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It is important and completely healthy to ask for advice or help.
Position
Adequate
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When should you ask people for advice or their opinions? You can ask whenever you might need it or want it. For example in sports, work, and school. you can ask anyone if they ever need advice. With something or someone, and you can help them by just listening or talking to them about it. And mainly try and understand ...
Evidence
Ineffective
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asking multiple people is also good so that you get more opinions that could help you.
Claim
Adequate
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Writing and essay in school can be very stressful and difficult. But you can help someone in school by giving them advice on a essay that they're stressed about or maybe just need some help. Another is taking a test, taking a test is very nerve racking and scary but all you might need to do is just relax take a deep br...
Evidence
Ineffective
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In work talking to your boss for any reason is very difficult or scary.
Claim
Adequate
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25C5C068B05E
One because you never know what they might say to you it could be good news or bad news which is always hard. A good topic is getting promoted or something very special at work that could boost your confidence into wanting to keep improving or doing better. Getting a big part at work is also very exciting and you might...
Evidence
Adequate
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In sports learning new things or skills is very hard or maybe it might be easy for you and make you want to keep improving.
Claim
Adequate
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25C5C068B05E
Pep talks are also a very good way to figure out what coming that your coaches might be preparing you for in the future or before a game or your about to preform. Being nervous is a huge part of playing sports because you never know what might happen or what could happen so all you need to do is stay positive and ready...
Evidence
Ineffective
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25C5C068B05E
Overall it is very important and very good to ask people for advice or opinions so that they have an idea about whats happening and it overall just makes them not as stressed and nervous. So whenever you think you might need help or advice with anything dont be shy or nervous to ask everyone needs advice or an opinion ...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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The schools offer is option that the students to attend classes from home by of online or video conferencing
Lead
Adequate
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to the students is not benefit
Position
Ineffective
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Sometimes to the students not learned and this can to affect to the student with his learning.
Claim
Adequate
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The teacher can to make a video conferencing but they not know if the student to make all effort for learn.
Claim
Adequate
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The schools can offer is option but the teachers not know if the students is learning
Claim
Adequate
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this option has benefit, but also not has benefit because for a students is important to take his classes in home but for others not the put importance to the studio. For example: The school to get me the option of study in home i know that not learned and for me is better to study in the school because in home not wou...
Evidence
Ineffective
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The teaching for online or video conferencing not to be the same is in the school that in a video conferencing or online because everything to be different
Claim
Adequate
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we in the school can to ask help to a companion when we not understand some and to be a big help have somebody that us help in thing that we not understand. We have classes in home to remove the benefit of to meet to other people and also in online or video conferencing not the to show as to make a exposition in public...
Evidence
Adequate
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A few students to say "Is better study in the school because have more benefit and us help more for the future also us to learn much thing as be sociable, respectful and also be a big person.
Counterclaim
Adequate
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25DE215F8B82
The school has much thing that to us the help in the school a few students to take in serious his studio but always a few student that not take in serious his studio sometimes only to go to school to trouble.
Evidence
Ineffective
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I know that a few students to prefer study in online but i know that not to be the same because only would be watch the computer.
Rebuttal
Adequate
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My opinion that the better option is study in the school because have more opportunity for that us learn and in the school have more benefit for us life and the option for the students to attend classes from home not is good because to remove much oportunity of to meet a new people. Always is better study in the school...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Study shows that asking for peoples opinions for advice,makes you 90% more certain on your decision. When I ask my friends for advice,I end up having a lot of opinions and that helps me make a better choice.
Lead
Adequate
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you have more ideas
Claim
Ineffective
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be more certain
Claim
Ineffective
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get a greater understanding of it
Claim
Ineffective
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Getting more than one opinion can give you more ideas.
Claim
Adequate
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When you ask your friends for advice,you'll end up having multiple ideas and opinions. Those opinions and ideas will help you to narrow down your final choice. Some people might give you the same response. If theres a repeated opinion or idea that might be what people think is the best choice. By having a range of idea...
Evidence
Adequate
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it can make you more certain on your final choice.
Claim
Adequate
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When you narrow ideas down,you'll be more certain. All of the ideas will be narrowed down into one single idea which would be your final choice. When you ask your friends for advice,they'll help you. With their help,you might just know what your choice is going to be. Some of your friends might have been through the sa...
Evidence
Adequate
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you'll get a greater understanding of what you're asking advice for.
Claim
Adequate
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Your friends will tell you many different things. That means you'll see things in many different point of views. Some of your friends know what you're going through so they have a better understanding of it. You'll understand it the same way they understand it because they told you what they know from it. Having many o...
Evidence
Adequate
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Seeking multple ideas will end up helping you make a better choice.
Position
Adequate
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Having more than one opinion will give you more ideas,be more certain,and have a greater understanding. i think that having multiple opinions is good because it'll make finding a good choice easier.                          
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Many people seek several opinions for advice because it helps them piece together the ideas they get and create a better way of going about something
Position
Effective
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. It lets them see multiple ways of doing something while also allowing them to separate the good advice from the bad advice. This is why people get advice from the people they trust. The person seeking advice knows that they will put thought into the advice they give them.
Evidence
Effective
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Everyone thinks differently and has their own perspective on everything. This is why many people have very different ideas and opinions
Claim
Effective
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Listening to another person's opinions can open your mind to the different ways of doing something. It can also help some people to grow as a person and be able to take their own advice. In order to get the most well rounded advice a person must ask a variety of different people. Often times someone will only ask one ...
Evidence
Effective
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Another reason why a person may ask several people for advice is because there are many people who give bad advice.
Claim
Adequate
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Unfortunately some people don't want to help and only want to focus on themselves. So they give a person poor advice in hopes that the person will stop asking. Then there are some people who are ignorant to the topic. They don't know enough about the topic to give someone proper advice. Usually these types of people d...
Evidence
Effective
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hearing several opinions can narrow down what not to do
Claim
Adequate
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If many people say to not do something then the person knows that majority of people agree it will only do them harm. It is the same for the things a person should do. If many people have the same advice then they know that it's the right thing to do. Indecisiveness is prevalent in many people. Having several voices pr...
Evidence
Effective
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asking more people gets someone more advice. It makes a person feel sure of their decisions and more confident about the choice they will make. In the end when they go through with their choice they will get it done more precisely than if they had not gotten advice. However, there are times where finding the right advi...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Sometimes people seek multiple opinions on problems
Lead
Adequate
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This is usually a good thing to do as there are many benefits to asking multiple people. Some people just go with what persons opinion is on something and don't even bother asking others what they think. This is a bad idea and there are many reasons why this is not a good idea.
Position
Effective
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One benefit of asking multiple people what their opinion is on an issue is that they can help you be sure of something.
Claim
Effective
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For example, if you have a medical diagnosis but you what to be sure that you actual have what was diagnosed, you could ask for another doctors opinion just to be sure. This would majorly help in making sure that you have what was diagnosed. With multiple people's opinions there would be no doubt that the diagnosis was...
Evidence
Effective
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Another reason why you should get multiple opinions on something is that it can help you find different ways to do something.
Claim
Effective
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You could be having problems driving and want to know how to fix them. Normally most people would ask just one person on how to fix this problem. But if they ask multiple people on how to fix the problem then they could also know many other ways on how to fix it. This could help if the solution that one person gave did...
Evidence
Effective
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One other reason why getting multiple opinion is a good idea is because it can make you more educated on the situation that you have
Claim
Effective
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If you are wanting to know how to make bread and you don't know how to or anything about it then you usually ask for someones help or advice on how to do it. If you get multiple people's advice then you will know a lot more about the problem than if you only asked one person. This helps in many fields including the med...
Evidence
Effective
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As you can see getting multiple opinions and many people's advice helps in many ways. It can help you learn, be sure of something, and give different ways on how to do things. Many people already ask for multiple opinions and with the internet there are so many people to ask. So next time you face a dilemma or problem ...
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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After a long and tiring day at school, students often look forward to returning home to retire in a stress-free environment. People's homes remind them that their strenuous day of work has come to an end and that they can now comfortably enjoy their home alongside the company of their family and friends. Students have ...
Lead
Effective
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Therefore, students will not benefit from attending online classes at home
Position
Adequate
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as they will get easily distracted
Claim
Adequate
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and be less motivated to learn.
Claim
Adequate
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First, students will not benefit from attending online classes at home as they will get easily distracted.
Claim
Effective
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Students are often young and their brains have the power to rapidly grasp and process information. However, this ability can be negatively affected especially when the student is in an environment that they are well acquainted with. A well known area where students have limited interactions can dull their curiosity and...
Evidence
Effective
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Another reason students will not benefit from attending online classes at home is that they will be less motivated to learn.
Claim
Effective
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Many students will agree that a commonly enjoyed perk of going to school is to meet and mingle with friends. However, when students study on an online forum at home, they do not get this opportunity to engage in conversations with peers as there are lesser chances to forge a personal bond with the students in the class...
Evidence
Effective
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In conclusion, students will not benefit from attending online classes at home as they will get easily distracted and be less motivated to learn. If students are to properly balance their home life and their studies, a more reasonable approach that doesn't compromise their relaxation or student life needs to be found. ...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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The safest place on earth for anyone on earth is their home, you eat, sleep, and live in your home so why should you not learn there too? Schools used to be the traditional option for learning and education but with students becoming a danger to one another and teachers finding it difficult to deal with certain student...
Lead
Effective
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Learning from home can benefit students
Position
Adequate
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by creating a safe learning environment
Claim
Effective
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honing in on a students personal growth
Claim
Effective
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using technological advancements to enhance their education.
Claim
Effective
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Everyday more children are put in home education programs due to the many issues with the present school systems. Safety of the student always is most important in any learning environment and one of the safest places for a student is within the walls of their own home. External conflicts with other students is prevent...
Evidence
Effective
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With the liberty and comfort of home also comes the ability to block out any distractions that could prevent students from learning to the best of their ability.
Claim
Effective
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Students would rather talk to their peers than learn but when choosing to learn at home the student is making the executive decision to focus on his/her schoolwork therefore, they will control their surroundings and create a distraction free learning space for the most effective learning experience within their own hom...
Evidence
Effective
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With the elimination of a multitude of distractions found in public schools, students will find it easier to use the tools and technology given to them to aid their educational path.
Claim
Effective
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Education like many things has had a traditional way of being however, like many things nowadays that tradition is prone to change and it is for the better. Technology is one of the most important and useful tools in todays society and schools are already utilizing it and it utilized even more so by home schoolers. Sin...
Evidence
Effective
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Home schooling can be very helpful if done the right way with the use of technology.
Claim
Adequate
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Home schooling is the greater alternative to public schooling because of the ability to learn within a controlled environment that elimnates any and all distractions so that students can fully utilize their education. By eliminating the possibility of abuse or harm from other students and enabling a positive outlook on...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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It could be argued that public schools are cheaper and that they can supervise younger children for free while allowing parents to work
Counterclaim
Adequate
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however, while public schools may not cost money they could cost a life and the staff present do not always watch over the children as they have promised
Rebuttal
Adequate
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28823EC65BA2
Home schooling can be seen as the way of schooling that focuses more on the growth and learning of each individual rather than the large group known as a class. Home schooling is the greater option for students it keeps them safe, allows them to learn the way that they find comfortable, and it is focused around them to...
Evidence
Effective
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The last three years the tegnology has been growing up,
Lead
Adequate
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But I think the student should not be taking online classes.
Position
Adequate
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2897B71A5E94
they not going to cosentration on what there going
Claim
Adequate
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it`s could be a lot of people around him and they would`t undestand anything waht the objective is bout it, also a member of his family could be helping him by passins the class or the ojective on what there working on.
Evidence
Adequate
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The second reason, why student should not be taking online classes and go school instated, Is because its would be good and easy for the students to learnd more about school, world and the community
Claim
Adequate
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they can also lake classes on what there are going to be on the future it`s would be a great aportunity to learnd bout it .
Evidence
Ineffective
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Finally, I think student should not be takink online classes because it going to help them to have a differet view on what there doing
Claim
Adequate
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2897B71A5E94
the student could get adictive using the tegnology, and it`s cause a lot of problem for him and for his family by not telling him what there have to do.
Claim
Ineffective
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In my opinion student should go schools istated taking classes online, beacuse going to school you can leand and met knew people or thing and I thik by going to school is the best way for the student can be educated by the olders and not by the negnology. 
Concluding Statement
Adequate
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Although some say students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they might not take it serious,
Lead
Adequate
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students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home
Position
Adequate
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it is more relaxing
Claim
Adequate
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even if students go somewhere or get a emergancy they can still attends the classes online.
Claim
Effective
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Eventhough students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home there is some students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they might not take it serious.
Counterclaim
Effective
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Some students this way might not pay attention. Also they can use thier phone or do other stuff while the teacher is teaching and their grades could go down fast.
Rebuttal
Ineffective
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Students would benefit from being able to attend clases from home because it is more relaxing.
Claim
Adequate
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This way students don't have any stress over getting class on time or missing any classes. Also students it is more relaxing because it is just yourself and the computer. So this way you don't have to worry about other kids or anything that would distract you. In a regular classroom at school there is some kids that di...
Evidence
Adequate
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Students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because even if the students go somewhere or they got a emergancy you can still attend the classes online.
Claim
Effective
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This will benefit the students because it will minimize the days that you can't attend school. Also if you had a emergancy and have to go somethere far away you can still attend school by online. Also if you broke a bone on your leg or something and you can't walk you might miss a lot of classwork and lessons that are ...
Evidence
Adequate
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294C41270CAB
In conclusion eventhough some say students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because they might not take it serious, actually students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because it is more relaxing and even if students go somewhere or get a emergancy they can still att...
Concluding Statement
Effective
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Imagine a world where instead of going to school, you could stay at home everyday and not face the burden of waking up early to make it to your first period class on time. Sounds like a fantasy, right? This could become a reality if you choose to participate in distance learning and take your classes from home by way o...
Lead
Effective
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Although distance learning may seem like a better alternative to many students, it's clearly ineffective in educating them properly.
Position
Effective
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Students would not benefit from being able to attend classes from home because there would be no face to face interactions with their instructors and peers
Claim
Effective
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there would be no hands-on-learning within their class lessons,
Claim
Effective
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students would not be able to become used to a college setting after participating in distance learning for a long time.
Claim
Effective