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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers that could read emotions\n\nin classroms would be great.Have you ever sat their in class confused waiting for the teacher to come but he/she had to go to other people first.With theese computers that can read emotions it can see exatly how you feel about the work.It can help the teacher figure out the problem whether your bored and not doing it or geniunly confused.This would be a big help in big classrooms.\n\nYes we should use this technology in classrooms.It would be able to help very much with the teacher theese computers being able to read facial expression could be very uselful to kno exactly how the student feels doing the work.Than it can edit the work to adjust it for you to make it more understandable.This could be a big help when your not able to get around to evry individual in a class.\n\nSo yes I agree that theese computers could be a big help.Theese computers could really help by editing the lessons and all making sure everybody understands what their doing.It also is good feed back to teachers trying to find the problem.Theese computers could be very benificial to classrooms I think schools should start trying them out.\n\nTeachers can not individully talk to everyone so this would be very efficient for a classroom.Everyone learns diffrently so the fact that it could modify a lesson to specifically fit you is amazing it helps your odds of knowing how to do the problem go up.Theese computers would be on your side putting students in a position to pass or be able to do something.It truely helps reveal whats going through a students head while their testing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Honesly I think the Driverless Car is great idea but i could definetly think of some reasons on why it wouldn't be the best idea for the young and old people of America.\n\nWell one is sterring, in the story it says that the car can drive for you but you still have to look out for road blocks, car crashes, road construction, maybe animals, evan humans. I just think that people will get distracted after being amazed by the car driving itself in which i means by phones or anything else.Like I said i think people will get distracted by their phones because teenagers and adults already get disdracted by phones and they dont have the car to have drive for them.\n\nAnother problem could be when in the future if we all have self driving cars then the kids will never know how to drive a car in case of emergency. They could panic an either hit the gas and make the car go faster and then hit something. They could also not be paying attention and all they need to do if theres something in their way and about to hit them is breakc but instead to try and use the handle and swerve out of control and hit ther cars creating a huge car crash.\n\nAlthough there are many great ideas for this car there are just as many bad ideas for this car that need to be able to be fixed right now before something bad happens instead of the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are in a debate, of whether having a vast number of television channels will not affect the standard of programs or not. One of the massive technological investigation was television, which has been a popular source of entertainment among humans regardless of any age barrier. Many TV channels can be detrimental to the audiences since it can mitigate the standard of the programs conducted. The pros and cons of this opinion will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, nowadays we can find many numbers of television channels unlike in the past however, every channel has almost the same programs presented in their own way to their fans, So they have their own fan-base. Contrastly, it would have been an ideal work if they can have one channel and try to make the programs to shine brighter with good ideas, presenters, and so on as an example, Discovery channel is the most prevalent documentary channel that was ever known but now there are many now, but they lack the standardization of that channel.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, having many tv channels has boosted the chances of entertainment for the audiences not only that it has given a broader range of job opportunities for many presenters, since having few tv channels will narrow down this path. However, there should be a competition between TV channels, so that they will try to overcome another by putting their maximum effort into it. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is a known fact that many are a hindrance to life unlike less, hence the quality of Television programs would be more visible when they are enriched with high resources and dedication. Besides all these factors considered it is wise thinking to have a limited number of Television channels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studies have been proven that people are starting to not drive cars as much, Americans are buying fewer cars, and getting fewer licenses. There are several advantages to not driving cars every where, beneficial implications for carbon emissions, the environment and improves safety.\n\nVauban's streets in germany are completely \"car free.\" People who do not drive cars any more and ride bikes, walks or rides the tram are said to be more happier this way. A mother of two walks and rides her bikes every where with her kids and does not feel as tense and stressed as she did when she was driving.\n\nAlso a huge advantage is it drastically reduces greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. Diesel fuel was banned in France since tax policies favored dieselover gasoline. Delivery companiess complained of lost revenue, but exceptions were made, plug-in-cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers.\n\nIn Paris there were days of near record pollution, so they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the city. April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below average and equal to the country in January 1995. \"The rate of car ownership per household and per person came down two to three years before the downturn.\" Michael Sivak stated. New York has a new bike sharing program and the skyrocketing bridges and tunnel tolls reflect people to want to not drive cars anymore.\n\nA study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009, just shows you that the beneficial implications, environment and easier way of saving money does make people want to start biking, walking, using a tram, etc. Those examples I gave you are a few advantages of limiting car use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s modern society, consumers encounter quite a large number of advertisements on a daily basis. I personally believe that the demerits of this trend are more significant than the merits.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, advertisements can have beneficial effects on both businesses and consumers. As regards firms that publish the adverts, their products can be introduced to a substantial number of customers. This will help these organizations increase their sales and profits. As for consumers, they can easily access and recognize various new product types. Also, it is effortless for purchasers to compare the functions and prices of different products. For example, a pair of shoes can have many prices and their quality is also dissimilar. Therefore, adverts may allow/enable buyers to choose products which are suitable for their needs and budget. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I strongly believe the disadvantages of advertisements are more concerning, especially for consumers. Firstly, having to see too much advertising on a daily basis can annoy people. If advertisements appear too frequently, they may interfere with people’s daily activities. For example, it can be irritating when one has to turn off multiple adverts that appear when they are watching their favorite movie on the Internet. Secondly, there are a lot of false advertisements which will adversely affect consumers. To increase sales and promote their products, businesses often look to famous figures to represent their products. However, these people may not have knowledge of the product they advertise and use their influence to overstate the utility and function of the product without caring about the health, finance and benefits of consumers.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, advertisements bring benefits not only for companies but also for consumers. However, I firmly believe that in addition to the upsides of advertising, there are still many detrimental aspects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of those who are becoming interested in the place they live in is increasing day by day in some places of the world. In this essay, I will describe the causes associated with this trend and will try to answer the question of how humans can do this. Firstly, I will share the idea of wealth people are searching for and secondly, I will explore the way an individual is able to define the story of his place. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the first reason to find out what is hidden in your house, for example, gold or fossil fuels is to become reach. Moreover, a person will become an owner of this wealth and only he will decide what to do with it. For instance, many Americans find something necessary for the government on their lands, such pieces of history or maybe their lands were occupied by famous people in the past and the authorities want to buy their places paying big sums of money. On top of that, if someone succeeded in his searches, he would probably become famous and this is a good motivation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it can be really challenging to get information about the building, especially, if this was constructed two hundred more years ago. In my opinion, it can be found via the internet and if something unordinary happened in this construction, a person will immediately find out this. Another decision could be, to go to the governmental archive and ask them to prepare data about the house. On top of that, there are representatives of the old generation who can tell us some facts or, at least, help with advice.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from the arguments I have written above, we can see that there are many reasons to know as much as it is possible about the accommodation we live in and, also there are many ways to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remember I wanted ride dirt bike dad busy I waited till time put gas When wanted ask question wait asked question", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast written Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock In paragraph The Fate Mast first line says The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Strong winds due violent air currents would make impossible dock dirigible Empire State Building The wind would blow dirigible mast New York City In paragraph The Fate Mast line states The practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State building existing law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal dirigibles aircraft even fly urban area like New York One final obstacle safety precautions In paragraph line states Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium If dirigible crash highly flammable gas would create massive disaster Violent winds laws safety precautions docking dirigibles mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think its valuable and there are a lot of reasons why I think that. One reason why I think that is because it can tell you how other students feel. Like one example the Facial Action Coding System can tell the type of mood.\n\nAnother reason why I think the Facial Action Coding System is valuable for use students they can problaby read a lot of the facial expressions, in the text it said\" And how can a computer recognize the the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel!\"\n\nAnother reason why I think its valuable is because it also said about the FACS , that some guy named Eckman, creator of FACS in the passage said that \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness- and then assiciated each with characteristic movements of the ficial muscles.\" Thats another reason why I think that.\n\nWell these are why I think the FACS is valuable in a classroom. To me the they could also read any person expressions, emotions or feelings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars has been going on quite some time now. I think that since they have already wasted all this time and money trying to build a self driven they should keep on working and trying to build a car that is completely 100% self driven. There are many positive aspects of having a self driven car, but there are also some negative aspects.\n\nOne of the positive aspects of having a self driven car is you would no longer have to suffer trying to stay awake on long car trips. You could just set the destination for your car climb in the backseat and take a long nap until you reach your destination. Or you could watch a movie until you get there. Another positive aspect is you would be able to text while the car is driving. You would be able to do that because the car is driving itself so you don't have to have your eyes on the road the entire trip. One of the most positive aspects of a self driven car is there would most likely be a large decline in car accidents. If there's a decline in car accidents that would also mean there would be a decline in deaths because of car crashes.\n\nNow for the negative aspects. One of the negative aspects of a self driven car is there would have to be a ton of law changes. The laws would need to change because like the passage said \"traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times\". Because of that most states don't allow self driven cars to even be tested. That is one law that would need changed because if you continue to develop the car and its still illegal to drive then you have just wasted a lot of time and money to make a car you can't drive. Another negative aspect is someone \"driving\" a self driven car and they get in an accident and someone gets hurt, who should be at fault, the driver or the person who made the vehicle? Another negative aspect is that the car still isn't 100% self driven. The human in the vehicle still has to take control sometimes to navigate through certain situations.\n\nLike I said in the beginning there are both positive and negative aspects of a self driven car. I think they should continue to develop the car because it could be very useful in the future. With that being said I don't think I would ever want to own one because I like to be in control of my vehicle, but I would like to test one out someday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I for one am against the manufacturing and widespread use of \"autonomous\" cars. For one, the cars aren't even truly autonomous: a driver is still required to even operate the vehicle. The cars are alos going to be very expensive. Cars are already fairly expensive, but add in infrared and 3-D recognition technology and cars will quickly go from something that is obtainable by anyone to something that is unheard of in the lower middle class and beyond. In addition, the creation of cars in general has already affected the world drastically, especially America. The invention of the automobile put less work on Americans and as a result of that, we've become increasingly lazy. Imagine a car that doesn't even need to be driven, a person simply sitting in it waiting to arrive at their destination, which adds to my other point of the cost: there's a reason that car services are so expensive, which is because they're a luxury. My final point is the risk and resources that would have to come into play with an invention like this.\n\nAs I said before, the price of such an invention would be astronomical. The average brand new car costs around ten thousand dollars. If you add in another eight thousand dollars in scanners and situational recognition systems, then you've almost doubled the price of the car! This is my point when I say that the lower middle class and below would have their hopes dwindling, and do the wealthy upper class really need a new reason to look down on the working class? Even the upper middle class people can't just toss out almost twenty thousand dollars for a car at a moments notice.No, not at all. I personally believet that given the choice between driving and sacrificing a huge sum of money, most people would choose to drive.\n\nMy next point is this: Americans are extremely lazy, in mind and body. Yes, the cars are implanted with warning systems to instruct the driver to take over sontrol of the vehicle, but that's assuming the driver cares enough to react in time. That's assuming the driver is even paying attention to the car itself, let alone the road! One word: texting. Even when people drive the cars, accidents happen because people pay more attention to their phones than the road without reason. Can you imagine if they actually had the freedom to neglect their responsibilities because of a so-called autonomous car? The amount of accidents would rise dramatically, which brings me to my final point.\n\nNow, we all know that new innovations normally come at a cost. That's a given. These cars, however, step over the bounds of being a cost and become a travesty. First of all, these cars still have glitches to work out and companies don't want to take the time to work them out. If these cars are sold to the public, how many lives could possibly be lost because of a simple programming error before the cars are recalled? It would be far too late. Also, I mentioned the cost. Well, that doesn't just come in the loss of life. It is also present in the amount of time and money will be spent on the research, development, and manufacturing of these cars. Far too much money will be spent on something that is both completely unnecessary and a gross misuse of resources.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that \"autonomous\" cars are, for lack of a better word, stupid. Paying more money for less safety and more laziness simply seems counterintuitive to me and my goals. I'd rather have the self assurance of driving my own car and being responsible for what happens to me and my fellow drivers. Not only would I feel safer with myself behind the wheel, but I would feel safer with everyone else behind their own wheels as well. To summarize, \"autonomous\" cars are expensive, dangerous, and unecessary, to say the least.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join the Seagoin Cowboys program. I got to see exciting new things, and had fun while on the way to return from these journeys. I played games with Luke and these journeys opened up my world. I became aware of other people and their needs.\n\nI had many adventures while I was in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I toured an excavated castle in Crete while on my way to China. I got to see the Acropolis in Greece when we arrived. I also had the amazing experience of taking a Gondola ride in Venice, Italy, through the \"streets of water.\"\n\nI had many moments of fun on the way back from my travels. Luke and I played Volleyball, and baseball in the holds where the animals had been housed. I played table-tennis, fencing and boxing also with luke. I read when on the way back from my journeys, along with whittling. I enjoyed my many games with Luke and made many great memories with Luke.\n\nWhile on these journeys, they opened up a whole new world for me. I became aware of other countries and their needs. The awareness stayed with me throughout my life. My family hosted a number of international students and visitors, becauseof this, it made them aware of the other countries needs also.\n\nIn conclusion, I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You will have many adventures throughout your journeys, and will make great merories with your fellow Seagoing Cowboys. If you like to help out, you should join and it will help you become aware of the countries that DO need help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an ongoing debate about whether customs and traditional ways of behaviour are still relevant in today's modern life. Although some argue that many customs are outdated and no longer serve a purpose, others believe that these traditions are an essential part of our culture and should be preserved. In my opinion, I agree with the latter group and believe that many customs and traditional ways of behaviour are worth keeping.\r\n\r\nFirstly, customs are an essential part of our cultural identity. They help us understand where we came from, and they provide us with a sense of belonging. Our traditions are what make us unique, and they connect us to our heritage. For example, the celebration of festivals and ceremonies is a tradition deeply ingrained in many cultures. These events bring people together and provide a platform to exchange ideas and share cultural experiences. As a result, traditional ways of behaviour are essential in promoting cultural diversity and social cohesion.\r\n\r\nSecondly, many customs and traditional ways of behaviour have practical benefits that are still relevant today. For instance, the practice of eating together as a family is a tradition that has been passed down through generations.p, and it has been shown to have many benefits, including improved communication and stronger family relationships. Similarly, many customs and traditional ways of behaviours that promote respect, honesty, and integrity are still essential in modern life. These values are universally recognized as positive, and they help to foster strong communities and relationships.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though some argue that customs and traditional ways of behaviour are outdated and no longer relevant, I believe that they are an essential part of our culture and should be preserved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a teacher that always helps you because they know how you feel about the class. Well this dream might not be too far away because prefessor Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, and his colleagues have made software that can precisely calculate human emotions. This technology can be especially beneficial to us students because it conveys our exact feelings and emotions to our teachers who can then help us and give us feedback on the material. This new breakthrough in technology could mean massive changes in modern education.\n\nAs Dr. Huang coherantly demonstrates, there is no reason to doubt that computers can accurately read your emotions. People say things like \"Computers will never know feeling\" or \"Emotions aren't just ones and zeros\" but the facts hold true, this new mathmatically based software is both trustworthy and accurate. This new technology is a game changer because as Dr. Huang says,\n\n\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" (Huang) and to students that might be shy or not clear when they talk, this means that they will be heard. This means that nobody is left to figure it out on their own.\n\nAs we all know, there are some teachers that are not the best. But with Dr. Huang's new software, every classroom could be at maximum efficiency. Dr. Huang ensures us that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" and that this would cause immediate action because it would then \"Modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (Huang). The time of students suffering through class is over, personalized lesson planning is in.\n\nAs you reflect on this article, try to imagine how easy it would be to communicate with your teachers if they could read your emotions. New technology is the future of the classroom and as shown, it can be more than beneficial to both teachers and students when it comes to conveying emotions. Nobody should have to make a big effort to tell someone how they feel, and nobody should be left behind because their teacher can't understand what they are trying to tell them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the virtual world connecting people more than ever, it becomes hard to notice the disadvantages of living in it. However, The virtual world is illusory and creates the impression of protection and stability, but only real-world interaction can give us true peace and confidence.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, social networking reduces distances. At the moment, we can communicate in real-time with people thousands of kilometres away, creating connections and friendships. In addition, the news is more at our disposal and we can be up to date with any event whenever we want, such as the latest scientific inventions, the most popular commodities or the recent eye-catching lawsuits. However, when living in a virtual world, we are actually creating an artificial environment that we confuse with the real one. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, in this new world of virtual communications, we still express ourselves in real-world ways that don’t always work in this special context. Examples can be seen when we sent an email or a text meaning one thing but the recipient took it in a completely different way. This is because online interaction lacks the emotions conveyed by our happy smiles, concerning looks or the tender touch of our hand.\r\n\r\nSecondly, with the internet turning into an impressive power, many people have started to utilize it as a real source of income, promoting all kinds of fake news in exchange for earnings and increasing the energy consumed in filtering the noise. What’s worse, content-based algorithms are creating a ‘bubble’ where individuals got fed more of the same thing based on past searches or comments. Consequently, by filtering out what the algorithms believe to be unattractive to their users, the social media platforms are in fact narrowing what the users could know.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems that social media is opening lots of doors for its users. However, they are losing the insights, serendipity and surprises that early web users experienced before algorithms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There's a new software, the Facial Action Coding System, and has promising applications for a variety of industries. It can be able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they try to hide their emotions. I think the use of this technology that reads the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can help teachers know how students are really feeling, not by how they pretend to feel. Students can fake emotions by fake smiling when they're down or students can look sad, but be alright and just not be smiling.\n\nThe text states \"the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, with all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Dr Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of the Facial Action Coding System. Eckman has classified six basic emotions, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. They are associated with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" So the system has most of the emotions that are used in the everday life. When your muscles move it helps determine your emotion a little better. Some examples, are your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when you're surprised and your orbicularis oris tightens your lips to show anger.\n\nSecondly, the facial expressions for each emotion are broad and you can see mixed emotions. In the text it said \"There's universal emotions even though individuals often show varying degrees of expressions\n\n(like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movement-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighing the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face. \" When a person is sad and mad, the video imagery can help figure that out. You may not know why they're mad and sad, but you know how they are feeling and something is going on. Then, maybe a teacher can help the student let their emotions out and open to them on why they're feeling different emotions and what's going to cause them to be the way they are.\n\nIn addition, in the text it talked about how humans can calculate other people's expression everyday like being able to tell how a friend is feeling by just looking at their face, but we could have some trouble if their face is worry and other people think they're just tired. In the text, it stated :Dr Huang ovserves that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. Perhaps Dr Huang's emotion algorithms are a different sort of \"Da Vinci Code\". So even back then artists could draw people with perfect muscles showing their true emotions like da Vinci with Mona Lisa. The Mona Lisa demonstration is intended to bring a smile to your face to show how much the computer can do. It truly is amazing because technology is so advanced, but this technology you could really get a good use out of it for students in their classrooms, mostly for kids who are quiet and just keep to themselves. The text also stated, \"for example if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" It's very helpful for when it shows a student is puzzled on a certain material that is being taught and it can notify the teacher. If the student was shy to ask questions in front of everyone or if they were embarassed to say anything, the teacher woud know and would be able to help the student individually.\n\nFurthermore, the article talked about how moving your muscles helps express your emotions, which is how the Coding system is able to catch onto how you're feeling and if you're hiding your emotions. Examples from the text are, there is an indicator that indicated the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. \"In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth. Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes. But in a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius. To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. According to the Facial Feeback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only exresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" When faking smiling people can detect it by the way your mouth looks. It's better to just show your true emotions because there may be many people who can tell your true emotions and when you have the technology in classrooms, teachers will be able to tell your mood.\n\nIn conclusion, I think the use of the technology that reads the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valueable. There are many reasons on how it helps and how it works which are several stated above. It's truly amazing techonology and is very advanced and can detect every little thing, like when faking an emotion or having multiple emotions. This will help teachers in their classrooms when a student is confused. Students won't be able to fake their emotions and someone can help when there is sadness that is detected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, in a wide number of nations, more and more people are revealing the desire to trace the origin of their current house or building. From my perspective, there are numerous motives for their action and several ways to achieve this, which will be illustrated in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, it is true that there are a plethora of rational reasons for this trend. The primary reason is that the house owner might come across a detail of the house that is bizarre or something they have never encountered before, which makes them curious. As a result, they start to do research about that detail and eventually find the information about their living space. Another reason is that historical documentaries and films influenced people to be immersed in finding the history of their home and their surroundings. For example, after watching a show about discovering ancient buildings, you might recognize that there is a chance that your house could have mystery and interesting stories while it was being constructed, which encourages you to start your journey exploring your house. \r\n\r\nAs for the means of doing this, there are various measures for people to sacrifice their desire. The most effortless way is to ask the previous owner, the senior residences or your parents about what you are wondering. As they have been taking up residence in that place for a long period of time, they can provide you with useful insights and answer your questions. Additionally, you can do the research on your own since there is a wide range of reliable sources that you can consult, such as the local library or the internet. By doing this, not only can you discover the history of your home but, you can also acquire knowledge about the whole area and maybe the city where you are staying in. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people can pick up seeking historical details about their living space for a variety of motives, namely curiosity and being influenced by documentation. And some solutions to accomplish this goal is to ask the seniors or to find references on your own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, FACE is not created by aliens. as a person who works for nasa face is not created by aliens. i say this because Face is a naural landform found on mars. if you look at the pictures you can find that the imagae is getting clearer and clearer. Have you ever seen an alien in real life? do you belive that an alien has seen a human before? At first NASA\n\nthought it was just a martian mesa that made it look like a eygptian pharoah. Afer a couple days had past we unveild the image wo the whole would could see the photo. When the image was seen by people the caption under image was \" It ewsembles a human head, with eyes, nose, and mouth.''\n\nHave you even seen an image that it looks like a person? Well, that's what we found on Mars. After a few years had past on April 5, 1998, Michael Mailen and his Mars Orbiter Camera got a picture ten times better from before. When the picture was uploaded a website it was revealing a natural land form and no alien monument after all. Since the image was uploaded not everyone was satisfied. Skeptics, still beleve that alien was hiddenby haze. To prove skepicts wrong MGS went for a second look. When they went they captured an extraordinary picture of ''Face'' for the second time.\n\nFinally I can say that ''Face on Mars'' was not created by aliens. The image actually shows that the Martian qquivalent of a buttle or mesa which a common around the America West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In way many books put library shelf reason Some books take race sexism bullying ect extreme Putting child s shoes read books magazines movies music ect would scary The languages movies music think Would want child s go year olds think cool others Remember back days young parents nt worry generation nt like generations Well generations come probably get worse nt something Taking books shelf taking profanities song hurt child teenager one bit These things telling children ok sex smoke drink even cuss I know mother worries s always calling check asking day problems today If work together taking care profanities bet world would much safer nicer place Bullying would nt problem anymore neither would cyer space drugs alcohol You need step show children things exceptable nessesary life Remember whole life without sex drugs profanities So next time think going buy dvd cd preview buy Make sure child listened wouldnt hurtful profanities Make sure talk child right wrong Lets make profanities go away If nt something want child listen nt listen either", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I recently heard debate whether computers used often Computers unhealthy I think generally re helpful They give us many oportunities would nt exist without I ll describe I mean following letter First I ll explain one advantages computers Studying school work Computers provide people ways research things For students something like research project essay For adults could information starting business In cases computers used get information simpler way perhaps visiting library I personally know website called teachers set online tests students This would possible without computers Computer online courses even taken student taugh internet rather person This advantage someone ca nt always get classes I would also like mention computers provide popular form communication Email I These methods communication become extreamly popular recently I use I think people bad prevents interacting real world But general I think s helpful It also gives parents teachers another way communicate These many ways computers helpful Lastly I d like talk computers benefit adults specifically I know many people pay bills online This becaus think nt hassle mail bills every month Computers greatly reduce hassle They also make easier buy things need look jobs many things Without computers things like looking jobs would require lot work These hundreds thousands ways computers helpful In conclusion I think I ve made point clear Any thing moderation okay People argue computers unhealthy speak use computers much Generally case Usually computers much good bad make persons life much easier They help much education even alone I think enough convince computers helpful But I said I hope I made point clear I hope agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world, many people believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally, and financially unable to look after themselves. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.\n\nOne of the most important reasons why younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members is when they are physically ill. For example, according to the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that children should take care of their parents when they are sick. For example, taking them to see a doctor at the hospital or buying some medicine for them. There is the possibility that reduces the rate of illness of their parents. This example shows that the younger family plays a major role in the health of the older family. \n\nAnother reason to support this is the fact that adolescents should take care of their parent’s emotional well-being. This is due to the fact that adults want their children to show interest and take care. To illustrate this, in recent news, it has been reported that children who take their parents out for outings every week bring more happiness to their parents' emotional well-being compared to the group of children who never take their parents out. This case makes increase emotional well-being.\n\nIn conclusion, it is undoubtedly true that younger family members should take care of and support older family members because parents will increase happiness both physically and mentally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The increasingly of people in many places have some curiosities on finding the history of their living house. In my opinion, this finding history trend is so popular right now because some movies theory on people's house and people currently like to talk about their stories online.\r\n\r\nInitially, one of the most evident reasons why people delicate time to research about their properties is because the inspiration in some movies, especially in those thriller ones, making them really curious about is there any treasures in their home. Take the surban in the US, for example, there are almost the same structure of houses, which can be used at least in 50 years. Houses with dark basements and attics are very similar to what happend in the films. As a result, after watching these sorts of stories inspired t'the explorers' to check on their houses' history. \r\n\r\nSecondly, another reason for this phenomenon could be the new interest of the society on social media, which causes some young people tend to create topics for everyone to debate on internet, and of course if there something intriguing about their house, they will definately take this straight to the post. \r\n\r\nLastly, I believe the best way to answer to this puzzle is to ask their neighbors. Some older people, who have spent almost their lives in the same neighborhood, can know better than anyone else. They may acknowledge some of the previous owners and even their stories. They properly notice if there any unsual thing in their areas.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some movies or tv series are appealled people due to its myterious theory about the house along with the increasingly of young generation love to bring their life on internet, making the finding about history about their houses in line with. To get to know more clearly young people should choose to ask the elderly in their neighborhood help them out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime,\" is what Luke Bomberger friend's might say about him and that all of you might think when it came to the Seagoing Cowboys program. Luke was just an average guy with 2 part-time jobs, until his friend invited him to the Seagoing Cowboy program. After that, he was very happy with himself. You should join, too! You'll help, save lives, bring smiles to a lot of faces.\n\nFirst, let's talk about helping. I know what your thinking, you might say your wasting your time. Well, not only will you help people that are in need of it, but you will help yourself, too! Like I said before, Luke was a normal guy and had 2 part-time jobs. When he started the program, he helped himself by becoming a better person and save lives. I infer that he won't be stuck with another job like his old ones after doing the things he did to help others.\n\nNext, you will save lives, you will even get help from other nations! You might say that you won't do anything special when you join, so why join at all? When you join this program, you willl sign not just a paper, but you will also sign hope to survivers of World War II. You will provide food, animals, and more! Plus, to make it even better, 44 other nations will also help do the same! Maybe, once you've joined, you can see the all the lives you will save benifit, just like you will after joining this program.\n\nLast, the smiles you'll bring. Some might say you do nothing important if you join. Well, you do do something important. You will bring smiles to those you provide health to, smiles to yourself for finally getting out of that job, you'll be giving smiles to a lot of people for fun, that sounds pretty imortant to me! Luke got to see the Panama Canal, China, Europe, and he even got to see the Acropolis in Greece, and more, that brought a smile to his face, too. I'm guessing a smile is growing on your face just by hearing all of this. And to think, this could all happen to you, too!\n\nTo review, you'll get smiles, save lives, and help those in need as well as yourself. Luke was never the same. He was in love with his new job as a Seagoing Cowboy. Why don't you join, there are lives to save and we need your help. \"But being a Seagoing Cowboys was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the new world to him.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that majority of the masses from few nations, are curious enough to explore into the past of their dwellings. This essay will elaborate and consider the reasons behind this and discuss the possible way of the findings.\r\n\r\nFrom my perspective, there are two major reasons for the people digging into the history of their residence. To begin with, most of the adults are matured and curious to understand the story of the hardship and sacrifices done by their ancestors in development of the home. By studying this, they intend to value the dedication of their previous generation in betterment of themselves and their future generation. In addition to this, the findings of history not only help to recognise one’s identity but also motivate themselves to preserve the memories and build their own house in future. Jaipur Palace, for instance, is well known for its richness and history and is well maintained by many generations of the king who built it.\r\n\r\nFortunately, there are multiple ways and sources where people can do their research. First of all, they can have detailed discussions within their close knit family members. To cite an example, parents or grandparents, undoubtedly are the best guide to explore every branch and root of one’s residential place history. Secondly, if the place of residence is a cultural heritage, then internet can help to give a broader view of understanding of history. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would argue that there is a mix of curiosity and interests, leading people to explore their past of their residing houses which benefits themselves. In my opinion, every individual needs to identify their roots from past for future benefits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is always evolving to make life easier for people. We have computers that can tell us anything at any given time. We even have phones that can tell us anything at any given time. This new Facial Action Coding System could be someting we use in our daily lives as well. It could aso be very beneficial for students as well. Nowadays, students use laptops and different things in their learning enviornment to help them. They spend a lot of their day at school and features such as the Facial Ation Coding System could make their day more enjoyable and productive. This is why it would be beneficial to integrate the Facial Action Coding System into a students classroom.\n\nIt would be beneficial to have this Facial Action Coding System in classrooms because students learn on computers a lot in today's world. Sometimes they take online courses that have a teacher speaking to them on a screen. Dr. Thomas Huang, a proffesor at the Beckam Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (6). Dr. Huang goes on to explain, \"[The computer] could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (6). This would alow a student to understand a lesson more effectively and enjoy the material being presented. All of these features with the software could be beneficial to a student that is wanting to learn and be interested in a topic.\n\nUsing the software would also help with ads that students see on their computers. The ads that student may be seeing could potentialy be distracting and can hurt their learning experience if they do not enjoy the ads. Nick D'Alto explains, \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a smilar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\" (6). This kind of recognition would allow a student to enjoy what they are seeing and to not be distracted by ads that they do not like or are annoying to them.\n\nLastly, teachers could also maybe look at the data gathered by the program to see how their students are doing and if they are interpreting and enjoying the material. The software can calculate many emotions down to percentages. When the software analyzed Mona Lisa's it said she was 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. If teachers were able to analyze that kind of data in their students, they would be able to change things in the classroom and on the computers to make the students learning more enjoyable and beneficial.\n\nIn conclusion, integrating the Facial Action Coding System would be very beneficial to students in classrooms. They would be able to learn more effectively and not be distracted with all the features that the software offers. Teachers could also learn a lot of information with the use of the software and help students with their personal needs. All of these different features could help the students excel in school and have a better school career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the nearest planet to our Earth. Exploring it will be an important job because people do not a lot about Venus. The author support his idea of studying Venus despite dangers condition such us high temperatures, atmospheric pressure, and each previous mission have be fallen.\n\nVenus the nearest planet to our planet have a very high temteratures. High temperature makes hard for Atronomers to explore venus but the author still want to learn more about it. The article state \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\". That quot show how much the Aeronautic and Apace Administration wanted to explore our nearest planet, and because people know a little about Venus the NASA's want to know about it.\n\nThe author still show that he want to explore Venus despite atmospheric pressure. The atmospheric pressure is about 90 times greater than what people experience here on Earth. The author state that \"recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\". The quot shows that he wanted to explore Venus long time a long, and he is doing what he can now to be able to go to Venus. He still have faith that one day he will to Venus despite many challenges.\n\nSome previous mission have fallen because of the spacecraft was not good enough, but now there working on making on new spacecraft that will be able to land for faw days or weeks to be able to explore more about Venus. The article state that \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating that chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condions\". The quot shows that they are working on new electronics to help them explore Venus, and learn more about it. The author do not want to let dangers or doubts to stop the from exploring Venus.\n\nVenus the closest planet to our planet have a lot things that people do no know about it. But despite bad condetion the author as coclude to not let an thing stop him from exploring Venus. People knows that exploring Venus will be hard work to accomplish. Many of us are hoping that soon they will be able to accomplish their dream.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. State Senator,\n\nI am writing this lettter to talk about how the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational. First, the Electoral College is unfair to voters. Second, there could be a tie in the electoral vote. Last, the voters are merely voting for the slate of electors rather than the president. Those are my points on why to take away the Electoral College.\n\nTo start this off the Electoral College is unfair to the voters. Because of the \"winner-take-all system in each state\", the candidates don't take time to go to other states that they know they will lose, they only really focus on the \"swing\" states. For example, during the 2000 campaign, seventeen statesdidn't see the candidates in their state at all, also 25 of the largest media markets had not seen a single campaign ad from a candidate. Also it's unfair because voters don't really know who to vote for because they see no campaign ads and candidates don't show up to their state and tell them what he/she is running for. That's why the Electoral College is unfair to voters of the presidential election.\n\nSecond, there could be a tie in the electoral vote. In the case of the tie it would go straight to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote for the president. By this the House's decision is no where close to that of the people in their state. The election is omly a few swing voters away from catastrophe. That's why it is bad if the vote ends in a tie.\n\nLastly, the voters are merely voting for the slate of electors rather than the president. For instance, if you \"lived in Texas and wanted to vote for John Kerry, you'd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry.\" The worst part is that the electors could be anyone you don't even have to hold a political position to be an elector, they could be very biased and narrowminded. That's why the Electoral College is unfair.\n\nIn conclusion Mr. Senator the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational because it is unfair to voters, there could be a tie in the electoral vote and the voters are merely voting for a slate of electors and not there president. So Mr. Senator I would like for you to take this into concideration and Abolish the Electoral College!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In days like these with technology is getting more advanced day by day, I personally think that having driverless cars should be a new inovative peace of technology that we can add to the wonderouse things that we have just in our house.\n\nSince it is only just a tested thought out design, of course its not going to be ready especally in this time.\n\nIn the upcoming future I think that it should be neccesary to have self driving cars but for now the car desighner/maker should still put more research and thought into the car before put on the stand for sale.\n\nWhile its a great thought out idea it still needs testing and checked over and over.\n\nBeing safe is also a big reason why this is actually going to be a debated topic because if they are having these tests and still in thought of making these cars then of course you should not sell them unless you know a hundred percent it will be safe.\n\nThe manufacturer are the people testing these new inovative cars therefor they have to makes sure its safe, reliable, and effective on the road. We dont want some poor guy driving off a cliff because his car thought it was an existing highway. It just needs plenty of testing and improvment.\n\nLets say that a person who owned one of these driverless cars and he gets in wreck with another person with the same car, who will be the one getting the punishment guy one, guy two, or the manufacturer. The way to fix this is again more testing and before the customer gets the car there should be a contract stating \"any injuries, wrecks, or other forms of damage or destruction is not by any chance the maufacturers or the reseachers fault and any misuse of the product can be the reason for these faulted actions of the automobile\".\n\nYou can look at it and say \"wow thats a cool idea i want one\" but if you really think about it the car can have a fault in design at anytime and there you are in what people would call \" a sticky situation. The process of making these cars fully functional with no flaws is very hard and the technology needed to be fast and reliable is still not good enough for today.\n\nTechnology is not advanced enough to start making this type of automotive transportation.\n\nI personally am against \"self-driving\" cars because its still in such a beta kind of state that it is still dangerous.\n\nIm not saying that i am against the whole idea. I am against having the thought of driverless cars right now because the cars we have today are not one hundred percent relaible and they have been out for quite some time, so if we give it a couple of decades we should have yet a relaible self-driving car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time someone patient I younger sister taught braid It took long time small hands didnt always correct things But sister always helped time I thought I would never right And thats told words practice makes perfect let choose best string selection And slowly went And I knew I braiding well I happy encouraged keep trying patient whole time And example one time someone patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affects cyclist knows hes wrong area The cyclist understand s never took advice old men So upset new taken advise The cyclist feeling wasnt supposed take way said shouldnt let take peek map So features really affect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Enforcing strict punishments due to road safety is a controversial topic. While some reckon that these tend to be stricter, I strongly disagree that there are a variety of alternative ways to solve this issue and the government tends to be creative actions or guidelines for drivers.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are several points that could support the idea that raising safety on the road is the method of giving stricter punishments. Firstly, the laws that are more serious might impact society. That means if enforcing these kinds of rules such as raising the amount of money is fined or confiscating the driving license, it is more easy-going for the governments to control residents to be law-abiding on the road. Secondly, another reason why administrators should promulgate is because the pain that people have to suffer from a prison sentence or even sophicastors might be related to mortality. Therefore, it goes without saying that giving much stricter punishments can be applied for numerous benefits for society.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I fervently believe that there still exist measures that can effectively enhance road safety. Apparently, it is suitable for the government to install cameras to catch driving offences such as exceeding speed or traffic accidents. As a result, it is more analysable for citizens to lead the public regulation. Moreover, the detailed guidelines could be published for society to follow, including how to know inside out the systems of traffic rules and understand the morals when joining the road. It can be said that easy-going laws make people more rexalxable to lead an exemplary citizen’s life.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that it is undeniable that stricter punishments could be ways to keep people in the model for society with safety; however, there are a variety of methods that tend to lead to safe traffic and without driving offences such as installing cameras or setting a guideline.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is the key to success and it helps a person to create his mind for good and bad things. As per the study, it is believed that most of the criminal offences are performed by less educated people. For this reason, I agree with the fact that education is worth giving in prison, so that the prisoner may get a job after the completion of the punishment.\r\n\r\nGoing deeper, the reason behind the wrongful action is the lack of a healthy mindset. If the person is educated enough then only he/she can understand what is good or what is bad for themselves. Moreover, a good education can lead to a good lifestyle. Furthermore, giving proper guidance to a prisoner can give an individual strength to deal with the fact that whatever he has done was not right and from now onwards he/she will not do any such offence.\r\n\r\nBut somehow, this fact cannot be denied that we can see some highly qualified people doing criminal deeds. For instance, the owner of the brand, Kingfisher, caught in money laundering case which is a crime. On the other hand, we have seen many filmstars being involved in drugs and breaking all the rules. All these people were literate. Now let us also discuss less-educated guys. We all must have heard about 'Nirbhaya' case, all the boys involved in the cruelty were not from a good background. They all got death sentence as a punishment but one of them was minor, so he was released from jail after some time. He was given guidance in the jail about how he can be a good person and options of what he can do after his prison is over.\r\n\r\nConcluding this, as we can see crime can grow anywhere or in any field, it is also important to focus on positive attitude, good habits, and general behaviour than teaching them books only. Although I am in favour of higher studies in imprisonment, I also support psychological help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New technology has been developed recently that makes autonomous cars feasible. Despite current challenges, I believe autonomous cars are the future because they create safer roadways and a more convenient commute.\n\nDriverless cars create safer roadways. Currently, the cars are not perfect, but one could claim that a driverless car is safer than one being driven by a human. Google's driverless car has driven more than a half a million miles without a crash. Driverless cars let the driver know when he or she has to take the wheel. Once autonomous cars become the norm, the roads will be predictable and the cars can work together to prevent accidents. Driverless cars will improve driver safety.\n\nAnother appeal of driverless cars is convenience. Google's dream is for everyone to rely on cheap, autonomous taxis and not have to own a car. According to Sergey Brin, a Google cofounder, the driverless taxis would use half the fuel as today's taxis and cars. He also makes the case that autonomous taxis are much more convenient than standard public transport such as buses. If one commutes thirty minutes every day in a driverless car, the driver could be doing something productive with that extra time. Thirty minutes per day would add up to over 10,000 minutes saved every year. Autonomous cars would make commuting more convenient.\n\nSome may not trust driverless cars and would look to ban them. However, I would respond by stating that currently driverless cars have a lower accident rate than human drivers and have never claimed a life.\n\nDriverless cars are the future. The technology is almost here. They create safer roadways and greater convenience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine living in a world were cars do not need drivers for it to move. In this world, there are advancements in new technolgy, less accidents that occur, and people are happy. The driverless cars will potentially provide these. Cars that could drive themselves are very essential to making big advancement in society. When these cars come, they will have the ability to change the world positively.\n\nThere are many positive aspects when it comes down to these driverless cars. Firstly, they will provide huge and new advancements in technology. With that being said, there has already been a model of what these cars will have. According to paragraph four, a model car consists of \"... a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera... four automative radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" These advancement will contribut to safer driving. With technology evolving comes better safety and less aqccidents are likely to occur. For example, drunk driving has been a huge cause of deaths. Smarter cars will essentially lessen promblems like that. Also, with more developed sensors, it is palpable that accidents are not prone to happen. These cars are super efficient for people too. The text states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus.\" This will save people time and money. The car advancement is essential.\n\nSome people may argue that these cars bring a negative aspect. They worry that these cars' technolgies could fail and they only feel secure when the car is driven with a human driver in control at all times. They also reason that sensors are nothing new. As a result of people claiming that these cars are unsafe, it has been illegal in most states to even test theses cars. They do not feel comfortable being in a vehicle that drives itself.\n\nThese advance cars are surely safe. Others argue that the cars are unsafe and does not allow testing the car; however, how would they know whether the car is safe or not if they have never used it before? The technolgies need to be tested and improved for these cars to be self-driven. According to paragraph five, \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more driving tasks on their own.\" Sensors have become more advance to detect and respond so that the cars are safer. For those who argue that they do not feel safe without a human driver in control, the cars are not completely driverless. The car actually notifies the driver when the road requires human skills (\"Driverless Cars Are Coming). These cars are built trying to help make it more safe for driving.\n\nThese driverless cars are the new advancement. The advancements in technology are becoming more and more incredible. These cars are the next step in creating a better society. They are super efficient and helps provide safety for the people. These driverless cars do bring significant and positive aspects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In introduction, NASA and Scientist are trying to get information about venus. They already try landing meachin but it only last an hour. So they have to do something about it to test if human would be able to live in venus. NASA and Scientist believe that there use to be life in venus because of the feature, like mountain, vally and other. So NASA and Scientist are still planning on something else.\n\nFirst, according to the text venus is sometime called the evening star, and is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Scientist say that this nickname is misleading becasue venus is a planet. Venus is the second away from the sun, which mean it really hot. Mars is the first one but according to the text venus is the hottest of all of them, hotter then the mars. Venus is often referred to as earth's twin because it the closest planet to the earth, in size and density.\n\nSecond, all of the planet move at different speed so something earth a closer to mars than venus. The most challenging part for NASA and Scientist is studying the planet, at the same time it the most important part os the mission. Their mission is to see and test venus if human can live in it. They already try sending meachin but it only last one hour so that was a bummer. According to the text the most challening part of it is the cloud of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. The other challeng is in venus the average temperatures is over 800 degrees fahrenheit.\n\nThrid, NASA possible slolution is to allow Scientists to float above the fray, which mean it like car hovering 30 miles above the surface. The temperatures would still be around 170 degrees fahrenheit inside, Scientist will be able to live according to the text. All the researchers can do is look around and write it down on paper since they cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, but it is safe from creature if there is any. Somehow someone would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. According to the text, NASA and Scientist can also build another meachin that would be able to go to venus and come back with samples. Nowaday computer need electronics but this computer from 1800s dont need electronics and was played an important role in the 1940s during world war 2. According to the text, these devices make calculations by using gear and levers, and tend to be more stonger when it come to extreme physical conditions.\n\nInconclution, NASA and Scientist are trying to find away for human to visit the \"earth twin\" (venus). They have try alot of way but none of them work so now they are trying to use computer from 1800s with extreme physical conditions to get some samples from venus to study. I hope it work too, who doesn't want to visit the earth twin (venus), will there be alien. According to the text, modern computer are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick but weaker in extreme physical conditions. All in all venus is planet that is consider as earth twin, and Scientist believe that there use to be grass, tree and other, but it too hot so they all died.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social responsibilities are also critical in investments apart from making profits. I completely agree with this opinion due to the fact that a business's survival requires the support of the stakeholders.\r\n\r\nAccruing profits should not be the only goal of any investor. The reason is that there are many stakeholders in any investment and this range from shareholders to employees to local communities hosting the business to customers. Therefore, a business owner has large responsibility of satisfying these stakeholders. Though the primary aim of shareholders is to make gains, however, the hosting land will expect some positive impacts from the business. For example, an oil mining company is expected to contribute to the growth of its local community by achieving less pollution in the environment and also providing some social amenities in order to continue enjoying the support of the local community. Therefore, as an investor is trying to make money to satisfy the shareholders, he also needs to work hard to maintain strong support from the local community.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, a business owner also has a responsibility to customers. Customers consume the products and their aspirations need to be met. Customers can be grouped into two. There are retailers and final consumers. For instance, farmers in Australia supply to retail outlets for onward selling to final consumers or they sell directly to consumers. Therefore, a business owner must maintain a strong relationship with these groups, by making sure He is supplying quality products at affordable prices. This will make the business sustainable for its shareholders for continuous returns.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as much as businesses must make profits, social responsibilities cannot be avoided if a business will survive for a long period of time. Therefore, business owners must prepare for this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that art is an important area to be explored by children at school whereas others think it is irrevalent. Let us discuss both these views before giving my opinion.\r\n\r\nThe supporters of the first idea think that art can reduce the stress and increase concentration which will help the students to shine in their studies. A study conducted by an American University proves this point. Also, nowadays ast is considered as a thriving career option. Platforms like NFTs, digital platform to sell digital paintings, are providing huge remuneration for the paintings.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people argue that art is a waste of time as it is not an evaluating subject in the school examinations. They believe that it will be better if sutends can concentrate more on other subjects like science, mathematics, computer science ect instead of spending time for arts. Supporters of this idea also think that art cannot be selected as a career option as it will not provide a steady income.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, eventhough art is not an evaluating subject and it may not providfe a steady income, I believe that art should be included in the school curriculam to help the children to reduce their stress and improve concentration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face? Created by Aliens or just a landmark?\n\nDid you beieve that the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" was just created by aliens. NASA has given us many reasons to believe what they say, and not many reasons for us not believe them. I am a NASA researcher and I'm telling you why the \"Face\" is actually just a landmark.\n\nThere are many reasons why the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is a natural land form. The first reason is that NASA took three different pictures, one picture was in 1976 in the picture you can't really see anything. Scientists just thought it was another Matian mesa. At this time the cameras weren't very 3D like. So how do we know it's an actual face?\n\nThe seacond reason it is a landform is because NASA\n\nsent another crew to take more pictures of the \"face.\" The crew took ten pictures that were sharper than the first one in 1976. In this picture you start to see something appear. They even say \"when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. People were not very happy when they heard it wasn't a alien monument.\n\nAnother reason is that they thought alien markings were being hazed. So, when they went back it was a cloudless summer. In the text they say \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. That is a huge difference from 1976. What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa.\n\nIf you really think about it though, how come they jumped to conclusions so fast? In the passage it says it would be a good way to engage the public to Mars. Wouldn't it just attract more people to NASA to though?\n\nIn many ways there are more reasons to why this \"Face\" is more of a landmark than anything. From the different years they took the years, to the landmarks being hazed. You could probably think of a lot of questions to ask NASA about the photos and what the scientists are saying, but until you go up to Mars we will only know what they are telling us. Which is that the \"face\" is a mesa. They clearly say many times in the passage for people to believe that they are not trying to trick you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When young people are choosing what subject to study at the level their graduation. jobs. field In and In my some reality opinion are many the even fresh root forced off to this graduates take problem fail up to below lies find in work the graduate in university, most of them hope they will find a great job upon outdated higher education system that should be modernised.\r\n\r\nTraditional university education does not prepare students for their first job for a number of reasons. One of them is that many programmes are too theoretical. It means that highly educated graduates lack simple skills required for employment, for example, the knowledge of IT software. Employers, therefore, prefer candidates with hands-on experience. Another reason is that universities offer too many courses in popular fields, such as business and law, and do not recruit enough students for engineering and science programmes. As a result, the UK labour market has an oversupply of law graduates and a deficit of engineers.\r\n\r\nA reform of higher education could alleviate many of the problems but would require joint efforts from universities and the government. If universities worked closer with employers, they could teach students practical skills that companies look for. Meanwhile, the government could develop guidelines on how many students universities should recruit in each subject in accordance with the market demand.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a likely reason why many graduates cannot find a job in their field is because a university education might not have provided them with the right skill set or an in-demand profession. I think that universities and the government could improve the situation by updating the content of the programmes and limiting the number of students in each subject in line with the market demand.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, education is crucial for the overall development of humanity. However, the academy provides an atmosphere for learners in the simplest way but the new generation is unable to concentrate at school. This essay will reticulate some of its problems and propose some possible solutions to alleviate this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the modern Era is of educated people; so education is considered the chief concern among parents as well as the government. The scarcity of education leads to unemployment and reduces the growth of the nation to a huge proportion. Youngsters, who are the future of any country, need to be educated for betterment. They are not able to focus on their studies at institutions because of the old teaching methods. for example, in India majority of states are in a developing situation and lack advanced facilities in all aspects; one of them is the old teaching method of reading books again and again with only theoretical way. old fashion brings Monotony to recruitment.\r\n\r\nfurthermore, mostly in all schools in India still use an old method of teaching \"beat and teach\". Lack of confidence among students feels anxiety to attend the institution. To tackle this issue and create enthusiasm in toddlers, modernisation in teaching is necessary and it will arouse the productivity of students and teachers as well. Not only the corporate sector but also the regime should provide an exotic experience with up-to-date technology.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, modern learning and teaching methods are alluring and appealing which creates zeal between learners and teachers and help to reduce the dilemma to focus on studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once, driverless cars were something that no one thought possible; but today, they are becoming more and more plausible to see on the road in just a few years. The development of these cars could lead to a safer road environment, and a better experience for former drivers. This could be done by improving safety over manual cars, and even by adding forms of safer entertainment.\n\nIn order to alert the passenger in the first place, the smart car would need to have a complex system of sensors. With these in place, the car could sense the speed, the engine function, and have a constant 3D analysis of the car's surroundings. This could allow for the car to sense danger in objects in all directions, as well as dangerous speeds and engine problems. These systems could detect and alert a human passanger much faster than the human could detect or even realize the issues before they cause an accident.\n\nThese cars would include necessary safety measures in order to make sure the passenger would not be put in danger in case of emergency. Though these smart cars would be able to accelerate, break, and sense danger on their own, they still would need a human to take over to steer clear of trouble. This could be done by alerts the car has from it's censors such as flashing lights or vibrating seats to get the passenger's attention to take over. This could most certainly prevent accidents before the human even would fully realise the danger.\n\nWhat about being bored while your car drives itself? Doesn't a smart car take the fun out of driving? Of course not, is the answer. Smart cars could provide a new kind of entertainment aside from just the radio or the TV in the back seat. They could give the same feeling one would have with a smartphone at a handsfree, simple, and most of all, safe experience. All including a feature that shuts all entertainment off when alerting the passenger of danger, leading this to be much safer than using a cellphone at the wheel.\n\nSmart cars could give us many things that make us feel safe, happy, and entertained; Safety features such as censors and alerts make us feel safe, while new forms of entertainment keep us happy when experiencing the driverless car. These cars are soon coming into the modern world, and we are well on our way to excepting them as safe, reliable vehicles. The days of yesterdays self-driving-cars dream, is becoming a reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you could go places like europe,china,greece. You could have fun and explore places also it's not hard work all you have to do is clean and feed the animals. Luke liked the Seagoing Cowboys because he could travel places he could have not gone to before he liked being on the boat. He had fun when the unloaded the animals with the rest of people on the ship he played tennis, ping pong in the animals housing. They played diffrent kinds of games that passed time but it was kinda hard working there because if it was raining hard and you had to feed the animals you would still go outside and feed them. Luke hurt himself doing that he fell when the boat was shaking and cracked his ribs but he could still walk but he had to take a brake from doing any work. There's also another reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys you could have a chance to work as a team with other people and aboard the ship with your friend or family member or cousin. There is my point of view why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A group of people state that, because of the growth in communication and international summits, countries will face a decline in cultural importance. Others, however, believe that it is a positive development. At this point of juncture, both these views are analysed in the ensuing paragraphs, while I believe that it has various potential benefits. \r\n\r\nFirstly, having greater bonding between nations has numerous positive factors. Initially, elaborating business contracts and spreading cultural importance let people living in foreign countries to have a clear image of others. Moreover, it paves the path to a plethora of employment opportunities among youngsters as well as experienced professionals. Additionally, individuals get a chance to explore the ancient lifestyle and culture followed by other countries and adopt updations accordingly. Therefore, people have alternative options to make corrections if they have any flaws. For instance, a country like Africa can make corrections in both economic and cultural ways to cope with other growing countries by analysing other developed countries' way of life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the interaction between many other countries might bring changes to the culture and way of life to a greater extent, which can cause loosing their own identity. The prime reason why some people think that it is a major caution is that the younger generation might get easily altered and influenced by other nation's life and culture, whereas their own culture falls apart resulting in the vanishing of their true colour. However, many plausible measures can be implemented by the government as well as the public to mitigate the detrimental effects. For example, rather than spoiling the traditional values and linguistic uniqueness of the nation Myanmar, the authorities imposed strict rules to protect them along with attracting tourists to their county by publicising their culture in different ways. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, even though there are few demerits involved in supporting International connections, there are numerous benefits that can be initiated from the government's side by eradicating the impacts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would you feel if robots had your life in their possesion? Driverless cars are being developed by many different manufacturers. Driverless cars are not safe enough to be put on the road, as they can cause accidents and injuries if they glitch out or malfunction.\n\nDriverless cars are a bad idea and will be a big problem going into the future. One reason is becasue the cars can cause an accident and seriously injure someone that wasn't even driving. In fact, traffic laws in most states do not allow driverless cars to be on the road, as the cars have not been proven safe enough to handle most extreme conditions.\n\nAnother good point is the cars could have a glitch in the system and get into an accident. The robotic cars would be in complete control of the passenger's life and other's once it starts driving on the road. If they do not alert the passenger to take the wheel, it could injure them and other drivers.\n\nA counter-argument could point out that the cars have various safety precautions and will alert the passenger to take the wheel, but glitches in the system could occur and fail to alert the passenger. The manufacturers could get into big trouble even if the car didn't malfuntion because people wouldn't know if the passenger or the car was at fault in the situation.\n\nDriverless cars are not needed in this world. Of course they would be a cool and convenient thing to have around, but they are too risky and dangerous to be brought into everyday life. I do not approve of this until the manufacturers prove that they are safe enough to withstand a storm. The same question could be asked. How would you feel if robots had your life in their possesion?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "dear state senator, i believe that you should get rif of the electrical collage because the votes are biased and with the citizens voteing you can get better results.\n\nfirst of all,even though the electoral collage consists of 538 electors i think it would be better if all of citizens from across the globe can help more due to more people and more relibilty then with 570 people.\n\nsecend of all,if \"the popular vote\"was gone and was taken seriesly then we would have better quality presidents like al gore even though he was popular he still lost the presidency. according to bradford plumer over 60 precent of voters would perfer a direct election also,how are we sure to trust the electors anyway? is texians vote on john kerry they might not lisin and vote on whoever they want out of spite. also we don't want to repeat the 2000 fiasco agein and the system allows much worse and they occasionally refuse to vote for the party canidate. and disaster will happen is two slates of electors to congress like when it happend in hawaii in 1960 when richard nixion only wanted elector voters but luckly he did it \"without establishing a precedent\". and what would happen if theirs a tie in the electoral vote? then the electorals would be thrown to the house of represenitives and they vote on the president there.\n\nincluclosion,we should get rid of the electoral collage because it's unfair,outdated and irrational.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage is not bad at all! It benifts everyone in a specific way.\n\nAs stated in the article 'Car-Free Cities' Source 1: Heidrum Walter, a media trainer and mother two quotes \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much more happier this way\" Heidrum being a mother two you can only imagine the car trips she would have to make. Going place to place can cause a lot of stress to some people and it makes it harder for them to drive. For example, someone could be stressed to the max with all the traffic and driving around that it could create accidents along the way. No one should ever feel stressed while driving. Driving should be a privellege and good one.\n\nIn Paris they have banned driving due to smog. Diesel fuel was balmed since France has tax ploicy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesels make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe. Paris has more smog than other European capitals. Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London. Certain things like this can help save the environment without the usage of vehicles.\n\nWith no car usage it prevents teens from getting into accidents and or drunk driving. The safer way to go is to walk or stay with a friend somewhere safe than being on the road. Many accidents could be prevented but it wont if limiting the car usage is not available. Death rates will decrease and many people will be safer this way. A study last year found that drving by young people decreased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Without transportation many young people could make other main priorities. For example, they could organize their summer jobs and social life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends.\n\nUp above I have given my reasons why we should all limit car usage. It would relieve stress from on the road, saves the environment and takes the smog away, and young people would be more socialize and up for doing more than what they already do like jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would not be a smart step forward for us as Americans. Considering the fact the car can not fully function on its own it would be very difficult to deal with. If the car has to ask the driver to take over everytime it can't handle a certain situation, then make one that can and then we can advance into the new era of driverless cars.\n\nThe fact that Dr. Werner, a BMW project manager driver, says people would get bored behind the weel of a car controlling itself proves that people would lose focus and that may cause fatalities. When they lose focus because the car is in control and look at their phone, the car may ask them to take over on the drop of a dime, and the driver may panick. Especially if there is an oncoming car and the driverless car can not react fast enough, because it only takes a split second.\n\nAnother point I would like to make is when big name companies such as Google market anything they sell simply because of who makes it. If there is a flaw in a cars system then they would be risking a lot of peoples lives, in terms of who buys them. In paragraph eight, it reads that \" Upgrading to existing roads would be too expensive to be practical.\" and that means if there is a flaw under the hood, they would lose a lot of money from a bunch or attackers, manufacturers, and their own industry crumbling.\n\nAll in all, I believe that it would not be a good way to advance in technology if we're practically selling prototypes. People would be buying driverless cars that aren't state of the art because either it was too pricy or the car itself can not handle the surprises driving may consist of and it would be a major fail on a lot of people's behalf. If we had cars that could fully function safely and accurately on the street, then we could maybe experiment on making the future present. But for now, let us work ot the kinks of the products that affiliate with people's everyday lives or even their lives period.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary society, obesity is considered a global issue because of its consequences among all age groups. A large section of society claims a rise in the cost of junk food should solve this concern. This essay supports the assertion to a major extent despite some reasons such as due to a busy schedule.\r\n\r\n To begin with, increasing the price of fattening cooking can discourage individuals from purchasing the product, and as a result, this can reduce consumption. This means that it could contribute to weight management and improve overall health initiatives. The best illustration as educational campaigns and fitness programs can help people maintain their fitness as well as diet and also address the issue of junk feed roots. Probing ahead, having knowledge of nutrition is important for individuals to differentiate between healthy meals and foodstuffs that are high in fat.\r\n\r\nAnother perspective is, home home-cooked food is valuable. In today's fast-paced world, the community often do not have the time or energy to cook at home and prefers to grab meals from outside. However, this can lead to health issues, including obesity. Fast snacks and other take-out options may be convenient, but they are often high in calories, unhealthy fats, and added sugars. For instance, doctors always restrict the nation from consuming foods that contain fat in order to maintain good well-being and also encourage the public to focus on consuming a balanced and nutritious diet.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, Rising rates of fattening foods can influence individuals to consume more home-cooked meals, which are typically more nutritious. I believe that the aforementioned points support the viewpoint.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many elders have to live alone because their children have to work or have their own family. It is undeniable that many older people suffer from loneliness and lack of activity that could help them to be healthier. From my point of view, there are many reasons for this problem. But this problem also has many sensible solutions, described in the following paragraph.\n\nFirst, the main reason of this problem is the lifestyle of the younger generation. They don't want to live in a big family and they are more likely want to spend their time with friends or their own family. Although, some people still live with their elder parents. But they still don't have time for them because they have to work a ton. On the contrary, the elder mostly quit their job and stay at home.Thus, they have many times to spend in a day. Therefore, they feel lonely. Loneliness is not just brings the disadvantages to the mental health, But its effect to the physical health too. When the older people feel lonely, they feel priceless and don't want to do anything. These feelings and activity lead to the depression and some other disease.\n\nIn Addition, there are many creative solutions to solve this problem. The easiest way from my perspective is petting some dog or cat. Thereby they will have activity to do. For example, walking with their dogs and playing with their cat. These activity will help them from feel lonely and lead them want to do something good for their health.\n\nTo conclude, many elders suffer from the loneliness that not just effect to their mental health but also effect to their physical health. The significant reason of this problem is they need someone to talk and do a little activity with them. The best solution from my recommendation is petting a dog or a cat. They will help the elder from loneliness and lack of physical activity. Though, it's just a pity thing. But, they will not feel lonely.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is this something that kids in History class want to hear their teacher talk about? How Mona Lisa felt? I do not think so , but an art class might want to hear about it.\n\nThis should not be taught in a history class. This should be tought in an Art room setting. Like Painting class or Drawing class. The reason I say that is because painting and drawing are alike in some ways. In painting you use paint to \"draw\" your assignment. In drawing you use a pencil,sharpie,or a marker to draw your assignment.\n\nIf this was a requirement in History class,this subject would be very boaring and irrelevent in so many ways. But in Art since Leonardo da Vinci painted this there could be an entire lesson on it. Then the teacher could have the students draw/paint Mona Lisa\n\nSo I think it should not be tought in any other class than Art. The reason I say that is a lot of kids have at least seen this painting one time in their life. And if they take Art they will learn about it. So there is no sense in wasting time in other classes when they will just learn about it in Art class. I do not think some kids would like to have their emotions read on some type of computar software.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this era of globalisation, some individuals believe that due to wide range of technology available today, the gap between upper classes and lower classes increase significantly while others reject this notion. In my opinion, technology developments does not effect the gap among society, because its accessible by everybody. This essay will further elaborate on both views and thus lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are several reasons why one could think an increasing gap between rich and poor. One of the common reason is automation. Automation indeed play an important role in dealing with day to day of human's issues. However, automation reduces the need for manual labor in which people are no longer depending on each other. For instance, the implementation of artificial intelligence on cars creates unemployment and degrading the numbers of cars produced in the factory.Thus, there are no job opportunities for poor people.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that this wasn't the case. Due to advances in technology, numerous research on new substance can be done to support the society as a whole. For example, an increasing in technology lead to a better quality of medicine produced which in return help society who dealing with illness such as fever, cough and athsma. Moreover, another impact of technology is it improves food production where every party can benefit from it.\r\n\r\nIn the nutshell, I strongly believe that technology could possibly narrow the differences social classes by increasing the quality of medicine and also enhances food indsutries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many may argue that 'driverless' cars will be a great fundamental change in the world. Driverless cars are only helpful if you really know how to use them properly. They are very dangerous when it comes to being on the road around a bunch of other people. Driving is already dangerous enough for young people with our phones so why make it worse on us? I believe that driverless cars will only make our world worse in every situation.\n\nIf you dont know how to use these 'driverless' cars there is really no point in owning one. Since 2009 people have been hoping to eventually have a car that drives itself but i dont think they actually looked at the logic behind it. This driverless car means there is really no learning taking place. Why even have a license if you wont ever need it because your car drives itself? It is practically a waste of time.\n\nAnother reason I would not approve of this evolving is because, just imagine all of the things that could happen if you are in a driverless car around a bunch of people on the highway. You could easily be going a certain speed limit and then have to speed up to a different speed and if you cant do that fast enough there is most likely going to be a crash. Does anybody see that driving and maintaining a certain type of composure in a car is hard enough?\n\nKeeping your composure in a driverless car would practically be impossible. You can be way too relaxed in a driverless car and completely forget to pay attention to your surroundings, which is also extremely dangerous.\n\nThe last reason these cars should not be abbolished is because we all know how teenagers cant wait to get on the road. We also know how much us teens love our Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram, ect. This driverless car only promotes us to do these things while we're driving because of the simple fact that we dont have anything better to do. With this we can pay all of the attention we want to our cellular devices and hope that nothing tragic will happen. Hoping isnt good enough. If we keep everything the same we will be sure that teenagers pay close attention to the road instead of the distractions in the car.\n\nThat being said there are many flaws to this car. If you dont know what you are doing, do not put yourself in that situation. Not paying attention to your surroundings is very dangerous and leads to you crashing. Lastly distractions are a big problem in the United States and this car will only make them worse. Therefore I say no to the driveless cars. When it comes down to life or death i chose life. Safety always comes first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During this era, people prefer to live in apartments and flats commonly rather than houses built on their own, as it is financially more beneficial. So they like to know about the origin and the history of the buildings they are living in. This essay will contrast the reasons and the way of researching those apartments.\r\n\r\nFirstly, in most countries, cultural beliefs have become a prominent aspect to search for past because sometimes humans suspect having mysterious souls can lurk around. Also, there are some records of paranormal incidents in the past. Moreover, humankind is interested to check previous deeds and the owners to get an idea about the places they lived. However, it is a good trend to get lawful clearance about the lands, before settling in. Although it is better to know on transcripts because when re-selling, that information are much beneficial.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, details on deeds can be found through relevant lawyers who are responsible for the lands in certain areas. Additionally, public libraries are the best resource to find the history of the properties because they hold the record of old newspapers. Even though written methods are more convenient, mouth-to-mouth transmitted stories are also the best means of knowing the past of any construction. On the other hand, it is better to ask regarding those matters as family can be more trustworthy than the other people in community.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is more advantageous to get acknowledge the house one's living or before starting to live in especially in both cultural and legal ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System would have value if used in a classroom. Not only would it benifit the teachers, but it would also benifit the students as well. The Facial Action Coding System in a classroom would have positive effects.\n\nApplications of the FACS within a classroom are varied and vast. Just one use of FACS would be a survey. The student or teacher could be shown a video of controversial topics while the FACS would scan them. You would already know their thoughts about it without even asking them. If you wanted to perform a group survey, you could see the difference in their emotions when surrounded by friends and when not. And if the FACS wasn't fully tested, you could survey people and then compare the answers of the FACS and of the person. And even if none of the FACS surveys worked, there is still a chance that the survey subjects could learn more about human emotion. Even the world as a whole could gain from the FACS and learn more about human emotions.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could also be used on a much broader term. It could be used for online internet use as well. Virtual Reality could be integrated with FACS to create a more accurate representation of a person's face. Not only would that be amazing by itself, but it could also get humanity closer to full-body VR.\n\nThe FACS could help students and teachers realize their own emotions better about simple things like homework, or even eachother. A student could be playing an educational game to learn a new language. The student is trying his best, but the question is too hard for him. The camera would see this in his face, and change the difficulty of the question.\n\nAlthough there are potential flaws with using the FACS technology, the positives completely outweigh the negatives. One potential flaw is that we could end up relying too much on the FACS tech and eventually won't be able to see human emotion by ourselves. This isn't a problem though. If we don't use the technology out of laziness, we will retain our social abilities, like empathy.\n\nIf we could have FACS technology integrated into classrooms, the positive possibilities that could open up would be so benificial for mankind, the internet, other students, parents, and even teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When idea making mooring mast atop Empire State Building thought builders realize obstacles would passed One obstacle nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This means dirigible tied loading unloading could moved around freely sky making dangerous passengers around An example dangerous winds would US Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached mooring mast could get close enough tie forceful winds A concern safety dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable If something wrong happen could great consequences heavily populated downtown A third final obstacle occurred existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Because obstacles idea dirigibles dock top Empire State Building seemed impossible never accomplished", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past, searching for information about people come from books. These days individuals use internet for search data. Personally, I think using the internet is more beneficial than drawbacks. This essay will be discussed in detail below paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, Finding a knowledge database from books has several drawbacks. Firstly, reading a book to find interesting information leads to wasting time because we need to research slowly every single page of books to gain information. In addition, searching for data from books can be inconvenient for people as they need to explore knowledge from outside places such as, University library or government resources. Moreover, some knowledge that can not be found in the free public services, citizens need to pay for it.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Today, it can be observed that after advanced technology has been allocated to societies, These technologies, especially, the Internet play an essential role in nations. compared to the past, individuals looking for databases from their own devices such as, laptops or mobile phones. These knowledges can be accessed within less than one second through their devices. Also, people do not to waste their time for searching data outside their homes because they will be able to find data on their devices. Additionally, the Internet provides free and accurate data ,and citizens can search for information to compare data with other websites without paying.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, accessing knowledges from Internet is more convenient than searching for books not only easier but also gain a variety of information without paying. There are more beneficial outweigh the drawbacks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the course of years new technologies have been inveted to better our life style. there have been inventions like trains,airplanes and boats to better our transportion; however there is one transportion vehicle that has spun up many contriversies. The automobile or \"car\" as most people call it has spanwed more harm than good; rates of pollution have risen and smog can be found almost anywhere. Limiting the usage of cars should a solution due to the advantegs of reduced pollution, less green house gas and it could even make a person happier!\n\nAs most industrial inventions cars do produce tons of smog due to Diesel fuel a chemical found in cars. Smog has been such a issue that the city of paris actully had to enforce a law that would ban cars for a few days. This law was so stressed that any one caught driving would bee fined 22 euros in which converted in dollars would add up to 31 dollars. Paris had more smog than any other european capital; they had about 147 micrograms compared to London on the other hand which only had 79.7. With such high numbers of micrograms the intnsity of the smog worsend causing the extreme idea of baning cars. This example should be a reason on why we should reduce the usage of automoblies so that extreme measures are not acted on; but more importanly the possibility of having pure of cleansed oxygen.\n\nIn alliance of having minimum pollution safety is aslo one advantge that reducing driving may enhance according too Bill Ford executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company; stated that the plan of reducing usage of cars did bring a safer world for pedestrians not only does is bring about safety but it does conserve natrual resources like oil that may take hundreds of years to replenish. We need to keep in mine that as inhabitants of earth we must care and vaule every natrual resource. We only have one planet and we must protect it. Reducing driving has been such a triaumph that a mother of two even said \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" once again this statment only poves that reducing the usage of automobiles is a better life style for all.\n\nAll in all reducing driving does bring some great advantges and should really be consider as a plan to make the world a better place. this plan should be acted upon all over the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "google cars is not driveless you still got take over when pulling in & out the driveway.Companies making computer cars isnt safe because if you car shut down while you driving you can crash or run in to something.Computer can shut down anytime.What if it rain it can mess up your car.If you put sensors on your car can get dangers or out of control skids or rollovers.Sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine you can mess the car up like that & have a crash.the driver will have to take if the requires dnt work but what if you dnt know then you have a horrible crash.Only one car tell you when to take over the other cars dont.If the car is watching the drive you can have a accident.Displays can turn off while the cars is driving & you can be on the phone.Then the next minutes you in a accident.automakers still working on the assumption thats a probblem right there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Differences in speed mena that sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world .\n\nThese conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviroment would crush even submarine occustomed to diving.\n\nImagine a bim like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape, hovering over venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\n\nHuma curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nAnd also venus is our second planet to ous son while venus .is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of earth , it has proved a very challenging place to exzmine more closely. Modern computers are enormously powerful, flexbile,and quick conditions. Just imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting . Challenge by venus has value, not only because of the insight to gained on the planet itself. Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested for three weeks in such conditions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have seem to have made a name for themselves throughout history. Not only have you seen some driverless cars on movies, they are actually being tested for human use! Even though it seemed to be some kind of fantasy, it is coming, and coming fast. Driverless cars should be created for humans to not only avoid accidents but for other uses.\n\nThe most common use for a driverless car is safety. Humans are fond of making mistakes, its nature. Sooner or later, driverless cars will take care of accidents for you. Some are being tested by Google, BMW, and GM. Though, none have been released for public use, many have been able to test with some driverless cars.\n\nThe convenience of driverless cars can be a full list. People who have jobs one day will run late. If so, that one day can be taken care of by a driverless cars, not only getting ready in your car is a convenience but a blessing. It could and might just save you your job! Many laws are enlightened to keep both your hands on the wheel, but with driverless cars you don't need any. Just think of the things you could do in a car driven by a computer.\n\nSafety has seemed to be a problem with the cars being built lately. Some driverless cars have had malfunctions here and there. Cameras have been installed inside and outside of cars to see where many occur. The side of the car is the most dangerous to get hit by. Creators of these cars have made the car resond to computer-based brakes. These special brakes not only are more powerful but also much more quick.\n\nDriverless cars will be out before you know it, and maybe some day everyone in the world will own one. The world is changing in many ways to reassure safety and innovation. Creators of these cars are very optimistic when it comes to the statistics for the cars. Not only will innovation be powerful but a key point to the future of these cars. Driverless cars will be the future of cars someday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have made a drastic impact on the world as a whole; however, times are begining to change in the necessity of cars and personal trasportation. Other countries, such as France, Germany, and Columbia has worked on reducing cars in their society. The benifets from the sucess, expensives, and health qualites have increased in the low-car communities. Accoring to Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Moter Company stated in paragraphs 43\"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve rescources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" Basically explaining that cars are not as needed and countries all over the world, inlcuding America can reduce, if not emliminate personal vechiles.\n\nIn Freiburg, Germany, the streets of this community are car-free, show in paragraph 2. Instead of cars they have trams to assist them in their travels. On average, a car space is $40, 000, not including the actual home. This dictrict is trying to remove the use of cars not just becasue of expenses, but also for health from smog and other possible harms. Cars are quoted as \"cash traps\" from the continual expenses needed to pay in paragraph 32. In America, they produce up to 50% of gas emissions in certain locations; whereas, Europe only gets to about 12% in paragraph 5. America is one of the most fuel wasting countries and causing damages and polutions. In addition, their expenses of appropriationgo to about 80% of highways androad work and only 20% to other trasportations.\n\nColumbia dircects \"Day Without Cars,\" which is to alude citizens to other forms of transportation and to reduce smog in paragraph 21. If a person were to violate that day and use a personal vechile, he/she would be fined. The affect of this day has decresed smog, traffic, danger, and stress. Communites have more connection and environment  becasue of the simple reduction. Plazas, shops, restaurants, sidwalks, and bicycle trails have been upgraded for the citizens to enjoy due to less cars. These countries may increase health from the consistant walking and apprearance of the environment.\n\nIn conclusion, by limiting car usage, citizens expensives, enviroment, and health are benifited as shown in these articles. Expenses will be converted to other aspects within the community, like the style in Columbia with upgrades on the society. Smog, gasses, and other safety/ health factors will decreses from a reduction in cars. Overall, the reduction in cars will be benifical of society around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are a basic need for people today we use them to go from point A to point B in the fastest way posible. But one must ask themselves \"do i really need the car?\", \"would i be better off without one?\", how do you tell people that what they have depended on for movement could be hurting them. I believe that cars should have a limited usage in cities because cars affect our efforts to reduce greenhouse gas, they cause smog to form around cities, and cause us to move through life at the fastest pase posible. A limited car usage would change the way we see the world its beauty, its adventersm, and we would be able to save the world from our distruction.\n\nThere is a community in Germany called Vauban where people have given up their cars. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, 57% sold their cars just to move to Vauban, \"When I had a car I was always tense, I'm much hapier this way,\" media trainer and mother of two Heidrun Walter says in the artical \"In German Subuerb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\". Also the artical states that passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and responsible for up to 50% in the United States. Vauban houses up to 5,500 resident within a rectangular square mile, which makes it posibly the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life, stores are placed just a short walk away so that no car is needed.\n\nSmog; a thick layer of black fog that hurts your lungs and can even kill you. Paris had to ban driving due to smog , cars with even numbered license plates would not be allowed to drive one day and the following day cars with odd numbered license plates would not be allowed to drive. 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters and 27 people had their cars impounded due to their reaction to the fine. This statement from the artical \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" show that cars are responsible for a gas that can kill people, and that people dont respond well to being told what to do. In one week the ban was lifted because the smog had cleared enough but not all the way, just a week of limited car usage cleared the skys imagin what a year of it would do.\n\nCars have us going the fastest we can and people have started to live that way through life. In Bogota they have a day free of cars every years like its a holiday. People left their keys on the counter and insted hiked, biked, skated and took the bus. Even in the rain people didnt use their cars, \" The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,\" says Bogata Mayor Antanas Mockus. Businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza says \" Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\". The quotes from the artical \" Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" show that with out cars people feel realeved of stress and are able to have a good time.\n\nIn conclusion limited car usage would help us presurve the world and create a enviroment that could help people aswell. Cars are one of the most used products in the world people might not want to give up their cars but eventually might have to. Smog and greenhouse gas are caused by car overuseage and hurt the enviroment and people. Limited car usage is posably the only answer to helping the world live longer aside from buying a hybrid car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When one thinks of cars, or any vehicle, one may assume a driver is a primary necesity for the operation of such.\n\nAutomakers are changing that.\n\nAs technology advances, new opprotunity arrives on several fronts.\n\nOne of these opportunities is the possibility of a driverless vehicle.\n\nThis concept comes with its fair share of hurdles to overcome, however it can be made into something great for both commuters and the environment.\n\nDriverless vehicles have the capability of doing more than simply getting occupants from point A to B.\n\nThey can reduce accidents.\n\nBecause of the computerization of these vehicles, there can be less margin of error than a human driver may be able to provide.\n\nAutonomous vehicles can also help the environment.\n\nDriving patterns and behaviors affect a vehicle's overall emissions.\n\nSince these vehicles are electronically controlled, they can be pre-programmed with the most efficient methods of driving.\n\nFor those who are wary of these new vehicles, there is no need to fear.\n\nDriverless vehicles can be built such that a human can take full control of them when the driver sees fit, or when the vehicle itself is not apt to handle the situation.\n\nThese cars can certianly change the way we get around, but it is also evident that driverless vehicles can bring more benefits.\n\nThey are capable of reducing accidents and emissions, both of which will help us as a whole.\n\nAutonomous vehicles can also turn control over to humans when necesarry or when convenient.\n\nCar manufacturers such as Tesla, Audi, Mercedes-Benz, and Nissan are already in the development stages of such vehicles.\n\nSoftware designers such as google are working on the computer related aspects of this engineering feat.\n\nIt can be concluded that we would all benefit from putting these vehicles on the road, and, for once, taking our hands off of the wheel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making Students Smile\n\nWith the amount of technology the world has today, schools are able to better the education given to students. Laptops, fast computers, and even touch-screen tablets are very helpful resources for students, however, perhaps schools can even better their education by using a Facial Action Coding System. The Facial Action Coding System is a system that is able to determime the emotions of a human by analyzing the face. This system is brought out to the public by the author Nick D'Alto who published the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" Using the Facial Action Coding System that Nick D'Alto presents, schools will be able to improve class lessons and help students by considering the emotions the students feel.\n\nTechnology that is able to give students factual and fast information, and perhaps more updated information is quite benefical for students, however, for when the information is delivered by the instructor, students do not all learn and comprehend the same. It is also a similar idea for the instructors, not all instructors are able to convey their own point or the whole lesson in the same way. As consequence it is at certain times that students may feel confused, lost, and as a result--bored. To prevent any further confusion and potential boredom, instructors could use the Facial Action Coding System (FACS). In the article that introduces this facial recognition system, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" Professor Thomas Huang of the Institute of Advanced Science, supports the idea that \"'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" (D'Alto). Taking note of this, for some instructors it can be difficult to completely understand the faces of students and there are times when students do not desire to tell their intructors the confusion they feel. It is also possible that there are simply too many students to analyze. For instance, an instructor in a college lecture environment where there are too many students and faces, teachers will face difficulty to differentiate all the faces, let alone even be able to see, but with the technology of FACS, a computer would help the teacher by reading the expressions of students and inform the teacher when he or her has lost the interest of students, or when his or her students are attentive and or focused. Since there is a diffuclty of determining the emotions of different students, FACS is valuable to bring clarity for teachers.\n\nNot only will FACS be able to tell intstructors that they perhaps need to change the subject, or better state a lesson, but it will also tell schools common trends found in the expresssions of students for particular lessons or activities. Conducting surveys would not be neccassary since a computer would be able to tell the schools exactly what the students' faces portray. Lessons and activites will be improved by the system of the school or the instructors themselves. Instructors will be able to figure out what sort of techniques are valuable and functional in their lessons by being able to recognize the emotions of students. Overall, knowing and identifying trends of the expressions of students, will aid school education and better enlighten the students by being able to package inofrmation correctly, and delivering it to students in a way for them to understand the content.\n\nAll things considered, the FACS is quite valuable for teachers for it can better the lessons and activites in the class by informing the intructors with information that states the emotions of students, and also help the students themselves by comprehending the content on a deeper level. The Facial Action Coding System is quite imperative and also at the same time very beneficial for not just the teachers, but for the students as well. FACS will provide schools with valuable information to consider and the life of students will be greatly impacted by such technology in a wonderful way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by a few people that to keep studying continue after school is the better way to achieve success in the career. However, to start a work straight after high school is considered useful by others. The both sided will be discussed, But I strongly believe that the students who attend colleges and universities learn excellent skills and knowledge to get their desired jobs.\n\nThe study at graduation or post graduation level gives the number of opportunities to everyone to apply in professional life. Firstly, the students who get degree or diploma perform in a expected manners in their fields, and the employers always prefer to have someone with higher education. The jobs such as accountant, teachers, engineers, doctors, and scientist seek extraordinary skills to complete these tasks. The another reason is the people who have gone to higher eduaction institutes behave in more professional and well mannered way at their work places. These qualities are very neccessary, who are playing superior roles such as directors, and presidents of the big organizations.\n\nOn the other hand, those who think to join work directly after school is more useful, support their belief with the following ideas. Some people want to support their families financially as soon as they can, and they save money which they have to spend on their higher education and join a work directly after finishing school. Adding to this, nowadays, youth does not want to depend on their parents for longer time and want to become independent as soon as practicable. So, they start their entry level jobs in resturants, warehouses and gas stations where much study in not needed. \n\nIn conclusion, I highly think that to get the higher degree is the better option to become more succesfull in any field instead of starting career without it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the current era, the debate over whether a diploma offers more advantages compared to getting a business. Some argue that starting a successful career depends on studying bachelor's or college, while others contend that securing employment is the best option after graduating from school. In my opinion, by enrolling in higher education, students can find enrollment.\n\nConvincing arguments can be made that getting a job provides experience and more effective strategies. To start with, while youngsters are working in their workplace, they might be able to improve their practical ability as well as gaining interpersonal experience. For instance, although the world is undergoing rapid change as a result it leads to increasingly competitive job sphere, every specific industry and company`s employers do not want to recruit a volunteer who has a lack of practice. Hence improving skills that perceiving the atmosphere of real working in their adulthoods can help them prosper in their fields. \n\nDespite the positives of getting an occupation mentioned above, I would acknowledge that enrolling educational institution has numerous benefits. One of the desirable aspects of studying is enhancing cognitive skills such as critical thinking, and broader understanding of the world may increase good quality of a career. Additionally, high global perspectives which enhance long-term career prospects can provide adults with a financial budget for their entire lives. For example, doctor or teacher and these categories of jobs always require a specialist who has sufficient ability for work. \n\nTo conclude, while getting a job has its positives, particularly gaining experience, the predominant advantage of studying at university and college is enhancing long-term career success.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people talk about how self-driving cars are the future and how they will be invented soon. But what they don't know is that self-driving cars already excist. Self driving cars allow you to focus on other things while they drive for you. This maybe doing your makeup, completing work, playing on your phone, or even playing games with the people you are riding along with. Not only will they allow you to focus on that stuff, self-driving cars will reduce accidents on the rode, help save the enviornment and lower the polution rate, and also help you save money. Do to these reasons, I for one am all for driveless cars!\n\nSelf-driving cars are fit with many sensors, all ranging from cameras to radar sensors. This allows for a better, safer drive. Each sensor does a diffrent task. For example the camera that is on the top spins consintly. While it is spinning it sends a 3-D model to the main board so the car is updating its surrondings 24/7. Many deaths are related to car accidents, expesially teen deaths. With driveless cars you wouldn't have to worry about putting your son or daughter behind the wheel.\n\nOur environment is slowlyturning to waste. With so many polutants put off by cars it is no wonder! When car is running it is putting of pollutents in the air. These pollutants get in the air, destroy it, and make it very unhealthy for us to breath. Self-driving cars can reduce the amountof gas used by nearly 50%! This means 50% less polutants will be getting in the air. Also with the self-driving cars less people will have to buy cars which means there will be fewer cars on the road and with fewer cars we will have even fewer polutants.\n\nCars are on of the most expensive things you buy in your life. Not only do you have to pay for the car, but when the car breaks down you have to pay someone else to fix it. Self-driving cars can put an end to that. If a system is developed, as pictured by Google cofounder Serger Brin, where fleets of self-drving cars drive down the road as taxis to assit you and pick you up, then you won't need a car. And if you don't have a car, that means you don't have to pay for the up keep on it. This can save everyone thousands of dollars a year. Money that you would usually spend on your car. And even if the taxi system is not invented, you will still use 50% less gas which allows you to save more money every time you go to the pump.\n\nSelf-driving cars are not only the future, but hey are the now! Telsa projects to send there first self-driving car out this year. This car could save lives, the environment, and your pocket! If this car could do all this why would you not be for this car? Some may say that self-driving cars are one of the greatest inventions ever created by man kind!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How much money do you think you would you save from gas if you didn't use your car? In Germany people do not use cars, they have given them up. In Vauban's streets they infulenced people to not drive their cars or own a car so they would not pay have to pay $40,000 for a garage to store in their car, including a home. Over all Vauban's streets are car free, 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own a car and 50 percent sold a car to move there. When a place becomes car free it leaves more space for walking and less space for parking.\n\nParis enforced to ban driving to clear the air of the global city. Drivers would have to leave their cars at home if they had odd or even numbered license plates or pay a 22-euro fine. Car traffic decreased to 60 percent in the capital of France after five- days of intensifying smog. Exceptions were made for plug-in cars, hybirds, and cars carrying three or more passengers. Public transportation was free from Friday to Monday. Paris has more smog than other European capitals. The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to recind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\n\nCar-free day is a program in Bogota, Colombia;it began in the mid-1990s. The program is meaning to spread to other countries and the goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Colomians did a varitey or activities as a use of transportation; hiking, biking, skating, taking buses, taxis to work on car-free day. Streets were more clear. When Colombians drove cars on this day they would pay a $25 fine. Two cities from Colombia, Cali and Valledupar joined this event, people would still participate dispite the weather condition they were in. Changes were occuring, parks and sports centers were blooming in the city, uneven sidewalks were replaced by smooth sidewalks, new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nPresident Obama's goals were to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions. Recent studies say that Americans are buying and driving less cars and licenses are decreasing as each year goes by. The rise of cellphones and car-polling apps has faciliated and more commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work. New York's biking program bridges and tunnel tolls reflect new priorites as of car-sharing programs accross the nation. People have used other kinds of transportation instead of using their own. Mr. Sivak's son lives in San Fransico and owns a car but uses Bay Area Rapid Transit. A study has shown that fewer people have found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001-2009.\n\nYou waste money on gas for your car. There is another way of transportation you could take to arrive to your destination to save money. You could go car polling with a friend or take the communities cheap transportation. Using a bike is also a simple transportation and walking...most people are capable of walking. When cars use gas it eventually spreads in the air that we breath. The only way to decrease the polluted air is to limit car usage. Countries are helping in a way, by encouraging them to participate in a program (car-free day) and banning cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article talk about the planet Venus. Venus, some time called the ¨ Evenin Star,¨ is one of the brightest pints of light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is the closet planet to Earth in term of density and size, and occasionally the closet in distance too. Each prevvious mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Numerous factors contribute to venus´s reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blakents Venus. On the planet´s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Astronomers are fascinted by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar sistem. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. The (NASA) has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light can´t penetrate the dense atmosphere. More importantly, researchers cannot take sample of rock,gas, or anything else, from a distance. Nasa is working on another approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus´s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another projects is lookin back to an old tecnology called mechanical computers. Our travels on Earth and beyond should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. In conclusion the challenge presented by Venus has value.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patience good thing rough time life Patience people bringing something They could three hours herd There people cant three hours There people cant ten minets These people get made give But people cant people cant quit People one hour blow And people cant So find anything cant", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem to be extremely close to releasing to the public. Many companies have been working on driverless cars for years. These cars have great potential to change the world of transportation. The cars have positive and negative aspects, but I believe that driverless cars will be a positive effect on the world.\n\nDriverless cars could change the transportation. It would make it easier to go place to place. Driverless cars could prevent accidents from occurring in everyday traffic. These cars would be much safer than a car with a reckless driver. Millions of car accidents happen every year, but driverless cars could potentially prevent most of these accidents. With a driverless car, the passengers are safer because the car is programmed to work well. If there was an emergency, someone could take the wheel and have control of the car.\n\nDriverless cars have great potential for public transportation. Driverless cars could act like a taxi or bus system. This system of driverless cars would safe people money by not owning their own car. It would be safer to have many of these cars. Millions are killed in drunk driving accidents, and these cars would give potential drunk drivers an alternative way to get home safely. These cars could be used in a public transportation system to help people travel in their every day lives.\n\nDriverless cars are approaching quickly, and there must be decisions made on their involvement of people's lives. These cars would be safer than reckless drivers on the road. These cars have a potiental of changing public transportation, and they would make it more convenient and safer for others. Although there are some negatives to driverless cars, the amount of positive aspects outweigh the negative aspects. Driverless cars should be developed and reach the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir proud I could tell mood like would always talk parents gave much come For example paragraph says My mother father came country courage without knowledge language Or culture To give children better life even though meant leaving behind family friends careers country loved I could feel prid talking parents left every thing basicly Also mentions parents opened arms ever needed help even though richest people either He gave many examples throughout memoir strongly showed mood made memoir pride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly believed by many that inflating the cost of fuel is the most efficient way to solve environmental issues. I partially agree with them because I believe that although it is an important way but there are many other more effective ways of doing so.\n\nOn one hand, increase in the rate of fuel would definitely reduce the level of pollution to some extent. As increased rate will discourage people to use their vehicles unnecessarily, as it is a common trend to drive a car even though the distance is walkable. This will encourage people to use pooling of vehicle while going to same site. For instance, if five people from one community work in same office or location, it is the efficient to go by one car alternatively. This will also motivate them to use bicycles and public transport system. Thus, this will solve the problem to some extent.\n\nOn the other hand, I believe this is not the key method and there are many other effective ways to solve environmental issues such as growing more trees and avoid use of plastic bags. Plastic containers should be replaced by bio-degradable glass dishes. Also I believe that this change would provide some level of discomfort to the public as the public transport system in most of the countries are not very convenient. In short, only increasing the rate of fuel would not protect the environment, people have to become conscious about the surrounding and put their contribution by many other ways such as aforementioned.\n\nIn conclusion, I agree that inflated rates of fuel would decrease the environmental problems but it is not the most efficient way, as it will benefit the environment but may provide inconvenience to public. Only increasing the rate of fuel would not improve the adverse condition of our environment, many other measures need to be taken such as planting trees, choosing glass over plastic and using renewable resources instead of fossil fuels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, there are advance technology in the society such as computers, cars, cell phones, and etc but no one ever tried to develop an driverless cars. Today in our society, many people tried to develop new technologies because things are getting more advanced an effective. Driverless cars are one of their plan, where the cars has sensors and know what to do. I agree the development of driverless cars because the cars uses less fuel, less car accidents, and there is still alert in the car.\n\nThe driverless cars should be develop and introduced to the soiety because the cars uses less fuel than the cars we used today. The text states, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" From this example we can tell that the cars is great because they used less fuel than the the cars we sued today. Thus, people do not have to worried about they will ran out the fuel when they're driving. Most of the people loved to use cars that used less fuels because they do not have to spend much money on the fuel. The text also states, \"Offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" This example shows that the driverless cars have more rooms than a bus. People to sit in a place where there is not croweded because it's comfortable. Driverless cars solved the overcroweded the problem because it got more spaces. Thus, I agree the development of the cars.\n\nWhile the driverless cars used less fuel, the cars can drive million miles without a crash. The text states, \"Their cars have driven more than half million miles without a crush.\" This example tells us that the car is safer than the cars we drive today. If a car can drive million miles without any crashing then we considered it's an great car because most of the cars were not safe and it gets into car accident very often.\n\nThe most important is that there are still alert in the car. The text states, \"...Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of hallways.\" This example shows that when there is something happened to the car, the cars will alert the driver that there is something going on but most of the cars do not have that kind of technique. Second, the text states, \"Dealing with comlicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" This example shows that when there is an major accidents or traffic issues then the car will alert you to move out the car quickly before anything happened. In other hand, people disagree to develop the driverless cars. The text states, \"Why would anyone want a driverless cars that still needs a driver?\" They claimed that the driverless cars should do everything by itself instead having the dirver controlling it. They think there is no difference if we use a normal car. I disagree with them because it's safer if we have a real driver in the car, they'll prevent anything bad happened.\n\nDriverless cars can have more advanced technique in the future when there are more people supporting it. Thus, we should not give up on developing the cars because the cars uses less fuel, less car accidents, and there are still alert in the car that helped people to know what happened.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has greatly advanced throughout the years. It goes from the first light bulb, to the first phone, to cars, and now to todays technology, such as smart phones or self lacing shoes. Now there is even a more advance form of technology, and that is a computer software cabable of scanning faces to help determine/understand the emotions of another human. Profesor Thomas Huang, of Beckman institute imagined being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, thus he invinted his new computer software to help him do so. With this new software he claimed it would help students understand each other better, not only that but it would help teachers understand the students better as well. Which I believe would valuable and would greatly impact schools in a good manner.\n\nFirst of all this is how Huang's technogogy works. The computer is to construct a 3-D type model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the said model will need to move just like a humans.Then with its six basic emotions, happines, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness, it will associat each of the emotions to the characteristic movements of the facial muscles. The article gives the example of how your frontalis pars lateralis muscles raise you raide your eyebrows when you are supprised. Also the human orbicularis oris tightens a persons lips to show they are angry. The emotions we show and how we show them are universal, even if we all show them slightly different.\n\nNow with this new found software/technology students would be able to benifit from this. As a kid sometimes you dont show/share your emotions well with others, espically if youre a teen. Sometimes it is hard for people in genreral to open up to others, because we don't want them to worry. But with is extraordinary invention kids/students would be able to help themselves and each other with their emotions. Here is an example, if a kids parents are getting divorced, this will greatly impact that kid. It might make him mad, sad, stressed, all other sorts of things. One day if the kids friend asks him how is he doing and the kid just says fine, that is the end of that conversation and the kid wouldn't have gotten the support of his friend. Now if the emotion scanning was used on the kid then maybe his friend would be able to see that the kid isn't alright and needs to talk to someone. This could help so many kids with issues like this.\n\nFarthermore this wouldn't only be helping kids but this would be helping teachers as well. It could help a teacher understand what his students are thinking, such as if they understand the subject or not. With this technology in use a teacher would know if a student is becoming confused or maybe even bored for that matter. Thus allowing the teacher to modify the lesson he or she is giving, and in doing so he or she is becoming more effective instructor. With the emotion scanner in a classroom it would become a better envirement for students due to the fact the teacher can now tell who is confused and may need extra help with the lesson.\n\nThe new technology that is able to read and understand emotional expressions would be very valuable to a classroom/school envirement. Not only would it allow students to help each other by now being able to share and understand their/ their friends emotions, but it also now allows teachers to help students if they do not understand what is being taught. This new software seems to have the capablity to make school a better place for all the people in it, adults and kids alike. Technology right now has the capability to\n\nmake schools better for sutdents and teachers, that can only mean there is a strong possiblity of even more technology to come in the future thus increasing better school envirements even farther.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future. Some people think that the future will have flying cars, and meals will be in pill form. Some people think that the world will be all shiny and futuristic, like in the movies. I beleive that we are living in it. A new development of software was made by Professor Thomas Huang. He invented a software that is able to improve accuracy in perceiving the emotions of people. This is a genius idea. It can be used for so many things, and it could be very valuable for school systems. This software development could be very useful for schools because it can tell when a student is lying about something, it can tell how a student is feeling about something being taught, and it can tell what the student enjoys, and what the student dislikes.\n\nThis technology could be very helpful for classrooms because it would be able to know when a student is lying about something. You might be wondering how it is able to do this task. In an article named, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" it shows how the technology of the software, the Facial Action Coding System, is actually able to detect the emotions of peoples' faces. In the text is says, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of th face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is calles an \"action unit\". Then DR. Huang relies on the work of pshycologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckham, creator of FACS(Facial Action Coding Sysytem). Eckham has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\"\n\nThat whole pragraph shows how it can pick up peoples' emotions, and detect how they are feeling. So if a student was lying about something then this software would be able to detect the emotions of someone lying and it would be able to catch them.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could be very helpful in teaching. If a student was not happy in the way a teacher was teaching something, the Facial Action Coding System would be able to pick this up and show that the student was not happy about the way someone was teaching something. This could help impove school systems everywhere because the teachers could then brainstorm other ways of teaching, so that the students could fine it more enjoyable, and they could wrap their head around a subject that was too hard for them to learn. In the text it says, \"His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" This line of text is showing that this program is actually reliable because it is able to scan anatomical features of someone, which conveys a persons emotion on weather they are happy about something.\n\nFinally, this software could help schools because it can help see what students like, and what they dislike. If this technology was actually succsesful, then it could help out teachers greatly because it can help them decide what the students dislikes, and what the student enjoys. It would be able to do this because it would be able to use face recognition to see how a student feels about something. If the teacher showed a student something, and the Facial Action Coding System showed happiness, then that would mean the teachers should use more of that tyoe of stuff. If a teacher showed something, and the Facial Action Coding System showed that the stdent didn't like that, then the teaher and the schools would use less of that.\n\nThe technology of the Facial Action Coding System would benifit school's greatly. This software development could be very useful for schools because it can tell when a student is lying about something, it can tell how a student is feeling about something being taught, and it can tell what the student enjoys, and what the student dislikes. The Facial Coding Action System is the future for schools, and the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article is about an author explaining why studying Venus is a worthy puraauit despite the dangers that come with it. Although studying Venus is a big thing for NASA, their are still many risk and things to know before making such a discovery.\n\nIn this acticle it says that Venus may have been another copy of Earth thousands of years ago. This may be true but some scientist are still not sure. But they have prove, in pictures of Venus it is shown tha this plant has mountains and other features earth has. We all know earth is mosly covered in water, but many scientist thing that Venus may have had water like earth thousands of years ago. In the article it say \"venus is somtimes referred as earth's twin', and many scientist think that is true since both plants have some of the same features. But scientist still want to have a closer look deeper into venus so see if they are really twins or they are completly the oppsite of each other.\n\nNext the paragraph talks about how many scientist have already sent various objects to venus but really didnt last that long cause of the density and tempature of venus. And since no spaceship has survived landing for more than a few hours, this explains why scientist are working reslly hard to get on venus. The author alson states that \"spaceship have not touch venus in over three decades\" which is a really long time. That saying that the author said is really powerful casue it shows how much time it has been and probaly how much time NASA has been working on this project.\n\nlastly in the article it says that scientist have reveled one of their projects that they have an impact in this discovery. NASA has reveled that they have been working on a computer that as they say\" can take the heat and the denisty of venus\", which they say can becasue it was tested ina stimulation of venus. Scientist have also said that this device can last up to three weeks in this weather which is a hige impact and accomplishment. The awesome thing about it is the device makes caluation from the gears and levers. And the aouther alsosaid that they used this type of technology in WWII which is very hard to think to have such high technology at such time.\n\nThe author did an amazing job explaining why scintist should expolore venus more. He/she also did a good job explaing the details and facts about venus. He/she also did a good job showing the simlar and different features earth and venus had. But the important part part is how he/she supported their answer. After reading this article many people will agree with the descoveries that should be made in venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I patient I wanted psp So time I wanted psp bad I ask parents said I wait till But I really wanted I decided wait long time I finally got psp", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story begins author cyclist taken directions several old men reach bikeridden destination Yosemite National park He starts confident enough reaches first town gentleman described It ghost town amuses author still believing hes perfectly fine sets time arriving place One ramshackle shed several rusty pumps corral couldnt hold lamest mule It point author starts worry water supply low He preceeds past rolling hills snakes tumbleweeds different landmarks Each one rips confidence exciterent shreds Especially juice factory author currently dehydrated losing hope Finally arrives water seeks form Gary wilbers fish camp refreshes driedout hope Each time author passed landmark confidence took beating even though dire physical health hope sunny breezy vacation drain person even inside", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This techonlogy can show poeple how therer emotions are say that there is a women stading there and the computer starts to scan her face and starts to tell her about every one of her emotions that she has that she never even felt like that basic that u can change thta like if the computer said that u are unhappy sad and feel wanted whaat if u change that and go back o skan your face after a month u fixed all your promblems and it tells yyou u are happy u are wanted and u are no longer sad or any kind of depressedment so basicaly this computer can possibly help people out with there promblems just like a person that talks to u to get out your emotions that u have built high inside u thats what this computer can do to help those people that need it promibly stop the killing your self and doing any thing thats is a crime it just might stop crimes to to tell the person what they are feeling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports this claim very well by showing how survivable Venus could be.\n\nFirstly, the author states, \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" This shows that we would have healthier and more energy were we to live on Venus, and living on Venus is the main reason to explore it. This piece of evidence also shows although radiation wouldn't be any better on Venus, it also wouln't be any worse. Which could be a tremendously amazing thing.\n\nSecondly, the author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans that could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Although this evidence speaks in the past tense, this still shows how little we know about Venus and how much we could know if we were to explore it better. Even though it is intensely dangerous, it is beyond worth it if we were to attempt to start life on our twin planet.\n\nLastly, the author states, \"Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This shows how well the planet is, in the present; as well as how good of an idea it would be to find out more about it.\n\nIn conclusion, there is still so much left undiscovered of Venus, and the author layed out many good reasons as to why we should still continue trying to explore it. Besides, history never would have been made, in all of time, if no one ever took a few risks here and there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mona Lisa's emotions were recently tested and showed she was prodominantly happy in the picture she is so famous for. Her emotions were read using new software called the Facial Action Coding System or FACS for short. After the Mona Lisa scan, they saw that she was 83% happy, this is a positive for people who admire the Mona Lisa. Thus, A new software has came out and it did a positive thing already by reading the emotions of the Mona Lisa, a very admired painting.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a system that reads the emotions of its subjectees, The program takes alot to run as it has to run many complex algorithims , which may be slow for a computer that is slow. It can be used in others places rather than just in paintings, it could be used to read the emotions of drivers before a crash takes place, This lets the cops know if the person was on anything, as his chemical levels would be at a disbalance.\n\nClassrooms are a notorius place for students to fall asleep to the sounds of their teacher or to easily get off task and the teacher may not even know, but with the Facial Action Coding System, it could read the students emotions to see if they're up to date with whats going on in class, you could see if any of them are bored, or .distracted, this helps the lesson planner by planning more accordingly based on independent classroom statistics. Thus, classrooms are a good place for children to be, but they would be better off if they had fun while they had schools as well, this gives them the idea that school is fun and they should give it another shot.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a software program that follows intense algorithums that allow it to the the amazing act of reading other emotions, this is very helpful in todays thoughts, it can be used by law enforcement and schools in America. Therefore, its uses are very important for the public and the federal government as it may use this technology for their own uses.\n\nIn the end, this technology that was just invented was a game changing techn ology, it can be used on both a psychological exam of just the study for students in a classroom. The FAC System successfully read the emotions of the notroius Mona Lisa, a famous painting from a very long time ago. Thus, the Facs system was a game changing break through that will likely be incorporated in finding statistics or just reading your students emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affect cyclist hot heat California June nobody wants outside But first heat took lot body trying keep cool Then came factor little water reached first town story said A tar like substance oozed followed brackish water feeling somewhere neighborhood two hundred degrees So cool water drink says Not two miles next section ride I noticed terrain changing Flat road replaced short rolling hills So cyclist little water endoor hardest part ride Then later makes mention change paragraph loss consciousness Also talked might getting heatstroke Hinting fact setting affecting many different ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology called the \"Facial Action Coding System\", or FACS, that enables computers to identify human emotions is a way to destroy the teacher's way of teaching because Dr. Huang quoted, \"A Classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" and \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". In this argument, if the computer can do such, then there is a high chances that the job to teach will be replaced. In an intellectual student's view, it is best to be taught directly from a human teacher since it has emotions, efforts, and its struggles.\n\nThere is also another reason why this technology isn't the best to teach. The author states that, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to understand that, too.\" It's only because then the teacher can't be that person who only teaches, it got their students as their great friends to talk, to trust, and to learn from them. Without teachers, then what do the computer teach? There is so many informations in a computer, yet the teacher teaches only one subjects. It's best to be taught by a teacher who can be your friend you trust and to learn, as well.\n\nAnother reason why it is not best to have FACS is because of this text that the author states, \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a smiliar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This is what is not great in the classroom. The students might not be entirely happy, or frown. They would be bored most of the time, and if that happens, an ad will try to make the students smile, which means it can leads to inappropiate ad such as pornography, online games, etc. It's a valid reason that FACS shouldn't be in the classroom, and isn't worth to have it.\n\nAnother reason that FACS shouldn't be accepted into the classroom is because the auther states this from the paragraph 6 about ads example. They can be a lot distracting if you're taking a test as well as quizzes. Ad changes based on your feelings, which means it would bring out games that makes you excited, and play that game, which will causes a huge amount of distractions in the classroom.\n\nIn conclusion, it is best not to bring a FACS to a classroom. You'll only get distractions from it. It's also recommended to be taught by a teacher since it can teach you one subjects you choose, and possibly makes you better than before. The emotions may be important, but in a teaching matter, a computer technology that can identify emotions isn't important at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over time, we learned venus advanteges, and disadvanteges. Studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The more challeging it is to study venus, the more people want to explore.\n\nFirst about 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. What's more challeging is the clouds of high corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmopshere. In venus the temperture average over 800 degree. Which is also more than we experenice in our plant.\n\nSecond Also Researchers would not be able to take any samples of whatever sort. This would be diffecult for researchers to contine with the mission. In order to get far more information is to find a way to get up close and personal to venus even if it is risky.\n\nLastly striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the plantet itself, also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally discoveries.\n\nStudying venus is worthy despite the danger it presents, it is more likely a better chance researchers will be able to find something we never knew before.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The voters of America do not vote for a president; they vote for a slate of electors who then elect a president. The Electoral College is the process of voters relying on a slate of electors to vote for the pesidential candidate of their choice, though they cannot always guarantee who the electors will vote for. The Electoral College should be changed to election by popular vote for the president because it is a non-democratic method since voters do not get to vote for a president diectly, even though the outcome is almost always in the favor of the voter.\n\nThe Electoral College is a non-democratic method of voting because voters only get to vote for a slate of electors, not the president of their choice. Although it is rare for an elector to vote for the president that is not the first choice of of the people who elected him, it has happened. The Electoral College is also unfair because in the system, the \"winner takes all\". This is unfair because nominees only spend their time campaigning in the \"swing states\" that will get them the most votes. In these states, some voters know they have no chance of getting the president they wish to elect if the majority of the state chooses to elect the other candidate.\n\nThe Electoral College is an unfair way of voting because citizens do not have a voice in their elcetion; can only hope that their elector votes for the president of their chioce. Our Senator should change to election by popular vote so that every citizen may have a vote!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I understand one trying decide whether computers bad people I one thing computers turning society antisocial becoming obese alot cyber bullying happens via computers You learn read stated earlier computers many problems social lives You see much population spends least hours ween computer When typically watching videos tweeting friends This swim like activity really pulling us away social lives There many sites allow chat friends leave messages wall really communicating In way taking away social skills need later You ca nt get job instant messaging person talk face face But able email Plus much prone using thus nothing bad grade Now problem see occuring You work computer This activity monitor lets everyday since comes home plays computer time exercising Finally come last issue cyber bullying Over teens faced sort cyber bullying life When teens sion facebook twitter signing depression When teen starts get bullied usually become sad leads grades go lower due lack concentration leads depressed could make either commit suicide join gangs andor start making bad But prevent time people spend computers And I think benifit In conclusion I believe bad society I think amount time could lives I think look deep say understand need healthier", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would feel wrote story life someone found offensive took book shelves I feel censorship libraries becoming controversial problem following reasons wrong take away freedoms people different opinions views books magazines songs trying make people aware dangers One important aspect censorship becoming controversial takes away freedom speech In right speak minds If everything read censored would nothing read The liberties freedoms citizens taken away something thought inappropriate Another reason I believe censorship wrong different people completely different opinions things One person might feel book sexual assault victim offensive another person might think book informational helpful No one base censorship one belief idea never belief idea everyone approves A third reason censorship inforced much takes away awarness dangers everyday life Stories people kidnapped car crash person driving influence drugs good thing Eventhough story accounts appropriate could influencial convince someone make right choice If censor stories abduction drugs alcohol people making wrong choices one able read story make right choice instead making mistake person Although stories magazine articles seen vulgar looked upon help make people aware give people freedom speech allow opinions Censorship libraries media abolished", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the era of digital, technology is being played vital role in everyone's soul. Technology has made many advancement factors for the soul better of people such as washing machine oven etc. Robots are very important to the human imminent growth, which is estimated by the some individuals. However, other people opine that they are perilous and have many negative influences on the community. The upcoming paragraphs will not only examine the both viewpoints, but also my own opinion.\n\nTo commence with, some people claim that robots are the most significant role in the human forthcoming development. First of all it saves the time of the public, as people are very busy in their daily routine, they work hard for earning a lot of money from their company. But they do not get opportunity spend time with friends as well as family, if they use equipments, which are used in their house. They can pressure their hobbies and utilise time with others. Therefore some layman considers that machineries are better for the human planned growth. Besides this, they can do the job, if they are using gadgets. It is faster, convenient as well as comfortable. To illustrate, only women work their household chores, if they used kitchen gadgets. Which will be very beneficial for them, and they can go from working outside.\n\nOn the flip side, others opine that robots have negative effects for the human future progressive, because robots are dangers. First and foremost point is that, as we know very well it become people lazy as well as addict some diseases. For example, some people use machines in not the limit. It impacts on the human growth of health. In this way, they addict some disease like heart, fever, cold, any others which will be not good for the human impending heart.\n\nTo conclude, although robots have both negative and positive effects on the human activity. According to mine, it has more advantages than disadvantages. The use of robots will rise in the planned, which will be very useful for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars aren't a good idea. They could easily malfunction and that would be a horrible thing to happen. The driverless car has some good qualities to it and also some bad ones.\n\nThe good thing about driverless cars are that they aren't completely driverless.You will still be able to have some part in driving the car. It can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but are also designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires for the human to take over.It needs human skills to gert around work zones and even accidents, so that means it is imperative for the driver to stay alert at all times.\n\nThe bad qualities for the driverless cars is that some might start to think that the driver may start to get bored with waiting on their turn to have to drive. Some manufacturers hope to interpret the driving fun ina new way and thinks they could do that by bringing in-car entertainment and in formation systems that use head up displays. But my question is whether or not the driver will even be alert for the alert.\n\nThe odds are still in the drivers favor still because safety is a virtue. Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result there are states where it is illegal to test computer driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars.It is also bad because if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\n\nIn conclusion, I still do not think that they are safe because someone could get hurt in the process of driving. And not even that , they can get blamed for driving the car with full knowledge that it could malfunction at any point of time and it will be a question whether it was your fault or the makers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of what students do after graduating school is being topic. Some of school leavers choose to explore and part of them decided to get a job rathe than straight continue to university. This is have two-side view based on advantages and the disadvantages. I will focus on the good side first then moving to look at the opposite.\r\n\r\nTo begin, late adolescent who have been just finished their school do travels or works because they want to have real-world experiences. Taking time off to work can gain valuable life experiences such as knowing the culture in office and learn from senior that suitable to implemented in daily life. Furthermore, explore world also beneficial for them to make good connections with others from different background.\r\n\r\nDeveloping independence is the reasons young adult prefer to work and travel. People will develop skill from this decision because their life become theirself responsibility. Here learning personal management and can not dependen to others. It helps individual to face real world.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, young people is not directly going to university have disadvantages. They lost of academic momentum and will impact decreasing chance to be accepted in college because it prioritized new students who direct to go university. \r\n\r\nMoreover, social disconnect for individuals who take break may feel out connect with peers because the differences of behavior and age. Also, potential to be ignore involve in this situation because of peers feel you are not part of them. For instance, others not ask you to do group work in some subjects.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the rock you see on the photo is just a rock and it could be created by aliens but there is not signs that eny one or enything as been there and there are many othere thanks that are just like it on earth like crop scurcles. You dont complain about that and evan on some rocks in the descert are like that there is even a rock that looks like a thumb but only with the right angle or shade. Its just like that it may look like something that you know but yet it has to have all these diffrent things happen to it befor it looks like that. Like a shadow or the right angle and if NASA did find something that they really did thank it was made from aliens they wouldnt just freely relesse it to the public like that they would put millions of dollors in reserch in to find how it was built.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that, the importance of natural environment isvaluable for every people to have in there areas. The burgeoning in the manufacture of customer goods outcome in damage to the natural surroundings. In my perspective, this essay will explicate some of its causes as well as some problems to solve this matter. \n\nTo commence with, there are the predominant causes first one is. Pollution demand. To explain it, most of the people who are living in the society and other streets they use a plastic polythene, and when they buy from the market when they finish their packet they through on the road, nor they do not put into the dustbine. However, it might occur some kind of unsaftyness of the masses. In other words, when the garbage collector comes in the street to pick the waste material they go to the cabinet store to through all these waste products and then they and then they do fire on it after that pollution is create around the areas. Thus, this occur the problem of disease and asthma attack. Secondly, the main point is that less opportunities of job available in the factory. It means, if customers do not comes in the factory or shop to buy the garments so the owner of the factory will loss their sales in daily routine. Moreoso, if new fresher comes to the shop for job vacancy and the manager of the shop says their is no available and also they give a less salary to employees who working in the shop.\n\nOn the other hand, there are some Of the Tribble to solve this matter. To explain it, government should take high funds from the people and also provid some awareness and campaigned programs among society persons. In other words, there should be hight panelty to consumer goods who are doing these things. \n\nTo recapitulate, although I would like to despite in the fact that there some of the cause which can be followed by the people;however, some of the solutions which gives the benifit to the individuals to stop this habit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lost in the calculations! A new technonly is being discussed in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" The Facial Acting Coding System is said to \"recognize emotions\" and help students in a classroom. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the technology used to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable and should be used to help students be interested in class and get better grades.\n\nIn a classroom it can be very hard to pay attention if the teacher is boring, but The Facial Acting Coding system can be the end of all the bored students. In the article the author states, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.'\" If a student becomes bored the technology can read the expressions of a student and fix the problem.\n\nA student could also find it very hard to receive better grades if they can not understand the material the teacher is explaining.The Facial Acting Coding System can analyze the expression of a confused student, and \"'then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" A teacher has many students to teach and can not easily pick out who is confused, so the technology is there to help the teacher connect to her students.\n\nThe technology used to read emotional expressions of students in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" should be used to help students be interested in class and get better grades. Though students may get lost in the new material they are learning, The Facial Acting Coding System can help in many ways to solve the problem. School can be stressful if a student is struggling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hundreds of teens each year die from texting,dinking, talking to passenger, while driving or even die somthing as simple as to paying attention. Driving is not for everyone.\n\nDriverless car will prevent many accidents due to people mistake. Which are normal we make mistakes, But with the vechile watching our steps or even driving for us would be a benfit for that driver.\n\nGoogle states \"google cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\". The cars aren't compeletly driverless; they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? your probably asking, although, the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires such as navigating through work zones and around accidents, until then they are free to text with a cell phone, call someone withour stoping. In this way, the driverless car is actually a safety feature.\n\nHow the car does this is with position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\n\nBut the most important piece is the LIDAR(spinning sensor on the roof), it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car’s surroundings. The combination of all is necessary for the driverless car to replicate the skill of a person at the wheel.\n\nEven when the car require the driver aid, displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over. GM has developed driver’s seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.\n\nOver all I see benfit in having driverless cars, They driverless cars allow us to complete as task such as putting on make up or text messaging someone, but they can still allow us to take over if needed. Which means that we do not put our live compeletly in the mercy of ours cars, but rather allow the car and the driver to work as together.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certain materials removed shelves found offensive three reason The first reason maybe offensive someone else The next reason thing call offensive help teach The last reason removed thing nt like world would nt way The first reason maybe offensive someone else In society live nt go base ones option everybody right freedom speech History show many different people found different thing offensive people think book haves gays nt books many feel otherwiseThat good example people different opition The next reason thing call offensive help teach many different things The libraries place study learn bus load different things even take offensive Infact books teach us nt get offfensive one person feels long got someone love nt matter The last reason removed thing nt like world would nt way Books way someone give point veiw dislike nt take offensive try removed shelves The government take everybodys opition A prime example state funding schools big issue nt removed school someone nt like In conclusion certain materials nt removed shelves re found offensive three reasons The first reason found something offensive someone else Next reason thing call offensive help teach many different things The last reason removed thing dislike world would nt way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "there is no doubt that these days people care about knowing the people who live in their new houses and the history of the house or the building. as we know, our home is so important, we have to choose it very well because at the end of the day we need a comfortable place we need a cosy place to spend the time with our family. in this essay I am going to discuss more reasons for the matter.\r\n\r\nto begin with, there are many causes that encourage people to search for a house or flat or building where they going to live on. One of these reasons is that people put a lot of money in usually to buy their home in almost all countries so since they will spend the money they should search about if the history of the house is good or not if it is also safe or not. Another instance, is in some houses maybe in the past there was, for example,for ,example murder or crime and this going to decrease the value of the building of the home and some people do not want to live in these houses even if it is cheap. \r\n\r\nIn case the community want to know about the past of the building or even about the area, there are many ways to do it. one of the ways and the simplest one is to ask the neighbour who lives near there. another and the most famous way is to search on the internet. ,Also there are apps that give the rate and information about the place for society. so there are many ways if you want to know. \r\n\r\nin conclusion, it is so good and important thing to search for your future home because it is not about just you it is something for your family. So we all have to help and give the information to each other when we need to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" NASA finds a rock on Mars that looks like a human face. When people first see this they go crazy and jump to conclusions saying it's an alien. When I say going crazy I mean that they put this rock face in all kinds of movies and magazines. The people later find out, it's not an alien after all. After finding this out, people still find a way to believe that the face isn't a landform.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original photo. This photo revealed a natural landform. The camera had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face and people said alien markings were hidden in the haze. On April 8,2001, they got an even better picture of the rock. The picture shows the Martian equaivalent of a butte or mesa which is a landform common around the American West. \"It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho,\" says Garvin. The Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion, the last picture that was taken of the face on Mars was taken on a cloudless day and if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could have seen what they were. The first two pictures may not have been great but after the last picture that was taken, all evidence points to the face on Mars just being a landform and not an artifact of aliens. Also, the face is Martian equaivalent of a butte or mesa, which is landforms common around the American West such as the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, which takes the form of an isolated mesa that is about the height of the Face on Mars. All real evidence leads us to the conclusion that the face on Mars is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, there is a rapid growth in the number of users of online libraries. Some scholars and authors believe that it is convenient and accessible to record their achievements on websites, and I firmly agree with this point of view.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the behaviour of uploading findings and achievements online brings countless conveniences to students and experts. For example, many schools and institutions have their own online libraries for their students and staff to easily access the materials. It takes less time to virtually search papers on the website instead of physical efforts. Furthermore, the internet is a great path for writers and professionals to make sure their topics and ideas are workable. Online information can support the relevant knowledge and information for people the most of time.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some drawbacks to sharing knowledge online. Firstly, people do not always have the ability and access to the internet. For instance, it is hard for users to get any useful information when the wifi is disconnected, but they can read a physical book at any time. Secondly, the spread scope of these great achievements and findings is controlless by the network. The copyright of these works on the internet is hard to protect, authors can not get their revenues as much as they publish a real book.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the benefits of containing knowledge and achievement online are ignorable. While this convenient method needs more maintenance effort from the users and recipients of all websites.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of being a Seagoing Cowboy? If you haven't you should really think about. Being an Seagoing Cowboy has many benefits. For example, you get to go on many trips around the world and go to places such as Europe and China and much more places. Another benefit is helping people and taking care of animals. My final reason is that it helps you be more aware of people in different countries and their ways of living and it's fun.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy gives you the chance to visit many places. I got to go to Europe and China. Seeing Acropolis was special. So was taking a a gondola ride in Venice,Italy, a city with water for streets. I also toured an castle in crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. Me and the other Seagoing Cowboys also crossed the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States to get to China.\n\nThe other benefit was helping people and taking care of animals. Caring for the animals kept me busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. On my second trip, I served as night watchman. My job was to check on all the animals every hour. We had to help people in other countrys by recovering their food suplies, animals, and other needs.\n\nThe final benefit was that it helps you be more aware of people in different countrys and their needs. The opportunity made me more aware of how the people in different countrys lived and how they dont have their needs and how i was helping them with their needs. Being a Seagooiing Cowboy also is fun. On return trips we played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had stayed. Table-tennis tournaments, boxing,fencing,reading,whittling, and games were fun ways to pass the time.\n\nIn conclusion i think you shouold be a Seagoing Cowboy becuase it has many benefits. The benfits are you got to visit many places and tour many places. The other benfit was that you got to help people and take care of animals. The final benefit was that being a Seagoing Cowboy made you more aware of people in different countrys and their ways of living and it is fun to be a Seagoing Cowboy. That's why i bleieve you should be a Seagoing cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]