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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting essay California desert June If settings features affected cyclist This biggest impact In fifth paragraph reader leaves author travelling high deserts California June My prior knowledge tells California generally always hot place especially desert June hottest month year This would greatly affected cyclist He riding fifty miles California desert limited supply water This put great risk dehydration tells reader reaches last time paragraph ten This terrain extremely hot conditions would make cyclist tired dehydrated making journey difficult", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some today argue that only governments are capable of countering problems in cities resulting from housing shortages. In my opinion, although governments should be the primary actors, human beings can also offer aid.\n\nOn the one hand, only governments have the authority to enact truly large-scale change. Governments by design make decisions for the benefit of the entire citizenry. An example of how this could relate to housing issues would be the urban planning in New York City over the century. The authorities there had to contend with an unprecedented population surge in a limited urban area. They responded by building skyscrapers that could house many residents, expanding public transport, and constructing various highways to allow commuters to live nearby the city. These solutions could only have been successfully undertaken at the behest of the government.\n\nHowever, though the role of individuals is less prominent, it still exists. In the previous example, voters in New York City were able to make their voices heard by voting for mayors and governors that best served them. In the event that the government is not addressing housing problems sufficiently, then citizens can write to their representatives, organize protests, or take more drastic action such as relocating to a new city. In the era of social media, it is now more possible than ever before for the average person to openly discuss these issues. People will always find methods to pressure governments, including in areas related to housing.\n\nIn conclusion, I disagree with those who contend only government action can improve housing issues in major metropolitan areas as individuals can collectively always engender some degree of reform. Governments will ideally enact laws based on the needs of the general populace.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are one of the best pieces of technology that people have created they save people time and energy. Cars have gradually became smarter and safer for the drivers over time. A driverless car is not the best way to travel I mean what a small car ride isnt gonna hurt you or is it? See if you have a teleporter your still not going to be safe, in every single transportation device there is a flaw that can damage and make the whole thing go terriblly wrong or even hurt someone severly or just staight on kill them.\n\nIf people dont trust themselves in driving then why do you want a robot to drive you? Have you ever watched Wall-E and do you know how all the humans on the ship got really big because machines did everything for them well that is going to be us. Driving is a skill that has to be taught to someone, it's a dangorous skill that you recieve. With the number of people who drive a day there are maybe millions of car wrecks a day, in one single day a couple million car wrecks with people driving. The bad part is why do you want a machine to drive you around when you are sitting there the whole time why cant you just drive yourself. Machines have many disfunctions inside them. I'm going to ask the same question again how do trust a machine to drive you around even though you may not trust yourself as a driver?\n\nLazyness is what this is caused by straight up lazyness. As i mentioned before the movie Wall-E the people became really big because they relied on machines most of the time. We are going to become that we are going to sit on our buts the whole time because we are to lazy to move our feet and our arms sitting there following every street rule there is, is going to let you stay way more safe then with you trusting a machine. The thing with machines is you can do a million tests and pass every single test but that doesnt mean that the machine is going to disfuntion as it is driving done the road with you in the car.\n\nYou might as well just hire a driver if you want to not drive but be somewhere at the same time. Dr. Werner Huber said that \" We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way\". People may take this serious and some may take it like a new idea so I want to try it, but thats not the best way to think this through. Letting a machine drive you around on busy streets where millions of cars pass that day is insane. People have a better chance in driving themselves with out getting hurt than a machine.\n\nA driverless car can be okay in someways but safety is more important than being the first person to have a driverless car or to become famous off of the idea of a driverless car. The world lose people every day and making another way to die isn't the solution thats just adding to the cause.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should start to join the group I am in. You can go see many new places and things all while traveling the world on a mission to help others. We are called Seagoing Cowboys. You should want to be a Seagoing Cowbow, it isvery benificial to all that are involved in this wonderful process.\n\nWhen you are a Seagoing Cowboy you will get the time to explore the current area that you are located in. In the program you will have free time and be able to do other things when away,such as sight seeing. At times when you are with the group you will be helping the people of that land who are in need of our service, regain their streingth as a bation and build thier natrual resources. These kind of things will be animals, food, shelter, and clothes.We will travel with all the resorces we plan to donate to the peoples including the animals.\n\nI myself have even thought, is it worth\n\ngetting sea sick this many times, I miss my family, maybe I should just go home. But I did not cave in to those thoughts, and I'm still here withthe porgram. You will have todo the same and persue with the action. I had to do it for myself to accomplish something. I had to stay for my family so I could still be their hero, and that means nearly everthing to me. Most importently though you have to stay for the people, to help them means the world for their sake. You have to focus on the positive.\n\nSo please take this amazind and outstanding oportunity and sighn up. I promis you won't be dissapointed at the chance of a life time. To help people and make this world a better place. To spend time with hundreds of animals. Also to see and do things you would normaly never have done or expirinenced before. So please take this oportunety at something amazing, and if you cant do it for your self do it fo the people. Please.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The role of schools and the education system always remains the question of discussion, all over the globe.Some people's belief is that schools convert students into good citizens and workers for industries.But, do not help in their personal development. I will be on half and half on this issue and further explain my position in the next paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirstly,parents send their children to school for education as ,after completion of the study,they can earn good money and live happily.Now syllabus of the school is designed in the way that after finishing school students will become responsible citizens who will follow rules and regulations of the nation and pay some taxes from salary so the country will run smoothly.Therefore now my question is where's the part of personal development,character building,and all directional stability of the brain to absorb failure or success with mental stability.Students taught subjects in school and after school at university level professional skills, according to the faculty they choose in their carrier pathways.\r\n\r\nso ,in the present education system ,I do not see anything which spins around students personality,morality or capacity building,it goes for preparing better citizens,employees or responsible individuals.Therefore, I think today's education system needs reforms to accommodate those requirements and implement those changes, huge funding either from society or from governments. Everything is available for creating good workers for industries or on the other hand preparing imperative netizens. In this ,process students learn reading,writing and mathematical skills,which I think are vital skills a person need for a better life.\r\n\r\nTherefore,I partially go with the statement that schools are machinery for making great citizens and employees while helping little in personal development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on diverless cars is that I believe that it should not be made at least not in these next 5 to 10 years. There for i am against the development of these kinds of cars.Like it says in the artical Brin says he believes ,believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.In what way will it change the world ? It will not change the world not even if he says that it will take up half of gas and oil but there will still be enough that would finish it.Becuase so many will be driving them and so many will be useing up all those resorces .And also saying that in the artical that no one buys the cars becuase they wont need it anymore becuase of his new invention will it would put out hard working people into the streets and replacing them with people who know how to create those types of cars.\n\nNow so far in his state ment the cars he has created have not carshed YET!! Can still be crashed or into a crashed accident.And when its into a crash then who will the driver blam or sew for the damage that is done ? Will the driver have to pay becuase he or she wasnt driving the car was. There for its bad to even think about these self driven cars without thinking all these possible things that could happen.And if there cars are so driverless then why do they still need the driver to be in alert ? Becuase the car can not pull in or out driveways or deal with complicated traffic issues. As said in the artical beuse there still not driverless so why have a car that suposely can drive by its self if it cant even pull out or in or drive it selfs when there is a traffic issues.I mean might as will drive it you're self. Now if these types of cars are made will then will new roads will have to be made? If so then wont that cost alot of money then that money will be taken out of our pockets and put into those roads.That some of us wont be able to use becuase we have no self driven cars.\n\nAlso this wouldnt teach the new drivers to be responsiable becuas epart of driving is the responsibility.And if these were to be made then many ppl will be out of busines becuase were are they supose to go for there driving licesenes if they dont need one becuase they have self driving cars .They wouldnt have to worry about them driving becuase there would be a hallogram driving for them.Cars of today should be left alone and those cars that are being planed for everyone should be made 5 to ten years from now once its all thought about.There for I am against the development of these elf driven cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the process of learning history, some curricula need to be included to confirm that the students gain expertise. The argument is divided into two perspectives, whether the importance of local history or world history. In my opinion, both of them have the same merits, and this essay will explain them in detail based on experience.\r\n\r\nLearning local history leads the students to know about the best practices used by their founders to rule the nations with the state systems and become developed countries. The students need to see this subject because, in the future, every nation will face some uncertainty problems where the decisions created by their founders could be considered to solve those problems in the future problem. For example, in Indonesia, the state systems have changed from the colonialization era to the new order era. At present, Indonesia has a stable system and is a democratic nation. Therefore, learning history is really important for students because they will be decision-makers for their countries.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, learning international history also significantly impacts students in the middle of the globalization era. The student will know that some nations create bilateral or multilateral agreements with other countries because there is only a nation that can stand up to be a developed country with support from other nations in terms of exchanging knowledge in economy, technology, education, health, etc, \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the statement to learn local and world history is essential. While the knowledge to rule the country by the policy will be taken from this subject, the experience of why the country becomes a a developed country needs needs to be known by the student to increase ability as a decision-maker in the middle of globalization.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world has become very well-placed thanks to technology. Scientists have been creating many robots. Some individuals think that robots will do people’s jobs while others believe that they cannot do citizen’s occupations. From my point of view, they will more develop but they cannot do what people make all things. \r\n\r\n To begin with, artificial intelligence has been developing in the world. They can cook, they can fight but they cannot think like the community. For example, human is the only living thing on the planet that can think. Scientists give them software and then they move according to this program. If their program is down, they cannot do anything. Therefore, eventually, all jobs will not be artificially smart automation.\r\n\r\n Furthermore, automation has a determinate time. They have a charge and they cannot do what they want at any time. For instance, a war robot can run out of battery at the most critical moment of battle or doctor automation break down in the surgery. Everything is possible. However, an individual is not like them. if he didn’t die in the battle, he can battle or if he is not sleepy, he can operate. That is why cyborgs can't replace humans.\r\n\r\n To sum up, there are more cyborgs produced than in the past and more advanced now. They make more thinks than past. In my opinion, they need more time to do community’s occupations as we do not have enough technology for this but I strongly believe they will not ever do citizen’s jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "my position on driverless cars is i dont think that they will be a good idea because technolgy isnt always reliable and something could go wrong.i also think that there will be more accidents with driverless cars. i also think that driverless cars will be more expensive than regular cars. Driverless cars will most likely be electric because of how much technology will be added to the driverless car.\n\nthe positives of a driverless car is people that hate driving wont have to drive because all they will have to do is put the location they want to go to in the GPS and just sit and wait. Another positive would be that driverless cars would come with traffic jam assistant which would help with traffic jams. the negativesw of a driverless car is that technology is not alwaysw reliable and if something went wrong there would be an accident. Another negative would be that drivers would get bored waiting to get to there location.\n\ndriverless cars has some positives andf negatives. i dont think that driverless cars will be a thing because its a stupid idea and there would be alot of problems with it. so i dont think that driverless cars will be a thing ever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The chart illustrates numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled in 2002. It is divided into five transportation type: by commuter rail, by heavy rail, by light rail, by bus and by demand response.\nOverall, we notice the highest number of incident and injuries is due to transportation by demand response, while the use of commuter rail has the lowest number of these accidents. The number of injuries is lower than incident in all cases.\nIn the case of commuter rail, the number of incidents which represents less than 30 incidents per 100 million PMT is almost equal to the number of injuries. The graph shows some similarities when we use light rail or bus, especially in regards of incidents. The numbers of incidents in both cases are about 75 incidents per 100 million PMT. However, the number of injuries increases from approximately 40 to 60 injuries per 100 million PMT. The transportation by demand response is responsible of more than 250 incidents and 150 injuries per 100 million PMT.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe electoral college is a process that the founding fathers extablished as a compromise between the election of the President by a vote in Congress and popular vote of the people. This process involves selecting the electors, meeting with the electors, and counting the votes by congress. There are 538 electors total in the Electoral College. The presidential election happens every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. After the election the governor makes a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\" which has all the names of the candidates who ran for President. I believe we should keep the Electoral College because there is a certainty of outcome, it helps avoid run-off elections, and the electoral college helps balance out the smaller and bigger states with more people that vote.\n\nThe outcome of an Electoral College has a possibility of creating a dispute like in 2000, but this dispute is less likely to happen over a dispute over the popoular vote. This is because the winning candidates share of the Electoral College is greater than his share of the popular vote. Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote in comparison to the 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Mitt Romney. Trans-regional appeal is required in the Electoral College. If we got rid of the Electoral College then there would be a greater possibility of dispute.\n\nFurthermore, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes while winning a majority in the Electoral College. This proves that the Electoral college avoids the problems of elections in which neither candidate receives a majority of the votes. When no candidate wins a majority the pressure complicates the presidential election process. The Electoral College minimized this pressure be invariably producing a clear winner every time. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President.\n\nIn addition, a large state gets more attention from candidates than a small sate in a campaign. As an example in 2012 Obama, got 29 electoral votes. In Wyoming the winner only had 2 electoral votes in the same marin as Obama. The Electoral College provides some kind of restoration for the weight in the political balance that large states lose by mal-apportionment of the Senate. Voters in toss-up states are more likely to read into and pay more attention to a campaign because they know they are going to decide the election. It is most likely that these people are going to the the most thoughtful voters.\n\nTo conclude, there are many reasons to keep the Electoral College. This process has made the winner of the election much clearer to decide. There are a lot of pros and cons to the Electoral College but the list of cons is way shorter than the list of all the pros to the Electoral College. We should keep the Electoral College because it creates a certainty of outcome, diminishes run-off elections, and creates a balance for the bigger states. The Electoral College has created a positive impact for our presidential election.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of fully-autonomous cars, today, is rather controversial. The pros and cons of this subject are pretty even when it comes to numbers, but not even when it comes to their effects. This brings the problem of people wanting to make these vehicles and others being against the troublesome cause, but auto makers are doing it anyway. So that brings us to the following questions:Should auto makers be focusing on fully-autonomous vehicles? Will they be more safe than human piloted vehicles? Before we can answers those, we must analyze the biggest pros and cons on this issue.\n\nPros of computer driven cars is those cars will use much less fuel than cars do now, as the text states: \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis\". Another great pro of having fully computerized vehicles is that people won't really have to buy cars anymore as it is believed there will be massive amounts of public transportation through computerized cars. These two pros can also be cons as they could put car manufacturerers and people who sell fossil fuels, out of business. However, the less we use fossil fuels, the more we help to fight against global climate change. It will also lessen future damage to Earth through global climate change.\n\nMore pros of computerized vehicles is the lack of driver dependence there will be. This will lessen wreckages caused by people who were impaired, under the influence, or even just not paying attention. But removing the need of drivers has some more damage on people's lives: Removing the need for a responsible driver will cause all drivers of public transportation to lose their jobs, which makes up a major percentage of careers without the need of any college education, specifically in cities. Another claimed con of virtually removing the responsible driver is the limiting laws for use of semi-autonomous vehicles, these laws are already restrictive and it would be difficult to change them because they are based around protecting the general public. Even if or when the laws restricting the use of semi-autonomous vehicles are removed, they will have to be immeditately be replaced with laws protecting the general public, as well as the car manufacturers.\n\nFinal examples of pros and cons for fully and semi-autonomous vehicles is that they will bring us, as all people in the world, into a new age of technology, encouraging everything be computerized. The cons of this are that there aren't any fully-autonomous vehicles yet, so how do we know they will function properly? The answer to that question is through testing and experiementation. There are already vehicles with cameras, sensor brakes to prevent wreckages of all kinds, and much more to show that computerization would be a great help in driving. But the biggest con of this for people in the car making business would be those who didn't join the computerize bandwagon will likely lose stock and their stock value, but also overtime go out of business.\n\nIn conclusion, the question still remains, should there be computerized cars to replace those that require a human driver? The many pros say yes; however, people in the fossil fuel business, public transport drivers, and many car companies who don't want to make driverless cars say no. Many car companies are already working on computerized vehicles, the article states: \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" Stopping the major damage and preventing further to our environment, preventing crashes that of reckless human drivers, and bringing a technological revolution like no other to our world would be worth the cost of the jobs a transport driver and auto-makers who didn't want to join the computerized vehicle \"bandwagon\". At the least, semi-autonomous vehicles would be a great cause with which people everywhere can agree.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology that it takes to power a Google search is more advanced than what it took to get the Apollo 11 to the moon. Think about how advanced our generations tech is in comparison to when you were a child. A good example of this astronomical growth in the technology we have today is the \"smarter\" cars we now have. The \"smarter\" car was an invention that was dreamed up for a good many years before it even became a pheasable option. Driverless Cars are supposed to be an advancement in the positive directions, but there could be an argument on wheather that is true or not.\n\nThis leads to many example of the good it could do, what happens when you need to handle something, and your not focusing on the road. There has probably been a point in someones life that they needed to focus on something other than that of the speeding vehicle, or the road that is under them. Some example of what could go wrong would be that of a first time mother who has a crying baby, she turns around to figure out why its crying, hits the wheel or presses on the gas and suddenly without realizing she loses control. The moment when you have a person calling you, seems like its urgent at the time, you look down to find it in your mommy bag and its not where you left it, you know it from your husband. You find it and realize your about to crash. Whiplash! you could have you the tech available to you to let the machine whatch where your going if even for a minute while you find you phone. This technology could play an integral part in everyday life, even if its only for a few minutes at a time.\n\nYou could counter with the statement that people would not retain control of their vehicles, and become negligent drivers. Falling asleep at the wheel, not paying attention when texting, or even attempting to put on makeup. There is an argument that people will become less interested in their surrondings as well. They lose interest and get bored very easliy, us humans do.\n\nYou decide on it, think about it. What is the responsible thing to do here? Consumers of the kind of technology that enables laziness? Should we do it? Would it be more efficent. Would these vehicles provide a way to fundemetally change the world, if so, for the good or the bad?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story winter Hibiscus end story paragaph repents geting use new contrury She also telling need paped newsra winds Thats I think ened pargraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because around the world natural disaters and other sorts of things are happening across this Earth we need to help. In the text it says\"UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses ,young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\"\n\nMore people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program becauseit is an opportunity of a lifetime.\"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelieveable opportunity for a small-town boy. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. o was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,and a city with streets of water.\"\n\nTHink about joining the Seagoing Cowboys this way,when you sign up like Luke and Don did it will open you up to more than just going places, joining will open you to everything.\"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger . It opened", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The two pie charts illustrate the satisfaction rated by visitors of Parkway Hotel's customer service, in 2005 and 2010.\nOverall, it is noticable that in 2005 was mostly satisfactory and in 2010 it was mostly good. As a matter of fact, the service has increased in quality during the 5 years since, in 2005, over one third the service was rated as poor and very poor. On the other hand, in 2010, over two-thirds was rated as good and excellent.\nIn 2005, unfortunately only 5% of visitors said that the service was excellent, in fact 15% said it was very poor and 21% as poor. Nevertheless 45% of visitors were satisfied, but only 14% rated the service as good.\nIn 2010, in contrast, the service was rated as 4% as very poor, 12% as poor and 17% as satisfactory. However 28% of visitors said that the service was excellent and 39% said it was good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of gay marriage merely failed to be discussed. However, when it comes to whether gay marriage should be allowed legally, individuals hold divergent views. As far as I am concerned, the government should treat gay marriage as a legal thing.\nUndoubtedly, gay marriage can be beneficial. First of all, it is able to shrink the disparity between the affluent and the impoverished. For instance, some countries which allow gay marriage legally have become well-known tourism sites now by attracting foreign gays to come. Thus, their tourism industry can be thrived and the moribund local economy can be turned into the resurgent one, which may help to avoid turning the gap into gulf. Additionally, allowing gay marriage to be legal is also able to undermine the crime rate. On condition that some gays cannot enjoy the right of marriage, they may feel underrated, underprivileged and underappreciated, which may give them the predisposition to revenge the society to express their resentment and dissatisfaction. What is more, the government is able to diminish cultural conflict through making gay marriage a law. Provided that some individuals get little acquainted with gay culture, they may deem it as aggressive. However, by admitting it as a low, we can minimize such vulnerability and promote the mutual understanding of divergent cultures.\nOn the other hand, treating gay marriage legally also has various disadvantages. Firstly, it may undermine family rapport for the reason that some family members may not willing to accept gay marriage, which may cause the increasingly indifferent among family members and finally lead to family skirmish and splintering. In addition, some young individuals are possible to make mistakes at an early age if the government makes gay marriage law. It is widely acknowledged that some young people are not mature enough to choose the right partner. Provided that they get married at an early age, they may suffer irreversible loss.\nTo sum up, although there are some disadvantages to let gay marriage be legal, the benefits of it are multifaceted. Considering the development of the economy and culture, I agree with allowing gay marriage to be a legal option.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By limiting car usage you would be making it a healther enviroment, and a safer one!\n\nthere would be less polluation in the air and that would make the air better for us to breath.\n\nSure by limiting the usage of cars would have an effect on people its also doing us a favor wether we like it or not, because constsntly breathing in polluated air is really bad for you it can have major affects on our lungs, and respotory system. Also by limiting car usage you wouldent spend so much money on gas, oil, car parts,ect:, so by saving all that money you could spent it on something else.\n\nWhen you own a vehicle you put in so much money in just getting your insurance and then you spend so much money on gass every week, dont get me wrong the gas prices have gone down but what will happen when they go back up and how much money will the gas be then?\n\nSo is driving worth killing your air and the enviroment you live in and spend all your money on gas?\n\nOr would it better for us to start imiting our car usage?\n\nBut that is up for you to decide what you want to do.\n\nWhe driving have you ever thought how much polluation you vehicle is dishing out while your driving around town? Probably not, probably you where thinking how log till i get there or i need to text someone back but i bet not once did car polluation ever cross you mind and its okay not alot of people think about it when there driving. Actually hardly anyone thinks abot it ever unless its on the news saying that the air polluation is bad again and thats when you start to think about it.\n\nWith car polluation ypu dont realse what it is dont to you enviroment because you never see it happen in a fast pace it always happen really slow.\n\nAll of a sudden plants will start to die really fast, people will have areally hard time breathing and will probably have to go to the hospital because of the lack of oxygen they can get.\n\nImagine saving you money, wouldent that be nice not having to worry about a car paymeny or gas?\n\nalot of people would have so much money that alot of them nedd because there is alot of families struggling to make it by the have to constantly worry if they have enough money to pay the bills and put gass in there vehicle to get to work to make the money to survie.\n\nwhat if instead of having a vehicle and constantly spending money on gas you walked or took a bike to work, imagine all that money you saved by donig something little as that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I think would better people get outside get exercise enjoy nature interacte family friends If get family friends maybe teens adults would better shape healthly Say jump bed gets breakfast head park gets excrize family friends Alot family friends think spend way much time computers labtops computer long want go outside get excrise friends More people use computer But everybody agrees statement What I think would better solve problem everybody get outside get freshair family friends But people nt think right thing go People think support advances technology believe computers positive effect people Well I nt think way go need get outside get Freshair people But want go computer I think little bit people bissness work work Sometimes people work computer every day case I think alouded use labtop computer But teen go f needing internent writeing paper But going go go talk friend waste time somebody life Well least life I think teen shold work studying homework instead computer I think would better make sure grade making fail school carvee life So best make sure nt computer time talking friends computer day could make fail life I would go little bit talk friends That I think right spend time computer Jump outside goal outside weather friends family meabers I hope teen adult get outside would better allof us everybody would heathly If tri program If tri program really work tri proise work heathly feel bad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi my name is Luke.Im going to tell you why you should join the seagoing cowboys.Here are the reasons why.Also dont forget to join.\n\nYour probably asking yourself why should i join and the reason is that you can help many people who were affected by world war 2 and many other wars.You get to help people who have been injured or need help with something.It takes awhile to get to them,but its worth it.You help them get there animals back if they lost some.Give them food and water if they dont have some or if they barly have food or water.You also can meet up with different nations.I met up with 44 nations when I went.You take care of animals that got hurt or need help.Then give the animals some food and water to drink and eat.You do alot more,but you will have to figure them out.You can see places that youve never seen before like China.When your on your way to somewhere on the boat and your bored you can do things to make it go faster.You can do things like table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,baseball,volleyball,cattle riding,Whittling,etc.Another thing you can do is when your on the boat you can see some places you have never herd or seen before.I went to Greece and saw many different things you wouldnt see where you live.While your there you have some time to spare so you can look around or go on rides or something.You can also tour some things like an excavated castle.Dont worry of getting hurt because around you you are always protected.Another thing not to worry about is the food you dont have to bring your own food they already have some for you.Once you done with the seagoing cowboys i think you will really see the world and what it is made of just like I did.\n\nThose are the reasons I think you should join the seagoing cowboys.I hope you join.Also I hope I see you one day.You will be also rewared.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One break went boat We waiting week go catch salmon That get boat ready leave day Our boat big put stuff like sleeping bags coolers food gear would need salmon also brought camp stove food make boat There also another guy named call big hes funny guy provided lot laughter boatWhen get stop bait shop get prawns spinner blades s use catch salmon We leave soon get boat ramp launch boat realizes forget get hooks shop So pull boat water luckily boat still trailer get stuff secure boat leave shop Right get bait place lady talk earlier said forgot grab hooks bought forget I nt know though So say thanks headed back river We finally get boat water head river going popular place would line boats called hog line would always get middle best There would days usually like boats side us got hectic times funny guys nt even know operate boat When got geared poles put water pole went hooked nice bright fought fifth teen minutes netted keeper fish After said small fish Right around dark reeled poles put away neatly boat Right got dark time bed quite river one river besides nt worry people rocking boat sleeping The next morning cold windy luckily brought top cover us getting wind burn last time went got wind burnt bad hurt week finally buddies pole goes hes excited hooking fish ten minutes go realizes hooked log floated knew hooked nt want say thing would funny getting excited My pole goes fish throw anchor float get net another fish take home two boat buddy one needs get fish one take home After day boat time head home get ready begging week Right two clock I look pole tip slams water another fish hand buddy s fighting trouble reeling though drag tight fix gets boat first salmon ever happy perfect timing fifteenth minutes later leave go home fun got fish funny moments I got buddy first salmon", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After graduating from school, students have a dilemma, which is whether they should pursue higher education or look for a job in order to have successful career life. While two of these career paths have many advantages , I believe that getting academic qualifications before going to work is the best.\n\nOn the one hand, studying in universities brings us various benefits, that many choose to have a better career. Firstly, it gives students great opportunities to gain academic knowledge, which is the basis for career development. The courses and curriculums at university teach students the basic knowledge and therefore they gain a deeper insight into the fields they major in. This knowledge would play a vital role in helping students do their jobs better at the workplace. Secondly, students graduating from university would be officially qualified by academic organization institutes, thus, they would have more chances to get high-paying and position jobs than those who do not have university degrees. It is common that companies would consider candidates background knowledge as their top priority when hiring employees. \n\nOn the other hand, students gain a variety of benefits when having a job instead of pursuing an academic path. The first benefit is they would have more time to improve their practical skills, which are crucial for their jobs, they spend at least 4 years more than their peers, training and learn from their colleagues, work environment and their own experience. That would give them a higher chance to succeed in their career. A salesperson would have much more time to concentrate fully on building up relationships with customers and improve social skills , for example, rather than wasting four years at university to learn too many irrelevant courses. The second benefit is they will be likely independent and able to overcome difficulties better than the other groups. Students starting their jobs earlier have to deal with many problems, for example, covering their expenses, earning a living, without supports from families , coping with stress at work. By means of these experiences, they become more mature and will-experienced, which is also primary for their success at the workplace.\n\nIn conclusion, individuals have their own decisions when choosing a career path, whether having a job earlier or gaining qualifications in the academic world, in my opinion, the former has more positive aspects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock They known mooring mast nt perfect There many reasons greatest one said safety The hydrogen highly flammable accident New Jersey noticed much dangerous would happened right New York So dropped idea later left transportation airplanes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The figure indicates the process of the production of woolen items. There are a total of about 13 steps where raising sheep is an initial step and woolen products such as carpets and jackets are the final step.\nTo put into detail, growing up sheep is the starting process to obtain enough amount of wool. Thereafter, the fur covering the sheep is completely shaved, which is followed by cleaning and drying. Besides, dried wool is sent onto the spinning step, which creates wool. The spinning process also produces string, which is mainly reused. Tufts of wool which is made by crossing wools are delivered into tuft storage. A tuft of wool which is picked up is formed into a round shape, which is called balls of yarn. Finally, Balls of yarn are extracted into carpets or jackets. This is also used for knitting among some people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think the Face was created by aliens. If you really think about it is just a natural landform. There are many reasons in why, it is just a natural landform. Being a scientidst at NASA is an important job.\n\nThe people at NASA have many reasons why the Face is not an alien artifact. First,\n\nCydonia became a prority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended which had a impact on the Face. Second, a cheif scientst for NASA's Mars Exploration Program said that \" They felt this was important to taxpayers\". I totally argree with him and what he said, it would be very important to the taxpayers.Then, \"We photographged the Face as soon as we could get a good shoot at it\".\n\nMany people had to play an important role to tell that NASA wasnt created by aliens. On April 5,1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time a man named \"Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orginal Viking photos.\" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL website reveal a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. Although many people werent yet quit satisfied. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face due to it being winter.They started to think \" Perhaps, said skepticss, alien markings were hidden by the haze.\" Misson controllers began to prepare to look again. \"It's not easy to target Cydonia, says Garvin.\" In fact its hard work\".\n\nMany people still began to think that the Face was created by aliens. On April 8,2001 a cloudless day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. \" We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Malins team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's abssolute maxium resolution.\" Each pixel in the 2001 images had spanned 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. The picture showed the Maritan equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West.\n\nMany people thought that the Face was created by aliens, but turns out it was a natural landform. The NASA had to take mant steps for them to be able to complete this task. The NASA had took many important roles to find out if it was an natural landform. Being a scientist at NASA is an important job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "one many joys I love share people I absolutely love laugh I nt know would I nt laugh My cousin I usually together truth supposed energy drinks dad gave us monster split day going After ten minutes us drinking whole monster one drank one staying calm hand drank couple sips going crazy She running aisles tripping feet She almost tipped cart end hysterically apparent reason normal Wendy wife second cousin started get hungry went go eat pizza cafe My mom called I trying get phone pocket answer trying hold plate hot pizza I handed plate plate slipping grip She holding food hand felt bottom plate said really hot passed nt paying attention nt good hold pizza dropped floor pizza side It embarrassing everybody looking us After embarrassing moment realized forgot churos told go get All three us realized mistake soon left cause klutz probably jinxed saying probably going drop We little surprised nt dropped yet soon thought set table one churos fell table rolled package We hard could nt breathe embarrassed mistake turned bright red We felt bad poor could nt help laugh funny She knew funny nt want laugh One things usually say ca nt nt willing laugh nt fun That s believe important laugh cause got ta learn fun situation need laugh yet nt wanting That s one biggest ways fun know made small silly mistake think everyone world saw need laugh But wont cause feel embarrassed ashamed admit made little mistake Sometimes s job go pat back tell everybody makes mistakes got ta learn silly tough situation nobody perfect Tell laugh helps feel better realize life knocks get back cause s life That s way learn mistakes life well Laughter really important laugh better feel better feel fun Laughter fixes everything bandage little things happen life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many critics are of the opinion that admission's priority for a successful career is taking university courses. However, some believe that getting jobs after had finished high school is better. This essay will discuss both views and give the writer's opinion.\n\nIt is crucial to understand that the more professional young people are, the better position they will get. Overall, universities and colleges are likely to teach massive and professional knowledge, which is required for the working environment. As a consequence, students who achieved qualifications from higher education have more opportunities to get well-paid jobs. Therefore, a plan for further courses after high school should be set up by young people.\n\nIt could be plainly viewed that late teens can have chances to gain experience which is not been taught by higher education organizations when they go to work early. During the job, many situations that they need to deal with. This leads them to be more mature in their field of work. On the whole, gaining experience from work can be the best way to succeed.\n\nPersonally, I believe that going to universities or colleges is the best way to a successful career. Those organizations not only help students get better jobs but also improve the community skills of the students. For example, many mature white-collar workers who graduated from universities have chances to become bosses.\n\nTo sum up, there is an argument on teens' decision of getting a job. Regardless of how convenient of early job salary is, as long as we are concentrated on education, we will have more opportunities for our further careers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir The mood story happiness The reason I said story happiness happy growing In text says Growing environment instilled great sense Narciso Rodriguez happy grew neighborhood lives Her neighborsfriends Spanish Cuban Italian immigrants In conclusion mood authors memoir articlestory", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of exploring Venus\" the author describes why humans should continue to explore Venus. The Author of the article makes several convincing claims throughout said article.\n\nOne example is in paragraph four it states that long ago Venus was very Earth like in the fact that it was largly covered in ocean. As most of us have been taught that water is essential for all life to be able to survive. Venus also has many geological features similar to Earth in that it has valleys,mountains,and craters. These similarities make us curious and what to ask the question if Venus was so Earth like then did it ever contain living organisms? Also we must ask ourselves could it ever sustain life.\n\nAnother factor that makes humanity so curious about Venus as it states in paragraph four as well that Venus is one of our nearest options for a planetary visit. Imagine looking up at clear stary night and along with the pale face of the moon and the twinkling of the stars. You would see a shining glow in the distance wondering what could it be what is going on there and can I visit it. For Venus it is entirely possible to do so.\n\nThough one might say that the author gave too many negative factors to visiting Venus. Yes he does but these are but challenges in the way of human curiosity. Yes the air might be ninety-seven percent carbon dioxide yes the surface might temperature might be eight hundred degrees. Can these challenges stand in the way of human injanuity and our will to discover the unkown. No nothing can stand in the way of human curiosity. For eaxample in Pragraph seven it states that NASA is working on other approaches such as simplified electronics made of silicon carbide. This invention has even been tested by the simulated chaos of Venus and it lasted for three weeks.\n\nThough we might not be ready yet for our long awaited visit to Venus it will adventualy be possible. I might not live to see it but in the wake of human curiosity and the will to discover the unkown nothing can stand in our way. Nothing will stop us from reaching for the stars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is Venus a worthy persiut? Will it help us learn more about our Earth? The answer to these questions is yes. Venus has some features that are really similar to the ones on Earth. By learning more about Venus we can apply the knowlege to our palnet to further help it. This knowledge can be applied to avoid catastrophes or other bad furtune.\n\nOne way we know exploring Venus is a good idea. Is the fact that Venus is a dead ringer for earth. Their apperance is uncanny just by looking at them. Venus and Earth are really similar plants, they are even nicknamed twins. Earth's size is extremely close to Venus's size. The fact that these planets share a similar size can help infer that they work and sustain themselves similiar. For example, if two people are the same size they probably have similar needs. Their caloric, water, nutrient, and other needs are probably the same. Knowing more about Venus can help the Earth be a healthier place.\n\nAnother reason the exploration of Venus is essential is that Venus used to have the same geological features that earth has now. We know that Venus was once covered by ocean just like Earth. The surface also was evidence of rocky sediments. This can help infer that there used to be valleys, mountains, and even craters. The earth inhabits all of these characteristics as well. What happend to the ones in Venus? The answer is unknown that is why it is crucial to explore Venus so that Earth can avoid the same misfortune as its twin planet.\n\nThe last reason Venus needs to be explored is that by the few times that it was explored. The is evidence of past life. There is a big chance that Venus supported various forms of life. These forms of life are now certainly absent on Venus due to the horrid atmosphere. Why is life absent? The reason is unknown, but Venus has answers. The future of man kind depends on an exploration to Venus. The Earth can not parish, just as Venus did. Scientist need to uncover why Venus is in the condition it is in, so that they can mold Earth's future for the better to substain forms of life.\n\nVenus and Earth share so many characteristics. Knowing all the possible information about Venus can help the Earth avoid the current state of Venus. Their size will help us know the needs of Earth. The change of the geological features in Venus can help humans prepare for change. Finally, Knowing what happend to the forms of life in Venus can help the human race live on. All these factors are crucial for the prosperity of our home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electorial college should be thrown out and the popular vote for the president should take its place because the elctorial college is unfair and the people don't really have a voice.\n\nThe electorial college should go away because it unfair. Electorial votes are unfair because the canidates only focus on the bigger states, \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the canidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campain ad.\" Votes dont even get to vote for the president, they vote for state electors. \"Under the electorial system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" This is why we should despose of the electorial system and just go off popular votes.\n\nAnother reason why we should replace the electoral college for popular vote is because the people don't really have a voice in the electorial system. Voters do not directly vote for the president but they vote for the slate electors who then vote for the president. We the people should have a direct vote for the president. \"Consider that the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" so in other words we have put our trust in people to have a voice for us when we could just do it ourselves. \"voters sometimes get confused about electors and vote for the wrong candidate.\" Even though the electorial system is all kinds of messed up there is an upside to it, \"perhaps most of the worrying is the prospect of a tie in the election vote. In that cases, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.\" They use the Representatives to break a tie so there wouldnt have to be a run-off election. With popular vote you wouldn't have to have a run off because there is not an even number of people registered to vote in America. So i urge the popular vote to take the place of the electorial college system.\n\nIn conclusion, the electorial college system should be exicuted and popular votes should be subsituted because the electorial college system is unfair and the people don't really have a voice in the election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some individuals frequently put the blame for juvenile delinquency on their parents. Nevertheless, from my perspective, exerting discipline on parents for their children’s wrongdoings is not sensible because every individual is responsible for their own actions.\r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that mothers and fathers must take accountability for their children’s malpractice since they are role models for their offspring from the earliest days of their lives. It could be true that juveniles’ misbehaviours, which violate the law, may stem from the observation of their parents. And since adolescents are acutely sensitive, they can be affected straightforwardly. For example, if parents are offenders who cheat others for money, their children would suppose it as normal and consequently commit the same crime in possible cases in the future.\r\n\r\nDespite the aforementioned arguments, I hold the belief that should not be imposed punishments on their parents when their offspring commit an offence. The first reason can be attributed to individuals’ responsibility for their actions. And each person is a separate individual engaging in a myriad of activities. Hence, it is morally wrong and may foster resentment and ill will toward innocent individuals. Another point worth mentioning is that adolescents are influenced by not only their parents but also other factors such as their peers or anti-social content on the Internet. Frequent exposure to toxic friends at school or violent topics on social media, for example, will be a key factor in illicit behaviours, which could be the potential root of crime-committing activities. Thus, it is reasonable to assume that other parties should share responsibility for children who break the law.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although parents will be at the core of setting examples for their offspring, I am of the opinion that it is unreasonable to accuse them of their children’s dirty deeds because of individual liability for their actions and other influential parties.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I went slove picking marsh mellows chocolate make someone walking Ial six came upon huge bunch people looking bye stuff smiles So I went line sat least fifty minutes waiting marsh mellows chocolate came two mash mellows two chocolate packs I asked PERSON two said I waited getting rid gave two one I smiled Thank When went back car told sister PERSON get two said sister snicked went back car bag trunk one crys toke We got home ate three I ate two ate five us Thank", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author tells positive and negative outcomes of drivers . Which leaves me to think that there could be complications with these cars. Yes, it would be cool to see the world evolve before my eyes and see what more the future has to bring but, is this dream even possible?\n\nThese cars could maunfunction and someone could get seriously hurt. These cars could also completly change traffic laws . Not only that but how would the future of the world be prepared to take action if they were to mounfunction no one by then would know how to drive a car and wont have a drivers license. is it possible that they could even forget the basic traffic laws ? Like putting your seatbelt on or stopping at a stop light. Questions like these worry meand dont convice me that these cars would be safe.\n\nIn the other hand making these cars can advance technology and be a start of changing the world .These cars would be so much easier and wouldnt cause many acccidents if they were to work. Plus who doesnt want a self driving car? It would be so much easier for transpertation. You wouldnt have to wait for the senior citizen to get out of the lane because your in a hurry or wait for the guy ahead of you to notice the traffic light is on green.\n\nIf anything I would say i stand in both positions. I am concerned about the safety of theses cars but, wouldnt it be so cool to have your own choffer thats not even existing. To just hang out at he back of the car and final catch up with social media or change the song without having to be cautios of where you are going.\n\nThese cars could be the start of something new and could change us all. Making these cars could be the path way to our future. We could all be teleporting next or flying. If they where to work who knows what else we can come across of and make happen. The world is full of possiblites you just have to take the right path and drive through it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars cannot be created by aliens if the NASA cameras did not see any people/aliens. On that fact if NASA did see any aliens on Mars they would have kept it top secret and wold have not showed the images to the world. Not saying its true but if NASA had shown an alien on Mars the world would freak out and we wold destroy each other.\n\nNow tell me if you seen an alien on Mars what would you do?\n\nAll I am saying is in 1976 if aliens did make that face then why are we still here? Why haven't the aliens came yet ? Because if aliens were to make that face on Mars then that means they seen NASA's cameras circling their planet so they would've found a way to get them down. But I think it's a big pain in the butt to the people that think thier is alien life on a planet in our Solier System.\n\nI also want to no part in this discussing because if you don't want to belive me that is on you to look crazy if front of the world so do what you think is best about it I have to get to back to work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the number of vehicles on the road has climbed up considerably. This has immediately been an issue for many countries. This problem has its sources as well as ideas to remedy it.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, a significant percentage of the population around the world have their own vehicle. Each family has at least one or two cars. These people benefit from it as a mode of transport to commute to their destinations such as workplace, shopping mall or at their relative's place. Few of them would go by bus or take the metro. They find it easier and more comfortable to travel in their own car. On the other hand, companies that offer delivery services usually use countless goods vehicles. This ultimately leads to traffic congestion on the roadway. Now, in some countries, road development is quite poor. The street is sometimes narrow or has cracks. Consequently, this also contributes to a high rate of traffic.\r\n\r\nOne measure that can be taken is to sensitize the car owners. They should be encouraged to travel by bus rather than using the car more often. The government could take initiatives like lowering the bus fare or increasing the frequency of buses on the road. A sustainable idea could be offering each family a bicycle motivating them to consider other means of transport. Also, they should try to solve this issue by implementing and building highways with more lanes as well as using more durable materials to construct the roads. Last but not least, companies need to find a way to change the working shifts for their employees. Thereby, decreasing the density of workers and the number of vehicles.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, traffic jams can only be eradicated if the causes are taken into considerations. The government could play a huge role in resolving this problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author provides with information about venus being a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. However in paragraph 1 it states that, \" Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our run. While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine closely \". Although NASA has sent many humans to examine and stud ythe planet venus no human has actually came close to the planet. In recent studies nobody has actually came close to the planet and here's why. In paragraph 3 it states that, \" a thick atomosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus \". In paragraph the author states that \" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degres fahernheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\". These conditions are contions that humans may not be able to handle that's why nobody has came close to the planet. Humans have certain things the can handle and what venus has are things humans can not handle. The author is providing us enough information on what goes on the planet Venus. The author states in paragraph 5 \" at thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degress Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on Earth \". These are not easy conditions for humans and that's why NASA and scientists both are working their way to getting humans to venus without experiencing minor conditons. In paragraph 5 the author is providing information about the \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administration ( NASA) has one particualery compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. In paragraph 5 it states the following \" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditons on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray \".\n\nNASA and Scientists both may have a better idea than to send a human being to study the planet Venus. NASA and their team are working on machine that will be able to get close enough to the planet Venus. It states in paragraph 7 that \" Simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a champer simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditons \". Striving to meet the challenges presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to e gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely led us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. This proves that studying venus isn't impossible but many conditons can effect human beings. Venus is a planet NASA and Scientists themselves can study but with different ways than sending a human being their to study. The author provided enough information to understadn that venus is not a easy planet to study. In \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus \" the author provided enough informatiom to state that Venus is a worthy pursuit but has some challenges to it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience valuable thing Everyday I go basketball practice watch friends play I practice weeks ago I broke ankle playing soccer It take patience sit gym watch friends fun hour half Every I sit bench watch team play basketball game I choice go games I patience So I go It boring sit I I watch play year You know patience virtue It takes lots patience really anything Do patience Patience isnt sitting somewhere get upset someone It calm waiting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The entertainment industry has pumped out many famous products and franchises, most of which are “violent content” rated. Some people argue that the bloor-and-gore contents on the market could have a bad effect on mental health and shouldn’t be displayed, while others think that it is normal and enjoyable. While action movies and games do display violent contents, I believe these creative products are for entertainment purposes and could help consumer to have a good time.\r\n\r\nThere is a belief hold by a number of people that popular movies and video games with violent contents are giving out negative effects on the mental and social health of the consumers. There are many famous action/horror movie titles such as Wrong Turn, The Cabin Fever, Zombieland. These contents are publicly distributed and the gruesome scenes could reach out to many audiences. This kind of entertainment industry that profits from violent contents could have a bad consequence on society because people who bought this would think to themselves that violent is normal. A friend of mine is a gang member and he told me he got his motivation to join from watching movies about cocain mafia gangster like Tony Montana.\r\n\r\nOn other hand, some people argue that movies and games containing violence are there for entertainment purposes mostly. The violence itself is the reminder of what could happen have we acted uncivilized. We are exposed to the gruesome parts and see it for what it is so we don’t ask to seek it in our real life. Take some well-known video games for example - Battlefield, Left 4 Dead, Counter Strike - these action/shooting games are here for us to releast our anger and stress and it has been working well for many decades. Me and my friends all play games, we shoot in video games but we never need to own guns in real life. We don’t have a need for guns because video games is enough to satisfy us in this regard. Not forget to mention that every movies and games in the market right now are labeled, viewers are warned and they have the option to not proceed further with the content. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a lot of the famous movies and video games are adult rated. Some people see these violent contents as bad for the society and calling for censorship, while others see action and horror movie/game titles as a way to escape reality, to be entertained in a different world. I think that it is harmless as it is mainly used to ease stress from our mind and provide us with an entertainment service.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hot alone water reasons features setting affect cyclist It hot cyclist riding This makes cyclist feel worried getting dehydrated The cyclist alone nothing sight If anything happened one help The cyclist little water conserve order stay active energy With little water hard stay hydrated Hot alone water reasons features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is advancing at a rapid rate and is consuming our lives. With the new software created by Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe, computers are now able to recognize human emotion. This technology can be useful for various things. The software can make video games more realistic, it can give more insight on psychology, and it can even be useful in classrooms.\n\nOften, children in classrooms do not understand certain things, but may be too shy to ask questions. With the emotion recognition, teachers will be able to tell who is understanding the topic and who is struggling. Another way the software can be helpful to classrooms is that if it shows a child is upset about something, but tries not to show it, that may be a clue that they're struggling with something outside of class. When a child is in a bad state, they will most-likely not try in their classes, but if a teacher could talk to them and help them, it could be a good way to get the child to vent and relieve the pressure from themselves, causing their grades to go up. Lastly, the software can help teachers notice bullying. Many times kids get let off the hook for bullying someone because, \"they were just kidding around\", \"we're buddies\", but that is not really the truth. If the emotional recongition software is installed in schools, teachers will be able to notice if a kid out of a group of people is feeling uncomfortable while the other kids are laughing. Stopping each of these problems will allow the children to make better grades, be less stressed, and hopefully enjoy school.\n\nTechnology is a big piece of this generation and it has come a long way and has helped society a lot. The advancements in them are drastic and they continue to become more useful to society. The emotional recognition software can help make many impacts on this world to make it become a nicer place. Using the software in classrooms would be an awesome start.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many believe that the \"Face\" on Mars was actually created by aliens.\n\nThis landform gives off the illusion that it is a face.\n\nTo clear all confusion, the Face on Mars wasn't created by aliens.\n\nAs the cameras traveled around Mars what appeared to be a head from end to end stretching two miles was actually a Martian mesa.\n\nMartian mesa's are common around Cydonia therefore NASA made the assumption that it was.\n\nThis Martian mesa was a bit different than the others.\n\nThis one had unusual shadows that gave off the look to be an Egyptian Pharaoh but was still considered a mesa.\n\nSecondly, this landform was common around the American West.\n\nThis butte or \"mesa\" was just more oddly shaped than the others. This landform was created by a lava dome which caused it to look like a face somehow.\n\nGarvin refrenced the Middle Butte in Snake River Plain in Idaho which is another idea that it was just a landform.\n\nOn the contrary, this could be an alien made figure. The landform gave off an illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\n\nThe passage also stated the landform stretched two miles from end to end which made the \"head\".\n\nIf the structure was bona fide that means it was well-rounded and nicely structured which means it took time to come together then it was done by what we call a second life.\n\nNASA would rather hide that being afraid of conspiracy theorists.\n\nTo conclude, the \"Face\" on Mars isn't an actual face.\n\nThis structure is just a landform proven by NASA with statistical facts and photographs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars are usually something we see in movies, specifically in futuristic or sci-fi movies. When we see these movies, we are in awh and we would love to have them. I mean who wouldn't want a car that could drive it self, but is it the best thing for us?\n\nThere are companies now that have cars that drive, for exmple Google and BMW. Google has had drvieable cars since 2009 and they have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but there is still a person in there that has to help out. Although the cars do drive them selves, they can not go through work zones or go around crashes, so the human has to come into play. BMW has a car that they call \"Traffic Jam Assistant\", this car can handle driving speeds up to 25 mph, but drivers still need to keep their hands on the wheel and when the car does not know what to do then vibrations go through the seat to notify the driver.\n\nHumans have been driving for many many centuries and to think of a day where we won't have to do that anymore is strange. If humans don't have to drive, then they won't pay attention. If these companies really make a car that drives it's self through any kind of condition then what will happen if the car gets into an accident with another car. Will it be the humans fault or the car and say it is the car's fault, who will we blamn the company for promoting a safe car or the people who designed the car. Something else to look at in the situation is how much will the repairs will be?\n\nIn today's day in age when we get into a crash the damage is pretty costly and the hospital bills are not very pretty either. But we are talking about a car that drives itself, so it is going to cast way more to fix. You have to repair the body of the car and the the inside just like you do now but these cars can drive them selves by computers and chips. So how much will they charge us to fix the computer and the body?\n\nIn coclusion to my argument, no. I dont think we should keep making and testing these driverless cars. There is so much at risk and Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of drving on autopilot 90% of the time. That is not 100% so why are we still wasting our time and money on this. The cost for repairing these cars if there is a crash will go up and there will be law suits to the companies. These cars will not make it very long on the market, so we should stop now and continue makeing the cars that we have now safer and continue rebuidling and finding more things we can add them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The two given pictures compare the layout of a square park between the year 1980 and the present day.\nIt is noticeable that several significant modifications were made over the period, which includes the new plan for lawn, access, and border, making the park more attractive for people with different purposes of visiting.\nLooking at the information described above more closely, the brick wall around the park and the fence door as the entry at the bottom of the park in the year 1980 are no longer present nowadays. Instead of the sole entrance available for visitors in the past, there are four accesses located on each side of the square park now, combined through two walking paths with each other, which cross themselves in the middle of the park.\nTalking about the change that occurred to the lawns inside the park, the green area was divided by the pavement into two parts in 1980, while due to the new layout of the walking part inside the park, the green area has been separated into four pieces with respective functions nowadays. The part with a small pond and a couple of sitting banks remains its initial usage for leisure, but its size has been slightly reduced. Furthermore, two new lawn parts have been created. While the one suited in the bottom right-hand corner is available for sports activities like football, the other one lying the opposite of it is applicable for picnics and barbecues with friends and family members.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human emotions are minute aspects of everyone's lives that will never go away nor change. In addition to this, facial expressions convey the same emotion in every continent, country, and culture. Figuring out intentions behind the face can sometimes prove to be a valuable tool, but it could also lead to complications that would inhibit its ability to function in a trustworthy and encrypted way.\n\nIt's a strange idea, if you think about it. Being able to figure out if someone is lying, hiding something, or conveying a false emotion at the touch of a button or two. Centuries of habits built up over time in the general population towards changing the way people perceive you based on your facial reaction to something will change because there won't be any way to hide an authentic emotion. In the case of using it in schools, I would have to argue that the cons outnumber the pros, and for very specific reasons.\n\nSchool is a place of learning, achievement, and success. It paves the path to greater opportunities for the future, and creates dreamers to fulfill the demands of creativity and humanity. The side of school that is not advertised however is the social exchanges in student-student and student-teacher interactions. Kids that go to school have a pressure upon them, more than one actually. They feel a necessary need to excel in school to prove their worth to society, and they are pressured by their peers to make a place for themslves in school and to rise to the top of the class socially. It is a dog-eat-dog world in school, and competition between students of different working class stems, financial stability, and mental state can sometimes be very intense. After all, putting a bunch of students who at one point never knew each other comes with potential risks, right? Students discover a certain animosity towards other people that helps them learn to support themselves and to not expect much out of anyone their age because students are still learning, still trying to figure out how interactions in the world work. Emotions get fiery, patience runs low, and stress levels rise exponentially the farther you go in years of school.\n\nSchool is not a place that is written on foundations of pleasure. The emotional state of many kids and teens in school suffers because the attention of the student is elsewhere, likely focused on academic success (which in lots of cases might be suffering too). Using a facial recognition system is useful for safety concerns and order in a school, but things get edgy when the emotions of a stressed or otherwise emotionally challenged student come into play.\n\nTeachers also have impacts on students--positive or negative--that influence how the student feels, and sometimes the grade that comes out of a particuar class. A reasonable, interactive teacher that focuses their ideals on teaching another human being will tend to have students that feel a positive outlook on the academic success of that class, and will reflect the repercussions of this effect out positively. A teacher who does not have these values and treats the student(s) with personal bias will affect how the student thinks and performs negatively. If a student feels this negative energy from a teacher, there is a good chance that one of two things will happen. The student will keep the information about the specific teacher to themself in order to avoid punishment from the teacher or ridicule by unempathetic students. The other option is that the student will tell other students, parents, etc. about this teacher to rase awareness on the mental and emotional effects that this teacher has on the student. Students have a right to intellectual privacy and free thought, and a school's intentions to penetrate that wall of privacy takes on multiple bad facades. As Dr. Huang spoke: \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" is a good point, but you have to take into account other emotions that the computer would pick up too, which may not want to be uncovered in the first place.\n\nEven if the privacy of the student was maintained, what need would the school have for storing information on a student's mental and emotional states? Could the school use this against the student? Could the school administors take how the student is feeling the wrong way? Questions like these need to be answered by informed staff of schools that would plan to use the technology on a regular basis to modify and adjust the curriculum of a particular student. In addition to the purpose of the program, there needs to be thought about the attention that a school administration would pay tosuch a program. This can get tricky because a school system has so many areas of interest to maintain, and a computer system such as Dr. Huang's would raise the cost in dollars. It is hard to say if the system would make the adequate adjustments needed to preserve the privacy of the students from an academic standpoint, which would involve the emotions they feel about school, school life, or the academic habits at home.\n\nIn conclusion, students could find use in the facial recognition system proposed by scientists, but some of the effects that the system could have on the student are not definite nor are available to study yet. The program needs clinical study before seeing action in the real field of school, because society relies on and will use those kinds of students who have a full spectrum of emotional states that might not want to be broadcast to the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, a spacecraft from NASA called \"Viking 1\" caught a photo on Mars of something that looked like a face. Some scientist and people believe that this \"face\" is an artifact built/made by something or someone like aliens. Others believe that it is just a natural landform built by nautral things like wind and rain. I belive that this thing on Mars is just another landform that just so happens to look like a face.\n\nFirst of all, NASA is a very highly known space agency program that has achieved many great things like getting the first people on the moon. To make a mistake of not knowing if something a a landform or not is something BIG. NASA has many intelligent scientists to look over stuff and help out.\n\nSecondly, if it was a face that was built by something like aliens, where are they? How do you find this big mesa in the middle of a planet and can't find the \"people\" who did it? How can you make the assumption of something making a giant \"artifact\" when you don't even know who did it?\n\nMost importantly, NASA's spacecraft \"Mars Gtlobal Surveyor\" (MGS) has flown out on April 5, 1998, to take a picuture after analyzing it, they said it was a landform. Many people were not satisfied and said that it the picture couldn't have been taken well because it was during the Winter--a cloudy time for the planet.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, the MGS too another picture of the strange land. It was hard for NASA because they normally don't pass over the face often. That day was a cloudless summer day, and they captured an extrodanary photo using the camera's maximum resolution. This photo showed that there was nothing that proved that there was any sort of life around it. It really just showed that it was the equivalent of a buttle or a mesa that is common around the American West.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that this \"face\" on the planet is just a simple landform that is like a mesa. I think it would be hard for a very well program like NASA to mistake something like this. There have been many pictures taken and there have been no signs of life near the landform, and it is almost just like any other piece of rock and sand that sticks out of the ground.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Society work by the youth in today’s contemporary era is getting on the verge of extinction. It is widely said that teens should devote their free pace to social work which will be benefited for both of them. I completely agree with this notion which I will elucidate in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, people are more vulnerable to many diseases & hence they need special assistance. Hospitals nowadays, are not only meant for treatment but a place for generating revenue by making fools. Therefore, if most of these diseases should be treated at the home then it will save a lot of money. In doing so, the youngesters of that humanity can also start helping to those patients in their leisure hour. While doing so, it will reflect the culture & values of their families. For instance, in a survey conducted by AIIMS, India, in one of the renowned societies, it has been revealed that the casualty of that association is only 33% compared to some other societies because most of the diseases are being treated within that neighbourhood with the help of humongous youth.\r\n\r\nBesides that, these kids are well appreciated by everyone & also rewarded with prizes which motivated them as a whole. Additionally, they also get a chance into politics & win from their locality which is again a positive for that nation. Though it is quite hard to devote our time to social movement as well our daily routine in today’s competitive world but still it gives immense pleasure & satisfaction in indulging in such activities. Research conducted by The Outlook, a magazine, it is being published that the majorityof leaders around 23% are social welfare pupils from well-known societies. \r\n\r\nTo wrap up, although it is difficult to balance personal as well as social excersise but one should not forget their values & provide their kindness towards humanities. Minor should step forward & start helping towards the community in their free moment with only keeping in mind that their efforts will be rewarded by the lord in any other form.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In text mother said Its flowers arent pretty its strong enough make cold months winter hibiscus Thats matter This sentences shows Saeng like flowers Theyre strong live winter shows pretty strong spring This amphasis Saeng strong confident spring Thats author put end Its also reflected flower theyre pretty strong spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not a good idea. It's almost defeats the purpose of life. If we had driverless cars then no one would have to go out of there house for anything, and this is a problem because we would never have to leave the house for anything. It sounds like a good idea don't it? Sadly it is not, if we never had to leave the house then we would become lazy and dependent on robots to do everything for us. Outside activity would decrease greatly and the streets would be empty. Well, exept for the cars, which no one would be driving. I don't want to see our people turn to a boring way of life. If we did have these \"diverless cars\" what do you think would happen to all the fast food industry? I know, since there would be no people there would be no workers at places like; Mcdonalds, Taco Bell, Arbys. Everything would be automated just like the cars. The fast food industry isn't the only job that would be taken by robots, most jobs in america and around the world would be taken. The citizens of the world would have no where to work. That is why these cars are a bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has always been mentioned that in the future there will be new and improved cars.\n\nDriveless cars like it said in the article perform a public taxi system in a way where the passenger just sits back and relaxes until reached his or hers destination.\n\nGoogles' cofounder seems to have a pretty liable idea on how driveless cars will be used; But how will there be that many cars for people to use in order to all get where they need to be in time?\n\nIs there going to have to be a rent price? or even gas?\n\nI am against mostly, but in a way with.\n\nIf there is problems with the car it should be the manufacturers' responsiblity to take fault for.\n\nThen again, the driver should be alert at all times as well.\n\nIn reality there is no such thing as a driveless car, it does state in some points in the article that the driver has opportunity to navigate through construction sites, accidents and etc.\n\nIn a way I think the car companies are telling us all these features to persuade us even more.\n\nI think they have sensors that tell us when to keep our hands on the steering wheel does not make it any more \"developed\".\n\nIn my opinon, these kinds of cars would be useful to the hancicapped or diasbled people that don't have the opportunity to drive due to their condition.\n\nPeople that only want it just for the case of it being new or they have the money don't deserve it.\n\nIf they can drive they should obligated to.\n\nAs for the cameras there are already cameras installed in cars today.\n\nThere are ones on the back to make sure you won't hit anything or damage the car.\n\nI don't seem to understand the aspect of the car watching the driver if all the driver needs to be worried about is the road and it's surroundings.\n\nI would agree more if there was an example on how well tested the car was.\n\nIn conclusion, like I said before there will never be a car that will drive on it's own and if there is then it would take much more than 4 years to create more than one.\n\nThe regulations should be set for both the driver and the maufacturer.\n\nIn reality, they government will have a say in all the payments as will as the companies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author greatfulness happiness When author talking parents culture said I extremely greatful Which I adored day The author discribed charector way could easily tell greatful happy person", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Author for the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" gave both good key points on why we should have driverless cars as well as key points on why we shouldn't have driverless cars.\n\nMy position on this specific topic is that i believe that having a driverless car would be proficient to the human life because then you wouldn't have to wrooy about if your tired or not and you don't have to worry about taking those harmful energy drinks when you drive because you need to stay awake. Because since you have a driverless car you are capable of practically doing anything you have to do within the time period you have from your starting destination the your final destination. You could finish up work you didn't get done, you could actually eat your breakfast, you could actually look into some important things while your car gets you to your destination. although there are cons to driverless cars there is always room for improvement and this generation has plenty of time to improve on that situation.\n\nconcluding this I believe having driverless cars would be a tremendous achievement for man kind knowing that we are advancing in the technology that we started off creating and that the driverles car would help millions and contribute to all good beings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teenager can learn a lot through working in community in their free time. Many people believe that this can be advantageous to the community and the childrer because services like picking up garbage, helping elders can teach teenages to keep the place clean and tidy, and to respects their their elder. I believe , however , that they should be paid for their work and time rather than doing for free.\r\n\r\nChildrens do have free time compared to adults. When this time is utilsed in a right manner and they are paid, it can motivate them to participate in this activities. In other words, knowing that they will earn through their hard work with push them to paricipate voluntilarity without even have to force them. For instance, if a teenager want to buy pair of sports shoes, he will work in the community and earn that money rather than asking parents.\r\n\r\nHowever, if they are asked to just work for free, they might end up not perofrming the tasks really well. They will find reasons to avoid performing services to the community. They can be forced to do the job, but the outcome might turnout to be poor. Therefore, it should be complusory to pay, when they are working in their leisure time.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, teenages should be paid for working in the community as it will motivate them. In addition , there wont be any need to force them because they will voluntrialy participate considering the reward they will earn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The provided illustrations depict the dormitory map in 2010 and current. Overall, shared areas were minimized and more rooms were built to increase the accommodation's capacity.\nIn 2010, the building was surrounded by a garden. There were 3 student bedrooms, each located away from the others. When entering the main entrance, the first student bedroom was on the left side, followed by the bathroom. At the end of the hallway, stood the second bedroom. Turning to the left, the last bedroom was on the other end with the kitchen in between the two bedrooms. If you turned another left, you would find the living room beside the bedroom.\nThroughout the years, a carpark was built on the right side of the main entrance through the building's length. While the three student bedrooms remain the same, an additional en-suite room was constructed in the hallway beside the second bedroom. The kitchen is now integrated with the social area. Moreover, two more student bedrooms were built next to the third bedroom, one replacing the livingroom and another being developed over the garden area near the walkway.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face was not created by aliens because it is probably just a shadow. It also looks ,in height wise, like a lava dome in Idaho. Lastly, their camera would have caught any glimpse of alien markings. These statements are valid because looking at the evidence provided it gives you more facts that any skeptic could.\n\nThe passage states that the Face is just the shadow of where the camera was, then creating the affect of the eyes, nose, and mouth that you see in the pictures. It is more than likely just a groovy landform created on the surface of Mars.\n\nIt also states that in the Middle of Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho there is a lava dome, and it is about the same height as the Face on Mars. Which is meaning that if there is a landform on the Earth that resembles the Face, then the Face is a natural landform.\n\nSkeptics state that when the scientists tried to get another picture it was very foggy, and that the \"ailien markings\" were hidden by a haze of fog. That is not true because in paragraph 11 they state that they can make a pixel 3 times its size. Hence that if there were alien markings it would have been caught by the camera.\n\nThe Face is not an alien marking because it resembles an Earth landform, the face created is just a shadow, and the camera would have caught any alien markings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is worthy pursuit despiting the danger, becuase many astronomoers are interested Venus. Astronomers think Venus might be the most, \"Earth like planet in our solar system.\"\n\nIn the article they say that NASA is figuring out ways they can send people to Venus without being on its surface. NASA is also trying multiple ways to make their equipment more resistence to the heat in Venus.\n\nAtronomers think that venus might compare to Earth. In the article is says, \"Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. just like Earth.\" Venus also has some features that look alike to Earth. in the article it also says that there were, \"valleys, mountains, and craters\" just like Earth.\n\nAnother way to study Venus is that NASA is creating ways to go to Venus, but not to be on its surface. NASA is wanting to have Aircraft to hover above Venus. They would use solat power for energy, but radiation would exceed earth's levels. In the article it say, \" Not easy conditions but survivable for humans.\"\n\nThe last way to study Venus is that NASA is tesing and making material that can handle Venus's tempature. In the article it says, \" Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulation the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three week in such conditions.\" Another ways is to use old technology which is called mechanical computers.\n\nIn conclusion studying Venus would be a benefit for us. If atronomers are right that Venus is a look alike to Earth. We can get materials that we need or learn how to use new material that we find there. With the help of NASA making new materials and ways to get there. Atronomers can get there in no time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Across countries, it has been considered that travelling is one of the most stunning way for relaxation and an abundant sum of people are curious to cross their countries border for enjoyment. This essay will discuss a group of causes towards this fact and also describe why it is a beneficial step both for vacationers and host countries\nFirst and foremost, the unprecedented growth in worldwide tourism can be explained by a number of reasons. One major factor contributing this growth is that more people than ever before now enjoy vast leisure time as well as get more responsible income enabling them to travel abroad. Another explanation is that many tourism agents offer affordable, all inclusive package holiday, which relieve holiday makers of the burden of booking flights and hotels themselves. Besides this, accessing internet for browsing various types of travel apps, for example, Amazon, Move worldly provided leninent way for travel. As a result, more independent minded travelars have the choice of turning to low- cost carriers and availing themselves a smooth journey to popular destinations.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, this tend is equally advantages for tourists and the country where they are troubled. Firstly, travel in a new place is an excellent way to curb up stressness because it is unplug the people from hetrick work curriculums . As a consequence, they remain more productive when they are rejoined into their duties. Secondly, it is boost host countries economic growth because more tourist more revenue.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, travelling an appropriate method for chillout which convey severals plus points for tourists and travelled countried as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuble. For example, if a student is having trouble with something their facial expression will show it and the computer will detect it and help the student out.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" paragraph 3, it states that Dr. Paul Eckman created a (Facial Action Coding System) or FACS that can detect emotions from your facial expression through your computer. This software can even identify mixed emotions like da Vinci's master piece the Mona Lisa. If they can make a software that can read emotions just from facial expressons they can do way more.\n\nIn paragraph 6, it says that imagine a computer that knows when your sad or happy. For example, if you smile when a ad pops up on your screen, a simliar related ad might pop up. But if you frown a different ad might follow. If they make a computer that can do that it can be a huge impact on students. For example, a student is practicing their times tables on a computer and a hard problem pops up, the students facial expression is gonna show that he is having problems and the computer will help the student with that question step by step.\n\nThis software could really help students out with their work at school. Students could use this software when they are reading. If they come across a difficult word the computer could sound it out for them and explain what it means.\n\nI think this technology software device could be very valuable to all students around the world and teachers. This software could change a lot of things on how teachers teach and make it easier for students to learn and understand what they are doing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days there is no doubt that a great number of films and games is increasing quickly. While video games and movies are played by many ages, some cases show that these activities cause negative things including violence. Therefore, this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching movies and playing games.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, movies and games are common activities to do in their spare time because they can make people relax from work and study. Those who watch films at the cinema or play games in front of a computer screen may enjoy the plots and adventures as well as reduce the excessive social pressure, therefore they will feel fresh and energic to face their daily activities. However, sometimes society finds actions which are inappropriate, showing porn or word harassment. These definitely are harmful to people ,especially children.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, sharpening critical thinking and creativity is beneficial. Due to the fact that players must finish and solve the missions in games, they will involve their knowledge and experience to deal. Earning more money from gaming live streaming which many teenagers do for a living today is another positive result. Moreover, their behaviours are often influenced by what they watch and play so it is possible younger people have a bad attitude as same as many people in online games.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people can gain many impacts from films and games in society either positive or negative. However, parents can minimalize the negative results by making some rules for their children and governments should involve legitimate policies related to the issue, prohibiting cruel conversations and banning films and games that have the possibility to harm the citizens for instance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aouther wants to study Venus and knowing how challeng and danngeruse it is. Cane the aouther find another ways to study the Vanue with out taking countless risk with. In most all the whole pargraph exept sixe thro eight pargraph the other gives informastion of how dangeruse it is but then explain what the auther belive to help to study Venus .\n\nIn paragrph five talks about how NASA has an idea to send pople safe to Venus so they can study safe. NASA's plan is to biuld something like a jet airplane, becuse in paragraph two,''..no spacecraft survived the landing..more then three decades.'', it expalins that no spacecraft was safe to land so NASA idea is to hovering thirty-plus miles above. Finaly NASA's invention will have a little problem but the aother stated that they will cover it for example the temeture is around one hundered- sevendy degrees so the will give them them the rempeture to close to the sea leval basde on pargraph five.\n\nAnother project NASA's idea is to send mashion but the ones that are used for world war two. Technology can be eassly distroid based oon the artical,''..tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.'', the auther is", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college is a symbol of mockery and deprivation of our rights. Voting using this system to elect our leaders is proven null and serves to be removed. Implementing the popular vote in society will not only modernize it but give america its full name for democracy. For many years presidency has debated its ability to be renounced from Electoral college votes or the popular vote. The electoral college is a symbol of our rights as a US citizen being swept under our feet. More formally, this needs to be changed so the people of the U.S can have a greater say in our government, and those who run the country. Granting this power, we will not only modernize but become more democratic(Plumer-Paragraph-9).\n\nAccording to the article \" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer, Not only do citizens agree with changing our system our own appointees do to. Major figures in politics like Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole and the U.S Chambe or commerce all agree to the abolishment of electoral college voting privaleges. A poll of over 6/10 voters agree that a direct election should be implemented by the people. This topic can be contreversal though. The best argument that reinstates its purpose says \" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president\". So whats the contreversy about we elect them so they elect what we want. The best argument against this is the disaster factor. In the 1960's, segregationists in Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing democratic electors by electing electors who oppose John F. Kennedy(Plumer-Paragraph-10-11)\n\nThere are numerous factors that contribute towards the banishment of the Electoral College. Ranged from the favoritism of big states with big populations hence the higher amount of electoral votes, to the possibility of a tie in electoral votes. The system is unfair and a symbol of non modern democracy. Direct voting offers a chance to citizens of the US the ability to exercise voting and become part of the government in which we follow. If we always lived in this system, improvements must go on as time progresses so we as a nation can improve to become better. Changing our government is just another major step in our progress to becoming the most sucessful nation.\n\nChanging our system so the voters of the US governize america by direct election is a essential change. According to the article \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" numerous stories have been told that the Electoral college is an act of anachronism(Posner-Paragraph-15). If the people of the US work hard to remove this we can modernize society forever and make US a better democracy. If we fail to do so, we risk taking a major step backwards in time causing another seggregation act. We have been deprived of many of our rights for too long throughout history and now we have the ability to change. The electoral college has been a shaded act of seggregation and need to dperived of its rights and shut down at a notice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, the pride and joy of many people. They may look nice and go fast, but they hurt the environment more than most people would know. If Americans in certain places used public transit or walked, air pollution would go down by 50% in those areas. It would be better for the environment, and for the human body's health to reduce the amount they drive in their personal car.\n\nTo begin, cars are the second most cause of air pollution in the United States behind power plants. Since the end of World War II the U.S.A has been idolizing cars, and they have been focusing on the production of these cars. In Vauban, Germany there is a ratio of 3 to 10 people who own cars. Only 30% of the population owns a car, which is saving the air from quite a bit of pollution. Another event that will help lower pollution would be banning driving cars for a day or two. In Paris, there was so much smog that it was compared and even rivaled Beijing, China; which is one of the most polluted cities in the world. The people who drove their cars on this day would be fined $31 American dollars. The public transit was free of charge because it was being promoted to use, as it helps the air become less polluted. This event also happened in three Colombian cities, Bogota, Cali, and Valledupar. The ban on the cars made many people seem to be happier, and more energetic. This ban has been happening for three years now in Bogota, and other Latin American cities are now seeing the importance of it. The use of bicycles, the public transit, or even walking helps reduce air pollution in your city.\n\nIn addition to not using personal cars, walking from jobs or to the mall has seemed to make many people in these driving bans less stressful and much happier. From government officials to the commonfolk of the street, all of the Colombians in Bogota look much happier. Even rain hasn't stopped them from biking to work. One woman in Vauban, Heidrun Walter, said, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" She does not own a car and lives a happy life. She even sold her car to move here, along with 57% of other families who live in the town. Not only does the relaxation of not driving make you less stressful, it also makes you get more excersize. Since 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, we can assume that they are one of the healthiest cities in Germany or even the world. If all cities in Europe were nearly identical to Vauban then they would have only 3% greenhouse gas emissions from cars, but they would also have a much lower rate of obesity. Even in some parts of the United States, car emissions would go down by 50% which would, in turn, cause obesity to go down by a gigantic number as well. The use of bicycles and your feet would greatly reduce obesity along with increasing happiness.\n\nAlthough some people may argue that people who don't own personal cars will use public transit instead and societies without personal cars will not have a decreased obesity. This may be true, but if people use public transit then they are helping the environment even more than themselves. They would still have to walk to and from the bus stops. Which will decrease obesity although it may not be in as big of numbers as we would like.\n\nIn conclusion the absence of personal automobiles would greatly reduce the air pollution in most major cities. Beijing could become it's once beautiful city, and Paris wouldn't have to ban driving because of thickened smog. The United States would also never have problems with smog, and we would also reduce air pollution by 50%. Communities like Vauban and Bogota are prime examples of people who do not need cars to survive. They are stress free, and much happier than most car driven societies. Personal cars do much more harm, than good. This is why we do not need to rely on the use of personal cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In library s censorship conrtolled people go library If public library visitors right choose books go shelf The libraries take books shelf due beliefs one person libraries take books give rateing reader decide book music movies magazines etc offensive Of course books adults wish child read talk librarian set boundry rateing book child check Organizing books way anbody read anything want though books nt want read even see shelf need stop minute realize one books like someone else might want shelf In end books shelf choice library people purchase books prevent power struggle way comittee set decide books purchase still deal people wanting certain kind book people deal The books libraries banned book list libray also books books weather read choice The one exception school libraries schools money purchasing books administration school board choose books go library In short veiw book censorship library choose books go library To make things easier books rateing system would national standard public libraries Like I stated previously books books choice read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "'Space. The final frontier.' This is a very commonly used phrase that is the helm for space exploration. Since the beginning of time, humans have looked up to the sky and wondered what might be in that vast place above their heads. The problem is, there is simply no technology advanced enough for scientists to explore all that lies around them. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author definitely states the challenges of exploring the planet, but does not effectively support their claim that it is worth the risk.\n\nThe author presents the challenge of Venus's inhospitable environment in relation to the Earth by simply laying down the facts, without defending their side. In paragraph two of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the text states, \"Each previous mission [to Venus] was unmanned...since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author gives an explanation to the quick deaths of these spacecrafts as well, clearly outlining how hostile the environment is. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon blankets Venus...the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" The author goes on to list more negative attributes, such as the temperature, which averages \"over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\" It seems, so far, that the risks definitely outweigh the rewards. The author then describes technology that would help scientists explore Venus, but it is clear that this tech has not yet been developed.\n\nThe author mentions \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus\" which is that \"scientists [would] float above the fray.\" The problem with this statement is that the technology has obviously not been tested yet, and very likely not even developed. The author's use of an uncertain word, \"possible\", connotes uncertainty and doubt that this idea will even work. The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" then proceeds to counter their own argument in the next paragraph: \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can only provide limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere\". In addition to listing yet another drawback of the environment, the author blatantly states that the previously mentioned idea would not work for proper exploration of Venus. The author is simply relying on the reader's emotions and assumed interest in space to agree with the author, rather than presenting facts to back up their argument.\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does give a couple good reasons for exploring Venus: initially, the fact that it was once the most Earthlike planet. \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" The author then goes on to describe these features: valleys, mountains and craters. Another reason is given: \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration...the value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\" It is assumed that the author ends this sound claim with a statement to pique interest, but it does just the opposite. The use of an interrogative relays to the reader that even the author, who is arguing for space exploration, is uncertain how these explorations will be accomplished; this effectively discredits the validity of their statement. The author relies too much on objectiveness to get their point across, and that is how they fail: to propose a strong argument, one must back up their claims with facts to persuade readers, not simply state facts in relation to the negatives of a situation without refuting them.\n\nIn conclusion, the author presents a weak argument that is backed up by unfinished projects and an assumed advocacy for space exploration. Rather than give the cold, hard facts of opposition and counter them with more facts that support their argument, the author gives no definitive research on how scientists will go about exploring Venus. The author simply states ideas, accepting them as sound solutions to any problem that space may throw at them. The vast unknown is not something to toy lightly with, lives and multitudes of financing are in the balance. There is no room for possible ideas, one must know with proof that these inklings of imagination will be sustainable when put to the test. Space may be the final frontier, but this argument persuades readers to believe that time is yet to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper Today wrinting letter computers I belive people nt computer s right say people online rather exercising My three topic s teach handeye coordination give people ability learn allow people communites First computer s arent talking It gives learn handeye If people belive computers fun They would teach type take lesson typing without looking keyboard Secondly gives people ability cultures american popoaltion people online learning online job online What little kids Where I m sure re buy educational games online Finally gives ability With people If theres school closing delay nt know would like get people ability checkout s going around world checking weather These reason truly belive people online atleast twice week", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some would argue that the secondary pupils being persuaded to recommend some ideas or correct their instructors' teaching guidelines able to have better quality in their education, while others say it would be challenging to rule a classroom and show disrespect for their teachers. Although teachers' words may be always right, I believe that it is better to propose plausible recommendations for lecturers to make progress in learning systems. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, each teacher has been trained for a long time in order to educate students. Being official educators should obtain a professional credential diploma, and their social status is always perpetually respected by others. Therefore, the general public perceives that we should honour teachers' every single word. For example, one popular proverb in Taiwan indicates that teachers are always right in Taiwan, so juveniles should obey their directions repeatedly. However, I believe that teachers are also human beings, so they are likely to make mistakes.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, senior instructors may utilize old-fashion teaching techniques, so in-class adolescents could suggest suitable methods to correct their educational system. That is to say that over one to third of high school teachers aged over sixty years old, and may still conduct the ordinary guideline to instruct a lesson. However, secondary pupils can recommend some advanced e-textbook to their teachers so as to raise the quality of textbooks and also reduce the weight of backpacks. For instance, in Taipei, over 50% of junior school students propose a petition to request their homeroom teachers to offer e-learning platforms in order to relieve their burdens of carrying paper books daily. I believe that this is a positive revolution for both instructors and students in the overall learning materials and environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although listening to teachers' requirements is a way to show some degree of respect, it does not prove that all their guidelines are always perfect, and this is why it is appropriate to offer some reasonable comments for the overall educational environment to become better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the biggest dangers the mankind is facing nowadays is the climate change. Rather than fighting the climate change problem, some people are of the opinion that we need to survive amidst this. I totally disagree with this notion as we have numerous ways such as creating greener spaces to tackle this problem.\n\nWhy we need to struggle with the climate change when we can combat this issue with appropriate measures? Firstly, people need to be educated about the problem and ways to encounter it. For example, conducting awareness campaigns on the importance of creating greener spaces by planting trees and avoiding deforestation can effectively solve climate related issues. In addition, people should be encouraged to conserve energy and cut down on their consumption of fossil fuels. Limiting the use of private vehicles and taking public transport whenever possible is one of the many ways to reverse climate change caused by global warming.\n\nThough the outcome of these measures is not immediate, it will definitely be fruitful in the years to come. If we do not take necessary actions at the earliest, the next generation will not have a habitable place to live in. In other words, our children will suffer from the disastrous impacts of climate change. Because of global warming, most of the countries across the world are already experiencing problems such as drought, forest fires, flooding and rising sea levels. If we start to act now, we will certainly have a better to place to exist in the future.\n\nIn summary, I disagree with the opinion that we need to cope with / accept climate change rather than preventing it. There is a possibility to reduce the effects of climate change if we take necessary steps such as enriching the environment by planting more trees and limiting our use of fossil fuels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" sounds very interesting, but my arugement on this is article is against it because it sounds very unsafe. What if the driverless care malfunctions and you arent paying attention and get involved in the accident? Will the company of the car help you or give you another car or maybe even pay what is costed for the whole situation? Probably not. Its not worth making or even buying one of the driverless cars. Even a car itself malfunctions.\n\nDriverless cars can cost up to millions of dollars or even more. Driverless cars sound like you need to get one and leave the old one. The fact that the driverless car may be really expensive is ridiculess. Only famous people can afford it. Maybe other weathly people can. Not just anyone will be able to afford the car. Any person can afford a car at least that works even if it is an old car. Cars can cost lots of money when you can buy something else.\n\nMany, many people want this car because you dont have to drive but when there is an alert you have to drive. Also it requires a driver anyways. Many people want this car because you can just get one and it will drive by itself so that person can get one his or her phone while the car is in operation itself. This is ridiculess! You dont need a car that will drive by itself so you can enjoy being on your phone. You can go home after whatever event you went to and get on your phone and enjoy it.\n\nThis driverless car is not always safe because it can malfunction and cause a really bad accident and it can injure a person big time. The company may or may not help you out in this situation. Why? because the company may think is your fault for not paying attention to the car for being on your phone or doing something else, when the car alert you. The car wont always operate on itself unless its monitored and controlled by someone. Maybe the company is right, but technology malfunctions all the time. It is even worse when malfunction on a car.\n\nThis article does sounds like it is a great idea to get a driverless car. Probably anyone may get this car. I disagree for companys to make this types of cars. They should even have a law for making driverless cars that can cause an accident or injure someone. What is the whole point of making a driverless car if it still has to be monitored either way. Doesnt not sound interesting or cool. It is a very dangerous idea. Technology wasnt made perfect and it wont be perfect either.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "guardians have to uplift juveniles to utilise leisure time on academic study instead of spending more time on sports activities, in my opinion, I agree with the given statement up to a great extent because with the help of physical activity adolescence can learn new skills to survive in society as well as children will develop their personality however study is the key route for success in life\nTo begin with, parents mein motivate their children to spend less time on academic learning and inspire them about physical health because Juvenile gain their weight due to sedentary lifestyle and less communicate with folks that leads to wheat health but with the help of sports activities adolescence can improve their interpersonal skill to survive in society moreover physical activity provides an opportunity to juvenile and make their body strong which allow children to do the task for a long period of time and benefit for their growth for example as per the survey of World health organisation those juveniles who have better health they perform well in every task with the help of physical exercise \r\n\r\non the contrary , the study is the basic need for juveniles and it is very necessary for the upcoming phase of life as well as with the help of education children are able to learn the moral ethics of life and enhance the knowledge as per the survey conducted by the education department in the Delhi adolescence chat list March who spend more time on cricket \r\n\r\nto conclude, education plays a vital role to get success in life but I believe that spending more time on physical activity will police the skills of juvenile and least water good health leads toward a good health", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the advancement of society, a phenomenon has been paid more attention by the public, which is that many towns and cities in the world were constructed in previous centuries and were suitable for citizens in the past time. However, this fact causes various troubles in modern lives. And this essay will analyze the issues from the transportation and the infrastructure aspects, and list possible solutions.\r\n\r\nFirstly, an inconvenient transportation system is a problem that is caused by this situation. To be more specific, the size of the population in the past is smaller than now, leading to the traffic network which was suitable for the volume of passenger flow in the past being unable to carry out the current population size. In addition, modern vehicles cannot be driven on some parts of roads in the past, which brings some troubles in transportation. As a result, commuters living in these areas suffer from travel mode.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the fact that the infrastructure is out of date is another issue that should be considered. For example, electricity networks in these towns and cities are too old and cannot be renewed due to the design of the buildings. In this case, individuals may not be able to electrical equipment, such as microwave ovens and other high-power electrical appliances. Besides, some basic infrastructure cannot also be fixed owing to the protection of cultural relics. Therefore, some basic needs cannot be met.\r\n\r\nAs for solutions, more efforts should be taken by governments. Primarily, new traffic networks can be built to replace old ones, such as metro systems and bus systems. Next, seeking selective modernization improvements without damaging the value of cultural relics to meet the needs of contemporary residents. Lastly, re-plan the urban layout and relocate the city centre from the old city to alleviate the transportation and other functions pressure on the old city area.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether students should focus on further education in universities and colleges or it is better to let them apply for a job straight after school. In this essay I am going to present both views and give my opinion. \n\nSome people tend to think that it is better to continue your education in higher institutions, because of the higher employment opportunities. One of the first things we need to take into consideration is that universities and colleges give you more understanding and knowledge in the sphere you are studying in, that helps you become a better specialist and most of the employers search for well trained workers. For example, nurses and dentists are required to have special training, which can take for about ten years, without it they won’t even be able to become a simple doctor. But not only students of medical specialisations take further education, designers, managers, writers and others do it too, that’s because often students don’t have enough knowledge to start their career, but with the help of professors, they have a lot more chances to become professionals and it will be easier for them to get a job. \n\nHowever, others insist that it’s better to get a job, because you can earn money and not spend it on expensive learning. For instance, university prices go higher every year which is not affordable for every family to let their children apply for one, so as we can see from the last trends, it becomes more common for students to start their own business, build career as a photographer, freelancer or etc. and make good money out of it.\n\nTo conclude, I consider learning at high education institutions is a good base for future career and improvement students will get is indispensable, but in my opinion it is not a necessity and it would be nicer to put less pressure on those, who have chosen not to take this path and got a job straight after school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago there was something that had appeared on a Red Planet called Cydonia. An enormous head about two miles from end to end. As the pictures show people think it looks like a face.\n\nScientists believe that it was just another Martian mesa, these are very common on the planet. But, there was unusual shadows that made it appear to look like an Egyptian Paraoh.\n\nSome people think that the face evidence of life on Mars. Few scientists believe that the face was an alien artifact. The Mars Global Surveyor flew over the planet for the first time, the camera was better than before and had more clearer images of the face. Revealing a natural landform, there was no alien monument after all. Skeptics said that alien marking were hidden by a haze. This landform was most definetly not an alien monument, even though it looks like one. They compare the \"face\" on the planet to a Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. the Middle Butte is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated Mesa about the same height as the \"face\" on mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what it is like on Venus? Studying Venus, could be deadly. Humans can not withstand the temperatures and atmospheric pressure that comes with studying Venus up close. However, putting in the effort to figure out how to make it safe is worth it. We should be trying to study Venus, because NASA is already exploring the different ways we could safely research this planet. We should study Venus despite all of the dangers it presents.\n\nWe should study Venus because NASA is already looking at different ways we could safely look into the planet and its environment. \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" There is technology that could take on the dangers and last up to 21 days. NASA could continue trying to develop this technology, so that it could last longer. But what would all of that be for? Would all of those hard working scientists have put so much time, effort, and work into figuring this out, just so they could be pushed aside and recieve no compensation for their work? We should study Venus because scientists have been working to develop technology that can live in such conditions.\n\nStudying Venus could be very dangerous for humans. But it could open up a whole new door for researchers and help us to better our understanding of the universe in which we exist. If scientists are already working on it, why should we not follow through? We should study Venus in spite of all of the risks because scientists are already working on making it safely possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The hastle of buying a car in unbearable! I hate it! Just think bear with me just think what if I could get on my phone open a taxi app and have a driverless car in my driveway in 5 min! Imagin that! Its winter and freezing out, you wanna take the loveliest of all ladies (your wife) out to eat but neither of you want to drive in the snow! just open the phone book and call for a taxi! Not just any taxi a driverless taxi!\n\nI myself am fully for driverless cars and if your not im here to change that! There are already driverless cars in the works! They use these cool sencors to make a 3-D virtual image of the surrounding cars, They drive like humans but you dont have to put in the work of getting up 30 min early and going out to warm up the car. Now with all good things there are some bad! Its not as glamerous as you may think! What if your in the car just watching tv or on your phone and you get into a accident! Who's to blame? Is it you? The car company? Would that one wreak ruin the cars for good? How would they get around construction or go on a detour? Would they even be smart enough to? These are all key questions that the creators of driverless cars are trying to figure out!\n\nDriverless cars would make kids be able to \"Drive\" because theres really no driving! They could be on a scheduel and honk in the morning when its time to go to work or school. They could completely change the very way we live life and I think the change would be for the good!\n\nSo stop all the hastle and lets help create a simpler life! Driveless cars!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough Road ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclist faced many problems Its really hot practically desert June Just knowing makes want water Also cyclist running short water still hasnt got place needs The roads hills bumpy make harder Those problems cyclist faced", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Though driverles cars do seem like an great inovation, they could also cause our generation to become even more lazy than it is today. We think of these great ideas and new products, but they are only making us more independent on those porducts.\n\nDriverless cars do seem like something absolutly unbeliveably wonderful, but they also seem a little too good to be true. I do believe that one day we wil have the power and intellengence to make driverless cars, but what would be the fun in that. The safety features we have on cars today are quie nedded. Like the foward collision warning, or the feature that helps you through work zones.Though do we really need cars that drive themselves. One day we might come to finding our selves not knowing how to drive at all. Driverless cars seem just like a waste of our money building, because in the long run it's not going to help us at all. They won't make us any smarter only lazier. If you can't seem to get yourself off the couch to drive and meet a friend, without the help of a car drivng for you; then we need to rethink what we are making. We already have so many products that do normal daily procedures for us already. They have created all these additions to cars and they work to help human error. Why take humans out of it completly. Though there are a few upsides to this being a product in the future, the downsides completly out weigh them.\n\nSure a lot you are thinking, \"It'll be way to expensive for us average folk to own anytime soon.\" Though I would have to agree, what about the time when average folk to have the money to buy these cars. A lot of what we have started off as something only a few of us could afford. One day, and maybe not as soon as we would like to believe; we could have and afford driverless cars. Like with the aurgument i made in the last paragrah, we would become lazy boring people. We need driving as a way of getting around, and feeling independent. When you finnally get your driver's license there is a sence of independece; that driverless cars would be taking away. While you might be making the aurgument that people could always just buy normal cars. I have a feeling that idea won't last. By the time that driverless cars become such a big fad, the people who want normal cars won't be able to get them. the big driverless car companies will have bought out all the companies still with normal working cars. Though I'm sure that for awhile all companies will continue to make normal working cars, but there will be such a demand for driverless cars that they will just stop making normal cars.\n\nDriverless cars, while seeming to be a great new innovation; wouldn't really help any of us. They would make us lazier and less independent, and we already have enough products doing that today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about the advsantages of limiting car usage and as well as giving up cars inorder to help the communities out there to live a better safisticated life, without the use of cars?. A plan created called smart planning involves the reduce or car usage helping the world also reduce bad pollution, and traffic jams. This way more transportation will be provided for other cases or people in need of that. In Germany, Paris, Bogota and the United States there are many reasons being caused to reducing cars due to jepordise it can cause such as pollution, traffic jams, space and transportation. In all these countries there are the different reasons to why cars should be banned.\n\nTo begin with, in Germany a district in Freiburg near the French ans Swiss borders cars have been givin up by people. Pepole are claiming to be more happy with their newly lifestyle of not using a car. Before they were using a car they also claimed that everything had felt more tense. Now that cars are banned in the district there has been more free space for pedestrians to walk. There has been more availabale roads and stress that are not packed anymore. There is space to build. Before cars had taken control over the roads and stress not proving areas and space to walk in. Middle class were choking cities meaning that their Cars were just taking way too much space. Cars are responsible for the greenhouse. Knowing that passanger cars are also reposible for twelve percent of the greenhouse gas. protection agencies are promoting car reduce as well as communities that are less dependent on cars. Vauban's streets are car free. 70 percent of vaubans families are also car free. The driveways, street parking and garages are all fobidden in that district.\n\nHowever, Paris has faced another jepordising problem due to smog. Paris has been known to have the most smog than the rest of the European capitals. Due to this problem cars have been banned in order to clear the air pollution causing danger. This bad pollution can lead to sickness, weather changes that are bad and may cause people to inhale bad oxygen. People were commanded to leave their license plates at home or risk to pay a 22 euro fine that equals to 31$ dollars in American money. So far 4,000 people have paid this fine for not following this law. With this progress the pollution has cleared from Paris and has now gone to another place.\n\nInnitially, traffic jams are a common problem in our everyday life. In Bogota, they face traffic jams and pollution. For this cause the citizens of Bogota have banned the usage of cars only allowing busses and taxis to be used. They have placed transportation instead of cars. People whp violate these rules are permitted to to pay a 25$ dollar fine. The reduce of cars in Bogota has helped clear the roads and make a dramastic change that has to do with the traffic jams they had been facing. Since there has been so much rain every single day in Bogota the air pollution has been reduced. People who visited Bogota had been mesmerized to the changes there has been of less pollution and traffic jams. Seeing the country all coaporate in this change.\n\nTherefor, in the United states there has been a change of people reducing the use of cars. There has been a reduce in miles driven due to people who cant afford getting a car or paying for one. Childrens have not bothered to get a license because they had started to use bycicles, walking and transportation to get to their destination. There has been a major drop of 16 to 39 years old that didn't bother getting their license. Creating car pools is one of the greates way to reduce car usage. Communication also plays a role in this change. Having cell phones and communicating more with freinds would not always require driving. Although transportation also has its cons to car industry. A buisness plan has been made in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical or undesirable.\n\nIn conclusion, countries have faced big problems due to all these causes of car usage. People had given up their cars and are now using transportaion, walking and Bycicles has helped get rid of all these problems countries were facing. People have decided to coaporate and help make a change has made an amazing progress. People from other countries have also been amazed seeing this change and mabey will also decided to apply this to their country for their safety. Now that cars have been reduced and transportation is provided in Germany, Paris, France, Bogota and the United States,pollution, traffic jams, space and transportation had all been solved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever had a job in high school when it was a huge deal. Well if you did not i'm going to inform you about a teenager who has one. If you have a bet it is nothing like this one! So, now I am going to give you some deatials about this passage. Which side would you pick.\n\nFirst who would want to miss out a job of a life time! In the passage it states , \"Luke could not say no.\" If Luke could not say no then why would you. Also the text states, \"He knew it was an opportunity of an life time.\" That should be another reason why you should be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys program. All the things that Luke was saying I would want to sign up myself.\n\nNext ,but on the other hand it is a terrible idea to go to the prgram. One reason is it is a long way to travel . In the text it states, \"It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from eastern coast of the U.S.A and a mouth to get to China. also you will miss all of your loved ones. These are some reasons why\n\nyou should not join the program.\n\nIn conclusion I think it was a good Idea to join the prgram.I have stated\n\nwhy and why not to join. Also they exsplain them to to give you more deatials. This job is a great opportunity . Luke side of this essay is right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I strongly believe people cut using computer Just imagine people outside healthy Less cyberspace bullying less burning electricity My first reason people spend less time computer outside people use computer two hours day either risk overweight overweight Also says CAPS people believe using computer gives benefits dont They increase chances either overweight getting diseases diebeties Its imperative community takes action stop happening In addition neighbor study interview overweight adults teenagers told people interviewed said dont go outside use computer hours day I implore citizens area cut internet time go outside enjoy nature My second reason less people computer means less cyberspace bullying people use socializing websites experienced encounters cyberbullying also sisters friend overdosed advil ran comitt suicside cyber bullying Someone said ugly smelled go die hole nt tell anyone Luckily mother brought fast enough put life support hours furthermore people cut internet socializing website less people danger cyberbullying affecting lives It s excruciating imperative people use computer hours day My final reason less time use computer less money would wasting electricity bills spending time family vacations Dr peabody museum begs people use less electricity power internet environment slowly rebuild technology electricity invented In addition power used todays homes used computers Also grandmother astounded todays technology environment people behind madness electricity believes less time computer means time family vacations friends Lastly s extremly imperative people stop using computers much help health self estem environment A case take action stop using computer Thank reading paper", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper know computers people Well I People We need something computers They preventing people exercising going outside making stay house day One reason I think get rid computers people nt getting exercise computer next probably number one thing makes people fat Kids sometimes computer day eating snacks junkfood eating healthy fruits vegetables You could Almost anything computer everyday life s good technology The computer thing gets people addicted something The computer games internet ways talk people get attached A second reason computers keep taking money pocket When buy computer people buy expensive one salesman talks Most people nt know kind computer supposed buy buy expensive one think better Also buying computer nt When download softwares games moble things cost money Downloading one thing cost one hundred dollors plus people ca nt afford downloads buying pricy computer My third opinion computer complete waist time People spand hours computer stupid stuff like playing games talking outside enjoying fresh air Going outside important health Next time computer something nt need done go outside Think hour often go outside My guess much Now know computers people They making people fat getting exercise eating junk food play games day long stupid piece technology Instead computer day nt think going air need Also nt want waisting hardworked money stupid piece technology Plus nt want deal softwares viruses My advice computers terrible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" i think its not good to have a tv in the car because its a distraction to the driver. If you have kids they might be laughing, screaming and doing other stuff that can distract you when driving. It is helpful for the car to be able to drive while the parent is taking care of there kids. It's okay to have Google maps and stuff like that to help you out.\n\nSensors are good because they could help you out when your not paying attention or when something is coming and you dont see it coming. They can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine which can allow the car to slow down quickly.\n\nBMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant the car can handle functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the friver keeps hold of the wheel. None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless, they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but they are desighned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\n\nSome manufactures hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays. Which can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over. In this way, the in-car system is acutally a safety feature.\n\nDriving laws are focus on keeping the driver, passengers, and pedestrians safe. If we have this then, i think that it will help us out. The reason for this is because we wouldnt be focused on reading our texts, or anything like that. We know that our car can drive on its own.\n\nI think it would be smart to have this in our car. It would help us out in the long run. It would keep the other drivers safe if we didnt have to worry so much about everything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology that reads students' emotional expressions should absolutely be used. This technology would make it possible for a computer to know how a student is feeling during an assignment, which could help with advances in later work.\n\nConfusion, boredom, anger, whatever a student is feeling during an assignment a computer can pick that up. In paragragh six,Dr. Haug states,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This could change lots of things. If a computer notices a student getting bored from an assignment, perhaps they can make the next assignment more interesting. When a student is bored during an assignment, they tend to not be completely focus or to not do the work. With this technology computers could prevent students from getting bored during assignments, which could result in more students doing their work. This technology could also help students when they are confused or don't understand something in the lesson, by modifying the lesson, which could be needed for many students.\n\nIn the article aslo states, \"If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown,the next ad will be different.\" This could change alot for students that have any type of social media. Social media could become much more popular using this type of technology. Students will see things they like, thus pleasing them. Then, they will begin to like social media even more and maybe even encourage others to join.\n\nThis new technology could change alot for students and even students with life on social media. Students would do much better in school if this technology were to be used in schools. Assignments turned in on time would become more effecient, students would pay attention to their work instead of dozing off, and students would not be as confused and have more help with their assignments. While students will also grow to love social media much more, resulting in more money for the distributers of social media. This technology could be a win for students and social media.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars are a good thing for the human race. It would pervent accidents and also help out when human drivers decide to text and drive or drink and drive. This would be a great and safer for the childern. Think about it, driving and all of a sudden something falls or something spills the driverless car would take over, cause in the passage they stated that GM companies develope drivers seats to vibrate, and google cars to announces when the driver should take over. \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" The only thing thats holding us back from doing this is the people who think that electronics are stupid. so i say im for this because we may never know just how this can work in out favor and actually help save the lives that choose to disobey the law.\n\nOf course we are going to have to have laws for this movement or revolution or how ever you want to say it. I would say if the driverless car had all the advanced technology we have today it would not need laws. If somthing was to go wrong, and the manufacturing went haywire then yes it would need laws, like how to drive when to drive, and have signs built to when the drivers have to take control of the car. If someone go into an accident i really would not know who to blame, buts that is why we have police and lawyers to figure that out. Drivers should know that the driverless car is a co pilote kind of deal and they should not get in the car drunk under the influnce of anything because co pilote sometimes need help too navagating through obsticals.\n\nso yes i am still for this, i really think that this is the kind of brake through we need if we want to be futuristic, and soon people will start following. I just think that we are to scared for change because we dont know what people are going to think, well they are going have to suck it take a leap of faith. To make this world a better place we have to reduce the lives that are takeing by car crashes and intoxication each day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created memoin grateful happy mostly thankful mood I believe mood grateful mentioned narrator many times like third paragraph mention grateful parents made good meals taught cook Also said grateful introduced cuban music I think memoir also happy mood although hardships mentioned nt struggled concoured hardships faced immigrating Another way memoir happy talks happy everyone family makes house turn home touches heart gives sence happiness I think memoir mostly thankful whole memoir feels like thank letter narator s parents That mood created memoir grateful happy mostly thankful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now take moment go back highschool Do remember roaming opera house phantom What fighting freedom Perhaps getting people trouble No matter favorite classic piece literature recall wonderful feeling felt reading It enveloped world felt every sensation offered What though The author The author uses occassional bad words The author woman This acceptable excuse miss everything literature offers Censorship pulic libraries wrong The dark time Thousands upon thousands people killed religious belief well homosexual people minorities Amidst chaos decided would good idea burn books written authors So Millions books eradicated along owners religious difference Does even need asked This wrong Many say ignorance bliss really people impose ideas others Let us look book movie magazine song offends censored A curse word bit skin controversial idea Sometimes needed emphasis compilation Imagine much less forceful angry character would without curses every Pathetic So worth Will give beautiful composition controversial Will hide children materials make form opinions One thing certain I I stand censorship felt mighty blow inflicted many beautiful works One day plea heard Censorship public libraries wrong matter put", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers one technoligy s greatest advances yet one society s downfall Originally thought spread ideas faraway places computers proven quick contrary Computers dangerous devices targeting young wholesome kids It main reason society today predicting future generation wobbling unsteady weak foundation These devices source mayhem must immediately removes society take away true benefits life harmful effects health support country s deadliest predators Firstly computers linked crime stealing pleasures childhood Since amount adolescent users shot Amazing ly enough parents polled admitted children spend least hours computer everyday This takes away pleasures reading exercising spending time outside hnging friends fmaily These negative effects unhealthy toll society especially teenagers frequent users As result diet exercise curtailed raising obesity number lock ourdoor family activities promoted antisocial alarming rate fufture generation indeed balancing cracked foundation In addition limiting diet exercise computers also source yet another act As long computers plugged emit invisible wares electromagnetic radiation These waves linked diseases cancers Use computers cause braintumors leukemia asw ell brain disorder cancers Leukemia caused young age difficult cuse stants child s development Children exposed least hours day compared spend time outdoors times likely develop possibilities The ultimate prevention risjs rest causes computers completely Lastly computers harmful also deadly open As adolescent unthinkingly says web chtrooms risk atteck thousands children predators prowling web Computers contain extremely valuable secret information names birthdates genders even social security numbers With one click acfepting strongers inivte online predators hack child s computer obation valuable information Or predators less postive attack directlyasking questions child In fact familiar story tells unfortunate fare one local girl unknowingly chatted online stranger This online predator smoothly invited mall moved A couple devastating weeks later girl s reamin found burned last deadly act predator performed teen Three computers simply dangerous predator s thumbbook search next victim removing computer eliminate threats online predators pose child well It amazing learn technology s greates advanvcement computer unleash harmful effects Lack engaging activities exercising reading stunded ever distracting computer electromagnetic radiation attacks health lastly supports acts thousands cruel sneaky online predators awaiting child web By removing source troubles acts prevented society begin pain reform", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. The author suggests that studing venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports this kind of good because there is so many new and good things that earth has never seen and would be nive to see it and if life could ever happen in venus. Beside the fact that venus is really hot and not spaceship hass landed in venus because of the teprture of the surface and the atmosphere. Venus tempature is average 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what earth is. Some astronmoers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth like planet in our solar system.\n\nAt thirty-plus miles above the surface, temeratures would still be tosty at around 170 degree fahrenheit. However peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the plantet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmospere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Many researchers are working on innovations that wold allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowleadge of venus. NASA has been working on other approaches to studying venus, for example some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condition.\n\nNo matter how yhardee people try to make more things to go to venus the human curiostiy will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doudts but should be ecpanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. In conclusion i think that the author is right we should be studying venus because there is so many thing that we have to explore and so many good nrew things, and with the new invantions that NASA is making we should be getting closer and closer to be able to get closer to the suface and closer to the atmosphere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think books music movies magazines etc removed offensive There books movies music offend everyone took away would nothing Theres reason Thats say take away offensive materials First took away offensive materials shelves would empty As well library movie store everything else If something like book movie offends feel bad anyways put dont wory Second dont think remove offenssive materials shelves mean us They show us good bad right wrong thats books Books important world well movies magazines But others You cant get mad book movie learn For instance say take away offensive materials going Is going make word beteter place I dont think I think need stuff like earth show teach us way To educate informate In conclusion think offensive materials remove We would nothing libraries movie stores books would empty We would also pretty missinformed life So remove offensive materials shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story like show sense continuation life In story Saeng takes test fails She goes buys hibiscus plant well paid Her test try get memories real home Saeng cries thinks To Saeng plant represents memories life longer however want back Her vowe geese come flying back go back greenhouse reminds much home try say home without breaking without something extremely expensive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is not fake. Some people think that a living thing created it and could be hiding out somewhere. NASA is trying to hide the enthusiasts that beleive such a thing. I recently had a converstaion with one of those enthusiasts.\n\n\"This mask is not made from aliens. This was a natural landform that created it self. There was nothing there that shows some life form lived there.\" I said.\n\n\"The thing that made it could have not been seen on your pictures.\" said the enthusiast.\n\n\"The machine we used to take the pictures, its pixels spans 1.56 meters. Once you saw them, you could zoom in on them. If there were any life forms on Mars, we would have seen it. Taking the pictures wasn't easy, You had to find the face first and then be able to take a picture. When we finally got the picture, it is more then likely that the cameras didn't mess up. Besides, what kind of thing would be able to create such a face?\"\n\n\"You never know what's out there.\"\n\n\"Yes, we do, and we have no evidence of any living creautures on that planet. Therefore, it was made naturally.\"\n\nThe guy I talked to later became a beleiver that the face was a natural landform. He also got a job at NASA and devoted his job on finding out how the face was made. I honestly believe that the face was a natural landform and that there could be many more of those \"faces\" on other planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit adds drama story affects cyclist He tacking high desert California June June hot part year since hottest desert part hot multiplied The terrain changing short rolling hills didnt help cyclist The hills would make riding difficult Anyone ride bicycle knows takes effort go hill flat pavement With person lack water anyone would struggling keep riding Most people didnt hints keep moving He didnt set goal went next Horizon Shouldnt wanted keep going Another problem physical environment road conditions When Rough Road Affect sign appeared travel become difficult A bike tire take effort go uneven pavement cyclist much trouble", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke should join his program because he might learn something new when he goes or he might enjoy going to this program. This program might actullay help him with something.\n\nHere are some detail from this article to support Luke's claim. Luke it all like well i kind a mightlike this program it might help me with something. All he cares about is Seagoing Cowboys he want to be one. Well maybe if he is one then he might actullay be happy. He wants to be a Seagoing Cowboy he wants to be a good person thats all he wants in his life. He likes to watch the seagoing Cowboys and he like to hear it he might want to be a helper.\n\nLuke he is a good person he likes the Seagoing Cowboys which is nothing bad at all he likes what he likes so that what he does. Luke is an intelligent person he likes what he does so he can keep doing what he wants do do in his life. It's Luke's life he is in charge of it Luke is Luke aint nobody going to mess him up in life. Luke is doing what he wants to be and do so hes going to do it. This is Luke's choice this is his life he is going to do what he wants to do.\n\nLukehe graduated from high school adn his an adult and he is a good person . he is making hie iwn dissions and he is own his own in this point in life. His choice his rules i honestly think that when i graduate from high school clollege ill will do what ever i want to do in my life i eant ti ne a good person, intelligent a awsome person i eant to the best person i v an be in my life in my world .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I see people think computers technology bad society I hand strongly disagree In eyes technology especially computers bring people together computers benificial Also computers save time money First computers bring people together I one best friends move across country way I nt get see I video chat laptop I nt opportunity probably would nt stayed touch That experience friend happened family member well grandmother Every year passover whole family comes house celebrate getting older video chat see whole family together It wonderful experience As I said computers benifical You might thinking CAPS understand I student sometimes I forget write assignment I get laptop go notes com gotten zero homework See Computers benifical Have ever situation need something nt time Well many things ordered offline You get things food cloths toys Surveys proven average order computer save money gas nt drive Overall I think computers handy helpful ages homeworks family friends adults nt lot time And I think years go people start realize", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of sending humas to another country in space has been a livley debate for many years now. Following the US putting the man on the moon the idea has grown and sicentificly become thought of as more attaniable. But, before sending any human life form to another planet it is important to conduct the proper scientific tests and research to see what the outme of such an expiremt may hold. The passage \"The Challenge Of Exploring Venus\" presents strong evidence to prove that sudying Venus is a worthy pursit despite the potential dangers.\n\nThe artilce states that venus is the closest planet to earth. This would lend itself to being an easier task to study. Studys have already shown that the thick atmoshere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. This allows the conclusion to be drawn that extra saftey measurs would need to be taken in the expiremental stage of the project.\n\nWith such harsh conditions that are ever so hazerdous the quester arises 'why study venus?'. The text gives prime ezxamples to why we should indeed study venus. Venus is the planet that is most earthlike. It has rocky sediment, valleys,mountans,and craters. Features like this present the most likey chance of surviving an expedition to study the plannet as the author claims it should be done.\n\nWith a world full of fast pace ever changing technology it is important that scientifical innovative leaps be taken to 'keep up\". With such a hefy task such as studying a potential non earthly inbabital plannet it is importand thourough steps be taken in research,planning,simulation of the conditions and reflection be taken before plans for a real expdition begin being formed. There is true value in studying beings,concepts,terrain, and values that escape the bound of plannet earth. The studying of venus is simply a step in the right direction.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author talks about how he thinks that the technology that helps computers recognize human emotion, FACS (Facial Action Coding System), would be helpful in school. Personally, I don't think this technology would be very helpful in the classroom like the author hopes, at least not for a very long time.\n\nUnless human teachers are completely replaced by computers, this technology wouldn't be helpful. The author states that this echnology could detect when a child becomes confused or bored and alter the lesson like an actual teacher, but unless there aren't any teachers in the class at all, then this technology seems redundant.\n\nThere is very little reason why teachers would be completely replaced in favor of computers. Unless this technology is so mass produced to the point where every possible school can afford it, it'd be in the school's best interest if they stayed with teachers. In the article the author never states how much FACS could hypothetically cost. Assuming it'd be expensive because it's new technology, FACS would be way more to set up and use than to pay a teacher and have them be able to alter lessons on the go and effectively teach easier.\n\nHuman teachers won't be replaced anytime soon by computer programs like FACS but they can use it to help aid their lessons much like how they use normal computers to do that already. I think that's the only way FACS would be used effectivly in classrooms, with teachers using it to aid their own lessons. While FACS is groundbreaking technology, it's not groundbreaking enough to warrant the replacement of teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having driverless cars can be safe but they can also be dangerous. Having driverless cars can keep the driver alert if there is ever a problem on the road, but the driver sometimes can get distracted and I mean why wouldn't they if they have a driverless car.\n\nThe problems of having a driverless car is that the driver could fall asleep and they don't hear anything or feel anything when the car is trying to get there attention if there was a problem on the road. In the passage it states that \"New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacture.\"(9) This quote shows that if we have driverless cars then they still need to be new laws and they need to think about the safety of everyone.\n\nThe advantages of having driverless car is that the driver doesn't have to drive the whole time and if there's a problem ahead on the road the car would warn them about it. Also they can be less car accidents, because if there's a problem the car would get the driver's attention. In the passage it states that \" GM has develop driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" (7)\n\nThe idea of driverless cars needs to be though carefully and they should see and think about the problems and the danger the driver's would be in.They will aslo need to see the advantages that the driverless cars have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is an article about the positives and negatives of driverless cars. It was a very interesting topic, one of the best i've read on an Istep test. It was about how we could be seeing drverless cars in the near future. It talked about how they've tested out many options from magnets to electrical rods. The article gave facts and didn't shy from what the issues were. Now I'm going to express my opinon on the topic.\n\nMy view on driverless cars is not a set voice. I agree with their concepts and the test ran but i don't agree with how fast they're trying to market it. It's only been sixteen years since we've gotten computers and only about eight or nine since we got modern computers. The touchscreen phone is fairly new and they have these \"Hoverboards\" which are just segways without handles. I guess what I'm trying to say is there's no reason to jump to something so big if we don't understand what we have yet. I don't doubt we will have self driving cars i just doubt it'll be so soon.\n\nI see self drving cars as something we should pursuit. I just don't think it should be a main part of our advances in technology. There's so many things we can be doing other then creating this. We should finish finding ourselves before we start building technology that doesn't need us. with all this \"machine doing\" stuff we'll just be sitting at home while the bots do everything. Thats no a world i want to live in. A world where everyone looks to machines to do their work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is our planet sister. Saying that is way to tell that Planet Venus is near our to planet, but there's a difference between Venus and planet Earth and the differece is important to know it's very important.\n\nPlanet Venus, by reading the this article you might find clues about planet venus that you never knew before. Planet venus also called by another name \"Evening Star\" Venus is one of the brightest point according to the author it says \" It light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot\". The author use this sentence to show how the Venus planet or Evening star shine. It also tell us that Venus have an atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Planet Venus is also the second planet from our sun, which is very important to.\n\nThe distance between Venus and Planet Earth. Venus and planet Earth are close not really really close but they are close according to the article \"Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nthe author tell us that \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". That sentence that the auhtor use describe and also give us information about which planet is the closest planet to planet Earth which is Venus. By the reading the article it's also says that Venus was propable covered largely with oceans. Planet Venus also have somethings in common with planet Earth. Planet Venus has a surface of rocky they also have valley and mountains like planet Earth does.\n\nMore about planet Venus. Planet Venus and planet Earth does not have the same temperatures, according to the author information it says that \"Planet Venus have a temperature average over 800 degrees\". If we take our times to think about this sentence think about one hundreds (100) degrees, one hundreds (100)\n\ndegrees is very hot but if one hundreds (100)\n\ndegrees is hot think about (800) degrees it must be very hot in Planet Venus. Reason why planet venus is hot, planet Venus is hot because is close to the sun and we all know the sun is very hot and their atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experienced in our planet must be very dangerous.\n\nThis article give a lot of information and clues about it. It also give information about the wheater and atmospheric and it can be dangerous there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been sick just because you went outside, maybe it was because of the air pollution that thousand of cars give everyday. So don't you you ever wonder how it would be like if there were few cars, would it make a difference on the world. Many people are strating projects to see how it would be like to have no car. Residents in Vauban, Germany have given up there cars a become surburban pioneers. They walk or ride there bicycle were they need to go. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two said that \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". So should't we try having few cars around. Not only i vauban promothing a free car zone but also in the United States, the environmental protection agency are promoting \"car reduced\" communities to reduce the smog on the world.\n\nDid you know that Paris ban driving due to smog. Paris was typically had more smog than other Europeans Capitals but duo to the banding many people had there car impounded for their reaction to the fine and conestion was down to 6 percent in the capital of France. BOGOTA, Columbia strated a program call a car-free day, millions of columbia hiked, biked, skated or took bus to work, leaving the streets devoid of traffic jam. The goal of this program is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Many people were happy because the parks and sports center have bloomed throughout the city the ,uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broed, smooth sidewalks. Also rush hours were restriction have dramatically cut traffic. Would you love to ride the car with your frieds instead of the old same rutine of being alone all the mornings on your way to school. Like kids that make new friends when they ride the bus to school wouldn't like to meet new people like that too.\n\nMany people don't like riding their bicycle to work because they would get dirty. but isn't it better to be dirty than live in air polluted word that affects your life. passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent inib the united states. Fewer people are buying less cars years is a start that people are not depending are cars that much. A study shows that cars driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Should we help the world and reduce global warming. We still cars but we should retuced haw many we have. Lets improve our safety by reducing have much we use cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I was kid, I didn't known how to prepare food and that lead me to have diabet. Nowadays, some person think it is important to learn how cooked food and how it is composed. Other argue, that it is not as important as other subject. I think that to teach the science of food can help to save money and to avoid disease. On the other hand, it is important teach them climate change and other topic like biochemistery which are essential.\nFirst of all, it is important to teach in our school how are composed food and how to cook them without spend a lot of money. On reason of that, is because we had spam of advertising around us and, if we did'nt have the good information, we could be more guillible and buy fast food. This misinformation could lead to waste money and poor choice for our health. For example, if you don't know where find carbohydrate, fiber and protein, you will choose the bad food and listen marketing.\nIn fact, nutrition is not the only subjet which is important, that our time is limited. Moreover, with global warming, our world could encounter a huge challenge during the next century. For instance, climate change and global warming are more important for their education rather than science of nutrition, because they need to be prepared to these big change.\nIn my point of view, it is important to teach nutrition to our children, because that could lead at an improvement of their health and lifestyle. In contrast, it is not the only issue in the world and they needed to know the fundamental knowledge about the world like chemistery, biology, physic to understand more advanced topics. For example, how can they understand why would needed protein if they didn't understand biochemistery.\nTo conclude, although, it is a good idea to teach nutrition to our children cause ofthat can help in their life to save money, have a healthy life it is as more as important to give them more primarly knowledge and information more important about the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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