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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is incredible because we can actually just get out of the house and hang out with friends and family. Also people could get some exersice at that by walking to work or school or wherever you are going to and the percentage of people with obesity would most likey drop down excessivley by just doing this.\n\nYou also might actually have a happier life by giving up automoblies for example what this person Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two said \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" This evoultion of limiting car usage is very beneficial especially for the environment by decreasing carbon and greenhouse gas emissions from cars and all of the bad gasses going into the air by all these automobiles and just maybe get or climate and everything back together they way it should be.\n\nIn this new approach, to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation. Stores are placed just a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highways where you need a car to get there.\n\nBy doing things like this especially in America would be big in safety because you would have to worry as much about your children being hit or ran over by cars or being kidnapped to because you can only walk or ride bikes, taxis and public buses.\n\nTherefore you can also take time and actually look where you are and where you live and take it all in instead of panicing and being all tense and stressed on having to rush or go somewhere and just being in a calm, peaceful and quiet location. Like in what thisperson Carlos Arturo Plaza, a businessman said \" It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" as he rode on a two-seat bicycle with his wife.\n\nBy doing this it would also decrease the amount of congestion in different cities across the globe.\n\nIn my opinion, I'd love to try in do this because we would  not be on our phones going strait to our cars  instead we would be walking or riding our bike or get on a public bus and actually see and meet people instead of just waiting in the traffic and waiting to just go and do whatever we want to and the Internet is a big deal in this to. A sociology professor at Drexel University and director of its Mobilities Research and Policy Center cities various factors like: the Internet makes telecommutung possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to goo and meet up with friends. The rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has faciliated more flexible commuting arrangments, including the evolution of shared van services from getting to work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i think technology that reads facial expressions of emotions of students in the classroom is not valuble. if a student is happy, sad, angry, etc they know what to do to make it change.\n\ntechnology isnt always right anyways so if the computer reads that someone is happy and they are actually sad then nobody could help that student out. also if a student is confused they have to figure it out on there own or ask someone for help they know how to do that on there own and if there board then they can figure out what to do to get movin and to be happy instead of being board the hole time.\n\nlets say we want to have computers to show the emotions that might be a bad thing like if your opening a present you got and you dont like it that could hurt that persons feeligs and make them sad. so no i do not think its a good thing to have computers tell our emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That is no doubt that cities are growing and developing fast. There are many people who think it would be better to review the existing constructions rather than building new ones. I strongly believe that money would be better invested on renovating the current buildings and in this essay, I will present some arguments that support my view.\n\nOne problem of big cities is the lack of concern about preserving its culture and historical buildings. To cover the high demand of people coming from the countryside, many big mayors might be focusing only on supporting the real estate market and its interests, instead of preserving their cities' old constructions. This could be happening because they might wonder that many people believe large centres can offer more opportunities and a better quality of life. As a result, many important public buildings such as national libraries and museums are becoming deprecated and with poor conditions to attend the public. \n\nAnother issue that has grown in several large cities is the loss of its visual identities. Since some governments seem not to worry about keeping their culture alive, many public buildings are being constructed without following any pattern or criteria. This becomes a problem because the traditional buildings may have started to appear old and outdated when next to the new ones. To solve this, the city authorities should establish some rules for keeping some standards for new constructions and invest part of the cultural budget in restoring and beautifying their long-living buildings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion i dont feel like the driverless cars would be much of a smart idea because i feel like it would cause a lot of accidents. For example its a lot of traffic laws out there like traffic signs ,stop lights , a certain speed and more. Now how would the car know or be able to detect those laws or signs. The creators never explained that. I think it would be much safer for drivers, passengers and pedestrains if they had a human contoling the steering wheel and controls of the car. What if the technology of the driverless cars fail and someone is injured orr got in an accident who is in fault the driver or the manufacturer. Stuff like that is why i think it shouldnt be accepted by the law. Even though the cars can do stuff them selves like steer , accelerate, and brake they still need human assistance like navigating through work zones and around accidents whats the point of the car being called and consistered a driverless car when it still needs the person behind the wheel to stay alert. So that being said means the car isnt 100% safe if it cant detect or handle situations like accidents and work zones it still has to notify the driver by making the seats vibrate or flashing lights on the windsheild. They claimed automakers are still continuing their work on making the driverless cars more reliable and safe so they can be accepted by the law so i would maybe agree more with it but all they said was Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time and Mercedes Benz , Audi and Nissian plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. Im still more in disagreement because they still havent said how they will make a change in being able to get through accidents and work zones themselves without the drivers assistance. Once they explain and prove that the car would be considered more of a driverless car. Other than that the stuff about the car having special touch sensors making sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel that is a good idea but the car still isnt doing exactly what its suppose to do but with these improvments coming along in 2016 or 2020 it might be more of a smart idea to buy one of these driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are what the future is coming to. They are an improvement on the already modern cars in today's society. They include multiple features that can help the driver in many ways. How much is too much help? Is there a stopping point to which car manufacturers will believe that a car has too many brand new features for the driver. Driverless cars should not be put into development. There should not be driverless cars. There should not be driverless cars because they can be very dangerous, they are not completely driverless, and there are laws that prevent these types of cars to be made.\n\nDriverless cars should not be made because they may be very dangerous. With all of the technology being put into a driverless car, there may be a chance that the car may have some sort of malfunction. The technology or sensors in the car could possibly mislead the car. This can cause the lives of the people in the car to be put in danger and\n\nit is too much of a risk. The technology in driverless cars makes them too dangerous to drive on the road.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars should not be made is because they are not completely driverless. Saying that an advanced car is driverless is false advertising. The car still requires human help. \"In fact none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills...\". No car can be completely driverless. There are most things that humans are able to do that computers cannot. The car is not capable of doing all the things it needs to do in order to be completely driverless. Cars that are driverless should not be manufactured because they will not be completely driverless.\n\nLastly, driverless cars should not be made because there are laws in some states that prevent the cars from ever being tested. These laws help keep this craze for driverless cars under control. \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" These laws are here to show that there is danger in these driverless cars. They can be harmful to everyone and the law just wants to make sure that everyone will be safe. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know the safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" The laws are not there to limit any kind of technological development of society. The lawmakers just believe that should not be a dramatic amount of help in a car. Driverless cars have laws that prevent their manufacturing.\n\nDriverless cars are in our future, but they should not be made. They should not be made because they are not safe, a human driver is needed for them, and there are multiple laws in many states that ban them. Yes, cars should be developed over time, but there needs to be a limit to it. Too many features in a driverless car could make the driver believe that they would not at all need to help the car. This can cause the human in the car to become distracted and the car may crash. No car will ever be driverless. This is just a sales technique to possibly make more money off of a car that does not really do what the names says.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pollution free environment is important for our life's health and even enjoyement.\nEveryone whether an individual or large entitiy has an impact on the environment; regardless whether it was good or bad. Hence, I believe it is the responsibility of individulas as well as governments and large companies.\nIndividuals can do a lot to improve the environemt around them starting with taking some actions to make a difference. For example, every memeber in the sociaty can support recycling efforts by sorting their garbages into different categoreis, instead of wasting the efforts of recycling companies to do so. Another exmaple would be to stop using plastic products and replace them with more environemt friendly products like pepar products.\nMoreover, teaching and spreading awarness about the importance of keeping our environemt clean are another way to make a difference. For instance, we can use social media to spread awarness and start campaigns about enviorment and pollution. Furthermore, we can teach some classes in schools and universities about this subject. As a result, this will help the upcoming generations to understand the problem and have them continue the efforts of improvement.\nWhile individuals efforts are essential, they must be supported by governments and large companies in order to complete the circle. A main example here would be establishing regulations and laws that would minimze the damage to the environment and maintain pollution at low levels, which is the role of the governments around the world. As for large companies, they can support by adopting the best practicies and take the proper actions to reduce pollution and improve the environment. As an example, they can start using clean and renewable energies to power their facilities and plants. In addition, those companies can develop technologies that contributes toward keeping the environment safe, and prompet the use of clean energy and vehicales.\nTo sum up, the responsibility to improve the environemt must be divided between all three parties individuals, governments, and large companies. Each has his role to enhnace the environemnt and reduce the pollution. They complete each other and they should work together toward a better future for our world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "as the author said \" studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents\". its also called the \" evening star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the noght sky, and its also the esecound planet from ourr sun, its simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point ofpoint of Earth, it has proved a very challnenging place to examine more closely.\n\nAnd its also called the Earth's twin, becues the closest plant to shape like earth in tearms of density and size, and its the closeset plant to earth, somtimes its vence that closest to earth and somtimes its Mars, humans tried sending space crafts to land on venus, but none of them manged to servive the landing for more then few hours and that explains why no speaceship manged to go there yet for more then three decades. and thats why human need to study it more more.\n\none of the reasons it have een chalnging to use to reach mars becues it has an atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide becues the cllouds of corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. and its also very hot there the temreture reaches \"800f' and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet. these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encouunter on earth; such as enviroment would crush even a submarine accustomes to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. and it has the hottest surffece if any plant, and also a while ago Venus had ocians just like earth and it could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\n\nand thats why we need too study venus more becues if anything happend to earth we might have a secound place to live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers can know the exact emotion each student in their class is feeling. By using the FACS, a teacher's understanding of the class can be significantly better. No student will be able to hide misunderstanding of any content being produced. It will also be harder for them to hide any trouble they may be thinking of starting. The Facial Action Encoding System would be a valuable asset to teachers in the classroom to help them teach better, help students with personal issues, and make students happier.\n\nIf a teacher is able to know when a student is having trouble with a lesson, that teacher can tend to that individual student's need. In paragraph 6 of the article, Prof. Thomas Huang states “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.” This makes teaching more effective because it ensures that a student learns everything and does not skip anything important because of being too afraid to ask. This makes students learning experiences more individually tailored. Success rates in schools will go up because each student will have a better understanding of each subject.\n\nGiving teachers use of the FACS can also help studenets with personal issues. If a teacher notices a change in the emotions of a particular student, they might find out they are having issues at home. in paragraph 7 it says \"It’s all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" A teacher might not notice anything is wrong with someone if they are hiding their emotions, but one with the FACS can tell if there is something wrong. They can get that student help and because of that the student can learn better.\n\nHaving the FACS in the classroom may also indirectly cause the students to be overall more happy. In paragraph 7 of the article, it says \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" If students know that the teacher is always reading their emotions, they will frequently try to show a face that is genuinely happy. This in turn will cause them to be more happy because that is what they are trying to project. Being happy will make the students more cooperative and effective in the classroom.\n\nHaving the FACS in the classroom would make students better learners because teachers would teach better, teachers would help students with personal issues, and the students would be more happy. Performance rates at school would be at an all time high with access to the FACS. Students would pay attention more and be on their best behavior. Knowing emotions in the classroom would ensure optimal effort being is being put forth. Would'nt you want to graduate knowing that you did the best you could do?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Disgusting pollution in the air! Terrible, but also deadly for our atmosphere, animals, and of course ourselves. As seen in paragraph 17, car emmisions arn't only destroying our enviroment, but are also polluting our air to the point where Paris was covered for days in complete smog. That is why biking, walking, running, conservative driving, etc are very needed in these days where everyone belives gas powered vehicles are our way of life. While people drive in cars constantly it creates more carbon emmisions destroying our air and environment, but on the other hand more biking causes less traffic build up, healthier, and more businesses open up in walking distance because of the magnitude of participants walking/biking.\n\nTo begin with, driving in cars isnt only extremely dangerous, it pollutes the air we all breathe! It makes our lungs become more weak and suseptible to disease and sickness. People may argue that giving up our most widely used transportation vehicle in the U.S. and very profitable vehicle industries, is too much. But I argue, that giving up something that will later in time completely destroy us and our earth is worth it. Pollution is a very serious problem that most people can't seeem to wrap their head around. It's a deadly chemicals and waste being put into our air we breathe every second, yet we chose our vehicles over our precious air?!\n\nNext, understanding what more walking and less vehicular trnsportation can do for the world has amazing effects. Not only is it a healthy alternative to walk instead of driving because of our obseity issue here in America, but it cuts out pollution which hurts us and animals. More walking will create less traffic and more businesses and restaruants in walking distance, causing a better community and economy.\n\nIn conclusion, more walking and biking is a much better alternative to driving cars constantly. Communities come together more, less traffic, more safety, no road rage, etc. These are all things that could come from walking instead of driving in vehicles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think authors mood honored proud loving appreciated I think author mood part honored paragraph really expressed feels parents loving makes others feel loved welcomed I also think proud explains paragraph much appreciates family parents open arms help thoughs need great parents doesnt even words really express commitment kindness parents everyone Through story author alway s mentions How loving partent see passage picked trait words expression used story express fact parents loving family Those I think moods reason", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper opinion effects computers people I think computer good people great good many reasons I three reason good reasons search new places meet new people people nothing teenagers cant without computer My first reason searching new places meeting new people People computers go google search place want go meet new people way dont computer much busy new friends My second reason people nothing If people nothing always invite friends computer watch movies without going movie theater dont pay All could download And also thre many websites movies My last reasong teenagers cants without computer teenagers teenagers must technology If yu take computer away went enything else That even worse tell go outside wont Maybe let use computer use outside laptop This opion effects computers people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram depicts the different stages of the body habitus and the relative changes in foot structures that under went in the process of evolution of the modern horse, since 40 million years ago.\nThe modern horse had gone through 3 main stages in order to become it's current version, each stage shows distinctive changes in the body as a whole.Having said that, the earliest species that existed is namely Echippus, then it was mesohippus and finally it was Merychippus.\nThe Echippus is the identified first ancestor of the modern horse that existed 40 million years ago. They appeared relatively similar to the size of a sheep and their foot apearently had four toes.However, Mesohippus was the second in line of the modern horses and was relatively bigger and taller, the foot structure got limited to three toes and the middle toe being the widerest.15 million years after the existance of mesohippus, merychippus emerged, they were similar in both the size and shape of our modern horses, but as far as the foot is concerned the middle toe became more prominent and the rest two toes started to shrink. Finally, the modern horses look twice the size of Echippus and their feet looked proper coronet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe censorship rarely acceptable certainly libraries school otherwise Censorship prevents knowledge obtained spreading ignorance intollerance Libraries schools meant places encourage free thinking discovery learning Censorship stops things occuring If people prevented reading want many read period Not children teens drawn reading If book reluctent reader shows interest would someone want take away Because finds offensive Because agree views expressed Neither legitimate reasons censorship Most justifications censorship would stand test time A great number books challenged past today considered classics andor important works To The To censored racist language language helps set time period novels Also To lawyer defends wrongly accused black man The main antagonist ignorant rascist man The book racist villian story Censorship reasons different allowing young child watch something violent Preventing child seeing rated movie reading letter separate issue censorship I define censorship preventing someone seeing reading something due personal views rather good sheltered person Keep children sheltered young one must grow older mature essential allowed mature reading well If someone lives life reading books others choose seeing movies shows chosen person Living sheltered life catch people reach adulthood They views largely ignorant world around said CAPS destroys good book kills reason happens people grown among censorship little reason Censorship mold people better People grow free read watch generally wish turn differently These people views values formed among factors influential books read throughout life Many people better understand others promoting tolerance Censorship takes away wonderful qualities people Anyone capable possessing Censorship seen norm Libraries schools allow children teenagers learn growThat purpose institution education Therfore censorship even considered Students freedom read desire policy schools libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars shouldn't be happening because it will cause people to be way too dependent on the cars when traveling and the developers shouldn't being developing these type of cars. Driverless cars will give the drivers way more distractions then usual because they will be more reliant on the cars themselves. These types of cars will be very costly because they will need new roads. The driverless cars will also be more time consuming because they won't be able to travel through traffic alone and require the driver to step in. Driverless car shouldn't be developed because they will ,make the driver more reliant on them, be very costly, and will be very time consuming.\n\nThe development of driverless cars will give the driver more distraction because although the driver still have be aware the driver will become very reliant on the car fro arriving at his or hers destination safely. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply the breaks on individaul wheels and reduce powere from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This information proves that the driver will be more reliant on the cars because although the driverless car will be safer it will also make the driver worry-free. Another reason towards why the driverless cars should be developed is because they're very costly.\n\nDriverless cars will be very costly because will require more equipment to perform such task and will require new roads aswell which will be the most expensive of they bunch. In the article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states, \"These smart- road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expenisve to be practical.\" This information helps prove that the cost for maintaining these driverless cars the work well on a smart-road will be very expensive even without the smart-roads the cost will be very high because they will still require an extensive amount of sensors to operate on its own. Driverless cars will also be very time consuming.\n\nDriverless cars will be very time consuming because they can't operate aswell as a human driver would be able to an the road. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states that, \"Manufactures are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\" This infromation shows that the driver will still have to watch the road but, the driver wont be as alert because they wont have anything to do and will begin to feel drousy just as if they were watching a boreing program about roads on television.\n\nIn conclusion, the development of driverless cars shouldn't be happening because they make driving more complicated. These types of cars will make the human driver more reliant on the cars than themselves because they won't need to be as alert as if they were the one driving. These types of cars will also be very costly because of all they equipment needed to make them driverless and possibly even new roads aswell will be very expensive. Lastly, driverless cars will be very time consuming in manufactering the vehicle and in traffic jams aswell. Driverless cars shouldn't be developed because they will make the driver more reliant on them, be very costly, and will be very time consuming. Driver themselves should be improving and not the vehicel so they can make the roads safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people disagreee on the idea of taking away cars or creating fuel effeicent cars. One idea that can possibly top all those is a limited car usage society. Natiosn worldwide have vbegun starting a new trend/ orsmartplanning which limits cars usage due to the ecomony ,pollution it creates.\n\nTo begin with, limiting cars is becoming a new fad, people in  VAUBAN,Germany(Dorchland) say  it saves alot of time and money. Now you can just have your house in the suburbs and just stick to foot traffic youdont have to worry about car insurance or garages or keeping drive ways clean. No more dirty streets clean and motor sound free walking. With this new smart planning going on its harder for people to take there kids around and get to work. What goes along with this effect it saves people more money.\n\nLastly, Limiting usage of cars is going to help better the enviorment. Recently paris was under an enforced ban due to to a cloud of smog pollution. The use of cars releases toxi and bad gases into the atomosphere destroying are enviorment and causing effects on the polar ice caps. The limit use of cars cuts traffic down and time. another effect use we could use is a car free day were we could take buses , bicycles , and even skateboards. one major thing we should replace with our cars is public transports.\n\nInconclusion\n\nLimiting cars usage is helpful and becoming more popular globally it can help the economy and also help slow down pollution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Despite pricey investments sixty thousand dollars needed put building project become reality many obstacles builders empire state building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The greatest obstacle faced safety people dirigibles dangleing nearly feet ground possibility explosion pedestrians nt seem like smartest idea Another problem faced stress dirigibleheld single cablewould put buildings frame With wind blowing dirigible around load pressure would sent way base building feet In order work builders would strengthen steel frame building Maybe difficult obstacle faced nature strong wind streams building would caused dirigible swing around docked well running risk blown course another building And ever wanted idea work first place checked laws first aircrafts allowed fly low urban areas Builders landing dock empire state building faced many obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College consists of more cons than pros. The systems that the unprogrammed engineers work on are complicated vast perspectives. When a president gets elected the most voters and does not recieve presidency, wouldn't that confuse you. Popular voting is an effective way to give a candidate presidency simply because the people want that candidate to be the one responsible for the United States. The Electoral College needs to change the way it picks its president. Otherwise, the U.S. would be vulnerable to a president that most people completely denied for the other candidate.\n\nThe thing with popular voting is that people can get the president they want. When the elections are based on which candidate has the most popular votes, there are no crazy tricks or a hidden trump card. All you have is a candidate that deserves to be the president of the United States. A good example is Al Gore and his presidency crisis. Most voters looked up to him as president. It was only until the quirks of the electoral college stole his opportunity of becoming president thanks to the system of the electoral college we have today. The situation that makes this crisis even worse is how the voters for the actual electors themselves cannot control whether they win the election or lose. This means that if we keep the routine of the electoral college we have now, there are many opportunities for an unwanted elector. Therefore, leading to an unwanted president.\n\nEver since 2000, many people have been suffering from economics and industry. This is the simple result of a bad electoral college system. The people of course should have most of the perks in picking a president. If the president is bad at his job in making the U.S. habitable, then the electors are to blame for making a huge mistake. Many doors are opened to sudden changes and confusing decisions. John F. Kennedy could've lost his position since all of the votes didn't necessarily go to him. There's a valid reason why people vote for a candidate. To pick the president they know suits them best.\n\nI will admit to this though. Popular voting is not the accurate way to go through with. I mean there are situations where people just pick a president because he looks proffesional. Others are simply racist and go for the white candidate or even vise-versa. Popular voting is not perfect in the sense of the psychological opinions of the voters themselves. Besides, all of the people living in american soil are different minded. There is literally no way to immediately recognize who the voter is and why his reasons for voting are wrong. There is also nothing we can do since people are allowed to vote for whatever reasons they want.\n\nDue to all of the information given to me about Al Gore and unwanted electors, it is the best solution to change the system to popular voting. Both sides of the arguments have strong reasons to either keep their system or change the way the electoral college is run. Meanwhile, lets be honest. There have been more political downfalls with the system we have now that can be fixed with popular voting. Even though there are people that vote for selfish and unreliable reasons, there is still a balance of the people who want this president and the people who don't. The U.S. is consisted of minds that think completely different in the sense of human nature. We don't live in a utopia where everyone agrees with eachother. Now, being able to let the U.S. decide who they want their president to be, it sounds like a pretty fair way to elect a new president, don't you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "attempting let dirigibles dock Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles For one thing nt whole lot landing room New York City ultimately made things tougher Also forced put work building strengthening modifying steel frame accommodate new situation A lot money spent new renevations sixty thousand dollars This done mainly reduce stress building s frame But overall managed get done make way tricky obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Inorder to convince people that the \"Unamasking Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform I would give evidence to prove that I'm right. In the artical they explain how the face is just a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\"\n\nI also give evidence by telling him about the pictures in the artical that they took in 2001. The picture just shows us that the \"face\" is just a cluster of rocks in Mars that happen to look and resemble a human, or pharaoh.\n\nAnother reason the \"face\" isn't real is because there weren't any civilizations to build or make any of these creations. The planet Mars had no life forms on it on the first place to begin with, and there is little to no evidence to ever prove there was any life on Mars in the first place.In other words the \"Unmasking Face on Mars\"\n\nis just one thing.... a mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted a much more cooler and not so boring teacher? The\n\nuse of the facial action coding system to read the emotional expressions of\n\nstudents is very valuable because it can helo teachers understand how a\n\nstudent is feeling and possibly what causes them to feel the way they are. Having\n\nFACS can also help because if a student comes to class because of a bad day\n\nthe teacher can try to comfort them. If a student is bored this system will also help because maybe then a teacher will switch the topic and/or try to make it more fun for us students.\n\nMy second reason why FACS is also a valuable system is it may also help, or save marriages and relationships because if one of someone's partners isn't being expressive they can easily find out how he/she feel and find a way to solve it. The system might alos help bring more family and friends together as one and help each member communicate more better instead of arguing, being distant, or keeping quiet about something or someone.\n\nMy third reaon why FACS is a helpful system is human society won't have to walk around in public with a fake smile on their face, or try to be somone they're not. Human society may be more understandable of other people's feelings and think about what's on the inside of a person rather then what is showing on the outside.\n\nIn conclusion the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable system because it's very helpful when it comes to emotions, and it will help others who have trouble expressing themselves, or someone, or something. This system may help people have a better understanding of others, and why they might be acting a certain way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many different ways One example hot sun beating made thirsty Another feature rough road wore cyclist made tired My last example old juice factory picture refreshing cup juice made cyclist feel like giving thought would die dehydration These reasons features setting affect cyclist many different ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days extracurricular activities are becoming more and more popular. Some people think that high school should require students to do unpaid community service. This essay will discuss why unpaid social service should not be mandatory in part of high school programmes.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, not all students are wealthy, some have financial problems which can affect their educational pathway. In order to pay for the tuition fee, many people have to spend their free time on part-time jobs. If they are compelled to do non-paid services for society, they will not have enough time for earning extra money. For example, a large number of students in Thailand are working in the evening after finishing school, they have to help their parents to do some jobs otherwise they will not be able to have further study. Unpaid activities for society would be a huge obstacle for them in order to earn an income for the family. \r\n\r\nAdditionally, studying in high school is definitely caused massive stress on teenagers. Apart from learning various subjects in school, they should have their own free time to do whatever activities they want, so compulsory social activities should not be in part of the high school programmes. For instance, anxiety or stress-related disease in young adults has been significantly increasing, Forcing them to do unwanted activities may cause a negative impact on students’ mental health. Adolescents should have the opportunity to pursue their fascinating hobbies or other interesting activities such as playing guitar or spending a quality time with family.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, non-paying social service should not be mandatory in part of the high school curriculum. Seeing that It will cause some students to struggle in earning extra budget and also be a stress trigger for many individuals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying our own solar system is one of the important things humans need to keep an eye on it. Despite the dangers its very important to study each planet in our solar system to keep the humans alive. Almost all the planets in our solar system have been studied carfully except Venus, so why it's very important to study this planet and why it's not studied till now ?.\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun, While venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. Studying venus will help the humans understand the sun a bit more since Venus is one of the closest planets to the Sun, and the Sun is one of the planets humans cant study because of its distance and temperature, so studying a planet next to it might give the humans a chance and more information about the Sun, and its activities.\n\nHumans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nIf our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Well the answer for this question is that Astronomers are fascinated by Venus bcause it may well once have been the Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particulary compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions, and this proves that the humans are very close to be able to visit Venus.\n\nIn conclusion Venus will need to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or what we call them as challenges. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation, and thats why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a world of inovation, new technologies are created everyday. Cars, now considered an eveyday sorce of transportation, are constantly reimagined. Now, researchers from Google are developing driverless cars; Imagine a world where driving is completely automatic. Theoretically, these advancements would lead to less accidents and improve public saftey; but would not relieve the aspect of technological error. Driverless cars would lead to less personal road trips, and even the experience of learning how to drive would be stripped from young adults. Driverless cars would lead to a monotonous experience, which is normally an exciting part of daily life.\n\nDriving requires focus and responsibility. Most states begin drivers training around ages fifteen or sixteen; considered by each state a mature age to be handed such responsibility. During this time, one learns the rules of the road, technique, and saftey procedures. If driverless cars were created then the experience of learning a new skill and handling a responsibility would be terminated. This would leave humans completely dependent on technology.\n\nTo many, time spent in a vehicle holds some of the fondest memories. Road trips, vacation, or even driving to school with family or friends are times when people are able to spend quality time together. With automatic cars, much of the journey would become impersonal.\n\nWhen focused on the road, a driver and passangers are aware of their surroundings, which may become topics of discussion or even freindly jests. When driving manually, a wrong turn could turn into a new and positive adventure; a mistake that wouldn't be made by an automatic car. Although, the new tchnology would allow safe and efficient travel long distances it would take away the joy of spending time with peers.\n\nWith driverless cars, human error on the road would cease to exist, increasing public saftey. However what would happen if an error of technology were to occur? Who would be held responsible? If accidents were caused by technological error, new laws based on the new technology would have to be created to protect the rights of people that may be injured. Creation of this new legislature would take a copious amount of time to perfect, during which countless lives could be impacted.\n\nA world with driverless cars would mean an end to new responibilities and learning experiences for teens. The milestone of obtaining a license would no longer be neccessary. Road trips and vacations would soon become impersonal and less of an adventure for families and friends. An increase in saftey may be on the brink of discovery, but with this comes some level of risk. With this risk it is unknown who would be held responsible. In a world of technological advancements, automatic cars would soon create a monotonous life, in a usually individual and unique society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea of that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by the author explains the pros of going in Venus and how NASA made it easier for everyone. The author talks more about how going to Venus can also be a good thing for the scientists.\n\nGoing to the venus can be a bad thing, but the scientists will have more opportunities to learn about the similerities and the differences between the Earth and Venus. The author provides information about the distence from earth to venus. The author provided, \"Often referred to as Earth’s “twin,” Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\" (paragraph 2). This evidence explains that it can also be very easy for the scientists to travel there than to travel to the other planets because it is very close to Earth and that's why people call it the \"twin\" of earth. The author goes furthermore explaining about the pros of going to Venus. The author talks about how scientists also like to go to the Venus because Venus is more earthy. It is stated, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (paragraph 4). This evidence also proves that the scientists wants to go to Venus and explore it. Venus was covered largely with oceans long ago, and it also supported various forms of life just like earth does. It is the nearest option for scientists for a planetary visits. NASA has also came up with a possible solution for to go to Venus. It is written, \"NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray\" (paragraph 5). Now here is the solution for scientists to go to Venus. It will be a lot easier now and more fun for scientists to visit another planet just like Earth. Also to learn more about it.\n\nVenus could be hard planet to visit, but NASA has provided a solution which could help scientists to visit the similar planet. Not only it is fun to visit, but it can help people learn about why Venus is similar to Earth and why can anyone not go there. Therefore, NASA will be able to send people there and learn all about Venus' similarities and the differences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This new technology I think can be very usefull in the classroom. The reason I think that this technology can be usefull is because when a student is taking a test and they become tired or they are not understanding the question the teacher can pull them to the side and ask them whats going on. The teacher might be able to then help the student out.\n\nIn the article Dr. Huang says \" A classroom computor could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" He also states \" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I think that what Dr. Huang said is great because then the kids will be able to get done with the test without being confused. On the other hand people might say that some of the kids have it easier than others, I dont think that is the case because the teacher would have to click something on the computor to make the test be requestioned. I think that if we had technology like this in schools then we would see big changes in the national test scores.\n\nThis technology can also be used in video games like the article says. The faces that the characters make in the game will be much better and more realistic. By doing this the coast of a game would also go up which would mean that the comapny would make more money. Then people might say that people will not buy the games since they coast so much money, I think that it would be the opposite because poeple want the newer and grearter things. By putting this technology in video games the game will feel more like real people instead of animated figures.\n\nAnother thing that this technology could do is let the newer artist be able to paint better pictures of faces. The painter could paint a face and scan it in the computer and it would say happy. If that is the way the painter wants the face to be he could then sell it or restart if that is not the face he is going for.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a great peace of technology. I hope that this tech\n\nwill be in most schools if not all in the next couple of years. If this gets into the schools it will make the students lifes easier and the teachers lifes easier. Kids won't have to stress out on a test that they don't understand because the teacher might just say that you can go home and study the material and take the test again tomarrow.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of the story starts of by describing Venus for the reader. He talks about its background and then compares it to Earth. As he continue, he makes the statement that, \"it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\". He supports this idea by using facts, comparison, persuasion.\n\nThe first way he supports his idea is by using comparrison. He compares Venus to Earth. He talks about both plantets' similarities in density and size. He then mentions the difference in speed to show contrast. He introduces the past by bringing up old missions that happened while trying to discover things about Venus. He starts to make his point by saying, \" Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\".\n\nAfter making that statement he backs it up with facts in the 3rd section. He desribes the planet's surface and how it is different from Earth by stating its percent of carbon dioxide and its average temperature. He goes on by talking about all the dangers on Venus and how humans aren't used to the harsh conditions.\n\nHe starts the 4th section off with a question trying to get the reader interested. After he makes that question he starts giving details of how astronomers are fascinated by Venus. He brings up the past and compares Venus to Earth again by saying, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\". This sentence helps the remaining part of this section by telling the reader more details of what Venus looks like. He ends this paragraph with another interesting question.\n\nThe author starts telling the reader about the type of ideas NASA had to get on Venus. He then starts to point out key things about the ideas that could possibly make it work. After informing us on the idea and telling us the good things about it he starts to tell us the negative parts about it.\n\nIn the last paragraph he expresses his thoughts on a more opinion-based approach. He gets straight to the point with the first sentence talking about how the challenges presented by Venus has value. He ends the passage with a meaningful sentence stating, \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wish you could just look at someone and be able to tell how they are feeling? At the Beckman Istitute for advanced Science at the University of Illinois, Prof. Thomas Huang and his colleague are created just that. they call it \"Facial Action Coding System\". This system could be put into computers to keep track of your emotions. Maybe even by tracking your emotions, you could be happier.\n\nThe process works by using a 3-D computer of your face; all 44 major muscles. Than is the Facial Action Coding System associates the six basic emotions— happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and saddness—with each movement of the facial muscles.\n\nMost human communication is nonverbal, even through we may not relize it, we always show our emotions. The facial expression for each emotion are unviersal. Using the Facial Action Coding System, it can track humans emotion or even a painting such as the Mona Lisa.\n\nAs humans we are always feeling something, weather its anger, saddness, or happiness. I think it would be of great value to have this technology at school, and put into our computers. Not all kids can learn the same way, which means kids can not be teached in the same way. If the student is working on the computer and they do not understand the lesson. The computer could change the lesson to teach it a differnt way.\n\nAll in all, I think this kind of technology could be very useful, not only in school but for psychologist and other who study the human body. Our emotions say alot about us amd if that is how most of us communicate; we should know more about them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author made many good points into why reseaching Venus is a worth while pursuit. One of the reasons he says is that Venus in some ways is like Earth, in that size and density are the same on both planets.\n\nThough there are many dangers going into the research of Venus, there also are some posibilities. Long ago Venus may have been like Earth, oceans could have been formed suporting sea and other life, and providing water for life forms that may have lived there. Venus has rocks, mountains, valley's, and volcanoes, just like Earth has today.\n\nSince there are many dangers with the studying of Venus scientists at NASA are working on ways to make studying Venus safer and easier. Since the temperature at Venus is usually around 800 degrees, scientists might be using a blimp like vehicle to hover the surface of Venus. Since radiaton on Earth is the same to that on venus' and solar power would be abundant, though life for humans would be hard, conditions could soon be survivable.\n\nThough hovering Venus safely can give a good insite to what the planet holds. It still only gives us limited access to what Venus may have. Pictures and videos are very helpful, but things like rock's, gasses, and anything else Venus has cannot be collected.\n\nTechnology has come a long way in helping study Venus, computers today are faster, more powerful, and flexible. Computers today help is detect dangers, and they tend to know the physical conditions that we can take, sometimes more than we could. Machines today can help us make our materials more resistant to the dangers of Venus, and they also help us by using algorithms to discover more safe ways of studying Venus.\n\nThe studying of Venus could be helpful, not only by conquering the challenges Venus provides us with, but by also learning about the planet in itself. Dangers should not be the thing that holds humans back from research, but it is curiosity that might be the thing that leads us to conquering more challenges that we face by danger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Agreeing to the developments of smart cars has it's advantages but it also has it's disadvantages. Some smart cars can be developed to not have the need for a human to be responsible at anytime. Others disagree with the idea and think this idea should stop. In my opinion I disagree with the development in smart cars.\n\nThe inventors of these smart cars say that they have sensors to know if the human is paying attention but having smarter cars for that reason can be dangerous. Many people have had accidents and many of those accidents have been fatal. All those accidents need is for the person to take his/her eyes off the road for a quick second. At this moment they have cars that can drive themsleves but also need assitance once in a while but anyone can say \"Oh I've got my eyes on the road\" but in reality they are more distracted than a child playing toys. Many people can trust a car at it's job for one second but lose their life the next. Smart car development is not the smart way to go.\n\nIf furtists develop a car that can do its job with no human assistance at all, of course people will start buying but I guarantee more accidents occur. These car companies can't guarantee you that the car may turn off, that the car will stop working out of no where. Anyone can be driving and thinking the car has everything under control they start putting their mind into other things like texting, calling, writing, and even changing in a car because they're late to their destination. You can't always trust technology because there is something that can always make it go wrong. People will be unaware of everything going on around them when their eyes, ears, and mind aren't neccesary on the road. When the time comes on who's fault it was that the accident occured the question will be whose fault was it really the manufacturer orr the drivers? If you would've kept your eyes on the road and tooken responsibilty you'd be able to prevent being in a room where your freedom is to determined all because of one \"smart car.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I went conly youth group church I took friend In maze go group dad went one group group hind us Half way thru guy casing us chain saw smacked glass face stop could find found friends group came wait minutes wich seemed long So didnt get chance get chaced guy chainsaw", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is seemed that most of the artists are being popular for their attraction and riches while it should be seen through their accomplishment, for giving a good figure to the adolescent. I partially agree with this statement which I will explain in this following paragraph.\n\nOn the one hand, in this contemporary world, there are various sophisticated things such as gadget which could affect the immature persons through its widespread information of entertainment. This will reflect unpleasant sample for them, since, some news is usually informing unsuitable matter for their age. Thus, they know that how to be a famous is only by performing their charming and wealth that is truly wrong idea. As an entertainer, many aspects that should be considered properly to perform their talent, for instance, receiving a reward annually for their best acting could motivate younger to effort their future. Besides, they also could be having a right attitude by giving a donation to either reform or charitable institution. \n\nOn the other hand, although they have a great emission, it is better to spend it for the philanthropy instead of private necessity. However, conversely, some artists are likely to show their wealth through their glamour and branded accessories, items and accomodation in some cases. As a result, this will lead to the controversial issues among society and impact to the discrepancy social. The probability is that their figure is on the top which will be easily affecting most people especially to the teenagers. Whereas, they should have a proper mind as well as best public figure to build a great concept for their next steps to reach their dream. This can not be assured that the celebrities could give a good example for them.\n\nBy way of conclusion, it is true that showing a good behaviour is pivotal things for the youthful to be a good individual. From my viewpoint, it is most agreeable to the entertainment company for leading the artists to be more polite and altruistically in front of the public due to the uncontrollable emotional of younger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well i would like to show some glimpse of my practical exposure\r\n\r\nIn the first year in the second ,semester I-_ learned how to procure milk for the plant\r\n\r\nat that time we have visited various dairy farm and collection center\r\n\r\nit was the time we learn about handling of raw milk.\r\n\r\nAt second year we have visited chhattisgarh state largest plant which was Vachan milk processing plant.it was situated some around 40 km far from our college campus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The quality of education, nowadays, has improved due to the invention of the feedback system. While there are people who believe that asking questions and criticising teachers will improve the quality of education, I am of the opinion that this will reduce the value for teachers and respect towards them for several reasons. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it could be argued that the quality of education improves due to constant questioning and criticism. One of the reasons I feel is the increase in students' intellect. While there are many students who avoid asking questions to their teachers, there are others who use this tactic to increase their knowledge of the subject. For example, it is known to many that asking doubts helps students increase their knowledge of the subject, and also helps in clearing the confusion in their minds. Eventually, this will help children get success in their examinations and in their future careers. The other and the most important reason is that teaching-related feedback helps in improving the way the subject is taught. As teachers spend most of their time teaching a particular subject, it is very important for them to know what qualities they lack and how can they improve. Furthermore, feedback every now and then from students can help them learn tactics to teach and improve their teaching ability. Therefore, each and every teacher can eventually improve the quality of education in high school.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I side with those who believe that expressing concerns and dissatisfaction related to studies can lead to several problems. Firstly, I feel that this can lead to improper behaviour among students. Although there are many who say that offering criticism can improve the quality of the subject being taught due to the improved feedback system, I believe that this can lead to misbehaviour and a lack of respect towards the teacher. In addition to it, there are times when such improper behaviour can hamper students' progress due to disbelief towards their teacher, consequently, spoiling them and their future. However, the most important reason is the reduction in motivation to teach. Even though feedback from students can sometimes help teachers improve themselves, harsh criticism can lead to a decrease in motivation to teach. Many teachers take it to the heart if anyone criticizes them. As a result, this can cause breakdown and make them take extreme steps such as leaving their high school job or at worst can cause them mental damage. Therefore, kind words and respectful behaviour should always be taken into consideration by students while talking to their guide. \r\n\r\nMost importantly, respectful language and a proper tone can also help students become good human beings.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, While there are reasons to believe that the criticism and questions can improve the education quality such as an improvement in students' intellect as well as the improvement in teaching quality due to feedback, there are also reasons to avoid doing it such as a decrease in motivation to teach and an increase in improper and disrespectful behaviour of students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Besides the economic wealth of a country, there are other kinds of problems that society faces, such as citizen happiness, security issues at schools and the mental health of a population. That is why there is a discussion about whether people from rich countries would get even more satisfied with money increases in their lives. Some people believe that more money actually would not do any difference in the satisfaction of people from rich countries. Thus, this essay will discuss this statement above, also an opposite defence, and further expose my own opinion. \n\nThe population from rich countries generally has equally enough money to live comfortably. However, they carry other sorts of issues, which they might hope to be solved instead of enriching even more. For instance, in the United States frequently shooters invade schools or other crowded places to murder anyone without reason. In Europe, many people have gotten depressed in the midst of all the wealth. \n\nI also agree that more affluent citizens of the world will not get any more satisfied with more money which they already have a lot. As Maslow’s pyramid logic, rich country citizens already are well affluent with basic needs and now are expecting to have another kind of satisfaction other than economic wealth. It comes to a more complex level of necessity and needs, orbited around psychological and social spheres. \n\nThat way, in conclusion, people from rich countries do not get any more satisfied by more economic wealth because they have already enough, but still have needs, in other scopes though.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist trips sees lot features would discourage She riding high desserts california June kurmaskie We know desserts steaming hot dry especially june She also encounters hills kurmaskie make matters wose travelling hills extreme heatThough cyclist goes many perilous obstacles makes camp lives I could seethe horizon telling I could make par I d fine kurmaskie This shows author s dedication tgive fine", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Driverless cars would creat problems in public transportation, have too many malfunctions, and need different traffic laws. They are trying to come up with new ways to get people to buy the driverless cars by making it fun. Driving is not suppose to be fun, driving is suppose to be safe.\n\nTo begin, driverless cars are being designed to be used as a transporation system. Today all forms of public transportation are driven by people. Those people are entrusted with the safety of their passengers. Having driverless cars as a form of public transportation would be unreliable and use more gas, because more people would need rides. Google cofounder Sergey Brin imagines less people buying cars and using the driverless publc transportation. This would put pedestrians in vehicals without a trusted driver. This is one reason why driverless cars are not beneficial.\n\nNext, the driverless cars have had so many malfunctions. So far, driverless cars can only handle speeds up to 25 miles per hour, which is not even fast enough to driver in neighborhoods. The can steer, brake, and accelerate themselves, but need human skills for navigating. This means that the human driver must be completely alert at all times. Today, there are so many distractions already behind the wheel. These distractions, such as texting, would only increase if the car was doing most of the work. And while the driverless cars have many types of sensors, there is no guaruntee that they would pay attention fast enough to stop an accident.\n\nFinally, driverless cars will need new traffic laws. Presently, traffic laws are written in the assupmtion that human drivers and in control at all times. Having the car in control would cause problems as to who was at fault. If the driverless car to malfunction, would it still be the owners fault? New laws would have to be made to cover liability and insurance for damage. Also new laws about getting licenses. All drivers education classes would have to be different and people that already have licenses would need to learn how to operate the new driverless cars.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are not the answer. There are too many things that could go wrong even if the person in the vehical was 100 percent alert.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of people nowadays have to live far away from their families, due to the increasing opportunities and mobilization in urban areas. It is a far better chance to land a high-income job and build an outstanding career from the most developed cities of the country rather than the countryside. As a result, many have made a choice to travel and work from infrastructural cities and try to support their families from there. This has brought big social consequences that are getting worse by days. It has brought a rise of workaholics, whose schedule is working overtime and trying to make as much money and progress possible. Workhorse culture is becoming drastically more popular in Asian countries, especially Japan where employees who show dedication and commitment to their company have a chance of promotion. Needless to say, the competition is over the top that’s why having free time for your family is a privilege not everyone can have. To look even further into the effects of this phenomenon, it can see that the economic miracle of the 20 th century had a consumptive effect on large families. Japanese, parents, especially the father, who has to work long shifts at the office, may go on for days or even weeks without seeing the face of their children. That being the case this situation results in people not valuing families as much as they used to. It also increases the decrease in population since the birth rate decreases. Loneliness and relationships also become a problem for workaholics that’s why suicides and lonely deaths rise quickly. All of this can and more can become a reality to any nation around the world, if they don’t decide the solutions for modernization. In summary, the collapse of family bond has been underway for quite some time now, and it has already taken its toll on many societies, of which Japan is a prime example. A solution is needed now to restore the once strong and inseparable bond between the bloodline, so that it won’t be too late to have a normal family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter One favorite traditions visit house They live eighty forested meadowed acres outside quaint old town Their small green house overlooks brown fields blue pond tall trees forming backdrop We arrive midmorning We either find house encounter tromping woods meet us shovels chainsaws trailbuilding implements hands After customary hello often wander around yard exclaiming new fruit trees hearing stories latest tenants birdhouses During hottest part head shade lush woods A short walk bring us trail I love walking among sunstreaked ferns fallen logs treading carefully rickety bridges burbling streams bouncing confidently sturdy new bridges trying avoid dogs galumph water knows flora fauna region get constant stream knowledge hike He also course tell us trees s planted redwood look well s A foot since last fall douglas fir well That big redwood shading much One best parts hike see deadend section trail family helped construct three years ago We always walk end discuss could go stream beside hill would switchbacks could really bike trail like After walk arrive back house sweaty talkative Then s time put swimsuits jump pond They recently built dock jump great improvement wading edge We swim majority racing one end pond splashing innertubes pondweedthrowing battles Finally get tired sit side pond drying warm sun By dinner ready Laura usually makes salmon accompanied plethora delicious side dishes We drag chairs hill pond enjoy leisurely supper From hill see turtles birds pond bugs fields birds swooping air feasting aforementioned bugs After meal haul chairs dishes back house sit porch favorite part dusk sun right angle show bugs swirling air At one point bugs gather together create tornado twisting upwards darkening sky re gone next It s incredible spectacle thousands tiny insects disappering one swoop The best thing days friendship comradery wonderful family The parents knew long us kids born lot talk interested science topics always finds way bring latest article read And great laugh constantly I consistently get hiccups least three times re lounging porch busy Even serious topics dad boys find joke make usually politically incorrect always funny Now nt even get started camping trips winter ski trips autumn cider pressing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Residents in Vauban, Germany dont own a car and thats about of 70%. There would be 57% of people who would sell their car to just move there. People arnt allowed to street park there cars, put them in driveways and garages \"near the French and Swiss borders. People who have and drive cars make the air have pollution. In Paris people were told to abbandon their cars or have to face a $31 fine. There were at least 4,000 people who got fined and 27 people got their car impounded from the reaction of the fine. There was congestion that was down 60 percent in the capital of France. When they had cold nights and warm days it was due to to the warmer layer of air that can trap the car emmisions. It would be easier to think  than a car free.\n\nIn Bogota Columbia they have banned cars for 3 straight years. It would be a good time for the people to take away their stress and lower the air pollution that is being caused by this. Alot of people from different cities came to join the event. Because of this the day without cars made a huge improvement capaign that started in Bogota. Now the parks and sport centers that grew with bad uneven sidewalks have been replaced by new smooth sidewalks. Plus rush hour laws have made resturants and shopping places came up. With all of this happening it has made a change for everyone to enjoy what they didnt have before.\n\nAuthorites from othere contries came from Bogota to take a look at the event. It made a revolutionary change and has been crossing Borders. From pollution in the air that people cant stand to nice weather where people can go outside to enjoy. It has shown there has been a drop in the percentage of people that are 16 to 39 are getting there license. It has shown that people would organize summer jobs of their own or use the public transportationo or organize a car pool with friends. A study has shown that driving by young went down 23 percent in 2001 and 2009. People would be parterning with telecommunications industry to make cities so that pedestrians, bicyles, private cars are connected to a network to save time to conserve resources and to lower emissions and most important to improve safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars will be a very bad idea later on in the future. Many people will get into huge arguments, many accidents will arise, and the price will be very high.\n\nDriveless cars will cause huge arguements later on in the future. People won't know whether its a good idea to have them or not. Many car companies might not want to make driveless cars and can run out of business. I can see huge problems arising over the driveless car.\n\nDriveless cars will be a huge mistake in this world. Many accidents may happen due to tenchology miscummunication. People won't whether to blame the car or the person. I can see many seus happening and even fight breakouts. Driveless cars is a very bad idea.\n\nAnother reason why driveless cars is a bad idea is because of the price. Many driveless cars will not be afordable. Technology and all the items in the driveless car will be very expensive. Only the high class will be able to afford one of those cars. Many driveless cars won't be sold by the companies. The companies will just stay with making driver cars.\n\nDriveless cars is a very bad idea. Many conflicts and fight can affect the society. I see this country getting into huge problems if they allow this to happen later on in the future. Many automotive companies will fall and some will rise, but overall must of them will fall.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face was not created by aliens for many reasons. An example would be how NASA wanted to take a picture, to reasure the American people. If it was created by aliens NASA wouldn't want to be taking pictures of it. Also it wasn't kept a private matter, NASA wanted all to see the face. Anothere example would be how NASA went out of there way to prove there cliam. Mission controllers stated that \"it was not easy to target Cydonia\". \"In fact it was hard work\", NASA stated how they didn't pass over the face very often. The last example would be how NASA took the picture a such high quality for the people. The article states that the team used maximum resolution for the photo. Back when the first Viking photo came out the quality wasn't as advanced as it was in 2001. I think the quality of the photo helped the American peole to understand NASA's cliam. After all was said and done NASA said the photo just shows a butte or mesa which is commonly found in the American West. That's why I think the face wasn't created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author explains how Venus is a a planet that is sometimes called the \"Evening Star.\" Venus is the second planet from our sun but is safe vantage point from earth so the earth doesn't get too hot from the sun and Venus. Others say that Venus is the sun's twin because they are both close to earth and are both warm/hot planets. A thick atmosphere of alomst 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid is in Venus's atmosphere.\n\nVenus has very extreme conditions that humans can't handle if we land on the planet. Plus Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun than Venus is. NASA has one particulalry compelling idea for sending humans to go and study Venus. Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standards forms photography and vidography ineffective.\n\nNASA is working on other approches to studyign Venus such as simplified electronics mode of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Venus is an amazing planet that us humans want to get to know more about. The planet has so many hidden features such as it's super hot ground and crazy atmosphere. But NASA is working on a way for humans to go study the planet and be able to live through the conditons that the planet has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The overwhelming majority of young people are inclined to marry after graduating from university or after becoming prosperous. Young adults do not have an intention in becoming parents, as they want to travel around the world and chasing after desire. I reckon this is an absolutely positive trend.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, a man has children, meaning he is a homesitter; eventually, he gives up his dream and purpose, and die still alive. We all know that raising a child is an irritating job, and a huge amount of money is needed to look after a child. For example, if we observe undergraduates, they usually say, I will think about a child after empowering my financial power. Besides, youngsters' top priority is to pursue their passion now, but not to raise a kid. Hence, the population assumes adults should have a baby only after they get affluent, as raising a kid is not a game.\r\n\r\nSecondly, one of the world's anguishing issues is overpopulation; many animals have become endangered species due to the fact that the growing numbers of humanity and human-beings depleted resources of nature. Many habitats got destroyed to feed 7 billion people. For instance, we cut down forests and destroy the ecosystem to satisfy our needs. Thus, this trend will save our planet. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from the ideas and examples given, young adults have more alternatives to live compared to the old ages, so they think about to start a family after becoming wealthy or do not ever initiate. This phenomenon's virtue is immeasurable, as it will tackle one of the major problems of the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience I say dont none personally like things go quickly I also dont like people things slow", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is certain that society is paying more attention to their domestic's historical sites in recent years. In the following essay, I will outline some of the reasons for these behaviours and provide different aspects that the public can achieve and preserve the importance of local past items.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons for gaining curiosity to visit the local historical buildings. The most obvious of these is that people are being educated to learn more about their community's past background through school programs or government promotions. In my area, for example, there are temples, historical museums, historical exhibitions and free offers for local students who want to check in those places, even adult residents can still get a discount when they buy the entrance ticket. In addition to this, it is easier to help the local community to link up with their homey and to explore more valuable information about the history and development surrounding them. Therefore, in many ,ways the good development of historical culture helps citizens more willing to connect with their country and to fulfil a sense of belonging.\r\n\r\nMoreover, there are also a number of tools which people can reach. The website and social media that governments or local culture centres will always update and provide depth explanations of the historical sites and tours, which is suitable for people who are interested in photographing historical buildings. This is because these local organizations will outline a perfect guide tour or check-in points for local residents to follow, which is time-consuming and easy to reach. As a result, citizens can apply digital media for checking history resources, like following social media posts, videos or activities etc to catch up with related information and meet groups of friends who had the same interests and responsibilities of preserving the importance of local traditional and historical buildings. \r\n\r\nIn summary, it is clear that local historical travelling for residents is a good idea for them to learn more deeply about their culture and their identity. Therefore, citizens can use various tools to increase their knowledge of their country's traditional values and developments.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to explore Venus? So do the scientists and its very hard to get there because of the heat it gives out. Only the machine gets a few hours to see and what it can but so far we can't get any of it.\n\nSo far we know is that Venus and Earth is not that far away from each other and they are close to be twins. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it says, \" Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of destiny and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. (para. 2). It is true Earth and Venus are close together but if the sun explodes, Venus could be our new sun if that happens.\n\nVenus gets it's hotness from the lava thats stored inside. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it says, \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. (para. 3). They have tried everything but so far it's not working.\n\nIts hard to land due to the ground being hot as lava and it can melt the metal and such. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it says, \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. (para. 6). We need to find special metal so we can land safely and grab what we want.\n\nSo far this has been a challenge to many scientists and astronaunts. They may call it a very very impossible challenge that can't be beaten. Hopefully we can get the resources so we can explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A section of individuals believe that teenagers and community would gain when the teenagers spend their leisure time doing community work. I am of the same believe as being engaged would prevent idleness and would equip them with various knowledge and skills. In this essay I will write about how teenagers and the community benefits when teenagers, during their free time, are actively involved in community work.\r\n\r\nActively engaging teenagers during their leisure time prevents idleness. Idleness is not only bad to an individual but it is also bad to the community. An idle teenager for instance would indulge in bad behaviours like using illicit drugs, prostitution, theft, cyber-crime, alcoholism among others. This would result to a community with people who are dangerous to themselves as well as to other society members. \r\n\r\nMoreover, teenagers acquire knowledge and skills when they volunteer during their leisure time. It is during the community work that teenagers will learn the importance of keeping the environment clean. Some skills like planting of trees will be learnt during the community activities. Ultimately, all the activities done will be beneficial to the community at large.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, involving teenagers in community work during their free time prevents idleness and equips them with knowledge and skills that are beneficial to them as well as to the community. It is my wish that all communities will embrace the act of engaging teenagers during their free time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Job interviews are commonly undertaken by companies of all sizes seeking candidates to fill a role. They often consist of dialogues between a Human Resources representative of these organisations and the professional interested in the position. During the conversation, the applicant's profile in terms of qualifications, skills and work experience is assessed against the criteria and employer’s expectations. However, some people argue this approach is insufficient for capturing the right employee. In my opinion, to ensure a more accurate hiring process, other methodologies should be explored along with interviews, such as group activities and personality quizzes.\n\n \n\nThe importance of interviews when it comes to selecting new individuals to integrate a team cannot be dinned. It has proved to be the most traditional and practical framework largely adopted worldwide. They can offer vital insights about an applicant and lead to more informed decisions. However, individuals often act like robots when being interviewed, answering questions in a way recruiters will be happy about. In this sense, other approaches should be introduced for a more holistic understanding of the candidate's capabilities.\n\n \n\nModern organisations are already introducing new techniques to choose4 the best matches for their teams. These contemporary assessments evaluate professionals during activities designed to capture the candidate's behaviour in complex situations where pressure and conflicts are common. In this case, applicants tend to express their real selves, values and logical thinking. The findings are often combined with the interview results in a profile-matching exercise.\n\n \n\nAnother way to further assess the job seekers' profiles is by assigning them personality quizzes. Quizzes are powerful tools that can be used to gather information about a professional’s strengths and weaknesses. In addition, these tests can detect which professionals can naturally act like mediators and which need to be led by others. Thus, they can assist in allocating workers to the right team and role.\n\n \n\nIn conclusion, interviews will always be important as they are still insightful, simple, and straightforward, demanding minimum resources to be executed. Nevertheless, when combined with other methodologies, the hiring process may become more precise and efficient. In this case, companies need to invest time and money to introduce these complementary approaches, which may make sense for some businesses and positions but not the majority.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Because of the problems in transportation and accommodation confronted by cities today, some people propose that governments should encourage the relocation of businesses to the countryside. However, I believe that there are more drawbacks than benefits associated with this proposition. \n\nAdmittedly, moving large companies to regional areas is beneficial for urban districts. This helps in overcoming the problems that arise from the congestion of city centres by minimizing the migration of people from rural areas to cities and reducing the urban population. If governments implement this measure, several critical issues, including heavy traffic and housing shortage, will be addressed. \n\nHowever, this produces many negative effects. While employees can typically be hired at much lower salaries in the regional field, there is arguably a shortage of skilled workforce in these places. The majority of workers from outside city centres lack skills and experience, which can create trouble for companies and employees, such as project delays, understaffing, overtime work, and higher turnover rates.\n\nIn addition, the infrastructure in the rural regions is not as developed, which can be problematic for certain companies. Large businesses move to regional areas, expecting to operate as efficiently and effectively as they do in cities, but most of them end up struggling as they face such problems as lack of transportation, power outages, unreliable internet connection and scarcity of communication channels. \n\nIn conclusion, more difficulties will be encountered by companies and individuals if governments push for the relocation of businesses from cities to rural areas. In my view, the advantages of such action are far outweighed by its disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traffic jam is one of the serious global issues in the current period, they happen in many towns and cities. The factors of this problem and the ways to solve it will be presented in the essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the cause of having of the high volume of traffic is the large number of private cars on the road. There are two reasons why they are likely to have their own vehicles. Firstly, it saves time because they do not have to wait for public transportation such as buses to come and pick them up. Secondly, it is convenient to travel anywhere because it is direct to the target place whereas public shipment needs to make many transfers during the trips.\r\n\r\nIn my point of view, Government should improve public transport because if it is good, many citizens will decide to use it, and the number of cars on the street will be decreased. Moreover, if compared between public transportation and cars contain the same amount of humans. the bus will win because if it uses less space to contain many people. For example,one bus can contain 30 people whereas one car can contain about 4-5 people. \r\n\r\nUnfortunately, public shipping in some countries is terrible which is why many people do not want to use it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In desperate attempt revolutionize way people traveled idea mooring thought well The number problems obstacles mounted higher higher idea mooring airships new mast atop Empire State Building One main obstacles airship tethered building would add stress The stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation Another obstacle faced mooring mast one safety Dirigibles United States used hydrogen rather helium Highly flammable Another obstacle construction nature high shifting winds due violent air currents dirigible tethered mast would swivel around around Empire State Building way prevent would tie lead weights rear end massive dangling weights hanging one thousand feet public safest idea A last obstacle faced fact existing law prevented airships flying low urban areas These obstacles thought realized construction Empire State building s mooring mast ever begin", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To mood author happy Thinks s happy article talks grow lived entire life Also talks Narciso Rodriguez arrived United States Plus talks helped poor people country moved US Narciso Rodriguez alot stuff help country survive left", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes paragraph shows ending one thing beginning anotherAfter upset thinks home realizes something new happening needs accept itSo therefore spring going start new like flower blossom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper society come regarding advancements inventions One invention made large impact world still ceases amaze s computer This piece technology many benefits positive effects people without everyone would stupefied For exomple device allows people keep touch using common social network In addition specially designed computers tend peoples specific needs Furthermore allow expand knowledge Therefore computers positive effects Just think people ve emailed instant messaged past week Your dad busness trip aunt uncle emailed pictures new born baby friends camp The list go Computers like provide social networking like ichat video chat keep touch family friends For example life I use video chat sister freshman college It s way keeping touch instead seeing months end pay plane tickets every weekend go see With computer keeping touch people different towns states even hemispheres piece cake However computers also provide surfaces medical needs If someone rushed hospital emergency computers used monitor person hospitals nationwide say computers essential facilities For example grandfather cared hospital computers used make sure heart rate oxygen levels blood pressure check And something wrong computer would alert doctors Therefore computers also huge help medical department well Lastly computers expand one s knowledge There thousands upon thousands websites teach people different things For example going trip wish learn culture leave type internet browser computer bam You re fully prepared vacation computer Also life teachers assign research papers requiring us find information topic Perhaps going library nt option going acquire information The answer simple go internent Internent research top way amongst colleges universities research I recently assigned project social studies teacher got choose topic community service research Every student class used computer way shape form project Thus computers allow get information efficiently In conclusion computers provide abundances uses Primary ones include ability exchange messages friends family help medical field expansion knowledge Henceforth I believe computers serve positive advancement technology effect people rather great", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?Many individuals think that foreign tourism brings negative effects to their countries. There are several reasons for such negative attitude towards international travelers. However, a couple of solutions could be adopted to handle this situation, as will now be discussed.International tourists are often criticized for their contribution to the environmental degradation. It has continuously been noticed that they throw rubbish in their surroundings irresponsibly, which increases the amount of litter everywhere, despite all attempts to reduce waste produced by the local community. This contributes to water, air and soil contamination.Furthermore, foreign tourism has a harmful influence on traditional customs and indigenous practices of host countries because many tourists are careless and insensitive the emotions and feelings of local residents. For instance, in India, some foreign travelers wear inappropriate clothes or expose too much of skin when they visit sacred places, which leads to some negative attitude and the local public.However, this situation can be improved different solutions which could be handled by the government. The government should explain the benefits of international tourism which contributes to the development of local . They not only spend money in shops and restaurants but also create jobs in service industries, and this aspect could be publicized. Additionally, the government should increase the awareness among the foreigners through different media such as roadside billboards and advertisements, and tourists should be encouraged to get rid of rubbish correctly.In conclusion, the inhospitable feeling that the local people have for international tourists can be explained in many ways. However, in my opinion, the government’s involvement is essential to change the negative attitude by citing various advantages of international tourism to their country and raising awareness among tourists in order to protect local habitats.This essay covers the entire task topic by exploring both reasons for negative attitude towards international tourism and some possible actions to change it. The writer explains why locals may resent international tourists and suggests what steps can be taken to transform the way people feel about foreigners in their country. The information is well-organised by the use of paragraphing, and the writer moves from one idea to the next effortlessly, with the help of linking words. A wide range of vocabulary is used, including less common words such as “degradation”,”inhospitable”, “habitat”, “awareness” and “sacred”. Instances of inaccurate word choice are rare, and even these slips don’t cause difficulty for the reader. Overall, this looks like a Band 8 essay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am all for these driverless cars. There are a few exceptions but for the most part i feel that they could bring a sense of relaxation and stress relief for drivers on roads. As a consumer i fell that is what feels more comfortable while traveling. As it says in the article, the driverless cars need assistance from the person driving it at all times. We could put forth funding and technology for this program and in a few years, we may just have driverless cars that could take you anywhere.\n\nI see that if there was to be a wreck involving one of these cars it could easily be blamed on the manufacturer. But reported as today there have been no accidents involving these cars. These cars are getting safer and safer as we speak. Although there are people assisting these cars they pretty much drive the most part for themselves.\n\nAs we put more research and effort with funding into these cars we could have a flawless car that is safe and ecofriendly. The driverless car may become the new trend here in the next few years. There could be zero room for mistakes and therefor making this driverless car the safest way to travel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mooo!\n\nHorses, young cows, and mules are interesting mammels.\n\nLuke Bomberger went on a adventer were he could watch these animals.\n\nHe also got to go to Europe and China. Dosen't that sound fun? This paper is about the adventer Luke took. There are many other good parts about taking this trip.\n\nLuke had a oppertunity of a lifetime when he signed up to be a Seagoing Cowboy. First he got to see the acropolis. Then he got to ride on a gondola to see Venice, Italy. He said he had the time of his life. He also liked watching the animals.\n\nIf you like animals you get to take care of them in a boat or water vessle to Europe or Asia.\n\nSome of the animals need help. There also other fun things to do like tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, baseball, and volleyball.\n\nIf you like trips, sports and animals you would be perfect to be a Seagoing Cowboy. A lot of animals need help.\n\nYou can help them by being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nYou can have fun too taking a trip or playing sports. Sign up now!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think the Facial Action Coding System should be used in a classroom? Do you know what the Facial Action Coding System is? If not, I am here to tell you. The Facial Action Coding System is a program that grades your facial expressions. It determines if you are happy, sad, or even mad. This program gives you a percentage of each emotion and how much of that emotion shows.\n\nNow that you know what the Facial Action Coding System is, would you want it in classroom's? Personally, I think that students should be able to express how they feel with their facial gestures, and not some computer program. The Facial Action Coding System is completely uneccessary. Why do children need to know the exact way they are feeling? Children could care less about this system, and it may not be entirely accurate. Suppose a child is feeling really happy, but the Facial Action Coding System says that the child is more sad than happy. The child wouldn't feel too great, and this could make them even more \"sad\".\n\nOverall, I think the Facial Action Coding System is a good idea for fun, but not to use in school classroom's. It could be very fun to some kids, but others might take it harshly. The article says, \"A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". If the student was confused, I guarentee they will ask for help, rather than sit there. If the Facial Action Coding System notices that the child is confused or bored, the teacher would then help the student, and it may make the student imbarassed. I think whoever thought if this idea had good intentions, but thought more about the cons than pros.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State Building hard task hands They building tallest building world Al Smith head construction building said make taller things got even difficult Mainly wanted newfound height used dock dirigibles What nt know little difficult tying blimp building They many obstacles hand The architects would modify building thousandfoot dirigible moored building would add stress building Dirigibles used hydrogen extremely flamable catch fire downtown New York would desasterous Nature poses threat well winds top building would cause dirigible swivle around The final obstacle law prohibits airships fly low urban areas In end plan failed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When you say that the face on mars is an alien artifact how do you know. Prove to me that it is. So you can't well quess what. I can prove to you that it is not an alien artifact. All I have to do is use knowledge that I have from the evidence.\n\nIn the story it says that people made a movie about the face on mars. It has also been put in many magazines. It has also been put in haunted grocerey store check out lines. All of that is just to draw attention. All though it did they just want you to think that because they wanted money.\n\nSence people thought that the face was an alien artifact N.A.S.A made photographing it a main priority. On a JPL website they revieled that the face was a landmark and nothing more. The face on mars was located at 41 degrees north martian latitude were it was winter. This was a cloudy time on the planet mars. It may have messed with the picture a little bit anyway.\n\nSome mission controles prepared to look again. It's very hard to locate the face sence the camera scans the planet like a fax machine. They dont just come across it very often. They evan used a special camera that zooms in very close to the planet. They still saw that the planets face was nothing more than a landform.\n\nIn conclusion the face is nothing. There were no alien artifacts. So that should prove to you. That there were not aliens. It's nothing more than a simple landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Part of being a teacher is knowing how to understand students. That's why they're are so many great teachers that know how to talk with their students and have a genuine conversations with their teachers. It is an esential part of their job to be able to do this and they should't rely on technology to do part of their job. It's a natural human trait to be able to read someone. While teachers shuold be able to do that, it could also take some weight off of them. Bringing this technology to the class room woud be revolutionary. Teachers would be able to not only focus more on class but get a real sense of how the class feels about a certain topic, if someone is bored or confused, it would be very easy to tell as well.\n\nWhen you're a teacher you are expected to understand and sympathize with the student at some point. A lot of the time someone will fake being happy or say they are fine when they are not and it dissrupts the flow of class. With this technology, it will really help the teacher when a student is confused but is too embaressed to say or is just upset in general and won't talk about it. This could lead to more sucess in the classroom and help the teachers do their jobs significantly better.\n\nSometimes in a classroom the topic or the way something is being taught confuses people. They either don't understand or can not really grasp the concept with the way it is being taught. This could really show the teacher using this emotion techonolgy if what is being taught is sufficent or not. As said in the article \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This will help students pay attention and stay awake during class.\n\nThis human emotion regonzier could be a great help for teachers. It could make teaching as a whole a lot easier on the person actually teaching the class and even help students who find school boring. This technology is a great path towards the future of teaching.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" This seems to me like a bad idea. The driverless car, while having some good qualities, is overwhelmed with bad qualities. The risk and danger of driving would greatly increase due to the cars being more in control. Not only is this dangerous, but the cost of the vehicle will increase because the product is new and \"advanced\". When adding up the time being taken to drive a car rather than take a taxi, the taxi takes a greater amount of time to deal with. Some of the negative aspects of the driverless car are much greater in numbers than the positive.\n\nThe risk of the driverless car is much greater than the risk of simply driving oneself everywhere. Like taxis, putting your life in someone elses hands is always a greater risk. The driverless taxis just double the chances out wrecks considering that the car still has more kinks than anyone cares to recognize. In the reading, it was stated that the car can brake on it's own. While that could be seen as a convienience, it can also be seen as a danger. The car may brake when it's is not supposed to which could cause a wreck. The driverless cars are still not totally able to navigate through traffic with ease. Having a regular car seems to be the safer option, because the driver is in complete control.\n\nThe driverless car is much more costly to manage than a car controlled by the driver. The product is new, so the initial cost will be much higher. Also, the technology is supposed to be more convienient and user friendly. These positive aspects always seem to cost more than a regular car. The driverless car will have such a large initial cost, the owner of the car will be owing the company in which he bought it money for a long time.\n\nIt always seems more convienient to take a taxi rather than drive yourself in a big city. In larger cities, taxi services are found everywhere, but in smaller towns the number of taxi's are much smaller. It is unneccisary to take a taxi in smaller town because the traffic is more manageable. The taxi services are only needed for large cities to handle all of the traffic. The new driverless cars are still not managable on their own in high areas of traffic.\n\nThe number of cons seems to outweigh the pros. Safety is always a big issue to everyone because it is important that everyone is safe at all times. As the world progresses money seems to be more of an issue. Driverless cars are seemingly too expensive to buy in the first place, let alone the price of gas being a taxi service. The convienience of a taxi is always so pleasant until they are unneccisary, like in smaller areas. Personally, the driverless cars just seem to have too many negative qualities to be worth production.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir lifting The mood created author lifting shows race nt matter comes unity friendship It also lifting Narciso s parents gave everything everyone family live better life Another reason lifting story talks family nt neccisarily blood related someone love help That I think mood created author memoir lifting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the view that influencers have detrimental effects on society, proponents have a diverse perspective. However, I am a staunch believer that these well-known characters have their own touch in pervading moral and appropriate doings. In this essay both perspectives along with my opinion will be further explained.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a category of individuals in the belief that singers, actors, and some public figures have a negative effect on adolescents and they do not have any salient role in the community compared to other vocations. In other words, if teachers who rear zillions of generations or engineers who explore new technologies every day for the environment safety are followed and imitated by youth, they help their society more than any other entertainer can do. An eminent example is the Egyptian actor “Mohamed Ramadan” who keeps presenting unprofessional content such as violent movies that pervades immoral concepts in society. Thus, what can be said is that not all influencers deserve to be praised as they negatively affect youth's way of thinking.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some celebrities are worthy of appreciation as they have an indispensable role. To illustrate more, some characters who constructively affect the community by their well doings such as donating to hospitals or participating in awareness campaigns, they deserve to be role models for most youngsters. For example, The Egyptian footballer “Mohamed salah” who encouraged a plethora of young people to be involved in anti-drug campaigns. Therefore, not only do these luminaries deserve massive refunds, but also they deserve to be rewarded by the governments.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, after this essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that some influencers inspire and admonish youth from crooked directions. I am convinced that those qualified public figures are worthy of being well-paid.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The history of the places we live in can be astonishing for many of us. This phenomenon can be encountered in a lot of countries, especially where many key historical events took place. There are several causes underlying the occurrence and ways to unveil the mystery.\r\n\r\nThe main reason why people find the history of their living places fascinating stems from their humane need for connectivity. Inherently, people want to empathise with their surroundings, including their houses. House is not merely seen as the place for shelter, but also a symbol of stability with a sentimental value. To be able to connect with one’s place of living, one needs to understand its history. The second, more pragmatic reason for knowing the historical value behind a house or building is that it could lead to a higher market price. It is not uncommon for people to buy a more expensive house with interesting historical facts rather than buy one with less price but labelled as ‘generic’.\r\n\r\nThere are some ways to research the history of a place we reside in. The most straightforward one would be asking the previous owners about the story behind the development of the building or building. Secondly, one could search on the internet or in the local library about the events surrounding the development of the house. This approach may not reveal the direct causation on why and how the house was built but we may find many interesting things.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, whatever the reasons are, it is intriguing to elucidate the history of our house. We can accomplish this by undertaking thorough research whether through the internet or by conducting a first-hand interview with the previous residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My favorite books movie I see Twilight eclips mom heading movie theature I wouldent stop talking movie We drove parking lot park My mom leave I said CAPSs one mom sweet replied Me mom waiting see bloodsucking movie three months steping building rushed get tiketts food The movie going start I going start saying something I calmed used patience three hours strate I took pictures mom funny We bunch random things get past time It actually helped securety said stand time trivia They asked bunch question last movie CAPS I raised hand I answered question right I choice getting free popcorn pin I got pin I exided movie start After movie done mom headed home fell asleep right got This story I used patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They say laughter best kind medicine So tell truth qoate I tell true story laughter medicine I already recognized believing self I also explain key element part world So start us I tell story laughter fixed ed grandpa cousin To start happened time We blast There cousins little brother I So I minding business playing games grandpa watching us play loud smack crying screaming So turned slipped smacked seven years oldThen grandpa starts yelling trying figure heck went After seeing back big red hand mark s grandpa really let loose started going ballistic went home piste So later came back grandpa I sat table talking That s I mentioned something started make every one laugh hard forgot happened said sorry happy time grandma got home workSo conclude story I wish remind laughter element plays part something true story part life So thanks listening someone dumps really mad laughter medicine job", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think cattle boating is a good idea.It is very dangerous,and you don't even have to think about why it is.Remember when Luke slid down the ladder,starting to sliding off the boat,but a metal peice caught his pants,and he made it alive with broken ribs?Thats dangerous dont you think?Thats not it eighther<because you sse im justgetting started.What if the metal peice wasn't there,or the metal peice was aiming for his eye or worse?Cattle boating is also dangerous because you can get stranded.For example,what if a giant storm came, and it caused the ship to go off course and you end up in the middle of no where?Also do you remember when Luke said he gets to see a lot of amazing places,well what if you became stranded on the worse places a human can never be?Now what if your food slid off the boat?Or a giant creature attacked the ship.Your life would be over.This is why I think cattle boating is dangerous.Instead of thinking twice about going,you need to think a million times about going,or dont go at all.Thats what I suggest.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist many ways One way cyclist sticking map Instead sticking map asked couple old people The old people gave cyclist directions also gave short cut take Thats second effect came cyclist started use shortcut instead main road Thats features setting affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Next Big Thing\n\nCan you imagine a world where we would no longer have to learn how to drive?\n\nThe roads today are more dangerous than ever.\n\nPeople hardly pay attention now to the roads now, especially teenagers.\n\nEveryone is on their phone while they are driving, either texting, calling, or social media.\n\nThese cars would be good for anyone, even the elderly.\n\nDriverless cars would be safer than regular cars.\n\nPeople may think that driverless cars would be bad beacuse drivers would pay less attention to the roads, but they are already not paying attention.\n\nDriverless cars would cause less wrecks from texting and driving.\n\nIf we had driverless cars we would be able to eat in the car, maybe do makeup, and be able to call and text back without the treat of not paying attention.\n\nIt would be easier trying to find a destination in a driverless car because the driver would not have to do anything.\n\nThe car would turn all on its own and have the map already planned out.\n\nIf the driver was actually driving while trying to find a location, they may get lost.\n\nIt is complicated trying to drive and trying to listen to your phone or car give you directions.\n\nBut, if something were ever to occur and human assistance was needed, the car would notify the driver. Such as the drivers seat would vibrate if a dangerous obstruction were to come up, such as a traffic jam, an accident, and so on.\n\nNew technology and software is making this big change happen.\n\nDriverless cars are coming into our society and we need to accept that they are the future and the next generation will be driving them.\n\nAutomobile manufatures, such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan are already testing out this new technology and plan to have driverless cars by 2020.\n\nThe next big thing is almost here.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the world, many countries have single-sex schools and mixed-sex schools and parents can choose to send their children in any of them. It is thought by some that children who study in gender specific schools face difficulties in the future. I completely agree with this statement. \n\nFirstly, students would be reluctant to the opposite sex as they would be uncomfortable in talking to or working with them. This, in turn, can put an adverse effect on their overall development. For instance, a study conducted by the University of Cambridge revealed that children taught in segregated schools find it difficult to communicate with their opposite sex. Secondly, if boys and girls are taught in separate schools, they may have prejudiced thoughts for their counterparts due to misunderstanding or lack of mutual understanding. \n\nIn addition, they will lack in availing the opportunity to share or grab ideas from each other if taught in separate schools. Since boys and girls have different thinking and attitude to life, they can learn many things from each other, however, the are deprive of this learning in gender based schooling. For example, most girls tend to be attentive and sincere their studies and boys, on the other hand, have more liveliness. The can inculcate different personality aspects from each other. \n\nIn conclusion, I reiterate that students who study are not better prepared for the real world in single gender schools. They would be little confident in front of their opposite sex and unable to understand each other.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some nations, people desire to find out the past of where they live, which is reasonable to know what happened in their house since people has the curiosity about unknown thing and it might help them to discover more meaningful matters.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a house is not a simple object, it store the trace and memory of several generations. It's comprehensible that people want to detect the history of their house, therefore they could clearly fell the vicissitudes of their house in the past time. On the other hand, human are sentient beings, I believe some people are trying to find memory of their own childhood and the happiness that they have experienced since once we grew up we might lost the ability to find out the enjoyable thing as in childhood. Furthermore, people might wish to recapture the memory of living with their parents, grandparents or the felling of living with their young siblings in the childhood.\r\n\r\nTo begin with the investigation, a number of sources can be used to discover the history. The first thing should be done, it's to ask the senior family member, usually they know most things about the house where they lived in and they are glad to share the story within the house. Also it will be helpful to get some answer from the senior neighbor of the house. Finally, online searching is a good way as well, if the house has some special history it might be more easier to find from internet.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, discovering the history of one own's house is a reasonable action and it has multiple meaningful matters for a family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclists problem Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit PERSON dehydration California terrain cause California full long deserts exceed degrees sammer cyclist exerting dehydration inevitable In story cyclist says I could drop heatstroke gorgeous day June setting obviously hazard", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should always save money for the future because this will add a better retirement and much more confortable life in the future by not needing to work so much. Saving money is a complex thing and it is important that people save money by doing the wright choices on spending less on useless things. Not paying taxes to the state it is a very riscous and inapropriated thing to do instead this would probaly give more trouble and more expenses to the person. There is a phrase that says \"You pay taxes when you are making money\" , this is an intrigant phrase that try to show that wheater you are earning money you are paying more tax and that is how it is supposed to be. Paying taxes may bring you indirectly benefits like a better life quality since the state will provide with with benefits and infrastructure, so in a way it is an investment that you do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story particular paragraph number reasons The last paragraph states when come back I take test Ho Already upset failing driving test main character upset missing homeland The buds flowers give hope essentially strength take test Also originally flower shop smelling seeing flowers A wave loss deep strong stung Saengs eyes swept And warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng broke wept Ho It obvious main character flowers mean much take back home country abruptly torn misses give hope remind things loves like grandmother In conclusion author chose end story paragraph means main character", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars are a really good idea to be hounist I'm going to tell you why I think it's a good idea. The first reason why I think it's a good idea is, because if the cars are able to dive themselfs we the people will see less crashes on the rodes. Lets take I-65 for an example we the people see the news and we see and hear about all the crashes that happen on there. We also can look at I-70 as well its not as bad as I-65 though.\n\nHere is another reson I think everyone should have a driverless car. I am a driver of my own. I get scared sometimes when i am on I-65 going to indy or anywhere like that. The reason being I dont want to get hit just going to the mall with some of my friends thats not what I want. This is what i want though. I want to be able to go place to place without hlaf to think or WORRY about any of the stupid people on the rodes.\n\nI mean take a moment to think about how much better the rodes will be if stupid people can not drive places where they want to go. If people wanted to go some where the car will drive them there all we the peopel have to do is sit there and talk and have some fun. wouldn't that be so much fun though. There will be a lot less crashes and people dieing because of it.\n\nThe last thing that I would want to say is, lets thinks about all the little kids that are in the car and all the little kids getting hurt form being in a car where some stupid person hit the car and the kids get ether really hurt or even die. Just think about that for a litte bit. and Thinks about it when you drive today or when you start driveing. Dont be a stupid kid and race peopel and do bren outs and stuypid stuff like that. All you have to do is drive to one place to another.\n\nThat is really all I have too, want too, and need too say. About all of this. So if you ask me how I feel just remebre this essay. So yes i think we all need too get one of the driverless cars.\n\nThank you,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table charts give information about the type of music album that people of different sex and age have bought in Britain. Rock Music is generally the top sellers. The class of people between 25 and 34 years old buy more albums than the others.\nRock music is the the more sold type, whereas classical music is the less purchased. However, there is a divergence concerning the type of listeners of the two types of music. Indeed, Rock Music (the most listened type) is particularly listened by people who are aged between 16-35, they exceed the 30%. Instead, Classical Music is particularly interesting for adults which are aged over 45. Indeed, the more than 20% of people of this age buy classical music. By contrast, the yungers, between 16 and 24 years old, who listened to classical music are almost 0%. Pop music, is the second more purchased type. It is purchased by all the types of people even if no one of the class exceed 30% of buyers.\nThere is a difference that concerns the age of people and their musical interests. Nonetheless, people beteen 25 and 35 year old are those who by the most and different types of music. They purchase around 30% of Rock Music's albums, even if the type they buy the most is Rock Music. They are also interested in buying Classical Music. In the opposite position, there are people aged over 45, who are the less versatile listeners. They used to buy Classical Music album (around the 20%) but less that 10% of them buy Pop or Rock Music.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How many people do you know show that they are upset or hurting? Most of the time people hide their feelings or emotions from others. They could be your best friend but you may not be able to tell when they are not okay. Maybe you are the same way. Maybe you walk into class one day and it is just not your day. Let's say the teacher doesn't know you are upset and upsets you by picking on you. You never showed him you were upset...how would he know? Imagine being able to have the technology to calculate someones emotions!\n\nA lot of students have stuff going on at home. Maybe their parents got into an arguement, maybe they got in trouble, or they lost a loved one. Whatever the case may be, some people don't like to show others they are hurting. So they put up a \"fake emotion\", as I like to call it. A \"fake emotion\" is when someone hids their true emotions with a fake one, like being happy when they are really sad.\n\nThings would go so much easier and smoother if teachers could tell when someone is upset. They could help them by talking to them about it and maybe giving them some advice or recommend them someone to talk to. Luckily with the help of a \"Facial Action Coding System\", which was invented by Dr. Paul Eckman, teachers could see what students are actually feeling. I know crazy right? But just imagine being able to see someones hidden emotions.\n\nDr. Eckman classified six basic emotions- happiness, anger, sadness, fear, disgust, and surprise. Based on one's facial muscle movements his invention can detect what one's emotions truly are. Dr Huang stated that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused\". This could help teachers know that they need to change their lesson to make it more entertaining for the student or make the lesson a little easier or more in depth.\n\nThose students who get bored stop paying attention and stop learning. Those students who get confused fall behind. This affects their education. Students falling behind and not learning won't pertain knowledge and succeed. Some teachers don't notice a student who is falling behind. With the help of this invention, they could spot the students and get them the help they need. This invention can be very helpful for students and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would driverless cars be successful or destructive to society?\n\nDriverless cars would be an good idea.\n\nThey could possibly lower car crashes in the country.\n\nDriverless cars could also be an bad idea.\n\nThey could put people's lives at risk. The driverless car could save someone's life or it could risk it.\n\nThis invention would be a good use to a drunk driver.\n\nInstead of the drunk driver driving and possibly killing themself or others, the driverless car can drive him or her home with no one harmed in the process.\n\nIts also a good use to those who text and drive because it will alert them to stop texting and to pay attention to the road.\n\nAlthough the car is driving on it's own, you still have control over what the car does.\n\nThis allows you to take over if you feel the need too.\n\nThe driverless automobile has many qualifications to it, other than driving on its own.\n\nIn the passage it says that the car willl alert the human driver when it needs him or her to take over.\n\nThis is good because instead of letting him or her get into an accident, it'll notify them before anything occurs.\n\nThe automobiles also have cameras watching the driver to make sure they are also paying attention to the roads.\n\nDriverless cars can be turned off if the human driver would prefer to drive.\n\nThe designers for the driverless car are focusing on the safety of the drivers.\n\nAlthough the driverless car is a good idea, its also a bad one.\n\nThe driverless car could have an technology fail. If this would too ocur, the manufacture would be at fault because they didn't do their job correctly. The manufacturer is supposed to make sure that no one will be harmed using their product. The manufacturer should check for malfuctions in their system before selling their car.\n\nThis automobile could be very useful in the future.\n\nThe manufactures should carefully plan this out carefully.\n\nThe car could save many lives. There is a lot of good qualifications that comes with the car but there's also a few bad ones too.\n\nThis car could either build society or ruin society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Join the Seagoing program! The Seagoing Cowboys will be a great opportunity to have fun on the seas. You could go to different country's. I went to China and Europe. UURRA hired Seagoing cowboys to take care of young cattle,horses,and mules.\n\nI went on gondola in Italy and I took nine trips. That was the highest than any other Seagoing Cowboy. If you join the Seagoing Cowboys you could beat my highscore. It might take long to go place to place but it is worth having fun on the boat so it doesn't get boring like that and this ain't where it ends. the fun doesn't stop here.\n\nIf you don't have fun going to different countrys. Then, have fun on board.\n\nMake up tournaments while you are going to a different place play different games like baseball, volleyball, and much more to do on board. Then, relax and read a book and sleep or take a nap and feed the animals and keep them clean so they don't be stinky and filfty. Keep yourself occupied and do something so you don't get bored and quit.\n\nThere are so many reasons to become a Cowboy. For starters, if you don't know how to do what a Cowboy does watch from other Cowboys or ask for help. Secondly, if you want to relax and to have a peaceful time just read a book in a quiet place and read so no one has to bother you. Lastly, the animals need your help to survive and live and so they could go to the other countrys they need to go to so that they could be fed and taken care of. If you sad for these animals that are sick and need you. Join the Seagoing Cowboys today!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are numerous amounts of risks and rewards that come with the study of Venus, and it is difficult to know whether the good outweighs the bad. The author attemtps to support the study of Venus by including facts and the possiblilty of scientific discoveries. I believe, however, that the author failed to be pursuasive in his support on the subject, due to his lack of supporting evidence and his stating lf the many risks of studying Venus.\n\nThe authors most critical mistake in the article was the use of too many facts that caused more concern for risks, and not enough rewards that would come with the study of Venus. He states the conditions of Venus, temperature, atmospheric pressure, its carbon dioxide plagued atmosphere, along with many other negative qualities of the planet. The article even states the failed spaceship landings on the planer. To the reader, stating these facts is credible, but too many of these negative qualities fail to entise the reader into thinking that the study of the planet is a good thing.\n\nThe author also fails to persuade the reader when dicussing the positive impacts that this study could entail. Too many of the topics the author writes about are hypotheticals and provide, at times, little factual evidence. These hypotheticals and the small proportion of facts used are also mixed together with risks amd negative outlooks as well. Very little is said to make one think that the study of Venus is vital or logical.\n\nThe author used little positive facts about the study of Venus, and talked of too many risks of this pursuit. He did not effectively pursuade me to believe that studying Venus is a worthy aspiration; rather, his facts and evidemce ,ade the exploration seem illogical. In order to support this cause to the bedt of his ability, the author must use more facts instead of mainly hypothetical situations, and use less negative facts about the study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Candidate what do you think of when I say that word well If I had to guess a said president. President that when  each party selects a president that the people  trust to help this Nation. candidates focuse their campaign on efforts onthe toss up state. In the article they said Nixonin 1968 and Clintin in 1992 both had only a43 percent plurality of the popular votes. No c candidate win majority.\n\nDid you know that under 23rdAmendment of the constistution the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. That what the article told me in paragraph4. Every candidate that is running for president has his or her own group of electors. the majority of 270 electoral votes is rerequired to elect the president. Everyone has to vote if want somebody that own your side. If don't then your voice will never be heard so you have speak up and vote. For who should be president of the state. So voting is a big deal so you make sure that you be heard.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars will be a great product and will be built in the near future. Driverless cars can help prevent a lot of mistakes of drivers. One really good mistake it can prevent from happening is a driver passing out while they are still driving, the car could either take over or vibrate during a event when the driver needs to take over and can wake them up. The author mentioned in the article that most states don't allow the practie of driverless cars because they believe they're not safe. But how would they know if they're safe or not if they won't allow manufacturers to test them? I believe that the states that won't allow the testing should build special places so manufacturers can test them out.\n\nSelf driving cars would help car crashes from happening. Most of the cars that manufacturers are making is called smart cars and they are starting to build their way to driverless cars. Many of these smart cars that the manufacturers are building contain many sensors, in the 1980s automakers used speed sensors at the wheels to create antilock brakes which can prevent drivers from backing into other objects.\n\nIn 2013, BMW released the development of a car that can handle it's self up to 25 miles per hour, but special sensors make sure that the drivers keep ahold of the wheel at all times. Most of the cars that have been developed are far away from being completely driverless. But the author mentioned in the article that some car companies are planning to release self driving cars by the year 2020. I believe that this will happen because technology just keeps increasing and will help manufacturers find a way to completely model a self driving car.\n\nThe author also mentioned in the artilce that Google has had cars that can drive independently under special conditions since 2009. These cars that Google has created have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far Google has yet to make a car completely driverless. Like everyother company the car still alerts the driver when they are need to take over the wheel.\n\nWith all of this information from the article I believe that driverless cars will be built soon by lots of manufacturers and will be a great product to have. The article had plently of good things to say about driveless cars, and I believe that driverless cars will be built in the near future and will be a good product for drivers to have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that they shouldn't make driverless cars. Your probbably thinking well why? I think they shouldn't make them, I thibk that they are unsafe. It said in the paragraph that they still need drivers for road work, wrecks, and other simular things. I feel like if the driver isnt paying attention to when he or she needs to take over that can cause serious injuried to thoes in the vehicle. It also said in the paragraph that they were thinking of ways to be able to tell that the driver was paying attention.\n\nDriverless cars aren't safe in my opinion. They need to think of a way they can alert the human to take over the car when needed. As of right now there isn't a way that the car can alert the human to take over. Also you have to think about the other humans riding in the driveless car. Is it safe for them? Maybye maybe not. These are the types of things you must think of while constructing one of these cars.\n\nI feel that driveless cars are pointless, a waste of money, and a waste of time. I don't feel like they are safe. I don't think they should be made. They cost lots of money that honestly noboyd really has. Maybe if more people felt like driveless cars are unsafe and a waste of time money and effort they wouldn't be trying to progress the making of thoes types of cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many companies and factories to complete manual task, which is traditionally human workers. I personally believe that it is a positive development, although it has its drawbacks.\r\n\r\nOne benefit of machining replaces human beings, which higher output and they can industry countless hours without taking rest, will not make mistakes. Using machines have more advantages because it faster to complete orders, the sales are higher, which improves economic development.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nDone by machines, people who have less work to do and they had free time to what they want. For example, they can get off work on time and take time to relax, and keep good health, not suffer from disease due to long-term pressure or working environment.\r\n\r\nSome drawbacks are buying automated many people may lose their job, The company will lay off workers, due to those whom no skill or diploma to do other jobs, there is no income, who can not make a living by themselves. As a result, the social is instability.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the mechanization of manual work is basically a positive development, despite the potential impact on the labour market.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir loving The mood memoir loving Narciso s home reminds old country The author talks grand parents able come Narciso s house turned home reminded Cuba", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author shows that the idea of studying Venus is a good idea even though it is dangerous by using many details from the text. The author uses descriptive evidence and examples to show us what to expect. It is also showed in the passage that the author gives us possible solutions to our current problems. Finally, the author also gives us facts to further prove their point. So the author uses many different types of ways to show how the studying of Venus is a good idea even with the many dangers that come with it.\n\nThe author uses descriptive evidence and examples to prove their point and to give us a visual in our head to show us what they means exactly. For example, the text states, ¨A thick atmosphere of almost 97 perecent carbon dioxide blankets Venus...Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus`s atmosphere.¨ The auhtor uses adjectives like thick and highly to show us exactly whats going on, to give us a visual in our heads. The text also states, ¨...such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.¨ The auhtor is giving us an example to imagine and for us to fully understand just how dangerous this environment is. This shows that the author uses descriptive evidence to prove their point, as well as examples of just how dangerous the planet is.\n\nAnother way is, the auhthor also gives us problems and possible solutions to those problems, they use problem and solution. For example, the text states, ¨A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide...clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid....NASA`s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.¨ This evidence shows that there is a problem with how dangerous Venus`s atmosphere is, so the author then says in the paragraph after that NASA may have a solution. The text also states, ¨However peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditons...researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance...NASA is working on other approaches...simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus`s surface...¨ This shows that the author gave our problem once again about how the scientists can`t get anything done from a far, so they then continued to tell us readers how NASA is working on a new type of electronic to whitstand Venus`s surface. This shows that the author states a problem and then a solution to further prove their point.\n\nFinally the author uses facts to prove their point. For example, the text states, ¨...some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus`s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditons¨ This evidence shows that author is showing us that this is a soultuion to a problem and in doing so they are giving us facts to prove their claim. The text also states, ¨At thrity-plus miles above the surface, tempatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit...¨ This evidence shows that yet again there is another possible solution to on of our many problems and to give better reasoning to their claim the author uses facts. This proves that the author uses facts to further encourage their point of view.\n\nSo the author uses many key ways of proving their point. They used problem solution to further their reasoning. As well as examples and descriptive eveidence to show us what exactly was happening. Finally they used facts to help persuade us that this is worth studying. That is how the author proved that studying Venus is worth it even with the risks involved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology called the Facial Action Coding System is very valuable. This new technology will be very useful in a classroom full of students that one teacher may not be able to handle all on their own. The Facial Action Coding System will help deal with many problems by reading a students face. This may help deal with situations a teacher can not figure out on their own. This software may be able to tell the teacher when the student is confused, upset, or even when the student is bored and needs a more interactive subject or way of learning.\n\nWhen a student is confused, they may not ask for help to a teacher. The child may be too shy or nervous to ask for a simple example or explanation. This software program will be helpful because it will be able to read the students confused face and tell a teacher that the student needs help. In the short story in paragraph six it states, \"most communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" This explains how not all people will use words to explain what they are feeling. These students may never speak up for themselves or have the courage to ask a question without the program being here to help deal with the childs needs.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will not only help with students life in the classroom, but it may also help with a students feelings deeper within. The software will be able to pick out the students who are very upset, and need to talk about their emotions to another person. If a student has a sad face in class, the program may be able to identify what is wrong with the child, and it could notify this information to a teacher or a well trusted adult. In paragraph five of this story it states, \"most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" By having this computer software, it could help out with a students mental emotional feelings as well.\n\nThis program will also be very helpful in providing a fun learning environment for the students. In the middle of paragraph six it explains how a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored. It also states that if you smile when a website advertisement pops up on the computer screen it will show more advertisements like that one. If a person frowns when this pops up, it willl show a different, more appealing advertisement. This can be very useful in a classroom. It may make the students more interested in learning. The students might even be more excited to learn now, because the computer will know that the students happy facial experssions mean they are enjoying the type of way the program is teaching them.\n\nThe new Facial Action Coding System will be extremeley helpful in a classroom. The students will have a more positive learning environment with this software. The new technology will not only be able to help with a students mental emotions, but it will help them be in a happier state of learning. This new system be more helpful for the students and for the teachers. The Facial Action Coding System is exactly what a school should be using for a overall better work place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart illustrates the rate of people who consumed the daily recommended quantity of fruit and vegetables in United Kigdom. The chart shows information for 3 different years, 2002, 2006, and 2010, and separates the UK`s population into 3 major groups: Men, Women and Children.\nOverall, it is possible to notice that the percentage of women who consumed fruit and vegetables were higher than the percentage of any other group for the three years. Moreover, 2006 was the year that most fruit and vegetables was consumed for all three groups.\nIn 2002, children ingested only 11% of the recommended quantity, however, in 2006, this number was increased by 7%, the highest consumption of fruit and vegetables for children in the time span. In 2010, there was a decrease in the their fruit and vegetables consumption when compared to 2006. Despite that, the number for 2010 (16%) was still bigger than the number for the first year.\nWomen ate more fruit and vegetables than men and children. In 2002, 25% of women ingested fruit and vegetables, while 32% consumed it in 2006. There was a decrease of 6% in their consumptiom in 2010.\nMen started 2002 with a consumption rate of 22%; in 2006, 4% more men decided to ingest fruit and vegetables, and in 2010, 24% of males consumed fruit and vegetables.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So i am going to tell you about my adventures. I was super excited when Don asked me to go with him. I was almost like a cowboy pirate. The first time i went on the cattle boat we went to Greece. We got all of the 335 horses in the gargo along with all the hay and oats to feed them. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China.\n\nI turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. “When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.” By the time he was discharged in 1947, I had made nine trips—the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\n“The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,” he says. “Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,” he says. “So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.” Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some may think that the Face is evidence that life exists on Mars, but others, such as myself, believe that it is just a natural landform. Evidence is all in the time the picture was taken and scientific research from NASA. In a span of 25 years, the quality of the pictures taken had gotten better. Some may say that there is no way that a landform can coincidently look like a face without the help of aliens, but there is. The Face is simply just a mesa with unusual shadows that create the features of a human face.\n\nScientific research has say in why the Face is just a natural landform, too. Conspiracy theorists believe that aliens created this, because the Face took over as a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and grocery store checkout lines. Scientific research is more reliable than what a conspiracy theorist has to say. Conspiracy theorists may say that the picture taken in 1998 was taken through wispy clouds that hid alien markings, but the picture taken in 2001 was taken on a cloudless summer using a camera's absolute maximum resolution. The picture taken in 2001 shows that this landform is equivalent of a mesa said by Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program.\n\nWith scientific research and the development of picture quality over the years, you can conclude that the Face is just a natural landform. Forget what the films, magazines, radio talk shows, and conspiracy theorists say. NASA has official research made by official scientists. NASA has concluded that the Face is just a natural landform equivalent to a mesa with unusual shadows.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that it is a dumb idea. It is not likley we will have them, right now they can only get up to 25 miles per hour. That is not a very fast car or at least not fast enough. We would have to change the speed limits, people would not be able to get to work on time. These are reasons I think the idea is stupid.\n\n25 miles per hour is not a very fast car or at least not fast enough. Think about this, mostly all of our speed limits get up to 30 to 35 miles per hour. so what i am saying is that all the construction that would have to take place would be over whelming. In the text it said the car has a warning system to alert drivers about construction or wrecks. the system would be going crazy.\n\nPeople would not be able to get to work on time. When a car we use now verses a \"smarter\" car the problems would be reliability and speed. In a modern day car we can sync our phones to them and have gps tell you where to go. If a modern car runs out of gas on the highway you can pull over, locate and walk to the nearest gas station with a gallon container and get more gas, then you could walk back to your car and put the gas in your car. Now with a \"smarter\" car it comes with a gps system, sure. If the \"smarter\" car however runs out of energy your navigation system will not work, and you would have to, in some way shape or form, get your car to a charging station then you will have to wait a while before its charged up and ready to go.\n\nIn conclusion those are the reasons I toatly dissagree with people that want \"smarter\" cars on the road. You can not rely on them . They are dumb and will not be able to function properly in todays society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions may be hard to understand sometimes, but they are still vital in everyday life so that we as humans can communicate how we are feeling with each other. It is especially vital for teachers to know how their students are enjoying the lesson. With modern technology that can read emotions, teachers may be able to better understand their students, and create a lesson that is fun for everyone.\n\nFrom an emotion test taken on the Mona Lisa, Professors Thomas Huang, and Nicu Sebe detected the lady's exact emotions based on what is portrayed in the painting. According to the technology, she is \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearfuk, and 2 percent angry.\" This technology used on a classic Renaissance painting could be used in schools to help teachers better understand the students, and therefore help to make the class fun for every one. In the article it gives the example of a class room computer recognizing when a student is bored or confused, then modify the lesson to fit that person's personality.\n\nAll in all, this sort of technology that can read emotions would be helpful for schools because it could help students understand their school work better, and in turn help them do better in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you thinking about joing the Seagoing Cowbows? If you are I got plenty of reasons why you shoud and also what you do in this program. Think to yourself what would you do in Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nI think that you should join the\n\nSeagoing Cowboys because it will allow you to expeirence and visit many unique places.\n\nWhen you are on board the ship you can find many things to do and many games to play. Sometimes after the animals were unloaded the would play baseball and volleyball. In\n\nOn the ship there is many things tod o. Some people have to take night watch to stay up and watch the animals. During the day you have to feed and water the animals three times. If someone on that boat didn then those animals would be useless.\n\nLuke was a Seagoing Cowboy and he did a lo og these things i said. Luke took night watch to watch the animals, that noght after ruturning his report in he fell down stair towards an opening of the ocean, but he caught himeself. Luke broke ribs so he could not work for a while. Also when he broke his ribs he found to have fun on the boat and off the boat. They could play games in the animals pen when they got unloaded. Like I said they could play games like Volleyball and Baseball.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy need s confidence and strngth, you oculd get picked to do any job but you dont know what it is. When your on the boat it is to late to go back becasue you are in the middle of the sea.\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboys is an oppertunity to have fun make friends and explore. You can also go see new counties and got o unique places.\n\nSome people can take that to heart.\n\nSometimes goi ng to a different country is like seeing something that you loved the most that you havnt seen in a while. That place you visit could be where your family originated from. Joining the Seagoing\n\nCowboys would be an amzing thin to do. Yes you would hae your ups and downs but you can always get back up. Just think if you join the Seagoing Cowboys you can do a lot of the things that you thought you could not do. That would be amazing. If I got the oppertunity to be a Seagoing Cowboy I would say yes because I like to push my limmits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that if you're a seagoing cowboy you have a lot of free time on your hands because as they say rome wasn't bilt in a day and getting across the Atlantic or Pacific Ocean wasn't a short trip either.Especialy with the rain,lightning,thunder.It took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States,and a month to get to China.\n\nSo why don't you get down here and join us. Did you know that we also play games down here,yep. The cowboys play volleyball ,and baseball in the empty holds where animals had been housed.Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,reading, whittling,and games also help pass the time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is much than an adventure, it opens up the world to people. And so what people say it's hard work thats life and so what we get sick thats also part of life and well you know what some times you have to deal with it. Well so what if people say its just some old job, well i got news for you. It's not just a job its's a its a life experiance, and people I'm pretty shore would love to see the world and all of it's great beautiful animals. so join and be a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout history, different types of exploration and discoveries have made an impact on what we know today. This new knowledge has allowed us to progress overall as a society and learn from our mistakes. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite its dangers through the uses of facts and examples.\n\nFirst, the author refers back to the failed, \"unmanned\" missions that have been sent to Venus. The passage notes,\". . . no aircraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". By stating that no one has survived this trip, the author is trying to invoke the feeling of the unknown in the reader's mind. No one has stepped foot on this planet making it fresh terrian for knowledge and exploration. This evidence backs up the claim that studying the planet would be worth while because NASA has been learning through their failed missions of how to advance in technology. Later in the text, to further the argument, pargraph 3 states,\". . . temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we experience on our own planet\". Through the use of this fact the actuality of the differences of Earth and Venus come into perspective. The dangers of this planet should motivate people rather then drive them away because of what they can teach the people of Earth to with stand in drastic situations such as space travel.\n\nSecond, the authors use of examples also contributes to why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers. Paragraph 5 states,\"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landsacpe.\" By telling the readers to \"imagine\" the thought of exploring a dangerous planet doesn't seem so crazy after all. The reasoning of being able to exist above the surface of the dangerous planet would allow for human inhabitance and exploration from a closer and safer view. This is nescesary because humans can benefit from the new area and figure out new ways of coexisting with the planets dangers and overcoming them.\n\nThrough the uses of facts and examples the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" explains how studying Venus would be a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. This pursuasive argument is repetitivly supported througtout the article and is a powerful source of influence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You wonder if Venus could be explored? Well we could one day. I think we could explore Venus. These things can help us to reach that goal is mechanical computers, allow scienists to float above the plant surface, silicon carbide, and other inovations.\n\nOne way is using mechanical computers. mechcanical computers don't have to use modern technogoly in them. In the text it says, \"but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" Then it says, \"systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\" This tells us that the mechanical computers are resisent twards Venus's harsh enviroment.\n\nThen another way is sending scape craft to hover around venus, so that sciencetists who are studying Venus would be space.\n\nIn the text it says, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" Then it states says again' \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. \" This tells you that the sciencetists would be safe and sound in the ship while they are studying Venus.\n\nThen another way is to make materials that would survive the Venus's terrian. One material would be silicon carbide. In the text is says, \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" then the text says, \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\" This tells us that silicon carbate would survive on Venus's terrian and other inovatoins.\n\nIn conclusion humanity will go to Venus at some point in time, but with the proper tools and edicatoin. I still think we cen explore mars. well do you still think we can go to Venus?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ever felt like wasent enugh time day everything would like CAPS s feel every day CAPS find tireing screwed started got job sinc got job never time school CAPS hardly get rest CAPS greads dropping little little CAPS always tired falling asleep classes lazy work I would cut hours need much money get help mom much CAPS mom nt really much nothing really live So feel help much CAPS older brother would hade responsibility got hes girlfriend pragnet moved live hes early ageSo second oldest find responsibility take care mom I love mom much dad ill much see stays wealthyBecuse shes gone sure would without little brother pain back never dose anything help aroud house like help mom breings home grossuries anything like think going set streathI know mom wont like All needs stop lazy help mom Now back pertty good kid think anyways CAPS trubel maker dont get wrong right things could secssful kidI try kid times s boring cant becuse try feel like tryung hole different person CAPS loud hiper kid class clown class roomsLike pepole always asking plans galleage ever say dont think calleage smart ill lucky graduate CAPS trying bring grades back hard much othere stuff school like job seens winter spring s way means work going get alot busyer going work alot moreTo tell truth sure going With responsibility going one tired teen age boy CAPS pertty sure handl really try bestAll know need find better job thats less stressful tireing less days work get payed better moneyLike jiffy lube someting anyting better working fast foods place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is increasingly common that property owners keen about the past of their residency. While the rationale behind the interests could be countless, the informational sources and methodologies to fulfil the curiosity could be various. \r\n\r\nThere are two possible reasons for the phenomenon. First, the living standard is getting higher compared to before. Meaning that residencies have more budget to choose a desirable accommodation as the disposable income increased along with the contemporary economy progressed. The increasing number of communities acquiring a meaningful history behind the property. Society treating the house as more than just a shelter but as a place with fun. Second, the historical stories behind them could be interesting to explore. For example, the romantic stories that happened before they moved in, the effort of the construction and the crowd used to live here could be a parting of the history. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a plethora of approaches that enable families to find that history-related stuff. To begin with, the internet is one of the most convenient methods. One can look for the name where they live , and the information of all sorts will pop out instantly. Afterwards, the library is also a desirable venue to gather reliable information. For example, central libraries, the place where an infinite number of past newspapers and literature are exhibited. It can be rather easy to retrieve even the blueprint of their living place should they wish to. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the journey of finding the history regarding their home is rather fun that people started to care. They can easily fulfil this desire by browsing online sources, or physical literature in a library is also a go-for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]