Split (2)

train · 40.4k rows

messages listlengths 3 3
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Early morning cyclist eager ready face adventurous path mapped older travelers He hardly noticed sun beginning beat down He calm looking forward cool pines rushing rivers Yosemite Never imagine gotten As began approach desert noticed running low water The strenuous activity biking combine scorching heat desert began take effect The cyclist desperate water put pebbles mouth He read that sucking stones helps take mind thirst allowing spit left circulate The cyclist hoping way misery come across Dehydration took its toll felt hallucinations He beginning lose hope The heat hills lack water greatest affect cyclist Had riding hilly desert one afternoon June would fine", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars can be explained many ways. Some ways may be that it was aliens. Some may say that it is just a unusual natural formation. There is no dought in my mind that it is a natural formation. There are many ways to explain that it is a natural formation.\n\nFirst, here on earth we have many natural formations that stand out and have plenty of explanation behind it. One of them could be the dunes in the sahara. I am going to compare this to the face on Mars because wind can move sand, dirt, and dust. The wind could have shaped the pace on mars. Erotion could have played a big key in this too. The rock could have eroded from the dirt and sand rubbing against it. Even a metior from a long time ago could have shaped the face. Yes it is odd but if you see in the 19776 photo it is pretty well shaped so it had to be made by aleins around that time. Then look at the 2001 picture and it is eroded and not shaped like the other one. It is just a process planets go through and even earth goes through.\n\nSecondly, the clouds and the camera could have made a little change in the look of it. It most likely is the camera from Viking 1. Nasa even said in paragraph 8 that they couldn't get a clean shot of it through the red clouds. Some may argue that with such an old camera how did Viking 1 get a really nice shot of it. Well that is a good point but it might have occured in that time era because it was in a nice condition to our pictures. Did you ever think though that it is just a rock that probably has alot of sand on it. Look at the 2001 picture, it is in an oval-square like shape. But look at the top of it. It looks like the wind has shaped dunes over the rock. And since the sand has moved it doesn't have the eyes and the perfect shape anymore. Viking 1 had a old type of camera on it. Today we have outstanding cameras and technology and we don't see the face anymore. Which one would you trust, the antique camera hundreds of millions of miles away, or next generation cameras?\n\nLast but not least, it could be a rise in lava or underground material. Mars has the same inner layers as earth so don't you think it could be techtonic plate activity. An earthquake could cause an uprise in crust and rock. In paragraph 12 Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, said that it reminded him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It could be a lava dome on Mars; however goes back to techtonic plate activity.\n\nThere alot of ifs, ands, or buts in this conversation. I am not saying that there was never life on Mars or there is no life in the universe but us, I am saying that it was most likely caused by natural causes. It could very well be that it was created by water or an ocean. The Mars face was created by natural causes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This is true that some people are sure that civil servants should avoid harmful sport activites, but other part of sosiety thinks that individuals should have freedom to choice any sport that they like. I am in two minds on this, but probably governments should take care of their citizens and be responsible for human lives.\nFirstly, extrem sports are very popular above young generation in all over the world and these kinds of activity are the huge part of pastime for thousands people. Risk's lovers spend planty of time and enormous amount of money to feel freadom and to try themselfs as a brave and strong persons. For instance, in my country such sports as rock jumping, mountain cyicling and BMX are very popular. And even if these activites are dangerous, young men and women are keen on it, and they are against the governments who wants to ban this sports.\nOn the other hand, adult people always want to protect younger ones. To my point of thinking protection is significant habbit of human beings that we need to respect. However, governments, who try to ban dangerous sports, need to be more flexible, and not only say no for harmful sports, but involve young generation in activites that are not so risky. I also belive that media attention can make seance about all cons of extrem choice, becouse information about number of death between exrem sportmens can be helpful.\nSumming up, the buning dangerous sports topic is rather complecation and importaint issue. I suppose that, the sosiety need recive more information about harmful sports, while governments have to be more responsible in building anouth common sport facilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) that's used for detecting emotions on your face, I'm in between both agajinst and for the use of this on students in classrooms. Being able to detect emotions by scanning someones face isn't wrong because it's not hurting anyone, I just personally think we could be useing the money that would get used to make this for other, more important things than this. This FACS could be used for things outside of students it would be more vaulable, for example, this got used for the Mona Lisa painting to know how she was really feeling, this could be used for so many other things like therapy offices or research in phycology. I also support that if you are sitting in class and the teacher can see how you're feeling, like if you're board, or you don't understand what they are teaching but you don't want to say anything about it so they will be able to improve the lession to make it more fun or help you if you're struggling. I just don't think we should invest all into (if that's what the question is asking) putting these into schools, it does have value just not that much. It has value enough to help depressed people or anyone who needs it. What it comes down to is if we can already detect someones emotion in some type of way then why would we need these in schools?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some countries, an increasing number of people are trying to find out history about the house they live in. I believe that there are several reasons why this is happening.\r\n\r\nIn the one hand, this growing interest may relates with the price of their property. Once the owners found out evidences that may proof their housing have historical meanings, the house will definitely gain popularity in the real estate market and the price of this also is going to rise dramatically. Moreover, the owner of building which has historical significance could also make a profit by renting this for the film crew or displaying this to public. Therefore, finding out the history about people’s house could increase the opportunity to make a fortune of it.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn the other hand, apart from the economic benefits, knowing the history of the building that people live in could also give them a sense of belonging and make them cherish beautiful home they had. That is to mean that figuring out the previous of owner of the house and seeing of stories of them specially in the war period, all these will boost the current of owners’ a sense of belonging as they had understand what effort did the previous dwellers make to preserve this building and what was old and charming building go through. These will lead to the residents to protect and preserve the building from natural disaster such as flooding and earthquake.\r\n\r\nThere are a plenty of methods that people could find out the history and information of the home they live in. Firstly, with the help of big data and the internet, it is way too easy for inhabitants to research the information of the building. Second, visiting the city public library is also a good way for more details. For instance, most the public library had reserved the local newspaper that published ages ago. What is more, the dwellers could also try to reach out the grey who lived in the same neighborhood, which makes them acquire more knowledge of their property.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, researching the history of the building will benefit people both in an economic way and a moral way. In addition, people could search information online, visit the local library and talk to the old community to collect information of their house.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper name I m go I m grade I m writing letter tell opinion technology believe technology positive effect people My opinial computer good Keep reading change people lifes NUM My first reason computer teach hand eye coordination For example I grade I would go libary She website named To learn It help learn learn without looking keyboard My second reason compute give people ability learn faraway places people For example I grade I write And I want I found wonderful pictures And I saw live I watched specail like weeks ago said people would use look people number mor personal things My third reason give people ability learn faraway place people For example want talk cousin live I would go internet talk webcam I clould talk I read artice like month ago That people use computer chart people In conclustion people might say experts concerned people spending much time less exercing enjoying friends family However computer way sdfyer go outside More kids people would salfy Next post news paper", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars because the fact that people like to be in control. People who drive them will not know as much or have much experence behind the wheel of a car. If the car had happened to stop working properly then who would be to blame if there was an accident on the road? People driving would want the ones who manufactured the car or created it to take responsiblity for the scene that was caused. It could take many lives and cause much damage to the community if there were something that had went wrong with the driverless cars. A lot of the people's money would have to go into the accidents caused,like hospital bills and damages of the car. I would prefer driving because of the fact that you would have something to do, it's something people can learn about. Once people think that the cars can drive on its own and need little effort in driving they will not pay as much attention to what is happening on the road. Also another concern of mine is cost, most people can not afford something like this so up to date in technology. Would there still be cars that don't need someone to drive them? I just think that it would cost to much for the people and cause problems involving with technology and community. Is this really what we want in the near future?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author Narciso Rodriguez created memoir feeling unity happiness He explained life home family parents He said family great thing learned real definition He said grateful caring selfnassless parents Narisco wrote nt blood relative family He said also grateful parents love sacrifice He said showed lives teachings basis life He talked culture heart home kitchen He loves cooking parents taught cook He also said neighborhood cultures came together unity friendship That mood created author memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they state postive and negative things about driverless cars, driverless cars are not a good part of our future. Driverless cars can be dangerous and they are not as dependable as peole might think they are. Cars that can drive themselves may malfunction and cause a wreck, and get people hurt. Driverless cars are not a good part of our future.\n\nDriverless cars are not yet fully driverless. The text states \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\". The driverless car still needs human control when navigating through work zones and accidents. Humans need to stay aware at all time while this driverless car is at work. The driverless car is not dependable for human beings to do something else while in the car.\n\nDriverless cars are a waste of our time because humans still want the thrill of driving a car. Young adults are excited to get thier license and drive out on the open road.These people want to experince driving by themselves and depending on only themselves. Humans would not fully trust a driverless car, because they would trust themselves more going on familar roads than a robot taking them a different route. Driverless cars would be taking away our freedom to go where ever we please. People would not keep their full attention on the road if they knew a driverless car was driving them, they would wonder off into space and not focus on the road. Driverless cars are taking away our right to drive.\n\nHaving a driverless cars mean relying fully on technology. Technology can fail and leave you stranded on an unfamiliar road. The text states \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine\". Driverless cars could freeze up and not do the right action they were supposed to do. These cars could break at the wrong time and cause a major life threating accident. Depending on technology alone is very risky, human beings would not have anything else to rely on, except for themselves alone. Human beings depending on technology alone is a very dangerous concept.\n\nHowever driverless cars can be a good thing for the human race. Driverless cars could prevent less accidents and wrecks from happening. These cars could be the future for people to get more down while they are in the car, but driverless cars need a lot of work and improvement before any human being with a license can go out and buy a vehicle like this. Driverless cars could be a improvement to the enviroment, by cutting down on the gas they use. Driverless cars can also be a good thing.\n\nOverall having a driverless car is a dangerous and wreckless thing to buy. Driverless cars are not dependable. Humans like their freedom on the road and enjoy driving their own automobile. People would lose the excitment of first getting a car and license if they didn't have to work for it. Driverless cars are to technology based and could malfunction easily. Driverless cars are not a good part of our future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it talked a lot about how maybe schools could use computers to sensor a student's emotion of either getting bored or losing interest and to be able for the computer to change the lesson slightly to get the students attention, But do you think this would really work? In some cases yes it might work for some people, but definetly not everyone. Why? Because some students may have diformaties in their muscles in their face, facial piercings that could afftect they way the computer reads your emotion, or even just simply you face might be showing one expression but you may feel another way.\n\nNot everyone in the world is same so it's really hard to make something like this that would benefit everyone. You also have to think about the cost of these computers, just think normal computers are already expensive, but ones that can read your emotion you can imagaine that those prices would be unbelievable.\n\nAs well as every student learns differently, so if the computer changes the way the lesson is being taught based off of your emotion when maybe the lesson is already clear to you, could make it harder on some students. So overall I believe that this product wouldn't be very successful due to a lot of the roadblocks in the way, especially with money involvment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challange of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers presents. The author defends his idea by stating that Venus is like Earth in ways such as its size and density, current landscape, and the environment Venus possibly housed in the past.\n\nOne way that the author thinks that Venus should be furher explored is that Venus is how similar Venus' terrain is to Earth's. Currently Venus has valleys, mountains, and craters atop a surface of rocky sediment like Earth. Theoretically in the past Venus' surface was covered witn large oceans for the most part. These conditions made it possible for life forms to grow there.\n\nAnother piece of information used is that despite the dangers on Venus expeditions can both be safely carried out and fruitful. Various technologies are being created and innovated for Venus' harsh environments. In the cirsumstance that scientists are stationed at Venus they will be equipped with blimp-like vehicles so that they may envade the storms that are near ground level. Even with these safer ways of navigation collecting material data such as rock or gas would not be possible. Another solution to this problem has been intoduced. Simple electronics made out of silicon carbide have been tested in simulation spaces similar to Venus' comditions and environment. Scientists are also proposing that mechanical computer are used to collect dataon Venus. These computers are much more hardy then their modern-day cousins.\n\nIn conclusion with these innovations the author belives that Venus' exploration would be a worthwhile puruit despite the challanges becuase obviously a large amount of information can be found there. Not to mention there are solutions to some of the problems that would arise while exploring Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author thinks that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it has. The planet Venus is the second planet from the sun. Venus is made of almost 97 percent cabon dioxide and has very corrosive sulfuric acid as well. At one point Venus even had a rockey sediment in which invloves valleys, mountains and also craters. The author very much compares this planet to ours, the earth.\n\nThe author thinks that the planet Venus is worthy of pursuit dispite the dangers it has because he thinks it is simliar to Earth. On paragraph 2 he states,\" Often referred to as the Earth's \"twin,\" venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus ,and Mars, our other planetary neighbor orbit the bus at different speeds.\" This shows that the author thinks that Venus is very comparable to Earth because of the density and size of Venus. He also stated in paragrapgh 3, \" On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expirence on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouter On Earth, \" In This paragraph he explains how Venus is way hotter than Earth, but then he later on states how we would still be able to survive in these conditions.\n\nAlthough Venus is not the only one to compare to Earth the author decides to mention it many times throughout the article that venus is the sister planet to us.\n\nOverall the author tends to very much compare Venus to earth quite often. In which is why he thinks it is worthy to explore even though it has its own dangers as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nothing like chilling in an 800 degree oven and having pressure thats 90 times greater than that on earth while studying a planet. Thats what it would be like to study Venus on its surface. But scientists want to some how find a way to study it, Safely. There are three big things that the author writes about in this article that may be a safe alternative or possobility to study Venus like floating above the atmosphere of venus, using simplified electronics made of silicon carbide, or using something called mechanical computers.\n\nFirst things first the author talks about hovering above Venus's atmosphere to avoid all of the most of the dangers. High heat, crazy high pressure levels, Ect. The author of the article says, \" Just as our Jet airplances travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid all the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" This is a safe alternative to landing on the surface because it takes away the problems that they have been having all together. But the problem he has with this is that the only things they can do to study it is observe they can't take samples of rock, gasses, or anything else. But it will get them a basic view of the planet nothing much more.\n\nAnother thing that the author stated may work is using simplified electronics made of silicon carbide. This will help because because of the type of material. The author states within the article, \" Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks.\" This is why it could help because it lasted three weeks where regular things couldn't even last 3 hours on venus without getting comepletly abliterated. So if they where made out of the silicon carbide they would be able to get it on Venus get samples of gasses, rock, and anything else they could find then get out of there before it gets destroyed hopefully.\n\nThe last thing that the author talked about that could work is using old technology called mechanical computers. The devises where envisioned in the 1800 and helped out in world war II. But the author says, \" The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" This would help because of the fact they could get it on Venus and not have to worry about the electrical boards of the vehicle frying. Because there will be no Electric envoleved in the process. If they made it out of a heavy duty metal or maybe even silicon carbide it may allow it to work on Venus and get samples of gasses, rock, and anything else on the surface of venus.\n\nThe three big things that may allow the exploration of Venus to be a possability are floating above the atmosphere of venus, using simplified electronics made of silicon carbide, or using something called mechanical computers. These ideas could help visually see the planet close up, Get on the planet safely, and move around the planet and get samples of evidence. This would help out NASA in the great race of space with all the things that they could discover from the planet of Venus. So while we are sitting here on earth one day there may be a man in a comepletly different situation of being in extreme heat and pressure. But all in all the author supports his idea and gives a few good options on how NASA could safely and efficiently get up to Venus and explore it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some books offensive people But eveyrone right read book want I believe shouldnt censor books found offensive schools If people find offensive beggining find another book read talk teacher I experience books offensive Everyone book read But book read might interesting people Whatever doesnt makes stronger right So nt take book hurtful way Books meant read authors direct book certain people I poeple come school saying books read horrible experience Specially talk suicide one best friends trouble dad I told talk teacher changed book Thats make anything big I also read book To censored states hurtful people The story white family trying help man accused raped never commited thing That acceptable time evidence world still could nt help Its great story black poeple went earlier years And think would censor story white lawyer trying help someone nt race inspiring offensive He got harrased children got harrased still fought save deffendant I year old boy read book knowing heart didnt made cry eyes It s sad know book censored states defenitely one best books ever read also one got It would great experience anybody read book even censored live go buy read anyway I feel state assumes gon na offend people They might even test anyways They might say gon na offend kinda people thats How cokme Do let everybody read No leave whoever nt read doesnt talk teacher Its hard decide censor something opinion Thats would look opinion others All censorship nt allowed It ruins oppurtonity people read books might find good interesting Let kids read atleast highschool almost adults read whatever want", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient good thing Sometimes impatient sometimes im better patient My cousin patient I tell wait patient wait long want My causins tell patient I waiting I ask hurry tell learn patient My cousin trying teach patient tRied So I stay longer patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would feel local library found something something offensive Many people would approve offensive materials library The library open anyone anyone could see material Library s make sure nt anything offinsive materials put shelf Everyone access library district look anything A lot stuff found library could offensive would people know offensive nt Library s nt accessable If still library warning high shelf Library s aware putting shelves know appropriate Furthermore children also access public library Most time child adult sometimes pick something stop If something offensive child s reach might grab see whats Most librarys childrens section trust nt anything offensive Not children go childrens section nt offensive material library s least childrens reach Lastly librarys choose put shelves never know look If offensive material stuff anyone see could put negative thought peoples heads There people mature enough see offensive material others ca nt Thoes ca nt reflect something negative cause problems Therefore offinsive material librarys In librarys supply offinsive material If people want see kind stuff ways getting material There nt access library everyone see nt know effect If going offinsive material library adult area people age enter If something offinsive open anyone hopefully one day librarys elimanate", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage, Driverless Cars Are Coming, it talks about how soon there will come a time where cars will drive themselfs automatically. In 2009 Google actually created a car that can drive independently under certain conditions as it says in paragraph 2. Paragraph 2 also states that these driverless cars that Google created aren't truly driverless; \"they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents\". In my oppinion driverless cars sounds pretty cool, it kind of puts less strain on the human in the vehicle. This passage is bassicaly saying that the future is opon us.\n\nIn this paragraph im going to explain the possitives and negatives about the driverless cars. Honestly this is a great concept for right now but they need to make some improvements. I feel like cars that can drive on their on will make people less nervous of getting into a accident with another vehice, with these types of cars the percentage of collisions will decrese at a great rate. Alot of people actually need these types of cars in their life because some people probaly cant stay awake when driving long distances. People who are driving manually now alot of times back up too far and can cause a collision with objects,people, or even another car, with driverless cars the rate of that happening is little to none. Being that the cars that they are creating now cant drive themselfs brings a few negatives with this concept. They say the cars now alert the driver when something starts to go worng. Alot of people would probaly take adavantage of these cars and could probaly get themselfs hurt or put them in a fatal situation.\n\nIm against driverless cars, here is why. Lets just say you have a imature person behind the wheel. If the car is driving its self that person may feel like they can use illegal substances while in the vehicle. This is bad because what if there is another accident on the road and the driverless car cant manouver around that opsticle, then it would have to alert the driver for assistance. Being that the driver is under the influence the rate of getting into a accident would be very high in this case. There is alot of people who can hardly drive a car manualy so when the car alerts the driver they might not know what to do either, this can more likely cause the driver to get pulled over. Another thing that is really bad about these cars is, who fault would it be if two cars that drove themselfs got into a collison? Would it be the drivers fault or the manufacturer, Paragraph 8. Driverless cars do have there possitives and its a really good idea. I say this because they have alert systems that can save the driver from having a serious injury or even worse, death. I think they should hold on these cars until they are actually fully functional, when I say this, Im talking about when the cars can actually drive themselfs 100% of the time just incase the human is under the influence, or on their phone. This is why I am agains driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "(SEAGOING COWBOY)\n\nDo you want to be a seagoing cowboy? If you do please keep reading. Seagoing cowboys have many ups and downs.These are some.\n\nThe first good thing about being a seagoing cowboy is exercise.When your running around and feeding 335 horses 3 times a day, you would be pretty fit.\n\nThe next thing good is the sights. You can see the whole world because you go so many good places. Like Greece,Italy,China,and,France.Another good thing about the seagoing cowboys is you can play somany games. These include: Baseball, Volley ball, Table Tennis, and reading.\n\nBut there are some bad things. Life at sea is dangerous. Your ship could sink, you could fall over board, and your ship could get lost.But you could have a fun time, have joyful memories, get friends, and live a good life. Would you take this chance or stay home? I would take that chance.\n\nIn conclusion, I would highly recomend become a seagoing cowboy with high risks. That's what makes it fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a few countries, an increasing number of individuals are getting fascinated to discover the past of the dwelling or property they reside in. This essay will discuss the curious nature of the current generation and the need for a sense of connection as the cause, followed by how families living for generations can help in providing information.\r\n\r\nOne of the reasons that are contributing towards this is the intriguing nature of human beings born in the late nineties. Many of them are aware that the premises they are now resident to must have had a beginning which is now refurbished and renovated. As a result, this triggers the brain to know more about what was the thought process that lead to the construction of this structure at this specific location. For example, in 2020 a survey conducted by Realtor.com displayed that 80 per cent of youngsters before renovating the building they reside in would research the initial idea behind it because they did not want to damage the sentiments attached to that habitation.\r\n\r\nAnother reason is that to feel at home, individuals seek a sense of connection. Usually, a structure is made from concrete, steel, wood and other forms of raw material. There is not an instant attachment to any property one would move in along with their family. Therefore, to convert a house into a warm permanent abode, individuals look for reasons to find feelings in order to settle down for their entire lives and build legacies there. For example, in 2015 research published by the psychology department of the University of The Punjab 50 per cent of those who bought a new property would search for the history of the building in order to find a feeling of belonging.\r\n\r\nOut of the many approaches, one that is most common is meeting the elderly in the neighbouring houses, as they have seen the area built, the surroundings change around them and the tenants moving in and out of these dwellings. This is why they have the most information about the place and can be the most authentic source of data. For example, in 2017 an article published by The Newyork Times showed that 68 per cent of the intriguing stories were uncovered about New York by talking to the senior members of the society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, curiosity and a desire to seek a connection are two possible reasons why people investigate the history of their homes and in order to do so, elder members of society are the best peoples to reach out to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new software called the Facial Action Coding System is a extraodinary piece of technology built to recognize different emotional expressons of people. This software was created by Professor Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science. He developed this with the help of Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. This software can help change the education and entertainment for people other greatly.\n\nThe software works by making a compuer model of your face with your major facial muscles. After all 44 major muscles are made, the face can be calculated of different expressions. The Facial Action Coding System does this by comparing your facial muscles to one with no emotion. Then, the expressions are calculated into percentages and put in the six basic emotion categories that can be idenified so far such as happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can change how people are getting their education greatly. The computer you normally have does not know what emotion is at all. Computers cannot recognize any emotion. They need the code that the software as to start to learn how to recognize emotion. The code tell the computer what facial muscles do what for each expression. Once computers can idenify emotion, then students can use this to help them at school. The computer would be able to see what emotions you are expressing when you do your lessons. It would be able to see if you are stressed out, bored, frustrated, or confused. Then, the software would recogize the emotions and find a different approach of teaching you the lesson. Also, if you were to express the opposite of these emotions like, happiness, excitement, or curiosity then, the program would keep you on this way or style of teaching for your future lessons on the computer.\n\nThe software could also be used outside of the lessons to help you as well. The computer could see the different display of expressions and emotions you show to different advertisements\n\non the internet. It could show you similar advertisements if you showed that you liked the ad. Also, the program could show you a different kind of ad if you showed that you disliked what it showed or if you lacked interest in it.\n\nThe program could also help idenfity if people are being fake or not being truthful. The computer can identify the true expressions of the people by their facial muscles. Then, the software would be able to show the true emotions of the person rather than seeing the fake one that the person is choosing to express instead.\n\nThe technology this program also has the ability to make the computer-animated faces more expressive in things such as video games and video surgery. Now that computers can identifiy emotions better, the same technology can replicate the facial muscles on humans to video games and video surgery. The expressions would the be more complex and more human-like.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a software that can change the future of education, entertainment, etc. Emotions can now be recognized not only by humans but also by computers with this software technology. Just like Dr. Huang noted, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, too.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus may be a worthy pursuit of study even with the dangers that come with this challenge due to the information that the author provided within this article. The planet Venus may be useful in some way even though it is extremely dangerous and nonhabitable. The atmosphere on Venus is really thick to where it is close to impossible to see anything without being on the planet. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in size, density and in distance as well. Venus can be seen pretty easily from Earth however only through and observatory or telescope. Venus could either be a good idea or a bad idea due to it's positives and negatives but we also don't know too much about Venus.\n\nSome of the difficulties of trying to study Venus are really deadly in many ways. The atmosphere of Venus is 97 percent carbon dioxide which is extremely deadly and makes it really difficult to see Venus while off planet. The clouds of Venus are made of highly corrosive sulfuric acid which is obviously a problem toward the study. The planet's surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is at least 90 times greater than the pressure on Earth. These are some of the most hostile and extreme conditions of just about any other planet within the solar system.\n\nVenus is also a necessary item of study due to the possibilities that could be created by studying the planet. Venus could have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system but it was a long time ago. It has been said that Venus was probably covered with oceans and bodies of water and other resources that could have supported multiple forms of life. The planet has many formations that are similar to Earth such as mountains, valleys and craters. Venus is our nearest option for a planetary expedition. The value of studying Venus is unchangable and can be unlimited depending on what could be found on Venus.\n\nNASA has some ideas on how to get humans to Venus such as a blimp-like vehicle which can hover about 30 or so miles above the landscape.\n\nSolar power would be plentiful, Radiation wouldn't be too high, and temperatures would be survivable. This vehicle would create survivable conditions for humans to complete their study and learn way more about Venus. NASA has tested using earlier technology made of silicon carbide which would survive in Venus conditions for about three weeks. The mechanical computer could be used for Venus because it is not electronical but it instead has mechanical parts which could be changed to have resistance to heat, pressure and other damaging forces.\n\nThere are many factors that can cause the Venus study and exploration to happen or to be dismissed. There are things that could be developed which can possibly make a way to study Venus without having too many problems. Also, there are many obstacles which are in the way of the study such as the planet conditions or the technology which would be required to develop the items needed for the study. There are many positives and negatives to this study but neither is greater than the other because there are ideas in the making about how to survive on Venus however there are many things which can get in the way of the development of the technologies. This study will probably take much time before it can actually be initiated because it will take time to gather everything that is needed and it will take some time to actually arrive at Venus and produce some results.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We as people make assumptions every day all day. I read in an article that new technology is being created to read the facial exspressions on a person and determine the way a a person might be feeling. This technology is called the Facial Coding System. I believe the Facial Coding System would be valuable to students in a classroom or anywhere else for that matter.\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\", The reader is being told that with this new software scientist can now \"caculate\" emotions. Dr. Paul Eckman is the creator of the Facial Aaction Coding System and he has classified happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, and sadness as the six basic emotions. Manypeople would ask how can a computer see or feel those six basic exspressions? Well, according to the text Dr. Huang stated,\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\". They used video imagery recognize a real face and even the painting of mona lisa. There are more steps that go into the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nAfter the different units are weighed out the software will identify mixed emotions. According to paragraph four,\" Each expression is compared against aa neutral face (showing no emotion)\". In order for the third step to work it has to be compared to a non-facial exspression. We as humans do the same type of steps when making an assumption. Think about the way we can tell if our friend or family member is feeling. Nomatter if they are sad, mad, happy, or glad we usually can see or feel how they feel.\n\nWe can tell how they feel based off of the facial expression they chose to give. According to the text Dr. Huangs new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. This means that the computer code uses algorthms to figure out the facial expression just like artists do when they paint facial muscles to give off a specific emotion in a painting. Computers have rules or instructions to follow in order to complete something. Its called encoding. Encoding is not jst used for computers but, it s also used by us as humans. We tell ourselves how to feel, walk, talk, act, and many other things. Our brain sends out instructions to our entire body just like the motherboard does for a computer.\n\nIn conclusion the\n\nFacial Coding System would be valuable to students in a classroom or anywhere else for that matter. We already have a system we use everyday as people to see how other people feel. Knowing how somebody feels can help us help them. If we could have the knowledge of definetly knowing how a person felt scientifically it would realy help us help them in understanding the trials and tribulations they might be going through.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood author set loving The story says love cooking passion Cuban music Just endless celebrations brought life warm home Narciso Rodriguez also great sense family nothing blood relative In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere although cultures came together great solidarity friendship How parents always arms door open many people knowing would I always grateful parents love sacrifice I never forget parents turned simple house home The mood set story loving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it was a real face, why you ask? Because that could of been a life form, and that could of been were it fell down. Where else would a face in the moon sand be like that for no reason. Like conol sanders always says its finger lickin good. Thats why theres a face there in the moon. Ancient tribes could of lived there before we even discovered the moon orbiting around the planet earth in the first place. There are many theroys about the moon to be exspected. I think that any reason could be leggitimint when kernal sanders made KFC he didnt suspect a thing he just made a ton of chicken with no reason to stop and think. Thats just like a way of discribing any way is possible when you were not alive long ago. Because you didnt have the technology to even try, to see if there were anyone on the moon in the first place. Think of it as saying mabe the didnt even breath the oxygen they could just breathe in space. It seems imposible i know but mabe to the kind of life on the moon didnt need food water or air.\n\nI think that every type of answer can be juged by the way it sounds but there many ways it could happen. like mabe before it was the moon it was a planet to with life on it just like earth with water, food, and resources to stay alive a a point in time long ago. But when it smashed into earth all of its compounits swichted at impact. Burning every living thing on the moon and making things for the earth. My reason is that god made life but when he did he made life on the moon to but eventually it died out before our time and leaving a souless moon for the earth to smash into it 2.3 billion years ago. Creating earth and life, humanity, and the world. When the found the face in the moon, they were just then finding out that the moon may have contained life long ago. Although it might not of happened how I explained, there might of been another way of life its self on the moon. I think it could of been a rational way, but we will never know untill the end of time. As if there was life created on the earth just the same way a little time ago. When the face showed up it was unbelible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article talks about a certain computer program that can determine the emotions of any photo or painting of a face with anatomical correct muscle placement.\n\nAlthough this may be \"cool\" it doesn't have a very viable use in the classroom.\n\nAlthough it may be great to have it to determine the emotions of students during online lessons, it hardly serves much more purpose and these are the reasons why.\n\nThe first reason why I don't think emotion decetion would be very useful in the classroom is that it may cost too much money to buy and widely produce.\n\nThis company or tech team working on this \"Facial Action Coding System\" may only have a sole prototype and nothing else.\n\nThe article doesn't specify how much of the product they have nor how long they have been working on it.\n\nHowever, this seems like a very new technoogy that wouldn't likely be massively produced in the next decade or so.\n\nAlso some school don't have; no offense, the money to buy and use this technology effectively due to the cost.\n\nAlthough it may help engage students in the classroom and sense how they feel about a certain subject, the cons outweight the pros.\n\nThis article also states that this emotion recognition technology can benefit students by sensing what they are feeling and changing the lesson based on their current feelings.\n\nIt this were to be put in a classroom how would the computer know what emotions a student would be feeling?\n\nPerhaps the computer's hardware was up to date and worked effectivley with the Emotion Recognition Software that would be great.\n\nHowever, some school with moeny issues can't afford new computers.\n\nEspecially for tthe whole school.\n\nI feel that the two Universities should put more time studying and testing how the program would work in any institution or workplace's financial situation.\n\nLastly, I feel as though this Facial Recognition Program would be a invasion of one's feelings and person space.\n\nThis is due to the fact some people don't want to show thier feeling out in the open and would rather keep thiem inside.\n\nThat is entirely their choice and a program that can tell their feelings to the people around them seems like a big violation of a persons feelings.\n\nThere may be an uside to this program considering the fact that it could help with depression.\n\nDepression plays a big factor in suicides every year, with a program like this it may invade soemone's personal space \"for the greater good.\"\n\nIt could save someone's life just by knowing what they are feelling in real life and perhaps helping them get out of depression.\n\nNot everything is bad in this situation; however, there can be some upside in whowing other people's emotions.\n\nOr in some cases, even know your own when in distress.\n\nThis can be very beneficial to counselors or interrigators to have patients or criminals shows facial signs of fear, disgust, sadness, or even anger.\n\nIt's all kind of determined by the situation or environemtn the program is being used in.\n\nThis may count on the patient's determination to get better or even know what they are feeling.\n\nI'm not saying this program bad by no means it doesn't really show many upsides.\n\nI conclude by saying, ther may be feeling hard to detect deep down in people you relaly care about.\n\nAnd this program may help, but it doens't show much potential in an education environment.\n\nThis possibly being due to the cost or maybe the ture effectiveness with students and they lovely person space.\n\nThis may be a violation of one's feeling that they want to conceal.\n\nThe cons just outweight the pros by a significant amount.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story the author says it's the brightist planet in space. And every space craft has been a failer that has landed. On it and they have acid clouds and your head can expload. And it's super super hot hoter than the sun even and they have very big storms and lightnign stikes. Even though it's very similer to Earth it's still very diffrent in meany ways. Even not being on the planet and just chillin above it you can still die but its hard to even study it. From above because how dens the planet it. But they are finding ways to go their but it's still very hard to study the planet.\n\nI think the way the author puts it is good they talk about how it looks like Earth like it have reveains rocks lakes and more. But they also explain how bad the condions are their. So even though i dont really care about space that much I think it would be cool. Because for all we know Venus could of had life on it at some point in life so their could be bones of some kind or if their still is life that would be very cool thats my conclusion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Join. You should join or participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. This is an opportunity of a lifetime, so you can join. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity, it made me more aware of the people of other countries and their needs.\" said Luke Bomberger and \"My life changed soon after my high school graduation.\"\n\nThe adventure starts on a cattle boat. \"This is an unbelievable opportunity for small-town boys.\" said Luke. \"We help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more.\" It will take time to get to places where people might need help, like two weeks to around a month, or even more. If you can last that long on a boat then give this a try. I got to tour unique places like; an excavated castle in Crete and the Panama Canal on my way towards China. Besides helping people, I got to see and experience being in; the Acropolis in Greece, and going on a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. When the animals were unloaded, especially on return trips we would play baseball and volleyball games, where the animals used to be. \"Table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games were played to help pass the time on board.\"\n\nNow that you what happens and what we do, you should join our program. This is an opportunity of your lifetime. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity, it made me more aware of the people of other countries and their needs.\" said Luke Bomberger and \"My life changed soon after my high school graduation.\" It is your choice, to be a cowboy or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered why the Earth is so polluted? That is because so many cars are being driven and so many factories are being made. In some parts of Europe cars arent aloud to be driven its a car free zone. This is to help the Earth from all the pollution that is being caused all around us. Having so much pollution can kill our planet.\n\nMany people around the world want to help our planet. Driving cars is easier but it is very bad for our plants and trees and for our own health. People in Colombia as said in source 3 are getting together and making this happened because they see th actual change behind all this. Some people might think this idea is crazy but it actual can work. We have over a billion cars driving around our Earth and all of that goes up to the air and we breath all of that and that makes our day look ugly and the Earth not look so pretty. Flowers have been growing faster after this idea was made natural air gives us strength.\n\nIn 2013 as said in source 4 they have investigated that Americans are driving less and getting less licenses. Driving less cars makes us live longer because we are not just sitting their in a car doing nothing we are actuve riding a bike or even walking. For those ong trips that take ours to get their we call a bus or a taxi and pay them to get their that is less cars and vehicles that are driving around hurting out planet. It is much better to have the world like this because you will see the population growing and people living longer and not passing away at an early age. Like this we dont breath that nasty air that cars let out and little kids dont have to breath it either like that when they grow up they will be strong and healthy.\n\nA lot of people might think taht this idea is crazy but when they actual try it out they will start realizing how it well help our planet very much. When was th elast time you went out walking and then a car passes by you and all that gas air gets in your face? all of that air is very annoying and it gets you out of air right? well that is why its best to just walk everyone and if your really that lazy just call a taxi our a bus to pick you up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a great step in the direction of a better future. Along with making travleling easier on a day-to-day basis, there will also be less accidents, and people won't have to worry about paying as much money as they do now for things such as insurance. We should continue to manufacture our cars to make them completely driverless.\n\nWith automated systems in cars, there can be less worrying about driving errors being made everyday. As it stated in the article, these systems can apply brakes or reduce power from the engine when in a dangerous situation before the driver is able to. This will dramatically decrease the likelyhood of getting into an accident. This is also great because the driver won't have to worry about dealing with everything you have to do after that accident as well.\n\nEven though the driver has to take control of the car in situations, such as being in a construction zone, continuing to develop cars to detect these things and navigate them will make driving safer in the long run for everyone. It would be more difficult for people to drive recklessly and make little mistakes that can cost someones life.\n\nMany car companies are making improvments to cars to make them driverless everyday. With more and more companies joining the path to driverless cars, we will get to a safe and convient future faster than we know it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well, being completly honest, using a ma chine to detect human behivor such as with emotions and feelings towards situations and or people is a horrible idea, is defeats the porpuse of what privacy really is and how we use it, if someone is mad and or angry they will show it on their own way whenever they feel like it, we dont need a machine to do it for us, that is just wrong in so many levels, is impressive but wrong, very wrong, why dont we use this knowledge to just best ourselfs in other important stuff like making football players equipemant stronger but lighter at the same time so they dont run with an extra 60 pounds and are less likely to get a concussion playing the sport they love, or discovering a new way of building a computer or a monitor using carbon molecules for example, since is less likely to break and more durable throughout the years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "THE story I fell dog stepped I fell slippery trampolineabout four five years ago I went friends house stay That day hot day friend I devised plan fun stay cool friend I went garage found sprinkler decided put sprinkler trampoline u makes trampoline wet slippery My friend I started jumping trampoline starting jump higher I started losing bounce came back time bounce made bounce lot higher I normally could also weighed So came back I landed back angle I trampoline shot As I bounced trampoline I thought I gon na get hurt I rather gotten scratches landing dogs manure s happen I landed pile dog manure really stunk shirt bad took shirt started jumping jumped whole day nt regret everyone good laugh including story part laughter laughter great way fun even bad thing happen maybe end funny even though time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Freshmen All freshmen fun There boy made smile laugh I swore I falling love We one class together Which called Passing hallway would make We met class nt care I would ask help even though I nt need I could talk We also would see swimming pool brother swam I also I would see often Instead helping would sit talk lives school home First semester got moved class another class period We would still talk pool see school He would give hugs hallway We started become really close friends Talking drew us even closer Laughing big part conversations We found lot common Like hunting wheeling foods favorite dog personalities much alike seems grew around came around one month school I started go house every awhile He came mine often In beginning strawberry festival came around I asked go He said okay parents also went parents That fun enjoyable The end finally school Summer break The school fun It going nice homework week All school sign books tell funny stories school After school I went swim practice practice still pool waiting brother We outside talking sudden know asked go I said yes He made one happiest girls world Today still dating One relationship I ever I hope He tells almost every going marry He tells nt know would I told everyone I swore I falling love Now everyone knows I fell love I fell love first sight We talk laugh time hardly ever argue", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be unsafe to many people, but there are people who support the idea 100%.\n\nSeregy Brin states,\" he envisions a future with a public transportaion system where fleets of driverless cars from a public-transport taxi systtem. The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of todays taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus\". Since the car will be driving around with no human driver and offer a wider range of transportaion, then, that could lead to many harmful occurances. There have been many things that were technology based that were not the safest thing to have. A stove magically catching on fire is one example but another example could be a plane crash due to malfunctions and not because it was shot down by another country. If the car has to tel the driver that he or she needs to take over then the car is not needed.\" They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues\". There are so many downfalls to having driverless cars that there does not need to be any type of driverless cars on the street.\n\nIf there were to be driverless cars in the near future then no one would have to drive anymore , but some people may not have the money nor the right resources to go and buy a car that drives itself. Many people would be terrified by the idea of a driverless car because the idea has not been around for hundreds of years. Some ideas are not worth sharing with the rest of the world. To have a hightech car such as the driverless car means, it would have to be as smart as a human driver to uphold those type of responsibilities. if Google can create a smart technological car that can drive a car the way a human coould then there could be some exceptions made.\n\nMany people agree with the making of the car because ti will relieve alot of things and no ne will have to worry about driving 15 hours to another state becasue, the new and improved car will do all of that on its own. The traumatic thing about that is, there can be glitches and the car can freeze. The car could glitch, or, freeze in the middle of the road and create a terirble accident that could lead to death. ther are too many negative outcomes towards the car , that, changing the world that much right now, or, even in the near future is too much to try, and handle. There are too many other things going on in the world then to worry about making a car that does not need a human driver to operate it. Even if the car is made correctly , many people will not have money to pay for it. Other than safety there are other things to worry about such as exspenses. then after exspenses ,how much mooney wil be going into having enough supply, product, and inventory for many people to have the car. Then, they would have to worry about how much fuel the car would need, or how much elecricity the car would need in order to be operated. People try to come up with differnt ways to make so much money, they try to make it seem like they are right in what they are doing but in all reality some things can be a joke. The driverless car tempts death. the car does not sound too convincing for many people to pay for it .\n\nAlthough, in many peoples mind, the idea of a driverless car seems to be more efficient, does not mean it is more safe. The driverless car can change the world really quickly and it can change the world into being alot worst than what it is. The next invention might be robots for every household, and that can lead to many downfalls. The driverless car is inspiring many other ideas that are not safe . What can be depicted from the passage is, that, transportaion isses will be handled more efficiently. Anyone who is in their right mind would not buy such a product. Risking many epoples lives just so that an \"interesting' product is out on the streets is not an idea that needs to be supported at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this contemporary epoch, some parents consider delaying childbirth whose reasons will be discussed in this essay. Both the advantage and disadvantage will also be put under scrutiny although I lean towards the former statement. \r\n\r\nThere are several justifications that could explain why some people would prefer to have children later in life. First and foremost, for some parents, giving birth in young adulthood puts a strain on their financial and career plans. Nurturing a child requires myriads of expenses for nutrition, health care, and education which will exert financial issues on the young parents ,hence hindering the living standard of the family. Another possible reason is that young couples are not psychologically ready to raise a child. They are not mentally aware of how tremendous the responsibility and magnitude of parental skills really are. Therefore, bringing up a child would genuinely discourage them and negatively affect their work-life balance. \r\n\r\nThis phenomenon indicates quite a serious drawback, in which the benefit it brings appears to be less significant. Young parents who have been financially and mentally stable have a tendency to nurture a child more fulfilling. Their offspring is more likely to be exposed to better education, and manner and become more well-rounded later in life. Having said that, delaying childbirth involves high risks of health-related issues for the mother and the baby. The child could suffer from a physical or mental disability due to the poor pregnancy process of middle-aged mothers. In a more severe scenario, the birth-giving process could be fatal and result in the death of either family member. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the two primary reasons why young people decide to postpone childbirth are the lack of resources and mental awareness to raise a child. Despite the cited benefit, this trend is still more of a drawback.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created Narciso Rodriguez s passage loving grateful Narciso creates image happy childhood comparing happiness hard work parents toiled things sacrificed often describes feeling closeness neighborhood family In neighborhood cultures came together great solidarity friendship It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants Their family consisted variety people necessarily related always helping hand community times trouble My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family The warmth childhood life expressed line Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home Narciso gives many examples happiness always refers back hard work parents thanks parents giving opportunity experience better life I always grateful parents love sacrifice I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love feels grateful parent s strife help accepting neighborhood The mood passage loving grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is thought by a few individuals, that children should not allow to watch TV set, as it’s has many adverse effects and some other group believe children should watch the TV as it’s support them to learn more about the studies and enhance their knowledge.\n\nTo begin with detrimental side of TV box, if we consider there are many reasons not to watch children's television, like inappropriate advertisement, music videos and TV shows, which leads to children makes aggressive and changes their complete thoughts for life and towards families. In the clearest example, some of the TV shows are banned due to that children were committed suicide and has gone on the wrong path like crime and other bad social elements.\n\nOn the contrary, TV has some positive side itself and it’s help to children learn new things and support for studies, as many TV shows made on success story of children and others real star. Which actually changes a child's life and they become more responsible and set their career goals to achieve. There are many movies, which actually show the real life hero stories and we need to show our children those kind of videos. MS Dhoni (movies) is one clear example, which is made with Indian Cricket Team captain and it’s showing the whole struggle of life MS Dhoni, since he was born and become Indian Cricket Team captain.\n\nTo conclude this, I trust both statements have their own aspects and children should watch Television with their parents or limited time period in the day. The should allow for particular channels, where he could not find any inappropriate shows.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has anyone ever stopped thought negative aspects censoring book Many people different beliefs take offense books show negativity ideas When people offended book first idea comes mind try get book shelves censoring libraries I think book offends certain group people simply read Why people get chance read good book offends someone else Banning books would go country stands How different would make us started censoring books libraries like countries governments final say read Imagine life would like books found offensive stripped shelves would nothing left anyone find something offensive book I understand sometimes things written books really disturbing offensive doesnt give anyone right take shelves Censoring books short term answer long term problem I believe always resort censoring books become less creative society There many people actually want read book never get chance censored library Books censored usually books help ones imagination Would want live world people void creativity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "machine that reads smiles ,*sighs,''whats next\"\n\nin my opinon i do not think their should be a machine that could read my emotions ever i belive privacy is important and the will for someone to express their emotions to someone whom they may care about is sometimes sacred or personal varying on the person. technology that tracks the way our muscles move could be used for other puposes the machine can even track if were angry and how our lips tighten around our mouth ,this other ways we could use such as facial recongtion, best said himself \" even though indiviuals showing varying degrees of expression\" these could identify someones facial muscles even if they had face suregy or we could use this as machinery as facial reconstructions benifts .if its able to identify muscles of every unique person even famous art work like the mona lisa then this could have other benifts we could even look into the past to tell how historical figures were feeling in paintings or older photos. or we also could use to know animals emotions and how we can make an animal have a better day or stop animal related accidents from happening such as animal attacks. One good reason is if women could know if how we really felt about that dress the one they asked our opinons about then the trouble comes. often times emotions are the reflection of the human spirit emotions are things that leads rebilons agaimts broken systems or start movements,emotions are what gives us the extra inch for the push, emotions soemtimes give a door to grieve, our even hold our opinons , see we have feelings inside that no one should look threw in todays society alot of mans virutues once held have gone, emotions are something that is deep imside us that we can hold onto , humanity always wants to know even it breaks or passes the limit but , if emotions were able to show they could stop so much possibilties , imagine if slave masters knew their slaves emotions, or britian during the american revoultion knew, emotitons is how cover ourselves .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Few people consider pupils should unpaid soical work on their free time.These would be beneficial for students as well as society. I firmly agree with the notion to a large extent. Reason for my perception will be discuss further.\r\n\r\n To begin with, why student should do social unpaid work, to answer it, can develop skills,to explain it, regarding it have to communicate with other and have to talk with individuals, some skills like verbal skills developed by it and also some other as removed speaking fear.For example, pupils can talk with tribal people and convence them to send their children school and can explain profit of education for future.Regarding this type work can treat themselves for future. Also it gives mind of peace and pleasure. For instance, in china many people's do unpaid work only for happiness and peaceThere for learner definitely should social work on after school or free time.\r\n\r\n However, i would not overlook the darker side, if they do social work may be it can distracted mind to Study.To explicate it, pupils do study and unpaid work back to back may be effected study as well as results,with pressure of parents , teacher and this work they get tired. Moreover, without any payment they should not do work because nowadays number of unemployed increasing swiftly. If government do payment for it so they can do it\r\n\r\n To conclude, It is true that without wages works is unfair with pupils. But regarding unpaid social work\r\n\r\ncan improve growth as well as many skills can be developed like verbal skill, it gives fullfiment and happiness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that people have increasingly put in extra hours at work and therefore had little time for their families and friends in recent years. This essay will discuss the possible causes in my perspective for this growing trend and also suggests the possible consequences that may result in both personal life and society.\r\n\r\nThere are several causes for people working harder and longer hours in today's world. First, since the world's population is still increasing in huge annual increments, at around 80 million per year, with scarce resources and opportunities, people are having to contend with each other harder than ever before, especially in densely populated areas. This means that if a person doesn't work diligently, he or she will be susceptible to unemployment and not be able to feed his or her family.Second, spending more time working can offer a number of benefits to workers in the company. For example, by leaning into a frenzy in the workplace, a worker can be viewed as productive or being sought after, creating a sense of status for him or her.\r\n\r\nConsequently, the trend can affect individuals and society to a certain extent. Being overly concerned about work can impair other important aspects of life, including relationships with family members. For instance, some successful managers have divorced many times or have not been able to watch their children grow since they don't spend time with their families. In addition, spending too much time in the performance zone could give rise to various mental health problems, such as burnout or stress, leading to productivity loss as a result. Recent research and studies conducted have indicated that productivity decreases for employees who work more than fifty hours per week because of inadequate recovery time.\r\n\r\nIn short, I believe that overpopulation and self-recognition have caused employees to spend longer hours in the workplace and neglect family relationships. This may result in burnout and stress, leading to reduced productivity and spoiling family relationships.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy can be very hard, but it can also be super fun I enjoyed being a Seagoing Cowboy, and there are lots of reasons why. I think it is a great idea to participate in this program. Here are a few reasons why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nOne of the best parts of participating in this program is visiting lots of new places. I was a small town boy and it was very interesting to get to go to all of these places. One of the places I went was Venice, Italy. I also got the opportunity to go to Greece and see the Acropolis.\n\nAnother great part of participating in the program is that you can make lots of new friends. On the return trips I played lots of games with the other cowboys. This helped me make lots of friends. Some of the games we played were baseball, volleyball, and table-tennis.\n\nA very important part on participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program was helping countries that needed help. Lots of countries were tring to recover from World War 2. It was very rewarding to know that this is helping lots of people. It is also good to know that you are the ones helping and you know that these countries are getting what they need.\n\nI think it is a very good idea to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. It is rewarding, fun, and takes you places you would never think you could go to. Joining this program is a very great thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a relentless controversy about whether charity organizations should prioritize citizens of their countries rather than other places or not. From my point of view, financial assistance should be given to in-need people, regardless of geographical barriers.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some who object to the idea of supporting impoverished people worldwide have their own justifications. First, it cannot be denied that a large amount of money donation comes from local people or overseas nationals, therefore, the government should give aid to needy compatriots. For example, with the catastrophic consequences that Storm Goni left, a major volume of remittances from overseas Vietnamese to the country to remedy these problems, therefore, it would be used for locals who were disastrously affected by the typhoon. Moreover, the authorities should give support to their dwellers in far-flung areas to improve their life quality as well as promote the local economy.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I concur with the view of giving financial assistance to in-need people, despite their geographical locations. First, it helps the government build up a harmonious and mutually beneficial relationship with other countries. This collaboration enables the recipient country to reach its potential while the benefactor can enjoy certain trade benefits. Furthermore, evidently, people in underdeveloped nations suffer from more pressing issues than their counterparts in developed ones, as a result, they need support from global organizations to overcome the problems such as hungry or illiteracy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is understandable that individuals have their own perception, however, I am firmly convinced that the main purpose of charity funds should be to assist needy people, no matter where they live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \" The Challange of Exploring Venus,\" the author gives his opinion on the topic saying that it would be a worthy pursuit to study and explore Venus despoite the dangers it presents. Venus is the second planet to the sun and it is often reffered to as Earth's \"Twin\". This would be because of their like size shape, size, and density. Still Venus is not safe for many reasons, altough many scientist believe that it would be great to keep on trying to explore Venus. I will evaluate some of the points that are made that show why exploring Venus is something that we should pursuit and how some of dangers may not allow it.\n\nWe will first start of with some of the dangers that Venus holds for any explorer. Venus is very close to Earth and very similar so many would think it would be little more simple to explore, but you would be wrong if you think like this. Venus' temperatures can average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, 10 times more than some temperatures here on Earth. Venus also has clouds of high corrosive sulfuric acid. Now I'm not a scientist but I'm for sure that mean that it can burn our faces off very excessevily fast. In Venus there is also geographic and weather problems like here on Earth, except these arent anything like small rain showers or high winds. These are erupting volcanoes at every corner, powerful earthquakes,and lighting strikes very often. In paragraph 3 the author puts all thuis into perspective by saying \" sunch an enviornment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquify many metals.\"\n\nNow with all these dangers being said there are still many people who want to explore Venus. One of them being the author of this passage. The author gives very good points on why Venus would still be a great pursuit. One of the points that author brings up is that Venus could have once been something similar to Earth, maybe even habitable for us humans. To go along with this in paragraph 4 the athor states \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely in oceans and could aave supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This shows that Venus could have been as good as Earth many many years ago and that maybe their still is a chance that it is. This is a great point that really supports exploring Venus because for many years now NASA has been looking for a planet similar to Earth.\n\nAnother great point the author bring up to supports his ideology of pursuing to explore Venus altough many dangers is that we have found many new ways to explore it. The authors states some ways to explore Venus without sending a human to Venus with the technology we have now and still be safe. In paragraph 5, the author says \" Imagine a blimp-like vechicle hovering thrity or so miles abovethe roiling Venusian landscape.' This shows that we have an idea to send a vechicle to Venus but not touch the ground to get information about Venus without the vechicle being destroyed. This helps the authors point a lot because now it shows we do have the innovations to explore Venus a bit better. There would be a little problem with this and that would be that we wouldn't have much samples of rocks, gas, or anything else.\n\nIn conclusion I do believe that the author makes very good statements about why it would be good to keep pursuing the exploration of Venus. Venus does withold many dangers but everyday we are coming up with new techonology to make our lives easier maybe we could do the same for Venus. Also, Venus is could hold some very important information to us about how other plantes could be habitable by us and how this could be possible. The author got my attention from the start and never lost it, he used good facts and stats to backup his points, and thought us ways that Venus could be important to more than just astronamers and scientist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There could be many explanations for this mystircal face, although, the face could have just been created by the planet when formed, or it could have been made by something unexplainable. How do you think the face was formed?\n\nThe face is more than likely just another natural land form, just like here on earth, we have natural land forms that look like living animals or plants. The likely hood of the face being unatural is very slim. Being that the face had not changed for 25 years, it could mean that this is just a land form that has existed since the planets beginning.\n\nThe face is similar to a natural land form here on Earth, in the Snake River Plane of Idaho. The face shows that it is possible for it to be anything, it could be alien made, but it is highly unlikely. There has not really been any true evidence that aliens exist.\n\nSkeptics may believe that the face could be more proof that aliens exist in outer space. Which could very well be, but there is still no strong evidence that it is true, we could be the only living planet in space.\n\nConcluding the face is extremely likely to be just a natural formation that the planet had when it was developing. There is also no completely proof that it is alien proof, and making a face on a planet would not be the best way to comunicate with humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One big problems facing docking dirigibles government law It illegal lowflying aircraft It says existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area CAPS Another obstacle would safety Dirigibles FLAMMABLE could easily injure kill people accident happened Is dangerous Most dirigibles used hydrogen hydrogen highly flammable CAPS Another problem nature weather The winds extremely high powerful A big danger dirigibles violent air currents back ship would swivel around high pedestrians CAPS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author explains why we have yet to travel to Venus and supports with evidence why he thinks we should in the near future. The author supports this idea thoroughly in the presentation of the dangers that traveling to Venus may present, and informing the reader of the advancements in technology and ideas that may allow humans to one day study Venus from up close.\n\nThoughout the article, the author uses current technology and past human experiences with the planet to portray the difficulties space travellers may have researching the planet. In paragraph three the author explains the harsh environment on Venus that causes spacecraft to malfunction and stop working. The author says, \"These conditions are much worse than anything humans encounter on Earth,\" and that the atmospheric pressure, \"...would crush even a submarine,\" and, \"liquefy many metals\" (Paragraph 3). These claims support the idea of the planet being challenging to observe with rovers and spacecraft and presents the idea of humans wishing to overcome challenges simply for curiosity's sake.\n\nAdditionally, the author explains the progress humans are making in their pursuit of the planet through the creation metals and machinery capable of withstanding the harsh conditions of the hostile Venus. The author presents the idea of a hovering craft on the planet that can escape the severity of the surface; The author stating the conditions were not easy, \"...but survivable for humans\" (Paragraph 5). The author justly displays this plan by also weighing the negatives. The author states that, \"...peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the surface can only provide limited insight on the ground conditions...\" (Paragraph 6) The authro's support of the argument through evidence from both sides shows an understanding of the full scope of the issue and allows the author to affect one's opinion more effectively.\n\nFinally, the author claims that the value in reaching Venus lies in the exploration of human curiosities and the opportunity to learn from an environment so close to home and so unwilling to allow humans to look in. \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (Paragraph 8). The author believes that the true reward in the exploration of Venus lies in overcoming the challenges we will face along the way and through evidence and reasoning supports the idea that the journey is worth it.\n\nThe author of this article supported the idea that the study of our hostile neighbor Venus was worth the risks it presents. The article lays out the dangers and the potential ways of overcoming them, while also presenting the good and bad of the options. Although opinionated, this article presents an idea that is based in sound logic and upon reasonable evidence. The author of this article did an excellent job in explaining and supporting the idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Face on Mars? Aliens? What? Some conspiracy theorists believe that a face found on Mars from a photo taken by Viking 1 - a Mars Global surveyor -\n\nwas created by aliens who lived on the planet over 300 billion years ago. NASA released information and a picture about the 'Face on Mars,' to the media, with the caption, \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head.\" The face believed to be found on Mars is nothing less then a rock formation, and was not created by aliens.\n\nMission controller Garvin says, \"It's not easy to target Cydonia.\" He also noted that his crew does not pass over the Face very often. This rock formation is nothing more then a piece of the planet that has been wore down by the clouds on Mars. Research shows evidence that this formation has been on Mars for billions of years. Over time the wind and atmosphere has shaped the rock into the form of what looks to be a Face.\n\nNASA leaked evidence about the Face on Mars when they unveiled the image for the public and media to see, stating clearly that the Face was formed by, \"shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\"\n\nThousands of anxious web surfers were waiting to see the image on a JPL website, the text in fact quoted, \"It was a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nThe people that do believe that there was alien life on Mars, think that the aliens markings were hidden by haze, and believe the Face is \"bona fide\" evidence of life on Mars. Contarary to what skeptics and other theorists think, there is no actual piece of true evidence discovered by NASA to prove otherwise.\n\nGarvin and his team said, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size, so if there were objects in the picture like airplanes on the ground of Egyptian-style pyarmids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" So this actual NASA evidence that the mysterious \"Face\" found on Mars was nothing but a simple landform.\n\nThe NASA Space Program has been around for decades. NASA has not yet found evidence to consider the Face on Mars was alien artifacts. Even with NASA's best cameras, there just isn't a theoretical proven fact that this could have become an artifact from ancient aliens. The Face on Mars, is not a face, but simply a landform, that was formed over billions of years ago.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human biengs are being replaced by machinaries these days. This is quite evident in the economy as more and more people are unemployed due to the revolution of technology and fast paced economy. Though there are certain flaws associated with the sentiment, similarly there are certain benefits attached with it. I would detail it in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, from the perspective of humankind it can be seen that machines are taking over thier role. Majority of industrial sectors are installing equipment to get thier work done, which is costing the jobs of the employees working in there. For instance; Rearing of milk from cattles have shifted to sucking machines which was earlier done by humans. Secondly, from employer's view point work is getting done at a faster pace and with no dependency on labour, which in turn skyrockets the profit. Hence, employee working in the organisation have to capitulate under the conandrum, for example: TCS have laid off upto 20% of employee by substituting them with AI designed interface.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are certain benefits associated with these changes and they are as follows: work that used to be tedious and time consuming have transformed to be fast paced and effective, examples such as; sorting, labeling, packing and dispatching. To add on, Employers less inclination towards employees have made them indepedent. They no need to worry on turnover rate of employees nor they have to focus on meeting their psychological needs.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I would opine that employers should integrate eventually both the machinery and employees, rather than replacing them completely. It is because I do believe there certain work which cannot be done by machines as it would need the emotional quotient capability of humans, which machines cannot surpass.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Architects builders working building docking platform top Empire State Building dirigibles faced many obstacles The first problem builders came across possibility building s framework potentially strong enough support dirigible s weight It said paragraph nine stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation risky Another obstacle builder s came across nature dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium feared winds top building would intensely violent destroyed flammable gas The next obstacle builders faced public safety There existing law airships flying low urban areas dirigibles could approach dock area sake citizens New York All problems eventually led idea using mooring mast shelved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action\n\nFacial Action Coding Systen is acutally pretty cool. having your compute read your emotions just by looking at you. Is this something important to have for kids in school though. I believe that it would be a great tool for school.\n\nI believe that this could help how kids consintrate. Kids are always driffing off and getting off topic when working. With computers reading that there bored it can do something to get them back on topic. It will help every distracted kid make sure there working.\n\nStayign on topid for kids isnt easy. There not thinking about any homework there thinking of what there doing later that day. This will help prevent them from getting off topic. It will also be a good to to help some kids emotionaly. If the same kid shows up to school every day sad but teachers never knew. This sofware would be able to help. Then teachers can help there students and find out whats wrong.\n\nIts not only a way for students to stay on track but its fun. Every kid would be sitting there tryign to see what percentage they are. To find out if there happy, sad, suprised, or angry. They could even find out if there all of them. So its not just a tool for eductating. It is a way for kids to have fun with other kids.\n\nSo in all of this I believe that we should have these softwares. To help us stay on track, to be happier, and to have fun with other students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recent years have witnessed an unprecedented growth of homeowners showing propensities for having a deep knowledge about the history of a place they live such as: house, building, and so on. This essay attempts to shed light on the driving force behind the curtain before outlining a number of methods people can discover their accommodations' past.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, there are several reasonable explanation for why people are inclined towards understanding the advent of their house. The key rationale is associated with some concerns over potential building problems. It is essential for owners to examine past records involved to the house like when it built, what its outline was or how long it existed . In other words, most important information can be verified. Moreover, some people keen on exploring that high-quality products are used, for instance, ancient artifacts or pottery items. Another significant reason is beliefs of homeowners, especially for some Asian countries. In fact, the older generations tend to believe that the former owners or some events happened before will have considerable influences on the fortune of their own . As an example, if the prior owners was a successful person, they are likely to succeed afterwards.\r\n\r\nIn the light of the aforementioned reason, accommodators have an ability of figuring out the information in two simple ways. First and foremost, having a meeting with the former dwellers and neighbors about the secrets of their house. In fact, these trusted sources would be beneficial to give insights on incidents, which do wonders for current landlord to prevent upcoming troubles. Secondly. due to a momentous technological leap, homeowners are capable of doing research about the construction stage or major occurences in the past. Thus, it is easier to make an decision to leave or not.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some compelling reasons can be witnessed to a surge of tenants being interested to discover the origin of their house or buiding. Additionally, it is possible for them to do some research about their accommodation as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "every school year I wait patiently vacation It fell like terify waiting werth", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Each book library bears relation person enters library Whether books relate well poorly person something mass people decide Every person different outlook makes story interesting There ever book every human agrees appropriate vivacious Designed distinctly different minds people want read distinctly different books written distinctly different authors People maintain right choose books want read Never one book bind world Minds human beings complexly separated For example reading CAPS class last year appropriate though rather boring majority class Books racism religion sexual content intrigue person s mind otherwise disgust one s Finding satisfactory books everyone community agree simply ever done There always one person declines agree It choice It choice person read wants read If force something upon society readers left minds freedom Face forcing atheist read emotionally comprehensive novel faith stood reader Cursing people brings book realistic point To others however draws away story A choice remain person s right especially read book written read Finding appropriate book problem That yet become problem The problem finding appropriate books compelling enthralling I find CAPS dangerously inappropriate However captivates mind beyond dimensions Others I know choose read offensive content Do I find offensive No I understand others could find offensive There way approve book offensive offensive every person reads To reiterate mind human unique one identifies To sum full idea position every person given choice read desires Give person choice rebellion settle Removing book shelf puts craving hearts certain people read sometimes completely rebelliously Katherine Paterson extremely correct saying taking book shelf everytime someone wants one banned leave books anyone As person I well associated mind desires freedom choice Every human mind desires freedom choose Give people choice Remove books shelf let outcome draw whoever interested whatever interested Let readers freedom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries great multiple reasons A library place go need research meet tudor find interesting book read find one song ve looking pick new movie rent tonight However within library limits toward offer get Censorship libraries topic comes every people debate whether think censorship good bad thing Personally I think censorship unconvienient For example I ninth grade I assigned research paper However topic turned challenge research libraries I went offer many books resources seen inapropriate offensive topic Also librarians CAPS let check books age Since thought I young reading information CAPS going let proceed research I think s something going world live might well available public access If people wish see hear certain topics take upon themsleves avoid Rather getting rid together The goes form media If show CAPS like CAPS watch If song dislike CAPS listen It easy I know I time People need take upon understand handle apply daily lives When comes children censoring certain topics I think guardians child determine see hear Then responsibility guardians make sure rules guidlines set child understands In conclusion I think purpose library offer information Any information Then people go library find information looking wide selection library offer I think libraries shouldnt feel responsible censoring items offensive It job offer information", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the first source its explain what a Electoral College is which is not a place it's a process the finding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a Congress vote and by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the eledtors where they vote between a President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The Electoral College has about 538 electors a majority of 270 are electoral votes is required to elect the President by which your state entitled allotment of electors equals the numer of members in its Congressional delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators. The 23rd Amendment of the Constitution, the District of the Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the Electoral College. For this reason, in the following discussion, the word \"state\" also refers to the District of the Columbia.\n\nThe second source talks about the Indefensible Electoral College:Why even the best best-laid defenses of the system are wrong like in the first sentence \"What have Richard Nixion, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and the AFl-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? The answer is Abolishing the electoral college! They're not alone; according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore--thanks to the quirks of the electoral college--won the popular vote but lost the presidency, but over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. This following year voter have expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency but yet the electoeral college still has its defenders. What give?...\n\nThe last source for the story talks about the defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. Electoral College is widely regared as an anachronism and a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declasring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. The advocatesos this postion are coorect in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense ... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. Your votes for a presidential candidate your're actually voting for a slate of electors. There are a selects of parties that a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea of Venus being a worthy pursuit despiting the dangers by explaining how its the closest planet to us. Venus used to have oceans just like earth. Tare some details the author give us in the passage about enus being an worthy but dangerous planet to explore.\n\nIn paragragraph 2 he explains how its the closest planet to earth in terms to density and size. Its also closest in distance to us at certain times. Its dangerous because they sent several space craft and it only lasted a few Hours after it landed. Thats probably the reason why not a single spaceship has landed in more than three decades ago.\n\nIt would be hard to land there and stay ther because of the heat and the carbon dioxide. the atmosphere is almost 97 pecent carbon dioxide which would make it impossible to breathe in. The average temperature is over eight hundred degrees fahrenheit. the pressure is also ninety times greater than what we experience.\n\nThe scientitist wouldnt be able to take rock or gases off the planet so they would have to get close and take huge risk. NASA s working on studies for venus like they simplifie electronice and made silicone carbide that has been tested in chamber simulatin wich could last up to threee weeks. He thinks its because of human curiosity and will likelyy lead to many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nThese are some of the examples of the author using details in the text showing why he beleives ecploring Venus is worthey other than all the danger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If we want driverless cars so bad why dont we just take a taxi or a train. I think that we shouldnt try and make driverless cars just yet because we dont have the money to do so.\n\nTo make driverless cars we would need millions of dollars to even start constructing the ideas. Like it said in the article no car today is driverless, they may say it is but there is some situations where the car will still need human assistance. I think driverless cars would actually be pretty dangerous because what happens if the panel where the car is running from messes up or shuts down, then your car would have major problem or go off course from where you wanted to go. Another reason why I think that driverless cars are a dangerous idea is because what happens if the car breaks down on road side? Are we gonna have a google engineer come from 1,000 miles away in 10 minutes to help us? Probably not.\n\nYes driverless cars would be nice, but what I am saying is that driverless cars could also be very dangerous, and put our lives in dangerous just to have luxury. To me i dont think that having a driverless car is worth putting my life on the line for. In conclusion driverless cars would be nice, but we dont have the money to afford it, and they would be a very dangerous project to construct and test out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator, I propose that we change the election by popular vote for the president of the United States rather than having the Electoral College. I say this because the Electoral College is unfair to voters in many ways more than one.\n\nI'll start off by saying that Electoral College is unfair to voters. I strongly agree about this because under the electoral college system, voters do not vote for the president, they vote for a slate of electors, who then elect the president. This system is unfair because you don't always know who your electors are and you can't always control who the electors vote for. If you can't or don't know who they are voting for, then how can we trust them with the fate of our country? Although us people don't always make the right decisions, at least with popular vote we would all know that our votes wouldn't be put in someone elses hands.\n\nTo continue my agruement, the Electoral College is also unfair in this way. Say if there was to be a tie in electoral votes, the election would be given to the House of Representatives. Then the state delegations would vote for the president and the Senate would chose the vice president. When this would happen you would then not know who they were going to vote for and what your government's fate would be. So again if we had election by popular vote this wouldn't happen.\n\nLastly, the Electoral College is unfair to voters by the winner-take-all system. Since there is a winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning. An example of this is back during the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't get to see the candidates at all. Some of the largest media markets didn't even see a single campaign ad. This is completely unfair and ridiculous to all potential voters.\n\nIn the end, I think that the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and ridiculous. With all the valid points and arguments I have made, they make a pretty good reason to abolish the electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people assert that the most efficient means for accessing to the latest message in their life is newspapers. Meanwhile, online journals uploaded on the internet are supported by many people. From my point of view, the benefits of approaching new reports on electronic devices surpass those of printed news.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the journals which are produced on papers every day or every week such as a magazine are suitable for certain people, especially the elderly. For instance, it is a troublesome challenge for senior citizens to control such modern gadgets for reading the articles because they are not as mercurial as the younger ones. In addition, oldster is familiar with following daily on papers and also places their confidence in the accuracy level of its material for a long time, therefore, they aren’t willing to change their habits. To conclude, newspapers have several certain favourable features that make them appropriate for some people.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is indisputable that other sorts of articles can bring a better experience for users thanks to its salient aspects. For example, people can approach to all the ongoing around the world wherever they go only with their available equipment such as mobile phones or laptops. Moreover, the information on the internet is updated continuously every time. Specifically, within 1 minute, there have been dozens of articles that appear on many websites.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, there are some good reasons why many people choose the newspaper as their favourite type of information, but with all things considered above, I believe that online publishing contains superior traits. Accordingly, people should be encouraged to use those platforms to make use of its advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars are the sould not be any because the negatives make sense. There are positives for the car but I mostly agree with the negative side. In my opinon it would make more sense not to have the driverless cars.\n\nThe side I am supporting is there should not be any driverless cars on the roads. My reasoning for that is there are already states that made it their law that it is illegal to drive these cars. States like California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have made it illegal to even test drive driverless cars.\n\nAnother reason I am against driverless cars is if someone were to get into a crash then how will the one injured be able to get what is owned to them. Who do you blame for the crash? Is it the manufacturers fault or the drivers. The one injured should the able to seek justice. Which isn't possible if there is no one to blame for the wrong doing.\n\nAll though a driverless car maybe benifical for the owner and the car's company the technology may not always be reliable. Many car manufacturers in the past years have sent out cars that they thought were fine but have caused crashes and deaths. This could be a possible outcome people should not wait for a crash or death to happen. It is nessecary for the laws that other states have to protect their people and provent deaths.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State senator,\n\nAfter reading this article \"Does the Electoral College Work?\" I've come to believe that we should keep the Electoral College because, look at all the rights and goods we have establish untill now. What im trying to say is that the Electoral College do work, for example This method is widely regarded as an anachronism. Also that it can still be a elcetion, \"it is entirely possible that the winner of the election vote will not win the national popular vote,\" so I believe its fair on both sides. It happen in 2000, with Bush and Gore where Gore had more popular votes than Bush but less electoral votes, and we all know would won that year.\n\nThe Electoral College do has it cons for example, the voters actually vote for a slate of electors and not for the president. So if you live in a state like Texas for example, your votes goes to 34 Democratic electors that you don't know and this can create confusion about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. The best argument about the electoral college is the disaster factor. It happen once in 1960 where \"Louisianna legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who oppose John F. kennedy,\" Which means that those popular votes for Keenedy would not actually gone to him. Bob Dole says the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\n\nIn despised of the Electoral College cons, here is five reasons of keeping this method of choosing our President. Certainty of Outcome, Everyone's President, Swing States, Big states, and Avoid run-off elections. With these five reasons the electoral college allows us to \"restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution...\" also you can say that it has been working for as all as it has been here with us, so why abolish something if its working.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nI would like to say that the electoral college is not what we should be using to elect our presidents. I think the electoral college is not what Americans need. In the electoral college process, many thing could go wrong. The system does not work as many people think it does, as it is very deciving and unfair. Over half of all voters agreed that we should abolish the system and go by popular vote.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair due to the fact that peoples vote is not even going to the president but for his electors. The biggest moral of the country is \"we the people\" have control. The trickery of the electoral college is not allowing this to happen but taking it away. It is mainly unfair because of the winner-take-all system in each state. The electoral college interfered in the the presidential race between Al Gore and George W. Bush by allowing Bush to win even though more people voted on Al Gore in popular vote.\n\nThe many flaws in the system or mistake that can happen are more likely in the electoral college. The is a possibility that the two presidents can tie and in which case they have to go through a long process. This can happen due to an even number of electoral votes overall (538). The electors in the state of Louisiana have refused to vote for their party's canidate and vore for whoever they please ant that is not right. You can pay electors to vote one way which is also wrong too considering that not what the people think.\n\nMany people agree that they system should be abolished including two presidents the united states Richard Nixon and Jimmy Carter. Over half of all voters at over 60% agree that the system should be abolished. These statistics were taken in a Gallup Poll in 2000 shortly after Al Gore was not elected. The Obama vs. Romney race was won by Obama who had 61.7 % of the electoral votes versus he had only 51.3 % of the popular votes.\n\nThat's it! The electoral college is \"unfair, outdated, and irrational\" as Bradford Pulmer clearly staes it. The best arguements in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis of reality. Due to the many flaws and/or mistakes that can happen the electoral college should not be used. I have to agree with Nixon and Carter: \"Abolish the Electoral college!\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If the story was told in first person then it would be telling us about how Luke thinks or feels. It would also say what he thinks about what he is doing,what he thinks about his friends, and what he thinks of helping others. But I bet he would think nice things about helping people because he saide that he liked the job. And when his friend asked him if he wanted to go with him he said that it was a once in a life time opportunity that it he didnt want to miss. He also said that it would be great to be in a helping team and he also liked the journey geting to Europe with his friend. Plus we would of know what he thought about the journey,the place he was helping and the job. And don't say that i'm wrong because it is true. And this is how it would look like if the story was in first person. We would also know what he thought about Italy, a city with streets of water. Plus we would also know what he thought about the castle and China. And we would of know how he felt when he craked his ribs ,or about the animal gaurd job. And what about all that fun that he had with his new friends playing base ball, vollyball, tabble tennies tournaments, fencing, boxing reading, and whittling. We would of know what he felt and thought of it. Did he like it or not. And how about his family we would of know what he thought of them. Of course he would say good things about them but still we would of know more about his thoughts and feelings. Acording to the passege luke said that it was more then an adventre to him because it opened his world and changed his life for ever. And it means that there is no better job then what he has now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not believe that using the Facial Action Coding System to read students' emotional expressions would be beneficial to classrooms, because if students are confused they can simply ask their teachers questions, and when students are bored, the computer can not simply make them entertained.\n\nMost teachers have expirience dealing with students who do not immediately understand or comprehend their lessons, and when students ask questions, their teachers can answer them, and attempt to better their students' understanding. Quoted in the text, Dr. Huang predicts, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto para. 6). This quote shows an idea of how the computer reading human emotions could potentially modify lesson plans based on student confusion or boredem. I don't agree with this statement because, while the computer would be able to read human emotions and track confusion, it still wouldn't be able to track what particular topics each student is confused about, and I believe the most efficient way of finding that out is for teachers to ask students questions, or for students to ask teachers questions.\n\nAlthough this computer could potentially read facal expresions and features, it could not simply come up with solutions to students' bordem or tiredness. Often times teachers have students sit down and take notes, and although many students do not particularly enjoy taking notes, it is a manditory part of many classes, and teachers being able to know that their students are bored will not have an affect on most of their lessons. The text states, \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\" (D'Alto para. 6). Not only do I believe that this would be an invasion of privacy when computers are able to track people's specific moods and advertise to them based on their moods, but especialy so if this was implimented in a classroom for a teacher to be able to track specific students' moods and emotions every day.\n\nFacial Action Coding System would not be beneficial to a classroom because both bordem and confusion can simply be expressed to a teacher, and although the computer could identify human emotions, it has no real way of solving problems that arise with students' emotions or moods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" made many good points on using the emotion detector on students in the classroom. many of the points were common problems with students in the classroom and seemed like resonable solutions to many problems that students and teachers have.\n\nthe artical talked about putting emotion reading computer programs in student computers that could change the lesson they are learning to their likeing.I see no problem with this as me being a student my self the worst part of the lessons is the subjects can be boring as they said in paragraph 6 \"Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.'' Students could be kept entetained while also learning and it would make learning the lesson more interesting to the student,and the student would want to learn the lesson and they would retain the infromation better if they are wanting to learn the subject.\n\nThe artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" makes many good and accurate points on students in the classroom,many of these points are problems that students and teachers are having in the classroom.Putting emotion reading technology in the students computers would make their lessons more to the students likeing and if the student likes what they are reading and learning the student will be more willing to learn the subject and will retain more information from the learning,so yes i agree that they should put the emotion reading technology into the students computers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral college process consists of the selections of our electors. The electors get together and vote for presidents, and vice presidents. I think that the poeple of the united states should have all the power with voting. We should be able to vote for the electors. This would get rid of all the people that ruin our country or are corrupt. The voting system should have 2 finalists for each branch of the gorverment. They should add up all the vote and see who has the most. they're should not be two parties. I feel like this would make the voting more equal and fair. The candidate's running for president should not have they're own group of electors. They should speak the truth on how they will help this counrty out, and should trust that the people make the right vote.\n\nThe electoral college is looked at as a non-democratic way of selecting the president . When you vote, you're not voting for the presdient, you're voting for electors that will choose who is president. This means the people don't really have a say in the electoral college voting system\n\nIn my opinion, i think people should have all the power in voting, this would make the process alot smoother. The people would elect who they feel would do best for this counrty. This would also create new community groups and councils for voting. People would open up voting centers and meetings. It would employ more jobs and build a stronger relationship. Most inportenlty, a good president", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many companies and factories to complete the manual job, which is traditionally human workers. I personally believe that it is a positive development, although it has its drawbacks.\r\n\r\n Some people believe that AI can bright significant benefits. The main reason for this review that Intelligent machines can work long hours without becoming bored or exhausted. They are powerful in areas that require high efficiency and accuracy, such as process large amounts of data. Also, machines are cheaper than a human being, which complete orders fast, the company has gained more profits.\r\n\r\nUsing machinery which reduces people's workload. For example,\r\n\r\nthe worker can get off the job on time and have leisure to entrainment after job. The places where they can go out for dinner with their colleague, or go shopping with friends. Besides, they have more hour to do some exercises had good health, no disease due to long-term pressure or working environment.\r\n\r\nArtificial intelligence has a negative impact. Using machines for a task means that less or no human labour is need for the same task, which leads to a higher unemployment rate. For instants, The company will lay off workers, those whom no skill or diploma, to do other jobs that do not make a living for themselves. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, artificial intelligence can help to boost productivity. Although using artificial intelligence is expensive, it can reduce human labour costs and will be more economical in the long term. On the same occasion, the potential risks of using AI should not be ignored.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you hear Venus from someone mouth what comes to mind? Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot. Venus is like the closest planet to Earth when we talking about the density and size.\n\nThe author supports the claim of challenge of exploring Venus by point out the cons in it and but how they still challenging themseleves. Sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus and bcause of this sometimes right around the corner in space terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. But the main thing is that as they sent spacecraft to Venus, non of them survived the landing for more than a few hours. But when you join venus to a ship orbiting far above the planet it can provide a few insight on the ground. \" Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anthing else, from a distance.\" This bascily talking about how people we are observing the Venus can't see anything from there is experiment. However, the scientists are looking for a machine that will last long enogh to contribute to the knowledge of Venus.\n\nIn conlcusion, Venus is dangerous but can be challenged. Spacecraft who has practipate in this challenge and was not able to survived need to be credit because the things is very tuff. Also for other spacecraft there is more work to do and do different experiment before attempting to go for that challenge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez From Home The Blueprints Our lives author created many moods One mood Friendship parents kept arms open anyone needed help every neighbor hade They came together fun even different backrounds You hade make many Friends could help live healthy life Another mood created calm In house Passionate Cuban music air smelled traditionally Cuban This family Cuban wanted keep traditions make better environment The last mood harsh sacrifice Parents give lot like family friends job move And got start fresh take jobs could Find His parents life hard tried make good could For son It hard got great job", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientist are interested in exploring Venus but they find it very hard to explore it. Venus has high temperature that make it harder for them to be able to get a closer look at it which makes it a challenge for scientists for to even get a closer look at it. If Venus is Earth's sister planet why is it so inhospitable for us to live in it.\n\nWhy are scientist wasting their time trying to explore it and how would we know what is actually in Venus if we haven't yet explored it. I think it may be a bit to dangerous for any of us to actually be able to explore it without the right equipment and the right person to send there without knowing for sureif they would be getting hurt or not. I think it is to much of a risk to send someone up there and risk their lifes all just to be sure if Venus is safe or not.\n\nIn paragraph 4 it states that \"Long ago,Venus was probably covered lagely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like in Earth\"scientist could just want us to have a better future for our future kids and families along the way. In this pargraph it is saying that Venus could be another resource for us to use as an Evacuation if Earth is no longer safe for us we have a second choice.\n\nWe may never know if we don't explore it but I still think it is a bit to much of a risk for us to take because we never know something could go terrible wrong and we all end up no longer exsisting.\n\nEarth has many similarities and many differences scientist want to be able to study Venus to be able to come up with new vehices another project is looking back at an old technology called mechanical computers. These devises make calculations by using gears and levers and don't require electronics at all. in article 8 it says tha we shouldn't be scared of what may happened all that matter s is what's right for the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist tRying bike hills hills tiRing Also hot aiR dehydRate cause pass Along dRy aiR theRe dRy land means theRe place stop foR wateR oR take The Rough make biking naRaeR involves moRe eneRgy biking smooth path Finally snake middle Road made haved foR bikeR go aRound If snake would bitten could died fRom poison", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the idea of driverless cars is amazing and possible. Sitting in a car, but not having to drive it is a very nice luxury. Although driverless cars sunds like a cool, advanced idea, I don't think that it should happen. I do not support driverless cars because I don't think that they will be safe enough to drive and I don't think that they will be completely driverless, despite the term \"driverless\".\n\nThe first reason that I do not support driverless cars is a car that has to alert the driver in certain situations is not driverless, until the car can complete those tasks on its own. If you are in a car that is driverless, you shouldn't have to help the car drive itself. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This quote, from line five, of paragraph seven, informs readers about the abilities of driverless cars, but the quote also tells us that the car is designed to alert the driver to do tasks such as driving around accidents and traveling through work zones. Those are abilities that require human skill. Steering, accelerating, and braking are all also human skills that take away from the driver being able to depend on the car to be driverless because the cars can complete some driving tasks, but not all. This quote, \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.\", from line eight, of paragraph seven, proves that the abilities that driverless cars have are not enough to consider them driverless, which shows that an alert driver that is not driving doing nothing more by driving the car manually.\n\nThe second reason that I do not support driverless cars is that I do not think that they will be safe enought for anyone to travel in. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" This quote, from line one, of paragaph nine, supports the idea of alert drivers, and drivers that are alert should just drive! If completely driverless cars were to make an appearance on roads, there would need to be strict, new laws put in place because curreent laws assume that a car is safe only if there is a human driver in control at all times.\n\nEven though I do not support driverless cars, I like the possibility of them. I think that they are possible, but they shouldn't make be used as a primary source of transportation, or on busy roads. Driverless cars will be in the future, when developed by manufacturers like Tesla, Audi, and Nissan. \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\" There is no point in driverless cars!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine not having full control of your lives or your passengers lives?\n\nPutting your life and others in the hands of a so called self driven car is doing just that. Traffic laws state that the only safe drivable car is a car with an aleart driver, then why would we want to take the driver away?\n\nHaving a car that will be able to drive itself has way to much technology involved. We can't have cellphones at the wheel why have somehting esencaly like a cellphone driving us around? In the artical parragraph four says that a self driving car would need a whole lot of sencers; it also list some technology in the googles Toyota Pirus, \" Googles motofied Toyota pirus uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS recevier, and an inertal motion sensor.\"The technology doesnt stop there it also says in that same parragraph that \"The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning senser on the roof.\" and that it uses laserbeens to always have a 3-D visual of whats going on around the car. They are trying to add a whole bunch of unneeded tecnology, why add of of those sensors when you could just have a single person in control of the vehical.\n\nThis self drving car isnt even 100 percent self driving the driver needs to have ahold of the wheel, parragraph seven says \" In fact none of the cars developed so far are compleatly driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" Why would we add of all this technology to a car that still needs the driver to do esencaly what they would be doing if they were driving the car; to remain alert, be ready to take over, hold the wheel, and focus on the road. This self driving car just added a huge unnessacery step to travling anywhere. \" Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\" is a sentence right out of parragraph seven of the artical that supports that the driver would need to do the same thing as if he or she were controling the car.\n\nWith the self driven car who woud be responcanle for accidents in the car, the driver or the manufacturer of the car? Parragraph nine senrtince one says \" Most driving laws focus on eeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrains safe, and lawmakers know that safty is best achieved with alert drivers.\" why would we say that the best way for eveyone to remain safe is to have a focused driver but tuen around an take that driver away. In most stats its illegal to test these self driven cars ecept for a few select places; those places have very strick rules on what they can do. The second to last sentence in parragrph nine stats \" Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" why change are laws and most likely add alot of cort cases\n\nto the mix.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unemployment and poverty are indisputably the major reasons for crime. Providing vocational education to prisoners inside penitentiaries would definitely reduce joblessness and destitution. However, I disagree with the given statement that providing education to inmates is the best way to reduce crime. it is a good method, but there are other better methods to curb crime. To begin with, the main purpose of prisons is not just to punish criminals, but also to rehabilitate them if this rehabilitation part is not looked into, then the majority of criminals would re-offend after coming out of prison. This is because, such criminals are not accepted by the general public, and nobody likes to give their jobs. Therefore just educating them is not enough to reduce crime. The government must ensure that they are given jobs to fend for their basic needs. Another important fact, which has to be considered, is that these penitentiaries are very costly to maintain. When these inmates are taught vocational skills such as carpentry, a lot of infrastructure is required. While all this expenditure may help a few prisoners, but it may be futile in the case of those hard-core criminals who are not in there because of illiteracy or unemployment. Their trust has a criminal bent of mind. They would never become useful members of society even after such education. Rigorous imprisonment would be better to deter potential criminals. The best way to reduce crime would be to never let it happen in the first place. Laws should be enforced so strictly that people should think a hundred times before resorting to crime. Compulsory primary education should be given to all children. Youth unemployment should be dealt with by creating job openings or by encouraging entry pre ne u rs hip. To conclude, it can be reiterated that while educating the prisoners and trying to make them self-sufficient would be good to reduce crime, the better methods would be to stop crime from happening in the first place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient many times life One I remember waiting long line opening The line must least people This one largest apple orchard area I lived It first time going sister gone countless times She said one scariest things ever She brought friend also Her name The opening going line still growing behind us My heart pumping faster faster I glanced watch almost every second Time seemed forget keep ticking Finally That heard announcement Beep CAPS ladies gentlemen I sad announce opening minutes Im sorry Thanks cooperation click I heard everyone line groan A lot people left come back tomorrow Andrew I sat wait Then finally heard one last announcement Beep CAPS Are ready Then come Its time That story patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason why the face isn't aliens but just a natural landforms is because, \" Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera(MOC) team snappped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking pgotos.Thousand of anxious wed surfers were waiting when the amage first appeared on a JPL wed sire,revealing..a natureal landform. There was no alien moument after all.\" This prove that the NASA been researching a lot of time and now that they finally prove that it isn't aliens. And the second reason why it's not aliens is that Malin's team captured an extraordinaary photo using the camera's abcolute manimun resolution and \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters,compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo and still believe that it's not aliens.\n\n\"As a rule of thumb, you can dicern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" said Garvin \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" And what the picture actually shows is, \"the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. \"it reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" And \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolate mesa about the same height as the Face on Mrs.\" Said Garvin.\n\nWe have seen working on this \"Unmaskiing the Face on Mars\" and still believe that the face isn't aliens but a natural landform. We used a lot of good camera and been picturing a lot of time and we got a pciture that can prove it's not aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus is an article written by an author. The author uses a lot of evidence to support his claim that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.For example the author says that NASA should invent a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape\"\n\nThis\n\nis a genius suggestion. This could work because the vehicle would not be touching the hot surface but just hovering above enough for us to even get a glimpse of what the inside of Venus looks like.\n\nThe author also states that NASA is thinking of using mecahnical computers. These computers existed in the 1800's and were important in World War II\" The new computers would just explode because of the heat and pressure Venus produces. The mecahnical computers would work very well.\n\nThe writer did an awesome job of supporting the idea that \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" I hope these things are invented or allowed so that astronounts can visit Venus and the world can finally know what exists deep inside Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is America's current method of election. A process created by our founding fathers that consists of the selection of electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. Many Americans believe that this method is crucial because it's certainty of outcomes and the way it avoids run-off elections. However many people believe it creates more of a problem than a solution. Problems created under the electoral college system include, big states recieving more attention than small states, the disaster factor, and the winner-take-all method which causes unfairness among voters.\n\nEach state has a different number of electors based on the number of members in it's congressional delegation. A lot of the time bigger states tend to have a larger amount of electors, for example the state of Hawaii has four while the state of texas has 38. This causes more attention to go towards the big states. Another example of this dilema is shown by an excerpt from Bradford Plumer whcih says \"each state casts only one vote, the single representative from Wyoming, represetning 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to represent the will of the people\".\n\nThe current system of election leaves room for multiple disasters to occur. Disasters such as the 2000 fiasco in which Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency. Another issue caused is a question of the electors loyalty to their candidate. Perhaps the Elector of a certain state decides against the election of their party and casts a deciding vote for whoever they please. This creates an unreliable system they could change the fate of an election in an instant. Even more serious issues could arise such as a state sending two slates of electors which Hawaii did in 1960.\n\nLastly, the Electoral College is a faulty system because of it's winner-take-all method. Most states have this method in which the winning presidential candidate is awarded all the electors. Due to this the candidates don't spend time int he states they know have no chance of winning, and only focus on tight races in the \"swing states\". As stated in an article by Richard A. Posner \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, icluding Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single ad.\n\nAll in all, the Electoral College is an unreliable system of election. It causes many issues to arise and is all around unfair to voters. Many important people such as Richard Nixon, and Jimmy carter agree that America should abolish it all together. The issues caused such as unequal attention on states based on size, unfaithfulness of electors, and an unfair winner-takes-all method prove the the Electoral College undeniably, causes more problems than solutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By adding paragraph end story show resolution made theme overcoming obstacles present story When Saeng failed test miserable heartbroken however buying hibiscus found hope motivation decides end take test in spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding This hope end story helps put reader ease wonder might happen next Its help move story conclusion This endings meaningful like Readers able abtein message story paragraphs like In case authors message never give people find motivation simple things It important know author trying tell reader paragraphs reader trying understand purpose story also writer trying express ideas clearly audience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "first of all, the picture show (A Wave- energy machine) we can see that there is electricity generator its the machine that take the energy from the waves and it contain two turbines so the air could flow throuh it and from what it shown we can notice that there is two of wave energy machin: the large waves and the small waves.\nSecondly,the small wavs had low output since its for the small waves, in addition it also had low installation costs because its smaller.in the other hand the large waves had high output and high installation costs since its also large.\nTo sum up we can say that the air flow to the turbine so the turbine could move and got the electrisity , there is also air come from the water levels which hepls the machine get the elecricity that it needs so the people could use it like a solar power.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the public figures are gaining popularity for their fascinating lifestyle and money instead of their performances and I completely agree with the opinion that this trend is, unfortunately, portraying an incorrect image for the young generation to follow. In this essay, we will discuss how this sort of pattern can impact the progress of our future generation as well as can lead them to an inappropriate pathway.\n\nTo begin with, since these popular faces are becoming the role model of the youngsters, their actions can mislead the new generation from establishing their career. To elaborate, instead of building their own future, the young ones will become dependant on their parent's money. If we take a look at the high school students nowadays, the children are more worried about getting a latest-model car from their parents than creating a successful profession.\n\nAnother drawback this trend can bring is that it can persuade the current generation towards a wrong career pathway where they can earn quick money and live a lifestyle as of their favourite celebrities. Moreover, this can encourage the young ones to choose work which are dangerous or illegal. We see numerous teenagers who get involved in selling legally banned commodities to earn money and fulfil their wishes that their parents don't allow or can't afford.\n\nTo summarize, I concur with the view that since famous personalities have become a strong influencer in the society specifically for the young people, they should showcase their personal life very thoughtfully as they carry the power to build as well as destroy the future of our young generation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Society experiences a trend that the non-stop growing process of manufacturing items for users has an adverse influence on the eco-system. This essay will discuss about the main cause and a couple of solutions to tackle the issue.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the foremost reason that leads to a negative impact is due to an enormous amout of litter thrown away annually. The more goods are produced, the more garbage exist. It is easy to catch the moment that many tourists acquiring little education about environmental protection leave their own trash on roads and beaches. Not only people from tourisms but also local inhabitants that are not aware of collecting those garbage. Second, most of factories are utilizing unfriendly environmetally materials such as fossil fuels which may release hazardous emissions. For instance, the toxic smoke released into the atmosphere together with pollutants pumped directly to the sea can result in the air and water pollution.\r\n\r\nHowever, the ways to handle this situation are varied. It is nothing but the duty of the government in protecting the ecology by setting obligatory. For example, the authorities are able to impose stricter punishment on companies that go to great lengths to produce things from bad materials such as nilon. Furthermore, local residents should also establish some environmental protection groups to launch campaigns like ‘gathering trash on a weekly basis’ and apply cutting-edge technologies to have proper packages for each product.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is obvious that the reasons why the development of consumer goods does harm to the natural environment are owing to the huge wealth of litter and the toxic materials. However, there are several solutions such as enacting laws by the header and hightening people’ intellect from various green campaigns.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA found a Face on Mars but was it really a face of someone or something? I think its just a regular rock that was probably hit a couple times so now its looks simular to a face of something and\n\nThe passage states that it was a \"hugh rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" This shows that it's just a rock that looks like a face. If there was an real body or body part or something then I would believe there is life on Mars. I don't think anyone should believe things that they see and can't prove. The passage says that \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL wed site, revealing... a natural landform.\" This show that there wasn't any Face on the landform in Mars.\n\nThese details shows that the picture of the Face that NASA to a shot of wasn't a real a Face and was a conspiracy theory. That probably was the real reason NASA had tried to hide it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When builders Empire State Building envisioned leading dirigibles moor top critical flaws For one thing thousand foot dirigible moored small focal point wind pressure load would exert enormous pressure building s frame p This could potentially lead building s collapse due strain Another reason high altitudes wind quite violent would sway back dirigible thousands pedestrians neither practical safe p If something went wrong dirigible could take another building worse fall A practical legal obstacle law presence airships cities A dirigible mooring mast even height illegal p Therefore many obstacles deemed impractical use Empire State Building highaltitude dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are not going to take over the transportation industry. Driverless cars have many negative and positive aspects to the making. Many people have found it hard to believe that they are \"driverless\" cars. There was an article on CNN website on May 3, 2016 that is about how one of Google's driverless cars crashed. The idea of the cars working into driverless anytime soon is not going to happen.\n\nThe positive apects of the car are many, but they are ruled out by the major aspects of negativity. The text states, \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\". The idea of the many sensors they spread across this car is crazy, but they are mimicking the driver, so he or she does not have to drive. Second, \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus\". Google cfounder Sergey Brin is stating that his driverless car has less fuel usage than a regular car and many more options than a bus. The positive attributes are crazy on the results they got that could change the environment and human lifestyle.\n\nThe negative aspects of the driverless car are very high in priorities for the company. According to the text, \" Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffice issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents\". This \"driverless\" can is not showing its true meaning of being driverless if it has to be taking over by a driver to pull in and out of driveways. Furthermore, \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer\"? The car is causing many different problems in many different categories. It is saying that they would have to make up new laws of liability for if someone gets injured in a technology malfunction, it sounds like a lot of issues that can not be fixed.\n\nThe driverless car has many issues and advantages that can be handled in different ways. According to the text, \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved\". They are stating that the problems with the cars are being solved by the minute. Second, \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver\". It is hard to believe that they can have a car watch a person and be controlled by that. The driverless car is very luxury, but would middle class people be able to buy it?\n\nThe driverless car is a statement that does not mean what it is stating. According to the text, \" Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors\". Those are just a few of the \"driverless\" cars sensors, how is anyone going to be able to see out of the car with all of those gadgets in the way. Furthermore, \" The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over\". The cars name is \"driverless car\" then you have to have the driver take over when you can not do simple tasks like pulling in and out of driveways. The car just seems like it is very far from being \"driverless\".\n\nThe driverless car have not found their spot in the world yet or for quite a while. The concept of having the driver have to take over a driverless car is crazy on how they call it driverless, but need someone to take over the wheel at times. The car has many positive aspects to it and would be astounding if they had found a way to make it driverless, but until then they are not very interesting to me. Driverless cars are not going to take of the transportation industry.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new software update, the Facial Action Coding System can calcutale how people feel or what emotion they are feeling. This software is the lastest invention from Prof. The six basic emotions humans have can be read or showed by this Facial Action Coding System. This new technology is being tested to see if it is valuable in the classroom to read the emotional expressions of students. I belive this tecnology wouldn't be valuable in the classroom or learning enviroment. This technology doesnt benifit the students learning or relate to their school subjects.\n\nFacial Action coding System can calculate human emotional expressions. It calculates how you feel or waht you are feeling. I don't think this software would be valuable in the classroom because it is invading the kids personal space. Having the teachers or the computers always knowing how you feel is creepy. In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Simle\" it states that humans perform this task or calculation of reading people's emotions everyday. The artical also states that humans most likly can tell how otheres or how their friends are feeling by looking at their faical expressings. Having Facial Acton Coding System in the classroom would just be unessasary and invading others personal space.\n\nThis software or technology only reads humans emotional expressions, it does'nt teach anything or help people learn anything benifiting to school. If this technology was to be put into classrooms it wouldnt be benifiting to the kids or teaching them anything related to their school work. The artical states that the computer would be able to tell when a student is confused or bored while doing a leason. Most schools don't even teach leasons on the computer a teacher teaches them the leason they are learning. Also some kids or even their parents wouldn't want a computer to be reading their childrens emotions 24/7, also the students may not want to be monitored all the time aswell. This technology just isn't benificial to the learning enviroment in that sort of way.\n\nThe software update, the Facial Action Coding System is cool on how it reads humans emotions and tells you how they are feeling, but it just isn't valuable to classrooms or the learning enviroment. This software invades otheres person sapce by always monitoring their emotional expressions and calculating how u feel. Some people might find it creepy on the fact they are always being read by this new technology. This new technology isn't valuable to classrooms also because it it is not benifical to kids learning. The Facial Action Coding System doesnt teach kids realting to their school subjects. Teachers teach the leasons and not computers this software would'nt be nessarsy in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is clear that development in technology is playing a major role in delivering education today. There is a view that by the end of year 2050, the typical presence of teacher and students in classroom will cease to exist. However, In my opinion, I agree with mentioned statement to certain extent as their will still be certain scenarios that shall remain as it is.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the pace with which education infrastructure is growing and adapting, it can be established that societies are accepting the virtual education platform. For instance, over the duration of past decade, fifty percent of the total academic degree's are now being offered online and by the end of next decade, it will be one-hundred percent. Recent technological advancements, such as virtual laboratories, assessments through artifical intelligence, certification exams being proctored using web-cam has left presence of individuals in classroom redundant. Evidently, with all the news ways of teaching, the typical presence of the students and a teacher in school classes is questionable.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe certain scenarious between teachers and students are most-likely to remain unchanged for possibly the next three-decades. As an example, childrens will still be asked for regular home-work, assignment submission and regular examination. Failing to which, they could face same consequences. Furthermore, the most obvious problem of childrens being unattentive in classes and facing punishment would stay unchanged, even if the lectures are delivered virtually. Although there might be changes in the way childrens are punished so as to motivate them to study, but that shall not hinder the regular arguments between them.\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, with the advancement of technology and changing behaviour of education delivery by 2050, In my opinion, certain, traditional scenarios between teachers and pupil, such as arguments, and punishments shall stay unchanged.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA would like to start by saying thanks you for your interest. We find it very encouraging to see people so excited about our solar system. I am here to explain to you that, sadly, there is no life on Mars.\n\nAs previously stated, there is no evidence of life on Mars. We took a very detailed picture of Mars' surface and saw no shred of life there. When taking this high quality of a picture, you can usually discern things 3 times bigger than the pixel size. As you can blatanly see, there are no shacks, written words, or any other signs of life there.\n\nHaving discovered life on Mars' would've helped NASA in a very big way. We would have a lot more funding if we found an alien! We have no reason to mislead you. We would gladly share the existence of alien lifeforms to the rest of humanity. Sadly, there are no alien lifeforms to reveal. Now that isn't to say there won't ever be, but as of now, NASA has not found any alien lifeforms on Mars.\n\nWhat we have discovered is an excellent example of Mars' geography. This is simply a beautiful mesa on the Red Planet. Although shares a striking resemblence to a face, it is just a silly illusion! It is just shadows playing on the surface, as they usually do. This is nothing out of the ordinary. In fact, this is very similar to many mesas on our planet! Although it is beautiful, it is not an alien lifeform.\n\nI hope that this has debunked any vicious rumors you may have heard. The simple, naked truth is this, it's just a mesa. It's just a piece of land. Again, we thank you for your concern and interest. We also hope that you continue to keep informed on NASA. It really means a lot that there are still people out there who are intersted in Mars. Sincerely, NASA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The 1900's was much different then it is now. For example new technology and new discoveries. What else has changed is wether to keep the electoral college or not. The Electoral College is a big part in our government and plays a big part in wether who will be our next president.\n\nAccording to the passage\"What is the Electoral College\" by the Office of the Federal Register, the Electoral college is a process, not a place. This means that it is not in a certain place it is all over the United States. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualififed citizens. The presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November.\n\nAdmittedly, I feel that we should keep the Electoral College because it will help us with the voting process. According to the passage\" The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer he states that under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a state of electors, who in turn elect the president. As a result I feel that this isnt much of an issue for us citizens because if you make the right choice then they will vote for your president. So if you think about it there really isnt much of an issue because your president will still have your vote. The Electoral College is widely regarded as a non-democartic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner.\n\nProceeding further, the Electoral College is based of the electors you pick and then they decide of who becomes president by the popular vote. When you are voting for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee.\n\nIn conclusion, the electoral college is about voting for electors and then they become president if enough popular votes are met. Some people like this method and then some of the people dont. We all have our opinion by mine is i like this method.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is the backbone for any nations development. While some people feel that cultural arts subject teaching to be made mandatory for juveniles during their schooling, others think it is an absolute waste of time. In this essay, I will discuss both views and provide examples with reasons to support why the former one is better for society.\r\n\r\nThe supporters who think that learning arts are not required in this contemporary world have a reason to say so. To be more precise, they feel that the aforementioned subject does not have any exciting future with alluring monetary benefits. As per the world statistics, for instance, the ratio of the public who have chosen the above-stated career and the success rate of those artists is really negligible. Thus, people have made up their minds to encourage children to develop knowledge in the science and technological streams to reach heights in their careers and life. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others, including me, have stronger evidence to prove that the above-discussed thought process is wrong. Learning arts and showcasing it to the world represents the culture of the respective nation, which eventually elevate the country to the top position among the global countries. To cite an example, India is respected across the globe because of its culture of encouraging the various art forms such as dance, painting and drawing as critical skills to learn. In addition to that, India has been introducing special monetary packages and conducting more art exhibitions to promote artists.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, only a few people are under impression that arts to be taught as an essential subject during children schooling. However, others think it is unnecessary to learn which consumes a large amount of time. I honestly feel that every country should treat art learning as a critical aspect as it not only to represents the culture but also increase the cognitive ability of children to a greater extent.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cell phones and the Internet might have a lot of advantages for the older generation. Nevertheless, this age group is less likely to machinery. \n\nTo start with, one implication of the challenge could be pointed out as following remarkable shifts in automation tendencies, the circumstances in which beneficial site of technological facilities for a society, especially for older adults, have become more widespread. Sufficient findings show that the Internet enables the old generation to communicate with others via social media, such as Whats app, Vk and Skype, in a more convenient way. To give a clear example, the Internet plus the digital phone with a camera allow grandparents to converse with their children who are located overseas by video calling, with the help of social media. Thus, hardly anybody can refuse to accept that it is exceedingly difficult to get rid of this. \n\nHowever, the older generation is less likely to use technological appliances. Therefore, some experts who deem the situation worrisome may suggest tech-savvies to organise free lessons for elders in order to encourage them to use this advanced technology. Elder scholar course called Medicare is a glaring example of this suggestion. I firmly believe that both younger and older generations will gain valuable lessons during these classes. Nevertheless, it is necessary to weigh all the facets of every particular situation. \n\nTo sum up, the advocated solution is reasonable, since it is backed up by my own experience, for I am a volunteer of the Medicare organisation, who understands that it is essential to encourage older people to use new technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nGood day Senator,My name is Adrian and im a resident of this state. I wrote this letter to let you know,I think you should change the system up. I think the electoral college is a bad idea because it is not good at determining the winner. The electoral college is good but its alot of work to find out who wins the President and Vice President seat. The electoral college is also a big complicated system that can techanical mess up someones chances of winning. The electoral college is basically us voting for electors,not the president. The electoral college is not a good system to use beccause just like the article \"The Indefensible Electoral College\" says \"Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate?\". What do we do then, we can't take back our vote. This is how some presidents win without even knowing we messed up on voting.\n\nIn Addition to my idea about removing the Electoral College, I think its a bad idea because the electoral college is not a good determing the winner. A prime example of why the electoral college is a bad idea is when Al Gore lost the election in 2000 against Bush. It is stated that Al Gore had won the popular vote but lost when it came to electoral college he lost. It is said that over 60 of thoses voters wanted or prefered a direct election instead of the electoral college system. The Article\"In Defense of the electoral college\" states things that good about the Electoral College like \"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candiate receives a majority of the votes cast.\"This is a example of that statement is Nixion in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 plurality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in Electoral College. The Electoral College is still a democratic in many peoples eyes and mines.\n\nThe Electoral College will always give a advantage on the outcome of the winner. The state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors and thaat those electors could always the will of the people. The electoral college is is unfair,outdated, and irrational in the united states. Most say the electoral college is good because its keeps favortizm away but it really just adds it to the election. The direct election is way more simple and easy to find out who wins. I send you this letter to see if you would think about taking it out, but i know you probably won't see this.\n\nFrom Adrian,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona lisa demostration is relly intended to bring a simile to your face wihile .\n\nPeople are trying to do new ssttuf with new tecnology but some of this peoiple dont know that some times they do need to have or use tecnology they want to just do things as there way but some times they do need to use tecnology and do what they have to do so they can fix the old stuff and new stuff the monalisa just a little simle but they can fixii it withtecnology and try to do some thinh new they have to look for more tecnology and expressions to be sure that they are doing whta they have to do in expression of the wghat they have and maind.\n\nThe doctor said that they dcan fix the or modify the expression or lesson from what they are talking about .\n\nThey are trying to said that they want to invent a computer that knows when are you happy and when you are sad or angry and other caind of emottions.\n\neach they there are trying to have new tecnology and new stuff they have to see whats goin on in that they have to do what they have to do.\n\nOther peopl;e dont like to see other people expressions because they get enoy from seeintg them.\n\nThey are seeing video games and trying to see what can they do to modofy them .\n\nSeeing you in the miriror each they its like you are trying to see something diffirent that you can see becuse alreddy has the face that you have to see even tho they are not in the same expression ecah day becuse some times your actitud your face your simile arte the ones that can change with aout let you know each day you will hav a expressions that will change your face", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although some people argue that the today's youth doesn't pay attention to the valuable advice of their parents. Nowadays, education system plays a prominent role in making and teaching students the importance of independence. I will illustrate my reasons for disagreement for this statement in the following paragraphs.\n\nFirstly, in today's globalized world,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To Local Newspaper Computers heavy impact todays society People depend lot people disagree I think computers positive affect people Computers entertaining They help find long lost friend keep contact Plus helpful homework Please proceed reading see I chose resons Firstly computers entertain The thousands games chose Dress educational Which good young children age five six As states writing prompt teaches handeye coordination In addition first reason computers help long lost friends There websites help find people For example yahoo These websites help keep touch family If theres phone theres always computer Lastly computers helpful homework Sometimes nt even need internet theres calculator built right But nationwide website thats used children improve edhelpercom This website work sheets helps level child In conclusion I think computers good impact people They entertaining keeps contact helpful homework Please take reasons consideration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear kids age society way focused latest technology One piece equptment affecting peoples lives computer We need get rid habbit learn different activites People spending way much time computers less time enjoying nature excersing need interact friends family take time agree I confront computer taking lives Is time flying Are overwhelmed life passes quickley Well answered yes stop computer madness head outside Your enjoying nature Nature beautiful gorgeous scene love oceans pink sand Who would want miss complain rarely enjoy life take outside house Just think wo nt able see stupendous seasons changing withought going outdoors I want experience wide variety nature grows old daughter Well I add little going get much nature get eyes unglued comuter screen Yes comuters brilliant lots want missing new trees discovered every day guest population overweight due technology brought world The greatest impart computer highpaid physicians try teach parents young age go play sports excersing time stay home play videogames Now tell would rather get good healthy excersise energy need would like slowy add gain issues internet I remember I grabred nike hightops pink ipod I started jogging slow listening favorite song Naturally I felt amazing complete going day healthy eating bannana apples cheese eery morning healthy CAPS since technology part life two daughters visited grand parents years This needs step press Yes comuters onlinetalking devices never going spend quality time family bad habbit On brother I busy computer missed birthday party family addicted device need spend time loved ones therapy computers depresion plains due high amount device less time bonding members Who would rather play old gray computer fun talking day game life family never What choose Do agree computers take lives If try prove wrong remember nature big many people missing advantage technology taking peoples excersing habbits many families less bonding keep population good hands", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology being able to read emotional expressions of students is not valuble. It invades student's privacy. It's a likely chance that a student emotions will not change because of what the computer detects, and also some people may not like the idea of being so closely connected with a computer/ technology.\n\nThere are many times where you have probably witnessed a friend or person's face looking too calm or sad to you, and when you asked them what's wrong they tell you nothing. Eventhough when they tell you this you know something might be wrong. After a while you start to just let it go,respect their privacy and wait til they're ready to really tell you whats's on their mind. This applies the same way from a computer to a student. Some students may not want the computer to be invading their privacy and knowing what's wrong with them, they would rather keep it to themselves.\n\nIt's also a likely chance that a students emotions will not change just because the computer can detect it. What if the the students feelings are more deeper than how they feel about the work? a computer won't be able to change that. In the article the author informed that the FACS (Facial Coding System). will be able to detect on if a person liked an ad or not. Though that might be a swell idea most people don't always like being stopped by ads when they're trying to watch or read something they really want to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author doesn't support his idea very well of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He talks about how most people being sent to venus dont return, in addition the atmosphere is very dangers for humans, and they dont even have the technolgy yet to make it a safe trip. All of those topics will be discussed in the following paragraphs explaining why the evidence the author has does not support his claim.\n\nThe first reason why the authors evidence to his claim wasnt very good was because he started off his article talking about the spacecraft that haven't returned from their mission to Venus. For example in paragraph 2 the author says \" humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no space craft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author is telling us straight forward that it is NOT safe to travel to this planet and you may not even come back and then he goes on to saying \" Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\". This only tells the readers that scientist aren't even comfortable with sending people anymore because of the failed attempts they have had in the past. Lastly the author says \" Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\". This sentence backs everything up making it clear that humans arent returning because we arent equipped or ready to deal with these \"factors\". Which brings us right into our next point.\n\nThe next thing that made the author lack while trying to support his claim is when he talked about all the dangers thier were for humans. In paragraph 3 the author states \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\". The conditions on this planet are almost impossible for people to live in which is probably why most dont make it back. The author then says \" Also noteable, Venus has the hottest surface temprature of any planet in our solar system\". This is a big point because it seems like small information that didnt need to be added but, really it's big because they wouldn't have put it in there if it wasn't something that raised some concern. Lastly the author says \" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes toprobes seeking to land on its surface.\". This goes right into our last paragraph because if they dont have the right technology to help and keep the people traveling to this planet safe then they won't make it back.\n\nThe last thing that leads me to believe that the authors evidence wasn't very good was the way he talked about the lack of technology. For example in the in the fifth paragraph, the author says \" but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\". He also states \" More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get close and personal despite the risks.\". These two sentences could not be more blunt on the fact that we just do no have the technology at the moment to get everything we want, and to keep everything safe.\n\nThroughout the article the authors claim was not supported very well by evidence. there were to mant things that came into play cause it to not be safe nor get what they needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well one day I saw commercial awesome xbox The commercial said would weeks weeks I thought well thats going take forever I waited waited waited I glamced clock It said I said minutes So I started play game I forgot xbox My dad said going shopping get xbox Im like wow fly I guess dont think patient time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How werid would it be to go to another planet just like Earth? Well in the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author goes into great detail of how NASA is trying to make that thought possible. Even though this idea of visting another planet is somewhat dangerous, the author seems to believe that we as a human species should expand our minds to more imagination and innovation.\n\nIn the article, the author descibes Venus as Earth's twin. Scientists have said that Venus once could have had many oceans,mountains,and even life just like we do here on Earth. Even though Venus is right next door to us, we still have not been able to send any man to Venus. The article supports this by stating that Venus has very dangerous temperatures of 800 degress Fahrenheit, an atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on Earth. The author states in the article, \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study,despite its proximity to us.\"\n\nThe author then goes into detail of how we can avoid all of those obsticles by explaning a few ideas that NASA has came up with when it comes to visting our twin planet. The article states that NASA is working on a ship to hover over the surface of Venus. Of course, the ship would hover far away from all of the dangerous temperatures and atmospheric pressures near it's surface. The author also states that NASA is thinking back to a form of old technology called mechanocal computers that would be very hard to melt and destroy by Venus's harsh temperatures.\n\nThrough all of the doubts and crazy things humans would have to encounter, the author still holds hope that someday we as a human species can expand our limitations. At the very end of the article the author states,\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

Subsets and Splits

No community queries yet

The top public SQL queries from the community will appear here once available.