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"content": "There is a lot of technology being made to try to help human communication. Computers can read the emotions on the face of a human. Isn't that awesome !? This could help out with things that some humans dont want to say. Like depression or worriness ect. However some people still say that this technology will not be useful. I toatally disagree ! Think on the brighter side.\n\nWith this new technology it could be a little easier on the students. It could help the teachers know what type of mood the student is in. This would probably help by the teachers showing empathy to the students. Also this could stop conflicts with students. When two students are feeling angry you could remove them. I think this Technology is very valuable.\n\nAlso having a computer that know how your feeling at the moment would be such a big help. If it knows your feeling sad it could post ads to try to cheer you up. If your feeling happy it could play music to go with your spirit. When you are feeling confused about something , it could ask do you need help ? Also if you get bored with something it could make the next assignment different.\n\nEvidence to support my claim that this technology is valuable is all through \"Making mona Lisa Smile\". \" Imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" \"A classroom computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr. Huang predicts. \"it could modify the lesson, like a effective human instructor.\"\n\nIt also could be valuable by helping make computer animated faces more expressive.\"Most human communicvation is nonverable, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang.\"So computers need to understand that, too.\n\nThis technology called the Facial Action Coding System reading the expression of studednts is very valuable. It helps with showing empathy,It helps understand some reasons behind things ect. This technoly is so valuable because it can help stop so many conlicts, failures and save students education. If this technology keeps evolving no wonder what they'll have in the future. Maybe technoly that actually coversates with you with a real brain? Only time will tell.",
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"content": "It is true that some members of society communicate and remain acknowledged of new events through social media. There is a number of benefits and drawbacks of using the internet.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, in terms of the advantages of using the world network, it significantly reduces the inconveniences when cooperating or seeking different information. In other words, these new media create an opportunity to chat or send voice messages to each other, so people can reply at any time which is convenient for them. For instance, during the meetings at work workers can not talk by phone so social media is often used if it is essential to contact anyone. Moreover, the use of these applications can contribute to lowering the stress levels of users. These apps could be used as entertainment as a person who applies it can face different photographs or posts which may be interesting for him. As an example, Instagram which is widely used by society contains a variety of beautiful photographs of nature which provide a great pleasure after a hard workday.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the active use of the world network can lead to addiction which is a loss of time in the future. If a person intensively uses these apps, he will feel a great desire to take his phone and start viewing different posts that disrupt him from his main work. For example, today these addictions are widely spread among teenagers who use their phones even during important events. In addition, social media are used only through modern devices which create artificial light which is extremely harmful to eyesight. The user stares at one point which even makes the bigger damage as this light enters the eyes continuously. It can be observed in many teens as well as a big part of them start to wear glasses.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, social media can be useful as they are very convenient to use and may reduce stress levels however it can create an addiction that wastes time or even damage a person's health.",
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"content": "Throughout story workers Empire State Building faced many obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock The first obstacles faced trying ge thousend foot drigible mooring top building This held together single cable tether would add stress buildings frame All dirigible s load wind pressure transmitted way buildings foundation eleven hundred feet Another obstacle hydrogen dirigible highly flammable If dirigible ever destroyed would kill lot people Empire State Building downtown New York The greatest obstacle winds top building constantly changing would difficult land The last obstacle law airships fly low urban areas",
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"content": "State senator i strongly suggest that you change the electroral speech to an election and these are some reason why you should do so. The elctoral speech has to many drematical erros that can occur and throw the whole election to a unpresidented one. Also the people that vote for a president won't be the one voting for him/her, but a slate of electros. Althought it does have an abundence of flase it does have a certainty of outcome. This could lead to a president that is wanted or was choosen by a tiny mistake that made a huge rupture in events.\n\nWith the implimation of the popular vote over the electoral college can allow citizens to express their thoughts on what new leader they would want to run their state. If they would vote on the electors it's not a one-hundred percent chance that they are willing to pick for your choice of president. '\"Back in 1960, segregations in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (so that a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually goneto Kennedy\". This can occur when the electors refuse to vote for their party's candidate and chooses to vote on another candidate.\n\nAlthough the Electoral college has many flase that can effect the state drastically, it does have a certainty of outcome. With this it can lead to less dispute over the popular vote. \"Almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis\". Even if a state is low populated a state can cause a landslide in the Electoral-vote victory in that particular state. Also a greater factor that can occur is a tie which is possible because of the total number of votes which is an even number of 538. Even so they are two types of voting choices that people rather have, it can never be such a voting format that would be able to fit everyones style.",
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"content": "Some people think that teenagers should do community work, which is unpaid, in their free time as good way to give the community some benefits. Furthermore, it can be argued that teenagers will obtain many valuable experiences in communication with others by engaging in community service.\r\n\r\nThe majority of teenagers need to learn how to communicate with others in the best way and how to do many things. Firstly, when some teenagers volunteer to clear parks, streets, or beaches, they will feel happy. Therefore, they will clean their rooms to get happiness. Secondly, many teenagers should do basic work without getting money to can be independent in the future. For example, when some teenagers cook at a restaurant, they will obtain many information of cooking which is good for them in the future. Finally, many people want money for their work, but when teenagers do not get any money for their working, they will normally do unpaid work.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the community receives benefits from unpaid work, so people and teenagers who have free time should do volunteer work which is something which improves their community. Furthermore, unpaid work benefits the relationships in the community which will expand cooperation and lead to improvements in community members’ lives.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, there are many opinions about unpaid work by teenagers who have free time, but in my opinion, I agree with working without getting money since that work improve the community.",
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"content": "In excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Al Smith saw opportunity adding mooring mast top building allowing dirigibles ancher several hours refueling service let passengers With idea architects engineers Empire State Building consult experts taking tours equipment mooring operations US Naval Air Station The architects also met president recently formed airship transport company planned offer dirigible service across pacific Ocean Now see builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles allow dirigibles dock",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author shares many key facts to explain how worthy but dangerous exploring Venus would be. In the pasasge the author shares the life risking ways Venus could be ,but he or she also shares the importance and information gaining ways of how worthy exploring Venus is. The factors of how dangerous Venus is may not set us back from exploring and investigating the factors that Venus provides.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that blankets the planet. The passage states \"even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The author already shared 2 of the most dangerous features of the planet ,but is still wanting to explore. The conditions are more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth , but this could help scientists investigate how closely related it could be to earth.\n\nVenus is refrred to as ''Earths twin\". The passage gives us ways how eath and Venus are similar and differant. Putting aside the dangerous attributes of Venus it just has to be worthy of exploring ,because earth really was! It gives us a place to live and expand. How awesome would it be to do the same on Venus?\n\nIn pharagraph 4, it states \"Long ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". This was a good supportive fact for the author to help us understand why this is to worthy of discovering. The passgae also includes that today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. But how do we know? We have to keep an open mind to the information given to us about how dangerous this could be.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface out of any planet in the solar system. The author shares that there are erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes ,and many other dangerous factors to add. This informs us that if Venus is so worthy to discover, we need to find safe healthy ways to do so.\n\nNASA is working hard to find ways that it woud be posible to explore Venus. In paragragh 6, the author includes \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cant penetrate the dense atmosphere\" ,this tells us there are still major set backs. NASA continues to research on differant approches to study Venus. They are striving to meet the challenges of Venus and its danger .so they can prove it could one day be like earth.\n\nThere are many facts shared in this passage to help us believe that Venus is important and worthy of exploring. Like the author says \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. The author wants us to believe him or her, and she does this by supporting this with claims and true facts on the topic. He or she proved no matter the factors of how dangerous Venus can be we can't be set back from exploring the factors that Venus shares.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph plant seems remind homeland calms budding feels stronger In story Saeng kind outsider sees plant sees part past back home In story says gets shaky tries say at home When says and hibiscus budding I think really saying ready accept country home flower reminder homeland At end story says see getting used geese flying V getting used country ready take test",
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"content": "As in my opionion I feel as they shouldn't have these cars because they are diverless cars and can cause many accidients.Why invent something that may cause harm to our society? They should just have regular cars that are controlled by our own feet. That we are controlling. They are bascially having a robot car because the car can do pretty much everything like a robot. It computer controlled and that can be really bad. It can be really bad because what if it senses something is there and there really isn't? That can cause a horrible accident or even cause someones life.\n\nAll though some people may argue with my statement because they think it'll be easier for the car was to be\n\ngernerated controlled than for them driving it themselves, but I believe that is dangerous. They think that all they can just get in the car and just sit there and let the car drive but really they should do it by theirselfs.\n\nI rather drive a car thats not so new and not have probelms while driving on the street than to get a whole new car thats impensive and anything can happen while driving on the street around other people.\n\nI have stated my opinion and have to support it. I rather be safe than be in a situation I don't wanna end up being in.",
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"content": "It is important that a country finacial growth should be sufficent enough to meet the needs of the people, the economy of the counrty shouls be a priority of the goverments because with adequate money the problems of the indivituals at the present would be solved accordingly. therefore, with a growing economy the governments can provide infrastructures that will help the less fortunates.Moreover if there are structures put in place to generate money for the growth of the country the economy will grow also this will help in more developments.\r\n\r\n without a proper funds there wont be a sucessful uplifting of the less fortunate. in other words the less fortunate needs the support from the governments to help the trive. There is no doupts that the governments has a very important role in the life of the less fortunate by helping them provide materials that will assist them in their day to day living, this could accutually generate funds into the country and reduce the stress also on the governments.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, proper understanding from both parties plays a very vital roles, as such that the government will provide materials, infrastructres, empoyment programes that could help the less privilage and for these reasons, there will be better growing economy in the country that will aid adequate and better developments.",
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"content": "Flooding is a serious problem that affetcs people all arround the world, it can destroy entire communities and end people lives. Natural catastrofes like flooding, huracanes and many others don´t occure every day, anticipation is key. The diagrams show how houses can be protected in areas wich are prone to flooding.\nThe diagrams show on the one hand where there is a stopbank and on the other hand where there is no stopbank. To raise buildings ais very important in this matter. Ground level and flood level must be taken in account.\nThe starting point is the ground level that must be mesure against the 100-year flood level. The boulding must be raised from the ground level so that the house florr level is 300 mm above the 100-year flood level. The river/dam and the internal runoff are the extreme factores.\nBoth diagrams show how to prevent bouldings from flooding with the main difference of of the stopbank.",
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"content": "There is no doubt that these days economic wealth is essential for the strength of the country in many fields. The question is, is any extra increase in the country's economy which is already rich doesn't make its residents anymore satisfied? In this essay, I am going to discuss this view and write my own conclusion.\n\nIn terms of view, some experts think that the citizens don't feel satisfied even when their rich country has an additional increase in economic wealth. The main reason given to support this claim is that some wealthy nations even when they have increased their economy they're haven't made development in their resident's life to make them more convenient. To illustrate, the decrease in salaries minimum hasn't changed even with the good economy. In other words, the residents were dissatisfied and not joyful. Search for better opportunities in another nation.\n\nMoreover, the country should be using a surplus economy for social development and make pleasing citizens the first priority. Firstly, make the economic gap between the people with high social status and normal people small so that they are more balanced in social position. In other words, everyone is treated equally as others. Secondly, increase the availability of jobs with high salaries. This is because the major reason of being people dissatisfied have no good job or good income which is appropriate with this time of expensive life and taxes. Also, reducing citizens' migration to search for business. The additional wealth improves the economic stability of the country for many more years to come.\n\nIn conclusion, although the extra wealth makes the economic wealth of the nation is essentially improving. The residents are still dissatisfied with their life because they don't focus on the public interest. Therefore, I believe that isn't permanent additional increase in economic wealth in rich countries doesn't make citizens any more convenient.",
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"content": "Automatic cars. They've been invented like everyother automatic thing in the world just to make humans more lazy. There can be nothing good about automatic cars. What if they run out of batter down a four lane highway? What if they run out of gas? What exactly will the cars be run on? No matter what there will always be risks.\n\nSay you and your family are driving down the road in one of these automatic cars and maybe the road is icy. The car slides but no computer can drive like human driver. The car slides off the road into a ditch and kills every member of that family. Who is to blame? The car, or the manufacturer? The manufacturers of the car, if they want to sell the product make sure that the car is totally accident proof. And that is completely impossible. With drunk drivers to texting drivers. You never know what the person coming at you is doing. You can never predict what that driver is gonna do while they're coming at you. And it's not your fault. So why would anyone ever want something they don't have complete control over?\n\nAnother thing. We have automatic trains and subways cars yes. But, they are guided on a rail that is also watched over by a trained person. These automatic cars have no complete guide and just go off of gps? Sun flares cause gps and phones to go wack every now and then. So what happens when we have a sun flare and the car shuts down or malfunctions while its going say 50-60 mph? That could kill and entire family and some. Again, who is to blame for that? Who is to be at fault for something like that caused by nature? You can't do anything to prevent it. It's impossible.\n\nHow expensive will these be? Only the rich will have them. These aren't something that just everyone will be able to get there hands on. Like Hover Boards. They sell for around 700 dollars and they catch on fire. What kind of waste of money will it be if people go to pay for an expensive car and it malfunctions in the first day that they get it. many companies will lose alot of money and there isn't a thing they can do about it. There are too many risks to the automatic cars.\n\nAll though the risks are there, the grand theft auto crime rate would go down. I mean, how would one go about stealing an automatic car? How would the get away quickly if the car doesn't even go fast enough? Atleast police would have to worry about people trying run from them in one.\n\nIn the world of automotives, people have to be careful on what they buy. Is it safe for the family? Is it fun? Is it reliable? The risk is too high to have completely\n\nautomatic cars. There will always be something that could break, or just not work.\n\nIf they could make a car that is \"automatic\" but at the sametime can be controlled by a driver, then you have a product worth selling. At one moment if a mother needs to take care of her child, she could put the car into say something like an autopilot and take care of her child. But only for a short period of time would the thing work. Then if the roads are bad or say you need to be able to control the car from and accident then you could rely on the car and not have to worry about a thing. Yes it could still malfunction but, you are less likely to crash whne the roads are bad or someone is about to hit you.\n\nThere will never be a completely safe car but manufacturers have it down to where ford can automatically back up and parrellel park themselves with a camera. Cars will always be expensive, and cars will always be dangerous.",
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"content": "The topic of teaching arts as a mandatory subject in schools is often argued about. Some consider science as an essential part of school curriculum, while others reject it. I agree with the former approach due to its profound effects on child mental growth and creativity.\n\nOn one hand, advocates of arts lay stress on its positive impact on a child mental capabilities. They argue that art enables a child to think beyond their course books. These points are well supported by multiple renowned researches, including Harvard journal of education; these publications have empirically proven that art based activities foster creativity among children. This in my opinion, dispels the notion that arts is a wastage of time. Infact, arts is extremely important not just for a child mental growth but it also acts as a breath of fresh air for children studying tough subjects. \n\nOn the other hand, there are people who hold reservations against teaching art as an elementary subject in schools. They emphasize that learner's time is extremely precious and should not be wasted in art based activites. They believe that advanced subjects, in the domain of information technology, should be taught in place of arts to ensure maximum learning experience . Their judgement is founded on their past experience of taking arts as a subject and its non utilization later in practical life. These masses should be applauded for keeping ever increasing demands of our technolgy led society in mind. \n\nTo conclude protestors of teaching art as a core subject in school hold the opinion that it harnesses creative minds, while those oppose to this idea believe that it is a mere wastage of precious time. I am confident that arts is a vital tool to ensure creativity in this age of machines.",
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"content": "All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelfthat work I abhorthen also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us many people believe certain books banned schools opposite true students learn valuable life lessons books get deeper understanding past comprehend true meaning author s unique style Over years many wellwritten books censored list meaning risk removed library The ORGANIZATION CAPS examples books marked offensive These books written style bring different lesson every reader While one reader love story wear pages another get halfway never finish However belief freedom choice reading correct The classic example censored book Throughout book foul language used considered offensive However period time book written words considered wrong Books like saved older generations read however also realize parent allows children read book young age nothing done Nonetheless removing book library correct response Ever heard saying learn past mistakes Books fantastic way learn past fun enjoyable way They tool knowledge Removing book library like removing hundreds pages knowledge Every story unique style appeal others Many books give readers deeper understanding time period like book written ORGANIZATION known censored book beginning due somewhat dark gloomy aspects certain points throughout story How many kids see school carrying around one ORGANIZATION books They often state favorite book time If book removed library would cause many students never opportunity read fantastically written book unique style Throughout twelve years school students taught think make decisions How encouraging removing materials grasp If let students make simple decision whether read book teaching poor life lessons",
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"content": "Unmasking the face on Mars\n\nDo you think thiswas made by aliens or just a Natural Landform?\n\nIn my honest opinion i think it is a landform because over the years NASA has went and took pictures of it, looks just like a landform, and also the picture has been taken years ago.\n\nAlthough other people might not think this a landform, this picture had been taken many years ago and over the period of time the face started to dissapear a little bit. As i say that the face in 2001 is not there because they have been researching and reseraching and have found out that this picture has appeared on the JPL website which there has been no alien at all.\n\nHowever you might think that this picture has been taken of an Alien in the year 1976 around Mars, this could possibly be taken of an alien but we honestly don't believe it. This is a natural landorm in The American West called the \"Snake River Plain of Idaho\" as they recall . This picture actually shows the Martian equivalen of a butte or mesa landform? the size of the lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa is about the same size of the Face on Mars.\n\nFinally as i have told you all these reasons is that this picture has been taken over 20 years ago and this may look like it is a face but when things form like this it could look like something it is not. In this picture Some of us people think that is what has happened because 20 years ago it looked like a face but 14 years ago they have took a closer and better look at this picture and as they had done that they have realized it is not what is has seen to be.\n\nThank you for listening to what i have had to say about this but just remember that this \"face\" you have been looking at most likely is not a face. Some people think it is but if you look at the Snake RIver Plain of Idaho they look alike and The lava dome is the same height as the face on Mars. If you do not trust our judgment on this you could look up what this looks like because just becasue the movies, magazines, and books say this could be a face i most likely doubt that it is.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author great job creating mood One example author creates mood author says parents created traditional Cuban home heart kitchen That creates mood happiness love That s author shows saying created traditional Cuban home Making family feel back home made feel happy Also author makes mood passage My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today The author creates mood happy gratefulness The author shows saying love cooking Also saying still today I grateful Also memoir mood shown gratefulness line I always grateful parents Lastly author creates mood bravery caring It says mother father come country courage That line shows brave willing try something new cared child That mood created author",
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"content": "News helps us to be updated about things happening around the world. However, some highlight that media companies prefer to show what is profitable to them, therefore news is just another way to kill our time unnecessarily and there is no direct relevance to people`s lives. In my perspective, I strongly agree with the statement and the reasons for this will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirstly, there is no difference between a manufacturing company and a media company when it comes to their ultimate goal which is profits. Therefore most media companies prefer to show news which has little or no connection with people`s lives. For example, suicides and political dramas. Sadly, most people are interested to know such news simply to gossip with another or to kill their time, despite such news won`t bring any good for them. \r\n\r\nSecondly, media companies are reluctant to show good things happening around the world because they feel such news will make their customers bored. Therefore they prefer not to show them even if such news could help people to improve themselves. \r\n\r\n A recent survey done at Melbourne University found that 80% of the news is either sad or depressing which clearly indicates that reading articles or watching programs is just a waste of time. \r\n\r\nIn summary, all the media companies are money oriented and because of ,that they tend to show what excites the people even if that news has no value whatsoever. I strongly agree that news has no connection with the population`s lives and it is just another way for people to kill their time.",
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"content": "Have ever memorable time laughed hard friends family Well I know I several times friends family I love times laugh hard stomach starts aching really bad First one recent memorable laughing moments I spent mom I nt see often So moment meant lot imagine The last time came see older brother I went bowling She brought friend well My brother I nt bowled long time knew would still beat It turns mom beat though We lot great laughs actually I think first time I nt sore loser Although I m still sure beat would ball lane sideways would go right middle When moments like look back help hard times s really inspirational All really great laughs day shared mom Another memorable laughing moment spent dad brother Every awhile dad brother I sit living room talk several different things good bad They mom school animals three compassion sports These talks always mean lot never spend much time together We nt get spend much time together brother always school kind sport dad always work These conversations several effects sometimes sad times make feel better things There many laughable moments living room One thing always like laugh way dad always says album For reason thinks add another front spells alblum My brother I enjoy making fun moments like laugh That one many things love laugh Sometimes laughter important part someones life For someone edge upset saying something little make smile laugh makes difference world Laughter great way make people feel loved excepted also great way put people back track re I know smiles laughing makes feel much better inside I hope great laughing moments spent people love care",
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"content": "It is true that juvenile delinquency has been rampant, especially in metropolitan areas, in recent decades, leading to a whole host of other issues. Although some believe that violence in the media is what causes the increase in juvenile crime, some other causes should be taken into account as well. \n There are a number of reasons why juvenile crime is growing. First, since most teenagers nowadays have access to the Internet, juvenile crime becomes more organized, well-planned and secure than it was in the past. For example, most of the recruitment or crime planning work can be done seamlessly through a social network channel that vows to protect user’s privacy, making it a challenge for the police to prevent real crime in advance. Second, some large cities, like Chicago, are rife with drug trafficking targeting young adults. Plenty of evidence suggests that human’s brains are susceptible to the negative influence of drugs, which often triggers the desire to commit juvenile crime. \n Nevertheless, there are also a variety of solutions to alleviate this issue. First, Internet police can disguise themselves as normal young adults who wish to join those illegal groups for investigation and evidence gathering purposes. The police would have the opportunity to not only prevent the particular crime beforehand but also understand the underlying structure behind any contemporary juvenile delinquency. Second, law enforcement should take step to tighten drug control to ensure little to no drug supply in the market. For instance, increasing fines and penalties for drug-related activities would act as a deterrent for drug traffickers and buyers. \n In conclusion, the Internet and the drug industry are two contributing factors to juvenile crime. Internet police and law enforcement should cooperate to minimize the issue to a manageable level.",
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"content": "A patent person life mom Aicason mom patient always drives soccer events Soccer practice friends home places I need go Also spends money soccer hobbies things need sometimes want She never certain always kind sad anry takes lot time stuff us Also whenever havinn trouble school helps us study example events would spends sports every year thats including additional things like gear uniforms team stuff An example driving us places dedicates hour even driving brother places like cross country soccer basketball also helps us homework I needed help test stayed corily hours Also whenever I bad school encourages better still little discouraged wants good She also supports vegetarian even though means making two meals conclusion mom one patient people I know",
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"content": "There many things could affect affect cyclist Like said tomble weeds crossed path ridiculously large snake example would said Not two miles next section ride I noticed terrain changing Flat road replaced short rolling hills That features setting affect cyclist",
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"content": "More and more people are now facing fitness and health related issues due to poor quality of food intake. To tackle this problem, it is argued that government should increase tax on unhealthy foods. It is true that higher taxes can control the problem at certain limits, but I personally think that there are numerous other ways which is more convenient.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, people are more attracted to high fat or packaged foods and that is owing to the busy life they have. For example, in this contemporary age, everyone is constantly working for hours at their office and thus, they do not have time to cook meals at home and resulted in a buying of prepaid meals at cuisine courts such as Domino's, McDonald's, and so on. So, individuals will continue to eat unhealthy foodstuff, even after higher taxes. Consequently, the agenda of high fine will not fulfil, which is preventing people from consuming unhealthy meals.\r\n\r\nMoreover, instead of more levy, authority should encourage citizens to involve oneself in any physical activity. For instance, working people have done their task on a desk, so everyone lives a sedentary lifestyle which can also harm the health of them. By doing the exercises, it helps them to avoid health risks such as obesity or diabetes as well as leads to an improvement in well-being.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increment of levy on fast meal has limitations, therefore, I firmly disagree to impose higher taxes on junk food, while government has another more viable solution. Thus, public authority should support people by promoting healthy cooking and physical activities.",
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"content": "It is widely believed that, climate changes are a threat and warning human existence. While few people say that humans need to find more ways to live with ongoing climate variation instead of preventing the changes. This essay will discuss both sides and give a concluding view.\n\nOn one hand, climates changes are rapidly showing their effects on any living beings on the earth. If we can compare from past hundred years and now, there are an enormous number of changes which occurred and can be easily noted. Technology and the lifestyle of the people also matter much, meaning that, humans developed motor engines which run on petrol and diesel which causes pollution to nature. For example, a survey which was conducted in the US stated that most climatic changes occurred only due to human maintenance which he invents anything for his own benefit and thus nature is destroyed.\n\nOn the other hand, few people say that if humans do not find a way to live with changes in the climate, then human existence is questioned. In other words, if people have been adapting to environmental conditions that have been changing since inception it is proof that evolution happens with time. For instance, any person who has not adopted the changes cannot survive as he cannot mingle with anyone and might get into trouble in his living.\n\nTo conclude, I personally feel that any person need to get adopted to the climatic change and moreover, one must follow the basic ethics tinking about the nature and be responsible.",
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"content": "Compared to a method of storing information in the past, nowadays people opt the way to preserve information on the internet. From my perspective, although storing information on the online has some drawbacks such as a flood of inaccurate information represented by fake news, the benefits are more than the drawbacks, I will write this essay about my viewpoint. \r\n\r\n First of all, accessibility of information has changed as technologies advance. No matter of where you are, when you need and what you want to know, you can get a wide range of knowledge on the internet. It means that The stratification of data has disappeared, unlike in the past. If you have a laptop or phone, you will be able to know what happens on the other side of the globe. Therefore, everyone has equal access to information, which can be lead to result in enriching your life .\nIn addition, maintaining the lore on the World Wide Web would be better to store for new generations in the future. It is undeniable that the internet has the huge storage capacity that can save the knowledge in a long time while the books are damaged over the time and the writing on them may be faded. For examples, documents from the past dynasties have been damaged and omitted a lot. In contrast, the innovation of modern technology makes web sites grow up, but it will be hard to lose. Large and long-term storage capacity of the Net is a great help for mankind.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, Although many people have recently been troubled by fake news or information, the Internet, nevertheless, stands out for accessibility and capacity. I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.",
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"content": "As the world's technology advances, the human population is granted with many things such as smart televisions, cell phones that weigh less and do more, and computers with better software. Statistics say that the world will have a completely driverless car by the year 2020, but right now, car manufacturing companies have come out with a car that can drive by itself only most of the time. Cars should not be driverless because it is life threatening, pointless because you still have to pay attention to the road, and cost more than you ever need to spend on a vehicle.\n\nDriverless cars are very dangerous. They require some driving, and if the driver is not paying attention, they could crash. The car could also malfunction and go out of control, crash, or drive the off the side of the road.\n\nDriverless cars are pointless because the person would still have to do some driving. If a person's mind wanders off, an accident could happen. If a person that is not very good at paying attention gets into that car, something very bad could happen.\n\nDriverless cars cost way too much money. The money a person is willing to pay to have a driverless car can be put to much better use, like paying college tuition, buying a house, or even donating to charity! Wasting thousands of dollars just so a person does not have to drive as much is ridiculous! When did people get so lazy?\n\nTechnology is advancing and there is nothing the human population can do to stop it, but people that are smart enough to realize that driverless vehicles are\n\nvery dangerous and a waste of money could save a lot of lives by not driving one. Driverless cars are a bad idea because they are life threatening, pointless because you still have to pay attention to the roads, and they cost too much money. People should stick to driving regular cars!",
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"content": "People have different views on the roles of museums. While some believe that such places should be used for entertainment, I agree with the idea that the main purpose of museums is to educate people.\nOn the one hand, it can be argued that museums are to entertain visitors for some reason. Firstly, these storehouses provide a relaxing atmosphere, in which people may derive a sense of relief as a respite from their hectic lives. Secondly, other art events may be held in museums, which would be more enjoyable than collections of historical objects on display. For example, Vietnamese parents often take their children to visit local music museums as a family's common weekend activity since they relish participating in live concerts taking place there rather than considering the appreciation of exhibits. Finally, most visitors going to repositories of historical items may purely want to satisfy their curiosity about how exhibits look like, and this trend makes museums a destination for entertainment.\nOn the other hand, the primary purpose of treasure houses is for education. The display and description of exhibits should teach people about things in different areas. Those who expect to grasp a knowledge of what occurred in ancient times may find historical objects informative since they can shine a light on the recesses of history and society. For example, by observing artifacts and talks delivered by experts, visitors can easily imagine what practices ancestors used to forage and hunt for food, and this would be much more visual than any books or pictures. Furthermore, the collections of some species' specimens may also reveal their possible evolutionary trends in the future, which can be a useful source for scientifically researching and teaching. In turn, museums play a crucial role in teaching people about various aspects of life.\nIn conclusion, a museum can be an enjoyable place for entertainment, but it should be more focused on creating educational values.",
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"content": "A time I pacient Im gymnastics When trying learn new skill pacients key For example I learning new skill bars called cast hand stand difficult Day day I never could I put personl best ever day I pacient coach said He said day comes youll need keep trying best It could take days months even year get skill I wait day body skill said So I waited waited Tried tried still result getting new skill Finally four months I I got bar All waiting would That day coach told I told could takes time patience today day This time I use patcience get new skill I learned pacient hard wait see patience bring",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding Systems can tell alot about a person, even when a person techniacally doesn't speak a word. I do belive having these types of computers in a classroom is valuable. Having this in a class room also means you might not even need a teacher anymore, maybe just an instructor. Reasons why I believe this is a valuable is because technology is advancing, students faces don't lie, and this later on can lead to further inventions. Now, im going to say why I believe in these reasons.\n\nFirst, technology is advancing. Many schools have thrown out he old fashioned paper and pencil learning style. Many schools have computerized progams that students use majority of their time spent in school. As they said in the passage this stystem can detect when a student is getting bored, or even when a student is not understanding. Many students don't learn at a high learning pace, so having a computer progam that understands that and detects when a student is having trouble is good. A teacher can't be everywhere at once, so if a progam is able to detect that, and help the student thats also helps the teacher out.\n\nSecond, students faces don't lie. You would be able to tell a confused face from a mile away. If computers detected when students were confused this is an easier way of finding out what the student needs help with. If a computer program is explaining a subject step by step, and all of a sudden the computer detects the student becoming confused this helps a teacher know were a student became lost. Many students won't admit to them not knowing, they'll try and find a way to understand,but at the same time many won't.\n\nLastly, this one idea can lead to further inventions. It many more things you can create when it comes to face action recgonition. With technology running the world today you never know what somebody can come up with. For example, Apple uses face recgonition for a possible way to unlock your phone. Another example is robots. Another example is a face scanner that could take attendance for you as students come into your classroom. The Facial action coding can play a part in telling the child's mood as they enter. Technology is too advanced to not take takeover. If it was my call i'd say bring in the Facial Action Coding Systems.\n\nIn Conclusion, I do believe this is valuable. I belive it will help much more in a classroom than many people expect. My reasons with the technology being advanced, students face expressions, and the ideas can open further gateways to new inventions are some reasons on why I believe people should consider this to be in a classroom. With that being said, I do believe this would be valuable to a classroom.",
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"content": "If i ever face to face with someone that tells me they were formed by aliens i would kinda believe them. Because there's alot of wierd stuff out in this world like, birds dying for no reason. But i would ask that person to show evidence or prove it to me, or explain to me how was he formed. But what happened with mars its just a natural landform. It's a natural landform because alot of things happen because of nature\n\nThey found a formed of Jessus Cross in a tree, that doesn't mean God was there and drew the cross. No , It was part of nature. Also if a baby was born with six fingers desn't mean that the parents wanted a kid with six fingers because they though it was cool, it was because of part of nature and thats how the baby was born. In my oponion what happen in Mars about the face and stuff i think it just happened because it happened. Like problbly there was an earhquake that made that.\n\nAlso they were saying that they think that was form in the ancient times. I think thats dumb because they just found out that there might be live in Mars. If ancient lived in Mars then since along time scientist would of none that there is live in Mars instead of sending ships. But people these days dont know anything anymore. Or it could be because of other stuff that might of happened and we dont know about yet?",
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"content": "The author claims that investigating Venus's surface is worth our time even tho there are many dangers there, because Venus at one point in time may have had simliar feature that Earth does such as water, Venus has similar geological traits, and Venus is sometimes the closest planet to Earth making Venus a likely trip.\n\nScientist believe that one point in time Venus had oceans on its surface along with other life forms such as vegetation and maybe alien life. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" It would be a ground breaking discovery to man kind if we were able to discover a new form of life on another planet.\n\nUnder Venus's thick atmosphere and its giant corrosive clouds, the geological formation of Venus is similar to our planet. Venus has craters and mountains like we do on Earth.\"The planet has a surface rocky of sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" With such similar features to our home planet it makes Venus a likely option to send mankind to visit.\n\nDuring Earth's orbit, there are points in time were Mars is the closet planet to us and other times when Venus is the closest planet to us. Since Venus is closer to the sun it orbits faster than Earth while Mars is farther from the sun it has a slower orbit. Since Venus at points in time is the closest planet makes it a likely option to go visit.\" Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" With Venus being the closest planet at a given time makes it an ideal planet to study.\n\nI believe the author proves a valid point on why we need to travel to Venus, because Venus could have had really similar features to Earth at one point in time, Venus also has similar geological traits, and Venus is sometimes the closest planet to Earth. With that information given to us by the author makes the idea of studying Venus a worthy pusuit despite the many dangers there are.",
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"content": "In today's world, traffic congestion is an extremely difficult problem for commuters around the globe. A 10 minutes office to home ride had become a pathetic 40 minutes or even longer ride, spending one's valuable time on roads. This essay will explore some of the causes and recommended practices to reduce this issue.\r\n\r\nThe possible sources for increased traffic could be from several factors. Firstly, I consider migration of people from urban areas to cities in search of making a living as one of the primary reasons. This, in turn, leads to increased number of vehicles on the road. Based on a recent study conducted by the Transportation Department of London, there is a 20% surge in volume of car sale in the United Kingdom each year over the last decade. Secondly, failing to adhere to traffic rules is another factor contributing to the waiting time due to traffic.\r\n\r\nThe government and public should be pragmatic about the actions that will solve this issue. The government should encourage using public transport instead of personal vehicles because in my country one will hardly find a co-passenger in a car other than the driver. In addition, the traffic control department should implement stringent traffic rules, for instance, diverting traffic in peak hours on a particular avenue.\r\n\r\nIn summary, a rapid rise in the car users is one of a major reason for increasingly pathetic traffic congestion. The government and public should cooperate to reduce the number of vehicles by using public transport.",
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"content": "I belive that self driving cars are not for this century. I belive that they can wait till the next one. You should have plans for the future not just by tomorrow. Make the car worth the cost and the wait so the people can know it's going to be an actcul slef driving car. I belive that the people want what the are told about not something that they dream about. The people have been wating the self driving car since a lon time ago but they haven't had the technology to inhance the new sensors so that it can truely be self drive-able.\n\nThey have started this plan early but they are wanting it to be ready too soon.They should keep doing test to make it better not just put it on the road so quick. They don't know how the car would react with a crash what would happen if you were driving and when you didn't want the car to be in control but you couldn't switch due to the manufacturers. They should run more and better test before letting the driveless cars on the roads. You should try it on a lonley road with a few obsticauls so you can see the progress in the car manufacturers and so they can keep making imporvments.\n\nThe manufacturers are trying hard just to make it work but why try so hard if you can take your time to perfect the small things before fixing the big things? They have to learn that when they put this car on the road they have to have the driver focus not just chilling without paying attion to the road. You should just take it slow and wait for the technology to improve so you can deal with what you really need to focus on. People should be able to really have a self driving car not some car that just says there is something up ahead. They need more better technology so they can make the car the best it could be, because people aren't just going to buy a car fo the alerts they want the whole package.\n\nThe manufacturers shold look for someone who us willing to help them with the produce. They need money so they don't waste it and have to car go to waste, thay need to have the car really drive itself if they want it to be a big sucess, because if you just make a car that can alert you about something then you should just be better off driving a regular car. The maufacturers should wait so they have the best technology that they can get to make the car completely slef drivable, like who really wants to drive in a car on a long trip just listening to the car telling you what to do? You should rather have the car drive completely self with some technology that only you can just sit a realax until your desition. You would rather have the car take you instead of you in control, yet you want to just make it to where it drives bearaly by itself not completely? I guess you guys don't want it so bad after all it is just a car that tells you about what's up ahead. I rather have a car with it self driving at it's best not at it's worst.\n\nSo if you really want to make a self driving car then make it. Do not just make a car that can beareally even go by itself. You should shoot for the best not the 2nd best, but I'm not the one wanting them so it's up to the manufacturers to make the car if they want it to be a sucess. This would be like the best thing anyone has seen in the last centries for a long time.",
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"content": "It is debatable issue that getting education from university or college is the great route to a successful career . Although a section of society asserts that it 's better to get job after school , I believe that it is beneficial to get eduction from university or college.\n\nOn the one hand , some type of knowledge we are not able to get from the school only . Firstly , in schools we learn more about theoretical than practical knowledge. However , college and university we develop our skills which enhance our capabilities",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The biggest obstacle finding safe way New York City densely populated area type accident would horrific owners realized When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners empire state building realized much worse accident couldve taken place densely populated area Another obstacle nature The wind top building strong says The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currants Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around mooring mast Safety clearly biggest concern",
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"content": "The author probably used last paragraph show time next year going take The author writes paragraph show failed test geese going away winter hibiscus blooming",
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"content": "On The Empire State Building announced reach height feet Al Smith architect building mentioned top would ornamental It said amazing dream would come true aviation pioneers The building going mooring mast top docking new airships called dirigibles otherwise known blimps This thought great idea Things nt quite turn originally planned Fate struck As fate struck things apparent ever constructed Resons Most blimbs outside states run hydrogen rather helium hydrogen flammable Winds top building constantly shifting causing dirigible swivel would disaster anything happen New York City pedestrians holds Another law law close airships building Thus still leaving Empire State Building feet never completing original goal",
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"content": "Despite the dangers, the author believes that studying Venus is worth pursuing because it can help us understand more and know what the planet Venus was like years ago. On paragraph 2 of the article \"The Challenges of Exploring Venus\", the author states that Venus is often reffered to as Earth's \"twin\" since it is the closest (aside from Mars) looking to Earth when is comes to desity and size. The author feels Astronomers may find existing life forms since most of Venus was probably covered in large oceans and Venus still, has some look-alike features to Earth such as; Valleys, moutains and craters. Since Venus is the nearest planet to Earth, many Astronomers also believe Venus could be our option for planetary visit, the planet is safe for humans to survive in anyway. On paragraph 8, the author states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet istelf, but also becuase human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally endeavors.\" meaning, traveling to Venus could have some good surprises waiting. The author also states in that very paragraph, \"Our travels on Earth and beyong should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Meaning he is all for dangers as long as he is able to meet the \"very edges of imagination and innovation\" as he quotes.",
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"content": "In this article we are shown positive and negative stand points of smart cars. My standpoint for this argument is that I am for it. These cars can be safer, but it may take some time. Cars that could drive by themselves can help us be safer and help save money for whoever purchases them. Although some negative standpoints shows the bad parts of the cars, but through time all these problems will eventually be fixed.\n\nThese smart cars would be very safe compared to people now. There would be less human influenced accidents. No more sleeping at the wheel, drunk/intoxicated driving, and many more. In the text it shows how safe these cars can be by using the binary code or just sensors to help keep the car able to drive by itself and safely.\n\nThese cars can be the future to safety and better yet the saving on money for everyone.\n\nSmart cars can save a lot of money for whoever purchases them by no tickets, gas would be lower, and no accidents and fixes to the car. These cars wouldn't recieve a ticket because they are taxis designed to follow the laws and keep everyone safe. The smart cars would more than likely be electric, but if they were gas they would know how to conserve gas and not accelerate like a maniac. In the text the author shows how these cars would use sensors to navigate around. Sensors may cost a lot, but the car dealerships won't make the cars extremely expensive or they wont be able to sell them. The sensors I believe would cost the most on the car. Also if the smart cars did hit the streets the cars would not be in accidents or any at all. These cars are mainly designed on safety for the road. Although these cars are extremly safe for the passengers and everyone on the road, the car is extremely safe for the enviorment.\n\nThese cars are very safe and can help with a lot of money. These cars can help the world with so much safety and so much money used in oil. These cars are the future and if it takes time it just means they are making them better and better. All these safety measures convince me that smart cars would be the best for the future of the world and the enviorment.",
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"content": "A time I patient I school I waiting sience teacher call get ready go I siting seat She calling people stand door get ready go next class",
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"content": "The innovation of using the new technology known as Facial Action Coding System (FACS) would be an invalubale asset in any classroom across the globe as it's complex algorithms can make learning more beneficial by reading individuals for what they require than it go unnoticed.\n\nWith FACS installed in each classroom, students would become more focused and better at managing class time rather than wasting it by other means. The excerpt quotes Dr. Huang,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(P2, L7-8). This statement details how FACS can keep students invested in the lesson with optimal intake of course material as the level of emotional feedback allows it to continuously make improvements on itself to assist students with comprehension and prevent negative emotions.\n\nStudents would also gain access to more interactive material such as educational media that would allow them to further their own understanding of topics held in the classroom. The text states,\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive--for video games or video surgery.\"(P6 L 8-10). This opens up a variety of possible academic applications with students being able to perform interactive virtual surgeries or increase their social adequency by speaking in front of large, virtual crowds more effectively as facial expression can give them incite on their performance and the list goes on. This facial reading technology can boost gaming and simulated platforms that make the students more eager and\n\nwilling to learn and try new educational things by taking and giving facial input.\n\nAlong with all of the individualized educational benefits in the classroom, this technology can also improve the moods of student that could make the schooling environment more easy going. The text says, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but may even help produce them.\"(P9 L2-4).This details that students who would smile more in class knowing it is being monitored, may truly smile by the end of it because the collective group of students would gradually raise the atmosphere of the classroom into a friendly environment with high spirits. This would not only make the learning process run smoothly, but also decrease stress in students and increase productivity.\n\nAn argument could be made that the constant monitorization can make students anxious or feel as though their right to privacy is being breached, but in reality, classrooms are already like this. Students who use school loaned computers only have access to education material and any teacher may pull up what is on the students screen regardless of permission. But by choosing FACS, it would make the student feel more comfortable as they know that the computer is monitoring their expressions in order to make life simpler and is always best suited for them. Over time, they will be accustomed to it and maybe even regard it as best part of the learning experiance growing up in a rapidly evolving, technology-based world.\n\nIn conclusion, by integrating this facial expression reading software into school systems, students will gain many new oppertunites to get the most out of their education. Not only would they be able to keep pace with the objectives of each class with ease and a smile, but they would be able to leave each day having learning or done a task with immediate input by computer generated expressions that are reassuring of how well the student did. For the best possible education, this system creates and maintains the academic environment needed to have all students be prosperous and effective individuals when it is time for them to become apart of the real world.",
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"content": "Some people argue that the advertising have a double edged sword. Although, they have good effects for economy, they are able to bad effects for individual. I strongly believe that the advertising have negative effects people and society. \r\n\r\nWhen it comes to positive effects, when people need to somethings and they want to chang to new things. they are able to say \" this is that here is it \".The advertising help that people makes finding things easier. That is a big benefit. Also, advertising increased consumption. People of watching the advertising is thought that desire to buy the products. AS a result, that creates a beneficial economic cycle of selling and buying. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people spend money for they buy unnecessary things who watching the advertsing. Because, the advertising make charming to the products. In addition,they make my think that my have things are not less charming than brand new things.That make me unhappy. Also, the advertising world of people made are very perfect and nice view. that is not real world, But, people compre to their real world and advertising world. And then, their think that my life is bad and feel dissatisfiy. that has positive effets on individual.\r\n\r\nThe mentioned above that I think the advertising have negative effects more than positive effects. Absolutely, The advertising is very important in the social community, But, too much is not good. Information from advertising is able to very useful. If the advertising have truth and clear.",
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"content": "Many people base actions views What appear justified minds due beliefs might cause uproar others One instance media censorship It happens every day every place Someone take upon selves mind make piece better viewing In reality though really ruining experience media everyone else even impeading rights granted us constitiution First books library Everytime I go library pick books always one book bad parts marked Someone found words offensive decided one see read To irritating I nt always like words either marked distracting page ruins author s voice style writing hence impairing I draw book Some markedout words nt always offensive others either Simply put find book offensive nt read Others enjoy whether share views People also take liberty simply removing whole pieces media shelves find offensive If everyone removed anything nt like found offensive would nothing left world anyone enjoy We citizens right make choices choices limited views certain individuals That means I want read view something available I learn expand views even makes someone else uncomfortable With nearly every disputable form media comes people harangue producers say piece never made Wrong Producers authors publish whatever would like It s called right garunteed us citizens And learly pieces like produced people read Plain simple You might maybe neighbor even relative offended might read Supply demand If everyone found offensive one would buy read would longer produced You would get way But Some people read produced Again nt like nt read People take upon censor others ca nt see read If someone wants read story bad words Others ruin experience marking words rude ruining experience reader also destroying someone else s property If someone wants view something certain religion They right one take right away In opinion censorship libraries whether government civilians allowed We citizens allowed right make choices libraries allowed read watch whatever want Choice one prinicples constitution protected limited",
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"content": "Working in a multinational company requires shift timing, while some groups of folks say that many people have jobs at night. Because of ,that a person needs to settle themselves according to time and their daily life cycle breaks because of that and to overcome this problem companies should provide the minimal amount of breaks and also start the weekend leaves as permanent.\r\n\r\nFirstly, talking about time-shifting at multinational companies, will mostly affect their bodies because the body needs time to set with the shift timing and if they don't get used too with that, the body will start becoming less energetic and this directly increases the stress level in their lives. The body needs time to heal and that is not possible if they don't get enough sleep because of that the body affects the most. For example, in ,India there are so many associations which are ties with The USA and they have to work as per their timing and mostly in ,USA they are 7 hours ahead of us so the employees have to work at night. In a long time, their body will automatically start making pains and increasing stress levels.\r\n\r\nTo solve this problem the firm should definitely do one thing which makes the weekend leaves permanent and let their staffs enjoy without even getting any pressure from work. Like with the help of that one will feel more rejuvenate and fresh and even they can deal with their stress and live with their loved one. To exemplify, The Fedora company which is known for weekend leave and company works mostly at night so the leaves make their employees more energetic and pump up their energy.\r\n\r\nIn nutshell, many people's affected by the night shift and that makes their life more stressful and affect their cycles and to overcome the issue the popular community should implement weekend off and that indirectly pump up themselves.",
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"content": "There is a lot of discussion whether or not to keep the Electoral College. The electoral college is the process in which we vote for our next president. It was established in the Constitution by our founding fathers, which was a really long time ago. So why do we still use the Electoral College? The Electoral College is completely outdated. We need to get rid of the Electoral College now!\n\nWhy are we still using the Electoral College to vote? It's extremely confusing. What if you vote for the wrong elector? That sometimes happens which is unfair to voters. We should be able to just directly vote for the president we want. If we could just vote for the president we want, not the electors, it would be so much simplier. Why confuse the citizens of the U.S. when you could just make things easier for us? The Electoral College is a way to confusing process to vote for our president. It's time to update the way we vote.\n\nPeople think they're voting for the president, but really, they're just voting for electors. That is completely unfair. Why not just vote for the president of your choice? The citizens cannot always control who the electors vote for. How unfair would that be if the elector you chose, decided to vote for the president you didn't want? Also, the electors can be just anyone. They can be anyone not holding public office. Depending on what state you're in, either the state conventions, the states party central committee or even the presidential candidates can pick the electors. Why even bother going through all that trouble when you could just vote for the president you want? It's way more easier.\n\nThere are so many things that could go wrong when using the Electoral College process to vote. What if there is a tie in the electoral votes? Then who does the state choose? That would throw everyone off guard. Why have to even worry about that when you could just vote the president of your choice? It's ridiculous that we still use the Electoral College to vote. Also, we could choose the wrong elector when voting and that would really make people mad.\n\nThe Electoral College is outdated, confusing, and just way to complicated. Why go through the trouble of having to make sure you vote for the right elector, when you could just vote for the president of your choice. It's completely irrational how we still use the Electoral College to vote. You're not voting for the president you want, but for electors to choose the president. You can't always control who the electors vote for. There are a handful of things that could go wrong. We just need to get rid of the Electoral College once and for all.",
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"content": "Venus is a interesting planet cause of its Evening star which it a bright light and is a second planet of the sun when you look at Venus the density , size and distance gets the attention till where you want to discover the parts and ideas of it. the diferences about a spacecraft is that people wanted spacecraft to land on earth but it didn't work due to no survival that couldn't land more than a few hours thats why this planet is challenging for humans to study the reputations want people to be confused and get the meaning of this. Atmosphere is thick 97 percent carbon dioxide so temperatures goes up 800 degrees F and on earth the atomsphere is 90 times greater.\n\nSister Planet and Venus are the same thing its the better planet in the solar system which used to be covered in oceans and could supported peoples life just like the Earth. its rocky sediment and has features which are valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nNASA is working on venus the samples of rock, gas etc. are not working to take the samples its rough so a scienctist knows thay venus needs to be close to do their own vperonsal depsite risk for it to last. NASA working to get other people to study this and have advice.",
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"content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is able to suggest and back up their claim of Venus being a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers by stating facts showing how science and technology will help us in the pursuit of exploring to Venus. They gets us concerned by stating the perrils of exploring venus. Then they state why the audience should be interested in exploring Venus, and proceeds to counter the perrils by stating technological advancements being made to lessen the extreme environment on Venus.\n\nThe author shows the perrils by first stating the dangers and compare them to intense atmospheres on Earth, such as how the ground temperature on Venus is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and would instantly melt most metals. Another example that he gives would be when they states that the gravitational pull of Venus would crush a submarine that was meant to explore the deepest depths of the ocean at Earth. One more example of this would be when says that staying above it is still a danger because of how hot and unbearable it would be. Those are the situations that he has listed.\n\nAfter saying all the dangers of exploring Venus the author decides to mention why scientists are still attempting to explore the dangerous planet. An example would be that Venus is very much like Earth. In the article the author mentions Venus and Earth having many of the same features, such as mountains and valleys as well as evidence showing Venus possibly containing water and oceans. Another thing the author tells us is that the planets orbit at different times, so at times Earth may be closest to Venus, and other times we are closer to Mars. Those are all reasons why scientists wish to explore Venus further.\n\nThe author, after having told us the conditions and reasons to explore Mars goes further. The author then states technological advancements being made to help survive the conditions on Venus to obtain samples and such. An example the author gives us would be mentioning A device that would lessen the conditions on Venus to make it at least tolerable. Another example would be creating a lab that would create the same atmosphere as venus so scientists could create machines capable of surviving the harsh environment. Those are all examples stated in the text.\n\nAfter stating the perils, the motivations, and the advancements towards Venus, the author is able to canvey their message in a clear and concise way. The evidence used to back up their claims are able to show how important Venus is to Scientists and mankind alike. Venus should be further explored despite have harsh conditions because it's the closest thing to Earth. There are also technological advancements being made to adapt to Venus in order to possibly inhabit Venus.",
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"content": "There are a number of young students who are leaving school with a certification and still can not find a job. This essay will explain on the effects and provide some methods to avoid the unemployee volume.\r\n\r\nEducation is an essencial program for any type of academic schemes and most of the school were lacking on the physical practice on their courses which cause students would unable to handle when they go into an industry enviorment. For example, live sound music is a typical position to rely on both perspectives which are the academic and physical practice. To become a candidate, he or she has to be able to manage the pre-prodction work that means to order a list of the equimpments and also be aware to operate an audio console. Not many of the employers would provide an opportunity that allowing fresh man to manage the hardware gears while working. So it is obvious young individual are hardly to hunting the jobs these days.\r\n\r\nBy contrast, if the insititue or any type of the education would provide the physical perform on their procedure that would be easier to connect in the real industry when students leaving the school with the legitable certifications. For instance, learning a course might associate with an organization and the students would received a completion letter once they achieve the program. However, it would be eligible for their professionalism and get the first ticket to go into a company.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, learning academic in school could be easier than before but it is hard to predict this generation could be able to go into the real world when they left the university or college. If the education department can implement a contract between the school and company while they are learning that would be improve the connection from the reality.",
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"content": "The Face that you had seen in 1976 is simply a natural land formation. The picture its self is quite old as well and the camera must not be as modern as the ones we used in 2001. When we took a much clearer picture of the mesa, it showed that it was just a normal mesa with some parts abit higher than others which made it look like a face because of the shadows. The suns angle of its sun rays made it look like a face but its is just a coinsidence.\n\nAll these theorists lack knowledge of natural landforms because all they want to do is stir up the people to make them believe this was work of aliens. All these movies and articles on magazines and radio talk is just to get more attention to the Face.\n\nAlthough it would be extraordinary if there was ancient life on Mars. If there was we would have been able to see any ships or building made from aliens on Mars in the picture but there wawsn't because we took a perfect picture on a cloudless summer day. We saw no such things near the face because it is simply a mesa landform. The picture we took was 1.56 meters per pixel when the picture taken in 1976 was 43 meters per pixel, meaning that anything small that you might think is a building we would have seen it clearer and it might just have been a big boulder or hill.\n\nThere for all of your conspiracy theories about aliens roaming the surface of Mars is wrong because the Face was not created by any aliens. People need to understand it is just a mesa land formation that had shadows that looked like a face caused by hills on the mesa and the suns rays hitting it at an angle. If you don't belive me fine, we have proof of it not being aliens, the new picture tells it all.",
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"content": "Cars are starting to beome more and more expensive everday. Why pay when a person could either usea train,bike,or just walking. Stated in soure 1 \"As a result, 70 percent of vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here...\" Many people are glad that they had sold thier car because it just cost to much money for others. Therefore many people need to limit their car usage.\n\nTo begin with, Cars could have many flaws that may infect the environment or humans. Stated in source 2 \"After dats of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" So because cars take in gas it may effect the environment because inside of the car is more chemicals a that comes out of the exhust system. Stated in Soure 1 \"Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill to be apporved this year, Mr. Goldberg said.\" this may be true because gas prices may go down and the environment will stay clean. However, waiting for public may mean waiting for a couple of hours. But when having a car a person can get to their event or job on time. Stated in Source 3 \"The day without cars is part of an improvent campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s.\" Maybe if the United States started to start a campaign then maybe their wouldn't be so much smog in the air thats pulluting the environment.\n\nAlso, in America many people would never give up their cars just for the looks. Stated in Source 4 \"But America's love affair withits vehicles seems to be cooling.\" So i guess that would be a great start for the environment for America. But how long will America last with out a vehicles? From my point of view, not for long that's my opinion. Although, stated in Source 4\" Whether members of the millennial generation will start buying more cars once they have kids to take to soccer practice and school plays remains an open question.\" In my opinion i wouldn't take a bunch of kids on the train just to get to school or to a soccer game and then once that is all over with then have to get back on the train just to take tem back home. Anything can happen. That's why having cars have pro's and Con's. But others may think of the train ride as bonding time or just getting to know the full team better.\n\nStated in Source 3 \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city;uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic.\" So having cars helps everyone a lot less accidents would happen and park and sports centers are making good profit. So now everyone could be happy and go on with their life. Stated in Source 4 \" With all these changes , people who stopped car cummuting as a result of the recession may find less reson to resume the habit...\" I would totally agree with these , because when u stop driving it means more money and better health.\n\nFinally, cars should be limited for many reasons. Limiting car usage would many better health and less gas, and also less accidents on the road. Stated in Source 4 New York's new bike-sharing program and its syrockiting bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new pririties.\" Therefore many jobs aren't complainig about the less car usage and some people aren't complaining about it. Many people should stop using cars to help the environment out and to get into shape.",
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"content": "In contemporary society, there is a sense of discomfort about the way the articles convey the affluent’s private lives in the entertainment industry. While many individuals suppose that these individuals should accept that due to their considerable fame, I hold the opposite viewpoint.\r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that some individuals who work as celebrities, such as actors, models, etc., suffer from the pressure of society on their professional and personal lifestyles. The media enterprises do this to obtain more notoriety and ratings for their prestigious companies. Therefore, they frequently invade their privacy by highlighting terrible circumstances in front of the public, which is considered a disgraceful act. For example, Nguyen Thuc Thuy Tien, Miss Grand International 2021, was sued by another woman about the non-payment of a debt. This will have a detrimental impact on her reputation and credibility.\r\n\r\nMoreover, I believe that each resident has their own privacy because every person is a separate individual. Thus, the unduplicated individual has the right to live and do everything they enjoy without breaking the law. Not to mention their significant contributions to the development of society as a whole as well as international contributions, especially in the entertainment industry. For example, actor Tran Thanh, the films he has made have made great contributions to Vietnam's cinema, not only attracting the attention of domestic but also international audiences. Consequently, he can use the revenue to do charitable activities and assist the poor with problems they have encountered in their lives.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that should respect and understand that everyone, including celebrities, is entitled to privacy and personal space. They, too, have the independence of keeping their secrets to themselves. Hence, the media should refrain from prying into celebrities’ personal lives.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\n\"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens\"(Office of the Federal Register1). Thus, the Electoral College is a balance of votes that includes many different sources for which the President is elected. For this, the Electoral College should be retained due to its contribution to successful elections even though there are some instances which occur and to help the elections remain fair and equal. Additionally, this process should be continued, but there are certain aspects that would argue for changing the aged process.\n\nIn Richard Posner's, \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President,\" he incorporates in his defense, that the electoral votes are awarded in a winner-take-all basis, which means that the states play an important role in the deciding factor of who will become the next President. Posner explained theoretically, \"In [2012's] election, for example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 perecnt of the popular votes cast for him and Romney... even a slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state\" (Posner 1). With this, this shows that the state votes are important and essential to the canidates who are trying to obtain electoral votes in the states. Thus, this method or process is successful in ways many people do not aknowledge. The citizen's votes do matter, when every aspect is put into a big picture and taken into account. Furthermore, the Electoral College alllows for everyone to have the chance to be apart of the elections. The Office of the Federal Register explains, \"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress\" (The Office of the Federal Register 1). This adds suppprt that at the end of the election, almost every part of an election including votes, is taken into consideration, thus making the election a sucessful one.\n\nIn The Office of the Federal Register's excerpt, \"What Is The Electoral College,\" there is certain reasons that further divulge how the Electoral College is fair and equal to the canidates and the citizens who are voting. This is reliterated when The Office of the Federal Register statees, \" Your state's entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its Congressional Delegation: one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for your Senators...(Office of the Federal Register 1). In addition this means that each state will receive an opportunity to have a meaningful vote to the elections because every state has the same kinds of members being awareded to them. Each state will have a different number of members due to the size, but they will all be of equal value to the canidates. To add for support, Posner says, \"No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president\"(Posner 1). With this, all the states understand that their vote is crucial to the election and the canidates. Fortunately, the Electoral College is fair and equal to all the state's voting in the election, sometimes even more than some states know. For example, Posner states, \" Voters in toss up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign-to really listen tp the competing candidates-knowing that they are going to decide the election\"(Posner 1). Ultimately, the Electoral College is the most fair way to decide and vote for a future president who will be our leader of all the citizens.\n\nLastly, the Electoral College is the best way to determine a president, but there are some flaws. For example, Plumer explains, \"... Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but list the presidency over 60 percent of the voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now\" (Plumer 1). The elecotral college could alter the outcome of an election dramtically. Another issue that Plumer wants people to know is that, \" Under the electoral collge sysytem, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors...\" (Plumerr 1). This is true but also could be a little dramatic. Ultimately, the citizens are the ones who are voting for the candidates not the electors. Without the vote from the citizens there would be no electors. The Electoral College process should still be kept even though there are some issues.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is very important to our modern day elections. The citizens and the states determine who the next Presidents will be. The process provides successful elecions which are fair and equal to not only the people, but the states. Posner states, \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a poltiacl preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election\" (Posner 1). The Electoral College makes sure that every person and state vote is accounted for and will be contributed to who the next President will be. One day maybe there will be a process that will exceed the Electral College, but for now, we will trust our founding fathers and keep the process that has been with us since the start.",
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"content": "In the 21st century, the world has become a global village .Due to inflation, nothing comes cheap therefore people turn into human machines to earn money to survive . One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that directors of big companies are paid more than the regular staff. The assertion seems quite controversial across the globe. Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. A good count of people believes that it's beneficial while others claim that it is unfair to the employees. Whether to agree or not it's a tough-provoking question. As far as I can see it's more justified to agree with folks who thought it is necessary to pay high to the directors. In the further essay , I will not only shed light on the issue but also elaborate on my point of view regarding the statement.",
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"content": "The Electoral College. A process not a place. The Electoral College was established by the founding fathers as a compromise between election of Presidents. It works by a popular vote by qualified citizens. I am aganist the Elctoral College because it is unfair to voters and the voters don't vote for the Presidant they vote for the slate of electors.\n\nWhy is it unfair to the voters? Now it's unfair to the voters because of the winner take all system. Candidates don't spend time in states they knoiw they have no chance in winning, so they foucs on the \"swing states\" In the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't get spoken to by any candidates at all. If anyone has a argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio.\n\nVoters dont vote for the President. They vote for the slate of electors. Electors are and can be anyone that deosn't hold a postion in a public office. Now we the people dont pick the electors in the first place. Depending on the state, sometimes the state party's central committee choose, sometimes the presidential candidates choose them self. Voters can sometimes contorl whom their electors vote for, but not all the time. Sometimes the voters get confused about the electors and they go off voting for the wrong candidate. To me that's un-fair to the voter because they are not voting for the presidant but for an a elector that can mess up and vote for the wrong candidate.\n\nSo concludeing to me claim, I'm aganist the Electoral College because it's unfair to the voters ts's self and that the voters dont vote for Presidants, but for electors.",
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"content": "Even though the era of driverless cars seems to be approaching at a quick pace, I would not expect these inventions to take off. Driverless cars at first come off as worthy devices for transportation, but they will soon enough come into contact with conflicts and difficulties. When looking at these types of cars, one must consider factors such as safety and convienence. Could this new mode of transportation really be great of society? Driverless car development should be reduced and held off.\n\nLaws across the states, except for those such as California, Nevada, and Florida, have restricted aspects of driving that would enable the use of the driverless car. Most focus on keeping the people in general safe from harm. Let one say, however, that driverless cars are allowed to become more used and tested within the United States. New laws would have to be created in order to figure out who is liabile for accidents. Would it be the manufacturer or the driver at fault? Driverless cars would have to jump obstacles such as liabilities and state restrictions inorder to even be considered for use.\n\nIn addition to state conditions, the conditions of safety and attention for the driver must also be considered. As the car drives itself, the passengers in the device may not even be paying attention to the events at hand. Sure, manufacturers have made ways for the car to catch someone's attention, such as viberations or flashing lights, but such means can't always be reliable. What if the passenger or \"driver\" is asleep or even medically impaired? Many will probably look at the driverless car as a means of safe transportation due to a physical or mental disability. Accidents are prone to happen if the car itself can't be relied on one hundred percent without human skills.\n\nLastly, there is a possiblility that this new mode of transportation won't have enough of a budge to take off. Even if the new car seems like a great invention, it might be too expensive to pull off. For example, Google's Toyota Prius uses multiple sets of technology, such as radar sensors, laster beans, and cameras. If one were to mass produce such a complex device, it'd surely take mass amounts of resources and money to construct. Furthermore, will drivers be attracted to driverless cars? They might wonder whats the point of getting in the car if it has the chance of still needing human correction. The chances of this new technology becoming more popular with society is low and unpromising.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars have a numerous case of setbacks. Federal and state restrictions when it comes to driving handicap the cars from being used widely. Not all drivers will be capalbe of using such devices and everyone should be accomandated for. Money and interest also have to be considered before even launching such a complex invention. Driverless cars come with too many aspects that should set it back in development in the upcoming years.",
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"content": "Twenty five years ago, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around the plant snapping pictures to find its sistership Viking 2, but they came across something bigger! A face on Mars! what some people would of seen were... eyes, nose, and a mouth. When thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting for the picture to first appeare, some were upset because they maybe had thought there was life on Mars, but sadly it turned out only to be a landform. Their commn around the American West, it indeed looked like a face. Mission controllers perpared to look again.\"it's not easy to target Cydonia,\" says Garvin \"in fact, it's hard work.\" Mars Global Sureyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks striaght down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. \"we jsut dont pass over the Face very often,\" he noted. Although few scientist believed the Face was an alien arttifact, taking oictures of Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in Setp. 1997,\n\neightteen long years after the Vikings missions ended. \"we felt this was important to taxpayers\" explained Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration program. \"We photographed the Face as soon as we got a good shot at it.\"",
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"content": "\"Unmasking the Face on Mars\"\n\nUnmasking the Face on Mars tells us about the face that was on Mars. Everyone think it is created by aliens.I think it is just a natural landform. I say this because in the story \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" in paragrapgh 1 it said \"When it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia\".\n\nI feel like they just spotted the photo in just took a picture of it. Other people think it is alien movement going on up in Mars.Ithink that because in paragraph 6 it said \" ALthough few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact photograpghing Cydoina bacame a priority for NASA when Mars Global Survyer (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended.\" They are saying some of the scientists do feel like it was an alien movement.\n\nI think some of the scientists are trying to tell other peopleit is a alien movement to. In paragraph 5 it said \" The \" Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. It has started in\n\nhollywood flim, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspireacy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an civilization on Mars.\n\nI think it is a landform because they just took pictures of it. They didnt see any type of movement. In when people are sent to out of space they would have seen aliens, but they didnt. Now people are trying to bring up all the aliens things. If we had aliens we would have known by now. So, I don't see why people are trying to say we have aliens on Mars. If there were aliens they would be in a label testing right about now. People would know. Everyone tell and say things on Facebook so it would have been going around by now. We don't have aliens. I say its just a natural landmark. They just took pictures of it.\n\nIn paragraph 7 it said \" And on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydoin for the first time, Michael and his Mar Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times shaper than the oringal picture Viking photos. Thousand of anxious web surfers web site were wating when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing. . . a natural landform. There was an alien monument after all.\" So, they are basically saying there wasn't a alien after all.\n\nAlso in paragraph 9 it said \" In fact its hard work.\" \" Mars global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that normally looks striaght down and scan the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips.\" \"We just don't pass over the FAce very often,\" he noted. H is basically saying they don't go over the face very often.They went over it to prove to people it wasn't a alien movement.",
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"content": "The new technology called the Facial Action Coding System would be invaluable in the classroom setting. This technology would be invaluable to the students in a classroom becuase it can tell a students' emotions and change whatever is happening based on what emotions are being expressed.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can tell what emotions students are conveying on their face, and change whatever is happening in the classroom to make the activity better for the students. According to the article entitled \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" written by Nick D'Alto, \"For example, if you smile when a Wed ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\" (Paragraph 6). If a student is working on a reserach project on the computer, and a helpful ad pops up, the student will smile, or show interest, causing similar ads to appear later. This will make the project research easier for the student to complete. According to the aformentioned article, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts (Note: Dr. Huang is the inventor of the Facial Action Coding System). 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'\" (Paragraph 6). Let's say you are in a classroom and the lesson is really boring. You would have a bored expression on your face, right? Then this software would be very valuable in a classroom, because it would change the lesson to better interest the students in the class, making lectures or long assignments possibly less boring. Finally, for students wanting to go into gaming or medicine, this technology would be great in their classrooms. According to the previously stated article, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery\" (Paragraph 6). The faces on video games would, as the quote said, make the faces \"more expressive,\" which would cause less boredom and confusion in the classroom. Afterall, \"'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication'\" (Paragraph 6). That is, again, according to the article entitled \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto.\n\nFacial Action Coding System (FACS) would be incredibly valuable in the classroom. Think about it, it can see the students' emotional expressions (on their faces) and change the lesson or whatever is occurring in a classroom to meet the students needs. When a student is bored, they do not take in the necessary information being revealed to them, but when a student is not bored, they take in the needed information and learn what they need to. That is why the Facial Action Coding System (FASC) would be invaluable to the students in a classroom setting.",
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"content": "Nowadays, parents have their own choice to send their kids to a single school or co-educational school. However, certain people believe that single-sex school are not for good apply students as compared to co-educational schools.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, parents can have the authority to choose whether they want to send their children to a mixed school or a single school. As a result, parents are the ability to think and they know what is best for their kids. They have choices in the schools. In recent years, co-educational is not provided in every society but nowadays we can see in every community there is an option to choose. Most apply people believe that students are more self-confident in mixed education for example they can speak in front of the stage more positive way and they can think more creatively.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Most people feel that if their toddlers or children study in single-sex school later they face problems in life. They don't have the mental ability or power to think more wisely as compared to students who study in co-educations. co-educational schools provide different environment than single-sex schools that is why in society people prefer to send their children to mixed schools so that they be more confident.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, these days people like to send their kids to co-educational school and i agree with that because students will be thinking more creative, more up to date and more confident in mixed gender schools as compare to single schools. As a result, people are more focusing on co-educational system school rather than the single school.\r\n\r\n.",
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"content": "I believe that the face on Mars is just a natural landform. I think this because there has because the time the picture was taken, it was a time when Mars was cloudy. Even though my opponet may think that there is life on Mars and NASA would rather hide this information, the conspiracy would instead help NASA with their budget. The face located on Mars would indeed look alien-like, but according to Jim Garvin, cheif scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum reolution.\" Each pixel in in the 2001 imae spans1,56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. This is saying that the 2001 image of the face on Mars was more clear and easier to see than the image of the face in 1976. There is even landforms found common around the American West that show relation to the face on Mars. Many speculations have been made about the face on Mars, but most have been inlogical or unreasonable to the information at-hand. The facutal evidence that has been shown is more reasonable than the evidence of the ones who think that the face was caused by alien act.",
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"content": "Do you want to live and see your family another day? If you say yes to this then help us take a stand against these driverless cars. These cars can not guarentee your safety with just a few cameras and sensors. These cars also basically do not do much to help if we're the ones that have to, park, pull out of spaces, navigating through work zones, and around accidents. Your life is more important than relaxing while a car drives for you and can most likely wreck and cause death to you and many others.\n\nFirst, Driverless cars can not save your life with some cameras, a GPS system, sensors, and a inertial motion sensor. A lot of people might be thinking that this is a good idea, an idea to let a computer drive for you but no one is thinking about what could happen if something malfunctions on the car and you wreck and get injured or possibly death. Also there might be a possibility that the Dubbed LIDAR (camera that uses laser beams to create 3d models of the car's surroundings) gets broken by hail, a storm, or even someone breaks it off. These cars never said anything about how this car can guarentee the driver's safety. That should give everyone the general idea that they might not really know what could happen to you but they don't want you to know.\n\nNext, These \"Driverless Cars\" aren't doing much driving for you if you have to be the one to do some of the most simplest things that even the computer can't do. Your the one basically doing most of the driving since they need you to park, pull out of spaces, navigating through work zones, and to go around accidents. Does that seem like you should even spend way more money because of how much they put into it, for no reason? They should've made more extensions to the vehicle if all it does is steer, accelerate, and brakes themselves. These cars they are trying to put out there on the market when they only do 3 small things for you and could still possibly malfunction and cause the deaths of innocent lives.\n\nFinally, You shouldn't be letting a computer drive for you. Your life is way more important than relaxing for a few minutes and for you to most likely wreck and kill innocent civilians. These cars can possibly danger the lives of families. There is no point in buying a car that could kill your family or a loved one just for you to relax for that short amount of time to get to your destination. These cars already didn't say anything about guarenteeing your safety let alone trust your life with a copmuter.\n\nIn Conclusion, Your lives matter to the world more than a smarter car to save you a few minutes of relaxing. Don't be the one that takes your hands off the wheel and could possibly kill the people you love. The people you care about in that car could be dead in seconds if you let a computer take over your car for that small amount of time. Rise up today and take a stand against the people that are building cars to kill innocent people or even the ones you love dearly.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph show aduiance Saeng gave shouldnt either I think paragraph describin law life witch CAPS give up even though failed first still willing try",
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"content": "In some countries, where community buy places to live instead of building their own houses, it has become a trend to find the past events of the building they are going to buy. This essay discusses some of the causes for this as well as how the public can encounter this information.\r\n\r\nfirstly, if there is any historical value to the place, it increases the market price of the dwelling. Therefore, when reselling, knowing history comes in handy. Some people need a connection to the house where they live in, to feel it is their home. For that reason, knowing the narrative is useful. For example, most horror movies are based on a ghost who used to live in that particular building where the main characters chose to inhabit. Therefore, as long as the memoir of the place is innocent community find it easy to live. Moreover, having awareness of when it was built, what materials were used, where it has been altered, and how the structure was used prevents unexpected disasters and helps with repairs, alterations and maintenance.\r\n\r\nSecondly, to find out the story behind a place, public can use many options. Most of time, old structures are listed in local authorities. Searching property records can be a best option. As well as, nowadays there are online platforms where anyone can obtain information about past events. But, the easiest and most reliable way to find the background of a house is to get information from the residential senior citizens.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the majority of young crowd in this era prfer to find out more about their dwellins, and for that, they take support from authorities,online platforms and human resources.",
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"content": "\"If Venus is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing futher visits to its surface\"? That question is because astronomers are fascinated by Venus for the simple fact, it was a twin to eath.\n\nPeople want to know why Venus is worth it? All of this time,work, and effort researching it, yet some think to be useless. But what if something would happen to earth, and human life wer to go extinct because of it? I'm pretty sure someone wouldn't let that happen, so we'd have to transfer to the next planet that resembles to earth and could possibly change so that humans could adapt. In the text it says,\" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because the insight to be gained on the plant itself, but also because human curiosity will lead us into many intimidating endeavors\".\n\nIn my opinion I agree with the author on many levels.",
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"content": "I think you guys would love being a Seagoing Cowboy! If you are a guy and love the farm and love animals, this is the perfect place for you to come. Here on the boat, not only do you get to have fun with the animals but you get to visit a lot of unique and cool places.. Read on to find out more about being a Seagoing Cowboy!\n\nI have got to go to many cool places one of them being, a excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal! Another was getting to see the famous Acropolis in Greece, that was special for me, but so was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water!\n\nIf you think that being here is boring and don't get any free time or fun time then you need a little more explination about us.... We find a lot of time on board, especially on the return trips after the animals have been unloaded. We cowboys play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nThe jobs here aren't hard at all because on a regular farm you would do just as much or more jobs than here. The jobs we have.... Firstly, the animals have to be fed and watered two times a day. Secondly, the bales of hay and bags of oats have to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Lastly, all stalls have to be cleaned.\n\nDo you get to visit a lot of places on a regular day on a farm? Well here you do. So on a boring old day on the farm you just get to sit around and do nothing when on here most of everything we do you get to have fun.\n\nWhen people come here they are less grateful but when they start working it makes them enjoy the job they have and grateful because when they work a lot, it makes them grateful for everything they have and makes everyone more aware of other people and countries needs.\n\nHow could you pass up this opportunity of a lifetime? Well with this job there is pretty much no time to be bored.\n\nThere is no time to waste so go ahead and sign up. By the way did you know by taking this job offer you are helping the world?",
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"content": "One day came I wanted bad I asked mom said maby guess coming It I couldnt wait I went school I got every day I kept coming saying Im sure I get like mom thats handreth time I said said patient I probley never even get little brother around hears say saying I want hes going think real patient Well past days I started patient I patient I went school course stupid waste time I didnt care I get I deal patient time well I know one thing I lucky asking past days Im patient I really cant believe I really never patient anytime except Im getting something awesome So I days antil Im really exited So I break last days antil I played video games save time patient last days Ive playing outside waste time Then whose days antil I played outside intel day last two days I even played outside friends eve Then day came finaly I saw presents mom said ya open sort starred seen I opened present I see antil mom gave one present holding finally I got I dont patient end",
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"content": "The features setting dramaticaly affect cyclist Everything fine ran water reached hills Now callada woudnt dehydrated But hills sure play mind The import setting welchs grape juice factory He would grape juice wanted abandoned An ironic twist as calls And last one hte bait shop sawes life old man offers directions",
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"content": "As the world is on the cutting edge of globalisation, environmental issues are increasing day by day. So the pollution to the ecosystem is varied in numerous. Accordingly, some of the population withhold that increasing the prices of fuel for automated cars and other vehicles will solve environmental problems, but according to my point of view, I completely agree with the above statement. The following essay will outline my points with examples. \r\n\r\nAir pollution is the significant problem around the globe because many countries are suffering from the consequences of the issue. While it is evident that increasing the fuel prices will reduce pollution, because few vehicles will be on the road and there will be less pollution. To exemplify, Singapore has increased the tax rates of new vehicles so that there will be fewer buyers and the air pollution throughout the country will slightly reduce. \r\n\r\nHowever, there are other methods to solve this problem as well. One of the methods is to increase the usage of public transport, make people aware of air pollution and its harmful effects on humans and reduce the fair prices of public transport vehicles, so that people will use more of them, moreover as there are a limited amount of public vehicles like trams, trains and buses if the government increase the transport method the pollution of biodiversity will be reduced in the upcoming years. As an example, London has a huge metro train system, which is quite affordable and people prefer to use public transport instead of personal vehicles. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, environmental pollution can be reduced by increasing the price of gasoline,subsequently there are other methods such as imposing taxes to brand new vehicles and using public vehicles that will combat the issue.",
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"content": "The studying of venus is a good idea except the dangers it can do to humans. In the article the author says venus is the 2nd closest planet to the sun.\n\nVenus is a good thing to know about before exploring it. If the tempature\n\nis the same as Earth. Next to see what it is made of. It is made of gas has sunspots solar flares. Finally the tempature is 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nVenus can not pentrate light because of the dense atmosphere. The researchers can not take samples of any form not even anything from the distance. If scientists tried to conduct a mission would have to be right on venus despite the risks. The austronauts are working on other ways to study venus . Austronauts would do experiements simulating the chaos of venus surface has not lasted longer than three weeks. Finally the last project was mechinical computers. The devices make caculations using levers not including new technology.\n\nResearchers are working on new techiniques that allow machines to be long enough . Next people would be able to gain knowledge if reasearchers taught teenagers. Finally it would be sufficent for teenagers to learn about venus. We would have prior knowledge going there. Reasearchers have to be honest by giving facts .",
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"content": "In people technology like today didnt know really even architecks builing The state builing many problems First couldnt drop mast said story roof flat Next said thousand foot drop would add stress frame last change frame steel glass also change roof All men lot work building Empire State Building",
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"content": "Education is a vital task for every student. Teachers teaching students in the classroom is the normal education procedure in every country, but according to some, it is true that typical teaching situations will change in 2050, as the education sector is at a developing pace around the globe. I completely agree with the aforementioned viewpoint and the following essay will elaborate on my answer further in detail. \r\n\r\nTo commence with, the normal system of teaching students in classrooms will change to online teaching methods. Where both educators and learners can attend the class through a certain website and it is convenient for both parties. Additionally, in the past students and teachers used to refer to numerous resources with the help of books as well as children studied hours scrolling pages of books to find information regarding their learning, but with the development in online teaching and learning methods learning as well as finding data will be effective and efficient. As an example, the schools are already following the online teaching methodology. Typical classrooms in schools will be shut down as a result of new online classrooms. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in the ,future there will be no longer teachers to teach the children. Every style of teaching and providing information will be done through the use of Artificial Intelligence. This method will be adequate for many children, where they have to use a few buttons to click and their voice to learn new things. According to research countries such as UK and US are already on the front line for testing AI teaching methods. However, children will adapt to artificial intelligence learning techniques in the near future. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I strongly agree the classic method of teaching in classrooms will change for online teaching and Artificial Intelligence teaching methods by 2050.",
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"content": "Timmy thinks the faces on Mars were created by aliens,but i keep telling him its just natural landforms that we made and it looks like faces. It happens even on Earth, it is common around the American west. In the viking photo they didn't have that well equitment to see what it actually was, so they thought it was created by aleins. In 2001, NASA wanter to show the world and the captioned a note by it saying \"huge rock formation,\" but people just saw a face because of the shadows in it. The authors reasoned it to be a good idea to engage people and give attention to Mars.\n\nThe \"Faces on Mars\" started to become popular, they started to make movies, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines. In April 1998 they flew over it again, they had better technology,and they didn't see a face all they saw was a natural landform. Then in 2001 they did it again and didn't see anything just the landform and they had much better technology where you could see a small shack and nothing was there.\n\nThese Faces were just landforms that had a shadow that made it look like a face.\n\nEvery plantet has weird landforms, and they didn't really have good techlology back then. Now they have alot better technology were they can drive robots on mars and see all these weird landforms and see if there is aliens.",
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"content": "Boredom in the classroom is not rare. For many students, some lessons will be pretty boring and bland, making the the student less attentive and engaged. What if that can be changed with technology? What if the machine used to detect emotions in Da Vinci's artwork, the Mona Lisa, could be used to the students' benefits? The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can detect the students' emotions during the lesson, it can modify the lesson according to their emotions, and it is much more effective compared to a human.\n\nThis technology could be used to detect the students' emotions during the lesson. In the article in paragraph 4, \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks the facial movements-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.... Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\" The author describes here how the machine works. It detects the muscles and the movements of s face and compares it to a neutral (no emotions) face in order to determine the emotion of the subject, whether it be a painting of a real life human. Using this device, the computer can be placed in a classroom and can be used to detect the students' emotions. This means as a teacher, they will know whether their lesson is making the students happy, sad, or angry. Using this new data that can be collected, it can make the students more engaged.\n\nWith the new data collected, this device can help make the students much more engaged in their learning by modifying the lesson according to emotions. As stated in paragraph 6, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" As described by the author, this technology could be used to make the marketing buisiness much more succesful. They can play more ads that are similar to the ones that made the viewer happy and play different ones if the viewer seemed to be unhappy. This concept can be taken and implemented into a classroom. The computer can use the emotion detecting data and modify the lesson to where it will be towards the students' liking. With this device, it will be much easier to understand the students and make the classroom more enjoyable. It can even introduce a new system of learning.\n\nThis device can provide a much better substitute for a teacher. In paragraph 5, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that converys happy, worried, etc.... His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electric code.\" The author describes how humans make this same \"calculation\" every single day since we can sometimes identify when a friend is sad or happy. However, humans are not as good at calculating emotions as this device is. Humans could have trouble determining facial traits that convey specific emotions, which is why the device is much more effective. This new device that can provide a much better learning experience with modified lessons can even replace human teachers. It's accurate data and superior understanding of the students compared to humans proves that it is a much better teacher.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is very valuable. It can detect the students' emotions during the lesson, it can modify the lesson according to their emotions, and it is much more effective compared to a human. With the Facial Action Coding System, it can pave a path towards a new learning system, one where kids will enjoy being in a classroom rather than falling asleep. One where students will actually want to learn rather than be forced to learn.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are making a break across the world. Cars have changed so much since first invented. These driverless cars are just now getting popular although first invented in 2009 from Google. These cars have driven thousands of miles without crashing but could a crash be coming soon with them becoming ever so popular? The developement of these cars is going the change the world, for the better.\n\nThe idea of driverless cars would not be on the rise unless the idea of safety was presented to the world. Safety is a major topic discussed with these cars. According to the article, there are now ways that a driver can basically become a passenger in the car but still be able to take over the car when needed. There are seats that will vibrate when the car is backing up but is close to an object. These vibrations are meant to alert the driver that they need to take over the wheel and control the car again. No matter what, the driver will still be in control of the car.\n\nWith safety being a concern of many, the idea of drivers not paying attention while in the car is also a concern. According to the text, the newly inovated car will feature flashing lights when the driver needs to take over. According to the text,\"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" This example from the text explains that these cars are only going to be helping the driver. The driver must stay alert during the driving process though. Safety is always going to be a concern in this car, but GM and other car manufactering companies are taking the necessary precautions to ensure that the future cars are still going to be safe.\n\nThe new car is going to have several safety features. According to the text one of the safety feature are heads up displays that appear on the windshield that need to be turned off immediately. This heads up will pop up and if you arent paying attention to the road, then it will not be turned off as soon as it should be. According the article, this feature is considered a safety feature, which is a big concern.\n\nAlthough safety seems to be important with these cars, there are some ways that manufacters are inventing that may be unappealing to car buyers. The article states,\"Manufacters are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" This can seem very creepy for some drivers. They might not find it very pleasing that someone is going to be watching them every second that they are in their car. This single factor could be the reason why many people might not purchase a driverless car.\n\nAlthough there seems to a long list of safety features for the new driverless car, there are small features that could stand between buying or leaving. With vibrating seats or pop ups that need turned off immediately, Google, GM, Audi, Nissan and others companies are taking the necessary precautions when developing the new driverless car.",
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"content": "Some people believe the most effective reform to mitigate environmental issues is to increase fuel prices for vehicles. In my opinion, while this is necessary for the short-term, education acts as the priority solution.\r\n\r\nThose who advocate the need for the increased cost of fuel often point to the immediate effect on the environment. People are often driven by costs so more expensive fuel prices can discourage them to commute with their vehicles, creating the demand for public transport. For example, Vietnam has been experiencing a rise in fuel for the past 3 months, and the locals are making the transition from private cars and motorbikes to bicycles and electric buses. Accordingly, this has resulted in a cleaner atmosphere and fresher air in big cities like Hanoi and Saigon. However, officials doubt the effectiveness of this approach because the rise has caused a lot of frustration for the citizenry. \r\n\r\nThis is why I consider fuel increases can help improve the worsening environment for only a short period of time. A better solution calls for the urge to educate people about the long-term impact. Human activities have long been blamed for damaging the environment and there are many factors contributing to this. Toxic gases released by vehicles only account for part of the cause, while large-scale industries, deforestation and unsustainable farming are also the catalysts. If people were aware of the consequences that they made while operating in their fields, the environment would not suffer as it does now. Maybe instead of cutting down trees for residential housing, city planners can be more thoughtful by creating more green spaces for residents to live close to nature.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increased prices for fuel can somewhat prevent people from using their vehicles for a limited time, but we need to work towards long-term reform. I think once we educate people to be more responsible in their areas, we already help the environment not to be seriously harmed.",
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"content": "I think Luke experiened wonderful and amazing things he also may have seen disturbing things like seeing the Acropolis in Greece that was probably amazing but seeing war results was probably very disturbing. I also think traveling months at a time would make me really anxious and board untill the games came in then that would have made a little less boaring but I still would have been a little anxious to get to where I needed to go. And I couldn't imagine going across the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice that is just absulutaly crazy I really don't know how he Luke Bomberger and his friend Don Reist. I did not know who these men were or what this story was about but after I read this story I now highly respect Luke Bomberger and his friend Don Reist for what they did and how many times they risked their lifes to save other people that were in trouble.",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to be a seagoing cowboy? I got a chance to. It was a lot of fun. My friend convinced me to do it. You should do it also.\n\nA seagoing cowboy is a person who takes care of animals while they are being shipped overseas. The job is to feed the animals, wash the animals, water the animals, and clean the stalls. We also get breaks. We get to go sightseeing and do things that other cultures do. The job can be hurtful. If there is a storm, the boat will get slippery and you can fall. I almost fell over board once. It was scary.\n\nYou should get this job because it is a once in a lifetime opportunity. Plus, the animals are well behaved and they would love to have new people. If you love to go see places in other countries, you should get this job. If you want hard work, this job would be perfect. In your free time, you can play games, read, or whittle something.\n\nAccording to the article, the job is a once in a lifetime event. Based on the passage, I got to see Europe, China, the Acropolis in Greece, Venice, a castle in Crete, and I got to see the Panama Canal. In paragraph six, it states that my job keeps me busy. Helping out on a farm or working a tough job can prepare you for the hard work. Those are some reasons of why you should be a seagoing cowboy.\n\nBeing a seagoing cowboy has some up's and down's, but overall the job is a lot of fun. You get to experience and see so many things. Sometimes, it doesn't feel like work at all. It feels like fun. A whole lot of it. Now do you want to be a seagoing cowboy?",
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"content": "In life there will be things that we question ourselves if soemthing is worth getting , studying etc. The author of \"The Challenge Venus\" makes his point that studying the planet Venus is very important even though it can be dangerous.\n\nIn this text the author mestioned thst striving to meet this challenge would bring value not only because of the insight but to gain about this planet.The author also talked about how we should not be scared to travel more out there because we should be happy that we are expanding to meet the doubts that many people have.\n\nThe author does say how going to go investigate this planet would not be easy at all because there would be things that you could not see clearly. I think the author made it very understanding on how he put the goods and bads about this challenge . I think he makes a good point where he states that its good to go find out about new things even though it could be dangerous.\n\nThe author states the reason about going out and studying the planet Venus because since the past many people have even question themselves about it being a plante or not. I think that the good thing that the author did was to put the mission and the things that they we be studying .\n\nI think that the author's claim is well said and explained .I think that this helped me get a better understanding in why scienctists want to show people thatv Venus is planet . I think that most of the information was wells staited anf went with the opinions and explanation.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir feel responcible help support themself anyone else dose growing From young older living away families I think mood auther feel good themself happy better life past learn themself re mood becomes happy joyful themself better life",
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"content": "Manners in the workplace have always been a topic that is discussed by many people as it is essential to know how we should behave in such a formal environment. Some companies give the opinion that their workers should have a smart look while others consider the attitude toward the job more important.\nTo my mind, appearance should not the only thing to be considered. We can dress smartly and impress others, but it is only the first impression. Therefore, productivity, quality of work, and the way we are responsible for our tasks are things that make us outstanding workers. Moreover, it is obvious that the success of one company does not depend on how its employees dress but on how it is organized.\nIn spite of the fact that dressing does not play a key role in the value of a worker, a neat and intelligent appearance still gives us significant benefits. I always suggest that one should dress suitably in different situations. In fact, it is not crucial for an organization to ask their employees to dress formally, but a set of smart casual clothes is something that we should wear when it comes to the working environment. It is because that wearing politely shows how we respect our jobs, our employers, and even our workmates. In some cases, a company's professionalism can be seen through the way its workers wear.\nTo sum up, dressing smartly is not the best and only thing that one worker can do to have better performance. However, having a good appearance is something that great employees would do since it can be considered as their respect for the jobs.",
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"content": "When it comes to the argument for and against the development of \"driverless cars\" I stand against it. There is no need to have a driverless car. People did not have driverless cars before, so why start now?\n\nIf something were to go wrong, who is at fault? The person who owns the car and could not control it due to the sensors failing or gliching? That would make no sence, the person could be in the postition where they caan not do anything because the wheel locked up. If car were to hit black ice it would skid and you can not do anything, but if the computer tries to do something it is not supposed to do then you will end up getting into a wreck. Computer are just not reliable at times and could cause many things to go wrong in a driverless car.\n\nIf there is construction, how fast could the computer \"make a 3-D model\" of it's surroundings? When in a construction zone people have to be ready for anything, warnings are not always given. The speed limit is reduced in construction zones and if the computer does not update everything constantly then a wreck will happen. People can agust pretty quickly computers, however can not.\n\nThe cost of a driverless car would be completely rediculous no matter what, but the cost the repair something or insurenance on a driverless car, while that will cost an arm and a leg. Normal computers now a days cost sometimes +$800, but a computer that is inside a car and can controll it 24 without anything going wrong? That would be extremly exensive. When is comes to insurance they would probably have to make you bay a new type of insurance since none of the other polices would cover a driverless car, it goes back to the whole \"who would be at fault\".\n\nOver all I am against people making driverless cars. We did not have them before, so why do we need them now? Technology is not very reliable and people are wanting others to trust it with the lives of their kids? That just does not sound right. Trusting a computer that could glitch and cause you to get in a wreck is not right.",
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"content": "The state senetor should keep the electoral college because of the voting previlages. voting is held every tuesday of November. The elector college consist of 538 electors. A majority of 270 elector vots is required to elect from the president. Your states entitled allotment of electors equals the number of members in its congressianl delegaton oe for each member in the house of Respresentives plus two for your Senators. The electoral Collge pricees consiste of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.\n\nFuthermore, most states have a winner take it all system that awards all electort to the wiining the election. your states certification ascertainment also delclares the winning presidincial in your states adn shows which electors will respensint your state at the metting of the election in december.\n\nTo wrap everything up, the single best arguement agains tht eelectoral college is what we might call a disaster factor. The american people should conside themselves lucky that the 200 fiasco was the biggest election cris in the sententuries . Back in 1960, segregations in the Lousiana Legistature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors.\n\nFinally, its offical the elecoral college is unfair outdated adnd irrtional the agurements are against judgement. they need to keep electorial college. There are five ereaosn for retainign the electoral college desoite the lack of democratic pedigree, certanty of outcome, everyones presindent ], swing states, big states, avoid run off elections.",
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"content": "Patience key life say I dont really know Patience quite wait things It hardstuff feeling frustration anger sadness When patience things ease without difficulties Patience self respecting kind fair self seeking Patience respect disrespect patience evil paticence boast Patience lie makes things better difficulty It makes easier focus things better It helps wait things",
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"content": "The \"face\" you see here was not created by aliens. It is certainly just a natural landform. If this was a monument created by aliens, we would want to share it, this would make NASA so much money if they discovered this. So why would we want to keep this from the public. Also the Cameras in 1976 were not very good. This means the quality could have effected what the picture looked like.\n\nThe article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" states that \" Evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This proves my point in why we would want the \"face\" to actually be an alien monument because it would make us a lot of money. I would also like to state that the cameras that we took the first picture with wasn't a very good camera. So where you think you see eyes are probably just shadows; or dark spots where the camera could not focus. The author of \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" also adresses that \" And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbitor Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revvealing... a natual landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This shows how the \"face\" was never a monument.\n\nMany people believe that the \"face\" on Mars was created by aliens, but it is just a nautual landform. Another reason for this is if you look at the photos, from when they were first taken in 1976; and you compare them to now in 2001. They look like totatlly different things. What it really looks like is that the landform has erroded away. It erroded just like a landform does on Earth. All of these reasons suggest why the \"face\" on Mars is just a natural landform.",
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"content": "The setting story affected cyclist making dehydrated could lead heatstroke I could drop heatstroke shows hot feeling bad could dropped heatstroke",
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"content": "My best friend turned thirteen beautiful day Her family boat since weather quite uncomfortably hot cold chilly outside decided sleepover birthday party deck closest freinds I nervous meeting schoolgoing friends since I d always homeschooler nt going know people When I arrived boat introduced friends I greeted suggested go I ready walk beach said wanted go right docks boats nt allowed I certain would say immidiately instead walked CAPS sign tore tossed harbor Her friends laughed I laughed I d never seen people act way But disregard rules customs contagious As day went I watched talked behaved The girls used bad language spoke harshly Everything said loud shocking everything wild challange authority They acted free something interactions seemed forced I wondered truly way pretending But I understood part I act like It first expirience peer pressure I nt know quite But girls attutudes simple I adapted started behave like But became clear order group someone nt group That parents made invite knew They would sit close together nt quite room would look disintrest without laughing tried make joke I became aware I nt adapeted quickly attitude girls I might one left I also knew could still turn I something wrong We sitting deck boat talking movies trying tell group one d seen favorite stared blankly refusing smile looked space rolled eyes Sudenly cut started talking scary movie d seen eyes widened looked ground Without thinking I laughed reached arm telling I wanted hear movie I ll never forget way lit simple kindness She smiled began gush amazing renewed enthusuasm condinuted story watching went movie theater girls chose sit row room four I moved sit next row We talked absurdity straws drinks would never ever wear skinny jeans It easy talk I nt run everything I said head make sure would nt make anyone dislike Even back boat I tried behave way I d never focus I knew I could would someone talk To surprise everyone became natural Soon joking ridiculous things wish birthday wish I suggested lifetime supply marshmellows suggested original suggested wish everyone america would speak accent birthday Everyone laughed I saw day kindness powerful crulty Making someone enemy outsider nt make friendship stronger Neither worry saying something might make friends reject But integrity kindness bring people closer",
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"content": "I am Luke Bomberger and from my experience\n\nI will tell why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nMy first reason is that you get to help countries all around the world and seeing people's grateful faces always put a smile on mine. My second reason is if you love animals then you would enjoy this job beacuse we have to take care of animals in the first half of the trip which is transporting them to the other countries. Another reason is if you love being on the sea then the Seagoing Cowboys is for you because most of the trip is on the ocean's great waves. If that doesn't convince you, my final reason is that you get to go all over the world and see many great things. I've taken a gondola ride in Venice,seen an excavated castle in Crete, and even seen the Acropolis in Greece which is a very special experience for me.\n\nIn conclusion, the Seagoing Cowboys are a very amazing oppertunity to help various countries get back on their feet after World War ll and you can see all these different cultures and how they interact with one another. There is so much you can learn from going on these cattle trips and so much you can see and do. Being a Seagoing Cowboy opened the world for me, and I am hoping it will for you too. I am hoping you have considered joining and if you have I will see you there!",
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"content": "Many believes that juvenile have to do social work free of cost during their spare time this may be fruitful for them along with the society. It is true that in our society there are ample of things which still need lots of improvement and take care. However, I do not agree with the statement and I would like to discuss reasons for that.\r\n\r\nThe cardinal reason behind the this is that kind of voluntary work divert their mind from studies and it might be creating pressure on them. Today juvenile has tremendous pressure related their academics activities. Today we have been living in the revolutionary and technological advance era where knowledge is everything where academic performance play crucial role to their further professions as well as occupations. So that’s why they have to spend as much as time for their curriculum activity and give priority to them. Another concern is that in free time they could also develop new hobbies and interest such as various sports and other creative hobbies like painting, singing and so on which could be beneficial them explore new thins and increase social bonding and emotion. \r\n\r\nIt is an undeniable truth that youth can help themselves and their neighbourhood by involving in some kind of voluntary task when they have spare time. The main reason is they can get lucrative experience and skills such as discipline, co-ordination and many social manners which may they will be get benefit for their further occupation and personal as much as social life. Moreover, society gets benefits though this work, because these jobs might never be undertaken in unprivileged society and it will create healthy and ideal society. \r\n\r\n After discussing the matter in details, social work is profitable for the both, matter of fact that can that youth should not be force to do unpaid work because they have lot to do for their education as well as further career prospects.",
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"content": "In the face of adversity that third-world countries suffer from poverty and education, they strive to overcome these obstacles by providing free education for children for a period of 6 years. From my perspective, I am firmly in favor of this solution.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the provision of six tuition-free years can significantly alleviate the financial constraints experienced by parents. Education is inarguably expensive. By offering free education, the constant burden on tuition fees, books, and uniforms, etc that a family faces will begin to dissipate. Hence, they are able to redirect sources towards providing their family’s wellbeing, such as food and house comfort, knowing that their children’s educational needs are being met. For instance, one family’s spendings can reduce in a remarkable manner after tuition fees are omitted. Moreover, unlike the adolescents who come from first-world countries, children from these developing nations often face restricted opportunities to access education due to the prohibitive cost of school fees. Therefore, providing cost-free education advocates for global educational equality and equity.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, free education equips every student with the knowledge and skills necessary to secure better employment opportunities in the future. Higher-paying occupations often require a foundation of education and expertise. Consequently, providing children with cost free access to education not only empowers them with the requisite knowledge but also causes a surge in future employment prospects. This surge in employment rate would hold the promise of substantial growth in the country’s GDP. Additionally, with the foundation of basic math and science, it ensures children to be able to work at the bare minimum in the future, instead of drifting around with no meaning to survive in poverty. An illustrative example can be found in some countries like Austria, where citizens possess the fundamental base that they can readily apply to daily lives.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, offering free education is a critical necessity for poverty reduction within a country regarding financial constraints, employment rates and educational equality.",
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"content": "Dear State Senetor,\n\nT\n\nhe elecoral collage should stay the same because it worked this long right and it will keep working as long as everythis is fair. The country is based on our votes and that is how it should be because we are part of this country and we make it a free country. This is how our founding fathers stated this country and thats how it need to be our country has the best presedent that we could have in this type of situation because he is a colored man and there is nothing wrong with that. If we did not have an electoral collage it would be harded to keep things in line such as how the voting works and how it should be decided that we have the best presedent we can get at that time for our country. As an example we have been fighting on Iran and alfaganastan for a long time and presedent oboma did the best he could with the best that he had to make sure that we were still a free country and the we were safe from terrorism. The electoral collage was a good iead and still is so thst way we do always have a good presedent or for anything that this country need to vote on it always keeps thing in order and fair to this country so there for it is what this country need in order to make the best we can with the best we got.",
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"content": "I ten story happened I grandma story happened We park I put head monkey bars My grandma went bathroom I stick monkey barsThe kids park thought funny laughing I really embarrassedWhen I got head monkey bars I told kids try putting head monkey bars The kids tried got heads stuck monkey bars The kid know I practiced putting head monkey bars would get stuck I laughing hard I done grandma came I asked could go home The next day went back park I got different kids trick What I nt get head stuck would try thing The kids time told mom dad I told grandma I got lot troubleWe went home I grounded two weeks The next time I went park I thing That shows kids kids",
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"content": "Having different technology helps people. People like it, it can be helpful in many different ways. For example, if a person can't speak their is a techonolgy that helps people that don't have to have a voice with a computer. Techonolgy is useful in many different ways. The use of the technology in the article Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D' Alto would be really vaulable.\n\nThe new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad says the author. Examples that they use when a computer can tell if you are happy or sad is if you smile when a web ad apperas on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But, if you frown, the next ad will be different. That would be great because if you are watching something and then all of a sudden an ad comes on and you can't skip it, you want it to be entertaining and fun and not boring and dumb. It would also be very helpful if you are at school. \"A classom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lessson, like an effective human instructor\" that would be really helpful for some people. Just, in case somone dosen't want to speak up if they are confused the commputer will know right away.\n\nThere's also other examples for this. The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for the videogames which would become more fun for the person playing the videogame or video surgery. Dr. Huang also says \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, so computers need to understand that, too.\"\n\nI would think that the use of this technology to read the emotional expression of students in a classroom is valuable. By, the way it works and the way it could help in many different ways. In this passage it wants us to understand that a new technology could be coming soon, in which it could help in many different ways.",
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"content": "These days, most married couples have a tendency to give birth to offspring at an older phase of life. This trend can avail little more time for the parents to make necessary arrangements for the newborn. Also, it might result in incapability to reproduce. This essay will discuss both the gains and losses of giving birth at a later age.\r\n\r\nFirstly, becoming parents at the elder stage has the privilege of having extra span to provide abundance to their coming child. In the current situation where there is a constant rise in the costs and education, it is very hard to think about having a kid. From 25 to 30 period of soul, the public struggles for their career and settlement with a good amount of earnings. For instance, a student who just passed out with his doctorate degree at the year of 29 and gets married at the youth of 31 has very little time to settle in his career and go for family planning. Thus, few parents are inclined towards having a juvenile after 35 life span of maturity and can give a better environment to the born minor.\r\n\r\nConversely, this could also cause health issues to reproduce after 32 years of lifetime. Growth after the thirties requires taking care of the body as it becomes weak as compared to the below thirty years period. In this case, it could lead to weak reproduction strength in a person. To prove this, there are a lot of IVF and test tube baby centres available for such married couples. Therefore, it is advised by the senior citizens in society to have a youngster soon after the wedding to avoid such fitness problems later.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, babymaking at above 32 years of duration has both merits and demerits. However, giving birth to the baby at youth surely surpasses the possibility of abnormal well-being in reproduction.",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper I strongly agree experts computer s Those support advances technology believe computer s positive effect people They say computers teach us handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places even allow people talk others online Theese effects true many bad effects dont like say Computers also effect people s visiion really close screen computers really addicting many people around world bearly excercize moving many people big problem n days obesity Computer s also tend take lot time away people s lives The way I see although computer s positive effects people change positive effects better way keep fit seeing places eyes like get practice handeye coordination simply getting friend pass tennis balls back forth quick time exercizing Also computer talk friends online talk phone far away n go outside catch fresh air n live close talk person instead want learn certain far away place visit place instead There many things computer better yet im saying computer bad I agree good bad effects computers well things world live In opinion I honestly think bad effects good effects computer s",
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"content": "A student is sitting in his seat alternating his facial expressions from a frown to a smile every other minute. The student is not necessarily happy, sad, or pocessing mixed emotions, but simply playing around and testing the new technolgy that has been placed in the classroom. New technology has been developed that can detect facial expressions. Dr. Hang predicts, \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored.\" What he doesn't stop to think about is wether this technology would be distracting, or bring other negative effects to the students. The use of emotional expression reading technology is not valuable in a classroom because it can be a distraction, put forth false information leading to personal problems, and cause students to feel uncomfortable making them unable to learn.\n\nFirst, the use of technology that can calculate facial expressions would be a distraction to the students and the teacher in a classroom. Technology such as telephones, iPods, and smart watches have been banned in the classroom at most schools. This is beacuse they are a distraction to learning. Imagine a high technical computer that monitors all of 44 major muscles of your face to decect the percent ratio of the six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness placed in a classroom of students from the ages five to eighteen. This would lead to a lot of distraction beacuse most students at this age would be curious of how it works, and if it works. Instead of listening to the lesson, the students would be messing around and trying out different facial expressions. This technology can also be distracting to the teacher beacuse they will have to be worrying about how their expressions are as well. They will be focusing on not looking negative, or being to harsh on the student since they are now being watched. This may ause them to not be as honest on feedback, and they may not be as focused on teaching.\n\nNext, the technology in the classroom can put forth false information and casue personal problems. The technology can read, as previously mentioned the percent of how much anger, fear, and sadness you pocess. Many students at this age are going through a lot of changes and have many mixed emotions. For example, if the technology detects a particular student contains a large amount of sadness, fear, and anger for so many days, the student's parents should be notified because they could have emotional or mental issues. Though the technology seems very well designed, sometimes our facial expressions contradict our actual emotions. The technology can put forth false information of how we are feeling, and cause serious personal problems. Some people may believe the use of this technology in the classroom is beneficial becasue it monitors when students seem uniterested or bored, but a teacher can do such on their own, and all the many problems the technology gives is not worth it.\n\nFinally, the technology can be a problem in the classroom beacuse it may cause students to feel uncomfortable. Many students struggle with their presentation skills at this age beacuse they may feel insecure or pressured, knowing that people are watching them. With this technolgy watching their every move and expression changes, it may cause them the same kind of pressure. This can lead them to not want to participate in class. In school the best way a teacher knows if you understand the material is if you ask questions, answer, and are involved. If this techology stops them from that, then it should not be in the classroom. In most schools, cameras are not allowed in the classroom, so that rule should be applied to this use of technology as well.\n\nThe use of emotional expression reading technology is not valuable in a classroom because it can be a distraction, malfunction and put forth false information, and cause students to feel uncomfortable making them unable to learn. In conclusion, the technology would bring a lot of problems to the students and teachers in the classroom. If there is only one good reason against many reasons not to have or do something then, it is usually not worth it. That rule applies here. Facial recogniotion technology should not be in a classroom beacuse it is uneccessary and brings neagtive effects to the students and teachers.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph paragraph show connection nature girl The paragraph says snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again No spring events take place Spring sign life birth renewal The geese come back They renewed symbolic sense When snow melts see grass sign life When plants bud born The character decides nature symbolically reborn renewed start like nature",
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"content": "I would agree to computers that can identify humans emotions would be pretty cool for our inverment. it would change our inverment becaus ealot of people can just go to a computer and if the happy or sad it would say. I think that it would be good, because the people that hate computer would probably end up liking it. It would give them something new to learn on. It can also recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel. Mr. Eckman has classified six basic emotions, and they are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) will tighten your lips to show anger. The same technology can make computer- animathed faces more expressive. Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emothins, but it also may help produce them. You can feel other peoples emotional. it may happen becasue they unconsciously imitate another person's facial expression. this is why i think it would be a good idea to make computers that can see how someone is feeling. If there sad,or mad.",
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"content": "Stepping into the 21st century, thanks to state-of-the-art technologies and the economy, there are more and more complications that politicians and citizens have to resolve. Whereas many folks argue that researchers should prioritize human health rather than other troubles, many roots for the idea that there are more persistent problems needed to be solved than healthy ones. In my point of view, I believe that every domain, which I will delve into herein as well as explain my opinion, should be resolved equally.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, health complaints are one of the most dangerous things that experts need to resolve. Recently, it has been the boom of the covid-19 epidemic since 2020, which directly impacts our lives. In detail, this contagious virus can be infected through respiration, thus the number of people contracting this affliction has been increasing day by day. Therefore to end this pandemic before it is out of control, not only an individual nation but also the whole world have to accompany. Pfizer from the USA is the pioneer in experimenting and manufacturing a specialized covid-19 vaccine to alleviate. \r\n\r\nHowever, there are some domains besides the epidemic that need researchers and government to pay attention to it. Firstly, due to the pandemic that I mentioned above, the unemployment rate has increased. In-depth, many companies, hotels and restaurants have to suspend, therefore, they have to cut down on employees to diminish their losses. Secondly, Russia has been making a proclamation of war with Ukraine, which affects some fields such as gold and oil costs. With advanced technologies, a war does pose a threat to not only citizens in both 2 nations but also the people of the earth unless this war is ended in soon time.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, healthcare is one of the most essential things that politicians, as well as experts, have to encounter but I also believe that every dilemma should be resolved without any bias",
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"content": "Are you for or against the development for driverless cars? Me personality, i'm against it. Can you honestly trust these cars 100%, they have your life in their hands. Even tho in the article it says there is an alert that lets the driver take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with comlicated traffic issues. I still wouldn't trust it, maybe you take advantage of it driving by its self. Then you start doing other things such as texting, playing games on your phone, or looking for something in the back seat. You really trust that car enough to stop paying attention to the road and others around you. So what if something does happen and you crash into something or get into a accident.\n\nBut the car never alerted you to take over, maybe the technology failed. So now you're injured from trusting a \"driverless car\". That you should of never trusted in the first place, especially with your life. There's no promises that this car isn't gonna mess up or make a mistake. So many things can go wrong with this car, because there is so much technology. Even if the technology doesn't fail, what if there is another driver that is driving reckless. Unfortuately you just so happen to be at the wrong place, at the wrong time. So you get hit by that driver, but will you get warned by the car that the car was even coming. In the article it didn't say anything about the car alerting you when another car is coming at you.\n\nThese cars can't stop everything from happening, it just might be the cause of something bad happening. The car can handle driving functions up to 25 mph. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to alert the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. What if it doesn't notify you, not all technology is perfect. Almost anything can go wrong, they make you think that it's so perfect with no problems. But that's because they just tell you the positive things about the car and nothing about the negatives. Such as what could happen if the car does mess up or the technology does fail.\n\nThey're not gonna tell you things like that, because they want you to buy the car. Which you most likely will and you'll trust that car to drive by its self. I wouldn't trust this car one bit, because they're still working on it. So you know for a fact it has problems and could mess in any way, at any point of time. Never let techology take over something that you should be doing everyday. Also that car may not have the driving skills that you have. They say techology can do more than humans, well driving is definately a humans job.\n\nDriving shouldn't be handled by technology, because its a everyday thing for humans. we know what to do and how to do it. Technology just could make a mistake and your like is in stake. Because you trusted some technology with your life. What if you do get in an accident in this car, is it the drivers fault or the manuafacturer? Driving is for humans and a human everyday thing, lets keep it that way.",
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