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[ "don't live within miles of villages that have no clue that they're close.", "werewolves don't shape shift into humans, they're werewolves all the time. There are", "werewolf pack that does attack humans and I can't figure out how to", "those packs that don't live within miles of villages that have no clue", ...
[ "been trying to reach you` or `Hi John - I've been trying to", "number of people especially in business settings use hyphens after names while writing", "a number of people especially in business settings use hyphens after names while", "I've seen a number of people especially in business settings use hyphens...
[ "use jedi mind trick, but it's hard to tell for some people from", "Wars, Jedi sometimes use jedi mind trick, but it's hard to tell for", "for some people from a drawn image that a telepathic signal is sent", "was also thinking magic runes, but it's not subtle, and I was thinking", "magic runes, but it's no...
[ "sit in the dark for ages, spam a single main monster, and maybe", "a single main monster, and maybe a few grunts too. Then, the heroes", "The main bad guy will sit in the dark for ages, spam a", "win will feel cheap. A win gained through luck, plot armor, or a", "every turn. But creating a good villain pla...
[ "needs to go see a psychiatrist, and as I am someone who is", "the story imbalanced and without making my readers feel that I deliberately skipped", "peacefully skip this scene without making the story imbalanced and without making my", "that it is a necessary scene for the plot. How can I peacefully", ...
[ "is asking if the island even exists but is interrupted. Would such an", "Here's an example: > > “But do you think the island even—?” >", "[Is it acceptable to place a dash after a question mark?](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/10675/is-it-acceptable-to-place-a-dash-after-a-question-mark?rq=1) Howe...
[ "buying the rights to produce it, or the rights to produce a pilot", "interested in buying the rights to produce it, or the rights to produce", "on my own time (I don't work for an animation studio). It's well-written", "animation studio). It's well-written and original, but because it hasn't already been pub...
[ "what can you do in order to make the writing good without changing", "changing that element. If it's not possible, can you explain why having a", "life goal is getting killed by the main character for the sake of", "the motivation of getting killed by the main character? Let's say his life", "weak writing?...
[ "meaning of the square brackets encapsulating the \"t\". A cursory search online doesn't", "it was originally capitalized then put in square brackets when it was lowercased.", "of the original quotation, this doesn't seem to apply here as \"the\" seems", "a quote earlier starting with these words, and I am un...
[ "and easily controlled. She yearns to teach her children to be strong (like", "she was) but has gotten into a situation where she is fully under", "was) but has gotten into a situation where she is fully under the", "She yearns to teach her children to be strong (like she wishes she", "children. That sounds...
[ "was such a cool detail that I wanted to add in my stories", "of scenarios where I want to add some action and tension, but it's", "limited ammo making the scenes tense and thrilling. It was such a cool", "scenes tense and thrilling. It was such a cool detail that I wanted", "Wicy back then, I really like h...
[ "but in her culture, they need approval from parents. What would be a", "they need approval from parents. What would be a reason why her parents", "protagonist meets a young, female thief who eventually become his partner in crime.", "scenario, her parents are not dead or abusive, but in her culture, they", ...
[ "of the things you need to insure when adapting something to a movie,", "dialogues can be cut and what general principles should you follow when **choosing", "to a movie or a comic book, how do you choose which dialogues", "aren't too long, because in some novels some dialogues are way too long.", "when ada...
[ "outside of the dialogue and I am not sure what's the purpose for", "\"It's starting to feel like it\", we see (beat), but it's like something", "and I am not sure what's the purpose for it and what other", "it and what other elements we can put aside (beat) in the same", "here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/r3...
[ "it soon becomes the main focus of the show and this sidelines the", "a trope where a show or series or story has a bit of", "main focus of the show and this sidelines the original premise of said", "of the show and this sidelines the original premise of said story. I", "The [romantic plot tumour](https://t...
[ "fake death and/or treat the real deaths differently so that they hit harder?", "the character might just pop back up alive. There is a rather heartbreaking", "hit because there is the possibility that the character might just pop back", "right around the middle of the book, only to resurface later with unexp...
[ "a general outline of how I want the chapters to go, in terms", "different strategies on how to lengthen chapters, but have not had very much", "(or really giving away too much, I'd like to be able to develop", "Descriptions aside, I am also struggling with how to lengthen the chapter in", "in chapter 3. Th...
[ "for telepathic communication in comics? I don't recall having ever seen text bubbles", "seen text bubbles for telepathic speech between 2 or more characters. I am", "the text bubbles for telepathic communication in comics? I don't recall having ever", "especially interested to see how this is done when there...
[ "am wondering if there are ways to achieve this that I am not", "all terms related to ships, but obviously it didn't work, I am wondering", "of. I remember there were categories of words, but I can't seem to", "to use insource to find all terms related to ships, but obviously it", "there were categories of ...
[ "experiment the reference water varied by ±0.11SD from its mean pH 7.03. While", "the variation in the acidic Al-poor treatment, malfunctioning of the ball valve mentioned", "respirometry experiment, the reference water varied with ±0.18SD from its mean pH 7.04.", "5.95, respectively. The same applies here fo...
[ "last two \"))\" appear cluttered. I have seen suggestions of using [] on", "momentum (see Fig. 5(c)) > > > I am not sure if the", "if the last two \"))\" appear cluttered. I have seen suggestions of using", "The model shows a great divergence at zero momentum (see Fig. 5(c)) >", "I have seen suggestions of...
[ "story that follows the progression of a couple. The two were arranged to", "progression of a couple. The two were arranged to marry as young children,", "the time focusing on their marriage, since that's where most of the character", "to spend most of the time focusing on their marriage, since that's where",...
[ "time being, the only procedure I can think of is in a form", "head trauma that as a consequence rewires the brain. I'm open for anything!", "procedure I can think of is in a form of a head trauma", "the time being, the only procedure I can think of is in a", "people care to enlighten me on ways a character...
[ "fantasy novel and I need to come up with a good riddle at", "and then three?” > > > <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Riddles> I found some on this page.", "<https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Riddles> I found some on this page. I was thinking about it and", "> “What being has four legs, then two, ...
[ "necessity (If he doesn't, they'll die--type of situation). And this causes a little", "a little problem where he keeps replaying the scene in his head and", "head and it causes him stress. I want to be very careful writing", "never done the deed himself. In my storyboard he'll encounter a situation where", ...
[ "looking at problems with my publisher going this route? Or can anyone think", "Amazon I came across this: [![Ligatures in modern novels](https://i.stack.imgur.com/MbdlH.png)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/MbdlH.png) As I was reading,", "Or can anyone think of the unintended consequences of using ligatures in moder...
[ "war. > > > The very phrase has the verb \"told\" in it", "describe something factual in our opinion in written arguments? Example: > > Truth", "Truth be told, I think no one is winning this war. > >", "it which refers to someone speaking. So, can it only be used in", "told\"* or **\"To tell the truth\"...
[ "have evolved over time and have implemented more \"modern-day\" game mechanics, but I", "routes share is everything that happens inbetween the start of the plot and", "(I'm aware that VNs have evolved over time and have implemented more \"modern-day\"", "in plain-text accompanied with illustrations of charac...
[ "are also with anthromorphic animals as well. Seeing how despite being able to", "Seeing how despite being able to walk and talk like humans, they are", "romance between a human and non-human go, before it ends up being uncomfortable", "completely different animal species. When writing, how far can romance be...
[ "is nothing new, but it is fun to do. Usually, when there's a", "can see their cultural references; but if I decide to base it on", "trying to work on the worldbuilding of my story. The concept of fictional", "it is fun to do. Usually, when there's a nation based on actual", "make it clear which nation it i...
[ "characters that aren’t the protagonist, don’t have POV chapters (my book is first", "book is first person), but are with the protagonist for the majority of", "characters at the midpoint of book 1 in a trilogy? By major characters", "for the majority of the trilogy and are essential to the main storyline.", ...
[ "outlining a novel, mostly for fun, based in 9th century Norway. The closest", "example, the name Guðrún, or should I instead Latinize it to Guthrun? In", "don't really convey the meaning as well. Even though I don't necessarily plan", "find words like Drengr or Holmgang to fit better than their English trans...
[ "entered this situation but was unaware that it had been morphing into the", "be a he instead! Their gender is not meant to be a focal", "(due to seclusion in a remote area of wilderness) and psychologically (by a", "gender is not meant to be a focal point of the story. That", "to cast this character as mal...
[ "Forest\" comes from Liu Cixin. So is it ok for me to use", "ok for me to use that idea and name it \"The Dark Forest\"", "and name it \"The Dark Forest\" in the novel without explicitly naming Liu", "used. The idea of \"The Dark Forest\" comes from Liu Cixin. So is", "novel without explicitly naming Liu Ci...
[ "outlining done before the writing. I've since matured more and figured out that", "I'm not sure how to remedy this- some themes that are non-negotiable in", "are more mature, but I feel that my writing isn't developed enough to", "mature, but I feel that my writing isn't developed enough to write for", "tw...
[ "> > Of a little lonely wind that crept > > > From", "use cases or is there a good justification to using four dots instead", "I thought it was an ellipses, but ellipses only typically have three dots.", "three? I cam across a poem by Rupert Brooke and it uses four", "am trying to think of a good rationale ...
[ "details she didn't give me are not important to the plot. However, a", "and places of birth, marriage, and death should be planned in advance to", "1880 homesteading in Oklahoma—which didn't happen before 1889.) Especially if you have them", "to write. She gave me very few details. I assume the details she",...
[ "are ways I could subtly hint and foreshadow, without giving it away immediately?", "player figuring it out until it is too late. The type of plot", "is man vs. environment during a zombie outbreak, and my goal is to", "the terror to the player, ending with the completion of said outbreak. What", "player, e...
[ "publishing house. The text was never carefully or properly proofed and there were", "platforms and retail outlets, but never sold. I have revised the text and", "under its new title, either through a different publisher, or through a self-publishing", "never carefully or properly proofed and there were many ...
[ "is waning away. > > > It uses a lot of 'the's. How", "Consider this paragraph > > The twilight is small but distinctly visible. The", "would like some general tips that can be applied to a piece of", "and it's decreasing the quality of my writing. I have thought about and", "uses a lot of 'the's. How can I...
[ "character's plan if it's going to fail, and in what circumstance it would", "the reader to figure it out alongside the characters. Now, the question is", "the story bad since essentially they will know the end of the story", "to see if there might be circumstances where it may make sense? I", "knowing the ...
[ "unbearable to read/watch. I was told that if people need to take breaks", "isn't to say that morally horrible characters are bad. I was told there’s", "villain or main character too unlikeable, and how do you determine that they're", "an example, someone pointed out that one of the characters someone wrote h...
[ "a love interest, a cheerleader, an end goal, etc. I was told that", "as a support to another character not shallow at all? How can I", "at all? How can I write a female character that's meant to be", "told that a lot of bad female characters are written mostly to be", "as a love interest, a cheerleader, an...
[ "and the protagonist is trying to survive as long as possible. The main", "protagonist is trying to survive as long as possible. The main story surrounds", "is trying to survive as long as possible. The main story surrounds the", "The main story surrounds the main character exploring weird lands and his inter...
[ "least, tends to make me \"prepare\" for it emotionally which I feel lessens", "exactly how I feel about them. For example, a soldier character reminiscing to", "it, it still leaves an ominous feeling that, for me at least, tends", "to his buddy while on the frontlines about his wife and kids and", "and how...
[ "word \"it\" doing. \"It\" seems to refer to the task of standing, but", "I can't figure out what the word \"it\" doing. \"It\" seems to refer", "believe the meaning is clear, but is it bad grammar? Specifically, I can't", "doing. \"It\" seems to refer to the task of standing, but that isn't", "\"It\" seems...
[ "to place the engineer chapter ahead of the explorer chapter, thereby reversing their", "explorers (in chapter 4), dropping sparse clues, from which the reader might figure", "might be relevant that my novel (allthough hard to categorise) has elements of", "know the solution of the protagonist‘s problems ...
[ "I want to write a story where the main culprit is controlling someone", "write a story where the main culprit is controlling someone to commit crimes.", "story where the main culprit is controlling someone to commit crimes. Is there", "a story where the main culprit is controlling someone to commit crimes. I...
[ "in a modern context, he tries really hard despite crying, trouble sleeping or", "six months. Despite this, he clearly tries to make sure that his depression", "relationship. As a South Asian Man, in a modern context, he tries really", "at random intervals on his home. But he can't seem to properly overcome",...
[ "was because it was shocking, immediate and brutal. There were also mentions of", "because of how they handled the death of one of its main characters.", "I think it was because it was shocking, immediate and brutal. There were", "mentions of how the character who killed him was unlikeable and so on", "so o...
[ "to that of another character (it can be the same one they've previously", "just presented to them (eg. you must go to this character and exactly", "then 1 at will, with each playthrough learning a bit more in order", "that the player's perspective regularly changes at the end of each time loop.", "1 at wil...
[ "done?** If not, how is one to add multiple characters without abandoning the", "faces. Adding any other characters would nullify the existential terror of being completely", "who were there, vaguely describing the threats he faces. Adding any other characters", "but I have never worked with less than four ch...
[ "chase aspect, which is that the male lead has to find the protagonist", "unique in some ways. Initially, I wanted to focus on this uniqueness, but", "should I do? Should I proceed with the plot, keeping the mob part,", "fantasy elements like hell and demons etc. This hell is unique in some", "told me that ...
[ "wondering how you would have to write that character, because the issue is", "an extremely powerful main character? I have this character who's a literal God,", "that character, because the issue is that his personality doesn't change and doesn't", "have this character who's a literal God, and none of his en...
[ "they deviate from their inspired characters, from their in-depth character to their designs.", "character to their designs. I wonder if this is a bad sign for", "characters, from other stories I've seen in the media. They don't stay the", "same. Back then their character is quite similar to their inspiration...
[ "character outsmarts another character and that character explains how he did it, should", "and character A was able to predict everything character B was going to", "A, and character A was able to predict everything character B was going", "to? Let's say you have character A, and character A was able to", ...
[ "they are brought together to fight some unknown evil. I'm currently working on", "the same person from alternate universes; they are brought together to fight some", "but I've had this idea for a while. I wanted to know if", "to know if it would work or if it would be an awful", "awful failure. Every chara...
[ "a character's emotions is a huge part of getting an audience to like", "person. But the character I am writing is essentially a living computer. They", "of endearment, always calling the main character by her first name and only", "blatantly ignore most of the other characters and only speak to the MC.", "...
[ "obstacles that it becomes intimidating. Often I’m afraid that characters in a scene", "delivered with the subtlety of a punch to the face. Every piece of", "street. The dialogue I produce is so nonsensical, so melodramatic, and so stilted", "Often I’m afraid that characters in a scene sound alike, what they ...
[ "3](https://i.stack.imgur.com/VcRk5.png)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/VcRk5.png) [![enslaver 4](https://i.stack.imgur.com/cmOhp.png)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/cmOhp.png) Basically all enslavers are mind controlling alien abominations that are", "mind controlling alien abominations that are the size of buildings an...
[ "write any story, even with ideas that could constitute a novel, and with", "doing wrong in this context. I'm aware that word count isn't everything, but", "context. I'm aware that word count isn't everything, but I would like to", "and a portion of that 30 pages often consists of loads of uselessly", "I wr...
[ "a web-based application)? What I tried: I tried Microsoft Word, and it makes", "but it does not number the outline (uses bullet points instead) and does", "\"Structured\" means that the outline should end up looking something like this: ```", "or MacOS (i.e. not a web-based application)? What I tried: I ...
[ "narrator narrates Character A for the whole book, but Character B wants to", "A for the whole book, but Character B wants to tell Character A", "whole book, but Character B wants to tell Character A about a memory", "then, the narrator narrates Character B's experiences for a short while. In movies", "of, ...
[ "was? Is this a totally okay way to handle a main character, or", "I am assuming that his character will be shown to have passed away", "okay way to handle a main character, or is it something terrible that", "to have passed away in Fluck Yanvhir: Wakanda Forever. But I'm wondering: is", "Yanvhir, has pas...
[ "and author. The contents, characters, and plots of these book will not be", "a novel and in it, the characters are using a book cipher based", "book. When they find the correct book, I will identify the title of", "books are old enough to be in the public domain, but most are", "just the first or last line...
[ "write a feature length screenplay (about 100 pages) rather than shorter screenplays (about", "a feature length screenplay (about 100 pages) rather than shorter screenplays (about 10-40", "logistical or practical reason why one should write a feature length screenplay (about", "rather than shorter screenplays...
[ "starting to doubt myself. > > As I entered, I picked a mirror", "As I entered, I picked a mirror ahead of me and locked eyes", "in a flash fiction. My alpha/beta readers are unsure if the wording is", "to doubt myself. > > As I entered, I picked a mirror ahead", "and locked eyes with my reflection, ignorin...
[ "a glance so that I can quickly access the missing information or the", "a quick reference and overview without having to go through an entire doc?", "good way to store worldbuilding information so that I can get a quick", "overview without having to go through an entire doc? I don't need to", "reference an...
[ "as well like Platform as a Service, Functions as a Service, Infrastructure as", "so many more.) Is there an industry-wide agreed upon consensus to capitalize/hyphenate these", "many more.) Is there an industry-wide agreed upon consensus to capitalize/hyphenate these when", "guide in that we only capitalize p...
[ "most amused to come across the word \"occutrousers\": [![enter image description here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/IsiJz.jpg)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/IsiJz.jpg) >", "come across the word \"occutrousers\": [![enter image description here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/IsiJz.jpg)](https://i.stack.imgur.com/IsiJz.jpg)...
[ "> > I'm a grown dwarf mamma, so what I got dough in", "are conflicted. They idolise their mother on the one hand, but as they", "finding frustrating and chafing. I've looked at a few external articles covering finding", "nightmare! It's difficult enough as it is... Is that dough? How did you", "to have a g...
[ "He says always put a comma after a name, I say only when", "did in fact violate state laws when they were covering up the crimes", "the crimes of officer Zotns, and that Intrej, in fact, has a rightful", "fact violate state laws when they were covering up the crimes of officer", "a comma after a name, I sa...
[ "appropriate to have the excerpt in bold stand with the dialogue or should", "herself. “How many neutrons does uranium-235?” She looked down at her periodic table,", "uranium-235?” She looked down at her periodic table, searching for uranium. She recognized", "excerpt in bold stand with the dialogue or sh...
[ "never ever shown, so piecing the story in its entirety from the available", "impossible to follow at times, because some information are kept out of the", "so that your readers know everything that transpired at the end of the", "some information are only made available on other materials outside of the show...
[ "However since I focus on these characters and their concepts too much, it", "of stoicism and then I added more to their character: a backstory, their", "of them that make them unique. > > > I'd like to ask", "I've focused too much on this one character instead of others. A Discord", "much on the lore and b...
[ "for simplicity sake, but if you want to have proper worldbuilding and a", "DNA and neutrons in a fantasy book? I see people use DNA and", "to do in the situations where I need to be very precise and", "neutrons in TV shows where the setting doesn't allow for it for simplicity", "words should you use? How w...
[ "stories? Is this something that was done before in a collection of short", "stories? Because it is so hard to do worldbuilding in a short story,", "the narrative is important, and do show and not tell in those short", "Because it is so hard to do worldbuilding in a short story, I", "write a short story tha...
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[ "period of time. * Year 1: Alive: [A B C] Dead: [D] Missing:", "accordingly. You can't do stuff like that in Scrivener, it gets way too", "Dead: [D] Missing: [E] * Year 2: Alive: [A B] Dead: [C D]", "Alive: [A B C] Dead: [D] Missing: [E] * Year 2: Alive: [A", "the characters and using Google Slides to have ...
[ "there an applicable rule for English writing? Should I continue referring Bakub as", "making the readers feel strange? (I'm only talking about the way the narrator", "the readers feel strange? (I'm only talking about the way the narrator refers", "They started getting closer and eventually became close frien...
[ "in a fantasy setting it would sound weird. I am wondering if this", "is there a better way of doing this? What are the problems with", "the spell to a different domain of existence, which allowed me > to", "spell to a different domain of existence, which allowed me > to change", "me immune > to any gravita...
[ "many worlds. There's also a world that he stays in for a larger", "a world that he stays in for a larger period than others, with", "are tons of islands, but the world-building doesn't change too much. This idea", "that he stays in for a larger period than others, with changing hierarchy,", "is shown at th...
[ "or would it be more distracting to the reader? It might help \"hearing\"", "American character and a British character. I'm contemplating having the characters use the", "swap back and forth between the chapters). Would that make sense or would", "with an American character and a British character. I'm conte...
[ "time-travel to the 1800s, they likely wouldn't understand it. We just accept that", "either magic or advanced technology. Often, these are integral parts of the story", "explanation. If a modern story where someone uses a cell phone was sent", "used a cell phone! They might just say, 'Bob calls Aluke.' And i...
[ "with potential. I’ve been weaving it in, slowly revealing details and flashbacks throughout", "have my story plotted out, but as I’ve been writing, I’ve realized that", "latest point possible” in a story, but I’m concerned about having a backstory", "a backstory woven in that might seem more interesting than...
[ "it underemphasizes the illegality of their immigration; liberals criticize the term \"illegal\" for", "and conservatives? I would prefer a one or two word phrase, but something", "Conservatives often criticize the term \"undocumented\" because they believe it underemphasizes the illegality", "laws; \"undocum...
[ "fallout or emotional/physical effects of it, there are a few scenes where his", "readers instead see the fallout or emotional/physical effects of it, there are a", "emotional/physical effects of it, there are a few scenes where his father is", "dialogue always feels cliche/cheesy, almost like a bully from an...
[ "good in them, not an ounce of good in them. Is this possible?", "this, but most popular stories have some good characters, I am wondering if", "and there's no good in them, not an ounce of good in them.", "evil? I thought about this, but most popular stories have some good characters,", "characters, I am w...
[ "up with only 5 people showing up, it looks like an over-spent party.", "unintentionally. Can I also say, it's an(a): > > extravagant party , Lavish", "party for 100 people and it ends up with only 5 people showing", "and it ends up with only 5 people showing up, it looks like", "over-spent party. It shows ...
[ "as I think this looks better. An example of how I would use", "Square \| 10 \| 10 \| Is there a convention for (academic) formatting", "a native speaker, so please excuse if this is blatantly obvious for people", "length [mm] \| width [mm] \| \| --- \| --- \| --- \|", "expressions, and that we should check our tabl...
[ "cruise, or about a bankteller, or about a broken bike. Sometimes your story", "well aware of it, especially when they have more experience in a subject", "this a common struggle for young writers? Or am I just building mental", "you're talking about, the reader can become very well aware of it, especially", ...
[ "in a great way. But it doesn't sound like something a professional writer", "the Harlem Renaissance was a great time in American history. The Harlem Renaissance", "as its participants celebrated their African heritage and embraced self-expression, rejecting long-standing—and often", "the “New Negro” movement...
[ "the dialog should be written at all if the dialog during a sex", "purpose. The issue with my particular case is that I am using it", "scene doesn't serve any purpose. There's also this notion that a writer might", "readers. I am thinking that in shows like Games of Thrones, the sex", "writer ignore that ...
[ "and she is forced to watch her girlfriend get slowly executed in an", "goes through tragedy. Near the middle, the group is captured by the enemy,", "during her arc, how long would it take for a person to move", "extremely brutal manner. They managed to escape, but she is heavily traumatized and", "is force...
[ "writing scenes between characters that are not action. For example, a scene where", "need to improve writing scenes between characters that are not action. For example,", "I mostly write fantasy, and I need to improve writing scenes between characters", "write fantasy, and I need to improve writing scenes be...
[ "shareholders, \"it\" seems legally correct. (Perhaps this wasn't the best example because \"he", "Inc. didn't deliver the item to Joe, he sued them. > > >", "sounds right, but because a corporation is a separate legal entity, not merely", "Acme Inc. didn't deliver the item to Joe, he sued them. > >", "the ...
[ "metaphor to illustrate the difficulty of doing in an environment where everyone is", "to run up a hill in rollerblades\" * I don't care for this", "highlight the human factors that cause the hostile environment. A hill is inanimate", "cause the hostile environment. A hill is inanimate object. \"Like trying t...
[ "realized I haven't brought in very much of my character's backstory. Any tips", "am about halfway through my story, and I realized I haven't brought in", "I haven't brought in very much of my character's backstory. Any tips on", "I realized I haven't brought in very much of my character's backstory. Any", ...
[ "do it without making it look like the character is just narrating a", "in which the protagonist is doing a monologue that will tell details of", "short story is from a third person POV, but I wanted to write", "kidnapped by a pedophile, instead of just writing a flashback. So how can", "flashback. So how c...
[ "boss be pretty much irrelevant to the whole story even though the writer", "mad because of how the writers decided to subvert expectations by making Luku", "pretty much irrelevant to the whole story even though the writer kept foreshadowing", "boss completely irrelevant to the story. Is there a good way to s...