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"content": "I think that luke did the right thing by saying yes to one in a lifetime opportunity. People could have participated in the Seagoing Coyboy program but then again they didn't have to like luke he couldnt say know because it was on in a lifetime opportunity. In Lukes point of view to convise others to come would be it would be a lot of fun you would have a lot of fun you get to be with many people you can talk to people and you can even make new friends. The things that you can probably do there is make new friends talk to people have fun and be thankful you got . You can even bring your familey members with you or you can go a lone it is up to you but come and enjoy your self be happy make new friends and just be your self. You can always try something new rather you like it or you dont like it is is really up to you .You can come and everything but you have to obay the rules and do what you are told and listen. You can also be gratful that you got invitd to come and that luke wanted you to come you should br graeful rather you are or not that you got to go. This is what i think Lukes point of view for convincing people to come.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir tells live house lives familys names The mood story happy They want gether happy family They telling parents moved There alot love family The parents turned simple house home",
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"content": "From my opinion I think this is one of the best technologys I ever heard about. I think this technology would be a great use for students and should be allowable at schools to read the students emotional expressions. If this technology can be worked by students then it is most definitley I would love to work with this technology. I am pretty sure more students would work with this technolgy and have fun with it. And when I saying if students can work on it, I mean by making a class for this technology and have the class make more brilliant ideas and make more technololgy like this emotional reader. That is why I think this technology should be allowed at schools for the use of students and also teachers.\n\nIn schools we have many classes like Math, English, History and etc. But it would be nice to have a class about technology and have this technology in the class so students can learn how to use it and how it was made. Time bye time the students are going to know more of this technology and then this could work for the help of many students. Once they come in to class if you see them in a different mood the teacher can either send you to the office or she can do it her self to see what type of emotional expression does the student have. So this machine would be very good and it would help the school a lot with their students.\n\nWith this type of technology it would tell us what the other person is feeling or what were they thinking if we know. Like we can get a picure of Abraham Lincoln and we can read how he was when they took the picture. Not just with Abraham Lincoln but with everybody in the old age that has an original picure or painting of themselves. It would be very cool to see what they were feeling. And I am pretty sure whoever invented this machine would make a ton of money if he tells the world what he has created.\n\nSo like I said in the beginning, this is probably the best technology I ever heard about before either then the technolgy apple. This technology would be a great use for students at their schools. Not just for students but for teachers too and maybe they can have this technology at jobs and other places. Me personally if I had this technology I would use it every time I wake up and evety time I go to bed so I would know how my day went. And finally this is why I think this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom shoud be valuable.",
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"content": "Driveless cars should'nt be allowed to be on the road. I dont think it's a good idea because drivers will not remain fully focused on the road, drivers will get bored waiting for their turns to drive, and if these cars were to create an accident it would be a \"who to blame\" case.\n\nStarting off by sayin drvers will not remain fully focused on the road should be enough of a red flag to make it a no. In paragraph 7, it may state \" The human driver must remain alret and be ready to take over when the situation requires\" but, if a car is doing all the driving, it's giving the driver time to get distracted. They are now given easier access to text and drive, make phone calls, and attempt other tasks they have no business doing while driving. Making being on the road a dangerous place.\n\nSecondly, like the question asked in paragraph 8, \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Boredom to me leads to messing with other objects around me and losing focus. That's what will happen. Later to say, \"We have to interpret the driving in a fun way.\" Driving is not supposed to be fun. You're supposed to get in and take yourself from point a to point b. The passage also talks a sort of bringing in an \"in-car entertainment system\". Just another distraction in my opinion, once again, making the road a dangerous place!\n\nLastly, and most importantly, if an accident would to come of these cars driving the road, who would be the one to blame? The question is aslo found in paragraph 9. The drivers would become so dependent of the car and trust it not to get them into an accident. While the manufactures are dependent on the law to pass a law so they don't get taken down with the lawsuit of an accident their cars are responsible for. They do not want to help you, they want your money.\n\nClosing this with a stong statement: you cannot expect a driver to have such this nice of a creation in their possession and not fully confide in it. They're going to get distracted because they're allowed to now that something else is doing the driving. They're going to get bored, because now, they are hardly needed. These drivers would expect the manufacturers to take care of any problem created with the car, because of the fact that the car was the one doing the driving.",
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"content": "In this essay I will be writing about an arguement about the face being a natural lanform. I'll give evidence to my essay to support my claim of the arguement. I'll also do an introduction, a body, and a conclusion to my argumentative essay. I'll will do this in order to my arguement for this essay and I'll first start with my arguement of the scientist or person of the Face being created by aliens and then I'll support it with evidence from the article and last I'll ended it with refreshing of what I was talking about in the essay.\n\nI'll tell the person that thinks that the Face being created by aliens by saying that how will the Face be created by aliens if they would make more of those faces. We humans make building and later on make better or different than before and do think they should have made it bigger or different than before because it has been 25 years since that Face has been there and mothing has change from it but only of how we took the picture. The Face from paragraph 5 shows the face and looks like it had a nose, mouth and eyes from the picture. I can support all of this details from telling you that in paragraph that it said that \" NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possilbe landing sites for its sister ship,\" the reason I told you this is because if the spacecraft was taking photos of the planet then it could of took a photo of an alien or other more of the Face. They been circling the planet to take the photos in 1976, 1998 and 2001 they done this and they never seen the alien or more Faces.\n\nSo I was able to show of what to tell to the person if the any person said if it was created by the aliens. Also I was able to tell what would say and gave evidence to the person from the article. I did the introduction, body and conclusion to the essay and made sure if I put of what to be sure to include in this essay. I also check the checklist of any mistake I'd put on the essay or forgot to put in the essay. That is all of what to put in this essay to make sure I got everything to finish this essay.",
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"content": "The idea of driverless cars are seem to be amazing, but is it safe? Would driveless cars be better navigators then humans? There are people that would love driverless and some do not. Therefore, this decison has not been worked out. Driverless cars should not be put into development because these could effect people's safety, it will need assistance in navigation, and it is aganist the law to have computer driven cars tested.\n\nDriverless cars can effect people's safety in the car to becasue they can become careless to pay attention the to road. People will think that driverless cars could steer out trouble such as a car crash or a car that has suddenly stop. Without the driver's attention, the computer driven car could crash into something. This affects the driver and other passengers in the car. Therefore, driveless cars should not be\n\ndeveloping until developers can find a how to.\n\nThe driverless cars will need assistance in navigation by the driver. Computer driven cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. This would a good feature to have for any car. However, in the article it talks about the BMW in 2013 and it stated ,\" They can street, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designes to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigation through work zones and around accidents.\" This shows that computer driven cars will still need driver assistance on navigation.\n\nIt is aganist the to law to test computer driven cars tested. Which put development on hold.\n\nIn most state it is illegal to do test on computer driven cars. In the article it states,\" Most driving laws focus on keeping driver, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawsmakers know that saftey is best achieved with alert drivers.\" Therefore the United States focus on drivers being alert on road at times. With driverless cars the driver will not pay attentionto the road which is breaking the law.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be put in development because they effect people's safety, it will need assistance in navigation, and it is aganist the law the to have computer driven car tested. Computer driven cars needs drivers to navigate around obstacles to themselves and other passenger in the cars safe.",
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"content": "Technology has slowly been evolving and adapting to our needs as humans. These advancements improve our way of life and make things easier to do. Technology can help drive a car, state the weather, and give reminders of\n\nimportant dates and events. It can even help a teacher in a classroom. This technology is an advantage, and one that must be used completely.\n\nIn today's world, school is not the most exciting or easiest thing in the world. Students are always complaining of how they do not understand what the teacher is teaching. What is the solution? Schools can use the software \"Facial Action Coding System\" to make their classes easier and better to teach. This program would \"recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" and could then \"modify the lesson\". This would benifit the teacher extremely and help them teach class in a more efficient way.\n\nThis Software could also help prevent tragedies from occurring. For example, a child could have many problems at their house, which in turn could lead to them feeling unwanted and alone. Feeling unwanted or alone could lead to the kid doing something that they will regret for the rest of their lives. The software at school could read the facial emotion and send a message to the teacher. This allows the teacher to assure the student that everything is ok, that it will get better, and that they are loved and will always be cared for.\n\nTechnology is very valuable in school districts. It is helping shape the minds of the future people who may have an important role in the world. Without technology, many minds could be going to waste and not being used to its full potential. That is why it is important that we use technology to the max and develop the minds of the kids completley. This allows for a better comunity and city.\n\nTechnology is very important and valuable, and something that should be used to its full potential in a class setting. It allows for teachers to teach more efficiently and in a more interesting way. It could also stop tragedies from occuring and affecting the kids family and friends. It is shaping the future of the city, and the lives of many people.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are extremely dangerous for many different reasons. The first reason is that when all goes wrong and an accident occurs people won't be sure who is to blame. Manufacturers of driverless cars should keep in my the safety of the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe at all times. If there is an accident involving the driverless car and a pedestrian, will there be new laws in order to cover liability?\n\nA second but very important reason as to why driverless cars aren't safe is because anyone could just get behind the wheel of driverless car such as a child. How would the driverless car know or be able to tell if a child has gotten behind the wheel? Even though these cars have multiple sensors they still might not be able to tell if a young child has gotten behind the wheel. Driverless cars are not safe for young children and should have sensors that should be able to tell if a young child is behind the wheel.\n\nWith driverless cars anyone of any age lives could be put in risk because they would never know who is behind the wheel of the other driverless car and if or when that cars technology will fail. Driving in itself is already a dangerous task but adding driverless cars to the road will make it ten times more dangerous. Driverless cars don't have all the technology it needs to understand and be able to manage through natural occurrences. For example what if a tree falls in the middle of the road during a storm, how would the driverless car handle that situation?\n\nUntil more reliable technology and research has been done driverless cars should not be introduced to the actual road yet. Automakers need to think more in depth into real life situations that happen daily on the road such as pedestrians deciding to cross the road randomly or a sudden thunderstorm. Things like that happen each day unexpectedly and can't be prevented by technology. Manufacturers did come up with a great idea regarding driverless cars but there needs to be more thought put into to and the safety of other drivers and pedestrians should be kept in mind.",
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"content": "In this essay, I'm going to talk about the new softare, that is called the Facial Action Coding system, which can help the computer to knows if we are sad, happy or angry. Putting the example of the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's called Mona lisa. I'll explain why this software is a very good idea, for the teachers and the students too. The software can calculate \"emotions\" like math homework. Just recognizing the subtle facial movemets that persons use to express how they feel.\n\nThe new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application for a variety of industries. It's a new software that can recognize emotion, and it's the last innovation from prof. Thomas Huang and his colleague Are experts that are trying to do better ways for human an computers to communicate. This process begins when the computer does a 3-D model of the face; creating at least of 44 major muscles making it move like human muscles. Eckman has classifies six emotions ( happines, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and saddnes) Associating each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example: your muscles above your eyes rais your eyebrowns when you are surprised. The software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.\n\nA big example is The subject of Leonardo da Vinci's, Mona lisa. Da vinci studied anatomy to thelp them paint facial muscles for paint special emotions. This subject is really intented to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how this can computer can do. Your PC can't handle the use to decode Mona lisa smile. But this invent can write down simple instructions that \"encode\" differet emotions. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\n\nThis software makes the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused, then it could modify the lessons, like an human, It's great right?. It can indicate the difference between a genuinie smile and a forced one. To finish with some cientifics conclusions and understand better your boddy. According to the Facial\n\nFeedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not ont only express emotions, but also may help produce them. A example is when a drama coach tells to his actor carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage because empath might happen when you see someone else expressions.\n\nIn conclusion a think this is a good idea, because you can problably know when a friend is feeling just looking on his face, so imagic that a software in your computer can know that, is amazing right?. Also this project helps a lot to the students when a subject is hard and they get confused, this is going to help you, or when you are reading too much, then you get bored. This software project would act as an human.",
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"content": "Many people beleive that the face on Mars was put there by aliens a long time ago. However, I beleive that the face on Mars was just a landmark that form over time. There are many reasons why I beleive this.\n\nThe face that scientists found on the surface of Mars was about two miles long from one end to another. The face was captured on pictures by vicking 1, ( A spacecraft circling Mars). NASA unveiled the image to the public for all to see. They flew over Mars and snnaped pictures of the face ten times sharper.\n\nNot everyone was satisfied. The face on Mars was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude, where it was winter in April 1998. Thousands of anxious web surfers were when the image was uploaded on a JPL wbsite, revealing that it was a natural landmark. There were no aliens after all.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. Mr. Garvin says that it remind him of the Snake River Plain of Idaho. scientists asked for peoples opinion on what they think its from. many results came back that the face on Mars was just a landmark tat was formed over time.\n\nIn conclusion the face on Mars has been proven that its just a landmark. Many scientists say the landmark was formed by a Butte ( a dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa). Many peaople done reserch and got the same result that the face is just land that formed together over time.",
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"content": "How would like someone took book away language nasty meaning I mean course certain books censored exclude great novels past These novels acceptable back If want censor boks library Personaly I nt believe censorship books It author meant write book way writing stay exact way Censoring destroys books learning curriculum multiple students You would censor school book graphic text covers There tons books bad language perverse ideas These books penned educate civilization If take away books harming societies ability learn Books I believe offensive unless selfconscious person Reading book delightful experience nt marred censorships In personal experience I problem reading exquisit novel minor graphic details I care explicit word reading Albeit neive persons remove offensive articles public good personal gain These offensive tactics disgrace literature culture books writen today s world far less explicit Thus would creating unwanted barrier When burned books almost lost whole civilizations culture literature This never happen today s literature If censor books libraries loosing certain aspect culture The censorship articles reading libraries kept personal libraries personal libraries The libraries public reason In conclusion Censorship placed libraries disrupts public literature If books meant read way We destroyer classic literature never come",
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"content": "In story Rough road ahead setting affects cyclist The cyclist affected lack water distance travel hilly terrain The water bottles contain tantalizing sips wide rings dried sweat circled shirt statement shows water tired hot The setting affected cyclist lot story",
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"content": "\"Thats incorrect!\" Sara shouted to her colligue. \"Theorys are very unbelieveable myths, especially one with aliens.\" Many believe research to be true, but others still believe in theorys. Research is not always correct, but it can be proven correct after trial and error. The following agrument is concluding whether to believe theory or research is most truthful in the scenario of the \"Face on Mars.\"\n\nTheory is false in many ways. It is based on an assumption or a belief that something irrelivant has happened. For example, believing in aliens or the Big Bang Theory is quite inaccurate. We have no proof of their existance or records of their happenings. Some believe \"The face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars.\" This was proved wrong by NASA scientist Michael Malin when he \"flew over Cydonia for the first time ... his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.\"\n\nMalins major accomplishment had \"thousands of anxious web surfers waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform.\" This spread news to the people that the research is in fact correct. The \"Face On Mars\" was not an \"Alien Monument\" because it is \"a natural landform.\" Theorists still refused to believe this as they keep their hopes up to one day see alien forms of life.\n\nAlthough the \"Face On Mars\" was proven not to be an \"Alien Monument,\" it does have to be specified to the public of an assumption on what they believe the formation might possibly be. \"Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars exploration program,\" concluded that it is a \"Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa.\" Yes, this is a type of theory, but it is a relevant theory based on a previous discovery of events.\n\nThe previous statements prove that research is the most truthful way to belive in the scenario of \"The Face On Mars.\" Scientists Michael Malin and Jim Garvin proved that the what was believed to be \"Alien monument,\" was actually a landform that is common around the American West. \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa.\" In conclusion, the \"Face On Earth\" is proven by research that it is not an \"Alien Monument,\" but an American West resembled mesa.",
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"content": "Even though many people fantasize about having a driverless car that drives on it's own, they are absolutely not needed. Does one really need a smart car to function everyday life? No, of course not! I am against driverless cars in every way shape and or form. The fact that many people can consider having these cars to be available is ridiculous and insane.\n\nFirst off, although I am aware that Google already has had cars like these out since 2009, that still does not change my mind. This is mainly because even though these cars have been existing for more than 5 years, they are still not common everyday cars that one would see on the street. This shows that consumers are not completely on board with these cars either. Now I must admit that these cars can offer many advantages to today's world like just being able to work on half of the fuel of today's taxis and having more flexibility than a bus. However, the human population is constantly growing and it would take so long to be able to produce enough cars to replace the entire transport system of the world.\n\nIt can not be denied that technology has pretty much taken over the entire world. Whether it be our cell phones that keep us occupied for hours on end or our circuits that help light up towns and buildings when it is dark outside. Don't get me wrong, I love what technology has been able to do for us, but I also hate what it has done to us. It's made us all obsessed with social media, and even somewhat lazy. How are we ever going to learn how to do something by ourselves when we have technology to do it for us? That's why the thought of having driverless cars produced scares me so much. we take test after test trying to get our driver's license but when we are finally able to drive, the car does it themselves and we just sit back and watch it. Of course we can intervene at times, what happens when we are not alert enough and get into a horrible accident?\n\nFinally, with new driverless cars, comes with possibly new laws about them. In my opinion, it is such a hassle on everybody's part to come up with new laws about transportation safetly when we already have laws about that. Not only will it become a hassle for the lawmakers, but it will also become a hassle for the companies that will be producing such cars. I mean, what would happen if these cars keep getting into traumatic accidents? Now even though companies can promise that their vehicles will be safe at all times, technology isn't perfect enough to ensure that the driver will be one-hundred percent safe at all time. It puts the consumer and the producer in a bad place when the accidents start to occur. Also, can't you see that the more technology that takes over our lives, the lazier one becomes? If we start with cars that can drive for us, what's next? Strollers that can stroll by themselves? Or how about planes that can be piloted without a pilot? As you can see, the more technology we have, the more endangered our lives become.\n\nI have many things that I wish would be developed and be available for us to consume, driverless cars are not one of them. I am not sorry about my opinion because in my defense, there seems to be multiple evidence on why driverless cars should not exist over why they should. Even though like I said before, these cars already do exist, it does not mean that they will soon be manufactured rapidly. Change can be a great thing but something like our transportation system, should not be changed just so we can have more ease in our lives.",
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"content": "SO YOU WANT TO BE A SEAGOING COWBOY\n\nIf you're reading this article, I'm guessing you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy. It's an interesting job. It doesn't require any special skills or years and years of experience. You just have to know how to take good care of animals and not get seasick easily. It's not that hard. Read on; I'll show you why.\n\nThere are a lot of great reasons to join the program. Here are some. When I was a Seagoing Cowboy,(Yes, I was!) along with helping other countries get back on their feet, I got to see awe-inspiring things, such as the Acropolis in Greece and the Panama Canal on my way to China. Taking care of the animals wasn't that hard. Sure you had to clean the poop-ridden stalls and carry up heavy bags of oats, but the animals made great company. On rides back home, you could relax and play games with the rest of the crew.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy could be dangerous, too. Once, after making my hourly report to the captain, I fell down a slippery ladder and almost went overboard and died! Luckily I got away with only a broken rib and more caution. People in the countries we aided could've been hostile. Seas could've been violent. Storms could've broken our ship to bite-size pieces. Fortunately, none of that happened;most of my trips were safe ones\n\nWhen I was a Seagoing Cowboy, it opened up the world to me. I saw that the world wasn't all sunshine and rainbows, like the little me thought. The world was full of unfairness and was my job, everybody's job, to help stop it. I stepped up to do my part by joining the Seagoing Cowboys. Do your part. Join the Seagoing Cowboys program today. Make the world a better place, one cow at a time.",
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"content": "In the current era, Many individuals are prone to give birth in their older age for various reasons. Personally, elderly people are not an appropriate age to have a baby so negative outcomes would outweigh advantages.\r\n\r\nFirstly, there are many crucial reasons why some individuals decide to have a baby at an old life in the developed world such as generating a bunch of income, which provides job security and a better lifestyle. Moreover, Some claim that giving childbirth at a young age when they are not ready not only provides a number of responsibilities to them but also reduces the freedom, which allows them to hang out with their comrades and family. In addition, from the medical surveys, 80% of mothers in an elderly life spend most of their time on hectic work due to lack of income. \r\n\r\nHowever, common abnormalities of childbirth such as Down syndrome, heart problems and other issues due to lack of nutrition in pregnancy are the most horrible effect which affects both mother's and offsprings' lifestyle in the short-term and long-term. Furthermore, the ability to take care of offspring at that life significantly decreases as they are too old to carry their offspring and play with them. Most medical research shows that a large number of abnormal children mostly happened in this phenomenon and mothers experienced losing childbirth before giving birth as physical issues. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, Although generating incomes is vital for some communities, people should be more concerned about this as negative outcomes affect either mother or children, which leads to physical and mental issues after give-birth.",
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"content": "The Internet has recently become the most widely spread means of communication and knowledge sharing. It is argued by many if any restrictions should be imposed on it. This essay will discuss both views and explain why the Internet should be free from regulations.\nOne group of people consider that the Internet was developed to overcome a government censure, thus any restrictions will destroy its purpose. Despite the fact that there were independent media, it was practically difficult to share news internally and internationally because of low speed of communication methods such as telegraph or post, which lead to the fact that the most common source of information was government authorities who selected the information they wanted to share. Thus, general citizens’ opinion, views and problems were often unheard. This essay agrees that the ability of sharing information freely between people all over the world makes the government to be transparent as everyone’s opinion and problem may be heard. For example, the problems with extinction of wild animals in Baikal region of Russia due to forest cuts was heard only after a massive attack by the media and local citizens and bloggers that would be impossible without the Internet.\nThe others insist that the Internet allows to people share not only useful knowledge, problems and new, but also violent content. The supporters of the view believe that having an easy access to such content, for example assault, production of bombs, people become prompt to criminal behaviour. Although, the Internet makes the violent information more available, the essay suggests that if an individual want to find violent information, he would do it even in the absence of the Internet. Moreover, recent researches conducted by criminalists uncovered that the increase in the number of criminal offenses is not directly correlated with Internet coverage.\nIn conclusion, although the Internet contains violent content, if needed it may be accessed by interested people from other sources of informations, meanwhile independent flow of information allows individuals to attract attention to their local and even global problems which may be hidden by governments without free Internet.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph inform hole meaning For example returned felt great bc came back belonged One reason vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding meant coming back probably best thing could done",
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"content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State building faced winds high altitudes laws nt allow airships close urban area safety passengers safety pedestrians",
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"content": "i think that it would be a bad idea for driveless cars. i think that it a very dangerous way of to get in a accident like what if the car malfunctions and rams into somebody or something it is a very way of going about buisness i wouldnt do it, even though they have been producing these cars since 2009 like stated in the\n\ntext.\"in reality,google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009.\n\nThe people that use these cars really need to be careful because those cars are very dangerous. like i said\n\nearlier anything can and will happen when driving that car even though the same can be said for driving a regular car that it is also very dangerous andyou could get hurt.\n\nWhat if someone hacks the cars mainframe and the car goes out of control and you wont know what to do, then you end up in deadly car crash.Thats a very serious thing to think about before driving one, oranother thing you would want to check is if your thing that controls the car battery is dead orif it dies while you are driving then you are doomed and theres no telling what could happen then.So everthing about this car seems really dangerous i wouldnt want to do it and i really wouldnt want to put my life on the line just for a car thats driveing its self.\n\nIn conclusion, this whole thing is a fail to me and i would not want one of these on the street because they can be very dngerous and something could go very wrong. noody would want tat to happen and that wuld not be a good thing that would be a very bad thing.I think this idea is crazy and that it should not ever happen.",
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"content": "Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about the rapid growth of the robotics industry.However,whether the development of robotics industry would bring the possible adverse impacts has cause heated debate recently.Personally I agree more with that robots are more on the side of liberating humanity from monotonous jobs and unleashing our creativity。\r\n\r\nFirst,it is obvious that the vision of the modern world where human play a important role of the creators,and artificial intelligence will construct machines to implement these creations.One of the benefits that robots free workers from repetitive and tedious job and allowed them have enough time for their creativity work and innovation.Especially in industry where robot can replace a number of people to do the same things just like people do ,which release the productivity and increase efficiency.Additionally,in a daily life context,more and more advanced robot has adopted in the healthcare,assisting surgery to success and helping disabled and senior people improve their life style.\r\n\r\nMoreover,that is not to say that the development of robot would not cause negative effort for our daily life.In contrast,the high speed growth of robots approach to be an versatile machines that often complete quickly with precise and ask for no perks such as insurance and paid time off,leading to they increase more competition than human beings in some occupations.For instance,\r\n\r\nAssembly line in the automobile industry has shown that the shift from human labor to machine can yield high product efficiency.\r\n\r\n In conclusion,as with any revolution technology,robot will give rise to some negative effects including increase employment pressure.But renewable development and choice then come.Therefore,I believe robot will play important role in the human’s future.",
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"content": "I crossed the Atlantic Ocean over ten times. I crossed the Pacific twice to help people who were struggling from World War II. The article \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" writtten by Peggy Reif Miller was not only a story for encouraging people who are down and need to do something, but it also gives the main charcter's point of veiw too. Miller tells us how daring the adventure can be over seas, but what I tell is totally different. When I was over seas I saw many beautiful things. Miller may thought it was scary, but I assure you it is not.\n\nWhen I was out of high-school I was working two jobs. I worked at a grocery store and at a bank. Then my friend Don Reist gave me a call asking if I wanted to go to Europe on a cattle boat. It was an opportunity of a life time. I said yes. It was 1945 and as you know World War II was going on. In August 1945, I received orders to report to New Orleans. We arrived the 14 of August, the day the Pacific War ended. I turned 18 before arriving in Greece. I could become apart of the army. The board saw I was apart of the cattle-boat trip. So they told me to stay on it. I was fine with it. By the time I discharged in 1947, I made nine trips. The most of any Seagoing Cowboy. Maybe one day you could become the Seagoing Cowboy to make the most trips. Maybe you could become apart of the army. If you become apart of the Seagoing Cowboy you can accomplish many things. I told you it's not scary. Your making exhilerating things happen.\n\nThe cattle-boats were an unbelievable opportunity for me. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. Seeing the Acropolis was very special though. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. It was extrordinary! I was done with the tours and we were crossing the Atlantic from the easten coast to the United States of America. I was on duty of cleaning stalls and feeding the animals. I was watch man for one night. I was making my report to captain when I slipped on the ladder. I most fell into sea, but I recovered. I had a few cracked ribs, but I was fine. I had time to have fun on board. I played many games with my friends. Some games we played were volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. A Seagoing Cowboy kind of sounds fun now doesn't it. You could have so much fun with your friends and other new people. You can have fun with the animals. The big part of being a Seagoing Cowboys is getting to say this, \"I'm grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" This awareness stayed with me.\n\nSo you got the point of veiw from other people like Miller and people who don't like the army, but now you got my point of veiw. People think it's scary or dangerous. Yes, it's dangerous, but fun. Not only do you get to help people, but you get to see amazing veiws and you get to encourage other people to do great things. I've crossed the Atlantic Ocean over ten times, I've crossed the Pacific twice. Can you do the same or something even better?",
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"content": "In recent years, there have been numerous people prefered to spend their work from home. As such, there are agreements and disagreements in comunities, although I opine thats the agreements outweigh the disagreements. I agree that it would be optimized our working performance, if we do it from home. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant arguments based on factual premises.\r\n\r\nNowadays, time is the most important factor in a person's life. A person can save a lot of time from travelling and preparations from their home to workplace. In addition, numerous hassles such as driving and travelling through public transportation will be reduced. It will comfort human life. Due to this, people will have a lot of time to spend with their loved ones. For example. as per data released by the government, numerous people are enjoying to work from their homes which has boost their work performance. \r\n\r\nOn the companies side, they gain a lot of beneficials from remote workers because they do not have to spend money to manage their employees in the offices. For example, the employer does need to spend money on food and water for their workers. Moreover, they obtain a lot of profits because of excellent performance from their employees. Nowadays, the employer can save money because they do not rent a place.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are numerous merits from remote work for employers and employees. This essay suggests companies to adopt this method because of beneficial impacts to all-around society.",
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"content": "In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author explains and presents ideas about exploring the planet Venus. They also present diffferent challenges and ideas to possibly fix them. I think the author supports their claim well and explains their reasoning nicely. When the author presents a problem that would challenge close up research, they also present a possible idea as a solution.\n\nWhen the author opens the intorduction, they begin with a few statements and facts about Venus. They give you a bit of an idea of what Venus is like. In the second paragraph, the author explains, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This statement gives you hint of just how dangerous Venus can be. The author then proceeds in the third paragraph, the factors of what makes this planet so dangerous. The author explains Venus' deadly atmosphere that consists mainly of carbon dioxide. They also explain the inhabitable temperatures of the planet's surfuace of 800 degrees Fahranheit. The author even goes to explain the impossible atmospheric pressure which is 90 times greater then our own. So if all these things are in the way of a new adventure to explore a different planet, then why pursue it? In the fourth paragraph the author states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" I suppose that could be a fairly good reason. Maybe astronomers one day, hope that Venus could return to its earth-like state and be habitable. But in the meantime, How could we make a visit possible?\n\nIn the fifth paragraph the author proceeds to explain a few options as to how humans may be able survey the suface and likeness of Venus without having too much problem. in the fifth paragraph of the article, the author suggests this: \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile condidtions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" Could this be a soultuion? The author compares the \"blimp-like vehicle\" to an airplane or a jetplane flying above a storm in the sky. The two concepts seem the same and almost seem reasoable. But the author explains that this technique may not completely solve the whole problem. Considering the thickness of the deadly atmosphere that blankets Venus, the sixth paragraph explains, \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography inneffective.\" So, the author considers all the parts and pieces to the situation and seeems to explain them clearly.\n\nConsidering that Venus is a very inhabitable planet, all the right reasons seem to be presented in the right manner to try and visit and study the planet. They also present reasonable counter-arguments as to why it might not be so good of an idea to travel all the way there to research the planet. The author includes details about Venus and background information so the reader can fully understand their reasoning. I feel this article was written clearly and is good for a reader to understand.",
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"content": "Arts is an important sector for the government of any country, to invest in. Arts encourages tourism in a particular nation. It gives an opportunity for the country to exhibit her culture, style and lifestyle to visitors. But should the Health and Education sectors be forgone for the Arts? This essay will discuss the advantages fir both investments. However, in my opinion, spending more money on health and education should be prioritised.\n\nFirstly, Arts is unarguably the image of a particular country. Their way of life is arts to tourists who come visiting. Financial attention should be paid to the arts, in order to their tourist attractions in good shapes and ensure it stays captivating as it should. For example, the Nigerian government in 2016, disbursed a certain sum of money to beautify and reconstruct most of the country's waterfalls and some game reserves, to keep them beautiful and also to make it worth its price. Therefore, the government may spend more money on Arts because it is another source of income for the government.\n\nWhile we talk about how important investments in the arts are, the necessity of the government to also invest a lot of money on health and education, cannot be overemphasised. Every citizen of a country deserves good health. The government needs to ensure the health sector is not in a needy state. Furthermore, the education system also needs financial intervention, as that will birth the leaders of tomorrow. For instance, a country where the health and education sector fails, is as good as been called a failed state; because there will be a decline in the workforce, as the population will reduce drastically due to deaths from different causes, as a result of the poor health care system. Also, the youths will be less productive due to lack of good education.\n\nIn conclusion, developing arts and culture is important as it is a way of showcasing the lifestyle of the country to foreigners and also serve as a profit making organisation for the government. However, the health and education needs more attention as every citizen of the nation, deserves to stay healthy. Moreover, all youths deserve a quality education. In my opinion, the health and education needs to be heavily invested in, in order to keep the citizens safe, sane and sound.",
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"content": "Pursuing the study of venus would benefit everyone in the society. Gathering information about Venus would give scientist more understanding about how the planet started. Also this could prove scientist if Venus was actually a Earth like planet and if so why did it turned out to what it is now.\n\nFirst, we know so far that Venus has a very thick atmosphere of almost all of it is carbon dioxide. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration have tried to send a spacecraft to Venus before but on spacecrafts survive the landing. This targets some factor including how thick Venus atmosphere is with highly currosive sulfuric acid and also it's temeprature contributes to those factors. NASA's possible solution to this is creating a blimp-like vehicle that hovers 30 or so miles above Venusian landscape. On the other hand, this vehicle can only stay 30-plus miles above surface meaning it cannot take any samples like rocks, sand or other staff. Also taking photograph of Venus surface would not work because light would not penetrate at of Venus' dense atmosphere.\n\nFurthermore, NASA have been working on other approaches to study Venus. NASA have created a simplified electronic made of silicon carbide and have been tested is a chamber which stimulate the chaos of Venus. Suprisingly, the silicon carbide lasted for three week in such condition. This silicon carbide can be indeed the only craft that would be able to collects particle from Venus' surface like rock for example.\n\nLastly, NASA have been working on is the mechanical computer. This mechanical computer have played an important role during a World War II. The unique thing about this computer is that is does not need any electronic to make any calculation. Most computer in own modern day are indeed more powerful, quick and flexible but are delicate when it comes to extreme conditions.\n\nIn conclusion, insisting of trying new and diffrent craft to go to Venus' would definitely lead us and NASA to success of collecting evidences of fossils like rocks. Trying and failing to land on Venus' surface should not stop us because this only lead us to more information that can expand our knowledge of the planet. Also this lead to even more better innovation that NASA can use and probably also us humans.",
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"content": "In the artical it give the example of smiling at a certain ad or frowning at another and the computer will no longer show you ads like that. I believe that the FACS software can be very useful in schools and other places. So here are some reasons that I believe that we should use this new software in our schools.\n\nThe new FACS software would be very useful in our schools because, like it states in the artical and by Dr. Huang, the computer could recognize when a child using the computer is starting to get bored. The computer could then change the way it is presenting that particular lesson to make it more interesting and enjoyable. This software could help bring up the overall grades by the student(s) because they now have an interest in learning the subject at hand.\n\nIn the artical it shows that this software could recognize the subtle emotions made by the Leonardo da Vinici's painting of Mona Lisa. FACS can recognize the facial expressions made by a child or teenager and recognize the six (happiness, surprise, anger, discust,fear and sadness) basic emotions, just like us people do in our everyday lives. The software can also recognize mixed emotions; FACS has found that the Mona Lisa is displaying 83 percent happiness, 9 percent discust, 6 percent fear, and 2 percent of anger.\n\nStudies have found that when you are sad and fake a smile it can make you just a little bit happier. When moving your facial muscles it not only shows emotions, but also can produce them. When studying a lesson and a child is looking sad' the software could alter the lesson to, lets say, make the child laugh. Everyone knows that laughter is the best medicine. It may not make the child happy over all but it could brighten their day and make the lesson more appealing.\n\nSo, in conculsion I feel that the FACS software could be useful in schools and just about anywhere. There are so many things that this software could do to help in our everyday lives, from making lessons more enjoyable, to showing ads that you are interested in. FACS is just overall a good software to help computers figure out emotions and maybe brighten up the day.",
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"content": "Dear ever wonder really invented ice cream cone standing licking one Well nt rip blackberry find That great thing technology You talk friends family get help Whenever need Have ever move far away best friend cried much someone thought raining Well nessesary webcam computer talk much possible Of course person pretty close You talk whenever wherever great invention computers One way computer benifits talking people friends chat If parents wo nt let get still talk friends Lastly older use facebook find friends seen long amount time Another reason computer technology great get information need Schools practicaly live computers Not students teachers The teachers assign projects include going computers finding information topic Also never heard go find It great clik buttom every bit information fingertips This coms handy fight friend better You look gotten home runs go You ve got winner Have ever dinner someone ask hockey game score friends husband brothers phone says minutes asked Well must mean internet phone Phones blackberrys iPhone internet built This means airport waiting plane play game watch television To pretty cool invention Also people business industry phones internet built look something anytime So I think technology good society Ecspecially talk far away friends whatever Kind information need already touch button Also stuff phone another technology related thing",
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"content": "In modern era where we are surrounded by science and it apply smart technology. Science has discovered many inventions that are really helpful for mankind and robots are also of them, however, every artificial has its own merit and demerit. As people have mixed ideology about robots however some people think that they are good for future development and others contradict them. this essay we will discuss both advantages and disadvantages along with my views. \r\n\r\nFirstly, these machines are equipped with high-level technology where they act like a human mind/brain. They are very helpful in every area of work. Before, engaging them in any work, we have to program in such a way, they will complete the task in less time whereas you might require multiple people for the same work. Robots are very productive in their work and they are a source of profit for companies in order to save time and manpower. They are also helpful to mankind in domestic or any other help. For instance, we are using them in satellites to collect more information on various particulars in detail. \r\n\r\nSecondly, despite many advantages, the use of robotics in every field would the result of loss jobs which would leadto a huge unemployment in society. Many reports have shown that robots have reduced manpower in every sector where that is introduced. \r\n\r\nFor ,illustration many restaurants are using robots as workers where, robots are taking customers’ orders and serving their food on the table. \r\n\r\nThus, I save company manpower. Another, the drawback of the robot is that it is the machine and controlled by human and are easy to hack. However, if bad people managed it that can be hazard to society. Moreover, we have seen in many scientific fiction movies where, robots make for society help but unfortunately, they land into the wrong hand led many casualties and it requires much efforts to control them back.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, all the new revolutionary technologies have both sides of a coin for example if used in a positive moto, they are a lot of use for the human, else they even destroy mankind. We can use them only where they are beneficial for humans with minimum adverse .",
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"content": "Can you hide your emontions by having a smirk on your face? The question is yes you can but can other people find out what emontions that are hiding underneath by using a computer.\n\nBut first we have to figure out what technology can do this and how the process works. First the technology used for this type of research is called Facial Coding System and it enables computers to identify human emontions. They way the technology works is that when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. For this to work all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human mucles to recongize the face it has to work with. They're 6 emontions that the FACS is looking for, the emontions its looking for are happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear and sadness for the technology to fully work on a human face.\n\nDifferent ways that FACS can be most valuable would be at school with all of your classmates would be if the school want ts to get on what emontions you are having when you take a picture. They could use this information to find out if a kid is dealing with sadness,anger, etc. Another way that this type of technology can be valuable for my classmates would be when we watn to figure out how the technology works or if we want to figure out what emontions we are expressig of taking one picture.\n\nOn the other hand the FACS wouldn't be valid in my opinion at the same time because since we are teens we don't really care about what emontions we are feeling at that time and moment. All of my classmates really care about in the present time is being online and using other technology instead of FACS. The different technology I'm talking about all of the technology on are phones, tablets, video game conseles.\n\nWould Facial Action Coding System be helpful for me and my classmates. I'm not sure because it could be either ways when you are thinking about it becuse there are some pros and cons to FACS being helpful. But hope that it can be used to figure out different historical paintings, sculputers, etc in the future to figure out what the artist was thinking when he or she was making to art and how they felt about when they were making it.",
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"content": "Using this type of technology of emotional expressions will be very useful for teacher and parents to help their students or children to see if something or someone is making them feel happy, angry, disgusted, or feared. Having this technology in schools will also help parents because the parents don't have to buy a computer that can try to handle this type of technology.\n\nIf teachers do a test on students that are getting bulied or getting picked on, this type of technology will help teacher get students to speak up and or find the person that is bullys other students. By showing the student that's getting pick on a picture of students the teacher thinks who maybe the person bulling the student, the student may make a fear face on the picture of the person that is picking on the student.\n\nIf teachers see that a student is failing their classes and don't talk a lot in school, the teachers can make a test on that student to see if they are going through things back at home. Teachers can have the students parents to come to the school while the student is being tested, they can have a converation on what makes the student angry or depressed about.\n\nThose are some example why I think this type of technology can really help teachers and parents learn about their students or children that they don't want to speak of. This can also help parents that can't afford this type of technology at home and having this technology at school, parents can bring their children to the school and have them get tested on what's bothering them at school or home.",
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"content": "Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that business should do more for society than simply make money.\n\nOn the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On the top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive development to society if it is in good financial health.\n\nOn the other hand, companies should not be run with sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to that their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers gave a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use portion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or educational initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through tax system.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities. Nonetheless, financial objectives cannot be denied too. Overall, it is anticipated that trend of social responsibilities is likely to incline in the upcoming future.",
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"content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that it is a bad idea. It will cause people to become lazy and sometimes forget to know how to remember what to do and not to do when they are in a bad situation.\n\nIf driverless cars are made then I feel they will be relied upon to much. Somethings that are seen in movies and on TV should not be invented because sometimes they are almost never possible to be created. I think that there will be a lot more car recks and accidents if these cars are realeased into the world today.\n\nThe thought of driverless cars would end up causing everyone to loose there jobs because they wont have to do any driving witch is one of the most common things done in a job. People will also not want to become socially active and wont know how to comunicate with other people aroung them or in there life except for the ones who have family that live with them.",
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"content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage, such as it saves gas and it helps relieve stress. \"Its a ood opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\"(Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota) says a business man that goes by the name Carl Arturo Plaza. There are amny different ways to get from point A to point B and Back to point A in a safe, and helpful way. Such as taking the bus, taxi, carpooling, bike riding, or even skating.\n\nLimiting car usage saves gas because you can use someonjes elses gas instead of your own and you can conserve yur gas when ever you really need to use it to go to the store or get something that you really need later on tin the day when you get bac to point A and see and use your car. \"Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel overs gasoline. Diesel makes up 67% of vehciles in France,m compared to a 53.3% average of diesel engines in the rest of the western Europ, according to Reuters.\" (Paris bans driving due to smog)\n\nLimiting car usage also relieves stress for some stressful people. Some people that i know get really flustered ehen they drive and they have road rage, and they have to take pohone calls and get distracted from the road and sometimes some people just need to have someone else take the wheel and they neeed to get themselves together and take a moment and reliEze that. na dnoone needs a stressed driver that just makes all of us nervous.\n\nIn conclusion limited car usage is good because it save sgas and is tgood for reliving stress.",
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"content": "Some people believe that only legislation isable to encounter the problem of housing management in major cities. In my view, both public and authorities can find out solutions collaboratively. \n\nTo begin with, the government has tthe authorityity to enact large-scale change; they can be made a decision by designi an urban organisation. For example, Singapore, they have been encountered the housing crisis and solved it by vertically building such as high-rise buildings with the proper layout. Moreover, me civil work such as hihighwaysor mmotorways might be eliminated by using underground construction where passengers can easily accessible through the subway as well as reduce traffic congestion.These abovementioned could h the residence shortage by building vertical construction.\n\nFurthermore, the government can help in this situation by expanding cities and creating more area residential estates in rural area. For instance, a fast-growing city has provided accommodation supplying population growth by building up amenity facilities such as houses, factories, and villages in the outskirt area. Additionally, some countries are enacting a policy for their citizen to tackle this problem by reducing building prices in the outer zone while increasing the tax on shack ownership in the city centre.\n\nTo conclude, it is clear that the government has played a significant role in supreme to take appropriate measurementsmeasurementsse to create planned development with the city and well-designed infrastructure to meet the population needs of its citizen.",
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"content": "The created author story couple different types moods One moods happy good One example author states I Learned love I never forget parents turned simple house home That shows good loving Next example happy good story states Countless extended family members came whentand often someone staying us temperally able get back feet This shows happy welcoming people family Another story sad One example says Could afford move moddest three room appartment This sad always want best people poor afford good place sad Also says They struggled personally financially This sad haveing trouble getting There story import I think loving A example loving states thes cultures came together great solidarity friendship That line right showing love That importand know story loving",
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"content": "Hi I'm Luke. If you have read my story good. If you havent you should you can fonf it at your local book stor. Now that you and I know this we can get starter on how you chould participate in Seagoing Cowboys. Now folow along with me.\n\nIn paragraph 1 I stated that my frenbs invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat and I said yes of cores. I woulb sujest you invest in that right now. Dont tell me no! Ok let me trie to convinse you at lest. Well of you know I will relat to my story. Make sure you keep up.\n\nFirst of all in my day their was a lot of war that just ended like states in paragraph 2. But as you know that did not stop me from going on this oportunity of a life time I it wont stop you. Bake to the story Seagoing Cowboys toke care of horses, young cows, and mules. Taking care of thies animals is hered but fun to I am sure you would like is. On to paragrasph 3 though 5.\n\nYou know how and wen they reseaaves their orders to go to Oreans. Oh lit me tell you the traveling is my beat part. You get to get away from the family. The vew is wonderful it almosts takes away the smel of fish. The way they travel the aninals is dificalt. But it works.\n\nYou will unber stand is I start hopping around because onistly some of this is easy to comprehend. In parigraph 6 though 9 it talks about how tong it takes. On the water it may seem long but it is not. Once you get on land or water it may feal weared but you wil get yse to it. It also talks about how long it takes on land to. I bont recal missing home because oh all the fun.\n\nWell I know you wont to go cattel boating now. Hold-up I know you are lieng . Don't you go and lie to me know. Thank you for telling me the trueth know. Well I hop you have as much fun as I did. But I bont have to hope I know you will and you do to. By!",
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"content": "Allowing dirigibles stock Empire State Building never possible obstacles architects faced First nature builders The strong winds top building constantly shifting proved hazard dirigibles Mooring dirigibles would lead weights question danger pedestrians Another obstacle already existing law prohibited dirigibles flying low urban areas This law made illegal dirigible dock Empire State Building The final obstacle dirigible could accidentally ignited fall New York The destruction Hindenburg made clear possible dirigible dock Empire State Building",
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"content": "All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us If one thinks books magical escape everday life They take one anywhere want go anytime Imagine world books luxury simply present allI feel would become real reality censor books Where would line drawn saying book unfit placed circulation This would hold world back since could express writing So much would left unsaid I believe quote stated quite true If place censorship one book everyone right ban books well Just certain books movies magazines deemed offensive mean banned No one withheld book due age race gender factor If one ever prohibited something due age size feeling pleasantNo one neccessarily said anything mean hurtful feels restritions boundaries set particular reason I felt way multiple times I remember one time particular I went group cousins friends Since I youngest I also shortest I could ride many rides due size I knew heighth requirements set personal safety This makes sense one required certain age watch movie watch tv show Honestly people mature others grow faster Everyone different Everyone different personality different perspective need ban book everyone different One ineligible book magazine watch movie Not wanting totally differnet getting The popular book To A banned one time simply using nword This angers many especially one ponders much slavery well affected shaped us today America great nation need restrict limit personal freedoms If anything banned I believe censorship",
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"content": "The Face on Mar's is just a natural landform because, there is no living organism on Mar's . scientist figurged it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shawdo9ws that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Some scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. So as you read you might think there is something living on Mar's but the Face on Mar's is acually is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa---landforms it is common around the American West. A lava dome is the form of the Face on Mar's, \" the lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mar's. To Conclusion, A lava dome is the creation of the Face because Mar's is not a place where you are abl;e to live because if you are not able to plant how would you have food to live and temp. get as high as 100 degrees in the morning and as low as 0 degrees at night also there are very bay storms so i do not know if anyone would be able to live on Mar's.",
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"content": "Everyone wants to be successful in their life. Few individuals opine that tertiary education is the only key to success, while others denied it. This essay will intend to analyze both the views with my pespective.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons why some people believe that success depends on tertiary educations. Firstly, people who want to be settled in their career at 23 years then have only the option of graduation. There are many professions such as Law, Engineer, Doctor in which tertiary education is essential for them. If people who complete their graduation, they will not have problem to get a job. For instance, In Amazon, people which are interested in getting a job then they will have to show atleast university education. As a result, university education is extremely helpful for those who are interested in a field job.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Some masses believe that university education is not decide your success. There are mant reasons behind this notion. In the world, many peoples have their god-gifted skills such as speaking skills, sports skills, music skills or many others by which they are focusing on that particular skill so that achieve success in life. Many things are beneficial to do practical instead of theoretical. For example, In India, 70 percent of people run their own business on a large scale but interestingly, they do not have a tertiary education degree. Hence, success is depends on you and your skills not on others factors.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although people can achieve success without any degree or education but in my opinion, in the modern era, tertiary education is a more advantageous and better option for individuals.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are very pointless. It would be a whole lot easier if we just had regular cars,because with driverless cars you could get in a wreck because the self driving cars only alert you one time when you are abou to become in danger.Driverless cars can be a great daner to anyone who buys one.\n\nI am against self-driving cars because they are a very pointless invention to our society of technology crazed people. Alot of people could die just by even purchasing a self driving car.I think it is a pointless idea to even buy a car that is controlled by a computer. In the future no one wll buy cars because they will not need them ,when the self driving cars come out in 2070.\n\nMost people think buying self driving cars are a good idea.Would you want to buy a self driving car? I would hope you answered no, because it is proven that back in the year of 2009 ,these self-driing cars have had alot of crashes. These cars are very accident prone because you can turn off the alerts on the slef driving cars when the cars alert you that you need to take over or that you are about to get in a crash.\n\nOur society is so dumb that they would buy self driving cars and just get rid of their regular cars.Lots of people think that self driving cars are not dangerous.But I would not buy one because the new self driving cars made by the search engine Google is a very accident prone car.By the time the driver sees the alert that they are gonna crash it would be to late.\n\nA majority of Americans that plan on buying a self driving car are making a very risky choice. I say this because when an alert comes up in the new self driving cars the driver will just ignore it or turn it off because they will be too busy texting on their phones to realize that their life could be at stake if they do not take the wheel and steer away from danger.\n\nFurthermore,if these cars are deveolped they will not be on the market for a long time.They will eventually get recalled because of how prone you are to getting in a crash when you are riding in one of these cars.\n\nLastly , it is a very bad idea to buy a self driving car.The car wont be able to read the messages to you in binary code.\n\nIn conclusion,please do not buy a self driving car. You as the driver will get in alot of wrecks because you will most likely be to busy on your phone to even look ap at the screen and steer away from trouble.",
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"content": "Crime rate is a matter of considerable public concern. There are several types of research to show that a low level of education causes many criminals. So people think that the practical way to reduce crime is that criminals should be educated to make sure they can find a job when they jail. As far as I am concerned, I think educating criminals is a good approach to reduce crime to some extent.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, education can help criminals find jobs. People who have to not acquired more education are harder to find a high-income or stable job than those people who have a high level of education. When they have no method to make living, they are easier to become a criminal, like a thief. So these people in jail can be educated in some practical skills to make sure they can be good at something in some fields, which can help them find work in the job market when they leave jail. It can reduce crime especially reducing the number of people who leave prison to try again to become criminals.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, education can ensure that criminals know information from the outside world. Educating criminals can make sure that they can fellow the pace of society. Criminals are punished and stay in prison so that they have no approach to acquire information about the development of the world. Thus, criminals know news about another area only in some regular ways. In China, criminals are permitted to watch TV, read books and have lectures about how to involve in society at the prescribed time. Also, they are educated to have a special skill like fixing machines, making shoes and so on. These methods can make sure those criminals know information about other areas and easy integrate into society when they leave prison.\r\n\r\nAll in all, educating criminals can make sure they have practical skills to make living is a good way to reduce crime. Besides, education can make sure they can follow society’s pace when they leave jail.",
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"content": "Most of the high level jobs are usually undertaken by men. I totally agree with the idea of Government encouraging women to take up a certain percentage of high level jobs by women.\n\nWomen are considered efficient and talented as they can finish any task thrown at them. For instance, we can see most of the women handling not only the household work but also their career very efficiently. The health sector has more women working for them compared to men as women are more accomplished when it comes to dealing with difficult situations. But women are still discriminated for their gender because of the deep rooted gender discrimination. Some people still believe that women cannot achieve perfect results in certain tasks and because of this reason, they are not given the opportunity to show their worth. \nIn many countries, women are paid less than their male counterparts but at the same time, they are made to work more. They are not trusted with politics or business management and so on. The people who hire women often fear that their family would come first than their job which can lead to less profit for the company or organisation. \n\nIt is true that women keep their family above everything because they have an increased maternal instincts which make them protective towards their family but at the same time they can balance everything equally whether it is professional life or family life.\nHistory has given us many women who had made a breakthrough in almost every field. But they were not appreciated for their hardwork. There were many women in the past who were made to fade in the background even after their greatest achievements. So it is a right decision from the part of the Government to encourage certain percentage of high level jobs for women.\n\nIn conclusion, I agree with the idea of encouraging and accepting women for high level jobs as it will enable to receive the best out of them.",
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"content": "In this first passage called \"In German Suburb, Life goes on with out cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal. This story explains the life in germany without cars. In this upscale community it cost 40,000 dollars to keep a car inside the parking garage plus you have to pay for a house. Over 70 percent of families dont have cars and 57 percent of families sold there car to life there , stated in paragraph 3 . A big advantage to having no cars is theres more clearer air around you since cars give off carbon dixide which is toxic and also everyone spends more time outdoors and gets more execrise. In paragraph 3 Mr. Walter states ' When i had a car i was always tense. Im much happier this way'.\n\nIn the secind passage called \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" by Robert Duffer. this story explains how people in Paris were effected when driving was banned. On a Monday motorist or driviers were told to leave there vehicles at home due to smog or theyll have to pay a 22-euro fine (33 dollars in america) and almost 4,000 drivers were fined. Paris has near record pollution which made them ban drivng for the global air in the city. 67 percent of cars in Paris are diesel fuel which really pollutes the air and creating alot of smog compared to 53 percent in other parts of Europe.\n\nIn the third story called \"Car-free day is spinnimg into a big hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky this story explains The day every year that they ban cars. Bogota, Colombia, home to over 7 million people every year for the past 7 years they only allow transportation by bus or by taxis. People found driving that day will be fined with 25 dollars. There goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. in paragraph 24 Carlos states \" its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nThe final story called \" The End of Car Culture' by Elisabeth Rosenthal. This story talks about making a change in the United States. Presindent obamas ambitious goal is to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions stated in paragraph 29. the United States was the birth place of Fords model T and the Detroit car shows anf its one of the worlds prime car cultures. In paragraph 41 studies have shown that\" driving by young people has decreased by 23 percent between 2001 and 2009.\"",
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"content": "There is an increasing number of people wanting to explore the background of the homes or buildings they reside in. This essay will discuss on factors that trigger the curiosity and methods that they can use to get some information on the building’s background.\r\n\r\nOne of the factors that contributes to the curiosity is the owners or tenants are keen to understand whether if there were any unwanted events occurred in the buildings previously. If there were unwanted events occurred, such as criminal activities or natural disasters, these might threaten their own safety when they live in them. The residents must want to move in into a place that can guarantee them a safe environment. Other than that, these unwanted events might also affect the market value of the buildings when these owners want to resell the house or find a new renter. \r\n\r\nThere are a lot of methods that the residents can utilize to get background information of the buildings. Firstly, thanks to the technology, the residents can use the internet to search for the information, by looking for any news related to the buildings’ area. Secondly, the residents can also inquire other people who have been living in the area for a long-term. Those residents might recall some of the events that were not reported and this can give the residents a chance to get primary evidences. Lastly, residents may inquire the previous renters or buyers of the buildings as they would have conducted their own research before acquiring or renting the buildings.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, a lot of people are keen to understand the background of the buildings they are buying or living, and there are logical explanations on why they want to do so, such as to ensure their safety and to ensure attractive market value when they want to resell or renting out the house. There are also many ways to get the information of the buildings, such as searching from the internet, and inquiring relevant parties such as long-term living residents or previous tenants or owners of the buildings.",
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"content": "I know people think that aliens created The Face on Mars. But aliens didn't, it was just a natural landform.But, yea I know how you guys feel about this whole alien situation whether it is true or not.\n\nIf you still don't belive me well listen up and then you will get that it was.\n\nSo everyone thinks that but real life scientist from NASA is real and they stated \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were! So for my opinion I do agree on the scientists at NASA. A pixel size is something that is small and aliens couldn't make the picture because, aliens are big too me. But, I know people are saying \"Aliens did create The Face on Mars.\"\n\nDon't think that.\n\nThis is my argument about how aliens did not make The Face on Mars. I hope you guys enjoyed this argument. So when you guys think about this situation just think back to this passage and it will be there.",
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"content": "The author finds ways to evaluate the dangers of exploring Venus as they find it as a worthy pursuit. Since Venus is a planet and it's next to earth, it only makes sense to explore more of what's already been explored. It's been decades sense something has landed on Venus, and no man has ever set foot there. Venus was once Earth-like in it's time.\n\nVenus is something we see all the time. \"Venus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the sky, making it simple to spot.\" It won't be easy but at least it's close. Every spacecraft sent to this land is unmanned. \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" With this they can build something stronger. They can examine what didn't work and what technologies could be better to use so they can work their way up into being able to go for themslves. Also if Venus was once like earth, theres more they need to look into, as in how and why it isn't so much like Earth anymore. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\"\n\nAs these datails could go on, Venus is something we don't know too much about because of it's dangers. But from past experiences, we could change some things to get us there. By working on new equipment and examining things extra causiously, it could get us to where we want to be to be able to explore this planet we call Venus. As it is dangerous, it can lead to something wonderful as we can discover more things. It's worth a shot!",
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"content": "Raising the price of petrol for vehicles and other transportation is one of the best ways for some people who believe that can solve \r\n\r\nenvironmental problems. I would like to share some of my opinions about it.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I agree that increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles is one of the best ways to solve environmental problems because nowadays there are too many cars running on the streets. Almost everyone has a car and does not like to use public transport because it is difficult to go to work by bus or metro ,especially from a suburb. However, if the government can raise the price of petrol and make their transportation systems more friendly, it will make citizens and tourists use it generally due to the financial concerns.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the government can make some packages for the public transportation to inspire people to take them instance of driving their own cars. For example, if people can get discount from taking public transportation, they will be willing to do it from time to time. Besides, between different places, the governments can build systems for people to bike, if it is convenient for everyone to rent bikes from one place and return to another, it will be more and more popular for people to use it and make the environment friendly.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not only because the cars produce too much carbonatite but also many other facts. Due to many studies, climate-changing \r\n\r\n is cost by many different issues which include making products related to meat, factories, agriculture...etc. Therefore, all of the facts cost different levels of environmental problems and it \r\n\r\nall results in climate-change.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though there are many issues cost the environmental problem, I believe it will have a good result if the fuel price increase and everyone will definitely be concerned about the cost and make new methods to itface.",
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"content": "Dear concern Computers whole lot days You play games homework socialize nt think better things Such exercising enjoying beauty nature importantly interacting family friends These things computers take away people Once get onto computer never want get If look nt take much work energy use computer So eat use computer day really burning calories therefore gain weight Computers make people feel lazy sometimes therefore spend less time exercising That good health Exercising gives energy good Have ever looked window saw beautiful nature When computer chitchatting people playing online friends think missing Everytime I use computer I wish I could outside playing enjoying nature Trees flowers plants grass lots things make earth people nt apreciate things So next time computer think While computer wasting time another homeless child wandering maybe looking family Would like child doesnt family type friends Lots people think life without family happen anyday So I believe instead wasting time computer go interact family friends Even conversation maybe show really care In conclusion I think computers waste time I understand people say used comunicate people back didnt computers communicated Computes make spend less time exercising keeps enjoying nature lastly interacting family friends You wo nt go wrong listen someone uses computer everyday",
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"content": "The cultural value of engaging with museums and art galleries is unquestionable; they exert a great deal of influence on our perception of the world. It is only reasonable to ponder whether or not these outlets of culture should concentrate their efforts on presenting the nation’s own art, and not that of other countries. In my opinion, there should be an attempt to strike a balance and put the objects of national art in the spotlight, while allowing the public to get acquainted with foreign artworks to a certain extent.If people were to only find sculptures and paintings by national artists in their local museums, that would have a number of positive effects, such as the fame the artists of that country would gain and the pride its citizens would feel for their fellow countrymen. It would promote patriotism and strengthen the image of the country in the eyes of its inhabitants. Local artists would also receive more financial assistance from the government as their works would generate a significant amount of interest, potentially resulting in further development of the local art. However, in order to evolve art needs fresh ideas, and without exposure to a wider range of creativity the world provides, the evolution of local arts may be hindered.People enjoy art because it appeals to their inner sense of beauty and triggers strong emotions, and whether the masterpiece that causes these feelings belongs to a local or foreign artist is irrelevant. Talent knows no geographical boundaries; therefore, the emphasis should be on how much joy or amazement the work of art brings, rather than on its origin. If that principle were to be followed, we would never have to choose between local and international art. Reducing our museums or galleries’ collections to local art works, in my view, would be harmful and go against the democratic nature of art.To sum up, it seems to me that a country has nothing to lose by allowing its people to admire art created elsewhere in the world. A conscious choice by the government to support local artists while hosting exhibitions from other countries could prove the most beneficial.",
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"content": "While few people think that weather has an eminent effect on an individual's path in life,others consider that wealth has a substantial effect.I believe that climate has the most effect on one's life.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,there are people who opine that weather plays a significant role in people's life because they are experiencing severe effects of climate change.According to them,slowly changing weather conditions,rising sea levels and other extreme weather events are devastating.It is commonly believed that there are people who struggle to earn money,support their families and build a stable home,this is getting harder every day as the climate crisis continues.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,there are others who think that wealth is playing a major role in the region because in this modern ,era everything is dependent on the economy ,For instance :If a person wants to leave a healthy and happy life they need more wealth for that .To raise the economy government is struggling by keeping taxes and GST on the economy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite people having different views,i believe that climate has the greatest involvement in a person's life.",
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"content": "My brothers checkup today I come All I sit patiently nothing I could I kept cool Waiting dark room hard I picked near car magazine started flipping interesting thing article new coming I read I went bathroom really soon back wasteland darkness I whipped phone texted couple people Five minutes passed answer I close eyes layed head back I waited waited Right I bash head brick wall brother enters room says Thats And I got text two people would better I board mind",
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"content": "The new technology called Facial Action Coding System could be used in many situations, but as far as using it in the classroom is not okay. People should'nt want to know what you are feeling. Unless that person tells you what they are feeling. In this article I will be fighting against the idea of the new technology called the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nTo me this new technology could be a use of positive and negative ways. For example in the article they describe Mona Lisa's emotions just by looking at the painting. They say that she's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This new technology can help us today by identifying people in paintings and what there emotions were while they were being painted.\n\nThe negative side of having a new technology is that, if they try to use it in the classrooms, the students will feel violated and won't know how to act because they think that people are going to judge them for how they are feeling. Like it said in the article \"facial expressions are universal,\" becuase people change very often. The new technology would'nt work if people's emotions changed often. People now and days don't even talk as much because they show it off their own feelings or emotions. I think that we should leave it at that because, people dont want their feelings to be shown out in public or to anyone, we usually want to be kept to ourselves.\n\nIn my own opinion, I think that the new technology is not good to be used in the classroom. The students already don't like school, so if they go to school and see that they are sensing their feelings/emotions, they probably won't even want to go to school anymore. If they go to school they would feel violated and not private because they are being seen or judged by their emotions and feelings. I personally dont like the idea of having that new technology, especially in schools. If I were to be seen or judged by my emotions, I will definitely be scared of how people are going to look at me or what they are going to think about me.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that the new technology would be a bad idea, because of all of the negative things that could happen. Even though there are positive things about the new technology, it doesnt reach the level of negative things toward it. My claim is of course against the new technology because of all of the reasons I listed/ talked about before.",
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"content": "I believe laughter important part relationship In relationships whether friends family girlfriend laughter always important element best relationship best friend filled laughter We always great time together like last I went snow peak friends I tore ligaments knee I jumped quad We laughed stupid getting hurt laughed big ears make look like elephant I think makes us close good friends much make laugh The first time met dating one friends first thing I make laugh ever since awesome friends Then asked I wanted work harvest fest I made laugh whole time Now I m dork best friend The biggest thing I make laugh harvest fest I wheelie tractor whole track cowboy hat huge dip lip The moral story make people laugh stronger closer relationships whether friends family significant",
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"content": "She vowed geese would return shall also test learn grow would Furthermore test love survial family tridition would know comeing back destiny In example come raise young journey shall face Help realise always come back lives started always exacpe cold man kind wants harm lives The winter months harsh They know leave She learns lessons family freedom life survival",
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"content": "Several countries have a growing proportion of youngsters who are aged 15 and younger. In my opinion, young children have a huge impact on their countries in the current life and in the future, as they will be the people who rule that places .\n\nToday, teenagers have more effect on their living places due to their activities, as well as they will be the next generation who helps to become more developed. Children's activities may have a different purpose in their life but they should help the countries where they reside.For example, in China, the young generation under the ages of 15 and 13 already knows how to work in a team and if they improve their abilities after several years they can create some new technology. As a result, children help their province from a young age and these impacts on their province will grow. \n\nMoreover, this young generation will be the rulers of their own country as a doctor, police officers and even presidents but not all of that young heirs will reach their destination due to the condition of the country. In that situation, they will adapt how to behave themselves first and start to be more familiar with their own culture. For instance, not all heir know how to act when they have new events in their places. Eventually, the heir should learn how to be a part of their society before ruling their own province.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that today's teenage boys and girls have a big effect on their country and they should help their fellows if some of them can not make it in the right way.",
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"content": "It is a critical topic whether the society should accept gay marriage and legalized this kind of marriage. This especially sensative to some people with religious background or society with strong religious background.\nSome argue that if the society accepts gay marriage, the traditional value and concept of marriage would be affected. The influences are deep and negative. For example, gay marriage is contradict to the nature and could not has next generation, in the long term, leads the reduction of population and harms the growth of economic. In addition, the society has to consider about legal issue if gay marriage is accept . For example, if an legal gay family could adapt children? Who can prossess the asset and wealth from the gay couple?\nHowever, the trend for supporting gay marriage has increased in recent decades, probably because of the equal-right campaign rapidly spreading in the world. Many people state that marriage is a matter of two adults, as long as these two adults make their decision, there is no any harm to other , and the society. Some even believe same-sex marriage is also a nautre development which is long appearing in human history. Moreover, there is no evidence showing gay marriage would harm the society , rather to promote a multi-cultural, a society should accept different races, nationalties and gay people.\nIn my opinion, we should open our mind to accept gay marriage but we should also respect some religious person' s willingness. Whether gay marriage should be legal is a technical subject that I am not the right person to comment. However, I strongly hope people could respect others with different sexual preference, communication and understanding people with different values are the key for a harmony society. We have to admit that people have their right to choose their marriage in various \"types\" .",
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"content": "Based excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The obstacles nature There s always strong dangerous winds top building So makes possible dirigible swivel around dangerous Dirigibles moored open landing fields could weighed using Empire State Building dangling high pedestrians safe Another reason existing law airships flying low urban areas If dirigible blows sharp spires building puncture dirigible s shell These reasons obstacles hard attempt dock dirigibles",
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"content": "Champions have been heralded across cultures and religions for centuries. Hercules from Greek mythology and Samson from the Bible were known for their strength. Hermes, the messenger of the Greek gods adorned winged sandals to grant him the speed of wind. From ancient to current times, champions have shared their skills via sports. But a question has arisen. What takes presedence, brain or brawn?\nFor those who believe that physical strength is important for success in sport, we must consider the effort put into performing said activities. Running a marathon is easier said than done! Raising over 500kg above your head doesn't happen overnight, or rowing in appealing synchronization without training. Athletes train in gyms for countless hours by running on treadmills, strength training and doing plyometrics to develop the power in order to effectively perform their respective sports, thus proving the importance of physical strength to prevail in sports.\nOthers believe that in order to distinguish between the average and the greats, mental strength is the factor that does so. The amount of discipline, perserverance and other psychological strengths allow athletes to set world records. Former world's strong man, Eddie Hall has stated that he had used techniques from psychologists to unlock parts of the brain that provide super strength similar to that people use in life threatening situations to lift cars to save their children. He was able to become the first man to deadlift over 500kg. Though not as extreme, sportsmen and women must apply some form of mental strength to push themselves to achieve record-level excellence in sports.\nI believe that brain and brawn harmoniously work together to create exceptional champions in sports. Physical strength is the baseline that allows athletes to perform their skills with endurance, and mental strength is the value needed to push them to go one step ahead of their competition. Sportmen must be able to run, lift, or even row without issue, as well as try, try, and try again, working through limiting beliefs so that they can become apart of sporting history.",
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"content": "The new technology called Facial Action Coding System identify humans emtions yes i do believe this use of technology to read classrom students emotions is valuable.\n\nI think it is valuale because i am a classroom student and the teachers dont seem to notice when the students are getting bored or arent paying attention to be able to learn and with this technology it well notice and it will change alot because the teacher can change how they teach maybe do other things get us moving get us wanting to learn. Many kids cant sit down for long they lose focuse. In the reading it said the technogology can read when the student is \"confused or bored\" with that the teacher can ask the student are you bored or confused based on what they say the teacher can ask if he/she is bored the teacher can do moving around assienment to learn that little thing will help the students. If he/she is confused the teacher can ask what they are confused about most students never want to tell the teacher if he/she is confused or dont understand something with this technology it will help the teacher help that student because students tend not to want to raise their hand and ask for help.Or with the technology its self in the reading it says \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\".\n\nI think they should give this technolgy to all schools it will help out the teachers alot, the students will aslo find it cool seeing if it really does tell their emotion. If they want this technology to be the new teachers they should start off small try it out with one class for awhile but i really think this technology will be really cool.",
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"content": "The table sheds light on the metro systems in six cities, outlining their dates of opening, lengths of route and annual passenger volumes.\nOverall, the earliest opening of underground system took place in London. It is also apparent that London has the longest metro routes. In addition, the number of underground passengers in Tokyo is larger than that in any other cities mentioned in the table.\nAs shown in this table, the opening of the subway system in London took place in 1863, which was earlier than that in any other cities outlined in this table. In Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto, the metro systems began to be operationalised in the 20th century. The latest opening of metro system took place in Los Angeles in 2001. As for the lengths of route, the capital of the UK has underground routes of 394 kilometres, which are longer than any other cities, such as Paris (199 kilometres), Tokyo (155 kilometres), Washington DC (126 kilometres), Los Angeles (28 kilometres) and Kyoto (11 kilometres). In terms of the annual passenger quantity, the figure reaches 1927 million in the capital of Japan, which is larger than that in any other cities. The second largest figure of passenger volume was in Paris, reaching 1191 million. The yearly number of passengers reaches less than 1000 million in each of other four cities.",
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"content": "The bar graph shows the figure of one country`s export earnings in five sectors from 2015 to 2016 and the table shows the percentage change in each sector of exports during the same period.\r\n\r\nOverall, it is clear that the export earnings of all sectors was increased except for Gems and jewellery sector. In addition to this, the percentage change values from 2015 to 2016 in textile sector was the largest among them.\r\n\r\nLooking at the graph more closely, one can see that the petroleum products category was the highest export income more than 60 billions",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper people throughout world use computers Although people think computers good others could say different While computer become socal talking friends family Also computer notice handeye coordination improving finally able search click button instead searching topic dozens books Computers benefits One chating talking online friends family You distant friend nt talked With computre able connect buddy If acount safe chat able make new friends That would good socally It always good friends stay touch family Some people find hard play piano look music hands something else On computre handeyecoordination improves time searching topic hands typing Also great memory excirsise fingers You eventually memorize keys located People without computres search books find information topic Others computers type topic information need right infront You able see pictures topic even video s Not books I know search topic show pictures videos one resource people debate fact computres good If ask computres great people It allows people socal talk old friends also improves handeye coordination finally gives option search topic without hastle searching dozens books So question computers good people",
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"content": "I argue that smart cars will turn out to be a bad idea. The owners of the car must have control of the car at all times. For example, The owner cal fall asleep behind the wheel. That can cause an accident. Will the cars alert the driver if he or she is fall asleep from a long day of work? Or if a family taking a family vacition and the driver gets tired, will it alert him or her then? Having a smart car isn't the best idea at this moment.\n\nMaking a smart car takes a lot of work to do. In the artical it said something about it has to be driven on smarts roads. Im pretty sure smart roads are going to cost a lot of money to have that done. The world now would have so many people mad at them for building such a not to bad idea as a smart car whith smart roads.\n\ninstead of investing all that money into smart cars, try using it to do good for the people in need. Forx example, build houses: buy food for the homeless, clothing, Better houses for many other people. Do something positive with the money. Now im not saying this won't ever happen, because there can be a strong possibility it would. When the time do come we will see how good the smart car really is.\n\nLets face it smart cars aren't just ready to be put out in this world right at this moment. The smart cars have a lot to work on before thry can be release. They also have to find a price at which they are going to be able to sale.\n\nThe inventers are going to really work on the safe issues and what will happen if someone falls asleep behind the car. No one is going to want someone driving them around all the time. The world would be a lazy place if this happens. However people nagg on how they are tired of driving, that will be a good time for the smart cars to come along a help us out.",
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"content": "On the side of optamism, Driveless cars are a wonderful idea with plenty of potential for humans to once again reach further into the future with our tecnalogy. Imagine only saying or putting in your destination and getting there hands free, its like having a personal driver,but anything that sounds that good has to come along with some downsides.\n\nWhile the industry of driveless cars is expanding slowly but greatly it is yet to be a fully drawn out plan. The driverless cars of today are only somewhat diverless. Meaning they can stop themselvs or drive short distances but still in certain situations the drivers hand is still greatly needed to avoid harm to not only padestrians but to the \"hands free\" driver as well. Honestly if your hands are needed for certain situations why not just drive fully? If the driver is behind the wheele of a hands free car they will be tempted to do other things with there hands not paying attention to the road at all and we have enough of that with people in self driven cars. That also means that in a situation needing a humans touch would be nothing more than a sudden alarm or vibration going off and needing your reflexes to save either a padestrian or your own life like a quick time event in a videogame. The huge difference is if something goes wrong there are no second chances.\n\nAnother issue that could be of concern is as much as technalogy is well loved and how most devote their lives to it, it isn't perfect there are mis haps and incidents that tech causes everyday but though the driveless car idea seems like a good one the tech behind it could not be reliable causing possibly a number of problems. If accidents and shut downs things of that nature are to happen who is at fault the owner who signed the contract to own such car. Or the manufacturer who's faulty equipment could've caused the issue in the first place?\n\nIn conclusion the idea of a totally driveless car is ideal. It might even be a necesity for some but until the project is fully finnished and has proven itself to be a great, safe, and dependable form of transportation we should be warry of how fast we say here take my money. One day the Driveless car could become a huge industry all on its own shaping itself into the next big thing but for now, lets stick to driving ourselvs around in the mean time.",
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"content": "Everyone opinion Do nt agree That s makes us different us would rather watch compared want listen pop instead country A library place brings sorts people together It s place interest information place research enjoyment So question Do really want remove certain materials library shelves people find offensive I nt believe quote says author Katherine Paterson And books left shelf us I agree statement Think allowed people get rid library books nt like everyone right We would books materials left study pleasure readI admit I ve seen things I nt necessarily agree people might You ca nt library Something interests nobody elses That s library millions people use libraries different purposes So I really nt think remove items shelves Only pick find interresting leave We rights like likes dislikes minds ownOpinions define us choices shape us libraries much advance knowledge make dreams reality sometimes even broaden horizons We need books music movies even magazines need together That s position topic I hope helped form",
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"content": "When new technology comes out it can always be a positive thing. That its better to have something than not to have it. having a computer that can determine if we are sad, happy, bored, etc. is pretty crazy. without this technology we probably wouldnt be able to determine that the Mona Lisa is prodomitly happy. That a computer can do something that humans do everyday when we look at someone.\n\nThat having the ability of computers that can read students faces, in my opinion is valuable and can be used in many ways.\n\nThere are many ways that the computer can be used, if someone were to put the computer in a everyday public school classroom. They can detect and figure out what learning style kids like. this can be implimented and put to use in classrooms around the world and help get kids more into school and want to try to get an education. This can make school more fun and more intresting for kids today. differetn classrooms can have different styles and you have a variety of kids per classroom and test to see what style the kids like. when the results come back teachers and staff can go over them and the more majority of kids that like a certian teaching style can be the style that is implimeanted in the schools today This is all done by seeing what facial emotions are used by the kids.\n\nAnother way that the ability of reading students emotions can help, is to have the ability detect how students are feeling and even when they are trying to hide how they are feeling. When you are a teenager you have lots of crazy and mixed feelings. Sometimes a student might go into a deep depression and his or her friends might not be able to detect the the fact of what they are feeling and they might do something to themselves that might not be a good thing. If you use this device and cna detect how they are feeling you could stop that student from harming his or her self from doing this. This can save lots of lives and stop death rates all around the world and help that student to get help and stop this from happening. This is all done from a technology that can read facial emotions and can be very useful and even save ones life.\n\nHaving this technology can be nice, but sometimes it cant always be right. If we use this technology it doesnt always mean that it can be helpful or can detect what really kids are thinking. Sometimes you can put on a brave face and show the world what really inside thats not what you are thinking. The computer migh pick up the brave face you are showing and say that you are happy but really you are having a bad day and you really arent happy. When you use this technology for schools and the computer detects the faces wrong then you have spent all of this money to have the computers detect how the faces of the kids are showing and the results really arent true then you have just wasted lots of time and that is not necessary to have. We dont really know what people are feeling. Mona lisa may not be 83 percent happy and 9 percent disgusted, etc. She may be 10 percent happy and 90 percent digusted, etc. there no good way to determine what she was really feeling at that time and in that picture.\n\nHaving the technology to read students emotional expressions can be helpful, but it determines how you use it and how you correct the results are. But having this technology isnt a bad thing. Its a way to determine what people are thinking without asking the person or being in that persons head. But with having technology that is able to read students faces and emotional expressions can be used and if used carefuly can help schools and other people today.",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit deprite the dangers it presents. Not only will we learn more from this Earth-like planet, but we can also see what it once was, and what is has become.\n\nVenus has been considered as Earth's \"Twin,\" because Venus is the only planet that is the closest to Earth, not only in density, but size. Every spacecraft that has been sent to Venus, doesn't make it out, because the atmosphere of Venus is too strong of carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. The temperatures alone average over 800 degrees. Too much for any human to survive. By studying Venus, we have learned the weather consists of errupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to any probes that are seeking land on the surface of Vennus. Another example of what has been found is Venus may have had a form of life, just like Earth, once consisting of large oceans and forms of life. The planet today still consists of a rocky sediment, featuring and consisting of valleys, mountains, and craters. By working with what we know, NASA has been creating prototypes that could soon once carry humans to study Venus, at a long distance to keep it safe. Studying from our first resources, we have learned the safer distance humans can be at to observe Venus. It may not be an easy task, but it is survivable for humans.\n\nFrom gathering information from space probes that have attempted to explore Venus, we can make prototypes to test around the atmosphere, before we send any humans to observe Venus from a distance. We have learned how to make observations from this Earth-like planet possible, and we have an insight of what this planet once was, and what it has become today. The exploration of Venus may hold a few dangers and set-backs, but researchers are doing the best they can to create a safe way to observe Venus from a distance.",
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"content": "I think that the FACS is good idea. I feel as if this could be useful in many ways to the public. I ecspecially think that benefit towards the teenage community. Believe it or not, there are a massive amount of emotionally damaged teenagers that have a hard time expressing how they feel.\n\nThe F.A.C.S is could make huge impact. People that have gone through emotional tolls in their lives, and don't know how to express how they feel would finally have an outlet. This could be of major use to psychiatrist with patients that have a hard time expressing themselves.\n\nNot only could it benefit you at home, but it could be of great use in school. Such as, when you're in class and you don't understand the lesson. The FACS could recognize that you are confused about the subject and simplify it for you. Or say your being bullied and you are to scared to tell. Well the FACS could sense that and help you with the situation.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist He going bike ride deserts california June This obviously going affect fast At one point says The sun beginning beat I barely noticed setting ghost towns troubling one else around beggining rum water The weather outside starting get said I wiped sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage When petalling desert hot day going effects If different setting felling despair would story That setting affects cyclist",
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"content": "The mood memoir created couple different ways author One moods created memoir happiness Back past parents shared Cuban family recipes lot family friend celebrations rest neighbor hood sharing friendship helping others need long sea family neighbors came together one big family happy make happy community made memoir happy Another mood created author sadness At end memoir author went back present talking past times At end thanks parents everything He talks came around learned definition family learned love Because old memories seem get away mood changes sadness The memories growing old always remember family name The author great job creating two moods putting memoir",
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"content": "Nowadays, many donation corporations and humanitarian organizations consider their own policy to assist their own nation or the poor living in other countries. Some individuals believe that these organisations must only pay attention to deprived areas inside of their country; however, others, included myself, believe that they are responsible for and should help all humans no matter where they live.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, those who believe that all types of help must go to their own residents have their own reasons. One is that their citizens pay tax. To assist low-income residents, charity sectors are better to help the donated money, paid by their own people, to native residents than the foreigners because their people pay taxes and they have priority to other nations. Another reason behind it is that this can positively affect the rate of crime. The more the poor are supported financially, the less they commit crimes. They have less motivation to provide their essential needs in inappropriate ways, and citizens will have a safer living condition. In this case, as local charities considered a remarkable budget for shanty areas in Tehran, the rate of armed robbery declined far considerably, according to a local report published in a local magazine.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I personally believe that these organisations should aid all humans living in other countries similarly. The first convincing reason is that we are all human beings. Clearly, humans live on one Earth and all are creatures of God; therefore, help should not be targeted to a specific community or society. For example, as Ebola virus, a dreadful virus which propagated in Africa in 2014, threatened many poor Africans, all organisations paid thousands of dollars for this problem; as a result, this perilous disease was controlled during less than six months. Had not they been received this international assistance, more other humans would have died. In addition, by helping other citizens, the United Nations will be backed up more. Obviously, every year, this sector spends millions of dollars on needy living all over the world. In particular, paying money for children who are suffering from needs huge funds, which is paid by UNICEF, while if rich governments help poor nations, this organisation will be less under financial pressure.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some may say that the donation system must only support their poor dwellers, I think other nations should receive assistance because all humans are creatures of God and have equal rights to receive money, and this method can reduce the financial pressure of international organisations.",
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"content": "Dear I think computers benefit society computers alot things like teach Computers helpful mostly every thing gets done The computer teaches good eye cordination focus show stuff nt know Without computer really ca nt get thing done reddy A computer helpful lots things like job aplications taxe s grocry store register typeing computer exercising body When computer exercise hand s brains With computers really cant thing Mostly everything life deal type computer I think people said shouldnt computer wrong interact family s far away thats also You enjoy nature takeing look old nt walkt Thats I think computers positive helpful",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author does not support his idea of how worthy it is studying Venus very well, even though he makes some good points that would convince some people that it is worth the time, he also states some dangerous conditions that would be way to extreme for most people, especially people who have never been to space before.\n\nThe three biggest factors that would make most people not even thing about visiting Venus is the temperature, the gravity pressure, and the natural disasters it has to offer. The first factor would be the temperature you would feel on Venus. Our body temperature is 87.5 degrees, the author states that the average temperature on Venus is over 800 degrees. Even with the space suit, our bodies could never stand that much heat, combined with the reality of being on a different planet would be to much for a person. The second factor that would make Venus not worth the time is the pressure that gravity has on the surface. In our planet, we can handle it because we are used to it, but the gravity pressure on Venus is 90 times greater than the pressure that we experience. That would be way to much force being pushed down on a human being especially, if they don't weigh that much. The final reason supporting the fact that the author does not give enough evidence to go to Venus are the natural disasters. Since Venus\n\nlooks most like Earth out of all the other planets, it experiences the same natural disasters we experience which includes: \"erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes\". If the spaceships that the people sent up there didn't survive then we wouldn't survive. The author, and also the rest of us are lucky that the ships that didn't survive had no people in them. These resons make it clear that the author idea of Venus being a \"worthy pursuit\" is false.\n\nSo why is this important, this is important becuase in the future, they might actually consider sending people up to Mars and risk putting their lives at stake. Until they are able to send ship up there with no people in them and have a success, then Venus should not be explored.",
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"content": "Most of the students who are trying to get a good job or business right after their schooling is often failing. But the people who are choosing to study in the educational institution/university and take a little more time are easily getting a successful career.\n\nFirstly, most of the admission have vast knowledge in Universities that help them to get a successful job. In ,Universities admissions are intended to get more experience before and there are lots of paths that can lead to the right way. For ,example a student who is new to the educational institution comes in and doesn't know what to do or what to be, he can learn what the academy teaches and what he likes to do so he can follow that path. However ,on the other hand, the enlistments that are looking for jobs right after their schooling is often failing. For instance, you just finished your schooling and have no idea of what you are going to be, and how to be it, it will take a long time to learn it. For ,example if an enlistment wants to learn how to be a doctor he can go to college, he can read books, attend classes, etc. Do you know that if a student becomes an adult and didn't finish college yet he can choose to finish it when he is an adult?\n\nI also believe that studying at university and college is the best route to a successful career.",
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"content": "The face on mars is in fact a natural fromation and not the work of aliens. The formation is the martian equivalent to a buttle or messa, which are commin landforms in the American West.\n\nThe facts that support my argument are that the pictures taken in 1976 were taken on a cloudy day, and the resolution on the cameras were 43 meters per pixel compared to the new cameras with a resolution of 1.56 meters per pixel. On April 8, 2001, Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look, they found a natural land formation and nothing that resembles anything alien. The picture in 1976 shows a pair of eyes, a mouth, and a nose, these are only illusions due to shadows in the rock.\n\nIn my conclusion to my argument, i will restate that the newer picture of 2001 proves that the face is just a rock formation which has nothing to do with anything alien. The face was just a illusion due to dust clouds, shadows and poor cameras. It si quoted by Jim Garvin, \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. It reminds me most of Middle Buttle in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\"",
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"content": "In memoir author definatly creates mood obviously see He creates mood friendship pharagraph land lord daughter baby sitter first friend lived bove us graced kitchen tables meals often Also feeling love pharagraph often somone staying us temporarily able get back feet The final mood sets feeling gratefulness pharagraph I always grateful parents love sacrifice Therefore overall mood appriciation family",
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"content": "This essay is about whether or not the Face was created by aliens or not. The article is \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" by NASA.\n\nThe Face is just a natural landform that formed over the years of the materials on Mars moving. \"Although few scientists believes the Face was an alien artifact, photgraphing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in Septemebr 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended.\"\n\n\"On April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team smapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.\" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing ... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nSome people didn't belive what was there because on that day it was cloudy and they believed that perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze. \"On April 8, 2001, a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" As a rule of thumb, you cna dicern thind in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. \"So, if there were objects in the picture like airplanes on the ground of Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\"\n\nThis essay has facts and is proven by NASA that the Face on Mars is just a natural landform that has formed over time.",
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"content": "Venus, sometimes called the 'Evening Star,\" is so seeable, that people can spot it by looking through a horoscope. Many people see venus as a star because of its sharp brightness, but venus is actually a planet.\n\nMany people are against landing in Venus, because of the danger it could cause. for example, in paragraph three, venus is stated to be \"Temeratured above over eight hundred degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" But despite all this, the study of Venus is a worth pursuit, even of all the danger it presents. Venus is the closest planet on earth, making it easier if people wanted to land. Just like Mars, venus is known to be an earth-like planet and could have possibly had oceans and supported various forms of like.\n\nAs more technology advances, NASA has a compelling idea to possibly land on venus safely. In paragraph five, it is stated: \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile onditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" This means that there could be a bump-like vehicle used to hover 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian. The vehicle would be a safe thing to use, because it is made for the rocky textured planet.\n\nVenus is a planet that many people call the \"Evening Star.\" Usually, it is so visable, because people usually see a sharp, brightness. It is known to be spotted easily by looking through a horosope.",
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"content": "I belive that others should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. For a reason we all know to help other countries.\n\nOne reason that I belive that others should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is because while your helping our country you can be enjoying sight seeing at the same time. You can see Panama Canal, Acropolis in Greece, Venice, Italy a city with streets of water, a excavated castle in Crete, and so much more. You can still have fun after the animals have been unloaded. You and your crew can play baseball and volleyballl games in empty holds where animals have been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, whittiling, games, and even reading can help pass time on your way back.\n\nPeople might say that if you slip you can fall out if doing midnight rounds. Well, with the technologhy we have today you won't be as likely to slip and fall out of the boat. People might aslo say the that what if people attack you on the boat while sailing. You would be able to protect the animals and you because the U.S. wouldn't send you without any protection. You would most likely have guns or othe ships following you. Also, most likely no one will attack you while you are trying to get animals or help a country.\n\nI belive that other people should join the Seagoing Cowboy programs because you can see historical sights, you can have fun after the animals get off, and a huge thing is that you are helping other countries.",
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"content": "The story Winter Hibiscus Ho author concludes story When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test The author symbol hope reader Also ending never know happens gives something forward Furthermore geese come back warm weather hibiscus blommming Saeng comfortable gotten use idea living new place met people Meanwhile hibiscus bloom bring good memories back young living homeland This help Saeng achieve goal passing test Also I believe author ended story passage makes people want read recommend story someone else I know I hate reading stories end dont tell happens next However Author resolved letting reader know Saeng wants pass test going go back try",
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"content": "When driving, do you ever think of how easy it would be to let the car drive itself, me neither. How would a self driving car drive itself, would it be safe, also how would it know where you would want to go. Driverless cars seem to be a danger for those on and off the road.\n\nIn the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\"\n\nit talks about how in the possiable future cars will be able to drive themselves, but will continously need the actual drivers help manuvering things such as: traffic jams, accidents,and road construction. In my opinion, I find the driverless cars unnessaccary\n\nfor the reason of the fact that you would have to pay quite the amount of money for a car that you wont be driving. Why not just get a chaffuer? Although, I do see the possiabilities where the car could be quite useful I just don't understand the need for it. In my defense the driverless cars aren't even technically driverless yet, so\n\nthe cars would still souly depend on the driver to do most of the work , \"But so far, Google cars aren't truley driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealimg with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or acciedents.\"\n\nWhat would happen if the driver fell asleep at the wheel and there was a road block up the way how would the driver protect themself from being hurt?\n\nWho would be to blame?\n\n\"If the technology fails and some one is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer.\"\n\nIn conclusion I believe that Driverless cars are not quite responsiable enough to be allowed on the roads seeing as it is not quite safe enough for the others on and off the road, same for the driver. Noone forsure can say that driverless cars are safe enough to actually drive somewhere thats\n\nnot being mechanically driven by people but itself.\n\nAll in all my opinion is that driverless cars seem to be a danger to those on and off the road.",
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"content": "On May 24, 2001 twenty five years ago something funny happened. It was arounf Mars. An enormous head nearly 2 miles from end seemed to be staring back at the cameras region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like it was an Egyptian Pharah. It was nothing though just are minds playing with us in space I assure you.\n\nSome authors though had convinced us very well that it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. But again I will assure it was just are minds playing with us. Sometimes being in space and in a spacecraft for so long, you can start to see things. Since those authors convinced us to let it out the so called \"Face of Mars\" has become I pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and has also haunted grocery stores. I can't believe that something as small as a rock with shadows from out spacecraft on it has become so popular.\n\nPhotographing Cydonia has now become a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in September 1997 eighteen long years after. Jim Garvin chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program explained \"We felt this was important to taxpayers.\" Now why it was important to taxpayers I don't know. But if it was real we wuld know. Plus if it was real wouldn't there probaly be more?\n\nOn April 5, 1998 Mars Gloabl Surveyer flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture. Ten times to be exact. When they took the picture there was no alian monument or whatever it was a landform. Sadly not everyone was satisfied so we went at ot again. It was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter '98, a cloudy time of year for the planet. The camera had to peer through wispy clouds to see the \"face.\" Some sceptics say it was hidden by haze. I guess that is possible but there is no face, just a rock or landform.\n\nApril 8, 2001 was a cloudless summer day in Cydonia. So the Mars Global Serveyer drew close enough for a second look. Garvin says \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. They captured an extraordianry photo using the camera. So as a rule of thumb, You can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger.\n\nIf there really were objects in this picture like airplanes or a face or Egyptian-style pyramids you could see what they were. So what the picture shows actually is the Martian equivlent of a butte or messa, landforms coomon around the American West. Garvin says \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" So really it is lust a landform or a resemblement of a landform.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge Of Exploring Venus,\" the author uses many details to suggest how venus is important to explore even though the risks are extremely high.\n\nThe first example of how the author proves that venus is worth exploring is in paragraph 4 the author states, \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" The author uses this quote from NASA in the article to show how even though they know its extremly risky, people are still trying to find solutions rather than leaving the problem.\n\nThe second example is in paragraph 7, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide has been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for 3 weeks in such conditions.\" This example shows how the scientists are so curious in Venus that they simulating the harsh conditions to make strong technology to survive on Venus.\n\nThe third example is in paragraph 8, the author states \"Striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" The author uses this example to summaraize that if we take the time and make the technology to explore Venus, then good things could come out of the solutions.\n\nIn conclusion, the author uses all these examples and more to greatly explain why exploring Venus even though scientists are very aware of the many dangers, is such a good idea to invest time into.",
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"content": "The question of wether or not it could help in class I believe is not true. The text states many reasons why it would help, but the reasons are not good enough. It is very inefficient and a waste of money. I think there are other ways to change the test.\n\nIt would help but is it efficient? It would cost alot to have the software ready to be used. It is a waste when it comes to schooling, becasue if a student is confused just have a button on the test to tell the test that. It doesn't take an expensive computer to change a test.\n\nHaving a program to change a test may be usefull, but a face recognition service would not be. Also it could get glitches. Glitches could cause the test to change when you did not wnt it to. While it is a good idea it is not effective.\n\nInstead of using it for testing, it could be used for as said in the article, reading important peoples emotions. Like threats to see if it genuine or not. I do not see the importance behind changing a test using facial recognition. Just have two buttons on the side, one for confusion, and one for being annoyed.\n\nThere is much better things that this service can be used for. Like studying psychology. You could use it to test a persons ability to read emotions. Why spend money on something that can be done with a click of a button, when you could spend that money on things that would really help students.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are unsafe and in this situation technology is being used in an unnecessary way. It promotes that you do not have to pay attention to the road while driving because your smartcars can \"steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\" This will cause more auto-related deaths due to less attention being paid to the road. The driver also may not notice the car as it signals the driver that they need to prepared to take over. Computer systems are not always completely accurate and should not be trusted to drive our cars for us. If there was a computer malfunction the car could lose control creating a wreck not only putting our lives at risk, but the lives of other's. Driverless cars are not as safe as human driven cars due to inacurate computer systems and inability for drivers to recognize when they are needed to take control of the car.\n\nIn the article it is written that the cars still are not truly driverless, probably because it is known they are not completely safe. They all still alert the driver in a situation when the driver would need to take over. Because traffic laws have decided that the only \"safe\" car has a human driver in control at all times, it is illegal to test computer-driven cars. In the case that an autonomous car would get into an auto accident, there would be a lot of controversy over who is liable for the damages done.\n\nDriverless cars are not as safe as human driven cars due to inacurate computer systems and inability for drivers to recognize when they are needed to take control of the car. There is not guarantee that the technology is going to work correctly and in a time when the computer system malfunctions, there would be much controversy over who is liable, manufacturer or driver. The cars are not completely driverless due to the fact that it is not safe and most laws declare that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. It could also cause more auto-related deaths because people would not feel the need to pay close attention to the road as the car drives for them.",
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"content": "The story about Mona Lisa and her smile is a very popular topic. Alot, of painters use her as a drawing. The details from the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" has alot of good ideas. Example, new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. This would be very useful technology for us humans or aniamls to use it for. As, shown in her picture Mona looks to be always sad but happy. This system maybe better for the world.\n\nFirst, you have people's statements as \"Can we actually Calculate emontions\". The process begins the computer is a 3-D model of the face. There're 44 major muscles in the model must human muscles. The movement of one or more muscles is called an \" actin unit\". Yes, they can cauclate your emontions by a computer.\n\nSecond, they have gotten a long ways to bulid the technology and had gotten to read what emontons people are feeling. In the passage it states \" the facial expresssions for each emontion are universal\". No, it can help in many ways to seeing if your freinds are feeling mad, sad , and or happy.\n\nTherefor,Yes, this technology would be really good for this planet. This could be a very good way for a doctor or a therepist. They\n\ncan find out what the emontions the patcients are feeling. They could also try for aniamls such as gorillas. This is another way of\n\na great buying product. So, it should be out and for people to see othere's emontions.",
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"content": "This technology to read emotional expressions of student in the classroom is valuable. Because it could help students learn the same way as if they were being taught by a teacher. In the passage \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\"\n\non paragraph (5)\n\nit says \" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused \" Dr. Haung predicts \" then it can modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" The software can make it more understandable for students to learn the subject better then regualr computers.\n\nThe technology is very useful for classrooms because when a student doesnt understand most students give up and fall behind from the rest of the class, but with the new technology it could help them with test, and quizes to succeed. The software can even understand mixed emotions , it would tell when a student doesnt undertsand it 100% but understands some of it. In the passage \"Making Mona Lisa Smile \"on paragraph (6) it says \" Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. for an example, if you smile when a web ad appears a similar ad might follow.\" In the classrooms with the new computer technology can be very useful for students.\n\nAnother reason why this technology to read students' emotional expressions is because most human communicationis nonverbal, including emotional communication. so when a student is angry or sad it would help the instructor.",
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"content": "Most people might not know what Seagoing Cowboys are, but that dosen't mean that you hate it just because of it's name. You should at least participate seagoing cowboys once.\n\nPeople might not have many reasons to support there statement about \"Why you shouldn't be a Seagoing Cowboy'', but I have at least some reasons as why you should join the program.\n\nOne of my many reasons is if you love working with animals then your up for the job. Many of the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" had to take care of the Horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. On pharagraph two it states \"UNRRA hired ''Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that weree shippes overseas.\"\n\nIf you were to join the cowboys you will have to be able to go away from your family for a while. For example, on paragraph three it states \"In Augest 1945\", and on paragraph four it states \"By the time he was discharged in 1947\", what I'am trying to do is prove my point. Since you have to be away from your family, you won't be able to see your family in about three years. If you can go three years without seeing your familly then you have forund your job.\n\nBesides helping people, you are able to see awsome sighting and go to places that you've never been before. You are able to go and see Europe, China, the Acropolis in Greece, Crete, Panama, and you could go to Italy. On paragragh five it states \" Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing Acropolis in Greece was special,\" he says \"So was taking a gondola ride in Vencie, Italy, a city with streets of water.\"\n\nLuke also toured an excaveted castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his was to China.\n\nSo, in conclusion I belive that you can, and should join the Sesagoing Cowboys. Only if you are able to parcipitate very well, and if you won't have a problem with all of those things you have to do.",
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"content": "Books music movies magazines libraries approprete material But cases s fine offensive litature people learn But needs age limit checking itims So I beleave keep offensive litature shelve There needs certian exstent leave shelves Books books books many books many kinds litature libraries today Libraries place silance people thats boreing So like I go librarie I go books maginzes seem intresting Altho seem intreseting others find offensive Like might comic book say something someone take offense Libraries ca nt please everyone walks throught doors Just someone dose like offensive stuff thats dose nt mean take Because might someone like likes thoes kind books magazines There offensive stuff world ca nt avoid every go I beleave good come keeping offensive litature material shelves I think keeping offensive material libraries good cause one good reason learning Like I said offensive people s So people might like learn offensive things never knew thoes things thoes books They also never know whats thoes books unless keep shelves They need section offensive books magazines music movies go If things s offensive put shelve must years old check s shelve Yeah fall keeping offensive things libraries But ca nt hide life So insted going world learning hard way go librarie You could pick book learn deal It s part live offensive material every You ca nt shelterd whole live So greatest opinon I beleave keep offensive material libraries could learing exsperiance",
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"content": "I think tecknology like this would most defintely help teachers understand whats going on with students. most students are good at hiding their true emotions they will come to school with a smile but really they are feeling depressed.\n\nThis tecknology would help teachers read their students better and be able to help with any issues. Why would this be good tecknology to have? It would be great because teachers then would be able to prevent fights allowing more students to be at school instead of suspended or expelled, Would make students open up more if teachers knew what kids were sad and which ones were happy.\n\nI think this could be the answer to school bullying because the kids with the most anger are probably the blulliers and the kids who are felling sad or the ones who are felling fearful are the kids who are being bullied.\n\nThis tecknology would be very useful for schools, teachers, and students. with tecknology like this I dont see why every school could'nt be a safe happy enviornment where all kids feel safe and content, and even teachers would feel content cause they will understand how every student is feeling during that class.",
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"content": "Today first day I patient I couldnt believe I proud This I patient I line waiting ice cream teenage girl went counter said CAPS I somewhere ten minutes dont get line moving Im going talk waiterger All guy said Im sorry waight everybody line front gets remain you CAPS kidding me yelled stopped way thats I knew ridiculous I looked Im inpatient I waited line I got counter I said Do deal lot people like handled situation calmly And said yeah lot people like around truly sad So would like order I told order walked home I walked home I felt proud Im never gon na inpatient",
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"content": "Some security experts have observed that higher educational institutes have initiated a distance learning programme as a replacement of traditional classes. If questioned, I believe it has more drawbacks than benefits. My inclination is explained in the ensuing paragraphs with appropriate reasons and relevant examples.\r\n\r\nExplaining my point of view, the foremost reason behind my belief is that students certainly misses social interaction with their peers, acquaintances and professors. In online learning, pupils do not need to communicate with their friends, whereas the in offline programme, students have chances to meet new people and with the help of that they can enhance their not only interpersonal skills but also communication skills. Eventually, these help them to broaden their horizon.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, in on campus learning, a professor or lecturer can deliver particular topic or idea, according to student's intelligence as well as mental ability. They have facility to vary the pace according to pupil's potential. However, teachers are ought to teach in a single speed and they do not focus or concentrate on a single learner. Apart from this, learning in a traditional manner is not only fun, but also more effective and efficient. What I mean to say is, learners who attend offline classes have more practical skills in their archery than those who join online programme. They have more practical and mature approach towards problem compared to the distance learner.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, it can be concluded that although distance learning provides few advantages, my reasons prove that the conventional teaching method is more beneficial for student's overall advancement.",
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"content": "When describing the face found on Mars I would first tell about how it was found. The face on Mars was located by accident by a spacecraft circling around the planet Mars taking snapshots of possible landing areas for its sister ship Viking 2, when the spacecraft saw a look-alike of a human face.\n\nI would then start to describe the facts about the face. It was also enormous too,two miles long from end to end. At first scientists believed it was a Martian mesa, which was common around the area the face was located in. Eventually the picture was unveiled for the world to see, for 25 years the image was posted in haunted grocery check out lines or in books and magazines, it even stared in a hollywood film too. Although a few scientists did believe that the face found on mars wasn't in fact an alien artifact.\n\nAfter i would then finishis by reveileing facts and information to them. The face had been photgraphed to get a clearer picture of what looked like to be the head of and Egyptian. Although Cydonia, the place where the face was located, is not easily found the photagraphers, on April 5, 1998, were able to find it and took more pictures to get good looks at it. What they found in the image's were actually showing a butte or mesa, commonly known as ladforms, they are also common around the west of America. The most likely scenerio for the face to of been built was by natural lanforms and erosion. Even some scientists believed that the face was just a landformation and not an alien artifact.",
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"content": "I memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives mood created author cuban came american without knowing language money made It nt easy though Narciso grateful She also tells alot people came gone parents open arms anyone",
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"content": "A certain number of individuals trust that youngsters must do some free efforts for association because that can be helpful for minors as well for society.Itotally agree with this statement and in my following paragraphs i will discuss my view viewpoints with relevent examples to prove my opinion.\r\n\r\nIn today's era,youth is happy to help their surroundings by doing volunteering at some places such as hospitals where they can help doctors and patients that can be beneficial for medical students.Moreover,they will have good knowledge of humanity by working in orphonages without any salary that will motivate them to learn alot about history from old generations living there.For instance,in a recent survey, a large number of youngones were seen in first add camp during covid situations. \r\n\r\nMoving forward,teenagers should do unsalaried jobs to see where they stand and they will be able see theri future in particular profession.Although,they will not be paid for that work but still teenagers will have good knowledge of every field.For example,minore can save some species of animals and birds by plantinf some trees in their neighbourhood that will be good point for community.In addition with,youth can do camping in different areas of cities to help people by providing some free food and clothes who are under poverty line.Teenagers will become more confident by exploring the world and will get opportunity to learn various cultures and languages.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,it is true that everone should get wages for their service but every person has some duties towards their community that is beneficial for both minors and society.So volunteering should be necessary for youth's better future and sake of community.",
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"content": "In the globalized society, the issue of increasing business and cultural communication worldwide has sparked considerable debate. Some argue that increasing communication among countries fosters development both in personal and professional settings. On the contrary, others contend that exposure to the culture of other countries too much will greatly negatively affect the acknowledgement of domestic history and culture. This essay will delve into both views deeply \r\n\r\nProponents hold the view that emphasizing on communication worldwide positively cultivates the development at individual, entreprise and country level. At the individual level, worldwide information exchange and multiple languages communication improve the ability of critical thinking and academical learning. At the enterprise level, the popular trend of international trade and international companies provide more employment opportunities domestically. Moreover, GDP of one country will also be fostered by increasing economic benefits of importation and exportation.\r\n\r\nConversely, some assert that the history and culture of the native country tend to be easily forgotten by the invasion of the exterior culture. For example, along with the increasing exposure to western culture, most young adults are more likely to celebrate Christmas instead of some Chinese traditional festival. The history of the original of Dragon festival has been forgotten by increasingly younger population.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, while the acknowledgment of domestic culture and identity is paramount, I highly agree that the positive side of increasing culture and business contacts worldwide prioritizes the downside. In the business setting, strengthening international communication will provide domestic industries more opportunities to step out of the country and build long-term strategic relationships with other partners abroad, maintaining sustainable development in the national economy. Secondly, encouraging cultural communication not only helps people learn more about exterior culture but also builds bridges to let foreigners know more about their own culture. It is indispensable to highlight the importance of propagating domestic culture properly through public education rather than limiting the chance to communicate worldwide to avoid the erosion of exterior culture.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while increasing communication in business and culture setting has some negative effect in the acknowledgment of national identity so far, the positive effect outperforms its downside by improving the personal and country delopment under correct guidance.",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper I disagree people enjoying spending time famimely computer nothing agree far Frist wast re time computer nothing nothing get done I notice many shildren computer every right school playing computer For example cosiun computer evryday wasting time still Secondly children studying computer playing video games going website allowed students children internet palying video games something done everyday also I seen many kids playing games computer Thirdly student never learn nothing wast time computer studing many students nt time wisely also many student useing comput sometimes everyday I notice many students nt learn compu studing tests mre stundent fail classes computer First people spending time friends teh important people aroun ud computers Are still Secondly friends important people I ever care love like re ther families wast youre computer know friends For example allways comput never goes see friemds amd friends never cares computer god get im saying Thirdly family also important computer care lease spend sometime family example many families stop spending time othe computer important Lastly help re community goal make youre city look nt want massy also many people quit help commicity servic around neighbor example I see trash grounds dont care Finally going sports starting fit important First playing sports far youve health people never play sports anymore computer example people stop playing sports secondly going import good",
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"content": "During construction Empire State Building builders experience many obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock One obstacle builders drop mooring mast top Empire State building A thousand foot dirigible moored top building held single cable teather would add stress buildings frame Another problem workers faced would change entire design building meet accommodations mooring dock The largest reason dock nt work safety The author writes dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium This means dirigibles highly flameable one exploded densely packed New York would serious reprocusions All reasons mooring dock never came life top Empire State building",
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