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e8054742d3be | 20A42E81AC2B | They just doing hard work. One day some peoples visit this village and they deside. They will be teach to them. Then, they are start the classes . Some people think it's crazy. When everybody learning they know it's good for everybody. They takeing online or video class for how they are makeing graden? how they are gro... | Evidence | Ineffective |
ae272c230faa | 20A42E81AC2B | My second reason is I think the peoples they don't doing any study they will be face the any problems | Claim | Adequate |
69a6510558da | 20A42E81AC2B | This why they need to study. some people thing study is bad thing of life. How we solve this problem? The people teach to them many things for examples:
1. Girls under 18 they don't get the married.
2. how control the birth?
3. They are need a nice future.
4. Boys and Girls need the education. | Evidence | Adequate |
5dfc4f6aea7a | 20A42E81AC2B | My third reason is I resoonse for the reasons because whole world peoples need the good educaton or genertion of future. | Claim | Adequate |
b773be4633e8 | 20A42E81AC2B | Because who didn't get study they no how can talk to peoples. I agree for that because peoples need the educatoin. The village people now go to school and they send to child in school. They students help to them everything what they need to every daily life. | Evidence | Adequate |
00092b4d8eca | 20A42E81AC2B | My conculation is one second, one minute, one day, one months,and one year peoples need the study or education. Because people don't get study the will be get poor. I'm agree with this school they deside good idea for the village peoples. The learning is don't finish because will leaning every day some thing new. Study... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
bf5cf0a97108 | 21C75B3F290A | For the past few hundred years, school systems have consisted of one specific format, where students go to a place of learning and are taught by teachers. But now, with easier access to better technology, this school system is changing. Some schools are offering distance learning as an option to attend classes from hom... | Lead | Effective |
406595eb15e4 | 21C75B3F290A | Although many say that distance learning encourages laziness and creates a communication barrier between students and others, distance learning is in fact beneficial to the student | Position | Effective |
b132f803f074 | 21C75B3F290A | for learning at home helps to block out the other distractions that come with school, making learning a more stress-free, focused, and effective process. | Claim | Effective |
fa158cfad1c3 | 21C75B3F290A | However, many argue that the student would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home, for distance learning would encourage laziness and create a communication barrier between students and others | Counterclaim | Effective |
5567ef18d44e | 21C75B3F290A | Understandably, these points are legitimate, for the student could easily choose not to join the online conference to their class, for no teacher could force them to go to their next class. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
fee96ff6e022 | 21C75B3F290A | But this is just the same concept as skipping class. A student has their own free will, and may choose whether they go to their class or not, or whether they attend their video conference to their class as well. Laziness is not encouraged by distance learning, but instead students have the choice to either attend their... | Evidence | Effective |
b0529ca5ea27 | 21C75B3F290A | Many also point to a communication barrier between the students and their peers and teacher. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
fda29e555e47 | 21C75B3F290A | However, the technology today of online and video conferences, such as Skype, can offer both auditory and visual interaction between the student and others. | Rebuttal | Adequate |
2ca6d014d1fb | 21C75B3F290A | It's exactly like a classroom setting, with the only difference being that the student isn't physically there. In the future, with even more and more technological advances, these virtual interactions will become even more effective. Distance learning would also help to block out the other distractions that come with s... | Evidence | Effective |
ec5bdae0bced | 21C75B3F290A | Distance learning would help get rid of the other distractions that come with going to school, such as a student's social life. | Claim | Adequate |
8109c144b14b | 21C75B3F290A | The main purpose of school has always been one goal: to educate the student and teach them how to learn. But inside schools many distractions are present. The social life of a student, whether that be talking to another student during class, or interactions in the hallway, has become a huge distraction to learning. How... | Evidence | Effective |
fe52d234766b | 21C75B3F290A | A more stress-free learning experience, due to the removal of school-related distractions, would make the process of learning much more effective for the student, fulfilling the main goal of schools: to educate the student and teach them how to learn | Claim | Effective |
15f8ba5b080c | 21C75B3F290A | Stress due to school has become a major problem in our school systems. Students staying up until the early hours of the morning to do homework is an example. However, what students don't know, is that if the distractions of school are eliminated, by learning at home through online or video conference, they would be muc... | Evidence | Effective |
52a18e75772d | 21C75B3F290A | Learning at home helps to block out the other distractions that come with school, making learning a more stress-free, focused, and effective process. With the process of learning becoming more effective, students would be able to learn at unprecedented rates and would be ready to tackle the problems of our world. Becau... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
bc24b9830c1c | 22164E215B04 | I don't think students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
| Position | Adequate |
5f0314d1aa85 | 22164E215B04 | Because, students who stays home must of the time they will turn Lizzy, and they're not going to do work.
Also, they will be behind, and it will be hard for them to study by them self. | Claim | Adequate |
d5a3de866456 | 22164E215B04 | As a result, when you have people who are trying to study, you going to be in the mood by doing work and getting homework done. such as, their is a lot of would help other students by homework and other things. | Evidence | Ineffective |
285b1658b705 | 22164E215B04 | For students who does online school will not have teachers to help them if they need by studying for a quiz or a classwork.
| Claim | Adequate |
95bd969e7dd6 | 22164E215B04 | so going school it will be easier to study because they going to have teachers.
And be living the moment, which is going to make most of the students study more, because they going to have students and teachers and be studying as a team.
As a result, at school you not just learning from the teachers, you also will le... | Evidence | Adequate |
16cbc68c99b1 | 22164E215B04 | Also, at school you will find a guidance to help you by scheduling for classes, and piking the right classes. | Claim | Adequate |
8fe89b509e0a | 22164E215B04 | If you are planing for college the guidance will help you by getting scholarship from college or sports team.
Also, for students who like to play sports will have the chance to play sports with school team, and will help them by getting a scholarship. | Evidence | Adequate |
e36f63856aa9 | 22164E215B04 | So if students stay home must of the time it will be hard for them to have relationships by having friends.
| Claim | Adequate |
a89cc9cf7741 | 22164E215B04 | That will be a problem by studying because the only thing they are doing is studying so it's going to be boring.
As a result if they need help by searching they can go to the library, and they will find what they are looking for But, at home they will only thing they have Google search from. | Evidence | Adequate |
6212f4e8613f | 22D938F5E0E2 | Many Public and private schools have advanced in many ways throughout the past decade. Schools all around the world have weaved technology advancements into the classroom and outside of the class room to help get students more actively involved in school related activities and lessons. Technology is a blessing and curs... | Lead | Effective |
0fddcb9172ea | 22D938F5E0E2 | students would not benefit at all through at home learning than they would at school. | Position | Effective |
df6c471e2e7e | 22D938F5E0E2 | In order for all students to successfully climb up the social ladder, they need to have one major trait that can help all peers make connections, bonds, and even relationships, this skill is called social skills | Claim | Effective |
d72a489701e0 | 22D938F5E0E2 | There was a study done at Workman State College where scientist studied students who stayed home for the whole school day and then studied students who actually went to school for the whole day. Both groups of students were learning the same material, the group at home got a video of their teacher explaining everything... | Evidence | Effective |
847c336ca92b | 22D938F5E0E2 | While being at school you do not just learn about how to solve for 'x' in mathematics or who won the Mexican-American War, students subconsciously grow and learn more about their community throughout grade school. There is this whole other community aspect of learning going on that most do not even notice. | Claim | Effective |
1b7712f2097e | 22D938F5E0E2 | What is truly important about getting up in the morning and going to a gigantic building filled with hundreds of people is that it is filled with family, friends, neighbors, and even strangers. Meeting all of these people and learning new things about them can really strengthen the school-wide community connections. Ad... | Evidence | Effective |
ecfdae44b85d | 22D938F5E0E2 | Going to school everyday and seeing you teachers and classmates is a prime and simple example of eye-to-eye learning. Eye-to-eye learning is basically being with another person in real life, not over a screen, and actually talking and learning form them. | Claim | Effective |
c27ca1556c05 | 22D938F5E0E2 | Almost every kid remembers at least one first day of school memory when they were little or even this past year. Well, that connection you made with other students and your teacher was an official eye-to-eye connection made. Unlike looking at a screen four hours on end while being taught, having the physical opportunit... | Evidence | Effective |
df6eab134951 | 22D938F5E0E2 | Although being at home is a quiet place to focus | Counterclaim | Adequate |
fca16c48fb28 | 22D938F5E0E2 | in order for a student to fully develop into a successful person you have to have, social skills, community awareness, and be able to understand eye-to-eye learning | Rebuttal | Adequate |
fbf59f6078bc | 22D938F5E0E2 | The way successors achieve these three skills easily is if you attend actual classes and school related events, students would not benefit anymore at home through virtual learning anymore than they do at school. Even though there are so many technology advancements, schools world-wide need to realize that many staying ... | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
a8b2a30b7c54 | 233A35247566 | Online learning is a controversial topic among traditional and modern educators. The rivalry between face to face classes and online classes is not necessary. Encouraging students to use their resources to learn in the best way for them is what is most important. All students have different learning abilities and strat... | Lead | Effective |
3d3ec94b6a85 | 233A35247566 | Overall, providing online classes as an option for students opens the window to success. | Position | Effective |
3cafb1a241d7 | 233A35247566 | It is obvious that almost every student has a different way of learning. Some people like to watch videos to grasp concepts. This is a resource that is not always available during school. While taking a course online, students have free range of the educational side of YouTube and the internet, which will benefit them.... | Evidence | Effective |
6378841b66e7 | 233A35247566 | Online schooling provides options for students, which only betters the education system. | Claim | Effective |
289312099dfb | 233A35247566 | School systems have to make certain rules to keep their students safe, but sometimes the rules take away from learning. Online classes give students a chance to relieve themselves from the strict school rules, and focus on doing their best work. | Claim | Effective |
961c088f9490 | 233A35247566 | For example, while most students are cooped up in the same building all day, a student who is taking a course at their house can choose to complete their work outside. Working outside will stimulate the brain and can improve the results of the assignment. Yet, this is not an option in most schools. Online classes open ... | Evidence | Effective |
a40b937989c9 | 233A35247566 | Another benefit to working at home is the availability of resources. In school, phones are not permitted. Because cell phones are the most used part of technology by students, they may be a good tool to use during education. The ability to take notes on cell phones is a benefit that comes with online schooling. For som... | Evidence | Effective |
fff4a07b1400 | 233A35247566 | There are still people who believe that online school cannot compare to traditional learning. Face to face education may seem to have an advantage over learning through a screen. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
d61f3c8b10a6 | 233A35247566 | However, there are many misconceptions about online classes. Although it may seem like the student is taking the class alone, there are always others enrolled at the same time | Rebuttal | Adequate |
f63d7ea8a2b2 | 233A35247566 | Many online courses require video chats or discussion boards between these students. This is still collaboration, even though it is not in person. It is necessary to collaborate with others in person and online. In this era, online communication is just as important and valid. | Evidence | Effective |
0f3b2f55c711 | 233A35247566 | Furthermore, students must create a balance between in person learning and online learning. Everyone should try out different things to see what works best for them. Sticking with one way of living leads people to stay stagnant in their progress. Although some argue against online classes, they are a necessary option s... | Evidence | Effective |
a34a9f3afd16 | 233A35247566 | The differences in education are what makes it beautiful. Every person should be able to voice what works for them and what doesn't. Educators should support these differences and encourage students to improve, even if it requires a different school system. If school rules or strict bell schedules are holding a student... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
83b7a8620feb | 23C6ED53A179 | Do you ever find yourself asking for advice or opinions from other people? I know I certainly do, and so do most others I know. Sometimes, gathering a group of opinions can really help someone make a good choice for themselves, which can also help benefit others around them. | Lead | Effective |
ea83fdfb299e | 23C6ED53A179 | In this essay, I will be going over two reasons as to why talking to more than one person for advice can help you make a better choice, | Position | Effective |
c7da12a28f70 | 23C6ED53A179 | these reasons being a more majority choice type thing, | Claim | Adequate |
f01c634be783 | 23C6ED53A179 | the fact that having other people explain other sides of arguments can help you come to a better conclusion of what to do. | Claim | Adequate |
c38f870e6c3e | 23C6ED53A179 | The first reason I will be going over is how when you have more people giving you their opinions, the more you will notice one option has more people supporting it. | Claim | Effective |
6296bac522bd | 23C6ED53A179 | Setting up a poll on an Instagram story or Twitter is a prime example of this. Sometimes, you will see people posting a poll for what they should wear to an event. When that poll is over, you get to see which option got the most votes, and that can help you make your final decision. I have set up polls on Twitter many ... | Evidence | Effective |
cca0594aee5e | 23C6ED53A179 | This next reason is more for real life situations, and that is how other's opinions can help you see another side of a story. Sometimes, when someone makes us upset, we tend to lash out and act in ways that we normally wouldn't if we were calmer. After getting in arguments with friends or family members, people will of... | Evidence | Effective |
c62aee375ede | 23C6ED53A179 | Seeing the other side of things can really help choose what piece of advice to go through with. | Claim | Effective |
25bdf4857ab4 | 23C6ED53A179 | These are the reasons I believe that asking multiple people for advice can really help you make decisions. Choices in general are very hard to make, especially if you're an indecisive person like I am, so asking other people for help is something I do often. I've received plenty of good advice from when I've had issues... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
27882fa5fd66 | 242E9BA55C0C | Distance learning is an ever-growing way of reaching students that are unable, or unwilling, to attend a traditional school | Lead | Adequate |
0039c840caeb | 242E9BA55C0C | Creating a way for students to attend classes from home is a very practical and useful innovation, and through it, many students will receive education that they might not otherwise get. | Position | Effective |
231cc26bd75b | 242E9BA55C0C | By implementing computer learning on in a widespread manner, students from all backgrounds and economic standpoints will be able to learn and succeed. | Claim | Effective |
8a2942951f70 | 242E9BA55C0C | Students will also be able to stay up to date with schoolwork if an illness or other injury prevents them from going to school for long amounts of time. | Claim | Effective |
cec4c60b2103 | 242E9BA55C0C | Distance learning can also help those who are unable to access a school, such as rural families.
| Claim | Effective |
2ff2fb204b87 | 242E9BA55C0C | One of the leading arguments for the cause of widespread poverty in inner cities is poor education programs. In areas such as Generic_City, schools are understaffed and underfunded, leading to very high dropout rates. Families that can afford to, send their children to private schools, often costing thousands of dollar... | Evidence | Effective |
899455b2e115 | 242E9BA55C0C | Distance learning could solve this problem. By creating a county wide virtual learning database, students can pursue their education without having to be in school. | Claim | Effective |
4d9175583542 | 242E9BA55C0C | Although some of these students may not have access to a computer, | Counterclaim | Adequate |
7b6a95c4f7fd | 242E9BA55C0C | libraries are available for those driven and determined to better themselves.
| Rebuttal | Effective |
15ce68a9c6e5 | 242E9BA55C0C | There are many cases in which an injury or illness precludes students from going to school. Both physical and mental health issues can result in the inability to attend traditional school. Distance learning could be a lifesaver for these students. | Claim | Effective |
9c83a78b368a | 242E9BA55C0C | By giving them access to lessons, homework, and tests, they are able to stay up to date and current, even if being out of school for several months. Car accidents are a leading contributor to students having to stay home for long periods of time. Injuries to the spine or head can result in limited mobility or capabilit... | Evidence | Effective |
235a3835eaac | 242E9BA55C0C | Rural areas in states across the U.S. often have very low standards of education. Due to people living very spread out and secluded from one another, school systems are haphazard and low quality. Students in rural areas also often have to help out with either a farm or a business and are unable to attend school during ... | Evidence | Adequate |
17fa58ea9939 | 242E9BA55C0C | This is where distance learning plays a part. Through the use of computers to access video lessons, students can take classes on their own schedule and from their own homes. | Claim | Effective |
fbd95a304c4e | 242E9BA55C0C |
Although distance learning seems like an ideal way to learn, there are several downsides to it. One of which is a less flexible curriculum. Due to lessons being in video form, teachers are unable to tailor lessons to fit the needs of particular students or classes. | Counterclaim | Adequate |
7b986a962ee4 | 242E9BA55C0C | This can lead to students being unresponsive and not being able to learn the material due to the way that it is presented. | Evidence | Adequate |
cf4f1c82acca | 242E9BA55C0C | Because of this, students may have to seek out additional resources to fully understand the material that is being presented to them.
| Rebuttal | Adequate |
26e009aa129e | 242E9BA55C0C | Distance learning is an exciting and innovative form of learning that is being put into place around the world. Through the use of online lessons and videos, students who do not have access to traditional schools are given a chance to learn. Distance learning gives a voice to those who are often overlooked and forgotte... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
53a954f7f254 | 2446D9BE78B8 | Some people do not see the need to spend the effort in questioning multiple people to gather information and opinions, but it is a crucial step in research. They see it as only an extra step that can be skipped over without thought, but in reality, only seeking information from one person leads to incorrect, biased inf... | Lead | Effective |
8f75ede6d99e | 2446D9BE78B8 | Though it takes time, seeking advice from multiple sources allows for more information and different viewpoints, leading to a better outcome. | Position | Effective |
8a94f5774410 | 2446D9BE78B8 | Different people have different viewpoints and opinions. If you only seek advice from one person, you only see one side of what could happen, rather when you ask multiple sources, you're given a greater sense of what to do and how to go about it. | Claim | Effective |
ea9d65c3585c | 2446D9BE78B8 | According to the New York Research Center for Populations and Society, on a societal level, nothing but basic morals are agreed on and considered to be universally accepted. What is accepted in the United States may not be considered normal in India, or the other way around. On a smaller scale, this may be less evident... | Evidence | Effective |
9611d7f7c219 | 2446D9BE78B8 | you do not know the accuracy of the information gathered when only from one person | Claim | Effective |
31d30ffc2f28 | 2446D9BE78B8 | They may have learned the information incorrectly, which can lead to bad advice. As an example, lets say a new mother was seeking advice on how to raise their child safely. According to the Family and Consumer Science program, 68% of people under the age of 25 do not have antiquate information on how to perform childca... | Evidence | Effective |
9bfdc74f76c9 | 2446D9BE78B8 | A similar reason to seek advice from multiple people is bias. | Claim | Adequate |
f0a3d225e7c1 | 2446D9BE78B8 | Bias can be hard to detect in many cases, especially when the thing biased to is smaller and less prevalent. Research done by the California Critical Thinking and Development Organization, 72% of people were unable to identify bias in articles. For what seems like such a simple skill, it is surprising in the amount of ... | Evidence | Effective |
11ecfbee48b1 | 2446D9BE78B8 | As all evidence suggests, taking advice from multiple people is the right course of action to receive the best information. When people only take advice from one person, they allow for many mistakes and mishaps. Next time you are trying to make a decision that will have the best outcome, rather than only asking for adv... | Concluding Statement | Effective |
4f663ae88156 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | Life can get difficult sometimes, and we might not always know what to do. No one wants to walk into a big decision blind, though. So, what can we do? Most people ask for advice. But just one person's opinion and experience may not be enough. | Lead | Adequate |
e720a32cf8c9 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | it's good to talk to multiple people. | Position | Adequate |
b8574ad610e1 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | Talking to more than one person gives you multiple points of view, | Claim | Adequate |
36772338de3a | 24BC9F21DAE0 | more information | Claim | Ineffective |
de09d096ca33 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | several different experiences. | Claim | Ineffective |
8c16a200d9e6 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | A well-rounded perspective is key to making good decisions. Seeking multiple opinions tells you what the most popular opinion is. This lets you know what most people did, and how it worked out for them. Multiple stories also means multiple sides of the same subject. You get all the opinions so you can formulate your ow... | Evidence | Adequate |
e35d42ff41d1 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | Having multiple perspectives on something allows you to know how your decision will affect your future | Claim | Adequate |
262f5b951eae | 24BC9F21DAE0 | The more people you talk to, the more information you'll get. | Claim | Adequate |
ccaea00a2545 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | Everyone will know how his-or-her section works. Yiu get to know all the moving parts before jumping in. Plus, more parts mean more options, and more paths to choose from. There are more ways to go, and you can forsee what's at the end of all of them. Knowing all the information gives you valid ways to form an opinion.... | Evidence | Adequate |
5ebd2706244d | 24BC9F21DAE0 | As you speak with more people, you'll hear more of their experience | Claim | Adequate |
1e380c6e4ac7 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | People will take your opportunity to share their story, and offer the experience you'll need. Their story can guide you in the right direction. When you walk the twists and turns of your decision, you'll have an idea of the end result. You can plan ahead to get the ending you want. If you walk in without experience, th... | Evidence | Adequate |
2eaa9ca9a1a5 | 24BC9F21DAE0 | Whenever it's time to make a tough decision, it's a better idea to take advice from multiple people instead of just one. You get different ways of looking at a situation, more information about each choice, and many different experiences. Talking to multiple people results in a much healthier decision making process. | Concluding Statement | Adequate |
79cdcd654cac | 25C5C068B05E | People ask for advice for many things that they might struggle with most people are able to help by just giving them their opinions. Some people ask for advice and opinions in topics such as school, work, and sports. | Lead | Adequate |
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