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Some people think that the same amount of men and women should graduate university . Even through it 's a good way to show , especially in a democratic country , that men and women have the same rights , I do n't think that it would be a good idea to accept both on the some subject . First of all , every university has its own specialty : technical or humanitarian . It 's known , that boys in its majority have the abitities to understand technical sciences , while girls are good at literature , languages and other humanitarian sciences . If government will separate students and violate their right to choose their own profession . The world will see bad musicians with great abilities to cook well , awful doctors without opportunities to become a painter as he wished in a childhood . Secondly , such a totalitarian separation will not give any chance to student to graduate to another subject if there is a certain number of people . Such a group would be really hard to sort just because to the the gender issue of each city . It means that the number of students can be decreased or increased for a long period of time until the amount of male and female becomes equal . All in all , I think that it 's not an appropriate idea to let the equal number of men and women graduate University . Students should have the right to choose subject not by the number , but by their interest . When government make such restrictions , it chooses the totalitarian way to control people activity . And I think it 's wrong .
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There is a point of view that universities should have students of both sexes in equal proportion . I completely disagree with this statement . In my opinion universities should not worry about sex of students . First of all I want to say that the main aim of universities is giving important knowledge and skills to students . Men and women are equal in their rights so they can study in universities . For instance , my mom and my dad were studing in one university , but their group was consisted of male students generally because men usually are better in mathematics and so on . Equal proportion of student is not a function of university . Your knowledge does not depend on your sex . Secondly , I want to say that gender tolerance is a part of state policy and universities can not do anything if government of the state do not allow to teach women . As far as I know in Saudi Arabia women can not go to the university . So I want to say that this is not a university policy that is government policy . Also some subjects are known to be more female . For example , phycologie or some nurse courses . As I said women usually like these professions more than men . So universities should not regulate this tendency . To sum up the information about education of students of different sexes , I want to say that the universities should provide useful knowledge because it is their most important function and gender policy is not problem that universities should solve .
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In the beginning of my essay I would like to write that the problems of gender 's inequality which to shown in this question is actual even nowadays . There are many of states where female has not any rights . They even can not study at university . To tell the truth , I do not consider that it is allowable . Nevertheless , the question is not such an easy as it seems at the first time . It has both advantages and disadvantages which I will illustrate for expressing my own opinion . It is totally agreed that both male and female should have equal right to get an education . That is why in my opinion this is a rather appropriate idea to give equal acceses to universities despite of gender 's identification . Moreover , this can support to create better relationships between both males and females . The reason is that , it can protect from some difficulty because of minority of one gender . Besides , I think it can solve the probrem which we have in our university system . For instance , there are too few male in huminatarian fields such as studying languages , law , political science , journalistic and so on . As for technical subjects the problem is the same - there are too much guys and a few girls . However , there is another side of the coin . Method of accepting students which consist of equal places both for males and females can lead to some undesirable consequences . For example , I think , it is quite unfair because university can not bring one more rather talented student in physics university because of this place reserved for female . The same problem be in humanitarian university . Another argument is that this situation may will result gender 's inequality on its own . The thing is that you are accepting at university not only for your personal qualities and intelligence but as for your gender . Frankly speaking , this problem is rather complicated for me . At the first time I wanted to answer that I completely agree with accepting equal numbers of male and female . Then , I supposed that it is not suitable and realible for our modern education system .
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There is an opinion that in universities shares of students of male and female gender should be equal in every subject ( 50/50 ) . I am absolutely disagree with this statement . There are two main reasons to find this opinion wrong . First and the strogest reason is festures of subjects . Everyone knows , almost every university has a lot of various technical , economical , social and other departments . And it is not casually , that in technical department percentage of male students is much more . Obviously , men 's mind works another way and mathemacs , physics and other technical disciplines are easier for the most part of male than female students . The second cause of my point of view is variety of social roles due to gender . When we talk about democracy , we can not exept demographic problem and duty given to women by nature . It can seem retrospective , but I believe , woman should think about offspring first , and only than about her career . Of course my opinion stand on the country of modern of modern democratic thought and a lot of people , especially some feminists , liberalists and so on , can argue with me , but I find traditional family system , when a husband makes a career and his wife grows kids , more reasonable . That 's why I see no reasons to give some additional bonuces by gender by entering into university . Although I see no reasons to restrict the female part of population too . In conclusion I find present educational system decent , because every student has a lot of choises and it does not depend on sex . There is no necessary changes by this issue .
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In many countries , the student have different moral characteristic . There are a lot of kind teaching for students . For example , in arabic counties existe traditionall " teaching " when student must appreciate and respect of tradition , family , and according then in this countries good behaviour . The anothers countiest , for example - USA , terrible behaviour . Cause this country is free and democraty for tradition . For my opinion first cause is family . It plays very important role in life everyone . Second cause is cociality . Saying tell me who are your friend so I tell you who you are . The truth ! Cociality influance to person . So I think , the parents must paying for attention to children . Very important give them right knowledghes for themself future life ( in school , for example ) . Also the goverment must to help to spesial programmes . In conclusion , student behaviour is modern problem . Nowadays student do n't want studying . He prefer spend to time with computer , iphone . After that he is begginning too lazy . So student behaviour hard to control .
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It is a well - known fact that school is one of the fundamental social institutions that helps students to get ready to the future life , establishes views and believes of the pupils and helps them to gain some social skills and experience that can be very important for them in their future accomodations . However , teachers may have some problems with their students and this can be very disadvantageous for them . In my point of view , the main problem lies on the generation gap . Teachers are believed to be conservative and old - fashioned . At the same time , nowadays most of the students are open - minded and liberal thinking . Some things that may be acceptable for the younger generation can be shocking for the teachers . Moreover , the behaviour of the students can be very vulgaral and distracting from the education process . To prevent such " clashes " teachers and students shall understand that in these cases respect is the most important thing . Different points of view , ways of life can peacfully co - exist if two generations must show good attitudes towards each other . Teachers can make individual meetings and
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There are problems with student behaviour , which we can found in any countries and any times . It may be any problems connected with relationships between student and teacher or between students . These problems can making schoollife terrible , if people would not try to solve it . In my opinion , one of the reason for bad student behaviour is missunderstanding . Sometimes student do not understand what teacher want and why . For example , student do not recognize why he have to do hometask , came to all classes . He do not understand that he need it . Sometimes students can not to start relationships between each other . Then they feel stress and uncomfortable . It can be cause of problem behaviour too . I strongly believe that all this problems can be solved , if teacher and student try it . Sometimes peopel need just to tolk to each other to solve any problem . Students should have a possibility ti discuss their problems with teachers . It will make teaching process more comfortable and pleasure . Moreover , if students and teachers will have a relationships such a friend , they would avoid a conflict . In conclusion I would say that it is a neccessary to have good relationships with classmaters and teachers to be successful in studing . It may be hard , but you can to changhe the situation just to tolk to other people and discussing problem .
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Nowadays many schools face a problem which is connected with their students behaviour . Sometimes students can be rude , and impolate . However , there are some reasond why do the students behave so and some ways of sollution of this question . The first thing I want to mention is that parents should spend more time with their children and teach them how to behave in different social spheres . Nowadays , parents always on work and busy and sometimes they do not have time on their children . That is why a young person started to teach himself as he can ; and the most common way to do so is Internet . Today internet provide a lot of information , which is sometimes is not suitable for a child . For instance , if child always watch some videos , films , where are rude and impolate people are a main characters he will act in the same way as they do . Another point is that student do not see his teacher as a head , as a leader . Sometimes teachers try to be really kind and nice , but in many cases students do not appriciate such behaviour and started to be have more rude and feel more free in conversation with a teacher . I personally believe , that teacher is a very difficult profession , because he must be kind and strickt at once . Undoubtedly , there are solutions for such problem . For example parents should try to spend more time with their children , or if this option is impossible , they should take their child to a varios sport or art activities , where he can get to know how to communicate right . Moreover , the head of a school should also somehow be involved in process . In his oportunity to employee only a professional teachers , and , if such problem exist in his school , he should try to explain to a student where he is wrong , and maybe somehow help him to become kind and polate person . To sum up students way of behavior can be a real problem not only for school , even for the society in future . That is why his behavior should be controlled by parents or by school - employers .
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There are many schools all over the world that come across students non - proper behaviour problems . As all people have to study at school and live a school life , this problem is extremelly important to be brought up . In my opinion there are different kinds of reasons of problems with student behaviour . First of all every persons way of behaviour is formed by his family , by the people he is surrounded every day . These people have a strong influence on the person and , as usually children are used to taking after parents , give non - written instructions to a person . Secondly , the atmosphere in school itself is important . If students are not involved into the school live , different activities , they may feel lost and start to act up , answer back to others and so on . Among with school activities studying process is mere important . Studying must be interesting and useful , but if it is not a round of problems may occur that students have to come through . If the reasons of students bad behaviour are clear there has to be a solution of it . To my mind we should always start with the family . It would be very wise of parents to spend time with their children , explaining what is right and what is wrong , in this way they can be prepaired to any social life . Secondly , teachers in school should try to orginise varios of activities for children , espesially for the smallest ones , to invent some sport competitions , intelligence quisses and so on . Third , it would be great if lessons encoureged students to study , if teachers managed to make these lessons usefull and to teach them those things that they really need in life . To sum it up , while people are young and study at school , they may not know some ways of proper behaviour and this causes some problems . But there is always a way out of it . In such situations there is noone but grown up people , such as teachers and parents , who can help students to improve their way of behaviour .
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Some people think that in many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour . Let 's consider about it . Of course it is one of the main problem in our modern society . It is very pity but some teenagers in their age of adults can be nerveous , angry , cruel and so on . And they try to appeal attantion to them and show their closer people they are cool and mature . But it is not true in fact . In my view parents must to teach their children to be kind and be polite with them , to help someone and of course parents and relatives must to give a good behavior to their children . The different important problem which is connected with student 's behaviour is disrespect to teachers in schools and universitys . In particular the examples of such behavior among the yogurt is in schools in USA , Germany , Canada and so on . I'am absolutely believe that these countrys have very democratic rules and behaviour in schools . Students there are free . They can do during the classes all what they want . The could laughing , eating , jumping ( if it is hard to sitting on chair for them ) and different . And of course all aspects of such behavior are absolutely normally for their surrounding . These children do n't know different . In conclusion I would like to said that the govornment could try to teach modern teenagers a good behavior . They could create some kind where yought could meeting and learn some new rules , feel some polite relation on them .
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The problems connected to one 's behaviour has been really important for a really long time . The society has softened a bit lately so the sanctions for bad behaviour are sometimes believed to be not as effective as they were . Schools are one of the places where such behaviour can actually be improved . First of all , we need to find out why some students behave themselves worse than others . There are several reasons for that . For example , the person has developed a bad character and so takes pleasure of making lives around close people hell . This is a severe case but a really possible one . The other reason comes straight from the previous one . It is the delusion of superiority . The students behaves bad because he thinks that he is better than anyone around , can do whatever he wants and no punishment will come . He could even not care about the punishment . The next reason may be the personal problems , usually connected with the family . When there are conflicts at home all the time , the child usually has two ways to go : to become this " bad guy " or lock all his emotions and feelings into himself becoming " heartless " . So private problems have a really great impact on a person as well . But this problem can be solved . First of all , a good teacher will always try to calm down this student or even talk to him personally so that would n't affect his " position " in class . It sometimes works but not always . If this does not work a teacher should go to parents and explain the problem to them and try to persuade them to pay more attention to their child . There are also severe cases of the rebellion of the class against a " bad guy " but this happen really seldom , because they are usually afraid of him . To sum up , students ' behaviour is a really important issue because it influences not only the person but also everybody around him , which is bad for education . So this should be taken more seriously by those who care most - parents and teachers .
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Nowadays behaviour of students is becoming a burning issue in several schools all over the world . School children neglect many school rules as well as miss a lot of classes . That is a tricky question why it happens and what can be done to improve this situation . There are several possible reasons for that problem . First of all , the main cause of bad behaviour is teenagers ' nature . Children in difficult age are always supposed to protest against rules they do not conform to . There is nothing to do in order to improve that type of nature , but some changes can be done . As far as I am concerned , the most important thing is to give teenage students to develop culturally by giving them more lessons on arts , culture and so on . At the same time , teachers should understand what is needed for young people and respect their wish to show individuality , to set up their own rules and so on . That type of teachers ' behaviour can lead to mutual understanding and improving situation . Secondly , one another reason for the problem of bad behaviour us that students are not involved in the process of education and not interested in getting new knowledge . That is a result of boring classes and the fact that children are not informed how they can use that knowledge . That is why students miss classes being sure they are unresourceful . The possible solution for it is to explain them why every course is important and what is the main purpose of it . For instance , as children understand the importance of knowing biology for future doctors , those who want to become a doctor learn it rarely . Moreover , teachers should make their lessons more interactive and capturing . These actions are to assure children not to miss classes and to encourage them to learn , which is likely to result in their behaviour . To sum up , I would like to add that some actions are able to be done to improve the situation of bad students ' behaviour even if causes are difficult and lie in the very nature of young people .
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Much could be said about different ways to punish student because of their behaviour . People all over the world face this problem when teachers can not control their student and the point is to try explain why young people act like this and to try to find the possible and effective solution . As for me , I could call the family as the main reason . If a child is not taught to act the right way he or she will not understand what the reasons of punishment or angry are . Also , problems with behaviour may be connected with teenagers ' desire to go against the system , to stand their ground inspite any troubles , even if they are not right . This origins from the feeling that the way somebody treats them is unfair . Moreover , problems with student behaviour may be caused by taking care by their parents to much . In other words , since childhood little girl or boy always has everything he or she could ever wish , is never punished or never knows that there are some things which are not allowed to do . All of these factors way become crusial in future . Nevertheless , as any other problems this one , in my opinion , has its solution too . One of the possible but not always effective way is to try to influence the parents of students which are trouble - maker . Also , it is worth talking to students trying to explain why and what for they should improve their behaviour . And , I think , the most important one is not to argue in order to warn a student that he or she is not right . To sum up , I would like to say that even though the first and the main step of socialization process is a family , it does not mean that schools and universities can not try to communicate with students in order to solve problems with behaviour by comforting and supporting .
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Many countries all over the world face the problems connected with student 's behaviour at schools . There are some causes which leaf to this situation . The first cause is that the most students do not see the practical realisation of the knowledge they study at school . Moreover the lectures have become really boring in most cases . All these causes lead to the fact that students mostly do n't what to study at all , and this fact is always followed by the bad behaviour of students . This bad behavior act like a kind of the rebeling against the teacher or lector , who can not involve the group of attenders into the subject . Another words teachers and lectures have lost their authorities for the most of students . However , inspite of the fact that this problem is really difficult to solve , there can be some ways of getting over this issue . First of all teachers should always try to variate the ways they explain something . For example instead of simple using the desk , they can perform a presentation or show a film if we are talking for instance about history . Another way is to give an individual tasks according to the interests and hobbies of each student . It will be the great combination of favourite activity and nessesary task . Also teacher can use nontraditional way of teaching like a changing the place of performing classes . This can help teacher to gain the authority amont the students and make them to behave better , because they will be involved into the interesting process . Overall , there can be many situation of this problem , but the most problem is that most of the teachers do not really desire to change anything in their methods of teaching . Teachers should begin with themselves to solve the problems of bad behaviour among the students . In case they desire to do this the best way is to involve students into a process and gain the authority , they have lost because of boring studies .
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Because of the busy pace of modern life , many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world . Nowadays , the quality of person 's life becomes more improved due to high developing in social areas in the whole world . It is necessary to mention that this improvements give prople an opportunity to have well - paid job or chances to promotion of career ( level ) , but the main problem of this countries achievements is shortage time . On the one hand , people should pay attention on their children . First of all , parents should manage their own time and try to make a good plan with important points , such as go for a walk with child , visit theaters and museums . The best example of this problem is my neighbour . She tryes to spend more with her family . When it comes to her children , she prefers to go for a walk everyday during one or two hours . This woman likes to go to the cinema for watching colourful cartoons twice a month . On the others hand , the government should support children life and create the programmes , which include trip to the nature . Considering this point of view , the best example can be high - developed countries , which try to improve children 's life . For example , in Russia it can be provided an interesting programmes , which used by part of children . This programmes can be trip to famous places or to sea . To conclude all information , it is necessary to claim , that the government can find the good solution for the problem of spending time indoors among children . every country can offer the interesing programmes . The best way of deciding this problem is offering a free entertainments , because every child pays attention of this and their parents allow to use this chance , so children can spend much time .
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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of urban population and people , living in the country side , who used Internet for 5 years , between 1999 and 2004 in a European country . The striking feature of the graph is that quantity of people , living in the city , who had Internet access , is more than rural householders during the period . The percentage of users of Internet increased to 2004 . among urban citizens and people , who existed in the countryside . In 1999 over 10 % of people of the city entered to system of network , it is 5 times as less as proportion of rural users in 2004 . By contrast , about 30 % of men and women from rural area used Internet in 2003 , it is 3 times as large as percentage of people from the same places in 2001 . In 2002 quantity of citizens of the city , who had Internet access , was 50 per cent , and we can see that proportion of urban population to the end of the period increased steadily .
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There are two main points of view about longening the prisons sentences : the first one is that it is the best way to reduce crime , and the second one -- that better alternatives of reducing crime exist . As for the first opinion , it is easy to understand where it comes from . If you sentence a crime for longer term in jail , there is less time for him left to make more crimes when he is out . On the other hand , prisons nowadays are not the places where you could be taught not to commit crimes . A lot of self - education books tell us , that you must be surrounded by people who encourage you to be the better version of yourself . But for a person in a prison it is hard to find any other surrounding that the one that consists only of the people who has comitted crime . For me it is the reason for searching better ways of reducing crime . I think , Norwegian jails is a good example of ideal ones . As I have read , prisoners in these jails can work ( but not have to ) and are paid considered amount of money for their work . They also can get new profession there , if they want to . Which means , that after leaving the prison they would have some money and a demandable profession to start a completly new life . The Norwegian prison is bright and has a big library and lots of others education and sport facilities , which makes it ideal place for person reforming . I think , person is more tend to commit a crime when he is despirate , when there is nothing to lose for him , when he has no money , no education , no life opportunities . The other one important trigger for breaking the law is bad people around , for example , people , who was born in a families where one of the parents was sentenced to a prison term are more likely to commit crimes . That why I believe , that methods , that are used in the Norwegian jails are better , than just giving longer prison sentences .
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The graph indicates changes in the amount of money that was invested in renewable energy during the period from 2006 to 2013 as a world total , and the bar chart -- in developed and developing countries . From the bar chart it is evident that investment in renewable enrgy made by developing countries through almost the whole period was increasing , but in 2013 it had a light drop . It reached its peak in 2012 when exceeded 100 * Bn . It also can be seen from the bar chart that developed countries always invested in renewable energy significantly more money than developing countries ; for instanse , in 2006 , the first year of the period , the investment of the former was 50 * Bn higher than of the latter . Until 2008 developing countries were raising the investments , however in 2009 it fell . Then , in 2010 and 2011 it soared and peaked at the level of aproximately 175 * Bn . Two last years were , again , the years of decrease . If one compares these trends , especially that of developed countries , with those in general , he or she will see that they are almost similar , since they had its minimum and maximum pooints at the same time and since droping and rising periods correspond to each other . To summarize , it can be said that developed countries had always significantly exceede developing in investment in reneable energy and that thends of developed countries are similar to those as a world total .
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Nowadays , the amount of various crime has a social interest and there are a lot of different ways to decrease these . In my paper , I put forward the claim that various ways can be mixed , consenquently , there will be better ways for the reduction of crimes . To my mind , the giving longer prison sentences is conservative way for the reducing . On the one hand , it can make fears for people who would like to do something criminal and a future punishment can stop their activity . On the other hand , this way seems cruelly because sometimes there are people who did not kill or did not make an argon , for instance , but policy do not pay attention on circumstances that play a significant role . On the basis of evidence , it seems fair to suggest idea that is about other measures for the reducing . For instance , a building of different organisation that will help people who have problems , with money for reduction of the robbery . One more clear example is creation of organisations that will tell about consiquents in the case when anyone do something against laws . As a rebbutal to this paper , it might be convisingly argued that It is extremely important to make conditions to reduce crime but they must be done when the crime is not occured . To sum up , the goverment of every country and other social groups and organisations have to control the level of the crime and minimalize its using various ways and measures that were represented in my essay .
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Today business is developing fast . Often appears new companies and businessmen . There is a big amount of international business too . We can see , that they have a tendency to move their business to developing countries . Of course , this tend has many benefits and drawbacks . I strongly believe , that the process of moving businesses to poorer places has more positive sides . It helps to improve their economics and gives an opportunity to local workers . First of all , it helps to improve economics of poor countries . Developed business can go abroad and make economic situation better . It helps to fight against unemployment , for example . Businessman developed other country 's economics , he may produce something or use natural resources . It helps because of lack of the money in the government . They could not do anything until they have not enough money . In this situation comes foreign businessman and help he government of poor country to remedy the situation . What is more , international business gives a huge amount of opportunities for local people . He gives them work and get cheap workers . They , in their turn , get new skills , which they can easily develop and new knowledges , which help them to work on better occupation . Moreover , they can get more money , because foreign business pay high salaries for them . However , other people claim that such business do not help to develop economics in their native country , all money from it is going abroad . Businessmen do not pay taxes and so on . But they forget about one important aspect . I tend to believe , that it helps to make political situation better for both sides . International companies can help to build strong communication between developed and developing countries and it can lead to the union . Finally , I should say that there are more advantages in moving businesses to poorer countries . It helps to develop economics , political relationships and to give opportunities to local workers .
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We live in a world where every country try to develop its economics , politics and life of its citizens . We live in the world where globalization means a lot for people . International companies today try to create and build their business in developing countries that are poorer than developed and use local cheep workers . Some people think that is very good , but others absolutely disagree with this statement . It is not a secret that many transnational companies find places all over the world where they can do their business without extra payments and where cheeper . That is why they build their factories and farms in poorer regions . But it is not bad , I mean . First of all , because of if international companies rise life 's level of developing countries , because they invest money and resources in their economics . It is believed that will be the main cause why migrants can stay in their countries , because they will have work places and will be paid for their work . Moreover , international companies can pay more less money local workers and invest saved money to global projects that can be useful for all people . And the third thing I would like to notice is increasing of globalization . People do not live only in their countries , they can easily travel and work around the world because international companies create economical bridges or globalization . If someone think that international companies create one global world , another suppose that this processes had bad impact on environment of developing regions . Companies try to use all world resources of all regions and they do not think about bad influence of their economic values . They only want to get a lot of money in poorer regions . In conclusion I would like to say that international companies arise economics and life 's level of the people from poorer regions due to using their workers and resources . People should remember that more developed countries can rise economic feagures of developing regions due to globalization that is an important part of our modern world .
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Recently , a lot of international companies set their businesses in developing countries with poorer economic situation in order to employ local workers . Such trend has rather more benefits than disadvantages . Firstly , as for developing countries , where the business is moved to it 's citizens would start getting more and more work places . Such trend leads to people getting more money and wealth and as a result the quality of life in such countries grows along with the economy in total . Moreover , for the international company moving it 's business to developing and poor country means hiring cheaper labor force as people in such countries do n't make a lot of money . Such process results in company 's productivity and also the prices of the product might go down as the labor force is cheap and this is appears to be a significant advantage for the consumers . Furthermore it migh result in compary having more consumers . On the other hand , there is also a number of disadvantages of such process . First of all , it might lead to a new some kind of slavery . As the labor force in such countries is cheap and people know a little about they rights or there is even no low regulating the working hours and condition . As a result , the employer might make people long more hours which results of their health . In addition such process of moving business and factories to poorer countries reflects and distracts that country 's " natural " ways of development . For example , people stop doing agriculture , cultivating , farming and start to work on factories while developing agriculture could lead the country further . In conclusion , the proces of moving business to developing countries has both advantages and disadvantages . However , benefits of this development outweight the disadvantages .
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There are several points of view on reducing crime . Some tend to believe that the best way is longer prison sentences . While others argue that there are better ways . Both views have their pros and cons . Increasing prison sentences can prevent some people from doing crime as they will know about risk of spending most of their lifes in prison . But there is another side of this solution . First of all , prisons will take more money . From country budget as prison has to spend more on every prisoner . Second and may be even more important criminals will go for a higher crimes to avoid prison . For example , theift kill a man to avoid being caughted . Last problem is connected with the first one . Government will need to built more prisons to keep all criminals . It also take money from budget . But we have alternative ways ? Yes , there are some other possible solutions to prevent crime . First one is reducing number of unemployed people . A lot of people go for crime just because they do not have something to it . Giving them a job can prevent them from going for crime . Second approach is to start with children . Most of the crimes start doing illegal during from the childhood . It is very important for parents or teachers , child phycologists to make sure that one do not you for a wrong road . Of course , many other steps that can help . In my opinion , longer prison sentence certainly is not the right solution , so we have to concentrate on alternative approaches and combine them for better results .
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It was proved , that air travel greatly contribute to air pollution and it 's one of the main reasons of global warming . Governments believe , that a lot of air travel is not so important and it should be better to introduce new laws to reduce the number of air travel for leisure and business . As for me , I ca n't totally agree with one of these statements , because they both are right . On one hand , people live on our planet for a lot of years , for millions of years . So they affected the environment for a long time . Moreover , we destroy our planet over and over again . In our modern world , full of new technologies of destruction , we must to take care of our planet more , then ever . And it 's possible to understand opinion of governments , because they take care of ecology . It 's not a bad idea to create some new laws to contor the amount of air travel . However , where are a lot of questions without asks . For example , how they will decide who can travel and who ca n't ? If I want to travel abroad on the plane to see Paris for a second time , what should I do ? Actually , there are a lot of such questions . Ecological problem is very serious , but is it right to said people what should they do ? I really want to fly abroad do why should I ask anyone about it ? It 's a free world , where you can visited any country for any reason . This is the other point of view . To conclude , I 'd must to say that I think , that the second point of view is more correctly , because we ca n't safe our planet , it 's too late , but can help to take care of her by other way . Reduce the amount of air travel is not the best method . We can find something better .
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Nowadays travelling became the most popular way of time - speaking because of a lot of opportunities but at the same time it is a big issue for people to level off the air pollution . Inspite of the fact that plans damage the atmosphere this type of transport has many benefits . First of all , plans are the fastest transport in the world . It helps businessmen to communicate with partners around the world and to visit different countries in the limited time . Secondly , air transport is very safety . That is why people prefer plans to cars , because it can avoid traffic and accidents . It allows people to make business in different parts of country or even of a world . Thirdly , many people prefer countries to travel which are far from home and it is difficult to visit it by train . Another question is that plans may be cause of global warming and air pollution . The main reason is that plans are made of alluminium which can destroy the atmosphere . Moreover , the materials which use during the building of the plane are also very dangerous for Earth . Futhermore , in recent years the number of terrosism in air is extremely growing and many airports were ocupating by extremists . Taking all the resons mentioned above into consideration , I would like to say that plans are the most convinient and the most popular means of transport and it should defenetly continue to work , but government should discuss the measures to reduce the pollution . May be they should add and discover the other variants of transportation or , for example , develop the land and water transport system to make them more comfortable and accessable for people all over the world .
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Nowadays travelling by plane becomes more and more popular among people from different corners of the world . It may be a business trip or a journey to have a rest and relax from the daily routine . On the other hand , there are many people who are agree that this kind of transport is very convenient . A lot of factors may prove it . First of all , travelling by plane let people minimize time spending on the road , because plane is the fastest variant among all transport . Especially it is appropriate for people who has a limit in time because their work . Secondly , businessmans can not imagine their life without air transport , because in this case time is equal to their money . Travelling be plane gives such persons an opportunity to do business on the international level ( to deal with parthners from different countries personally ) . At last air travelling is accepted to be the safest type of transport and that is why the majority of people choose it if they can afford . On the other hand , there are people who really afford governments ' point of view and want to reduce the number of flights for work and leisure . Inspite of all advantages of this kind of transport , they are sure that it badly influences the environment by polluting air that can lead to the global warming . To some extant these people are right . Becides polluting air the plane is made of alluminium , that is not ecological metal . So , this kind of transport not only pollutes the enivironment but it is made of unusegul material . If all people imagine , what will be with our Earth , may be some persons will change their opinion and start using land transport such as trains . Or , for example , sea transport . To sum up , there are two points of view concerning air travel . To take in attention everything mentiones above , we can notice that pluses of this type of transport are outweight minuses . Of course , everybody shoud decide what will be better for himself . Personally , I , am sure that governments should not take laws with aim to reduce the number of air flights , because it is a normal natural development , that people try to make their life better .
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In today 's world of great opportunities , the majority of people used to travel by air . There are a great number of debates wheather air travels pollute nature and contribute global warming or not . Of course , it reduce time for travel but , may be , planes are cause of much consequanses for environment . I somewat agree with the statement , that government must commite different limits on air travel in order to prevent global warming . First of all , there are many things to be said in favour of introducing laws to reduce the amount of air travels . It can not be denied that planes like cars pollute flora by burning fossil fuels and motor oil which consist of chemical dangerous elements . It leads to increase of temperatures , to say nothing of global warming . Secondly , for this reason , reducing of deathes would be a positive step in saving nature . in recent years there are a wide range of crashes of planes . It becomes a cause of people 's deathes . If government introduced laws of reducing the number of air travel for business and leisure we would not be so worried about the international statistics of crashes of planes . On the other hand , it goes without saying that air travel is recognised to be the fastest way of journey . It is inevitably that people will always be enthusiastic about air travel . It has a lot of benefits : fast , convenient , comfortable and with frequent service transport . Having analyiesed these reasons , it worth concluding that it would be simplistic to state categorically that air travel has good or bad impact on the nature . It depends on how you use it and clearly , it is better in moderation then in excess . I would like to say that government must become more centered on this issue . Because true measures need to be taken .
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The author supposes that air travelling is one of the main reasons of pollution and global warming . He says that it is the politician 's task to tako some measures in order to reduce the number of air travel . As for me , I 'm totally disagree with this statement . Because , on the one hand , airplanes threw some gases to the atmosphere , and it can damage the ecology . But it is well - known fact that the most of flight companies ude ecological fuel for their airplanes , as a rule , cerosine . And the damage effects from using this kind of fuel are much less than the pollution , providing by using cars , working manifactures , e.t.c . It 's proved by scientists that airplane fuel is more ecological in many times than gasoline , or gases that factories give to the air . So , they came to the conclusion that using cars can give our planet much more damage than using air transport . Becaue the most of gases , which is left by airplanes in the air do n't get down to the Earth , but mix with air on the level of around 10000 metres . As for the global warming , I can say that there are a lot of another reasons for it . Last saturday I saw a documental film " The Global warming " on the Discovery TV - channel . And there were not any words about the damage effect of using airplanes ! But producers gave a lot of arguments that the main reasons of global warming are gases from factories , too much cars using by people and the global changes in world 's climate . Overall , I can say that the author 's opinion is not correct for 100 % . Of coure using airplanes can cause som bad effect on the ecology of the Earth , but there are reasons that are much more important , and governments should pay more attention for them .
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Environment protection is a conversational issue , which generates a great deal of heated debates with supporters , who claim , that it is very necessary to abond different useless flights , while opponents suppose , that it is n't a great problem , which is provided by laws of governmnet . I somewhat agree with statement , that it is vital problem in order to solve . I suggest , that every person wants to live in the safety environment , takes a deep breath with clear air and other , that 's why we should to do possible accomodations for its deal . Firstly , people live in a high - technical world , where we connect with different parts of the countries or continend , that 's why it is n't very vital to fly by plane for conferences . For example , businessmen can discuss their problems with help of Skype . Moreover , this programme allows not only to speak with partner on the other side of screen , but also and see the person . I think it is very great and convient . Secondly , nowadays political position is dangerous and a lot of type of air travelling are damaged . Besides , these unrecognizable sutuations kill huge amount of human lifes . Although , I thinks this problem is solved by protection of local measures . For example , people , who have own deal or business , should to introduce or share with companies in this country , where live . This way allows to protect air atmosphere and own production , companies , fabricks . Thirdly , also we have other facilities to go to the university , between different towns , to spend leisure activities such as by train , by bus or by car . All of these are more safe than planes , and a lot of people are frightened by a huge amount of kilometres from the ground . On the other hand , there are some disadvantages . Firstly , people choose , as a way of transportation , air travelling , because it is more faster . Secondly , sometimes accidents are happined by independent conditions of you , that 's why you have a little time to prevent catastrous ... In conclusion , I 'd like to say , that everybody wishes to take a clear oxygen without harmful pollutions , that 's why all requirenments are needed to put in our attention , if it will br not so comfortable to us .
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There is an opinion that large amount of air travel cause an air pollution and global warming , and it is necessary to limit the number of air travel . In what way it seems to be true and is government regulation really important for soluting the problem ? Personally I strongly disagree with the view above . To begin with , nowadays it is a lot of other transport systems , such as cars , buses , ships , etc , so why it is thinked that only air travelling polluted the atmosphere ? Furthermore , reducing the air travelling is impossible in modern society , because it will stop the life of million people who use air transport every day . But there are people who declare the fact , that many of earth transport become more and more clear from day to day . They believe , that new cars will be non - dangerouse for our planet and we should refuse air travelling at all . The opinion above sounds good , but science is not create such beautiful safety transport yet , so in my opinion no matter what transport is using by people , it is polluting air in any ways . In addition , once a life I was changed my air travel for travel by car , and it was uncomfortable and taken really much time . To make a conclusion , I would like to say that air pollution and global warming is extremely important problem that must have a solution . But reducing the amount of air travel is not wisdom decision until it will be created and provided a suitable exchange for this type of transport .
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Some claim that the current pattern of behaviour in contemporary families is the employment of both parents at the same time and consequently paying less attention to the kids which becomes damaging to the joint time spending . It is also a common knowledge that such pattern was not popular among the families of the past and since the outrise of the modern society the aprementioned behaviour causes various issues detrimental to the family life . First and premost , the employment of both parents is the result of the female emansipation and an increasingly speedy lifestyle . The family can now be economically stable and efficient if only having both spouses working and adding up to a joint budget . One of the possible descriptions of such a trend might be the adjustment of the micro - economic reality on the scale of a household to the social shifts which are the independency of women and the equality of rights . Considering the effects of such a trend , it is important to emphasize it 's detrimental character for the kids . If women were not only responsible for bringing up the child in the past , but also being there for him at all times whether he / she needs mental or physical support , nowadays the situation has altered . Children and especially adolescents lacking family time are forced to turn to their friends for the issues once being resolved inside of the family . As a result , children tend to become self - centered , unstable and naïve , while not having the needed amount of attention from their parents . More importantly , the lack of family time also impacts parents , creating constant tension between the spouses , which is being released during family fights and puts the healthy atmosphere at home in danger . My personal stance of the problem is rather negative . Like many others I have experienced the constant work overload of my parents during the time of the childhood and I believe that under the modern circumstances it is now immensely important to make the time for your family somehow at least on the weekends not being bothered by the constantly arousing business issues The key feature here is evidently a phyciological approach due to which the families should understand the major importance of the family activities and minor importance of fulfilling carious work tasks on freetime . In conclusion , it is obvious that the times have changed and modern families do not share any kind of resemblance with the precious ones , however the only common feature of families now and then might be communication . The human interaction among the closest people . There are will never become less rewarding yet has already and will most definitely become more and more challenging .
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In nowadays , many people believe that only longer prison sentence can help to reduce the crime . But other people try to find more effective humanistic way of reducing crime . On the one hand , people think that if they make prison sentence longer many future crimes will be reduced because burglar , murder , kidnapper and others will think twice before make a crime . For example , people can just afraid to make a crime , because if they do it and policy caught them , they will spend all their life in prison . In spite of this fact , many people for which making a crime is a " lifestyle " never stopped to do it . On the other hand , other people advise better , alternative ways of reducing a crime such as special moral subjects in school , increasing government payments for homelesses and so on . For example , special moral subjects in school can helps pupils understand which actions are right and ligal and which are not . Moreover , increasing government payments can helps to reduce a crime , because many people just stopped need in food , water , clothes and so on . So they do n't need to make a crime for their surviving . In my opinion , I absolutely agree with a second view , because I think that it is not right way to reduce a crime , people just have not to want to make a crime . In conclusion , I believe in this world without crimes .
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Nowadays many families from millennium generation have both working parents and their children see parents less time that the older generation . There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages about it and I am going to show these . To begin with , the reasons of spending less time parents with children in development of education and increasement of job competition , therefore many " millennium " people want to have financial safety and successful carcer . In addition , feminists opened this opportunity for women and many woman have job nowadays . That is why both parents work and do not sit with their children . It can be dangerous for kids , first of all , because kids spend time with internet , their environment , for example with othe kids on dangerous occasions . Secondly , the child can have psychological problems without parents ' communication , he can close the door to other people in his soul . However , many people see advantages of this . For example , children can be more serious with others or can find decisions in hard life situations . To sum up , children ' psychological state depends on their parents . If parents control their time , everything is be alright .
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It is chart shows changes in the number of children without access to primary school education . I am summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and making comparisons where relevant . If looking in the chart then we vision what boys and girls in the 2012 years going to school very few , then in the 2000 years . And this very good . I think , what in the modern world children must have study in school ( before in colleges or university ) and this chart agree with me . In the 2012 years children without access to primary education have a less in 10 - 50 % at the 2000 years . In the Africa this ~10 % , in the South Asia this ~70 % and Rest of World ~15 - 20 % . In South Asia very big changes : in the 2000 years girls without access to primary school education 21.6 millions and in the 2012 years 4.8 millions . 16.8 millions only girls study in primary school and I think that this awesome . In the final my esse I 'd like said what modern world take care about children and we should to fun it is .
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Here we have the chart shows as the level of access to primary school education for twelwe years in different regions . Gender is also a significant for the chart . In Africa in 2000 almost 45 million children did not have a possibility to get primary education . More than half of these children were girls . After 2 years this level reduced , more children could go to school both genders . It shows growing tendency to equality and educational development . Despite the fact that number of children without access to primary education on Africa continiues to be really high . The most significant and rapid changes were in South Asia . Gender equality in education sphere and level of access to school education sphere and level of access to school education more increased in 5 times for girls and 2 times for boys . Rest of world gradually reduces the negative factors and 10 more million children could afford to get primary education . Moreover , half from these are girls . All in all , we can say that horrible number have a strong tendency to reduced by government and programms , so we hope all children of the world could access to primary education in any region and both genders .
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Nowadays our society faces to face with many ecological problems such as air pollution , water pollution , increasing the number of deseases , which can lad to global disaster . And some people think that air pollution is caused by using airbuses . While others can not agree with it for many reasons . I think , that there are a lot of other reasons for air pollution and global warming , air travelling is only one puzzle of all picture . And we should seach the other way to cope with its problem , but introduction laws to reduce the amount of using airbuses is not suitable for modern society . First of all , airbuses are the most convenient , cheapest and fasten kind of transport . And if governments introduce laws that reduce the number of air travel for business and leisure , it could cause social disaster , " bum " among people . The history gives us a lot of examples of radical reforms and many of them leaded to awful consequences . Moreover , there are a lot manufactories , factories that provide all kinds of pollution more than other things . I mean a great number of waste , toxic components of their technologies . And there are a lot of examples when owners of these factories do not buy necessary equipment that can help to avoid ecological problems . And scientists did many researches in this area and said that airzoles which are using in our everyday life all over the world contribute a great to air pollution ( about 15 % according to the results of researches ) . To sum up , I want to say that , of course , using airbuses a lot of time has its drawbacks and has a negative influence . But we should not forget about the main factors of air pollution and global waming at all ; toxic wastes of factories , using some things in our everyday life . And people should try to cope with it without introduction unsuitable laws in the sphere of social life .
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Using air transport can lead to the high level of air pollution and can be a cause of global warming . Some people believe that a lot of travelling is unnecessary and the number of travel for business and leisure should be reduced by the government . Personally I do not suppose that it can be possible and in this essay it will be discussed why . First of all banning some kinds of travelling and decreasing the number of flights can lead to many personal problems between people . This law can destroy a lot of private plans which are essential for somebody . For example , a woman has not seen her children who live in another country for many years because of the work . She finally has time now to visit them but there is not any flight and in addition she will not have an opportunity to do this later . Certainly , such kind of personal situation is a drop in an ocean of problems which can be brought by air pollution and global warming . So I would recommend to reduce the amount of air travel until scientists would n't have invented some ecological alternative mean of air transport . In conclusion , it is recommended to solve the problem of air pollution and global warming by inventing some ways to use an ecological transport but not reducing the amount of air travel . Because people , in general , will not be satisfied when some laws destroys their personal important plans . Moreover people would not enjoy their life without traveling and learning unfamiliar culture which also means a lot for international communications .
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The chart demonstrates comparison ( two periods ) between some regions and absence of possibility for getting primary education for children during two periods . It is noticeable , that the highest level of children without primary education was in Africa in 2000 . At that period , about 23,7 millions of girls had no opportunity to get education , and responsibly , 20 millions of boys . It 's clearly seen that twelve years later situation dramatically changed . More than 11 millions of children could additionally get primary education in Africa , in 2012 Africa had the same level of uneducational children as South Asia had in 2000 . However , the ratio of uneducational children between boys and girls was different . During twelve years South Asia made a great step in educational sphere . It 's obvious , that in 2012 the quantity of children without education declined more than three times and that level was below average around the world . It must be stated that in 2000 in the rest of world the level of uneducational kids was twice below than in Africa in the same period . Also it 's very important to emphasize that in 2012 all regions beside Africa had approximately the same level of uneducational boys and girls . To sum up everything , it can be stated that year by year situation with getting primary education improves and it is pleasure to realize that gender has no any impact on this fact .
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Nowadays , moving by air is frequently being claimed as one of the most essential reason of global warming as a result of air contamination . Thus , there is a spread point of view that the number of flights should be controlled by the authorities . As far as I am concerned , this opinion is partially fair . On the one hand , air crafts always cause harmful effects towards ecological conditions . Indeed , planes and helicopters leave out specific gases which can threat the environment leading to a global temperature rising . Consequently , governments should definitaly reduce time spent on air by taking appropriate measures . Moreover , there is a significant problem that a special ecologically safe means of transport still does not exist . In this way , the main aim of the authorities should be not only limiting air travels but also contributing to the invention of new mode of transport . On the other hand , businessmen and tourists are able to use only planes in order to move higher distances in shorter periods of time . Unfortunately , this still remains the only way of travelling while special transport means are not invented . To sum up , I reckon that governments should definitely maintain limits of time spent on air . But they should likewise help inventing ecologically safe modes of transport .
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It is known that air travel is one of the causes of air pollution and even global warming . Some people argue that part of flights for business and leisure is unnecessary , so governments should think about new laws to decrease the number of them . However , I suppose that this will harm society . All of us are sometimes using planes as the mean of transport because it is easy , quick and comfortable way of travelling even on long distances . Air travel made our lifes easier as we do n't need to spend months or even year to get from one place to another as it was centuries ago . Also we have opportunities to visit places that were untouched before . The costs of plane ticket are rather small so almost everybody can afford it . So if governments decide to cut down the number of flights , the cost of air travel will rise up rapidly and this will cause unability of some group of people to afford it . This may be harmful for their business if they have to travel often or if their family lives in the other part of the world . Moreover , it may affect pilots as a lot of them will be fired if the number of flights and air companies do n't need so much work force . On the other hand , the reduce of amount of the air travel may help to solve problems with air pollution and prevent future global warming as less planes will flight . However , I believe that this would n't make dramatic change in the problem of pollution as there are a lot of other things that harm our planet . In conclusion I 'd like to say that cutting down the amount of flights by introducing new laws may affect the air pollution but not greatly , while life of people may become uncomfortable and a lot of them will loose their job .
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Nowadays , it is argued that air pollution is problem , wich seems to be know all around the world . I completely agree with considerable decision of government about reducing air polution by not allowing of air travel . Firstly , environment nowadays is a big problem , wich causes unpredictable changes in climate . Atmosphere need to be proven because without it people could n't live normally , without illness or health problem . Secondly , travel companies To conclude , this is the main problem , wich occurs people nowadays and only the government can something change .
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The bar chart represent number of children without access to primary school education from 2000 to 2012 year . Overall , the information consist two parts , as gender and region . Looking to the bar chart , we can see that the experement wasin such continens as Africa and Asia , but also is shown diagrame Rest of world . In Africa in 2000 was highest level of the number of children without access to primary education - 20 millions boys and 23,7 million girls . Over twelve years later statistic has been changed in probably 5 points down - boys 14,5 and girls 18,2 . In South Asia it is not the better situation . In the period of 12 years ( from 2000 to 2012 ) statistic has been changed a lot . Number of girls in this period was from 21,6 to 4,8 , but boys from 11,1 to 5,1 . Well , it is big difference . Number of children rest of world in this period ( from 2000 to 2012 ) bar chart shows that in 2000 number of girls was 12,8 but in 2012 goes down to 7,6 million . Number of boys in this period was 10,5 million , but in 2012 get down to 7,7 million . To sum up , every year number of children without access to primary education is going down , now we have seen in bar chart .
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Airplane is one of the greatly construction with what every person can go anywhere and save his time . In my opinion air travel are necessary for every person and without that we ca n't imagine our life . Firstly , I agree with this topic in some part . Air pollution and global warming - this is one of the problems with what we ca n't do nothing . But goverements can introduce laws now to make airplane not proven to contribute to air pollution and global warming . One of the scientist from Moldova have an idea now to do air travels intresting and health . He gave his idea in USA and his idea was successfully . He make some scheme , now to travel with pleasure , but not just for buisness . Secondly , I am not agree with this topic . Our life has many dangerous things what we met every day . Of course , goverement should control all these air travel , but risk and interest of life - this is something without what we ca n't imagine a person . If someone told you that you can go somewhere with plane just for a buisness , and of course you should show suggestion , for man this will be not good information . Because as we know every person is free and this idea will be not pleasent for him . To sum up , air travel is something what is very popular in every country and without what we ca n't imagine our life . If the goverement introduce laws to reduce the amount of air travel for buisness and leisure , after that will be problem and people will not be satisfyed .
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The graph shows the using of fossil fuels in five countries from 1970 to 2015 years . Talking about 1970 year , the higest level of using fuels was 97 % in United States . The lowest was 35 % in India . In 2015 the highest was 87 % in Chine and the lowest was 15 % in Sweden . We could notice that these results have been changing during the period . In two countries the level of using energy from fossil fuels was risen significantly . In Chine from 60 % to 87 % and in India from 35 % to 73 % . In other words , the fossil fuel was involved in production and has become more popular . In other countries such as United States , France and Sweden we could noticed a dipping . In Sweden the level has reached from 84 % to 15 % , a similar situation was in France . The level has changed from 90 % to 50 % . Only one counry has fallen unsignificantly his using of fossil fuels in energy . It is United States . These results demonstrate popularity in production of using fossil fuels in different countries . It is the most useful in Chine and United States in 2015 .
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Nowadays , a lot of buildings have their own purposes . Arhitects are trying create arts with useful features to make the people 's lives better and easier , but they forget about the appereance . In my point of view , arhitects should think about quality of their arts too . They must care about purpose of buildigs and to look beautiful . The first argument is appereance . A lot of people walking on the streets see the buildings and than they has solved enter to it or not . In other words , the looking is a key to developing and producing . For example , not only one person do not go in hospital with bad look . Everyone start to think about treatment and qualification of doctors in this place . If we see the clear building with huge windows , new doors , beautiful garden . We want to visit the doctor in this hospital . The second argument is comfortable location . If arhitects want make the building successful they need care about where it will be . Everyone place has own purpose that is why location must connecting with it . For instance , museums are waorks of art . Arhitects need fint the place wchich was a convinient for people to visit . If it was located in the end of the city , nobody go to this building , even it will have a beautiful appereance . In conclusion , I would like to say buildings is the art which need to be useful for people . I disagree with the statement because arhitects should think about producing purposes and apperaence both . It helps the world become better .
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I strongly disagree with the given assumption , i do n't even think that gender equality should be a principle at all . In my opinion , there are a lot of gender specialized spheres , and i think , that this specialization is based on basic biological and social differences between males and females . Throughout the history , men and women were always distinct male jobs from female jobs , an the reason was nor the stereotypes , but biological features . At a whole , men are more physically developed , and more capable of doing a repeatable machanical work is much easier for them , such a clothing is . To specialize on a type of work you 're best at , is the most efficient way to organise society . Social aspect also helps with specialization , for example , barbers are more frequently women than men , because fashion is their sphere of interest . However , there always are deviations , and we must wespect them , if a woman wants to become a mathematician , and has skills in math , we should never limit her ambitions . Some with a mon who wants to become specialist in fashion . If universities ever would count gender as a decisive factor , the whole education system would be broken in my opinion . Why would a girl student care about the exams while she can go into the elite tech colleges , and be accepted only because she is a girl , and a gender equality heeds to be strained . All organizations , from my point of view , should never care whether studen or employee or a candidate is a male or a female . Only thing that really matters is their personal skills and dedication . Maybe this way we will miss a gender equality , but we will achieve a much more important thing , the people equality .
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Nowadays , in universities a lot of students are studied . Students , as a rule , do n't like any restrictions for them , because they think that they do n't need it . What about equal numbers of male and female students in every subject ? Should universities do it ? I 'm sure that they do n't do it and there are two main reasons of this : an own choice and a problem for universities . The first reason , why universities should not acept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject is that students should do their own choice without any opinions and restrictions . If a student wants to study a subject , where there is not a place for him or her , so it is problem . She or he ca n't to get a good education , because she or he don not get a place for studying . For example , last year my brother dod not get a place in subject , which he wanted to study , and now he don not enjoy studying absolutely . The second reason why I do'not agree with the topic is that , if universities should accept equal members , so it can make some problems . For instance , there are situations , when a lot of students want to study one subject , and other small group of students wants to study other subjects , so problem is how to destingrush places of subjects equally . It is necessary to understand that it should be fair . To conclude , I believe that universities should not accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject , because students should make their own choice , and this situation should not be a problem for universities .
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Higher education is an important part of our modern life . Both men and women can get it . In comparison with the past there is no problem for any person to enter the university . All you need is to have good knowledge to pass the exams and maybe some extra skills ( for example , if you want to be a fireman you should keep fit to be very strong ) . Some people believe that the amount of male and female in universities should be the same for every subject . The main argument for this point of view is that everybody are equal in their rights that is why the opportunities should be the same . The second argument may be that in such situation , when the amount of male and female students in every faculty is equal everybody will ful comfortable because there will not be a majority of girls , for instance , and it will be easier for everybody to communicate and find friends . Critics of this position say that not all professions are able for both man and woman . There are a lot of examples of occupations where the majority of successful persons is only male : soldier , fireman , builter , ect . In such areas worker should be strong enough . Women can not choose these professions , be satisfied with such job because of her ability to born new life . It would be bad for society if woman work in bad conditions , have job which is dangerous for her health . That is why it is impossible to accept the same numbers of male and female students in every faculty . From my point of view , the main criteria for university to accept person is an independant exam which shows the level of knowledge and some skills which are necessary for this kind of profession . I do n't believe that it is important if you are male of female . In conclusion I would like to say that discrimination is not good but in a case of higher education there should be equal opportunities for everybody and it is not the same with equal numbers of men and women as a students in every faculty in every universities .
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The ament University system does not include any gender barriers or obshtcles , however there is a position that stayes on the nessecity of equaling the number of male and female student groups through out the University system . The question is whether it is a cure for some urgent problem or blossom . To my mind there is no nessecity in such a change . The first reason is that current attendency system is enough liberalised . That means there is no gender , racial or other social barriers while younger people attend any University , that would make the abilities to get a higher education shrinked or abolished for some groups . The second reason is that equaling the numbers correlates with the fairness of getting the higher education in noway . While the rights of each gender group will be formaly the same , factually that will break the rights of the others that were not accepted for the reasons they were unable to change or choose . The last reason that must be stated is that in some subjects there is a low percentage of male or female students traditionally . That tradition is not even based on abilities or disabilities of each gender but some social patterns . Some natural or technic sciencies are dominated but the males on a 20:1 ratio , while on some school teaching studies faculties there are no males at all . To conclude , equaling does not alwayes tied with fairness . Some mechanic equaling may not respond adequaly to some issues especially when we are talking about human choice in their future , but the main reason can be avoiding unnessecary obstickles on the pooth of peoples ' choice .
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Modern life seems to be unfair . We still face discrimination between men and female in various spheres : it is particularly true for the education . Although I am convinced that manicind can not tolerate with discrimination between genders , I suppose , that setting up the equal numbers of male and female in every subject is incorrect , because this approach would not take info account some important conditious and will lead to greater discrimination . Throughout the history there has always been some subjects that appealed mostly males , while another disciplines were attractive mainly for females . History shows that while the men were involved in math or technical disciplines the women are mostly involved in art . For instance , according to the statistics in Saint - Perersburg , State unuversity on the Programme Engineering faculty , the number of male students in much more than female student number . Moreover , this order no doubt will be unfair . It would humiliate than rights of both gender 's . For instance , if there is only two girls would like to go enter math faculty it means that only two boys can learn math despite on other pretendends desiring to enter this faculty . Otherwise , if only three boys would decide to enter Foreign language department it would mean that only three places would be available for girls in spite of total number of empty places . In conclusion , I believe that we should struggle with discrimination . Setting numbers like this is not efficient and unfair .
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The graph presents the data on amount of population aged 65 and over since 1940 in Japan , Sweden and USA . This graph also makes predictions about level of population aged 65 and over in 2040 . First of all , it should be noted that Japan has the lowest rate of population aged 65 ( no more than 10 % ) . The highest rate is mentioned in USA ( from 9 % to 15 % ) . The line showing proportion of population aged 65 in Sweden goes porollel with USA 's one . Although , it rises suddenly in 1990s and decreases , according to predictions , in 2010s . Moreover , from this graph it is seen that after 2040 levels of population aged 65 in all 3 countries increase rapidly . The population aged 65 and over in Japan grows from 10 % to 25 % less than in the 5 years ( from 2030 to 2035 ) . The lines of population of USA and Sweden are porollel again from 2027 . The USA population increases from this moment from 16 % to 23 % in 2040 and population of Sweden grows from 18 % to 25 % in 2040 . All in all , from this graph in can be concluded that the levels of population in Japan , Sweden and USA grows from 2030 rapidly .
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Nowadays the question of equality is the most significant part of society . And the problem raises , when it concerns young people who are truly believe in their own independence . That 's why I suppose that universities have to try to accept equal numbers of representatives of both sex , for every subject . First of all , the society should prove its claims about freedoms and democracy . If students see that their legally binding rights are not protected , this could being strikes and , consequently , decreasing of government 's authority . Business books emphosise , that society and all its members must feel confident in every step taking by politics and what is more , to have an essense of non - restricted protection . For example , my friend from Ukraine have told me , that the reason why his family encourages the actions of current revolution is complet misunderstand and frustration connecting with governmental apporat . Moreover , the popular thought about diversification of subject regarding to their so - called use only for one sex should be rejected . Every child or every student has his or her own views on the world , and they all have their own preferences . That 's why to limit the number of subjects which , for example , a girl could take seems abormal . The magasine named " Slon " writes , that the men differs from the woman only physically and now it 's very easy to mess both groups . For example , I 've read about person , who has more male interests that female 's ones and behave herself according to rules , which society always consideres as male one . And least , but no less , is phyhological problem : students should study and live in society where all roles are taken . It 's not surprising , that girls and boys have different attitude in 90 % times ( as British newspaper " Guardian " claims ) and that 's why they have to korn something from each other . For example , I know a girl , who studied only with other girls . She always says now , that such life is horrible . All in all , it should be noted , that equal rights in society should be considered as healthy way to live . No one must n't suffer because of their sex identity .
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Today there is a great number of discussions about male / female relationships . One of them is should male and female students work together and even more - in equal numbers . Some people lelieve that it 's inappropriate , to make universities accept equal numbers of male / female students , others agree that it will improve current situation in education . There exist strong arguments of both sides of this disscussion , which implies that it is worth examining all points of view before reaching any conclusion . First of all , there is a necesity to say that one of the advantages of these type of accepting students is the equallity between men and women . Equall numbers mean equall opportunities for people , without discrimination sexes . Moreover , there is a plenty of scientist 's researchs convincing that working between male and female groups of people in equall proportions gives a much more favor . Also , this type of proportion helps members of each group interact with others easily , that when there is a disproportion . Another point of view is that such type of accepting students is useless and pointless . Supporters claim that such thing can destroy the real competition between students , which is based on knowledge , not on female / male you are or not . Another drawback of equall accepting numbers is that it can crushed all system of university 's academic freedom - government will give concrete numbers of students , who schould study in universities . And one of the most convincing arguments againts equall proportions between male / female students is that there is no any correlation or connection between knowledge and which sex do you have . And I am firmly believe in that . Since the Medievel times , people fight against discrimination , for modern society with equall rights for everybody . And for the first time , this meosure for accepting equall numbers of students seems like justice , lut it is not real suitable criteria for competition between students . There is no shame if men are good at law and women in teaching as there is no any discrimination between them in case of disproportion . Considering all arguments , it can be concluded that the idea of universities accepting equal number of male / female students is not good of all .
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There is an opinion that universities should consist of equal parts of men and women , because society should give the same rights and possibilities for both sex . I ca n't agree with this opinion . Firstly , undulation should not depend on sex . The main criteria is personal abilities and way of thinking . If universities had accepted equal quantity of students in 16 - 19 centuries despite of their mental activity , modern society would never have industrial machines , planes and cues just because young scientist , who had innovating ideas , were not accepted university . Secondly , there are a lot of professions which require some physical or psychological features from warheas . It depends on character of work , its aims and audience . For example , it 's really difficult for men to work at women 's consultation centre because both doctor or client would be embarrassed . Besides , women would have problems working as machinery operator because sometimes , it 's necessary to repair huge machines quickly to prevent the catastroph . The majority of women just do not have such strong organism and muscles . Thirsty , such equality would negatively affect not only a person , who was not accepted by university , but also a person , who was . It would happen because student of university will be scere that employes would accept them equally like the university . However , such students do not pay attention for the fact that employers will take the smartest students . As a result of this equality students lose their ability for competition . All in all , university is " a factory " of knowledges , research and new inventions . We should not create barriers for ahibitious persons and accept persons , who does n't have interest in education , just because of sex equality . If it would happen , the development of science and society 's culture will stop .
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It can not be denied that men in comparison with women have always had more preferable social position for many countries . However , nowadays that problem does n't seem so crucial any more . It is generally agreed that both men and women have equal rights . That is why , it is declared that equal number of male and female students should be accepted to Universities . But is it really so ? Frankly speaking it seems to me that such idea is n't worth doing as students should be accepted in accordance with their mental abilities , exam results and personal talants and capabilities . Only in that case , justice and equality can be reached . Besides , it also must be pointed out that there is a tendency for both groups to choose particular subjects . It is is undeniable that math , physics , engeneering are more preferable among boys , while girls are interested in literature , languages , and so on . However , it ca n't be called an unehiable rule , and of course , there are a plenty of exceptions . What is more , population also need to be taken into account , as in some countries , the number of women prevaile . For instance , in some Universities with technical subjects there only 10 girls and 20 boys in group . Nevertheless , some would say , that such situation will be substantial for people to protect of their rights for getting education , especially for women who still can face the problem of discrimination . In conclusion , it should be pointed out that every person has equal rights regardless of sex , social position , money , religion and race . That is why strongly believe that equal number of male and female students does n't seem so vital for realising an opportunity of getting an education . The quantity of students should depend on their knowledge and capabilities and not on sex .
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The graph gives information about the population of people aged 65 and over . It shows certain proportion of population of this group of people between 1940 and 2040 in Japan , Sweden and The USA . In 1940 the percentage of elderly people in all three counties was nearly the same about 5 - 9 % . After that the percentages of population in the USA and Sweden began to rise slightly and by the year of 1980 reached the mark of 14 - 15 per cent . During that period of time the percentage of people under 65 in Japan began to decline and then was steady from 1960 to 1980 . From 2000 the percentage of elderly people in Sweden began to rise to 20 per cent . Moreover , from 2000 the percentage in the USA was on the same level representing 14 per cent . The graph also shows predictions to the future Beginning from the year of 2020 the population of people aged 65 and over will rise . It is set that in 2040 the percentages will reach their pick on the level of 24 - 26 per cent in all three countries . Overall , the proportion of the population aged 65 and over has been increasing from 1940 to nowadays in Japan , Sweden , the USA and it will continue to rise steadily .
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Some people think that there is a good idea to students study in groups , when the numbers of boys and girls would be equal , and Universities should provide this idea . In my opinion this idea is not so good . Firstly , the number of male and female students does not matter for studing process . I do n't have any thought about influence by it for study . Secondly , accepting equal numbers of both is almost impossible . Usually there are more girls than boys entering in humanitariaty Universities and more boys than girls entering in technical . Thirsty , the sex of student ca n't be significant point for decision to take him or her in University . The main categories are knowledges , skills and ability to study something new . From the other hand , groups with equal numbers of male and female students may be more balanced . It can be usefull for socialisation of young people . Some problems , which do n't conected with study , may be disappeared . An example from my own experience is 8 March , women 's day . In our group there are 20 girls and only 5 boys . That 's why our male students were not very happy in that day . However , despite that they were in minority they made a very good presents to girls . In conclusion , I would like to say that this idea is good for students . I wish there were equal numbers of boys and girls in my group . But I do n't think that it is important Universities should decide more significant problems linked with study .
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In 21st centary women 's rights are practically the similar with men 's rights . Women can vote and be voted , teach and work in international corporations , do business and play sports and even go to the army in some countries . I believe that all humans should have the same rights without an exception of university subjects . To my mind , there is no faculty where women ca n't study at all , but I pretend that both male and female must have the similar chances to pass the exams and go to the university . This system works in Russia . Teenagers pass their exams and university compare their results independently of the sex of person . The system when there are strictly half of men and half of women on each subject ca n't be honest because of the proportion . For example , in Sweden there are 60 % girls and 40 % boys . Using this system boys have more complicated competition than girls . The second argument against equal number is historical examples . Men were more successful than women in all spheres for all the countries . It is uninversale process : there are some exceptions and examples such as Nefertiti , Tatcher of Hewston , but in general men are more talented chairmen , doctors , cookers , presidents and sportmen . So , when there is an equal number of male and female students some men , who completed only with the boys , wo n't have an education even he is stronger in some sphere than the girl . I suppose that similar rights is one of the busical rules of modern world , but there is no chance to realize system of equal male and female students only because it is dishonest .
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Sugested chart below gives to us innformation about the proportion of the population aged 65 and ove between 1940 and 2040 in USA , Japan and Sweden . First of all , population of this people in Japan was the most little from 1940 to 2030 . From 1940 to 2000 the population aged 65 and over was about fife percent . In 2040 this population in Japan will be biger and consist of more than twenty fife percents . Americans citizens aged 65 and over were the biger number of people from 1940 to 1998 . In 1940 it was 10 percent and in 1999 it was 14 percents . After 2000 , line of this american population are increasing . I 2040 it consist of 23 percents of all population . Whith the help of this , we can say , that borning in the the USA was feeling all the time . The Sweden proportion of the population aged 65 and over has a lot of feelining and increasing . In 1940 this propotion was 5 percent from all population , and this was increasing to 20 percent in 2015 . After this , the line of proportion was feeling to 17 percents in 2030 , and after this inereasing to 25 percents in 2040 . As aresult , we can name the same dinamic of increasing proportion of the population aged 65 and over in this countries . This graph shows us , that qualer of the population is old people , and borning was decling or level of life in this countries was increasing .
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The graph illustrates the amount of people aged 65 and under over the period of 100 years between 1940 and 2040 . The countries of observation are Japan , Sweden and the USA . In the 1940 percentage of population aged 65 and over was the highest in Japan , then goes Sweden and the United States . Then population in Japan and Sweden increased slightly up to 10 % in 1962 and after to 15 % in 1982 . After that numbers of Japan started to decline slowly . However , they are supposed to rise rapidly after 2020 . Notisable , in the USA population of people aged 65 and over was declining between 1940 and 1990 . when it started to grow In the 2030 it 's predicted to be an enormous rise in population in America which will reach a pear of about 27 % in 2040 . Overall , the graph shows that in past population of 65 and over was fluctuating but in about 2030 numbers of these countries are considered to go up sharply .
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The graph presents the data about the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in the different countries . According to the graph , X axis indicates the number of per cents and Y axis indicates years . Here are presented 3 lines ( each line indicates each country ) - Japan , Sweden and USA . The lowest level of population 's proportion belongs to Japan . It reaches a low from 1960 to 1960 ( 3 % ) a after the start to increase rapidly - up to 27 % in 2040 , there Japan reaches it 's peak . Sweden a USA have approximatly the same level of proportion : Both countrier fluctuate since 1940 from 7 % a 9 % , after this to 12 % a 15 % in 1980 . But from 1995 Swedish line increases sharply to 20 % in 2015 , unlike US 's line , which starts to decrease slowly from 15 % to 13 % ( 1980 - 2020 ) . And , at last , both counties start in increase it 's levl of population proportion a in 2040 reach it 's maimum - Sweden - 25 % a US - 23 % . To sum up , the statystics indicates , that Japanese population 's proportion is changing slowly , instead of Swedish a American rates , which are fluctuated . But , the highest level of proportion is reached by Japan , in contrast with Sweden a US , which have lower maximum rate .
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There has always existed a discussion about the most suitable age when children should start learning foreign languages . Some people think children should be taught languages as early as possible while others believe it 's much better to start at secondary school . On the one hand , we have a scientific evidence that children are able to memorize large amounts of information better in their early ages . What is more , children who were taught foreign languages when they were little , did it more naturally . For instance , people who have parents speaking different languages make no effort when they learn two or three languages . As a result , such people can have a good command of several languages . On the other hand , some people claim that children have a right simply to have their childhood . That means that grown - ups should n't overload little children with information . Children should play games and enjoy their age . Besides , children can not make a wise decision about which languages they want to learn . Parents make such decision for them thinking that a language they have chosen for their child will be useful for him in the future . From my point of view , this is not fair . Personally , I tend to believe that children should start learning foreign languages when they are old enough for deciding for themselves which languages they really need and what to learn . That is why I think it 's not an advantage to start as early as possible . To conclude , children can start learning foreign languages in their early ages if they want it . Nevertheless , parents should not decide for their children .
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The table demonstrates the information regarding the number of people of different age who work in certain spheres in the UK in the period of time from 1998 to 2006 . A closer look at the table reveales that there is a tendency of decrease in the numbers of people working almost in all sectors , except technology . Interestingly , all the data in technology rose . Moreover , the biggest number of workers , that is 454375 , has been registrated in this sphere in 2006 . The significant surge in numbers was among people from 26 to 35 also in technology . The number there had changed by 2006 from 63889 to 454375 . As for education , the number of people under 25 fell from 6388 to 4987 , whereas the number of people from 26 to 35 increased to 115476 . In the same time , the number of people from 36 to 45 remained steady . To sum up , there is a clear tendency in hotel & catering and building of decrease in numbers , while in technology we can see the rise in numbers which can be explained by our modern type of life .
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Nowadays , the knowledge of foreign language gives more opportunities . Children start to attend classes of foreign languages since their early childhood . However , it is argued that such an early age is appropriate for study of this difficult subject . In this case , are there more advantages than disadvantages in learning language in primary school ? On the one hand , if a child starts to learn foreign language in primary school , he can become an expert in this language in the future . Moreover , children get used to what they study for a long period of time . Continuing this study , a child becomes to speak fluently . On the other hand , children do not understand what for they have to learn foreign language . Consequently , the study is likely to be inefficient in this age . Nevertheless , a child , who enters the primary school , has no idea about the number of subjects he will have to study . In this way , it is very tough for a child to study so much at first . However , I tend to think that the best way to learn language is to start it in the childhood . One more reason for it is that it is more easy to teach children . What I mean is that children have a good memory and it can be enough to make lessons attractive and funny , so that children will be interested in them . To conclude , there were presented both points of view about the advantages and disadvantages of learning foreign languages at primary school . However , the advantages are stronger . Many more people will agree with that . That is why a lot of children nowadays start learning foreign languages so early . I believe that it yields better results .
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The table provides information about quantity of people of various ages working in different sectors in UK in 1998 and 2006 . The diagram shows how much people were occupied by each of four spheres such as hotel and catering , building , technology and education . According to the given data the quantity of people in different age groups working in these sectors varied . The greatest number of people between 26 and 35 years old in 2006 were occupied by technology sector . It is remarkable that the number of people in building sphere was declicling depending on the age . So that the elder people the less its number was working there as in 1998 as in 2006 . Concerning the education sector more people worked there at the age of 36 - 45 in 2006 that is approximately equal to 125000 and just up the number of people in this sector at the age of 46 - 55 in 1998 . A closer look reveals that people worked at hotel and catering had not the same trand . The quantity of people occupied by this in 1998 was plammeting depending on the age while in 2006 the number reached the pick for people of 36 - 45 years which was more than 20000 . Overall , the trands in different sectors were various in 1998 and 2006 in UK . However , to the 56 - 65 years number of people occupied by these spheres was lower than for younger people .
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The better age for children to begin to study foreign languages has been argued for many years . Some people believe that it is worthy to start earlier at primary school . However , others argue that beginning to learn other languages at secondary school is better decision . So , this issue is going to be discussed underneath . It is generally believed that the knowledge we got in the childhood is better remembered . The same thing is with languages . At the primary school it is easier to learn something new . Moreover , organism of kids is more flexible and they can be learned the right accent and grammar faster than elder people . For instance , scientists proved that children under the age of 12 can be taught almost everything because of their minds . Furthermore , if language has been learned before 12 years old , the man can become bilingual person . Nevertheless , some people consider that it is better to begin leaning foreign language at secondary school rather than at the primary school . They suppose that a child should learn his or her own language well before commencing to be taught to other languages . What is more , they think that two or more languages can mix in the mind what causes the trauma for a child . However , languages present cultures . So , the child who started to learn foreign language earlier can be considered as broaden - minded . As a result these children have better communicative skills . To sum up , I would like to say : " So many men , so many minds " . Parents should decide what is more convenient for their child and when he or she should be taught foreign language . However , personally , I suppose that it is better to begin learning languages as earlier as possible , for example , at the primary school . To my mind , under these conditions children better understand the sense of language and even the culture of country where people speak it .
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Language is the best way of communication . In the modern world , where globlization is the priority of life , it is not enough to know just your native language , but also to speak other language . I support the idea of that kids should begin learning foreign language as soon , as possible , because the faster they become familiar with a foreign language , the better they will know it in their future life . My first argument is that if you want to see the result faster you need to start sooner . The earlier kids in primary school begin to learn new language , the better the result will be . Scientists claim that a child does n't comfuse two different languages but learns them more effectively . Secondly , adults are often afraid to make mistakes when they are speaking in a new language . This fear is one of the biggest barriers for a person in his efforts to speak freely . Otherwise , children do n't afraid of making grammar mistakes because basically they just repeat words and phrases in the way we hear them . Also , children have a better chance to get rid of an accent . They faster get used to the correct pronunciation and better feel the melody of a language . To summarize , I would like to say that it is very essential for children to begin learning a foreign language in the primary school . It has a lot of benefits . It also helps the kid to develop and gain more knowledge whic is good for a long run .
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The table illustrates the situation on most needed parts of job market . First of all , let take a look on a situation in sector of hotel and catering we can see a tendency of downword interests of younger people 18 - 25 in this sphere . in other ages the level of workers from 26 to 65 years old is gradually growing . In building sector we can see the number of interested people are plummefed - in 1998 the amount of people from 26 - 35 , who were involved in building was 79607 and in 2006 it becomes 46409 and we can notice this situation in every age . Thirdly in technology we can see an extremely increasing the level of people that working in that areas was growing over 70 percent - 454375 people from 26 to 35 , 193520 people from 56 to 65 and ofcourse young people - 187600 . In education we see absolutely different situation from technology part , the level of people who are interested in education is gradually tall , only the level of teachers from 26 to 35 years old are in approximately level . In conclusion I want to summarize some tendencies . Firstly , the most interesting sector in 2006 is technology , there we can see an extremely growing by contrast the most uniterested sector is building . In sectors hotel & catering and education the amount of workers are fluetuafed .
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Nowadays we are living in the era of communication . The best way of communication is languages , usually we study not only native language , but also foreign language . That 's why studying of foreign languages is on the most needed subjects . Most people sure that the studying of foreign language is better begin in primary school , other believe that it is better in secondary school . To my mind , the best way of studying foreign language is in the age of 6 - 7 . According to scientists in the age from 6 to 10 we have the maximum of ability to remember . When I was in primary school I remember that I learned about 50 per cent from my vocabulary . More over it easier to study foreign language , because in this step of education children formed the system of language from his native language , which are obligatory study on primary level . On the other hand , the study of foreign language is hard work , especially for children . Sometimes you really tried to study , for example , grammar or other difficult part of language . Also many children are loosing the interested to foreign language after 3 month from begging . In conclusion , I want to say that all disadvantages of studying foreign languages in primary school are temporary and most of them are not so great , as many thinks . As we all know the most interesting and valuable things are always difficult , and children also think in this way , but with greater enthusiasm children happiness , good qualificated teacher , who are understanding that they students is children .
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This table indicates the number of people in different age groups working in sectors in UK such as building , education and other . First of all , we can see that people aged 18 - 25 years , 26 - 35 years and 36 - 45 years were most popular specialists by sectore of technology . For example , there were 454375 workers in 2006 . Also in comparison with 1998 number of people from all groups were dramatically risen . We can see the same tendention by sector of education . In contrast to these sectors the number of people from all groups left the sector of building . There were 112565 specialists in age group 18 - 25 years old in 1998 year and it has fallen to 86430 workers . The same tendention was in all age groups . To summ up it all , we can say that people from all age groups prefer to go and work in sectors such as education and technology because the number of people by these sectors grew up .
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In this essay will be discussed a very important problem for society : is it good for children to learn foreign language at primary school ? Or maybe it will be better to learn it later ? I consider that the time at primary school is very important to use language skills . Kids in this age are not so prepared to learn chemistry or physics . And on this occasion they must spend their time on learning language . It can be a good use of their time at primary school . In contrast to this argument , it can be said that children must spend their time at primary school on learning basic things from chemistry , physics and other subjects . But please : what will they understand ? What kind of program must we create to teach kids these subjects ? Finally , it must be said that young children at primary school are better prepared to learn languages . Why ? They live in the age which allows them to have a better mind for learning languages . When do you learn your child to speak ? It happens when it is 2 - 3 years old . The scientists say that the best time for learning language is the age between three and seven years . It is the same time when a child begins to go at school . To summ up this information , I can say that my position is the following : we must use the childhood to teach our children foreign languages because it is the best time for it . We must have a good use of this age .
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It is believed that it will be more effective to start learning of foreign language in the childhood before going to the secondary school . I completely agree with this point of view because it has more advantages than disadvantages . Firstly , in primary school a child has more flexible memory and it is easier to remember lots of things for a long time . Everyone , I suppose , remember lots of children 's poetries which they learned when they were small kids , but it seems to be impossible to remind anything from older ages of your life . Secondly , starting to learn foreign language before secondary school will benefit in the future because it helps the child to develop memory 's skills . It is known that people who started to learn started to learn foreign language in the childhood are able to learn more foreign languages and it will be easier for them than for some who started this practice later . Nevertheless , it has some disadvantages . It can become a very hard challenge for a little child . For example , some kids had different psychological deseases because of high pressure from parents and teachers . To sum up the information I would like to say that starting to learn foreign language in primary school is a good practice but it should be a big challenge for child and he should take pleasure from studying .
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This table gives information about numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006 . In hotel or catering sector in 1998 the biggest group of people was presenting by people whose age from 18 to 25 years and the small group in this sector are people whose age started from 56 to 65 years , but in 2006 year situation in this sector was change . The biggest group in this sector are people whose age from 36 to 45 year . The number of this people are 21303 and the small group in this sector are people from 56 to 65 years , this fact illustrated that the small group in this sector from 1998 to 2006 years are people whose age group 56 years to 65 years . In building sector is the biggest group in 1998 people whose age started from 18 years to 25 years the number of these people are 112565 and in 2006 year , this age group are 319 too . The small group in this sector are 56 - 65 years , number ofthese people start from 5400 people in 1998 and in 2006 are 3287 people . The next sector is technology . The biggest age group in this sector in 1998 was 26 - 35 years and in 2006 year the number of people in this group was 454375 . In education sector in 1998 years group of people whose age from 46 to 55 year was the biggest group 125345 , but in 2006 year situation changed , and the biggest group was 36 - 45 year 125436 .
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Some experts nowadays believe that better to children learning foregein language at primary school rather than secondary school . On my opinion , when children start learning languages at primary school , they have more opportunities to develop their foregein skills than people who start learning foregein language at secondary school , because in secondary school children have a lot of home - work , than in primary and sometimes they do n't want to learn foregein language . But from the one hand , people who learn foregein language from primary school have a lot of positive fact , which they can use in their life , for example , they can read foregein books or magazines , watch foregein films . From the other hand , foregein language can annoy to people when they learned it from primary school
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The table illustrates the changing in proportional of people working in the difference sectors of the UK economy . It shows how has been changed the number of people from 1998 to 2006 in the five age groups . As is shown by the table the most significant increasing of number of people is in the technology sphere . Young people from 18 to 25 years old is prefer to do work connecting with new technology , the amount of them has rocketed in about 36 times less then for 10 years . In contrast , hotel and catering sphere become less popular for the youngs , it is the only sector , where the number of people are decreased from 1998 to 2006 . The sector of building has become more attractive for all age groups , but mostly for people from first and second groups ( 18 - 25 and 26 - 35 ) , for second group the number has rosen doubly . The changing in the sector od education was not so considerable as in another sectors , but in the fifth , the oldest group , was double increased .
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Nowadays question about learning foreign language for children at primary or secondary school more and more intrested parents , teachers in all of the world . This essay will examine different points of view about this intresting question . There are number of reasons why learning foreign language in primary school is better than in secondary . One of the positive aspect is that children start learning simple aspects of new languege and when he go to the secondary school he have base of new knowlege so , he learning new language very fast . For example , my sister start learning english in first class and she has n't proplem with otter subjects . She can speak very good on both languages . But learning foreign language on the other hand better in secondary school , and many parents agree with me . They think that children need to learning his national language very good , and that knowleges giving for children primary school . The goverment statictic shows that more pupiles leaning both language . But , some children knows foreing language better than national . In secondary school they have much problems whith national language and other sudjects . All in all , I think that learning forieng language is better in secondary school , than in primary , but , they need to learning both language in secondary school , because today people have globalization in all modern countries , which speak in many language .
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It is common opinion , that the earlier you pick up foreign language , the better . For this purpose parents try to choose special schools for their children or even hire a personal tutor . I have a strong doubt , that it all can work efficiently , if a child does n't want to study foreign language . I can prove it with some arguments . First of all , learning foreign language consists not only from the class work . There are lots of things , students must do at home . But it is common when a child does not like a subject and quits doing homework , reading extra material , etc . In this case , if a child is completely against the subject , making him to learn it is just a violation . It 's better to wait until secondary school , and things will probably change . Then , no one can persuade a child to learn something by heart . And in learning any foreign language learning by heart is extremely important . But at primary school a child can be just unprepared to learn big amounts of material . He can just lack ability to do this because of his or her young age . And the final point is that in primary school a child has no idea of who he is going to be in future , exept dreams . So it is not known , whether he or she would need a foreign language or not . In secondary school student 's attitude towards himself is much more clear , he can start to think seriously about a sphere to work in . To sum it up , I can say that it is better to wait with making a decision when to start learning foreign language with your children . Otherwise you risk to spoil school years of your daughter or son .
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In this essay will be shown the main features of a quantity of people in each age group working in a hotel , building , technology , education sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006 . To begin with , there are significant changes in almost all of these areas , exept of education . As we can see , there almost no changes in a number of evolved people , only the eldest age category became 2 times less . Secondly , there is a tendenec to work 2 times less people in building area in the age from 18 to 35 . However , we have a tremendous skyrocket of quantity of people in technology area in all age categories . The number of people increased almost in 20 times . Although , there is a little tendence to grow up in number of people in hotel & catering area , anyway almost insignificant . To sum up , we can see astonishing changes in technology sector , which grow up in 20 times . Also , some volafiles in hotel and catering sector , and in the end , the stable downfall of building sector .
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Nowadays many people says that the children must learn foreign language from primary school . Consequently they are absolutely right but when some children begin to learn language early they meet with any problems . What are this problems ? What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning foreign language in primary school ? When child began to learn , for example , English in primary school , he get the nessecary basis for the next studing . Certainly , he may learn the main words such as " mother " , " father " and the next step of studing woild be more easy . It is very important for the forming of the children 's own vocabulary . Good luggage of words is the main part of the learning of language . But it may have some disadvantages . Children in early ages have the ability to learn words only . They ca n't learn and understand tenses , because it is too hard for them . They will have an ability to learn tenses only from 8 or 9 years old . However children in early years may learn to speak on English . If they will watch TV cartoons in English they would be useful , beneficial and pleasurable for them because the best form of learning is the hearing of the foreign speech everyday . So , there are many interesting things in this problem . Learning foreign languge from primary school have more pleasurable effect for children then they are learning it from secondary school .
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In the modern world , there are many ways to express your ideas to the world . But some rules do n't allow to do it . It rules were made by govement . Is it normal or it needs in changes ? On the one hand , the freedom can give different ways to show what you can do . For example , Internet provides a lot of ways for showing photography , museums for showing pictures . You can record the song and give it to the radio station . As a result , people receive new music hit , beautiful photo or interesting film . Also , the freedom provide your chance to find , that you want to do in life . But is there only pluses ? On the other hand , such freedom can be dangerous for all . People use their possibility for bad ideas . It can lead to mistakes . Such as bad opinion or , in some cases , revolution . Our children listen to music in internet and we can not control all that they do . Some clips and video is awful . Is it OK , that child singing russian rap ? No . It should be under control . As a result , I disagree with this opinion . If there is no government restriction , it will have bad and negative result . I can not say , that government have to strongly control all actions , but there are must be different rules . In some cases , government have to support creative people to open and show their own talants and ideas and give him right way to do this .
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Nowadays there are many talants in all breanches of art , but all of this talanted people introduce themselfe in thair own way . And the most important quastion is that should goverenment allow it ? There are many factors for giving them freedom . The first , is that freedom can help to artist in his development , it means that nothing will have pressure to artist and this talanted person become master in his job . The second factor , is that giving freedom in expression can lead to somthing noval , somthing undiscovered . There are a lot of examples in history , for example 2Pac Shakure who was a creater of RAP music . Also , there are many factors opposite . The first , is that big amount of young generation are can'not diced what they want to do in thair life , and if they see something noval , like EMO , Funks it can abfect them . For example in Moscow city there are a lot of " skinheads " and it seems that there is no future for them . Next factor is that some kind of art like films are not for all people , it means that some of films can be watched only by people who aged 20 or less , so there are many restrictions , and if goverenment dicide to cancer it would lead to big problems . In conlusion , In my opinion goverenment must create new and update old restristion , becouse not all of us can decide what is better for us .
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The given chart shows the information about Post - school qualification in Australia in 1999 . It can be clearly seen that most popular post - school qualification for Men was skilled vocation diploma , about 90 per cent of men had this kind of diploma . On the second place is postgraduate diplome and the amount of men who decided to get it is 70 % . and According to the graph on the last place is undergraduate diploma , just 35 per cent . Considering females , it can be seen that the top percentage is in Undergraduate program , at least 70 % chose it . And on the last place is located skilled vocational diploma , just 10 % . To conclude , there is difference in men and women preferences , while women want get Undergraduate diploma , men want take skilled vocational diplome .
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Some people believe that creative artists should not be restricted or held up by the government and should express their emotions freely in any way they like . On the one hand , if the government forbid artists to express themselves there would be no new emotional pictures , music or other works , because people will be afraid about the government and measures that can be done for them . Art is also can not be controled by anyone else , because every person create in its own manner , if we do what he had been said it would not be art , it would be work . If the art was somehow forbidden we would n't have seen such great imagies or poems like works of Salvador Dali or Picasso or poems of Esenin . All of these artists were restricted during there lifetime . On the other hand , art nowadays is very expressive and there are too many agressive and dangerous things for mentality of society . Government should n't let little children to watch films about war and phisical or mental pressure or hear and read something like it . In the future these children can start to act this way . Also , art should not be the propogand for terrorism or extrimism , because it could have bad effect on the society and cause a lot of difficulties and problems . In my opinion , artists should not be restricted by the government to create , but the government should control what is shown on TV or in museums to society , especially children .
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The chart represents us the information about different types of post - school qualifications in Australia according to gender in 1999 . The most difference between male and female qualification was in achieving skilled vocational diploma : there were 90 % of males , who had this diploma , which is nine times larger , than female percentage . Also , among five different type of qualifictions , it was the largest part of males , involving in different qualifications . What is more , in having master 's degree and postgraduate diploma the share of males was also higher , than of females : 60 % and 70 % respectivily . However , there exists two types of education , where amount of women exceeded amount of men . In 1999 about 70 % of women received undergraduate diploma , which was the biggest gender difference for females among other types of qualification . Moreover , percentage of women , who achieved bachelor 's degree was also higher than men 's percentage , but it has decreased in comparison with undergraduate diploma : from 70 % to about 52 % .
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The chart below shows the difference in level of post - school qualification in Australia in 1999 . There is proportion of men and woman . First point of comparison is " skilled vocational diploma . A huge amount of man have this diploma , but only 10 percents of woman have this . Another point is postgraduate diploma . Twice higher number of man have this in comparison with woman . Also there is a 20 percent advantage of man in number of people , who having Master 's degree . From the another point of view , twice bigger amount of woman have an undergraduate diploma . One more point is Bachelor 's degree . More woman have this degree . In conclusion , it needed to be said that both gender are interested in post - school qualification and wanting to get it . But man and woman chouses a different diplomas and education programms . Also it needed to be said that man a fewer more interested in achieving an additional education and grade .
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The graph provides information about difference in amount at people 's degree according to the sex in 1999 . As can be seen to the chart , the most significant percentage in males gender group was in skilled vocational diploma and accounted for under 90 percent . In the contrast , about 10 percent of women had the vocational diploma and it was the least percentage in this gender group . Undergraduate diploma and Bachelor 's degree took more females than males in 1999 , but in Bachelor 's degree the percentage was approximately similar and was equal 54 and 57 percent for women and men respectivetely . On the other hand , in groups of postgraduate diploma and master 's degree the number of males was bigger than females . In conclusion , according to the graph males had the most quantity qualification in skilled vocational . Females took the most significant amount in undergraduate educational sector .
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Arts play the important part in people 's life . Sometimes the goverment try to control of artists but it is so nessesary ? This essay will eximene different points of view on the free art and my opinion on the these theme . Some people think that the morden art need to a control . The main reason why today many artists should not do what they want is the bad influence on a society . Today there are many perforanses and installations where people cut themselves , harm their health and body is destroyed . Throuout of the 20 centiry in USSR all the art was restriction by the goverment and it was the whole culture , that was learnd to be great people , who do n't lie and kill . On the other hand , art it is the free profession and there are many examples when without the goverment artists do really beatiful things sush as drawing and paintings of Renessans . Artists need the fredoom because their works help to show the society that they really feel and think about some qustions . For example , under the disaster in Ukraine , in Mosckow there are many pictures in streets . They try to attract attantion to some society , ecological , political and other problems . Marina Abramovich keep money on the safe of the our planet , she take video perfomcences and then sell it . All in all , the art influenses on the society . I think art do n't need the control because artists are creative people and they must not do what people want .
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Nowadays there are a lot of artists who wanted express their feeling , ideas and share them to people . My essay will about this artist should be given freedom to do everything what they want or not . First of all it creative artist would n't be allowed express their own attitudes , they could stop doing anything and developing yourself . In this case the community can lose future famous artists or actris . The second reason why the goverment should n't stop artist because in this case the culture of country would n't develop . On the other hand if the goverment give fully freedom to artist , they could doing something incorect for society , so should be particular rules which artish should follow , because if the rules will miss the choces can be start . Also goverments can support artists who only start their way , for example invest money in different organisations or institute where artist stading . Furthermore they can help to organisate some exsibitions , where artist can show their works to the public . In conclusion , I thinks that artist should be given freedom , when they create something , but in spite of it they should follow some rules . Also in some cases for example when the artist need money that eat , they can go on the street to work , they do n't have another exist .
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Nowadays contemporary art plays a very important role . People often use it at work and at home . Art helps an individual to be a person . But the government puts limits . People since ancient years always wanted to express their inner emotions through drawings . To this day the painting is very popular trend . Many paintings depict real , not some standart , for instance DaVinche Leonardo . But it happens that not all the work taken seriously . Any art should attract attention , arouse emotions , both positive and negative creativity should be free . I know a lot of creative people , who show themselves in music , pictures , film , art , paintings convey the most unusual emotions . They make people happy . Creativity should not be limited if there no bad things . Much depends on experience . Person knowing a little can not competently provide the creativity . People are not interested . A person who knows what to do is always a demand . In movies so often happens . There is censorship . For example when it is impossible to show a personal touch , smoking and other . I agree with this . But un unusual view of the world that a person is trying to convey is always good . Among people should be more involved art people , because nowadays they are becoming less and less . Let our children from an early age will make art .
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On the chart that is introduced we can see different levels of post school qualifications in Australia and different percentage of men and women who held them in 1999 . The first is skilled vocational diploma and only 10 % of female held . In oppozite about 70 % of women took Undergraduate diploma , and just 40 percent of men hold this qualifications . It is less then a half of men percentage in skilled vocational diploma , but it is higher on 10 % percant of women who held f Postgraduate diploma . It may be said that the Bachelor 's degree has almost the same amount of females and males , but only has percentage of women little bit higher than men . Others post school qualifications have a great amount of men a little level of women .
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The chart shous the percentage of post - school qualifications in Australia . There is the proportion of male and female who held this qualifications in 1999 . At first we see , that the highest percentage of post - school qualifications consist of men with skilled vocational diploma . There is about 90 percent of people . But the percentage of females with this diploma is the lowest in this diagram . The percentage of people with qualifications with undergraduate diploma and Bachelor 's degree and Master 's degree are quite middle . In all the percentage of women is the same as men . But the percentage of females with undergraduate diploma is rather higher than the percentage of males . There is about 70 percent . If is lower by about 38 percent . All in all we can see , that the percentage of females and males with post - school qualification are quite the same . But the level of men with skilled vocational diploma is the highest in 1999 .
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There is a problem of expression your own opinion in society nowadays . It is namely about the creative people such as designers , artists , etc . sometimes they have troubles with government and laws . This essay will observe this situation and give examples . Today , the creative profession are very popular . Everyone tend to express their feel and emotion . For example famous designer or photographer make the exhibitions with their works and projects . It is the means of expression of feels for ordinary people . However , the designers and artists who have no money to realize such events try to tell about their emotions on the city walls or in the Internet . A good example is graffiti artists . They have a talent which should be realise on the big space , but sometimes it is very difficult to find a needed place . The artists have not a access to place they need . On the other hand , the government have to look after the city life . Some - times the creative people do the things that can not be called like a moraly . The historical buildings are painted by the bad words . As a result of that the children learn more bad things from the streets . In case of his government should protect the culture of the city . There is needed to create a list of rules which is able to control the behaviour of the creative citizens . But there should be included the rights to freedom of expression , even though the government will not encourage artists . But nowadays , in Moscow the government likes to encourage the young creative people and tends to call they to improving the city space . All in all , the creative expression of feels needed to be controled by the governments . In my opinion it will be the best way of developing a social sphere of life by a tandem of ordinary creative people with the governments .
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The bar chart gives information about level of education in percentage between males and females . As can be seen , the large percentage of males is skilled vocational diploma , it made up about 90 percent . The least number of males has undergraduate diploma which account for 37 percent . In the second place there is the postgraduate diploma . The chart also shows that the smallest level of females is skilled vocational diploma , it consist of only 10 percent . The level of males exceeds the level of females almost by 10 percent . The large percentage of females which have qualification is undergraduate diploma , it is about 70 percent . In part " Bachelor 's degree " the levels of both sex have little differences : males - 46 percent , females - just under 50 percent . To sum up , the proportion of men and women of post - school qualification has a big disparities . Almost in every part of qualification the percentage exceeds of males . The females have the level under than males .
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