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Dragger technology was first introduced in Eastern Canada in the late 1890s. Fishers at that time believed the technology would eventually destroy fish stocks, and negatively impact the inshore fishery.
The Royal Commission of 1928 had predicted that draggers would `destroy the spawn of cod and haddock ...destroy the feed grounds ...take large quantities of im-mature and unmarketable fish’ and glut the market, making it impossible for inshore fishers to dispose of their catches. The fact that the eventual outcome of dragger technology had been predicted 70 years ago makes today’s crisis even more of a tragedy.
Nevertheless, the dragger technology was adopted after the Second World War. It was designed to enable the pursuit of a mobile offshore fishery, and to allow for the possibility of greater exploitation of fish stocks on a year-round basis.
Modern draggers, large boats with a capacity of up to about 300,000 lb of fish, are primarily owned by corporations such as National Sea. The fishing technique employed is called otter trawling or dragging, and involves towing huge nets attached to the boat by cables across the seabed. Large metal squares, called otter boards, weighing up to five tonnes each, keep the mouth of the net open.
The otter boards drag along the bottom, smoothening the way for the gear while also channelling the fish into the mouth of the net. Once a school of fish is trapped between the huge otter boards, escape is unlikely. This type of gear is unselective, both in relation to the size of fish caught and the mix of species.
>From the perspective of the owners, this gear is considered to be economically viable because it allows exploitation of large volumes of fish in a relatively short period of time.
In the winter dragger fishery of the northern cod, for instance, the four main spawning grounds of this stock are fished. During spawning, fish mass together by the thousands. This presents an ideal opportunity to catch most fish at low cost and effort.
The dragger fishery employs a broad range of modern fish-finding aids, such as sonar, and captains have access to a wide range of scientific information. Dragger fishery no longer involves uncertainty. As one observer says, we now have the technological capacity to track down the last fish in the ocean.
It has been pointed out that bottom dragging can damage the young of the target species. It can also decrease the survival rate of eggs by dislodging and destroying them. Once detached, the eggs become food for a broader range of predators.
Dragging also affects by-catch species and the benthic habitat. By-catch refers to anything living that gets caught and destroyed in the process of dragging for a target species. Since draggers scoop up thousands of pounds of fish at a time, all of them under phenomenal pressure, nothing survives.
As of today, thanks to draggers, 17 of 20 Newfoundland groundfish species have a lower biomass than is normal, with a dozen of them having the lowest biomass ever recorded. The only problem that corporations, government officials and scientists openly admit is that of unwanted by-catches and immature fish.
Two techniques, also destructive, are commonly used by draggers to offset the few government regulations that exist i.e. high-grading at sea and using smaller mesh liners in the cod end. The process of high-grading refers to the illegal discard of valueless immature fish that are supposed to count against a boat’s quota.
Peculiarly, stock assessments by scientists are based on the catches of the dragger fleet plus two annual DFO surveys. Rather than judge the health of the stock by natural migratory patterns, it has been judged by the volume of the dragger catch. Since tracking and catching technologies are so sophisticated, this in not an accurate picture of what is truly available.
Dragging, or trawling as it is often referred to, is clearly a highly destructive technology. It is also non-selective, since, in addition to the targeted species, a large number of other species are also caught and then discarded. This technology has enabled large corporations to increase fish catches and rake in huge profits in the short-run. But the effect on fish resources and on coastal populations dependent on fisheries has been disastrous and several commercial stocks are showing unmistakable signs of overexploitation. With this, the livelihood of small-scale fishworkers is under threat. They are being forced to bear the consequences of the irresponsible actions of others. Little wonder, then, that small-scale fishworkers all over the world, as in Canada, Indonesia and India, have been protesting the activities of trawlers. They stress that trawling activities have contributed to depletion of marine resources. They also point out that trawlers not only compete with the small-scale fleet over increasingly scarce resources, they also compete with it over space. Trawlers often fish in the productive inshore waters, areas traditionally fished by the artisanal sector. In the process they destroy the nets and equipment of the smaller boats. Conflicts with trawlers over space have erupted in different parts of the world, leading to demands for the reservation of inshore waters for the artisanal fleet. As the crisis in the fishery sector deepens, there is an urgent need to move towards selective and ecologically sustainable fishing technologies.
Articles and files
SILK, Vicky, Canadian Oceans Caucus, Dragging women through suffering in. Samudra Report, 1994/02, 9
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Old Earth Ministries Online Dinosaur Curriculum
Free online curriculum for homeschools and private schools
From Old Earth Ministries (We Believe in an Old Earth...and God!)
NOTE: If you found this page through a search engine, please visit the intro page first.
Lesson 11 - Carnotaurus
Carnotaurus, meaning "meat (eating)-bull", referring to its distinct bull-like horns (Latin carne = flesh + Greek tauros = bull) was a large predatory dinosaur, with horns vaguely resembling a bull's. Only one species, Carnotaurus sastrei has been described so far.
Carnotaurus lived in Patagonia, Argentina (La Colonia Formation) during the Late Albian and Cenomanian stage of the Cretaceous, and was discovered by José F. Bonaparte, who has uncovered many other South American dinosaurs.
Length: 25 feet
Height: 13 feet at hips
Weight: 5,800 lbs
Date Range: 100 Ma, Albian-Cenomanian Age, Cretaceous Period
|Skeleton, Natural History Museum, London
Carnotaurus was a large theropod, about 7.6 m (25 ft) in length, with weights varying between 1,488 kg and 2,626 kg (1.6-2.9 short tons), depending on the individual. The most distinctive features of Carnotaurus are the two thick horns above the eyes, and the extremely reduced forelimbs with four basic digits, though only the middle two of these ended in finger bones, while the fourth was splint-like and may have represented an external 'spur.' The fingers themselves were fused and immobile, and lacked claws. It is also characterized by its unusually long neck (compared to other abelisaurs), and its small head with box-shaped jaws. The eyes of Carnotaurus faced forward, which is unusual in a dinosaur, and may indicate binocular vision and depth perception.
There is a rather puzzling contrast between Carnotaurus’ deep, robust-looking skull and its shallow, slender lower jaw. So far no-one has worked out what this might imply about its methods of feeding.
A single nearly complete skeleton has been described including impressions of skin along almost the entire right side, that show Carnotaurus lacked feathers, unlike the more advanced coelurosaurian theropods. Instead, the skin is lined with rows of bumps, which become larger toward the spine.
The type species Carnotaurus sastrei is the only known species. Its closest relatives include Aucasaurus (Argentina), Majungasaurus (Madagascar), and Rajasaurus (India). Together, these dinosaurs form the subfamily Carnotaurinae in the family Abelisauridae. Among the carnotaurines, Carnotaurus is most closely related to Aucasaurus, and together these two genera form the tribe Carnotaurini.
Aucasaurus was a medium-sized theropod dinosaur from Argentina that lived during the Santonian stage (Anacleto Formation). It was smaller than the related Carnotaurus, although more derived in some ways, such as its extremely reduced arms and almost total lack of fingers. The type skeleton is complete to the thirteenth caudal vertebra, and so is relatively well understood, and is the most complete abelisaurid yet described. However, the skull is damaged, causing some paleontologists to speculate that it was involved in a fight shortly prior to death.
Rajasaurus (meaning "prince" or "princely lizard") is a carnivorous abelisaurian
Rajasaurus was an abelisaurid, a member of a group of theropod predators known to have lived only on landmasses that were part of the supercontinent Gondwana, such as Africa, India, Madagascar, and South America. Rajasaurus is distinguished from other genera by its single nasal-frontal horn, the proportions of its supratemporal fenestrae (holes in the upper rear of the skull), and the form of the ilia (principle bones of the hip).
In Popular Culture
Since the mid-1990s, Carnotaurus has been featured occasionally in the popular media. One of its earliest prominent roles in fiction was the 1995 sequel to Jurassic Park, Michael Crichton's The Lost World. In the novel, Carnotaurus was portrayed as having the (completely fictional) ability to change its color to blend into the background, like a chameleon or a cuttlefish. While it did not appear in the 1997 film adaptation of the novel, Carnotaurus subsequently appeared in numerous tie-ins to the Jurassic Park franchise, including several video games. Another prominent movie role for Carnotaurus came with the 2000 Walt Disney animated film Dinosaur, which featured two Carnotaurus attacking a large herd of herbivorous dinosaurs. The Carnotaurus in the film were much larger than the real life animal, scaled up to proportions more closely resembling the giant theropod Tyrannosaurus. In reality, Carnotaurus was even smaller than Iguanodon, the main dinosaur featured in the Disney picture. A Dinosaur thrill ride at Disney's Animal Kingdom Park at Walt Disney World, also features audio-animatronics of a Carnotaurus, in addition to a cast of other dinosaurs.
Return to the Old Earth Ministries Online Dinosaur Curriculum homepage.
Bay State Replicas - 1/4th scale Carnotaur skull
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Magic is a means by which human beings manipulate deity to obtain a benefit; the appropriate formula and substance (metal or animal, etc.) is essential, otherwise disaster may ensue. There are stories in both OT and NT which approximate to magic, where physical contact with a man of God acted as the channel for power from God to people—e.g. Elijah healed the son of the widow of Zarephath by lying on the child three times (1 Kgs. 17: 17–24). Or the contact may be quite indirect—Paul's handkerchiefs (Acts 19: 11–12) or Peter's shadow (Acts 5: 15).
Related to magic is divination—a non‐rational process for learning about the future.
It was held among Hebrews that God revealed the future by dreams or by Urim and Thummim (Exod. 28: 30) or through calling up the dead (1 Sam. 28). King Joash expected a victory in the light of the flight of an arrow (2 Kgs. 13: 18). Nevertheless magic and divination were condemned (e.g. by Isa. 8: 19) for we do not need such intermediaries between us and God (Jer. 27: 9). The condemnation is reaffirmed in the NT (Acts 8: 9–24).
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The YouTube Application Programming Interface (YouTube API) allows developers to access video statistics and YouTube channels data via two types of calls, REST and XML-RPC. Google describe YouTube's API resources as "APIs and Tools that let you bring the YouTube experience to your webpage, application or device."
The Players and Player APIs section identifies ways you can let your users watch YouTube videos in your application and control the playback experience. With an embedded YouTube player, you can integrate the YouTube video playback experience directly in your web page or application. You can use player parameters to customize the player's appearance, and you can also use Player APIs to control the player directly from your web page or app.
The minimum version supported of Android for the most recent versions of the API's is currently version 2.2. The Android device must be running the YouTube app version 4.2.16. Then using a web key, it is possible to use Googles API's through a developer enabled Android phone.
Using the iOS versions of the APIs is very similar to the Android explanation. However it involves using the Google Cloud Console. From there you are able to control the APIs and set up the APIs to work with your videos. You will also need a Client ID and a Client Secret; which can both be downloaded from Google's API Site. After this, it is a simple process of running the sample and the APIs should then be properly integrated.
Other APIs include resources that can be implemented into a 3rd party website. These are the usual social network integrated APIs that we regularly come across such as the Facebook like button or the Twitter follow button. YouTube widget APIs include:
The Data and Analytics APIs section briefly describes APIs that let your application access features and data normally available on the YouTube website.
The YouTube Data API (v3) lets you incorporate YouTube functionality into your own application. You can use the API to fetch search results and to retrieve, insert, update, and delete resources like videos or playlists.
In conjunction with the YouTube Player APIs and the YouTube Analytics API, the API lets your application provide a full-fledged YouTube experience that includes search and discovery, content creation, video playback, account management, and viewer statistics.
|youtube.activities.insert||Posts a bulletin for a specific channel. (The user submitting the request must be authorized to act on the channel's behalf.)
Note: Even though an activity resource can contain information about actions like a user rating a video or marking a video as a favorite, you need to use other API methods to generate those activity resources. For example, you would use the API's videos.rate() method to rate a video and the playlistItems.insert() method to mark a video as a favorite.
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|youtube.channelBanners.insert||Uploads a channel banner image to YouTube. This method represents the first two steps in a three-step process to update the banner image for a channel:
- Call the channelBanners.insert method to upload the binary image data to YouTube. The image must have a 16:9 aspect ratio and be at least 2120x1192 pixels. - Extract the url property's value from the response that the API returns for step 1. - Call the channels.update method to update the channel's branding settings. Set the brandingSettings.image.bannerExternalUrl property's value to the URL obtained in step 2.
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|youtube.channels.update||Updates a channel's metadata.|
|youtube.guideCategories.list||Returns a list of categories that can be associated with YouTube channels.|
|youtube.i18nLanguages.list||Returns a list of supported languages.|
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|youtube.liveBroadcasts.control||Controls the settings for a slate that can be displayed in the broadcast stream.|
|youtube.liveBroadcasts.delete||Deletes a broadcast.|
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|youtube.liveBroadcasts.list||Returns a list of YouTube broadcasts that match the API request parameters.|
|youtube.liveBroadcasts.transition||Changes the status of a YouTube live broadcast and initiates any processes associated with the new status. For example, when you transition a broadcast's status to testing, YouTube starts to transmit video to that broadcast's monitor stream. Before calling this method, you should confirm that the value of the status.streamStatus property for the stream bound to your broadcast is active.|
|youtube.liveBroadcasts.update||Updates a broadcast. For example, you could modify the broadcast settings defined in the liveBroadcast resource's contentDetails object.|
|youtube.liveStreams.delete||Deletes a video stream.|
|youtube.liveStreams.insert||Creates a video stream. The stream enables you to send your video to YouTube, which can then broadcast the video to your audience.|
|youtube.liveStreams.list||Returns a list of video streams that match the API request parameters.|
|youtube.liveStreams.update||Updates a video stream. If the properties that you want to change cannot be updated, then you need to create a new stream with the proper settings.|
|youtube.playlistItems.delete||Deletes a playlist item.|
|youtube.playlistItems.insert||Adds a resource to a playlist.|
|youtube.playlistItems.list||Returns a collection of playlist items that match the API request parameters. You can retrieve all of the playlist items in a specified playlist or retrieve one or more playlist items by their unique IDs.|
|youtube.playlistItems.update||Modifies a playlist item. For example, you could update the item's position in the playlist.|
|youtube.playlists.delete||Deletes a playlist.|
|youtube.playlists.insert||Creates a playlist.|
|youtube.playlists.list||Returns a collection of playlists that match the API request parameters. For example, you can retrieve all playlists that the authenticated user owns, or you can retrieve one or more playlists by their unique IDs.|
|youtube.playlists.update||Modifies a playlist. For example, you could change a playlist's title, description, or privacy status.|
|youtube.search.list||Returns a collection of search results that match the query parameters specified in the API request. By default, a search result set identifies matching video, channel, and playlist resources, but you can also configure queries to only retrieve a specific type of resource.|
|youtube.subscriptions.delete||Deletes a subscription.|
|youtube.subscriptions.insert||Adds a subscription for the authenticated user's channel.|
|youtube.subscriptions.list||Returns subscription resources that match the API request criteria.|
|youtube.thumbnails.set||Uploads a custom video thumbnail to YouTube and sets it for a video.|
|youtube.videoCategories.list||Returns a list of categories that can be associated with YouTube videos.|
|youtube.videos.delete||Deletes a YouTube video.|
|youtube.videos.getRating||Retrieves the ratings that the authorized user gave to a list of specified videos.|
|youtube.videos.insert||Uploads a video to YouTube and optionally sets the video's metadata.|
|youtube.videos.list||Returns a list of videos that match the API request parameters.|
|youtube.videos.rate||Add a like or dislike rating to a video or remove a rating from a video.|
|youtube.videos.update||Updates a video's metadata.|
|youtube.watermarks.set||Uploads a watermark image to YouTube and sets it for a channel.|
|youtube.watermarks.unset||Deletes a watermark.|
The Buttons, Widgets, and Tools section describes other tools you can use to add YouTube functionality to your app or to test YouTube APIs.
To use YouTube's API, a developer must acquire a Developer ID - this is an additional property that is attached to the developer's YouTube account. The information that is available to developers is similar to the information that can be acquired by accessing YouTube's many RSS feeds. Since the integration of Google and YouTube it is possible to log into YouTube using an existing Google account. An easy to use tutorial can be found as a YouTube video.
The API's have since been extended and are now compatible with many mobile operating platforms such as Android and iOS. Quite obviously the Android API's are more complete with the iOS resources somewhat lacking. A list of this API's available for both platforms are below:
Other YouTube API's (the traditional API's) include:
A great advantage of using YouTube's API's is that 3rd party companies are able to arrange pay per click coupled with advertising for your videos. This allows the video uploader to receive money for the work they have put into their videos. YouTube API's also allow a tighter integration of the video service into a 3rd party website. This essentially means that the user does not need to click a link to go to the YouTube video. Instead, they are able to view the video in the same page that they are visiting. Another advantage of using the YouTube APIs is that it is easier to select the specific data and videos to be stored on a 3rd party site.
During a period that included March 2006, API calls from Flash were disabled due to security concerns. These, however, have since been re-enabled.
There are also problems currently (October 2014) with the orientation on Android devices. Even by adding the fullscreen to the AndroidManifest, it still does not load properly in the correct full screen orientation.
YouTube also does not allow videos to run whilst the Android device is sleeping. This can be seen as an annoyance for some users. Particularly if the user is trying to use YouTube as a replacement music player.
Quotas limit the activity of some users
Overall, the YouTube API's help the user with certain pieces of code. If the code snippet is already present, there is no need for each user to recreate this code as it has been supplied by YouTube themselves.
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a reply; answer.
a reply to an answer.
Law. the reply of the plaintiff or complainant to the defendant’s plea or answer.
the act or process of replicating, especially for experimental purposes.
Genetics. the process by which double-stranded DNA makes copies of itself, each strand, as it separates, synthesizing a complementary strand.
a reply or response
(law) (formerly) the plaintiff’s reply to a defendant’s answer or plea
(biology) the production of exact copies of complex molecules, such as DNA molecules, that occurs during growth of living organisms
repetition of a procedure, such as a scientific experiment, in order to reduce errors
a less common word for replica
replication rep·li·ca·tion (rěp’lĭ-kā’shən)
The act or process of duplicating or reproducing something.
Creating and maintaining a duplicate copy of a database or file system on a different computer, typically a server. The term usually implies the intelligent copying of parts of the source database which have changed since the last replication with the destination.
Replication may be one-way or two-way. Two-way replication is much more complicated because of the possibility that a replicated object may have been updated differently in the two locations in which case some method is needed to reconcile the different versions.
For example, Lotus Notes can automatically distribute document databases across telecommunications networks. Notes supports a wide range of network protocols including X25 and Internet TCP/IP.
Compare mirror. See also rdist.
adjective 1. characterized by or capable of replication, especially of an experiment.
replicator rep·li·ca·tor (rěp’lĭ-kā’tər) n. The site on a bacterial genome where replication begins. Any construct that acts to produce copies of itself; this could be a living organism, an idea (see meme), a program (see quine, worm, wabbit, fork bomb, and virus), a pattern in a cellular automaton (see life), or (speculatively) a robot or […]
noun, Genetics. 1. any genetic element that can regulate and effect its own replication from initiation to completion. noun 1. (genetics) a region of a DNA molecule that is replicated from a single origin replicon rep·li·con (rěp’lĭ-kŏn’) n. A genetic element that undergoes replication as an autonomous unit.
verb (used without object), replied, replying. 1. to make answer in words or writing; answer; respond: to reply to a question. 2. to respond by some action, performance, etc.: to reply to the enemy’s fire. 3. to return a sound; echo; resound. 4. Law. to answer a defendant’s plea. verb (used with object), replied, replying. […]
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Table of Contents Copyright Dedication Contents Introduction Part One: The Essentials Chapter 1: Add Heart to Your Writing One Message at a Time Chapter 2: Protect Your Relationships by Avoiding Bad Email Behaviors Part Two: The Opportunities — Powerful Messages That Often Get Overlooked Chapter 3: Write Mighty Thank-Yous Chapter 4: Give Positive, Powerful Feedback Chapter 5: Send Congratulations to Warm Hearts and Build Relationships Chapter 6: Convey Condolences to Connect With Others Chapter 7: Personal Introductions: Pave the Way to New Relationships Chapter 8: In Your Job Search: Write Messages That Build Relationships and Create Opportunities Chapter 9: Send Meaningful Christmas, Chanukah, and New Year’s Greetings Part Three: The Challenges — Messages That Can Make (or Break) Relationships Chapter 10: Write Apologies to Mend Fences and Support Relationships Chapter 11: Share Bad News Without Fostering Bad Feelings Chapter 12: Say No Clearly and Courageously Chapter 13: Disagree With Discretion, Not Destruction Chapter 14: Remind People Without Nagging or Whining Chapter 15: Deal With Anger (Yours and Theirs) to Preserve Relationships — or End Them Well Chapter 16: Share Constructive Feedback to Improve Performance — and Relationships Chapter 17: Communicate Around the Globe With Courtesy and Wisdom Part Four: Take Action Chapter 18: Create Your Action Plan for Building Relationships One Message at a Time For Your Reference Recommended Resources: Learn More About Building Relationships Ways to Render Names and Titles in Greetings and on Envelopes Greetings (Salutations) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Text Messages Complimentary Closes (Sign-Offs) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Texts Acknowledgments About the Author
Copyrighted Material Business Writing With Heart: How to Build Great Work Relationships One Message at a Time Copyright © 2014 by Lynn Gaertner-Johnston. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted, in any form or by any means — electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise — without prior written permission from the publisher, except for the inclusion of brief quotations in a review. For information about this title or to order other books and/or electronic media, contact the publisher: Syntax Training LLC 7332 16th Avenue NW, Seattle, Washington 98117-5415 www.syntaxtraining.com [email protected]
Library of Congress Control Number: 2013952284 ISBNs: 978-0-9778679-0-5 (print) 978-0-9778679-1-2 (eBooks) Printed in the United States of America
To my parents, Ed and Louise Gaertner, who live on in my heart
Contents Introduction PART ONE: The Essentials CHAPTER 1: Add Heart to Your Writing One Message at a Time CHAPTER 2: Protect Your Relationships by Avoiding Bad Email Behaviors
PART TWO: The Opportunities — Powerful Messages That Often Get Overlooked CHAPTER 3: Write Mighty Thank-Yous CHAPTER 4: Give Positive, Powerful Feedback CHAPTER 5: Send Congratulations to Warm Hearts and Build Relationships CHAPTER 6: Convey Condolences to Connect With Others CHAPTER 7: Personal Introductions: Pave the Way to New Relationships CHAPTER 8: In Your Job Search: Write Messages That Build Relationships and Create Opportunities CHAPTER 9: Send Meaningful Christmas, Chanukah, and New Year’s Greetings
PART THREE: The Challenges — Messages That Can Make (or Break) Relationships CHAPTER 10: Write Apologies to Mend Fences and Support Relationships CHAPTER 11: Share Bad News Without Fostering Bad Feelings CHAPTER 12: Say No Clearly and Courageously CHAPTER 13: Disagree With Discretion, Not Destruction CHAPTER 14: Remind People Without Nagging or Whining CHAPTER 15: Deal With Anger (Yours and Theirs) to Preserve Relationships — or End Them Well CHAPTER 16: Share Constructive Feedback to Improve Performance — and Relationships CHAPTER 17: Communicate Around the Globe With Courtesy and Wisdom
PART FOUR: Take Action CHAPTER 18: Create Your Action Plan for Building Relationships One Message at a Time
For Your Reference Recommended Resources: Learn More About Building Relationships Ways to Render Names and Titles in Greetings and on Envelopes Greetings (Salutations) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Text Messages 7
Complimentary Closes (Sign-Offs) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Texts Acknowledgments About the Author
Introduction When you think of establishing business relationships, what comes to mind? Perhaps you imagine schmoozing at trade shows and conferences or listening attentively to new clients. Maybe you see yourself shaking hands with new employees during their first-day tour or smiling at them in videoconferences. If your business is strictly online, perhaps you envision uploading new-customer offers on your home page. Those are a few easy steps in initiating relationships.
But once begun, the challenge is building and maintaining those bonds. How do you maintain individual relationships with coworkers, employees, customers, industry peers, donors, board members, citizens, and others? How do you protect professional relationships from fading due to lack of attention or cracking under fast-paced, highpressured communication? How can you cultivate relationships to support your success and gain a competitive advantage? The answer to those questions is the promise of this book: You can build and maintain great work relationships one message at a time, by writing with heart — that is, with respect and positive intent, using language that makes those feelings clear. More than ever before, writing is the lifeblood of business relationships. If you are like most professionals, you email or text more than you talk on the phone or meet in person. You may have long-distance relationships with people you never meet and rarely speak to, although you write to one another regularly. You may email or IM (instant message) people who work in the next building (or even the next cubicle), rather than walk over to talk with them. Even if you do meet with colleagues, customers, and clients, written messages are likely to keep you connected between meetings. With this focus on writing comes much risk to relationships. It’s very easy to derail work relationships by what we say and how we say it. Hastily written messages, cryptic brevity, clumsy wording, boilerplate language — even punctuation — can unintentionally send the wrong message. After all, readers can’t see your sincerity and good intentions on the page or screen. And as a writer, you unfortunately can’t see their puzzled or frowning 9
faces to instantly fix the situation. Applying the lessons of this book, you will be able to minimize writing risks and protect your professional relationships. You will not come across like a soulless suit, a beleaguered or bullying bureaucrat, a self-effacing shadow, a saccharine adolescent, or a [fill in the blank with your fear about undermining your relationships]. Instead, you will be able to communicate authentically and considerately with people in writing, even in awkward and challenging situations. Business Writing With Heart is for you if you want to build and sustain your business relationships while meeting the challenges of high-speed, high-demand communication. It shows you how to write relationship-building messages rather than relationship-neutral ones. It gives you concrete tips and examples to help you in your work in any industry, from high tech to nonprofits, from manufacturing to government, from finance to consulting to education. No matter what your job is, if your work involves relationships and the communication challenges that flow naturally from them, this book helps you meet those challenges. Whether you are a corporate communications specialist, an administrative assistant, a vice president, a human resources manager, a sales or customer-service rep, a team leader, a teacher, a contractor, a consultant, an entrepreneur, or another type of professional, you will find the right words and messages in this book to create win-win communications. If you don’t have a job because you are self-employed or between positions, Business Writing With Heart helps you connect with people in positive, natural ways that lead to sales, contracts, interviews, and job opportunities. With clear sample messages, before-and-after examples, easy-to-apply dos, emphatic don’ts, and memorable stories, Business Writing With Heart helps you: Add heart to your messages so they intentionally nurture rather than unintentionally ruin your relationships. Send brief messages that come across as efficient yet friendly — not brusque and thoughtless. Cultivate relationships with thank-yous, congratulations, positive feedback, and condolences that sound sincere instead of smarmy. Avoid unconscious email habits that injure and end relationships. Choose the perfect words and tone to communicate bad news without fostering bad feelings. Disagree without destroying initiative and damaging relationships. Give constructive feedback to improve performance and reinforce relationships rather than make everyone feel embarrassed and defensive. Stay connected during your job search without feeling like a bother. Say no clearly, courageously, and courteously, without guilt or foot-dragging. Apologize in a way that redeems a situation and makes everyone feel better. Deal diplomatically with angry messages and transform your own anger rather than enlist in a verbal war. 10
Choose warm yet professional ways to begin and end your letters and emails. (Hint: You don’t need to use !!!! and xxoo.) Send holiday messages that strengthen your business relationships rather than spam your contacts. Write quick, thoughtful messages that introduce others, enhancing your network and expanding theirs. Build productive, respectful partnerships — not strained, unsettling relationships — with associates around the globe. People around the world inspired me to write this book. They asked thorny questions on my blog, such as “How do I deal with a peer who criticizes me in an email and copies other people?” They brought their people issues to my business writing classes, things like “Should I refer to my female coworkers as ladies, women, or girls?” They emailed me in search of solutions to relationship challenges and opportunities at work, for instance, “What can I do to develop real relationships with people I meet at professional conferences?” Business Writing With Heart offers something for all of them — and for you. Follow this roadmap for ways to build your business relationships and solve communication problems that threaten them: 1. Read Part One, The Essentials. It gives you immediate writing tools and tips that reinforce relationships and reduce misunderstandings. It also cautions you about the huge relationship dangers that lurk in email for unsuspecting users. 2. Dive into one or more chapters in Part Two, The Opportunities. The often overlooked messages covered in these chapters can jump-start and supercharge your relationships. Just follow the expert guidelines. Your personal introductions, thankyous, congratulations, condolences, positive feedback, and holiday greetings will immediately take your relationships to the next level. In a job search, your updates and other networking messages will open doors you had not anticipated. 3. Review Part Three, The Challenges, when you face a communication problem. Whether you are challenged with offering an apology, sharing bad news, saying no to a request, disagreeing, reminding someone, dealing with anger (perhaps your own), giving constructive feedback, or communicating with people from other cultures, these chapters give you specific examples and advice to meet the challenge and preserve your relationships. 4. Create an action plan and deepen your understanding in Part Four, Take Action. This section helps you develop an action plan to make relationship-building messages part of your routine, no matter what your profession is. 5. Use For Your Reference when you need more information. Review Recommended Resources when you want to learn more about building and nurturing your work relationships and dealing with relationship difficulties. Use the other 11
reference sections for answers to your questions about rendering names and titles in greetings and on envelopes. You can also find suitable greetings and closes for all your messages, even for complicated situations. The content of Business Writing With Heart helps you with spoken communication too. Although its focus is written messages, the book also provides you with the right words to use in many challenging interpersonal situations such as saying no, disagreeing, dealing with anger and insults, and sharing constructive feedback. It compares effective and ineffective wording, and it gives you neutral I statements to replace you statements that can layer a message with blame and attack. It helps you recognize that words like sweetie and hon can change a communication from friendly to hostile, even when you have good intentions. It includes practical lessons you can apply in all aspects of your life. Business Writing With Heart does not cover the topics of writing clearly, concisely, and correctly. It doesn’t cover grammar, usage, or punctuation. Although those topics are essential to your success as a writer, this guide focuses on writing with a respectful, positive intent and using tools to communicate that intent unerringly. Many of the communication principles and methods I advocate in Business Writing With Heart apply around the globe. However, most of my experience has been in building business relationships with people in the United States and Canada by writing with heart. How I Learned About Writing With Heart Over 20 years ago, I began working as a career counselor with a large outplacement firm. My job was to help people bounce back from a job layoff, hone their job-search skills, and find a new career or position. It included helping them to improve their cover letters and resumes. Maybe because I was new to this work and was coaching people at a higher job level than mine — managers, directors, and vice presidents — I was trying hard to prove myself. To show that I knew what I was doing, I made extensive written comments on what needed to change in clients’ resumes and letters, from punctuation to sentence length to content. Then somewhere on the page, I would jot a positive but general remark like “Good job.” My barrage of constructive comments was not intentionally heartless. But as I wrote suggestions and corrections, I was oblivious to the damage they could do to newly out-ofwork executives. I soon recognized that something was wrong with my approach. I noticed that clients would blanch when they saw the annotated pages I pulled out of their folders. I observed that they would appear resigned and deflated. And it was obvious that I was doing something wrong when executives would argue with seemingly every point I made. I quickly tried new strategies, many of which appear in this book. Sometimes I balanced my positive and constructive comments, making sure that both were specific. At other times, I wrote only positive comments on resumes and talked through those points one by one. Then I would use supportive language, such as, “Let’s make sure every entry here presents you as positively as possible,” to talk the client through the areas to improve. Sometimes I wrote no comments at all (although I had made private notes to myself), and the client and I would review the resume or letter line by line together, citing both what 12
was strong and what needed additional oomph. When I added or changed punctuation, I described it as “helping the reader get the point quickly” rather than as “correcting a punctuation error.” My new ways of communicating led to much better results and excellent relationships with clients, whose responses to my feedback were markedly more positive. They sat up straight, and they were animated, engaged in the process, and receptive to feedback. They sought my opinion on a letter rather than bracing to learn my reaction to it. When they incorporated my suggestions in a revision, they admired their handiwork rather than begrudgingly admitting it might be better than the original. They began to seek my input on thank-you letters and ways to handle difficult interview questions, and they talked with me about their interview hits and misses. They saw me as a trusted partner in their job search rather than as a know-it-all taskmaster. I learned a valuable lesson about writing and oral communication at the outplacement firm: If you communicate with care and attention to the feelings of the other person — not just to your own short-term goal or the task at hand — your relationships will be more successful, productive, and satisfying. Since then, I have applied, refined, and expanded the lesson I learned in my work with outplacement clients. I have continued to be sure that what I write (or choose to talk about rather than put in writing) communicates with respect, warmth, and tact. I have learned to write in a way that creates partnerships with others so that I achieve results with people who feel supported rather than in spite of people who feel undermined. Being in business as a consultant has required those communication skills, and I am happy to say that the lessons I have learned have helped my business thrive. This book shares those lessons. My experience suggests that writing with heart yields a positive return on investment (ROI). I believe that communicating with heart leads to new clients, repeat customers, referrals, partnerships, jobs, contracts, and other satisfying business dealings. However, if you would prefer evidence of ROI that is more tangible, consider these hypothetical situations. They deal solely with the investment of time, but you can imagine the investment of other resources.
Writing with heart does require investing time, normally just a few moments or minutes per message. However, that investment saves huge amounts of time, effort, and money that are otherwise required to salvage situations that have suffered because of insensitive communication or no communication at all. But regardless of the savings and other 14
quantifiable benefits, perhaps you, like me, will simply feel great connecting with others in ways that are positive, respectful, and diplomatic. Even with the ROI scenarios, you may feel doubtful about the “heart” and relationship focus of this book. Let’s look at some of your possible reservations. “I am here to work — not to develop relationships.” Effective work relationships help you get your work done, whether you work in a corner office, a cubicle, your car, or your basement. According to social network theorist Karen Stephenson, our informal work relationships are just as important as our dotted-lined reporting relationships at work. In her essay “Trafficking in Trust: The Art and Science of Human Knowledge Networks,” Stephenson wrote, “Knowledge ebbs and flows down hallways, in meetings, and in private conversations inside and outside the office. The key to the way that knowledge travels lies in the relationships that can bypass the standard organization chart. … Relationships are the true medium of knowledge exchange, and trust is the glue that holds them together.” I believe Stephenson’s theory applies not only to employees, but also to consultants, contractors, and others who work on the fringes of companies, and those who work outside organizations. Relationships help. Applying the writing tips and principles in this book helps you build trust and develop valuable work relationships. “I don’t want to be a Pollyanna.” Writing with heart does not require that you be unreasonably or foolishly optimistic, if that’s what “Pollyanna” means to you. It just requires that you communicate with respect and positive intent. When I adjusted my critiques of client resumes and letters at the outplacement firm, I was not a Pollyanna. I simply got better results and developed much better relationships using a balanced approach than a negative one. Is it possible that your results and work relationships would improve if you communicated differently? “This is just a part-time, temporary job, so positive relationships don’t matter to me. I’m just passing through.” All of us are just passing through in one way or another. I worked part-time at the outplacement firm for five years while I developed my business as a trainer and writing consultant, and I worked with most of the clients there for just a few days, weeks, or months. Yet a client with whom I worked briefly on his job-search documents recently referred me to the training manager at the energy company where he now works, and I am teaching writing classes there — 20 years after he and I worked together. If I had regarded myself or my outplacement clients as just passing through and had not taken the time to communicate supportively with them, I would not be enjoying the benefits of long-lasting relationships. “I work alone. I don’t think I need to be concerned about relationships.” You work alone, but do you ever need to rely on other people? Do you ever need a job reference, some quick advice, an introduction to someone, or a bit of information that just one person has? If your answer is yes, work relationships matter to you. 15
“I don’t want to coddle people. They’re adults. Why can’t I just tell it like it is?” Here’s the problem with telling it like it is: If it only includes the negative stuff, people will not listen, as I learned. They will resist, argue, and produce less. If you were giving an employee written feedback on a sales call, for example, even if the employee handled the call badly, she would need to know what she did right as well as what she did wrong. If you focused on only the negative, you would come across as biased and condescending. Why would anyone pay attention to a biased, condescending boss or coworker? As Rick Maurer wrote in Feedback Toolkit: 16 Tools for Better Communication in the Workplace, “Don’t inflict feedback. … Once you exceed what others can handle … you risk never meeting your goals.” “Communicating with heart seems phony.” What is phony about communicating respectfully and positively? If you don’t feel respectful and positive toward people with whom you work, why not act as though you do? That is not phoniness — it is a sincere effort to succeed on the job. Otherwise, your feelings will function as barricades to your success. “Our company culture is to win at all costs. Relationships? We take no prisoners.” Your company may fight to win contracts, cases, clients, and talented employees. But we live in a small world — tomorrow your competitors may be your clients, and your adversaries may be your partners. Winning those clients and partners requires that you have communicated — and continue to communicate — with professionalism, courtesy, and a positive attitude. “I am not a good writer. How can I possibly worry about another thing?” Not to worry! You will find dozens of effective relationship-building messages throughout this book. You can easily adapt those models to your situations. You will also find lists of helpful and harmful expressions to help you choose the right approach to solve many communication problems. And you will have at your fingertips plenty of phrases that transform unintentionally harsh comments into remarks that build goodwill. “We always razz each other. We wouldn’t recognize one another if we were nice!” Communicating with heart is not about being nice. It’s about being strategic. It involves intentionally supporting work relationships rather than weakening them. Give it a chance. Spend a week communicating respectfully and positively with one another in writing and in your spoken interactions. Then look for differences in people’s performance and attitudes. Especially notice people who are new to your group, on the fringes rather than part of the in-crowd, typically the target of the razzing, or in a minority of one kind or another among the group members (gender, race, age, etc.). You may recognize new confidence, participation, and enthusiasm when you limit the teasing and instead focus on supporting and building up your coworkers. “This takes too much time. I am maxed out as it is.” Consider the alternatives. Would you rather invest the minutes upfront to communicate 16
with care and courtesy? Or would you prefer to take hours, days, and weeks later on to resolve conflicts, repair relationships, win back clients, replace staff, and so on? “I need to communicate efficiently. This approach seems complicated.” I show you how to make communicating with heart very efficient, with simple language and small, specific shifts in your writing. Once you get the hang of it, it will take little effort for you to communicate with balance rather than harshness, and sensitivity rather than indifference. This book helps you make relationship-building choices that solve problems rather than create them. “Won’t I be walked on if I come across as nice?” Communicating with heart does not involve being a doormat. It does not mean you will let people walk on you to get where they are going. Writing with heart involves treating others — and yourself — with respect and positive intent to build relationships and get results. It means being smarter about the power of your words. Adding heart to your writing is an advantage, not a risk or a weakness. It helps you communicate politely and powerfully. The positive results of writing with heart increase over time. Since beginning my blog, Business Writing, in 2005, I have earned thousands of fans around the globe who have come to value my thoughtful, relationship-building commentary on business communication. In many years of self-employment, I have developed a long list of repeat clients who think immediately of me when they need to develop better business writers on the job. Why? Because through the emails, letters, referrals, reminders, thank-yous, condolences, congratulations, and holiday greetings they have received from me, they have come to know me well as a reliable, caring business partner. About the Details Throughout the book, you will find examples of relationship-building messages, many that I wrote and some that others contributed. For messages that I wrote as examples, I made up names for the recipients and the senders. If the made-up names match those of real people, the match is coincidental. For messages that others wrote and contributed, I identified the writers by name with their permission. Rather than identify certain companies and organizations, I have used fictional names such as ABC Association, LMNOP Inc., and XYZ Company. These names do not refer to any real alphabet-named organizations. The examples show a variety of ways to format, begin, and end your messages. For guidelines on greetings and closes and rendering people’s names, consult the sections on those topics under For Your Reference. The survey on business writing and relationships, cited throughout the book, included the input of 686 adults working in the United States, most of whom subscribe to my monthly e-newsletter, Better Writing at Work, or read my blog, Business Writing (www.businesswritingblog.com). Each chapter ends with a brief Personal Reflection and Next Step suggestion. They are intended to be painless, practical applications of the chapter content. Use these to move 17
forward, solving communication problems and enhancing your work relationships, one quick step at a time. Keep in Touch! I look forward to hearing your stories about how writing with heart has helped you solve problems and nurture rewarding business relationships. Write to me at [email protected]
Add Heart to Your Writing One Message at a Time I teach business writing to people at all levels in organizations, from vice presidents to mechanics, from auditors to security officers. When security managers and officers attend classes, they stand out — not just for their calm, commanding presence but also for the way they communicate. They write and say things like: Request denied. Negative. Cut the fluff. I want the facts. They don’t have to like it. They just have to do it. When I suggest a more positive approach, they often announce, “I’m ex-military. This is the way we communicate.” If another ex-military individual is in the room, that person nods agreement. When ex-military individuals communicate with others like them, pronouncements like “Request denied” are likely to be clear, effective, and familiar. But when these individuals communicate beyond their group — for instance, to the assistant in accounting or the intern in public relations — “Request denied” comes across as brusque and machinelike — not a communication that builds relationships. Like the military veterans who attend my writing classes, you may say at one time or another, “This is the way I communicate.” But is your way effective? Does it build relationships? Bring in business? Develop new employees? Inspire commitment? Does it have heart? My guess is that if you are reading this chapter, you have acknowledged a need to improve the way you communicate. Maybe you have been told you need to change your tone, or you want to help others make changes. You have already moved from “This is the way I communicate” to “How can I communicate better to build business relationships?” Luckily, for those who want to be better at building relationships through writing, the process of adding heart to your writing is not difficult, as this chapter reveals. The process involves using positive, relationship-building language; having positive intent; and warming up messages so they don’t sound abrupt or bureaucratic. Use Positive, Relationship-Building Language A first step is to use words that make others feel acknowledged, understood, respected, and valued. Once you start thinking about positive language, it is easy to recognize it. In each of these pairs, which sentence builds relationships?
You can’t use the conference room until my meeting ends. As soon as we wrap up the meeting, the room is yours. What could make this decision more workable for you? I don’t care if you like it. Make it work. You are a day late for the special promotional pricing. Sorry. I will review our pricing to make sure you are getting the best price possible. The relationship-damaging sentences are obvious when you pay attention to them. “You can’t use the conference room” focuses on what you can’t do — until my meeting ends. (It’s all about me, right?) “I don’t care if you like it” says “I don’t care about you.” “You are a day late” says “Loser!” Each of the other sentences in the pairs supports the business relationship by communicating positively and indicating that the reader is important. The sentences say or imply “The room is yours,” “This decision can be more workable for you,” and “You are getting the best price possible.” The table of Relationship-Busting Statements vs. Relationship-Building Statements provides more comparisons. The relationship-busting statements use negative words and phrases: no, cut, crap, complaining, wait, cannot, problems, confusion, misunderstood, and a lot to be desired. The relationship-building sentences focus on the positive with these words: yes, wish, possible, let’s, thank you, sharing, be glad to, first thing, your concerns, just, like to, opportunity, let you know, clarify, creative, fresh, ways to strengthen, and support. An easy first step to creating a relationship-building message is to eliminate words with negative connotations. Whenever possible, cut negative words and phrases such as these:
Use positive words to create a positive feeling, even when conveying bad news. This approach is akin to the “sandwich method,” which involves communicating the bad-news meat of the message between two positive layers. When used sincerely (not sarcastically), positive language expresses your positive intent like a handshake and a smile. Maintain strong business relationships by adding these positive words to your messages:
Have a Positive Intent Positive words make a big difference in the tone of a message. But they aren’t everything. As a writer, you also have to have positive intent, the desire to communicate positively with your customer, vendor, employee, manager, member, client, patient, or other reader. I received this brief message from someone I will call Amelia, who unsubscribed from my free e-newsletter: “I teach a professional writing class at work, and I thought this newsletter would give me additional tips or writing skills we were not already teaching. It didn’t.” Do you think Amelia had positive intent? Was her desire to communicate positively with me, a stranger and fellow writing teacher? Consider these situations: Imagine you were out shopping in a boutique. If you did not find anything you wanted to purchase, would you say to the shop owner as you left, “I thought I could find something unique to buy here, but I could not”? If you decided not to eat at a restaurant after reviewing the menu in the entrance, would you say, “Sorry. Nothing sounds good on your menu” before you walked away? Of course not! We can’t know what Amelia’s intent was. She may not have realized that her comment would come to me, the writer of the newsletter. Nevertheless, I experienced the comment as a putdown. In the small world of business writing teachers, my potential relationship with Amelia ended before it could develop. Compare Amelia’s comment to one from a reader named Beverly, who also unsubscribed from the newsletter: “I’m just trying to reduce the amount of email I get. I can read Lynn’s excellent material on her blog. Thanks.” Beverly’s positive intent came through in the words excellent and thanks. Think about your intent, your purpose in writing, before you write. Be sure to consider your overall, big-picture purpose. For example, imagine you received a request for information from a customer within your organization or outside it. Your purpose in replying would be to supply the information requested. But your larger purpose would probably be to maintain or enhance the relationship and pave the way for future business. The way you think of your purpose affects the way you write your message. A message whose purpose is merely to respond to a request has a different approach and feeling from 23
one that is to maintain or enhance the relationship. Let’s say you are responding to an unreasonable complaint. Although your purpose in writing may be simply to manage the situation, your larger goal is probably to maintain a good long-term business relationship or at least to protect your company’s reputation and your own. At all times, strive to focus on the big picture, the higher goal, and the long term when you write. While it might feel good to put down or get the best of another person in writing, resist that temptation. You cannot know when having a good relationship with that person would benefit a current project, your company, or your career. Let me tell you about a time that I considered my purpose — and then wrote a different message. I was teaching Business Communications for Leaders in the MBA program at University of Washington–Bothell. The first assignment, a one-minute self-introduction, was due on Thursday night. On Thursday morning I started my day with this message in my email inbox, from Steve Teixeira, a student in the class and a talented communicator: Hi Lynn, If it’s okay with you, I’m planning to deviate slightly from the “one-minute introduction” assignment tomorrow. I plan to briefly introduce myself and then deliver a mini-speech on communication. I’m trying to challenge myself to engage and motivate but to also be extremely brief. I’ve rehearsed it down to under a minute as long as I don’t flub it. Steve I was checking my email while drinking my first cup of tea. Because I was not completely awake yet, I drafted a response that sounded something like this: Hi, Steve. The assignment is a one-minute self-introduction so that the class and I can get to know you. Please do not deviate from that assignment. You can use the topic of communication for one of the later assignments. Lynn Before I clicked Send, I had the good sense to think about my intent. Was I hoping to prove a point? No, I didn’t think so. Did I want to be sure the class assignments were done my way, the way I had planned? I wasn’t sure. Did I want to frustrate one of the class’s informal leaders by denying his first request? No, that would be disastrous during the first week of classes. Did I want to stifle creativity? No, definitely not. Here is the email I sent to Steve after I realized my purpose was to get off to a good start with the class and to encourage creativity and initiative: Steve, thanks for asking about your plan. In response, I believe I have an idea that meets your needs and the expectations of the class. Do the required 1-minute introduction. Then when everyone is finished, do 24
the introduction you already prepared that challenges you to engage and motivate. Doing both will satisfy the requirements of the class and your desire to stretch. Giving only your hybrid introduction wouldn’t meet the expectations or needs of your audience. The reason is that we want to learn more about you. And we are expecting and prepared to give you feedback, with specific criteria, on a one-minute personal introduction. So I invite you to do both tonight. However, if you want to give a motivating speech on communication, that would be a perfect topic for next week’s presentation to inform or explain. I look forward to being in your audience. Lynn Steve gave both presentations in class. When I asked him later how he had felt about my response to his email, he said that it was fine and made perfect sense to him. Although the first message I drafted was not a disaster, it wasn’t a relationship builder. It contained no positive, supportive language, and it did not communicate a positive intent. In contrast, the message I did send communicated appreciation, a solution, an invitation, and anticipation with words such as thanks, meets your needs, engage and motivate, satisfy, invite, perfect, and look forward. I am so happy I woke up enough to recognize my real purpose in writing! I hope you too will recognize your larger purpose in each message and communicate positively with your readers. If your experience is like mine, your efforts will lead to near-term positive outcomes and long-term solid relationships. Warm Up Your Messages People who attend business writing classes often tell me they have been accused of being abrupt in their messages, specifically in their emails. They say their style is to get to the point, but other people view them as abrupt. If you have a job or your own business, you work against deadlines. You have to write quickly, even when the documents and messages are complex and somewhat delicate. It would not be surprising if you, like the people who attend my writing classes, were to come across as abrupt at times when you thought you were simply being efficient. This situation is especially common in email. Coming across as brusque is a liability when it comes to building relationships. Perceived gruffness can stretch out the time it takes people to realize that you are a fine person, just abrupt. When a sensitive message comes across as brusque, it can take hours, days, or weeks to resolve misunderstandings, heal hurt feelings, and rebuild relationships. Apply these simple ways to warm up your writing and reduce the risk of seeming abrupt: In an email, text message, or note, include a greeting. According to my survey on 25
business writing and relationships, 45 percent of people prefer that the emails they receive (individual messages, not group emails) include a greeting and their name; 49 percent don’t care. Many respondents commented that an initial email should include a greeting, but when email becomes a back-and-forth discussion, the greeting can be dropped. I agree with that view. Which of these greetings suit you and your messages? Hello, Tonya. Hi David. Good morning, Dr. Bryne. Greetings, Fran! Greetings, team. Dear Brigitte, Use the person’s name in your message. It may seem sufficient to write “See you next week.” But when you include the person’s name in the sentence (“See you next week, Sidney”), you acknowledge him or her as an individual. It’s a simple gesture that can change the feeling from curt to considerate. Use your own first name. In email, people often use automatic signatures with their full name. Others use no name at all — they just end the message. Whether you use a full signature or not, type your first name at the end of your message. Using your first name warms up the message, creating a connection between you and the reader. Note: Another way to include your first name is through a screenshot of your handwritten first name, which you can add to your automatic signature block. Expand on fragments and very short sentences to avoid sounding cold or sarcastic. Even “Thanks” or “Thanks a lot” can sound sarcastic, especially in delicate messages. Instead, write “Thanks for handling this. I really appreciate it.” Rather than “See me” or “We need to talk,” write “Let’s talk soon. I’d like to hear your thoughts on this question.” Include words and phrases that communicate warmth and connection. Any message without positive language can seem cold and abrupt. Use the words and phrases listed earlier in this chapter for a warmer tone. Avoid cold, canned language. Some phrases, such as “I look forward to meeting you,” may be canned, but they aren’t cold. Others are canned and cold, for example, “Thank you in advance for your cooperation in this matter.” To warm up your messages, write as though the reader is a friend or valued colleague, with statements like these: “I appreciate your help, Jonas” and “Thanks so much for considering this request.” Be explicit when you are agreeing with the person. In a quick exchange of messages, you may be tempted to write a simple sentence repeating what the other person has already written. But this action may lead your reader to think That’s exactly what I said! To avoid such a response, write, for example, “I agree that Auda is great for the job” (rather than just “Auda is great for the job”). That way, you avert this response: “Did you read what I 26
wrote? I was the one who recommended her!” Read your message aloud — exactly as it is on the screen or page — without adding warmth in your voice. Reading aloud helps you recognize how your writing may sound to others. You may have crisply stated a fact when you wrote “Handling the Gordon account is your responsibility.” Reading it aloud, though, you may notice a hint of criticism or doom that you did not intend. Adding a phrase such as “I’m very glad,” if appropriate, at the beginning of the sentence may eliminate that hint. Avoid the words immediately and now when you are writing with a request or assigning a task. Your reader may have several other immediate jobs, and your request may seem pushy and unthinking, even if you are the boss or owner. If a task must be done immediately, phone, text, or email to ask whether the other person is available. Assume that the other person is as busy as you — even busier. Think of your reader as a friend. Often gruffness is accidental. But sometimes it comes across because of the writer’s underlying feeling of resentment or irritation. So make the reader your friend, at least while you are writing. In business writing classes, participants sometimes write their case study assignments to imaginary readers. They creatively write “Dear Pain in the Neck” and “Dear Constant Complainer.” I advise them to try the opposite: “Dear Favorite Coworker” and “Dear Person Who Pays My Generous Salary.” Making that positive shift, changing your reader to your dear friend or respected associate, helps you glow rather than glower. It helps you choose language that comes across as warm rather than chilly. Use exclamation points — sparingly. Exclamation points can do a wonderful job of expressing warmth and enthusiasm. They communicate the voice inflections you would likely use if you were talking on the phone or meeting in person. Compare these examples: I appreciate your hard work. I appreciate your hard work! Wonderful. Wonderful! See you in Vegas. See you in Vegas! Thanks, Yvette. Thanks, Yvette! Welcome, Sales Team. Welcome, Sales Team! The secret to using exclamation points is restraint. If you pile on several exclamation points in a row (!!!), or use them in every other sentence, you run the risk of coming across like an adolescent girl, or as Chicago Tribune writer Rex Huppke remarked, “an overcaffeinated glee club.” 27
Exclamation points help to build relationships when they express positive emotions, not rude commands. If you catch yourself typing “I need it now!” you might want to breathe slowly and deeply and think again about communicating with positive intent. Start and end with a smile. Before you click Send or Print, make sure your message starts and ends positively. Do Smiley Faces Communicate Heart? Speaking of smiles, you may have noticed that smiley faces (such as ) did not appear in my list of ways to warm up a message. I encourage choosing the right words to bring a smile to a communication. Nevertheless, I recognize that smiley faces do warm up emails and other online messages. That’s their whole reason for being. The question is: Do readers use and approve of them? Below is part of a discussion that took place on my Business Writing blog. Margaret Elwood, a technical training supervisor, uses smiley faces purposefully, as she explained: I use smiley faces occasionally in internal email messages to clarify and add warmth to the tone. In our company we have typically great longevity of employment, and the strength of my relationships with other employees simply helps me get my job done efficiently and well. While I don’t rely on emoticons, I use them now and then when writing a coworker, because I think they confirm my friendly tone in case there is any question of it. I also use them — sparingly — in response to a message that has used them liberally, so that my response does not appear unfriendly by contrast. A reader named Tony voiced a similar view: “In a business environment, when discussing a difficult issue via email, the emoticon conveys that while you may be looking for resolution to the issue, you are not seriously upset about it.” Tony used the example of reminding an employee who has forgotten to do something: “You send them the reminder to get resolution. You include the smiley face. Without the smiley face or some additional wording that may be awkward, they might think that you are upset about their forgetfulness.” John, another reader, disagreed: “I believe that the smiley face can mean too many things. A smiley could mean the writer wants resolution on a point but is not upset, a phrase was meant to be humorous, an expression of warmth and candor, a clue that something is meant to be a sarcastic or ironic remark, a magnification of an emotion expressed in the sentence, or a mark to indicate that a phrase is something for one to ponder or think about. To me, this is becoming too much for one poor smiley face to do.” I agree with John that the smiley face has been stretched thin with the many expectations placed upon it. Except in rare, informal situations, I prefer words to the smiley face and other emoticons. These words express a range of sentiments:
Were all of those clear? Yes. Would the smiley face, frowning face, or another emoticon have been as clear? Probably not. Regarding the decision to introduce a smiley face or another emoticon in an email, I offer the suggestion of a woman who attended one of my business writing classes: “Don’t use a smiley face in a message to a client or customer until the person uses one in a message to you. That way you will know the person likes smiley faces too.” I recommend applying that good advice to anyone you need to impress as a professional — hiring managers, CEOs, donors, citizens, patrons, and others. If you do use smiley faces, use them frugally, never more than one per message. And do not use a smiley face as a regular sign-off. Heather, who posted to the Business Writing blog, provided a reason for this guideline: “I have a team leader who uses :o) all of the time, in every single email I have received from her. It loses its meaning if you overuse it and can often come off as condescending when used during an email discussion or disagreement.” Does XOXO Communicate Warmth? XOXO radiates huggy-kissy warmth, which makes its use too intimate for nearly all business messages. Because the x stands for kisses, the o for hugs, you should use them only rarely and only with people you kiss and hug when you see them in person — or you would kiss and hug if you had the opportunity to see them. (Talk to your human resources department before taking such a step!) As I was finishing this book, x’s and o’s in various combinations were juicily appearing, mostly in women’s messages. Citing researchers at 29
Georgia Tech, Carnegie Mellon, and Stanford, authors Jessica Bennett and Rachel Simmons wrote in The Atlantic, “Among Twitter users, 11 percent of women xo in tweets, compared with only 2.5 percent of men.” For their article “Kisses and Hugs in the Office,” Bennett and Simmons asked me to speculate why people added x’s and o’s to their business messages. They captured me saying, “It’s much faster to type the four-stroke xxoo than ‘With warm wishes’ followed by a comma.” True, but don’t do it for that reason! Only use x’s and o’s in your messages to business associates who are very dear friends or becoming dear friends. If your messages are likely to be forwarded, uploaded, or subpoenaed, stick with “Warm wishes.” Do not make xoxo part of your automatic signature, or everyone will be talking about you — not in the way you want. Is It Possible to Change Your Writing Style? This chapter began with a reference to military veterans whose style is brusque, probably through their training and experience, perhaps through natural inclination. Is it possible for them to change their writing to create and nurture business relationships? Is it possible for you, whatever your communication style, to build success by communicating your respect and positive intent in every business message? The answer to both questions is yes! Just remember these points from the chapter, and incorporate them into your daily business messages: Use positive, relationship-building language — words and phrases such as pleased, opportunity, happy to, thank you, and looking forward. Have a positive intent in each message. Think not only of the message’s practical purpose, such as to respond to a request. Think also of your overall purpose, for example, to establish and sustain a relationship with the reader. Warm up your messages simply, by using a greeting, your reader’s name, and your own first name. Avoid canned language that comes across as cold. Think of your reader as a friend. You can change your writing style and enhance your work relationships — one message at a time.
Personal Reflection Do you have business relationships you might strengthen by considering your true, larger purpose when you write? Can you afford taking time to add positive language to your messages before you click Print or Send? Can you afford not to? Next Step 30
Choose a message you sent recently. It may be a letter, an email, or a memo. Look for opportunities in it where you might have added positive language and warmed up the message.
Protect Your Relationships by Avoiding Bad Email Behaviors When I first planned this book, I did not intend to include a chapter on email. It seemed to me to be a medium rather than a message. But when I shared the outline with my friend Melissa Thirloway, she questioned the absence of a chapter devoted to email. She said, “Think of all the serious damage done to relationships in email, especially with ccs and bccs.” Melissa was onto something. In my survey on business writing and relationships, I learned that 55 percent of respondents had received an email that seriously damaged their work relationship with the person who wrote it; 14 percent said it had happened a few times. Melissa’s comment and the survey data made me recognize I had to single out email — with its extraordinary, swift power to create animosity, foster mistrust, and kill relationships — for its own chapter. This chapter will help you protect your relationships by controlling the destructive power of email and avoiding email behaviors that threaten relationships. Let’s start with a true story whose details have been changed. Rochelle, who worked in a technical support position at a large software company, had gathered a lot of valuable data in her work on a project. She learned that the data might be useful to another project, so she offered it to Dennis, the project supervisor. Her email to him included a statement something like this: “Let me know what type of format you would like the data in.” When she did not get a response, she decided to be helpful. She created a sample format for the data, filled it with some “garbage data,” and emailed Dennis again with a message like this: “Here is a format for the data. Will this work?” She went home for the night, pleased with having taken initiative in offering the data and creating a sample format. Dennis’s reply the next morning stunned Rochelle. In it, he berated her for proliferating incorrect data and implied that she was incompetent. He copied his manager on the email, along with everyone on his project team. Dennis had mistaken Rochelle’s garbage data for the real thing. Mistakes happen. What killed Dennis’s relationship with Rochelle was his behavior after his mistake. Instead of taking the time to ask Rochelle about the data by email, by phone, or in person, he hid behind a swift, careless email attack. He sent copies to other people, making them witnesses to the attack. Eventually everyone understood what had happened, and Dennis emailed a stumbling apology to Rochelle, noting that he had acted too hastily. Nevertheless, his relationship with her was ruined. And people on his project team may have become wary of Dennis because of his rash judgment and rude action. Here is another true story illustrating the destructive force of email. I have changed its 32
identifying details. Henry sang in a volunteer choir. He had joined the choir for many reasons, among them that it would give him and his partner, Jon, an opportunity to sing solos and get exposure for their singing and leadership skills. But when the choir director, Rory, went outside the choir and hired someone to sing a solo, Henry was disappointed for two reasons: (1) he had thought the choir policy was not to bring in and pay soloists, and (2) he had thought Jon would be perfect for the part that had been offered to the paid outsider. Henry sent an email to Rory requesting clarification of the choir policy and asking what he and Jon could do to be considered for future solos. He received an email reply and a clarification, with advice for him and Jon. However, Rory copied the entire choir on the reply and included Henry’s original email. Henry and Jon took a leave of absence from the choir. Why? By copying all the choir members on his reply, the choir director embarrassed the couple. What should have been a private reply to a private inquiry became a public humiliation. When broadcast to all the other choir members, Henry’s email looked like a whining complaint rather than a straightforward request for information. Rory’s advice for the pair exposed their limitations to everyone. As a result, the choir lost two excellent singers. What did Rory do that severely damaged relationships? He copied the choir on an email that should have been a private message. Rory’s simple decision to send a group email rather than an individual one destroyed trust — not only for Henry and Jon. Every choir member who read the email could imagine himself or herself being publicly exposed in a similar email. Let’s give Rory the benefit of the doubt. He probably thought it would be beneficial for all choir members to read his clarification of the policy on solo parts. If that was his goal, he should have sent a private message to Henry, then followed up with an email to the choir. That group email might have started like this: I would like to review the policy on auditioning for and getting solo parts. Because I have hired a soloist for the Bach cantata, I thought it would be helpful to clarify the policy and answer any questions you may have. An effective message would leave out lines such as “Some of you might be upset” or “It has come to my attention that some of you are disappointed …” Rather than suggesting a negative, his message should simply clarify. In the story below, which may be familiar to you, the email writer did not copy others on his emails. Nevertheless, countless people read his messages and mocked them. A college journalism student phoned and emailed Apple’s media relations department with a question about the use of an Apple product in higher education. She received no reply. Because she needed the information for a journalism assignment, she emailed Apple’s then CEO, the late Steve Jobs. According to news reports, Mr. Jobs’s three emails to the student in an email exchange with her comprised the statements below. Our goals do not include helping you get a good grade. Sorry. 33
We have over 300 million users, and we can’t respond to their requests unless they involve a problem of some kind. Sorry. Please leave us alone. How do I know what Mr. Jobs’s emails said? Because they were all over the business news, with the third email drawing ridicule. When I blogged about Mr. Jobs’s unfortunate relationship-busting emails, a training coordinator named Claudia Amaya commented: “This is certainly a wake-up call to all dealing with customers. A thoughtless line in a single email can ruin the image a company has built. … This annoying student could be the CEO of their best customer later on. Who knows?” I agree with Claudia. One email — never mind three! — can ruin a customer relationship. And who knows how important that customer is or may become? Environmental engineer Matt Charles, another blog commenter, took up the issue of the student’s email: “I found that the student’s email was lengthy and focused on the benefits that Apple’s reply would provide to her (a good grade), rather than identifying any compelling reason for Apple to provide the requested quote.” I have read the student’s emails, and I agree with Matt. The student’s emails may have lessened her chances of getting the response she wanted. But as in the late Mr. Jobs’s situation, we are not accountable for the effectiveness of the email we receive. We are accountable for the email we send. My guess is that none of the men wanted to destroy business relationships. No sane person would. Yet Dennis’s, Rory’s, and Steve Jobs’s mistakes show how easy it is to trash relationships with email: Just compose, click Send without thinking, and relationships disintegrate. Risky Email Behaviors You can rein in the destructive power of email by avoiding these specific dangerous behaviors: Do not put anything in an email that you would be embarrassed to see on the TV program Good Morning, America (where I learned about Steve Jobs’s email), in your city’s newspaper, or on everyone’s computer. Always recognize that your emails may be forwarded and might even be subpoenaed. Any negative comments or innuendos about others revealed in your emails can kill relationships instantly. A writing class attendee recounted an email thread in which she found a reference to herself as the “accounting Nazi.” The reference damaged her relationship with the writer and the person who forwarded the message. Email evidence of improper behavior can kill or maim careers and marriages. Just think of Harry C. Stonecipher, former CEO of Boeing, and General David Petraeus, former director of the Central Intelligence Agency, who are both “former” in the wake of indiscreet emails. Do not send a confidential email to a printer unless you are within 5 feet of the 34
printer and can grab the page as the machine rolls it out. Otherwise, that confidential message can become distressingly common knowledge. Never cc others or use Reply All on an email in which you criticize someone. Dennis’s and Rory’s messages illustrate the dangers of this approach. Even though Rory, the choir director, was giving constructive feedback — not harsh criticism — to Henry and his partner, his feedback embarrassed the pair, as did the public airing of Henry’s original request. Avoid copying someone’s boss on a negative message. Do not cc someone’s manager to get action. A woman in an email class told a story of an external consultant who harangued her for not responding to his earlier messages — and copied her boss on the message. He had to apologize shamefacedly to both of them when it was discovered that he had mistyped her email address on all the earlier messages, so the woman had never received them. Even if the woman had not responded to messages she had received, the consultant did not have any information about why she was not responding. A phone call to her would have been the right choice to clarify the situation. Don’t scold (or flame) anyone for any reason in email. Because email is not two-way communication, you can’t get instant information from the other person or gauge his or her reaction. A training manager told me about the time she scolded an employee in email for not showing up at a training session. Only later did she learn the employee had had a motorcycle accident on his way to the training. Although she had not copied anyone on the email, she had presented herself to the employee as someone who is quick to judge without checking facts. That behavior does not build relationships. Do not communicate when you don’t have the time or inclination to do it well, especially with a customer or potential customer. Think again of Steve Jobs’s situation. Not answering the journalism student’s emails would have been wiser than complaining “Please leave us alone.” Many people look back in embarrassment on their hastily written and sent messages. I once received an email reply from a potential client, a reply that was obviously not intended for me. The email said, “I thought you might want to take a look at this before I just summarily blow her off.” (I was the her in the sentence.) The writer soon emailed me a brief apology explaining that he had meant to forward the email to his colleague to ask her if she had any interest in meeting with me. To the detriment of our potential business relationship, he had unfortunately clicked Reply instead of Forward and made himself look foolish. The lesson: Never shoot back a thoughtless reply. Don’t be stingy with your replies, especially if you are a manager. When an employee spends an hour or more doing research and writing it up for you in an email, don’t respond cryptically in five words or less, if you value the employee and your relationship. Here is an example of what a manager should not do, shared in a writing class: 35
An employee researched venues for an important offsite retreat. She narrowed the possibilities to two venues. She sent her manager an email, briefly describing the benefits of both venues and asking whether the manager had any preference: Would the manager prefer the South Street Retreat Center or McMillan House? The manager replied simply, “Sounds good to me.” Ouch! The 4-word email diminished the employee’s work and made the manager look silly. Taking just another moment to notice what type of response the employee needed would have made all the difference. Here is a reasonable 12-word reply: “I have no preference. Both sound fine. Thanks for your thorough research.” Even a 7-word “Both sound fine. Thanks for your research!” would provide the polite response the employee needed and maintain the work relationship. If you are thinking that the original email may be to blame — perhaps it was too wordy or disorganized — you may be right. But remember: We are normally not responsible for others’ emails, only our own. If you are a manager who receives long, unorganized emails from your employees, coach them or send them to a writing class. Don’t be thoughtless or downright rude. A writing class attendee told me about her supervisor: “My boss never says ‘please,’ ‘thank you,’ ‘hello,’ or anything nice in email. He just tells me to do things. For instance, he’ll send an email that says ‘Don’t forget to include these figures in the proposal’ or ‘Be sure this goes out in today’s mail.’” When I asked her whether she thought it was simply a style difference between her and her supervisor, she said, “Maybe, but it’s very rude.” This employee is not alone. A full 70 percent of individuals prefer that a written request include the word please or similar polite language; an additional 10 percent feel disappointed, irritated, or angry if such language is missing, according to my survey on business writing and relationships. Coming across as a rude boss does nothing for your work relationships or your reputation. To guard against that perception, you can take a few seconds to spread a little kindness. I timed myself typing the words below on my laptop. Notice how little time it takes to communicate kindness and consideration. Even if you are typing on your smartphone, please and thanks should not take more than a few seconds each, especially if your phone offers typing-completion suggestions.
Even if you type slowly, I believe it is worth it to invest the time to raise an employee’s morale and build a good work relationship. Don’t you?
Avoid accidentally sending a message before you have reviewed it for tone and accuracy. It is too easy to have a thumb or finger slip, accidentally sending a message in an unedited, raw form whose tone can wound recipients. To avoid this mistake, in Outlook type a bit of gobbledygook (for example, adadf) on the To, Cc, or Bcc line. It will stop the message from going out. With other email programs, leave the To line blank until you are satisfied that the message is ready. Avoid demanding (or seeming to demand) that others jump to action. Emails with the red exclamation point indicating high importance, or with the words urgent, immediately, a nd now, can irritate people and weaken relationships, especially with repeat occurrences. Rather than jeopardize your bonds with colleagues, call them when a deadline is urgent and explain the reason for the urgency. In a discussion of email at an investment firm, a new employee complained that people did not respond promptly to his emails. I asked him what promptly meant to him. When he said, “Within a few minutes,” the other people in the class roared with laughter. The new employee had few meetings to attend and did not yet have many assignments. To him, a few minutes was a reasonable time frame. For others in the class, promptly meant within 24 hours. To preserve your good relationships, place as much value on others’ time as you do on your own. Ask, “Do you think you can track down this information today?” rather than stating, “I need this by the end of the day.” Ask, “Does a Friday deadline give you enough time to finish this?” rather than stating, “I want to get this to the client by Friday.” Avoid using the bcc (blind courtesy copy) function to communicate secretively. Think twice, then think again about sending a blind copy to someone who should not receive the information. An attendee in a writing class, a man I will call Joel, reported that a friend used to copy him regularly on information he should not be reading. Then one day the friend forgot it was a blind copy and wrote, “Mary, please handle this action item. Kaj, please take care of this. Joel, this is FYI, as usual.” Seeing Joel’s name, everyone found out he was receiving the information. According to Joel, both he and his friend learned an alarming, embarrassing lesson. Another class participant I will call Mark told a story of a colleague who contacted him to express her sympathy about a difficulty Mark was having. The only problem was that the colleague should not have known about Mark’s situation. How did she know? She had received a blind copy of an email Mark’s manager had sent to him. Mark felt his manager had betrayed him. Follow this guideline: If you feel even a hint of guilt or doubt about sending a bcc, do not send it. Anytime a little voice tells you that you may regret sending blind copies, don’t do it! And never use blind copies to damage another person’s reputation. Here is the relationship-building approach when you need to include others: When you need other people to know about a situation but you know that the primary recipient would be distressed about those people receiving a cc or bcc, instead email a summary of the information to others. If the primary recipient asks, “Did you copy anyone on this 37
message?” you can honestly say no. And you can add something like this: “However, I did need to summarize what happened for Patrick and Rayleen, so they would be aware of the situation.” Of course, you can always bcc yourself. Unless your smartphone saves sent email, you will want to send yourself a bcc of any important messages you send by phone. Avoid displaying various individuals’ email addresses because of not using the bcc function. Cyndy McCollough, director of marketing technology at a law firm, explained when and why the bcc makes sense: When sending an email to multiple recipients from different companies, put addresses in the Bcc field. Your audience will appreciate the fact that you are cognizant of protecting their privacy. I recently received an email from a conference organizer that was sent to the 12 speakers lined up for the next day’s agenda. I blanched when I saw all recipient email addresses in the To field. In listing our addresses in this manner, the sender put our information at risk of being scooped up by anyone desiring to grow their contact database. Although Cyndy came across calmly, some people explode when they see their email address, along with many others, displayed for everyone to see and for opportunistic people to add to their email contacts. Avoid using the Read Receipt function. The Read Receipt function on email programs asks recipients of your email to click a link to indicate they have received your message. It irritates many people. They dislike it because it reveals when they have read the message, which they feel is not the sender’s business. It makes them feel as though Big Brother (of George Orwell’s novel 1984) is watching them. If you truly must know that employees have opened an email, use the Read Receipt, but know that it can hurt relationships. A better choice may be to include at the top of the email “Please reply with the message ‘Got it’ to let me know you have received this important message.” Avoid sarcasm — and avoid or be very cautious with jokes. We have all had the experience of someone misinterpreting our email. Perhaps we were sarcastic, and our reader viewed the message as serious. Maybe we thought we were being funny, and the other person read us as angry. I often need to ask my own husband, who is my business partner, what he meant by a particular quip in an email that he thought I would understand. This type of miscommunication happens often in email — perhaps more often than we realize. Frequently we wonder how other people can possibly have gotten our message so wrong. Were they reading too fast? Not paying attention? Having a bad day? Researchers Justin Kruger, Nicholas Epley, Jason Parker, and Zhi-Wen Ng looked at the role of our egos in miscommunication. They published their study findings in the Journal of Personality and Social Psychology in an article titled “Egocentrism Over E38
Mail: Can We Communicate as Well as We Think?” Here are some of the findings: Email writers consistently overestimate their readers’ ability to distinguish sarcasm from seriousness. In one test, writers estimated that their readers would recognize sarcasm 78 percent of the time. In fact, their readers were correct only 56 percent of the time — no better than chance. Email readers consistently overestimate their own ability to recognize sarcasm. In the test just mentioned, although they were correct only 56 percent of the time, they estimated their accuracy at 90 percent! When it comes to identifying emotion in email, there is no difference, statistically speaking, between the accuracy of strangers and friends. Writers overestimate the degree to which their readers will find their humor funny — especially when the writers have had a rich experience with the humor (seeing it performed on TV, for example). Emoticons do not improve understanding. For the trait that causes both readers and writers to overestimate their ability to handle the subtleties of email, the researchers use the term overconfidence. Here are the lessons to take from the research: Do not be overconfident. Even if you are an extremely upbeat, confident person, assume that the worst may go wrong with your message. Know that your reader will assume he or she is correct — just as you do. Avoid sarcasm. Label your emotions. Pick up your phone or meet in person when the situation is awkward. Do not reply with that zinger you think is so clever and amusing. Know that when you email a joke, your reader may not find it as funny as you did. Avoid “letting them sweat.” Cynthia Clay, who runs a training company, told me about a negotiating technique I was not aware of. Perhaps you have experienced it. Cynthia had prepared a proposal at the request of a prospective client. Shortly after Cynthia emailed the proposal to the client, all communication from the client stopped. Emails from Cynthia’s staff received no reply. Phone calls were not returned. Cynthia was worried that something had gone wrong — until another client told her she was simply on the receiving end of a negotiating technique being touted these days. The technique is to let the other person sweat. For instance, let her sweat when her email gets no reply. If she worries enough about what might have gone wrong with the proposal, that worry will make her less confident and more eager to negotiate. Letting them sweat is a perfect way to weaken relationships. When prospective clients do not reply to my emails or phone calls, my concern is not what I might have done better in the proposal but whether I really want to work with someone who is noncommunicative and perhaps stressed out and disorganized. Rather than making me feel more eager to negotiate, I cool off, wondering where I might tighten my proposal to make working with a potentially difficult client more rewarding. Cynthia waited it out without sweating. Eventually the prospective client contacted her. Then everything became a rush to meet the client’s goals, which had been put on hold 39
during the sweating time. The win-lose mentality of letting them sweat is a sure relationship weakener. Wouldn’t you rather work with efficient, communicative people than with manipulators? Avoid terms of endearment. A woman in one of my business writing classes said she hated terms of endearment. She explained: “It’s words like dear, hon, and sweetie. I don’t like them in email and other business communication. I would like to respond to people who use them, ‘I’m not your dear. I’m not your hon.’” I asked the woman to speculate why individuals used words like dear and hon (short for honey) at work. We decided that people, especially older workers, may simply want to be friendly. But using a person’s name is much friendlier than using a generic term. I remember visiting my then-96-year-old cousin in a New Jersey hospital. When I arrived, she had been in the hospital an entire week, yet every worker except her doctor called her hon and dear i e instead of her name, Mrs. Wallace. The terms sounded impersonal and condescending rather than friendly and nurturing. Save hon, sweetie, and dear for your spouse or sweetheart, children, grandchildren, nieces, and nephews. Use it with people who would not even think of responding, “I’m not your hon.” If you want to come across as friendly in your email, say hi, hello, good morning, please, and thank you. Use people’s names and sometimes say, “Have a great day!” This recommendation applies not only to coworkers, but also to patients, customers, clients, members, visitors, citizens, and others. Three Golden Rules With all the bad email behaviors to avoid, you may be hungry for rules to follow to nurture your business relationships. Here are three: Always give others the benefit of the doubt. Recognize that there is a good possibility that you are wrong or are simply misinterpreting a message. (Think of Dennis’s incorrect assumption about Rochelle’s data.) Then, before you can damage yourself or others in an email, ask tactful questions to understand a situation. Copy people on a message only when doing so will lead to something positive for everyone involved: understanding, teamwork, inclusion, enjoyment, shared credit, etc. When a cc’d email will have a negative outcome for someone, find another way to communicate. (Learn from Rory’s message that wounded two choir members.) Present your best self in email, the one you would be pleased to see on the evening news. (Learn from Steve Jobs’s brief, unfortunate messages.) Think beyond the purpose of the email you are writing. Ask yourself, “Why am I in business?” and “Why am I on the planet?” Asking such big-picture questions will help you make the right choice as a writer and a human being in every message you send. It will help you preserve your valuable work relationships.
Personal Reflection Would adjusting your email behavior help you improve certain business relationships? Next Step Review the email behaviors to avoid and the three golden rules. Choose one or two as guidelines to make changes in your email.
Write Mighty Thank-Yous If you were to do a cost-benefit analysis of writing thank-you notes, I am betting they would come out as the best business writing investment possible for building and sustaining relationships. These short, happy messages are typically easy to write, and they reap benefits for both sender and receiver long after the receiver smiles at the grateful words. This chapter helps you recognize opportunities to write thank-yous, and it shows you how to take them from polite to powerful. In my survey on business writing and relationships, 81 percent of people said that a thank-you note they received had a definite positive influence on their decision to do business with a company or an individual again. These comments capture respondents’ views: I appreciate companies that recognize the value of a personal connection and relationship. It adds a personal touch to the business relationship. I can’t tell you how much of a difference this makes! On Business Writing blog, inspirational speaker and author Josh Hinds illustrated the power of the thank-you this way: “Just the other day I received a card from someone whose project I had participated in. It was a simple thank-you card (along with a little gift card) — nothing too fancy. But the next time I find myself looking for the type of service this person offers (for myself or a referral for someone else), you better believe they’re going to be at the top of the list for that business.” Thank-yous encourage people to continue to work with the sender, whether they include a small thank-you gift or not. For that reason alone, you should invest in writing thank-yous to business associates of all kinds. Thank-yous are one of the easiest tasks in business writing, and the payoff can be huge. There is no excuse for not tapping the relationshipbuilding power of the mighty thank-you. You have a chance to say thank you anytime someone has: Delivered particularly good service. Gone beyond the job requirements for you. Been especially thoughtful, prompt, or efficient. Given you an opportunity (an assignment, an interview, a referral, etc.). Given you a gift or treated you to a meal. Been a special pleasure to work with. 43
Been helpful to you in a stressful moment. Bought your product or service. Consistently met or exceeded expectations. Made your day in one way or another. Tips for Writing Powerful Thank-Yous Very little can go wrong in a thank-you when it is sincere and specific. Just follow these tips to help you write from the heart easily and effectively: Write promptly. Although a sincere thank-you is welcome anytime, writing promptly makes the writing easier because the details are fresh in your mind. In this sample email to a coworker, Jamie refers to specific details he might have forgotten in a few days: Dear Suneetha, Thank you for all your work on today’s web conference. It could not have happened without you. Your attention to detail was evident throughout the program. Your transition between the segments was very smooth. Also, I appreciated the tactful way you handled my problem with the microphone. Because of your efforts, we presented a professional image to potential clients. Thanks again for your work on this event. Best, Jamie Sending a thank-you note promptly shows enthusiasm and appreciation. In Keith Ferrazzi’s book Never Eat Alone, he mentions people who write to thank him the same day, telling him how much they appreciated meeting him at a conference or after a speech. Ferrazzi says he remembers most the people who write first, before many others write. That’s one big vote for being speedy when writing to a prestigious person — the message gets noticed. Say thank you sincerely and specifically. In the previous example, Jamie named specific things he is grateful for. That kind of thank-you has much more power than an empty “Good job. Thanks.” When he noted that Suneetha’s efforts helped to convey a professional image to potential clients, he pointed out the importance of what she did. Whenever you can, mention the positive effect of the person’s contribution, as Mary Bennett, a manager in a public utility, has done in the message to her colleague Margaret Elwood. The personal details of Mary’s message make it a gem of a thank-you. Subject: ITSM Contribution Margaret, Thank you so much for your contribution to the training success for the Incident management project. I was entirely overwhelmed with the action item of Training when it was assigned to me. Being able to work with you 44
for the development of the course was wonderful! The course outline creation, combined with walking us through how to engage the participants and encourage the hands-on learning, was fantastic. It was a huge benefit to the project to have someone with your expertise guiding us. On a more personal note, I appreciate your support and encouragement for my presentations. Being the trainer definitely put me out of my comfort zone! I found it super helpful to have you in my corner making me feel better about it. Thanks again, Mary Mary Bennett Manager, ITS Infrastructure Support Being sincere means saying thank you in your own personal style and voice, as Mary Bennett did. You want your thank-you to sound like you — not like something canned you took from an etiquette book. Tell your own story. Use your own language. Say thank you warmly. Always use the other person’s name and the personal pronouns I and we. For instance, write “Olga, we appreciate your artistry” — not “Your artistry is appreciated.” I sent the following enthusiastic message to our original web designer, Diane Varner, when she completed our site. The eight we-our-us pronouns and eight youyour pronouns help create the feeling of warmth and connection. Dear Diane, Thank you for the creativity, patience, and hard work you brought to completing our website. The site is exactly what we wanted — in fact, it is much more. We especially appreciated your feedback on our content, and the way your design complemented it. We also are very grateful for the marketing and search engine insights you shared. We had not realized that a web designer could offer so much solid advice, and we know your efforts will pay off in a site that brings us business. Thank you for your beautiful work. Warm wishes, Lynn and Michael Say thank you without saying please. When you say thanks, do not ask for anything. Asking detracts from your thank-you and suggests that gratitude is not the real reason for your message. Imagine how out of place a request for changes in our website would have sounded in the previous message to our web designer. The following generic letter to “Dear Business Owner” illustrates what not to do. It is a request partly disguised as a thank-you. It starts off badly with a nonspecific greeting. Writers should use the reader’s name whenever possible. 45
Dear Business Owner: Thank you for your past contributions to our annual auction. We are very grateful for your generosity. This year’s auction takes place on Friday, October 19. Can we count on you again? As a past supporter, you know that all our auction proceeds go to underserved children and families in our community. One of our procurement specialists will phone or stop by your business in the next few weeks. We thank you in advance for your generosity. Sincerely, Nonprofit Organization In contrast, the personal, specific thank-you to Mr. Austin includes upbeat information on the success of the auction. What’s more, it asks for nothing! The recipient will be delighted to receive it. Dear Mr. Austin: Thank you for contributing the one-year corporate club membership to our auction. It was a generous gift and a popular item, and we are very grateful for it. We are happy to inform you that our auction brought in $95,300. Since our goal was $75,000, we are very pleased with the results. It is because of generous donors like you that we exceeded our goal. Since ticket purchases covered auction expenses, the full $95,300 will be used to meet the needs of underserved children and families in our community. Your contribution has made a difference. Thank you for your generosity. Sincerely, Janice Green Executive Director Notice that in the thank-you to Mr. Austin, only the greeting and first paragraph are personalized. That level of personalization makes the letter successful, and it makes the job of sending out the many thank-yous doable. Match your effort to the reason for the thank-you. An offhand thank-you that does not match the situation will come across as insensitive. For instance, a two-word thankyou is heartless in response to a 10-page report. A two-sentence thank-you might seem stingy to a person who spent hours helping you finish a proposal. This simple thank-you to a presenter is appropriate from a member of the audience: Dear Jonathan, 46
Thank you for your excellent, inspiring presentation today at the breakfast. I had to leave promptly at your conclusion, so I wanted to let you know by note that I appreciated your moving content and high-quality presentation. I learned a lot! I wish you much success with your new book. Warm regards, Deborah This more elaborate thanks is appropriate from the meeting organizer: Dear Jonathan, THANK YOU for the fabulous presentation you made this morning. To be riveting at 7:30 a.m. is a huge challenge, and you rose to it. You were outstanding! Thank you for making our association look good. Feedback from attendees was extremely positive, with comments such as “Bring this man back for a longer session!” and “Jonathan’s information was practical AND powerful!” People raved about your slides and your story. Please accept my thanks and high praise on behalf of the association. If you would like a testimonial or a letter of reference, just let me know. Best, Natalie Let gratitude multiply and spread. When you thank someone for excellent work on the job, send a copy to his or her supervisor and to the human resources department, if appropriate. (You can even tweet your thanks to the world!) When you thank a supervisor directly, mention the group, like this: “I appreciate the commitment your entire team showed in getting this order out on time.” The supervisor can post your note or forward it to the group and may add his or her own thanks to yours. Some businesses save and post thank-you notes on their bulletin boards, gather them in scrapbooks, or post them online. The good feelings engendered live on indefinitely. Email, Electronic Message, Letter, Note, or Card? You have so many ways to send thank-yous that it can be tough to choose one. Do not let worrying about the medium get in the way. Use these guidelines to help you decide how to express your thanks: Email or an electronic message through Facebook, LinkedIn, etc., is right for someone who is regularly on a computer. And the speed with which you can write, send, and forward electronic thank-yous makes them an easy choice. They may be any length, from one or two sentences to several paragraphs. An electronic thank-you may not stand out as special, though, and it may be perceived as informal. When I sent out my monthly e-newsletter with the featured article “12 Ways to Build 47
Work Relationships Through Writing,” I received this thoughtful thank-you by email from a subscriber: Hi Lynn, I’ve been benefiting from your knowledge-sharing articles and tips for quite a long time now. I can’t afford to take your paid classes but the kind of information you share in your free articles has been very helpful in sharpening my skills. I’d not have thought about thanking you, had I not read this article today. I thought of you while reading the first two lines of the first point of the article. So thank you very much for sharing this enormous and invaluable information. God bless you. Kind regards, Rahul Because few subscribers send thank-yous, Rahul’s message stood out. That is the power of the mighty thank-you: It helps the writer stand out, and it opens the door to new work relationships. A typed letter or memo is suitable for acknowledging a donation or contribution (like the thank-you to Mr. Austin for his donation). It also fits well to thank someone for significant help or great customer service, and it is the right choice when the thank-you may end up in a personnel file. Because of the way it looks on the page, it must be at least two paragraphs. A handwritten card or note communicates a personal touch. It is the perfect response to a meal, flowers, gift, or personal help. It’s short, typically from two sentences to two paragraphs. Many people swear by the personal note, as does Jeannette Paladino, a social media writer and blogger. She explained on my blog: “A simple thank-you note will do more for you and your business than a lengthy presentation. It shows you care about the other person. It’s also good manners. Dashing off a perfunctory email doesn’t begin to measure up.” In this thank-you message I received from my marketing mentor, Marcia Yudkin, you will notice the indented paragraphs, which are standard in handwritten notes. Lynn — In this season of Thanksgiving, I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate having you as a member in Marketing for More. Thank you especially for the empathy and caring that you show to other members. Looking forward to seeing you again in Maui! Yours, 48
Marcia Marcia’s lovely card stood out because she was specific in her thanks, noting and appreciating my efforts to empathize with others. I renew my membership in Marketing for More each year, and Marcia’s thank-you reminded me of the relationship we have that makes membership worthwhile. Because I want our webmaster, Margery Squier, to know how much I value her work, I regularly send thank-you cards to her. I pay her invoices by check, and I enclose the check in a beautiful or amusing card. This is a typical brief message: Margery, thank you once again for your creative, careful work on our website. We appreciate your promptness, good humor, and excellent customer service! Lynn and Michael If you send handwritten notes and cards to customers, consider brief messages like these: For restaurant customers: Thank you for dining at our restaurant. It was a pleasure serving you. We hope to see you again soon! Dante Osorio, Executive Chef You can easily personalize the message to make it specific and more memorable: Dear Spiro, Thank you for dining at our restaurant. We hope your Kobe steak made your birthday celebration even more memorable. It was a pleasure serving you on your special day. We hope to see you again soon! Dante Osorio, Executive Chef For real estate customers who have sold their home: Dear Mr. and Mrs. Gardner, Thank you for your patience and flexibility during the process of selling your home. I hope you will be very happy in your new community. Warm regards, Angie Tamrind For jewelry store customers: Dear Nicole, Thank you for the opportunity to help you choose the gold locket for your mother’s 75th birthday. I hope she enjoys it as much as you enjoyed purchasing it for her. 49
I look forward to serving you again the next time you are looking for jewelry for an important person — including yourself! Abby Loos, Wright Jewelers For customers of a clothing store: Dear Louisa, Thanks for shopping with us. It was fun helping you choose new pieces for your spring wardrobe. I hope you feel wonderful every time you wear them! If I can help you in any way, just call me at [phone number]. I hope to see you when you need something new. Jesse Ward After we purchased a violin for our teenaged daughter, we received a small box of delicious, locally produced organic chocolates. It was accompanied by a small piece of card stock that said, “A special thanks from Olsen Violins.” The small box and brief message made a huge positive impression on us. Consider how you want to communicate, whether it be by letter, note, card, card and gift, email, text, or even Twitter. But do not let the options get in the way of sending a message. Send the thank-you! Thank-You Messages for Job Interviews In my survey on business writing and relationships, 78 percent of people who have hired or recommended hiring indicated that a thank-you note has had a definite positive influence on a hiring decision; 20 percent said this has happened many times. One respondent described the thank-you as a relationship-starting communication: Many of the people I’ve hired throughout my career were the ones who sent a follow-up or thank-you note after an interview. Similarly, I’ve been told that a follow-up that I sent made the difference in a hiring decision when all other qualifications were considered equal. It all comes down to relationships, and this type of note is often the first step in the relationship you’ll have with a new employer. Even if you’re not hired, you did the right thing by sending something positive forward. Another respondent commented this way: I’ve been in human resources for many years and am amazed at how few job applicants think enough to send a thank-you note after their interview. It is so rare — it really stands out in a positive way. To an employer, a thank-you for a job interview indicates an applicant’s enthusiasm for and understanding of the position, ability to observe social norms, and writing aptitude (proofread carefully!). Unlike other thank-yous, the job-interview thank-you often includes details to remind the potential employer of the applicant’s strengths and fit for the 50
position. Note those details in this example, sent by email: Subject: Thank You for the Interview Dear Felix, Thank you for the chance to interview for the position of administrative assistant. It was a pleasure to learn about your business, and I would welcome the opportunity to work for you. As a detailed-oriented “bean counter,” I would relish keeping track of your accounts, managing the shopping cart, updating the websites, and coordinating your calendar. The 8–3 schedule would be ideal for me, and walking to work would be a dream come true. Again, thank you for the opportunity to meet. Please let me know if you need any other information to make your decision. Sincerely, Galen Howard Several respondents to my survey expressed a strong preference for a handwritten interview thank-you. This brief thank-you could be sent in a classy thank-you card: Dear Ms. Joseph, Thank you for interviewing me today and letting me observe your class. In that short time, I learned a lot just watching you relate to the students. Each one got your respect and your full attention. Your caring and high standards were obvious. It would be a privilege to assist in your class. I hope you will consider me for the position. Best wishes, Fiona Greenman One challenge after a day of interviewing is to say something different and sincere to each of the people you have met. The secret to successful thank-yous in this situation is to key in on the interviewers and the conversations you have had with them. These four emailed thank-yous — all for meetings at the same organization — show the variety you can bring to your thank-yous. Subject: Interview Thank-You From Lassie Elbert Dear Dr. Mitchell, Thank you for interviewing me for the position of career counselor. It was a pleasure to talk with you and learn about your goals for the center. I also enjoyed meeting the other team members and learning about their expertise. I would love to have the opportunity to work at the center. I believe my experience in several industries, my graduate work in counseling, and my love of working one-to-one would help me be successful as a member of 51
your team. I also feel very much in tune with your vision for the center. Thank you again for talking with me. Whatever your hiring decision, I wish you and the center continued success. Sincerely, Lassie Elbert Subject: Thank You for Meeting With Me Dear Dr. Weiss, Thank you for talking with me today about your work at the center. I appreciate your sharing so much helpful information about the client population, the testing you do, and the many aspects of supporting the clients throughout their search for meaningful work. You gave me a very good sense of what working at the center is like. I appreciated the articles too! I would love to have the opportunity to work with you. I believe my desire to help people find their path in life, along with my work experience and graduate studies in counseling, is a good fit for the center, and I hope you think so too. Again, I appreciate your talking with me today, and I hope to have the chance to be a part of the center. Best wishes, Lassie Elbert Subject: Thanks for Our Talk Today Dear Tina, Thanks so much for talking with me today. I loved learning about your background and all the twists and turns that brought you to the center. Your life is a fine example of how career paths are no longer straight. I would jump at the chance to work at the center. It feels like a place where I could contribute my skills and experience well, learn a lot, and be a member of a productive team that understands work-life balance. It is terrific that the center has corporate season tickets to the Storm. That’s my kind of place! Thank you again for the great conversation. Lassie Subject: Thank You for Welcoming Me Dear Justin, Thank you for welcoming me today at the center. I really appreciate your taking the time to show me around, introduce me to the staff, and make me 52
feel comfortable on interview day. You are very adept at reducing an applicant’s anxiety! I enjoyed meeting you and your colleagues at the center. I hope to have the opportunity to work with you. Again, thank you! Lassie That last message serves as an example of an important rule: Don’t forget the receptionist! You may be wondering whether it is necessary to send a separate thank-you to each person at a company who interviews you, whether you have individual meetings or a panel interview. Use this response as a guideline: The more you want the job, the more effort you should put into your thank-yous and every other aspect of the interview process. If You Do Not Want the Job, Say Thank You Anyway You present yourself as a polite professional when you send a thank-you, even when you don’t want the job. Sending a message like this one can make a positive impression that leads to other opportunities: Dear Helen, Thank you for interviewing me for the position of event coordinator. It was fascinating to learn about the wide range of events your company manages. I admire the way you juggle so many plates at once (literally and figuratively!). Based on the amount of travel we discussed, I do not feel this position would work for me. However, if a position with minimal travel opens up, please consider me for it. I would enjoy applying my skills as an event coordinator at [Company name]. Best wishes, Lee Chin Remember: A thank-you for an interview is a professional message. Do not be casual. A senior human resources (HR) professional told me she did not invite a job candidate back for a second interview because of the person’s emailed thank-you note. Why? Because it included an animated smiley face. That blinking emoticon moved the HR director to decide the candidate did not have the good professional judgment the job required. That is the only time I have heard of a thank-you going wrong. And yet the HR director’s decision was probably perfect; she and that candidate would not work well together. Thank-You Messages at Thanksgiving In the United States, Thanksgiving Day takes place on the last Thursday in November. Canada celebrates Thanksgiving on the second Monday in October. Because Thanksgiving 53
is a national holiday not allied with a particular group or religion, it is a perfect occasion to remember customers, clients, and others. Your message will stand out much more at Thanksgiving than at Christmastime, when your contacts are likely to be buried in holiday messages. Since most people take a holiday from work on Thanksgiving, be sure to send your messages several days early. Here are samples of brief thank-yous to customers. Those with indented paragraphs would be handwritten messages or typed notes — not emails. Dear Friends at LMNOP, In this time of gratitude, we give thanks for you. We value your patronage and appreciate your confidence in us. Counting you among our customers is something for which we are especially grateful. On behalf of all of us at XYZ Company, we wish you a very happy Thanksgiving. Sincerely, Jack and Victoria Jepson Dear Dan and Reese, Thank you for being our valued customers. We are grateful for the pleasure of serving you and meeting your printing needs. We wish you a beautiful Thanksgiving and a joyous year’s end. Warm wishes, Karl and the team Dear Carlos, In this time of Thanksgiving, I must express my thanks to you. Working with you over the past two years has been an amazing opportunity for me. I appreciate your high standards, consistent focus, and fine sense of humor. Thank you, Carlos, for the pleasure of continuing to work with you. I wish you a wonderful Thanksgiving filled with all good things. With thanks, Linda Dear Mr. Emmanuel, When we think about the things we appreciate, we think of you and our work with you on the Maple Heights project. The project was a challenge and a phenomenal success for us — thanks to your vision and commitment. We will always treasure that experience. We saw the enclosed new book on landscaping by [Author], and we immediately thought of you. Please enjoy it with our thanks. Happy Thanksgiving! Carl and Vincent 54
These two messages thank employees for their work. Both are suitable to send to all employees from a manager or management team, with the greeting personalized to individuals. Dear Qasid, During this month of Thanksgiving, I have been reflecting on the things I am most grateful for. Primary among them is our talented group of employees. Thank you for the work you do to make our agency great. You help us provide award-winning services to our clients. Without your commitment, creativity, and high standards, we would not be the thriving company we are. I am very grateful for your efforts. I wish you a Thanksgiving filled with abundance and bright moments. Warm wishes, Rhonda Dear Raimondo, This year has been challenging for us, but we turned challenges into successes — thanks to you and your fellow employees. You have focused on the future rather than getting stuck in day-to-day difficulties. You have worked hard to help our business thrive. On behalf of the management team, I thank you for your accomplishments this year. We are all grateful. Please enjoy the enclosed gift certificate as a token of our thanks. Happy Thanksgiving! David Thank-You Notes for Condolences One type of thank-you note can be upsetting to write: the thank-you you send in response to condolences and acts of kindness you receive when a friend or family member has died. This message is difficult because in such situations, feelings of deep sadness and loss can sap your energy and spoil your concentration. Your words can seem feeble compared to the huge support and kindness you have received from coworkers and associates. You may be unable to remember the many kindnesses extended to you, and you may worry that you have forgotten something of major importance. All those feelings are maddening when you want so much to express your gratitude! The people in your personal and professional lives will not expect you to write detailed messages. Just knowing that you received their note, flowers, or other gift is enough. Use the short templates that follow to craft your own thank-you messages. Each one can begin with “Dear” and the individual’s name. They may be expressed in thank-you notes, cards, emails, or other electronic messages. The examples with indented paragraphs would be handwritten or typed notes — not emails. Dear Keith, 55
Thank you for your kindness and sympathy during our time of loss. It gives us much comfort to know that you are thinking of us. Warm regards, Nate and Judy It was very nice of you to think of me in this time of sadness. I appreciate your thoughts and prayers. Barbara Thank you for your touching letter. I really enjoyed hearing from you. The story you shared about my mother made me smile. My mother lived a long, full life. Although her passing is a sad milestone for me, I am grateful for having her with me for so many years. With many thanks, Carli Please accept my sincere thanks for the beautiful flowers you sent for my sister’s memorial service. She would have loved them. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and caring more than I can say. Sachin I can hardly express how grateful I am for your attendance at my brother’s funeral. It was so good of you to take the time to be with me and my family. Your kindness and compassion mean a great deal to us. Sincerely, Dermott Dear Friends and Colleagues, It is difficult to find the words to express our gratitude for the many kindnesses you have shown us during this sad time. We are so grateful for all you have done for us. The cards, letters, phone and email messages, prayers, and visits meant the world to us as we struggled with our heartbreaking loss. Along with the emotional support you gave us, the meals, chores, and other gifts of your time and energy helped sustain us day to day. We are unable to write individual thank-yous to each one of you, given the great outpouring of support. Please know that your generosity and thoughtfulness have touched us deeply. Knowing that we were not alone helped us bear our grief and sadness. Thank you for being there for us. With sincere thanks, Sharon and Lynette 56
If you have experienced a loss and received condolences and kindnesses from others, be assured that no one will judge you on your ability to write a thank-you. They will be pleased to hear from you, but they will not expect more than a few sentences of acknowledgment. A blog reader asked, “Do I have to write thank-yous for sympathy cards?” No, you do not have to write thank-yous for sympathy cards. But write them if doing so will help you feel better and more connected with others. Thanking People for Thank-Yous When you are in the happy position of receiving thank-yous, you may find yourself wondering: Do I need to thank people for their thank-yous? The answer: It depends. For any thank-you that makes you feel good, why not take a moment to return the favor and enhance the relationship? When I received this brief but enthusiastic thank-you by email from Jeff Chamberlain, a reader of my e-newsletter Better Writing at Work, I wrote to acknowledge his message. Lynn: Thank you for sending out these newsletters. I’ve enjoyed getting them for the past few months. They are a great reminder/reinforcer of positive behaviors, and I like the interactive proofreading challenge at the end (I got the missing hyphen correct this time). Jeff Chamberlain My brief response: Jeff, thank you for your kind note. I am very pleased that you enjoy the newsletter and the Error Quests. Thanks for letting me know! Best wishes, Lynn Although a thank-you message does not require a thank-you in response, a thank-you gift does. This inquiry I received from Nancy Doerhoff, manager of the Machacek Branch of the St. Louis Public Library, illustrates the question thank-you gifts may raise: Hello, Lynn, We are a public library. Some of our regular patrons (customers) brought us candy, cookies, popcorn, etc., during the days leading up to Christmas. Some of us think we should send thank-you notes to them for their kindness. Others think it is unnecessary or even overkill since they believe the gifts were thank-yous to us for the service we have given over the past year. What is the correct etiquette? I recommended that the library staff thank their patrons for the gifts, and Nancy and her staff did write thank-yous. Because of their hard work and graciousness, I bet they 57
received more gifts from patrons the following year! Brief Does Not Mean Brusque This chapter includes many references to brief thanks. But brief does not mean offhand one-word thanks or abbreviations. Marketing consultant Cornelia Luethi left this blog comment, which captures the issue: “I once had a manager who would often reply with just ‘Thx’ or ‘Thks’ … now that is stingy! It was hard to believe he really was thankful, seeing as he couldn’t be bothered to type the whole word!” Don’t be miserly when it comes to thanking people. Typing just “Thanks” or “Thx” does not come across as genuine appreciation, especially if it appears at the end of every message. If you do need to type a quick email or text as thanks, take a few extra seconds to make it specific, as these examples do: Thanks so much for the information. You rock! Thanks for responding so fast. Thanks! I appreciate your flexibility. Thank you for keeping me in the loop. Thanks for understanding. Often people use “Thanks” in response to an email when they really mean only to acknowledge something. If acknowledgment is your real reason for writing, try these: Thanks. Got it. Thanks. Consider it done. Thanks. I’ll pass it on. When you choose any of the brief remarks above, don’t Reply All or cc the company. The recipients will not thank you! Do It Now It’s time to reflect and take action. Put down this book and pick up a pen to write a thankyou. Or launch your email and send a thoughtful thank-you instantaneously. No excuses: 31 sample messages in this chapter were 100 words or less. You have time to write 50, 75, or 100 sincere words of thanks. Those words may be the best investment in great work relationships you make this year. Your thank-you will tell someone that she or he is valued and appreciated. Those positive feelings will reflect back to you, strengthening your relationships. Who knows? They may reverberate around the globe.
Personal Reflection Do you take time to thank people who help you be successful? How would your work relationships be different if you added “Write thank-yous” to your weekly tasks — and wrote them? 58
Next Step Think of one person who has done something special for you lately or who has consistently supported your work. Nurture that relationship by sending a thank-you email, card, or handwritten note acknowledging the special effort or support. Repeat.
Give Positive, Powerful Feedback When I was in graduate school at Notre Dame, in South Bend, Indiana, I worked as an editorial assistant at a law center. I was new to journalism, and I struggled to get the lead right in stories and to compose clear, useful articles. My editor, whom I will call Ruth, usually applied a red pen heavily to my writing, or at least it seemed that way to me. Often I wondered whether I caused her more work than I contributed. For various reasons, I decided to move to New York City to take writing classes at City College. When I told Ruth I would be leaving my job at the center, she responded, “Oh, but you were doing so well!” She went on to say that she would really miss me and the good work I was doing on the newsletter. Miss me? I was stunned. I had no idea I was doing well. Ruth had never indicated that my work was good. She had never said or written anything to balance the strikes of her red pen. Had I known I was doing well, I might have blossomed on the job rather than worrying about whether I was worth keeping. I might have found a way to stay in South Bend to work happily with Ruth at the center rather than moving to New York City. But I had not received positive feedback, and I did not know Ruth valued me and my work. It was easy to leave. I learned many lessons on the job with Ruth. The one that stayed with me is this: Give positive feedback — lots of it. Here’s how giving positive feedback leads to great work relationships: When you give positive feedback, you help people recognize what they are doing well. They feel good about their performance, and they are likely to appreciate you for pointing it out. Your positive feedback shows that you value your coworkers and associates enough to pay attention to their work and take time to comment on it. It is proof to them that their good work is recognized and valued. Positive feedback motivates people to continue doing what they are doing well. In turn, you get to enjoy working with high-performing people, who are likely to seek you out as a project partner. Giving positive feedback builds others’ trust in your positive intent and judgment. When a sticky issue comes up in the future, that trust helps you work through the problem together. Positive feedback can be wildly powerful in building relationships and strengthening performance. This chapter shows you how to share positive feedback in writing so it does both. 60
Do You Give Positive Feedback? I taught a class called The Art of Giving Feedback several times at a well-known hightech company. After the class participants and I agreed on the importance of positive feedback, I would ask how many of them gave positive feedback to others on the job. Nearly everyone would raise a hand. Then I would ask how many received positive feedback from their supervisors. Almost no hands went up. The two sets of raised hands were strikingly different: At least 90 percent gave positive feedback, but only 10 percent received it. My experience at that company corresponds with what I found in my survey on business writing and relationships. In it, 60 percent of respondents said they give positive feedback to others frequently; 19 percent said they give it daily or nearly every day. Yet 80 percent said they have wanted to leave a job or an assignment because they were not receiving the positive feedback they felt they deserved. Clearly, lots of people think they are giving positive feedback, but just as many feel they are not getting it. My conclusion: There is a huge opportunity to build relationships and improve performance by giving positive feedback more often and more effectively — so people know it. Unmistakable Positive Feedback Consider this straightforward example of positive feedback in an email: Subject: I liked “Vacationing at Home” Tye, nice job on this month’s newsletter! I liked your tips on staycations, which covered both simple and elaborate things to do. You gave me several ideas I am going to suggest to Ellen and the kids. I always enjoy reading the newsletter. I am sure our clients appreciate it too. Thanks for all you do! Dana After reading the email, would Tye recognize he had received positive feedback? Yes! Dana’s comments convey positive regard with the phrases “I liked,” “nice job,” “always enjoy,” and “appreciate it,” among others. The message gives a specific example of something Tye did well (the tips on staycations). It mentions that Dana will pass on the information, giving Tye’s work a wider audience. It expresses enthusiastic appreciation. When Tye reads Dana’s feedback, he is likely to smile, then perhaps write a quick thank-you to Dana for taking the time to compliment the newsletter. He may imagine Dana, Ellen, and their kids out on one of the local adventures he suggested. And the next time he writes the newsletter, Dana is likely to be in his mind as one of his attentive, thoughtful readers. The following emails also convey positive feedback, but they do so much less effectively. Message 1: Re: Vacationing at Home 61
Tye, nice job on this month’s newsletter. Thanks. Rob Message 2: Re: Vacationing at Home Tye, I liked this issue and your tips, but don’t you think we need more balance between urban and rural activities? The special offer was catchy, but I thought we were going to extend the deadline to the 30th, no? Nice job. Ricardo Message 3: Re: Vacationing at Home Tye, when I received this, I realized I had forgotten to tell you I enjoyed the January issue on how to fight germs while traveling. It was good advice. Krissy Could you feel the difference between Dana’s example and Messages 1, 2, and 3? Dana’s message, while brief, includes the essential elements of motivating, positive feedback: Specifics — not just generalities like the “Nice job” of Message 1. Complete focus on positives — no buts or back-pedaling like the buts in Message 2, which wipe out the positive feeling. Promptness — not untimely feedback like the reference to an earlier issue in Message 3. Significance — a reason why the positive outcome or behavior matters; for example, Dana’s “You gave me several ideas” and “I am sure our clients appreciate it too.” Significance was missing from Messages 1, 2, and 3. Notice how the detailed feedback below includes the essential elements. Subject: Your fine work with Ed Stern Hi, Aamani. I wanted to share some positive feedback on our sales call this morning. You were brilliant. First off, you briefly introduced yourself, focusing on the aspects of your background that would interest the client. Ed lit up when you mentioned your supply-chain experience. Then you segued to his situation and asked relevant though not pointed questions, which would have put him on the spot. Your “Tell me about …” approach was perfect. It let him focus on the issues important to him without any awkwardness. 62
The way you wove in our company’s capabilities when you responded to questions was very subtle and effective, not to mention completely natural. You came across as a trusted advisor. I am certain Ed’s request for a proposal was prompted by your warm engagement with him. Just wanted to share that I admired your work today. Richard If you were Aamani, how would that positive feedback make you feel? Appreciated? Pleasantly surprised? Confident? Delighted? Grateful? All of the above? Whether Richard was your manager or your peer, his message would almost certainly have a positive impact on you and your relationship with him. The Best Feedback Is Specific It is quick and very easy to say “Great job.” But the phrase “Great job” packs much less power than it would with specific details. The phrase could come across as insincere or even sarcastic. To recognize and write about what made something a “great job!” or a “good job,” think about the difference between what the individual did and what a bad performance would be like. For example, if a new student intern did a good job on his first day, how was his first day different from a bad first day? Is it that he arrived on time rather than late? That you never saw him on a cell phone, whereas other interns have spent most of the day texting? Was he curious rather than uninterested? Did he offer to help rather than surf the Internet when work slowed down? In this example, a supervisor conveys positive feedback to an intern: Subject: Feedback on a Good First Day Luke, I wanted to give you some feedback on your first day in Engineering. I appreciate how you conducted yourself, and I wanted to let you know. It was great you were willing to come in early for the safety meeting. I know coming in early on a Monday morning can be a drag. People were impressed you took the initiative to introduce yourself. John told me you asked very good questions as you shadowed him, and your interest made it a pleasure to work with you. He also mentioned that when he was busy talking with Derek, you read industry magazines rather than just texting or doing nothing. You are off to a good start, Luke. We look forward to working with you. Linwood How would Luke feel if he received a message like that one? If the first day had been stressful for him, he would probably feel terrific that his efforts to keep it together had been successful. If he had had a pleasant first day, he would probably be happy to know that others shared his positive feelings. The feedback would tell him that people noticed him and were pleased with his first day’s performance. Luke might also feel lucky to have 63
a supervisor who cared enough to pay attention to him and let him know how he did. That feedback could be the start of a great relationship. Even though positive feedback can be a powerful relationship and performance builder, some perceptions about it can get in the way of sharing it. Here are three views to consider changing: “I don’t do mushy.” Some people — men more often than women — find it uncomfortable to pay compliments. They say positive feedback isn’t their thing. In many cases, they worry that they will come across as mushy, inauthentic, or both if they share positive words. But positive feedback that is specific is not likely to come across as mushy or insincere. The details make it work. Consider these brief examples: Hey, Larry. You coming in early last night meant we could get the trucks loaded and out before the weather got too bad. As usual, your flexibility helped a lot. Much appreciated. Kyle, I observed your interactions with members today, and I wanted to give you positive feedback on your upselling. You mentioned our mortgages, investment services, and business lines of credit, in each case choosing the right product for the member. I can see that you are applying your training and are well on your way to meeting expectations. Bobby — Tom showed me the hoist you invented. Sweet! Using that, we won’t be straining our backs to move each job. Can’t wait to try it. Mind over muscle! Hi, Chrissy. I observed you assisting the customer who is sight impaired. You made helpful suggestions without rushing her. She might have been the only customer in the store, with the focus and patience you showed her. Thanks for representing us so well! Delia, I read your response to Dr. Wells. Great job! You were firm while polite, and you made it clear to him that he had several options. It was a very effective message, which presented us professionally. Hi, Pam. My trip went perfectly with the travel arrangements you made. The hotel was comfortable and right across the street from the center, as you said. It was lucky for me that you gave me the client’s cell number — she was waiting for me in a conference room, but no one knew where. So I just phoned her cell and located her. 64
Thanks for your attention to detail! It made the long trip easier. Alex, I just saw the Tanakas’ side yard. It’s breathtaking! When Mrs. Tanaka said she wanted a rock wall, I could not imagine how it would work in that space, but you pulled it off. Your design made the most of the limited light, and your plant choices should keep maintenance low for a long time. Just wanted to compliment you on a job well done. Jackie, I just read your email. Your concise notes captured my understanding exactly. Thanks for taking the initiative to write up what we agreed on. It saved me a lot of time. Reviewing that feedback, you will find these positive expressions:
The list includes no mush, no obvious insincerity, and only one “Great job!” “We don’t do positive feedback.” If your workplace culture resists positive feedback, your efforts at building relationships one message at a time may seem out of place. But you are reading this book, so you have the desire or a reason to communicate differently on the job. Start small, putting your positive feedback in writing so that no one feels embarrassed by a public display of admiration. Then keep at it, and watch for results in the form of budding relationships and consistent positive performances. Remember: Every important movement starts with a single action. “I have no time for this!” 65
The secret to having time for positive feedback is to write it (or to make a note to yourself to write it) as soon as you notice the excellent work. You don’t have to go into great detail. For example: Walking through the lunchroom, you speak to a new employee, who praises several aspects of the day’s orientation program. On your smartphone, you send a text to the training designer: “Marty, I got a huge compliment on your onboarding program from a new employee. He loved the map challenge and pop quizzes. Nice work creating new evangelists!” Finishing with one patient, you notice that the receptionist is engaged in conversation with the elderly patient you have kept waiting. You scribble a note to remind yourself. Then when you have a moment, you write a quick text, note, or email: “Kathryn — I was so relieved that you kept Mr. McGowan occupied. Very thoughtful! He was smiling, even though I kept him waiting so long. Thanks!” Reviewing the month’s sales figures, you notice that one rep has moved from number 25 to number 16 among your reps. You grab your iPad and text her: “Kayla, your ranking increased to 16 last month. Great numbers! Your preparation is getting results!” Learning that your grant has been renewed, you send a quick text, update, or email to the grant writer: “Edgar — good news! They extended the grant. Your attention to the details paid off, literally. Many, many thanks!” Of course, you may not have even a moment to scribble a note to yourself or type a short feedback message. If that is the nature of your day or week, do your best to share your positive words in writing, by phone, or in person when you can. Moving Feedback From Positive to Positive and Powerful To take your feedback to the next level, from positive to positive and powerful, apply these suggestions: Be specific. It is perfectly acceptable to write a general comment such as “Great work!” but add why the work was great. The details make the message stick. Avoid using the word but after a compliment. But is guaranteed to erase any positive feeling in the reader’s mind. Compare these statements: I liked your rapid turnaround, but the mistakes were disappointing. I liked your rapid turnaround. It was wonderful to get the document back so fast. When you do need to communicate both positive and constructive feedback, include the constructive part in a separate paragraph, or at least in a separate sentence. The previous two-sentence “rapid turnaround” compliment might be followed with this statement: “A 66
few mistakes need to be corrected.” Use the pronouns you and your when making positive comments. The pronouns give credit clearly to your reader. Compare these examples: The event-planning ideas were very creative and expertly carried out. Your event-planning ideas were very creative, and you carried them out expertly. This is the best proposal for cleanup services I have read. You wrote the best proposal for cleanup services I have read. When appropriate, share positive feedback with others beyond the recipient. If you communicate positive feedback in an email, for example, copy the person’s supervisor on the message. If you write positive feedback for a peer on your team, copy the team on the message. Normally copying others makes everyone feel good. However, in a potentially sensitive situation, ask yourself whether the copies could cause hard feelings. Imagine, for instance, that Joseph was named project leader, a role that Amy was disappointed not to get. Copying Amy on positive feedback to Joseph might make her feel worse. Include why the person’s performance or traits are valuable. Perhaps the individual’s contribution: Made your life easier. Made the department look good. Enhanced the company’s reputation. Taught you a helpful lesson. Built goodwill. Increased efficiency. Created positive buzz. Saved time and money. Created beauty for everyone to share. Reduced accidents. Made everyone feel good. Ensured customer satisfaction. Whether you are a CEO, supervisor, manager, individual contributor, entrepreneur, consultant, or student, share positive feedback every day. Look for opportunities to recognize people’s contributions to your success and contentment. Tell the chef your blackened shrimp was cooked just the way you like it. Send a personal note to the choir director commenting on his fine musical selections. Send a memo to the office manager commending her successful efforts to hire competent staff. Post a notice on the break room bulletin board praising the entire lab for their contributions to an incident-free site visit. 67
Give positive, powerful feedback — lots of it! It will strengthen your business relationships, making them more supportive, rewarding, and enjoyable. And it will strengthen performance.
Personal Reflection One survey respondent said, “In my current position, I have never once been told ‘Good job’ or ‘You did a great job’ or even ‘Thank you.’ Yet I am a diligent, honest hard worker.” Could the writer of that comment work with you? Think of evidence for your answer. Next Step Add “Give positive, powerful feedback” to your planner or calendar as a daily activity.
Send Congratulations to Warm Hearts and Build Relationships It was January 1 when I made a happy announcement to my marketing support group in a program called Marketing for More. I wrote on the discussion board that I had broken a new record for daily page views on my blog — 23,543 on the last day of the year — and I shared some ideas about blogging. Then I enjoyed the congratulatory messages that appeared on the discussion board from my marketing mentor, Marcia Yudkin, and from Marketing for More members Doris Jeanette, Lesley Peters, Alice Risemberg, and others. Lynn, That is stupendous. If just a small portion of those people “stick,” then it can’t help but get your business growing fast. Congratulations for a great start to the new year. Marcia Lynn, You have done an outstanding job on your blog and your niche. Wow! Great. Enjoy, celebrate, and feel good. Doris Lynn, Thanks for sharing, and for your great ideas about coming up with blog post topics! Awesome statistics for you! Congratulations!!! Lesley Lynn, big congratulations! And a heartfelt thank-you for posting your thoughts on what works for your blog. Even though they seem specific, I can see ways to draw out the general ideas. Yay for you! Alice Congratulations warm my heart. I glow when people say, “You have done an outstanding job” in response to one of my successes. I enjoy congratulations even more when friends and associates add complimentary details about how I reached my goal — 69
about how hard I worked or how creative I was. I feel as though they have seen me at my best — and have really noticed. I am not alone. According to my survey on business writing and relationships, 91 percent of people appreciate receiving written congratulations when they achieve a goal or they experience success. A simple, positive way to connect with people and strengthen your business relationships is to congratulate people on their achievements. The four messages I cited from my marketing support group members average just 28 words each, including my name and the writer’s. What could be simpler for you than to write a congratulatory sentence or two to a business associate, customer, or coworker? Yet that small investment brings you and the other person together for that moment, as the sender and receiver of good wishes and a smile. This chapter gives you inspiration, tips, and examples to help you write notes of congratulations. Many Ways and Many Reasons to Congratulate Congratulatory messages can take many forms: printed cards, e-cards, emails, LinkedIn inmail, Facebook postings and private messages, tweets, handwritten notes, and brief, typed business letters. Send congratulations to your colleagues and contacts for many reasons. For example, when they: Get accepted to the college of their choice. Graduate. Pass a demanding professional exam. Get a new job or start a new career, especially after looking for a job for a long time. Earn a job promotion. Start or expand a business. Buy a business. Sell a business. Complete a challenging project. Make significant progress on a challenging project. Land a new client or contract. Reach or surpass a goal. Are featured as a presenter at a prestigious conference. Finish a work of art (visual, musical, etc.). Write a book. Publish a book. Win a prize. Win an award or receive an award nomination. Publish an article in a prestigious publication. Are recognized as an expert by a respected news outlet. Receive recognition for an achievement or a series of achievements. 70
Become a citizen. Are ordained. Get engaged. Get married. Have or adopt a baby. Have or adopt another baby. Become an aunt, an uncle, or a grandparent. Celebrate a milestone (an anniversary, a number of years of sobriety, etc.). Buy a boat, a horse, or another exciting leisure purchase. Buy a home. Buy a vacation home. Buy a retirement home. Retire. Begin a new career after retirement. When they start a new job, venture, or phase in life, people appreciate notes of congratulations. These notes can remind them of their own qualifications and their own excitement — reminders that are especially helpful as they face the intimidating aspects of starting something new. Joanne Masterson, a web designer and Marketing for More member, sent the following affirming congratulatory note to Leslie Guria, who was making great progress on starting a personal chef business, Fresh From Your Kitchen. Notice how Joanne mentions Leslie’s specific strengths. Leslie, Congratulations. I think you are off to such a strong start because of a lot of things you bring to the business: strong web copy, great design, your love of the work, and your knowledge of how to use local media. Congratulations, and keep up the inspiring work! Joanne Write Your Best Congratulatory Notes Like the success for which you are congratulating someone, you want your messages to be positive and motivating. Apply these suggestions to make your notes their best: Be specific. Use the individual’s name, and mention the specific achievement. If possible, share a compliment that ties to the achievement. In the congratulatory email below, I wanted to remind Bill of his strengths, since an extended search can demoralize job seekers and shake their confidence. Subject: Congratulations, Copy Editor! Dear Bill, Congratulations on your new job as a copy editor! I am so glad you have landed a job that is a good fit for your editorial strengths. Having benefited 71
from your editing skills and excellent proofreading eye, I know you have much to offer. I wish you a rewarding, enjoyable experience in your new position. Again, congratulations! Best regards, Lynn Respect individual preferences if you are aware of them. One person responding to my survey wrote, “I am super private and don’t like to be the center of attention. A private congratulations, email, or note is appreciated.” For such an individual, avoid notes in public places such as their Facebook wall or the lunchroom bulletin board. Avoid sarcasm, teasing, and anything that might detract from the positive feeling. A comment such as “It is about time you got a real job” may be intended as playful, but it can come across as judgmental, especially for someone who has endured a long job search. Similarly, “Congratulations on passing the bar; I guess three times was the charm” can wound someone who is embarrassed about the early failures. It is difficult for people — even those you know well — to distinguish sarcasm from seriousness. Personal humor can also hurt unless you make a dig at yourself rather than the person you are congratulating. Do one job in the message: Congratulate. As with all relationship-building messages, congratulations are most powerful when they have one purpose. A sales letter that begins with congratulations is a sales letter — not a sincere congratulatory note. Its congratulations feel hollow, as illustrated in this letter opening: Congratulations on your award as PR [public relations] Executive of the Year! As a sponsor of the celebratory luncheon, we are excited to have an individual like you honored for the contribution you make to the business community in our region. XYZ Printing is also committed to the success of local businesses. As you may remember from the work we did with you, XYZ’s printing services … The following message to Pete, which is a note solely of congratulations, does a better job of strengthening a relationship and therefore paving the way for future business opportunities. Dear Pete, Congratulations on your award as PR Executive of the Year! It is proper that you be honored for your creativity, leadership, and contribution to our community. Working with you on your Save the Zoo campaign, I appreciated your leadership and clarity, and I was struck by your far-reaching vision for our community. It is a delight to see you being widely appreciated and 72
recognized with this honor. With best wishes, Jerry Klein Owner, XYZ Printing Remember Your Online Communities With online communities, you can easily read about people’s life changes and congratulate them. Communications consultant Deb Arnold regularly sends brief congratulatory messages like these to people in her network: Subject: Congrats on your new position Hey Kojo, Saw your new position on my handy LinkedIn update. Congrats! Also read about your volunteer deployment, and greatly admire your courage and commitment. Hope you’re enjoying SF and your new role. Keep in touch. Best, Deb Ed, congrats! Fantastic news! And a nice bit of press as well. Life is falling into place for you, my friend. Couldn’t be happier for you. Wishing you much continued success! Hugs, D I sent this brief message to a contact I did not know well, although we had exchanged emails over the years: Subject: Congratulations on Your New Position Hi, Kathleen, I just saw on LinkedIn that you have a new job. Congratulations! I hope it is everything you want it to be. Best wishes, Lynn Here is Kathleen’s response to my message: Many thanks. It’s an amazing opportunity with an amazing company! I’ll be in touch if we need your wonderful services! In fact, Kathleen did need my services and contacted me about doing workshops for her 73
new employer. She may have thought of me to teach writing classes without the congratulations, but I am certain my message jogged her memory of me and my work. It is not required that you have a close relationship with someone in order to congratulate them. All you need is the desire to maintain a connection. Technical writer Randy Averill described the reason he sent congratulations to someone on LinkedIn: I saw that a former peer was promoted. We used to be in the same industry (home building) and, as such, we would cross paths often. We’ve both moved on in our careers, and we live about 1,000 miles apart, but we remain connected on LinkedIn. I thought a brief recognition of his promotion was in order. We’re not close enough that I would send him anything personal, so I sent him a message through LinkedIn.” Below is Randy’s message. Notice how it rebuilds the relationship with Kevin by recalling specific details. Subject: Congratulations! Kevin, I saw on LinkedIn that you’ve been promoted. I’m glad to see that [Company name] has been able to appreciate your work in the relatively short time you’ve been with them. It’s especially comforting to see you move ahead in these difficult economic conditions. I hope all is well, and I miss the regular get-togethers we used to have in the home building industry. I trust you’re still enjoying your cars. Congratulations again, Randy Should You Congratulate People You Don’t Like? The reason for congratulating others is to build and maintain relationships. So if you don’t want a business relationship with someone, you may choose to skip the congratulatory note. But think twice about that decision. If you do not like an individual but respect him or her, having a polite though not friendly relationship may still benefit both of you. You may share contacts, referrals, and opportunities. These two congratulatory messages are professional without being overly friendly. Dear Tabitha, Congratulations on winning the Rogers case. Your work on the case was brilliant. I am delighted for you and for the entire defense team. Congratulations on a job very well done. Everett Dear Conrad, I am pleased to congratulate you on your new position. You have worked 74
diligently, and it is fitting that your hard work has paid off with this new career opportunity. I wish you continued success. David Congratulations for Many Situations It is easy to spread joy and maintain relationships by recognizing people’s successes. These sample messages may get you thinking about people and situations in your work life. Note: As emails, each might have the subject line “Congratulations!” or something a bit more specific. For an intern who is graduating: Hi, Erika. Congratulations on finishing at U of C! What an achievement! That you finished school while working so hard for our team is something to be commended. I heard about your travel plans to Europe. It is just like you to set a goal and then set things in motion to achieve that goal. I hope that you travel safely and joyfully. Please stay in touch. Warm congratulations, Katie For an older college graduate: Chris, congratulations on your graduation! We know how many years you have been waiting for this day and how hard you have worked to get here. We all admire your perseverance and unwavering focus on your goal. Congratulations, college graduate! Your friends in Accounting, Jessica, Albert, Sumonta, and Nicolas For someone with a new business: Hi, Cara. I received the SHRM [Society for Human Resource Management] notice about your presentation this week and realized you have a new business. Well done! I hope it’s a great triumph for you. Your presentation sounds brilliant. If I were in Seattle, I would definitely attend. Much success to you! Jake For someone who has reached a level of prestige: Dear Donna, 75
I just did a Google search with an etiquette question, and your site was number 1 in the list of sites. Wow! I was delighted to see that your reputation as an expert has spread. I poked around on your site and learned a lot. The high quality of your content and your willingness to share your knowledge are very impressive. Congratulations on building such a positive business and level of success. Roger Smith For someone who has published a book: Hi Cindy, Congratulations on your new book, Great Webinars . I just ordered it online. Can’t wait to read your advice and wise words. I have heard how much blood, sweat, and tears go into birthing a book and just wanted to congratulate you on having done it. Warm regards, Carol Morgan For someone who has been promoted: Hey, Tina. I just had lunch with some of the women in Sales, and they told me about your promotion. Great news! Congratulations! You are so deserving of it. Your hard work and smarts have always stood out. You are an asset to the company, and it is terrific that you have been recognized this way — the way it counts. Just wanted to join those who are cheering for you! Hip hip hurray! William For someone you do not know who has been promoted: Dear Joyce, I just read RoAnn’s announcement about your promotion. Congratulations! Gizelle Olson is a friend of mine, and she often tells me about the creative work you have been doing in Design. Obviously, other people have noticed your great work too. Congratulations on moving ahead! Best, Deanna Jones For someone who has bought a new home: Hi, Cormac. Congratulations on your new home! Uptown is a wonderful neighborhood. I hope you and Debra have many years of happiness in your new place. 76
Warm wishes, Suzan For someone who has announced retirement: Dear Mr. Han, Congratulations on your upcoming retirement. I hope you and Mrs. Han will be very happy in this new phase of your lives. You have been a generous mentor and guide for me as I learned the trade. I am very grateful for the lessons you shared. Best wishes for a fulfilling retirement, Adam McLaughlin The best congratulatory notes communicate in a tone and style that match the relationship. When she graduated from high school and was moving away to attend college, my daughter received this exuberant message from our hair stylist, Lisa DodgeJohnson: Congratulations, Eva! Celebrate a job well done! This is such an EXCITING TIME. Remember all those “butterflies” you may feel are colored by your thoughts, so when you can, choose to think “I AM SO EXCITED!” (instead of “I’m so scared,” etc.). New Orleans is so lucky to get to meet you. Your innate Goodness, Talents, Beauty, and Wisdom, along with your passionate efforts, will be a Gift to the world, especially to all of us who get to share moments with you. May You Be Blessed by God’s Grace Forever! Love and hugs, Lisa P.S. Keep the music flowing! Like Lisa, you can let loose with all-capital letters and exclamations if you choose to. After all, notes of congratulations are to celebrate something special. Let your writing reflect joy and excitement. This chapter contains 43 exclamation marks!
Personal Reflection Do you take the time to congratulate others? If so, congratulations! If not, what gets in the way of sending congratulatory messages? Do you want to start a new habit? Next Step
Review the long list of reasons to send a note of congratulations. Then write one. Enjoy celebrating someone’s success and sharing in his or her happiness. Then congratulate yourself for taking action to maintain that business relationship.
Convey Condolences to Connect With Others When Hurricane Katrina struck the southeastern United States in September 2005, I wanted to do something that would make a difference. Watching the images on TV, the people waiting desperately on the roofs for rescue, the drowning of entire neighborhoods, I wanted to help. Beyond making financial contributions, I ended up writing a blog post to help people write condolences to those who had suffered devastating losses. To my surprise, that small gesture made a big difference. From that day on, the visits to my blog skyrocketed from just dozens of daily page views to over a thousand views each day, and they continued to rise rapidly. Blog visitors used search strings such as “writing condolences” and “how to write a sympathy message.” With the huge increase in blog traffic, I recognized two facts: (1) Everyone needs to write condolence messages at one time or another, and (2) Most people find the task difficult, nearly impossible. Do those facts fit you? In the face of sorrow, tragedy, and loss, do you feel you can’t find the right words and the ways to put them together? This chapter will help you with the important task of writing to someone whose life has been changed by loss or suffering. The task is important because for those who have experienced a profound loss, hearing from you is a lifeline. Receiving notes, letters, cards, emails, and calls reduces isolation, loneliness, and helplessness. People who have lost someone or something important need to hear from you. Should You Send Sympathy Messages in Business Relationships? If you are wondering whether to send this kind of personal message in a business relationship, the answer is yes! Take the risk. Sending a note or card gives you the opportunity to connect with another human being who is suffering. At the very least, it shows that you care enough to communicate in a difficult time. Your reaching out may establish a memorable bond between you and the person in crisis. In what better way can you nurture a business relationship? When my business contact Margaret Elwood’s father died, I sent her a sympathy card with a handwritten message. Margaret is someone I like very much, but I have met her only twice outside work situations. Here is how she responded to my card: Dear Lynn and Michael, Your sympathy card was timely and very, very helpful to me during difficult days last week. And though I received several notes of condolence through email, I found in my distress that a tangible card I could see on my desk was really much more comforting. Thank you so much. This week is much better, and though I know that grief takes its own time 79
outside of my control, I am feeling grateful for the years I had with my father and for the time I have with friends like you right now. Margaret Although our relationship focuses on work, our personal connection deepened through our exchange of messages about Margaret’s father’s death. You write condolence messages because of the pain the other person is feeling. But just thinking about that pain can make you feel awkward and stumbling as a writer. In my survey on business writing and relationships, 28 percent of people said they did not know how to write a condolence message or were not sure they knew how. A larger number of men (37 percent) than women (25 percent) put themselves in this category. Two respondents shared these comments: I always have a terrible time with this. Anything I write doesn’t sound genuine. I’ve often just given up and sent nothing. It has recently happened [the death of a coworker’s family member], and I had no clue how to express sympathy. Helpful Tips for Writing Condolence Messages If you feel unsure about how to write this important message, consider these tips to handle the task with confidence and care: Do not be embarrassed if you can’t think of the “right” words. Your goal is not to be perfect but to make a sincere connection with another human being. Write what you feel. Express your care, concern, or understanding. Acknowledge the other person’s loss. Even the brief sentence “Words do not suffice” expresses empathy and caring. Remember that the purpose of this message is to connect with the bereaved. Comfort and support are the reasons for the message — not preaching or gaining converts to your beliefs. If you feel it is appropriate in your situation, you may write, “You are in my prayers.” But do not express your beliefs on fate, death, dying, or related spiritual matters (for example, “She is undoubtedly with the Lord now”) unless you are certain they will comfort the reader. Avoid any comments that may cause discomfort, embarrassment, or defensiveness. If it will slow you down to send a note or card through the post, send an email or another kind of online message expressing sympathy. If possible, send a note or card through regular mail in addition to the online greeting. Remember Margaret’s comment, “Though I received several notes of condolence through email, I found in my distress that a tangible card I could see on my desk was really much more comforting.” It is easy for people to reread cards and notes as they sit quietly and reflect on their loss. Also, sending a card can be easier for you. Printed cards typically include words of comfort, to which you can add your own. But do not wait to find the “perfect” card — you 80
may never find it or get around to mailing it. Avoid bringing up work-related topics. For example, do not write, “We cannot wait to have you back on the project,” which may suggest that you are rushing the individual’s period of grieving. Do not include your business card, which suggests you are promoting yourself. If you are worried that the recipient of the card will not recognize your name, include your company name under it. Sign off with a standard close. People sometimes fret about the way to close a sympathy message, especially if they do not know the recipient well. Below are acceptable closes. If a close doesn’t feel appropriate, you may simply sign your name.
When you send a message of condolence, add the date to your calendar. That way you can remember the anniversary with your colleague who lost the family member or friend, if you choose to. You might send a brief note like one of these: Dear Keina, At this time of year I remember Sam’s passing and think of you. I have been thinking about what a generous, funny man he was and how much you must miss him. Know that I am thinking of you during this time of remembering. With warm wishes, April Dear Mr. Robson, With the holidays upon us, I remember that Jeff died over Christmas break last year. I just wanted you to know that I am thinking of you as you remember and grieve the loss of your loving son. Sincerely, Julianne If you are thinking that it is untruthful to add a date to your calendar and then imply that you remembered it, think again. You remembered to add it to your calendar. Then when your calendar reminded you of the anniversary, you remembered the individuals involved. Some people prefer to remember happy times rather than sad anniversaries. If you happen to know the birthday or wedding anniversary of someone who has died, you can acknowledge that date with the grieving family member or friend. For example, my father died at age 90. On what would have been his 91st birthday, I received a beautiful card 81
from Hiers-Baxley, the funeral home in Ocala, Florida, that handled all the details of his memorial services. The card prominently showed my father’s date of birth and included the message, “On your loved one’s birthday, may the happy memories of yesterday be a comfort to you.” It was signed by three members of the Hiers-Baxley team. The card acknowledged my father’s special day, which I had been thinking about, and it reminded me of the caring way the Hiers-Baxley staff had treated us. When you have a close business relationship with someone who has experienced a serious loss, take time to check in with the individual and remember the loss. One of my friends lost her husband suddenly to a massive heart attack. Because of my friend’s shock and grief, she suspended the violin lessons she had been taking. Two years later she told me, “My violin teacher never checked in to see how I was doing or whether I wanted to start lessons again. It made me feel she did not care, so I decided not to go back to her.” Perhaps the teacher had felt awkward about following up, but a brief message — for example, “Just checking in to see how you are doing” — would have indicated that she remembered her student’s pain and would have maintained their relationship. Sample Condolence Messages Don’t avoid sending a sympathy message because you don’t know what to say. You will have missed an important opportunity to connect with another human being in a moment of sorrow and loss. Use these examples to adapt to your situations. When you can share a warm story about the individual who has died, share it. You will notice that in some messages the paragraphs are indented. It is standard to indent paragraphs in handwritten notes. In emailed messages, do not indent paragraphs. Upon the death of a spouse: Dear Matthew, We are so sorry about Ellen’s death. She was a lovely woman who touched so many lives with her joy and generosity. We miss her deeply already, and we can only imagine the heartbreak you feel. One of our fondest memories of your dear wife is of the kindness she showed to the refugee family from Rwanda. She treated them like her own family. She involved many of us in that kindness, and we were all better people because of it. Ellen lived her life as a model of grace and goodness. We are very lucky to have known her. Please accept our deepest sympathy. Kent and Mary Upon the death of a parent: Dear Martha, Please accept my sincere condolences on the passing of your father. I am so sorry about your loss. Although I never met your father, I know how much he meant to you. Through your stories of his frugality, his love of nature, and his loving support of you, I feel as though I knew him. I know he was a fine man and 82
that his absence will be felt by many people. When my father died, it gave me a good feeling to talk with people about him. I would enjoy hearing more about your father and his life if you would like to share memories when we get together. In the meantime, I will be thinking of you and your family. With deep sympathy, Joanna My colleague the late Steve Holtzer sent the email below to his business associate Russ Taylor upon the death of Russ’s mother. Russ and Margaret, Like you, let me begin by apologizing for the use of email at this time. I am so sad to hear the news of the passing of Russ’s mom on Friday. Although I never met her, I did have the privilege of hearing Russ speak fondly of her whenever he and I met or talked on the phone. And even without meeting her, I could tell that she had a very kind heart, for it lives on in Russ. No doubt she was very proud of the son she produced, and rightly so. If there is anything I can do for you during this time of grief, please let me know. Steve Holtzer A year later Steve himself died. That is when Russ shared with me the condolence message Steve had sent him. Clearly, it had made a significant impression on Russ. Upon a death after a long illness: Dear Erik, Please accept my sincere sympathy on the passing of your brother. Although he suffered for a long time and this moment may seem like a blessing, it is still a grave loss for you. Life is never quite the same when a sibling is no longer present, and I am sorry for the hardship you are experiencing. I will hold you and your family in my thoughts and prayers as you experience grief and sadness. There are many like me who are thinking of you. With warm regards, Linda Upon the death of a difficult person: Dear Su, Please accept my sympathy on the death of your mother. I know she was 83
difficult at times, and no doubt you are experiencing a range of emotions. Nevertheless, the death of someone who has been important in your life always creates an absence. I am very sorry for your loss. I am keeping you in my thoughts as you move through your bereavement. With sincere condolences, Scott Upon the death of a child: Dear Dr. and Mrs. Clarke, All of us in the lab are so sorry about the death of your beautiful daughter. We wish we could find words that would relieve your pain, but we cannot. Losing a child is one of the saddest experiences, and words of true comfort are difficult to find. Please know that we are thinking of you in your sorrow. You have our sincere condolences. In sympathy, Devon, Matt, Yuri, Alex, Jasmine, Ray, and Terry In rare instances when you have been informed by an individual of her miscarriage, you may wish to communicate your sympathy in writing: Dear Deborah, I am so very sorry about your miscarriage. From our conversations, I know how excited you and Gary were about conceiving this child. I can only imagine your feelings of loss and disappointment. If there is anything I can do during this painful time, please tell me. Nan Upon a death when you know very little about the situation: Dear Monique, All of us are very sorry to learn that you have experienced a death in your family. Although we do not know the details, we want you to know that we are thinking about you in your bereavement. Please accept our condolences. Sincerely, The Marketing Team Upon a death by suicide: Dear Neal, Please accept our sincere sympathy on the tragic death of your brother. We are very sorry that he is no longer with you. No doubt this awful event has been very disturbing for you, your family, and your friends who knew and loved David. We are thinking of you and 84
them in this time of loss and bereavement. If we can help in any way, please let us know. With sympathy, Jennifer and Lionel Upon the death of a beloved pet: If you have experienced the death of a pet, you know that it can be just as sad as the loss of a human being, sometimes more so. The deep sadness comes from the loss of companionship, loyalty, and unconditional love that a pet gives so enthusiastically. When an employee, coworker, client, or friend loses a beloved pet, send a note of condolence — just as you do when a loved one dies. Our beautiful English cocker spaniel, Chica, died on her 14th birthday. We were surprised and touched by a sympathy card we received a few days after Chica’s death, from the veterinarian, Dr. Hanna Ekström of At Home Vet, who had come to our house to put Chica to sleep (that is, to euthanize her). We were surprised because we had not known the vet until she came to our home that sad day. Yet she took the time to express her condolences in the card: You have my deepest sympathy over your recent loss of Chica. I could tell how well loved she was and what a wonderful life she had led. May you find comfort in your many memories of days shared and of her floating away so peacefully with you all by her side. Hugs, Dr. Hanna We cried just reading the thoughtful words. Yet we deeply appreciated Dr. Hanna’s message. I wrote the email below to friends whose elderly dog had died, then followed it with a sympathy card. Dear Tim and Patrick, I just read your message about Victor’s passing. I am so sorry for your loss. In my experience, there is no creature like a dog for unconditional love, enthusiasm, zest for playing, and unending expectation of life’s next treat. I imagine that his place in your home, your daily routines, and — of course — your hearts will long seem empty. I will remember Victor’s beautiful bows and his wandering sniffs at picnics. I will also remember how dear he was to you. Please accept my deep sympathy. I will be thinking of you in your sorrow. Lynn Because I had met Victor many times, I was able to write something about my 85
experience of him. But even if you have never met a customer’s, boss’s, or vendor’s pet, you can write notes like these: Dear Mandi, Please accept my sympathy on the death of your dear companion, Isis. I know the big role she played in your life, and I am very sorry that she is no longer with you. I will be thinking of you as you grieve the loss of your beloved cat. Sincerely, Robin Dear Julie, We were so sorry to hear that Sunny died in an accident. From the many photos that have decorated your desktop, we know she was a light in your life, and we realize that you will miss her deeply. Please accept our condolences on your sad and sudden loss. We are thinking of you. In sympathy, Shelly and Annie Dear James, I was saddened to hear the news that Ernie’s life ended last week. Although I didn’t know your pooch, I know how much you cared about him, and I know you will miss him deeply after your many years together. Please accept my sincere sympathy on the passing of your dear friend. Dan Upon an illness or injury: A condolence message is a fitting, thoughtful gesture anytime someone experiences a serious blow or setback. Dear Mr. Graham, Joan told me today about your hospital stay and that you are now at home recuperating. I was very sorry to learn of your accident and the injury to your back. Please accept my condolences and warm wishes for your healing. I hope that as each day passes you will continue to feel better. Know that I am thinking of you as you rest and heal. Sincerely, Kay Brooks Dear Nelly, Thank you for including me in the email you sent in which you let us know 86
about your treatment for cancer. I am sorry to learn of your illness. Please forget all about work and focus completely on your healing. All of us will be sending you positive, healthy energy and lots of smiles and virtual hugs. Get well soon! Tiffany Upon an illness or impending death of a colleague’s relative: A woman whom I will call Diana works as a consultant. Diana told me about the time in which her mother was dying. Because of all that was involved in her mother’s illness and care, Diana had to postpone several meetings with clients. She explained to each client the reason for the postponement, and all of them replied with appropriate expressions of sympathy and understanding — all except one. He wrote back something like this: “Okay, just let me know when you are back in business. We need to finish the project this quarter.” Stunned by the man’s insensitivity, Diana decided she would never work with him again. Don’t come across like Diana’s inconsiderate client. If an associate is dealing with the challenges of ailing relatives, send a message like one of these emails: Hi Diana, Thank you for letting me know about your situation. I am so sorry your mother is seriously ill. I hope the next days and weeks go as well as possible for you, your mother, and your entire family. I understand your need to put our project on hold. Please take the time you need, and let me know when you can resume our work together. Edward Hello, Emmett. So sorry to hear about your daughter! I will keep all of you in my thoughts as you deal with this very difficult situation. Please stay in touch and let me know if I can be of any assistance. Best regards, Amanda If the project simply cannot wait, express sympathy and understanding before jumping into work details: Dear Ahmad, I am very sorry to learn that your father has entered hospice care. I can imagine what a strain this situation puts on you and your family. Please accept my sympathy. Because we are under a short deadline, I hope it is acceptable to you if I speak with Evan about getting someone to jump in to assist in your role. I 87
trust that knowing the project is moving forward will help you focus on your father’s needs and your own. I will be thinking of you and your father. Best wishes, Leo Upon unexpected job loss: Re: Bad News About Your Job Nadia, I just learned from Aruna what happened at XYZ. I am so sorry about your job! The news is a shock to me. I can’t even imagine how you feel. As soon as you are ready to, please call me and let me know what I can do to help you. I will contact you again soon to see when you want to meet for coffee or a walk. Yours, Fabiana Re: News About Your Leaving XYZ Hello, Wayne Thanks for letting me know what happened. From what you described, I am guessing you were not surprised by the news. Still, losing a job is a colossal change. You have my sympathy. If I can help in any way — introductions, resume review, whatever — just let me know. Stay in touch — and I’ll do the same. Faazaz When Natural Disasters Upset or Ruin Lives Natural disasters touch many people, some more deeply than others. People may lose or be separated from loved ones. Their homes or businesses may be destroyed. Their future may be turned upside down in one way or another. In early 2009 Australians experienced destructive, tragic bushfires. A blog reader named Fionna wrote to me asking for help to write a condolence message to friends: I want to send a card to friends who lost their home in the recent bushfires in Victoria. Luckily they were away when the fires hit, but with the loss of their home and its contents and the damage to the community, I would like to commiserate with them. Any ideas on what to write? I had many ideas for Fionna because of the condolence messages I had started writing when Hurricane Katrina hit the southeastern United States. I created the examples below 88
for victims of the bushfires, of Hurricane Katrina, of the earthquake and tsunami that devastated Japan in 2011, and of Superstorm Sandy, which crippled New York-New Jersey and other coastal areas in 2012. You can adapt them for similar natural disasters. For Fionna to send to friends who lost their home and community: Dear Simon and Samantha, I am so terribly sorry about the loss of your home and the devastation of your lovely community. You have been in my thoughts since the blaze struck. I was relieved knowing you were away from home, but I share your sorrow in all that you have lost. Please know that I am thinking of you in your time of sadness and loss. Fionna For someone whose family member died in the bushfires: Dear Stephen, Please accept my condolences on the death of your brother Nigel. His sudden death in the bushfires is tragic and heartbreaking. We all wish we could undo what happened and bring him back as his funny, wisecracking self. The world is a lesser place without Nigel in it. I wish I had words that could make your pain less. At least you know my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family as you grieve. In sympathy, Carl For someone who suffered because of a hurricane; easily adaptable to other situations: Dear Betty, I am so sorry about the heartbreaking losses you have experienced through the hurricane. Please accept my deepest sympathy. As you move through the difficult days and weeks ahead, you will be present in my thoughts. If there is anything I can do to ease your loss, please let me know. I would be grateful for the opportunity to help you. With sincere sympathy, Rene For someone whose business and coworkers have suffered: Dear Mansour, We are deeply sorry to learn about your losses caused by the hurricane and its terrible aftermath. Please know that we are all thinking about you and your coworkers as you piece together your lives and your work. You have our sincere condolences. 89
Adam and Vincent For someone whose plans have been crushed: Dear Mitch, Talking with Estrella, I learned about how the hurricane has upset your plans for retirement. I am very sorry this happened! I know it must be extremely difficult for you. I simply want you to know I am thinking of you. I wish you the best possible outcome. Sincerely, Jim Downs For victims of a huge storm: Hello, Warren. I just learned from Brittany that your cottage on the Jersey Shore was wiped out in last week’s storm. Please accept my sympathy on your loss. As someone who was lucky enough to have been your guest, I know how much fun you and your family shared in that bungalow and how many good memories you must have. I am very sad that the cottage is gone. You are in my thoughts. Linda Kathleen, How sad I am to learn that your lovely Twinkles was lost in the storm! I know how you treasure that dog, and I can imagine that the lack of knowing what happened to her is extremely painful. I am sincerely sorry for both you and Twinkles. Warmest wishes, Lisa Dear Rhonda, Please accept my sympathy on the death of your wonderful husband. I am so very sorry about the terrible accident that took his life. The fact that Frank died in an attempt to save others illustrates the courage and love that filled him. I am keeping you in my thoughts and prayers as you grieve this deep loss. With sympathy, Marie For anyone who has experienced serious loss: 90
Dear Quinn, Words cannot express how sorry we are about the recent tragic events that have touched you so deeply. Your loss is huge. We can only imagine the hurt you feel. We want you to know that you are in our thoughts and prayers. Please accept our condolences and our hopes for your healing and renewal. With sympathy, Thomas and Ashley For people in Japan who suffered the earthquake and tsunami: If you need to write across cultures, the examples that follow may be helpful. They primarily use short sentences and literal language to communicate effectively across the language barrier. To match the Japanese focus on the group rather than the individual, the notes mention the community and the country. I intended the messages to be restrained and dignified rather than flamboyant and familiar. Dear Shinichi, As I watch my TV and see the snow falling in northern Japan, I think deeply of you and the struggles your country is facing. I am touched by the bravery, collaboration, and patience of the Japanese people of all ages. It is very sad that the earthquake destroyed your school. I understand how important your school is to the members of your community. I hope that you and the people in your community will be able to obtain food, water, and all necessities. I also hope that your spirits will remain positive as you work to reconstruct your society. With all good wishes, Barbara Allen Dear Mr. Suzuki, Thank you for writing to us. We are thinking of you, your coworkers, your families, and your community as you work to recover from the tragedy of the earthquake and tsunami. We are grateful that your office building in Tokyo was not affected. Yet we recognize that everyone in Japan has been affected profoundly by the recent events. You are in our thoughts as you strive to recover and rebuild your beautiful country. We wish you strength, peace, and safety in the days and months ahead. Sincerely, Carl and Suzanne Gray Build Relationships in Difficult Times When you are wondering what you can do to help a business associate who is 91
experiencing a sad loss, stop wondering: Send a sympathy message. For those who receive them, cards and messages of sympathy and condolence provide an essential link with other people in a time of loss and need. Provide that link. Be that lifeline. Establish a strong, possibly lasting bond between a client, customer, or coworker and yourself.
Personal Reflection A respondent in my survey wrote, “It is very touching when someone (anyone) takes the time to acknowledge your pain.” Do you feel comfortable acknowledging loss and pain in a condolence message to a business associate? What might you do to reduce any discomfort? Next Step Prepare yourself for occasions that require a message of condolence by purchasing several sympathy cards and keeping them with your letterhead or notepaper. A card with a brief, tasteful message makes your task easier. You can write a sincere sentence or two, then sign and send the card.
Personal Introductions: Pave the Way to New Relationships Ron Scott estimates that he has introduced more than 14,000 people in the past 20 years. That’s a conservative number, he says. Ron, who works as an independent leadership and organizational development consultant in the Seattle area, calculates that he introduces more than 700 business people each year, virtually all through email. Having known Ron and benefited from his business matchmaking for more than 20 years, I find his figures credible. You can see Ron’s process at work in the following email, which he sent to Deb Arnold and me. Subject: Introduction Lynn and Deb, I am pleased to introduce you two. Lynn, Deb Arnold is a Seattle-based communication consultant. Deb guides organizations to create and deliver internal communications that help achieve enterprise and department goals more effectively and efficiently. Thinking there is high potential for mutual benefit in you two meeting, I suggested that she call you to schedule an appointment. Thanks in advance for meeting with Deb. Deb, Lynn Gaertner-Johnston is Founder, Syntax Training, a business writing training firm. Her office phone number is [number]. Best regards, Ron Ronald G. Scott Scott Associates Shortly after we received Ron’s message, Deb and I exchanged emails to set up a meeting. Since our first meeting, she and I have had lunch many times. We have called and emailed each other for business advice. She has been a guest speaker in my communications classes in the MBA program at University of Washington–Bothell, and I have attended her choir concerts. Although our relationship focuses more on our businesses than our personal lives, we consider each other good, trusted friends. We have Ron Scott to thank for our rewarding relationship. Why Take the Time to Introduce Others? With his 14,000-plus introductions, Ron Scott is a master of paving the way for others to create business relationships. Why does he do it? Ron views introducing people almost as 93
a way of tithing, a way of giving back to the business community. “I like giving back to a business world that has been so good to me,” he says, “by introducing people whose lives I believe will be enriched in their meeting.” Although Ron emphasizes giving back and experiencing personal fulfillment, the benefits go beyond good feelings. Twenty-five years after making an introduction that led a woman named Jennifer to a productive career move, Ron got a call from Jennifer. She was planning to retire, and one of her last acts before retiring was to recommend a consultant for an important project at her firm. That consultant was Ron. In the project, he earned $175,000. Ron emphasizes that only occasionally is there such a direct return to him for connecting people. But I’m betting the less direct returns are huge. Ron has no website, blog, or Facebook page, and he doesn’t tweet. He gets all of his consulting and coaching assignments through personal referrals, and his work plate is as full as he wants it to be. Referrals come not only from doing excellent work, but also from the high regard of one’s associates. Ron has earned high regard over the years, in part because of his willingness to help others. He acknowledges that link: “Connecting people demonstrates that I am not just living this life for myself. I am of service to my community. Obviously, I get benefit from that.” Ron’s planting the seeds of relationships for others is part of building and maintaining his professional network. The subtitle of this book is “How to Build Great Work Relationships One Message at a Time.” As a first step in building relationships, introductions spark interest, enthusiasm, and often generosity. This chapter shows you how to add introductions to your writing repertoire. Choosing People to Introduce It is difficult to imagine introducing 14,000 people, so why not start with just two people you know who do not know each other? Think about ones who have, as Ron says, “matching or complementary values, beliefs, and behaviors.” Do they have common interests and goals? Are they at a similar place in their personal lives or careers? Think about how a business relationship might benefit the two people. Could one offer the other advice on starting a business or restarting a career? Is one of them in a place to mentor the other or to make further introductions? Could one of them share insights on how to thrive in a new city or industry? Is one looking to hire an employee or contractor, and the other seems like a possible match? Ron Scott looks for a match in which both people will leave the meeting thinking, “Wow! I am glad I met that person.” As he explains, “They may be saying wow for both personal and professional reasons, or one of the two.” Incidentally, Ron has made three networking introductions that led to marriage. Making the Connection You can bring people together by email, Facebook, LinkedIn, or other online services that help you share messages and contact information. Jerry Schlagenhauf, a career consultant in the Seattle area, used the email below to introduce two of his career transition clients. Because he has a coaching role with them and knows them both well, he made very 94
specific suggestions about how they could benefit from meeting. (Details have been disguised.) Subject: You two need to meet each other! Greetings, Angela and Ben. There are numerous reasons that you should connect, and soon: 1. You probably will want to explore your experiences in Chicago and at the U of C. 2. You have a passion for serving and contributing to community justice and understanding. 3. You have professional skills and professional connections that will be mutually beneficial. Angela has exceptional credentials and experience, with 11 years in broadbased anti-bias curriculum models and multiculturalism. She fervently desires to assist decision makers to achieve cultural competencies that translate into improvements in education, training and access to resources for all. She is the Program Manager for the XYZ Association. Ben has a professional background in senior public affairs & government affairs, public policy, and as an attorney. He is currently the public policy director at ABC Medical Center. Ben has a formidable networking capacity in the state of Washington. Contact information: Angela — [phone & email] Ben — [phone & email] Angela, ask Ben about the LMNOP School (and the organizations to which you have already applied). Ben, discuss LinkedIn with Angela. Have a great meeting! Jerry The Schlagenhauf Group That detailed message was an introduction of two people in career transition. This email introduces two people who work at the same company: Subject: Susan, Meet Ralph; Ralph, Meet Susan I am introducing you two because I think you would enjoy meeting and sharing your know-how. Susan, Ralph is an archivist in our SF office. He moved there from Seattle four years ago and can share lots of insights about the SF team and the city. He is a foodie and a baseball junkie. Ralph, Susan moves from Portland to SF next month. She has been with us 95
seven years as a database expert. I bet she can share wisdom to help with your new project. Susan is excited about her move into the big leagues of the company and baseball. Go Giants! You now have each other’s addresses. You can take it from here. David Tips for Making Introductions Apply these tips to make flawless introductions that your contacts will welcome: Have one or more reasons for making each introduction. Mention the reasons in your email. That information will inspire the individuals to communicate. Your reasons may be as a simple as Ron’s “thinking there is high potential for mutual benefit in you two meeting.” Share a few details that will jump-start the connection. Jerry’s email included lots of suggestions to get Angela and Ben talking. David’s email includes information about hobbies, which can help start a conversation between Susan and Ralph. Ask permission from each party before making the introduction unless you know that the individuals are open to introductions. Asking shows respect and an awareness of people’s privacy needs. Include phone numbers if you are certain that sharing them is acceptable to the people involved. Otherwise, just use email, which reveals both people’s email addresses. Avoid making introductions to the same person continually unless he or she encourages you to do so. For example, it would not be wise for David to introduce Ralph repeatedly to San Francisco newbies. Do not introduce someone you are not proud to present. In other words, avoid introducing a jerk. If you find a person arrogant and pushy, assume others will agree. Forego making the introduction, even if the individual requests one. Responding to Introductions If you have been introduced by email, you may take the next step by email or phone. When Ron Scott introduced me to Pete Busacca, an expert in sales and sales strategy, Pete promptly sent this email: Dear Ron and Lynn, Ron, thank you for the introduction and for the kind words. Lynn, I look forward to meeting you. You and Michael have an intriguing website, and I am so curious how you went from “beautiful” Peoria, Illinois, through South Bend, to find yourself here in the drizzly Northwest. I wonder if we might get together over a cup of coffee in the next week or 96
two. Would you be available to meet this Friday around midmorning? If not, please suggest some other dates and times that might work for you. Of course, Michael is welcome to join us. Thanks, and I so look forward to meeting you. Best regards, Pete Busacca Pete’s email is first-rate. In it, he showed that he had done his homework: He had visited our company website and read our bios. He expressed curiosity about me. Also, he took the initiative to suggest a date and time to meet. After reading his email, I was eager to meet Pete, and we scheduled on the Friday morning he suggested. Success! We both widened our professional circles, thanks to Ron Scott. Introducing an Individual to a Group Just as 1-to-1 introductions benefit both people, introducing someone to a group or to the entire company has great benefits for everyone. Consider this email example: Subject: Welcome Pat Nielsen to Sales I am pleased to announce that Pat Nielsen will join the Sales group as Sales Assistant on Monday, April 11. Her role is to help us produce outstanding proposals, presentations, web demos, and related materials and events. She reports to Stephanie Brown. Pat’s experience is a terrific fit for the job. She comes to us from XYZ Company, where she worked first in retail sales and then as a store event coordinator. Before working full time, she earned her bachelor’s degree in business from the University of Washington. She loves to kayak, hike, and take nature photographs. She did all three on a recent trip to Maui. If you are at headquarters, stop by Pat’s desk on the 4th floor and introduce yourself to her. You can also reach her at Ext. 2003 and [email protected]
Bill Richards Director of Sales Benefit to the Sales group: Everyone who reads the message will learn a lot — who Pat is, what her role in Sales will be, when she starts, whom she reports to, why she was hired, who she is outside work, how she can be reached, and how to welcome her. People will feel they already know her. Benefit to Pat: When she reads the email from the Director of Sales introducing her to the group, she is likely to learn how important she is to the team and to feel terrific, especially when people stop by to say hello. Benefit to everyone: The email will probably inspire Pat to feel that she made the correct choice when she accepted the job. In turn, that feeling will inspire her performance. 97
Introducing new employees is a step that often gets overlooked, except at the highest job levels. But overlooking introductions can leave new employees feeling alone and anonymous, and it can stifle their ability to contribute and grow. Tips for Making Introductions to a Group Follow these tips to write introductions that ignite excellent work relationships: Include basic information: the new person’s name, role, reporting relationship, relevant background and education, and contact information. Adding a personal detail, such as Pat’s specific interests in the outdoors, will enrich the introduction and help employees relate to the new hire. Be consistent about introductions. If you introduce the senior manager, introduce the receptionist. You may use fewer details for the receptionist because his or her career may be shorter and responsibilities narrower. Nevertheless, introduce everyone. Even in economic downturns when people are being laid off, new employees should be welcomed with an introduction. Decide on the appropriate audience for the introduction. You may choose to introduce the new employee to your department, your division, or the people in your building. If your company is small (100 people or fewer), you may write to everyone. Think about who is likely to interact with the new employee. Those people will need and want the introduction. Choose a communication medium that makes sense for your company. It may be email, a newsletter article, or a posting on your intranet. Let the individual know that you will publish the introduction, and give him or her a chance to approve the content. For example, in the message introducing Pat to Sales, the writer or his assistant might have asked Pat’s permission to mention her hobbies and her recent trip to Maui. Do not use sarcasm in your introduction, and be very cautious with humor. Avoid any content that could detract from the positive tone. Introducing Yourself: Reintroductions You cannot always have an intermediary make introductions for you, and you don’t always need one. Often you can introduce or reintroduce yourself. You can take your own steps to launch business relationships. You may want to reintroduce yourself after meeting at a networking or professional event or after not seeing someone for a long time. Reintroductions are easier than introducing yourself for the first time. The person has already met you in one way or another, and you can build on that meeting. Alexandra, a reader of my Business Writing blog, asked me what to write in a followup email to people she meets at important meetings. She explained that at the meetings, she 98
often talks to potential clients or partners for only a few minutes, and she would like to take those brief contacts to the next level. She asked what she can say to potential clients or partners in a follow-up email that will make a good impression. Alexandra had a specific business purpose for her desire to make follow-up contact. Even without a specific purpose, though, it is valuable for most business people to nurture the brief professional contacts that seem to have potential. With nurturing, those contacts may develop into business relationships, not just names in a contact list. Here are things Alexandra and you can do in a follow-up email: Mention the meeting and the conversation. Refer to something specific that came up in the conversation, especially a mutual interest. Suggest a way to continue the conversation. If possible, attach an article or include a useful link that will please the other person (not a hard-selling piece). Mention a next step you will take, or ask the other person to respond. The following examples, whose details are all fictional, show how to follow up in an email after making a good in-person connection with someone. Subject: Oyster Accompaniments and Meeting in DC Hi Mary, What fun it was to meet you last week at the conference! Inspired by our indulging our love of oysters, I have attached my special recipe for oyster accompaniments. My secret ingredient may surprise you. I would enjoy having lunch or coffee with you when I’m in Washington the first week in October. If you will be available, I would like to learn more about your export business and share information about our company. When my schedule is firm, I will write to invite you. Best, Katia Strauss Subject: Pleasure to Meet You and Discuss Global Health Dear Professor Schamb, It was a pleasure talking with you at the Health Initiatives meeting. I enjoyed learning about your work investigating global health programs. Since we talked, I read the research paper you recommended. I found the data disturbing, just as you had predicted. You expressed an interest in learning more about my work with refugees on the Thai-Burmese border, and it would be my pleasure to tell you about it. I will let you know when I will be in Cambridge again, and perhaps we 99
can schedule a meeting. You may also be interested in my blog, in which I wrote about daily life in the camps. Here is the link: [link]. I will write or call you to request a meeting. Sincerely, Mona Lane Subject: Eating Well and Working in Vancouver Nicolai, it was great to meet you at the networking social yesterday. Thank you for sharing information about the best Chinese restaurants in the area. I intend to try the Shanghai Restaurant this weekend. I would appreciate learning more about how you established your business in Vancouver. Would you be willing to meet for lunch or coffee? I will call you next week to invite you. It was a pleasure meeting you. Jeffrey Holmes Subject: Customer Evangelism — Our Favorite Subject Hi, Waleed. I appreciated talking with you about customer evangelism at the gathering last night. Based on our conversation, I would say we have a lot of the same concerns, and I’d like to stay in touch. Despite our different industries, we face the same challenges. Maybe we can share solutions. Attached is an article I wrote about the topic. Let me know if you agree with my premise. If you are going to be in New York, please tell me and we can schedule a meal. I will let you know when I will be in Atlanta. Best, Muhammad Subject: Scheduling Time to Discuss Business in Romania Hi Renee! It was terrific to meet you last week at the symposium. Thanks for recommending Quiet. I bought it yesterday and can’t wait to learn about my introverted colleagues! You said you would like to find out more about investment opportunities in Romania. I would love to talk with you about the possibilities. Since you will be traveling for the rest of this month, would you like to schedule a conversation early next month? I look forward to talking with you again. Just let me know a day and time that suit your schedule. Donna 100
When You Do Not Get a Response At times your efforts to reach out won’t get a response. When you do not receive a reply, you can take another step. For example, let’s say Donna did not receive a reply from Renee to her email about scheduling time to discuss investment opportunities in Romania. Donna might take one of these two steps: 1. Write a brief follow-up email in which she forwards or attaches her original message. That email might simply say: “Hi, Renee. I am betting your heavy travel schedule is winding down now. Do you want to schedule a meeting to discuss investment opportunities in Romania? Please let me know a good day and time.” (Better yet, Donna could suggest several dates and times and ask Renee to let her know which is best.) 2. Call Renee and leave a message similar to the one above. If Donna still does not hear from Renee, she may wait a month and then make a final try. She cannot know whether Renee is uninterested, extremely busy, or not responding for another reason. On September 14, 2011, I received an email from Ron Scott introducing me to a Seattle-based coach named Rachel Salzberg. On that same day, Rachel emailed me. I scheduled a coffee date with her but had to cancel because of a family situation that required travel. I let Rachel know that I would get in touch with her when my schedule lightened. It was not until the following summer that I contacted her again! Rachel and I met over coffee, exchanged many helpful ideas, and made an excellent connection. Moral of the story: Do not assume that someone’s delay in responding or scheduling means a lack of interest in meeting you. Timing can be everything. Not every effort leads to a blossoming business relationship. I received an email from a young man I will call Thomas, who was disappointed by a lack of response to his request for a meeting. Thomas wrote to me, in part: I am about to kick-start my career after graduating in finance, and I’ve always realized that contacts are very, very important. Hence, I would like to seek a few words of advice on following up on new contacts. Recently, I met a person who would serve me well as a business mentor, and I wish to get to know him to share ideas and learn from him. After a quick handshake meeting for the first time at a conference, I took the initiative to text him to establish a relationship the next day. However, he did not reply to my offer to meet and have a more serious conversation. May I know what I did wrong and what I should have done in this case? What should I do now to proceed? I would appreciate your insights as to what made him not respond to my approach. Many busy professionals guard their time carefully. They weigh each request to determine whether the prospective relationship will be rewarding for them and whether 101
they have time for it. Thomas’s request may have been unsuccessful for several reasons: When he met his potential mentor, they did not make a meaningful connection. Thomas said it was only a “quick handshake meeting,” which is too quick an encounter on which to build. It is possible the mentor could not even remember meeting Thomas. Thomas texted the mentor to make a connection. His message was probably short and unremarkable. If Thomas put little effort into his message, it would be unusual for it to spark a reply. Thomas’s wanting the individual to “serve me well as a business mentor” shows the two men at different places in their careers. Only if Thomas clearly communicated a reason for the other man to want to get to know him and mentor him would the other man respond positively. Most successful relationships are complementary, not with one person “serving” the other. Thomas asked me what he should do now to proceed. One possibility is to find a mutual business contact — someone like Ron Scott — to pave the way with an introduction. The other is to take time himself to write a more complete, polished introduction than a text message. Introducing Yourself to Strangers When you introduce yourself to people with whom you have no previous connection, you need to establish one. That happens by sharing information about yourself and making a logical connection to the other person. I received the following email of introduction (disguised) from a stranger. What was missing from the message? Subject: Networking Introduction Hi. I’m a former Sun reporter who was laid off in May when the paper went online-only. I’m looking for the best fit in the occupational arena for my skills and experience. Lizzie Blake of XYZ Company suggested I talk to you. I’d like to meet with you for 20–30 minutes, at a time and place of your convenience — coffee, drinks, just talk, whatever. No specific agenda — I just want your perspective. Thanks. John Black [phone number] John’s clear, concise message included a bit of information about himself and a referral from someone I knew. The piece that was missing was any tie to me. The message was so generic that it could have been sent to anyone — at least anyone who knew our mutual contact. If the email had not mentioned someone I knew, I would have deleted it. Instead, I replied with two words: “Why me?” John wrote back and explained why: 102
To draw on my experience as a writer and editor to teach writing, maybe targeting business people who want to learn to write more effectively in a time when they may be called on to write more (emails, blogs, internal websites, etc.). From a look at your website, it seems like that’s your field — so I would hope to learn more about it, and the opportunities it presents, from you. Once I understood why John wanted to meet me — and not just anyone with a job — I was happy to schedule time and share ideas with him. When you introduce yourself to strangers, especially when writing to request a professional favor, as John was, be sure to include specific information that helps readers understand why the connection makes sense. This step does not have to slow you down. If John had simply greeted me by name and included a complimentary sentence about my work, blog, or website, I would have replied, “Sure!” instead of “Why me?” Consider this sample email introduction and request: Subject: Request Regarding Music Business Internships Dear Mr. Wilson, My neighbor Debra Young suggested I write to you. She thought you might be willing to share your advice on finding an internship in the music business. I am graduating from Ballard High School, and I am starting the music business program at California State University in Northridge (CSUN) in the fall. Until then, I am available for a few weeks this summer and would like to get some industry experience. I have good computer skills, and I am open to lots of experiences. I would prefer a paid internship, but I am open to some volunteering too. I live in Seattle. Would you be willing to talk with me on the phone or meet with me? My cell number is [number], and you can text or email me. Thank you! Dwight Bell Dwight’s polite introduction includes these parts: A referral from someone Mr. Wilson presumably knows A reason for the message A self-introduction, including what Dwight is looking for A specific request Contact information If Dwight did not know someone who could introduce or refer him to Mr. Wilson, he might have opened this way:
Dear Mr. Wilson, In research on the Internet, I learned that you are a local expert in the music business. You have worked on Folklife, Bumbershoot, and other music festivals. I am writing to you as someone who might be willing to share your advice on finding an internship in the music business. … When you email a stranger to introduce yourself, be clear about your reason for writing. Do you want advice from the other person? Would you like an answer to a question? Would you like to have coffee to discuss a business challenge? Know what you want so you can make your request clear. Too often people introducing themselves to strangers put very little effort into the message. For example, they send this low-effort standard request for a connection on LinkedIn: “I’d like to add you to my professional network on LinkedIn.” The recipient of this invitation from a stranger has little or no idea why the stranger wants to make a connection or why the recipient might want one. Currently, the recipient’s only choice on the free version of LinkedIn is to accept or ignore the request. Rather than connecting with strangers about whom they know nothing, many people do nothing. Yes, the stranger’s first and last names are included with the request. The recipient could do an Internet search or even a LinkedIn search to try to find out something about him or her. But why do that work without a good reason to connect with someone? If you want to connect with a stranger professionally, write your request so that the other person will feel positive about connecting with you. Your introduction need not be elaborate. Consider this example, which fits within LinkedIn’s length restrictions: Hello Leslie. I need to institute 360 feedback at our hospital. According to your profile, you have plenty of experience with 360 in health care. May I connect with you about best practices? In return, I’d be happy to share info on our innovative onboarding program. Jeni Smith [Title, Hospital name] The request makes it clear what the individuals have in common (their human resources roles in health care) and how the individuals may mutually benefit from the connection. Such a specific request usually wins acceptance. Introducing Yourself in Business Support Groups and Forums If you participate in online or in-person groups designed to help you professionally, your introduction to the other members can help you kindle valuable business relationships. Typically an effective introduction lets people know who you are, what you seek, and what you have to offer. In the following message, Caroline Grimm introduced herself online to the Book Authors Circle, a support group to help authors write and publish successfully, run by Susan Daffron. 104
My name is Caroline Grimm. I live in the Great State of Maine, where I spend a lot of time shoveling snow. It’s a hobby I’m looking forward to giving up soon. Since I was a kid, I’ve been writing. I made up stories for my younger brother and sisters to entertain them or comfort them. When I was in junior high school, I spent my summers researching various topics (composers, poets, etc.) and then wrote research papers on my findings. Did I mention it was summer vacation? Clearly, I needed to get outside more. I’m the author of two business books: Stop the Cash Flow Roller Coaster, I Want to Get Off! and Strength in Numbers: The Entrepreneur’s Field Guide to Small Business Finances. I’ve written a number of businessrelated articles. I’m working on my third book: The Small Church Survival Guide, based on a campaign I spearheaded to keep my childhood church from closing. The goal is to have that done by November of 2009 (how’s that going?). [Caroline was writing this introduction in 2011.] I have an unusual relationship with a church mouse named Perley. He writes stories, and I help him compile them into books. He has two books published: Dear Church Folks … Letters from Perley and God’s Own Mouse … More Letters from Perley . He is working on his third book, which I think will be published by the end of this year. Susan was kind enough to let Perley join the Book Authors Circle for free. I’m also working on a novel based on the real-life diary of a young woman who lived in my town. It takes place between the years 1857 and 1862. I call her a cross between Jane Austen and Scarlett O’Hara. Fascinating story of a very difficult time in our history. Looking forward to meeting everyone and supporting each other’s goals and progress! Caroline Caroline Grimm, MBA Author of Stop the Cash Flow Roller Coaster, I Want to Get Off! www.CashFlowRollerCoaster.com Like every good introduction, Caroline’s is tailored to her audience — in her case, other authors. Her introduction would be very different if she were writing to a group of Maine entrepreneurs or to church members wanting to keep their church doors open. She included enough content to give new group members a good sense of who she is and what she has to offer the group. Her introduction sparkles with evidence of her wit and her comical self-deprecation. Compare the introduction below of Deb Arnold, whom I mentioned earlier in this chapter. Deb posted her introduction on the online discussion forum of Marcia Yudkin’s Marketing for More program. 105
Hello to all, I’m an entrepreneur for the second time around (taking a break to go to business school and work in corporate America). With 20+ years of experience in marketing communications, I specialize in internal communications for large companies and have niche specialization in helping companies apply for and win industry awards. It’s with this expertise that I hope to build my “information empire,” or at least a modest jurisdiction. Born in the Midwest and raised in upstate New York, I have also lived in New York City, Jerusalem, Tel Aviv, and Madrid. Now in Seattle, I enjoy travel, art, music, and nurturing my inner outdoors person. Thanks in advance for your insights and wisdom. Deb Like Caroline, Deb offers specific information that makes her unique in the reader’s mind, for example, her niche specialization. Her 20 years of experience show that she has something to offer the group, yet she welcomes the insights of the other participants in the forum. It’s a strong, yet modest introduction. Tips for Introducing Yourself to a Group in Writing When you have the opportunity to build relationships in an online support group or forum, apply these tips to your introduction: Share information about your professional experience. In a professional introduction, that is what people expect from you. Leave out irrelevant information, or people may focus on it instead of what you really want them to know. For example, if you were introducing yourself as a new member of a professional chefs’ group, you would leave out your master’s degree in religious studies — unless it tied to your cooking expertise. Share at least one detail about your personal life that others can relate to, for example, Caroline’s shoveling snow in Maine, and Deb’s living in Jerusalem and Tel Aviv. Make it specific enough to be memorable or meaningful. For example, rather than “I love sports,” say, “You can find me on the tennis court or the golf course every week.” Instead of, “My hobby is spending time with my family,” say, “My hobby is keeping up with my 5-year-old twin boys.” Don’t share too much. Even if you have had a 30-year career, people will normally take just a minute to read your introduction. Limit it to one double-spaced page or a large screen. Much less than that can do the job and be appealing. Remember: If you want to build relationships, you need to come across as a person — not as a resume recitation. Avoid bragging. To share accomplishments without coming across as haughty, use 106
language such as “I was gratified to” or “I had the good fortune to.” Or use Caroline Grimm’s approach, interjecting one or two self-effacing comments among your successes. Responding to the Introductions of Others To help launch business relationships, take time to respond to other people’s introductions. Kathy Goughenour, another entrepreneur participating in the Marketing for More (MfM) program, responded to Deb Arnold’s introduction this way: Deb, You are a world traveler! It sounds like you’ve had an exciting life. As a fellow escapee from the corporate world, I applaud you for taking the plunge and jumping back into the entrepreneurial pool. I look forward to getting to know you better. Welcome to MfM! Kathy Goughenour Become a VA or Hire a VA www.expertVAtraining.com Even though Kathy’s reply is short, it does exactly what it needs to do: acknowledge Deb’s introduction and create a connection between them. Kathy makes that connection by mentioning something they have in common, being “escapees from the corporate world.” “I Am Pleased to Introduce …” Whose introduction will you write? Do you want to introduce two individuals who have much in common? Will you announce a new employee to your organization? Perhaps you will introduce yourself to a professional group or to an individual in your community or across the globe. Whether you introduce yourself or other people, you are quite likely to benefit from the good will you create. Why not write an introduction today?
Personal Reflection Have you ever introduced people or yourself in a written message? If so, how did you benefit from the introduction? If not, how might you benefit intangibly or materially from making an introduction? Next Step Read the final paragraph of this chapter. Decide on one introduction to make, and add the task to your calendar to complete within the next week.
In Your Job Search: Write Messages That Build Relationships and Create Opportunities If you needed to cross a wide, rushing river on a blustery day, would you cross by one of many available bridges — or would you swim, gasping and flailing, to the other side? You would use a bridge, right? Unless you were training for a triathlon or testing yourself in extreme sports, it would be crazy to try to swim across when you could cross by bridge. Using your relationships to help you find a job or a client is the same as using a bridge to cross a swirling river. Rather than struggling on your own, exhausting yourself in the process, you can use your personal and professional networks as bridges to your goal. Getting the job or client may still be a huge challenge, but it will be easier and faster to achieve your goal with your contacts helping you. Many people do use their relationships as such bridges. In my survey on business writing and relationships, 86 percent of respondents indicated that they had used networking at least once or twice to find a job, client, or customer; 34 percent said they had used it many times. One commented, “The last four positions I’ve been in have come about purely due to relationships/networking.” In this chapter, you will learn to write messages that help you maintain relationships and use them as bridges during the challenging period of looking for a job. By using such bridges rather than floundering on your own, you can more easily reach your career goals. Although the chapter focuses on using networking to get a job rather than to acquire clients, you can use similar messages to get clients and customers. My longtime business associate Lynn Takaki was celebrating a new job as I worked on this chapter. Lynn agreed to share her relationship-building messages, from leaving her job, through the process of looking for a new position, and finally to landing one. Her messages, along with other models, will help you recognize effective ways to reach out to your network during your job search, at a time when many people feel vulnerable and uncomfortable. The chapter covers Lynn’s and other people’s messages, including announcements that you are leaving a job, requests for help in your job search, thank-yous for support, updates on your search, and announcements of your new job. When Your Job Ends: Announcements That You Are Leaving Maintaining and using your relationships in a job search begins as soon as you realize you will be looking for a new job. Your friends and contacts must be aware that you are in the job market, readying yourself to cross that raging river, to help you negotiate it. The first message you are likely to send is an announcement that you are leaving your job. I learned from Lynn Takaki that she would be looking for a new job when I received this first-rate email from her:
Subject: A Message From Lynn Takaki Dear Valued Business Partners and Friends, After 14 wonderful years at ABC Company, I will be leaving at the end of this year. This is due to the elimination of the VP, Human Resources role and consolidation with the parent company’s regional structure. I am grateful for the opportunity to have served ABC employees, the company, and the community. This would not have been possible without you — my many valued business partners and friends. I am proud of the work we have done to create a culture where ABC has the highest employee engagement levels globally, even exceeding external benchmarks. Your support and friendship throughout the years have sustained and inspired me. THANK YOU many times over. If I can ever be of assistance to you, please call upon me. My contact information is below. With gratitude, Lynn Lynn Takaki [Cell phone number] [Personal email address] Vice President, Human Resources ABC Incorporated [Work phone number, work fax number] [Work email] In this next excellent message, I learned from a client I had worked with for several years that she was leaving her job: Subject: Update Lynn, Just a quick email to let you know that Friday, July 10, will be my last day at XYZ. I’m heading off to new adventures (not even sure what they are yet, but trust me, they will be wonderful). It has been a joy to work with you during my time here. You are such a warm and engaging individual, and I sincerely hope that we can stay in touch and find future opportunities to work together. Going forward, Debbie [Last name] ([email protected]
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I can ever be of service to you. See you on Facebook and/or LinkedIn. All the best! Marie R. Kelly | Human Resources XYZ Company Lynn’s and Marie’s messages do a beautiful job of announcing their departure, Lynn’s to a group and Marie’s just to me. Notice these strengths in their messages: A positive tone. Although both women’s jobs had been eliminated, they used positive language to communicate. Lynn’s message sparkles with words such as wonderful, grateful, opportunity, valued, a n d proud. Marie’s message glows with wonderful adventures, joy, and opportunities. People are naturally drawn to positive energy, and these messages draw their readers to Lynn and Marie. Absence of negativity. Not one negative word appears in either message. Neither woman blames the company for her situation. Although readers may have wondered how optimistic the women felt, both chose to come across positively rather than focusing on the negative aspects of job loss. Connection with readers. Both women solidified their relationships with their readers. Lynn focused much of her message on her “business partners and friends,” liberally thanking them for their support and friendship and the good work they have done. In Marie’s message to me, she honored me with her warm words, including, “It has been a joy to work with you during my time here.” As I read them, I smiled, thinking, “How nice of Marie!” and remembering our interactions. Offer of help. Interestingly, even though both women were losing their jobs, they offered their help. Lynn wrote, “If I can ever be of assistance to you, please call upon me.” Marie told me, “Please let me know if I can ever be of service to you.” Beyond that, Marie gave me the names and email addresses of people to contact to continue working at her company. Communicating their interest in others at a time when their work world was radically changing came across as confident and generous. Contact information. Both Lynn and Marie indicated their desire to stay in touch. Lynn shared her personal contact information; Marie invited me to connect on social media. Thoughtfulness. Rather than leaving their associates in the dark, both women took the time to let people know they were leaving the company. In Marie’s case, I felt honored that she had singled me out for a personal message, especially during a time that must have been stressful for her. Here is another fine example of an announcement of job loss. It is by Charlie Gadzik, a communications manager, who was saying goodbye to his colleagues and a few people outside the firm. The difference in Charlie’s message is that he was already negotiating a 110
job at another firm, although he was not ready to name the company. Subject: Farewell Friends: After 13 years during which I dodged multiple downsizings, my luck has run out. My last day at ABC Company is Friday, Aug. 1. It’s been a great ride. There hasn’t been a day when I haven’t looked forward to coming to work. ABC has a wonderful story to tell, and I’ve enjoyed telling it. ABC also has terrific people. I’m thankful for the opportunities I’ve had to work alongside you and become friends. The good news is that after a bit of vacation, I expect to transition directly to a job with another company in the Seattle area. That should make it easier for our paths to cross again. I hope they do. Charlie My company email box will be active until Sept. 30. I’ll check it periodically. You can also reach me at: • [Home email] • [Home phone] • LinkedIn.com Lynn, Marie, and Charlie were all leaving their jobs because of company restructuring or downsizing. But what if the reason you are leaving is more complicated than that? Perhaps you have not been able to meet performance goals or you and your new boss have not gotten along. Does that information belong in your departure announcement? No! Such negative information should not appear in writing. As in Marie’s message, you can simply omit the reason for your leaving. Or you can touch gently on the reason for leaving, as this opening does: Subject: In Career Transition Dear Friends and Associates, Friday was my last day as public relations manager at XYZ Company. During my five years there, I had many great experiences overseeing strategic media opportunities, managing crisis communications, and publicizing the company’s environmental stewardship and community involvement. However, with the new direction Communications is moving in at XYZ, it is a good time for me to make a career move. The words “the new direction Communications is moving in” communicate neutrality. In contrast, the statements “My new boss and I do not agree on the vision for PR” and “I can’t get along with my new boss” would communicate negativity and conflict. The following negative model shows what NOT to do in a message announcing the end of a job:
Subject: Gone but Not Forgotten? Dear Associates and Friends (you know which you are), Well, (sh)it happened. My new boss decided he wants to bring in a programmer from his former company, someone who understands him. (Good luck with that, Bill!) Therefore, Friday is my last day — I mean my last day at work. (I hope it’s not my VERY LAST DAY.) Expect me to call you so I can mooch meals and lattes off you until I snag my next position. Speaking of which — if you come across any jobs that suit my abundant talents, let me know please … PLEASE! Until we meet again (as Dale and Roy used to sing), Bruce Bruce’s message simmers with negativity in words such as gone, forgotten, (sh)it, mooch, and snag. Although some of his associates and friends might enjoy his snarky message, for others the message may be proof of why Bruce is out of a job. If you are feeling awkward or timid about letting people know you have lost your job, consider Lynn Takaki’s suggestion about seeing yourself as a product. As a vice president of human resources and someone who had hired thousands of people, Lynn told me: “I was not shy about letting people know that I was looking for a new job. An important aspect of any job search is to let people know. Basically, you are marketing yourself. How do you market a product without some form of advertising or communication?” Step One is to let people know that you, the product, are available. Tips for Job-Departure Announcements Apply these tips when you write messages to business associates and friends to let them know you are leaving your job: Include the basic information that you are leaving or have left your job. Do not go into detail about the reason for your leaving, unless it is for a promotion or an exciting opportunity. Don’t share the reason if it presents you or others in a negative light. Stay positive. Use the positive language included in this chapter to avoid sinking into job-loss negativity. Even if you feel horrible, keep your message upbeat to attract positive things into your life. Thank your readers for the ways in which they have helped you, if appropriate. Your graciousness is likely to make your readers feel honored and happy to know you. Offer ways for people to stay in contact with you. Include contact information they can use once you have left your job. Mention your next steps, if appropriate, and let people know how they can help. For instance, if you are seeking a job in a specific geographical region, make your contacts 112
aware of your goal so they can consider who or what they know that could help you. Avoid sarcasm unless you know it suits every one of your readers. Sarcasm typically comes across as negative. Remember that email out-of-office messages are another type of job-departure announcement. Although they are typically short, think of them as a way to connect with others too, as long as that purpose is acceptable to your employer. Here is an example: With the sale of the company, my position has been eliminated effective July 25. All questions about property taxes are being handled by Randy Rose at [email address]. I am looking for a position in another corporate real estate department. If you would like to contact me with leads or ideas, please use my cell phone: [number]. Best regards, Jesus Morales Involving Friends and Associates: Requests for Help in Your Job Search When you are between jobs, you may feel awkward asking for help. You may feel insignificant and powerless without the symbols of your success — things like your office or other work place, company car and phone, state-of-the-art tools, business cards, an expense account or a steady income, and people reporting to you and asking your advice. Such feelings are often the natural consequence of being unemployed when you have not chosen the circumstances. It’s important to recognize that most people find it satisfying to help others in their job search. Rather than watching a friend or an associate struggle across the roiling river, they want to serve as a bridge to a new job or career. And although they would be delighted to help, they may not always know how and may not want to seem intrusive. By reaching out and involving them, you can help them help you and simultaneously nurture your relationships. These emails will give you the idea of how to reach out. Requests to Meet for Advice Lynn Takaki reached out to many people for guidance. Below is her email to a vice president of human resources, a friend of one of her former team members. Subject: Networking referral through Peter [Last name] Hi Michael, I am contacting you at the suggestion of Peter [Last name]. Pete and I worked together at ABC, before the VP, HR position was eliminated and consolidated into the parent company’s HR structure. Pete thought you might give me some insights on the job market and resources that may be 113
useful as I begin my job search. Would it be possible to meet at your convenience? I am fairly open next week, other than Monday and Tuesday lunch hours and Friday morning through lunch. The following week of April 16–20 is wide open. Thanks much and best regards, Lynn Takaki [Cell number] [LinkedIn profile address] Michael agreed to meet with Lynn. Throughout her job search, he referred many job leads to her, along with referrals to key contacts who had been helpful to him in his job search. All that support began with Lynn’s email to him. In the two messages below, job seekers ask professional contacts to meet with them. Of course, the writers could get information and advice from their contacts by phone or email. But in-person meetings, which provide opportunities to connect on a social level, can strengthen relationships. Subject: Working on My Job-Search Strategy Dear Professor Davis, I am writing to request your advice on my job-search strategy. As you know, I left the Army in June, after several tours in the Middle East as a medic. I could really use help in figuring out how to present my work experience in a way that stateside civilians will understand. Because you have made that transition, I thought of you. Would you meet with me to talk about ways to package my experience and determine possible jobs to target? My schedule is open next week on Wednesday through Friday if you are free then. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Rita Oakes [Cell phone number] Subject: Lunch and your ideas Hi Laura. Having left XYZ last month, I am starting to think about what I want in my next position. Do you have time for lunch sometime soon to help me sharpen my focus? I am interested in so many things — it would help to hear your candid responses to some of my ideas. Please let me know a couple of dates that work for you, and we can schedule. Best, Dan
Requests for Feedback on a Resume It’s always a good idea to test-run your resume before submitting it for a position. These examples effectively ask for feedback. Subject: Requesting Feedback on My Resume Hi, Rick. I hope all is well with you. I am getting ready to send out my resume for some sales and service jobs in our industry, and I would appreciate your feedback. Of anyone I know, you are most aware of my skills and strengths in sales and service. Would you be willing to review my resume to be sure I have done a good job describing my experience? Also, if there is anything in the resume that could come across stronger, I would appreciate knowing about it. My resume is attached. If you have feedback to share, I will appreciate it. Chad Subject: A Quick Review of My Resume Dear Karen, You are the most experienced HR person I know, and I value your opinion. Would you be willing to give my resume a quick look and let me know your first impression? Is there anything that comes across as less than professional? I want to be sure to make the best impression I can. Feel free to email or call me, whatever is convenient for you. I welcome your honest opinion. With thanks and best regards, Dorette Both of the previous messages are specific about the kind of feedback the writer wants; neither asks too much of its reader. “Please review my resume and give me detailed feedback” might be too broad a request, suggesting the reader needs to commit significant time and effort. Both messages also come across positively, with words such as ready, appreciate, skills, strengths, value, and convenient. Requests for Help to Approach a Specific Company If you are interested in working at a specific company, you can ask contacts to make introductions to people or to provide information that will make you a more knowledgeable applicant. The emails below make such requests. Notice that they include brief personal content, which acknowledges and helps to maintain the relationship. Subject: Contacts at XYZ Company Hi Gary. How is everything? I hope you are enjoying your new lakeside cottage this summer. 115
I have applied for a job in Consumer Service at XYZ. Knowing that you worked there for many years, I was wondering whether you could suggest someone who could give me background on the customer-service issues people face there. Or is there anyone in Consumer Service you might contact to put in a good word for me? If you have any suggestions or contacts for me, please let me know. I will call you next week if we haven’t connected before then. Best, Christopher Subject: Ways to approach XYZ Company (& blueberry cheesecake) Hi, Carolyn. I created a list of the top 10 companies I would like to work for in our region. One of them is XYZ. Since they are a client of yours, I wondered whether you could suggest people I might network with there. Is there anyone at XYZ you could introduce me to? Also, attached is the recipe you requested, just in time for blueberry season. Enjoy! Elizabeth Lynn Takaki responded to an email of mine in which I had sent her some job listings I was not sure she routinely received. In her response, she mentioned a company she was seeking information about: Hi Lynn, Yes, I do receive these. Thank you for thinking of me and asking. I need lots of help so I really appreciate hearing from you! I recently applied for the VP, HR job at ABC. I know you used to do training for them. Do you happen to know anyone there now? Best to you and thanks again, Lynn If you live in a new area and have few local contacts, be sure to ask your contacts from other areas about people they know in your new locale. Career consultant Jerry Schlagenhauf loves to tell this story: A woman from Maryland — let’s call her Kari — had moved to Seattle and felt she had no contacts to introduce her to Seattle-area companies. With Jerry’s wise prompting, Kari asked her contacts in other places to help her. A friend living in southeast Africa, in Mozambique, ended up introducing Kari by email to several Seattle-area contacts. One of those introductions led to a job. The lesson is this: No limits! Let your mind think boundlessly about the people who might connect you with others. Requests to People You Do Not Know Yet 116
One way to expand your network is to reach out to people you don’t know yet, which these two messages do effectively: Subject: Advice on Launching My Career Dear Ms. Blake, Last month I graduated with a degree in communications and English from XYZ University. Researching on the web, I learned that you have established a successful writing business in the area. Would you be willing to share your advice with me on how I might focus my job search? I have heard there are many highly experienced writers and editors searching for jobs, and I would like advice on how a recent graduate can get started. I will call your office next week to request a meeting. In the meantime, if you want to learn more about me, I have attached my resume. Best regards, Jason Crane, [cell phone number] Subject: Networking Request Hello, Pierre. I read your article in Philanthropy Today on using social media as development tools. I was very impressed with your combination of traditional approaches and cutting-edge communications. I noticed that you are based in Austin, where I am moving next month. I am leaving Chicago, where I have worked for three years as development officer for the XYZ Theater Company. Would you have time by phone or in person to talk about how to get connected in Austin? I would appreciate suggestions or referrals to help me become established in the development community. I have attached my resume to give you a sense of my background. I look forward to hearing from you. Beth Hall, [cell phone number] Tips for Job Seekers’ Requests Apply these tips, which the previous examples illustrate, to write requests that get positive responses: Include normal courtesies such as please, thank you, and appreciate. Courtesy shows that you value the individual and your relationship. Make reasonable requests. For instance, ask for a review of one resume, not several versions. Ask for a contact at one or two companies, not ten. Limiting your request makes it doable and satisfying rather than burdensome. 117
Be flexible about timing. Keep in mind that you probably have more unstructured time than the other person does. Indicate why you are asking the specific individual for help. That way, he or she will recognize how to be helpful. Also, such information establishes or solidifies your relationship. Avoid generic requests, ones that could be sent to anyone. Use positive language to communicate positively and professionally. Keep your message free of negative thoughts and feelings unless your contact is one who would relate to those feelings. Although you may feel discouraged, disgruntled, or fearful, you don’t want such feelings to make someone wary of engaging with you. Take initiative. If an individual offers to meet you at XYZ Bakery and Coffee Spot, do not automatically reply, asking for the address of XYZ. Take steps to find it yourself rather than create work for the other person. The Messages That Make Others Feel Good: Thank-Yous for Support After you have received the advice, feedback, suggestions, referrals, and encouragement from your contacts, thank-yous will sustain your relationships. Thanks-yous remind the people in your network how useful they have been and how much they enjoyed helping you. Your gratefulness may also inspire individuals to do more. Lynn Takaki shared several thank-yous with me; I chose two to include here. This first example is to an executive search firm recruiter Lynn met through networking. Her last comment refers to the fact that Randy was moving his office. Subject: Sincere thanks, Randy! Randy, I truly enjoyed meeting you today and appreciate you taking the time to discuss my work history and experience. I hope we can talk again so that I may learn more about you and your practice. From what I experienced of you this morning, it is evident that you take a very personal approach and care about your candidates as much as you care about your client companies. I like that! As I move forward in this process, I hope we can continue to be in touch. Please let me know if you have any ideas for me to be effective in my search, and if there is anything I can do to assist you, I hope you will call upon me (except I’m not a heavy lifter of moving boxes — good luck with that!). Best regards, Lynn In Lynn’s message below, she follows up on a lunch in which a network contact arranged a meeting with one of his executive contacts. She thanked them both.
Subject: Sincere thanks Dave and Greg, You both made my day yesterday. A lovely lunch “in town” and your great company and conversation gave me a lift. Dave, thanks for the gracious introduction to Greg and the opportunity to connect and collaborate. Greg, thanks for your ideas around my transition and search. I highly value your perspective, and I hope that going forward, we will cross paths again. Please also give my best to Jennifer. As follow-up, I am attaching my resume. I appreciate any leads, contacts, or information that may come to you. I hope that you, too, will contact me if there is any way I may assist you. I feel blessed to have met so many wonderful people on this journey, and having you both in my network of contacts means a lot to me. I am out of town next week for a family visit with my sisters in Chicago. You helped to close out a good week and start my vacation on a celebratory note. Sincere thanks again to each of you. Best, Lynn Did you notice how specific each thank-you was? Lynn told me about her intentions for the messages: “I tried to be very sincere and authentic and to not do the perfunctory communications that don’t show a sincere attitude. Messages like ‘Thank you very much. I appreciate your time. Best regards’ would never work for me on the receiving end, and I certainly didn’t want to be one who delivers messages in that way.” She added, “My follow-up messages were very prompt and personalized and reinforced the relationship that I was trying to build with each individual.” Your thank-yous can be specific and sincere without being as detailed as Lynn’s admirable messages. Consider the thank-yous that follow. The first two are emails; the last two are handwritten notes. Subject: Thanks for Your Help! Dear Shaaz, Thank you for meeting with me to talk about my job search. Your ideas about working as a virtual assistant have me intrigued and excited. I will sit down this afternoon to review the websites you recommended. I appreciate your kind offer to stay in touch and continue to share ideas. You will hear from me! With thanks and best regards, Jenn Subject: Thank You, Sydney! 119
It was super of you to give me resume feedback. I have made every change you suggested, and the new version looks and sounds very professional, thanks to your sharp eye and good ideas. Thank you for investing your time in me and my job search. It is much appreciated! Go Sounders! Maryam [LinkedIn page] [Cell phone] Dear Mr. Miller, Thank you for introducing me to Dee Dee Larson and Annie Tram. Dee Dee and I met yesterday, and she was very helpful with advice about how to stand out as an applicant. She even offered to meet me again to practice interviewing. Annie Tram and I have an appointment to talk on the phone next week. I look forward to getting her perspective on opportunities in advertising. I really appreciate that you shared your contacts with me. Sincerely, Krystal Hammond Dear Carrie, Thank you so much for treating me to a delicious lunch and sharing your wonderful, supportive thoughts on my search. Both were very nourishing! I will take to heart all you shared, and I promise to stay positive and focused. I know an excellent job is out there with my name on it, and I will find it. Thanks for lending me the latest Sandra Brown thriller. I cannot wait to read it! Yours, Carmen Tips for Thank-Yous Apply these tips to write gracious, professional thank-yous that nurture your relationships: Write your thank-you promptly, within a few days. Don’t feel you need to take action on the individual’s advice or information before expressing your thanks. That might take too long and might lead to a combined thank-you/apology. Be specific. Mention the particular advice, critique, information, or other support you received, along with how it is beneficial to you.
Let “thank you” take center stage in the message. Do not just add a perfunctory thanks to a message in which you have asked for something. Use email or another electronic means of communication, or send a note by post. A thank-you note or card that comes by mail often gets more attention than a note on a screen, but thank-yous are welcome in any form. Don’t miss the opportunity to say thanks. Your contacts may notice that you have not followed the normal courtesies, and the lapse may reduce their enthusiasm for helping you again. Avoid trying to sell yourself hard. This message is a thank-you, not a sales pitch. If you find yourself listing your accomplishments or asking for a job interview, you are going too far. Keeping Your Network Informed: Updates on Your Search If you want your network to continue to help you cross the swirling river of your job search, you need to keep them informed. It is not enough to let people know you are looking and then talk or meet with them once or twice. After those first contacts, people want to know what is happening: Have you found a job? Are you still looking? Have you changed your goals or priorities? This message, which Lynn Takaki emailed to about 300 contacts, shows how to update people on your search: Dear Valued Colleagues and Friends: I hope this note finds each of you well — and now that fall is finally upon us, I thought it was time for an update. I wanted to let you know I’m continuing to seek an HR leadership or consulting opportunity where I can assist an organization in leveraging their human resources activities for maximum competitive advantage. Over the past few months of my journey through the career transition process, I’ve been greatly energized and inspired by your assistance and support, and would appreciate it if you’d continue to think of me for any appropriate networking opportunities or job leads you may come across relative to my expertise. While I hope it goes without saying, if there is anything I can do to assist you in return or any introductions I can make on your behalf, through my network, please let me know. All the best and again, my deepest thanks for your ongoing friendship and support! Lynn [Cell phone number] 121
[LinkedIn profile] Of the approximately 300 people to whom Lynn sent her update, about 100 responded. Of those 100, about 50 offered suggestions or a referral. Two of the referrals led directly to Lynn getting a job offer less than one month later. She explained what happened: I sent out the update, and I heard back from a number of people in my network about different opportunities, different leads, people I might want to call. And I happened to get an email from a former colleague who was aware of an opportunity, and he let me know about it. He also knew people in the company who were hiring and he gave them my resume. … Had I not sent that email out, I don’t know whether he would have thought of me. Lynn believes that being introduced through a professional contact made her a strong applicant for the position. She said, “I think that my candidacy carried much more weight because of that personal relationship and the familiarity with me, my work, and my history.” Interestingly, a second person in Lynn’s network, a recruiter, also let Lynn know about the job opening she eventually filled. The recruiter was able to share a lot of information about the company, its leadership, and the position. Having two people give her information about the company (her original contact and the recruiter) helped Lynn decide that the company was right for her. She explained, “These individuals were able to speak very highly of the hiring manager, the CEO, and the company, so there was immediate credibility from my perspective. The personal introduction actually worked both ways.” These positive connections — inspired by Lynn’s email update to her network — all led to Lynn’s getting the offer and accepting the position. (Note: Lynn thanks her career consultant Matt Youngquist, Career Horizons LLC, for his input on the update.) Despite Lynn’s success story, you may be thinking about the possible embarrassment of writing to people after months of looking for a job, with no tangible success. I asked Lynn whether she had felt awkward or embarrassed writing to people, given that many months had passed since she had begun her search. She explained that her problem was not embarrassment, but rather a worry about bothering people: I was not concerned about being embarrassed. I knew when I started the endeavor that it was going to take awhile for me. However, I had thought about sending an update to my network earlier than when I actually did send it. I felt a little bit of reluctance and hesitation because I didn’t want to be a bother. Then I thought back to my own personal experience, and I realized that it’s not a bother. People wonder: Whatever happened to Lynn? Where is she? I remembered that, in fact, a lot of people had asked to be kept apprised of my progress. I also realized that my agenda was not always going to be top of mind for everyone else, so it is natural to do reminders and updates. Even though I hesitated and worked through that, I was actually thanked for the update many times. 122
Lynn and I share a pet peeve. Like me, she becomes annoyed when she spends time offering advice, referrals, or information to new acquaintances who are in a job search — and then never hears from them again. Although such relationships begin with a lot of promise, they end because individuals do not sustain them with occasional contact by email or phone. Don’t let embarrassment or reluctance get in your way of continuing to build relationships as you look for a job. Send updates to keep people involved in your search. Depending on the length (or projected length) of your job search, you may comfortably update your network monthly, every other month, or quarterly — whenever you feel that it is time to check in with people again. Here is another great email update, written by a recent college graduate named Cameron Deuel to the people in his professional network. Cameron sent it just before Halloween, as you can tell from the message. Subject: The Great American Job Search Happy Halloweekend, I want to thank you again for meeting with me during my job search and for your advantageous guidance. Since we have not spoken for a few weeks, I want to update you on how my job search is going. Since we last talked, I have continued to meet with four to six professionals per week to gain insight on how to remain a visible job candidate and to learn more about different career paths I might take. I have also put together a digital portfolio of my strongest writing samples, which can be found here [link]. After learning about different possible routes, I have decided to search primarily for an entry-level content writing or editing position because I am capable of producing quality content at a significant pace. I have been in touch with a few staffing agencies, one of which focuses primarily on hiring contractual workers for ABC Inc. Though I am comforted by the thought of my information in the hands of recruiters, I find informational interviews to be immensely valuable. Every meeting leaves me feeling optimistic about what’s to come, and I am constantly learning about new, crucial skills. Additionally, I have applied to volunteer with 826 Seattle [link], a nonprofit writing and tutoring center that focuses on many aspects of education, including creative writing. I am looking forward to attending their volunteer orientation next weekend to learn more about how I can donate my time. I hope you are having a relaxing weekend before the holiday season starts up and I thank you again for your generosity. I hope this message finds you well and I look forward to speaking soon. Sincerely, Cameron Deuel 123
[Phone number] [LinkedIn profile] As you can see, Cameron’s message is different from Lynn’s in its level of detail. Lynn’s quick update stated that she was still in the job market and would welcome continued referrals for a leadership-level position. In contrast, the young job seeker built the credibility he needed by informing people of the creative things he was doing in his job search and by providing work samples. Both updates suited their audience and purpose well. Here is another sample update, which shows how to keep people engaged in your jobsearch process. This email illustrates how to inform your network of a major change in your plan. Subject: Starting a Design Business Dear Friend, After getting excellent advice from you and the many others who are receiving this email, I have decided to start my own business rather than work for a company. I will still work as a graphic designer, but I will work independently. I feel very excited and pleased about this decision. As you can imagine, I have many steps ahead: choosing a business name, deciding on a niche or niches, creating a website, and pulling together my portfolio — to name just a few. As I go through these steps, I will almost certainly contact you for suggestions and feedback, but feel free to share ideas now. Eventually, I will ask you to help me spread the word and to consider hiring me for graphic design projects you may choose not to handle yourself. I wanted to let you know my decision promptly, and the easiest way was a group message. I hope to follow up with you personally as things evolve. My best wishes, Thalia [Cell phone number] You can also send updates to individuals in your network. In these examples, notice that each one shares upbeat information of interest to the reader. Subject: Checking in Hey Dan. Just wanted to check in and tell you I have been applying your good advice. I am focusing on my activity and output, which I CAN control, rather than results, which I can’t. As you suggested, I have been setting weekly goals. I’m keeping track of networking contacts, professional meetings, resumes sent out, etc., and I feel very good about reaching my goals each week. I am certain these 124
efforts will lead to interviews and eventually the right opportunity. Thanks for such a great suggestion. Keep ’em coming! Best, Hank Subject: A Helpful Read Hi Caroline. I have read a terrific book I wanted to tell you about. It’s called Brag: The Art of Tooting Your Own Horn Without Blowing It. Because you and I have talked about the challenges of “bragging” in interviews and meetings, I thought of you while reading it. The author, Peggy Klaus, has very practical suggestions. You can get an idea of her style at her website: www.bragbetter.com. I have now begun “bragging” in interviews, and it almost feels natural. I will be sure to do some bragging with you the next time we meet! Warm regards, Pia The next update ties to the Thanksgiving holiday and is written on a greeting card. Think of holidays and special occasions as additional opportunities to update your network. Around Thanksgiving, Chanukah, Christmas, and New Year’s Day, you can send a greeting to every person you talked with who offered help in your career search during the year, whether that talk was in person, by phone, or by email. Even though sending printed cards is an expense, think of it as an investment in your professional network. In your message, let people know you are still looking for a job. John, thank you for your advice on my job-search this year. I am grateful for your creative suggestions, and I feel confident that I will find the right opportunity as a substance abuse or grief counselor in the coming months. I will keep you posted. Happy Thanksgiving to you, your colleagues, and your family! Stacey Brown Tips for Job-Search Updates Your job-search updates will be welcome to people in your professional and personal networks. Just apply these tips: Do keep in touch with your network by sending regular updates. Your updates and checkins will nurture both your budding relationships and your longstanding professional friendships. Stay positive. The previous examples use many positive words such as valuable, energized, inspired, friendship, advantageous, comforted, optimistic, honored, 125
generosity, excellent, excited, pleased, opportunity, great, a nd terrific. These words create positive feelings in readers. Don’t express frustration, discomfort, or self-pity, and certainly don’t say anything to make your reader feel guilty (for instance, “I thought you were going to send me some leads”). Leave any negative thoughts for your personal journal. Provide either a specific update or a general one, depending on your readers and your situation. Cameron Deuel provided specific details about his progress. Lynn Takaki gave a general update that she was still looking for a position in human resources. Feel free to mention any continued help you would appreciate. For example, Lynn used the words “continue to think of me for any appropriate networking opportunities or job leads.” Avoid selling yourself hard. Remember that your goal is to keep in touch with your contacts, your bridges to a new job or opportunity. Spreading the Good News: Announcements of Your New Job The happiest message of your job-search adventure is the one in which you announce your new job. This announcement creates the opportunity for you to share your joy and thank the people in your professional and personal networks. Lynn Takaki’s message (slightly disguised for privacy’s sake) does both. Subject: Good News from Lynn Dear Valued Colleagues and Friends, I am so excited to share that I will join the XYZ Exteriors team as VP, Human Resources. This is an opportunity to join a booming industry and develop the HR strategic direction, build culture, and develop the workforce to drive company growth — all things I love to do! Affiliation with a strong engineering / manufacturing workforce and a tangible product aligns with my experience and is a great fit. Initially, I’ll be doing a weekly commute to the beautiful north coast area. Eventually, my family and I are looking forward to relocation and a new adventure, exploring the natural beauty of this fabulous region. For a city fix, I think we may have a difficult time choosing between Vancouver, BC, and Seattle! While it is fun to share my good news, it is more important that I express my gratitude to each of you for your support during my career transition process. You provided encouragement, information, job leads, network contacts, and friendship along the way. You gave me the reason to get up and go; motivating, inspiring, and coaching me on the journey to this new beginning. Managing change in job, company, coworkers, location, etc., is part of living a dynamic life. Throughout all these changes, it is my good 126
fortune to have you in my corner. Please know I highly value your presence in my life. Some things never change. With gratitude, Lynn As a recipient of Lynn’s message, I learned about her new job, recognized its excellent fit with her experience, and shared her excitement. I enjoyed receiving her eloquent thanks, and I felt inspired by her perceptive comments on change. For me, and probably for the many individuals in her network, Lynn’s message served as a solid reminder of why I enjoy having her in my life. Lynn mentioned “a weekly commute to the beautiful north coast area” and “exploring the natural beauty of this fabulous region.” Readers may have wondered how Lynn felt about taking a job far from her home. Regardless of her possible feelings, Lynn remained positive and professional, which is always the correct choice in a group message. Here is the announcement young job seeker Cameron Deuel sent out: Subject: The End of the Great American Job Search Good afternoon, You may be pleased to know that I’ve officially landed my first job as a college graduate. Several months ago, I applied to a position within ABC Inc. that specializes in Customer Service for Product X and, though I was not selected for that particular position, I was contacted by the Project Manager in hopes that I might be open to an alternate plan. I’ve been hired for a contract position that will seamlessly lead into a fulltime Content Developer role with Product X Customer Service later this year. During my contract period, I will be trained on how to utilize ABC’s programming software, which will be one of my primary duties once I’m brought on full time. I start on Monday. Again, I want to thank you for your generosity during my job search. I have grown significantly from this experience and I will continue to stay in touch with you in the future. I hope this message finds you well and that you are experiencing a fantastic new year. Sincerely, Cameron Deuel [Phone number] Cameron was not kidding about staying in touch. A few weeks after his announcement, I was delighted to receive this message from him: Good morning, Since we haven’t spoken in a little over a month, I want to let you know how things are going with my new job. ABC is a wonderful starting point. 127
I’ve learned a lot in the past six weeks. The project I’m working on reminds me of publications I’ve worked on in the past, but with much more coding involved. Though the project seems immense, I am encouraged by the drive of my coworkers and the overall attitude of the company. Again, thank you for your help during my job search. I’ve actually started networking with people who are graduating this spring and your feedback will allow me to help them even more. I can’t wait to see where they land. I hope you’re doing well and I look forward to staying in touch. Sincerely, Cameron Deuel [Phone number] In his early 20s, Cameron already exhibits the qualities of a great networker: the desire and ability to communicate, a positive attitude, and a generous spirit. Here is another example announcing a new job that has already begun: Subject: Announcing My New Position Greetings, friends. I have looked forward to the day when I could share this good news: On October 1, I became a group home manager for XYZ Homecare. My responsibilities include hiring, training, and supervising group home staff to ensure that residents get the best care possible. This position fits well with my training and goals, and I am very happy about it. The company has a solid reputation for integrity and high-quality care, and I see a good future for me here. I appreciate your support and guidance as I searched for a job. Thank you for everything. My best regards, Dale Smith [New company phone] [New company website] Of course, you can write to individuals rather than groups, as this sample note sent by post illustrates: Dear Ross, Your good advice and high expectations for me have paid off! I am pleased to let you know that I have accepted the position of business analyst at XYZ Pharmaceutical Company. I start next Monday right here in the city. My job involves the things I love: business analytics, project management, meticulous quality control, and training internal customers. I am excited about how my work will directly support product sales. 128
You have been a tireless coach and teacher for me as I searched for a new job, and I am extremely grateful for all you have done. With many, many thanks, Ellen This next message, which was sent by email, combines a group message with an individual note. The sender added an individual note to the email to people who had been especially helpful in his job search. Subject: I landed a great role! Hi everyone, I want you all to know that I will be starting my new job this week, as IT Director for the XYZ Association. The organization is a perfect size, the staff and management are good people, and their mission is very compelling. If not for networking with friends and associates, my search would have been much longer and far less productive. Thank you for your support, efforts, and good thoughts during this transition time. Sincerely, Michael Black [Personalized addition] Hi Julia, This may not have happened without you, you know. Searching on LinkedIn, I noticed you were connected with Louise Smith at XYZ, and I made contact with her after your intro. I can’t thank you enough for your support and efforts. If ever I can reciprocate the support, please let me know. My best always, Michael Tips for Job Announcements Apply these tips to write successful, relationship-sustaining job announcements: Present your new position enthusiastically. If you were to describe it as a compromise or as settling for less, people would perhaps feel sorry for you, which is not a feeling you want to elicit. Stay positive. Provide some details about your new job so people understand what you will be doing. Sharing this information solidifies your relationships going forward. Thank the people in your network for the help and encouragement they have given you. Sometimes saying thanks in a group message is sufficient, especially if people have 129
given you a similar degree of help. For people whose support contributed significantly to your success, an individual thank-you allows you to express your gratitude explicitly and more deeply. Include your new contact information if it is available. Do not let your contacts lose track of you now. Help your relationships endure. Don’t overlook this message! Use email, Facebook, or another electronic means, or mail it to your contacts by post. People in your network will wonder what happened to you. They deserve to receive your happy news. Rely on Your Relationships Being out of a job disturbs everything: your identity, your emotions, your schedule, your habits, your budget. Your relationships are the bridges across that churning, challenging time. Despite any feelings of fear, awkwardness, or instability that your job search may cause you, rely on the people in your personal and professional lives. Share your job-loss news. Ask for help. Express your thanks. Stay in touch. Then spread the good news of the job you accept. Although you may worry that you will risk your relationships if you use them during this difficult time, the opposite is true. If you engage people in your search, your relationships with them will grow stronger. And new relationships will develop. As you look for a job, use the examples in this chapter to write messages that will build and sustain your relationships. Doing so might just help you find the perfect job too!
Personal Assessment for Job Seekers Which people in your personal and professional networks would be happy to help you in your job search? Have you kept them engaged in your search with messages like those covered in this chapter? Next Step Depending on where you are in your career transition, compose and send one of these messages this week: An announcement that you are leaving your job A request for help in your job search A thank-you for support An update on your search An announcement of your new job
Send Meaningful Christmas, Chanukah, and New Year’s Greetings The Christmas, Chanukah, and New Year’s holidays provide great opportunities to connect with business associates and reestablish relationships. But with the opportunities comes the challenge of getting things done and making the gesture meaningful. If you are anything like me, your holidays may burst with traveling, entertaining, shopping, visiting, attending religious services, and other activities. So sending business greetings, which are optional rather than required, may fall into the category of your regretfully missed opportunities or stressfully completed tasks. This chapter gives you plenty of tips, examples, and ideas to help you seize the chance to connect with business associates by sending sincere Christmas, Chanukah, and New Year’s greetings. It uses the Christmas date of December 25, celebrated in much of the Western world, and the New Year’s date of January 1. If your business associates around the world celebrate these special days on other dates, make the appropriate adjustments. Which Are Better: Printed or Electronic Cards? Both printed (tangible) and electronic cards have their supporters, with printed cards more widely accepted. Some people love one and not the other; some appreciate both. When I asked the question “How do you like your holiday cards?” on my blog, responders shared these preferences: Printed card preference: 57% E-card preference: 17% Both/either: 26% Those who prefer printed cards mention their warmth and personal touch, their uniqueness and special meaning, the ease of displaying them around the office, the ability to touch and savor them, the effort they show, and their eco-friendliness when printed on recycled paper. People who spend much of their day at computers tend to appreciate tangible cards as a welcome change. Those who like to receive e-cards value their eco-friendliness, immediacy, interactivity, creativity, possible use as screensavers, and the ability to respond to them quickly and easily. Those who send e-cards lament that sometimes their recipients do not even open them. Of course, if your only communication with your customers, employees, and others is electronic — or if printed greetings mailed through the post are too expensive or difficult to send — then e-greetings will be your choice. How to Make Your Greetings Meaningful 131
From the comments I received about holiday greetings on my blog, I can emphatically say this: Everyone appreciates a personalized message. No one likes holiday spam, in printed or electronic form. But any greeting can come across as mass produced and meaningless unless you take certain steps to make it special. Follow these suggestions to add the little details that help you come across as a sincere communicator rather than a spammer: Send greetings only to people you know: your current or recent customers, clients, coworkers, employees, and business associates; subscribers to your newsletters; and individuals who have asked to be on your mailing list. If someone has not indicated an interest in you, your greeting is spam. Send only one card — not several — or you may be perceived as obsessed, wasteful, or scatter-brained. Even well-personalized e-cards are spam when people receive more than one from you per holiday. Choose cards and messages for the recipients — not for yourself. If you believe “Jesus is the reason for the season,” express that view in church — not in your cards to business contacts. If you are not sure whether a specific individual celebrates Christmas, use “Happy holidays” rather than “Merry Christmas” as your message. Consider your readers’ tastes. For instance, to outdoorsy contacts, send a photo card of a magnificent mountain or a giant redwood. To dog lovers, send a card featuring an irresistible Christmas puppy. You do not need to purchase these cards individually. You can typically buy boxed cards that match the tastes of many of your business associates. Personalize your tangible greeting cards in one or more of these ways: Handwrite the recipient’s name and sign your own — this is the least you can do. Never send a card with no recipient’s name and only a “factory-printed” signature. Even if the card has gold-embossed lettering, it will not make a meaningful connection. Do not have your assistant fake your signature — it’s bad karma, and it will make your assistant cynical. Handwrite a personal message that uses the recipient’s name. Just one sentence of greeting will personalize your message and show your thoughtfulness. Several sentences can make your message memorable. If your associate is from another country, consider adding a greeting in his or her native language. For example, use “¡Feliz Año Nuevo!” for a Spanish-speaking colleague or “Joyeux Noël et bonne année” for someone who speaks French. You can find translated greetings on the Internet. It’s wise to double-check translations on an additional website to make sure they are accurate. Handwrite each envelope. Although it takes a lot of work (and is therefore the exception rather than the norm), this gesture shows serious personal commitment. It virtually guarantees that your card will be opened and read. For a card from you and your team, include a photo of the team captioned with everyone’s name. This gesture is meaningful if the recipient has dealings with at least 132
several team members. Have team members sign the card if they know the recipient. When I led classes for a prominent high-tech company, each Christmas I received a holiday card hand-signed by everyone in the human resources department who knew me. It was fun to read each signature and think of the individuals signing. Personalize your e-cards in these ways so people open, read, and appreciate them: Use a specific rather than a generic subject line for the email. “Happy Holidays 20XX” comes across as anonymous. Instead choose something like “Happy Holidays From Ivona at XYZ!” or “Karl Schneider Wishes You a Joyful New Year” to make an instant connection with your reader. Add an individualized message. Use the recipient’s name and your own. A greeting to your reader as “Dear Customer” or “Dear Employee” might as well say “Dear Stranger.” Add a photo of team members, signed or labeled with everyone’s name, with each signature or label near the appropriate person’s photo. It’s easy to write on photos using Microsoft Office’s Paint feature. Many tips and software programs for adding words to photos are also available on the Internet. Contribute to a worthwhile nonprofit organization the money you save by not mailing tangible cards, and let your recipients know about your contribution if it matches their mission. Or contribute in the recipient’s name and share the information in your holiday message. Show extra effort by uploading the card and providing the link to your recipients, rather than sending them an attachment. Your contacts can click the link to open the card in an instant. If you create a holiday video (whose play button appears in your message or whose link you send by email), you can personalize the email or even the video. In the video, you can tell a story that engages your recipients or includes mention of them. Or you can list individual recipients’ names in the video. For several years running, communications consultant Deb Arnold has created a very funny yet professional and even instructional holiday video. Often she lists the names of people she especially wants to thank at the end of the video, like movie credits. She sends it to those people, of course. Sample Christmas and Chanukah Greetings Whether you send a printed card, an electronic greeting, a photo card, a video, or something else, the following messages can help you think of what to write. Mix and match the sentiments to create a message that works for you and your recipients. You may choose to indent paragraphs or not. The samples use both formats. Dear Friends at XYZ Company, At this joyous time of year, we are grateful for our work with you. We 133
wish you abundance, happiness, and peace in a new year filled with hope. Happy holidays! Your friends at ABC Catering: Daniel, Lisa, Natasha, Marjorie, Satya, and Joe Karen, I hope you and all your coworkers, family, and friends have a lovely holiday season brimming with joy and kindness. Warm wishes, Steven Daly To all our friends at Marcia’s Bridals: As the year ends, we think about all we are grateful for. Our relationship with you is one thing we treasure. Thank you for the opportunity to serve you. We wish you a merry Christmas and much success in the new year! Donna and Dale Burke Dear Professor Reiss, Thank you for giving me the opportunity to work with you this year. It has been an honor and a valuable experience for me. I wish you a happy Chanukah and a 20XX filled with light and meaning. Marcia Schur My dear wonderful Jake, As a person who warms my heart, you come quickly to mind this holiday season. I wish you a happy Chanukah and a new year abundant with miracles of every kind. Kitty Dear Naomi, Each night of Chanukah may you be blessed with warmth and peace. Happy Chanukah! Jodi Dear Odaiah, As gifts are given and received this holiday season, I think of the gift of knowing you. Thank you for the pleasure of working with you this year on the implementation. Happy holidays! Chad
Dear Carolyn, Merry Christmas to you and your lovely little girls! I hope you have a holiday brimming with joy and happy surprises! Traci Sample New Year’s Greetings Here are generic and audience-specific messages to build on for your New Year’s greetings. Generic: We wish you a new year in which peace, joy, and meaning abound. Happy 20XX! May your new year be filled with prosperity, hope, and wonder. Happy 20XX! I wish you a blissful, magical new year! On New Year’s Day and every day, we wish you joy and fulfillment. Happy new year! I hope you are blessed with delight, serenity, and grace in the coming year. To a customer or client: Thank you for your business this year. It has been a pleasure helping you reach your goals. We wish you a prosperous and happy new year and look forward to serving you in 20XX. Thank you for the opportunity to work with you in 20XX. It has been an honor to serve you. We wish you a fulfilling, abundant new year. Happy 20XX! I wish you a wonderful new year rich in laughter, pure joy, and treasured moments. May 20XX be your best year yet! It has been a privilege and a pleasure to work with you this year. We wish you the best of holidays and a prosperous 20XX! I hope 20XX is a year of great happiness and success for you. Have a marvelous new year! Thank you for being a customer at our [event or business]. We look forward to meeting your needs again in 20XX. We wish you peace, contentment, and abundant good health in the new year.
Thank you for shopping with us. We wish you a beautiful new year filled with comfort and gladness. We look forward to seeing you again in 20XX. Happy new year! We are so pleased to have you as a customer, and we look forward to serving you in the new year. Have a terrific 20XX! To a patron or volunteer: Happy new year! Thanks to supporters like you, 20XX was a very successful year for us. We were able to exceed our goals and expand our services to the needy because of the generosity and commitment of people like you. Thank you so much! Thank you for your contribution to our important work. With your help, we had a very successful 20XX. We wish you a blessed, happy new year. To employees: Whoo hoo! We survived 20XX! In fact, we thrived because of your amazing hard work, creativity, and dedication. I am personally grateful to you for your tremendous efforts, and I wish you a fabulous new year. I am grateful to each one of you for your incredible skills and creative thinking, and I wish everyone a rewarding, joyous new year. I can’t wait to see what we accomplish together in 20XX! I appreciate your contribution to our success this year. I wish you joy, fun, and fulfillment in 20XX. Happy new year! After reading those examples, you may be wondering about how to render references to the new year. New Year’s Day and New Year’s Eve have apostrophes and are capitalized. But if you are simply referring to next year, you do not need to capitalize it: “I hope you have a joyful new year.” That said, “Happy New Year!” with capital letters has become a standard greeting. I typically use the lower case version: “I wish you a happy new year!” Ways to Make Your Holidays Easier Consider these tips to help you ease the pressure of getting things done while keeping the season special: Send Thanksgiving cards instead of dealing with the Chanukah-Christmas-New Year’s rush. Your cards of thanks will stand out because they will not be part of a mail or email onslaught. See the chapter “Write Mighty Thank-Yous” for examples of Thanksgiving messages. Send New Year’s greetings rather than stressing to get your Christmas cards out by December 20. You can work on New Year’s cards during the relaxing days after 136
Christmas, when little work may be required of you (unless you work in retail). Then send them out after January 1. Sending the cards anytime during the first week or so of January makes them on time. Also, with New Year’s cards, you can avoid worries about whether and how your associates celebrate Christmas and how to choose the right card. But when you select them, avoid cards that emphasize drinking unless you know your specific readers appreciate wine and spirits. Many of your associates may prefer a safe, sober new year and may not relate to an alcohol-themed greeting. Celebrate your own Christmas in July by ordering your Christmas cards in the summer, then taking the time to write personal notes on them whenever you have time before the busy holiday season. If you will send group cards, give your coworkers plenty of time to sign them. Or have signing parties to get in the holiday spirit. If you choose to hand-address cards, begin in the summer or early fall. That way, you and your staff will not have hand cramps just before Christmas. Leadership and organizational development consultant Ron Scott starts early and meditates briefly on each person as he addresses and signs individual cards. If you choose to print envelopes, do so using a merge-mailing list or a sheet of mailing labels rather than individually printing each one. Update your mailing list whenever you have time during the year. When you make a new business friend, add the individual’s contact information to your list. That way, you will not have to scramble for a business card or contact information when you are ready to send cards. Decide on your preferred spelling of Chanukah (that spelling is my preference) and stick to it. That way, you will not eat up time changing your mind. Other common versions are Hanukkah and Hannukah. Try sending email greetings or e-cards to eliminate the need to address and sign dozens or hundreds of printed cards. Make sure to individualize your greetings so they come across as special messages rather than spam. Responding to Holiday Greetings You may be wondering whether you need to thank people for holiday greetings or respond in kind. Although neither response is required, acknowledging the other person’s effort can strengthen your relationship. Thank-yous and reciprocated best wishes can spread smiles and a sense of connection. Why not send them? Remember: This time of year is a special, once-a-year chance to connect with people. Think widely when you compose your list of people to remember. Even if you are an employee without clients and external customers, think of the people who contribute to your success: your manager, coworkers, colleagues in other departments, peers in other companies and professional organizations, consultants, and allies in human resources. 137
Remember them! Reconnect! Nurture your work relationships.
Personal Reflection Connecting with your business associates is a gift to yourself and to them — not an obligation. How can you make the process feel joyous to you? What can you do to reduce stress and enjoy reaching out? Next Step Whenever you are reading this sentence — whether it is February, June, or November — what is one thing you can do this week to make progress on sending holiday cards? Do that thing.
Write Apologies to Mend Fences and Support Relationships Through many years of practice, our teenaged daughter had outgrown her violin, so we went to Olsen Violins, a violin shop in our Seattle neighborhood, to look at new ones. When we walked into the shop, I told the woman who greeted us that we were looking for a violin in the $4,000 range. Soon we were placed in the shop’s soundproof room with a variety of violins to try out. They ranged from $3,800 to $8,000, with nearly all of them higher than $4,000. After we had been in the room awhile, Sten Olsen came into the room, apologizing with words like these: “I am so sorry. I just learned from Nete that you wanted violins in the $4,000 range. I thought she had said $4,000 to $8,000.” I told Sten that although I was shocked at first at the higher price tags, when we heard the beautiful sound of the more expensive violins, we realized we might need to spend more than we had intended. The next day I received this email from Olsen Violins: Subject: An Apology Hi Lynn, I want to apologize for the price confusion yesterday. I hear stories regularly from people who have gone to other violin shops and get nudged/pushed into a higher price range than they are requesting. I really hate that! I have utmost respect for what people are willing to spend and I never push people higher. I take this seriously. I feel terrible! I have a lot of really, really nice violins around 3–4K. I hope you give these instruments another look. I also have a couple violins out on trial with someone else that are right in the price category too. Have a nice weekend and Thanksgiving! Regards, Sten Olsen Olsen Violins, Inc. Sten Olsen’s apology was not necessary because he had apologized the previous day. But his written apology told me that he meant what he had said. It also provided a remedy in the mention of several violins in our price range. It came across as sincere, with the statements “I want to apologize,” “I have the utmost respect,” and “I feel terrible.” Sten’s apology was a relationship builder. It showed me that he valued us as customers. We ended up buying both a violin and a bow from Olsen Violins, spending much more 140
than our original budget. Now we refer other people to the shop. Although it was only one of the factors that encouraged our relationship, Sten Olsen’s apology made a big positive difference. This chapter helps you recognize why and how to write sincere, productive apologies. The Power of Saying “I’m Sorry” I don’t know about parents around the globe, but where I live parents regularly break up spats between small children, instructing them, “I want you two to both say you’re sorry!” After both children complain that it’s not their fault, they reluctantly say they are sorry. With the words “I’m sorry” ending the argument, the children move on to their next activity, often playing happily side by side within minutes. To us as adults at work, saying we are sorry seems more complicated. When we say it (and write it), we worry that we may be accepting blame, admitting liability in our litigious society, and apologizing ourselves into a corner. But apologies can free us in many ways. As with the sorries of children, our apologies let us move on to the next activity. They also free the people to whom we apologize by helping them let go of their bad feelings about the wrong done to them. They help everyone acknowledge that business decisions can negatively affect people’s lives, sometimes deeply and lastingly. Apologies communicate the messages “I respect you” and “I recognize that you are a human being with feelings” without actually using those words. An engineer named Keith Chapman told this story and shared his example of an apology: John was the lead engineer assigned to a project, and I was his counterpart at my company. Of necessity, I took a very active role in steering the design, which imposed a level of scrutiny that John was not used to receiving from customers. Because of this, midway through the job the relationship started to sour. Through phone calls, and some intervention from both our superiors, I managed to settle things down and brought us back into a working relationship. As the design work was wrapping up, John asked me how things looked on the job from a budget standpoint. I used the opportunity to try to smooth things over: John, I do think we will make budget on the job. [Keith followed with details about the project.] I would like to say that I think this job has gone really well. We did have a few disagreements early on, but those things happen, especially between people who are both passionate about their work. Despite the disagreements, we worked together well, came to a good design, and were on time to boot. I would also like to apologize for something that I did earlier in the job. In one of my review remarks I pointed out an error in your calculations. I believe it was a real error, but it was an advance set of calcs from you, not 141
your stamped final submittal. It was wrong of me to point it out in an email that I copied to both of our bosses. I should have brought it to you personally and given you the chance to defend it or correct it. It’s a courtesy that should be extended to fellow engineers. When we work together in the future, I will make a point of it. Keith In his desire to “smooth things over,” Keith apologized sincerely for his unfortunate email choice. His apology validated John in any negative feelings John might have been harboring about the incident, and it allowed John to move on from them. The message also allowed Keith to move on. It helped banish the pangs of guilt Keith may have felt about his behavior. Dr. Dennis Dennis, an organizational psychologist, shares this important comment on the benefits of apologizing: An apology benefits the person giving it as much (or often more) than the person receiving it. This thought sometimes helps people get past the difficulty of apologizing sincerely when they really believe the other party contributed in some way to the problem. The advantage of this approach is that it allows the “apologizer” to maintain their boundary and a sense of personal power because they are in control of the decision to apologize. It is entirely up to the other person whether they will accept the apology. One can sincerely apologize and move on even if the apology is not accepted. Although our apology may not save a relationship, Dr. Dennis’s comment reminds us that our apology can benefit our relationship with ourselves. The Parts of an Apology In his excellent book On Apology, Dr. Aaron Lazare, retired dean of the University of Massachusetts Medical School, identified four parts of an effective apology: 1. Acknowledging the offense 2. Explaining what happened 3. Communicating feelings such as remorse, shame, humility, and sincerity 4. Making or offering reparations Dr. Lazare wrote, “The importance of each part — even the necessity of each part — varies from apology to apology depending on the situation.” This sincere apology contains all four parts: Subject: Apology for My Remark 142
Dear Sharon, I am very sorry about referring to you as the “accounting Nazi” in my email to Eduardo. It was a stupid remark, and I am embarrassed that I made it. There is no excuse for that kind of attack, and I appreciate your calling me on it. I understand that it was especially hurtful to you because of your Jewish heritage. I am very sorry and ashamed. I promise to avoid using that kind of language again in my dealings with you and your colleagues (or anyone else for that matter). Please let me know if there is something else I can do to make up for my ignorant behavior. Please accept my apology. David Goode When she reads that detailed apology, Sharon may be able to forgive David and forget his bad behavior, depending on the history of their relationship. The message seems to communicate everything she needs to hear. In contrast, this version of the “apology” would do little to mend the relationship: Subject: Sorry Sharon, I am sorry you were upset that I called you a Nazi. I was just frustrated about all the bureaucratic hoops you and your coworkers make us go through. You never told me you were Jewish, so I didn’t know it would push your buttons so much. Again, sorry. David Baad The Baad version of the message includes a quick “sorry,” but it does not come across as sincere. The writer did not acknowledge responsibility. Rather, he hinted that Sharon is at fault for being upset, resorting to bureaucratic hoops, not telling David she is Jewish, and allowing the comment to push her buttons. This apology, written to a coworker, contains all four of Dr. Lazare’s parts: Subject: Sorry for missing your presentation Dear Kim, I am sorry I missed your presentation this morning. I know it was my job to be there to provide the latest financial data, and I am very sorry that I let you down. As I mentioned in my phone message, an accident on the floating bridge caused traffic to back up for nearly an hour. Although I left for work in plenty of time to be there for your presentation, the accident caused me to arrive after your time on the agenda. I emailed the data to you when I arrived. If you would like me to do 143
anything else to make up for my absence, please let me know. Please accept my apology. Renee In Renee’s situation, it might be tempting simply to leave Kim a quick phone message of apology. However, the written note makes it clear that Renee regrets what happened and does not take it lightly. She values her relationship with Kim. The next apology covers a more sensitive situation. Subject: Apology Dear Robert, I wanted to write to you regarding our conversation the other day about the new team member. I apologize for making inappropriate assumptions about your hiring decision. That was very wrong of me. Please accept my sincere apology. I realize since we talked that I simply liked the candidate from Ghana and was disappointed that I won’t have the chance to work with him. I understand now why you chose Santosh and how she will complement our skills and experience. I regret the comment I made, and I promise to support Santosh 100 percent. If there is anything else you would like me to do, please let me know. Sincerely, Roy Roy’s apology communicates several important things to Robert: that Roy regrets the remark he made, understands that his assumptions were inappropriate, and intends to support the new employee completely. Although Roy might have hesitated to “document” his mistake by mentioning it in writing, he has successfully documented his realization and his apology. Beyond that, he has shored up his relationship with Robert and committed to building a relationship with Santosh. I received the following good apology when I informed a newsletter of misspellings of my name. (I have changed the identifying details.) It acknowledges the error, apologizes for it, and indicates what the magazine will do to reduce confusion for readers of the newsletter. Lynn, Our sincere apologies for the misspellings. Our newsletter goes through a rigorous editing cycle with numerous editors, copy editors, and proofers looking at each issue. Unfortunately, the misspellings somehow slipped through. I have corrected the file, and fortunately, the article was slated to go up on our website on August 15, so it hasn’t appeared online yet. 144
Our subscribers can download a PDF version of the newsletter on our website, which I assume is where your client saw the article. The print version goes in the mail this week. We will also run a correction in the next issue of the print version of the newsletter. Again, our apologies for the error. Sincerely, Gayle Franson Senior Editor Tips for Apologies Because written apologies last beyond the moment and do not provide an opportunity for immediate two-way communication, you need to follow certain guidelines when writing them. Consider these tips and adapt them to your situations: Use the words “I apologize,” “I regret,” and “I am sorry.” Use “we” or “on behalf of” when you apologize as a representative of your company or organization. By using the language of apology, you make it completely clear that you are apologizing. Explain what happened. Your explanation helps the other person understand why the incident took place. Do not rely on your explanation, however, to imply your apology. Use the words in the previous tip. Name what you will do or hope to do to remedy the situation. For example, in some of the previous examples, Sten Olsen offered lower-priced violins, Keith promised to observe professional courtesies in the future, and the newsletter editor promised me a correction. Ask the reader to accept your apology. Your request engages the reader and asks for reconciliation. Avoid bringing up other topics. They will dilute the apology and may make it seem like an afterthought. Don’t criticize the reader or blame others. For example, don’t say, “If only you had let me know sooner” or “It was my manager’s idea that I …” Such remarks reduce the sincerity and power of the apology. They turn it into scapegoating. Don’t offer a “sorry but.” For instance, don’t say, “I am sorry, but you must also accept responsibility.” Such a statement ignites a potential blame war. A perfect example of criticizing the reader in a “sorry but” appeared in the NetSpeed Learning Solutions blog in a post written by Tim Jones. He described this as an excuse, not an apology, and I agree: 145
I am really sorry about missing the budget planning conference call this morning. I would have been on the call, but you never confirmed what I was supposed to present so I figured that the call must not be that important. Why didn’t you tell me what I needed to present? I like Tim Jones’s advice: “If you really don’t feel you are the cause, then it’s okay to push back and defend your position. But if you ultimately know in your heart that an apology is in order, make it a full apology. Make it sincere. And make it count.” If You Cannot Think of What to Write When you are not sure what to write, think about what the other person needs to know. What would he or she ask you if you were talking? Of course, you won’t actually be talking when the other person reads your words, but think of the apology as a conversation. Let’s imagine that you are writing to apologize for missing a business meeting. Your reader might have these questions: 1. What is this note about? 2. Why did you miss the meeting? 3. What will you do to make up for missing the meeting? 4. Can we count on you to attend future meetings? 5. Are you sorry for the oversight? After the introductory Question 1, Questions 2 through 5 are ones the other person is probably wondering about. To write the apology, just answer the questions, as this example does: Dear Dr. Young, [What is this note about?] Please accept my apology for missing the planning meeting on Friday afternoon. I am very sorry about my absence. [Why did you miss the meeting?] On Friday I had an enjoyable lunch with an old, dear friend, and in the pleasure of the reunion I simply forgot about the planning meeting. I incorrectly thought my calendar was clear. [What will you do to make up for missing the meeting?] I have already spoken with Lorraine Clarke about what happened at the meeting. She informed me of the two tasks that have been assigned to me.
[Can we count on you to attend future meetings?] I assure you that this will not happen again. I have added all the meetings to my phone, with a reminder alarm. I look forward to actively participating in our future sessions. [Are you sorry for the oversight?] Once again, I am sorry for missing the meeting. Please accept my apology. Sincerely, Samantha Apologizing for Little Things Little things can erode good relationships one little thing at a time. In business, take time to apologize in writing for any small mistakes, slights, or oversights. Even though they are brief, such apologies reduce the likelihood that missteps will grow into resentments. I found these brief apologies in my email inbox. Each was included in a longer message. My apologies for the delay. My password reset and locked me out of my system all weekend! I hope this is not too late. Thank you! Please accept my apology for dragging my feet on this decision. I was hoping to have more time with you. I apologize! I apologize for the late request. I have been working from home for the past two months due to my daughter’s slow recovery from surgery. Time found a way of slipping by me quickly. I apologize that the invoice wasn’t paid on time. I am sorry it got lost in the pipeline. We apologize for any inconvenience this situation may have caused and appreciate your patience while we work on this. I apologize about the phone number confusion. We apologize for the inconvenience you experienced in downloading your order. I just realized as I was reading your email again that I completely missed your deadline. My apologies! Sorry, I just saw your response below. Never mind! The brief apologies do the important work of acknowledging the delay, the foot dragging, the lack of time, the missed deadline, the late payment, and so on. Of course, repeated missed deadlines and late payments will require much more than a sentence of apology. They will beg for changes in behavior. Apologizing Does Not Always Mean Accepting Blame In my survey on business writing and relationships, 69 percent of respondents agreed or strongly agreed that they hate to apologize when they have not done anything wrong. Yet many respondents explained that they apologize despite any aversion to it. Here are sample comments from four individuals: 147
I really truly HATE apologizing when I haven’t done anything wrong, but I also know that it’s my personal perception that I haven’t done anything wrong — the person “wronged” obviously feels differently. So I will do it … usually something like, I’m sorry that my [action] made you feel [feeling]. Admitting you were wrong even in just having favored your own perspective without considering another person’s goes a long way toward mending fences and finding common ground. Lately I have accepted the fact that it is the right thing to do for harmony. I hate doing it but it often works. So I do it fairly often. I work in IT [information technology] though. Like those individuals, you will sometimes find it helpful to apologize even though you have done nothing wrong. Clearly something happened that led to the need for an apology. It’s much better to apologize and move on than refuse to do so. Such a refusal saps energy and erects a wall between people. In awkward situations that seem to require an apology, even when you can’t see that you have done anything wrong, tell yourself that you will apologize respectfully because the other person needs it. Then apologize. Do not point a finger at the other person with a sentiment like this: “I am sorry you took it the wrong way.” Instead, use statements like these: I am sorry for the part I played in this situation. I regret that I was not able to respond in a way that was helpful. I am sorry that what I said hurt your feelings. If you are a supervisor or manager, you will find it helpful to apologize when a situation has caused problems or hard feelings — even when you are not responsible for the situation. In these cases, “I am sorry” does not mean “I am responsible.” It means “I care about you and your feelings.” Examples: I am very sorry that the new date for the product launch has affected your vacation plans. I am sorry that the construction will require you to park so far from the plant. Making Official Apologies HR Magazine featured an excellent article, “A ‘Sorry’ Strategy,” by attorney Jathan Janove. The piece focused on the effectiveness of apologies in avoiding or settling legal claims. These are two important points from the article:
Although employer apologies have at times contributed to employer liability, those situations nearly always involved apologies that were mishandled. Anger plays an important part in employee lawsuits, and anger is often fueled by an employer’s failure to apologize. In many situations, lawsuits can be avoided or settled quickly if an employer apologizes and accepts responsibility for its actions. Tips for Official Apologies If you must apologize on behalf of your company, apply these tips: Check company guidelines or get advice from your human resources department before taking action. Although apologies often reduce an individual’s desire to take legal action, as Jathan Janove indicated, the apology must be effective to achieve a positive outcome. Get advice to do it right in highly charged situations. Communicate empathy with an employee’s feelings and circumstances. “I am sorry about the frustration this delay has caused you” acknowledges the situation simply and well. Do not try to justify or excuse the employer’s actions if the employer is at fault. Such attempts weaken the apology. If your company’s process was faulty even though the outcome was justified, apologize for the process. For example, if an employee was informed of a layoff in a public, embarrassing way, apologize for the way the information was delivered. The apology does not change the layoff, but it can be very helpful in reducing the employee’s anger and indignation. It may prevent the situation from going viral on the Internet and damaging countless relationships. This example apologizes for the hurt and disappointment an employee feels when she does not receive a promotion and for the way the decision was communicated. However, it does not undercut the promotion decision. To: Clare Belmont From: Andrew Ross Date: July 2, 20XX Subject: Following Up on Our Conversation Today Clare, I would like to recap what we talked about today. I want you to know that I understand you feel I made the wrong decision when I promoted Jessica rather than you into the new Level II position. You feel you are the most qualified person for the position and that the decision is unfair. When making a promotion to Level II, I need to consider a variety of factors. Foremost among them is what is best for the department and our customer-service commitments. Looking at all information, I believe my decision is the right one. I value your work very much, and I am sorry about the hurt and disappointment this decision has caused. Please accept my apology for the 149
blunders I committed while communicating the decision. Andrew Don’t Be Sorry About Apologizing Do you remember the story about Sten Olsen’s apology for misunderstanding my violin budget? In the end, I bought a much more expensive violin, along with a bow, and I continue to recommend Sten to others in Seattle who are in the market for an instrument. Here’s the moral of the story: Do not be sorry about apologizing. It is one of the best steps you can take to build and maintain good relationships, overcome hard feelings, nurture loyalty, and show respect for other human beings. Beyond that, as Sten’s story demonstrates, it can even help you sell products and services.
Personal Reflection Do you apologize when you have done something that hurts or inconveniences another person at work? Do you see apologizing as a helpful step for both parties, as a necessary annoyance, or as something else? Next Step In this chapter, an engineer named Keith apologized to another engineer for something Keith had done awhile back. Think about your work relationships and whether there is something you would like to apologize for. Then write and send the apology.
Share Bad News Without Fostering Bad Feelings For several years I worked as a consultant at an outplacement firm, a company that is hired to help people who have been laid off. We would start by helping them make peace with the circumstances of losing their job. Over time we would coach them to find their next opportunity, whether it be a job, their own business, or retirement. Perhaps the most challenging assignment at the outplacement firm was to go to a company on the day of layoffs and meet with the employees and managers who had lost their jobs. It was like the role of Ryan Bingham in the book and movie Up in the Air, only we didn’t actually give the bad news; we cleaned up after it. Some of us dreaded the assignment because we never knew how the employees and managers would react. Would they weep? Yell? Swear? Sit numbly and not say a word? Run out of the room, calling us names? Or would they thank us for being there and giving them information? Any and all those reactions were possible. The challenge was being able to handle whatever came at us without making the bad news worse. Like us outplacement consultants, many people dread giving bad news because they do not know how it will go down, and they fear the worst reactions. They also question their own competence. Will they be able to communicate the bad news compassionately and clearly so people will understand and accept it? Will their relationships survive the bad news? Or will the bad news cause bad feelings that end their relationships? How about you? Which of these words would you choose to describe the act of communicating bad news?
If you picked more words from Column 2 than Column 1, here’s the good news: You are human! The bad news is that … well, this chapter is all about bad news. It shares valuable tips, examples, and encouragement that will make it easier for you to protect your relationships while sharing bad news. Sharing bad news is no fun. The thought of having to communicate bad news to valued employees, managers, colleagues, applicants, clients, and vendors causes people to lose sleep, eat and drink more than they intend, and try to think of ways to disappear until the bad news blows over. 151
If just the idea of communicating bad news makes you feel bad, consider using these new words to describe it:
Yes, communicating bad news thoughtfully and promptly is kind, considerate, generous, courageous, thoughtful, and mature. It is a precious gift you can give to others. Doing it well makes the other person feel respected and can strengthen your relationship. Adopt that positive mindset, and you will instantly feel at least a little better about having to share bad news. Sharing Bad News in Person and in Writing Whenever possible, share bad news in person, not in writing. That way, your communication will be two-way. You will see firsthand whether people cry, yell, or take the news in stride, as we outplacement consultants did. You will be able to deal with people’s responses appropriately in real time. Although communicating bad news in person is a first choice, putting bad news in writing makes sense at times: When informing a hundred job applicants that they were not chosen for a job When informing dozens of customers about the departure of a popular employee When letting hundreds or thousands of clients know about an increase in fees When informing thousands of students and their parents that tuition is increasing When telling all employees about a personnel or policy change that will be unpopular When communicating bad news to employees on the other side of the globe Informing Applicants That They Were Not Chosen One uncomfortable bad-news message is the letter to applicants who did not get the job. Especially in difficult economic times, the vision of qualified, eager, sometimes desperate job applicants opening your bad-news message can cripple your efforts to write it. Yet the applicants need to hear the outcome. Of course, you don’t want your “rejection” letter to hurt people. You want to avoid alienating potential customers, members, and future applicants. The looming risk is to say too little and seem brusque or say too much and inadvertently wound them. It is possible to write a clear, thoughtful “rejection” message that leaves no one feeling rejected. It has five components: 152
1. A warm opening 2. A brief description of the decision-making process that presents it as rigorous rather than haphazard 3. The bad news, sometimes implied rather than directly stated 4. Acknowledgment and appreciation of the effort the individual put into the application 5. Good wishes for the future Notice in the above list the absence of judgment on the applicant’s credentials or fit for the position. To avoid making bad news worse, the message does not include any negative comments about the applicant’s suitability. Nor does it include positive comments. Positive statements about qualifications could make the applicant more disheartened about not getting a job for which he or she was apparently well qualified. This advice also applies to other situations such as rejecting a manuscript submitted for publication. Although it may be tempting to encourage the writer, encouragement can backfire into an argument about why the piece will not be published or a time-consuming written exchange about how to revise the writing. If your goal is to share bad news without fostering bad feelings in yourself or others, limiting your message to the five components works best. If your goal is to mentor young writers or others, you may find another way to achieve it, outside the bad-news message. Below is a model bad-news message, sent from University Baptist Church in Seattle, Washington, to the many people who had applied for the position of pastor. Thank you for expressing interest in the position of pastor at University Baptist Church. We have carefully studied the profiles we received, and we have decided to interview four candidates. The skills and experience of the four individuals are a unique match for the needs of our congregation. We appreciate the time you spent preparing materials for us, and we ask for God’s blessing on you as you seek another position. Cordially, The message is brief, yet it communicates good will and caring. The mention of God’s blessing is perfect in a letter from a church. A similar message from a business could close this way: We appreciate the time you spent preparing materials for us, and we wish you success obtaining a position. The church representative who shared the letter with me made sure I understood this point: The three people who eventually interviewed for the job but did not get it received a phone call, not a letter. A phone call made sense because of the small number of people involved and because those who interviewed now had a personal connection with the church. They deserved a more personal, individual message. 153
The bad handling of such a message leads to bad feelings, as this true story illustrates: A job candidate who had been searching for a position for quite a while had four interviews on four different days with a prestigious firm. Naturally, he was getting excited. And he should have been — his fourth interview was with a senior executive. Then he got a message from the company, a letter saying he did not get the job. You might wonder — what’s wrong with that? We cannot each be the chosen one when it comes to a position. But the letter he received was canned — an impersonal rejection letter, the kind that is sent to any faceless applicant who was not even interviewed. Here’s why that letter damaged a budding, positive relationship: A job applicant who endured four interviews with the same firm, dressed meticulously on four different days, prepared carefully for several conversation/cross-examinations, graciously met a variety of strangers — such an applicant deserved a thoughtful personal letter or phone call. A friend of the dejected applicant related this story to me with anger. It would be no surprise if word spread about how the prestigious firm treated the candidate. People who heard the story might retell it at business meetings and lunches, and those in job searches might avoid that company’s recruiters if they could. The original job candidate would be slow to consider a job with that company or to do business with it again — all because someone did not take the time to write a personal letter or make a phone call to treat him with care and dignity. Never underestimate the power of your communication to create or destroy relationships! Informing Customers of the Departure of a Popular Employee Customers want to know when changes take place with the people who serve them. These messages can be delicate because we don’t want to lose the customer along with the employee. What follows is an example of how n o t to tell customers about an employee’s departure. The paragraph is excerpted from a landscaping company’s letter to all customers, updating them on spring landscaping services. All names are fictitious. David, Gloria, and Juan will all be back. You are very familiar with these three since they have been at your house for many years now. Michael, who was an invaluable employee for 21 years, forced me to make a very difficult decision last fall. When the evidence of his transgressions became so great and so blatant, I had no choice but to dismiss him. His work was exemplary, as was the value he offered all our customers; however, his actions were eroding the morale of his coworkers and affecting my ability to conduct a sustainable business. I mention this because so many people came to expect Michael every week, and he was so well liked. Also during the lifetime of our company we have had very low turnover, and events like this are rare. Replacing Michael this season is Simon. I have known Simon for over 10 years. He has worked with two other local landscapers. He knows this business, and I am confident that his demeanor and work ethic will be a nice fit for our team. 154
“The evidence of Michael’s transgressions” — yikes! The phrase creates nothing but trouble: anxious curiosity in customers; relief (or doubt) that they were not injured by Michael’s behavior, whatever it was; and potential legal repercussions if a customer talks to Michael about the letter. The paragraph contains all the right information. It just needs editing so the bad news is brief and neutral rather than detailed and destructive. Here is a suitable version that shares brief news of the well-liked employee’s departure and lets customers know they will be in good hands with Michael’s replacement: David, Gloria, and Juan will all be back, as they have been for many years. Michael, who was an invaluable employee for 21 years, has moved on. Replacing Michael this season is Simon, whom I have known for over 10 years. Simon has worked with two other landscapers and knows this business. I am confident that his demeanor and work ethic will be a nice fit for our team. For a communication that goes to all customers, the short version is just right to keep relationships intact. If individual customers ask for more information, it may be shared discreetly in person. Tips for Communicating Bad News These valuable tips will help you do a good job of sharing bad news without damaging relationships: Reveal it — don’t conceal it. Don’t try to protect others from bad news or yourself from sharing it. If bad news leaks out, individuals may be hurt and angry that they did not learn it from you or through other appropriate channels. Remember: Sharing bad news well is kind, considerate, generous, courageous, thoughtful, and mature. Communicate bad news promptly. A typical response to bad news is “How long have you known?” If you have known for a long time but have not shared the news, people may feel that they have been cheated or that you do not trust them. Recognize that there is no perfect time for bad news. Share it as soon as you can share it clearly and completely. Apologize. Saying you are sorry about a situation does not mean you are guilty or liable for it. It means you care. Tell employees, customers, clients, and patrons when you are sorry that the news is not better. And if the bad news is your fault — for example, if you missed a proposal submission deadline because of your own mistake or delay — accept responsibility and apologize so that you and everyone else can move on. In this announcement, the writer uses “Please accept my apology” to avert negative reactions to a change in a longstanding employee perk: Subject: Change in Policy on Refreshments Dear Staff, 155
Due to serious budget constraints facing our organization, as of September 1, food will no longer be provided at meetings and workshops. However, you may bring your own food to meetings and workshops if you would like to do so. Please accept my apology for the change. Management will reevaluate this decision during the next budgeting session. Please contact me if you have any questions about the policy change. Thank you for your patience and understanding. As a rule, be serious when delivering bad news, or your audience will be confused about the seriousness of the message. In the example about the change in the refreshment policy, it would be clumsy — and for certain readers insensitive — to include a quip such as “Good time to go on a diet!” Empathize. Recognize that your readers will have feelings about the bad news. Netflix experienced a huge backlash when it sent out a matter-of-fact email from “The Netflix Team” informing customers that their monthly rental fee for unlimited streaming and DVDs would increase from $9.99 to $15.98 (a 59 percent jump!). After two months of customer complaints and cancellations, an email to customers from Netflix Co-Founder and CEO Reed Hastings began this way: I messed up. I owe you an explanation. It is clear from the feedback over the past two months that many members felt we lacked respect and humility in the way we announced the separation of DVD and streaming and the price changes. That was certainly not our intent, and I offer my sincere apology. There is always the risk that a price increase and other changes will anger and turn away customers. But a more thoughtful bad-news message than Netflix’s original regrettable communication would likely have reduced customer dissatisfaction and animosity toward the company. Be compassionate with yourself and others. When you deliver bad news, both you and the recipients will probably feel bad. Do not be surprised or offended if individuals shoot back sarcastic, critical emails. After all, your readers will have just learned the information you have known for a while. Do your best to remain professional, and know that the bad feelings will pass. If you can legitimately do so, include the good-news aspects of the bad news. (But see the next tip.) For example, downsizing offices may seem like bad news, but it is a good idea if it saves people’s jobs. Do not sugarcoat, minimize, or disguise the message with cheerful, positive language. Bad news is not more palatable with a sweet coating, and a deceptive sweet 156
coating threatens trust and loyalty. For example, companies come across as deceitful when they centralize operations and try to promote the idea that customers will be better served without their local representative. Reducing service while applauding the reduction does not fool anyone. Avoid making bad news worse by focusing on the negative aspects. Instead of “We have no idea how we will handle the situation,” say, “We are working on a procedure for handling the situation.” Replace “I can’t discuss that with you” with “I will share as much information as I can.” When appropriate, replace “I apologize for the inconvenience” with “I appreciate your flexibility.” Use a variety of media, not just email. Often the most effective communication choice is email combined with other methods, but email alone may come across as unfeeling and distant. When RadioShack laid off 403 employees by email, The Dallas Morning News ran an online poll asking, “Is it OK to lay off workers via e-mail?” Over 90 percent of poll respondents answered “No, it should be done face to face,” and many criticized the company and pledged to boycott it. Less than 10 percent voted “Yes, it doesn’t really matter how you get the news.” When you can, supplement written communication with telephone calls, in-person meetings, live online meetings, videoconferences, and other choices. Consider expanding written communication to include memos, letters to clients’ offices or employees’ homes, and intranet and blog posts. Communicate first with the people who are most affected by the bad news. For example, if some employees will be transferred, tell them directly before you tell others about the situation. If some customers may suffer because of a policy change, tell them about it before announcing the change broadly. Never blog or tweet about bad news before sharing it completely, clearly, and compassionately with those involved. Communicate more than once, providing additional details and updates in follow-up communications. Especially if the news is serious, people take in bad news only gradually. After they have grasped the main message, they will want details. The following example is the first announcement of a company’s move to another location, which will be bad news for some employees. The email does not contain every detail about the move. Rather, it indicates that further information will follow. Note that the news is fresh — negotiations were just completed today. Subject: Announcing Our Company Move to Beaverton Scheduled for February I am pleased to announce that negotiations were completed today for our corporate offices to move to [street address] in Beaverton. The attached sheet shows a map of the location and a photo of the building. Our current plan is that the move will be complete by February 20. 157
Benefits of the move: We have all felt the squeeze of our overcrowded space. Our new offices will provide us with the benefits below, all at a cost similar to that of our current downtown space: • An additional 7,000 square feet of office space • Several additional conference rooms • A conference room large enough to accommodate all-company meetings • Free parking • Other amenities now in the planning stages Adjustments required: This move will require adjustments from all of us, some more than others. For staff who live in or near Beaverton, the commute will be easier; however, for staff who live near our current office, commuting to Beaverton is likely to be an undesirable change. We will make every reasonable effort to ensure that the move is smooth and workable for everyone in the company. Tasks of the Move Committee: Our HR manager, Kamala King, will head our Move Committee. The committee will work on the timing of the move, green commuting strategies, office space allocation, and a variety of other concerns. If you are interested in being part of the committee, please talk with Kamala [phone, email] about your interest and any expertise. Opportunities to give input into the design and amenities: We will work with The Design Company on office amenities, décor, and related issues. Design Company president David Washington and his staff will hold meetings to get your input on the features you want to see in the new space. You can learn more about The Design Company and the awards they have won on their website [link]. Answers to your questions and concerns: As details become available, I will share them with you by email. Kamala will hold meetings soon to listen to your concerns and suggestions. If you have pressing questions now, send them to Kamala or me, and we will answer them or forward them to someone who can. Although change is always challenging, I hope you will join me in looking forward to our new, larger offices and imagining the opportunities the space will offer all of us. Jacob Answer essential questions. Your audience is likely to want to learn what, why, who, when, where, how, how much, and what if. Include all the information that is important to them. If you don’t have all the details, be honest but have a plan to get the information. (Note the “As details become available” wording in the previous example.) A lack of information often creates a lack of confidence and commitment. Individualize the message. Your clients need different information from your 158
coworkers; employees have different questions from managers. Invest the time to write a tailored message for each audience, and it will pay off in communication that is more successful. Use accurate titles or subject lines for bad-news communications. Avoid titles like “An Exciting Change in Benefits” if the change is unwelcome to any of your readers. Instead use the neutral “Change in Benefits Effective September 1.” If a title seems misleading, readers will be skeptical about your entire message. Avoid blaming other individuals. It may be tempting to blame others for the bad news you must share, but blaming individuals or groups can be seen as unseemly and cowardly. However, vague blame — for example, blaming the economy, government regulations, or natural disasters — is acceptable and understandable to your audience, if it is truthful. Mention anything you are doing to reduce the impact of the bad news. For example, if a well-liked assistant is being laid off because of budget cuts, tell how you will help the employee find a new job. Or if a delay means you cannot ship an order in time for holiday delivery, state what you can ship as a replacement, what type of gift card you can provide until the product is available, etc. Write your bad-news messages even when you will speak them. Without a script, it is too easy to state incorrect information and make unrealistic commitments — both of which eventually lead to bad feelings and damaged trust. If you will speak at a meeting, be prepared with answers to questions people are likely to ask. Keep your promises to communicate. If you say you will provide more information on Monday, do it. If the information is not available, say so. Broken promises make bad news worse. Communicating Tragic News This email communicating tragic news at a university displays many features of an excellent bad-news communication. It delivers the news promptly. The message is clear and complete without revealing confidential information. It expresses condolences and empathy, and it shares abundant information about resources for all involved. Note: All specific details in the email have been disguised. Subject: Sad News on Our Campus Dear Members of the University Community, I have very sad news to report. Last evening one of our students living in Baker Apartments died. The Lincoln County Medical Examiner has determined that his death was suicide. This is a heart-rending experience for all of us, and our sincere sympathy goes out to his family and friends. There is little comfort to be had at a difficult time like this. It is a terrible loss, and we know members of our university community have come 159
together to support each other. We hope you will all continue to do so. Last night, staff from the Student Life Office were on the scene late into the night, providing support to students. These psychologists and counselors will continue to provide assistance for as long as is necessary. During this trying period, we want to remind you of the array of resources available to the university community, including professional counseling services for students, faculty, and staff. These services include: The Counseling Center, staffed by psychologists and counselors who provide counseling, assessment, and crisis intervention services to currently enrolled students. For more information call [phone] or visit [website]. The Craig Mental Health Center offers a variety of services to students, faculty, staff, and alumni, providing high-quality mental health services. For more information call [phone] or visit [website]. Wellness and Health provides consultation, assessment, and intervention services to students in times of need. Wellness and Health works with students, faculty, and staff to provide a safe and supportive response when coordinated services are necessary. For more information call [phone] or visit [website]. Please take advantage of these services if you need support, and please take good care of yourself and one another. Sincerely yours, Clayton Washburn Vice President, Student Life Recognize Bad News Anytime information is not welcome to your audience, it is bad news, even if it seems positive or neutral to you. For example, changing health plans is bad news to an employee who likes the current plan, even if the new plan is better. Being enrolled in a training program is bad news to busy managers who don’t know why they are there — as this story of mine illustrates: The group of managers walked into a Better Business Writing class I was set to teach, talking to each other but not to me. They responded to my greeting but did not seem especially glad to meet me. Despite the chill in the classroom, I led the session as I usually do. By the end of the 1.5-day writing class, people were pleased about what they had learned and enthusiastic about applying it on the job. Only as they were leaving did I find out why they had been cool at the beginning of the class. One manager happened to tell me this: “No one told us why we were signed up for this class. We just found it on our calendars, no explanation. We’re busy managers — a 1.5-day class meant we had to cancel standing meetings, without any explanation of why we needed to work on our writing.” No one had taken the time to tell the managers the bad news — that they would have to cancel meetings and put aside projects to attend a 1.5-day training. And no one had taken 160
the time to explain why. Here is the message the managers should have received: Subject: Better Business Writing Class The members of the executive team took a writing class we all found valuable. We want to extend the same opportunity to you and the other managers. The class is scheduled on [dates] at [times] and has been added to your calendar. We know your schedule is very busy and that attending this training may feel like a hardship. But taking time now to tune up your writing skills will save you significant time later. We have already seen an improvement in our writing. Note: You can work on real work documents in the class, so you can get your job done while you learn. Please stop by to talk to your director if you have questions about the class or concerns about the timing. Whenever you worry that someone will feel bad about an action you will take or a decision you have made, decide how you will communicate about the potential bad news. Even a small gesture such as unsubscribing from someone’s newsletter or feed can cause hurt feelings. In those situations, consider sending a message like one of the following. The first is an email; the second, a text message. Subject: Unsubscribing from feeds Hi Chloe, Today I spent an hour unsubscribing from newsletters and feeds I can’t make time to read. Rather than having them hanging in my inbox and filling my phone, where I feel guilty that I am not reading them, I decided to unsubscribe. I wanted to let you know I unsubscribed from your feed. You write about cool, fascinating things, but I am going to keep up with you other ways. I promise to stay in touch! Sky Hey José. What’s up? I wanted to tell you I unsubscribed from your feed. Nothing personal — I just need more time to get things done. When I see you, we can talk about soccer, life, and so on. Manny If you don’t feel comfortable sending such a bad-news message, and the relationship matters to you, make time to talk to the individual. That way, you can reduce the chances that your simple gesture will damage your relationship. Be Courageous: Communicate Bad News 161
Rather than communicate bad news, some people just don’t communicate at all, as though it will simply blow over. But that behavior can lead to others feeling let down, left out, overlooked, deceived, and unvalued. Although not communicating is often an attempt to avoid hard feelings, it regularly leads to them. The courageous alternative is to communicate bad news promptly and diplomatically. That means informing job candidates when a position has been filled by another qualified applicant. It means letting vendors know that their contracts will not be renewed. It means being honest about higher prices rather than pretending that prices will not go up to avoid losing customers. And it means telling employees when the company has plans to downsize. Understand This: Delivering Bad News Can Be Good In my work as an outplacement consultant, I observed that a layoff message delivered in person or in writing is very difficult to receive, especially when it is unexpected. But even when the bad news is very bad, there is a personal payoff for delivering the message well. Despite the message — or perhaps because of it — delivering bad news clearly rather than confusingly, carefully rather than thoughtlessly, and straightforwardly rather than cagily can lead to a deepening of respect and understanding between people. People I “laid off” sometimes became friends of mine, even though we were strangers at the time of the layoff. I was there for them at a difficult time, communicating the bad news and helping them understand it. You can help people the same way, deepening your business relationships, by communicating bad news with courage and compassion. Although the title of this chapter is “Share Bad News Without Fostering Bad Feelings,” it helps to recognize that bad news communicated well can lead to good feelings and stronger relationships.
Personal Reflection Remember a time when you had to communicate bad news. How well did you communicate it? Now think of a time when you received bad news. Was it communicated effectively? What do you wish the person who shared it had done differently? Next Step For any project plans you are working on, add “Communicate bad news” to the task list. If you plan to implement changes, list the people whose work lives may be negatively affected, at least from their perspective, and be sure to communicate with them about the changes.
Say No Clearly and Courageously If you have ever had to say no in writing, you realize it can be a difficult message to write. It is not necessarily the wording that challenges you. It’s the idea of saying no to other people whose goodwill you value. You worry about how they will react to the no, whether it is with disappointment, anger, disbelief, belligerence, or embarrassment. You may worry that they will complain to others, say negative things about you, or publish harsh comments about you or your company online. If you have decided to do nothing rather than say no, you are not alone. According to my survey, rather than tell someone no, 22 percent of people occasionally avoid responding; 3 percent frequently avoid responding in such a situation. Below is the story of Melanie, who could not say no either in person or in writing in a situation that began at work. The story is essentially true, although details have been changed. As you read Melanie’s story, notice whether any part of her feelings or the developing situation is familiar to you. Melanie was 23 years old and worked in a government agency. She had a coworker, Aleea, age 20. They frequently ate lunch together and went shopping occasionally. People often commented on how strikingly alike they looked. One day Aleea approached Melanie with a strange request: Aleea was going on vacation to Hawaii with a friend and her family. Because the legal drinking age in Hawaii is 21, Aleea wanted Melanie to help her acquire an ID she could take to Hawaii to show she was 21 and old enough to drink. Melanie was astonished as she realized Aleea had worked out all the details. Melanie was to report her driver’s license as lost and order a new one online, which Aleea would pay for. When the new license arrived, Melanie was to lend her old driver’s license to Aleea, who would take the ID to Hawaii, pretend to be Melanie, and be able to drink Mai Tais in bars and restaurants with her friend. When Aleea came back to work after the vacation, she would return the ID to Melanie, who could then destroy it. Melanie thought the idea was nutty, but she could see Aleea’s point of view. She herself had enjoyed the bar scene in Honolulu. And the crazy plan would probably work, since the two looked so much alike. At the same time, Melanie wanted nothing to do with requesting a new license on false pretenses, and she knew she would never agree to do it. Yet Melanie could not say no. She didn’t want to let Aleea down, and she didn’t want to appear to be unwilling to help. She also did not want to come across as a goody-goody or suggest that Aleea was less than ethical. And she feared a big blowup that would damage their friendship. Not knowing how to say no, Melanie half-heartedly said she would think about it. She avoided Aleea for a few days and hoped Aleea would forget about it. Aleea did not forget. When she tracked down Melanie at lunch one day, Aleea let Melanie know that she had gone online, pretended to be Melanie, and ordered the 163
replacement license. The new license would be mailed to Melanie within two weeks, easily in time for Aleea’s trip to Hawaii. All Melanie had to do was give Aleea her old license when the new one arrived. Melanie was flabbergasted. She could not believe Aleea had ordered the license. But then Melanie blamed herself for not saying no right away when Aleea had suggested it. She worried that now she owed the license to Aleea, who had paid $25 for it. She knew she would not turn the license over to Aleea, but still she could not say no. Melanie received the new license in the mail within a week. When it came, she decided firmly that she would pretend it had never arrived. Soon Aleea was asking Melanie every day if the license had come, and every day Melanie lied and said that it had not. The night before she was to fly to Hawaii, Aleea phoned Melanie, anxiously asking Melanie to give her the old license, since the new one would surely arrive the next day. That time Melanie did say no. She said she could not give Aleea her license because then she would not have one herself and would not be able to drive. Melanie dreaded Aleea’s return from her vacation. When Aleea returned and eventually asked if the license had ever arrived in the mail, Melanie said it had not. The two women endured a strained work relationship. A Typical Downward Spiral When You Cannot Say No Did any parts of Melanie’s story seem familiar? Here is what typically happens in situations when it is difficult to say no: Someone — a business associate, applicant, vendor, solicitor, employee, coworker, or potential customer, let’s say — makes a request that you cannot (or don’t want to) agree to. Maybe the request is impractical, not profitable for you, or against your company policy. Maybe it doesn’t appeal to you or would require too much effort. Maybe it is illegal (as in Melanie’s situation), unethical, or unprofessional. You find it difficult to say no for one reason or many. The reasons generally involve fear: fear of a hurtful response from the other person, of retaliation, of letting someone down, of a negative change in your relationship, of making the wrong decision, of saying it badly, and so on. You avoid responding directly to the person, hoping the need to say no will go away. Unfortunately, it rarely does. You end up avoiding the person who has made the request. You do not reply to the person’s email or voicemail messages, and you avoid places at work where the person might see you. You become frustrated with yourself and irritated with the other person for making the request, which has become either a huge presence in your mind or a tiny ongoing irritant. The situation may take an unpleasant turn, as Melanie’s did, with the other person taking action despite your lack of a response. Or you may end up telling a string of lies. 164
If you never communicate the no, the other person will eventually give up trying to get a response from you. But he or she will have less confidence and trust in you as a reliable businessperson. If you do eventually communicate the no, your message may be marked by untruths or apologies that make you feel bad. It does not have to be that way! After reading this chapter, you will look at saying no in a new way that will help you do it quickly and effectively. Saying No: Think of It as a Gift Do this: Recognize that what the person making the request really wants is an answer. Of course, the individual would prefer a yes. But a no is normally far better than no answer at all. If Melanie had said no to Aleea promptly, Aleea might have exploded in anger, or she might have sulked for a while. She certainly would not have spent time and money ordering the license. She would not have wasted time and effort repeatedly asking Melanie whether it had arrived. She would not have waited in anticipation for the license and would not have made the last-minute phone call pleading with Melanie to lend Aleea her license. Compared with the way things evolved, a no would have been a gift to Aleea. As the reader of this book, you probably don’t care about Aleea. After all, her request was ridiculous and her behavior unethical. But think of Melanie. Saying no would have ended all her worry and wondering about how Aleea would respond. It would have allowed Melanie to move on. Sure, she might have felt awkward around Aleea for a few days, but that discomfort would have been nothing compared to what actually happened. Think of saying no as courageously giving a gift to the other person and to yourself. It is the gift of being able to move on. Had Melanie thought of saying no as a gift to herself and Aleea, she might have sent this email shortly after Aleea made the request: Subject: Your Idea for Hawaii Hi Aleea. I thought about what you asked me at lunch, about Mai Tais in Hawaii. I have to say no. It’s just not okay with me. Sorry! I hope you have a great time anyway. Mel Aleea would not have been pleased. She might have gotten angry and retaliated somehow. She might have ended their friendship, which would have hurt Melanie despite their apparent difference in values. Yet the friendship ended anyway when Melanie could not say no. It is also possible that Aleea would have responded mildly. She might have gone up to Melanie in the cafeteria the next day and asked, “Are you sure? It’s not a big deal, just a driver’s license.” Melanie might then have said simply, “I’m sure. Sorry.” And Aleea might have dropped the subject. 165
The Parts of a No Message A written no message typically requires only these three parts: A neutral or positive opening A clearly stated or strongly implied no A positive or professional close My daughter Eva received this email from her piano accompanist, Valerie Shields, replying to Eva’s request for accompaniment at a fundraiser: Hi Eva [neutral or positive opening], I regret that I won’t be able to accompany you on April 11 [clearly stated no]. Hope all is well with you and that you are enjoying your senior year [a positive close]. Best wishes, Valerie The message says no clearly and concisely, yet it supports the relationship between the two musicians. Depending on the situation, you may want to expand the message by adding one or more of these additional parts: An explanation for the no An offer of an alternative A brief apology Imagine the situation of an entrepreneur named Seth, who was asked by someone in his professional circle to write a review of her book. Seth skimmed the book and hated it. Rather than writing a negative review, which his colleague would not have wanted — or a dishonest one, which he was not willing to do — he decided to send a no message. Seth felt the message required an explanation for the no. He considered saying he did not have time to read and review the book, but he feared that his colleague would then just ask him to write the review when he did have time. Here is the no message he sent: Dear Ellen, Thanks for inviting me to review your new book [positive opening]. I have scanned it, and I do not feel in tune with the book’s approach enough to endorse it [brief explanation for the no]. Therefore, I am going to decline the opportunity this time [clearly stated no]. Cheers [positive close], 166
Seth Seth’s no message is brief and clear without criticizing Ellen’s book. Although she would undoubtedly be disappointed, she could not fault him for anything but being “not in tune.” On the positive side, Seth gave her the gift of a clear, quick response. In the email below, I responded to a colleague in my professional network, someone I do not know well. She had written to express interest in referring training opportunities to me, for a 10 percent referral fee. She asked whether I would be open to such an arrangement. This no message includes an offer of an alternative. Dear Faith, Thank you for thinking of me for possible training opportunities. I appreciate your vote of confidence [positive opening]. Paying a referral fee is not something I am interested in doing [strongly implied no]. I prefer to refer work to other people and accept referrals from them without fees involved [brief explanation for the no]. I would be happy to have that kind of relationship with you [offer of an alternative]. Please let me know if you are interested in working that way. I wish you much success in your business [positive close]. Lynn “Faith” responded agreeably to the no message I sent. Our professional relationship is intact despite my having said no to her invitation. Saying No in Many Situations Here are examples of other situations in which you may wish to say no. Notice that all the messages have a positive opening (sometimes just a simple greeting), a clearly stated or strongly implied no, and a positive or professional close — some close both positively and professionally. Some include additional parts: an explanation for the no, an offer of an alternative, or a brief apology. When an employee emails to ask for a week of vacation: Brad, Thanks for asking me about taking the week before Christmas as a vacation week. Unfortunately, in our retail environment I can’t approve your request. The week before Christmas is the busiest week of the year for us. That’s why our policy requires nearly every employee to work that week. We do have a rotation that permits employees to take vacation time that week or the week after Christmas every four years if they wish to. You will be eligible for either of those weeks in your fourth year with us. You will have Christmas Day and New Year’s Day off as paid holidays because the store is closed. Also, because you are working Christmas Eve, 167
you will have New Year’s Eve off. I hope those days off will make up for having to work the week before Christmas. Let me know if you have questions. Julian Before writing the message above, Julian may have been thinking, Vacation the week before Christmas? Is this guy insane or from outer space? This is retail! However, his purpose was not to ridicule the employee. It was to say no and maintain a good work relationship. So he kept those thoughts to himself. When an employee makes a written request for approval to attend a training program: Lester, thanks for asking permission to attend the conference in Ontario. I believe the program would be excellent, and I wish I could say yes. However, I cannot. There is a company-wide push toward cost-effective training and education. We are asking all managers and staff to use our own training department, which offers a variety of very good programs. We are also encouraging everyone to consider programs at local colleges and universities. These are often an excellent value. Please talk with Nathan Griffin in the training department about the courses we offer. Nathan also maintains a database of programs offered locally, with particular emphasis on those serving our industry. Thanks for taking the initiative on your professional development. Please let me know if you want to discuss this. Larry When a potential client asks for a discount: Dear Mr. Gomez: Thank you very much for following up on our proposal so promptly. We are pleased that you are enthusiastic about our ideas, and we are all looking forward to the start of the project. In your message, you asked about the possibility of a discount because of your organization’s nonprofit status. We would like you to know that we reviewed a wide range of factors when we computed the proposed fees, and we have offered you our very best pricing. We hope that when you consider the anticipated results of the project, you will agree that the investment is sound. We look forward to your approval of the proposal. When we hear from you, we will draw up a letter of agreement. Sincerely, Maura 168
Maura Howe Director of Business Development When a potential customer asks for a free sample: Dear Ms. Powell: Thank you for writing to us and requesting a sample from our catalog. We were happy to hear from you. We do not provide free samples. However, if you order a sample product and are not satisfied with it, we will refund the cost of the item, along with the shipping costs you paid. You will not pay anything unless you choose to keep the item. Please phone or email us if you have any questions. We look forward to receiving your order by phone, by email, or online. Best wishes, Todd Thrush, Customer Service Representative [Contact information] When a peer emails to ask for your participation in a panel or a project: Dear Jillian, Thanks for thinking of me. Unfortunately, my schedule and workload for the foreseeable future preclude me from participating in this interesting effort. Best regards, Elijah When a stranger asks for the opportunity to write a guest blog post: Thanks for asking about a guest post. We are not using guest writers at this time. Good luck with your business! Crista Turner LMNOP Company When a coworker asks for a conference room he needs for his team training: Hi Zach. About Columbia — sorry I can’t give it up. I want to impress the interns with the view and the free food next door. It’s their first day. Hope you find another spot. Peter Consider how Zach might feel if he had received this brief response instead: No can do. Peter 169
If Zach and Peter have a good work connection, the three-word response might be enough. But if their relationship is not solid, the lack of investment Peter made in the message could negatively affect their work relationship. When a coworker asks for your password to get a discount on a website: Hey Casey, I am not comfortable sharing my password for the site. It just doesn’t work for me. To get the discount, you can register yourself and get a password of your own. I believe the membership fee is just $25/year. It’s really worth it if you are going to make many purchases. Ciao, Sara Notice that Sara’s message does not criticize Casey for asking for her password. The purpose of the message is to say no — not to teach Casey about ethics. When a coworker asks for your security card to enter a building after hours: Hi, Long. I got your message about my key card. Sorry, I can’t lend it out. If you need to get into Preston on the weekend, ask Eleanor for advice. I know she has arranged with Security for other people to enter on weekends. Best, Dell When an employee asks for an advance on a paycheck: Hi Gretchen, I am sorry I cannot approve an advance on your check. I have a longstanding policy of not providing advances, for many reasons. Dorothy in Employee Assistance might have some helpful ideas. Also, during the last week of this month, we will conduct our annual inventory, when you can choose to work overtime. I hope making extra money that week will be helpful to you. Garlin When You Need to Say No Repeatedly Messages communicating a no are not always successful. Sometimes you need to say no repeatedly. For instance, imagine yourself in the shoes of Susan, a web designer, whose client has asked her to update his website. However, he is more than a month late in paying Susan’s most recent invoice. Susan is angry about not being paid, and she is not willing to complete more work before he pays the overdue amount. Her prompt reply to her client includes all six parts of the no message: 170
Hi, Dave. I’m glad you are getting web traffic and conversions on your site. That’s great [positive opening]! I am sorry I cannot do updates on your site until I receive payment for the work I have done so far [clearly stated no with a brief apology]. Our contract stipulates payment within 30 days, yet my invoice for $390 is more than one month past due [brief explanation for the no]. As soon as I receive your check or credit-card number for the payment, I will be glad to implement the updates you requested [offer of an alternative]. Best [professional close], Susan Within minutes, Susan received Dave’s reply: Susan, this isn’t fair. I had no idea you wouldn’t do work until you got paid. You never told me that. I need these changes. I have a gig coming up and I’m up against the wall. We have to get it on the site or I will lose money and you will never get paid. You’ve got to help me. Don’t let me down PLEASE. Dave Now Susan had to decide how she felt about the situation. She stayed firm in her decision that she would not do additional work for Dave until he paid what he owed her. They did not have a long-term business relationship that would make her ignore the terms of their contract in this one instance. It was important to her that he abide by their written agreement. Notice where her response again includes all six parts of the no message: Hi, Dave. Thanks for letting me know how you feel. You are correct that I never told you I would not do additional work until I received payment. You and I have a signed agreement that states that payment is due within 30 days. It is now over 60 days since I emailed the invoice for $390 to you. Because I have not received payment according to the terms of our agreement, I am not willing to do additional work. I am sorry about this situation. Please provide me with a check or credit-card number to process for $390. Once I receive your payment, I will perform the updates quickly. Best, Susan In her message, Susan repeated her offer to get to work on the updates as soon as she received a check or credit-card number. Her messages were consistent and clear. 171
Dave responded this way: I don’t have the money or I would pay you. I need to make money with this gig to pay. Can you make an exception this time PLEASE? Susan could again decide to perform the work for Dave or say no. Here is the professional email she sent in which she continued to incorporate all the parts of the no message: Dave, I understand your situation and am sorry about it. My answer is still no. I do not wish to make an exception. If you can find a way to pay for the work I completed, I will make your updates an immediate priority. Please let me know if anything changes about your ability to pay. I really hope things work out for you. Susan Of course, Susan’s messages did not seem like a gift to Dave. He needed additional work done on his website now, and Susan refused to complete the work without prior payment of his unpaid invoice. But Susan did give Dave a gift whether he recognized it or not. The gift was clarity. Susan made her policy completely clear to him. She did not cause him to waste time or resources waiting for delayed responses, second-guessing her intent, or trying to find holes in poorly stated messages. Saying No Respectfully and Professionally Beyond her clarity and quick responses, Susan treated Dave with respect. She did not criticize his money management skills or complain about his delayed payments. She used I statements to communicate her no messages: I am sorry I cannot do updates on your site until I receive payment for the work I have done so far. Because I have not received payment according to the terms of our agreement, I am not willing to do additional work. My answer is still no. I do not wish to make an exception. Those statements work well because her purpose was to say no to Dave and do so professionally. Her purpose was not to label him, teach him, or shame him, as these statements would have done: Your treatment of me is completely unfair and uncalled for [labeling]. 172
As a businessperson, you need to be able to manage your accounts payable [teaching]. How can you ever expect to be a successful businessman if you treat me in such an unbusinesslike way [shaming]? Certainly, Susan may be tempted to point out that Dave’s request is unfair and his behavior disrespectful. But if her purpose is to say no clearly and professionally, steering clear of language that “puts Dave in his place” is her best approach. Her goal is not to reform Dave. It is to run her business well. You may have wondered about the use of the word sorry in Susan’s messages. Susan is not the person who has ignored the terms of their contract. Why should she apologize? I am sorry I cannot do updates on your site until I receive payment for the work I have done so far. I am sorry about this situation. Dave, I understand your situation and am sorry about it. The word sorry is appropriate because Susan is sorry. She is sorry about the whole situation. Her sorry is not actually an apology (although I have called it that). It is an expression of regret and disappointment that things are not going better. Sorry also indicates that Susan has feelings. She is not a machine. Susan’s messages do not refer to her anger, even though she is angry that Dave has not paid her and is frustrated that he is wasting her time in this no-win email exchange. Talking about her anger and frustration would take the focus off the purpose of her message, which is to say no. Focusing on negative emotions could push the exchange into an unproductive angerfest that would threaten their work relationship just as much as Dave’s nonpayment threatens it. Only if Susan is unwilling to work for Dave in the future, even when he does pay, and only if she wants to fire him as a client, should she even consider bringing up her anger and frustration in her messages. If she wants to express her anger and frustration, doing so in a confidential, professional support group is a safer, more satisfying approach for the long term. Clearly Stated and Strongly Implied Nos All of the no messages you have read so far in this chapter include either a clearly stated no or a strongly implied one. Examples of a clearly stated no: I regret that I won’t be able to accompany you on April 11. Therefore, I am going to decline the opportunity this time.
Unfortunately, in our retail environment I can’t approve your request. Strongly implied no: Paying a referral fee is not something I am interested in doing. We are not using guest writers at this time. We would like you to know that we reviewed a wide range of factors when we computed the proposed fees, and we have offered you our very best pricing. When you write to U.S. business readers and other people who communicate in a direct style, it is essential that your no be clearly stated or strongly implied. Without an unmistakable no, the other person will wonder whether you said no and may even think you said yes. The implied no in this message is not strong enough to remove all doubts: Hi, Cheri. I received your message about taking PTO [paid time off] on Friday. Cassy and Fleur are scheduled to take that day off. Tyler This version removes the doubt with a clearly stated no, and it includes an apology: Hi, Cheri. I received your message about taking PTO on Friday. Because Cassy and Fleur are scheduled to take that day off, I cannot approve your request. I am sorry it did not work out this time. Tyler The ambiguous no message below is a response to a therapy patient’s request to change a next-day appointment from 4 p.m. to 6 p.m. Hi Christian, My policy, as you know, is 48 hours’ notice except in emergencies, and I must stick to it. Changing an appointment in less than 48 hours counts as a cancellation and is the patient’s financial responsibility. Lyle This version includes a clearly stated no: Hi Christian, I am sorry I cannot change your appointment from 4 to 6 p.m. tomorrow. 174
My policy is 48 hours’ notice except in emergencies, and I must stick to it. If you are unable to make your appointment tomorrow, I will regard it as a cancellation and expect payment for the appointment. Please let me know if things do work out for you to come at 4. Lyle This story of Professor Bermudez and a student, Ms. Levitt, serves as an example of where indirect no messages can lead. Professor Bermudez received a request for a recommendation from Ms. Levitt. He did not want to recommend her because of her lackluster performance and limited participation in his course. Writing in a style that is comfortable for him, the professor sent this no message: Ms. Levitt, Regarding your message requesting a recommendation letter, I have had limited opportunities to become acquainted with your strengths and accomplishments. For that reason, a recommendation from me would not be helpful to you. I wish you success in finding a suitable program. H. Bermudez The professor’s implied no was not strong enough for his reader. He received this response: Hi Professor, I would be glad to meet at your convenience to discuss my strengths and accomplishments. Once you have this information, I hope you will be able to write a recommendation for me. My schedule is flexible. Please let me know a good time to meet with you, and I will bring my CV [“curriculum vitae,” the name for a resume in the academic world] and supporting documents. Best, Kat In Professor Bermudez’s mind, Ms. Levitt’s message gave further evidence that she was not a perceptive student. He wrote to her again: Ms. Levitt, My schedule precludes meeting with you in the near future. May I suggest that you request a recommendation from other faculty members? Sincerely, H. Bermudez 175
A month later he received this reply: Hi Professor, I was wondering whether your schedule had cleared enough for you to meet with me. I would really appreciate it if you could write a letter of recommendation for me. Can we schedule 15 minutes to go over my strengths and accomplishments? I am available at your convenience. Best, Kat Here is the final message in the exchange between Professor Bermudez and Ms. Levitt: Ms. Levitt, I am afraid I cannot write a wholly positive recommendation for you. I strongly suggest that you request recommendations from faculty members who admire your work. H. Bermudez That message from Professor Bermudez finally includes a very strongly implied no: “I cannot write a wholly positive recommendation for you.” If the professor had included that statement in his first message, Ms. Levitt would not have continued to ask for his help. However, in some cultures, a direct no is considered rude or highly inappropriate. Perhaps Professor Bermudez finally became direct because he feared Ms. Levitt would never stop pestering him! Give the Gift of No The purpose of this book is to build and sustain relationships through effective, heartfilled business writing. In many cases — except when you want to end a business relationship intentionally — the purpose of saying no is the same: to say no while preserving the business relationship. You can achieve that purpose by taking the courageous, difficult step of writing the message. If you do not take that step — if you leave the other person wondering and waiting — you will jeopardize the relationship and possibly destroy it, perhaps before it has even begun. When you have decided to say no, say it clearly and courageously. Think of your no message as a gift to the other person — and to yourself.
Personal Reflection In my survey, one person commented on saying no this way: “I’ve learned to say no. I love it!” Have you learned to say no? What do you need to do or to tell yourself in order to say no and love it — or at least tolerate it? 176
Next Step Think of a situation in which you may need to say no to someone. Use the sample messages in this chapter to draft a response.
Disagree With Discretion, Not Destruction Pavel was a flamer, someone who sends hostile electronic messages. His boss had sent him to my Better Business Writing class because when Pavel disagreed with people in writing, he destroyed relationships. Pavel (not his real name) had been told he was brutal in his writing, and he wanted to find out what he needed to change. He felt clueless. It was easy to recognize what Pavel was doing wrong. He described a situation in which he had responded to someone whose work, to Pavel, was obviously below standard. He had written to his colleague, “I would rather have my teeth extracted than do what you suggested.” When I asked Pavel whether that statement might have been a bit harsh, he told me the harshness was warranted because his colleague’s idea was terrible. Pavel could not disagree without destruction. His background was the key to Pavel’s communication problem. Just a few years earlier, he had come to the United States from an Eastern European country that values directness. Besides the bluntness that was second nature to him, he did not recognize tone differences. For example, he saw little or no difference between the sentences in these pairs: I have no idea what you are talking about! I do not understand your point yet. What in the world do you mean? What do you mean? Pavel had the tone deafness of Dr. Sheldon Cooper, a brilliant but emotionally insensitive character in the TV sitcom The Big Bang Theory. Considering the sentences above, Pavel (and Sheldon) would argue, “But I don’t have any idea what they are talking about. Why can’t I say that?” And they might both shake their head in frustrated puzzlement, trying to understand why the phrase “in the world” in “What in the world do you mean?” would incense their coworkers. Although you may not have Pavel’s challenge of moving to a different culture and missing linguistic subtleties (or Sheldon Cooper’s emotional denseness), you too may feel challenged when you need to disagree. You may struggle to think of ways to communicate your disagreement without offending. You may labor to find the appropriate words. You may wrestle with how much detail to include to make your point without making an enemy. This chapter offers many examples of phrasing and several sample messages to help you. Or you may agree with Pavel. You may be wondering what is wrong with exclaiming, “I have no idea what you are talking about!” Like Pavel, you may prefer bluntness and forceful delivery of a brilliant argument. This chapter shows you how you can preserve your relationships while communicating your valuable ideas.
The Argument for Disagreeing With Discretion From what Pavel shared in class, I sensed that his situation was becoming grave. It sounded as though his colleagues avoided him because of his harsh communication. They discounted Pavel’s comments, regardless of how brilliant he was, because the comments came wrapped in insults. They did not seek his opinion unless they had to. Would you want to be in Pavel’s situation? Disagreeing with discretion means disagreeing with care and diplomacy. If Pavel could change his communication style and disagree with discretion, he could: Influence decision makers, coworkers, and peers in other departments to design better software. Become the expert whose opinion is sought and valued. Maintain work relationships rather than trashing them. Be promoted. Happily, Pavel can learn to disagree with discretion, and so can you. Differences: Destruction vs. Discretion Consider the story of Kelly and Donald, two recruiters at a rapidly growing high-tech company. In this message, Kelly disagrees with a part of Donald’s proposal: To: Donald From: Kelly Re: Problem With Your Recruiting Proposal I read your proposal for on-campus recruiting. I think you are making a big mistake to invite employees directly. You ought to go through their supervisors. You don’t want to have supervisors upset at Recruiting, as they were with the job-shadowing program you instituted without their involvement. Otherwise, it’s okay. Kelly Is Donald likely to accept Kelly’s suggestion? If he sees the wisdom of her point of view, he might do so grudgingly. However, it is just as likely that he will put up his defensive shield as soon as he reads the subject Kelly wrote on the email: “Problem With Your Recruiting Proposal.” The words problem and your together come across like a dog’s growl, signaling a possible attack. The body of the email does nothing to package Kelly’s disagreement pleasantly. “I read your proposal” contains no hint of praise. “You are making a big mistake” implies “You are an idiot.” “You ought to” says “I know better.” Bringing up the problem in the jobshadowing program says “Here you go again upsetting people.” The closing, “Otherwise, it’s okay,” does nothing to help Donald rebound from Kelly’s ego-destroying force. Contrast this version of the message, which disagrees with discretion: 179
To: Donald From: Kelly Re: Your New Recruiting Initiative Hi, Donald. Nice job on your new proposal for on-campus recruitment! I like it. You always have creative ideas about how to introduce our company to students. I have one important suggestion: I believe supervisors will be most supportive of your plan to take employees on recruitment trips if you issue the invitations through them. If you invite employees directly, I worry that supervisors may feel undermined, which could work against your plan. To get supervisors to say yes to the invitations, maybe you could offer an incentive such as a first crack at highly qualified candidates. Again, nice work! Kelly Donald will take Kelly’s suggestion seriously in this second version for many reasons: The words new and initiative give the subject line a positive feeling. The greeting prepares him for a collegial message, not an attack. The praise in the first paragraph communicates that Kelly admires his work. The phrases “important suggestion,” “I believe,” and “I worry” communicate Kelly’s disagreement without putting her in an opposing camp. She offered a suggestion to help Donald encourage supervisors to say yes to the invitations. She repeated her praise of Donald’s work. Of course, the 100-word second version requires more thought and effort than the 50word first one. But the probable payoff from the second version makes the investment worth it. Donald is much more likely to seriously consider and implement Kelly’s ideas rather than attack them. The second version also solidifies a good work relationship between coworkers. But what if Kelly disagreed with many aspects of Donald’s plan? She could still disagree with discretion: To: Donald From: Kelly Re: New Recruiting Proposal Hi, Donald. I read your proposal for on-campus recruitment. I want it to be very successful, as you do, but I have concerns about parts of it. Can we meet to talk about the parts I believe could benefit from rethinking? 180
I am free this afternoon or early tomorrow morning. Please let me know what works for you. I look forward to our conversation. Kelly That message includes no criticism of Donald or his proposal, only a mention of Kelly’s “concerns.” It sets a positive, professional tone with the phrases “very successful,” “benefit from rethinking,” and “look forward to our conversation.” You noticed that the message did not give details of what is wrong with Donald’s proposal. Whenever you can, share details in person or on the phone rather than in writing. A written message does not allow you to gauge how the other person is reacting or to take in information about why the individual approached the subject the way he or she did. What if the weird idea is the CEO’s? Nevertheless, if your business associates work on the other side of the globe while you are asleep, you may have to express disagreement in detailed emails and written reports rather than in real time. And there are other work situations that require you to flesh out your comments in writing. If Kelly must put the details in writing, here is how she can write the email or memo: To: Donald From: Kelly Re: New Recruiting Proposal Hi, Donald. I read your new proposal very carefully. You have put a lot of effort into recommending ways we can improve on-campus recruiting. Like you, I want this proposal to be very successful, so I am sharing these concerns about it. Please follow up with me if any of these ideas need clarification. 1. Inviting employees to participate in on-campus job fairs: This is an excellent idea. I believe supervisors will be most supportive of the idea if you issue the invitations through them. If you invite employees directly, I worry that supervisors may feel undermined, which could work against your plan. 2. Training for employees participating in recruitment: It is terrific that you thought of this. Too often people overlook training. We will need to sell this idea to managers, and I am almost certain they would balk at four hours of training. I recommend that we consider a one-hour or a 90-minute training program. We can add just-in-time training at the colleges as we set up. 3. Recruiting budget: You have estimated the costs as $25,000. Based on my recent experiences in budgeting, I believe $100,000 is closer to what we will need. I have attached a past budget to 181
give you an idea of unexpected expenses to factor in. I strongly encourage you to reconsider this budget number, since we will all have to live with it. I suggest a minimum of $90,000; $100,000 will give us a cushion in case we want to add campuses or trips. 4. Division of recruiting responsibilities: When I reviewed the geographic breakdown, it appeared that neither of us has an equal mix of colleges in rural areas and in large metropolitan areas, something that is important so that we have similar travel challenges. A trip to Ellensburg, Washington, in December is much more challenging and time consuming than a trip to Seattle. As someone who grew up on this coast, I would be happy to redraw the territory in a way that equalizes the travel challenges. Otherwise, I look forward to a revised plan from you. [Kelly can cover more points in a similar way.] Donald, I hope this input will help you finalize a strong, successful proposal that will enhance our college recruiting. Kelly In the detailed message, Kelly disagrees with four aspects of Donald’s plan. Yet she never uses the word disagree. Avoiding that word helps her avoid a confrontational tone. Reading Kelly’s message, you would never guess that her first unpolished reactions to Donald’s plan were: Invite employees directly? That’s doomed to fail. Four hours of training? Is he insane? $25,000 budget — in his dreams! He gets territories like Seattle, Portland, Sacramento — and I get cow towns! Not without a fight! I should have written this proposal myself! It’s just as much work when he writes it! Despite Kelly’s first thoughts, this message, like the earlier ones that disagree with discretion: Uses positive language such as improve, successful, excellent, supportive, and terrific. Avoids using the pronouns you and your with any negative words. Phrases such as “your error” and “you falsely assume” do not appear. Offers an alternative method for each area of disagreement, rather than just being critical. Avoids making any assumptions about Donald’s motives.
When You Disagree Completely At times, you may disagree completely with someone’s ideas. If you can discuss the issues with the individual, such an exchange of information is a productive approach. However, if you cannot or do not choose to meet in person or talk on the phone (perhaps because you want to go on record as disagreeing), you can still disagree with discretion rather than destruction. Imagine that Malick, webmaster for a small consulting firm, disagrees with Ahmed, the VP of marketing, who is pushing to use customers’ survey comments without their permission. Malick is the person who would be uploading the comments to the company website. The marketing assistant, Alicia, has just sent Ahmed three such comments to add to the site as testimonials. Here is Malick’s memo to Ahmed: To: Ahmed Atwal From: Malick Badami Re: Testimonials for Website — Recommendation Ahmed, I received three excellent customer-satisfaction survey comments from Alicia. To avoid doing something we might regret, I recommend that we contact these customers and get their permission before publishing their comments as testimonials. Here is why: 1. We have a signed nondisclosure agreement with one of the companies, ABC Inc., stating that we won’t use any of their comments or company information without their permission. Posting their comments online would be a violation of the agreement. 2. In Ed White’s comment (XYZ Associates), he mentions his company in less than flattering terms. If his unedited remarks were made public, he and his colleagues could be embarrassed. 3. Because these quotes will become part of each customer’s searchable Internet profile, posting them without approval could lead to mistrust and dissatisfaction. Yes, requesting and getting permission takes time, and we run the risk of customer denials. However, handling our customers discreetly will help us continue our excellent relationships with them. An “act first, apologize later” policy could alienate our best customers. I know you feel a sense of urgency about adding testimonials to our site. I am happy to help with that effort. I can work with Alicia to contact these customers, and others, to get permission and help them edit their comments, if necessary. To ensure we get permission to publish future comments, we can add a permission box to our surveys. Customers can check the box, giving us permission to use their comments in our marketing materials. 183
Let me know how I can help. Malick Although Malick is surprised and annoyed that the VP of marketing would publish testimonials without permission, those feelings do not come out in the message. Saying “I am surprised you would do this” would almost certainly cause Ahmed to defend himself or attack Malick. Describing his annoyance would not promote Malick’s point of view, so there is no point in mentioning it. A strength of Malick’s message is that he addresses Ahmed’s concerns. He acknowledges that requesting permission takes time and that Ahmed feels pressure to do this quickly. He offers help to speed up the process, and he suggests a way to obtain permission in the future. Malick’s message includes three reasons for his “recommendation.” (He does not use the word disagreement.) None of his reasons belittle Ahmed. Negative language has an appropriate place in the memo. The words regret, violation, embarrassed, mistrust, dissatisfaction, a nd alienate point out the possible negative consequences of publishing the comments without permission. Still, not one of the negative words is coupled with the pronoun you. Malick refrains from writing “You will alienate” or “You will embarrass.” By avoiding such accusatory sentence structures, Malick allows Ahmed to save face. Transforming Destruction Into Discretion This table compares written statements that disagree destructively with those that disagree discreetly.
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When you disagree in writing, your most important tool is your attitude. If your attitude is respectful and caring, your message is likely to be supportive rather than destructive. The statements in the “Disagreeing With Discretion” column of the table all communicate support and respect. They convey a positive regard for the reader. It will be a challenge to write a diplomatic message if your attitude is hostile, disparaging, or unsympathetic — or all three. If you have strong negative feelings toward the person, try hard to imagine the individual as your best friend, your favorite coworker, or your most admired public figure. This visualization may help you adjust your attitude and make it easier for you to see the person in a positive light. Then it will be easier to disagree with discretion. You and Pavel Can Disagree Without Destruction Pavel, the man whose story opened this chapter, disagreed with destruction, primarily because of his background. He had grown up communicating bluntly in Eastern Europe, and he did not recognize the differences between tact and tactlessness in English. Perhaps you too have been less than successful because of coming across as insensitive or undiplomatic. Both Pavel and you can disagree without destroying relationships if you apply these tips: Talk rather than write, when possible, so you can adjust your message based on the other person’s reactions and input. Avoid the word disagree, which puts you and the other person on opposing sides. Instead, simply state your views. Or describe them as suggestions or recommendations. Avoid the use of the pronouns you and your with blaming language. For example, avoid “you failed” and “your illogical plan.” Use I statements to express concerns, for instance, “I worry that …” and “I have reservations about …” Turn criticisms into suggestions. Rather than writing, “Your proposal lacks depth,” write, “The proposal would benefit from more discussion of …” Offer ideas and alternatives. Communicate carefully rather than cavalierly, sincerely rather than sarcastically. Omit exaggerations such as “I would rather jump off the George Washington Bridge than do as you suggested.” Avoid superlatives such as “This is the worst report I have ever read.” Appreciate the possibility that you are wrong. Your ideas may be out of fashion or too cutting edge for the situation. Use tentative language such as “may be” and “could be” rather than insisting things “are” exactly as you interpret them.
Avoid making negative assumptions about the other person’s motives, and never include such assumptions in your message. Assume the best of the other person. Recognize when your negative feelings will be obstacles to writing a tactful message. Try to see the other person in a positive light. Relationships are built on honest, tactful communication. Disagreeing with discretion will help you create and maintain strong business relationships.
Personal Reflection Are you able to disagree without being disagreeable or destructive? Which techniques and attitudes help you — or could help you — disagree discreetly? Next Step From the table that compares destructive and discreet language, choose several discreet phrases you could apply in conversations and written messages. Memorize your phrases and start using them this week.
Remind People Without Nagging or Whining If you are like most professionals, you have to write an occasional reminder. People do not always act as quickly as you want or need. Maybe a client has not paid your invoice promptly or has not replied to your request for a meeting. Perhaps a peer hasn’t given you essential data or hasn’t finished a report you are waiting for. Maybe your boss or a client keeps you waiting when you need approval to move ahead on a project. Those situations can be so frustrating! They can also be uncomfortable. Reminding the other person can feel like nagging, grumbling, or begging — none of which promotes good will and satisfying work relationships. Despite those feelings, you must occasionally remind someone of something to get what you need to do your job. This chapter will help you avoid turning frustration into embarrassment and associates into adversaries. It will help you write diplomatic, efficient reminders — and even eliminate the need to write some of them. How to Eliminate the Need for a Reminder Let’s start by identifying with the individuals who have not yet done what you want them to do. Why have they not paid, replied, approved, or accomplished the task you requested of them? Each case is different, but it is likely that they are reluctant, ambivalent, unaware, unable, or too busy to do what you want. If you can imagine your readers feeling one or more of those ways, you can reduce the need for many reminders by providing what they need from the start — that is, when you make your original request. When you request an action or assign a task, you can take these steps to increase the likelihood that the person will do it, thereby eliminating the need to send a reminder: To reduce ambivalence, personalize a message so that every individual who receives it knows it is from you to him or her — not from a department to a mass audience. When a request goes to a group, everyone assumes that someone else will respond, volunteer, or contribute. Use an individual’s name, and let the person know why you are making the request of him or her. You will be much more likely to receive a positive response and will not need to send out pleading reminders. To reduce reluctance and ambivalence, state why something is important. If people understand the importance of your request or assignment, they will prioritize it with their other important activities. In my role as an instructor at the University of Washington–Bothell, I received a request that I submit grades for summer students. The request provided these details about the importance of submitting grades on time: Please make every effort to submit grades on time. Students depend on 188
grades for their academic survival. They need them to: • Prove satisfactory academic progress. • Fulfill prerequisite requirements for registration. • Remain eligible for athletic programs. • Receive appropriate honors. • Remain eligible for scholarships. • Remain eligible for financial aid and other government-sponsored programs like veterans’ benefits. • Graduate. How could I not submit grades on time when all of the above could depend on my action? I took action promptly. Another way to reduce reluctance and ambivalence is to show how taking an action benefits the reader. Whenever there is a clear reader benefit, include it. Examples: I will start designing your website as soon as I receive the signed letter of agreement. When we meet, we can discuss next steps to get the project back on schedule. Reserving your booth this week guarantees a space in the main exhibit hall. Pay only $485 if you send payment within 10 days. Enjoy a 3 percent discount for prompt payment! To lessen the likelihood that someone is unable or too busy to complete a task, do as much as you can to help the other person comply. Sometimes the smallest missing details can lead to the biggest delays. Be sure to include all the information he or she may need, taking the following steps: Include your phone number, fax number, and mailing address so the person does not need to take time to search for them. Provide a payment link for easy credit-card payments. Send an Outlook meeting request, or list the dates and times you are available for a meeting. Include a map or a link to a map so the person can find your office easily, if something requires delivery. Attach a template for the document you need or a sample of what you expect. Provide links to resources for more information. To eliminate lack of awareness, follow up on any requests you make by email. Call, send a follow-up email, or make a personal visit within a few hours or a day of your original request. Make sure the person received your request, understands it, and can comply in a reasonable amount of time. When Your Best Efforts Don’t Lead to a Prompt, Positive Response 189
Despite doing everything you can to make complying easy, sometimes you will need to send reminders. Communications consultant Deb Arnold helps her clients win prestigious awards for their training programs. She does all the right things to encourage clients to provide timely information for award submissions, but she still has to follow up with reminders at times. Here is an example from Deb: Subject: Gentle Reminder FW: Your input requested for award submission Dear [Name], As the week comes to a close, I’m getting back in touch to see whether you might have had a chance to review the needed information for the [Award Name]. [Name of an executive] specifically asked for your input, so I wanted to be sure to follow up. As I mentioned below, I can set up a call or, if you prefer to, please feel free to send written input. Might you be able to let me know by end of day Monday how you would like to provide your insights? Thank you very kindly in advance for your time and important contributions. Best, Deb Deb communicates well to maintain positive business relationships. She uses the polite “Gentle reminder.” She efficiently forwards her original request rather than restating it. She uses the positive phrasing “Your input requested,” “getting back in touch,” “your insights,” “important contributions,” and “Thank you very kindly.” She hints at the passage of time with “As the week comes to a close.” She deftly mentions the executive’s desire for input, and she frames the communication as “I wanted to be sure to follow up” rather than “I needed to remind you.” Tips for Gentle Reminders Consider these tips to help you write “gentle” reminders that support good work relationships: Use I statements — not you statements. I statements help you communicate facts rather than accusations. Compare these sentences: I look forward to receiving the sales data I requested. (I statement) You have not yet sent me the sales data I requested. (you statement) The I statement is true: The writer looks forward to receiving the data. In contrast, the you statement is speculation. The writer cannot be certain that the other person has not sent the information. If the other person has sent it, the accusation could damage the relationship. Notice the difference in feeling in these sentence pairs: 190
You have not yet approved my check request. I would appreciate approval of my check request by tomorrow. You haven’t responded to my meeting request. I would like to meet with you ASAP. The I statements state the writer’s needs, whereas the you statements blame the reader. T he you statements are much more likely to elicit a defensive or an argumentative response. Communicate consequences, which help people prioritize. People typically take action on things that have positive consequences if they do them and negative consequences if they don’t do them. These examples communicate positive consequences: If I receive your input by tomorrow, I will be able to include your team’s activities in my report to the board. If I receive your approval by Friday, I will be able to meet the registration deadline. These sentences communicate negative consequences: If I do not receive your input by tomorrow, I will not be able to include your team’s activities in my report to the board. Unless I receive your approval by Friday, I will not meet the registration deadline. Although I prefer communicating positive consequences, both positive and negative consequences can move the other person to action. If negative consequences are stated with a matter-of-fact tone rather than a threatening one, they can be effective without threatening relationships. Describe the next step you will take. This description may be similar to the statements of consequences. Its purpose is to show the other person tactfully that you intend to take action or stop action. Consider these next steps, which are all I statements: I will phone your assistant to request an appointment with you. I will stop by your office on Thursday to pick up the work you have completed. I will suspend work on the survey until I hear from you. Include your original request, invoice, or excerpt from a statement of work, if 191
appropriate, rather than restating it. Including the original communication frees you from having to describe what you need and reduces the odds of using any blaming language. You may say something like this: I have not yet received the [whatever it is you are waiting for], which was due by [date]. I have attached the original [invoice, request for approval, etc.] as a reminder. I look forward to hearing from you by [date]. Frame your reminder as a helpful tool to encourage a positive, prompt response. For example, depending on the circumstances, you might: Include your latest contact information. Update your availability — list the dates and times you are still available for a meeting. Provide new information that makes action easy. Some businesses take this concept of helpful reminders to a high level of customer service. For example, I was taking a cross-country plane trip one night. On the morning of the upcoming trip, I woke up to reminder emails that helped me travel more easily from two companies: Alaska Airlines and National Car Rental. Both of them had sent reminder messages whose helpful details made my life easier. Alaska wrote with lots of good information: Welcome Aboard. For your convenience, here is your flight information for your upcoming trip to Orlando on Alaska Airlines or Horizon Air starting 9/25/20XX. We’ve also listed useful information and services to help make your trip easy. Along with the weather in Orlando, Florida, Alaska informed me of my checkin time, reservation number, flight number, seat number, and tips on carry-on luggage. I appreciated all of these. More than that, I appreciated the fact that I did not have to sort through my email to find information about my flight, whose reservation I had made a couple of weeks earlier. This reminder came at exactly the right time. National Car Rental provided the same good service. Their email began this way: Subject: Friendly Email Reminder from NationalCar.com. Thank you for using National to make your reservation. Below is your confirmation number. You will need it when you get to the rental facility. Along with my confirmation number, National gave me a link to my reservation. As with Alaska, I appreciated having this information available at the exact moment I wanted it. The reminders worked for me. Both companies made it easy for me to take the action they wanted. When I got to the airport for my flight and later to the car rental area, I did 192
not drive the agents crazy because of missing information. I had all the details I needed. Think of Alaska Airlines and National Car Rental when you remind a customer or colleague about an assignment they still must complete, a webinar that requires their registration, or a lunch meeting they have not yet confirmed. How can you add value in your reminder, just at the moment the person needs it? Never use accusing language such as “You are avoiding me” or “You don’t seem to care about the success of this program” — even if you feel those statements are true. They will only elicit defensiveness and escalate tension. At all times, stay professional. Here is a sample reminder emailed to a client on August 24 involving the touchy subject of a late payment: Subject: Payment of July Invoice Hi, Colin. As of today’s mail delivery, I have not received payment for my July invoice. According to our contract, it was due on August 20. If you have mailed a check, please let me know. If you have not mailed it, please send it today. I have attached the original invoice for you. If you prefer to pay by credit card, please phone with your credit-card details. You can reach me or my assistant, Lydia Smith, from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. Central Time. I look forward to hearing from you about the status of the payment. Best wishes, Darla Darla Woods [Office phone], [Cell phone] [Mailing address] Here is a second reminder emailed on September 1: Subject: Overdue Payment of July Invoice Hi, Colin. I have not received the overdue payment of $2550. If you have not mailed it, please do so today, or phone me as soon as possible with your credit-card information. If you have mailed the payment, please let me know by phone or email. I have attached the original invoice for you. If I do not receive payment by September 8, I will need to suspend work on the new video. As you can imagine, I would hate to have to take that step. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Darla Darla Woods [Office phone], [Cell phone] 193
[Mailing address] Neither of Darla’s messages criticizes Colin or makes any assumptions about his behavior. When he pays the invoice, their relationship and the project can move forward free of rancor. Tim Jones, vice president and general manager at NetSpeed Learning Solutions, read those sample emails and sent me information about his approach. He wrote: I sometimes have to reach out to delinquent customers for payment. In those situations, I may also include an either-or option to give customers a friendly choice. For example, I might write, “Mary, if you would prefer to have me talk to someone in your accounts payable department, could you let me know the appropriate person for me to talk to and their contact information? Or if you prefer, I can call you later today and take your credit-card information. What works best for you?” Tim’s suggestion of an either-or option gives his customers some control in a situation that may feel out of control for them, especially if they do not have a say about when invoices get paid in their company. He comes across as understanding and supportive. Should You Remind People Before Something Is Due? In high-stakes projects, it can be tempting to remind people of deadlines before something is actually due. But that step can backfire. It can make people feel as though you don’t trust them to complete the work on time. I raised this subject on my Business Writing blog with these questions: If something is due at 5 p.m., is it okay to email someone at 4 p.m. with a reminder? If you were working toward a 5 p.m. deadline, would you appreciate a 4 p.m. email reminder? English professor Alfredo Deambrosi shared his view of this situation: Emailing reminders to an individual can communicate a lack of trust and can seem like micromanaging. Those problems are drastically reduced, however, if the reminder is sent to a group. If I am part of a group that receives a reminder, then I do not feel singled out as someone who could not get the job done if he did not get a reminder. Freelance copywriter Neil Wheatley had a different point of view: Treat others as you would wish to be treated yourself. I know I certainly wouldn’t appreciate receiving an email like that! I agree that group emails take the sting out a little — but these are not always applicable to the situation. I find it’s better to show some trust in the people you’re working with, at least until they’ve proved themselves 194
undeserving of it! I agree with both Alfredo and Neil. Reminders can come across as micromanaging, and they can suggest a lack of trust, although a group reminder avoids pointing a finger at anyone. You are better off showing trust in people. One way to eliminate negative reactions to early reminders is to agree on them in advance. For example, when agreeing on project timelines, you can agree that you will send reminders at certain times during the schedule. Sending anticipated reminders, you will not come across as lacking trust. You will simply be doing your job. For the writing classes I teach, my clients occasionally email attendees reminding them to turn in prework to me shortly before the work is due. Here are two examples: Just a quick reminder that this is due to the instructor, Lynn GaertnerJohnston, today. Thank you. Have a great weekend! Jayne Hi team, A quick reminder to send a sample to Lynn by EOD [end of day] Monday. This will help her prepare for our workshop on Thursday. Have a good one. Donna Although the reminders are friendly and brief, they may create a kind of dependency. People can get in the habit of waiting for a reminder to take action. That is why I prefer to wait until the deadline passes before sending a quick reminder like this one: Subject: Quick Prework for Better Business Writing — Please Send It Today According to my records, I have not received your prework. Can you please respond to the request below today? Thank you! In a business communications class I taught in an MBA program, one student blamed the lateness of his final assignment (and his corresponding lower grade) on a fellow student. His rationale was that the other student had always reminded him of the assignments that were due — until the final assignment. Although this was somewhat lighthearted blaming, the same situation can occur with serious consequences if people learn to rely on reminders and then do not receive one. A writing class participant proposed the ideal solution to avoid irritating coworkers or creating dependency with premature reminders: “If you need something by 5 p.m., give a 4 p.m. deadline. That way, if you have not received it by 4, you can comfortably nudge the other person.” 195
I like the approach of creating a deadline that is earlier than your true deadline, especially for important projects. If you need information by, let’s say, Monday at noon, why not set a deadline of Friday at noon for getting the work to you? That way, if you do not receive work by the early deadline, you have “wiggle room,” and you can send out a reminder like this one: Subject: Test Results for Project No. 202031 Omar, I have not yet gotten the test results from your team. I promised a report to the client by Monday, and they are already asking me when it will be ready. Can you please see that I get the results by the end of the day today so that I have time to incorporate them into the report? We originally agreed on a deadline of noon today, but I can make anytime today work if I know the information is coming. Can you reply to this email and let me know the status? Thanks! Phuong It is wise not to advertise wiggle room too openly. If people realize you always allow extra time before a true deadline, they may not take your deadline seriously. When They Don’t Tell You They Have Done It! At times you may be waiting for acknowledgment that a task has been completed, but it does not come. Once again you have to send out something that feels like a reminder. And once again you don’t want to nag or whine. Tim Jones has dealt with such situations and has devised a solution. He shared his approach: I have two coworkers who, when they finish a project or task I have asked them to do for me, just move on — without telling me they have completed it. I have a high need for closure and like to know when a project I have requested has been completed (when it’s not obvious without my asking). I am left in the awkward situation of not knowing whether they finished the project and not wanting to nag them about it. So I sometimes will email them something like this: “Dee, thanks very much for being willing to help me with the XYZ project. Hey, if you have not yet finished it, can you give me a rough ETA [estimated time of arrival or accomplishment], given the other items on your plate? And if you have already completed it, could you let me know? Thanks a lot.” I find that by acknowledging the very real possibility that they may have already completed the project, my checkin comes across a bit less like nagging.
After sharing his ideas above, Tim followed up with me. He let me know that he had successfully persuaded one of the coworkers to send him a simple email reply with the message “DONE” when he has finished an important task. Now Tim is in the happy situation of not having to send irksome reminder/checkins to that individual. How to Follow Up in Email Without Feeling Pushy or Pathetic In the online class How to Write Email That Gets Results, a participant asked this question: “When I’m following up on an email that I have not received a reply to, what do I start with? I don’t like ‘Just following up on my last email’ type intros.” Such follow-up messages are a kind of reminder. They can be awkward because you don’t know why someone has not responded, and you don’t want to weaken your relationship by coming across as pushy at one extreme or pitiable at the other. Try any of these approaches, which I have used successfully when I have not received a reply: Share something new to get the other person’s attention. For example, I might write an opening like this: “Hi, Manu. As you consider ways to improve the executive team’s writing, you may find this survey data instructive.” I present the data and then ask for an update on the prospective client’s process. Your “something new” might be a report you have written, an article you found in the news, a product review, a speech you heard on YouTube, a case study, or a checklist. The idea is to share something new to make the reader think of you and respond. You might begin with “Since I wrote to you last month,” followed by your new helpful information. Let the person know that a window of opportunity is closing. In my business, I let a client or prospective client know that my schedule is filling up or that seats in a webinar are going fast. For example, I might write, “I know you want to offer the program in July. I have only three days available that month: July 11, 12, and 13. Please let me know if you would like me to hold a day for you.” I only use this approach truthfully; that is, I say I have only three days available if it is true. Clients respond well to this approach, either by scheduling or responding that they cannot schedule yet. Your closing window of opportunity might be a deadline for a pre-season discount, for input into a preliminary design, for a grant application, or for meeting with you before your vacation. Whenever you can show a benefit to replying to you promptly, show it. “I will call you” often gets people moving too, like this: “Hi, Rahel. I would love to get your reaction to the proposal I sent last week. Have you had a chance to review it? I will call you on Friday unless we have communicated before then.” Try this simple approach: “Hello, John. I am forwarding the message I sent last week to be sure you received it. I look forward to hearing from you.” When I use this opening, people frequently respond positively and include a brief apology for not responding earlier. People are busy. They often cannot respond as quickly as you may hope. Remember that 197
what feels like a long delay to you may be standard turnaround time for them. To preserve the relationship, think creatively and kindly about their schedule and situation. Below is another example from Deb Arnold, which she uses when she has not yet received client approval for a section of an award submission. Notice that her reminder feels like a good customer-service gesture. Subject: Gentle Reminder FW: For your review – draft report Dear [Name], I wanted to circle back with you about your feedback on the draft report I sent. Your deadline to submit it is fast approaching, and I want to be sure that we have plenty of time to incorporate your comments. Might you be able to send your feedback tomorrow? If not, what is your sense about the timing? Thanks so much. Please let me know if there’s anything I can do to make it easier for you to provide your thoughts on the draft. I’d be happy to set up a phone call. Best, Deb Remember as you compose a first, a second, or even a third reminder: You cannot control the other person’s behavior. You can only control your own. You cannot make the other person pay, respond to your email, send information, agree to a meeting, sign a contract, or anything else. You can only determine what you will do. One thing you can always do is communicate professionally and respectfully to maintain great work relationships.
Personal Reflection When you need to remind someone in writing to do something, do you successfully use I statements rather than you statements? How do you make your reminders seem helpful rather than hounding? Next Step Before you write your next request, review the steps under the heading “How to Eliminate the Need for a Reminder.” Then try to write the request so that a reminder will not be necessary.
Deal With Anger (Yours and Theirs) to Preserve Relationships — or End Them Well True
story, details changed: Jude is a contractor who lost an assignment as an instructional designer for a small, successful training company. He lost not only the challenging assignment he was working on, but also any future assignments with the company. Yet the company loved Jude’s work. The owner described Jude as the best instructional designer they had ever hired. Why was Jude fired? Because he put his anger and insults in writing. Jude had become frustrated with a stressful training design schedule and unrealistic demands that the training company had agreed to with a client. He felt he was not being adequately paid for revisions the client had requested. He felt mistreated and stretched too far. So Jude wrote to virtually everyone at the training company, either directly or through a cc’d email, accusing them of stupid project management. He harangued them about their decisions. He called them names. He wrote several of them more than once. Darlene, the owner of the training company, had no choice but to fire Jude. She had been one of his strongest fans, but he had alienated himself from everyone he needed to work with. She could not support or defend his tirades. Even though Jude was the best instructional designer around, he had handled the stress of the assignment by exploding, hitting everyone around him with a barrage of email shrapnel. Jude’s story is about destroying relationships. It is an example of what not to do in response to anger and stress. This chapter gives you language, examples, and tips to help you maintain your relationships even in charged situations — or to end a relationship professionally. How to Protect Business Relationships When You Are Angry and Under Stress If you, like Jude, feel pushed to the limit, you can maintain your cool and your relationships by applying these tips unfailingly: Do not commit your anger to writing. It will live on, long after your feelings of anger have passed. If you are well known, an embarrassing transcript of your angry messages could end up on the evening news. Talk with the appropriate person, typically the person who can help you change the situation or see it differently. That individual may be a peer, the project coordinator, your supervisor, a mentor, a trusted coworker, or a human resources representative. If you communicate by email, write only to the person who can make a difference 199
— not to a group. Do not copy others on the message, either by cc or bcc (blind copy). Copying others can make your anger the topic of everyone’s online and offline conversations. It can also publicly embarrass the individual or individuals who aroused your negative feelings. If you communicate in writing or talk with the person with whom you are angry, avoid using you statements, in which you is the subject. Instead, use I statements, in which I is the subject and focus. For example, instead of writing, “You are keeping me out of the communication loop,” write, “I don’t feel that I have all the information I need to do the job.” Instead of saying, “You are constantly second-guessing my decisions,” say, “I feel I am qualified to make certain decisions, and I would like to be able to make them without your review.” Avoid combining the pronoun you with any negative word. These statements only make your audience defensive:
Even though you may think those remarks are true (“He does expect the impossible!”), they come from your point of view, with your understanding of the situation, with the information you have. The other person probably has a different point of view, a different understanding of the situation, and different information. Making such statements almost never builds understanding and better relationships. If the behavior that upsets you is abusive, get help from your manager, another trusted manager or friend, or someone in human resources. Harassment and other forms of abuse should not be tolerated in your company or agency. An ally may be able to help you deal effectively with the situation. Do not keep anger and frustration inside until you explode, as Jude did. Do not wait until you feel powerless and out of control. Communicate as soon as you know or sense that things are going wrong. How to Request a Meeting When You Are Upset 200
It is often better to talk things out than to conduct a sensitive exchange entirely through email, especially when you are angry. But how do you compose the email requesting an in-person or phone meeting without letting your raging emotions hijack it? The question makes me think of an email I received from my longtime colleague Cynthia Clay. I used to do a lot of writing for Cynthia. In one situation, I wrote a book review for inclusion in her newsletter. She did not like the review. She felt that my huge praise for the author, a competitor of hers, detracted from Cynthia’s own work. (She was right; I had not realized my review was insensitive in that respect.) Rather than write to tell me angrily what was wrong with the review and my approach to the book, she wrote, “I really have my knickers in a knot over this review, and I’d like to talk with you about it. Please call me when you get a chance.” It was the perfect opening for communication. Instead of telling me what was wrong with my approach to the book, she told me that she had a problem we needed to discuss. When I phoned her, I was not the least defensive. She had set me up for a reasonable discussion, and I was able to revise the writing easily. When something or someone upsets you, do not write a scathing composition and click Send. Just send a short, simple message about your knotted knickers. Own the problem and open the door for a productive conversation. Follow Cynthia’s lead when you request a meeting by applying these tips: Keep the request short. Don’t get bogged down in details that are difficult to communicate tactfully. You have to give enough information so the other person understands the purpose of the meeting, but save details for the conversation. Avoid you statements. Use I statements to accept responsibility for your needs. Think of Cynthia’s “I really have my knickers in a knot.” Keep the tone light by using neutral rather than negative language. For example, say, “I’d like to talk with you tomorrow about the plans for the retail space.” Do not say, “I saw the plans and I am very upset about the square footage for my department.” That second comment might put the receiver on the defensive. Before he reached his breaking point, Jude, whose story opened this chapter, might have requested a meeting with Darlene to discuss what was bothering him. He might have written this message: Subject: Concerns About XYZ Project Hi, Darlene. I need to talk with you about resolving two important issues in the XYZ project: the schedule and the number of revisions. Briefly, I have been working 10 hours a day to meet the original deadlines. The new deadlines are going to be very difficult to meet without threatening the quality of the work. I know how important it is to you to deliver an excellent product, and I feel the same way.
Also, my contract stipulates that two revisions of the training design are included in my fee. The client’s daily requests for revisions are adding to my time and frustration, yet I don’t have a clear way of managing or being compensated for them. Can we meet by phone today or tomorrow? Please let me know and suggest a time. Jude Notice that the message does not attack or blame Darlene or question her judgment for agreeing to a new deadline. It states the facts as Jude sees them and tactfully communicates his frustration. It uses the I statements “I need to talk with you about resolving two issues” and “I don’t have a clear way of managing or being compensated” rather than you statements like “You need to explain to me how these issues are going to be resolved” and “You haven’t made it clear how I can manage these or be compensated.” It also includes two expressions with a positive tone: “resolving two important issues” and “deliver an excellent product.” In my reimagining of Jude’s situation, I saw him requesting a meeting with Darlene to discuss his concerns. But there are times when the last thing you want to do is to talk to the other person — on the phone or in person. That may be because he or she is domineering or manipulative. Or it may be that you feel you cannot win: Perhaps you are reflective and cautious when speaking, and the other person is quick, glib, and persuasive. Or perhaps the situation is simply too filled with emotion to discuss. At other times, real-time communication may be difficult because the other person is too busy or refuses to engage by phone or in person. Or the individual may work on a different schedule, in a different time zone, or on a faraway continent. Let’s imagine that Jude could not meet by phone or in person with Darlene because she did not make time to discuss his issues. Let’s say she responded to his request for a meeting this way: Subject: Re: Concerns About XYZ Project Hey Jude. Sorry I don’t have time to meet in the next few days. Keep on keeping on, and we will resolve the issues as soon as we can. Thanks. D. Rather than exploding in anger and frustration, Jude might have written a message like the one below. Subject: Re: Concerns About XYZ Project Darlene, since we cannot meet about the XYZ project soon, I need to be sure you are aware of several important items. 1. I will do my best to meet the new deadline; however, it will be very difficult. I urge you to hire a second designer to work on 202
the sixth and seventh modules because of the real possibility that I will not be able to start and complete them on time. I will be glad to orient a new designer to the project. 2. I talked with Kerry, who agreed to communicate directly with the client so I will not be interrupted continually with requests for revisions. She and I will communicate once a day about any needed changes. 3. My contract stipulates that two revisions of the training design are included in my fee. However, the design requirements have morphed into something neither of us had planned for or included in the contract. My plan is to track the time it takes to handle additional requests for revisions, and I will present an invoice for the additional changes at the end of the project. Please let me know if you want to discuss any of the items above. Jude Jude cannot control Darlene, the client, or anyone else involved in the project — only himself. So the email does not attempt to control them. Neither does the message attack or blame Darlene or anyone else or make negative assumptions about Darlene’s reasons for not agreeing to meet. Instead, it urges Darlene to hire a second designer, presents Jude’s plan to have Kerry communicate with the client, and describes how Jude intends to handle payment for additional design changes. It presents Jude’s views professionally. Let’s assume that the situation has not improved. Rather than blast Darlene and others, Jude can write this message: Subject: Urgent Action Needed: XYZ Project Issues Darlene, the situation with the XYZ project design has worsened, and I strongly request that changes be made now so I can continue to work on the design. The newest deadline is impossible to meet given the increasing complexity of the design and the ongoing changes the client has requested. Although Kerry has tried to work as an intermediary between us, the client has continued to phone and email me, literally from dawn until late evening. I urge you to step in to work with Kerry, the client, and me, so a solution can be reached. Please call or email me about next steps as soon as you can. Jude Now let’s assume the worst: With no meaningful intervention from Darlene, the stress has increased exponentially and irrevocably. Jude cannot continue to work on the project without jeopardizing his well-being. Rather than send attack-and-blame emails throughout the company, as he did in the true story, he can exit the project this way: 203
Subject: Resignation from XYZ Project Dear Darlene, I am sorry to have to inform you that I am ending my involvement in the XYZ project. Friday will be my last day of work. I will schedule a meeting with Kerry before Friday to familiarize her with the work I have completed and to pass the project on to her. If you would like to be included in that meeting, please let Kerry know. I will submit a final invoice based on the portion of the work I have completed. Best regards, Jude Just as in the true story, Jude is now out of a job — this time by his own choice. But in this message, Jude has not burned his bridges; that is, he has not severed his relationship with the training company. Of course, Darlene will not be pleased about his leaving the project, and she may not rehire him. But because Jude is an excellent instructional designer, she may hire him for a less stressful project, and she will not have to defend that decision to her staff. Beyond the idea of rehiring Jude, Darlene can give Jude a positive reference regarding his excellent work, although she may indicate that he “deserted” an important project at crunch time. Then it will be Jude’s challenge to explain the situation briefly to a future employer. Having to explain his leaving will be much easier than having to explain his attacking everyone with explosive emails. Why Not Express Anger? You may be wondering why I did not communicate Jude’s understandable anger and frustration in the emails I created from him to Darlene. After all, Jude might have included an I statement like this one: “I am very angry and frustrated with the new design schedule and the client’s constant phone calls.” Such a statement communicating anger and frustration is not wrong, but it puts the focus in the wrong place — on Jude’s feelings. What needs to change is the situation. Focusing on the situation is more likely to inspire a positive response. An admission of anger and frustration might have moved Darlene to respond this way: “We are all angry and frustrated! Cope!” Still, Jude’s frustration and anger were real, and in the real story, Jude flung his negative emotions at everyone involved in the project. If he had instead found a sounding board for his feelings, such as a friend, therapist, or trusted peer, he could have salvaged his work relationships. When a Written Message Upsets You It would be lovely if every email, memo, and letter you received were positive and friendly. But some of them that cross your desk or come up on your screen will be angry, mean-spirited, or hurtful. A supervisor shouts at you in an email — and copies others on 204
the message. A client makes an absurd accusation in email. A colleague sends you a memo filled with preachy, condescending advice. In my survey on business writing and relationships: 64 percent of respondents indicated that they occasionally receive written messages that are angry or insulting; 6 percent receive them frequently. 33 percent of respondents indicated that they have been hurt to the point of crying by a written message they have received at work, with huge gender differences: 39 percent of women and 16 percent of men. One respondent gave details about the hurtful message: It was the content AND delivery, not just the content. And I would say more lump in my throat/need to take a walk/head feeling like it’s going to explode from instant pressure than crying. I have thick skin, but wow! How should you respond to such messages? Should you respond at all? In these situations, the usual wisdom is to avoid a written response. The advice is to pick up the telephone to talk with the other person or to schedule an in-person meeting. That is excellent advice. But sometimes a phone conversation or a face-to-face meeting is not workable for the reasons mentioned earlier in this chapter. Tips for Responding to Upsetting Written Messages At first, do nothing. Although reacting quickly may relieve some tension, acting without adequate thought and preparation may create more problems and embarrassment. People often regret it later. If the situation allows you to let 24 hours pass, let it. If you can let several days pass, that is even better. As time passes, you are likely to see the situation from a better perspective and feel calmer about it. Control the damage. If others received copies of the message and you are concerned about controlling the damage, write a brief response in which you reply to all. It will signal that you are handling the situation. Try something like this: “Renaldo, I received your message. I will send you an individual, private response and then follow up with others as needed.” After sending a brief message, take time to consider your next response. Get support from a trusted colleague. It is smart to get support and another person’s perspective. Be sure that individual will not share your heated comments with others. Allegiances at work change, so use caution about sharing negative feelings. Do not broadcast your anger or upset feelings. If you do, it may become impossible to control the spread of private information. Also, you may be perceived as indiscreet or unprofessional because you have publicly disparaged the person with whom you are upset.
Decide whether you need to respond. When you can think of nothing to write in response, it may be because there is simply nothing you can say to make the situation better. You may have heard the expression “I will not dignify that comment with a response.” Sometimes the mature response is not to respond. Consider the possibility that you are overreacting or misinterpreting the message and the intent. Tell yourself, “I am overreacting, and here’s how.” Then review the possibilities. Is it possible that the message contains unintentional errors? People have been known to send messages addressing the reader as “Stud” rather than the name Stu and to type incompetent when they meant incomplete. A human resources manager I know wrote “Hell to all!” when she intended “Hello to all!” Giving the writer the benefit of the doubt may lead you to a more positive interpretation. Try to find any truth in the message. Yes, the message is hurtful. Beyond that, does it communicate any truth? For example, is it possible that you did embarrass the other person at this morning’s meeting? Is it true that your incorrect information caused the individual to stay at the wrong hotel in the wrong city? If you can find a bit of truth in the message, you may find ways to forgive the hurtful language and deal constructively with the information. Write a long, therapeutic message to yourself. In it, say everything you would like to say to the other person. The purpose of the message is to get your own angry feelings out so that you can deal constructively with the other person. Be sure to avoid composing this message in email or in any other format that might be sent by mistake or read by others. If you refer to any people or companies in this message to yourself, give them fictitious names. Do not accept the other person’s statements as facts. Be especially cautious if he or she accuses other people or cites the remarks of others. Discreetly investigate what happened and who said what. Keep value judgments, emotional language, and unsupported remarks out of any response. State only the facts. Avoid “Everyone agrees” or “It’s obvious that …” Avoid writing, “Your attack on me is unjustified.” Instead state, “I am not sure what prompted some of your statements.” Rather than “What the heck are you talking about?” state, “I need more information about what went wrong.” If you can avoid putting down the other person, you can avoid becoming embroiled in a conflict. Although making a cutting remark might make you feel momentarily pleased, it will not lead to a resolution. Keep your response short. Some details may be necessary, but in general, the less you write, the less the other person will be able to misinterpret or try to refute. The more you write, the more time and emotional energy you are likely to expend on the ordeal. Before you send it, have one or two trusted friends or coworkers review your me ssage . These people should help you edit your reply for emotional language, 206
unsubstantiated remarks, and sarcasm. Instead of saying, “Right on! You told her!” your reviewers should help ensure that your message is professional and mature. Remind them that you are not responsible for the other person’s bad behavior, but you are responsible for the professionalism of your reply. The following offensive email to an administrative assistant came from her manager, who was out of town at a meeting: Subject: TYPO Jane, you missed an obvious typo in the brochure. OUR PHONE NUMBER IS WRONG, for God’s sake! Every damn one will need to be reprinted. Don’t you dare come to me about an end-of-year bonus! This mistake makes me sick. What the hell were you doing when you were supposed to be proofreading? When Jane read the message for the first time, she focused on the attacking language. She wanted to fire back an email, informing her manager that she would not put up with such treatment. She wanted to take up the issue of the annual bonus and the unfairness of denying her a bonus when she had done excellent work all year. But Jane let 20 minutes pass during which she acknowledged that it was her job to proofread the brochure. She found a copy of the brochure and saw that the phone number was indeed wrong — on a print run of 5000. After thinking through what she wanted to say, Jane composed this fitting email reply: Subject: Re: TYPO — I Am Very Sorry I am very sorry about the mistake. It makes me sick as well. I have no explanation except that I proofread it the day I left early with the flu. I have left a message for the printer to find out what our options are, and I will let you know as soon as I hear from him. Jane In Jane’s brief reply, she apologized for her mistake and empathized with the manager’s “feeling sick” over the costly error. She responded to the factual part of the message and showed that she was taking action to correct the mistake. Nothing else needed to be done immediately. How Not to Handle a Situation When You Are Angry In this next scenario, Martin let his frustration overcome his professionalism in an email to Henry, a peer in another department: Subject: THANKS FOR HELPING ME OUT HENRY: I EMAILED YOU THREE TIMES ASKING YOU TO GIVE ME LAST MONTH’S FIGURES SO I COULD INCLUDE THEM IN MY 207
PRESENTATION TO THE EXEC. MGMT. GROUP THIS MORNING. WELL, SUFFICE IT TO SAY, I GAVE THE PRESENTATION WITHOUT THE FIGURES. OF COURSE, I WAS ASKED ABOUT THEM AND HAD TO SAY I COULD NOT GET THEM IN TIME. THANKS FOR MAKING ME LOOK LIKE A FOOL. I LOOK FORWARD TO RETURNING THE FAVOR. MARTIN Martin’s frustration took over, from his sarcastic “THANKS FOR HELPING ME OUT” to his closing “I LOOK FORWARD TO RETURNING THE FAVOR,” all in blaring capital letters. In his reply, Henry took the high road rather than responding in kind. He took the emotion out of the message: Subject: Re: THANKS FOR HELPING ME OUT Hi, Martin. I am very sorry you didn’t have the figures you needed this morning. Unfortunately, I was sent to China on short notice to meet with a manufacturer, and everything was rush-rush until I left. Then I didn’t check email on the plane. When I checked it today, I saw your second and third requests. I wish I had activated my out-of-office message. I plan to be back in the office on Friday. If there is any information I can get for you after my return, just let me know. Again, sorry for missing your deadline. Henry Henry chose not to focus on or match Martin’s anger and inappropriate message. Instead, he apologized, explained, and offered to provide information when he returned. Then he apologized again. When Martin received Henry’s reply, his own blaming email embarrassed him. Although he was still annoyed that he had not had the data when he needed it, he understood why Henry had not responded, and he was irritated with himself for not tracking down the data another way. Martin composed this reply to undo the damage of his first insulting email to Henry: Subject: Have a good trip! Hi Henry, Thanks for letting me know why you didn’t get back to me. I apologize for my earlier email. I should have followed up when I didn’t hear from you with the data. At this point there is nothing I need from you. I will talk with you when you are back in town. Enjoy the flight home. Martin 208
Martin’s second message was simple and sincere. He thanked Henry, apologized, and let Henry know that he did not need any information. Martin’s “Have a good trip” opening and close will begin to heal any rift in his relationship with Henry. Both Jane and Henry took the emotion out of the situation by responding calmly and considerately. They turned a potentially ugly, drawn-out battle into a small skirmish that avoided long-term wounds. Their messages can mend the potential damage to their relationships. When Effective Writing Doesn’t Work One of the hard facts of life is that some people can make our jobs miserable. Sometimes no amount of effective writing can salvage the situation. If you repeatedly receive hostile, angry, or critical messages from someone whose influence matters — and you cannot change the situation — you may need to find a new job. Certainly, you will not want to maintain a relationship with the offensive individual. Or like Jude, the training designer whose true story opened this chapter, you may find that the demands of a job are unworkable. Unlike Jude, you can leave on your terms, having maintained a professional, positive demeanor and salvaged your business relationships. Remember: There are professional ways to deal with other people’s anger and your own to preserve relationships or end them well.
Personal Reflection In my survey on writing and relationships, 30 percent of people admitted having told off someone at work in writing and regretting it. How do you handle your feelings of anger on the job? Do you avoid putting them in writing? Do you have any messages you regret sending? Next Step Reread this chapter whenever you find yourself in a heated situation.
Share Constructive Feedback to Improve Performance — and Relationships It was my second day on the job at the bookstore warehouse on New York City’s Union Square, where I was a part-time biller-typist in the days before desktop computers. My first day had been a long, ultimately satisfying one. I had learned how to type invoices to college bookstores that had ordered foreign language books, the bookstore’s specialty. My desk was prominent in a huge open space that all employees walked through to get to their work areas. As I approached my desk that second morning, I saw, propped up tall on a typing stand, a note from my supervisor. The note went something like this: Lynn, attached are all the invoices you made mistakes on yesterday. Please be more careful today! Patty Why do I remember this short note from my second day in a part-time job a long time ago? Is anything memorable about it to you? I remember the note because I felt demoralized and publicly embarrassed. The note announced my incompetence to all who walked past my desk before I arrived at 9:30. I felt foolish because I thought I had had a good first day, taking in endless details about foreign language books and publishers and carefully trying to avoid errors. This note showed clearly that my first-day efforts were in vain. This chapter will help you give constructive feedback the right way — not the way Patty did — to improve performance while building relationships. What Patty Did Wrong Here is what my supervisor did wrong: She wrote the message at the end of a long day, when she had no energy for thinking about how I, a new employee, might feel. She gave me feedback by placing a note on my desk for me to find and read in a vacuum. She displayed the note prominently so I would not miss it — but neither would anyone who walked past my desk. She provided no information about how I might avoid errors. She did not point out anything I had done well on my first day. She did not acknowledge that errors might be expected since I was just learning my job. 210
An Opportunity Missed Effective constructive feedback is an indispensable part of everyone’s professional development, especially for people who are new on the job. Good constructive feedback helps individuals and groups improve, adapt, and achieve their goals. Giving me feedback on my first day on the job could have been an excellent opportunity for Patty to help me succeed and to develop a supportive relationship with me. She might have written a note like this one and placed it in a sealed envelope on my desk: Good morning, Lynn! You did a great job yesterday. You completed 60 invoices, which is a terrific achievement for your first day, especially since most of our titles and publishers are in foreign languages. Some of your invoices had errors. I have kept copies of them so we can go over them. I will show you where the errors occurred, and we can talk about how to catch errors in the future. I will be in late today because of a midtown meeting. When I get in, we can talk about the invoices and about how it’s going. Until then, be sure to check each invoice before going on to the next one. Thanks for your hard work yesterday! Patty The second version has a completely different tone: appreciative, supportive, nonjudgmental, and forward looking. Yet it addresses my errors. But what if I had done an awful job on my first day? The feedback would still need to be constructive. In the following message, you will notice changes from the previous one, which make it appropriate for someone whose performance needs significant improvement: Good morning, Lynn! Congratulations on surviving your first day. The biller-typist’s job can be very challenging, especially since most of our titles and publishers are in foreign languages. Some of your invoices had errors. I have kept copies of them so we can go over them. I will show you where the errors occurred, and we can talk about how to catch errors in the future. Also, I will sit with you as you work on some new invoices, so you can ask questions and I can guide you. I will be in late today because of a midtown meeting. When I get in, we can spend time together. Until then, take your time with each invoice and be sure to check it before going on to the next one. Thanks for your hard work yesterday! Patty
The Secret to Giving Constructive Feedback In my survey on writing and relationships, 77 percent of respondents said they have felt extremely hurt when receiving written negative feedback on a job. That hurt should not be happening. The secret to giving constructive feedback is to recognize that it must be constructive — not destructive. It must build up the other person. Its tone should be positive, helpful, and focused on future success. Otherwise, what is its point? Imagine a situation in which Karla, a new junior executive, sent an email to her peers. In response, she received the following two emails. Although both messages shared the same information, one message built her up; the other tore her down. Message 1: To: Karla From: Maria Re: Marketing Tips Hi, Karla. Thanks for the excellent marketing tips. I recognized several that I can apply to our new insurance product. I noticed that your email included the greeting “Ladies.” We have had many conversations about that greeting in the past. The consensus is that “Team” or “Greetings, everyone,” or even using no greeting is preferable. When I am back in town, we can have a conversation about this, and I will give you the background (dirt). For now, I just wanted to let you know that “Ladies” does not work well as a greeting for our group. By the way, Lee Ralston is a man, which you would not have known. Again, thank you for the tips. I look forward to seeing you next week. Maria Message 2: To: Karla From: Priscilla Subject: We Aren’t “Ladies” Regarding your message with the greeting “Ladies” — besides the fact that some of us have worked too hard to be given that dainty label, Lee Ralston is a heterosexual man — definitely NOT a lady. “Ladies” may have been the right greeting where you came from, but it is dead wrong here. I suggest you lose it. In Message 1, Maria communicates appreciation, shares helpful feedback, and begins to build a relationship with Karla. In contrast, Priscilla’s destructive, biting feedback in Message 2 has the power to wound, embarrass, and discourage Karla, destroying any relationship with her before it can even begin. In some cases, negative feedback like Priscilla’s shuts down and silences people, who then no longer contribute their ideas and 212
energy. Yet if Priscilla had made her goal “Be constructive, not destructive,” she would never have written such a message. Tips on Giving Constructive (Negative) Feedback At one time or another, you will be required to give constructive written feedback. If you supervise people, you will provide feedback on your employees’ work in performance evaluations and other documents, and sometimes you will have more negative than positive comments to share. When your coworkers or peers ask for your comments, you will need to point out things that are not working or not effective, along with the commendable parts of their performance. The following tips will help you meet the challenges of giving constructive feedback. Use them to write messages that help to enhance performance while building and maintaining solid work relationships. Establish a positive climate by making at least one sincere, positive comment before constructive comments. Here’s a simple example from a message I received from John Cline, a training manager in Vancouver, British Columbia. John was responding to a description of a new seminar I was creating for him. His email began like this: Hi, Lynn, Thanks for your creativity. I like what you have created so far. May I suggest the following modification? When John started with a compliment, I became open to his suggestion. If he had started like this, I might have resisted his idea: Lynn, I got your email. The title doesn’t work. Can we change it to this? [followed by a new title] This opening would have disappointed me because it doesn’t acknowledge anything good: Lynn, thanks for your work. Don’t you think the title is a little too broad? Please come up with something different. Sometimes opening positively requires just one word. Can you recognize the word in this emailed comment from a reader of my blog? Hi Lynn, I just visited your fabulous business writing blog and noticed a minor typo. Because you are a professional writer, I thought you might like to know. Here it is: The word fabulous set the tone of the message. How could I reject a comment when my work was being called fabulous? 213
Notice how the tone changes when that one word is missing: Hi Lynn, I just visited your business writing blog and noticed a minor typo. Because you are a professional writer, I thought you might like to know. Here it is: Remember: It may take only one word to make constructive feedback palatable. Share positive feedback too. Try to balance the positives and negatives so your reader will be able to accept the constructive feedback. Even if a project, proposal, plan, or customer interaction feels like a disaster to you, some aspects of it must be worthy of praise. Example A: In your press conference, you did a good job of handling the difficult questions about compensation. Your use of specific examples built credibility, and the story about your first job was appropriate and persuasive. One area to work on for the next press conference is keeping responses short and on topic. Detailed responses on subjects such as pension law can lose some listeners. We can work on concise responses in our next coaching session. Example B: I appreciate how quickly you got this mockup to us. You and your staff worked fast! The colors and fabric are perfect, and the design is generally correct. These three details in the mockup need to be changed: 1. The pocket on the left side should have the same placement as the pocket on the right side. In the mockup, the right pocket is correctly placed. The left pocket should be 4 cm lower. 2. The zipper should be full-length. The mockup has only a 25cm zipper. 3. The ribbing along the bottom should be 5.08 cm. The ribbing on the mockup is only 2.54 cm. Sometimes you can plan the criteria you will use for your feedback ahead of time, to ensure that some feedback items will be positive or at least acceptable. For example, I often use a 12-point checklist to give people feedback on their writing. Among the 12 areas for feedback, there are always at least 3 or 4 the writer does well. Maybe the tone is professional, the message is complete, contact information is included, and the writer avoids inappropriate passive verbs. By ensuring that every writer gets to recognize and enjoy what he or she is doing well, I can freely share what each person needs to do better. 214
Avoid the pronouns you and your in constructive comments, when possible. By avoiding the use of you with constructive feedback, you will reduce your reader’s defensiveness. Notice the absence of y o u a nd your in the constructive parts of the previous Examples A and B. Here is another example: “The test data do not seem convincing to me. That might be because I had difficulty understanding Table B.” By contrast, in positive comments, you and your are encouraging: “Your test data are very convincing, and you communicated them clearly in Table B.” Be specific, not vague. If you comment on a speech by saying, “The introduction doesn’t work,” the presenter will not know why it doesn’t work or how it might work better. Without specifics, the remark comes across as a putdown. Instead, write something like this: The introduction seems to go on too long. I understood and agreed with your approach within the first minute, but then the explanation continued. Why not explain the approach just once? If the audience wants more information, they can ask you when you invite questions. Avoid the word but after a compliment. But is guaranteed to erase any positive comment in the reader’s mind, as it would in this example: “Your ideas are excellent, but you are not communicating them clearly.” Notice how this revised example lets the compliment shine: “Your ideas are excellent — very creative and exciting. Here are some suggestions for communicating them more clearly.” Provide suggestions or offer to provide them. People often need specific suggestions to be able to improve their work. Example: Because there is a lot of text on this screen, the customer may become frustrated and abandon the shopping cart. Some content that can safely be deleted is … Be sure your correction is valid when you correct other people’s work. Don’t hold too tightly to your view. Recognize that there are many ways of doing things. You may see a graphic design as cluttered, while others see it as intricate. To you, a recommendation may be too direct, but others may find it straightforward and confident. There may be more than one way to attach a widget to a whatsit. It is even possible that your approach is inefficient, outdated, overly conventional, or risky. Ask yourself: Is his or her way wrong? Or is it just that I do things differently based on my experience? When you realize your correction is actually just another way of handling something, think twice about communicating it at all. Management guru Marshall Goldsmith, in his book What Got You Here Won’t Get You There, warns against “adding too much value,” that is, contributing your two cents to a colleague’s or employee’s idea. He based his warning on the contention that such feedback makes the project or idea partially yours rather than completely the pride and joy 215
of the other person. Goldsmith writes, “You may have improved the content of my idea by 5 percent, but you’ve reduced my commitment to executing it by 50 percent, because you’ve taken away my ownership of the idea. My idea is now your idea.” Focus on the future. The past cannot be changed. These two examples each focus on a future opportunity: The next time you talk with a patient about treatment options, you may want to refer to the printed brochure that is in the holder in each of the exam rooms. It will help you cover everything, and the patient will be able to take the brochure home with her. In the future, empathize with the customer before saying that we cannot replace the item at no charge. Empathy helps customers feel heard even when they don’t get what they want. Try a response such as … Put your feedback in context. If you are making a small point, say so, as this example does: This is a small point: If the names were alphabetized rather than listed by rank, it would take the emphasis off corporate hierarchy. This introductory statement helps the reader take in the feedback: I have one major comment and two minor ones. If you think someone’s idea is weird or stupid, ask questions instead of commenting, like this: Thanks for sending me your ideas for the new flooring. Not having seen this approach before, I have some questions: 1. How will this flooring hold up in a room that gets a lot of traffic? 2. Do you see it as a good match or a contrast to the executive suite it leads up to? 3. How does the material fit with the overall budget? Whenever you can give constructive feedback in person, choose that approach — even if you have written your comments. Your task is much easier when you can accompany your comments with smiles, nods of encouragement, and other attentive body language, and you can notice and respond to the other person’s feelings. Written feedback alone provides no opportunity for direct two-way communication. The words on the screen or the page must stand alone, communicating your support, fairness, accuracy, professionalism, and even compassion. Your comments must try to anticipate and answer 216
the reader’s questions. So whenever you can be there to support your written words, do it. Tips (Don’ts!) on How to Be Kind and Constructive When you give feedback, recognize that you are dealing with human beings. Individuals may have a demanding travel schedule, a sick child, an overdue project or credit-card bill, a sore back, or a broken heart. You can make their lives easier by providing feedback that is clear, compassionate, and easy to act on. To write meaningful comments that help rather than harm others, follow these tips. I have worded them as don’ts since they cover behaviors to avoid. Don’t exaggerate. Instead, be careful and courteous. For example, do not write, “On a 10-point scale of confusing, your budget proposal is a 12.” If a budget proposal is confusing, write, “While reviewing the budget, I got confused several times. I have noted those places below.” Don’t be cute or clever. Do not write, “Your film is the solution to my insomnia. I put it in the player and was asleep in seconds.” Do not comment, “I would rather have a root canal than try to sell your design to our client.” When giving constructive criticism, your job is not to make yourself look good. It is to make the other person feel good while absorbing the criticism. In the situation of commenting on a boring film, write something like this: “The film did not keep my attention, and I wanted it to. I was trying to be engaged, but I found my mind wandering repeatedly.” Then give examples of dull scenes (without calling them dull) and suggestions for editing or cutting them. Don’t equate rudeness with straight talk. Edit your gut reactions. Instead of writing, “I thought you would be smarter than my previous assistant,” describe specific behaviors you would like the assistant to improve. Instead of writing, “Your home page is a mess,” write, “I couldn’t find certain standard information on the home page.” Then give specific examples. Don’t act dense. For instance, do not write, “I have no idea what you mean.” Unless the person is working from a unique perspective or is communicating horribly, you must have some idea. Try to understand. If you still cannot understand despite trying, write, “I tried, but I don’t understand your point yet.” Don’t be a hit-and-run critic. Have the courage to sign your constructive comments — with your real name. On the Internet, on evaluation forms, and sometimes even in email, it is easy to slam into someone with a truckload of negativity, then sneak away anonymously. If your comments are legitimate and helpful, you deserve credit and thanks for writing them. If they are unreasonable and destructive, destroy them before they do harm. Don’t copy other people on constructive feedback. Broadcasting constructive criticism is the same as criticizing a person publicly. If a third party asks for a copy of your written feedback, encourage the individual to get it from the person to whom you 217
gave it. Don’t assume someone else has a problem you can help to fix. Recognize that some problems are yours — not the other person’s. For example, if you can’t stand to look at an associate’s long bangs (fringe) hanging into her eyes in meetings, she doesn’t have a problem — you do. No amount of “helpful” feedback will make her accept your advice. Similarly, if you cannot bear a coworker’s nasally voice or cheerful outlook, you have a problem. Neither of those features deserves constructive criticism. Don’t comment if it is not your job to do so and you have not been asked or paid for an opinion. It is no one’s responsibility to give constructive feedback to the world. Assume that if people have not asked for your comments, they do not want them. Even if you feel compelled to share your expert judgment of another’s thought process, eyeglasses, parenting skills, tattoo, attitude, accent, office décor, or hair color, don’t do it! Your treatment for someone else’s problem is likely to be a bitter pill they will not swallow no matter how expert your views are. If you are in a critical mood, focus instead on how you can improve your own skills, traits, appearance, productivity, worldview, etc. But let’s not confuse constructive criticism with helpful information. People want to know if they are walking around, smiling, with spinach between their front teeth. They want to know if they have hung a drawing upside down. Writer-editor Anne Boardman took the right step in this situation: I recently pointed out to the digital editor of my local paper that their domain name had been dropped from their RSS feeds. The consequence was that every click to an article resulted in an error message. I just added the domain name manually so I could read the articles, but it was annoying and I thought if I were in the same situation, I’d want to know about it. Most people wouldn’t go through the trouble to fix the URL and would just stop reading their feeds. … In fact, no one had pointed it out to them, which they wrote back to me with extreme gratitude. Don’t counterattack. If someone has given you harsh criticism, do not return the fire. Provide fair, courteous, specific criticism that you would give to any other person. Don’t give feedback when it is too late to incorporate. When someone has printed 500 marketing packets, it is too late to recommend a stronger slogan. If you are not sure whether your feedback might be too late, phone or email the other person to learn the status of a project before writing comments. Feedback is also too late when the other person no longer remembers or cares about the situation you are addressing in your comments. Wait for the next opportunity to give useful feedback rather than sharing stale remarks. Constructive Feedback Tips for Managers Common employee complaints about feedback are that it is always negative and often a surprise. You can eliminate such complaints by creating a work environment that is rich in 218
feedback. Here are three proven tips: Build feedback into every project. If you do, people will anticipate feedback rather than being blindsided by it. At a team meeting, for example, ask what went well on a project. Then, using a blame-free approach, ask what might be done better in the future. In written messages include the same balanced approach. Give constructive feedback privately. Feedback should never be public shaming. Even if you, as a manager, have a strong ego, assume your staff members are still developing their ability to accept constructive criticism. If appropriate, copy others on complimentary feedback. To balance constructive feedback, share positive feedback liberally. Add “Give positive feedback” to your daily calendar. Be sure your positive feedback is specific, sincere, and meaningful. To make it meaningful, mention why the behavior or performance is important to the team and the company. See examples in the chapter “Give Positive, Powerful Feedback.” Examples of Feedback That Builds Performance and Relationships Everyone deserves constructive feedback that will help them work more effectively. When it is your job to give feedback, welcome that responsibility. Use these examples to help you succeed at the task. In this first example, a maintenance and grounds manager emails feedback to someone in his department who made a serious mistake: To: Frank Harris From: Gerry Nielson Re: Safe Work Practices I heard from Hector what happened in the warehouse today. I know he talked with you about the risk of carbon monoxide poisoning, Frank, and I want to emphasize the seriousness of the situation. All of us must follow this rule: Never use gasoline-powered equipment in an unventilated area. Example: Do not use the gas-powered pressure washer in any part of the warehouse unless the windows and doors are open and a fan is on. I believe Hector told you to use an electric pressure washer in any unventilated area, and I am telling you the same thing. Now you know where the extension cords are. Whenever you have any questions, ask. Hector told me you are learning the job fast and are easy to work with. Glad to hear it! Just remember to use gas-powered equipment in ventilated areas only. We want you healthy and on the job. We don’t want you to end up in the emergency room! Gerry Gerry’s message is constructive, not destructive. It does not criticize Frank for his 219
serious mistake. Because of the seriousness of the issue, Gerry got into the subject right away, without a buffer of positive feedback. However, he included positive comments in the final paragraph. Feedback is rarely all positive or all constructive. Here is an example of peer-to-peer feedback that includes both kinds: Subject: Your Request for Feedback Candice, I’m glad to give comments on your presentation. You did an impressive job, and the clients left smiling and eager to move to the next step. Here is what I observed: • Preparation: You were very well prepared. You exhibited great insights into the client’s problems and were able to describe their pain points well. The client appeared very comfortable and impressed that you heard and understood them. • Terminology. For the most part, you used language that was clear to the client. However, several terms were our jargon. When those terms came up, you had to spend time explaining them, and that took you off message. For the next presentation, I suggest that you ask June to do a final review to catch jargon. Then you can choose to replace the jargon or be ready with a quick definition or analogy. • Q&A: The connectivity questions and answers went on a bit too long, and it was unfortunate that they came up in the middle of your presentation. If that happens in the future, I recommend that you briefly answer the initial question and explain that there will be time for more questions at the end of your presentation. You responded well to their questions about the documentation. You were clear and brief, and it was smart to defer the details to a follow-up message. • Consistency: The comments of the sales team were completely consistent with yours, so there were no cracks in your presentation. I mention the sales aspect here because I know you helped them prepare. Your work with them paid off. You were able to present the client with a coherent, realistic solution. Candice, congratulations on a fine presentation! Don In this 90-day performance evaluation, a manager includes positive and constructive feedback for a new receptionist: To: John Frost From: Doris Davis Date: December 1, 20XX Subject: 90-Day Performance Evaluation
John, your overall performance during your probationary period has been very good. I would like to give you feedback on the five areas we discussed during your first week on the job. 1. Attendance and punctuality. Your performance in this area has been outstanding. You have not missed any days of work, even though we have had bad weather. Also, you were late only one day. Regarding punctuality, I really appreciate that you are at your desk ready to work at 8 a.m., rather than getting coffee or walking around. As you know, we often have visitors as soon as the doors open. Your being at your desk working at 8 o’clock increases our efficiency and presents our unit positively. 2. Professional appearance. Both you and your work area look professional. Since receiving feedback in September, you have kept your desk and the reception area free of clutter. The area looks tidy whenever anyone visits. Also, you present yourself well, with neat, appropriate clothing. 3. Courtesy. You treat each of our visitors courteously. No one is kept waiting unnecessarily, you greet everyone by name, you request identification diplomatically, and you offer refreshments when appropriate. One change I would like to see is for you to greet visitors you do not know well, especially those who are older, by using a courtesy title or professional title and their last names. Even though the professional staff may call visitors by their first names, that familiarity often comes from long relationships. For example, when Dr. Krikorian visited the other day, it was appropriate for Joanna to address him by his first name because they have known each other for many years. Please ask me if you have any questions about how to greet specific individuals. 4. Communication. Your oral communication with staff and visitors is excellent. You speak clearly and courteously. When I call in, you are always easy to understand, and you have mastered our challenging phone system. Regarding written communication, you have been applying the feedback you received on your emails, and your messages have improved noticeably. The next step is to make your emails more concise. I would like you to find and take an email class during first quarter to help you strengthen your messages. Your IMs [instant messages] are generally clear and effective. 5. Accuracy. Not once have I found any significant errors in your work, and no one has mentioned any problems with the accuracy of your messages, scheduling, or other tasks. You manage details very well. I really appreciate the care and high standards you 221
bring to your work. Hats off to you for completing your probationary period successfully! I am delighted to have you as part of our team. Doris The two previous messages go a long way in providing helpful information, both positive and constructive. Candice and John learned what they have done well, and they can implement specific suggestions to improve their performance. Beyond that, the messages are likely to solidify the relationships between those who wrote the feedback and those who received it. The positive and constructive comments and rich details help to build trust between the people involved. You may have noticed that Doris’s feedback to John in his 90-day evaluation briefly mentions constructive feedback he received earlier, on his desk clutter and email. Doris did not save that constructive feedback until she wrote this formal evaluation. Prompt feedback helps recipients change their behavior promptly. It also minimizes any embarrassment they might feel about having performed badly over a longer period. And it averts mistrust for the people delivering the feedback. After all, they did not store it up, then dump it on the recipients. If you take just one idea away from this chapter, make it this: “Negative” feedback should not be negative, but rather constructive. It should build up the reader and help him or her correct errors or improve behavior that is less than optimal. Building up the other person in this way will help you build and sustain good work relationships.
Personal Reflection Whether you are a supervisor, an individual contributor, a teacher, or a consultant, which techniques do you use to make your feedback constructive rather than destructive? Did any ideas in the chapter surprise you? Next Step Review the list of feedback don’ts in the chapter. Make a note of any that you need to remember.
Communicate Around the Globe With Courtesy and Wisdom Exhausted from two nights and days of traveling from Kenya to Dubai to Delhi, in clothes he had not changed (his luggage was delayed), the American human resources professional arrived in Delhi to facilitate the retreat. His NGO (nongovernmental organization) had sent him to work with their local Indian leadership. The man, Richard Wilkinson, tells the story: I walk into the meeting room and, much to my surprise, it’s a converted restaurant. The staff are seated in low booths, banquettes, and small tables. There is no wall to stick stuff on — just a stage. We jerry-rig a way to record participant contributions, and off we go. The first topic of the retreat was to make plans for the coming year. First question: What would you be celebrating as a country office a year from now if you enjoyed an extraordinarily successful year? Dutifully the India staff discuss this among themselves, then write down their views on small sheets of paper, which are then posted on the jerry-rigged wall-that-is-nota-wall. I then asked what challenges may be encountered that could get in the way of realizing the great year they envisioned. This time I wrote their ideas on a scratchy old whiteboard teetering on a wonky easel. This was my first trip to India, I’m seriously tired, I’m standing in front of my colleagues in two-day old clothes with streaks of black tar across my behind [from the seat of a taxi], and I’m struggling to catch on with Indianaccented English. Finally, let’s call him Singh, pipes up from a back booth, “Starved for attention.” “Starved for attention?” I ask. “Not quite sure how that might be an obstacle, but …” I say as I write “Starved for attention” on the teetering whiteboard. The room erupts in laughter. I turn to the participants and ask, “Okay, what did Singh really say?” “Staff retention!” came the chorus of replies. Smiles or Scowls? It’s Your Choice Stories like Richard Wilkinson’s take place every workday in interactions between people of different cultures and countries. Global miscommunication happens. In my survey on writing and relationships, 43 percent of women and 64 percent of men indicated that they had had a serious miscommunication at work with someone from another culture or country. Happily, Richard’s story is not one of those statistics. It led to smiles and laughter rather than scowls and anger. The retreat succeeded, and Richard succeeded in 223
developing positive work relationships. But the situation might have been different if Richard had made different choices. He might have opted to postpone the retreat because of the delayed planes and his resulting exhaustion. He might have refused to work in a space without the equipment he needed. He might have frowned at participants when their accents challenged his understanding. Had he made those choices, he might have left India without success for himself or the Indian leaders and without any new blossoming relationships. Richard, who has been working in global health since 2001, believes that communication across cultures must be intentional. He says: I am very conscious of choices we make in the moment about how we are going to relate to one another and how those have implications for the future. I think about the question “What is it we are trying to create here?” and the choices we have in creating it. It matters a lot what we say and how we say it. That lays the foundation for expectation and trust down the road. Wanting to be successful in his first trip to Kenya in 2001, Richard asked the vice president of administration at his NGO for his advice on interacting effectively across cultures. The answer was “Have patience and smile.” But in our written messages, how do we make the right choices? How do we communicate patience and a smile? This chapter shares stories, tips, and strategies to help you build friendships across cultures and across the globe. Consider the following approaches, which are inspired by Richard and his experiences: Communicate first as a person, then as a professional. If you are from a resultsfocused culture like the United States, communicating first as a person may mean taking the opposite approach of your normal pattern in your emails. In the United States, emails frequently get down to business at the start, then end on a friendly note. But as Richard Wilkinson explains, “Getting to the point in settings where there is more sensitivity about relationships is really discourteous.” He adds, “Sometimes I express empathy or appreciation at the beginning before getting into the meat of a message.” Richard shared this example of an opening to a colleague going through a difficult time in India: “Hope you’re holding up given all that is going on!” To a colleague in Botswana, he began with “It was great catching up with you today.” You can use or adapt these openings to begin your messages with a focus on the person rather than the action: How are you? I hope you are healthy and happy. I hope you are well. We hope you are enjoying the season. I trust you and your coworkers are fine. I trust you are doing splendidly and enjoying the season. I send you and your esteemed colleagues my warm wishes. Greetings from our research team! 224
Greetings to you and your family. It is a pleasure to be in touch with you again. It was a delight to see you in São Paulo. I hope you enjoyed your trip to New York. Welcome back to work! I hope you had a wonderful holiday. Think twice about greetings that refer to time of day. When beginning an email to coworkers around the globe, remember that your “Good morning” message may instantly arrive in their late afternoon, or even at midnight. Use polite language such as please, thank you, a n d appreciate throughout your message. Close with a courteous sign-off such as: All the best With best wishes Best regards Warm regards Sincerely Respectfully With many thanks Recognize that there is more than one way to get results. If you do not insist that business be done your way, you will be able to feel more patient and therefore communicate more patiently. For example, recognize that people from other cultures may find it uncomfortable and unseemly to give feedback directly, even though you ask for candid feedback and are used to it. Your emails asking for their feedback may not lead to a reply, or not a useful one, and your expectations may put a strain on your relationship. Richard uses Survey Monkey, an online survey tool, to get input from his African colleagues in simple, short surveys. He finds the tool helpful because it forces him to be clear about what he needs, it shows his African colleagues that their opinion matters, and it makes it easy for them to provide input. Be humble. Recognize that you do not know it all. Richard was humbled by his humorous “starved for attention” misunderstanding. In that situation, clearly the mistake was his. But it makes sense to humbly assume that you may be wrong in other, subtler situations, for example, when dealing with a culture like India’s, which is thousands of years old. When dealing with less experienced colleagues in other countries, Richard says, “It would be easy to condescend or to be high-handed and directive,” adding, “but instead of being condescending, you accept a situation for what it is, then show respect by asking questions. Not pointed questions, but open ones.” For clarity across cultures, Richard asks just a few questions at a time, and he lists and numbers them rather than including them in paragraphs. Explore to Learn More Like Richard Wilkinson, Jerry Schlagenhauf has always loved international travel and 225
working with people from other cultures. He began his travels as an exchange student in Switzerland; studied anthropology in college and graduate school; lived for two years in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia; and worked for many years in human resources in Saudi Arabia. Now he works as a career consultant in the United States. In Switzerland, Jerry’s Swiss family away from home treated him very well. For instance, they spoke only standard German rather than their Swiss dialect so that he would learn a language he could use. One day Jerry was talking on and on about how special something American was, when his Swiss mother sat him down and told him in German: Jerry, I want you to know one thing. I am absolutely certain that America is a wonderful place and that you have many, many things that we probably don’t have. But do you understand that this is my home, my country? This is where I was born, and this is where I have that feeling, that connection that you are expressing to me. Jerry described his reaction and where it has taken him: I felt grateful some place deep inside me, but I was so embarrassed. I thought, oh my goodness. I really haven’t been learning and listening as much as I thought I was. One of the points I try to keep in front of me all the time regardless of who I am working with is: You don’t know it all, Jerry. There are still things to learn. There are still things I should explore, questions I should ask rather than telling so much. Jerry has developed these specific practices to help him explore and learn more, which you can apply too: Ask questions. In email across cultures, ask and acknowledge rather than make assumptions and assert your knowledge. Like Richard Wilkinson, Jerry has adopted asking questions as a primary way of learning about people and developing strong cross-cultural relationships, demonstrating a keen interest. When he begins working with a careercounseling client, especially one from another culture or country, he asks questions to discover unique interests and preferences: What brings you to me? Where do you want to be? What is most important to you? What are your obstacles? He asks such questions rather than starting with “Here’s what I am going to do for you” or “Here’s the information I have for you.” Besides expressing curiosity, Jerry shows respect for others by not assuming that he knows their situation or that he will be able to “fix them” by applying a generic solution. Do your homework. Learn general information about others before you start the 226
relationship. Before Jerry begins working with a client from another culture, he researches the country and culture on the Internet. He also gets information from former clients, colleagues, and networking connections to find out what is going on in the country now. Human information sources often provide the best guidance. “If you want to just ignore it all,” he says, “you might get along, but you won’t really have learned very much.” Jerry has found that many lasting relationships have developed because he has made a special effort to learn about people rather than focus on himself and what he has to present. Cultivate acceptance. Recognize that people from other cultures are different in many ways, but they are also the same. Over the years, Jerry has listened to people’s stories that have shaken and saddened him. But he has focused on understanding people and looking for common bonds. He explained: I may disagree with the politics and the handling of domestic affairs in a particular culture. Even though I am trained as an anthropologist, I don’t think I can be so valueless that things don’t offend me. But to understand where they are coming from means that I have to hold back that judgmental piece. We are all connected regardless of where the political boundaries have been drawn. No matter what the cultural differences are, the basic emotional needs of human beings are very, very similar. Applying Jerry’s approach, you can accept that colleagues from certain cultures will be blunt rather than diplomatic in the messages you receive from them. Viewing their candor as refreshing rather than barbaric will improve your relationship. If “no” is an intolerable answer in the culture of some of your coworkers, you can change your questions rather than force the issue. For example, rather than asking, “Can you do it?” and requiring a response, you can ask, “When can you do it?” or “How does this fit in your work schedule?” By asking questions and doing your homework, you will learn how others are the same as and different from you. By focusing on acceptance, you can build relationships rather than dissect them. Simplify for Clear, Welcoming Communication Deb Arnold is a communications expert who has a degree in international relations, an MBA, and experience working and traveling around the globe. At the time of this story, she was working in the United States at a marketing agency that had approximately 50 offices in 32 countries serving a huge multinational account. Agency staff around the world came together in quarterly online meetings, “global rallies,” to share best practices and news about the account. Communicating as a worldwide team, they used English as their language. They would sign in to the virtual meetings by office, with the cities London, Paris, Frankfurt, and so on, popping up on the screen. It was global communication at its best. At one quarterly meeting, headquarters staff decided to use online polls to illustrate how the offices might use such polls in their own online meetings. They included this poll 227
question: Which is your favorite breed of dog? a. Chihuahua b. German shepherd c. Poodle d. Dachshund Deb worked at headquarters and typically planned the quarterly meetings. But she had been out of town for this meeting. Telling me the story, she described people’s reaction to the meeting: When I came back, I looked at the meeting evaluations, and there were all these comments about dogs: “I didn’t understand about the dogs,” “It was very frustrating,” and “Why did you give us something we couldn’t understand?” At offices around the world, employees and managers alike expressed frustration and anger. Do you understand what went wrong? Take a moment to think about what caused the problem. Deb explained: I speak Hebrew fairly well. I speak Spanish fairly well. Yet I don’t know how to say the name of any breed of dog in either of those languages. We were talking to people in 32 countries, in only three of which is English their first language. The people didn’t know what the words meant! The leadership was caught off guard. The teams were turning to the leaders to ask “What does this poll question mean?” and the leaders didn’t know what it meant. So the question just made everyone feel stupid and uncomfortable. And it exacerbated all of the issues that you would imagine between headquarters and satellite offices, with satellite offices thinking, “They don’t understand our situation. They don’t understand our particular context.” Not a good way to build relationships around the globe! Deb’s “dog story” illustrates how easy it is to damage relationships, even in communication-savvy companies, when people do not simplify their writing and think clearly about their audience. To write clear, welcoming global messages that build trust rather than wariness, consider these tips: Use plain English. As the marketing agency learned in Deb’s story, it is essential to choose words that are part of your readers’ vocabulary if you want them to understand your message. Replace any word your readers are likely not to know. Consider these 228
examples: pussyfoot, upshot, intrinsic, drive-by, cascading, canny, purview, and thumbnail. If you replace such words, you will communicate more clearly with both native and nonnative English speakers. Use words and phrases that have few meanings. The word manufacture has several meanings, whereas make has dozens. If you mean “manufacture,” use that word. Likewise, the words appropriate and correct have few meanings; right has over 40. Avoid words that have opposite or very different meanings. Oversight may be a close review or a failure to review. Transparent may be plainly visible or invisible. Sanction may mean to approve or to penalize. Such is the beauty of English to confuse and alienate your readers! Use concrete language rather than figurative language or slang. As Deb Arnold says of this advice, “It tests our creativity to actually be creative within these boundaries, but it’s important to do.” From stories I have heard in classes, on my blog, and in my survey, I would say that the most frequently misunderstood slang expression is “bang for your buck.” A writing class participant told about a colleague who used the expression at a business meeting in France. When he uttered the phrase, people in the room visibly shrank from him in apparent disgust, perhaps because the word bang is vulgar slang for sexual intercourse. The audience would have understood “return on our investment,” which is what the U.S. businessman intended. Other problematic figurative language comes from sports (“This will be his third strike”) and the military (“What’s the blowback if we take this position?”). Use simple verb forms such as present, past, and future tense (write, wrote, will write). Avoid less common, more complicated verb tenses ( will have written, should have been writing) that your readers may not have mastered despite years of studying English. For example, use “Will you attend the seminar?” rather than “Will you be planning on attending the seminar?” Use “If you have questions” rather than “Should you find you have questions.” Write short, simple sentences rather than complex, convoluted ones. Long sentences are more difficult to follow for all readers. But they present special challenges for people who read English as a second, third, or fourth language. Long sentences make readers work harder to understand the relationships between the pronouns (it, they, their), conjunctions (but, yet, which), and other sentence parts. Know your audience. Deb Arnold — whose slogan is “Who do you think you’re talking to?” — recommends answering these questions about your readers: Who are they? What do they care about? What are they afraid of? 229
What are their hopes and desires? What do they know? What do they not know? If the agency meeting planners had thought about Deb’s first three questions, they might have recognized that some attendees don’t care about dogs and might even be afraid of them. In many places in the Middle East, dogs live as security guards rather than pets. In certain African countries, they are associated with apartheid. When you think about what readers know and do not know, keep these tips in mind: Consider geography. Just as poodl e a n d dachshund meant nothing to agency professionals around the world, Olympia, Calgary, and Espoo may be unknown cities to your readers. Provide necessary details about their locations. Clarify references such as the Mainland and East Texas, which may not be named that way on a map. Consider objects that have different names for various English-speaking audiences. You may call that fleshy purple fruit eggplant, when your reader knows it as an aubergine. You may recognize these punctuation marks as parentheses ( ), but your reader thinks they are brackets. (The “Recommended Resources” chapter includes an online resource on differences between British, Canadian, and U.S. English.) Avoid contractions, abbreviations, acronyms, and nicknames. Some international readers can easily recognize contractions such as that’s, it’s, and who’s. But others may confuse them with possessive forms such as Sue’s. Readers near and far may misunderstand abbreviations (Mass Ave for Massachusetts Avenue), acronyms ( IRA may be your individual retirement account but your reader’s Irish Republican Army), and nicknames (who is Ole Miss anyway?). Include both metric and U.S. standard (Imperial) measurements, when applicable, to communicate accurately for all your readers. Spell out dates. Use, for example, September 2, 2014, or 2 September 2014, rather than 9/2/14 or 2/9/14, which may confuse half your readers, depending on the style they are accustomed to. Some companies follow the ISO 8601 (International Organization for Standardization) standard format, 2014-09-02, but your readers may still be confused unless they recognize the standard. Consider using the 24-hour clock for time, and indicate time zones to reduce confusion. For example, 10 a.m. Pacific Standard Time in Los Angeles would be expressed as 10:00 PT (UTC-8). And 4:30 p.m. Daylight Saving Time in New York City would be 16:30 ET (UTC-4). UTC is a commonly used successor to GMT (Greenwich Mean Time). To convert time easily for your audience, use the website timeanddate.com. Do research. Like Jerry Schlagenhauf, Deb turns to the Internet to prepare herself for work with people from other cultures. For a brief project with someone from another 230
culture, she searches for best practices for doing business in that culture or country. Depending on the depth and length of the interaction, she recommends investing more time and effort: Let’s say your company has just merged with an overseas competitor, and you are going to be working extensively with these new colleagues. You may want to hire a consultant with expertise in doing business with that country, who can walk you through the steps and make you aware of potential pitfalls and best practices. You will save a lot of headaches and a lot of explanations and apologies if you know in advance the things you should be aware of. If you write to a group in another country, develop a relationship with a colleague there who may be willing to review your messages before you send them out broadly. That individual could advise you about any sentences or expressions that do not come across the way you intend. Think twice about your formatting. Like readers everywhere, your global readers will find it difficult to read long paragraphs. However, some international readers cringe at the heavy use of bullet points, finding them too direct and inelegant. Try using short, clear paragraphs for analysis and background, and use bullet points for lists and action items. If your readers can view attachments, use graphs and charts to present details. This sample email from Richard Wilkinson to his African colleagues in Dar es Salaam includes effective short chunks of text and short sentences (averaging 13 words each). You will notice that rather than getting to the point the way he would have with American colleagues, Richard took a more leisurely, personal approach that acknowledged his relationship and recent visit. Subject: Next Steps for Our Salary Survey Greetings from a sunny Seattle! Hope both of you are doing well. We are cherishing the sun here in these final few days of summer. I had a great time in Tanzania and Malawi, but it is great to be home, too. Now, on to business. It is time for us to work on the custom salary study we want to do. I have attached several documents for you to review. INSTRUCTIONS 1. Custom Salary Survey: Attached is the draft of the survey. It would be ideal for one of you to complete the survey to see how it works. If there are any problems, we can edit the survey before sending it to others. I will share this draft with my colleague to get her suggestions, too. 2. Positions to Survey: Please carefully review this list of the positions we will survey. Are there one or two other positions we should include? I do not think we need to survey drivers 231
because the original survey is fine for that level of position. 3. Position Descriptions: I included brief descriptions for each position from another survey. The purpose of the brief descriptions is for others to judge whether their job is a match for ours. We will probably want to edit these to be more like what our positions do, but remember that they need to be somewhat generic, too. 4. Invitations: Please contact the organizations next week to invite them to participate in our survey. Tell them we will share a summary of the results with them. TELEPHONE MEETING? To keep this project moving along, I suggest that the three of us talk soon. Any day next week is fine with me. As usual, because of our million timezone differences, it will need to be 16h00 in Dar/6h00 in Seattle. Please let me know which day or days are best for you. All the best, Richard Below is a polite request for action from a writer who does not know the reader. Notice the greeting, brief introduction, short sentences (averaging 14 words each), short paragraphs, use of a graphic illustration, and absence of acronyms and abbreviations. Subject: Cloud-Computing Webinar — Action Requested Dear Mr. Khose, Greetings from XYZ Company. As a member of the Information Technology department in our Washington office, I am organizing the December 11 webinar on cloud computing. This email is to confirm that you will be able to log on to attend the program. Action Requested: Please click this link to test your ability to log on to the online “classroom.” (The attached picture indicates how the classroom should appear on your screen.) If the link does not connect you to the classroom, please send this email to the computer software expert at your company. Your expert can find the problem, which might be a computer firewall. Please let me know that you are able to log on to the classroom. I look forward to working with you and your team. Please email or call me if you have any questions or requirements. With best regards, Reena Leonard [Job title] [Company name] [Telephone number] 232
[Website URL] More Global Communication Tips These additional tips will help you succeed with global relationships: Think of your readers as valued partners, and communicate with them that way. This approach is especially important if you work in the international headquarters and your readers are thousands of miles away. Avoid language such as “We expect your group to comply,” which emphasizes your rank rather than building a relationship. Avoid email, if possible, if you have bad news or a controversial topic to discuss. Use a teleconference or web conference in which information can be exchanged and questions can be answered. Communicate good news, thanks, and congratulations. Avoid only writing when you have bad news or a request. Sending positive messages builds rapport with people far away. Write different versions for people in different countries if the message affects people differently. For example, if you are moving a project from Indonesia to India, recognize that the people in each location will have different concerns, and write separate messages. Learn about holidays and holy days that are observed in the various homelands of your readers. Acknowledge those occasions in your messages if appropriate, and do not expect a prompt response when your readers are on holiday. Use the University of Kansas Medical Center Diversity Calendar (www3.kumc.edu/diversity/january.html), which lists ethnic and religious dates, as a helpful starting place. Recognize the World You Work In Consider this truth: Communicating around the globe goes beyond email, online postings, and virtual meetings with people who work on the other side of the globe. It also includes communication with people who work at the lab bench or in the cubicle next to yours but happen to be from other cultures or countries. Not only geographical distance, but also cultural differences and simple unfamiliarity, can get in the way of cross-cultural understanding and great work relationships. Learn from the stories and suggestions from Richard, Jerry, and Deb. Apply the tips in this chapter and throughout this book. Then enjoy your growing relationships with people around the world and right next door.
Personal Application Do the stories related by Richard, Jerry, and Deb remind you of your own 233
experiences in global communication? Do you think you might have done something differently to enhance relationships in those situations? What did you do well? Next Step Consider your relationships, no matter how developed or undeveloped they are, with people from other countries or cultures. Choose one relationship to strengthen by applying the ideas in this chapter.
Create Your Action Plan for Building Relationships One Message at a Time If you are wondering whether you can incorporate the ideas from this book into your work life, this chapter is for you. You can build better work relationships one message at a time. In fact, you can make it happen easily, just by doing what you normally do a little differently, even if your work plate overflows or you think of yourself as antisocial. There are also extra steps you can take whenever you have the time and inclination to focus on relationship building through writing. Let’s begin with a story. I was talking to a fourth-year medical student named Xavi, who was applying for residency programs. Xavi told me about the programs she was considering and said she was very impressed with Tulane, a medical center affiliated with Tulane University in New Orleans. When I asked what impressed her about Tulane, I learned that it was a personal note! Xavi said something like this: The director followed up on my interview by sending me a personal, handwritten note. Usually all the communication is by email. From his personal note, I think he must be very interested in the residents. No doubt the residency programs at Tulane have other strong points, but Xavi did not mention any of them. She mentioned receiving a personal note. When I told this story on my blog, marketing expert Marcia Yudkin chimed in with a similar experience. She wrote: When I was thinking about where to go for graduate school, I visited Cornell and was introduced to a very distinguished professor whom I was hoping to study with. Within a week, a handwritten note arrived from him saying how pleased he was to have met me and he hoped I would choose their program. I had already decided to attend Cornell, but if I hadn’t, this note would undoubtedly have swayed me to choose Cornell over two other schools that had higher reputations. Xavi’s and Marcia’s stories illustrate that building relationships one message at a time requires two things: having a positive intent and taking action. Positive Intent Since you are reading these words, you probably have already taken the most important 236
step to build relationships one message at a time. You have experienced the desire to enhance your business relationships through writing. Having that desire is a requirement of reaching the goal. Positive intent is the ticket to communicating with heart and building business relationships. It is the desire to engage with other human beings at work in supportive, mutually rewarding relationships, spreading positive energy rather than negative feelings (also known as “bad vibes”). The professors who met with Xavi and Marcia communicated their interest and positive feelings about the two student applicants through personal notes. Your positive intent is something you can bring to virtually all your business communications. Consider the following example of a brief but far-from-routine message from a service provider. My husband and I had been away from our home office all day at a conference. At that time, we were rarely both out all day, but when we were, a pet sitter named Allison would come by during the day to visit and walk our English cocker spaniel, Chica. When we returned in the evening, we found Allison’s “report” on her visit. She wrote, “Positively grand seeing Chica again. She always surprises me — remembers me immediately and doesn’t miss a beat before she rolls over for belly rubs!” The brief handwritten note from Allison came on her special form, which had as its heading “Walks & Playtime Notes.” Allison might have left just an invoice for us. She might have simply scribbled a note saying she had come by at 11:30 in the morning. She might have left nothing at all. Instead, Allison’s simple 24-word message, from “positively grand” to “belly rubs,” communicated her positive intent. She communicated to us that in our long day’s absence, our Chica was visited, cared for, and loved. Perhaps the professors’ personal notes, along with Allison’s delightful report, will move you to think of ways to communicate your positive intent and make people smile. How can you encourage, delight, please, inspire — in general, create a positive experience for another person? In this chapter and throughout this book you will find examples of ways to connect with others and communicate positively. Let’s assume you have the positive intent. Now all you need is to take action. How many ways will you communicate? Send the Handwritten Note or Card Email and other electronic communications are easy to send and nearly instantaneous. But one can still make a strong argument for the handwritten note, as demonstrated by Xavi’s and Marcia’s feelings about the messages they received. Other people commented on the Business Writing blog post about Xavi’s reaction to Tulane, nearly all of them in favor of the handwritten message. Paula Diaco, owner of the SignARama shop in South Burlington, Vermont, put it this way: When I receive business correspondence that is packaged in a lovely envelope, or clearly has a greeting card inside, I’m immediately intrigued and open it right away. I agree that a personal handwritten note rises above 237
email and standard business stationery in terms of being interesting. Freelance writer Ben Curnett left this comment on the blog: We’ve gotten calls and referrals years after sending handwritten letters to people we’ve met or done business with. Plus, I like the feeling I get when I write them. I know that the letters will get noticed. I know that I’m showing someone that I’m listening to them. To me, that’s very cool. English professor Alfredo Deambrosi expressed the sole dissenting view on personal messages, but he also acknowledged their effectiveness: Traditional mail frustrates me. It clutters my desk (maybe, that’s my fault) and takes longer to open and to trash or file. But it does get my attention. Because I carry it with me to read before meetings, I am more likely to discuss it with a colleague, if it’s appropriate for me to do so. Reflecting on her letter from the Cornell professor, Marcia Yudkin pointed out the wisdom of writing personal messages today: Any school or workplace that uses this technique has a marketplace advantage that flies under the radar. Competitors won’t normally know why they’re losing out! Such comments argue for the handwritten note as intriguing, interesting, compelling, rare, powerful, sincere, attention grabbing, memorable, satisfying, powerful, and competitively advantageous. Who can argue with those characteristics? Send Electronic Messages Email, LinkedIn, Facebook, Twitter, e-cards, and other online ways of communicating do win in some situations. For example: When your work relationship with the other person is strictly electronic. In some relationships, your only contact information is an email address, Facebook page, or LinkedIn connection. When you are communicating with someone on the other side of the world. Airmail letters across the globe can take two weeks or more to reach their recipients, and in some countries delivery is unpredictable. When your message requires near-instant delivery. When you learn that today is your client’s birthday or anniversary, only an electronic greeting is quick enough — unless you have a message or a gift hand-delivered. When your message is informal. Sometimes a quick electronic message is all you need to send to convey your good wishes and positive intent — for example, in a 238
thank-you to someone who just made your day or in “Way to go!” congratulations on one of life’s small successes. When you will not get around to putting something in regular mail. It is always better to connect virtually than not connect at all. Take Action: Gather Supplies to Make Relationship Building Easier If you intend to send handwritten notes and cards, good for you! To turn your intention into reality, have these supplies on hand: Notecards and notepaper with envelopes. Having both cards and notepaper allows you to choose what feels right for your message. Stores such as Papyrus and Hallmark sell attractive stationery sets and boxed cards in the United States and Canada, as do museum gift shops. Ordering greeting cards from museums, UNICEF, World Wildlife Fund, and other nonprofits gives you the added pleasure of supporting an organization while buying the cards you need. If you are a photographer, you can make your own cards with your photos, pre-scored card stock paper, your laser or inkjet printer, and simple instructions from manufacturers such as Avery. Postage stamps. In the United States, you can buy “forever” stamps, and in Canada, “permanent” stamps, whose value is sufficient to cover a first-class letter or card even when postal rates increase. Or choose stamps whose graphic or message you like, for example, Breast Cancer Awareness stamps in the United States. Buy at least one booklet or sheet of 20 stamps as a start. If you think you will send oversized or square cards, which may require additional postage, purchase those extra stamps in advance, so you won’t be slowed down later because of a lack of postage. Sympathy cards and get-well cards are useful because they allow you to send a thoughtful message without having to compose it. Add a few of these cards to your collection, and you will be ready for delicate moments that require a timely message. Store your supplies so they are at your fingertips. For minimal cost, you can buy a cardboard or plastic storage box at your office-supply store to keep the cards, stationery, and stamps together with a ballpoint, rollerball, or fountain pen. Or simply slip your postage stamps, a pen, and any extra greeting cards into the box or boxes from the greeting cards you purchase. Then slip your supply box onto a handy bookshelf or into a desk drawer with your copy of this book.
Take Action: Gather Your Contact Information Assemble your contacts’ email and mailing addresses in one, or at most two, places. Whether you use a contact management system, an Outlook address book, a day planner, a Rolodex, or something else, having just one or two go-to places for addresses is easier than tracking down slips of paper or loose business cards when you want to send a greeting. If you have a lot of contact information in various places, you may need to set aside several hours to pull your contacts together. Or consider hiring someone to finish the job for you. Take Action: Decide on a Calendar System When you remember their birthdays, anniversaries, and other special occasions, your employees, clients, and other business associates are touched by your thoughtfulness. But it’s hard to actually remember such occasions, especially when your list of contacts grows. That’s why a system that remembers them for you is essential. 240
Your calendar system may be Outlook, the Mac’s iCal, your smartphone’s system, a day planner, or another approach. Whatever system you choose, make sure it will sustain you over the years. You don’t want to have to copy special dates from one year to the next on New Year’s Day. With Outlook, you can program dates to appear annually, with a flag that reminds you of the upcoming event several days in advance. Those several days give you time to put a greeting card in the mail or to send an early electronic greeting. Don’t Contemplate, Communicate! With your supplies at hand, your contacts organized, and your calendar at your service, you are ready to take action. Here is a range of one-off and ongoing action steps you can take to build and sustain great work relationships. Choose just one or several, and get started! Choose someone randomly from your contact list or address book. Send the individual a note of hello, appreciation, positive feedback, or if appropriate, congratulations. Librarian Roger Green has used the same random approach with phone calls despite a girlfriend’s criticism: I had a girlfriend about 20 years ago who chastised me for pulling out my address book and deciding who I might want to call rather than just KNOWING who I wanted to call. I thought it was important to keep up with people I hadn’t been in touch with. Her irritation with my methodology baffled me; still does. Those people getting the call were pleased by the call; how I got to calling them “out of the blue” should not have mattered. If you have Roger’s desire to connect with people, then copy his way of making it happen. Just pick someone from your list. Your contact will be pleased, as Roger’s were, to hear from you. Your positive words may make their day and lead to unexpected rewards for you. Take action in the moment — don’t put it off. If you receive a thoughtful email, respond immediately with a quick thanks. Thinking I’ll get to it later has led to millions of unsent messages. This step means reading your email and regular mail at a time when you can respond to it — not just check it for urgent messages. Strive for completion — not perfection. This point is related to the item above. You do not need to write the perfect thank-you, condolence, or get-well message. You need to send a message. Do not let perfectionism get in the way of sending a heartfelt, timely message. Psychologist Doris Jeanette emailed this simple thank-you to me in response to a holiday card in which I had included a bookmark of the rules of rendering numbers: Hi Lynn, 241
I want to thank you for such a thoughtful and beautiful card. I did read the bookmark and it has raised my awareness about numbers. Thank you for thinking of me. Doris The entire message, including both our names, is just 34 words. It is perfect in its simplicity. Writing the thank-you removed the task from Doris’s to-do list and probably gave her a feeling of satisfaction and connection. I know it made me feel appreciated. Make a routine communication into a special one. Whenever you can quickly connect with another person in a way that recognizes him or her as a human being, do it. When people unsubscribe from my newsletter, they have the option of sharing their reason for unsubscribing. They often mention that they have been laid off, are retiring from work, or are taking a leave of absence. I respond in email to those messages. Here’s an example: Unsubscribe comment from Jamie: “I am going out on maternity leave.” My response: “Jamie, have a happy, healthy maternity leave. I wish you a safe delivery and a joyous welcome of your baby into the world.” Jamie’s response: “Lynn, thank you very much for your warm wishes.” Writing and emailing the message to Jamie took me about a minute, just one minute for a meaningful connection with a subscriber. If you write checks to vendors, as I do in my business, you have an opportunity to write a message of thanks. I include my check in a greeting card. When I included my payment in a thank-you card to a sales consultant, she wrote back saying she enjoyed the card and wondered whether I paid my phone and electric bills with a personal note. No, only when someone I know is at the other end of the envelope do I send a personal message. You can apply this approach when someone forwards a contract or a check request to you, asking for your signature. Add a quick note of appreciation for their handling the paperwork for you. Or if someone asks you to sign off on a graphic design, an annual report, or a program change, add your positive feedback to your approval. If someone asks for your advice, include along with your words of counsel your thanks and praise for approaching the situation so carefully. You may have daily opportunities to make routine communications into special ones. Why not take advantage of them? Set aside time each week to send relationship-building messages. Even if you can manage only 15 minutes, that small chunk of time is enough to send four or five emails or two greeting cards or notes. If your Friday afternoons are calm, that might be a perfect time to reflect on the week and the people you would like to communicate with. Some managers set aside a few minutes each day to extend thanks and positive feedback to staff and colleagues. 242
Add a positive-tone check when proofreading your emails, memos, and letters. Do not send a message unless it includes at least two positive or courteous words: please, thank you, appreciate, grateful, delighted, happy to, excellent, welcome, etc. If this step seems odd or awkward to you, ask yourself why you would want to send a message with nothing positive in it. Even in an email in which you request a meeting, one that might be a tense encounter, you can include this positive sentence: “I look forward to working through the issues.” I remember a business writing class in South Carolina in which a communications specialist was stumped about how to state this concern more positively: “Supplies are limited, so any delays in ordering might result in unfulfilled orders.” She was referring to a glossy publication the communications department had produced for employees. We transformed her message to “Supplies are limited. Order now to reserve copies for your department.” Our revision eliminated the negative and doubtful delays, might, and unfulfilled and communicated positively without using obviously positive language. Add a communication review step to your project plans and decisions. This step is a point at which you can ask yourself: Could this project or decision be bad news for others? If so, add one or more badnews messages and apologies to your task list. Is this project or decision the result of the work of others? Add one or more messages of congratulations, thanks, and positive feedback to your tasks. Did this project or decision necessitate hiring new staff? Add an introduction of new staff to your tasks. Will communications about this project or decision involve email? Review the chapter “Protect Your Relationships by Avoiding Bad Email Behaviors” to avoid email pitfalls. Will this project or decision involve communications with people around the globe? Review the chapter “Communicate Around the Globe With Courtesy and Wisdom” for reminders about what can go wrong and right in international communication. Will this project or decision create additional work or require a special effort from any individuals? Add a reminder to your calendar to send thank-you notes and positive feedback at appropriate times during the implementation. Add a note to your calendar to check your contact list in May, August, and December for people who may be graduating. Without making a conscious effort, it is too easy to overlook graduations from high school, junior college, undergraduate school, MBA programs, and other degree and certificate programs. Mark such hard-earned milestones with a special card, note, or gift. Start early if you intend to send Chanukah, Christmas, or New Year’s cards — or all three — to various people. Steps include buying, writing, addressing, stamping, and mailing the cards to your contacts. Even with a contact list of 25 people, that effort takes 243
time. Begin in November or earlier, and pay attention to the date of Chanukah, which may start in late November. Add the birthdays of your coworkers, employees, and other business associates to your calendar. With LinkedIn and Facebook, your connections and friends have the option of posting their birthdays. Pay attention to those days, and add them to your calendar system. Then send a card, note, or electronic congratulations on their special days. Add clients’ birthdays to your calendar, and send a greeting by email or card. If sending birthday cards is too costly because of your volume of clients, consider tasteful postcards. If you are a dentist, resist the temptation to send a card with an open mouth, and if you are a chiropractor, leave the spine illustration to the poster in your office. Your clients know your profession without cheesy reminders of it on their birthday greetings. Add to your contact list the names and birthdates of the children of your business associates. You don’t need to remember the children’s birthdays, but you will enjoy being able to talk about them in situations like this one: Someone in my professional network, a woman I may see once a year, ordered 20 booklets from me. In my emailed thank-you for her order, I said I hoped she and her young daughter were having a beautiful summer. I used her daughter’s name. She wrote back, “Thanks! I am so impressed you remembered my daughter’s name :-).” Confession: I did not remember her daughter’s name. I had recorded it, along with her date of birth, in the notes in my Outlook contacts. Having recorded it rather than remembering it does not make the gesture any less meaningful. After all, I wa n t to remember her daughter. I want to have warm relationships with customers and others in my professional network. You earn an easy win when you keep track of the personal milestones in people’s lives and mention them in the natural flow of business communication. It just takes the discipline of recording those events when they happen. Imagine being able to say, “David is 16 now, right? Has he started driving yet?” The questions show much more awareness and sensitivity than remarks like these: “Your kid is already in high school? No! But it seems just yesterday that you were home with the baby.” Add to your calendar the holidays and holy days, if applicable, of your associates in other countries. See the “Recommended Resources” section for resources that will help you to acknowledge special days with email greetings and to avoid expecting a response on days when your associates are away from their offices. When you receive positive feedback or thanks, add those messages to a special paper or electronic folder. When you are feeling discouraged, you can open this folder to brighten your day and improve your relationship with yourself! In her comment on Business Writing blog, nurse practitioner Mary K. Parker described the dual value of saving such messages:
I’ve saved all the thank-you notes I’ve received from patients. Not only does it comfort me on those Sisyphean days, it is an opportunity to show tangible customer-service skills to future employers. An added benefit is that reviewing thanks-yous and other positive messages provides an important reminder to send the same kinds of valuable messages to others. Add the dates of deaths to your calendar so you can remember their anniversaries with associates who are friends and family members of the deceased. See the chapter “Convey Condolences to Connect With Others” for sample messages. Add to your calendar a note to review the chapter “Share Constructive Feedback to Improve Performance — and Relationships” at the start of the performance evaluation period at your company. The chapter will remind you of the purpose of feedback and the language to do your job well. When you add a conference or professional meeting to your calendar, add time after the event as well to follow up with new contacts with whom you have made a meaningful connection. After the event, add each contact to your smartphone, your Outlook contacts, or the system you use. Then send an email or handwritten note or request a LinkedIn connection with the individuals you met. Avoid sending generic messages such as “It was a pleasure talking with you this morning.” Instead write something like “I enjoyed our conversation about diversity programs and how to make them meaningful.” If you are looking for a job, add to your calendar a note to update your contacts on the progress you have made in your job search. Then send those updates so your network will remember your search and will recognize ways to continue to help you. When you have a networking meeting or a job interview, add time to your calendar to send follow-up thank-you messages. If your profession involves learning about milestones such as weddings, anniversaries, significant birthdays, bar mitzvahs and bat mitzvahs, first communions, and first home purchases — for example, if you are a minister, priest, rabbi, florist, baker, caterer, dressmaker, limo driver, travel planner, or real estate agent — send your own greeting to the person or persons of honor. If appropriate, add the date to your calendar and acknowledge it in coming years. Seattle real estate agent Jayne DeHaan takes a similar step, calling clients on their birthdays. I have received a birthday call from Jayne each May for over 20 years, ever since I purchased my first house with her help. If your profession brings you into contact with people whose family members (including pets) have died — for example, in medicine, veterinary medicine, law, nursing homes, hospice, brokerage services, insurance, and mortuary and executor services — add time to your calendar to send condolence notes or sympathy cards. If you do not know the 245
family well, a printed sympathy card with a brief message such as “I am very sorry for your loss,” along with your signature, is all you need to send. This small but gracious gesture shows you appreciate the other person as a human being, not just as a client or a customer. Also remember bereaved individuals at other times of the year. This sample message remembers someone’s loss: Dear Mr. Jenner, As the holidays approach, I think of the clients I worked with this year, and you come quickly to mind. I know you will be spending the holidays without your wife, Kathryn, for the first time. Know that I am thinking of you during this time of continued loss. Warm wishes, Anita Robbins If your profession involves helping people through life transitions — for example, adoption law, life coaching, and personal training services — send your clients notes of congratulation when they move through a transition or achieve a personal goal. If you work for a nonprofit organization, when you schedule an auction or a similar fundraising initiative, add time to your calendar to write thank-you notes and letters. Donors, sponsors, and volunteers may grumble when they are contacted a year later with a “Thank you for your support. It’s time to give again” message. Acknowledge contributions specifically rather than generically whenever possible. For instance, rather than “Thank you for your generous donation,” write, “Thank you for your generous donation of a week at your condominium in Belize.” If you are in a profession in which you regularly deal with adversaries — such as law, politics, and the military — add a note to your daily calendar to remind yourself to communicate positively and nurture your professional relationships. A reminder such as “Be kind in writing” or “Have you included positive language in that message?” can help you counteract your profession’s focus on defeating the enemy or opponent. If you are a student, start early building professional relationships. At the end of a class, send an email or thank-you note to professors and guest lecturers who have been especially helpful to you or who have worked hard to make your class engaging. Normally send the note to your professors after they have submitted grades, so your communication does not suggest an attempt to inspire a higher grade. Write a note of thanks or positive feedback whenever someone has exceeded your learning expectations. If you are a blogger, make time to visit the blogs of others in related and unrelated fields. Leave comments expressing appreciation and praise for great content. Blog about the specific posts of others when you can. By doing so, you will enrich your work life with “virtual friends.” Take any of the actions in this chapter, and you will be using business writing to create 246
and sustain great work relationships. As with the professors at Tulane and Cornell who sent memorable messages to student applicants, your efforts will be noticed and remembered, perhaps even many years later!
Personal Reflection How many of the action steps in this chapter are you already taking? Which steps will be easy to add to your routine? Next Step Take a moment to congratulate yourself for everything you are already doing to create and sustain great work relationships. Enjoy the satisfaction and success those relationships bring.
Recommended Resources: Learn More About Building Relationships Learn More About Etiquette Books Use Emily Post’s Etiquette, Eighteenth Edition, by Peggy Post, et al. (HarperCollins, 2011), to learn more about manners in our quickly evolving world. The “Life in the Workplace” section covers the job search, office challenges, workplace relationships, and business socializing. Use Robert Hickey’s book, Honor & Respect: The Official Guide to Names, Titles, and Forms of Address (The Protocol School of Washington, 2008), to have answers to your momentous “how to address” questions at your fingertips. In the United States, the comprehensive volume is used at the White House, Supreme Court, and Department of State, among many other institutions. Blog Visit Robert Hickey’s blog on names, titles, and forms of address, at www.formsofaddress.info/faq.html, when you are unsure how to address, greet, or list an important person. If Mr. Hickey, Deputy Director of the Protocol School of Washington, has not already answered your question online, he will do so. Learn More About International Communication Books Gather more information about writing for people who read English as a foreign language in Edmond H. Weiss’s The Elements of International English Style: A Guide to Writing Correspondence, Reports, Technical Documents, and Internet Pages for a Global Audience (M.E. Sharpe, 2005). The book offers 57 communication tactics with vivid examples and many helpful insights. Learn more about the cultures, customs, and communication preferences of people in more than 80 countries in When Cultures Collide: Leading Across Cultures, Third Edition (Nicholas Brealey International, 2006), by Richard D. Lewis. This book provides excellent detailed guidance to help you lead, sell, and build relationships across cultures. Websites Learn about the national holidays celebrated in countries around the world, from Åland to Zimbabwe, on the Q++ Worldwide Public Holidays site, at www.qppstudio.net/publicholidays.htm. The site covers 198 countries and 48 semiautonomous territories such as Hong Kong and Gibraltar. Consult the University of Kansas Medical Center’s diversity calendar to learn about 249
religious and national holidays of various cultures and countries, at www3.kumc.edu/diversity/january.html. On Wikipedia, at www.en.wikipedia.org/wiki/workweek, find out when your associates in other countries celebrate the weekend. Learn, for example, which Islamic countries celebrate the weekend on Thursday–Friday and on Friday–Saturday. Use the websites www.worldtimeserver.com and www.timeanddate.com to learn what time it is around the world. Both sites include a time-zone converter and a time-zone map. Get Help Solving Interpersonal Difficulties Books Pore over Peer Power: Transforming Workplace Relationships, by Cynthia Clay and Ray Olitt (Jossey-Bass, 2012). The book provides clues, strategies, and principles to help you identify and work effectively with nine challenging personalities including the attacker, the whiner, and the slacker. Take your interpersonal skills to the next level reading What Got You Here Won’t Get You There: How Successful People Become Even More Successful, by Marshall Goldsmith with Mark Deiter (Hyperion, 2007). Learn how to eliminate 20 bad habits such as making destructive comments, refusing to express regret, and failing to express gratitude. Get Better at Building and Sustaining Relationships Books Dip into any chapter of Keith Ferrazzi’s Never Eat Alone and Other Secrets to Success, One Relationship at a Time (with Tahl Raz, Doubleday, 2005) to get great gems on building business relationships. Mr. Ferrazzi promotes audacity, authenticity, passion, “pinging” (getting in touch briefly and often), and many gratifying ways of connecting with others. Read Brag! The Art of Tooting Your Own Horn Without Blowing It, by Peggy Klaus (Warner Business Books, 2003), to learn how to comfortably and confidently share information about yourself. Although the purpose of the book is to “teach you the art of bragging,” Ms. Klaus’s strategies help you open up in ways that launch and build relationships. Find out more about how giving to others builds success in Give and Take: A Revolutionary Approach to Success, by Adam Grant (Viking/Penguin Group, 2013). Professor Grant tells many stories that will inspire you to give to others in your professional life the way you do naturally in your personal life. Learn More About Apologies
Book Enjoy Aaron Lazare’s On Apology (Oxford University Press, 2004), which provides everything you ever wanted to know about apologies in a fascinating read. Dr. Lazare’s true examples of pseudo apologies, non-apologies, and excuses, often in rich historical contexts, give you a deep understanding of what can go wrong in apologies — and how to do it right. Learn More About Giving and Eliciting Feedback
Book Read Rick Maurer’s short but powerful Feedback Toolkit: 16 Tools for Better Communication in the Workplace, Second Edition (Productivity Press, 2011), to learn more about what Mr. Maurer calls “telling each other the truth.” This concise gem of a book offers insights and easy-to-follow plans. Gain More Confidence in Your Writing
Book G e t The Gregg Reference Manual: A Manual of Style, Grammar, Usage, and Formatting, Tribute Edition, Eleventh Edition, edited by William A. Sabin (McGrawHill, 2011), to gain confidence about the correctness of your business writing. Gregg covers virtually any question you may have on grammar, punctuation, formatting, and related topics.
Ways to Render Names and Titles in Greetings and on Envelopes When you have taken the time to choose the perfect card or write a thoughtful note or letter, you don’t want to worry about how to address someone. Nevertheless, questions may come up: Should you use a title such as Mr. o r Ms.? When you write to a couple, whose name comes first? This section provides guidance so that you can confidently address your readers and render their names on envelopes. For information on greetings and how to punctuate them, see the next section, “Greetings (Salutations) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Text Messages.” Guidelines for What Follows “Dear” and Appears on Envelopes When you know your reader and your relationship is friendly, use his or her first name in the greeting. On the envelope, use a courtesy title or just first and last name. Greeting: Dear Kim, Envelope: Ms. Kim Batcher [OR] Kim Batcher When the relationship is formal, use a courtesy title or a professional title and a last name. Examples of formal relationships are student to professor and nonprofit employee to donor. Greeting: Dear Mr. Alfano: Envelope: Mr. Albert Alfano Greeting: Dear Professor Cook: Envelope: Professor Amanda R. Cook When you write to someone who is much older than you or highly esteemed, use a title and a last name. Greeting: Dear Reverend Carlock, Envelope: Reverend Anita Carlock 254
Greeting: Dear Dr. Mak: Envelope: Dr. Ronald D. Mak [OR] Ronald D. Mak, M.D. When you write to someone you do not know or do not know very well, greet the reader using a title and last name, or use both first and last names without a courtesy title. Greeting: Dear Mrs. Yang: [OR] Dear Monica Yang: Envelope: Mrs. Monica Yang [OR] Monica Yang Be sure not to switch between a first-name and last-name basis with someone. If you do, Salma may wonder what she did to suddenly become “Dr. Bishara.” If you have an assistant who prepares your correspondence, be sure he or she knows which approach you want to use. Unless you are certain that a woman prefers the courtesy title Miss o r Mrs., use the title Ms. or leave the title out. Pay attention to women’s signature blocks and online bios and profiles to see whether they communicate a preference. Know which titles to spell out. Never spell out the titles Mr., Ms., Mrs., and Dr. Do spell out these titles and similar ones: Professor, Dean, Sister, Rabbi, Imam, Senator, Governor, Admiral, and Judge. Do not use an academic degree (M.S., M.D.) or professional designation (SPHR, Esq.) in the greeting. On the envelope, if you include an academic degree or professional designation after a person’s name, do not use a courtesy title that indicates the same achievement (for example, do not use Dr. and Ph.D. together). You may use a title and a degree on the same line if doing so is not redundant. Greeting: Dear Dr. Pelley: Envelope: Olive Pelley, Ph.D. Greeting: Dear Mr. Lowe: Envelope: Jason Lowe, CPA Greeting: 255
Dear Dr. Abramson, [OR] Dear Rabbi Abramson, Envelope: Rabbi Sydney Abramson, D.D. Jr. , Sr., and roman numerals such as III are normally included on the envelope, unless a message is informal. However, do not include them in your greeting. Greeting: Dear Nicholas, Envelope: Mr. Nicholas Parson Jr. Greeting: Dear Mr. Noss: Envelope: Mr. Jonathan Noss III The traditional way to greet male-female married couples is with the man’s title first, then the woman’s title followed by the last name. On the envelope, only the man’s first name appears. Greeting: Dear Mr. and Mrs. Wright, Envelope: Mr. and Mrs. Bruce Wright Jr. Greeting: Dear Dr. and Mrs. Terry, Envelope: Dr. and Mrs. James Terry Greeting: Dear Senator and Mrs. Smith, Envelope: Senator and Mrs. Gordon Smith The modern way to address male-female couples and same-sex couples is to render both individuals’ names the same way, with or without first names and titles. On the envelope, render the names either on the same line or one beneath the other, listing first the name of the person with a special title or the primary recipient (for instance, the person you know better). Greeting: Dear Anne and Bruce Wright, Envelope: Ms. Anne Wright 256
Mr. Bruce Wright Jr. Greeting: Dear Anne and Bruce, Envelope: Anne and Bruce Wright Greeting: Dear Mr. and Mrs. Wright: Envelope: Mr. Bruce Wright Jr. and Mrs. Anne Wright Greeting: Dear Mses. Carlson: Envelope: Ms. Nadine Carlson Ms. Danique Carlson When a woman marries, pay special attention to the name she uses. For instance, if Dawn Harden marries Ron Wice, she may remain Dawn Harden. Or she may be Dawn Wice, Dawn Harden Wice, Dawn Harden-Wice, or something else. If you are not certain which name a woman uses professionally, ask. She will welcome your interest. In messages to two people (coupled or not), include the name of the person with a special title first, or list the main recipient first. Whenever you know your readers well and want to communicate in a friendly way, use first names in the greeting. But avoid using an abbreviated form of a person’s name unless he or she uses it. For example, do not call a Juan Carlos “JC” or an Emily “Em” unless the individual does so. Greeting: Dear Ms. Donne and Mr. Trujillo, [OR] Dear Drenda and Alex, (only if he uses the name Alex) Envelope: Ms. Drenda Donne Mr. Alessandro Trujillo Greeting: Dear Dr. and Mrs. Ellis: Envelope: Dr. Moises Ellis (or replace Dr. with M.D. at end) Mrs. Renee Ellis (or replace Mrs. with Ms.) Greeting: Dear Drs. Gerber and Singh: [OR] Dear Dr. Gerber and Dr. Singh: Envelope: Dr. Robin Gerber 257
Dr. Gaurav Singh Greeting: Dear Drs. Moody: Envelope: Dr. Claire P. Moody Dr. James M. Moody Greeting: Dear Captain Klein and Professor Klein: Envelope: Captain Erika I. Klein Professor Roger K. Klein Greeting: Dear Reverend Paul and Mr. Green: [OR] Dear Tim and Dan, (only if they use these short forms) Envelope: Reverend Timothy Paul Mr. Daniel Green Greeting: Dear Mr. Lee and Ms. Roy-Lee, [OR] Dear Anthony Lee and Susan Roy-Lee, Envelope: Mr. Anthony Lee Jr. Ms. Susan Roy-Lee Greeting: Dear Messrs. Stone and Raj, [OR] Dear Mr. Stone and Mr. Raj, Envelope: Mr. Joseph Stone Mr. Alain Raj Greeting: Dear Mses. Woodard, [OR] Dear Loretta and Chanel, Envelope: Ms. Loretta Woodard Ms. Chanel Woodard Greeting: Dear Mrs. Hain and Mrs. Pham, [OR] Dear Mesdames Hain and Pham Envelope: Mrs. Marie Hain 258
Mrs. Lu Pham Messrs. is for more than one man with the title Mr. Its use is quite formal and traditional. You may use Mr. with each man’s name instead. Mesdames is for more than one woman with the title Mrs. Like Messrs., it is formal and traditional. You may use Mrs. with each name. Mses. is for more than one woman with the title Ms. You may also use Ms. with each name. When You Have a “Mystery Reader” If you are writing to a stranger and don’t know a person’s gender, do a bit of research on the Internet before leaving off courtesy titles such as Mr. and Ms. Type the individual’s name into your browser’s search box and see what you find. Or call the company and ask which courtesy title is appropriate. If your research doesn’t reap a helpful answer, use the person’s full name without a title, like this: Dear Dana Simms: Dear T.K. Spinazola: Dear E. Hassan, If you don’t know and can’t get the name of the person who will read your letter — for example, when applying for a job — use a targeted greeting with an appropriate job title, like this: Dear Recruiter: Dear Hiring Manager: Dear Claims Adjustor: You may use “Dear Sir or Madam,” but that greeting feels more anonymous, as does the cold “To whom it may concern.” Do not use “Dear Sir,” “Dear Sirs,” and “Gentlemen” because those greetings assume your readers are male. If you are writing to a company rather than any specific individual, you may use the company name. This approach is considered slightly informal. Dear Syntax Training: Dear XYZ Company: Dear ABC Agency: Answers to Common Questions About Names and Titles The challenge of how to render names and titles correctly in greetings and on envelopes has raised many questions on my blog and in my email. Here are answers to some common questions. Sometimes I am undecided about using a courtesy title. The message may be friendly — for example, a congratulations, but the relationship is more formal. Is 259
it better to err on the side of friendliness or formality? You will virtually always be correct if you use a courtesy title or a professional title such as Ms., Mr., Dr., Father, or Dean for your recipient. You may choose to leave out such a title when your message is more personal than professional or more informal than formal. For example, if your congratulatory note celebrates a new baby, that message qualifies as personal. If your congratulations marks a promotion or an honor, it is professional. Similarly, your invitations to a barbecue lean toward informal, but invitations to a gala are formal. You decide whether you want the communication to feel personal or professional, informal or formal. If the person I am writing to uses two last names, do I use both or only one of them in the greeting? You use both names in the greeting. For example: Dear Professor Garcia Lopez, Dear Ms. Gaertner-Johnston: I have seen “Dear Sir” and “Dear Sir or Madam.” Is “Dear Madam” ever correct? “Dear Madam” would be correct if you knew your reader was a woman but did not know — and could not learn — her name. When your goal is to build relationships, doing the research to learn someone’s name comes across as more thoughtful than being satisfied with a lack of information. When I write to a man or a woman who has a Ph.D. or another doctorate, do I use Dr. as the title? Use Dr. if you know the person prefers it or it is standard in your industry. If the individual is in academia or science in the United States, it is more likely he or she uses Dr. than in other industries (and perhaps countries). Otherwise, use Mr., Ms., Mrs., Miss, or Professor depending on any known preferences. If you have access to the person’s bio or professional profile, pay attention to which title appears there. If I am writing to a recently widowed woman, how do I address her? At work, a woman rarely uses her husband’s first name to identify herself. However, if you write to donors, constituents, members, patients, or customers who are widows, pay attention to the way they refer to themselves (in the traditional way, Mrs. Alfred J. Sherrard, or the modern way, Ms. Alicia Sherrard). If a woman uses her husband’s name, write to her that way even if he dies. When and if she decides to stop using his name, you can follow her lead. At the beginning of your business relationship with a widow or at the time she becomes a widow, you can ask her tactfully how she would like to be addressed. Is it acceptable to use & (the ampersand) between names in the salutation? 260
No. It is traditionally not acceptable to use the ampersand for and in the salutation. If I am writing to a family and each person has the same last name, what is the proper greeting? The easiest way is to use first names. Greeting: Dear Don, Julie, and Julian, Envelope: Don, Julie, and Julian Burke If you must be more formal, use this approach: Greeting: Dear Mr. and Mrs. Burke and Mr. Burke, Envelope: Mr. Donald Burke, Mrs. Julie Burke, and Mr. Julian Burke When writing to an entire family, should everyone’s name be on the envelope and in the greeting? Rather than crowd envelopes and greetings with many names, you can use the parent’s or parents’ names with “and Family.” For example, address the envelope to “Ernest and Kate Elgin,” with a greeting to “Dear Ernest, Kate, and Family.” Or use just the last name in both places: on the envelope “The Robinsons” and for a greeting “Dear Robinsons.” Should I use Miss or Ms. for a young girl? Emily Post’s Etiquette suggests the use of Miss until age 16 to 18, then Ms. The Gregg Reference Manual recommends addressing teenage girls as M s . o r Miss, following the girl’s preference when you know it. For younger girls, Gregg indicates that you may use a title or omit it. For boys, Emily Post’s Etiquette recommends the title Master until age 6 to 7, then no title until age 16 to 18 years, then Mr. In contrast, The Gregg Reference Manual recommends addressing a boy as Mr. when he becomes a teenager. Gregg notes that Master is rarely seen. If I am sending a letter or an email to many people, may I use a greeting such as “Dear Joshua et al.”? Et al., which is Latin for “and others,” is not appropriate in a greeting. Many people will stumble over it, detracting from your message, and it seems too distant for a relationship-building message. If you need to greet up to five people, use all of their names. If you have more than five readers, try a group greeting such as: In a letter: Dear Chamber Members,
In an email: Hello, Marketing Team. Greetings, everybody. If you regularly write to a group, why not ask group members which greeting they prefer? If you have more questions about names and titles and how to render them, search my blog at www.businesswritingblog.com, or consult The Gregg Reference Manual or Emily Post’s Etiquette, Eighteenth Edition, by Peggy Post et al. (Note: That’s a correct use of et al.!)
Greetings (Salutations) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Text Messages After the date and a possible subject line, the first thing your reader sees is your greeting, also known as a salutation. Sometimes greetings set the tone of the message like a friendly smile and a handshake. At other times, they rest unremarkably on the screen or page and make little difference. This section offers guidance and answers common questions about salutations, so you don’t need to worry about your greetings and what they may unintentionally communicate. Greetings in Business Letters and Notes The standard way to open a business letter is with Dear, the person’s name with or without a professional title (Dr.) or courtesy title (Ms.), and a colon, like this: Dear Louise: Dear Patrick: Dear Ms. Chu: Dear Mr. and Dr. Paige: Dear Professor Amato: Dear Drs. Zhu: Use a colon after the greeting (rather than a comma) when your message is more business focused than social — for example, when you are writing to explain a policy or say no. The standard way to open a social business letter or a note is with Dear, the person’s name with or without a professional or courtesy title, and a comma, like this: Dear Nigel, Dear Patty and Eric, Dear Dr. Tarabi, Dear Annette and Teri, Dear Reverend Jans, Dear Dr. and Mrs. Lewis, A social business letter or note focuses more on the social aspects of your relationship than the business aspects. Letters and notes of condolence, personal congratulations (for weddings, births, retirement, and other celebrations), and thank-yous fall into the category of social business letters. 263
The colon-comma distinction is alive and well in the United States and Canada. However, in the United Kingdom, often no punctuation follows the greeting. Greetings in Emails For formal email — that is, email used in place of a business letter — greet the reader as you would in a letter. Use Dear before the person’s name with or without a title, followed by a colon or a comma. To warm up less formal emails, use greetings like these: Hi, Eva. Greetings, Finance. Hello, Drs. Furtado and Cho. Hello, Kwasi. Good morning, Folks. Ciao, everyone. Greetings, Professor! Dear all, Hello to all. Think twice about greetings that indicate the time of day, such as “Good morning.” Time-of-day greetings do not work well if some of your readers live in other time zones or will read your message long after you send it. Some people use Hey as a greeting, similar to Hi, but others object to it as too informal. If you do use Hey, save it for very informal messages. Various ways to punctuate the email greetings H i and Hello are acceptable. As a punctuation traditionalist, I prefer these ways, either on the same line as the first sentence or above the body of the message: Hi, Han. Hello, Han. You will also see these styles above the message body: Hi Han, Hi, Han, Hello Han, Hello, Han, Some people leave out the greeting, but the resulting tone can feel cool or cold: Brooke: Team: Professor: 264
Sue, Accounting, Rather than using a greeting, you may use the person’s name in the opening sentence, like this: Yiota, you were right about the prices. For messages back and forth in an email conversation, use the reader’s name in the opening sentence rather than repeating a greeting several times a day. When you do omit a greeting, be sure you include positive language in the message to warm up your tone. Greetings in Text Messages Texts are informal messages, so follow the suggestions for less formal emails. You may be tempted to omit the greeting when tapping out a text, but do not omit it if your goal is to build or maintain a good business relationship. Notice that the greeting warms up the tone in these pairs of texts: I’ll be there in 10 minutes. Hi, Professor. I’ll be there in 10 minutes. I’m waiting in the lobby for you to escort me. Hello, Guy. I’m waiting in the lobby for you to escort me. Answers to Common Questions About Greetings Over the years, readers of my blog and participants in classes have repeatedly asked two questions about greetings. Here are those questions and answers. If I don’t like someone, do I still have to use Dear in the greeting of a letter? Dear is not the same as Dearest or Darling. It is simply the standard term for greetings in letters, so you need to use it. No etiquette experts recommend “Not So Dear” as a greeting. One place in which you can skip Dear is the simplified letter, which has no greeting. It begins with the subject in all capital letters, like this: WAYS TO BEGIN A BUSINESS LETTER I am writing to share information about standard letter openings to … Do not use the simplified letter if your goal is to build a relationship with your reader. It feels too anonymous. If I use words such as team and everybody in the greeting, should I capitalize those words even though they are not people’s names or titles? You should capitalize all nouns. Words such as team, group, department, and managers are nouns. You should not capitalize pronouns. The words everybody, anybody, everyone, anyone, and all are pronouns. 265
If you have more questions www.businesswritingblog.com.
Complimentary Closes (Sign-Offs) for Letters, Notes, Emails, and Texts The complimentary close, or closing, is the last words your reader sees before your name. Complimentary closes are straightforward, but you may feel confused by what you have learned and what you see in the messages you receive. Use this section to remove any doubts about the closes you choose. Complimentary Closes in Letters and Notes Complimentary closes are standard in business letters, except for the simplified letter, which omits them. (The simplified letter, with neither greeting nor close, is not a strong choice for relationship-building messages.) Complimentary closes also typically appear in typed and handwritten notes. Like greetings, closes range from formal and professional to friendly and warm. These acceptable closes are listed by their degree of formality or friendliness:
For sympathy messages, choose one of the above closes or one of these: In deepest sympathy, With sympathy, With our condolences, Very sincerely, Wishing you peace, Sincere regards, Regarding “Yours faithfully,” my colleagues in the United Kingdom tell me it is used there regularly when writing to someone you do not know. Do not use your closing to communicate anger or frustration: Not this: With strong malice, 267
Not this: In deep frustration, Instead, use a professional-sounding close such as “Sincerely.” Avoid using the word warm in closes to people you do not know. Doing so may come across as overly familiar. Use affectionately only in a very close business relationship. Avoid it if your affection could be thought inappropriate by the reader or anyone else who reads the message. Do not use xoxo (kiss hug kiss hug) as a close in any but the most familiar relationships. Read the discussion of xoxo in the chapter “Add Heart to Your Writing One Message at a Time.” In the United States and Canada, a comma follows the complimentary close. In the United Kingdom, often no punctuation follows it. Only the first word of the complimentary close is capitalized. Like this: With best wishes, Not this: With Best Wishes, Complimentary Closes in Email When you use email in place of a business letter, choose a complimentary close from the earlier list. A close is not required in less formal email, but it helps you end your message pleasantly. Choose from the closes listed earlier, or pick one of these to add a positive tone to your email: Best, Regards, All the best, Cheers, Yours, Ciao, Thanks is not technically a complimentary close although it appears at the end of millions of emails. If you use Thanks at the end of your email, why not make it a sentence and follow it with a period, such as “Thanks for your help” or “Thanks again for your interest” or “Thanks for considering my request”? In an email conversation of messages back and forth, repeating the complimentary close and signature block is not necessary and could seem silly. But when you start a new conversation or revisit an email string after a few days, use a greeting and a close again. 268
Complimentary Closes in Text Messages The nature of texts is quick, short, and informal, so any close you use should match that style. Good closes for texts are: Best, All best, Cheers, Ciao, It’s acceptable to skip the close in texts. But as in any message, a friendly sign-off communicates warmth. Despite the brevity of texts, the closes below do not communicate well. They keep readers guessing and can come across as lazy. Therefore, do not use: Rgds, KR, (for Kind regards) BW, (for Best wishes) Answers to Common Questions About Closes Is it ever correct to add “I am” or “We are” above a closing? Expressions such as “I am” above “Sincerely yours” or a similar close are virtually never used in 21st century communication. They are not even recommended in a writing handbook I have that was published in 1914, Handbook of Business English, by George Burton Hotchkiss and Edward Jones Kilduff. Do not use them. How about adding “I remain” after a closing, such as “With warm regards, I remain”? Is that acceptable? That style does not appear in any business writing manuals I have seen in the last 25 years, so I can’t recommend it. If more than one person will sign the letter, are there two closes? Use just one complimentary close even if two people sign the letter. Have them sign above their names. Your closing might look like this:
Or like this: Best regards, Patrick White Manager, Customer Service 269
Michaela Best Regional Manager Is “Your loving student” or “Your loving coworker” ever appropriate as a closing? “Your loving” is too intimate for the student-teacher or coworker relationship. If the relationship is close, use “Warm wishes” or “Warm regards.” Is it acceptable to use two complimentary closes together, for example, “Yours sincerely, with best wishes”? One complimentary close is plenty. Using two would call attention to its oddity. If you want to combine sentiments, you might use “With sincere best wishes.” If the closes in someone’s messages to me begin to change from “Thanks” to “Best wishes,” does that mean something has changed in the relationship? Don’t read too much into people’s closes. Writers who change closes may simply have learned something new about them, for example, that “Thanks” is not a standard close. Or they may simply want to bring variety to their messages. Is it acceptable to refer to the reader’s friends or family in the close? It’s fine to use a close such as “Best regards to you and your family.” Can a simple “From” be used as a close, for example, “From [followed by a blank line] Your Friends at ABC Company”? “From” is not a complimentary close. Replace it with a more standard close such as “Best wishes.” Is “Kindly” an appropriate close? “Kindly” does not work as a close. Its meaning is different from “Sincerely” and “Cordially.” It is too closely associated with “Please,” as in “Would you kindly confirm the time of our meeting?” If you like “Kind” in your complimentary close, use “Kind regards.” Search for answers to more questions about complimentary closes on my blog at www.businesswritingblog.com or in The Gregg Reference Manual.
Acknowledgments My heartfelt thanks go to many people who supported me on this book-building journey. Susan Daffron inspired me with her enthusiastic response to my first two chapters and outline. Marcia Yudkin coached and challenged me with her brilliant logic and deep understanding of what works in nonfiction books. My friend Doe Coover, whose support goes all the way back to our first year of college, cheered me across the finish line with her insightful advice and fine eye for grouping chapters. My friends and colleagues Deb Arnold, Jerry Schlagenhauf, Ron Scott, Lynn Takaki, and Richard Wilkinson granted me interviews that brought several topics to life. They also took time to review and fine-tune their sections. Many generous, smart people provided examples, suggestions, and stories that made the book practical and authentic. I list them here alphabetically: Deb Arnold, Mary Bennett, Gilda Bonanno, Pete Busacca, Keith Chapman, Cynthia Clay, John Cline, Dennis Dennis, Cameron Deuel, Lisa Dodge-Johnson, Hanna Ekström, Margaret Elwood, Charlie Gadzik, Kathy Goughenour, Carolyn Grimm, Doris Jeanette, Tim Jones, Marie Kelly, Joanne Masterson, Sten Olsen, Lesley Peters, Alice Risemberg, Mary Rolston, Jerry Schlagenhauf, Valerie Shields, Russ Taylor, Steve Teixeira, Melissa Thirloway, and Marcia Yudkin, along with the staff at Hiers-Baxley Funeral Services. These astute blog commenters expanded the book’s points of view: Claudia Amaya, Anne Boardman, Jeff Chamberlain, Matt Charles, Ben Curnett, Alfredo Deambrosi, Paula Diaco, Nancy Doerhoff, Roger Green, Robert Hickey, Josh Hinds, Cornelia Luethi, Cyndy McCollough, Jeannette Paladino, Mary K. Parker, and Neil Wheatley. The talented associates of 1106 Design transformed my manuscript into a professional book of which I am proud. Special thanks go to Michele DeFilippo and Ronda Rawlins. Thanks and a shout out to Christi and the gang at the Island Country Inn on Bainbridge Island, Washington, where I wrote most of this book while enjoying a room of my own. I thank my 100-year-old cousin Eleanor for inspiring me with a life well lived. Eleanor, you’ve always had heart! My cherished daughter, Eva, accepted the absence of Mom and meals while I was away working on this book. She graciously replaced her question “What’s for dinner?” with “How is your book?” My deepest appreciation and love go to my husband, Michael Johnston. Without his support and repeated encouragement to go away and write, this book would still be an inadequate Word document tugging at my soul.
About the Author Lynn Gaertner-Johnston has helped thousands of employees and managers improve their business writing skills and confidence through her company, Syntax Training (www.syntaxtraining.com). In her corporate training career of more than 20 years, she has worked with executives, engineers, scientists, sales staff, and many other professionals, helping them get their messages across with clarity and tact. A gifted teacher, Lynn has led writing classes at more than 100 companies and organizations such as MasterCard, Microsoft, Boeing, Nintendo, REI, AARP, and Kaiser Permanente. Near her home in Seattle, Washington, she has taught managerial communications in the MBA programs of the University of Washington and UW Bothell. Lynn’s influence extends far beyond the corporate classroom. Her free monthly newsletter, Better Writing at Work, reaches many thousands of subscribers around the world. Her popular Business Writing blog (www.businesswritingblog.com) attracts more than 3 million annual visits from readers on six continents. A recognized expert in business writing etiquette, Lynn has been quoted in The Wall Street Journal, The Atlantic, The Chicago Tribune, and other media. Lynn sharpened her business writing skills at the University of Notre Dame, where she earned a master’s degree in communication, and at Bradley University, with a bachelor’s degree in English.
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Perhaps we should have sorted out the definition of "intelligence" we all can agree on first.
This is a very good idea. I would say the definition of intelligence is the ability to apply existing knowledge to new situations and to be able to acquire new knowledge.
Is just giving a definition enough though? We can obviously use that definition to show that computers as we know them are not intelligent. While they can be made to look like they are learning, this is purely as a result of clever programming, using tools such as conditionals and lookup tables. But what about us? While we may feel that we are not programmed and that we really are learning from our experiences, we don't know enough about how the brain works to definitively say that any decisions we make are not just a result of predetermined arrangements of neurons.
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Fabian Gondorf from the LIMES group “Immunology and Environment” on the complex interplay of diet, microbiome, immune cells and organ health.
Summer School in Sardinia: sounds like “holidays” but it tourned out to be an intense week. I wondered: what did the summer school do to my immune system?
While browsing through my grandparents’ house, I happened to stumble over a ‘Kalorientabelle’ – a calorie chart from a magazine (“Freundin”) from 1977. Curious how perception of food might have changed over the last 40 years, I took a closer look. The chart basically lists the number of calories per 100g of each food in a format ‘to carry with you all the time’ – … Continue reading To eat or not to eat – thoughts on nutrition from past and present
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Definition of ragged
Examples of ragged in a sentence
a boy in ragged jeans
You look a little ragged—did you have a rough week?
First Known Use of ragged
RAGGED Defined for English Language Learners
Definition of ragged for English Language Learners
: having an edge or surface that is not straight or even
: in bad condition especially because of being torn
: wearing clothes that are torn and in poor condition
RAGGED Defined for Kids
Seen and Heard
What made you want to look up ragged? Please tell us where you read or heard it (including the quote, if possible).
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Financial aid recipients have the right to know the following:
What financial aid programs are available to Lewis & Clark students and the priority application deadlines to be considered for this assistance.
The method used to determine financial need.
The appeal procedure regarding financial aid issues.
How and when financial aid will be disbursed.
How Lewis & Clark determines a student is making satisfactory academic progress for the purpose of remaining eligible to receive financial aid and what happens if standards are not met.
How the student employment program is administered at Lewis & Clark including how and when the student will be paid.
What portion of the financial aid offered is in the form of loan(s) and must be repaid.
Borrowers have the right to know the interest rate, the total amount that must be repaid, the repayment procedures as well as the length of the repayment period and when it begins.
The policies for refund of charges and return of funds in the case of complete withdrawal from the College.
Financial aid recipients have the following responsibilities:
Maintain full-time student status.
Remain in Good Academic Standing as described in the College catalog and monitored by the Registrar.
Make satisfactory academic progress toward a bachelor’s degree as defined in the satisfactory academic progress policy for financial aid.
Notify the Financial Aid Office immediately regarding other assistance, including external resources and other educational benefits, received for the academic year. Such assistance must be taken into consideration when determining the financial need of a student and may affect eligibility for federal need-based aid, primarily loan and work programs.
Notify the Financial Aid Office of changes in marital, enrollment and/or housing status which may result in a revision to financial aid eligibility.
Provide documents upon request to validate the information provided on the financial aid application. This is commonly referred to as “verification” and provides confirmation that a student’s eligibility for financial aid is being determined using accurate information.
Secure a job and work the number of hours necessary to earn the Federal Work-Study (FWS) or Lewis & Clark Work-Study (LCWS) award, as desired. An offer of FWS or LCWS is not a guarantee of employment.
Complete the process for securing any loan funds offered if it is determined that the funds are needed.
Repay loan funds received in accordance with the terms of the respective loan program.
Pay on-time — All college charges not covered by financial aid.
Reapply for financial aid each year, by the priority filing date of January 15, using the FAFSA.
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There's been something else bugging me at the back of my mind and this is something else I've looked up. I think he may also be referring to The Waste Land. Eliot also refers to that part of the Inferno in his poem. And apart from the fact that Fante actually uses the phrase ("you go on through the waste land"), there are some marked echoes when reading the poem. I can't say that I really understand it - I got a copy when it was referred to in Fierce Invalids - and have been obliged to read about it too to try to make sense of it. But here are, for example, some lines that stand out:
I will show you fear in a handful of dust…
Fear death by water…
Under the brown fog of a winter dawn…(this line especially, with the references to fog in ATD)
I had not thought death had undone so many.
I was neither living nor dead.
He who was living is now dead
We who were living are now dying
(From “What the Thunder Said”. Kind of interesting that the passage in ATD says: “It came to me like crashing thunder”)
And this bit reminds me of Vera –
"Unstoppered, lurked her strange synthetic perfumes,
Unguent, powdered, or liquid – troubled, confused
And drowned the sense in odours"
There’s a lot more too. The destruction of the cities. The idea that there is no guiding faith or enlightenment spiritually, spiritual death. There is also the theme of impotence and that sex does not lead to fulfilment or renewal. I think this is why Vera has the scar and the dead flesh specifically in her loins, and why Arturo experiences impotence, which also is alluded to in The Waste Land. Sex in the poem is pretty fleeting, meaningless and destructive, and there is this bit:
“what have we given?
My friend, blood shaking my heart
The awful daring of a moment’s surrender
Which an age of prurience can never retract
By this, and this only, we have existed…
I have heard the key
Turn in the door once and turn once only
We think of the key, each in his prison"
It seems to me that this could easily apply to Arturo, absorbed in himself and his fate, and that lack of connection with others, how the sex is meaningless and unfulfilling.
"Luck... inspiration... both only really happen to you when you empty your heart of ambition, purpose, and plan; when you give yourself, completely, to the golden, fate-filled moment."
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Bessie Baker’s Story
Recollections by Meadows Valley Settlers and Their Families
The following information was collected and originally produced by Meadows Valley High School’s 1945 Journalism Class taught by Bessie Baker. The 42 page document is typed on buff colored 8 1/2 x 14 inch size paper. It has no title. At an unknown date, the document was donated to the Adams County Historical Society to place in their archives.
Presented here are the re-typed words and artwork taken from the original document. No punctuation, words, sentence structure, spelling or tense have been changed from the original document. The font used for page numbers and some headlines represent what was handwritten information.
Families: Interviews with C.J. Mitchel, Fred Clark, Mrs. Chester Irwin/Yoakum Family, Edward Osborn, Walter White, George McMahan, Freeman Family, Mrs. Caroline Campbell, Richard Balbach
HISTORY OF CHURCHES IN MEADOWS VALLEY
SCHOOLS IN MEADOWS VALLEY
CATTLE RAISING INDUSTRY OF MEADOWS VALLEY
THE NORTH AND SOUTH HIGHWAY
THE COMING OF THE RAILROAD
SOCIAL LIFE OF “OLD TIMERS“
LUMBERING INDUSTRY IN M. V.
EXPERIENCE OF AN EARLY SETTLER
Katherine Kline (Mrs. Osborn Clay)
TAKEN FROM THE MEADOWS EAGLE, THURSDAY, DECEMBER 28, 1911
Progress of New Meadows
BUSINESS DISTRICT OF NEW MEADOWS
PACKER JOHN CABIN
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Jiang Shi (僵屍 or 殭屍; called Kyonshī in Japan and Gangshi in Korea) are Zombies/Ghosts from the Chinese culture. They have pale skin, red makeup on their cheeks, and wear outfits from the Qing Dynasty.
Two Jiang Shi appear hopping one after another before preliminaries of the 22nd World Martial Arts Tournament begin in the Dragon Ball manga. A Jiang Shi is seen among the living dead who attack Mr. Satan in the movie Dragon Ball Z: Fusion Reborn, and several are enemies in the video game Dragon Ball: Revenge of King Piccolo. According to legend, in the day, the Jiang Shi rests in a coffin or hides in dark places such as caves. At night, it moves around by hopping, with its arms outstretched and kills living creatures to absorb their ki (life essence).
According to the Chinese folklore, a Jiang Shi is created when a person's soul has not yet exited the corpse after death, because there is still something they must do in life. A Jiang Shi is also said to be created when a person dies of unnatural causes. Another version is that whenever someone dies in a foreign country, a trained spellcaster would cast a spell on a dead body, then the mage would then command the deceased to hop back to their homeland at night. In Dragon Ball: Revenge of King Piccolo, Fortuneteller Baba cast a spell on these creatures to protect her palace.
In the legend, these ghouls always keep their arms stretched out in front of them and they cannot walk, only hop, but in Dragon Ball: Revenge of King Piccolo they can walk and even run. In this video game, the Jiang Shi who wear green outfits use martial arts, those with a red outfit attack with swords, and those with a blue outfit attack by throwing bombs.
- Chiaotzu's design is based on Jiang Shi. His seeming agelessness may stem from his design being based on a Jiang Shi. Chiaotzu's outfit also looks very close to a Qing one. Although it is uncertain if Chiaotzu explicitly is a Jiang Shi, this would account for him not aging, his physical appearance, and his outfit in Dragon Ball.
- Android 19 also possesses a somewhat similar appearance to a Jiang Shi. The character design makes sense considering his ability to steal ki through his palms.
- In the Chinese Folklore, the only way to kill a Jiang Shi is to stab them in the heart with birch or kill the spellcaster. The influence of Western vampire stories brought the blood-sucking aspect to the Jiang Shi.
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- February 8, 2017
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Creating Scripts to Move SQL Server 2008 Database to SQL Server 2005
Please refer below step.
Use the scripting wizard in SQL Server 2008 to script data as well as schemas into SQL Server 2005 compatibility mode.
Run "Generate SQL Server Scripts" wizard in SQL Server Management Studio (Once Object Explorer is connected to the appropriate instance) by right clicking on database and selecting "Tasks –> Generate Scripts."
Click "Script all objects in selected database" & then click "Next."
Change script options:
Set "Script for Server Version" to "SQL Server 2005"
Set "Script Data" to "True"
(SQL Server 2000 is also supported.)
If you are putting the database on a new instance for the first time, make sure the "Script Database Create" option is set to "True.
“Click "Next" when you are happy with options.
Finish the wizard.
After creating the file with these changes, you can run the script in SQL Server 2005 Management Studio to recreate the database in your development environment.
You can now test data against SQL Server 2008 and SQL Server 2005.
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The Making of a Championship Heart
"What makes a championship heart? What are those special ingredients consistently found in people who excel in life? Certainly, the journey through the human experience is full of challenges, difficulties, hardship and joy but what makes those select few consistently succeed and rise to the top? Regardless of the endeavor, whether it is sports, business, family, service or in simply living a compl...
By Steve Yerrid
Hardcover: 288 pages
Publisher: Suntide Publishing (April 16, 2011)
Product Dimensions: 9.8 x 1.2 x 12.2 inches
Format: PDF Text TXT book
To this day, I still have not read the book all the way through. I did get to meet the author, Steve Yerrid who lives in my area. He signed my book, so now this book means even more to me. I know that he took a lot of time and effort to make this a great book for any baseball lover....
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Thomas Kreller, M. Sc.
Electrical Stimulation of bone cells
Betreuer: Dr. R. Detsch, Prof. Dr.-Ing. habil. Aldo R. Boccaccini
Electrical stimulation (ES) has long been used to successfully treat non-healing bone fractures and has recently been shown to stimulate bone cells to migrate, proliferate, align and differentiate . The objective of the DFG project “Electrical Stimulation of bone cells” is the consolidation of both osteoblasts and osteoclasts in one ES set-up to provide similar stimulation conditions. This project involves collaboration of our Institute (PI: Dr. R. Detsch) with Dr. Anika Jonitz-Heincke, Orthopaedic Hospital and Polyclinic, University Medicine Rostock. The influence of ES on bone remodelling (cell proliferation, differentiation and activation of mesenchymal and hematopoietic stem cells) will be systematically investigated in-vitro. Based on the relevance of osteoclasts in bone metabolism and healing , this project focuses initially on the electrical stimulation of monocytes, pre-osteoclasts and osteoclast-like cells on modified metallic substrates. To achieve this goal electroconductive materials will be functionalized to mimic natural bone surfaces . Various coating methods will be adapted and evaluated.
L. Leppik et al., “Combining electrical stimulation and tissue engineering to treat large bone defects in a rat model”, Sci. Rep., vol. 8, no. 1, pp. 1–14, 2018.
J. Hum and A. R. Boccaccini, “Collagen as coating material for 45S5 bioactive glass-based scaffolds for bone tissue engineering”, Int. J. Mol. Sci., vol. 19, no. 6, 2018.
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Investment Strategy – Few Tips & Tricks to Win the Game
Investment is more
like a game played and you never know the result till the game is over.
Every game has its own plan and scheme and the same goes with investment
also which is called the investment strategy.
This investment strategy shows you how to invest your money in different types of investment which will help you attain you financial target within a particular time.
Every investment has separate categories to choose from. For example a textile store sells clothes. Again this term clothes is a vague term. Shirts, pants, dresses, skirts, undergarments are the different categories that come under the term clothes. Similarly, investing in stocks is a type of investment but again there are different types of stocks and shares of different companies available from which you choose from to invest.
If you are not thorough with the market strategy then this can be confusing due to the different types of investments. If you are aware and has learned in detail about it then your plan should match the type of investment along with the risk factors you wish to take.
If you are a novice then take the advice of an expert or a financial advisor before plunging into these investments. They can help you to plan your investments in such a way that can meet the amount risk you can take and also reaching your financial target in the desires time.
It is never advisable
to invest without a proper financial target and proper investment plan.
It will be foolish to hand over the money as investment without knowing
proper strategy and target. So if you have not yet decided on the plan
take the help of an expert and chalk out the scheme in such a way that
it benefits you in the long run without much risk.
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One question that probably pops out your head is, “Do baby wipes kill bacteria?” especially in our current world situation.
Luckily for you, I will answer that question. Plus, you will learn other ways to sanitize and make sure that your baby is free from germs and bacteria. I will also discuss the types of baby wipes and what they contain so that you will know if baby wipes can sanitize you and your baby, so read on.
In-Depth Discussion of Baby Wipes
Baby wipes have been the best sanitation tools for moms to ensure that their baby is properly sanitized. However, baby wipes don’t kill bacteria. It does not do the job that most disinfectants do.
What Do Baby Wipes Contain?
Before we can tackle the question, “Do baby wipes kill bacteria?” we first need to know what baby wipes contain. Now, what baby wipes contain depends on what kind of baby wipes you want to know about.
One of the healthiest types of baby wipes is water wipes. They are made only of water and some preservatives, and they are more absorbent and more sanitary than other types of wet wipes since they don’t contain anything else but water and chemicals.
Basic Baby Wipes
These are the first-ever baby wipes developed in the ’70s and are also known as mainstream wipes. They are a mixture of cotton, polyester, rayon, polyethylene, polypropylene, water, mild detergent, and preservatives.
Some wipes can also contain chemicals that make them fragrant. Now, these wipes have a high water content which makes them the perfect habitat for bacteria and molds.
The final type of baby wipes is organic wipes. They are the most eco-friendly type of wipes on this list.
They are green, unscented, biodegradable wipes composed of wood pulp or bamboo, pure cotton, and many other non-toxic components that make them one of the best options for your baby’s sanitation.
Do Baby Wipes Kill Bacteria?
No, baby wipes don’t kill bacteria. They don’t contain disinfectants that can kill and sanitize an area. This is because the baby’s skin can be susceptible and so it is not wise to put any disinfectants.
This is also why, as you can see, baby wipes majorly contain water and organic ingredients rather than any strong disinfectants.
How Do You Sanitize?
You don’t always have to rely on baby wipes to keep your baby and yourself clean. You can and have to wash your hands and make sure that they are washed carefully and well.
And then, you can begin changing your baby’s diapers this way:
- Grab a wipe and wipe your baby’s bottom with it, and then throw away the wipe and the diaper.
- Wash your hands carefully and remember the 20-second rule to ensure that you have taken the time to wash every crevice and every corner of your hand.
- Wash the baby’s hands to ensure that they are also well sanitized since some babies love sticking their hands into the diaper area.
- Use sanitary wipes instead if you still are not comfortable with using towels.
Do You Need Baby Wipes?
No, you don’t need baby wipes. So, if you happen to run out of it, you won’t have to worry because you can wash your hands and wash your baby’s hands.
You can also wear gloves while changing your baby’s diapers or use isopropyl alcohol for your hands or the area you cleaned.
Furthermore, you can also make use of towels if you want to sanitize your baby or if you want to sanitize yourself. You can soak it with warm water and alcohol, and it is one of the best options to sanitize. Know more about baby wipes.
Baby wipes have been the best friend for parents. It has also been a go-to for people to wipe an area or their hands quickly. But do baby wipes kill bacteria? The answer is no. See, baby wipes contain water and many other organic ingredients, but they do not contain any other chemicals that will kill bacteria and kill germs.
This is why I discussed all the other options for you to sanitize yourself and your baby. You now have more opportunities to make sure that you and your baby are free of germs and other contaminants. There are a lot of other options to sanitize yourself. Make sure that your baby’s skin is safe from any irritations.
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President Donald Trump’s administration has sent mixed signals regarding a new report that the US may stay in the Paris climate accord.
The Wall Street Journal reported on Saturday that at a meeting in Montreal, US officials broached the idea of a compromise that could keep the country in the global agreement if the country’s commitment to reducing greenhouse gas emissions was lowered.
In response to the report, top administration officials have leaned heavily on the ambiguity in Trump’s announcement on Paris in June, emphasising that the president said he would be open to renegotiating the deal.
The White House pushed back on the framing of the report as an official shift in the administration’s policy.
“There has been no change in the United States’ position on the Paris agreement. As the President has made abundantly clear, the United States is withdrawing unless we can re-enter on terms more favourable to our country,” White House press secretary Sarah Huckabee Sanders told Business Insider in a statement on Saturday.
Sanders also wrote in a tweet that the administration had always said there was a possibility the US could stay in the agreement, which 195 nations signed in 2015 to keep the planet from warming by what scientists believe is a key threshold.
Our position on the Paris agreement has not changed. @POTUS has been clear, US withdrawing unless we get pro-America terms.
— Sarah Sanders (@PressSec) September 16, 2017
Appearing on “Fox & Friends” on Sunday, Trump counsellor Kellyanne Conway dismissed the sourcing of the report, saying “somebody representing the EU made some noises,” and that the Trump “hasn’t changed at all” on Paris.
“Go back and look at all of his reasons for withdrawing in the first place. None of that has changed as far as we can see,” Conway said.
The ‘president’s ears are open’
But other advisers seemed to send more mixed messages.
Speaking to “Fox News Sunday,” National Security Adviser H.R. McMaster said Saturday’s piece was a “false report”, but said the “president’s ears are open” if other nations want to renegotiate the deal.
And in an interview on “This Week”, McMaster argued that the agreement was in fact not strong enough for Trump, saying the Paris pact “gave the biggest polluters, the biggest carbon emitters, a free ride,” while simultaneously arguing the accord didn’t carve out any space for “clean fossil fuels.”
But he refused to say the US will definitively leave the agreement, emphasising that in his speech announcing his departure from the deal, Trump “left the door open to reentering at some later time if there can be a better deal for the United States.”
“I would just go back to what the president said,” McMaster said. “He’s open to any discussions that will help us improve the environment, that will help us ensure energy security, and will advance our prosperity and the prosperity of American workers and American businesses.”
“So is is possible the United States would stay in if you can get a new agreement?” host George Stephanopoulos asked.
“If there’s an agreement that benefits the American people, certainly,” McMaster said.
Secretary of State Rex Tillerson also attempted to thread the needle, saying Trump would not entirely rule out staying in the agreement.
In an interview on “Face The Nation,” Tillerson emphasised that National Economic Council director Gary Cohn was developing ways for the US to “be helpful” outside of the agreement, though he did not specify any ways the US would commit to reducing carbon emissions.
Trump specifically took issue with the US goal in the agreement of reducing greenhouse gas emissions by 26 percent to 28 percent by 2025.
“I think the plan is for director Cohn to consider other ways in which we can work with partners in the Paris climate accord,” Tillerson said.
But Tillerson also added that “under the right conditions” the US could stay in the accord.
“The president said he’s open to finding those conditions where we can remain engaged with others on what we all agree is still a challenging issue,” Tillerson said.
When he announced the US departure in June, Trump’s request to renegotiate the Paris climate accord was ridiculed and dismissed by other world leaders.
Other countries and world leaders roundly rejected Trump’s request to renegotiate the deal, which took years to finalise.
Since then, the president has teased that the US could remain in the agreement. During a visit to Paris earlier this year, Trump told reporters, “Something could happen with respect to the Paris accords; let’s see what happens.”
Though the US last month officially sent a letter to the United Nations officially announcing it would withdraw from Paris, the State Department said the US would continue to participate in climate change meetings during the years-long withdrawal process.
Because of the way the Paris agreement was designed, it will take years for the US to fully exit it. According to its rules, the earliest Trump could officially exit the pact would be 4 November, 2020 – the day after the next presidential election.
This article was originally published by Business Insider.
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PA3CLQ's Leuke Linken Nr. 377
A GREAT DISPLAY ITEM ................McElroy chart
Ted McElroy, world champion telegrapher during the 1920s and 30s, created his famous Chart of Codes in 1943. It was printed on a cloth backing and measured 25 by 38 inches......................
At over 2 x 3 feet, this is a great display item for the telegraph instrument collector or amateur radio operator.
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As many of our long-time list members know, the "slowspeedwire" Yahoo Group was originally established as a forum to aid those who were either learning American Morse or those who were working through the technical problems associated with setting up their instruments for the dial-up telegraph hubs.
However, over time, this group has slowly evolved into a default forum for a wide range of telegraph related topics.
However, this does present a few interesting problems, such as:
* New Morse Telegraph Club members have complained that they were unaware that the club had an e-mail forum.
Simply put, few new members put "slowspeedwire" and "Morse Telegraph Club" together.
* The title "slowspeedwire" is somewhat "limiting," in that it really doesn't fit the broad range of discussions that take place here.
Undoubtedly, some assume the "slowspeedwire" is limited only to the original intent of the group, which is that of a forum for those learning Morse.
* Finally, the group is open to everyone, which is, for the most part, a very good thing.
However, there are times when it is appropriate to seek input from only our Morse Telegraph Club members.
There are also times we would like to distribute information that is appropriately limited to MTC members.
Such topics as financial reports, requests for input on club projects, suggestions for museum projects, requests for volunteers and other subjects are often best limited to our members in good standing.
Based on these and other factors, we have created a new "Yahoo Group" entitled "Morse Telegraph Club."
The purpose of this new group is NOT to eliminate the "slowspeedwire" group.
Rather, it is intended to serve members of the Morse Telegraph Club for purposes such as:
* Keeping members, chapters and officers in touch with each other.
* Soliciting ideas for improving the club.
* Disseminating information intended for club members.
* In-depth discussions about telegraph history, telegraph demonstrations, re-enactments, and the like.
Over time, we would like to see the groups evolve to be divided as follows:
Morse Telegraph Club: A forum for those who are active in MTC.
This forum would be the "go-to" place for discussions about telegraph history, club activities, advice for telegraph demonstrations, re-enactments, museum projects, requests for volunteers and the like.
Slowspeedwire: This forum would be the "go-to" place for those who are new to telegraphy.
Here, members could ask questions about basic telegraph technology, ask for advice regarding how to learn Morse, and similar questions.
MorseKOB: This forum has always been intended primarily as a vehicle for technical questions about the MorseKOB program and operational questions about using the MorseKOB system.
Please allow me to reiterate: This is not a request for anyone to leave the "slowspeedwire" group (not that we could make anyone do so anyway! LOL). Everyone is welcome to continue using it.
However, we would like to encourage those who are MTC members to join the new "Morse Telegraph Club" group.
One can be a member of more than one group so feel free to stay with "slowspeedwire" and feel free to continue to use it as you have.
In order to subscribe to the new "Morse Telegraph Club" Yahoo Group, simple send an e-mail to:
Your e-mail request should include your first and last name so that I can check it against the Morse Telegraph Club roster. Like the slowspeedwire group, this is also "restricted" group, which simply means the moderator must approve all memberships on the list.
This is done primarily to prevent spam.
Obviously, all MTC members will be automatically approved.
Should you have any questions, please feel free to contact me directly via e-mail.
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This book provides detailed, state-of-the-art information and guidelines on the latest developments, innovations, and clinical procedures in image-guided and adaptive radiation therapy. The first section discusses key methodological and technological issues in image-guided and adaptive radiation therapy, including use of implanted fiducial markers, management of respiratory motion, image-guided stereotactic radiosurgery and stereotactic body radiation therapy, three-dimensional conformal brachytherapy, target definition and localization, and PET/CT and biologically conformal radiation therapy. The second section provides practical clinical information on image-guided adaptive radiation therapy for cancers at all common anatomic sites and for pediatric cancers. The third section offers practical guidelines for establishing an effective image-guided adaptive radiation therapy program.Required Supervision Levels for Certain Image-guided Radiation Therapy Services Supervision Level CPT, Current Procedural ... designate codes applicable to qualified independent psychologists; 5 and 6 were added for codes applicable to audiologists and physical therapists. ... TABLE 22.3 CPT Description What This Means in Practice 76950 77014 77421 Ultrasound CT Stereoscopic kV 1aGeneralanbsp;...
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“Right now is a good time to be an entrepreneur… Ten years ago, if you said you’re an entrepreneur people thought you couldn’t get a job, and now this is real,” said Andrew Hyde from Techstars.
Unlike most conferences in the Lebanon, AltCity’s Launch Summit stood out in both its venue and content. With more than 50 partners including Techstars, Smart ESA Business School, Torch, UNICEF Lebanon, and Berytech, the event was a must attend for early stage startups looking for inspiration and guidance.
Hundreds gathered at the woody campus of Ecole Superieure des Affaires (ESA) to pitch, lecture, debate and collaborate. For a relatively small ecosystem like Lebanon’s, most refreshing were the list of international guests including Hyde from Techstars, the world’s largest accelerator, and Luke Iseman from Y Combinator, often called the most powerful global startup accelerator. Other international highlights include Luke Krueger, president of VA Angels, Canada’s most active angel investment groups, and Matteo Bartolomeo from Italy’s Avazi think tank.
Throughout the day, three themes hovered above the rest: Think local problems with global impact; simple hardware, and remember: your idea is worthless.
Solve local problems
“Make your laundry list of excuses on why this country is not as good as it can be, and start with that,” said Iseman.
Many of the panelists at the event encouraged would-be entrepreneurs to take advantage of Lebanon’s chaos and shortcomings. In one discussion, titled ‘The bigger the problem, the bigger the opportunity,’ Asmahan Zein discussed how Aramex was founded out of a need for delivery services in the midst of Lebanon’s bloody civil war.
By solving your environment's problems you are also ensuring you are directly in touch with your target audience. It does not, however, mean your solution cannot be solving a global problem as well.
“Use your environment for what it’s good at. We’re about to have political turmoil in the US,” said Iseman. “We can learn a lot from people who have had turmoil for a lot longer.”
Think simple hardware
There is a need for more simple hardware solutions, discussed panelists. While software solutions remain desirable, some infrastructure solutions like better water pipes, improved waste water solutions or smarter roads have a guaranteed global reach.
Hardware solutions no longer take a lot of time and are expensive, noted Iseman. An example given of a successful hardware startup is Mexico city-based Nebia showerhead that uses 70 percent less water, the company says. Other hardware innovations highlighted by James Cranwell-Ward, innovation specialist at UNICEF Lebanon included the Raspberry Pi, used to help educate young Syrian refugees across Lebanon, and the Digital Drum, a solar-powered computing kiosk.
Cranwell-Ward noted that the notion that social innovation solutions do not make money is false. He encouraged startups thinking of solving for social needs to reach out UNICEF’s Innovation Lab.
But before jumping to hardware, assess if your heart is in it, warns Hyde.
“I want people with passion to try it out. If you don’t have a passion – don’t search for something that other people think is cool,” he said.
Your idea is worthless
Assuming your idea is gold and keeping it a secret is counterproductive. Unless an entrepreneur has tried the idea and proven users want the product, then the idea is worthless. When coming up with an idea, entrepreneurs should be keen on sharing it with everyone they know. Discussing the product only helps improve the idea rather than encourage copy-cats.
“We had over 200 people copy the Startup Weekend model, and I can’t name one of them. I was fearful at first when I should have reached out to say how I can support,” said Hyde.
The Launch Summit also included a pitching competition by early stage startups, workshops and talks including yoga for success, corporate entrepreneurship, global trends in sharing economy, and preparing for investment in Lebanon. Panels also hosted talks by local and regional entrepreneurs, such as May Khalil of Beirut Marathon, Michel Elefteriades of Music Hall, and Walid Hanna of Middle East Venture Partners, and Sami Ismail from Syria’s Intellect.
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She spent last summer in a Bolivian rain forest, tracking and catching some very peculiar primates known as saddle-back tamarins, before releasing them back into the wild.
The squirrel-sized monkeys, from the family Callitrichidae, are closely related to the more well-known lion tamarins, distinctive for their faces encircled by thick manes and often found in zoos.
Porter zeroed in on the saddle-back variety because they are relatively easy to catch and because of their highly unusual social system, which is of interest to scientists who study evolution. The system is built around cooperative breeding, whereby one breeding female typically has a set of twins, and the young are raised by a group of about seven adult monkeys.
“Some social insects, such as bees, have this cooperative breeding pattern, but it’s peculiar for a mammal and very peculiar for a primate,” says Porter, who has been studying saddle-backs since 1997. “Among primates, extensive cooperative breeding is only seen in Callitrichids and in humans. For example, in some human cultures, grandmothers play an extensive role in rearing their grandchildren.”
Now Porter’s research on the monkeys is receiving a major boost from the prestigious Leakey Foundation, which aims to increase understanding of human origins, evolution and behavior. The foundation awarded a $22,000 grant to support a comprehensive study of the animals in the wild, headed by Porter, University of Texas at Austin anthropologist Anthony Di Fiori (who runs a specialized genetics lab) and Wendy Erb of Lehman College, City University of New York.
The study aims to shed light on familial relationships among the monkeys and determine why and how the animals practice cooperative breeding.
“First, we want to find out who’s helping raise the infants – is it the father, the siblings or non-relatives?” Porter says. “The latter would require the most explaining because, according to one widely accepted hypothesis in evolutionary theory, individuals typically help raise their kin.”
Non-relatives could be assisting with child rearing as a form of practice for when they have their own offspring, or possibly as a means of courtship, with males demonstrating that they would make good fathers.
Then again, it might be that some saddle-backs just have a more helpful personality than others. There are at least 10 hypotheses to test, Porter says.
Working in Bolivia with colleagues from other universities and NIU students, Porter has collected DNA samples from numerous groups of saddle-back tamarins. In fact, three of her past students – Nadia Lopez, Ileana Diaz and Colin Jackson – have helped collect data on tamarins and conducted their master’s theses on monkeys at Porter’s field site. This summer, Porter and NIU graduate student Sylvia Orellana will travel to Bolivia to train a team of Bolivians on how to collect more data.
“One reason I chose to study saddle-back tamarins is because they are naturally curious, so their response is not to run away but rather to check you out,” Porter says. “Within a matter of weeks, they’ll accept a person trekking in the forest alongside them.”
The monkeys are not among the brightest creatures, the NIU anthropologist adds.
“They don’t naturally encounter bananas in the forest, but they quickly become fond of the ones we leave out. Then, using bananas as bait, we set out traps that have 10 little compartments, and each has a door with a string. We can pull the string from a blind about 15 feet away as the monkeys enter the trap. Luckily, they don’t really notice what has happened to their neighbors, so you can actually catch a whole group this way.”
The animals’ DNA samples will be studied in Di Fiori’s laboratory to determine kinship.
But even DNA matches can be tricky business because researchers have previously discovered genetic chimerism in saddle-backs. A chimera is an animal that has two or more populations of genetically distinct cells. (The term comes from the Greek mythological creature Chimera, whose body was a mix of body parts from a lion, a serpent and a goat.)
Porter’s study could also shed more light on this trait among the saddle-backs.
“They always have twins, and it turns out twin saddle-back tamarins swap some DNA while in the womb, so they become chimeras,” Porter says. “In humans, chimerism is extremely rare – although you sometimes see it on crime-investigation shows as it adds a complicated twist for the detectives to figure out – but in my little monkeys, it’s common.”
Researchers know chimerism exists within the animals’ blood cells; less is known about whether it is evident in reproductive cells.
“If chimerism exists in their reproductive cells, a male saddle-back might have the sperm of his brother. This makes things crazy, because it would be difficult to determine which brother fathered an offspring,” Porter says.
“They are pretty wild little monkeys,” she adds.
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From New York Times best-selling author H. W. Brands, a masterful biography of the Civil War general and two-term president who saved the Union twice, on the battlefield and in the White House, holding the country together at two critical turning points in our history.
Ulysses Grant rose from obscurity to discover he had a genius for battle, and he propelled the Union to victory in the Civil War. After Abraham Lincoln's assassination and the disastrous brief presidency of Andrew Johnson, America turned to Grant again to unite the country, this time as president. In Brands' sweeping, majestic full biography, Grant emerges as a heroic figure who was fearlessly on the side of right. He was a beloved commander in the field but willing to make the troop sacrifices necessary to win the war, even in the face of storms of criticism. He worked valiantly to protect the rights of freedmen in the South; Brands calls him the last presidential defender of black civil rights for nearly a century. He played it straight with the American Indians, allowing them to shape their own fate even as the realities of Manifest Destiny meant the end of their way of life. He was an enormously popular president whose memoirs were a huge best seller; yet within decades of his death his reputation was in tatters, the victim of Southerners who resented his policies on Reconstruction. In this page-turning biography, Brands now reconsiders Grant's legacy and provides a compelling and intimate portrait of a man who saved the Union on the battlefield and consolidated that victory as a resolute and principled political leader.
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"This authoritative biography of an obscure failure and occasional drunkard who became a Civil War generalissimo and the 18th U.S. president is a study in two kinds of moral courage.... [Brands'] narrative of Grant's military campaigns in particular is lucid, colorful, and focused on telling moments of decision. His Grant emerges as an immensely appealing figure...with a keen mind, stout character, and unpretentious manner. The result is a fine portrait of the quintessential American hero." (Publishers Weekly)
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Maybe if that friend didn't know anything or hadn't read much about Grant and the Civil War. Probably not if they have any knowledge on the subject. I would heartily recommend Mr. Brands other books though.
I actually had to push through to the finish. It did reinforce my strong opinion of Grant. If there was one fresh angle it would be a more balanced and higher opinion of his presidency, common opinion seems to portray it as too corrupt and not a very profitable presidency. He did a lot for Civil Rights and to keep reconstruction on some form of forward momentum, to keep politicians from erasing the positives gained from the Civil War.
I'm not sure, I'd have to give the sample a listen because I didn't really enjoy how he did this book. He delivers absolutely every single sentence like its the most important thing you've ever heard and in an over-the-top dramatic fashion with pauses every 10 words and tailing off on the last couple words. I was pretty disappointed and distracted by his reading, maybe he'd do a fiction story better.
Maybe I just knew too much about the subject already because I'd probably rather have spent the time on another book. It might be worth the investment if you are new to Grant though.
Don't let my review keep you from trying Brands other books, he is a great author and I actually wish he'd narrated the book, he's very interesting to listen to.
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OCTOBER 20, 1999
Stranger than fiction: Strange Formula One team owners
BY JOE SAWARD
Formula 1 has always had people with strange histories. Long before the World Championship began in 1950 the Grand Prix world attracted unusual people. The 1920s were very colorful with the drivers including Amedee Ozanphant, a Cubist painter, Juan Zanelli, a diplomat from Chile and Mademoiselle Helle Nice, who was a stripper at the Casino de Paris. There were bankers and aristocrats and heirs to vast fortunes. In those days there were very few organized teams outside the factory operations and so the drivers used to run their own cars.
It was only in the late 1940s and early 1950s that non-factory teams began to be a regular part of the Formula 1 scene. This was helped in the 1960s by the fact that anyone could build a "kit car" using a Cosworth engine, a Hewland gearbox and one of several established chassis builders. The colorful Alejandro de Tomaso - who was rumoured to have fled his native Argentina after being involved in a plot to assassinate President Juan Peron - did just that with Frank Williams in 1969.
In the early 1970s it was still possible for a designer such as Peter Connewto build their own cars but by the mid-1970s prices began to rise and only the really wealthy or well-connected could afford to enter their own F1 teams. this was the era of the successful businessmen such as Walter Wolf, Roger Penske, Gunther Schmid and Guy Ligier. They were characters: Schmid and Ligier both being famous for their explosive tempers which could result in them quite literally jumping up and down on their own machinery. Others bought cars from established teams and ran them independently. Notable among these was Brett Lunger, an American war hero who was a member of the duPont family and so had access to a vast fortune from the chemical giant. The last such privateer was Mexican Hector Rebaque, who came from a wealthy background. Eventually, however, the rich kids began buying drives in the existing teams - a tradition which continues today with the likes of Pedro Diniz.
The mid-1980s was a period of a cost-explosion in F1 as the big car manufacturers began to get involved in the sport and so team bosses needed more and more money. This made it inevitable that some of them would be outside the law or just seriously unstable. It was a very curious time with an ever-increasing list of team bosses who went from F1 to jails, including Ligier's Cyril de Rouvre, who wasted his family sugar fortune on funding two F1 teams and a political career for himself; Brabham had two team bosses who ended up in jail: Swiss Joachim Luhti, who kept everyone amused by turning up on the pitwall with a "secretary" on each arm and a knotted handkerchief on his head; and Ted Ball, who poured other people's money into two different teams. There were many others who grabbed attention with their curious behavior. Gerard Larrousse had a habit of picking unstable partners. His first - Didier Calmels - shot and killed his wife after a domestic argument and ended up going to jail. Japan's Akira Akagi made a big splash in F1 but then got into trouble with the authorities.
Even in the modern era there have been some strange and unexplained happenings. Flavio Briatore, for example, had a bomb explode his house in London for no apparent reason. Everyone said it was an accident - but Briatore moved house quite quickly afterwards...
When asked about the people involved in Formula 1, Bernie Ecclestone once replied with the famous phrase, "Well, they're all a bit mad really." He was quite right. Normal people do not generally end up running racing teams. It is not an easy thing to do and most sane people would settle for a quiet life and a sensible job instead.
Funnily enough, two men who might have won places in the top 10 strange team owners list are now President of the International Automobile Federal - Max Mosley, former boss of the March F1 team; and Ecclestone himself, who owned Brabham for 15 years. Neither one makes it although I am not sure this is a wise move for the author as NOT including them may be more upsetting for them than being included...
Sadly their stories were just not crazy enough - at least not the ones we could prove!
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The Old School Thai
Prince Birabongse Bhanutej Bhanubandh was a member of Siam's royal family and was a grandson of King Mongkut, who opened the country to Western influence in the late 19th century and was made famous by the musical comedy, "The King and I". As a result the Siamese royal family became closely linked with Britain and in 1927 - at the age of 13 - Prince Bira was sent from Siam to attend the most famous of all British public schools - Eton College. While he was there was a revolution in Siam and after considerable disruption including several coups d'etat and other conspiracies King Prajadhipok - the Prince's uncle - was forced to abdicate. Prince Bira decided to stay in England and went on to study at Cambridge University. Another Siamese Prince - Bira's cousin, Prince Chula Chakrabongse, ran a racing team called White Mouse Racing and the 21-year-old Bira thought he might try his hand at motor racing. He became a very successful racer on the British club scene in the late 1930s. At the same time he met and married an Englishwoman. When war broke out Thailand (as Siam had become in 1939) was occupied by the Japanese army and so Bira decided to stay in Britain, living quietly in a cottage in Cornwall. When the war was over the 31-year-old Prince decided to re-establish White Mouse Racing. There was little motor racing in England in the immediate post-war years and the team closed down but Bira went to Europe and competed in major international events with Maseratis, Gordinis and OSCAs painted up in the yellow and blue racing livery of Siam. His most important victory was at Chimay in Belgium but he finished fourth in the French GP one year at Reims. He eventually retired from racing and thereafter lived a quiet life, splitting his time between Thailand and a villa in the south of France. Later he moved to Geneva in Switzerland and he died at the age of 74 in London.
Poor little rich kid
Money was never a problem for American racer Lance Reventlow but his family caused him a lot of heartache. His mother Barbara Hutton was the richest woman in the world, having inherited the huge fortune when her grandfather Frank Winfield Woolworth, founder of the Woolworth store chain, died. When she was 24 she married a Danish Count called Kurt Haugwitz-Reventlow (her second marriage). The relationship was shortlived but produced a son called Lance Reventlow. The two parents then spent years fighting for custody of the child. Hutton soon married film star Cary Grant and although they soon divorced Lance regarded Grant as a father figure and spent a lot of time in the unreal world of Hollywood. When he was 19 he became interested in motor racing and competed in club events in California. He was a pal of James Dean. On the day he died Dean met Reventlow while out driving around the hills of California. Reventlow eventually decided to go to Europe to race and spent a season racing Cooper Formula 2 cars. He then returned to the United States and set up his own team called Reventlow Automobile Inc to build sportscars which he called Scarabs. These were quite successful and he immediately decided to build Formula 1 cars. The Scarab was a front-engineered car but arrived just as the rear-engined revolution was hitting F1. Reventlow drove the Scarab in the first half of the 1960 season but the car was not competitive and he eventually borrowed a factory Cooper which he qualified for one single Grand Prix. He went back the US, lost interest in motor racing and spent the rest of his confused life in an out of gossip columns. He died in a plane crash while flying in an electrical storm in the Rocky Mountains. His family, which had fought over him in life fought over him in death as well, his mother wanting him buried in the Woolworth family plot and his wife wanting him in Colorado.
The spy who lost out to industrial espionage
Don Nichols spent most of the 1950s and 1960s living and working in Japan - earning money as a tyre dealer and mixing with the small motor racing community in Japan. Eventually he went back to the United States and established a company called Advanced Vehicle Systems Inc. in California and began building racing cars which he called Shadows. The team's logo was a cloaked man with broad hat hiding his face. The first Shadows were raced in CanAm sportscar events in the US but Nichols soon landed a big sponsorship deal from the UOP oil company and entered Formula 1 with cars designed by Tony Southgate, drivers Jackie Oliver and George Follmer and team manager Alan Rees. The team did well and in 1977 Alan Jones won the team's first - and only - victory at the Austrian GP. But by then UOP had withdrawn and at the end of 1977 Oliver (who had become the team's sponsor-hunter), Rees, Southgate, driver Riccardo Patrese and sponsor Franco Ambrosio decided to leave Shadow and form a new team. It was called Arrows. They built the first Arrows FA/1 car in just 53 days. Nichols immediately sued them claiming that the design was the same as the Shadow DN9 and that he was the victim of industrial espionage. The High Court in London ruled that Nichols was right and Arrows was banned from using the FA/1. The following day a new Arrows A1 appeared for the first time, the team having expected to lose the legal battle. Nichols rebuilt the Shadow team but money was short and not very competitive. In 1981 he sold the operation to Chinese businessman Teddy Yip.
It later emerged that Nichols had chosen the spy logo for a good reason. He had been a spy with America's Central Intelligence Agency during his years in Japan - using Tokyo as a base for activities in Korea and Vietnam.
Spending the family fortune
Lord Thomas Alexander Fermor-Hesketh, the third baron of Hesketh, was born in 1950 and succeeded to the title at the age of five. A wild youth, Hesketh ran away from school but at 21 he was finally allowed access to the family fortune. Egged on by a friend Anthony Horsley - who was known as "Bubbles" - Hesketh decided to set up a racing team and hired James Hunt, who had been fired that year from the March Formula 3 team for crashing too much. Hesketh bought "Hunt the Shunt" a couple of Surtees chassis - one for Formula 2 and the other for occasional F1 races. Hesketh set out to annoy the motor racing fraternity by dressing his team in gaudy uniforms and spending excessively. The cars were run in red, white and blue colours Hesketh refusing to run with sponsorship. The money-wasting reached absurd levels at Monaco where Hesketh used to send his helicopter to nearby Nice to bring back the morning papers and croissants for the guests on his yacht. After running a March in F1 in 1973 Hesketh decided to build his own cars for the 1974 season and gave Harvey Postlethwaite the chance to prove himself as a designer. The cars were built in converted stables behind the Hesketh family stately home at Easton Neston, near Silverstone. Hesketh even announced plans to build his own engines. The Hesketh 308 proved to be quite competitive and Hunt won the 1974 International Trophy F1 race at Silverstone.The car was developed for 1975 and Hunt won the Dutch GP that summer and finished fourth in the World Championship. Hesketh, however, was running short of money and after failing to find sponsorship announced that he was closing down the team. He sold the cars to oilman Walter Wolf. After his wild times in F1 Hesketh became more conventional and by the mid 1980s had become a member of the Conservative government and in 1990 a junior minister at the Department of Trade and Industry. Until recently he was also the President of the British Racing Drivers Club. He remains an advisor to Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II in his role as Privy Councellor, a job he has held since 1991.
A real taste for danger
Refrigerators were big business in the 1960s and the Lec company grew to be the most successful in Britain. The son of the owner of the company was David Purley and after leaving school he joined the British Army and became an officer in the elite Parachute Regiment, seeing action during the civil war between South Yemen and the Communist-backed National Liberation Front for control of the country. He also survived a partial failure of his parachute during a training jump which left him feeling that he was lucky to be alive. After leaving the army he was encouraged by Derek Bell - a family friend - to try motor racing and he began competing in sportscar events in 1968 with an AC Cobra. In 1970 he switched to single-seaters and ran a team called Lec Refrigeration Racing in Formula 3. He won a variety of races in F3 and moved to F2 in 1972 and into Formula 1 with a Lec March 731 in 1973. That year he won a George Medal - one of the highest awards for bravery in Britain - for his efforts to save Roger Williamson from his burning car at the Dutch Grand Prix. In the winter of 1976-77 - after a period in Formula 5000 - Purley commissioned designer Mike Pilbeam to build a Lec F1 car and this was ready to race in 1977. He qualified for several Grands Prix that summer but in qualifying for the British GP suffered a stuck throttle and crashed head-on into a wall at 108mph. His life was saved by rescue crews at the scene of the crash but it took many months for him to recover from multiple fractures to his legs, pelvis and ribs. He did eventually have a second Lec F1 car built and did one or two events. In 1979 he raced in the British F1 series with a Shadow but then he quit racing and turned instead to running the family business and a new passion - stunt flying. In the summer of 1985 he crashed into the sea while doing some stunt flying off the south coast of England in his Pitts Special stunt plane. Not even David Purley could survive that accident...
The team that never was
In the autumn of 1989 a young and well-connected Mexican businessman called Fernando Gonzalez Luna announced that he intended to create a Mexican racing team in Formula 1. He established a company called GLAS - Gonzalez Luna Associates - and began raising sponsorship from Mexican companies and investors. The project looked to be going well when it was announced in early 1990 that he had persuaded Lamborghini Engineering in Italy not only to supply him with the new Lamborghini V12 engine, but also to expand their operations and build Formula 1 chassis for him as well. Everything was to be ready in time for the 1991 season. The Italians hired a team of designers and work on a chassis began while the Mexicans made preparations, including naming Mexican driver Giovanni Aloi as the team's test driver. GLAS raised $20m to pay for the exciting project.
Suddenly in June 1990 Gonzalez Luna disappeared without trace. The money raised disappeared with him and the plans for the team collapsed. It was clear that Gonzalez Luna had pulled off a successful confidence trick.
Lamborghini Engineering decided that rather than throw away the money that it had invested in the chassis department that it would try to find someone else to run a team using the same package and eventually Italian financier Carlo Patrucco was convinced to start an organization called Modena Team. The team signed up drivers Nicola Larini and Eric Van de Poele and despite having to pre-qualify the team got off to a good start when Larini finished seventh in the opening race of 1991 in Phoenix, Arizona. At the San Marino Van de Poele was running fourth when his car broke down in the final laps of the race. After that the team ran out of money and was closed down at the end of the 1991 season.
The police are still looking for Gonzalez Luna...
Father Christmas the fraudster
Formula 1 team owners tend to be fairly conventional in their appearance as they do not wish to upset their sponsors. They believe that they should always look neat and tidy and wear uniforms as a sign of their professionalism. Belgian millionaire Jean-Pierre Van Rossem did not worry about such things. He had made a lot of money with his company Moneytron and he did not care what people thought of the way he looked. He had long white hair and a beard down to his waist and looked a little like a rather sweaty Father Christmas. The eccentric Belgian Ferrari fan made around $150m with his Moneytron investment scheme and began to spend it all on motor racing. He started out as a sponsor of the Onyx F1 team in 1989 - insisting that the cars be painted pink and blue. By the midseason he had bought a majority shareholding in the team. He came close to securing the factory Porsche engine deal at the end of the year and when Porsche decided to join Arrows instead, Van Rossem sold the team to Swiss millionaire Peter Monteverdi at the beginning of 1990. A year later he was charged with fraud after Moneytron collapsed and was sentenced to five years in prison. He managed to stay out of jail by appealing the sentence on a variety of different counts and somehow managed to get himself elected to parliament to gain immunity from prosecution. He shocked the Belgians by writing a guide to the country's brothels and by making loud republican statements while parliamentarians were taking their oaths of allegiance to Belgium's King Albert II. Eventually his immunity was lifted and he was sent to jail - and ordered to pay $30m to his former clients. He has since served his sentence and has been released.
Van Rossem, incidentally, has his wife's body in a deep freeze in the hope that one day medical science will one day revive her.
Modern museum pieces
In the early 1960s Peter Monteverdi set out to become Switzerland's most successful racing driver. He built his own Formula Junior cars - called MBMs - and later built his own MBM Formula 1 car. This suffered a suspension failure at Hockenheim and Monteverdi was fortunate to survive an accident similar to the one which later killed the great Jim Clark as the car went into the forest beside the track. He suffered multiple injuries but gradually recovered. He decided to give up racing and buried the remains of the MBM F1 in the foundations of a car showroom he built in his home town of Binningen. He began building his own road cars and when this was not a success he turned the show room into his own car museum. The eccentric Monteverdi became known as Switzerland's most overt homosexual, not caring what anyone thought. In 1990 he bought the Onyx team from Jean-Pierre Van Rossem and renamed it Monteverdi. At first F1 was amused by him and by the old London double decker bus which served as his motorhome but when he began to talk about designing the 1991 car himself, most of the original team members left. The rest departed when he moved the team to Switzerland in the midseason.Unperturbed, Monteverdi hired a crew of Swiss mechanics. The standards of preparation fell dramatically and drivers reported that Monteverdi was replacing old parts on the cars from the machines in his museum. After a high-speed accident in Hungary Gregor Foitek decided to quit the team. The cars failed to turn up at the Belgian GP after Goodyear refused to supply tyres until they were paid. Monteverdi never returned. He died in Binningen in July 1998 at the age of 64.
Shoe magnate gets the boot
Andrea Sassetti was an Italian shoe manufacturer who ran a company called Andrea Moda. In the autumn of 1991 he decided to buy Enzo Coloni's unsuccessful Formula 1 team. In an effort to help Sassetti Formula 1 boss Bernie Ecclestone put him in contact with Simtek Research, which had designed a Formula 1 car in secret in 1990 in the hope that BMW would decide to return to Formula 1. It was agreed that Simtek would supply Sassetti with chassis. Ecclestone also convinced a number of experienced F1 people to join the team. Sassetti started off badly by refusing to pay the $100,000 deposit necessary for a new team in F1 and drivers Alex Caffi and Enrico Bertaggia were not allowed to take part in the first race with the old Coloni machinery. Sassetti argued that he should not be made to pay the deposit because AMF was not a new team. In Mexico the team arrived with the new cars in pieces and could not run. At Imola Roberto Moreno and Perry McCarthy were nominated as the drivers but McCarthy was refused a Superlicence and Moreno failed to qualify so it was not until Monaco that Moreno was able to qualify for a race. Sassetti failed to pay his engine bills and so the team had no engines in Canada and after that most of the good staff left. The team then missed the French Grand Prix because its truck was stuck in a blockade by striking French lorry drivers. Moreno and McCarthy battled on but failed to pre-qualify for the races that summer and in August the team was warned by the FIA that it could be excluded from the World Championship if it did not improve. There were rumours from Italy that Sassetti had narrowly avoided being shot outside his factory in Italy and then he arrived at the Belgian GP and was arrested by local police for allegedly forging invoices. The following week the FIA decided that the team should be thrown out of the World Championship for bringing the sport into disrepute and when the Andrea Moda Formula truck arrived at the gates of the F1 paddock at Monza it was turned away...
Hand grenades and guns...
In 1992 Gerard Larrousse found himself with a new partner. The Venturi car company which owned half of his team sold it to a Cannes-based company called the Comstock Group and it was announced that the team would be funded through an investment scheme which would produce enough income to run the team and ensure that investors made a profit. It sounded rather unlikely but no-one in F1 really cared. Comstock was owned by a German "businessman" called Rainer Walldorf. In fact the 50-year-old German was actually called Klaus Walz and was wanted by police in several countries in connection with four different murders. The Grand Prix circus found this out when French police raided Walldorf's home at Valbonne, in the hills behind Nice, early one morning a few weeks later. He was arrested but asked if he could collect some documents from his desk and while he was doing so he pulled out a hand grenade and threatened to blow it up unless the policemen did as he ordered. They agreed and all but one of them were handcuffed to the furniture. Walldorf ordered the police inspector to drive him into the hills where a rendez-vous was arranged with an accomplice. The police inspector was left handcuffed to the car and the grenade was thrown away to explode harmlessly and Walldorf disappeared. A month later he was found by German police in a hotel. After a nine hour seige the police stormed Walldorf's room and he was killed during a gun battle, ending the shortest - and possibly the most colorful - career as a Formula 1 team owner.
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This has been one of the features that never seem to have made it to VMware products such as Player and Workstation; The ability to boot from USB. Well with some 3rd party magic this is possible
Using Plop Boot Manager all you need to do is boot from the provided floppy image or CD image and this gives you a pre boot environment that can be used to select the boot device of your choice.
This is all possible because the plop boot manager has a built-in ide cdrom and usb driver to access that hardware without the help/need of bios. You can boot the operating systems from hard disk, floppy, CD/DVD or from USB. You can start the boot manager from floppy, CD, network and there are many more ways to start the boot manager
Plop Boot Manager 5.0 – Download
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Record Type: RIE
Publication Date: 1979
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Your Money Matters. A Self-Study Program for Consumers.
Matejic, Denise M.
This consumer's (or student's) guide for a home-study money management curriculum is divided into five units of study: (1) financial planning; (2) coping with credit; (3) protection through life insurance; (4) financial aspects of housing; and (5) making your money grow. Each unit contains fact sheets, charts, and quizzes. The fact sheets in unit 1 cover guidelines for personal and family spending, budget planning, and taking financial inventory. The fact sheets in unit 2 cover different forms of credit, how to establish a credit rating, how to handle debt, buying a car on credit, and how credit laws protect the consumer. Basic types of insurance policies and guidelines for choosing a policy which matches individual needs is covered in unit 3. Unit 4 discusses various factors involved in purchasing a house, alternative housing options, homeowner's insurance, and types of mortgages. Finally, the fact sheets in unit 5 discuss establishing a personal or family savings plan, different ways to save, different methods of investment, and related information and protection for the consumer. A teacher's guide (CE 023 727) accompanies this document. (BM)
Descriptors: Adults, Budgeting, Consumer Economics, Consumer Education, Credit (Finance), Home Study, Housing, Independent Study, Instructional Materials, Insurance, Investment, Learning Activities, Money Management, Outreach Programs
New Jersey Cooperative Extension Service, Publications Distribution Center, Dudley Road, New Brunswick, NJ 08903 ($6.00)
Publication Type: Guides - Classroom - Learner
Education Level: N/A
Sponsor: Extension Service (USDA), Washington, DC. Science and Education Administration.
Authoring Institution: Rutgers, The State Univ., New Brunswick, NJ. Cooperative Extension Service.
Note: For related documents see CE 023 725-729. Parts of this document may not reproduce well due to colored pages.
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The Language Mastery Blog
150+ Free Articles & Resources to Help You Reach Fluency Anywhere in the World
Spaced Repetition Systems (or “SRS” for short) are flashcard programs designed to help you systematically learn new information—and retain old information—through intelligent review scheduling. Instead of wasting precious study time on information you already know, SRS apps like Anki allow you to focus most on new words, phrases, kanji, etc., or previously studied information that you have yet to commit to long-term memory. Read on to see how spaced repetition apps work and which SRS tools I recommend.
I spend lots of my time learning and writing about psychology. Most of my favorite language bloggers do the same. But why? Isn’t all this psychology stuff just a bunch of touchy-feely mumbo jumbo? Isn’t the only important thing in language learning how much you study? Time on task is indeed paramount to success, but the quantity of learning (although important) matters far less than the quality. And what determines the impact of your language learning time? Your psychology. Read on to see the five most insidious obstacles standing between you and fluency.
Few of you probably know that long before I was “John the Language Guy” I was “John the Bike Guy.” I got my first real mountain bike in junior high school. It was a beautiful blue GT Tequesta it changed my life forever. Suddenly, my world was not limited to just the backyard or schoolyard. I could now go anywhere my 12-year-old quads could propel me! Reflecting back 22 years later, I now realize that when learning to ride a bike or speak a foreign language, the key is building robust procedural memories that you never fully forget no matter how long you go without riding or using the language. And how does one go about learning in the first place? There are 3 fundamental principles involved in all physical and psychological transformations…
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Implementation of a conformal solder mask system
Bolek, Mark Francis
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The systems engineering approach was used to implement conformal solder mask in the manufacture of printed wiring boards (PWBs) at the AT&T Microelectronics Richmond Plant. Existing solder mask had a planar surface causing low soldering process yields on PWBs using Surface Mount Technology (SMT). SMT reduced product cost by allowing 50% more components per unit area of a PWB. Conformal solder mask processing reduced the mask thickness applied, and allowed future SMT PWBs to be manufactured. Coating methods to apply solder mask were evaluated. Two methods, curtain coating and electrostatic spray (ESS) f were chosen since no method satisfied all operational requirements. Ciba Geigy's Probimer process was implemented to meet short term revenue and capacity requirements. Probimer was an industry standard but had performance limitations. ESS met all requirements but required additional development to select a solder mask material and obtain customer approval.
- Masters Theses
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Lately I've been scouting locations for a calendar project I'm working on, and it got me thinking how little content I've come across online on how to go about it. Location scouting isn't really a science, there are a lot of ways to go about it, but there are a few simple tricks and tools to maximizing productivity in your efforts.
1. Identify your setting (Google Maps)
As with any photo planning work, it's a good idea to figure out exactly what it is you're looking for. Using a service like Google Maps (satellite & street view) can give you a few ideas of where to go, and will let you map out an area so you (hopefully) don't get lost. I prefer to mark all locations on my GPS so I don't have to constantly check where I am, but a traditional map and pencil work too, of course.
If you don't have a GPS system, you may find these apps useful:
Once you get to the location you have a bit more work to do than just looking at it. A notebook (or ipad, laptop..something to write with) to take notes on certain elements or conditions such as elements blocking sunlight, traffic, copyrighted signs/content to avoid, etc. It's also a good idea to take photos (I like to use my phone for this since everything syncs automatically to the cloud) of everything you're noting in order to later plan your shots with more accuracy.
Despite my recommendation for using a phone to take photos, I also recommend a tripod and SLR (or at least something with manual settings) in case you encounter low-light conditions, or need to expose for different elements. A speedlite and wireless trigger do not hurt either.
3. Identify the Property Owner (Permission & Permits)
Something that a lot of amateur photographers don't realize is that any kind of photo production requires a permit in areas owned by any municipality. Even if you're out in the country, many fields are privately owned, and these land owners may not appreciate you trespassing with a crew uninvited. It's essential that you have your permit or written permission before you select a final location. For information on how to get a permit, contact your local City Hall.
4. Calculate the Costs & Time Associated with your Final Selections
If this shoot is for a client, your time and travel costs are billable. Using your final selections, map out the most efficient route and use your locally recommended cost per km to make an accurate price quote. If you aren't sure what that figure is, your local government may have a recommended figure available. Here are the 2013 figures for a few of our most frequent reader locations: Canada, USA, Australia (Sorry UK, can't find anything for you). Depending on your fee structure, you may wish to add additional costs to the time you're spending travelling (for those with half day/full day rates it may already be covered).
Of course with the vast possibilities in photography there will be situations in which other considerations should be considered, this is simply a base guideline to build off of. If you have any other recommendations for location scouting techniques, please feel free to share them in the comments!
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The Humanitarian Coalition brings together Canada's leading aid agencies to finance relief efforts in times of international humanitarian crises.
As a joint Canadian approach to humanitarian response, the Humanitarian Coalition is a "one-stop-shop" for all Canadians during times of international humanitarian crises. The five member agencies of the Humanitarian Coalition work together to reduce unnecessary competition, inform the public on humanitarian needs, increase the impact of Canadian humanitarian responses and reduce administrative costs.
During humanitarian emergencies, member agencies speak to Canadians with one voice, provide direct access to disaster and response information, coordinate spokespersons and share resources, including a single phone centre, website and communications team. When disaster strikes, each member agency brings its specific expertise to implementing humanitarian programs.
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The origin of diamonds and Antwerp diamonds
What are diamonds and how do they form?
Diamonds are absolutely unique in the realm of gemstones for several reasons.
Diamonds are entirely made of 1 chemical element: carbon. Which differs considerably from all other minerals which are composed of at least two elements.
But what makes diamond a diamond is two things:
- Its crystal structure: the way the carbon atoms are regularly, repeatedly placed along the crystal lattice
- Diamonds are the only mineral which actually forms deep in the earth’s upper mantle, between 140 and 190km below the earth’s crust to be precise; and it takes an exact amount of high pressure – 45 to 60 kilobars - and high temperature - 900° to 1300° - for a diamond to actually form as a mineral.
Once formed, diamonds are brought to the surface through volcanic activity. They can be alluvial which means that the diamonds were transported through erosion, and therefore can be found in river beds, or in the ocean - for example along the coast of Namibia. Or as we more commonly know, in and around diamond pipes - for example in the Northwest territories in Canada, in Botswana, South Africa and Australia.
Another amazing fact about diamonds, is that the oldest diamonds that we have been able to date are actually billions of years old and the youngest, if we may use this term, are around 600 million years old…
- It is the hardest mineral with a ranking of 10 on Mohs scale and therefore can only be scratched by another diamond and no less. This hardness makes diamond the perfect material for cut and polish.
- Its luster is adamantine, which actually means “resembling a diamond in luster or hardness”.
- 30% of all unearthed diamonds are considered GEM quality. The rest being used for industrial purposes.
Antwerp diamonds have been known since centuries, first of all because the city of Antwerp has always been a major trade centre for all sorts of goods and secondly, but most importantly, because Antwerp has been at the heart of international diamond trade since the 15th century, in fact the first written record found of a diamond trade occurring in Antwerp was in 1447.
Antwerp diamonds are also very much known for their excellency in terms of technical processes used to cut a diamond. Antwerp diamonds are the symbol of knowledge and technicality that had been developed by cutters, polishers and the city remains today known for its ethical supply chain and reliable businesses.
Baunat elegantly puts forward the uniqueness of Antwerp diamonds through a variety of designs. Their Classic line is refined and subtle, with jewellery which is entirely manufactured in Belgium and designed by BAUNAT’s internal creative team, making it even more inspirational and attractive.
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Voice and voicelessness in the construction of assessment policies: Participation as a relevant dimension in the potential impact on teaching and learning
The article critically analyses the currently predominant processes of construction of large-scale assessment policies, using the national curriculum assessment system in Chile as a case. Based on qualitative evidence that includes media and policy texts analysis, ethnographic work and interviews with key policy actors, it aims at illustrating the disparity of participation in policy design as a potential reason for the lack of impact of these policies on teaching and learning. Conclusions aim at a need for reconceptualising our framework for the understanding of the processes of construction of large-scale assessment policies by overcoming the rationale of market-oriented accountability systems that predominate nowadays. Alternatives are explored through examples of large-scale assessment systems with a higher parity of participation of stakeholders in policy design and policy enactment.
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License.
Authors retain copyright of their work, with first non-exclusive publication rights granted to Journal of Education. Authors agree that any subsequent publication of the article will credit the Journal as the site of first publication and provide a link to the Journal website. Authors contributing to Journal of Education agree to publish their articles under the Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License, allowing third parties users to copy, distribute and transmit an article as long as the author is attributed, the article is not used for commercial purposes, and the work is not modified or adapted in any way, and that in the event of reuse or distribution, the terms of this license are made clear. Note: Authors who may need to comply with the particular open access requirements of their funding bodies can apply to JoE for a more liberal licence, such as Creative Commons CC BY.
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A pressure switch is used to activate electrical current in a furnace or air conditioning unit once the set amount of pressure is either applied or released. In the case of a furnace or boiler, the switch is modeled as safety device to shut down the unit should the proper combustion air flow--which in this case is what provides the pressure--not be obtained.
Types Of Pressure Switches
Pressure switches in general can be either hydraulic or pneumatic. In the case of HVAC products, switches are normally pneumatic. Most recognizable manufacturers make their own pressure switches for their respective units. In many cases, there's a single switch that works on most, if not all, of a company's product line. Amana, for example, makes a three-wire, one-hose pressure switch containing an orange wire (common), yellow wire (normally open) and blue wire (normally closed). This device is considered a replacement for more than 200 different Amana furnace models. The three-wire, one-hose setup is common, though subtle differences make cross-brand substitutions inappropriate. Rheem makes a setup, for example, that fits more than 25 Rheem/Ruud, Coleman or York furnaces.
Replacing A Pressure Switch
It's important to note that what often appears as a pressure switch problem may not actually be so. Remember that the switch's function is all based on air flow. Accordingly, anything that disrupts air flow--such as plugged exhaust or intake vents, heat exchange surfaces coated with soot or a clogged switch hose (which can be caused by anything from dirt to spiders nesting)--can all cause fluctuations in pressure that alter the proper function of a pressure switch. As for the actual replacement, all electrical power to the furnace must be turned off. The burner compartment door should then be removed, and wires removed from the terminals on the pressure switch. The hose that attaches the pressure tap to the pressure switch itself should then be removed as well. Finally, the screws holding the switch to the front of the blower partition should be undone, allowing for the switch's removal. Reassembly is a simple reversal of this process.
Who Makes Pressure Switches?
Though not an all-inclusive list, manufacturers of pressure switches include:
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Grasmere Village, Lake District
History, tourist information, and nearby accommodation
Grasmere village sits like a jewel an a bowl of hills, bounded on one side by the sparkling waters of Grasmere Lake. The village is one of the most popular and heavily visited destinations in the Lake District National Park. That's no surprise when you see its picturesque mix of rustic cottages roofed with blue slate jostling for space with large Victorian villas.
Most of the hordes of visitors that descend upon Grasmere are brought by its links to poet William Wordsworth.
From 1799-1813 Wordsworth lived at Dove Cottage, now owned by the National Trust. The whitewashed cottage is one of the most often photographed sites in the Lake District. The cottage was originally an inn know as the Dove and Olive Branch, but during Wordsworth's time it was called Town End.
Beside the cottage is a modern museum dedicated to Wordsworth's life and works.
The poet and his beloved sister Dorothy are buried in the churchyard of St Oswald's church in Grasmere, along with several other family members. A memorial to Wordsworth is set on the wall of the church nave.
St Oswald's is famous for its annual Rushbearing Ceremony, when a procession of children carry rushes to the church. The rushes, some arranged as crosses, others as garlands, decorate the church for a week, and loose rushes are used to cover the floor of the church. Its an inspiring sight to see the church decorated with rushes, creating echoes of the days when the church floor was of earth and rushes were an essential floor covering.
A few short steps from the churchyard is a historic little building that once served as the village school. It is now home to Grasmere Gingerbread, a scrumptious treat whose tasty fame has spread across Britain (and if one can judge by the lines outside the shop, it has become known abroad as well).
One of the newest attractions in Grasmere is also one of the oldest. Allan Bank is a large Georgian villa set on a hillside overlooking Grasmere Lake. Wordsworth stayed here before moving the Dove Cottage. The house was later owned by Canon Rawnsley, co-founder of the National Trust. There are wonderful woodland walks from Allan Bank, as our family can attest.
NB. Do not mistake Allan Bank in Grasmere with the National Trust garden at Acorn Bank, also in Cumbria, or Allen Banks (note the spelling), a Trust-owned nature area in Northumberland. Note that there is no parking at Allan Bank; you have to walk, but that's not really a hardship as Grasmere is so much fun to explore.
VisitingGrasmere is easy to reach from both north and south. It is located on the A591, south of Keswick and north of Ambleside. There is a large pay and display parking area near the church.
Address: Grasmere, Lake District, Cumbria, England
Attraction Type: Village
Location: At the northernmost tip of Lake Windermere
Photo Credit: David Ross and Britain Express
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Loughrigg Fell - 0.4 miles (Countryside)
Dove Cottage & Wordsworth Museum - 0.7 miles (Historic Building)
Allan Bank - 1.2 miles (Historic Building)
Rydal Mount - 1.5 miles (Historic Building)
Skelwith Force - 1.6 miles (Countryside)
Rydal Falls - 1.7 miles (Countryside)
High Sweden Bridge - 2.5 miles (Countryside)
Ambleside Roman Fort - 2.6 miles (Roman Site)
Nearest Accommodation to Grasmere:
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Humankind has not woven the web of life.
We are but one thread within it.
Whatever we do to the web, we do to ourselves.
All things are bound together. All things connect.
Chief Seattle, 1854
The Blue Heart represents the sadness of those who are trafficked while reminding us of the cold-heartedness of those who buy and sell fellow human beings. The use of the blue UN color also demonstrates the commitment of the United Nations to combating this crime against human dignity.
The United Nations has launched the UN Voluntary Trust Fund for Victims of Trafficking in Persons. The Fund was established following the adoption by the General Assembly in July 2010 of the United Nations Global Plan of Action to Combat Trafficking in Persons, which urges Governments to take coordinated, comprehensive and consistent steps to combat such trafficking and to adopt a human rights-based approach. The fund will help Governments as well as intergovernmental and non-governmental organizations to protect and support victims of human trafficking so that they can recover from their physical and psychological scars.
In our February issue we reported on your participation in a UN survey about the trafficking of women and girls and announced that the responses would be used as the basis of a short film to further raise awareness of the trafficking epidemic. “To Whom It May Concern” was produced by the non-profit Artfully Unforgotten under the sponsorship of Franciscans International and Sisters of Notre Dame de Namur. Shown at the UN on International Women’s Day, it is now available online with the hope that religious leaders will share it with their parishes and communities to raise further awareness about the trafficking of women and girls.
View this inspiring film at: http://vimeo.com/2109020(English only)
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Homes across the country became even less affordable over the summer as the housing crunch pushed “refugees” from high-priced metro areas into communities previously sheltered from the competition of coastal markets, according to data released Thursday.
The Home Affordability Index from real estate data provider Attom Data Solutions edged down to 100 in the third quarter, the lowest level since the third quarter of 2008, which was just as the financial crisis was taking hold.
Attom says that what it calls “meat-and-potatoes” Middle America markets are attracting what it calls “high-cost housing refugees” priced out from metros like Houston, Los Angeles, San Diego and Brooklyn.
Attom’s index draws on wage, home price and mortgage-rate data. The higher the reading, the more house a potential buyer can get. So, a reading of 100 means that the share of average wages needed to buy a median-priced home is on par with historical averages. At the depth of the housing slump in 2012, when prices fell, that index stood as high as 154, but has fallen steadily since.
Home prices have roared higher as demand for housing surges even as supply remains constrained.
Also read: Why aren’t there enough houses to buy?
But affordability – or lack of it – also reflects tepid growth in wages. Attom notes that median home prices have risen 73% since bottoming out in 2012, while average weekly wages have increased only 13% in that time.
In the third quarter, home prices were less affordable than they have historically been in 45% of the local markets Attom surveyed, more markets than in the same period a year ago.
Many of the nation’s most strained communities grew less affordable during the quarter, including Lackawanna County, home to Scranton, Pa., and Genesee County, home to Flint, Mich. Even some of the housing bubble’s biggest busts may be a stretch for homeowners earning that area’s median wages.
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|Las Vegas, Nevada||35.7%||130%||10%|
|Tampa-St. Petersburg, Florida||31.7%||116%||14%|
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Common Name: eryngo
Type: Herbaceous perennial
Native Range: Eastern North America
Zone: 6 to 8
Height: 3.00 to 4.00 feet
Spread: 1.00 to 3.00 feet
Bloom Time: September to October
Bloom Description: White
Sun: Full sun to part shade
Water: Medium to wet
Suggested Use: Water Plant
Tolerate: Drought, Dry Soil
Grow in medium to wet soils in full sun to part shade. Will grow in wet soils with shallow water, but will also prosper in garden loams given consistent moisture. Tall plants may sprawl, particularly if grown in overly fertile soils or in too much shade. May be grown from seed.
Eryngium aquaticum, commonly called eryngo, is a coarse, aquatic perennial that typically occurs in marshes and bogs from New Jersey south to Florida and west to Mississippi. It is mostly found along the coast. It is similar in general appearance to E. yuccifolium which grows in much drier soils of rocky woods, prairies and glades. It is believed that some cultivated material sold as E. aquaticum is actually E. yuccifolium. Eryngo (also sometimes called sea holly) grows to 4’ tall. It features basal leaves that are linear to oblong-lanceolate and entire to remotely toothed. The upper leaves are sometimes spiny toothed to laciniate. Tiny white flowers (sometimes with a purplish tinge) bloom in summer in tight, rounded, flower heads.
Genus name comes from an ancient Greek name used by Theophrastus for a plant which grew in Greece (probably Eryngium campestre).
Specific epithet means growing near or in water.
No serious insect or disease problems. Taller plants may need support.
Water gardens, ponds, low spots. Borders.
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Underwater footage of wrecked ship in Malta Harbour - from NP 296.
Unissued / unused footage - dates and locations may be unclear / unknown.
Admiralty films of wrecks in Malta Harbour (some of this material was used in New Pictorial NP 296.)
Underwater shots of coral, sea vegetation and fishes. Shot of diver James Hodges from the Admiralty Research Lab swimming along underwater with camera and diving apparatus. Footage is quite grainy and scratched in places. Several shots of wrecked ship - Tribal Class Destroyer 'Maori' ('Maoru'?) - on the bottom of the harbour, covered with vegetation, barnacles and gunk. We see the ladder, inside cabin and propellor of the ship.
Above the water in the pilot boat we see the breathing apparatus. A sailor starts a generator on board the deck.
More underwater shots with light illuminating parts of the wreck. Pan up cable. C/Us of winch with hawser round it. Propellor with rope entwined around it. Diver swims up towards surface of sea. Propellors turning slowly under water.
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This Article will analyze the Equal Protection Clause in relation to the government's ability to classify and will discuss whether race is a prohibited classification. The author will closely critique the case of Coalition For Economic Equity v. Wilson, which challenges the constitutionality of Proposition 209 because of its political burdens on interests important to racial minorities and women. The author will argue that Proposition 209's Equal Protection standard should be illicit state action rather than political burdens. Finally, the author will critique the Wilson court's understanding of violations of the Equal Protection Clause. This understanding is rejected here because the mere repeal of existing legislation is permissible even if that repeal impacts racial minorities or women.
L. Darnell Weeden, Affirmative Action California Style—Proposition 209: The Right Message While Avoiding a Fatal Constitutional Attraction Because of Race and Sex, 21 SEATTLE U. L. REV. 281 (1997).
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David Brancaccio: Worried about Spanish banks, and China's apparent reluctance to stimulate its economy, many investors today ran scared from the world economy and into the perceived safety of U.S. government bonds. 10 year T-notes were in such demand the yield fell to a 60 year low. But even so, some companies are buying heavily into the world economy. For instance FedEx said today it's buying the big shipper in Brazil. The Memphis based company will pay $6.8 billion for Rapidao Cometa Logistica e Transportes.
David Ross covers shipping for Stifel Nicolaus.
David Ross: Morning.
Brancaccio: Why do you think FedEx is choosing to do this acquisition right now?
Ross: You know, part of FedEx’s international expansion strategy, where they are continuing to add on little nice bolt-on deals to expand their global footprint, UPS decided to go with the big acquisition, you know recently announcing the merger with TNT that’s probably going to be finalized sometime in the third quarter, but FedEx is choosing instead to go piece by piece and do smaller deals that we think are less risky.
Brancaccio: What do you make of the theory that shipping companies are a decent barometer of the world economy, because we are in the midst of a lot of economic uncertainty around the world.
Ross: Yes, and companies like FedEx that move packages all around the world every day are certainly very good indicators of economic activity, and you know, even though the global economy is somewhat soft right now we still think it is a long term growth story, and FedEx has taken this opportunity to expand their global footprint so that when volumes do recover, they can be there and handle those volumes.
Brancaccio: And with this acquisition, they’re going to be able to get packages to and from Brazil pretty effectively I would assume.
Ross: Well they already do. This is actually a partner of theirs they’ve been working with for 11 years in Brazil. So when customers have a shipment for example New York to São Paulo, FedEx would pick that up in New York, route it through one of their hubs, fly it down to São Paulo, and then hand it off to the Brazilian company for ultimate delivery. Now that it’s just going to be a FedEx employee on either end, so it’s going to give FedEx more control of the overall process, which should lead to higher service levels and more quality control.
Brancaccio: David G. Ross covers shipping for Stifel Nicolaus. Thank you very much.
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Today in 1977, Sex Pistols' single "God Save The Queen" was released in the UK, and almost instantly banned. It was the year of the Silver Jubilee of Queen Elizabeth II, and in the conservative conventional UK, the single caused widespread offence, with lyrics including the phrase "God Save The Queen, She ain't no human being.."
Provoked to utter obscenities live on early-evening national TV in the UK, the group found themselves victims of an instant suburban backlash, becoming targets of hate to average citizens, and overnight heroes to a generation of revolting teenagers at the same time. Banned by TV and radio, the single was refused a place in the nation's Main Street shops, while workers at EMI Records' pressing plant refused to handle the record, which was seen by them
to be attacking the monarchy.
Whipped up into a frenzy of indignation by the media, the song was regarded by much of the general public to be an assault on Queen Elizabeth II, which, to be fair, it was. The title is taken directly from "God Save the Queen", the UK national anthem and was doubly controversial, for its equation of the Queen with
a "fascist regime", and for its claim that England had "no future". Pistols singer Johnny Rotten later said, "You don't write a song like 'God Save The Queen' because you hate the English race. You write a song like that because you love them, and you're fed
up of seeing them mistreated".
Released as the band's second single
from their album, Never Mind the Bollocks, Here's the Sex Pistols,the single cover, depicting a defaced picture of Queen Elizabeth II (which in English law, is a form of treason), was designed by Jamie Reid, and in 2001 was named #1 in a list of 100 greatest record covers of all time by Q Magazine.
On 7th June 1977, on the
day of the Jubilee national holiday, Sex Pistols pulled off a publicity stunt by playing the song from a boat named The Queen Elizabeth as it sailed down the River Thames, eventually mooring outside the House of Parliament. The police were awaiting the boat's docking and, as the members of the party left the boat for dry land, a scuffle broke out, resulting in eleven people, including several members of the band's
entourage, being arrested.
In one week it sold 200,000 copies
in the UK, peaking at #2 (behind Rod Stewart's "I Don't Want to Talk About It") on the UK singles chart, though there have been persistent rumours -- never confirmed or denied -- that it was actually the biggest-selling single in the UK at the time, and the British Phonographic Industry conspired to keep it off the Number One slot.
I don't suppose we'll ever know, although none of the BPI's then executives were subsequently knighted, so perhaps Her Majesty wasn't very bothered, one way or the other...
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The new normal is that girls are allowed to choose how they live their lives. It is presented to us on silver platters as soon as we are able to speak but the cracks appear when we try to live it. It becomes a little too easy to ignore how quickly we lose power and say over our bodies while we chant about this new normality.
The first crack came in a primary school hall, during a girls’ assembly. A bubbly nurse stood before our confused Grade 7 faces, trying to explain that every girl would soon be starting their menstrual cycle. She emphasised that it was nothing to be afraid of and that it was meant to prepare us to give birth. She pointed at random girls and asked them to imagine the number of children they would love to have. When the finger landed on me, I proudly stated:
“I do not want children.”
She stared at me for a moment, then loudly concluded that I may want them when I am older. I simply shrugged and let her comment pass.
The second crack found me in a similar setting in high school. That day, a counsellor accompanied a nurse in front of a pack of curious senior eyes. They indicated that girls were allowed to sexually explore and express themselves. However, that it should be done in a safe manner. They passed different contraceptives around the room, explaining how each worked and allowed us to become familiar with them. I worked up the courage to ask if there were more permanent ways to keep a woman from having children. They explained that such procedures could only be given to women who have a minimum of two children. I indicated that I did not want children, to which I was told:
“You shouldn’t engage in sexual intercourse if you don’t want children. Contraceptives were made to keep you from having children until you are ready.”
When I pushed the idea that I may never want children but wish to explore sexually, the counsellor pulled me aside. She questioned if I had experienced any abuse or childhood trauma that could be causing me to dislike children. I shook my head. When she had run out of ideas, she concluded that I may want them when I am older. Once again, I let the comment slide.
The final crack shook me as soon as I obtained my university degree. Along with the celebratory calls from different family members, was the idea that I could finally start my dream career, find a husband and have children. The three were tied together as though I cannot have one without the other. At a family reunion, whilst listening to them discuss my future, I casually mentioned that I did not want children. In pure astonishment, one of my aunts asked:
“What kind of a woman doesn’t want children? What will you tell your husband?”
With the same level of casualty, I indicated that I may not even want a husband. The façade was finally shattered and I heard them all gasp.
“That is not normal!”
I have lived my entire life with the gradual persuasion to find a husband and build a family. It involved the baby dolls I was given to dress up and care for, with the claim that I would hold my own child in the same way (when I got older). In school, other girls had books filled with pictures of their dream weddings, husbands and homes. They played pretend, created homes with imaginative husbands and fussed over made up babies. Behaviour that I was encouraged to adopt.
As I grew older, I was probed for hints of boyfriends who might be itching to marry me. Family members have pushed their babies into my arms, telling me that I would learn to be comfortable around them. Community members dropped whispers of how I had a face that was ‘pretty enough to snatch up a good man’ and ‘a good figure to carry a child’. Anytime I have tried to oppose this, I am told that I will eventually change my mind. That it is only a matter of time.
I have nothing against children and I do not know what the future holds. Honestly, I am only bothered by the concept of a woman’s fulfilment constantly involving children (and a husband). That I can live the way I want until I have to settle for the role that society has defined for a woman. I cannot be told of my options but have everything pushing me towards one direction. Having power over one’s body starts the moment you have a say over it. Perhaps, I just do not want children.
Read one writer’s opinion on society’s unrealistic expectations for women here
Tell us: Do you think women have enough power to choose the life they want to live? Why or why not?
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By Congressman Rick W. Allen
Today marks one month since the wrongful death of George Floyd in Minneapolis, Minnesota. Since that tragic day, his death has sparked calls for police reform. I believe that in order for justice to be served, we must reevaluate policing policies from the bottom up to ensure this situation will never occur again. No officer who has multiple citations, uses excessive force, and is incapable of performing their lawful duties should be out patrolling the streets.
To the American people: We hear you, and we are working to increase accountability and transparency within police departments nationwide to ensure safe policing and safe communities. However, calls to defund the police and the partisan plan Speaker Nancy Pelosi and Democrats are advancing through the legislative process are not the answer.
Enacting change starts by having a conversation with the many good men and women serving in law enforcement who put themselves in harm's way in order to keep our communities safe. In Georgia's 12th District, I'm proud of our law enforcement and the job they're doing, but I recognize that every community is different and in some areas around our nation, this is not the case.
On Monday, I hosted a call with sheriffs and police chiefs throughout the district to discuss how we move forward with sensible reforms. These brave officers also want to find real solutions and are committed to continue building trust within their communities. There was a lot of great discussion, especially in support of President Trump's June 16, 2020 historic Executive Order to strengthen relations between law enforcement and their communities and how to best ensure that bad actors are not rehired.
Specifically, this order directs the Department of Justice (DOJ) to certify independent organizations to provide accreditation to police departments on de-escalation, use of force and community engagement. The accreditation organizations will examine law enforcement policies on use of force, including where policies should prohibit the use of chokeholds except in situations where deadly force is allowed by law.
Under this order, a system will be created to allow police departments to share information about incidents of excessive force. The grants that the DOJ awards will be contingent on police departments sharing that information.
To be clear, this order does not defund police departments, and any call to do so is wrong. Rather, we must equip officers with the tools for constructive community engagement like highlighted in the Executive Order.
In Congress, Republicans and Democrats agree there are legislative steps we can take to promote better policing. However, like most legislation in Washington, it has become entirely partisan and there are two very different visions for the future.
Without any bipartisan input, House Democrats have crafted a bill that has no chance of becoming law. Their proposal contains partisan poison pills like eliminating qualified immunity, which protects our law-abiding officers. It also goes too far in federalizing law enforcement, which is best handled at the state and local level.
Thankfully, Senator Tim Scott, (R-SC) and Congressman Pete Stauber (R-MN-08), a former police officer, unveiled the Justice Act to expand upon President Trump's executive order and implement meaningful reforms.
The Justice Act increases reporting on use of force and no knock warrants, increases penalties for false reporting, and ensures a record sharing database for disciplinary offenses when hiring an officer. The bill directs the DOJ to develop and provide training guidelines for de-escalation, implementation and intervening polices, and ensure we are hiring and training the very best by providing grant eligibility for recruiters and academy candidates. It would also make lynching a federal crime and ban the use of chokeholds except for in situations where deadly force is authorized. Additionally, state and local law enforcement agencies would be provided $500 million to equip all officers with body cameras, improve their use, and store and retain footage.
I commend Senator Scott and Congressman Stauber for working on a bill that offers real solutions and brings us one step closer to justice for all, and I'm proud to be a cosponsor of the Justice Act. Unfortunately, Senate Democrats have joined Nancy Pelosi in making this issue political and have opposed the bill.
I hope for the sake of our country, my Democrat colleagues decide to work with Republicans to advance this important bill and support our brave law enforcement officials.
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Author Kurt Vonnegut and his son, Mark, recounted last night the turmoil that unfolded in their family after Mark began to suffer from mental illness in 1969.
“Not only did we see you crack when you went crazy, we saw something beautiful when you got well,” said Kurt Vonnegut. “The recovery was worth it.”
Before a packed crowd in the Sackler Museum, the pair addressed the difficulties that any family faces when one of its members develops a mental disorder.
The Vonneguts held the discussion to celebrate the recent reprinting of Mark Vonnegut’s 1975 book Eden Express. The book details Mark’s sudden breakdown and slow recovery.
“I wrote the book when I doubted I would get well,” said Mark Vonnegut.
He said that his mental illness was originally misdiagnosed as paranoid schizophrenia, but was really a combination of bipolar disorder with elements of schizophrenia.
Publishing an account of mental illness in such a frank manner was extraordinary for its time.
“People don’t talk about mental illness for many reasons—one is that it makes their children less marriage-able,” said Kurt Vonnegut.
He then added that his own mother warned him against marrying a woman—his future wife—whose family had a history of mental illness. While his wife never experienced mental illness, his mother committed suicide.
The father-son duo frequently switched between a question-and-answer forum and a chat. The conservation often jumped from topic to topic.
“Are there any wonderful new pills for crazy people?” asked Kurt Vonnegut.
Mark Vonnegut, who is now a Milton, Mass.-based primary care physician and graduated from Harvard Medical School in 1979, answered that people were more medicated today but were not being cured.
“The health care system today stinks,” said Mark Vonnegut.
He added that fewer side effects of new drugs lead to more frequent prescription.
“Drugs will get rid of the voices in people’s heads, but you have to leave them at least a little bit of their zip,” said Mark Vonnegut.
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Elias Muhanna, 4 March 2021
Show More The Idea of the Muslim World: A Global Intellectual History by Cemil Aydin.
Harvard, 293 pp., £16.95, April 2019, 978 0 674 23817 6Show More
“... the idea of the caliphate returned – briefly – as a symbol of group feeling among Muslims. Cemil Aydin’s book explores this moment in the late 19th century, when Muslim revivalists and political activists began rallying around the faded office of the caliphate as part of a groundswell of pan-Islamic solidarity. The significance of that moment ...”
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Front-of-package labeling under F.D.A. scrutiny
October 20, 2009
by Keith Nunes
WASHINGTON – In a letter to industry on Oct. 20, the Food and Drug Administration outlined its guidance on the plethora of front-of-package symbols and nutrition scores being used by food processors and retailers to communicate the nutritional quality of foods and beverages. Noting that the F.D.A.’s research shows that with the front-of-package labeling consumers are less likely to check the Nutrition Facts panel, the agency said it is "essential both the criteria and symbols used in the front-of-package and shelf-labeling systems be nutritionally sound, well-designed and helps consumers make informed, healthy food choices."
"Some are questioning whether they (front-of-package symbols) are marketing or health-oriented," said Dr. Margaret Hamburg, commissioner of the F.D.A.
The agency is analyzing front-of-package labels that appear to be misleading and also is looking for symbols that may be considered nutrient content claims.
To ensure consumers are not confused or misled by front-of-package symbols, the F.D.A. said it is developing a proposed regulation to define the nutritional criteria that would have to be met by food companies making front-of-package claims about a product’s nutritional quality.
"We want to work with the food industry – retailers and manufacturers alike – as well as nutrition and design experts, and the Institute of Medicine, to develop an optimal, common approach to nutrition-related F.O.P. and shelf labeling that all Americans can trust and use to build better diets and improve their health," the agency said in the guidance letter.
Citing recent news stories about the Smart Choices front-of-package labeling program as a reason for the new initiative, the F.D.A. pointed to the traffic-light system used in the United Kingdom as a positive example of a voluntary program that provides consumers with easy-to-understand nutrition information that is based on common criteria.
"The U.K. system is the program that is the most talked about and the deepest as far as available information," said Ms. Hamburg.
She added the F.D.A. is launching a consumer research program to assess how the front-of-package symbols are being used by consumers and how they are being perceived.
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An investigation into the use and uptake of short courses for staff development in the New Zealand fast moving consumer goods (FMCG) industry, with a related case study of the New Zealand Food & Grocery Council's (FGC) Education Project : a thesis presented in partial fulfilment of the requirements for the degree of Master of Management in Management at Massey University, Palmerston North, New Zealand
The first training priorities for the New Zealand FMCG industry are short courses in sales and commercial acumen. Second priorities are leadership, productivity, people management, category management and marketing. Large FMCG meet their training needs with in-house courses, but SME’s can not afford in-house courses so they require externally provided courses. Required outcomes from training are improved employee performance, efficiency, productivity, recruitment and retention, creation of company competitive advantage, market positioning and increased bottom line performance.
FMCG Companies do not value or fund employees to University qualifications because of the cost and time involved and an industry perception that University courses do not address the “uniqueness” of the FMCG industry. There is some support for a staircase from industry specific short courses an industry designed Bachelor degree, but without an FMCG endorsement. Companies believe that employees should benefit from company funded training, but identified employee benefits are nebulous “satisfactions” which in reality are retention devices that benefit the company rather than the individual.
Apart from avoiding the industry’s “busy” period from October till Mid February there are no particular requirement for course timing or structure provided sufficient lead time is given to allow adjustment of attendees work schedules. Course fees are a major barrier to SME’s using short courses to train their staff. Other costs such as travel to courses and the loss of staff from their work to attend training are not issues.
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Texas lawmakers and stakeholders are zeroing in on the border security aspect of the federal immigration reform bill filed last week, with some questioning why the measure was crafted without mechanisms to avoid a future inflow of illegal migration.
The Border Security, Economic Opportunity, and Immigration Modernization Act of 2013 outlines a 13-year path to citizenship for millions in the country illegally, enhanced border security, required use of an employment verification system and an expanded visa system for low-skilled workers in various industries.
U.S. Sen. Charles Schumer, D-N.Y., one of the “Gang of Eight” senators who crafted the bill, said Friday that committee mark-ups would not begin until later this month, allowing members time to read the roughly 800-page document.
But critics aren’t wasting time in highlighting what they see as holes in the measure. And for some Texans, that means focusing on border security first, according to the state’s senior senator.
“Border security matters in Texas and along the southwestern border, and the bill does not adequately provide for it,” U.S. Sen. John Cornyn, R-Texas, said Monday on the Senate floor, according to a transcript provided by his office. “As I said, the bill is comprehensive, but it is not exhaustive. In other words, some important reforms were omitted that I think need to be included.”
The bill requires a “90 percent” effectiveness rate in apprehensions, defined as “the number of apprehensions and turn backs in a specific sector divided by the total number of illegal entries.” The rate must be achieved before undocumented immigrants can begin on their road to citizenship, which requires paying thousands in fees and back taxes and living with a conditional legal status for 10 years.
Cornyn, the ranking Republican on the Senate’s Judiciary Committee’s Immigration, Refugees and Border Security Subcommittee, said that according to his analysis of the bill’s text, the effectiveness rate applies to only three of the nine “high-risk” areas on the southwest border, including two of Texas’ five.
“The border security provisions in this bill would necessarily mean that the Border Patrol will shift resources away, in a preannounced fashion, from most of the border sectors in order to reach the goals for only a few,” he said. “We can only imagine what the transnational criminal organizations that move drugs, people, and contraband across our border will do in response.”
Bill Compared to 2007 Measure
A Migration Policy Institute analysis of the current proposal compared with a bill filed in 2007, the last time immigration reform was considered, indicates that the 2013 measure places stronger emphasis on border security.
The 2007 measure called for at least 18,000 U.S. Border Patrol agents to be in place as a trigger for starting the legalization process for undocumented immigrants. But there was no definitive metric to by which to measure border security. The current measure would add an unspecified number of agents to the ranks of the U.S. Border Patrol, which has doubled to more than 22,000 since 2007. Like the 2007 measure, the current bill calls for more surveillance equipment and the use of unmanned aerial vehicles, or drones, for monitoring the border. At least $2 billion is allocated in the current measure to beef up border security. The earlier proposal did not specify how much should be spent, but a report by the MPI released this year indicates the federal government spent about $18 billion in border enforcement in 2012 alone.
The 2007 measure required 200 miles of vehicle barriers — fencing and other obstacles aimed at deterring illegal car and truck crossings — and at least 370 miles of steel fencing on the southwest border several feet tall. Despite the bill’s failure, the Department of Homeland Security has built about 650 miles of either fencing or barricades since 2007. The current bill calls for $1.5 billion for additional fencing, but where it would be installed is up to what the proposal calls the Southern Border Fencing Strategy, which DHS has six months to implement if the bill passes.
On Monday, Cornyn also expressed concern about the lack of a biometric “exit” system for visa holders in the proposal. About 40 percent of the people living in the country illegally gain legal access and overstay a visa, something Cornyn said is a byproduct of DHS’s failure to enact current laws. Compared with the 2007 proposal, which required keeping fingerprint records for when an immigrant entered and exited the country, there is no specific language in the current bill to that effect. The current draft does mandate, however, a biometric “work authorization card” for every immigrant who applies for a work permit.
“If we want to get serious about preventing another wave of visa overstays, we have to get this exit system right,” Cornyn said.
The Texas Border Coalition, a group of elected officials and business groups that has pushed for more manpower at the nation’s inland ports, is encouraged that the immigration reform conversation now includes more resources for Customs and Border Protection officers. That agency, which is part of DHS, oversees the legal movement of goods and people across the borders. The 2007 measure called for 500 more CBP officers, compared with the 3,500 that the current measure calls for.
Through February, the ports at Laredo and El Paso traded more than $36.9 billion and $13.5 billion in goods with Mexico, respectively, which has helped make Mexico Texas’ largest trading partner.
Monica Weisberg-Stewart, the chairwoman of the border coalition’s committee on immigration and border security, lauded the additional manpower, though she doubted the need for more fencing.
“Fencing has proven to not be successful; it’s created more gap than barrier and adds more problems,” she said. “You don’t just build a fence, but you have to maintain a fence.” Those resources, as well as those that would be spent on National Guard units and drones, could be spent elsewhere, Weisberg-Stewart said.
“If they place the resources in the right area, then we wouldn’t need to bring the National Guard. We wish we could get the biggest return on the investment,’ she said.
E-Verify Concerns Raised
She also has concerns over the bill’s mandatory use of E-Verify, the federal electronic employment verification system, which has mistakenly flagged some eligible employees as unauthorized and allowed a number of undocumented workers to move through the system. The 2007 bill did not require its use for all employers, while the current measure requires that employers with more than 5,000 employees be phased in within two years, and all employers, including agricultural employers, be phased in within four years.
Weisberg-Stewart said she would not be convinced the system works until the government ensures its accuracy.
“The problem is get the kinks out before you put any time limit in it,” she said. “Any program the government has had so far, the accuracy is not there.”
Texas Agriculture Commissioner Todd Staples, a Republican who has announced his intention to run for lieutenant governor in 2014, said he was analyzing the bill with skepticism. He said the bill appears to address a 21st-century problem with a 20th-century solution.
Like Cornyn, he said the 15,000 yearly visas proposed for construction workers nationwide falls short.
“It’s a pathetic attempt to address a real shortfall in addressing our economic needs,” he said. “And the low-skilled immigrant visas, the numbers seem woefully inadequate to me.”
Staples said he was encouraged that the bill could be amended, but he warned that not having a market-based system is a perpetuation of a shadow economy that cheats workers and taxpayers.
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Figures, Rudiments, Lower Grammar
The Latin course at SMH is taught by specialist teachers, and introduces pupils to a family living in Pompeii just before and during the eruption of Vesuvius, using the Cambridge Latin Course.
This course enables pupils to develop language skills alongside learning about Roman culture and civilisation. This continues into Lower Grammar, with the story moving on to Roman Britain via Alexandria. There is also a class for beginners in Lower Grammar. Pupils begin to develop an analytical approach to language generally, including an awareness of the relationship between Latin and the languages of today.
Greek is introduced alongside Latin for the most able linguists in Lower Grammar, further enhancing linguistic, analytical and communication skills.
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The very first thing you should do is determine what topics you in order to cover. One thing that an extraordinary podcast dissimilar to other epidermis media is always that you record episodes. Various other words, if possible continue to generate programs within your “radio stop.” And just because you reach the finish of your ebook, does not that content material that you create stops.
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You can produce a podcast by recording a teleseminar and then posting motion picture on website running in an MP3 set up. What makes it a podcast rather than a recorded teleseminar? A new podcast recording lives on day-to-day basis a teleseminar can look whenever you want to get it done. So should you run a consistent teleseminar along with it as a recording — you’re actually podcasting!
Now, you ought to write each podcast. Actually you only have to design each podcast. You will not actually write anything. Think webinar. but without the slides. To your talk for the length of time of your podcast, straight from your notes. Consider practicing at least while. As you get better at talking away from the top of your head this task may turned into a problem. However, when tend to be starting out practice makes perfect. You will know when practice takes out of the spontaneity of the presentation.
Once your account is active, podcatcher, liulo.fm, upload your MP3 (that is, follow instructions that enable the file to be copied through your computer onto their server). Once the MP3 is uploaded the product or service you complete the file public, downloadable, so you adjusted the settings with activated it for widgets.
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The theory behind the assembly line is the one about the portion. By creating a batch of exact same way product suddenly you become more efficient. With podcasts there are two parts to using this. First off, you should do all your podcasts with each other. Doing a month’s worth of podcasts at one sitting makes life easier. Secondly, do all your writing together. Then do complete recording. Then do any editing. This lets you create a rhythm to ones work.
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Geocaching: Treasure Hunting in Ötztal
Does it sound familiar to you: you leave your mobile phone or key ring somewhere and can’t even remember where you saw or used it the last time? Searching for something is unnerving … in most cases. But there is also a totally different kind of search called “Geocaching” – a modern paperchase! Never heard about it? Just keep on reading and we will tell you everything about this fun-filled activity. What’s best, the Ötztal makes a real heaven for small and big treasure hunters.
What is geocaching?
The name “geocaching” derives from the Greek word for earth (geo) and the English term “cache” (hiding place). Action-packed geocaching is a modern, GPS assisted treasure hunt or paperchase.
The hidden spots (geocaches) are published in the internet only via geographic coordinates and can be discovered with the help of a GPS receiver. Normally, a cache is a waterproof box containing a logbook and items to swap. Those who find a geocache enter their name in the logbook by documenting their successful mission.
© Armin Kuprian / Ötztal Tourismus
On the geocaching.com website you meet all members of the geocaching community online. After a quick registration, users can download the respective GPS coordinates of all hidden spots. There are more than 3 million activated geocaches world-wide at the moment. Even the ISS International Space Station features a geocache which may be reserved to the astronauts! In Austria you can search for about 46,000 geocaches spread all over the country – some of them at the heart of Ötztal!
Geocaching in Ötztal
© Armin Kuprian / Ötztal Tourismus
There are two different types of geocaching routes in Ötztal. For the “Geocaching Treasure Hunt” you don’t need a GPS device as it is also suitable for young children. You simply collect a special Treasure Map from one of the Ötztal Tourismus information offices. All route details and useful hints how to find the cache boxes are already written down in the Treasure Map.
The little boxes contain secret letters or numbers or colors which must be written into the respective field of the Treasure Map. Only if you have found all secret codes you can solve the riddle. After collecting all secret codes, little explorers receive a small surprise present at the Ötztal Tourismus information offices!
This is a wonderful way to explore Ötztal’s most scenic spots for active families. Children will love walking around and strolling through forests and meadows in search of all the little secrets. “Geocaching Treasure Hunt” routes of different lengths are available in the holiday villages of Ochsengarten, Sautens, Oetz, Niederthai, Längenfeld, Sölden, Vent and Obergurgl.
No matter which geocaching adventure you choose in Ötztal, loads of fun and heaps of action are almost guaranteed. Thank God it’s not your own key ring you are searching for…
Which item do you search for most often?
Ötztal awaits you!
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The cholesterol lowering campaign really took off in 1985 with the recommendations of a Consensus Conference sponsored by the National Institutes of Health in the USA (1). I have just come across a commentary written at the time by Gerald Reaven which is absolutely fascinating (2). It is certainly highly relevant to recall the key points which were made almost 30 years ago!
The main conclusion was that raised levels of LDL Cholesterol in the blood plasma are causally related to the development of Cardiovascular Disease (CVD). Therefore steps should be taken to lower the LDL Cholesterol by the use of diet and/or drugs, in order to reduce the incidence CVD. In particular, everyone except children under the age of 2 years should be advised to adopt a diet that reduces the intake of fat from 40% calories as it was then to 30%. Saturated fat (SFA) should be reduced to less than 10% calories while polyunsaturated fat (PUFA) should be increased. In addition, massive education programmes should be launched to ensure that health professionals were aware of the importance of treating hypercholesterolaemia and the food industry was to be encouraged to develop and market products in line with the dietary advice.
First of all, Gerald Reaven pointed out that Implementation of the recommendations would mean there would inevitably be an increase in the carbohydrate content of the national diet in the USA but that there had been no attempt by the Conference to assess the impact of this. In his view, there was enough credible evidence to postulate that a “low fat high carbohydrate (LFHC) diet” would result in metabolic changes in many people, which would be deleterious to health. In particular changes in blood glucose, insulin and HDL Cholesterol would actually increase the risks of developing CVD. This is rather ironic since the justification for the changes was to reduce risks of CVD.
He suggests that the older the individual and /or the more glucose intolerant the greater the chance that LFHC diets would result in significant increases in postprandial blood glucose, which is a risk factor for CVD. Furthermore for those consumers who have impaired glucose tolerance or full blown Type 2 Diabetes (T2D) the recommendation is even more questionable.
He then goes on to consider the role of insulin and states quite bluntly that raising the level of insulin in the blood increases the risk of CVD even in those who do not have T2D. Furthermore there is abundant evidence that increasing the carbohydrate content of the diet will augment the plasma insulin response of normal individuals. Therefore it is predictable that the insulin levels will be raised. While this might not be a major problem in those who are young, slim and physically active, it is almost certainly damaging for those who are getting on in years, well-nourished and sedentary.
A LFHC diet is known to raise the level of triglycerides in the blood, which is associated with an increased risk of CVD. While the importance of this has been questioned, Reaven argues that there is enough evidence to take this seriously. In particular he notes that this may be related to a fall in the level of the HDL Cholesterol, which could be another reason why an LFHC diet would increase the risks of CVD.
Even accepting the “Consensus” position that the LDL Cholesterol should be reduced and that the HDL Cholesterol is beneficial then it follows that the objective should be to increase the HDL:LDL in order to reduce the risks of CVD. Obviously this is what would happen if the LDL Cholesterol is lowered and the HDL Cholesterol is unchanged. Unfortunately because an LFHC diet also reduces the HDL even more than occurs with the LDL Cholesterol, the net effect is to lower the ratio! This is not exactly what the Consensus Conference was trying to achieve.
Finally here is a comment on the organisation of the conference which speaks for itself:
“The most efficient way to reach a consensus concerning a complex issue within a short period is to make sure that controversial views are not represented on the panel. It is clear that the panel assembled by the NIH met this criterion; ie, no one who had published scientific evidence that might have led to the presentation of formidable arguments contrary to conventional wisdom was a member of the panel. I believe it is the responsibility of the organizers of such conferences to make sure that dissenting voices are present, and their absence raises substantial questions concerning the utility of the recommendations that are issued.”
Although the information presented here is entirely from the USA, the circumstances in many other countries are virtually the same. Here in the UK, over the past 30 years or so there has been an enormous increase in the use of the lipid lowering drugs (by a factor of about 20) (3). At the same time some of the fat in the diet has been replaced by carbohydrates (4). Although there has been quite an improvement in longevity the impact of this on the quality of life has been tempered by the increase in dementia. The incidence of obesity is evident, while the fact that T2D has doubled in the past 15 years and is expected to continue increasing is clearly a major public health issue. There is absolutely no question that Gerald Reaven has been totally vindicated by events. The fears which he outlined in 1985 have materialised.
It was evident that the doubts which he and others expressed were simply swept aside by those who were determined to implement their own agenda. The current position is now even worse because it is clear that the policy has been a disaster. Yet there is still a complete failure on the part of governments and health professionals to face up to reality. In the meantime huge numbers of people who faithfully comply with the official advice are suffering unnecessarily and many die prematurely. It is difficult to imagine a greater public health policy disaster. It is right up there with those wars which have been started on a false prospectus.
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Scrabble word: WOOING
In which Scrabble dictionary does WOOING exist?
Definitions of WOOING in dictionaries:
- noun - a man's courting of a woman
- verb - seek someone's favor
- verb - make amorous advances towards
- verb - to seek the affection of
There are 6 letters in WOOING: G I N O O W
Scrabble words that can be created with an extra letter added to WOOING
All anagrams that could be made from letters of word WOOING plus a wildcard: WOOING?
Scrabble words that can be created with letters from word WOOING
Images for WOOING
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Nutraceutical efficacy in experimental animal models of inflammatory bowel disease: <i>Echinacea angustifolia</i>, <i>Prunella vulgaris</i> and <i>Hypericum gentianoides</i>
Ulcerative colitis (UC) and Crohn's disease (CD), collectively known as inflammatory bowel disease (IBD), are inflammatory diseases of the enteric mucosa whose etiology is currently undefined. While hypotheses for causation include genetic susceptibility, environmental risk factors, inappropriate and chronic immune responses to members of the intestinal microflora as well as failed immune regulatory mechanisms, many questions regarding IBD susceptibility, dysbiosis and immune dysfunction remain. Not surprisingly, current therapeutic targets are expensive, have questionable long term efficacy and are associated with risk of secondary bacterial and viral infections. As chronically ill patients substitute or supplement their treatments with alternative, nutraceutical remedies in ever greater numbers, more research is needed to ascertain the safety and efficacy of these products as therapeutics.
Prunella vulgaris is a common `cure all' which is popular in traditional Chinese medicine. P. vulgaris can be steeped in water and drank as a tea or ground into a salve, and is known for its anti-viral, anti-inflammatory and antioxidant benefits. P. vulgaris has never, until now, been studied in the context of colitic therapy and has yet to gain a foothold as a commonly utilized nutraceutical in western medicine.
Hypericum gentianoides, akin to Hypericum perforatum/St. John's Wort, is a unique and understudied species of Hypericum. H. gentianoides lacks the photoactive and cytotoxic compounds routinely found in other Hypericum species. While the bioactivity of this plant is not well characterized, it is known to have anti-inflammatory, immunomodulatory and antibacterial potential. This potential and the lack of cytotoxic, photoactive compounds make H. gentianoides a good candidate for study in colitis models.
Echinacea angustifolia is well studied, commonly utilized world-wide as a preventative or remedy for the common cold, and has great potential as a therapeutic agent in many disease modalities. The roots of this plant contain several types of compounds known to be bioactive. Like other nutraceutical, E. angustifolia is documented anecdotally to cure or reduce symptoms related to countless maladies and diseases without sound scientific proof. E. angustifolia has never been studied as anti-colitic; however, pain suppressive and immunomodulatory capabilities of this plant lend credence to the potential for this type of study.
In this study, the anti-colitic potential of P. vulgaris, H. gentianoides and E. angustifolia were determined in the mdr1a deficient (-/-) mouse model of spontaneous colitis or the chemically induced dextran sodium sulphate (DSS) mouse model of acute colitis. Extracts of E. angustifolia root or above ground sections of P. vulgaris or H. gentianoides were extracted using the Soxhlet method in 95% ethanol and were solubilized in a final concentration of 5% ethanol for use in studies. P. vulgaris and H. gentianoides were tested at daily doses of 2.4 mg (~ 100 mg/kg body weight) and 4.8 mg (~ 200 mg/kg body weight) respectively, while E. angustifolia was tested at daily doses of 100 mg/kg and 200 mg/kg body weight.
In the DSS model of acute colitis, E. angustifolia was not found to be effective during the period of DSS treatment (in low dose 1.75% to high dose 2.5% DSS in male and female C57BL/6 mice), or during restitution. E. angustifolia was not found to be cytotoxic in vivo. Conversely, P. vulgaris was able to significantly (p < 0.05) decrease weight loss and improve macroscopic indicators of severe colitic wasting. The disparity between E. angustifolia and P. vulgaris efficacies in this acute model of colitis could be due to the difference in the constituent types found in these two extracts. E. angustifolia is composed mostly of phenolics and alkylamides, while P. vulgaris contains phenolics, flavonoids and triterpinoids. Certain types of phenols have been shown to have efficacy in low dose DSS colitis; however, flavonoids have efficacy in models of colitis as well, and in combination with phenols may be synergistic. Since flavonoids have recently proven very effective in ameliorating spontaneous colitis, P. vulgaris was also evaluated in the mdr1a-/- model of spontaneous colitis.
In the mdr1a-/- mouse model of spontaneous colitis, P. vulgaris extract treatment was compared to mdr1a-/- mice treated with 5% ethanol vehicle, metronidazole (an antibiotic and anti-colitic control) and FVBWT mice. It was discovered that P. vulgaris was able to delay onset of spontaneous colitis, significantly (p < 0.05) decrease macroscopic typhlocolitic and microscopic cecal disease scores, prevent cecal neutrophil influx, and downregulate nuclear factor-kappaB (NF-kB) related cytokines/chemokines and gene targets. The downregulation of innate immune signals and function is hypothesized to contribute to the observed decrease in cecal tonsil CD4+ helper and CD8+ cytotoxic T cells as well as germinal center B cells. Adaptive immune function was also altered. Loss of immune tolerance to the microflora is a characteristic of chronic colitis. Unlike mdr1a-/- vehicle treated mice, which displayed antibody production to microflora antigens, P. vulgaris treated mice displayed little to no Ab response to the same microflora antigens.
H. gentianoides contains flavonoids, phenolics and a unique antimicrobial compound called uliginosin A. As the mdr1a-/- mouse model of spontaneous colitis is driven by the host immune response to the microflora and Hypericum species are known to be immunomodulatory, this extract was of interest as a therapeutic anti-colitic in the mdr1a-/- model. Onset of spontaneous colitis was significantly delayed by H. gentianoides, but was not completely abolished. Macroscopic scores, microscopic scores, serum cytokine levels and myeloperoxidase production were all significantly (p < 0.05) reduced by H. gentianoides gavage. While H. gentianoides has immunosuppressant potential, a surprising increase in intestinal plasma cell infiltrate and an increase in serum IL-6 correlated with H. gentianoides gavage in mdr1a-/- mice. To date, anti-microbial functions have not been ruled out as a contributing factor in the efficacy of anti-colitic activity of this extract.
Together, these novel experiments have identified new candidates for anti-colitic therapy or therapeutic supplementation of current IBD treatment strategies. P. vulgaris, H. gentianoides and E. angustifolia merit further research as nutraceutical treatments of chronic inflammatory disorders, and these studies make it clear that synergy between phenolics, flavonoids and natural anti-bacterial compounds also warrant further research.
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Iran's Press Supervisory Board has suspended a hardline newspaper and cautioned two other outlets for criticizing last month's nuclear deal with world powers — a rare move for a body more used to upholding social conservatism.
The board suspended 9 Dey, a weekly newspaper that accused Tehran's negotiators of overstepping Supreme Leader Ayatollah Ali Khamenei's red lines in the negotiations, and referred its case to a court, the ISNA news agency reported on Monday.
Censors also cautioned Kayhan, an influential conservative daily, and the Raja News website, in a setback for critics who assert that Iranian negotiators made too many concessions to reach the historic deal on July 14.
The pact has been the subject of intense debate in the Islamic Republic, and President Hassan Rouhani took to the airwaves on Sunday evening to talk up the achievements of Iranian diplomats.
Iran's President Hassan Rouhani arrives for an address to the nation after a nuclear agreement was announced in Vienna, in Tehran, Iran, July 14, 2015.
Conservative newspapers have been targeted in the past: in February 2014 the Supreme National Security Council sued a conservative journalist working for Vatan-e Emrooz (Today's Nation) for criticising Rouhani's foreign policy.
But Iranian censors are more used to chasing publications perceived to be undermining the Islamic Republic's strict religious codes.
Most recently, censors in April banned monthly magazine Zanan-e Emrooz (Today's Women) for running an issue on "white marriage", a term used for unmarried couples living together in defiance of a law against extramarital sex.
The Committee to Protect Journalists (CPJ) listed Iran as the world's 7th most censored country in its 2015 annual report, noting the situation "has not improved under Rouhani despite the hopes of U.N. member states and human rights groups."
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Science and religion have been two most ardent enemies for centuries. What religion believes in is rejected by science, and what science proves, is refuted by religion. In the Quran we have a scripture, which is not only mathematically coded, but has numerous verses with scientific implications, far advanced than the time of its revelation. The astounding nature of these verses serves to reiterate that the Quran’s source is divine. No human could have known so many of these facts fourteen hundred years ago.
Surah Al-Hadid, or surah of the Iron, on several accounts displays the importance of iron and the many benefits the miracle that which Allah had sent down gives. The Quran states, “And We also sent down iron in which there lies great force and which has many uses for mankind†(Quran 57:25). The word “anzala†in Arabic translated as “sent down†in English can be representationally used to understand that iron has been sent down by Allah for the benefit of humanity. Yet if we look at the literal definition of this word meaning, being physically sent down from the sky, we can see that this depicts a specific scientific revelation. In fact, the iron found on this planet is not produced on Earth; it comes from giant starts in outer space. This fact not only applies to Earth, but to the entire Solar System. Iron can only be created in stars that reach nearly a hundred million degrees Fahrenheit, so our sun is incapable of doing so. Once these stars have accumulated enough iron, they burst in what is called a nova or supernova and release their iron into the space where it is “sent down†to various moons and planets, including the Earth. By considering this quote from the Quran, we can conclude that both metaphorical and literal definitions validly apply to the fact that iron has been sent down to humankind. It is amazing to think how in just one surah, we are able to derive so much knowledge, not only religious, but also scientific.
Allah also describes in the Quran that iron has “many uses for mankind.†Almost thirteen centuries later, a renown microbiologist by the name of Michael Denton wrote a book called Nature’s Destiny where he is basically confirming what has already been aforesaid in the Quran nearly thirteen hundred years ago at that time. He states,
Without the iron atom, there would be no carbon-based life in the cosmos; no supernovae, no heating of the primitive Earth, no atmosphere or hydrosphere. There would be no protective magnetic field, no Van Allen radiation belts, no ozone layer, no metal to make hemoglobin in the human blood, no metal to tame the reactivity of oxygen, and no oxidative metabolism. The intriguing and intimate relationship between the red color of blood and the dying of some distant star, not only indicates the relevance of metals to biology but also the bio centricity of the cosmos. (Denton)
It is interesting to ponder that Allah has sent us so many meanings in just one aya, and that he has revealed to the believers materials of such great importance. Without iron, humans would not even be capable of living. I wouldn’t even be here to write this essay. Other than being a true revelation from Allah the All-Knowing, there is no other reasonable explanation for such advanced scientific facts to have been understood by the people fourteen hundred years ago.
Another miracle of iron in Islam has to do with one of the isotopes of iron known as Iron 57. This phenomenon begins with the Periodic Table of Elements. On this table, which was first compiled by scientist, Dimitri Mendeleev in 1869 identifies and places known elements based on their molecular mass number and chemical behavior. It begins with Hydrogen, the lightest element in the world with an atomic mass of one, all the way to an element known as Seaborgium. Iron is placed as the 26th number on this table for a very specific reason. The sum of the numerical values of the Arabic letters that make up the word “Hadid†happens to be 26. The Arabic letters that make the name of the entire surah al-Hadid have a mathematical value that sums up to 57. This is the number of the iron surah in the Quran, and it happens to be the number of the isotope of iron known as Iron 57. The iron surah is also the 58th surah from the end of the Quran, which is yet another isotope of iron known as Iron 58. When it is mentioned in the Quran that, “We also sent down iron in which there lies great force and which has many uses for mankind†(Quran 57:25), this aya marks the 26th occurrence of the word Allah from the beginning of this surah, which is Iron 57’s atomic mass, and that is why it is placed number 26th on the Periodic Table. It is apparent from the miracles that Allah has put before us, that this hasn’t been done by chance, but it has been done to secure the beliefs for those who believe in Him and His power.
When the 1961 Novel Prize winning laureate Rudolf Mossbauer began his work towards the study of the absorption of gamma rays in matter, in particular, the study of nuclear resonance absorption, he directed his attention to Iron 57 as it had the strongest recoil free resonant absorption of all the elements. Nuclear resonance fluorescence can also be described as the resonance in tuning forks. When a fork is hit upon a hard surface, it vibrates with a certain frequency. When a second fork is struck with the same force, it begins vibrating with the same frequency. The same process can be applied to fluorescence, which is chiefly a form of resonance involving visible light. It is said, “When light is shined on certain materials, the atoms that make up those materials may absorb electromagnetic energy and then re-emit it. The emitted energy has the same frequency as the original light as a result of the resonance within atoms of the material†(Rudolf Mossbauer’s Biography).
Scientists began questioning whether other forms of electromagnetic radiation could cause fluorescence just as light could. In 1929, a man by the name of W. Kuhn came to the conclusion that gamma rays are also able to display resonance, but his theory was soon disproved due to the fact that gamma rays have considerably short wavelengths, so resonance would have involved changes in the atomic nucleus to make this work. For roughly two years afterwards, no new evidence had been discovered to find any other forms of radiation that could cause fluorescence. The main reason this project had been delayed for so long was because of the problem involving atomic recoil.
Atomic recoil typically accompanies the emission of gamma radiation. Gamma rays are emitted by an atomic nucleus when changes take place among the protons and neutrons that make up the nucleus. When a gamma ray is ejected from the nucleus, it carries with it a large amount of energy resulting in a “kick†or recoil, not unlike the recoil experienced when firing a gun. Measurements of gamma ray energy and of nuclear properties become complicated by this recoil energy (Rudolf Mossbauer’s Biography).
For years, scientists searched for ways to reduce the atomic recoil so that proper measurements of the gamma ray’s energy could be recorded. At this point in time, Mossbauer stepped in with a solution, this being Iron 57. He used this isotope to “fix†a gamma emitter within a crystal lattice so that it produced no recoil when it released a gamma ray. Because Iron 57 was found to have the strongest recoil free absorption, Mossbauer was successfully able to find a way to accurately record energy levels of gamma rays. Not only did he attain the Nobel Prize in 1961 for discovering this, he received a vast number of science awards including the Guthrie Medal of London’s Institute of Physics, the Lomonosov Gold Medal of the Soviet Academy of the Sciences, the Einstein Medal, along with many others.
The Quran is a miracle of Allah, a cornerstone of a Muslim’s faith. It is a tool that can be used and has been used to lay the grounds for future mathematic, scientific, and religious research from the little gems of wisdom found in even its smallest ayas. A Muslim’s destiny lies not only in understanding and incorporating the Quran’s teachings to every aspect of one’s life, but also to go above and beyond and analyze the hidden meanings Allah has set before us in its very depth. One could call these miracles just mere coincidences, yet if this is to be the case, it may as well be one of the most astonishing and unimaginable coincidences ever to exist.
Dyar, M. Darby. “Mössbauer Spectroscopy.†SERC. 1 Feb. 2011. Web. 03 Nov. 2011. <http://serc.carleton.edu/research_education/geochemsheets/techniques/mossbauer.html>.
Michael J. Denton, Nature’s Destiny (The Free Press: 1998), 198.
“Miracles of the Qur’an – Modern Science Reveals New Miracles of the Qur’an.†Miracles of the Quran. Web. 03 Nov. 2011. <http://www.miraclesofthequran.com/scientific_30.html>.
“Rudolf Mössbauer Biography | BookRags.com.†BookRags.com | Study Guides, Lesson Plans, Book Summaries and More. Web. 03 Nov. 2011. <http://www.bookrags.com/biography/rudolf-mossbauer-wsd/>.
“The Miracle of Iron.†The Religion of Islam. Web. 02 Nov, 2011. <http://www.islamreligion.com/articles/562/>.
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If you are looking to get into a top college or university, you must master the art of writing college essays. Many students find writing such papers challenging, but the following sections reveal tips and tricks that can help you navigate this task easily. Here they are.
Identity with Your Topic
Your topic needs to be fascinating. Yes, but there’s more to it. You’ll need to have a genuine interest, so it’s best to go with the one you identify with yourself. You can write about an experience, literature, a person, or more that have had a huge impact in shaping you as an individual. Don’t be shy or afraid to show vulnerability here, as displaying such a side can help you connect with readers more than touting a perception of strength.
Take the Early Train
The golden rule to accomplishing any task is starting early, and such a principle also applies to writing essays. It’s common for students to underestimate the work needed and end up getting overwhelmed with their papers. Many students looking to put their best foot forward often have a college essay online agency help with writing a high-quality piece. Also, buying from such services early can earn you a discount on your papers.
Avoid Coming Off as Generic
Let your essay be different from that of the next applicant. Many prospective students fall prey to the mistake of writing generic write-ups that can fit anyone. When discussing an experience or your aspirations, it’s helpful to be specific, as taking such a route gives your college essay life of its own. Also, remember to keep your stories interesting as you’d need such a quality to leave a lasting impression.
Focus Your Story
Yes, you’re to share a story that’s made an impact in your life, but students often tend to take this instruction the wrong way. They try to retell the entire events instead of zeroing in on the crucial elements or strong turning points. A few paragraphs are far too short to cram that three-week camping trip, so you should discuss spending time with nature under a clear night sky. Remember to be specific, as zeroing down on elements, feelings, and more helps to focus admissions officers’ minds and enhance their understanding of the story’s impact in shaping you.
How an experience or event shapes you is crucial when writing college essays. You should consider connecting the past with the future and not just focus exclusively on the former. The top universities and colleges lookout for highlights of growth and introspection in prospective students’ essays. So, have your write-up delve into your personal growth and aspirations.
Ensure You Stand Out
When applying to a top college or university, it’s only natural that you encounter strong competition from other prospective students for the limited entry slots. You’ll need to reference the attributes that make you stand out from the crowd and why the admissions officers should pick you from the bunch. The trick here is to dedicate about two sentences to features that make you special, such as a rich cultural background, athleticism, multilingualism, and more.
Review and Have Others Help You Out
It’s best not to send in your first draft as your finished work, as you can improve on it upon careful reflection. Find ways to improve your readability, making your sentences short and easy to understand. Prove that you are eloquent and have a good head on your shoulders by taking the time to review your work and writing several drafts as opposed to one.
You’ll need all the help you can get when piecing together an exemplary admission paper. Here’s where your tutor or a writing service often comes into the picture. When applying for the top colleges and universities, there’s no margin for errors. Your essay should be free from misspellings, grammar errors, and mistakes. Consider having a third party review your write-up before mailing it to your educational institution of choice.
Your college essay is an opportunity to convince college admissions officers that you’re a right fit for their academic institution. It’s more than answering a question as many students often perceive. You’ll have to connect with your topic and your readers, have your write-up stand out, be specific, and more. It’s best to get help if you can on your papers, as such assistance can aid with piecing together a high-quality essay.
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Washington, 22 May 2003 (RFE/RL) -- The head of America's central bank says debilitating deflation is possible over the next several months, but he says fiscal policymakers have the tools to ensure that the possibility is remote.
Alan Greenspan -- chairman of the Federal Reserve Board, commonly known as the Fed -- told Congress yesterday that there are hopeful signs of growth in the U.S. economy, but he said it is still struggling against what he called "strong cross-currents."
Greenspan testified before the Joint Economic Committee of the Senate and the House of Representatives that deflation is more likely than a recurrence of inflation over the coming months. "The probability of an unwelcome, substantial fall in inflation over the next few quarters, though minor, exceeds that of a pickup in inflation," he said.
But Greenspan stressed that the Federal Reserve Board can help stimulate consumer spending, investment in the stock market and spending on business expansion by cutting interest rates even further.
Beyond that, he said, the Fed can even buy bonds and other securities issued by the Treasury to drive rates even lower in an effort to stimulate a persistently sluggish economy.
"We at the Federal Reserve recognize that deflation is a possibility. Indeed, we now have been putting very significant resources into trying to understand, without actually seeing it happen, what this phenomenon is all about," Greenspan said.
Deflation is a persistent and eventually debilitating drop in consumer prices. It was a factor in the worldwide economic depression of the 1930s.
The U.S. economy enjoyed a record nine years of uninterrupted growth that ended with the collapse in the value of stocks in the technology industry in 2000. Throughout much of that period, the Fed, under Greenspan's leadership, raised key interest rates in a successful effort to keep inflation in check.
By the end of 2000, these rates had reached 6.5 percent. In January 2001, the Fed began lowering them. The Federal Open Market Committee, (FOMC), the U.S. central bank panel that decides on interest rates, most recently reduced rates on 6 November. They are now at a 41-year low of 1.25 percent.
Such low interest rates make borrowing far less expensive and therefore more attractive for consumers and businesses alike to borrow money for buying goods and services and to expand offices and factories.
The FOMC is scheduled to meet on 24-25 June, when it will consider whether to cut rates further or to leave them as they are. Most observers of the U.S. economy say they expect the committee to debate not whether to reduce interest rates even further, but by how much.
The committee usually cuts rates by a quarter-point, which would bring key rates down to 1 percent. But many economists who follow the FOMC say they believe its members are concerned enough about the state of the U.S. economy that they will press for a cut of a half-point. That would bring key rates down to .75 percent.
Greenspan said it has recently been difficult to assess the direction of the U.S. and world economies since the end of hostilities in Iraq, particularly in terms of the cost of energy. For example, he said, the price of oil dropped significantly once the major fighting stopped about five weeks ago. But the Fed chairman noted that the price of oil began to rise again, in part because of delays in restoring production of Iraqi crude oil.
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HR’s credibility has to start with a clear demonstration and a deep understanding of the business and a willingness to contribute to business decisions – not just to decisions about people.
Of course, the basic services – such as pay, absence, recruitment and avoiding tribunals – must be robust and effective, or the HR team will always be seen in a negative light. This can be particularly true in larger organisations, many of which are changing the way HR services are delivered, and placing greater responsibility on the line to manage such issues.
In such instances, HR can enhance its reputation by taking a strategic approach, ensuring the organisation’s people practices help to improve – not hinder – organisational performance by providing relevant workforce information (for example, on skills or staff turnover) to assist in strategic decision-making.
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A mid-afternoon nap of just 10 minutes can help you stay alert for more than two hours when you’re sleep deprived, according to research from the journal Sleep. But it’s not just insomniacs who benefit from some midday zzz’s. Napping can also improve alertness, performance, creativity and provide a slew of other benefits among the well-rested and yawning masses alike, says psychology professor and nap researcher Dr. Sara Mednick, PhD, in her book Take a Nap! So how can you harness the power of the restorative nap? Read on for our expert-approved tips for the perfect snooze.
When to Nap
There’s a time and a place for playing catch-up, and while some strategies are universal, others will depend a bit more on your individual lifestyle.
“A 30-minute nap has been shown to improve alertness and prevent unsafe driving nearly as well as coffee, according to one study.”
1. Consider your sleep schedule. Mednick’s book notes that the best time to nap depends on when you wake up. For example, early risers who are up at 5 a.m. should nap at 1 p.m., while those who get up at 9 a.m. shouldn’t nap until 3 p.m. You can use Melnick’s interactive Nap Wheel to find your own best wake-up time.
2. Choose afternoons. It wasn’t until the late 80s that researchers began to hone in on the value of napping. One of their first observations about daytime sleep was that the dreaded mid-afternoon slump is part of human nature. They found that, left to our own devices, humans tend to sleep once for a long period at night, and once for a shorter period in the afternoon. So if you can schedule in an early p.m. siesta, there’s no sense in fighting those droopy eyelids — Mother Nature approves.
3. Think ahead. While staying up late (or all night) isn’t good for you, if you’re going to do it, a nap may be a good idea. Researchers have found that a long nap — of two hours or more — can significantly improve alertness for up to 24 hours. Moreover, a preparatory nap counteracts the effects of sleep deprivation better than a nap taken after the missed sleep.
4. Put safety first. Sleeping only six to seven hours a night can double your risk of falling asleep at the wheel, compared to getting eight hours. However, a 30-minute nap has been shown to improve alertness and prevent unsafe driving nearly as well as coffee, according to one study. Young adults in particular benefitted the most from a quick snooze.
5. Preempt a night-shift. Anyone who works hours other than the traditional 9-to-5 can reap benefits from napping, too. A study of night-workers found that while an evening nap plus caffeine was the best way to stay awake, a nap alone also improved alertness — especially helpful for those who don’t like to rely on caffeine to stay awake.
So how do you make the most of your precious nap-time minutes? These tips will help you fall asleep faster and wake up refreshed.
“It can be hard to fall asleep if you are worried about whether you will wake up at the right time. Setting an alarm takes the pressure off.”
6. Time it right. Studies have tested a wide range of nap times, but for most individuals, it seems between 10 and 20 minutes of sleep is best. Longer naps can cause sleep inertia, or a period of grogginess and reduced performance caused by waking in the middle of deep sleep.
7. Get a wake-up call. “Setting an alarm is really helpful for napping,” says Dr. Janet Kennedy, Ph.D, clinical psychologist and founder of NYC Sleep Doctor. “It can be hard to fall asleep if you are worried about whether you will wake up at the right time. Setting an alarm takes the pressure off.”
8. Find your napping happy place. For the perfect nap, you want to find a dark, quiet place to lay down. If necessary, use an eye mask, ear plugs, or white noise to help tune out disruptions. (Of course, if you’ve got a few thousand bucks to spare, you could always get one of these nap pods. Or, the more budget-friendly alternative: the ostrich pillow.)
9. Order up a nappuccino. A “caffeine nap,” or a quick cup of something caffeinated followed by a nap, outperforms both a nap or caffeine independently. Because caffeine takes about 20 minutes to kick in, drinking a cup before a 10 to 20 minute nap means the caffeine will start working just as you wake up, leaving you feeling refreshed and alert.
10. Try meditation. You know the feeling: You’re practically falling asleep with your eyes open, but as soon as you get all hunkered down for a few zzz’s, your mind is suddenly racing. Try calming yourself for sleep with meditation techniques like breathing and visualizations. Need more guidance? Try one of these eight apps for guided meditation.
Who Shouldn’t Nap
For some, it’s worth noting, napping isn’t always the best bet. Here’s how to tell if you’re just not cut out for cat naps.
11. Go with your instincts. Dr. Kennedy notes that, “Some people just aren’t good nappers.” If all of the above tips don’t work for you (you can’t fall asleep, don’t wake up alert, etc.), you just might have to skip the midday option and make sure you’re getting enough shut-eye at your regularly scheduled bedtime.
12. Don’t lose sleep at night. Got a case of insomnia? Dr. Kennedy says napping isn’t a good bet for you. “If a person is having difficulty sleeping at night — either falling asleep or prolonged night waking — I advise against napping at all,” she says.
13. Avoid being “that guy.” Obviously, some work places are not nap-friendly. A mid-afternoon snooze at the office might suggest to your boss that you’re not that into your work. You might not want to lose your job for a nap — unless, of course, you can land a gig at one of these places.
What do you think? Are naps best for elementary schoolers or do the off-the-wall startups with nap rooms have it right?
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WICHITA, Kan. (KSNW) – Blue-green algae, or cyanobacteria, can kill cattle that have ingested it in less than 24 hours.
The bacteria lives in all bodies of water, but according to Will Boyer, an extension watershed specialist for K-State, it becomes problematic after it blooms.
“It’s actually when they die-off is when the toxins are released and they’re most problematic,” Boyer said.
Blue-green algae can sometimes be reddish or brownish, but Boyer says, “Very commonly it’s a blue-green color and looks a lot like somebody spilled paint in the water.”
Although Boyer says it is becoming more common, he says because it happens so fast, there is not a lot of treatment for it.
Farmers can help protect their herd by taking preventative measures.
“Getting out there and checking it regularly, and maybe checking it in the morning would be a good time to check it cause it’s stiller then, and they’re waking up and ready to try and get a little sunshine,” said Boyer.
Farmers can also provide other sources of clean water.
If a body of water has had blue-green algae before, Boyer says you should check it more often for cyanobacteria. Water can be tested by sending it to a lab.
To check the status of Kansas public lakes under investigation for harmful blue-green algal blooms, you can visit the Kansas Department of Health and Environment’s website.
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Bridging the consumer gap between credit unions and banks
As we all know, credit unions comprise a relatively small portion of the overall banking market – accounting for 9.5% of the savings market, 10% of the credit market and 6.8% of the total assets under control. It’s interesting to note, however, that there are slightly more credit unions in the United States than there are banks. So, one must wonder: Why do credit unions lag so far behind as a consumer banking choice?
One obvious rationale would be a discrepancy in the terms offered by the two types of financial institutions. The thing is – credit unions seem to offer the best overall deals. The average credit union charges 70% less for a checking account than the average national bank and provides 67% more features, according to a report by WalletHub. Credit unions also provide rates that are 989% higher than those offered by the average regional bank. The same is true of savings accounts, with credit unions offering rates that are 624% better than those available from national banks.
National banks do have an advantage when it comes to the breadth and value of their credit card offers, but the differential isn’t as stark as one might think given the presence of a number of high-profile credit union offers, like the Premium Travel and Platinum rewards cards from PenFed.
Another easy-to-digest explanation for the performance gap between banks and credit unions could be differences in their marketing budgets. If banks spend more to create national brands, one might argue, then it’s obvious why they would dominate market share. However, the average bank’s annual marketing budget is $2.1 million, according to The Financial Brand, while the average credit union spends $4.1 million. While the sample sizes for these statistics are not commensurate – 100 credit unions vs. 256 banks – these figures do go to show that credit unions are, at the very least, at no major disadvantage when it comes to annual marketing spend.
So, to revisit the original question, what is giving banks such a considerable advantage over the credit union competition if superior terms and larger budgets clearly aren’t the culprits?
The answer, it seems, lies with consumer education. Not only do the largest banks have well-defined brands, but credit unions are also inhibited by the fact that potential customers are not sure which institutions they might be eligible to join. Strict membership requirements also make it difficult for credit union marketers to effectively target their messaging. Such assertions are confirmed by the fact that a Rand Corporation survey revealed that most bank customers would not join a credit union if they had to switch financial institutions because of a lack of knowledge about the services credit unions provide and a perceived deficiency relative to banks in terms of branch accessibility.
Fortunately, there are resources available for credit unions to bridge the information gap in the minds of consumers.
Recently, WalletHub introduced a new tool that enables consumers to quickly identify all of the credit unions around the country that they qualify for in light of where they live, work, worship and more. Through this Credit Union Locator, consumers realize the credit unions available to them and are able to compare rates and features.
Ultimately, it is clear that a lack of consumer education – rather than inadequate terms or marketing budgets – is what’s really holding member-owned institutions back. It is important your credit union capitalizes on resources and tools available to change consumers’ misperceptions.
Guest Authored by Odysseas Papadimitriou, CEO of the credit card comparison website CardHub and the personal finance social network WalletHub. Credit Union Marketing has no affiliation, sponsorship or partnership with CardHub or WalletHub and does not profit from this post or the impact of it.
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Purpose of review: The protease-antiprotease theory of emphysema is widely accepted, but exactly which cells/proteases play a role continues to be a controversial subject.
Recent findings: Reports in humans show increased metalloproteinase activity in emphysema, but the exact role of metalloproteinases remains unclear. In laboratory animals, neutrophils turn out to be crucial, and neutrophil influx correlates well with measurements of matrix destruction. Neutrophil influx is linked to metalloproteinase activity, and in mice MMP12-induced release of tumor necrosis factor-alpha drives neutrophil infiltration. Serine elastase inhibitors, knockout of neutrophil elastase, and interference with tumor necrosis factor-alpha signaling all provide significant protection against smoke-induced emphysema, but metalloproteinase inhibitors may yield greater protection. In genetically modified mice, emphysema can be produced by overexpression of mediators such as tumor necrosis factor-alpha, interferon-gamma, or interleukin-13, and these models show evidence of metalloproteinase, cysteine protease, and serine protease attack with complicated relationships among these mediators. Collagen breakdown also appears to be important in the genesis of emphysema. Pro-apoptotic agents produce emphysema as well, possibly via an elastolytic pathway.
Summary: The idea that a single protease or a single type of inflammatory cell is responsible for human emphysema is unlikely to be true; rather, there are complex interactions among proteases, and between proteases and other mediators. The problem at this time is attempting to sort out the numerous candidate effector agents and to determine which of the animal models are relevant to human disease, since there may be considerable discrepancies in the types of proteases and their roles between laboratory animals and humans. There is now good evidence from animal models that antiproteolytic therapy can be of benefit in ameliorating cigarette smoke-induced emphysema.
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Izalco (ēsälˈkō) [key], volcano, 7,828 ft (2,386 m) high, W El Salvador. It was sometimes called the Lighthouse of the Pacific because it was visible to 19th-century navigators off the coast. Although it has not erupted since 1966, Izalco the volcano is still considered active. The crater was first studied in 1956 by a French expedition.
The Columbia Electronic Encyclopedia, 6th ed. Copyright © 2012, Columbia University Press. All rights reserved.
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The People Are Counting on Us to Report, but We Have to Count on You for Support
Reflections from a Mexican Journey Where the Wheels of Authentic Journalism Meet the Road to a Better Future
By Al Giordano
Reporting with the Other Journalism from a Country Called México
January 31, 2006
“The history of Mexico is the history of the Mayan culture. Few places can be so proud of being the cradle of a civilization that amazed the world and that will continue to amaze it because this history has not ended yet.”
– Subcomandante Marcos
Cancún, México, January 17, 2006
MEXICO 2006: By the time, on January 14, that the pipe-smoking, masked rebel spokesman known as Marcos left the state of Chiapas – first stop, the Mexico-Belize border city of Chetumal – we, your journalists, had been reporting, interviewing, filming, audio-taping, photographing, on that Yucatán Peninsula for sixteen days in advance of the Subcomandante’s visit. Nine graduates of the Narco News School of Authentic Journalism, moving together as a unit, we stopped in isolated indigenous communities that had never seen a national or international reporter before and heard the story of pain and injustice that we have heard and reported throughout this country called América.
Our job – to investigate and report these stories of struggle to so much of the world in six languages – is not anywhere close to being finished, not even on that peninsula where Marcos’ national tour left for other states on January 21. The work of Authentic Journalism, by its nature, brings more work. Once facts are investigated, once people speak their truths, new realities are forged and they bring new clues and leads for further investigation. As our late colleague Gary Webb said, “An Authentic Journalist must have a very low tolerance for injustice.” We are not the sort of journalists who can bear witness to a crime and simply walk away. To listen to the story of pain, for us, is to make a commitment to do all we can to shed light on the dark sources of that pain. And so it will still take us various weeks to complete the first stage of our work from Yucatán and Quintana Roo, just two of Mexico’s 31 states. That’s what makes us something more than mere journalists. It’s what makes us Other Journalists, Authentic Journalists, practicing a very Other kind of Journalism.
First, a quick inventory: Your small, fast-moving, group of correspondents, and our collaborators working from various points all over this planet, reporting from the Zapatista “Other Campaign,” published 105 original works in the first three weeks of 2006 that are displayed gratis on Narco News’ Other Journalism page – www.narconews.com/otroperiodismo/ – and we’re proud of every single one. If you haven’t yet seen our six video newsreels – three in English, three in Spanish – via the Internet (perhaps because you don’t have a fast Internet connection or aren’t accustomed to downloading video online), we’ll make them available soon for you in DVD form via The Fund for Authentic Journalism. They’ve already been broadcast on community TV stations from Venezuela to New York to Italy (in some cases on programs that only accept what they consider to be of high broadcast quality, and they tell us what we already know: that these ones “rate”). Add to that five radio reports (three in English, two in Spanish), nine audio archives we produced (broadcast from Subcomandante Marcos’ weblog, and linked from our pages), twenty original written reports (9 in English, 8 in Spanish and 3 in Italian) and 65 original translations of these works in six languages (21 in Italian, 16 in French, 10 in English, 8 in Spanish, 7 in German and 3 so far in Portuguese).
That is the archive of just three weeks of our work: 105 works in 21 days – oh, my, eight more just were posted online as I type this letter. It is here, on the Internet, available 24 hours a day, free of charge, linked from Google News and other gigantic search engines in all six of those languages, and regurgitated daily by commercial journalists who, at least when they steal from us, have to get their facts straight for a change.
That’s the public story. Now I want to give you a little peak behind the curtain of the Other Journalism’s road team. Because we all agree that we have been present during history-in-the-making – the transformation of a country, and an example for the hemisphere and the world – for the first part of this year. We see that history growing as the Zapatista Other Campaign passes through other states – Campeche, Tabasco and Veracruz, and soon to enter Mexico’s only majority indigenous state of Oaxaca – vanquishing fear, planting authentic hope. And I feel that if you, kind reader, could see and feel some of the smaller stories within the story that we have seen and heard, that you might then do your part to keep this road team on the road.
The bottom line is this: The people along this six-month road tell us that they need our presence, our reporting, that for them it is a life and death matter. We must continue. But we don’t have the resources to do it – not without your immediate participation.
This “road team” includes translators and other journalists and investigators who are not on the road: they are at their posts, sometimes in their homes, sometimes in their offices, doing their splendid job of translating, posting, designing and spreading the word about these important news stories. But there is another group of people on this road team who are also not on this particular road but travel it with us from where you live and work: those of you who have donated, or who are about to donate, to keep this team on the road. Your work on this team is just as important as that of us reporters. In fact, we would not be here on the road without your support. And we won’t continue to be there without your continued help.
So, as bona fide members of this team, I have to let you in on some open secrets, share with you some of the news behind the news, because the story we are living and reporting is your story, too.
“Our Lives Depend on Your Presence”
It was Sunday, January 15, in the backyard of the home of archeologist Fernando Cortés de Brasdefer, in Chetumal, that Marcos held his first full day of meetings outside of Chiapas in 22 years. The first meeting, in the morning, was private – strictly with adherents to the Zapatista Sixth Declaration of the Lacandon Jungle. In this city and environs, where social protest has long been met with threats and repression, the meeting was small: fifteen brave Mexican citizens had signed the Declaration and were present to carry out the work with Subcomandante Marcos.
The Commercial Media was not permitted inside the meeting. Dozens of their reporters and photographers huddled outside this house on the streets of this quiet neighborhood waiting for a snapshot of Marcos or a person to interview while coming and going. But we – your road team of Other Journalists – were there, along with a handful of other comrades from Alternative Media, communicators from Indymedia, from the Centro de Medios Libres, from the Garrafona Collective, and eight of us from Narco News (one team member stayed back to digitalize the video we had shot in the previous 17 days).
At one point during the meeting, as Marcos was listening to the word of Mayan indigenous farmers from the region, he turned toward the section where Alternative Media – those communicators that also have our own struggle against the mighty powers of the Media Industry, and who have therefore adhered to the Sixth Declaration as part of our efforts to fight this battle, too – and he asked:
“Which friends are here from the Alternative Media? Come over here, okay? Because, look, these things you are telling me, these friends, the work they do, is to go everywhere to report the work of our friends like you and pass it to the other side. Why doesn’t one or all of you speak to our friends here about the work you do? I’m just here as your attorney!”
You can see part of that scene in our video trailer for The Other Documentary: There was a pregnant silence – we who report the stories are not accustomed to entering them in this way (in fact, our road team works by the motto “be as invisible as possible to report the story”) – and Marcos shot your correspondent a dirty look, as if to say, c’mon, help us out here! Our cloak of self-imposed invisibility had been flushed out. I gave our radio/audio co-coordinator Quetzal Belmont from Mexico City a tap on the shoulder and without any chance to rehearse or think in advance about making remarks she rose to the occasion. Marcos pulled up an empty chair next to him and signaled her to have a seat. “¡Orale!”
Your and our correspondent, Quetzal, then complied with Marcos’ request, saying:
“Good afternoon. We are distinct compañeros who report for Alternative Media. It’s called Alternative Media because we cover another part of the story differently than the media here in Mexico where we have the duopoly of TV Azteca and Televisa… What we want to do is give another vision. As this is the Other Campaign we also give another form of Journalism…We want to listen to the people, to you, what you are doing, and give another vision that goes more deeply… not just to come to a place and, like other media, who just say oh, they were there, and tell the sensationalist story… For our part, we don’t receive any money from any business or anything like that. Here, our subsistence way to do this coverage – some of us have come from different parts of Mexico – we bring our own equipment, we stay in houses of friends, sometimes people donate material to us so that we can do this, and, well, all this with the objective of offering another vision… you speak to me and we can put out a story, written, on video or in audio about what is happening… Since we are alternative we don’t have the same possibility to reach so many TV sets… but we walk building it. Does anyone have any questions?”
The archeologist de Brasdefer – host of the meeting – then spoke up:
“I would just like to say to the alternative press that you protect lives of these people here. You can’t imagine what can happen here in Quintana Roo, how many times they have been threatened. So it’s very important that you spread their word because they are in danger.”
At the conclusion of Quetzal’s remarks (in a decidedly anti-protagonist tone, and in keeping with our “be invisible” credo, she did not take advantage of the situation to promote herself or the specific project of Narco News, but, rather, spoke about the work that we and all people like us do), Marcos thanked her and then quipped of the Alternative Media workers present:
“These friends are a band. They live with nausea and diarrhea. They’re unpaid. They are our compañeros.”
And then it was back to the work of reporting.
You can see, also, kind reader, in the video trailer, another social fighter from that region worrying aloud about what could happen to him and others once Marcos and the Alternative Press leaves town. We heard this story again and again throughout these travels, every time we encountered poor and working people who are struggling against all odds to make a better life for themselves and their children.
As creative people – writers, producers, directors, designers – we often have the same self-doubt as any other artist, asking ourselves: “Are we making a difference? Does it matter to anyone out there? Is all of this worth the hardships we have chosen to do this work?” Watching the massive hit counts of Narco News’ millions of readers only goes so far in convincing us that this kind of work is worthwhile. Statistics, in the end, don’t feel real. But what real people tell us – and I suppose this is part of what defines Authentic Journalism, this trust and preference for the people from below – convinces us that we are on the right road, that our work is needed, while it also burdens us with the sense of responsibility that comes from asking: And what would happen to these good people if we weren’t here?
And yet, there in Chetumal, and again in Playa del Carmen, and again from Cancún to Mérida we heard it again and again: Your presence, as journalists, is important. Our lives depend on you being here and helping us to tell our story.
The Story Continues: But Can We Keep Reporting It?
Kind reader: That was just one revealing story among many that occurred on the road with the Other Campaign in Mexico.
In recent weeks, we’ve reported to you the struggles of peasant farmers in Chetumal and Oxcum fighting against state governments that want to seize their land to construct international airports, offering people who will never be able to afford to get on an airplane 70 cents per square meter for lands worth a hundred times that miserly sum. We’ve reported to you the efforts by recent migrants in Colonia Colosio and by descendants of the original ancient Maya of that region to save their lands from similar forces seeking to take them away. We’ve reported to you the plight of young people in Cancún who face police repression under a double standard of “law” in which wealthy tourists have more rights than those who clean their rooms and cook their food. We’ve reported to you the word of indigenous artisans in the shadow of the famous Mayan pyramid of Chichen-Itzá being threatened with eviction from that archeological park that their ancestors built…
And we have more stories still to report from that peninsula… Of the residents of the beaches of Mahahual, who have been blocked from their sands by a wall constructed so that the tourists coming off the cruise ships there won’t see the humble people who live there, and so that political parties can control access to who gets to serve and sell wares to those tourists… Of the fishermen of Isla Mujeres and Puerto Progreso who are prohibited from subsistence-level fishing for entire months of the year in order to ensure that the gigantic multinational fishing trawlers that sweep through will have a maximum booty… Of the farmers of San Martín Hilil, Yucatán, who never met a foreign or national journalist before the day we arrived to record their story about how the government and private interests looted the ancient Mayan temples in their town (a story that – go ahead and do a Google search – has never been reported before)…
And then there is the big story that unites all these seemingly smaller stories: That all these stories are the same story. And that there is an “Other Campaign” – far from the bullshit of political parties, their TV spots, spin-doctors, high financiers and public opinion polls – now weaving all these smaller struggles into One Big Fight.
The transformation of each place where Marcos stops along this journey is palpable. One sees it. One feels it if one is present. And hopefully, through our reports, our newsreels, and the rest of the work we do you are beginning to see and feel what we see and feel: the vanishing of fear, the will to fight against bullies, the dream of freedom, justice and authentic democracy…
It’s happening. I have seen history made before. I’m telling you it is happening here along this road in Mexico. But don’t rely on my word. Follow the word of the fighting people who speak through our pages, and increasingly through our audio and video reports.
As Narco News readers, you have seen history made in these and other parts of Our América. You’ve seen it – hopefully you have also “felt” it – through our reports. Where did you first learn about the indigenous coca-grower who is now president of Bolivia? Where did you first meet any coca-grower for that matter? Where did you find out that a president’s “resignation” in Venezuela was, in fact, a military and media coup d’etat? And where did you see how Authentic Journalism is a weapon against such tyrannies? Where did the impossible idea come from that there are honest DEA, FBI, Border Patrol and Homeland Security agents also in struggle against the injustices of the drug war along the U.S.-Mexican border, blowing the whistle and leaking us documents to publish the stories that place the corrupt drug-warriors in check?
All these stories of pain and injustice can overwhelm. They can become just one big blur: that troublesome thought that evil always wins and the people are more screwed over every day, so why bother paying attention? Why bother reporting them if it is all the same terrible story? That is why our coverage of Mexico’s “Other Campaign” is so vital. Because here we are bringing you the story of how those pains and injustices are being attacked, then limited, then reduced, and then vanquished, by ordinary people doing the extraordinary job of joining forces to build a new reality. That is what is happening along this road: nothing short of a transformation that is shaking each region, then all of Mexico, then all the world.
A few days from now Marcos will enter Mexico’s impoverished indigenous state of Oaxaca: It is also home to famous ancient ruins like those at Monte Alban, built by the Zapotec people. It is home to the current-day Zapotecs in Juchitan who led the first successful resistance, in 1982, to single-party rule in Mexico. And it is home to indigenous Mazatecs, Chatinos, Mixtecos, Mixes, Triquis, Zoques, Huaves, Chinantecos, Cuicatecos, Chochos, Iztatecos, Amuzgos, Popolacos, Chontales, Nahuatls, plus many Afro-mestizo descendants of African slaves, each with their own unique struggles and a common struggle against impositions from above. It is a repressive state, where the current governor sent brownshirts to occupy a newspaper building because he didn’t like its coverage, where the government began, last year, ripping ancient trees off the Oaxaca City zocalo (city square) and the people fought successfully to stop it, where political bosses rule with fear and guns, where narco-traffickers own entire police forces, and where pristine beaches and surfer Meccas are invaded more and more daily by greedy developers that displace the native people in order to pollute the land and sea.
It is also, for me, sadly, the land where my close friend and social fighter Carlos Sánchez was assassinated in August of 2003.
Is our work needed there, too? Should the Other Journalism cover the historic journey of Subcomandante Marcos and the Other Campaign in Oaxaca, too?
To those readers who have traveled for any reason – work, school, vacation, or to visit family and friends – I ask you to think about the costs of moving just one person around for one day. Now imagine two people, three people… nine people, as we did in Yucatan. What does that cost? Now imagine doing it for three weeks, as we did on that peninsula… well, we in fact did it for 23 days. Gas, tolls, food, lodging, a rental car at fifty-five dollars a day, tolls, mini-DV tapes, audio minidisks, cybercafe rental, and unforeseen expenses such as what occurred after the early January death of Zapatista Comandanta Ramona that delayed the Yucatan peninsula tour a full extra week, meaning seven more days of expenses. Or, if counting among nine people, what is nine times seven? Sixty-three? Yep, that unforeseen turn of events cost another 63 people-days of expenses in order to produce for you and for the world 105 original works of journalism in six languages.
Half of that came from you, the readers. The other half came out of my (almost gone) savings. None of your journalists were paid. In fact, we paid our own travel expenses to get there from other regions of Mexico, from Texas, from New York.
I remember another key moment on the tour. There we were, prior to Marcos’ visit, in the tourist haven of Playa del Carmen, interviewing the residents of ramshackle Colonia Colosio, a stone’s throw from a beautiful white-sand beach. And at the end of one day’s work, we decided to go relax at the beach. We were there for an hour, looking down at the sand, feeling a little out of place, as if this was not what we came there to do. We saw many people laughing and having fun: privileged people, who came from many lands in nice swimsuits and bikinis, sipping piña coladas and bathing in the turquoise waters. And suddenly we all looked at each other and someone said, “let’s get back to work.” And everybody smiled. Perhaps we are mutants of Authentic Journalism. We honestly prefer to be out interviewing “the simple and humble people who fight” than to be on that sunny and hot beach in the middle of winter. That was our only hour at the beach out of 23 days working near it. That is what my team – our team, your team – is made of. I’m proud of them all and you can be too.
So, I propose to you, kind reader, that you consider the following idea: What if you calculated what it would cost you per day to go and vacation at a Mexican beach resort? And then think about how our reports bring you to the scene of the immediate history that is happening now? And then, what if you decide how many days of Other Journalism work for how many journalists you want to sponsor? I hate to sound like Unicef, but we do this much more cheaply than what most travelers spend in these lands: A $20 dollar contribution will buy dinner for nine hungry Other Journalists. A $40 dollar contribution will keep one journalist on the road for one day. $200 dollars will pay for one week of the video and audio-cassettes necessary to do this work. $385 will rent a car for one week to move those Other Journalists from place to place.
Do you want to be there? If you can’t come personally, you can be there through our work. Please don’t dawdle. Your response or non-response to this appeal will decide whether we can report from the conflict-torn state of Oaxaca beginning on Saturday, February 4 when Marcos – today known as “Delegate Zero” – enters. We want to be there. But right now we’re all stranded in other parts of the Mexican Republic.
You can change that, right now, by making a donation online, with a credit card, at The Fund for Authentic Journalism website:
Or, send a check to “The Fund for Authentic Journalism” at:
The Fund for Authentic Journalism
P.O. Box 241
Natick, MA 01760 USA
If you’re sending a check, drop me an email at email@example.com to let us know how much, so we can assess in these few days prior to the Oaxaca story whether and to what extent we can report it.
One thing I know: with this team of Other Journalists, of Authentic Journalists, we’ll do the same quality work we did in Yucatan and Quintana Roo, and I’ll probably have some more “stories behind the story” to tell you later on.
As a donor, your role as a member of this road team, even from home, is as important as ours, as that of our translators and other participants anywhere on earth. It is you that makes the transformation possible.
Salud y abrazo,
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Please make journalism like this possible by going to The Fund's web site
and making a contribution today.
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Most people are aware of the status of solar energy as a green energy source. But little is known about the specific environmental and public health benefits of solar energy. In fact, the reuse of PV solar panels as a new era of secondary energy is conceivable, energy-saving, and environmental protection.
Climate change has many negative impacts on public health. It makes it easier for infectious diseases to spread, increases droughts and famines and exacerbates natural disasters. You can help reduce these threats by switching to solar power. Photovoltaic solar panels generate electricity to prevent air pollution because they do not rely on carbon dioxide-emitting fuels to operate.
A major cause of air pollution is burning oil, which contains several harmful chemicals that are carcinogenic. Coal isn't much better either, as it contains chemicals like sulfur dioxide, which can damage your lungs when inhaled. Coal particles often contain small pieces of metal that can affect your organs when they enter your bloodstream. Air pollutants also have dangerous effects on the eyes and can cause short- and long-term damage to your vision. And solar panels don't pollute the air at all. Even in the extreme case of a fire, the material in them is not released into the air.
Solar energy emits no greenhouse gases and benefits homeowners and the planet in many ways. It replaces the energy that emits carbon dioxide and methane into the atmosphere.
So can you understand the green cleaning function of solar cells?
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Obama Visits Black Power Ice Cream
A Saturday jaunt to a Maine ice cream parlor by US President Barack Obama has brought serious concern after analysis of the the shop’s logo shows a striking similarity to the logo used to represent Black Supremacy in America.
Obama was photographed Saturday by reporters enjoying a scoop of vanilla in front of Mount Desert Island Ice Cream in Bar Harbor, Maine, which proudly advertises its “fearless flavor” on its website. However, its black, clenched-fist logo bears an uncanny resemblance to the one created to represent the supremacist movement in the 1960’s.
In fact, store owner Linda Parker admits to intentionally modeling her logo after that of the Black Power Movement, telling a reporter in 2008, “Everyone has seen enough cows in the hillside.”
The US Justice Department has come under scrutiny recently after its Obama-appointed Attorney General, Eric Holder, threw out a case of voter intimidation against members of the New Black Panther Party.
Since then, former Justice Department lawyer J. Christian Adams has come forward to tell the American public that racial “payback” is underway at the Justice Department, against Whites in favor of Blacks.
Republican Congressman Frank Wolf has asked the Inspector General to investigate possible Obama Administration involvement with the Justice Department on its handling of the New Black Panther voter intimidation case.
“Something is rotten” at the Justice Department, Rep. Wolf says.
Why President Obama chose to patronize an establishment with such a politically-sensitive logo at this time is uncertain. Some speculate that his handlers, or Obama himself, decided on the press shoot to send a subtle message to his core radical base.
UPDATE (July 21, 2010): The Bar Harbor Times, a local newspaper in Bar Harbor, Maine, picked up on this article and the controversy it started. They even interviewed the owner of Mt. Desert Island Ice Cream, Linda Parker, who called this report “crazy.”
UPDATE (July 23, 2010): This article inspires a Barack Obama Ice Cream naming contest (winner: Barocky Road w/Marxmallows), and the influential (yet left-leaning) DC blogger Wonkette also does a write-up.
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The refrigerator is the centerpiece of any kitchen. You need one to help keep your meats, dairy, milk and fruits and vegetables cool before it’s time to eat them. A refrigerator that doesn’t work will sometimes cause melted or thawed food that will have to be thrown away. No one wants to throw out perfectly good food.
That is why it’s very important to address refrigerator issues right away! We recommend to hire an appliance repair service that offers same-day service to troubleshoot and repair freezer and refrigerator issues.
Good news! You’re the right place! Gold Appliance Repair is able to identify and repair almost all refrigerator issues during the initial appointment on the same day you call our company. Our repairmen work fast to guarantee your refrigerator or freezer is up and running and so no food that has to be thrown away.
We receive more calls about loud refrigerator noises than all other issues related to fridges or freezers. The most common cause of sounds coming from a refrigerator is the condenser fan motor inside of the freezer. Try to figure out where the noise is coming from before you call so we will be able to ensure our repairmen bring the best tools and appliance parts to correct the problem.
Our experienced appliance repairmen know how to fix refrigerator leaks too. The primary causes for a leaking refrigerator is a busted water inlet valve or a problem with the door closure or latch. We stock our service vans with all of the needed replacement appliance parts and tools to complete repairs in the initial visit!
There are only three reasons a refrigerator doesn’t run. The most obvious reason is when it is not plugged in or if there’s a tripped circuit breaker. The other reasons are a temperature control issue or a broken compressor overload relay. Be sure your refrigerator is plugged in and that all circuit breakers are on before calling us.
An ice maker isn’t making ice is not much use. But we can repair it! The most common issues with ice makers in freezers are temperature control, clogged fill tubes or a broken water inlet valve. From time to time ice makers work slowly or make smelly ice cubes. We are able to correct those problems too!
Temperature issues are extremely typical concerning a broken refrigerator. A warm refrigerator is because of a malfunctioning air inlet damper. A refrigerator that’s very cold is due to a broken thermistor or temperature control. This is the same for a freezer that is too cold. We are able to repair freezer and refrigerator temperature issues on most popular models and brands.
The water dispenser on a refrigerator will not work when the water inlet valve or dispenser actuators do not work. A water dispenser problem is not a common refrigerator repair. However, we can repair it! Our repairmen are equipped with all of the manufacturer parts and high-quality tools to fix water dispenser problems on Kenmore, GE, Whirlpool, LG, Sears, Frigidaire and several other brands of refrigerators.
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Roth E.A.,Marine Biological Laboratory Physiology Course |
Roth E.A.,University of California at Los Angeles |
And 6 more authors.
PLoS ONE | Year: 2012
Microtubules are dynamic polymers of GTP- and GDP-tubulin that undergo stochastic transitions between growing and shrinking phases. Rescues, the conversion from shrinking to growing, have recently been proposed to be to the result of regrowth at GTP-tubulin islands within the lattice of growing microtubules. By introducing mixed GTP/GDP/GMPCPP (GXP) regions within the lattice of dynamic microtubules, we reconstituted GXP islands in vitro (GMPCPP is the slowly hydrolyzable GTP analog guanosine-5′-[(α,β)-methyleno]triphosphate). We found that such islands could reproducibly induce rescues and that the probability of rescue correlated with both the size of the island and the percentage of GMPCPP-tubulin within the island. The islands slowed the depolymerization rate of shortening microtubules and promoted regrowth more readily than GMPCPP seeds. Together, these findings provide new mechanistic insights supporting the possibility that rescues could be triggered by enriched GTP-tubulin regions and present a new tool for studying such rescue events in vitro. © 2012 Tropini et al. Source
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For reasons having to do with the current discontents in the Anglican Communion I went to the Anglican Communion website and noticed the content had changed recently. Here is what it now says about the Anglican Communion:
"…the world-wide Anglican Communion, comprising over 80 million members in 44 regional and national member churches around the globe in over 160 countries."
That's a considerably larger number than I had expected, and 44 "regional and national member churches" seemed larger as well.
On this last matter – the number of regional and national member churches – the collection is a bit like a collection of apples and oranges. There are the 38 Provinces, some of which are regional and some national churches (Southern Cone, regional; Brazil, national) In addition to these there are 6 extra-provincial dioceses – namely the Church of Ceylon, Iglesia Episcopal de Cuba, Bermuda, the Lusitanian Church, the Reformed Church of Spain, and the Falkland Islands.
These six dioceses are of different sorts: five are extra-provincial to Canterbury, Cuba to a consortium of other provinces; two, the Lusitanian Church and the Reformed Church of Spain are independent churches that have cast their lot with Anglicans. They are all part of the untidiness of the Anglican Communion, but they are all connected to existing provinces. So really it is more accurate to say the Anglican Communion consists of thirty-eight provinces, some with arrangements made for special circumstances. So I think the description needs to be "in 38 Provinces (being national or regional autonomous churches) around the globe in over 160 countries." The six special circumstance dioceses are to be counted in some other way.
Returning to the 80 million figure: Where does that come from? I went to a variety of sources on line, beginning of course with the Anglican Communion web pages. In the past I believe a number of the pages for particular Provinces gave numbers – sometimes rounded up to the nearest million (I recall Rwanda as 1,000,000), sometimes a number so precise as to be odd in itself. But at any event there were numbers available. I looked about at Anglicans Online. They had a smattering of numbers, mostly not too useful.
Louie Crew's Anglican Pages gives the 1997 figures from the Anglican Communion Office at 76 million. (The map to the right is from Crew's pages) The book, Beyond Colonial Anglicanism, published in 2001, also gives a total of 76 million, but David Hamid, who authored Chapter 3, on "The Nature and Shape of the Contemporary Anglican Communion" admits the numbers present a bit of a quandary.
My curiosity was further aroused by the following note in the GAFCON Frequently Asked Questions pages, "These bishops (the ones doing the inviting to the conference) and their colleagues represent over 30 million Anglicans out of the 55 million active Anglicans. (Nigeria 18m, Uganda 8m, Kenya 2.5m, Rwanda 1m, Tanzania 1.3m plus Southern Cone, US, Sydney, England). The notional total of the Communion is 77m. The active membership is nearer 55m, since of the 26m notional members in CofE 3.7m attend at Christmas Services." GAFCON presumes the number of Anglicans at 77 million noted, 55 million active. CANA speaks simply of "the Anglican Communion, a worldwide fellowship of some 70 million…"
So the numbers are a variable feast: 55m, 70m, 76,m, 77m, 80m.
I am interested in why there is not "official" listing of numbers of members of the Communion from the various Provinces available on the Anglican Communion web site – numbers that they can give with some rationale. In many places those numbers are going to be estimates only, since who is counted and why is a bit difficult, but some reasonable guess must be possible in every Province.
Playing with the numbers is sometimes an exercise in futility. The numbers get warped or misused with great abandon. GAFCON's rather snotty decision to exclude all but 3.7 million CofE members because they don't attend Christmas Services, and the dissenter's often gleefully pronouncement that the Episcopal Church has less than 800,000 members in church on Sundays, is an effort to drag the decadent West's numbers down.
The very small number reported for the Southern Cone – 25,000 plus or minus – is sometimes countered by saying that many more attend who are still listed as Roman Catholic or evangelical but have not formally joined the Church. Alternately I have sometimes taken that number as an indication that the evangelical fervor of Anglicans in the Southern Cone has not yielded much.
The numbers are of value mostly in the context of looking at the history of the development of the various churches and in assessing the sorts of ministries we might do as a Communion. But it would be helpful to have a better guess of what those numbers might be then we have now.
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(Editor’s note: This is an edited version of a commentary that originally appeared in Forbes on Nov. 5, 2012.)
Facing a sea of angry taxpayers and a wave of reforming governors, government unions are becoming desperate.
In Michigan this year, organized labor is going far beyond supporting pro-labor politicians; they want to write themselves special privileges in the state’s constitution.
A proposed Constitutional Amendment, Proposal 2 on the November ballot would give government unions the ability to effectively veto laws passed by elected representatives. And if the unions get their way there, they’ll bring their white-out and markers to state constitutions around the country.
How did the Wolverine state get here?
In recent years, total government spending has surged to a peacetime high of 39 percent of GDP. Why? State and local governments pay out more than $1 trillion in compensation annually.
According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, private employees receive an average of $28.20 in compensation for each hour they work. Meanwhile government workers at the state and local level average $41.10 for the same time. Today, twice as many Americans work in government as in manufacturing, the exact reverse of the workforce in 1960. American taxpayers aren’t getting better government for their money, government workers are just getting more from American taxpayers.
Governors across the country, Democrat and Republican alike, realize this is untenable and have implemented modest reforms on public sector workers, asking them to contribute what average taxpayers do for health care benefits, or making it easier to fire the incompetent or criminal. Union leaders raged, but the public stood by governors like Scott Walker in Wisconsin who put taxpayers first.
It was a clarifying moment in American politics. The country found out just how much workers value these government unions. The answer: Not much. When Wisconsin stopped automatically deducting membership dues from public employees and gave them the option to refrain from paying the union, a stunning number of workers chose to keep their money. In that state, AFSCME lost more than half of its membership in a single year, a strong rebuke from the workers they claimed to be protecting.
Under Gov. Rick Snyder, Michigan passed its own sensible reforms. Snyder asked that public sector workers shoulder 20 percent of the cost of their own health insurance premiums, a little less than the average private sector worker. He also signed a teacher tenure bill including “last in, first out” reform which prevented new, well-performing teachers from being the first to be fired simply because they lacked seniority. Overall, labor reforms that would be overruled by Prop 2-reforms passed by both Gov. Snyder and his predecessors-are projected to save Michigan $1.6 billion annually.
In response to these reforms and those of their neighbors in Wisconsin, government unions in Michigan have proposed this audacious constitutional amendment that would wipe out not just those reforms, but radically change the relationship of government employees and the taxpayers that employee them.
Prop 2 says, “No existing or future law of the state or its political subdivisions shall abridge, impair or limit” unions’ ability to “negotiate in good faith regarding wages, hours, and other terms and conditions of employment…” In other words, government unions will no longer be governed by elected officials, the taxpayers, or even the laws of the state; those would all be subordinated to a collective bargaining agreement.
Michigan Attorney General Bill Schuette says 170 laws and 18 parts to the state constitution may be overruled in whole or in part by Prop 2. If elected officials need to expand criminal background checks on teachers, they can’t pass a law. The state would have to negotiate for that in a heated labor dispute. The same goes for nearly every aspect of a government labor contract: hours, benefits, and working conditions.
The unions have made Michigan their Gettysburg. They know if they win here they can use that momentum to bring similar measures to other states. However, after states like Wisconsin and the new right to work state of Indiana were successful in putting taxpayers and workers above the special interests, a union loss on Prop 2 could further embolden reformers around the country.
And bold reforms on labor policy are just what our country needs right now.
F. Vincent Vernuccio is director of labor policy at the Mackinac Center for Public Policy, a research and educational institute headquartered in Midland, Mich. Permission to reprint in whole or in part is hereby granted, provided that the author and the Center are properly cited.
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IPPMC offers Chinese Massage
Ancient Chinese experts and practitioners believe that energy in the body has to flow continuously to help an individual to relieve stress and prevent diseases. There are two kinds of traditional Chinese massage: the "Tui na" and the "Zhi Ya." The techniques between the two differ, but people will experience renewed strength and vigor after a session lasting at least 30 minutes. Chinese massage has become widely used around the globe.
Benefits of Chinese Massage
Chinese massage relieves pain, boosts immunity and prevents illness.Chinese massage therapy provides pain relief from sore and injured muscles. The techniques improve blood flow to areas, which facilitates health and gets rid of lactic acid buildup. The techniques also help produce a calm and relaxing mood. It is a great way for people to rejuvenate and soothe themselves psychologically from stress. Regular massage sessions boost immunity and prevent the body from developing degenerative diseases, which usually involve the muscles, internal organs and bones. According to a study published in the "Archives of Disease in Childhood" in 2012, patients showed significant improvements in their conditions after application of such techniques.
Chinese Massage for Healing
A 30-minute massage promotes healing. Boosting blood flow and circulation to different pressure points in the body will facilitate healing and hasten recovery. People can revitalize their bodies by going for a 30- to 60-minute massage once or twice a month. A September 2010 study in the "Journal of Alternative and Complementary Medicine" showed that massage therapy enhances muscle repair and recovery. People who are suffering from problems like hypertension, diabetes, muscular pain can benefit from the massage.
What is massage therapy?
Massage is one of the oldest, simplest forms of therapy and is a system of stroking, pressing and kneading different areas of the body to relieve pain, relax, stimulate, and tone the body. Massage does much more than create a pleasant sensation on the skin, it also works on the soft tissues (the muscles, tendons, and ligaments) to improve muscle tone. Although it largely affects those muscles just under the skin, its benefits may also reach the deeper layers of muscle. Massage also stimulates blood circulation and assists the lymphatic system (which runs parallel to the circulatory system), improving the elimination of waste throughout the body.
What are the effects of massage?
Although a single massage will be enjoyable, the effects of massage are cumulative and a course of massage treatments will bring the most benefits. Regular massage can have the effect of strengthening and toning the entire body mechanism, and so help to prevent unnecessary strains and injuries that might otherwise occur due to excess tension and any resulting structural weaknesses. Massage can stimulate or calm the nervous system-depending upon what is required by the individual-and thus help reduce fatigue, leaving the receiver with a feeling of replenished energy.
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This image of the Pacific Ocean was produced using sea surface height measurements taken by the U.S./French TOPEX/POSEIDON satellite. The image shows sea surface height relative to normal ocean conditions on June 25, 1997 and provides more convincing information that the weather-disrupting phenomenon known as El Niņo is back and getting stronger. The white and red areas indicate unusual patterns of heat storage; in the white areas, the sea surface is between 14 and 32 centimeters (6 to 13 inches) above normal; in the red areas, it s about 10 centimeters (4 inches) above normal. The surface area covered by the warm water mass is about one and one-half times the size of the continental United States. The added amount of oceanic warm water near the Americas, with a temperature between 21-30 degrees Celsius (70-85 degrees Fahrenheit), is about 30 times the volume of water in all the U.S. Great Lakes combined. The green areas indicate normal conditions, while purple (the western Pacific) means at least 18 centimeters (7 inches) below normal sea level.
The El Niņo phenomenon is thought to be triggered when the steady westward blowing trade winds weaken and even reverse direction. This change in the winds allows a large mass of warm water (the red and white area) that is normally located near Australia to move eastward along the equator until it reaches the coast of South America. The displacement of so much warm water affects evaporation, where rain clouds form and, consequently, alters the typical atmospheric jet stream patterns around the world. Using these global data, limited regional measurements from buoys and ships, and a forecasting model of the ocean-atmosphere system, the National Centers for Environmental Prediction (NCEP) of the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, (NOAA), has issued an advisory indicating the presence of the early indications of El Niņo conditions.
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100% of all the waste cooking oil we collect is processed into bio-diesel. For every 1 Litre of waste cooking processed 1 Litre of bio-diesel is produced
Bio-diesel may be treated as an alternative fuel to diesel produced from crude mineral oil, but the fact is diesel engines were originally designed to run on vegetable based oils by Rudolf Diesel
The only reason why petroleum diesel has been so popular, is that it is cheaper than its vegetable based brother as crude oil has little other purpose than to be turned into plastic or burnt! Bio-diesel may have as strict definition for tax purposes, but we see it more as a generic term, which covers all diesel which is purely vegetable based, for example:
Yes the basic diesel engine will run on pure vegetable oil without modification. What you need to realise is diesel engines like to run at speed and under load. If this is not achieved engine temperatures will not build up and you will get an incomplete combustion. Hence the reason why cars running on cooking oil smell like a chip shop due to unburnt and partially burnt oil in the exhaust gas! Most modern diesel engines now have high pressure fuel pumps and so much add on equipment like DPF’s (Diesel Particulate Filters) , Ad Blue etc that running on SVO is no longer possible.
Same as above but waste cooking oil is settled to remove heavy acidic fatty content and later filtered down to 10 micron or less.
Bio-diesel is produced by chemically reacting pure vegetable based oil and or animal fats (both are types of Tri-Glyceride), with methanol using sodium hydroxide (lye/causitc soda) as a catalyst.
See basic equation Below.
This equation (transesterification), show the reaction of synthesising oils into bio-diesel and its bi product Gylcerin in its simplest form. This equation would be correct if only using pure fresh vegetable oil as the feedstock and 100% pure reactants.
It does not take into account that when using WVO and animal fats some of the Triglcerides will be broken down into Diglycerides and Monoglycerides + Free Fatty Acids during cooking. Therefore the actual process of treating used cooking oils is a lot more complicated and will involve pretreatment such as acid esterification,
When using used cooking oil, there is also the added difficulty of water being present in the oil. Luckily most of the water falls out of the oil under heating, but some remains “stuck” to the oil and when this is added into the reaction and it creates soap rather than bio-diesel.
This is fine is small quantities as it can be washed out in a further process, but is something that needs to be avoided.
Commercially water will be removed by using high force centrifuges, but it is just as effective to use some gentle heat and settle the oil out over time.
Cater oils does not produce bio-diesel We are specialists at selling fresh cooking oils, collecting used cooking oils and refining used cooking oils into a pure used cooking oil product, ready to be turned into bio diesel at one of the UK’s leading bio fuel plants such as Greenergy.
Greenergy operates one of the UK’s largest bio diesel production plants in Immingham bieing capable of producing 300 million litres of Bio-diesel per year.Greenergy also operates its own petroleum and diesel distribution selling in excess of 20 million litres per day.
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Since January 2019 Drone Tech has been investing in the field of drone surveillance. These new systems provide very significant added value over what is being done on the ground. More than 45 countries are already using surveillance drones or UAV systems. What still appears as an innovation to some, is obvious to many.
The systems are already mature and available.
In order to offer a complete coherent offer, Drone Tech has established partnerships with two specialized companies in the sector. The systems can be integrated into a security architecture of a control room :
Supplied with energy from the ground, these captive multicopters obtain an almost infinite autonomy. At 100m from the ground they can monitor a perimeter day and night up to 10km.
Some machines allow an air-ground communication inviolable thanks to the passage of data directly into the wire.
Beyond the monitoring, these drones can be used for communication relay or internet network for example.
These small air robots are specialized in H24 surveillance rounds.
Once programmed they no longer require any implementation: Deployment, flight, landing, storage and recharging of batteries are fully automated.
They can also be deployed on demand and/or serve as an intervention drone..
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City crews continue to monitor Assiniboine River water levels, with a crest now expected sometime later this week.
Brandon experienced an inflow of water from the Shellmouth Reservoir on Saturday, resulting in water flooding the soccer pitches along First Street North. That area remains under water and is closed to public access, as are all recreational areas along the Assiniboine River corridor.
Water levels, as measured at First Street, continue to sit at a level around 358 metres above sea level, though precipitation is forecast in the coming days and could increase that. Officials say they anticipate a peak level of 358.4 metres above sea level; however, the arrival of the crest might be anywhere from May 6–8.
Emergency crews scrambled to city dikes over the weekend after warnings that the Assiniboine River was spiking but although the river is high — and getting higher — it wasn't at the extreme range that instruments suggested.
Automated readings showed a sudden surge on Saturday night to a river level of 361.18 metres above sea level — a new record that would have been more than 30 cm above the level recorded in 2011, and closing in on the all-time estimated record from the Great Flood of 1882.
In fact, however, water levels were not that high. They were actually about three metres lower, at a level that is similar to where they are now.
The city’s electronic gauge and other infrastructure were inspected Monday morning to ensure accuracy.
The city's current response plan takes into account a safety margin of two feet above those predicted peak levels. Several pumps have been placed at key areas along the dike system and will be activated if needed. Work is planned along the city’s dike system to block affected outflows, including one at Knowlton Drive.
A response plan is also in place to close Grand Valley Road if water begins overtopping the roadway.
A provincial flood warning remains in effect for all of the Assiniboine River betwen the Shellomouth Dam and Brandon. The province estimates that about 30,000 acres of agricultural land has been affected.
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On our way home this evening, we noticed that a new restaurant/bar had opened up on in our 'hood (they opened about a month ago) ... so we thought we'd check it out.
Introducing The Samuel J. Moore ...
Samuel John Moore (August 3, 1859 – 1948) was a Canadian businessman,
founder of Moore Corporation Limited.
He was born in England and came with his family to Barrie, ON, while still young. When he was 12, he found work at the Barrie
Examiner as a printer's assistant, later becoming local editor. He
worked in Texas, then returned to found Grip, a satirical weekly
journal, with J. W. Bengough. In 1882, Moore left to found Moore
Business Forms (then called Grip Printing & Publishing Company),
which sold books of sales slips with flip-over carbon paper. The
company, later Moore Corporation Limited, went on to become a major
supplier of business forms and printing services in North America. Other
affiliated companies were formed in the United Kingdom and Australia.
Moore also founded the Metropolitan Bank of Canada in 1902; it was
merged with Scotiabank, where Moore served as president and chairman of
He played an important role in the development of the YMCA in Canada and
was a major supporter of the Canadian Baptist Church being a member of
Dovercourt Road Baptist Church in Toronto and Sunday school leader. He
was one of the founders of Toronto Bible Training School, established in
1894 (in 1912 the name was changed to Toronto Bible College) with
Elmore Harris another Toronto Baptist Pastor and others.
Moore Corporation Limited merged with Wallace Computer Services in 2003
to form MooreWallace, which was subsequently acquired by R. R. Donnelley
& Sons Company.
The building this restaurant is in was the original West End YMCA.
There are cool old photos on the walls representing the history of the building over the years.
Sean was very helpful in recommending a glass of white wine (he gave me a couple samples until I found a Riesling I liked).
Here are Sean and Gord. Sean was very friendly and knowledgeable.
And here is Sean with his fresh concoctions.
The menu looks interesting, especially the chicken with a curry sauce.
We'll be back!
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Completely free to use and modify, the OBI toolkit promises to enable its users to “design a house and/or greenhouse — that respects the planet and can be expanded as your needs and family grow — using a library of modules that fit together like building blocks.” By way of instructionals and training programs, the Institute says that it can help anyone to “organize the rapid-build of a house loaded with ecological features.” Most impressive of all, the majority of the designs can be built within five days. And yes, they’re all eco-friendly.
“All of the technology for building an autonomous house exists, it’s just a matter of harnessing them all in one roof,” Jakubowski told Co.Design. “A large number of experts have that knowledge, but typically to pull that knowledge together means the design itself is expensive and the components are expensive.” And that’s where OBI comes in.
The cost of a “starter home,” which comes in around 700 square feet, is about $25,000, the OBI team says. And as far as who takes care of the actual building, the Institute notes, “Builds can be executed by a contracted crew, a group of friends and relatives, or using a social production model. In this social production model, builds are structured as educational experiences and take place in the context of training workshops.”
So what’s the point of the Kickstarter? The $80,000 will help “fund the necessary steps to make our building system widely replicable,” OBI says on its campaign page. After all, such knowledge is meant to be shared. So if you’re looking to join the green revolution, this may just be the cause to contribute to.
- There’s a new reason HDDs could be better than SSDs
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- Combat travel-induced climate guilt with an app that plants trees
- Facebook builds virtual homes to train A.I. agents in realistic environments
- Engineers build new camera capable of taking pictures in five dimensions
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Booth, J. (2011). Spiny lobsters: through the eyes of the giant packhorse. Victoria University Press: Wellington. ISBN 978-0-86473-6550 . 256 pp.
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Covering the remarkable life cycle of the largest spiny lobster in existence, this fascinating reference explores the packhorse lobster, one of the most primitive of all crayfish, found off the coasts of northern New Zealand and mideastern Australia. From egg to plate, the chapters cover the taxonomy, ecology, distribution, anatomy, physiology, and behavior of these intriguing creatures. Fishing techniques used to catch them are also investigated, depicting their impact on lobster populations as well as the ways in which they are then processed and marketed.
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Bangalore based start-up Liv.ai has launched Speech recognition technology in 9 Indian languages to enable businesses to reach out to people who communicate in their regional language instead of English. As an alternative to typing, people can now use their voice to text chat on apps like Facebook and Whatsapp speaking in their own language. Liv.ai has a simple vision to empower people to interact with their devices, businesses and government using their natural voice. Businesses can use it to create digital assistants in regional languages, transcribe audio/video files, setup voice based IVR and do intelligent speech analytics. Liv.ai APIs can be integrated to applications across devices including mobile phones, tablets, PCs, TVs, Speakers, Set-top Boxes and even Cars.
Liv.ai’s innovation enables people to benefit from progress in technology without the need to use English as a medium of communication and many a times without the need of people being even a literate. Necessity to write and speak in English continues to keep people away from using technology to its full potential. Liv.ai’s Artificial Intelligence (AI) breakthrough enables people to break their linguistic barriers and be heard in their own language.
Brainchild of three friends from IIT Kharagpur – Subodh Kumar, Dr Sanjeev Kumar and Kishore Mundra, the Liv.ai platform recognises voice in all major Indian languages namely Hindi, Punjabi, Kannada, Bengali, Tamil, Telugu, Gujarati and Marathi. Along with what they proudly call the best AI team in India, the co-founders have been working for more than 3 years in developing speech and language based applications for Indian languages. While global mobile phone brands and biggest Apps during the same period were expecting over a billion people to use their products in English only.
Liv.ai had predicted rightly, the advent of business automation, launch of voice commanded devices such as smart speakers and need for traditional uses such as transcribing will revolutionise the AI enabled technology landscape. In a recent report, McKinsey Global Institute stated that in the year 2016, companies invested between USD 26 billion to USD 39 Billion on AI technologies and top two areas were robotics and speech recognition
Stressing on the basic need for local language speech recognition, Co- Founder and CEO, Subodh Kumar says – “People in India are not proficient in English, but the technology ecosystem has been built around English. We at liv.ai recognized that global solutions may not work here and thus we envisioned solution specific to India which in hindsight has proved to be a right decision.”
Liv.ai has already been integrated with leading Indic keyboards allowing people to use their voice to send emails, messages or post on social networks. In addition multiple large businesses are integrating Liv.ai’s APIs to automate their customer care. The technology is well-designed to work amidst background noise without loss of data.
The team led by some of the brightest minds in Artificial intelligence in India promises to augment the technology space with newer products to bring voice recognition capability to a billion people in our country.
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Just try to overstate the water crisis in Flint, Mich.
That regulatory authorities would turn a blind eye to what can simply be described as knowingly poisoning children through lead excrescence from water pipes is an atrocity of epic proportions. And one that will play out over the years and decades. Any child who drank Flint water has been exposed to lead. The number runs close to 10,000.
Little surprise, then, that Governor Rick Snyder, who was scheduled to deliver his sixth State of the State address to Michigan Congress Tuesday evening, isn’t balking at comparisons of the mismanagement of this catastrophe to George W. Bush’s flyover mishandling of Hurricane Katrina. “It’s a disaster,” he told Ron Fournier of the National Journal, before adding that he would like to be around long enough to solve the problem.
Unsurprisingly, protestors think otherwise. So too does Democratic leadership hopeful Bernie Sanders, who has called for Snyder’s resignation.
Three years ago, the residents of Flint seemed to be smartly thinking with their pocketbooks. Why not circumvent rising costs from the Detroit Water and Sewage Department (DWSD) by signing on to a new pipeline from a new water authority? The savings, promised the Karegnondi Water Authority (KWA), would be “millions of dollars in water costs over time.”
Except said pipeline has yet to be built, and so the Flint River was tapped as a stopgap source. For more than a year and a half, residents’ complaints about the smelly, discoloured liquid that tumbled from their taps were ignored or purposely buried. It was the corrosive properties of the water that leached the lead from the pipes. It needn’t have happened.
I’m betting that Environment Minister Catherine McKenna is paying close attention to all this. Why? Two words. Lake. Huron.
The flip side of the dirty water Flint River scandal is the historic reliance on water from the Great Lakes. DWSD was piping Lake Huron water to Flint and the planned KWA pipeline would do the same. The bigger picture: about 40 million Canadians and Americans rely on the Great Lakes for their drinking water.
Long before the Flint story broke, political opposition was mounting in Michigan to a plan this side of the border that would see Ontario Power Generation sink a so-called deep geological repository little more than a kilometre from the shores of Lake Huron on the edge of the Michigan Basin.
The purpose of the DGR is to store, at a depth of 680 metres, low and intermediate nuclear waste that would be transferred there from all of the province’s reactors. Shoe covers, mops and such would constitute low-level waste, while resins with radioactive properties extending into the thousands of years constitute some of the so-called intermediate waste.
When I toured the area last spring, opposition from the likes of Democratic Rep. Dan Kildee was batted away as mere vote getting. “It’s opposition without technical merit,” Jerry Keto, OPG’s vice-president of nuclear decommissioning, told me, adding that the “geological isolation” of the site renders the proximity to the lake all but irrelevant.
In May, a federal review panel submitted its environmental assessment report to then environment minister Leona Aglukkaq, having concluded that the DGR is the “preferred solution” and that the OPG site offers “highly suitable” geology. As to the lake itself, the review panel found that “the project is not likely to cause significant adverse effects on the water quality of aquatic ecosystems of Lake Huron.”
In subsequent months, other Michigan politicians joined the “No” ranks, including Senators Debbie Stabenow and Gary Peters.
The then-federal government punted the issue past the election. A decision by the Liberal government has been promised by March 1.
That’s a big file for Ms. McKenna. A central question she might be asking of the process is this: what other comparison sites in the province were drilled, risk-tested and cost assessed before concluding that the proposed site is the right one?
Advocates will argue that the municipality of Kincardine offered itself up as a host site. That is true. But it’s not an answer. They will also argue that the Flint disaster is unrelated. I’m not so sure. Politics is politics.
Jennifer Wells’ column appears Wednesdays and Saturdays.
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Tools out of bone and stone...giant bones? Bones of their ancestors? Their size makes me think they might use mammoth bones or other large creatures you mentioned but I wonder if using their own people's bones might make it more interesting. Could be an interesting concept for a creation of weapons too if they could get a hold of some bones.
As it stands, its a good start, but a little more in the line of how they might be expected to behave when you interact with them would be good. What do they generally think of the little men? Will they strike you down for bearing a torch or having a campfire? Do they make merry at their camps when you encounter them, or are they a dour bunch?
Also, to Muro's comment: We expect that a creature five times taller, five times thicker, and five times wider than a natural human should weigh not five times what a man does but 125 times his weight. At six foot, a human is 'supposed' to weigh about 165 pounds, so we expect a 30 foot giant to weigh about ten and a half tons.
Rather than painting a picture, it throws up questions.
As for their dimensions, they'd have to be disproportionately thicker than a simply enlarged human, as strength of bone increases with its cross-sectional area, but the burden placed upon it with the volume of flesh. Hence, why elephants are so stocky.
A nice take on the frost Giant take. As for dimensions, I don't worry about them for fantasy, because as soon as you do, Dragons, really Giant Bugs, etc, become impossible or twisted from our intent.
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If more was added, I'd like more on their motivations and culture :)
An interesting culture, though a bad one to spring on PCs who like wearing gaudily-colored adventuring outfits. Perhaps a little bit of warning from the townfolk would be in order before the PCs set out into the wilderness. Also, the rime-fire intrigues me. Could some frost-giant blood be"harvested" and kept in a vial for later use? Would be fun to use it as an impromptu grenade . . .
I've been waiting awhile to comment on this one because I've been trying to let it grow on me. The idea is interesting -- a bit munchkin-y, to be honest -- but I can see that it would work if you had good rules for blocking with shields in your game system.
What puts me off is really its construction. These are dwarves, right? For a weapon-returning shield I would have expected a more . . . mechanical solution. Maybe something that slingshots the missile around the dwarf and back at their foe. Maybe something that uses magnetic forces. The shamanistic rock substance didn't really do it for me.
Now, I can imagine a sort of "portable portal" variant of this that might make sense (though probably not for dwarves). Instead of a rock that actually sucks the spear out of someone's hands, the shield could be a two-way portal that will simply reflect the attack back out. The enemy would still be holding onto his end of the spear, but the pointy end would now be coming at his chest. No sucking force at all, and no reason the weapon couldn't be half-out, half-in.
Just my 2c. Even if you didn't change the construction or effects of this shield in any way, it could still use some expansion.
The idea is interesting but I have trouble visualizing it. Dossta's idea of a "portable portal" is a nice twist and is easier for me to see. It is especially nasty, since all of the attacker's force is twisted back around.
This sub leaves me curious about the Skkanden. They seem more "savage" than the average Dwarf. Are they more focused on stonework than metalwork? Is their culture more tribal/animistic in nature?
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In his 1814 Edinburgh MD thesis (see figure), Alexander Hamilton described an experiment that took place during the Peninsular War to assess the effects of bloodletting. Hamilton and two other army surgeons carried out the experiment, which involved 366 sick soldiers in 1809 in the hospital at Elvas, Portugal.
“It had been so arranged, that this number was admitted, alternately, in such a manner that each of us had one third of the whole. The sick were indiscriminately received, and were attended as nearly as possible with the same care and accommodated with the same comforts. One third of the whole were soldiers of the 61st Regiment, the remainder of my own (the 42nd) Regiment. Neither Mr Anderson nor I ever once employed the lancet. He lost two, I four cases; whilst out of the other third [treated with bloodletting by the third surgeon] thirty five patients died.”
No corroborative evidence has yet emerged that the trial actually happened, but it is still noteworthy that Hamilton judged that his description of alternation and standard conditions would impress his examiners.1
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Glue in bolts were added to this part of the rock face in the Rock Centre era. A line of staples starts up what appears to have been originally unclimbed rock. The staple line then joins the original Little Subtleties trad. route higher up. The result is a good sport climb, which is better than it looks, although the rock does feel oddly slippery...
Start from a rising ramp of soil, just before the end of the climbable rock. Climb an awkward groove (below and just to the right of the first staple) and reach high for a shothole fingerhold at the base of a bulge. Move to the left and make a long reach to a good hold above. Move back right, and continue more easily over ledges to the base of a steep, leftwards trending groove. Climb the groove to reach a lower-off on the wall to the right. (The 4th bolt is a bit poor, there are small wire placements in the vicinity as a back-up).
FA details below are for the original Little Subtleties, the first pitch of which starts a few metres to the right and is now wholly overgrown.
(The 1971 guide book talks mentions a 'severe' pitch which was climbed to the left of the upper part of Little Subtleties. There is enough room to squeeze another line up this part of the crag if the bolting were to be reassessed - any proposals to be agreed with John Boulton).
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The construction economy in the U.S. seems to be on solid ground, with the major building categories seeing steady volume increases
ATLANTA, GA (PRWEB) November 09, 2015
CMD, one of the leading providers of construction information in North America, today announced its seventh annual fall economic webcast, "Construction 2016: How Sustainable is the Economic Recovery?" will take place from 12 – 1:30 p.m. EST on Thursday, Nov. 19, 2015. The free webcast will feature chief economists Kermit Baker of the AIA, Ken Simonson of the AGC of America and Alex Carrick of CMD. AGC professionals and media attending Greenbuild in Washington D.C. are encouraged to view the panel live at the Walter E. Washington Convention Center in conference room #159.
Despite the recent slump in construction activity, many anticipate growth and a generally positive outlook for 2016. The webcast will reveal what factors well-respected economists inside the construction industry think will affect forecasts and allow participants to ask questions during the last half hour.
“The construction economy in the U.S. seems to be on solid ground, with the major building categories seeing steady volume increases and all forward-looking indicators appearing positive,” stated Alex Carrick, chief economist for CMD. “In 2016, construction starts are expected to pick up to 8.4% growth, as rising household incomes boost growth in the residential sector and stronger business investment props up the non-residential segment.”
The webcast will answer numerous questions important to the construction industry including:
- What trends are driving construction growth?
- Which markets are surging ahead of predictions?
- How tight is the competition for skilled labor?
- Has housing reached its full potential?
- Which regions are showing signs of slowing?
- Where is construction on-site and planning activity speeding up?
- What are the wild cards that can affect the upcoming season?
To take part in the webcast sponsored by Plumbing Manufacturers International (PMI) and the International Code Council (ICC), register here. AIA members who attend the live broadcast will receive AIA CEU credit, and all who register can download the presentation slides and view the webcast archive.
For additional information, visit cmd.group.com for the latest on trends in the construction industry.
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For over 150 years, members of the American Institute of Architects have worked with each other and their communities to create more valuable, healthy, secure, and sustainable buildings and cityscapes. Members adhere to a code of ethics and professional conduct to ensure the highest standards in professional practice. Embracing their responsibility to serve society, AIA members engage civic and government leaders and the public in helping find needed solutions to pressing issues facing our communities, institutions, nation and world. Visit the AIA website at.org.
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The Associated General Contractors of America (AGC) is a national trade association, dedicated to furthering the ever-changing agenda of commercial construction contractors, improving job site safety, expanding the use of cutting-edge technologies and techniques, and strengthening the dialogue between contractors and owners. Founded in 1918, the AGC today represents more than 33,500 member firms, including 7,500 of America’s leading general contractors and over 13,000 specialty-contracting firms. Visit the AGC website at agc.com.
CMD, the InnovationPartner of the AIA, is a leading North American provider of construction information. CMD’s diverse portfolio of innovative products and technologies includes national, regional and local project leads, marketing solutions and market intelligence to provide insight to construction industry professionals throughout the U.S. and Canada. Visit the CMD website at cmdgroup.com.
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Written by Charleston Bankruptcy Lawyer, Russell A. DeMott
In part one and part two of The Bankruptcy Means Test, I explained the shaky foundation of the means test: Current Monthly Income, or CMI for short. This post will address the issue of what happens when you pass the means test if you have above-median income or don’t even have to take it at all because your income is below median.
The purpose of the means test is to assist the court in determining whether a Chapter 7 case would be an abuse. But what if you either (a) take the means test and pass it, or (b) don’t even have to take it because your income is below median income for your state? Does that mean you automatically qualify for a Chapter 7 bankruptcy? No.
Think of the means test as just one tool the court has to determine whether you should be granted a Chapter 7 discharge of your debts. Remember, there are no payments in Chapter 7. Chapter 7 allows you to wipe out debt without any repayment to creditors.
The means test is one of two tests applied to Chapter 7 cases. The other test is the totality of the circumstances test, and it’s far more important than the means test. Under this test, the court looks at “you guessed it” the totality of the circumstances to determine whether you should be allowed to discharge your debts in Chapter 7.
Truth be told, I really don’t think the vast majority of judges care much for the means test. Some have, in so many words, said as much in their opinions. It’s a mechanical test that often yields bizarre results. For example, the means test allows for an unlimited amount of secured debt to be deducted from the amount the debtor has to pay his unsecured creditors.
I see this all the time in my Charleston, South Carolina practice. A debtor with a large house payment and a couple of large car payments will pass the means test, but a debtor who rents and has no car payments will not pass it.
Let’s take an extreme–and purely made up–example. A husband and wife (family of two) has an annual income of $118,000. Median income (the 50th percentile) for a South Carolina household of two is about $51,000. Our hypothetical couple earns way more than that.
Let’s further say they have mortgage payments totaling $4000 per month, one car payment of $800 per month, and another car payment of $1400 per month. Will they pass the means test? Yes. They are loaded up with a ton of secured debt, and the means test allows an unlimited amount of secured debt to be deducted from what the debtor should pay his creditors.
Will our hypothetical couple be able to discharge their debts in Chapter 7? Absolutely not. Why? Because under the totality of the circumstances test, it would be obscene to allow these debtors to wipe out their debt and continue paying for a very expensive house and two very expensive cars.
Having said all this, I want to stress that this would be the result in South Carolina. Our court has found several Chapter 7 cases abusive, and in each of those cases, the debtors actually passed the means test. In other districts–though not many–the bankruptcy courts have reasoned that if the expense (including secured debt) is allowed on the means test, the court will not review the reasonableness of the expense.
There are two critically important principles to learn from this:
- Just because you pass the means test does not mean the bankruptcy court will grant you a Chapter 7 discharge.
- Our new bankruptcy law is interpreted in wildly different ways in different bankruptcy districts. What may work in, say, California, may not work in South Carolina. Get local bankruptcy advice from a bankruptcy lawyer in your area.
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Pulse position modulation for spectrum-sliced transmission
UNSPECIFIED. (2004) Pulse position modulation for spectrum-sliced transmission. IEEE PHOTONICS TECHNOLOGY LETTERS, 16 (4). pp. 1191-1193. ISSN 1041-1135Full text not available from this repository.
Official URL: http://dx.doi.org/10.1109/LPT.2004.824668
An original analysis is presented for spectrum-sliced (SS) transmission employing digital pulse position modulation (PPM) and maximum likelihood detection. The treatment is placed within the context of low-cost access networks, where system parameters allow employment of the Gaussian approximation. SS-PPM is compared to ON-OFF keying (SS-OOK) in the presence of dispersion and found to be typically some 24 dB more sensitive. In addition, comparison is made with laser-based OOK where the optimum SS-PPM configuration reduces or eliminates the SS power penalty.
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and you won’t believe how much money a musician can achieve.
I searched all over the internet few days for the richest musicians in the world and how they’ve gotten rich.
Not all musicians on the list got rich by music alone.
Most of them are also good businessmen.
To learn more about how they got rich, keep reading.
Here are the 11 richest musicians in the world:
#1 Jay Z
According to Forbes, the famous American rapper and businessman has an estimated net worth of 1.4 billion dollars! a number that makes him the richest musician in the world for this time.
He is one of the best-selling musicians globally and has sold more than 50 million albums and 75 million singles.
He made most of the money from being a great businessman,
from founding a clothing line to real estate,
buying Tidal(subscription-based music streaming service),
investing in a cannabis company,
and many more great Investments.
#2 Paul McCartney
You read it right, one member of the Beatles has 1.28 billion dollars net worth which he earned through the music industry,
both solo and with The Beatles.
He understood the power of publishing rights.
For example, a festival pays him about half a million dollars to play Wonderful Christmastime every year.
A big part of McCartney’s success is the consistency in his carrier, decades of songwriting, and tours.
#3 Andrew Lloyd Webber
Andrew is a British composer and musical theatre impresario, and he has composed more than 20 musicals.
His shows have been performed in 148 countries around the world.
He made the second highest-grossing entertainment property in history, “The Phantom of the Opera” (a musical),
which has made over $6 billion worldwide,
which even outperformed every movie ever made.
#4 Herb Alpert
Herb Alpert is an American music industry executive and has sold more than 75 million albums worldwide.
Alpert had founded a record label (A&M records) which has grown into the largest independent record company in the world. Later on, it sold for $500 million.
He is regarded as one of the most successful artists because of his vocal and trumpet abilities.
#5 Sean Combs
Besides his very successful rap career,
Sean held the successful record label “Bad Boy Records,” which signed very famous rappers, even The Notorious B.I.G.
He agreed to promote the popular vodka known as Ciroc in return for 50% profit. Later on, the company has grown from selling 50,000 cases per year to 2 million per year.
In 1998, Diddy launched Sean John, his fashion line and clothing company that has earned nearly $600 million annually.
Also, he is a partner in the company Aduahydrate, one of the biggest bottled water companies in the world, worth $2 billion.
#6 Dr. Dre
The rapper Dr.Dre has an estimated net worth of $800 million.
He founded Beats Electronics, which makes the headphones that you see on every second person.
In 2011, he sold a 50% stake of the headphone company to HTC for $310 million.
Later on, Apple bought the company in 2014 for $3 billion, but Dr.Dre still has a twenty percent stake.
Madonna made most of the money from her successful music career and acting career,
but she also benefited from entrepreneurship.
She got no less than 16 Guinness World Records,
including Best-Selling Female Recording Artist of all Time
(sold more than 300 million records worldwide).
Madonna is also the highest-grossing solo touring artist, with over $1.4 billion earned from her 11 concert tours throughout her career.
She also founded a fitness center company and released her fragrance, called Truth or Dare by Madonna.
#8 Emilio Estefan
Emilio Estefan is a Cuban-American musician and producer,
real estate developer, and owns several businesses.
He developed talented artists who became famous in the music world in his career,
including his wife Gloria Estefan, Jennifer Lopez, Shakira, and more.
He also has written a best-selling book called “The Rhythm of Success – How an Immigrant Produced his own American Dream.”
With his wife, he runs many business establishments such as casinos, hotels, and restaurants.
#9 Elton John
His fortune is made from successful music tours and album sales, he has sold more than 250 million records.
With his concert residency, The Million Dollar Piano, he has earned around $0.5 million for just a single show.
His art collection is worth more than $200 million.
And he has also invested in real estate properties in London, Nice, Venice, Los Angeles, and Atlanta.
Coldplay is a rock band founded by the lead vocalist Chris Martin and the lead guitarist Jonny Buckland.
Later on, Guy Berryman, the bassist, and Will Champion, the drummer, were joined.
Their money success comes from the millions of albums that they have been selling (over 100 million albums worldwide),
and from their great tours, for example, their head full of dream album tour has reached more than $200 mіllіоn.
#11 Jimmy Buffett
Jimmy Buffett is an American singer, songwriter, author, and successful businessman.
Most of his fortune comes from his music careers as a record producer, songwriting, and singing.
He has also been involved in businesses like restaurants, casinos, hotels, and bars.
Those musicians have a huge fortune.
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Based on what you have learned so far in this course, create a PowerPoint presentation that addresses each of the following components. Be sure to completely address all the prompts. Use clear headings that allow your professor to know which bullet you are addressing on the slides in your presentation. Support your content with at least four (4) sources throughout your presentation. Make sure to reference the citations using the APA writing style for the presentation. Include a slide for your references at the end. Follow best practices for PowerPoint presentations related to text size, color, images, effects, wordiness, and multimedia enhancements.
Part I: Describe how each of the following body systems are involved in maintaining homeostasis of the body:
CardiacRespiratoryRenalEndocrineGastrointestinalBlood and lymphaticImmune
Part II: Describe how the endocrine system functions to control the following systems. Be sure to provide details of how the hormones work to relay messages to the body.
CardiacRespiratoryRenalGastrointestinalBlood and lymphaticIntegumentMusculoskeletal
Length: at least 16 slides
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When discussing Japan and the Second World War, one inevitably thinks of the kamikaze, Pearl Harbor, or the atomic bombs of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, which immediately brings up very dark images. But once the war was over, testimonies flowed in various forms, and a new vision appears among the horror: renewal and hope for a better future, in a pacifist world without wars and bombings, so future generations will never have to experience the same destiny. Therefore, it is possible to talk about the memory of the war from various aspects.
Sasaki Sadako (1943-1955) is one of Japan’s emblematic symbols of peace. She is mainly known for her connection with the legend of the thousand paper cranes (senbazuru) and as one of the most famous hibakusha, an atomic bomb survivor in Japan. Thanks to her testimony, she has become a true icon of peace in memory of all the irradiated children and victims of war. Her story moved me so much that I decided to write a thesis about it during my Japanese studies at the university. If you are interested in Japanese history and legends, follow me to Hiroshima to learn more about this hopeful story.
- Hibakusha, the atomic bomb victims and survivors
- The story of Sasaki Sadako, the hibakusha child
- Senbazuru: The legend of the Thousand Paper Cranes, a symbol of peace
- Genbaku no ko no zo Statue, the Children’s Peace Monument in Hiroshima
- Where to learn more about the damages of the atomic bomb in Japan
Hibakusha, the atomic bomb victims and survivors
To understand what a hibakusha is, we must go back to August 1945. With World War II on the verge of ending, Japan was still at war with the United States and was about to experience one of the worst atrocities humanity had ever known. In order to accelerate the defeat of Japan, the American forces choose to drop not one, but two atomic bombs on the country. Thus, “Little Boy” was dropped on Hiroshima on August 6, 1945, followed closely by his little brother “Fat Man” on the city of Nagasaki three days later. Japan was then quickly forced to surrender, and the Japanese surrender was officially announced on the radio on August 15, 1945, by Emperor Showa (1901-1989) himself.
The country had to face a significant challenge: to bring first aid to the irradiated bomb victims and also to rebuild the area. Although the estimation of the number of victims remains unclear and varies, it is clear that these two bombs of unbelievable violence caused thousands of victims on the spot, but also in the years that followed (considering the number of later deaths caused by various types of pathologies due to radiation). In Japanese, they are called “hibakusha” (被爆者, literally “person exposed to bombing”, contraction of Genshi no hibakusha (原子爆弾の被爆者), or “victim of an atomic bomb”). So this term is about the irradiated victims directly and indirectly exposed.
Since 2011, after the triple disaster in Fukushima, anti-nuclear movements and associations have moreover used this same term to refer to any victim of the Fukushima nuclear power plant, adjusting a kanji (hibakusha 被曝者, “victim exposed to radiation”.)
The story of Sasaki Sadako, the hibakusha child
During the Hiroshima bombing, Sasaki Sadako (佐々木 禎子), then two years old, was at her home, about two kilometers from the epicenter. But even when she escaped without injury, she and her mother were exposed to black rain: a phenomenon observed after atomic bombs, formed by the combination of radioactive ash mixing with the rain. Although it has never been officially proven that these can be dangerous, it is highly probable that the contact of this rain with the skin leads to contamination of the cells. Despite this, Sadako and her mother would not suffer any physical damage. She grew up normally and even developed a very cheerful temperament and a talent for competitive running.
However, in 1954, when Sadako was 11 years old, she developed swelling on her neck, ears, and also purpura (a bleeding skin lesion) on her legs, although she had been diagnosed healthy during a medical check-up the same year. Doctors discovered that she had leukemia, as did many of the bomb children whose recovery was not always possible. She was admitted to the Hiroshima Red Cross Hospital in February 1955, and the doctors predicted that she would live about a year. Her destiny seemed to be set.
In the end, she died of her injuries in October 1955, when she was 12 years old. However, she was soon associated with the legend of the Thousand Paper Cranes (senbazuru) and became a true icon of peace. Sadako might also recall the young Anne Frank (1929-1945), a Jewish child deported when she was 15 years old during the Holocaust. The two young girls may be of different nationalities, but they both experienced a tragic destiny: being a victim of war. Through this connection between the innocence of childhood and the horror of war, they become a symbol, and even a model. These two young girls with a tragic fate were also known for their joy of living, their optimism, and their permanent strength. Thus, their story continues to be told today to teach younger generations about the impact of war and the importance of peace.
Senbazuru: The legend of the Thousand Paper Cranes, a symbol of peace
In August 1955, one of Sadako’s classmates came to her bedside and told her about the senbazuru legend (千羽鶴, “1000 cranes”). This legend says that whoever manages to fold 1000 paper cranes, which are then tied together to form a wreath, will have their wish granted, whether it is for health, love, success, or happiness. The crane is a symbol of longevity in Japan, and a prayer will have to be realized with each completed crane. This can be a collective or individual activity, but it is said that the more people who have contributed to the wreath, the biggest the impact.
Sadako started to make 1000 paper cranes in the hope of getting better and running again. She finished the project in August 1955, before she decided to make a second wreath to increase her chances. Some reports state that she managed to bend about 1300 cranes. However, the numbers vary, as the Hiroshima Peace Memorial Museum reports 1,500 cranes, while others count only 644, reporting that after she succumbed to illness in October 1955, her deeply saddened classmates folding the remaining 356 cranes in her honor. The Hiroshima Peace Memorial Museum suggests a different version: despite having completed some 1,500 cranes, Sadako’s wish was not fulfilled, and, at her funeral, her classmates honored her by leaving several cranes at her side.
Thanks to Sadako, the paper crane has become an international symbol of peace. It is the symbol that the city of Hiroshima chose to represent peace after the disaster. If you go to Hiroshima, you will see them everywhere.
Genbaku no ko no zo Statue, the Children’s Peace Monument in Hiroshima
Afterward, Sadako’s story became very popular: adaptations into novels, children’s books, movies, anime, and even songs would make her the symbol of all genbaku no ko (原爆の子, “children of the bomb”). Her story was so popular that a project for a statue built in honor of Sadako and the child victims of war was born at Hiroshima Peace Memorial Park.
Before being recognized as an international symbol of peace, Sadako became first a local inspiration and compelled Hiroshima elementary, middle, and high schools to participate in commemorative activities. The Hiroshima Peace Students Association (Hiroshima heiwa o kizuku jido seito no kai, 広島平和をきずく児童生徒の会) was established in 1956. Its members organized a fundraising campaign to build a statue in honor of Sadako and the children who were killed in the bombing. Donation forms were published in 1957 in the newspaper Heiwa (『平和』 “Peace”), and the association managed to raise the money needed to build the statue.
The statue was dedicated on May 5, 1958, on Children’s Day (kodomo no hi, こどもの日). The nine-meter-high statue shows Sadako immortalized atop the monument on a granite pedestal. In her open arms is a golden crane, as an offering to the gods. Other Hibakusha children can be seen around the statue, as well as the following inscription:
“This is our cry
This is our prayer
For building Peace in the world“
Located in Hiroshima Peace Memorial Park, the statue was named genbaku no ko no zo (原爆の子の像、literally “Statue of the Children of the Atomic Bomb”). Every year, thousands of cranes from many countries are folded in her memory. Arranged around the statue, they have thus become, along with Sadako, true icons of peace and a world without war.
Where to learn more about the damages of the atomic bomb in Japan
Many statues around the world have been inspired by Sadako’s story and the legend of the Thousand Paper Cranes. Her story has spread beyond Japan and is now known internationally. If you go to Hiroshima, you will have the chance to see Sadako. She is still there, from the top of her statue, and keeps watching over the world.
If this story moved you as much as it did to me, and if you want to know more about it, a short animation film was made by Arihara Seiji, a director who specializes in wartime cartoons. This short film is called On A Paper Crane: Tomoko’s Adventure (Tsuru ni notte Tomoko no boken,『つるにのって とも子の冒険』). Its pacifist and non-violent story makes it an accessible story for children and adults alike. Here is the trailer:
Nowadays, the subject of the atomic bomb and its impact is still a sensitive one to discuss. But the story of Sasaki Sadako and the legend of the thousand paper cranes gives a message of hope and helps to explain the importance of peace to the younger and future generations. If you go to Hiroshima on your next trip to Japan, don’t miss the opportunity to meet Sadako at the Children’s Peace Monument in the Peace Park!
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Spirituality and the State
Managing Nature and Experience in America's National Parks
Series: North American Religions
- ISBN: 9781479873012
- Published By: NYU Press
- Published: May 2016
Many people claim that they find God more readily in nature than in a brick-and-mortar church, temple, or mosque. In Spirituality and the State: Managing Nature and Experience in America’s National Parks, Kerry Mitchell explores the role of the state, as institutionalized in the National Park Service, in producing nature spirituality as a public (or civil) religion. Through active choices in site design, visitor management, and interpretive messaging, park managers produce a subjective experience that many visitors describe as spiritual. This secular management of visitor religiosity is subtle, operating largely through indirection; as a result, the state’s use of authority and power to advance an implicit ideological agenda appears “natural” and impervious to critical reflection. Settings and experiences that have been actively constructed by the wide-reaching imposition of state authority are perceived by park visitors as natural and—for those amenable to such interpretations—even God-given. According to Mitchell, “in national parks the state wears nature as a glove. Visitors are spiritually attached to the feel of this glove, making their attachment to the hand, and whatever guides it, a natural predisposition” (192). Mitchell seeks to unmask this politics of spirituality so that park users can engage in critical reflection and assume the responsibilities of informed citizenship.
Mitchell’s argument is limited to natural (as opposed to historical) sites in the National Park System. In these sites, it is easier to gesture toward an ancestral spirit or divine creation that preexists the nation’s formation and subsequent historical development. Mitchell begins by outlining the origins of the National Park System, highlighting the spiritual values that undergird various park management paradigms over the past century. He then turns to three focused case studies. To collect data on visitor experiences, he observed visitor behaviors, distributed written surveys, engaged in informal conversations, and conducted formal interviews at three sites: the John Muir Trail, Yosemite National Park, and Muir Woods National Monument. Each of these park units is connected to John Muir, whose Romantic writings of the late 19th century encouraged an unmediated experience of the divine in nature and referred to the Yosemite Valley as a temple or cathedral.
Three chapters present Mitchell’s interpretations of the secular construction of spiritual experience in each of the three settings. While visitors to the John Muir Trail drew a contrast between their wilderness experiences and their lives back in “civilization,” Mitchell’s analysis not only uncovers the interpenetration of those two domains but also highlights the dependence of the visitors’ wilderness experience on state activity and authority via “a multitude of regulations, management practices, permissions, and prohibitions” (58). At Yosemite National Park, the visitors’ experience is shaped by a twenty-three-minute orientation film titled Spirit of Yosemite. The spirit invoked is not precisely defined; it is left for the individual to fill with meaning. Physical, behavioral, and interpretive features at Yosemite National Park nonetheless shape the visitors’ encounter with the environment in ways that “constitute a coordinated construction of nature, one that capitalizes on the landscape in order to suggest a value that visitors can appropriate individually” (93). The individuation of visitor experiences and the indirection of vague references to spirituality is also present at Muir Woods. Lying at the center of those woods is Cathedral Grove, where international delegates met prior to the foundation of the United Nations. Mitchell demonstrates how the logic of park management at this site individuates sensory experience while placing it in a universal symbolic framework of peace. While park managers avoid communicating an explicit religious message, Mitchell’s analysis shows that many park visitors interpret their visit to Muir Woods—as they do at the other two sites—as a spiritual experience.
Mitchell’s argument is theoretically grounded. In particular, he distinguishes between republican and liberal conceptions of public religion. Republican models of civil religion appeal to collective values of civil piety while liberal models champion individualism and free will. According to Mitchell, the secular management of nature spirituality at National Park System sites reflects a “liberal, progressive public religion” (177).
Mitchell acknowledges some ambivalence about his conclusions. He is an advocate for the national parks, yet he is troubled by the dissembling naturalness of heavily constructed experiences. It “may not be a bad thing” (199), he writes, to partake of the “state-nurtured spirituality” (191) of the national park experience, but responsible citizenship demands “critical reflection on the social construction of one’s own subjectivity” (198). To the extent that the operation of state power circumvents critical thinking, citizens abdicate their responsibility to participate in deliberations and decisions regarding park policy, visitor management, and interpretive practices that serve to define nature, the nation, civilization, and divinity.
Citizens with an interest in public lands management should read this book. In the academic realm, it will be of interest to upper-level students and scholars in religion and ecology, the environmental humanities, and recreation management.
Nancy Menning is faculty affiliate in the Department of Environmental Studies and Sciences at Ithaca College.Nancy MenningDate Of Review:September 12, 2018
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Bad dog owners are the problem, not bad dogs
A batch of recent news stories have my hackles up.
The first was last Sunday's Kokua Line, in which a reader, upset that dogs are walked in and around Ala Moana Beach Park, basically argued that canines are too filthy and dangerous to share public spaces with families. The second was Monday's story about dog owners losing a walking route on Kauai because a new $50 million path on the site has been designated a county park and made off limits to dogs.
And then came Thursday's painful story about a little boy playing at a Maui beach who was bitten by a dog allowed to run off leash. The dog owner fled.
It is awful that this child was hurt and I hope the woman who ran off can be found to face the consequences of her actions. But the problem isn't with dogs, it's with people. The problem is with dog owners who are irresponsible and insensitive to the other users of public space.
Leashed dogs are allowed on Valley Isle beaches, but the Maui Humane Society is worried about pressure to change the rules.
We don't ban people from the beach because some people create an unsafe environment by being belligerent, leaving broken glass and other litter, peeing against trees or discarding dirty diapers anywhere but in a trash can. We pass laws designed to punish the bad behavior, not the public as a whole.
We need to take the same approach, punishing bad dog owners, rather than banning dogs.
We have a deeply flawed dog-owning culture in Hawaii. Far too many dog owners abuse canines. Leaving aside the morally bankrupt individuals who fight their dogs, there are many more abusers who treat dogs as if they were furry alarm systems. Chaining a dog in the garage for its entire life is abuse. Dogs are pack animals, not loners. Isolating them makes them defensive and potentially dangerous. And it goes on all over the state.
And no one is more adversely affected by dog owners who fail to pick up after their pets than responsible dog owners. First, because all dog owners wind up being tarred with the same brush. Second, because dogs are fascinated with the feces of other animals and therefore much more likely than any human to be harmed by diseased waste that is left lying around.
If we are going to change a dog-owning culture that condones irresponsibility and abuse, we need to support responsible dog owners.
Responsible dog ownership confers health benefits and is good for our community. It pours money into our economy, largely into small locally owned businesses such as vets, groomers, instructors, "doggie bakeries" and pet stores. It is a good way for children (and even adults) to learn responsibility, patience and compassion.
To be healthy and well-adjusted, dogs must get out to walk, play and socialize.
One of the suggestions floated in Kokua Line was to keep dogs out of public spaces by building an off-leash park in every neighborhood. Not only would this be expensive, it's wrong headed.
First, while some dogs will run themselves ragged at off-leash parks, it is not a substitute for real exercise for most, and conveys no health benefits to their owners.
Second, there are people problems there, too. Dog parks are not universally safe or well policed. I have seen so much bad behavior -- technically on the part of the dogs, but truly a consequence of clueless humans -- that I no longer frequent or recommend them.
Third, I think public resources should go to support broader needs -- such as the city's vastly underfunded spay-neuter program and general park maintenance -- rather than highly specialized parks that serve a minority of dog owners.
So while the canine-averse might like the idea, dog parks are not an alternative to allowing, better yet encouraging, responsible humans and their canine companions to use our public spaces for exercise and socialization.
The Kokua Line complaint was that dogs are walked on Ala Moana paths even though that's against the rules. Well, why in the world is it against the rules?
The Kauai problem is that the county prohibits dogs in parks. That's just bad government policy. One out of three homes on Kauai includes a dog. Good government would encourage those folks to get their pets out for exercise by fostering those opportunities, not limiting them.
It benefits the community as a whole to support responsible dog ownership and change a culture that makes the "responsible" part of that phrase optional. Walking a leashed dog should be legal in all public spaces.
We should encourage, rather than block, the responsible use of public spaces by dog owners and their companions.
Stephanie Kendrick is the Star-Bulletin's news editor. My Turn is a periodic column written by Star-Bulletin staff members.
My Turn is a periodic column written by Star-Bulletin staff members expressing their personal views.
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As I think about these two words, different meanings come to mind. "Excuse me," as in I'm sorry, I almost ran into you or I did bump into you accidently. Or is it "Excuse me," I'm about to run you over if you don't get out of my way? Not quite the same and of course it depends on the tone of voice used to say it, either politely or impatiently might give it different meanings to the receiver. There is also "Excuse me?" with the inflections that determine the message here. Maybe I didn't hear you and asked that or maybe I did hear you and disagree with you and am expressing it with that phrase.
However, for some reason, the thought that came to mind (and I've been reading, so beware) was not a way this particular phrase is generally used or is even grammatically correct. I see another use as one of "Excuse me (I'm making one)." Granted, the parenthesis certainly give it a different meaning that may not be quite right, but it's one that made me think about a chapter I just read in the book A Traveler's Guide, by Andy Andrews. In chapter 1, Andrews writes about taking responsibility and the phrase, "The buck stops here." There is no place for excuses when we take responsibility for our situation. We are here now and if things are to improve or change, we have to be responsible for the actions that make that happen.
So, excuse me if this doesn't make sense. On second thought, No Excuse; me.
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|Número de publicación||US5021046 A|
|Tipo de publicación||Concesión|
|Número de solicitud||US 07/230,783|
|Fecha de publicación||4 Jun 1991|
|Fecha de presentación||10 Ago 1988|
|Fecha de prioridad||10 Ago 1988|
|También publicado como||US5004472, US5004472, US5009662, US5009662|
|Número de publicación||07230783, 230783, US 5021046 A, US 5021046A, US-A-5021046, US5021046 A, US5021046A|
|Inventores||William D. Wallace|
|Cesionario original||Utah Medical Products, Inc.|
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This invention relates to measurement of pressures in catheter balloons and is particularly suited for measurement of such pressures in connection with coronary angioplasty catheters.
Coronary angioplasty is a rapidly growing medical procedure. In angioplasty a coronary artery which has become partially blocked by a stenosis (an abnormal narrowing of the artery due to injury or disease) is opened by inflating a balloon carried by a dilatation catheter to the site of the stenosis.
For placement purposes the dilatation catheter carries a movable guidewire which is advanced from the mouth of the respective coronary artery to the area of stenosis in the coronary artery or in one of the branches off the coronary artery. The dilatation catheter is then pushed over the guidewire to the stenosis and is placed so that the balloon carried by the dilatation catheter is disposed in the stenotic area.
The balloon at this time is collapsed so that it fits through the passage through the stenosis. The dilatation or balloon catheter typically has a pair of lumens: one through which contrast media or other suitable inflating fluid flows under pressure to inflate or deflate the balloon, and one through which the guidewire moves. When properly positioned in the stenosis, the cardiologist manually inflates the balloon by forcing contrast media through the inflation lumen into the interior of the balloon. This expansion of the balloon, assuming the size of the balloon has been chosen properly, expands the passage through the blood vessel to something approaching its normal dimensions.
It is often necessary to pressurize the balloon to a pressure in the range of from seven to ten atmospheres and to sustain this pressure for up to thirty seconds or so. During this pressurization, it is desirable to know the pressure to which the balloon is being inflated to ensure that the proper force has been applied to open the passageway. At present this pressure is displayed by an analog pressure gauge disposed in the vicinity of the syringe which is used to inflate the balloon.
Although analog pressure gauges are fairly accurate, they are not particularly easy to read, and are fairly easy to misread. These gauges are also not extremely well suited for integration into a system which can display to the cardiologist other information which would be of interest, such as elapsed time of inflation of the balloon, total desired inflation time, number of times that particular balloon has been inflated, and so on.
During coronary angioplasty the walls of the vessel are stretched and it sometimes occurs that the walls of the vessel fail under the force exerted by the expanded balloon. This incipient failure is reflected in the pressure in the balloon, but analog gauges are not especially well suited to detect this rapid change or to provide some alarm or other indication thereof to the cardiologist so that pressure could be immediately relieved before further damage to the vessel could occur.
In order to determine the actual force exerted by the balloon on the walls of the passageway, prior to the procedure cardiologists sometimes test inflate the balloon in a fixture which measures the applied force. The analog pressure gauge can be observed during this test to correlate the applied force with the pressure reading shown by the analog gauge. Analog gauges, however, are not particularly well suited to automating this test procedure.
Even if the force exerted by the balloon is not tested, the balloon is typically inflated before the procedure to ensure the patency of the balloon and to check whether the balloon can withstand the desired pressure An analog gauge is typically used during this test to ensure that the desired pressure is applied. Such a gauge, however, is not particularly well suited to automation of this test either.
Although the problems described above arise in the connection with the coronary angioplasty procedure, it should be realized that other medical procedures involving balloon catheters have similar problems. Peripheral angioplasty, for example, is a very similar procedure with similar concerns. Other procedures in which the present invention can be used will no doubt come to mind to those of ordinary skill in the art.
Among the various objects and features of the present invention may be noted the provision of a pressure monitoring system for medical procedures which facilitates the display of balloon pressure to the user.
Another object is the provision of such a system which easily accommodates the display of additional information concerning balloon inflation to the user.
A further object is the provision of such a system which detects and warns of incipient failure of the vessel wall.
A fourth object is the provision of such a system which is especially suited for automation of various test procedures on the balloon.
Other objects and features will be in part apparent and in part pointed out hereinafter
A system of the present invention for measuring fluid pressure in a balloon of a catheter includes a pressure transducer in fluid communication with the interior of the balloon. The pressure transducer includes an element for providing an electrical signal which is a function of the pressure in the interior of the balloon. An electronic digital display is responsive to the electrical signal from the pressure transducer to display the balloon pressure measured by the pressure transducer.
A coronary angioplasty system of the present invention includes a catheter adapted for insertion through blood vessels in the human body to the vicinity of a stenosis. The catheter carries an inflatable balloon to the vicinity of the stenosis and has an inflation lumen providing a fluid path between the interior of the balloon and an external port adapted to receive fluid for inflating the balloon. A pressure transducer is in fluid communication with the interior of the balloon, which pressure transducer includes an element for providing an electrical signal which is a function of the pressure in the interior of the balloon. An electronic digital display is responsive to the electrical signal from the pressure transducer to display the balloon pressure measured by the pressure transducer.
FIG. 1 is a schematical representation of the system of the present invention in use during a coronary angioplasty procedure;
FIG. 2 is a sectional view on an enlarged scale, with parts broken away for clarity, of the opening of a stenosis by the expansion of a balloon carried by a dilatation catheter;
FIG. 3 is a perspective view illustrating the position of the pressure transducer used in the present invention in the fluid path between the source of inflating fluid and the balloon of FIG. 2;
FIG. 4 is a sectional view taken along line 4 ---- 4 of FIG. 3;
FIG. 5 is a block diagram illustrating the electrical interconnections of the system of the present invention;
FIG. 6 is a perspective view of an alternative embodiment of the system of the present invention; and
FIG. 7 is a front elevational view of a dilatation catheter being tested in a force measuring fixture.
Similar reference characters indicate similar parts throughout the several views of the drawings.
A coronary angioplasty procedure involves a dilatation catheter 11 (FIG. 1) carrying a balloon 13 which is moved through the vascular system to the site of a stenosis 15. In FIG. 1, catheter 11 is shown passing through the aortic arch into a branch of the right coronary artery. Stenosis 15 is typically composed of atherosclerotic plaque which has partially occluded the blood vessel as shown. In FIG. 2, the balloon is shown inflated, which pushes the plaque to the sides of the passageway and, to some extent, distends the wall 17 of the vessel itself.
Catheter 11 has a pair of lumens. The first is connected to a port 19 for injection of contrast media through the catheter for purposes of positioning the catheter. That same lumen has a guidewire 21 disposed therein, guidewire 21 being inserted through a port 23 into the catheter.
The second lumen is connected by an opening 25 (FIG. 2) to the interior of balloon 13 and provides a fluid path between the interior of the balloon and an external source of balloon inflating fluid, such as the inflation/deflation syringe 27 shown in FIG. 1. Typically, such syringes have a threaded plunger which cooperates with a disengageable nut on the barrel of the syringe to permit accurate displacement of fluid (such as contrast media or any other suitable fluid) from the barrel of the syringe through the second lumen to inflate balloon 13. When the nut is disengaged, the cardiologist can quickly withdraw the piston to rapidly deflate the balloon.
Heretofore, an analog pressure gauge has been disposed in the fluid path immediately adjacent the outlet of the syringe. This gauge has provided a visual indication to the cardiologist of the actual pressure being applied to the interior of the balloon. As mentioned above, however, such analog pressure gauges have certain drawbacks associated therewith.
In the present system, a pressure transducer 29 (FIG. 4) disposed in a housing 31 (FIGS. 1, 3 and 4) is used instead of the prior art analog pressure gauges to monitor balloon pressure. Housing 31 is disposed in the inflation fluid path, specifically adjacent the outlet of the syringe. The exact placement of the transducer is not critical, so long as it is exposed to the pressure of the inflation fluid.
Pressure transducer 29 is connected by a suitable cable 33 to a housing 35 which is suitably mounted (such as on a pole, not shown) so as to be readily visible to the cardiologist. The housing carries a plurality of displays 37, 39, 41, and 43, a set of manually operable switches (two of which, labelled 45 and 47 are shown), and an alarm 49. A foot pedal 51 is electrically connected to housing 35 by a cable 53 so that the cardiologist can supply signals to the housing by that means as well.
Housing 35 contains much of the electronics of the present system. Specifically it holds a microcomputer 55 (FIG. 5) along with any necessary interface circuitry for supplying input signals to the microcomputer and control signals from the microcomputer. Although a microcomputer is shown in FIG. 5, it should be realized that discrete components could be used to control the functioning of the system of the present invention instead.
Displays 37, 39, 41, and 43 are electronic digital displays of conventional construction. Display 37 displays the balloon pressure in large, easily read characters. Although the pressure shown in FIG. 1 is in pounds per square inch, the units could as easily be atmospheres or any other suitable unit of pressure.
Display 39 displays to the cardiologist the elapsed time or duration (in seconds) for this particular expansion of the balloon. To initiate the measurement of this time by microcomputer 55, the cardiologist need only press the proper one of the manually operable switches shown, in this instance start switch 45. The timing can be stopped by pressing another switch such as switch 47 or foot pedal 51.
Display 41 displays to the cardiologist a time (previously set by means of other manually operable switches, see FIG. 5) which represents the desired duration of this particular expansion of the balloon. For a procedure in which the balloon is expanded a number of times, it should be realized that the preset desired duration could differ for different inflations.
By comparing the output of display 39 (the actual expansion time) with the output of display 41 (the desired expansion time), the cardiologist can easily determine when to deflate the balloon.
Display 43 displays to the cardiologist the number of expansions of this particular balloon. This information is available from microcomputer 55 because the microcomputer keeps track of the interior pressure of the balloon. A measured pressure below a predetermined threshold which follows a measured pressure above that threshold signifies to the microcomputer that the balloon has been inflated and deflated. It is necessary, of course, for the user to indicate to the microcomputer by means of a manually operable switch when a catheter is replaced so that the output of display 43 may be reset.
With regard to FIG. 2, it should be noted that inflation of the balloon results in some distension of the wall 17 of the blood vessel. Should this wall start to rupture, the pressure measured by transducer 29 would rapidly change. Microcomputer 55 is fast enough to detect such a change and signal that fact to the cardiologist over alarm 49. The cardiologist upon hearing alarm 49 can then release the pressure on the balloon to prevent further rupture of the vessel wall.
Other failures such as loss of balloon patency and the like are also reflected in the pressure measured by transducer 29. Microcomputer 55 signals the occurrence of these failures over alarm 49 as well.
Turning to FIGS. 3 and 4, housing 31 is removably connected between syringe 27 and catheter 11 by standard leur lock fittings 31A and 31B. Electrical connection is made between transducer 29 and electronics housing 35 by means of a removable plug 59, such as a standard four-pin telephone plug, which is accepted in a corresponding socket 61 formed in housing 31. A cover 59A is provided for closing socket 61 during those times when the plug 59 is not inserted therein.
Housing 31 has a passageway 63 extending therethrough for passage of the inflating fluid from syringe 27 to catheter 11 and balloon 13. A port 65 in housing 31 extends from passageway 63 to pressure transducer 29 so that the pressure of the inflating fluid flowing through the passageway is transmitted to the pressure transducer.
Pressure transducer 29 itself is constructed in accordance with the teachings in co-assigned U.S. Pat. No. 4,610,256. The present transducer differs from the one taught in that patent only in being engineered to measure somewhat higher pressures (several atmospheres as opposed to approximately one-half atmosphere).
Port 65, as taught in U.S. Pat. No. 4,610,256 is filled with a silicone gel or oil which transmits the pressure in passageway 63 to pressure transducer 29. The transducer itself is a piezoresistive diaphragm which includes four resistive elements ion-implanted thereon in a Wheatstone bridge configuration. As is explained in U.S. Pat. No. 4,610,256, as the piezoresistive diaphragm is deflected, the resistive elements that form the Wheatstone bridge become unbalanced, thus causing electrical signals. These signals, representative of the pressure of the fluid in passageway 63, are sent to microcomputer 55 via plug 59.
This connection of the pressure transducer with microcomputer 55 is illustrated in FIG. 5. Of course, the signal received from the pressure transducer may be filtered, temperature compensated, etc. as is well known in the art. For the purposes of this invention, however, the important fact is that the microcomputer acquires inflating fluid pressure information from pressure transducer 29.
Also shown in FIG. 5 are the other significant inputs to and outputs from microcomputer. The inputs include the manually operable switches such as switches 45, 47 and foot pedal 51, the pressure transducer (discussed above), the manually operable switch for presetting balloon expansion time, and an input from an inflation force fixture 67 (described below in connection with FIG. 7). The outputs include control signals for the displays (which includes displays 37, 39, 41, and 43), for the alarm 49, and for a syringe/injector mechanism 69 described below in connection with FIG. 6.
Microcomputer 55 is under programmed logic control to govern the system to operate as described above. In response to actuation of the proper manually operable switches, it begins timing and displaying (on display 39) the duration of a balloon inflation. It also, at short intervals, reads the signal from pressure transducer 29 and displays the sensed pressure on display 37. If a desired inflation duration has been set, it also displays this time on display 41, and increments the balloon inflation count on display 43.
If a pressure change is detected during the procedure which would indicate some failure (either of the vessel wall or of the catheter itself), microcomputer 55 sounds alarm 49.
If desired, the process of injecting the inflating fluid into the balloon and of deflating the balloon can also be controlled by the microcomputer. Such a system is shown in FIG. 6. In addition to having the inputs and outputs of the system of FIG. 1 (omitted in this Fig. for clarity), the system of FIG. 6 also includes outputs for controlling a stepper motor 71, a solenoid 73 and a syringe release arm 75.
The microcomputer provides control signals to stepper motor 71 to cause the motor to operate. Motor 71 is connected by a fitting 77 to the plunger of syringe 27, so that operation of motor 71 causes the plunger to force inflating fluid out of the syringe and (via the inflation lumen of catheter 11) into balloon 13. The microcomputer monitors the pressure during this operation, so that once the desired pressure is reached operation of the stepper motor is stopped.
The microcomputer maintains the balloon pressure at this preset amount until the preset duration for that balloon expansion expires. Upon the expiration of that time, microcomputer 55 operates stepper motor 71 in the reverse direction to deflate the balloon. In the event that more rapid deflation of the balloon is need, the microcomputer activates arm 75 to move from its position shown in FIG. 6 to an operating position (not shown) in which is releases the threaded nut or cap 27A of the syringe so that the plunger may be rapidly withdrawn with respect to the barrel of the syringe.
Actual rapid withdrawal of the plunger is accomplished by solenoid 73. The solenoid is secured to motor 71 by a shaft 79. Operation of the solenoid draws the shaft, along with the stepper motor and the plunger of syringe 27 upwardly to rapidly withdraw the inflating fluid from balloon 13.
One condition in which the microcomputer rapidly withdraws the plunger, for example, is when the microcomputer detects a pressure change indicative of some failure condition during the inflation phase of the procedure. It should be realized that the microcomputer is capable of responding to such a failure situation much more rapidly and reliably that could a human operator of the syringe.
Although the invention has been described heretofore with reference to the actual coronary angioplasty procedure, it has equal applicability to the preliminary testing of the balloon before actual insertion into the patient. It can readily be seen how the apparatus of FIG. 1 or the apparatus of FIG. 6 is usable to preliminarily inflate the balloon before insertion into the patient to test the patency of the balloon. That apparatus, or more specialized apparatus shown in FIG. 7, may also be used to correlate the balloon pressure with the force applied by the balloon.
Such a force/pressure correlating apparatus includes a backing plate 81 upon which the balloon of the catheter under test is disposed. A force sensing arm 83 is lifted by the pressure in the balloon, and the corresponding force exerted by the balloon is measured by a transducer (not shown). Microcomputer 55 then displays on display 37 and on an additional display 85 the pressure in the balloon (obtained from pressure transducer 29) and the resulting force on force sensing arm 83. With this apparatus the pressure and force are easily correlated, and the force information may be recorded by microcomputer 55 for future reference, if desired.
In view of the above it will be seen that the various objects and features of the present invention are achieved and other advantageous results attained. The described embodiments are illustrative only and the present invention is defined instead by the claims which are appended hereto.
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