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Semi Tank Manure Spreader- Liquid Manure Tanker pulled by a semi-truck, used to bring manure from farm to the field, injecting its nutrients into future crop land. This allows for fields far away to get manure applied in a quick and cost effective manner. Tractor Top-fill Slurry Tank-Pulled by a tractor, this tank has a hopper on top for filling with manure out of a load pipe. Wide Tires on the tanker allow for less soil compaction. | Semi Tank Manure Spreader - A liquid Manure Tanker pulled by a semi-truck, used to bring manure from a farm to the field, injecting its nutrients into future cropland. Manure can be applied from the manure storage pit to fields located long distances away. Tractor Top-fill Slurry Tank - This is mounted on a truck and contains liquid manure. It can apply evenly behind the tanker. Wide tires on this truck allow for less soil compaction, as the truck applies fertilizer to a field. | Edit the manure spreader and tractor top-fill slurry tank for more detailed information and grammatical errors. | wiki |
Rifles can be made out of both wood and plastic. Some people prefer plastic because they are all the same weight and size, unless you order a bigger or smaller one. Others prefer wood because they're heavier and more durable. Some people prefer wood because it is less slick and they can weight it the way they want to. | Rifles can be made out of either wood or plastic. Some prefer plastic rifles because they are much more often the same weight and size if they are meant to be so. Others prefer wooden rifles because the material is heavier and more durable. Additionally, wood is less slick and can be weighed custom to someone's specifications. | Change wording to a more professional style. | wiki |
Players were classified according to the type and extent of their disability. The classification system allowed players to compete against others with a similar level of function. To compete in wheelchair tennis, athletes must have a major or total loss of function in one or both legs. Quadriplegic class players compete in mixed events, while Paraplegic class players (with full use of their arms) competed in separate men's and women's events. | Players were classified according to the type and extent of their disability, and within that system, according to gender. The classification system allows players to compete against others with a similar level of function. All wheelchair tennis athletes must have a major or total loss of function in one or both legs to take part in the sport. | Remove paraplegic and quadriplegic from the paragraph. Rewrite for conciseness. | wiki |
This allows for individuals to contribute who may be silenced in a larger group setting. A SWOT analysis can be used by a community organization to organize information, providing insight of the barriers that may be present while engaging in social change, and the strengths available that are should be utilized or activated to counteract these barriers. Uses of a SWOT analysis by a community organization: to organize information, provide insight into possible barriers that may be present while engaging in social change, and identify strengths available that can be activated to counteract these barriers. | This allows for individuals, who may be silenced in a larger group setting, to contribute. A SWOT meeting allows participants to creatively brainstorm, identify obstacles and strategize possibly solutions to these limitations. The use of a SWOT analysis by a community organization are as follows: to to organize information, provide insight into barriers that may be present while engaging in social change processes, and identify strengths available that can be activated to counteract these barriers. | Change any errors in sentence structure or grammar. | wiki |
Mojits are the most basic entity of mojito application. This is where Model, View, Controller in accordance with JSON configuration files are based. Controller manipulates the model by commands. Models contains data according to the commands from the controller. View factory is the place where views are created according to the model. View Cache caches some frequently requested views to aid overall performance. Mojits are the most basic entity of an mojito application. There can be multiple mojits existing at the same time. A Mojito application is nothing but a set of mojits working with each other and are facilitated by configurable JSON files which defines the code for model, view and controller. This MVC structure of mojit works in close liaison with API block and Mojito services, and can be deployed at both client and server side. While the application is deployed at client side, it can always call modules on server side using binders. Binders basically are mojit codes that lets mojits connect with other existing mojits and execute tasks to accomplish the core functionality. | Mojits are the modules of a Mojito application. An application consists of one or more mojits. A mojit encompasses a Model, Views and a Controller defined by JSON configuration files. It includes a View factory where views are created according to the model and a View cache that holds frequently requested views to aid performance. A Mojito application is a set of mojits facilitated by configurable JSON files which define the code for model, view and controller. This MVC structure works with API block and Mojito services, and can be deployed at both client and server side. While the application is deployed at client side, it can call server-side modules using binders. Binders are mojit codes that let mojits request services from each other. | Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
The Pirates were ahead by ½ game before the loss to Chicago & Three Finger Mordecai in front of the West Side Ground's largest ever crowd of 30‚247. Down 5-2 in the 9th, 2B Ed Abbaticchio lines a ball down the line & over the fence with Honus Wagner aboard (the bases weren’t loaded, as sometimes reported for dramatic effect), but the drive was ruled foul. The Pirates argued that it was a home run, but ump Hank O'Day stood his ground and with that call went the Pirates last chance of taking the flag. There’s an urban legend that a lady in the stands was hit by the ball and later sued Batty. She claimed she was in fair side of the seats when the blast conked her, but that tale has never been substantiated. It was a tough loss; the Bucs had won 8 in a row to get a half game lead on the Cubs going into the final game. | The Pirates ride an 8-game win streak and were ahead by ½ game before the loss to Chicago & Three Finger Mordecai in front of the West Side Ground's largest-ever crowd of 30‚247. Down 5-2 in the 9th, Ed Abbaticchio lines a ball down the line & over the fence with Honus Wagner aboard but is ruled foul. The Pirates argue that it was a homer to ump Hank O'Day but lose the argument & the pennant. There’s an urban legend that a lady in the stands was hit by the ball & later sued Abbaticchio claiming she was in fair side of the seats. | Rewrite to be more concise. | wiki |
"Red Tape" is a song by French singer Amanda Lear released in 1981 by Ariola Records. Amanda Lear wrote "Red Tape" 's lyrics and Anthony Monn composed the music. Like all the other tracks on Incognito, "Red Tape" refers to a sin-bureaucracy. The single was released only in France, but failed to reach the charts. "New York" was released as the B-side of the single. The music video presents Amanda in a futuristic outfit, wearing big sunglasses and playing Rubik's Cube. | "Red Tape" is a song by French singer Amanda Lear released in 1981 by Ariola Records as the single from her album Incognito. "Red Tape" was composed and produced by Anthony Monn, Lear's long-time collaborator, and is a pop song with rock influences. The lyrics were written by Amanda Lear. On its parent album, where every song stands for a "deadly sin", "Red Tape" represents bureaucracy. The song was released as the single only in France, with a French-language version of "New York" on side B, which was not available on the album. The single did not chart. The music video pictures Amanda clad in a futuristic outfit and sunglasses, playing Rubik's Cube. | Rewrite and reorder the information for better clarity and an ecyclopedic tone. | wiki |
She ends up getting Dexter's help, but she propels the entire school into space. Topped Off: Dexter and Dee Dee try coffee after seeing how it energizes their parents and become addicted to it. Dee Dee's Tail: Dee Dee complains that she wants to be a Pony Puff Princess, so Dexter turns her into a horse. Dexter and Dee Dee's friends try to take advantage of her, and it is up to Pony Puff Princess to rescue her. No Power Trip: Dexter uses too much electric power, causing his laboratory to shut down until he can recharge it. However, Dee Dee wisely tells Dexter he must take a moment to enjoy the outdoors. | She ends up getting Dexter's help, but her resulting project propels the entire school into space. Topped Off: Dexter and Dee Dee experiment with coffee after seeing how it energizes their parents and soon become addicted to it. Dee Dee's Tail: Dexter transforms Dee Dee into a horse after she expresses her desire to become a Pony Puff Princess. However Dexter and Dee Dee's friends try to exploit her, forcing the Pony Puff Princess to intervene in support of Dee Dee. No Power Trip: Despite warnings from the computer, Dexter consumes too much power while performing numerous experiments, causing his lab to shut down. He then tries numerous methods to recharge it. | Copyedit these summaries and remove comment about the outdoors. | wiki |
The show is about a family living in the West Side of Charlotte, North Carolina, who experience the highs and lows of everyday life. Jennifer and Roger Parker have two sons, Alfie and Dee Dee. Alfie is the cool elder brother and Dee Dee is the younger brother, who always follows Alfie around. The family also has a smarter, older daughter named Melanie. Another main character of the show is Alfie's best friend Milton 'Goo' Berry. Reruns of the show aired on The '90s Are All That on TeenNick on December 24th, December 26th, and December 28, 2013. This was the first time reruns have aired on TV since 2000. | The show centers around the Parkers, a family living in the West Side of Charlotte, North Carolina, who experience the highs and lows of everyday life. Reruns of the program that aired during the "The '90s Are All That" block on TeenNick on December 24, 26, and 28, 2013, marked the first time the series has aired on television since 2000. In June 2014, Nickelodeon released "My Brother & Me: The Complete Series" as a two-disc manufacture-on-demand (MOD) release through Amazon.com. | Add info on all series released. | wiki |
The Ukrainian Medical Stomatological Academy was founded in 1921 by the Odontoliogc faculty of the Kharkiv Medical Academy. In 1967, the academy moved to the city of Poltava and was renamed the Poltava Ukrainian Medical Stomatological Academy (PUMSA). In 1994, it was granted the sixth highest accreditation level, as well as the status of a Poltava State Medical University (PSMU), because of its low death rate during surgeries (6). As of 2004, PSMU had reached a confirmed level IV accreditation. | The university was founded in 1921 by the dental faculty of Kharkiv Medical Academy. In 1967, it moved to the city of Poltava and was renamed the Poltava Ukrainian Medical Stomatological (oral medicine) Academy (PUMSA). In 1994, the university received the sixth-highest accreditation level because of its low death rate during surgery and was renamed Poltava State Medical University (PSMU). As of 2004, PSMU had a level-IV accreditation. | Copy edit in order to make sure grammar and style are correct, | wiki |
Multiple events occur: Republicans and Democrats outlined separate deficit-reduction proposals. President Obama and Speaker Boehner addressed the nation via video networks on the debt ceiling. Date projected that "according to Treasury's best estimates United States federal government will actually run out of money to pay interest on the debt, or in other words" default "," without a raise in or elimination of the debt ceiling. | Republicans and Democrats outlined separate deficit-reduction proposals. President Obama and Speaker of the House Boehner addressed the nation separately over network television with regard to the debt ceiling. Date projected by the Department of the Treasury that the borrowing authority of the United States will be exhausted. | Copyedit and condense the text slightly. | wiki |
Two days later he scored all three goals when Mexico defeated Honduras in the same tournament. His fifth goal came in the semi-final against Canada, making him joint top scorer with team mate Marco Fabián. On 23 January 2014, he was called up for the Mexico national football team, under the command of Miguel Herrera. Pulido subsequently scored a hat trick for the senior team in his first appearance against South Korea on 29 January 2014. | Two days later, he scored a hat-trick in Mexico's 3–0 victory over Honduras. His fifth goal came in the semi-final against Canada, making him joint top scorer along with teammate Marco Fabián. In the summer of 2012, Mexico won the Toulon Tournament held in France with Pulido scoring a goal in the 3–0 win over Turkey in the final. On January 23, 2014, Pulido was called up to the Mexico national football team by coach Miguel Herrera. Pulido subsequently scored a hat-trick on his debut appearance against South Korea on January 29, 2014, with Mexico going on to win the match 4–0. | Clean up a lot of the poor spelling and grammar. | wiki |
For nearly forty years it remained abandoned, and by 1997 it had deteriorated almost to the point of total collapse. In June of that year, the Lyles Station Historic Preservation Corporation was founded to help preserve and promote the history of the Lyles Station community. Its major project was restoration of the schoolhouse, intending to use it as a living history museum to educate local schoolchildren both about Lyles Station history itself as well as the daily routine of a school in the early twentieth century. To that end, the Corporation lobbied to have the school, and the entire community, placed on the National Register of Historic Places. Achieving this goal in 1999, the Corporation then began seeking funds to restore the school. | Abandoned for nearly forty years, it had deteriorated almost to the point of total collapse by 1997. The Lyles Station Historic Preservation Corporation was founded in June 1997, to preserve and promote the history of the Lyles Station community. Its major project was restoration of the schoolhouse, intending to use it as a living history museum to educate others both about Lyles Station's history and the daily school routine in the early twentieth century. The school was listed on the National Register of Historic Places in 1999. | Copy edit the paragraph about Lyles Sation. | wiki |
In his public statements, Wilson frequently expressed that he enjoyed live performances. Whether he truly consents to his semi-regular touring schedule since the 2000s has remained a subject of debate among fans. Writing in his 2011 book about the Beach Boys, Jon Stebbins concluded, "His handlers, managers, and wife insist that he works. | Whether Wilson truly consented to his semi-regular touring schedule since the 2000s remained a subject of debate among fans. Wilson himself frequently stated that he enjoyed live performances, however, writing in his 2011 book about the Beach Boys, Jon Stebbins concluded, "His handlers, managers, and wife insist that he works. | Rewrite the passage in the past tense | wiki |
Orchestra Hall was built in 1919 (starting on June 6, and finished on the night of October 23), in barely five months, because Ossip Gabrilowitsch demanded that the DSO build a suitable auditorium before he assumed his position as music director. The Orchestra used to play at the old Detroit Opera House. With the creation of an adjoining auditorium for jazz and chamber music in 2003, Orchestra Hall became part of the Max M. Fisher Music Center which included and a new store for DSO merchandise. | The Detroit Symphony Orchestra had previously played at the old Detroit Opera House. However, Ossip Gabrilowitsch demanded that the DSO build a suitable auditorium before he assumed his position as music director. Construction on Orchestra Hall began on June 6, 1919, and ended in barely five months on the night of October 23, 1919. | Reorganize and condense the information. | wiki |
Avantika joins the party on an expedition to unlock a shrine to Uk'otoa, but relations turn sour when the Mighty Nein realise that Avantika plans to overthrow pirate leader the Plank King and rule the oceans of Exandria. Avantika is executed by the Plank King when her treachery is exposed. Returning to land, the Mighty Nein learn that Felderwin, Nott's home town, was attacked by Xhorhas. The party investigate and learn that Nott's husband Yeza was abducted by the Kryn Dynasty, the rulers of Xhorhas. They cross in Xhorhas, but the search for Yeza is complicated by the ongoing conflict. Caleb earns the party the favour of the Kryn Dynasty by handing over the Beacon of Luxon, which is central to the Kryn society. While carrying out mercenary work in Xhorhas, the Mighty Nein uncover a conspiracy to break down the barriers between the Prime Material Plane and the Abyssal Plane, increasing chaos in the world. The Mighty Nein identify a Xhorhasian named Obann as a key figure in this conspiracy. | Avantika joins the party on an expedition to unlock a shrine to Uk'otoa, but relations turn sour when the Mighty Nein realize that Avantika plans to overthrow the pirate leader, the Plank King, and rule the oceans of Exandria. Avantika is executed by the Plank King when the Mighty Nein expose her treachery. In the Xhorhas story arc (21 episodes, 48–69), the Mighty Nein return to land to discover that Felderwin, Nott's home town, was attacked by Xhorhas. The party investigate and learn that Nott's husband Yeza was abducted by the Kryn Dynasty. They secretly cross into Xhorhas, but the search for Yeza is complicated by the ongoing conflict. After completing a job for the den mother of Asarius, the Mighty Nein are granted an audience with Leylas Kryn, the Bright Queen, in the capital of Rosohna. During this meeting, the party's Empire origins are exposed, however, Caleb earns the party the favor of the queen by handing over the Beacon of Luxon, which is central to the Kryn society. As a result, the party makes acquaintance with Shadowhand Essek Thelyss who releases Yeza to them and grants them a house in Rosohna courtesy of his den. While carrying out mercenary work in Xhorhas, the Mighty Nein uncover a conspiracy to break down the barriers between the Prime Material Plane and the Abyssal Plane. The Mighty Nein identify Obann as a key figure in this conspiracy. | Rewrite for clarity. Fix puncuation, and grammar errors. | wiki |
The 2012–13 Majstrovstvá regiónu season is the twentieth football league season of Slovakian Majstrovstvá regiónu, the fourth tier of slovak football leagues, since its establishment in 1993. The league is composed of 64 teams divided geographically into four groups of 16 teams: Majstrovstvá regiónu Bratislava, Majstrovstvá regiónu Západ, Majstrovstvá regiónu Stred and Majstrovstvá regiónu Východ. Teams will play only other teams in their own division. | The 2012–13 season of Majstrovstvá regiónu is the twentieth season of the fourth-tier football league in Slovakia, since its establishment in 1993. 64 teams are geographically divided into four groups: Majstrovstvá regiónu Bratislava, Majstrovstvá regiónu západ, Majstrovstvá regiónu stred and Majstrovstvá regiónu východ (16 teams each). Teams were played against teams in their own division only. | rewrite to be more concise | wiki |
At the same time, the Enterprise is monitoring a large asteroid called Yonada which is on a deadly collision course with the Federation world of Daran V, a planet with a population of nearly four billion inhabitants. Unless a way is discovered to divert Yonada, the asteroid will destroy the planet in less than a standard year. As the Enterprise approaches and scans Yonada, the sensors suddenly detect a set of ballistic missiles targeting the ship, however the Enterprise quickly dispenses with the primitive weapons. Curiously, the sensors track the point of origin of the missiles to Yonada. When the asteroid is discovered to contain a breathable atmosphere, Kirk assembles a landing party consisting of himself, Dr. McCoy, and Mr. Spock, to beam down to the surface to investigate. | At the same time, the sensors suddenly detect a set of ballistic missiles targeting the ship; however, the Enterprise quickly dispenses with the primitive weapons. The missiles' point of origin is quickly determined, and the Enterprise approaches. It is a large asteroid called Yonada which is on a deadly collision course with the Federation world of Daran V, a planet with a population of nearly four billion inhabitants. Unless a way is discovered to divert Yonada, the asteroid will destroy the planet in just over a solar year. When the asteroid is discovered to contain a breathable atmosphere, Kirk assembles a landing party consisting of himself, Dr. McCoy, and Mr. Spock, to beam into the habitable interior to investigate. | Reorder the information for better clarity. | wiki |
North Haven railway station is a railway station on the Outer Harbor railway line which is located in the northwestern Adelaide suburb of North Haven on the LeFevre Peninsula. It is located 20.5 & nbsp; km by railway from the Adelaide Railway Station. It was opened on 13 September 1981 and replaced Yerlo railway station. | North Haven railway station is located on the Outer Harbor line. Situated in the north-western Adelaide suburb of North Haven, it is 20.5 kilometres from Adelaide station. It opened on 13 September 1981 replacing Yerlo railway station. | Clean up the text and remove numerous mentions of the word "station." | wiki |
Hesselman engines often started on gasoline and then switched to diesel or kerosene when at working temperature. Clearing the heavy oil for the next start is achieved by switching back to gasoline before stopping. It is the first spark ignition engine with direct injection of fuel into the cilinder. Hesselman engine compared to a diesel engine had smaller dimensions and hence lower weight. In the thirties knowledge of metallurgy was limited, therefore diesel engines were heavy to cope with the high compression and pressure during combustion. But then diesel engines were developed with better materials and Hesselman engines lost the advantage. Hesselman engines could use heavier oils considerably cheaper than gasoline and were therefore more economical for the vehicle owner. Contemporary tests also pointed to a slightly lower fuel consumption than the equivalent gasoline engine. | Hesselman engines were often started on gasoline and then switched to diesel or kerosene when at working temperature. Clearing the heavy oil for the next start was achieved by switching back to gasoline before stopping. It is the first spark ignition engine with direct injection of fuel into the cylinder. Hesselman engines could use heavier oils which were considerably cheaper than gasoline and were therefore more economical to operate for the vehicle owner. Contemporary tests also pointed to a slightly lower fuel consumption in comparison to gasoline engines of similar power. A Hesselman engine compared to a diesel engine had smaller dimensions and hence lower weight. In the 1930s knowledge of metallurgy was less advanced, therefore diesel engines were heavy to cope with the high compression and pressure during combustion. Later, diesel engines were developed with better materials and Hesselman engines lost this advantage. | Rearrange some of the information for clarity | wiki |
Repeater watches, more of a luxury than a utilitarian instrument, survived the introduction of electric lighting and luminous watch dials in the early 1900s, and repeater complications are still found in luxury watches. An example of the ringing procedure is given for the time 3:17-would be conveyed by the following sequence of audible tones: "dong, dong, dong, ding-dong, ding, ding". Here "dong" corresponds to 1 hour, "ding-dong" corresponds to 15 minutes, and "ding" corresponds to 1 minute. Often, repeating watches are activated by moving a slide located on the side of the case. Doing this winds a subsidiary spring, and allows various levers in the repeating mechanism to fall onto cams that turn with the watch hands. When the button is released, the spring moves the levers back to where they started from. As the levers move, they engage with hammers that hit gongs, thus striking the time. | Repeater watches, as luxuries, survived the introduction of electric lighting and luminous watch dials in the early 1900s, and repeaters are still found in the most expensive complicated watches. Repeater clocks often had a cord with a button on the end protruding from each side of the clock. Pulling the cord actuated the repeater mechanism. Early watch repeater mechanisms were powered by the watch mainspring and were actuated by pushing on the crown. Later ones are activated by pushing a slide along the side of the case. This winds a separate spring to power the repeater. Releasing the slide releases the spring, and it's force as it unwinds moves the repeater mechanism through it's chiming sequence. The gongs are long hardened steel wires that are coiled around the movement inside the watch case. Steel hammers actuated by the repeater mechanism strike them to produce the chiming sounds. | Rewrite the description of how they work geared towards functionality without examples. | wiki |
This area forms part of present day barony of Mohill. His father Maurus, was an Augustinian cleric, recorded as canon of the Monastery of St. Mary in Mohill on 26th March 1489, indicating his family home place was Mohill, in county Leitrim. Maurus is recorded as being canon of the church of Ardagh between 1497 and 1508, which is ambiguous enough to open the possibility of Ardagh, County Longford being the birthplace of Charles. Nonetheless, the strongest evidence identifies Mohill, in county Leitrim (the heartland of Gaelic Irish "Mág Raghnaill" dynasty), as the birthplace of Charles Reynolds. | This area forms part of the present-day Barony of Mohill, in county Leitrim. His father Maurus, was an Augustinian cleric, recorded as canon of the Monastery of St. Mary in Mohill on 26th March 1489, identifying his family home as being in Mohill. The evidence points to Mohill as the birthplace of Charles Reynolds. However, Maurus is recorded as being a canon of the church of Ardagh between 1497 and 1508, which is ambiguous enough to offer the possibility of Ardagh, County Longford as an alternative birthplace. | Condense the information and remove unnecessary details. | wiki |
Crayola also manufactures triangular crayons that do not roll. The standard triangular crayons are in 8 and 16 packs. The 30 pack of triangular crayons is only available as washable and is packaged in a jar. The table below lists the colors in the 8, 16, and 30 packs. All color values are approximate. Washable crayons are in packs of 8, 16, and 24 standard crayons and 8, 16, and 30 triangle crayons. The 8 and 16 packs of the standard and triangular washable packs lists the same colors as their original packs. The washable 24 standard crayon pack lists the colors as the original pack. | Crayola also manufactors triangled crayons that are anti roll. The standard triangled crayons are in 8 and 16 packs. Below is a table of the colors in the 8,16, and 30 packs. The 30 pack of triangled crayons is only on washable mode and in a jar. In 1990, Crayola released the Silver Swirls, a pack of 24 silvery colors. In 1994, Crayola produced a 16-pack of crayons that released fragrances when used. In 1995, Crayola changed some of the scents because of complaints received by parents that some of the crayons smelled good enough to eat, like the Cherry, Chocolate, & Blueberry scented crayons. Crayons with food scents were retired in favor of non-food scents. | Add more information about the scents | wiki |
She is also wrote scripts for advertising and for several television series. Her latest works have been the film for television 22 Angeles (2016) directed by Miguel Bardem for TVE34 and the coordination of the scripts for the series Central 5 for the production company El Deseo in 2018. She combines screenwriting with a teaching activity. She has also taught for in the Master's Degree in Screenwriting at the Universidad Carlos III de Madrid, and she is the director and founder of the Escuela de Guion de Madrid. She has published two books about teaching screenwriting: Matad al guionista y acabaréis con el cine (1999) and Nunca mientas a un idiota. | She also wrote scripts for advertising and for several television series. Her latest works have been the TV movie 22 Angeles (2016) directed by Miguel Bardem for TVE34 and the coordination of the scripts for the TV series Central 5 produced by El Deseo in 2018. Luna alternates screenwriting with her teaching activity. She is the co-director of the Master's Degree in Screenwriting and Dramaturgy at the Universidad Autónoma de Madrid / Escuela de Guion de Madrid. She offered workshops at the Fundación Carolina, at the Laboratorio de Oaxaca (Mexico) sponsored by Sundance, in Colombia, and in Brazil. She taught for the Master's Degree in Screenwriting at the Universidad Carlos III de Madrid, and she is the director and founder of the Escuela de Guion de Madrid. Moreover, she published two books on how to teach screenwriting: Matad al guionista y acabaréis con el cine (1999) and Nunca mientas a un idiota. | Improve the translation from Spanish to English and add more information. | wiki |
Once we know what kind of mathematical structure we are concerned with, we should be able to pinpoint what mappings preserve the structure. Conversely, specifying the symmetry can define the structure, or at least clarify what we mean by an invariant, geometric language in which to discuss it; this is one way of looking at the Erlangen programme. For example, automorphism groups of certain models of finite geometries are not "symmetry groups" in the usual sense, although they preserve symmetry. They do this by preserving families of point-sets rather than point-sets (or "objects") themselves. Like above, the group of automorphisms of space induces a group action on objects in it. | Each type of mathematical structure has invertible mappings which preserve the structure. Conversely, specifying the symmetry group can define the structure, or at least clarify the meaning of geometric congruence or invariance; this is one way of looking at the Erlangen programme. For example, automorphism groups of finite geometries are not "symmetry groups" in the usual sense of Euclidean geometry. Rater they preserve families of point-sets (discrete subspaces) rather than Euclidean subspaces, distances, or inner products. As for Euclidean figures, subsets of a finite geometry have symmetry groups which are subgroups of the symmetries of the entire geometry. | Copyedit and avoid the use of "we". | wiki |
More 124 million children and adolescents aged 5-19 (6% of girls and 8% of boys) were obese in 2016, as compared to the under 1% in 1975. Furthermore, in 2016, over 340 million children and adolescents from ages 5-19 were overweight or obese. The prevalence of obesity and overweight amongst children and adolescents in this age group has significantly risen from 4% in 1975 to just above 18% in 2016. This marked increase in the rate of obesity and overweight amongst children has occurred similarly among both boys and girls, reflected in the 2016 statistic where 18% of girls and 19% of boys were overweight. | In 2016, over 340 million children and adolescents from ages 5 to 19 were overweight or obese. More than 124 million children and adolescents aged 5 to 19 (6% of girls and 8% of boys) were obese in 2016, as compared to 1975, where obesity affected just under 1% of children and adolescents in this age range. This marked increase in the rate among children has occurred similarly among boys and girls, reflected in the 2016 statistic where 18% of girls and 19% of boys were overweight. | Add more information to the obesity section | wiki |
Creatine is a naturally occurring non-protein compound of which the primary metabolic role is to combine creatine with a phosphoryl group to generate phosphocreatine, which is used to regenerate ATP or adenosine triphosphate. Most of the human body's total creatine and phosphocreatine stores are found in skeletal muscle (95%), while the remainder is distributed in the blood, brain, testes, and other tissues. The average amount of total creatine (creatine and phosphocreatine) stored in the body is approximately 120 & nbsp; mmol / kg of dry muscle mass. However, the upper limit of creatine storage post supplementation and dietary intervention is believed to be around 160 & nbsp; mmol / kg. Creatine synthesis primarily occurs in the liver and kidneys. On average, it is produced endogenously at an estimated rate of about 8.3 & nbsp; or 1 & nbsp; gram per day in young adults. | Creatine is a naturally occurring non-protein compound and the primary constituent of phosphocreatine, which is used to regenerate ATP within the cell. 95% of the human body's total creatine and phosphocreatine stores are found in skeletal muscle, while the remainder is distributed in the blood, brain, testes, and other tissues. The typical creatine content of skeletal muscle (as both creatine and phosphocreatine) is 120 & nbsp; mmol per kilogram of dry muscle mass, but can reach up to 160 & nbsp; mmol/kg through supplementation. Approximately 1–2% of intramuscular creatine is degraded per day, and an individual would need to consume about 1–3 grams of creatine per day to maintain average (unsupplemented) creatine storage. | Reword lead for clarity and conciseness. | wiki |
Spinning drop method (rotating drop method) is one of the common methods that is used to measure interfacial tension. Basically, measurements are carried out by the placement of a fluid in a liquid drop of higher density contained in a rotating horizontal tube. The fluid drop is elongated by the centrifugal force and elongation of the fluid stops when the centrifugal forces are balanced by the surface tension forces. | Spinning drop method (rotating drop method) is one of the methods that is used to measure interfacial tension. Basically, measurements are carried out in a rotating horizontal tube which contains a dense fluid. One drop of a less dense liquid is placed inside the fluid. Since the rotation of the horizontal tube creates a centrifugal force towards the tube walls, the liquid drop starts to be elongated and this elongation stops when the interfacial tension and centrifugal forces are balanced. Values obtained at this equilibrium point are used to estimate surface tension of the particular liquid by using appropriate correlations. | Add more desciptions of how the spinning drop method works. | wiki |
Following the Armistice of 22 June 1940, he remained in the Army of Vichy and from July 1940 to September 1941, he was the adjutant to the général commanding the 13th Military Division at Clermont-Ferrand and military commander of Puy-de-Dôme. During these complex times, de Lattre played an important role in maintaining military cohesion, confidence and discipline. At this time he implemented government directives, believing that the regime of Marshal Philippe Pétain was acting in defence of the national interest. Promoted général de division, he was the commander-in-chief of troops in the protectorate of Tunisia where he opened another military instruction centre. | Following the Armistice of 22 June 1940, he remained in the Army of Vichy France and from July 1940 to September 1941, he was the adjutant to the general commanding the 13th Military Division at Clermont-Ferrand and military commander of Puy-de-Dôme. During these times, de Lattre implemented government directives relating to improving discipline and cohesion in the army, believing that the regime of Marshal Philippe Pétain was acting in defence of national interest. Keen to encourage young men, he opened several field schools and military instruction centres – built up by Alsatians soldiers – with the aim of producing capable officers and generals, trained in team work and able to spread their experience across the board of the armistice army. Promoted to général de division (equivalent to Major General in Anglophone countries), he was the commander-in-chief of troops in the protectorate of Tunisia where he opened another military instruction centre. | Expand the text. | wiki |
After his active career he became a football manager, who coached clubs like FC Zwolle and FC Jokerit. On 6 February 2010 SC Heerenveen officials hired the former Feyenoord and Ajax defender as their new coach until June 2010, replacing Jan de Jonge. It was announced that Everse will become the new coach of Sparta Rotterdam as of the 2010-2011 season. | After his player career, he coached FC Zwolle and FC Jokerit. On 6 February 2010 SC Heerenveen officials hired Everse as their coach until June 2010, replacing Jan de Jonge. He coached Sparta Rotterdam during the 2010-2011 season. In 2015 he managed Dutch Eredivisie side FC Dordrecht. | Add FC Dordrecht to Everse's coaching career. | wiki |
There are several differences between some of the consonants in the Hopi language and English. The voiced labial fricative v is pronounced the same as in English when it is placed before a vowel. Before a consonant and at the end of words, it is not as voiced. The glottal stop is found much more frequently in Hopi than in English, particularly before vowels at the beginning of a word, or before the final consonant or vowel at the end of a word. | The voiced labial fricative v is pronounced similarly to English v when before a vowel. Before a consonant and at the end of words, it is not voiced. According to Whorf, Second Mesa speakers have voiceless syllable-finally and free variation between bilabial and ladiodental voiced fricatives elsewhere. The glottal stop is found much more frequently in Hopi than in English, particularly at the beginning of a word, before the final consonant, or at the ends of words after a vowel. | Add syllable-finally and free variation | wiki |
Cigarette smoke has been observed to globally alter histone modifications of promoter regions of pro-inflammatory genes, mainly through an overall increase in acetylation. Specifically in rat and mouse models, cigarette smoke was observed to increase acetylation of lysine 9 on H3 (H3K9) and lysine 12 on H4 (H4K12) but also phosphorylation of serine 10 on H3 (H3S10). These marks are associated with an increase in gene expression and prevent the accumulation of epigenetic marks that promote gene repression. Mechanistically, the increased frequency of these marks, especially the modifications on histone H3, is linked to the activation of IKK-α that directly phosphorylates histone H3 as a consequence of exposure to cigarette smoke. | Cigarette smoke has been observed to globally alter histone modifications near the promoter regions of pro-inflammatory genes, mainly through an overall increase in acetylation. Cigarette smoke can alter histone acetylation through a number of pathways. Chief among these is the degradation of HDAC2, thereby preventing the removal of acetylation marks in affected cells. The degradation of this enzyme results from phosphorylation and subsequent ubiquitination induced by cigarette smoke. In rat and mouse models, cigarette smoke was observed to increase acetylation of lysine 9 on histone H3 (H3K9), lysine 12 on histone H4 (H4K12) and phosphorylation of serine 10 on histone H3 (H3S10). These marks are associated with an increase in gene expression and prevent the accumulation of repressive histone modifications. Mechanistically, the increased frequency of these marks, especially the modifications on histone H3, are linked to the activation of IKK-α which directly phosphorylates histone H3 as a consequence of exposure to cigarette smoke. | Include a section about HDAC2 degradation. | wiki |
Estuarine systems also experience daily, tidal and seasonal swings in temperature, which affects many of the chemical characteristics of the water as well as the metabolic and calcifying processes of shell-producing organisms. The temperature and salinity affect the carbonate balance of the water, influencing carbonate equilibrium, calcium carbonate solubility and the saturation states of calcite and aragonite. Tidal influences and shallow waters ensure that estuarine organisms experience wide variations in the temperature, salinity and other aspects of water chemistry, making this habitat ideal for studies on the influence of changing physical and chemical conditions on processes such as shell deposition. Changing conditions in estuaries and coastal regions is especially important since around 50% of global calcification and 90% of fish catch occurs in these locations. A large number of the larger calcifying organisms are molluscs, such as bivalves, cephalopods, chitons, and gastropods. | Estuarine systems also experience daily, tidal and seasonal swings in temperature, which affect many of the chemical characteristics of the water and in turn affect the metabolic and calcifying processes of shell-producing organisms. Temperature and salinity affect the carbonate balance of the water, influencing carbonate equilibrium, calcium carbonate solubility and the saturation states of calcite and aragonite. Changing conditions in estuaries and coastal regions are especially relevant to human interests, because about 50% of global calcification and 90% of fish catch occurs in these locations. A substantial proportion of larger marine calcifying organisms are molluscs: bivalves, gastropods and chitons. | Rewrite to make the text more concise. | wiki |
He credited his wartime experiences with giving him international perspective throughout his later endeavors. Served as faculty advisor to over 60 postgraduate students training in Agronomy. Edited two technical books, wrote 22 book chapters and authored over one hundred refereed journal articles. | He credited those wartime experiences with giving him international perspective throughout his later endeavors. He served as faculty advisor to over 60 postgraduate students training in Agronomy, edited two technical books, wrote 22 book chapters and published over one hundred refereed journal articles. He served Professional Societies in several activities, notably as an Associate editor of the Soil Science Society of America Journal and as Consulting Soils Editor of the Agronomy Journal. Olson was highly recognized for his contributions to Soil Science and Agronomy. | Add more details about Ernest Robert Olson | wiki |
A number of HDTVs use frame interpolation to reduce judder, although not all 120 Hz HDTVs include a motion interpolation feature. Mitsubishi's 120 Hz HDTVs do not include de-judder processing. Anti judder technology is not the same as motion blur reducing technology, but is frequently lumped together with it. Each manufacturer has a different name for their implementation of motion interpolation. | It should be noticed that, while common, not all 120 Hz HDTVs include a motion interpolation feature. Also, anti-judder technology is not the same as motion blur-reducing technology, but is frequently lumped together with it. The commercial name given to motion interpolation technology varies across manufacturers, as does its implementation. | Rewrite for clarity. | wiki |
The Hughes M230 Chain Gun is a 30 mm automatic cannon developed and manufactured by Hughes (McDonnell Douglas) (Boeing). As the name implies it is an electrically operated chain gun. The 30mm M230 Automatic Gun is a component of the Area Weapon System on the AH-64A Apache attack helicopter. The M230 is a single barrel, externally powered (3 HP electric motor), electrically fired, chain driven weapon. It is mounted in the lower section of the gun turret on the underside of the Apache helicopter. It fires 30mm linkless ammunition at a rate of 625 ± 25 shots per minute (SPM). The M230 Gun has a positive cook-off safety (open bolt clearing) and double ram prevention. | The Hughes M230 Chain Gun is a 30mm, single-barrel automatic cannon developed and manufactured by Hughes (McDonnell Douglas) (Boeing). It is an electrically operated chain gun, a weapon that uses external power instead of recoil to load its rounds. Part of the Area Weapon System on the AH-64A Apache attack helicopter, the M320 is mounted in the lower section of the chin gun turret. It uses a three-horsepower electric motor to load 30mm linkless ammunition at a rate of 625 ± 25 shots per minute. The gun has a positive cook-off safety (open bolt clearing) and double ram prevention. | Reorder the information for better clarity. | wiki |
Some historians, notably Peter J. Bowler, have suggested the possibility that in the paper he mailed to Darwin, Wallace did not discuss selection of individual variations but group selection. Against this, Malcolm Kottler showed that Wallace was indeed discussing individual variations. Others have noted that another difference was that Wallace appeared to have envisioned natural selection as a kind of feedback mechanism keeping species and varieties adapted to their environment (now called 'stabilizing ", as opposed to' directional 'selection). The cybernetician and anthropologist Gregory Bateson observed in the 1970s that, although writing it only as an example, Wallace had" probably said the most powerful thing that'd been said in the 19th Century ". Bateson revisited the topic in his 1979 book Mind and Nature: A Necessary Unity, and other scholars have continued to explore the connection between natural selection and systems theory. Warning coloration was one of a number of contributions by Wallace in the area of the evolution of animal coloration and in particular protective coloration. | The historian of science Peter J. Bowler has suggested that in the paper he mailed to Darwin, Wallace might have been discussing group selection. Against this, Malcolm Kottler showed that Wallace was indeed discussing individual variation and selection. Others have noted that Wallace appeared to have envisioned natural selection as a kind of feedback mechanism that kept species and varieties adapted to their environment (now called 'stabilizing ", as opposed to' directional 'selection). Warning coloration was one of Wallace's contributions to the evolutionary biology of animal coloration. | Copyedit for UK English and to cut back on the dense undergrowrth of POV assertions and what looks very like OR | wiki |
Pixelization has often been used as a means of allowing the posting of pornographic or illegal images on public message / imageboards. This form of pixelization is created using specific algorithms which can be undone easily by someone wishing to see the original contents of the image. This use of pixelization is popular on 4chan and 2chan type imageboards and is often called simply "GMasking", after the most common application used to perform the task. | Pixelization is used to post pornographic or illegal images on public messageboards and imageboards. This form of pixelization is created using specific algorithms which can be undone to reveal the original image. This practice is used on boards such as 4chan and 2chan, and is often called "GMasking", after an application commonly used to perform the task. | Make more consise. | wiki |
Sweet pimiento peppers are also the familiar red stuffing found in prepared Spanish green olives. The pimiento was originally hand cut into small pieces and hand stuffed in olives to complement the strong flavor of the olive; however, this method was very time intensive. In the industrial era, the cut pimiento was shot via hydraulic pump through the olive, getting rid of the pit in the process. For ease of production, pimientos are often puréed and formed with the help of a natural gum (such as sodium alginate or guar gum) into strips. This allows the olive stuffing to be completed by a machine, lowering the cost of production. | "Sweet" (i.e., neither sour nor savory) pimiento peppers are also the familiar red stuffing found in prepared Spanish green olives. Originally, the pimiento was cut into tiny pieces, then hand-stuffed into the olives as a counterpoint to the strong flavor of the olive itself. However, this method was very costly and time-intensive. In the industrial era, the cut pimiento was shot (via hydraulic pump) into one end of the olive, simultaneously inserting the pimento in the center while ejecting the pit. More recently, for ease of production, pimientos are often puréed then formed into tiny strips, with the help of a natural gum (such as sodium alginate or guar gum). This allows olive stuffing to be mechanized, speeding the process and lowering production costs. | Re-write for clarity, flow, and style. | wiki |
Above the lake at the entrance the middle galley articulates with the main gallery after a ledge. Progress along the gallery stops under a pond of siphoned water called the Metro Needle. In some years, given four or five dry months, the sump at the end of the right branch of the Metro Needle drains, allowing access upstream. | Above the lake, at the entrance, the middle galley joins the main gallery via a ledge. Progress along this passage, called l'Aiguille de Métro, is normally stopped by a sump, where the passage disappears underwater. In some years, given four or five dry months, the sump at the end of the right-hand branch of the l'Aiguille de Métro drains, allowing access to further passages upstream. | Substitute "Metro Needle" with "Aiguille de Métro." | wiki |
In 1987 he was back in Australia and was under contract as a personality for Network Ten. Don hosted the program You've Got to Be Joking, which was a practical joke comedy show. He also hosted a short-lived comedy talk show, Talkin 'To Kids with Don Lane. Don was also the host of the 1987 presentation of the TV Week Logie Awards. In 1988, he hosted his own late night talk show for the network entitled Late Night Australia, later changed to Late Night Oz. | In 1987, he was back in Australia working with Network Ten where he hosted two short-lived comedy shows -You've Got to Be Joking which featured practical jokes and Talkin' To Kids with Don Lane. He also hosted the 1987 TV Week Logie Awards. The following year, Lane fronted his talk show for Ten entitled Late Night Australia, which eventually changed to Late Night Oz. | Cosmetic edit for grammar usage, redundancy, and use the surname. | wiki |
A petroleum seep is a place where natural liquid or gaseous hydrocarbons escape to the earth's surface under low pressure or flow. Seeps generally occur above either terrestrial or offshore petroleum accumulation structures. The hydrocarbons may escape through fractures and fissures in the rock, between geological layers, or directly from an outcrop of oil-bearing rock. | A petroleum seep is a place where natural liquid or gaseous hydrocarbons escape to the earth's atmosphere and surface, normally under low pressure or flow. The hydrocarbons may escape along geological layers, or across them through fractures and fissures in the rock, or directly from an outcrop of oil-bearing rock. | Remove references to industrial causes of seeps | wiki |
He is socio-founder and president of Casaleggio Associati srl, a computer company and publishing that deals with advising on network strategies and by Beppe Grillo's blog. He is also co-founder, along with the same Grillo, the Five Star Movement, of which he is sometimes called "guru". In 2004 he founded Casaleggio Associates LTD and since 2005 has been editor of the blog of Beppe Grillo, of which he was also the editor for some of his books. He has also been editor of the blog of Antonio Di Pietro until 2010 and of the site of the publisher Chiarelettere. The company carries out research studies on e-commerce in Italy presented at a conference held in Milan every spring. | He is a founding partner and president of Casaleggio Associati srl, a computer and publishing company that advises on network strategies and Beppe Grillo's blog. He is also co-founder, along with the same Grillo, of the Five Star Movement, of which he is sometimes called "guru." Casaleggio began his career working at Olivetti Spa, then held, towards the end of the nineties, the role of CEO at Webegg Spa, a "multidisciplinary team for consulting companies and public administration networks, whose objective is positioning the companies in the network." In 2004 he founded Casaleggio Associates LTD and since 2005 has been editor of Beppe Grillo's blog, of whom he was also the editor for some of his books. He has also been editor of the blog of Antonio Di Pietro until 2010 and of the website of the publisher Chiarelettere. The company carries out research on e-commerce in Italy which is presented at a conference held in Milan every spring. | Remove grammatical errors and add more information. | wiki |
She won the silver medal at the 2005 Junior World Championships in the 63 kg category, and again at the 2006 Junior World Championships in the 69 kg category. Slivenko participated in the women's -69 kg class at the 2006 World Weightlifting Championships and won the gold medal, with a World Record snatch of 123 kg, and clean and jerking an additional 140 kg for a total of 263 kg. At the 2007 World Weightlifting Championships she won the gold medal again in the -69 kg class, with a World Record total of 276 kg. She won the silver medal in the 69 kg category at the 2008 Summer Olympics, with a total of 255 kg. | She won the silver medal at the 2005 Junior World Championships in the 63 & nbsp; kg category, and again at the 2006 Junior World Championships in the 69 & nbsp; kg category. At the 2007 World Weightlifting Championships she won the gold medal again in the 69 & nbsp; kg class, with a World Record total of 276 & nbsp; kg. She won the silver medal in the 69 & nbsp; kg category at the 2008 Summer Olympics, with a total of 255 & nbsp; kg. | Use for SI units (20) | wiki |
Hollins also is a great high jumper, clearing 6'10 "at the Pac 10 championships. As a true freshman last spring, Hollins in the high jump placed ninth (tie, 6-8) at the NCAA Regionals and sixth (6-10.25) at the Pac-10. He had personal-bests in all three jumps – 7-0.25 (high jump), 22-3 (long jump) and 48-7.50 (triple jump). | Hollins was also an accomplished high jumper, clearing 6'10 "at the Pac 10 championships. In 2003, Hollins placed ninth in the high jump at the NCAA Regionals and sixth at the Pac-10 Championships. | Rewrite and shorten the text. | wiki |
The incubation period for SARS-CoV is from 2–10 days, sometimes lasting up to 13 days, with the mean being 5 days. This means that it can take between 2–10 days for the disease to manifest itself, once you have been exposed to the Coronavirus. The disease progresses in the following way. First, you are exposed to the virus, and somewhere between 2–10 days you contract it. Next, the IgM antibody titrates to the SARS-CoV, then peaks during the acute or early convalescent phase (week 3) and declines by week 12. | The incubation period for SARS-CoV is from 2–10 days, sometimes lasting up to 13 days, with a mean of 5 days. So symptoms usually develop between 2–10 days following infection by the virus. As part of the immune response, the IgM antibody to the SARS-CoV is produced. This peaks during the acute or early convalescent phase (week 3) and declines by week 12. | Remove the word "you" from the text. | wiki |
Because of the rotation of the earth in relationship to ballistics, the bullet does not fly straight although it may seem like it from the shooter's perspective. The Coriolis effect changes the trajectory of the bullet slightly to give the path of the projectile a more arched shape. This situation only occurs at extremely long distances and therefore, is used to calculate a perfect shot by today's trained snipers. | Because of the rotation of the earth, a bullet does not fly straight from the barrel to a target. The Coriolis effect minutely changes the trajectory of a bullet, curving the path of the projectile. This effect only affects accuracy at extremely long distances and is therefore accounted for by accurate long-distance shooters, such as snipers or contestants in long-distance shooting competitions. | Make sure to rewrite for clarity concerning the Coriolis effect. | wiki |
Furthermore, a particular title may not be confined to just the beginning or the end of the name, but may be splitted across the name as will be demonstrated. Another point about the titles is that the King has the power to invest anybody to any title, regardless of the rule. However, such promotion is personal and the children of the person will not benefit from it. This type of usage is less formal than the next. | A particular title may not be confined to just the beginning or the end of the name but may be split across the name as will be demonstrated. Another point of note about the titles is that the King has the power to bestow any title on anybody, regardless of the rule. However, such promotion is personal and the children of the person will not normally benefit from it (see, for example, Phra Worawong Ther Phra Ong Chao). There are two titles that can be used for a king (depending on coronation status). Phrabat Somdej Phra Chao Yu Hua (พระบาทสมเด็จ พระเจ้า อยู่หัว) is the normal title used by the kings of Thailand (Siam) after coronation. This type of usage is less formal than the next possibility. | Rewrite and add examples to the text. | wiki |
In 2001, Clif Bar switched to organic ingredients, eliminated shrink-wrap, thereby saving 90,000 pounds of plastic and $ 400,000 annually, and invested in wind energy to offset fossil fuel usage. Clif Bar has also instituted a number of policies intended to make a more green-friendly business. In 2006, they announced their "Cool Commute" program, which gives employees $ 6,500 (taxed) to switch to bio-diesel or high-mileage hybrid cars to reduce their fuel consumption. | Clif Bar has instituted policies intended to make a more green-friendly business. In 2001, the company switched to organic ingredients, eliminated shrink-wrap, thereby saving 90,000 pounds of plastic and $ 400,000 annually, and invested in wind energy to offset fossil fuel usage. In 2006, Clif Bar gave employees $ 6,500 (taxed) to switch to bio-diesel or high-mileage hybrid cars to reduce fuel consumption. | Rearrange some sentences. | wiki |
They are designed so that anyone can play the Thai traditional games (Whether rich or poor) due to most traditional Thai games utilizing raw natural materials. For example: Sand, mud balls, khan kluay (The stem of the banana tree). This is what makes Thai traditional games easy to play. | They are designed to allow players from a range of socioeconomic statuses, as most traditional Thai games utilized raw natural materials. For example, sand, mud balls, khan kluay (The stem of the banana tree) were components of games. This use of raw, widely available materials makes Thai traditional games easy to play. | Clean up the provided text. | wiki |
Once the drugs reached Tamaulipas, they were smuggled into the U.S. for further distribution. On 12 June 1989, the Federal Judicial Police (PJF) arrested two of García Mena's associates in Apodaca, with 2.5 tons of marijuana. In their confession, the two men stated that they were hired in Oaxaca by Octavio Leal Moncada, one of García Mena's business partners, to move the drugs to one of his ranches in Hidalgo. Both men identified Leal Moncada and García Mena as the owners of the marijuana. The PJF arrested García Mena on 14 June 1989 with several of his henchmen. He was first imprisoned at Reclusorio Sur, a penitentiary in Mexico City, but was later transferred to Topo Chico in Monterrey. Leal Moncada received a 26-year sentence but García Mena was not convicted. García Mena's defense argued that he was not guilty because the drugs that were linked to him by the prosecution were not in his possession at the moment of his arrest. A court approved the defense's motion, but the Attorney General's Office (PGR) appealed the decision and issued an arrest warrant against García Mena in 1990. The lead prosecutor heading the case against García Mena was Alejandro Garza Delgado. On 26 July 1990, judge Rodolfo Pasarin de Luna sentence Leal Moncada to 26 years in prison, and gave minor sentences to three detainees. García Mena and the rest of the detainees, however, was acquitted of the charges that day. The judge that that the evidences against García Mena were insufficient and ordered his release. Leal Moncada and the rest of the detainees were also later absolved and released from prison. García Mena returned to his native Tamaulipas and established residence in Guardados de Abajo, a rural community in Camargo, where he lived in a mansion for twelve years. Once released, authorities issued another arrest warrant against him in 1990. | When the drugs reached Tamaulipas, they were smuggled into the U.S. for further distribution. In their confessions, the men said that they were hired in Oaxaca by Octavio Leal Moncada (one of García Mena's business partners) to move the drugs to one of his ranches in Hidalgo. They identified Leal Moncada and García Mena as owners of the marijuana, and the PJF arrested García Mena and several of his henchmen on 14 June 1989. First imprisoned at Reclusorio Sur (a Mexico City penitentiary), he was later transferred to Topo Chico in Monterrey. The lead prosecutor of the case against García Mena was Alejandro Garza Delgado. His defense argued that he was not guilty because the drugs linked to him by the prosecution were not in his possession at the time of his arrest. Although Judge Rodolfo Pasarin de Luna sentenced Leal Moncada to 26 years and gave minor sentences to three detainees on 26 July 1990, he said that the evidence against García Mena was insufficient and ordered his release. The Attorney General's Office (PGR) appealed the verdict and issued an arrest warrant for him later that year. Leal Moncada and the other detainees were also later acquitted and released from prison. García Mena returned to his native Tamaulipas and settled in Guardados de Abajo, a rural community in Camargo, where he lived in a mansion for twelve years. | Copyedit and remove unnecessary information. | wiki |
In Bengal, Dussehra is celebrated as Durga Puja. Deities of the goddess Durga are worshipped for five days, and on the fifth day (Vijaya Dashami) immersed in a river or pond. This is referred as Durga Bisarjan / Bhashaan. In Jharkhand, Bengal, Assam and Odisha, the goddess Kali, an appellation of Durga, is also worshipped as a symbol of Shakti (Power). | In Bengal, representations of Durga are worshipped for five days and immersed in a river or pond on Vijayadashami (the fifth day). This is known as Durga Bisarjan or Bhashaan. In Jharkhand, Bengal, Assam and Odisha, Kali (an aspect of Durga) is worshipped as a symbol of shakti. | Shorten the text length. | wiki |
Raymond Anthony Browne (born 23 January 1957 in Athlone) is the Bishop of Kerry. He completed his training for the priesthood at St Patrick's College, Maynooth and the Pontifical Irish College in Rome. He attended primary school in Athlone, Co Westmeath and went on to attend secondary school at Summerhill College, Sligo from 1969 until 1974. He attended the seminary for Diocese of Elphin from 1974 to 1982. | Raymond Anthony Browne (b / 23 January 1957) is the Bishop of Kerry. A native of Athlone, Browne attended primary school there and proceeded to Summerhill College, Sligo from 1969 until 1974. He began his study for the priesthood at St Patrick's College, Maynooth for Diocese of Elphin from 1974 to 1982. He undertook further study at the Pontifical Irish College in Rome, earning a Licentiate in Canon Law in 1983. | Retell the events chronologically. | wiki |
Paralleling the tracks and the Southern Tier Expressway once again, NY & nbsp; 17C forks away from the railroad tracks, becoming a divided highway. Now known as the George F. Highway, NY & nbsp; 17C eastbound enters an interchange with NY & nbsp; 17 (exit & nbsp; 69). Paralleling NY & nbsp; 17 in both directions, NY & nbsp; 17C runs north of the Susquehanna River, before entering the hamlet of Westover. In Westover, the two directions of NY & nbsp; 17C come back together, with the route becoming a two-lane commercial street by the name of Main Street. | Paralleling the tracks and the Southern Tier Expressway once again, NY & nbsp; 17C forks away from the railroad tracks, becoming a divided highway split into one-way sections. Each section runs along opposite sides of the freeway; as such, each serves as a frontage road for exit & nbsp; 69 of the expressway. While in this configuration, NY & nbsp; 17C is known as the George F. Highway. The two directions of NY & nbsp; 17C come back together in the hamlet of Westover, located about to the east on the north bank of the Susquehanna River. In Westover, the route becomes a two-lane commercial street named Main Street. | Rewrite to make the text more readable. | wiki |
A unique aircraft has been based there for quite sometime (since at least 2006). It's a Aviatian Traders ATL-98 Carvair, tailnumber N89FA (aka "Miss 1944"). This aircraft, besides being one of only 22 uniquely modified DC-4 airframes, is also the same aircraft seen in the famous James Bond Goldfinger movie. | Since at least 2006, the unique Aviatian Traders ATL-98 Carvair, tailnumber N89FA (aka "Miss 1944") has been based at Gainesville. This aircraft is one of only 22 uniquely modified DC-4 airframes and was seen in the James Bond movie, Goldfinger. | Rephrase the text concerning unique aircraft in Gainesville. | wiki |
The fact that the series was long attributed to Raphael testifies to Coxcie's excellence as a draughtsman. Another series is The loves of Jupiter. The artist drew inspiration for both series from stories and works of art from Antiquity, but also from works treating the same subject by Raphael and Michelangelo. | The series was attributed for a long time to Raphael, which testifies to Coxcie's excellence as a draughtsman. Another series of prints designed by Coxcie is "The Loves of Jupiter." He based his designs for both series on stories and art works from Antiquity, as well as on works treating the same subjects by Raphael and Michelangelo. | Copy edit paragraph for SPaG, et al. | wiki |
In this book he looks at problems that the world faces, and asks how to solve those problems, trying to fully understand all the characteristics of those problems and how they affect and influence us as individuals and society. I believe that this book could be read as a classroom textbook teaching the ways of society and how we live our lives. There is also a fundamental psychological aspect to these pages of thoughts; as understanding human behavior and all its diversity is a common theme throughout. It is also an awareness of the potential harmfulness of the human condition. This book describes a philosophical vision of a new global society and how to create peace and prosperity all over the world. | In this book he looks at problems that we face in the world, and asks how to solve those problems, trying to fully understand all the characteristics of those problems and how they affect and influence us as individuals and society. This book describes his philosophical vision of a new global society and how to create peace and prosperity all over the world. | Remove everything between the first and last sentence. | wiki |
Unforgiven was a professional wrestling pay-per-view (PPV) event produced by World Wrestling Entertainment (WWE). It took place on September 21, 2003, at Giant Center in Hershey, Pennsylvania. It was the sixth annual Unforgiven event and featured wrestlers from the Raw brand division. | The "2003 Unforgiven" was the sixth annual "Unforgiven" professional wrestling pay-per-view (PPV) event produced by World Wrestling Entertainment (WWE). It was held exclusively for wrestlers from the promotion's "Raw" brand division. The event took place on September 21, 2003, at Giant Center in Hershey, Pennsylvania. | Rewrite lead for consistency with other Unforgiven articles | wiki |
Pinto had a very short, but noise making, career in women's boxing. The shortness of her career may have been because she began boxing at the age of forty, and she had no previous amateur boxing experience before that. Nevertheless, she still went on to fight some of female boxing's top fighters and contenders. Her very first fight, on April 7, 2001, was against a well known boxer: that night, she was defeated by a four round decision by Yvonne Caples, in Rochester, Washington. On September 25 of that year, she beat Brandy Leon by a four round unanimous decision, for her first victory, at Phoenix, Arizona. On March 30, 2002, Pinto faced a women's boxing world champion for the first time. In only her third bout, she lost to Para Draine by a four round decision in Tacoma, Washington. Pinto then lost to Marilyn Salcido, then considered a future women's boxing star, by a four round decision, in Laughlin, Nevada, on April 21. On June 27, she faced Nicole Salazar, winning a four round decision over Salazar, who was making her professional boxing debut that night, in Albuquerque, New Mexico. Pinto retired from boxing after a four round draw (tie) in Cornwall, Ontario against Heather Stevens. In what can perhaps be considered an irony, her last career fight was also her first fight in her home country. Despite her age and the number of well known boxers she faced, Pinto never lost a fight by knockout. Pinto retired from boxing with 2 wins, 3 losses and 1 draw, without any knockout wins. | Pinto fought some of female boxing's top fighters and contenders in her short career. She began boxing at the age of 40 with no previous amateur experience. Her first fight was on April 7, 2001, against Yvonne Caples in Rochester, Washington. She was defeated in a four-round decision. In Phoenix, Arizona, on September 25, 2001, she beat Brandy Leon in a four-round unanimous decision for her first victory. On March 30, 2002, in only her third bout, Pinto faced a women's boxing world champion. She lost to Para Draine by a four-round decision in Tacoma, Washington. Pinto then lost to Marilyn Salcido in a four-round decision in Laughlin, Nevada, on April 21. In Albuquerque, New Mexico, on June 27, she won a four-round decision against Nicole Salazar, who was making her professional boxing debut that night. Pinto retired from boxing after a four-round draw in Cornwall, Ontario, against Heather Stevens. Her last career fight was her first fight in her home country. Pinto retired from boxing with two wins, three losses, and one draw, without any knockout wins or losses. | Correct errors and improve the language in the section. | wiki |
If an animal is drowsy or bored, it may not be as alert as it should be-to spring into action. Therefore, the "contagious" yawn could be an instinctual reaction to a signal from one member of the group reminding the others to stay alert. Nervousness has also been suggested as a possible reason. Nervousness often indicates the perception of an impending need for action. Anecdotal evidence suggests that yawning helps increase the state of alertness of a person. Paratroopers have been noted to yawn in the moments before they exit the aircraft. | If an animal is drowsy or bored, it will be less alert than when when fully awake and less prepared to spring into action. "Contagious" yawning could be an instinctual signal between group members to stay alert. Nervousness, which often indicates the perception of an impending need for action, has also been suggested as a cause. Anecdotal evidence suggests that yawning helps increase a person's alertness. Paratroopers have been noted to yawn during the moments before they exit their aircraft and athletes often yawn just before intense exertions. | Clean up the syntax of this passage and edit out basic errors | wiki |
Born in Granger, Utah, he was ordained a member of the church's Quorum of the Twelve Apostles on April 10, 1958 to replace Adam S. Bennion, who had died the previous February. He was called as a third Counselor to President David O. McKay June 22, 1961. He was called as Second Counselor to the same October 12, 1961 when the First Counselor, J. Reuben Clark died. He was ordained First Counselor to the same in 1963 when the First Counselor Henry D. Moyle died. After President David O. McKay died on January 8, 1970, he returned to the Quorum of the Twelve, where he remained until his death. After his death, David B. Haight was called to the Quorum of the Twelve. | Born in Granger, Utah, he was ordained an Apostle and became a member of the Quorum of the Twelve Apostles on April 10, 1958, to replace Adam S. Bennion, who had died the previous February. He was called as a member of the First Presidency (to be a third Counselor to President David O. McKay) on June 22, 1961. He was called as Second Counselor in the First Presidency on October 12, 1961, when the first counselor, J. Reuben Clark died. He was called to be First Counselor in the First Presidency in 1963 when the first counselor Henry D. Moyle died. After President David O. McKay died on January 8, 1970, he was not called by new Church President Joseph Fielding Smith to be a member of the First Presidency. This was considered by some to be a slight since never before in the twentieth century had a new president of the Church failed to call a surviving member of the previous First Presidency as a counselor. Rather, Brown returned as a member of the Quorum of the Twelve Apostles, where he remained until his death. After Brown's death, David B. Haight was called to fill the vacancy in the Quorum of the Twelve. | Add information about not being called to the First Presidency after President McKay died and correct grammatical errors. | wiki |
Bahubali is a much revered figure among Jains. He is said to have meditated motionless for a whole year in kayotsarga (standing) posture because of which climbers grew around his legs. After one year of meditation, Bahubali attained Kevala Jnana (omniscience) and became an omniscient being. According to Jain texts, Bahubali's soul attained moksha (liberation from the cycle of births and deaths) at Mount Kailash. He is revered as a Siddha (liberated soul) by the Jains. | He is said to have meditated motionless for a year in a standing posture (kayotsarga) and that during this time, climbing plants grew around his legs. After his year of meditation, Bahubali attained omniscience (Kevala Jnana) (omniscience). According to Jain texts, Bahubali's soul was liberated from the cycle of births and deaths (moksha) at Mount Kailash. He is revered as a liberated soul (Siddha) by the Jains. | Copyedit to shorten and clarify the text. | wiki |
The headless Eva Mark.09 becomes an "Adams Vessel" and tries to retake the Wunder for SEELE, while Rei sits helpless in the entry plug. Asuka manages to destroy the Mark.09 and release the entry plug. Kaworu sacrifices himself to halt the Impact, forcing Shinji to watch as the collar causes his head to explode. | The headless Eva Mark.09 becomes an "Adams Vessel" and tries to retake the Wunder for SEELE while Rei sits helpless in the entry plug. Asuka destroys Mark.09 and releases the entry plug. Shinji watches Kaworu who sacrifices himself to halt the Impact, forcing Shinji to watch as the collar causes his head to explode. | Trimming of the text. | wiki |
In the past, the inner and outer Terai were regions of malaria-infested marshes and forests, rich in animal and insect life. The Terai formed a formidable barrier between Nepal and potential invaders from India. The indigenous Tharu, Danuwar and others had a degree of inherited resistance to malaria and populated these areas. Inner Terai valleys were historic strongholds of Tharu people and others who had evolved genetic, behavioral and architectural means to resist virulent strains of malaria transmitted by anopheline mosquitos while others found it difficult to survive the hot spring and rainy summer months when mosquitos were most active. Beginning in the 1950s, malaria suppression through DDT began and opened the Inner Terai to settlement by capitalists from India and the more developed parts of Nepal who introduced modern agricultural methods. | In the past, the inner and outer Terai was a formidable barrier between Nepal and potential invaders from India because marshes and forests were infested by anopheline mosquitos that transmitted virulent strains of malaria, especially during the hot spring and rainy summer monsoon. The Inner Terai is also rich in animal life, including rhinoceros, tigers, and reptiles, including gharial and mugger crocodiles. Inner Terai valleys were historic strongholds of Tharu, Danuwar, and other peoples who had evolved genetic, behavioral, and architectural means to resist malaria. Beginning in the 1950s, malaria suppression programs using DDT opened the Inner Terai to settlement by investors from India and the more developed parts of Nepal who introduced modern agricultural methods. | Rephrase some sentences and add information. | wiki |
It was opened to the public at 7:00 p.m. in a separate ceremony with a music performance by the Navy Band and the Sea Chanters Chorus. Law enforcement and protection responsibilities of the memorial are sanctioned to United States Pentagon Police by the Secretary of Defense. The Pentagon Memorial hours of operation are 7 days a week, throughout the year, the National Park Service anticipates the memorial will attract in excess of 2 million visitors per year. | It was opened to the public at 7 p.m. in a separate ceremony with a music performance by the Navy Band and the Sea Chanters Chorus. The memorial is open seven days a week year-round. The National Park Service anticipates the memorial will attract more than 2 million visitors per year. The memorial is protected by the United States Pentagon Police. | Copy edit for brevity, typos, and punctuation where needed. | wiki |
From there the Registered Nurse Ordinance came into play in 1915. This established a legal substantiation to registered nurses all over Japan. A new law geared towards nurses was created during World War II. This law was titled the Public Health Nurse, Midwife and Nurse Law and it was established in 1948. | The Registered Nurse Ordinance was passed in 1915 which established a legal substantiation to registered nurses all over Japan. During World War II the Public Health Nurse, Midwife and Nurse Law was created and re-affirmed in 1948. | Edit the passage to eliminate basic mistakes | wiki |
Many clinics also publish brochures, booklets, pamphlets and fact sheets for the benefit of the general public. Specialty clinics provide low-income individuals with assistance in a specific area of law not normally covered by the general community legal clinics. Specialty clinics will typically provide summary legal advice and free representation to clients who meet their eligibility guidelines. Specialty clinics also provide legal assistance to, and consult with, private bar lawyers, MPPs and community agencies. Student Legal Aid Services Societies (SLASS) clinics are designed to provide law students with practical legal training and experience. Staffed by law students under the supervision of lawyers, SLASS clinics provide legal advice and representation on matters such as criminal law, tenant issues, employee's rights and small claims court. In partnership with the legal profession, the provincial government passed the Law Society Amendment Act, 1951. The plan outlined the creation of a small fund to cover its operation, however lawyers who provided assistance did so entirely pro-bono and without any remuneration for their services. In 1967, modeled on similar doctrines in England and Scotland, the Legal Aid Act was passed. Several major changes from the Law Society Amendment Act saw the division of responsibility between the province and the Law Society of Upper Canada (LSUC) in the funding and management of legal assistance. The act also initiated the development of the certificate and duty counsel program and addressed what types of offences would be covered, with criminal offences that faced a serious risk of incarceration and family matters in the Superior Court both provided for. By the early 1970’s many lawyers felt that the model of legal assistance being delivered did not provide clients with sufficient representation. | Many clinics publish brochures, booklets, pamphlets and fact sheets for the benefit of the general public and consult with, private bar lawyers, MPPs and community agencies. Six Student Legal Aid Services Societies (SLASS) legal clinics, funded by Legal Aid Ontario, operate out of the six Ontario law schools. Under the supervision of lawyers, SLASS clinics provide law students with practical legal training and experience offering legal advice and representation on matters such as criminal law, tenant issues, employee's rights and small claims court. The organization was criticized in a 2008 report by the Ontario Ombudsman for a mishandling of funds in the legal defence of Richard Wills. The report, A Test of Wills explains: "Legal Aid Ontario had estimated that Mr. Wills’ defence would cost $ 50,000. When it was done, it in fact cost more than a million dollars ". Mr. Wills, considered to be a person of means to fund his own defence, was charged with the murder of his long time lover. In the months preceding his trial he had transferred his assets into his wife's name. In 1951, in partnership with the legal profession, the provincial government passed the Law Society Amendment Act, 1951, creating the first formalized pro-bono program for lawyers to assist low-income Ontarians access justice. These changes also included dividing responsibility of the programs funding and management between the province and the Law Society of Upper Canada (LSUC), the development of the certificate and duty counsel programs and the establishment of threshold for eligibility. While a significant improvement from the Law Society Amendment Act, 1951, many lawyers felt that the model being used to deliver legal assistance did not provide clients with sufficient representation. | Make this more concise and include an example of criticism. | wiki |
He reportedly possessed an excellent memory which enabled him to memorise poems in his youth, and was himself a poet. Dedicating himself to the study of hadith and maghazi narrations, he studied under several Medinese traditionists, including Said ibn al-Musayyib and Urwah ibn Zubayr. According to the ninth-century Shi'ite historian Ya'qubi, a teenage Zuhri was taken to Abd al-Malik ibn Marwan while visiting Damascus in. The caliph desired to prevent the Syrians from performing the Hajj in Mecca, then controlled by the Umayyads' Zubayrid rivals. | He was a poet in his youth, and reportedly possessed an excellent memory which aided his memorization of poetry. Dedicating himself to the study of hadith and maghazi narrations in his twenties, he studied under several Medinese traditionists, including Said ibn al-Musayyib and Urwah ibn Zubayr. Using the traditions that were transmitted to him, Zuhri compiled a maghazi work of which fragments can be found in the writings of his students Ibn Ishaq and Ma'mar ibn Rashid. Using collective asanid, he may have been the first to combine multiple maghazi reports to produce a single, coherent narrative - a technique later used by Ibn Ishaq and Al-Waqidi. The caliph sought to prevent the Syrians from performing the Hajj in Mecca, which was controlled by his Zubayrid rivals. | Expand the lead. | wiki |
Cage is blamed for the apparent murder of Iron Fist and flees. The following passage refers to events in the 1992–1993 series Cage, written by Marcus McLaurin. A fugitive again, Cage breaks contact with his New York friends and relocates to Chicago; but, with Hogarth's help, he is cleared of criminal charges when the real Iron Fist turns up alive. | Cage is charged with the murder of Iron Fist and flees. A fugitive again, Cage breaks contact with his New York friends and relocates to Chicago, but, with Hogarth's help, he is cleared of criminal charges when Iron Fist turns up alive. | Do not state what the passage refers to. | wiki |
He was respected in the film industry. He would intervene and negotiate disputes between actors and directors / producers. One such dispute occurred when Meenakshi Seshadri was dropping out in between the movie Damini by Raj Kumar Santoshi reason behind was Meenakshi rejected his proposal, Amjad Khan sort out the matter and forced Raj Santoshi to taken back his harsh decision. He solve another dispute occurred when Dimple Kapadia agreed to play a mother role and later backed out. The entire film producers' community tried to boycott her. Khan intervened on behalf of the Actors Guild. | He was respected in the film industry, and would intervene and negotiate disputes between actors and directors / producers. One such dispute occurred when Meenakshi Seshadri was forced to drop out of the movie Damini by Raj Kumar Santoshi because she rejected his proposal. Amjad Khan sorted out the matter and made Raj Santoshi take back his harsh decision. | Clean-up throughout for grammar, punctuation, and word choice. | wiki |
Around this time, former Atlantic recording artist Maila Misajon suggested that Bright and Williams check out a group she was familiar with that often played on Printers Alley. They did just that, and were quite impressed with what they heard. After taking a meeting with the band, Bright and Williams decided to offer a publishing / production deal to the currently unnamed group. They quickly went into the recording to record three songs and chose the name ‘’ Rascal Flatts ’’. | Around this time, former Atlantic recording artist Maila Misajon suggested that Bright and Williams check out a group she knew that often played on Printers Alley. They did check the group out and were quite impressed. After taking a meeting with the currently unnamed band, Bright and Williams decided to offer them a publishing/production deal. They quickly went into the studio to record three songs and chose the name Rascal Flatts. A meeting was set-up with Rascal Flatts and Doug Howard at Lyric Street Records, and a deal was secured shortly thereafter. | Clean up the writing to include proper punctuation and capitalizations throughout. Copyedit to combine sentences to favor brevity where needed. | wiki |
Marie elaborates, suggesting that the British vanguard out-paced the rest of the Brigade group (that had its flanks well protected) as well as advancing with poor information and with little intelligence gathered. Milner also suggests that had the battalion's officers and NCOs been with the men rather than moving to attend the meeting on the ridge, the initial attack could have been fought off. Miles Dempsey had hoped Brigadier Hinde would have shown more tactical flair and imagination to win the day and secure the town. John Buckley believes that while Wittmann showed great audacity in his attack, the roots of the British defeat were broader. | Marie elaborates, suggesting that the British vanguard out-paced the rest of the Brigade group, whose flanks were in fact well protected, and advanced with poor information and little prior intelligence gathering. Christopher Milner MC of the Rifle Brigade suggests that information was not gleaned from the town's inhabitants when it should have been and that had the battalion’s scout platoon been present, the outcome of the initial battle may have been very different. Milner also suggests that the initial attack could have been fought off if the battalion's officers and NCOs had been with their men rather than attending the meeting on the ridge. Taking a wider view, John Buckley believes that while Wittmann showed great audacity in his attack, the roots of the British defeat were broader. | Copyedit the passage and rearrange the order of information | wiki |
He gained 51 caps for the Wales national rugby union team and 3 for the British Lions. He is now coach of Cardiff Blues. Born in Aberdare in 1967 Young went on to play Rugby Union at club level for Swansea and Cardiff and for the Leeds and Salford clubs in the Rugby League code. Young's 51 caps are a Welsh record for props and he is the only man to have toured with the British Lions in three separate decades: 1989, 1997 and 2001. | Born in Aberdare in 1967, Young played Rugby Union at club level for Swansea and Cardiff. Young also played Rugby League for Leeds and Salford. Young gained 51 caps for the Wales national rugby union team, a record number for a prop, and 3 caps for the British Lions. He is currently the head coach of the Cardiff Blues regional side. He is the only man to have toured with the British Lions in three separate decades: 1989, 1997, and 2001. | Tidy up the opening paragraphs for readability | wiki |
The Downeaster carried over 540,000 passengers in FY2012 and is expected to add over 36,000 riders annually with its expansion to Freeport and Brunswick. The Downeaster runs northeast from Boston's North Station through southeastern New Hampshire into southern Maine, terminating in Brunswick. The Downeaster uses the MBTA's Lowell Line from North Station to Wilmington, the Wildcat Branch to Wilmington Junction, and the Haverhill Line to the Massachusetts-New Hampshire state line. | In fiscal 2012, the Downeaster carried more than 540,000 passengers; it is expected to add another 36,000 annual riders with its expansion to Freeport and Brunswick. The Downeaster uses the MBTA's Lowell Line from Boston's North Station to Wilmington, the Wildcat Branch to Wilmington Junction, and the Haverhill Line to the Massachusetts-New Hampshire state line. | Remove jargon and replace with correct grammar and sentence structure. | wiki |
This is a LIM-launched roller coaster that is essentially the same ride as the Mr. Freeze roller coaster at Six Flags St. Louis, only in mirror image. Originally this coaster had over the shoulder restraints that were replaced with individual ratcheting lap bars in 2002. Planned for a 1997 opening, troubles with the LIM system delayed the opening until 1998. The ride uses two separate trains that are powered by 224 linear induction motors to achieve the top speed of 70 mph; additionally there is a sliding track so that one train can be running on the track while the other is in the loading position. The ride starts with the brakes releasing and the lights come on. Then the LIMs launch the train out of a 120 'tunnel which is immediately followed by an inside tophat. The third element is an over the banked left turn followed by the last element: a spike where the train is lifted to the top by LIMs. At the top the train stalls then runs the course in reverse. In June 2006, all Premier LIM rides have undergone emergency inspection and were closed. | This LIM-launched roller coaster is essentially a mirror image of the ride of the same name at Six Flags St. Louis. When it first opened, this coaster had over-the-shoulder restraints (commonly called OTSRs). These were replaced with individual ratcheting lap bars for the 2002 season. Mr. Freeze was supposed to open in 1997, but troubles with the LIM system delayed the opening until 1998. This coaster is able to use two trains (almost every other shuttle coaster can only use one, for obvious reasons) because of an innovative sliding platform in the station. One train loads and unloads on either the right or left side of the station while the other train is launched out onto the main track. When this train returns to the station, it slides to the unused side of the room and unloads as the other train slides to the middle and launches. These trains are powered by 224 linear induction motors that help them achieve a top speed of 70 mph. The ride begins when the lights in the tunnel turn on and the lights in the station dim. This element is followed by an overbanked turn to the left and a vertical spike. As the train nears the top of this spike, it loses some momentum and is gently pushed up the rest of the way by another set of LIMs. The train then stops moving altogether and runs the entire course in reverse. In June 2006, all Premier LIM rides underwent emergency inspection and were closed. | Rephrase the majority of the ride's description. | wiki |
In 1968, The Fugs had a more complex and skilled sound than on their early works such as The Fugs First Album. Bill Wolf was added to the band, a talented bassist with a good harmony voice. Ken Pine, a skilled guitarist, also joined the group. | In 1968, The Fugs' sound had developed considerably from their early works such as on "The Fugs First Album," showcasing several complex and interesting compositions. This was partly due to personnel; Bill Wolf was added to the band, a talented bassist with a good harmony voice, along with Ken Pine, a skilled guitarist. | Rewrite a couple of sentences to make them flow better. | wiki |
The management of medical and dental services is staffed by physicians, dentists and nurses who are available for diagnosis, treatment and referrals for illness and injuries. Each year Health Services offers a variety of physical assessment screens, lectures and other activities that address health related issues. To offer students the opportunity to enhance their physical well-being as well as their social lives, such sports and recreational facilities as basketball courts, oval for track and field, volleyball court, soccer field, swimming pool are available. | Medical and dental services are provided by physicians, dentists, and nurses. Health Services offers a variety of physical assessment screens, lectures, and other activities. The Civil Security Office is respnsible for campus security. It is assisted by security officers from a private security agency. This office operates year round, 24 hours a day. There are basketball courts, an oval for track and field, a volleyball court, soccer field, and a swimming pool among other facilities. | Cleanup for sounding like a publicity brochure in places and not like an encyclopedia article | wiki |
If the Basket is shot before the shot clock expires, the doubled jackpot will be awarded for that single shot, the jackpot will return to its previous value, and the ball will exit the Wabbit Hole or Jump Ball. If the player cannot shoot the Basket within the amount of time on the shot clock, the jackpot will still return to its previous value, and the ball will be released. However, players can triple the jackpot and gain additional time if they get one ball in the Wabbit Hole and another ball in the Jump Ball. | If the Basket is cleared before the shot clock expires, the doubled jackpot will be awarded, the jackpot will return to its previous value, and the ball will exit the Wabbit Hole or Jump Ball. If the player does not shoot the Basket but gets a second ball in the unoccupied Wabbit Hole or Jump Ball before the shot clock expires, the jackpot will triple, and there will be extra time on the shot clock. If the player cannot shoot the Basket in time for the doubled or tripled jackpot, the jackpot will return to its previous value, and the balls will be released from the Wabbit Hole and Jump Ball. | Add information on how to triple the Jackpot. | wiki |
After his father's death in 1711, the Duke of Burgundy succeeded him as Dauphin. In February 1712, his wife Marie-Adélaïde contracted measles and died on the 12th of that month. The Duke of Burgundy, who dearly loved his wife, and who had stayed by her side throughout the fatal illness, contracted the disease. He died six days later, on 18 February. He died at the Château de Marly aged just 29. Both of his children also became infected, and their elder surviving son, Louis, Duke of Brittany, the latest in a series of Dauphins, succumbed to it within the month. However, the younger son, the Duke of Anjou, then only two years of age, survived the disease and would later succeed as Louis XV upon the death of his great-grandfather, Louis XIV, in 1715. | Louis became Dauphin of France upon the death of his father in 1711. In February 1712, his wife contracted measles and died on the 12th of that month. The Duke of Burgundy, who dearly loved his wife and who had stayed by her side throughout the fatal illness, contracted the disease and died on 18 February, six days after her. He died at the Château de Marly at the age of 29. Both of his sons also became infected, the eldest, Louis, Duke of Brittany, the latest in a series of Dauphins, succumbed to it on 8 March. The only one to survive was the two-year old Duke of Anjou, the future King Louis XV of France. | Copyedit for clarity and readibility. | wiki |
When a hormone binds to the receptor, it results in the activation of a signal transduction pathway that typically activates gene transcription, resulting in increased expression of target proteins; non-genomic effects are more rapid, and can be synergistic with genomic effects. Hormone secretion may occur in many tissues. Endocrine glands provide the cardinal example, but specialized cells in various other organs also secrete hormones. Hormone secretion occurs in response to specific biochemical signals from a wide range of regulatory systems. Regulation of hormone synthesis of gonadal hormones, adrenocortical hormones, and thyroid hormones often depends on complex sets of direct-influence and feedback interactions involving the hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal (HPA), -gonadal (HPG), and -thyroid (HPT) axes. Upon secretion, certain hormones, including protein hormones and catecholamines, are water-soluble and are thus readily transported through the circulatory system. Other hormones, including steroid and thyroid hormones, are lipid-soluble; to achieve widespread distribution, these hormones must bond to carrier plasma glycoproteins (e.g., thyroxine-binding globulin (TBG)) to form ligand-protein complexes. | When a hormone binds to the receptor, it results in the activation of a signal transduction pathway that typically activates gene transcription, resulting in increased expression of target proteins. Hormones can also act in rapid, non-genomic pathways that can be synergistic with genomic effects. Water-soluble hormones (such as peptides and amines) generally act on the surface of target cells via second messengers. Lipid soluble hormones (such as steroids) generally pass through the plasma membranes of target cells (both cytoplasmic and nuclear) to act within their nuclei. A notable exception to this are brassinosteroids in plants, which despite being lipid soluble, still bind to their receptor at the cell surface. In vertebrates, endocrine glands are specialized organs that secrete hormones into the endocrine signaling system. Hormone secretion occurs in response to specific biochemical signals and is often subject to negative feedback regulation. For instance, high blood sugar (serum glucose concentration) promotes insulin synthesis. Insulin then acts to reduce glucose levels and maintain homeostasis, leading to reduced insulin levels. Upon secretion, water soluble hormones are readily transported through the circulatory system. Lipid-soluble hormones must bond to carrier plasma glycoproteins (e.g., thyroxine-binding globulin (TBG)) to form ligand-protein complexes. | Reorganize and reword some of the intro | wiki |
Malcolm James Mackenzie (born 1 May 1950) is a former Scottish footballer. He joined Port Vale as an amateur in November 1965, he made his debut against Newport County on 12 April 1966 at the age of 15 years 347 days. Becoming the youngest ever first team player for the club. He signed professional forms in May 1967. Despite this bright start to his career, Mackenzie failed to become a first team regular and left on a free transfer in May 1968. | Malcolm James Mackenzie (born 1 May 1950) is a Scottish former footballer who played eight games in the Football League for Port Vale as a teenager. He joined Port Vale as an amateur in November 1965, and made his debut at Vale Park against Newport County on 12 April 1966 at the age of 15 years 347 days, becoming the youngest ever first team player for the club. He played one further Fourth Division game under Jackie Mudie in 1965–66. He signed professional forms under Stanley Matthews in May 1967, and scored his first and only senior goal on 30 September, in a 4–2 home win over Workington. The 17 year old finished the 1967–68 campaign with six appearances and one goal to his name. Despite this bright start to his career, Mackenzie was released in May 1968. | Add more information about his career | wiki |
Reverse transcriptase’s (RT) goal is to produce a complementary DNA from an RNA template. A reverse transcriptase in a retrovirus transcribes their single-stranded RNA into a single-stranded DNA and constructs a complimentary strand of that DNA resulting in a double helix that is capable of integrating into host cell chromosomes1. In physiological conditions Mg2 + acts as the cofactor, but there are other divalent cations used for nucleotide catalysis such as, Ni2 + and Cu2 +. Zinc is an effective inhibitor of many enzymes including many viral polymerases. An experiment had shown that Zn2 + showed both polymerase and ribonuclease-H activity at lower concentrations than Mg2 + and that Zn2 + was an effective inhibitor of reverse transcriptase when Mg2 + was present. | Reverse transcriptases (RT) are a class of enzymes that produce a complementary DNA strand from an RNA template. In retroviruses, RT transcribes the single-stranded RNA genome into single-stranded DNA, which acts as a template for construction of a double-stranded segment of DNA; the DNA can then be integrated into the host cell chromosomes1. At physiological conditions, Mg2 + acts as the cofactor, but other divalent cations, such as Ni2 + and Cu2 +, are available for nucleotide catalysis. Zinc is an effective inhibitor of many viral polymerases, amongst other enzymes. A 2011 experiment using enzyme kinetics showed that RT possessed both polymerase and ribonuclease-H activity when Zn2 + was used as the cofactor. Although the enzyme would function at lower concentrations of Zn2 + compared to Mg2 +, the rates of catalysis were approximately 35 times slower. In addition, only a small amount of Zn2 + was needed to reduce enzyme activity, even when larger concentrations of Mg2 + were present. The authors concluded that Zn2 + was an effective inhibitor of reverse transcriptase when Mg2 + is present due to the severe decrease in catalysis rates. | Expand on the concepts presented | wiki |
Castlegate is one of eleven Quarters in Sheffield's City Centre. It is now bound by Commercial Street and part of the High Street to the south, Exchange Place to the east, the road named Castlegate to the north, Angel Street and Snig Hill to the west. Castlegate is the main thoroughfare to and from the North of Sheffield as it links Park Square to The Wicker, although it is intended that the Sheffield Northern Relief Road will take this traffic when completed, allowing Exchange Place, Castlegate and The Wicker to be downgraded. Castlegate, built along a portion of the River Don, was the old location of the slaughter houses. It also served as a back entrance to the Alexandra Opera House as well as the market quarter situated on the site of the former castle of Sheffield, hence the name of the street and quarter. | Castlegate Quarter is one of eleven quarters of Sheffield city center. It is named after Castlegate, the quarter's main thoroughfare, which in turn takes its name from the former Sheffield Castle which was historically situated in this area. The boundaries of Castlegate Quarter are formed by Commercial Street and part of the High Street to the south, Exchange Place to the east, the road named Castlegate to the north, and Angel Street and Snig Hill to the west. For much of its history, Castlegate Quarter was dominated by Castle Market, a large indoor market. Following the demolition of Castle Market in 2015, the quarter is now undergoing regeneration as of 2020. The road was built along the southern bank of the River Don and was originally the location of several slaughterhouses. It has also served as a back entrance to the Alexandra Opera House and subsequently the Castle Market. | Go more into where the quarter got its name in the beginning rather than the end. Provide less information on the traffic system. | wiki |
Of the many Categories of blends found through out the world, the most prominent use of Latakia are those of the English Pipe Tobacco variety. So much so that to be considered an English mixture, it must contain some percentage of Latakia tobacco. English pipe mixtures became so famous for the distinct flavor of latakia due to its rarity and expense. Because the British Empire had interests within Syria and the surrounding areas, the import of latakia as well as other oriental tobaccos to the British Isles were common place but not much elsewhere in western Europe and the Americas. Much like many tobacco blends, the basis is made of a combination of Virginia Tobacco or Burley Tobacco either by themselves or blended together. In modern pipe smoking, latakia can be found in many blends and is used more widely used since its establishment in Cyprus. Latakia is used in many Chocolate aromatic blends as a way to enhance the added chocolate flavors, as well as a way to reduce the burn rate of a smoking mixture. | Of the many categories of blends found through out the world, the most prominent use of Latakia are in those of the English Pipe Tobacco variety. This is so much so that to be considered an English mixture, a blend must contain some percentage of Latakia tobacco. English pipe mixtures became famous for the distinct flavor of Latakia, due to its rarity and expense. Much like many tobacco blends, the basis of English blends is made of a combination of Virginia Tobacco or Burley Tobacco either by themselves or blended together. Latakia and other Oriental tobaccos are added in small amounts to finish the mixture. Latakia is used in many chocolate-flavored aromatic blends and to reduce the burn rate of a smoking mixture. | Shorten the paragraph | wiki |
Continental Airlines is a minority owner of ExpressJet Airlines, which operates under the trade name Continental Express but is a separately managed and publicly-traded company. Cape Air, Colgan Air, CommutAir, and Gulfstream International Airlines feed Continental's flights under the Continental Connection identity, as does Chautauqua Airlines under the Continental Express identity, although Continental does not have any ownership interests in these companies. Since September 2005, Continental has been a member of the SkyTeam Alliance, in which it participates with Northwest Airlines, Delta Air Lines, Air France, Aeromexico, Alitalia and KLM. In January 2009, Continental announced that it will leave SkyTeam on October 24, 2009 and join Star Alliance the following day. | Continental is also a minority owner of ExpressJet Airlines, which operates under the trade name Continental Express but is a separately managed and publicly-traded company. Chautauqua Airlines also flies under the Continental Express identity, and Cape Air, Colgan Air, CommutAir, and Gulfstream International Airlines feed Continental's flights under the Continental Connection identity. Continental does not have any ownership interests in these companies. Continental Airlines left the SkyTeam alliance on October 24, 2009, and joined Star Alliance on October 27, 2009. Together with its subsidiaries, Continental has more than 2,423 daily departures, serving 130 domestic and 132 international destinations and has 42,210 employees as of December 2009. | Provide more details about Continental's current business. | wiki |
In 1995, Snow participated in at the Lincoln Center in New York City. In addition to Ms. Snow, the Concert featured performances by Jewel, Joel Grey, Roger Daltrey, Jackson Browne amongst others. Snow sang a very distinctive medley of "If I Only had a Brain; a Heart; the Nerve". | In 1995, Snow participated in 'at the Lincoln Center in New York City, singing a distinctive medley of "If I Only had a Brain; a Heart; the Nerve". In addition, the concert featured performances by Jewel, Joel Grey, Roger Daltrey, and Jackson Browne among others. | Rearrange information and sentences in the paragraph. | wiki |
The branch featured in the third BBC series of Great British Railway Journeys presented by Michael Portillo first broadcast in January 2012. In the programme Portillo climbed aboard a BR Class 70 train as it prepared for its journey towards Ipswich with a container train. A number of commercially produced videos featuring modern day rail operations on the branch are available. | The branch featured in an episode of Michael Portillo's third BBC Great British Railway Journeys television series, which was first broadcast in January 2012. He was seen to climb aboard a Class 70-hauled train as it prepared for its journey towards Ipswich with a container train. | Remove the last sentence. Copyedit for clarity. | wiki |
Most popular guitarists cite Moore as the performer that brought the lead guitarist to a dominant role in a rock 'n' roll band. Although some lead guitarists / vocalists had gained popularity such as Chuck Berry and blues legend BB King, Presley rarely played his own lead while performing, usually providing rhythm and leaving the lead duties to Moore. Moore was a noticeable presence in the Presley performances, strictly as a guitarist. As a result, he became an inspiration to many subsequent popular guitarists, one of the more vocal of these being Keith Richards of the Rolling Stones. Moore, being quite introverted on stage, accomplished this almost exclusively through his performance and interpretation of the music. While Moore was working on his memoir with co-author James L. Dickerson, Keith Richards told Dickerson, "Everyone else wanted to be Elvis--I wanted to be Scotty.". Bruce Springsteen has also labeled the same songs and Scotty in particular as a key inspiration. | Many popular guitarists cite Moore as the performer that brought the lead guitarist to a dominant role in a rock 'n' roll band. Although some lead guitarists / vocalists, such as Chuck Berry and blues legend BB King, had gained popularity by the 1950s, Presley rarely played his own lead while performing, instead providing rhythm guitar and leaving the lead duties to Moore. As a guitarist, Moore was a noticeable presence in Presley's performances, despite his introverted demeanor. He became an inspiration to many subsequent popular guitarists, including Bruce Springsteen and Keith Richards of the Rolling Stones. | Rephrase the text to me be more clear. | wiki |
The branch allows Norfolk Southern, since to opening of a new bridge in 2001, to bypass the city of Wilmington, Delaware and allow access to both the Port of Wilmington and the Delaware Branch to Central Delaware, Maryland, and Virginia's Eastern Shore. Both ends of the branch connects with Amtrak's Northeast Corridor, and like all of the PRR's through-freight lines, was electrified until the Conrail era. After the tracks level off, which occurs at the Edgemoor Substation (which is used to power Amtrak and SEPTA trains), the line splits off of the NEC past the DuPont Edgemoor Plant and an underpass for I-495. Just after the split, the Edgemoor Branch breaks off from the Shellpot Branch, while at the same time, the line enters the massive Edgemoor Yard facility. | The branch allows Norfolk Southern, since the opening of a new bridge in 2001, to bypass the city of Wilmington, Delaware and allows access to both the Port of Wilmington and the Delaware Branch to Central Delaware, Maryland, and Virginia's Eastern Shore. Both ends of the branch connect with Amtrak's Northeast Corridor and, like all of the PRR's through-freight lines, was electrified until the Conrail era. The line begins at its northern terminus at the Bell interlocking along the Northeastern Corridor near Claymont, Delaware. This occurs at a "flying junction" where the two outside (western-most) freight tracks "duck" underneath the passenger tracks (the two eastern-most) which are raised on a slight grade. After the tracks level off at the Edgemoor Substation (which is used to power Amtrak and SEPTA trains), the line splits off of the NEC past the DuPont Edgemoor Plant and passes under I-495. Just after the split, the Edgemoor Branch breaks off from the Shellpot Branch and the line enters the Edgemoor Yard facility. The line parallels I-495 and passes under 12th Street, then crosses over the Christina River on a single-track turntable bridge that was completed in 2001. This bridge replaced a dilapidated two-track structure that forced Conrail, due to budgetary issues, to abandon the bridge and restructure Shellpot Branch operations in the mid-1990s. | Copyedit with an eye for grammar and provide clarity where needed. | wiki |
At The Lucha Dragons once again failed to win the tag team championship from The New Day in a Triple Threat Ladder Match that also involved The Usos and again lost to The New Day for the titles on the December 22 Smackdown special Supersmackdown. After Sin Cara suffered a shoulder injury, Kalisto went to team with other wrestlers while also getting a push in single competition after defeating United States Champion Alberto del Rio on the January 7 episode of Smackdown. On the January 11th episode of Raw, Kalisto defeated Del Rio to capture the United States Championship, his first singles title. | At The Lucha, Dragons once again failed to win the tag team championship from The New Day in a Triple Threat Ladder Match that also involved The Usos and again lost to The New Day for the titles on the December 22 SuperSmackDown special. After Sin Cara had been sidelined with a shoulder injury, Kalisto defeated WWE United States Champion Alberto Del Rio in a non-title match with John Cena in his corner on the January 7 SmackDown. Four days later on Raw, Kalisto defeated Del Rio in a rematch to win the WWE United States Championship, his first championship on the main roster and his first singles title in WWE. | Rewrite for clarity. | wiki |
The piston, a major source of engine friction, has been coated with molybdenum to reduce friction. This thin coating not only allows smoother travel through the cylinder, but also reduces cylinder wall scuffing. The skirt of the piston has been reshaped and the overall weight has been reduced by approximately 100 & nbsp; grams. Compression ratio has been increased to 9.7 to 1 by reshaping the crown of the piston. | The pistons were coated with molybdenum to reduce friction. The thin coating reduces moving friction and reduces cylinder wall scuffing. The piston skirt was reshaped and the piston weight was reduced by approximately 100 & nbsp; grams. Compression ratio was increased to 9.7: 1 by reshaping the piston crown. | Copyedit to be breif, but keep the meaning. | wiki |
Endives are part of the genus Cichorium, made up of bitter leaf vegetables. It is divided between Cichorium endivia and Cichorium intybus. The former includes Chicory, Belgian endive (witloof), Radicchio and Puntarelle. Endive is rich in many vitamins and minerals, especially in folate and vitamin A and K, and is high in fiber. | Endive belongs to the chicory genus, which includes several similar bitter leaf vegetables. Species include Cichorium endivia, Cichorium pumilum and Cichorium intybus. The former, the endives, includes Belgian endive (witloof) while the latter (Common Chicory) includes chicory cultivars such as Radicchio and Puntarelle. Endive is rich in many vitamins and minerals, especially in folate and vitamin A and K, and is high in fibre. | Provide more information about the plant's classification. | wiki |
The control and Defense of Arvand Rud was undertaken by him. he was a member of the volunteer army’s logistics unit. On 12 April 1985, Ahmad with his unit were in the Tala’ie region of the Majnoon Island and Iraq dropped chemical bomb, Sulfur mustard at that region. He was only 19 years old at that event. Ahmad narrated that Majnoon Island was completely bombed by sulfur mustard. There were no facilities for defense. From 4 pm to 10 pm, we were incarceration at that situation. In 10 pm, Ahmad realized that they are in subject of chemical bombing. At that night they were taken to Ahvaz hospital. But Ahmad’s condition became worse. | It was then that he commenced responsibility for the control and defense of Arvand Rud. He was a member of the volunteer army’s logistics unit. On 12 April 1985, Ahmad and his unit were in the Tala’ie region of the Majnoon Island, devastatingly a sulfur mustard chemical bomb was dropped by Iraqi planes that day in the region. At the time, Ahmad was only 19 years old. He explains that Majnoon Island was completely bombed by sulfur mustard, and they were left defenseless. Between 4pm to 10pm, the unit was in complete incarceration. After 10pm, Ahmad realized that they were the subjects of a chemical bombing. | Fix grammatical errors and sentence structures. | wiki |
Their third album, Slovenska Morbida (2006), was mixed in the "Abbys Studio" in Sweden with extreme metal producer Peter Tägtgren, a member of Swedish groups Hypocrisy and Pain also producer of bands like Dimmu Borgir, Immortal. Noctiferia possess originality that always leads to something unique, precise and slightly different. They dare to change and develop constantly, searching and interweaving different music styles in metal groundwork. | Their third album, Slovenska Morbida (2006), was mixed in the "Abbys Studio" in Sweden with extreme metal producer Peter Tägtgren, a member of Swedish groups Hypocrisy and Pain and producer of bands like Dimmu Borgir, and Immortal. Their music often integrates other musical styles into a metal genre sound. | Make this sound less like an advertisement. | wiki |
Favre took the Vikings right down the field on their next drive, completing three passes to tight end Visanthe Shiancoe for 67 on an 80-yard drive that ended with Peterson scoring for the second time on a 1-yard run. After a Saints punt, Minnesota drove to the New Orleans 33-yard line. But linebacker Jonathan Vilma ended the drive by intercepting a pass intended for Rice. The Vikings responded with a drive inside the Saints 20-yard line, featuring a 27-yard run by Peterson and a 30-yard reception by Bernard Berrian. But once again they lost the ball, this time on a fumble by Berrian that was recovered by Vilma. | Favre responded by leading the Vikings right back down the field, completing three passes to tight end Visanthe Shiancoe for 67 yards of an 80-yard drive that ended with Peterson scoring for the second time on a 1-yard run. After a Saints punt, Minnesota drove to the New Orleans 33-yard line, where Saints linebacker Jonathan Vilma ended the drive by intercepting a pass intended for Rice. | Add scoring plays and stats and tweak some of the wording | wiki |
There are other conditions that can interfere with the regular conduction of impulses across the heart. An example would be damage to the SA node or the Sinoatrial node. The SA node is essentially the pace maker of the heart. When damaged, it results in a slower heart rate. When this is a problem, artificial pacemakers are usually installed surgically. Ischemia (is-kéme-ah), or lack of an adequate blood supply to the heart muscle, may lead to fibrillation-a rapid, uncoordinated shuddering of the heart muscle. Fibrillation makes the heart totally worthless as a pump and is a major cause of death from heart attacks in adults. There's also heart murmurs which are abnormal or unusual heart sounds. Blood flows silently as long as the flow is smooth and uninterrupted. If it strikes obstructions, its flow becomes turbulent and generates sounds, which are the murmurs. | Other conditions can interfere with the regular conduction of impulses across the heart. Damage to the sinoatrial node (SA), (the pace maker of the heart), can result in a slower heart rate. Ischemia, or an inadequate blood supply to the heart muscle, may lead to fibrillation-a rapid, uncoordinated shuddering of the heart muscle, a major cause of fatal heart attacks. Heart murmurs are abnormal or unusual heart sounds which can be caused by an obstruction in the blood flow. | Make this shorter. | wiki |
The Steyning Line (also known as the Adur Valley Line) was a railway line that connected the West Sussex market town of Horsham with the once bustling south-coast port of Shoreham-by-Sea, with the possibility of an onward connection to Brighton. Covering a distance of, the line closed on 7 March 1966, a casualty of the Beeching Axe. In 1844 the LSWR's engineer, Robert Stephenson, drew up plans to construct a line through the Mole Gap, the point at which the River Mole cuts through the North Downs, to Chichester via Horsham and Dorking. | The Steyning Line (also known as the Adur Valley Line) was a railway line that connected the West Sussex market town of Horsham with the once bustling south-coast port of Shoreham-by-Sea, with connections to Brighton. Covering, the line closed on 7 March 1966, a casualty of the Beeching Axe. As with the Cranleigh Line just to the north, the Steyning Line was a consequence of the fierce competition between the London and Brighton Railway (LBR) and the London and South Western Railway (LSWR), for lucrative south coast traffic. In 1844 the LSWR's engineer, Robert Stephenson, drew up plans to construct a line through the Mole Gap, where the River Mole cuts through the North Downs, to Chichester via Horsham and Dorking. | Simplify and remove random changes in subject matter. | wiki |
The Port Townsend Film Festival began screening independent films in 1999 and has expanded to eight theatres screening over 90 films in the walkable National Historic District in Port Townsend, Washington, United States. Over 60 filmmakers attend for Q&A; with more than 90 short and feature films screened. Actors, Directors and Filmmakers meet students in local school assemblies, as well as speak to audiences during hour-long interviews after their films have screened. In April, the Festival invites women directors, producers, screenwriters and other film professionals for a weekend of "Women & Film, held at the Rose and Rosebud Theatres and Fort Worden State Park's 250-seat Wheeler Theatre. The Port Townsend Film Festival is a 501c3 non-profit, now in its 17th year. It occupies offices year-round in the historic Baker Block Building, at 211 Taylor Street, Suite 401-A, 98368. The Festival is completely supported by its donors and local, small-business sponsors, as well as pass sales. In 2013 the Festival began offering annual Festival scholarships (two-night free lodging and festival passes) to film and journalism students. In 2014 the Festival offered a" Film Fellowship "to film professionals needing a several months of free housing to work on a project. The Festival also partners with local non-profits at no charge, to provide films which support their missions. With the efforts of more than 200 hundred local volunteers, the Festival made its debut on September 22, 1999. Audiences see films from 9 a.m.-9 p.m. in seven theatres, all located in historic buildings. | The Port Townsend Film Festival began screening independent films in 1999. Today, PTFF has expanded to eight theatres and screens over 90 films, mid-Sept., in Port Townsend's walkable National Historic District. (Port Townsend, Washington, United States). Five theatres are "created" in downtown buildings for the three-day weekend by installing large screens, projectors and state-of-the-art sound. Over 60 filmmakers attend the Festival. Passholders can choose from 42 films being screened each day, many of them with Q&A afterwards. Independent documentary and narrative film submissions are accepted from January-May, and are evaluated by a team of 26 reviewers. The Festival charges a small fee for submissions. Additionally, programmer Jane Julian attends larger festivals, such as Sundance, to select films and to invite chosen filmmakers to attend the Festival in person. Special guests of the Festival, actors, directors and filmmakers of note, meet students at local school assemblies, as well as speak to adult audiences during hour-long interviews after their films have screened. In April, the Festival invites women directors, producers, screenwriters and other film professionals for a weekend of "Women & Film, held at the Rose and Rosebud Theatres, with a special screening and filmmaker roundtable at Fort Worden State Park's 250-seat Wheeler Theatre. The Festival has more than 200 volunteers to assist with managing the Festival. | Add more information about the production value of the festival. | wiki |
After his debut, Mr. Game & Watch reappeared in subsequent Super Smash Bros. titles, as well as in Game & Watch Gallery 4, wherein he is the manager of the "classic games" area alongside Mario. He also makes a cameo appearance in Donkey Kong Country Returns in the background of level 7–1, as a worker in a foggy factory. He also appears during certain stages in Rhythm Heaven Fever. In September 2015, the Super Smash Bros. line of Amiibo released a Mr. Game and Watch Amiibo collectible. | Beyond Super Smash Bros., Mr. Game & Watch has also appeared in Game & Watch Gallery 4, wherein he is the manager of the "classic games" area alongside Mario. He also makes a cameo appearances in Donkey Kong Country Returns and in Rhythm Heaven Fever. In September 2015, Nintendo released a Mr. Game and Watch Amiibo collectible. | Make the text concise. | wiki |
Absolutely Fabulous (1992–1995) was based on the French and Saunders sketch "Modern Mother and Daughter". Written by Saunders and starring herself and Joanna Lumley, with Julia Sawalha and June Whitfield in supporting roles, it ran for 39 episodes. The first three series aired on BBC, followed a two-part special finale entitled The Last Shout in 1996. | Written by Jennifer Saunders and starring herself and Joanna Lumley, with Julia Sawalha and June Whitfield in supporting roles, Absolutely Fabulous (1992–1995) was based on the French and Saunders sketch "Modern Mother and Daughter". It ran for 39 episodes with the first three series airing on BBC, followed a two-part special finale entitled The Last Shout in 1996. | Place writing credit at the beginning. | wiki |
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