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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Theres so many roads in the world but traffic still exists. Ever think about the amount of cars in your neighborhood?, dont you think thats probaly the reason why? In the Sources 1,2,3 , and 4 all imphasizes on how having a limit of car usage can be an great advantage to society. I believe that the limiting of car usage is an great advantage. This is true because Limiting care usage lowers pollution, Decreases traffic.\n\nWith that being said , Limiting car use lowers air pollution. I agree with this because the less cars driven leads to less burning fuel. According to the passage by Robert Duffer paragraph 10 states that \"After days of near-record pollution, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\"Due to the high population in Paris and numerous amount of the owning a vehicle causes massive car pollution. Having massive car pollution can be dangerous, this inherits sickness, stress and diseases. Refering to the source \"Car-free Day is spinning into a big hit in Bogata,Columbia\" Mayor Of Bogota (Antanas Mockus) stated that \"It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" As he rode a two seater bike with his wife. The Mayor in this content speaks the absolute truth. As you walk to your destination in the nice warm air you relive stress and diseases that were causing you to be sick before. Those are the reasons why i think limiting car usage lowers the pollution.\n\nAdditionally, Limitiing car usage decreases traffic. This is true because if there is 5 people going to the same place you are and all of you guys drive in that one car or bus that reduces the traffic. Micheal Sivak In Source 4 ( The end of car Culture) elaborates on that by saying \"What most intrgues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before downturn, I Think that means something more fundamental is going on.\"What Mr. Sivak means by this is that everyone should only have a certain amount of car per household and person Which will also lower the traffic. Traffic in paris is very long but due to the car-free act traffic was reduces. from reading source 2 by Robert Duffer ,it states \"Congestion was down 60 % in the capital of france (Paris), after five days of intensifying smong.\" Just in five days of no driving the air is already unpolluted imageded if you drived five days all day. Those are the reasons why i think that Limiting car usage is an advantage.\n\nTo Conclude,I believe that the limiting of car usage is an great advantage. This is true because Limiting care usage lowers pollution, Decreases traffic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that driving makes everything easier since it gets you from point A to point B. But so does walking or riding a bike. There are many advantages to limiting car usage all over the world. Limiting car usage not only decreases the problem of smog or greenhouse gas emission it also helps give back to the economy in different ways.\n\nLimiting car usage helps decrease any sort of problem with smog or greenhouse gas emission. As stated in Source 2, \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\"(10). Since Paris decided to enforce the ban, the smog had cleared enough Monday for the French party to rescind the ban on Tuesday. Thus proving the point that limiting car usage either through a ban or just a vehicle-free zone, as in Germany, it can reduce smog and/or greenhouse gas emission. Greenhouse gas emission can be reduced simply by either switching to a more economy efficient car such as the hybrid or creating a low-car surburban society. As stated in Source 1, \"Passenger cars are resposible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\"(5).Businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza asserted that \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\"(Source 3,24) demonstrating that more than one person agree that lowering the use of cars is good for any society.\n\nEconomy may get better but it might just all depend on whether or not society begins to limit their car usage. As car usage is decreasing, people now have time to go out and be care free. As they stop limiting themselves from just driving from one place to another, more opportunities arise. Places such as \"parks and sport centers also have bloomed throughout the city\"(Source 3, 28) because people now have the time,instead of being stressed,to go have fun. Now new restaurants and even upscale shopping districts have cropped up, these places are being placed because of the restriction on driving your car. Even though it may have \"negative implications for the car industry\"(Source 4,34) our economy will be boosted leaving the negative implications for car industry out of the question when it comes to advantages versus disadvantages. People will have stores within walking distance and since there will be suburbs with car-free zones it makes communication easier and faster, leaving driving places from stressing anyone out.\n\nEverything isnt always dependent on time and if you have to work, with these suburbs containing car-free zones, stores are only a walk away instead of \"along some distant highway\"(Source 1,6). As mentioned in Source 3 \"the goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog\"(21) and with limited car usage it is guaranteed that this will occur. Even though cars may be needed, there are many more efficient ways of achieving something without using your car. America has already joined in reducing their driving percentage by either using environment friendly cars or not receiving a license at all. Places all over the world believe the limiting of vehicles in their society supports their country thus a low-car society is what it takes to \"conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety\"(Source 4, 43).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People today and years before us have always wandered if there has been life on Mars. With one photo taken of a mysterious figure, people think they have come closer than ever to knowing if there was life long before us on another planet. \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is a topic commonly talked about. Some say the Face was created by aliens, while others say it is the natural landform that caused it. Pictures were taken, and a conclusion have been made whether or not aliens created it, or if it was caused by a natural landform.\n\nIn 1976, Viking 1 was orbiting Mars to find a landing space for their sister ship, Viking 2.\n\nWhile scouting out Mars, Viking 1 comes across an image that could likely show life on Mars. The pictured appeared to be a face, but was debated for a long time. A couple years later in 1998, the Mars Global surveyor (MGS) took a shot of the \"Face\" which revealied a naural landform.\n\nThe image shot in 1998 was ten times shaper and more clear than the one taken in 1976. Once the second picture was taken, it was released to the JPL web site showing all, that it was caused by natural landforms and that aliens were not the case. People began to say that the aliens were hidden by a haze since the camera it was taken with had to zoom through the clouds in order to take the shot. The people needed specific evidence to believe that aliens do not exist, so the MGS did just that.\n\nTo prove to all the people, a third picture was taken in 2001 by the MGS. The image was shot with the most powerful resolution. It showed the mysterious figure on Mars turned out to be a butte or mesa. These were landforms comman in the American West. With the high quality picture we now know that life on Mars never existed, and the so called \"Face\" was formed over time by natural landforms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many problems Should apparent ever constructed One problems faced many dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This factor caused owners Building worry safety many civilians lived downtown New York Another factor builders face winds constantly shifting due violent air currents This caused problems landing fields blimps could weighted lead weights could done Empire State Building many dirigibles would able reach Building either due winds One last factor faced law airships fly low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area All factors caused idea using mooring mast drigibles passengers disappear", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When presented with challenges in doing a task, one always questions whether the effort in completing the task will be worth it. Whether if the goal in end worth all the challenges one has to hurdle through to achieve it. Perhaps, or perhaps not. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author talks about the plant Venus, and how its exploration can be difficult for humans to manage. The author argues that while Venus has its dangers, it will be worthwhile to make the effort to observe and study Venus. Throughout the article, the author supports this idea using the human fascination of the planet, and how the dangers Venus presents to a human mission to Venus can be lessened to a degree, leading to the author's affirmative stance on the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit, despite the difficulty.\n\nThe author uses scientists and their interest in Venus as an undeniable reason to explore Venus and learn more about the planet as a whole. Scientists are fascinated with Venus because it may have been, at one very early time, exactly like how Earth is now. Venus to this day, still bears strikingly similar features to that of its Earthen sister. Valleys, mountains, and craters have been seen on the surface, similar to ones on Earth. The author goes on to say Venus was most likely, at one point in time, covered in oceans, capable of hosting life. One would admit this is very intriguing, and that this knowledge could be power. The author then leaves the notion of the idea of progress and innovation. He points out the fact that human curiousity is unlimited, and will always lead mankind to new places, and these such places \"should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meed the very edges of imagination.\"\n\nIn order to address and avoid the dangers present to the exploration of Venus, one must define all the dangers that come with the task at hand. The author, before listing the ways many scientists have been working on to lessen the danger out on Venus, gives the audience an overview of all the inhospitable conditions Venus has to offer. With a thick atmosphere which is composed of 97 percent carbon dioxide and clouds of sulfuric acid, temperatures on the planet's surface can reach over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and an atmospheric pressure that is 90 percent greater than that of Earth. Not only is it the hottest planet in our solar system, the volatile weather on Venus presents a challenge to landing probes on the surface. To combat these dangers, scientists have been developing new techniques that will not only allow humans to observe Venus, but stay relatively safe as well. One technique developed by NASA suggests being about 30 or more miles above the surface, making rather suitable and survivable conditions for humans while they observe Venus. However, due to the fact that forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, researchers are unable to take photos of ground conditions, nor can they collect samples of things on the planet. To solve yet another problem presented by Venus' and her conditions, NASA is experienting with different materials that will allow machines to last long enough on the surface for sufficient knowledge to be gained about the planet. Systems of machines may be modified with specific mechanical parts that can be more resistant to Venus' pressure, heat and other conditions.\n\nThrough the lens of human fascination and solutions to many of the problems that come with exploring Venus, the author affirms the idea that while Venus will be very hazardous to explore, it is a worthy pursuit for mankind. While the author admits to many of the struggles scientists will have to endure through exploring Venus, they find it to be a worthwhile endeavor to undertake, in the name of progress and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting effect cyclist They effect cyclists confidence hope I say story sees things would consern people like towns suppose best end Ghost towns road flat hills Yet continues says what I believed last burst energy I going die The cyclist dosent think continue manages keep going hoping next horizon see building something Hope saved life knew could continue could die", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story statement author determined get used new country surroundings In story author showing home sickness The author see plant know come buy mother couldnt believe She didnt want tell mother exactly got shaky say home start crying The last sentence showing author trying adapt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face, is it martian made or a natural landform? The face is not a alien artifact it is a land form that is formed with facial features like eyes and a nose. The Viking 1 captured a mesa land formation that resembled a face not a martian made artifact. In 1998 a MOC team captured a picture that proved the \"Face\" was a mesa land form. Then agian in 2001 another team captured a picture of the mesa with a Mars Global Surveyor agian NASA came to the conclusion it was a mesa.\n\nIn 1976 a Viking 1 camera captured a bone chilling picture of what looks like a face. As scientists studyed the picture they came to the conclusion that it was an oddly formed mesa that resembled a human face. After they let the picture out to the public the popularity of this mesa sky rocketed it haunted the world for twenty five years before NASA did another expadition to prove it was a mesa.\n\nIn 1998 a GOC team captured a picture of this so called face. After further exsamination NASA found the face to be a land form commonly known as a mesa. After studying the mesa the group of scientists compaired the face to mesas in Cydonia, the area the face was found, they came to the conclusion the face was really a mesa that had a peculiar formation.\n\nThen agian in 2001 skeptics lead NASA to do another expadition to capture another picture of the phonomanon. After finding the same evidince as they had the past two times NASA ruled it a mesa. Skeptics had no way of saying the face was anything but a mesa. NASA had proven it three times there was no denying it, the face was a land formation that was rather common were the pictures were taken.\n\nNow NASA could be wrong the pictures could have been edited to contain the secret that there was life on mars. NASA could have tampered with the photographs to mislead the public. But life on mars would be good for NASA, the fact that we are not alone would get NASA the funding to start all kinds of expaditions that would help the United States in the Space race to mars. If there was life on mars NASA would have trillions of dollars to fund there research on the planet. This proves that NASA's findings were correct that the face is a mesa that looks oddly like a human face.\n\nAfter reading this you should realise the face is nothing more than a mesa land formation that was blown out of preportion. The media took a simple fact and turned it into a alien artifact this concludes the fact that the face was a naturally formed mesa nothing less nothing more. The face is a mesa that looks strangly like a human face that became a pop icon for twenty five years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Poisonous snakes mirages rolling hills dry dead tumbleweed features setting cyclist going greatest effect They showed trecherous path took obstacles surpass prevail The purpose including features setting like poisonous snakes mirages rolling hills signs life water show impact bad conditions If left sectives audience could saythink traveling old trail know cyclist could traveling along windy river passing threw nice developed towns see features setting help set mood also reveal confident story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face in the ground on Mars is it made by aliens or is it a natural formation.\n\nThe formation is not an alien formation because you can not see any signs of buildings, shacks or pyramids. Evidence from the passage is \"If there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were\". There were no alien markings on the formation or around it. The land formation is a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa.\n\nIf it was an alien formation NASA would not of posted these pictures of the Face on Mars on the internet for people see because, they want to keep things about aliens a secret so people can't start anything.\n\nIn conclusion the\n\nFace on Mars is not a alien formation because there were no signs of alien shacks or alien symbols on the face or around the face. So now NASA knows it is not a alien formation they need to worry about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story specific paragraph Saeng feels comfortable taking test explained happens Saeng misses came alot She promised would take test happens With Saeng saying makes wonder wont take test snow melts geese return hibiscus budding It makes feel really comfortable happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reasons to participate are, he thought,\"He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime. Plus you get to go out into the sea and enjoy the veiw of the sea's.\n\nAnd it is a fun job for example,\" Luke found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\"\n\nAnd he could see the lands of other countrys and what they do. For example, \"He was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\"\" Luke also toured and excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to china. And he was doing service to, so you don't have to join the military.\n\nIt made him more aware of people from other countries needs. And that awareness can help you if you get lost in a diffrent country. And it opens up the world to the Seagoing Cowboy because they get to go on trips to diffrent countries and see what the world needs. So participating is a great way to learn about the world and the people in diffrent countries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story determined succeed She misses homeland everything gardens grandparents etc For example walked flowershop smells flowers like used back home She smelled flower reminded grandmothers long gray hair freshly washed But saying last sentence said hibiscus budded next winter take test failed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the world, there are people who believe in aliens or supernatural beings, while some do not. The face on Mars is an example of an occurance that causes people to believe in aliens or supernatural beings. Even though this is true, there are still many people who think the landform is a natural occurance. There are ways to prove that this theory for the landform is true. Reasons such as the landform being compared to natural, earth landforms and it has similar characteristics as earth lanforms help prove this is true.\n\nThe landform was compared to a butte or a messa. This means it is quite similar to earthly landforms and may have occured due to something that happened on Mars. The face on Mars is comapared one main earth landform that was mentioned. The landform is Middle Butte, which is located in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It was a lava dome that took the form of an isolated mesa.\n\nThe face on Mars had the same look and height as a Earth landform, a mesa. It is true that there is an unusual shape to the face on Mars, there are similar occurances that happen on Earth. Though this happens on Earth, people don't say that these Earth landforms were made by aliens.\n\nThis landform is just like other occurances on seperate planets that resemble Earth landforms. Even though the landform resembles a human face, it doesn't mean the landform is an alien's doing. Just like landforms on Earth, there are more ways than one to prove the reason or the starting place of a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One clear obstacle law existed time making law airships fly low urban areas paragraph Also another obstacle attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flamable For example May German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey The owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place downtown New York paragraph The greatest obstacle nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents If dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast paragraph The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced much allow dirigibles dock mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are in the near future of the 21st century. Every street will be covered with smart cars. But every idea must have a problem to it. People are wondering if these cars are safe, and are they? I believe that these cars will danger our future in the 21st century.\n\nI turned 16 on March 1, 2016 and I will be able to get my licence on June 1. Like most every teen I am excited to be on the road driving my own car, but having driverless cars around could stop that. Growing up with driverless cars could lead to a generation of teens not learning how to drive and I believe that learning how to drive is a great way to learn responsibility. It also shows that the teen is growing up and becoming an adult, so it is like a step or passage to adulthood.\n\nIn paragraph 9 it tells of problems with the law. It states that if there is an accident who would take the blame for the cause of the accident, the driver or the manufactuer. If the driver takes the accident to court, the person can say it was the cars fault and that the manufacturer is at fault because they came up with the technology. If the manufactuer takes the accident to court they could say that the driver wasnt paying attention when they should have been. This whole situation can go both ways but I would favor the driver more than the manufactuer.\n\nHaving a smater car can be dangerous at times. The whole article states that the car would be doing almost everything on its own. This could produce a problem if there is an accident. If someone got hit and it ended up hitting in a place that damaged the technology, the car could start up in flames and the person could be trapped because the technology is broken. The person might die becasue the car was so reliable on the technology and doing its own things.\n\nIn conclusion, I feel like it is a horrible idea to produce driverless cars. They can bring many problems to the world, like not learning how to drive, legal situations and relying on technology to much. The smart cars don't bring safety, they bring problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face is just a natural landform. As the old photographs of it might have looked like as if it was made by aliens. The new photograph of the Face just shows a regular landform due to the higher resolution. The media is just trying to make you believe that it is an alien monument. At that time, they didn't' really what know what it was exactly. I am here to prove you that the Face is just a natural landform.\n\nIf the Face is an alien monument, there could have been mysterious looking structures on the monument. The Face is just a butte or a mesa as it was said by scientist Garvin that it reminded him of a butte in Idaho. The 2001 image of the Face doesn't show anything phenomonal, it is just a simple landform. According to NASA, the shadows just give the landform a face. As for my last evidence, Michael Malin and his team took a sharp photo of the Face explicitly revealing that it is just a landform.\n\nAs the old photographs suggests that it is something made by the aliens, it is not. It is just a landform based on the newer photograph. A scientist claimed that the Face is either a mesa or a butte which reminded him of a butte he saw before. As it is popular within the media, no one knows what it is. Later on, a group of scientists took a sharper photograph of the Face and confirmed that it is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Here in the United States, we have a problem of obesity. So one of the advantages of limiting car usuage is if we do get rid of cars, more walking would be involved, make the streets safer, and stop the polution of the air? Car-free cities seem to be more safe.\n\nObesity is a big problem in the United States. So instead of us just getting excerise of maybe 20 feet to walking to the car, and then the 45 feet to walk to where we need to go. Lets get rid of cars and if you need some where to go, then walk and dont be lazy and get some excerise. Excerise is not bad for you, and is actually very healthy. Walking is also a good way to relieve stress and get things off your mind. Sometimes people get mad or upset while driving adn there emotions get in the way of there driving and it ends up badly. So if we get rid of cars it would also decrease the number of accidents. When your walking and you get upset or mad you wont have to take it out on the car or anyone else around you. Walking instead of driving is a better motive especially when we have a high obesity rate. There are so many people in this world with insecurity issues and instead of them not doing anything about and wanting there parents to drive them to go hang out with there friends or go to the beach or whatever the thing is, walk to your friends house or walk to the beach that way you feel better about yourself when you get there and feel like you accomplished something and feel like you feel better about yourself.\n\nIn a lot of cities and or countries, there are a lot of \"non-safe\" streets. There are always car accidents, people dying in these car accidents, there used in some kind of violence. Car accidents are one of the most caused death. This is because people are in a rush so they have to do over the speed limit, people driving recklessly and feel that \"oh im cool\" or \"watch me do this\" and ends up in something that they thought at the time wouldnt of happened because they thought they had control. So if getting rid of cars would deffinetly dramatically decrease the number of deaths we have just by getting rid of the cars. Just think of how many lives will be saved! Most of the time thefts are not captured because they always have a run away vehicle to get a way. If we stop using cars, what are they gonna use to get a way? If they try using public transportation to get away, with other people on the bus, he would look suspicious, and get caught. The streets would be a lot safer, especially for adults that have children. Children get snatched up in what? A bicicyle? No, a car. So it would be a lot safer for kids and teenagers to go out and have a good time and not worry about a lot going around them.\n\nWe already have more pollution problems then we need. People just dont care anymore about how or where they live and they will just throw any kind of trash they want on the ground. So driving cars just helps the people already littering, the cars are just polluting the air we breathe. So instead of us Americans not giving a crap about what were doing to the wonderful beautiful planet we live on, we should start, and help, but not driving the things that pollute are air.\n\nIn a result of limiting car usage, Mr. Goldberg says \" Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role.\" So this means that by approving it this year, there will be more public transportation then people driving there personal cars. Getting rid of cars would decrease a lot of the problems we have now. Some of you might think, \"well what if we work for a living and need to get to work?\" Well, you can awlays WALK to the public transportation area. Studies have shown that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses. This leaves us wondering, \"Has Obama passed peak driving?\" Is it gonna make us get lower in obesity, make the streets safer, and stop the pollution of the air? Getting rid of cars will decrease a lot of issues that we have in the world today, so getting rid of or decreasing the car-usage is a positive, not a negative.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There might be contentious debates regarding the issue of whether it is necessary for the government to invest in education for young people than adult population who cannot read and write or not. \n\nI strongly believe that it is more essential to spend the budget in the education for younger generation than that for the older generation. \n\nOn the one hand, some people assume that it is significant for the government to spend more money on education for adult population who cannot read and write. \n\nFirst of all, people who cannot read and write are not able to get jobs, so it is too difficult for them to make a living. It could lead to conflict between the younger generation and the older generation. \n\nMoreover, the government have a responsibility to provide basic education to all citizens. If the government spend budget on the education of adult, it could exert a considerable positive influence on them, and it allows them to improve their quality of live.\n\nAs far as the other opinion is concerned, some people believe that it is more worth for the government budget to invest in the education of young people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "T\n\nhe state Senator of Florida, lets try and keep the electoral college. These are the facts that willmake want to vote against the popularity vote for presdency. The big states (large population count)of the United States will have an overruling vote against smaller states(lower count of population), some states big state will convince other states to get one of their senators to party up, and the disputes that will occure of the sharing of population vote.\n\nO\n\nne of the first problem will occur is the large population states(California, Texas, and Florida, New York, Ohio, Pensilvannia)will have overruling vote on small population states. In source 3 paragraph 4 says,\"Large states get more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does.\" This means that large states ingulf all of the attention from smaller population states. Later will be a growing concern for the Electoral College.\n\nA\n\nnother problem eould be that large population states will convience smaller population state to help them in the vote for a presidentional race AKA swing states. This winner takes all voting style will effect the people of the swing state and the real verdict the people want or what s best for the state.\n\nI n 2002 a dispute rang out over the winning canidate's share of the Electoral invariety rexceeded his share of the populariy vote. It is impossible to get a tie in Electoral college ,so you will always find who will president. One problem would be the landslide that will occur rarely.\n\nT\n\nhese would be major problems that will occur and it will be delt with of the populariity vote for presideny and how Electoral college should be kept in the United states Goverment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College vote is a somewhat a confusing process with the voter not voting for the president, but electors who elect the president. Many people think that this method is flawed becuase the people are not electing the president. On the hand people think that the Electoral vote keeps the race for presidency with a more clear outcome, than if they were elected by the popular vote. There are defiently two different arguments to this points with both sides involving good evidence.\n\nThere are many flaws that people bring up in regard to the electoral vote. One of these is that since the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, the electors could easily defy the will of the people. The most obvious fact about the electoral vote is that you are not voting for the president, but for a group of electors who then vote for the president. This is also unfair to voters because the candidates don't spend time in states they know will not win. During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states did not even see the candidates, and people in 25 of the largest media markets didn't see a single campaign ad. In turn the elctoral college is unfair and outdated.\n\nThough there are plently of things wrong with the electoral college there are still plently of good arguments as to why we should keep it. With the electoral college vote there is less of a chance of a dispute over the outcome thaan with the popular vote, though it happened in the 2000 election. The electoral can also make the race more fair, because a candidate with more regional appeal can not gain more electoral votes by campaigning heavily in that area. The electoral college also can help avoid run-off elections like Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992. Overally the Electoral College vote is a way of electing a president without actually electing a president, that should probabley be removed so the people have more of a say on who runs there country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Step right up join join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will have a blast. you will see the ocean and see the fish and animals in it. you will meet others. make new friends.\n\nHI my name is Luke Bomberger and in have sailed over the Atlantic Ocean 16 times. Thats alot of times now is that alot of times to sail over the atlantic ocean or is it just me. I was helping people affected by world war 2. They were really hurt by it. Every body was crying over the dead bodys of their lost loved ones.\n\nWe tryed to help but they refused for us to help them. They said they wanted to be left alone. I do not under stand why they are so sad. Yes their freinds and family is injured and in serious condition or deceased. But i would want someone to aid me if one of my family members was in critical condition. If i was like that i would want some help to. Because we all have heavy duty first aid kits for the injured.\n\nSo we helped the ones who wanted aided. And took the ones who needed serious medical help. Others came to we all went back. And then we came back and i met George. he wanted to come back with me. at first i said no stay at yor home. as soon as we were leaving i felt really bad for george so i came back for him. He came back and he lived at my house for a while and then we built him a house so we could be neighbors. we had pool partys and had so much fun and we lived happyly ever after.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe library movie store ever books movies magazines cd s think offensive likley taken shelf Have ever walked store seen something approprite little kids get little embarassed I know I least one point time life Which I believe removed store least shelves I always try think grandparents would feel new kind music teen s listening today There much terrible language talking violence bad things really isnt appropriate anyone hear even talk Some people feel differant people take little serious remember everyone opinion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the course of human existance, humanity has always been striving for progress, you might say going the extra mile, in order to better our society. One such great invention was the automobile which allowed us to travel great distances in a short period of time. Consequently, the natural instinct, to grow and improve, has been transfered to the idea of the automobile through the self driving car. Self driving cars are the future of transportation as the offer a host of positive benefits including, precise driving capabilities, increasing affordability, and new safety technology.\n\nThe self driving car has begun implementing technology that can revolutionize a car's self awarness. For example the article states, \"spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3D model of the car's surroundings.\" Unlike the human eye, the LIDAR radar sees anything and everything; not only does it never miss a single detail, but it also has a 360 degree view that current drivers simply do not possess. These sensors are expecially useful when backing up and driving backwards, as many drivers struggle with getting a full view of what goes on behind them. However, with the LIDAR radar, this problem is eliminated, making backwards driving easier. Putting radar into the drivers seat is not so much about losing the human touch of driving, but getting a more accurate perspective on the road.\n\nSecondly, the technology is finally in a place where self driving cars are becoming a feasible economic option. Sebastian Thrun, founder of the self driving Google car, said, \"There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting. The sensors weren't there...Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars.\" In fact, alot of the technologies, including radar, used in self driving cars have been around for a long time. However, in recent years, they have become alot cheaper and precise, so that the dream of creating a self driving car is a reality. The goal of the self driving car was never to create a billion dollar high tech vehicle accessible only to the rich, but one that could be mass produced and avaliable to all. With cheaper, mass produced technology, it seems like this is not too far up the road.\n\nFinally we see that the self driving car may actually be safer that regular drivers. With so many deaths accounted to texting and driving, the idea is that people would be able to safely text when the car drives itself certainly has its appeal. However, when the car needs a human touch, \"displays [texting] can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not avalible to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\" Shutting off the display would force drivers to pay attention to the road during tricky situations and reduce the number of car crashes. Secondly, the use of sensors helps detect and prevent crashes. The article says, \"sensors have become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or rollovers. This information from the sensor can cause the car to apply breaks on individual wheels,\" which could stop potential dangers in their tracks that the driver may not be aware of. In the end, a self autonomus car is always vigilant and is never distracted, making it safer than having a human driver.\n\nSelf autonomous cars are more accuate, becoming cheaper, and are safer than today's cars, making them the car of the future. It is only a matter of time before someone develops a self driving car that can be mass produced, and when that day comes, we should embrace it with pride. Together, let's drive towards creating the car of tommorow, today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Features setting affected cyclist many ways After miles need water supply cyclist found rusty pipe tarlike substance came brackish water substance While cycling need clean water Next terrain changed flat hilly In need water last thing need challeged Later food cars buildings sile When feeling worst would want someone near case fall one site road Lostly seeing old welch s Grape Juice Factory would affect cyclist Seeing image drink factory right infront business make fell like heshe never make These features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To start off by saying , Aliens really? If you believe in aliens show me proof. But saying they made a human face on mars. Can't be true and let me tell you why?\n\nFirst, aliens don't exist, and if they did why would they put a human face on mars? Theses are all questions that want to be answered. But they can't if the thing that made it can't speak, and it was nature who made it. NASA just wanted show to show you there progress and how far they got. Hollywood and other people turn it into an attraction getter.\n\nSecond, it's just a landform Even NASA said it's called a mesa. In the picture its a landform that is te same thing it just has different forms. There's no face on mars.But NASA has discovered dryed\n\nup water that shows there was life on mar but only plants.\n\nIn conclusion, some people may say \"well we found aliens on Earth and ufo's\" but when has NASA ever said we've found aliens...never. I know this because, if they found ufs's and aleins the government would pay mad money to get the edvidence. But they haven't found any so they can't get paid.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story come back to show saeng changed throughout plot story In beginning refers new home walking another world As teenager move Vietnam traditions much different United States However one plant similar winter Hibiscus The plant connects previous life home life home lives It hard adapt situation moving plant created familiar scents familiar fragrance which filled lungs It even difficult saeng say words at home without bursting tears Once winter Hibiscus ground changed saeng realized needed appreciate In conclusion author ended story paragraph showed much plant resembled saeng mind set life altered", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why author suggests that studing Venus a worthy.I think author wanted to say, If people could not live Earth anymore, We could live Venus. Because referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the clotest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the clotest in destance too. But Venus's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees, it is 90 times greater than what we experience on the Earth. I don't think we could live there.But NASA has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus, not easy comditions, but survivale for humans.\n\nAuthor saids strining to meet challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becaus human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet te vary edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nSo this article was author explain Venus's good points and bad points.\n\nIf we need move another planet, In my opinion Venus is better than any planet. Venus is close and similar to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What are some advantages of limiting car usage? Some may say that there is no advantages but many would like to differ, Some advantages that we would have would be less polution , Smog, or even a chance to exercise . But lets talk about polution. Polution takes a major affect on the world and many people might not see this, but limiting car usage can help prevent this . Polution is constantly harming us and the world around us. It destroys are Ozone Layer, causes smog , and much more. And if limiting car usage can help prevent this why not? This is when todays socity kicks in to play. In todays socity some people are just to lazy i'm not saying im not guilty of this\n\nHowever , i'm not saying that anyone is. See some people decide to take there cars wherever they go, even if it is just three to four blocks down the road. If we just decide to walk more maybe we can reduce polution. Let's say that you have a local Walmart or Supper store about a one mile radious away from were you live and all you need is a gallon of milk or just something to eat, im not saying spending over three hundred in grocries. Just something little why not just walk it? Now im not saying that if there was an emergancy like your kid got in an accident or your wife is in labor to walk them to the hostbitol. You should be able to use your car in those types of situations. But Like i said If we all do that for the little things we might just be able to stop polution.\n\nOther ways to prevent this from happening? In source three the passage written by:\n\nSelsky, Andrew it talks about a car free day! This would be an Excelent way to help prevent smog and air polution. But to make this take a major impact on the world is to get everybody to do this. not just a few states but the whole contry. This will benifit the world and you more then you might think. In passage one written by:\n\nRosenthal, Elisabeth there was a statement made,\n\n\"How much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid.\"\n\n. This stood out to me because a hybrid is an electrive operated car and some of these cars don't take or burn any fosil fules . Wich will also help prevent all of the affects cars have on the world and us. In conclusion , We should all try to walk around a little more then use are cars for little things we should all try to be a little more active and help prevent the world from getting worst then it all ready is!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock For one thing builders could nt simply place mast top empire state building building would surely collapse A thousandfoot dirigible moored top empire state building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame To change fix problem sixty thousand dollars would needed modifications Another obstacle builder s failed see actual construction modernday dirigible The dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly Flammable If dirigibles ever explode docking situation would horrible densely populated area New York Lastly greatest obstacle building nature Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around would dangerous The dirigible could pedestrians streets meaning safe There three obstacles prevented empire state building allowing dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are mixes kind of believed exist in the current society with regard to the career development.Few thinks that it is totally good to kick off their own professional career after completing their whole study, However on the other hand certain people think that it is better to kick off their professional career just after the school.These are two extreme two kind of believed,where those having their own pros and cons.In my opinion I am strongly agreed with regard to entering the university studies and then start up their professional career in their desire field.\n\nStarting up the professional career after full-fill professional studies may help to accrelate the career in the desire field more faster than those who don't have it, Generally educated people can think more strategically and deeper with regard to certain context.More over those people showing excellent skill in term of expressing their thought to top management in a more understandable manner.According to the recent interview with leading beverage company CEO by BBC broadcast where CEO expressed that \"they are seeing that fully qualify people showing excellent perform in their work where they can understand the context more quickly and deeper.\n\nOn the other hand, point of starting your career is a good stage for learning things more quickly.So as years progress by with the good work experiences they may achieved good position in their professional career while that time only university students start their career.\n\nBoth two different thinking having their own pros and cons however i am strongly believed that inorder to fullfill good professional careers at the retirement age it is highly recommends to finished of all their professional qualifcations before starts up their career.Because up to certain level both can perform well however in the today's world all big companies willing to give more chances and opportuniites to who have completed their study proper at this time person who doesnot have proper paper qualification fall level the those people.\n\nIn conclusion,I am brief express that in the current society certain parents forces their students to complete their studies before starts their career because as a result of the completion those people can progress well in their career ladder.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger, a member of the Seagoing Cowboys program, had a fun time while helping locations in ruins after wars. Luke got to have an amazing time helping people in need. The benefits of joining the Seagoing Cowboys program include helping other countries in need, a lot of free time with amazing experiences, and meeting new people that he worked with and the people that he helped recover. First, I will talk about how becoming a Seagoing Cowboy would not only benefit you but also benefit other people in countries that had been damaged from the wars.\n\nThe main reason Luke had joined the Seagoing Cowboys program was to help other people that lived in countries that had been involved in the wars. Luke joined the program to help them recover and Luke had said \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" Luke had been talking about the Seagoing Cowboys program. Luke's family also hosted many international students and exchange visitors for many years. Luke learned about the current situation in other countries while on the trip while he was helping other people at the same. Secondly, I will talk about how Luke got a lot of free time and got to go to many places such as Greece.\n\nThe rides were not quick because the Seagoing Cowboys had to cross oceans. It took two weeks to a month to get to their desired destination. Luke was often kept busy with the animals to care for but when they were returning, he got a lot of time that he could spend with the other people on board or visit locations. Luke got to see the Acropolis in Greece, ride a gondola in Italy, tour a castle in Crete, and visit the Panama Canal in China. Luke also often did activities with the other men on board such as play sports in the space they had after unloading the animals. Luke was grateful for the opportunity of becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. Next, I will talk about how Luke got to meet new people.\n\nLuke had just been invited by his friend, Don Reist, to go on a cattle ship so he didn't know many people on the ship. Luke got to meet the other Seagoing Cowboys during the acitivities onboard the cattle ship. Luke also got to meet new people in the locations he visited. Luke got to travel the world and meet new people from different places. It exposed Luke to the needs of countries and that was one thing Luke learned while being a Seagoing Cowboy. Finally, I will discuss why it would be a good idea to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy had been hard work but it also had many benefits. Luke not only helped others but learned something about other people in other countries. Luke had many benefits from joining the program such as helping other people in different countries, having a fun time with other people, and meeting new people. in conclusion, becoming a Seagoing Cowboy could benefit anybody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles building One obstacle hit dirigibles couldnt dock mooring mast When architects engineers built building put flat roof Mooring Mast could placed They said frame Empire State building would modified strengthened fix situation Another obstacle couldnt Rope holding Mooring Mast dirigibles wouldnt hold Those obstacles architechs went threw", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you trust a driverless car? I think we should have driverless cars. I could see cars driving themselves later in the future. Part of the reason I would like a car to drive its self is so I can get on my phone, watch a movie, or go to bed.\n\nWould you like a driverless car, but you can't be on your phone? I'm not in control of the car, but yet I have to keep my eyes on the road at all times. I call that back seat driving. Of course people are going to be on their phones if they don't have their hands on the wheel.\n\nWhat would you do if you didn't have to have your hands on your wheel? If I could relax while I was on the road I would do it. I would watch a movie, play a game, or just look at the sky. Driving is stressful, but if I have the car driving for me I don't still want to be streesed.\n\nDon't we need sleep? If you are driving across country, and you are on a time limit wouldn't you sleep while your car drives for you? You have been driving for five-teen hours straight and you want a break, but you can't stop to sleep wouldn't you just let the car you all the work?\n\nDo you think we need driverless cars? I think we need driverless cars. If we had cars to drive for us we could beon our phones, wo wouldn't be stressed, and you could drive all night long.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Owing to modernization, the rapid race to succesed has led to plethora of advertisements and promotion campaigns, highlighting their products and making it stand out from rest of the compitators. Since, Individuals go through such campaigns on regular basis there are umpteen chances of consumers getting involved and influenced. The severity of influencing and number of measures to deal with this are stated in following discussion.\n\nTo commence, the advertisements can easily influence a buyer not only into trying the noval products or experiences but also gluing people to their items on a long run. Adding to it, correct strategies for marketing can boost a product's sale to a greater extent. Moreover, advertisers and marketing agencies are using quirky and fancy ways to attract the customers, and it is paying off the hard work. To exemplify, history has seen a great case of a company influencing customers as well as making them try the product, soft drink giant Redbull, managed to catch attention of citizens just by stuffing trash cans and roads with empty redbull cans in their struggling days.\n\nOn the other side, in recent times it is utmost important to not neglect negative marketing which can influence kids as well as grown ups into doing horrifying things. Cure to this can be noticed by forming a honest commitee of individuals which regulates the frequency and content of the advertisements. Moreover, an education on such matter can help curb the effects of some marketing stunts with demerits. However, a greater solution to this issue can be found by mitigating the compitation at local level what-so-ever, upshifting the focus of sales even on global level. \n\nTo conclude, there are myriad events suggesting that the humans are greatly influenced by advertisements, hence measures like forming a regulatory institution or educating organization will help to curb such matters.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the salad days of the millennium, this society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion of whether the exchange between different countries is beneficial or not . People have different mindsets. The subsequent paragraphs would shed light on both approaches before making the final note.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are a multitude of reasons why individuals think that business and cultural trade is advantageous. The most significant reason is that this helps in exchanging the things that are not available in one country. The tea leaves for example are not grown in England so they obtain these from India. In this way, other countries are enjoying things that their country’s climate does not favour. Besides this, cultural contact plays an indispensable role in increasing the country’s economy. To clarify, some countries offer different countries to visit them during the different festivals or events organized by them which result in people travelling in and out of the country and increasing its economy as when people travel they spend a lot on their stay and food. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I favour those who opine that this is destructive as it destroys the nation’s identities. The first and foremost reason is that when people exchange happens people tend to travel to other countries, where they get influenced by the culture of that country. So, to adapt themselves to those people they try to change their way of living according to that country. Due to this, they lose their culture and identity. For instance, almost 60% of India’s population has travelled to Canada and has been living according to Canadian culture and forgetting their roots. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although the points in favour of the former view are substantial, I still opine that because of this contact between the countries, they are losing their identities as a whole.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Luke Bomberger and I am in the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). In the UNRRA you get to go to different place and help families gets back on there feet form World War 2. You get to bring them food, animals, and more, 44 nation joined together to form the UNRRA. If you are a hardworking person then come join the UNRRA.\n\n'' The cattle-boat trips are unbelievable opertunity for a small-town boy!'' Luke says. I have toured Venice,Italy, a castle in Crete, and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. ''You get to take great trips in the UNRRA.'' I said.\n\nAlso working with the animals is a great way to pat the time by working with them. Working with animals is so much fun. You can tell them you secrets , you can play with them, you can just fell in love with an mailman that you can't share everything with them.\n\nThen seeing the smiling faces on the people's faces when you give the food and water it just amazing. It make you feel good inside like a warm good tinglying feel that you can't get from anything else. You just feel like you made a huge difference. It a happiness that you can't buy with money I would not trade it for anything in the world. It gives you a reason to get up in the morning. Working in the UNRRA was a great disison that I have made defintitley not one of my mistakes.\n\nAlso when you unload the animals and go and great more it is a lot of fun on deck. You get to play with your other ship mates and play baseball, volleyball, whittling, boxing, read and more it's a great way to pass the time. A great way to bond with everyone on deck.\n\nIf you a hard working then you will enjoy this job. You have to work hard to succeed in this job. You will definitely need to be a hard working to like this job.\n\nIf you are a hardworking, animal loving, adventure seeker, love to help others, love to be on boats, then this is the job we for you. So come join the seagoing Cowboys program and be apart of the UNRRA. Come help families in need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advancing of technology is unstoppable. When the driverless car is fully driverless, it will be revolutionary. That's why I believe that driverless cars are a great thing that will be fully added to our world one day. The driverless car could benefit the people of this world in many ways, it conserves gas, it's more safe than other ways of transportation, and it would cost less.\n\nOne very important thing about the driverless car is that it conserves gas. The world is already in a mild gas problem as oil is a nonrenewable resource. This is because the people of the world use way too much gas every day for driving. These cars would use half the fuel that cars today use. That would make the price of gas go down and it would help our gas problem and make gas last for many more years.\n\nDriverless cars will be extermently safer than the cars we have today. I say this because it would cause less accidents. Let's say that someone had a little bit too much to drink but he or she is still alert enough to drive. Instead of taking the risk of crashing, he or she can get into the driverless car and only control it at a few moments. There would be a way less chance of he or she crashing and would make the roads way safer for every one else.\n\nThe driverless car will save many families a ton of money. Instead of families buying their own car, they can call a Google driverless taxi when they need to go somewhere and not have to worry about the cost of gas. They also wouldn't have to worry about the price of buying a new car. The only places that would be losing money out of this is car dealerships. When the driverless cars become mainstream there wont be much need for car dealerships or even man driven cars.\n\nDriverless cars are going to be one of the biggest inventions in human history once they break their way into the mainstream. They would help out the world in many ways by conserving gas, making the world a safer place, and it would save familes a ton of money. When driverless cars are finally released to the public, the lives of almost every body in the world will be improved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I for one highly disapprove of Google cofounder Sergey Brin's plan to make cars independently drive themselves. First of all, it is important for everybody to learn how to drive, and creating cars that can drive themselves will cause people (teenagers especially) to feel like learning the skill of driving isn't important - increasing their chances of getting into an accident and harming/killing themselves or someone else. Secondly, paragraph seven mentions that the cars will notify the driver whenever the road ahead requires human skills; however, people seem to forget that technology is known to make mistakes. For example, how many times has your cell phone taken longer than expected to load? Similar things can occur with any other form of technology, and when and if a car is relying souly on technology, there is always the chance that the car will take longer than normal and not have enough time to inform the driver that the road ahead requires human skills. Lastly, pot holes, stray animals and children all may pose a threat as well. These cars have no way of knowing what's in front of them and may cause the driver to be in an accident. In conclusion, this is why I feel that cars that can drive themselves are dangerous and should not be aloud on our roads.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are going to change the world. They are much safer than any person could dream of being. They could help the economy greatly by saving money from personal transport. Lastly, the cars could simply help in a smaller way, by taking away the stress of driving. For these reasons, driverless cars are a positive advance in today's technology.\n\nDriverless cars could be much safer than human drivers. A person must have fast reflexes to avoid an accident, but even so, there is always the danger of just not being fast enough. Advancements in technology, such as sensors and driving tracks, will make these cars more aware of their surroundings than people. Using this technology, the world would never have to worry about the dangers of driving drunk or a careless person behind the wheel. Therefore, driverless cars could be much safer and save many lives.\n\nOn another note, driverless cars could greatly help the economy. With no need for personal vehicles, people could instead rely on public transit. This could be very helpful, as the money saved could go towards the community. For example, the money saved could go towards the project of changing the streets. Using car tracks could make the driverless cars safer and more effective.\n\nMoreso, the cars could do something simple that would go a long way to making people feel better. Driverless cars could help by relieving them from the stress of driving. Most people have a lot of their minds throughout the day and a lot of things to worry about. While the car drives itself, the occupant can take the time to relax and enjoy their surroundings. Being able to sit back and relax for a moment could be beneficial for everyone.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are an amazing opportunity that people need to take advantage of. Saving lives, saving money, and saving people from stress are all worthwhile goals that driverless cars could help achieve. Driverless cars are too advanced to let go to waste. The advancements in technology are an amazing feat that people should use to assist in daily life. Driverless cars are going to change the way people feel about transportation in a positive way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In contemporary settings, due to the prevalence of the feminist movement, more and more females are hired in some industries which conventionally are the domains of males. The contributors of this transformation will be discussed in this essay along with the reasons why I believe this is a blessing rather than a curse. Multiple factors facilitate this trend.\r\n\r\n To be more specific, an increasing number of women receive tertiary education and thus, the professional knowledge obtained from such experience enables them to enter / join some companies, working as engineers, scientists and lawyers. In addition, several decades ago, most tasks were performed by hand, which made men in an advantageous position due to their relatively stronger bodies. By contrast, nowadays, the vast majority of manual jobs are performed by machines, and the requirement for workers is not strength but the skills of operating these mechanics, which makes the females on a par with their male counterparts. \r\n\r\nThis improvement exerts a positive influence on both females and their families. Women are always detail-oriented, so if they are working as scientists or doctors, they have higher chances of obtaining huge success. A good example is a female scientist Madame Curie who attributed her success in the discovery of the element Ra to the fact that she identified the minor difference in their daily research outcomes. Consequently, by focusing on these divergences and doing deep research, she found the element and reaped a breakthrough in their research. Besides, formerly, the roles of women were confined to being housewives, which earned them no salaries. Hence, their families depended on their husbands’ salaries, but in modern times, the combined salaries of both husbands and wives enable them to have better lifestyles.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the reasons for the increase in women’s involvement in work which used to be done by men are their educational qualifications and the development of technologies which eliminate manual labour.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" they describe a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This system gives computers the ability to identify human emotions. This uses facial expressions to find out how someone is feeling based on their face. Some people believe that this can be used in the classroom to help students. And I believe they are right.\n\nThis technolgy can be very useful to the students in a classroom. In the article it says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This could be extremely helpful to kids who struggle understanding some material. It could explain in whatever way it needs to be so the student can understand, always knowing when the student is confused, based off their facial expression. This is great since reading facial expressions is something that teachers, and people in general, tend to struggle with.\n\nAnother reason this is so helpful is because it can make computer-animated faces more expressive in things like video games and video surgery. Computer-animated faces being more expressive is great for people like medical students that use video surgery. This makes it easier for them to tell if their patient is in discomfort.\n\nSo in conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System would be benefical to students. It could tell if students are bored or confused, and adjust the lesson for them to understand it. Also it could make computer-animated faces more expressive making it easier for medical students using video surgery to tell if their patient is in discomfort.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author explans that Venus is the second planet from our sun, and that stuyding Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers; The solar power would be plentiful and radiatio would not exceed Earth levels. Like it says in the passage \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one partticularly idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\"\n\nThe author explains that some simplified electrons made of silicon carbide have been tested in a charmber simulation the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for the three weeks in such conditions. The author also states in the paragraph that another project is looking back to an old technolgy called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800's and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II. So the author has supported his idea that stuyding Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, and has also had interasting facts about Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Numerous prospective employees choose incorrect degree fields when they are becoming students and graduate schools. It leads to the disappointed feelings that appeared during their future working period of life. However, schools and universities are able to prevent the problem. \r\n\r\nTo start with, the main reason, in my opinion, which is affected by the negative feelings among the employees is formed when students graduate their high school. They are not able to get a significant amount of their life experience and develop a wide outlook during a school period. It is happened because the majority subjects in student plan based mostly on theory. It leads to difficulties because candidates are not able to form an advanced experience about their future job. They can achieve it mostly by a practical way. For example, if students crack the books and highlighted only theory, they will not get a full imagination about their future degree. Afterwards, when students are becoming to postgraduates and employees, most of them will have undelighted emotions to their work and field in general.\r\n\r\n\tOn the opposite side, educational institutes can solve the problem. Nowadays, career orientation classes are becoming widespread among numerous universities and schools. It presents possibilities for prospective students: they can try and found themselves in a certain field and gain experience, knowledge and make their world view more sophisticated. For example, the candidate highlighted scientific subjects and thinking about developing in medicine. The school cooperates with the university to organise a medical class, where the student is able to get advanced data, knowledge and taking a part in practical exercises and meetings, which are realised by staff and students from the university. Afterwards, the educational field will become more visible. It can help prospective students to make a considered decision for their future degree at university and job. Hence, making a deeply analysed decision based on gained experience, which will affect prospective work and behaviour of employee.\r\n\r\n\tIn conclusion, a significant amount of employees are getting negative emotions, because they were not be able to gain a knowledge in a practical way, to see the visibility structure of their field and form a point of view for their future job. However, if the schools continue to develop the idea of career orientation classes, the prospective students will make considerate decisions for their future university degree and job. Subsequently, this phenomenon will affect on their job sensations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Is the planet Venus (Evening star) worth studying considering the dangers and risks we might take\"\n\nThe planet venus has many risky situations if us humans ever try to explore the planet such as heat since the planet is close to the sun or the thick atmosphere.\n\n\"Venus also known Evening star\" is a planet closest to our's (Earth) that we can simply see from a distance from Earth, has been a challenge to examine more closely to the planet itself. Venus is the closest planet that matches our density and size and the closest out of all the planets to our's.\n\nVarious attempted spacecrafts were sent to Venus to explore the planet, none survived more than a few hours. Not a single one was launched again in more than three decades. Since the planet has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and the clouds are highly sulfuric acid it may be a challenge to overcome those. Venus also has the hottest tempature despite the fact mercury is closer to the sun. Venus had almost the same traits as our earth did long ago, it had large oceans and supported life-forms, now it has a rocky surface with mountains, valleys, and craters. When above the surface tempatures would be toasty closely to 170 degrees Fahrenheit, the solar power there would be plentiful and radiation would't exceed Earth levels. This sort of condition would be rough, but survivable for most humans.\n\nHowever, if we peer the planet Venus from a distance, like a ship orbiting or hovering around the planet it could provide limited sight, and most light can't penetrate the atmosphere. Altough some electronics have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus's surface and lasted a three weeks in such condition. NASA is still trying new things to try and explore Venus, and maybe have a planetory visit one day. Venus is yet to be discovered and it would in fact be an intresting challenge to try and explore our twin planet closest to us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many countries around the world, a large number of people are getting obese. It is argued by some people that raising the money of high-fat items will reduce its consumption and thereby people’s overweight issue will be addressed. I disagree with the opinion because some people are addicted to fast food which contains high amount of fat and simply increasing the price will not cut down their fat intake. There are some other additional reasons for my view which will be stated in this essay.\n\nThe most compelling reason for holding my view is that many youngsters are not ready to avoid ready-made food and its unique taste just because of a rise in price. Therefore, they continue to consume high-fat food items and ignore their health problems. For instance, McDonald’s outlets around the world deliver food which contains enormous amount of saturated fat. However, a study found that most people prefer McDonald food over healthy alternatives because of its distinctive taste. Thus, people are ready to buy those foods even for a higher price.\n\nSecondly, high-fat foods are not the only reason for obesity among people. Nowadays, a large number of people are leading a sedentary lifestyle which is considered as one of the major reasons for obesity. Therefore, physical exercise plays a vital role in maintaining a healthy body. Due to this reason, increasing the price of fatty foods does not solely address the overweight problem.\n\nIn conclusion, I totally disagree with the opinion that high cost of food causing obase is the ideal solution to control it . Public are ready to pay anything for foods which are easily available and having pleasant taste even if the fat content is higher. In addition, I believe that encouraging / promoting physical exercise is more crucial for maintaining body weight than regulating fatty food.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The plan allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building encountered problems introduction conclusion The first problem original design building The original design include dirigible docking station When plans station introduced building strong enough carry heavy load spire dirigible To adjust additional spent order ensure building would structurally sound dirigible docking The next problem became imminent Hindenburg s fire hydrogenfilled dirigible caught fire Empire State Building cause significant damage Moreover many dirigibles used hydrogen safety risk significant Wind proved another obstacle The force dirigible blown around heavy winds could prove much structure building Moreover dirigible docking building would one thousand feet ground way anchor dirigibles The fact many tall spires lined skyline presented imminent danger dirigible trying dock Finally one significant problems building dirigible docking station fact law prohibited low flying aircraft urban areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program and why you shoudl participate in it.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because if you do you can learn new things about the world you may not of already know. If you join the prgram its a one time chane in the world if you do. You may learn about new cultures in the world and learn about new countries lifestyles.\n\nIf you do join you may learn new cultures lifestyles and new locations like\n\nAcropolis in Greece Italy with streets of water. The program is good because you can help people in need of food, water, supplies or any goods.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you may learn new cultures lifestyles more about other countries and its a chance of a lifetime to do so. May learn new belives and it can opens the world to you.\n\nThis is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi my name is Luke. When I was 17 my friend Don asked me to be a\n\n\"Seagoing Cowboy\". I said yes beacuse it was a \"once in a life time opportunity\". When I first became a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" the year was 1945.\n\nWhen I turned 18 I had enlisted in the army. On the ship we had to work hard day and night, we had to care for the animals during the crossings, We had to lift the heavy bags of oats and hay. We also had to water the animals two or three times a day. It was hard but it was helpful to me. When I was discharged in 1947 I had made 9 trips that is more then anyone else. But I had some good times on the ship as a \"Seagoing Cowboy\". After we would drop all of the animals off where they were needed we would play game in their stals like, Base Ball, Volleyball,Table-Tennis,Boxing,fencing,and Whittling.\n\nBut in the end all of that hard work and time was worth it. I was able to go to so many places!\n\nI went to\n\nGreece to see the Acropolis. I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. I took a ride in a gondola in Venice, Itally, with streets of water. I also toured in a excavated castle in Crete and marveld at the Panama Canal on my way to China. If you young peaple participate in being a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" I am sure that you will have the same experince as me, or mabey you will go on to bigger and better places then I ever could of dreamed of. You never know what wil happen when you are a \"Seagoing Cowboy\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When designing mooring mast top Empire State Building dock dirigibles builders came across obstacles A dirigible blimp filled hydrogen andor helium keep lightly air What builders realize ahead time hydrogen highly flammable gas If docked top building around movement could easily catch fire creating whole building blow Another obstacle builders noticed would occurred forceful winds With dirigible dock high air creates unstable way people get The vicious winds would make back dirigible swivel around mooring mast front would weighed The last obstacle found docking dirigible would low urban area The dirigible would close walking pedestrians creating unsafe enviroment something go wrong Without taking chance agreed many obstacles therefore idea docking dirigible top Empire State Building cancelled", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars can help the world for the better in many ways. Some may argue otherwise. These cars can help us by reducing care accidents. Also these care consume less fuel. Finally it's just simply an easier way to travel.\n\nFor starters, car accidents will be reduced tramendously. Google has been testing their cars since 2009 and have not had a crash yet, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Having less accidents on the road will decrease the mortality rate for driving and simply make driving a simpler and safer activity to do.\n\nAlso, fuel consumption on these cars are way lower. That can help the environment in an extremely positive way, and help slow down global warming by not producing as many green has gasses such as carbon dioxide. \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" These cars can really make a difference in our world tomorrow.\n\nFinally, it's an extremely easy and convienent way to travel. By having us not drive, we can do other things that we wouldn't be able to do while we are occupied by driving. It's an easy simple way to go about driving and can make long car rides not as bad, because you have other things that can keep you entertained while the car does all the driving.\n\nI know driverless cars will soon no longer be apart of the future, but as apart of the present. These cars will help our society and help environment greatly. I believe driveless cars are the answer to lots of our problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the governments and public developers have been working hard to determine the mix charity allocation among all citizens around the world. Although some individuals believe that the citizens in the country are the ones who need the most help from their governments, however others, including me, believe that the governments still cannot ignore people from the rest of the world.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are two main reasons why all types of assistances of the government must go towards own residents. Firstly, since the financial matter is essential for charities, financial management could be more effective by giving aid to domestic citizens who are having difficulties in their lives. In fact, not all charitable organizations have massive scale and abundant source of finance, therefore they cannot take care of both the poor people in their country and others being out of their national border at the same time. Secondly, it may be a pragmatic strategy for charity funds when they focus on providing aid to their residents because it allows their country to be less reliant on foreign subsidies in case of emergency. For example, there would be a beneficial effect on some countries which often suffer from natural disasters, such as Vietnamese, Philippine, Japan, etc. If their charities afford to rescue local people instead of expecting outside support.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it has been true in many cases that the prolonged poverty cannot be solved without the assistance from foreign humanitarian organizations. First, the product of poverty is the hunger, causing millions of deaths all around the world every year. As a result, if outside governments have steps for finance towards residents, who have been living in other countries, which would save the lives of humans. Second, governmental organizations can help provide the education and skill for those citizens. As a result, plenty of evidence suggests that the most effective way to overcome poverty is education.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some think that domination systems must only support the poor dwellers, but I think other nations should receive assistance because of above-mentioned reasons, and this method can reduce the financial pressure of international organisations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Gap year has became an increasingly popular option among graduated students, some of who have decided to spend some time working or traveling before enrolling in university. From an academic point of view,I argue that both pros and cons exist relating to this phenomenon.\n\nFirstly, traveling before university can increase students' study efficiency. In order to be qualified for their dream university, it is quite often that high school students suffer from the tremendous pressure in an intensively competitive atmosphere. Thus making full use of this long vacation by traveling is beneficial to get rid of the stressful emotions accumulated during high school study. Consequently, students might be more energetic and less frustrated when they enter university after traveling around, which significantly contributes to the increase in study efficiency.\n\nFurthermore, academic performance can be improved by setting a clear study target and allocating more study time accordingly. Obviously not until students actually join the workforce can they be fully aware of what is needed in this society. In most cases, teenagers tend to spend more time in the classroom and are relatively isolated from the society, leading to the fact that it is difficult for adolescents to identify what kind of quality and skills are highly valued in the outside world. Since the working experience gained before students going to university can help them to realise their shortcomings as well as strengths, students can easily gain a better grade by focusing their attention on something really important.\n\nHowever, the absence of continuous study might result in additional obstacles in learning. Staying away from studying for an extended time before attending university courses makes students unfamiliar with the knowledge learnt from high school. For instance, some math equations and historical facts are easily confused. Since usually these are the cornerstone of subjects in university, some students might find it is more challenging to keep up with others who choose to enter university directly after leaving high school.\n\nTo sum up, every coin has two sides, in spite of choosing to travel or work before university can promote academic performance by increasing study efficiency and setting a clear study goal, we can not ignore the potential side effect of becoming less familiar with the basic knowledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who do you vote for.? or what whould you do if there was no president?. well i think we can find out. But not to worry most states have a \"winner-take-all\"system. It's for giving awards to electors to the winning presidental canidate., But every canididate has its on electors & if u are becomeing the president then u have every 4 years then you have to be relected.\n\nThe Electoral College consists of 538 electors.,And a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president.\n\nBut even so your state's entitled allotment of electors is equal to the numbers of its congressional delegation, for each member in the house of Representatives plus 2 for senators.\n\nEach candidate running for president is your states has his or her own group of electors, But\"Under the 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral college.\n\nYou can help choose your state's electors when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors.\n\nAfter the presidental election, your governor prepares a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\". It lists all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.\n\nThe Certificate of Ascertainment also delcares the winning presidential candidate in your state and shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of electors in december of the election year.\n\nUnder the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote, for (John) Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Demorcratic electors pledged to Kerry. On the off-chance that those electors won the state wide election.\n\nBut 34 electoral votes go to Congress and kerry whould get 34 electoral votes. But who are the electors., You might ask we will never know because it can be anyone not holding public office.\n\nBut back on the electoral college. The single best argument against the electoral college is what is call the disaster factor.\n\nThe american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century;. The system allows for much worse.\n\nLets consider something, Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that thoes electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960, segregationists in the louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors\n\nElectors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's canidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please\n\nOh, and its happend before a state send two slates of elsecotrs to Congress., It happend in hawaii in 1960. Luckily, Vice President Richard Nixon, who was presiding over the Senate, validated only his opponent's electors.\n\nThe Electoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism, A non democratic method of selecting a presdent that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\n\nThe advicates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you seen the \"Face on Mars\"? If so, do you believe it is natural or created by alien activity? Many people believe the face is evidence of alien life however this is probably not the case. The Mars Global Surveyor ,a mapping spacecraft, has passed over the area few times. However the few times it has passed over there has been no evidence of any form of alien civilization. This led us to believe it is just a natural landform.\n\nThis all began when NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was orbiting Mars. Viking 1 was snapping photos of possible landing sites for his sibling Viking 2. In the midst of doing so Viking 1 spotted what looked like a human face. This was extraordinary because it was on planet Mars! When the images were leaked it led the public to believe that this is evidence of life outside of Earth's atmosphere.\n\nThis might not be the case however. NASA believes that the face is just a natural landform similiar to a butte or mesa on that of Earth. There was a lot more evidence pointing towards the side of NASA but that didn't put peoples hopes down. Some of the public hoped and believed this was in some shape or form, evidence of extraterrestriel life.\n\nThe pictures of the \"Face on Mars\" that NASA had were actually kind of foggy. They were foggy because the Mars Global Surveyor had to get the photos through clouds. This then led people to believe that NASA was hiding something in the fog. They thought they were hiding the evidence of life. NASA, however wanted to show them this was not the case.\n\nNASA then ,a few years later, passed over the face on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, and rolled the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. NASA eventually captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. This photo cleared up a lot of confusion.\n\nAs NASA studied the photograph, they came to realize that the Face was in fact caused by natural means. They then leaked the image to the public and cleared up confusion there too. However, there will always be that group of nay sayers. This group still wanted to believe that the \"Face on Mars\" was evidence of alien life. They still might believe that to this day.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" has caused a lot of confusion and mystery in the world. Many believed it was natural from the beginning and others not so much. Some have even grown to believe it was natural other than caused by aliens. Of course there are people still on both sides and as of right now we will never completely know the truth. We will know the truth when we go to Mars. Until then everyone will hold their peace and glorify at the mysterious \"Face on Mars\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building The obstacles face dirigible sucess mooring mast The dirigible enormous steel framed balloons envelopes cotton fabric filled hydrogen helium make lighter air unlike balloon dirigible could maneuvered use propellers rudders like gandala Another obstacle sucessful use mooring mast The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air current It could also weight dangle pedestrians nt safe All obstacles face", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been an ever-increasing trend that people discard an excessive amount of food waste from all corners of the world. Although, this problem can be attributed to a great number of reasons, some feasible solutions can be considered to address this.\n\nThere are a number of reasons for this adverse tendency. The first reason for the rise in the amount of food waste is the increased supply of cheap and readily available food, which encourages people to buy more than they really need. For example, in order to increase sale revenue as well as compete with other brands, many fast food restaurants nowadays have lauched plenty of promotion programs such as “By 2 get 1 free”, which has attracted hundreds of customers and thus the huge amount of food waste will end up in landfills. Another reason is that in order to deal with busy lifestyles, people tend to buy food for the whole week rather than go to the supermarket on a daily basis. However, some kinds of fruits and vegetables easily become rotten within a few days and then thrown away.\n\nA wide range of strong measures must be implemented, not only by the government but also by individuals, to combat food waste. This first solution is that the government can develop some action plans to raise consumers’ awareness of food appreciation. This could be done by getting people involved in global food campaigns such as Think.Eat.Save and anti-food waste campaign, helping their citizens to become more conscious consumers and when everyone is fully aware of this, they would think more carefully when it comes to shopping for food. In terms of each consumer, it is important to make a detailed shopping list before going to the supermarket. This way helps them to have time to prepare and decide wisely what products should be bought, which eventually saves a lot of unnecessary food.\n\nIn conclusion, Although food waste seems inevitable in today’s world, there are various way to improve this problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree that the facial action coding system to identify humans emotions. These are some of the reasons that i agree with the facial action coding system \"a classroom computer could recognize whan a student is becoming confused or bored\" this could allow the teacher to help them with out the student feeling like he/she are the only one not to understand and this could allow them to get help from the teacher. Another reason is\n\n\"if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow\". the computer well give you things that you enjoy on your screen so you can be interseted to buy something. This is a reason i think that the facial action coding system is a bad ida for the computers \"then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\" you really want a computer knowing everything about you for an example how you are feeling today. what kind of thing you like to watch or the things you are interesed in but also this computer understands you like no one does. and this is why i think the facial action coding system is a good idea", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article \" unmasking the face on mars\" they are showing us a picture that was taken by a 1976 viking 1 photograph of the face on mars which is just a natural landform. In paragraph 2 scientists firgured it was just another martian mesa, which they state is common around cydonia. Another detail from paragraph 2 they state only because it had unusual shadows that made it look like an egyptian pharaoh.\n\nIn the Paragraph 3 it states \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes,nose, and mouth.\" Which means that it's just a illusion it wasn't acutually seen or proven to be a human head.\n\nAnother fact which is from paragraph 7 it states Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and snapped about ten photos and it revealed a natural landform. In paragraph 9 garvin who is in the Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft he states \"It's not easy to targey cydonia.\" which means that they just can fly over cydonia and spot it right away.\n\nFinally in paragraph 12 garvin states what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. In this article \"Unmasking The Face On Mars\" it's just a unproven theory that its a face on mars, there is many details in this article that state that it's just a natural landforms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, technology is becoming very advanced. It seems to become more advanced every day, and now we are at the point where computers can detect emtoions through facial expressions. FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a system that can recognize human emotion based on how much all 44 major muscles in your face move. This technology has many uses. When you smile at a certain Web ad, a similar ad might follow, and when you frown at a certain ad, the next ad might be different. Also, this technology can make video faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. One very important use of this technology is in our school system. Using this technology in our school systems would be very beneficial because it could help students better understand lessons.\n\nEducation is becoming more technology based. Many lessons are being placed on the internet for students to read, students are typing essays and completing online assignments and then sending them to their teacher by email, and students even take the ISTEP on the computer instead of by hand. This facial coding technology can help students in an age where it is easy to get lost in the vast amount of resources that are on the Web. Paragraph 6 of the article states that if a student becomes bored or confused during a lesson, then the computer will notice that the lesson is not beneficial to the student, and it will change the lesson like an effective human instructor. This would be very helpful because it would make sure that the student is enjoying and most importantly understanding the lesson. The student would see an increase in test scores and grades, and would be more likely to remember the concepts of the lesson because the lesson was enjoyable. Students will get a lot more out of their education if this technology is implemented into the classroom.\n\nOverall, this new facial coding technology has many benefits. One of the most important benefits is in our education system. If computers could recognize a student's facial expression, it could help the student fully understand the lesson which would lead to an increase in test scores. With the world of technology constantly advancing, students need something that can help them with their education. Instead of browsing through web pages and desperately searching for anything that could help them understand a lesson, computers could alter the lessons and make it easier to understand. This new technology is very beneficial to students, and is vital if education continues to be more technology-based.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building known great size distinctive shape New York City s people probably know tower top actually mooring mast dirigibles This probably little known fact could never actually used dock blimps numerous reasons safety nature lawThe mast would revolutionized travel New York international dirigibles could stop long Transatlantic flights however gas used foreign blimps safety would huge issue In paragraph author states dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable There even accident German Hindenburg blimp caught fire densely populated would even greater problem safety Nature also matter safety needed considered At great height strong unpredictable winds even dirigibles tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast paragraph There means anchoring back blimp heavy weights would used open field landings would pose serious threat hanging back blimp feet pedestrians There simply practical way combat nature prevented possibility blimp stockingFinally would illegal dirigible dock mooring mass Empire State building It law airships flying low urban areas The law ended final obstacle could overcome Empire State Building never became docking post blimps still incredible architectural feat", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "IN Katherine Paterson I read article newspaper yesterday offensive books library I agree article Some books music movies magazines public libraries offensive normal peopleThere also somw books normal offensive people Everyone views ideas everythingThe people freedom speech true every mouth got something differrent say There books movies children read watch children still child library read watch listen anything You depend librarian people library tooThe librarian probably things like arranging books checking books making library card helping someone find book In point view library diferent sections different kinds movies books magazines person assigned every section This way children would able go older people s section If books found offensive everyone people write letter president help remove books libraryYours", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor Computers becoming prevalent Peolple spending much time computers instead activities effect beneficial society Because computers people lacked exercise missed enjoying nature parts world forgotten interacting family friends Computers used moderation place important events lives First computer users receive significantly less exercise use computers According survey done computer users reported exercised least every week In contrast noncomputer users nonfrequent computer users reported exrcised least every week Can one imagine would like everyone loyal computer user Nearly everybody would overweight lethaigic lack sleep due hours computer unworldly Getting exercise essential part everyone s life lacking could deleterious one s health Hopping computer instead getting exercise would make healthier fit country Not computers deprive people getting exercise also prevent people enjoying nature parts world By traveling unfamiliar places world one able experience learn cultures Going internet decent way learn places actually feeling ambiance environment foreign place allows much profound understanding another place For example I went vacation I learned differences traditions culture I saw separation poor rich I lookes humble sharks along river portentous eregant edifices scraping sky It experince I could encounter computer People able enjoy wonders differences world small screen computer screen one s eyes Lastly computers inhibit people interacting family friends From personal experiences I tend ignore friends family Speaking playing generally socializing others critical part everyone s life Without basic necessity people happy In summary computers used excess This sort use could read people getting less exercise fully experiencing world closs interaction friends family To make better country nation people make effort reduce computer use", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus which is sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brighest points of light in the night making it simple for evenan amature stargazer to spot. Although,the nickname happens to be misleading because Venus has proved a very changelling place to examine more closely.\n\nOften times , it has been referred to as the \"Earth Twin\" because it is the closet planet to the earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closet distance to the Earth.\n\nA thich atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Therefore,making it very changelling to explore the venus. Several attempts has been made to explre the Venus all been abortive because the temperature in the Venus is hot.\n\nI support the author's idea of studyiung the venus is worthyit despite the dangers because the hotness of the Venus has to be proven since it isn't the closet planet to the sun .\n\nAlso,why is it that human are not been able to explore on ever get a closer look at the and why all the space crafts and all other materials sent into the the planet Venus can not surviveafter few hours of landing in the planet.\n\nPeering at the Venus from a ship hovering safely from above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of lights cannot pentrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Also researchers cannot take the samples of rock,gas or anything else from a distance which has been difficult for researchers to give a prove of how Venus looks like.\n\nI would conculde that people should face the challenge of exploring the venus not minding the dangers because so many things still has to be known about the planet called Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know there is new technology in this world all the time and one that is specifically from this article is recignition of emotions through a Facial Action Coding System? What the Facial Action Coding System does is read emotions\n\nthat begin when a computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. This techonology focuses on the 44 major muscles in a humans face. Classified by Dr. Paul Eckman creator of FACS ( Facial Action Coding System) there are 6 basic emotions wich include happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. They are able to determine these emotions by different facial muscles and expressions. But the real question behind all of this is that is all of this technology really worth it?\n\nIn my personal opinion this type of techonolgy it is really not worth it or valuable. This really doesnt show much and wont be used often. This type of technology will not be popular because there is really no use for it. There is alot of other things this doctors of science can be coming up with to actually benefit the world or even event something cool or useful. Instead of making 3-D technology for emotions make maybe a 3-D tool for doctors can see 3-D x-rays so they can have a better understanding of x-rays and they can show there patients of what is exactly going on.\n\nIn conclusion this technology is pretty cool but there is many other things you can think of and that people would benefit. The world today is becoming a technology planet like 10 years ago can anyone say they can shut there garage door through there phone or even shut off lights in the house.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho concludes story good ending In story girl buys Hibiscus remainds home She goes home tells mother failed test bought plant While planting seen geese reminded home America like home happier In text says many things thought strange become almost familiar She willing give test another try sure pass America starting feel little like home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood happy great full mood speaker seams happy live growing Narciso seems greatful parent every body around whole life growing Also neighbor hood How every body happy firends lot imagrants neighborhood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In contemporary society, every parent has plenty of school options available for providing a bedrock for learning. Some parents incline towards unisex learning institutes. However, a fraction of people believes that gender-specific colleges can have demerits for youngsters later in life. I agree with this statement to some extent due to a variety of concerns. This essay will expound on both sides of the argument and will provide a conclusion after discussing the demerits and merits of both types of schooling.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, few parents give priority to single-sex schools due to a number of concerns with the co-education system. One major concern related to mixed education is the safety of female students. For instance, According to a few research surveys, it is proved that the safety of female students is a major concern for their parents due to cases of sexual harassment from male figures. Another big reason for selecting a gender-specific school is a more comfortable atmosphere in the gender-specific institute. As mostly females feel more comfortable and secure in a girls' campus where they can openly discuss their personal issues such as menstruation cycle and other illnesses, which can not be discussed openly in a co-learning system.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, few people insist on giving priority to the co-education system due to various factors. Firstly, one of the big factors is a lack of confidence in most of the students who belong to gender-specific institutions. These students don't have enough confidence to express their views with other genders. Most of them can not hold a conversation and can not get attention in front of a large audience. Moreover, students who learn in a co-education system have more confidence and interpersonal skills which make them more successful in later stages of life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I vehemently oppose the idea of single-sex educational institutions. In my opinion, the co-education system provides more learning opportunities for youngsters. Consequently, the co-education system should be supported by parental figures to provide a better future for the young generation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, driverless cars would be a great addition to the road. Driverless cars allow drivers to be more safe and alert on the road, they don't require as much fuel, and would overall help prevent accidents!\n\nI think every driver wants to be safe and alert on the road. Now, with the driverless car, you are able to be even more safe and alert! The driverless car would be equipped with laser beams that will constantly update a 3-D model of the car's surroundings. The car would basically be another set of eyes on the road to help keep you or other people in the car safe!\n\nEveryday people are driving, whether it's 5 minutes away or 2 hours away. They need their car to be fueled up so it can take them where they need to go. Depending on where you are going and how much time it will take, you might need to fuel up a couple times. With the driverless car, it takes half the fuel it normally would take in a regular car! This allows you to spend less money and less time fueling up!\n\nAllowing the use of driverless cars would help decrease the amount of accidents on the road. As drivers, we sometimes get distracted, but with the driverless car it could help you keep your eyes on the road. It would have sensors on the steering wheel to keep you alert and focused on the road. The driverless car's main job is to watch the road and keep you safe!\n\nOverall, I think the driverless car would be wanted and even needed on the road. It helps you stay alert and safe, it would require half the fuel a normal car would need, and it would keep you focused on the road at all times!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A current topic of debate is whether robots with artificial intelligence should perform all jobs in the future. Technology has evolved, with industry being one of the biggest beneficiaries, automating many of its processes with artificially intelligent robots. However, we must consider both the benefits and potential drawbacks of this new scenario.\r\n\r\nOn the benefits side, integrating artificial intelligence into the industry using robotics as a workforce would increase productivity and improve efficiency. For example, if robotics was implemented in production lines with repetitive tasks, it would allow the human worker to enhance other more competitive and complex work areas. New employment opportunities would be created in new industries according to the needs of society, and routine and repetitive jobs would be delegated to artificial intelligence.\r\n\r\nHowever, this technological idealism has its drawbacks. Attributing certain jobs to robotics would generate unemployment and economic inequality. Even if other new jobs were created, many workers would not have the capacity to adapt to new job skills. Ignorance of a future job generates resistance, so it is essential to find a balance between the implementation of technological innovations in industry and their consequences in today's society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the idealism of a future replacement of human workers by artificially intelligent robots is a delicate and complex issue. While the potential benefits to industry in improving efficiency and productivity and creating a new concept of employment are undeniable, society is not ready for it until new job opportunities are created by upgrading the skills of the replaced workers. The key to success is to strike a balance between technological advances and social responsibility.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author created positive optimistic mood memoir He talked fascinating Cuban culture portrayed throughout home The author said passion Cuban music I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen This quote shows love pride culture In memoir author also tells extreme thankfulness towards parents He admired courage Narciso felt parents could give family good life successful Narciso said I always grateful parents love sacrifice This shows genuine appreciation He believed family everyone love close blood relatives Narciso considered community one giant family This memoir upbeat tone due positivity optimism author", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "not every thing as it seems you all may think that image that you assume that it a face on mars\n\nbut im here to to set the record straight it's a shadow this martian mesa made the eock look like an egyptian pharaoh clearly stated in pg2.\n\n''rummors everybody loves them they get passed around like an disease. who here belives the rummor that an image on mars is A face there just trying to get ratings up by putting false information in the news. if i was in their positon I would do the same and you would do the same. clearly its a scam we are professionals we have facts to prove this once and for all. does anybody have any thing to say '' I do could you tell me why i should belive you that this is just A shadow '' i will provide all of the facts needed to show you that it's just a rock .\n\nNASA unveiled the image to the world so the rest of you can see it if we really thought it was A face it would've then turned classifyed and would't have been released to all of you. we also added the decripton of the rock so it was seen as something that is interesting . but surely the media had to put their two cents in and blow hole thing out of porpourtion\n\nnow its in movies and magazines\n\nbut that there next big story they change the story every time you see something in the tabloids think does it sound to good to be true then it is. Have I gave you enough info that i could ever change your mind yet sir .''no i'm A conspiracy type of guy and I see the angle that you have provieded and still think there is more to the story that is being showed'' .''Give me one more shot at this you will have no chance but to belive in cold hard facts'' . ''Ok last chance make it count '' .'' I will '' .\n\nHave any of you belived in something that isnt proven real well I have i belived in ghosts we alll belive in something that isnt quite what it seems think about it would you like to be payed to make up fake storys or tv show and get paid . The hole sytem is rigged some people dissagree but they just want A show they love entertainment . have you ever broke A mirror and had bad luck for seven years its rigged life is rigged it all relates back to face on mars rigged it's just a shadow and it will always be a shadow .Have I changed your mind yet if this hole talk doesn't change your mind then oh well i can't get anymore detail . '' alot of people have tried to change my mind on alot of things but this is the farthest anyone has gone on that note I belive you '' .\n\nI'm done I have did my jod I have set the record straight and you all know the facts and you have the full truth and not the hyped up story that you all blived it's junk and\n\nthat should be used in the future if something is in the new think twice and go with your own mind but dont turn down others oppion so in that case I say that the image is just a shadow and if you don't belive it the your on your own .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast historical article Marcia Amidon Lsted made clear least three obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempt allow dirigibles dock These issues building s preexisting frame fire safety nature The plans Empire State Building intended mooring mast dropped roof building As result architects change entire plan The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation par This significant difficulty Also concern foreign dirigibles gas use made fire safety issue owners realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area par Getting around fire hazard would impossible Finally stated article nature mast s greatest obstacle Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast par The violent winds kept much happening mast With three aforementioned obstacles fate Empire State Building s mooring mast grim It would never Al Smith intended", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir simply love family people Especially parents came cuba And At first struggled knew hope happiness near future Love culture came cuba music food And place called home Not space everything everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The strength and prospect for the global media to shape the views of today’s youth and to educate them are significant. However, while some opine that the global media and international news, as part of education, have no important impact on secondary education, others believe that international news should be studied by those pupils to reap its benefits. This essay attempts to examine the issue by diving deep into it. I believe that international news as part of the secondary education syllabus is important.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, global media enriches young people's understanding of contemporary affairs and enhances their views and perspectives. It is due to the fact that international affairs, as part of education, not only make them more conscious and knowledgeable but also connect global youths on the same platforms. For example, a study run by Oxford sociologists showed that the media heavily influences teenagers’ knowledge of contemporary affairs which has a highly positive impact on making them aware of the world. This awareness makes them global citizens and encourages them to share ideas.\r\n\r\nOn the contrary, many critics argue that teenagers would be negatively affected by the global media’s focus on negative issues of international events like wars and civil unrest if they are included in their education. This is because exposure to violence often leads to depression and the youths may grow an apathy towards our history and global politics. For example, recent surveys have discovered that despondent teenagers usually cite the dismal state of the world as a source of their depression. Since mental health is an important objective of secondary education, it is, therefore, questionable whether the study of international news would benefit young students.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is clear that there are reasons for and against the study of news in secondary schools. However, educators and authorities can make it more useful by adopting proper policy and teaching methods, and reap the benefits of teaching young students international news as part of their academic education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If take books shelves would lik taking away chilldhood wuld nt nicest thing Even take would show children ask yoour favorite book kid We tell library nt books anymore make room books So would please stand got read parents favorite child hood books I mean wuld fel couldnt share kids I would upset parents told went got library I loved So please leave books alone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders fact could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation The Steel Frame Empire state Building would modified Strengthened accommodate new situation The greatest reason safety dirigibles outside united states used Hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen highly flammable The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The back ship would swivel around around mooring mast existing law airships flying low", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear know computer around since Ever since many people better life Computers really help elderly lot When need pay bill could log pay move Another thing need write letter handwriting nt elegable anymore could type print done This way person receiving letter able read letter Computers fad never die Doctor said The children I work use computers everyday build hand eye skills ever since increased skill The corperate said people agree everyone computer Computer help projects I think everyone one Are ever sitting home nothing Well nt go buy computer play Computers help types things If like play video games ll love one machines They types game systems computers They also web sites could go play I m sure like play games try A basic computer nt much worried money So go buy one There lot people college mostly computers They make research easier faster find Which would rather get ready jump car drive library search book stand line check get computer search looking done You make decision When college students get stressed happens time could turn music computer calm Computers changed world good way continue You buy computer today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again paragraph author uses conclude story In opinion author includes paragraph conclude story order show Saeng committed adjusting new home leaving old one For example story Saeng unable say I mean like kind home without bursting tears This illustrates sorrow inability let go past", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars aren't really anything we are relying on for the future.Driverless cars are awed by many due to how they are portrayed.When actually, they have no reason to be focused on and worked on so much.They will ingrave more of a negative effect than a positive in society.Driverless cars are unessesary for the world we live in,considering there aren't\n\nmany problems about cars not being as reliant.\n\nDriverless cars are depicted as a more flexible way of transportation and a gate for new generations of automobiles to arrive.You don't hear much about cars not being as reliant as they should be.Cars have the functions we use every single day and require average to little work to transmit.Roadblocks however are a big obstacle to both driverless cars and normal cars, since driverless cars fall victim to traffic jams or accidents.The idea for a driverless car is to be able to keep your eye on the road while the car keeps you safe,however this idea cannot be relied on heavily because any sort of accident or event that accurs on road will immediately put the individual in the car into the position of the driver transferring all of those responsibilities the car had at one point back to the driver rendering the cars idea of being driverless to useless.\n\nThere's also the fact that the fault of an accident would be a bit difficult to locate.Was it the cars fault for not being effective in its abilities?Or would it be the drivers fault for not being alert to any sort of situation?More laws will be nessesary to make sure we have restrictions for those using a driverless car.The ratio of positive effects these types of cars may have to the negative is very small.This generation has little to no problems with driving cars being too tedious or too troublesome.We don't need more amounts of problems entering this world but should focus on what is now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present age, people tend to have children in older age. From my perspective, it has more drawbacks than benefits. This essay will discuss the main reasons associated with this epidemic and reveals why it has more disadvantages.\r\n\r\nThe main reasons of this global problem are people's career and their freedom. Nowadays individuals' career and their position in the society have a great importance. Everyone try to enhance their performances and get promoted; therefore, having baby is a huge obstacle and prevent parents to reach their goals. What's more, people without children have a freedom. In other words, they do whatever they want and enjoy their lives. For example, a single person can travel or go to parties anytime without worrying about her baby.\r\n\r\nHowever, having children in older age has major drawbacks. First of all, old parent’s children may suffer some disorders like Down syndrome. This problem is more common among old mothers' children, which cause irreparable problems on society. Secondly, older parents are not energetic and they can't play with their babies properly. They get bored easily and in the future because of huge age difference, they couldn't understand children and this causes disparity between them. For instance, teens with young parents have a good relationship with them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, having baby in old age has various reasons like importance of job prospective and liberty. On the other hand it has serious demerits like disability and parents impatient. I personally believe that benefits of this epidemic cannot overshadow the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi my name is luke Bomberger and after you read this passage you are going to want to be a seagoing cowboy. There are many reasons why you should be a seagoing cowboy. Seagoing cowboys are the best and you will find out why in the next couple paragraphs.\n\nNow let me talk to you about things we do as a seagoing cowboy. As a seagowing cowboy you get to travel around the world to help other places and countries from disasters. You dont just help places you help people and even animals which is the best part in my opionon.\n\nThere are other things to do as a seagoing cowboy then just helping places, people, and animals. You can make friends really easily, because everyone that work in the program are friendly and super nice. You can even play games on the trip to the places you are going to. Some of the games are whittiling, baseball, volleyball, fencing, boxing, and even table tennis tournaments does'nt that sound fun.\n\nOnce you join the program it really is a lot of fun. like I told you in the paragraphs above all the stuff we do as a seagoing cowboy is amazingly super. So now you know the reason why it is fun to be a seagoing cowboy and why peope love being in this program. Also being a seagoing cowboy is more than just an adventure it opens up the world to you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the electoral college should be changed to a popular vote election. The current way of voting is electing the wrong canidate. The populrity way of voting is what the people want. It is less hoopes to jump through. Instead of having people that vote for the state why not just have the people vote then tally up which canidate has the most votes.\n\nIn the current way that we vote we decide how many votes a state gets toward the election. It is decided uponthe general population of the sate. This is just adding anoter sterp to the process that be could be much faster. Therehave been many elections were the popularity would hjave wone the election although the elctoral vote was greater therefore the wrong president won the election.\n\nInconclusion there are many more people like me that believe that there should be apopularity vote electin not based ofof the staes reps or whatever they call themselves. it is not the correct way and it needs changed now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that technology shouldn't be used to find out students emotional expression. I think the best way to find out a way that a student is feeling is just ask them don't use all the extra stuff to try and find out something that you can just ask and they will tell you. See if you use tachnology to try and find out what a students emotional expression is it will take you way longer to figure out the resultes. As if you just asked them face to face because, if you ask them face to face they can tell you almost immeditaly how they are feeling, but if you use this big computer and all this extra stuff then that will scare them. And also it will take a lot longer to get the results because you would have to prosess the data you get then match it with other people expression and a lot of other stuff so it will just be a lot easier just to ask them face to face. I think that usung computers to find out what poeple emotions are is just flat out stupid. If you have to you a machine to find out someones mood then you have some problems. Like straight up you dont need computers and scanners and all that extra stuff, all you need to do is just ask them and if you cant do that then you should not be talking to them. :^)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to go on a little adventure and save some animals? Well then you should join Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nYou get to save some animals and while your doing that, you can see some things you haven't seen before and be on a adventure.\n\nAfter the return trips we play baseball and volleyball in the empty holds where the animals have been housed. We also have table-\n\ntennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,reading, and whittling. Here it from me, Luke Bomberger. I had no idea that my life would change when I joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. You know, being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up a world for me. I'm grateful for the opportunity that I got. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nThat's why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. I'm sure it will change your life just like it did to mine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars is a natrual landform.It is a natrual landform because in 1976 Viking 1 took a photo of marses surface.It showed what it apeard to be a face.In April 5 1998 we sent globol surveyor to orbit over the spot.The picture it took was 10 timessharper than vikings photos.When the picture came up on our website it showed that it was only just a natural landform.\n\nIt was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude.It was april 98 on mars.It was a cloudy time on the planet.We had to see through the clouds to see the face.Mr garvin says its not easy to target the face.It was actually hard work.The surveyor is a mapping spacecraft.It normally looks straight down to the ground.It scands the planet for information about things.It scans it like a fax machine,In narrow 2.5 km-wide strips.\n\nIn April 8 2001, a cloudless day on mars,Global surveyor went close enough to take another picture for us.We used it maximum resolution.Each pixiel in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters,compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best Viking photo.The face on mars actually shows is the matian equivalent of a butte or mesa, landforms common around the American west.Mr garvin says it reminds him of the Middle Butte in the Snake River in the Plain of Idaho.Its a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, there has been a contentious polemic about whether people should stave atmospheric conditions off or live with them. From my perspective, climate transition is a natural activity of Terra that should be embraced rather than controlled. In the following paragraphs, I will postulate some judgments bolstering my view.\n\nTo begin with, the originality of climate variation itself is based on the natural way of Mother Nature to preserve its richness. There must be devout reasons for every seasonal shift in terms of how the environment and natural resources will adapt. For instance, several crops rely on rainy seasons to produce fruits. On the contrary, a plethora of vegetation's growth phases rely on the autumn season. These are merely the illustrations of plantations, yet, imagine a myriad of creatures relying on the weather rhythms such as animals, birds, beaches, or even fungi and bacteria.\n\nConsequently, societies have unconsciously adapted to it since countless centuries ago as humans depend on natural resources to make a living. Take the example of rainy seasons that help farmers cultivate their crops and, subsequently, be able to feed their households. On the other hand, it is undeniable that the rainy season can become a setback to running an event for some organizers or even flood disasters if it drops excessively. Perhaps, previous examples of detrimental ramifications are the underlying considerations on why some communities aspire to control the weather. Nevertheless, technological advancement has enabled experts to forecast the weather and disseminate the projection overtly through our mobile phones.\n\nIn conclusion, the origin of each season is a paramount blessing from Mother Nature for its creations and society as every climate is meticulously designed for specific causes. Therefore, I strongly oppose the proponents who want to deter this natural rhythm. At the end of the day, we humans should find avenues to make the most out of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this period of development of globalization, many communities believe that the young generation must get an education. Whereas others believe, the government should teach the elderly community to read and write. In my opinion, I partially agree with this notion and my points of view will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion. \n\nFirstly, I believe it is very necessary for a youngster to do their higher study. As the government highlights the new generation. Moreover, the future is in hands of the next youngsters. To cite an example, a recent survey in Canada shows that families under the age of 27 tend to learn faster as compared to elderly people. As a result, those under 27 have sharp memories and tend to seek knowledge faster and will try to be more innovative and energetic.\n\nOn the other hand, mature people should not be forgotten. As they might not have the same facilities at an early age. For instance, 35% of seniors can’t write Hindi which, is the first language of India. Therefore, it is important to be educated in order to become a role model for the youth in your family itself. In addition to ,this the key factor is that once, you become senior you will have to deal with everyday problems and family issues. Which as a result, will affect you when you continue your study and can distract you easily.\n\nIn conclusion, it is necessary to spend more money on youngsters for a better life ahead. Whereas, older people should not be forgotten and must get the privileged of basic study. I believe that the aforementioned points are strongly supporting my viewpoints.\n\nYou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe thank memoir three reasons I think Narciso Rodriguez thanking parents making good childhood Like excerpt I never forget parents turned simple house home Another reason I think s thanking parents praising In excerpt I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done Narciso forever grateful parents Like excerpt I always grateful parents love sacrifice These three ways mood thank kind thing memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It nice warm sunny day We decided could go pick every one dads house go genesee county farm We got dads house pick step brother step sister real brother step mom dad We start heading genesee county farm We started walking around waiting see going rain If going rain would waist money We walk ticket booth see could come back tomorrow wrist bands starts raining They said decided stand wait little bit longer starts poring rain We go sit metal barn rain stopped Meanwhile barn starts flooding Then get phone calls saying tornados hit miles away Finaly stopped raining go back outside We waited rides start back Once finally started back rain started back So ran car We soaking wet We decided stop trying fair something else So instead went ate toco bell burger tong", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would contend that we should not waste our time and money on impractical software like the Facial Action Coding System. An aplication that is used purely for the purpose of reading emotions is usless, due to the fact that we humans can already read each others emotions quite effectively. It is also not valueble because the system reads facial cues and might make a false judgement on a person's actual emotions. Finally, it's unrealistic because it would cost insane amounts of money to upgrade everyone's computer to the quality required to run a system as complex as the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nFirst and foremost, humans can read other human's emotions without the help of a computer. Since the dawning of time, people have looked at another person's face and been able to tell what they are feeling; why, suddenly, do we need a computer to decipher emotions for us? In paragraph five in the text, the author says, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive 'calculation' every day. For instance, you can probobly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\", this quote clearly implies that humans can read each other's emotions very well. After all, why would it be called \"human emotion\" if humans couldn't understand it.\n\nSecondly, the computer could make a false judgement. Not all emotions are outward, some we keep on the inside and never show anyone. Some emotions, like anger, can be expressed through a smile or by crying.\n\nFinally, the Facial Action Coding System is usless because it's unrealistic. As seen is paragraph seven when the author says, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\", the system is very complex. It's clear that it would cost outrageous ammounts of money to upgrade everyone's software to the level required to run a sophisticated system like FACS.\n\nI would assert to you that FACS is a waste of time and money because it's faulty, it's unneeded, and it comes with an unrealistic price tag. A system that can only read emotions based on facial cues would just plainly not work. I see why Dr. Haung was trying to develop such a complex system, but in the end, his work failed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The second planet of our solar system is Venus and the reasoning why scientist are studying despite dangers Venus presents. Venus being the sisters with Mercury and Earth it has exceed it's extreme into knowing it's a diffcult site to explore.\n\nThe study of Venus is worthy becuase it has astronomer's fascinated about it's past life, people striving to meet their challenges,and NASA's studies on simplified electrons.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated with Venus over it's \"earth-like\" features. In paragraph 4 it states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This explain that Venus was an \"earth-like\" planet with the same features like Earth.\n\nNASA is striving to study Venus as so many people and meet their challenge. In paragraph 8 it states, \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This explains that many people such as NASA are trying to meet their goal into exploring about Venus.\n\nNASA is working on approaches of studies that'll get them in depth with Venus and it's natural features. In paragraph 7 it states, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" This is explaining that NASA is working on big projects so they can get better information about Venus.\n\nThe study of Venus is worthy becuase it has astronomer are fascinated about it's past, striving to meet the challenges,and studies with simplified electrons.\n\nThis is explaining why the study of Venus is worthy despite the dangers it provokes.This is and important type information because it's informing us that astronomers like NASA are trying to explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Diverless cars are something people have only been imagining and seeing in movies for a while. Now with all the technology and expeirence manufuntioners have, a diverless car may be something that can actually be done. Sergey Brin, a Google cofounder, envisions a future that could use diverless cars everyday and even believes it can change the world forever. Autonomous cars have been undergoing this picture since 2009. Yet these cars are not yet completely driverless; they are on the way of becoming just that.\n\nSo really imagine being able to be driven around constantly without ever having to do your part. These cares would be able to use half the fuel that modern taxi cabs use and offer a lot more than any street bus. With the help of sensors the car is able to do much more on it's own. BMW project manager, Dr.Werner Huber even quotes \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Which does make the car seem as if it would be a fun way to change. You'd be able to do so much more on your way to places and have much more time to get things finished.\n\nEven though the car does seem like a very good idea to have; there are still many downfalls about this. First thing off is that the car would be way to expensive to ever make, let alone sell. With the amount of sensors and cameras that would have to be set up, the price would be too much for any middle class person to afford. The cars would also still need astiance from a driver and are not really self driven all the way. A major factor in problems that has been arrisen is safety, which seems to be the biggest one yet. Who would be blamed in the sense of an accident? The car or the person inside? Laws would also have to be changed and alterd and it is even illegal to test these cars out in certain states of the US.\n\nAll in all it's clear that the cons out weigh all the pros. There are too many problems and too many risks. An outlook from a teenagers point of view is that the car seems like it would not last. People driving them selves is scary enough now a days, let alone some robot or sensor drive around. Safety is the biggest part of it and driverless cars seem very unsafe. The promt also fails to mention anything about speed limits or signs such as one ways or no turns on right warnings. Since it is never brought up in the promt has it been brought to mind at all yet? Diverless cars just seem way to unrealiable and unrealistic for the time being of now.\n\nSo maybe in the future the driverless cars will be something so safe and affordable for everyone to be driving around in one. As of now though this tranportation system does not seem realiable enough or needed to be made into something real. Manufunctioners will proceed to make the autonomous car better and safer until the time is right to let the cars be out. Right now it's not the best idea to have the cars but eventually in our future it would be a big part in our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think ever offensive taken shelf inoproperate Books need like supposed fun help learn yes little violence actionadventure book get mood character setting story understand perhaps Offensive books okay times comedy magazine book making fun something someone taken offensive way joke none offensive way To people going want take kinds books shelf Offensive books parents maybe even friends teach child wrong child learn right way Kids little brains like sponges learn remember stuff well age A child getting hold book tought something book like likley remember I think kinds books taken shelf kids dont need reading kind stuff allready television talked They need edicational books teach prepare uppcoming higher grade levels would fresh start new words grammer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the article talks about technology scanning a persons face and reading an emotion. I think it is a good idea and could approve movies,video games and even pictures on the internet. In this case I agree that this is valuable because if you are taking a computer class and doing a project that has to do with a 3d model. You could use the scanner to make your face exactly as it looks and make a 3d model with your face and expression. The system will also indicate muscles throughout your face.\n\nI think the Facial Action Coding System could help with school projects and other daily objectives. The Facial Action Coding System is a system that improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. The system can even scan the emotions of pictures. This could scan a picture and see what the person was feeling at the time. The system can sense happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear and sadness.\n\nOverall I think the Facial Action Coding System will improve the use of technology and will be a system that is used a lot. Teachers could teach the kids how to use the system and they could have fun scanning different faces and learn about the system and its features. One downside is that your home PC cannot handle complex algorithms used to decode a certain photo. The system might also\n\nnot be able to detect every facial expression because of hair or their traits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke the Seagoing Cowboy\n\nI would love to do that again.\n\nThat was fun, thanks so much Don Reist for asking me to go.\n\nI loved to be a Seagoing Cowboy, since I'm a small-town boy.\n\nI want other people to go on an adventure and see things they have never seen before.\n\nI say this because I went on a adventure I got to help animals.\n\nI had lots of fun on the boat.\n\nI did things like table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whitlling, and games.\n\nIt was the life of a Seagoing Cowboy I am living, that I have never lived before.\n\n\"I'm grateful for the oppertunity to see the things I saw.\n\nIt opened up a whole new world for me.\n\n\"Besides helping, people I had the side benefit of seeing Europe an China.\"\n\nI loved to do it I had lots of fun with the people on the ship.\n\nThe animals I met where so fascinating.\n\nThere were 335 horses plus!\n\nI would definantly go back another time.\n\nI hope you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy as soon as you hear how fun it is.\n\nI have to go now I have to sign up again for a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSee you later. I'll tell you what fun I had this time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When cyclist first starts journey sure He sees everything old men told As travels notices everything abandoned empty There one sight building car structure kind The man started becoming unsure You could tell says I wiped sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage tried get excited He doubtful hed get going In end relieved found fishing spot bathroom fresh water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus has been a challenge to navigate over the years. The author defends the need for exploration well, and in many ways. They explain that in certain conditions, humans could survive there, give a possible solution to the problem, and explain how Venus is closely related to Earth.\n\nFirst, the author appeals to human nature's need for exploration by explaining how Venus is capable of being inhabited. For example, \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This shows that the author wanted the reader to know that living on Venus is not far fetched.\n\nNext, the author explains how scientists are working on a solution to explore the harsh conditions that have kept them from properly gaining much knowledge on the planet. They do this by saying, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" By telling the reader this, the author gives hope that even though Venus's atmosphere is violent, it is not impossible to explore.\n\nLast, the author gives facts on how Earth and Venus are similar. They describe this by explaining how \"it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" They go on to say, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" With this knowledge, the author implies that there could be more similarities than just terrain.\n\nIn conclusion, the author fully backs up their claims as to why exploring Venus is worth the risk, and they do it well. They do this by explaining how humans could survive there, giving a possible solution, and comparing it to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is studying Venus worth the dangers that it presents? The temperatures over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The metals liquifying from being on the surface. The atmospheic pressures 90 times greaters that are Earths, that can crush a submraine. Exploring Venus will allow us to learn about things that we have never seen before and to many new things.\n\nVenus may have once been like Earth. This would have been long time ago. The author says, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varioius forms of life, just like Earth.\" The author also says, \"... has surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Exploring Venus to find out wether or not it was once like Earth and knowing if they was other life forms on another planet seems worth the risk.\n\nAnother reason to make the dangerous trip is that Venus can be our nearest option for a planetary vist, given the time frame of space travel. The author says, \" The value of returning to Venus seem indisputable...\" This detail from the article means that we have so much to gain from going to Venus and learning about the planet.\n\nNASA has one compelling idea for sending humans. The articles says,\" NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\" The article then says,\"... a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above roiling Venusain landscape.\" This is a great way of getting away from the dangers of unfriendly ground condition and storms. The scientist in the blimp-like vehicle would have to sit in around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would close to sea level on Earth. they would also have plenty of solar power and wouldn't be affected by radiation.\n\nExploring Venus will allow us to learn about things that we have never seen before and to many new things. The dangerous that we face getting the Venus are out weighed by the good things to come from exploring Venus. The real question is when are going to explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college has many inherint flaws that make it less desirable than a simple election by popular vote. It's only rebuttals to said flaws are weak, and provide little to no reason why the college is beneficial. So there is no real reason to have it in the first place. Popular vote stands to not only correct the errors of the electoral college, but also to refine our voting system. It would accomplish this by closer to a real democracy, and forcing the candidates to win over more people.\n\nA democracy has long been revered as one of the best forms of government. It is more liberating than a dictatorship or monarchy in which people are governed by a higher class, which is more often than not decided by someone other than themselves. In a democracy however, people are given the ability to put who they desire in office. They have the ability to be governed by the person of their choice. This, however, is impeded upon by the electoral college. Because what it does is simply insert a middle man into an otherwise democratic society. We are forced to rely on people we elect to vote for us. Which is irrational as it is completely unecessary. The extra step only sets us up for deception and betrayal. I mean why would you trust a man on the street to cast a vote for you when doing so yourself is much more reliable?\n\nThough why does it even matter if the candidate you want to vote for won't even come to your state? There's obviously no reason to vote democrat if your say will simply be overshadowed by the wave of republicans in your area. With popular vote though, candidates should be more inclined to visit as many states as possible and get their message out there. Because a 51% vote in a state no longer means a 100% victory. With the new influx of political campaigns, perhaps more people are swayed from their usual path of voting. While yes, there are neutral states that need a push either way, you're not going to increase your votes ten-fold by pushing past that 50% barrier. You actually have to earn every vote you get.\n\nThere is no real reason to keep the electoral college. It serves as a pointless middle man to an otherwise great government. Popular vote requires more out of the candidates, and puts more say into the individual vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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