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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The united states has this ellection system called the electoral collage. The electoral collage is a system of voting for verious comities. When the founding fathers of The united states made the constitution the electoral collage was a part of it.\n\nWhy would any one want to change the electoral collage because i would like to know. In my oppinion in is the best thing i know of for a working government. Over the years there has been a larg number of amendments to the constitution, but that was to adjust it to the chang in todays tecnology. Under the 23rd amendment of the constitution, the District of columbia is theated like a state for purposes of the Electoral collage.\n\nThe electoral collage consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electorsvotes is required to elect the President. Most states have a \"winner-take -all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate. So another words whoever gets the most votes wins but the odds are which ever side has the larger amount of people voting republican or democrat is normaly who wins. because if your a republican your most likly to vote democrat.\n\nEverything that is rong with the electoral collage. Under the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. If you lived in texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for Kerry, you'd vote for slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to kerry.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many people do not have a sufficient number of friends to interact and this circumstance brings out to feel lonely. Moreover, low communication could be related to not enough physical activities, for they have no opportunity to hang out with their friends outside. In this essay, I will explain the possible reasons and how can they solve these issues.\n\nTo begin with, technology has gradually caught on all over the world. Growing in the technological industry, especially the internet account for a lack of communication skill in the community. Hence, the users of the Internet make themselves lonely and they have become couch potatoes due to spending a lot of time looking at the screen of a TV or smartphone. The possible solution for that reason could be that people put a time limit on their phones and they can try to initiate a conversation with others in a cafe that is in their vicinity.\n\nSecondly, there was an outbreak called Coronavirus. During the COVID period, people have to stay at home and cut contact with other people down. Because, this disease is a pandemic and has a high mortality rate. After the diseases, the socialisation skills of people are lost and they got used to being at home. Putting out a solution for this cause could be easier, for example, the government does some sales of drinks (including coffee, tea, ice latte, and americano) in popular venues to encourage their citizens to build a new network. \n\nIn conclusion, there are more than 2 reasons to feel a sense of loneliness and have a low level of physical condition, however, the two main causes could be the improvement of technology and the effect of pandemic disease. I hope, people could remove the side effects of these situations from their lives with the government and some professionals as soon as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Community work are increasing becoming popular as parents are encouraging their kids to engage in them. Some are of the opinion that teens should partake in payless community activities in their free time as this can be of benefit to both teenagers as well as the community. This essay will discuss why I totally support the opinion.\r\n\r\nThe two main reasons are, improvement personal skills and great for their CV. First of all, teens who involved in community work significantly improve their personal development skills compared to those who didn’t. This is because by interacting with members of the neighbourhood, they get to experience life everyday as it comes therefore, patience, tolerance, self-confidence and importantly, compassion for others is built. Secondly, it's an important opportunity for those teenagers looking forward to getting a job in the future. A CV which contains such work experiences are what managers fish out for these days because it portrays a hardworking, compassionate, and resilient individual. \r\n\r\nTeenagers are the bedrock of any society therefore; their work will be of utmost importance to the development of the community. By having teens involved in community work, parents or elders ‘neighbours have some weights lifted off their shoulder. Chores sure as lawing, babysitting, and cleaning on weekends, for instance, could give more time for families to bond. Also, the rate of crimes will significantly reduce. All the time used in creating chaos will be channelled into creating a better life for themselves thereby, limiting crime rates in the society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, teens partaking in payless community activities in their free time can be of benefit to both teenagers as well as the community. I absolutely support this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Generally, it is observed that in most countries educating youngsters is considered more important than providing education to adults who are unable to read or write. Therefore, it is advisable for governments to pay for these groups of individuals who aspire to seek knowledge in later life and I concur with this notion. This essay will further explain my agreement in detail.\n\nLiteracy is a vital pillar for a developed nation. The government should, therefore, concentrate on educating people irrespective of their age. This can be achieved by building special schools or institutes that provide free of cost classes to grown-ups willing to learn. In addition, flexible university policies shall be introduced. For example, recently a 45-year-old woman was allowed to write 10th board exams with her daughter in the state of Kerela in India. This can help more and more people to complete their dream of learning that remained unfulfilled due to unprecedented personal reasons like financial responsibilities at a very young age or lack of money. \n\nThe main advantage of this implementation is that the individual becomes independent. The person who is unable is read or write is often dependent on some other person. For instance, my grandmother doesn't know to read even our vernacular language, so every day she has to rely on someone from our family who can read her the spiritual book. Thus, in the modern ,world the basic knowledge of reading and writing is a must.\n\n In conclusion, although education is widely prioritized among youngsters, its importance for the middle-aged group shall not be undermined and the government should donate special funds to educate individuals without any age differences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many different perspetives censorship country This human race opinionative Different perspectives come different people young old parents children In libraries reading materials find offensive Offensive material libraries directed read young children They also inteded able get hands material Even though purpose material happens material ends hands someone nt No material held lock key also left lay child high shelf would seem appealing The problem removing material libraries would result empty shelfs except children s books The material would removed books meant people appropriate age group inform tell good stories If protected children censhorship would deny knowledge also get away general public anually go library movies books music materials labeled Some material appropriate children also inappropriate A rated NUM movie like rated CAPS movie one extra reference taken wrong way Even protective parents allow children view movies like long find appropriate Libraries remove material shelves If much issue could children books seperate room library There many possibilities keeping kind reading material away children All need removing books materials libraries shelves Censorship libraries contraversial subject There good arguement either side whether take offensive material shelves libraries I believe taken alternatives This essay proposed solutions problem without taking public reading right away everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree on all of this because if the student does not want to talk to the teachers or anyone at school about there problems the teachers shouldnt be able to do that to the student. if the student isnt really happy or sad ect. they should talk to their parents or somone who they really trust about their problems. now if they were to go to like a family doctor and have that tested there that would be another story because to me personaly i wouldn't want my school to know anything about my personal life, but that is just me.\n\nIf the student was at their family doctor and the docor wanted to cheak for anxiety or depression that tool would be perfect in that line of work but do you really think that the schools should have acees to this, i don't. I would rather just go to school and get my deploma and go to the doctor to get that test done.\n\nThe students at school probably want the same thing because honastly that would kinda be embarassing for me to have to sit and talk to the teachers at my school about my problems, But i always talk to my parents about whats going on in my life, and my parents know when there is somthing bathering me or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit features setting devastating cyclists condition CAPS high desert California surely never easy task begin Without proper hydration people often suffer heatstrokes pass sometimes even perishing entirely worse cyclist effort exerting pedaling short rolling hills Even worse trail old eccentric men set run doesnt much way nuping depleted water supply The first town cyclist comes across easily splits the traditional definition ghost town water pump comes emits sewage incredibly hot brackish water Therefore heat made worse look water cyclist path This combination features setting causes great deal distress cycling almost pushing death", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One worst fellings world flight canceled This happens many people one family family My cousins going come chrismas Cara I texting emailing going They planning since night conclled We mad My cousins family patence know would coming see us My grandma kept calling uncle My grandma good idea To get next fight The problem next flight would take I two hours get When got I airport waiting When I saw cousin said everyone patient I expected exact oposite I thought cousin carn would patient one I wrong least one pacient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author believes that we should further explore Venus despite its dangerous conditions using several facts of Venus and the history of the planet. Venus is the most closely realted to Earth in terms of size and the fact that at one point is was thought to hold many characteristics as Earth does now. Knowing information of this planet can be of aid to us for the future and for our overall knowledge of space. With it now being inhospital many scientists argue that no one should spend further time and money upon exploration. However, the author thinks a human exploration can be both safe and productive.\n\nIt is stated that Venus is considered Earth's \"twin\". It is the planet that relates to it most due to it's size and density, also the fact that it is our neighboring planet. It is thought that many years previous to it's harsh weather and toxic air, that it probably held several forms of life and had features similar to Earth now. The author thinks that learning of Venus can be very important due to it being \"our nearest option of space travel\".\n\nHaving further explorations may seem redundunt to many scientist since it is inhospitable for humans to exist on. For the author however, he contradicts this by stating that having a human mission sent to hover over the planet could teach us more about this planet than before. It could provide us with \"insight on ground\" even thought it would be limited. Readers could interpret the author stating that more could lie on the ground beneath it's atmosphere since it has only been explored for a few hours at a time.\n\nHe leads this further making the subclaim that humans should let their mind be imaginative and that could lead us to innovative ideas, if we don't let dangers consume them. While Venus presents many harsh environmental factors, NASA is working on developing new technology that could be able to withstand it. The value that Venus could hold, might be beyond what anyone thought if they could take more observations and have samples of the planet's resources as the author defends.\n\nThe author presents us with the arguement that human exploration should not be restricted by dangers because it leads \"to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". In addition, the planet that is closely related to Earth is Venus with it size and density, so scientists should have further knowledge of it for the future. Finally, Venus has value because it can show us more \"intimidating endeavours\" under it's dense atmosphere. The author uses several facts to make the claim that Venus should be further explored.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many subjects that students must study at school and art is one of them. There are some people believe that art is essential for students, while the others claim that it is time consuming. In my viewpoint, a totally agree that art is essential.\r\n\r\nThere are some reasons for some people to say art is a time-wasting subject. First, they think that studying art is making a lack of time for studying scientific subject such as chemistry, physics and so on. These scientific subjects need much time to study and do research. For instant, students can use the time drawing a picture to do some experiments in chemistry. Another reason is that some people think art does not make many values for the society. Some people think that achievements from scientific subjects bring the society many benefits and direct values, while achievements of art just bring people enjoyment and relaxation. People believe art does not make direct values for the society. For example, research for the Covid-19 vaccine are very valuable and they effectively impact on the society, while a painting just makes people enjoy and relax.\r\n\r\nPeople who believe art is essential also have their reasons. First, they think art helps students relax after lessons in hard subjects. Unlike the other subject, art does not have many formulars and rules; therefore, students do not feel overload when they study art. For example, after studying math with many formulars and brainstorming times, students can relax when they study a music lesson because they have a chance to sing or at least to listen to music. Another reason is that art helps students to create aesthetics. In other words, art helps students be aware of how beauty is. For instant, a student can decorate his studying corner to make it more beautiful, a beautiful studying corner can inspire for the student to sturdy.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the people who think studying art wastes time have their own reasons such as art is making shortage of time for experiments or art makes indirect values. However, it is true to think that art is essential because relax from hard-working lessons and creating students’ aesthetics are really important.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a lot of things people want to do in this world. Usually people would want to just go to a beatiful place but reading this passage theres a different goals going on in this passage and in life.\n\nWhen I had started reading this passage I hadn't known that much about the planet venus at all. I knew in my head deep down that venus is closer to the sun. Deep down its scary to think that someone wants to go to that planets its so hot on the planet and there a lot of dangerous and unhabitable things going on there. An example of what goes in venus would be there being a heat wave of 110 degree's farenheit. Venus would be 8 times more heat than that of earth and thats just the climate that is on that planet. In one of the passages it had that '' If our sister planet is so inhospitable, Why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?'' I would say that scientists want to explore more planets because they want to see what is out there in space even though the risks. The thought about going to a different planet has been in scientists head for a long time so doing so would be a huge accomplishment done by us. One of the goals the scientistes want to do is inhabit venus because it was once like earth time-ago.\n\nI would say that there is a lot of goals in this passage and in life, I had talked about somewhat the goals in this essay. The passage was good and interesting learning all the thing that I had read.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist One reason I say ran water could dehidrate Also looking water slowed dsown Another reason I say man gave wrong directions got lost confused That setting affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely acknowledged that working in a foreign country has an effect on the child development. Despite this negative belief, i totally agree that the children can improve new survival skill for their future lives. This essay aims to discuss both agreement and will provide supporting examples to arrive at an reasonable conclusion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As cyclist travelling Yosemite National Park comes across many features area affects First takes directions old guys dont know anything changes maps never leave porch At first affects positive way thought good shortcut Yosemite However affect later came negative turned shortcut never existed Another feature affected wasted setting desertlike area The heat made harder ride bike also drank lot water This later resulted becoming dehydrated A positive affect found bait shop rehydrated got new directions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"I'm tired i dont want to drive home!\" what if you didnt need to drive home? You might not need to drive your car anymore. Car companies are making cars smarter and cars would be able to drive themselves. Driverless cars are effiecent because the driver doesnt need to drive all the time, there would be less accidents.\n\nDrives won't need to drive all the time now. There are some people who just dont know how to drive and are better off not driving. In the article it said \" The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" This shows that drivers would still need to drive the car but not all the time. Sometimes drivers need to get somewhere but dont go because they dont want to drive. They won't have to becuase they might drive for a little bit or maybe nothing at all.\n\nThere would be less accients if cars can be driven themselves. In the article it said \" their cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\"\n\nThis shows that their cars so far have not gotten into an accient for a while. People who have cars tnd to crash many times because some drivers are just not careful. The roads would be more calm and safe. It is just better for everyone.\n\nCar companies should make driverless are becuase people wont need to drive all the time espicially when thehy go somewhere far, and there would be less car accidents which also include less deaths. No one wants to be involved in an accident. I believe driverless cars would be neccessary and they should have them. Many people would like to have a car they dont need to drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Before best friend moved away would stay night laughing reason I nt know would get us started would stop stomachs hurt bad laughing fell asleep On nights mom would come around ask us nicely please quiet made us laugh When together quite dangerous around We gotten close practically sisters way Laughter important relationships I grew large family laughter key positive attitudes expected Over I work together lots time get thinking track If short car ride want go somewhere make happen We good manipulating elders skill acquired years practicing All takes one look see plotting laugh follow letting manipulated know doomed soon Our schemes generally harmless possibly little side ache tickled hard It help small strong packed full energy waiting right person come along I find ways stir mischief around us whether jumping behind corners taking manager s keys When I go somewhere I generally aiming positive places upbeat atmosphere people make happy I dislike avoid places I nt enjoy I one make jokes sarcastic things quiet serious Serious environments intimidate comfort zone Laughter brings people together lightens people s moods Nobody likes awkward situations one saying anything I generally break silence blond joke something I flying home met couple great people way When I boarded plane I looked around place sit decided seat elderly woman man resembled father I alone flight I thought next hour I people I better make something remember The man helped get carryon overhead storage nice The elderly woman I started talking subject horses came horses come conversion usually paired lots falling stories She talked horse called mind would things way The problem horses know slight deal bigger us really please choose listen nt like corrected I told first rides I nt know much besides steer massive animal beneath Before knew landing new friends got plane When plane landed I figured I would flying sitting alone After minutes teenage girl got sat next The first thing offer piece gum I accepted The first bit ride quiet awhile crying baby got annoying listen started talking She flying dad s house We talked families hobbies good time After flew I welcomed back home I back eternal rain state could nt see anything besides clouds window Laughter around us always things laugh look bright side life People attracted make laugh get sense humor good company Giggles smiles make world go around keep laughing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist I know story cyclist said going drop heat exsostion riding desert took directions three old gentlemen sitting porch", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This object on Mars has been theorized to be a face, but there is no way this could represent life on Mars. There are many pictures of Mars and nothing else showed that there could be life. There are many reasons why this is not a factor that shows that there is life on Mars. There is not enough resources, it was shown to be a natural landform after better technology was used, and it is similar to the Middle Butte in Idaho as mentioned in the article.\n\nMy first reason, is that there is not enough resources to be able to have life on Mars. There is barely any water except for ice on Mars. There are no plants to create oxygen. There have been no signs of any thing to provide life other than the frozen water as previously mentioned. Most of all Mars is too cold to be able to have life on it. The only way for something to live on Mars is if something somehow adapted to that type of enviroment.\n\nAnother reason, is that it was shown to be a mesa type lanform. The first picture was similar to a face because technology was not advanced enough to take a clearer picture. After we made better technology we were able to get a better and clearer picture that shows it was just a landform.\n\nMy third and final reason, is that it is very similar to landforms on our planet. We have mesas amd buttes all over our planet. The one that is most similar is in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Many pictures shown that the \"face on Mars\" is not real.\n\nAll of these reasons show that there is no way that this is a sign of life on Mars. As I mentioned there is not enough resources, it was shown to be a landform, and that it is similar to landforms here on Earth. So there is no way that this is a sign of another form of life other than the life on our planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "History shows where our roots belong. Nowadays, in some countries, people are getting involved to know about the historical background of the property where they are living. However, I believe, this could be due to their emotional attachment as well as their concern to renovate the building. In this essay, I will further shed some light on the ways how they can find out the historical data of their home. \r\n\r\nTo commence with the reasons, First and foremost, some house owners have a deep emotional attachment to the place where they are living. Furthermore, they want to know might be their property have any connection with history. For example, some houses built during world wars were later declared monuments. Moreover, many people want to know the exact age of the house because then they can clearly decide which parts can be renovated and which cannot.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are several ways to find out information about the history of the house. Firstly, people can visit the county or the oldest library in that area. Secondly, they can enquire about an old wise man in the local community. Last but not the least, they can use social media platforms or the internet Wikipedia which might be helpful. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the above-mentioned statement shows people’s interest in their living place by finding out the reasons. Thus, by approaching historical data through the library, the oldest people or the internet, they prove their true love and affection for that place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future. Many companies are creating computer-driven cars including Google and BMW. The technology is contiuously advancing to make driverless cars a reality. I am for driverless cars. The autonomous car offers many things including hands free acceleration, braking, shifting, and other driving functions.\n\nDriverless cars are becoming more and more of a reality. These autonomous cars can steer, accelerate, and even brake themselves.This means hands free driving! BMW has even developed a car that can handle driving functions at speeds up to twenty-five miles per hour. All of these cars even notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. Some have vibrating seats to notify the driver while others have announcements.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly support the developmeny of driverless cars. I believe that they are the future of transportation. As time goes on this techonlogy will get more advanced and refined. They offer many things to the consumer. These automous cars are the next step in transportaion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people complain about the fact that technology doesn't understand us and that we can't cenvey our feelings correctly over texts. Recently, scientists have started making technology to detect human emotions. Technology in a classroom has grown to something of everyday life. Many scientists, kids or even adults could benifit from using the technology scientists are working on to read feelings or emotional exprssions of students in the classroom.\n\nWith the amount of advancements in technology in recent time, scientists can now use technology to determine the feelings or emotions of a human. at the time, many people's laptops, cell phones or PCs cannot handle the amount of coding and software used to \"decode\", or determine, the complex emotions of a human. although, When our devices can, things could change atronamically for the better. especially in schools. teachers may not understand what that students are feeling at certain time. When teaching, the teacher needs a student who is willing to learn. Emotions could play a huge role in what determines how the student can comprehend and learn. If a student were to not learn effectively because of the way they are feeling, then, listening to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, when the student needs or wants a certain feeling to emerge to elevate his or her learning capacity, it would be easier to tell if he or she is succeeding in making that emotion arise.\n\nNot only is it a good thing for this technology to be put in shcools for the students and teachers, but it is good for the scientists as well. If the technology is used in the area of everyday circumstances, then scientists could observe how the technology would perform in the feild. Then any problems or issues pertaining to the devices and the software could be added on to, to make the performance of the device, more accurate.\n\nSome people could bring up some questions about this technology such as, \"what if it reads my emotions wrong?\" or \"What happens if the device fails and stops working correctly?\". Well, those two questions alone can create big news! devices containing this kind of software, that reads human emotions, will create more jobs for society. The technology will require software testers to make sure the software works like it is intended to, phsycologists and engineers to add on the amount of feelings or different combinations of feelings the software could calculate.\n\nThe phsycological benifits could render this new technology useful in everyway. This software can help teachers and students in the schools to communicate more effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars should still be worked on. They would make life much simpler, and could also save a lot of people a lot of time. Driverless cars are the future, and we should be ready to embrace them.\n\nIf driverless cars do become a thing in the future, lives would be more convenient. If they managed to make them able to work completely without human assistance, then people wouldn't have to focus on driving. If they need to get something done in a short amount of time, they could just use a driverless car, that way they could work on it while on the road. Of course, since the few driverless cars there are now still need human assistance, this could take quite a while to develop, but I'm sure they'll get that far eventually.\n\nThere are some people who drive really slow, and some who drive really fast. With driverless cars, this would not be an issue, as all the cars could go the same speed, so everyone could get to where they need to go in time. As for the issue of possible crashes, if all the cars would be programmed the same way, this wouldn't be a problem. If there are still crashes, that would be a manufacturer thing. They were the ones who built and program the cars, it's their responsibility to program all the cars to be as safe as possible, so no one can get hurt.\n\nThis could also save people money in the long run. Since all the cars would be programmed the same, therefore no more wrecks, people wouldn't have to worry about having to buy a new car in that event. Also, they could just take the public transport car, and have it go wherever they need to go, since they would be much more accessible.\n\nIn conclusion, Driverless cars should definitely be a thing we need to keep working on. They could benefit the world so much. Plus, things would be a lot more interesting with driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Living life country place away difficult I ve known heard seen Poverty often takes situation side racism discrimination occasionally Nonetheless welltold memoir tells contentment good side The happiness created place Narciso calls home In home still got experience Cuban culture including music traditional cooking best ambiance family around Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This quote kind lightens whole idea memoir people came together celebrate wonderful joys life even though times frowned upon", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The wind huge issue building empire state building The building high ground top stable If used dirigibles Empire State building would dangerous weights would dangling high air pedestrians heads That plan smart safe The purpose build higher could tallest building really good reasons", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents, because Venus has a lot of undiscovered things that human have not yet discovered. Yes, the planet Venus has alot of dangerous affects in that planet such as \"erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes\". So Venus is a dangerous planet for humans to land on and to take a closer look at it.\n\nVenus should be studied more because we as humans don't know everything that happens in Venus. We know that, \"On the planet's surface, tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". Even though Venus was far more dangerous than our planet, we also think that, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" But some people like NASA want to study Venus more, even though the planet is dangerous. \"NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\".\n\nSo even though studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despiting the danger it presents, humans from NASA or other companies will be willing to study the planet Venus with a closer look, like actually being on the planet Venus, despiting the danger!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Come with me on an awesome adventure. You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. What would you say if one of your friends asked you to go to Europe on a cattle boat. I don't know what you would say, but I would say yes. I think you should say yes too.\n\nI would go because it would be an amazing adventure. You would learn so many things that you would normaly not learn as an average high school student. World War 2 just ended in Europe. You want to see the aftermath of some of the cities are.\n\nEvery city that he stopped at, he could go to a cool muesuem or go somewhere amazing in that city. Every 18 year old would rather go to Greece than staying at school working on worksheets. Luke and Don got to take care of animals. They also took care of people who didn't have a lot of advantages.\n\nWouldn't you want to play some fun sports with you friend. Think about your favorite sport. You could play any of those sports. From baseball to table-tennis. You could have a really fun time. There were more things that they did to pass time. If you were tired you could sit in the shade and read you favorite book that you brought.\n\nThis would be somebodys dream to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You should join the program today. You can also invite one of your friends just like Don Reist did to Luke. This is why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Moderen computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick. But tend to be more delicate when it comes extreme physical conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. By comparison, systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to mars and others times to Venus.\n\nVenus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\", is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Making it simple for even an amateur stargazor to spot. However, this nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from the sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. more importantly, researchers cannont take simples or rock, gas, or anything else, from distance.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, venus was probably\n\ncovered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today , Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment. The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable.\n\nStriving to meet the challange presented by Venus has value. Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human corisosity. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts. Should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightening strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusim geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "when someone driveless on cars so people can't buy them so they won't get money to pay for the cars so it can like when somebody is like looking at them driving cars. So it effeat them by trying to get cars so when ethey see that they can't get them cars are drivingless to other people they can get to pay for the cars for when tghe cars. Get people to buy them it's going to be hard for them to get one that they want for their self so when people get their cars they always want they can alll ways pay for them if they have to get one if they want if you look at somebody with a car you would say i want that car to but if they don't have no more you can't do nothing to get the car you want in your life for cars it's going to be hard for them to come up with something they want to do for them so when it come to cars you can't get your mine off of it till you get the car you want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day brother mom going doctors brother sick When got doctors offices sat waiting area They called mom brother So I stay My mom told take two minutes Guess wrong It took two hours come back So I patient I texted aunt friends I also played games I actually brought So I waited waited I bored I went outside fresh air Then I got tired I sat Finally came Guess mom said how sweety mum told brother sick I patient got eat I patient clinic spent minutes Here I sleep I Because I patient believe actually easy Thats", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There minutes class left I So I watched clock tick slowly minutes left teacher asked what I said CAPS I do why dont put headdown I losing patience going snap didnt I put head next thing I know time go I kept patience didnt get trouble", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke wanted to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A cattle boat came up and gave him the opportunity to be in the Seagoing Cowboy program. Luke's friend inited him to go on the cattle boat because his friend knew he wanted to be on one. Luke's life changed right after graduation.\n\nLuke did not know his life would change soon. It was 1945, World War ll was over in Europe, and many counties were left in the ruins. UNRRA hired \" Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that wereshipped over seas. It says that Luke and Don signed up.\n\nHe crossed the Antlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War ll. Luke also found time on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded.\n\nLuke said \" It made more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" Then awareness stayed with him. The cowboys played beseball and volleyball games on board when Luke was on. There was plenty of games they played on board.\n\nHelping at his aunt Katie's farm as a boy had prepared him is what the paragrph said so what it is saying is when he was little then he went to his aunt Katie's farm and played around and it helped him with his future with animals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenges of exploring Venus can be worthly pursuit but dangers can be presented. One postive example of\n\nVenus is called the evening star is one the brightest ponits of light in the night sky making it simple for even an amater stragazer to spot. The reason we explore or visit other plants its because the human curioity will likely lead us to many other discovers. A not so postive example is just imagine living on Venus and not having electronics lets put an eample just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin. Second Venus is called the earth twins. why do you ask? Earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closet in distance too. Earth and Venus and Mars are other planetary neighbor who they orbit the sun at different speeds.\n\nThe difference in speed from earth to venus is that sometimes we are closer to mars and other times to venus is close to earth. A negavtive reason Venus has a thick atomosphere of almost 97 perecent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Another challange is that that the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atomshere. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. Thrid reason Venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our planet ,even though Mercury is closer to our sun. The dangers ir presents is the high pressure and heat,venus geology and weather present additionl impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting. A reason why humanity is exploring venus because it once have been earth like planet in our planet. A long time ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. This shows the dangers Venus has and the if it worthly to discovered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you say that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers? Studying Venus can become a little difficult for people due to the dangers of the planet. Scientists are discovering further visits to the surface of this planet. The author does support the idea very well by saying that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The reasons for me supporting the idea is because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system which has fascinated astronomers, and it can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nOne reason is it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. For example, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. This means that Venus still has some features that are analogous to the planet Earth. Furthermore, Venus can sometimes be oue nearest option for a planetary visit,a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is a worthy pursuit despit the dangers of this planet. My only reason is that it may well have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Sometimes it can be our nearest option for a planetary visit instead of the other planets. The returning of Venus seems indisputable from a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir mood created author feelingsIn paragraph lines says Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed forms backdrop life warm home For quote authors mood sometimes sad sometimes happy The author s mood sometimes sad live The author s mood feeling sometimes happy matter happens still friends family otherIn paragraph lines says I never forget parents turned simple house home For quote authors mood srprised thankful The author s feeling suprised would never think parent would The author s feeling thanksful thats parents made life betterAll mood created author", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author discusses multiple reasons for both positive and negative aspects of a driverless car. These aspects include the ideas that driverless cars would be not as safe due to the possibility of a system malfunction or that the cars would be too expensive to manufacture. Othere positive asects that this author includes are that the car will offer the capability for the driver to occupy themselves with other activities while driving. In my opinion I beleve that driverless cars would not be a marketable or functional idea. I believe this for many reasons, one of these reasons are the fact that these cars would be too expensive to manufacture. Another reasson is that the system may malfunction causing serious injuries to the driver, passenger, or other bystanders. My final reason is that if these driverless cars become legal, multiple new laws would have to be put in place which then would confuse or dissrupt who the blame would be on if the car got into an accident.\n\nOne of the largest reasons why driverless cars would not be a very articulate idea would be due to the amount of capital it woud take to manufacture these cars. The author brings this problem up when he or she states \"For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors\". This quote shows that due to the large amont of sensors needed, a large amount of capital would also be needed to test and manufacture all of these sensors. Also, there would be a great amount of money out into maintaining these cars in dangerous weather conditions or if there happens to be an accident involving these cars.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars would not be an intellectual idea is that the car may malfuntion causing serious injuries to the drivers, passengers, or bystanders. Also, if there is an entire line of these cars that malfunction or shut down at the same time there will be anarchy within these companies and the citizens that own these cars. This is shown when the author states \"...lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\". This quote shows that even though they have made great advancements in the world of technology, problems can still erupt and cause harm to the drivers, passengers, and bystanders.\n\nFinally, if these driverless cars become legal, then multiple new laws will have to be put into place which then would confuse who to blame if the car got into an accident. We as citizens would not be able to tell if the car malfunctioned or it the driver was not focused on the road. This idea is shown when the author states \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\". This quote shows that these new laws will confuse and disrupt the judicial decision process of whose fault the accident was, a distracted driver, or a malfunctioning system.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author states both positive and negative sides of the idea of driverless cars. These ideas include safey, cost, and liabilities. In my opinion I believe that driverless cars would be a plague to our society for multiple reasons. These reasons include cost, malfunctioning systems, and liabilities. In conclusion our society as well as our own human race is not ready for driverless cars due to the immense amount of complications that come with this idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of whether the global climate will have an adverse effect on the business entity has generated mixed views in recent years. Some people argue that variation in weather conditions might cause irreversible damage to enterprises and lead international commerce to a vicious circle, while others contend that we can seek potential opportunities in those changeable climate phenomena. In my opinion, the prospects far outweigh the negative impacts in this case as organizations can seize the chance to upgrade their products and develop emerging industries.\r\n\r\n Variation in weather conditions can certainly be harmful to the operation of a company or an industry. For instance, climate change such as the greenhouse effect might accelerate global warming which could lead to poor harvest in agriculture; desertification requires local entities to rely more on seawater desalination facilities than groundwater at the expense of a rise in the cost of production; extreme weathers and natural disasters induce emergency shutdown in factories and department stores, thus bringing extra expenditure to a company. All of these scenarios pose a threat to our trades and result in a sluggish economy. \r\n\r\n However, we should not omit the bright sides of an ever-changing climate, as this is an instrument of business change. In terms of merchandises research and development, companies will focus on new demands related to climate conditions. For example, a shortage in water will facilitate the development of water purification systems in houses and offices. Online sales are more likely to dominate the retailing industry and become mainstream, as this will avoid any form of extreme weather that might be encountered in mortar stores to the utmost, meanwhile companies ensure a decrease in the cost of production.\r\n\r\n In summary, while the business world might suffer from the drawbacks of natural disasters, I firmly believe that every trade entity can find an enduring solution to climate change and make improvements from it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent days, young married couples are now reluctant to have children when they are young and more likely to have them only when they are old rather than in the past. Generally, the positive and negative impacts concerned with this issue before presenting about the benefits over harmful effects. \r\n\r\nWhen comes to this issue of bearing a child in their later life, there are many good points for it. One obvious thing is that the future offspring can be supported well by their mature and independent parents, who gave birth to them only when they were old enough to make decisions. If the young couples have babies when they are not ready for everything, this can make a social and financial burden to their whole family and relatives. Moreover, it can reduce the stress of living expenses by bearing a child when the parents become the main money-earning members in the family, having a happy and secure surrounding at home. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, doctors disagree to have juniors when the parents are too old to have ones for the sake of health issues in which the babies will likely have congenital disease or be premature ones. Therefore, the couples should think about their future child by bearing him/her early although they have to solve many other challenges in work and budget. Another negative view for it is that old parent cannot guide or suggest when their heir is grown up in future. So the age gap between parents and children become a significant problem in term of logical thinking, customs and tradition, leading to the violent clash between them. Similarly, it will eventually end up with dysfunctional families. So they ought to have a baby when they are young enough to avoid this disorder and family stress. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in the essay, good points for the views are related to support and guidance to the juniors whereas health issues and discrepancy of age between parents and heir can impact negatively on their younger generations. However, parents should have their babies when they are young and think rationally about decisions without being too late to have them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work. Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies. At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system. In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So as yu may already know '' smart cars'' are a big discution of the future.My personal opinion is that this is unesesary use of time and technologe. My question to you is do you really want to put your life in a computer's hands?\n\nFirst off this just seems wrong to me these people are waisting their time tryng to build these cars when their is no need for them. What i mean by that is cars are functional just the way they are, so i can't understand why you need them to drive themselfs unless you're truly lazy.\n\nThe only use for this in my eyes is for the dissabled, but only if these cars can function right. But even then why wouldnt you just ride in a taxi. I'm just telling you guys that it is hard to think of puting my life into a computers hands. A nd could you imagin the cost? these cars would be priced so high that even the people that actualy have a need for it would not be able to aford it.\n\nIn the passage it says different states that prohibit these cars so if you went on vacation you could get in trouble for driving. So can you see the complications of these cars? You people are all about this invention\n\nbut it is unesesary to build these cars when thee money could be put toward cancer. And these stupid unessesary projects are one of the reasons we are in debt.\n\nThis essay hopefuly changes your mined about these cars. At least i can sit back when this all goes up and say i told you so. I want to hear from you people that are for the building of these cars and see if your story out weighs the truth. And one last think to tink about if you or someone you loved got hurt in one of these cars how would you feel then?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The historical stories hidden behind the residencies seem to be more appealing than ever. There are a number of reasons contributing to this phenomenon and multiple methods helping people with the relevant research. \r\n\r\n The reasons can vary from person to person. Firstly, historical houses or buildings are desirable for they are indispensable parts of a city's culture and history. It’s well worth investigating the stories of the houses especially those with a long history. If you dig into the stories behind your living spaces, you can get to the bottom of where you live and find out the hidden values. Moreover, the exploration of local accommodations can either arouse residents’ curiosity about the past life or gain affection for the life. The more you know about your dwelling place, the more easily you fall in love with it. \r\n\r\n Obviously, there are many methods to carry out research for those who have a great passion for the houses’ history. First, Internet could definitely serve as a capable assistant. As long as you key in what you want to know, the relevant information will pop out on the screen. Second, libraries are the best place to find something available with well-documented books and newspapers of different years. Last but not least, local residents, especially the senior ones, can also offer help during the investigation process because they have witnessed the changes and familiarized themselves with the surrounding buildings. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, there are many reasons for the increasing interest to know about where people live and they have different access to the research no matter online or offline.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wonder if there was life on Mars. NASA made a spacecraft called the Viking 1. While the spacecraft was snapping photos of possible landing sities for Viking 2, it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region called Cydonia. On the planet Mars, I think it was just a natural landform, not an alien artifact.\n\nScientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia. But this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. NASA unveiled the image as a huge rock formation, which resembles a human head. Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact. Photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor\n\narrived at the Red Planet in 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. On April 8, 2001- Mars Global Surveyor took extraordinary photos of the face.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. Those landforms are common around the American West. 'It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,'' said by a scientists.\n\nIn conclusion, On the Planet Mars, I think it was just a natural landform, not an alien artifact. Scientists figured out it was just another Martian messa, but had unusual shadows. NASA unveiled the image as a huge rock formation, which resembles a human head. The face was really a Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. In my opinion I think alien artifacts does not exist and the face\n\nwas just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir seems happy He big family friends many good memories He comes caring sharing home The whole mood story uplifting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many countries are confronted with the increasing amount of waste and one of the major contributions is food wasted by people. This issue is mainly driven by an over-ordered food and misunderstanding about the method of food disposal. However, people could cease from creating food waste through the act of both restaurants and governments.\nTo begin with, it is obvious that countries have wasted because the amount of food that people buy is more than the amount they need. The crucial factor of this behavior is that when people contemplate menus in a restaurant, they tend to order many items in order to satisfy their desire level. Eventually, a lot of food scraps are left when these people finish eating their meals. Another potential cause could be because people do not know how to deal with food scraps. As a result, they might understand that putting wasted food into a garbage is the only solution they could do. This is exemplified by statistics published by Thai waste association which demonstrate that more than a half of waste in Thailand come from household food.\nA possible solution for this matter could be for restaurants to fine their customers who leave some food. This policy possibly encourages customers to carefully think of the reasonable amount of food when they order. In addition, from the country’s level governments could also educate their citizens including companies in the food-service industry about how to do with food waste due to the fact that some edible items could be food for animals. For instance, authorities could give an instruction demonstrating that dogs can be fed with remaining food such as rice or bread while remaining vegetables can be food for rabbits.\nIn conclusion, people waste food since they order food by what they want without considering the amount and most of them misunderstand about the way to dispose of food waste. Nevertheless, this concern can be coped with the penalty by restaurants as well as the guidance from governments regarding feeding animal with food scraps.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that wide outdoor places should be built in all urban and rural areas. I personally, agree with this view.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why having parks and open spaces play a crucial role. To begin with, squares and parks in urban areas are equipped with all amenities, sports facilities, full leisure activities as well which helps to improve public health. Additionally, having places for outdoor activities, can be essential in boosting local travelling and enhancing the tourism industry. Times Square park in New York City is a clear example of it. Every year millions of tourists come to visit this place. Parks and squares conserve traditional values and history. The most important thing is children go to the parks with parents and grandparents to spend time which is good because nowadays kids have a lot of burden on their mind of studies and they spend most of their time on computer screens and mobile phones. \r\n\r\nI advocate the idea that public places bring a plethora of merits. To commence with, green places like parks contribute to shielding their environment. Parks are a great contributor to decreasing considerably carbon die oxide levels in the air and producing oxygen at a high amount which is beneficial for human life and controlling pollution. Another benefit behind it, people make new friends, spend time with each other and a good way to get rid of daily stressful life for a time being.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Public places are advantageous in all the ways like people's psychological and physical health, raise tourist business, environmental benefits. I totally agree with this view.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent days, adults even teenagers get many opportunities to invest their time in any sort of productive project without any hesitation. It is also believed that getting involved in any voluntary work can be fruitful for the future progress of their life as well as for society. From my perspective, voluntary work is one of the most impactful things that can be done by every adolescent. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is always major learning to get used to real-life scenarios and get accustomed to the problems one can face. This real-time experience can be gathered through participating in any kind of unpaid community work as per the choice of the person. For instance, working as an assistant in a hospital can help to make the high-schoolers think about the unavoidable distress situation of life. Moreover, these experiences help them to grow as a confident and self-sufficient person. Again, communication skills can be developed by meeting multiple groups containing different people with various personality traits. Rather than spending more time with the close ones, it benefits the young fellows to nurture their social attributes to convert themselves to better communicators. Additionally, pushing oneself out of the comfort zone affect the most to discover the hidden possibilities of life. \r\n\r\nOf course, students should occupy a large share of time to study for academic purposes; but they must not confine themselves to this only. On the other hand, a proper balance between study and knowing the outer world can get them a better life. Again, thinking about the impacts of voluntary works in society, it is very beneficial for the community to get a sensible, responsible and confident nation. Take community workers as an example; their confidence and awareness of the benefits of society are worth appreciation. Thus, the nation can flourish in the future and utilize the resources to achieve prosperity. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, in spite of the fact that working at an early age might bring distraction to study for many teenagers, the advantages of working in unpaid development works can provide so much in return that it outweighs the possible disadvantages of it. Therefore, all must be very careful to create openings for young adults to carry out their responsibilities perfectly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Issues related to the topic are frequently discussed these days. Some people believe that there are many positive developments from cooperating with other countries in terms of business and culture, while others think that it seems to be negative effects in case the identity of a nation is lost. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be examined before a conclusion is reached.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, it is undeniable that business cooperation between countries can increase dramatically economic growth. In other words, when a nation's economy is developed, the country has a huge income, and as a ,result the government can improve fundamental factors for their people such as transportation, infrastructure, and health care centres, as well as people having a good quality of life. Additionally, traditional and cultural exchange will be supplemented the personal development\r\n\r\nwhich implement ideas and technologies from foreign countries to boost potential humans. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, many people are concerned that this cooperation can lead to the loss of national identity. To explain, there are many significant drawbacks to the partnership of business and culture such as marriage ideas. Take Thailand for example, a wedding before living together as spouse and wife is an identity of Thai culture. This idea might be changed when having contact with people in different countries. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, even though the two opinions have both benefits and drawbacks, I strongly believe that the advantages of this argument outweigh the disadvantages due to the reason mentioned above.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboy and UNRRA program because you get to see many unique places. Another reason is you get to help people by getting them food and helping them stay alive. Another reason is you get to help hungry soldiers thatare helping our country. In the passage Luke wanted to join the program not just to help people but to see all the amazing places in the story Luke said his favorite place was Greece. You could also see some amazing animals along the way.\n\nLuke liked Greece and the other places so much is in Greece he liked Acropolis. He liked the other places but Greece was his favorite. He also went on nine trips! The most of any Seagoing Cowboys. He also had to clean the stalls of the lower levels of the ship sometimes. One day he had to stop working for a couple of days because of cracked ribs because of flying overboard. The best part of being a Seagoing Cowboy is having fun. The cowboys played baseball,volleyball,and table-tennis and alot of other things too but Luke really loved being a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Growing population has become one of the significant issues globally as it can have both positive and negative consequences. In the recent trends, it is observed that in certain countries there is a hike in the count of children who are less than 16 year old. In this essay, I will analyze the feasible effects this growth can bring to the nation at present and future in terms of merits as well as demerits.\n\nTo begin with, the pattern observed has its own results in the present. On the positive side, as the number progresses to be high the government is enforced to provide better sanitation facilities for the kids, since the kids are more vulnerable to diseases. This will not only benefit the younger ones but also the adults by providing them with good medical facilities. However, looking at the other side, the public bodies will have to spend more on the resources such as food and education. This can cause a considerable amount of stress for them in terms of financial aspect, which can eventually lead to an increase in the tax collection that affects the public.\n\nMoving further ahead and thinking about the consequences of the future, there will be a good revampment in terms of the nation's infrastructure development in numerous fields including internet, business and health. This is due to the fact that there will be a plethora of educated people with a specialization in a variety of fields. Contradictorily, the more number of educated youths can lead to an adverse situation namely unemployment. As the count of the competent persons in a domain is more, the most skillful ones will end up with a job. So the government needs to plan accordingly to provide employment to all the citizens.\n\nTo recapitulate, this essay deals with the various factors that can impact the nations where there is a constant improvement in the population.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, I think that the Electoral College method should be abolished, because with it; the Presidential elections are quite useless. I'm specifically talking about the way Presidents get popular votes. The system is very out-dated and very irrational. When the Founding fathers founded this country, they said that the \"People of America\" get a voice and say in everything, well, not everything. But still their own say during the Presidental Elections are useless, the only real true thing to do is vote for the Senate Electors for the Presidential elections since the Electoral College proccess is mainly controlled by the Senate, the Senators vote for the Presidential canidate. You see, the only way canidates actually win the every 4 year elections in November is by the amount of votes they get, by NOT the people, but by the Senators that pleged with them during the Electoral College. In this essay I'll explain why this system is to bad for our today's world and how it can lead to false moves and corruption.\n\nFirst off, is what's exactly the Electoral College? It's not a place, it's more like a proccess of choosing and voting for a Presidential canidate. You see the votes that regular U.S citizens do, do not count as the actual votes, though back then the system did work; it doesn't today. Back then around the 18th and mid 19th century, this Electoral College system worked outstounding for it's time, mainly because at first America was a new country, and the Senate that did do the voting and choosing were well educated and have experience. Most citizens in the American States weren't really that educated very well, mostly for new borns since the nation just finished their revolution and they were still in debt at the time, and so not everybody was rich enough to afford anything, in turn they have no knowlege of the way the world now works. Then during the civil war, half the country became another country known as the Conferderate States of America, which opposed the ideals of a more freer nation of other half of the country, known as the United States of America. The Electoral College did help President Abe to be elected, though it was mainly because he was popular since he used the ideal of abolishing and freeing slaves to gain populraity. And alot of people opposed him to become President, but thanks to the College process; he won the Elections, and re-united the two nations into the United States of America.\n\nSo, does this will in today's world? No, abosolutely not, it doesn't work, and will never work unless America gets 1984'ed and become a false and brainwashed Utopia. Due to our general corrupt society, the right President's get denied, and the corrupt and wrongful citizen gets elected. I can relate this issue with the 2000 Presidential Election crisis. In the 2000 elections, Al Gore gets the most popular votes, infact so much more then George Bush, that it was clear he can easily win the 2004 elections. But since the Electoral College is still intact, they voted for George Bush, and Bush won the elections by 5 more votes then the popular and better organized President, Al Gore. Because of this, most of America got an economy train wreck from in 2007-2008 and also wasted many resources on a the War on Terror battle from 2003, which is now gone and has a similar operation that is still on-going called Operation Enduring Freedom. Also unlike the old times when America was a new country, in today's modern 21st Century America, I can assure you that we have 95% percent of the Population educated by our today's educational standards tops. Which means that America doesn't need a hand when voting for a new President, and that shows that the Electoral College is not needed anymore, anytime. The Governments and it's people today are also very corrupt at times. This will also include the Electoral College, and can affect many lives for many people. Everybody can now make their own choice thanks to our very effective education system. So this proves the College group is now useless for voting.\n\nFinally that's why we should abolish like Bob Dole said, it can cause a lots of corruption, and was only made for it's time since at that time many people were un-educated and couldn't even read, and now a day's today's society is very well off on educated minds. And has enough corruption as it is. And so that's the nutshell of this essay, and this is why we should remove the Electoral College. As its unfair and unfit for today's world and society of the American Government.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One why in the world would you want to know soemones mood you dont know what they were going threw thats history hwat they were feeling let the past stay in the passed not alot of people wanna know why she was sad this isnt from the artlicle nobody cares about why she was sad or happy leave her be what kind of test is this who the heck is gunna ask you what the heck happened in the passed its the passed it should stay there nobody in the world is gunna ask you what mood was mona lisa in in the picture who the heck cares its in the passed i didnt have to go into the artlicle to know this is stupid make fun of me if you please if someones reading this sure if its the computer when what the heck computer slide me a dub on this test me and you both know this isnt something will be asked in the future honestly tho who cares this is nonsense whos to really know if u were happy or sad or the picture was actually there to make u smile thats like me saying im here to be loyal then say im gunna cheat instead. you were not there to say that it was there for that one certin purpose no personal information but me and my girl arent together so that isnt my girl so i could lie and say she cheated or i can tell the truth n say she left cus i wasnt making her happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it has some very good points but it also isn't the safest alternative either. Most people when they think of a driverless car think they dont have to do anything, well in the article the auther states \"The human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" Most people wouldn't pay that much attention even if they knew the car would try and alert them. The article also states that the displays that alert the driver about things coming they can be instantly turned off as to help with those who text and drive but in my opinion some people would do what was needed to turn off the displays and then get back to playing on their phone or other things. These kinds of cars are illegal in some states for safety issues.\n\nThese cars are mostly technology so if the technology fails the driver or others could be hurt. The article states \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" I would belive it could be both depending on the sitiation but most times it could be a\n\ntechnology malfunction because in this day and age people are learning how to hack and do other things with the new technology, so it could cause an outbreak of panic on many people thinking technology is safe especially when driving. Most people would also be happy with the new and improved technology no matter if its been proven safe or not. The cars are driving on autopilot for 90 percent of the time says the article for 2016 but it all depends on the laws and if there will be new laws created just for this new driverless car.\n\nThe laws that are in affect now are to keep drivers, passangers, and pedestrians safe and the article tells that lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. If the drivers of the car belive they just got a \"Driverless Car\" they arent going to wanna be alert as they were in their old cars they would wanna relax and not do anything as they drive since they believe the car is driverless.These are a few of the issues that can be caused by the new driverless car but it does have positive effect for some people and for gas and other fuels. The driverless car isnt all bad but it does have its issues. I am against driverless cars for their saftey hazards.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the driverless cars are a waste of time because smething could mess up and it take off the road. In paragraph 2 it say's that Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. Now if I was going to buy a self driving car for alot of money I would want what im paying for. Not a car that doesn't even pull in or out of the driveway to me that just doesn't make sense. Why would you spend alot of money on a car that you think that you can trust untill something in the computer messes up when your on the highway and it takes you into the other lane.\n\nAnd in the lane right beside you there is a car full of kids and the car messes up and hits them and you both go off the road and they die and you survive. And you have to live that you spent alot of money on a car that is driveless and you trusted it untill it messed up and killed a family. Thats why I think that the driveless car is a waste of time because you never know when it could mess up and you could be in a life or death situation.\n\nWe have been driving without a computer to help us since the car was invented why do we need it now? It might be cool now but in the long run it could be putting people's lifes in danger. Its not like the seat is going to vibrate's when the driveless mode is about to stop working.\n\nThats why i think that the driveless cars are a very bad idea", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I was surveying Mars from the spaceship when I suddenly saw something that caught my eye. It was hard to see but it appeared to be the illusion of a human face on Mars' surface. I concluded that it was a landform that naturally formed on Mars. A fellow scientist, Rachel, claimed that it was created by supernatural aliens.\n\nI began to argue for the claim that it was just a natural landform. While I could base my claim off of factual information, Rachel's cannot completely rely on true, scientific information because we are not even sure if aliens even exist.\n\nThe first thing I said was that on May 24, 2001, our NASA Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet when it found the human facial illusion. According to an article I read, \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", when it was spotted, \"scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" When NASA showed the image to the people, the caption noted the caption said a \"huge rock formation...\" which proved that some people thought it made of rock which also proves that it wasn't thought of being created by aliens.\n\nGoing over this discovery once again on April 5, 1998 was another anxious day. \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" stated that, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nEven so, others weren't completely satisfied. They though that \"Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze,\" since the camera that was used had to look through wispy clouds in order to capture it. Another travel was made on April 8, 2001 on a cloudless day to view the face. With the excellent camera that was used, it could spot things like \"airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks...\" if they were there. The last thing I said was that the picture \"actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa..,\" and that Jim Gavin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, explained that \"'It reminds me of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho..which is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\"'\n\nWith this I conclude that based on these facts from the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" that the face is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" I mean teacher need to know when his students is not in the mood to do stuff and when they are having a bad time.\" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\n\ncomputer is very important now in this 21s no matter what you doing you need a computer to do it. computer is like life now you seen technology everywhere where that come from? and their have different kind of computer though some computer have the ability to recognize the sebtlet facial movement and can read our mind, our feelings we express, they even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced smile.\n\nI don't have enough imformation to tell you where this technology come from? we have different kind of technology, like computer, phone, etc. those are some technologies that really important to human.\n\ncomputer we seen computer everywhere at school, at work, at home, computer is everywhere this technology is very important to human we can go to the internet on computer to do search everything and knows what going on in this earth. We have new computer software that have some abilities to do thing, like read your mind phone is the kind of technology that really important to human. phone been used for the first time in 20s by somewho i don't remember his name but that not the since the point. but with that phone we can connect to others no matter where they are no matter how far are they we seen phone everywhere though\n\nIn conclusion computer is kind of technology that really important to human imagine computer replace human or read your mind, your future, control your body but that not the since the point this new software is very important, like it's can tell you when people is having a good time on the internet, or see how people feelings when they are doing something and tell you when people give you a fake smile in life they have some people who are give you fake smile straigh up to your face but do you think we really need this software? to tell us what peole think or feelings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a world filled with modern technology, people replace books with the Internet to retain information. Although books offer authentic materials that they cannot offset the digitized knowledge with quick search and immense storage capacity. Accordingly, I lean toward the idea that the merits of keeping resources on the Internet exceed the way to do on books.\r\n\r\nRationally, Internet enable users to access knowledge from many high precisions sources quickly. In simple words, people can effortlessly explore various topics after some mouse clicks. For instance, people used to spent too much time on searching informations from many heavy paper books just for a topic. However, with the development of Internet, it takes few minutes to get all information with the language people are using. This has an impotant effect on puplis especially with doctor trainers.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I bet that using books wasted a great deal of financials and huge amount of wood resources. Nevertheless, using Internet to store knowledge protected natural resources cause people just have to download webs into the laptop and able to access with geographical boundaries.\r\n\r\nFuthermore, knowledges on the Internet is stored in many different formats ànd language which allows learners absorb and remember information effectively. Unlike books, which just present informations in the format of texts. For instance, there are about 30% people have ability of learning through music and picture; therefore, users can remember knowledes easily.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe storing knowledge on the Internet is more effective and easier than books.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng thinks failed misses grandmother The hiscubus plant buys reminds grandmothers scent Saeng spent hibiscus plant She needed feel little bit home Saeng feels little time leave country a blink Her grandmother would want strong cry thought away Saeng needs think good smile reminded past Saeng wants pass test next time hibiscus budding must cry", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock For example someone attempted publicity stunt would tie deliver bundle newspapers Empire State Building The workers moring equipment never installed putting workers catch bundle papers rope dangling blimp great danger Also wind top building put workers great risk falling dying", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you love going to foreign places, taking care of animals, making new friends, or just having fun? If you said yes to any of these things, then you should be part of the Seagoing Cowboys program. A Seagoing Cowboy is someone who takes care of horses, young cows, and mules while they are shipped over seas to places like Europe and China. You don't just have to take care of animals though.\n\nOn the trek over to Europe and back to America you never work all day and all night. You have shifts that you share with multiple other Seagoing Cowboys, and while you are on break, you can play games. To help pass time, we usually play baseball and volleyball games. We also host table-tennis tournaments. Some people even read, whittle, fence, and box. There is never a dull moment on board of our ship.\n\nOnce you unload the cattle, mules, and horses, you don't just go right back on the boat to America either. You can go and sightsee! I had the benefit of seeing the Acropolis in Greece, and got to ride a gondala in Venice, Italy. I got to do other things too such as take a tour of an exavated castle in Crete, and see the Panama Canal on my way to China!\n\nOn top of that, you become very close friends with the people on board of your boat. After all you are on the boat with them from a month to a little over two months. So, you guys will become great friends from playing baseball with them in your free time, or just because you have to share chores with them. Also, if you're an animal lover, you get to take care of the animals too!\n\nFinally, a benefit of becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is you learn a lot too. You learn how to brave the storm of the harsh sea and how to take care of other people in need. It made me more aware of other people's needs and how to take care of them when they need help. Therefore, if you want to have fun, love sightseeing and animals, and want to make new friends, then becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is for you. Come and join us!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Sentator,\n\nA lot of chatter about weather the president should be elected by electoral college or by popular vote is going around my school for the past couple of weeks, and i can't help but to give my own opinion about this argument. I believe that the popular vote should descide who is the president.\n\nI believe this because of two reasons. One, the citizens are the ones that are going to have to deal with this good or bad president for four years and possibly eight years. Also the satate senators can be bribed by one or the other candidates running for president. This candidate could have the worst plans for the next four years and all because he cheated to win. This could cause riots and uprawrs around the United States.\n\nTwo, Electoral College is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system. What this means is that candidates are not going to focus on the staes that they know they wont get any votes from. for example in source tw, during the campain of 2000, sevebnteen states were not visited by either candidates so they didn't get to see any campain ads. this is unfair because it makes it harder, alomost impossible for these states to choose on who to vote for because they had no presentations to choose from. this puts to much power in the candidates hands.\n\nSome may believe otherwise. For example, since the Electoral votes are from very experienced people that have put there life and time into knowing about what is right and wrong. they are much more experience than the normal citizens. Also Electoral College prevents run-off elections to occur. for example in source three, the electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes casted. This causes lots of pressure which would greaatly complicate the presidential election process. With Electoral Collage, this produces a clear winner.\n\nIn my own opinion the one that decideds the winner is popular votes. There can still be Elector Collage votes, but the Electoral votes have to much power and is unfair to the citizens of the united states.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having technology that allows the ability to know a persons feelings could help this world have less crime,less suicide,and know a persons true feelings.Its something doctors could use in hospitals to know more about there patients. If this technology is acurate it could change the world.\n\nBeing able to calculate a persons emotions isnt something everyone thinks about on a daily bases,But having a computer that reads all 44 major muscles of your face and being able to calculate someones feelings could do a lot of good. being able to know when someone is feeling bored in class or tired could make the teacher do an activity that requieres movement to wake them up. students wouldnt be able to go home by acting sick anymore either making schools not have as many absences.grades would improve because students wouldnt be bored since the teacher could change the learing method they are using.\n\nThere are millions of people who suffer from depretion and a lot of them put a fake smile on their face. People dont know how they really feel specially since they dont talk about their depresion. If doctors had a computer to know when someone is fake smiling because they are hidding their depression, they could do something to prevent that person from taking their own life. you cant always know how someone is feeling but having check ups to calculate if they are depressed could be a start. So many suicides could be stoped by this technology.\n\nThis could benifit hospitals by allowing them to take a better look at patients feelings to know if the patient is lying about feeling better just to go home.With doctors being able to know there patients true feelings they can decide when it might be a right time to give them bad news or to know when it will be best to take them into surgery. They wouldnt be able ti smile and say they feel good anymore because the computer would know its a fake smile in the article it says\" imagin being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling,even when they are trying to hide their emotions.\"\n\nThis computer would bring good to the students and all the other people it could help. It should be used to help students that way the school would know if they are depressed,bored,or tired. grades would improve and students would like going to school more and learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the challenge of exploring venus the author suggest that studying Venus because int the artical is says '' Venus is often referred to as Earth's tine '' ( para 2 ). This is saying that Venus is as simular to Earth. Another thing the author suggests that studing venus is worthy, in the artical it says '' NASA has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to sudy venus '' ( para 5 ). This is facting that \"NASA'' is wanting to send scientest to venus to float above the fray. another detal In the artial says that '' researchers can not take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else from a distance'' (para 6). There for the artical is saying that scientists are seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understang venus. All though scientist ans NASA are trying to acomplish the mission to under stand venus they have to get threw many steps in to acomplishing the flight to venus. It says they are striving to meet that challeng presented ny venus has not value, not only because of th insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosty.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well, if i'm being honest with you. I do not believe it is a good thing to do. In certain states, yes. But when it comes to school and kids' education? No. If you put these kinds of computers in schools, all they would do is distract the kids and make them focus on what the computer is doing itself instead of the work. Sure, it can read when you're bored or unhappy. But that doesn't mean it's alright to distract the kids from doing their work.\n\nAlright, so i think it's cool that a computer can tell emotions and how you are feeling and this and that. But in all reality it is just another electronic thing that we do not need in the world. Every year, people and companies come out with more and more stupid ideas for electronics. All i am hearing on TV anymore is about the new iPhones or the new Mac Books. They are cool and all, but you literally just came out with a new one last year. Like it says in the story, \"Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\"\n\nIn conclusion, these new tech designs and programs and electronics are pointless and unuseable. There is no point in putting something in a school that will just distract the kids from learning. Maybe having them at popular restaurants and stuff would help. But in schools? No way. Kids nowadays have a hard enough time learning in school, putting these computers in the schools is not going to help them learn anything quicker.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some say that adolescents should work in society without pay in their leisure time. This is benficial for both, the community and youth. This essay totally agrees with this statement as working without salary provides experience and many community works are completed without any cost.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, when teenagers do any community work without getting any money in return, they get the chance to get experience which is helpful for them to get a job later in the life after completing education. This job experience helps to make their resume stronger than others who do not have any experience and employers prefer to select someone who has some work experience or any volunteer experience. For example, in a recent survey by the university of Saskatchewan, 30% of students who have some community work experience got jobs immediately after graduating.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, when a job is done by adolescents free of cost in the society, it decreases the financial burden on the local government as the government does not need to hire people on wages to do the same task. Therefore, spred money is used to provide other essential services in the community. For instance, according to an article in The Local News newspaper, 20% of the total money spend on the care of water parks in Melfort city comes from the funds saved as a result of work done by teens during their free time which otherwise could cost thousands of dollars.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, community service done by the youth without any penny during their leisure time has advantages to the adolescents as well as to the society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars driving cars? I never thought that the day would come when cars are driving themselves, yet it is right around the corner. Which leads me to be scared do to malfuntions of machines causing injury, But still very excited because of the techonology is very fascinating. Their are so many cars with people driving that get in accidents due to impairment and i believe that this technology can really benefit our society.\n\nTheir are many things that a car with no driver can lead people to think. Like it may lead people to think that maybe sitting in a car and not driving may get boring. Although if they are a passenger in a car are they bored?\n\nAs Dr. Werner Huber added \"We have to interpert the driving fun in a new way.\" In addition to that some maufactures are bringing in-car entertainmet and to me that sounds pretty cool. In contrast to that people may think that this might become a safety hazard. The maunfactures think this can be safer do to the progress in the heads up display system which some cars may have and this can allow people to send a text message and keep their eyes on the road watching for when they may need to take over in driving. Finally this leads me to question why the goverment in some states are blocking this technology? To that i can answer with maybe the fear of change. They shouldnt be afraid of that though cause the world is constantly changing and most times change is healthy.\n\nTheir are so many cars with people driving that get in accidents due to impairment and i believe that this technology can really benefit our society. Also all these questions can lead to all the answers to. \"One small step step for a human, leads to one larger step to mankind\" as JFK stated. So lets embrace these ideas with a good welcome.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author is talking about Venus and how people can learn more about vunes and look closer. venus in more than three decades.Numerous factors contribute to venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study.Sometimes Venus can be the closer planet to Earth. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantege point of Earth.\n\nVenus can be dangers because venus is has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. Venus can be dangres for humans because is too hot. Venus temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet it.These conditions are far more extreme then anything humans ancouter on Earth. Vunesian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, poweful earthquakes, and frequent lightning. Venus was\n\nprobably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\n\nVenus is our sister planet venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus can semotime be our nearest option for a planetary visit a crusial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.Venus can be dangers but it can also be the closer planet to Earth.Venus have alot of symilar things with Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir positive grateful mood home parents One example mood created author paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The author stating thankful parents came Another example mood story paragraph auther states They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life A final example mood created author paragraph says I never forget parents turned simple house home saying quote means grateful parents sacrefice come also able raised traditional Cuban way He also means many great memories growing home bonded together multiracial neighbor s battle tough times The memoir positive happy chearful mood Cuban family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think its possible for a computer to create an emotional expression of a human face? A software created by professor Thomas Huang, of the Beckman institute for Advance Science at the University of Illinois, which allows a computer to create an actual emotional expression of a person. The whole idea of a computer to create emotional expressions would be benifical to use in different arts like entertainment, artificial inteligence, and even posible to save lifes.\n\nUsing the computer software could be used to create facial animation for entertainment like movies. This coding system would be perfect for movies when trying to make a giant fictional beast to life with real facial movement. The Facial Action Coding System would not just work only for the big screen movies, but as well for video games. Games themselves are created entirely in 3-D models in the computer, for the facial software to make facial animation for the characters to make them even more real.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be great for make a new block-buster movie or a new hit video game, but it could help led the way for potentially creating a new system of", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial action coding sytsem should be used because it is a good way to help students and people, First off i think if this is being used on students it is a really good idea because some students be needing help and they are to scared to ask for help and in this way the computer can help and make the lesson easy for the students this might give the students moure confidence of doing something and trying. Also if a student is bored this will make the lesson not as boring as it is for the student. This is a good way to help people to what if they are going through something and they need help or want to talk to somebody but dont want to tell anybody the facial action coding can let somebody know and friends or family can take action. Plus it is cool because you can find out alot of things about old pictuers, Like if you want to find out or just see how somebody is feeling you can use that. This is really cool beacsue you can find out alot of feelings on just a picture. Lets talk about the Mona Lisa , they used this on her and found out how she was feeling in that painting. She was feeling happy for the most part but a little bit of other emotions with that. This is a really cool way to communicate with people, This is also a cool way to make movies and video games better and more reall felling you know.? This can sence 44 muscle in your face and will let you know how your felling just of your expression. We have expressions every day but sometimes can be hard to tell how we are feeling. Most people dont know how other people feel but this can let other people understand what they are going through. This can also let people track the emotion they want to know if that person is feeling. Yes i do think that this system should be used. It can help alot. This would be very useful in alot of things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We library point life Have ever looking around seen something offensive something didnt agree What chance takin shelves good Or someone else choice Would allow In opinion I would say Someone right take reading material shelves offensive way life I say like look simple For example rap hip hop culture someone finds offensive Would give right keep Or would really want someone else Lets say christian atheist finds offence untruthfull takin shelves Does sound fair If someone like certain topic culture finds offensive would simply stay away The point take something shelves would adventually nothing left Respect cultures ways life stay away offends Would like someone like takin shelves I would people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Claim: This story is really about how many people studying about Mona Lisa and how the way her mood is.\n\nEvidence: Lots of people try to figure out her history on her emotions. Someone uses a 3d computer and he figures out that she has 6 other emotions of herself.\n\nIntro: Some people try to study her history from back in the day because of why she dosent smile that often and why is she always angry.\n\nBody: Some people perform an impressive calculation on her feelings by the look of her face.\n\nConclusion: The whole story is about why people wonder why Mona Lisa never smiles that often. People uses lots of technology to try to figure out the way her mood was before she had 6 different emotions someone calls the person who knows lots of history about the story. Then they figure out that she did finaly smile during a painting class. By the look of her face the first time that someone notist lots of people were impressed it raised your eyebrows when you where surprised. Her smile really did change some back story about her first mood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present, aerial range of congestion is the greatest problem in a number of cities as well as towns throughout the Universe. However, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this rush also the possible solutions.\r\n\r\nFirstly, one of the biggest reasons behind huge traffic jams is unprofessional drivers who don't bother to maintain the traffic rules. Secondly, traffic polices are responsible for this irritating situation as they are failed to do their duty properly. Thirdly, narrow roads in busy places are also accountable for this inconvenience. Furthermore, ignorance of this problem of government can't be denied. In contrast, less amount of zebra crossings and over-bridges is another cause behind this. Moreover, a number of shops can be seen on the footpaths for which people can't use the roads properly, as a result, they have to take another way which may create a traffic jam.\r\n\r\nHowever, there can be several solutions to cope with this problem. Firstly, the government has to make the rules and regulations of traffic jams very strict. Secondly, those who will not follow these rules have to give a huge amount of fines. Thirdly, traffic policies have to be more aware to control this issue. In addition, roads should be wider at least in the rush cities and towns. Again, the transportation system should change like in Delhi after the starting of the Delhi metro rail, congestion has reduced too much. Moreover, more and more zebra crossings and over-bridges need to build in these sectors. Furthermore, the small shops which captured the footpaths have to be removed must, if people want to deal with this traffic jam.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, traffic jam is a problem which can easily sort out, if the community and government want to give them a try.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are positive and negative effects of driverless cars. At the moment there seem to be more negative than positive effects. I think driverless cars shouldn't be developed.\n\nOne of the ideas for making driverless cars was to also make special roads for the cars to drive on. The roads had electrical cables that sent signals to the car. This worked but it would cost a lot of money to change all the roads. The company would spend more money building special roads than it costs to make driverless cars.\n\nAnother negative effect of driverless cars is that the driver still needs to be alert and ready to drive. Driverless cars can steer and brake by themselves, but drivers have to be ready to drive if there is construction or an accident on the road. If the driver isn't paying attention they will not know when they need to drive.\n\nThe final negative effect about driverless cars is the driving laws. Driving laws are about keeping people safe and the driver being alert at all times. If driverless cars are created, then new laws have to be made. One of the current driving laws is that the driver is at fault if there is an accident. Driverless cars won't be driven by humans. So if there is an accident, who will be responsible?\n\nDriverless cars can be possible, but farther into the future. There are many problems that come from driverless cars. Manufacturers and automakers need to solve the problems before they make more driverless cars. That's why I don't think driverless cars should be developed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "About twenty five years ago, NASA was taking photos of the landing site for sister ship Viking 2 on Mars. This region they were taking photos on was called Cydonia. While taking the photos, they saw a big face like structure just on the surface of Mars. NASA soon found out it wasn't a real face, but a Martian mesa. They posted the image for the public to see thinking that it was cool and interesting. The public didn't think the same though. This brought up a lot of conspiracy theorists, and people went into a small panic.\n\nI am a scientist at NASA, and I can tell you that this little rumor of the Martian mesa found on Mars being a face that aliens created can be proven wrong. The first picture ever taken of this \"face\" was very blurry, and not clear enough to really tell what it was. So, on April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his team got another picture. This picture was ten times sharper (better) than the original photos. These photos proved that the \"face\" was nothing other than a land form.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, they went to see the \"face\" again, due to the public still not believing NASA. They took a extraordinary photo on this trip of the \"face\". This photo proved that even if there was a bit of haze over Mars, if there were objects in the picture, you would be able to see it very clearly.\n\nAfter twenty five years of trying to prove to many people that this \"face\" wasn't built by aliens and that it was just a natural landform, some people still don't believe NASA. There are conspiracy theorists still to this day that just don't want to believe no matter how much evidence we give to the public. Martien mesas are common around the Cydonia, and if the landform was thought to be made from aliens, then NASA would intend to figure out what to do with it and how to keep citizens safe. Why would we hide this from you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using the FACS in classrooms to read students emotional expressions is valuable. The Face action Coding System is a new creative piece of technology that can be very fun to use. It is painless and will only read or examine your facial expressions.\n\nWe humans do this all the time without even meaning to, we can look at a friend and tell whether they are having a bad day or not. If we can do it, wouldn't it be neat to see if the FACS can do it also? Technology is so smart in todays world, that the Face Action Coding System would be able to tell if you are making a fake expression or a real one. If classrooms were to invest in this system students would not be forced to use it, it is optional.\n\nI think that it would be amazing to have this system in a classroom. Our computers here at home can't do the or handle the complex algorithms that were used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. I never would have thought that there was so much science and technology that was used to reveal or examine a smile or facial expression(s).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders architects faced several different obstacles dilemnas intefered construction Empire State Building One funds necessary order produce large structure They found constructing reconstructing frame structure time time feeble attempt reach desired perfection Another obstacle occurred entire concept shattered fact every dirigible intended land mast fueled helium The text reads Most digribles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable CAPS This displays severity idea risks like could taken abandoned idea mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout excerpt trying build empire state building builders faced lot hard attempts trying build dock dirigibles One major problem dirigible able land buildings flat roof This stated paragraph excerpt Another problem design elevators stairs passengers travel top building able get dirigible Along designing stairs able build floors area blimp would land This supported paragraph reading After trying build big building builders ran major safety concers towards end making The builders think would run problems think safety", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary era, most industries or organizations which are large pay much higher salaries to directors than that to normal employees due to this some people think it is necessary to pay, while others oppose it and consider it unfair. I will discuss both views and give my opinion in the conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, directors are the one who manage the organizations because of this they have a burden on their shoulders more than common employees. To explain, in any company, directors make decisions that are connected to the organization’s future and manage the whole organization, that is why they get higher salaries than normal people. Moreover, directories have more knowledge and skills about work. Thus, directors are paid higher salaries because of their knowledge and their work.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is believed that employees are the main pillar of the organizations. To illustrate, most of the normal work is done by employees. In addition, they spend the most time in the organization doing their work, while other high-position individuals do not spend that much time. That is why it is considered that employees should pay equal salaries as directors as they spend more time in the organization. Additionally, the organization cannot run without employees. Therefore, ordinary employees should get more salaries as they do more work and are considered as a pillar of organizations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my opinion, directors should have more salaries than normal employees as they have more knowledge and skills, also they make some hard decisions about the organization’s future, because of this they have more burden than common employees.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building tallest building ever built To make tallest building Architects design Mooring Mast In building mast many obstacles overcome even obstacles still finishedThe Mooring Mast needed without Empire State Building would tallest world To make Mooring Mast work builders overcome obstacles One main obstacles add Mast would attach steal Mast way foundation Another After designing Mast change original plans building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I like the thought of driverless cars.I think it would be cool to be able to sit in your car and not have to worry about driving much. I think that we would have to change many rules but it would be really cool to be able to sit in a car that can practically drive itself.\n\nNow with\n\nthe change to this type of car we would have to take some things into consideration, like people tyring to drive under the influence and stuff like that. But i'm all for it it would be cool. Car makers have been trying to make these cars since the late 1950s so they have had a vision. Car makers such as General Motors, Toyota, Bmw and, Google. They would have to come up with alot of sensors to be able to stop and go like normal and run everything else that it needs to. Improvement on sensors and computer hardwear and softwear to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own. The cars will work on their own until they get to work zones and around accidents so human still need to be alert when driving a computer type car. They need to have heads-up displays and things that could alert a driver when they need to take over driving.\n\nIn counclusion I think that driverless cars sre a up and coming thing that would be cool to have, but very expensive. And with new things in science and technology people will find a way to make them work. It will take a long time but somehow some way they will find a way to make a driverless car that will one day work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. It's a lot of fun and you can do most of the things you thought you'd never do. I will give you four reasons why you should come join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThe first reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is that you can help people in different countries. I will give you two examples why. First example is that you can go overseas and give countries horses, young cows, and mules. The second example is that you can it'll show your personality and people will like you more. The second reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is that you can travel a lot. There's two examples for this reason too. First example is that you can go to like Europe and China and other places. The second example is that while your working, you go to all of these different places that you never to before. The third reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is that you might have free time to go different spots in that country. Here are two examples for this reason. First example is that you might go to a gift shop and get you some things to take back to your country. The second example is that you can go look at the things that you might wanted to see but never did. My fourth and final reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is that it might change your life. Here are two more examples for this last reason. First example is that you might have thought your life is boring and this was one of a lifetime chance to go to this program. The second example is that you might go to this program and then realize that you want to start joining more and more of these or different kind of programs because it was fun to you.\n\nThose were four reasons why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. I suggest that if you ever get this kind opportunity, you should go try it out because you never know what it could be like. It might change your life or have great adventures for you. They might even do both of those things if you think about it. I know I would want to do this if I had the chance to. So if you get this opportunity, just know that it might have some great things for you in life afterwards.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus is the second plant that is from our sun. Venus is also referred to as Earth's \"Twin\",it is referred to earth's twin because of it's density and size. Many scientist want to go up and explore venus since it is referred to as Earth's Twin.\n\nIt is not a good idea to want to explore such a dangerous planet because that person would be putting their life and themselves in danger. In the passage it states that \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". This quote states that a human would only survive on that planet just for a few hours. Venus is the same as the earth but different.The difference is that in venus the temperatures average is over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on the earth. Even if someone would want to stay up in venus for a long period of time they couldn't because of the heat and how the planet is so different from the earth. Humans can handle the heat and the atomosphere on the earth but for venus you couldn't because humans have been down on earth for so long that there body can't handle different changes, by trying to adjust themselves to a whole different planet.\n\nIn conclusion, their are many curious humans that wonder what is up in venus but it is too dangerous. There are people that are still striving to meet the challenge that has been presented towards them so that they can answer people's curious questions about what's up their and if it is really like earth. Although it is very dangerous they are still working on machines, so that they can last in that type of enviroment that is not earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every vote makes a difference. Every single vote plays a role in electing a president, whether it be directly, or indirectly. The Electoral College has caused a lot of controversy with that thought. \"The Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" (Plumer 14) Where are the facts behind the argument against it? We all hear people complaining and saying these things, but they have no facts as to why abolishing the Electoral College would be beneficial. The Electoral College is working in the peoples' favor and i believe we should keep it.\n\nThere are so many uneducated voters. People that vote for the presidential candidate at the top of the list because they have no clue who any of the people are anyway. If the president was selected by just popular votes who knows what the nation would be like. Every vote counts. Yes, this is true even with Electoral College it just a process to make sure that the votes being sent in are educated and well thought out; not chosen out of laziness. Do we want the people who vote just to say they voted to have a huge say in who runs our country? I sure don't. I'd rather have a trusted group of people who are very well educated take our votes into huge consideration and seal the deal. \"But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nomonee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)...\" (Posner 16). Richard A. Posner goes on to tell us how many times the trust has been betrayed... the most recent being in the election year 2000 and then the only other time the electoral vote did not reflect the popular vote was 1888. There's no reason to change a system that isn't broken.\n\nObviously the system has its flaws, but nothing is perfect. Sure the Electoral College messed up twice, but that isn't some mass amount that was detrimental to our nation. \"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" (Office of the Federal Register 1) It's a compromise that has worked for so long; there's not enough valid reasons to change it.\n\nThe Electoral College gives the right amount of representation to different sized states. \"The Popular vote was very close in Florida; nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes.\" (Posner 21) The majority of the state was in favor of Obams's ideas so 29 Electoral votes would work in their states favor, instead of having an almost tie vote which would make a smaller difference in the outcome. The Electoral College votes are like each states individual votes for the candidate that would make the majority of that one state happy, or that would benefit that one state. So yes, the popular vote may not always win, but the outcome of the presidential election is based on which person was the favorite of the majority of each individual state.\n\nAll in all, the Electoral College works for this nation. It worked for our founding fathers and it's still working for us, no matter what people want to argue. If \"60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" (Plumer 9) then the majority of our country should be able to come up with a valid argument against it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast obstacles builders Empire State Building face attempting allow dirigibles dock many ways In opinion I think Empire State Building familiar different people many knows purpose serve landing spot dirigibles For example The greatest reason one safety Most States use hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable In conclusion one way faced obstaclesIn another way obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attemting dirigibles dock transportation In opinion transportation allows people go one place another For example By dirigibles hailed transportation future The quote I stated means allows passengers go places want In conclusion two examples describes obstacles allow dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes children reading anything thats like Children snhould reading book haves good information information children learning class Well books music stuff read look bad stuff removed shelf children looking Some music bad language children listening music like Also movies inapproriate scenes watched children becaus eits good children see parents something children watching movies inapprroiate scenes magazines inapproiate pictures children young see", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The automobile was made a long time ago to help us move around faster and more efficient,however,have we really thought about the benefits that could come from limiting the usuage of cars such as:Saving money in gas and insurance,Less car crash related injuries and even because its better for the enviroment.\n\nWith limiting the usuage of cars comes many pro's such as saving money. On average,an American spends about thirty-five to fourty dollars on gas per fill-up and one hundred to two hundred dollars a month on insurance a month depending on age,experience,accidents,etc. By limiting your car usage comletely or even just a little just imagine the extra money you'll have aying around for the nessecities and maybe even a ittle you-time. Say you buy a bike and the only time you use your car is to drive to work and anywhere out-of-state,that means that you'll be able to go a week with roughly two gallons of gas. That puts you at about thirty-eight hundred dollars a year where if you were purchasing four or five gallons a week you'd be spending approximately eleven thousand dollars a year. Thats no chump change. You're insurance would gradually decrease due to safe driving and age so along with gas being cheaper,so would the insurance.\n\nFlorida is a state well-known for car crashes due to weather conditions like rain and fog and you can't do anything to change that other than take a different,much safer mode of transportaion such as a bus. Nowadays bus and semi-truck drivers are more experienced and cautius then they used to for one reason,CYB(Cover your Butt).You see major bus and semi-truck companies now that due to the size of their vehicles,if there's ever crash involving one of their autmobiles then they're likely to get blamed cause of the size of the vehicles and so it would make since for them to send their drivers to extensive training and make sure that their trucks are in good hands,which is exactly what they do. Studies show that you're chances of being in a wreck in a bus are one of every one hundred rides while being in a car driven by yourself puts you at a whopping one of ten ridesyur chances of safety are greatly increased.\n\nThe United States of America has no shortage of pollution and that's not helped by the fact that we have one of the largest populations of personal automobiles inhabiting this country. There are many other kinds of pollution that occurrs in the land of the free but most of it like factory smoke,large ship(boat)smoke and even resturant made smoke can not really be stopped or diminished by you or me but one form of pollution we can prevent is automobile smoke. In the US up to fifty percent of greenhouse gas is from cars(certain areas).If you stop using you car and ride a bike even thugh it won't seem like muchyou'd be suprised at the difference. Say a sall cmmunity around yur neighborhood gives up their cars that could account for half a percent of greenhouse gas which is more than it seems. Just ask yourself if you want your friends and family growing up in a dying,polluted world.\n\nIn conclusion,I'm not discrediting the huge help cars can be in our daily lives I'm just saying if we continue along this car-orientated path,pollution may be what ends our daily lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to know how someone was feeling, whether it was a student, family member, or even a friend? Well with the help of the Facial Action Coding System, now you can do just that. Facial Action Coding System or ( FACS ) for short is a new computer program that can classify up to six differnet emotions by the movement of all 44 major facial muscles. This invention was created by Prof. Thomas Huang. But here is the real question, would this technology be valuable in a classroom?\n\nFor us humans, some may find it easy to tell how someone is feeling based on the look on their face. But for others it isn't so easy. Say a teacher for example, is teaching a science lesson. With this type of technology the teacher would be able to tell if his or her students are understanding the topic being taught, or if they are bored and about to fall asleep. This could change every way that a lesson is being taught in every classroom around the world. This could even raise test scores for kids and teens around the globe.\n\nWith this type of technology, you could tell how someone is feeling based on the muscle movements in their face. FACS works based on what's called muscular action units. These action units are all of those 44 major, as well as some minor facial movements. This system is the most accurate system out there for telling how someone is feeling based on their muscle movements. For example, take the zygomatic major. This is the muscle that begins at your cheek bones which helps you create your smile. Or the frontalis pars lateralis muscle. This is the muscle above your eyes which helps raise your eyebrows when you are surprised.\n\nBased on all the research, there is the six basic emotions, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. All these emotions happen in a classroom more then anyone would ever imagine. If students were having trouble understanding a math lesson, then this technology could pick that up if the student didn't say they were confused. This technology could be very useful for teachers because it could give them feedback about what they need to do better, or go over more throughly. It could even give them the chance to even change the whole lesson all together and slow it down for students to understand.\n\nSo how valuable would this technology be in a classroom environment? Well in my opinion it seems very important. I say this because the technology could tell whether a student was comprehending a lesson, and if they weren't. This technology could also give feedback to the teacher to show if they need to show the lesson over so the students could understand the topic better. This technology could possibly even raise test scores based on the feedback it gives teachers, all based on the looks on the students faces. This new technology known as Facial Action Coding System could help teachers comprehend their students and if they are learnig, confused, or even excited.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should, participate in the seagoing cowboys program because from luke's point of veiw it seems fun. Luke had fun by playing baseball and volleyball games with the cowboys. The text stats the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. joining the seagoing cowboys is also fun because you get to see different parts of the world. the text also stats it took about two weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to china.\n\nAnother reason why you should join the seagoing cowboys program' you get to see differnt kinds of people. the text also stats it made me more aware of people of other countries and their need. Also it will make your family to host. The text stats and that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years. I is also fun because u get to play alot of games. The text stats table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading,whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nThis proves that being in seagoin cowboys program", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever explored Venus?\n\nVenus is called the 'evening star'. In our solar system Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus is often referred as Earths twin,' Venus is the clostest planet to Earth in terems of density and size , and accasonally the closest in distence to. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nOn the planets surface tempurtures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experiance on our own planet. Venus has the hottest surface tempurture of any planet in our solar system, even though\n\nMercurry is closer to our sun. The National Aeronautics and space administrations has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to stady Venus. Imagie a bimp\n\nlike vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling the Venusian landscape. NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would you do without car usage? Is there such thing as too much or too little car usage? Many residents or travelers are nearby thier destination and don't nessesaraly need a car to get there. Although, for other's they may need to use a car becasue of extended distance. Limiting car usage has many advantages. For example, in Vauban, Germany streets are completely \"car free\". According to the article \" 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57% sold car's to move here\". Families and friends are much active with each other and can spend more quality time outside of school and work.\n\nWhen there is less car usage more public transportation will be available to thoose who need it more importantly. Also there would be less polution with the gas and air. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\", said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza. Due to the smog that was in France, car's was banned. \"Public transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday\", according to the BBC. Fuel is also a great impact. Do you ever feel like you just work hard for nothing? Money is being wasted on gas, car materials, and car details much more then the things it really needs to be spent on.\n\nLimiting car usage could mean less accidents. Less accidents means less deaths and injuries. Driving could be risky especially in crowdy places with people and other cars. Limiting cars could also mean people getting to know diffrent places often and not just the places they are used to going. Parks and sports centers also have had bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramtically cut traffic; and new resturants and upscale shoppung districts have cropped up. Families are more engaged together and work together to make it to thier destination.\n\nIn conclusion, Do you feel as if car polution should be limited becasue of all the advatages. Limiting car usage has it advantages and disadvatages. Many things could possibly happen. According to The end of Car Culture article, \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportations traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve recources, lower emissions and improve saftey\". The Mobile World Congress is looking for more saftey ways to transport and get to yout destintation when needed. Due to limiting car-usage families and friends can now spend quality time while getting to thier locations, you can go to your nearby places, you could save more money of gas and car details, and also you could prevent less accidents if possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist biking hills extreme heat He also short water supplyl head wrong direction", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College?\n\nSome would say this way of voting is a lack of democratic pedigree and should be abolished. The Electoral College is when the people vote for the elector who are declaring the canidate who recieves the most popular vote. This act is not only unfair but injustice as well. The people should be able to vote directly on who they choose to govern over them. But instead we're using plurality, when a canidate recives more votes than other canidates while not recieving a clear majority of votes. Someone is chosen to speak for them. The Electoral College is very irrational and should be removed from the voting process system.\n\nIt's known to be said that those voting for slate of electors half the time dont know what they're voting for. Some states have reported that they have yet to see campaign ads, or news regarding the election and therefore dont actually know who to pick. The president goes to the states he/she may think have \"swing\" votes and lets him/herself be known pubilically to gain more votes. This is a disirable result because a canidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president. But what about the sates who arent caught up to the political races and would like to know more about it. They may feel disenfranchised- to feel that their votes don not matter. They may feel the new presiodent may disregard their interest and is not interested in being everyone's president. People may believe by voting it goes directly to the canidate but in fact it goes to the electors, who vote. When a vote is placed to a certain canidate it doesnt nessicisarly mean they are going to win. They may win the vote but could lose the presidency. It'd be better if everyone just had a say individually of who they wanted to take president. The Electoral College wasnt a very logical idea.\n\nWho are the\n\n\"Electors\"\n\n? the Electors are slate of electors who parties have selected to make a trusted vote towards the party's nominee.\n\nSource 3, In Defense Of The Elecoral College: Five Reasons T o Keep Our Despised Method Of Choosing The President;\n\nStates that the Electors are rare for the trust to be betrayed, however it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. This hasnt happened sense 2000, when Gore had more popular votes then Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was first time since 1888. But who's to say it can happen again. The Electoral College is a chance being taken that you may or may not win the election based on how many popular votes said person may recieve. This is no shocker that there have been disputes over the outcome of an Electoral College vote, its based on winner-takes-all basis. Source 3, The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. This creates pressure for run-off elections, but is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner. Voters in a presidential election are people who want to express a political prefernece rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election, but thats false.\n\nThe Electoral College? Its not one of the more favorable elections, and is sought out to be uncanny and unfit. The Electoral College is a way for people to interact with the politics taken place, but are manipulated into something else that takes away from being able to have a say in something that will effect said person. We live in a democracy, which means we vote but how can we vote when we don't know who we're voting for. The voting system should remain how it is, with willing participants placing a ballant and knowing that their vote is actually going to matter. Away with the Electoral College!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The created created author memoir happyness happy cause grow courage family Also love said I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love admiration For strength perseverance", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that study of Venus is a worthy pursuit despites the dangers it represents. Even if it is dangerous to go into the Venus and study, it is worth study. The author said that people sent spacecrafts to Venus. But unfortunately, they could get to study. But they do not and would not give up their work. So, author suggest studying Venus is worthy.\n\nStudying Venus is worthy. In the article, the author mentioned how hard and how long people have been trying to reach Venus. The author explained that people have sent the numerous spacecrafts to Venus but spacecraft could not survived the landing more that few hours. \"human have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more that a few hours.\" But knowing that even landing was hard to survived, people try to keep on trying.\n\nKnowing the danger encourage people to keep on trying. The author support the idea by talking about how people have been trying to reach Venus. Also, how people do not give up, but keep on trying to reach the Venus.\n\nAgain the author supports the idea by saying how Astronomers were fascinate by the Venus. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" We can see how it was and why it was important to study the Venus. The author also support his idea by talking about The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) was willing to send its people to study the Venus. \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" We can see in here how the author supports his idea again.\n\nAlso, the author supports his idea by talking about how people were willing to risk their life for studying the Venus. \"Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" The author well supports his idea by mentioning how people were willing to risk their lives. The author also talked about that the some think of the risks of studying Venus as challenges. Also, that many researchers working on innovations which would allpw their machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. \"Or maybe we should think of them as challenges. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" The author supports his idea by telling us hwo people and researchers were eager to study the Venus. The author also mention that NASA is working on approaches to study Venus. \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" The author supports his claim by saying how hard NASA work to study the Venus.\n\nThe author said studying Venus is worthy. The author supports his claim by talking and mentioning how people have been trying to reach the Venus. Also the author mentioned that even if how hard and dangerous it was to reach and study the Venus, people did not give up. The more they know how it was hard to study, the more it encourages people to study the Venus. So, the author supports his idea by mentioning all the things people did, and how they did not give up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that a Facial Action Coding System would be helpful in a classroom setting. I think this because it could show the teacher what students needed help by the ones looking confused or frusturated. This definitly could be a helpful tool when it is more available.\n\nTo go more in depth of how this could be beneficial to a classroom would be it helping confused students who are maybe more shy than others and dont ask the teacher for help when they need it. This program could be in their computer and then it could tell the teacher who looked confused about the work and they could go over and help them easier. Also like it says in the article \"Then it could modify the lesson, like a effective human instructor.\" Which is another great idea!\n\nThis may not even just help the students, but it could help the teachers become better teachers. This could be done because lets say the students go home and 90% of them look confused or frusturated well the teacher could see that and could either explain it again the next day or make the assignment easier to do. Which from my experience of being a student that would be super nice to have.\n\nFinally if the teacher was really dedicated to their job they could see if students were bored in their class, if so they could try to make it more fun. This could make students pay more attention in class and could increase the graduation rate and even the grade point average of students since they will be having more fun in class and would be more likley to participate.\n\nIn conclusion yes I do think we should get this when it becomes more available to public. I think that there is just so many more positives to having these Facial Action Coding Systems than negatives. It could really be a beneficial thing for schools to have in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The NASA and I think that the face on Mars is just a natural landfrom. In some history people believed that aliens are real. Most still do, but the face that had happeared on Mars is just a natural landfrom.\n\nIn the text it states that \"NASA's Vicking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for it's siter Vicking 2, when it had spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" Now if the human face object was created by aliens then we would have of seen some kind of evidence that they would have left behind.\n\n\"Thousand of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landfrom\". The website could have of not been shown to the public, but the NASA wanted the people to know that their was no aliens involved in \"the Face monument\". Now their might of had been some kind of evidence that their was aliens their. The camera would have caught something even if it was cloudy at the red planet. Technology has gotten alot better the past 25 years so we would have of seen some kind of shape of evidence.\n\nThat the results have been made their was not any aliens involved in the human face shaped object. Landforms are really common on any planets, American West had a river plain that connected to Idaho. The river was not involved with any aliens in it but if we take a picture of Mars, and find a face does it have to be an alien monument?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the challege of exploring Venus. The author provides a claim and a counter claim to his article on why Venus should be explored. The author brings up many good points in his claim and couterclaim on the pro's and con's of inhabiting venus. Overall the author is for exploring and inhabiting Venus he brings up many good points and ways why and how we should explore Venus. Venus would a very dangrous place bur could open oppurtunities and new homes for people.\n\nVenus is a very hot planet that has extreme presssure. Under these circumstances it may seem unhabatible and very dangerous, overall the author brings up a point on how nasa is finding a way to make it safe for people. \"NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\"\"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\"\"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\"\" At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\"\"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" NASA provides a way of living on nasa with blimps that would stay away from the clouds and the storms, and the extreme heat. These conditions would not be the greatest but they would work and could be a way people live on Venus.\n\nA issue concerning Venus is its extreme heat destroring are modern electronics and making them unusable after a certain peroid. But the author provides a way that NASA is using to to use computers under such circumstances they provide that we we can use computers in Venus and that is by using old computers form the 40's and using silicon carbide.\"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venuss surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\"\"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.\"\"The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" Using these types of technology can be used in Venus and can still provide calculations for people. If NASA works harder on the silicon carbide they can provide a much better piece of technolgy thst can work faster and survive longer on Venus so modern tech could still be used on Venus.\n\nIn conclusion habatating Venus would be a rough and long process of making the right equipment, maken the travel and carring so much needed for the journey all ways this process is very dangeorous to the workers and a very long journey. But overall Scientist are looking for planets to habitate and Venus could a choice down the road. The journey would be rough but is should not scare us and make us think the journey is to hard. Putting people on venus would be amazing and could open up other oppurtunities down the road that could make us do the unimagnible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am a NASA scientist and im here to convince you that the Face of Mars is not a face at all. The reason it looks like a face to us is because Humans have a instinct to recognize faces out of objects. That might sound weird but its true if you see your mom or your dad your automaticaly recognize them by their face.\n\nWhat the Face of Mars reaily is is a mesa a natural land form. What you still dont belive me? Well if as you say NASA is hiding the \"Ancient Alien Civilization\" you like to call it why would we do that if we will benifit off of the discovery of aliens. We would get massive funding to try to study the alien race and see how they lived and how they died. So that entire conspiracy would be hurting NASA not helping them. How would that benifit NASA anyway our entire organization is based on the study of the universe around us so your clams are invalid.\n\nAnother thing is that photo you like using in your Hollywood magazines was taken in 1976. Which a poor resolution and the sun was put in a certin position that shadowed the land form to make it look like it had depth and designs in the land form. When NASA released the image titled \"huge rock formation... which people throw that out the window and automatically think its a face in the ground.\n\nMGS even took pictures of the Face on Mars and it didn't look like a face at all really it looked like a regular old mesa like NASA said in 1976 but no one believed us. They just used the picture to get more money for adds and magazines. and didint really care about the mesa because they thought it was to boring and decided to blow it out of proporcine and make it about how we are hiding stuff from the public.\n\nIn 2001 New high-resolution images and 3D altimerty used with NASA's image proved that it was a mesa and confirmed thta NASA mas not lying to the public about the \"Ancient Civilization\" on Mars. So there is my proof that that land form is in fact a mesa on mars and the only \"proof\" you can say is that NASA benifits off of the situation when we dont so i think your neay n this argument. I hope i convinced you some how to stop beliving in this childdish clam against NASA and have a great day!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ended paragraph example everything gets fresh start spring example geese return home winter start new family also winter hibiscus leaves die spring new start I think author uses paragraph last its metaphor everything get fresh start also Saeng get new chance take driving test like plant geese get new chance life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable and useful. Imagine this, you are a child in a boring old science or math class and you are frowning and you are just so bored. Then all of a sudden your teacher is making the lesson more interesting by adding superheros or music. How did she do that? Now put yourself into the shoes of the teacher in that situation. You look on your computer and see that your whole class is bored and angry. Why not make this more interesting by putting on upbeat music and adding glitter and bright colors to your notes? That is what you can do with this new technology.\n\nThis technology would be really useful in all the classrooms. If you put it on the teachers computers it would really bring the childrens grades up and hopefully keep them interested and thinking about what tomorrows lesson is going to be like. With this new technology it might even keep kids out of trouble just so they won't miss their favorite class with their new favorite teacher.\n\nThe text has many many pros of why you would want this program in classrooms. In paragraph one it states, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percest disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" This is when they were talking about the Mona Lisa. The Facial Action Coding System shows all the emotion Mona Lisa was showing even though it is a painting and was painted a very long time ago. In paragraph three the text states, \"happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" and paragraph four, \"Using video imagery, the new emotion recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.\" These examples show all the emotions it can identify, such as the Mona Lisa and her mixed emotions. Another quote says, \"For instance you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" The last two example and quotes I gave prove how intelligent this machine is. It can identify emotions better thanus humans, and we make the facial expressions!\n\nThis technology may be great and all but the only downside is that you can not have it on your laptop, the text states, \"Your home PC can't handles the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" This has some pros and some cons. One con in the text says, \"Imagine a computer thqat knows when you're happy or sad, For examples, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" That could be really upsetting considering how annoying some ads are. For example if you have a cat but it is showing an ad for bird food, what will that be useful for?\n\nIf teachers couldn't have the program for the Facial Action Coding System on their school computers they could always jusrt smile and try to be happy. In paragrqaph nine the text states, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" The author also states, \"A renowned drama coach, Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage. Empathy may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.\" This shows that of a teacher smiles or laughs or changes her voice to a more upbeat pitch, the students may be more happy with the lesson.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars may seem like a great new way to get around but have you ever actually done your research on a car and what they do to the world? You may want to do some reasearch on how cars are actaully not good of an idea to use on a daily basis. There are a lot of citys and towns that want to stop the daily use of cars. Cars may seem like a good idea and like some people say \"yay I dont have to walk anymore\" but if you really knew what cars do then you wouldnt really like them anymore.\n\nCars produce so much pollution in the air, its sickening to know how much they reqally produce. Can you imagine how polluted new york city may be because of so many cars, busses, etc? I think thats why a lot of states are doing the train system, to stop so much pollution and to reduce the amount of cars we use. Like florida for example are starting the \"sunrail\" which is a train system that will take you all the way around town. Also look at this, so many \"smart\" cars are coming soon and electric cars where you charge your car and then you can just go drive and not get gas. They are actually making charging stations for electeric cars now.\n\nIf you start to limit your car use and start using a bus, train, etc you are also saving so much money on gas. like the amount of money you save on gas you can be buying yourself those shoes you wanted or that game youve been wanting to bad. The world is filled with so much pollution and nasty chemicals in the air and some of that is because of your car.. trucks also have so much pollution that its just sickening. Wouldnt it be great if your kids and your grandkids wont have to use a car and they will actaully probably live longer because there isnt as many chemicals in the skies. We may be living longer then the people back then but they didnt have cars so they didnt have any issues with pollution.\n\nCar accidents, thats the most dreaded word ever. I dont think anyone wants to get a phone call saying someone you love or care about has been in a car accident. Thats the worst possible thing. You rarely see accidents with trains, or busses. I think its such a great idea to lower our use of cars and start using other ways to get arond. Most of us have 2 legs we should actually use them sometime and not be lazy and always want to drive places. People back then didnt have that option they either walked or didnt go anywhere at all. So we should lower/stop our use of cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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