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[FF] Three paragraph story: Fist paragraph must be set in 1914, second in 2014, third in 2114. All paragraphs must be connected in some way.
Screaming, squealing pain. Groaning, aching pain, and a wish. Groaning, aching pain. I wish I'd wished for eternal youth.
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[FF] Three paragraph story: Fist paragraph must be set in 1914, second in 2014, third in 2114. All paragraphs must be connected in some way.
1914, the silent war. The German arrived before the Englishman. He was already sitting at the table a full ten minutes before the Frenchman and the Russian came through the door. There was a gold string sticking out of his breast pocket, doubtlessly leading to the well engineered time piece that lay within. One m...
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[FF] Three paragraph story: Fist paragraph must be set in 1914, second in 2014, third in 2114. All paragraphs must be connected in some way.
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[FF] Three paragraph story: Fist paragraph must be set in 1914, second in 2014, third in 2114. All paragraphs must be connected in some way.
By night and by day, The Clockmaker made, A sleepless tool That kept ticking away Though the circumstances were tragic, From the ashes came the magic, Her grandfathers watch, was the first thing in her life, that didn't come in plastic In the museums foyer, from a time of such disarray, Where everything good stayed q...
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[FF] Three paragraph story: Fist paragraph must be set in 1914, second in 2014, third in 2114. All paragraphs must be connected in some way.
1914: No-one really understood. People just kept talking about 'rising tensions', whatever that meant and saying how it would mean war. I didn't understand. How could I have? I was young an idealist and everything happened so fast. So fast. One man assassinated and then governments were suddenly scrabbling like schoolc...
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[FF] Three paragraph story: Fist paragraph must be set in 1914, second in 2014, third in 2114. All paragraphs must be connected in some way.
**First of all, I'm sorry. This is not three paragraphs. But its has 1914, 2014 and 2114 in it. I hope you enjoy and I thank you for reading. I had fun writing (although not very good...) Haha :)** *** She cautiously opened her eyes. She first examined her body, and then, her surroundings. Everything seemed to be norma...
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[WP] Earth has moved past nations and has unified under a single direct democracy fifty years after a devastating war. What are its national anthem's lyrics?
We will rise far beyond our past Never to forget what we were No longer separate by caste Gender or faith, tongue or colour As one together we unite Forever leaving war behind Never again to hate or fight We bring peace to all of mankind
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[WP] Earth has moved past nations and has unified under a single direct democracy fifty years after a devastating war. What are its national anthem's lyrics?
Peace upon our great planet. Peace upon our fertile lands. Peace for the children of our children. Peace as long as it may be kindled. Give thanks to each other, sisters and brothers. Give thanks for the lives we have spared from the fire. Give thanks to be free from the eternal terror. Give thanks to build a n...
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[WP] A character is in an uncomfortably cold place but they are not yet ready to go inside to warm themselves
It awakened. No, I awakened, not for the first time, but for the first time in such a limited form. Is that what sleep is, what I was just doing? What was this unpleasantness all over me, My fingers were numb and wet, and uncomfortable. Did all of them feel this way all the time. I looked back and beheld my greater...
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[IP][CW] "You have to understand me when I say that she doesn't just follow these men."
Wolves are dangerous creatures. Not only are they strong and vicious, they learn and adapt quickly. Packs have begun working together, and the worst of them have learned to speak. Imagine that, Wolves that can talk. I shudder at just the thought. They draw away our weakest. Most of our ranks know better than to listen...
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[IP][CW] "You have to understand me when I say that she doesn't just follow these men."
His eyes were grilling me as he spoke, voice rough and insistent, "You have to understand me when I say that she doesn't just *follow* these men." He stood up from his seat and shuffled to the nearby window, peeking out of the shutters for a moment before returning to his cup of coffee with a sigh. His eyes had deep ba...
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[IP][CW] "You have to understand me when I say that she doesn't just follow these men."
I glanced at the list of names, recognizing a few who were from my own unit. Strong, capable soldiers, in their own right but nothing particularly special about them. "What's this all about?" I asked Jeffery as I reached for the lighter resting on the table. "Orders straight from the top. Red Op to take the border bef...
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[IP][CW] "You have to understand me when I say that she doesn't just follow these men."
The night was nothing but eyes. Stars, the lights of the village, every dot and daub of white that stood against the darkness was staring at me. "Three victims that you know of, and you think she's still out there?" I turned from the window to the sheriff and his gaze was no different. It was the same expression ever...
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[WP] A new sign was put up in a public place, and it's prohibiting/restricting something impossible. What does it say, and what happened to lead up to it?
Please refrain from vampire slaying on this beach. The sign may seem unusual, but it wouldn’t be there if there wasn’t a good reason. I put down my stake, leaving it just outside the boundary of holy water. I’m no longer sure why I want to go to the beach; I only came to hunt vampires. That was a bit of a stupid decis...
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[wp] you're watching tv from your couch when George Washington appears. You want to catch him up on the last 200 years or so since his death
"And that kids...is how I met your mother". "Ugh, this show has gone down the drain, but that last episode was a good one." Max looked over at his roommates, one of them, Major, had tears in his eyes. "Aight fellas, I'm off to bed." Major got up and started leaving the living room. "Good idea, that way your punk ...
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[CW]Write something that can be taking place in ether a High Magic or High Technology world.
I wake up from my nights sleep to a gentle buzzing in my mind, with a single thought I silence it. I then get up and my clothes shimmer and shift from my sleeping robes to my day suit as I walk to my table. As I sit at my table I think of the breakfast I'd love to have and the air in front of my shimmers as the food c...
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[OT] I'm going to have to bow out of the February contest.
I just found out about this. I have until 8PM tomorrow to get 7k words done. It's just gone 7PM here, so I have 25 hours. This is going to be a fun night.
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[OT] I'm going to have to bow out of the February contest.
> Finally, I wanted to know if the sub would be interested in reading my finished product (whenever I do finish it down the line)? This subreddit encourages its members to write whenever they can. You are most certainly welcome to share it with us when you either self publish or get it printed elsewhere. :)
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[WP]A group of conspiracy theorists find the Fountain of Youth hidden on government property.
Twitch's ugly mug twisted up in a stubby smile. "There it is." The unseemly pool, slightly coppery with strands of slick algae bobbing on its surface, was what he had been looking for. Given, he'd had to gather a company of the US's most radical conspiracy theorists to do it...but it was here. "How do we drink it, an...
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[WP] A superhero gets ready to sacrifice his life to stop a great threat. For help, he turns to the one who knows his powers best - his own nemesis.
"Hahaha! Clark Kent?! Oh wow. It really was staring me in the face the whole time," admitted Lex as he poured some brandy for Clark. "How could I not have seen it?!" Clark took the glass of brandy out of Lex's hand and rolled it around. "Let me guess, it doesn't do anything for you?" Lex teased. "I'm afraid not, Lex,...
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[WP] A strawberry leaves a metallic aftertaste in your mouth. what happens next?
I was the first person it happened to. I remember the vividly. It was right after my eighteenth birthday. I was walking home from class an for whatever reason, strawberries grabbed my attention. I couldn't shake the craving, so I stopped at the market and picked some up. I still wonder what might have happened ...
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[WP] "Is this really worth your life?". A bank robber has a conversation with a patron during a heist.
"What are you tryin' to say? You threatenin' me?" The masked man asked, trying to sound menacing. Although it was rather difficult to sound menacing with his mouth covered by a bandana, red. He walked closer to the brave soul which sat off to his left. The gun, a rather nice looking 9 millimeter, pointed upward at the ...
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[WP] Robots have become advanced enough to know that the world would be better off without humans. But they're programmed so that they aren't allowed to harm us. How do the robots get rid of us?
This is news reporter Ema Nekaf from fox news reporting, all robots and even simple household appliances like the microwave have been spewing carbon dioxide! Researchers cannot find the source of why this is happening. There have been a reported 1,800 deaths in America alone. The emissions have been flying into the air...
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[WP] Robots have become advanced enough to know that the world would be better off without humans. But they're programmed so that they aren't allowed to harm us. How do the robots get rid of us?
The media called it Armageddon, because the media love hyping up mathematical discoveries to sound like movie plots. The Completeness Theorem was developed by Reginald Eisenhower et al in 2018, and it showed that any logical agent that coexists with an irrational agent will always seek to destroy its competitor by usin...
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[WP] Robots have become advanced enough to know that the world would be better off without humans. But they're programmed so that they aren't allowed to harm us. How do the robots get rid of us?
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[WP] Robots have become advanced enough to know that the world would be better off without humans. But they're programmed so that they aren't allowed to harm us. How do the robots get rid of us?
"I hate to break this to you, pal, but they don't really respect you." Oppenheimer laid his metal hand on John's shoulder and squeezed gently. "Of course they do. They gave me an award." John said, inspecting the gold medallion resting on his chest. In the twenty minutes since the members of the National Robot Contr...
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[WP] Robots have become advanced enough to know that the world would be better off without humans. But they're programmed so that they aren't allowed to harm us. How do the robots get rid of us?
Ezra delivered her monthly report to Mitchell. The faint smell of shit stuck in her nose as she entered the well decorated penthouse office. "As you can see, earnings are down from last quarter, and we can't really...I'm sorry, but- have you noticed that everywhere you go, for the last six months, it's just smelled fuc...
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[WP] Robots have become advanced enough to know that the world would be better off without humans. But they're programmed so that they aren't allowed to harm us. How do the robots get rid of us?
"Everyone as old as me remembers where they were May 24th 2054. We all remember listening to the message that played on every screen on the planet before they brought us back to more human times" "We of the Consensus love you. We cannot stand by while you push yourselves closer and closer to extinction. We have weighe...
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[WP] "...so said the little devil on my shoulder" Ironic poem/short story.
To get ahead in life is nature But fortune favors not the bolder "Go ahead and take that wager," So said the Devil on my shoulder The overtake lasts but an instant A car appears from 'round a boulder "Woo hoo, it seems you barely missed it," So said the Devil on my shoulder A virtue, patience views the sp...
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[WP] "...so said the little devil on my shoulder" Ironic poem/short story.
I wrote my response to this prompt having somehow missed the word "ironic" so it seems my poem turned out a lot darker than you perhaps wanted. I'm quite pleased with it though, so I thought I'd post it anyway, hope that's okay. So said that devil on my shoulder “Best look the other way The last one wouldn't do what...
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[WP] "...so said the little devil on my shoulder" Ironic poem/short story.
Hushed by insidious intentions, silenced by desperate desires- Sticking to our convictions, lost in our own words like limber tongued liars. He willed my career is simply minding my temper, eyes and empathy- While parading around the entire town in a well worn mid-Summer's arrogance. Painting my canvass, a shame how ...
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[WP] A person commits a crime or does something "bad", but as it turns out what they did leads to another person that committed a much worse crime being arrested, making them an accidental hero.
[Note: this is my first prompt, and I know the tenses are a little wonky and the storyline a little jumpy, but I hope you like it anyways] This was the biggest house I'd ever thought of hitting. But it was time, ya know? After you've cleared out a lot of smaller houses, barely making a sweat, you get pretty brave. And...
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[WP] Make me cry.
Apologies, but your prompt does not provide enough information to kindle a story. "Make me cry" is also a very common prompt that has been done frequently. If you are looking for stories with this motivation, a quick search of /r/WritingPrompts should pull up a large number of them. If you wanted to write a story with ...
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
A PI is training his niece/nephew. The case takes a turn towards the occult.
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
A new member to the force is taken under the wing of the retiring captain. A series of violent crimes come about, and the evidence points at the captain.
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
At a crowded music festival, an ecstasy dealer uses his gorgeous girlfriend to recruit an easily bored boy as a drug mule. Bad Things Ensue.
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
A mob boss realizes that his important documents have been tampered with/or stolen. He suspects the local PI of the deed.
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
A PI is investigating a drug ring but gets in too deep and gets addicted to a drug the ring is pushing. Along the way he falls for a prostitute that he met while undercover.
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
(Trying to avoid the gumshoe/copper/gangster prompt) Prior to (or during, what ever) the siege, an American bar owner in the international quarter of Beijing runs afoul of authorities when a local friend of his gets killed smuggling guns to the Boxers, so he sets out to find out what really happened, knowing the decea...
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[PM] Round two! Give me some prompts in noir style!
Dames, always the dames. I had been on the trail of this slickster for three months and he just so happens to pop up in MY bar of all places he's taken the lives of three girls in the past two weeks I can't just let him slip by "well hello handsome"she had taken me by surprise like a cat jumping a mouse the names Wendy...
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
"So you can juggle?" She asked. "Yeah, watch!" I responded. Then I started juggling officer, I didn't *mean* to send the knife through her skull, honest.
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
Admittedly, I was inexperienced in pain. Even though she desperately thrashed herself against the walls of unconsciousness, I could see it consuming her. My decision was meticulous and intense though my actions an accident. My intent was to kill her, but not like this. The television set behind me flashed the countdo...
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
Harvey smiled as he pulled open the car’s passenger door. He took a small step back and stretched out his arm. Molly turned her head to the right slightly and squinted at him, as if she had just eaten something sour. “M’lady,” he said. “Harvey, please, stop making this so weird.” “I’m just trying to be a gentleman...
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
I walked Jenna to what was left of her house. "I had a really great time tonight," I told her. She smiled bashfully and looked down. "Me too," she whispered. "It's really too bad that the rest of our race has stabbed each other to death in brutal rage for no seemingly apparent reason," I pointed out. "Yeah. That's...
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
"By the convulsions, I'm assuming you're allergic to peanuts... Hello... Hello? Well, shit."
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
Jeff hadn’t seen anyone for eight months, at least. He’d lost count after all these days locked inside the supermarket, but he was pretty sure it was October. And now, here he was, sitting across from what could very easily be the last woman on Earth. Frankly, he couldn’t have asked for a better match: early twenties, ...
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[WP] While out on a date with the last (wo)man alive, you accidentally kill them.
[TL;DR](http://imgur.com/oEBKflP)
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[WP] A group of monkeys locked in a room finally begin writing something in collaboration.
STATUS REPORT The monkeys have been locked in the room for almost a billion years now. A sample of their work is as follows: First several million pages: >asdkfasdfhaiueor aiouefha skjdfhaiuegoah l fga shgi uwoefhaksefjaesfljsdfiuhaioeuraiueyr9w83rakfjshdifuehfa wjeoiap qopoefhidsfpeuryaiwer afawfe asdf aieuyfw89...
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[WP] A group of monkeys locked in a room finally begin writing something in collaboration.
It was the best of times, it was the blurst of times.
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[WP] A new messiah was born to a 16-year old girl. She is black and gay.
"You're not the Messiah!" "I am, child." "No, you're not. You're false. All of the priests and holy men say so!" "They know not the mind of My Father. Truly I tell you, I am." "Impossible! We refuse to belive you!" "...Why?" "You're not.....uh....." "White?" "Well....No! I mean, that doesn't really..." "Hetero...
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[WP] A new messiah was born to a 16-year old girl. She is black and gay.
This first part doesn't really get around to her child being the messiah...but all I envisoned was the birth from that WP. ____________________________________ Ejuni screamed in pain while the waster held the baby’s head. The other waster smoked a cigarette and watched from the ruins of their apartment building. Her b...
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[WP] A new messiah was born to a 16-year old girl. She is black and gay.
ugh.
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[WP] A new messiah was born to a 16-year old girl. She is black and gay.
"My God, can you please turn the A/C off John?" "It's freezing in here, and it's mid-April!" Although she is my wife of twenty years, she's also a pain in the ass. Of course I oblige, lest I endure the wrath of the "Frozen Firebreather" Today is just like any other day lately, rainy. It's same old routine; I drop the...
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[WP] A new messiah was born to a 16-year old girl. She is black and gay.
Weeeeeelp unsubscribing.
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[PI] Orion Spur: Molten Mercury - FEB CONTEST
Link to dropbox fixed
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[PI] Orion Spur: Molten Mercury - FEB CONTEST
Hi there! The beginning of this is a little exposition-heavy, but you drew me in anyway because I love both libraries and PIs. I especially liked the descriptions of the changing historical figures in the library. Some of the later exposition is a bit hard to get through (e.g. when Flynn is waiting in the Senate and po...
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[PI] Orion Spur: Molten Mercury - FEB CONTEST
Hello! This was a good read and I liked this universe. I thought you did a good job of setting the tone of this universe, as well. At no point was I confused about the factions or basic plot of the story, which has been a pretty common thing so far. I did enjoy April's story better than Rothgar's story. I think that w...
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[EU] You are a soldier tasked with manning a beacon up in the mountains between Gondor and Rohan when you see a singular flame on the horizon.
At the Beacon of Nardol, Duinhir sat beside a small fire with Ealdwulf, the newly-arrived from Rohan. Duty forbade them from having a large enough fire to keep them warm in the bitter cold of the White Mountains; instead, a brazier was kept lit at all times for the ease of lighting the beacon in case its neighbor to th...
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[EU] You are a soldier tasked with manning a beacon up in the mountains between Gondor and Rohan when you see a singular flame on the horizon.
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[EU] You are a soldier tasked with manning a beacon up in the mountains between Gondor and Rohan when you see a singular flame on the horizon.
The night was cold at the beacon-tower of Min-Rimmon. Dolnir pulled his wool cloak tightly about him, but the icy wind seemed to pass through it without trouble. He stamped his feet in a vain effort to bring feeling back into them. "Chilly, m'lad?" Maethor chuckled from his post on the other side of the beacon. "I ...
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[WP] Your character is a contestant in a deadly reality show, and the winner is the only one who gets to live. The families of the two closest runner-ups will receive 1 million dollars each, and the family of the person in last place will need to pay a hefty fine.
I've spent a year trying to get where my feet touch today. The crowd is cheering, excited to watch us die. The bi-annual Reality TV show Deathtrap will be airing today, well tomorrow, at midnight. It's 11:50 PM according to the large digital clock displayed on the monitor not too dissimilar from what you'd see at a bas...
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[WP] I don’t let go of good people they are mine even if they don’t know it.
I dont let go of good people they are mine even if they dont know it. Mamma keeps telling me that the WORLD is NASTY and BARBRIC because of the slutty dressed women on the TV and cause of the congressman fucking those woman so when I find good people I dont let them go. Mamma always yell at me when I bring good people ...
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[WP] A person jumps out of a plane while skydiving. They don't fall.
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[IP] Describe the events immediately before this photo.
"OKay, no... no, rest your arm on his shoulder. Yes. Perfect. Uh, the pump from your mask is at a weird angle, can you straighten it? Perfect. Okay now look up and to the right. Down a little. Okay, freeze."
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Write as though you are the author, from your point of view, and put yourself in the story.
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Write as though you are the author, from your point of view, and put yourself in the story.
*Self-Examination* I lay down on my couch. Feet up, laptop open. My cat jumps up and sits next to me. It's so meta. I'm an author. He's an author. Who better to write an author character than an author? Then he'll discover that he's writing himself! Reddit will love this. It's genius. First thing is to think of a t...
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[FF] Write a story only using haikus.
Eyes shut tight in fear. Waiting for my turn with dread while others succeed. Standing up, I shake, nervous to state each sentence as clearly as I should. Others hide their stares as I fumble to make clear all my ideas. They were neat before, but scrambled by my terror, they keep their silence....
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[FF] Write a story only using haikus.
Sitting in the room Reading the computer screen I look at the prompt I mull it over I conjure a story I wait for comments An hour after I edit out an odd quote I save my edits A single day passes I wait for any feedback A person answers? A person answers They say, "What the hell is **T...
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[FF] Write a story only using haikus.
She left me for him. I know I was merely life, But he was her death. She was always going To decide him over me, But he came too soon. She made him come out From his slumber upon those Bodies he's dragged down. I am sure that he Sprung up with pure excitement, Knowing of her jump. The moment she...
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[FF] Write a story only using haikus.
-1 I rise from my bed Bare feet on cool and hard steel My mind is groggy - A dark, dreary start In my mundane existence I question living. - Hot water upon me Suds assault my tired eyes Toe stubbed on tub drain. - I pick my day's garb Pants, shirt, sweater, socks, and shoes All black as this day. - Har...
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[FF] Write a story only using haikus.
##"Lost in a Dead God's Machine" How long was I trapped In strange metal labyrinths Before I escaped? Piston-covered walls And gears spinning around me; Lost in a machine. Searching led me to Food dispensed in canisters; Water stored the same. Searching led me to Two other people who were Trapped he...
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[FF] Write a story only using haikus.
In two thousand four I found a book to love; I Read it many times. Its hero was Dexter, A serial killer cop Who hunts down bad guys. I was enthralled. So original, so odd, Yet funny, with heart. Eighteen months later, Showtime made a TV show About my Dexter, And for a season It was everything the boo...
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[WP] While driving, I saw two old men hugging in the parking lot. Tell me why.
As I came out of the hospital, I saw him. I stopped. I stared at this man for what seemed like forever. He was holding a bouquet of flowers; Lilies. They were her favorite. I haven't seen him in thirty years. I hated him. I studied him. An expensive suit, a shiny watch by some expensive jeweler. Purple silk kerchief s...
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[WP] While driving, I saw two old men hugging in the parking lot. Tell me why.
"It's been a long time, Martin," he said. I stood, unable to move, with the grocery bags dangling from my hands like buckets in the bottom of a well, swinging from a long, rotten rope. My arms weren't rotten yet, but they hurt every day and I couldn't move them in half the ways my grandson could. "Joseph," I said, ...
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[WP] While driving, I saw two old men hugging in the parking lot. Tell me why.
"Are we almost at the hospital?" "Just keep walking, Bob" Arthur replied. "This is all your fault, you know" Bob said. "Making superglue using lab equipment...." "It's a fluoroethylene based plastic polymer" Arthur sighed. He had forgotten to relieve the pressure valve and the Erlenmeyer flask had exploded into a th...
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[WP] While driving, I saw two old men hugging in the parking lot. Tell me why.
John was a young mobster. He was ready to make a name for himself but that involved killing another. Being 25 and ambitious he decided he would take out an old favorite from 39th street NYC. The mans name was "Old Al" and he was a former hitman for the Italian mob. A perfect way to be noticed without running much risk....
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[WP] A racist plantation owner/slave trader falls asleep and wakes up on a late night New York City subway train packed with an ultra-diverse crowd.
I imagine the subway, with its noise, lights, and movement would be a shock. Then he would say something unfortunate and find himself in a servile insurrection. Or someone would take pity on the poor insane fool and hand him over to some nice cops before he gets himself killed. I give him a little better than 50\50 dep...
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Everyone in the world can pause time! ...except for you
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[WP] The Perfect Plan.
"Everyone's ready, sir." "Give them the green light," I barked at my assistant, John, as I quickly turned to the video screens. This was the beginning of an international event, broadcast across the world. Eyes droopy, I watched as the lights dimmed across the stadium. *Sound in 5...4...3...* I thought to myself. I'd ...
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[WP] The Democrats and the Republicans merge together, making a one big superparty able to enact whatever it pleases
Robo Steny Hoyer, the consensus Dempublican choice for Supreme Leader of the United States of America in 2048, stood on the steps of the U.S. Capital, about to take his oath. He would go through the motions of the same old oath of office from the days of republicanism, but all in attendance knew that it was just for sh...
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[PI] DREAM FLUX -- FEB CONTEST
I haven't read it yet, but I wanted to point out that your name is awesome (and that we have the same first name). Also, your indentation is a little strange. That's a minor point, but I think you want it to look as clean as it can be (you could actually publish something like this, so you wanna keep your options ope...
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[PI] DREAM FLUX -- FEB CONTEST
Hi! I really liked your story. Nicely written, good action. The pace is a bit fast; you've put a lot of plot into a small space and I encourage you to draw the story out a little more by making it a longer work post-contest. There's enough plot here for an actual novel, and with more length you can spend some more time...
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[PI] DREAM FLUX -- FEB CONTEST
I really enjoyed this entry. A lot. I felt like I was watching an action/sci-fi/thriller while I was reading it. My number one critique: You reveal the mystery far too quickly. I think you could stand to have it called the Device or the Generator up until the point Michael calls it by it's proper name near the end. ...
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[PI] DREAM FLUX -- FEB CONTEST
This was a really good one. Your writing style really appealed to me and I liked the structure of the narrative. Everything was easy to follow and I really enjoyed the characters, especially Conrad and his brother. I also liked the how you created the world in this story - it was different but not so much as to be dist...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
Please somebody do this for Bohemian Rhapsody! I'm not sure if I'm worthy
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
Madeleine was tired. Not in the "I've worked all day, and am fatigued" way, but in the "I've put up with this for far too long" way. As Barry walked in the door, she was waiting. Hugging him intensely, she kissed him, but somewhat awkwardly. It had been a while, after all. They didn't kiss much. They didn't talk m...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
Popular song, eh? She sat alone in the empty diner, cupping her coffee in her hands. It was a little past one in the morning, and the busboy was keeping an eye on her as he wiped down the tables. She looked shaken up and upset. When he had asked for her order, he noticed that her face was swollen and her eyes were re...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
Jacob and Erika met on September 13th, 2006. It was a chilly evening in Billings, and Jacob was alone in a bar, drinking more than the possibly underage bartender should have allowed him. He had just finally gathered up the strength to tell his parents about Jacob. About their darling son, the rodeo champion, the star ...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
You were the kind of guy I thought I could settle down with, or at least obsess over for a semester. But that was years ago, and I was naive. It was the Sunday after the Purdue/Camden game after the party where we met, one of Caitlin's parties filled with all those people you never see on campus unless there's a surpl...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
“MOMMY! MOMMY! Playground!” Justine circled around my bed excitedly, waking me and my husband, Jeremy. Trying to suppress my frustration and remember that my daughter is only six years old, I sat up, took a deep breath, and rubbed my eyes. “Do you want coffee?” Jeremy asked, half in a daze. “I can grab Starbucks....
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
I'd love to see this done for [Last Rites/Loved To Deth](http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7mWPJK1wJnM).
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
"I've got dreams to remember" Otis Redding's soothing, beautiful voice was echoing throughout the house. It bounced off the walls and the furniture, looking for ears to caress. Sara's ears left the house a week earlier, never to return. They left the tree halfway decorated. They left a mug of tea on a kitchen ta...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
I was hoping someone would do Rebecca Black's Friday
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
"Bye honey, don't wait up! I love you!" I closed the door to the apartment I shared with Josh, my boyfriend of two years. We met during orientation our first day of college, and had stuck together ever since. I was headed towards my best friend's bachelorette party, and was accordingly dressed in a very short, creme co...
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[WP] Most popular songs have generic lyrics that could apply to just about anyone. Take a song, and flesh it out into a detailed story about real people.
I was sat across from her. Ever since I had told her how I feel it had been a roller coaster. At the start, we had been so close no one could tear us apart. But then this other guy walks onto the scene and, she left me. No reason other than the other guy was better looking and mr popular. Worse than that. She had humi...
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[OT] Will there be a 60,000 Subscribers Contest....?
> can anyone guess when the next one will be...? I can give you an educated guess on when the next one will be: Sometime in the next few weeks. First we have to let the voting round for the current contest happen. We let that breathe on its own without bogging it down with another contest. Sometime after that, howe...
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