a lesson.\n\n\"Imagine a computer that knows when youre happy or sad\"(D'Alto). The computer will be able to detect your mood and help you be happy if you are feeling sad. Teachers will get to know their students more. Because the comptuer can tell a students emotions, it can give information for the teacher. The teacher might use that information to see if that child needs to talk to someone in private.\n\nSchools should get the Facial Action Coding System because it benifits students and their ways of learning. It also helps teachers get to know their students more and help them out if they need help on a certain lesson if they feel confused. Kids will be happier if teachers recieve information that a student is sad and need joy in the classroom. Students will be less bored if the teacher gets information that her class feels sad. The teacher can help the students not feel bored by making the lesson somewhat intersing. That's why I think the Facial Action Coding System is a good idea to have in schools and any learing facility.",
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"content": "In this present world, news are more and more popular on social media or newspaper. Some people believe that such information are not connected to their lives, therefore they don’t want spend to much time for it. It is disagreed that news is not essential for our live. Analysing the importance of news from governance, as well as the updating of weather forecast will prove this.\r\n\r\nFirst, people could found important information that governace would like to inform to them through breaking news on current affairs programmes or on newspaper. For instance, Vietnamese people want to look for the location that grant for them the identity cards, they will have to search for concerned news or video that Governance published on many social media. This wil support them following to the right direction and finish their documents. So, this makes it clear that people cound not live without news.\r\n\r\nSecondly, weather forecast is one kind of news that cannot be lacked in our daily routines. For example, if people are going to host an event outside, they often update weather conditon on planing dates in order to deal with unexpectable weather could be happen. This is one of necessarry step in preparation process to ensure the event would be sucessful. Thus, it become apprarent that news is useful with us.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, there are many kind of news which are neccessary concered to our daily lives. Thus, it is clear that the idea that people waste time when reading news on multimedia cannot be supported. After analysis on this subject, it is predicted that news are more and more booming in the our world and become an essetial part of our lives.",
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"content": "Laughter plays huge part life family loves laugh We always making people around us laugh put two together someone going start cracking Sometimes kids family games make start There one couple us play one ever oficaly gave name call theLaughing The starts one person standing froung everone else thats playing The goal try get one people start first one laugh trade places thing We really dont play often theirse nothing else One night two nefues I siting around looking something little nefue said CAPS play His older brother I didnt really want play nothing else bouth said would It started like always nobody really wanted go first sombody finly maned went got started After everbody good time It went like houre started get boaring I strating get board minds going ouit little nefue didnt want us went take turn went turn started like usually making stupid faces funny sounds try get people laugh We seen faces herd noises wasnt going work realised wernt going laugh started telling us story He started story saying CAPS guy right didnt anything besides chair box He loved chair box The story wasnt funny yet went CAPS guy went bed tired woke stuff gone His chair box two things world gone So went looking things He searching day night couldnt find anything chair box even clue could gone So disides go bed maybe would back morning like maybe dream woke turned wild boar said started running around acting like pig That got us didnt want stop kept telling story In story turnd everytime guy went bed something strange would change got funny My family loves laugh others laugh us Just like nefue didnt want stop telling story us cracking Weather hanging telling couple joaks making love laugh Lauchter huge part life",
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"content": "The face on Mars is nothing but a Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa. Martian mesas are common enough around Cydonia. So it wouldnt have been surprising if it was just an ordinary mesa. In1976, Viking 1 saw the mesa and thought it looked like a face. But scientists found out that it was just a martian mesa.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 a Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin and his Orbiter Camera took a picture of the Mesa that looked like face. The picture was ten times better than the picture that the Viking 1 took. They found out that it was just a natural landform and that it wasnt an alien monument at all. Yet with all the proof some people did not believe that it wasnt just a regular Mars mesa due to that it was a cloudy year on Mars. So on April 8, 2001 it was a cloudless summer day in Cydonia and the Global Mars Surveyor got a second chance to look at the butte. The surveyor took a photo using its cameras absolute maximum resolution. The picture showed that it was just a Martian equivalent of a butte or a messa.\n\nNevertheless we found out that it was an ordinary martian mesa that looked like a face due to shadows. It was never an alien monument but was an ordinary mesa. So the the face on mars was never an alien monument but a nutural landform.",
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"content": "\"\n\nAll of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.\n\n\" As an official of the Transportation for America, David Goldberg is a credible source for information regarding transportation in America. However there are places all around the world were automobiles are causing problems. Limiting car usage could help solve many of those issues.\n\nIn America, the topic of alternative transportation has been discussed many times, but in previous bills, 80% of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20% to other transport. This can be found in paragraph 9 of the first source as the fifth line. Sadly America is not the only country having problems. In\n\nParis, France , diesel cars make up 67% of the vehicles and the diesel feul is blamed for the smog accumulation in the city. In Paris, A warmer layer of air caused by cold nights and warm days, trapped the car emissions which then caused a five day period of intensifying smog. France's smog build-up rivaled that of\n\nBeijing, China , which is claimed to be one of the most polluted cities in the world. This problem also exists in the States, as transportation is the second largest cause of America's emissions, right behind power plants. To ensure safety anyone who was still driving their car was fined 22- euros or $31.\n\nBogota, Columbia followed France in their violation fee and charged any violater $25. Bogota has created a\n\nDay Without Cars , in which no cars are used, to promote alternative transport and the reduction of smog levels. Another positive effect no cars can have would be a more peaceful enviroment, as stated in sources 1 and 3. In America, recent studies show that Americans have been buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses. Although it may be far in the future, America may soon follow the lead of\n\nVauban, Germany , where it is completely car-free. This probably won't happen anytime in the near future, but the use of automobiles has gone down in the United States. Bill Ford, chairman of the Ford Motor company, proposed a city in which, pedestrians, bicycles, private cars, etc. are used to save time, lower emissions and improve safety. He sees this future, hopefully others will too.\n\nAlthough America might not be exactly like Vauban, it is good to hope that it will get there someday. No cars would result in a calmer atmosphere and a more peaceful lifestyle. Also, it would lower the emissions made by vehicles, which in turn would save the atmosphere, thus saving life on earth. No cars would also help improve safety, both of animals and of people. We may not be completely there yet, but the world will someday have no need for cars and that will be the first step into the future.",
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"content": "advatanges of limiting car usage will be less polution in the air and less gas and oil that is needed to be found on the botton of the earth. limiting car use can only be the only way to save humanity and the population of this eart less oil and gas to be found, healthy air to breath, and also transportaion will be either to walk or ride a bike. also we can use other transportaions such as buses and trains. types of transportation that not only one to four people ride in but multiple people so not much gas is being using instead of 30 cars one bus ride can be equivilent to 20 cars. so talking the advatanges of limiting car usage will be a creat idea in so many other ways, then the way that were described.\n\nmany other advatanges of limiting car usage is the decrease of car crashes. causing insurance rates and prices to go down. also causing the limiting of teen drivers and very old people to drive as much. car crashes in america increase rapidly on a daily bases. meaning that there will be the cause of more deaths, hospital bills, and insurance will go up. less car usage less bills, money to reapair uneeded things. dont get me wrong cars are creat, cars changed this whole world on a new way to transport with its new accessories and gagets. but also limiting that car companies dont have to spend a whole lot to be in det. cars are something out of this world people still wonder on the functions of how it works. but sometimes its better to keep that way not knowing how and not using it as much. limiting car usage is a good idea but also it can cause alot of damage on what job, and also what the person uses the car for his or her natural habitat of the usage of the car.",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. This new software has a promising applications for a variety of industries. \"Can we actually calculate emotions, like math homework?\" \"How can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?\"\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a three-dimensional computer model of the face. All forty-four major muscles in the model must move like a human muscle. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit.\" The facial expressions we use for each emotion is universal. The software can identify mixed emotions.\n\nThe software is the latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. He then relies on his pyschologist Dr. Paul Eckman, the creator of Facial Action Coding System. He has classified six basic emotions like happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it tells us how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. \"Why would they want this?\" Some students could use this software on there computer to use for when they have no one to talk to, to use for homework like instead of looking it up on the internet they could say,\"hey computer what is two plus two.\" This could be the next siri, but on the computer.\n\nFor students in a classroom to use this software could be valuable. The article, the psychologists, and the professor tells us the good things about this software. The Facial Action Coding System, we can use it for anything. You can also use it for anamonical information.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Yes, we can actually calculate emotions, like math homework. The computer can recognize your emtions through software and through a special program Dr. Paul Eckman created.",
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"content": "I agreed that using technology to read students emmotional expression of students in classroom because the computer could see if the student is about to sleep or if the students mad sad or dont care the computer also could wake the students up by adding a lilttle fun on the assiment they doing because no one like boring work maybe that would change students emotion and make them care more and to be more intrested of what they doing . In the article it states \"A classroom computer could recoginize when a student is becoming confused or bored \" Also in the acticle it states\" then it could modify the leson ,like an effective human instructor \"\n\nthese quote mean that computers are able to see humans emotions and make them feel better in sime kind of way for me they saying a computer is like a friend to humans and they could help u .",
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"content": "The setting features cyclist hot cold could affect cyclist riding If its hot cyclist would get exhausted lot faster And its cold cyclist would get sick Also its windy would go lot slower going winds direction",
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"content": "A few number of people suppose that the way to find a solution of the environmental issue is to raise the value and price of fuel for cars and other means. In my opinion, increasing the price of gas for cars it will save the inhabitance life ;actually I will damage the environment. Such as, pollution disturbed in the air and the effects on agriculture land.\nIn a daily life, the pollution has raising widely ;furthermore, the amount of co2 spreads in the air and enter into the people lung, subsequently, they are suffering from cancer and a difficulty of breathing. For example, China has overpopulation in 1985. They suffered from diseases because the number of cars and vehicles that spreads abuse into the atmosphere. Therefore, many people were harmed their sight and many illnesses. The governmental and the minister of health accumulated to find a way to solve this obstacles.\nThe cultivation was deducted by output of vehicles. However, it is better for seedling life to grow in a clear air because of it is providing us with foods that's people life depending on it. Although modern country has many progress in the industry, the huge effect on the atmosphere resulted from factories and industry life. For instance, Egypt in 1985 lost many of people's life because of the traditional cars was invented with low material that is impact on flowers life. Consequently, folks life devastated.\nIn conclusion, pure air and agriculture land are essential in any country that government must put restricted laws to preserve the environment. I agree with jumping the gasoline value will protect the environment. \n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n=",
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"content": "Having empire state building dock hold dirigibles brought hefty problems builders Most problems resided among idea mast Al Smith knew mass would put much pressure building frame another baloon s self besides US dirigibles made hydrogen rather helium The hydrogen made much dangerous crowded town New York area hydrogen much flamable third obstacl winds said winds top building constantley shifting due violent air currents It also illegal flyhold dock air craft close ground The docking holding dirigibles Empire State building brought many issues delemas making hard carry idea tall building",
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"content": "venus is a worthy pursuit desspite the dangers it presnts .for example it has bad weather and a really thick atmosphere. peole have even said the venus is earths twin.so if venus is earths twin we need to find out as much as possibel about it\n\ndespite the challanges that stand in the way. one of these days they are gonna find away to grt around the optisciles stop ud from exploring it now .\" NASA is working on other approches to studing venus . for example ,some simplified\n\nelectrons\n\nmade silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted weekes in such conditions .\" so if they can make something that can lastweeks they are probally really close to making something that last a long time and mabey they will make it where people can actually go to venus one day. but yeah it is definety some that is worth exploeing becassue mabey tvenus is like earth and can obtain human life .that is\n\nprobally the whole reson tha they are even sxploeing venu in the first place so that they can find out if it can habbit living things as well and that would be cool considering the fact that earth and venus are so close to each other it.so i agreee that its a good ida to contunie to study veenus fro up and afar honestly it would better for weverty one if we knew more about it and whats on it becasue fro all we know weere not the only plane t that has life on it becasue we cant study the other planets becasue they have lthings stopping\n\nu sfrom exploring then mi nus mars there i s no life on mars bt werre not talking about mars weer talking about how they should keep studying venus even tho there are some challanges but challanges are good they help you sometimes what is life with out challanges you dont get evry thing handeed to you if it was like that we would know what was on venus but it not like tha t so that is a nother reason why this is a good thing . sure it makes it hared on the scientest but that is also a good thing that its harder\n\non them. challanged and things being hard in life are alos a reason why we should keep studing\n\nvenus becse eventually there wont be a challange and then studing venus will be easy and then we find out if venus can habbit people nad pople start goign on vacation to venus instead of florida imagina a life likethat wow\n\nthat would be weird but it could happen if we keep studying",
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"content": "One time I really patient grandma said something mail I excited I waited waited nothing showed Then I started getting unpatient My grandma said CAPS keep waiting come soon So I grandma said next day big package came I happy finally My uncle sent sisters I new sneakers Also got players I happy patient finally something worth",
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"content": "Advancement in technology is shifting the current way of living. It is believed by many that the traditional teaching method will come to an end in the near future. I completely disagree with this statement because the classroom is a conducive place for learning and this will be elaborated on below.\n\nFirstly, face to face learning is far much better than distance learning. In other words, students need the presence of a teacher physically since he will monitor them and see their progress. For example,in the classroom one can determine whether the pupils understand or not more easily by just observing their gestures .Futhermore, instilling discipline is much better when you are in one room, therefore it is easier to control the behaviour of individuals resulting in better grades. \n\nSecondly, interaction is very crucial in every student's life.For instance, e-learning is mostly one way type of information sharing where only the lesson conductor is in charge. Such doesn't give the students time to ask questions or argue with their classmates . Debating is so important as it encourages pupils to think very quickly and keep them focused. Hence, the traditional way of teaching should not be replaced as people benefit interaction skills which will help them in all their life.\n\nTo sum up, although there is a possibility of classroom physical learning extinction due to the advancement in technology, I believe this will not prevail since there are a lot of benefits associated with it including better understanding and socialization.",
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"content": "The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers. They think this because Venous could have been like earth a long time ago. The text states that, \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes famillar features such as valleys, mountians, and craters.\n\nThey have been keen on the idea of sending humans to study venus. The issues is that the planets too hot. They started to think about the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow them to float above the fray. All thought the temprature would be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit the air pressure would be at earths sea level. Another plus would be the solar power would be plentiful. depite this it wouldnt' be easy conitions but liveable for humans.\n\nNASA has been working on an appraoch to study the planet. they have made electronics out of silicon carbide. It has been tested in a csmber simulating the chaos of venus. They are striving to beat the challenges presented by venus. But the planet has vaules not only but also has insight to be gained on the planet itself. Humans will began to grew curiouser and curiouser but we can only do this if we go around the intimidating endeavor.\n\nIt should not be limited by danger nor doubt.",
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"content": "The Tech industry employs a significantly large workforce in India, especially the youth. Although this is true, the picture is skewed when we look at the gender distribution of jobs, with only 20% of them being held by females. This essay elaborates on the problems that prevent more women from getting these jobs and gives some practical solutions to the issue.\r\n\r\nTo begin with the problems, most technology giants have their offices in metropolitan cities like Banglore, where people stay in nuclear families. So the responsibility of the household chores and children ends up on the shoulders of the woman in the family due to the absence of the elder generation in the house. Thus, they end up having less time for their professional work and end up leaving their spot. This reduces their number in employment significantly. For example, my aunt, a software engineer had to resign from her job when my cousin was born as she had no one to look after the baby. Secondly, in this society with a patriarchal world view, women are still viewed as less efficient and less worthy as compared to their male counterparts and are always second on the priority list while getting a job or a promotion. For instance, the majority of sales directors of most multinational companies are men for the same reason. \r\n\r\nA possible solution that can be offered, to tackle these issues is that husbands take up the responsibilities of the house and free up the woman's time. For instance, my aunt's husband changed his place of employment so that she could work as well. In addition to this, awareness needs to be created that females are equally efficient, if not more at handling all tasks. Examples that can be cited are Sudha Murthy, the co-founder of Infosys.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, in spite of having problems, like nuclear families and a male-dominated societal mindset, that deter women from having flourishing careers, solutions such as sharing responsibilities as a family and changing the patriarchal world view can help change the current scenario.",
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"content": "You may be thinking that the face NASA discovered was created by aliens. However , it wasnt here's why...\n\n\"On a cloudless summer in Cyondia -- Mars Gobal Surveyor drew a close enough for a second look.\" Malin's team captured a extraordinary photo of the face on Mars by using a great camera with a maxium resolution.\n\nIn fact, a camera that has a extraoridnary resolution you can distern in a digital image 3 times bugger than a pixel size. Using these kinds of cameras you can see what the object is right away.\n\nNASA includes in the passage that the face on mars actually shows a \"Maritan equivalent of a butte or mesa\". They state that the face on Mars looks like American West landforms.\n\nWhen NASA unvelied the photo on thier websites they said thast is was resemble a human head that was formed by shadows giving the illusions of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nAliens never created that face on Mars it was just a natural landform like on earth. People shouldn't believe in people who are not professionals in science, however\n\nNASA has experience and the brains to figure out scientific problems and figures.",
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"content": "Studying Venus was a worthy pursit despite the dangers it presented . NASA came across tuff situition. Despite the challenges that astronuts had to go through, Venus was once Earth-like. Scientists are taken risks to uncover more knowlege of Venus. All of the clabration can help other genrations discover other plants in the future.\n\nNASA's tuff situition they have inconture while studying Venus were the hot temptures. The heat made it diffcult to use mandern technology. Although using elecronics made of silicon carbide has lasted for three weeks in thoes kind of conditions. Also by using old techology called mechanucal computers have help calculat by using gears leavers and do not require electronics at all, that woudnt\n\nbe eufacted my the heat. Asuch\n\nas phones or tablets that are capble of meliting in these conditions.\n\nVenus was once Earth-like plant in our solar system.Long ago , Veanus had a large bodys of ocean and could have supported froms of like. venus still has some features that are Earth-like. including rocky surface,such as valleys, mountains and crature.Therefore scientists are taken ricks to uncover more knowledge of Veaus .They would need to get up close and personal to have more vistonlaion of the landfore .By just using photography and videography is not enugh for them.\n\nVeaus is a worthy but also riscy place to study. In conclutons Asas has there problem they can push through it.",
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"content": "There are controversial perspectives heating a debate whether to handle environmental degradation and loss of biodiversity which are caused by improper human activities. While some claim that people don’t have enough time to do anything, the opposite makes a statement that we can enhance the situation by taking a lot of efficacious measures. I would contend that the former is valid to some extent but I consider myself an advocate of the latter. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, some equivalent reasons lead to the claim that it is too late to deal with the undesirable impact on flora and fauna of humans. In the long run, the devastation that meets the ever-growing demand of the greedy human wishes brings unfavourable influences on the deterioration in environmental quality and breed habitat destruction. Hence, a wide range of animals are on the verge of extinction and even die off. For instance, pandas in China are on the brink of extinction due to the shortage of their proper habitat. As a result, a lot of people think that humans can’t do anything to cope with this problem. \r\n\r\nWhile the consequences of inappropriate humans’ activities are widely acknowledged, there are some resolutions to enhance this problem. The Government could invest in constructing an eclectic mix of reservations to create safe habitats and protect endangered species. For instance, Viet Nam’s authorities have made an investment in Cuc Phuong Forest, which houses a wealth of rare animals. Thus, it is not too late to find a solution to this problem.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo sum up, although some people believe humans couldn’t resolve the consequences of their activities on the environment, I think humans could take measures to improve environmental quality and biodiversity.",
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"content": "Im patient person im going wrighting patience Patience dont complain board waiting somthing For example convenance I wrighting story patience please take note story completely untrue walking home saw elderly woman trouble grocerys wanted help thinking cousin arriving house moment walked woman asked needed help replied if could I live pointed large tan house carried things door CAPS go said CAPS mind helping put away woman asked thought mother never wanted go strangers house sort knew said help woman smile picked bags said CAPS home unlocked CAPS not replied keys asked I beleve lost somwere lawn searched half hour found bush He brought keys said CAPS go opened door helped grocres When put away said CAPS I ought going CAPS without somway I repay you said woman CAPS go find purse waited waited hour The woman came kitchin change CAPS change I couldnt find wallet said gave change left feeling like good person patient woman told mom good deed cousin got stay longer This example patience ever happens make sure patient know person",
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"content": "Venus is known as the second planet from our sun, it's sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" despite it wasn't a star at all. It was also referred as Earth's \"twin,\" since Venus is the closest with density and size in terms of Earth's. But, we really don't know alot about Venus. Now why is that we don't sent any rovers, satelites, ANYTHING to get some few informations about Venus for the last three decades?\n\nBecause anything that touched the surface of Venus surrvived less than three hours. Which gathered the reputation as the as the challenging planet to study.\n\nWhat is the challenges of studying Venus? Well, first of all, The atmospere of Venus has a THICK layer of carbon dioxide the covers 98% of the planet, in which makes Everything a much hoter place,but, to top it of with the atmosphere problem, the clouds in there have highly corrosive sulfuric acid. If we some how passes through the atmosphere, than we'll face ANOTHER problem with the ground. Since Venus is the second planet from our sun and with all those carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, the surface ground temperature is over 800 DEGREES FAHRENHEIT. In which with the surface and the atmosphere, it could basically melt many types of metal with no problem. Another Problem is that the atmosphereic preassure is 90x greater than our Earth, with that much preassure could easily crushed a submarine that is built to surrvive the deeper end of the ocean. From what we gather small information from our space craft, the geology of venus pretty much have erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes.\n\nDespite all of the troubles and challenges that Venus caused, many of the scientists, astronomers, and including the author themself think that it's worth all of the trouble to get s much information as possible to get to know more of Venus. But WHY is it worth studying it? Well, Astronomers are fascinated and interested in the past of Venus as many of them has theorized that might've used to be a lot like Earth from long time ago, with Venus used to oceans that support life like ours. Another reasons why it's worth the trouble and money to study it is that Venus could be our next Planetery visit as our nearest option.\n\nTo me, I'd thought that it wouldn't be worth all the trouble to study more of this when we can study other planets like mars that support life better than Venus since it's surface and atmosphere wasn't as crazy as Venus'.",
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"content": "In this story the scientist say that found a face on mars here is my clam's and ect. Side by side: a Viking 1 photo from 1976, a Mars Global surveyor (MGS) image from 1998, and the latest MGS image from 2001.New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA’s Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa.\n\nMay 24, 2001—Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASA’s Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on their monitors only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.They were Formed by shadows giving the illision of eyes, nose, and mouth.”\n\nThe authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. The “Face on Mars” has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows—even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars—evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists.\n\nAlthough few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. “We felt this was important to taxpayers,” explained Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA’s Mars Exploration Program. “\n\nWe photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001—a cloudless summer day in Cydonia—Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. “We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,” said Garvin. “Malin’s team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera’s absolute maximum resolution.”\n\nEach pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.But not everyone was satisfied. The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April ’98—a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze. They also include that they went back to the planet and took more photo's. And from the images that they took it looks like the face changed.",
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"content": "Many people have different opinions on this subject, but I'm only going to tell you about mine. What I will be telling you about is the Face that everyone has claimed to see on Mars. It does indeed look like a face, but I don't really think that's the case. I think it has more to do with the Earth than anything else. I think that people have just blown this out of proportion. Does there really have to be an explanation? Can it not just be a natural landform that has no explanation whatsoever?\n\nThe only thing I agree with on this subject is that it does indeed look like a face. But aliens is a little bit of an exaggeration, I don't know what made people want to believe that it is because of aliens but it's just nonsense. I just think it is a part of the Earth that was made differently. There are a lot of other landforms that are part of the Earth that look strange or can't be explained. But that's just the Earth, it has nothing to do with aliens or us humans even. They are just things created that we have no explanation for and most likely we never will. I mean does there really have to be an explanation? Can it no just be part of the Earth? There are many things on this Earth that are strange but that doesn't mean there has to be an explanation.\n\nEveryone has their own opinions on this subject, and they are all different. So I'm just telling you what I think and believe. I don't see how there can be many other landforms that are just as strange and we have no explanation for them. Why does there have to be one for this one? I just think that this is part of the Earth that nobody understands and they don't believe that it is just a part of the Earth. It is just a natural landform and nothing more, especially not aliens. People just need to stop exaggerating this and move on with their lives, it's not a big deal. If we hadn't have found it now we would've found it eventually.",
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"content": "In short story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho ends story saying when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test II failed test As many kids Saeng failed driving test crucially upset nobody wants fail something almost humiliating experience failed test knowing others already successfully passed With quote introduction paragraph one question written sign symbolism When geese return back north show ready start over try again When hibiscus budding trying start life Saeng seeing objects things empowers want succeed try She realizes part life order succeed fail Minfong concludes quote understands matter obstacle must press forward keep trying order succeed She realizes success come hard work commitment makes great strong individual",
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"content": "One time siting watching tv fun time brother step brother came room said CAPS go interview going grounded CAPS long said About hour long replied But itchy scratchy going its one time said CAPS pointless kidshow dude made real show Were said Its man leave hour okay make science experiment something PERSON said never liked man commercial I shall say happened best make science experiment plot revenge man whoever doesnt like So waited minutes experiment get done Then left three hour drive favorite show taped He patient got He looked man minutes could lieing patient getting tired feel asleep woke guese was The man remember CAPS said dude man watched laughed threw bonney ball man patient patient hours get watch itchy almost get back man The end",
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"content": "Today I -Luke- think you should join the progam i joined called \"Seagoing Cowboys progam \" . I joined the progam for a certain reson and thats because of a great friend of mine - Don -invited me to join him to go to Europe on a cattle boat . I knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. And at that time in 1945 in Europe the World War II had just ended which ment so many things were ruined i wanted to help out so I joined the Seagoing Cowboys progam .And if your not selfish and care about other people take this opportunity and help out a persons life join not only cause we wan't you to but it would be good for a change if someone you loved lived in a country were distruction had just happened you would join but these people you may not love or you don't know but they are still humans maybe even children still they have lives to live and children to have to keep the population growing. I'm giveing you a great opportunity just think about it consider trying .",
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"content": "Their many joys life relevant others obvious d stupid notice Have ever sat porch stared window watch sun rise sat pondering life unusual qualities think great memories laughs shared sorrows pain love hate Its surprising almost everyone done wonder could change things would would leave way started filling life complete complete well regrets For tears I cried pain I ve always laugh top sadness time I sit pander life although lived long real experiences yet come I great deal short experiences trouble taken happened time period I learned great deal form I ve learned matter hard try never fully plain life always going something someone unexpected hope best prepare worst Its hard happy keep open mind light heart soon find laughing rest world enjoying short time amazing planet call listen mother father even person look life There many things keep going like boyfriend love animals important thing think nt one thing collection things love laughter new beginnings old endings bright new path take relentlessness universe idea planets sustain life maybe even intelligent life Its easy find things live even easier find things die hopefully look things live I remember hard I thought I would never ever happy I felt like I nt right world many confusing aspects I end path I making something happened I sat side old road I looked stars thought would miss I ended path would I dare name child children matter I even chance produce anyWho would I marry marry love last fade like morning due I finally decided much would experience I ended soon fateful evening I went life slowly molding better person wanted bright future romantically new burning love story tell child children devotion trust respect would hopefully last s I would want adventure consist I would want find peace mind place silence scarcity I want help bring possibility sharing world animals pushing aside abusing natural right along side us I want solve pollution problem humans helped produce suppose small way one person every small thing big home small I say make impact I want something look back laugh bettered consider part making planet shared healthy planet",
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"content": "as the industrialization had occured the manufacturing of the product has been incresing as well as demand of the products is also rised. as consequence , it contribute some amount in harming environment. there are myriad aspacts which are accountable for this accurence. i will analyse the problems and proffer appropriat solution in this essay to curb this problem.\nto commence with, it is irrefutable that, indutries are sourse of harming the climateby taking the dvantage of people and their needs. as a result, it consume more fuel to make product which detoriate the air by buring it, meanwhile,indutries lefft the chamicles in river or lakes which are created during the making product. the way they also contaminate the water.in addition, for maing gthe products and istablish the companies, so much lands is required , for that people cut down the trees to grab a land, cause the such problems as globalwarming and green house effect,\nto supplemente this view ,companies also try to allure people by packing acctrectivelyto supliment theie product sale which help them to compete the other companies as well as help to sustain in market. therfor they published the product with excessive packing, in they use non-biodegredable materials which harm the envirment.\nin the direction of solvning problems., plethora steps can be taken to solve this probles where first and foremost meticules step is govermnet should restrict the manufactureing unnessesary products as well as stop to drain chemicle in river.second, government should introduce the 3r policy and prolifarate the awarness about it to make viligent people to a problem.furthermore, people should also help the govermnet to metigate such problem and for that they should stop buying excessive paking product throught which they cacn indulge the companies to publish the products with less packing. last but not least, govermnet increase the rate of fuel, the way they can curtail the utilization of fuel in companies.\nto synopsis, nothing is imposible .if people try to solve this serious problem, they can do it.\nhowever, if the steps should not be takken as war footing, the earth will bacome the boiling pot where the life for the human is ardous to live.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is a very talked about landform on Mars and it brings many conspiract theories with it. NASA stresses that it is a natural landform called a mesa while other beleive it was made by aliens.\n\nNASA says it is a natural landform becuase it is in the Cydonia region of Mars which has many landform like the Face. They have also done extensive research on the Face and took many photos over the years. Their latest photo was in 2001. This photo was evidence that it had to be natural because each pixel shoed only 1.56 meters which meant that if there was any strage markings or buildings they would easily be seen. NASA also states the the Face on Mars is very similar to mesas on earth. Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, says \" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho...\".\n\nWith the research NASA has done and with all the photo evidence it is easy to say that the Face on Mars is indeed a natural landform. Everything NASA has done to prove this eliminates any speculation or doubt brought up by the public. The Face on Mars is just another reason to appreciate the beauty of the universe and the hard work of NASA.",
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"content": "Studying Venus is dangerous but there is good insight we can find in this.\n\nFirst,In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author says \"Earth's \"Twin\", Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size\". Since it has a lot in common with Earth it is good to have a litle insight on this planet. In the article it says that\" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features sich as valleys, moutains, and craters\" this shows how much Earth and venus have incommon. This also gives us an opertunity to take a planetary visit to Venus in the future. Despite the dangers it could cause on someone.\n\nNext, in the reading it says that Venus has\" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxid blankets\" This is one example of how dangerous Venus is. In the article is says\" Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperatue of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to the Sun\" This is another example of how dangers Venus is. However going to Venus is not a bad idea beacuse life form could have been there in the past. People believe life forms could have existed beacuse of the examples like caters, moutains, and valleys. Despite Venus being the hottest planet in our solar system.\n\nThen, on that note Venus is not the cloestet planet to the sun but has the highest tempature than all of your planet's in the solar system. However studying Venus can give us insight on what to make to prevent for somone or something burning on its surface. While we have been studying Venus all we have seen is a look from a ship orbiting above the planet, that gives us little intel on it surface. We get little intil from that beaucse \" most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere\". However if scientists seeking to conduct Venus will have to get closer to the planet.\n\nLastly, in the reading it says\" Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky\" but not all people know that Venus is not a star it is a planet. However to a amateur stargazer it may just look like another star. Venus is called Earths twin beaucse of how alike they are in distance. Some scientist think this is intersting and want to look into this planet despite the dangers of it. Some scientist have looked into Venus but only have sent unmanned trips. The reasoning is the ship would only last a new hours at the most on Venus.\n\nIn Conclusion,Venus is a every intersitng plaet to look into. Despite the dangers it can cause.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a good and bad idea. Engineer everywhere are somewhat interested in the idea of a driverless car. Some even tried to develop a car somewhat like it before. I think that driverless cars are bad and I'm against the idea because the car could get out of control and crash, drivers can start to loss focus while the car is in motion and it can cost a lot of money.\n\nThe driverless could get out-of-control any time while it's in motion. The car have a higher chance of getting out of control in the winter. When that is happening, the driver have to take over but it doesn't make it any better or safer to the driver and the passenger. What if the sensor of the car have a malfunction and doesn't detect the danger that's coming and doesn't hand over the wheel to the driver, it can cause an accident and maybe worst.\n\nWhen the driverless car is driving by itself, the driver can get bored and start to lose focus on the road, the might not be prepare to take over when the danger come. The driver may have fallen asleep waiting for to reach the destination or being prepare to take control. Even though they might have a camera in the car that watches the driver to see if they're in focus, it may fail to do so and lead to an accident. They say that there will be light flashing on the windshield and the driver's seat vibrating when it's time for the driver to take over, it seems distrating to me and I wouldn't be able to do so.\n\nTo develop this car, it takes a lot of money to do so. Some parts or technology for this car may cost around thousands of dollars. Like the radar for the car, it cost around 2 hundred million dollars. Even if they develop this car, not many people are going to be able to buy it because it cost too much, maybe as much as 2 big house. Only million or billionare would be able to afford for this car.\n\nIn conclusion, the development of this car shouldn't be continue due to safety issues, law issues and maney issues. In some state, it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. So if it's illegal, why even bother creating it in the first place. If any accident happen, who will be responsible for it, and who's fault is it. It can also cost a big conflict between the manufacture and the driver. They might lose their faith in technology.",
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"content": "One day dad I decided would go fishing He kept saying five minutes I sat car Finally I got find sleep note saying min",
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"content": "There is no doubt that the society will become much better if young volunteers are participating in helping other people or the environment. However, despite many agree with doing so, I do not believe that teenagers should assist the society for free.\n\n Firstly, if the number of younger does almost the same jobs as companies' employees, there is no point allowing them to do so without getting paid. Even though they are still young and do no have as much experience as professionals, it does not mean people can take advantage of requesting them to work. Some people probably have other points of views to this while I would say that paying salary to teenagers can make them feel satisfied and encourages them to work diligently. Therefore, not only has it a lot of positive benefits to younger, but would be able to build up much energetic community.\n\n Another factor is that teenagers should get paid for servicing in community because it can help them to take responsibility for their living cost and learn how to be independent. The fact that when working for people, the majority of younger can understand each money they earn is not easy to obtain so they would be likely to use it wisely. For example, it is particularly true that most parents pay children for their tuition. As a result, some younger does not study hard since the money is not they earn from it and they do not really care about. \n\n In conclusion, although younger plays an important role in servicing the humanity, people should treat them as employee to pay salary. This is because doing so can support them to work hard as well as cherished their money and all of these have a definite positive impact on our community.",
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"content": "The builders Empire State building numerous obstacles way planned allowing dirigibles dock The first serious problem safety passengers well pedestrians street Dirigibles filled hydrogen highly flammable In New Jersey dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire This catastrophe would worse take place heads people New York cityNature also posed huge threat completion docking mast Due air currents top building blimp dirigible would constantly shifting The way control swaying blimp would use weights hold blimp would put public riskAlong natural hazards would illegal blimps dock Empire State building existing law The idea allow dirigibles dock mooring mast atop Empire State Building completely impractical",
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"content": "Have you ever looked at a freind and have no clue what he or she is feeling? well with the new invention the FACS (Facial Action Coding System) could tell what your freind is feeling just by reading their face.\n\nI think the technology of having a divice that could read a human emotions is a impressive and could be valuable.\n\nOne reason why I think the FACS is a good thing is because it would be great for the cosulasr at the school that could help ceritain kids out if they are feeling low, depressed, sad and any other negitive feelings. a sentence from paragraph 3 says \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear , and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscels.\"\n\nAnother reason why i think FACS is a good thing for studenst in the class room is it could read the studnce and if the student is having trouble or confused , the FACS could see it and make the assiment less difficult for the student wich would help alot, I thought this because in the text it says , \" A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confusd or bored, Dr. Hang predicts. \" then it could modifiy the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" this shows that it could be useful for students .\n\nThses are some reason of why i belive that the FACS is a good thing for students at school .",
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"content": "always place choice travel whenever parents question I would like go The rolling green hills stunning sunsets thrilling thunderstorms certainly large part reason go idea seeing side family overpowers reasons The core family always friendly smile caring personality sharp sense humor makes friends acquaintances wherever goes Yet due fact live hundreds miles apart I m able see three times year family drives house twice every drives grandparent s house weeks I cherish every moment I spend especially accidentally makes fool causes hysterics A summers ago I traveled check town s antique flower shops dinner We spent hours driving around town scoping shops raid gems either must already oldfashioned homes I lost interest first hours antique shopping never passion mine I ready take one hour trip back go swimming cousins Once spent money couple treasures hours later exhausted prepared head home happened upon pizza shop main street Our mouths watered thought eating slice rather going inside eat ordered pizza take home bake instead In white pickup pulled shop s parking lot leaving I inside grabbed pizza Upon return minutes later aroma pizza wafted cab making mouths water desire get home grow exponentially placed pizza back seat grabbed coffee revved engine We lost thoughts sneaking slice pizza suddenly front tires pick dipped thumped onto road nearly dropped hot coffee lap panicked grabbed handle door reflex We flabbergasted stunned little kids trying grasp nt exist Moments initial panic realized accidentally driven curb We burst laughter poor redrose face apologetic smile wider She cautiously drove traffic laughing hysterically tears sea blue eyes along I Our hysteria episode lasted minutes time pulled vacant parking lot none us wanted another unplanned adventure road I wiped tears eyes trying stifle laughter recompose still giggling wiping mascara face turned around look She locked bright eyes mine smiled sweetly could burst hysterics After next small hysterical episode finally able pull back onto street rest civilization As pulled cautiously I burst CAPS run anymore curbs drew another round laughter always laughter tears Because family natural bond Yet without laughter bond would nearly close glued together currently Hundreds miles farmland open road separates us The occasional phone calls emails communicate My caring humorous loving person I ever encountered I unfortunately nt get spend much time I would like But every time I see I smile think comical stories Without humor laughter share bond would close would clueless current world joy",
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"content": "To concern joy clicking mouse sudden talking friend nt seen years Computers make reality us nt benefit offer Computers help society providing us search engines educational resources allowing us connect easily friends family helping us communicate importances plan things lot First computers become vital part education research like Students schools elementary college able connect much information without computers You even earn college degree computer That s right online universities beginning form This great moms want get degree stay home children Also computer technology applied research science hospitals New discoveries advanced help computers actually help people s lives Computers used search cure cancer disasters earthquakes even help see disease someone symptoms even begin occur Computers helped save lives benefit lives ways people never could imagined sixty years ago Secondly computers allow people connect reconnect people around I recently got facebook account within days I found three friends mine moved away distant cousin moved nt seen since little even great grandmother The possibilities endless Email also beneficial society well helps people communicate plan events brings next topic Lastly computers help communicate one another internet filled websites made benefit one If computers program would nt succesful beneficial become Also amazing website combines education aspect quizzes different levels general knowledge correct answer donates grains When bored sometimes go filled thirty bowls learning time To conlude computers proven benefit people environment Computers help advance research help people reconnect one another help communicate Who knows computers help us accomplish next",
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"content": "Laughter connects friends It s important aspect kind relatioship I know almost memories I friends making laugh friends long time One favorite funny memories time two friends went stopped We sort hard time getting Me friends went cultural performance When done started heading back home kept complaining needing use restroom Her dad told wait got could stop somewhere I suggested By time got doint potty dance I got line order ice cream cones dipped chocolate While waiting searching restroom After approximately four minutes searching finally asked lady working behind counter bathroom She handed key large bulky wreath attached told outside behind building took key sprinted appeared double dorrs Little know left door opens She ran straight right door fell started cracking laughing Especially She laughed hard nt quite make restroom Instead accident floor When laugh friends things might seem funny people wetting public makes friendship stronger Laughing huge important benefit kind relationship It strengthens relationships already helps build new ones also",
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"content": "Should we have an elector college voting systems or switch up to popular voting system. I think we should swicth it up back to the popular votes win. the reasons why we should use this type of voting systems is because we get to choose are president, and and make shore that all u. s people start voting.\"Under the electoral college systems voters vote not for president, but for a slate of electors, who inturn elect the president\".\n\nBy using the voting system of majority win can force or pursuade people to start voting because most people know that there votes wont even matter when electoral voting system is taking place with popular votes even the slitest of just one vote changes who becomes president so i would think people will start being apart of there states votes an become better citezens by voting.3\n\nHere are some of the disaddvantages when having an electoral voting system\n\nAre votes don't even matter when voting for presiden who knows if voting for electors and that electer dose not do as we want for electing the right president having this type of voting system is so much complicated for the process you half to go through when electing a president.",
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"content": "In Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting devastating cyclists condition CAPS high desert California surely never easy task begin Without proper hydration people often suffer heatstrokes pass sometimes even perishing entirely worse cyclist effort exerting pedaling short rolling hills Even worse trail old eccentric men set run doesnt much way nuping depleted water supply The first town cyclist comes across easily splits the traditional definition ghost town water pump comes emits sewage incredibly hot brackish water Therefore heat made worse look water cyclist path This combination features setting causes great deal distress cycling almost pushing death",
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"content": "Auto mobiles have become a major aspect of the everyday life of citezens all around the world. because of this growing use there are many disadvantages that come along with this over use. Many have come to the conclusion to limit automotive uses. Limiting car use has many advantages, it lowers air pollution,takes away stress and saves money.\n\nMany places all over the world have begun this change. Places such as Vauban, Germany have given up the use of cars. Seventy percent of residents do not own a car, and fifty seven percent sold their car to move in to this community. They use a system call \"smart planning\" which seperates suburban life from automotive. Now instead of cars they walk, and bike to get to their destination. Here they made homes and the city as a whole, much closer together. Vauban residents the whole 5,500 of them are all in a rectangular square mile, making it easier to get from place to place with out a car. Also Paris has limited car ussage. after days of near-record pollution Paris decided to enforce A ban on driving. One day all even numbered lincense plates were told to leave cars at home to lower car pollution, if not they were to pay a fine. It was said in a five day period that traffic was down sixty percent. In Bogota, Colombia they have a day in the year that is car-free, millions are included in this day. This has gone oon for three years and is growing in size, many other cities have joined in on this car-free day. In the United States the president has tried to curb the greenhouse gas emission. Many citizens in the U.S. have grown with cars and have a growing admiaration for motive vehicles.\n\nGiving up cars or lowering car ussage helps decrease our recent rise in air pollution since the out break in the early twentith century. In France there was a sixty percent drop of congestion in just a span of five car limiting days. Also it is a stress reliver! many say that when you give up a car you are less stressed about the traffic and it is nice to just walk to your destination.\n\nGiving up are cars is a money saver! cars are a black hole that you just feed money into. we have to pay for gasoline every week or so and then we have fines and tickets. In Vauban, Germany residents have to pay for a parking spot to leave their car at and that parking spot does not come cheap. One parking spot costs 40,000 dollars on top of a payment for a house and other nessesities.\n\nAlthough a car may get to from place to place very quickly, it is very harmful to the enviornment. With cars you bring stress, air pollution and debt. but all of that could go away if you follow those who are taking a step to reduce car use or even cut use of it completly.",
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"content": "I belive setting area affect mind put certin situations In reading man cycling sees one almost water cant se house person far see This scary gives te feeling helplessness would go past cars people street cars would calmer could get water building along ride tempature would cold far would drink less go This would changed mood",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again NUM feels hibiscus blooms bloom passing test Also Saeng relating hibiscus Its flower arnt pretty its strong enough make throu winter hibiscus NUM Her mother trying tell strong also She make cold months like geese lifted head watched distinctive V etered evening sky slowly fading distance NUM Just like geese Saeng realizing proud chances Dont always doubt becase chances Dont afraid try",
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"content": "Sizzle sizzle sizzle! That's the sound of human skin burning up in only 90 degree weather. Well Venus has almost 10x that, so imagine trying to withstand that. Scientists are trying to learn more about Venus because long ago it was nearly identical to the earth. Now the acidic and humid atomosphere make it inhabitable for humans. Despite these challenges, scientists still think that trying to make Venus habitable will be the best option because its closer to us and also still has hope of being a planet to soon to be Colonized.\n\nVenus use to be a planet relative to Earth. Venus and Earth had shared many simalirities with each other, but unlike Earth now; Venus has many challenges that scientists still consider facing, so that Venus may be habitable. In the article the author says,\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us (Paragraph 2)\". From the start of paragraph 3 to the end the author explains all the challenges that Venus presents for us and it's dangers. From paragraph 4-5 the authors states how Venus can still be a habitable palnet and lists the steps scientists are taking to study it futhermore, even knowing that the odds will be against them.\n\nThe author wants to expand his knowledge of Venus, even with the challenges that scientists and explorers will be facing. Venus started off as a planet that could be called \"Earths Twin\", but now cannot because of the adaption and terraformation it has took. What once exist can always exist again; That's what these scientist, explorers, and author believes. Don't look at Venus for what it has become, look at Venus for what it once was and can become again with the help of guidance and knowledge. Taking the risk and challenges Venus has to offer to expand human civilization will be worth it.",
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"content": "New technology is always created, and it only gets better and better every time. Technology is very important in schools because most kids are accustomed to interacting with technology on a daily basis. This makes school a little more fun for students who do not enjoy school as much as others. But did you ever think technology could be used for emotional purposes at school besides making it a little more interesting? There is a new invention called Facial Action Coding System that could help teachers and students have a better learning environment. Using new technology like Facial Action Coding System could be used in the classroom to help quiet students understand a subject and give teachers results of how the student feels.\n\nIn a classroom there is always some students that need help but do not want to ask for it. That means that their grades will most likely go down, and it will not be the teachers fault. Students feel ashamed to ask for help when they don't understand something because they don't want to look dumb in front of their friends or teachers. This problem has been going on for a long time, but new technology like the Facial Action Coding System might just be the solution. This new technology can read the students facial expressions when they are confused. \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'\" (D'Alto 6). With this new system students who don't like to speak up about their lack of understanding can get help without telling their teacher. This will prevent their grades from going down and improve their understanding. Therefore, the Facial Action Coding system would benefit the students who find it difficult to communicate their needs to their teachers.\n\nIn addition, instructors can learn the students' ways of learning and how they feel when they get the results from the Facial Action Coding System. It can be a challenge for teachers to understand their students because most students don't open up to their teachers. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by looking on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc\" (D'Alto 5). Like with friends, teachers might notice their students might be feeling down, but they don't want to ask because they don't want to make them feel weird or the student might deny that they are not feeling well. It is impossible to know exactly how a person is feeling, and without knowing that we can't offer help. If the Facial Action Coding System was in the classroom students and teachers could have a better teacher to student relationship without too much awkaward communication.\n\nAll in all, technology is being created to make our lives a little easier, and a classroom can be difficult to run without communication. The Facial Action Coding System can help students and teachers understand each other to be succesful. For example, if a student needs help but doesn't want to ask for help the system will recognize confusion and change the lesson so the student can have a better understanding. Afterwards, the teacher will get the results and approach the student to give him or her the help they need personally and in private. If new inovations are being created we should use them to help us understand one another.",
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"content": "The use of this technology to reaf the emotioanl expressions of students in a classroom is valuble. BecauseEckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger,disgust, fear, and sadness and then assocaited wach with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements. In a real face or in printed face.\n\nUsing a software can read someones emotional expression of a student in a classroom. You could also look at someone and maybe guess how they are feeling. You dont always need a software to figure out how someone is feeling. And you can tell how someone is feeling by the feedback that they give you. At least according to some new computer software you can recognize emotions. The software is the least innovation. The process begins when the computer constucts a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. In fact, we humans perfoorm this same impressive ''calculation'' everyday. It could be hard to figure out someones facil expression but using thast software could help you figure out what they are feeling.\n\nThe Mona Lisa demonstration is realy intended to bring a smile to your face. A classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored. There are a lot of examples in the text like there is one that talks about your frontalis pars lateralis nuscle which is above your eyes. This is technology is valuable it gives lots of good way you could read or figure out someones expression or feeling. According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage, Empathymay happen because we unconsciously imitate another persons facial expressions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.\n\nYou could argue that the use of the technoloy is valuable cause maybe they used that to make Mona Lisa Smile thats the name the article. So they could've used that as a advantage.",
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"content": "The process of driverless cars , has been studied since the mid-1900's. So, why haven't they sold any, its because there still hasn't been a driverless car capable or worth being sold by compianies or the manufactuers themselves know that these \"Driverless Cars\" will pose a big safety hazard. Companies and manufacturers tested many cars but,some where only able to auto-drive under certain conditions.There is no certainty that these conditions will be met at all times.\n\nA car that could drive by its self would be so cool but after a while dont you think you'll get bored. A self driving car takes all the fun out of driving,because all u do is sit there while you car does the work for you. Also not everyone drives the same and not everyone follow the rules of the road.The cars dont even possess the human inteligence to make decisions.\n\nThese cars pose a great safety risk.The cars were made with all sorts of destractions when a true driver known that you must keep all attention to the road. the more disrtactions there are the more likely an accident would happen. A car that drives its self cant tell the difference between a child and an adult, so it makes it more accessible for younger beings. these cars come wilth a great amount of technology,and that every peice is important to keep the car functioning,but what if some systems give out,that would likely cause an accident.Then whos's fault is it yours or the manufacturers.If systems are broken or shocked you will be the one comming out of pocket and the amount of technology that would need to be replaced would cost money also.",
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"content": "When cycleist mentions hot dry open terrain makes feel like desert I also know its hot swreating dehydrated",
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"content": "Do you really want a machine that tells you how you feel? If so why would you want a machine telling if you know how you feel like. These type of technology is not good and theres no need in having it mostly not in a classroom or school where anything could happen to it if you not carefull.\n\nI dont think this technology should be used in school or in a classroom. Those machies and technology will coast alot and theres no need in having one in the classroom. No one would really use is and who willl really pay for one. If a kid plays around with it who will pay for it and theres no class that needs it. If you want one in your home you cant becuase your PC cant haddle it. in the text it states \"Your home PC cant handle the complex alogorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile\" meaning you will have to buy a better PC just to used the technology. The only thing it does is seeing how you feel. Its not gonna solve nothing or help its just gonna tell you how your feeling and no one know 100% if its always right. They tested on a painting and the person for the painting Mona Lisa is not live to say oh thats correct. Also it tells you how to look in the mirror so it can see how your feeling meaning you cant have or make your normal face becuase it wont work.\n\nIts not god becuase how can it split all the feelings like that so this type of technology should not be in schools or homes. No need in wasting your money on the technology when you could get something better and maybe not as high in price becuase it didnt say how much it is and what type of computer you need so it could work.",
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"content": "I believe things nt taken shelfs people offended There nt like something every nt like For example might book makes females look dumb personally nt affect girls get offended thier superior knowledge I friend gets offended movies black guy always gets trouble dies first So removed every movie offended would left I feel offensive magazine shows girls pretty makes people feel insecure Even though I feel offended I m going request remove magazines give tips actually helps people feel better I took away could cause issues If something removed shelves good reason Like magazine showed nudity I would understand removing kid nt see itSome libraries remove things could potentially cause great issue Maybe newspaper talks great disaster every one swarms stand attacking Something like cause people hospitalized library sued Yes I agree people would request stuff removed ca nt always get way I know people would say thats fair saying says life nt fair thats true So next time hear one wanting something removed tall next time want thing removed refer back So conclusion things nt removed unless nessecary So someone offended thats problem You always walk away dont look listen",
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"content": "Tick tock went second watch I went fifet te oct far wait people come nir presnt box give tree candy Cote qinges dont fill lot lot people On bolt airpant I weat wid list ride like hout latebile celove And faist think happiy let bag At deivent soa wauly I went back air prot I went home In contemns I patience In conteing I patience I cathiner air port nevier patience",
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"content": "There are mixes kind of believed exist in the current society with regard to the career development.Few thinks that it is totally good to kick off their own professional career after completing their whole study, However on the other hand certain people think that it is better to kick off their professional career just after the school.These are two extreme two kind of believed,where those having their own pros and cons.In my opinion I am strongly agreed with regard to entering the university studies and then start up their professional career in their desire field.\n\nStarting up the professional career after full-fill professional studies may help to accrelate the career in the desire field more faster than those who don't have it, Generally educated people can think more strategically and deeper with regard to certain context.More over those people showing excellent skill in term of expressing their thought to top management in a more understandable manner.According to the recent interview with leading beverage company CEO by BBC broadcast where CEO expressed that \"they are seeing that fully qualify people showing excellent perform in their work where they can understand the context more quickly and deeper.\n\nOn the other hand, point of starting your career is a good stage for learning things more quickly.So as years progress by with the good work experiences they may achieved good position in their professional career while that time only university students start their career.\n\nBoth two different thinking having their own pros and cons however i am strongly believed that inorder to fullfill good professional careers at the retirement age it is highly recommends to finished of all their professional qualifcations before starts up their career.Because up to certain level both can perform well however in the today's world all big companies willing to give more chances and opportuniites to who have completed their study proper at this time person who doesnot have proper paper qualification fall level the those people.\n\nIn conclusion,I am brief express that in the current society certain parents forces their students to complete their studies before starts their career because as a result of the completion those people can progress well in their career ladder.",
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"content": "The builders Empire stat building encountered man made problems problems nature attempting allow dirigibles dock One main problem buildings strength The building s steel nearly strong inef transmite pressure dirigibe s load buildings foundation Also winds top building always moving full violent air currents would shove Zeppelin edges building It prohibited airships fly low urban areas making illegal ship even dock building Price also factor along buildings cost additional sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made buildings framework make building strong inuf accommodate airship Through problems builders encountered wonder dirigibles docking mooring mast possible",
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"content": "I think that the Facial Action Coding System is a good idea for the studetns in the classroom. It may be good for many different other things, for example if someone needs help or in danger as in they could be crying showing that they are scared. But I feel they should take it a little more exstreme for things like could also have audio and could really help with peoples lives. Not even the bad emotions if you are happy or exicted it can sense that and something good could happen.\n\nOne reason I believe this would work because there is so much danger and anything can happen and we could use extra protection. But I also feel that it could be more to it then just looking for emotions. Even if they are good emotions there should be something to say or something should light up when the senseor feels that you are happy.\n\nThey should test it out and see how it goes and turns out for some people and if things go good the they should move it to the next step and add audio and see how much it makes a impact on peoples lifes.\n\nAnother reason I feel that it might work is because sensing peoples emotions is great. Peoples emotions shows alot it can say so much about their personality or how they feel about life, it could even gives you signs about that person and could get people aware so they can put thst person in a safe place if they need to. There should also be bounderies because most people arn't gonna want a computer screen or phone screen watching them, their emotions or even listening to them. But to even fix that you could always have were you could turn the senseor on an off just so people could feel more surcure.\n\nOverall my thought about the Facial Action Coding System is great. You can take it so far and you can keep it how it is. Even if graphing shows that people don't like it I still think it is a good idea for me thinking saftey wise.\n\nThats just the people life and you can also take it very far with paintings. I think this idea is a million dollar hit and it should be tested out.",
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"content": "Autonomous cars are making a statement; who wouldn't want to benefit from a self-driving car? Autonomous cars can really change the way of everyday transportation; however, this can also be a bad thing. Changing a part of our daily lives could really be a hassle, but a self-driving car could help in so many different ways. Safety is a key issue here, but autonomous cars are built with safety as the first thing in mind. Techonology and engineering are key to these cars, and we've reached a point in time where almost anything is possible.\n\nI am for the development of autonomous cars. However, I believe they should still require human skills to be driven. Technology fails at times, so that's why I am more for semi-autonomous cars. Humans are capable of so much intelligence, and with modern day technology advancing, semi-autonomous cars can really assist us in our day to day lives. If autonomous cars are a success, there should be restrictions regarding our safety and the safety of others.\n\nSafety is a major concern with cars.\n\nWith normal cars, there have been times where a car company has had to recall certain vehicles with unnoticed, long-term issues. With autonomous cars, car crashes are nonexistent. According to the article, \"Their [Google's] cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" Car crashes are one of the most awful experiences a person could go through. They are life threatening and killer. Car crashes could leave a person in fear of driving or simply sitting in a car. Not one person should have to go through that. It's not easy going through one; with car crashes being minimalized to nothing with autonomous cars, the roads are safer for everyone.\n\nSince technology is improving, autonomous cars are looking better than ever. The technology included in a driverless car is very possible; however, it has not yet happened. Semi-autonomous cars have been a success - they allow easier driving with just as much awareness. Semi-autonomous and autonomous cars have the ability to save thousands of lives every year, maybe millions. Cars are built for a person's safety on the road - autonomous cars are no different.\n\nIn conclusion, I am for autonomous cars. Without a doubt, I trust the idea of semi-autonomous cars more than autonomous cars, however. There are pros and cons to an autonomous car, but an enormous pro of autonomous cars includes the major concern of safety.\n\nAccording to the article, not one crash has happened with independently driving cars. Car crashes are life threatening, and not easy to go through. This is why I am for autonomous cars. More lives can be saved everyday, every month, every year.",
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"content": "In the modern world, technology is part of people’s lives, some people said that the group of techs are recently increasing inequality between wealthy people and poor people but other claims that technology is closing this gap. This essay will examine both sides of the idea and then I will explain my opinion about this.\r\n\r\nThe internet is used by people who can access it. If they do not have any equipment or device, they will separate from the cash flow on the internet. It is true that advanced technologies have affected inequality issues in our society. People may seek their way to wealth creation by using the online network as a tool. For example, online shopping platforms are the popular approach, and they are used by many people all over the world currently such as Lazada, Alibaba, and Shopee. With these things, people could earn more benefits than people who do not have an internet device.\r\n\r\nConversely, The most powerful implement for enhancing somebody’s life is the internet. In the past, specific knowledge or training program was difficult to find and study if you can not afford them but these days they have plenty of courses or syllabus that you can learn on computers which are already connecting the internet signal. They could improve their skills through these invented things and then become skilled labourers which can have high compensation as a result. To illustrate, computer services particularly in schools and universities might be one of the cheapest ways for people who want to develop their financial status. Consequently, the gap between rich people and poor people is decreased by the range of technology.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, both views have their own reason, however, in my opinion, I believe that the internet or many technology devices can close the gap in society. Moreover, this equipment should be provided for everybody by the governments to support them to succeed in a business or affairs and encourage them to improve their life quality.",
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"content": "When there is a decision on if I were to choose driverless cars or not, I am in the middle. I feel this advancement could greatly improve some safty hazards occuring now a days. Even though it may help in some situations, it still leads alot of room for disaster itself.\n\nI feel as though was the driverless car could help is all the drunk drivers. With this advancement drunk drivers wouldn't be as much of a worry. They could get in the car and arrive to their destination as safetly as they would sober. If people were to take these cars we wouldn't have to worry about red lights and the car flying by running the red light about to hit you, or losing as much control. As long as the person in charge of the car can put in the right destination, I don't see why this would be such a problem. I feel the advancment would also lower the rate of texting and driving. Now if someone were to answer the phone or something they don't worry about losing control of what they are doing. The car would keep you on a safe path. The car would know about its surroundings with the spinning sensor they are talkin about. Would be able to keep everyone safe- people inside and outside the car.\n\nEven though this may be very helpful, there are so many things that could go wrong. In the article they mentioned that the person would still need to pay attention, so they could take over at anytime. This could be very dangerous. What if the car notifies you that you need to take control, but there isn't enough time? Then what do you do? The person \"driving\" could also get very sleepy while they just sit there. If the person were to fall asleep and the car is needing them to take control, then they are going to wreck. People not having something to do can be boring and a hazard. You need them 100% focused, but it'll be like school. If they don't have enough entertainment or focus, they will be lost and not know what's going on. Another problem is that the car is all technology. At any minute your car could stop working or have a malfunction just like a smart phone. The car could need you to drive, but the notifier isn't working so you got in an accident. With this you could fight with the manufactutrer saying it's their fault and they think it's yours. This could cause serious arguements amongst people.\n\nI believe there are great advancements that could come from this, but also some major issues. Nothing about this could 100% be safe but could be alittle safer than things right now. Either way this goes weither they make the cars or not, they should know they cacn fix the car all they want, but they can't fix the person \"controling\" it.",
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"content": "Some people still hold belief that attending tertiary path should be a priority way to be successful in career path. However, there is an opinion that entering the work force right after high school is overweight the former. This essay will discuss both prospective career paths and give own opinion\r\n\r\nAfter bachelor degree’s holder, most of people will choose studying further because of it is standing a greater chance of landing a well-earned job. For instance, the academic knowledge not only catch up with working’s speed when you take part in a new working environment, but also gain you more chance to grasp your job. Otherwise, in the first period, dependent economy is a huge problem for student. In addiction the quantities of paying for university is increasing expensive, not including living cost\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, becoming more mature and independent is the most figure of getting a job right after high school option. For example, making new friend or getting on well with other is a priority requirement to have more promotion opportunities. Besides, horning practical skill help the later be more confident to start up their own business. From my view point, they easily archive their target when they try as they can\r\n\r\nTo summarize, I think that the best option is taking the gap year to find themselves and have more experiences in few working year and then turning in the university",
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"content": "venus is\n\na verry interresting planet to explore and study. Its one of the most earthed like planet out there . It has alot of simularities to earth such as being very identical. About the same in shape, and having similar natural erruptions. Its also one that is closest to our sun. Those were some characteristics between the earth and\n\nvenus.\n\nThe planet itself has alot of interresting characteristicks to it. Its true that it features alot of interresting factors, such as extreme wheather, climate change and more. The author said despite the risks to their missions, scientists will\n\nproceed on finding ways to study the planet itself upclose. the results of their experiment could lead to more knowledge about the other planets. The scientists, believes that the planet itself, had a very stable climate simular to earth. They even said venus probably had life on it. But what was puzzling to them was how the climate changed overtime and what happened during a certain perod of time and changed the whole planet to what it is today. The author said in paragraph 7 that nasa was working a vehicule cappable of substaining extreme climates. For now, the climate on venus is not human like environment at all, meaning if we were to explore venus right now, we will\n\nneed a device that will give us the abillity to hover about the clouds of venus. But even this idea required alot of highly developped machines that will be able to substain the cold and the hot temperature of venus. curiosity might lead us into discovering new ways to live and new ideas. This earthed twin planet might not be habitabal now but scientists will find new ways to adjust to the environment and who knows maybe there will be some sort of live on there. maybe some underground alien civilization that could lead to more discovery. venus is also one of the brightest start in our solar system making it even more interresting to study. The earth probably was not habitable several billion years ago. way before there was life on earth, the planet had a very unstable climate that no life could of\n\nendured. most of the planet was filled, with rocks, lava, volcanic erruptions and probably ocean. our planet ened up going through some serious phases to turn out the way it did, but it took billions of years for earth to ajust its climate. The same could be said for venus, maybe one day we might inhabit the planet itself but for now, we have to find ways to overcome the obticles in our way.\n\nNew things are being dicovered all around the world all thanks to curiosity. Some people might find it risky to live the life of a scentist explorer, but I personally think its an awosome job. I would love to explore any new planet because why not and also new dicovery lead to new knowledge so the more you know the better. this article had covered alot that interrested me and also i think its realy worthy pursuiting studies about venus.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is just a natural landform for three reasons, the dust could have blown and made shapes, there could have just been a rock that made or formed the face, and it could have been the fact that that spot could have been oldand started to chip off.\n\nThe first reason, is that the dust could have just been blowing. The planet Mars is a very dusty planet and can be very windy at times. There would not be a chance for aliens to have made the face on Mars. They would have had to of put a lot of work into keeping it stable like that.\n\nMy second reason, is there could have been a rock or multiple rocks that could have made this. It would not be hard to form something like that if just a few rocks fell from somewhere and made a shape. Weird things happen, just because a human did not make it does not mean that an alien did. There is no way an alien would be able to do something like this with nothing to keep all the dust in place. Once again no alien would be able to do that.\n\nMy third reason, is that the spot could have just been getting old. When a spot or rock gets old, it starts to chip and that could have been what happend. Parts of that piece of rock could have started to chip and or wear off. The pieces that were not chipping would start to form a shape from the pieces that were chipping. With that proccess going on that rock or pieces of rock eventually made a face on the planet Mars.\n\nThe Face on planet Mars is seriously just a landform because it could have happened with just dust blowing around, rocks could have hit another rock and made indentions in the rock, or it could have just been that those pieces of rock were getting old and pieces started to chip off. There is no possibility that aliens could have made or formed the face on Mars.",
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"content": "When you join the Seagoing Cowboys, you join a year of adventure. When you join, you get to take care of animals like horses, cattle, and more. Soon enough you'll know everything there is to know about taking care of them like feeding, washing, grooming, and even playing with them. \"It's an oppurtunity of a lifetime.\"\n\nNot only do you get to take care of animals, you get to sight see as well. \"It's an unbelievable oppurtunity for a small-town boy\" says a cowboy named Luke \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,\" he says. So was taking a godola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\" Imagine seeing beautiful cities that you always wanted to see, right in front of your eyes.\n\nAnd finally, when you join, you get to have fun. On board, especially on return trips after animals have been unloaded, the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. You can play table-tennis, fence, box, read, whittle, and other games to pass the time.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy is more than an adventure, it opens the world to you. Luke says. \"I'm grate ful for the oppurtunity, it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" The awareness will stay with you, and you will feel good for the res of your life.",
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"content": "Libraries gateway another world I I want let imagination wander ever pleases Libraries ability take book shelves depending s content We different people nt enjoy kind books Also books needed research Censorship library allowed First many different people world Some people learn people books Imagine white year old boy growing white town Never life seen You go library pick The young boy never introduced racism Books history Books learning Books taken shelf content That content might whole world young child Next libraries used often college students writer papers school Books needed research For example re college student writing research paper abuse including sexual physical mental A young author writes nonfiction novel childhood ranging raped father six years old bullied school After hours searching find local libraries removed book s explicit content College students need books matter re Libraries open people age It understandable twelve year old could easily get hold book inappropriate age level s libraries split sections If find book considered taken shelves nt remove move secure mature area",
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"content": "The face on Mars was not created by aliens. There is no actual proof that aliens even exist there are just theories. The face is just simply a landform. There is no way an alien could have mad the face. The face on mars wasn't made by aliens it was just a natural landform.\n\nThe face wasn't created by aliens. There is no proof aliens exist. If aliens did exist there would be artifacts found by now on Mars to prove that they are real. The pictures on the camera that had been taken had to peer through wispy clouds. So skeptics said that maybe there were alien markings that were covered by the haze around the face. In 2001 when NASA got a bigger and more clear picture scientists said that it was the martian equivalent to a mesa. There is no sign of alien markings at all.\n\nWhat the face really is is a natural landform. From the very first time we saw it scientists have said that it looks just like a natural landform. The only reason people think that the face was made by aliens is because they don't enough about natural landforms and they are ignorant. Jim Garvin the chief scientist at NASA says,\"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" There is even other natural landforms that are similiar to the face which proves it has to be natural.\n\nThe Face on Mars is totally a natural landform and there is no way that it can be made by aliens. After reading this anyone educated will realize that the face was not made aliens because they don't exist. There is proof on Earth of objects similiar to the face on Mars. From a scientific standpoint the object is clarly natural and it's not going to change. There is just to much information and proof that the face is natural and way to little information that there is aliens and that it could have been made by aliens.",
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"content": "The story girl walking home failing driving test breaking home longer lived After broke bought plant learned actually accept fact longer lived Vietnam accepting failed driving test realized learn like She also learned time come one day driving The reason auethor concluded story paragraph conclusion story one realizes important things",
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"content": "I think that you guys should all become a Seagoiing Cowboy with me so than we can adventure the world and ride the waves together.\n\nThis will make it a lot easier to do the job as a Seagoing Cowboy. We will be able to ride the waves together. And have more time to play around and have fun because the job will get done faster then if I am by myself.\n\nAlso I think you should join the program because we can experience the world together and learn new things about being a Seagoing Cowby and new ways to make the job go by faster and so we can have more fun. Then after we find out more ways to do the jobwe can explore the ocean on our way to our destination. There is kinda some flaws because it will almost always smell pretty bad and some days it will take a long time to get the job done. But on the other hand it will be full of fun adventures a long the way with a lot of fun times coming right our way.\n\nThese are all the reasons why I think all of you should become a Seagoing Cowboy. It is also for boys and girls so anyone can come and work with me because the more the better and faster the job will be done.",
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"content": "Imagine seeing a computer telling students how he or she are currently feeling, and then educating them in a way that is engaging far beyond the ability of a human teacher.\n\nThis technology is known as the Facial Action Coding System and as mentioned earlier, has the ability to detect human emotions.\n\nUpon recieving this data, the computers then proceed to modify and execute their lessons based on the student's apparent emotion.\n\nTechnology like this has the potential to change schooling for the better.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System's ability to detect emotions proves that it will be a valuable asset to the everyday classroom.\n\nThe F.A.C.S. system is the latest work of Innovater Professor Huang, and Psychologist Dr. Eckman.\n\nThey recreated a three-dimensional face model to move as a human face would with its forty-four muscles.\n\nUsing these, they classified six emotions including joy, fear, sadness, anger, disgust, and surprise.\n\nUsing the model, the software is able to recognize a real human's emotions based off of his or her face.\n\nWhen all was completed, the softwre was then tested as documented in Nick D'Alto's article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\".\n\nHe writes, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nA piece of technology recognizing one's current emotions is indeed valuable whether in or out of the classroom.\n\nOne perk of the F.A.C.S is that it is able to modify itself based on recognized emotions.\n\nAfter completing the software, Dr. Huang predicts that, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\n\nThen it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nDr. Huang believes that his software will effectively teach children based off their emotions, which has the potential to be incredible.\n\nIn addition D'Alto writes, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad.\n\nFor example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\n\nBut if you frown, the next ad will be different.\"\n\nA self modifying system created for the benefit of one is truly a useful and valuable technology.\n\nAnother perk of the software is detecting false emotions, as well as genuine ones.\n\nD'Alto writes, \"in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways uusing the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\n\nTo an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\n\nImagine an accessible software able to detect one's direction of their true intentions.\n\nThis would become a valuable tool used to better the future of an organization, especially if the ordeal considered one who can potentially become empowered by others view and opinions on them.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is an interseting technology that can immensely affect mankind for the better.\n\nThe software has the ability to detect genuine emotions and fake emotions.\n\nThe system can also express recognized faces in percentages that are accurate to the subject's true emotions.\n\nFinally, it also has the ability to change its manner and technique to one's liking, based off of recognized emotions.\n\nThese abilities prove that the F.A.C.S. would be valuable in a classroom, as well as society.",
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"content": "Preservation of the Mother Nature is everyone's obligation. Because of the ruthless human acts, devastating threats to the natural environment are looming around. Although the surge in supply and demand of products has enormous lethal consequences for our surroundings, adequate steps should be taken by the government and individuals to alleviate the issue.\n\nIt is irrefutable that high production leads to a polluted environment. The primary cause behind this is the abundant availability of resources that is causing over-consumption and reckless utilization of goods and materials. Consequently, the over-exploitation of natural resources is impacting natural habitat remarkedly. For example, deforestation is an excellent example to comprehend the impact of production on the planet because tree cutting is precipitously to manufacture papers in bulk.\n\nBesides this, the ever-growing population is another factor that is impacting our planet negatively. With the surge in the populace, there is an increase in industrialisation and manufacturing plants to fulfil the requirements of the general population. This in turn causes abundant air and water pollution as these plants are dumping their waste into oceans and air. For instance, due to inadequate waste management, the plastic factory in Delhi has polluted the local rivers remarkedly that no marine life survived there.\n\nDue to these devastating impacts of high production on surroundings, adequate approaches should be taken to ameliorate the plight of natural habitats. Enforcing strict laws and regulations against the over-exploitation of natural resources to increase the supply of materials to consumers can tackle this unpleasant situation to a great extent. These laws would deter entrepreneurs from harming the environment and the wastage of harmful products should be diminished.\n\nTo conclude, although the supply of extensive resources and growing population are the main causes behind the harmful impacts on Mother Nature, imposing stricter regulations can control the harm remarkedly.",
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"content": "It is believed by some people that driving vehicles are the first choice when they go out. Others, on the contrary, think that riding bicycles are prioritised. This essay will introduce reasons of the trend and give my opinions.\r\nTravelling by bikes have two advantages.Firstly,it is good for our health. The bicycle is an environment-friendly transportation as it never needs fuel, which causes no pollutants in the air. As the result, the risk of several diseases may be decreased. Secondly, Riding bicycles will save time in short distance route. There are always a large number of vehicles on the roads, especially during the rush hours in the big cities such as New York and Beijing. Instead of driving cars, riding bikes significantly reduce the traffic congestion and help residents save a lot of time in commuting.\r\nIt is also reasonable as why cars are popular in some cities. It is widely known that driving is more efficient, particularly in long distance journey. Nowadays, more and more people would like to broaden views and explore new things by tourism. Comparing with the bikes, cars which do not require a lot of energy from travellers and are much faster can save a lot of time and give explorers more opportunities to views more places and scenery. \r\nIn conclusion, in my mind, both approaches have their own pros and cons. There is no good or bad choice, It all depends on personal preference. Cycling can not only curb the carbon emissions but also help people in keeping both physical and mental health. Meanwhile, cars, in developing countries, can give people higher social status and provide a more efficient way for people to achieve the destination.",
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"content": "In modernized world computers key They offer many benefits enclude communication enterntainment education These benefits positive effects people throughout world I support advances technology Communication large benifit computers Whether keeping touch friends organizing business meetings computer offer large amount aid With modern technology provided computer people instantly send messages coworkers friends matter seconds In cases businesses completly relie computer function example conversation people accross globe discuss going expand internationaly Computers greatly necessary people communicate enable people make plans simply effectively The computer also supplies endless source entertainment With internet computer provides users websites enable talk friends watch videos play games The computer provides relaxing way enjoy late night rainyday The computer enables people stay entertained relaxed needed The important function computer education The computer supplies user student wide variety information The computer aids user vast information every subject topic brought class room It comes useful research projects even learning another language The computer beneficail ti comes education The computer technology come make daily life simple It come incorperated almost daily task occur day It would unjust stop advancing technological wonder The computer technology greatly benifits communication entertainment even education",
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"content": "What would be the impact of emotional recognition software in society? For educational purposes, analysis shows that students who are more interested in what they are learning will do better in that class. So if we could figure out if students are enjoying class they will do better. This technology may also change the way we buy things, based off of exosure to advertisements. I believe that using this technology is an all around good thing.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang, of The Beckman institute, and with Prof. Nicu Sibe of the University of Amsterdam, both experts in their fields, are working to better the relationships between computers and humans. They are developing software that can detect emotions expressed through facial features. This technology can be used in schools to detect how students feel about their classes. Each year many students fail classes purely because the class is boring to them. If the software detects that a student is broed in class, then the instructer can change the corriculum to make it more interesting or involving for the students.\n\nThis facial recognition technology can be used for the market of consumers also. If a consumer is presented with an ad that makes them smile, it would be smart to show them more ads like that one. This will increase the expose of ads that make the consumer happy, thus prompting the consumer to perhaps purchase the product that they smiled at. This would not only benifit the consumer by recieving products they enjoy, but it would benefit the producer of the produst by making a profit off of the consumer.\n\nThis is why emotional recognition technology is benefitial to the general society. It is able to beefit schools and education, and it is able to benefit companies selling products. This techology is the next step in developing a more educated and connected society. So why not further pursue the development and evolution of this software.",
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